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CONTENTS
THE METHOD OF APOLWNIUS

John Ritner

1

SONG

Pierre Gagnier

4

A HERO'S TALE RETOLD

Eve Gartner

5

PROBLEMS WITH KANT, PROBLEMS WITH FAITH

Richard Miller

23

EGG, BEAT HER

John Keith

26

HO ENI AUTOS EN HEAUTO

Joe DeGrazia

THE MIRROR HELD UP TO NATURE

George Iannacone

SPRINGTIME

Gretchen Berg

PLAYING WITH IMAGES

Susan Maguire

44

FOR FRANCES
SCHOLARSHIP

H. Stephen Morse

46

NEGATION, WILLING AND THE PLACES OF THE SOUL

William O'Grady

47

MAKING MUCH ADO ABOUT "NOTHING"

Jim Bailey

56

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ENERGEIA: The activity in which anything is fully itself.

The Method of Apollonius
John Ritner

STAFF
Kathleen Bergren
Ann Burlein
Barbara Cooper
Christian Holland
Susan Maguire
Martin Marklin
Richard Miller
Alexandra Mullen
Joe Sachs
Merle Sokolik

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ON THE COVER:

Many thanks to Gisela and Laurence Berns
for their kind permission to reproduce
this print.

In an examination of the first book
of Apollonius' Conics, two relationships
are
of
particular
importance:
that
between the cone and planes, and that
between description and definition or
naming.· The particulars of the structure
of the work are further clarified by
considering the relationship between the
three conic sections. Only when the work
is considered in the light of all three of
these
relationships
together
is
it
possible to obtain a clear understanding
of
the
structure
and
intention
of
Apollonius' work.
Apollonius starts by defining in his
first three definitions a conic surface, a
cone, and a right cone; he then proceeds
to define in the last five definitions
diameters and axes taken in a single
plane.
The cone and planes seem set in
opposition from the ver:y beginning, but by
proposition three he brings cone and plane
together by cutting the cone with planes;
and he continues this process through
proposition fourteen.
Ih propositions eight and nine, he
constructs
the
three
conic
sections
without defining or naming them, and this
points to the second relationship:
that
between describing and naming.
Before
Apollonius names each section, ' it is
important that we be able to find one
diameter (proposition eight) for each,
know that an ellipse is not a circle .
(proposition nine),
and know that a
hyperbola and a parabola can be increased
. indefinitely (proposition ten).
Thus we
have a certain description without naming
or
defining.
Then
in
the
defining
propositions
eleven
through
thirteen,
Apollonius describes how each section is
constructed from the cone, and then he

defines each section in terms of a
parameter.
Only then does he give each
section a name, for the names are not
descriptive of the curves themselves (they
are not called "elongated circles" or
"curved angles" or any such thing), but
rather the names are determined by whether
square figures on the ordinates are equal
to,
greater than,
or less than the
rectangles made up of parts of the
diameter and this mysterious parameter.
In short, the parameter ~y be said to be
the true definer of the sections, for "it
never changes for a given section and a
given diameter, while the parts of the
diameter and the· ordinates do indeed
change in size.
By using a
parameter to define
sections which have been cut from the cone
in different ways, each section is so
defined that we may remove it from the
cone. We start wit}). several lines which
are in the cone but outside of the planes
of the sections, and with these lines we
determine one single line, the parameter,
which may be included in the plane of the
sections. Thus, given the parameter these
~onic
sections may be thought of and
analyzed as plane sections, something far
easier to do than considering them in the
cone.
Accordingly,
after
proposition
fourteen defines opposite sections of a
hyperbola and guarantees their similarity,
Apollonius dispenses with the cone and
deals
exclusively
with
the
derived
sections, until he reconstructs the cone
in proposition fifty-two.
In proposition
fifteen, he constructs another diameter,
in fact a conjugate diameter, and this is
even proven in the proposition.
But he
does not name his new diameter.
It seems

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diameter as "the straight line drawn from
the center parallel to an ordinate, being
a mean proportional to the sides of the
figure and bisected by the center."
In
regard to the opposite sections which are
examined in proposition sixteen,
this
definition makes even less sense, and the
contrivance about mean proportionals seems
pulled out of the air; but a little
thought about proposition fifteen, which
employs the same contrivance to construct
the second parameter, reveals the aptness
of this contrivance.
Quite independently
of this contrivance, we can prove that·
this
new
diameter
ED
is
a
mean
proportional to the sides of the figure
AB, AN i made up of the old diameter and
old parameter. To prove this we need only
prove that rectangle AN, AB equals the
square on ED, and this follows from the
facts that rectangle AN, AB equals 4 times
the area AP; area AP equals the square on
CD; and 4 times the square on CD equals
the square on ED.
Thus
the position of these
two
propositions is no mistake, and neither is
their frustrating seeming incompletness.
Fifteen is left without a second named
diameter until Apollonius can prove that
all the lines going through the center are
diameters; and the picture in sixteen
remains incomplete until he can conclude
Book I by constructing the conjugate
sections in propostion sixty.
These two
propositions also point out the close
relationship between the hyperbola and
ellipse, for the same mean proportional
contrivance is used for both, and both
have conjugate diameters, even though this
at first makes sense only for the ellipse.
The propositions from seventeen to
forty-five deal with the sections out of
the cone and at first glance seem to have
little relevance or importance.
We soon
find out that their function is to explore
the characteristics of the sections and
especially of their tangents and unnamed
new diameters. We also constantly see the
hyperbola and ellipse being taken together
in the same proof, while the parabola is
usually taken alone.
Often Apollonius:
will prove something for the parabola and

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that the
half of the proof was
dealing most importantly with certain
properties or descriptions, namely, of the
relationship
between
the
old
figure
(eidos), made up of the old diameter and
parameter, and the new figure, made up of
the new diameter and parameter.
Yet the
second part of this proof, the bisection
of GW, begs that ED be called a diameter,
just as FG was called a diameter in the
porism to proposition seven. We shrug and
pass on to sixteen, in which he constructs
a conjugate diameter for opposite sections
of a hyperbola and even names it: what is
important here is a definition and not an
exploration of certain properties.
But
what does it mean for this line XD, which
does not even touch either of the opposite
sections, to be called a new diameter?
The definition exists, but a full account
is lacking, begging for a proposition
sixty to complete the picture.
It is significant that at this point
Apollonius
introduces
three
new
definitions.
The
first
two
rather
routinely deal with the naming of the
center of the hyperbola, ellipse, and
opposite sections, but the third one is
interesting.
It
defines
the
second
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then the equivalent for hyperbola and
ellipse.
This
he
does
in
propositions
forty-six
and
forty-seven,
when
the
propositions assume new interest with the
general
proof
for
construction
of
diameters. Using what he has proved about
tangents and other properties of the
sections, he proves that any line drawn
through a parabola parallel to the first
diameter is itself a diameter, and any
line drawn through the center of an
ellipse or hyperbola is a diameter.
But
he still refuses to call them diameters.
Only in forty-nine after he contrives a
parameter, does he call this new diameter
a diameter, for only then does he have the
complete picture of a removed section.
From the beginning, he constructed a
parameter before he removed the section
from the cone, and even defined the
sections in terms of the parameter. So it
is only logical to require a parameter for
this new diameter before naming it a
diameter,
despite
the
fact
that
a
parameter is nowhere required in the
original
definition
of
a
diameter.
Further, the parameter is the link back to
the
cone.
Proposition
fifty-two
constructs
a
parabola with
a
given
diameter, vertex, and parameter, and no
proposition after eleven is used, but the
ordinates must be at right angles to the
dia~eter.
Proposition fifty-three is the
general construction proof, given any
angle between the ordinates and the
diameter,
and
it
depends
upon
that
proposition forty-nine which determined
the parameter. The parameter also assumes
importance as the finite line whi~h helps
determine the axial triangle around which
the cone is constructed, from which cone
the parabola is constructed .
Propositions
fifty-four
to
fifty-eight
construct
hyperbolas
and
ellipses, following the same order of
parabola-hyperbola-ellipse
which
was
established in the beginning; fifty-nine
constructs opposite sections; and finally,
sixty constructs the never-before-seen
conjugate sections; and most of the'se
propositions depend
on
the
paramete~

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proofs. Indeed, only the constructions of
the sections with ordinates perpendicular
to the diameter are-not dependent upon the;
parameter proofs, in fact depend upon no
proof after the defining proofs eleven
through thirteen, for only the original
diameter determined by the axial triangle
is
used.
It
is
characteristic
of
Apollonius' method to wait to do any
constructions until he is not limited to a
special
case,
and
to
save
these
interesting constructions, including the
conjugate sections, until the end of Book
I.

In general, the necessity of starting
with a cone to construct plane figures
produces a mathematics more complex than
Euclidean geometry.
To deal with these
conic sections outside of a cone and in
one plane, it is necessary to have a
parameter which is determined by the cone,
but which can also be put in the same
plane as the conic sections.
Thus the
parameter is the key for the first
important relationship in conic sections:
that between the cone and the plane. And
the
parameter
is
so
important
that
Apollonius defines the sections in terms
of it, and he derives their names from
figures drawn on the parameter, rather
than assigning names more descriptive of
the shape of the curves, such as elongated
circle.
Once the parameter has enabled him to
remove
the
eections
from
the
cone,
Apollonius
deals
with
many
of
the
properties of the sections, but he does
not name new diameters until he has found
their
parameter~.
In. this
way
he
maintains safe ground, either dealing with
a figure still in a cone, ·or talking about
diameters only when he has their defining
parameters. In this way, the parameter is
the
link
in
the
second
important
relationship:
that between description
and definition or naming. Apollonius may
describe properties of the conic sections
in the earliest proofs and describe
properties of new diameters in the middle
proofs, but he can define and name the
sections and new diameters only once he
has their parameters. And just as in the

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�beginning the parameter was the link from·
the cone to the plane, so its importance
is emphasized once more at the end of Book
I, when it proves to be the link from the
plane back to the cone.
In this way the

cycle from cone to plane to cone is
completed;
and
given
the
role
and
importance of the parameter, the method of
Apollonius in Book I seems logical and
'even inevitable.

A Hero's Tale Retold
Eve Gartner

Song
Pierre Gagnier

By bell, by bell, by change,
By roll and rise of form,
From form to flow -- the rock,
The threshing cliff (this bone
Of mountain interposed) -Threshes the stars. The souls
Are threshed from their husks,
By water, rock and wind.
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body
brutally
torn
and
scattered
throughout the labyrinth, she offered hiin
a gift of love, a clew of thread. But it
was more than thread: it was his life and
he took the gift in the spirit of love.
He must not forsake it for it would lead
him out of the labyrinth and he would. be
freer when he left than when he entered.
So Theseus, whose only hope of freedom
was the thread, entered into the labyrinth
as into a prison.
As he passed through
the walls he recalled his past conquests,
and relived them each one by one.
He
walked through the corridors, unwinding
Ariadne's gift, knowing that many lives,
including his own, depended on his ability
to re-trace his steps through those halls.'
As he entered the center of the labyrinth
he was imprisoned with the minotaur. His
blood did not run coid.
He was not
afraid.
He knew that either it must die
or he would. Theseus grabbed the minotaur
by the hair and this monster--half-man,
half-beast--clawed at his face and chest.
They wrestled.
The
minotaur
quickly
obtained
the
advantage,
but
Theseus
struggled to get himself on top and
finally stabbed the minotaur between the
eyes.
The hero got up and fled the
labyrinth, tracing the thread he trusted
would take him to freedom. But as Theseus
bravely followed the gift of love, he
realized he did not know if the monster.
had truly been slain or was merely
wounded. Had he been freed of it forever
or only given a reprieve?

Androgeus, man of the earth, came away
victorious from all his contests at the
festival.
He was the son of the King and
he was the best, until the envious Aegeus
s~nt.
the Marathonian bull to challenge
th.is youth of Crete.
His muscles were
taut, his mind alert as he prepared to
wrestle the beast.
But the bull did not
know the rules, did not care and charged
young Androgeus while he stood thinking
his brave thoughts. He had no warning; he
merely died.
Deeds like Aegeus' do not go unpunished
and to avenge his son, Minos ordered that
seven young men and seven young women be
sent each year from Athens to Crete to be
fed to the minotaur.
Every year as the
boat set off for Crete, the chosen youths
of Athens knew they would not return and
as they set sail they looked back in
horror at the city that had ordained their
deaths.
The third year of this atrocity came,
and Theseus, worthy son of Aegeus and hero
like no other, volunteered to join the
condemned fourteen and try his hand at
slaughtering the minotaur. Theseus had no
choice.
His life was the slaying of
monsters, the freeingof men.
The boat
left Athens with black sails under the
condition that if Theseus ,lived and was
victorious it would return with white
ones.
Minos anxiously desired to see the
young Athenians who would nourish his
monstrosity.
So the fourteen youths and
maidens and Theseus their hero lined up
before him. His daughter Ariadne stood by
his side and as she watched Theseus--his
shoulder, his thighs--she blushed with
love. Unable to stand the thought of this
beautiful soul· perishing, of this young

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This story has no author.

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I pass it on

�to you as it was passed to me.
I do not
know the truth of all I say for I was not
there, but though the details may have
changed through time, the spirit of the
hero Theseus remains.
The life of his
spirit depends on this tale, on its
telling.
When we stop recounting his
story, Theseus will die.

in small ways over time in order to
express better the daring, the heroism,
the grief.
The story-teller, unlike the
witness, is not present at the occurrence
and thus is not responsible for·accuracy-for the small details, for the literal
sequence of things. His absence is a gift
of license: he must only be faithful to
the spirit of the deeds.
Phaedo is Socrates' witness; Plato, the
maker of his myth. As Phaedo recounts tqe
list of those present at Socrates' death,
we learn that Plato was ill. He, like a
maker of myths, is not a witness to what
becomes his story.
In this dialogue it
is Socrates and not Plato who has authority. We look to Socrates to inspire in us
our opinions and beliefs.
This is his
dialogue.
As Plato himself says in his
second letter:
"For this reason I myself
have never yet written anything on these
subjects, and no treatise by Plato exists
or will exist, but those which now bear
his name belong to ' a Socrates become
beautiful and new."
(314 c 2)
Plato's
absence gives Socrates dominion over his
own story.
Cebes asks Socrates why he, who has
never
written
poetry
before,
began
composing verses in prison.
Socrates
tells him of a dream he has had frequently
in which he is told to "engage in the
Muses' art (mousiken) and practice it."
(60 e 7)
Philosophy, it had always
seemed, was the greatest of the Muses'
arts and so he had nothing to fear.
As
his death neared, however, he considered
that his dream had meant making "what is
ordinarily called music."
(61 a 9)
So
not wanting to displease the gods, he
began writing verse. Thus he wrote a hymn
to Apollo, whose festival had postponed
his death, and then
considering that a poet, if he
is really to be a poet, must
compose myths and not speeches,
since I was not a maker of myths,
I took the myths of Aesop, which
I had at hand and knew, and
turned into verse the first
I came upon.
(61 b 4)

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Socrates, the new Theseus, spent his
last day with fourteen friends.
The
followers gathered at daybreak at the
court where the trial took place and then
walked together to the prison where
Socrates was held.
They were not in the
habit of meeting so early,
but the
impending death of their beloved teacher
and friend demanded special attention, and
the earliness of their arrival ensured
that they could spend an entire day with
Socrates. The fullness of their final day
calls to mind Aristotle's observation in
the Poetics that "Tragedy endeavours to
keep as far as possible within a single
circuit of the sun, or something near
that." (1449 b 13)
Is Plato suggesting
that Socrates' death is a tragedy? Let us
see.
The
story
begins
with
Echecrates
questioning Phaedo. His first words ring
out "Autos, £ Phaidon," and Phaedo echoes
back "Autos, 2_, Echekrates." Phaedo speaks
in the manner in which one who had seen
the death of Androgeus would describe that
slaying. He is a witness to an event and
not a teller of stories. He saw the death
of Socrates, he was there: The "Autos"
resounds letting us know that Phaedo
himself will present the account "as
accurately as he can." (58 d 12)
Androgeus died and the minotaur was fed
on Athenian youths until Theseus slayed
it.
These are the facts of Theseus'
heroism, but how do they become the myth
of Theseus? An event occurs, a lifetime
passes, but it is not a story.
A man
relates an incident to a friend and still
there is no story. A story condenses the
event to bring out its power, changes it

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The. taking of a story and making it into
another story is at once a creating and a
not-creating.
How do Socrates' versions
of Aesop's myths differ from Aesop's
versions?
And
Plato's
telling
of
Socrates' story:
what does he add that
Phaedo's account leaves out? In some ways
Socrates' description of his verse-writing
is reminiscent of Plato's myth-making.
Each takes what already is and re-shapes
it to meet his need.
If Socrates'
re-telling of Aesop's
stories was the composition of music, is
Plato composing music when he tells us the
tale of Socrates? The dialogue contains
neither chords nor octaves--it is not in
verse--but there is a true music in its
form.
Plato makes Socrates start off
slowly, for Socrates must not shock his
followers with new ideas, but instead
plays for them the same arguments they've
heard before. He has an ear for timing
and feels the urgency to say certain
things before he dies but must wait for
the proper moment so that they have the
right effect.
Socrates has individual
modes of addressing each man and expects
different things from each of them in
return. From his fourteen friends he will
not tolerate tears, but from the servant
of the Eleven he accepts tears graciously
and even remarks on the nobility of his
weeping.
And
from
the
fourteen
individually also, there will be different
objections and different responses, and
Socrates will treat each uniquely. As the
dialogue
builds
up
to
its
final
resolution, we are carried by its music.

assert that philosophers practice dying
all their lives and thus welcome death
when their time comes.
Cebes cannot
understand how a man as wise as Socrates
could "leave us and the gods, who are, as
you yourself agree, good rulers."
( 63 a
11) Socrates quickly admits that he must
defend himself "as if we were in a law
court. "
( 63 b 3)
This reminder of his
recent trial pains but also comforts
Simmias and Cebes · who expect to hear a
speech similar to what they've already
heard
in
court.
They
want · to
be
re-assured that their teacher is the same
in dying as he was in life. They want to
be certain that the man whose life they've
tried to model theirs after does not
regret the things he's said and done.
Socrates says he will try to b'e more
convincing this time than last time; but
when he changes his view from that of the
Apology, that death is either "a virtual
nothingness" or "a change and mi.gration of
the soul from this to another place," (40
c 7) to his statement in the Phaedo that'
"I would assert as positively as anything
about such matters that I am going to gods
who are good masters,"
( 63 c 1) Simmias
and Cebes do not appear to have heard the
. "as anything" which rings so clearly in:
our ears.
Before Socrates has a chance to defend
his view, the first dissonance sounds as
Cri to warns Socrates not to talk so much
because talk warms the body which retards
the effects of the poison and thus
prolongs life.
It is an absurd warning,
but Socrates cannot ignore the image it
presents
of
the
cold
body
quickly
succumbing to the spreading poison, nor
can we forget that this is more than an
apologia. The dialogue is not a defense,
but a teaching.
Socrates' arguments are
not meant to justify what he has done, but
to show young men how to think and ask
questions about the things that matter to
them.
As Socrates begins his reasoning,
he refers to his followers as "tois
dikastais," (63 d 8) as justices, the.name
he rightly gives to his just supporters in
the Apology.
(40 a 3) By using it again
here, he lets Simmias and Cebes know that

As Theseus entered the labyrinth,
He began to unravel the thread. He
walked slowly, remembering all the
deeds of his days, for though he
knew what awaited him, he did not
know how he would conquer it.

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Socrates' first dialectical step is to

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what he is about to tell them, he says
because they are his true friends and
champions.
As they are friends, he will talk to
them about what is on his mind; but since
they are not aged men, how much will they
understand of what he now faces? Old men
do not talk to young men about death, they
talk to them about life.
They do not
confide in them their fears or hopes for
th'emselves in another world, but rather
talk about what they have done rightly or
wrongly in this world.
They counsel and
give advice and reflect on what they've
learned.
_ Let me propose that Socrates uses the
assumption that philosophers desire death
as an occasion to say something about
life, and not as an argument to defend his
choice to die.
Let us see what way the
arguments in this dialogue address the
questions of young men who are on the eve
of living in the world without a teacher
for the first time.
The core of Socrates' lengthy argument
defending the notion that philosophers
desire death comes from the idea that'the
body and the senses--hearing,
seeing,
feeling,
desiring,
fearing--obscure
thought,
and
therefore
realities,
by
deceiving the soul. Thus the soul of the
philosopher, loving truth, hates the body
and does all it can to avoid it and its
illusions.
Since Socrates defined death
as the separation of the soul from the
body (64 c 4) , it is this state of death
that the philosopher strives toward.
Socrates begins to test Simmias on ·the
truth of what he's said. He asks Simmias
if "we say" (phamen) there is such a thing
as absolute justice, and Simmias responds
"we say" (phamen) there is.
( 65 d 4)
Clearly Socrates is calling into play
Simmias'
familiarity with one of his
favorite ideas--the forms.
This is the
time to talk about ideas they've shared,
not the time to raise new hypotheses.
Socrates must help Simmias recall what
they have spoken of together, to remember
the best things they have done together.
He wants Simmias and Cebes to remember
these arguments because they are the

currency of
their
friendship.__
These
conversations have brought them -together,
but once Socrates is gone, Simmias and
Cebes will need to begin new arguments on
their own.
They will try to follow the
intellectual path of Socrates, starting
off with safe but simple accounts which
evolve into more ingenious arguments.
Simmias and Cebes will need - a starting
place for their philosophic inquiries.
Perhaps the arguments of which Socrates
seems intent on reminding them can serve
this purpose.
Once Simmias agrees that they say there
are such things as true justice, beauty
and goodness, Socrates asks him if he has
ever reached any of them with his bodily
senses.
His answer, of course, is no.·
Socrates
goes
on
to
elaborate
the
attributes of the man who could know such
things.
Several times in his - account he
retreats
from
certainty,
saying
such
things as:
"the man who approaches each
thing, so far as possible, with the reason
alone," (65 e 8) and "who removes himself,
so far as possible, from eyes and ears"
(66 a 5) and concludes with "Is not this
the man, Simmias, if anyone, to attain to
the knowledge of reality?"
(66 a 8)
Simmias,
apparently
not
hearing
the
uncertain "if anyone," chimes in "That is
as
true
as
true
can be,
Socrates"
(Huperphuos hos alethe legeis). (66 a 10)
Though Socrates' manner is calm, his
hesitancy to assert anything definitely
carries over to his own future. He admits
that when he gets to where he is going he
will, "if anywhere," (67 b 9) find that
for which he has been striving.
Though
Simmias and Cebes are not yet ready to
hear these doubts from their teacher, he
cannot deceive them with false confidence.
Socrates knows about their doubts and
thus the argument he tells them is similar
to what they're accustomed to hearing from
him.
In Book Five of the Republic, for
instance, he says:
Well, now. This is
separate them out.
side I put those of
were just speaking,

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how I
On one
whom you
the lovers

esting that in a
dialogue in which
Socrates maintains that the body gets in
the way of learning, he makes our bodily
experience the instrument of learning. If
he were
truly
trying
to
exalt the
unencumbered intellect, why wouldn't he
have made an argument l,ike the one - he
makes to Glaucon?

of sights, the lovers of-arts,
and the practical men; on the
other, those whom the argument
concerns, whom alone one could
rightly call philosophe~s ..•
The lovers of hearing and the
lovers of sights, on the one
hand, surely delight in fair
sounds and colors and shapes
and all that craft makes from
such things, but their thought
is unable to see and delight
in the nature of the fair
itself. (476 a 9 - b 6)

* * * * *
As Theseus rounded a turn in
the corridor, he caught sight
in the distance of the minotaur'&amp;
tail. He shuddered slightly at
what lay before him.

This account of the body's interference in
the pursuit of true knowledge resembles
the one given in the Phaed,Q •. and this
resemblance must comfort Simmiai:i" ·and Cebes ·
who do not want to believe that death
might change what they've always thought
to be true. The argument in the Republic,
though, has a different appeal from that
of the Phaedo.
In the Republic Socrates
tells Glaucon that the root of the
dichotomy between body and soul lies in the twoness of opposites and therefore the '
oneness of each member of the pair. The
deception comes because each is one but
shows
itself
as
many
through
its
conjunction with actions and bodies. The
true philosopher, he says, is the one who
sees the thing in itself apart from its
union with the physical world.
(475 e 476 c)
The argument invites Glaucon to
consider what makes something unified and
what makes a unified thing appear diverse.
Socrates'
argument
is
an
appeal
to
Glaucon' s
reason,
to his ability to
understand and see through the apparent
deception that bodies cause.
In the Phaedo, on the other hand,
Socrates appeals to the bodies of Simmias
and Cebes for confirmation of what he has
told them. His argument depends on their
having bodies so that they may recognize
the power their bodies have over them.
When Socrates says, "For the body keeps us
constantly busy by reason of its need of
sustenance," (66 b 9) it is not our
reason, but the immediate experience of our appetites whi:ch assents. I_t is inter:~

Cebes agrees with most of what Socrates
said, but matters concerning the soul, le
observes, are subject to much disbeli~.
Men fear that the soul is not immortal,
that when a man dies his soul also
_perishes.
In
Cebes'
apprehension.
Socrates catches his first glimpse of the
minotaur which awaits him, of the true
monster to be conquered which is the fear
of death.
Cebes calls for two distinct
responses--arqument and proof--to allay
his fears of the soul's dispersal.
He
does not merely want assurance that the
soul exists apart from the body, but also
that it will continue to have both power
and intelligence_ (~ esti ,.!! he psych@
apothanontos
~
anthr~u
kai
tina
dunamin echei kai phron~sin). (70 b 4)
This is a strange request, for in what
world
do
dunamis
and
phron~sis
flourish? These are the attributes of the
soul functioning on this earth. They are
the striving toward and the practical
knowledge of a soul acting in an imperfect world rather than a· world of
entelecheia and nous.
Cebes
sets ""\iP the
two
distinct
questions which will concern them for the
rest of the dialogue--whether the soul is
immortal and whether death is something to
be feared.
As we will see the two are
wholly connected. Before Socrates begins
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�he reminds Simmias and Cebes (do they need
reminding?) that these ideas and questions
are of the utmost concern to him.
He
warns us not to get too caught up in the
arguments and forget the circumstances
under which they take place. He lets us
know that these arguments are not a game,
but the questions they ask raise the most
serious problems any of them could face.
If we are still supposing, though, that
Socrates is trying to teach these young
men something pertinent to their own
lives, why does he begin to discuss the
immortality of the soul?
What effects
will the soul's immortality have· on the
way Simmias and Cebes act in this world?
Socrates
attempts
to
show
the
immortality of the soul by convincing
Cebes that opposites come from opposites,
and therefore what is living comes from
what is dead. This conclusion must show,
Socrates claims, that our souls existed in
another
world.
The
argument
has
Pythagorean origins, and so Simmias and
Cebes, two Pythagoreans,
are probably
familiar with its premise, while Plato
familiarizes us with this argument at the
beginning of the dialogue when Socrates is
released from his fetters.
Rubbing his
newly-freed leg, Socrates observes that
pleasure and pain do not come at the same
time, but one inevitably follows after the
other.
Socrates' speculation contrasts
sharply with Phaedo' s
observation to
Echecrates immediately before, that "a
very strange feeling came over me, an
unaccustomed mixture of pleasure and of
pain
together,
when
I
thought
that
Socrates was presently to die."
(59 a 6)
Socrates likens his notion to a two-headed
beast which sets the stage for Cebes to
ask about his verse-writing, as well as
introducing
us
to
the
idea
of
many-headedness which appears again later
in the dialogue.
As Socrates begins his proof that
opposites come from opposites, Phaedo does
not mention that at that moment he is
experiencing
the
contrary
feeling
of
opposites mixing within him. He does not
tell his friend that the thought of his
death fills him with both pleasure and

pain simultaneously. Phaedo is persuaded
by Socrates to agree with something that a
moment's reflection would tell him isn't
true.
The discussion, which begins with the
example of nobility and disgrace and other
absolute
opposite
entities,
quickly
changes to a
discussion of relative
opposite qualities. The emphasis turns to
processes
Qf generation
and becoming
rather than being, although Socrates makes
no
attempt
to
examine
the
middle
increments of
generation which occur
before the opposites emerge.
When at the conclusion of this argument
Cebes quickly adds that the theory ·of
recollection is further proof for the
pre-existence of the soul, it is clear
that the opposites from opposites argument
was not convincing.
Further proof is
needed.
But Socrates is in a battle and
the individual blows do not matter.
All
that counts is that the campaign as a
whole be victorious.
As with the previous argument, we are
introduced to some of the reasoning of the
recollection
account
earlier
in
the
dialogue when Simmias and Socrates discuss
the existence of the forms.
In this
context, though, Simmias does not recall
the
recollection hypothesis
and
thus
himself needs to recollect.
Cebes helps
him.
The hypothesis first appears in the
Meno where it is used to show that the
soul has already learned everything before
it enters the body. The theory is thus an
answer to Meno's query, "How will you look
for something when you don't in the least
know what it is?... [Even] if you come
right up against it, how will you know
that what you have found is the thing you
didn't know?" (80 d 4)
Socrates answers
that you will recognize it because the
soul once possessed all knowledge, and so
when you see the truth, you will recognize
it because the memory of it exists within
your soul.
In the Phaedo, in response to a wholly
different question, Cebes presents the
theory of recollection as Socrates did in
the Meno,
but now Socrates
is
not

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satisfied with the explanation and must
elaborate upon it. His first elaboration
takes the theory out of the realm of the
forms and brings it into our world with
the example: "Well, you know that a lover
when he sees a lyre or a cloak or anything
else which his beloved is wont to use,
perceives the lyre and in his mind
receives an image of the boy to whom the
lyre belongs, do you not?" (73 d 5)
Socrates does eventually bring the idea
of abstract qualities into the discussioni
but whereas in the ~ our understanding
of the abstract entity enabled us to
recognize the physical thing, in the
Phaedo, we obtain our knowledge of the
abstract form from our knowledge of the
physical.
"Did we not, by seeing equal
pieces of wood or stones or other things,
derive from them a knowledge of abstract
equality?" (74 b 7)
We know that the
forms must exist in our souls when we come
to the realization that things in this
world fall short of what they might be.
Socrates asks, "Do not equal stones and
pieces of wood, though they remain the
same, sometimes appear to us equal in one
respect and unequal in another?" And when
Simmias agrees and then also agrees that
absolute equals do not ever seem unequal,
Socrates concludes, "Then those equals are
not the same as equality in the abstract."
(74 c 3)
The world is imperfect and our
recognition of that tells us that we are
aware of perfection.
It is through our
senses that we perceive that "all sensible
objects strive after absolute equality and
fall short of it," (75 b 1) and thusit is
our senses which tell us that the forms
live within us. The argument concludes by
saying that we are born with a , certain
knowledge which we acquired before our
birth, thus showing that our souls must
have existed in another ·world, the world ·
of the forms.
The recollection account in the Phaedo
differs greatly from the account in the
Meno.
It appeals to the experience of
Simmias and Cebes with tangible things
like cloaks and lyres and not with their
recognition of mathematical truths.
The·
argument is at once a reminiscence of past

times and past discussions, a reassurance
that Socrates still believes the things he
once held to be true and .an occasion for
us to wonder why this recollection, in
contrast to the recollection of the Meno,
is inspired by sensible objects.
~
Socrates asks Sinmias. if all men can
give an account of these' things and
Simmias sorrowfully admits that though he
wishes
it were
true,
"I
fear
that
tomorrow, at this time, there wi11 be no
longer any man living who is able to do so
properly."
(76 b 10)
This fear, thouqb
perhaps
selfish,
is
based
on
the
realization we all have when faced with
the death of a dear friend, the realization that they have something no one
else has. At this moment, Sinmias is only
thinking of himself, only thinking that he
is losing the man who taught him to see
the truest things. As Socrates continues
to conclude the recollection argument, he
is a dying man recalling with his close•t
fiends the things that· were best in his
life.

* * * * *
As Theseus entered the center
of the labyrinth, the minotaur's
eyes beckoned in challenge.
Simmias and Cebes each become convinced
that our souls existed before we were
born, but they still have the fear of
dispersal, the fear that the soul is a
breath which will fade with a man's last
words.
Socrates teases them about their
childish fears, and Cebes the child dares
him to persuade them "not to fear death as
if it were a hobgoblin." (77 e 5)
Still
lightly Socrates tells them to sing charms
every day to charm away their fears. We
are
immediately
reminded
that
this
dialogue is Socrate•' song, and Cebes,
too, recognizes Socrates as his charmer of
fears. "Where shall we find a good singer
of such charms, since you are leaving us?"
Cebes asks. (78 a 1) Socrates replies in
earnest this time, telling them to search
0

11

�,
everywhere for such a charmer. He knows
that the fear of death is not a childish
fear.
He knows it is the fear of death
which gives power to tyrants, the threat
of death which keeps men from acting
justly.
Socrates must do all he can
before he dies to allay their fear of
death. He must show them that the danger
of death need never determine their
actions.
In order to assuage their fears,
Socrates asks them what things naturally
suffer dispersion, and then, he adds, we
must see if the soul is that sort of
thing. They decide on two types of being:
the
first--non-composite,
unchangeable,
invisible1
the
second--composite,
changeable and visible.
The forms fall
under the first heading, but things like
cloaks are always changing and thus fall
into the second category.
After some
discussion
they
draw
the
tentative
conclusion that "[the] soul is more like
the invisible than the body is, and the
body more like the visible."
(79 c 1)
Cebes,
under
Socrates'
tutelage,
determines that the soul has a kinship
with the forms and the di vine and thus
will be "entirely indissoluble, or nearly
so." (80 b 11)
This emerges from its context, but in
many ways it is utterly different from
Socratic thinking.
In the Sophist
the
Eleatic stranger tells Thaetetus that:

uncertain in a dialogue where most of the
questions raised are about immortality of
the soul, yet the forms are assumed from
the beginning to be everlasting and
timeless. We fear for our souls but have
faith in the eternality of the forms.
If
there were a true kinship between souls
and forms, would Simmias and Cebes have
anything to fear?
Perhaps another way to understand this
argument can be found in a pun. Socrates
makes Cebes agree that the soul is
invisible (aeides) and pure and divine and
thus enters the · realm of the pure and
everlasting, which is Hades
(Haides).
Puns can be deceptive because frequently
the maker of the pun has a true and
meaningful idea when he begins to speak
it. The pun seductively enters his mind,
and though it is not exactly what he meant
to say, before he knows it, it has rolled
off his tongue.
The speaker gets caught
up in the sound of his own words, (in the
coincidental
(aeides/Haides)
and loses
the original intention.
I do not mean to suggest that Plato
sacrificed his meaning for the seductive
effects of language, but perhaps the
thought process of the maker of puns can
be a model by which to understand what
Socrates does.
Maybe Socrates does not
really believe that souls are like forms,
but rather that they approach being like
forms.
(In the opposites from opposites
argument the emphasis was on processes of
becoming, but there he talks of purity
rather than purification.
Ought it be
different?) This would make sense in the
context of its being an essentially
Pythagorean argument, for the Pythagoreans
believed that man progressively purifies
himself in a process that is never
completed in life. Perhaps Plato blurred
the distinction between purification and
purity, between souls and forms, leaving
out the middle ground of approach.
In a
certain way, the process by which souls
come closer to being like forms is a
non-active activity. Souls approach forms
by contemplation which is an activity of
stilling,
a
momentary
unchangeability
during which we come closest to being

If knowing is to be acting on
something, it follows that what
is known must be acted upon by it,
and so, on this showing, reality
when it is being known by the act
of knowledge must, in so far as it
is known, be changed owing to
being so acted upon--~11d that,
we say, cannot happen to the
changeless. (248 d 11-e 4)
Here it seems that what is changeless
cannot be known, for knowing is a change.
Can it be that the forms are changeless
and thus not knowable?
Even the premise that there is a
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divine.
In this way, the motion that
Socrates may have chosen not to mention is
a non-motion, the approach, a stopping to
think.
It is interesting, though, that
Socrates omits contemplation.
Why does he do this? Socrates presents
a predominantly Pythagorean argument to
two Pythagoreans, but leaves out the
process
of
becoming
which
is
characteristic of that school. Must not
he
be
inviting
them
to
scrutinize,
inviting them to search for what he has
left out? That type of scrutiny is for
later, though, for the time when Socrates
will no longer be there. In his absence,
he leaves them this argument which does
not quite work, as something on which they
should spend more time. For now, though,
the true battle with fear of death must
continue.
Let me pause for a moment to look back.
The first three arguments in defense of
the soul's immortality do not convince me.
I assume, though, that Plato did not
intend for his readers to be convinced.
Socrates' arguments are, like Ariadne's
thread, gifts of love. They are gifts to
men who will be struggling with something
alone and who need confidence that they
are heading in the right direction.
Simmias and Cebes will soon be facing the
trial of living a good life without the
guidance
of
their
teacher.
These
arguments are Socrates' gifts to them so
that
they may
follow
this
type of
reasoning and it will lead them rightly.
They are gifts which Simmias and Cebes can
keep with them always as reminders of
Socrates, for the arguments themselves are
reminiscences into the past.
When Socrates finished talking there
was a long silence and Phaedo tells
Echecrates that his teacher was "apparently absorbed in what had been said."
(84 c 1) We know nothing of his thoughts
but
that
they
were
of
the
utmost
seriousness, for he tells Simmias and
Cebes,
who
were
conversing
between
themselves,
that they may raise any
questions they have about these matters,
but "if you are considering anything else,
I have nothing to say." (84 c 7) Simmias

acknowledges that both he and Cebes have
questions to ask, but they were afraid to
trouble Socrates with them for fear of
displeasing him in his present misfortune.
When
he
says
that,
Socrates
laughs
(egelasen) -as both Simmias (64 a 12) and
Cebes (62 a 11) had each done once before,
when neither of them was in.the mood to do
so.
Socrates'
laughter
is
the
opening
measure of his song of death, his gentle
music in imitation of the calling of the
swans. "I, too, am a swan, " his laughter
says, "and my laughter heralds my death as
the swans sing in their prophetic joy."
Socrates' laughter evolves into words,, and
the words are in meter so that he does not
lose the song-like nature of his story.
He sings to Simmias and Cebes about
Apollo's birds, the swans, who like their
master are endowed with gifts of prophecy
which enable
them to
see
fnto
the
blessings of the other world.
They sing
for joy and not for sorrow, and their song
welcomes death. Socrates' song is his joy
too, not only for what it portends, but
for what it is. He revels not only in the
story his song tells, but in the telling
itself. Does Theseus only look forward to
having slain the minotaur, or is there also
joy in the actual slaying of the beast?
Socrates'
song is sung not only· in
anticipation of what awaits him, but in
the knowledge that the ·song itself is a
creation of a better future.
Unlike
argument which is meant to persuade,
Socrates' swan song is meant to seduce
Simmias and Cebes into believing that
their teacher has seen into the future and
knows that death is not to be feared. His
song guarantees them of his happiness, for
it is the music of laughter.
It is not
reasoned, but emotional.
Socrates charms
their fears by lulling them away with
tales of animals who are wise and sing in
their wisdom. This charming away of the
fear of death promises to make Simmias and
Cebes lead better lives, for it is the
fear of death which threatens to destroy
the Socratic tradition of acting rightly
for its own sake rather than having one's
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-punishments which will come from them. In
this way the song which proclaims a joyful
future
plays an important role in the
implementing of that future.
In Cebes'
request that the immortality of the soul
be proven, he seems 'to be talking about
the
soul' s
immortality on earth,
an
immortality of ideas and traditions, an
immortality of a way of life.
The
conquering of the fear of death is part of
the struggle to ensure the immortality of
the Socratic soul on this earth.
Thus
this song of laughter is the instrument of
Socrates' warfare.
Simmias is eager to begin, eager to
share his question. But first he confides
that he thinks it either very difficult or
impossible to decide upon these things
during life.
One must either learn the
truth, he says, or take the best doctrine
he can find,and,"Embarking upon it as upon
a raft, sail upon it through life in the
midst of dangers, unless he can sail upon
some stronger vessel, some d\vine revelation, and make his voyage more safely and
securely." (85 d 1)
Nothing, I think,
could be closer to what Socrates feels.
Simmias claims that the soul is a
harmony which is invisible and incorporeal
and divine. The lyre and its strings are
bodies and therefore mortal, but what
happens when the strings are broken or too
tightly strung?
The soul, the harmony,
must perish. The remains of the body last
a long time and then finally decay, but
the soul--a mixture and harmony of the
elements which compose our bodies--is· the
first to vanish.
Socrates suggests that Cebes raise his
objection before anyone tries to answer
Simmias.
Cebes still worries that the
soul will disperse when the body dies.
His fear, he says, can best be expressed
by the figure of a cloak, as Simmias' was
by a lyre.
(See 73 d 4)
Which lasts
longer, he asks, a man or a cloak? A man
weaves and wears out many cloaks in his
life, but he dies before the last one
perishes.
This, however, does not mean
that the cloak is stronger than the man,
but merely that the man has worn out many
cloaks and died with the last one still

* * * * *

intact.
So it is with the soul and the
body.
The soul lasts a long time and
wears out many bodies and is constantly
weaving anew that which wears out, but
when the soul finally has woven its last
and perishes, it is still wearing its last
body.
The body then quickly decays, · but
it has outlived the soul. We cannot know
which body will be the last that the soul
weaves, but like the weaver who finally
weaves his last cloak, the soul eventually
weaves its last body and dies.
Why does Socrates ask that these two
objections--the objections of the lyre and
the cloak--be asked together and then
refuted together? In Cebes' short account
of the soul as a weaver of cloaks, he uses
forms of the verb apoluo ten times. It is
this word which represents his greatest
fear.
We cannot forget that it is the
festival of Apollo (ApollC5) which gives
Socrates the reprieve, Apollo to whom
Socrates writes his hymn,
and Apollo
Socrates claims to serve. Can it be mere
coincidence that the symbols of Apollo are
the lyre and the bow?
Apollo is the god of archery, music and
prophecy. It is said of his arrows in the
Iliad:

At the outset of their struggle,
the beast appeared to be winning.
When Socrates had finished listening to
Simmias and Cebes, he sat surrounded by
fourteen stunned men.
Even Echecrates
just listening to Phaedo recount the
incident says, "Now I must begin over again
and find another argument to convince me
that when a man dies his soul does not
perish with him." (88 d 6)
They all
needed to begin again, to re-think things
through, to see if Socrates could confront
the fear of dispersal, the final threat.

Now you lie in the palace,
handsome and fresh with dew,
in the likeness of one whom he
of the silver bow, Apollo, has
attacked and killed with his
gentle arrows. (Book 24 - 757)
His arrows, though gentle, symbolize his
distance.
He is, as one of his epithets
calls him,
"far-shooting Apollo."
If
there is a connection between the lyre and
the cloak and the lyre and the bow, the
difference they point to is the opposition
between the remoteness of the Apollonian
bow and the closeness and protection of
the Socratic cloak.
The lyre, though, is something Socrates
and Apollo share.
The music Socrates
plays is divine, his prophecies divinely
inspired.
Part of him is close and
present and of the earth, but part of him
is with the gods.

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his feet. He had not just one enemy but
two, and even Heracles could not handle
that alone. He killed the crab and called
his charioteer Iolaus to come help him.
It was no longer a matter of pride. All
he could think of was that the beast must
be killed. Iolaus immediately set fire to
a neighboring forest, and with flaming
brands he seared the necks of the Hydra as
its heads were lopped off, ensuring that
no more could grow in their stead.
Heracles' task was almost complete.
Eight of the nine heads lay at his feet,
but the ninth, the immortal head, stared
confidently at the hero in challenge.
Heracles tried in vain to perform the
impossible
but finally came to realize
his limitations.
That head would live
forever. - Resignedly, Heracles buried the
breathing head under a rock. He would die
without seeing it killed.

•,

Heracles, son of Zeus, wore the armor
of the gods when he undertook his labors.
He carried Hermes' sword and Apollo's bow,
and as he stood in battle, the golden
breastplate he bore belonged to Vulcan.
Word of Heracles' heroism had spread
throughout the land and so he was called
on to slay the nine-headed Hydra which
dwelled in the marsh of Lerna. The beast
would emerge from its abode and wreak
havoc on the land, killing cattle and
ravaging the country. Defeating it was no
easy task:
not only was it immense, but
one of its nine heads was immortal.
Heracles mounted his chariot driven by
Iolaus, son of Iphiclus, and they rode to
the marsh where the Hydra was said to
live. When they arrived, Heracles stepped
down from the chariot and went in quest of
the many-headed beast.
As he approached
the springs of Amymone, the hole in which
the creature lived loomed before him. He
did not move any closer, but shot fiery
darts at the hole until the Hydra emerged.
It was more gruesome than he could have
imagined, and as he grabbed onto one of
its arms, it twisted itself about the
hero's legs. Heracles beat its heads with
his club but to no avail, for when one was
crushed, two sprang up in its place. As
he stood hopelessly clubbing the heads of
the monster, a huge crab began to bite at

* * * * *
Heracles' strength lies in his ability
to seek help, in his capacity to abandon
pride
for
the
sake
of
worthwhile
accomplishment.
If Heracles
had
not
called
on
Iolaus,
the
beast
which
threatened would have devoured him. The
triumph belongs to Heracles, but without
Iolaus it would have be.en nothing at all.

II

Socrates' method of attack differs from
that of Heracles.
Though he might have
divine gifts, they are not armor.
He
consoled Simmias and Cebes by listening to
their
fears
pleasantly,
gently
and
respectfully and soothed their doubts
about his future by acting toward them as
he always had.
Whereas - his friends met
earlier than usual at the courthouse that
day, Socrates' habits did not change. He
stroked Phaedo's head and played with his

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important than maintaining
his pride.

hair.
Could any of the fourteen men
assembled there truly believe that this
seventy year old man facing death within
hours, listening quietly to friends and
playing with the hair of a beautiful young
man, was eager to leave this life?
As he strokes Phaedo' s hair, Socrates
asks him if he will cut it off tomorrow in
mourning.
When
Phaedo nods
Socrates
gently corrects him saying "You will cut
it off today, and I will cut mine, if our
argument dies and we cannot bring it to
life again."
(89 b 8)
What would
they be mourning?
What is an argument
such that it has a life?
The life of this argument is the life
of Socrates' soul, that of intellectual
pursuit and virtuous action. · If the
argument dies with Socrates, if moral
'virtue vanishes in the face of tyranny, in
the face of those who have tried to quell
it in him, then Socrates' soul will die.
The immortality of Socrates' soul is the
immortality of the way he has lived his
life and questioned other people about the
way they have lived theirs.
The fear of
death threatens all this. The immortality
for which Socrates argues is the immortality of the dunamis and phronesis
of
the soul--the striving toward and the
moral rightness.
Argument immortalizes
Socrates' soul, for it is in argument that
men will continue to ask what virtue and
knowledge are, while those who stop questioning will fall prey to the demands of
tyrants.
The fears and arguments of the
Phaedo concern themselves with this world,
for the greatest danger that could befall
Socrates' soul is being forgotten on this
earth.
The continuation of the argument
is the immortality of his soul.

If the fear of mortality ends the
argument,
then
that
fear
must
be
conquered.
Socrates asks · Phaedo to lead
the battle, saying he will help him as
Iolaus did Heracles. Phaedo retreats from
that responsibility preferring to play
Iolaus to Socrates' Heracles.
It is all
the same, Socrates assures him, knowing
that there is no time for discussions of
heroism.
It does not matter anymore who
does what, only that it get done.
As Heracles first had to kill the crab
which threatened to prevent him from
facing the true danger, so must Socrates
destroy misology, the hatred of argument,
before addressing the real beast, the fear
of the soul's dispersal, which is the
final reason to fear death.
Misology,
like the crab at Heracles' ankles, impedes
facing
true
dangers
head-on.
Confrontations
with the
most
serious
questions cannot take place outside the
forum of argument, and thus misology is a
threat to all serious philosophic inquiry.
If Simmias and Cebes come to hate argument, they will have no means by which to
address
their
fears
of
the
soul's
mortality. But, if Simmias and Cebes can
be convinced never to abandon argument,
Socrates can be more certain that his way
of life will not perish.
Misologyr
Socrates
says,
resembles
misanthropy.
We
come
to
hate
both
arguments and men when we think they are
perfectly good and true
but later find
out otherwise.
Arguments, like men, are
very rarely all true or all false, but we
must
never
revile
argument
totally,
believing it to hold no truth whatsoever.
Individual arguments are like single blows
struck in a battle:
neither is of much
importance in itself--each matters only in
the cumulative effect.
So must we not
look for proof in a single argument, but
in the discussion as a whole.
We ought
never to think argument unsound, but
should rather realize our own lack of
preparation
for
understanding
it.
Socrates tells Simmias and Cebes to strive

* * * * *

Not even Heracles could take
on both the Hydra and the crab,
and so he called for Iolaus to
come to his aid, knowing that
winning the battle was more

existence elsewhere prior to entering the
body.
Though he addresses only Simmias'
objection, he asks the opinions of both
Simmias and Cebes
in regard to the
recollection account.
The bringing of
that theory into this argument must have
more significance than the refutation of
Simmias' idea that the soul is a harmony.
He is, I think, testing their affinity for
one argument, making them choose between
two things which individually seem right.
He challenges their ability to revise old
thoughts in the light of new ideas.
Simmias and Cebes are united in their
conviction that it is the best argument
given so far, and Simmias goes on to add
that he would be surprised if he ever felt
differently about it.
Socrates plays on
Simmias' admission and immediately points
out that the harmony account conflicts
directly with the recollection argument~
because, in order for the soul to be a
harmony, the body would have to exist
before the soul so that it could come
together in such a way as to create the
harmonized soul.
When Simmias sees this
conflict, he unquestioningly gives up his
theory without considering that it might
be right and the recollection account
wrong.
Why does he give up so easily?
Why is he afraid to surrender a theory
that had once seemed certain but now
conflicts with a new idea?
Socrates will not let him abandon his
account yet and submits another argument
against it, hoping that Simmias will
attempt to defend his thesis.
Socrates
objects that the soul can never be more or
less of a soul, but there can be different
degrees
of
harmonization,
and
thus
Simmias' analogy collapses. Simm.ias again
agrees with Socrates that his account
fails, but his acquiescent response is not
what Socrates wanted, and so he tries once
more to provoke Simmias into argument.
Socrates'
third
refutation
of
the
harmony account is based on the idea that
the soul presides over the body and thus
cannot be controlled by the corporeal in
the way that harmony is determined by the
lyre. He chooses an example in support of
the
dominion of
the
soul
from
the

·for this understanding "for the sake of
all your future life, and I because of my
impending death."
(91 a) As he prepares
to £ace their objections he warns them:
"But you, if you do as I ask, will give
little thought to Socrates and much more
to the truth." (91 c)
He wants them to
stop pitying him and themselves and pay
close attention to what is being said.
They will need these truths for the rest
of their lives, and he will not be there
to remind them. They have gradually been
weaned from hearing only about the past
and now must face something new, something
they can keep with them to help· carry on
the Socratic way of life.
As Socrates restates the doubts of
Simmias and Cebes, I am struck again "by
the question:
Why are these doubts
expressed and refuted together? When the
objections lie side by side we easily see
the lyre and the cloak in opposition to
the lyre and the bow, but is this
comparison with Apollo all that Plato
intends
by
this
uncharacteristic
structure? Perhaps a clue can be found in
Socrates' own words when he suggests that
Cebes gives his objection before Simmias'
objection is addressed.
Socrates says:
"Then when we have heard them, we can
either agree with them, if they seem to
strike the proper note (~ ti dokosi
prosaidein), or, if they do not, we can
proceed to argue in defense of our
reasoning." (86 e 4) The unusual ordering
displays a sense of music, a desire to
hear the properly struck note--the note to
which Socrates must respond by saying what
he wants to before he dies. He listens to
these objections and searches for that
impetus, for he does not want merely to
speak unconnected thoughts. He wants his
ideas to flow from Simmias' and Cebes'
fears as the proper response in a piece of
counterpoint.
With. both
of
their
objections in front of him, he will have a
clearer idea of where he must take them so
that they may yield the fruits he hopes
they contain.
Socrates asks both Simmias and Cebes
how they feel about the recollection
argument as a proof for the soul's

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17

--

�dialogues, quoted out of context,. but
rather its context adds poignantly to our
understanding of what Socrates faces. Our
knowledge of Odysseus amplifies what we
know about Socrates; for Socrates, at that
moment, is Odysseus. He is a man who has
traveled and told the tales of his
travels. He has encoun.tered men and gods
and learned from both.
He stands at the
gates of the union he has sought for many
years, but as the moment of surrender
nears, both Socrates and Odysseus feel
apprehension.
Plato lets us know that he will no
longer play games by the seriousness with
which he quotes Homer.
Irony needs time
and there is no more time.
Socrates'
song, mirrored in Odysseus' agony in the
fore-court, draws to its portentous climax
in the awareness Socrates shares with
Odysseus that the effect of much of what
he says will depend on how he utilizes the
little time he has left.

twentieth
book
of
the
Odyssey.
As
Penelope lay alone in her bed weeping for
her husband, Odysseus bedded down in the
fore-court of his house unknown to all but
Telemachos and Eurykleia.
He heard the
voices and laughter of the women who had
shamelessly slept with the suitors and
wanted to kill them all then, not to let
them pass another night with the men who
were devouring his property.
And he
thought about the suitors themselves-could he conquer so many?
In this
yearning to act and his uncertainty in how
to act,

He smote his breast, and thus
he chid his heart: Endure it,
heart, thou didst bear worse
than this.
(Book 20 - 17)
Socrates gives this as an example of the
soul overcoming the desires of the heart.
The soul is a ruler and far more divine
than a harmony; in this way the reference
to Homer concludes their discussion.
At that moment in the Odyssey from
which Plato quotes, Odysseus faces much of
what Socrates does in the Phaedo.
As
Socrates has sought death, so has Odysseus
longed for
Penelope.
Each of them,
though, has perhaps taken a longer route
than necessary to get there out of love
for what the world has brought them. For
each, one task must be performed before he
achieves his goal: setting his city in
order.
(This cannot be done entirely, but
each can make a proper beginning.)
Both
Odysseus and Socrates realize that their
efforts will be more successful if they
wait
for
the
right
time.
Odysseus
understands
that the
slaying of the
suitors will be more powerful and shocking
if he waits a little longer, as Socrates
knows that Simmias and Cebes will be
affected more by his words if he waits
until they are prepared to hear them.
Each must make his heart endure this
restraint.
The citing of Homer fits in perfectly
with Socrates' story. There is no irony.
It is not, as is so common in the

* * * * *
Only one head remained,
the immortal head.

In this mood of approaching the end of
a long odyssey, Socrates begins to address
Cebes'
objection,
calling his friends
together to "charge the foe in Homeric
fashion."
(95 b 9)
Let us not forget
that the most important step in Odysseus'
battle against the suitors was revealing
himself as who he was. All else followed
simply from that.
Before we look at Socrates' response to
Cebes' objection, let us think about what
it means to say that the soul is a weaver
of cloaks. Cebes describes it this way:
For if the body is constantly
changing and being destroyed
while the man still lives, and
the soul is always weaving anew
that which wears out, then when
the soul perishes it must

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necessarily have on its last
garment, and this only will
survive it, and when the soul
has perished, then the body will
at once show its natural weakness and will quickly disappear
in decay.
(87 d 10)
A cloak is not unique to one person but
can be shared by several.
Many may wear
and be protected by the same cloak, as a
group of men may share in and agree with
the same argument.
Socrates arms himself
with argument
as Heracles does with
Vulcan' s golden breastplate, for it is
with his cloak of argument that he defends
himself against the tyrants and sophists.
Socrates' arguments are the weavings of
his soul which he wears like a cloak.
When he dies, his last cloak will outlive
him, and it will be the inheritance he
leaves.
Simmias and Cebes and the other
followers will wear it and make it theirs.
They will adopt his arguments, his way of
life,
but· that cloak will not last
forever, and when it starts to tear, they
will need to know how to weave one anew.
They cannot continue to live off what
Socrates created. If the tradition is to
be kept alive, it must have new growth,
new life.
Each soul must learn to weave
its own cloak.
Before Socrates begins his refutation
of
Cebes'
fear
that
the
soul will
ultimately perish, he finds himself in
thought. He begins by saying that he will
tell them "my own experience" (96 a 2)
with investigating the cause of generation
and decay. His story is an uncovering, a
stripping down.
He reaches back. to his
first intellectual pursuits and tells of a
young man filled with questions about
heaven and earth and bodies and why they
come to be.
This is what he has been·
waiting to tell them. He has been waiting
to give them a model of how to begin a
philosophic inquiry, starting naively and
working without a teacher. Socrates wants
to ensure that when he leaves them they
will not be without the means to continue
the lives they've started.
As Socrates' story unfolds we learn

that his confusion with the questions of
physical realities became so great that he
abandoned his quest.
He then began to
search for the cause of the way things are
and looked for someone who could teach him
that the cause is rational--which Socrates
interprets as meaning that things are this
way because it is best for them to be this
way.
He thought Anaxagoras could teach
him such things and explain what is the
best for all things and good for the
whole. He eagerly listened for someone to
confirm what he hoped was the truth.
He
found Anaxagoras' books and read them
voraciously, for he wanted to know the
truth
as
quickly
as
possible•
But
Anaxagoras called air and ether and water
the causes, not mind.
Socrates wanted
someone to teach the cause and not "the
thing without which the cause could not
be." (99 b 4) Deciding that no one could
teach him such a thing, and still young
and in search of the truth, he set out on
his second voyage (deuteros plous) to find
it for himself.
Socrates'
series of voyages echoes
Simmias' description that man must either
find the truth or set sail (diapleusai)
through life upon the best doctrine he can
find. (85 c, d)
Socrates, unable to find
the
truth
about
the
real
cause
of
generation and decay, embarked on a safe
but simple voyage.
His second sailing
consisted of looking for causes through
conceptions and not through the senses.
He determined that things
are great
because of greatness, and small because of
smallness.
No one can overthrow such an
answer. It is indisputable.
Socrates speaks to these young men who
will soon be alone and without a teacher,
looking for answers and not knowing where
to look, as he once was. His words are a
gift to them--a gift of assurance.
He
started as they are now and came to see
the things he does because he pursued what
tried to elude him. He clung to argument
but always searched for a better way, a
deuteros plous. As Socrates reveals himself, he tells Simmias and Cebes that they
too can do what he has done.
His words
say, "You are right to have hope."

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�Throughout
most
of
the
dialogue,
Simmias and Cebes are the only men who
respond
to Socrates.
After hearing,
though, that great things are caused by
greatness, one of the others--"! just
don't remember who it was" (103 a 3)
--objected vehemently that this was in
direct contradiction with the argument
that
opposites
come
from
opposites.
Socrates praises this unknown man, and in
doing so, praises all the unknown men for
their attentiveness and interest and for
their readiness to speak, even after long
hours of silence.
This unnamed man is
every man who sat by Socrates' side on the
day of his death.
The safe but simple account is a good
starting place, but one ought not be
satisfied there.
Socrates has a more
ingenious account, an account that might
satisfy
Cebes'
objections.
The
new
account does not say that the cause of
what is hot is heat, but rather fire.
Instead of looking toward conceptions for
causes, he looks toward the earth.
In
this way, snow causes cold and fever
illness. But snow does not admit of heat;
it must either withdraw from heat or
perish.
Socrates then asks Cebes to
answer his questions, not "in their own
words, but do as I do." (105 b 7) He must
· go beyond the safe but stupid answer and
look fLr the more ingenious cause. It is
the soul and not life, he answers, which
causes the body in which it is to be
alive.
And the soul, causing life, does
not admit of death ... but here the account
breaks down.
When Socrates establishes this way of
answering he says that things like snow do
not admit their opposites and thus either
withdraw o~ perish when the opposites
approach.
In his account of the soul,
however, he concludes that the soul does
not admit of death and so is immortal,
that is, it withdraws at the approach of
death.
He
does
not
consider
the
possibility of its perishing.
The same
sort of omission is made early in the
dialogue when Socrates says, "For, if pure
knowledge is impossible while the body is
with us, one of two things must follow,

either it cannot be acquired at all or
only when we are dead." (66 e 4)
In the
ensuing discussion, though, no mention is
made
of
the
possibility
that
pure
knowledge is unattainable, as here there
is no talk about the soul's perishing at
the approach of death.

* * * * *
Heracles, realizing his defeat,
placed the breathing head under
a rock. Others might come and
attempt what he was unable to do.·
The arguments are left open-ended.
They are there for us to ponder, for us to
think about how they might be concluded.
They remind Simmias and Cebes that the
work is unfinished, that they must try to
go beyond what Socrates has said. Simmias
and Cebes must recognize that argument,
like purification, is an on-going process,
never completed in this life. In the last
sentence of the dialogue there is a hint
that Socrates' followers realize that.
Phaedo
says,
"Such
was
the
end,
Echecrates, of our friend, who was, as we
may say (hos hemeis phamen an) , of all
those of his time whom we have-known, the
best and wisest and most righteous man."
(118 a 16) The "as we may say" and "whom
we have known" seem to show the understanding that their experience has been
limited and individual. They do not make
sweeping statements about his unmatchable
greatness; they simply say that in his
time he was the greatest man they had
known.
This leaves room for Socrates to
be surpassed, or at least challenged. And
Socrates, I think, wants to be challenged.
He wants men to try to do more and know
more and question more than he has.
By
leaving his arguments unfinished or inconclusive, he invites Simmias and Cebes
to take up his challenge.
In his conclusion, Socrates says, "All
I think would agree that god and the
principle of life, and anything else that
is immortal, can never perish." (106 d 5)

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But can the theory of the forms ever
perish?
Can moral virtue disappear from
men's actions? Will the ability to oppose
tyrants always exist?
The greatest fear expressed by Simmias
and Cebes is the fear of dispersal, the
fear that the soul will dissolve "like a
breath." ( 70 a 7) They fear that the soul
is a breath, a breath that utters words, a
breath saturated with meaning; and thus
the re-utterance of the same words saves
the meaning, breathes the same breath.
The fear of dispersal is the fear that
these words will never again come together
in this way, with this meaning, and that
the Socratic vision will scatter in the
political winds. The fear of dispersal is
the fear that the cloak, the symbol of the
manifestations of Socrates' soul in this
world, will fall apart and not be sewn
together.
The fear of dispersal is the fear that
these
men,
the
inheritors
of
the
tradition, will never again come together
as brethren, as men who share. the same
breath.
They came together as followers
of Socrates, men who shared the same
questions and goals. Socrates brought them
together, but who will keep them together.
once he is gone? The fear of dispersal is •
the fear that what has been good in this
life will dissolve with the death of
Socrates.
The greatest fear expressed by Socrates
is not what the future will bring for his
soul in Hades, but what will happen to the
Socratic ideas on earth.
His greatest
wor,ry is that the threat of death will
keep men from proper action, wil 1 put
power in the hands of tyrants.
He must
show his followers that death does not
punish right action but rewards it.
He
must show them that the peril of death
ought never to determine their actions.
Simrnias and Cebes and the other heirs will
decide the immortality of Socrates' legacy
on ·this earth, and so it is they who must
be persuaded not to fear death.
Even if the arguments in this dialogue
do not convince us that the soul is
immortal, if we remain uncertain that good
deeds will be rewarded in the after-life,·

we at least know that no man has ever
faced death as serenely, as nobly and as
generously as Socrates. He does not cling
to life but surrenders it before sunset.
If at the beginning we thought that the
daybreak meeting foretold an Aristotelian
tragedy, a drama that encompasses a full
day, we are now assured that the tragedy
which might have come to pass did not.
As Socrates prepares to drink the
poison, he calmly asks if he may pour a
libation to a deity from the cup that will
bring his death.
And this brave man who
must die on the charge of impiety is
forbidden by the state which thus accused
him to pay one last tribute to the gods.
He prays, nevertheless, for a fortunate
departure and drinks the hemlock.
His
friends cannot control themselves and
weep, not for him, but for themselves, and
Phaedo, in his distress, wraps his face in
his cloak.
We cannot know the destiny of the soul
of Socrates, but by following the threads
of
the myths,
Plato
invites
us
to
speculate on Socrates' fate.
In the first myth, Theseus, by slaying
the minotaur, saved himself as well a• the
fourteen youths.
If the analogy between
the two stories holds, then this dialogue
which frees Socrates' friends from their
fear of death must also save Socrates.
How else but in preserving his tradition
does conquering the fear of death save
Socrates?
Theseus left Athens bearing black sails
and, having promised his father that if he
were victorious, he would return with
white sails. When he returned, though, he
forgot to change the sails, and so was
thought
to have
been
slain by
the
minotaur.
Thus Theseus, believed by all
to be dead, returned home in victory. And
Socrates?
Immediately before Socrates
speaks his last words, he uncovers his
face which had been covered.
In the
Phaedrus Socrates covers his head when he
speaks words that are not his own (237 a
4) and then uncovers it when he regains
his true identity (243 b 6).
In the
Phaedo
Socrates' face is covered while
the attendant who gave him the poison

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�pinches his feet and legs to test for
numbness.
The attendant tells Socrates'
friends that their teacher is growing cold
and rigid, yet the man who is becoming
numb has his face covered, is not the real
Socrates.
The true Socrates is the man
who replies to Crito's question about how
to bury him by saying,
"However you
please, if you can catch me and I do not
get away from you." ( 115 c 4)
The true
Socrates is the man whose final words are1
"Crito, we owe a cock to Aesculapius. Pay
it and do not neglect it." (118 a 8) The
true Socrates is not growing numb but is
grateful for having been healed.
Crito asks Socrates what they can do to
serve him, and Socrates tells him:

Horner, Iliad, trans. by R. Lattimore,
(Chicago: University of
Chicago Press, 1951)

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Richard Miller

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1957)
Klein, Jacob, A Commentary on Plato's
Meno, (Chapel Hill:
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Press, 1965)

What I always say, Crito, nothing
new. If you take care of yourselves you will serve me and mine
and yourselves ... if you neglect
yourselves and are not willing to
live following step by step, as it
were, in the path marked out by our
present and past discussions,
you will accomplish nothing.

Otto, W.F., The Homeric Gods, (Boston:
Beacon Press, 1954)
Plato, Apology, trans. by H. N. Fowler,
(Cambridge, Mass.: Harvard
University Press, 1914)
Epistles, trans. by Rev. R.G.
Bury, (Cambridge, Mass.:
Harvard University Press,
1929)

(115 b 3)

And what will Socrates have accomplished?
Theseus could not have slain the minotaur
without Ariadne's thread,
as Heracles
could not have destroyed the Hydra without
Iolaus' aid.
Can the Socratic tradition
continue if Phaedo does not tell his
account to Echecrates?
The spirits of
Theseus and Heracles die when we stop .
telling their stories.
What will ensure
the immortality of the spirit of Socrates?

Meno, trans. by W.K.C. Guthrie in
Plato: The Collected
Dialogues-edited by E.
Hamilton and H. Cairns,
(Princeton: Princeton
University Press, 1961)
Plato, Phaedo, trans. by H.N. Fowler,
(Cambridge, Mass.: Harvard
University Press, 1914)

BIBLIOGRAPHY

Phaedrus, trans. by H.N. Fowler,
(Cambridge, Mass.: Harvard
University Press, 1914)

Anthon, C., Classical Dictionary, (New
York: Harper and Brothers
Publishers, 1854)

Republic, trans. by A. Bloom, (New
York: Basic Books, Inc.,
1968)

Aristotle, De Poetica, trans. by I.
Bywater in The Basic Works
of Aristotle
edited by R. McKean, (New
York: Random House, 1941)

Sophist, trans. by F.M. Cornford
in Plato: The Collected
Dialogues

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Kant's Foundation of the Metaphysics of
Morals is "nothing rnorethan the search
for and establishment of the supreme
principle of morality (392) ." This search
ends with the categorical imperative,
which presents the reader with a rule for
moral behavior and an obligation to follow
this rule.
Before it is possible to
embrace the categorical imperative as the
solution to man's moral confusion, it is
necessary to understand the course of
Kant's journey.
Is he justified in his
final assertion that "the practical use of
reason with respect to freedom leads to an
absolute necessity, but to the necessity
only of laws of actions of a rational
being as such (463)"? That is, does the
concept of a free will, properly understood, inevitably lead to the supreme
principle of morality? I will attempt to
answer this question by focusing on Kant's
argument in the final section of the
Foundation.
The first step in Kant's argument to
estab.lish the necessity of the concept of
free will is seeing the will as a cause in
rational beings.
The will may be described as free because "it can be
effective independently of foreign causes
determining it (446)."
That is only to
say that the will is not deterrnin'ed by the
laws
of
natural
necessity,
such
as
gravity.
For example, whereas natural
necessity governs the fall of the rock
from my hand, it does not govern my
decision to allow the rock to fall. This
decision was prompted by my will;
it was
caused by my will.
Once the will is seen as a cause,
Kant's argument continues, it must be seen
as governed by some law.
This follows
because the concept of cause includes laws

which establish an effect. This is clear
if we return to our example with the rock.
In order for something to fall (effect) ,
it
must
be
dropped
(cause);
this
relationship
of
cause
to
effect
is
governed by a universal law (gravity).
Thus, to recognize the free will as a
cause implies that it is "a causality
according to immutable laws, but of a
peculiar kind (446) ." Therefore, the will
must be governed by a law.
But if this
law were imposed from outside the will, it
would be indistinguishable from natural
necessity. And, as we have seen, the will
is understood to be a cause outside the
realm of natural necessity.
It follows
then that the will must be governed by an
internally imposed law.
But Kant has
previously shown that a will which governs
itself, which is at once legislator and
legislated, will act in accordance with
the principle of universalizing maxims.
From this we may conclude that "a free
will and a will under moral laws are
identical (447) ." Thus, once the will is
seen as a
cause,
one
is apparently
necessarily
led
to
the
categorical
imperative,
i.e.
the
compulsion
to
universalize personal moral maxims.
But, isn't there a problem in Kant's
reasoning here? By treating the will as
an appearance, by reasoning about the will
as if the categories applied to it, Kant
seems to have broken a rule in his own
system. Kant states about man that:
As regards whatever there may
be in him of pure activity
(whatever comes into consciousness, not through affection of
the senses, but immediately)
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�belonging to the intellectual
world, of which, however he
knows nothing further (451) •

as being free.
It only means that, to be
so viewed, it must be looked at in a
special way.
Thus, Kant can only answer
the question by saying that the actions of
rational beings presuppose a free will.
That is, a rational being regards his will
as free, merely because it is his will.
If a rational being did not Consider
itself as being outside the laws of
natural
necessity,
then
all
of
its
actions, i.e. all of its thoughts leading
to actions, would be determined by some
exterior power. Clearly, man, as rational
being, does not view his thoughts as being
determined by some law akin to gravity.
Thus, all rational beings presuppose a
free will.
This is not to say that the
will is free,
but only that it is
considered as such. We designate the will
as free because we cannot think of it in
any other way.
So far so good, but how does the
imputation of the free will as cause lead
to "inunutable laws"?
To answer this
question, we must turn to the second
section. Kant states that:

Whatever comes into consciousness through
the senses is an appearance of a thing.
The rock falls:
this effect is part of
the world of sense and is governed by the
law of natural necessity, the law of the
world of appearances. On the other hand,
reasoning
comes
into
consciousness
spontaneously, without any prompting of
the senses.
Man cannot speak accurately
about this world, for it is the world
behind the appearances, the land of the
mysterious
thing-in-itself.
This
statement about man's nature appears to
disrupt Kant' s previous argument because
of the relationship between reason and the
will.
If the will is part of the
intelligible world, then man cannot speak
about it and certainly cannot reason about
it as if it were an appearance.
Kant
states that "since reason is required in
order to derive actions from laws, the
will is nothing but practical reason
(412)."
It follows from this that the
will
resides
with
reason
in
the
intelligible world, the world of which man
"knows nothing." The will is an aspect of
reason; it is not an appearance.
Thus,
carrying the empirical implications of the
word "cause" into the intelligible world,
thereby allowing for the subjection of the
will to an "inunutable law," seems to
contradict
Kant's
previous
statements
about the intelligible world. Is this the
case?
Has
Kant
actually
become
overwhelmed by the very same inclinations
that he set about controlling in the
Critique?
Upon reflection, it is clear that Kant
has made no such error. He is saying that
if the will may be seen as free, then
morality follows. The problem with saying
this lies exactly with the objection
raised above; how can the will be seen as
free when it is not in the sensible world
and therefore cannot be described as
having any properties?
Clearly, in the
strictest sense, it cannot. However, this
does not mean that the will is not viewed

Man and, in general every
rational being, exists as an
end in himself and not merely
as a means to be arbitrarily
used by this or that will (428).
Man always serves as the end for his own
actions.
Remove the man and the desire
for the ice cream is removed;
however
remove the desire and the man remains.
The ice cream is a means for satisfying
the man. Man treats all objects in this
way, as a means for accomplishing his own
ends.
On the other hand, rational
beings are designated "persons"
because their nature indicates
that they are ends in themselves,
i.e., things which may not be
used merely as means (428) .
Thus man qua rational being recognizes all
other men qua rational beings as ends not
means. This leads to an imperative which

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governs man' s actions toward man,
are effected by the will:

same order as gravity, yet it is one that
you choose to submit yourself to.
Once
you have so chosen, the law takes on the
force
of
natural
necessity
in
the
intelligible world;
namely, you have no
more choice of doing what is commanded by
the categorical imperative than a rock has
of falling;.
Again, what makes a man
choose to do this?
Kant says flat out that "an explanation
of how and why the universality of the
maxim
as
law
(and
hence
morality)
interests us is completely impossible for
us men (461)."
In short, Kant cannot
explicitly state an incentive for acting
this way as opposed to any other. To do
so would place an incentive in the will's
path which, as Kant says in the beginni'ng
of the treatise, debases any action. That
is, the will is considered good when it
acts without regard to the consequences of
the action;
the man who does the right
thing without expecting a reward or in
spite of the punishment that will follow
is most highly praised. Nonetheless, ~t
hazards a suggestion for complying to this
moral system:

which

Act so that you treat
humanity, whether in your
own person or in that of
another always as an end,
and never as a means
only (429).
From this point, the step to the
categorical imperative is relatively easy.
As we have seen, the imperative stated
above falls out of considering man only as
a rational being.
Man, however, has, if
you will, a dual nature:
rational and
empirical.
The
imperative
becomes
categorical when applied to the world of
sense.
That is,
in the intelligible
world, all my actions would naturally
accord with the imperative;
there is no
reason for my actions to be otherwise,
since man considered as rational acts in
accordance with his reason. However, man
lives in the world of sense, thus the
imperative can only express how things
should or ought to happen, not necessarily
how they will happen.
In the world of
sense,
natural
necessity governs how
things will happen.
Nonetheless, the
imperative is still applicable because it
rules over a different domain than the law
of_ natural necessity.
I cannot will the
rock not to fall once I have released it.
I can will myself not to drop the rock on
my neighbor's head. Thus, the law of the
intelligible world does not conflict with
the law of natural necessity.
Thus, the
imperative must still be in effect when
man is considered in the empiric~! world,
for
it
does
not
conflict with the
activities of the empirical world.
This is Kant's argument. He recognizes
the problems with it.
Namely, what on
earth would compel someone to follow the
categorical imperative? What, in effect,
makes
it
binding?
Granting
the
questionable step from the intelligible
world to the sensible world, which allows
for the governing of the will, as cause,
by a law, one comes up with a peculiar law
indeed. It is supposed to be a law of the

Through the glorious ideal
of a universal realm of endsin-themselves (rational beings)
a lively interest in the moral
law can be awakened in us. To
that realm we can belong as
members only when we carefully
conduct ourselves according to
maxims of freedom as if they
were laws of nature (462-463).
c

Obviously, this reason merely explains why
the people who do ascribe to this code of
conduct do ascribe to it;
it is not a
compelling argument for those outside the
"faith," who have no interest in acting to
attain such a kingdom.
In light of the fact that there can be
no stated incentive for adopting the
categorical
imperative,
one may well
wonder at the advantage of adopting Kant's
moral system over any other. In trying to
deal
sensibly
with
the
problems
of
metaphysics, it seems that Kant has ended

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�where
religion
begins:
unfathomable
-faith. Just as one is never able to state
clearly why one has faith in a certain
religion, the same problem afflicts Kant's
system.
One believes because one has
chosen to do so. This is the mystery that

Kant can never address, as he is well
aware;
he can only outline what one
believes in, not why. Thus, while one may
make sense of Kant' s argument, one need
not be led to embrace its doctrine.

Egg, Beat Her
John Keith

The irrelevant hen - men will die in a glove
Loving like ducks from the earth above.
Shooting Mr. Larry O. what self defeat,
In a glad bag •.. you know, a ministry.
Why! Why! What Why What
Love's candied apples devoid of a hut.
Black toothbrush seemingly lost,
My gash hung up, upside down on a cross.

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Ho Eni Autos En Heauto
Joe DeGrazia

There follows an attempt at supplementing Plato's assertion in ·Timaeus (35a-40d)
that the motions of mind can be fruitfully compared to the motions of those gods who
reveal themselves to us, as they will, in the planets. Both can be seen as moving one
way but must be understood as a forced unity of contrary motions.
This contrariness makes appearance contradict reality, as Plato asserts at 39a,·
except in the period of the whole, measured by a perfect number, when the two motions
come around to each other (39).
Once upon a time, a casual observer
at sunset (an acolyte assisting day's end
rituals to Apollo) glanced up as he was
lugging all those lustral bowls, and was
struck by the new moon in its twilight
splendor.
Thereafter, he began to watch
her each dusk at odd moments: crescent
Artemis was at first close by her brother
as he finished his daily course; but each
day Apollo pulled away a bit from the·
moon--call it Artemis' chariot, which set
later and later while slowly waxing round.
It was as if Artemis were steadily falling
behind the far-darter (flagging as her
horns
blunted) ,
on
some
east-west
hippodrome course. After what was to come
to be called a "moon's" time, honoring the
chaste huntress and midwife, our attendant·
saw Apollo lap his sister's waning team.
What is more, this watching Artemis grow
and shrink was eventually to show our
lackadaisical youth the whole sta~ry sky.
From day to month, as he idly looked
up, after sprinkling barley at altarside.
twilight, this catechumen began also to
notice two very special stars.
At one
time or another, or perhaps even together,
they revealed themselves to him dropping
behind the sun as the moon had, though not
so quickly, yet along the same broad lane
in the sun-wards southern sky. That would
be
luscious
Aphrodite,
then,
next
brightest after Artemis, and next
most
•conspicuously mutable; she came to trail

Leta's son by about an eighth of a lap and
then kept pace. And the other star would
be
mercurial
winking
Hermes,
Zeus'
deceitful messenger,
slacking off the
sun's pace at most only a few lengths.
Our apprentice proceeded to watch, no
longer bored, but in sheer amazement, as
both of those gods got their second wind,
then went and caught up to the sun again.
Artemis would never keep pace try as she
may , he knew, but · he re we re Aphrodite and
Hermes actually giving Apollo a run for
his money.
Our hero's name was Mimas. After he
began intently following these wheeling
gods into the dusk, he happened also to be
detailed to daybreak duty,
for
some
liturgical exigency or- other.
As
a
consequence, he had not much sooner seen
the chariots of Hermes and Aphrodite
overhaul Apollo from behind (after lagging
for a while at nightfall), than he was
astonished to spot them again, coming off
the
turn
into
the
dawn
sky,
yes,
outsprinting the sun's fiery steeds, and
gaining on them daily--though, then again,
only by just so much and for so long,
after which Apollo rather slowly pulled·
into the lead again. Time and again this
would happen.
It was a three-way dead-heat Mimas
was following--wi th chaste Artemis sadly
·mismatched, steadily losing ground, and
lapped by each of the leaders every thirty
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�Sundays, the highest deity's decade-ish
Dial, and the generation-long Saturnalia.
Odds were taken on exactly how long it·
would take for all the gods to return to
the same position they had held at any one
given time; but to whose progeny could one
entrust the ancestral kitty for such a
mullimillenial sweepstakes?
The priests of Apollo regarded the
whole business as profoundly blasphemous.
But Mimas was now wealthy enough to style
himself a visionary. What a world it was,
too, that he envisioned--where all divine
entities incline the s·ame way! He had not
yet been admitted to the inner-sanctum
mysteries, of course; so he renounced 'his
vows and meandered off to the city,
intending to use his knowledge of the
divinities to make book in the bigtime.
This heavenly horse-racing through the
night sky was something he knew he could
lay safe odds on:
it was a race that
always would end up just as it started,
you
just
played
the
percentages
in
between.
One night at that race track Mimas
chanced to fall in with golden-thighed
Pythagoras, who was looking to stake or
bankroll his own way to beat the house.
Cagily, they began comparing notes, always
out for a better tip.

or so courses, bringing up the rear.
Still, each of the "moons" could be used
to determine a leg of the race.
Between
her waning horns would be the finish line.
Mimas took his fellow acolytes to the
cleaners, betting on the monthly lucifer.
His apprenticeship and
initiation
seemed
to
take
ages
and
ages
till
ordination. The skies had distracted him,
however, from the sole worship of golden
Apollo into the gilded edges of gambling.
During what seemed eons of altar-side
sacrificial
meniality
("slaying
and
flaying" as he called it) then holding
spits and wreathing wine into the feasting
night's nobility, Mimas began to recognize
more
gods
as
they
played
at
their
off-Olympus track.
He realized that some
of them were actually faster then the sun,
and not just in spurts either; over time,
in fact they would lap Apollo running
away.
The distant bowman seemed not all
that swift, then, in the long run; not as
precipitous as red-g'laring Ares, who would
overtake the sun once every twenty odd
times that Apollo sped past Artemis; not
as fleet as golden Zeus, who would pass
the sun god once almost every twelve of
those so-called virginal "months"; nm: as
quick as cool-glowing Kronos (edging even
zeusl) who would lap Apollo yet more often
than that even.
Then came the wonder·of wonders! The
very backdrop of stars, which our aging
novitiate had heretofore counted as fellow
spectators at this grand chariot race,
those same stars, always keeping pace with
one another racing as a single body
through myriad
lanes
of heaven,
yet
tilting
their
course
to
the
god's
hippodrome,
those
very
stars
were
absolutely the fastest of all! Mimas soon
began to use them to mark off legs of the
race.
Thus, each time all the stars
passed Artemis would thereafter be called
a month; they would then proceed to lap
Apollo in what we would come to call the
Annual Ring, Ares in about two of those,
Zeus in twelve or so, and Kronos in some
twenty-nine.
Or we
could give
each
separate lapping its own race's name: The.
Arena, say, which took about a month of

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"There's no way the gods move
all the same way! That's
absurd! Each has two different
motions in opposite
directions."
"What? you mean they go forward
and backward at the same time?"
"The gods can do anything they
want, can't they?
"But that's not even
imaginable!"
"Think of it this way. The
stars move from east to west
daily, right? The planets want
to move from west to east,
however; but they find it
difficult to make any headway,
shouldering like seagulls into
a strong headwind."
"That's elegant. But my way is

P.

M.

P.

so much simpler."
"Nobody ever said the gods were
simple, friend--though at times
even I have found that notion
alluring. But look at it this
way. Take your view of things:
You say Ares, Zeus, and Kronos
all lap the sun regularly, OK?
But have you ever noticed
anything peculiar about their
behavior?"
"Well, they all seem to run the
same kind of race. I mean,
tactically. Whenever each one
has rounded the turn into a
position less than half a
course away from lapping Apollo
(you know, just about when you
see each rising as the sun
sets?) each will sprint a bit
first, and then let his horses
blow for a while, before easing
into the stretch of this leg of
the race and catching up with
Apollo again."
"That's not bad for a guess.
At least you noticed one
anomaly. What you mean,
though, is that they are then
stationary and regressing at
opposition."
"Stationary my eye! And how
can you say the gods regress?"
"You have to get that flighty
race-track image out of your
head. That's just poetic
license. Your true scientist
only uses such talk to make
book with. The truth is quite
the opposite. What you call.
the fastest god is really the
slowest. You've got it
backwards."
"It works just fine by me. You
name the leg, I'll pick the
winner. And also it's what I
see happen."
"That's a mere hayseed knack
you've got worked up for
yourself. But what you haven't
got is the vaguest notion of
divine essence. Gods wouldn't

M.

P.

M.
P.

M.

P.

M.

P.

M.

P.

M.

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be caught dead easing up on
their reins to breathe their
steeds. Who ever heard of
divine horses wind-broke with
heaves?"
"Why do they slow down and
afterwards speed up again,
then?"
"They don't--that's the point.
It is just plain unthinkable
that they should •
"Didn't I 'think' of it?"
"You can't have been,
strictly-speaking, thinking
when you came up with that
notion. You seemed to
understand that divine motion
was regular--as far as concerns
what you called 'lapping' at
least. But you didn't delve
deeply enough, much less
rigorously at all. Divine
motion must be intelligible,
thoroughly."
"Hey, wait just a minute!
Didn't you just say the gods
can do anything they want?"
"Would the gods want to be
deviants? truants? Would the
gods want to be untrue to
themselves even just for aft
instant?"
"Zeus took a shine to Ganymede,
didn't he? And he's been
bulls, eagles, swans, money
-all sorts of things- when he's
on the make. That sounds like
'being untrue' in some sense,
no? to Hera anyway."
"That's hokum, it's old hat,
corn, a thing of the past.
That's ikonizing the gods into
the shapes of their
appearances."
"That's the way they reveal
themselves!"
"No! The truth is quite
otherwise. Just the opposite
of what you believe you think."
"Now I only 'believe' I think!"
"It's not knowledge you're
dealing with, so it's not

�thinking you're doing about
it. That kind of stuff is all
for the birds. You can't even
begin to explain how regular
lappings can have irregular
stretch~s."

M.

"So what? At least I don't
boss the gods around."
P.
"All you do is ascribe a rag
tag irregularity to them. And
it makes all the difference in
the world. You're just
conjecturing from the way
things strike you, believing
whatever makes sense, mere
opinionated sensation. You
can't even know what you're
talking about, when you act
like that. What you think
about must, absolutely must,
revolve around itself as your
mind does. Divine motion must
be uniformly circular and even,
like thought. And knowledge is
dimensionless revolution."
M.
"Yeah? Well don't bet on it:
my mind wanders, and so do my
gods. A fig for your circular.
thinking." ·
At those words , Pythagoras sighed
and turned away. Our prodigal acolyte was
bursting with so much zeal, however, that
he turned himself in no time flat into a
denizen of the air, the mocking bird, and
promptly fluttered off.
Pythagoras chose
to ignore what may_ have been construed to
be an omen:
after all, his were the ways
of science. It was merely poetic justice,
he thought, that such a transformation

should take place:
such is the lot· of those who take things at face value.
There is nothing auspicious in their
flightiness.
Thus it is , however, that time out
of mind Mimas has come to haunt what would
come to be known as the Academy.
From
that night o~ he could always be heard
perched among the light-mottled sycamores
regularly
enchanting
the
stars
with
litanies ornithological, his trove of bird
call lore.
There must be a moral here somewhere.
One might argue that· Mimas'. opinions were
true, but the figures he backed them with
were
not
mathematical--call
them
statistical,
perhaps,
rather
than
geometric figures. The figure of heaven's
racetrack remains moot.
What we can
"know" of it shows that Mimas did "indeed"
put the cart before the horse, though--for
if the gods are racing, as we "know" it,
it's in the other direction, and all
positions are reversed.
Artemis,
the
last, will be first, moving eastwards
against
the
onrushing
µniverse,
progressing about an outstreched arm's
hand span a day.
Hermes and Aphrodite ,
jockeying for second place, manage to move
a handspan or so against the framing
stars, in the time it takes Artemis to lap
them. Ares is twice that slow, Zeus some
twelve times slower, and aged Kronos the
first becomes last, almost three times as
slow as Zeus.
Sic transit gloria coeli,
and with it the notions of mind.
But
maybe the change did them good.
You
figure it out.

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The Mirror Held Up to Nature:
A Study of Imitation in Don Quixote
George Iannacone

Gaul can do battle with giants and wicked
enchanters, although no such are now found
in the world.
The men of the past can
appear stronger and more courageous than
ourselves, for they are extraordinary as
the world they inhabit.
The ingenious gentleman of La Mancha,
_however, did not live in the distant past,
·nor in some far away land. He is forever
a contemporary of his readers, inhabiting
the
same ordinary wo-rld: ·· To •· Fruly
understand the contemporary sense in·which
Don Quixote is written, we might bear in
mind an analogy between the world of
chivalfY and our own romanticized "wild
west".
Quixote would then be analogous
to an imitator of gun-slinging heroes in,
perhaps, modern day Kansas, mistaking fast
food hamburger stands for bawdy saloons.
Unlike
the
books
of
chivalry,
Don
Quixote's book is not written according to
the poetical system of things. All which
happens in this book is possible in our
world as well.
As the story opens, its hero is a
nameless old gentleman who has spent much
of his life reading fantastical books.
During these years the distinction between
the poetical world of knight errantry and
his own rather uneventful existence became
blurred until he slipped into a world of
dreams in which he too slew giants and
matched wits with malicious dwarves. The
old man gave himself the name, Don Quixote
de la Mancha, and assumed the identity of
· a noble knight.
The
real world of
experience was transformed into the world
of his poetic imaginings as Don Quixote
began to live his fiction.
The suggestion of a cowboy riding
past hamburger stands brings to mind a
comic picture.
Such was the p~cture

"Poets have formed what they
call the poetical system of things
which, though it be believed neither
by themselves nor their readers, may
be esteemed a sufficient foundation
for any fiction."
Hume: Treatise on Human Nature
The
poetical
system
of
things,
according to Hume, is one in which we
understand by 'Venus' or 'Mercury not a
living entity, whom we find in the world
of our experience, but a fictional being,
whose existence is granted in a realm to
which we do not belong. This other realm
takes its name from the Greek, poiesis,
the
act
of
making,
which Aristotle
describes in his Poetics as a process of
imitation, mimnesis.
Poetical imitation
describes not what has happened but what
may happen.
A poet's characters must
remain consistent, and his plot must
unfold
according
to
the
laws
of
probability and necessity.
Historical
imitation, in contrast, relates events as
they actually transpired.
In a history,
the criterion of truth is experience, a
criterion from which poetry, by its very
name, has been freed.
A poet may include
gods or monsters in his play beca~se his
art requires us only to pretend belief.
He int reduces this pretended belief, as
Hume says, be separating the poetical
system of things, in which his story lies,
from the world of our experience.
To achieve the separation of the
poetical and historical worlds, poets
often remove their stories in time or
place from their audience.
The tales of
knights-errant are set in the distant
past, so that the deeds of their heroes
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presented to the first readers of Don
Quixote.
The book begins as pute comedy
and Quixote is its clown.
This comedy
originates in the disconnection between
the hero and his world.
Don Quixote
believes the poetical system of things to
be literally true, but his contemporary
setting
makes
that
belief
appear
ridiculous.
Quixote's madness consists in his
attempt to imitate the heroes of chivalry.
During his first and second sallies he
demonstrates a thorough knowledge of the
rules of knight errantry. These rules can
be sUlllllled up in five general formulas:

1. A knight errant must have a lady
love to whose name he dedicates the
honors he wins in battle. This rule
is _t~e most important, for "A kni1:11!t
·without a lady ~ove is like a body
·without a soul."

Quixote _~ust remake the world of his own
· experience for his actions to be real
since he is his own hero and the world is
his Stage.
His story is presented to us by a
narrator
who
shows
that
Quixote's
transformation of the world is only
internal;
Spain
remains
untransformed
despite
him.
Were
Quixote
his
own
chronicler, however, we would see Spain
through his own poetic eyes.
Rocinante
would be a noble steed, La Mancha a rich
land of gold and pageantry. Instead it is
a dusty plain and on it rides a comic fool
who dreams a better world.
Quixote's comic appearance results
from the fact that he does not relate his
1 own adventures.
Thus, the comedy o:t: Don
1Quixote rests on_ a problem of authorship.
-~e___ ~s portrayed as a bumbling old fool who
thinks himself a noble knight.
But "The
cleverest character in a comedy is the
clown," as Don Quixote says, "since he who
mqkes hi,self out to be a simpleton cannot
be one."
Quixote knows that in the eyes
of others he must appear comic, but his
actions have a nobility which transcends
this apparent comedy.
This nobility he
demonstrates in his penance in the Sierra
Morena.
Don Quixote undertakes his penance to
win renown and to prove himself "the most
complet§ and absolute knight errant in the
world."
He plans to imitate the penance
of Don Amadis of Gaul, the greatest knight
in chivalry. Quixote compares himself to
a painter who studies the best originals
to achieve perfection in his art. Sancho
points out, however, that this knight had
reasons to suffer, whereas Quixqte has
none.
In
Quixote's
reply
to
this
objection can be seen the true nobility of
his calling and a knightliness which
transcends that of his model:
"That," said Don Quixote," is
the point of the thing, that is the
beautiful part of it.
What thanks
does a knight errant deserve for
going mad when he has good cause?
The thing is to go out of my head
without any occasion for it, thus
letting my lady see,i! I do this for

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opportunities that may and do make
of us famous knigJits as well as
better Christians." -

5. The adventures of a worthy knight
errant are written up in books to
serve as an example of virtue.

4. A knight can be assured of final
success, in which he wins his lady's
hand and perhaps a kingdom:
"As a reward for his valor and
the might of his arm, the poor
fellow could already see himself
crowned Emperor5 of Trebizond at the
very least ••.. "
He then bestows the governorship of
an island on his squire, in return
for his services.

These formulas for knight errantry
are empirical laws, derived from the only
source of such knowledge, the histories of
knights errant.
For this reason, the
fifth rule, with which this paper is
chiefly concerned, is as important for a
true knight errant as any of the others.
When Don Quixote pronounces himself a
knight errant, his actions and his world
conform to these rules.
Ordinary things
become poetically transformed into the
stuff of Don Quixote's worlg.
A skinny
old nag becomes Rocinante,
the horse
before all other horses.
Everything met
with by Don Quixote, he names anew, except
his squire, who is content to be Sancho
Panza until the day he dies.
The power of naming is a poet's
power, not a knight's.
So too is the
power to turn ordinary circumstances into
knightly adventures. When Quixote remakes
the world, he is acting as a poet and thus
is the author of his own tale.
The hero
decides each of his adventures as they
take place, thus actually making his own
story.
Quixote's imitation of knight
errantry
differs
from
that
of
a
conventional poet in that he is the hero
of his own story, a unique and original
imitato.r.
A writer can make the actions
of his hero appear realistic by setting
him in a world where they are pos~ible.

2. In a knight errant' s world live
monsters, enchanters, bandits, and
renegade knights.
The enchanters
are capable of casting spells over
whole
lands and aid or oppose
knights as they will. In this world
a knight errant can expect to find
numerous adventures in which to
prove himself and win renown.
3. A knight errant "would right
every manner of wrong,
placing
himself
in
sifuations
of
the
greatest peril."
In addition to
the
qualities
of
courage
and
justice, a knight embodies all the
Christian virtues:
" In confronting giants, it is
the sin of pride which we slay, even
as we combat envy with generosity
and goodness of heart; anger with
equanimity
and a
calin bearing;
gluttony and overfondness for sleep,
by eating little when we do eat, and
by keeping long vigils; lust and
lewdness with the loyality to those
whom we have made the mistress of
our affections; and sloth by going
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her in t~ dry, what I would do in
the wet."
This is a true gem of Quixotic
wisdom. Don Quixote's penance involves a
greater suffering than that of any knight
found in a book. Quixote's suffering for
his lady is compounded with his suffering
for an occasion to demonstrate his love.
For his lady, Quixote endures not only a
conventional
penance
but
the
comedy
occasioned by his lack of an apparent
cause for his actions.
All Quixote's actions now appear in a
new light. They are not justified by any
cause
that
can
be
found
in
his
circumstances.
Quixote acts as he does
· because
such
is
the way
of knight
·errantry. He who does a great act simply
for the nobility of its purpose is a
.greater knight than the-Dne---Who is allowed
· that act by circumstance.
Circumstance
allows
Quixote
few
opportunities to demonstrate his bravery;
indeed, circumstances are his greatest
adversary.
His courage in the face of
such an enemy, however, is dauntless. Don
Amadis of Gaul must be brave in the face
of attacking lions, but Don Quixote de la
Mancha must contend with lions who refuse
to come out of their cage.
This is
Quixotic courage, the courage of a man who
retains his dignity despite the mockery
made of him by the world.
'
From his penance onward, : Quixote's
face acquires a gravity and nobility it
did not have before.
His lordly mien
shines above the comic spectacle of the
captive brought home in a cage.
We see
that it is the world that has misunderstood Quixote, not Quixote the world.
Henceforth, when we laugh at his comic
exploits, we realize that this comedy
itself is testament to Don Quixote's noble
suffering and courage.
As I hope I have shown, Quixotic
suffering and courage are greater than
those of any of his models.
Quixote
fights
his
battles
with
his
own
circumstances.
He reasons that these
circumstances are the work of some evil
enchanter who renders the world ordinary.
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�capture of Quixote is not his defeat, for
it leaves his faith in his own powers of
poetic imitation intact.
Held prisoner in his own village, Don
Quixote hears the news that his exploits
have been recorded and published.
This
news does not surprise him, for the deeds
of a great knight errant are essentially
imitable (rule 5). All worthy knights are
written
up
in
histories,
for,
by
definition, their actions are spudaiai:
"If it were true that such a
history - existed,
being
about
a
knight errant, then it must be
eloquent and
lofty in tone,
a
splendid and distinguished piece of
work
a~i
veracious
in
its
details."
In reality, Book I of Quixote's
history has been anything but lofty in
tone.
For the most part the knight has
been port rayed as quite ridiculous.
In
his own eyes, however, his adventures are
very serious and he is to be admired for
his quixotic courage.
Although he is not surprised that he
is imitable in writing, Quixote wonders
how his histories have been so rapidly
reported and compiled.
The simultaneity
of Quixote's life and his book introduces
a fictional problem:
If author and hero
inhabit the same world, how is it that
they never meet? Quixote offers the only
plausible solution: the book is the work
of an enchanter.
If this is so, then
Quixote indeed inhabits the poetical realm
of knight errantry, since the second rule
has been proven true.
Therefore, the
giants Quixote did battle with really were
giants and were made into windmills by
enchantment.
The author has portrayed
these giants as if they truly were
windmills.
He has thus deceived us into
believing that the world is ordinary and
that Quixote is a fool for thinking
otherwise. Therefore, he is the same evil
enchanter who renders Quixote's world
ordinary: the knight's mortal enemy.
Quixote
is
especially
anxious,
because his enchanter is a Moor, Cid
Hamete Benengali "and from the Moors y~y
could never hope for any word of truth."

The purpose of his calling, according
to Quixote, is "to serve as a pattern and
example to future ages wherein knights
errant may see what steps they should
follow
if
they would climb
to
t£2
honorable summit and pinnacle of arms."
Only for a Moor would Quixote's Christian
calling of knight errantry be a subject
for ridicule.
This is the reason for
Cervantes'
choice of Benengali as an
intermediate
author
for
Don
Quixote.
Cervantes himself is an author Quixote has
read (see Book I, Ch. VI) and therefore
cannot be an enemy to the knight.
His
book, Galatea may well have contribute~ to
Quixote's ideas of proper imitation.
In proper imitation, according to
Quixote, the author remains true to the
characters of those portrayed. He should
omit details which tend to discredit the
hero, as did Virgil in his Aeneid, for, as
Quixote tell us, "Aeneas was not so pioy~
as Virgil would have us believe."
Cervantes shows us that he agrees with
Quixote's ideas in his introduction to Ch.
v, Book II. He considers the chapter
apocryphal because it introduces Sancho
speaking in ·a style untrue to his rustic
character.
Benengali,
on
the
other
hand,
entreats the readers at the beginning of
Ch. VIII:
"Blessed
be
Allah
the
mighty .•. and declares that he utters
these blessing on finding that he
has got Don Quixote and Sancho back
into the field and that the readers
of his delightful history may reckon
that from this point the exploits
and humor of the knight and his
squire begin.
He begs them to
forget.the past knight errantries of
the Ingenious Gentleman, and fix
their eyes on those which are to
come and are now beginning on the
road to Tobosa, just as the ot£~rs
began on the plain of Montiel."
He considers Quixote's discussion of
proper imitation of little interest to the
readers. The first seven chapters of this
story are of great importance, however,
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his cfiaracter is extraordinary~ he is the
greatest knight errant in all the world.
Further, since the author is an enchanter,
the world Quixote lives in is a made
world, a product of poetic art.
If
Quixote
could
defeat
this
Moorish
enchanter, his true knightly character
would shine forth.
To defeat Benengali,
Quixote needs ' the aid of a friendly
enchanter, one who agrees with his theory
of imitation. The problem of authorship,·
which binds the book in comic satire, can
be solved only by recourse to a higher
author.
Even this author, however, must
1
be left behind as Quixote descends into •
:the cave of Montesinos.
Quixote descends alone into this cave
and ._~i~ ._ !s the sole account of what took
. place there.
This adventure is -of- Quixote's own authorship and so befits the
noble
knight.
It
is
Quixote's
own
imitation of the wandering hero who
descends into Hell to receive a vision of
his great task. Unlike Aeneas who may be
considered the model hero of this type,
Quixote ascends from the underworld only
to have his great vision disbelieved.
Benengali
considers
this
adventure
apocryphal
because
it
exceeds
all
reasonable bounds. He agrees with Sancho,
however, that the knight would not lie
about such things and leaves the truth of
the matter to the
judgement of the
readers.
This adventure is the great secret of
Don Quixote.
His own squire does not
believe it took place:
"For it's my opinion, begging
your warship's pardon, that it was
all fraud and ficti?15', or at least
that you dreamt it."
In his descent into the cave, Quixote
leaves behind the world of our experience
and goes where our eyes cannot follow.
The adventure he relates is one with those
of romantic chivalry, a world found only
in books.
All found there are poetic
personages who have been imprisoned in
this underworld by evil enchanters. They
have been waiting for Don Quixote to come
and dispel the charm which hides them from
the light of the world.
This great

his written imitation as the spurious work
of an un-Christian enemy.
Quixote's discussion of imitation
introduces another aspect of the fictional
problem mentioned earlier. Until now, we
as readers have assumed that the Quixote
we see in print is the only one there is.
Now, we realize that there are, in fact,
two Quixotes.
The first is the noble
knight errant authored by Quixote himself.
The second is the comic fool who mistakes
inns for castles and street tarts for
damsels in distress.
This problem is
unique to Don Quixote because Quixote is
himself an imitator.
He has decided who
Quixote is and what his actions should be
'
by the five rules of knight errantry. He
has set down guidelines for his portrayal
in
accordance
with
his
theories
on
imitation.
Benengali
ignores
these
~µ,idelines,
providing
details
which
discredit the. hero and make him out to be
a fool.
This is the same problem of
authorship mentioned - earlier,
now in
greater detail.
Quixote is not only the
author of his adventures,but the critic of
his chronicle as well.
This problem of
authorship will become important in the
later part of the book, when Don Quixote
encounters his readers, the Duke and
Duchess.
He is misunderstood by these
readers because he has been misrepresented
to them.
The news of his history has been
reported to Quixote by Sanson Carrasco.
Sanson
defends
Benengali's
portrayal
against Quixote's charge that it is a
false imitation.
To remain true to a
hero's fine character, he says, is poetic
imitation,
but Quixote's
story, is a
history and an historian must remain
faithful to literal truth. An historian,
according to Sanson, must add or omit
nothing to what has taken place, on any
pretext
whatsoever.
This
distinction
between poetry and history is in complete
agreement with that of Aristotle, referred
to at the beginning of this essay. Since
Quixote inhabits the contemporary world,
there is nothing extraordinary about his
circumstances.
Thus
his
book
is
a
history. Quixote believes, however, that.

one

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�adventure is marked for Quixote alone.
His task is to raise the poetical world up
to the plane of experience. This task is
the resurrection of chivalry, the aim of
Quixote's noble undertaking.
The
underworld
in
which
these :
personages are imprisoned is the realm
invented by the writers of romantic books.
It is like the island in Shakespeare's The
Tempest in which the enchanter Prospero
holds spirits imprisoned by his art. Like
Prospero, and Shakespeare himself, the
writers of knight errantry are artists.
Imitation is their craft but it is Don
Quixote's life.
His task is to free
poetical characters from the prison in
which they have been bound by art. To do
this, Quixote must change imitation from
the -exclusive province. of art into the
domain of honest, simple men.
He must
defeat art on _its own territory and make
the world poetical.
The second of these
two
objectives
is
realized
in
Don
Quixote's battle with a mock image of
himself: Sanson Carrasco.
j

Sanson Carrasco is introduced into
the story as a Bachelor of ~~s.
He is
described as a "rare comedian" . and a man
"of a malicious disposition (who) would
delight in nothing more than making 1 6port
for himself, by ridiculing others."
His
admiration for Quixote is pure artifice;
Sanson plays the part of a loving admirer
of Quixote's chivalry and laughs at the
success
of
this
deception.
He
is
delighted by the spectacle of a foolish
old man who thinks he can become a knight
errant
simply
by
acting
the
part.
Duplicity is the word which best describes
Sanson's imitation of admiration; he has a
double soul.
Quixote, in contrast, is a
simple man.
Sanson will never consider
this
simplicity
noble
because
the
ingenuous
old man
cannot distinguish
artifice from honest action.
The greatest artificer is the Devil
himself, who can assume any shape he
wishes. In league with this evil power is
the puppet master, Don Pedro.
Although
his presence in this story is brief, Don
Pedro is important as an example of the

villainy of art.
He is the pattern from
which Sanson and the Duke and Duchess are
pressed. Don Pedro is the same Ginesillo
de Paparilla, the former galley slave, who
stole Sancho's ass in the Sierra Morena.
This attempt was so artfully done that it
escaped even the attention of the author.
Don Pedro is a master of disguises and has
no
peer
in
knavery
and
deception.
Appearances are the stock of his trade and
his skill lies in deceiving simple souls
such as Don Quixote and Sancho. He is not
an enchanter, but merely a trickster,
capable of playing many roles, like the
joker in a deck of cards.
One role of Don Pedro is that of a
puppet master, in which he parades images
before our eyes.
This. is his natural
role, for the purpose - of his art is to
manipulate men like puppets on a string.
To Don Quixote and -Sancho he presents a
story of romantic chivalry: that of Don
Gayferos' rescue of his wife from the
Moors.· All goes well with the performance
until that moment when the Moors close in
·on the fleeing lovers. Don Quixote can no.
longer control his fear for the knight; he
stands up, draws his sword, and hacks the
pasteboard Moors
to
bi ts.
For
Don
Quixote, the puppets became the people
they were meant to represent. Quixote ls
the first human being ever to cross the
inviolable line between the audience and
the stage. He identifies so strongly with
Don Gayferos that his dramatic fear is no
longer pleasure, but pain. Don Quixote is
deceived by this artist into taking
pasteboard figures for real people. So too
will he be deceived by the Duke and
Duchess.
Quixote may lose himself in a drama
of knight errantry but he knows the value
of the stage. In a discourse with Sancho,
he speaks of the actors and writers of the
stage holding mirrors before our eyes.
"Nothing is able to give us a
more just idea of nature, and what
than
we
are
or ought
to 17 be,
comedians and comedies."
The

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rare

comedian

Sanson

Carrasco

believes
that
the
ridiculous picture
painted of Quixote in Book I of the
knight's history gives us a just idea of
Quixote's
true
nature.
He- disguises
himself as a knight errant, and stages a
meeting
with
Don
Quixote.
Sanson's
imitation _of knight errantry is by art,
for he believes neither Quixote nor
himself to be a knight. The motive for his
disguise is to give Quixote a true
knightly adventure, one in which he must
fail.
Since
Quixote
is
actually
a
bµmbling old fool, the bachelor can be
assured of the battle's outcome.
No one
will be hurt and this madman will be
proved
a
counterfeit
knight.
This
artificial encounter is a trial by combat
for Quixote, for Sanson challenges his
very identity as a knight errant.
As the sun rises on their contest,
Quixote beholds the Knight of the Wood
wearing, for his armor, ,a coat of mirrors.
The man who holds this mirror up to nature
refuses to show his face or to reveal his
name.
He is no-man, the incarnate power
of artful imitation. His claim is that of
the artist: we imitate only by hiding our
true identity. Quixote believes, however,
that by imitation we become what we truly
are.
He believes that poetry is a
transformation, not deception.
The power
of poetry to transform a man is at stake
in this battle.
The battle with Sanson Carrasco would
never have taken place were it not for
Benengali's history. Quixote's picture of
a knight errant has been reproduced in
print and comes to challenge him as a
flesh and blood knight.
Held up to
Quixote is a distorted mirror, intended to
reflect back the image of a comic fool.
Standing before him is an imitation twice
removed, reflected by both Benengali and
Sanson. The conception of Quixote's book
as a history, which both men share, is
occasioned by their opinion that our world
is not extraordinary.
The world Quixote
has constructed is, therefore, a fiction.
A defeat of this mock knight would
demonstrate
a
correspondence
between
Quixote' s poetical fiction and the world
of his own experience.
It would render

the real world poetical.
This artificial adventure becomes
real as Quixote triumphs over the mock
knight. Although the duel itself is real,
since Quixote does battle with and defeats
. a real man, the expected does not happen.
The manner in which the knight vanquishes,
~is opponent is so strange and unlikely,
1t
could only happen to Quixote.
In a
word, it is characteristically quixotic.
With a thrust of his lance, Quixote has
broken
the
spell
which
bound
his
adventures in ordinary circumstances. At
last his book has become true to the
character of its hero.
Quixote has
succeeded in making the world poetical.
Quixote's success in this battle
supports his view that his book is the
work of a poet, not an historian.
The
poet is Cervantes, true author of Don
Quixote.
He
has
quietly
supported
Quixote's views on proper imitation and
now intervenes in the chronicle on the
part of his hero.
He is the friendly
enchanter of greater power than Benengali
for that writer is his own invention.
Quixote's victory is a miracle of the
author's own making.. It is the most
subtle Deus ex Machina ever performed on
the stage.
With a stroke of his sword, Don
Quixote cut poetical imitation Jree from
its moorings in the past and allowed it to
sail the uncharted waters of his own
present time.
He has demonstrated that
our own circumstances can truly conform to
our poetical vision of ourselves. He has
defeated art on its own territory, forcing
Sanson Carrasco to take
this knight
errantr:'l seriously, if he is to defeat
Quixote.
Take it seriously he does;
Sanson now wishes not to deceive Quixote
but to truly defeat him.
He plots
another scheme, not as a joke, but in
deadly earnest, .to defeat Quixote in a
true
battle.
This
battle,
and
its
consequences will be the subject of the
last section of this essay.
Don
Quixote's
defeat
of
Sanson
Carrasco makes him a successful knight
errant in the world, as well as in his own
imaginings.
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�and
oppressed may
now
be
realized.
Quixote, however, is no ordinary knight,·
but an imitator, who looks to poetry as
the schema for his actions.
In an
advent~re which follows, the role of this
imitative hero can be seen.
To thi~
adventure I now turn, to derive the lesson
of Don Quixote.
In Book I of Quixote's story, he is
told two tales of romantic intrigue.
Within his own tales these are fictions,
such as "The Story of One Too Curious for
His Own Good" .
In the second Book,
however, Quixote and Sancho are invited
not to hear such a tale, but to be present
within one.
This is the story of Poor
Basil.
The student recounting the story
thus far, compares it to that of Pyramus
and Thisbe, which Don Quixote has just
heard recounted in a sonnet.
He judged
this sonnet to be the work of an absolute
poet, meaning that it ends as it should,
with the two lovers joined at last.
The story of Basil and his love,
Quiteria, is prevented from ending as it
should by the rich Camancho who would have
Quiteria for his own bride. At Comancho's
wedding,
a
play
is
performed which
reflects the story's action. The contest
between weal th and love in the play ends
as it should, with the forces of Cupid
winning the day. Basil's story is in need
of a champion of romance and poetry for
the proper completion of its action. When
Quixote sees the play, he recognizes that
Basil's champion is his role to play.
By holding a mirror up to Quixote,
the writer of this play inspired the
knight to noble action.
Such, also, is
the purpose of Don Quixote itself, for it
is the work of an absolute poet. In it we
find a character, Don Quixote, who has the
courage and noble purpose to imitate the
actions of the stage in life itself. We,
the readers, can see in Don Quixote a role
worthy of imitation in our own lives. This
imitation of Quixote becomes explicit when
he meets his own readers within the course
of the book itself.
As the sun is setting on the day of.
their adventure with the enchanted bark,
Don Quixote and Sancho emerge from a wood,

cross a meadow, and are received into the\
company of their readers.
The publishing
of his history during Quixote's own life
made such a crossing possible.
When he
sallied forth a third time, it became
inevitable that the world of Quixote's
actions and that of · his readers would
finally intersect.
The wood from which
Quixote emerges signifies an obscurity
between these two; it is a wood between
worlds. On one side of this wood Quixote
is seen as a man; on the other he is known
only as a character from a book.
I have
described Quixote's crossing from the
audience to the stage when he cut apart
the cardboard-Moors. Now he crosses that
line again, this time from the other side.
This crossing is an intersection of
worlds on two levels.
The first is the
one just described.
For the Duke and
Duchess,
a character from a work of
imitation has stepped into their midst.
Having been delighted but not instructed
by Don Quixote, they yearn for more
Quixotic adventures. The Duke and Duchess
do not wish to have these adventures
themselves, however, since they consider
them comic and those who laugh loudest at
others wish least to be laughed at
themselves.
On this side of the wood, Don Quixote
is known only as the fool of nature. The
cause of this misunderstanding of the
knight
is
his
misrepresentation
by
Benengali.
It was Benengali' s art which
first made Don Quixote appear comic. When
the knight appears before the Duke and
Duchess, they do not seek the reasons for
his madness nor attempto to understand his
undertaking.
Like Sanson Carrasco, · they
only pretend to believe Quixote' s knight
errantry.
In their wicked minds the Duke
and Duchess devise artful imitations of
Quixote's own poetic imagination.
They
dupe him into thinking that he has at last
found the world of knight errantry.
The
second
crossing
referred
to
earlier i.s this belief of Quixote's that
he has entered the realm of chivalry. In
fact, he has entered the prison of art.
The contrivances of the Duke and Duchess
bind Quixote with chains he cannot see.

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His hosts usurp his tale with adventures
of their own design. Their ill contrived
and
overdone
designs
have
all
the
imperfections of the storier 8 of chivalry.
In the words of the canon,
venting h,.is
spleen on such works:

own tale,
in its simple poetry, has
transcended the works he is imitating.
When Don Quixote thinks he has finally
become a true knight, he has, in fact,
become the fool of art.
Deception is not the lesson of Don
Quixote but it is the only one the artful
soul can learn.
Don Quixote• s
true
tea~hing
is learned only by his simple
squire, Sancho Panza.
Sancho is as free
from craft as his master and his is the ·.
only true imitation of Don Quixote.
Sancho Panza is given the chance to
author his own story in the adventure of
the 'flying horse' .
This adventure was
devised to dupe Don Quixote and Sancho
into thinking that they flew through the
sky·
Actually, they sat as blindfolded
fools in the Duke's courtyard. When asked
to recount his adventures, Sancho has a
wonderful fable to tell:

"Their style is uncouth, their
exploits
incredible,
their
love
immodest, their civility impertinent, their battles tedious, their
languages
absurd,
their
voyages
preposterous, and in short, they are
altogether
void
of
solid
•
•
ingenuity. I ' 19
This is the world of chivalry which
Don Quixote has taken for pure, unalloyed
gold. Now it is seen for what it is: the
artificial product of a poor imagination
that
substitutes
spectacle
for
true
ingenuity of plot.
Spectacle is the chief element of the
adventures contrived by the Duke and
Duchess.
According to Aristotle, it is
the element in imitation least connected
to poetry. Spectacle is more properly the
~ork of stage hands.
The Duke and Duchess
introduce this element, absent in Don
Quixote's own authorship, and thus destroy
the purity of his tale.
Don Quixote's true genius lies in his
use of ordinary objects and situations in
his story, for a genius sees what others
have not seen.
He is the 'Ingenious
Gentleman of La Mancha' who cannot rely on
sp~ctacle for he has no stage hands.
Don
Quixote is a knight not because he looks
the part but because his purpose is noble
his actions courageous, and his soui
humble. Purity of hear:t is the ess~nce of
Don
Quixote's
knight
errantry.
Th
ability to see a barber's basin as :
magical helmet is the beauty of his
p~et ry.
Quixote' s purity is stained by
h~s association with the Duke and Duchess,
.his poetry maligned by the success of
th .
.
.. eir. dec~ption.
Don Quixote may be
ingenious in his own imitation of knight
errantry, but his simple soul cannot see
the contrivances of art for what they
tr_uly are.
Neither can he see that his

"Senora,
as we were flying
through the region of fire, or so my
ma~ter told me •... and so very, very
quietly,. and without anyone seeing
me, I lifted the handkerchief ever
so little, close to my nose, and
looked down at the earth. It seemed
as if the whole earth was no bigger
than a grain of mustard, and the
people walking about on it were a
little larger than hazelnuts .... Then
as we went through the reg~B where
the seven little she-goats
were
and seeing that as a lad I'd been ~
goatherd in my country, the minute I
laid eyes on them I
felt like
getting down and playing with them a
bit, and if I hadn't done so, I
think I would have bu rs t.
And so,
what do
I
do?
Without
saying
anthing to my master, or anbody
else,
I
slip off Clavileno as
quietly as you please, and for three
quarters of an hour I have a good
time with these goats which are like
gilly flowers, and all the time
Clavil~~o
doesn't stir from the
spot."
Al though the Duke and Duchess laugh

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heartily at their joke, Sancho's adventure
also gives Don Quixote reason to smile.
QUixote does not believe this tale; he
knows as well as the Duke and Duchess that
Sancho never dismounted from the horse.
Sancho's defense of his story is that they
hav.e been travelling by enchantment, a
reply to the ordinary typical of Don
Quixote.
The knight smiles because his
squire has learned the method of his
madness.
Quixote can now admit the secret of
his adventure in the cave of Montesinos to
his squire turned disciple.
In an aside
to Sancho, he says:
"Sancho, if you want us to
believe what you saw in heaven, then
you must believe me when I tell you
what
I
saw
in
the
cave 2 ~f
Montesinos. I need say no more."
What the knight need not say is that
he invented his adventures in the cave as
surely as Sancho invented his tale of the
little sheep in the sky. Both admit that
nothing happened in these adventures, but
they will continue telling their stories
and believing them as well.
In other
words, Don QUixote's madness is an act of
the will. He deliberately chooses madness
because
a
madman
alone
can
see
an
extraordinary world.
This choice is wonderfully Quixotic.
What thanks does a madman deserve for
going mad?
He has just cause for his
actions. To be sane and yet act mad is to
act without just cause.
This is true
madness: QUixotic madness. Don QUixote's
imitation is more truly mad than the fact
of madness,
just as quixotic knight
errantry is more truly knightly than that
of Don Amadis of Gaul.
The -value of Quixote's madness lies
in the fact that his book lies open before
us. Sitting at home, he would have passed
his last days without an adventure to his
name.
Now, both he and Sancho "had
something to ta~~ about forever had [they]
lived so long."
Through his madnes.s, Don
QUixote has had the chance to instruct his
readers in courage, humility, and the

virtue of finding inspiration in poetry.
The inspiration we derive from Don
Quixote is an imitation of the hero'.s own
role. An imitation of Don Quixote is one
of imitation itself. To be like Quixote,
we must look to poetry for the best
originals. We can only believe the world
of poetry to be imitable if we believe our
own world to be poetical. We first found
reasons for this belief when Don Quixote
defeated Sanson Carrasco.
The poetical
nature of our own world truly shines forth
when Sancho is transformed from a simple
squire into a governor as wise as Sol.omen.
Sancho Panza could never have become
the great governor he was had he not, in
his imagination, first reached up and
touched the stars.
To become what we
ought to be, we must first become poetic
madmen, in imitation of Don Quixote, as
Sancho has done.
Don Quixote is thus a
mirror held up to our own nature; in his
eyes we can see a vision of what we can
become. Poetry exists to intruct, as well
as delight the readers, says the canon in
Ch. XLVIII, Book I. This is the true
lesson of Don Quixote.
I am sure there is a reader of Don
Quixote who would consider, as would Hume,
that this lesson is just nonsense.
To
this reader, I extend my sympathy.
He
must spend his time vainly trying to prove
the
existence
of
the world of
our
experience and denying the imagination its
wings. What thanks does a man deserve for
trying to prove that the world of our
experience exists?
No, the thing is to
attempt to prove the existence of the
world beyond all possible experience.
Such would be a true Quixotic enterprise
in philosophy.
Much earlier in this essay, I made
the claim that Don Quixote is the work of
an absolute poet.
All imitation of the
Quixotic enterprise rests on this claim
for without it the proportion [readers:
Quixote::QUixote:the stage] is destroyed.
When Don QUixote called the sonnet of
Pyramus and Thisbe the work of an absolute
poet, he meant that the ending was proper
to the story. For Don Quixote to inspire

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us to action, it must have a proper ending
as well.
Don Quixote does not end with the
knight's final success. He does not win a
kingdom, nor his lady's hand. Unlike most
tales
of
chivalry or those
of the
wandering hero~s, Odysseus and Aeneas, Don
Quixote ends with the knight's defeat. "-In
his last adventures, Don Quixote finds an
artist, Don Antonio, who loves him and is
. willing to build a world of deception in
which to house the knight forever.
In
this edifice of art, Don Quixote is to be
protected from the knowledge that he is
not capable of true knightly adventures.
Don Antonio builds a temple to Quixote;
all who enter must vow not to disturb the
knight's madness. This temple is brought
crash~ng down upon Quixo2~' s head by his
nemesis, Sanson Carrasco.
Sanson Carrasco appears before Don
Quixote not as the knight of the mirrors,
but as a real knight.
As an artist, he
was shorn of his power to defeat the
cknight by deception. The mirrors he wore
in the previous battle were crescents.
Now, his shield is emblazoned with a full
moon,
symbolizing that his power has
reached its full height.
The time has
come for Sanson Carrasco to defeat Don
Quixote.
The moon on Sanson's shield is also a
symbol of resurrection and rebirth.
To
defeat Don Quixote, Sanson Carrasco had to
return as a knight.
His imitation of
Quixote
has
only
one
purpose:
the
knight's defeat. When the original knight
falls from his horse, this irni ta tor also
ceases to be a knight, since his calling
has been fulfilled.
As
a
reincarnation
of Quixote's
knight
errantry,
Sanson
Carrasco
symbolizes the spurious sequel to Book I,
published by "an Aragonese, who styles·
himself a native of Tordesillas. 1125 When
Don Quixote is defeated, the imposter in
the spurious sequel ceases to be Don
Quixote. How can he still have adventures
when the real Don Quixote has ceased to be
a knight?
His defeat as a knight is Don
Quixo~e's own death. Don Q\iixote made his

story his life and in creating his plot
must accept that it has an end.
It is
impossible for Don Quixote to become
another character because his defeat as a
knight is also his defeat as a poet. Does
this defeat mean that Quixote's lesson is
false?
Can we imitate a hero who has
failed?
To find the answer to this
question we must again look to the example
of Sancho Panza.
Only Sancho Panza would be fool
enough to believe Quixote's promise of a
governorship.
Just before they meet the
Duke and Duchess, Sancho threatens to
abandon this stupid calling of knight
errantry. All he sees are defeats, all he
receives are blanketings and bruises. He
sees no way in the world that Don
Quixote's vision can succeed.
The knight upbraids him:
"Turn, then, the reins, or better,
the halter of your ass, and go back
to your home, for you are not going
one step further with me ••• Oh man
who has more of the beast in him
than of the human! ••.. So you are
leaving me just when I had firmly
resolved to make you governor of the
best island in the world? ..•• honey
is not for the ass's mouth. An ass
you are and an ass you will be to
your dying day, for I think that day
will come before you will ever
realize 26 that you are a
stupid
beast."
These words move Sancho to tears, and
he answers:
"Master, I will grant you that all I
lack is a tail and I would be an
ass .... Forgive me, your Grace; have
mercy on my foolishness.
Remember
that I know little and if I talk too
much, that is due to weakness,
rather than to malice.
But he who
sins and mends 26 his way commends
himself to God."
Commend yourself to God and to your

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�master, Sancho, and you will truly be
transformed.
Blessed are the poor in
spirit, for theirs is the kingdom of
Heaven. Blessed indeed is poor San~ho who
does not see yet still believes.
The defeat of Don Quixote hides his
vision from our sight.
To truly imitate
him, however, our belief must be an act of
the will, like Quixote's own.
A true
believer in Don Quixote's poetry is a
madman and a fool in the eyes of the
world.
What thanks does a man deserve, I
may ask, for running mad when he has just
cause?
Don Quixote asks us to run mad
without a cause, without any reasonable
hoe for success. His defeat destroys such
hope and thus compels us to a truly
Quixotic imitation of Don Quixote.
For
this reason, defeat is the proper end for
the book.
It completes the lesson of Don
Quixote by turning our eyes from worldly
success to the beauty of Don Quixote's
undertaking.
The
true
value
of
Don
Quixote's madness is that it allows him to
see a more beautiful world.
Only when we
look past his defeat to "the glory that,
in ages to come, shall be eternal in the
ethereal and celestial regions"
have we
understood Don Quixote's true calling.
Only then will the lessons of this great
and wondrous knight be ours to learn.

3.

Book I, Ch. I; Putnam

4.

Book II, Ch. VIII; Putnam

5.

Book I, Ch. I; Putnam

6.

ROCIN-hack, ANTE-before. This may
also signify that he was but an
ordinary hack before Quixote
transformed him.

Springtime
Gretchen Berg
for Julie

On the road where picket spears the air,
·
limit points beyond, in a bank past the church

7.

Book II, Ch. III; Putnam

8.

Book I, Ch. XXIII; Putnam

9.

Book I, Ch. XXV; Putnam

where once I placed, thighs deep in snow,
a rose for the Virgin, now tree roots grapple sky;
liquid slips the tabled rock to swerve,
elusive tress of wondrous weft.

10.

Book II, Ch. Ill; Putnam

11.

Book II, Ch. III; Putnam

12.

Book I, Ch. XLVII; Cohen

I remember
other rivers, broad as seas, harsh
gritty beaches over which the gulls t 1 l t
'

silent,

13.

Book II, Ch. III; Putnam

cliff's edge where hemlock stalks like fern;

14.

Book II, Ch. VIII; Cohen

dark trees make water bright, or bright make dark.

15.

Book II, Ch. XXV; Cohen
On the hill a smoky echo lines the road

16.

Book II, CH. XII; Ozell

granite, marble, coal---what is not gathered,

18.

I
have
used
three
different
translations for this paper to vary the
style of the quotations.
The Putnam and
Cohen translations are more literal, but
the Ozell much more fun to read.

striped and flat where rain flowed; mica

17.
FOOTNOTES

Book II, Ch. III; Ozell

In English, there is a pun on the
canon's title, since he is literally
reciting a canon for proper
imitation.

carved and woven, in this timely stream?

Above it bushes
bead with bloom, later with berry,
hoop in festival; the lilac crooks

These are the Pleiades.

from branch, receding vistas beckon

21.

I am indebted to Mr. McGrath for this
thought.

Book I, Ch. XLVII; Ozell

20.

1.

19.

Book II, Ch. XVI; Putnam

through arcs of green, wreathing victor's garland
in unconscious air.

2.

Book I, Ch. I; Putnam

22.

Book II, Ch. XVI; Putnam

Every wave of fullness

casts a web of imitation, yellow leaf
sustained by shadowed blue.

Hair and a ribbon
float on my shoulder; it is cold and I go home.

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43

�Playing With _Images
SUsan Magwre

of the image is the unnaturalness.
It is
unnatural for any mother to tend to a
child of a different species, thou?h
studies tell us it has been done.
It is
monstrous for a human to su~kle an
animal--this
is
horrible
particularly
because man is held to be superior to the
lower animals, not at all on the same
level. This unnaturalness is the root of
the
third
striking
aspect
of
these
images--the topsy-turviness of each.
In The Bacchae passage there is a
two-fold topsy-turviness,
a
sense
of
odd-juxtapositions.
First, the mess~ng~r
is
relating
a
tale
we
didn t
expect--instead of the wanton, lusting
females he tells us of a pastoral scene,
women of all ages asleep among fallen oak
leaves.
we feel the earthy calm as he
describes one, "half sinking on a bed of
deep pine greenery." Then, as we start to
ease into the sweet-smelling sof~ness, ~e
describes these same women girting their
skirts with quick, hissing snakes, and
suckling wild animals at their breast; we
are aghast, and are shaken. out ?f the
softness. The magic of the image is that
horrible
proceeds
to 11 seem
the
even
sweet--the women "smile in love ! he
· describes them as "young mothers with a
mother's breast"--we start to lapse back
into the softness.
It seems not so bad,
actually, this peaceful suckling, till he
reminds
us
of
the
"babes
at
home
forgotten!" we are again jangled and left
not just with the horrible image, but now
the horror stains ourselves; we too felt
the spell.
In simple terms The Bacchae is a play
Should Pentheus
about faith and nature.
Dionysus really a
believe in Dionysus? Is
God? Is Cadmus wrong to dress _u~ in skins

The Bacchae: Messenger's speech (690-700)
[Describing the Theban women under
Dionysus' spell]
And one a young fawn held, and one a
wild wolf cub, and fed them with
white milk, and smiled in love, young
mothers with a mother's breast
and babes at home forgotten!
Antony and Cleopatra:
scene (V i i 308) (to
applies to her breast)

Cleopatra's death
an asp which she

Cleo:with thy sharp teeth this knot
intrinsicate
Of life at once untie: poor
venomous fool,
Be angry, and despatch. O,
couldst thou speak,
That I might hear thee call
great Caesar ass,
Unpolicied!
o Eastern Star!
Char:
Cleo:Peace, Peace!
Dost thou not see my baby at my
breast,
That sucks the nurse asleep?
These images stand out as horrible
scenes.
They are horrible for several
reasons.
First, each image inv~lv~s the
reader (or viewer)..
The descriptio~ . of
the human body, particularly so sensitive
a part of the body as the breast, causes
one
to
feel
the
image
personally,
especially (or perhaps only?) a woman~ f~r
whom the breast is a symbol of what it is
to be woman--biologically,
emotional~y
(sensually), socially ("role" of woman in
society).
In each case the most striking aspect

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and dance like a young man, honoring the
God?
Is it unbecoming to his age and·
dignity; is it unnatural for him to relax.
the bounds of his person, to step outside
of what's expected of him as king?
The image related above contains many,
of the same elements. We do not see what
the messenger tells us, yet we believe
him.
It is unnatural for the women to
suckle wild animals--it seems horrible,
yet is is peaceful and beautiful at the
same time. Finally, we too have succumed
to the enchantment which moves the whole
play.
Topsy-turviness is at work also in
the
Antony
and
Cleopatra
passage.
Cleopatra's words to the asp are moving,
harsh
words.
They
are
spoken
strongly--her directive, "be angry, and·
despatch" resembles a leader's orders--to
his men. Power underlies this speech--the
asp's power to kill, and lack of power to
speak; Caesar's power, which is the cause
of Cleopatra's action; and her own power,
now eclipsed by Caesar. We see Cleopatra
as a royal queen, a leader.
What follows seems oddly-juxtaposed.
Cleopatra urges "peace!"
She presents
herself as a mother caring for her
babe--such
a
different
role
for
Cleopatra!, a role which heretofore was
unimaginable. Although previously she has
spoken of her children, no image has been
presented
as
soft
and maternal,
as
thoroughly womanly as this. One is struck
by
the
difference
between
her
two
speeches, one so forceful, the other so
soft.

The image does not stop there,
however.
Here again is the horrible
, unnaturalness of a woman nursing a lover
creature--particularly striking as in this
case it's a serpent.
(This brings to
mind, of course, the Genesis story of
woman "causing" the fall of man.)
The
topsy-turviness is carried even one step
further--in this case the "baby" causes
the nurse to sleep, making a horrible
image chilling as well.
This metaphor stands out as important
in the context of the whole play because
of the light it sheds on Cleopatra.
Earlier I said this is the image which
most presents Cleopatra as "thoroughly
womanly". I hesitate, and re-examine that
suggestion, yet it still seems true.
Earlier in the play we see Cleopatra as a
beauty, a lover, an enchantress, a flirt,
an emotional one who makes mistakes and
changes her mind, but in all of these
instances she seems not most woman, but
most queen.
The scene where she .is most a woman
is, to be sure, not at all natural to
woman.
One never sees Cleopatra as
thoroughly woman in a natural sense. The
·worm of Nilus kills the human; the country
of the Nile, the power and lack of power
kills the queen.
Perhaps ~ Cleopatra
can be woman?
"Husband, I c·ome :
Now to that name,
courage prove my
title!" (V ii 286)

my

45

�Negation, Willing and the Places of the Soul
"William O'Grady

For Frances
H. Stephen Morse

How many men
Have tried to walk
Your cobbled heart,
And in a quiet rain
Have slipped and
Washed away
Amid a thousand tiny
Rivers of
Regret.

This lecture has three parts. In the first part I shall sketch Hegel's presentation
of the primacy of the subject in modern metaphysics and of negativity as the meaning of
subjectivity.
In the second part I shall sketch Heidegger's attempt to expose willing
as the core of thinking not only in the thought of Nietzsche but already in that of
Descartes and even in that of Plato. In the third part I shall try to bring out some
suggestions contained in Plato's Timaeus, not indeed about the subject or the self, but
about what human soul might be.
I hope that the coherence of the three parts will
emerge in the course of the lecture.

I.

Scholarship
H. Stephen Morse

Quiet settles in the room. The light
Above the dark old desk illuminates
A page of Greek, and brings light to a bright
Bronze panoply of men at war. The.Ga~es
Before the field stand open, and within,
A father and a wife are fixed with.dread~
While far away, three grinning la~ies spin
Each footfall into their great, timeless web.
A ringless finger on an aged ha~d
Marks place. No flicker of a lip or eye
Disturbs the face --like wind upon the grass-Of he who reads. For on that wall he stands,
As Homer's tale fills up both Earth and Sky
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tree and human thinking about the tree have
already grown together by the time any of
us appears on the scene.
Moreover, this
concrescence, this having grown together,
belongs to the being of the tree as well as
to the being of human thinking--this is one
of Hegel's great thoughts, which he learned
from Aristotle.
Thus in reading a book
about trees I am facing the tree and human
thinking about the tree as having grown
together;
I am thinking about the tree
concretely, as is not possible for me as I
stand in a field facing the tree in what
now appears as its nakedness.
Hegel took his experience of reading
books very seriously.
In that experience
he felt himself to be most deeply in touch
with the world in the fullness of its
being.
The
books
he
took
most
seriously--this brings us to the second
preliminary consideration--were those of
Aristotle.
In two matters
of utmost
importance he simply follows Aristotle. At
the end of his Encylopedia, presenting the
all-encompassing circular education, Hegel
says that Aristotle alone named God truly:
noesis noeseos, thinking of thinking. That
means for Hegel:
thinking is the most
active activity, the most energetic energy,
both as world-building (thinking produces

In the preface to the Phenomenology of
Spirit Hegel writes: "According to my view,
which
must
justify
itself
by
the
presentation of the system, everything
depends on this, that we comprehend and
express the true not only as substance but
just as much as subject." We must try to
understand this statement, which is central
in Hegel's thinking.
But two preliminary
considerations may help us orient ourselves
toward that thinking.
First, one of the most important words
in the language of Hegel's thinking is
"concrete."
By it he means almost the
opposite of what we might suppose. We are
in the habit of saying, for example that to
experience a tree concretely we must walk
into the middle of a field and stand face
to face with the tree; if we read a book
about trees, we are encountering the tree
only abstractly.
For Hegel the situation
is reversed: to read a book about a tree is
to experience the tree as concretely as may
be.
The reason for the reversal is this.
To experience a tree concretely is to
experience it in its concrescence, its
having grown together with the other things
on which it depends and with which it
deeply
belongs:
air,
water,
soil,
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�the Roman world, thinking produces the
Aeneid) and as self-contained: thinking is
of all activities the one in which sheer
aliveness is most concentrated.
Second,
Hegel.never wavers in following Aristotle's
view that in the most important motions the
end
is
effectively
present
in
the
beginning, as the oak tree is at work in
the acorn.
Hegel however disagrees with Aristotle
in two points that are almost as decisive.
He thinks Aristotle is wrong in supposing
that the part of the soul that thinks is
separate from the part that loves, hates
and remembers. From Hegel's point of view
Aristotelian nous--the capacity to receive
the intelligible--is merely inhuman rather
than authentically di vine.
Hegel has
learned from the Christian doctrine of the
incarnation and passion of God Himself that
the relation of human and divine can be
truly understood only under the symbol of
the crucifixion: thus we read on the final
page of the Phenomenology that absolute
knowing
is
accomplished
through
the
"recollection and Golgotha of Absolute
Spirit." Second, and connected with this,
Hegel thinks the tragic poets were right as
against Aristotle:
the truth about the
divine is revealed in the fate of human
beings within human communities rather than
in the coming to be and passing away of
things without special reference to human
communities.
Let us return to Hegel's assertion that
what is crucial is to understand the true
not only as substance but just as much as
subject.
It is a commonplace to say that
since Descartes the subject, the "I think,"
has been the beginning for metaphysics and
that in Kant's "Copernican Revolution"
human
subjectivity
wins
its
decisive
victory.
But the Cartesian and Kantian
positions, though important for Hegel, are
not sufficient. For in them the so-called
subject, which has indeed been accorded
primacy,
is
still
being
understood
fundamentally as a substance~ Descartes
speaks of a "thinking substance" and Kant
of a "transcendental I," which is always
one and the same, which was never young,
which does not tremble in the face of

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death.
Against these insufficiently radical
attempts to establish the primacy of the
subject, Hegel insists that subjectivity is
a movement, the movement of self~positing,
of throwing itself under (sub-jacere) a
world of things so as to become what it is,
rather than a constant standing under or
lying under (substance, hupokeimenon.)
To secure the being of the subject
against being construed on the model of
substance, Hegel speaks of subjectivity as
negativity.
Being as a whole is revealed
in and through the being that can think and
.
say "no" and, moreover, can carry th is "no"
out in practice. In Hegel's discussion the
work of negativity is unfolded in three
stages.
First,
the process of
lifting off
"chair" from "this chair here"
(which
process since Aristotle--and on the basis
of a misunderstanding of him-- has been
called "abstraction," that is aphairesis,
that is "lifting off") is understood by
Hegel in a dramatic and violent way.
To
lift off "chair" from "this chair here" is
to destroy "this hereness," to do away with
"immediate existence," the being here or
there of particular beings as they are
given to us.
It is, by the power of our
thinking, to overcome mere giveness.
Second, the very discursiveness of human
thinking, the motion of thought from part
to
part,
is
understood by Hegel
as
exhibiting what he calls "the tremendous
power of the negative." That we think and
speak at all means, according to Hegel, not
only that we transform "this chair here"
into "chair" but also that we separate
"chair" from all other things in the world,
in general, in our thinking and speaking we
separate parts from the concrete wholes to
which they belong and which alone are
actual.
In
Hegel' s
language,
the
discursiveness
of
human
understanding
introduces "the unactual"
but this
introduction of the unactual is the very
action which makes change possible by
making room for change:
change can only
mean re- arrangement of parts; t o say II no II
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or of merely theoretical nihilism.
Finally, the power of human thinking to
destroy immediate existence in the form of
the "this-hereness" in which things are
given to us, and to tear particular things
out of the contexts in which we encounter
them, is seen in its full prodigiousness
only when we follow Hegel in supposing that
the self is passionately disposed to say no
to what it primarily faces -- that it is
radically restless and dissatisfied -- and
this because at bottom it is passionately
disposed to say no to itself:
it is in
every respect "unhappy consciousness," the
telling name given by Hegel to the hero of
his greatest book. The difference, according to Hegel in the~ntroduction" to the
Phenomenology, between natural things and
human existence is that "consciousness
destroys every form of limited satisfaction
for itself" so that serious education for
human beings is a "way of despair," that
is,
as
the
German
word
Verzweiflung
suggests, a way of being torn in two as a
violent conversation takes place within
each of us between "natural conciousness"
and "real knowledge. " Or, as we may say,
the ultimate meaning of Hegel's claim that
the subject belongs within the true just as
deeply as do the beings which the subject
faces, and that the core of subjectivity is
negativity, is that thinking is willing and
that willing properly issues, not in praise
and love -- "I love you:
I will that you
be" as the Franciscan thinker Duns Scotus
has it -- but rather in revolution.
Here, However, Hegel's thinking takes a
somewhat unexpected turn.
For, in his
understanding, revolution is for the sake
of the fullness of being.
What , I have
called
the
fullness
of
being,
Hegel
designates
as
"living
substance"
in
contrast
to
substance
thought
of
as
constituted by the beings in the world ·
opposed to subject. From the point of view
of "living substance," Hegel says: "What
seems to happen outside it, as an activity
directed against it, is its own doing; and
thus the
substance shows that it is
essentially subject.
When it has shown
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add, history has come to i:ts proper end.
Or, as Hegel said earlier, in and through
the
discursiveness
of human
thinking,
understood as "the tremendous power of the
negative," "the concrete separates itself
and makes itself unactual," so that it can
move itself. There is no more fundamental
thought. in Hegel than that the oak tree is
effectively present in the acorn.
In this
final point, of course, Hegel is by no
means a representative modern thinker. For
our purposes let us return to the assertion
that the deepest posture of human beings
toward the world in which they primarily
find themselves is negative, that thinking
is willing and that willing issues not in
affirmation or praise, but in destruction.
Heidegger can help us with this.

II.

I shall draw primarily on a long essay
called "Nietzsche's Word ' God is dead'" in
which Heidegger in a set of wide-ranging
reflections
interprets
section
125
of
Nietzsche's Gay Science.
In that section,
entitled "The Madman," a madman carrying a
lantern in the bright morning hours runs
into the market place to announce that God
is dead and, just as astounding, that we
are his murderers, you and I.
It is this
second
assertion
which
Heidegger
is
especially concerned to understand. As his
interpretation develops, the murdering of
God is understood as the murdering of the
meaningfulness of all that is.
In other words, guided by Nietzsche but
going beyond his analysis, Heidegger tries
to understand nihilism, "that uncanniest of
guests that stands at our door." According
to Nietzsche, nihilism means that "the
highest values
hitherto
are
devaluing
themselves," so that what is required is a
"revaluation
of
all
values,"
as
the
subtitle
of
Nietzsche's
unfinished
masterwork, The Will to Power, has it. But
Heidegger isled to ';Qnder about the very
language of "value" which abounds· in
Nietzsche's writings:
valuing, devaluing,
creating new values.
Perhaps nihilism
means not that the highest values devalue

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themselves but rather that what is, what
offers itself to us by appearing to ·us,
should be evaluated at all, should be
driven into some sort of order by reference
to one extrinsic standard or other.
The
central attempt of Heidegger's essay is to
explore whether nihilism can be understood in this second sense and, if so,
where its origins are to be found.
We cannot follow Heidegger's discussion
in all its richness and complexity.
Its
decisive steps are:
first, to show the
dependence of Nietzsche's understanding of
value on his understanding of will, and
second, to point to the presence of a
willful element in thinking as understood
by Descartes and even by Plato.
As he
writes
sweepingly
in
another
place:
"Thinking, understood in the traditional
way, is a kind of willing."
According
to
Heidegger,
the
most
important thought in the final phase of
Nietzsche's philosophizing is "will to
pewer." Will to power is said by Nietzsche
to be "the innermost essence of Being."
But the phrase "will to power" is likely to
mislead us, as Heidegger points out, since
according
to
Nietzsche's
understanding
willing as such generates power: the will
to humility is just as powerful, just as
powergenerating, as the will to domination
over others. Therefore he proposes that we
understand will to power as will to will;
that is, the "innermost essence of Being"
is to be understood as the will willing
itself, the willing of willing.
Heidegger goes on to claim that "Modern
metaphysics,
as
the
metaphysics
of
subjectness, thinks the Being of what is in
the
sense
of
will."
He
understands
Nietzsche's
great
thought
as
the
culmination
of
modern
metaphysics,
completing the elevation of willing to
unchallenged supremacy within the relation
of human being to being as a whole, so that
in our time "the earth itself can show
itself only as the object of assault, an
assault that, in human willing, establishes
itself as total objectification."
Heidegger
identifies
the
grounding
principle of Nietzsche's metaphysics, the
metaphysics of ,)the will to power, and

notices that it is a v~J-_\le-:9rinctple: . ~'Art
is worth more than truth. "
He wonders
about evaluative thinking altogether, and
this leads him back to a consideration of
Descartes,
Plato
and
the
pre-Socratic
thinkers. I shall present a sketch of the
sketch he gives.
In
Descartes'
thought,
that
which
constantly underlies everything that is,
(the hypokeimenon in Aristotle's language)
is the cogito, the "I think" of the
fundamental proposition "I think, therefore
I am."
But the Cartesian cogito means
co-agito; to cogitate means to co-agitate;
"I think" means "I drive together into· the
unity of a system."
Cartesian thinking,
according to Heidegger, is fundamentally
willful, doing violence to beings rather
than letting them be what they are.
Nothing
is
more
characteristic
of
Heidegger's own late writings than the
passionate
insistence
on
the
will-not-to-will, which is meant to prepare
the
way
for
the
tranquillity
of
"letting-be," that is, of thinking that
lets things be what they are.
Heidegger perceives the same element of
willfulness, which refuses to let beings be
what they are, in the thought of Plato,
though in a less blatant form.
For there
the eide, the non-appearing beings of
thought-;- are
ultimately understood
as
measures, in relation to which everyth.ing
that offers itself to us by appearing to us
must inevitably fail to measure up, and
hence is said to be only in a certain
measure. The positing of the-idea of the
Good is murderous of Being, that is,
destroys the meaning- fulness of what
appears.
Meaningfulness is now conferred
only by the willfully established frame
within which what appears is allowed to
appear. Heidegger writes in another place:
"From
the
standpoint
of
space,
the
difference is this: appearing in the first
and authentic sense of bringing-itself-tostand in togetherness involves space, which
it first conquers; as it stands there, it
creates space for itself;
it produces
space and everything pertaining to it; it
is not something copied. Appearing in the
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essence of this willing."

understood)
emerges
from
an
already
finished space; it is situated in the rigid
measures of this space, and we see it by
looking toward it.
The vision makes the
thing.
Now the vision becomes decisive,
instead of the thing itself. Appearing in
the first sense opens up space. Appearing
in
the
(Platonic)
sense
merely
circumscribes and measures the space that
has already been opened.
Thus in order to encounter a kind of
thinking that does not represent to itself
what it thinks about but rather allows it
.!£. be present in its own way, that places
nothing
before
itself
(Kant's
characteristic word vorstellen, usually
translated "represent" means literally "to
place before") but rather heeds what comes
before it, we must turn to the pre-Socratic
thinkers.
And this Heidegger has done
repeatedly, with the greatest seriousness
and with the greatest and most imaginative
sympathy.
But even in Heracleitus and
Parmenides, Heidegger concludes·, "Being is
not thought as Being."
In these thinkers
there is indeed no distortion through
willfulness,
but there is a kind of
obliviousness of the mystery of Being.
What is lacking even in Heracleitus and
Parmenides is insight into the tragic
character of the thinker's relation to
Being, the insight that Being must be
thought historically with a vision to its
withholding itself from man, withdrawing
from man variously in various epochs,
thereby engendering a variety of tragedies
of thought. Heidegger, who seems never to
have given thought to tragedies of action
such as Sophocles and Shakespeare present,
regards the history of metaphysiqs not
skeptically or negatively but tragically,
as a
sequence of shatterings against
fatefully appointed limits of which the
configuration changes from epoch to epoch,
but never the immensity.
Thus his
final word on the
"willfulness" that
characterizes the traditional understanding
of thinking is this:
"The false opinion
easily arises that the human will is the
origin of the will to will.
In fact, on
the contrary, man is being willed by the
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III.

we began by considering a little the
meaning of Hegel's claim that to comprehend
the true we must begin with subjectivity of
the subject and above all must understand
subjec~ivity
as
negativity.
With the
help of Heidegger's reflections on the role
of willing within metaphysical speculation
since Descartes, we tried to see Hegel's
view.not merely as one of several important
alternatives but rather as
a
radicalization and unsurpassably acute expression
of a t!=!ndency that has been powerful for
centuries.
We have also been stirred--I at least
have been stirred--by two further claims of
Heidegger:
first, that the traditional
understanding of thinking, according to
which thinking is a kind of willing, is so
murderously destructive of meaningfulnes~
in our experience of the world that the
only hope for us is to attempt to renounce
willing, to will not to will, and then wait
to see if we can learn to let things be as
they are;
second,· that this tradition in
which thinking is at bottom a kind of
willing originates with Plato.
Although these matters are difficult to
judge, I believe Heidegger may be right in
his first claim.
I doubt that his second
claim is true.
But I think it might be
worthwhile for us now to pay some attention
to Plato's way of speaking about the human
soul. With this in view, I propose that we
look at the Timaeus.
There are several
reasons for this choice. One is that while.·
we are reading and talking about the
Timaeus, it is almost impossible for us to
forget that playfulness has a proper place
in discussions of the most important
matters. ·I fear that our consideration of
Hegel and Heidegger may have induced us to
forget this.
The Timaeus seems to me to be, in the
guise of presentation of the genesis of the
visible and touchable world, above all an
invitation to think about the human soul in·
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�offered to Socrates as recompense for his
own gift of tpe day before --something like
the
conversation
recounted
in
the
Republic--is meant to delight Socrates; and
Socrates seems to take delight most of all
in words about the human soul.
I
shall consider certain statements
about the soul contained in Timaeus'
mythical account of how soul was fashioned
·and apportioned, as well as what seems to
be implied .about the soul in Timaeus'
account of "the receptacle." But first we
must notice a remarkable feature of this
dialogue
altogether,
namely
its
undercutting of oppositions
that
seem.
familiar and well-established in other
dialogues.
Two examples seem especially
important. The most famous phrase from the
Timaeus is eikos muthos, likely story. But
27 lines after the first occurrence of this
phrase, the very same set of words is
referred to as eikos logos. The difference
between muthos and logos, so emphatically
insisted upon in other dialogues, seems far
from clear-cut in the Timaeus.
We shall
have to try to understand why this is.

not possible to place intellect directly
into body.
Rather, it was necessary to
place intellect in soul and soul in body.
Soul appears first within this account as a
bonding thing, necessary for the. holding
together of intellect and body. Even more:
Timaeus' account seems to imply that only
mortal soul can serve this function.
For
soon
we
encounter
this
powerful .
conjunction: "in order that the.re might be
mortal th~ngs and the whole might be truly
a whole."
The wholeness, the oneness of
the world is an acute problem in the
Timaeus as it is not in the great central
images of the Republic. The divided ~ine,
though it has sections, has no gaps;· it is
one continuous line.
Similarly the path
leading out of the cave into the sunlight
is one path.
But in the Timaeus we are
presented emphatically with the image of a
demiurge who looks up there to see the
changeless originals in the image of which
he fashions the material down here.
We
imagine him, as we imagine any craftsman,
looking repeatedly back and forth between
the model and the copy which i$ gradually
taking shape.
As his gaze moves between
model and copy, it encounters vacancy. Are
there two widely separated worlds, one
unchanging
and
invisible,
the .other
changing and visible, or are they somehow
one?
They are somehow one,
Timaeus'
account implies; only because there are
mortals, beings who live but do not live
forever, ·who, themselves perishable, long
for the imperishable, so that their very
longing holds the two worlds together,
bonds them into one world. We shall return
to this theme.
Various remarkable things are said by
Timaeus
about
the
fashioning
and
distribution of soul.
Let us consider
three which seem at first sight very
strange and even outrageous: the world is
an animal, the courses of the planets are
made of soul, and the soul itself is made
of music. I think that these propositions
appear outrageous only on the basis of
essentially Hegelian premisses, namely that
human beings have in the beginning a
radically negative relation to the world,
that there is no primary experience of

Again, the opposition at the he?rt of
the ~, the opposition between memory-understood as merely idiosyncratic and
closely associated with Meno' s incapacity
to learn--and recollection as the soul's·
descent into itself beyond memory, seems in
the Timaeus to be somehow undercut as we
hear of Cri tias' attempt to reach back at
once into himself and beyond himself in
order to recover an account he heard when
young from his old grandfather who heard it
from his father who heard it from Solon who
heard it from an Egyptian priest who relied
upon written records extending back 8000
years
that is, to within a thousand
years of the time of the event to be
recovered.
Let us turn now to the introduction of
soul within Timaeus' account of the framing
of the world in which we find ourselves.
The non-envious demiurge, we are told,
discovered upon consideration that among
visible things none lacking intellect is
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feeling at home in the world, but rather
one experiences the urgent need to make
oneself at home, by violent deeds of mind
and hand, in a world that is primarily
alien.
For, apart from these premisses,
what is more natural than to regard the
world around us as composed above all of
what is alive and what sustains life, so
that the cosmos would most like to be
called to ~, the living being? And can
it really be that what is alive is alien to
us? Descartes could suppose that dogs and
horses, unlike human beings, are mere
machines.
But no one, I think, who has
looked into the eyes of an injured dog he
was trying to help,
could take this
supposition seriously: in such a gaze soul
knows that it is indeed encountering soul.
Again, the soul does not seem to find
the motion of the heavenly lights alien:
we wish upon stars, wonder at times at
their special brilliance, which we delight
in pointing out to each other;
and
investigating their complex regularities
involves deep satisfaction.
So little do
we find the motion of those lights alien
that it makes sense, to me at least, to say
that their courses are made of soul.
I
have always imagined that such men as
Ptolemy, Copernicus, Brahe and Kepler must
have had deeply healthy souls and that
Ptolemy
was
speaking
from
authentic
experience when he said that the benefit of
his astro- nomical studies was to train the
imagination how "not to forget in whatever
things. we happen upon the consideration of
their
beautiful
and
well-ordered
disposition."
I think that there are elements of our
experience which Hegel explains bett~~ than
anyone else; but I do not think that
subjectivity understood as negativity and
Abraham
understood
as
the
archetypal
unhappy consciousness which refuses to be
at home in the world are models that
illuminate our experience of living under
the starry skies
and
alongside
all
manner of living things.
Finally, if Timaeus' account makes any
sense at all, that is, if soul is what
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unchangeable and that which is forever
changing, then it makes sense to say that
if soul is made of anything, it is made of
music. For in music we face the mystery of
the inseparable unity of number ratio
(logos) ,
than
which
nothing
pleases
intellect more, and sensibility of such
depth that it seems that without music we
could .hardly know who we are as. feeling
beings existing in time.
In the beginning
of Timaeus'
account of the demiurge's
introduction
of
intellect-in-soul
into
body, we hear not that the motions of the
visible world had been disorderly
in
general., but rather that they had been "out
of tune" (plemmelos).
That the soul is made of music seems to
imply that our relation to logoi, accounts
of all kinds, is inseparable from such
things
as
Critias'
memory
of
his
grandfather's eagerness in telling and his
own delight in hearing the account ··of
Athens of old, the telling itself having
taken place during a religious festival in
honor of Dionysus in which children born
duririg the year were admitted into the
companionship of the city. The question is
whether there is anything in our experience
more trustworthy than such tales, tales
inseparable from the circumstances of the
telling of them.
I think the dialogue
suggests that there may be nothing more
trustworthy.
We remember how the Timaeus
begins: "One, two, three--but where is the
fourth?"
It is hard not to think, among
other things, of the fourth--that is the
uppermost--section of the divided line.
But if the fourth section is missing, the
section in which the soul exhibits its
power of making its way "without images by
the
forms
(eide)
themselves
through
themselves,"
then
the
remaining
three
powers of the soul must somehow comprehend
the living whole which in the Timaeus the
soul faces.
But that means that pistis,
trust, has become the in-between power, the
power of the soul that sustains the
movement from consideration of image to
consideration of original and back again.
The most beautiful example I know of the
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within what seems a purely theoretical consideration occurs near the end of the
Sophist.
The
stranger
asks Theatetus
whether he like almost everyone else
supposes that the world around us was
thrown up by chance, or whether he supposes
that some sort of provident care was
involved. Theatetus, who is about 18 years
old,
says that he thinks about that
question all. the time -- what a wonderful
young. man!
I cannot help interjecting -but that, probably because he is young, he
at one time holds the one view, at another
time
the
other. · But
now,
Theatetus
continues, as I look upon your face and
know that you· think
there
has been
provident care involved, I think
that too.
The stranger replies that he
suspects that, being the young man he is,
Theatetus will always somehow incline to
that view. There is no hint of apology or
embarrassment in this exchange.
I think
that the main purpose of the Timaeus is to
speak of soul in such a way that we can see
why there should be no apology or embarrassment.
In the following Tima~us' account of the
fashioning and distribution of soul, we
have perhaps learned something about the
place -- or better, the places -- of soul
in the world that surrounds us. Could it
make sense also to speak of the places
within the soul, of shallower or deeper
places within the soul from which our words
variously come, of places in our hearts
into which we receive certain persons and
certain things?
I think that Timaeus'
discussion of the "receptacle" (hypodoche)
is an attempt to address this question.
That discussion is after all an attempt to
speak of_ a "within which," a "place,"
having "depth," prior to the existence of
body, namely at a (mythically conceived)
time prior to the introduction of regular
plane
surfaces
arranged
in
three
·dimensions.
At this time we encounter
nothing of body except certain "powers" and
"traces" (dunameis and ichn~) .
Thus the being of the receptacle is said
by Timaeus to be reachable only with
difficulty by a kind of "bastard reasoning"
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I do not know
exactly what these strange phrases mean,
but it seems clear that Timaeus does not
wish his speaking about the receptacle to
· be understood as merely metaphorical, that
is, as involving the mere transfer to
another domain of words belonging primarily
and most properly to the domain of body.

Again, there are moments during Timaeus'
account when it is difficult not to
understand the receptacle as "intellectual
soul" pure and simple. This is especially
true if one has read the third book of
Aristotle'e treatise on the soul.
That
which is to receive all incoming forms
without deforming them must itself be
perfectly formless -- this language is used
by Timaeus of the receptacle and by
Aristotle of the soul's power of knowing.
The use by both of the uncommon word
para-phainein, to appear alongside, makes
the coincidence all the more striking.
Finally,
Timaeus
passes
almost
insensibly from speaking of the receptacle
as chora,place or room, which receives all
bodies (somata), to speaking of it as the
genes of place -- roughly, the class of
place
which receives not things but
classes of things.
It looks very much as
if an attempt, perhaps bound not to succeed
entirely, is being made to speak of a way
of being that underlies the being of body
and the being of soul. We must try to see
how far we can discern the results of this
attempt.
First, however, we must backtrack and
notice two things about the introduction of
the receptacle into Timaeus' account. The
first is rather obvious. The first part of
Timaeus' account had dealt chiefly with the
things fashioned through intellect,
through nous.
Now the role of necessity
must be taken into account, since the
visible whole has come into being through
the persuasion of necessity by intellect,
so that "for the most part" the things
coming into being might be led toward what
is best.
Necessity, anank~, is said to
have the form of the "errant cause," and as
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"traces," we must invoke, not merely the
gods in general as at the beginning of the
first account, but--the words are said
solemnly, I think--God the Savior (thees
soter).
It is in connection with the
~ontation of the possibility of chaos
that the receptacle is introduced as a
third thing in addition to the model and
its copy.
But there is also a second point to be
noticed about Timaeus' second beginning.
We now distinguish in our thinking among
that which comes to be, that within which
it comes to be, and the source from which
what comes to be is born, springs forth.
"Is born, springs forth" is my translation
of phuetai. The verb phuein, from which is
formed the noun phusis, usually translated
"nature," means "to beget" or "to send
forth shoots." In the passive it means "to
be born" and "to grow. " With the use of
this word we are emphatically in the realm
of what is alive as, we now realize, was
not quite the case in the first account.
For then the two words repeatedly used to
characterize the activity of the demiurge
were plattein, to fashion by molding (the
source
of
our
word
"plastic"),
and
sunhist~mi, to bring to stand together.
We
were at bottom still in the realm of
statue-making. And surely we do not forget
that the whole "feast of words" to be
presented to Socrates was animated by
Socrates' dissatisfaction with mere statues
-- he had wanted to see something alive.
The dialogue seems to suggest that if we
are to see something truly alive, the form
of the errant cause must somehow be taken
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Let us return to the receptacle itself.
How are we to understand its receiving
function? It is said to be a place (topos)
to provide room (chora). These are rather
indefinite and neutral words.
But the
receptacle is also said to provide hedra
for all things that have birth. Hedra can
be understood neutrally as "place," but its
richest as well as its quite .frequent
meaning is "shrine" or "temple." The place
provided by the receptacle seems to be a
very special ~::me. Above all, "receptacle"
does not seem to be an adequate translation
for hypodoche, a noun formed from the verb
hypodechomai. The primary meaning of this
verb is "to welcome." It is the word that
is used, for example, in book 14 of the
Odyssey when the disguised Odysseus is said
to delight in his heart because the
swineherd Eumaeus
"knew how
to
give
welcome."
Could this strangest of dialogues be
suggesting that our world is the sort of
"within which" that gives welcome to what
is born into it;
and that there are, as
well, souls in the world which are able to
give still more intimate welcome to what
springs forth? We do after all say such
things as: "she has a place in her heart
for him." The muthos or logos presented by
Timaeus seems to me to come closer than
anything else in the Platonic dialogues to
suggesting that the place we have in our
hearts for persons and things is the very
best place to be, better even than the
hyperouranios topos,
the super-heavenly
place, spoken of in the Phaedras as the
abode of the changeless originals which
truly are. One wonders what the listening
Socrates thinks about this suggestion.

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Making Much Ado About "Nothing"
Jim Bailey

'l'he play Much Ado About Nothing
(pronounced "noting")* is all about noting
or nothing.
The word nothing has three
common uses in the play.
Primarily, it
refers to the noting of appearances which
happens whenever people interact and is
responsible for reputation and etiquette.
In short, since we interact as we see one
another, "noting" is responsible for what
we call society.
Secondly, the word
noting is used to refer to the playing of
notes.
The interaction of notes in a
symphony or dancers in a dance is used to
symbolize the way we interact.
Finally,
the play discusses whether fashion and
etiquette are nothing or merely show.
If
so, Shakespeare makes a great deal ~ut ~f
this "nothing". Much Ado About Nothing is
all about the masks, rules of etiquette
and formalities that often happen when
people come together.
Society provides a framework whereby
conflicts can be resolved (i.e. whereby
lndividuals can triumph or yield as they
~ill or must) in which each party can
maintain his integrity.
At the very
beginning of the play, Leonato, who must
give welcome to the prince Don Pedro,
gains esteem and favor rather than lo~e
face by giving much more than he is
required to.
Politeness enables him to
maintain his esteem in his own eyes and
those of others by giving of his own free
will and thus avoiding the appearance of
necessity.
Similarly,
masks
enable
the
characters
to
be
truthful
without
threatening one another's integrity and
self-esteem.
In this way, Bea.trice is
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able to tell Benedick what she thinks of
his jesting and his being everyman' s man
without having him reject her criticism,
even though her criticism does hurt him.
Behind a mask she can tell him what she
· never could tell him face to face.
Similarly, Benedick's and Beatrice's
acquaintances stage conversations within
the play to be overheard by Benedick and.
Beatrice respect!vely, to cbnvince them to
love
one
another.
The
staged
conversations enable the conversants to
speak openly and whoever is noting the
conversation to take to heart what is said
without losing face. As Hero says when on
stage before Beatrice:
"As Beatrice is,
cannot be commendable. But who dare tell
her so? If I should speak she would mock
me into air."
(Act III, scene i, lines
73-75)
Masks and stages are for the
benefit of the one noting and they enable
him to see what he would not see without
them. The characters of the play use such
appearances to smooth over and resolve
real conflicts harmoniously.
Moreover, the characters in Much Ado
About Nothing value masks because they
care about how others note and esteem
them.
People value reputation and they
often act in consideration of it. Perhaps
because of this, out of town blind dates
are the most exciting since they are not
concerned with reputation but will be true
to their desires. Being in another town,
like being unknown or behind a mask,
allows a person to act as he would not
ordinarily act for fear of disapproval.
But among neighbors most men seek to be
known or noted as they would like to be.
The honest person wears true apparel. He
appears as he is. So Hero says, "Seemed I
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was I ever otherwise?
However, just as most men strive to
present their best side to the world and
to hide that side of themselves of which
they are ashamed, so the villain only
utters the truth about himself in secret,
while he presents falsity and deception to
the world. Don John's lack of concern for
reputation (i.e. how he is seen) reflects
his lack of self-esteem or care to be
worthy of the esteem of others.
The
villain only uses appearances to deceive
and to hide his true nature.
Nonetheless,
men who deceive by
appearances, if carefully noted, will be
seen to be deformed or not quite true. In
this way the Devil is named "Deformed".
Deformed is the one who "borrows money in
God's name, the which he hath used so long
and neve·r paid that now men grow hard·.
hearted and will lend nothing for God's
sake."
(V,i,310-314)
Those
who
use
appearances and etiquette in order to
deceive, destroy harmony, and cause men
not to trust one another.
Just as Don
John leads Claudio to falsely imagine what
he cannot see clearly, all villains use
words and masks to cause men to imagine
things to be otherwise than they are. But
because
deception
depends
upon
the
deceived one's vision being obscured it
can always be revealed.
Because all
deceptions deform the truth they_ can
neither bear close scrutiny nor long
acquaintance.
Deceptions
must
be
maintained, but the truth establishes
itself. Hence, by carefully noting Hero,
whom he has known for years, the Friar
knows that she is innocent when she denies
the deceived Claudio's accusations. ,
The task of the court (as represented
by Dogberry and Verges) is to reveal
villainy by means of such careful noting.
Dogberry and Verges always say exactly the
opposite of what they mean, but their
meaning
and
intent
are
nonetheless
unmistakable.
Dogberry,
flouting
appearances by speaking words of nonsense,
forces men to observe his true appearance,
attitude and intent.
Villains, on the
other hand, distract the eye from inward
rottenness with gaudy outward show.

Shakespeare also uses "noting" in a
musical sense to refer to people's banter
and flattery of one another.
Because
Benedick's
wit
notes
or
plays
on
everything he sees, Claudio says of him:
"his jesting spirit is now crept into a
lutestring and now governed by stops."
(III,ii, 56-57)
A true wit can give
pleasure and can flatter with notes as do
minstrels. Thus, when Benedick loses his
mirth he is like a minstrel without his
lyre.
So Don Pedro says of him, "What a
pretty thing a man is when he goes in his
doublet and hose and leaves off his wit."
(V,i, 98-99)
Men flatter to pleasure
others and to be in turn well noted by
· them.A "man of note" is one who is well
noted, or rather one who is well thought
of
and
whose
praises
are
sung.
Shakespeare continues this metaphor to
describe characters who are disconcerted
or sick as being out of tune.
Certainly
when someone is out of tune he is not well
noted.
The theme of the play is strikingly
revealed
through
the
interaction
of
Benedick and Beatrice. They both think of
themselves as self sufficient and each
continually strives to maintain his own
personal integrity. Neither of them will
admit to himself or to others his want of
the other. Only when each is convinced of
the other's love does he declare his love,
and then he declares it as being for the
sake of the other.
We all have had the
experience of gaining confidence to show
our affection for someone because that
person has made some initial show of
affection.
In the case of Benedick and
Beatrice there appear to be two reasons
that
they
hesitate
to
show
their
admiration of one another. First, each is
afraid of being shunned by the other as
undesirable and thus losing esteem in both
his own and the other's eyes.
Secondly,
they don't want to endanger their high
ideas of themselves by admitting affection
for someone who 1s less than perfect.
Benedick and
Beatrice perform a
delicate dance in which they slowly unmask
their love for one another.
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Benedick says that he only
for pity and Beatrice says
only take Benedick to save
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admit affection openly, in order for each
to protect his fragile self esteem and
pride. Then, because each hears that the
other is madly in love with him, each
admits his love as being for the sake of
the other, each feeling triumphant and
confident in his own integrity.
Both
Benedick and Beatrice feel as if they can
give their love magnanimously in response
to the other's need whereas pride prevents
them from first admitting their own love.
Nonetheless,
others
have
to
praise
Benedick to Beatrice and vice versa so
that each of them can requite the other's
love without losing self esteem. Benedick
even seeks to gain face by not pridefully
rejecting Beatrice. Benedick and Beatrice
see themselves as others see them, or
rather they esteem themselves as they are
esteemed by the world.
To the end, even
after the deceptive staging of the others

is
revealed, ·
takes Beatrice
that she will
his life. (V,

Shakespeare sums up his comments on
noting and what it entails in a brief
interchange between Borachio and Conrade:
Borachio: ... thou knowest that the
fashion of a doublet, or a hat,
or a cloak, is nothing to man.
Conrade: Yes, it is apparel.
Borachio: I mean the fashion.
Conrade: Yes, the fashion is the
fashion. (III, iii, 117-122)
Perhaps this says best of all why
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CONTENTS
PRECEPTORIAL PAPER, GRADUATE INSTITUTE (SANTA FE)
"DO YOU LOVE ME?"
Kristi Ragan

ANNUAL SENIOR ESSAY (ANNAPOLIS)
REMEMBERING JERUSALEM

Christian Holland

ANNUAL SENIOR ESSAY (SANTA FE)
PURPOSIVENESS IN KANT'S CRITIQUE OF JUDGMENT Alistair Morrison

ANNUAL SOPHOMORE ESSAY (ANNAPOLIS)
MEMORY AND PERSONAL IDENTITY IN
SHAKESPEARE'S TEMPEST

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59

Arny McManus

71

Bruce Johnson

81

SOLUTION TO Tiffi JUNIOR SENIOR MATH
PROBLEM (ANNAPOLIS)

Martin Marklin

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TRANSLATION OF A FRENCH TEXT (ANNAPOLIS)

Nancy Mease

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*ANNUAL SOPHOMORE ESSAY (SANTA FE)
FOR MY SOUL IS FILLED WITH TROUBLES

*'I}Us essay has been edited. Complete copies can be found in the library.

�"Do You Love Me?"
Kristi Ragan

Many of us see a contradiction in any attempt to seriously examine the dynamics

of love as commitment.

While we publicly insist upon love's importance, we privately

bemoan the fragility and lassitude which characterize it as unable to withstand the
rigors of a serious philosophical critique . We take pains to remind ourselves of
love's stature as mere emotion and though we might make concessions for its elevated
position in our lives, love nevertheless carries that blemish which distinguishes all
emotions: lack of rationality . We see this charge in remarks like "Love is blind" ,
and "I will never understand a woman" - or if your prefer Mortimer's version: "O I am
ignorance itself in this" (H.4,P. l,III,i.210).
In the back of their minds, many
young and not so young girls believe the t eachings from Hollywood which claim that if
it is love, bells will ring and fireworks will fill the sky. Equally misguided is
the advice given by family and friends to simply not worry, because "when the time
comes, you'll just know . " Such answers make us comfortable with the idea that our
feelings are not an area in which we can employ reason to gain understanding. Yet if
knowledge and understanding are necessary for living, then by accepting this view of
love and the o t h er emotions we place a huge portion of life beyond our control.
But since we tire of pulling petals from daisies and twisting stems from apples,
we eventually come to undertake a less superficial search in order to understand what
is behind love. "How in the world could he possibly love me?" Yet oftentimes our
search ends prematurely. We sense that too earnest a searc~must surely bring with
it love's demise. To have continued seeking would have led us to the difficult position of having to accept our own worth and its accompanying responsibilities. When
we deign to reflect on love at all we often do so with an overdose of sentimentality
or with a crudely pragmatic view of economics, appearances and sexual performance.
Yet I remain convinced that thoughtful reflection upon what love is and why a person
loves is not only possible but.necessary .
Throughout Shakespeare's historical plays we rarely see men with their wives.
Di d t h e auth or mean t o s uggest by t he i nfrequency with which men discuss t hings with
women that marriage and commitment hold little importance for the larger human
community? I think not. For when Shakespeare does allow us to view the life of a
married couple, he chooses his occas.ion and characters with care.
In Henry the Fourth, Part One Shakespeare reserves the illumination of the commitment of love for his most honorable and heroic of characters, Hotspur and his lady, Kate . We have already met and been won over by Hotspur before the third scene of
Act II, in which we first see husband and wife together. Though Hotspur has sided
against the king in the upcoming battle , we have been moved to concern for him by his
total dedication to honor, his disregard for pain and danger, as well as the certainty of his commitment t o things ove r and above life itself. It is with such a man
that Shakespeare has chosen to lay bare the dynamics of love as commitment.

Kristi Ragan
Tanzania .

(M.A.

at Santa Fe , '84)

is currently serving in the Peace Corps in

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�In Henry the Sixth, Part Two Shakespeare speaks again of commitment, this time
through the wise and noble Gloucester and Eleanor, his misdirected wife.
That
Shakespeare arranged the discussions between husband and wife to take place between
two of his most magnificent characters suggests the importance of their words.
r
hope that what Shakespeare felt significant enough to merit such prominent spokesmen
will become clear through a close examination of these scenes.
The private life of a man and woman should never be a time for excluding or
becoming indifferent to the larger human community of which they form a part. They
cannot set the private wholly apart from the public. They must allow the public admission to the private-and not only negatively, as the necessary foil whereby two
people unite in a posture of "us against the world." When the private admits the
public only in this negative way the private can become little more than a time for
scheming and plotting strategies by which the two might hope to get the better of the
world. I think it is important to bear in mind this brief reminder of what private
life is ~ot as we examine Hotspur in Act II, scene III of Henry the Fourth, Part One,
since this scene occurs exclusively between Hotspur and his wife, except for a servant's interruption.
The scene opens with Hotspur all alone, reading a letter whose contents forbode
his defeat in the upcoming battle with King Henry. The author's refusal to fight incenses Hotspur and he tries to defend their plot as "a good plot as ever was laid" .
But Hotspur's defense becomes overly boisterous and repetitious: " . . . our friends
true and constant: a good plot, good friends, and full of expectation; an excellent
plot, very good friends" (II,iii,16). Such repetition belies Hotspur's trust ib the
plot and in his friends. Hotspur's reservations run deep and cause him even greater
worry because of the possible betrayal of their plan to the king.
He broods
incessantly and longs for the chance to be underway, past the point of decision, past
weighing and reweighing the variables. Hotspur cries that he will set forward that
very night and in the next instant Lady Hotspur enters.
Her entrance is perfectly timed to coincide with the end of Hotspur's soliloquy.
Is this chance, or was Lady Hotspur watching over him as she has these last two
weeks, though banished from his bed? Hotspur's uneasiness continues and he wastes no
time in blurting out to K~te that he must leave. No doubt he wants to spare her the
details of the campaign as well as the anxiety that accompanies such details. Yet
when Lady Hotspur begins to speak she makes no reference to his imminent departure.
Instead, she begins to ask a series of questions which are not really questions at
all.
Their purpose is to show her husband that she already shares with him the
burden of his worrying despite his intention to spare her. Not only do her questions
spare Hotspur the pain of having to explain his intended actions to her , but they
reinforce our impression that Hotspur's anxiety is strange and unusual.
Lady
Hotspur's pressing concern indicates that his doubts about the campaign spring from
something more than the nervousness usual before battle.
Lady Hotspur has been banished from her husband's bed for two weeks, yet she
shows by her questions that "I by thee have watched" (II,iii,44). She has observed
him sitting alone, noticed when he refused to eat, and remained with him throughout
the night as he cried out in his dreams. She has always stood close by him-so close
she could watch his uneven breathing and the sweat which formed upon his troubled
brow. By revealing her watchful caring she reminds him that she stands neither indifferent to nor apart from the suffering of his world. She has not used their time
apart to distance herself from her husband or to pity herself for this exclusion from
his world. True commitment does not allow you to stand apart from someone you love,
nor to judge them across a distance. You must always stand within the relationship
of yourself to that other and it is into that intimate sharing that you step when you
silently watch over them. Love is a sharing, a desire to be together and to make
Such sharing turns Lady Hotspur' s attention outward,
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away from her own suffering over the very real possibility of her husband's death in
the upcoming battle. Her love for Hotspur provides her with the proper external object toward which she may be turned and out of which she may form a constant relationship to the world around her.
Lady Hotspur ends her first speech by asking her husband his reason for leaving.
She correctly places the question in the context of their relationship: "And I must
know it, else he loves me not" (II,iii,61). Hotspur tries to distract her from the
question by interrupting with commands to the servant. Kate however, is a very patient woman.
She waited two weeks just to speak with her husband; another interruption does not upset her, and she simply resumes with her question upon the servant's exit. Harry continues to distract Kate with playful teasing. This forces her
to answer her own question.
She knows that part of the reason Harry is going to
fight is the responsibility to her brother that their marriage has placed upon him .
"I fear my brother Mortimer doth stir about his title and hath sent for you to line
his enterprise" (II ,iii, 78). Kate doesn't bring this up in order to try to dissuade
her husband from going. She respects Hotspur's decision and her respectful acceptance shows us that we needn't always see commitment as disruptive of purposeful
act ion in the larger human community .
Kate, by mentioning her brother, shows Hotspur that she recognizes and appreciates the sacrifice he is making for her and her family. The Tempest depicts a similar situation, in which Miranda's response recognizes and appreciates the sacrifice
of Ferdinand's dignity through his demeaning labor of hauling logs . "My sweet mistress weeps when she sees me work, and says such baseness had never like executor"
(III,i,12). The rec ognition of true sacrifice by another on your behalf causes within you a desire to join it. Just as Miranda is moved to beg Ferdinand to stop and
le t her take over his odious task, so Kate has kept sleepless watch through Harry's
sleepless nights.
I have tried to show that serious and important things are at issue in the dialogue between Kate and Hotspur . However , such lines as "Out you mad-headed ape" and
"Come, come you paraquito" seem to throw in question this interpretation of their
exchange (II,iii,74 &amp; 82). We should be careful not to judge this playful banter as
nothing more than nervous laughter designed either to avoid what's really at stake or
as their peculiar means to avoid uncomfortable good-byes. Instead, we must make an
attempt to see such lighthearted jesting as the means by which these two provide the
necessary, constructive tension through which they are able to call attention to each
other without violating the intimate and private. The question "Do you love me?" is
being forever asked and answered by such lively ribbing. Their laughter is reaffirming rather than insensitive; it highlights the importance of each to the other. In
addition, it allows each to call attention to themselves as an individual which the
other does not totally subsume. Such teasing can only be shared between two people
for whom life still holds a vital freshness.
Such jesting becomes even more important when two people stand in the larger
public community.
Standing among so many others, people in love must reaffirm
publicly that they do not take each other for
granted.
Unfortunately , they
accomplish this all too often by making the boudoir ("a place for pouting") public.
Shakespeare illustrates the imprudence of such an attempt when Glendower's daughter,
before a large group, speaks of such embarrassing things that Mortimer will not rep ly
except to say, " .
. and, but for shame, in such a parley should I answer thee"
(III,i,200). Hotspur, on the other hand, realizes that it is the fault of women to
tend toward pouting and ungoverned emotionalism (III ,i,2-38).
His teasing allows
Kate the chance to be different .
He encourages her to believe that a good
mouth-filling oath which places one's honor on the line becomes a lady more than the
singing of Welsh ditties (III, i, 251). Hot spur realizes that a quick tongue is a
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�Yet since both are inappropriate for their final good-by, Hotspur makes no mention of
his departure in public except to say to Kate, in a very low-keyed voice, "come in
when ye will" (III,i,259). He rightly sees that the place for such a parting is
private, with neither pomp nor sentimental staging. Shakespeare himself recognizes
the inappropriateness of presenting their final good-by before an audience. We trust
Hotspur and his wife alone know what needs to be said.
To complete the examination of their first scene together we must return to Kate
.and Harry and their bantering. Their teasing continues until Harry says "Love? I
love thee not" (II,iii,86). Is Harry here just responding to Kate's statement some
thirty lines before when she said, "Some heavy business hath my lord in hand, and I
must know it, else he loves me not"? (II,iii,60). Or does he intend this teasing
good-by to serve as a reaffirmation? Harry wants to make sure their love does not go
unsaid, so much so that he playfully steers their conversation to the question of
love. Although Harry calls for his horse, the next two questions which he puts in
rapid sequence to Kate suggest an unwillingness to leave until she has asked the
question "Do you love me?" - the question Hotspur so wants a chance to answer.
Kate, with an understanding of what needs to be asked, asks and asks again "Do
you not love me?" (II,iii,92). We are immediately reminded both of Miranda's persistence in asking Ferdinand the very same question as he hauls logs, and of her
reluctance to let him squirm out of answering her in any way other than with the
commitment of marriage (III,i,80-90). What significance does asking this question
hold both for the one asked as well as for the one asking?
In Lady Hotspur' s
watchfulness she has seen her husband under extreme external pressures. Only in
dreams of war do his doubts regarding the battle rise to the very surface.
He
doesn't consciously consider his reservations or his anger.
We have all allowed
ourselves at some time to be determined by the external demands which others or the
situation itself places upon us. At such times, when we seem unable to be reached,
it becomes the responsibility of those who love us most to open up and re-establish
before us the private sphere in which our commitment is most illuminated.
Lady
Hotspur and Miranda do just that by their question "Do you love me?" Without
commitment, we can only react to external pressure.
But by re-establishing
commitment, we can overcome that temptation.
We are then freed for conscious
activity. External pressures need no longer determine us, for we can see them as
necessary obstacles to be overcome in the pursuit of goals grounded in commitment.
An example of this restructuring also occurs in The Tempest. Ferdinand comes to see
his odious task as an opportunity to express both his love for Miranda and his
willingness to sacrifice himself for her.
In the same way , Kate's question requires an action rather than a reaction from
Hotspur. What he had previously sought to spare Kate he now actively strives to
share with her through his request that she follow him to battle. Recognizing that
the fullest action within a commitment is sharing, Harry says to Kate, "Whither I go,
thither shall you go too" (II,iii,109). At that moment he stands before her as free
and self-determining. Hotspur is no longer pushed by externals alone; having been
reminded of his connnitment, he becomes once again able to choose. Her question has
helped both of them recognize the importance of his going and of her going with him.
It takes great courage for Lady Hotspur to ask her husband "Do you love me?"
because this question calls for th an action from each of them.
She must examine
closely her love for Hotspur and the place that love may hold in the public world.
Such difficult self-examination requires an even more basic courage-the courage we
all need to sustain the believe that we can understand the feelings of another and
that we do not live a life completely isolated from everyone else in the world.
Questions such as these call forth from us the courage necessary for believing the
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We have yet to answer the question, why a question. The use of such a part of
speech is essential to the dynamics of commitment. For only a question can illuminate something which is before both the one asking and the one answering. Illumination differs from direct giving. It does not aim to place an object or idea directly
into another's hand or to provide an answer in a statement. Rather, it aims to
provide a shared direction in which you alone can decide to move.
The question
provides the direction and acceptance commits you to a course of action. It clears
out a space in which you may stand to answer yes or no, an answering through which
you begin to change your world. This role, which only a question can fulfill, makes
evident once again the dynamic nature of commitment as something which stands open to
reflection and has a necessary structure.
·
The playful insistence with which Kate follows her question reinforces this notion of a necessary structuring within commitment: "Well do not then; for since you
love me not, I will not love myself" (II,iii,93). The admiration of something outside ourselves which provides the structural foundation upon which we build a commitment must of necessity be matched with a corresponding assurance within ourselves.
Should Hotspur withdraw his love he knows that he withdraws the source of Kate's confidence. Reading Kate's retort again shows why love is so bound up with admiration.
"Since you love me not, I will not l.ove myself" should now be read as "If you are not
going to love me, be assured no one, not even I, will be able to step in and fill
your place in the same way as you do." When you are loved you realize that something
is offered to you which is offered to no other person in the world in the same way.
Love, when bestowed, calls attention to our special place as the beloved.
Harry mounts his horse and once upon it is able to swear how deeply he loves
Kate.. The good-by is a painful one for him. If Kate were to force him into questioning his actions further, he might easily be detained or fail to go altogether-as
the songs of Glendower's daughter lull Mortimer to sleep ( III,i,211). Harry asks
that she simply accept his decision and she does. Then Hotspur, with no manipulation
on Kate's part, suddenly says the one thing most present in both their minds:
"Whither I go, thither shall you go too" (II,iii,109). For two people who have lived
together and suffered together i t is important that their life and, i f possible,
.their death be shared.
Ovid writes of Jupiter coming to earth disguised as a beggar. Only a poor elderly couple with little enough for themselves are willing to take him in and feed
him. In gratitude Jupiter offers them the fulfillment of one wish. They ask to die
together. Having shared life through their love they wish to share death the same
way. Separation, not death, saddens them most. And so one day, barely before the
old man has time to thank his wife for loving him all these years, they grow bark and
Jupiter keeps his promise by changing them into the oak and the linden. They went on
loving right up until the very end and that ability to care made them most alive and
their life complete.
Hotspur and Kate do not differ from the elderly couple because they, too, need
to be sustained through their love. Sharing that which sustains one is the true
necessity under which commitment places you. Such sharing does not rest upon uniformity of action, bu t rather upon having the same goal guide all activities. They do
not need to be in the same place at the same time doing the same thing.
Their
sharing comes in how they see the world around them and their place within it. The
end toward which they move unites them. Sharing is the means by which two people
create their world, a building which takes place from the inside out, with a concern
for how the world ought to be as its starting point and not how the world is. The
sharing of love makes possible a belief in the transformation of the world and the
people in it. This belief is hardly different from the "Esperance" of the Percy
battle cry. This hope leads one not to deny the world, but to act in such a way that
the world is given back to you anew.
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�-transformed you must remain apart from it. To interact with the world requires a
relationship with it, out of which true acceptance is possible. A shared commitment
and desire for what's best can bring about such hope. Commitment brings with it the
recognition and pursuit of what is highest and so provides the proper soil in which
to nurture proper pride, personal dignity and honor. Such further growing shows that
commitment can never make you blind or indifferent to the larger human community.
Instead, it will move you to concern for the moral and ethical questions which you
must consider whenever you act within the world in an effort to transform it.
Through the dialogue of Hotspur and his lady Kate, Shakespeare has shown us some
important ingredients for a sound marriage. Through Gloucester and Eleanor in Henry
the Sixth, Part Two, he continues the theme, this time revealing what a marriage must
avoid.
Eleanor begins scene two of Act I in the same questioning manner that Kate employed. A closer look at the questions, however, will reveal their difference. Neither vigilant watching nor true concern for her husband's worried state produce
Eleanor's qu~stions. Nor do they demand any action in the form of an answer. They
try instead to replace the interests of her husband, which she considers of no value;
with her own ambitions. Eleanor views the ambitions of men as naive whenever they
fail to give prime importance to the favors and honors of the world. Her questions
contain no wondering about the world, but rather express a desire to look away from
the sullen earth and the people of it (I, ii, 5). Her wish to "never more abase our
sight so low as to vouchsafe one glance unto the ground" reveals her ambition as a
weapon she wields to gain superiority rather than dignity. Eleanor is not unlike the
vast numbers of people who go through life concerned only with accumulating status,
wealth or some other external standard of measurement. Such people are the true
usurpers of the common and public world. Eleanor dedicates herself solely to the
task of making Gloucester become someone he does not wish to be. To accomplish this
she must dominate her husband, make him a slave to her ambition. Such usurpation
denies a place to sharing. Eleanor's only commitment is to fully apply her energies
to her own genius. As a result, the criterion by which she guides her actions becomes pleasure. Gloucester is not unaware of this: "Hast thou not worldly pleasure
at command above the reach or compass of thy thought?" (I,ii,45). Eleanor seeks to
attain that public eminence and status reserved only for the King and Queen, confident she can fill both positions by herself. Thus she sees actions only as the means
to further her ambition. For whenever the criterion for action lies outside the act,
the act itself must be seen as a means. Eleanor's criterion lies outside her actions
since it fies only in the public reaction to them. But when you look away from the
structure of the act and its underlying principles you easily become prey to ambition, ambition in the low sense of desire for status only . No longer do you possess
any limits for your action. Whatever it takes to attain the end you accept. Eleanor
herself tells Gloucester that if grovelling on his face will win him the crown he
must by all means grovel (I,ii,9).
' Gloucester sees that his wife's reasoning "is not based on principles" and he
tries to show her such principles are necessary for guiding right action.
"O Nell, sweet Nell, if thou dost love thy
Lord, banish the· canker of ambitious thoughts.
And may that thought, when I imagine ill against
my king and nephew, virtuous Henry, be my last breathing in this mortal world. (I,ii,17)
Obedience and duty to the king guide \all Glucester's actions. He has realized that
right action according to a principle obligates a man to act in this way, even at the
risk of death. For Gloucester, individual man does not stand on the highest r ung of'
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in something higher and outside himself. Gloucester understands that only this participation constitutes excellence, not the elevation of an individual to a position
of social superiority. Although the latter path seems all too frequently chosen as
the means to excellence, it can nevertheless lead one to nowhere but greed .
Greed is the very place in which Eleanor stands. Here she stands alone, above
the reach or compass of her own thought, since she can never know when she has had
enough. Greed's inability to harbor satisfaction forces you, as taker and usuper, to
stand always in opposition to the world; this position isolates. And if you adhere
to it to long enough, it can place you forever outside the reach and help of others,
outside hope, outside love, outside commitment. You allow and encourage yourself to
be totally defined through nothing but yourself. Simply stated, the sum of you and
your world is nothing more than the singular "I". Eleanor has never allow her husband to define or determine her. She has never accepted Gloucester's interests as
her own, has never looked at the world through eyes other than her own and has never
accepted herself as a part of something outside herself. She refuses to become the
"we" that Gloucester holds out to her.
For Eleanor there is no common expression or uniting of strengths between her
and Gloucester . "Put forth thy hand, reach at the glorious gold. What, is' t too
short? I'll lengthen it with mine." (I,ii,11) By ascribing to Gloucester a crown
which he expressly rejects, she makes him appear to fall short of his proper goal and
therefore need her assistance in order to extend his reach. Such a view does not
suggest any journeying forth t ogether or sharing of a common base.
In fact, an
extension can be added in such a way that it completely undoes the original intention
because it sets off in a new direction all its own.
Such extension implies no
commitment, no sharing, no "we". The ac t ion of their hands extending together is
only a means toward the end of glorious gold. It has no true value for Eleanor and
will be unable to move her in any way toward either Gloucester or a life of
thoughtful right action. Eleanor's hand might just as well be an extension of lead
pipe for all the sharing it does.
Ferdinand and Miranda in The Tempest provide a helpful contrast to Eleanor's
vision of herself as an extension. Miranda prays to Ferdinand: "If you'll sit down,
I' 11 bear your logs the while. Pray give me that.
I' 11 carry it to the pile"
(III,i,28). She prays to make the task of the one she loves her own. She extends
quite a different off er from that which endeavors to take up only when ·the loved one
falls short so that both will be made better through the completion of the task.
.
This passage suggests a role for Eleanor which differs greatly from that of Lady
Hotspur. Eleanor's reply "Follow I must" to Gloucester's invitation to ride with him
(I ,ii, 6 ) exp re ss e s a sentiment worlds apart from Kate's reply "It must of fo r ce" to
Hotspur's similar invitation (II,iii,110). For Eleanor there is no necessity to provide the important boundaries for freedom and personal self-determination. Freedom
for her consists in the lack of all restraint. She wishes to smooth her way upon
headless necks (I,ii,65) . Her reference to necessity is sarcastic and she no more
welcomes it than she does her public penance. Necessity and principles for guiding
right action share similar places among all she holds most worthless. Rather, the
attainment of pleasure and position in an important-that is, vainglorious-cause is
more in keeping with Eleanor's opinion of herself. Eleanor echoes this position in
her advice to Hume: "Make merry, man, with thy confederates in this weighty cause. "
(I,ii,85)
Eleanor would like nothing better than to close her eyes, utter the magic words
and presto! have before her the crown for her very own. Magic contains the only
glimmer of hope in her life . It provides her with a knowledge of the future that
becomes her cornerstone for action. The present moment serves only as a means toward
an end which magic guarantees. She wishes "this world's eternity" (II, iv, 90) and
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�unable to call forth true courage and determination from within he.rself. She can act
boldly only when witches and conjurers assure the outcome. Magic enables her to believe in herself and in her own capabilities in a way which has no connection with
who she really is, or what she actually is capable of accomplishing. Magic blocks
any opportunity in which she might see herself with all her insufficiencies. Such
dependence upon magic reinforces the dangerous . tendency within Eleanor to decide and
act without the reflection and thoughtful examination which should accompany
decisions and actions.
Without such an inward looking and self-critical stance,
Eleanor need not be confronted by her own insufficiencies and impotencies. Love and
the commitment which must accompany it can off er the path to such a necessary seeing
within. Miranda comes to such a seeing when Ferdinand's love moves her to thankfully
weep before him: "I am a fool to weep at what I am glad of
At mine
unworthiness, that dare not offer what I desire to give, and much less take what I
shall die to want" (III,i,88 &amp; 93).
Love. is like nothing else; it lays bare our unworthiness and at the same time
moves us to see that not only do we have something important to give, but we are a
person worthy of being given to as well. Does not Gloucester try to remind Eleanor
of this by his continued devotion and constant declarations of love?
Whenever
Gloucester entreats Eleanor to change, he is careful to make her understand that he
makes such a request for the sake of their love and not outside of it. "O Nell,
sweet Nell, i f thou dost love thy lord, Banish the canker of ambitious thoughts."
(I, ii, 17) This is not an extravagant request on Gloucester's part. He correctly
sees that commitment involves accepting another's guidance in one's growth. This
acceptance requires the giving and receiving of knowledge about right conduct.
Even today, though both men and women take pains to insure the opposite, a commitment in marriage necessarily involves the molding of one person's character by
another. What possible sense does a marriage make in which all the energies of both
members go into preserving their own autonomies? Their concerns gradually become
turned t oward t~e maintenance of such things a s sepa r a te bedrooms, separate ambitions, separate checkbooks and separate names.
In such cases marriage provides
little more than the necessary negative fixture against which the partners may define
and measure themselves. This puts marriage in a position simila r to the one parents
and church served for most of us during our rebellious adolescence.
What does Gloucester off er to Nell that is so different from this? What place
does he hold before her when he asks, "Art thou not the second woman in the realm,
and the Protector's wife, beloved of him?" (I,ii,43). This question is the same as
Lady Hot spur's and Miranda's "Do you love me?" because it offers an illumination of
commitment . He lays out a proper direction in which commitment may steer their
lives. Gloucester does this both by reminding Eleanor of her place in the world as
an object worthy of his love, and by reminding her that as the wife of an honest Protector, she already shares "the top of honor" (I,ii,49) and should be satisfied with
such a place.
In his question Gloucester attempts to provide a proper focus by urging Eleanor
to remember his position as Protector. He does so not simply to remind . her of the
status such a title carries, but also to make an important statement regarding the
crucial place that the role of protection plays within a commitment of love.
Gloucester rightly tries to direct Nell's attention to the honor and significance of
a person who is able to provide support and nurture for a ruler.
Nell is
"ill-nurtured" (I, 11, 42) because she cannot provide such nurture for another. She
shows her refusal to recognize need in others by her disdain for the position of protector. Though worry deeply marks her husband's demeanor, she remains indifferent to
his suffering. Gloucester seeks support and comfort from Nell. He is trying to
steer her away from preoccupation with her own ambitions and back to himself and her
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"My troublous dreams this night.doth make me sad" (I,ii,22). But Nell has interest
in Gloucester 's dream only as an occasion for the telling of her own dream of the
diadem. Eleanor can provide no comfort for Gloucester. He is forced himself to ask
the significance of bis dream, a scene directly at odds with Lady Hotspur's urgent
inquiry into the troubled dreams of her husband. Perhaps wise counsel from Eleanor
about the future could have helped things go differently for Gloucester. But Eleanor
continues in her refusal to share, to give and receive support, until the very end.
Time after time she proves herself unable to accept Gloucester's advice or obey
his commands. When she declares how she would act if she were a man, she rails not
so much against a woman's place as she does against second place (I,ii,63).
Gloucester's supporting and obedient role to the king shows that sex does not restrict the role of protector, second place. Eleanor has as much trouble accepting
Gloucester playing the good wife to Henry, as she does accepting herself as like support to Gloucester. Only one role stands open for Eleanor, that of the lord and ruler who can act freely because he recognizes obligations to no one. She fails to see
the strength or courage which the care and nurture of another human being require.
Self- sufficiency is the sole resting place for strength in her opinion. By refusing
the position of protector she has refused to provide any outside, supportive force
through which her husband might reflect upon his relationship to her and the world.
Eleanor has declined to extend to Gloucester an off er of friendship through which he
may know that there is another who see the world as he does.
Through her own ambitions, Eleanor has excluded herself completely from the
world of her husband. She has fortified herself against ever having to unders t and
him, believe him, and believe in him. Eleanor stubbornly persists in excluding and
isolating herself .
She continues to stand alone as the single uncommitted "I"
throughout the ordeal of her public penance and banishment.
Even in the face of such tenacious self - absorption Gloucester never completely
abandons his wife . He refuses to pass judgement upon her in public when she is not
present , saying , "And for my wife , I know not how it stands . " (II,i,186) At her tr ial
he adds no personal condemnation to that of the law: "Eleanor, the law, thou seest,
hath judged thee. I cannot justify whom the law condemns." (II,iii,15) Once again
Gloucester turns to his responsibilities as Protector to provide the guiding principle by which to govern his actions. A protector's main concern must always be to
obey the law and so he urges Eleanor . He believes that as long as he remains loyal,
true and innocent he remains beyond the reach of his enemies. When Eleanor pushes
him to interfere on her behalf he urges her to understand the danger she would place
him in, and counsels her to display the patience of a Lady Hotspur.
Yet Eleanor cannot tolerate Gloucester's stance , which she sees as timid and
weak . While her punishment is bad , it would not be so bad if Gloucest e r would only
use it as an occasion to reaffirm by violence or dispensation her special status as
"Duke Humphrey's wife and he a prince and ruler of the land . " (II,iv,42)
In the long speech which begins around line 27 in scene iv of Act II, Eleanor
finally recognizes that she and Gloucester live in different worlds. Faced wi t h the
fact that she will never know her husband, she counsels him with the defeatist attitude of sarcasm "to stir at nothing until the axe of death hang over thee" and "to
fear not thou until thy foot be snared nor never seek prevention of thy fo e s . "
III , i v, 49&amp; 56) Such bit ter i r ony r eveals the comple te lack of hop e i n Eleanor's
life . Because her dignity depends entirely upon the opinions of others, Eleanor
stands alone and is easily crushed . We are not surprised that a woman with a spirit
completely dependent on public postur e has no capacity for enduring the humiliation
of open penance .
Eleanor can welcome her banishment and death, but never can she abide her shame
before the giddy multitude t hat only yester day followed h e r chariot wheels as she
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�husband and in doing so has declined the necessary private sphere which could sustain·
her through her ordeal. ·She does not understand why Gloucester must increase her
punishment by coming to stand in the street alongside her (II, iv, 19). To Eleanor
such an action proclaims only ignorance.
She cannot understand her husband's
willingness to risk public humiliation so that he can be with her.
She would be
'perfectly happy if Gloucester agreed to love her from a distance. She asks only that
he close himself up within his private room and nurture hatred toward her enemies
(II, iv, 24). Eleanor does not see how such hating might well banish all love from
Gloucester's heart. She does not properly value her marriage to Gloucester - exile,
with its. imminent separation, does not disturb her. Historically, men have often
perferred death to banishment, expatriation or disinheritance.
This suggests the
tremendous importance which personal relationships play in life. "Man liveth not by
Self alone but in his brother's face". When you forfeit your relationship to the
people who share your world you in effect forfeit your world, a loss greater by far
than your life.
Gloucester is unwilling to let go or distance himself from Eleanor. Though she
walks bare-footed through the streets, to Gloucester she is still "~ punishe·d
duchess" (II, iv, 7-emphasis my own) . He tries his hardest to let Nell know that in
the commitment of marriage you are never cut-off, alone and exiled. Marriage is a
covenant which binds two souls together. In that enjoining lies an affirmation which
makes possible the fullest of lives. Gloucester can find no proper words t o end his
life with Nell, for none exist. Tears are all he has to offer. They are all anyone
has to off er when caught between the eternity of commitment and the finality of separation.
Eleanor remains, embracing her shame - the only thing still with her.
Since she has lost her ambition and with it her world, she puts her remaining energy
into hanging onto her grief. · She creates a 'negative world' , a world that inverts
all that has gone before. She clings now to shame as she did once to pride. Thus
she does not need to establish a new place for herself, since both emotions center
totally upon herself. Thinking of herself as nothing but reproach ( II,iv,96), she
continues to live in total self-absorption, since both shame aii.d pride arise from
judgements of a person's worth. The dynamics and focus of these two emotions do not
differ from one another, except in so far as shame changes pride's approval into
disapprova l .
When Eleanor claims to be nothing more than reproach she does so without any
trace of repentance. She has, in fact, changed little from the Eleanor we knew before.
She remains unable to l ove or be comforted as beloved.
She cries after
Gloucester, "All comfort go with thee! " ( I I ,iv,87). She refuses both to forgive though the sheriff has asked outright for her pardon (II,iv,102), and to be forgiven
by herself or others - "My shame will not shifted with my sheet" (II, iv, 107). She
carries her shame upon her richest robes without an ounce of humility (II,iv,10 7).
She stands in need of nothing outside herself which might serve as the starting point
for such humbleness. She can extend no offer of gratitude to the sheriff for the
gentle execution of his office, since she lacks an understanding of the duties and
responsibilities which accompany any position. She continues to believe mistakenly
that the individual is all and can determine himself totally. Since she lacks vision
of s omething larger than the individual, she does not see how a person can be
anything more than those things at which he succeeds or fails. Men are neither
easily undone nor moved to vanity when they realize that their worth does not hang
upon external deeds alone.
Shakespeare forces us to accept the fact that Eleanor has not been redeemed
t hr ough her shame. Gloucester, no doubt, had the possibility of such a change in
mind when he placed Eleanor under the law and counselled the tolerant abiding of her
public penance. He had hoped that the loss of her privileged status would turn her
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knows that she has not been transformed. She has not accepted the possibility that
the loss of her "Eden of gratified desire" could bring with it "covenants of redemption and the off er of a higher, more significant life" (L. Trilling). And so, perhaps, it is ' fitting that Eleanor, unable to but command, commands Sir John Stanley in
her final lines, "Go, lead the way; I long to see my prison" (II,iv,110). This prison
does not differ very much from the one of her own making in which she has always been
and always will be confined.
Such hopeless words do not mean that our examination of the dynamics of commitment has nowhere else to go. This examination of the importance of the question "Do
you love me?" has left us with yet another important question: What can a person who
cares do when he faces another who has through self - will alone placed himself beyond
the reach of commitment?
Gloucester entreats Sir John Stanley, "I pray you use her well" (II, iv, 82). He
does not pray for change, but for acceptance: Gloucester accepts Eleanor as another
human being who, no matter what, is entitled to be used well. Prospero displays this
same recognition in his treatment of Caliban. Caliban's attempt to rape his daughter
forces him to accept the fact that Caliban is beyond his help . Yet Prosperso continues to use Caliban well by providing him with the important life- sustaining tasks of
carrying water and fetch~ng firewood. For Gloucester and Prospero such good use allows them to respond to those outside their help with something other than pity .
Gloucester's refusal to condemn himself along with Eleanor reveals another important response to our second question. Commitment encompasses suffering, but it
does not require one member to take on the guilt of the other. Gloucester refuses to
share the guilt for Eleanor's punishment which Eleanor herself charges him with ; no r
does he allow the members of King Henry's court to saddle him with the guilt of his
wife's crime . Even the Queen implies that he may be to blame: "Gloucester , see here
the tincture of thy nest, and look thyself be faultless, thou we rt best" (II, i, 182) .
He responds by appealing to his love for king and country, and the commitment both
car r y .
"Madam , for myself to heaven I do appeal, how I have loved my king and
commonweal." (II, i, 184)
Gloucester def ends his innocence not by claiming to be
perfect, but by claiming to be right intentioned.
Just as he uses his love of
country t o defend himself from this charge, so his love of Eleanor binds him to shar e
her shame.
When faced with the fact that Eleanor remains beyond his reach, Gloucester not
only refuses to condemn himself but, equally important, he refuses to condemn Eleanor
any further than the law requires . She is guilty, to be sure, but the acceptance of
necessity in man's life entails the acceptance of ·error in man . Man was not meant to
be come dependent on perfection as the only world suitable for him . To wish for such
things above everything else leaves you forever isolated and disappointed . You will
never be capable of seeing the importance of actions which attempt to make the world ,
not faultless, but only better . Gloucester's answer to the Queen shows that a man's
personal dignity cannot hinge on living a life free f r om error . We all make mistakes ; ver y little of life goes on wi t hout them, but we should r emember that one act
does not define a person . Lt is this which Eleanor forgets along with hono r and virtue (II,i , 188) . The accep t ance of man's imperfection is a necessary foundation fo r
commitment, ye t such an acceptance does not carry with it a condoning of wrongdoing .
Gloucester ' s commitment to Eleanor never rested on the perfection of the beloved .
Serious commitments can withstand many errors , disagreements and abuses.
Such things do not irr econcilably defile commitment , but rather form part and parcel
of it . The wondrous nature of love is that we can love another even in his or h er
impe r fections .
Because Eleano r stands beyond Gloucester 's reach , his love is impo t ent . He can
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knowledge of the future, Gloucester's final counsel to Eleanor and to us is to stand
firm against despair over what is to come.
Thus sometimes hath the brightest day a cloud,
And after summer evermore succeeds
Barren winter with his wrathful nipping cold;
So cares and joys abound, as seasons fleet.
(II,iv,1)
Longing for eternal perfection in this life ignores the necessity of the mixture of
cares and joys which life brings. Winter must always follow summer, as clouds must
sooner or later mar the perfect sky. Cares and joys form a part of life. Commitment's task lies not in eliminating or predicting them, but in accepting them. But
we, as mortal men, have no summer to follow our barren winter. It is only with the
possibility of a renewed commitment that for us the world may laugh again (II,iv,82).

Remembering Jerusalem
Christian Holland

Fyodor Mikhailovi tch Dostoevsky, at Omsk in the Siberian wilderness, devoted
four long years of his young life to hard labor and meditation upon the gospels and
epistles of the early saints.
Imprisoned with thieves and murderers, the persecuted
and the outcast , Dostoevsky prayerfully read sacred tales telling of God's fatherly
concern for the well-being of His forgetful, wayward, and covetous children, His
forgiveness of our sins despite our fiendish desire to kill Him, and His splendid
gift to us of salvation in the person of Jesus the Jew from Nazareth.
Dostoevsky
especially took to heart St. John's story about the wedding party in Cana, of
Galilee, by the Lake of Genesareth, where Jesus changed water into wine so that every
person present might be festive and happy.
At first with trouble and at last with
gladness Dostoevsky responded to God's messenger's voice cordially inviting him to
sit down at the seat always reserved uniquely for him, Fyodor Mikhailovitch's place
at the banquet table in the temple of the holy city of Jerusalem. Dostoevsky, like
Don Quixote, a very special reader, by way of imaginative trust in God's saving word,
came to seize upon opportunities for joy among his comrades even in the mines
underground . The writer bore his cross beautifully. Hurrah for Dostoevsky!
The Brothers Karamazov bears witness to the truth of the words which Dostoevsky
read and lived in his cell, the cheerful tidings of Jesus the son of Mary .
The
Brothers Karamazov tells how a person's right relation to God, piety (eusebeia),
alone determines his right relation to himself and his fellows in human conununity,
righteousness (dikaiosune) .
The Brothers Karamazov is a vast staging of the great
drama of the human will which shows trust in God's promise rising up against denial
of His mercy, acceptance of God's invitation holding sway over rejection of His ways,
and openness to change standing strong beside hardness of heart .
The Brothers
Karamazov acknowledges the presence of Satan's destroying temptation and God's saving
redemption of human beings in Skotoprignyevsk, Russia .
The Karamazov brothers are
true - to - life people, and I shall attend to their failings, struggles, and triumphs,
which all have to do in one way or another with Jesus Christ.
I hope and pray that
nothing I shall say will make you take offense at him, "the bread of life, the
well-spring of holiness, the giver of good gifts "(Prayer, St. Basil the Great).
i. Apostasy
Ivan Fyodorovitch Karamazov at the tender age of twenty four has already published numerous newspaper articles on street incidents under the pseudonym
"Eye-Witness" and as many book reviews on a wide range of special topics under his
own name .
Ivan prides himself on his detachment and learning, his sticking to the
facts and relating events just as they happen, his seeing things in focus from a

Christian Holland, '.84, is currently living in a monastic community at Chevetogne,
Belgium, studying the music , art, liturgy and theology of the Catholic Church, Orthodox and Roman . Christian is a pilgrim on his way to Jerusalem .

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�cannot run away from or deny his conscience without allying himself with Satan's
entourage, without turning into a monster .
Ivan's anger, grief, and despair come out into the open when he relates his
collection of anecdotes on the suffering of innocents to his younger brother in the
Metropolis Tavern.
Our piling up of suffering upon suffering, adults murdering
infants, parents inflicting abuse on their own children, is reason enough, according
to Ivan, to re ject God's creation and tender of final peace and joy . How could God,
whose fullness of being is self-giving love, create our world knowing that harmless
and vulnerable children would be mercilessly tortured?
How can He prepare for a
feast of song and dance in eternity when even a single innocent child is to be beaten
in time?
Ivan accepts that God alone could have brought life into being, but he
rejects His mysterious plan of salvation on the basis of its apparent utter
absurdity. we have been created as a mockery. We are creatures with an inborn need
to untangle the perplexing knots present in the world and in our nature, and we have
not been granted the capacity to accomplish what is uniquely our task. Our limited,
euclidean intellect yearns above all for justice and order yet at every turn meets
only with violence and chaos. What shall we say? Are we going to cling to fairness,
the source and center of human right, and still forgive the child- murderer? Ivan : "I
don't want the mother to embrace the oppressor who threw her son to the dogs! ... the
suffering of her tortured child she has no right to forgive; she dare not forgive the
torturer, even if the child were to forgive him! And if that is so, if they dare not
forgive, what becomes of harmony? Is there in the whole world a being who would have
the right to forgive and who would forgive? I don't want harmony .
For the love of
humanity I don't want it ... I would rather remain with my unavenged suffering and
unsatisfied indignation even if I were wrong."
Instead of looking for guidance from his elders and betters, people with more
wisdom and toughness, Ivan stubbornly regards with repulsion the glaring ugliness of
newspaper clippings. He won't begin to comprehend God's will and way until he moves
right up close to and touches the child's and the mother's anguish, until he enters
into it but this he refuses to do.
Ivan wrongly believes that he must abide alone
and rern~in aloof in order to gain some knowledge of the truth; he mistakenly thinks
that facts of themselves fall · miraculously together to. reveal the way things are·
Yet it is not the falsity of his position that demands our attention so much as his
unwillingness to feel what wretches feel. St. Paul: "I delight in the law of God, in
my inmost self, but I see in my members another law at war with the law of my heart
and making me captive to the law of sin which dwells in my members .
Wretched man
that r am!
Who will deliver me from this body of death? Thanks be to God through
Jesus Christ our Lord!" (Rom. 7:23-25).
Sadly, Ivan does not turn to the psalmists in his sorrow. They are struggling
with a concern which goes even deeper than the suffering of innocents: the suffering
of the righteous, passio iusti: "Many are the afflictions of the righteous, but the
Lord delivers him out of them all" (Ps. 34: 19) .
Ivan speaks as though anyone who
does approach and touch an abused child's pain will end up sharing his beliefs. He
knows nothing of what it ~eans to be a person who endures persecution and still
trusts that she is safely in the hands of the living God. The poor young girl whose
parents beat her and bind her feels God with her even in the midst of her di.stress .
Ivan does not have the ears to hear her prayers from the outhouse; he is only
embittered by them.
If Ivan would ·give his heart to a careful reading of certain
Psalms alongside the event at Golgotha -- "O my God, I cry by day, but thou dost not
answer; and by night, but find no rest" (Ps .22: 2) -- he might learn something about
graciously bearing suffering even when faced with God-forsakenness.
Jesus is the only person who has led a perfectly innocent and fully righteous
life and in his anguish to the point of death, Alyosha finds a ready-to-hand answer
'
.
to Ivan's outc ry.
Jesus the Son of God can "forgive everything, all and for all,
because he gave his innocent blood for all and everything." This somewhat groping,

distance.
Although his own discipline is natural science, Ivan is quite well known
and much talked about among literary groups, and to everyone's surprise he has even
published a piece in one of the leading journals on the question of the
ecclesiastical courts.
Ivan would have the church gain total control over the
judicial system.
With clergymen presiding over secular as well as ecclesiastical
cases, the criminal would no longer be able to appease his conscience by looking upon
his wrongdoing as a transgression against men but not against Christ.
Instead, he
would have to face the horror of being accursed by church officials:
'anathema' •
Ivan supports the transformation of the state into the church as a way to bring about
"the honest adoption ..• of the idea of the regeneration of the criminal, of his
reformation and salvation."
He is desperately serious about liberating not only
criminals but all human beings from affliction and oppression, from the weakness and
sinfulness of our past, from the unspeakable miseries, injustices, and calamities
which date back to Eve's and Adam's fall from God's grace. The narrator calls Ivan's
article "an impudent, satirical burlesque," and there is some truth to that claim,
but it does not take account of his grave concern for people's well-being.
Although Ivan writes in direct opposition to the views of a le~rned churchman,
he cleverly manages to find favor in the eyes of certain monks.
Father Paissy and
Father Iosif applaud Ivan's salvific plan without challenging him to be less abstract
and showy.
Only Father Zossima properly remarks that the church never rightly
refuses a criminal the blessed sacrament, for his spiritual health depends upon the
abiding presence in him of Jesus the healer and forgiver. St. Simeon Metaphrastes, a
sinner, prays: "Enter into my members, into every part of me, into my very heart and
soul.
Burn up the thorns of all my sinning; cleanse my soul, sanctify my
imagination; bind firmly togethe r my joints and my bones; illumine the five senses of
my body; fix my entire being in the fear of You." (P rayer, St. Simon Metaphrastes)
In response to Ivan's wrongheaded belief that the criminal's conscience can be
easily manipulated and assuaged Father Zossima tells a story about a man named Mihail
who once confessed to the holy listener a terrible crime.
Fourteen years prior to
his turnabout Mihail murderered the woman whom he loved shortly before her proposed
marriage to a nobleman serving as an officer in the army. Mihail carried out the act
with cunning and audacity enough to escape notice and direct the blame toward an
unlucky servant, Pyotr.
Being a man of strong will, Mihail almost succeeds in
forgetting his act.
He tries to avoid the past by marrying another woman.
The
opposite happens.
The beauty of his wife and the innocence of his children
continually remind him of his own vileness and unworthiness . The more others respect
him, the more he detests himself .
Mihail, haunted by blood, resolves that only
confession will bring healing and peace to his soul, but he is afraid of the evil
memory he will plant in his children's hearts.
Zossima assures him that God will
care for the children and that he must accept responsibility for his crime.
Mihail
finally admits to his guilt at his birthday celebration .
Everyone thinks him mad,
and no one believes him.
Soon after he dies reconciled to God, to himself, and to
his family and friends. Zossima was sent to cite St. Paul at the crucial moment : "It
is a fearful thing to fall into the hands of the living God" (Heb. 10:31). St. John
Chrysostom's choir sings: "Blessed are they that suffer persecution for conscience'
sake, for theirs is the kingdom of heaven" (Thi rd Antiphon, Mass of the Cat_echumens.;
Divine Liturgy).
Some day close at hand Ivan will have to endure fierce punishment inflicted by
his conscience's recognition of his sin, but for the time being he refuses to allow.
that conscience wields such power, that a person who perpetrates a crime against an
innocent will perhaps never forgive himself until he becomes aware that God has taken
him into His gentle embrace.
Ivan does not see that after a criminal act the
evildoer needs to be forgiven quite as much as the victim needs to be wept over. The
worst punishment a person can undergo com.es from within .
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inadequate, and unhelpful response to Ivan's down-to-earth pain sounds ·like a parody
of Father Zossima's dictum:
"all are responsible to all for all and everything." A
novice-like, jwnbled theological line is all that Alyosha can come up with.
It is
the only option left open to him by Ivan's obnoxiously argumentative speech.
Ivan's
story entitled "The Grand }:_~q'l!isi tor", which is intended partly to cast scorn on the
saving efficacy of Jesus' self-sacrifice, instead reminds Alyosha of the Christ he
knows and cares for, the Christ who is close to his heart, the Christ who walks
through the pages of the gospels doing nothing but good things for whoever puts their
trust in him and his Father.
Ivan's grandiose and motionless poem in prose (the Grand Inquisitor ) has as its
deepest concern a question quite simple and close to the human heart: why and how are
we supposed to go about showing care and love for our friends and neighbors? Ivan
presents Alyosha with a Cardinal of the Roman church in sixteenth century Seville
during the Spanish Inquisition. The Cardinal claims to know what love is all about
and to endure great hardships while carrying out heroic acts of virtue for the
benefit of mankind.
He burns heretics at the stake for the same devilish reason
Stalin wiped out the faithful, to obliterate any imposition or opposi ton to hi·s
salvific plan.
The questions are always the same: Why should human beings have to
suffer and go hungry?· Are there not a few powerful and ingenious enough to bring
order, peace, and happiness to humankind?
Force the masses to forget their empty
prayers and foolish songs of praise and won't we be on the r oad to blessedness? Look
around! What could be more certain than God's lack of concern fo r us? Why not curse
Him, call Him a fantasy, and set to the more urgent work of saving ourselves? Why
wait around for God's kingly rule in heaven when we can have our own blissful reign
on earth? St. Paul announces that God's glory will be fully made manifest only after
the coming of the great Gainsayer , the Anti- Christ, whose favorite disciple is the
Grand Inquisitor:
"Let no one deceive you in any way; for the day will not come,
unless the rebellion comes first, and the man of lawlessness is revealed, the son of
perdition who opposes and exhalts himself against every so - called god or object of
worship, so that he takes his seat in the temple of God, proclaiming himself to be
God" (2 Thess. 2: 3-4 ) .
The Roman Cardinal claims to be an almighty knower: one who knows what is best
for the rabble who are too weak and ignorant to take care of themselves.
Bringing
light into the pitch-black dungeon in which he has imprisoned Jesus, "the true light
that enlightens every man" (Jn. l: 9 ) , the Inquisitor speaks "openly of what he has
thought in silence for ninety years." He is convinced that his power and experience
are indubitable signs of wisdom far beyond what ordinary men possess.
With assumed
authority he argues for his so-called right to control totally their lives and their
destiny. Having lived the better part of his life as a monk in the wilderness, after
the example set by John the Baptist and the early desert Fathers, the Inquisitor has
given prolonged meditation to the sayings and doings of Jesus and his disciples as
they are related to us in the writings of the early saints. The Cardinal understands
the salvific scheme which is at the core of Jesus' message and the apostles'
ministry, and he knows it's all wrong.
Evagrius, a fourth century writer on the experiences of pious men in the desert,
talks abo ut the temptatio ns and tribulations which a monk must pass thro ugh on his
way to spiritual wholeness. Living apart from the noises and dist r actions of public
life so that he may better attend to the whisperings of his heart, the hermit's
long-suffering and arduous task is to grow to discern which voices are God's angels
and which voices are Satan's demons .
When the devil comes to test him he respo nds
with a passage from Holy Scripture especially chosen to combat that temptation. This
practice has as its theological foundation Christ's citation of Deuteronomy in
response to Satan's wilderness temptations (Matt. 4:1-11; Lk. 4:1-13).
After
receiving the gift for discerning voices and after repeatedly citing the appropriate
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become almost invulnerable to the dark whisperings of his heart .
The Father being
with him and the Holy Spirit dwelling in him, the monk is set free from sin and made
a slave to righteousness (Rom . 8:12). For: "Where the Spirit of the Lo rd is, there
is freedom" ( 2 Cor . 3 : 17) •
Ivan refers to this desert tradition when he asks the
devil of his nightmare: " ..• did you ever tempt the holy men who ate locusts and
prayed seventeen years in the wilderness ... ?" The devil : "My dear fellow, I've done
nothing else . One forgets the whole world and all the world, and sticks to one such
saint, for he is a very precious diamond . "
The Grand Inquisitor's term in the desert was a good deal longer than seventeen
year s , yet he confuses questions with temptations and he cannot discern good from
evil voices . The Cardinal reveals the fruits of his prolonged meditation
in the
context of Christ's desert temptations : "For in
those three questions the whole
subsequent history of mankind is, as it were, brought together into one whole, and
fo r etold, and in them are unified all the unsolved historical contradictions of human
nature . "
The Inquisitor does not find in the gospels truthful stories which offer
him new possibilities for living and being glad among his fellows; instead, he finds
a g r and scheme which sums up in a closed and compact formula the subterranean ways of
human beings .
The fishermen and tax- collecters who wrote the gospels astoundingly
surpass the eldest sages and most renowned philosophers with their ability to embody
in a single chapter the great riddle of human being.
Sadly , the Inquisitor cannot
open his heart to simple story- telling, an activity which seeks to enliven mysteries
in all their depth and does not anxiously strive to explain away hidden things with
an easy, clear and distinct category .
The Cardinal's condemnation of Jesus is based on his conviction that Jesus truly
loves only the elect, those fit for the eremitical life, the proud and strong,
leav i ng the humble and weak to fend for themselves and endure an eternity of sorr ows .
Je s us refuses to give up heavenly bread -- "every word that proceeds from the mouth
of God" (Dt . 8 : 3) -- in order to provide all people with sufficient earthly bread by
way of s ome spectacular marvel . Jesus allows simple, troubled folk -- you and me -freely to cho o se him as our spiritual nourishment -- "he who eats my flesh and drinks
my blood abides in me, and I in him" (Jn . 6 : 56) -- rather than stomping on our wills
by giving us an indubitable sign of his divinity, feeding us like a herd of cattle .
The Inquisitor has no patience with Jesus' way of going about doing things .
How
indeed can downcast and downtrodden human beings who are in no position to feed
themselves and their children, the poor who are always with us and the hungry who are
dying every minute of every hour of every •.• how can such destitute and despondent
people receive the benefits of the words which God has spoken through His prophets
and holy men?
How can Jesus in all fairness expect a mother on the verge of
starvation, looking despairingly upon her children's bloated stomachs, to turn aside
from wrongdoing and seek after righteousness? We might answer by saying that God has
provided us with earthly bread in abundance, and only due to our inability to get
along with one another is the wheat grown in one country held back from the needy in
other parts of the world . But a brief story hits closer to the mark.
Mother Teresa of Calcutta tells how she was once pa's sing through a remote region
of India when she suddenly came upon a village filled with starving families.
Immediately she sent trucks out for food and medical supplies.
While her helpers
were away she sat and talked with a mother of four children in her broken-down
shanty .
The trucks returned and came directly to Mother Teresa .
She set out food
for this family before moving on to the others .
But something peculiar happened.
The mother told her children to wait· and not to eat . She left the hut . She was away
for a short while and came back with the other members of the village.
Only when
they were gathered together in conununity, after offe r ing up prayers of thanksgiving,
only then did they begin to eat .
The Cardinal accuses Jesus of evildoing by treating ordinary people as if they
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�The Inquisitor condemns Jesus also on the grounds that he refuses to establish
himself as the supreme authority at whose feet all people can knowingly bow down with
reverence: "The craving for community of worship is the chief misery of every man
individually and of all humanity from the beginning of time."
Religious wars and
persecutions come to be on account of our lack of a common figure upon whom we can
all agree as being worthy of adoration.
Jesus had the opportunity to relieve our
chief misery by throwing himself down from the pinnacle of the temple, by being saved
by God's angels, in order to prove beyond doubt that he alone is the Son and that he
alone sits at the Father's right hand.
In response to Satan's test Jesus says
simply: "You shall not tempt the Lord your God" (Dt. 6:10). Jesus does not withstand
Satan's temptation as a sign for men to worship whatever or whomever they please.
Jesus believes that there is no living being worthy of our praise and adoration
except He who alone is good (Jn . 17:25-26), the Father.
Being without concern for
his own identity, for recognition as a person in his own right apart from his Father,
Jesus is never anxious about asserting who he is so that others may behold him with
wonder and amazement: "I have come in my Father's name" (Jn . 5:42); "I am in the
Father and the Father is in me" (Jn . 14:11;10:38).
The Inquisitor bitterly rebukes Jesus for never performing a miracle on demand
in order to legitimate his mission on earth. St. Mark tells how Jesus is asked for a
miracle from heaven not for the sake of doing good for someone immediately in need,
bu.t in order to place people in awe of his power, so that God might be understood as
the One who is undeniably and vividly present supporting Jesus' activity, the One who
confirms and endorses his ministry (Mk. 8:11-12 ) .
Everyone around to witness some
wonder-working sign might think for sure that this person Jesus has been sent by God
as His special agent. Without any other criteria by which to judge -- his teachings
or his holiness -- all could knowingly fall down at his feet and worship him as the
Most High. st. Mark is careful to show that Jesus declines all such offers to prove
himself before men.
Jesus knows that people without faith in his father's abiding
presence might just as easily conclude from a miracle-sign that he is Beelzebub's
agent (Mk . 3: 22) •
During his lifetime Jesus remains decidedly inconspicuous.
He
wishes us to accept him for who he is on the basis of trust alone, "the free verdict
of the heart."
The cardinal is greatly dismayed that Jesus did not come down from the cross at
Golgotha when the crowd reviled and mocked him, saying: "He saves others; he cannot
save himself" (Mk . 16:31). Jesus has the dignity of the two thieves at heart. Both
have the capacity freely to accept and acknowledge Jesus' saving presence, but only
one is good: "Jesus, remember me when you come into your kingdom" (Lk . 23:42). The
good thief is the only person of whom we can assuredly say: 'Truly, that man is in
paradise' (Lk . 23:43). The Cardinal does not recognize the dignity of the thieves'
wills.
He boasts that a person who can endure years in the wilderness need not
witness miracles, but the ordinary person longs for them with all his soul.
The
Inquisitor deceives himself in believing that he can endure Christ on the cross.
Just as ordinary looks of ordinary people do not drive home an outright worthiness,
or show evidence of love freely given through faith, so Christ looks nothing like God
on the crG&gt;ss.
The Inquisitor is taken in by looks on both accounts.
Al though he
would be the last to admit it, he desperately wants Jesus to descend and show himself
as God. The Cardinal cannot bear the burden of his own freedom, the free verdict of
his own heart.
There are signs that Ivan also needs Christ to come down from the
cross.
When he abruptly takes leave of his brother outside the tavern, Alyosha
notices that he walks with a sway and that his left shoulder is raised higher than
his right.
On the Byzantine Cross the footrest is slanted so that the raised right
side symbolizes the thief who affirms Jesus and the lowered left side the thief who
denies him.
Ivan belongs to the crowd of those who say: "Are you not the Christ?
save yourself and us" (Lk . 23 :3 9).
But there is hope. When Alyosha takes note of

hearts even when faced with death. The saints and martyrs showed themselves able to
follow Jesus out of fear and to serve him out of love, despite being persecuted and
tortured, but the common man, according to the Inquisitor, is "weak, vicious,
worthless, and rebellious ••• ever sinful and ignoble." It may be true that a Russian
soldier in Asia "refused to deny his faith, and was tortured, flayed alive, and died,
praising and glorifying Christ," but the rest of us won't stand for deprivation and
affliction. We shall do everything in our power to avoid a confrontation with pain.
If need be, we shall abandon Jesus for sausage and vodka. Suffering must be held at
a distance.
Full of anger and spite, the Inquisitor accuses Jesus of misunderstanding human
beings in a profound way, considering us capable of imitating him when we cannot even
keep from destroying curse 1ves and one another.
"By showing him so much respect,
thou didst, as it were, cease to feel for him, for thou didst ask far too much from
him -- thou who hast loved him more than thyself."
This is the wickedest and
wretchedest fact that history gives us:
Jesus did not know how to love ordinary
people.
He must therefore be of the devil.
The Cardinal suggests that Jesus is
himself the great Gainsayer who thrives on nefarious practices: "And so unrest,
confusion, and unhappiness -- that is the present lot of men after thou didst bear so
much for their freedom!" We only grudgingly persuade ourselves of our responsibility
for our sins; we allow our wrongdoing to pass by unacknowledged; we go about idly
pretending that our actions have no influence on our fellows.
In short, we forget
Jerusalem.
Why in God's name does Jesus command us to be perfect as our Father in
heaven is perfect, and to love others as He loves us (Jn.15 :1 2)?
The Inquisitor
accuses Jesus of being a criminal: "I shall condemn Thee and burn Thee at the stake
as the worst of heretics."
The Cardinal's strength and pride led him as a young man to make great demands
on himself, living in poverty and solitude, hoping that wilderness prayer would bring
him close to God and lead him to do His will. But the Inquisitor strayed from God,
opposing His will by attending dutifully to evil voices, saying: 'You are holy and
upright; you kneel and fast by seasons and years; you see the light; why isn't
everyone else just like you, a model of saintliness?'
In the desert the Inquisitor
became convinced that only mighty heroes can endure the sight of Christ's saving
agony at Golgotha . Father Ferapont's heavy chains, fierce discipline, lengthy fasts,
battles with devils, and proud self-righteousness make him one of the Cardinal's
chosen.
Attending mass, partaking in the eucharistic celebration, the central
life-receiving activity of the monk, is too commonplace for Father Ferapont. He must
be always on the watch for demons, granting no one forgiveness and accusing everyone
of sin.
Regarding Ferapont as a foolish, crazy, religious idiot, who cannot do
anyone harm, is a shade misguided.
His hatred of Father Zossima and his desire to
bring about the saintly man's downfall are significant threats to others' proper
understanding of righteousness.
People are inclined to bow down before Ferapont -"This is the one who is a saint!
This is the one who is a holy man!" -- and turn
away from Father Zossima. When Ferapont falls to the earth and waters it with his
tears, he is not embracing God's creation and he will not rise to bring forth good
fruit for the gladness of others.
He is instead passing judgement on the Elder's
premature corruption: "My God has conquered! Christ has conquered the setting sun!"
Father Ferapont yields to the most challenging temptation facing the hermit yearning
for wholeness of being and purity of heart.
After achieving a full command of
worldly voices, this ascetic comes to see himself as a strongman who has truly
fulfilled Christ's wish for him to be perfect.
Exhal ting himself and casting
despising glances at those among us who grasp needily for basic comforts, Ferapont is
in danger of being like the Inquisitor, a misanthrope, one who expects from ·others
more than they can accomplish and so ends by hating them. The Cardinal's complaints
against Jesus all recoil back on himself.

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�his disfigured brother, Ivan has his back turned, so that his shoulders and the
footrest look identical. If Ivan bears his cross well, he may some day find himself
in the hands of the living God.
Jesus by upholding freedom has paved the way for rebellion, for the clever
people in league with Satan who know what is just and best for all, for the
Inquisitor and his mighty co-workers who will finish building the Tower of Babel
which the weak have begun but cannot complete. These master builders have yielded to
Satan's last temptation of Christ in the desert by falling down and worshipping
Beelzebub, the Dragon, the great Gainsayer, who first caused the angels to defect,
then Adam, and finally the whole people of God (Schillebeeckx' Jesus: An Experiment
in Christology, pg. 277). The Cardinal and his brethren are setting out to rule the
kingdoms of the earth "with all power and pretended signs and wonders, and with all
wicked deception" (2 Thess. 2:9). Both Satan and the Inquisitor wish above all for
mankind's earthly happiness and will pay any price to achieve it, including the annihilation of all that is sacred.
The heroic proclamation of the Cardinal and the
ecclesiastical rulers is that they are doing God's work, so that the weak can rest
assured in their conviction of an afterlife filled with t he beatific vision.
The
strongmen will suffer greatly knowing that it is all a lie, but the ignorant masses
will be blessed with a life which is "a child's game, with children's songs and
innocent dance."
The rulers will bear the burden of people's sins, taking God's
place in the temple and acting proudly as saviors of one and all. Accepting without
question this clear division among human beings between the few mighty heroes and the
many weak sinners, the Inquisitor believes that he and his cohorts can take full
possession of men's freedom and force them to be obedient to "a mystery which they
must follow blindly, even against their conscience".
Earthly bread,
salved
consciences, and Caesar·' s sword are the conditions necessary for the fulfillment of
Ivan's dream of a church-governed state .
The progressive establishment of paradise
on earth has been going on, according to our young intellectual, ever since Pope
Stephen III accepted the ownership of vast property from King Pepin the Short of the
Franks in 756 shortly before the last ecumenical council recognized by the Orthodox
church in 787.
Father Zossima, who keeps an ivory Roman Catholic cross among his ikons , would
say that by perverting the representation of the true God and by pretending to be his
faithful servant the Inquisitor is in fact establishing hell on earth.
If human
beings are deprived of their ability to offer up their love freely, they are right
away placed in the burning pit. The Cardinal will set the world afire by laying down
laws to which submission is absolute and which provide a concrete foundation for
totalitarian order.· In all his wisdom the Cardinal naively dreams of determining how
the weak ought to live, what they ought to be and to do and to say, how many children
they ought to bear, and what kind of clothes they ought to wear. By returning to the
strictness of the law the great Tyrant hopes to contrive a way of correcting Jesus'
mistaken work, a way of offering salvation to people not at the end of the ages in
the celestial land of Jerusalem, but here and now in this life .
The remarkable
boldness of the Inquisitor's salvific plan consists in his claim that he can justify
his action before God on the day of the Lord. His apparent love for human beings is
of such heroic stature he is willing to sacrifice himself, to undergo the torments of
hellfire, s o that t he wea k c a n liv e in blissf ul i llusion , t a king no responsibility
for their evildoing and being deceptively self-satisfied.
The Grand Inquisitor will never succeed in hoarding all human beings into one
heap under one law by denying us the dictates of our consciences .
God has written
His law on our hearts and given each of us a conscience uniquely created to bear
witness to that law (Rom . 2:15):
"You shall love the Lord your God with all your
heart, with all your soul, and with all your might; and you shall love your neighbor
as yourself" (Dt. 6:4; Lev . 19:18; Mk. 12:29; Lk. 10:27; Rom. 13:18; Gal. 5:14). My

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conscience may lead me to follow God's law in a way different from yours, and your
conscience may lead you to follow His law in a way different from mine.
I
might
sing holy songs and you might work in a soup kitchen, or I might dig ditches and you
might lead the union .
But as long as we are giving testimony to the law, our ways
are good.
we shall never condemn or damn one another because we shall trust one
another. I shall never feel compelled to pry into your heart if I trust that you are
bearing witness to God's law as well as you are able according to the dictates of
your conscience, and fo r the same reason you shall never .feel compel~ed to. pry i~to
mine . God loves each of us in our particularity and the gift of conscience is a sign
of that love .
His love for me is different from His love for you because the drama
of my will is different from the drama of your will •. My dou?ts, anxie~ies, and fea:s
are not yours , and yours are not mine. We both require special attention, but not in
the same way.
The Inquisitor's hardness of heart will not allow him to b~ op~n to
the possibility that God bears a special relation to each and every person in his or
her particularity . He denies that with our capacity to accept God's saving help e a ch
and every human being possesses an unshakable dignity.
Ivan Joins in partnership with the Cardinal when in his other poe~, "The
Geological cataclysm", he rejects God and takes up the theme of the exhaltation and
autonomy of certain powerful and brilliant people. Ivan i~ obsessed with the. noti~n
of standing alone apart from God and his fellows.
He thinks that by asserting his
independence he is being fully himself, but he ends up showing everyone with ~yes to
see that he is desperately lonely and needy.
When he sees Alyosha outside the
Metropolis Tavern, Ivan yells out that he is upstairs in a room of his own, isolated
from the lowlife.
It turns out that Ivan is in the same room with the other people
in the tavern, with drunkards and billiard-ball players; he is only separated from
them by a screen.
Ivan tries to persuade himself that he is removed . from and
elevated above others in an absolute and definitive way.
In truth he is merely
setting up a precarious screen between himself and others which can easily be ~n?cked
ove r .
Ivan must learn the hard way that being a person does not mean attainin~ a
divine state through the human intellect . Being a person means first acknowledging
his dependence on God for being and for all good things and then acknowledging his
necessary relation to others in human community, recognizing them for who they are
and being eager to be recognized by them for who he is, Ivan Fyodorovitch Karamazov,
not some false . and imaginary superman.
Ivan's writings reveal a good deal about him but it would be wrong to judge him
on this basis alone .
It is almost always the case that what a person feels most
pressed to say or to write is what is closest to his heart. "The Gra~d I.n:ru~sitor'!and
"The Geol ogical c at ac l ysm"depictivan's v i sion of a n apocalypse , an end t i me ~hen ~11
contradictions will be untangled, all absurdities will make sense, all confusion will
be clarified, all sorrow will turn to joy, all suffering will be fruitful.
Paradoxically, the apocalypse brought about by Ivan's god-like heroes conceals the
truth from people instead of revealing it to _ them.
Ivan has spent hour after hour
poring over the gospels and Paul's letters, the book of ?aniel and. Revelatio~, but
as in his reading of Christ's temptations he seems to miss the point by anxiously
searching for categories.
Ivan wants keys to ~nlock the riddles of the cosmos so
that he can know just how everything fits together, just where everything belongs,
just who people are, what human nature is, what our destiny is, what. our s~ffering
accomplishes.
He cannot hold back and patiently wait to see how things will turn
out.
we ought not make Ivan's mistake when we try to understand him.
We have a
nasty tendency to put him into the box of intellectual pride, and leave him there, as
if we know who he is and what he is all about. Yet are we not, like Ivan, repulsed
by suffering? And do we not share his dream to make suffering go away once and for
all?
Isn't this repulsion and this dream a major source of Ivan's willfulness and
pushiness and impatience?
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�intellectual par exellence, is: Can my grandiose, brilliant , p r osaic thoughts be made
consistent with a healthy way of going about living?
If what I believe to be true
does not make sense in practice, why on earth do I believe what I believe?
ii.

Satanic Drama

Through their eloquent flow of words both speakers wish to be recognized -- the
Inquisitor by Jesus and Ivan by Alyosha -- as simple human beings who are in anguish,
not as sophisticated intellectuals who offer a convincing argument.
That the
speakers themselves would refuse to admit this is, sadly, only further evidence of
its truth .
Wherever the devil is at work, appearances deceive and complexities
abound . Ivan desperately wants to befriend his brother and even to be healed by him,
yet he goes out of his way to hurt Alyosha by uttering blasphemous words whose effect
could be to turn him away from Christ .
Ivan plays the r ole of tempter while the
Cardinal plays the role of accuser. Providentially , Alyosha and Jesus both know that
the speakers need more attention than what is being spoken about. They are pres~nt
to help heal the wounds deep in the speakers' hearts, not to argue in a trifling
manner about high-sounding topics in order to get the better of their rivals. Even
in our most ordinary conversations , those far less passionate than Ivan's and the
Inquisitor's, do we not say things that we do not mean to say but feel compelled to
say on account of a similar wound deep in our hearts? This testifies to our fallen
condition, to the activity of Satan and his entourage in our midst, whose whole
purpose is to capture slyly or violently holy Jerusalem . How crucial it is on these
all -too-frequent occasions, when the black whisperings of our hearts find an angry
voice , to have on hand a listener who recognizes that this is what is happening:
someone imaginative enough to put himself in our place: someone insightful enough to
ignore the content of our harsh , stupid words in order to attend to the true speech
of a gesture of our hand, a tone of our voice, or a glance of our eyes. Do we not
treat one another too often as machines which speak false words instead of persons
who say what is not meant? And do we not judge one another on the basis of such
treatment? Ivan and the Cardinal are favored to have listeners with places in their
hearts for others' griefs .
Ivan acknowledges the presence of grace in his midst,
saying: "If I am really able to care for the sticky little leaves I shall only love
them, remembering you, Alyosha."
Ivan's yearning for the sticky green leaves, springtime, and the blue sky show
that God has blessed him with love of life and joyfulness .
Yet on account of his
ongoing frantic search for fonnulas , for a neat ittle box in which he might lay to
rest the horrors and calamities of the world, Ivan tends to deny his thirst, the
source and center of his human being .
Alyosha's awareness of the importance of
loving "with one's inside, with one's stomach" leads him to command Ivan to relax his
struggle with the meaning of life and to "love life, regardless of logic .•. it must be
regardless of logic, and it's only then one will understand the meaning of it."
Alyosha's simple words hit closer to home than Ivan's grand words. Truly, we enter
into the mystery of being alive by going about doing things with freshness and
gladness: hiking in the woods, cooking for friends, playing Mozart sonatas, greeting
strangers, spreading hope, in short, doing God's will .
Ivan's difficulty is that he
has to observe coldly the meaning, he has to factualize it, before he can enter into
the act of living . He stubbornly refuses to believe that acceptance of grace, bowing
to God's creative saving activity, must go hand in hand with belonging to any
mystery.
We cannot solve life's mystery.
It is not a puzzle.
we can, however,
belong to it, leap into it by singing and dancing, and suffering.
God being the
source of life, a person can peaceably let things be by trusting in His goodness.
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hiddenness, and so he recklessly goes around imposing his own will on others and his
own categories on the world, dead to hope and charity. Dmitri is referring to more
than Ivan's closedness when he call him "a tomb." Ivan: "I want to travel in
Europe ••. yet I know I am only going to a graveyard ••• precious are the dead that lie
buried there .•• ! know I shall fall on the ground and kiss those stones and weep over
them ••• I shall steep my soul in emotion."
Jesus tells a parable about a sower who goes about sowing his seeds in
abundance. He sows his seeds all around regardless of the ground they fall upon, so
that some farmer standing nearby might laugh at him for his apparent carelessness.
Some seeds fall on rocky ground, others among thorns: some fall on dry, infertile
soil, others on rich, moist soil. Ivan will fall as a seed on rocky European ground,
watering the stones with his tears. It is scarcely possible for such a seed to bring
forth fruit.
Ivan is himself the stony ground who does not nurture the growth of the
seeds of grace that are implanted in him time and time again. He betrays his native
Russian soil by setting himself apart from and against God, the Holy Trinity.
Instead of striving to be like the Russian peasant woman who with simple faith lights
candles at church in remembrance of Christ's sacrifice and in acknowledgement of His
Spirit's divine presence, Ivan wishes to steep himself in the memory of European geniuses, some of whom tried to kill God with their bludgeonous words and to enforce
their salvific rule on men with their satanic wills.
The Russian peasant woman's
emotion is wholesome; her tears bring life to the goodness of her heart. Ivan's
emotion is troublesome; his tears inflict injury on the goodness of his heart and
seek to bring about its death. Trapped in the pit of self-laceration -- our hideous
tendency to destroy ourselves just to feel something vibrant -- Ivan is burdened by a
"great grief". He sways between belief and disbelief, hope and despair, love and
hate, life and death: he is torn between God and Satan, pious humility and titanic
pride.
Ivan cannot decide whether he is going to head for Europe to join the ranks
of the almighty knowers, Satan's crowd correcting Jesus' work, or whether he is going
to remain in his homeland and yield to the simple cheerfulness of his native soil .
Father Zossima, the great reader of souls, addresses Ivan's unhappy uncertainty and
indecision: "You know that is the peculiarity of your own heart and all its suffering
is due to it. But thank the Creator who has given you a lofty heart capable of such
suffering; of thinking and seeking higher things, for our dwelling is in the heavens.
God grant that your heart will attain the answer on earth, and may God bless your
path." Ivan, aware of the presence of grace and holiness in the person of Father
Zossima, "rose from his seat, went up to him, received his blessing and kissing his
hand went back to his place in silence." The "finn and earnest" look which comes on
Ivan's face after this his most open-hearted gesture, is a sign that he may some day
gain "the assurance of things hoped for, the conviction of things not seen" (Heb .
11: 1) .
Ivan may never fully accept God's saving help, but he most certainly will
never reject it out of hand.
Pe,rhaps he will gaze upon the beauty of repentance,
will raise up his dead, his peasant simplicity and gladness, in the future, but for
the time being all that he sees is ugliness and degradation.
The image of his
father's vileness and buffoonery is always present to · Ivan as a warning not to thirst
too strongly for too long. He will dash his cup to the ground at age thirty for fear
that his quest will no longer be urgent and his passion will degenerate into mere
sensuality.
Loathing his father's reckless debauchery, Ivan condemns him as a man
who has no attachment to higher things. The portraits of the bishop and the prince
which hang on his father's living-room wall are a farce and a mockery. The old man
lacks all nobility.
Fyodor Pavlovitch Karamazov's words and deeds attest to the activity of Satan's
disciples in our world, those uproariously hideous beings who wreak havoc at every
opportunity, who give free play to their insatiable desire for devastation, who seek
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�all that is beau tiful, ail that is God 's doing, f o r the v ery reason t h at it is s uch .
Fyodor was devilishly drawn t o I v an's mo t her b y her yout h ful b eauty a n d i nnoce nt
piety . An orphaned girl of sixteen , t o rme nted b y her benefactre ss, Sophia looked t o
Fyodor f o r affection and stability when he rescued her from the general's widow a nd
e loped with her.
Instead, after Ivan 's birth a year later, Fy odo r, with t otal
disregard f o r family life, began to act out the part of a
"le c herous fien d" a nd
"vicious prof l igate." Under the influence of lustful demons Fyodor h o sted o r g ies and
c arnivals, b rin ging whores and clowns into the home o f the timid and g ent le So phia,
who at the time still had Ivan at her breast. Having been "kept in terror from her
c hildhood" by the steady work o f Satan's demo ns, Sophia, exhausted a nd frighte n ed,
breaks under their destroying power. They enter ' into her and show themselve s in her
"terrible fits of hysterics." Fyodo r's grotesq ue revelry, his unwillingness t o offer
kindness and love to his own wife, finally drives her to her grave at the t e n d er age
o f twenty-four.
The inhabitan ts of Skotoprigny evsk are at a l o ss as to why I v an h as retu r ned t o
his h ometown i nste ad o f going o ff to Europe t o swear an oath of allegiance to Satan's
salvific plan.
One hidden reason might . be Ivan's remembering that at his a ge h is
mother died in this village.
Ivan may hav e a subterranean desire t o take ve ngeance
o n his father.
He is filled with h o rrib le memo r i es dating b ack to his i n fancy,
which, unbeknowst to him, smear hatred in his s o ul and find a bitter voice in his
insulting name for Fyodor and Dmitri: "reptiles." Ivan lashes out at the suffering
o f inno cents from afar. Now he is righ t up clo se t o one of the t o rturers. What will
h e do? Allow his brother t o devour his father? Ivan sees an angel in Father Zossima
and a devil in Fyodor, and like Ferapont, he chooses to concern himself with the
fiend i n stead o f the seraph .
Fyodor is called by the narrator a Roma n o f the decadent perio d.
At t h at time
it was customary to stage the shameful actions of the pagan gods as a form o f
dramatic worship.
The plays showing the gods raping and pillaging, killing and
stealing , were, sur prisingly , not an offence but a propitiation .
The devils' own
crimes were used as material for celebrating their praises .
Satan's followers "used
their influence even to sow and cherish profligacy, by appointing that deeds truly or
f a lsely ascribe d to them b e published to the people by means o f theatrical
exhibitions, and by gratuitous ly fanning the flame of human lust with the breath of
seemingly divine approbation" (St. Augustine's City of God, III) . Taking delight in
their evildoing, these malignant and deceitful spirits---even today whisper tempting
words which tickle our ears and bring pleasure to our imaginations.
Fyodo r pays
homage to this crowd of demons by going about playing r idiculous parts, telling
stor ies of his own humiliation, reveling in his own disgr ace , and parading "his woes
with embellishments . " When a comic role is up fo r grabs, Fyodor, desperately t r ying
to make · himself agreeable, is always prepared to make himself the object of laugh ter.
Miusov nicknames Fyodor 'Aesop' in response to his fables and 'Pierrot' in respo nse
to his clownishness.
Father Zossima says that Fyodor plays the buffoon because he is deeply ashamed
of himself and because he wishes to fulfill other people's expectations o f who he is,
as if he were fixed and immovable with no capacity for change, as if making dumb
jokes at rich men's tables were all he could do . Miusov anticipates that Fyodor will
do o r say something scandalous and repul s ive at the monastery. He blushe s when he is
associated with Fyodor and refuses to admit that Fyodor is his relation.
M u s ov is
i
frightfully anxious about looking bad in the eyes of other s.
Yet his perverse need
to witness Fyodor being the buffoon he has sized him up to be takes precedence, so
that he plays the fall guy for Fyodor j ust to confirm his own convictio ns about
Fyodor's sottishn~ss, and ends by looking bad, which is what he wanted most t o avo id.
Dev ils play cruel tricks aiding people in self-destruction.
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because in so doing he b r ings violence upon himself . Devils s mile upon the fantastic
s pectacle of a ma n g iving and r eceiving abuse with the utmost pleasure . Fyodor want s
and needs a cceptance, affir ma t i on , and love, but he does not know how to communicate
h is wan t s and needs to othe rs. He t r ies to get othe r s to join i n ·h i s sensuality so
t hat everyone may e n ter into the dar kness toge t her . He tries to offe r to others the
bene fit s o f h i s yea rs o f p r ofligacy because that is all he has to o ff e r. Fyodor h a s
done n o t h i ng els e with his time . Now that he wishes to share his age- earned wi s dom
with other s , what else can he do? When Father Zossima rep r imands him fo r lying , he
is sever e, but all the same he has a soft gleam i n his eyes . He knows somethi ng Ivan
does not : a pe rs on cannot r ightly be judged by his deeds alone .
Be s ides being a
dis r u ptive sot who a r ouse s contempt and loathing in other s , Fyodor i s a human b e ing
with a c a pacity to wor k out his difficultie s and change h is ways .
His mo st
dest r uctive lie con s ists in pers uading himself that he is not f r e e, that h e is a
buf f oon and the r e is no getting a r ound i t .
Soon a f te r Father zossima rebukes Fyodor h e is conf r onted by anothe r per son
engaged in the elabor a t e activity o f self - deceit , Mme . Hohlakov .
She s peaks of he r
l a ck of faith , oligopistis , a s king fo r tangible p r oof that the soul is by n ature
immor ta l; for her anguish and mise r y , she claims , are a consequence o f this
uncertainty , the te r rible thought that the grave might be the end , nothingness .
Fathe r zossima sees that the woman 's suffer ing is genuine , but not for a moment does
he believe that what she says is the cause is the cause .
A per son can no more be
judged on the bas i s of wo r ds alone than on the basis of works alone .
Mme . Hohlakov
has to lear n that concer n with what happens to the soul after death can be idle a nd
can p r event a human being from living fully in the present . She is not tormented by
anything so removed and abstract as the state of the soul apart from the body .
If
she wer e , s he would worry more about the scalding pit than about eternal sleep .
Yet
even here the difficult thing t o face is not hellfi r e , but the awful fact that the
life we lived was untr ue , that we did not r ightly understand anyone or anything, that
we were b a d to othe rs and bad for others because we were just plain wrong about how
to go about being good .
Father Zossima tells a story about a pe r son created with the power of saying , "I
am and I love," and set upon the ear th only to be g r anted an instant of "active
living love . " But "that unhappy creature rejected the priceless gift, p r ized it and
loved it not , s corned i t and r emained callous . " How unbearable for any human being
to appea r befo r e Christ the Judge in His full glor y, the pe r son who loved us so much
that he d i ed for us , without ever having made a sacrifice of living love for the sake
of His name , without eve r having acknowledged the gi f t of the Holy Spirit and without
ev er having t ake n t he opportunity to act kindly .
Such a per son , when face to face
with the Give r of the gift and with the human beings who loved him despite the f a c t
that he despised their love , must suffer horribly .
Now that he sees the beauty of
repentance, of allowing himself to be made a living sacrifice by God's grace, it is
too late to do anything about it . What greater sorrow than to have God say : 'What
was uniquely yours to do you did poorly . ' And what g r eate r joy than to have Him say :
'What was uniquely you r s to do you did beautifully . ' Mme. Hohlakov has the powe r to
say, "I am and I love , " as we all do, and only by r epeating this to herself over and
over again , and doing something about it while she still has the chance, will she
become convinced o f life after death .
Father Zossima :
" I f you a ttain t o perfect
self- forgetfulness in the love of your neighbor, then you will believe without doubt,
and no doubt can possibly enter your soul . " Sadly, Ivan and Fyodor a r e not p r esent
t o hear these words .
Mme. Hohlakov , like Ivan , whom she r espects g re a t ly , and the Inquisitor, i s full
of love fo r humanity , f ull of dreams of s elf- sac r if i ce and of saving t he afflicte d
a nd g r ieved . Fa ther Zo s sima once k ne w a doctor, a cleve r man, who felt the s a me way ,
but d is cove r ed somet h i ng ami ss: " the mo r e I love humanit y in gene r al , the le ss I love

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�of Christ in the desert.
He cleverly tries to avoid responsibility for Fyodor' s
death by asserting that he was only an agent putting Ivan's teachings into practice:
"you murdered him; you are the real murderer; I was only your instrument, your
faithful servant, and it was following your words, I did it." Ivan, being tempted at
his weakest and most vulnerable state, almost believes that he has gained complete
mastery over another human being, that he is fully responsible for Smerdyakov' s
actions. Srnerdyakov may be sketched as the living embodiment of all that is base and
ugly in Ivan, but he too is a person in his own right, and not merely Ivan's double.
Thinking that he has imposed his will so fully on the sequence of events leading to
his father's death that he alone is properly to blame, Ivan comes perilously close to
denying srnerdyakov's personhood, to denying that Srnerdyakov has a will of his own.
The Inquisitor for his part claims that he can take total control of his subjects,
implying that they can give up their ability to choose freely in the knowledge of
good and evil. He is wrong. As persons we must retain our capacity to repent of our
evildoing; we must take responsibility for our own actions; conscience demands it.
smerdyakov kills himself in part to punish himself for what he knows was his own
doing. The Cardinal cannot even rule over Smerdyakov. The best he can hope to do is
rule ove r a crowd. Devils support crowds and themselves make up a crowd. Angels and
saints support communities and themselves form a community.
Kolya Krassotkin is involved in the same satanic drama when he undertakes to
shape the character of his younger friend (Ilusha) . Kolya is fully confident that he
knows better than Ilusha what is good for the boy. He wants to whip Ilusha into top
form and make a man of him. Wishing to avoid all 'sheepish sentimentality', he is
cool in responding to Ilusha' s endearments.
For the three days following his and
smerdyakov's cruel trick on Perezvon Ilusha is downcast, dejected, and remorseful.
Hugging Kolya and shaking all over, Ilusha confesses his crime.
Kolya knowingly
decides to keep silent around Ilusha and treat him contemptuously until he shows
signs of a change in his ways. Kolya actually believes that what he is doing is for
the boy's own good. He considers himself Ilusha' s master and savior. But Kolya does
not know what he is doing, and he ought not to be so confident that he has the
special gift of seeing into Ilusha's heart. Kolya is a merciless master when he is
training Perezvon, but the dog takes a perverse delight in being abused. Dog s can be
mastered by human beings, but human beings can be mastered only by God. Along with
Ivan, Kol ya must learn to treat othe rs with dignity and respect and not go about
imposing his own will on his friends as if he were their superior.
Along with
Fyodor, Kolya must control his fiendish tendency to make a big sensation, to do
s omething theatrical just to stir up an effect, to be conspicuous. His need to be on
stage prevents him from bringing Perezvon to Ilusha's bedside early enough possibly
to save him from death.
Both Ivan and Kolya are extremely bright and tend unfairly to use their intellects as show-pieces. While desperately grasping for superficial forms of attention,
adoration and applause, they grow to mistrust their urge for tenderness and
affection.
Ivan and Kolya are gravely mistaken in making an unbridgeable division
between the life of the intellect and the life of the heart .
Pascal for his part
would bring l' esprit de finesse under the domain of the heart, and set aside only
l' esprit de- geometrie.-When he says, le coeur a ses raisons que raison ~ connait
point, Pascal must mean, l'esprit de fin~se ~ ses-r~ons que ..!.' esprit de geometrie
ne connait point.
Likewise, when the commandment is given, "to fear the Lord your
God, to walk in all His ways, to love Hirn, to serve the Lord your God with all yo~r
heart and all your soul" (Dt . 10:12), the intellect need not be mentioned because it
is contained by the heart.
So much of Ivan's suffering, his madness in particular,
seems to arise from his sense of grandeur and superiority at being a thinker and not
a feeler.
Even when his heart is wholly present, as when he speaks about the
suffering innocents, he does his best to hide it by giving a coldly detached account

men in particular ... the more I detest men individually, the more ardent becomes my
love for humanity."
Ivan desperately wants to see suffering ameliorated and evil
obliterated for the love of mankind, but he never will.
At his worst moments he
believes that he has the strength to accomplish this salvific task, yet he abhors
his father's company and despises his brother's reckless abandon.
What super-might
does Ivan possess for the salvation of humanity when he cannot bring himself to be
kind and giving even to the people closest to him in blood and heart? Ivan and the
Inquisitor, and maybe Mme. Hohlakov, share a lofty disdain for the masses no matter
what they say about their concern for the weak.
By considering themselves superior
to ordinary men, being independent and without sin, by considering themselves
superior even to Jesus Christ, they make it impossible for themselves to enter into
active love, sharing in conunonplace, dirty suffering, and touching feeble, infirm
human beings.
The Cardinal, Ivan, and Mme Hohlakov, for all their knowledge and
wealth-perhaps because of it-are dreamers, not doers.
Father Zossima has words for
such people: " ... love in action is a harsh and dreadful thing compared with love in
dreams.
Love in dreams is greedy for immediate action, rapidly performed in the
sight of all. Men will give their lives if only the ordeal doesn't last long but is
soon over, with all looking on and applauding as though on stage. But active love is
labor and fortitude, and for some people too, perhaps, a complete science."
Dreamers cannot endure the prospect of giving and not receiving a proportionate
measure in return.
In the Inquisitor's salvific scheme the mighty insist on being
glorified as saviors for their suffering; their own salvation consists in being
worshipped. Heroes are people who make their great works manifest in public (andreis
epiphaneis), which is why there is no such thing as a sanctified hero .
The pious
person who truly loves and serves God always wishes to be inconspicuous and never
wishes to be adored. Certain saintly people make themselves seen and known, but only
because their action redounds for the benefit of others .
Mother Teresa inwardly
possesses the true spirit of active love and outwardly has the business down to a
science.
The Inquisitor of Seville sits high on his throne ru ling as a cowardly
tyrant with absolute authority over his subjects .
Mother Teresa of Calcutta gets
down on her hands and knees and bravely scrubs the floor as a servant to the sick and
the dying. That woman's toughness makes Ivan look like a whimpering boy~
Mother Teresa's spiritual fruits arise from and are consistent with her trust in
the teachings of Jesus Christ .
Ivan, although he has the cunning and audacity to
write "The Grand Inquisitor" and "The Geological Cataclysm", has not the conviction to
put his teachings· into practice .
The di vision between what he will allow in his
words -- "everything is lawful" -- and what he will allow in his works causes a rift
in his entire being .
It comes as no surprise that Ivan the hypocrite eventually
suffers from madness.
He insists upon the stubborn nature of his euclidean
intellect, which cannot withstand the absurd, yet he himself is a living paradox,
saying things he doesn't really believe, things whose practical application would
result in anarchy, nihilism, and parricide .
It so happens that there is a
literal-minded lackey around who will without hesitation carry Ivan's sayings into
action, and Ivan must be held responsible for carelessly tossing his prosaic,
elevated words in every direction and letting them fall on the receptive ears of
smerdyakov .
Ivan playfully amuses himself in conversation as if his words had no
deep and .abiding influence on others; he makes outrageous claims just for an effect
as if his brilliance were an excuse for his arrogance. What infuriates Ivan beyond
all telling is that Srnerdyakov, a born slave, should consider himself to be in
partnership with Ivan, the ubermensch, that his hyper- grandiose notions shoul~ be so
easily put into practice by a low, cowardly dandy . Ivan must come to terms with the
banality of · his own heroic ideal.
His talk with a devil who is nothing but a
tasteless bourgeois serves this purpose all right.
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of what he has read in the newspaper.
If only Ivan could come to see that the life
of his heart and the life of his intellect are not all that different, and what
difference there is requires the heart to take precedence over the intellect, then
perhaps he would be at peace with himself and others.
If Katya can show him warmth
and kindness, and if Ivan can openly receive her warmth and kindness, maybe some day
he will gladly hear Pascal's words: C' est le coeur qui sent Dieu et non la raison.
Voila ce que c' est que la foi.
DieU-seriSible au coelir;" non a--rai"sOil: ('Pensee #424).
Neither can Smerdyako;t"S cleverness be separated entirely from the activity of
his heart.
Smerdyakov puts his whole trust in Ivan as in "God Almighty," saying:
"What frightened me most was losing you and being without defense in all the world."
Smerdyakov'sthoughts and actions emerge from his feeling of kinship with Ivan and his
desire to raise him up to glorious heights.
He wishes by means of the murder to be
saved by Ivan for the rest of his life, gaining stable friendship, support, and
protection. His killing Fyodor is not a coldly, logically arranged act.
It's an act
of desperation. After making Ivan waver back and forth between belief and disbelief
in now Dmitri and now himself as the murderer, Smerdyakov discovers that Ivan is no
hero, but just a confused, frightened, guilt-ridden young man.
Ivan will not uphold
his position on lawlessness, and Smerdyakov feels, in his hot-stoved, hellish room
with bugs crawling on the deep blue peeling wallpaper, utterly betrayed and alone.
Smerdyakov was convinced of his special rapport with Ivan, of Ivan's consent in and
encouragement of the murder when he left his father defenseless to go off to
Tchermashnya. But now, after Smerdyakov did what he thought had to be done, Ivan is
giving him blows and accusing him of a crime and calling him the devil, "a dream and
a phantom."
Remorseful and haunted by his wrongdoing, feeling that it would have
been better if he had never been born, Smerdyakov hears the devil's voice speaking to
Ivan: " ••. hesitation , suspense, conflict between belief and disbelief is sometimes
such torture to a conscientious man like you are that it is better to hang oneself at
once." Father Zossima believes that there can be no one more miserable than a person
who commits suicide.
He prays inwardly for suicides all his life.
Smerdyakov
rightly enters into our prayers.

The devil appears to Ivan just after Smerdyakov' s death,

employing tactics

similar to Smerdyakov's, forcing Ivan to think him now a phantom and now a living
being.
Despairing of the necessity of giving his allegiance either to a God who
allows children to be tortured or to a devil who is petty and mischievous, Ivan is
tempted by evil whisperings in his heart: "I shall sow in you a tiny grain of faith
and it will grow into an oak-tree -- and such an oak- tree that, sitting on it, you
will long to enter the ranks of the hermits in the wilderness and the saintly women;
for that is what you are secretly longing for. You'll dine on locusts, you'll wander
into the wilderness to save your soul."
The devil hopes to get Ivan alone in the
wilderness so that he can work on him day after day the way he worked on the
Inquisitor.
The desert, despite the devil's presence, can be a holy place for
certain special people to offer prayerful reverence and worshipful devotion to God .
Life in the wilderness precedes and anticipates life in the promised land (Ex. 34) .
But the hermit must be prepared to lose fully his worldly, imaginary, own self, so
that he may gain fully his true self through the in- dwelling of the Holy Spirit. The
hermit must wish above all for the death of his own will so that God's will may be
done in him. A seed must fall t o the earth and die before it can bring forth fruit
for the gladness of others .
Despite every appearance to the contrary, the monk's
life of solitude is a life devoted to others, a life of compassionate dedication to
his fellow human beings, for he is ever mindful of our afflictions in prayer and sub
crucis sacramento.
It is comforting to know that pious people are praying for us
every minute of every hour of every •..•• Carthusian monks, who live as hermits but
gather together three times a day to sing the holy office, are buried without their
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God keeps for them in secret until the last day of mercy (Rev . 2 .1 7) •
The whole
eremitical life of a monk is devoted to being fully open to the reception of that
name when the time comes.
Clearly Ivan is far from being ready to enter into the
wilderness, ho eremos, only to be unknown and forgotten with Him .
If he were to
attempt to live as a solitary person in search of God, it would be for all the wrong
reas ons, as the devil knows.
It would be a self-preoccupied attempt to save his own
soul and would lead to a more severe madness-beyond- pride than that which Ivan
suffers from at present. No human being has power over his own salvation, or anyone
else's, difficult though that may be for the likes of Ivan Fyodorovitch and Katerina
Ivanovna and Kol ya Ivanovi tch to accept .
The devil is behind all such attempts,
laughing hideously at their futility and folly.
Katerina dedicates herself to the man who makes a practice of humiliating her.
"I want to love you forever," she feverishly writes to Dmitri , "I want to save you
from yourself." Katerina in truth wants to exalt herself in the midst
of Dmitri's
infidelity and sensuality.
Her prideful nobility reaches extremes worthy of Ivan:
"I' 11 be a god to whom he can pray -- and that, at least, he owes me for his
treachery."
Whence arises this satanic drama, this mad desire for glory by saving
othe rs?
Whence arises our need to be on stage acting as though we are humbling
ourselves for the good of others when in truth we are anxiously seeking to exhalt
ourselves at the expense of others? The Inquisitor, Ivan and Katerina all try to
hide their limitations from themselves and disguise their faults as blessings.• They
view themselves as heroic, self-sacrificing beings attaining perfection in dramatic
anguish.
They are deeply troubled.
"Perfection is not for those who strive to feel
and look and act as if they were perfect ••• Perfection is not for those who isolate
themselves in ivory towers of imaginary faultlessness ••• Perfection is not for those
who live for themselves alone and occupy themselves with the embellishments of their
own souls"
(Me rton , The Silent Life).
Although their hearts are filled, with
conflicts,
doubts,
hatreds,
jealousies,
fears,
anxieties,
contradictions
and
uncertainties, the Inquisitor, Ivan, and Katerina labor under the profoundly illusory
conviction that they are gods and that the cosmos is centered around their saving
activity . Of course it would be foolish to say that they each consider themselves to
be the one and only true God.
If this were the case, they would seek to destroy one
another like pagan deities. Although we have a lacerative tendency to hurt the very
people we love most, Ivan and Katerina, the laceraters par exellence, keep from
carrying their drama to this extreme.
Yet in their desi re to be 'as gods' -- a
lasting deformity impressed upon human nature by the fall of Adam and Eve -- they
yearn for omnipotence : " •.• the power to have everything we want, to enjoy everything
we desire, to demand that all our wishes be satisfied and that our will should never
be frustrated or opposed .
It is the need to have everyone else bow to our judgement
and accept our declaration as law.
It is the insatiable thirst for recognition of
excellence which we so desperately need to find in ourselves to avoid despair.
The
claim to omnipotence, our deepest sorrow and our inmost shame, is in fact the source
of all our sorrows, all our unhappiness, all our dissatisfactions, all . our mistakes
and deceptions.
It is a radical falsity which rots our moral life in its very roots
because it makes everything we do more or less a lie" (Merton , The Silent Life).
Ivan's borderline insanity is a telling sign that he almost submits heart and soul to
the absurd fantasy that he is omnipotent, that he lives, like the schizophrenic, in a
world of his own making, a world ove r which he has total control and in which
whatever he says goes without question. When Smerdyakov says that Ivan more than his
brothers is his father's son, he means that Ivan goes around lying to himself about
himself all the time just like Fyodor.
The devil himself, who bears a startling
resemblance t o Fyodor in body and to Smerdyakov in soul, helps Ivan see that he is
living a lie.
But what next? Once we discover that we cannot save ourselves, o nce
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iii. The Salvific Figure

Jesus questions his disciples, saying: "Who do people say that the son of man
is?"
(Matt. 16:15). The disciples have heard some say of Jesus that he is John the
Baptist, while others say of him that he is one of the other prophets. Why do people
think that Jesus is someone he is not? Why in particular do they think that Jesus'
message and ministry is akin to that of John the Baptist? Unless we are able to
understand and trust Jesus as a quite distinctive figure, we may forever rely upon
our own needy selves for saving gladness and truth , only to find damning sadness and
falsity.
John the Baptist cries out with a loud voice and makes his home in the
wilderness.
He is an ascetic and a prophet of gloom:
"You brood of vipers!
Who
warned you to flee from the wrath to come? Bear fruits that befit repentence, and do
not begin to say to yourselves 1 'We have Abraham as our father'; for I tell you, God
is able from these stones to raise up children to Abraham. Even now the axe is held
to the root of the trees; every tree therefore that does not bear good fruit is cut
down and thrown into the fire" (Lk . 3:7- 9). John's preaching consists in a warning
to the unrighteous, to everyone, of the approaching, wrathful, justly vengeful
judgement of God. Jews as well as Gentiles even now, and more so on the last day,
stand or fall depending upon our commitment during our lives on earth to the one true
God.
This commitment involves bearing testimony both in word and in deed to the
presence and the glory of the living Father. John establishes a bond between a person's being in the world here and now, in this very place at this very moment, and
his being either saved or damned at the end of the ages. Our spiritual condition in
time determines what will be our spiritual condition for eternity. John's baptism,
which is with water, is important for our salvation; it makes a difference on the
last day because it is a sign that we have allowed our hearts to be changed by God.
All human beings possess free wills, so we all have throughout our lives the
capacity to yield to God's saving goodness by repenting of our transgressions and by
acknowledging our dependence on Him for help . As long as a person has the power to
repent no other person can judge whether or not he will be condemned, and every other
person must deem him worthy of love. Thus Smerdyakov, who until the end possessed a
free will and the capacity to turn to God when called, who indeed may have left
evidence of his repentance in the form of St . Isaat the Syrian's writings, is worthy
of our love .
John calls for repentance in the context of the judgement already in effect and
the judgement soon to come. Jesus, on the other hand, sees the salvation of human
beings in the context of God's infinite mercy, graciousness, and love . Reading from
the book of the prophet Isaiah, Jesus speaks of himself as a servant of God :
The Spirit of the Lord is upon me,
because He has anointed me to preach glad tidings to the poor .
He has sent me to proclaim release to the captives
and recovery of sight to the blind,
to set at liberty those who are oppressed,
and to proclaim the acceptable year of the Lord. (Is . 60: 1-2; Lk. 4:18)
Jesus chooses to read from this passage so that he may teach those in the synagogue
who he is: one who makes people glad and whole; one who sets them free; and one who
invites everyone to a great feast of fellowship at God's table in the temple of the
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the words which Jesus sees fit to close the book upon, are: " ••• and the day of
vengeance of our God" (Is . 60: 2) .
At this early stage of his mission Jesus
pronounces upon the time of God's acceptance of us and invitation to us -- the year
when Jesus himself is with us and for us in the person of the Holy Spirit so that we
may be healed of the wound deep in our hearts -- but he remains silent about the
Lord's day of which Amos speaks:
Woe to you who desire the day of the Lord!
Why would you have the day of the Lord?
It is darkness, and not light;
as if a man fled from a lion, and a bear met him;
or went into his house and leaned with his hand against the wall
and a serpent bit him.
Is not the day of the Lord darkness , and not light,
and gloom with no brightness in it? (Amos 5: 18-20)
Jesus is no prophet of woe; he is no ascetic; his home is not in the wilderness.
He is the bearer of tidings of great joy; he is an eater and a drinker; his home is
the festive table at which people from every walk of life gather together so that we
may join in fellowship and celebrate all the good things which God has provided in
abundance for our well-being.
According to Jesus, God freely gives us a just and
reasonable expectation of a time of everlasting rest and peace. Jesus shows us, in
the drama of his birth, teaching, ministry, suffering, death, and resurrection, that
the living God , the Lord of history, is engaged in a saving activity which is
directed toward a state of final good for human beings, a state in which the Father
is fully manifest to his children and the children are fully reconciled to their Father.
According to the Baptist, all men are in a condition of apostasy and all men are
in need of a change of heart, a return to the righteous and faithful Father .
A
person cannot, however, bring about this change by himself.
Repentance is a free
gift from God which we either accept or reject. Jesus acknowledges the truth of this
teaching -- not with regard to himself but with regard to the whole of Israel -- by
commanding John to baptize even him , a man who knows no sin (2 Cor . 5:21).
Jesus
demands from Israel a new confrontation with the living God .
He goes about doing
good things for people in trouble on the sabbath so that everyone may see that God is
still, even now at this moment, active in our world: "My Father is working still, and
I am working" (Jn . 5:18). The Pharisees seem to wish that God would stay out of the
picture so that what has already been established, what is known and secure , the law,
which indeed is "holy and just and good" (Rom . 7: 12) , may be followed, and so that
they may be confident in the righteousness of their own doings . The Pharisees hear
Jesus' tidings , but they are not receptive to his gladness .
st. Mark chooses the
event of Jesus' healing of the man with the withered hand on the sabbath to announce
that the Pharisees are plotting Jesus ' death.
Jesus himself, just prior to making
the wounded man whole, shows orge, the wrath of God, because he is astonished at the
hardness of their hearts. The Pharisees seem to be afraid of the holy power wielded
by this simple, obscure , inconspicuous man, a carpenter's son, who is active for only
a few years.
Behold my servant, whom I uphold,
my chosen, in whom my soul delights;
I have put my spirit upon him •.•.•
He will not wrangle or lift up his voice,
or make it heard in the street;
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�and a dimly burning wick he will not quench •.• (Is. 42 : 1- 3; Matt . 12)
Jesus questions his diciples, saying: "Who do you say that I am?" (Matt . 16:16).
This is the question to which some, having been filled with God's grace, answer with
fearful and loving faith and thankfulness, and to which others, having been filled
with the vain imaginings of their own hearts, answer with prideful and despairing
hatred and ingratitude. This is the question to which everyone must finally respond,
in one way or the other, for there is no in between, as Jesus himself says: "He who
is not with me is against me, and he who does not gather with me scatters .
Therefore, I tell you every sin and blasphemy will be forgiven men, but the blasphemy
against the Holy Spirit will not be forgiven . And whoever says a word against the
s on of man will be forgiven; but whoever speaks against the Holy Spirit will not be
forgiven, either in this aqe or in the aqe to come." (Matt . 12 : 30 - 33).
Jesus begins to sound less gentle and more severe . But how can it be otherwise?
A person who does not answer Jesus with trust and hope -- "You are the Christ, the
son of the living God" (Matt. 16:16) -- denies the power of the Holy Spirit, which
amounts to rejecting the source of all forgiveness, for the Father has sent the H~ly
Spirit to us in Christ's name so that we might share in the forgiveness of sins by
being united with Him in remembrance of Jerusalem (Jn . 14:26) . The sin against the
Holy Spirit , actively seeking to turn the faithful away from God by mocking them and
persecuting them and hating them, must be the one unforgivable sin.
How can the
person who willfully refuses to accept forgiveness be forgiven? That there are such
people, people who claim to have no conscience bearing witness to their evildoing,
who claim to be a law unto themselves with no responsibility for others, who claim
complete independence for themselves, who claim to be without need of others'
forgiveness, who have no desire to let their hearts be changed, who have no wish to
be self- forgetful and self- giving in the love of their fellows, who are, in a word,
incorrigible, is a sad fact. Father Zossima : "O, there are some who remain proud and
fi e rce even in hell, in spite o f their certain knowledge and contemplation of the
absolute truth; there are some fearful ones who have given themselves over to Satan
and his proud spirit entirely . For such, hell is voluntary and ever consuming; they
are tortured by their own choice .
For they have cursed themselves cursing God and
life .
They live upon thei r vindictive pride like a starving man in. the desert
sucking blood out of his own body.
But they are neve r satisfied and they refuse
forgiveness.
They curse God who calls them, they cannot behold the living God
without hatred, and they cry out that the God of life should be annihilated, that God
should destroy himself and his own creation. And they will burn in the fire of their
wrath forever and yearn for death and annihilation . "
St . August · ne cal s th · s
condition the deathless death. Sadly, some seem to live in hell on earth, victimized
by a stubborn and anxious need to deny their own freedom to do good .
Jesus' sayings and doings make clear for us the already operative kingly rule of
God .
His acts of healing, casting out devils , forgiving, showing compassion,
nourishing, eating dinner with sinners and publicans, b r inging good cheer to
prostitutes and tax- collectors, all these acts and more, are signs of God's
beneficent intentions for us regardless of our fallbacks and shortcomings and
marble- heartedness .
Jesus wishes his joy to be in us so that our joy may be full
(Jn . 15 : 11). Wherever he goes, gladness abounds . He comes to us so that we may have
life, and have it in abundance (Jn . 10:10) . Just having this person around is a good
thing .
It is that simple . Jesus invites us to stop and consider that our presence
also, among our schoolmates and families and friends, even among our enemies, is
either a good or a bad thing; there is no in between; we either negatively influence
or positively influence whatever community it is to which we happen to belong . He
also invites us to stop and consider that it is not enough for us to go around
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us to do so; we must healthily share in one another's suffering too, because beneath
our laughter there is usually, if not always, some hidden pain. Unlike John, Jesus
proclaims the p r esence of God's kingly rule even on earth, and in doing all things
well, he demonstrates in the very manner of his living what this r ule involves.
Unlike Ivan, the content of Jesus' teaching is revealed in his deeds .
There is
nothing in the least bit inconsistent about his sayings and his doings. Jesus simply
come s to do God's will on earth (Jn . 4 : 34; 5 : 30; 6:40).
That is that.
The
inconspicuous and mild activity of Jesus Christ makes manifest with splendor and
might God's free and unconditional willing of good, His boundless, unquenchable love,
for us, even you and me.
Jesus' simple and humble parables reveal that the deepest, most mysterious
things can be found in our ordinary experience if only we care to look and b e
attentive . These stories invite us to think for ourselves in an open-ended way. we
may find ourselves trying to hold on to conflicting interests.
At one time we may
think or feel one way and at another time we may think or feel another way about the
same issue or event or position. Isn't that how life presents itself to us from one
day to the next? There is no definitive structure or system built into the world or
the act of living.
Spontaneity and openness bring about the large part of our
decisions, actions, and conversations. We therefore ought to be ready to make the
most of whatever may come our way . We may become accustomed to looking at the world
this way or that way, considering ourselves to be restricted by our past, or bound by
our few talents, or limited by our surroundings, hut even in the midst of what is
most familiar new possibilities for living are always available.
The story of Don
Quixote is a beautiful telling of this truth. Jesus' parables also tell us that we
can always come up with new ways of going about doing things, new ways of caring for
friends and pleasing strangers . On the whole, these stories encourage us to act in a
way quite different from our usual way, not for the sake of being unconventional, but
simply because it is a good thing to discover what a wonderful freedom we have to do
good . But this is by no means easy. We must approach the world with a heart which
is prepared t o be transfigured.
The parable of the dinner party is partly about a feast at which the crippled
and the lame, the sick and the hungry, those who ordinarily are not granted
sufficient attention, are honorably seated at the table.
Jesus hosts and serves
people who are considered anathema by the religious community of his day.
He joins
in companionship with the outcast, with those who are ignorant of the law.
Without
hesitation he comforts the afflicted and the needy.
Jesus does not hold back in
order to determine whether people are rich or poor, successful or not, educated or
not , members of this faction or that faction , pretty or plain , useful or not , worthy
or unworthy.
Jesus simply does God's will on earth, µot because he feels obligated
to do s o or because he anticipates receiving s ome reward, but because doing God' s
will on earth, al though only som~times joyful and also sometimes sorrowful, is yet
always good. Jesus cuts· across barriers o f class and politics. He seeks t o bring an
end to relationships among human beings which are founded on the domination of one by
the other. He is just as much at ease with women as with men, with people in power
as with people without it .
Power does not corrupt him as it does other people.
Jesus encourages us to serve one another in kindness, for this is a way to show
service to God, and to l ove one another in hope, f o r this is a way t o show love for
God .
Jesus invites everyone to the great feast of spiritual fell owship al\d he
himself serves everyone at the table .
None are refused entry and none are cast
away.
We may show up dressed any way we wish, but it is better to be pleasing in
God's sight .
St . John Chrysostom's choir sings: "The Lord is compassionate and
merciful; He is long-suffering and abounding in mercy" (Byzantine Liturgy).
But are we then to think that Jesus, with whose life and death and resurrection
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�day, and evil men to be punished for their evil works? Aside from our difficulty in
judging who is good and who is evil-since we all are a different mixture of each,
what is good and what is evil-since what is good for one is not so for another, we
can at least say this much, that if the human will is free to choose between good and
evil works, then rewards and punishments are just. But the simple truth is that all
good things come from God .
Merely because a person's will is free, it does not
follow that he has the capacity to choose or to do good without the aid of God's
grace.
The exercise of the will in its freedom toward goodness is a human being's
doing only insofar as he opts not to resist the grace being offered to him at every
moment of every hour of every ••••• by God .
And this opting not to resist, this
yielding to God's saving activity is not a meritorious act, so that God's mercy and
love alone are responsible for a person's being good.
Only because God freely
chooses to look upon us as righteous are we righteous . St. Paul keeps away from the
word 'works' when speaking about justification. He makes a distinction between works
of the flesh ..:._ "fornication, impurity, licentiousness, idolatry, sorcery, enmity,
strife, jealousy, anger, selfishness, dissension, party spirit, envy, drunkenness
carousing, and the like" (Gal. 5 : 20) -- and fruits of the Holy Spirit -- "love, joy,
peace, patience, kindness, goodness, faithfulness, gentleness, self- control" (Gal.
5 :·22). St. Paul does speak about faith accomplishing good works through love (Gal.
5:6), but this does not alter his right belief that faith alone justifies (Gal.
2: 16) •
The word 'reward' in the context of our final well - being ought to be banned from
our vocabulary.
God's
righteousness
and
faithfulness
are
hyper-exceedingly
magnificent and glorious precisely because we are undeserving.
What a remarkable
thing that God knows t he evil imaginings of our hearts, hears our voices cursing Him,
railing against Him, misrepresenting Him , and, instead of smiting us with His wrath ,
He saves us with His mercy.
Salvation, found in the small acts of kindness in the
piety of daily life as well as at the festive table of the messianic banquet, is the
work , astounding beyond measure , of God's bountiful car e for us .
He gives us fi r st
place in a race we have lost. It is as if He were to walk into a courtroom with all
of us guilty sinners present, pronouncing the verdict: 'Innocent, Righteous, Jus tified.' Sadly, punishments are deserved, "because the unfaithful receive not the
love of the truth that they might be saved" (2 Thess. 2:10).
Jesus' question -- 'Who do you say that I am?' - - demands a response from all of
us, from you and from me, now and again, time after time, for the duration of our
lives .
It is not a question to be summarily answered, set aside, and ignored. When
we address the question we either accept more deeply or reject more soundly the
mystery of Christ's saving fellowship . We are always either on our way toward him or
on our way away from him .
This is not to say that the r e are just two ways of
standing in relation to Jesus. There are as many responses to his question as there
are persons willing to give utterance to what is in their hearts. And if we give one
sort of response today, we may find ourselves giving another sor t tomorrow, for we
are the kind of being who can receive the strength to accept being accepted by God.
Father Zossima: "I predict that just when you see with horror that in spite of all
your efforts you are getting further from your goal instead of nearer to it -- at
that very moment I predict that you will r each it and behold clear ly the miraculous
power of t he Lor d who h as b een a ll t he t ime lov ing a nd my ste r iously guiding you. "
'Who do you say that I am?' I cannot answer for you and you cannot answer for
me.
Each of us must be left to ourselves so that we may give the question the
careful heart-felt thought which it demands and deserves. Responding to Jesus in my
limited, human way, I shall say : 'You are the one who summons me to put my deep and
abiding trust in the hidden and living God; the one who works for my joyfulness and
wholeness, delivering me from distress and wrongdoing, releasing me from the chains
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I may be free for others as a friend and ready servant, encouraging me to bear
others' burdens with them; you are the one who commands me to commit myself and to
pray to our Father, to put my faith in God not grudgingly and with hesitation but
gladly and with abandon; the one who journeyed to Calvary for my sake, who died on
the cross so that I might be washed clean; you are the man of sorrows, the one who
carried my griefs, was wounded for my transgressions, was bruised for my iniquities,
the one through whose stripes I am healed (Is . 53: 3- 6); yet I hold you at a distance
and in low esteem; I turn away from your suffering as one repulsed and I cannot bear
to look upon you ; wretch that I am, I forget you holy Jerusalem, though you descended
into hell for my sake; you are the one whose entrance into the flesh I celebrate at
Christmas and whose glorification of the body I celebrate at Easter; the one who
tells me to stake my life on the new p r omise of salvation which is offered to me i n
the drama of your passion, death, and resurrection; you are the one who says, "unless
a g r ain of wheat falls into the earth and dies, it remains alone; but if it dies it
brings forth fruit" (Jn 12:24) . You are the Christ, the son of the living God . '
Jesus' concern will finally be with justice, but , as long as he is with us on
ear th his concern is not with justice so much as with joy, rendering joy to those who
hardly seem worthy to feel joy and giving gladness to those who have nothing to b e
glad about:
"He who abides in me, and I in him,he it is that bears much fruit, for
apart from me you can do nothing" (Jn . 15:5) .
A line from St. Mark's gospel
especially reveals the character of Jesus' saving activity, of Jesus himself, who he
is.
After Jesus heals a deaf and dumb man, the people who witness the event are,
says Mark, "astonished beyond measure" (hyperperissos exeplessonto) , and they say of
Jesus : "He does everything beautifully" (Kalos pan ta pepoieken, Mk. 7: 37) • Such a
gentle man, and yet he can with good reason be mistaken for John the Baptist :
"You
brood of vipers! How can you speak good when you are evil? For out of the abundance
of the heart the mouth speaks" (Matt . 12:34).
It is a sign of his perfect holiness
that Jesus can be both extremely gentle and extremely severe, that Jesus can both
keep the silence of a lamb and speak with the voice of a judge. How else could He
accept and endure the passion and the cross?
How else could Jesus, when that
t r oubling . moment at Gethsemane arrived, pray: "Abba, Father, if you are willing,
r emove this cup from me; nevertheless not my will , but your will, be done" (Lk.
22 : 43; Matt . 26 : 39; Mk . 14 : 36) .
Jesus i s a Jew, searching out God's will in everything; yet he has a unique
rel a tion to God, calling Him Father , Abba . Father Schillibeeckx tells how at Jesus'
time Abba was a famil i al term denoting a child's earthly father, the teacher and
figure of authority .
The word did not occur at all in prayers addressed t~ God.
J esu s ' genius s t a nds o ut s ole l y on the g r ounds of praying to God as Abba.
The
uniqueness of his relation to God lies in its 'unaffected simplicityi-:- Jesus
identified his heart and his life, his whole being as a person, with his Father. He
so t r usted the abiding presence and concern of His Father that He acted upon His will
even to the point of suffering an excruciatingly agonizing and humiliating death, a
death by crucifixion, "a stumbling block to Jews and folly to Gentiles" (1 Cor.
1 : 24) . Jesus' death is offensive to the Jews partly because a man hanged on a tree
is accursed by God (Dt . 21 : 23), and to the Gentiles partly because crucifixion is the
mos t scandalous form of punishment in the Roman kingdom, a punishment reserved fo r
the lowest o f the low, rebels and thieves, a punishment no Roman citizen ever has to
endur e .
Jesus fully manifests God's saving love for human beings with His death on
the c r oss, for only by way of His perfect sacrifice do we attain to reconciliation
with God and do we know that God so cares for us that He is willing to give His only
Son f o r our we ll- be i ng : "God shows His love for us in that while we were yet sinners
Chr ist died f o r us " (Rom . 5 : 8) . Our faithful response to Jesus' question -- 'Who do
you say that I am? ' -- involves accepting the g r acious gift God gives to us in the
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the cross, whose saving efficacy frees us from the stronghold of sin.
Christ
crucified is bearing all our evils -- from our fall out of Eden until the last day -so that they may be nailed to the wood and die with him: "For our sake God made him
to be sin who knew no sin, so that in him we might become the righteousness of God"
(2 Cor. 5:21). The salvific figure on the cross is so defiled and smeared with black
that God His Father forsakes him at the moment of His death. Jesus' death is like no
one else's. He is utterly alone, forsaken not only by Roman citizens, fellow Jews,
and his disciples, but also by the Person who sent him to walk among us and be with
us, the Person whose will it was that he should undergo such horrifying suffering
precisely because of his perfect righteousness and blessedness.
During the
preparation rite of the holy eucharist in the Orthodox church, the priest says: "The
Lamb of God who takes away the sins of the world is slain for the life and salvation
of the world" (Byzantine Liturgy, St. John Chrysostom).
St. Mark puts it simply:
Jesus is "a ransom for many" (Mk. 14: 24) •

witness to Christ crucified and risen, for He cares more about our salvation than we
ourselves do .
iv. Redemptive Drama

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He was oppressed, and he was afflicted
yet he opened not his mouth;
like a lamb that is led to the slaughter,
and like a sheep that before its shearers is dumb,
so he opened not his mouth. (Is. 53:7)
The original, old- fashioned meaning of the word 'redemption' (Latin, redernptio;
Greek, apolutrosis) is 'a buying back' or 'a loosening away from.' By being baptised
with the Holy Spirit we are bought back by God, loosened away from Satan, purified
and created anew so that we may be united with Christ and share in the death "he died
to sin" and the life "he lives to God' (Rom . 6: 10) .
Although we are not worthy to
receive the redemptive power of Christ's sacrifice, yet there it is, a free gift, and
by way of it we become God's adopted children, gaining spiritual health and true
piety, "for the righteousness of God is by faith in Jesus Christ upon all them that
believe" (Rom. 3: 22).
And belief entails hardship: "For all who are led by the
Spirit of God are sons of God ••• When we cry 'Abba! Father!' it is the Spirit himself bearing witness with our spirit that we are children of God, and if children,
then heirs, heirs of God and fellow heirs with Christ, provided we suffer with him in
order that we may be glorified with him" (Rom. 8: 14-17) .
Faith in Jesus as the
Christ,· the son of the living Father, not merely as a means to salvation, but as the
Way, the Word who became flesh and tabernacled among us (Jn. 1:14), involves
suffering unto death, so that we may walk in "newness of life" (Rom. 6:4).
Again:
The seed t h at falls to the e arth and dies brings forth fruit .
Although God reconciled us to Himself through Christ's "fragrant offering and
sacrifice" (Eph. 5:2; 2 Cor. 5:18) the death of Jesus is by no means the end of the
matter.
For: "Jesus was put to death for our trespass and raised for our
justification" (Rom. 4: 25).
Jesus' Father is the God of the living, of Abraham,
Isaac, and Jacob, not of the dead. God benevolently wishes to continue our lives so
that we may be with Hirn in Christ Jesus and His Holy Spirit .
It is not a question of
our souls possessing the nature of being immortal. Spiritual resurrection is simply
God's way of doing good for us in this life; and bodily resurrection is His way of
doing good for us in the life to come.
Mut ual r ecognition of unique p ersons by
unique persons which can be accomplished only if each one of us retains our
distinctive look, is of utmost significance in Christ's kingdom.
Just as Jesus
arises out of our memory in the Spirit into life during the celebration of the
blessed sacrament, so we shall arise out of our ever- mindful-remembrance of him into
life in His divine presence at the great eschatological feast.
Jesus overcomes sin
with his death, and he overcomes the penalty for sin, which is death, by way of his
resurrection.
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Drni t r i Fyodorovi tch Karamazov possesses his mother's hot temper, boldness,
impatience, impetuosity, impulsiveness, frenzied vigor, and strong build, and his
fathe r 's reckless lust - - al though Mi tya' s sensuality is refined by a passionate
adoration of beauty and nob_ ty. According to legend, as soon as Adelaida ·married
ili
Fyodor, .(of cour se they had to elope), she grew to loathe the "abject, vicious,
fantastical fellow" and his "persistent and shameless importunity." On occasion she
even beat Fyodor, showing him to be a "worthless puny weakling . " Dmitri shares his
mother 's repulsion for Fyodor and her tendency to be violent with him.
When
Adelaida , in one of her enigmatic fits of passion, ran off with a "destitute divinity
.student" to her ignominious death, she left the newborn Mitya with his father.
But
Fyodor carried on in his customary manner, hosting orgies and playing the buffoon, so
that he completely forgot about Mitya.
Miusov is fond of telling the exaggerated
sto r y about Fyodor' s surprise at discovering one morning after waking. up with a
terrible hangover that he had a son . Fyodor doesn't just have a few cocktails and
fool around a bit; he immerses himself in debauchery and al together neglects his
r esponsibility, except, of course, when it comes to his business dealings.
After
being passed from Adelaida to Fyodor, and from Fyodor to Grigory, Miuzov takes
custody of the child .
But he too, although he remembers his part in the February
Revolution of 1848 all his life, forgets Mitya, so that Miuzov's cousin has to take
charge of the poor boy. Finally, after the death of this kind woman, Mitya is raised
by Miuzov's cousin's daughter, Mitya's mother's second cousin, once removed.
Life
does not begin smoothly for Dmitri Karamazov.
Adelaida came from a rich, distinguished, noble family, and before her death she
bequeathed a small property including a house and some land to her son.
Dmitri ,
however, when he came of age, was serving in the Caucasus as an army officer, so
Fyodor took possession of Mitya's inheritance and wired money to support the young
man's r iotous exploits , his dr inking, gambling, and womanizing. Surprisingly enough ,
Father Zossima's youth bears a striking resemblance to Dmitri's.
He too was the son
of a landowner, served in the Caucasus as an army officer, and outstripped the other
members of his regiment in "cruel, absurd, almost savage" practices . Father zossirna
always kept the Bible at his side but during his bout with "drunkenness, debauchery,
and deviltry" he did not pick up the book and r ead. So it is with Dmitri. He hold's
God's glory close to his heart but he has a long way to journey before he will be
able to accept his lot in life, what God has planned for him and him alone.
Father Zossima passed through a period of ferocious anxiety and misery before
his change of heart . He had to give his orderly Afanasey two terrible blows to the
face before he could see the black- smeared manner of his living, before he could feel
what a fearful thing it is to fall into the hands of the living God (Heb.10: 11) .
God's grace was at work even in the young officer's fit of violence.
Thanks to
Afanasey's stupid yet brave reception of his master's blows, zossirna could be struck
by such concerns as:
'What am I worth that another made in the image and likeness of
God s hou l d s e rve me? Ought I not to bow down and beg my se rv ant 's f o r giveness ? Am I
not the greatest of sinners? More than any other am I not responsible to all for all
and eve r ything?' Only by way of this awful event do the tender and life - giving words
of his dying b r other Markel return to Zossirna with such force that his ways are
altered for good .
Shall we not praise Af anasey and seek to imitate him by being
ready at all times to receive blows so that others whom we care for might through the
recognition of their weakness and wrongdoing turn to the Father for help and
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-- Mitya's stomping on his father's face is not enough for him -- but Dmitri's change
of heart will be just as dramatic.
God works on everyone in a way particularly
suited to and designed for them, and them alone.
Zossima needed Markel's holy words
and Afanasey's peasant toughness.
Dmitri will require Grigory's blood, Grushenka's
love, his father's death, and more, before he will be able to gain the courage to
sing his hymn.
With an anvil-ding
And with fire in him forge thy will
Or rather, rather then, stealing as Spring
Through him, melt him but master him still:
Whether at once, as once at a crash Paul,
Or as Austin, a lingering-out sweet skill,
Make mercy in all of us, out of us all
Mastery, but be adored, but be adored King. (Hopkins, The Wreck of
the Deutschla~#lO)
Drama is of utmost importance where Dmitri is concerned.
Other people,
especially Katerina, seem to be so many characters in the play of his life. Dmitri
does not leave encounters open-ended like Alyosha.
He seeks to make wholes
out of his dealings with others so that he may wrap a ribbon around them and add them
to his treasury. Mitya confesses to Alyosha that his life has been a lusting after
voluptuousness and vice, saying: "I've a perfect album of reminiscences, brother.
God bless them, the darlings." He sets up two extremes which are always in tension,
the Madonna and Sodom, and attempts to characterize all his doings in this poetic
light.
Katerina, that "beautiful, proud, imperious" woman who hopes to save Dmitri
from dissipation through her own generosity, is his Madonna figure.
Mitya sees the
truth about her loving her own virtue most; he knows that her benevolence is not pure
self-giving for his sake but pure self-serving for her own sake; but he lets that
pass as a mere human frailty so that he may haunt the back alley and make Katerina's
apparent goodwill shine fo r th all the more . St . Paul : "What shall we say then? Are
we to continue in sin that grace may abound? By no means!" (Rom.6:1).
Katerina also needs someone as dramatic as she is who will go along with her
fantasy so that she may play out her salvific role .
She needs a debauchee in order
to exercise her powers of hysterical self-sacrifice .
She needs someone in the dark
depths to make it possible for her heroism to be seen and admired by all the talkers
in Skotoprignyevsk and neighboring villages :
'Well isn't that Katerina Ivanovna
God's gift to Karamazov, so patient and forgiving.
I don't know why she puts up with
him.
My heavens!'
Katerina shows her true colors, her self-righteous indignation,
her need for someone as dramatic as she is who will fantasize alone with her so that
she may play out her salvific role, when she condemns Dmitri with her evidence in
court.
Thankfully, Mitya possesses some crucial gifts which Katerina lacks:
an
awarene s s of his own weakness - - "I pray to God I'm not lying and showing off" -- and
an abiding trust i n God despite his own sinfulness --" . .• though I may be following
the devil, I am thy son, O Lord, and I love thee . " There is no denying that Katerina
does kind and charitable things.
She sends flowers to Snegiryov's family and takes
care of Ilusha's grave; she will also proudly finance Dmitri's escape. But she has a
whole lot to work out concerning the source and center of goodness and salvation.
Kater i na and Ivan belong together.
Dmitri's frankness about his own wrongdoing -- "I'm nothing but an insect" - betrays a lack of self - respect which runs deep in his soul.
He goes around saying:
'I'm just this sort of buglike person, so don't expect much from me. What can I do
about it?'
At the start Dmitri does not challenge himself to accomplish things
which, he would be surprised to discover, he has the wherewithal to accomplish. At
the end he will consider himself capable of more than his gifts allow.
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worth. He has to see that his nature is good, coming as it does from God-it is just
that his will is weak, and his upbringing and education haven't helped matters much.
Father Zossima, reflecting on his days of carousing among his comrades, says:
"I
don't say we were bad by nature, all these young men were good fellows, but they
behaved badly, and I worst of all." Father Zossima sees what Mitya is preparing fo r
h i mself, sees what great suffering is in store for him, and is horrified.
After
Alyosha r etur ns from his Katerina- backed, ill- fated mission of generosity toward
Snegiryov , he first learns of Porfiry's Zossima- backed, successful mission of charity
t oward a poor family in the village, and then receives the conunand to be with Dmitri
a s a welcome p r esence in order to p r event him from some sudden, impetuous, terrible
c r ime . Father Zossima also bows to the whole company and begs for their forgivene ss
because it just seems like there is not a whole lot he can do to help them.
The
peasant women with faith are open to his fatherly words and gestures, but the wealthy
noblemen without faith are reluctant to take them seriously .. Dmitri alone is fu lly
receptive to Father Zossima's sage counsel and advice.
Father Zossima wishes Mitya
to understand that despite the ways of Fyodor, "it's the great mystery of human li fe
that old grief passes quietly and tenderly into joy •. • the mild serenity of age takes
the place of the riotous blood of youth . " Dmitri, along with Ivan, fears he wili b e
like his father, plagued by a base sensuality his entire life and prevented by his
own weakness from attaining any kind of nobility of heart .
God's angels and Satan's devils are fighting over beauty on the battleground of
Dmi t'ri' s heart.
His passionate attraction and powerful attachment to beauty, a
potentially admirable thing, causes him to be self-preoccupied and distracted from
issues and activities of utmost concern.
Dmitri has not opened his heart to the
sor rows of his fellows, or to his responsibility for their sorrows, or to the role he
ought to play in bringing relief to those who are burdened by sorrow .
Actively
feeling and caring for others by graciously accepting their griefs as his own is a
good and wholesome thing which Dmitri has at least to learn about, if he is not meant
to devote his whole life to this noble doing.
Dmitri is not called to be a Fa ther
Zossima, or a monk in the world, but if he is going to give testimony to his right
belief in the words of Jesus the teacher and lawgiver(Gal.6:2), if he is going to be
a Chr istian in the world, he must allow for the wedding of passion and piety in his
soul.
Under the influence of demons Mi tya' s lust, at its worst, takes the shape of
cruelty and sentimentality, distorted forms of Father Zossima's severity and
gentleness.
Speaking to Alyosha of a critical and unforgettable event that passed
between Katerina and himself, Mitya says: "At that moment she was beautiful because
she was noble , and I was a scoundrel, she in all the grandeur of her generosity and
sacrifice for her father, and I a bug! And scoundrel as I was, she was altogether at
my mercy, body and soul ... It seemed as if there could be no resisting it; as though I
should act like a bug, like a ve.nomous spider, without a spark of pity.
I could ·
scarcely breathe."
Honesty, honor, and simple decency toward and respect for a
fellow human being are at stake for Dmitri when he has Katerina in this compromising
position.
His breathless sensuality, not something to be taken lightly, bears
witness to a forgetfulness of life being · shared by all.
Mitya lustfully wants to
take full possession of Katerina's beauty, which amounts to using her as a tool for
t h e e n r ichme nt and r efinement of his own experience.
With the prospect o f another
colorful anecdote to add to his collection, Dmitri almost succumbs to the temptation
of abusing and destroying Katerina's noble stature, disgracing her for life:
"I
loved vice, I loved the ignominy of vice.
I loved cruelty." The temptation which
Dmitri resists at this trying moment is the temptation to which Fyodor yields with
Sophia . Defiling the purity and innocence of a beautiful young woman holds the same
satanic pleasu r e as working for the downfall of the righteous.
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his sword almost stabbing himself from delight and when he humiliates Snegiryov in
the presence of the vulnerable Ilusha, he wants more than anything to sing a song of
praise and thanksgiving to God the Father.
His desire for a hymn of uplifting joy
attests to his hidden certainty that life is simply good and that our deepest purpose
being on earth is happiness and laughter, not grief and despair.
The world is not,
as Ivan would have it, a vale of tears. Good things emerge even out of his encounter
with Katerina in his apartment. The old lieutenant-colonel, Katerina's father, dies
with military honors and not in disgrace only because Mitya has the money to free him
from trouble. At first Dmitri thinks that his only reason for giving the money is to
seduce the gorgeous daughter, but later he discovers that he has higher ambitions,
helping out a fellow sinner. Although Katerina's father despises him, Dmitri has the
capacity to see goodness in the man.
Instead of becoming full of hatred in turn,
Mitya acknowledges his fault and offers his assistance.
He always kind-heartedly
notices when he has done some bad thing to cause someone else to be angry at him.
"Let me be accursed," says Dmitri, "let me be vile and base, only let me kiss
the hem of the veil in which God is shrouded." Nature, Mother Earth, Dmeter, is that
veil, and Dmitri needs the mercy and courage to fall down upon her, "to cleave to her
bosom", to embrace and kiss her and water her with his tears.
By loving what is
lowly and ordinary in a serene and tender way, not by being ecstatically in love with
love itself, Dmitri will truly show gratitude to Hirn who created the earth and all
that is in it. By giving himself to the Jerusalem above who is our Mother(Gal.4:26),
with simplicity and trust, by falling as a seed on fertile ground and bringing forth
good fruit for the gladness and hope of others, Dmitri will encounter God's saving
presence. The attainment of self-giving means for Dmitri corning to relish the act of
loving as much as being in love, kindness as much as pleasure. Dmitri's name suggest
that he is himself rich, moist soil which nurtures the growth of seeds of grace, so
that he will come to be the person God means him to be.
His devotion to the earth
will take the form of a commitment to Grushenka. But he must endure a great ordeal
before he will be ready for marriage.
Mi tya mentions suicide to Alyosha at the
crossroads.
He cannot stand the thought that he is burdening and dishonoring his
Mother with his vile presence.
The questions he asks of Fyodor he also asks of
himself:
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Do not thou, o Lord, withhold thy mercy from me,
let thy steadfast love and thy faithfulness ever preserve me!
For evils have encompassed me without number;
my iniquities have overtaken me, till I cannot see;
they are more than the hairs of my head; my heart fails me(Ps.40:11)
While Dmitri dreams of taking Grushenka away to the ends of the earth so that
they may settle down in marriage and begin a reformed and virtuous life together,
Grushenka is planning to fly off with her Polish officer, the man about whom her
imagination has been spinning false romantic stories for five years. Mitya has some
knowledge of the Pole but his preoccupation with Fyodor as rival makes him forget the
presence of another competitor in Grushenka's heart.
Dmitri and Grushenka, each i~
their own way, are going through a painful struggle, a struggle to ensure their
future happiness.
They must come to see that all their anxious plans and efforts,
all the feverish agitation and activity which they dedicate to working out their own
destinies, is just so much fighting against God's gentle guiding hand.
For five long years Grushenka has refused to be prevailed upon by any man except
the tyrannical old Samsanov. How hard it must be for Dmitri to be madly in love with
this woman now; he knows "with a sinking heart" that at times she must hate him for
his passion. What he does not know is that her soul can find no peace, that she is
in misery reflecting upon the hardships and humiliations of her past.
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irnp~veris!i~_d,_ and.. d~sgraced at the tender _
age_ of se\7enteen, Grushenka has
been forced to establish a business partnership with Fyodor Karamaz.ov in order to
raise herself up out of the quagmire. She is hopelessly confused about her standing
with the man who once wooed her with his guitar and then left her for another woman.
Will she kill him when she sees him? Or will she run to him with open arms and fall
at his feet?
Her bitterness and pain give rise to a just wrath against men, those
seducers and corrupters, self-seekers and pleasure-mongers, who one moment sweetly
profess their love and the next moment are slyly out the door.
Why not take every
possible opportunity to get in strong blows at the bastards? Grushenka drives Fyodor
wild with desire with her pride, insolence, and rosy-plump Russian beauty.
She toys
coquettishly with Dmitri.
And in her darkest moments she dreams of enchanting and
seducing the young novice, Alyosha. She fiendishly imagines getting the handsome boy
in her clutches and ruining him, mocking his purity and innocence.
Grushenka's
profound unhappiness is rooted in her uncertainty whether any man can or will ever
love her, in a genuine way, whether any man can or will ever love her, not her
shapely arms and her buxom figure, not her sharp wit and vigorous intellect, but
Grushenka simply, with all her bales and pains.
Drni tri and Grushenka are much alike in that the vilest scenes enter their
imaginations and they yield to grace at the crucial times, Dmitri with Katerina and
Grushenka with Alyosha. When Alyosha is at his most vulnerable state upon the death
and premature corruption of Father Zossima's body, Rakitin takes him to the vixen in
the black silk dress so that he may cash in on his deal with Grushenka and bring
about the downfall of the religious idiot.
Rakitin licks his chops and gnashes his
teeth as a member of Satan's entourage.
When they arrive Alyosha learns that his
brother is in ambush at his father's house, yet he does nothing. His grief is such a
burden that he forgets to attend to Dmitri, as Father Zossirna commanded, at the very
time Fyodor is to be murdered.
Without knowing the cause of Alyosha's depression
Grushenka coyly sits on his knee hoping to cheer him up.
Just yesterday Alyosha
would have greatly feared such a gesture; lust and temptation would have arisen in
his soul; but now the sorrow in his heart swallows up his every sensation. He wants
to witness Alyosha eating sausage and drinking champagne, but most of all he wants to
witness Grushenka setting to work on him.
Yet she cannot.
Grushenka looks upon
Alyosha's goodness and feels ashamed at her own badness.
Her conscience comes to
life in his presence.
Upon hearing the news of Father Zossima' s death, Grushenka
devoutly crosses herself and immediately gets up from Alyosha's knee.
Alyosha
recognizes her gesture as an outgrowth of simple-hearted goodness, as a gracious gift
of kindness, an onion.
Even in the throes of despair Alyosha has the eyes to see
Grusha' s action as a sign of pity.
He, the young novice, came to Grushenka with
"base and evil" motives, and she, the reputed harlot, greeted him with "a loving
heart". Alyosha's soul is "raised from the depths", saved by this simple gesture of
loving kindness and concern for . the gravity of his suffering.
He in turn gives
Grushenka an onion by calling her "sister" and showing her that she, Grushenka
simply, is a person worthy of forgiveness and love tendered by a heart not full of
lust and shame.
This is precisely what Grushenka needs to know, to feel confident
about, in order to be open to and accept God's saving reconciliation of Dmitri and
herself.
The meeting between Alyosha and Grusha shows forth the coming together of
the Madonna and Sodom, yet it is not the case that one is the Madonna and the other
Sodom; they are each a mixture of extremes, and only by recognizing this can they
begin to purify their hearts. Alyosha needs to face up to his own badness and Grusha
needs to face up to her own goodness.
Remarkably, Rakitin is utterly insensitive to the gifts being exchanged between
Alyosha and Grusha.
He considers them "maudlin and mad." He is blind to the fact
that these two have passed through a spiritual crisis together such as does not
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detract in any way from its significance. Sadly, from the way things have turned out
Rakitin is the sort of person who makes it all but impossible for others to show
kindness to him. He just plain misses the beauty of Grusha's gesture and later pokes
fun at Alyosha for having "saved the sinner." Raki tin's proper name is Mihail, the
name of Father zossima' s mysterious visitor.
He is capable of the murder Mihail
enacted with such villainy and daring, but if he never commits his crime, Raki tin
will never become aware that he has fallen into the hands of the living God. He will
never feel compelled to confess his sins and find deliverance from his misery in
Jesus Christ. Rakitin is a man to be pitied.
Rakitin' s anxious concern for his career and his reputation close him off to
Grushenka's goodness. Knowing all about her shameful past, he refuses to acknowledge
that she is his cousin, that they share blood.
This is akin to denying her
personhood.
Rakitin is not alone.
Most people pass by her on the street avoiding
her and sizing her up only with a view to her past, as if they knew the who and the
why of her because they have heard rumors of her lost innocence. They recognize her
as a human being only with a glance of disapproval. Grushenka is tougher than they
are.
She can take it. Yet how unfair that such a young girl should be so put upon
by the world that before she even knows what is going on, something precious and
dear, something to. be cherished, has been taken away from her. Thank goodness Grusha
can turn to Jesus' happy story and read about this man who did not bother himself
with people's past, except to forgive them their sins and encourage them to sin no
more(Jn.8:11), whether they were adulterers or prostitutes, soldiers or governors.
Mitya has the spirit.
The narrator:
"Mitya looked upon Grushenka' s past as
something completely over. He looked upon that past with infinite pity and resolved
with all the fervor of his passion that when once Grushenka told him she loved him
and would marry him, it would mean the beginning of a new Grushenka and a new Dmitri,
free from every vice. They would forgive one another and begin their lives afresh."
Without forgiveness human beings cannot attain reconciliation with their past and
begin life anew and afresh. Without forgiveness the weight of sin is an unbearable
burden which human beings attempt to unload by way of forgetfulness but only manage
to make worse by way of further sinfulness.
But how can Mitya possibly take Grushenka away to dreamland? All will be lost
unless he can come up with exactly three thousand roubles. Why that amount? So that
Katerina can be paid back?
Because that is how much Fyodor has set aside for
Grushenka, knowing Mitya'a need? Because that is how much he can expect to get out
of the property at Tchermashnya?
Who knows?
Poor Mitya has an awful time with
money.
He alone of the brothers grew up with an income, having fun and showing
others a good time; but while Mitya knows all about spending money, he does not know
the first thing about earning it.
It's a happy thing that Mitya believes in
miracles, for if he could not continue to live as though somehow, by way of
providence, money would drop from heaven, he would give over to despair and madness.
This is not to say that Mitya will do nothing to aid the designs of providence. He
must. For the first time in his life he doesn't have easy access to a fistful of
cash, aside from the fifteen-hundred roubles protecting his honor, and as we all
know, a person can't go far without at least that much.
Mitya is on the brink of ruin. Because of his tendency to "give himself up to
every new idea with passionate enthusiasm" he passes through a nightmarish experience
in search of money during the day and night before his father's murder.
Samsanov
gets the whole thing started by playing a cruel trick on Mitya, sending him off to
Tchermashnya with the hope of selling his property, a trick which ranks with
smerdyakov's treatment of cats and Kolya's game with the goose.
"You're my
salvation," says Dmitri, "you've saved me."
He is in one of his ecstatic states
thinking that a trip and a transaction will be the happy solution to all his
difficulties.
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person who yearns overmuch to be saved by others.
Being the kind, endearing,
energetic, explosive man that he is, his lodgers give him their last three roubles in
all the world to help him pay for a carriage to Tchermashnya. This . is among the most
telling signs of the beauty of Dmitri Fyodorovitch Karamazov, that· his lodgers, who
are dirt poor, give up everything they have for his sake.
He is the so"rt of person
who makes it easy for others to show kindness and charity to him. Mitya's childlike
ebullience brings gladness to these lonely people, so that they feel honored to be
the captain's loyal friends •
Every part of Mitya's salvific plan goes wrong. First he is late on account of
what he thought was a shortcut; next the priest is not at home; while Dmitri searches
for him it grows dark; it turns out that Lyagavy, the prospective buyer of his
property, is not at the priest's but at the forester's cottage; after they set out on
foot toward the . cottage, it dawns on the priest that it is much farther away than he
thought; the priest cannot tell Mitya anything about Lyagavy except that to call him
'Lyagavy', as Samsonov suggested, and not 'Gorstkin,' would mean disaster; when they
finally arrive at the cottage Gorstkin is dead drunk and canno.t carry on any
dealings; Mitya has to wait overnight for his buyer, his savior, to sober up;
meanwhile he falls asleep; in the middle of the night the hut catches fire; Dmitri is
in hell; he sleeps again; while he is asleep Lyagavy wakes up and polishes off
another bottle of vodka.
"It's a tragedy." After exchanging some unpleasant words
with Gorstkin, Dmitri finally comes to be convinced that Samsanov was mocking him the
whole time. weak as a child, Mitya, being the honest and upright person that he is,
leaves fifty kopecks behind to pay for a night's lodging in the forester's hut,
although he is broke and he has just suffered the worst night of his life. Striding
aimlessly through the black wood, he emerges on to some harvested fields, saying:
"What despair, what death all around." Mitya is an · incurable romantic. But in the
end, he places his last hope in the wealthy Mme. Hohlakov.
The meeting of the two great dramatists, Dmitri Fyodorovitch and Mme. Hohlakov,
brings laughter, but the comedy ceases when it becomes evident that the selfish, rich
woman is fool,ishly and cruelly playing the role of Father Zossima, "an experienced
doctor of the soul." Knowing who Mitya is, what he needs, what is best for him, what
he ought and ought not do, Mme Hohlakov confidently proclaims:
"I will save you."
But nothing Mme.Hohlakov can say or do will deliver Mitya from the agony God has in
store for him.
Claiming to be all-knowing about another person's heart, and
all-powerful in bringing about his salvation, are grave evils. The ways God finds to
go about redeeming us are more wonderfully strange and imaginative than anything we
could ever come up with. Although Mme. Hohlakov is doing damage to herself and appears to be doing the same to Dmitri, she is also an instrument in the ongoing
process of God's dealings with Mitya, His child. When Mme.Hohlakov puts the ikon of
the holy martyr around his neck, Mitya must be reminded in some way that trust in
Christ involves suffering, that the whole creation, which groans inwardly(Rom.8:23),
is part of God's redemptive drama.
The faithful Franciscan nun who calls out to
Christ in the storm from the Deutschland -- "O Christ, Christ, come quickly" -- does
not call through the storm to a Christ who is behind and outside the storm, she cries
out to the storm itself because he himself is in it, because Christ is the storm.
When we turn away from suffering, we turn away from Christ. Acceptance of Jesus
requires that we enter into "the unshapeable shock night"
(The Wreck of the
Deutschland #29) , for that is where he is to be found. Dmitri is slowly making this
,Piscovery, but, with a slam of his fist on the table and with a throw of his spit on
the floor, he will put up a fight.
Mitya exits from Mme. Hohlakov's house with
childlike tears which save him from madness.
The thought that Grushenka could possibly have thrown him over for Fyodor is
enough to stop Mitya's flow of tears.
His jealousy goes to such an extreme that he
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�and a pistol. What saves Dmitri at that critical moment under Fyodor's window as he
stands there hidden by the bushes looking loathingly at his father's battered face,
dandified by his red handkerchief and his silk nightgown? Wrath, fury, and vengeance
surge up in Dmitri's heart as he gazes with contempt at his rival, yet he still has
the childlike wonder to notice how colorful the berries are that dark night.
Remembering this moment later, Mitya says: "God was watching over me then." Perhaps
some sacred memory, preserved since childhood, say, Herzenstube's gift of nuts, saved
Dmitri. Not that he was aware of the fact, or pictured an image to himself, but some
good memory hidden deep in his heart which made him cherish life may have influenced
his action. Maybe it wasn't a childhood memory. It could have been Father zossima's
low bow a few days back.
How fearful a thing it is to consider that our every
gesture, each act, word, and glance, makes a difference in the lives of the people
around us, to think that we are always planting either good or evil seeds in the
hearts of others as long as we participate in public life. Everyone knows what it is
like to be either welcomed or rejected by someone else's eyes in passing.
Dmitri's
and Herzenstube' s tears in court, the fact that Mi tya went to visit and thank
Herzenstube over twenty years after the event -- Gott der Vater, Gott der Sohn, und
Gott der heilige Geist -- attests to the truth of Alyosha's words~the boys after
Ilusha' s funeral:
"If a man carries many such memories with him into life, he is
safe to the end of his days, and if one has only one good memory left in one's heart,
even that may sometimes be the means of saving us." Who we are has a whole lot to do
with what we remember, and what we remember says a whole lot about who we are.
Some gestures and events . of supreme importance to our well-being we remember,
others we forget.
When Dmitri has Penya by the throat, his hands and face smeared
with Grigory's blood, it occurs to him that he forgot about the Polish officer as
soon as he heard of him.
Mi tya in a
flash
changes to a state of childlike
gentleness from a state of violent frenzy upon hearing that Grushenka loved his noble
heart for an hour. Mitya smiles and sighs with glee. That memory will endure.
In
celebration of his making way for Grushenka' s new life with her Polish officer,
Dmitri will host a feast, a gala event at which all are welcome, with champagnes,
wines, vodkas, chocolates, cakes, pies, jams, sweet meats, all in abundance.
Mitya
will renounce his own lavish desires for the queen of his heart, if only she can be
happy. He is beginning to care for others in their own right, apart from himself.
'Mokroe' is associated with the Russian word meaning 'moist . '
Dmitri's
overflowing, Giovanni-like prodigality brings about the drunkenness and merriment,
the splendid party at Mokroe, the feast in honor of rich, moist Mother Earth.
Mitya's natural element is the party; with sounds of gypsies' instruments, popping
corks , and rustic folk songs: with sights of colorful costumes , laughing faces , and
peasant dances.
The celebration is as much for the people of Mokroe as it is for
Dmitri and Grushenka, for the peasants who live in their black, broken- down shanties,
in poverty and desolation, day in and day out, year after year, people after Mitya's
own heart.
Everyone regardless of rank or religion is invited to Dmitri's feast,
provided they make merry and find delight in music and dance, and in the company of
their neighbors. Mitya's infectious energy exhilarates young and old, rich and poor
alike; his expansiveness and exuberance bring joy and gladness to other people's
hearts, and simply make good things happen . Andrey, the driver who takes Dmitri to
Mokroe at breakneck speed, says, in all simplicity and truth, that though Mitya is
hot- tempered, rough, and impulsive, he is still a child, and God will forgive him for
his kind heart.
Imagine the peasant folks of Mokroe in their huts, late at night, huddled by the
fire trying to keep warm, perhaps weighed down by sadness and boredom, but hopeful,
when suddenly a cry goes through the streets announcing the arrival of the captain ,
Dmitri Fyodorovitch Karamazov , who has come to throw another happy feast .
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drinking, singing, and dancing; with hearts renewed by the presence of this man of
the earth who will greet them all, men and women , boys and girls , pretty and plain,
with open arms, with a hug and a kiss; with hearts renewed by the opportunity to
forget their cares and woes this one night and to be with one another as fellows full
of gaiety and laughter.
The peasants at Dmitri's feast do not lose themselves in
Bacchic revelry, in the worship of Dionysos; they find themselves in their folk
tradition, they discover the possibility for fun and play in their lives despite
their oppressive surroundings .
Drunkenness, party spirit, and carousing may be on
St. Paul's list of works of the flesh(Gal . 5:20), but God will forgive the people of
Mokroe this much for one night . Dmitri's feast at Mokroe must be pleasing to God .
Grushenka has the spirit:
"When do they get a chance to enjoy themselves, · why
shouldn't folks be happy?" Hurrah for Karamazov!
But what about Grigory? Can Mitya be excused for running away from the scene of
his crime to go throw a party? For all he knows Grigory might be dead. Dmitri has
not forgotten the bloody blow he gave to the man who was a father to him as a child .
He is thinking remorsefully about this very deed when on the way to Mokroe he begs
Andrey to forgive him for everyone and everything, and when he withdraws into
"frantic prayer . " Dmitri is at heart a peasant, although in blood he is a nobleman,
an honn~e homme, whose honor is of utmost concern to him. His peasant heart allows
Father Zossima' s words to make a great impression on him.
During the course of
Mitya's 'unshapeable shock night' he comes to see more and more vividly his
responsibility to all for all and everything, le plus noble des sentiments. Later in
the night Mitya, with characteristic exaggeration, says to Grushenka:
"I'd give ten
vears r~ my life for Grigory to get well, to know he was all right."
The feast at Mokroe bears a resemblance to the wedding party in Cana, of
Galilee: " ••• the gladness of some poor, very poor people ••• the people living about
the Lake of Genesareth were the poorest that can possibly be imagined .•• they hadn't
wine enough even at a wedding ••. and His heart was open even to the simple, artless
mer ry-making of some obscure and unlearned people, who had warmly bidden Him to their
poor wedding ... indeed was it to make wine abundant at poor weddings He had come down
to earth?"
Dmitri and Grushenka confess their mutual love and even make vows of
fidelity in the midst of the uproar at Mokroe.
Yet the vows made between these
lovers do not quite stand up to the vows made at the marriage feast at which Jesus is
present.
Dmitri and Grushenka may be on their way to an embrace of the spiritual
life, the sacrament of marriage, but as yet they do not hold such a life dear enough.
Grushenka still toys coyly with Mitya. Fondling Kalganov, she asks: "Who is it that
I love?"
Dmitri knows the answer, but enough is enough.
After mentioning that
Alyosha earlier said something to her that she will remember her whole life long, she
is able to confess to Dmitri, and to herself, that she has been carrying spite in her
heart and tormenting her lover with it.
Grusha, like Mitya, is on the verge of
reformation and needs only a spe,cial saving act of grace to push her over the edge.
Saying, "tomorrow the nunnery I today the dance" I she means that she wishes to enjoy
this night of feasting to the fullest before making a final commitment to Dmitri.
Grusha doesn't see that it is not so easy. Living on the edge yields great pleasure;
the temptation is to stay put .
St . Augustine:
"How long, how long? Tomorrow and
tomorrow?
Why not now?
Why not in this very hour an end to my uncleanness?"
(Confessions 8 : 12) .
Something te rr ifying must be endur ed this v e ry night if Grus h a
and Mitya are to exchange promises with solemn devotion .
Dimitri came to Mokroe hoping only to become reconciled with Grushenka .
The
plan was to kill himself after making way for her new life with the Pole :
"I must
kill one noxious insect for fear it should crawl and spoil life for others." Mitya
has shown a g r eat change in his love for Grusha . At the start he wished to win her
from his rival for his glory and satisfaction as well as for his reformation and
renewal; he was prone to fierce jealousy and vengeful violence; he was always on the

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watch and even employed Smerdyakov to keep track of Grushenka's and Fyodor's
de a.lings•
Now, however, Mi tya' s only concern is with Grusha' s happiness.
He is
willing to let Grushenka go off with the Pole if that is what she wishes· he does not
imp~s~ his own will on her doings; he respects her enough to let her ~ake her own
decisions ·
Once Dmitri has attained this noble condition, and once the devil's
temptation to suicide is overcome on the balcony - - "Let this fearful cup pass from
me!" . -- Mi tya can place hope in the future with Grushenka, and he can be fully
confident that God is working for his happiness along with hers .
Mitya and Grusha
are meant to be together; they are made for one another; but it is not until the
~east and the sudden catastrophe at Mokroe that they are fully aware of the gift each
is to and for the other, as beings of God. Again, only when Mitya renounces his own
will, his own mad desire to possess Grushenka, when he acknowledges her freedom to go
abo ut doing ~hat she considers best, and only when he prays that God may order events
as He sees fit, only then does everything begin to fall into place, does Dmitri see
that he and Grushenka are destined to spend their lives together in holy matrimony.
After Grusha's final dance, after Dmitri carries her to rest on the bed, they vow to
be honest, honorable, and goo d, to work the land and dig the earth
to act ·a s
responsible human b eings with a closeness to life and growth, and t o b ow' down befo re
God a nd b eg f o rg ive ness. But they do not know what they are willing t o endu re for
one anothe.r u nti.l th.e i nvestigato rs appear: felix culpa.
. The investig~ting lawyers interpret all the e vidence with a view to Mitya 1 s
guilt. The case is closed e v en befo re the condemned man is interrogated. That the
Po les cheat at cards is no hindrance t o their tes t imony, but that Mitya lies about
t~e three tho usand r o ub l es makes all t he difference in the world. The prosecuter for
h~ s p~rt h as a persona l ~take i n t h e matter despite all his c laims t o ' obj e c tiv ity ':
h~s wife ~as always particularly f o nd o f Dmitri and his career will skyrocket with a
vic t o r y i n court.
With dev ilish wi nks and smirks of self-righteousn e s s and
se~f-~at isfact ion, the inv estigato rs make the same error as Ivan. They think that by
s t i c king t o t h e f acts the tru th will inevitably be t o ld, as if facts of themselves
were in the habit o f fa ll ing i nto plac e, as if a selectio n and i n terpretatio n o f
fa c ts on t h e part o f fa l l ible human b e ings were not at issue. J ust as Ivan c laims t o
know abo ut the in j u~ti c e of suffering on the basis of s o me newspaper clippings, so
t h e se attorneys claim t o know about M
itya's guilt o n the basis o f hearsay:
Grigo ry
saw the door open; Trifo n Borisso vitch has no doubt that Mitya spent three t hous and
o n each o f his trips to M kroe; and so on. The truth is that the investigato rs h ave
o
persu a d ed themse lves o f t h eparricidalcharacter of Karamazov. This c ase is just like
s o many o thers.
The y must have everything in order. They have c hosen to attend to
only t h?se fac ts wh ich s uppo rt their fantasy, which fit their pre-arranged p u zzle,
and to igno re every o ther relev ant piece of e v idence. They refuse to acknowledge the
he art- f elt nat u re of Dmitr i' s horro r a nd sorrow over the where and the how o f h is
fath er's de ath.
(Not b e ing altogether b eautiful himself, Dmitri has come t o see t h at
he h a d no p lac e to fi nd Fyodor repulsive. )
The inv estigato rs refu se to admit that
their job consists in s to r y -te l ling .
In their eyes ficti on has nothing to d o wi th
the t r uth . Yet the y f ab r ic a t e t h e f ab le o f the fif t een-hundred roubles stash e d away
some where in the hotel,
much to Trifo n Borossovitc h's cha g rin.
What
t he
investiga to rs don't seem t o understand is t h at Dmitri Fyodo r ovitch Karamazov a human
bei?g, and an .extraordinary one at that, cannot be boxed and packaged, 'that the
moti v es a nd a ctions o f a perso n are far too invo l v ed to be exp l a ined away i n a po l i c e
repo rt.
Of c ourse, lawyers have to j udge, as do we all, but why do we find such
satani c pleasure i n j udging o thers? Why are we s o c o nfident that we know the t ruth o f
their heart s a nd a c tio ns, when a goo d deal of the time we haven't t h e fa intest no tio n
wha t we are talking about? ~
Dmitri's integrity and frankness make it difficult f o r him t o s h are what is in
h is heart with t hese men. Confessing to Alyosha is a relief, but confessing to the

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attorneys is agony . Honor is not so important to them that they know the distinction
between being a thief and being a scoundrel . Even, that is , especially when he is
s tanding naked before them , Dmitr i towers above the investigator s .
God ' s way s are
strange and mysterious. Piety demands that we trust in their goodness .
It does· a ll
seem fitting and r ight when Mitya says :
"I couldn't have lear ned s o much about
myself in twenty years as I have on this accursed night . "
Dmitri is the sort of
person who has to suffer greatly before he is prepared to have his heart changed by
God.
Out of his grief fo r Grushenka, his anger over the investigators' petty
details, his exhaustion a f ter being tossed to and fro all night long, out of Mitya' s
great suffering emerges a d r eam about a babe .
The d r eam arising f r om Mi tya ' s
subterranean depths bears witness to his t r ansfigured self, his careful attentiveness
to people who are afflicted and aggrieved, his newfound openness to being of service
t o his fellow s , to self- giving fo r the gladness of others . Approaching a bur nt-out
town with the houses in shambles -- Mokroe? -- seeing the villagers standing i n
tattered rags on the road in t he dead of winter, Mi tya naively a s ks his peasant
driver -- Andrey? -- questions concerning the mystery of suffering :
Why a r e they c r ying? Why are they crying? ••• It's the
babe ••. The babe weeping ••• but why is she weeping ••• why
are her little arms bare?
Why don't they wrap her
up? .•. The babe's cold, her little clothes a r e frozen
and don't warm he r •.• But why is it?
Why? •.• Why ,
they're poor people bur nt out ••• No,no ••• Tell me
why is it those poor mothers stand there?
Why are
people poo r ? Why is the babe poor? Why is the steppe
bar ren? Why don ' t they hug each othe r a nd kiss? Why
don't they sing songs of joy? Why are they so dark
f r om black misery? Why don't they feed the babe ?
Sadly , Ivan never asks "Why?" .
Ivan cannot admit that he does not know, that
the answer is hidden f rom him .
By way of the mystery of suffering, t h e 'irranortal
beauty' - as Hopkins calls it- of Christ's sacrifice, that is how God finally chooses to
reveal Himself to human beings in history .
Mi tya is entering that storm which
wrecked the Deutschland, shar ing in the suffering of people whom he does not know,
and does not n e ed to know in o r der to feel what they feel . Mitya himself was once a
child in tatter ed r ags, outcas t and forgotten; he understands , almost, what it means
to shiver in the cold with litt le hope of finding shelter again , suffe r ing unto
death . Mo r e s o than on any othe r night, even last night at the fo r ester's hut--his
final preparation fo r tonight , tonight Mitya has endured a heart- wrenching pass ion :
first being tempted to act c o ntrary t o God' s will by murder and suic · de; next
endur ing abuse , condemnation, and mockery by the citizens and judges; las t wi ll b e
the bearing of a c r oss for the rest of his life, unto death .
And he felt that a passion of pity, such as he had neve r known
befor e, was rising in his hear t, that he wanted to c r y, tha t he
wanted to do something fo r them all, so that the babe should
weep no more , so that the dark- faced, dried- up mother should not
wee p , that no one should s hed tears again f r om that moment , and
he wanted to do it at once, at once, regar dless of all
obstacles , wi th all the recklessness of the Karamazovs • •• 'And
I'm coming with you . I won't leave now for the rest of my life .
I'm coming with you,' he heard close by him Grushenka's tender
voice , thrilling with emotion .
And his heart glowed, and he
str uggled forward toward the light , and he longed to live, to
live , to go on a nd on , towar ds the new beckoning light, and to

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�hasten, hasten, now, at once!
Dmitri is drawn to the sufferin face
.
. .
The urgent call to attend to th
g
s of individuals, not to Ivan's 'humanity'
M't '
e sorrows and woes of his f 11
•
1 ya s brotherly compassion for the woman
.
e ows comes from Christ.
one simple manifestation of God'
.
and ch~ldren of the devastated village is
Christ Mitya would feel no compul:i~~v~:g,, sufferi~g l~ve for human beings. Without
starving people.
Bearing one another's ~iv~ up h~s life for these withered, feeble,
sees feelingly that he has the ab'l't b
ur ens is Christ's law (Gal. 6:2). Mitya
·
i
i Y Y way of God's sav·
saving efficacy, to respond to th
ing power, Christ's death's
st
th
e cares of the babe
By f reel
. .
and concern, by responding to Christ's
.
.
y giving his love and
. reng
in the sufferings of its inhabitant
b h
. prese~ce in the burnt out village and
bab e, Mitya acknowledges with a d s, b Y earing Christ's vo ice in t h e cries of the
·
·
·
.
are responsible to all for all
;ep ow the truth of Father Zossima's words· 'all
unkindness are just as much th an everything.' Mitya now knows that his mome~ts of
·
e
b e f ore he could have his dream cause of the babe's suffering as anything else. Yet
d
I
· ·
, a goo dream not the e · 1 d
nquisitor and Mme. Hohlakov, Mit a had
.,
.
vi
ream of Ivan and the
is like to make way to love G
hy . k
to strike Grigory, and he had to feel what it
,
rus en a as a human bein
d
and he had to be UnJ' ustly tri' d
d
g an not as someone to be won,
e an put upon by the ·
t'
·
t h e character of redemptive drama
inves igating lawyers. Such is
H
Now Mitya must face the possibility of spending
e courageously proclaims that even in the mines years of hard labor in. Siberia.
murderers, the persecuted and th
t
underground, among thieves and
.
e ou cast he will try t
raise a hymn of praise and th k . .
,
o muster the strength to
redeemed man to be full of h
anh sgiving t~ God the Father.
It is the mark of a
ope w en faced with the worst imaginable conditions.
I w~ite~ patiently for the Lord1
he inclined to me and heard my cry.
He drew me up out of the desolate pit,out of the miry
and set my foot on a rock, making my steps secure
bog,
He put a new song in my m th
·
ou , a song of praise to our God. (Ps.40)
But Dmitri is wrong about himself when
.
cross in Siberia.
That is . t
he cons~ders that God wills him to bear his
.
JUs
not what he is meant to d
·
married, to be married to a woman 1. k G
h
o.
Mi tya needs to be
the dream of the babe
Mitya's d i e lrlus enk~, no one else. Her voice was also in
.
.
ream a ows him to enter i t
th
b rings him closer to · Christ th R d
n o o ers' suffering. it
.
e
e eemer, but he cannot with
f 1
'
weeping and hunger from the face of th
h
one e 1 swoop, wipe
Dmitri has been delivered from tr
~ eart. .
The redemptive power with which
Mitya' s vows to Grushenka hi s coamrnns'gtresstions hwill work thr ough him in a family way.
'
'
i men to er for
l' f t ·
·
The sacrament of marriage will be a bi
~ . i.e ime, will be a handful.
seeking out run-down towns and d. t g ~nough responsibil.i ty for Dmitri without his
Christ's cross. He has a cross ::. r:u~ t m?thers and children.
Mitya cannot bear
can still reflect the goodness a die is !uniquely his own.
His sayings and doings
d.
n
reso ve of his
dream th
.
or inary than he thought' that's all.
Th
,
ey may JUst be more
Fyodorovitch Karamazov heretofore is t
b e ~:eatest act of love open to Dmitri
and a stern and tender father for theiroch:ld:en~nd and gentle husband for Grushenka
v.

The Holy Koinonia

Alexey Fyodorovi tch Karamazov is
Skotoprignyevsk after a long ab
the .first among the brothers to return to
.
sence.
Having an allegian
t
comes in search of his mother, s t mb
ce
o sacred memory, he
lies buried; he abandoned his wif 'o • Fyodor in his dissipation forgot where she
e s grave and all his memories long ago on a trip to

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Odessa. Thanks only to Grigory's steadfast service and special fondness for Sophia,
a stone was erected in her name.
Alyosha visits the place, remembering how his
mother once held him up to the slanting sunlight shining on a holy image so that as a
child he might receive the gracious gift of faith. Alyosha cherishes this memory his
whole life long. Strangely, when he hears a story about a fit of his mother's -- the
one incited by Fyodor's spitting on an ikon hoping to destroy Sophia's mysticism -Alyosha falls back in his chair "shaking all over in a hysterical paroxysm of sudden,
violent weeping."
The blood of a religious idiot flows through this young man's
veins.
With the memory of his mother's piety working upon his imagination Alyosha
decides to enter the monastery on the outskirts of town as a novice. Father Zossima,
the Elder at the monastery renowned for his saintly doings, Alyosha's pater
seraphicus, also recollects going to mass with his mother as a child and being struck
by sunlight streaming down through the window of the church. God's word is planted
as a seed in Zossima' s and Alexey' s heart at an early age, and grows of its own
accord without their constant care and attention.
Being a Karamazov, a person smeared with black, Alyosha is capable of base lust,
pre-occupation with himself and indifference to others, willful rejection of God's
saving ways, all the sins which lead to a life in hell on earth, which make a human
being unable to love his fellows. Alyosha's becoming a novice to escape the darkness
and deviltry of the world and his own soul, to avoid temptation by hiding behind
cloistral walls, is, as Father Zossima knows, somewhat troublesome; it is a sign of
youthful fear and inexperience, not a sign of weakness and aloneness. Father Zossima
also knows that Alyosha sincerely wishes to search after righteousness among holy
men, to offer himself up to God as a living sacrifice with a view to showing mercy
and being of service to others who are in need. He has been blessed with the gifts
of unaffected . simplicity and patient humility.
Alyosha's soft, gentle, handsome young face raises in Father Zossima's memory
the image of his brother Markel whose pious, dying sayings have always been enshrined
in his heart. It is good that Father Zossima at the beginning of his life received
Markel's words, witnessing his beautiful death, and at the end of his life passes on
his treasured memories to the boy who reminds him o f Markel, spending his last days
with Alyosha in childlike happiness.
Father Zossima can look back in old age over
his many years and see God at work taking care of him, giving him then Markel and now
Alyosha.
Under the influence of a freethinking and isolated philosophy student, Markel
came to rail against God and laugh at the servants and members of his family for
their devout practices during Lent. Afterwards, Holy Week brought a fatal illness to
Markel, but "a marvelous change passed over him, his spirit seemed transformed."
When he began speaking in ways obscure and almost unintelligible, the doctor
diagnosed his words as insane, but the nine year old Zossima gladly and attentively
heard them as free gifts for the enhancement of faith:
"I will be the servant of my
servants, the same as they are to me .•• every one of us has sinned against all men,
and I more than any ... Birds of heaven, happy birds, forgive me, for f have sinned
against you ••• There was such a glory of God all about me: birds, trees, meadows, sky,
only I lived in shame and dishonored it all and did not notice the beauty and the
glory ... it's for you, not grief I'm crying •.. I like to humble myself before them, for
I don't know how to love them enough, yet all forgive me, too, and that's heaven. Am
I not in heaven now?"
Markel says that he has sinned against every created being more than any other
person; Dimitri feels responsible for the weeping and suffering of the babe and her
mother; Father Zossima
blames himself for another man's sin even more than the
actual sinner: all because they are aware that they have not fully attained to the
joy of being in the world and that in their joyless states they have sown evil seeds
in people's hearts. Markel's betrayal of life's glory encourages the brilliant young

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�philosopher to preach his own plan of salvation, adding to his bitterness and
misanthropy; Mitya's violent treatment of Snegiryov -- that large sweeping gesture
which prevents him from performing a small act of kindness -- leads to Ilusha' s
death; Zossima' s reckless, youthful vanity brings about a duel which could make a
murderer out of a nobleman.
Alyosha must accept that even the best human beings
suffer from frailty and pass through periods of harmful wrongdoing.
He must
recognize that escaping from the sinfulness of the world and his own soul is no way
to combat evil and attain purity of heart, that a monk's life of prayer in a
monastery is a life of compassionate dedication to his fellows in the world, that
being in the world is a joyful activity even in the midst of anguish and degradation .
The primary foundation for joy is God the Creator. Also every being in the created
world -- mountains, rivers, even stones -- is a reason to delight in being alive.
And since it is all too easy to side with Ivan ' s claim that suffering makes it
impossible to find joy and be glad, ·Holy Scripture too is a necessary foundation, for
the sacred tales of the Bible place the suffering of God's world in the proper
redemptive light.
Alyosha holds a naive conviction that Father Zossima's saintly doings will bring
extraordinary glory to the monastery.
Believing the Elder' s death to be an event
worth God's showing Himself and His favor -- as if justice consisted in worldly fame
-- Alyosha turns away from God.
He acts as though there were a fit recompense for
righteousness, even though no human being is justified in God's sight because of
anything he does. A person is justified only because God in all His mercy freely and
unconditionally chooses to make him just, to fill him with grace, to look upon him as
righteous.
St. Paul: " .• a man is not justified by works of the law but by way of
faith in Jesus Christ ..• I have been crucified with Christ; it is no longer I who live
but Christ who lives in me; and the life I now live in the flesh I live by faith in
the Son of God, who loved me and gave himself for me . . . if justification were through
the law, then Christ died to no purpose" (Gal. 2:16-21).
Alyosha grieves over Father zossima's death with his back turned to the
hermitage, sitting on Job's tombstone, a monk whose namesake defied God for justice's
sake and whose body did not undergo corruption after death.
By expecting something
extraordinary, a quite peculiar marvel, to affirm and proclaim Father Zossima' s
sanctified life before all the world, Alyosha is defying and denying God's will and
way.
Before Alyosha met Father Zossima he never loved anyone enough -- besides his
mot;her -- to feel deep injury at his loss.
Alyosha does not weep beautifully for
Father Zossima just because of the premature corruption of the Elder' s body.
His
tears of sorrow turn into tears of disappointment. Alyosha is at his worst when he
joins the throng behind Ferapont outside Father Zossima's cell and when he repeats
Ivan's cheap phrases about not accepting God's world.
Unbeknownst to him, God's
saving activity is present even in this seemingly catastrophic event.
The apparent
disgrace of Alyosha's saint leads to "a crisis and turning-point in his spiritual
development, giving a shock to his intellect, which finally strengthened it for the
rest of his life and gave it a definite aim."
Rakitin finds Alyosha lying motionless, face down, with arms limply
outspread on the ground, deeply pained by God's hiddenness, and lures him over to
Grushenka's for a drink and a fling. Alyosha's going to Grushenka's home is akin to
throwing himself off the pinnacle of the temple, tempting God.
On the one hand he
has a childish, abstract, dogmatic urge to get back at God for what He has allowed to
happen -- not only was Father Zossima not justified, he was ruined - - on the other
hand he secretly hopes to find God's saving presence at Grusha's. His expectation of
the extraordinary from God defied and denied the divine mystery at work in ordinary
things. Grushenka's simple gesture of kindness and compassion helps Alyosha see more
deeply the mystery of a Creator who is moved by and overflows with the fullness of
love.
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hate God's way of going about doing good. His power to give a small gift in return
to Grushenka even in his lowliest condition bears witness to the strength of his love
and the depth of his kindness.
Alyosha's gift to Grushenka consists in allowing
Grushenka to give a gift to him, in allowing her to show forth the ~ood~ess in her
oul so that she might take note of it. He is able to offer Grusha this gift because
~f his steadfast, quixotic respect for all human beings, even, that is, especially
those who do not respect themselves.
The source and center of Alyosha's gladness is his ability to receive with grace
the gifts of others and to bear without conde~ation ~he abuse~ o~ others. Receiv~ng
is more difficult than giving and keeping silence is more difficult than shouting
Alyosha can be a child of the generous Yefim Petrovitch in a way Ivan cannot
t
OU.
'l
simply because Alyosha thankfully acknowledges Yefim's fatherly .gestures whi. e Ivan
stubbornly avoids them.
Ivan speaks angrily to people who wish to do .him some
charity, desiring rather to stand firmly on his own two feet and support himself at
all cost.
Alyosha, on the other hand, accepts hospitality from anyone; he doesn't
bother about who is taking care of him; and even as a child he endures the insults of
his school-fellows without a word of complaint, harshness, or cruelty. Ivan tends to
turn down invitations to merry-making, but Alyosha, now that he has received Grusha's
loving kindness and set aside his troubled spirit, is ready to respond gladly to the
biggest invitation imaginable.
.
.
.
Father Paissey is reading the story of the wedding party in Cana, of Galilee,
from st. John's gospel, over the dead body of Father Zossima, when Alyosha returns to
the hermitage f rorn Grushenka' s house.
Exhausted by the turmoil and tumult of the
day, as is Dmitri when he dreams of the babe and Ivan when he d~eams of ~he devil,
Alyosha enters into the sacred tale. He is invited by Father Zossima, who is present
at the wedding, to join the party, the marriage feast at which joy abounds.
Even
Alyosha, for whom receiving is so easy, is hidden and out of sight, so that he
requires a special invitation corning from the person whom he most trusts and holds
most dear .
Alyosha, who has been hiding from the outside, the world beyond the
ikon-covered gates of the cloistered monks, is finally ready to grasp fully the words
of Father zossirna -- "he who loves men loves their gladness" -- and the words of
Dmitri --"there is no living without joy" -- and the words of either Father Zossima
or Dmitri Alyosha isn't sure which, probably both --"everything that is true and
good is ~!ways full of forgiveness" -- and the beauty and goodness of Jesus. in
changing water into wine so that the poor people around the Lake of Genesareth might
be festive and happy~
When the walls recede in the midst of Alyosha's dream, the
distinction between inside, the cloistral walls of the monastery, and outside, the
world is erased. Alyosha finally sees that what happens inside has everything to do
with ~hat happens outside and what happens outside has everything to do with what
happens inside. The world as well as the church is a place to delight in feasts ~nd
celebrations, a place to be with others for the good of all. . Th~ sudden comi~g
together of places Alyosha had always considered separate and distinct causes his
soul to overflow "with rapture" and to yearn for "freedom, space, openness." For the
first time Alyosha sees the splendor and the glory of his familiar surroundings:
The vault of heaven, full of soft, shining stars, stretched
vast and fathomless above him. The Milky Way ran in two pale
streams
from the zenith to the horizon.
The
fresh,
motionless, still night enfolded the earth. The white towers
and golden domes of the cathedral gleamed out against the
sapphire sky. The gorgeous autumn flowers, in the beds round
the house, were slumbering till morning.
The silence of the
earth seemed to melt into the silence of the heavens.
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�.For the first tim~ Alyosha sees the oneness of all things. Before attending the
marriage feast everything is scattered all over the place. Breathlessly Alyosha runs
from Father Zossima in the monastery to Dmitri in the garden, from Dmitri in the
garden to Fyodor in the house, from Fyodor to Katerina and Grushenka, back and forth,
from Smerdyakov by the cottage to Ivan at the tavern.
After attending the marriage
feast everything is unified.
All of Alyosha's experience points toward a common
center:
the Holy Trinity.
Alyosha's acceptance of Christ's invitation through
Father Zossima entails seeing how extraordinary are the ordinary things of God. Just
by seeing ordinary things as God's things they suddenly become transformed and shine
forth in ways which astound and amaze those who are filled with pious awe and wonder.
Alyosha's participation in the eucharistic celebration will be truly life-receiving
for him and life-giving for others from here on out.
Alyosha ' s dream-vision renders less unintelligible some of the misty, mystical
words of Father Zossima' s last conversation: "God took seeds from different worlds
and sowed them on this earth, and His garden grew up and everything came up that
could come up, but what grows lives and is alive only through the feeling of its
contact with other mysterious worlds. If that feeling grows weak or is destroyed in
you, the heavenly growth will die away in you.
Then you will grow indifferent to
life and even grow to hate it." The different worlds which are threaded together for
Alyosha at the marriage feast are the various human relationships of utmost
importance in his life. Each relationship is a world unto itself but they all have a
unitary meaning.
Alyosha's dream-vision blends into one holy partnership Father
Zossima, Mitya and Grusha, the bride and bridegroom, Jesus and Mary, the wise
governor of the feast and the poor villagers. For the one who was hidden and out of
7ig?t ~11 these people and contacts were unrelated, but for the one who accepts the
invitation and partakes of the feast, they are mystically joined in spiritual
fellowship.
Christ's invitation to us all is, as Father Zossima says, unceasing forever and
ever:
"He is expecting new guests ..• they are bringing new wine." It is not that we
a~e invited only once in our lives and if we refuse our hopes are dashed.
Every
~inute of ever~ hour of every... Jesus invites all of us to gather together in
Joyful fellowship at the sacred table.
By keeping hidden and out of sight we offer
almost as great a rejection of Him as when we come right out into the open, say: 'No,
be lost!'
Jesus' suffering did not end at Golgotha, He has to endure our avoidance
of his saving gestures again and again, as often as we turn our backs. Yet he still
reserves a seat for each of us at the table to help us overcome our horrible abiding
aloneness. Imagine how sad it would be to sit at your seat and wait for a friend who
refused to take his or her seat. Such sadness, however, can last for a time. Before
long a table will be set only for those who accepted the invitation.
Who these
people are, God only knows, but all will rejoice. What then shall we say? Shall we
accept or reject Christ's invitation? Some might respond, saying: 'I am not called
and nothing you can say will make me believe that I am called.' Others:'I trust I am
invited but I do not want to have anything to do with a party that is no more than a
gathering of the elect.' Others: 'I trust I am called, and I am extremely grateful,
but the shame I would feel in God's presence would be unbearable for me. '
still
others: 'Thanks for inviting me.
I shall join but I shall feel no joy there. '
Finally some people might r espond , saying: 'Hurrah! I shall give up anything and
everything, even my life, to be able to attend such a joy-creating festive
celebration of spiritual fellowship with the Father at the head of the table and the
Son serving the new wine of gladness. '
There are as many different responses as
there are hearts to respond.
The invitation is always being tendered and Jesus
always waits patiently for gracious acceptance. For our part, whether we like it or
not, we are always responding, each and every second, in one way or another, for
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Having attended the marriage feast and witnessed the glory and splendor of the
sapphire sky and golden domes, Alyosha is filled with such ecstasy that only one
thing is left for him to do:
Alyosha stood, gazed, and suddenly threw himself down on
the earth. He did not know why he embraced it. He could not
have told why he longed so irresistibly to kiss it, to kiss it
all.
But he kissed it weeping, sobbing and watering it with
his tears, and vowed passionately to love it, to love it
forever and ever. "Water the earth with the tears of your joy
and love those tears," echoed in his soul ••• He longed to
forgive everyone and for everything, and to beg forgiveness.
Oh, not for himself, but for all men, for all and for
everything. "And others are praying for me too", echoed again
in his soul ••• something firm and unshakable as that vault of
heaven had entered his soul ••• some idea had seized the
sovereignty of his mind -- and it was for all his life and
forever and ever. He had fallen on the earth a weak boy, but
he rose up a resolute champion •.• And never, never, all his
life long, could Alyosha forget that minute.
Now the gentle and open-hearted novice is ready to be fully what he was always meant
to be, a ministering angel full of love for the lowest things of the earth because of
their relation to the highest things of heaven. Alyosha's arms embrace all people in
all conditions through every season and in every place.
Having watered the earth
with his joyful tears, he will be able to bring forth fruit in abundance once lie
enters upon his ministry in the world, which is to serve Jesus Christ in hope of His
coming reign by serving his fellow human beings with the new wine. Once Alyosha hugs
and kisses the earth there is nothing left for him to do but give himself up for
others.
He is finally a true disciple of Jesus Christ and a true spiritual son of
Father Zossima, that holy man who "joyfully gave up his soul to God" with his arms
ecstatically outstretched "praying and kissing the ground."
Only after Father
zossima speaks to him directly from the marriage feast is Alyosha prepared to obey
the Elder's commandments:" Be with your brothers ••. If evil spirits rise up repeat a
prayer .•• You will have to endure all before you come back .•• In sorrow seek
happiness ••. Begin your work dear one ..• Sojourn in the world."
.
Part of the work of a champion is to care for others by graciously and patiently
accepting their griefs as his own.
Alyosha's patience allows him to listen
attentively to the hysterical remarks of Mitya and Ivan, Grusha and Katerina, Lise
and Mme. Hohlakov, to take calmly upon himself the burden of their woes without
passing judgement on their depth or genuineness,
to recognize mildly that "tragic
phrases comfort the heart."
Patience is not passivity; neither is. it ~toical,
unmoved endurance. Patience, derived ultimately from the Greek pascho, is, first, an
experiencing, or enduring, or suffering, of turmoil and sorrow, with kindness and
gentleness, in hope of a coming time of plenty, rest, and joy; and last, an active,
attentive hearing and feeling of this experience so that what is offered as a
teaching may be learned. Alyosha's patience makes it possible for him to absorb the
harsh, sometimes vile and cruel words and deeds of his fellows in human community
without condemning the speakers and doers. His simple pious way of being tells us a
truth so simple and so common that it is often overlooked, or, what is worse,
despised: imaginatively feeling for others who are in anguish, taking their part,
whether in prayer or in being fully present for them, not as an advisor or as a
counselor, but just as a fellow presence, is a great act of gracious human goodn~ss.
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�children, but also adults, and plant seeds of goodwill in their hearts.
Father
Zossima remarks on :he first time he understood something read in church -- the story
of Job -- and how important that event was for his future well being. All children
should be blessed with the oppo rtunity to hear sacred stories fr om the Bible, stories
which they may not fully understand -- who does? -- but which will allow them to feel
involvement, excitement, fear, happiness, the full array of emotions which an
imaginative listener passes through during the reading of a good story.
Father
Zossima urges priests who are overburdened with "works and services" to devote at
le~st one hour a week to sharing the remembrance of Jerusalem with children.
The
priest ought to invite the children to his cottage during the week, preparing jam and
tea. for th~m, ~avo~ites of Father Zossima and Alyosha: "Let him open the book and
begin reading it without grand words or superciliousness, without condescension to
t~em, ~ut g~ntly and ~indly, being glad that he is reading to them and that they are
listening with attention, loving the words himself •.. Let him too weep, the priest of
God, ~nd be sure the hearts of his listeners will throb in response.
Only a tiny
seed is needed -- drop it into the heart of the peasant and it won't die it will
live in his s oul all his life, it will be hidden in the midst of the dar~ness and
sin, like a bright spot, like a great reminder."
The work of the champion invo lves not only being with and for people in their
~orr?w, but also abiding in people as a good memory so that they may call him forth
in times of trouble (Jn . 15). Christ's kiss glows in the Inquisitor's heart. Yet on
account of his willful and ongoing rejection of the-rnvitation being extended to him
he cannot bring forth fruits that befit repentance.
The Cardinal adheres to hi~
ideas instead of risking change.
Ivan's wish to receive an abiding gesture of love
f:om Alyosha is his primary motive for reciting his prose poem .
Ivan needs to be
ki~se~, b.u t he makes i: impossible for Alyosha's kiss to glow in his heart by
br~~ging it about by design. Alyosha earlier kissed Lise right smack on the lips in
a f~t of spontaneous passion and joy, but the kiss he gives his brother lacks that
spontaneity which is the mark of true sincerity .
It is as if Ivan calculates
Alyosha's kiss so that he can convince himself that it isn't genuine and so that he
ca~ continue to remain alone on his wavering path of doubt and despair.
Ivan is
still . a.young man; he may emerge from his madness and find himself in the hands of
the living God . Nevertheless Ivan warns us how soon a heart can become hardened. It
needn't take ninety years. That is in part why Father Zossima wants priests to read
holy t~les in the Bible to children, to show them that redemption comes by way of
~uf~eri~g, so that when as adults they freely choose either to accept or reject God's
invitation ~o the great feast at least they will do so knowing the Orthodox belief .
Father Zossima sheds sad tears over children and youths like Ivan who bitterly turn
away from God because of some wrongheaded belief .
K~lya Krasso.tkin is in danger of some day being in Ivan's shoes.
Kol ya is an
e~ceptional~y br.ight boy who closed- heartedly holds certain good feelings at a
distance, like his love for his mother, because of their 'sheepish sentimentality'.
Desperately wishing to be admired by older and younger friends alike, Kolya goes to
great lengths to win approval and acceptance. Kolya Krassotkin is willfully like one
of the factory children of whom Father Zossima speaks, children who are never given a
chance to be children, to grow up in a heal thy way, playing in the sunshine.
Although Kolya is granted a blissful day of tears in his mother ' s arms after the
railway incident, he suffers the misfortune of falling into Rakitin's fiendish hands
of being indoctrinated in socialist teachings after the manner of the Gran~
Inquisitor. Alyosha: "I am sad that a charming nature such as yours should be
perverted by all this crude nonsense before you have begun life ." Kolya is always in
a hurry to quote clever phrases and display his grown - up knowledge for fear the whole
world is l.aughi?g at. him , as if he were created as a mockery.
so much of Kol ya' s
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recognized as 'deep' •
Thanks to Alyosha's saving patience and kind-heartedness,
Kolya gets a chance to see that a person can be grown-up and childlike at the same
time, a person can be simple and gentle and still be respected and loved.
Alyosha
urges Kolya to stand apart from the devil's vanity which seeks to make clever people
feel ridiculous about confessing to themselves their own tenderness and affection for
others. Thanks to Ilusha's illness Kolya can feel what it is like to run his fingers
through his friend's hair,
to forgive and be forgiven,
to weep tears of
reconciliation and love.
Alyosha hopes and prays that Kolya will always remember
those beautiful moments by Ilusha's bedside beneath the holy ikons.
Alyosha for his part blushes when Kolya acknowledges their declaration of love,
not because he is afraid of his own good heart, but because of the simple fact that
without any effort on his part people just love him and trust him -- that is a gift
Alyosha has been given -- and because he is meant to suffer for himself only for a
few short hours, while others, like Kolya, Dmitri, and Ivan, must suffer at length
for him.
Alyosha must try to understand and come to terms with those struggles of
others -- jealousy, envy, bitterness, anger, hatred, pride -- which he has the great
good fortune to be without. · He does not have the worldly experience· of others, but
he is living testimony that a person may gain wisdom just as well by peacefully
attending to his inner life with God as by going everywhere and doing everything.
Pascal: ••• _!! ai dit souvent ~tout le malheur des homrnes vient d'une seule chose,
q~ est de ne savoir pas demeurer ~ repos dans ~ chambre (Pensee #136) •
Alyosha is sent by God as an apostle to teach Kolya that being a simple-hearted
child is more wholesome than being a complicated adult, to warn Dmitri that it is not
for him to sing his song of praise from the underground and bear his cross in
Siberia, and to tell Ivan that it was not he who killed their father.
Alyosha's
wisdom, his mildness and patience, is manifest again with the boys after Ilusha' s
funeral.
Kolya says that he could not care less about the very being of Kartashov,
his partner in the knowledge of who founded Troy. Alyosha allows Kolya to utter his
harsh and cruel words without admonishment, and only later proclaims that he for one
cares a whole . lot about Kartashov' s being.
Alyosha knows enough to wait for the
opportune time before speaking out in response to Kolya's sinful outburst. Meanwhile
he learns about how difficult the death of a friend can be for a person like Kolya.
Alyosha is simply good from the very start, but he is ever so much better after
attending the wedding feast. His new clothes and unshakable serenity are signs that
he has learned from his teacher to be a teacher himself, a true monk in the world,
bearing other people's burdens, helping them to clarify their confusions, paying heed
to every gesture and glance with a
view to what will find a permanent place in
especially children's hearts.
Aside from patient and attentive listening, the champion monk's main activity
consists in gathering people together in "good and kind feeling" so that they might
be, for a time anyway, "better perhaps than they ordinarily are." At the beginning
Father Zossima is at the center of · two gatherings: a simple, heal thy, fortunate
gathering among pious women confessing their sins, begging forgiveness, seeking
comfort, and offering charity; and a complicated, unhealthy, unfortunate gathering
among the likes of Ivan, Rakitin, and Miusov, who are concerned with grand arguments
on matters of the state and the church. Father Zossima succeeds at being a champion
outside with the open-hearted peasant women, but not inside with the hard- hearted
noblemen.
At the end Alyosha succeeds in being a champion at the center of a group
of twelve boys who are gathered together to share their grief over the death of their
beloved friend.
Having learned at the marriage party that all worlds are threaded
together into one whole, Alyosha knows his place at the stone, the special place
where Ilusha and his father wept for one another and shared their dreams. Alyosha
knows that is gathering together what God has already gathered, solidifying what the
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�been hidden, namely, "th at there is no thing higher and stronger and more wh olesome
and go od for life in the future than a go od memory . " Alyosha: "You are all dear to
me, boy s, fr om t h is day forth, I have a place in my heart for you all, and I beg you
t o keep a place in your heart for me! Well, and who has united us in this kind, good
fee l i ng which we shall reme mber and intend to remember all our lives? Who, if not
I l usha, the good boy , the dear boy, precious to us forever!
Let us never forget him .
May h is memo ry live forever in our hearts from this day forth . "
Alyosha wishes
I lusha's death allows our story to end on a no te of new life.
t h e boys t o p o ssess a saving memo ry o f Ilusha on his deathbed just as Father zossima
p o ssess e d a saving memo ry of Markel o n his deathbed. Ilusha has the same kind spirit
as Marke l , asking his friends to c o mfo rt his father and requesting that bread be put
o n his grav e s o t h at he might be visited by the sparrows. Alyosha , along with Father
Zossima and M
arkel, has a difficu lt time making his deepest, most heart- felt sayings
inte l lig ible. Altho ugh the barriers o f speech are being broken, as well they should
be a t a time like this, this much can readily be grasped from Alyosha's words, that
while f o r Ivan, I l u s ha's death is an o ccasion f o r lonesome despair, an opportunity to
re j e c t God's creat ion , f o r Alyo sha, I lusha's death is an occasio n for the l iving to
join hands i n fe l l ow-feeling , an opportunity t o be good and do something pleasing to
God . Ivan's s tubborn s o u l pales beside Alyo sha's pilgrim s oul .
Father Zo ssima teache s that we are all bound togethe r , mutually dependen t and
mutu ally influ enc i ng , t hat try i ng to g ain c ontrol over the complex web o f h uman
re l a t i o ns is a mis gu ided e nterprise.
Smerdyakov do es just this in being the great
init iato r o f a ct i ons : l y ing t o Dmitri a bout the time o f the gathering in Father
Zos sima' s cell; telling Fyodor . that Gr u shenka wi l l show while knowing f u ll well that
s h e won't; preparing Dmitri f o r the murd er by i n f o rming him of the se c ret kno cks a nd
the whereabo uts of the three-thousand r ou b les; setting up Fyodor for the kill by
encourag ing I v an t o le ave t own; f aki ng an e p i l eptic fit.
Yet nothi ng happ ens quite
t h e way Smerdyakov plan s.
Hi s p u r po s e f u l actio n s h ave c o nsequ enc es s o far-r e a ch i ng
he cannot maintain his rule .
Smerdyako v d enies the operation of providence by
wi l l ful l y do ing eve r ything on hi s own , and h e p ays the price.
Happenings impo ssible
t o p redi ct come t umb l i ng down o n top o f h i m. Alyo sha, on the o ther h a n d, is always
on the receiving end, trusting in God 's guidance.
His talk with the boys is the
f irs t ac t which he i n itiates and l e ad s, as one s e nt b y God. Alyo sha knows that the
wo rl d 's complexit y, hugene ss, a nd g randeu r are f o r him to beho ld, n ot t o comprehen d .
Fath er Zo ss ima : " My b r o t h er asked the birds t o f o r g ive him: that s ounds s en seless,
b u t it is ri ght; f o r all i s like an ocean , al l is fl owing a nd blend i ng ; a t ou ch in
o ne place sets up a movement at the o the r end o f the earth.
It may be senseless t o
beg f o rgiveness of the birds, but b irds would be happier at your side -- a little
happier, anyway -- and ch i l dren and all animals, if you yourself were nob ler than you
are now. I t's a ll l i k e a n ocean , I t e ll you . Th en y ou wou ld pra y to the bir ds too ,
consumed by a n a ll e mb rac i ng love , in a s o rt o f transport, and pray tha t they t oo
will f o rgiv e your sin s, Tr e asu re this e c s t asy, however sense l ess it may s eem t o men."
Acco rding to Ivan, "the earth is s o aked from its crust t o its center" wi t h "the
tea rs o f h uma n i ty . " Ivan is a n oc ean o f ind ignation and a nguish .
Father Zoss ima 's
is a n o cean of f o r giveness and joy . Fo rgive n ess is crucia l. We h a v e t o act all the
t i me witho ut k nowi ng what will be the c on sequ ences o f o ur acti on s, without knowing
whether and t o what extent we are involved in evildoing. All are responsible to all
f o r al l a nd everything precisely b ecau s e t he wo rld is t h e kind o f place Father
Zo ssima says it is, a place b o und t ogether by a web o f c omplex relations.
An
analogue fr om the natural kingdom might help: "it is quite credible that the presence
o f a feline ·animal in large numbers in a district mi ght determine, through the
intervention first of mic e then of bees, the frequency of certain fl owers in t h at
district!" (Darwin, The Origin of Species ) . We might go back one more step, saying,
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ladies tend to own cats -- and the occurrence of those same flowers.
Fyodor and
Gr ushenka employ Snegiryov in a business deal; Dmitri is infuriated and humiliates
snegiryov; Ilusha happens to be standing nearby and witnesses the beating of his
father; Ilusha kisses Dmitri's hand and begs for the salvation of his father's
dignity; Ilusha is laughed at by the school boys on account of Snegiryov's disgr ace;
rlusha's morbid sensitivity yields to illness; the doctor cannot help; Katerina's and
Alyosha's earlier mission to provide financial help failed; Kolya a rr ives with
Perezvon too late; Ilusha' s illness leads to an early death .
Who among those
involved in this simplified chain of events is not in part responsible for the boy ' s
death? or is it Smerdyakov who is responsible because he put Ilusha up to the c r uel
trick with Perezvon?
Or is it Raki tin, influencing Kolya? Or Ivan, influencing
smerdyakov? Or Father Zossima? All are.
Alyosha's speaking to a group of boys about what is good and wholesome in life,
and his eating pancakes with a sorrowing family in need of companionship, a r e acts of
kindness great in-their simplicity .
Alyosha sees that small things can make a big
difference in a complex world .
For this reason alone , Kolya is right to say that
Alyosha is better than other people -- including himself and Ivan , even Dmitri . But
it is not necessary to stress that one person is better than another .
It is
necessary to stress that the presence and life of everyone is equally impor tant .
Mutual interdependence and mutual recognition are at the heart of human being . Those
who are bothered by the hierarchy of abilities or talents which is indeed in the
order of things are those who become bitter and envious . God shows his love fo r each
of us by providing each of us with the ability to respond to Him and His creation,
but He offers me talents, and opportunities to exercise my talents, which he does not
offer you, and He offers you talents, and opportunities to exercise your talents ,
which he does not offer me . My gifts a r e diffe r ent from your gifts , and your gifts
are different from mine .
But the important thing is not that our gifts are
different, or that I have more than you or you have more than me as if gifts of this
sort could be weighed or measured; the important thing is that we acknowledge our
gifts as such, that we receive them graciously, by doing whatever is in our power to
make the most of them fo r our own sake and fo r the sake of one another . We may not
have equally strong intellects, that is just impossible , but it is possible f o r
everyone to have equally pure hearts, . provided we each walk along the way God has
established uniquely for us .
Yet this fact -- that the presence and life of each
person is to be cherished equally -- should not hinder our tendency to care for some
more than others.
Father Zossima loves Alyosha more than Porfiry, and Yefim loves
Alyosha more than Ivan . That is just the way things are . In order to attain to that
blessed state of being whe r eby we love all equally, whe r eby we are as open- hearted to
any one as to any other, a state which only Jesus Christ among human beings attained ,
all those critical and favorable impulses that run through the imagination on the
mere sight of another person would haye to be in balance, or would have to be erased
altogether . For some r eason, God knows why, we are the sort of being to be drawn to
the look and the spirit of one per son over against anothe r .
That may be a good
thing .
May it not be more in keeping with the human way -- and the most excellent
employment of it -- to seek to give as much to others as enter s our soul to give on
each encounter with another? To be sure, if this were the most we could give, and i f
the same kind and deg r ee we r e of f e r ed to all without e x ception, t h en p erh a p s t he
highest state could and would be achieved .
But as it stands, let us each give to
every other all that we are able to give, in recognition of our f r ailty .
And when
the imagination reaches out for some mo r e than others, we should not despai r , for
that despai r will hinder the love we can offer to these few . The highest exellence
achieved will always be incomplete. Let us simply set to work stretching our selves
out toward the love of God, reaching for the source and origin of all living beings,
for only then will we be able truly to love one another.
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�into one holy koinonia remembering Jerusalem?

Purposiveness in Kant's Critique of Judgment
Alistair Morrison

Acknowledgements
Igor Stravinsky, for Symphony of Psalms; Father Schillebeeckx, for Jesus:
An
Experiment in Christology
(section 111 of my paper relies heavily on his
scholarship) ; Mr. Carey and Brother Robert, for our talks on the way to Russian
church and at the dinner table, Mr. O'Grady, for our conversations, and Mr. Smith,
for his New Testament class, teachers and friends, thank you!

The judgment, by its use of the principle "Of purposiveness, provides a bridge
between the realms of understanding and reason, between what we know in natural philosophy, and what we know in practical philosophy. The knowledge of natural philosophy is limited to those things whose concept the understanding can form.
Thus
natural philosophy can only know the agreement of nature with the categories of the
understanding. The knowledge of practical philosophy extends beyond these limits to
discover those implications of our capacity for free action which are necessary
according to principles of reason.
It discovers the moral law, and this in turn
dictates certain things that we must think about the nature of the world in which we
live.
"Judgment in ge~eral is the faculty of thinking the particular as contained
under the universal."
We bring order to our experience of the world by judgment.
we unite a multitude of particular experiences under a few universal principles, laws
and rules.
In natural science we make use of a kind of judgment that Kant distinguishes as the determinant judgment. In determinant judgment the universal is a law.
of the understanding, a universal law of nature, which we have ~ priori from the ·
categories of our understanding. Determinant judgment subsumes the empirical laws of
nature under the universal laws, and in so doing discovers an order among these laws.
That it discovers such a unity in our experience of nature cannot easily be
explained. We can imagine the empirical laws of nature obeying the universal laws of

our understanding, without showing any such organization among themselves.
For
instan2e, while the ·necessity of a universal law such as "every change must have its
cause" provides some unity in our experience, it does not necessitate the degree of
orderliness met in laws of nature such as the inverse square law of forces.
In thinking about such unity · of experience we use another class of judgment
reflective judgment. These do not start from universal ~ priori laws·, but seek s°CJme
unifying principl~ - f6r our particular experiences. - Prope~ly spe~king, they . do not
directly increase our knowledge of the world.
For while reflective judgments have
only subjective validity, they allow us to find an order in our experience of the
world that goes beyond that which determinant judgment can attain.
We value such a
systematization of nature, even tho~gh we recognize it as only subjectively valid.
We are not interested in knowledge that has the form of raw data, but seek
organization and simplicity in what we know of the world.
The kind of systematization that we find in both the empirical laws of nature
and certain natural products transcends the order of the universal laws that we have
~ priori in the understanding.
The principles which bring unity to the empirical
laws of nature are not objects of experience. Instead we discover them in r eflection
about nature.
In order to find a principle such as "nature takes the shortest path"
we must expect it - that is, we must think it possible. No objective knowledge of
nature will allow us to think this possibility; instead, w.e·use the principle of
·Subjective purposiveness. We can think it possible that nature has been arranged in
empirical laws for the benefit of our cognitive faculties. We think of nature as the
product of an intelligent cause who had our partic~lar cognitive faculties in mind
when creating the order of the empirical laws of nature.
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�behave as if these empirical laws have an understandable o rder; God is subtle, but
not malicious. We cart then use such principles as "nature takes the shortest path"
and "nothing in nature is in vain; everything is good for something" to seek nature's
empirical laws. We can use the idea that nature constitutes a systematized whole in
order to look for consistency between empirical laws which at first seem dissimi lar. The reconciliation of the laws o f electrodynamic phenomena with the principle of
re lativity in Einstein's special theory provides a good example of the use of this
p rinciple.
This principle guides the investigation s of natural philosophy, but
natural philosophy does not therefore assert its truth.
While natural philosophy
uses this principle, it does not ask why it works.
Kant defines a purpose as "the product j&gt;f a cause whose determining ground is
merely the representati on of its effect . "
In judgments o f purposiveness we
recognize an o rganization whose possibility we cannot think, unless we think that the
idea of the effect guided its production .
In our own purposes, we f orm an idea of
the effect we wish to bring about; then, as much as is in our p ower, we determine the
mechanisms o f nature in o rder to achieve this end . Our own productions have a high
level of order which natural p roducts like rocks and mountains do not possess.
In our own productions because we know that for the sake of which the object was
created,
the cause involves the idea of its effect. We attribute purposiveness to
an object or state of affairs whose possibility we cannot understand except as the
effect of such an intelligent cause.
The C:ritigue of Judgment shows that we judge nature to have both objective and
subjective purposes.
We come to see subjective purposes when we judge that nature
has been arranged the way it is for the benefit of our cognitive faculties.
Aesthetic judgments are of this sort, and so are the presuppositions of natural
philosophy cited above. We see subjective purposiveness in form (or its negation) and
in the harmony of form with our cognitive faculties. We come to see objective
purposiveness is seen in what Kant calls organized beings.
These are products of
nature whose existence we cannot think possible unless we think that the ground of
this possibility lies in the representation of the being itself.
Products whose possibility we can understand as grounded in the universal laws
of nature Kant calls products of the mechanism of nature .
Such a ground can enable
us to think the possibility of rocks, rivers, mountains, or salt crystals.
Yet it
fails to explain the production of a blade of grass, for such a being is both the
cause and the effect of itself. We cannot understand the possibility of the produc tion, maintenance, and reproduction of such a being, without thinking that the idea
of the blade of grass has been used to determine the gathering and arranging of the
materials .that constitute it .
The processes of production, maintenance, and
reproduction all take place by means of the mechanism of nature . Yet the possibility
of such a combination of (natural) occu rrences cannot be thought to depend upon this
cause.
We call a blade of grass a purpose of nature because we can think all its
parts and processes as possible only by referring them to the idea o f the whole. We
thus think that there is an intelligent substrate to the perceived purposiveness of
nature, for such a cause tr.at can determine the mechanisms of nature so that they
produce a product according to the representation of that product.
If we could show that every intelligent being needs the idea of purposiveness in
order to think either the possibility of o rganized beings, o r the possibility of the
order present in the empirical laws of nature, then we could attribute objective validity to the principle of purposiveness - just as if it were a rational concept
suitable for use by the determinant judgment .
But Kant says that we see
purposiveness in nature only because of the peculiar construction of our cognitive
faculties.
For human understanding , the possible and the actual are distinct.
we need to
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understanding, while we meet actuality in the intuitions of the sensibility. Because
we cannot think. that every intelligent being must have such a discursive understanding, we cannot assert the principle of purposiveness to have objective validity.
If
we form an idea of a higher understanding, our thought finds it repugnant to think
that possibility differs from actuality for God - or even for the angels. We think
instead that their superior understandings possess a superior notion of possibility
which makes it concurrent with actuality.
We do not see why there could not be
unicorns in the world, but we think that such an understanding would not share our
confusion.
For our understanding, then, an organized being results from the cooperation of
its parts. It cannot also ground this cooperative combination, for then the actuality would have created the possibility - which makes no sense for a discursive understanding.
Since we cannot find the ground of this cooperative combination in the
laws of nature, we place it in the representation of the being. Yet we can think of
a higher understanding which does not possess the split between possible and actual.
such a being might understand the possibility of organized beings to depend only on
the mechanism of nature. The knowledge of this mechanism which this being would have
transcends. the ·knowledqe that we can have. For it, organized beings would be no more
purposive than the rest of nature.
Reason's hope in a greater unity underlying nature than that which we know with
our limited understanding, and thus its idea of an understanding capable of knowing
this unity, makes us acknowledge that all understandings might not require the principle of purposiveness. While universally, subjectively valid for human beings, it
cannot be attributed to an object, because we cannot prove that every intelligent
being must think that purpose underlies nature.
The principle of purposiveness provides a bridge between understanding and reason.
We never come to know purposes through natural philosophy.
They belong to us
as free beings, and natural philosophy cannot know anything about this kind of
causality. Instead, it uses the idea of such a causality to guide its investigation
of natural laws .
In this way, natural philosophy makes it possible for us to
discover that the principle which asserts purpose as a cause in nature is at least
subjectively valid for human beings. The critique of our teleological judgment shows
the principle of purposiveness as essential to human thought, and as its particular
possession.
The understanding, by the possibility of its~ priori
laws for nature gives proof that nature is only
cognized by us as a phenomenon and implies, at the
same time, that it has a supersensible substrate,
though it leaves this quite undetermined.
The judgment, by its ~ priori principle for the judging of
nature according to its possible particular laws,
makes the supersensible substrate (both in us and
without us) determinable by means of the intellectual
faculty.
But the reason, by its practical ~ priori
law, determines it; and thus the judgment makes possible the transition from the realm of t~e natural concept to that of the concept of freedom .
Reason determines the supersensible substrate in its own special activity of
.practical philosophy. Recognition of our will as an unconditioned cause in the world
of sense provides tt:ie basis for practical philosophy.
Practical philosophy shows
that our ability to form our own purposes makes us a final end, an end in ourselves.
And when we know the final end of nature, we can learn something about the substrate.
of nature.. Practical philosophy also shows why we do not need more knowledge of this
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�One of the a priori principles of practical philosophy is that f r eedom is meant
to actualize itself in the world .
In moral philosophy one mus t think that the exi stence of an intelligent cause in the world is at least possible . We must attempt to
bring about the purposes that the moral law sets before us ~ Although the achievement
of our purposes is contingent in the world, we must think that ther e is a chance for
us to make that which ought to be into that which is . Thus, r eason comes
to find agreement with what it knows p r actically about the world in the reflective
principle of judgments about nature which natu r al philosophy uses .
Both reason and
the understanding require the idea of a n intelligent s ubst rat e.
Reason, howeve r,
cannot merely represent the existence of this substrate - it mus t determi ne this
substrate according to the requirements of practical philosophy .
It is right to use the principles of pract ical philosophy to inquire into the
substrate of purposiveness in the world o f s ense . On l y we must r ecognize as we beg i n
this endeavor that we have over- stepped t he bounds of natu r al science whose knowledge
demands expe r ience to complete its concepts . Or ganized beings - objective purposes offer the best evidence for the existence of an intelligent author of natu r e .
For
subjective purposes are thought pur posive wi th r efe r ence to our cognitive facult i es .
We think their form designed to conform to our cogn i tion .
However, we cannot think
the possibility of an organized being unless it has its ground in the repr esentation
of the being . Here existence, and not the form of the object , demands the principle
of purposiveness .
We can think the organized being to be eithe r a final purpose, an end in itself,
or a mere relative purpose .
The determination of the final purpose of nature would
provide some knowledge of the intelligent being that chose this purpose . When we see
purposive behavior in humans, we cannot judge very well about this behavior until we
know its final purpose .
Once we know this, we can app r ove or disapprove both the
methods and intentions .
A final purpose of nature must be distinct from t he chain of cause and effect
that binds the whole of the mechanism of natur e .
Its causality would have to be unconditioned .
It could be determined by nothing else for pur poses not its own:
In side nature everything serves something else as a relative purpose . We call this by
names such as "the balance of nature" and admire it g r eatly . We are aware of only
one thing that stands free from this chain of cause and effect , and that is our own
will . In practical philosophy the will is free of a ny determination by natural con ditions .
The purpose s we set befor e our selves are onl y our own , though inclination
often influences us .
Thus the faculty from which we gain our idea of a purpose
provides us with the only possible experience of a f inal purpose .
So far we have only discovered where in nature the intelligent author has placed
the final purpose (if indeed nature as a whole has such a purpose) . Thus , we have
only de termined what Kant calls the ultimate purpose of nature - the one uncondi tioned being in the n a tur al world.
To find the final purpose we must discover what
about our free will could make it suitable to have the rest o f nature subordinated to
it as a means .
Kant distinguishes two different ways in which we use our faculty of making purposes.
The first searches out those purpose s which natu r e can satisfy .
The second
makes purposes and bends the mechanisms of nature in o r der to achieve these, developing its power over natu~e.
Ka nt cal l s the f i rst h appi n ess, a nd t he se cond culture.
He dismisses the idea that happiness is the final purpose of nature by simply
pointing out that man has no determinant idea of happine s s itself, but :
It is a mer e ideastate that he wishes to make
adequate to the idea under me r ely ernpiric~l con~it ions
(which is impossible) . This i dea he p r oJ e cts in such
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understanding with imagination and sense, and changes
so often, that nature, even if it were entirely subjected to his elective will, could receive absolutely
no determinate, universal and fixed law, so as to harmonize with this vacillating concept and thus with the
purpose which each man arbitrarily sets before himself. And even if we reduce this to the true natural
wants as to which our race is thoroughly agreed or, on
the other hand, raise ever so high man's skill to ac'complish imagined purposes, yet even thus what man
understands by happiness and what is in fact his proper, ultimate, natural purpose (not purpos~ of freedom)
would never be attained by him .
For it is not his
nature to rest and be contented wj-th the possession
and enjoyment of anything whatever.
Kant next points out that we have good grounds to believe that nature has not been
set up to satisfy us as pre - eminent creatures of nature, for when viewed as such a
creature, man has no priority over any other such product as far as the treatment
that he receives from nature goes. Kant then moves on to culture, which he divides
into the culture -of skill and training . The culture of skill is our ability to set
arbitrary purposes before ourselves and satisfy them by means of the mechanisms of
nature.
The development of the arts and sciences gives us greater power over nature
and makes our lives easier . Yet learning to satisfy purposes without learning how to
choose them, is inadequate to the idea of a final purpose of nature, for such
knowledge is not directed to anything superior to nature .
The culture of training,
whereby we learn to free ourselves from the bonds of inclination, and thus develop a
truly free will, is adequate to this idea. Here we interact with nature to produce
something that not only will become independant of nature, but is in its elf the
h i ghest good that we can conceive - a good will . As Kant says in the Foundations of
the Metaphysics of Morals, a good will is the only unconditionally good thing of
which we can have an idea .
It contains the worthiness that purposes of inclination
lack.
As rational beings we must think that there is no purpose greater than the
right use of our freedom.
Now of man (and so of every rational creature in the
world) as a moral being it can no longer be asked why
(quern in finem) he exists. His existence involves the
highestpurpose to which, as far as is in his power he
can subject the whole of nature , contrary to which he
cannot 5egard himself as subject to any influence of
nature .
Thus if nature stands in need of a f .inal purpose its final purpose must be ourselves.
Our character as final purpose comes from adherence to the moral law.
By ex amining the moral law we can hope to find that, because of our moral worth, we are
indeed the final purpose for which nature was created. The moral law puts us in a
special relation to the world - one which We do not have without it.
It is in the
world that we hope to actualize the dictates of the moral law. At the same time mo r ality does not consist in occurrences in this world, but only in the determination
of our will.
Christ presents much the sa~e message in the gospel of Luke.
In this gospel
particularly, there is an emphatic asserti.on · that we Qan have no regard for our
worldly well- being · l.f we follow cil~ist ." ' 1 He 'tells us that whoever loves his life will
lose it.
Faith demands that we love nothing- in the world so much that we would not
quickly give it up for Christ.
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�we are able to accomplish in the world. "The fulfilling of duty consis_tts in the form
of the. earnest will, not in the intermediate causes of success."
With this
assertion he makes a claim similar to the one which Christ makes. The moral law will
not recognize any obstacles from the world of nature, for it determines what must be
done without reference to consequences.
In moral determination we can only consider
practical principles; our survival or comfort can never be an end, but only a means
to our moral life.
The potential of human beings for moral action is the highest
good that we can think of in the world. The moral law must determine what is good in
the world, and not the other way around.
Christ emphasizes repeatedly that the good things of this world serve as traps
for us.
Any love we feel for them can present a stumbling block to us.
In the
parable of the sower, Christ represents the riches of the world as thorns which choke
the growing faith, and bring it to nothing. But we must not only renounce riches and
comfort - anything of this world which we might consider a good thing can be such a
stumbling block, causing us to hesitate and miss the calling. "If anyone comes to me
a~d does not hate his own father and mother and wife and childr7n and brothers a~d
sisters, yes, and even his own life, he cannot be my disciple."
Christ says this
immediately after telling the story of the people who were invited to a great banquet, but were too busy to come when the time arrived, so that the host invited other
in their place and locked them out .
Christ calls people to leave everything of the
world if they would follow him.
And he said unto another, Follow me.
But he said,
Lord suffer me first to go and bury my father.
Jesus
said unto him, Let the dead their dead:
but go thou
and preach the kingdom of God . And another also said,
Lord, I will follow thee; but let me first go bid them
farewell, which are at home at my house.
And Jesus
said unto him, No man, having put his hand to the
plou§h, and looking back, is fit for the kingdom of
God.
It is a frightening notion that things which we recognize as good, such as the love
we feel for a family, are not good in themselves - are not good unconditionally. The
calling from heaven may take us away from those things which we were most sure were
good. In this way the dictates of faith demand that we set the value of this life at
nothing when compared with the value of the next life.
Kant says that we must look upon nature as a means which can further our moral
. growth.
When we look for any other reason in life, we are desiring happiness something which Kant says cannot provide a final purpose . We must now see the world
of sense only as ·a place to learn about the freedom of our will, and demonstrate that
.we can live up to the responsibility that accompanies such freedom. We must not look
for fulfillment in the things of this world, but must in our actions always appeal to
an understanding of what those actions mean which is higher than any understanding
that our knowledge o f nature can enable us to achieve. While Kant calls the belief
that we do not need morality to fulfill ourselves happiness, Christ calls it love of
life.
Any love of life or love of happiness will impede both moral growth and our
ability for moral action. To follow the commands of Christ we must vest no interest
in our own enjoyment of life.
"Love your enemies, do good to them which hate you,
btess t~em that curse you, and pray for them which spitefu~y use you. And unto him
that smiteth thee on the one . cheek offer also the other."
In our · de'alings in the
WOrld What rna.t terS iS OU-r. behavior tOWardS Other people I and . Whether We have lOSt
ourselves in· a love of the world.
We must set our lives at nothing and value the
lives of others:
"Love God with all your heart, and your neighbor as yourself."
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world.
I can best make- sense of Christ Is teaching about loving one Is neighbor as
oneself when I view it in light Kant's analysis of the categorical imperative,
especially in the last two formulations we find in the Foundations of the Metaphysics
of Morals.
There the essential thing lies in treating people as "ends in
themselves." ·T his demands that we recognize in ourselves and so also in others the
potential for moral action - or in Christian terms, the potential to do the word of
God.
While we demonstrate this love of our neighbors in acts of charity, it seems
important that when we provide for the worldly needs of those poorer than us we do
not therefore imply that the satisfaction of worldly needs as any great salvation.
In acting from faith, or the categorical imperative, we value each human being as
something greater than anything e·lse in the world. We do not seek to have a place in
this world for ourselves, but only attempt to serve what we see as the greatest thing
in the world - the potential in human beings for good will. "Judge not, and you will
not be judged; condemn not and you will not be condemned; forgive, and you will be
forgiven; give and it ~11 be given to you •.. For the measure you give will be the
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measure you get back."
By not seeking to judge or condemn those who do us wrong,
by offering the other cheek, we affirm life to be the most sacred of gifts. The life .
of the wrong-doer who has struck us or stolen from us matters more that worldly
justice.
Temptations to sin are sure to come; but woe to him by
whom they come!
It would be better for him if a
millstone were hung round his neck and ·he were cast
into the sea, than that he should cause one of these
little ones to sin. Take heed to yourselves; if your
b7ot~Ir sins, rebuke him, and if he repents, forgive
him.
Christ brings the message that setting accounts straight on earth is unimportant.
It is not essential whether our actions cause people to treat us well or ill.
What matters is that we do our best to love them as we love ourselves.
In order to
follow Christ then, we must not judge or condemn our neighbors out of love of the
world, but must be guided only by a love of God and a love for humanity.
Love for humanity is guided by a vision of humanity. as liberated from th~ bonds

of this world, so that we see people achieving goodness only in as much as they show
love for one another. This is not a love which attaches to any worldly aspect of the
person, !or when Christ calls we must hate even our father and mother.
The love
within families can pose an obstacle to faith because it depends on the worldly
situation of the people involved. Christ says that his mother and brothers are ·tho.s e
who hear the word of God and do it.
The relation of people in faith, then,
transcends faith, then their relations in society. One must love people in a way
that does not attach one attributes; to their worldly attributes; that is, one must
love them as one loves oneself. Fo~ we do not love ourselves .as sons, or husbands,
or bankers, or teachers; we love ourselves because we have discovered within
ourselves the potential for moral worth, the gift of life and the promise of eternal
life. We should not love our lives, but should love the opportunity to glorify God.
From our practical philosophy we discover that we must regard ourselves as the
final purpose of nature. We do not think that God has made the world for some purpose indifferent to our moral growth, our culture of training. For we must think God
to be completely good, all-powerful, wise, just, and all-knowing, and we cannot then
think that he has arranged the world for anything other than our own moral growth.
Everything in the world must be thought to provide the perfect opportunity for our
culture o~- tra~ning to ta~e place. We think that the world has been arranged solely
for the education of our will in order to remove the last obstacle which the world
could present to our moral actions. We should not examine the events of the world
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�unimportant whether the world was made only for the development of our good will in
some objective sense .
Morally we must not consider there to be a purpose to life
that might conflict with the fulfillment of moral duty. Thus we regard the world as
the b~st place for us to develop a good will.
We must somehow harmonize this with .
our experience of both the world and our own nature.
This reconciliation provides
the greatest possible determination of the ground of the purposiveness of nature that
human reason can achieve. We must think God to be such that the created world per fectly serves our moral development, and that the bad things that happen to us here
have simply been judged by the standard of happiness rather than that of morality.
All will be made right in the next life. Without the belief that God watches over us
now, and that we can expect another world where moral actions shall count towards our
reward, Kant does not think there can be any real hope for morality, and thus any
meaning to life.
We may then suppose the case of a righteous man (e.g.
Spinoza) , who holds himself firmly persuaded that
there is no God and also (because in respect of the
object of morality a similar consequence results) no
future life; how is he to judge of his own inner
purposive destination, by means of the moral law,'
which he reveres in practice? He desires no advantage
to himself from following it, either in this or another world; he wishes, rather, disinterestedly to establish the good to which that holy law directs all his
powers.
But his effort is bounded; and from nature,
al though he may expect here and there a contingent
accordance, he can never expect a regular harmony
agreeing according to constant rules . • . with the purpose that he yet feels himself obliged and impelled to
accomplish . •• So it will be until one wide grave engulfs (everyone) together (honest or not it makes no
difference) and throws them back--who were able to
believe themselves the final purpose of creation--into
the abyss of the purposeless chaos of matter from
which they were drawn.
The purpose, then, which this
well-intentioned person had and ought to have before
him in his pursuit of moral laws, he must certainly
give up as impossible or else, if he wishes to remain
dependent upon the call of his moral internal destination and not to weaken the respect with which the
moral law immediately inspires him, by assuming the
nothingness of the single, ideal, final purpose adequate to its high demand (which cannot be brought
about without a violation of moral sentiment) , he
must, as he well can--since there is at least no contradiction from a practical point of view in forming a
concept of the possibility of a morally prescribed
final purpose --assume the being of a moral author of
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the world, that is, a Go d • 12
In finding a moral answer to the question of the final end of the world the nature of the question has changed .
One does not ask to . understand how 'this . or t~a_t _ ,
furthers the purp-ose... of the w~rld; rather, one comes to see the fitness ofthi_s or that
par~i~~l~r event by asking how it furt~ers one's own striving for a
good wi~l •. In
this way even subjective purposiveness, such as that of beauty, ,showsitself. ()bJe_ct1ve.ly
savs that we see that the beauty in nature allows us · to love nature,
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us tu love nature, and that we feel ennobled by this.
Unpleasant things and aff lictions serve to free us from a possessive love of the world .
As we try to find
that delicate balance netween loving the world because God made it and placed us in
it, and hating it for the potential it holds to distract us from finding our salvation, we find that everything serves us in this pursuit. For it seems that if we are
determined to see the world in a moral way we cannot fail in our attempt to see its
"designed striving" as furthering our moral development . We can find some moral as pect in any situation, whether in the action it demands from us, or merely in our
reflection about the God who made this world . Such an approach to learning the purpose of the world is anti-scientific, for in scientific discovery one limits the influence of the observer on the experiment as much as possible, and then extrapolate e
(when possible) to the ideal condition of a perfectly uninvolved observer .
But in
p r actical philosophy we are the real subject of observation, since we can attach no
meaning to the world that stands independent of ourselves .
In practical philosophy,
moral teleology , we do not inquire into a purpose of the world that does not involve
ourselves - and perhaps it is not even permissible to inquire into a purpose which
does not include ourselves as individuals . In this way moral philosophy discloses to
i t self the final purpose of the world .
Neither would Christ have us think that the order of nature is at odds with the
d i ctates of faith, or even is indiffe r ent to them . After all , Chr ist tells u s tha t
every hair on our head is counted . God is the all-powerful author of the world . We
should believe that all things in the world can come only through God so that the
best success i n the world can come only through loving God with all our hearts and
loving our neighbors as ourselves. As with Kant's moral interpretation of the purpose of the world, we gain a different insight into the world.
Christ asks us to
e x amine the life that we love so that we may find it intangible and uruneaningful
without faith. We cannot love the world in the same way once we have heard the word
of God .
And we could not pursue happiness as we once did before having recognized
t h e mor al law. These things, however, are not forbidden to us. The world is God ' s
We can imagine having the various comforts of life and
c r eatiqn, and it is good.
enjoying the earthly love of family and friends without loving life more than God.
In fact, we believe we can love God better for having loved them. Thus, we find ourselves in possession of these things in a new way . After calling their attention to
the lilies of the field, Jesus tells the disciples:
Do not seek what you are to eat and to drink, nor be
of anxious mind.
For all the nations of the world
seek these things; and your Father knows that you need
t hem .
Ins tead , seek hi s kingdom, and these things
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shall be yours also."
Christ does not here assure us that the righteous shall never be hungry.
He means
that we must trust that God looks out for us and provides for our needs better than
we could ourselves .
For while God knows all our needs, we know only our bodily
needs, and merely suspect our spiritual need. We must trust that God always gives us
everything we need, not to attain earthly comfort but to achieve eternal life. And
while we cannot understand why it should be, we must believe. that God has put us on
this earth for some reason - the best reason .
In this way, our existence in the
world does not oppose the call to follow Christ, but somehow makes it possible for us
to hear the call. Sometimes the good things of this world make us feel love and awe
for their author.
Sometimes they tempt us to neglect our love of God.
Either way,
however, they will serve us in our search. f~tbe kinadom of heaven. Like the moral
law faith gives the right meaning to all the things of the world. If we have fa1th,
the~ the whole world directs itself to help us follow Christ. There is no doubt.
Faith in Christ, or recognition of the moral law, allows us to affirm the order
of the world .
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�show our love for God. We must acknowledge Christ before men, so that he can acknowledge us before the angels . We must show our love for him by acts in this world:
loving our neighbors, enemies, and those who do us harm; forgiving those who are
harm; indebted to us; helping the poor. If we did not feel a part of this world, if
we really did believe this life a miserable prison, we could not experience the
peculiarly human feeling of turning from love of the world to love of Christ and then
. returning to love the world in a deeper way.
In order for moral growth to take
place, we must confront our love of the world .
The notion that happiness might be the purpose of our lives on earth did not
stand up very well under Kant's scrutiny. Yet the notion is a powerful one in human
affairs. In the Canon of Pure Reason Kant says that "Happiness .•. in exact proportion
with the morality of the rational beings who a r e the r eby rendere d wor thy of i t , alone
constitutes the supreme good of the world wherein, in accordance with the commands of
a pure but practical reason, we under obligation to place ourselves."
Happiness
combined with worthiness fulfills human nature, which is neither purely rational nor
purely animal (belonging to nature) . Our inclinations move us to hope for happiness;
practical reason says that if moral satisfaction does not accompany them, our
happiness will be hollow - a mere mockery of what we are capable of doing. To enjoy
happiness without morality we would have to renounce the responsibility that accompanies our free will.
Yet the confused notion of happiness embodies an attempt to find the purpose
that underlies the purposiveness of nature by using only our knowledge of nature (internal and external). Happiness is the idea that we have been given an understanding
and other intellectual faculties so that we can rise to become the most purposive
creatures in nature. Our ability to see purposes allows us to become much more elaborate than any other animal in the things we do to provide for our own existence. We
are the only creature capable of striving after a purpose such as "never having to
work again." The idea of happiness claims that we should further as a part of our
final purpose anything which our existence enables us to find either pleasant o r good
- even though we do not investigate that final purpose itself. Such an idea is not
as trivial as it at first sounds. For we are certain that we recognize things in the
world which, if they are not unconditionally good, come pretty close. Strong family
ties, devotion to the welfare of a community, and the loyalty we feel to a good
leader all constitute highly-purposive goals.
We can never justify calling these
things good in themselves, certainly not to Kant's satisfaction.
In fact, these
highly-purposive goals offer the greatest deterrence to true devotion to moral
growth. I remember in T.H. White's Once and Future King that Lancelot was too kind
to leave Guinevere t o follow God. we-ao-not u s ually clas s such motivations as d es i re
for happiness, but if we follow Kant's definition then they are exactly what the term
represents because they hope for those good things which can happen on earth as a
part of the process of nature.
Christ calls these highly-purposive goals love of
life.
By means of the purposiveness we perceive in it, the world appeals to us not
simply through pleasures, but by a way which we associate with moral worth. In the
highly-purposive forms of happiness we almost succeed in finding fulfillment as the
fin a l pur pose of nature within our lives.
The realm of understanding and that of
reason do not, then, stand quite so independent.
In understanding the world, we
depend upon our moral nature. In pursuing morality, our nature as a creature of the
world dictates we explore, challenge, love, overcome, and accept the world in order
to bring about moral action and moral growth. If the world did not suit us so well,
and suggest to us such a wonderful author, we could not hope to satisfy ourselves in
the world. And if we did not have . this hope we could not learn the value of the
moral law which tells us that our satisfaction lies beyond these things.
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into a ship with his disciples:
and he said untc
them, Let us go over unto the other side of the lake.
And they launched forth. But as they sailed he fell
asleep:
and there came down a storm of wind on the
lake; and they came to him, and awoke him, saying,
Master, master, we perish. Then he arose, and rebuked
the wind and the raging of the water:
and they
ceased, and there was calm. And he said unto them
Whe:e is your faith? And they being afraid wondered;
saying one to another, What manner of man is this!
for he corgnandeth even the winds and water, and they
obey him.
The events of this story are very complicated. We see Christ acting once again
to save p~opl~ f:om the afflictions of life. Christ puts things right in the world.
Wh~n John s disciples come so that they can find out whether this man is the Christ,
this man tells them to report what they have seen and heard:
"How that the blind
see, the lame walk, ~he lepers are cleansed, the deaf hear, the dead are raised, to
~he po~l 6 the g~spel is preached. And blessed is he, whosoever shall not be offended:
in me.
God .s manifestation in the world takes away the suffering of the world.
It seems only right that Christ, the spiritual healer, the savior, is also a physical
leade:· When he he~ls pe~ple, Christ says "Your faith has made you well." _ and he
associ~tes the healing with the forgiveness of sins.
The world is most free from
suffering for those who have found Christ.
Yet, we know that Christ demands our willingness to suffer' many things on ea'rth
We shoul~ always pr~fer .re~ard to heaven to reward on earth, shunning the latter:
When Christ asked his disciples "Where is your faith?" after saving them from the
storm, we wonder what that faith might be. Should the disciples have believed that
God.would protec~ them from the storm? It seems logical that God would not let Jesus
perish at that time and place . But faith cannot depend on our worldly situation. We
cannot attempt to ~nderstand how God chooses the time of death. Should the disciples
have had en~ug? faith to calm the waters themselves? After all they can heal in the
name of .Christ , .and he has told them of miracles they could accomplish if they had
ev~n a little faith. But it does not make sense to think that faith will bring power
which we can bend .to our convenience.
The miracles of faith compliment God• s
pu:poses; ~hen the time comes for Christ to die, he asks for the cup to pass _ but
this does not happen. Yet we can be sure that the faith which the disciples lacked
would have freed them from the fear they felt for their lives.
Perhaps they could
h~ve calmed .the storm. themselves, but their safety is the essential thing . Fai th
gives us a dif~erent kind of power over the forces OL nature. As with Kant's moral
person, the f~ithful see all acts working to bring them closer to God.
When Christ says that God has ~ounted every hair on our heads, we do not therefor~ expect the world to provide for all our physical needs· and comforts. Instead
C~rist ur~ed.us to look for the provision that God has made for us in every situation. . Th~s is more than an exhortation to face adversity without turning from God
Even in ;imes 0 ~ ?appiness, we must make the same effort so that we can acknowledg~
~oth God s provision and our responsibility to make use of it, our responsibility to
ear the call. When th~ dis.ciples ask Christ to teach them to pray, part of the
prayer ?e ~;ache~ them is "give us this day our daily bread .• ~and lead us not into
temptati~n:
This prayer asks God to forgive us what we need so that we can always
~now the difference betwe;n h~ppiness and morality, and be able to choose the latter.
In praying this way one aspires to seek always the manne_ __ iri which the world of nar
ture can serve our moral development, and accept the situation before us as an opportunity, rather than a curse.

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�FOOTNOTES

Memory and Personal Identity in Shakespeare's Tempest

1 Immanuel Kant, trans. J .H. Bernard, Critique of Judgement (New York, Hafner Press,
1951) I P. 15
2

Amy McManus

Ibid . p. 19

3
4
5
6
7
8
9

Ibid. p. 256
rbid. p. 260
rbid. p. 283
rbid. p. 302
Luke 14:23
Luke 9:59
Luke 6:27

10

Lukr 9:37

11

Luke 17:1

12 op. Cit . Critique of Judgment, p. 303
13

Luke 12:29

14Immanuel Kant, trans. Norman Kemp Smith, Critique of Pure Reason (Hong Kong,
MacMillan Press, 1929), p. 641
15
16

Luke 8:22
Luke 7:22

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What cares
1
these r oarers for the name of king?
cries the boatswain near the opening of Shakespeare's Tempest. Yet at least for the
magical time which follows, they care very much; the elves and demi-puppets have all
lent their aid to Prospero for the righting of human social order , which had been
overturned when Prospero was supplanted from his dukedom. In restoring outer social
order, Prospero must establish or change the internal order within those who must
return to social life and rule in Naples. The transformations Propsero will attempt
in Miranda, Ferdinand, Antonio and Alonso will take place on many levels and thus may
be examined from different viewpoints. One helpful way to understand the character
developments in the play is to investigate the differing roles which memory and a
sense of personal identity play within each individual. Memory and identity are important facets in their return to society because these individuals all share a past
in which a dangerous disruption of roles has occurred - a past in which the wrong man
has become Duke and falsely ordered the court of Milan around himself due to
Prospero's neglect of duty.
The wider political effects of Antonio's activity provide a significant periphery for the action, since the play is a preparation for the return to political life.
Within the play, however, the immediate, personal consequences of the crime are the
center of the drama. The primary result of Antonio's action is, of course, the exile
of Prospero and Miranda. Though they find a providential haven alone on the island,
there are, nevertheless, serious challenges to Miranda's personal growth in the
situation - challenges that are usually met in the company, and with the aid, of
friends. A second result of Antonio's betrayal is the corruption of Alonso, King of
Naples, who, in overthrowing Prospero, attacked the divine basis of his own rule and
more importantly, overthrew his own good character, the flaws and strengths of which
will be revealed in the crises brought about by Prospero. Lastly, Prospero must
overcome the diffidence and disillusion of one betrayed by a brother in blood and a
brother in rule, if he is to return as a worthy ruler to Milan. Twelve years of life
have been determined by one criminal act and the problem of the play is to gather
from this disheartening past the wisdom and courage to make new lives. Prospero addresses this problem by helping the children and adults to a truer understanding of
the past, by instilling in them a healthy memory. Each character begins with varying
states of remembrance, varying notions of who they were and who they are, but by magic and terror, Prospero implicitly and explicitly guides most of them to a truer
self-reckoning and in so doing, restores among them the basis for good society.
Miranda is the first, dearest and most unique of Prospero's charges because, due
to her extreme youth at the time of her exile, she must rely on him to form an entire
memory for her to take back to Milan. In the brief interval before Prospero tells
the story of their lives, the playgoer realizes that a pastless Miranda is a good and
beautiful person already:
O, I have suffered
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�Her heart is filled with empathy for those she has never seen, but on that admittedly
good basis alone she is not prepared for coming events. Instead, Prospero explains,
thou
Art ignorant of what thou art, knowing naught
Of whence I am; nor that I am more better
Than Prospero, master of 3 full poor cell,
And thy no better father.
As he unfolds his narrative of betrayal and suffering, it is important to r emember
that Prospero is not really concerned with her naivete.
Her acute and practical
questions ("Wherefore did they not I That hour destroy us? 11 ) 4 show that, whatever her
inexper~ence.' she ~s . in no danger from the usual sort of human duplicity which one
migh t find in an it i nerant patent me dicine peddl er . No , h er preparat ion is aimed
towards another sort of danger altogether; she must quickly learn enough about the
past and herself to fall honorably in love with Ferdinand .
In Prospero's long discourse the most important things that we, in a confused,
disordered fashion, must learn and remember are compressed and ordered for Miranda's
sake into one sad story. Perhaps the first lesson is that this memory for which .she
has longed could be painful; the distant past is not like the undist1¥'bed peace of
her father's home - rather it is the "dark backward and abysm of time".
Her father,
she finds, is not only a father; she is not only a daughter . On one level they are
dif :erent people than she thought they were because both were once part of a larger
society - were once responsible for the fulfillment of leading roles in Milan . On
another, Prospero is now a different man for her because he is revealed as divided
against himself - divided by duty and inclination in Milan, and divided by pain, anger and wisdom even now in his storytelling. Further, she needs to learn the dangers
of self division - she needs to lea r n how a combination of self division and negligence in Prospero could end in Antonio's betrayal of his brother and his estrangement
from himself. Anton i o is the most difficult subject for Prospero to teach Miranda,
and Prospero must bring his mind's wisdom and heart's passions togethe r t o do justice
to one who is not simply a villain in a cautionary tale, but a man and his own brother.
Though the 'social' Antonio will be discussed in greater detail later, it is
appropriate to examine how, amidst many outer roles and many inner parts, Antonio was
led not just to an estrangement from his state, to error - as was Prospero, but to an
estrangement from himself, to true sinfulness. Perhaps surprisingly, it was not a
very complex matter. Forgetting his own responsibilities and his brother's character, Prospero had sai d, in effect:
'While I play scholar, Antonio, you play duke,
bu t apa r t f r om u s e , ceremony and power, we 'll rememb er who we rea l l y are . '
He being thus lorded
Not only with what my revenue yielded
But what my power might else exact, like one
Who having unto truth by telling of it,
Made such a sinner of his memory
To credit his own lie, he did believe
He was the Duke, out o' th' substitution
And executing th' out~ard face of royalty
With all prerogative.
Despite the fact that he is a roundly vicious person to us and to Miranda, Antonio
must also be a person to recognize and pity. Wrongfully tempted, Antonio .allowed his
memory - his very self - to slip through his fingers. He damaged himself beyond his
own or Prospero' s power to heal.
The tale to Miranda is nearly finished when
Antonio, thrusting Miranda and Prospero out of Milan, removes the screen between the
part he was playing and himself . Mir anda, confronted by so great a fall, then begins
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I not remembering ho' I cried out then
Will cry o'er again;
She probably cries for many reasons--because she and her father were abandoned; because her father had so great a wound inside him which she had never seen; and because this frightening story somehow intimately affects her and she does not yet know
how that will be so. Until now, she has learned to remember failed relationships,
inner conflict and self-deception, but to these sad revelations Prospero provides the
true balancing. Though having failed his brother and his city, Prospero did not fail
Miranda. Instead, he found in her, he says, a
smile,
Infused with a fortitude from heaven,
When I have decked the sea with drops full salt,
Under my burden groaned; which raised in me
An undergoing stomach, to §ear up
Against what should ensue.
Prospero gives Miranda a life history which will be her unique memory, for unlike any
other memory in the play, it has no part in confusion or forgetfulness; though to be
a real memory, it cannot avoid pain. There is a heaviness to be felt from Prospero's
strange story - Miranda sleeps at its close. But soon, in Ferdinand's courtship,her
courage and new, well- ordered memory will be tried.
·
.
Because she is so wise and generous, so sure-footed in the steps she takes, it
is easy to forget that marrying one's love is a difficult business - even for
Miranda. Her love begins when she hears the songs of Ariel and sees Ferdinand; he is
to her so beautiful that he seems a spirit, hardly real. They change eyes.with one
another at first sight - as Prospero knew they would - but also at first sight the
world of confusion and inner division begins. As she sees Ferdinand, she finds herself, quite suddenly divided up. Part of her, at her father's precept, would hide
from Ferdinand; part of her, not saying what she feels, would play coquette; part of
her, utterly at risk, would profess love. When he asks her for her name, then tells
her of the other women he has known, her two replies convey how amazing her experience must be:
Miranda. 0 my father
9
I have broke your hest to say so!
I do not know
One of my sex; no woman's face remember
Save, from my glass, mine own; nor have I seen
More that I may call ~en than you, good friend,
1
And my dear father.
'I am Miranda and I do not know one other woman who has felt as I do now, nor any
other man besides my father who might love me as you do. In my glass was always one
Miranda - who is Miranda now?' Infinitely more fortunate than Antonio, Miranda has
something of the same decision to make: Amid all these longings, who should she be,
and how should she be with Ferdinand? For the second time in the play she weeps
this time in her own confusion:
'
At mine unworthiness, that dare not offer
What I desire to give, and much less take
What I should die to want. But this is trifling;
And all the more it seeks to hide itself'
The bigger bulk it shows. Hence bashful cunning
And prompt me' plain and holy innocence!
I am your wife, if you will marry me'
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�You may deny me' but I'}! be your servant
Whether you will or no.
H.er father's dark story gave her some notion either consciously or - fairy-tale like
- magically, that adults have to choose to be themselves ~nd that they are wretchedly
unhappy when they neglect or abandon themselves for some partial or false role. In
the ordinary course of advice given to new lovers, the older heart is anxious to
point out that there are many possible spouses in the sea - mainly because one has to
be prepared for jilting .
But to be prepared for loving, Prospero' s older, wiser
heart advises Miranda, not that there are many princes, but that there are many
Mirandas and she must choose which Miranda's heart and hand she will give away.
Ferdinand's growth in the play is like Miranda's in that he is very young and is
preparing for his first commitments. But his growth is unlike hers in that he has
not been given careful tutelage and needs a second father to help him reevaluate past
experience in a more enlightened way. Though Ferdinand is not quite ready to love
Miranda, he is as innocent as she; thus the gentlest spriting,two songs, adventure
and Miranda herself are all he needs. Even without seeing anything of Ferdinand before he hears Ariel's songs, one can imagine the needs they are addressing. The second song is primarily about Ferdinand' grief and the transformation that will take
place in Alonso:
Full fathom five your father lies;
Of his bones are coral made;
Those are pearls that were his eyes;
Nothing of him that doth fade
But suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange.
Sea nymphs hourly ring his knell;
12
Hark! now I hear them--Ding-dong bell.
Without meaning to assign a shameful weakness to Ferdinand's character, it is important to note that this song does not just assuage grief for it affirms most broadly
the 'all-rightness' of things. Ferdinand needs to hear this song, above and beyond
his grief, for the very reason that he is, in this situation, grief-stricken.
In
just a logical way, if one escapes a shipwreck one should hope that others do too,
but Ferdinand here, and his father later, immediately and unnecessarily assume that
only the worst event could have occurred. Security or at least the p~actice o~ hoping is the oldest sort of memory well brought-up children have. All-rightness is the
deepest sort of spell that parents cast on children, so here, Prospero provides
Ferdinand with comfort and with hope.
The first of Ferdinand's songs faces an emotional and intellectual confusion
which results from earlier love affairs.
Full many a lady
I have eyed with best regard, and many a time
Th' harmony of their tongues 1 ~ath into bondage
Brought my too diligent ear;
If before, Ferdinand has found himself a slave when in love, Prospero' s adventure
allows him to be a slave and be in love and find the two rather different . Though
Prospero is playing a joke by making Ferdinand wear chains and pile up logs, there is
also a strong element of compassion in this spell.
Prospero, with all the
hard-earned respect possible for boundaries and duty, has no wish to see free creatures enslaved; he is the type of man who would hear and release Ariel. Ferdinand
enslaves himself by persistently mistaking the bonds of love for a gilded variety of
shackle. He is fill ed with far too many protestations when he speaks to Miranda,
because he is trying t o defend himself. How sad if, like Ariel stuck in a pine tree,
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Ariel calls the other sprites to sing the refrain, while at the same time calling on
lovers, those who take hands and hearts, to bear love's burden.
Come unto these yellow sands,
And then take hands:
Courtsied when you have and kiss's
The wild waves whist:
Foot it featly here and there,
And sweet s~4ites bear
The burden.
When he means to profess love Ferdinand says, with true affection but poor speech,
that he will be Miranda's slave. That is no answer for Miranda, who has, from the
firsb known there was no slavery in help~ Ferdinand carry logs.
"Do you love
me?"
she must ask, and "My husband, then?" , until finally, he, succinctly, takes
his freedom where it truly lies:
Ay, with a heart as willing
17
As bondage e'er of freedom. Here's my hand.
To give Ferdinand due credit, these songs were Miranda as much as they were his,
for she, in taking a husband, loses a father and in loving and remembering, must bear
new burdens. They are a good pair because if she was unsure of who she was, he, in
calling her a 'wonder' recognized her from the first. And he was afraid of slavery,
she was always ready to serve. Together they can understand the need to maintain
their virginity until the wedding ceremony, because they have reached the inner
equilibrium which allows good people with right values to fulfill their obligations
to society.
Part of Prospero's task is completed in the third act with the
engagement of Ferdinand and Miranda. Much remains to be done with respect to Antonio
and Alonso, who as adults, cannot be led by songs and stories since their problems
are not ingorance or unwarranted fear, but willful crime and self-deception.
As an adult, Antonio has an adult memory full of self-motivated, purposeful
action (but as has already been discussed) his memory carries the awful distinction
of sin. During the course of the play Antonio never becomes any better, yet he is
essential to watch because he gradually acts out the social implications which result
from allowing a man with moral amnesia loose in society. Unlike Miranda, Ferdinand
or Alonso, Antonio does not remember being small, young, powerless, hopeless or
confused.
he does not remember that anyone has ever given him anything he really
needed; he does not remember that there are standards above himself - like Nature,
truth or justice - which determine action. His is not simply bad, his very unreasonableness, which he displays both on the ship and in his speech, shows him to be forgetful of what even willful criminals usually know. For when Antonio finds himself
·On a sinking ship, he does not pray - he is not afraid. Rather, he currss the sailors for treachery: "We are merely cheated of our lives by drunkards".
He cannot
imagine that there could exist a group of elements which were supremely unmindful of
Antonio's life or death. When he speaks, he shows his conviction that truth and falsity, right or wrong, are a matter of rhetorical emphasis. Therein lies his danger
as a social creature. Antonio convinces Sebastian to depose his brother Alonso by
jumping all the moral and practical hurdles in speech. First, there is the true heir
Ferdinand, who, as has sensibly been pointed out, might possibly be alive.
But
Antonio just denies the possibility in words:
Will you grant with me
19
That Ferdinand is drowned?
As for that prickly question about murdering one's sleeping brother, just blur the
distinction between life and death:
Here lies your brother,
No better than the earth he lies upon
20
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�Lest it be forgotten that Ant onio can wor k on those less ready to be wicked than
Sebastian, Prospero has already explained that,
Being once perfected how t o grant s u its,
How t o deny them, who t' adv ance, and who
To trash f or over-t opping, new created
The creatures t hat were mine, I say, or ch anged 'em,
Or e l se new--f ormed them; having bo th the key
Of officer and office, set all heart i' th' state
To what tune pleased his ear, t h at now he was
The ivy which had hid my prince~~ trunk
And sucked my verdure out on't.
Antonio, clever and powerful, forgetting himself and his scruples, can play tunes and
change hearts just as Prospero can.
In days past he practiced the black magic to
Prospero's white. He is not an incredible character - we know that often we have no
firm grasp on either who we are or what is right and wrong. Then, too, it is easy to
be at ebb tide, like Sebastian, morally indifferent and ready to flow.
Standing steadfastly in opposition to Antonio and Sebastian is Gonzalo. Not a
wise man, he nevertheless has the finest memory--the best perspective on events and
the greatest kindness towards the infirmity of others. Weary and bedraggled on the
beach, and trying to make conversation, he wants to tell Alonso something about the
joy and sorrow of a whole life - :32_cpiething very true, but very ill-timed: "Beseech
you sir, " he begins, "be merry."
Antonio and Sebastian mock Gonzalo because he
mixes up his history and because he mak~ a very silly political theoretician. They
3 and promise to forget him as soon as he is
call him the "lord of weak rememberance"
dead.
It is they- truest self-revelation that, in their merry fooling, Gonzalo is
4
nothing to them.
It is also the truest warning of social danger.
Antonio's
self - corruption would affect not just the morally weak like Sebastian, and not just
the politically powerful like Alonso - those whom we say must 'take their changes'.
No, to Antonio all men of good heart and memory are threats - -Gonzalo would hav e t o
die too.
Alonso is another adult responsible for having committed grave crime - but being
Alonso and not Antonio, he is a good man, woefully confused about the past and his
responsibilities. He is caught by his shipwreck in a state of being able neither
happily to forget nor properly to remember.
So ifdicative of his condition, his
first words after the wreck are, "Prithee, peace."
Ariel will later declare that
Alonso is unfit to live with men but it is already evident how desperately lonely he
is.
Even knowing Prospero' s story one is moved by Alonso's isolated brooding and
self-reproach:
You cram these words into mine ears against
The stomach of my sense. Would I had never
Married my daughter there! for, coming thence,
My son is lost; and in my rate, she too,
Who is so far from Italy removed
I never again shall see her . 0 thou mine heir
Of Naples and of Milan, whaz strange fish
6
Ha th made his meal on thee?
His regret is undeniable, but it is a sickly, misshapen kind of regret that does not
correspond to what is truly regrettable about their situation . The tragedy is that
Ferdinand, from Alonso's standpoint, is almost certainly dead.
While grief for a
dead son is completely appropriate, mixed with his grief is an unreasonable guilt.
Alonso is no more responsible for his son's supposed death than Ferdinand would have
been for his father's . As far as they know, they have been overtaken by a natural
disaster; tempests know neither kings nor king's sons .
Guilt in some ways, is
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scruple or justice. However, the sort of free-floating guilt with which Alonso is
plagued often is the sign of a good, but pleabargaining soul. One would sooner feel
guilty for a hundred imagined crimes inside oneself than admit the crime one actually
committed.
Alonso has not Miranda's well-ordered remembrance, he must hunt and
scrape to find the meaning of his past life--and he fails.
Alonso's regret will
neither cure him nor reform him-it will only wear him down into numbed listlessness,
as when he said,
I will stand to, and feed,
Although my last, 2 ~o matter, since I feel
The best is past.
With terrifying fanfare Ariel and Prospero disabuse the king of his illusions,
force him to realign his memory and feel-not guilt-but heart's sorrow.
But remember
(For that's my business to you) that you three
From Milan did supplant good Prospero;
Exposed unto the sea, which hath requit it,
Him and his innocent child; for which foul deed
The powers, delaying not forgetting, have
Incensed the seas a~§ shores, yea, all the creatures,
Against your peace.
In the valor of madness men hang and drown their proper selves. Alonso's proper
· self, having died when he connived against Prospero, is reestablished by a second
death the death of his improper self. His heart's sorrow is as terrible as he himself is good; that is, terrible in the Greek sense of deinos:
0 , it is monstrous, monstrous!
Methought the billows spoke and told me of it;
The winds did sing it to me; and the thunder,
That deep and dreadful organ pipe, pronounced
The name of Prosper; it did bass my trespass.
Therefore my son i' th' ooze is bedded and
I'll seek him deeper than e'er ~lummet sounded
2
And with him there lie mudded.
This true remorse holds danger, for to feel it as he should, Alonzo must want to
kill, not just the part that did wrong, but his whole self. He is not like the
playwatcher or Gonzalo .who have known his crime all along and cared for him, Alonso,
anyway. The sea change would be unfinished if it gathered all the elusive deceptive
selves together for once, and then ended in self-loathing.
If Ariel was best to ~tiate Alonso's repentance, only Prospero can comple te
it. "I embrace thy body .•• "
he says and Alonso replies,
Thy pulse
Beats as of flesh and blood; and since I saw thee,
Th' affliction of my mind amends, with what,
I fear, a madness held me. This must crave
(An if this be at all) a most strange story.
Thy dukedom I resign and ~? entreat
.
Thou pardon me my wrongs.
As Ferdinand and Miranda did earlier, so Prospero and Alonso do now--j oin hands.
Forgiven Alonso is himself again, though still perhaps a little amazed. With utmost
gentleness Prospero dissolves the charm around Alonso, gives him his son and daughter
and-though they must speak of the past at the right time-frees him from its dogged
oppression:
A: But, 0 , how oddly will it s ound that I
Must ask my child forgiveness!
P: There sir, stop.

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Let us not burden our re~2mbrance with
A heaviness that's gone.
Burdens borne, whole selves accepted, and by those harshest critics, one's victim and
one's self-- this is the completion of Prospero's restoration of order. The rulers of
Naples and Milan are no -longer criminals, · and their future rulers are well- grown and
ready to order the state with whole, unfearful selves . There is cause for uncommon
joy, and only Prospero himself is left to consider.
Through most of the play, Prosper was mysterious conjurer of tempests in human
lives, while he himself hovered outside the action. He has ordered Miranda's and
Ferdinand's memory of the past, showing them how to understand inner dividedness and
the better part of human freedom. He has given them the best and worst in men in a
coherent framework and he has left them with the truest source for joy-the ability,
(though feeling many emotions) to be true and serviceable to one another.
From
Alonso Prospero has demanded both an admission of crime and true repentance, but he
has allowed remorse to attain its end and thus has set Alonso free from a useless
lifetime of self-reproach and confusion. However, when we consider Prospero himself,
we can look to no magical intervention and indeed there is some reason to doubt -he
believes the happily- ending fairy-tales he tells:
M: 0, wonder!
How many goodly creatures are there here!
How beauteous mankind is! 0, brave new world
That has such people ~~'t!
P: "Tis new to thee.
Prospero arranges and observes human spectacles throughout the play, yet his
responses are never so predictable as his results . He is by turns majestically detached, bitterly rueful and achingly sad .
These our actors,
As I fortold to you, were all spirits, and
Are melted into aire, into thin air;
And, like the baseless fabric of this vision,
The cloud capped towers, the gorgeous palaces,
The solemn temples, the great globe itself,
Yea all which it inherit, shall dissolve,
And, like this insubstantial pageant faded,
Leave not a rack behind. We are such stuff
As dreams are made on , and our little life
Is rounded with a sleep. Sir, I am vexed
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Bear wi t h my weakness; my old brain is tr oubled .
The emotions he displays show the uneasiness with which differing inescapable visions
of men and women cohabit in one person . On the one hand whether a man behaves well
or ill mat ters to the individual, to his society , even to Nature ; on the other hand,
a man, especially a meek one, is a dreamy unreality, one easily shipwrecked and
spellbound. Having grasped so much of the paradoxical in human life , Prospero is in
danger of once again receding into omnipotent, scholarly abstraction . What saves
him , what allows him to glimpse a fulle r story, but tell an honest tale to Miranda ,
is his s t eady remembrance of the potent magic of his human heart .
A: Your charm so strongly works ' em
That if now you beheld them , Your affections
Would become tender .
P : Dost thou think so , spirit?
A: Mine would , sir , were I human .
P: And mine shall .
Hast thou which art but air, a touch, a feeling
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One of their kind, that relish all as sharply
Passion as they, be kindlier moved than thou art? 35
His admission is not a fore gone conclusion-there is no apparent necessity that
magicians never forget they are men. Prospero .must choose to take off his magician's
cloak and be recognizable to Antonio, Alonso and Gonzalo. Having abjured rough magic
Prospero becomes at once vulnerable-but he also becomes so powerful for the good of
others that the sight of him, the touch of his warm hands, restores men to themselves.
In his benevolence and renunciation of detachment Prospero shows-if not
peacefulness at least a knowledge of who he was, and is, and must be in Milan.
Prospero can be best remembered in the words he used for Ferdinand:
it eats, and sleeps, and hath such senses
As we have, such. This gallant which thou seest
Was in the wrack; and·, but he's something stained
With grief (that's beauty's canker), thou mighst
call him
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A goodly person.

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�Footnotes

For My Soul 1s Filled with Troubles
Bruce Johnsen

19

1william Shakespeare , The Tempest (London :
Methuen , 1980), Act I. , Scene i . J lines
16-17.

2 0ibid . ,
II.i.11. 283- 285 .

2

21

3
4
5
6

7
8
9

Ibid . , I. ii.11. 5- 6.

22

Ibid., I. ii.11. 17- 21.

23

Ibid., I. ii.11. 138- 139 .
Ibid. , I. ii.1.

24

so .

Ibid ., II.i.11. 246- 247 .

Ibid., I.ii . 11. 79-86
Ibid. , II. i.1. 1.
Ibid ., II. ii. 1. 235 .
Ibid . , II.i.11. 181- 182

25

Ibid . , I. ii.11. 97 - 105 .

Ibid . , II. i. 1. 9 .

26

Ibid . , I. ii. 11. 133- 134 .

Ibid ., II. i. 11. 109- 116 .

27

Ibid . , I. ii.11. 153- 158 .

28

Ibid . , III. i.11. 36- 37 .

Ibid ., III. ii i. 11. 49 - 51.
Ibid . , III. iii. 11. 68 - 75 .

lOibid ., III. i. 11. 48- 52 .

29

11

3 0ibid . ,
V. i.11. 109 .

Ibid .' III. i. 11. 77 - 86 .

12
13
14
1

31

Ibid ., I. ii.11. 397 - 405.

32

Ib i d ., III. i. 11. 39- 42 .

33

Ibid ., I. ii.11. 377 - 383 .

34

5rbid. ' II I. i. 11. 67 .

16
17
18

35

rbid ., III. i. l. 87 .

36

rbid ., III. i. 11. 88- 98 .

For I have eaten ashes as it were
bread, and mingled my drink with weeping;
because of thine anger and thy wrath: for
thou hast lifted me up, and dashed me
down.
Psalm CI, 9-10

rbid . , II I. iii. 11. 95 - 102 .

Ibid . , V. i.11. 113- 119 .
Ibid ., V.i. 11. 196- 201.
Ibid . , V. i.11. 181 - 185 .
Ibid . , V. i.11. 148- 159 .
Ibid . , V.i. 11. 16- 24 .

For on this wise have the gods spun
the thread for wretched mortals, that they
should live in pain; and themselves are
sorrowless. For two urns are set upon the
floor of Zeus of gifts that he giveth, the
one of ills, the other of blessings. To
whomsoever
Zeus,
that
hurleth
the
thunderbolt, giveth a mingled lot, that
man meeteth now with evil, now with good;
but to whomsoever he giveth but of
baneful, him he maketh to be reviled of
man, and direful madness driveth him over
the face of the sacred earth, and he
wandereth honoured neither of gods nor
mortals.
Iliad , book XXIV, 527-33 .

Ibid ., I.i.11. 413- 417 .

rbid ., I. i. l. 56 .

"If we hrve received good things from the hand of the Lord, shall we not endure
evil things?"
The existence of evil has posed a problem for all men who have wrestled with the
belief in a perfectly good God. For some, including St. Augustine (in his early
life), the only solution was to appeal to the existence of a contending evil principle. This Zoroastrian or Nanichaean heresy exonerates God at the expense of His
omnipotence by considering Him as the source of all good and the evil principle as
the source of all evil.
Is such an appeal necessary? Must one alter the concept of the Christian God in
order to account for evil, or can one, as a rational being, affirm one's suffering
along with Job, while retaining a belief in the Christian God as sole Lord? Can one

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�-reasonably retain belief in an omnipotent, omniscient, perfectly good and infinite
creator, althoug2 He seems to visit evil upon men - even upon one who "abstains from
all evil deeds"?
The question, then, is not how one arrives at a belief in such a God. This is a
matter of faith, something for which a proof cannot be given. Rather, the question
is whether such a belief is consistent with man's reason.
Logical necessity constrains even an omnipotent God. While His omniscience
determines all truth, He does not thereby invent a logic and a truth which
corresponds to it. He simply thinks in the only perfectly consistent manner. Since
God's thoughts have no temporal progression, He has no need for logic such as human
logic.
He knows all premises and conclusions perfectly.
Only one fundamental
logical axiom constrains Him- that of non- contradiction .
Consequently, God can actualize any contingency which does not entail logical
contradiction. It follows from this that while a perfectly good God cannot do evil,
this does not imply a constraint on His omnipotence . Instead, He has the power to do
evil , in so far a s an evil act would not be logical contradiction (as creating an
object too heavy for Him to move would be) . Rather, the contradiction is moral, for
one cannot be perf ect ly good while doing evil . Aquinas di s tin guishes this nece ssary
non- contradic tion by calling it 'moral necessity . '
Since God both has the powe r within Himself to commit good and evil acts, and is
intelligent, his actions are.morally free. However, t o attribute intelligence to God
assumes that He knows both good and evil, for He must choose between them. One may
object that God does not know evil, for ex hypothesis He neither thinks nor wills
evil. And since God knows those things wh~ch are not in Him insofar as He requires
that knowledge to know Himself perfectly, He must know all that He causes , and
nothing that He does not cause. Howeve r, if He does not will evil, He does not cause
it, and does not know it.
The previous argument is false and can be used to establish that God knows evil
only indirectly. God does not think evil. Nor does He will evil antecedently , for
antecedently God wills only perfect goods. However, since some goods require that
something else be imperfect in order that they may become actual, God can cause the
imperfection of something else by willing a good. In this way God knows evil indirectly by knowing the good which necessitates it . He also knows the evil that man
causes. This knowledge is also indirect, for God knows such evil by the truth of
human actions and by the men who commit it. Therefore, God does know evil and is
morally free.
Since God is perfectly good, He is constrained by moral necessity to choose
f ree ly only t he good . Hence be lie f in God can be "consistent with reason" only if
God can never be shown to act in any manner other than a perfectly good one.
Before continuing i t will be necessary to specify both what evil is and what
kinds ~f evil exist. St. Augustine says that evil is "nothing but a privation of
good."
St. Thomas Aquinas clarifies this position:
Absence of good, taken negatively, is not evil;
otherwise, it would follow that what does not exist is
evil, and also that everything would be evil because
of not having the good belonging to something
else . . • But the ~sence of good, taken in privative
sense, is an evil."
6
It follows that "evil always lessens good, yet never wholly consumes it" ; for if
absolute privation were to occur in all respects with regard to some thing, that
thing would not be itseif.
Hence, every substance is good insofar as it exists, for in respect of existence
there can be no privation and thus no evil. Every substance is capable of imperfection , which is evil; but since evil is only a privation of good, the substance

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must first be good in order to have a potential for ev i l . Now t he substantial being
of a thing is absolute, and hence absolutely good, but the re l ative being of a thing
is only relatively good. For example, since Bob is a man, and therefore exists absolutely, he is absolutely good with respect to his substantial being. Wi th respect to
his relative being, Bob is a man who may be blind, and thus is only relatively good,
for he lacks an attribute proper to a man, namely sight. This concerns Bob insofar
as he is an object, without regard to his moral quality.
The foregoing suffices to clarify the expression 'metaphysical evil'.
Metaphysical evil is imperfection, such as imperfection of form.
In addition, one
must consider two other classes of evil: natural evil and moral evil. Natural evil
comprises the environmentally caused suffering of sentient creatures and therefore
includes the suffering caused by hurricanes, earthquakes, etc. ; the suffering of
animals other than humans; and even such pain as arises from stubbing one' 6 toe.
Moral evil considered with respect to human acts may be termed sin. However, since
one must also consider the acts of God and since the question concerns the very
goodness of God that with which God's will accords, and which we therefore transgress
whenever we transgress God's will (that is, whenever we sin)-more must be said.
Moral evil, then, comprises free enactments of the will directed toward an improper 'nd, for "the primary goodness of a moral action is derived from its suitable
object" • Since an object of choice is suitab~e i f i t is "one of the things in our
own power which is desired after deliberation", moral evil results from a failure to
deliberate sufficiently when choosing the object of an action. The final end is a
matter of intention, not choice, but the specific end of a single action is not itself a final end, but merely the means to that end. Since all men necessarily desire
happiness as their final end, an action is judged in relation to its specific end,
which is a matter of choice.
Such an action can follow as the conclusion of a
practical syllogism. Yet since the will must be directed by the practical intellect
if it is to have a suitable end, the will must also have the method of attainment as
its object. This method must accord with circumstance - an accordance which reason
determines.
A good will is therefore one which conforms to the rule of reason.
Further, since a good will cannot produce a morally evil act, an action of the will
can cause evil only in so far as evil results from the will's failure to conform to
the rule of reason.
The previous paragraph asserted that a suitable end follows as the conclusion of
a syllogism. If so, there must be some first principles of morality upon which the
syllogism is based. Aquinas addresses these precepts in his theory of a natural law
which all men intuitively know. Whether this claim to intuitive knowledge is correct
is debatable. However, since such a debate would extend far beyond the scope of this
paper, let it suffice to say that all men living in society must hold in common certain moral precepts in order that society function harmoniously . Further and most
importantly, whether these common pr,e cepts are intuitive l y held, determined in order
to effect a pleasant society, or determined insofar as t hey aspire t o some conceptualized perfection of their agent, all men either possess them by intui tion or formulate them .!?.I_ reason in accordance with an intuitive end. Such an as sumpt i on upholds the previous c laim that moral evil results f rom t he f a i l ure of t he wi ll t o conform t o the rule of reason. The precepts of mo ra l reasoning are e i t her intuited or
determined by reason.
Earl ier, we demonstrated God ' s mora l f reedom and His pe r ~ect goodnes s . I t remains f or us to de t ermine whether t he presence of evil in t he world empirically i nval i dates t he cla im tha t s uch a God exists .
Perhaps t he simp l est and mos t obvious attempt t o disprove the existence of God
by appeali ng t o instanc es of evil is the following 1) A perfectly good God exist s . 2)
A perfect ly good God would eliminat e a ll evil that He can. 3) God is QJP.nipotent. 4)
Therefor e God can elimina t e a ll evil . S) Therefore God eliminates all evil. 6) Evil

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�exists. 7) The existence of a perfectly good God leads to contradiction. Unless
this argument can be shown to be unsound, or at least uncertain, God's existence as a
perfectly good, omnipotent being is disproven.
Statement one is assumed.
Statement three is given.
Statement five follows
logically from statements two and four. Since six is obvious and seven is a logically valid conclusion, only two and four remain unaccounted for. Now, statement four
holds if the elimination of any given evil does not entail contradiction, and two
holds insofar as a perfectly good God is morally obliged to eliminate any evil if by
so doing He would not cause a greater evil or eliminate a greater good.
The remainder of this treatise will examine why God is unable to eliminate certain evils because their elimination would occasion greater evil or eliminate some
greater good. It will examine first metaphysical, then natural, and finally moral
evil with respect to some greater good.
That every thing contributes to the greater good of the universe is clear if one
considers that evil is only a privation, that every object is good absolutely and
always contains some relative good, and that the imper fection or privation of a given .
obj ect does not detract from the r elative good of any other object (as long as objects are considered at an instant rather t han with respect to the conditions of
their genesis). That is, regardless of how much metaphysical evil an object contains, the universe contains more good if the object exists, then if it does not. At
the instant of creation then, in order that the universe contain all possible good,
God desired the existence of an infinite number ·of objects, each of which would manifest some good. Thus Aquinas argues for the diversity of the universe:
The perfection of the universe consists in the
diversity of things.
• Because His (God's) goodness
could not be adequately represented by one creature
alone, He produced many and diverse creatures, so that
what was wanting in the one representation of the di9
vine goodness might be supplied by another.
Every thing, regardless of the amount of metaphysical evil it contains, is necessary to achieve the greater good of the universe, but this explains only the metaphysical evil of objects when they are considered at an instant. When objects are
considered insofar as they relate to one another in motion over time, they might appear to cause evil in other objects, and thus detract from the metaphysical good of
the universe. That objects be able to harm one another - that they be able to cause
metaphysical evil, is necessary in a universe governed by laws.
Thus, metaphysical evil results from the consequent will of God, which is the
series of His antecedent wills with respect to their mutual possibility.
God
antecedently wills each object as perfect; He wills an ordered universe. However,
since objects must be potentially imperfect in that universe, and since some objects
through their interaction, make others imperfect, evil results. Further, even if the
universe could be ordered so that no metaphysical evil resulted, with the addition of
free creatures no such order could yet suffice. Therefore there is no way for God to
order the universe without incurring metaphysical evil.
The greater good which the ordering constitutes is the representation of the
divine intelligence. However, metaphysical evil also is a necessary condition for
the existence of ano t her manifes tation of God' s goodness - living creatures. Some of
these creatures can sense.
Both because the universe has laws which govern the interaction of all matter
and energy, and because finite sentient creatures must act within this universe, natural evil inevitably results-especially if some creatures are free and rational. For
matter reacts to the actions of the creatures according to the determinations of preexistent laws. These laws sometimes conflict with the creatures' desires. This conflict between matter's tendency and the creatures' desires causes suffering in

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sentient creatures - even if rational sentient creatures can not be physically harmed
by it.
That this suffering is evil is not evident. In the case of irrational creatures, the suffering occurs only as physical pain which invariably causes the creature to alter its actions in response thereby causing it to act in a manner not proper to it. This altered action is therefore a privation. The same alteration occurs
in a rational creature. In it, however, suffering affects its thoughts~ altering the
actions determined by those thoughts. Suffering is not, then, in itself a privation.
Rather, like the will's failure to conform to reason, suffering is a privation with
respect to a moral action.
That natural and metaphysical evil are consequences of an ordered universe which, in turn, is necessary in order for living creatures to function-has been
established. One might reply that God could miraculously intervene in all cases of
natural evil. However, free moral agents enact moral good or evil insofar as they
either do or do not consider the rule of reason. In order to determine by reason
whether an action is appropriate to an end, one must be able to understand causality
well enough to determine the consequences of that action.
Such causality may be
understood in a universe governed by law, but in one governed or dominated by
miraculous intervention such understanding is impossible. Thus, besides the loss of
good occasioned by the disruption of the order of the universe, through the inability
of their intellect to guide their will, rational animals would suffer an even greater
privation than that of natural evil. Therefore metaphysical and natural evil are
necessary for the greater good of both the universe and man.
Ex hypothesis, as perfectly good, God commits no morally evil act. However, man
does commit moral evil. Insofar as God wills the existence of man, God causes moral
evil. For although He does not cause it directly, since man, a free moral agent, is
directly responsible for his own acts, God nevertheless causes evil indirectly by
permitting man to do evil. This permission may be construed as an indirect cause of
evil because of divine foreknowledge, by which God knows when a man will commit moral
evil.
Now, even i f we assume, (but do not admit), that God permits evil because He
knows that each particular moral evil results accidentally in some greater good, God
is still the indirect cause . Yet because God's will is directed toward the greater
good and not the evil He is not culpable. Note that the issue of a moral act does
not determine its goodness since the greater good arises from the action accidentally. Further only that which belongs to a thing essentially can determine it in species. Thus while the action is still morally evil for the man who commits it, it is
morally good for God to permit it because He knows essentially the accidental issue
of all actions.
Aquinas is very clear on the point that must be demonstrated: God is not even
indirectly responsible for moral evil. The first cause of moral evil is in man, for
God does no violence to man's will, which is the free cause of moral evil. Unfortunately, St. Thomas is not clear on how to vindicate God of even indirect causality.
He says,
The effect of the deficient secondary cause
(man 9 s will) is reduced t o the first non-deficient
cause as regards what it has of being and perfection,
but not as regards what it has of def ect; just as
whatever there is of motion in t he act of limping is
caused by the motive power, whereas what is unbalanced
in it does not come froll\. the motive power, but from
0
the curvature of t he leg.
This mechanical example fails, however, because the will has no power over the
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�sustains him. Therefore Aquinas's claim that God is not even indirectly responsible
for evil has not yet been justified. In fact, St. Thomas acknowledges that
man's turning to God is by free choice; •.. But
free choice can be turned to God only when God turns
i t ... He (man) does not do this without the help of
God moving him.
Man can only act in accordance with God's perfectly good will, that is, he can
only enact moral good by virtue of the prevenient grace of God.
Even though God
grants sufficient grace to all who accept it, it is God Himself who moves them to
accept it.
Moral evil results from the will' s failure to conform to the rule of reason.
Since God's grace brings man's will into conformity with the rule of reason, i f God
moves man to accept this grace, He permits evil antecedently when he does not move a
man to accept His grace. For whenever acceptance is not caused, man does not consider the rule of reason. This non-consideration is not culpable, f or it is a negation.
But when man subsequently acts, he is culpable, for non-consideration of the rule is
a privat ion with respect to a morally significant action. Hence, God causes not a
privation but a ne gat ion, which man freely makes a privation. God is therefore only
the cause of mo r al good and not of moral evil. God does not do anything that He does
not cause; acceptance is a non-act.
Such an argument, derived from Aquinian positions, is unconvincing.
In the
first place , God's non-act directly causes man's non-consideration of the rule, which
subsequently causes the morally evil act. God did not act because of a greater good
which, by divine foreknowledge, He knew would be caused accidentally by the evil act.
His non-act is a negation rather than a privation, for action would not be proper to
God. However , His non-act still willfully and indirectly causes moral evil.
To vindicate God of any such causal ity as Aquinas affirms one must, it is necessary to establish and maintain a slightly different interpretation which yields radically different results.
Although God can infallibly cause a man to act in a
non-evil manner in a given instance, He does not - except, perhaps, in rare instances. Usually, He determines not to move a man in such a way that the man must
act in a specified manner. Rather He grants man prevenient grace. Along with this
grace, God moves man to accept it by inclining him to do so. Man either follows this
inclination or does not He chooses freely.
God, then, at the time of man's choosing cannot fail to permit evil, for to do
so would contradict His decision to grant man only an inclination and thus allow man
moral freedom with respect to that act. This is important .because, in a situation
where God infallibly causes man to act well, man's act is not free . It is absurd to
claim that one is caused by someone else to choose freely a particular alternative.
According to this interpretation God never permits an evil act per se . Rather,
He permits man to act with moral freedom, and so permits the possibility of an evil
act. Further, by inclining man toward considerat~on of the rule in all instances of
human freedom, God causes man's consideration and, so, man's morally good act. Man's
morally evil act, then, results from his autonomous disregard of this inclination ...
. Thus, God causes moral evil neithe r directly nor indirectly. For, God cannot
eliminate moral evil without also eliminating a greater good-namely, man's freedom.
Whether or not moral evil exists is therefore entirely up to man . This is not to say
that God does not prevent some moral evils, but He is morally obliged to permit some.
Herein it has been demonstrated that the existence of both evil and a perfectly
good God is consistent with man's reason, for plausible explanations have been offered for all three kinds of evil. If the arguments presented herein are sound, the
faith of one who believes may be renewed and strengthened. For one who does not have
faith, the possibility of gaining it remains. Further, if anyone is hereby convinced

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that it is his own freedom which requires the potentiality of the manifold evils
which he endures, and that it is primarily his own responsibility as a free man to
determine whether these evils are actualized, he may less readily despair should his
soul be filled with troubles.

Footnotes

1

Job, II. 10. translated form the Greek text of the Septuagint, as are all further
biblical references.

2
Job, I. 8.
3

4
5
6

The Summa Theologica, St. Thomas Aquinas, Part I, Q.14. contained in Introduction
to St. Thomas Acquinas, ed. Anton C. Pegis.

confessions, St. Augustine, Book III, Chapter VII.
Summa Theologica, Part I, Question 48, Art. 3.
Ibid., Part I, Q. 48, Art. 4.

l Ibid., Part II, Q. 18, Art. 2.

8

9

Nicomachean Ethics, trans. W. D. Ross, contained in The Basic Works of Aristotle,
Random House, Inc., New York, NY, 1941, ed. Richard McKeon, Book III-,-Chapter 3
section 1113 all.
Summa Theologica, Part I, Q. 47, Art. 1.

lOibid., Part I, Q. 49, Art. 3.
11

Ibid., Part II, Q. 109, Art. 7.

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Solution to the Junior-Senior Math Problem

s

Martin Marklin

Given the accompanying diagram
arc with center at N AEN is a
straight line f ormin~ any angle
MN; it is to be proven that the
area.

in which ACBN is a circle, ADB is a circular
circular arc with center at M, and CDEN is a
less than or equal to a right angle with line
mixtilinear triangles ADC and ADE are equal in

~--i"--...::::;;;..------' M

FIG .1

FIG.2

N

N

First, the case when CN is at right angles to MN (figure 1).
The area of a sector of a circle is

=

8r 2

,

where 0 is in radians.

2

Since AM= MN, and AM is perpendicular to MN,
Then AN = 2 AM;
(I. 4 7)
2 = 2 AM 2 •
And
AN
Since angle ANB is a right angle,
2
Then sector ANBD
TI/2 AN
2
IlAN 2

4
Since angle AMN is a right angle,
2
then sector AMNR
TI/2 AM
2
TIAM2

4

Substituting 2 AM for AN 2 ,
2
sector ANBD : sector AMNR ·· TI2AM
2

••

2
2

TIAM 2

2
1

But sector AND
= ~ sector ANBD.
Therefore, sector AND = sector AMNR.
And triangle ANM = triangle AON.
Therefore, subtracting equal triangles,
section AOD = section ANR .
Section ADONR = triangle AON - section ARN + section AOD.
But, section ADO = section ARN.
Therefore, section ADONR = triangle AON.
Section CAD, likewise, = sector COA - section DOA.
But sector COA = sector AND.
And subtracing common section DOA,
section ADC = triangle AON.
Therefore, section ADONR = section ADC .

88

For the case when CN . is less than a right angle with MN:
Draw in ME, OC, and SC.
Now, angle MNE = angle OSC
(III . 32)
And because of equal radii,
MN = ME = OC = OS.
Since triangles MNE and OCS are isosceles,
angle MNE = angle MEN = angle OCS = angle OSC .
Therefore, triangle MNE = triangle OSC .
And triangle OSC = triangle OCN, because they are on
equal bases and under equal heights.
Now, sector AQN = sector ANM = sector AOS, from previous proof.
And, angle CNO = ~ angle COS
(III. 20)
Since the area of a sector varies directly with its angle,
and given whatever angle for CNS, angles EMN and SOC will
each be twice that angle,
then, sector QDN = sector SOC
sector ENM.
Now subtracting the common area of section EN,
section QGDENO = triangle ENM = triangle OCS
= triangle OCN.
Subtracting further the common section OGDEN from both sides,
EN + CGD
GQO
But section EN
section SC,
Therefore, GQO
section CGD + section SC.
But triangle OSC
section OQG + QGCS
section SC = section CGD + section QGCS.
section SCDGQ
Therefore, section SCDGQ
triangle OSC = triangle OCN = section QGDENO.
Which was to be proven.
Q.E.D.

89

�Brise Marine

In the particular case in which CNM is a right angle, show that the volumes of revolution formed by rotating the two mixtilineal triangles ADC
and ADN about CN as an axis are . unequa~; and explain why this is the
case.
The volume, generated by the revolution of a curve, is the product of the
area enclosed by the curve and the distance moved through by the center
of area or center of gravity. In other words (see figure 3), the volume
of the ring generated by the circle A about axis CN is equal to the area
of circle A times the circumference of the circle with radius AO (the
mean distance). Hence, equal
c
areas at equal distances from
the axis may not always give
equal volumes-.~The further
o
requirement being that their
respective centers of gravity
be also equidistant from the
axis.
1--~-+-~~~-+~~~-+~--t

N

The volume of
rotated.

ACD

rotated

volume of hemisphere

ACB -

volume

ADO

Stephane Mallarme'

La chair est triste, helas! et j'ai lu tousles livres.
Fuir! la-bas fuir! Je sens que des oiseaux sont ivres
D'etre parmi l'ecume inconnue et les cieux!
Rien, ni les vieux jardins refletes par les yeux
Ne retiendra ce coeur qui dans la mer se trempe
0 nuits! ni la clarte deserte de ma lampe
Sur le vide papier que la blancheur def end
Et ni la jeune femme allaitant son enfant.
Je partirai! Steamer blancant ta mature,
Leve l'ancre pour une exotique nature!
Un Ennui, desole par les cruels espoirs,
Croit encore a l'adieu supreme des mouchoirs!
Et, peut-etre, les mats, invitant les orages
Sont-ils de ceux qu'un vent penche sur les naufrages
Perdus, sans mats, sans mats, ni fertiles ilots •
Mais, o ~on coeur, entends le chant des matelots!

The volume of ADNP rotated = volume of hemisphere ABN + volume ADO
rotated - volume APNR rotated.

c

Let volume
volume ADNP.

ACD

Then, volume APNR
ADO.

rotated

Translation

We know, from the previous
proof, that the area of APNR =
2 x area ADO. Hence, the centers of gravity of area APNR
and
area
ADO
must
be
equidistant from axis CN. We
know the center of area APNR
to be at K, which is ~ radius
AO (because of its bilateral
symmetry).

N

Nancy Mease

2 x volume

But the center of ADO can not be at ~ AO. For, in· that case, there would
be the same area to the left of ~AO as there would be to the right of
~AO.
But the arc AD has its maximum at the axis and its minimum at point
A.
I t is impossible for the area of ADO to be bisected along a line
which passes through the point ~RO. Hence, the assumption that volume
ADC = ADNP must be false.

The flesh is bleak; I have read all the booksTo flee, flee alas! The birds must be drunk
To exist amid nameless foam and sky!
Nothing shall hold this sea-steeped heart, O nights!
Neither old gardens shining in the eyes,
Nor the desert clarity of my lamp
On empty paper defended by white,
Nor even the young wife nursing her child.
I shall leave! You, steamer, cradling your spars,
Up anchor, crowd sail for exotic wilds!
A man of ennui, undone by cruel hopes,
Still looks to the last good~bye of handkerchiefs.
And perhaps these spars, inviting tempests,
Are among those that wind bends over wrecks
Lost, dismasted, without fertile isles •.•
And yet, oh my heart, hear the sailors' songs!

Which was to be proven.
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                    <text>�ENERGEIA:

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STAFF:

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(Aristotle's Metaphysics, 1072b)

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CONTENTS

..
..

ANNUAL SENIOR ESSAY (ANNAPOLIS)

''A HORRIBLE AND BLOODY MISCHANCING
OF HUMAN AFFAIRS":*
WILLIAM FAULKNER'S ABSALOM, ABSALOM!

Mark Streeter

1

Michael Strong

17

Stuart Sobczynski

25

Liz Waldner

.25 ·

Daniel Schoos

26

Nancy loevinger

33

Karel Bauer

42

Mark Manry

49 ,

David Amirthanayam

50

ANNUAL SENIOR ESSAY (SANTA FE)

''A SHALLOW READING OF MARX" AND
OTHER LIKELY STORIES*

HONORABLE MENTION, ORIGINAL POETRY (ANNAPOLIS)

MA ... DEMOISELLE
BEST

TRAN~LATION

OF A FRENCH POEM (ANNAPOLIS)

WUIS MFNARD'S "CIRCE"
ANNUAL JUNIOR ESSAY (ANNAPOLIS)

A FISHHOOK FOR HOBBES'S LEVIATHAN
ACKNOWLEDGED FOR EXCELLENCE (SANTA FE)

THE TWO HANDS OF GOD: AN EXAMINATION
OF GOETHE'S FAUST*
ACKNOWLEDGED FOR EXCELLENCE (SANTA FE)

PERCEPTION AND ANALYSIS IN
UNDERSTANDING BEING
BEST TRANSLATION FROM A GREEK TEXT (ANNAPOLIS)

·A CHORUS FROM ARISTOPHANES' THE FROGS
ACKNOWLEDGED FOR EXCELLENCE (SANTA FE)

ON POETIC RECOGNITION
ANNUAL SENIOR ESSAY (ANNAPOLIS)

THE SEARCH FOR WHAT THE MEMORY HOLDS:
MEMORY, IDENTITY AND THE USES OF THINGS Liz Waldner
,.

*excerpts

65

�''A horrible and bloody mischancing of human affairs":

William Faulkner's Absalom, Absalom!
Mark Streeter

It's just incredible. It just does not explain. Or perhaps that's it: they don't
explain and we are not supposed to know . We have a few old mouth- to- mouth tales; we
exhume from old trunks and boxes and drawers letters without salutation or signature,
in which men and women who once lived and breathed are now merely initials or
nicknames out of some now incomprehensible affection which sound to us like Sanskrit
or Chocktaw; we see dimly people, the people in whose living blood and seed we
ourselves lay dormant and waiting, in this shadowy attenuation of time possessing now
heroic proportions, performing their acts of simple passion and simple violence,
impervious ~o time and inexplicable--Yes, Judith, Bon, Henry, Sutpen: all of them.
They are there, yet something is missing; they are like a chemical formula exhumed
along with the letters from that forgotten chest, carefully, the paper old and faded
and falling to pieces, the writing faded, almost indecipherable, yet meaningful,
familiar in shape and sense, the name and presence of volatile and sentient forces;
you bring them together in the proportions called for, but nothing happens; you
re-read, tedious and intent, poring, making sure that you have forgotten nothing,
made no miscalculation; you bring them together again and again nothing happens: just
the words, the symbols, the shapes themselves, sha.dowy inscrutable and serene,
against that turgid background of a horrible and bloody mischancing of human affairs.
--Mr. Compson (pp. 100-101)
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Absalom, Absaloml by William Faulkner-·is the story of Thomas Sutpen. However,
it is not a story in the sense that one would expect, where a narrator, first person
or third, omniscient or limited, tells the story with at least some regard for chr~­
nology and fact.
Rather, the story of Thomas Sutpen is told by four narrators :
Miss Rosa Coldfield, Sutpen's sister-in-law; Mr . Jason Compson; QUentin Compson (his
son); and Shrevlin Mccannon, Quentin's roonunate at Harvard, from Edmonton, Alberta,
Canada. Each of them gives an account of a part or of the whole of the story, often
repeating and revising previous accounts by other narrators; they disregard chronology, jumping from one scene to another twenty years previous without warning or explanation; they not only have a limited knowledge of the facts of the story, but often
seem not to care about the facts. For the narrators speak in 1909 and 1910, forty
years since the death of Thomas Sutpen, and their interest lies not so much in exactly what happened (though they certainly do guess about what must have happened) as in
why what happened did happen. When Quentin and Shreve are imagining together the
scene on that Christmas Eve when Sutpen called Henry into the library, imagining Bon
and Judith walking in the garden just beyond the library, the author as omniscient
narrator inserts:
It would not matter here in Cambridge that the time had been winter in that
garden too, and hence no bloom nor leaf even if there had been someone to
walk there and be seen there since, judged by subsequent events, it had

1

�been night in the garden also. But that.did not matter because it had been
so long ago. It did not matter to them [Quentin and Shreve] anyway.
(p. 295)
Nor is the narrators' a passing interest, for their enterprise seems at times to border on an obsession (especially with Miss Rosa and Quentin) , or at least a fascination with the motivations and thoughts of their long-dead subjects. The cause of
their fascination is not at this point immediately apparent; however, let it suffice
for now to say that they are all involved and interested in the story and in their
telling of it, even though only one of the narrators, Miss Rosa, was present and involved when any of the events took place (and she only in a relatively minor role).
In telling it, even by telling it, the narrators are trying to make sense of the story, to make the story itself make sense. Their involvement with and interest in the
story of Thomas Sutpen and his design demand that they endeavor to obtain some meaning and truth from it (and this is possible only by telling it), which is often personal, and prejudiced, and yet is not useless or even false. The narrators tell and .
retell sutpen's story, each of them seeing (telling} it differently, as if each sees
through a piece of tinted glass colored according to his or her own character or
personality, which often results in a distorted, inaccurate, and, for the reader,
confusing picture.
It is through this medium that ·the reader must come to learn,
know, and be fascinated with, the story of Thomas Sutpen.

Rosa portrays Sutpen as an unscrupulous and ruthless villain with a hidden and
unspeakable past, who not only knew what he was doing, but went ahead and did it anyway, as if, she says, he was sent by Heaven as the bearer of letribution and punishment to expiate some long-forgotten familial sin. She speaks in a stylized and extravagant language, employing many "religious" and sexual images to express the extent of her outrage. Combined with the affront which Sutpen committed against her
when he suggested that they "breed like dogs" and await the result before marrying,
the ruination of the Coldfield family causes Rosa not only to hate sutpen and desire
revenge, but to cry when she learns that he is dead:
*'Dead? ••• Dead? You? You lie; you're not dead; heaven cannot, and hell dare
not, have you ! '
(p. 172)
Rosa herself is an old woman of sixty-four years, who was born into her parents'
middle age (her mother died while giving birth to her), and who describes herself as
never having been young,
Since what creature in the South since 1861, man woman nigger or mule, had
had time or opportunity not only to have been young, but to have heard what
being young was like from those who had, (p. 19)
and because, she says,

The

Narra~ors

The reasons for each narrator's fascination with Thomas Sutpen are dependent
upon each narrator's character and experience and are therefore as different as the
narrators themselves. Because the novel is also in some sense the story of the narrators, I will here concentrate on them and their enterprise, returning to the subject of Thomas Sutpen later in this essay.
Miss Rosa's account comprises Chapters I and V: in Chapter I she is talking to
a somewhat unwilling Quentin, having asked, "summoned, him to call on her on that
September afternoon, while in Chapter v Quentin is recalling internally her words
while sitting upon the porch of his house that same evening, waiting for the time
when he must go and get her in the buggy to make the trip out to Sutpen's Hundred.
Rosa's subjects in Chapter I are Sutpen's early days in Jefferson, his marriage to
her sister Ellen, and her relations with and attitude towards the Sutpen family in
the days before the war. In Chapter V she recalls the events following the death of
Charles Bon by Henry's hand, and, with herself as main character, tells of Sutpen's
return from the war, her engagement to him, and her life in Jefferson following her
outraged flight from Sutpen's Hundred.
Rosa• s account is filled with her visions of Sutpen as a hell-born demon or
ogre, with outrage and unforgiveness, and with her "cold, implacable, and ruthles~"
hate of the man whom she blames for the destruction of her family. She blames him
not only for the destruction of her family, and of his own, but also for the destruction of the South itself:
11

*[this is] why God let us lose the war: that only through the blood of
our men and the tears of our women could He stay this demon and efface his
name and lineage from the earth. (p. 11)
*All quotations marked with an asterisk are passages from the book which appear there
in italics. In.the book, italics are used to signal the thoughts of a character as
opposed to his or her speech; for instance, almost the whole of Chapter V is not Rosa
speaking, but Quentin remembering Rosa speaking (he is still on the porch).

2'

I was born too late. I was born twenty-two years too late--a child to whom
out of the overheard talk of adults my own sister's and my sister's children's faces had come to be like the faces in an ogre-tale between supper
and bed. (p . 22)
When Rosa was young she was isolated and outcast, for her father was neither prepared
nor inclined to give her what she needed. The aunt who lived with them did not provide the care and attention which was her due either. Both father and aunt were too
concerned with Ellen, who had already been married seven years and given birth to her
two children by the time Rosa was born. It was, Rosa thinks, as if she had never
been born because she had never been raised. This was why Rosa was never young: she
had neither received the attention proper to an infant nor ever heard any words but
those about Ellen's marriage to that "ogre."
Rosa was rudely introduced to the anguished adult world very early in her ife
by listening outside of closed doors.
*So that instead of accornpl~shing the processional and measured milestones
of the childhood's time I lurked, unapprehended as though, shod with the
very damp and velvet silence of the womb, I displaced no air, gave off no
betraying sound, from one closed forbidden door to the next and so
acquired all I knew of that light and space in which people moved and
breathed.
(p. 145)
Rosa was always on the outside looking in, unable to participate in the scene unfolding before her. so was it also with love. During that "summer of wistaria" when she
was fourteen, Rosa fell in love.
She at first fell in love with Judith's beau
Charles Bon, even though she had never seen him. However, in realizing that Bon was
unavailable to her she,also realized that she would forever be on the outside of any
possible love relationship. She therefore fell in love with love itself; she became
*"all polymath love's androgynous advocate" (p. 146)
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�When Ellen on her deathbed asks Rosa to protect Judith and Henry.., she is inviting
Rosa into her family as an actual participant, yet Rosa, who is herself younger than
both the children, is unable to comply. Her inability stems not from herself, she
would probably desire such a role, but from the children themselves. Henry is away
at the war, and she will not see him again until that September night in 1909. She
attempts to save Judith when she goes to Sutpen's Hundred immediately after the death
of Charles Bon, hoping to give comfort and sympathy to Judith in her mourning. Yet
when she gets there she is met not with bereavement but with that mask which Judith
wears that shows no emotion. Rosa is repulsed and relegated to her role of onlooker
once again.
Sutpen's proposal of marriage to her was probably a source of hope for her, hope
that someone would see her and c a re for her, yet this too turne d sour . Rosa believes
that she died at that moment when she realized that Sutpen did not want her for herself but only for her possibility as a breeder ("my life was destined to end on an
afternoon in April forty-three years ago" (p. 18)). She never could get past that
moment. She is a Southern lady of tradition , principl e, honor, and pride, who is
obsessed with he r hatred of Thomas Sutpen. Mr. Compson says that she is now a ghost
because that is what the war did to ladies, though she herself blames Sutpen (who for
her practically represents, symboli~es, the war) for her ghosthood.
Her character
and words recall Dylan Thomas' words :
'We who are young are old . It is the oldest cry.
Age sours before youth's tasted in the mouth
And any sweetness that it has
Is sucked away. '
For Rosa, any sweetness that she ever had has long ago turned to bitterness and rage.
Mr. Compson's nar ration dominates Chapters II through IV as he talks to Quentin
on the porch the ev e ning following Quentin's visit to Miss Rosa. Mr. Compson first
tells of sutpen's early days in Jefferson, his arrival, the town's reaction, and his
marriage to Ellen .
He then takes up Rosa as his main character and examines her
relationship with sutpen and his family.
(It is interesting to note that Mr.
Compson's narration covers the same material as Miss Rosa's immediately preceding in
Chapter I . This allows the reader to get some sense of what is going on in the book,
for he is confronted with two narrators telling the same part of the story differently.)
Finally, in Chapter IV, Mr. Compson speaks about the relationship between
Charles Bon, Henry, and Judith.
M . Comps on is de t a che d , e ve n cynical, in hi s t e lling, using hi s s kept ical
r
cynicism as a defense against becoming too involved with the story, against being
forced to acknowledge the tragedy which he ultimately believes the story to be. He
is afraid of the force of the story, its ability to move him, and protects himself by
his personae using his knowledge of classical mythology and tragedy to create
separate personae for the characters of the real story. He sets up a stage upon
which sutpen and his fellow actors move and strut, where while sutpen was "still
playing the scene to the audience, behind him Fate, destiny, retribution, irony,--the
stage manager, call him what you will--was already striking the set and dragging on
the synthetic and spurious shadows and shapes of the next one" (pp. 72-73).
Mr.
compson applies this tragic and theatric formula to the story, completing the
metaphor himself by becoming the director who sits in the empty auditorium and tells
the actors what to say and do. The characters become his playthings. Mr. Compson
does believe sutpen's story to be tragedy; yet by applying to it his own tragic form
and setting, he denies the real tragedy of it, and changes it into a trite, banal,
and distant happening.
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microcosmic symbol for the fall of the South, and sees in its characters "the people
in whose living blood and seed we ourselves lay dormant and waiting" (p. 101). The
story is part of Mr. Compson's heritage, which is filled with those same undying
ghosts of which Quentin speaks, and which is that past or history which is yet present. Consistent with his tragic setting, Mr. Compson believes the characters of the
story larger-than-life, heroic.

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••• of that day and time, of a dead time; people too as we are, and victims
too as we are, but victims of a different circumstance, simpler and therefore, integer for integer, larger, more heroic and the figures therefore
more heroic too, not dwarfed and involved but distinct, uncomplex who had
the gift of loving once or dying once instead of being diffused and scattered creatures drawn blindly limb from limb from a grab bag and assembled,
author and victim too of a thousand homicides and a thousand copulations
and divorcements.
(p. 89)
Mr. Compson obviously envies this distant and "simpler" time, and accordingly withdraws, not only from the trenchancy of the story, but from his own life as well.
The reader of the book very well may pause at this point and breathe a sigh of
relief, for with the end of Chapter V comes also the end of the most difficult half ,
of the book (from the standpoint of a first reading). The reader at this point has
been provided with most of the known facts of the story, and the second half is an
attempt by Quentin and Shreve to further explain and understand those facts. The two
of them try to recreate the events of the story by placing themselves in the shoes of
their characters. In this manner they hope to understand why and how such a "bloody
mischancing of human affairs" could ever occur.
The character of Quentin Compson dominates the book - he is the central narrator
and his role is of almost equal importance to Sutpen's. The book is in many ways
about Quentin Compson. He is always present, listening more often than speaking, yet
when he speaks or thinks he gives voice to some of the most important and germane
ideas and themes of the novel. His "section" comprises Chapters VI through IX where
he and his Canadian roommate Shreve recreate (or relive ) the story, their enterprise
occasioned by Quentin's receipt of a letter from his father telling of Miss Rosa's
death.
It is now almost exactly four months since Quentin and Rosa went out to
Sutpen's Hundred to find whatever it was "living hidden" in the house.
Quentin resembles his father in many ways, yet differs in one major aspect: he
is unable to distance himself from the story, to allow it to remain mysterious and
inexplicable, as his father can and does. Quentin is obsessed with the story of
Thomas sutpen and is compelled to listen to it and tell it, even though the listening
and telling disturb him both emotionally and physically ("now he began to jerk all
over, violently and uncontrollably until he could even hear the bed" (p. 360)).
Quentin is consumed by his feeling of purposelessness. He cannot reconcile himself
with his tradition, the tradition and history of the South, and because of this has
no foundation upon which to build his life. He is lost.
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Quentin grew up in a land where "tragedy is secondhand"
and he accordingly
seeks to understand those tragedies in the hope that he might finally understand himself.
It was a part of his twenty years' heritage of breathing the same air and
hearing his father talk about the man Sutpen ••• Quentin had grown up with
that; the mere names were interchangeable and almost myriad. His childhood
was full of them; his very body was an empty hall echoing with sonorous
defeated names; he was not a being, an entity, he was a commonwealth. He
was a barracks filled with stubborn back-lo~king ghosts still recovering,

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even forty-three years afte:rward, from the fever which had cured the disease, waking from the fever without even knowing that it had been the fever
itself which they had fought against and not the sickness, looking with
stubborn recalcitrance backward beyond the fever and into the disease with
actual regret, weak from the fever yet free of the disease and not even
aware that the freedom was that of impotence.
(pp. 11,12)
The characters of those Southern tragedies are to Quentin also ghosts which haunt and
inhabit his very soul. With the story of Sutpen, Quentin is confronted with one of
those tragedies, yet this one is more meaningful than the others, because in the story of Thomas Sutpen~Quentin sees not only a story of the South but also himself in
the person of Henry.
Becauoe of this Quentin is obsessed with the tragedy of Thomas
Sutpen and most specifically with the character of Henry Sutpen.
Quentin sees himself as two separate entities; the one self trying to continue
living in the present, and the other unable to live in the present without the
copresence of the past.
He [Quentin] would seem to listen to two separate Quentins now--the Quentin
Compson preparing for Harvard in the south, the deep South dead since 1865
and peopled with garrulous outraged baffled ghosts, listening, having to
listen, to one of the ghosts which had refused to lie still even longer
than most had, telling him about old ghost-times; and the Quentin who was
still too young to deserve yet to be a ghost, but nevertheless having to be
one for all that, since he was born and bred in the deep South the same as
she was--the two separate Quentins now talking to one another in the long
s1lence of notpeople, in notlanguage.
(p. 9)
These two polarized selves pull Quentin apart and render him a non-entity, one of the
"notpeople." Like the post- war South, he is impotent, unable to act; he is paralyzed
into a permanent state of anxiety and indecision. This is apparent in his relation
to the story. The telling of the story fills him with a kind of terror, yet he desperately wants and needs to tell it. Finally he is unable to prevent the telling of
it:
*Am I going to have to have to hear it all again ••• ! am going to have to
hear it all over again I am already hearing it all over again I am
listening to it all over again I shall have to never listen to anything
else but this again forever .
(p . 277)
Furthermore, Quentin's impotence makes him unable to bring peace to his two warring
and conflicting selves; the war will always be still being fought within Quentin.
'Nevermore of peace.

Nevermore of peace.

Nevermore Nevermore Nevermore.'
(p. 373)

Unable to relegate that ghost-history of the South to the past, Quentin lives in
guilt, shame, and remorse. Quentin's attitude towards the South is best expressed in
his answer to Shreve's question: "Why do you hate the south?" When Quentin answers
"I don't hate it," the reader must know that Quentin both loves and hates the South,
and that he is forever doomed to both love and . hate the South, its history, and his
tradition. Nor is this any passive ambivalence about his home; rather, it is a passionate affirmation of his own bipartite and lost self.
The guilt and confusion
which Quentin feels, and which Jim Bond both excites and symbolizes ("You still hear
him at night sometimes. Don't you?" (p. 378)), must make him hate the South and the

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heritage it has bequeathed to him. Nevertheless, Quentin deeply loves the south and
its traditions because it is his home. Unable finally to break ~he hold which the
past has on him, Quentin commits suicide in June of the same year, finally silencing
the ghosts which haunt him and which have made him "older at twenty than a lot of
p7ople who have died" (p. 377). Quentin himself expresses his condition best, and
finally one can only conclude with him,
*Yes. I have heard too much, I have been told too much; I have had to
listen to too much, too long. (p. 207)
Shreve is obviously the most curious choice as a narrator, yet he is entirely
necessary to the purpose of the book. Set as a counte:rweight to Quentin in order to
balance the narration and keep it sane, he at first forces the reluctant Quentin into
reliving the story once again, then insures that Quentin does not become bogged down
in his obsession by either prodding Quentin along or by taking over the telling himself. Neither born in the South, nor involved in the story, and from farther north
even than the North, Shreve is the one narrator who can ever be disinterested or
ambivalent to the story, who can lay it aside and forget it when he so desires;
however, he too is fascinated by Sutpen. One reason for his interest in the story is
his natural youthful enthusiasm of a freshman at Harvard; for Shreve the telling is a l
kind of "play" (p. 280), that is, his fascination with Sutpen is not imbued with the'
outrage, anxiety, or dread of the other narrators. Shreve simply recognizes that the
story of Thomas Sutpen is an amazing and incredible one, and one that excites his ·
interest.
But perhaps Shreve is most _
valuable because he takes upon himself the part of
the reader, giving voice to words that must at times be on the reader's own tongue.
One often hears Shreve saying "Wait!", trying to slow QUentin down and make him explain those points about which, though Quentin knows the truth, neither the reader
nor Shreve have the slightest understanding.
Shreve is also of great value to the
non-Southern reader, whose interest and confusion about the South are expressed in
Shreve's words:
·
*Tell about the South. What's it like there. What do they do there.
do they live there. Why do they live at all.
(p. 174)

Why

On the subject of what it's like to live in the South, to be a ghost living among
other ghosts, Shreve gives the best explanation, even though he is only voicing his
own confusion and ignorance, and although Quentin answers him with a final "You can't
understand it. You would have to be born there."
I just want to understand it if I can and I don't know how to say it better. Because it's something my people haven't got. or if we have got it,
it all happened long ago across the water and so now there ain't anything
to look at every day to remind us of it. We · don't live among defeated
grandfathers and freed slaves (or have I got it backward and was it your
folks that are free and the niggers that lost?) and bullets in the dining
room table and such, to be always reminding us to never forget. What is
it? Something you live and breathe in like air? A kind of vacuum filled
with wraithlike and indomitable anger and pride and glory at and in happenings that occurred and ceased fifty years _
ago?
A kind of entailed
birthright father and son and father and son of never forgiving General
Sherman, so that forevermore as long as your childrens' children produce
children you won't be anything but a descendant of a long line of colonels
killed in Pickett's charge at Manassas? (p. 361)
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�Shreve encourages the reader to dare to fashion his own version of the story by showing no hesitation in submerging himself in the story and in telling portions of it,
though he is unqualified and ill-equipped to do it in comparison with the other narrators. Though he often stings Quentin with his jokes and irreverance ("Jesus, the
South is fine, isn't it ••• It's better than Ben Hur, isn't it·." (P. 217)), Shreve is
sincere in his efforts to understand the South and Thomas Sutpen.
Considering the relativistic and biased accounts of the narrators, which they
yet hold to be true, one must wonder about the nature of truth in this book. Is
truth a personal thing, where each narrator's account is true only because it is
true, because it has meaning, to them? The following quotation sheds some light on
what the narrators are doing as they tell their stories, and search for what is true.
It did not matter to either of them (Quentin and Shreve ] which one did
the talking, since it was not the talking alone which did it, performed and
accomplished the overpassing, but some happy marriage of speaking and hearing wherein each before the demand, the requirement, forgave condoned and
forgot the faulting of the other--faultings both in the creating of this
shade whom they discussed (rather, existed in) and in the hearing and sifting and discarding the false and conserving what seemed true, or fit the
preconceived. (p. 316)
The narrators are trying to "conserve" what seems true, and yet what is true to them
is oftentimes that "might-have-been which is more true than truth," and the true that
is more true than truth (factual truth) is actually factual falsity. In their act of
creating the characters of sutpen and all those who surround him, the narrators are
like the woman singer in Wallace Stevens' s "The Idea of Order at Key West" who gives
order and meaning to the otherwise mute and meaningless sea in and by her singing.
The story of Thomas Sutpen is nothing without them.
The narrators' distance from the actual events allows them not only to embellish
the story, but also, it seems, to see it more clearly and meaningfully. When Quentin
is imagining Sutpen's return to Jefferson in the middle of the war with the marble
slabs for his and Ellen's graves, the omniscient narrator states, "he could see it;
he might even have been there," and Quentin thinks, *"No. If I had been there I
could not have seen it this plain" (p. 190). Thus, the narrators examine the story
as they are telling it for its meaning and truth, for had they been involved in the
actual events, their involvement would have been too much for them to have any perspective on it; they would have been overwhelmed with the living of it. Shreve, it
seems, speaks for all of the narrators when, recalling Miss Rosa's words, he says:
there are some things that just have to be whether they are or not, have
to be a damn sight more than some other things that maybe are and it don't
matter a damn whether they are or not. (p. 322)
Shreve is saying that some things are truer than fact, that facts can get in the way
of truth and obscure it, and that what is most true is that with which the narrators
imbue their accounts: their own innate meaning which they find in their hear ts, or
sub-conscious, or somewhere.
Because the narrators' accounts are meaningful and
true, and put together where the reader can experience all of them, they yield, from
the very union of these personal and true accounts, a truth which is the reader' s
own, and which is greater than any of them separately.
Quentin and Shreve demonstrate the problem of historical truth~ how anyone can
ever really know the past. They attempt to "know" by placing themselves inside their
characters and by trying to imagine what they felt and thought. Their endeavor to
experience history "first-hand" indicates the historical validity and value of a nov-

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el like War and Peace; by placing his reader in that world, Tolstoy allows him to
feel what it was like to be there and to know at least better than before what went
on in the hearts and minds of the people living at that time.
.
Quentin thinks that the narrators have a true relation to the story and that any
differences between their stories and the original are due only to a different "temper~tur~" and "molecularity" of the medium through which the story must pass.
That
medium is the narrator. Yet Quentin, with his relationship to history, believes that
the story in its truth is "unchanging", and that all the narrators are determined by
and dependent in their very being upon Thomas Sutpen; for Quentin, history determines
both the physical and spiritual reality of the present, and is therefore present also.
*Maybe nothing ever happens once and is finished.
Maybe happen is never
once but like ripples maybe on water after the pebble sinks, 'the ripples
moving on, spreading, the pool attached by a narrow umbilical water-cord
to the next pool which the first pool feeds, has fed, did feed, let this
second pool contain a different temperature of water, a different molecularity of having seen, felt, remembered, reflect in a different tone the
infinite unchanging sky, it doesn't matter: that pebble's watery echo whose
fall it did not even see moves across its surface too at the original
ripple-space, to the old ineradicable rhythm thinking Yes, we are both
Father. Or maybe Father and I are both Shreve, maybe it took Father and me
both to make Shreve or Shreve and me both to make Father or maybe Thomas
Sutpen to make all of us. (pp. 261-262)
Thomas Sutpen
So who is this man Thomas Sutpen? For the reader, he must at first be , and
finally remain, an enigma. Reminiscent of Milton's Satan, he is described as a demon, a Faustus, a man who "given the occasion and the need ••• can and will do anything" (p. 46) , and yet also as a tragic hero whose "trouble was innocence" (p. 220) ,
a symbol of human folly before Nature, Fate or God, and a man who embodied those
American ideals of hard-working ambition, independence (self-reliance), integrity,
perseverance, and success. He is portrayed as an unscrupulous and inhumane man,
about whom the townspeople "thought of ruthlessness rather than justice and of fear
rather than respect, but not of pity or love" (p. 43), who "had never learned how to
ask anybody for help or anything else" (p. 273), and was underbred yet still accomplished his climb to the aristocracy, and who at times legitimately arouses the reader's pity and sympathy. He is Cadmus with his "ironic fecundity of dragon's teeth "
and Abraham whose children "sho:uld have been the jewels of his pride and the shieid
and comfort of his old age, only-- (Only they destroyed him or something or he destroyed them or something. And died)" (p. 9), and lastly David, who wanted a son and
got one too many. The narrators never stop talkin9 about him or thinking about him,
even when they are talking about someone or something else, and the reader is therefore inundated with descriptions, opinions, and reflections about him. The image of
the townspeople who chant "in steady strophe and antistrophe: *Sutpen. Sutpen.
Sutpen. Sutpen." (p.32) hangs over and infiltrates the book. Sutpen elicits both the
reader's awe, respect, and fascination, and his revulsion and indignation.
Finally, however, one must make a decision about Sutpen. was he a victim of
history, circumstance, and coincidence, or was there something truly evil in and
about him?
Perhaps by examining his life, his design and his actions, his
motivations and concerns, we can reach some understanding of the man who was Thomas
Sutpen.
The years of his youth in the mountains were definitive in forming his charac-

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�ter. There, a man was judged "by lifting anvils or gouging eyes or how much whiskey
[he] could drink then get up and walk out of the room" (p. 226), and not by either
possessions or birth. so that when he was introduced to traditional Southern society, plantation society, with its rigid caste system and blatant discrimination,he
was·shocked.
He had never heard of, never imagined, a place, and land divided neatly up
and actually owned by men who did nothing but ride over it on fine horses
or sit in fine clothes on the galleries of big houses while other people
worked for them; he did not even imagine then that there was any such way
to live or to want to live, or that there existed all the objects to be
wanted which there were, or that the ones who owned the objects not only
could look down on the ones that didn't, but could be supported in the
down-looking not only by the others who owned objects too but by the very
ones that were looked down on that didn't own objects and knew they never
would. (p. 221)
Sutpen thought that these "down-looking" men were only "lucky", men whose advantage
. and "superiority" were given them by chance and circumstance, "and that the lucky ·
:·ones would be even slower and loather than the unlucky to take any advantage of it or
credit for it, or to feel that it gave them anything more than luck; and he still
thought that they would feel if anything more tender toward the unlucky than the unlucky would ever·need to feel toward them" (p. 226). Thus, when he walked up to the
front door of that plantation house and was told by a house servant to go around to
the back, the shock was not only because of the intrusion of reality upon his private
world, but also from the realization of his own innocence of that reality.
~e lost that innocence then, but not all of it, or maybe it was that he lost one
kind of innocence and retained or gained another. This other innocence was implicit
in his design, though it was not the innocence or naivete that allowed him to believe
that he could ever be anything but underbred in that aristocracy to which he aspired;
rather, it was the innocence which believed that the features of this aristocratic
life could be bought and possessed like objects, and that they were accessible in
their genuine form to anyone, provided that he was courageous and shrewd (and Sutpen
probably did understand one or the other of these to mean unscrupulous). Sutpen's
innocence takes the form of an abstraction which he performed upon and extended to
all the facets of his life, and his life was really only one prolonged and
iron-willed struggle towards the implementation and accomplishment of his design;
anything beyond or outside of it, which coul d not be used towards the f u lfillment of
it, was of no interest or concern to him.
(He could never love nor hate anyone or
anything because neither love nor hate made any difference in his plan.)
This innocence become abstraction is visible in his conceptions of tradition,
respectability, morality, and slavery. Sutpen thought of tradition and respectability not as traits inherited or handed down in families and towns, but as material
as could be assumed upon oneself like a new set of clothes could be purchased and
worn. Because these were necessary to his design, he chose to possess them regardless of the persona l or f amilial cost, t hough he never los t sight of his per sonal
integrity, for that too was for him part of respectability. When speaking to General
Compson about his "second choice," the decision about what to do about Bon, Sutpen
says,
either choice which I might make, either course which I might choose, leads
to the same result: either I destroy my design with my own hand, which will
happen i~ I am forced to play my last trump card, or do nothing, let matters take the course which I know they will take and see my design complete

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itself quite normally and naturally and successfully to the public eye, yet
to my own in such fashion as to be a mockery and a betrayal of that little
boy who approached that door fifty years ago and was turned away 1 for whose
vindication the whole plan was conceived and carried forward to the moment
of this choice. (p. 274)
This need for respectability is also why he had to "put aside" his first wife.
Whether he objected personally to her black blood is beside the point here;
plantation owners just did not have part-Negro women, not even octoroons, as their
"ladies-of-the-house."
Sutpen's morality is likewise abstract and betrays the same kind of innocence.
According to General Compson, Sutpen believed:
that the ingredients of morality were like the ingredients of pie or cake
and once you had measured them and balanced them and mixed them and put
them into the oven it was all finished and nothing but pie or cake could
come out. (p. 263)
General Compson also testifies that it was this same morality, "his code of logic and
morality, his formula and recipe of fact and deduction whose balanced sum and product
declined, refu:s@d to swim or even float" (p. 275), which would not permit him to
"malign or traduce the memory of his first wife, or at least the memory of the marriage even though he felt that he had been tricked by it" (p. 272). He refused to do
this even when she had, it seems, sought him out in order to avenge herself upon him
after more than thirty years. Thirty year s, sutpen says,
after my conscience had finally assured me that
to rectify it. (p. 265)

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All these things, morality, justice and conscience, are caught up in sutpen's
rational, business-like, and abstract scheme of things. For sutpen, conscience is
something that can be bought off and convinced either by arguing with it long enough
or by utilizing that concept of justice which is nothing more than a business transaction. The simplicity and innocence of Sutpen's morality is most evident in the way
he handles his first wife; he believed that by giving her money he would automatically gain her forgiveness, and that his conscience should not trouble him because of
the great amount of money which he gave her. General Compson can reply to sutpen's
words quoted above only by exclaiming,
'Conscience? Conscience? Good God, man, what else did you expect? Didn't
the very affinity and instinc. for misfortune of a man who had spent that
t
much time in a monastery even, let alone one who had lived that many years
as you lived them, tell you better than that? Didn't the dread and fear of
females which you must have drawn in with the primary mammalian milk teach
you better? What kind of abysmal and purblind innocence could that have
been which someone told you to call virginity? What conscience to trade
with which would have warr anted you in the belief that you could have
bought immunity from her for no other coin but justice?' (p . 265)
Such characters as Miss Rosa and Wash Jones associate Sutpen with the south and
the sin of slavery, that South which had, according to Mr . Coldfield,
er ected its economic edifice not on the rock of stern mor ality but on the
shifting sands of oppor tunism and moral brigandage . (p. 260)

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�One interpretation may indeed equate sutpen 1s fall with the fall of the South and
view the book as a kind of allegory and explanation of the ruin of the Old South.
Yet such an interpretation of the book, where Sutpen in his prosperity, sin, and final ruin is a metaphor for the South, does not fit in many ways. The failure of
sutpen's design is not contingent upon the outcome of the war; even if the So?th had
won, Henry still probably would have had to kill Bon in order to prev~nt him from
marrying Judith. Nor is sutpen typical of Southern plantation owners1 his character
traits, the optimism, innocence and strong-willed and unflagging determination, are
.neither emblematic nor especially suggestive of the planter class. sutpen was always
on the fringe of the aristocracy 1 and the town's partial acceptance of him was a truce
called only when the townspeople realized that it was too late to stop him because of.
the money and power he had amassed. The following passage indicates both Sutpen ' s
differences with the typical male Southerner, and his attitude towards those "committees" which were the germ of the Ku Klux Klan:
*That was the winter when ••• the ruined, the four years' fallow and neglected land lay more idle yet while men with pistols in their pockets gathered
daily at secret meeting places in the towns. He did not make one of thesei
I remember how one night a deputation called, rode out through the mud of
early March and put him to the point of definite yes or no, with them or
against them, friend or enemy:
and he refused, declined~ offe.re~ them
(with no change of gaunt ruthless face nor level voice) defiance if it was
defiance they wanted, telling them that if every m~n in th~ South would do
he himself was doing, would see to the restoration of his own land, the
general land and South would save itself. (p. 161)

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Finally, the differences between sutpen and Southern aristocracy are most apparent in his attitude towards blacks and slavery. sutpen grew up in a place ·"where . the
only colored people were Indians and you only looked down at them over your r~fle
sights" (p. 221) , and so he not only had no understanding of the fact that the lives
of people of another race could be usurped for one's own ends, but also.he had none
of the fear and insecurity inherent in such an attitude. Sla~ery was JUSt a~oth~r
practice which he appropriated for himself from the pl~nt~r soc~ety; there was in him
no innate belief in his own white superiority, a superiority which never ?eeded to be
doubted or tested. sutpen' s belief in his own superiority was something which . he
tried and proved both to himself and to his slaves by stripping down and stepping
into the ring with them, "fighting not as white men fight, with rules ~nd weapons,
but as negroes f ight to hurt one another quick and bad" (p. 29), gouging eyes ~nd
drawing blood. sutpen never escaped from those brutal tests of a man's worth which
he had learned as a boy, because they were part of his innocence: .
The presence and acceptance of Clytie in the family also indicates that Sutp7n
had no special discriminatory feelings about blacks. She is acknow~edge~ as his
daughter and lives with the family in the house, and her sometimes being discove:ed
·
with Judith in the bed or on the pallet probably caused no especi~l
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~o~:i~~~ation or distress for sutpen. Rosa's indignation about this.is the a~prop:i­
at e and expected southerner ' s response . Be caus e sutpen re?ards.clyti~ as benign with
res ct to his design, he allows her to coexist and grow with hi~ f~ily.
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peYet with Charles Bon it is a different matter. sutpen, seeing in Bon a.definite
threat to the success of his plan, cannot tolerate Bon's presen~e in t?e family • . T~e
harm which Bon could do is of two sorts: the first concerns his marriage to ~udit ,
and the second involves sutpen's inability and refusal ~o recognize .Bon as his so~.
Neither of these matters devolves from sutpen's own opinions or feelin~s abo~t Bo~~
bl k blood· it is only the perfection, both inner and outer, of his design wi .
wh~~h he is 'concerned. For had he allowed Charles to marry Judith, the apparent com-

pletion and success of his design would be a "mockery and betrayal" of the design
itself, not in the eyes of the world and the society, for no one would ever need to
know of Ben's true nature, but in Sutpen's own eyes. The reality of his design would
not fit that abstract picture in his mind of the perfect aristocratic family and
life . The fact that he knew that Bon was black disallowed any marriage, fo r such an
event would render his design imperfect. It is Sutpen's abstract conception of blackness as something unsuitable and bad which determines his thoughts and actions.
Sutpen's inability to recognize or acknowledge Bon as his son also depended on
the success and ultimate perfection of his design. To have acknowledged Bon would
mean to acknowledge and accept his own failure, again not necessarily in society' s
view but in his own. The perfection of his design had already been impeded and
marred by the travesty (in Sutpen's eyes) which was his first marriage. Sutpen r e garded his virginity as part of his design, as he tells General Compson:
'On this night I am speaking of (and until my first marriage I might add) I
was still a virgin. You will probably not believe that, and if I were · to
try to explain it you would disbelieve me more than ever. So I will only
s~y that that too was a part of the design which I had in my mind.'
(p. 248)

Not only did he lose his virginity in that first marriage, but for the price of it
got a black wife and a black son, who:
made an ironic delusion of all that he had suffered and endured in the past
and all that he could ever accomplish in the future toward that design.
(p. 263)

So that when he saw Bon when Henry brought him home that first Christmas, he knew, .
sensed , what was going to happen, and:
he must have felt and heard the design--house, position, posterity and
all- -come down like it had been built out of smoke, making no sound, creat_ing no rush of displaced air and not even leaving any debris. (p. 267)
Sutpen had failed and probably knew it, yet never gave up trying. He chose to play
his last trump card and use Henry to stop Bon. Sutpen's inability to acknowledge Bon
is also the reason why he had to use Henry as his instrument in disposing of Bon; had
Sutpen himself acted against Bon , it would have been tant amount to acknowledging
Ben's existence both as his son and as a problem.
sutpen did practice slavery, yet did not reserve blacks for this treatment. He
used anyone who could possibly further his design:
both his wives, Eulalia and
Ellen, Rosa, Henry, Mr. Coldfield, the French architect, and his slaves.
Sutpen
"chose them with the same care and shrewdness with which he chose the other livestock--the horses and mules and cattle" (p. 61} , and used them in the same way, as
tools and instruments to accomplish his design, never recognizing them as individuals, human beings who had lives and thoughts and feelings of their own. In one sense
he was trying (like Judith in giving Bon's letter to General Compson's wife) to make
an impression, leave his mark, only in his case by establishing a dynasty; yet, he
never realized (as Judith did) that his own actions affected and were intertwined
with the actions and lives of other people, and that in his blind monomania he might
hurt one of those people to the . extent that his business- like justice and recompense
could never repair the injury done . Sutpen touched and harmed the "central I - Am" of
many of the people with whom he came in contact, but the harm a r ose not out of any
par ticular verbal or physical blow; rather, the harm arose out of his re j e ction of

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�and his blindness to the fact that those people even had an "I-Am," that they had any
other existence but that which he could manipulate and use.
Sutpen did not deny his own hwnanity because he was never aware that there existed anything like humanity that could either be embraced or denied; he was simply
"innocent" of any concept which postulated a shared and common existence. He could
never imagine or comprehend that he had wronged anyone, or done anyone an injustice,
or, if he had, he believed that he had done everything in his power to make it right.
He never realized that someone might give him something like love and not demand
something in return.
'You see, I had a design in my mind. Whether it was a good or bad design
is beside the point; the question is, Where did I make the mistake in it,
what did I do or misdo in it, whom or what injure by it to the extent which
this would indicate. I had a design. · To accomplish it I should require
money, a house, a plantation, slaves, a family--incidentally of course, a
wife. I set out to acquire these, asking no favor of any man.'
(p. 263)
sutpen is incapable of seeing himself as culpable for any injustice or inhumanity
which would warrant the seeming punishment and destruction which Bon was poised
(whether intentionally or not) to mete out and accomplish.
And he [Sutpen] not calling it retribution, no sins of the father come home
to roost 1 not even calling it bad luck, but just a mistake: that mistake
which he could not discover himself.
(p. 267)
su~pen • s inability to recognize his shared humanity, his inability to ask something
of someone without believing that sooner or later they would require him to repay his
debt 1 and his "crimes" against humanity, are part of the tragedy of his life.
The final and fatal irony, however, which completes the tragedy of Sutpen himself 1 is that in perpetrating his crimes, sutpen re-enacts the very offense which was
done to that little boy before the front door of that plantation house, and which was
the impetus and reason for his design. The plantation owner rejected him because he
was guilty of that very same blindness of which Sutpen himself was subsequently
guilty, that blindness which in the planter's case designated some people as simply
inferior because of the color of their skin or because of their poverty. At one
point in the book Sutpen tells General Compson that if a little boy were to knock on
his front door:

that now he would take that boy in where he would never again need to stand
on the outside of a white door and knock at it: and not at all for mere
shelter but so that that boy, that whatever nameless stranger, could shut
that door himself forever behind him on all that he had ever known, and
look ahead along the still undivulged light rays in which his descendants
who might not even ever hear his [the boy's] name, waited to be born without even having to know that they had once been riven forever free from
brutehood just as his own [Sutpen's] children were. (p. 261)
This passage might be viewed as a glimpse of Sutpen's humanity, of some kindness, yet
I think that it only lends further emphasis to Sutpen's innocence. I do not doubt
that he might say this and believe it of himself, yet it is ironic that even while
saying this he was in the process of turning away a little boy {Bon) and that.he had
shut the door in the faces of many others, while simultaneously (and unconsciously)
advocating and practicing that very "brutehood" from which he believed he had
escaped.

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Though until now Sutpen has been portrayed as a tragic figure, it is difficult
to see hi~ as the final embodiment or resultant of that tragedy. Sutpen never does
escape his innocence, he never learns the true nature of his mistake or fault, and
lastly he never gives up trying to bring his design to fruition. It finally requires
Time itself to come personified as wash Jones with that rusty scythe to stop him.
Sutpen simply refused to admit and accept his ultimate failure.
Conclusion
Thomas Sutpen was an amazing man; one cannot help but be attracted and fascinated by him. I have tried in this paper to illuminate the tragic aspects of sutpen and
his life, but finally I think his character resists any simple or easy formula .
Sutpen refuses to be labeled as simply "tragic" because he never learns (as Judith
and Henry do) and never gives up on his design. Yet other characterizations lead to
problems also, such as the identification of Sutpen as a symbol for the South, or as
simply an evil man. I have chosen the tragic because I think that it yields the most
fruit; that is, reveals the most about Sutpen • s character. He remains an enigma.
The sensitive reader, I think, may very well sympathize and understand Wash when he
thinks:
*How could I have lived nigh to him for twenty years without being touched
and changed by him? (p. 287)
Thomas sutpen and his story affect one powerfully, but not simply. The reader may
very well find himself vacillating between two extreme and oppos~te feelings about
him; at one moment he m~y feel pity for Sutpen, and at the ne~t be thinking with
wash,
*Better if his kind and mine too had never drawn., the breath of life on this
earth.
Better that all who remain of us be blasted from the face of it
than that another Wash Jones should see his whole life shredded from him
and shrivel away like a dried shuck thrown onto the fire.
(pp. 290-291)
Thomas Sutpen's story is a story about the South, but it is also ·a story about America, in which the American dream of rising from poverty to wealth and fame becomes a
nightmare.
Because you make so little impression, you see. You get born and you try
this and you don't know why only you keep on trying it and you are born at
the same time with a lot of other people, all mixed up with them, like trying to, having to, move your arms and legs with strings only the same
strings are hitched to all . the other arms and legs and the others' all trying and they don't know why either except that the strings are all in one
another's way like five or six people all trying to make a rug on the same
loom only each one wants to weave his own pattern into the rug; and it
can't matter, you know that, or the Ones that set up the loom would have
arranged things a little better, and yet it must matter because you keep on
trying' or having to keep on trying and then all of a sudden it's all over
and all you have left is a block of stone with scratches on it provided
there was someone to remember to have the marble scratched and set up or
had time to, and it rains on it and the sun shines on it and after a while
they don't even remember the name and what the scratches were trying to
tell, and it doesn't matter. And so maybe if you could go to someone, the
stranger the better, and give them something--a scrap of paper--something,

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�anything, it not to mean anything in itself and them not even to re~d it or
keep it, not even bother to throw it away or destroy it, at least it wou~d
be something just because it would have happened, be remembered even 7f
only from passing from one hand to another, one mind to another, and 1 t
would be at least a scratch, something, something that might make a mark on
something that was once for the reason that it can die someday, while the
block of stone can't be is because it never can become was because it can't
ever die or perish ••• (pp. 127-128)

Footnotes
1.

There is also an omniscient narrator who plays a minor role. He sets the scene
for each conversation, and gives an account of Sutpen's arrival in Jefferson in
the beg inning ·of Chapter I I.

2.

From Dylan Thomas's poem "The World Is Too Much With us."
stanza.

3.

From The Sound and the Fury by William Faulkner.
is something that Mr. Compson says to Quentin.

4.

In The Sound and the Fury we learn that Quentin is obsessed with his sister's
virginity, and contemplates incest as a means to "preserve" it. Quentin and
Henry share many conunon traits, not the least being the close relationships they
have with their sisters.

s.

From The sound and the Fury.

This is the first

I cannot find the line, but it

Quentin drowns himself in the Charles River on

June 2, 1910.
6.

The best example of this is the delayed fact that Milly's baby was a girl (see

p. 292).
(All page numbers used in this essay refer to the Vintage Books Edition of Absalom,
Absaloml by William Faulkner.)

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''A Shallow Reading of Marx" and Other Likely Stories
Michael Strong
'.

This is a waffling essay. I have tried to be fair in judging two antagonists .
They have each in turn seduced my judgement entirely. I hope that I have put each in
some perspective so that the place of each contribution might be appreciated.
If
nothing else, the issues have been clarified somewhat, at least for me.
First I introduce the problem: virtually all of those who make it their profession to study economic phenomena believe that Marx is wrong. In trying to understand
their reasons for believing so, I point out the flaws in Marx's theory of value from
their perspective. I then review the teaching on value of the father of economics,
Adam smith. Although he adheres to a labor theory of value that is not in its essence different from Marx's labor theory of value, I show how his theory is "corrected" by subsequent economists. I then turn to Marx and follow his argument on value
in the beginning of Das Kapital. I try to show how radically different the entire
endeavor of his theory is. Finally, I try to delineate the advantages and disadvantages of each theory.
It is almost too easy to defeat his argument: first, it is unnecessary, if not
ridiculous to assume that the commonality of commodities relies on a property inher'
ent in them.
It can be pointed out that the relational aspect of the exchanging
parties, both with respect to each other and each with respec~ to their commodities,
is obviously significant in determining the quantitative relation in which use-values
are exchanged. That is, how much of each commodity each party has in its possession,
and how great
the need or desire is for each commodity that is not in its
possession. or to be generous and speak in Marx's terms, it is not true that "only
one property remains, that of being products of labor." (p. 128) Another property
remains, that of being scarce items relative to demand. Marx has been defeated in
his argument for his labor theory of value.
It is too easy to "defeat" Marx's arguments. Especially when he is not arguing
what one thought he was arguing. I shall consider the foregoing a shallow reading of
Marx as I now proceed to understand him on his own terms. It is very plausible to
r ead Mar x in the above manner, and, given the presuppositions of a political economist, it is difficult not to do so.

.

First of all, such a concept of "defeating" an argument assumes that Marx is
arguing in a logically sequential and dependent manner: a deductive sequence rather
than in the dialectical mode. I here understand the dialectical mode as one in which
a thought is developed until it makes sense, and then another is contrasted with it
to deepen it. Like the verbal process of dialectic, the dialectical mode is almost a
s e ries of appr ox imations, asymptotically approaching the truth, although a de finite
margin of error may exist on either side. Indeed, the error is almost used to define
the next step in the logic, for it necessitates its own correction. If this is an
accurate description of Marx's method of argument, it is pointless to pull out individual statements as inaccurate in hopes of "proving" Marx wrong. Inaccurate statements will probably be corrected by subsequent developments in the theory.
Second, Marx is not trying to argue for a labor theory of value. He is cr~ating
the first theor y o f t he commodity . This distinction will prove most helpful in un-

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�derstanding his argument and hence his contribution to the study of political economy. Statements that seemed to be virtually ridiculous will now have a context in
which they make sense. The first step towards understanding Chapter 1 is to read the
preface to the first edition.
\
Marx writes in the preface to the first ed~tion of Das Kapital his conception of
the nature of his project:
Beginnings are always difficult in all the sciences. The understanding of
the first chapter, especially the section that contains the analysis of
commodities, will therefore present the greatest difficulty. • • • The value-form, whose fully developed shape is the money-form, is very simple and
slight in content. Nevertheless, the human mind has sought in vain for
more than 2,000 years to get to the bottom of it, while on the other hand
there has been at least an approximation to a successful analysis of forms
which are much richer in content and more complex. Why? Because the complete body is easier to study than its cells. Moreover, in the analysis of
economic forms neither microscopes nor chemical reagents are of assistance.
The power of abstraction must replace both. But for bourgeois society, the
commodity-form of the product of labor, or the value-form of the commodity,
is the economic cell-form.
Marx conceives Das Kapital to be the beginning of a science. He believes that no one
before him has satisfactorily illuminated the economic process; he is writing a critique of all previous political economy. His conception of the scope of his science
does not seem to be limited to measuring variations in the Market. He perceives his
great scientific triumph to be the discovery of "the value-form, whose fully developed shape is the money-form." If it is thought that Marx is offering a labor theory
of value, then it does not make sense for him to make the extravagant claim that he
has discovered something that "the human mind has sought in vain for more than 2,000
years." At the very least, Smith and his followers had been discussing something
like that for almost 100 years. However, he is not simply offering a theory of
prices, for Marx understands the value-form to be prior to the money-form. Moreover
the form is very important to Marx. Nor is he studying the Market, for that would be
"the---cc;mplete body". Marx understands wealth to be nothing more than a great collection of commodities. The commodity is the cell-form or capitalism, the basic unit
behind even the great structure of the Market. Thus Marx begins his analysis of economic activity by examining the commodity. I will return to Chapter 1, "The Commodity", Section 1, "The Two Factors of the Commodity: Use-Value and Value" and try to
understand the development of his argument a little more deeply.
The first step for Marx is to define what is meant by a commodity. Marx's analysis of the colIUl\Odity-form is philosophical rather than scientific. He wants to know
the nature and the source of this form.
He begins with the distinction between
use-value and exchange-value. To be a commodity, an article must have both kinds of
value: There must be a use for it, and it must have some value in exchange.
Marx describes use-value as the value that an object has through its usefulness
to human beings in a given society at a given time. An object with use-value has
qualities which satisfy human needs of whatever sort. "Use values are only realized
in use or in consumption." (p.126 ) They are "only realized", meaning they are merely
potentially use-values previous to their consumption.
Use-values are strictly a
function of the qualities of an object, without regard to quantity.
Marx centers his discussion of the commodity on exchange-value, because it is
exchange-value which distinguishes the commodity-form of use-value from other forms
of use-value:

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[Exchange-value] appears first . of all as the quantitative relation, the
proportion, in which use values of one kind are exchanged for use values of
another kind. This relation changes constantly with time and place. Hence
exchange value appears to be something accidental and purely relative, and
consequently an intrinsic value, i.e. an exchange value that is inseparably
connected with the commodity, inherent in it, seems a contradiction in
terms. (p. 126)
,"Appears first of all as the quantitative relation" refers to the genesis of the existence of exchange-value. The question is "How does the commodity-form come to be?"
Its distinguishing component is exchange-value. Thus he embarks on his investigation
of exchange-value.
Marx has introduced the basic problems associated with having a knowledge of
"exchange value". It is true that it appears first of all as the quantitative relation, and it has always been quantified. The exact amount, however, does change
constantly with time and place. It does seem to be a purely relative phenomenon.
But some exchange-value is the prerequisite to a commodity-form. If Marx wants to
understand the commodity-form, then he must understand the nature of this exchange-value as prerequisite. Thus, in this logical structure, Marx knows ~ priori
that the relativity is merely an appearance. This statement still appears at first
to be absolutely absurd; the high exchange- value of a fashionable dress this year can
fall to virtually nothing in five years. However, such examples are easily dismissed
already; in order for an object to be a commodity, it must have a use-value. In such
extreme examples, the object no longer has a use-value.
Or if it does have a
use-value, it is not the same use- value it originally had, and therefore is not the
same commodity that it originally was. The original use-value of the dress was to
display the fashionability of the wearer much more than to protect against the elements. As the original use-value vanishes with time, .the remaining use-value transforms the dress into a very different commodity with a very different exchange-value .
An intrinsic value becomes a possibility. because a commodity is not simply a material
object in Marx's usage.
Marx now deduces the relation of exchange-value to commodity:
Let us now take two commodities, for example corn and iron. Whatever their
exchange relation may be, it can always be represented by an equation in
which a given quantity of corn is equated to some quantity of iron, for
instance 1 quarter of corn = X cwt of iron. What does this equation signify? It signifies that a common element of identical magnitude exists in
two different thing s , in 1 quarter of corn and similarly in x cwt of iron .
Both are therefo re equal to a third thing, which in itself is neither the
one nor the other. Each of them, so far as it is exchange-value, must
therefore be reducible to this third thing. (p. 127)
"Let us now take two commodities"--The question is,
tween two commodities that makes them such? Because
have a common element.
Exchange-value is that
commensurable entities. Because he is investigating
commodity, not value, it is no longer absurd for Marx

what is the common element bethey are commodities, they must
which makes two commodities
specifically the na ture of the
to state:

This common element cannot be a geometrical, physical, chemical or other
natural property of commodities. (p. 127)
When he claims that "only one property remains, that of being products of labor", he
is intentionally defining his analysis in terms of the properties of the commodity.

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�Moreover, he is not ignoring the relational aspects of exchange-value (the supply-demand arguments} , as his subsequent discussion of the nature of this "labor"
reveals. In the analysis of his theory, it is more helpful to consider some kind of
"labor" as being a property of the commodity-form. In addition, this sort of analysis falls out of the dialectical method--he proposes a hypothesis that is plausible
and then refines it as additional theoretical burdens are required of it. It will
turn out that this labor is very abstract and relational.
Indeed, Marx's next point is that this labor is not any particular kind of labor--it is abstract labor:
But even the product of labour has already been transformed in our hands.
If we make abstraction from its use-value, we abstract also from the material constituents and forms which make it a use-value ••• All the sensuous
characteristics are extinguished ••• With the disappearance of the use.ful
character of the products of labour, the useful character of the kinds of
labour embodied in them also disappears; this in turn entails the disappearance of the different concrete forms of labour. They can no longer be
distinguished, but are all together reduced to the same kind of labour,
human labour in the abstract. (p. 128)
The point seems easy enough to understand: the labor that is the source of value is
abstract labor, not any particular kind of labor •. It has to be something general
enough to contain all the varied particular forms of labor. Apparently all that is
meant by "abstract labour" is labor insofar as it creates value. However, this is a
topic on which Marx provides some wonderful metaphors to help us understand how he is
really thinking of abstract labor:
Let us now look at the residue of the products of labour. There is nothing
left of them in each case but the same phantom-like objectivity; they are
merely congealed quantities of homogeneous human labour-power expended
without regard to the form of its expenditure. All these things now tell
us that human labour-power has been expended to produce them, human labour
is accumulated in them. As crystals of this social substance, which is
common to them all, they are values--commodity values. (p. 128)

time to complete the article.
He then corrects himself:

.,

The labour that forms the substance of value is equal human labour, the
expenditure of identical human labour- power.
In addition to the abstraction from the particularities of any given profession,
Marx's abstract labor is abstracted from the proficiencies of any given worker . It
is becoming clear that Marx is not suggesting any simple proportion between hours
worked and exchange-value resulting. His theory of value is not meant to be a calculus for comparing prices separated by great temporal or geographical distances,
though it is similar enough to Smith's theory to work at that level as an approximation. Marx's point is that regardless of particular conditions, the source of value
behind all market variations, in all commodities, is abstract labor.
We have learned that a commodity has two factors, use-value and exchange-value.
Use-value was purely qualitative, exchange-value was purely quantitative. Labor was
the only "property" that commodities had in common which could explain the possibility of exchange-values. This labor was very abstract, at the least an abstraction
from the particularities of type of labor and proficiency of labor. Marx wants to
learn what makes a commodity what it is. In the last Section of Chapter 1, on "The
Fetishism of the Commodity and its Secret", Marx states:
A commodity appears at first sight an extremely obvious, trivial thing.
But its analysis brings out that it is a very strange thing, abounding in
metaphysical subtleties and theological niceties.
So far as it is a
use-value, there is nothing mysterious about it ••• But as soon as it emerges
as a commodity, it changes into a thing which transcends sensuousness •••
The mysterious character of the commodity-form consists therefore simply in
the fact that the commodity reflects the social characteristics of men's
own labour as objective characteristics of the products of labour themselves ••• the commodity-form, and the value-relation of the products of
labour within which it appears, have absolutely no connection with the
physical nature of the commodity and the material relations arising out of
this.
It is nothing but the definite social relation between men themselves which assumes here, for them, the fantastic form of a relation between things. (p. 163-165)

Marx paints a vivid picture of the commodity-form of value. He speaks in terms of
labor as a human experience. The "residue of the products of labour" suggests that
which is left behind after one has labored. That nothing has been left in them but
"the same phantom~like objectivity" tells us that the subjectivity, the personality,
has been taken out. That they are merely "congealed quantities of homogeneous human
labor" provokes images of something blood-like having been left behind in the process
of laboring towards this commodity. Abstract labor is not simply non-specific labor.
It is also no longer human labor, a sign that the capitalist system of production
itself is no longer a system of economic relations between people, per se.
An
observer of the Market would pass over this facet of the economic relation as not
pertinent to economics. Marx places it in the middle of his dialectical analysis of
the commodity.
Next Marx refines the concept of abstract labor: The labor must be "socially
necessary" labor. In discussing how labor is to be measured, Marx discovers that it
is to be measured by duration. He then replies to himself:

In the first analysis of Marx's text, I took a commodity to be an obvious, material
thing. Marx's explanation of value in that context was lacking. Here we see that
Marx's conception is much more complex. The commodity-form is a congealed version of
the social relations between men. As such, for Marx there can be no separation between an economic science and a sociological science, and thus any moral implications
that are associated with the revealed social relations. The cell-form of the economic system represents the relations between men.
Now that I have some appreciation of the richness and complexity , as well as a
knowledge,of the basic elements, of Marx's commodity theory, I am ready to begin to
understand what he is saying. To help in this, I will move to his discussion of
classical political economy with regard to its failings in analyzing the value-form.
In "The Fetishism of the Commodity and Its Secret", Marx states:

It might seem that if the value of a commodity is determined by the quantity of labour expended to produce it, it would be the more valuable the more
unskillful and lazy the worker who produced it, because he would need more

Political economy has indeed analyzed value and its magnitude, however incompletely, and has uncovered the content concealed within these forms.
But it has ne ver once asked the question why this content has assumed that

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�particular form, that is to say, why labour is expressed in value, and why
the measurement of labour by its duration is expressed in the magnitude of
the value of the product.
These formulas, which bear the unmistakable
stamp of belonging to a social formation in which the process of production
has mastery over man, instead of the opposite, appear to be political economists' bourgeois consciousness to be as much a self-evident and nature-imposed necessity as productive labour itself. (p. 173-175)
Now, one sentence at a time:
Political economy has indeed analyzed value and its magnitude, however
incompletely, and has uncovered the content concealed within these forms.
The first clause is a statement of the purpose of value theory in classical political
economy. Marx is aware of the insufficiencies of classical value theory in achieving
its purpose of analyzing economic magnitude.
The "content concealed within these
forms" is opaque from the point of view of political economy. For Marx, the "con.:.
tent" is labor and the "form" is exchange-value.
But it (political economy) has never once asked the question why this content has assumed that particular form and why the measurement of labour by
its duration is expressed in the magnitude of the value of the product.
What does he mean "Why the measurement of labour by its duration is expressed in the
magnitude of the value of the product"? What kind of answer could there be to such a
question? I thought that Marx had deduced this relationship in Section 1. There is
no need to ask such a "why". Isn't it like asking why mass "is expressed" as weight?
Mass is expressed as weight because the force of gravity pulls on masses equally,
thus assuring a proportion between the masses of bodies and their weights. That's
just the way gravity works.
Likewise, labor "is expressed" in value because the
demand for labor pulls on the products of labor equally, assuring a proportion
between the duration of labor in a product and its value. That's just the way demand
works.
Fortunately, Marx provides us with a footnote to clarify this point:
It is one of the chief failings of classical political economy that it has
never succeeded, by means of its analysis of commodities, and in particular
of their value, in discovering the form of value which in fact turns value
into exchange-value.
"which in fact turns value into exchange-value." What value into exchange-value? In
conformity to the usual contrast, I take the it to be use-value that is transformed
into exchange-value. The point Marx is developing is that it is not necessary for
use-values to be exchange-values. There are alternative value-forms, in alternative
economic systems:
(same footnote continued)
The value-form of the product of labour is the most abstract, but also the
most universal form of the bourgeois mode of production~ by that fact it
stamps the bourgeois mode of production as a particular kind of social production of a historical and transitory character. If then we make the mistake of treating it as the eternal natural form of social production, we
necessarily overlook the specificity of the value-form, and consequently of
the commodity-form together with its further developments, the money-form,
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These remarks provide some idea of the scope of Marx's investigation and what he
means by a deeper analysis than that of classical political economy. Marx is concerned with where the Market came from and where it is going to. Since the commodity
is the cell-form, he is interested in how it came to be that particular cell-form and
what other cell-forms are possible. In a communist society, commodities, and thus
exchange-values, will not exist. In feudal society, use-values were distributed by
means of the corvee and tithes in addition to the commodity-form and its exchange-value; thus Marx's criticisms of the narrowness of political economy. Nor are
these idle observations, of interest solely to those who believe in the revolution or
with a historical fondness for medieval times. The distinction between use-value and
exchange-value, taken for granted in a capitalist system, is the source of a major
difficulty, even in a capitalist system. Use-values are commensurable with "human"
values1 exchange-values are not.
We choose between the various ways of using our time: eating, sleeping, thinking, acting, etc. our time is necessarily consumed by acquiring certain use-values,
such as food and shelter. Human values, too, must be expressed in the same finite
period of time. There are circumstances in which we choose between the two in our
allotted time.
We can build an extra shelter or we can study the stars, build a
plaything or take time with our civic responsibilities.
In our decision-making, we
naturally decide between use-values and human values.
This is not the case with exchange-values and human values. Exchange-values are
the quantity of labor that can be conunanded by a given article, a commodity-form of
labor. Exchange-values are quantitative, and, qua exchange-value, more is better.
(Thus Marx's later characterization of capital as an uncontrollable, self-sustaining
creature that necessitates its own growth.) There are no qualitative considerations
in exchange-value. Marx recognizes the critical importance of the distinction between use-value and exchange-value; this importance is not in facilitating calculations, but in the fact that it is an unnecessary, and largely undesirable, social
distinction.
If we return to the quoted text (leaving the footnote), we can now understand
the last sentence:
These formulas, which bear the unmistakable stamp of belonglng to a social
formation in which the process of production has mastery over man, instead
of · the opposite, appear to the political economists' bourgeois consciousness to be as much a self-evident and nature-imposed necessity as productive labor itself.
To start with the final (easier) clause, of course the commodity-form, exchange-value, and duration as a measure of labor's value producing capacity appear as
givens in the system of economic science.
Economics by Marx's time had already
defined itself as the study of the Market in capitalist society. An economist would
not find Marx's insult interesting or informed.
Why "these formulas" bear the stamp of a social formation, in which the production process has mastery over man, is directly related to Marx's emphasis on understanding the nature of the conunodity-form. The "stamp" that these formulas bear is
that of the alienating commodity-form, with its congealed abstract labor; the commodity-form, of which the only intrinsic property is exchange-value. Marx sees, in the
"givens" of political economy, the essence of human domination by the material forces
of production. One of his more extravagant metaphors might now be taken more seriously: The "dead" labor of a commodity, because of the very nature of the commodity-form, sucks the life-blood from living labor.
Marx's theory does provide us with a more detailed picture of economic relations
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�prediction, the bulk of attention is directed towards meticulous description, in
hopes that it will lead to accurate predictions. An understanding for its own sake,
of what occurs in economic transactions, is not generally appreciated. Yet regardless of accuracy, Marx's theory enables us to consider the type of interactions that
occur. It thus allows us to consider factors other than maximizing material wealth.
Marx's theory is not very useful for analyzing the fascinating rules which govern the Market mechanism. On the other hand, economic relations become significant
human activities in the theory, in that it depicts the dehumanizing aspects of commodity-production in a capitalist system. In addition, one might question the legitimacy of a social theory based strictly on man's material intercourse. Objects that
are bought and sold can be quantified and commodities can be defined as such objects.
If value is simply a reflection of price, it too can be quantified. But there may
yet be a purpose in qualitative observations on these material relations; such observations may even be useful to the quantifiers.
The issue of whether the laborer is "exploited" depends on whether labor is the .
sole source of value. This question remains undecided.
Marx uses the claim that labor is the sole . source of value1 whether that claim
is derived from an explicit labor theory of value or a theory of the commodity-form,
it still amounts to the same thing when he applies it to his theory of surplus value
and exploitation of the worker. Is this claim defensible?
Marx's labor is abstract, identical, socially average labor. In order for an
object to be a commodity, it must have both a use-value and an exchange-value • . If a
commodity has use-value in a given society, then Marx would claim that the ultimate
source of its value is congealed socially average labor-time. Such a statement seems
true; I know of no objects that are purchased that do not have some labor- time
congealed in them. The claim that their value is in some sense proportionate to the
amount of labor-time congealed in them is less obvious. Yet the qualifications that
the labor-time be socially average labor-time and that the object have a use-value
make the proportion impossible to calculate with any precision. Moreover, Marx is
willing to believe in a discrepancy between relative price and exchange-value. Given
Marx's conditions, it is very plausible that labor is the source of value; but it is
not proven in any definite sense.
I had hoped to resolve something in this essay. I now fear that Marx is right
in that there can be no compromise with bourgeois political economy. Marx's analysis
of the commodity has convinced me that exchange-value is incommensurable with human
values. I had hoped to see an economic science that could be cognizant of the human
condition, as Marx's analysis is. As long as the fi r st distinction in an economic
theory of value is between use-value and exchange-value, such a "sensitive" economics
is impossible. It is difficult to imagine an economics that begins in any other way.

Ma . . . demoiselle
Stuart Sobczynski

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Ma ••• demoiselle
Liquide
Splendide
Flowing down the street
Glancing from curb to curb
Like your eyes within your gaze
so of ten
So of ten
I remember my delight at the beach
Staring sullen straight into the sunset
As patience alone
Caused the sea to stand still
Though the waves sang still
And the same at the sight
Of your eyes
Dancing within your face
Your smile
Singing
Light
Still

A Translation From Louis Menard's Circe
Liz Waldner

Sweet as a beam of moon, as a tone of lyre
At her single smile the feral yield with soft moan.
With her eyes' caressing a magical fire
Burns each our breath with ecstasy kindling on bone.
The lions wild and roaring, the great grizzled bears
Lick their ivory claws; a cloud slow from her censers
Envelops them. She sings, she allures, she ensnares,
Sinister Pleasure, with all powerful philt.r es.

All page numbers used refer to the Vintage Books Edition of Capital by Karl Marx.

Under yoke of desire she draws in her wake
Innumerable troops of creatures, her retinue,
Charmed by her virgin regard, her mouth's lies rehearsed
Tranquil, irresistible. Ah! accurst, accurst!
Since you change man into beast at least lull to sleep
The shame and remorse in our hearts sore full of you.

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A Fishhook for Hobbes's Leviathan
Daniel Schoos

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How are we to understand the Leviathan to be Christian, or in other words, in
what way is a Hobbesian commonwealth a Christian commonwealth? Hobbes is subtle in
revealing his true thoughts on this matter, despite his passion for his exactness in
speech and his apportionment of the entirety of Part III of Leviathan to the topic
"Of a Christian Common-weal th." Hobbes's caution is merited by the heretical and
atheistic foundation on which the structure of his commonweal th stands, for hi~
analogy between the sovereign and God, which appears throughout Leviathan, is not an
analogy at all, but rather an identity, a practical equivalence.
In chapter 43, Hobbes states, "The (Unum Necessarium) Only Article of Faith,
which the Scripture maketh simply Necessary to Salvation, is this, that Jesus is The
Christ. By the name of Christ is understood the King, ••• " However, throughout the
book Hobbes's intent is to argue for the converse of that assertion, namely that the
king, or sovereign, is Christ. When we say, "is Christ," it is not meant that the
sovereign is truly Jesus Christ, the Saviour, God-man, of Scripture. Rather, the
sovereign takes the place of Christ.
This is the essence of Hobbes's perfect
Leviathan, or Christian commonwealth, specifically, that if the "sovereign" be
Christ, then his commonwealth is salvation, or heaven on earth. What Hobbes does not
mean is for salvation to rest in God replacing the sovereign. Instead, it is that
salvation rests in the sovereign replacing God.
The first step towards a better understanding of this answer lies in recognizing
the difference between the "Commonwealth" or "Leviathan" as described by Hobbes, and
any other kingdom or commonwealth. Hobbes is not looking at any past or contemporary
government as a model for the art whereby he builds his "Common-wealth." Instead, he
compares himself with Plato, as one who is creating new rules by which the best of
commonwealths would be structured. This is an important distinction whose significance is highlighted by a complimentary distinction Hobbes makes in chapter 31.
Throughout Leviathan Hobbes speaks of a "Kingdom of God," but there are two
kinds of such a kingdom, and these are described in chapter 31. The first is the
"Natural!," the second is the "Prophetique," also called the "peculiar." Hobbes defines the "Natural!" as, "wherein God governeth as many of mankind as acknowledge his
Providence, by the natural! Dictates of Right Reason." Shortly before this passage
Hobbes had explained that those who do not "acknowledge his Providence," such as
"Bodies Inanimate" and "creatures Irrationall," as well as "Atheists" and "They that
believe not that God has any care of the actions of mankind," are not properly speaking, God's subjects, but, at least for human beings, "are to be understood as Enemies."
The "Prophetique" or "peculiar" kingdom is described as, that "one peculiar Nation (the Jews ) " which God chose to rule "not only by natural! Reason, but by Positive Lawes, which he gave them by the mouths of his holy Prophets." Later, in chapter 35, Hobbes dismisses the notion that by the kingdom of God is meant, "Eternall
Felicity, after this life, in the Highest Heaven." He restates his belief that it
means nothing more than "the Monarchy, that is to say, Soveraign Power of God over
any Subjects acquired by their own consent, ••• " (italics mine) The first of these
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that the covenant God made was with Abraham only, and that it was due to the prior
situation, wherein Abraham had a "lawful power" · to make all his family and future
family "perform all that he covenanted for them," that Abraham was able to extend his
covenant over them. This kingdom lasted through Jacob, "but afterwards no more, till
the Israelites ••• arrived at the foot of Mount Sinai; and then it was renewed by
Moses •.• " According to Hobbes, Moses was not the true "soveraign" of the Israelites
until at Sinai they declared: "speak thou with us, and we will hear, but let not God
speak with us, lest we die." Afterwards, the succession continued through Aaron's
heirs, ending with the election of Saul as king. For when the Israelites "deposed
the High Priest of Royal Authority, they deposed that peculiar Government of God."
It is this "peculiar" kingdom which Hobbes claims Christ shall restore at his
second coming, as in "The World To Come" presented in chapter 38. Hobbes makes it
clear in chapter 35 that this is a "Civill Kingdome" and explains:
The Kingdome therefore of God, is a reall, not a metaphoricall Kingdome;
and so taken, not onely in the Old Testament, but the New; when we say, For
thine is the Kingdome, the Power, and Glory, · it is to be understood of Gods
Kingdorne, by force of 00r Covenant, not by the Right of Gods Power; for
such a Kingdome God alwaies hath; so that it were superfluous to say in our
prayer, Thy Kingdome ~' unlesse it be meant of the Res:auration of t~at
Kingdome of God by Christ, which by revolt of the Israelites had been interrupted in the election of Saul.
In Chapter 12, Hobbes reveals that in the "peculiar" kingdom of God, "the policy, and Lawes Civill, are a part of Religion; and therefore the distinction . of
Temporal!, and Spiritual Domination, hath.there no place." Now as there was a distinction between a "Natural!" and "peculiar" kingdom of God, so is there a distinction made in chapter 12 between the "Natural!" seeds of religion and the
"supernatural!" seeds of religion. What shall proceed to be shown is that the "peculiar" kingdom of God is one based on the supernatural seed of religion planted by
God. Yet for Hobbes this supernatural! seed, based on revelation by God, is only an
empty argument, leading us back to the natural seeds of religion. From there the
only path is that to the converse of the "peculiar" kingdom of God, where the sovereign replaces Christ.
That the "peculiar" kingdom of God is based on the supernatural seed of religion
is evident from chapter 12, where Hobbes describes the two seeds of religion. "Divine Poli tiques," as opposed to "humane Poli tiques," is organized by men "by Gods
commandment," men such as Abraham, Moses, and Christ, men "by whom have been derived
unto us the Laws of the Kingdome of God." Hobbes elucidates later: "But where God
himselfe, by supernatural! Revelation, planted Religion; there he also made to
himselfe a peculiar kingdome; and gave Lawes."
The relationship between the "peculiar" kingdom of God and "supernaturall Revelation" clearly established, let us explore the signi.ficance of "~upernaturall Re~e­
lation," to see why it cannot stand on its own as a viable foundation for a Hobbesian
"Common-wealth.... The very opening of chapter 12, "OF RELIGION," immediately t~rows
suspicion on any attempt to distinguish between seeds of religion. Hobbes writes:
"seeing there are no signes, nor fruit of Religion, but in Man onely; there is no
cause to doubt, but that the seed of Religion, is also onely in Man." Hobbes explains that "every man" is "in an estate like to that of Prometheus," because he
"hath his heart all the day long, gnawd on by feare of death, poverty, or other calamity." Fear and ignorance are the basis of the natural seed of religion.
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But to return to the "supernatural! Revelation," the seed of God's "peculiar"
kingdom, we find throughout Leviathan that Hobbes meticulously and methodically removes all power from the side of the supernatural.
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�"supernatural!" or "spiritual!" with fear, darkness, strife, and evil, than with God.
Hobbes disparages the "Pretense of Inspiration" (ch. 29), cautions against the role
of miracles (ch . 37) , and is utterly suspicious of prophecy (ch. 36) •
Hobbes is clear: "there is no Covenant with God, but by mediation of some body
that representeth Gods Person; ••• [viz.] Gods Lieutenant, who hath the Soveraignty
under God."
In Leviathan the example is given of Abraham, previously mentioned,
whose covenant with God extended to his heirs only because of a previous, natural and
civil, agreement. "God spake onely to Abraham," Hobbes claims, "and therefore contracted not with any of his family, or seed, otherwise than as their wills ••• were
before the Contract involved in the will of Abraham." In other words, the "peculiar"
kingdom of God was first founded, indeed, could only have been founded, because there
existed already a civil sovereign. In chapter 40 Hobbes states that, "they to whom
God hath not spoken immediately, are to receive the positive commandements of God,
from their Sovereign; as the family and seed of Abraham did from Abraham their Father, and Lord, and Civill Soveraign."
What of those to whom God hath spoken immediately? Hobbes's discussion on
prophecy and inspiration is lengthy and complicated, yet a concise explanation of
this particular situation can be given. Hobbes is careful by dividing such prophets
into two categories, the "Prophets of perpetuall Calling" and "subordinate prophets."
The former class were "first Moses; and after him the High Priest, every one for his
time, as long as t..hc priesthood was Royall." After the so-called revolt of the Jews
from God, "those Kings which SUbmit.tQd them.s elves to Gods government" were the
"Soveraign Prophets. "Of the subordinate Prophets" Hubbes concludes!
I find not any place that proveth God spake to them supernaturally; but
onely in such manner, as naturally he inclined men to Piety, to Beleef, to
Righteousnesse, ••• Which way, though it consist in Constitution, Instruction, Education ••• yet it is truly attributed to the operation of the ••• Holy
Spirit ••• For there is no good inclination, that is not of the operation of
God. But these operations are not alwaies supernaturall.
We see that the "Prophets of perpetual! Calling" are already sovereigns. The only
outstandi,ng quality of the "subordinate Prophets" is their inclination to virtue,
nurtured by institutions of the state. As a result, Hobbes asserts: "When therefore
a Prophet is said to speak in the Spirit of God .•. he speaks according to Gods will,
declared by the supreme Prophet." Therefore, a true prophet is either a sovereign or
one who obeys the sovereign.
It is the "peculiar" kingdom of God which Christ is expected to restore in "the
World to come." The "Natural!" kingdom is not mentioned. How will this new "peculiar" kingdom arise? It can only be instituted through the cooperation of a civil
sovereign, as with Abraham or Moses. Will Christ be striking deals with the world's
leaders at his coming to rule? This is peculiar. Hobbes stressed in chapter 41, "Of
the Office of our Blessed Saviour,,-,-that during his first coming, Christ did or
taught nothing which would tend "to the diminution of the Civill Right of the Jewes,
or of Caesar," and "did therein nothing against their laws." Hobbes explains, "The
Kingdome hee claimed was to bee Li another world," and consequently his preaching of
it was not seditious .
But what is to happen at Christ' s second coming? Hobbes
states that Christ will "execute the Off ice of a King." How will he be able to do
this without finding himself guilty of the very sedition that Hobbes describes he was
innocent of at his first coming? What if Christ restores the "peculiar" kingdom
through conquest? Still, as Hobbes writes in chapter 20: "It is not therefore the
victory, that giveth the right of Dominion over the vanquished, but his own Covenant." The problem remains.
We have shown that the "peculiar" kingdom of God is founded on divine revela-

tion, the "supernaturall" seed of religion, and have furthe:anore outlined what little
power Hobbes leaves for divine revelation. Hobbes observes in chapter 12
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For seeing all formed Religion, is founded at first, upon the faith which a
multitude hath in some one person, whom they believe not only to be a wise
man, ~nd to labor to procure their happiness, but also a holy man, to whom
God himselfe vouchsafeth to declare his will supernaturally, •••
If we view the possibility of supernatural governance with grave suspicion and as a
result postpone consideration of the supernatural! as related in the
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mutuall Covenants one with another, have made themselves every one the, Au:
th~r, to th7 end he may use the strength and means of them all, as he shall
think expedient, for their Peace and common Defence.
And he that carryeth this Person, is called SOVERAIGNE, and said to have
Soveraigne Power; and every one besides, his SUBJECT.
We notice that in • the passag.e f rom c h apter 12, Hobbes speaks of the foundation of
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Let us consider the passage in chapter 38 where Hobbes speaks of this "World to
come," salvation:
There are three worlds mentioned in Scripture, the Old world, the Present
World, and the World to~-·· So the first World was from Adam to the
g7nerall ~lood. Of t~e present World, our Saviour speaks, (John 18.36) My
Kingdo~e ~ not of this World. For he came onely to teach men the way of
Salvation, and to renew the Kingdome of his Father, by his doctrine. Of
the .world to come, St· Peter speaks, Neverthelesse we according to his
pro~ise lo~k for ~ Heavens, and~~ Earth. This is--:that World, wherein
Christ coming down from Heaven, in the clouds, with great power ••• and
thence forth reign.
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The ~orld to Come is only in the future insofar as Hobbes states earlier, in the conclusion of Part II, that: "I am at the point of believing this my labour, as useless,
as the Common-weal th of Plato.
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ime or
o. er,
is wr1~1ng of mine, may fall into the hands of a Soveraign, who
w1ll. •. convert this Truth of Speculation, into the Utility of Practice." In other
word~, the World to ~ome does not begin on Judgement Day, as one may think after
rea~1ng that passage in c~apter 38~ b~t it begins when some prince privately reads
Leviathan and puts th.e entirety of it into practice. (Maybe this is the Day of Right
Judgement.) That prince would be the practical equivalent of Christ. Christ does
not replace the prince. The prince, or "soveraign, 11 replaces Christ.
(And Hobbes is
John the Baptist?)
Only now is the power of that which is called supernatural restored. All such
power has as its source the 11 soveraign." There is no covenant with God, ex . .: " pt
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�through the sovereign. The hazards of action in accordance with that which men may
think to be divine inspiration or prophecy, a folly which would lead such men to,
"despise the Commandements of the Common-wealth," (ch. 26) dragging the state into
civil war, are all removed when the sovereign is the sole determiner of divine Law
and true prophecy. There is no universal church, only the church which the sovereign
creates. Hobbes states in chapter 39:
I define a CHURCH to be, a company of men professing Christian Religion,
united in the person of one Soveraign: at whose command they ought to assemble, and without whose authority they ought not to assemble.
Again in chapter 42, on ecclesiastical power, Hobbes asks:
How then can wee be obliged to obey any Minister of Christ, if he should
command us to doe any thing contrary to the Command of the King, or other
Soveraign Representant of the Common-wealth ••• ? It is therefore manifest,
that Christ hath not left to his Ministers in this world, unless they be
also endued with Civill Authority, any authority to command other men.
In addition only the interpretations of scripture presented by the sovereign are
to be accepted. In chapter 40 Hobbes uses a metaphor to explain this point further.
(Whatever became of the warning against metaphor?) He first quotes two passages from
Exodus:
Take heed to yourselves that you goe not up into the Mount, or touch the
border of it; whosoever toucheth the Mount shall surely be put to death.
Goe down, charge the peoples, lest they break through unto the Lord to
gaze.
Hobbes then explains that the Scriptures are the Mount Sinai mentioned above, and
"the bounds whereof are the Laws of them that represents Gods Person on Earth." For
the subjects in a commonwealth, as the sovereign replaces God, so do the laws act for
the Scriptures (as interpreted by the sovereign ) . Hobbes continues:
To interpret them; that is, to pry into what God saith to him whom he
appointeth to govern under him, and make themselves Judges whether he govern as God commandeth him, or not, is to transgresse the bounds God hath
set us, and to gaze upon God irreverently.
The "them" above are the laws of the commonwealth, as with the bounds previously mentioned and again seen above: "the bounds God hath set us." Then clearly is for
"God" in that context to be read "soveraign."
The equating of the sovereign with God is given special attention in chapter 30 ,
which is entitled, "Of the Office of the Soveraign Representative." In this chapter
Hobbes explains the duties of the sovereign and his subjects in light of each of the
Ten Commandments. The first in this pattern, "Subjects are to be taught not to affect change of Government," is presented:
The desire of change, is like the breach of the first of God's
Commandements:
For there God sayes, ••• Thou shalt not have the Gods of
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Another list appears in chapter 31, for the "Attributes of Divine Honour." Many
of these reflect standard, widely-accepted notions on the nature of a supreme being,
for example, that he exists, and is infinite. Later, however, this is all qualified
by Hobbes: "And because words (and consequently the Attributes of God) have their
signification by agreement, and constitution of men," then those attributes and their
associate honors, obedience being of paramount importance, depend on "the will of the
Common-wealth, by Lawes-Civill." Hence the sovereign, as the maker of laws, determines what attributes and honors are to be followed in his commonwealth. This is
something of an expansion on the placing of ecclesiastical powers in the sovereign's
hands, which we have previously discussed. The sovereign not only makes the ceremonies, he makes the god, and this god is himself.
Hobbes even accounts for the doctrines of the immortality of God in his argument
for the sovereign. In chapter 19 he states: " ••• as there was ord.e r for an Artificial Man, so there be order also taken, for an Artificial! Eternity of life," and
then proposes that, "This Artificial! Eternity, is that which men call the Right of
Succession."
In chapter 31 Hobbes asserts:
The Right of Nature, whereby God reigneth over men, and punisheth those
that break his Lawes, is to be derived, not from his Creating them, as if
he required obedience, as of Gratitude for his benefits; but from his Irresistible Power.
As a result, those attributes of God one may generally think to be universal, especially God as creator, disappear on the whim of the sovereign. By excluding all such
elements while solely concentrating on power as the cause of God's right to rule,
Hobbes again points to the special relationship of God and the sovereign of a civil
state. "Jesus Is the Christ. By the name of Christ is understood the King, ••• " is,
if by the name of King is understood Christ, this exclusive interpretation as to the
nature of God which can allow Hobbes to found his World to Come in the present, on
earth.
In other words, when it is said that the king is Christ or replaces Christ, we
mean not that the sovereign is similar to Christ, or "is as Christ" metaphorically.
Instead, we mean that the sovereign defines Christ; that for Hobbes, although he never openly reveals himself, there is no God, unless he be that "Artificial! Soul" of
the commonwealth, the king. As we have seen, throughout Leviathan Hobbes systematically removes all of God's powers to the civil sovereign. At the same time, he
warns that if the absolute power be usurped from the sovereign, the conunonwealth
would be dissolved, and the former sovereign be not a sovereign anymore. In chapter
29, Hobbes discusses this subject, "those things that Weaken, or tend to the DISSOLUTION of a Common-wealth." His list proceeds in every case to describe a situation
where absolute power of the sovereign is being diminished, including "Private Judgement of Good and Evill," the "Pretense of Inspiration," and "Subjecting the Soveraign
Power to Civil! Lawes." The attributes which define God's power become for Hobbes
both the necessary and sufficient attributes which define the sovereign.
"The Present World" as Hobbes speaks of it in chapter 38 is consistent with this
view. He quotes John 18: 36, "My Kingdom is not of this World," which is clearly
opposed to earlier lengthy and vehement arguments - Hobbes citing from many passages
in both the Old and New Testaments - for an earthly kingdom of God. The quote from
John is simply a restatement of Hobbes's observation that no Leviathan, as he is
describing it, has ever been seen in world governments . Following the quote from
John, Hobbes writes: "For he [Christ] came onely to teach men the way of Salvation,
and to renew the Kingdome of his Father, by his doctrine." There is no renewal or
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�isted. The doctrine is, in Hobbes' view, nothing more than obedience.
Obedience is for Hobbes the same thing as faith, and obedience is assured of
being obtained only when power is present to enforce it. Hobbes gives examples in
chapter 12 of the causes which weaken faith, one of which is a dearth of miracles.
The example is cited from Exodus of the absence of Moses and the resulting revolt
from God through the act of constructing the gold calf as a god. Hobbes continues:
And again, after Moses, Aaron, Joshua, and that generation which had seen
the great works of God in Israel, were dead; another generation arose, and
served Baal. So that Miracles fayling, Faith also failed.
However, earlier in the same chapter, Hobbes left open the chance that a "soveraign"
has an effective means with which to restore faith. As we have seen, when "they that
have the Government of Religion," the sovereign, "shall be unable to shew any probable token of Divine Revelation," then their religion shall become suspect and rejected. But there is a very important qualifier added parenthetically by Hobbes, namely:
"(without the feare of the Civill Sword)." In other words, miracles are not necessary to the sovereign if he retains power in the commonwealth. As Hobbes explained
in the beginning of chapter 17, there must be a visible power to hold men out of the
"condition of warre," and to "tye them by feare of punishment to the performance of
their covenants."
The Leviathan is Christian, then, in the sense that the sovereign replaces
Christ (with Hobbes as the voice crying out in the wilderness). The sovereign may
enforce in any way his right to honor through obedience, this honoring (obedience)
being another formulation of what faith is. Rules which guide the subjects in their
endeavor to obedience must be promulgated by the sovereign, and can be derived from
the Ten Commandments. The commonwealth is sustained by the obedience of its subjects
to their sovereign, or rather, Salvation, the kingdom of God, is only possible
through faith.
In his neck remaineth strength, and sorrow is turned
into joy before him.
(Job 41: 22)

All quotes from Thomas Hobbes' Leviathan are taken from the Penguin English Library
edition, edited by c. B. Macpherson.
The quote from Job was taken from the King James Version of the Holy Bible, published
by Thomas Nelson, Inc.

The Two Hands of God:
An Examination of Goethe's Faust
Nancy Loevinger

What good is it i f you construct a wh.olt:?
The public takes it all apart again.
(102-103)

-------------------------------------------------Faust is a different man from most of us, more ruthless, more passionate, m
ore
destructive, more noble. Yet through his striving he asks the same questiuns c ha~ we
ask: What does it mean that man was created in God's image? What kina of l~r2. ~nd
hence what kind of action, will render man's life meaningful in the face GL (i·a~h?
What place does love have in this life?
Faust's striving is ruthless and unrepentant, and it is hard to understand why
he is saved in the end. Interceded for by a creature whom he had abandoned and destroyed, he is whisked off to Heaven by seductive cherubs in a battle of roses, on
the very day that he had caused the deaths of a pious old couple. What does this
mean? The most obvious interpretation of the work is that it is a glorification of
striving as such, regardless of means or end. When I started this paper ~ believed
in a diametrically opposed interpretation: it was Gretchen's love alone that sav~d
Faust. Slowly I have come to realize that neither interpretation alone is ~rue, t hat
wanting to choose either one or the other is succwnbing to Faust's need for dicnotomies, not Goethe's, and that it is not Faust's striving alone tnat ::aves l"l..L n . nor 's
it Gretchen's love alone. It is the combination of the. two, the mysterious ana illogical reconciliation of two irreconciliably opposed ways of life.
I have not fought my way to freedom yet.
Could I but banish witchcraft from my road,
Unlearn all magic spells -- oh, if I stood
Before you, Nature, human without ' guile,
The toil of being man might be worthwhile.'
( 11403-11407)
As the first scene of Part Two opens we see Faust "reclining on a lawn with
flowers." He is still restless (unruhig), but he is inunediately comforted by spirits
who "cleanse his mind of memories that smart," and rock his heart "in Kindesruh," the
rest of children. It was the memory of such childhood peace that saved Faust from
despair on the night before Easter, and here too Faust is saved from despair, f rom
the pain of remembering Gretchen's ruin without understanding her salvation. .Just as
the chorus of angels sang then of Christ's resurrection, the heavenly spirits have
now come to Faust with a message of rebirth. The spirits bathe Faust in "the dew of
Lethe's spriy," instilling in him the ritual forgetfulness that will prepare him for
a new life.
As the spirits descend to Faust they sing:
When the vernal blossom showers
Sink down to embrace the earth,

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�isted. The doctrine is, in Hobbes' view, nothing more than obedience.
Obedience is for Hobbes the same thing as faith, and obedience is assured of
being obtained only when power is present to enforce it. Hobbes gives examples in ·
chapter 12 of the causes which weaken faith, one of which is a dearth of miracles.
The example is cited from Exodus of the absence of Moses and the resulting revolt
from God through the act of constructing the gold calf as a god. Hobbes continues:
And again, after Moses, Aaron, Joshua, and that generation which had seen
the great works of God in Israel, were dead; another generation arose, and
served Baal. So that Miracles fayling, Faith also failed.
However, earlier in the same chapter, Hobbes left open the chance that a "soveraign"
has an effective means with which to restore faith. As we have seen, when "they that
have the Government of Religion," the sovereign, "shall be unable to shew any probable token of Divine Revelation," then their religion shall become suspect and rejected. But there is a vert important qualifier added parenthetically by Hobbes, namely:
"(without the feare of the Civill Sword)." In other words, miracles are not necessary to the sovereign if he retains power in the commonwealth. As Hobbes explained
in the beginning of chapter 17, there must be a visible power to hold men out of the
"condition of warre," and to "tye them by feare of punishment to the performance of
their covenants."
The Leviathan is Christian, then, in the sense that the sovereign replaces
Christ (with Hobbes as the voice crying out in the wilderness). The sovereign may
enforce in any way his right to honor through obedience, this honoring (obedience)
being another formulation of what faith is. Rules which guide the subjects in their
endeavor to obedience must be promulgated by the sovereign, and can be derived from
the Ten Commandments. The commonwealth is sustained by the obedience of its subjects
to their sovereign, or rather, Salvation, the kingdom of God, is only possible
through faith.
In his neck remaineth strength, and sorrow is turned
into joy before him.
(Job 41:22)

The Two Hands of God:
An Examination of Goethe's Faust
Nancy Loevinger

What good is i t i f you construct o. wh.olt:?
The public takes it all apart again.
(102-103)

-------------------------------------------------Faust is a different man from most of us, more ruthless, more passionate, rr ore
destructive, more noble. Yet through his striving he asks the same questions : ha~ we
ask: What does it mean that man was created in God's image? What kina of i~r2. i nd
hence what kind of action, will render man's life meaningful in the face o~ ~1 a~h?
What place does love have in this life?
Faust's striving is ruthless and unrepentant, and it is hard to understand why
he is saved in the end. Interceded for by a creature whom he had abandoned and destroyed, he is whisked off to Heaven by seductive cherubs in a battle of roses, o.n
the very day that he had caused the deaths of a pious old couple. What does this
mean? The most obvious interpretation of the work is that it is a glor1f 1cation of
striving as such, regardless of means or end. When I started this paper ~ believed
in a diametrically opposed interpretation: it was Gretchen'.s love alone that sav~d
Faust. Slowly I have come to realize that neither interpretation alone is true, t hat
wanting to choose either one or the other is succumbing to Faust's need f or dichotomies, not Goethe's, and that it is not Faust's striving alone tnat :::aves 1 n . nor !s
·i..L
it Gr.e tchen' s love alone. It is the combination of the. two, t~e mysterious ana i_logical reconciliation of two irreconciliably opposed ways of life.
I have not fought my way to freedom yet.
Could I but banish witchcraft from my road,
Unlearn all magic spells -- oh, if I stood
Before you, Nature, hwnan without ' guile,
The toil of being man might be worthwhile.·
( 11403-11407)

All quotes from Thomas Hobbes' Leviathan are taken from the Penguin English Librart
edition, edited by C. B. Macpherson .
The quote from Job was taken from the King James Version of the Holy Bible, published
by Thomas Nelson, Inc.

As the first scene o f Part .Two opens we see Faust "reclining on a lawn with
flowers." He is still restless (unruhig), but he is immediately comforted by spirits
who "cleanse his mind of memories that smart," and rock his heart "in Kindesruh," the
rest of children. It was the memory of such childhood peace that saved Faust from
despair on the night before Easter, and here too Faust is saved from despair, f rom
the pain of remembering Gretchen's ruin without understanding her salvation. .Just as
the chorus of angels sang then of Christ's r esurrection, the heavenly spirits have
now come to Faust with a message of rebirth. The spirits bathe Faust in "the dew of
Lethe's spr~y," instilling in him the ritual f orgetfulness that will prepare him for
a new life.
As the spirits descend to Faust they sing:
When the vernal blossom showers
Sink down to embrace the earth,

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�When green fields, alive with flowers,
Fill all human hearts with mirth,
Then great spirits, looking lowly,
Rush to help those whom they can;
Whether wicked, whether holy,
They would heal the wretched man.
(4613-4620)
This is a very different song from the one the angels sang on Easter morning. Both
songs speak of love and rebirth, but the change in language from Christianity to nature broadens the message in a way that changes its meaning. Since the love of
Christianity only applies to those who believe in Christ, Faust was ultimately excluded from grace that Easter morning; but the forgiveness of nature applies to all,
"whether wicked, whether holy." In the dungeon scene we saw that ordinary moral justice was allied with the devil, rather than with heaven, and here too the ordinary
dichotomy between good and evil is superseded. Heedless of these supposed opposites,
heaven, despite Faust's clear moral guilt, heals him of remorse so that he can continue his striving. "Deep within you (Nature) prompt a stern decision: to strive for
highest life with all my powers" (4684-4685).
Since nature is no longer acting as judge, Faust need no longer confront it
merely as an antagonist, and this change is reflected in a change of imagery. Instead of being shown within his study, surrounded by dusty books, Faust is shown reclining upon a spacious lawn, surrounded by flowers. The flowers, with their
ephemeral beauty and annual rebirth, represent the regenerative power of nature, and
so its eternal forgiveness. Moreover, the spirits that heal Faust are "charming" and
"friendly," as opposed to the more impersonal angels of Part One. This change is
also brought out in the appearance of Ariel. Ariel had appeared earlier, in
"Walpurgis Night's Dream," a dream of the devil. Here, however, he acts in conjunction with heaven, as a personification of the aethereal, and so spiritual, aspect of
nature. In this way hell, heaven, and earth are shown to be united.
This change in nature, and so in Faust, is also evident in Faust's first speech.
Forced to turn away from the sight of the rising sun, Faust contemplates with delight
a waterfall and its rainbow:
The rainbow mirrors human ••• strife.
Consider it and you will better know
In many-hued reflection we have life.
(4725- 4727)
In Part One, Faust spoke on Easter morning to Wagner about the beauty of nature
(1068-1099), but there the glorious sight of the sunset angered and dismayed him, by
reminding him of his limitations in not being able to follow it. Here Faust accepts,
at least for a moment, man's inevitable failure to directly confront life, and in
doing so recognizes the value of capturing a reflection of nature in transitory images, a capitulation that earlier would have seemed to him ignoble. Furthermore, the
image of the waterfall itself is an image of hope. The constant action of the water
forms mist, and when this is illuminated by the light of the sun, a rainbow appears,
"enduring through all change." Thus human striving, despite the ephemeral nature of
its effects, is capable of creating beauty when it is illuminated by a sense of the
divine (v. 4634, "the holy light.") •
Healed in this manner, Faust returns to the world, and his less antagonistic,
and so more fruitful relation to nature is reflected in his marriage to Helen. Faust
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shame, and so an image of man before the fall. This image can only be represented on
earth by innocence and purity, a representation necessarily sterile. Faust pursued
Gretchen after his view of Helen in the witch's mirror. He sought in her Helen•s
earthly image, and he left her, among other reasons, because, once possessed, her
innocence was destroyed, and so she no longer contained that image. But Helen forgives herself for her actions in a way that Gretchen could not, and, because of this,
her kinship with nature and her ability to create are not destroyed by her lack of
innocence. It is thus possible for Faust to achieve through Helen a consummation
with nature that was impossible with Gretchen. The marriage of Helen and Faust is
celebrated in an idyllic forest grotto, and t~eir child is spoke of as "a faun with
no brute nature" (p. 198, Act Three, Arcadia) • By reenacting his relation with
Gretchen in this manner, Faust is finally freed from his need to possess nature
through the feminine, and, after Helen's death, he turns to the more masculine realms
of war and social action.
It is significant that for his last battle against nature Faust chooses the sea.
The sea is a symbol of nature in its most indifferent and alien form, nature, that
is, as Mephisto sees it. "For God separated the earth from the sea on the third ay,
and before that the sea was all" (Genesis 1:9-10). Man was given dominion over tne
fish of th sea, but never over the sea itself. In this way, the sea, as a symbol of
the primal watery chaos, represents a negation of human meaning, which is dependent
upon the existence of boundaries, particularly the boundaries of good and evil. Good
and evil were separated from each other, and so created, through the action of the
fall. In the same way God created the earth by separating it from the sea. Thus, by
further separating the earth from the sea and so creating a new earth, Faust hopes
finally to prove his likeness to God and so create meaning for his life.
My eyes were turned toward the open sea:
Its towering swell against the heaven it :Dore,
Then, shaking out its waves exultantly,
Came charging up the level stretch of shore.
This grieved me, that a haughty arrogant flood
Can cast free spirit, prizing ever right,
Through passion of the wildly kindled blood,
Into a trough of feeling's vexed despite.
So in a thousand channels creeps the sea,
Sterile itself, it spreads sterility.
It seethes and swells and streaming far and wide
Takes desolate regions in its rolling tide.
There wave on wave, by hidden power heaved,
Reigns and recedes, and nothing is achieved.
This thing can sadden me to desperation,
Wild elements in aimless perturbation!
To soar beyond itself aspired my soul:
Here would I strive, and this would I control.
(p. 220-221, Act Four,
Mountain Heights)
For more than fifty years Faust fights the sea, pushing it back inch by inch,
creating gardens and meadows, harbors and towns, "offering men a new existence." But
Faust must use Mephisto to create this paradise. By day the ditches are dug with
shovels, by night the canals are built with human sacrifice. And so, just as in his
relation to Gretchen, the closer Faust comes to God, the closer he is chained to the
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�Baucis and Philemon.
Faust hopes to build a lookout on their land in order to view
from above the new world that he has created, and so ignore the particular means that
were used to create it, just as earlier he had hoped to use Gretchen to comprehend
the earth spirit, while ignoring the particular fact of her seduction. Faust has
come to terms with the feminine aspect of Gretchen in his marriage with Helen, but he
still has not come to terms with her purely human aspect. That is the test before
him now.
Faust is infuriated by Baucis and Philemon because they remind him of the entire
history of his aspirations and failure. First and foremost, they remind ·raust of the
individual and physical aspects of the earth spirit that he has always be.n unable to
face. They remind him also that he need not have chosen Mephisto, by showing him . the
peaceful life of the farmer that he had rejected before taking the potion of youth
(2353-2361). The serenity of their married life reminds him of the future that he
destroyed for Gretchen, and, finally, the tolling of their church bells reminds him
of the Easter bells of fifty years ago and their promise of peace, a peace that he
has nev~r known. Faced with these gentle bu.,t unyielding judges, Faust reverts to his
former nature, gives in to impatience, and turns to force. As before, he evades tak~
ing responsibility for his actions by asking Mephisto and his henchman to evict the
old couple, and, as before, he becomes disturbed and uneasy when he is finally confronted with his destruction of life. "Commanded fast, too fast obeyed" (11382).
But this time no supernatural spirits descend to Faust to heal him, and in the smoke
of the fire Care appears • .
Why does Care appear now to Faust, but not Guilt? Care (Sorge) is defined as
sorrow, anxiety, or uneasiness. Faust spoke of her in Part One, on the night before
Easter. "Deep in the heart there dwells relentless care/ And secretly infects us
with despair ••• She always finds new masks she can employ" (644-647). Here Care masks
herself as the fear of death. Guilt in itself does not inhibit action, but fear
does. In this way Care can be seen as a sister to Gretchen's evil spirit in
"Cathedral," and she comes in a similar role, to test Faust's strength. Faust refuses to recognize the power of Care and so wins the test, but she blinds him as the
scar of the victory. When men defy gods, they cannot hope to escape unscathed. When
Jacob wrestled with the angel of God, the angel, "seeing that he could not master
him, struck him in the socket of his hip," and Jacob went limping from Peniel
(Genesis 32:26-31). In the same way Faust is branded and so set apart. So, too,
Cain was branded when he dared to defy God's judgement. Yet Faust still refuses to
yield. Hearing the approach of death in the darkness, he returns to his project with
a strengthened resolve.
But Care is a test of more than j ust Faust ' s strength . When Faust confronts
Care and demands that she leave, she refuses. For perhaps the first time in his
life1 Faust curbs his impatience.
Faust (first irate, then calmer, to himself):
Beware and speak no word of sorcery.
(11424)

This is a crucial turning point for Faust. Impatience has always been Faust's familiar; and magic, the mode of immediate mastery, is the ultimate tool of impatience.
It was by the lure of magic that Mephisto first caught Faust, and it was by Faust's
impatient pursuit of Gretchen, and his consequent use of magic as an aid in seduction, that Faust's bond to Mephisto was sealed. But, through the ruin first of
Gretchen, and then of Baucis and Philemon, Faust realized the destructive force of
magic, and through magic, of action itself. It was by the curse of patience that
Faust ~ejected the earthly and heavenly wor lds in the pact scene in Part one
(1583- 1604) . Thus, hav i ng acknowledged pat ience and r ejecte d magic, even if only

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temporarily, these worlds become possible for him again.
Blind, and standing on the edge of this grave, Faust dreams of a new life :
T '

This is the highest wisdom that I own,
The best that mankind ever knew:
Freedom and life are earned by those alone
Who conquer them every day anew.
Surrounded by such danger, each one thrives,
Childhood, manhood, and age lead active lives.
At such a throng I would fain stare,
With free men on free ground their freedom share.
Then, to the moment I might say:
Abide, you are so fair! •••
As I presage a happiness so high,
I now enjoy the highest moment.
(11573-11586)
Here again it is evident that Faust has changed. Earlier, Faust had theoretically
sought conununion with humanity, but, faced with a given situation, he invariably
treated people merely as obje_ ts . This is evident not only in his treatment of
c
Baucis and Philemon, but also in his exploitation qf his patients during the plague,
and in his exploitation of Gretchen. Even in his final battle against the sea, Faust
was primarily concerned with himself and God, and any benefit to mankind was secondary. Here, however, Faust accepts his place within humanity as an equal among
equals and so finally comprehends the earth spirit. Yet this understanding, while
real, is only conditional. Faust is not yet able to accept man as he is, and his
acceptance rests upon his dream of a new man, purified and hardened by a new life.
Faust's ambivalence is mirrored in the language of his speech. Faust says both that
he~ enjoys the highest moment, and that "then to the moment I might say. "
In the
German, Faust uses the subjunctive ("Zurn ·A ugenblicke durft ich sagen"), and thus
Faust both enjoys the highest moment, and does not, and both loses the wager with
Mephisto, and wins it.
Mephisto also has both lost and won. Faust has died a natural death, but the
original pact is still to be fulfilled. Just as Mephisto was Faust's servant in this
life, so Faust will be his in the next. And Mephisto has the "blood-signed scroll"
to prove it. Legally, everything is clear. Yet what happens? An army of seductive
cherubs fly down from heaven, strewing roses, and Mephisto's devils flee in terror.
Caught up in lust, Mephisto do~s not notice unt il t oo late t hat t he angels have
carried away Faust's soul:
A peerless treasure, stolen shameful.ly:
The noble soul that pledged itself to me
They snatched from me, and now they moralize.
(11829- 11831)

M
ephis to c l a ims that the angels have r obbed him unjustly, and he seems to be right.
In what sense then is Faust's salvation justified?
Let us return to Genesis. After the fall, God curses the serpent and says to
him:
I will make you enemies of each other:
you and the woman,
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�. And you will strike its heel
(3: 15)

That helped win the victory,
Helped the lofty work conclude
And this precious soul to save.
(11942 -11946 )

Compare this with the "Prologue in Heaven." There God says to Mephisto:
Man's activity can easily abate,
he soon prefers uninterrupted rest1
To give him this companion hence seems best
Who roils and must as Devil help create.
(340-343 )
Evil is given to man so that man will respond to it, and so continue to act. But why
is constant action so important? Striving, or incessantly searching for knowledge
through action, is the highest use that man can make of the gift of reason, yet it
.seems merely to exile man from God, as all action in this world necessarily involves
evil. Hence, the more man seeks to become like God through action, the less like Him
. he becomes. Yet it is the evil inherent in action that eventually brings man back to
God. That is why when God exiled man, He gave him the serpent also, and that is why
God does not hate Mephisto.
"Man errs a·s long as he will strive" (317), but "unless you err, naught can be
truly known" (p. 134, Act Two, Again on the Upper Peneus). It is by the inevitable
failure of his actions that man learns the restrictions of his reason. Through reason man abstracts himself from life, and posits himself as a god. Thus Faust,
immured in his study, felt himself to be a god in relation to the macrocosm (439).
Through the development of his reason through action, and its subsequent failure, man
is then forced to confront life, and so to realize his distance from God. Thus
Faust's involvement in life ultimately brought death to those around him. This failure to become like God through action alone forces man to recognize that, if he is to
resemble God, he must do so by other means.
In this way, striving both separates man from God and eventually brings him back
to Him. This two-fold aspect of striving explains the seeming injustice of Faust's
salvation. Faust both deserves to be saved, and he does not. In other words, just
as Faust's striving contains both constructive and destructive aspects, and just as,
because of this, Faust both loses and wins the pact, Faust is ultimately saved both
by his own actions, that is, by his striving, and by grace, that is, by the undeserved forgiveness of love. ·
This seemingly contradictory statement is explicitly brought out in the text.
When the angels reach Heaven carrying Faust's soul they sing:
Saved is the spirit kingdom's flower
From evil and the grave:
"Who ever strives with all his power,
We are allowed to save."
And if, besides, supernal love
Responded to his plight,
The blessed host comes from above
To greet him in delight .
(11934-11941)

Here it seems that Faust was saved by his striving alone, and that the power of love
merely added to his acceptance. Yet the song continues:
Loving-holy women gave
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Here it seems that the power of love was a decisive factor in Faust's salvation.
That the army of cherubs that sweep down to battl.e Mephisto represents love is also
evident. What else would lust represent in a devil?
This two-fold aspect of Faust's salvation reflects not only a division within
Faust's life, but also within human life in general. In Part One Goethe snows us the
collision of two opposed modes of life: the mode of action, represented by Faust,
which is necessarily amoral, and the mode of purity, represente-a by Gretchen, which
can only flower when isolated from the world. These two modes could also be stated
as wordly vs. spiritual, or intellectual vs. emotional, or in any other similar way.
When brought together, the two modes inevitably destroy one another, for involvement
in the world destroys purity, and an over-scrupulous concern with a moral ideal inhibits, and so destroys, action. The opposition of these two modes is seen most
clearly in the dungeon scene, and it is the pain of their mutual destruction that
constitutes the tragedy of Part One .
Yet, as we have seen, these two modes are not as opposed as they originally
seem. For example, Faust's relation to Gretchen is inextricably composed of both
lust and love. In the same way, Faust's striving for knowledge is composed of both a
lust for power and a yearning to know God. But it is a mistake to think of one of
the modes as evil, and of one as good, and to think of their unification as merely
the inevitable mixing of good and evil on earth due to man's imperfection. Both
modes share a common origin: they seek to create, and so to express man's likeness to
God. It is through this relation to God that the two modes complement one another,
and it is through this relation that they are ultimately reconciled. It is the reconciliation of these two modes that Goethe shows us in Part Two. This unification is
seen most clearly in Faust's salvation and in the last scene in heaven, and it is the
necessary imperfection of any earthly unification that constitutes the tragedy of
Part Two.
What does it mean then for these two modes to be brought together? Let us turn
again to Genesis, and the story of the fall. Because of his action, and his
consequent knowledge of action's correlate, evil, man is condemned to till the soil
daily in pain. In this way the knowledge of evil ensures man's continuous striving.
This is the first step toward man's redemption, but it is not enough. This _striving
is striving against the world. Through action man comes to know himself, but only in
a negative manner. He knows, through failure, of his difference from God. And so
man despairs. Feeling ashamed, he denies his actions. Thus the darkest moment of
the fall is not when Eve eats the. apple. It is when Adam crawls out of hiding and
says to God: "It was the woman you put with me; she gave me the fruit" (3 :12-13 ) .
Yet through woman man is given the knowledge not only of evil, but also of good.
woman too was cursed in the fall. She was condemned to long for man, yet always to
be ruled by him, and to bear him his children in pain. In this way the knowledge of
good and evil brings forth love. It is only after the fall that the bond between man
and woman is consummated. Through the fall man is condemned to strive, and to fail,
and woman is condemned to love, and to fail, but through their union a new life is
brought into being. This is the second step toward man's redemption. Through the
creative marriage of action and love, man realizes his likeness to God and so is released from despair.
Thus, if there is hope for man's redemption, it must come through a synthesis of
action and love. The play ends with a stanza on the Eternal-Feminine because for the
last five hundred pages we have been given the story of the Eternal-Masculine. It is

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�Perception and Analysis in Understanding Being

Aristotle acknowledges that some subjects are beyond definition in this quote ·
from The Physics,

Karel Bauer

As far as trying to prove that Nature exists, this would be ridiculous, for
it is evident that there are many such things; and to try to prove what is
evident through what is not evident is the mark of a man who cann~t judge
what is known through itself from what is known not through itsel~.

We perceive through various mechanisms of the soul which we group together under
the terms "senses" and "intelligence". Through the cooperation of these mechanisms
we move toward an understanding which Aristotle posits to be the perfect harmony between ourselves and our environment. This motion toward understanding manifests itself in what we call analysis. Analysis is the process through which we interpret
our experiences. For instance, in order to designate a piece of our instantaneous
experience as an object, we must distinguish that piece from its environment, using
whatever criteria we have accepted as valid for such a process. we assign the object
a symbol;· that is, a name, and by so doing provide it a place in our memory. Then we
can begin to consider and discuss it. r't seems clear that in discussion we cannot
exchange actual experiences or objects, but only our representations of them provided
through words: language is the exchange of words, not objects. Since this is the
case, any understandings which we arrive at through discussion depend for their accuracy upon our understanding of how the names, or words, represent the objects being
discussed. Can words represent the essence of objects, or only some collection of
their attributes? Can we as readers understand the essence, the Being of an object
described through mere strict interpretation of the words, or must we provide some
factor entirely of our own experience if we are to achieve true understanding of what
is being communicated? The latter is my assertion in this paper. I maintain that in
naming and discussing an object· we cannot represent the essence of its Being to ourselves, but only a collection of attributes representing facets of its Being, leaving
some other part of us to provide the sense of the Being's essence. This may be the
problem of analytical understanding of which I am aware when I read Aristotle. This
disparity between our experience of Being and our ability to discuss Being is the
subject of this paper.
That there are problems in trying to discuss Being is evident at the outset. As
Aristotle puts it in the Metaphysics:
And so it remains something to be looked for,
from of old and now and forever, and thus
something that offers no way out: What is Being? 1
The problem of defining Being is the longest standing and deepest concern of philosophy. The problem, as I see it, is centered around the fact that our processes for
developing understanding are built upon logic which is an analytical process of
examination. Analysis is defined as: a separating or breaking up of any whole into
its parts, especially with an examination of these parts to find out their nature,
proportion, function, and interrelationship. 2 The breaking or separating of the
whole, analysis, necessitates the loss of the whole as a whole in our minds, and this
loss is the key to the problem of defining Being. When we discuss Being, or read
Plato or Aristotle discussing Being, we are dealing with explanations of parts, or
attributes of Being, not with the whole that is Being. But Being is somehow more
than the collection of its attributes, it seems, in fact, to be beyond definition.

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How, then, are we to understand the attempts of philosophy to define Being?
If
breaking up a subject into parts is the only method we have for developing understanding of it, what is it that allows us to achieve an understanding of the subject
as a whole? Or can we ever achieve such an understanding?
The recognition of Being simply as an unqualified, universal continuum does not
appear to be the understanding that Plato and Aristotle are trying to communicate.
Being is completely universal--the most pervasive, underlying fact of our universe
and of any expefience. As one author put it, "The [any] thing is, and it is, merely
because it is."
Anything that we can call a thing partakes of Being, and partakes
of Being to the same degree that any other thing does. All things that are, are
equally. It is not the Being of an object that defines that object.
In order to
recognize an object as an object, we must see more than just Being, for everything in
our field of perception is equally. In order to recognize a rock, for instance, we
must provide some kind o°"f"definition which will allow us to differentiate its Being
from the whole, continuous Being of our perception. If we do not make this differentiation, if we simply experience the whole of our perception without interpretation, we are experiencing something very basic, perhaps even eternal. But to what
end is this apparently unsophisticated experience? The aim of Western attempts to
define Being does not seem to be merely saying, "this is a universal experience", but
brings the universal experience, somehow, into the realm of rational understanding.
Thus to say, "Being is the primary factor that underlies all experience," is, in a
sense, useless. As Aristotle says at the beginning of the Physics,
For if Being is only one and is one in this manner, no principle exists at
all, seeing that a principle is a principle of some thing or things. Indeed, to inquire wh~ther Being is one in this manner is l~e arguing
against any other paradox maintained for the sake of argument •••
The paradox that Aristotle speaks of is this: to state that Being is one and only
one, immovable and universal, presupposes any analysis, and leaves the inquiry wi th
nowhere to go. For Aristotle, understanding is equat~d with knowing the first principles of a thing; if we posit that Being to be so encompassing that it in effect has
no principles, we've made it unknowable (this does not contradict the paper's position, which is, that though Being is the universal experience, it also possesses many
aspects ) . We already are aware of Being in the sense of its universality. we acknowledge that universality every time we say that something is, which we do
regularly. Our pursuit is not to recognize that everything is, but to understand
something about that isness.
This is why analysis comes into the picture. In order to try to understand what
Being is and in order to be able to talk about it, we break our experience of Being
into parts, or attributes of Being. Perhaps the first act of analysis we perform is
to select an object so that we can limit our experience of Being and consider an object as a whole having or representing Being, rather than Being enveloping us, for we
have already seen that to unqualifiedly experience Being as an enveloping force is
not und1&gt;rstanding as we are here concerned with it. We qualify our perception in
order to be able to think about it.
We define it somewhat, by representing it

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�through an object. This allows us to consider it as something distinct from our-·
selves and from our environment as a whole; a necessary step if we are to be able to
maneuver it as a conceptual object, and the first step of our analysis. From this
point analysis continues, and we assign more definitions and create more distinctions
as our attempt to understand or communicate increasingly specific ideas or aspects
grows. We have acted upon our ability to separate and examine specific aspects,
yielding specific understandings, but in so doing, we have lost a sense of the initial experience which prompted the whole reaction (analysis). This loss is inevitable: the experience itself was an instantaneous event. What we are dealing with
afterwards is our attempt to represent and interpret the experience; to apply some
kind of reason to it.
In his discussion of the "qualities by which truth is attained", Aristotle describes five distinct functions or regions of the mind, each responsible for separate
kinds of understanding. They are: Pure Science, Art, Practical Wisdom, Theoretical
Wisdom, and Intelligence. Four of these involve rational processes. The fifth, Intelligence, is a non-rational function and an element necessary to each of the other
four; it is the function which apprehends the principles fundamental to reason, and
is the function responsible for our perception. Of the role of Intelligence in our
understanding, Aristotle says,
It is intelligence, not reasoning, that has as its objects primary terms
and definitions as well as ultimate particulars ••• For it is particular
facts that form the starting points or principles for the goal of
action ••• Hence one must have p~rception of particular facts, and this perception is intelligence. Intelligence, therefore, is both starting point
and end; for demons~rations start with ultimate terms, and have ultimate
facts as their ends • .
I interpret this to mean that it is Intelligence that is . responsible for our experience of (perception of) an object or of Being. The quality of our Intelligence determines the quality of our understanding in experience; however, analysis of experience is a process of reason, not of Intelligence. Therefore our ability to connect
these functions so that they may influence each other is crucial to the development
of our understanding. If we are to grow in-our understanding,we must integrate the
information from our reasoning faculties into the function responsible for perception, our Intelligence. ·
·
We have seen that to bring Being from. the point of pure experience to the realm
of reason ·requires analysis. We have,. in ef feet, dismantled our experience and examined its various parts seeking a greater understanding, a deeper view, than our
initial experience provided us with. But what we're now left with is a pile of parts
and our respective understanding of them. This is not the understanding of the whole
that we were striving for. The endeavor is to achieve perception with understanding,
not to perceive, then shatter our perception into a swarm of individual understandings.
In order to do this we must develop the function responsible for our
perception, Intelligence. Somehow we must effect a resynthesis of the fragments of
our perception that will allow us to re-experience Being with deeper understanding of
its nature.
A simple reversal of the process that allowed us to dismantle our experience and
examine each of its parts is not sufficient to provide a recombination truly descriptive of Being. We must also provide the sense of inunediacy that was lost when we
represented our experience of Being as an object, in order to analyze it. As a simple demonstration of this necessity, let us consider the analysis of a fragment of a
poem by E. E. Cummings:

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o sweet spontaneous
earth how often have
the doting fingers of
purient philosoph9rs pinched
and poked thee •••
we may count its words (17). We may try to discern its meter, the individual meanings of its words, the significance of any misspelled words, its spacing--there are
any number of criteria that we can apply in the attempt to reach a deeper understanding of the poem--and doubtlessly they all can contribute to understanding. But we
cannot assemble the bits of information determined through our analysis into a group
and claim that this assembly constitutes our deeper understanding of the poem. Reading a list of facts, however pertinent, will not give us the feeling that we understand the poem, and we obviously do not expect this. Instead, having analyzed, we
reread the poem, and our new perception which results is a step towards the understanding that we seek.
This new perspective is not the culmination of our endeavor--the process of understanding is an ongoing one (for we say that no person knows all about anything).
This is however a peak in the process; it is a return to the starting point, but at a
higher level. The process here described can be imagined as a spiral path; in order
for our understanding to grow, rather than remain at a certain level, we must reanalyze our newly-gotten perception, and the process continues, at times, very quickly.
This flux of our understanding is, I think, what makes attempts to define Being,
and to understand attempts to define Being, so difficult. Written communication allows us to consider many attributes of Being, but minimizes the possibility of dealing with Being as a whole. At the beginning of the Metaphysics Aristotle says,
The investigation of truth is in one sense difficult, in another easy. A
sign of this is the fact that neither can one attain it adequately, nor do
all fail, but each says something about the nature of things; and while
each of us contributes nothing or little to the truth, a considerable
amount of it results from all of our contributions ••• to have some of the
whole truth, and not be able to attain the part that we are aiming at, this
indicates that it is difficult. Perhaps the cause of this difficulty,
which may exist in two ways, is in us, and not in the facts. For as the
eyes of bats are to the light of day, so is the intelleq_f of the soul to
the objects which in their nature are most evident of all.
The investigation of truth that Aristotle addresses here, he later in the same passage equates with the investigati9n of Being:
Accordingly, as each thing is related to its existence, so is it related
to its truth.
Aristotle's awareness of this difficulty of defining Being, coupled with his perspective on the functions of the soul described earlier, seems to be responsible for the
structure of the Physics. The method of this book is described in its first chapter,
and is equivalent to the process of analysis discussed in the first part of this paper. In Aristotle's words,
The natural way to proceed is from what is more known and clearer to us to
what is by nature clearer and more known ••• So we should proceed in this
manner, namely, from what is less clear by naIBre, though clearer to us, to
what is by its nature clearer and more known.

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�Through this process we are able to examine aspects of Being, in the case of Physics,
the Being of objects, without inunediately having to deal with the overwhelming fact
of their nature, the Being itself. An understanding of Being is what we are working
towards and what, for Aristotle, is "By its nature clearer and more known." In order
to achieve this understanding, we must analyze and, as we have seen, we must integrate the results of our analysis with our perception. This is an essential step in
our understanding, and it is here that I see one of the major roles of the Prime Mover. As quoted earlier in this paper, Aristotle considers it useless to attempt to
prove "what is known through itself through what is known not through itself" (this
is not a contradiction of the process of analysis described above, in which the movement is from the superficially evident to the self-evident) • It seems clear that
this quote applies especially to Being, which is by its nature most known through
itself .
Hence Aristotle posits the Prime Mover as an attempt to represent this
self-evident factor, Being. The Prime Mover is actually actualized, the purest form
of Being expressible in words or the idealized experience of Being. Perhaps positing
the Prime Mover allows Aristotle to keep a representation of the essence of Being as
nearly available as possible while discussing attributes of Being. This proximity is
definitely desirable when we remember that, in order to complete each cycle of our
developing understanding, we must re-experience that which we wish to understand.
The position of the Prime Mover at the end of the Physics is a strong one, for in a
sense, trying to conceive of the Prime Mover induces us to re-experience. We can, it
is true, attempt to create a sense of Prime Mover in our imagination, but this sense
will not be effective in creating an understanding which will be in agreement with
the world to which it is applied. For, says Aristotle,
Imagining lies within our power whenever we wish, but in forming opinions
[and understandingsl we are not free: we cannot escape the alternative 9f
1
falsehood or truth.
We cannot escape having to apply our understandings to the world--this is what they
are for. The Prime Mover is real experience, idealized. The only way we can really
grasp it is to experience. We can go no further in analyzing Being from our old
starting point.
qur capacity for analysis is .what allows us to develop understanding; indeed,
this capacity is considered to be the quality that separates man from the animals.
The goal of any analysis we perform is the growth of our understanding, which growth
depends on our ability to integrate the results of analyses with our experience.
This remarkable process in which we are engaged, constantly experiencing, analyzing,
integrating, and re- experiencing, is highly active (earlier I likened it to an upward
spiral). It is possible that in my attempts to discuss this process, I have made it
appear more static than I conceive it to be. This stasis is, in part, an inherent
problem in written communication: a problem I hope to have elicited in this paper.
As stasis is the antithesis of active understanding, writers of philosophy must be
especially aware of this difficulty of creating experience through words. In order
to understand what is written, a reader must bring to the reading something beyond
what the writer can provide. As readers we must bring our own experience in such a
way that is consciously applied to the reading. Only then can the synthesis of active understanding occur.
In the final part of this paper I would like to explore some implications of
this active understanding as Aristotle has written about it in De Anima.

As our understanding develops, we become aware of increasingly fine delineations between objects and experiences. our awareness of the texture and detail of our environment grows. Initially, perhaps, we become aware of objects. Next, ourselves.
Then our attentions shift to the relationships which exist between ourselves and the
objec~s •. As.we become increasingly aware of the complexities of these relationships,
the distinctions we are able to draw between self and object become subtler. It becomes difficult to say where "I" ends and where "it" begins.
The thinking part of the soul must therefore be, while impassable, capable
of receiving the form of an object; that is, must be ~~tentially identical
in character with its object without being the object.
With the continuing growth of our understanding this potential identity of character
is becoming actual identity. From relationships initially vague due to poor delineation, objects which appeared to become recognizable as distinct entities are again
becoming less distinct because of the difficulty of distinguishing between mind and
object. The process of analysis that initially seemed to be happening in our minds
about their objects, now seems to actively involve both our minds and their objects
equally. What seemed to be an interval between mind and object, we now begin to see
as our experience of thinking.
Mind is itself thinkable in exactly the same way as its objects are. For
in the case of objects which involve no matter, what thinks and what is
thought are identical; for speculative knowledge and its object are identical. •• In the case of these which contain matter each of the objects of
thought is only potentially present. It folriws that while they will not
have mind in them, mind may. yet be thinkable.
We are drawing ever closer to a complete experience of understanding, an experience
so total that we are aware of the whole of our perception. When this occurs completely we are aware of every facet of the object of our perception and of our relationship to it. There is nothing that remains outside of our awareness. Analysis
has become synthesis. We have embraced, or been embraced, by all. At this point our
thought becomes its object, the two merge, and understanding occurs in the truest
sense. The object and understanding have become one, and as such, the understanding
defines the object entirely. This, for Aristotle, is the culminating point of the
mind for which we have been striving; this is Actual Knowledge. As he says,
In every CfSe the mind which is actively thinking is the object of which
it thinks.
Mind, thinking itself in the state of true understanding, has become equatable with
the Prime Mover,
When mind is set free from its present conditions it appears as just what
it is and nothing ~gre: this alone is immortal and eternal ••• and without
it nothing thinks.

Thinking, both speculative and practical, is regarded as akin to a form of
perceiving; for in one case as well 's the other the soul discriminates and
1
is cognizant of something which is.

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�A Translation of a Chorus from
Aristophanes' The Frogs

FOOTNOTES
1
Aristotle's Metaphysics, The Peripatetic Press, Grinell, Iowa; 1969
Hippocrates G. Apostle

Mark Manry

Trans.

2The Webster's New World Dictionary; 1972
3Aristotle's Physics, The Peripatetic Press, Grinell, Iowa; 1969
G. Apostle 193a3
4

The Phenomenology of the Spirit, G. Hegel

5
6

Trans. Hippocrates

Physics, 185a5 .

Aristotle's Nicomachean Ethics, Bobbs-Merrill Publishing, Indianapolis; 1962
Trans. Martin Oswald 1139b15

7

Ibid, 1143b

8 100 Selected Poems, E. E. Cummings, Grove Press, Inc., New York; 1923

11Aristotle's be Anima, Random House, New York; 1941
Ibid, 427a18
Ibid, 429a14

14 b'd 430a3
I l. '
15
Ibid, 431b17
16

Step forward!
See that you exalt, singing with noble voice,
The Savior Goddess,
Avowed protector of our city now and forever,
Even if Thorykion does not wish it.

{ant.

Trans. Richard McKeon

427bl8

Demeter, queen of holy, secret rites,
Stand by to assist us;
Preserve your band of singers and dancers.
Grant me safe playing and dancing
The whole day.

(str.

Let me proffer myriad jests,
And many weighty sayings, too,
Sporting and mocking worthily for your festival,
And victoriously, to be crowned with the wreath
Of the victor.

lOPhysics, 194a16

13

{str.

Come now! Sing anew in praise to the harvest queen, the goddess
Demeter; honor her with sacred songs.

#5

9Metaphysics, 993b

12

Go now, all men!
Into the blooming bosom of the meadow,
Dancing, mocking, playing, and jeering;
For there has been enough partaking.

(ant.

Now invite the fair god here with hymns,
This chorus' fellow traveler.

Ibid, 430a23

Highly honored Iacchos,
Most pleasant member found at the festival,
Accompany the goddess here. .
And show that you have completed the great course
Without weariness.
Iacchos, friend of dancers,
Guide me!
For you have torn this my sandal
And my ragged garment
To make me silly and shabby.
And you have contrived this
So that we may play and dance
Without loss?
Iacchos, friend of dancers,
Guide me!

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(a.

(b.

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c

�OD. Poetic Recognition
David Amirthanayagam

The essential moment in poetic experience--both for poet and listener, though I
will have to speak for the latter until I am a poet--is a moment of recognition.
Poetic recognition begins in a simple way. Aristotle, in the Poetics, explains
that:
The experience of learning things is highly enjoyable, not only for
philosophers but for other people as well, only their share in it is limited; when they enjoy seeing images, therefore, it is because as they
look at them they have the experience of learning and reasoning out what
each thing represents, concluding, for example, that "this figure is so
and so"; for if the image depicts something one has not seen before, the
pleasure it gives will not be that of an imitation but will c~me from its
workmanship or colouring or some other such source. (1448b4)
We like to recognize what things represent. But these words are not as simple
as they might seem: works of art, whether made with colours, tones, movements,
words, sticks and stones or anything else, re-present objects or experiences to us.
As such we can re-cognize them--that is, rethink them, apprehend them afresh, so that
in some sense we see them for the first time. At least we never see them in the same
way again. A professor once led me through the original Italian of a single tercet
in the second canto of Dante's Inferno, at the place where Virgil has revived the
pilgrim's wilted spirit with a story of three gracious ladies in heaven.
Here
translated, gamely but miserably, into English, Dante writes that he recovers:
As little flowers, which in a frosty night
Droop and shut tight, when the sun shines on them
Stretch and look up, erect upon their stalks.
(II 127-9)

He thudded down, his gear clanged on his body,
and blood bathed his long hair, fair as the Graces',
braided, pinched by twists of silver and gold.
Think how a man might tend a comely shoot
of olive in a lonely place, well-watered,
so that it flourished, being blown upori
by all winds, putting out silvery green leaves,
till suddenly a great wind in a storm
uprooted it and cast it down: so beautiful
had been the son of Panthoos, Euphorbos,
when Menelaos killed him and bent over
to take his gear.
(50-6 0)

Bernard Knox quoted this passage in his lecture The Iliad: ~ war Poem, and there
pointed out that if one had ever seen olive trees in Greece, which only reveal the
silver-gold underside of their leaves when swayed by wind, one would realize how apt
is Homer's image, how subtle its pathos.
.
At the finely crafted close to the finely crafted fifth book of The Odyssey, we
find Odysseus the great tactician on shore in Phaiakia, half-drowned, having long
since shed the tangled sea-cloak of Kalypso and forsaken his raft, and having loosed
Ina's veil; he deliberates on his course of action, how to find shelter from the cold
and the wild beasts. Presently,
He made his way to a grove above the water
on open ground, and crept under twin bushes
grown from the same spot--olive and wild olive-a thicket proof against the stinging wind
or Sun's blaze, fine soever the needling sunlight;
nor could a downpour wet it through, so dense
those plants were interwoven. Here Odysseus
tunnelled, and raked together with his hands
a wide bed--for a fall of leaves was there;
Odysseus' heart laughed when he saw his leaf-bed,
and down he lay, heaping more leaves above him.
A man in a distant field, no hearthfires near,
will hide a fresh brand in his bed of embers
to keep a spark alive for the next day;
so in the leaves Odysseus hid himself.

I have many times seen flowers open up at dawn, but never again in the same way after
hearing the music of Dante's Italian. Similarly, during Maryland's splendid summer
lightning storms, I find it second nature--literally--that some of King Lear's tempestuous invectives, or perhaps Homeric epithets from Fitzgerald's Iliad ("Zeus who
delights in thunder") weave their way into the sea bolts, seen and heard.
I shall illustrate the case where the "image depicts something one has not seen
before," by invoking Homer and his olive trees.
At the beginning of Book XVII of the Iliad, young Euphorbos, son of Panthoos,
the first to hit Patroklos though Hektor won the glory, comes forward to challenge
Menelaos, who is now defending the body of Akhilleus' beloved. They exchange the
spine-chilling taunts that so personalize the encounters in the Iliad--the elder angered by the younger's vanity and animal audacity, the younger made bold by thoughts
of revenge for his brother, killed by Menelaos in the bloom of his manhood and marriage.
But there is never any doubt as to the outcome; only listen to Homer's
simile, as Atreid~s' spear hits home:

The last line translates ~OA.ouc:n KaA.0\jJcno : so in one graceful stroke, we see
what the nine years have been for him with Kalypso, at once a protective covering
from danger but at the same time a shroud that hid his inner fire. And now, as ever,
above and around him, the intertwined boughs of a deeper love constitute his true
home and safety, and are ready at last to reappear: olive and wild olive, Penelope
and Odysseus.
When he is finally carried in asleep to Ithaka, he is met on the beach by Athena
in the guise of a shepherd, who later prepares him amongst her caresses for his
upcoming ordeal with the suitors. The place where he lands is described in this
somehow recognizable way:

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Phorkys, the old sea baron, has a cove
here in the realm of Ithaka; two points

�of high rock, breaking sharply, hunch around it,
making a haven from the plunging surf
that gales at sea roll shoreward. Deep inside,
at mooring range, good ships can ride unmoored.
There, on the inmost shore, an olive tree
throws its wide boughs over the bay...
(XIII 96-103 )
Two high points of rock encircle and protect a bay from the sea, so that ships can go
unmoored within their arms; on the beach, an olive tree spreads its protective
boughs. Is this an image of Ithaka as it ought to be, with its lord and lady present?
And then they meet, after the suitors have been disposed of. The decisive--but
not the first--act of recognition between them involves a certain bed Odysseus made,
and Penelope claims to have moved, much to Odysseus ' surprise and anger. He himself
describes how he made it out of a certain kind of tree:
An old trunk of olive
grew like a pillar on the building plot,
and I laid out our bedroom round that tree,
lined up the stone walls, built the walls and roof,
gave it a doorway and smooth-fitting doors.
Then I lopped off the silvery leaves and branches,
hewed and shaped that stump from the roots up
into a bedpost, drilled it, let it serve
as model for the rest. I planed them all,
inlaid them all with silver, gold and ivory,
and stretched a bed between--a pliant web
of oxhide thongs dyed crimson.
There's our sign!
I know no more.
Could someone · else ' s hand
have sawn that trunk and dragged .the frame away?
(XXIII 190 -204 )

Perhaps we understand why, though exhausted, Odysseus' heart laughed at the sight of
those two olive shrubs and his bed of leaves on Phaiakia. Their secret revealed,
Penelope and Odysseus embrace, and re-knit their worn hearts' web, tell~ng tales and
making sweet love through Athena's magic length of night.
Now I have never seen an olive tree--or at least never recogn'ized one. When I
am at last introduced to one, I doubt I shall be at a loss for words.
Let us now consider a different, deeper kind of poetic recognition, not simply
that "this figure is so and so". I began by speaking of a "moment", because I think
this kind of recognition takes place in a moment. We remember, though, that moments
are living, supple, hard to measure quanta of time: the literal moment it takes for
Odysseus' foot to splash in Eurykleia' s basin in Book XIX of The Odyssey involves
many many lines of poetry, including a digression about a hunting trip, while very
few lines--a moment of poetry--relate nine years of Odysseus' detainment on Ogygia.
To aid in this discussion let us enlist Aristotle again, this time from the
Metaphysics. Hare he aays:

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case of things produced [poems ] the principle of motion [ first cause, origin] (either
mind or art [skill, cunning] or some kind of potency [power, strength, force, meaning]) is in the producer [poet ] ." I could describe the moment of poetic recognition
as C_;&gt;extensive with the apprehension of these . a pxal, whether VO US, TEX\)n,
or ouvaµ 1~' within the poem.
- There are several reasons why I shall not. These three are well-chosen terms--I
can't imagine three better--but I do not in principle find a categorical approach
satisfactory. One good reason is that I am talking about the essential moment in
poetic experience, and a reader never experiences one of these principles without one
of the others. If one finds VO VS' or mind in a work, for example, perhaps in the form
of an argument or a philosophy, this necessarily implies craft. After all, if a poet
had something to say in the form of an argument, he would (or should) have said i t ,
and not wr"itten a poem. Readers of Plato's Dialogues can spend a lifetime discussing
the relationship between philosophy and art as expressed ~ these very dialogues', a
form of writing which Aristotle mentions in the Poetics among kinds of mimes that
have not acquired a common name (a447b8-9 ) . Further, if a reader thrills to the power of force of meaning ( o uv a µ t S"J enmeshed in a poet's words, he never fails to admire as well the poet's skill at his craft.
Finally, if one comes to know a work of art through the mind, craft and power
within it--whatever their ultimate source--one has come to know something in much the
same way that one comes to know a person. And if one does not subject people one
knows to such a categorical analysis, why should poems one loves be so deserving?
~hink of Odysseus, for example:
to know him in terms of . vous; , · T £_x vn , and cS u vau u" ·
i s t.o know him well, but they are not in him as distinct characteristics rather he
is_ a living, acting mixture of these elements, together with traces. of other ingredients that will forever wreck our best-laid schemes.
Getting to know someone, well enough to recognize him or his handiwork, clearly
involves getting to know oneself, because of the similarity in natures. The same can
be true of a poem. The deeper kind of poetic recognition I am addressing often involves seeing oneself, or an element of one's thought or experience, reflected in the
work or its author. The poem becomes a mirror; as such, it allows us to see ourselves, in great detail or perhaps in a glass darkly. And when it becomes a mirror,
a poem can show us ne~ things, possibilities hidden beyond our minds' corners, as a
glass held to an open door can reveal great secrets. But the sun's unexpected reflection may blind us.
we should also note that the relationship between poem and listener is not one
sided, for the poem needs us, in our attentiveness and love, to give it life. We
understand why identifying with a poem, or with a character or with its author, is
such a wonderful way into the poem's landscape, because one then becomes part of the
poem itself--literally one of it~ own metaphors.
Dante brings this discussion to bear in unique ways on canto XXVI of the
Paradiso. Here the pilgrim meets Adam, described metaphorically as an "animal under
cover" (97 ) . The first father begins their meeting by saying he can:
discern what you wish better
Than you can the things you see most clearly;
Because I see it in the true mirror
Which makes itself the image of other things
While nothing makes itself the image of him.

(10 4-8 )

Adam is usually taken to be referring to God as this true mirror. He then goes on to
list the pilgrim's questions and then answer them in the wrong order. Now two of
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was exiled from the Garden, he responds first by saying how long he remained in Hell:
From that place whence your lady brought Virgil,
I longed for this assembly while the sun
Revolved four thousand three hundred and two years;

These extracts follow in his conclusion:
[The translator's ] task, minute by minute and hour by hour, is not the
invention of a beautiful imitation--and did not Remy de Gourmont say that
the imitation of a beautiful thing is always ugly?--but the effacement of
himself, so far as may be, before the text ••• The translator's mind is an
empty room in which the verses float before him, surrounded as it were by
what he has extracted, as possibly relevant, from the half-irrelevancies
of dictionaries and the confusing propositions of commentators. The moment comes--sooner rather than later, later rather than sooner, according
to the difficulty (for him) of the passage--when he sees through the
original to the matter--the actual objects--of the original.
It is at
that moment that his own.,words form, and he has to take what he is given
and to say what he sees.

(118-20)

and then when answering how long he had actually lived in the Garden, he relates:
On the mountain which rises highest above the waves,
I was, counting my pure life and the other,
From the first hour until the hour which follows
The sixth hour, when the sun passes meridian.

(139-42)

Strangely enough, after Dante reaches limbo, "that place whence your lady
brought Virgil," he spends the rest of the Inferno, save four lines at the end, in
Hell; in other words, four thousand three hundred and six lines minus four, or ~our
thousand three hundred and two. And the time Dante spends in the Earthly Paradise is
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from dawn until the sun reaches the meridian, or six hours.
Clearly, Dante (poet
and pilgrim) is identifying himself with Adam in some way, and if he represents
Everyman, so do we. The question forms, is this (heretical) identification meant to
be hidden, except from the eyes of those who care to untangle his numerical knots?
And who is a better candidate for being that "true mirt'or" than Dante himself, that
cagey poet?
We must look further for a way of elucidating poetic recognition.
If not
Aristotle, then to whom do we have recourse in our still dark forest, where the "sun
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is speechless 11 ?
Fortunately, we have a wonderful and neglected resource, provided
by people who claim the most intimate relationship in all poetry. These people are
translators of poetry, from verse in one language to verse in another, and our resource is their experience, as related in Translator's Introductions. I shall let
them speak for themselves; see how my "moment of poetic recognition" comes to life.
c. H. Sisson, a recent British translator of Dante, describes an early encounter:
the first sight of Dante, for one who catches a glimpse from afar, is of
a tailor narrowing his eyes to thread a needle, or a gaggle of cranes
stretched across the sky. That does not give you a style to imitate; it
gives you a perception of the maximum which can be done, in a few words,
to evoke a physical presence. The lesson from this is , silence: t her e
is certainly no encouragement to produce °5 few more pages of verse for
the next reading, or the next poetry prize.
Later, we hear that
In my experience, there is an identifiable moment when the translator can
first say: I can translate a particu.l ar poet. Until that moment, all is
uncertain ••• What might be called the subjective authorization to translate Lucretius came to me on the bus between Avignon and Tarascon : •• The
phenomenon is as definite as that of writing a poem: more consciously
prepared, perhaps, but finally as spontaneous . After that, the ~our~e ~f
the labour before one is clear. Through whatever morass of linguistic
and other scholarship you may pass before it is finished you kno~ th~t,
as the meaning clarifies itself line by line and page by page, it w~ll
take on itsell that newly discovered form to which no further reflection
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I feel that not only translators are privileged with this kind of experience. All
good listeners strive for the same kind of intimacy of awareness and recognition that
Sisson describes.
Allen Mandelbaum, in the introduction to his rendering of Virgil's Aeneid,
speaks of a journey through his past associations with Virgil, and the influence on
him of two other poets, Giuseppe Ungaretti and Dante himself, until he finds "the
path that opens when the guides, for whom one has been grateful, fall away or say: 'I
crown and mitre you over yourself. 1118
Robert Fitzgerald doesn't seem to write Translator's Introductions. I like to
think that this is because he sees a translation of his as itself an introduction--li terally a leading within.
It might be instructive to look at two translations. The passage I have selected is the closing eight Latin lines of the Aeneid.
Aeneas has just recognized
Pallas' armour on warlike Turnus, supplicant at his feet; here follow Allen
Mandelbaum's lines:
And when his eyes drank in this plunder, this memorial of brutal grief,
Aeneas, aflame with rage--his wrath was terrible--cried:
"How can you
who wear the spoils of my dear comrade now escape me? It is Pallas who
strikes, who sacrifices you, who takes this payment from your shameless
blood." Relentless, he sinks his sword into the chest of Turnus. His
limbs fell slack with chill; and with a moan his life, resentful, fled to
Shades below.
Notice that Mandelbaum reproduces Virgil's sudden change of tense in the middle of
the narrative ("relentless, he sinks his sword ••• ).
The present tense makes the
scene and the thrusting act strangely present to us, but it never fails to surprise
us as part of the narrative. We remember that in Homer, when used in the narrative,
it is employed strictly in the service of analogy:
collecting all his might the way an eagle narrows himself to dive through
shady cloud and strike a lamb or cowering hare: so Hektor lanced ahead
and swung his whetted blade;
(Illiad XXII 307-11)
and:
Conspicuous as the evening star that comes, amid the first in heaven, at
full of night, and stands most lovely in the west, so shone in sunlight
the fine-pointed spear Akhilleus poised in his right hand.
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�My thoughts on the subject are not as mature as I would like, but this is how
the question forms: by introducing the present tense into the narrative, does Virgil
intentionally place his story, and send his heroes, into the world of analogy and
simile, that translucent, shimmering shadow land? Here the spirits of the poet could
remain undefiled, escaping the relentless run of time and history, which even got
Rome in the end.
I agree this is fanciful; Allen Mandelbaum simply says "there is no uniform explanation for these shifts (of tense] in Virgil; but each instance counts in its
place and is motivated there."
Mr. Mandelbaum himself says the project of translating Virgil came out of his
greater, overarching concern with translating Dante. Here now is a version of the
above lines rendered by a translator who travelled Virgil's own route--through Homer:
For when the sigh came home to him,
Aeneas raged at the relic of his anguish
Worn by this man as trophy. Blazing up
And terrible in · his anger, he called out:
"You in your plunder, torn from one of mine,
Shall I be robbed of you? This wound will come
From Pallas: Pallas makes this offering
And from your criminal blood exacts his due."
He sank his blade in fury in Turnus's chest.
Then all the body slackened in death's chill,
And with a groan for that indignity
His spirit fled into the gloom below. 10
Fitzgerald eschews the narrative present tense in this case and appears to follow
his own rules with regard to its translation throughout his version. One doesn't
know what to think of this; should we recognize the special authority he claims, as a
poet viewing a poet, to the point where it is up to him whether he translate verb for
verb?
I have a final observation to make here, a confusing recognition, if you will.
These lines are spoken to Hektor by Akhilleus in Book XXII of The Iliad, after Troy's
hero, beguiled by Athena, has stopped his running and turned to face his pursuer. He
asks for a guarantee that the loser's body be returned to his respective side.
Akhilleus responds:
"Hektor, I'll have no talk of pacts with you, forever unforgiven as you
are. As between men and lions there are none, no concord between wolves
and sheep, but all hold one another hateful through and through, so there
can be no courtesy between us, no sworn truce, till one of us is down and
glutting with his blood the wargod Ares •.•
Now there is no way out. Pallas Athena will have the upper hand of you.
The weapon belongs to me. You'll pay the reckoning in full for all the
pain my men have borne, who met death by your spear."
(261-72)
I hear an unmistakable echo of this speech in Virgil's final lines. Both Akhilleus
and Aeneas speak of acting on behalf of their own, and--inexplicably--refer to themselves as instruments of Pallas, though one meant the daughter of Zeus, and the other
the son of Evander.
so Aeneas is identified with Akhilleus in this final gruesome moment (at least
in The Iliad we end with the funeral, not the death), and indeed he can be seen as a
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father~and. But this only points up the incongruity that earlier in the poem, Aeneas
was painted as a kind of Odysseus, returning, in fact, to his true destined home with
a long exiled people, while Turnus, the frustrated suitof when he enters alone into
1
the Teucrian camp--"a tiger mingling with cowed cattle" --calls himself "Achilles"
by name.
My preliminary conclusion from this is that Virgil's relationship with Homer,
poet to poet, is an essential part of his poem, but remains the hardest depth to
fathom in The Aeneid's Roman music.
.
Some poems have it central to their experience that they be interpreted. I find
interpreting the whole Iliad something like interpreting the ocean stream· Dante's
Commedia, h~wev~r, is overtly allegorical, and hence demands this kind of ~esponse.
Interpretation is not.r:cogniti~n; .if it is good, it follows from and is inspired by
the ~oments ?f recognition and insight we experience. At its best, it is an attempt
to fin~ m~aning ~n~ order, with~n and without, in the many visions a poem grants us;
a nourishing activ~ty for the mind which helps keep a listener's relationship with a
poem--or another listener--fresh. Bad interpretation abounds, however; this can res~lt through the ~mposition of an external order on the poem, or the too hasty spinn~ng out of theories from a too limited vision of the object.
The great sin of assigned analytical papers in literature classes is that they encourage both these latter.
Dante Alighieri .or all poets has suffered most at the hands of his interpreters.
He is only to blam~ in that he makes it clear his lines have two meanings, a literal
one and an allegorical one. But this does not license an editor to flood an edition
of the Commedi~ ~ith 7omment~ries, so ~s to make the .poem inaccessible. obviously.
Some modern editions in English come with companion volumes of commentary, twice as
long as the poem. At least three editions preface each canto with a detailed summary
and fol~ow it u.p with more notes than there was poetry. The poem has to be read like
a mag~zine article (turn to page 16C for the next installment) ! one gets the impression that Dante must be a "solved" writer, a poet destined. to be "all figured
out" by modern scholarship.
Fo: this reason, Ernest Fortin' s lecture, How To ~ Dante• s comedy, was
refreshing.
He showed how Dante eludes his interpreters, how he hides himself
above, underneath, inside his own comedy. As many mirrors confuse the eye so with
Da~te' s Comm~dia~ one doesn't know what to think, even about the poet's ~eligious
faith· F?rtin .cited many examples, including the secret identification with Adam I
have mentioned. He also pointed out a scheme that explains the role of statius, one

of the pilgrim's three poet-guides, for whom Dante invents a life history: before he
purportedly discovered Christian faith, Statius wrote two pagan epics (that is, he
said the wrong thing and too much); afterwards, Statius hid his Christianity, he
didn't say enough--he was a poetic miser.
Virgil, the first poet-guide, was a
non-Christian poet who wrote a non-Christian epic; Statius was a Christian poet who
wrote a non-Christian epic; Dante, last in the trio and his own poet-guide, "crowned
and mitred over himself", is supposedly the Christian poet who writes a Christian
epic. But this setup leaves open a tantalizing possibility: the non-Christian poet
who writes a Christian epic. "Who dat?" asks Mr. Fortin. He closed by revealing how
in the last canto of the Paradiso, the anticipated allegorical level actually masks
the literal meaning; the supposed Beatific vision, a description of the Trinity, fits
a~ well, if ~°Jt better, with the object which literally consumed Dante's eye sight:
his own poem.
I have my own response to these matters. What follows is my guided trip through
canto XVII of the Paradiso, where Dante meets his ancestor Cacciaguida.
I think
something of Dante's experience came home to me as I read this canto.
Perhaps I
delude myself; I cannot be the judge.

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If Homer's Odyssey is a poem of return, and The Aeneid is a poem about carrying
in one's household gods, Dante's poem is a poem of exile, in all its salt anguish and
longing.
In two previous cantos, in the sphere of Mars, Cacciaguida has chronicled the
golden age and then the decline of Florence. Now, in the opening tercet of the central canto of the Paradiso, Dante approaches Cacciaguida, his ancestral father,
As there once came to Clymene, to ascertain
The truth of what he had heard said against himself,
The young man who is still a caution to fathers.
(1 -3)
The young man is Phaeton, who came to his mother to find out for sure who his father
was. It turns out this was Phoebus, the sun god; to prove it to him, as one version
of the myth goes, Phoebus offered Phaeton any favour he wished. The son rashly chose
to drive his father's chariot, which he couldn't control, burning earth, mountain and
sky, before Zeus killed him with a thunderbolt. Dante's analogy is cryptic at best.
The poet asks Cacciaguida to explain the many prophecies he has heard while: ,
climbing up the mountain which cures souls
And going down into the dead world,
(20-21)

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--

Heaven chased them out, so as not to become less beautiful,
And the depths of hell also re]ected them,
Lest the evil might find occasion to glory over them. (Inf. III 40-2)
Cacciaguida tells Dante that he:
will learn how salt is the taste
Of other people's bread, how hard the way
Going up and down other people's stairs.

(58-60)

These words speak for themselves. I might only suggest that as Beatrice, a girl our
poet once knew, c~e to represent more and more to Dante, until she became Divine
~ove or Re~ealed Wisdom, so perhaps did his exile from Florence take on deeper meanings for him; perhaps Dante saw in it the germ of that greater longing the longing
caused by man's exile from the Kingdom of God. We are less mysti'fi'ed 'then b h'
1 t
.
.
,
,
y is
a er i. d en t. f ying with Adam, the first exile from that Kingdom.
1
.
Dante goes on to hear many more things, things "incredible to those who will
li~e throu?h them" . (93). Then he makes a fresh start; fearing that his poems might
alienate him, not Just from Florentines, but from all others as well he explains to
Cacciaguida that in his journey,
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and he responds:
I have learned things which, if I repeat them,
Will have a bitter taste for many people;

Without the circumlocutions in which people
were swallowed up before the slaughter of
The lamb of God who takes away sins •••

And if I am a timid friend to truth,
I fear to lose the life I have among those
Who will call the present time, ancient times.

But in clear words and plain exact speech •••
Hidden but appearing in his smile.

(31-36)

This clarity of speech represents the way in which the Christian .Aoyos transformed,
fulfilled, and retroactively clarified Old Testament prophecy.
Cacciaguida tells Dante of his upcoming exile from Florence. He prefaces the
hard words with this explanation:

(116-20)

Sho~ld he hold back his bitter words, for practicality's sake, or reveal all for posterity? Of course we know what he cpgoses; Brunetto Latini, the rhetorician who "instructed.· .how man may be eternal,"
is eternally running around the burning sands
of Dante's Hell. Cacciaguida says:
let them scratch wherever they may itch.

Contingency, which does not stretch beyond
The limits of your material world,
Is all set out before the sight of God:

For if your words are objectionable
At the first taste, they will yield nourishment
Afterwards, once they have been digested.

But does not on that account become necessity
Any more than a ship which is drifting downstream
Drifts as it does because a man sees it.
(37-42)

This cry of yours will do as the wind does,
Strike hardest on the summits which are highest.

The image of a man watching a ship drifting would be simpler if Dante had not described his own poem as a vessel, as at the opening of the Purgatorio; if we ha~ not
4 if
been audience to the profoundly moving story of Ulysses' Promethean ship voyage;
he had not used Jason and the Argona._psts as a recurring theme, which even finds its
way into the final canto of his poem.
For the first time, the man and the ship are
separated, if we think of the man as longing to be on board that drifting ship, for
whatever reason--perhaps he is marooned and longs in vain for family and friends;
perhaps it ought to be steered upstream--we see the power and subtlety of this image,
as it bears on Dante's exile. The helplessness one feels when one is not allowed to
participate is, I think, central to Dante's experience of exile. We remember the
place Dante gives to those people and angels who, by their own choice, refused to
participate:

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(129-34 )

We are reminded again of Phaeton, swooping low in his borrowed chariot. But if Dante
is playing God for a day, he is only the charioteer; it is the sun that
th_ poet.
e
burns , not
Cacciaguida ends the canto by explaining that Dante has been shown
Only the souls of those who are known to fame;
For the listener's mind will not find its rest
Nor fix its faith unless it finds examples
Of which the root is known and not hidden ,
And arguments which are plain as day.

(138-42 )

In ligh~ of Mr. Fortin's arguments, this is clearly ironic. Dante himself, save for
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�from plain view. . .
we have yet to acknowledge the most dramatic of all moments of recognition, the
one Aristotle mentions by name. These are experienced by characters; two standard
examples are the "recognition scene" between Elektra and Orestes in Aeschylus'
Libation Bearers (Sophocles' Elektra has a fascinating version of the same scene, and
:Euripides' Elektra provides a hilarious parody), and the moment Oedipus discovers the
t~th about himself in Oedipus Rex.
Aristotle explains:
Recognition(\va.yvwp101S'), as the word itself indicates, is a change from
ignorance to knowledge, leading either to friendship or to hosti~ity on
the part of those persons who are marked for good fortune or bad.
It is the second of three elements in a tragic plot, the others being suffering
~ ~ (mi eOS' ) ·and reversal (TIE p 1 TIsTs1 a.) ("a change from one stat\Ef.f affairs to its exact opposite •. in conformance1 with probability or necessity." ) • Though there are
many types of ~va.yvwp101s--and we have seen two in Penelope and Odysseus and Aeneas
and Turnus--Aristotle says, "The best form of recogWion is that which is accompanied by a reversal, as in the example from Oedipus."
surely one of the most sublime of all recognition scenes in dramatic poetry is
Act IV Scene 6 of Shakespeare's King Lear. The recognition takes place between Lear
and Gloucester.
There is no re-;ersal; Gloucester's earlier blinding is a classic
ex~le from this play of recognition · combined with reversal, for as he is blinded,
he discovers the wrong he has done Edgar. To include this later scene in his Poetics,· Aristotle would have to coin a new terin: recognition through suffering.
--. we have been through the banishments and the slow descent; we have wit11essed
:&amp;ear and his poor naked train on the heath; we have seen the unimaginable in
· Gloucester's blinding.
The schemes . of the play's five fiends--Edmund, Regan,
Goneril, Cornwall, and oswald--are working themselves to fruition. And we have seen
justice responding in a few noble souls: service in Kent and Gloucester, king~iness
in France, conscience in Albany and valour in Cornwall's slaves. The scene is set
for the final meeting between the two suffering old men.
The scene as a whole explores the power of the imagination. It is in part a
man's imagination that determines his world.
we open with Gloucester's attempted suicide, from a cliff that is not there. I
think it well to note that on Shakespeare's unadorned stage, there is no reason to
believe the audience will not be deceived along with Gloucester.
Edgar's speech
about the cliff is superb descriptive poetry; until his explanation:
Why I do trifle thus with his despair
Is done to cure it,

(32-3)

we, in our heightened imagination, are on the edge of that cliff, careful that we do
not "topple down headlong" (24).
The deception prepares us to question our own
imagination and conception of what is real; if a detailed account of cliff-side sensations is all we need to believe the men before us are standing on a cliff, in what
other ways do we fool ourselves? (The men are standing on a stage, incidentally.)
When his father falls, Edgar worries because he
know[s] not how conceit may rob
The treasury of life when life itself
Yields to the theft.

(42-4)

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strong, however we feel about Edgar's purposes, and bears on all the speeches about
the gods and fiends we hear in this play. Whether the gods are kind and just, or
whether the world is full of fiends and beasts, can only be revealed through our own
actions, just or unjust. We must take the world as what it appears to be, but at the
same time it is our world to make; often it appears to others only as we present it
to them.
Enter the king himself. He invades our discussion by living in his own world,
gliding down from unseen heights, to dwell, for a moment, eye to eye with Gloucester.
In his first speech, he is apparently hallucinating. George Kittredge explains it
this way:
In his delirium he sees constables who try to arrest him as a coiner of
counterfeit money.
The next moment he is a captain engaged in the
enlistment of drafted men and in testing the recruits.
Suddenly he
catches sight of an imaginary mouse •.• Then he is a champion defying all
opponents; then a captain once more; then a spectator at an archery contest; then, catching ~ht of Edgar, he becomes a sentry and challenges
him: "Give the word."
Lear plays six roles in seven lines. Yet he remains completely genuine: as natural
as a thunderbolt, or a bastard son.
Gloucester says,"I know that voice" (95). Even without seeing him, he recognizes the authority which so masters Kent. "Hal Goneril with a white beard?" (96) responds Lear. We are used to Lear' s imbuing the world with his own pains and concerns; if Poor Tom has b~in reduced to a naked wretch, it must be because he, too,
had ungrateful daughters.
But Lear continues:
·When the rain came to wet me once, and the wind to make me chatter; when
the thunder would not peace at my bidding; there I found 'em, there I
smelt 'em out. Go to, they are not men o' their wordsl They told me I
was everything. 'Tis a lie--I am not ague-proof.
{100-05)
Apparently we can be greatly deceived by others, even about ourselves.
But Gloucester is sure of what he has heard. Though the words make no sense,
Glau. The trick of that voice I do well remember.
Is't not the king?
Lear.
Ay, every inch a kingl
When I do stare, see how the subject quakes.

(106-08)

·Lear works himself up to a fever pitch of fury and revulsion1 the world around him
seems populated by demi-human beasts. "Give me an ounce of civet, good apothecary,"
he says, "to sweeten my imagination." {130-1)
If we must mark the instant, Lear's recognition begins with Gloucester's plea,
"O, let me kiss that hand!". (132) Here is the first heartfelt attempt to make contact with Lear, to touch him, show a sign of love. And Lear hears it. "Let me wipe
it first," he says, "it smells of mortality." It seems that Gloucester's loving gesture has united the two, so that they can recognize each other as fellow sufferers:
as such they live in the same world. Lear tunes in and out--he calls Gloucester
"blind Cupid" (137)--but the bond is still there:
Lear.
o, ho, are you there with me? No eyes in your head, nor no money
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�Yet you see how this world goes.
Glou.

I

see it feelingly.

(144-8)

Lear then begins a tirade against the two-faced justice and corrupted authority
that plague the world. Again, the outward appearances deceive:
Robes and furr'd gowns hide all. Plate sin with gold,
And the strong lance of justice hurtless breaks;
Arm it in rags, a pygmy's straw does pierce it.
None does offend, none--I say none! I'll able 'em.
(164-7)

Mind in the passive .sense is such because it becomes all things, but mind
has another aspect in that~~ makes all things(ITOlEl~]; this is a kind
of positive state like light.
My theme has been poetic recognition, and this is its highest form: recognition of
oneself as poet and listener, maker of one's life and world, yet also audience to
their creation, in the moments when we live.

Christian Holland, in reference to this speech, makes this revealing comparison:
In the story of the stoning of the adulteress Jesus shows that he knows
that no man is without sin. He therefore urges all of us to take our own
sinfulness to heart when we judge the wrongdoings of our fellows. Jesus
. pardons, forgives the adulteress, and commands her to go and sin no more.
Lear enables the adulteress to go on sinning. Since human beings are no
more than beasts, and beasts cannot be said to be sinners~ Lear refuses
to acknowledge any wrongdoing on her part. Sin is nothing. 2
Finally, Lear knows his friend and servant by name:
If thou wilt weep my fortunes, take my eyes.
I know thee well enough; thy name is Gloucester.
Thou must be patient. We came crying hither;
Thou know' st, the first time that we smell the air
We wawl and cry.
(175-9)
We have witnessed a grand but simple encounter. The world can deceive; to some degree, we all live in our own imaginings. But these two, Lear and Gloucester, though
one is blind and the other mad, have recognized each other. By weeping each other's
fortunes, having acknowledged their sins, they have managed, for a moment, to share
the world.
But the gods must have their sacrifice. we must offer our best. Cordelia and
Lear have learned the art of self-sacrifice, the one by nature, the other through
suffering . They are nature's masterpieces. And what goddess demands this ritual,
other than Nature herself--the goddess of this play--terrible in her magnificence?
The closer one gets to King Lear, or any work of art, the harder it gets to keep
oneself clear, as to where the poem's world ends and the real world begins. From my
experience with Lear, getting close to the play involves hearing it all inside onesel~, becoming all the parts--hero and villain, king and subject, philosopher and
natural fool. As the lines re-echo, the play begins to sound more and more like a
piece of music, with its own inner meaning that defies interpretation. And the music
of King Lear needs no translation. One simply listens, and returns to the world, ·
full of words to experience it with.
we begin to see the dialogue that poetry fosters:
great poems, like these I
have discussed, are creations in words that reflect and reshape our experience; but
their words in turn become part of us, the matter with which we ourselves remake and
ennoble our lives. we remember these words of Aristotle, from his treatise On The
Soul:

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�Footnotes

The Search for What the Memory Holds:
M~mory, Identity and the Uses of Things

1.

Aristotle, Poetics, trans. James Hutton

2.

The verb is KaA.UrrTw,,meaning to cover up or envelop for protection, preservation, or concealment (Cunliffe).
I owe this passage to Jerome Downey, whose
insight is at times as big as the rest of him.

3.

Ernest Fortin, How To Read Dante's Comedy, lecture given Spring 1984.

4.

Dante Alighieri, Commedia: Inferno , I . 60

5.

Dante Alighieri, The Divine Comedy, trans. c. H. Sisson, Regnery Gateway, pg. 37

6.

Ibid., pg. 39

7.

Ibid., pg. 42-3

8.

Allen Mandelbaum, The Aeneid of Virgil, University of California Press, pg. 336

For a moment they are say and are a part

9.

Ibid., pg. X

Of an element, the exactest element for us,

10.

Ibid.

In which we pronounce joy like a word of our own.

11.

Virgil, The Aeneid, trans. Robert Fitzgerald, Random House, pg . 402

12.

Ibid., pg. 286

13.

Fortin, paraphrased from memory

14.

Alighieri, Commedia: Inferno, XXVI

15.

Ibid., Paradiso XXXIII . 94-6

Without the labor of thought in that element,

16.

Ibid., Inferno, XV. 85

And we feel, in a way apart, for a moment, as if

17 .

Ar i s t otle, 1452a

There was a bright scienza outside of ourselves,

18.

Ibid.

19.

Ibid.

20.

William Shakespeare, King Lear, ed. George Kittredge, pg. 114 (note to 11.
83-92)

Liz Waldner

OF BRIGHT AND BLUEBIRDS AND THE GALA

SUN

Some things, nine, some things are like this,
That instantly and in themselves they are say
And you and I are such things, o most miserable •••

It is there, being imperfect, and with these things
And erudite in happiness, with nothing learned,
That we are joyously ourselves and we think

A saiety that is being, not merely knowing,
The will to be and to be total in belief,

21.

Shakespeare, III. 4. 47

22.

Christian Holland, Edgar's Growth in King Lear, Energeia, Winter 1984, pg. 77

23.

Aristotle, On The Soul, Loeb, 430a14-16

Provoking a laughter, an agreement, by surprise.
- Wallace Stevens

All quoted passages of Dante ' s Comrnedia were translated by C. H. Si sson; all the
paasagea from Homer were translated by Rober t Fi tzger a ld.

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In book X of his Confessions, Augustine endeavors to say what he now is, not, as
before, what he has been. His love for God kindles in him the desire to know his
God; therefore he hopes, by confessing what he knows and what he does not know of
himself, to make his soul a fit dwelling for that God who loves the truth. The attempt to say what he is comes as r~~E__onse to his longing for knowledge of God and

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�builds on his conviction that what he is and perhaps who he is may be discovered in
light of his love for God. In general, knowing what someone loves may help us to
understand who she is; believing we are made to love and serve God, Augustine expects
to know his own nature better as he delves into God's. Thus Augustine makes a beginning by asking what it is that he loves when he loves his God:
But what do I love when I love Thee? Not the beauty of bodies, nor the
fair harmony of time, nor the brightness of the light, so gladsome to our
eyes, nor sweet melodies of varied songs, nor the fragrant smell of flowers and ointments and spices, not manna and honey, not limbs acceptable to
embracements of flesh. None of these I love, when I love my God; and yet
I love a kind of light and melody and fragrance and meat and ernbracement
of my inner man: where there shineth unto my soul what space cannot contain and there soundeth what time beareth not away and there smelleth what
breathing disperses not and there tasteth what eating diminisheth not and
there cleanseth what satiety divorces not. This is it which I love when I
love my God. And what is this? [I asked ••• ] (p. 208)
The pleasures which the senses make available are not those loved in loving God,
but they are like them; they remind one of the thing sought for. The beauties of
this world, subject to diminishrnent, dispersal and ravishment by time are pale in
comparison to God who made them. Against the view that the joy we take in air and
light, in having a body is full and final, Augustine levels the testimony of the
pleasure-givers themselves: heaven and earth and everything in them bid Augustine
love God and declare, "I am not He, but He made me." The pleasures of the changeable
world are understood to be harbingers of an unimaginable goodness of which they bear
tidings.
From the world around him, Augustine "turns himself to himself," demanding "Who
are you?" Soul and body represent themselves to him upon his answering, "A man ." It
is the inner man, "I, the mind" allied with soul who, questioning the things of the
world, is able to discern in their form of beauty the report of the outer man: not I,
but He made me. For Augustine, it is this inner man who wonders at himself, pondering his memory, its force "excessive great" a power of his through which and in which
he seeks his God.
·
As reason is set over the senses to judge of their reports, so God is "above the
head of the soul".
Reason enables Augustine to read in the loveliness of the
creation--between its lines, as it were--testimony illegible to beasts and' undiscerned by those mastered by the outer man, testimony to the existence of "one greater
than I". Because he has avoided mistaking the thing made for the maker, Augustine 's
world, like a choirmaster, directs him in a rehearsal of the inquisitive mode: if
not you, then whom do I love? Thus, allegiance to the inner man is requisite to the
"rising by degrees" which is his pilgrim's progress toward God's metaphorically mixed
locus "above the head of my soul;" otherwise he would have loitered unawares and
discomfited among way-markers, signs, and images. By means of his soul, Augustine
finds the right way; on this he finds the fields and palaces of his memory.
Every opportunity is taken to emphasize the expanse and amazing character of
this treasure-trove found in the head of the soul. The search for God has led from
admiration and inquiry "of the seas and the deeps, the whole air with its inhabitants·, sun, moon, and stars and all that encompass the door of his flesh," to that
door itself which, opened in answer to his knock discloses images of all he has
admired, his admiration, and, wonder of wonders, himself. The stages of his journey,
early and late, and souvenirs thereof, even up to his entry just made, are caught up
and held for him--inside of himself. As Augustine somewhat defensively opines, it is
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there. The more spacious the palace, the more numerous the mansions of this house,
the more inexpressible its windings, unfathomable its depths, various its cupboards
and pantries, the more wonderful the fact that anything therein should ever be
recalled, the more awesome the realization that this great and strange power of
remembrance is ours, part of our nature, a thing to be spoken of when saying "what I
am." Since this power also bears witness to the yet greater glory of God who made
it, the source and object (in true genitive fashion) of Augustine' s search, fear,
love and reverence for God increase accordingly. Awe in the presence of God and the
search for him are at least furthered if not begun by wonder at his works, which include oneself.
In the wondrous cabinets of memory, then, we find two sorts of things: those
which the senses bring into it from all sorts of perception, to be stored according
to kind; and those "whereof we imbibe not the images by our senses," but have in memory the things themselves. The latter are perceived within, by the mind's experience
of its own passions. Numbers and geometry's fissures are among these, as is "all,
learnt of the liberal sciences and as yet unforgotten." They are "removed as it were
to some inner place, which is yet no place." These lie unknown, scattered and neglected until received and ordered through recollection.
The images transported by sense are preserved distinctly; when one is remembering the look of an adobe wall on a winter's evening, the smell of the second floor
bedroom at one's grandparents house in 1962 neither intrudes nor commingles. Despite
occasional contretemps--a bevy of eager memories present themselves when only one is
called for {requiring their dispersal from "the face of remembrance" with "the hand
of the heart" ) ; or the would-be rememberer is made to wait unduly long for the
desired article while encountering various unexpected, inexplicable others--Augustine
suggests that things go on here in an orderly way. One enters his storehouse, requests what he will, and it is fetched, with more or less dispatch as its cubby-hole
is far or near, more or less swallowed by forgetfulness. The latter resembles a species of snow which accumulates with time, through every weather; gentle and diligent,
it obscures and at last buries what it falls on.
The woman of the parable, having lost her groat, sought it with a lamp: one
might say that lit lamp is memory: unless she had remembered it, she would never have
found what she sought. Memory then, acts as a place holder, albeit a fickle one--a
somewhat inconstant zero. Something there is which is not here, it reminds us feeling "that it did not carry on together all which it was wont, and maimed, as i~ were,
by the curtailment of its ancient habit, demanded the restoration of what it missed."
( ~. 2~1). Unfortunately for all who would be reminded, it can't be counted on to persist in its demand. Some count this a blessing. The tutor remembered Monday's meeting with his advisee until Friday; on Monday he found himself with the unwonted luxu- ry of an hour before his next class, an hour which he thoroughly enjoyed, disturbed
~nly once~ as he stirred his coffee, by the familiar feeling of memory's suffering
its curtailment: he was forgetting something. He decided it was sugar for his coffee, whic~ he got. At 6:30 the next morning the sugar packet, transubstantiated,
revealed itself to have been an appointment.
Bad conscience or gratitude rose
thereupon, like a signal effluence of character. Thus we see the toll taken by th~
~assage of time (which time ought to be paying, since it is doing the moving, making
~nroads o? memory; memory might do well to add this claim to its suit, as long as it
is demanding restorations) upon the figure cut in his memory by the tutor's appointment; it retained a recognizable face for several days, whereupon weathering so eroded its form that it was mistaken for a condiment.
It is possible, however, for memory to serve as an enduring standard for the
lost, a flag waving Provenance, not lowered until the object of the search at last
arrives and identifies itself as prodigal but true-born inheritor of that standard's
device-whereupon that device is discerned.
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�mind--what, for instance, was that large-eyed woman-waif's name in Fellini's "La
strada"?--one makes attempts to bring before memory's throne the syllables sought.
This can be something like memory's holding Cinderella's glass slipper and our
proffering multifarious objects, only discovering it was a foot we were loo~ing for
when memory exclaims, Ahal It fits!
{Lest we be seized rather by exasperation than
by Augustine' s admiration at such antics on memory' s part, we may remark these
slippers of memory's are sometimes very transparent.)
sometimes, however, we have a little more to go on, a feeling for the r~ytlun of·
the name or for the sound of its vowels. Then it is like seeing that a foot is wanted and stage-mothering our best friends, mothers, aunts, cousins and lovers into
t~ing out for the part--go on, you're a shoe-in. Thus I bring ~efore memory ~uch
essays as Dulcinea? Giusetta? Jucipetta? until I say, Ahal or give up •. {Happily,
memory is not like those kings who behead their daughter's unsuccessful .suitors.)
The woman seeking her groat persisted until she said Aha, kept mindful of her
loss and ready to identify the speck when found, meanwhile dismissing pretenders and
imposters, by power of her now steadfast and scrupulous, not out-to-lunch memory.
one of the memory's more dependable characteristics, and perhaps most wondrous
of all, is its capacity to serve as a chamber wherein one may hold court with oneself. · The court, at least, will be there. In it, Augustine finds, he can confer
with himself as he now is, or ponder himself in the various guises with their concomitant settings of the "Ancestor Augustines" that he has been.
(Of these lat~er,
those in favor or disfavor--of especial note to the visiting royalty--are most likely to accept i~vitations; others incline to the impromptu. Still others may decline
an interview altogether.) "A large and boundless chamber! Whoever sounded the bottom thereof?" Visiting there, Augustine knows he is surrounded by myriad slumbering
things of which he is unaware (and some of which are he) whose awakening.is the exercise of a power that he, its owner, does not comprehend. .Hence t~at dictum re~ark­
able in its somber and devoted astonishment: "Therefore is the mind too strait to
contain itself."
The vast lumber room of memory, the head of the soul, recalls God's mindfulness
of His creation, His attending to sparrows and numbering the hairs of the head.
Heaven and earth and all that one could think thereon, besides what one has forgotten, are there to serve him who sits in the seat of the mind as the material of inference , hope , J'udgment, discretion, surprise, counsel, resolve, laughter . and red
gret--a large and boundless chamber, indeed. A wonderful admiration surprises an
amazement seizes Augustine:

brought together in the mind is properly said to be thought upon." (p. 215) Refusal
to have any truck with re-incarnation and a virtue that is the gift of a panoply of
Gods may be reasons for his failure to remind us of the fair Meno and his would-be
slave, the torpedo fish, who will again stir the memory when Augustine takes up the
question so like Meno's: whence have we the idea of a happy life, which all desire,
without ever having known it? Virtue, we remember, is not acquired through recollection; nor, we shall see, is the knowledge of God which is granted in the moment of
learning" him. Let us then scrutinize some sort of happiness that can be learned.
Prudence will stand us in good stead.
Like the numbers wherewith we number, prudence is recollected and dwells in
memory before and after the event, inchoate in its deepest recesses before, near at
hand after. We are ignorant of prudence until by conception we order and arrange its
scattered components, thus marking or recognizing it for what it is. It is somewhat
disconcerting to allow for the presence in memory of unidentified snips and tatters
of an idea, languishing until the treacherous spark of conception animates it, only
to relegate this creation to memory's caves. Yet the concept does not enter the
mind--as a thoughtful effluence, say, commensurate · with some "sense" of the inner
man1 its elect bric-a-brac are there already waiting. Apparently, it is galvanized,
a sort of elective affinity provoking the arrangement of constituent bits into agreement with Prudence encountered in the flesh. We come into its presence and, Ahal
Behold! That's Prudence, we exclaim.
Socrates, investigating this phenomenon, consulted "certain wise men and women,
priests and priestesses" who sought "to give a reason of their profession," and poets
who spoke by divine inspiration. By their account,
the soul is inunortal, born into the world and leaving it in death many
times. Hence the soul has learned all things, and there is no difficulty
in her eliciting, or as men say, learning, out of a single recollection,
all the rest, if one is strenuous and does not faint, for all inquiry and
all learning is but recollection. (81C-D)

This bewilderment--how is it that I, the mind, find myself in memory?--leads to
another: how is it that I find God who is not in my memory? An examination of ~he
difference between recollection and "learning God" leads to Augustine's conclusion
that the search for what the memory holds is itself a sign pointing beyond the memory. At that point the importance of the remarkable array of memory' aspects and
abilities is addressed.
As we have seen, recollection is that sort of remembrance which is not an image,
but consists in the presence in the mind of the thing remembered. How do we come.by
reasons and laws concepts like eloquence? We recollect them. Although Augustine
does not his ex;lication and etymology do call Meno and Socrates to mind. "The mind
has appr~priated to itself this word cogitation, so that what is recollected, i.e.,

As for the catalyst, the impulse toward recollection seems to be the encountering of
difficulties.
Why is this so? It would seem that a full knowledge, or fullness of being, is
primary, and ignorance like so many clouds before its sun. The soul "wants" to unfold, wholly to recollect the things it holds, thus renewing its acquaintance with
the whole of the intelligible world--returning to pay a visit to The Forms. Difficulties keep it from its native place, prolonging its exile; hence they kindle its
desire to see its homecoming.
Thus, the slave boy possessed of a perplexity,
divested of confidence because cognizant of his ignorance, is a slave boy possessed
by desire to know. That favorite among the Emperor's New Clothes, that fashion time
never renders passe, which moth hardly corrupts and no one need steal, namely, the
fancy that one knows what one does not, in fact, know (which is reversible and may be
worn as well as complacency: there is no knowing and no use trying to) is shrugged
off in exchange for a Deianira's cloak of desire.
The truth of all things, then, has always existed in the soul, awakened into
knowledge by the putting of questions to it. Questions are put to the soul when the
head of the soul is perplexed. One's loss, one's ignorance is recognized. Knowledge
is sought after and spontaneously recovered in recollection.
The torpedo fish's
sting effects a confusion, a torpor like that bothersome feeling that one has forgotten something. we sense a disturbance, a throbbing in the back of the mind, a repeated inkling. The brow wrinkles: what is this? The soul returned greets the
world: Aha, aha, aha! I remember you. Furrowed forehead: on the trail. Recollection's nod: the lost is found. A laughter is provoked, "an agreement, by surprise."

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For we are not now searching out the regions of heaven, or measuring the
distances of the stars, or enquiring the balancings of the earth. It is I
myself who remember, I, the mind. It is not so wonderful if what I myself
am not, be far from me. But what is nearer to me than myself? And lo, the
force of my own memory is not understood by me. (p. 218)

�Having pondered the ways in which lost things are found and considered recollection's recovery of knowledge, Augustine returns to his question, What do I love when
I love Thee? His answer divulges that his love has been suffered as search, as desire: "When I seek Thee, my God, I seek a happy life." (p. 222) It also reveals his
recognition that its converse is false, which is apparent only to those who "learn
God," as it turns out.
At this point in his inquiry, Augustine echoes Meno: "How then do I seek a happy life, seeing I have it not, until I can say where I ought to say, It is enough?
As though I had forgotten it, remembering I had forgotten it? Or desiring to learn
it as a thing unknown?" (p. 2 2 2) The answer 1 ie s somewhere in between or above ,
encompassing and superseding remembering the forgotten and recollection. To arrive
at the answer the inner man pursues that path which reason discerned and desire
traced among the reports of the senses upon the things of the world. He who has ears
to hear perceives that "when I seek God I seek a happy life" lies in the direction
indicated by the earlier answer, "we · are not he whom you seek, but he made us." It,
too, points the way. The inner man "solves" the equation "seek God = happy life"
when he comprehends that the concept of a happy life itself points to something
beyond it.
As we remember, virtue was said by Socrates and Meno to be recognized but not
acquired by means of recollection. The problem with seeking God is that he can't be
recollected, much less acquired thereby. To be learned as a thing unknown, like prudence, he would somehow have to be present in memory, unrecognizable in the rags and
tatters of the idea of himself. Although he does prove to have been with Augustine
all along and in a sort of disguise, God himself is not present in the memory until
learned. Nor yet, Augustine continues, is he among the images of corporeal things
stored there, nor in the affections of the mind~ nor is he the mind itself, being
rather its lord.
The problem with seeking a happy life is that everyone remembers, loves and
longs for it without having known it: "All will the happy life; no one altogether
wills it not. This could not be unless the thing whereof it is the name is in memory o II (p. 223)
The · problem to · end all problems is that seeking God . is seeking a happy life:
therefore the thing sought must be at once in and not in the memory. with -the help
of the inner man' s audio acuity Augustine reduces this absurdity to a state of
impending grace, to be inaugurated by an act of grace, the bursting of the surd, his
deafness.
All indeed desire to attain the same end, but many fall short, deceived and distracted by semblances of joy. These semblances, lesser happinesses, are present in
memory, are recollectable--and hence mistakable for him who made them.
Just as
Socrates and Meno agree that some desire what they suppose to be goods, although they
are really evil, so Augustine maintains that those who seek a happy. life in anything
but loving God for his own sake--rejoicing "to, of and for Him"--rejoice in falsehoods. we may seek a happy life without seeking God but the desire that urges one is
the mark of God's call. Neither the attainment of the thing in which "false" joy was
sought, nor the presence of the thing itself in memory, end the search for a happy
life; and this argues that we have not yet found what is wanting. Loving God for his
own sake requires, first, learning him and this, as Augustine confesses, can prove a
lengthy and painful process. Seeking a happy life necessitates willing it entirely;
only then is it possible to learn God. Satisfaction with semblances of joy is a sign
of partial willing.
Although one must recollect the meaning of the testimony of the senses before
God can be learned, no accumulation of such knowledge will amount to or spontaneously
convert to knowledge of God. The moment in which he is learned is God's gift. As it
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recollection, so Augustine queries and ponders the created world while seeking its
creator. In each case the seeker has a vague idea of the thing sought. Socrates
explains this with his tale of the soul's previous visits to mortality. Augustine
offers us the idea of a happy life which is a placeholder.
Recollectable and
desired, the idea whets the appetite for The True Happy Life since each desire satisfied only inflames a brighter successor.
In this way the happy life we seek in the senses' pleasures is sought like a
thing forgotten: we are restless, something is wanting; we know to look for it in
its absence and judge of the satisfactions found. However, nothing the senses or the
mind offer will satisfy memory, the desires' keeper, for the thing sought, the truly
happy life, discloses itself only to a humbled heart whose provenance is the unified
will. Toward this disclosure the head of the soul guides us through false joys by
means of the desire it tends, accepting no substitutes, unassuaged by the offerings
of the outer man.
Information gleaned about God from the world induces an ordering of ourselves, a
collecting of our wits and wills in preparation for seeing what no ready willingness
on our part can make appear. The search is a prelude, initiatory. Augustine's is a
God who hides himself; the seeker must wait for revelation of the face behind the
veil of the idea of the happy life in his memory. When recognition occurs it is recognized as a gift, as grace. Muscular exertions of will are of no avail, necessary
but insufficient exercises. Socrates declared virtue to be the gods' gift to the
virtuous; learning God is God's gift to those who deem knowledge of him sweeter than
honey.
What does Augustine tell us about the experience of . learning God? God called,
shouted, and burst his deafness. He flashed, shone, and scattered his blindness.
Afterwards, he sees "Thou wert within and I abroad. Thou wert with me but I was not
with Thee." God was present but unknown. Where did Augustine find him? "Place
there is none." The no place in which God is learned is like the some place in which
God was with Augustine all along: the will shapes it.
This place is created in a moment during which the previously incomplete will is
aligned by a whole-hearted desire to know God. Then God makes his presence known,
enables Augustine to note in retrospect God's abiding with him. He understands that
the unresolved image from unresolved will had obscured his vision. Whereas the "miserable and ill-fated" of the Meno become so through ignorance of the nature of · the
good, for Augustine knowing is not enough: one must wholly will the good. Unfortunately it is as Pogo announced: we have met the enemy and they are us. "The mind
conunands the mind, its own self, to will and yet-- i t does not." (p. 165) This, says
Augustine, who knows whereof he speaks, is monstrousness. A healing of this split,
however momentary, is accomplished in the moment of learning God.
Having learned God, Augustine, like the slave-boy of the Meno, is humbled, recognizing the extent of what he does not know, and smitten with desire to know more.
Augustine's passion is greater than when he sought surcease of desire plunging amid
fair forms; touched by God, he burns for his peace.
The two-ness of the mind, its ability to resist its own command, its
guardianship of a lost thing which can't be found, thus leading the head of the soul
on to the true object of its search, all recall and deepen Augustine's amazement at
the varied identities and uses of memory. I-the-mind, the inner man, head of the
soul, image in memory, rememberer, chamber wherein image meets rememberer and
thoughts upon that meeting--and upon all else that has crossed his mind: this is
memory.
To what end is memory made multifaceted? How are what conceives and what marks
that conception related? It is possible to dismiss Augustine's perplexity as the effusiveness of a hobbyist or scholasticism. On the other hand, we may avail ourselves
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rather than remark on them as distasteful conceits, startling but essentially decorative figures --may yield some insight into his attempt to reduce a conundrum to a figure of accessible wonder.
If Christ were understood to be head of the mystical body all share, whose body
all comprise; and if, in order so to share, one -must crown the ,inner man king and
declare him judge; and if that inner man were understood to have a spiritual body
like Christ's, comprising and made in his image (once removed or twice projected, as
you will), then it is not surprising that the soul, identified as the inner man,
should have a head, that memory should be at its head, nor that the scattered mate7ials of concepts-to-be should be found in a lodging suitable for One whose concepts,
in fact, are being. As Christ is mankind's connection to God, so is memory the inner
man 's : in an upper room God "has builded a sanctuary", designing to take a room in
our
spacious palace
for
his
residence.
Thus
memory
is, for
the
inner-man-which- is-I-the-mind, the head of that mind--the mind's mind, as it were, a
truly inner sanctum, a room with a view to an end: love of God.
This purposiveness of memory's activities taken as a whole, its finai cause, ·is
a paradigm for the curious teleological character of that constituent function, conception. Memory's semblance to packrat's den would puzzle the admirer of nature's
famous economy were it not understood that its vast inventory is potentiality earmarked for its bearer's actuality, for Augustine's benefit in his search for The Happy ~ife. God will use all heaven and earth outside and all of that within memory to
turn the inner man toward him, to incline his ear--in other words, to push him to
· make that effort to unify inner and outer man (also known as mortifying the
flesh)--in preparation for God's bursting that ear's deafness. That we have memory
is a sign that this hearing, learning God, is the true nature and end of human life,
just as perplexity indicated obstruction of the recollecting soul's complete knowledge. Therefore, Memory as the stuff of self, than which nothing is nearer to us,
without which we cannot so much as name ourselves , is the stuff of epiphany. our
sense of self, of character, personality, identity is developed gradually during the
search for God, who reveals himself to whomever he will. Augustine says what he is
and spe~ks truly in th~ light of God's self-disclosures, whether they be impending or
accomplished. Memory is manifestation's medium.
As certain hi the_ to unnoticed odds and ends in the memory unmarked except by
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their destiny (which in this context is to say except by God) ~re fore - ordained to
concept-hood, so the entire inventory is dedicated to fostering self- hood without
which the inner man has no ear to hear. By means of this slug's trail of personal
experience and pr~vate histor y , a n on- going col l ection of a ccumulat ed percept ion,
thought, and emotion, . we ~hoose our next direction, next move. Decision, such as
tha.t to be f!ee from the law of sin, is bound up with the will, with sense of self:
with the understanding of identity in the context of human nature. This sense is
developed in ~he interaction of a personal past and the present moment, which is made
our own by vi~tue of our past's presence in it, in memory. Memory interprets "now"
for us; dangling the carrot of our desire, it suffuses the present with our hope for
the future·
It's as if the slug's silver trail were each moment's expression of
self, which, in memory's overview, marks a path with evidence visible only to the
i ndividual, a more intimate earnest of "things unseen" than the testimony of heaven
and. earth. In fact, .it is just this string of memories that makes their testimony
audible; by means of it we have intercourse with the world . Interpenetration of past
a nd present in memory's chamber is the process of making sense of what we encounter
whose eventuality is the generation of self- identity and whose end is the encounte;
with God . As we make our way, each moment, the self is sloughed, its abrasion by the
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Memory is both marker of the way chosen and source of the trail, urging the
pilgrim along toward an end obscure to him. This trail-blazing has the feel of a
thing half-forgotten, vaguely familiar, almo::;t reco~nized: wending our way toward
that which we desire, we travel a path whose origin is with us, in memory. Thus, its
end moves as we do; arriving at the place of the desired we hear its call beyond us.
we have displaced it. Hearing God's call to the soul, memory serves as a lamp unto
the path, marking the last step and lighting the way for the next. Despite its attendant images of dim attic, dusty cabinet, dark cave and subterranean winding, memory is the light of the mind, for by it we are enabled to see what we have been, and
thus to say what we are.
By analogy to Christ's position as head of the mystical body and as the way to
God , the "head
the soul" seeks to make straight the way to knowledge of God . M
emory, like Christ, stands as an interpreter, mediating between our experience in the
world and the meaning of that experience. As an intercessor, memory seeks to bring
these to an accord: the happy life is the life desired; the life desired is love of
God. The soul is restless until rest is found in him. In this way memory serves as
an augury of journey's end and a sign of kinship to God, to whom Augustine prayed at
the outset of his undertaking, "Let me know thee as I am known."
What might such knowledge be like? It would be comforting to believe that God's
knowledge of us included a mindfulness of our memories. Melancholy it is to feel
that when I die, my dear memories will be no more. No one else remembers them as I
do, no one else has them, no one else can know them, no one else will be me when I am
dead. The attitude toward death of the solicitous self is a peculiar poignancy, a
protective regret that these memories--so long and hard in the making, so rich and
complex and, now one thinks of it, quite wonderful--shouldn't be allowed to go on
absorbing and furnishing the world. The indignation is King Lear' s at Cordelia's
death: what! a horse, a dog have breath,. but my poor fool have none? We are attached to it, fond; we shall miss it, this memory of ours.
But if God knows me, he must know my memories. Thus sorrow over their frail
dependence on mortal us is changed in an inkling to joyful hope: all that I remember
is with God, already is in God. Home is where the heart is; I am at home in my memories; my memories are remembered by God. My heart, my self, is kept a place in
God's memory, a home in the house of many mansions. Nothing is lost. The world will
be made whole. My memories are waiting there for my arrival, for me to claim them
and be claimed by them at the joyful end of the race well run, with much exclamation
and delighted reminiscence, mutual congratulation and grateful amusement: remember
how I almost missed you? all become one voice--mine, identical with their sum total
at last . source of restless wa nder ings and cove nant like the rainbow b ridging "head
of the soul" and Godhead, portent of and guide to rest for the weary, memory is a
beacon, calling soul home.
What does it mean to experience one's life as a seeking in response to a call?
Augustine peers back through time at himself, at his life, and pronounces, "I was
ever restless until I found my rest in Thee." His conversion interpreted the meaning
of memory's content. Stolen pear, Manichaeanism, Monica, Alypius, Ambrose--all are
imbued in retrospect with the appearance of trial and error, with the urgency of
search.
A moment has occurred in which meaning became apparent.
Like a golden
thread shot through a dark fabric, ~ t traced a pattern, in-woven, of revelation's
design. Its glint is recognized now in the remembered and recast darkness of which
it was part. Conversion's hindsight sheds revealing light on events which now by
reflection declare themselves: see? We, too, were with you all along. Previously
unnoticed in the context of the present1 because discrete, not yet bound to like fiber in other moments, now this thread binds up and repairs the old garment of our
days. Thus refurbished, our lives seem to fit, to have been made especially for us,
here, now; and as we are.

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�This garment i~ fastidiously mended; each loss is restored by its incorporation
into foil for that thread of gold. Past grief prepared Augustine for the moment of
learning real joy. His painful searGh along a difficult w~y is redeemed by the understanding that the road was made dark and treacherous by the blemish in his own
soul, by his not-altogether-willing will. In retrospect, pain is seen to have been a
reminder of God's call, proof for Augustine of his fierce love. God was with him,
turning his mis-steps back into· the right way, using his error to lead him to knowledge.
Past joy is also reinterpreted; renamed sin, it is occasion for remorse, but as
such, for present gratitude and praise for forgiveness and mercy. His actions were
evidence of God's call, being befuddled responses thereto, and thus witness to his
mercy. The fabric of his history is shot through with the meaning that flashed and
shone when God scattered Augustine's blindness. Sight restored, loss is restored:
he sees he is looked after. Every memory, every moment passed has been bound up into
an infinite and all-redeeming Now.
The world has spoken to the seeker in an intimate voice words most fit--full of
his desire's satisfaction--for his very own ear. He has been known: all along some
One has been noting, keeping track, waiting for him. It is like discovering we have
always had a mother who loved us 1 only our own waywardness had kept us from full
knowledge and actual experience of her loving presence. She was with us all along;
it was we who were not with her. She, in our seeking her at all times and in all
places, was within, while we floundered among her witnesses without. Now that we ·
have found her we are no longer lost. One moment's epiphany entailed adoption of
orphan aimless moments passed, discovered to us their place and made them at home.
These things were preparing a place for us, making straight the way at whose end we
exclaim, Aha! This is who I was becoming! as we step into the waiting shoes which
that loving Presence made ready. Safe, consoled, befriended, as one, we have learned
the uses of the things of the world. we are at home.
"I am I!" we say. Memory, trusty guide and interlocutor, enables the world to
yield us a life that fits us. In the twinkling of an eye, meaning flashes, gathered
from and reflected upon the darkness of the previous moment's ignorance. Its brilliance illuminates the present, and marks it as ours. I.t is recognized as the destination prepared for by all our days.
It is a mirror. we see ourselves in this
bright element.
But what can we say about such a moment when it is not understood to be learning
God, a gift whose acceptance marks us as God's own? What do we make of the event
which yields reconciliation, solace, hints of home, but which is not identified as
response to Augustine's God's call? Since this moment, referred to hereafter as the
Moment, seems to point to "a bright scienza outside of ourselves" as did Augustine's
creation when interrogated, it is natural for the Christian to ascribe to it evidence
for Christianity. Since it initiates us into mystery, permits us to enter that element in which "we pronounce joy like a word of our own," we give it to religion.
Since it allows us to become "erudite in happiness with nothing learned" we give it
to the omniscient. Since it is a breath of safe-keeping, hearth and home awaiting
us, we attribute it God, the Father. Certainly we know a grateful healing, a respite
for the heavy laden, refreshment for those who hunger and thirst--a mending of what's
ragged. Jesus' promise of rest and peace goes right to the weary heart, but can it
relieve those who bear memory's burden and suffer its thirst? What would such relief
mean for them? How would their understanding of the world and their relation to it
be altered?
Everyone lives with memory, with seeking and longing and loss; the experience of
restoration is indeed a gift. Receiving it, we feel it has been given by one who
knows our heart. our understanding of the uses of memory an.d hence of the things of
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Christianity, discovering its use as beacon and beacon's follower, God shining and us
finding our way into and finding ourselves in that beam which we follow toward Him.
What would our experience of seeking and finding reveal in another context?
Baudelaire's ·"Le Cygne" offers us an opportunity to find out. Who has given us this
knowing gift, self and the present wrapped in meaning? Who calls us, and to what
end?
"Andromaque, je pense a vousl" says Baudelaire as he walks through a city whose
form has changed more quickly than his heart. His heart contains the city memory has
built, .a citadel of the self. Therein the city through which he once walked is kept,
taken into memory. He walks across the new Carrousel, and suddenly his fertile memory bears fruit.
The river swelled by Andromache's tears, the mirror of her
widowhood's grief, has made fecund Baudelaire's fertile memory. The present is made
to point beyond itself--to something in Baudelaire. Remembering the old Carrousel,
Baudelaire suffers one of the Moments.
Andromache's grief has made Baudelaire's
fruitful; the thought of her is the water bringing forth and preserved in the fruit.
What nourishment, what refreshment does it contain?
As Baudelaire crosses the new Carrousel he sees with his mind's eye that which
is no more: the camp of booths, the shattered capitals, the hewn stones greened by
their pools. The presence of the new place reminds him of the absent one, evokes "en
1' esprit" its presence as memory. An inventory of sights remembered is scanned by
the mind's eye; among the confused bric-a-brac it comes upon the menagerie that used
to sprawl over the tiles there. There he saw one morning, under
clear and cold sky
at the hour when Labor awakes, where streetsweepers raised in the silent air a somber
hurricane of dust--a swan.
Although the memory received and now recalls
he~ter-skelter a record of time and place, light, weather, characters and activity,
among these blue sky, dust cloud, waterless gutter and a swan bathing in dust stand
out. The memory has marked these as self's own, capable now of speaking meaningfully
to the beholder. Recognition has occurred. Memory, a Nathan who, like King David's,
is no respecter of persons, has declared: that swan is you.
The heart of the swan is full of his beautiful natal lake. In a dry and dusty
place, waddling over pavement on webs meant to paddle, dragging white feathers over
rough and broken ground, the swan bathes in dust by a gutter without water and addresses a blue sky: water, when will you rain down? The present provokes memory and
exacerbates the pain of remembering.
The lake remembered is no more.
It is
inaccessible to sense, no part of the outside world, yet present to mind. The lake
carried in the heart cannot be entered, its waters cannot wash away the dust or refresh the parched throat except in this experience of longing for it, of suffering
its loss.
Because of the desert, the lake is recalled; the lake welling up in memory waters thirst, and "suckles grief," by incorporating, naming its own, those aspects of
the present which need has marked--thus giving to us what we have of it, of solace.
In this way identity is developed; the remembered and its elect in the present are
bound up into self via need. The self in the present holds within it past selves and
their passed presents. When something outside, something now present as an object to
self touches what is held within as memory--as dust cloud touched the swan's
lake--the remembered is brought to life in the present. This arousal is a claiming
of the stuff of the self, identifying dust cloud as meaningful because related to and
ordered by its natal place in the heart. Identification of self's objects as development of meaning allows the self to incorporate the outside, to "take it in". Identity is strengthened and its number of possible objects multiplied.
Thus the swan speaks to its own, out of its full heart, when it addresses a blue
sky clouded only by the streetsweepers' dust. The swan's posture of reproach is an
attitude of need: I am full .of desire both because of the presence in my heart of
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because it is in my heart. The swan is stretched by the lake in the heart from dry
ground to cloudless sky. Its presence come to life inside defines him as a figure of
longing, impressed by the remembered from within and. shaped by its absence without.
Begging a "-sky cruelly and ironically blue" for rain would be merely ridiculous
were it not that from it alone relief is to be wrested. In his need for it the swan
has all that he ever did and ever will have of it. This is ironic. He cannot help
needing it; nor can he reach it. This is cruel. Need itself must blossom into all
the recompense it requires. Only the cold clearness of blue sky can satisfy the
thirsty swan; absence is made fruitful. This is the exile's sublimity.
The swan remembered is present to Baudelaire as a vision by which he is transformed.
The memory reveals meaning in the present; in this case the revelation
catches up memory itself. No longer "La, je vis " , past tense, but here, now " Je vois
ce malheureux, mythe etrange et fatal." The memory yields the vision of swan as exile, a strange and fatal sight: it bears like a contagion the revelation of identity.
seeing the swan's exile, he sees his own. Memory has brought the sight; by witnessing, it as a thing seen in memory, by looking on it in the present, he is transformed
into an exile. Remembering the swan has made him like the swan: he sees what is not
there. An exile, Baudelaire sees what is in_ his heart. He sees the swan in front of
the Louvre as one might see the child's features in the face of the mother. In this
case those features are discovered to be one's own, become so through one's looking.
This surely is a Greek swan, no doubt one of Zeus' bastards, mythic in its
potency to reveal, fatal in its relation to us as ancestor perceptible only in retrospect. Its pattern, its story, its word, or muthos, is like Baudelaire's; it explains his present by impregnating a past moment with its image. Thus, as Yeats'
account of Leda's "annunciation" has it, "burning Troy engendered there" is discerned
(in the past rape) from the vantage of the present. This is a writing of history
backwards, as must happen if it is to be made meaningful, using the present to give
life and understanding to the past--in order to say what one is.
The swan's presence in the new Carrousel is something like the presence of
Zeus-as-swan in the new Troy of the false Simo is.
It renders history as change
allegorical, composing autobiography, an account not of discrepancies wrought by
time' s march on the future, but of identities perceived in retrospect. Something
past is built up by the present to be its own foundation. That is, what is real is
what is remembered. The present is the mother, nurturing the past, "suckling grief".
We discern the mother's features in the face of the child which is born of her labor,
her flesh and blood. The only sight we have of her is in the face of her child. What
we know of the present is that which elaborates and explicates the past. What we
have of the present is whatever the past, inspired by memory, needs in order to live,
but lacks. In other words, we have a present to call our own thanks to our character
.as exiles.
The present city becomes allegory, its new palaces, old neighborhoods, and scaffolding encounterable, comprehensible and thus assimilable only as they refer to the
self, the more enduring city in the heart, built of "chers souvenirs" heavier than
stone. Walking among them we touch, we taste and see; we carry off within us an
effluence, an essence which lack and loss of them inspires. They yield to us their
souls 1 at last we are with them . At last we know them. At last we are possessed of
a world.
Baudelaire in the new Carrousel like the swan in the old yearns for a past place
in the heart. Baudelaire desires the place in which he saw the swan stretched by
desire. Once there, in memory, he stands congruent with the swan and there understands: I am, like the swan, an exile, possessing by pain of its absence the past
place and possessed of a self by virtue of this pain. He acquires a present by extension (like swan's neck} of need; need identifies self's objects, those ordained to
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notices is what need points out. What he hears is what tells us about the past.
Loss remembered identifies what belongs to self in the present. The present reveals
the identity of the self by relating and furthering the meaning of the past.
The world speaks to Baudelaire in rhymes of loss.
The memory of the old
carrousel contains an image of the rememberer and his loss. Now and Before are
bridged by identity. swan and Baudelaire and exiles everywhere meet in memory on the
banks of the river of tears they share.
Baudelaire, then, like the swan is grieved andguided by the lost, by what is no
more. Hearts full of a present which has dried like pressed flowers, they suffer
loss's determination of the new moment's appropriation. Understandably the image of
the swan is oppressive; he sees in its mad gestures his own. He, too, is.wrung ~y
its relentless desire; the fullness in the heart evoked by th.e prese~t filling it
with his need for what it cannot give him precisely because he needs it. His ?eed
comes from within and can be satisfied only there. To set there, to come within a
thing must be memory--which is experienced as desir~ for its lost state a7 Present.
Need is our element, "O most miserable," the air we breathe. We thrive on ne~d.
we have no choice; without our gnawer, our desire, we're as nothing. If not sublime
and ridiculous exiles, we become apathetic nobodies, citizens of nowhere. Because
Odysseus• identity was so strongly determined by his desire to see the day of his
home-coming, he could afford to deceive the Cyclops by saying he was "no-man." Without a like desire we cannot say, I am, let alone what or who we are. Memory consigns
us to a life of seeking, drives us to ask the present for what it has supplanted,
whose absence it signifies. Need rises like a smoke, conflagration of desire sen~ing
up sign~ls of our incongruence with the present, lake in the heart feeding the fire.
This smoke's particles congealed and constellated cover the present, marking w~th an
outline of our desire what is ours, bringing it to stand before us as- what is not
here. The things that are here we have only by remembering, in their passing into
our memories.
Andromache, deine among exiles, is the form of the fruit of Baudelaire's recognition of self in the swan. His loss is swelled into fruition by their shared grief,
a river that calls forth and keeps their tears. She is remembered as another for
whom relation to and hence meaning in a new, changed city is informed by the internal
gravity of a past not passed, an unbudgeable city of melancholy. The new Ca~rousel
and the second Troy weigh upon those who hold within them their predecessors. Their
external presence renders the memories they've vitalized insuperably private,
inaccessible and inescapable. The remembered as present' s referent is source of
tears; as present it is the power which bends Andromache into her ecstasy of grief.
The sight of the second Simois is magnified by Andromache's tears. She sees in
it both her reflection at the moment--"femme de Helenus"--and the context or support
for that reflection, the first Troy, the true Simois, and the reflection's_ original--"veuve de Hector." The moment of ecstasy unifies these, wresting into agreement
the forms of widow and wife. The "slower" heart suffers the impossibility of identity, the incongruence that memory, like the river, engenders and preserves.
Andromache has become a "vil betail," a pack-anima. led from a fallen husband's
l
arms by the hand of his proud enemy. Stretched between the two men, between past and
present, she is burdened with implacable desire for what was r~ndered past ~oo sc:&gt;°n
while bearing the weight of the present necessity. She carries her memories like
burdens. The present carries its own weight, only weighing on us when and where we
remember. Where we mark an absence within, there the present's touch becomes insupportable.
Andromache bent before the empty tomb is like Baudelaire oppressed by the image
of his great swan: each is the image of the image before which she or he bows. T~mb
and swan become allegorical. Andromache holds memory within as the tomb holds its
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�the space around it define the tomb, so Andromache is shaped by her intangible memories and the lack and absence to which they refer. The tomb is built out of memory's desire; so is Andromache. Each is present bearing witness to loss, full of what
it does not hold. Andromache's posture, bent in tension between Hector and Helenus,
burdened by the weight of airy present on the nothingness she carries within, is that
of mediator, of exile, grounding memory with grief, watering herself with her tears.
What the heart holds is what we have of the lost. The blow struck us by the
reminder of its absence stirs its memory, working it to ripeness.
This fruit' s
succulence is the preservation and transformation of the tears that brought it forth.
Tasted, it yields nourishment of knowledge, of fortified self-identity: by such
fruits we know ourselves. Its flavor is bitter; it is ripened in the flaring of
grief, solstice of that hot sun's season. For one terrible moment we are one in our
longing with the longed-for. Very longing has blossomed into its own satisfaction,
an "ecstasy of grief." The present is eclipsed by the ripe moment's flaming forth1
dark and cold it is as nothing for us, stirring no memory. Memory itself rises and
swells in us to fill all the shape of our desire. Resolution of the internal and
external bring them to bear as one on the self, removing us for an instant from the
cycle of need-engendering need. The moment of remembering belongs neither to past
nor present. For us it is timeless, bearing us outside of time. Remembered and
rememberer meet transformed "en !'esprit."
This moment of identification, the deepening and enlarging of self, restores an
imbalance which is our natural state. Once passed it is felt to have concretized the
present; the lost, so painfully present, are restored and re-stored with our experience of this restoration in memory. The moment's ripeness has burst, scattered and
conduced outward~ back into the world of the present. Collapsed, the fruit sows the
seeds of self, laying claim to what will grow to be self's own.
Thus identification contains in the moment of identity with the remembered the
transcendence of memory's pain as well as- the · seeds of pain's -source, of its
offspring comprising the present regained. In this way Andromache's "Simois menteur"
is strengthened; in its drinking of the present it is all the more p0tent to grieve
us again. If the river as symbol of loss, as witness to and ·· evidence of the absence
of the desired, is enlarged by her tears, so is the present in which it is so experienced. This is bitter fruit, but to be desired:
the deeper the river the more
fruitful the memory and hence, the richer the self and more meaningful the present.
The Simois, then, however false, is not like a river of Dante's hell, encircling .a
repetition, a fruitless imitation of living. On the contrary, the wider the river,
the wider the array of self's objects in the present: more of the world is our
own--in which to walk as an exile. memory's "blast of the horn" in the forest gives
the lost soul direction--and punctuates distance, revealing the extent of the dark
wood it wanders. our sense of self, of our relation to the world, is forged by such
· memory-stirring blasts.
When we hear this call we answer out of our experience, out of our identity
which is never identical with what is present to it now, never belongs.
The
emaciated negress begging in the mud asks a wall of fog for the coco-palms of proud
Africa·. The mind is helpless, desire puissant. Living in accord with the ponderous
city in the heart, she is bound by its necessities. Where are you, desired? water,
when will you rain down? we demand of the desert. Mad gestures--there is no help
for it: this memory, this need, this voice is our own. Because we are given stones;
we ask for bread. When we receive it we are bent and bowed like Andromache by such
necessitous fare.
Because the name the exile has for herself, her "I", was given her by people and
places not there anymore, she suffers their claim on her present, unable and unwilling to be free of them: they are all she has of who she is. Shun them and the present collapses into unidentifiable rubble like the detritus of the old Carrousel,

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building blocks without an architect's design. The old Carrousel's shattered capitals
and crumbling stones were appropriated and restored by memory's "plan". They were
needed to make sense and self of Now. The absent whom we need and desire re-invent
for us the meanings and thus the uses of things, adjusting Now to meet Then. We are
the malleable joint suffering the alignment only to prepare, by our presence, its
going awry once more. we "tettons la Douleur", suckle grief.
were Andromache to forget Hector immediately upon his death, the painfully perfect fit of her days would be altered. we know the lost through memory's suffusion
of the form of its absence, by nursing grief until it grows to press upon the shape
of its absence held in memory, holding us tight against its absence in the world
around. Like the tomb, we are sculpted by loss. We bear the imprint of the desired.
we bear its likeness. Remembered and rememberer meet. This burden of so coming together as to be alike is memory's fruit. This is longing's recompense and the communion of exiles. such painful accord cannot undo loss, yet on it the future world
depends: it builds up of these accords self and self's world. Time's erosion itself
gives us the stuff of a world. Consuming our souls in the coming together of Then
and Now, breathing a smoky future, we are formed by memory's immense store of debris,
by the accrual through memory of the ashes of the lost.
Baudelaire's thought passes from the swan to Andromache to the Negress and on to
all who have lost what can never ever be found, who water themselves with tears,
suckling Grief like a good she-wolf. Paris changes, his melancholy remains.
The
changing external city is, in a sense, the timeless if not the eternal1 outside of
us, it is outside of our time. When we mother grief, we acquire through time the
personal experience that mingles the times and places of the external with ourselves.
The city memory holds is mortared by identity. Once the present is so enjoined, its
material claimed--this is my present--then the presents past in memory go to work on
it, hewing and chiseling and joining, making it in their image. The external city,
unalloyed with time, at large, not yet part of ourselves, wears away the
already-fashioned. Memory harnesses this erosion, turning it to its use, using it to
fashion self. we stand remembering between this erosion coming against us and the
inertia of the past which, if left isolated and fixed in its grief, would not yield
an "I" who can make sense of Now, thereby claiming it. Memory mediates between these
forces whose interplay determines the development of identity. Thus we are strangely
allied with time whose presence in our memories is their guarantor of ultimate obliteration, whose advent as portended by arousal of desire is accomplished in the search
to satisfy it.
we depend on memory to make time's constructs real, accepting the unweildy present with hands guided by time passed, always seeking to accomplish what desire
pre-figured and time proposed: homecoming.
we are given an inhospitable present; in it we find no chair familiar with our
figure. In fact, we discover here the inexorable eraser of all our imprints. Memory
goes before us to e'ncounter the present on our behalf, to save a seat and warm a
chair. Memory is Proust's angel custom, making a habitable room of the world.
But while we are given this present, we are denied the past as equally present,
though present it is to us, in memory. There its comfort of the accustomed is beyond
our immediate need to be held; we can't sit in the memory of that old chair. Nevertheless its presence in memory is understood as the subject of an imperative: go
home! You go home, you who know and need this very chair, find it! Be one with itl
so we seek it. we arrive homesick; homesickness is our native state, furnishing
its native daughters and sons with homegrown amenities as souvenirs: melancholy,
longing, lonesomeness--our inalienable suitcases. Our native land exists in our experience of the breach and lapse, discord and distance between the city in the heart
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�sailors forgotten on an island, captives, the conquered--all are hailed with an
old Memory's "plein scuffle du cor." All answer to the name of exile, flock to Memory's summons, as do "bien d'autres encore." Not only those who live with great loss
held by memory's terrible fidelity, but any who seek to make sense of their present
while grieved because they cannot touch their desired, come to be numbered among the
company of exiles. The hero seeking to embrace the underworld's shade wraps his arms
around himself--foolish gesture, mad gesture, the exile's fraternal greeting. They
are brothers to grief and related by it to others so related.
The oddly anti-climactic "an many others, as well" at the poem's end is like the
failing echoes of the horn's blast among the trees. Memory's transcendent moment,
the moment of the exile's "kinship", subsides into the ebb and flow of longing, into
isolation. The roll call of exiles begun by Baudelaire's particular grief fades from
individual, to group, to revery's all-embracing melancholy, its "pauvre et triste"
mirror. He is again, as he began, alone.
Who then calls us? Memory calls us. Memory gives us to ourselves. Memory
leads us into a valley of shades where we come into the presence of the lost • . In
memory's court where we are changed by grief at its loss into its likeness we become
one with its memory. we instill into it our breath of life and it gives us in return
our human life..
Praise and thanksgiving are compounded with grief and reproach.
Their ally, the exactest element for us, is Andromache's ecstasy of grief, a conversion not . of sorrow into joy, but of joy and sorrow into an "I" unconstrained by
time's narrow file, a self who knows and is known--as an exile. What is lost holds
us, with its knowing arms, in an embrace of the absent, the company of exiles.
What we had and knew in a time passed is truly known and possessed when we are
possessed of and by its memory. We suffer the thing we seek to know. Recalling it,
we become like it, transformed by this memory's presence in our present, we know it
, as knowing us: it has come in response to our need for it. It has come to assuage
· our sorrow at its absence. It has come in answer to a summons written in grief from
what has taken its place. It delivers us from a welter of presence, unmarked as
Mine, interpreting for us its unintelligible formless address. The remembered arranges and orders that hodge-podge, mediates between the woven "I" and the stuff of
experience, incorporating the undiscerned design of the moment, binding up with our
monogram the wound its summoner has opened in the flawless flatness of Now.
Not memory as fact, as noun, as word referring to incident or to sight, but the
activity of remembering, capitalized and old, sower of seeds which in us bloom into
memories, calls us. It is a power, a source. We are patterned by it. It is an activity. we participate in it, making it our own in the ecstasy of grief. we are
struck with passion; its touch sparks desire.
It is an activity like thinking on
thinking, an inexplicable going round, a spiraling which entails us: we are moved by
it. we remembering, partake of its moving, the past recollected inspired, collecting
and breathing life into the present whose second coming as memory initiates what is
for us its real life and continues our resurrection. Each memory thus redeemed furthers our ascension to the outside-time and no-place wherein we stand one with our
longing, and congruent with the figure of our losses. We raise, remembrance by
remembrance, a body of self-knowledge into its unfigured garment, a waiting air.
Baudelaire's understanding of memory does, then, hint of a completion, a wholeness to be attained, just as it did for Augustine. Something is watching over, waiting for us; why else this longing, this search? How else should the world speak
words meet and fit for us?
Even without the meaning-giving "speech", the resolution of fragments into a
pattern-casting leaded glass of the Moment, the fact of our longing proposes to us
the existence of a grail probably holy. That there is a lost thing we seek, something we remember we have forgotten says to us faith is being kept: the memory will
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this word on the tip of the tongue, but it will wait for us. So habitual is the attitude, we forget it is that of searching. our days are tinged with apparently native desire, aroused when we stray into the presence of the desired. The thing itself beckons, urges us. We say, No, not this, unable to say what it would be. we
feel drawn; we follow; arriving, we sight it elsewhere. It is in our memory, it has
become of what has been and yet we turn to face it as though it is yet to be, to be
discovered at once, complete and whole. It is what we have of our living. It seems,
thus, to be "not-I" , outside of ourselves. We hear its call in the things of the
world, but cannot discover the caller there.
In this way the things of the world point beyond themselves. For Baudelaire,
too, a kind of outer self gathers the mundane material from which the inner gleans,
gathering not evidence of, but the unseen itself--the stuff of self. The outer notes
the details of the Carrousels prompted by the inner' s longing. The inner is the
seeker, sifting the wealth brought before it by the outer, for mementos of the
desired.
In each case the Moment gives access to a deeply inner self secretly
wrought in the room of our days, whose continuity--recognized existence--is at once
surprise and confirmation, "an agreement provoked by surprise". All along we have
sought; only we are surprised to see what it is that we sought. In the moment of
"Aha" is "Yes, here it is" and "What? Is this it?" "This" feels somehow familiar.
The inner self senses in the things of this world the presence of it lost, which
are at once its progeny and its self-to-be. The memory of the swan belonged to
Baudelaire; he had seen it. The memory was one of self's brood, but was held captive
in the new Carrousel. That in the new Carrousel which touched on the swan hidden
there was claimed by memory to belong. Chance released it. Chance revealed it.
Exiles, sublime and ridiculous, are "idiotai", idiots, answering voices only they
hear, recovering property that exists only when they are touched by it. They hold
their hands before them like sleepwalkers; what is theirs must 'touch them.
When stwnbling in the waking world upon last night's dream, we know a
quickening. On the verse of recollection, a sense of wonder transforms us. We enter
for a moment that element compounded of instantaneous participation in the dream with
the present touchstone yielding it, thus displacing memory and bestowing a wondrous
buoyancy on the present. The inner self senses this compound's presence, living in a
perpetual state of advent. Always it listens, absent-mindedly heeding, turning toward--toward what? What moved it?
It may happen that we discover what called us. This feels like grace. This
feels like redemption. We feel, for a moment, that we have arrived at a lucidity
which raises us, effortlessly. An alignment, a resolution of attention yields an
atmosphere of vast transparency. we sense mystery, privy to intimations of a world
made whole. Disparate events, tergiversating, have eschewed time's rank and file to
lie superimposed, revealing as would transparencies, outlines of correspondence.
The thing sought and revealed in the Moment is identified through and identifies
the self. The "souls" of those the self has lost, imprisoned in objects, can call it
because they share a name. The recognition of this kinship affirms the self and its
place in the world. We feel as if two fingers touch, reaching from this world to
another whose existence longing suggested and recognition confirms. In this Moment
our past is caught up and shown to have spoken the words whose meaning we apprehend
now. Our comprehension results in a rapture; we are raised above time, lifted out of
ourselves. We feel we have, by participation in something larger than us, learned
who we are. There is a knowing, and we are part of it and in these Moments we have
access to that knowing and hence to· ourselves. Thus we discover what we have desired
and what our desire makes us.
This, too, recalls Augustine. How do I say what I am? I seek to discover what
I love. In the Moment, identity is discovered as a particular relation to the world.
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�lation to the things of the world. Thus the Moment's activity is world-making. In
its raising us above time, allowing its interpretation to insinuate itself retrospectively, claiming past events as its emissaries, it is ahistorical and proposes that
we, too, are properly more akin to the spiral than to the line. Its meanings spread
backwards in a wave, obliterating cause and effect, washing from effect over cause.
In the Moment we can see that all those precedents, those causes were this moment;
they just happened to be scattered. Something about our presence, something in our
nature keeps us from always seeing them wholly recollected, but we have the sense
that there is a place where memories gathered meet as one with the rememberer.
Recollection is the paradigm. The whole world is memory's treasure-house. Memory gathers up the multifarious outside, extrudes it through self and grounds it in a
Larger Than Self.
Augustine read the sequence in the opposite order.
One God
through his people, created in his image, works to deliver--to create--a kingdom of
heaven. All creation groans in this labor of turning the inside, Christ's kingdom in
our hearts--out. Thus the Christian's relation to the mystical body will determine
the uses of the things of this world.
Baudelaire interprets the sequence in another way, emphasizing our kinship with
the "lesser" creation. Nature is a temple wherein we encounter symbols that look at
us and do so familiarly, "avec des regards f amiliers." Here the puppets dance of
their own accord in the playroom by night. We may on occasion dance to their melancholy tune, which we're apt to hum, absent-mindedly, while crossing the new
Carrousel. we are one of them and all together, taken as one, we in our whirligigs,
dervish-like, find revealed in ourselves the figure of a larger, yet like, dance.
The things of the world act on us. Because of our presence among them we are swept
up into the dance. They speak to us; because their speech is familiar, if confused,
we can answer their · overtures. It happens on occasion that we feel they answer to
us: for an instant we correspond. Deep and twilit, the Larger-Than-I is unveiled.
Through suffering them and being moved by these things we develop identity and a
sense of infinite. The very fact that the poets of actuality are outside of us
supposes that they are kin to us, will be bound into the final cause, the shape of
self to come. They correspond to something within us1 we in turn answer to something
in the Larger-Than-I toward which we live. Augustine dismisses the things in favor
of the God they bring. They are throw-aways, career emissaries not properly lovable
in themselves. our kinship with God is stressed; strengthening this binding tie is
the work determining the uses of things. Thus love of music for the pleasure it
gives is suppressed; the words' kinship to The Word and music's place as an adjunct
to worship are stressed.
Baudelaire, on the other hand, counters that what the senses bring to us is
bound up in our experience of the infinite. Sense is not a vehicle abandoned at its
destination, but is integral to the destination. There is in us sense which answers
to color, sound, taste and touch1 and mind, or "l'esprit". In Augustine's view, the
former are poor relations, black sheep to be avoided if one would claim inheritance
in God's kingdom. For Baudelaire, sense and mind are a desirable continuum, whose
inseparability is the source of their transport which the sense of the infinite
sings.
Each man would claim that the unity of inner and outer precedes the Moment, but
for Augustine such accord is understood to be the inner man's conquest of the outer,
whereas for Baudelaire each realm is heightened, overflowing bounds to intermingle.
Baudelaire is not troubled by Augustine's pause wherein the complete will awaits
God's visit.
As sense and mind are a continuum so is their transcendence.
Augustine's moment of helplessness and humility during which he waits for God is the
source of his memory's transformation. Its emptiness, its need, are the perfect receptacle for God's presence. Only its pain is fit to hold true joy; thus past occasions of grief are filled with joy.

The finding of the lost requires the submersion of their absence in God's presence. What was dear is denounced by Augustine in order to widen the gap between inner and outer man, drawing inner nearer to God. Memory's grief is still, as for
Baudelaire, the source of identity, but it is grief at sin, at offending and thus
distancing himself from God. Grief over his loss of his mistress is drowned in joy
of loving God.
Some part of this joy is remorse at having dallied elsewhere,
confused by less fair forms. The moment of conversion inhales . not only all moments
past to mark them with its reinterpretation but exhales interpretations of the moments which follow it. This is the working out of self. The capitalized--Travail,
Douleur, Souvenir--in "Le Cygne" are present in Augustine's Confessions of what he
is. In the pause before conversion they are stilled, stopped. The inner has vanquished the outer. Learning God, Augustine learns new uses for them. They deepen
the rift between inner and outer. They split asunder what they had bound together,
in order to bind anew.
Whether in Augustine's or Baudelaire's view, we are in the middle. Mysterious
longing is our lot. We mediate between Then and To Come, between the made and the
being made, outside and in, between many things and one, happy life and Happy Life.
The inner man's body is a middle term1 memory as the head of the soul is closest to
their home, that head from which all souls flow. Through "un vieux Souvenir" the
exile approaches home remembered; as its call fades his vision fades; he is lost in
the wood once again.
Being thus in the middle we affect what we see. We see ourselves in what we
look at. The inner man finds evidence of the inner man's existence. If the world
points beyond itself, saying not we but he made us, it points in our direction. To
see beyond ourselves we have to see through ourselves. When the world points, we are
part of . the vision indicated, for we are part of the pointing world. The witness to
a Presence, allusion to One, is like our shadow; our own presence as an integrated
and integrating one among the world's manifold casts it.
A sun shines in the moment of looking; when looking recognizes its shadow then
it feels the sun. Andromache sees its glint on her river mirror; in its flash she
sees herself, heart full of Hector and Troy, reflected in the present of the second
Simois; Andromache in the river and Andromache on its bank are brought together. The
sun is here is with her; she knows it in that moment.
Correspondence of self in the world, its shadow there, with the inner self who
hears its voice and understands its speech yields a sense of an encompassing presence. From the private and particular, from the intimacy of a world which observes
us with familiar looks, we are caught up into a sense of infinite things. The world
has known this; it is the knowing temple, the portal and dwelling place of this Moment. we have been called into its presence by name. Because the world is kin, we
make sense of its speech: it speaks with our voice syllables of accord, sounded by
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A CONCLUSION OR TWO
we all make ourselves at home in the world by means of memory's mediation .
Among us are those whose memory holds for them a reminder of another mediator who, by
sharing in our memories, shares in memories' uses. This memory in the flesh is a
friend.
The Shakespeare of sonnets 29 and 30 was one possessed of such a friend. The
friend sympathizes as "deaf heaven" is troubled with "bootless cries." His presence
belies utter disgrace "with Fortune and men's eyes": here is one who loves me, who
holds me in his regard1 this is great good fortune. All-alone-weepings of outcast
states are transformed by the happenstantial thought of the friend's acceptance of us

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and presence in our lives, thus enfranchising and offering access to conununity. As
one who knows us, sharing in our memories, mindful of our needs and hopes, the friend
grounds us in the present, in an outer changeable world. The friend is a bridge to a
familiar world whose presence there enables us to see ourselves at home in it.
Memory's grief is converted by the remembrance of the friend.
When the
remembrance of things past alienates us from the present, eclipsing it, remembering
the friend restores the lost, clearing a way back to the present. In the thought of
the friend, our grief catches on something external, refers us to someone who, u~like
those who people memory, is not-us and is part of the present. The need born of memory is diverted and no longer gnaws at us; from a solitary descent inward, we are
restored to a footing in the populous present.
The friend grants restoration by remembering us. Relieving our woe in the absence of those who knew us, whom we love and in the remembered presence of those who
hurt us, the friend's knowledge of and care for us brings solace: we are not alone.
we who remember are remembered; memory's burden is shared. The existence of the
friend affirms and sustains our own loss-riddled existence.
Augustine, after learning God, had a permanent friend. His friend said, I will
never forget you; his friend's immortality gave his words unconunon weight.
His
friend said, I am always with you, even to the end of the world. Augustine's friend
knew his heart, for he made it. His disappointments and sorrows were shared with
Christ who promised rest and peace for the troubled and heavy-laden. His happiness
was magnified by his friendship with the God he knew to be the source of every joy.
Friendship with this never-failing friend transformed the memory of his solitary
seeking, revealing in them his friend's benificent presence. With him, the world
which had been rendered two-faced by the split in the pilgrim's soul appeared whole.
Befriended loss and being lost are seen to be questions of perspective. The finding
of the lost sinner "finds out" all his losses, transforming their relation to him
through memory' s transformation.
Once he is found, Augustine' s "lost" are found.
The press of memories can never oppress by their presence. They have been, along
with Augustine, restored in an eternal present. Augustine's memory is grounded beyond this world, in his God.
In the Happy Life there is no real loss.
For the
friends of Augustine's God, this world is not a vale, but a veil of tears. Behind it
is the face of a permanent friend. Augustine never walks alone.
Baudelaire, as he crosses the new Carrousel, is quite alone--with the company of
his memories. Only he bears them. Their oppression widens the rift between the city
within and that without, strengthening the inner with pain come of the outer until it
swells in an access of grief into access to the company of exiles.
Memory's grief is Baudelaire's "dear friend"; his "chers souvenirs ••• plus lourds
que des roes" abide with him, grounding him in grief itself--in the river to which
all exiles' tears are tributary. Every exile has a friend in that river wherein he,
like Andromache, sees his other self. Exiles are friends not with one another but
with their grief. Thus a.11 are related by this common friend in a fellowship entered
into always and only "en l'esprit."
such a friend does not share in and keep one's personal memories, but preserves
them tr an sf ormed and sublime as "Souvenir." A memory recalled led Baudelaire to
Andromache's Siioois; the memory of an exile led him to the exile's "home."
Andromache remembered and no citizen of the new Paris led him through his old
Carrousel to the bank of the river where exiles weep.
For Baudelaire, loss is inalienable and its character indelible. No transformation or realignment of the soul through a friend's presence alters loss' s form or
meaning. Loss itself, intransigent and untransfigured, leads him to memory where the
exile's friend is found. Loss here is not restored but deepened. Its "unpublished
virtue" runs deep in the cleft between present and past. The friend recalled and
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into the light of day.
Baudelaire's friend is found in the heart of the maze1
through his grief, enlarging and elaborating its intricacy, he reaches the no-place
wherein he finds its river. There the remembered presses upon the rememberer its
likeness.
Through this "Travail" life is re-stored and restored to memory.
Baudelaire enters into the exile's communion: he is one with his memory.
The friend Proust seeks is himself. An unknown Proust is hidden in a morsel of
tea-steeped cake. Trying its taste, he savors himself. He is his own "dear friend"
the encounter with whom in memory's chamber effects a strange restoration.
"What is nearer to me than myself?" asked Augustine. Madeleine and cup of tea
come between Proust and Proust; matter intrudes, recalcitrant matter. Proust is a
god who hides himself and seeks himself in cups of tea and the smell of varnish. He·
is an outer man and an inner; the outer reveals what the inner hides. Were all the
faithful smells and tastes of things relieved of the burden of "their vast structure
of recollection," Proust to Proust would be utterly restored.
I feel that there is much to be said for the Celtic belief that the souls
of those whom we have lost are held captive in some inferior being, in an
animal, in a plant, in some inanimate object, and so effectively lost to us
until the day (which to many never comes) when we happen to pass by the
tree or to obtain possession of the object which forms their prison. Then
they start and tremble, they call us by our name, and as soon as we have
recognized their voice the spell is broken. we have delivered them: they
have overcome death and return to share our life.

And so it is with our own past. It is a labor in vain to attempt to recapture it: all the efforts of our intellect must prove futile. The past is
hidden somewhere outside the realm, beyond the reach of intellect, in some
material object {in the sensation which that material object will give us)
which we do not suspect. And as for that object, it depends on chance
whether we come upon it or not before we ourselves must die.
(p. 34)
Recognizing the voice of the little lost Proust of Sunday mornings at Combray,
Proust is filled with a "gaiety that is being," that element "in which we pronounce
joy like a word of our own."
No sooner had the warm liquid, and the crumbs with it, touched my palate
than a shudder ran through my whole body, and I stopped, intent upon the
extraordinary changes that were taking place. An exquisite pleasure had
invaded my senses, but individual, with no suggestion of its origin • . And
at once the vicissitudes of life had become indifferent to me, its disasters innocuous, its brevity illusory--this new sensation having had on me
the effect which love has of filling me with a precious essence1 or rather
this essence was not in me, it was myself. I had ceased now to feel mediocre, accidental, mortal.
Whence could it have come to me, this
all-powerful joy? (p. 34)
A genie of vapor freed from madeleine and tea, Proust past welcomes Proust home.

AN APOLOGIA

Proust is my cup of tea. By that I mean two things. His "overture" to swann's way
was my chosen essay subject 1 reading it recalled to me my feeling for the momenta
like his with tea and madeleine, and served as occasion for one of my own. Out of my

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�reading and thinking and remembering in preparation fc;:&gt;r my attempt, this paper,
sprang into being. Thus, you have had before you its recalcitrant vapor, outwardly
Proustless, and now arrive at its genius, the cup of tea:
And just as the Japanese amuse themselves by filling a porcelain bowl with
water and steeping in it little crumbs of paper which until then are without character or fo:an, but, the moment they become wet, stretch themselves
and bend, take on color. and distinctive shape, become flowers, or houses or
people, pe:ananent and recognizable, so in that moment all the flowers in
our garden and in M. Swann's park, and the water-lilies on the Vivonne and
the good folk of the village and their little dwellings and the parish
church and the whole of Combray and of its surroundings , taking their proper shapes and growing solid, sprang into being, town and gardens alike,
from my cup of tea.

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Augustine; Confessions, Everyman's Library, Dent/Dutton
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Baudelaire, Charlesi Le Fleurs du Mal, Garnier-Flammariol
Proust, Marcel; Du Cote de Chez Swann, trans. Moncrieff, Random House
Stevens, Wallace1 The Palm at the End of the Mind, Vintage

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                    <text>FALL, 1986

�ENERGEIA: The activity in which anything is fully itself.

it ...

vou svepysta ~wit

... (Aristotle's Metaphysics, 1072b)

COVER:
Evole
by Patricia Dawson
Linoleum Block

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Talke Breuer
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Axel Christensen
Patricia Dawson
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Sarah Waters
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Laurie Cooper
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Faculty Advisor:
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Energeia is a non-profit, student magazine which is published three times a year and
distributed among the students, faculty, alumni and staff of St. John's College, Annapolis and Sante Fe. The Energeia staff welcomes submissions from all members of
the community-essays, poems, stories, original math proofs, lab projects, drawings,
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�Corrigenda for The Jacobson Cut by Henry Higuera (Spring 1986)

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�CONTENTS
"THE PLAY' S THE THING ... " (Hamlet II. ii)
VISION AND ACTION IN KING LEAR

Celeste DiNucci

ANNUAL FRESHMAN ESSAY (ANNAPOLIS)
THE ETHICAL VALUE OF JUSTICE IN PLATO'S
REPUBLIC

Christopher Storr

6

ASK NEWTON

Jana Giles

21

ANNUAL SOPHOMORE ESSAY (ANNAPOLIS)
"MAN IS DIRECTED TO GOD AS AN END
WHICH SURPASSES THE GRASP OF REASON"

Dan Touey

23

LIMELIGHT: THE STORY OF A BALLERINA
AND A CLOWN
-CHAPLIN

Carlos Chamberlin

32

ANNUAL SENIOR ESSAY - HONORABLE
MENTION (ANNAPOLIS)
RIPENESS IS ALL

Renee Bergland

34

TO MOLLY IN AUGUST 1986

David Walter

54

ANNUAL SOPHOMORE ESSAY - HONORABLE
MENTION (ANNAPOLIS)
AN EXAMINATION OF ARISTOTELIAN
AWARENESS

Fawn Trigg

55

THE STEEDS OF HIPPOLYTOS

Andrew Grablewski

62

ON READING W.H. AUDEN'S AFTER READING
A CHILD'S GUIDE TO MODERN PHYSICS. TOO
LATE FOR HIM TO ANSWER

James Beall

69

CYCAD IA

James Beall

70

1

�"The Play' s the Thing ... " (Hamlet II.ii)
Vision and Action in King Lear
Celeste DiNucci

Being a perfonner--I do not make the claim with any grave intent, neither am I
interested in appending that I am either bad or good, it is simply what I do-- the
reading of plays has always been for me a slightly different endeavor than the
reading of other forms of literature. Henceforth, I cannot help but approach a play
as something meant to be seen and heard, but what I am faced with is the written
word.
It looks pretty much the same as most other pieces of literature.
For the
most part, it even reads the same: the character designations are not to be heard in
our heads any less than an identifying proper noun in direct discourse, and it would
be difficult to claim that we envision a stage direction any more vividly than a
descriptive passage in prose . But somewhere in this ~anuscript I know that I want to
find the element that makes it necessary that a play be a play.
Something in this
work must make it appropriate only as a piece of performance art.
But a play does exist on paper, and, as can be said of literature in general, a
careful reading of a play usually serves to reinforce and clarify our first
impression, that is, the sense that we, as an audience, get from a performance.
Indeed, we would expect no less from those whose business it is to produce the
perfonnance : impromptu perfonnances are fine, but we expect that there is something
to be found within a careful reading of a play that should be known by a director or
an actor . But is the job of the performer simply to derive this kind of sense from
the paper and display it to the audience, to "give voice" to the poetry of a play?
Does the theater merely make "spectacle" out of "literature"?
This question recurred to me most pointedly in coming to know Shakespeare's King
Lear. My first reading of the play was a slow, careful study . Any impulse to flip
back, to reread, to note and trace themes backwards and forwards was given free rein.
The upshot was that I was simply baffled. It wasn't that there was a lack of themes
put forth and developed:
quite the contrary, the abundance of themes in the play
seemed frighteningly inexhaustible as the variety and number of volumes published on
Lear strikingly testify. The same thing is as true of the characters as of the plot :
many interpretations are available, and all seem plausible and justifiable in terms
of the text; but no single one offers itself as most satisfying, and consequently
none is quite satisfactory .
In short, it seemed that in this play could be found
everything, but what I, as a reader, was left with was nothing.
Take, for example, the character of Cordelia .
How was I to read her words in
the first scene? Her fi rst speech, "Wha_ shall Cordelia speak? Love, and be silent"
t
could not exactly be taken as a simple statement of intention, as she neither remains
silent, nor when she speaks does she verbally spout gushing love.
I did not know
whether to cheer Cordelia--af ter all, I think that the reader is put off by Lear's
contest just as Cordelia must be--or to be horrified at the coldness of her words,
which in themselves could be interpreted as running the gamut from meekness to
cruelty. What's more, the subsequent scenes did not afford any greater clue .
That
Cordelia really loves Lear becomes clear, but whether this first scene is motivated
by petulance or by a clear vision that simply seeks to set her beloved father
straight seemed to be an arbitrary choice . Her protest of "No cause, no cause" in
IV .vii could be an expression o f guilt at her own willfulness or the gentle comfort

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�I think this is true , but its importance lies in understanding what exactly the
nat u r e o f t h i s unint e lligibility is . The humani t y o f t he c h a r a c ters i s a t t his poi nt
not in question : their motives may be hidden , but we do not find them unbelievable .
We still want the play, through a filling out and clar i fy ing of Lea r 's char acter , to
show us what makes this bizarre contest and all of Lear's subsequent actions
necessary as a consequence of what he is .
Instead, we are discomfited to find that the play is full of futility, not
lessons learned; full of deepening ambi guities, rather than movement toward a clarity
of the position each character holds in the play , in their world, and in relation to

one another . By III . ii , Lear doesn't know whether this storm be his ally, nature's
right destruction of "ingrateful Man", or his enemy, the "servile ministers" of "two
per nicious daughters" , and neither do we know on whose side nature lies, and who it
is who acts unnaturally.
Our attempt to judge Goneril and Regan begins to seem as
futile as Lear's trial of them in III. vi, since we do not know Lear any better than
he himself does (I.iv,
1.227) .
This play is moving away from resolution, and we
begin to have an uncomfortable feeling that if we are to get the sort of answers we
were looking for, either we are in for a very long evening or else nothing short of a
deus ex machina will do.
But there are no gods here.
Shakespeare has left us with only human beings .
Still we do have them:
as the play becomes less clear through its words, it becomes
more accessible and more believable. We are not baffled by King Lear because the
characters become wooden and lifeless; on the contrary, their actions are as extr eme
as the extremity of their circumstances calls for . Neither does this extremism seem
unbelievable :
there is no lack of dramatic exigency . What baffles us is that the
play doesn't make sense at the same time that it acquires its most convincing
reality . And so we are left denying and accepting in the same moment :
it is as we
see the wholeness of these characters that we are able to deny their words .
It is here that we are forced to begin surrendering the comforting belief that
what we are witnessing is merely spoken poetry.
No amount of careful reading can
give us an indication of why we are affected in this way . It is as we have witnessed
the play unfolding in time that we admit to its believability, and as we search the
text for e x tended metaphor and juxtaposition .
And so, we are faced with the
question : if it is not the poetic or thematic integrity of this play that makes it
believable, what is it?
What became apparent to me is that Shakespeare has somehow managed to put his
command of poetry into the service o f the immediacy peculiar to a play .
In othe r
words , here the content and f orm do not simply reflect one another, as in the common
device of wor ds doing what they say found often in poetry .
More than this, in
putting this poetry into the mouths of human characters -- in making these wor ds t h e
unpr emeditated speech, not of me re allegories or symbols, but of characters we
recognize as be ing human a n d whole --we see and e xpe r ience these words as whole or
active t ruths.
Content and form are no longer distinguishable as they once were :
the words become an act , and t he question of their truth or falsity becomes that of
t he clear e xp r ession o f charac t e r. These people , ind eed , mean what they say .
This i s what makes the reading of mo s t plays sensible; this is how a performance
can convey the sense t hat we find in the reading of the play .
But what makes King
Le ar stand out as a play i s that he r e, instead of a complicity of poetry and
character, we have a dic h o tomy.
Shakespeare has invested Lear's character with n o
lack o f huma nity, but ne i the r ha s he abandoned his powe r ful treatment of what makes
Lear' s characte r with no lack of humanity , but neither has he abandoned his powerful
u s e o f wo r ds !
It is th i s that allows for the successful treatment of what makes
Lear' s unint el ligibility nonetheless believable : his madness .
It is the character
t h at remains intact, not the speech; and as Lear's character is revealed in all of
his madness and humanity, his words , by their very nature , can only run on and in
among themselves .
The poetry has created the character, and yet the very stuff of
which the cha racter is made , the poetr y , is belied b y the believability it has
invested in the characte r. In IV . vi, we are finally able to hear Lear's words, not
as offensively nonsensical , but rather as a pitiful expression of his madness, as
much as the flowers with which he has bedecked himself . It is only when Lear's words
reach the point of utter intelligibility that his character has attained all of the
contours of deepest humanity .
Still, I was not quite satisfied with this understanding of how King Lear
somehow failed a s a piece of literatur e and succeeded as a play . It seemed that what

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of a teacher who realizes she has proferred a lesson her pupil is not ready for. She
was only one of the many characters whose words could be interpreted in any numbe r of
ways, and the text seemed no help in directing my choice .
Still, even in the midst of all this aimlessness, my abiding faith in
Shakespeare was not betrayed. That is, I had a sense that King Lear did not fail as
a play. Through closer scrutiny, I did not see these characters become contrivances,
but rather I became mystified by them just as I become mystified through the closer
knowledge of someone I haq previously formed an opinion about .
As Kenneth Muir
states, in the introduction to the Arden edi tion of the play, concerning the
characters seemingly inexplicable actions:
Indeed, a certain mystery in the characters prevents them from
becoming mechanical, just as in real life we can classify our
acquaintances, not our friends.
The play had not yielded up its
secrets under close examination, and yet I believed in its
believability.
This was a start.
What had become apparent was that reading the play as
literature was, in the end, fruitless.
Somehow, the sense of believability that I
gained from the play did not seem to lie here on the page -- that is , the endeavor to
find a sense of the play in this way began to appear to me as wallowing in the
beauty, elegance, and mystery of the words .
I began to realize that, in order to
gain an understanding of what made King Lear viable, a different approach was
required: to suspend my reading of the play as poetry, and instead to engage in the
reading of it as a tacit performance .
It is, after all, in performance that a play
becomes a play, and therefore only there that a real evaluation of its effectiveness
could begin .
And so the question became :
what could the distinction between poetry and
performance possibly mean?
What are the limitations of the written word in
preserving a play? The actions, the development of the plot, and even the rhythm of
the speech are all preserved here on the page, in the poetry .
But, though a
performance obviously cannot be viewed as entirely distinct from what is written on
the paper, the object became to understand how the play became di f ferent when it
utilized that element peculiar to the literary form of "play" :
immediacy .
This
element had to be explored, not by reading carefully, but by "watching" .
And so the stage is set, the houselights go down, the actors enter, and the play
commences . What do we, as an audience, see and hear? Professor Allardyce Nicoll, in
his Studies in Shakespeare (1927), states:
Shakespeare has left us with something which simply cannot be
tolerated on the stage, for to find an e xplanation of Lear's
decision and demeanor in this first scene , we need to know the
subsequent developments of the plot :
by themselves they are
simply unintelligible .

..

�ensured the success of the play was that the audience was not at leisure to judge
Lear's acts in the way that a reader is:
to see them as selfish, or foolish; to
weigh the senselessness and the necessity; even to admire Lear's actions, or to seek
to learn from them as though he were a tragic hero. Somehow, the need for that sort
of decision became irrelevant.
Something was accomplished in this conversion of
words to acts that was not merely simple believability.
The question of what makes seeing these words as acts important began to reveal
itself not in the examination of the meaning they acquire but rather in what this
sort of seeing makes possible . Words as meaning can elicit criticism or agreement,
appreciation or denial. It is only when the words become an act that they can elicit
a response outside of this reasonable judgement. Words as acts can elicit act. What
literature demands of us is comprehension; a play, on the other hand , can only
require apprehension. Seeing a play requires , not that all of our critical faculties
be on the alert, but rather that our vision be clear so that our action (or perhaps
more appropriately our reaction) can be clear and true . Literature, if it seeks to
accomplish something outside of reasonable judgement, can only do this through
undermining · that judgement; if it wants to be incisive in this way, it can only
succeed through being subversive. But since it is vision and action that belong to a
play, what is subversive when it is read as literature becomes the thing that creates
its success as a play: trust .
I am wary of being too explicit about the term "trust" f or the simple re ason
that I would like to retain all of the allusions and all of the depth associated with
it in everyday speech . What I would like to emphasize by using it, however, is the
idea that understanding can be brought about necessarily even when language is not
the medium used to elicit this understanding .
When words as acts do not coincide
with other acts
other words, or perhaps gestures, or even simple character
attributes, such as gender or age (Lear's babbling like a child, for instance) - we
can have the sense that the character is being false or ironic, or that the character
is simply not able to say what he needs to say . And when what needs to be conveyed
is something which by its nature cannot be said, this un - saying need not destroy the
character speaking:
the act of un-saying can elicit the act of understanding in the
spectator through the immediacy of the theater.
In King Lear, Shakespeare has
utilized the immediacy inherent in a play, and the trust it creates, to successfully
treat of that most impossible of themes, madness, without making it either humorous
or impossible to watch.
In a strange way then King Lear becomes a play about trust, not as a theme, but
as an act. When our trust is claimed, all questions of judging Lear's character have
been left behind. The play has shown us about trust through act and in doing so has
shown us something about trust that no piece of literature could accomplish.
Trust
has not been presented to us; instead, we have engaged in it . Through the use of its
own temporali ty, the play has stripped us of the premeditation that could only
destroy trust and has instead given us trust as act reflecting act .
We have
surrendered reason, and it is only this that has enabled us to reflect act with act
and so create the trust that the play is about.
What belongs to a play that does not belong to a book is that which is created
only through vision and action: trust . This trust becomes all but invisible when it
reinforces comprehension.
But when a playwright treats of other themes--themes
outside of comprehension, such as madness, or perhaps love -- this trust becomes
necessary and whole unto itself . That King Lear is a play that is successful in its
treatment of madness is what makes it impossible to read! That Lear is impossible to
read is what brings to light this special claim of the form of "play" .
After all of this discovery, then, I returned to my original question, but in a
new way. No longer was I concerned with how exactly a play differed from other forms
of literature.
The question now became how the play might be seen as a form of

literature at al 1.
Literature, through beauty and reason, or perhaps through the
denial of these, may hold a very special place in relation to the reader and may
create a clarity within us. Theater, through vision and action, may enable us to be
fully where we are, at least for the duration of the performance. To be fully where
we are can only be learned in practice though ; and if the theater can , even for a
moment, leave us bereft of the need to deny what we know or construct what we do not,
then that experience can change our lives. Literature may be able to show us what we
are, but perhaps the beauty of the theater is to show us that not knowing what we are
is no excuse for not being what we are.

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�The Ethical Value of Justice in Plato's Republic
Christopher Sturr

1
In the beginning of Book II of Plato's Republic , Glaucon uses strong words in
reference to Socrates' dialogue with Thrasymachus which took place in Book I.
Glaucon says ,
"Socrates, do you want to seem to have persuaded us, or truly to
have persuaded us, that it is in every way better to be just than
unjust?"
"I would choose to persuade you truly, I said, if it were up
to me."
"Well, then," he said, "you're not doing what you want ." (357ab)
After some questioning of Socrates by Glaucon, Socrates continues
"I, for my part, suppose," I said, "that it [justice]
belongs to the finest kind [of goods] , which the man who is going
to be blessed should like both for itself and for what comes out
of it . "
"Well, that's not the opinion of the many , " he said , "rather
it [justice] seems to belong to the form of drudgery , which
should be practiced for the sake of wages and the reputation that
comes from opinion; but all by itself it should be fled from as
something hard . "
"I know this is the popular opinion, " I said, "and a while
ago justice, taken as being such , was blamed by Th r asymachus
while injustice was praised .
But I , as it seems , am a poor
learner . "
"Come now," he said, "hear me too , and see if you still have
the same opinion.
For it looks to me as though Thrasymachus,
like a snake , has been charmed more quickly than he should have
been; yet to my way of thinking, there was still no p r oof about
either. For I desire to hear what each is and what power it has
all alone by itself when it is in the soul -- dismissing its
wages and its consequences . " (358ab)
Glaucon complains that since the popular conception is that justice is bad and dis advantageous on its own, he constantly hears a r guments against justice, whereas "the
argument on behalf of justice -- I've yet to hear from anyone as I want it." (358d) .
He goes on to restore Thrasymachus' argument , speaking " in vehement praise of the
unjus~ life" (358d), in order to induce Socrates to refute his arguments, and to show
that Justice is good and injustice is bad .
It is disturbing to hear justice blamed and injustice praised by Glaucon and
Thrasymachus, yet their arguments seem difficult to refute .
On the one hand, they
are constantly heard, as Glaucon points out . What is more, they appeal to impulses
that everyone has, and perhaps cannot completely get away _rom . On the other hand,
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the arguments go against many forces that form the basis of our actions:
parental,
religious, and legal authority, senses of responsibility or obligation for things
beyond ourselves, the 'Golden Rule', and so on. In a discussion in which what is at
stake is a way of life, as Socrates points out (344e) , such conf L.ct of ideas in
one's mind is indeed disconcerting.
I, like Glaucon, want to hear an adequate argument for justice and against injustice.
I want to understand exactly what the position Thrasymachus takes entails
and how one could go about refuting it. I propose to examine Socrates' dialogue with
Thrasymachus in order to understand the nature of the dilemma, and analyze the dialogue and its arguments to see how one might refute Thrasymachus.
The dialogue between Socrates and Thrasymachus can be divided into three stages
which correspond roughly to three assertions about justice advanced by Thrasymachus
and Socrates' apparent refutations of these assertions.
In the first stage
Thrasymachus defines justice as the advantage of the stronger; in the second he says
that justice is someone else's advantage, whereas injustice is one's own advantage;
in the third he asserts that the unjust life is superior to the just life.
I will
briefly outline the dialogue and then treat the arguments from each side separately.
Polemarchus defines justice as "helping friends and injuring enemies." (332b).
Thrasymachus is dissatisfied with Socrates' apparent refutation of this definition.
He advances his own definition of justice:
"the advantage of the stronger." (338c).
Socrates uses three lines of argument against this first definition. · First, he
claims not to know what Thrasymachus means by "the stronger", asking whether he means
those who are physically stronger, such as wrestlers. Thrasymachus clarifies himself
by saying that by the "stronger" he means the ruling group.
His reasoning:
ruling
groups everywhere set down laws which are advantageous for them, and say that the
laws are just for the people who are ruled; therefore, what is just is advantageous
for the ruling group.
Next, Socrates points out an apparent contradiction in the definition . Implicit
in Thrasymachus' reasoning is that it is just for subjects to obey the laws of the
rulers.
It is also just for them to do what is advantageous for the rulers.
Yet
Thrasymachus agrees that rulers are capable of erring, i.e. of making laws that are
disadvantageous for them.
So it appears that it may be just for subjects to do what
is disadvantageous for the rulers -- whence the contradiction. Thrasymachus escapes
the contradiction by asserting that rulers, insofar as they are rulers, do not err,
in fact.
In his third criticism of Thrasymachus' first definition, Socrates says that the
ruler insofar as he is a ruler (using Thrasymachus' expression) does not consider his
own advantage .
His evidence is that the arts seek the advantage not of themselves,
but of that of which they are arts . So just as a doctor considers not his own advantage but the advantage of the sick, the ruler, insofar as he is a ruler, considers
not his own advantage, but that of those he rules .
Thrasymachus responds to · this reasoning by offering his second definition of
justice . To counter Socrates' assertion, he cites the example of the shepherd.
The
shepherd, in caring for the sheep, looks not to the good of the sheep, but to his own
good, and to the good of his maste r. The ruler is the same way, and rather than look
to the advantage of the subjects, he should look to his own, and 'fleece' them . From
this analogy, Thrasymachus also gets the idea that justice , which characterizes
Socrates' docto r, is someone else's advantage, whereas injustice, which characterizes
Thrasymachus' shepherd, is one's own advantage .
People who are incompletely unjust,
such as petty criminals, are blamed, whereas those who are completely unjust are
praised from all sides . Therefore, he concludes, injustice is "mightier, freer, and
more masterful" than justice (344c) .
In response to these assertions, Socrates draws a distinction between the normal
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�them as a benefit of their particular art, but as a benefit of the wage earner's art .
If a craftsman works for nothing, he does not get the benefit of the wage-earner's
art, but some benefit, the benefit peculiar to the art of which he is a craftsman, is
produced.
In this way, Socrates reasserts his belief that the ruler, insofar as he
is a ruler, considers the advantage of the ruled, not his own.
Talk of wages leads to the third part of the dialogue, which deals with the rel ative · merits of justice and injustice.
Thrasymachus has asserted that the life of
the unjust is superior to that of the just. Socrates and Glaucon are not persuaded .
They decide to engage with Thrasymachus to discover whether what he say is so . They
first discuss the relationship of justice with virtue and wisdom . After being ques tioned, Thrasymachus asserts that injustice is in the camp of virtue and wisdom,
whereas justice is in the camp of vice and ignorance. As the dialogue evolves, it is
deduced that in general the good and wise man tries to get the better only of those
unlike him, whereas the bad and ignorant man tries to get the better of those both
like and unlike him.
Socrates points out ·that the just man tries to get the better
only of the unjust, whereas the unjust man tries to get the better of everyone. From
this it is concluded that the just man is good and wise, while the unjust man is bad
and ignorant.
Next, Socrates, Glaucon, and Thrasymachus discuss whether injustice might still
be mightier than justice .
Socrates makes several points :
first, for one city to
become stronger than another, it needs justice, since justice is wisdom . Second, the
members of any group with a common enterprise must act justly toward one another to
be successful, since injustice implants hatred and leads to faction.
Third , just as
injustice makes any group an enemy both to anyone around it and to itself, injustice
makes a man not only unable to act, but also an enemy to others and to himself .
Lastly, whereas the just man is a friend of the gods, who are just, the unjust man is
the enemy of the gods .
Finally, they discuss the life of the unjust man, and whether it might be happier than the life of the just man . Socrates points out that the work of the soul cannot be accomplished if the virtue of the soul is not present .
Since justice is the
virtue of the soul, and injustice is the vice, the just man lives well , and therefore
happily , whereas the unjust man lives poorly , and therefore wretchedly.
They conclude that justice has been shown to be more profitable than injustice.
Socrates, like Glaucon in Book II, expresses his dissatisfaction with the dialogue with Thrasymachus :

in Hades if he has been unjust .
So he defines justice as "speaking the truth and
giving back what one takes." (33ld) .
Polemarchus refines his father's definition by citing the poet Simonides, who
said that it is just to give what is owed to everyone.
Polemarchus interprets this
as meaning that it is just to help one's friends and harm one's enemies (332b) .
Polemarchus later talks of justice as being useful in contracts and partnerships
(333a). Later in the Republic, Socrates addresses the question of in what situations
actions might be considered just or unjust : "--either concerning the acquisition of
money, o r the care of the body , or something political, or concerning private contracts" (443e) .
It seems that justice is spoken o f as concerning honesty and good
faith in agreements, and respect of others ' property.
In any case, the examples of
situations in which questions of justice arise almost always have something to do
with relations in a community .
It makes sense that questions of justice should come up in the discussion of a
pol~tical community .
Aristotle has this to say about justice in the Nicomachean Ethics

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Ta

The noble
Ka.A.a
and the just
a1Karn
),
what are studied by p olitical science, have so much disagreement
and variation as to seem to be by custom ( V01J£tl
) , and not by
nature ( ¢G0El ) • (I , iii, 2-3)

This is our dissatisfaction as well.
A closer examination of the arguments in the
dialogue may give us clues about the nature of the dilemma at hand.
Even though justice remains undefined, we can understand from Book I what kind
of thing is called justice, and what the attitudes toward it are. When Socrates asks
Cephalus what the greatest benefit is from possessing great wealth, he says it is
"not having to cheat or lie to any man against one's will" and being able to make
sacrifices to the gods and repay one's depts (331b).
This is how the discussion of
justice is introduced. At Cephalus' age, he is afraid of the evil that may await him

Such disagreement comes up in Book I of the Republic:
Thrasymachus and Glaucon are
suggesting, as Aristotle says, that justice is not by nature, but only by convention.
The first book of the Republic seems at first to be concerned not with politics,
but with ethics:
the members of the dialogue are trying to decide o~the best way of
life . But it seems significant that Aristotle's Ethics and Politics are so closely
related to it.
In the beginnings of each, Aristotle says that every human activity
aims at some good.
In the Politics, he adds that every group and therefore every
city is instituted in order to attain some good .
Aristotle also says in the Ethics
that the aim of the study of politics is the highest good, o r happiness (I, iv, 1).
The connection between ethical and political considerations is even closer in the
Republic.
The best way of life, which is sought in the first book of the Republic,
is the one which obtains happiness.
This clearly explains the coincident political
nature of the Republic .
The question at hand is, what role does a political good,
justice have in the ethical consideration of obtaining this best way of life?
Cephalus and Polemarchus profess to agree with Socrates that justice is necessary f or the good life. This fact may account for their differences o f opinion with
Socrates about how justice should be defined .
For although they differ greatly with
Socrates about how one ought to act towards other people, they want to say that how
they think people should act is the just way to act.
For example, Polemarchus believes that one often needs to injure people, specifically one's enemies.
Since he
wants to say that one also needs to act justly, he must work his belief that one
should injure othe rs into his definition of justice.
This is where he comes into
conflict with Socrates, and this illustrates how Socrates comes into conflict with
political life as it operates in Athens.
Thra symachus does not believe that justice is needed for happiness; in fact, he
thinks that it hinders the pursuit of the good life.
Ironically , this belief would
make Thrasymachus less reluctant to agree on a definition of justice with Socrates in
terms of a code of behavior towards other people:
Thrasymachus w0uld not consider
that code of behavior a good guide for how one ought to behave.
So Polemarchus
winces at excluding the injury of othe rs from a definition of justice because that
would make his 'perfect man' -- the one who acts as Polemarchus thinks one should act
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"Before finding out what we are considering at first -- what the
just is -- I let go of that and pursued the consideration of
whether it is vice and lack of learning, o r wisdom and virtue.
And later, when in its turn an argument that injustice is more
profitable than justice fell my way, I could not restrain myself
from leaving the other and going after this one, so that now as a
result of the discussion I know nothing.
So long as I do not
know what the just is, I shall hardly know whether it is a virtue
or not, and whether the one who has it is unhappy or happy." (354c)

�doesn't mind being called unjust.
The positions of the interlocutors are analogous to those in the Gorgias . 4
Socrates speaks in that dialogue with Gorgias, Polus, and Callicles successively,
about, among other things, justice .
Polus accuses Gorgias, and later Callicles accuses Polu~ and Gorgi~s, .of being shamed by Socrates, and of not saying what they
really believe about Justice . Callicles claims that by following their instinct for
most o~ the argum~nt, a~d then be~ng shamed by Socrates and popular opinion to say
something they don t believe, Gorgias and Polus were forced to contradict themselves
(Gorgias, 482de).
In a similar way, Thrasymachus could claim, Cephalus was made afraid by thoughts
~f H~des,. and Polemarchus was shamed by popular views about justice into saying that
Justice is good.
But the rest of their views contradict this .
Callicles and
Thrasymachus, on the other hand choose to be unintimidated by commonly held beliefs,
rather than conclude that their original premises were wrong.
Ironically, even though Callicles and Thrasymachus are more difficult to refute
(if indeed they are ever refuted), their kind of interlocution is better, from a
philosophic standpoint .
If one thinks that their views are wrong, one is tempted to
think that it is correct that they should be silenced by shame.
But the philosophical pro~ess of dialectic, which seeks truth, requires that no premises, such as popular beliefs, be accepted on faith in such a way that they silence what could be investigated for truth or falsehood. So it is easier to determine that truth or falsehood of beliefs which, when presented, are unaffected by what others think, and
therefore are not inconsistent with themselves. Callicles and Thrasymachus strive to
put forward views of this kind.
When Socrates , praising Callicles for not being
ashamed and for speaking freely, tells him "not to slacken at all, so that it will
really become clear how we should live" (Gorgias, 487ab, 492d, 494cd) , and when he
urges Thrasymachus to stick to what he has said (Republic, 345b) and praises him for
"speaki~g the truth as it seems to you"
(348e - 349a), he is not sarcastic or mocking,
as at first seems, but sincere .
But Thrasymachus is equally justified in the restrictions he makes on Socrates.
Thrasymachus requires that Socrates not define justice as "the needful, or the helpful , or the profitable, or the gainful , or the advantageous" (336d) . Socrates claims
tha~ this restriction is unreasonable, and that Thrasymachus is forbidding him from
saying what Thrasymachus knows Socrates thinks the definition of justice is . Actually, Thrasymachus is forbidding Socrates from expressing his p r econceived judgement
about justice instead of defining it. The task should be, Thrasymachus seems to say,
to define justice "clearly and precisely" (336d), and then to decide whether it is
advantageous or good . This is exactly the point, quoted earlier, that Socrates makes
at the end of Book I.
Thrasymachus has his own ideas about justice which might be clearer if he would
~ot assume, _ as Socrates does, that justice is advantageous.
He tries to express his
ideas through his definitions of justice .
Thrasymachus' words seem incoherent and
contradictory at times. However, a sympathetic treatment of them which tries to un derstand "truth as he sees it" can reveal a coherent and plausible alternative to
Socrates' assumption .
The sense in which Thrasymachus refers to 'justice' in his definitions is unclear. When he defines justice as the "advantage of the stronger", Socrates rightly
responds, "First I must learn what you mean, ... for, as it is, I don't yet understand·
338c) .
Does Thrasymachus refer to what justice is, or how it is referred
to, or how it should be described? Cleitophon and Polemarchus are equally confused
about his meaning (340bc).
Thrasymachus' explanation seems to say that justice is created by whatever laws
those in power ('the stronger') put down for their own advantage. He seems to think
this is appropriate .
Yet in his second definition of justice, that it is someone

else's advantage, he regards it as something to be avoided . Both definitions seem to
express his point of view, but the second violates Thrasymachus' own restrictions on
how justice can be defined.
Glaucon's speech in Book II is just the kind of sympathetic treatment I referred
to, and he cleans up some of the difficulties with Thrasymachus' definitions .
Glaucon sets out his first task:
"I' 11 tell what kind of thing they say justice is
and where it comes from" (358c).
According to Glaucon, the greatest good is doing
injustice .
Justice was established by the weak, who could not carry out injustice .
Justice, then, is by convention ( v0µ~ ) alone .
It is a compact of people, agree ing not to commit injustice to one another. The strongest men, who are able to commit injustice, would be mad to set down a compact agreeing to be just, because it
clearly would not be to their advantage.
Another problem understanding Thrasymachus' argument comes from his idea of a
'ruler', which is clearly different from Socrates'. Socrates speaks of the ruler as
the person who has the job of ruling. He clearly thinks of ruling as an art .
This
is why he can compare the ruler's activities, which Thrasymachus says must work to
his own advantage, to the practice of an art.
If Thrasymachus thinks of a ruler not
as an artisan, but as the person in a position of power, it is hardly fair to apply
standards which apply to artisans to the ruler Thrasymachus speaks of, unless
Socrates can show that this is not the nature of rulers. As it is, Socrates' definition of a ruler seems to be inherently linked with his ideas about justice , and both
would be proved together.
Just as a doctor is a p r actitioner of the art of caring
for the bodies of others, the ruler is the practitioner of the art of caring for the
souls of others .
He is therefore a dispenser of justice, and does not consider his
own advantage.
Socrates chooses to view artisans as rulers of the objects of their arts .
He
also introduces the innovation of the wage-earner's art to explain what benefit
artisans get from the practice of their art.
If rulers are not as he assumes they
are, but do consider their own advantage as Thrasymachus claims, then we get a more
telling picture of Socrates' view of the arts. This view would explain, as Socrates'
does not, why conflicts often arise between the motives of the wage-earner's art and
the art which benefits others.
No one hears 'we do it all for you' without some
amount of skepticisns.
In the Sophist , the Eleatic Stranger divides arts into two classes:
the productive arts and the acquisitive arts (Sophist, 219ab) .
In the Republic, Socrates
mentions as examples only productive arts, except the wage -earner's art.
Unlike
Socrates' examples of art, the acquisitive arts are not creative or servicing, but
are coercive.
Socrates' view of the arts excludes consideration of these coercive
arts.
For example, it is hard to imagine that the hunter, the p r actitione r of an
acquisitive art according to the Stranger, is a) the ruler of those he hunts, and b)
one who looks to the benefit of those he hunts.
This is the substance of
Thrasymachus' shepherd example~ and clearly Thrasymachus' art of ruling must lie
among the acquisitive arts.
The innovation of the wage- earner's art is meant to show how just actions can
coincide with personal benefit : if the artisan is just and looks to others' advantage, he himself is also benefitted by the wage-earner's art; if he is unjust, he is
not benefitted by the wage-earner's art. Thrasymachus would say that this benefit is
by convention, and his 'stronger man' is meant to illustrate the possibility that a
man could be separate from the material consequences of his justice or injustice.
Thrasymachus proposes that for this man, there is no advantage to justice and no disadvantage to injustice, after the conventional advantages and disadvantages have been
taken away.
Th~ material consequences of justice are what Thrasymachus and Glaucon
want to call convention:
laws and common views that label justice
'honorable'.
So
by pointing out that the 'stronger man might err', Socrates unwittingly avoids the

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�view he should, and eventually does, defend:
that justice is natural (
¢UCTEl ) ,
and is naturally good.
It seems to me a wrong way to argue against injustice to say
that no one could ever execute it efficiently, because this still admits that if it
could be done, it would be profitable.
Glaucon' s Gyges ' ring story · gives a better illustration of this principle .
Glaucon wants to know if justice is, as Socrates believes, a good in and of itself,
not just for what it can get someone:
"For I desire to hear what each [justice and
injustice] is and what power it has all alone by itself when it is in the soul -dismissing its wages and its consequences." (358b) . The man wearing Gyges' ring of fers this opportunity .
He "escapes the notice of all gods and humans", as Socrates
later says (427d) , and so he does not have to worry about the material consequences
of justice or injustice. Glaucon speculates that any man wearing the ring (presuming
he would do exactly what is to his best advantage) would not bother with justice at
all.
Thrasymachus asserts not only that injustice is more advantageous than justice,
but also that it is virtuous and wise.
The difference between profit or advantage
and what is fair or good, which Socrates emphasizes (348e), is unclear. He may want
to point out the distinction which is made between what seems to be advantageous o r
what is considered to be advantageous, and what is actually advantageous.
In any
case, Socrates makes his final challenges to Thrasymachus in response to these assertions.
Socrates first gives an argument to show that justice is virtue and wisdom,
drawn from a comparison between artisans and just and unjust men.
He seems to assume, again, that artisans are unconcerned with justice and injustice, and that justice accompanies all forms of knowledge or expertise, by nature. In this, he presupposes that justice a) is associated with knowledge (what he is trying to show at the
moment) and b) is natural (which is his fundamental point) .
So, these presuppositions beg the question in more ways than one.
The definition of justice still in question , that justice is someone else's advantage while injustice is one's own advantage, implies what Thrasymachus asserts
about the goodness of justice .
This definition clearly sets out the more specific
question:
Is others' advantage necessarily my own? When Socrates talks about people's actions in a group, he addresses this more specific question most directly.
Socrates first tries to show that justice is necessary for a city to act (justly
or unjustly).
This is because his first argument supposedly shows that justice is
wisdom, and so since wisdom is clearly needed for the city to act, so is justice.
Thrasymachus says he doesn't doubt that first argument, the one that equates justice
with wisdom and virtue .
Socrates doesn't seem to, either .
If he did think that he
had adequately proven that justice is wisdom and virtue, then he wouldn't feel compelled to go on, as he does, and give arguments for why justice is mighty, and why
the just man is happy. When Socrates gives the example of the group of people with a
common goal, he is making two important assertions.
First, he is asserting that the
completely unjust group would be unsuccessful.
If the group is completely unjust,
besides having an unjust common purpose, its members would be unjust to one another.
So the group would be unable to accomplish anything.
Socrates' second, implied assertion is that justice is necessary for external
order. Complete injustice in a group, we have said, includes injustice of each mem ber in the group towards every other .
Order within the group is necessary for the
group to accomplish anything, as Socrates first asserts.
If we consider the group,
then, injustice in any member of the group disrupts the internal order of the group
by creating faction and hatred.
If we consider one member of the group, his unjust
actions disrupt the order outside of him, his external order. This point is evident
from what has been understood from the beginning about how justice is spoken of: If
justice concerns partnerships or agreements, or respecting others , then injustice in

a person's actions ·clearly disrupts the order outside that person.
We also accept
this when we consider the fundamental questio~ of whether justice, a political good,
is also an ethical good.
F r om these assertions about what injustice accomplishes in groups, Socrates
makes some conclusions about what it must accomplish in individuals
"And when it is in one man, I suppose it will do the
same thing which it naturally accomplishes.
First, it will make him unable to act, because he is
at faction and not of one mind with himself and,
second, an enemy both to himself and to just men,
won't it?"(352a)
Just as complete injustice in the group disturbs external as well as internal order ,
so it does in the individual.
Thrasymachus does not discern some errors in Socrates' reasoning; or, at least,
he does not bother to challenge Socrates at this point in the dialogue .
Socrates
does not address whether a group could accomplish an unjust act while its members are
just towards one another.
This seems perfectly plausible, and a limitation of this
sort would make Thrasymachus' view less ridiculous.
Thrasymachus could argue that
perhaps justice is a (slightly) limited good. Occasionally, the unjust person has to
act justly towards others to accomplish his eventual advantage .
This seems reasonable is we consider how Thrasymachus' view was compared to Polemarchus' earlier.
Whereas Polemarchus believed in helping friends and hurting enemies, Thrasymachus saw
no reason to help even friends.
But if we consider the logical qualification now
that Thrasymachus would in fact help others if it were to his ultimate advantage, the
positions of the two do not seem so far apart .
Thrasymachus and Polemarchus would
probably have defined their 'friends' similarly.
This also agrees with the earlier
point that Polemarchus' and Thrasymachus' views of justice are not so far apart, but
seem to be, since Polemarchus allows himself to be shamed by popular belief.
Does the small addition of acting expediently in this way really detract from
Thrasymachus' doctrine of selfishness in the way that Socrates implies it does? Actually, it seems to make it even more dangerous.
Should it be called 'justice' when
the unjust person, a member of an unjust group, acts justly toward others in the
group in order that they might carry out the ultimately unjust acts?
Just as
Aristotle says that acting virtuously is virtue only if it is for the right reasons ,
acting justly should be called 'justice' only if it is for the right reasons.
It
seems, then, that there should be a distinction between enforced or expedient 'justice' and willful, enjoyable enactment of justice. And if Socrates wants to assert
that justice is good, then he shouldn't admit that this former kind of justice is for
the right reasons.
So if this kind of action is not just, then.the person who acts that way
the
person who, like the members of the unjust group, acts justly toward others for his
own benefit -- may still be Thrasymachus' completely unjust man.
In fact, he seems
to be the completely unjust man of whom Glaucon spoke (36lab) . He is even more formidable than the man who seems unjust, since he gives the appearance of being just
and friendly toward others .
Furthermore, Soc r ates very easily assumes that the individual and the group can
be compared.
He makes such comparisons throughout the Republic, as is seen when he
compares the 'states' of the man's soul to various kinds of states.
The facility
with which Plato compares man and state may have something to do with his idea of the
coincidence of the studies of ethics and politics. Here, Socrates shows that justice
within the group is internal order and that it is needed to accomplish anything. he
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�his external order in the group, whether the group be a gang of thieves or society as
a whole.
He presumes that justice in the individual means internal order . By talking in this way about justice, he presupposes what he wants to prove, again -- that
being just is advantageous, or virtuous; that it promotes the health of the soul.
Socrates needs to show that what he calls justice in the soul is the same as the justice which rules a person's actions toward others.
We have said that Socrates failed to recognize, or at least failed to mention ,
the possibility of a group with unjust goals, but internal order ~
We have observed
that the 'justice' accounting for the order in the group which we have said is expedient may not deserve to be called justice at all .
If the comparison can be made,
the co rres~a~ ding individual would be one who is just to others, yet has an 'unjust'
(if we use Socrates' term for 'unordered') soul. This is exactly the kind of person
Thrasymachus suggests can exist.
Socrates has not answered Thrasymachus' challenge, but he has silenced him. At
first we thought Thrasymachus, like Callicles, spoke freely, and was not ashamed of
popular belief.
But we see that at 350d, when Socrates claims to have shown
Thrasymachus'
just
man
to
be
"unlearned
and
bad",
Thrasymachus
blushes.
Thrasymachus, like Gorgias and Polus, is a rhetor, and ultimately concerned with appearing wise and good.
The possibility that what Socrates implies may be true, and
that Socrates understands this disconcerts him. Thrasymachus, too, as Glaucon says,
"like a snake, has been charmed more quickly than he should have been ." (358b).
Glaucon and Adeimantus take up_ the argument which Thrasymachus seems to have
abandoned. The response which arises out of their challenge, when, in the beginning
of Book II, they restore Thrasymachus' argument better than he probably could have,
takes the form of the "city in speech".
It takes its general idea from this last
comparison of justice in the group and in the individual.
The idea of studying a city to understand the nature of justice in the individual appears at 368e:
"So then, perhaps there would be more justice in the bigger and
it would be easier to observe closely .
If you want, first we'll
investigate what justice is like in the cities .
Then we'll also
go on to consider it in individuals, considering the likeness of
the bigger in the idea of the littler?"
After the city has been formed, Socrates calls upon the others to complete the search
for justice and injustice and their natures :
"In the next place , get y ourself an adequate light somewhere; and
look yourself -- and call in your brother and Polemarchus and the
others -- whether we can somehow see where the justice might be
and where the injustice, in what they dif fer from one another,
and which the man who's going to be happy must possess, whether
it escapes the notice of all gods and humans or not." (427d)
This is asserted again at 435a:
"Then ", I said, " is that which one calls the same, whether
it's bigger or smaller, unlike or like in that respect in which
it's called the same?"
"Like," he said .
"Then the just man will not be any different from the just
city with respect to the form itself of justice, but will be like
it."

"Yes", he said, "he will be like it."
The city is supposed to be bigger than the man, but the same in form.
So after the
city has been formed, wherever justice is found in it, justice in the man might be
found in the same place.
What is more, justice may be of the same nature and may
produce the same effects in the man as in the city.
When Glaucon and Adeimantus begin the scrutiny of the city they have produced,
they assume that if it has been correctly founded by them, then it must be perfectly
good.
Therefore, they conclude, it must be "wise, courageous, and just" (427e) .
Again, it is easy to understand the 'goodness' of wisdom and courage for a city, i.e.
how they are beneficial to it in every way, but it is questionable whether justice is
necessarily good. Their conclusion, then, seems unfair.
When they later equate injustice with "extreme evil - doing" (434a), they may be
justified, however .
They reason that an extreme evil - doing, something which would
cause great harm to the city, would be for the members of one class to try to get
into another class.
Injustice is extreme evil-doing in the sense that it disturbs
the internal order of the city, -;-s Socrates has affirmed.
Therefore, they conclude,
this must be injustice.
Its opposite, minding one's own business , must be justice .
This makes sense with our original understanding of what was being called 'justice'.
They are cautious about the switch from consideration of the city to consideration of the man, and address it after they have defined justice in the city.
(434d) :
"If there are still any doubts in our soul," I said, "we
could reassure ourselves completely by testing our justice in the
light of the vulgar standards."
"Which ones?"
"For example, if, concerning this city and the man who by
nature and training is like it, we were required to come to an
agreement about whether, upon accepting a deposit of gold or silver, such a man would seem to be the one to filch it -- do you
suppose anyone would suppose that he would be the man to do it
and not rather those who are not such as he is?"
"No one would," he said.
"And as for temple robberies, thefts, and betrayals, either
of comrades in private or cities in public, wouldn't this man be
beyond them?"
"Yes , he would be beyond them."
"And, further, he would in no way whatsoever be faithless in
oaths o r other agreements."
"Of course not . '.
'
Glaucon wants to believe that justice is good. He knows that the man he and the others have created is good, for he is their own . They simply presume that the man with
the o rdered soul the parts of which act justly toward one another is just towards
others as well.
They go on to give other examples of injustice that their perfect
man surely wou ldn ' t commit.
Two points about this section: first, Socrates carefully qualifies his statements to cover all forms of injustice, in the appropriately limited sense that it
must be understood in orde r for the Thrasymachan argument to make sense.
He says
that clearly this man won't do these injustices either to "comrades in private or
cities in public". As we have said, Thrasymachus might well modify his ideas to allow justice to comrades in private. Socrates himself pointed out that in order for a
So
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�all would agree that one should be just to one's comrades in private .
Socrates now
asserts as well that this man would also necessarily be just to cities in public .
This is much closer to the realm in question, the realm of the ruler.
Thrasymachus
believes that certain men, those who are able, should rule and benefit as much as
they can from it.
Second, Socrates sets the stage rheto rically for Glaucon and the · listeners to
react in the way he wants them to.
The "vulgar standards" (442e) are dgscribed by
the word cpopT l dis , used of arguments to call them "vulgar" or "low".
Socrates
seems to imply rhetorically that the consideration of whether the internally ordered
person might not also be externally just is hardly worth their time.
They again reverse the association between acting justly and having a
well - orde red soul at 444d, when they presume that the man who acts justly will also
naturally have an ordered soul:
"Then, in its turn," I said, "isn't to produce justice [by
acting justly] to establish the parts of the soul in a relation
of mastering, and being mastered by, one another that is
according to nature, while to produce injustice is to establish a
relation of ruling, and being ruled by, one another that is
contrary to nature?"
"Entirely so," he said.
The comparison between health of the body and health of the soul is complete: acting
justly produces justice , and if justice is the health of the soul, then acting justly
naturally produces a relation of ruling in the parts of the soul which is healthy
according to nature .
They agree at 443b that their dream "has reached perfect fulfillment", and at
443c Socrates says,
"And in truth justice was, as it seems, something of this
sort; however, not with respect to a man's minding his external
business, but with respect to what is within, with respect to
what truly concerns him and his own. He doesn't let each part in
him mind other people's business o r the three class es in the soul
meddle with each other, but really sets his own house in good
order and rules himself."
We have seen that Socrates' words may not have adequately resolved the dilemma of
whether what he says here is so.
If we ask, however, what Plato's position is with regard to the ethica l value of
justice, the answer is much less clear .
First of all , the Republic is fuil of con t radicto r y ideas of justice -- Plato is clearly aware of t he difficulty of the dilemma at hand.
For example, even though, as I have pointed out, Socrates does not dis cuss the possibility of an unjust group whose members are just towards one another,
the republic Joe? have created is exactly this kind of group . The city has gone from
being a "city of utmost necessity" (369d) to being one of luxury, or as Socrates puts
it , from being healthy to being feverish ( 3 7 2e ) . To support these luxuries, the city
would need an army of guardians to take lands away from neighbors since the land
which would have formerly sustained the city would no longer be adequate .
Clear ly,
taking what belongs to others is not minding one's own business .
It is unclear,
then, whether this city is, as Socrates says at 427e, "wise, moderate, and just", as
well as good.
The guardians themselves present another difficulty.
Far from being like the
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. man :
they must be "gentle to their own and cruel [ xaA.sno65 ] to their enemies"
(3 75c). This claim comes from the same Socrates who tells Polemarchus at 338d, "Nor
is injuring, in fact, the work of good, but of its opposite."
Similarly, descriptions of Thrasymachus indicate Plato's acknowledgement of the
existence of people who can get things done through the unjust use of force .
At
336b, for example, just after the mention of "men who have a high opinion of what
they can do", Thrasymachus is compared to a wild beast as he flings himself into the
discussion .
Other such passages occur at 340d, 343a, and 344d.
Thrasymachus is
eventually subdued, in a way , but Callicles in the Gorgias off ers an even better ex ample .
Not only does he hold his own in arguing against justice, but he may well be
the best candidate for one who could carry out injustice completely.
There seems to
be a link between the ability to carry out injustice and the shamelessness in argument which Callicles shows, and the others lack in varying degrees . This link may be
conscience.
Plato, despite Socrates' rhetoric about justice, does not deny in his
characterizations the possibility of people lacking conscience to certain degrees.
To point out contradiction, however, is not to say that Plato does not have anything coherent to say about justice. Plato acknowledges the difficulty of the dilemma .
He also presents evidence and ideas which can help the reader get closer to
truth.
The common views of political good -- justice -- and individual or ethical good
-- happiness -- are such that they necessarily oppose one another . As Glaucon points
out, justice is seen as something necessary for the . function of the state but undesirable in itself for the individual.
Happiness and internal order, o r the 'good
life', are thought to come chiefly with material things, pleasure, and power or honor, as Plato shows through the characters in his dialogues.
As Callicles points out
(Gorgias, 491e) a man who is enslaved at all by justice or temperance for example
cannot be happy .
If justice is defined as not trying to get the better of others
materially but rather honoring agreements, and yet material betterment of the individual is necessary for happiness, then justice of necessity gets in the way of happiness.
By revising the conceptions of the goals of a human being, the goals of a state,
and the relati onship between human being and state, Plato resolves the tension be tween justice and happiness. As Aristotle does in his political treatise, Plato as serts the goal of the state to be the happiness· of its citizens.
This is the substance of the argument that the ruler thinks not of his own benefit, but of the benefit of those he rules. This claim establishes a first like between ethics and politics. They both aim at the same thing. If humans are political by nature, they naturally need the companionship of other humans and organized association with them to
attain happiness.
Plato's view of human goals completes the connection between ethics and politics.
If human goals are concerned not with external goods, but with internal perfection, then justice no longer interferes with the pursuit of those goals.
Take
again the e xample of Socrates' suggestion near the end of Book IV
"And in truth justice was, as it seems, something of this
sort; however, not with respect to a man's minding his external
business, but with respect to what is within, with respect to
what truly concerns him and his own . He doesn't let each part in
him mind other people's business or the three classes in the soul
meddle with each other, but really sets his own house in good
order and rules himself; he arranges himself, becomes his own
f r iend, and harmonizes the three parts, exactly like the three
notes in a harmonic scale, lowest, highest and middle.
And if
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�becomes entirely one from many, moderate and harmonized.
Then
and only then, he acts, if he does act in some way -- either con cerning the acquisition of many, or the care of the body , or
something political, or concerning private contracts.
In all
these actions he believes and names a just and fine action one
that preserves and helps to produce this condition, and wisdom
the knowledge that supervises ·this action, while he believes and
names an unjust action one that undoes this condition, and lack
of learning, in its turn, the opinion that supervises ~his
action." (443c)
If "what truly concerns him and his own" is what is within a human being , then jus tice no longer interferes with happiness .
Aristotle accordingly draws the distinction between good and bad kinds of selfishness . "Self- love" is a term of reproach for people
when they assign to themselves the larger share of money , honors,
or bodily pleasures; since these are the things which most men
desire and set their hearts on as being the greates goods and
which accordingly they complete with each other to obtain . (Nie .
Eth, IX, viii, 4).
Such competition necessitates injustice . The person who zealously competes to obtain
the 'noble'
TO KaA.6\J
) , that is , who seeks to perfect his soul, is still
self-loving, but in a good way .
Aristotle says (IX , viii, 6) , "he therefore who
loves and indulges the dominant part of himself [Plato 's calculating part of the
soul] is a lover of self in the fullest degree ."
This person, moreover, does not
need to interfere with others for his perfection .
With such an unde rstanding of how happiness is obtained , the connection between
politics and ethics can be completed .
Not only is it not particularly advantageous
to be unjust, as it was when happiness was thought to b e achieved through external
goods, but it is particularly advantageous to be just .
That the good of the individual as a member of society is equivalent to political good is a necessary consequence of man being a political animal. However, with this new conception of happi ness, Plato can assert also that the good of the individual as a human being is
equivalent to political good . Justice, as Socrates says, is something internal . So
political good, justice , is equated with ethical good , virtue , just as the concerns
of politics and ethics were acknowledge to be the same .
The problem remains of how these revisions should be viewed . At first it seemed
as if the ethical value of justice could go either way . Justice could be thought of
as good o r bad practice, with certain logical consequences following each choice .
Glaucon and Thrasymachus presented a plausible alte r native to Socrates' assumption
that justice is good . We have demonstrated that Socrates' answer to this alternative
does not have the force of a deductive proof , and that this and may contradictions in
the text continue to point out the difficulty of the delimma . Finally , it seems that
notwithstanding his acknowledgement of the difficulty of the dilemma , Plato does give
a coherent answer to t he dilemma.
To ask how Plato's revisions should b e viewed is
to ask what Plato's intent is in the answer these revisions form .
The very least that Plato 's answer to the dilemma affords is an equally plausi ble alternative to Glaucon's picture and Thrasymachus ' view of the character of jus tice . But the insufficiency of this kind of answer induces us to search further . We
have said that some, Glaucon and Adeimantus included, desire to hear justice praised
and injustice blamed . Motives may be noble by Plato's standar ds and may come from,
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some reassurance.
They may be ignoble and may come from, for example, someone who
wants a reason to be just, but would otherwise be inclined to Glaucon's belief that
justice is simply a convention and should be avoided. Plato and Aristotle exaggerate
the importance of the state, and so have to extol justice, without which the state
cannot function, even more forcefully.
The idea of justice in the Republic which
Socrates presents is a logical and convincing account, elegant in its conception . It
therefore provides a comfortable way to believe justice to be advantageous, for those
who want to believe this.
The myth at the end of the Gorgias fulfills a similar function.
In a question
of great importance and difficulty, where obvious proof is lacking, people naturally
seek answers which rely on faith. Callicles alone, we remember, has been unconvinced
by Socrates' assertions about justice and the just way of life .
Socrates then de scribes Hades and judgement of souls after death.
In Hades, souls are stripped o f
the body . When he who judges souls views a soul stripped of its body, he can detect
in it how just or unjust the person has been over the course of his life.
Acts of
injustice appear in the souls as scars or contortions. Souls which are found to have
committed "ultimate injustices" (Gorgias, 525c) are incurable and must suffer vengeance in Hades for all times. Socrates addresses Callicles after offering this myth :
"Now perhaps you think these things I've said are a tale,
like an old wife's, and you despise them.
And certainly it
wouldn't be at all surprising to despise them, if we should
search and somehow manage to find something better and truer.
But, as it is, you see that the three of you who are wisest among
the Greeks now, you and Polus and Gorgias -- you three can't man age to show that we should live any other life than this, which
is shown to be profitable for there too . No; among so many arguments, when the others are being refuted, only this argument is
stable -- that we must avoid doing injustice more than suffering
it, and above all a man must practice not seeming good, but being
good, in private and public life; if someone becomes evil in some
way, he is to be punished, and this is the second good after being just -- to become just and pay justice in being punished." (527ab)
The myth first of all confirms the fears of those who, like Cephalus, need a reason
to be just, such as fear of Hades . But it also gives an account of damage which oc curs to the soul through injustice. That justice is the health of the soul is thereby made more believable .
Plato knows that justice is necessary for political society, and therefore some "stable" argument for justice is needed, even if it requires
faith.
In the same way, the Republic argument will fulfill this function by satisfying a need for some believable . account.
This is not to say that the philosophical value of the Republic is in any way
diminished by this function.
The thoughtful reader who seeks a kind of cognition
higher than faith, that is, knowledge, about the ethical value of justice, is
challenged.
The form of the dialogue rhetorically and dramatically presents the
re ader with different and conflicting ideas about justice, and evidence about the
nature of justice.
These ideas and evidence are the substance of the insight Plato
has to offer on the ethical value of justice, and it is through them that the careful
reader can come closer to knowledge of the truth.

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2
3
4
5

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The Republic of Plato, trans .

Allan Bloom, New York:

Aristotle's Nichomachean Ethics, trans.

H. Rackham.

Aristotle's Politics, trans. H. Rackham.

Basic Books, 1968.

Jana Giles

(Loeb)

Plato's Gorgias, trans.

Terence Irwin, New York:

Plato's Sophist, trans.

Harold North Fowler.

Greek- English Lexicon of Liddell and Scott .

(Loeb)

ask Newton

Oxford, 1979.

(Loeb)
Curtains walk
out from the windowa fan calling
wind's steady sound
outside sky's hazy
stuffily sultry
humid day
my eyes pain in the glare
somewher e a poet breeds
word and soul f renzied, watching
hairs glitter gold on his dark arm
rubble rattles angrily at me
as I kick it
down the slope from its ancient broken home;
roofless ghosts roam
sometime it will stop, and forgive me .
ask Newton : his head was dark though the
prism cast long colored lights,
bar red and striped
grate - like .
my ceiling is fish - scaled arcs
s tolen f r om a goggle - eyed
blue - brained damsel of the sea :
she invited me to go dancing.
Shall I scream and beat the eggs?
(my blender keeps the tune)
tonight, darling,
/
/
we are having souffle, pit~, rose, Perrier and the Frobishers
white lace, green money
the dog peed on the rug again honey
don't touch me I might scream
my bites are mean
you'll get gangrene

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�I tittered as I walked
Ha!
the poet's editor smiled
we walked arm in arm
'til the poppies and Noah's 40 days
drowned me
victim of an impossible

jealous aching unending dream
children weeping in the dust;
a swollen moon lumbered red-faced
across the horizon,
raging nightmared sleep:
in the hot tropical night
anacondas wrap their cool supple waists
around Yeats' steaming neck;
he peeled pears beneath the moonlit mosquito net.
Tell Dostoyev?ky the calico man is corning .

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''Man is Directed to God as an End Which
Surpasses the Grasp of Reason''
Dan Touey

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The first question of Thomas Aquinas's Summa Theologica asks whether any discipline other than the philosophic ones, whose rule and domain is reason, is required
by human beings. As the beginning of an inquiry it has special importance, and not
in the sense that it deals with matters that must be taken care of before other, more
vital questions can be answered.
In the question and in the way Thomas chooses to
answer it is implied the difficulty that may have induced him to undertake his work
in the first place and that will determine the manner and content of most of the vital parts of it:
the opposition of faith and reason.
The positions of the Ob jections are these, that man should not seek things outside the domain of reason,
since it is the only domain in which he can have any real certainty; and that the
philosophical disciplines deal with everything that is, even God, so that any other
discipline would be superfluous.
Thomas answers by saying that "man is directed to
God as to an end that surpasses the grasp of his reason." This first interchange is
the true beginning of Aquinas' s work, and in it are implied the conflicts and
questions with which it will be Thornas's onerous duty to deal.
Thomas will not attempt to deal with faith fundamentally until the end of his
work, and hence it may be wrong to juxtapose faith and reason explicitly in this incipient question.
But when he does attempt some kind of definition of faith he says
that it is an assent of the intellect to the divine truth at the command of the will,
which has been endowed with grace, that is, moved by God.
The intellect then, and
how this term is actually employed in this context is not altogether clear, must in a
sense be overcome for faith to occur.
Here Thomas is saying that there are some
things necessary for man to believe that the intellect, in itself, will not consent
to; and that there is no such thing as an argument, or demonstration, that can lead
one to believe the things that must be arrived at through faith.
Reason does not require, like faith, that man overcome himself to accept what is
true. With reason, we can say that things are apparent, that they simply are, and,
to a certain extent, are undeniable.
Oneof the reasons for this surety is that we
can posit in man a certain faculty, reason, to which there are certain corresponding
objects, or principles, that are immediately clear and true, or can be shown to be so
by investigation.
Therefore I can say that things that are equal to the same are
equal to one another, and su6h a statement will be accepted by another because it
appeals, in some way, to reason. The truth of this may be a question, but at least
we can formulate such a faculty and its objects, and they or something like them seem
consistent with the common nature of man.
But I cannot posit such a faculty of
faith; there is nothing in the intellect o r the consciousness of man that I can say
the objects of faith correspond to. There is nothing in the nature of man that can
move him to the kind of belief that is of faith; he must be moved by the intervention
of God.
And so in the Summa, though faith and reason are both ways of knowing what
exists, of gaining knowledge, it is only with reason that we have a clear idea of how
the process occurs.
At least afterwards we can trace a construction of reason that
seems to fit with our nature. This we cannot do with faith.
So what is it that leads man, to whom reason is in a sense natural and easy, to
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�intellect, and what he cannot arrive at himself but must posit an outside influence,
the grace of God, to receive? Why faith? Why isn't the argument of Objections one
and two, Article one, Question one, of the Summa enough for Thomas?
It seems that
the first Objection is right in saying that ~houldn't go beyond the scope of his
rea~o~ ~fter all;. and Objection two is correct in saying that Theology should only be
a division of philosophy, as far as God can be treated in terms of reason . The most
important point of Thomas's reply is that man is directed to God as his final end
and that God is something that surpasses his reason .
If the existence of God can b~
arrived at through reason, and some things can even be predicated of Him beyond the
fact of His existence, as Thomas believes, then why can't man arrive at his end
through hiE natural, communicable faculty and experience of reason? Why does Thomas
assume from the beginning that God is beyond this faculty, which is the assumption
upon which his reply to the first Objections, and hence his whole wor k, stands o r
falls? Why isn't reason, in the context of the knowable, enough when the object of
knowledge is God?
I think that the answer to why this is so, or why it is so to a thinker like
Thomas, can be answered by beginning with reason, and examining just what it is we
can say with reason concerning the idea of God .
This might, but not necessarily ,
lead us to the idea of faith, or some clue as to the need for the idea of faith. We
hope to see what it is about reason that would leave open the room for the idea of
faith. But it will not be the complete story; man's ways of understanding God in the
context of reason are only one part of that understanding; eventually we will have to
look at other aspects of the story . At times the things that follow about faith will
merge with other considerations that make us think about faith, but at some point it
seems that we must give up our grounding in reason as our reference entirely, and
look at faith from a different point of view.
Since reason is the ground upon which we choose to begin our attempt to understand faith, it is necessary to ask what can be said about God through our reason .
The philosophic inquiry that treats of God, Aristotle's division of philosophy called
theology, has its limitations set out by Thomas in Question twelve, Article twelve of
the First Part. According to Thomas, God can be known by reason only in so far as he
follows from some perception rooted in the senses .
This is necessarily so because
all thought has its beginning in sense- perception, and abstract thought is the deri vation of universals out of the always individual sense- perception and sense- object .
So our rational understanding of God has its beginning in the sensory world. And our
understanding of God in the rational sense will always be in the form of a cause .
In the second article of Question two, Thomas says that there are two sorts of
demonstration, the first in which we reason from a known cause to the effects of that
cause, the second in which we reason from effects back to their proper cause. On t he
surface, the two methods seem merely conversions of one another, to be different di rections of inquiry into the same process of cause and effect. They both seem to be
ways of . proceeding from the known to the unknown and of making what was not evident
evident.
But it soon becomes clear that they are not different directions of the
same process, nor do they achieve the same things . in their ends.
When we know a
cause or principle, something that is apparent to us and the truth of which can be
agreed upon, then if we do accept it to be true, certain things follow from it.
In
fact, it is only then that we can call anything a caus e ; unt il we f ind that it di rectly leadsto or is in a certain sense responsible for certain conclusions. Then it
is only an evident truth .
In this sort of demonstration, both cause and effect are
evident, known, and the work of the mind is not creative but receptive. The mind, in
a sense, has only to follow what reason presents to it .
In the case of reasoning
from effects to cause, however, such an uncomplicated process does not appear.
In reasoning from effect to cause, the process is only simple if the cause is
already a thing known, although not known as cause .
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and effect relationsh~p using effect as
the
starting point cannot be an
epistemological method in the same way as when cause, or principle, is the beginning .
In the latter case we know both cause and effect because we know cause but when we
know only effect, we can only infer the need for cause and make a hypothesis for the
nature of the cause form what we know of the effect, but not know the cause .
In some
sense, as Thomas says, the conclusion is implicit in, or a part of , the p r inciple .
Because of that we can say that we know the conclusion because of our knowledge of
the principle . But can it be said that the principle is implicit in the conclusion
in the same way, or even at all? Thomas was fully aware, as evidenced in his own
criticism of the method in Article twelve of Question twelve, that reasoning from
effect to an unknown cause had its limitations . He said that in treating of God from
the evidence of His effects , he could only establish the existence of God and what
necessarily belonged to Hirn as a cause . That is, he knew that in this way he could
never know God as a thing in itself . This is the most important criticism of the
method, but our own may add a further insight. For it seems that not even the establishment of a cause that establishes existence, at least in the way that Thomas would
like it, is possible . An examination of the method as it is actually employed might
make the criticism more clear, and fortunately we have such an example in Thomas's
own use of the method in Question two, Article three, where he uses it to demonstrate
the existence of God .
In all of his five ways of demonstrating the existence of God, Thomas's method
is that suggested in Question twelve, Article twelve, of using knowledge gained from
observation of the physical world and reasoning to a principle that accounts for the
cause of these observations.
He begins by asserting something about the world that
he feels to be generally accepted as true, and from this he reasons to a point where
the e x istence of God is a logical necessity according to the principles that were
deemed evident to begin with. Of course, any reading of the five ways will show that
thei~ smooth an~ simple argument does not rely wholly on the demands of pure reason,
and is not a s simple as it reads . An examination of the first "more manifest way,"
the proof using motion, will probably be enough to get an idea of how Thomas goes
about his effect- to- cause- proofs .
At the r isk of oversimplifying Thomas' s argument, we will paraph r ase it here .
He starts by asserting first that there is motion in the world, and second that nothing is in motion unless caused to be so by another thing in motion.
All things in
motion must have had a prior potentiality towards that motion.
Since potenti~lity
cannot actualize itself but must be made so by a thing already in actuality, then
each motion can be said to have an immediate antecedent cause of motion .
But the
p rocess of motion causing motion could be traced back infinitely without finding a
motion that began setting all things in motion in the first place , so there will be
no motion. Therefore it is necessary that there be some thing that moved itself. By
common consent, only God coul~ move in such a fashion. Therefore He exists.
The question that we need to ask is whether Thornas's conclusion of cause follows
from the knowledge that he originally gained from his observations of the world . We
must ask whether his construction of cause and effect is one that is determined by
the argument, or one that is presupposed by it, and is the assumption that actually
gave the argument its form.
Thomas states his principles that motion e x ists and all motions are depe ndent on
prior motions.
Then he states the consequences of that assumption:
by following
back the process of motion always being the cause of motion, we will regress
infinitely without ever finding a first motion that caused all posterior motions to
be .
,His principles lead him to a difficulty, a problem, what Aristotle called
(anop1a ) , a place where the passage seems to be blocked . What Thomas does to gain a
passage, though, does not follow from his principles; what he does is determine that
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his argument to solve his di ff icul ty and reverse the direction of his reasoning.
When he finds a difficulty, an impossibility that follows from his principles, he
looks for what must be necessary for those principles still to be true . In some ways
Thomas's conclusion seems right; in fact it is probably the only way in which he can
pass through his place of no passage, by assuming a first principle of motion that
does not obey the laws of motion.
But this answer is not arrived at through pure
reason, or at least it is not the only conclusion we could have reached at such a
point.
Perhaps, though, it will be the only satisfying conclusion.
For we could also
conclude that the principles we started with are either wrong or incorrectly or in comp~etely stated.
In fact, in areas such as mathematics that is the way we would
go; if an assumption leads to an impossibility, then we cannot accept it as true . In
the case of knowledge gained from observation of the everyday world, though , to be
forced to regard it as invalid is much more serious; we would have to re - evaluate all
such knowledge, reassess the way in which we see the world.
We also have another
option, which is to still accept our principles, but also accept their problematic
conclusions without positing another principle that clears them up .
Then we must
~&amp;nit that we live in an irrational world, one without a beginning, or that we live
in a world our rationality cannot comprehend .
Al though both of the other options
lead to conclusions which are less simple and more disconcerting than the one that
Thomas chooses, they seem more likely to be the ones that reason, on its own, would
be forced to choose. What is it that makes Thomas choose his way?
The answer might be found at the point where Thomas reverses his reasoning,
where he first inserts God into the argument.
His unmoved mover does and does not
follow from the argument .
It does not follow from what the accepted principles of
the argument afford.
But it does follow, or at least it is reasonable, if the idea
of. such a being has already been conceived of, not in the guise of cause, but as a
being whose role as cause is not the parameter of the conception of it .
So fo r
Thomas, the implicit assumption in his argument that is prior to all other assumed
principles is the idea and possibility of God.
Otherwise he is left only with his
own contradictions.
There is some small indication that he was aware of this.
His
ultimate conclusion in the demonstration being, "th.:j_s everyone understands to be
God," instead of the preceding, "Therefore it is necessary to arrive at a first mov er, moved by no other," is not as unfounded as it first appears if we concede that a
kind of belief in God is what gives the argument form in the first place .
But of
course, we must also sacrifice our hope in establishing God's existence purely from
evident knowledge . It s eems that Thomas , in h is arg ument fro m effect to cause, must
make a leap out of the line of his reasoning to determine cause.
The two criticisms of reasoning about God, Thomas's and the one tentatively set
forth here, seem to indicate a severe poverty as to what reason can say about God .
Thomas says that our knowledge will be limited to the existence of God and only what
necessarily belongs to Him as cause .
The other criticism would say that not even
this much can be gathered, that the argument that finds God's existence needs to know
God beforehand to conclude that He exists as cause .
So even the footing on which
natural reason deals with God seems questionable. In this way we begin to answer for
ourselves the question of why Thomas cannot regard theology as a division of philosophy.
It seems that we are now in a better position to understand what Thomas means
when he says that "man is directed towards God as to an end that surpasses the grasp
of his reason." At least the last part of the statement, that reason cannot treat of
God, seems more explicable to us . Why God is said to be the end of man, and how "beyond reason" man is to attain that end, is not clear .
As far as attaining to the
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it from reaching that end. Reason attempted to inquire into God as to a cause from
an effect, but it seems that a principle cannot be known from reasoning back from
effects .
Even if we grant that something like God's existence can be established ,
the conception of His existence would necessarily be determined by our knowledge of
effects. But in attaining to the knowledge of a thing, we wish to see it in itself,
and not only in relation to other things.
But if all our knowledge is rooted in
sense- perception, as Thomas says, then we could never know God in such a way .
One example of how Thomas seems to answer this can be found in Article four of
Question twelve, when he says, "For knowledge takes place according as the t hing
known is in the knower. But a thing known is in the knower according to the mode of
the knower . Hence the knowledge of every knower is according to the mode of its own
nature.
If therefore, the mode of being of a given thing exceeds the mode of the
knower, it must result that the knowledge of that thing is above the nature of the
knower." By stating the impossibility in a different way, Thomas allows himself to
go on.
Reason cannot treat of God not because God fails reason, but because reason
fails God . The inquiry into God takes a different direction . Reason no longer tries
to define God or argue about God in such a way that God becomes reasonable, but reason itself must change so that God can become known as a thing in itself, so that the
"mode of the knower" is in accord with the "mode of being" of the thing to be known .
Thomas is taking a step out of reason, and looking at its boundaries, when he posits
the possibility of anything the being of which exceeds the mode of knowing of the
reasoning intellect . He can only do this, it seems, if he has in mind the idea of a
boundless God , which of course he does .
It is clear that for reason to know God, for it to reach what is beyond its
grasp, it must be altered . One option at this point is again to conclude that man
cannot know God, since to do so he would have to change the mode of his reason, to
change his nature . But Thomas argues out of this position by emphasizing the part of
the statement we quoted from him earlier that says God is man's end.
In the first
a r ticle of Question twelve, Thomas responds to the objection that the created intellect cannot see the essence of God by arguing that man's blessedness consists of the
operation of the intellect in seeing his end or source, God. For the mind to be unable to see God would mean that all man's activity is in vain, because that activity
is always a striving towards God. Hence it must be possible for man to actually know
God, to see His essence .
So Thomas will use his position outside of reason that he
has arrived at to say that man can know God not through reason grasping God but by
God taking in hand the reasoning intellect . The concept of knowledge, where the mind
receives into itself only such things that by their nature are fitted to reason , will
b e a bandoned ; and the mind instead will be fitted to receive what it knows . This is
the essential altering of perspective that Thomas effects to be able to deal with how
God can actually be known as a thing in itself .
One of the reasons that the whole of Question twelve is so interesting is that
it attempts to describe an epistemology that is beyond reason .
How far Thomas can
succeed in removing his description of seeing the essence of God f r om the terms and
analogies app r opriated by reason is anothe r question . But what he does describe is
something un i que, ne i the r r eason nor faith , yet simi lar to both .
His seeing of the
divine essence is like demonstrable science in that the r e occurs an intellectual vi sion o f apparent truth ; and also like faith , in t hat the e xper ienc e i s one th a t surpasses reason and is a matter of grace, indemonstrable and incommunicable .
And in
his construction of the experience of seeing God , Thomas will also curiously echo one
of the most puzzling ideas of Aristotle .
Thomas attempts i n the fourth article of the Question to arrange the experience
of seeing God ' s essence into a construction that includes the other kinds of knowl edge that the intellect is capable of. All natural knowledge begins , again, in the
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"act of a corporeal organ ." But the soul also has intellect, and the intellect has
the power to analyze the object of the senses into matter and form.
By isolating
form, the intellect obtains an abstraction that is common and universal, which is not
confined to any individual perception, but relies on the individual object of sense
for its being.
According to Thomas, this is the extent of natural knowledge.
But
just as the intellect can transcend the initial sense-perception, so can the intel lect "by grace be raised up to know separate subsisting substance and separate
subsisting being." That is, by God acting somehow on the intellect, it can have a
knowledge that no longer has its source in sense - perception, but is able to know be ing that is in no way attached to individual being, that is, the being common to all
beings, God. But how does this higher state of knowing compare with the intellect's
natural capacity to know universal truths?
Thomas characterizes this state as a heightening of the intellect, a broadening
of its powers of seeing by the influx of divine illumination.
This illumination
could be seen simply as a quantitative increase of illumination, since as Thomas
says, "Hence also the intellectual power of the creature is called an intelligible
light, as it were, derived from the first light, whether this be understood of the
natural power, or some superadded perfection of grace and glory . " The act of the
intellect in its natural capacity is a participation in the "first light'' of God, and
the seeing of God's essence is made possible by a "superadded perfection" .
It seems
that we can understand the basis of this experience by comparing it with natural reason as a perfection of the intellect's natural capacity to see universal truth.
The
seeing will be analogous to the intellect's comprehension of indemonstrable first
principles, which appeal immediately to the intellect as true, such as the principles
of logic and science. It is just that it will be able now to see more than it could
before .
This is one way to interpret Thomas' s statement in Article five that the
blessed who see God are made "deiform", that they are able to see, in some way, what
God sees.
What is infinitely knowable in itself will now become comprehensible to
the intellect that has been raised to meet it, because the influx of divine illumination has given it a wider perspective.
There are some complications, however, that do not allow us to accept this
interpretation.
The intellect will never know the essence of God as it knows the
principles of demonstrable science . Thomas says that a created intellect could never
"comprehend" the essence of God or know it to the fullest e x tent to which it is capable of being known. Since the intellect is made able to see the essence of God by an
influx of divine light, but the essence of God is infinite, it follows that, since
the intellect cannot receive an infinite amount of illumination, God 's essence can
never be known as far as it is capable of being known .
But this is the extent to
which we say we know the principles of reason, and what we mean by "contemplation".
How could a "seeing" occur of an object of thought that is infinite and unbounded?
Following the analogy with reason, since the seeing of such an object would always be
incomplete, it would have the character of opinion .
But if this act is said to be
the final end of man, does it seem right that it should have the certainty of opinion? What would be the convincing aspect of seeing God if the object of the seeing
were ultimately unclear?
There are several places in Question twelve where the analogy with natural reason seems to break down, especially as regards the object of thought, and a new
interpretation of "deiform" seems to be needed . Does being "like God" mean that the
intellect is broadened so that any object becomes intelligible as a result? In Article four Thomas says, "a created intellect cannot see tue essence of God unless God
by His grace unites _Himself to the created intellect, as an object made intelligible
to it." Yet at other times it does not seem that God becomes an "object" of the intellect in any intelligible way .
In Article five we read, "But when any created in-

tellect sees the essence of God, the essence of God itself becomes the intelligible
form of the intellect."
Here he does not say that the essence of God becomes the
object, but the form, the shape, of the intellect. It is not clear whethe r Thomas is
contradicting himself o r not.
But the experience of seeing God seems now more complicated than a broadening of perspective fo r the intellect. God attaches himself to
the intellect so that He may become the thinking of the intellect .
But if thinking
must be the thinking of something, and if God is the form of thinking o r the shape of
the intellect, and also in some way the object of that thinking, then such an act
does not seem to be thinking, or an act of the intellect in its accepted sense at
all.
The process that is described by Thomas of seeing God cannot but remind one of
the act described by Ar istotle of his own God, the prime mover, in the Metaphys ics.
Aristotle describes the prime mover's act as one of thinking,von01S', where the obj ect
of this v6ncr u· , TO vonToV, is the mover itself.
But since the move r is nothing
else but its act , its thinking is of thinking, and the act is the same as the object
of the act.
This seems to be similar to what the intellect's act would be if God
attached Himself to it as both form and object . The act of the intellect would then
be inseparable from the essence of God , and the intellect would not see the essence
of God, but in a sense participate in the being of the essence of God .
It is not for
su r e if this is what Thomas really means, but at least it extends some hope about
reas on being able to attain to God , if not by its natural powers, then in some other
conceivable way.
Yet what a fleeting appearance . Article eleven comes as a surprise ~n reading
Question twelve, and is a puzzle which makes the whole of the question even more of a
puzzle .
The Article asks "Whether anyone in this life can see the essence of God , "
and the answer that Thomas gives is "It is not possible, " he concludes, " that the
so·u1 in this mortal life should be raised up to the highest of intelligible objects,
that is, to the di vine essence . "
What then is the significance of the whole
question? What is Thomas getting at in describing a process that he does not think
is possible? It seems that the question of the first article, whether it was possi ble for man to see the essence of God, had to be answered affirmatively, for reasons
having to do with God being man's end. Yet the description of what the experience is
turns out to be, possibly, of what it would be like were it possible .
It is not
clear why Thomas chose to affirm and deny what appears to be the same thing . But the
hope that man could somehow reach God through some alteration of the intellect, seems
now to be qua shed , as was the hope that man could really know God through his natural
reason. Any way to God via the intellect, whether natural or graced, seems blocked .
Or at least Thomas pulls back the lure of seeing God wit~a rationa l bas is at the last
moment for unclear rea sons . But with that retraction, with his blocking of the path,
the opportunity for a new focus reveals itself.
We have gone, perhaps, as far as we can go, perhaps farther , with reason and
with intellect in relation to God .
It seems that our new focus would have to be
non- rational and non-intellectual if we hope to go on with our inquiry about God .
And now that we have exhausted, in a sense, our ground of reason, it seems that we
could have a better perspective on faith.
But how is the transition to be made, and how can we truly leave our g r ound in
r eason? What do we hope to achieve by examining faith, and where has the examination
of r eason's efforts to re ach God taken us? For one thing, the examination has taken
us to the point whe re faith seems to be necessary for the inquiry to go on , for the
inquiry that can be t raced in Thomas . But whether choosing to look at the idea of
faith at this point will rea lly enable us to go on with the inquiry or not is uncertain . Because a non -rational ideal like faith is not hindered by the rules of rea son, is it too much of a temptation not to use this idea to solve our own difficulties?

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�we would like faith to help us with two things in Thomas' s statement that "man
is directed to God as to an end that surpasses the grasp of his reason."
An ex amination of reasoning about God has shown to an extent why such an end is beyond
reason.
Ideally, we would like to learn from the idea of faith why God is said to be
man's end in the first place, and how he is to achieve that end if not through reason.
To some extent we have answered the question, "Why faith?", by seeing reason's
inability to deal with God. Any construction where the mind actually pe:r:cei.ved God
proved to be untenable.
The knowledge of the being of God c~uld not be fit int~ a~y
epistomological mold.
But faith does not entail any perception, and although it is
spoken of as a way of knowing, that knowledge is.very.diffe:ent fro~ any that c?mes
from reason. we cannot make an analogy about seeing with faith.
While the convincing aspect of reas on's knowledge is that something is revealed, f~i t.h' s "knowledge"
is a belief in something that remains hidden.
To make the transition, faith must
have an analogously convincing element to it.
Faith cannot merely follow as an answer after reason has failed to treat of God, or at least run into seemingly irrevocable difficulties. How faith can actually come about must be explored.
·
For Thomas, faith is something necessary for salvation, for man to attain his
end
Because reason fails to bring man into contact with God, o r because there are
som~ things necessary to believe about God that reason could neve~ come to, it . is
necessary that he believe what his intellect itself does not recognize .
In Question
four, Article three of the "Secunda Secundae", Thomas says that faith does reside in
the intellect since faith determines one to something that is true. But what determines the int~llect to recognize truth has nothing to do with the intellect itself;
the intellect is not convinced by the object of faith, which it is blind to, but by
the will . In Thomas's construction, this will, which overcomes the intellect to de termine it to truth, is a necessary element.
But where does this will to believe
originate?
Thomas's answer, in Question six, Article one of the same part, says that the
determination of the will comes from God .
Faith, which is an act of the will that
· t
"Faith," he
overcomes the intellect, cannot come about through an in·erna 1 process.
says, "as regards the assent which is the chief act of faith, is from Go~ moving m~n
inwardly by grace." Faith, which seems to be Thomas's choice of how man is to attain
God, cannot be effected by man and must be made possible by God .
Man's end, then,
can only be reached by it becoming his means as well. What leads Thomas to conc~ude
this? In the same article he says, "for since by assenting to what belongs to faith,
man is raised above his nature, this must needs come to him from some supernatural
principle moving him inwardly ; and this is God . " What "raises man above his natur~"
is the overcoming of the intellect. Thomas cannot allow that man should overcome his
intellect by himself, for the intellect is what man most essentially is ~nd th~ highest part of him.
For man to overcome his own intellect would be something akin to a
rejection of himself.
Thomas's great reverence for ~he. int~llect would not l~t any
other part of man determine truth for it. The only vindication for the overcoming of
the intellect could come from God.
So it is something that happens to man rather
than something he does.
But must this be so?
Must we conclude like Thomas that
there is nothing in man that could determine him to faith?
In the same passage quoted from above, Thomas presents his own v~rsion of the
view of the Pelagians on faith, who said that man himself chooses to believe, t~ have
faith.
It seems that this view, where the will be believe that convinces the intellect comes from man himself, is more along the lines of what we are looking for·
Thomas's answer that faith comes through grace does not seem to be the answer when we
are looking for why the idea of faith came about in the first place.
But it remains
to be seen how man could choose to believe, how belief could come about from another
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Thomas gives us an idea of how a will to believe could originate in his treatment of grace. Divinely revealed knowledge is not the only thing that God must impart to man because man cannot reach it himself; God must also intercede in a moral
way for man to reach his end. In Question 109 of the first part of the second part,
Thomas argues that grace is necessary for man to reach God in his actions.
In Article eight he says that it is impossible for man to avoid sin without the help of God.
The fundamental cause o f this is that man, since the banishment from the garden, is
composed of two natures, a "higher" and "lower" nature.
His higher nature can more
or less avoid the sin it is prone to, the graver mortal sin, because of the control
of the reason.
But man's lower nature what Thomas called his "corrupted nature",
cannot be satisfactorily controlled in its penchant for venial sin .
Reason can indeed suppress any desire, but not every one, since reason's control over the desires
is not absolute .
Hence, for man to overcome his lower nature and avoid sin, it is
necessary that God endow him with the ability beyond his present nature to master
this part of him.
Thomas's image of man fundamentally divided in his nature gives us a much more
vivid example of a need for God than anything we explored in relation to man's intel lect.
In that part of our discussion, it seemed we were forced to fit God into the
structure of the intellect, and He did not seem ever to fit.
It was not clear whether the intellect ever really required a being like God.
But in the area of ethics
and morals, a need seems to clearly arise . If Thomas's assessment of man's nature is
correct, it would point to a deep disparity between man's knowledge of moral principle, his ethical beliefs, and what he is actually able to effect in his own actions.
If this disparity is really a part of man's nature, a fundamental flaw within himself
that he can never hope to repair, then a will to believe in a being that could heal
him could conceivably arise.
It is perhaps in this situation that the determination
to faith could arise internally, and man could choose to believe.
It seems clearer, perhaps, why Thomas says that God is man's end.
If God is a
necessary element in man reaching the end in regards to his own nature, in the mas tery of reason over the sensual appetites, it seems more explicable to say that God
is man's end . As to how he is to attain that end, it seems that we are now justified
in saying he does so through faith.
The abandoning of the intellects sovereign capacity to identify truth, and its determination to something that is not apparent to
it, that is, faith, could come about by man's realization of his own incapacity to
heal the rifts within his own nature, and his need for a being endowed with power and
mercy to make him whole. The convincing element of this experience, what could pos sibly overcome the intellect, depends on the deepness with which this need to be
healed is felt.
If the need is felt deeply enough, the choices for man seem to be
either a belief in a healing God and hope, or resignation to the inalterable disparity of his nature and despair.
It is hoped that a plausible explanation of the need and inspiration of faith
has been presented; how faith seems possible following reason's inquiry into God; and
how faith, belief without proof, could conceivably originate in man himself .
(For
this writer, this inquiry was necessary to come to some sort of understanding of
Thomas' s ideas. )

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�Limelight: the Story of a Ballerina and a Clown
- Chaplin
Carlos Chamberlin

Camera 3, eager, operational, and passionate, swept down from above gently,
emancipating the audience into applause .
It came to rest six feet away from him, he
who was standing, acknowledging his audience . The hands clapped till the aisles ran
red with blood, ha, ha, so it seemed to him . The hands were pummeling themselves for
him, for the show, this show of shows, his, conceived in the mind of some visionary
at programming, who once read Boethius . Lightning blazed, and the guy said : "It'll
be a game type show, there' 11 be this wheel, see, a wheel of fo r tune, and maybe
there' 11 be good luck, and maybe bad, and lots of questions and lots of answers . "
And then the prophet shut up for a while, and then he asked for some coffee , and then
he said, "We' 11 call it The Consolation of Philosophy . " Eve r yone thought t his was
great. Really great .
And so did he. Really great .
she said she came f r om Montana, and the r e was no r eason t o believe her . She was
made up well enough to provide color to a nation of black and whites , a nd to him
there was irridescent beauty, and an aur a of pasteuri zation .
He r father , she said,
was a rancher, (ah) a dairy farmer (Ah!)
Once again there was applause , as the
audience was assured of the contestant's humanity and Americannes s.
She was a
dance r , I could dance all day , coul dn't you? Pleasantly , he yes s ed, not at all tired
of the babbling of the contestant's river of life, as it flowed through the studio,
out the delta of television , and into a million homes .
She took his mind away , and
the weird contestants began to clamor subtly f or a ttention .
The violini st with his
psychological approach to botany, and of course , the marine sergeant , who loved all
kinds of soups .
This show was the futu r e , and the future was wi dely r egar ded as a
strange and happy place .
Fortune was lucky that night. She won . No sur prise t h ere . And so did Max ine,
which was the name of the dancing challenger . They went out to a restaurant , late a t
night, after even the satellites had all gone away , and talked like this :
"You're very intelligent . "
"Thank you ... uh."
"Do you watch the show often?"
"Every night . Every night that it's on . "
"So do I . Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha" .
So the inevitable happened, and this alignment of values pushed them ever so gently
in the direction of that abstract king, Love, who gave them their money's worth.
And then there was another night, another Consolation of Philosophy, and Maxine
answered the questions that were put to h er c o rre ctly, winn ing a g a i n, and s pent the
evening ensconced in the arms of the grace of television , whose name was Ray, whose
fans were the well - informed, the well - entertained, the majority . And on this second
night of passion/love, they were found at a newspaper, reading aloud to each other,
transcending the sexual act with taste and intellect .
"Would you look at this guy , twelve murders and so he says he wanted some
peace and quiet . "
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"That's quiet . "
"Not quiet enough . "
"it seems like ... "
"what?"
" . .. all true stories are desperate . "
"uh-huh."
Ray couldn't sleep at all. He took some sleeping pills and an amphetamine, and
drove to the T. V. station.
It was really dark .
He walked to the room where they
kept the questions, and searched for the ones for that night's Consolation of
Philosophy . Then, he went to the room where they kept all the answers . The door wa s
locked .
He sat down.
He lacked keys.
So he took the door off of its hinges, and
swept into the room looking for the respective answers . He was eager, and he f ound
and copied them .
Then he fell upon a great solution .
He rested the door against the wall and
made a sign . WET PAINT . He disappeared into the night .
Dawn hit as his car drove him to the hotel where Maxine was staying .
"Good
Morning" . He smiled .
He handed ove r his presents, and kissed her .
"For me?" she
asked . "Yes , " he said, "they're the answers to tonight's show . " They spoke briefly
on impor tant questions of mo r ality .
Finally Maxine accepted, not because she was
essentially ev i l , but because t hey we r e r unning out of time .
"Ray," said Mike, who ran the station, "somebody broke into the room with all
the answe r s . "
" So change the lock , " said Ray helpfully .
"I think we' 11 have to
change the answe r s," said Mike , r unn i ng the station .
All a r ound t he wo r ld (that is, the U. S . ) people prepared for the Consolation of
Philosophy by eating a warm home-cooked meal and i gnoring thei r wives and husbands
and children . Ray and Max ine ate nervously , stagnant chicke n salad and french fries .
"Whatever happens, Maxine, I'll always love you . "
"Me , too . "
"Wh atever happens, don ' t do anything desperate . "
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Ray would alwa y s love Max ine, unaware that such a statement was like saying that you
would always have lunch wi th the loved one :
a nice though t but practical as a
toothache. Ray f elt t he cameras go on somewhe r e . He stood up, and held out his arm ;
A gallant and his int ended quit the diner and Ray and Maxine followed .
Regular watche r s of the Consolation of Philosophy watched as the pretty girl
f r om Montana was defeated by a magenta femme fatale, who, lacking beauty , had read
books . They then watched Ray , who stepped close r to the camera until his face filled
the scr een, and sa i d :
"That's it . "
Max ine ran up to him, and said :
"This is Ray, and he loves me."
Ray agreed.
"I love her," he said .
The audience went crazy, despising Ray for falling for the
loser . They stopped clapping . There was absolute silence . Ray had never used a gun
before. He fired into the air. The audience was still.
"Traitor!" someone yelled .
The progr am director came on the intercom, saying, "Ray, this is live T . V . and you
can't do this . " The logic of this nearly killed Ray . He grabbed her hand, and they
the y ran like l ove r s , away , l eav i ng the audience desperate and unappreciative .
Outside, (in the par king lot) the car wouldn't start, and it was raining, so Ray
and Maxine walked .
Thus love is the limelight, like being , for a moment, on television.
So, the Consolation of Philosophy shot out into the ionosphere for one last
time, bouncing endlessly in the heavens . One October, in the nineteen seventies, it
returned to earth, to the television set of Charles Augustus Gardiner, who, at the
time , held the r oy rogers chair for the humanities at Princeton.
The police were
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�Ripeness is All
Renee Bergland

My best friend's mother committed suicide .
Six years later, when we were both
ei ghteen, my f r iend Rachel aske d me to spend the s ummer wi t h he r i n t he house whe r e
it had happened, which was also the house where Rachel ' s mother had spent every summer of her childhood .
Rachel herself had only been there a few times befo r e her
mother's death .
In the years between, the neighbors had mowed the lawn and kept an
eye o~ the place, but no one had stayed there . We spent the fi r st week scrubbing out
the kitchen and a bedroom, and camped in the r est of the house all summer .
When the
bare minimum of cleaning was done, we divided our time between the rocky beach in
front of the house and investigation inside it .
We paged through her mother ' s third
g r ade notebooks , and we scattered s napshots of r elatives we we r e n't certain about
into p~les on the living room floor .
We hung her mothe r 's kindergarten drawing on
the fridge . We talked constantly about Rachel ' s mother ' s family , though we knew next
to nothing about them.
In August, Rachel and I searched out her mother's grave . She
bought a tombstone for it , and on the stone she had three words cut :
RIPENESS IS ALL
I wasn't sure of what the sentence meant .
When I asked Rachel
she said she
liked the sound of it, and she knew her mother had loved Shakespeare . '
I had read King Lear before my summer with Rachel, and my eyes had passed over
the phrase without noticing it .
When I read the play later , I recognized the words
from Rachel's mother's gravestone and began to cry . The whole sentence moved me .
Men must endure
Thei r going hence, even as their coming hithe r;
Ripeness is all .
(V, ii, 9)
My tears were n ot an incidenta l stinging.
I sobbed u ntil my r oommate threatened
to take me to the hospital, and then I went outside and wept my way into silence .
I
was not simply crying for Rachel or for her mother .
I wept for myself, for the hopelessness of my relationship with my parents , and for the hopelessness of the childr en
I might have ·
That night chasms opened a r ound me , separating me f r om everyone I
loved, and most definitely from my parents .
The nature of the chasms and the tears
mystified me .
My despair sprang from the first line and a half, from the idea that all of us
must only endure our births, that having been bor n i s as g r e a t a n af fliction as h aving to die.
It sprang at the same time from the awful coupling of unlooked - for birth
and longed- for death.
In eleven words, Edgar told his fathe r that it is human nature
to wa~t. t? die and to regret having been born, and that it is each human's deep re sponsib~lity not to acknowledge or act on either of these feelings .
My horror at
these ~i~es was also caused by seeing a son assume his father's foolishness, and by
recognizing the naturalness of the father's dependence on his son .
I saw the inev itability of the responsibility for both of their lives and their deaths especially
fo r his fathe r 's death , being thrust upon the son .
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able, though unwillingly incurred , debt of life to his father.
Pe r haps the most upsetting words of all were the last three, "Ripeness is all . "
They were offered as t he supreme consolation of the play, and they seemed almost
meaningless .
The phr ase is so ambiguous that it borders on nonsense , and it i s the
only phrase of hope we are offered in King Lear .
Since my night of tears , I have
often wondered about ripeness .
I have always wanted to know what it could be, and
how it might be all , i n both birth and death .
Rachel and I l i ved across the bay from my father that summer and I was not wel come in his house , the house of my childhood summers.
I am not welcome there yet .
Yea r s pass between our meetings , a nd when we meet, my father is angry and imperious ,
and I am wooden .
I have often thought about r ipeness between us, and have felt ce rtai n that i t is a laughabl e hope, ma d e complete ly ri diculous by the fact that I h ave
no real idea of what r ipene s s would be for us , o r how it would be a balm .
I am faced
with the question of whether I am ab l e to endur e my own birth, to accept it and the
parents who gave it to me .
I know that in spite of the pain he has caused me, my
father is very much my fathe r and always will be .
I must endure my birth .
I have
less choice in this matte r even than I have in the matter of my death . Where shall I
search for r ipene s s?
My own ambig uous feelings about my birth have made Edgar ' s lines impo r tant to
me .
Thei r comf o r t i s str ange, narco t ic , and mys t e ri ous .
I have taken the same
numbed comfor t f r om the words when facing death .
On the way to my cous in ' s f une r a l we stopped a t the house where the Quakers who
were going to di re ct it liv e .
It was hot .
I went into their living room , which was
walled with books , and sear ched out King Lear.
I r emember being happy that the peo ple in charge of Sam ' s funeral had such wonde r ful , worn books in thei r living room .
It was cool wi t h the cool of farmhouses . I sat in the back of the car with my b r other and siste r crunched nex t to me .
I searched and searched thr ough the play for my
favorite lines ; I knew them by hea r t anyway, but I wanted t o know where they were .
It was the stupi di t y that mercifully accompanies grief which made this sea r ch take up
the car ride and all of the time of sitting on the porch of the old meeting house,
waiting for the service .
I wanted to read the lines and say that I didn't know what
they meant .
Men must endure
Their going hence, even a s their coming hither ;
Ripeness is all .
Did they say that my t wenty - e i ght year old c ou s in h a d been stupid a nd wastefu l to
kill himself , that all we can hope for is ripeness, and that we can never decide our
own deaths?
Is suicide like plucking unripe fruit, does it make everything useless
and meaningless?
Was our shar ed despair at Sam's death the only appropriate r e action?
Or pe r haps the lines implied something else , that every human death is
equally appropriate , that the r e is r ipeness in all and for all.
Perhaps it is impos sible to die without be i ng ripe, and we ourselves are in touch with our own r ipeness
and our own deaths .
I wanted to say both because I felt it was somehow dishonest to
make only half the speech . But it would have been a speech .
Sam's childhood neighbors and college roorrunates were weeping t ogether and it was not the time to be ab stract or academic .
I didn't say anything .
I listened to my family's muffled weeping, I wondered whethe r ripeness was a comfor t o r a warning, and I wept myself . All
summer and on into now I have thought about ripeness and loved its ambiguity .
I have
wonde r ed what it is and might be, and whether I should hope .
Long before we can read, we know some words of Shakespeare and some from the
Bible .
We hear them on the lips of our par ents , and we have repeated some of them
hund r eds of times be f o r e we even wonder about thei r meaning or their context .
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�kids in my neighborhood screamed, "To be or not to be" every time they acted out a
particularly dramatic death scene. My mother hissed, "How sharper than a serpent• s
tooth to have a thankless child!" at every occasion. Shakespeare's words often hold
as much power and meaning for us in our own contexts as they do in his context. At
S~. John's: we study Shakespeare for the sake of learning about Shakespeare, read and
discuss King Lear in order to better understand King Lear.
But I have read
Shakespeare outside of school as often as in it, sometimes for the beauty of his
words or the fun of shouting beautiful words out loud, sometimes for mere dist~action, and other times for myself, seeking wisdom and healing for my own sorrows
without a thought for the sorrows in the play. All of the meanings which these words
may have, and all of the ways we may read them are important.
They influence each
other immeasurably.
I have spoken about Edgar's words in the context of my own life because I want
to establish exactly what is at stake for me in my examination of the words.
The
sentence is as important to me in my own context as it is in the context of the play.
Nonetheless, I will use the play rather than my past to explore the ideas of endurance and ripeness. This exploration is bound to shed as much light on the play as on
~he sentence itself, and may well shed much light on my own situation. But the light
it casts for me on personal matters is secondary, and for the most part r will keep
it pr~vate. I am not writing an autobiographical essay or a self-analytical one. My
hope is that ~he meaning of the lines can be established on the strength of the play,
an~ tha~ I will come to a clear idea of the sentence and especially of ripeness,
which will help me to see myself.
I am neither Cordelia, nor Goneril nor Edgar· my
father is. neither Lear nor Gloucester.
I do not read the play as a~ analogy t~ my
own e~perience. However, I do believe that what is wisdom on the printed page and on
the lighted stage may well be wisdom in my cockroach infested kitchen.
I will discuss Edgar's words and their significance to the rest of the play in
the order which the words themselves outline.
First I will talk about the phrase
"Men must endure", then about going hence and corning hither. All of this will be i~
the interest 0£ ripeness, of deciding what it may be, and how it may be all.

Men must endure
Their going hence, even as their corning hither;
Ripeness is all.
Edgar speaks these lines to his father as words of comfort. He prefaces them by
asking' "What, in ill thoughts again?" (V, ii, 9).
We are reminded of his recent
attempt to cure his father's despair. That time, Edgar let his fathe r think that he
had attempted suicide and told him that "the clearest gods, who make them honors of
men's impossibilities have preserv'd thee." (IV, vi, 73).
Those words reminded
Glouc~ster . to hope.
These are intended to lead his father to hope again, even to
admonish his father to hope.
At the same time, they are the bitterly clear-sighted
words of a man leading the father who disowned him before being blinded.
They are
words of hope well informed by despair.
Edgar tells Gloucester that, "Men must endure".
I assume that when he says
II
II
h
d
men . e means 1men an. women. The sentence would be weak if it were gender-specific.
The first word s meaning is at least reasonably clear.
But Edgar says, "Men must".
If all human beings must do a single thing, it is clear that there is a common human
nature which unites all human beings. This human nature is tied up with their common
obligation.
"Must" is a funny word. The nature of the conunon obligation is confusing.
If everyone really did do what one "must", Edgar would have said, "Men do endure".
If we had a choice, Edgar would have said, "Men ought to endure". By choosing "must"' Edgar makes his statement into a sort of conditional:
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human, then we "must".
If we are to be human, then we must endure. With these three words, Edgar has
made it clear that morality is part and parcel of human nature; that our humanness
entails an obligation which we must not shirk. This obligation, as we first see it,
is to endure. What we endure is important, but before looking at what we endure, we
must examine endurance by itself, so that we will be clear about precisely what we
must do.
I see two important possible meanings of "endure".
The simpler meaning is to
undergo.
When Edgar says, "Men must endure", he means that every human being must
suffer the things he speaks about, that they happen to everyone, and that in order to
be human everyone must let them happen. Even in the "undergoing" sense of "endure"
there is the implication that what we undergo is unpleasant and that we would avoid
it if we were given the choice. The second meaning of "endure" gives it more force.
I would phrase it, "Men must stand firm in the face of". This is probably the most
important sense of the word in these lines. We must not run toward things, and we
must not run from them.
We must stand where we are, in full knowledge of where we
are, and we must not flinch.
"Endure" is a transitive verb. It makes little sense without an object, without
something unpleasant to endure.
Edgar offers us two things to endure, going hence
and coming hither.
In the greater context of the play, human beings are called on to
endure the physical natural world as well.
Lear has shouted, "Pour on, I will endure!" (III, iv, 17), to the storm, and the idea of suffering and standing firm in
the face of the natural world is strong in the play.
Taken alone, the words "Men
must endure" are words about human nature and about physical nature. They are words
about nature.
The word "nature" is key in King Lear. Nature is invoked by almost everyone who
speaks
(the notable exceptions are Edgar and the Fool)
and means as many things as
there are lines which use it.
I have grouped the "natures" into three basic meanings.
"Nature" can be the natural physical world, where cause and effect govern every event, where storms blow and furrniter weeds grow. This is the nature where "the
younger rises as the old doth fall." (III, iii, 23) .
However, "nature" can also be
human nature, the opposite of the natural physical world. Human nature is precisely
what distinguishes us from planets or from plants. It accords (in theory) with natural moral law. In the play, human nature and human natural law are usually mentioned
in reference to the natural lawful love between parent and child.
When Gloucester
calls Edmund a "loyal and natural boy" (II, i, 84) , and when Lear tells Regan that
"she better knows the offices of nature" (II, iv, 174 ) than her sisters, they are
speaking of this human nature. Thirdly, nature can be used to describe one per son's
disposition, the unchangeable qualities with which a person is born and which establish individual identity. When France says that Cordelia has a "tardiness in nature"
(I, i, 235), and when Lear says that this tardiness "like an engine wrenched my frame
of nature" (I, iv, 257), they are speaking of the daughter's and the father's individual natures.
Each character's individual nature is revealed by his or her talk of the other
two natures, physical and human. Before I go on to the motion of the play, the going
hence and coming hither, let me draw clearly the fathers and their children, bad and
good.
I will describe where they stand by their own natures, in relation to the
physical natural world, and to moral human nature.
King Lear mentions nature twice as often as anyo ne else in the play. His first
fateful mention is his proposal to extend his largest bounty "where nature does with
merit challenge" (I, i, 52 ) . Lear thinks he is king enough to set up bouts in which
human nature is just another contestant, and to judge the contest himself. The whole
play falls out of his mistaken notion, and this notio n falls directly out of Lear's
own nature.
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�state.
Shadowy forests, champaigns rich with plenteous rivers, and wide skirted
meads are his to bestow on whom he chooses.
He speaks to the storm as if it were a
political ally turned treacherous, calling the elements "servile ministers" (III, ii,
21) to the wishes of his daughters the queens. He seems to assume that they were his
to command before he gave up his crown but have recently changed loyalty.
He thinks
he is king of human nature as well, that he can command his daughters' love above and
beyond the natural love of child for parents, and that he can bequeath his property
and his power without going through the natural ritual of dying.
He also thinks he
is king over individual nature, that he can settle the matters of his heart from his
throne, before his court.
He expect his own heart and nature to bend to his royal
power just as he expects the hearts and natures of his subjects to do so.
Lear's
nature is a king's nature.
His ignorance springs from his dominion over nature,
imagined though it may be. His gradual awakening happens as he goes hence to nature
and discovers his subjection to every aspect of it .
Gloucester is an earl rather than a king, and he is as aware of nature's power
over him as he is of the king's.
Gloucester's first mention of nature is far more
respectful than the king's:
"though the wisdom of nature · can reason it thus and
thus, yet nature finds itself scourged by the sequent effects." (I, 11, 99).
The
wisdom of nature is human knowledge of the natural world, and the scourged nature is
human nature itself .
The problem here is the one which Edmund points out .
Gloucester believes that physical nature is all powerful, and that human nature in
general and also in particular can have no effect at all on the events of the world .
Gloucester betrays his excessive faith in cause and effect .o ver and over:
first when
he laughs about the biology of Edmund's birth without a thought for his listening
son, again when he bemoans the astrology of the day without a thought for the grave
human mistake which Lear has made or for the characters of his own sons . Later, most
horribly, Gloucester trusts gravity to take his life, without a thought for the
natural human antipathy to suicide.
It is amazing that Gloucester can be so
completely in the dark about human nature . Although he manages to decide that Regan
and Goneril 's behavior is unnatural (after Lear has been tossed onto the nearest
heath), he misjudges his own sons as completely as possible.
Edgar is his
"unnatural, brutish villain" (I, ii, 73) , and Edmund his "loyal and natural boy" (II,
i, 84) •
Although Gloucester calls Edmund a "natural boy" as a compliment, we cannot help
but be reminded of Edmund's illegitimacy. He may be a natural son, but he is so by
biological nature rather than by moral human nature.
Edmund's first mention of nature is the most emphatic in the play:
"Thou, Nature, art my goddess," (I, ii, 1),
he shouts. He is singleminded and clear . He operates purely on the level of natural
physical laws unadulterated by human principles . This is not to say that Edmund does
not understand the human sorts of nature . He sees them as clearly as anyone else in
the play, but he chooses to reject them .
He rejects the human moral nature which
distinguishes human beings from animals because it is not in his nature.
Edmund was
born because his mother was fair and there was "good sport at his making" (I, i, 21) .
He knows his own nature perfectly and states it clearly in his first speech. He also
sees the natures of his brother and father clearly, describes them perfectly ("A
credulous father and a brother noble!" (I, ii, 68)), and manipulates them with ease.
Although Edmund is cer tainly evil, Edgar accuses him only of treachery, and there is
something fair about this.
Edmund behaves reasonably, according to the reasoned
principle of the natural world, that "the younger rises when the old doth fall."
(III, iii, 23).
Regan and Goneril are completely different from Edmund.
He serves a nature of
physical laws and reasonable principles. The evil sisters, on the other hand, bring
a general curse on nature (IV, vi, 205) . They are monsters.
If Edmund's treacherous
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their gender.

In his madness, Lear says of all women that:

Down from the waist they are Centaurs,
Though women all above.
But to the girdle do the gods inherit,
Beneath is all the fiend's.
There's hell. there's darkness, there's the sulphurous pit:
burning, scalding, stench, consumption. Fie, fie, fie!
pah, pah! (IV, vi, 124)
This is the most hellish image of female genitals I have ever read. It clearly shows
women's connection to something which is much farther from human moral nature than
Edmund's rational physical nature is. Women are connected to fiends and to monsters,
to darkness and to mystery.
There are deep abysses in them, and even they cannot
reasonably explain the dark workings within those abysses.
The mysteries are not
wholly evil; creation and birth are among them.
But the womb is a dark place nonetheless, and it connects women to the real power and mystery of nature in a way which
makes them far more horrifying than any reasonable villain can ever be.
All women might be monsters: France asks if Cordelia's offense is of "such unnatural degree that monsters it" (I, i, 219}, and one of Regan's servants mutters
that 11 if she live long, and in the end meet the old course of death, women will all
turn monsters" (III, vii, 100).
(Foolish Gloucester, who knows nothing about human
nature, even goes so far as to wonder if Edgar is a monster. (I, ii, 90))
Not all
women are monsters, though everyone in the play is afraid that if Goneril and Regan
succeed, all women, and even all humanity, will lose not only their human principles,
but even their principled physical world.
Regan and Goneril are not aware of the mystery they carry or the horror they
instill.
They understand the natural world, human nature, and the natures of individuals fairly well; they understand th ems elves insofar as they know their own de sires.
They cannot understand themselves completely or rationally because they are
mysteries. They are connected to a nature which is deeper, darker, more threatening
than any other nature in the play.
Their willing connection to primordial nature
(they seize power, lust after the same man, and murder each other) has the potential
to completely destroy the world.
Lucky for the world, Lear has "one daughter who redeems nature from the general
curse which twain have brought her· to" (IV, vi, 205) .
Cordelia is as separate from
primordial nature as her sisters are close to it. She is guilty of "no vicious blot,
murder or foulness , no unchaste action or dishonored step" (I , i , 227) , and she s
swayed by no passion, by nothing unreasonable. When Lear asks for her profession of
love, she gives him a mathematical formula, calculating what she owes him as a loyal
daughter against what she will need to pledge as a faithful wife.
She is as inhuman
as she is good, but her unnaturalness and unhumanness lie in her total devotion to
the morality inherent in human nature, and in her success at subduing physical nature
and her own personal nature to that general morality. Cordelia's vision of nature in
all its aspects is as clear as either of her sisters'. But it is less personal and
more just than any other. She is not shallow. Her "smiles and tears" (IV, iii, 17)
at Kent's letter betray deep feeling and strong love. But even as she reads the letter unaware of her observer, she is 11 queen of her passion, who, most rebel-like,
sought to be king oe'r her" (IV, iii, 13}. The fiends may inherit everything below a
woman's girdle, but the gods possess everything above it. Her sisters' sex make them
able to be purely evil; because she is a woman, Cordelia is capable of being purely
good.
Finally, we come to Edgar. Edgar never says the word 11 nature", perhaps because
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�from doing harms that he suspects none'' (I, 11, 169), and naivete is certainly a di mension of Edgar's nature.
However, Edgar is not as simple as his father or as
singleminded as his wicked brother .
Edgar is as strongly connected to the physical
natural world · as is Edmund, but Edgar's connection is different .
Edmund remains in
the human world and lives by the standards of the natural world .
Edgar flees to the
natural world and lives in it according to the standards of human rQ9ral nature.
Edgar is thP. man who is able to say, "Edgar I nothing am!" (II, iii, 21), and to mean
it, to give up his own individual nature in order to survive in the natural world
without betraying his moral nature.
When Edgar claims to be Tom o' Bedlam, he be comes Tom o'
Bedlam.
On the heath with Lear, Edgar has no purpose but to save his
own skin. He is nothing more than a lunatic beggar who keeps a mad king company. He
is comfortable as unnaccommodated man .
As unaccommodated man he leads his father,
but while he leads his father he becomes himself again.
At the start he is Mad Tom
because he is shocked at seeing his blinded father and because he is not sure how to
tell his father that the beggar who stands unseen before him is the son he disowned.
As he leads Gloucester toward Dover, the madness becomes a tool .
In the end, this
madness is the tool he uses to save his father from suicide, and to try to teach h{m
to endure, even to hope .

Edgar tells Gloucester that,
Men must endure their going hence .
In the literal sense, this going hence is simply going outside,leaving what is
familiar to us and facing what is "out there.''
In each of the first three acts of
King Lear, at least one major character is forced to leave home .
Lear's banishment
is the most poignant example of this sort of going hence. The others suffer in going
hence, perhaps as much as he, but their sufferings serve to underscore and compound
Lear's.
Leaving behind the castle, its comforts and its conventions, is the major
motion of the play.
The things which humans face, unprotected from the whims of a
powerful and threatening nature are dangerous.
Kent says, "Man's nature cannot bear
the affliction nor the fear."
(III, ii, 49) .
The play builds up to the crescendo of Lear on the heath in the storm.
The
rhetoric of fear begins when Lear banishes Kent, but allots him five days "to shield
thee from disasters of the world" (I, i, 174). Even in his rage, Lear is not cruel
enough to ignore the terrible threat which the natural world poses to unaccommodated
man. Disasters lurk everywhere "out there" .
Kent's farewell to Cordelia, "the gods to their dear shelter take thee" (I, i,
182), adds power to our notion of shelter as a real human necessity .
Cordelia's
going hence is slightly different from the other departures in the play:
she leaves
her father's castle for her husband's . Nonetheless, she has been banished as much as
Kent. She cannot come back . Cordelia's going hence may be natural insofar as she is
a daughter who leaves home to be married, but it is frightening and unnatural because
she leaves for good and is left dependent on strangers outside the castle .
If they
fail her, as is quite possible, she will be without shelter, alone against the opposing elements of a cruel nature.
Edgar's going hence is the third of the play and the third time the point is
made.
Edgar resolves to become Mad Tom, "and with presented nakedness outface the
wind's and persecutions of the sky" (II, iii, 12). Edgar's embracing the outdoors is
presented as a form of self-mortification and insanity.
The sky is a persecutor .
Being beneath it is an affliction .
When human beings face the natural world alone,
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the weakness of humanity in the face of the natural world during his confrontation
with it:
Poor naked wretches, who so e'er you are,
That bide .the pelting of this pitiless storm,
How shall your houseless heads and unfed sides,
Your loop'd and window'd raggedness, defend you
From seasons such as these?
(III, iv, 28)
Lear describes well the wretchedness of Kent, Cordelia, and Edgar.
It is
strange, though, that he speaks these lines about other people outside when he himself is enduring a terrible storm, unprotected.
A few lines later, Lear tells his
pomp to take physic , to "expose thyself to feel what wretches feel" (III, iv, 34) .
water streams across his face as he speaks, but it does not occur to him that he is
also passive, suffering the storm as helplessly as any other wretch would. Lear does
not know that the winds and rains and thunderbolts scorn royalty as well as poverty.
These speeches are among the most powerful and angry speeches in the English
language .
They are as saddening as they are anger - filled .
Lear sounds absurd and
old.
His assumption of control which he does not really have makes him look senile
and silly. At the same time, Lear's anger and confidence are impressive .
He speaks
nobly and bravely.
The king has been thrown out into the storm, so he conunands the
winds to blow and the rain to spout. Gloucester says, "yet, poor old heart, he holp
the heavens to rain." (III, vii, 61) . The king's tears join with the raindrops in
watering the earth, but more important than that , he becomes the storm, joins forces
with it. The sky manifests the power and tumult in his own mind even as it beats his
body down .
At the very moment that the triumph of physical nature over human nature is made
complete, the battle between Lear's human nature and his royal one has hardly begun.
He is still a king when he resolves to feel what wretches feel, in order to teach
himself to "shake the superflux to them and show the heavens more just" (III, iv,
35). This kingliness of Lear is what gives his endurance on the heath its power and
its absurdity. We, audience or readers, already know that the storm is greater than
the king and the man Lear.
Lear, however, decides that the storm shall be greater .
When he sees Mad Tom's abused flesh he murmurs that it is appropriate because the
flesh begot the daughters . When he sees Tom's bare forkedness, he shouts, "Off, off,
you lendings! Come, unbutton here." (III , iv, 103). Lear decides to be overw~elmed
by nature and actively renounces his coverings .
As a king, he declared himself
not- king of his country when he gave up his power to his daughters .
He acts as king
again in the storm and declares himself not-k ing again, this time not -k ing of the
unaccommodated man within himself. With his declaration he goes mad, but in his madness he becomes even more con~cious.
Lear's woes don't lose themselves, as
Gloucester thinks .
In his madness, Lear the man has learned what Lear the king commanded him to learn .
He has given up his throne, even his shelter, and has exposed
himself to feel what wretches feel.
In Act IV Lear crowns himself with rank fumiter and furrow weeds, and he celebrates his own new state.
Lear is a king in accord with the natural world, and as
such, he is nothing more than a man .
This is not merely a victory of the natural
world over a king, but also the victory of human nature and of Lear's own individual
nature over a king . we are left with the impression that nature triumphs because the
king decides it ought to.
Going hence in the first sense, going hence by leaving home, is something which
we must endure if we are to be human beings. Lear's endurance, and the humility and
humanity he wins by his endurance (at the price of his sanity) , are certainly somehow
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�Although going outside is the literal meaning of "going hence", dying is the
obvious meaning .
"Going hence'' is a terrifying term for death because it is so appropriately vague and shadowy . "Hence" is not a place; it doesn't specify a destination or imply any kind of completeness. The great power of the play is its ability
to show horror and grief unflinchingly without tempering them, to make every death an
awful one. No one in King Lear is put to rest. We a.re glad when the villains die,
but we do not get a sense of fulfillment or completion from their deaths. They are
cut off, and we are left wondering why they lived at all, rather than being relieved
that they live no more. We are sorry when the characters we love die, but more than
we are allowed to mourn, we are forced to wonder why they have died, and where they
have gone. Death in King Lear ends life by cutting it off. It does not complete it.
Gloucester is the only character in the play who wants to die.
His blind baf fled reunion with Edgar, the son he cannot recognize, is confusing and pathetic. His
son's choice to deceive his father into thinking that he is led by Tom o' Bedlam and,
far worse, into thinking that he has leapt from a cliff, is horrible . Everything in
these scenes is unnatural.
Even Edgar says that he is trifling with his father's
despair (IV, vi, 33) in order to cure it. We must watch him trifle .
On the other hand, Gloucester's desire to end his life by leaping from a cliff
is an awful, unnatural desire, and his confession of this desire to his son is an
awful confession .
When Edgar sees his blind father stumbling toward him he says,
"World, world, O world! But that thy strange mutations make us hate thee, life would
not yield to age . " (IV, i, 10) . The sight of his sightless father immediately makes
Edgar think of death as some sort of comfort . His father's misery is almost too much
for him to endure and to watch his father endure . This situation has gone beyond the
pale of reality.
It happens somewhere out there where everything is completely
strange and unnatural , where death really does look tempting .
It is strange and unnatural for Edgar to be betrayed by Edmund, for Gloucester
to believe Edmund, for Edgar to decide to be Tom o' Bedlam, for Edmund to betray
Gloucester, for Gloucester's eyes to be put out by Cornwall, and for blind betrayed
Gloucester and his betrayed beggar son to meet and journey together toward a cliff
from which Gloucester plans to leap.
These events don't necessarily exceed the limits of credibility .
In fact, they
result naturally from the original situation .
Howeve r , every one of them violates
our sense of what would be natural for humans to do and to suffer . Edgar seems to
think that he acts unnaturally because he is in an unnatural situation; that to obey
his human instincts during this unhuman afternoon would be to doom his father and
himself .
He seems to think that s ·Jicide is such a serious crime against nature
(against all thre e n atu res : physical , human , and individ u al) , that to interfere with
it in a regular human way would be to fail his fathe r. Only supernatu ral c r eatures
can fight battles outside of nature's realm .
When Edgar meets his father at the foot of the imaginary cliff and speaks to him
in the new persona of a gentleman, he tells Gloucester that he thinks Gloucester was
led to the cliff's edge by a fiend . Although Edgar is deceiving his father about his
own identity, he is honest here . Two fiends stand at the top of the cliff . One is
Gloucester, a man who refuses to endure his life and tries to break every natural law
by killing himself .
The other is Edgar , his son, who leads him to that imaginary
cliff without revealing himself, without begging his f ather to reconsider .
Edga.r
makes the cliff imaginary when it could have been real, but he must act as a fiend to
lead his father to an imaginary suicide .
Hoping to save his father by doing it,
Edgar plays the fiend.
I respect this .
It makes sense to assume that suicide is something a person
must face alone, to decide that although it may be unnatural and evil, suicide must
be private as well.
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lets his father risk his life alone .
It is a brave and perhaps foolhardy thing to
do .
Defiance in the face of nature runs in Gloucester's family. Edmund defies human
moral nature .in service of his own physically natural desire for wealth and power .
Edgar defies normal human nature and his own individual nature in service of his superhuman concern for his father.
Both defiances spring from their father's strange
willingness to turn nature on its head. Gloucester's willingness, in turn, springs
from his own conviction of helplessness and uselessness . He is the man who said,
As flies to wanton boys are we to th' gods.
They kill us for their sport .
(IV, i, 37).
This view of things is defensible .
I could argue that the two lines are the
theme of the play, that everything which happens in it is just this sort of wanton,
meaningless sport of the gods . But somehow, in Lear, Cordelia, and Kent's cases (and
perhaps finally in Edgar and Gloucester's), the depth of our suffering and the acuteness of our misery give meaning to meaningless events.
Gloucester says that he
envies the king's ability to lose his woes in his distraction, but he is absolutely
wrong in attributing this ability to the king. Lear may be mad, but he is not for getful .
Gloucester, on the other hand, actually has the ability which he envies
Lear .
Gloucester is able to decide not to endure, to somehow numb his feeling of
sorrow. Where Lear shouts, "Pour on, I will endure!" (III, iv, 17), Gloucester instead thinks up a scheme which will release him from enduring . His resolve to kill
himself is an unnatural response to suffering .
He takes unnatural comfort in the
notion that his "misery could beguile the tyrant's range and frustrate his proud
will." (IV, vi, 64).
Gloucester sees his situation a little more clearly when he is blinded and realizes which son is actually a "loyal and natural boy" (II, ii, 84) and which is an
"unnatural, brutish villain" (I, ii, 76) .
This does not mean that his spiritual
sight is fully restored. The Gloucester who decides to kill himself cannot or will
not look his own misery full in the face . He does not see that human beings must
"bear affliction till it do cry out itself, 'Enough, enough!' and die" (IV, vi, 75),
until he has tried to end his enduring and has failed.
He fails in his suicide attempt because Edgar, his son, will not let him kill himself.
By this failure,
Gloucester is brought to his knees, forced to endure what he would rather avoid .
When Edgar finally tells Gloucester the whole truth, and Gloucester faces his life
with nowhere to shrink back to, he dies. Gloucester knew when he tried to kill himself that he would never be able to bear his sufferings . What he did not and could
not know o r see was that by being fo r ced to bear them, by living on till fortune
killed him, by enduring his own going hence rather than trying to force it - by and
through all these things he would finally achieve the only triumphant death of the
play.
Gloucester sees everything before he dies, and when his heart bursts, it
bursts "smilingly .. . twixt two extremes of passion, joy and grief" (V, 111, 198).
Gloucester's growth into awareness kills him, for he is not made of stuff stern
enough to bear clear sight . But while awareness kills him, it also saves him in a
way that no one else is saved. Gloucester feels deep grief at the end of the play,
but he feels joy as well.
Gloucester's death is vastly different from the numbed, twisted comfort he would
have had from suicide . Rather than tricking his fate, his fate has tricked him into
full awareness and a full death . However, although it is full, it is still the death
of a man who, if he had lived, could have been happy.
His death may be a supreme
moment for him, but even in Gloucester's case we do not feel that it is a completion,
that it is a solid, meaningful end. Gloucester has gone hence as much as anyone and
faces as much uncertainty .
Gloucester's triumph is his awareness of the great joy
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�After Edgar tells us of Gloucester's death, Regan and Goneril kill each other,
and Edmund is borne off the stage fatally wounded.
We do not see any of them die .
At this point, Oswald's miserable little death is the only one we have acutally witnessed. Goneril and Regan's bodies are briefly displayed, and then Lear enters with
his dead daughter in his arms. Howl, howl, howl!!!
Edmund held the fates of Cordelia and Lear in his hands and hesitated on the
verge of death and on the edge of goodness.
He decided to confess and try to save
them, but he decided too late. If Edmund had been faster, Cordelia would have lived.
This tragedy of timing has gone on throughout the entire play.
In Cordelia's death
it is manifested most clearly. If human ripeness is some sort of a goal, then timing
is obviously crucial.
It is hard to die young and ripe.
In thE sense of ripeness,
Cordelia's death is the most tragic in the play.
Cordelia's going hence by leaving home is a sad moment because she cannot return
freely. However, the sadness is not unbearable. It is natural for children to leave
home, and although their being thrown out is hard, it is also fairly common. Lear's
banishment, on the other hand, is unbearably hard. Fathers are not often thrown out
of their homes. When it happens, nature has been turned upside down in a frightening
and tragic way.
Fathers are supposed to die, and their children to survive them.
Although fathers' deaths are sad, and the violent suffering deaths which fathers endure in this play are unnatural, they are humanly bearable. For a father to bear the
death of his daughter is much harder than for a son to bear his father's.
The death
of any child is a more shocking and disturbing loss than the death of any parent.
Cordelia's death is unbearable and unnatural because she is not a parent but a child.
Even in the realm of death, Cordelia's suffering remains mute.
Lear suffers
when he is banished, and suffers again when Cordelia dies, even though the death is
hers. Lear dies with his daughter's body in his arms . We witnessed the first death
of the play, Oswald's, and we watch the last.
Though we see a few of the dead
bodies, Lear is the only important character whose death we watch.
Not seeing the
others lends much mysterious power to death. We have no notion at all of what it is,
why it happens, or where these people go. Lear's death does not help us with any of
these questions. In some ways it is a relief when he is finally allowed to die after
everything he has cared about, wrapped in Cordelia's body, is gone.
In another way,
it is the most frustrating moment of the play.
He doesn't enlighten us.
For the
first time in the play he seems really mad, to the point of unawareness . Kent says
"The wonder is he hath endured so long.
He but usurp' d his life." (V, iii, 316) •
Lear's death is at once the saddest moment of the play and the biggest relief in the
play. However, his death is no end at all. He dies telling us to look at something
we cannot see . Perhaps it is an illusion of life in Cordelia's corpse . Perhaps as
he joins her in death he sees that her immortal soul is really alive. Perhaps he has
finally turned into the confused old fool who, in our bitter moments, we suspected he
might be. We do not know. Certainly though, Lear's death is not a conclusion.
It
is as vague and shadowy as any other death, and because we watch it , we know for certain that it is not any sort of achievement, in that Lear finds no peace in it.
The inconclusiveness of his death is not Lear's tragedy. Every human being dies
an inconclusive death. The younger a person dies, the more meaningless and inconclusive the death.
It is a general tragedy of the human race that we die and that our
deaths are mere "going hences" to be endured, rather than final blasts of glory to be
savored and remembered by all who survive us.
We endure death in two ways:
We endure the deaths. of those who die while we
survive, and we endure our own. Being left behind is always inconclusive and lonely,
and in this respect every death in King Lear rings true.
However, the manner in
which we endure our own deaths is not nearly so uniform. Gloucester's death is almost triumphant for him. He is ripe and ready to go. Cordelia's death is absolutely
horrifying because she is young and green, completely unready and unripe.
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somewhere in between.
he could have become.

He does not want or even expect to die.
He is not fully ripe.

He has not become all

Edgar tells Gloucester that
Men must endure their going hence, even as their corning hither.
It is not as easy to distinguish between the literal and metaphorical meanings of
coming hither as it was with going hence.
If going hence does have a literal
implication of going outside, coming hither may mean something like corning inside,
coming into a situation which i.s already happening. The word "hither" means "here".
Edgar must either be talking about here, this world, or here, underneath this
particular tree during the unfavorable outcome of this particular battle.
I cannot generalize about coming inside the way I did about going outside because Edgar speaks the line outside. Everyone in the play has come outside in order
to get to Edgar's here, the final battle.
Instead, I' 11 talk a little about this
absurd battle. The play would be very different if Cordelia's army had won the day.
The villains would still have ample opportunity to kill each other off, and the likelihood of the happy survival of Gloucester, Cordelia, and Lear would be good.
It
makes sense that Regan and Goneril's forces would beat Cordelia's, but then it also
makes sense that Edmund would defeat Edgar in a duel.
The latter does not happen.
The former then, must be more than a victory of good warriors over a good daughter.
Instead, it is the inevitable result not of Lear's daughters' natures, but of Lear's
own nature.
Gloucester's ability to die twixt two extremes of passion, joy, and
grief, to die the best death in the play, is the ability which his sons have inherited.
Their plot does not conclude perfectly - Edmund hesitates too long before repenting - but it does end well. The good, lawful son inherits and the bad son dies
repentent.
Lear's family is not able to manage things so tidily.
They all die,
leaving no heir but the milk-liver'd Albany, husband of the most villainous member of
the family.
It is appropriate that the man whose own death is unambiguously tragic
should have a family which ends as ungracefully and as completely tragically.
However, Lear's family's ends are much more honest, much more appropriate to themselves than the ends of Gloucester's family.
The "hither" which Edgar might mean
literally is a battle illustrating the meaninglessness of everything which happens in
the family of the king.
The warrior sisters' armies win the day, and at the same
time one sister poisons the other and is stabbed by her. Their servants unthinkingly
murder their father and sister, even though they themselves "desperately are dead".
The whole thing is gruesome.
Edgar may have saved his father from suicide, but he
has led him hither, to a battle which cannot possibly end well. This is not Edgar's
fault.
Men must endure their corning hither, and living in England at the end of
Lear's reign necessarily means being involved in the bloody demise of Lear's family.
The real and important meaning of corning hither is not the literal one. Edgar's
words to his father are strangely double edged.
"Don't worry, Dad," he is saying,
"you must endure your death as I had to endure my birth. I cannot do anything about
being your son, and you cannot do anything about dying." The order and the emphasis
of Edgar's words imply that it is harder to endure birth than death, that being born
is a greater burden.
The idea that having a father can be a tragic event is
definitely central to the play.
There are few mentions of mothers in King Lear.
Gloucester mentions Edmund's mother when he blames her for conceiving Edmund and
having a baby for her cradle ere she had a husband for her bed (I, i, 13). Almost
every mention of mothers is connected with adultery and illegitimacy.
When
Gloucester is told of Edgar's treachery, he says of Edgar, "I never got him"
(II,i,80) .
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�if Regan is not glad to see him, he' 11 "divorce her mother's tomb, sepulchering an
adultress" (II , iv, 132).
It is frightening and funny to note that Edmund is the
only son whose fatherhood is never questioned. The only other mention of motherhood
is Lear's curse on Goneril, where he hopes she has a child of spleen that she may
feel "how sharper than a serpent's tooth it is to have a thankless child." {I, iv,
278) •

I mention the lack of mothers because I am certain that a mother on the cast
would throw the play into a completely different dimension.
Mothers have a natural
physical connection to their children which fathers, who do not carry their children,
can never have. The bond between father and child must be more social than that between mother and child . Fathers love their children according to human moral nature
and to their own individual natures rather than according to any real physical bond
(though raising someone fr om birth creates a strong bond) . Though fathers by nature
love their children, the bond between father and child is not necessarily an
indissoluble bond, or at least not an unassailable one .
Gloucester and Lear have
reared their children alone.
The children have grown up in situation$ where the
animal nature of families has been easily forgotten and where the bonds of nature
alone have been set up as standards, weaker for the lack of physical natural bonds.
Every child in the play suffers from having a .father. This is probably because
of the two particular fathers.
Both Gloucester and Lear reveal an almost total lack
of understanding of and concern for their children .
It is as likely in other human
situations to suffer from having a mother, but that suffering would be different. It
is not described in King Lear. This is not to say that the sufferings of children in
the play are the same.
Edmund must bear his father's scorn.
His father conceived
him for sport, mocks him in his presence, and sends him away for nine years at a
time, all without a second thought.
Edgar must suffer the same man, who does not
know or care about him, and who believes treason of him without a second thought.
Goneril, Regan, and Cordelia must bear a very different father, a king who treats his
daughters as subjects and their love for him as a matter to be debated in court .
Lear of fers his daughters complete material independence, but he offers it at the
price of complete emotional devotion or of flattery.
When Goneril and Regan buy
their kingdoms with deceitful tongues, Lear must know that they are doing so. He has
reserved the best portion for the daughter whose genuine love he is certain of , and
he has set the situation up so that his bad daughters can make their graceful, lying
speeches without having to do anything to prove the matter of their words . The price
Cordelia pays for being Lear's daughter is far greater than the honor which Goneril
and Regan give up.
If Cordelia were to swear her complete devotion to her father,
she would keep her word and wither and die without a life of her own .
Her other
choice is to not promise the emotional subjection which she does not want to offer,
and to suffer and die without her father's love or approval.
Edgar has endured his own coming hither, accepting his father for what he is ,
and behaving as the loya:-.., natural boy Gloucester thinks Edmund is.
Regan and
Goneril also endure their coming hither fairly well. Lear does not ask them to love
him, but to make fine speeches about love in his court . They do as he asks.
They
are savage and cruel to Lear, but this compounds rather than constitutes Lear's tragedy.
In fact, although he toys with the notion of their illegitimacy, Lear is certain that Goneril and Regan are his daughters. He muses that torturing his own flesh
may be the most appropriate response to his daughters' treachery, since his is the
flesh which begot those peculiar daughters. There is something to this. Goneril and
Regan are probably more cruel than Lear, but he has as little reason for banishing
Cordelia and Kent as they have for throwing him outside. They are definitely Lear's
daughters and they do not do anything to challenge or to try to change the relationship to Lear into which he puts them.
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born into . Edmund cannot endure his bastardy. His lack of control over the circumstances of his birth continues , because of those circumstances, into every moment of
his life.
He does not and cannot believe that his being twelve or fourteen
moonshines lag of a brother affects his nature in any real or meaningful way .
Although he uses his father's love for him as one more proof of his own merit, he is
willing to subvert that love to a purpose which, in his eyes, is much higher .
He
will do whatever he must in order to take control of his circumstances. We get the
feeling that if things had been slightly different, if Edmund had been born twelve or
fourteen moonshines earlier, and had been born legitimate, he might have been able to
endure his birth and his father's failures.
Everything might have been vastly different .
Instead, Edmund decides , "Let me, if not by birth, have lands by wit; All with
roe's meet that I can fashion fit." (I, ii, 176). In the eyes of a bastard, legitimacy is simply a legalistic notion.
If the human morality is nothing more than "t~e
curiosity of nations" (I, ii, 4) in respect to the primary important matter of his
own birth, to decide that morality is no more than ridiculous law-making in every
other respect is not difficult. According to these ridiculous la~s, Edmund ou~ht to
have nothing and be nothing . At the same time, these laws predict that he will .be
lawless and base .
Edmund defies the expectations of his powerlessness by grabbing
for all he can get and by ruthlessly betraying his brother and his father . But ev~n
as he betrays the men whose existence nullifies his in such a complicated way, he is
playing the role of the outlaw, the bastard.
To ta~e a~tion to try ~o reverse the
circumstances of his birth is certainly to stop enduring it. However, in that Edmund
is at the same time completely affected by the circumstances of his birth, he is in
some way trapped into bastardy . He is responding according to the outlaw nature a
bastard is born with.
we are not meant to despise Edmund; his speeches are too attractive for that . The timing is off, though, as it is in every other facet of the
play. And so Edmund is forced to be base, to be unnatur~l by mor~l .h~an nature at
the very moment he is natural by physical nature. Edmund is by def~nition an outlaw .
The whole problem with being the child of a thoughtless father is brought . out by
Edmund's situation.
His birth is his biggest affliction, and he has carried the
brand of it through every moment of his life. He cannot unbirth himself, and he cannot even really regret the fact that he has been born.
He owes his fa:her h~s very
life, and at the same moment, his father is res ponsib le for every. misery in that
life. Because his father begot him at all, Edmund is bound to love him and obey him;
because his father begot him in the manner he did, Edmund must betray him .
Although Edmund rebels against the circumstances of his birth, he does notrebel
personally . His quarrel with his coming hither is f or. the mo~t part material rather
than spiritual, and his betrayals are motivated by his longing for land and power
rather than by any feeling of deep moral and emotional wrongdoing.
It is the base
material nature of his motivation which decides Edmund's villainy .
His father and
his brother have not tortured him after all, nor have they asked him to betray himself in any way which would force him to rebel, to stop enduring.
Instead, they
have, justly or unjustly, deprived him of the wealth and power he craves. We cannot
judge Edmund acco rding to normal laws because he was born outside of them.
However,
we know that he is aware of his family's love for him, and that he refuses to endure
his birth in spite of their love f or him and in spite of his for them.
Edmund betrays his family's love for the sake of their money, and in doing it, he becomes "a
most toad-spotted traitor" (V, iii, 139).
Cordelia is the other child who refuses to endure her birth, to obey her fath~r ,
to take from him what he offers her, or to promise him what he asks of her . Her circumstances, of course, are very different from Edmund's. She is the favorite ~augh­
ter; Edmund is the unwanted son.
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�Kingdom; Edmund has been promised nothing.
Cordelia's father demands that her love
for him be a matter of words and ceremonies, that what is most privately important to
her be demonstrated in his court.
She endures ·this by standing firm in the face of
it, but her firm stance is also a rebellion. She cannot do her father's will because
he wants her to promise him every bit of her love .
If Edmund suffers because his
father will not give him enough, Cordelia's suffering is tied with the much more
painful and destructive fact that her father demands too much from her. To give him
what he asks would be to deny her honor and to lie.
It would be to betray the relationship between them or to deny her own life and every freedom she has ever had,
thus betraying herself.
She chooses to stand firm, to maintain her honor and her
loyalty to herself . By doing this, she fails her father and rebels against him.
Cordelia rebels against her father because she loves him.
She cannot bear to
see Lear the man subsumed by Lear the king. She is deeply hurt that Lear her father
refuses to think of her as his daughter and instead tries to make her into a flattering courtier.
He..c rebellion, based on these offenses against humanity and
fatherhood, starts the tragedy, but her rebellion is not really an active one.
She
is trapped by circumstance as much as Edmund is .
She must love her father and she
must be true to him.
In order to do so she must betray the king, Lear, and disappoint the man, Lear. Although she rebels against her father and the circumstances of
her birth, Cordelia does not betray either.
In fact, she does nothing until she returns to invade her homeland and reinstate her father.
It is clear that she does not
want him to force his kingdom on her . When he wakes from his sleep in her care, she
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asks, "How does my royal lord? How fares your majesty? (IV, vii, 44).
Cordelia's decision to speak in words of the court means two things . First, she
wants Lear to know that he is king and must be king until he dies, and that she will
not take his kingdom from him, no matter how insistently he offers it. At the same
time, she is finally capitulat:lng, speaking to him as king rather than as father.
She does not do this because she thinks of him as king rather than as father, but
because she knows he wants her to, and she is determined to obey him. When Lear is
convinced that she is real, he thinks that she is mocking him. Here is another tragedy of timing .
Just when Cordelia sees her way clear to being her father's subject
as well as his daughter, speaking to him in the royal language he once demanded, Lear
sees the foolishness and impotency which have come out of his royalty, and renounces
them.
He says he has given her cause to hate him, and Cordelia denies it.
"No
cause," she says, "No cause." (IV, vii, 75) . She tells the truth here . Lear's unnatural demand for a pledge of total devotion and his unnatural offe r of an inheritance
before he actually died, forced Cordelia to rebel against him, and to disobey him.
He banished her to a husband who loved her . Although her father ' s anger and her own
banishment must have caused her real grief, it was her father's foolishness and the
certain failure of his plans which saddened here the most . She has worried about him
and wept for him; she has not suffered much in her own fate.
Lear seems to see his
mistake here.
He has learned that he is a man as well as a king, and that the two
are separate. He has even gone so far as to decide that his manliness is more important than his kingliness.
If the play ended with this reunion, it would not be a
tragedy. Of course, it goes on. Lear and Cordelia are taken as prisoners.
The words I am writing this essay about are the last words we hear spoken be tween Edgar and his father . The scene which follows Edgar and Gloucester ' s last is
Cordelia and Lear's last scene together . The tenors are drastically different. If I
find hope in Edgar and Gloucester's last scene together, it must be severely tempered
by the despair with which the next scene fills me.
Lear's speech in this scene is
beguilingly beautiful, and I have often heard it referred to as the happy ending of
the play.
For me it is a final horror.
Cordelia and her father are taken captive.
Cordelia speaks words of selfless comfort to her father, and calls him "oppressed
king" (V, iii, 5) rather than "dear father" or any other name which expresses af-

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fection.
Her words and her tone here sicken me.
She has not stood firm in her determination to be Lear's daughter rather than his subject. She speaks words as wooden as her first, but these, her last , are also false.
She speaks a hope which she
does not feel, she makes a final attempt to compete with her sisters and proclaim her
love for Lear, she falls into the courtly language she despises. Here, for the first
time, Cordelia endures her fo rtune in the weak sense of the word: she meekly suffers
it. Here, for the first time, she does not endure ' her circumstances by standing firm
in the face of them.
At the very last, Cordelia weakens .
Her weakening fills me
with despair .
I take little comfort from thinking that she may be standing firm in
the face of her going hence, because these words are f or her father.
Whatever implication they may have concerning Cordelia's death, it cannot outweigh the horrible
blinding of Lear which these words effect. Lear's speech in response to Cordelia's
last words is beautiful, and it is ghastly.
No, no, no, no! Come, let's away to prison.
We two alone will sing like birds i' th' cage.
When thou dost ask me blessing, I'll kneel down,
And ask of thee forgiveness . So we'll live,
And pray, and sing, and tell old tales, and laugh
At gilded butterflies, and hear poor rogues
Talk of court news; and we'll talk with them too Who loses and who wins; who's in, who's out.And take upon's the mystery of things,
As if we were God's spies ; and we'll wear out,
In a wall'd prison, packs and sects of great ones.
That ebb and flow by th' moon .
Take them away
Upon such sacrifices, my Cordelia,
The gods themselves throw incense . Have I caught thee?
He that parts us shall bring a brand from heaven
And fire us hence like foxes. Wipe thine eyes.
The goodyears shall devour 'em, flesh and fell,
Ere they shall make us weep! We'll see 'em starv'd first .
(V, iii, 8)
Although Lear has learned the wisdom of humility and humanity and the uselessness of
royalty, he has not learned to be a father.
He rejoices in the prospect of his own
captivity because it will also be his daughter's captivity.
He started the tragedy
by scheming to catch Cordelia, to force her to declare her love for him, and to arrange things so that he could spend every minute of his old age with her .
He thinks
he has accomplished his goal here, and he crows with joy while Cordelia begins to
weep with dismay. Surely, he will . ask her forgiveness continually and be glad to get
it.
But Lear will never regret anything now that he has "caught" Cordelia and can
command her constant attention and devotion. This is the saddest moment of the play.
It is the moment where a story which might have been about a good but foolish king
le arning wisdom through suffering becomes instead the story of a man who never learns
anything until it is too late, and who never escapes or even comprehends the fault
which causes his suffering.
This is also the moment when Cordelia must endure her father in a way that few
people are called upon to endure their parents. She must directly face the fact that
her father will never be a father to her.
He will always be someone who plots and
schemes in his effort to catch her, to have her all to himself, and to be cared for
by her .
If Gloucester's great and horrifying unnaturalness is his effort to end his
own life, to enforce rather than endure his going hence, Lear's horrifying unnatural-

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�ness is his effort to demand from his daughter the love which a father ought to bestow on her.
Edgar tricks his father out of suicide into seeing all that ha.s happened to him
clearly and dying in an honest response to his clear vision.
This deceit is appropriate and effective. However, Cordelia has no weapon against her father's unnatural
demands except her honesty.
She can only refuse, and after fortune goes against
them, she cannot even refuse her father's unnatural desires.
(There is no evidence
that these are incestuous desires.)
Instead, Cordelia dies, a victim in every respect, having only been able to endure her birth, and now merely enduring her going
hence.
She is hung while her aged father fights a desperate battle for her _ nd
a
Edmund deliberates about whether to stop her hanging. Her death is completely pointless insofar as it advances no one 's cause .
There is no real reason to kill her.
Her death is also the most piercing event of the play. Cordelia cannot and does not
die ripe, because she is young and because she does not expect to d~e. Her death may
It seems
may not help her father to attain some sort of awareness and ripeness.
it thrusts him into madness, that he is never made aware of his terrible fathering, that he dies miserably not because he h.as wro.nged his daughter and . she ~as
suffered deeply but because he is alone again.
His only chance of reunion with
Cordelia and 0 / getting the love he craves from her is to follow her into death.
There is something evilly beautiful about Lear's selfish passion for hi~ Jau~hter,
but there is nothing comforting about it. Although Lear's last speech, i~ which he
humbly asks for help with his button, shows how far he has come from the king on the
heath who decided to be unaccommodated and then commanded his servant to unbutton
him, nonetheless he has not made the final important step. Lear has learned to be a
man, but he remains hopeless as a father.

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Edgar says to his father,
Men must endure
Their going hence, even as their coming hither;
Ripeness is all. (V , ii, 9) .
Ripeness is offered as a result of , or a comfort in, the face of the things
which precede it: our endurance of nature, of going hence, a~d o~ coming hith~r.
Ripeness is a natural image, one which we would not ~rdinarily connect with human beings. Let me look briefly at ripeness in. the physica: natural world in order
to try to get a clear definition of the word in its most basic sense , before going on
to try to talk about ripeness in a human context .
The ripeness of a peach is not the peach's achievement . Peaches have no will
and cannot achieve or even act. Peaches are capable of being created , plucked, and
eaten .
All of the activities of a peach are passiv~ .
H.owev:r, .not every ~ea~h
ripens to full flavor . The reasons for a peach not being r ipe is either that it is
still green or that it has become rotten.
In the case of a peach, ripeness depe~ds
on the weather, and, far more, on the passage of time .
In time, e~ery .peac~ will
ripen.
Given too much time, any one will go rotten.
When a peach is ripe, it ~as
reached its peak .
It tastes best t o us, but our taste echoes nature 1 s perfection
rather than deciding it. Ripe fruit is ready to fall, ready to rot for the sake.of
nourishing the seed it bears and continuing the cyclical life of the ~lant wh ich
bears it . Ripeness is a fruit's perfection, but is is not earned by a fruit . Peaches do nothing but wait to be ripe .
Of course, people are no t peac h es . 0 u r Sou ls are not vegetable souls . Ripeness
for humans is more than the simple physical maturity which results from the pas~age
of time . Nonetheless, Shakespeare compares us to plants when he tells us that ripe-

ness is all.
Ripeness in humans . must be mostly. a result of the passage of time.
whatever ripeness may be, it is not something which human beings can strive for or
make strides toward.
What we produce is not important to Edgar or to Shakespeare.
we are not fruit-bearing creatures, but rather we are fruits.
What bears us is beyond our control, and so is what plucks us . The task of a human being is merely to
endure, most fully, all that confronts him or her.
One is ripe only when one has
endured patiently and bravely everything which will be endured and is completely
ready to be cut off from this life of endurance, to part from one's children as they
will part from theirs, because it is time.
This is the physically natural sense of ripeness in humans. We must also look
at ripeness according to human nature and to individual will.
Earlier, I mentioned
two kinds of endurance :
plain passive endurance (undergoing) leads to the natural
ripeness I have described . But endurance can also have a stronger meaning:
standing
firm in the face of . We must stand firm in the face of nature, of going hence and of
corning hither.
Standing firm in the face of nature is best illustrated by King Lear on the
heath in the storm. He shouts, "Pour on, I will endure!" (III, iv, 17) and he does,
remaining fully aware of himself and at the same moment, forcing himself to be fully
aware of the natural world which opposes him and to be honest about its power over
him. Lear's final ripeness is not complete. He does not stand firm in the face of
his death in that he does not really know he dies.
He does not stand firm in the
face of his fatherhood; standing still is vastly different from standing firm.
His
inability to change is an inability to endure because it is an inability to face himself anq his circumstances squarely . However, in spite of his failure as a father
and his failure in death, Lear's firmness in the face of nature is triumphant.
In
respect to the natural world and his awareness of his place in it, Lear grows ripe.
When he dies, he is, in at least one respect, fully ripe.
Lear on th~ heath is also a good example of enduring our going hence, in the
out-of-doors sense of going hence . Lear is not alone in his endurance of banishment
and of the things "out there".
Kent, Cordelia, Gloucester, and Edgar all endure
banishment, each in a slightly different manner .
Being banished and going hence is
the most certain and most common way in which people ripen.
Everyone in the play
seems to be able to stand firm in the face of their banishment, and all of them grow
wise because of it.
The other meaning of going hence is dying. Gloucester has more trouble facing
his death than any other character . However, when his "heart burst smilingly, twist
two extremes of passion, joy, and grief" (V, iii, 198) , Gloucester has endured his
death as no other character has.
In spite of himself, Gloucester waits for death to
claim him, and he endures it by allowing it to happen to him rather than by seeking
it. But his real triumph is in his standing firm in the face of his death, look ing
his death and all of his life full in the face , and dying completely aware of what
his life has been and of the fact that there is as much to be glad about as their is
to mourn .
This is ripeness in de-a th, this readiness combined with this hesitancy
and, above all else, with this awareness.
Ripeness in regard to our coming hither is most fully evinced by Edgar. He ac knowledges his father's weaknesses and goes to great lengths to help his father overcome his faults without shrinking from them or allowing them to remain.
In the
course of doing this f o r his father and for himself, Edgar is the most enigmatic
character in the play.
His mys t ery results from the fact that he is able to completely fulfill the advice he has given to his father.
Edgar is somehow able to ac cept nature, death, and birth . He is able to outface the winds and persecutions of
the sky, to lead his father to a false suicide thereby risking his father's actual
death, and to act always in accord with his responsibilities to and his unde rstanding
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�.:v!1u Ei_~l.ln_&lt;h ~-::&lt;2,'}$~nq_t.-. enpµr~.li ?-~ :1 W E111,, : -iP ,E(;paps b_~SC?-UP:ft _, Ri_qmun.?,.'s original situation is
1 .qar,~~r , tq '- ~~d't~· tz!1~~, )~:?-g'!l-,; ;~ .f?t~ (fS.9 .1(.9.ei~a , ca qn ~t. : P.9 ~t.: eith~;r l perhaps because she is
119..P ~,::f,a..y.~h~~· '1-11 · whth._, ,v;~.i;::~ue J 9o~egg;w,, ;· §h~ canl;lp~1 1 ....il}l!froy.is,~ , in her dealings with her
- ~,q.tp~r :&gt;.W ._ i ,!;1. p . r; cr~p P0. ~8:e~r te± fwf1.. s1tu't-t~o~.,. 1 f;~ur:i~ ~~. :.tp,o\ ~ lexible . He gives up any
e
0 ~ftg&gt;~~ .. ?-td~n~Hrn11c~ . !ll:DP ~al}ts ~,,B~s o,~ ru~§S . : w~;th.siut . ia , seyord thought . Cordelia, on
:. ~p,. e 5 q.~ h~,; r;I?-ar;yi~,~· i~) .. 11:qo ,, 9ti~~ a~d, ·:-,~poqeq ., J.O? : sa~911t ) up ;Lp her passive endurance to
" :fA?~}.~ ¥\.i'..-?t'r:~d · _
_:tirm&lt;;1 ~·~.PJH:s. i~ : t_?~[ ~1egoy~p. t,p 1~0,~e :. -.:r;.ig9~ou~ ! standard of purity to be
~c gf? ie c-: t,.o ,,rEfsF&gt;&lt;er8 ~s 0 n3r 1 rieA~u~~~qn ~..gerc:iQ.nd,s, &lt;?-ri&lt;;J., ..p~1p ._h,~:r: '~a~~er. ,and herself to ripeness.
Edgar's ripeness is interesting to me becq..µ,se ~~ s _eltls ,, .to know about ripeness from
e
.1 ~f:ie ~· "t!Ht .. &lt;;i~Ch t_~1 te.aqh ,i, ~f f 11'?.r his _, J~1f!_ler t ,· I,t. 1 ,is q,s . :i if 1 be .k:qows that the only possible
:-i 5.~.P.?-YW~ 1:r;;t 1 h~ - ~~n ~ke . j:?,_; l.}i~\', •tfa;th~-:r;~; ..L o!_; h,a y"
f
incq.,, ,g-1-yern .. p~ri;i.,: l .~fe is to give his father
rg.eit.th1 BR:':- P r;Q£.~}~,Etri@ tbiP1.' j;.Qst bYi ·: ~~i:HUng )).}me. ,t ? tr:he.:_.J?oint where he can die com,,
.Yi
; ~. J?.tE; itr?: +~ riiJ?ie l° i«, ,§,9m~l;1;9,W- ..., he c,r~_P,.yfil,8 9 ~ , o.f ,'l the ,_; §R;n J ,e$.11lt,;:;,. from , the ripeness of the fat
~ (!rh~ ;t; ., 3 "! 1 , ,tlfiip.,~ · &amp;,~a:t"' 1::~.~ - 1 . s,cµ,ne \I2,0~s,~I:? il. irty :~ T.X~.?:t: ed ·_. for.·_ Co ~~dylia and Lear : i f one had
been ripe in regard to the other, the other might have been led to ripeness. Their
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foggiest are Rachel's mother's death and my cousin Sam's death.
What they endured,
whether they were ripe, whether their decisions were info rmed by clear vision or by
hopelessness, I will never know, and I have no way of finding out.
I
am certain
though, that Rachel and I have hope of ripeness, in respect to those who have left us
and to those who gave birth to us.
We will endure, and we will grow ripe, and our
ripeness will be enough .

~ a l;!-_u:r;~ , fh~ p.0 m1;1,tua.~ • &lt;?;t;_l.~ ( j- aS 1,.Edga):" - and 1 · Glo,uc~.ster'. s s:uccess is mutual.
, '"' :.e,,t. ~~J?~f1:,Ss;·.- ~s . Rffy:&gt;;ed ; by 1., E~4mt-F:· tf.o i 0louc~st~r :- a-s 1a,~ .c;Qif\fort .
It is a comforting
~)iq·Efp, b,,~c~~se_ i ~t. . ji ,!f . ~'?:t , .an ~ID,P,O§?Jbl~.... pne,.:
-Being : ripe-, q0es not r equire being com::PJ..,Efte).y, ,,, , q at. isf~EQ&lt;;1,,_·; or ,:P .Ofl.\P;le:tely · ~a.I?P'Yr- i l ~ipeness " i~ •,, a •, J.C_omfort because it grows
H a~urall17 1 pu;t, q;f ,?_.li~ ,. po;r;,ro~s - and ,) OU·r
joys · , 1 • In:. order t,o be ripe, we must simply en.
.du,r~. . t:nd~r~ns~ ~, i ~ ,. r;tot:.~cqmp~etely.:- passj,ve; ·it .,i s · qu_ e .. p ossible to live through many
it_
j ,qys q.np, ,s orrows_ -W tihoµt be_
_:i
ing . ripened by them : .. Howeve r,· : endurance is not an impos_9,ih.l e d~pt~P.d 1 a:t;_1a _J,.-. 1 ,. vye mu,st. simply ;force .rqurselve1 1to ,be. aware of what is happening
*
s
t_ Lus. and, fo+c; e:r J 9'A13'se~v~s .-to , re,s pontj naturally .
o
., ,.•
1
,.
Ri.J;lER_n~w .s ;L s . ..f!.S IJ\Uc~:i., , a . result oj;: :0urr s_
uf.fe+ing as , it; is a comfort in the face of
,i _ . , 'I;'lt~ ) . less_,.we ,e:_;xp~rien9g r, . . 1 ap9.1 , t}:ie ~E?SS .fully we, allow . our.selves to experience the
t
events in our lives, the les~.,, ripe T-t~ 1wi].J.. _, g!OV{ . ·Qn .t he other hand , we can be shown
_ .e t,ruth p~i q~r. ctfXperiepi:re 1 ,~:f.te r ; it.: [la.s hap,pened,. , as Glqucester is.
:t;.f1.
Ripeness de P~f?.~ ;up.on tim~ 1.-,.:P,t!~ ·r.iP not . sub;:;e;rv_
ier:t; . to time ·.
Alt,hough ; we cannot be ripe without
. e,:&gt;tP~;rie:µc~, 'V!c,e ~. san.... ;t&gt;ecp!l\e.. 1 ,. .r_ip~ , rl _
ong&lt;, jifte.r . our experief'.lc. s.
e
There are many kinds of
exp~!i-:~:r;iqe 1 ~.s ., w~;I.._!; ·. if . . . \fe t3) ,ook, .long . .nd: hardirCl.t th~ ·· books we read, we can be tempe red
a
~y ~ Pu! ; ~xperiep.~~ _
oJ, the.~ .. arid gro~ _mor~ r.~pe . because... of them •.
, ;· ·, ...~lte;r-e , care 1 "'t"fq~ _
waJlp, to; .!iea,d '-.' -q.ll:''. in ~'Ripen~ss is all... .
"All" may be some sort
of limiting word, saying something like, "Ripeness is the only thing we can hope for.
l.lt . ,i ,i:; ~;LJ .J, w_,e C}Ji~1 ,, ac:fiieve ., " . ,~ipenes~ .m ay ,9e a , stq.tement of fulfillment and compl.~t:ion,_: -, , "R;if), neRs _ s _
e
i all . ~e need- t9 achieve. To be ri,pe is to be a complete human
; be~ng . ", ]?oth :r;eadings maJse sense wi thqut contradicting each other .
Ripeness is all
}:hat a humap bE?in,g can hqp,e to . accomplish, and ripeness is the fulfillment of a human
beiµg. !'fuen _we a~e ripe, ~ we are complete.
·: I : spoke at tfhe . start a}?oµt, my hope that my e xplor ation of Edgar's words to his
fat,.};le:r: -. woulp , be . ':ls~fu,l .to , rqe .in .my ow11 con.text as .well as in the contex t of the play .
I will not s~~ . ~o~ t~is . explo~~tion has changed or will until time has passed and the
che3:~9e_~ have , happ~n.ed. ,. . ipeness .is something I can hope for, but not strive for .
R
Rachel spent that summer in her mother's house in an attempt to learn about her
mo :the:r and to .:fac,e the circumstances . of her own .birth and of her mother's death .
_
R~c.he.l is ~y age,. and she has much growing, learning, and experiencing before her .
I
am certai.n s~~- .'wi ,i 1 continue to endure ~ravely, and I respect her resolve.
-+ am .~1;:. ;i ll bitter toward my father, and he toward me . I do not know whether
,
~~ere ,, wi~l be ripeness between us, but I know . that the way toward ripeness is endur ance. with . in:t,eg~ity.
I know that. I will ripen i;f I do nCDt resent, and if I can keep
myse,1,f frol}l l('.e in.g . at odds with "the situation and from denying it.
r .u . , Five
yeari;:; ~ave pa!?.sed since the . surruner I spent with Rachel across the bay from
my father . , I ~ Dfl.Ve ne~ded the$e years to sift thr. ugh and begin tc see clearly the
o
things which happened then.
Some things will always be foqqy for me.
The two

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�To Molly in August 1986

An Examination of Aristotelian Awareness

David Walter

Fawn Trigg

As if we know sin too well
We blind the eyes with darkness
And let benign fingers do the seeing;
Because fingers desire, above all,
to feel what they see;
But eyes desire, above all,
to see what they feel.

"All men by nature desire understanding. A sign of this is their liking of sen sation "(Metaphysics 980a 20) .
This juxtaposition has always puzzled me. Why does the observation that we enjoy sensations illuminate the claim that we are of a certain nature, and that this
nature is to want to understand? Aristotle examines the question of our nature as
men not so much in the Metaphysics as in the third book of De Anima .
The initial
task of De Anima is to find what is common to all living things as living, to ask
what it means to be alive.* Iri the third book Aristotle focuses his search on what
is common to all men as men, to ask what it means to be a man.
Since man alone has
an intellect, and "intelligence, above all, is man," (Ethics 1178a 7) , the question
of what it means to be a man reads more specifically in De Anima as what it means to
have an intellect . Aristotle examines this question usi;g-the method of inquiry set
out at the beginning of the Physics (184a 17- 21) . He proceeds in De Anima from what
is more known and clearer to us, sensing, but also common to animal-;; to what belongs
only to men, knowing .
Sensation's role in coming to know is brought to light by his
search and so sheds some light on what it means to be knowing .
The stage is set for one of the comparisons between the simply animate and
sentient souls in the last chapter of Book II . Aristotle had discussed sensation in
terms of a general definition:
sensation is the receiving of the forms of sensible
objects without their matter (424a 18). In II . 12 he asks what is the difference be tween our being warm in the sun and plants' being warm, since in both of these cases
we could say a sensible form is received without its matter . To feel warm is different from being warmed, since in feeling warm we must sense, o r be aware, that we ·are
being warmed .
The sentient soul is not only affected, but also senses that it is .
In III . 2 he asserts that "we sense the fact that we are seeing or hearing . "
(425b
12) • The question for Aristotle is not "do we sense sensing?" but "what part of the
sentient soul senses sensation?* But to "sense sensing" he tells us, has several
meanings . While the ability to sense sensing is involved in the distinction between
what it means to be an animal and what it means to be a plant, it is not clear what
this awareness actually is.
This question remains. In III.4 Aristotle asserts, "the intellect is intelligi-

As if we know sin too well
We turn our backs toward it-Like Perseus, tracing the translucent
Image of Medusa in the smooth, handpolished
Cavity of his inverted shield-Because eyes,
seeing , may turn desire to stone .

And I imagine my hand r eturning to the lamp-Retracing its path in the just- darkness:
Wait, I want, for an instant to see
The obscured shape of ecstasy .

*If, indeed, there is something in common .
The definition of the soul at 412b 4 - 6
takes the form of a conditional sentence : "If, then, there is something common to be
said about every kind of soul, this would be : the first actuality of a natural body
which has organs ."
*A question for which he gives two answers :
in De Anima III
"
. so we should
assume that this first sense [vision or hearing]- senses itse1f."
(425b 18) and in
Sleeping and Waking "each sense possesses something which is special and which is
common .
. special to vision , for example, is seeing . . . but there is a common
power which accompanies them all, in virtue of which one senses that one is seeing or
hearing." (455a 12ff) .

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�ble,"
(430 a 2) , and only explains when the intellect can know knowing, which is "after it has become several of i~objects."
(429b 10).
He mentions in the
Metaphysics in what way we come to s ense that we se nse and know that we know:
"knowledge and sensation are always o f other objects and only incidentally of themselves."
(1074b 35-36).
It is not clear what this awareness is.
Is this awareness
of knowing vital to what it means to be a man as a man and not as an animal, as
sentient awareness was vital in II .12 in distinguishing between an animal and a
plant?
Just as Aristotle does not explicitly discuss awareness , he does not explicitly
compare sensing sensing and knowing knowing. To find what sensing sensing and knowing knowing could be, to be able to compare them in the c ontext of this question, we
need first find out what kind of sensing and what kind of knowing Aristotle says we
sense and know .
s ensing sensing and knowing knowing are mentio ned in discussions focused on one
kind o f activity.
This activity is the being at one o f the objects of sense and
knowledge with the faculties of sensation or knowing.* In II.2 after he asserts that
we sense sensing, Aristotle discusses the activity of sensing:
"The activity of ·t he
sensible object and the activity of sensation [o f it ] are one and the same . "
(425a
26) .
He makes a similar conclusi on in III . 4, before stating we can know knowing,
that the "intel lect become s each intelligible object . "
(429b 6) .
Late in the
chapter Aristotle explains that "the intellect is intelligible," (43 0 a 2), by saying,
"that which thinks and that which is being thought are the same . "
(430a 4 ) .
This actuality of being at one rests o n Aristo tle's notion of the potentiality
and actuality of the s o ul . The faculties o f sensation and intellect exist in a state
of potentiality (417a 7, 429a 23). The sensible object is a particular which e x ists
apar t f r om the soul ; the knowable object is a universal which exists in the soul i n
some manner (417b 23) .
The potentially sensing facult y and the potentially knowing
fa culty are in some way similar to their obj ects and are affected by the activity of
their objects (429a 17 - 18) .
The activity occurs in t hat which is changing f r om
potentiality to actuality . The activity of the obj ect is the ac t ivity of the faculty .
They are one in that activity.
This change fr om the faculty existing potentially to becoming actual is a par ticular kind of change , because the faculty even while existing potentially is complete. So when actualized, it is not altered (431a 5- 8) . The faculty's change f r om
potentially sensing to actually sensing i s like the change a hammer undergoes when it
is put to work . The hammer is no t added to or subtracted from .
The hammer is complete, but becomes actually a hammer, because it is at work being a pounder of nails .
This kin d of change i s con t ras t ed with the chang e of mo tion whi ch "is t he ac t ua l ity
(43l a 7). The change involved in the pile of lumber in the
o f what is incomplete."
process of being built into the house is a motion (Metaphysics 1066a 7) .
The activity of being at one is the same for the sensing and know i ng souls , except the different faculties apprehend different kinds of objects . Nonetheless , the
objects a re analogous, insofar as they are objects of which apprehensi on can neve r be
false . Aristotle distinguishes two activities of the intellect, the forming of p r oposit i ons which may be true o r false, and the apprehension o f indivisibles . The sec ond is neither true nor false, except by equivocation. Apprehension of them would be
true, non- apprehension would not be true, and neither could be o therwise (Metaphysics
1 0 51b 22 - 26 ) .
Aristotle draws the comparison between this infallibility of the

intellective soul and that of the sentient:
An assertion, like an affirmation, is of something about
something else and in every case it is true or false. But the
intellect is not in every case of this sort . If it is a whatness
with respect to essence, it is true, and is not something about
something else; and just as seeing a proper sensible is true,
whereas that the white thing is a man (or is not a man) is not
always true .
(430b 27-31)
Knowing is then like sensing when apprehending, for they are both identical with the
object about which there can be no mistake .*
Then is knowing this kind of knowing similar to sensing this kind of sensing?
Perhaps it is acceptable to begin with a tentative yes, since sensing and knowing are
similar ways of being at one . The activity would have itself in activity as the object of its own activity .
That is, the sentient and intellective souls can be
self-aware.
There are problems with this account . $ince the first and second activities can
be simultaneous, how is it possible for the sentient or intellective faculty to be
both the object of the faculty in its being at one and the faculty which is also
aware of the object? Is this not demanding the faculty to be both one and two at the
same time?
Aristotle considers and rejects the possibility that there is a second faculty
which is aware of sensing .
If a second faculty is required to sense the second, ad
infinitum (425b 17-18) .
In re jecting this, Aristotle shows that he considers
sentient and intellective awareness as, necessarily, self - awareness .
If being aware
of sensing and knowing were the only consideration, he could have ended the regression by positing a single faculty which could be aware of sensing and knowing,
but not of itself .
The alternative is strange , that the -sentient and intellective soul be neces sarily both one and two at the same time.
But Aristotle, in the same chapters in
which he mentions awareness, discusses the discriminating faculty which also r equi res
the soul to be both one and two at the same time .
"The faculty which asserts diffe rence must be one " (426b 20) and two for "it is impossible that the same faculty
should be moved at the same time by contrary movements ."
( 426b 24) • The fa cul ties
of sensing and knowing could be of this same fundamental doubleness .
Insofar as the
faculty is at one with its object, it is one faculty; insofar as it is both the object and the faculty it is two . Without this doubleness, sensation would be nothing
more than the receiving of the for~s of sensible objects without their matter, and

*Be caus e the intellect "must exist without being blended" (4 29a 19 ) , and sense cannot, the f acul ty of sensation's being at one with an object entails the actualization
o f both an organ and a faculty, which are one in that actualization "numerically .. .
but the essence of each is different . " (424a 25 ) .

*Perhaps the reason for thei r respective infallibility could be something like this:
We know "the intellect should be related to the object of thought in a manner similar to that in which a sense is related to its sensible object, (429a 17- 18), and the
faculty is actualized insofar as it is like the object in activity.
The sense faculty and direct sensibles are essentially blended with matter .
Indi rect sensible are essences of objects which are directly sensed .
Since essence is
not essentially material, although not separate or separable from material things,
the apprehension of it by the essentially material faculty could be false.
Objects of the intellect are undivided or indivisible universals and irrunaterial,
whether by abstraction or as "the dispositions and attributes of sensible objects ."
(432a 5) .
The intellect also exists as simple and unblended with matter .
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�there would be no difference between being warmed and feeling warmed, or between being animate and sentient. Is it possible for the sentient soul to be warmed and not
feel warm; that is, is it necessary that the soul be aware of its activity?
Aristotle answers this directly in the case of the intellect:
"whenever the
intellect has become several of its objects .
. then it is capable ( sUvatcn ) of
thinking of itself . " (429b 5- 10) .
Although Aristotle does not make the analogous
statement for the sentient soul, it is not difficult to provide examples of sensing
without being self- aware .
City dwellers become oblivious to street noise, and are
not aware of it until a snowfall when everything is quiet .
I can be absorbed in a
book and not hear my name called nearby . We are not necessarily knowing knowing when
knowing and there seem examples of not sensing sensing when sensing . If awareness is
not necessarily concomitant with apprehension, does the original understanding of
what it means to be aware require broadening? Is ac t u a l appr ehension even necessary
for awar eness?
The answer seems characteristically Aristotelian, for it seems both yes and no .
Aristotle gives an example of awareness of the soul when not at one : when we do not
see, it is by vision that we discern darkness (425b 22) . The city dwellers are aware
of the absence of noise . The intellective soul has analogous experiences : I know I
do not know how to fix my car.
I need not be successfully apprehending to be
sentiently or intellectively self- aware .
What could I be aware of when aware of
non- apprehension?
Comparing
these
awarenesses
of
non - apprehension
to
unawareness
of
non- apprehension makes this clearer . An example of the latter is that I do not sense
that I am not seeing ultraviolet light. Another is that I would not have known that
I did not know about automotive mechanics if I had lived befor e there was such a
thing as an automobile (and its internal mishaps) . I would not have known that I did
not know about automotive mechanics .
I do not try to sense ultraviolet light and I
would not have tried to know how to fix cars before there were such things. When I
am aware that I do not see or do not know, I am aware of trying and failing .
I try
to see light; I do not; I call i t d arknes s.
I try t o know how to fix the car ; I do
not; I call it ignorance .
I must hold the actual seeing o f t h e light and knowing of
mechanics to be possible in order for me to try to see or know . To be aware o f these
attempts as failures , I must be awa r e of having actually sensed or actually known .
It is possible to be aware of having sensed or known, because after sensation a
sense impr ession o r image remains in the soul even after the object is gone (425b
25) .
After knowing, the soul possesses knowledge . The soul i s a ce r tain way after
apprehension , which al though different f r om its appr ehending way , i s not nothing .
Actual
apprehension
is
necessary
fo r
a warenes s ,
even
the
awareness
of
non- appr ehension .
The soul seems to have two opportunities fo r awar enes s, p r imar i ly in its infallible apprehension of objects, and afte r t h at i n its att empts and failures to
apprehend .
It is not necessary to be a ware whe n a pp rehend i n g, as the New York e r is
not necessar ily aware of street noise ; no r i s it necessa r y to be awa r e of
non- apprehending , as I am not aware of ultr a v iolet light .
The sou l' s awareness o f
apprehending o r not is only potenti al during thes e activities .
In On Sleeping and
Walking, this awareness is a " ~uvoµ.1lS' . . . in virtue o f which one perceives that one
is seeing and hearing."
(455a 12) .
Th i s potential for awarene ss is in the sou l 's
ability t o be at one with an obje ct. The actuality of this potential seems an activity and not a motion, for awareness is complete and an end in itself .*

*Speculation about awareness being an actuality seems to demand speculation on how it
came to be in activity . The change from potentiality to actuality requires there be
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It also seems that the awareness of apprehending and of non- apprehending are
dissimilar . The soul's awareness of being at one while being at one with an object
is a different awareness from the Soul's awareness of not being at one with an
object. Awareness of apprehension is an awareness of two separate potentialities as
one actuality . Aristotle explains the activity this way :
The activity of the sensible object and the activity of sensation
[of it] are one and the same, but the essence of each is not the
same . I mean, for e x ample , that the actual sound and the actual
hearing of it are one and the same, for a man may have hearing
and not be hearing, and that which has sound is not always
sounding . But when that which can hear and that which can sound
is actually sounding, then the actual hearing and the actual
sounding occur simultaneously , and one might say that these two
are hearing and sounding respectively .
(425b 22ff)
An awar eness of this activity would be an awareness of two as actually one, of both
hearing and sounding . The awa r eness of not being at one is an awareness "in a dif ferent manner . "
(425b 22) . Not seeing or knowing is still an undivided whole , but
in compar ison to another whole , actually seeing or knowing . At stake in these different shades o f awareness a r e different kinds of discrimination , for Aristotle seems
to find the activity of awareness as the root of discrimination .
The closeness of
these activities is persuaded by the fundamental doubleness required of the soul fo r
both of them , and b y thei r ties in the te x t .
An awareness of having b e en at one alre ady implies a distinction between two
wholes .
Ar istotle begins III . 2 a sserting sensing sensing, then explains that "' to
sense by vision ' does not only have one meaning , for even when we do not see , it is
by vision we discr i minate darknes s and light . "
(425b 21 - ~2) . . ~ 'To .sense by vision"
can not only be awar eness , but disc r imination.
These discriminations between two
things , such as light and darkness , a r e called sentient discriminations .
This dis c r iminating faculty also "discr iminate s things not in the same genus , [white , sweet]
in the same manne r in which it disc r iminates contraries [darkness , light] . "
(43la
24) . The faculty also di s c r iminates ma t hematical magnitudes , which for Ar istotle a re
only aspects of sensible objects cons i de r ed separately(431b 13) .
.
There is a s econd disc r iminating power which distinguishes between a magnitude
and its essence (429b 10). Th i s f a culty, when p r esented with triangular things can
discriminate thei r essence a s t r iangular , and when p r esented with triangles can discriminate what it means to be a triangle.
Immedia te l y a f ter the passage in III . 4
which mentions k nowing knowing , Ar i s totle discusses this kind of discrimination .
It
is aga i n explained in III . 7, with a p r ominent discussion of the identity of the fac ulty and object in activ ity .
.
This suggests that ·the second kind of discrimination, like the fi:st, is re~ated
to awareness .
In this case the awareness , which is of being at one with the obJect ,
is an awareness of a whole without comparison to other wholes .
Since this activity
is the simultaneous actuality of t he two ·potentialities , it seems possible to be
aware both of the sounding of the object and the hea r ing of the obj ect, which a l though are numer i cally one are in essence two .
In being aware in this way , the soul

of this actual activity seems to come to rest at the feet of the prime mover, who is
nothing but knowing knowing . I do not know what it means to say such a thing, and I
can only observe that this actuality which seems required is already present in
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�is aware of an object which differs with each particular sensation , and is aware of
the faculty which remains the same . This is similar to the process of discrimination
between a thing and its essence . The soul presented with specific things can come to
find that by virtue of which a thing can be taken as undivided .
For these particulars there is one universal, which is not separate f r om the part iculars but numerically one with them . This is the universal "being one beside the many, which would
be one and the same in all of them [particular sensations] ."
(Posterior Analytics
lOOa 7-8) . *
While one of these discriminations is called sentient and the other is not, both
must be rooted in sentient awareness.
Since all knowledge has its origin in sensation, knowable objects must be found in particular sensations (432a 5) .
If discrimination is what finds these knowable objects in sensation, intellective apprehension cannot be prior to it.
The question-what is at stake in sensing sensing- then receives two answers . The
first is the soul's awareness of itself as sentient, of itself as animal rather than
plant.
Sensation is not only liked for its own sake, as Aristotle obserues further
in the opening paragraph of the Metaphysics, but is necessary for understanding .
This second answer is that sentient awareness is necessary for discrimination and so
is necessary for finding knowable objects .
Sensation's part in corning to know not
only provides the particulars in which we find the knowable universals, but is the
foundation for the discrimination for finding these universals.
Is the question, what is at stake in knowing knowing, in turn illuminated by
sensing sensing? Is it, like the fundamental meaning of sensing sensing, the soul's
awareness of itself as a knower? Is it again something which rests on this activity,
the way discrimination does on sentient awareness?
The text supports both questions:
"only after it [the intellect ] has become
several of its objects
does it have the potential to know itself."
(429b
5-10).
In the second question, knowing knowing would mean knowing what it means to
know . After the intellect has become several of its objects , it has the potential to
discriminate between these particular instances of knowing and the universal of what
it means to know.
For the first question, knowing knowing would be similar to the most fundamental
sensing sensing, and would mean knowing one's self as a knowing being . The intellect
must become several of its objects, not in order to have fuel for discrimination, but
to become fully 'developed .
The beginning of the sentence from which the quotation
was taken reads :

several things , as being a scientist implies knowing more than one thing about sci ence.
This second explanation would be similar to the fundamental sensing sensing, if
this becoming of several objects were like the sentient soul's waking up .
If being
awake is the sentient soul's most fundamental way of being aware, then waking up
could mean becoming aware.
If knowing one's self as a knower is the most fundamental
way of the intellective soul's being aware , then the apprehending of these several
objects is the same becoming aware . These two explanations of a more fundamental and
derivative awaren~ss are not exclusive; nothing prevents being aware of being a
knower and also being aware of what it means to know .
If one o f Aristotle 's aims in Book III of De Anirna is to ask of the intellective
soul something similar to what he asks of the soul in gen~ral, he is looking for
something common to all men insofar as they are men. The answer he may give is that
we are men because of our intellects, but just to have an intellect is as good as
being asleep .* We are awake when we know ourselves as knowers.
Aristotle tells us
in the Ethics that the intellect is man, and "it would seem strange if a man did not
choose the life proper to himself but that proper to another . "
(1178a 4) .
This is
not Aristotle's exhortation on the best life to live, but his examination of what a
life for man means.

Whenever the intellect has become several of its objects, in the
sense in which we speak of a scientist when he is actually a
·scientist (and this occurs when a scientist can exercise his
knowledge by himself . . . ) (429b 5-8 ) .
It may be the case that a scientist cannot think by himself as a scientist, and consequently cannot be a scientist until he has learned and can exercise several things
about science.
Knowing one's self as a knower could only be the result of knowing

*I have a speculation about the analogy which Aristotle uses to illustrate this in De
Anima. The analogy is as a bent line is to a bent line when straightened out, so is
sentient discrimination to intellective discrimination .
( 429b 18) .
The bent line /
even as an object of abstraction, can have infinite permutations, since it could incline at an infinite number of different angles .
There can be only one straight
line . The unbending finds within each line, not somewhere else, what is the same for
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(Ethics 1176a 35).

�The Steeds of Hippolytos
Andrew Grablewski

The play Hippolytos by Euripides can be seen to have at its core a fundamental
concern with the struggle between humanity and certain natural forces.
Nature is
such an important element in Hippolytos that at times the play seems to overflow with
it.
The imagery used is one of animals: bulls, birds, bees, and horses.
We are
presented with meadows, flowers and oceans.
Even the gods who appear in the play
seem at times to be more representative of nature's powers than of divine will. Nature's powers are the principles of creations and destruction with indifference to
human concerns.
What seems to emerge gradually in the play is a theory about the
nature of the universe.
This is what is really at stake in the play.
Euripides,
like Plato in the Timaeus, and Lucretius in De Rerum Natura, tries to present us with
a sort of system to describe the way things work. The system is revealed through the
actions of the characters, and the characters are to be judged by the extent to which
they understand the essence of nature.
Iri contrast to the other systems, however,
man is in conflict with nature. The three major characters in the play are defeated,
humbled, and at last destroyed by nature. At the end, however, man uses what is essential to his being to shout down the power of the gods and to triumph over the
forces of nature which at first appeared inopposable .
Hippolytos is the most important character in the play . There are several reasons why this is so .
It is a flaw in his personality which produces the conflict of
the play . His scorn f o r the love of women and physical pass i on offends the goddess
Aphrodite who induces in Phaidra, his stepmother , an insatiable passion for him . His
decision to reject Phaidra ' s passion as · communicated by her nurse leads her to sui cide and a false char ge of rape .
Finally, in his death and r e c onciliation with
Theseus, the play is resolved in some sense with t he satisfaction o f the goddess in
her revenge .
The character of Hippolytos is problematic .
As the audience of the
play, we are made to feel somewhat ambivalent towa r ds him .
However , he has in his
favor many of the qualities admired in the philosophical dialogues . He appea r s to be
a man of reason .
He shuns the pleasu r es of the body and fa v ors comp anionship with
Ar t e mis , godde ss of the hunt , and the s ociety of other vi r tuous me n . Thr oughout the
play , his actions at least a r e indisputably jus t , and he a t t e mpts t o solve his
problems through r eason and persuasion .
On the o t he r hand , his dislike of women and
his scorn for love do not seem like admirable quali t ies . In th i s sense his characte r
appear s unbalanced . His love of sophrosune is clear ly more a love f or the quality of
chastity than a love for the othe r sense of the word as a quality of mode r ation and
balance . Most of us prefer to see Phaid r a as the sympathetic character of the play .
To me, however, Hippolytos is the sympathetic , t r agic , and finally heroic fig ure .
His flaw is not so much an imbalance as total ignorance of the laws of nature
around him and within himsel f.
He maintains this ignorance up to the end o f his
life .
In dying, not only does he refuse to succumb to the will of the gods, but he
also achieves a victory for humanity by showing the value of virtue .
Phaidra , too,
escapes nature, but her legacy is one of deceit and evil .
Hippolytos' ignorance of the character of nature , or more properly his misunderstanding of it, is revealed in his first speech as he dedicates a wreath to Artemis :

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I have brought you this green crown,
goddess, fresh from the scene
where I spliced its flowers together
a meadow as virginal as you are,
where no shepherd would think it wise
to pasture his animals, a perfect field
no iron blade has yet cut down.
Only the bees looking for flower~ in spring
go freely through its cut grass.
This passage shows his great misunderstanding. He sees the beauty of nature, but he
attributes something to it which is other than its nature, that is, the human virtue
of chastity . Hippolytos fails to see the bees as agents of procreation . Instead, he
sees himself as being similar to an insect, attributing a quality to it which it
doesn't have. Shortly after this passage he makes another revealing statement. When
asked if the gods are pleased by genial souls he answers with total confidence, Yes,
if gods and humans
share the same inner

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logic . ~

In his close companionship with Artemis, he has a false idea of both the nature of
god and of man . He thinks himself above what is congruent with the nature of humani ty, while assuming the gods to value human virtues.
However in the universe created
by Euripides, virtue is clearly a quality that has value for man alone.
The gods
enjoy the worship of humans and feel their slights, but to carry out their will they
are just as ready to sacrifice the just as the unjust . Aphrodite states,
That Phaidra dies
I regret , but not so much that I
would relinquish th~s great chance
to strike my enemy .
Hippolytos does not scorn the goddess completely, but he worships her distantly without emotion . To men this type of intellectual deference to the power of god may appear sufficient, but it is totally foreign to the nature of the gods who are satisfied only with,
payment in the god's coin .

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Therefore, Hippolytos' nature is one of virtue .
However, he assumes that what
he considers virtue has a worth ~n the external world .
He seems himself as approx imating the divine through his virtue, when in fact he is virtuous only in so far as
he is human .
In Plato's Timaeus, it seems evident that the qualities of virtue and
beauty exist externally .
He seems to assume that the universe must reflect virtue
and moderation, since these are the best qualities .
But perhaps it is just as
erroneous on Plato's part to assume that these qualities have any relation to nature
at all . He assumes that these qualities are pa r t of the nature of man which we use
to order the universe rather than universal principles which man must strive to
partake of in order to reach his highest state .
Ironically, it is just the best part
of Hippolytos' nature which brings about his doom .
For it seems that his objection
to the offer made by Phaidra's nurse is solely due to the shame of it being from a
relative, as well as being crime against a man whom Hippolytos clearly loves and has
every reason to admire .
It is not due to an unnatural hatred of women, even though
he expresses such a hatred in reaction to the offer .
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�of virtue. He in fact could not act otherwise, since his nature is that of virtue.
So in his ~efu~al, his artificial nature, which is virtue, triumphs over his bestial
nature • . His vir~ue seems artificial because it seems cultivated and due to the fact
that he is a rational man, but this nature need not be thought of as inferior to other natures .
In fact his nature, like an unstoppable flood, forces his actions as the
natures of the other characters force them into action.
He cannot even violate his
nature to save his life.

Here I am, revering you, gods,
and yet it's you forcing my ruin. 5
The tragedy of Hippolytos is that he assumes that his virtuous and rational naThis does not happen because once again
his view of the universal system is other than its reality .
He overlooks the irrational and unjust side of nature as he had earlier refused to see its element of
sexuality·
Theseus, upon returning home and finding his wife dead with a suicide
note accusing Hippolytos of rape, is driven by his own nature for revenge.
Hippolytos pleads for law and justice:
t~re ';ill somehow s.ave him from destruction.

At least
won't you let time lay the facts
before you in my behalf?
'
'
'
T ime is our on 1 y incorruptible witness . 6
Law and justice are perhaps the only two things that could restrain the wild onrush
of human ?ature, ~owever imperfectly.
But in Hippolytos these do not seem to play
any part in the universe as a whole or in the state. Theseus refuses even to address
him in the se~ond person; much less is he prepared to listen to Hippolytos argue his
innocence .
Hippolytos is heroic in his persistence . His nature will not allow him
to abandon hope that reason will vindicate him, as it will not allow him to save
himself by betraying his oath to the nurse .
His arguments have g r eat credibility .
At the end however, not even unreasonable arguments can save him.
If only this calm intimate house
could speak for me and say fairly
if there's anything vile in my blood. 7
In effect , Hippolytos calls upon the mute to persuade the deaf, since Theseus'
conclusion was reached beforehand and cannot be alte red by persuasion . As Hippolytos
is banished, the chorus grieves,
When we imagine ourselves in the god's care,
our troubled souls are inunensely reassured .
But when deep inside us we struggle to make
rational sense of our lives
frustration strikes from all the erratic
crisscrossing paths of reality:
man's life is volatile; it will not run clear
and reveal its essence. 8
By the failure of virtue and reason to withstand the blind force of Theseus' nature
the just man is f o rced out and injustice and irrationality are victorious .
If thes~
forces are supreme, the nature o f the universe has been revealed.
It is not as in

the Timaeus, characterized by reason, justice, aod harmony, but by their opposites :
randomness, disorder and irrationality.
Faced with such a uni verse, man has two
options . Either we put our trust in god or surrender to the random forces of nature.
Neither choice allows us free will. Either we are dominated by the whims of the gods
or by the chance outcome of blind fate. Either way, as long as we live, we are driven by the forces of nature to our final end. The course of our lives cannot be de termined or revealed by reason.
In this play, Hippolytos is doomed by chance and nature.
It is hard to see what
actions, if any, could have saved him from ultimate destruction.
He is destroyed by
his nature which will not allow him to do an unjust act, and by chance external
forces.
It can be argued that he is somewhat to blame because of his slighting of
the goddess, but her actions seem extreme and arbitrary. At the end of the play, he
is destroyed by nature in a literal sense when he is dragged by his horses after they
a r e frightened by the bull of Poseidon.
Even at this point, he is convinced of the
rational order of nature. He calls out pathetically to his team,
Stop!
Stop!

You mares, .• y~u were my children!
Don't kill me!

Does he imagine that even they are capable of being persuaded? Or does he endow them
with the human property of gratitude? And what of the fact that he looks upon them
as his children? Once again his view of nature is totally different from reality.
He sees his horses as humans just as he confounds his own nature with that of the
gods. He cannot see nature at large as being other than his own nature.
He cannot
imagine a uni verse in which the causes of actions are so obscure as to be either
incomprehensible or nonexistent . He cannot imagine that the virtuous are to suffer
along with, or even instead of, the unvirtuous.
Well, I see my death-it's ineluctable,
it's downhill, and it's black.
All the good I did men through
the love of god evaporates now.
It adds up to nothing ...
Why me? I have not d~Be one wrong
act in my whole life.
Only in his last moments does he come to some realization of the external powers
which have destroyed him.
I wish we men could curse god's11
curse and destroy those killers from our graves.
His impotent rage and threats reveal that he still retains his distorted view of his
nature, as if the eternal gods could be destroyed by a dying man's wish.
To even
consider the possibility of such a thing coming to pass is ludicrous.
In contrast to Hippolytos is the character of Phaidra. Phaidra seems to realize
from the beginning that the only way to def eat the passion in her nature and preserve
her honor is for her to destroy herself. She is aware of
a compulsion that's been ~~sery
for the women of my clan.
which is her mother's passion for a bull ana her sister's for Dionysios.
She is
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�den love.
Phaidra knows her nature; her only problem is to decide whether to indulge it
and remain alive, or die and preserve her reputation for virtue . Her nurse takes the
position that total virtue is unobtainable.
The forces that compel us forward are
too powerful to resist.
To spend your life in a neurotic drive
for perfection is simply not worth it.
Look at the roof of your own house.
Is there a single timber not slightly askew?
As a roof it's a great success.
Sexual passion is a big rough sea
and not something you, especially
your frail majesty can swim through.
The best that you, like any person, can hope for in
life, is a little more good luck than bad.
It's high time Phaidra, to drop your crazy talk of suicide.
No more conceit , for it's ungodly conceit
to imagine you can win, when you fight
the powers who control your whole being . 13
But the nurse's plan ends in disaster because she fails to recognize that along
with the irrational driving forces that exist in the natures of most people, there is
an .opposite force that compels them towards virtue, or at least toward making an
effort to protect their reputations.
The nurse fails to recognize this trait in
Hippolytos which will prohibit his accepting her offer . She also fails to recognize
that Phaidra has this trait as well.
Phaidra cannot endure even one person knowing
the secret of he~ true nature, even if that person is bound by oath to keep silent.
The nurse is as ignorant of this aspect of human nature as Hippolytos is of the other
irrational side . Phaidra is the only character in the play who has an idea of both.
Phaidra realizes that the only outcome of the conflict between the two forces in her
nature is her death.
The death will frighten me.
On this day, gone from my life,
I will at last delight you, Aphrodite . 14
Only now, the forces in her nature demand that Hippolytos also die to preserve he r
secret and her children's future.
In Hippolytos, we are presented with a universe in which man is bowed by awesome
forces beyond his understanding. But the one aspect of man's nature that allows his
freedom is his mortality.
Death , like nature, pe r vades the play, touching all the
characters.
It is always seen as a force for the liberation of humanity.
By death
man may somehow transcend nature and destiny . As the chorus says,

This is clearly a wish for death.
similar:

Theseus'

I feel your life as vanishing
from my cradling hands,
leaping like a pulse of feathers,
16
a bird alighting in the underworld .
In both, the dead soul is compared to a bird flying in freedom from the forces of
nature . And Artemis comforts Hippolytos as he dies:
Get wings, fly off into a bird's safe life,
to keep your feet from miring
in this polluted anguish.
There are no men
.
who would ask you to share t h eir l'
ives . 17
Death is the one quality that seems to separate mortals completely from the gods .
Death is so alien to the nature of the gods that they are unable to bear even watching the death of a mortal .
In the universe of the Hippolytos, death is the only means by which the guilty
are punished. Artemis cannot save the life of Hippolytos; she can only promise the
satisfaction of revenge by bringing death to a favorite of Aphrodite .
Even though Hippolytos has lost his life, his death is his triumph over the
forces which resulted in his destruction. For by his death we gain the realization
that, though we are slaves to chance and nature, their hold over us is only for a
finite amount of time.
By posthumosly granting Hippolytos the status of hero,
Artemis has vindicated his belief in virtue.
Virtue is transformed to an external
quality by the eternal honor paid to Hippolytos .
In the sense that virtue continues
to be honored among men, it ceases to be only a part of his individual nature and
becomes the common property of all . Hippolytos' death not only results in the restoration of harmony in his family, but in a new sense of order in the world.
Man no
longer seems helpless in the face of the gods. Virtue has triumphed even in an irrational universe . The gods are exposed for what they are.
Athens, you will have your splendor, but never again
the splendor of this man you lose.
Aphrodite , I have not heart fof your graces .
8
I remember only your savagery .

It would be good to arrive in the mountains,
poised in a secret recess on the rock facea god there might give me an airborne lightness,
make me a bird arnoung the other high floating creatures;

My flight will at last touch down on the
Hesperian shore that gentle garden where apples thrive
1
and girls sing. 5

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description of Phaidra's death is very

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�All notes refer to the Robert Bagg Translation in the series of New Greek Tragedy in
Modern Translations
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On Reading W.H. Auden's After Reading A Child's Guide To
Modern Physics. Too Late For Him To Answer
James Beall

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You should have known that metaphors are zoos
used to cage the animals of creation.
Instead, we find confused in you
a faint nebulosity of irritation.
Caged, each moves within the finite
knots of a path--no one to lead us.
Here and there, vague symbols unite
or sprout in air as if to feed us.
If somewhere rings some law or regularity
stroking a vast sweep of remnant star
to make it sing, we might not see
it true as our own heat. Yet are
these laws not metaphors for lust?
Created in the furnace of our brains
they come to light and whirl us. In their dust,
contrite and incubating, we have lain.

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�Cycadia
James Beall

Cycadia, these the same
low boil into the building hiss
rising unto the jet's wail.
It the same, hence years will make
no difference . The heat encompassed
in its vail of air gathers us
like love's holding loose and slick .
Our bodies, then, are our bodies,
and
But
yet
and

love the metaphor for air .
if insubstantial, still if fluid
the holding forms a strange
cyclic music , movements r emnant

of a forme r self , used ,
translucent beneath trees .

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FALL 1987

�ENERGEIA: The activity in which anything is fully itself.

it ... vou

EVEpyEta ~wit

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(Aristotle's Metaphysics, 1072b)

Cover:
"IMPRESSIONS OF A POLISH ARTIST"
by Patricia Dawson
Acrylic Painting
Photographed by Greg Ferguson

Printed by the
St. John's College Press
St. John's College
Annapolis, Maryland

Staff:
Rachel Boyce
Anne Carpenter
Carloss Chamberlain
Jana Giles
Glenn Haya
Erika Hoffman
Daniel Hoh
Michael McShane
Ange Mlinko
Kenneth Paradis
Dwayne Rodgers
Sarah Waters
Co-Editors:
Laurie Cooper
Rhonda Datcher
Faculty Advisor:
Henry Higuera

Energeia is a non-profit, student magazine which is published three times a year
and distributed among the students, faculty, alumni, and staff of St. John's
College, Annapolis. The Energeia staff welcomes submissipns from all members of
the community-poems, stories, essays, artwork, photographs, original math
proofs, and the like.

�CONTENTS
BEFORE FIRST SEMINAR

Beth Cross

1

PRIZE-WINNING SENIOR ESSAY (ANNAPOLIS)
PENTHESILIA: -A LOVE AFFAIR WITH
ACHILLES-BELONGING AND HAPPINESS IN
THE WORLD

Catherine Irvine

2

ON THE SONNET

Daniel Hoh

35

CONVERSATION #4

Brian Cole

35

UNTITLED

Dwayne Rodgers

36

IOCASTA'S SONG

Rachel Duel

37

ON MECHANICS, GEOMETRY, AND NEWTON'S
CONCEPT OF GOD; OR, AN ATTEMPT TO READ
THE PRINCIPIA AS A PHILOSOPHICAL WORK

Jana Giles

38

CARTESIAN EQUATIONS FOR RECTILINEAR
FIGURES

Kim Paffenroth

43

IMAGINARY GEOMETRY?

Marcus Eubanks

47

THE BUS RIDE

Jennifer Mischer

48

THE PASSION

Ange Mlinko

50

THE DEATH OF ROMEO

Erika Wilson

51

ARIADNE ASHORE

Claudia Probst

52

CONVERSATIONS WITH THE MOON

Beth Cross

53

PRIZE-WINNING JUNIOR ESSAY (ANNAPOLIS)
REFLECTIONS ON LEIBNIZIAN SUBSTANCE

Robert Demajistre

55

AT CALVERT CLIFFS

Gretchen Berg

64

UNTITLED

Anne Carpenter

64

THE CONVERSATION

Adam Eggers

65

BRIDGE

Tequila Brooks

66

IN THE BLACK

Patricia Dawson

67

HONORABLE MENTION-FRESHMAN ESSAY
(ANNAPOLIS) A DISSCUSSION OF JUSTICE
AND ITS EVOLUTION IN AESCHYLUS'
ORESTEIA TRILOGY

Kenneth Paradis

68

A LETTER FROM AN ALUMNUS

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Before First Seminar
Beth Cross ('88)

The evening from solid stone
rises s o sure of itself
that our footsteps only echoe,
the blue that does not stir
with out passing words.
In the twilight our ideas
fold into themselves,
their impression forms
silent curves in the conversations
held under the twinkling sillhouettes
of locust leaves .
What we cover in our eyes
what is hidden from our gaze,
the night already knows
as if whispered far out at sea
where the tide unbridled
decides its heav ing weight
in favor of the shore--a balance,
returning
We are returning
t o each other ' s ta l k
to the quiet of well- lighted rooms
where behind straight back chairs
black ·rectangles of night
hang listening.
We bend
with intent and pending breath
to the voyage.

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�Penthesilia: -A Love Affair With AchillesBelonging and Happiness in the World
Catherine Irvine ('87)

My essay is concerned with finding happiness in the world. In The Nicomachean
Ethics, Aristotle tells us, "all knowledge and every pursuit aims at some good.
Verbally there is very general agreement; for both the general run of men and people
of superior refinement say that it is happiness " (Bk. I, Ch . 3 : l i nes 13-21). He
goes on to say that the nature of happiness, however, is not so easily agreed upon.
I can only offer a personal thought: happiness is a contentment which is achieved
when an individual is in harmony with himself and has gained the things he deems are
important for him. I may perhaps be forgiven for the vague character of my def inition, since it is not happiness that I want to explore. I would like to show that
the ability to be happy depends upon an important relationship:
an individual's
feeling of belonging in the world.
It is my impression, and I readily admit it stems from personal experience, that
in the modern world we lack a sense of place . It is a world in which the laws governing behavior are constantly shifting, and the notions of the 'the good' are always
changing. No doubt these things were t rue in Aristotle's world also, but I think
that without a sense of place in the configuration of the whole, it is much more dif ficult to come to be happy in the world than it has been in the past.
In support of this notion that we lack belonging in the world and that this af fects our ability to achieve happiness, I will compare two charac.ters from literary
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works. The first is Homer's Achilleus • The second is Penthesilea , Queen of the
Amazons, from a play of her name . It was written by the early nineteenth century
playwright Heinrich von Kleist.
The premise I go on is that the nature of an
artist's work reflects, in some measure, the consciousness of the people of his time .
The time gap between these two works will then allow a comparison of how a classical
individual and a modern individual each feels in relation to his world , and , base d
upon that, a sense of whether or not he can come to be content in the world.
The choice of these two characters from these particular wo r ks is not a random
one, nor does it rest entirely on the fact that they were pr oduced in such different
times. Penthesilea purposefully invites comparison with The Iliad . The most general
way in which the two works are connected i s in t he action of the p l ay:
i t t akes
place during the Trojan War, after Achilleus has killed Hektor . Kleist makes use of
the myth that the Amazons, led by Penthesilea, went to the battle at Troy as allies
of Priam. Kleist also plays upon the story that Achilleus slew Penthesilea and fell
in love with her as she died at his feet .
But the interesting thing about
Penthesilea is that Kleist alters these myths. In the play, the Amazons are allied
with no one, and it is not Achilles who kills their Queen, but Penthesilea who kills
her beloved, Achilles, in a maenad-like frenzy that calls to mind Euripides's
Bacchae.
The s i mi l aritie s be t ween the works connect them closely , but it is alterations like these that make it intriguing to try to discover what Kleist intended
to convey in the play .
Kleist brings to bear his interpretation of Achilleus in his treatment of his
own characters, Penthesilea and Achilles.
Penthesilea reflects certain aspects of
Achilleus, while Achilles takes on other characteristics of the great hero.
Penthesilea displays many of the striking feature of Achilleus. For example, she too

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seeks fame, the fame gained through conquering the most renowned figure in The Iliad .
She says, "Once more the battle calls me to the field./ That young, defiant war- god I will tame him . / My friends , ten thousand suns melted into one/ Vast heat - ball seem
not half so bright to me,/ So glorious, as victory over him" (Scene 5: p. 186). She
is also protrayed as splendid, decked out in "war's rich panoply" (Scene 1: p. 168),
and thirsty for the clamour of battle. Odysseus describes his first sight of her in
the following way:

as the dawn comes creeping up the sky
Amazement seizes us ...
For there in the wide valley at our feet
Fiercely engaged with all the Trojan force
We see the Amazons! Penthesilea,
As storm winds sweep and rend the scudding wrack,
Tumbles the fleeing Trojans down the vale
As though her only though across the Hellespont,
Ay, off earth's orb itself, to scatter them.
(Scene 1: p. 168)
Penthesilea, like Achilleus, is the child of an immortal and a mortal, Ares and the
Amazon Queen Otrere. She also has about her the air of haughtiness that Achilleus
possesses.
There is another important respect in which Penthesilea and Achilleus resemble
each other.
Just as Achilleus must weigh his two fates against one another,
Penthesilea must struggle with the way in which she should live her life: as a woman
or as a warrior who thrives on the violence of battle. Achilleus, once Patroklos has
died, moves in fury towards the end of his life and the glory that will be his. So
too does Penthesilea strive after the fall of Achilles, because of the good she
thinks this act will bring her.
Achilles resembles his namesake in less striking and less flattering ways. He
falls short of the image one has of Achilleus, for the depth of spirit and strength
of character that Achilleus displays in The Iliad are transferred from his character
into that of Penthesilea.
For example, Achilleus' s refusal to participate in the
fighting following his conflict with Agamemnon is interpreted by Kleist as an insensitivity to the needs and desires of his fellow Greeks. In the play, when Agamemnon
orders his forces to stop fighting senselessly with the Amazons, Achilles disregards
the orders and instead pursues his own personal goal, which is to capture Penthesilea
and have his way with her. He says,
Fight then like eunuchs, if it pleases you.
A man I feel myself to these women,
Though alone of all the host, I'll stand my ground.
••. All's one to me; by heav'n you have my blessing,
If you would creep away to Troy again.
••. In short, go off. I'll follow you to Troy;
I'll soon have had my way with her. But though
I had to woo her many long months through Ay, years - I will not guide my chariot there
••. Nor once again see Ilium's tower'd heights,
Until I first have had my sport with her.
·
(Scene 4: p. 185 )
Here Kleist's contempt for the cause of Achilleus's anger, the abduction of Briseis,

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�is revealed. He makes Achilles involved only in satisfying his own desires, which in
this case involve no high goal of honor, but simply the bedding of a woman.
Kleist also protrays Achilles as dishonest and manipulative.
In Scene 11, he
walks into the Amazon encampment completely unarmed and speaking words of peace. Yet
he comes accompanied by men who are armed, and he feels no compunction at ordering
them to kill the women who threaten him. This is Kleist's reading of what Achilleus
does in Book IX of The Iliad: he presents himself as being moved by things that
inspire his desire for a swift return to Phthia, when he is actually moved by pride
and bitter anger against Agamemnon.
One thing that Kleist does do, however, is to give the character of Achilles the
epithet 'god-like.' No other character in the play is consistently given such an
epithet. In line with this, Kleist retains the Homeric image in the clear way he describes Achilles:
Radiant he stands upon the rising ground,
Cased all in steel his steed and he; sapphire
Nor chrysolite cannot throw back such rays!
The earth herself, the gay, flower-sprinkled earth,
Wrapped now in thunder vapors' blackest gloom,
Lies but a dark background, a murky foil,
To make his flashing glory brighter yet!
( Scene 7: pp. 198-199; First Girl )
This passage calls to mind the image of Achilleus standing upon the ditch and screaming, helped by Athena who drapes the aegis about his shoulders and sets him all
ablaze with fire ( Iliad, Bk. XVIII: lines 203-206) . Yet it is nothing but a description that has a resemblance to that scene. It lacks the power Achilleus wields in
that moment and the sorrow that has engulfed his heart. Kleist's Achilles is incapable of such depth of emotion.
Though both Achilles and Penthesilea share aspects of the Homeric hero, nevertheless it is Penthesilea who captures the attention. It is her on whom I will concentrate with respect to Achilleus. Because my purpose is to examine how a feeling
of belonging is crucial to finding contentment in the world, I will first lay out the
natures of the worlds in which these two characters live.
Then, I will examine
whether or not they belong in their worlds. Finally, I will present my analysis of
how both characters come to contentment and of whether their contentments are
compatible with their worlds.
In each case, I will first put for th the Homeric
situation and then contrast Penthesilea's situation with it.
The world that Homer puts before us in The Iliad is a sharply defined one. Each
thing has its proper place and mode of being, and each is portrayed in a detailed,
clearly described manner. The most striking element in this carefully outlined world
is the presence of the Olympian gods. They are introduced fully formed, and rather
than being unearthly in character they are potent forces, supernaturally and physically. We see their strong presence in the very first pages of The Iliad when
Apollo angrily strides down from Olympos to punish the Achaians for their treatment
of Chryses (Bk. I: lines 43-52).
The gods are often the inspiration for men's actions. In almost every way that
a man can be moved to do something, the gods are found to be the cause. Zeus, for
example, is the reason for Hektor's extraordinary valor as he makes his way unhesitatingly toward the Achaian ships in Book XV. This is a case in which the spirit of
some emotion or physical attribute is instilled into men by the gods. There are also
instances in which the gods introduce notions into the minds of men. In the beginning of the poem, it is mentioned that Achilleus called the Achaians to assembly be-

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cause the thought was "a thing put into his mind 'by the goddess of the white arms,
Hera" (Bk . I: line 55). Agamemnon's experience with Zeus's deceptive dream (Bk. II:
lines 20-47) is another example of how the gods put ideas and courses of action into
the minds of men.
The gods even appear physically and attempt to make mortals do their wishes. In
one memorable case, Athena appears to Achilleus and grasps him by the hair in order
to stop him from attacking Agamemnon (Bk. I: lines 194-214). In a later passage, the
river Skamandros, angered at Achilleus's slaughter of the Trojans, sends his flooding
waters out to hold Achilleus occupied with saving himself rather than with killing
men (Bk. XXI: lines 235-272).
Given the unavoidable presence of the gods in their lives, the men of The Iliad
put great stock in communication with the deities. Achilleus's response to Athena's
words of counsel is this:
'Goddess, it is necessary that I obey ... [you] •.• /angry though I
am in my heart. So it will be better./If any man obeys the gods,
they listen to him also.'
(Bk. I: lines 215-218)
Achilleus feels the ne9essity, and the advantage, of dealing with the gods in much
the same way as he would with men. It is not simply that the gods are more powerful
and capable of bringing disaster down upon men. It is also because the influence of
the gods in the lives of men is just as immediate as the influence that men have upon
men.
Libation, prayer, and sacrifice are therefore integral parts of the Homeric
man's life. He seeks to know the will of the gods by observing natural phenomena,
and he seeks to preserve his well-being through prayer and the rendering of proper
respect. He knows that, just as men, the gods like to be shown favor. Phoenix's
advice to Achilleus, when he warns of the danger of such immovable anger, captures
this principle of communication with the gods:
The very immortals I can be moved; their virtue and honor and
strength are greater than ours are,/and yet with sacrifices and
offerings for endearment,/with libations and with savour men turn
back even the immortals/in supplication. (Bk. IX: lines 497-501)
These words bring to light another aspect of the relationship that men have with
the gods: the gods exceed men in all things, yet these things are shared in the natures of both. Indeed, all parts of the Homeric world reflect one another. Natural
phenomena re fl ec t t he mood of the gods, and men are compared to both the gods , as in
'god-like Achilleus,' and to animals in nature. For example:
So these lords of the Danaans killed each his own man/ . .• as
wolves make havoc among lambs or young goats in their
fury,/catching them out of the flocks. (BK. XVI: lines 351-353)
Yet the connection between man, god, and nature goes further than this. All
three are intimately tied together. There is a thread of commonality running through
them. Rivers and winds are gods, men are children of the gods, and even the gods and
the animals may love and produce offspring (Bk. XX: lines 215-225). Thetis, mother
of Achilleus, is a good example of this merging of diff.erent beings into one another.
She is a goddess, but her realm is not mystical. It is utterly natural: she is of
the sea. And though she is a goddess, she was given in marriage to a mortal and bore
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�Though the world of The Iliad is held together by the meeting and mixing of its
parts, nevertheless it is a world of war. This means that it is a world in which all
things are opposed to one another . All the parts, while overlapping into one another, remain distinct and struggle to maintain that distinction. Thetis through her
association with Peleus does not forfeit her immortal status, and when she bears a
son he is not a hybrid of god and man. Achilleus is human and subject to all the
laws that other humans are subject to - most significantly , death. Although having a
goddess for a mother endows him with privileges (such as knowing what his fate will
be ) , Achilleus belongs to one specific mode of being, and that cannot be changed.
One of the taboos that prohibit the attempt by a being of one kind to place himself among the ranks of another kind is the ban upon a warrior for bidding him to
battle with a god. Zeus's comforting words to Aphrodite, when she suffers from an
attack by Diomedes, revea l this ban:
'It was the godded Athene who drove on this man / against you; poor
fool, the heart of Tydeus' son knows nothing / of how that man who
fights the immortals lives for no long time.'
(Bk. V: lines 405 - 407)
And Achilleus too, despite his fury, stops pursuing Apollo when he discovers he is
chasing a god:
Deeply vexed Achilleus of the swift feet spoke to him: / 'you
have balked me . . . most malignant of all gods, / when you turned me
here away from the rampart, else many Trojans / would have caught
the soil in their teeth .. . Now you have robbed me of great glory,
and rescued these people / lightly, since you have no retribution
to fear hereafter . / Else I would punish you.'
( Bk. XXIII : lines 14-20)
Striving to maintain one's proper place reveals itself internally among the separate beings and it takes its form in self-assertion . There is, for instance, a constant struggle between Zeus and the other gods. Zeus finds himself compelled to pr oclaim his superiority over and over again, since the other gods are always thinking
of ways to circumvent his commands. Many of the descriptive passages linking men to
animals also illustrate this self - assertiveness. The passages not only show how man
and animal come into conflict (like the wolves who attack man's livestock) (Bk . XVI:
lines 351 - 353), but they also depict animals battling one another in an attempt to
prove t hemse l ves t he stronger (Bk. XVI : l ines 823 - 829) .
Among men, this self-assertiveness is displayed in vaun t ing. The war riors meet,
hurl threats at one another, and when one falls or flees from fear, the other immediately begins to declare his dominance. Diomedes's fear of Hektor's boasting grasps
the importance that this assertiveness has for the men of The Iliad:
'this thought comes as a bitter sorrow to my heart and my spirit; / for some day Hektor will say openly before the Trojans: / "The
son of Ty deus, running before me, fled to his vessels." / So he
will vaunt; and then let the wide earth open beneath me. '
(Bk. VIII: lines 147-150)
The strong presence that the past has for both gods and men contributes to the significance of autonomy in the Homeric world. The closeness felt to the people and
events of the past causes men and gods to be acutely aware of their own being and
position in the world. The value that is placed upon genealogies illustrates the
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weight which the past carries . When Glaucos and Diomedes face one another in Book
VI, they give up any hostile stance as soon as they discover the friendship t hat had
existed between t heir fathers (Bk. VI : lines 119- 231) .
Connected to the proximity that the past has to the present is the power of fate
in the world . Jus t as all t hat has occurred has a strong influence on the way that
men and gods behave, so too does fate bring them close to the world in all its forms .
It gives all their actions an important and immovable place in the patterns of their
lives, and this in turn gives their lives a definite place in the pattern of the
whole . Despite the opposition between groups and within them, everything is once
again connected by a thread of commonality through fat e.
Fate exists externally to all things . It operates from the outside, reaching
into the world to tie it up into a whole. No one, not even a god, has the ability to
evade it . Zeus has the power to direct the course of events and set the mechanism of
fate in motion. He looks far ahead to see what must occur in order that all the ele ments in the cosmos (actions, emotions, etc.) may come together and bring destiny to
fulfillment . He tells Hera,
'le t Pho i bos Apollo stir Hektor back into battle,/breathe
strength into him • .• Let him drive strengthless / panic into the
Achaians, and turn them back ... Let them be driven in flight and
tumble back onto the benched ships/ ... And [Achilleus] shall rouse
up
Patroklos/ . . . And
glorious
Hektor
shall
cut
down
Patroklos / .•. In anger for him brilliant Achilleus shall then kill
Hektor.' (Bk . XV : lines 59-68)
Although from passages like this it might seem that Zeus can arbitrarily arrange
what is to take place , it must be remembered that behind all the scheming lies the
general question of Achilleus's destiny and the manner of its fulfillment. It is not
simply the accomplishment of Thetis's request that Zeus grant her son glory , it is
also t ha t Achilleu s must die if he is granted that glory . If he kills Hektor , t hen
he will die. Even Zeus must work under the dictates of fate. His own wishes are
irrelevant. He cannot save Sarpedon from death (Bk. XVI : lines 433 - 457), and when
Hekt or finally faces Achilleus, Zeus mus t check his golden scales if it is truly the
right moment for Hektor to die (Bk. XXII : lines 208 - 212) .
The world of The Iliad is hence very ordered . There are certain laws which op erate in specific ways , and each object has its own place in the scheme of things.
It can be looked at alone, clearly outlined by the things around it , or it can be
seen as a distinct unit that goes into the structure of the whole . The world of
Penthesilea could no t be mor e different f r om the Homeric one . The comment that best
describes i t is uttered by a Greek man whom the Amazons have captured . He asks , "was
ever dream so crazed as this reality?" (Scene 6: p. 197).
Penthesilea' s world is full ~f confusion.
It consists of a swirling mass of
circumstances which do not come together in any coherent whole . There is nothing in
the play which can be looked at in its own right without reference to other things,
things both in the play as well as those brought to it by the reader. For instance,
the memory of The Iliad is present throughout; Euripides's Bacchae, in its most hor rifying moment, is reproduced in Achilles's death; Phaedra's consuming passion for
Hippolyt us i s c l e a r ly pre sent in Penthesilea ; and the myth of Actae on 's death, his
punishment for looking upon Artemis while she bathed, is also woven into the tale.
The descriptive passages bring to a focus the c9nfusion which is prevalent in
the play. The dust which the armies raise up as they wage war obscures the vision,
so that those looking on cannot see what is happening:
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�With flashes here and there of arms and armor:
The eye is helpless, strain how it will to see.
A struggling mass of maids - and horses too All in a jumbled welter. Chaos' self,
The aboriginal, had more of order.
(Scene 3: p. 180; Dolopian)
The contrast between The Iliad and Penthesilea is pointed out descriptively by Kleist
himself. There is a vision of Achilles rising over the top of a hill, clearly visible in every part:
Look! Look! Do you not see? Above that ridge
A head appearing , plumed and helmeted?
And now the neck - the massive neck beneath?
The shoulders now, the arms in flashing steel?
Now! Now! - The mighty, deep-set chest; oh see!
... His horses now, their white -starred foreheads - See!
His chariot's steeds; still but their legs - their hooves
Are hidden by the summit of the ridge.
Ah, now! Clear-cut against the sky behold
The whole equipage, blazing like the sun
That rises jubilant in his early spring.
(Scene 3 : p. 177; Myrmidon)
Yet within a very short time, a cloud of dust billows up in pursuit of Achilles:
But, look! Behind him - !
••• At the mountain's foot Dust Dust, uptowering like a thundercloud
And like the lightning sweeping on (Scene 3: p. 178)
The world of confusion in Penthesilea is pursuing the clearly delineated figure from
the Homeric world.
The first clue in the action of the play pointing to the confusion in this world
is provided in the opening scenes. The Greeks and the Trojans have no idea why the
Amazons have burst into the midst of their conflict. Each thinks that Penthesilea
must have come to fight beside one or the other , but she quickly disabuses them of
this idea. The Amazons' are at Troy for their own special reason: to reap a crop of
magnificent warriors to take back to Themiscyra as future fathers of their children.
The Amazons' independence in this war between the Trojans and the Greeks spreads
confusion. The sensible way in which the war was being waged, Greek against Trojan,
is disturbed.
The antagonists find themselves allied against the warrior women.
Odysseus says in bewilderment ,
Each force in Nature , creates its opposite
And fights with this; no room for any third.
What quenches fire will not make water boil
And turn to steam; likewise the opposite.
Yet here appears a deadly foe of both,
That makes fire doubt: should it not flow like water?
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The hard-press'd Trojan, .fleeing the Ama3on
Shelters behind a Grecian shield; the Greek
Defends him from the maiden's blade, and both
Trojan and Greek are almost forced, despite
The rape of Helen, to hold each o~her friends
And join to fight a common enemy.
(Scene 1: p. 170)
Among the Amazons themselves there is much confusion.
Penthesilea is thrown
into confusion at her first sight of Achilles (Scene 1: p. 169; Ody.), and from that
point on her disturbance communicates itself to her army.
Bent upon pursuing
Achilles, she ceases to pay careful attention to her role as leader of the Amazon
host. As a result, none of her people knows exactly what is going on. Penthesilea
a lso ultimately causes the physical disbandment of her army. She orders that no one
other than herself may harm Achilles. Hence, when he comes marching into the Amazon
camp no one can stop him. Penthesilea refuses to leave, and the army must abandon
her and flee leaderless in many directions.
In this world of confusion, nature, so communicative in Homer's Iliad, is hostile. The landscape is hard and cold, full of dust and rfck. Indeed, it serves only
as a landscape, a place in which human action is staged.
Through its lifeless dust
it clouds the sight, and with its rocks it hinders human progress, unrelenting in the
face of human advances (Scene 2: p. 175-176). We see young Amazon girls eargerly
seek for roses in the plain, but the land is not bountiful. It will not serve their
need, but keeps itself protected from interaction with them:
'tis harder far to win
Roses upon these fields than prisoners.
Though on the hills around the bounteous harvest
Of Argive youths stand rank on rank and wait
Only for reaping by the eager scythe,
Yet in these vales so sparingly, believe me,
And so well-fortified the roses bloom,
That it is lighter work to hew through lances
Than break a way through their entwined thorns.
(Sc ene 6: p. 194; Second Girl)
In this world no river god, not even in anger, would raise its voice to speak with a
mortal in the way that Skamandros spoke to Achilleus (Iliad, Bk. XXI: lines 211-221).
Just as nature is devoid of communicative life, ~oo are the gods far away.
This is seen in many ways, and it is even said by Prothoe, queen Penthisilea's closest companion:
"what thy eyes behold, /It is the world, our transient, brittle
world,/On which the gods look down but from afar" (Scene 24: p. 261). When the
gods are present, it is in name only. They do not speak, they do not come down from
Olympos to aid or to hinder, and they send no omens or dreams. A good example of the
distance that the gods have from the lives of men is found in Penthesilea's relationship with her father, Ares. Whereas Achilleus always has close contact with Thetis
and hears what his fate will be from her lfps, Penthesilea never comes into contact
with her father.
Though she does hear from him that she is to lead the Amazons
against the men at Troy, it is her mortal mother Otrere who tells her this. Another
sign of man's alienation from the gods is the presence of a priesthood. Although
there are priests in The Iliad like Chryses and interpreters like Kalchas, these do
not play as great a role in the lives of men as the gods themselves do.
But in
Penthesilea, the priestesses of Diana serve as mediators between the goddess and her
people . Diana's words and Ares's words come through the mouths of mortals (Scene 7:

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�p. 199; High Priestess).
It is not, however, quite correct to say that the gods have disappeared altogether. In their external manifestations, the way we know them from The Iliad, they
are gone. But they reappear in Penthesilea in different form. They are stirrings
within the individual. They belong to the human soul. Penthesilea is the character
through which we see them. She often speaks of the powerful presences that are with
her, but these presences are companions of her emotions, not the causes of the
emotions.
In her passionate haste to bind Achilles to her on the battlefield,
Penthesilea feels the presence of the furies, and when she believes she has conquered
him she feels beneficial deities joining her. She tells Prothoe,

Let my poor heart
Like a dirt-dabbled, happy child, sink deep
One wondrous moment in the stream of joy.
With every splash in those exultant waves
A stain is washed from my sad, sinful breast.
They flee at last, the dread Eumenides;
I feel the approach of godlike presences
And I would join my voice to their happy choir.
(Scene 14: p. 221)
These furies are not of the same kind as those who pursued Orestes, seeking vengeance for his matricide. They are not given external form.
They are tools with
which Penthesilea describes the nature of her own passions and desires.
These
'furies' push Penthesilea in the same way the Eumenides drove Orestes to Apollo's
sanctuary, but they push from within.
There can be no such statements as "He
[Apollo] spoke, and breathed huge strength into the shepherd of the people [Hektor]"
(Iliad, Bk. XV: line 262) in Penthesilea, for such stirrings belong entirely to the
soul. Penthesilea also says, "Man can be great in grief, ay, even a hero, /But only
in happiness is he a god" (Scene 14: p. 222). What she is conveying through these
words is that the clear boundaries between man and god that exist in The Iliad are
lacking in her world. The gods have moved from Olympos into the human heart, and man
himself can, upon achieving happiness, become a god. He is not 'god-like,' he is
god, and he can be ruler over all things, not just over other men. Penthesilea, in
her one moment of joy commands, "Out then and seek o'er the fields!
And if /The
niggard spring refuse me roses, breathe,/Breathe on the plain and it will burgeon for
me!" (Scene 14: p. 220).
Since the gods no longer are jn their own right, there are no ceremonious attempts to be in harmony with them.
There are no libations, no hecatombs, and the
only time something like a prayer is uttered, it is in a call of desperation - a cry
that begs for the aid and presence of the gods in a world that is empty of them:
nThee, Ares, I invoke, thou terrible one! /Thee, awful founder of our house, I
call!/Oh! Swiftly send me down thy brazen car" (Scene 20: p. 246; Penthesi5ea).
In the same way that the gods have lost their own forms and have become part of
human heart, fate loses its external power to pull the world together in a grand
scheme. It is changed into an extension of the human will . When Penthesilea refuses
to flee from Achilles and his henchmen who come to raid the Amazon camp, Prothoe
tells her, "Then, as thou wilt!/ If thou canst not, wilt not - good! Dry they eyes./
What thou canst not achieve: the gods forbid/ That I should ask it of thee" (Scene
9: p. 20~And when the High Priestess remarks contemptuously, "Cannot! I Though
nothing holds her, no fate binds her here/ Only her infatuate heart!" (ibid), Prothoe
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That is her fate!·
You'd say steel fetters are unbreakable,
Would you not? I say: she could break them, perchance,
But never this feeling you treat so lightly.
What darkly stirs within her, who can say?
A riddle is every heart's deep-flowing tide.
(ibid . )
Penthesilea's world lacks the nicely constructed pattern of Achilleus's world.
The rules are harder to understand, since both the power of the gods and of fate have
been transported into the individual. Penthesilea must bear all responsibility for
her thoughts and actions.
She cannot say, as Agamemnon can, that her anger comes
from Zeus (Iliad , Bk. XIX: lines 76-138 ).
In addition, Penthesilea lacks the
security of knowing that her actions are fated to be as they are and that they are
leading her toward a definite and unavoidable end. She must also bear the burden of
choice:
she governs the direction that her life will take.
Again, the High
Priestess says of her, "Oh, she runs steeply down to the abyss!/ 'Tis not to Achilles
she will fall, when he/ Encounters her, but to this inner foe" (Scene 7: p. 200).
The world of Penthesilea is turned upside down. Though the play takes place in
the same world that Homer described, nothing is as it was in The Iliad. Order has
become confusion. The next question is to see if the relationships that these two
characters have with their worlds undergo the same reversal: is Achilleus at home in
his world while Penthesilea is not?
The first thing to notice about Achilleus is that he does not doubt his world.
He does not question what he sees or hears, and he does not doubt his own judgments
about what is around him.
For instance, he accepts Athena automatically when she
descends to stop him from raising his sword against Agamemnon:
The goddess standing behind Peleus' son caught him by the fair
hair,/ appearing to him only, for no man of the others saw her./
Achilleus in amazement turned about, and straightway/ knew Pallas
Athene and the terrible eyes shining.
(Bk. I: lines 197-200)
To someone not comfortable in the Homeric world, it seems incredible that Achilleus
does not think he is seeing things when he turns to see a mighty goddess at his back.
But if we take Homer at his word, then we must say that Achilleus not only sees
Athena, but faces her without a qualm. A similar thing occurs when Skamandros speaks
in anger to the manslaughtering warrior on his banks (Bk. XXI: lines 211-213). It is
no surprise to Achilleus that a river should be holding a conversation with him, nor
is he shocked when his horse, Xanthos, given voice by Hera, prophecies his death (Bk.
XIX: lines 404- 424).
In the same vein, Achilleus is always capable of telling a friend from an enemy.
Once he has decided that Agamemnon is against him, he never wavers in his distrust
and dislike for the lord of the Achaians. Even when Achilleus 'unsays' his anger, he
indicates that he must force himself to do so, to push away from his mind the anger
"'sweeter ... by far than the dripping of honey"' (Bk. XVIII: line 110).
'We will let all this be a thing of the past, though i t hurts
us,/and beat down by constraint the anger that rises inside us.'
(Bk. XIX: lines 65 - 66)
Achilleus judges friend from enemy on the basis of behavior . If he finds that
their sympathies are not truly with him, then he will put no trust in men . For instance, when Agamemnon sends Phoenix, Aias, and Odysseus to Achilleus to try to lure

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�him back into the fighting with gifts, Achilleus responds with aloofness. This indicates that he feels, and rightly so, that the embassy is working towards
Agamemnon's benefit rather than his own. Achilleus does not believe that the embassy
comes to him because Agamemnon has truly acknowledged his value. He knows Agamemnon
sent them from fear. His response to Odysseus in particular revels his skepticism:
'Son of Laerties and seed of Zeus, resourceful Odysseus:/without
consideration for you I must make my answer,/the way I think, and
the way it will be accomplished,that you may not/come one after
another, and sit by me, and speak softly./ For as I detest the
doorways of Death, I detest that man, who/hides one thing in the
depths of his heart, and speaks forth another.'
(Bk. IX: lines 308-313)
Achilleus also has conviction in his fate. This is shown in the way he takes
action based upon what he knows, from Thetis, of his fate. For example, Achilleus's
decision to kill Hektor following the death of Patroklos, though it certainly stems
from grief and a desire for revenge, is also influenced by his knowledge that after
Hektor dies he too is doomed to die . It may sound odd for a man to wish for his own
end, but Achilleus knows that if he dies young he will achieve everlasting glory ?nd he wants this glory more than anything else. Thus, Achilleus intends not only to
kill Hektor, but to do so in as spectacular a way as possible:
'Now I shall go, to overtake that killer of a dear life,/ Hektor;
then I will accept my own death ..• Now I must win excellent
glory.'
(Bk. XVIII: lines 114-121)
Although Achilleus does have moments in which he doubts that his fate will come
about exactly as his mother has promised, the most striking of which occurs when he
is trapped by the swirling waters of Skamandros (Bk. XX!: lines 273-278), he generally is sure that his fate will take place as his mother has foretold. He takes her
words seriously . This is shown when he sends Patroklos out to drive the Trojans from
the Achaian ships. Achilleus later reveals that he suspected, or perhaps even knew
without a doubt, that Patroklos would die:
'May the gods not
the way my mother
while I yet lived
light of the sun
the strong son of

accomplish vile sorrows upon the heart in me/in
once made it clear to me, when she told me/how
the bravest of all the Myrmidons/must leave the
beneath the hands of the Trojans./Surely, the,
Menoitios has perished.'
(Bk. XVIII: lines 8-12)

This passage explains why Achilleus so urgently warns Patroklos to return once
he had driven the Trojans from the ships. Achilleus knew in his heart that he was
sending Patroklos to his death, but because he wanted the accomplishment of his fate,
for which he knew Hektor must die, he sent Patroklos out while warning him strongly:
'You must not,
in the pride and fury of fighting , go
on/slaughtering the Trojans, and lead the way against Ilion,/for
fear some one of the everlasting gods on Olympos/might crush you.
(Bk. XVI: lines 91-94)
His next statement truly indicates that Achilleus knows much more about what will
happen than he lets on. Though he has, "deeply troubled," told Patroklos, "'I have

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no prophecy in mind that I know of'" (Bk . XVI: line 50), he now tells him , "'Apollo
who works from afar loves these people/dearly. You must turn back once you bring the
light of salvation/to the ships'" (Bk . XVI: lines 94-96). And indeed it is Apollo
who brings about Patroklos's destruction (Bk . XVI: lines 786-792).
The serious way in which Achilleus treats his fate suggests that he has an understanding of how his world works, and this in turn indicates that he is at home in
his world. The shield which Hephaistos fashioned for him is a tribute to Achilleus's
belonging in the world. Though we do not see him experience all the different facets
of life on the shield, he is the one who carries it, and he is the only one who can
look upon it:
The goddess ... set down the armour on the ground/before
Achilleus, and all its elaboration clashed loudly./Trembling took
hold of all the Myrmidons. None had the courage/to look straight
at it. They were afraid of it. Only Achilleus/looked.
(Bk . XIX: lines 12-16)
Achilleus belongs in his world. Penthesilea, however, is displaced in the already twisted character of her world.
There are individuals in the play, like
Prothoe, who do belong in that world. That means that it is possible to be comfortable in that world, though it is not the case with Penthesilea.
The Amazon way of life and character in itself isolates and displaces
Penthesilea from the world at large. The Amazons live in a secluded community, in
the company only of women. When they do leave the confines of the community, it is
only to go on raids to win men from whom they can continue their race (Scene 15: p.
232-233; Penthesilea) . Strict rules maintain that they can only gain these men as
lovers by conquering them in battle. Penthesilea tells Achilles,
Son of the dread sea-goddess! Not for me
The common arts of gentler womanhood!
... I may not, as do your maids, chose my love
And draw him to me with shy downward eyes
Or with bright wanton nosegay
... I may not in the dark- leaved orange grove,
..• Sink on his breast and tell him it is he.
No, on the bloody field of war must I go seek him,
That youth my heart has chosen for its own,
And clip him to me with harsh arms of brass.
(Scene 15 : p. 228)
The Amazon tradition of only coming into contact with men through war, and their
custom of searing off one breast to facilitate use of the bow, set them apart from
the usual mode of being for women. The Amazons inhibit the female inclination to
love and be loved by men, and they only allow for it in the warped context of
agression and dominance.
Achilles asks Penthesilea, "But whence can spring, how
ancient is that law,/Unwomanly, forgive me, nay, unnatural,/A custom strange to all
the tribes of men?" (Scene 15: p. 228).
Yet even mor e unnatural than this style of life and approach to the female constitution is the Amazon ability .to mix together both the feelings involved in aggres sive conflict, feelings of hate, with feelings of love and affection.
Once the
maiden warriors have gained their prize, they let their warlike feelings fade away,
and they cultivate feelings of · love from which they can unite with their prisoners to
produce offspring. There is a passage in which this odd 'reversibility of ·the Amazon
character is protrayed: a group of Amazons tries to approach their Greek prisoners

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�with love . But the prisoners, just recently confronted with these women in battle,
cannot comprehend this friendly behavior. To make the situation even more bizarre,
the Amazons cannot understand why their prisoners do not realize that they intend
them no harm, but would like to treat them like kings in the lap of luxury . One
Amazon asks, "Strange- mooded men! What gnaws thus at your hearts?/ Now that our ar rows sleep within the quiver,/ How can the sight of us affright you still?" (Scene
6: p . 196).
Penthesilea is therefore not in harmony with the world because of this Amazon
duality: the ability to one moment feel the hate necessary to wage war and the next
moment to feel love.
It is as Odysseus remarked: "Should [water] haply burn like
fire?" ( Scene 1: p. 170 ) . The Amazons not only completely atter their perceptions
and emotions, but they do so towards the same individuals.
But Penthesilea is
displaced in this already odd situation. For the Amazons, these feelings of love or
hate should only accompany the suitable circumstance of war or victory and peace.
Penthesilea cannot keep these feelin~ apart. She wants to conquer Achilles in battle, and the same time she has chosen him out specifically because she is infatuated
with him and wants to become his lover.
When Penthesilea looks upon Achilles, she is beset by both her emotions of love
and hate:
I long to see him grov'lling at my feet,
This haughty man, who in this glorious
And gentle field of arms, as no man yet,
Sows strange confusion in my warlike heart .
•.. Do I not feel - ah! Too accursed I While all around the Argive army flees,
When I look on this man, on him alone,
That I am smitten, lamed in my inmost being,
Conquered and overcome - I! Only I!
( Scene 5: p. 186-187 )
The High Priestess points out how strange a thing it is to have among the Amazons a
especially a Queen, so overcome with love:

wo~an,

The Queen, you say? Impossible my friend!
Pierced by love's shaft? How can that be? ...
She who doth wear the girdle of diamonds?
The daughter of Mars, who lacks even the breast
Where Cupid's poison'd shafts may strike and lodge?
(Scene 7: p. 200)
Because Penthesilea cannot untangle her aggressive feelings from her softer,
yielding ones, she finds i t impossible to see anything in a unified way.
Unlike
Achilleus who puts much trust in what he sees other men do, Penthesilea cannot judge
others. Her own thoughts and emotions make it hard for her to see what people are
actually doing. For example, she has both admiration and affection for her Amazon
people, yet she swiftly turns against them in anger:
Curses upon this beastly, wanton haste!
••• A curse on lusts that in my Amazons'
Chaste hearts like unleashed dogs do howl and quite
O'erwhelm the trumpet's brazen-throated voice
And all the leaders' cries of shrill command.
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In fiendish mockery pluck triumphal garlands?
(Scene 9: p. 204)
Penthesilea herself has given the order for the plucking of the roses, and she
herself is the one who longs for love while the battle still rages on. But in her
distracted state she is not aware of these things, and she sees those who are merely
carrying out her orders as ridiculing her and as trying to take away her last chance
of winning Achilles in battle. This is anger against herself., but the anger is so
potent that it infects her ability to see objectively. Therefore, she strikes out at
friends as though they were enemies.
Penthesilea' s displacement both in the world and in .the Amazon environment does
not just show itself in her projected anger or in her conflicting emotions. She is
in real doubt about her world and herself in that world. Compared to Achilleus who
i s sur e of himself, Penthesilea is a lost individual. She questions what the ru l es
are that govern her behavior. She wonders if it is right to try to win her beloved
through battle:
Is mine the fault that I must woo him thus,
Here on the field of war must force his love?
What is it I long for, when I strike at him?
Is it to send him headlong to the shades?
I long - ye gods above! I only long To this warm beast I long to draw him close!
(Scene 9: p. 203)
And she wonders if it is not, rather, right to give way to her womanly feelings and
yield herself to Achilles as any other woman would. Her questioning of Amazon law
reveals itself in her discussion with Achilles:
like the fiery hurricano's blast,
We sweep into the forest of the menfolk,
Snatch up the ripest of the fallen fruit
.•. And bear them with us to our native plains.
•.• Here we conduct them in Diana's temple
Through many a solemn rite ...
•.. The seed is sown, and when the crop is up,
We heap on them full measure of glorious gifts;
On steeds richly caparisoned we send
Them home. The Fea~t of Fruitful Mothers this,
In soo t h a fes t ival of little joy.
Ah, son of Thetis! Many a tear is shed,
And many a heart, fast gripped by dresry grief,
Must ask itself: is Tanais The Great
For every binding word so praiseworthy?
(Scene 15: p. 233)
Penthesilea does not just question, however. She actually loses all ability to
recognize things for what they are. When she sees herself reflected in Achilles's
armour, she is not sure who she sees (Scene 5: p. 186-187). And though she is very
dependent on Prothoe, at one time she believes Prothoe to be working for her cause,
while at another time she thinks her friend wants only to thwart her (Scene 5: p.
189-193). This is because Penthesilea is never positive about what her cause is: is
it the well-being of her host, or is it her own satisfaction?

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�Am I selfish? Is it !!!I desires
Alone that call me back into the field?
Is it not my people, threatened by the fate
That even in the maniac flush of victory
With audible wingbeat hastens from afar?
••• These captive youths that you have taken in fight.
You'll never lead them to the fragrant vales
Of our homeland •••
•.• Lurking in ambush, crafty, insatiate,
I see him everywhere - Achilles, ready to spring
Upon your happy train and scatter it.
(Scene 5: p. 188)

Ev.e n when Achilles is before her Penthesilea wonders i f h~ is really the man she has
heard so much about:
Achilles!
That man that slew old Priam's greatest son
Before the walls of Troy - Say! Was it thou?
And didst thou truly, thou, with these thy hands
Pierce his fleet ankles, then behind thy car
Drag him headlong around his native city?
(Scene 15: p. 225)

'0 wrapped in shamelessness, with your mind forever on profit, /how shall any one of the Achaians readily obey you/either to
go on a journey or to fight men strongly in battle?'
(Book I: lines 149-151)
Achilleus, with his genuine desire to halt the crisis and find a way to placate all
concerned, thinks himself a better man than Agamemnon.
The accusations that follow, however, point to an envy that Achilleus has long
harbored for Agamemnon:
"Never, when the Achaians sack some well- founded citadel/ of the
Trojans, do I have a prize that is equal to your prize./ Always
the greater part of the fighting is the work of /my hands; but
when the time comes to distribute the booty /yours is far the
greater reward.'
(Book I: lines 163-167)
At this moment it is evident that Achilleus is resentful because he is not given the
kind of recognition he thinks he deserves. He knows himself to be the 'best of the
Achaians,' and he cannot endure the thought that another man, whom he considers both
less noble and less warlike, should receive more honor simply because he is lord over
many men .
Taking into consideration Achilleus's knowledge of his two fates, it is possible
to reconstruct the way he must have felt about the enterprise at Troy, in order that
this disappointment over Agamemnon be so bitter for him. Knowing that in Troy he
faced death, but also everlating glory, Achilleus must have envisioned a splendid
career in the Argive host.
But though he is recognized as the mightiest warrior
among them, Achilleus is never treated as well as Agaemenon is • He finds himself
continually dominated by Agamemnon. He ·is disillusioned. When Agamemnon threatens
to take Briseis, Achilleus can no longer control his envy. This the ultimate dis honoring, and he is furious because instead of being honored as he had dreamt of being, he has been humiliated. He says,

At times, so bewildered and immersed in her powerful emotions is Penthesilia that she
does not know where she is. In her joy at discovering that Achilles is her prisoner,
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though this is a deception, she is so elated that she thinks herself in Themiscyra
(Scene 14: p. 221), and when she wakes from her final madness she thinks she is in
Elysium (Scene 24: p. 261).
Finally, Penthesilea herself embodies that strange Amazon duality of love and
hate. She feels in extremes: joy, bitter sorrow, anger, or all three synthesized
into one blinding emotion. In her physical appearance, too, she brings together the
conflicting elements of the dufoity. She is very beautiful, and her eyes have enough
allure to draw any man to her.
She is soft and delicate, the epitome of a yielding
woman.
Yet her beauty is encased in war gear, and she seems indestructible.
Antilochus says of her, "A foaming-jawed hyena! 'Tis no woman!" (Scene 2: p. 176).
In embodying this duality, Penthesilea is not at home in the world. She is made
up of teeming opposites. Though Achilleus also has conflicting elements within him,
he belongs in his world and because of this is able to bring those conflicting parts
together - to achieve a resolution. Penthesilea, who has no firm ground to stand
upon, cannot find resolution in the world. She does attain a kind of harmony with
herself, but when she does so she must do it in madness, and when it is over she cannot remain in the world. Achilleus, on the other hand, comes to a resolution which
endows him with a fulness of character that is truly great in the world.
I will now examine how each of these characters comes to a resolution, and what
those resolutions mean.
Achilleus belongs in the world, but he is dissatisfied with the way it treats
him.
His criticisms of Agamemnon suggest certain things about the way Achilleus
thinks about himself. He becomes angry at Agamemnon's behavior over Chryseis, and he
accuses Agamemnon of being, in effect, childish in his attachment to his prize (Book
I: lines 122-129). This suggests that Achilleus is sensitive to an ignoble side of
Agamemnon's character.
The Achaian men are dying because of Apollo's anger, and
Agamemnon will not give up the girl to rectify the situation. Achilleus is astounded
that such a man would be considered a kingly leader:

Through the course of the story, however, a change takes place in Achilleus. At
the start, he is acutely aware that his desires are not being satisfied. But from
the moment that the entreats Thetis to plead with Zeus on his behalf (Bk. I: lines
393-412), he sets in motion a chain of events that not only results in the fulfillment of his desires, but also causes a growth in his understanding of himself in the
world.
The death of Patroklos is the pivotal point in this process. Hence, an examination of Achilleus 's attitudes towards himself and towards what will make him
happy, both before and after the death of his companion, wil~ afford a view of what
this change in Achilleus entails. In Book IX, Achilleus is a young man with a dream
of glory. He is drawn to the warrior's life and the fame that accompanies excellent
deeds , but he does not have any notion of what that dream will be when it is
translated into reality. Achilleus concentrates on the glory which is foretold, and
he does not give much thought to the death that is involved.
On one hand this is odd, since as a warrior Achilleus has been faced with death
many times, and he is at home on the bloody battlefield.
On the other hand,
Achilleus sends Patroklos out into the fighting even though he knows that his friend
will die. Achilleus does this for the sake of his fate. He knows that he is sac-

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'the heart in me swells up in anger, when I remember/the disgrace
that he wrought upon me before the Argives,/the son of Atreus, as
if I were some dishonored vagabond.' (Bk. IX: lines 646-648)

�rificing Patroklos. Yet, despite prior knowledge of the event, Achilleus experiences
real agony over his friend's death:
the black cloud of sorrow closed on Achilleus./ In both hands he
caught up the grimy dust, and poured it/ over his head and face~
and fouled his handsome contenance, I and the black ashes were
scattered over his immortal tunic./ And he himself, mightily in
his might, in the dust lay/ at length, and took and tore at his
hair with his hands, and defiled it. (Bk. XVIII: lines 22-27)
Thus, though Achilleus knew he was to suffer a great loss, he was thinking more towards what that death would accomplish than towards the death itself.
Neither does Achilleus feel the force of fate, its completeness and its finality . He accepts fate as a given in his life, but he does not comprehend the range
over which it operates, that it brings together many events and emotions in order to
come to its accomplishment. he concentrates so much on the end result that he pays
no attention to what must happen and what he must experience in order for that end of
glory to be gained.
Achilleus's withdrawal into the fate which promised a long but obscure life illustrates that he is not truly in touch with what life is. Because of his disappointment with the way the Achaians have treated him, he persuades himself that he
wants the long life undisturbed by the turmoil of war. it is clear, however, that
Achilleus has no inclination toward that life: he is an aggressive man who craves
the opportunity to prove himself the bravest and the strongest of all men. He is not
a man who would be happy in the confined and unchallenging world of Phthia.
In Book IX, when Achilleus puts forward his reasons for wanting to return to the
land of his fathers, he is speaking out of frustration. He is striking out at the
Achaians because he feels hurt by them. It is a real moment for Achilleus, but he
does not believe what he is saying. He explains:
'For not worth the value of my life are all the possessions they
fable/ were won for Ilion ... Of possessions/cattle and fat sheep
are things to be had for the lifting,/ and tripods can be
won .•. but a man's life cannot come back again, it cannot be lifted/ nor captured again by force, once it has crossed the teeth's
barrier.'
(Bk. IX: lines 400-409)
This is a profound statement, but Achilleus does not know what it means. he has
already revealed the real reason for his threat to return the Phthia: his anger at
Agamemnon .
'Go back and proclaim to him all that I tell you, I openly, so
other Achaians may turn against him in anger/ ••• I will join with
him in no counsel, and in no action./ He cheated me and he did me
hurt •.• Let him of his own will/ be damned ... I hate his gifts. I
hold him light as the strip of a splinter./ Not if he gave me ten
times as much .•. not if he gave me gifts as many as the sand or
the dust is,/ not even so would Agamemnon have his way with my
spirit/until he had made good to me all this heartrending
insolence.'
(Bk. IX: lines 369-387)

Agamemnon offers him because he cares no longer ·for gifts. He wants complete and
utter recognition of his superiority. He will accept nothing less than Agamemnon's
subordination beneath him.
Achilleus hungers for transcendence over others, and his eyes look only toward
the brightness of his fate. This is why his threat to leave for Phthia is nothing
more than a threat. He intends to stay at Troy and be present for the unfolding of
his destiny:
'I shall not think again of the bloody fighting/ until such a
time as the son of wise Priam, Hektor the brilliant/ comes all
the way to the ships... slaughtering the Argives, and shall
darken with fire our vessels.'
(Bk . IX: lines 650-653)
Achilleus's lack of unqerstanding of the force his fate will have upon him indicates
that he is not quite in touch with himself. He has a splendid vision of what he
wants to be, but he has not yet found out who he is. He has not come into his own.
Following the death of Patroklos, however, Achilleus is forced to confront the
world that exists outside of his dreams. He tells Thetis,
'My mother, all these things the Olympian brought to accomplishment./ But what pleasure is this to me, since my dear companion
has perished, I Patroklos, whom I loved beyond. all other companions,/ as well as my own life. I have lost him.'
(Bk . XVIII: lines 79-82)
Now, instead of being like the king on the shield Hephaistos wrought for him, who
contentedly watches the reapers bringing in his crop (Bk . .XVIII: lines 550-560),
Achilleus suddenly finds himself deeply involved in the work itself. All this time,
from his ships, Achilleus has watched the events paving th~ way towards accomplishment of his fate, and now his fate has reached out and pulled him into the midst of
it. The shining goal of glory seems as nothing compared to the sorrow and the desire
for venge&lt;;ince.
Achilleus is also forced to confront himself, not in the terms he had done so
before , thinking only of his own hurt and what he wanted from those .who had hu~t him,
but in terms of how he affected other:
'I must die soon, then; since I was not to stand hy my companion/
, when he was killed. And now, far away from the land of his fathers,/ he has per ished, and la~ke d my fighting str ength t o de fend , him. I Now~ . . since I was no light of safety to Pat·roklo.s, no.r
to my other/ companions, , . who in their numbers went down before
glorious Hektor,/buc sit here beside my ships, a useless weight
.on . the good land,/ .I, who am such as no other ... in battle .•. why,
I .wish strife would vanish away from among gods and mortals,/ and
gall, which makes a man grow angry for all his great mind,/ that
gall of anger that swarms like smoke inside of a man's heart/ and
becomes and thing .sweeter to him by far than the dripping of honey.'
(Bk. XVIII: lines 98-110)

There is only one way in which these words about the value of his life come from any
genuine motivation.
It is true that his anger does not stem from the stingy way
Agamemnon has treated him.
Achilleus will not now accept all the magnificence

Though there still lurks, in the background, the memory of an Achilleus who
works steadily towards the gain of glory - that same Achilleus who knew Patroklos
would die - here there is an Achilleus who recognized he lived for more reasons than
the achievement of glory . He realizes that there are things dearer to him than he

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�had thought. He reassesses his judgments about what it means to live. As he confronts himself, he must also contemplate what his own death will mean. He had said
that no possessions could equal the value of his life.
With Patroklos 's death,
Achilleus sees that there is one possession for which he would gladly sacrifice his
life: the companionship of a beloved friend. With this recognition, Achiileus feels
the completeness of fate. He sees that it is not a dream far removed from the innnediate experience of living. He knows now that it touches him in every way, and that
it takes away from him things that he values.
The ruthlessness with which he pursues Hektor is not, then, simply inspired by
desire for vengeance. It is also inspired by a need to clear himself of his guilt in
Patroklos's death. He loathes himself - even to the point of guaranteeing his own
death. He tells his mother,
'there must be on your heart a numberless sorrow / for your son's
death .•. since the spirit within does not drive me / to go on living and be among men, except on condition / that Hektor first be
beaten down under my spear.'
(Bk. XVIII: lines 88-92)
Achilleus refuses even to eat or drink until he has both atoned for and avenged his
companion's death (Bk. XIX: lines 319-321 ) .
When it is all over, and Achilleus has taken the life from Hektor and may turn
to the burial of Patroklos, we see a different man emerge. He resembles neither the
fiery youth of the first sixteen books, nor the man consumed by murderous rage.
Achilleus still suffers moments during which his rage controls him and he drags
Hektor's body furiously around Patroklos's tomb. But these moments do not deny him
his new character; rather, they show that he is not yet secure in it.
During the funeral games, Achilleus acts with the same kind of grace and courtesy he gave a hint of when he received Agamemnon's embassy in Book IX (lines 185-198) .
Here, however, there is more substance to his behavior. Achilleus is not merely
pleasing his heart with music, dreaming of mighty warriors and deeds of fame. He is
taking part in the interaction between such men.
He carefully treats with the
feelings of each one, and having learnt of the dangers of quarrelling, he says during
a dispute, '"No longer now, Aias and Idomenus, continue / to exchange this bitter and
evil talk./ It is not becoming'" (Bk. XXIII: lines 492-493).
The consideration and civility that Achilleus exhibit during the games extend to
the time when Priam comes alone to him in supplication. Achilleus is following the
connnands of Zeus, yet he treats Priam with genuine sympathy and respect. He takes
him in, and together they mourn their losses. Achilleus is honestly moved by this
man who has wielded so much power, but who has suffered such devastation in the war
with the Achaians. he $ees Priam as a fellow human being who has been granted by the
gods both joy and misery and who is worthy of admiration (Bk. XXIV: lines 542-551).
Even when Achilleus responds warningly to Priam's request to see Hektor's body,
he does not indicate that his sympathy was simply an act. He warns Priam because the
freshness of his grief is still with him, and he does not want his rage to come to
the fore.
'You must not further make my spirit move in my sorrows, I for
fear, old sir, I might not let you alone ... suppliant as you are,
and be guilty before the god's orders.'
(Bk. XXIV: lines 568-570)
Achilleus does not want to disobey Zeus, and this is strong reason for his restraint.
Yet, he could have complied with the gods without showing the consideration and rev-

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erence that he does show Priam.
By the end of the poem, Achilleus has come into his own. Despite the rage that
still smolders beneath the calm exterior, Achilles has discovered who he is in the
world.
The dream has been translated into reality:
he has all he wished for.
Achilleus has achieved great fame, and he has achieved dominance over Agamemnon.
Throughout the funeral games, Agamemnon defers to Achilleus's wishes, and Achilleus
says to Priam, "' (The Achaians ) keep coming / and sitting by me and making plans, as
they are supposed to'" ( Bk. XXIV: lines 651-652 ) .
Achilleus acknowledges that consideration for others is important. He is like
Aristotle's 'proud man' (Nicomachean Ethics, Bk. IV: Ch. 3) who is secure in himself
and magnanimously recognizes the value and worth of others. Now Achilleus extends to
Agamemnon the respect he deserves as lord of the Achaians . because Achilleus is no
longer threatened by Agamemnon. The sense that one has at the end of The Iliad is
also that Achilleus is far more aware of the value of his companions Automedon and
Alkimos than he was of the value of Patroklos. They serve him, but he does not take
them for granted.
Achilleus, because he has a place in his world, is able to come to contentment
in that world. penthesilea has a very different path to her resolution. it is full
of tension, and the only way for it to be resolved is through madness. Certain passages in the play indicate that Penthesilea, unlike Achilleus, is not inclined to the
warlike way of life. While he causes himself sorrow by abstaining from the war,
Penthesilea suffers because she is in a state of war that she does not want to be in.
While in Themiscyra, though Penthesilea was undoubtedly given military training,
she was kept from engaging in real war with real opponents. She tells Achilles that
until 1 fhe was twenty-three, she had not gone to war with the Amazons (Scene 15: p.
234 ) .
She also tells him that she was so overcome with grief at her mother's death
that she could not find any interest in taking her own place in life:
Long, long I wept, a whole grief-laden month,
At my dead mother's grave, neglecting still
The crown that lay beside me masterless,
Until at length the oft-repeated cry
Of the people, who, eager for joyful war,
Impatient, lay encamped around my palace,
Dragged me by force to mount the throne.
(Scene 15: pp. 235-236 )
This suggests that Penthesilea
protection of her mother's power,
the Amazon people she is destined
In addition, Pentesilea is
grace:

was more inclined to her life at home, in the
than she was to going out and proving herself among
to rule.
remembered as being a girl rull of compassion and

Oh, such a virgin, Hermia! So modest!
So deft in all the arts of women's hands!
So lovely when she danced or when .s he sang!
So full of wisdom, dignity, and grace!
•.. The mottled worm that sported in the dust
Before her delicate feet, she would not crush;
She would recall the shaft ere it could pierce
The savage wild boar's shoulder, and his eye,·
Glazing in death, could drag her to her knees
Before him, melted quite in soft remorse.
(Scene 23: pp. 254-255; First Priestess )

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Penthesilea does not fit into her Amazon environment. She is dependent on her
mother, and gains from her a false sense of belonging in the Amazon community. Her
strange nature among these women who clamour for battle can be seen when her situation is compared with the feelings of a young amazon girl who appears in the play:
Another time when all the Amazon host
Marches to war with cymbals and with drums,
We will go too, and not - oh promise us! Only to grace the mother's victory
With rose-plucking and winding toilsome wreaths!
My arm here - look! - can hurl the javelin,
And from my sling the stone flies swift and true.
Why not? Why not? I am no more a child.
(Scene 6: p. 195; First Girl)

Penthesilea is reluctant to go to war, just as she is reluctant to kill any living
thing. She does not care for the dominance that her position as Queen would give
her. She is also, perhaps, frightened of assuming the throne, since she feels alone.
and vulnerable in a community which thrives on self-assertion. When the priestesses
come to tell her that Ares has called her to war, Penthesilea begs, "Oh, let me stay
beside thee, Mother!/ Use it once more, thy royal dignity,/ - For the last time - and
bid these women go" (Scene 15: p. 235). She wants to stay beside her dying mother
because she cares for her, but she is also afraid to leave her nest of security.
As the host travels to Troy, Penthesilea begins to be filled with warlike feelings. These are not, however, natural to her. She describes them as though they
were a new experience, and exhilirating for that reason. Her feelings are fueled by
two things, neither of which stem from her own nature: her desire to fulfill her
mother's last wish (Scene 15: p. 235; Pen th.) and her hope that in overcoming
Achilles she will achieve a sense of belonging in the Amazon community. She says,
Nearer I drew to old Scamander's stream,
And every vale around through which I swept
Echoed the clash of battle before Troy,
So did my grief abate, and my wide soul
Drank in the universe of joyful war.
To myself I said: if they should all together,
The mighty moments of the daedal past,
Return for me, if all the company
Of heroes whom the songs of minstrels sing,
Should step down from the stars, I should not find
Not one more excellent to crown with roses,
Than that man whom my mother chose for me So dear, so wild, so sweet, so terrible The slayer of Hektor!
(Scene 15: p. 236)
The importance that conquering Achilles has in Penthesilea' s mind is seen in
Scenes 14 and 15 when she believes she has won him. Up until this point, Penthesilea
has been wracked by indecision and frustration, but here she falls easily into the
role of Queen.
She begins to think of preparations for the hosts' return to
Themiscyra, and she has an air of confidence about her (Scene 15: p. 227)
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en by her illustrates Penthesilea's notion of who she should be in the world. her
ideal is an Amazon one: to be completely detached from any submissive, loving, feelings and to be physically capable of subjecting any man to her will.
In taking
Achilles, she will have proved to herset~' and to her people that she is truly Amazon
and that she deserves her Queenship.
Her happiness is thus dependent on her
winning of Achilles. She explains to Prothoe the unhappiness she has suffered prior
to this supposed capture of Achilles:
They say misfortune purifies the soul,
But I •.. have never found it so.
Bitterness still, rage against gods and men,
Unseeing passion are its fruits in me.
With strange perversity I then have hated
On others' faces every mark of joy;
The blithe child playing in its mother's lap
Seemed but conspired to mock my sullen grief.
(Scene 14: p. 221)
She was a woman who felt her
means to fulfill her natural
then have given her both the
While she experiences
Penthesilea incorporates her
of Achilles that she becomes

displacement among her people and who did not have the
inclination to be loved. The capture of Achilles would
love she craved and her place among the Amazons.
those warlike feelings on the way to Troy, however,
own nature into them. She builds up so great an image
intoxicated with him. He fills all her thoughts:

0 thou son of Peleus!
Ever my single thought when I awoke;
Ever my dream in sleep wast thou! The world
Lay stretched before me like a patterned web,
And in each glorious, wide-gaping mesh
One of thy deeds with craftsman's skill enwoven;
Upon my heart, as on silk white and fine,
I burned each deed with colours steeped in flame.
(Scene 15: pp. 236-237; Penth.)
As a result, when she sees Achilles, she falls passionately in love with him (Scene
15: p. 237; Penth) . Her problem of trying to make a place for herself among the
Amazons is hence made even more difficult - and the solution even more important because while she tries to establish herself, her own inclinations towards love pull
her in the opposite direction: towards succumbing to Achilles. Such an act would,
of course, automatically dishonor her in the eyes of her people.
At the opening of the play, Penthesilea is in this state of tension. Achilles
stands before her as the shining key which will give her both happiness and belonging
in the world. The path she takes is one of frantically trying to capture Achilles on
the battlefield. His capture will make her what she wants to be. In this respect of having a bright goal to strive for - Penthesilea is like Achilleus. But whereas
he looked for his own ability and splendor to be recognized by the world, Penthesilea
looks for this through another: through Achilles, as though his brilliance might be
incorporated into her .
Penthesilea tries in every way to reach her goal, but she is hindered by several
things. Nature itself seems to put itself up as a barrier between Achilles and herself. At one point, she is near enough to reffh out and grasp him, but he swerves
and she falls as her horse stumbles on a rock.
By the time she recovers, Achilles
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�her from striking at Achilles in battle. At crucial moments she stays her hand and
Achilles goes unscathed (Scene I: pp. 171-172). Finally, as Achilles again and again
eludes her, Penthesilea begins to feel desperate. She is overcome by doubts that she
can gain him at all. She also worries that in her headstrong pursuit of Achilles she
is endangering her host. This worry in itself undermines her ability to be the leader she yearns to be.
It is in Scene 9 that Penthesilea comes to terms with the futility of what she
is trying to do: work against her own nature. She has pushed herself to make one
last attempt to conquer Achilles, and she herself has fallen in the confrontation.
She feels then how much she does not want to meet Achilles in the context war. She
is stunned that he could treat her with such aggression:
So crush and bruise this breast! - How could he do it?
Oh Prothoe! It is as wanton-cruel
As though I were to rive the innocent lyre
That hangs in the night breeze, whispering my name.
At the bear's feet I would cower, nestling close,
Would stroke and fondle the blotch'd panther, who
Approached me with such feelings as I him.
(Scene 9: p. 203)
Penthesilea now abandons her hope of establishing herself among the Amazons, and of
finding love with Achilles. She admits,
The utmost I have done that human strength
Is able - I have tried the impossible I have staked all upon one throw - all that I have.
The fateful die is cast - it lies before me:
And I must understand - that I have lost.
(Scene 9: p. 207)
She also strikes out at those who have helped her think that she could ever reach her
Amazon ideal:
That hand I curse that decked me for the fight
This day, and that deceiving serpent-word
That told me I should conquer. Accursed! Accursed!
Oh, how they stood around me with their mirrors Flatt'rers! - on either hand and praised the form
Divine of my smooth limbs, molded in steel! 14
Pestilence smite you with you tricks of hell!
(Scene 9: p. 206)
Penthesilea regains this state of mind in Scene 15 after she discovers that
Achilles has, in fact, taken her in battle. The urgency of her request that he come
with her anyway to Themiscyra is a sign that one final time she is trying to achieve
place among the Amazons, and love with Achilles, in the context of Amazon thought
(Scene 15 : p . 240 ; Penth . ) . But when Achilles leaves her , Penthesilea abandons any
agressive stance. She accepts the shame of her un-warlike nature, and indeed, she
feels she can do so since she has been legitimately conquered in battle. In anger
she says:
Was I not his by every use of chivalry,
By fairest chance of war his lawful prize?

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When man on man makes war ....
... Show me the law - I say, show me! - which then
Permits the prisoner who has yielded him
To be set free again from his captor's bonds.
(Scene 19: p.241)
Penthesilea, now trapped in an unsolvable situation, refuses to act at all. In shame
she says, "I must bury me in endless night!" (Scene 19: p. 243).
There is, however, a hint that Penthesilea expects Achilles to return and take
her for his own. That would be the only way in which she might escape her present
alienated situation among the Amazons. In Scene 20, when she hears that a herald
comes from Achilles, she says in anticipation, "'Tis from Achilles! - Ah; what shall
I hear?'" (p. 243). And though she follows this remark ~ith a command to bid the
herald leave, she is mer~ly feeling the impossibility of · her situation. Penthesilea
wants nothing more of the Amazon life. She wants only to follow her inclinations.
towards love. Now that she has heard from Achilles's own lips that he loves her,
Penthesilea is willing to leave behind the world she knows for another foreign one in
the arms Achilles.
This fragile reconciliation is doomed to be disrupted. Achilles is himself the
agent. He, assuming that Penthesilea is comfortable in her world, and that she would
never think of coming to without first~aking him in battle, challenges her to single
combat. He intends to make a farce out of their confrontation, fall to her, and to
go with her Themiscyra (Scene 21: pp. 248-249). But Penthesilea, having rejected the
warlike stance and having reconciled herself to her womanly ' inclinations, cannot accept - or comprehend - that Achilles approaches her in terms of war:
He, he, who knows I am too weak by far,
He sends this challenge, Prothoe, to me?
My faithful breast here moves him not a whit
Till he has crushed and split it with his spear?
Did all I whispered to him touch his ear
Only with the empty music of the voice?
(Scene 20: p. 244)
Penthesilea feels betrayed. This challenge reawakens all the tensions that had been
present before she came to terms with her lack of belonging in the Amazon world. In
their rebirth, they are much more powerful.
Penthesilea, experiencing the
re-emergence of all these tensions at once, is in agony in her awareness of them.
She retreats into madness and accepts Achilles' s challenge:
"Now I do feel the
strength to stand against him: Now he shall down and grovel in the dust" (Scene 20:
p. 244).
And Penthesilea goes to meet him, c~lling the gods down to witness her deed:
with maniac tread among her hounds
With foam- flecked lip she goes and calls them sisters,
Who howl and howl; most like a Maenad she,
Dancing across the fields, her bow in hand,
She urges on the pack that pants for blood
Around her, bidding them seize the fairest prey
That ever, so she tells them, ranged the earth.
(Scene 22: p. 251; High Priestess)
In this Bacchic frenzy, Penthesilea kills Achilles, who means her no hf5m. As he
hides in the boughs of a fir tree, she brings him down with an arrow
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�proceeds to tear him apart, in the same way that Agave destroyed Pantheus, · her son.
It is a scene of horror and insanity. The Amazon who witnessed the act reports, like
the messenger who looked into the hidden chamber where Oedipus put his eyes out before Jocasta's hanging body:
Oh you, Diana's holy priestesses,
And you, Ares' chaste daughters, hear me speak:
I am the Afric Gorgon, and to stone Behold ! - Your bodies' warmth I freeze at once.
(Scene 23: p. 252; Meroe)
This madness, despite its existence in the realm of abomination, does resolve
all of Penthesilea 's tensions.
In her madness she destroys them by killing that
which brough t them a ll t oge the r fo r her: Achille s.
I n killing him, Penthes ilea
proves beyond a doubt that she is Amazon and that she is worthy of descendence from
Tanais. Penthesilea had earlier-assured Achilles that despite her lack of a breast,
Here in this left breast (all youth's tenderest, sweetest
feelings ) have take refuge
And are, by threat much, nearer to my heart.
Not one shalt thou find lacking, friend, in me.
(Scene 15: p. 231)
But now, as Tanais symbolically tore her breast from her body at the founding of the
Amazon race, Penthesilea has wrenched out of her very being the feelings that that
breast symbolized. As Penthesilea drops the great bow of the Amazons at the feet of
the High Priestess, the priestess says,
Great Queen and lady! Oh, forgive, I pray!
Diana is full well content with thee.
I see thou hast atoned; her wrath is turned.
The mighty founder of our women's realm,
Tanais' self, I cannot well deny,
She did not wield the bow more worthily.
(Scene 24: p. 258)
Penthesilea also resolves the tension she has felt between being true to her Amazon
upbringing and therefore taking Achilles in battle, and being true to herself and
hence taking him in love. She takes him in war, and yet in her tearing of him she is
di ssolving t he barrieyg between herse lf and Achi lles. She is joining with him in the
most literal of ways.
When Penthesilea wakes from her frenzy, she feels· the peace which release from
tension brings:
"I am so happy sister! More than happy! / Quite ripe for death,
Goddess, I feel myself" ( Scene 25: p. 261). She senses that she has achieved all
that she could have wished for in life. She is ready for death because there is
nothing more she can accomplish. And although she is horrified when she discovers
what she has done, she finds that she can account for it:
Surely I kissed him? Or did I tear him?...
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.•. So - it was a mistake. Kissing - biting Where is the difference? When we truly love
It's easy to do one when we mean the other.
How many a girl, her soft arms fast entwined
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lieyond words she could eat him up for love.
And then, poor fool, when she would prove her words,
Sated she is of him - sated almost to loathing.
Now, my beloved, that was not my way.
Why look: when my soft arms were round thy neck,
I did it word for word; it was no pretending.
I was not quite so mad as they would have it.
(Scene 24; pp. 265-266)
But in her realization of what she has done, Penthesilea also realizes that she does
not have an understanding of herself in the world. She had tried to compromise: to
think of what she ought to be, and the'ilto think of what she could be with Achilles.
She never actually dealt with what she was.
After her murder of Achilles,
Penthesilea has no context to put herself in. She has rejected the Amazon life, even
though she has now proven herself in it ( Scene 24: p. 266; Penth. ) , and she has
destroyed Achilles, so that she cannot find belonging in him either.
She can
therefore, perhaps hoping to find her place in another realm, only assert her
presence in the world through her death:
now I will step down into my breast
As into a mine and dig a lump
Of cold ore, an emotion that will kill.
This ore I temper in the fires of woe
To hardest steel; then steep it through and through
In the hot, biting venom of remorse;
Carry it then to Hope's eternal anvil
And sharpen it and point it to a dagger;
Now to this dagger do I give my breast:
So! So! So! So! Once More! Now it is good.
(Scene 24: p. 267 )
And Penthesilea dies.
It can already be seen that there is a great difference between Achilleus and
Penthesilea. He finds himself in the world, and though he is fated to die, it is not
necessary, by the very nature of his relationship to that world, that he die. Should
he have lived, Achilleus would have been the most glorious product of the homeric
world. Penthesilea finds herself and asserts herself. But she does this through the
aberration of madness. That in itself shows what an impossible thing she wanted to
do . She cannot, like Achilleus, consciously experience her coming into her own in
t he wo r ld. Thus, when she has forced a resolution, she cannot remain in the world
when she returns to consciousness.
In order to spell out the distinction between these two characters, an analysis
of the acts that facilitate their resolutions will be helpful .
Achilleus wants
glory, and in order to gain it he must kill Hektor. Penthesilea wants to find love
and place in the world.
In order to gain it she must kill Achilles. The ways in
which they kill, and the motivations for the killing, are very different.
Achilleus treats Hektor with utter disregard for Hektor's own glory and worth as
an idividual . So full of r age and pur pos e is Ach i lleus t hat t he re i s no escape for
Hektor. In the typical manner portrayed in The Iliad , Achilleus and Hektor face one
another and hurl threats at one another: they assert themselves. And when Hektor
falls, Achilleus vaunts:
'Hektor, surely you though as you killed Patroklos you would
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�fool, for an avenger was left far greater than he was, I behind
him and away by the hollow ships. And it was I; I and I have
broken you strength; On you the dogs and vultures/shall feed and
foully rip you; the Achaians will b¥8Y Patroklos.'
(Bk. XXII: lines 331-336)
There are two things to notice in this boast. Of the greatest importance is
Achilleus 's use of 'I.'
He uses it emphatically three times, and what he is
conveying to Hektor is this: I am the greater man. You are nothing in comparison.
Here Achilleus reveals his need to dominate, to stand alone as the most glorious of
all men. The next thing of interest is Achilleus's juxtaposition of Hextor's doom to
be devoured by carrion with Patroklos's imminent burial. Achilleus is stressing that
while Hektor will receive no funeral rites and will thus never gain access into
Hades, Patroklos, the man Hektor had dominated, will. Achilleus therefore not only
supercedes Hektor by taking his life, but he further impresses his dominance upon
Hektor by threatening to annihilate Hektor' s individuality in death.
In being
consumed, Hektor will be split into many parts, and he will be distributed among
many. To make his point strongly , Achilleus says,
'I wish only that my spirit and fury would drive me/ to hack you
meat away and eat it raw for the things that/ you have done to
me.
So there is no one who can hold the dogs off I from your
head.'
(Bk. XXII: lines 346-349)
For Achilleus, this is the supreme statement of dominance: a threat to destroy the
individuality of another by ingesting it into one's self. Achilleus's treatment of
Hektor's body is in the same vein. He abuses it and tries to mar it in every way.
His wish is that its unique form and beauty be destroyed.
What Achilleus wishes he had spirit and rage enough to do, Penthesilea carries
out. But Penthesilea's treatment of Achilles stems from motivations that are not the
same as those of Achilleus.
This changes the meaning of the act.
Penthesilea' s
desire to conquer Achilles does not primarily come from a need to dominate. She acts
with tremendous agression, but it is not directed a supercession. It is directed at
absorption of Achilles.
She moved to meet that youth whom she so loves,
•.. In the confusion of her youthful senses
Aiming with all the horrid terrors of war
Her hot desire to seize and possess him.
(Scene 23: p. 252; Meroe)
Penthesilea does not want to destroy Achilles.
She wants to merge with him
completely. Her deed demonstrates not a contempt of Achilles, but a valuing of him
as a special individual. She would go to any lengths to grasp him, and she is so
blinded by her eagerness that she does not realize that what she is doing destroys
the very thing she seeks. The Homeric Achilleus wishes to comsume Hektor, but he
cannot do i t because in that he would be bringing himself into the closest of
contacts with Hektor. What he wants to do is separate himself from Hektor as much as
possible. Achilleus must hence content himself with abusing the body in the dust
behind his chariot. Penthesilea, having inadvertently marred Achilles in her killing
of him, treats the body with love (Scene 24: p. 266).
Having seen the different meanings that the deed has for Penthesilea and
Achilleus, it is possible to gain clear insight into how very opposed these characters are to one another. For Achilleus, who belongs in his world, assertion of his

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individualtiy is the most important function in liis life:
the glory he will gain
ensures his shining dominance over men even after his death. For Penthesilea, who
has no place in her world, assertion of her individuality has no meaning until she
finds belonging in the world.
She tries to find this through another individual:
Achilles. And because she put her goal in the being of another, her resolution in
the world became, with his destruction, only something which destroyed her also.
There are many ways in which Penthesilea's love affair with Achilles and the end
in which it results can be read. Return for a moment to the idea introduced at the
beginning of this paper that Kleist's Achilles and Penthesilea represent two sides of
Achilleus.
Looking at the two characters as parts of a whole, the play becomes
Kleist's interpretation of how Achilleus finally comes into his own in The Iliad.
Achilleus is a divided man. Part of him has great depth of feeling and great
splendor, and the other part is calculating an manipulative. This part looks only to
the end it desires. It will sacrifice anything to bring that end to realization.
Through the course of the story, both sides of Achilleus are at work, and he is not
in harmony with himself. But through the events that are fated to be, his emotional
side and his calculating side are forced to merge with one another. In the death of
Patroklos and Achilleus's resulting rage in which he destroys Hektor, these two parts
are synthesized. Achilleus becomes whole. That is what makes his youthful death
tragic: he has just recently become a mighty man.
Kleist's Achilles and Penthesilea try to come together in the same way that the
sides of Homer's Achilleus do. There is great conflict between them, and there is
much conflict in the character of Penthisilea that represents the part of Achilleus
that passionately desires and must feel the pain which the actions of that other,
colder side cause.
In this, Penthesilea and Achilles are like Artistophanes's
hermaphrodites. the female half, Penthesilea, and the male half, Achilles, want desperately to come together. This accounts for Kleist's portrayal of Penthesilea as a
Phaedra who, without the love of Hippolytus, cannot live her own life and wishes only
to fade into death.
It also accounts for why Kleist make Penthesilea an Amazon:
being one half of Achilleus, she must have both a female yearning to be united with
the male half and the ruthless rage of a warrior who blooms in battle.
Penthesilea's killing of Achilleus in the way Achilleus wished to kill Hektor is
very elegant, for it is in that moment, standing over Hektor, that the passionate
side of Achilleus is fused with the calculating side: at Hektor's death Achilleus's
glory is ensured, and he also atones for the sacrifice of Patroklos. Penthesilea,
the passionate half of this split entity, does away with calculating Achilles in the
same way the Achilleus loses his calculating side into a unity with his emotional
side when he kills Hektor.
It is also appropriate that Penthesilea must die.
Just as it is tragic that
Achilleus must die, it is tragic that there is nothing more she can do in the world.
And as part of a whole, once Achilles is dead, Penthesilea cannot live. Prothoe says
of Penthesilea (and this applies to the Homeric Achilleus also),
Her blooming was too proud and glorious!
Vainly the gale will shake the withered oak,
But with a crash he flings the living down,
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Grasping with ruffian hands her copious locks.
(Scene 24: p. 268)
Yet there is more to Penthesilea than this connection to one aspect of
Achilleus 's character.
Recall Keist' s portrayal 'of Achilles with all the
distictiness that the figure is given in The Iliad. With this in mind, Penthesilea
can be read as a contrast between the classical Achilleus and a modern one:
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�into his own in the world into a modern context.
The world of Penthesilea and that character's difficulties in the world
represent Kleist' s perceptions of the world of his time and the problems he saw
hindering an individual from finding contentment. The sense of existing in a world
where the individual struggles alone to find himself is Kleist' s evaluation of
modernity.
He purposefully incorporates The Iliad (and things like Racine's
formulation of Pahedra 'a character) into his play in order to make explicit the
difference he saw between the modern individual and the classical one·
He then
relies upon what the reader knows of the classical tale to make h~s meaning cl:ar.
Penthesilea captures for Kleist the tensions a modern individual experiences·
Given a lack of place in the world, the individual desires both to assert himself and
to lose himself by attempting to find belongin~ through other individuals·
The
0 (which is an unusual occurrence
importance that Kleist gives to the power of love
in classical works - only in Euripides's Phaedra do we see such a consuming emotion)
suggests that love in this unbounded, blinding mode has become, in the modern world,
the answer to this lack of belonging. Keist's opinion seems to have been that the
classical individual, because he had definite place in the world and rules that
governed him in that place, had no need for such passion.
In line with this, ·
Kleist's Achilles does not have the same kind of love for Penthesilea as she has for
him. He is fascinated by her, he wants to share his life with her, but he does not
want to be utterly merged with her.
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Penthesilea's madness is Kleist's judgement
of what a modern individual must
do if he insists upon achieving harmony with himself in the world.
He implies that
it is impossible to do such a thing naturally.
It requires a madness that is monstrous. Penthesilea's death, achieved by drawing out of her soul an emotion that is
powerful enough to kill, is the only thing Kleist sees as glorious and beautiful
about the individual. He aggrandizes human mortality by depicting the human self at
its greatest height when it rejects its world. It is not just her Amazon world that
Penthesilea rejects; in destroying Achilles, she also rejects the shining image of
that classical individual who does belong in his world.
She has forced even glorious Achilleus to acknowledge the mightiness of her pure being which is uncluttered by
things of the world.
I think, however, that there is a more positive side to Kleist's analysis of the
modern situation.
Penthesilea can ,also be read as an allegory of romantic approach
to Achilleus:
the idealization of, and fascination with, that heroic figure.
Penthesilea then represents the modern romantic who is infatuated with Homer's
Achilleus. The love affair between the two characters is hence a description of how
people like myself, as readers of The Iliad, become intrigued with Achilleus.
We,
like Penthesilea, chase after an image which exists in thought, wishing to overtake
him, wishing to discover his tantalizing secret, wishing to assimilate into ourselves
his secret that we might become like such a man.
This interpretation of the play makes several things clear.
Kleist may have
made use of the Amazon character - the love / hate duality - to illustrate the
relationship that the lover of Achilleus has with the splendid image.
He both
idealizes him and yearns to be like him, and yet he feels that Achilleus outshines
him. He therefore envies Achilleus. The romantic wants to unveil Achilleus's secret
because he does not want the image to loom so far above him.
In the light of this idea, much of the disjunction between Penthesilea a nd
Achilles is made understandable.
If one tries to imagine actually meeting the
Achilleus whom one has idealized, the situation would certainly be full of
misunderstandings, and perhaps full of some disappointments as well, when the man did
not live up to his image. Penthesilea day-dreams about Achilles, and when she meets
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Yet when she talks with him, she is shocked because the man she is speaking with does
not seem to be the one she imagined. She asks him if he is really that man who with
such a heart of iron abused the body of Hektor. Achilles, too, does not know how to
understand Penthesilea. She fills him with wonderment. At one point he says to 22r,
"I was wond'ring/ If thou wert come down to me from the moon" (Scene 15: p. 232).
The inability, therefore, that Penthesilea and Achilles have of coming together
and understanding one another is an indication that they embody two completely different consciousnesses. Achilles is very much himself. He is in his proper environment. Penthesilea is misplaced both in his environment and in her own.
She admires
his stability and harmony in the world, while he is drawn to her literal
unearthliness:
0 thou, who with soft, heavenly radiance,
As though the realms of light had open their doors,
Descendest on me, strange beyond with: Who art thou?
How do I name thee?
( Scene 15: p. 226; Achilles)
That it is impossible, however, for these lovers to come together except in the
frenzy of Penthesilea' s madness, suggests that this play is a bitter comment on
Kleist' s part, resulting from disillusionment with such romantic idealization of
Achilleus. The black nature of the play may imply that Kleist thought this 'looking
back to the past' and searching for the secret of being a whole individual is not the
answer, that it could, in fact, be dangerous.
It could go beyond all bounds and
leave the modern individual floundering in an image that is truly imaginary. Just as
Penthesilea is doomed to fall as she reaches out to grasp Achilles, in looking backwards too fervently the romantic is bound to fall.
The presence of the myths concerning voyeurism - Pentheus peeking at the
maenads, and Actaeon watching Artemis bathe - might suggest that in delving so deeply
into the images of the past one is trying to see what is best not seen. In this attraction, the romantic could become an Oedipus, drawn almost against hi$ will towards
an end that is horrifying.
The element of punishment in these two myths might also be important with respect to this reading of Penthesilea. Although exact parallels cannot be drawn, it
might be that Penthesilea is being punished for refusing to work on understanding and
belonging in her world. Actaeon was punished for trying to gain access into a world
of the goddess that was forbidden to him. Pentheus denied Dionysus. Agave's fault
was much the same as his, though not as extreme. She refused to believe that Semele
had lai12 with Zeus and was bringing forth into a world a new kind of god.
Both
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Pentheus
and Agave resisted working on understanding how the new god would change
their lives.
Penthesilea, like these people, took refuge in something other than
what could give her place in her world.
She tried to find place through another,
Achilles, who is not only a completely distinct individual from her, but who comes
from another world altogether. It is possible that Kleist felt that looking back to
the past was good thing, as long as it did not involve idealization. He might have
felt that the approach that idealized would result in an eclipse of what is great in
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the modern individual.
I said earlier that this interpretation of Penthesilea as an allegory of the
romantic
idealization
of
Achilleus
was
more
positive
than
the
preceding
interpretation.
It is so because it does not make the·modern situation impossible.
It does not suggest that death, and glorification of that death, are the only acts
available to the displaced modern individual.
If Kleist's message is to be careful
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�Kleist would also advocate careful observation of the modern worzg: trying to see it
clearly without having the vision blinded by images of the past.
Perhaps Kleist never meant the play to be read as an allegory. Nevertheless, I
find such a reading helpful.
As I prepare to leave behind the images that have
filled my thoughts for the past four years, I wonder about that world that lies
beyond St. John's College, and I wonder how happiness can be found there.
I have
learnt from Kleist that, despite my own tendency to idealize the images of the past
and search fervently for their secrets, I must look for what is splendid in modernity
also. And though I do not feel at home in that world, I take Kleist's advice to work
at finding a place in it. There is much that the images of the past have taught me,
but I must hold myself back from turning blindly to them. They can give me a sense
of comfort, because of the stability they convey to me, but through them I will not
find belonging in my own world. Those images can guide me, since the past remains
embedded in the present, but they cannot replace the present.
ENDNOTES

1. I shall use Achilleus to refer to the character in The Iliad. Since he also appears in Penthesilea, this will help to distinguish between the Homeric individual
and Kleist's Achilles.
2.

Kleist is undoubtedly making fun of Homer's 'crafty Odysseus' in this speech.

3. Penthesilea is divided into twenty-four scenes. There are no acts which hold it
together. Thus, the play is itself like this landscape in which events simply occur.

4.

At least, no ceremonies that we see in the play.

5. It could be said that even the gods of The Iliad represent movements in the human
soul. But they are not depicted as such, and I am concerned with the ways in which
these things are described by the authors.

6. This is unlike Glaucos and Diomedes, who exchange armor as a sign of friendship.
They meet as general foes, but in discovering the specifics about one another, they
agree not to fight, though they fight others in the enemy camp.

7. The Amazon law also forbids that a woman pick her man. She is supposed to take
whomever the god sends her (see Scene 15: p. 235). Thus Penthesilea, in her love
for Achilles, is out of line in her Amazon world.
8.

Tanais was the first Queen of the Amazons and the founder of their traditions.

9. The scenes in which this deception occurs correspond to Books XIV and XV of The
Iliad in which Hera deceives Zeus. Both texts describe a love scene. Hera is able
to alleviate, for a time, the dire circumstances Zeus has put upon the Achaians, and
in the play Achilles's deception also, for a short time, keeps Penthesilea away from
her tensions and the end they will bring her to.
10. According to myth, the look in Penthesilea's eyes as she died from Achilleus's
blow made him fall in love with her. In the play, her gaze as she falls before him
in battle drives away all thoughts of violence that Achilles had towards her.

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.

11. Penthesilea may have accompained the host, as' the young girls who pick roses do
in the play, but she would not have engaged in battle. In order to participate in
the Feast of Roses, an Amazon must have conquered her man in battle.
Since
Penthesilea has not taken part in the Feast of Roses, she cannot have battled with
any man.
'

12. What is initially taken to be a desire from fame (see p. 2, this paper) now
turns out to be a desire to gain place in the world. Thus, though she and Achilles
seem to be pushed by the same motivations, they are not.
Diomede say~ to Achilles, concerning this well-timed swerve,
Yet all that I have seen convinces me
That thy so masterly retreat was not constrained
But of free choice. One might indeed suppose
That with the crack of dawn ....
Already thou hadst marked that lucky stone
O'er which the Queen should stumble ....
With such sure course, by the eternal gods,
Didst thou ent~ce her to this very stone.
(Scene 4: pp. 182-183)
Kleist, therefore, responded to the character of Achilleus in much the same way this
I did, seeing him as manipulating his way to his gain of glory and seeing him as
willing to sacrifce Patroklos for this goal. Kleist also saw the ~reatness inherent
in Achilles. But he gave that greatness to Penthesilea.
13.

14. This is the moment in which Penthesilea most resemble Phaedra.
It is interesting, however, that she is most like Racine's Ph'edre:
Que ces vains or'n ements, que ces voiles me pesent 1
Quelle importune main, en formant tous ces noeuds,
A pris soin sur mon front d'assembler mes cheveux?
Tout m'afflige et me nuti, et conspire'a me nuit.
(Larousse - Act I, Scene 3: lines 158-161)
Kleist copies this passage almo$t exactly.
It is significant, I think, that he
chooses the modern interpretation of the character over Euripides's portrayal of her
in Hippolytus (this passage can be found in Scene 1: lines 198-202).
In his
reinterpretation of the character of Achilleus through Penthesilea, Kleist uses a
reinterpretation of the character of Phaedra.
15.Here Kleist mixes the story of Actaeon, who was changed into a stag and devoured
by his own . hounds, with the story of fentheus hiding in the boughs of a tree in order
to peek at his mother and the other maenads .
1

16. In Euripeides 's Bacchae, the mother, Agave, · des troys the separate individuality
of her son, the being to whom she had given that individuality. . In her consuming of
him (though that section of the text is now missing), she and her offspring become
one again. Pentheus returns to whence he came. In calling fort,h The Bac~hae, Kleist
is emphasizing the oneness of Penthesilea and Achilles at this moment.
17.
In the German this reads:
So - it was a mistake.
Kisses (Kiisse) - bites
(bisse) [They rhyme] . . When we truly love/It is easy to. grasp ~ne instead of the other.
18. Penthesilea's killing of Achilles . also occurs in the twenty-second part of the
play, though it is not described in full until later.

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�19. The German reads: But with a crash it flings the living down/ Because it can
grasp the crown of the tree.
20.
There are also many Christ images present in the play.
Achilles is, for
example, crowned with a wreath of laurel thorns by Penthesilea after she has killed
him (Scene 24: p. 260; Pen th.). She also offers to sprinkle water upon his head,
which has overtones of baptism.
Penthesilea herself comes back from her deed
crowned with thorns (Scene 24: p . 235; First Amazon). This connects Kleist's use of
Phaedra and her love with the emphasis that is put upon love in the Christian
religion. It also makes sacrifical beings - saviors - out of both Penthesilea and
' Achilles. These images too, as copies of the maenad frenzy in The Bacchae, suggest
the presence of Dionysus: the breaking down of all rational barriers and the freedom
of the individual to forget his isolated individuality for a time through the gift of
wine.
Thus, merging with others and finding salvation through that merging, are
clearly issues the Kleist wanted to include.
21.

Kleist himself committed suicide on November 21, 1811 .

22 . When the play is read in this way, it becomes much less dark .
Some of the
interactions between the characters, and especially between Penthesilea and Achilles,
become very funny . They reveal a sharp humour in Kleist.

On the Sonnet
Daniel Hoh ('88)

Is it mere waste, a trap made just to bind,
An ill command, or prison, made to hold
One'~ words as fettered to an ancient m ld,
.o
Denying freedom to the po'~t 's mind?
With ornament and pretty meter lined,
So that the tongue into a ball is rolled
And meaning in the poem be annulled:
Is such the cost when poets are confined?
Look closer though, and read the words with care,
For in such bars are worthy thoughts held fast.
And though its stature's small and strict its frame,
It says far more .than words of order bare.:
A frame of wor'd s, which wood or gold outlast.
And if a trap, let beauty be the game.

23. Though the names Pentheus and Penthesilea exist separately in myth , since Kleist
wove Pentheus's story into Penthesilea's he must have connected the two together both because their names begin similarly and because he had some notion, whatever it
might have been, which connected them together in his mind.
.·. 1.

24. Penthesilea, as Kle ist's portrayal of a modern
splendor of Homer's Achilleus.
But she, in her
acknowledge her own splendor. Kleist is suggesting,
human soul is (KaAbv ) just like that of Achilleus,
put into its own context.

individual, has within he r
love for Achilleus, does
I think, that in modernity
and i t should be cul tiv a t ed

the
not
the
and

25. The dust which is predominant in the play might also b.e a sign of the way our
eyes are blinded by the grandeur of the past. The dust clouds t he vision of those
who are looking at Penthesilea's mad pursuit of Achilles, and we, as readers of the
play, see through the eyes of those who are looking . We, then , become confused by
the confusion inherent in that pursuit.
The texts I have used in the paper are as follows :
1.

Homer, The Iliad; Trans. R. Lattimore.
Chicago: The University of Chicago Press,
Phoenix Edition: 1961.

2.

Kleist, Penthesilea; Trans. H. Trevelyan.
The German Library: Vol. 25 , pp. 167-268.
New York: Continuum Publishing Co.: 1982

The passages which I quote are marked beneath by Book and line for The Iliad,
and by Scene and page (and if necessary, speaker) for Penthesilea.
If a passage is pointed out in the text, this indicates that the passage supports the argument, and may be referred to if desired.

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Conversation

#4

Brian ·cole( '91)

Scattered corners of important papers
like clanging ief tove t pennies 'or
smoldering con~ort ions of ·some emotionIn trust they remained safe,
.
under r usty snap~ in jacket pocke t s. ·
Until challenge d by t~e middle- aged librarian, who,
speaking through her doctor's mask
.
-.
claims they should . be numbered under plastic Laminate d to last a lifetime.
I make my r eply gen t ly, asking
Why do you wear stockings to cove r your shaven legs?
And why haven' t you r eally looke d at the colou r s
in a rainbow ?
The y t oo s eem desolat e and uno r ganize d ,
but combine in blinding whi tene s s ,
She swore by her steri l e scalpe l t hat 'one day
I would have t o s t op asking que s tions,
But I know then I would just be l e f t wit h answers.

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�Untitled

Iocasta's Song

Dwayne Rodgers ('90)

Rachel Duel('89)
t

One hundred twenty-fifth street lies prostrate and still.
Having spiralled down a gaping till,
Crudely smothered in flat black paint,
Not "Sam I am , " but "No I ain ' t "
Is spattered on concrete walls,
Loudly slanged from tenement stalls
Where a screaming man, formerly of four Skid Row,
Showers the gasping boys below
With "smelling salts for a wasted land!"
Where etherized phantoms drown in sand.
Night whispers, seducing the day,
Like a line of verse might say.
But useless are poetic wisdoms of the universe
When the boys glimpse a woman's beckoning purse,
Glimmering beneath a cracked lamplight
In the midst of this late summer's night.
They take the purse with stiffly intent fingers
Where the spectre of the whimpering woman lingers,
Where my grandfather jazzed to Coltrane's tune,
Drowsily dying and coming soon.
Where nubile girls with needle tracks
And peach fuzzed boys are laid on their backs
In graves shovelled by their own hand
Where etherized phantoms drown in sand.
Where the screaming man places his wreath,
Streaming from his dangling sheath.
"Smelling salts for a wasted land!"
And more trickles down his hand
Onto the foot of a grieving mother
Whose whimpering spectre grieves another.
Dwayne Rodgers

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'I

Ah Oedipus , my sweet, my center; what was Laius compared to
you?
Naught but a shade, like you in form but in substance
lacking! You entered my life like a king, by nature splendorous,
and saved our city from the dreaded Sphinx. A young and strong
monarch you then became, strong where he was weak, giving where
he'd been immovable. Thinking back, you were much like him in
features; but I don't wonder it escaped me, so different were you
in kind.
You and he may have resembled one another, but our
souls were akin and I had eyes for this only. And what is it to
~w that I've offended the gods with my impure love for you?
You are my reason for living; while I tremble to remember Laius'
passion when he learned that I had borne him a son, I tremble
even more to think that I endeavoured with him to bring about
your destruction. I glory in a fate that allowed you to survive
and to achieve the greatness that was truly your heritage, and
one that allowed me great, all-consuming love! For I love you in
all ways, as my son, as my self, as my lover. Oh that god is
jealous who tries to destroy this passion by exposing it to the
corrosive air. Does it really matter how our love came to be if
it is in itself pure? Oh Oedipus, I love you more than life
itself for you are my existence! I cannot bear to think that you
who have truly known me will shudder with revulsion to have done
so.
By the god of the flames I am shredded up inside.
Your
inquiry has forced my hand and I sacrifice myself, not to Apollo
but to you, my self augmented!

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�On Mechanics, Geometry, and Newton's Concept of
God; or, an Attempt to Read the Principia as a
Philosphical Work
Jana Giles ('88)

Newton begins his Principia with a discussion on the differences between mechanics and geometry and their relation to philosophy. He concludes the Third Book with
the necessity for a Supreme Being to exercise dominion over the world. Between these
two very genera l s t atemen t s t hat descr ibe his i ntent i ons , and perhaps his motivation
for writing the Principia, lie his mathematical principles and propositions which
collectively allow him to apply his universal law of gravitation to the phenomena in
his world. He describes the way he associates mathematics and philosophy in his Preface to the First Edition:
Therefore I offer this work as the mathematical principles of
philosophy, for the whole burden of philosophy seems to consist
in this- from the phenomena of motions to investigate the forces
of nature, and then from these forces to demonstrate the other
phenomena.
(Preface, p. xvii)
To understand his "experimental philosophy" requires an understanding of his'
distinction between mechanics and geometry. He describes mechanics as corresponding
to motion and matter, and geometry to the magnitude of that matter. Mechanics describes the existence of bodies and their motions, while geometry allows us to analyze the qualities of those bodies and to attempt to explain how they move and affect
each other:
The description of right lines and circles, upon which geometry
is founded, belongs to mechanics. Geometry does not teach us to
draw these lines, but requires them to be drawn, for it requires
that the learner should first be taught to describe these
accurately before he enters upon geometry, then it shows how ·by
these operations problems may be solved. To describe right lines
and circles are problems , but not geome t rica l problems . (p. xvii)
Mechanics would seem, then, to correspond to that part of us which is immediately
affected by the physical world. His definition of practical mechanics as that to
which all the manual arts belong indicates that we use practical mechanics in the art
of drawing a line or in seeing the motion of an object, or in being hit by a moving
object. However, practical mechanics has no self awareness. A hand is capable of
drawing a circle, but it has no knowledge as to whether that which it has drawn is
indeed a circle or is instead a right line.
This requires the first purpose of
geometry: to define a described circle as a circle, both in itself and in contrast
to a right line. While mechanics presumes the application of the relations of the
mind of--for example, resemblance, cause and effect, and contiguity in space and time
(to use Hume's terms)--geometry analyzes the action that the mechanical artificer has
performed, and distinguishes between the different relations. We then can apply the
second faculty of geometry: the ability to rearrange those objects and relations and

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to synthesize new combinations. This is merely an interpretation of this statement:
"Therefore geometry is founded in mechanical practice, and is nothing but that part
of universal mechanics which accurately proposes and demonstrates the art of measuring" (p . xvii). Notice that he describes that art as that of measuring and not of
measurement. It is important to recognize that he is speaking about actions and mo tion, rather than a static state.
For , as was explained above, mechanics is
concerned with motion, and geometry with the analysis of that motion. But to analyze
something already requires that one stop the motion in mid-movement and examine its
distinguishable features: matter, position, time, speed, etc. Yet even more confounding is the fact that the act of abstraction is just that: an action. To abstract we must remove the burden of specific examples, locate the essential suppositions, and reunite these in a more general form. To synthesize we must ~ resemblances in different objects, actions, or ideas, we must be able to divide thes e into
parts, and we must substitute similar parts from different things so as to create new
ones. Therefore, geometry is, paradoxically, the act of describing a dynamic action
in static terms.
If practical mechanics is the original description of objects, and geometry is
the demonstration of the act of that description, then rational mechanics is the explicit joining of the two. In Newton's understanding: "Rational mechanics will be
the science of motions resulting from any forces whatsoever, and of the forces
required to produce any motions, accurately proposed and demonstrated" (p. xvii).
This procession from practical mechanics to geometry to rational mechanics seems
analogous to Newton's "burden of philosophy" cited above. This becomes even more
apparent when noting the organization and presentation of the Principia. He begins
by presenting a few universal laws and definitions taken from the general phenomena
he observes.
In formulating these definitions, he is applying the first use of
geometry to mechanical objects. From these first premisses, he moves on to combine
these general definitions and laws with each other and with new mathematical objects
to create the propositions that lead him to the universal law of gravitation. And in
Book III he reintroduces the phenomena to support his conclusion.
This brings us to the General Scholium at the end of Book III of the Principia.
Evidently Newton has found the harmony and coherence of his own argument so conclusive that he is moved to assert:
It is not to be conceived that mere mechanical causes could give
birth to so many regular motions ••• This most beautiful system of
the sun, planets, and comets could only proceed from the counsel
and dominion of an intelligent and powerful Being.
(p. 544)
Indeed, Newton's endeavour has been tight, fluid, and powerful, to say the least, but
these attributes have never been the standard of judgment for the truth of the existence of God. Whence, then, this conviction?
Newton's reasoning in this regard sounds something like St. Anselm's: God is
that which nothing greater than can exist. If we examine Newton's statements closely, we see that his argument for the existence of God is much like a geometrical deduction, for he has based it on the regularity and universality of his final general
laws of gravitation and centripetal force. As has been elucidated above, these laws
came f r om pr opositions formed using geometry, which in turn arose from the original
definitions based on practical mechanics. Here we see the root of the problem:
where is the origin of practical mechanics? The trouble is that we cannot answer
this question using geometry since it presupposes mechanics.
And we cannot
understand the forces involved in mechanics without geometry to define objects and
relate ideas.
Therefore Newton's argument for the existence of God is based on
phenomena that he fundamentally cannot explain. Did Newton see this problem and

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�finding himself in a circular argument simply posit God as a final cause? Did he
abstract to the concept of God from his own experience? Or was his God based on a
different understanding , which either he did not describe , or I have failed to
apprehend?
If the case is the first, then God is merely a figment of Newton's imagination
inspired by a fit of desperation. It adds nothing to the credibility of his project.
If the case is the third, then this essay has been to no purpose. The second seems
more likely, and also gives me an opportunity to go on with this endeavor.
To assist him in his theologico-philosophical search, Newton presents four rules
for reasoning in philosophy. They are as follows:
Rule I: We are to admit no more causes of natural things than such as are
both true and sufficient to explain their appearance.
Rule II:
Therefore to the same
possible, assign the same causes.

natural

effects

we

must,

as

far

as

Rule III: The qualities of bodies, which admit neither intensification nor
remission of degrees, and which are found to belong to all bodies within
the reach of our experiments, are to be esteemed the universal qualities of
all bodies whatsoever.
Rule IV:
In experimental philosophy we are to look upon propositions
inf erred by general induction from phenomena as accurately or very nearly
true, notwithstanding any contrary hypotheses that may be imagined, till
such time as other phenomena occur, by which they may either be made mo ~ e
accurate, or liable to exceptions. (pp. 398- 400)
Allow me to clarify these using Hume's relations of the mind:
Rule I assumes that our mechanics are accurate, that we observe carefully, that
we make proper use of the relations of cause and effect, and that we are able either
to immediately apprehend or extract the ideas of sufficiency and simplicity from
natural things.
Rule II assumes that we are able to observe cause and effect, to see resemblances among specific .effects, and from these to generalize regarding causes , and
then to reapply these to the specific examples.
Rule III assumes that we apply the concept of resemblance to qualities of specific bodies, and that we generalize to all bodies, justified by the consistency of
the observation of those qualities.
Ru l e I V assumes t hat both our . mech anics and our geometry are perfect l y accurate .
He then applies these rules to his concept of God in the General Scholium:
Every soul that has perception is, though in different times and
in different objects of sense and motion, still the same indivisible person.
There are given successive parts in ·duration,
coexistent parts in space, but neither the one nor the other in
the person of a man, or his thinking principle; and much less can
they be found in the thinking substance of God. Every man, so
far as he is a thing that has perception, is one and the same man
during his whole life, in all and each of his organs of sense.
God is the same God, always and everywhere.
(p. 545)
In this statement he is assuming that the soul's perception of phenomena is accurate
and continuous, and he applies the simplicity of Rule I and the resemblance of Rule

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II to posit the thinking substance of God. For although Newton clearly states that
God has no substance, he is abstracting from the existence of the thinking principle
of man to the thinking substance of God, and therefore the rules are applicable. God
is not the thing itself, but the being of it:
He is not eternity and infinity, but eternal and infinite; he is
not duration or space, but he endures and is present. He endures
forever, and is everywhere present; and by existing always and
everywhere , he constitutes duration and space.
(p . 545)
One can see that these assumptions present problems to those who see Newton's
reasoning as circular. But perhaps his understanding of God as an action rather than
an obj ect might bypass these problems. This brings us back to the conflict between
mechanics and geometry. To illustrate this further, I would like to introduce an
example. Lemma I of Book I states: "Quantities and the ratios of quantities, which
in any finite time converge continually to equality, and before the end of that time
approach nearer to each other than any given difference, become ultimately equal" (p .
29). Lemma I is essentially about motion. It is a substitute for the theory of division that presented so many problems to Zeno. The unending convergence to equality
of quantities in a finite time is analogous to the continuous division of a quantity
into smaller discrete quantities in a finite time. In the case of division, if we
divide our quantities into rational halves, theoretically we will never reach a single point since t here will always be left something to divide. The problem with division is that it is based on an abstraction, on a static geometrical analysis in
which each piece of matter is examined and defined individually . When the pieces get
too small, however, it becomes impossible for human perception, or mechanics, to dis tinguish one from another. Newton expresses this observation himself in Rule III:
Moreover, that the divided but contiguous particles of bodies may
be separated from one another, is a matter of observation; and in
the particles that remain undivided, our minds are able to dis tinguish yet lesser parts; as is mathematically demonstrated.
But whether the parts so distinguished, and not yet so divided
may, by the powers of Nature, be actually divided and separated
from one another, we cannot certainly determine .
(p . 399)
Lemma I would seem to obviat e this problem by appealing directly to mechanics and the
phenomena of motion as it is presented to the human mind, being an expression of
" ... the person of a man, or his t hinking princip l e ••. " ( taking " th inking principle to
mean that which perceives and is capable of the geometrical act of abstraction) .
When Newton says that "there are given successive parts in duration, coexistent parts
in space .•• ", he is referring to division, to the abstract idea of dividing time into
discrete particles. But just as the act of division does not explain how one may
arrive at a single point, neither does the dividing of time explain how one is living
in only a single present moment that is . passing by so rapidly that it cannot be
defined nor distinguished from the moment immediately before it (this being one abstract understanding of time) .
The implication of all this is that although man's thinking principle is capable
of abstraction, it cannot explain the thinking principle itself by means of abstraction because abstraction is contained within it as an operation of it.
Hence this reflection on God on p. 546:
We have ideas of his attributes, but what the real substance of

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�anything is we know not.
In bodies, we see only their figures
and colours, we hear only the sounds, we touch only their outward
surfaces, we smell only the smells, and taste the savors; but
their inward substances are not to be known either by our senses,
or by any reflex act of our minds; much less, then, have we any
idea of the substance of God. We know him only by his most wise
and excellent contrivance of things, and final causes ..• by way of
allegory, God is said to see, to speak, to laugh, to love, to
hate •.. for all our notions of God are taken from the ways of mankind by a certain similitude.
It is obvious from the above statement that Newton's concept of God is indeed an
abstraction that derives its credibility from the presupposed Rules. This is an assumption on the part of Newton that, although substantiated by much evidence, ·cannot
hope to be accepted because of the lack of a criterion of truth.
Although we may remain dissatisfied with his proof for the existence of God,
perhaps his motivation for presenting such an idea in the context of his mathematics,
and hfs· awareness of the limitations of his "experimental philosophy" can be understood in his regard for the geometrical act of abstraction, or generalization, as
presented in Rule III as "the foundation of all philosophy". And perhaps this sheds
some light on his conclusive statement in the General Scholium: "And thus much concerning God; to discourse of whom from the appearances of things, does certainly belong to Natural Philosophy" (p. 546).

Cartesian Equations for Rectilinear Figures
Kim Paffenroth

In the sophomore mathematics tutorial, we were shown that all our beloved conic
sections - the circle, ellipse, hyperbola, and parabola - could be expressed by algebraic equations. We then found out that all these equations had the same general
form, a form that came to be known as the general equation of the second degree:

Ax. 2 + Bxy + Cy 2 + Dx + Ey + F = 0
Any conic section could be expressed in the form of this equation, and anything in
the form of this equation was a conic or a degenerate conic (line, pair of lines, or
point), if it was anything at all. The object of this paper is to see if we can find
similar equations, which will likewise share the same general form among themselves
and which will also represent rectilinear figures roughly equivalent to their conic
brethren.
Now, let's not jump right to the general equation. Let's start rather with the
most basic conic section, the circle, with the simplest equation, x 2 +y 2 =r 2 •
This
will, of course, be a circle with center at the origin and a radius of r. Looking
just at the algebraic equation, forgetting the figure for a moment, what properties
suggest themselves as bridges of similarity between conic sections and rectilinear
figures? The first property that suggests itself to me is that there are two values
of x for each value of y and likewise two values of y for each value of x, except
when x or y equals ±r, in which case the other variable must equal zero; these points
are, of course, where the circle crosses the axes. The other property is that there
are cetain limitations to the values I can assign to x and y, namely, that neither
can be less than -r nor greater than +r; this is, of course, because a circle is a
closed figure.
Now, what rectilinear figure will display these properties of a circle, and what
equation can we use that will also display these properties while representing a
rectilinear and not a conic section? After some thought, the two answers occur almost simultaneously: a square with its center at the origin and its vertices on the
axes, represented by an equation which includes absolute-value signs, as below.

(~o)

IXl+IYl=F
F&gt;O

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�Now we have the rectilinear equivalent of a circle centered at the origin, along
with its equation.
And i f we just think of how we can change the first simple
equation of a circle centered at the origin to represent first other circles, then
ultimately all the other conic sections, we will be able to similarly alter our
equation of a square to represent other squares and then other rectilinear figures.
How does one move the center of a circle to different coordinates? By adding or
subtracting a number from the x and / or the y value before squaring it. Similarly, if
we wish to move our square, we will add or subtract a number from our x and / or our y
value before we take the absolute value of it. And how does one change the size of a
circle ? By changing the radius and / or changing the coefficient of x 2 and / or y 2 , as
long as the two coefficients remain equal. Similarly, if we wish to change the size
of our square, we will change the value of F and / or change the coefficients in front
of our absolute- value signs, being sur e to keep the two coefficients equa l to one
another. Thus, we have as the most general equation of a square,

Now, if we wish to fold our square or rhomboid outward to make a pair of angles
opening outward to infinity, we do the same we would have done to make an hyperbola:
we make A and C of different signs. Thus---

(D, E.)
A\X-Df+CIY-El=F

A~D

A=:C

F&gt;O

F&gt;O
C&lt;O
F&gt;O

We have now arrived at an equation that looks very much like an unexpanded form
of the general equation of the second degree:

A(x-D) 2 + C(y-E) 2 = F

(see footnote)

This equation represents a circle if A=C and an ellipse if A does not equal C, but
they are· of the same sign. Similarly, I saw that if we wanted to turn our square
into any sort of rhomboid, we could do the same thing we would have done to turn a
circle into an ellipse: make A and C unequal, but keep them of the same sign. The
center and vertices of our rhomboid will be at the points shown in the diagram above,
since these are general for any square or rhomboid.

And finally, to make only one angle opening to' infinity, we observe that a
parabola, the equivalent curvilinear figure, has only one squared term in its
equation. Thus we remove one pair of absolute-value signs, our rectilinear equivalent of squaring, and our rectilinear equation becomes---

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A 1x-D\+cy=F
·

I

Ax +C. IY .~E I= F

OR

F&gt;O

F&gt;O

c&lt;O

(f IE)

A&gt;O

C&gt;O

A&lt;O

Equivalent degenerate sections can also be made. Setting A or C equal to zero
makes a pair of parallel lines, unless F=O, in which case there is only one line.
Removing both pairs of absolute-value signs gives us of course the familiar equation
of a straight line. And setting F=O will give us either a point, a line, or a pair
of crossed lines.

Footnote -- This form has almost the same properties as the general form, namely:
l)it represents a circle if A=C; 2) it represents an ellipse if A does not equal C,
but they are of the same sign; 3) it represents an hyperbola if A and C differ in
sign; 4) ~t represents a parabola if one of the terms is not squared. The manual
points ' this out on p. 16 (Eq . 12), p. 22 (Eq". 26), · p. 33 (Eq.· 42), ·and p. 19 (5 th Eq .
down), but it is easy enough .to · see, for if we go from the expanded to the unexpanded
form, or the other way, for that matter, A and C do not change their values or their
signs.

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�ers.

The Bus Ride
Jennifer Mischer ('91)

As number 23A turned down Averiue . de 'la Liberte, I stepped into the circular
light of the street lamp so that the driver would be sure to see me. I dreaded these
late rides home from track practice at the stadium . The little town of Monastir ,
Tunisia folded up at seven o'clock and didn't reopen until dawn. The large red bus
slowed to an unsteady stop in front of me. Stepping up into the nearly empty bus, I
missed the security of the sweaty, molten mass of bodies· which had oozed on and off
earlier at lunch.
I chose to sit on the long cushioned seat, universally known to bus riders, in
the front. Across from me sat the bus's only other passenger--a robust woman, completely engulfed by her sari, as these Arab women often were, so that only eyes and
nose were visible. Two corners of the large white sheet were crossed and tucked under her powerful ·armpits, while the other corners had been pulled down over her head
and were clenched between· 'h.e r brown, crooked teeth. Fat and round, she seemed as if
she might roll more easiiy than walk.
Hooked on her left elbow was a faded
milky-green ·plastic basket filled with treasures from shopping at the open-market
souk. A· new lipstick, a bottle of dried garbanzo beans and a roll of mauve lace
topped the basket. Her left hand clutched a newspaper cone of jet black sunflower
seeds which she skillfully shelled ~ith her right hand and ate without dislodging the
corners of her sari.
"Bi 'l 'let..;" said the ticket man, swaying in front of me to keep his balance.
"Carte," I responded, surprised that he had failed to recognize me in my
schoolgirl tab'lier which clearly identified me as a Tunisian student who could ride
with a student pass.
The bus slowed, pulled right and stopped at the curb. Two teenage boys boarded.
Their rowdy talking interrupted the meditative silence of the bus. The broken ceiling lights inside the bus ·flic_ ered on and quickly off as the bus jolted forward.
k
The boys bought tickets to Sousse and took the front double seat on my side. They
obviously recognized me, and I was poignantly reminded of my instant identity as the
girl from America .
"You like Tunisia?" asked the tall lanky one, in confident English.
I sat stony, staring out the window above the woman's head.
"Come and sit on my lap," said the second boy in Arabic spoken so fast that I
could barely decipher the words. "We can have some fun. All right?"
"Oh, she won't talk to us," said the first to the second. "We' re too low for
her. Aren't we, pretty miss?"
"Will you make love to me? Come on. Let's make love."
I studied the window glass, memorizing the dusty patterns and the clear glass
streaks of its surface, aware of the images of the familiar dark streets as they
passed through its frame. The boys were silent now. I lowered my gaze to the floor.
I was surprised that my neck muscles had become stiff.
The bus turned left onto the long straight section of the route before reaching
Skannes. The white wall guarding Monastir's furniture factory came into view. The
carved bold letters in the wall, spelling MONASTIR MEUBLES, could just be seen in the
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I was anxious for the bus to turn into Skannes, nearer my house.
"That's a nice tablier you're wearing," called one boy.
"Show us what's under your tablier, lady."
My school tablier had always been my camouflage.
I pushed my fists into its
navy blue pockets. I was frightened. My eyes were fixed on the window. I dared not
look away from the window.
"Take off your tablier and show us your pretty clothes" taunted the shorter one,
who had bad acne.
My heart raced. I began to perspire. The long sleeves of the tablier stuck to
my damp skin. I managed to swallow. As I turned from the window the piercing eyes
of the woman across from me met mine for a moment.
The boys moved quickly to sit on either side of me. My mind and body were paralyzed . Only my eyes could cry for help .
"Let's make love," cried the tormentor to my right.
The woman moved forward. She took the corners of the fabric of her sari from
her mouth with her right hand and held them in the air about an inch from her chin.
"You boys are disgusting," she hollered in an authoritative voice. "Look at her. She
is not a tourist. She wears a tablier. She goes to 'lycee. We see her on the bus.
You stop your nasty talk."
The boys recoiled to the back of the bus in silence, temporarily shamed by her
disapproval.
Still paralyzed, breathing very softly and shallowly, I looked directly at my
defender. We looked at each other intently, sharing a rare moment of understanding,
possible only when there is common respect.
The bus turned into Skannes. I stood to get off at the next stop. I did not
look back at the woman. I knew she would not be looking at me.
I stepped down out of the bus, breathed deeply, and let myself cry.

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�The Passion

The Death of Romeo

Ange Mlinko ('91)

Erika Wilson ('88 )

Wood softens in this air, my nails
leaving carvings of despair upon
the table. But I am unseen.
The walls swell and the paint peels
the floor gives where you walk
swallowed moans
the outside breeze slakes off water
showered to the ground
lighted squares across backyards
black &amp; drenched , fuming with rose .
The moment sticks
like windows at wrong angles to the sills,
or like people's faces here snagged be t ween
a grin and a gag, watching the street
from the vantage of their door
where, closely pressed, they sense the thing
that crowds their antique foyers
and nails them to the frame.

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But, soft! What whisper doth escape thy lips?
Nay, 'tis but a dream departed
E'en as my heart now faintly trips,
Its amorous leapings thwarted
By Death's cuckolding embrace.
And now I rush to fill his arms,
Mine own grown weak that I must brace
Myself with stone to behold thy charms
One last lingering time.
For I feel the cold steal over me,
And hear the church bell chime
The heartbeats I have left with thee.
0! Mine eyes grow dim, by night caressed,
And I bow my head that I might press
My bitter lips to thy marble breast.
Yet, soft! And warm, that one might guess
A living heart to beat within!
Beneath my incredulous cheek I feel the wings
Of a bird once caged, eager to win
Its freedom from the deadly whisperings
Of marble tombs and silent stone.
0 my love, my life, I say goodbye
For we both shall wake alone.
You to grieve and wonder why
'Tis I who lie upon this stony bed
Not warm and sweet and welcoming,
But cold and still and wrongly dead,
Betrayed by love to prick myself with Death's destroying sting.
Once more, I vow , while strength is mine ,
To take from you a lover's right
And rob your lips of their sweet wine
And feast upo~ the rich delight
That lights your eyes with fierce desire.
But no, I feel the bony hand of Death,
And so with him retire.
I leave to you my last faint breath,
And with my whisper soft upon your lips
I feel you stir and answe r me,
Even as my life so very gently slips
Into the midnight sea.

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�Conversations With the Moon

Ariadne Ashore

Beth Cross ('88)

Claudia Probst ('88)

I

Gravel sand biting into the soles of her small feet,
Ariadne shifted from side to side,
cast wild blossoms onto the receding waves.
And the waves, expelling her offering,
flung the sodden flowers,
which lay then beyond their reach
like frail ruined mollusks on the sand.
She stood, one hip hitched up
like a crane dancer, revolving slowly on her heels,
and, resting a hand on her matted, golden hair
she remembered Theseus, who had once cherished her,
worked out the knots in her tresses
with patient fingers and scented oil .
"My lord and love" she cried
"why did you forsake me here,
on harsh Naxos, when for you I betrayed my father?"
But he had gone, and taken with him her only ambition,
to die beloved, and her words were lost,
in the rhythmic mocking slap, slap of the waves
and the the blood was flowing freely down her thigh
to her ankle and seeping
into the sand, her womb's small life lost while
the wind plucked her dress delicately away, unstained.
How would she die,
she on the island beach,
her chapped lip chatter skipping time with the waves?
No trees stood near to chop and heave and plane,
no boards would appear from under the sand,
nor the bleached ribs of an abandoned boat,
which, restored and launched into the waves,
might yet save her.
Home the last night had been a shallow cave
that she had scratched out towards evening,
and slept in, bloodied hands folded across her chest.
She had no fire, and no other person to address
would have welcomed a strayed gull's mew,
or a feral dog's bark, sounds she would have gathered
and nurtured, during the dark hours,
within her thin sandpiper breast.

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Spine White
and whittled away
tooth
sunk into the &lt;lark's heart
I too
am salted down
to my narrow self
shouldered against
my dreams.
We stare at each other
in a stalemate
without stakes.

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The odd shape
that begs the question
what is to be done with you-become?
Vexed sharpness
not quite concave
oblong, off balance ,
what shall I call you?-who are not ready to be named
or taken from.
Out of my upturned palm,
shallowed from footprints,
half-formed intent-of these
are you the echo
or impetus?

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Like the cutting of wisdom teeth
you are not there
but the hardness hiding
is felt.
Like the things about a day
I dream instead of remember
you bite.
In the inside turning of sleep
where the wings whir stirs
darkness journeys.
There, was it there that I saw you?
Flying like a wild thing
while abscent from on high?
For why do I recognize the smile
which you wear
as you regain the sky?

�Reflections on Leibnizian Substance
Robert DeMajistre ('88)

IV
Pearl or seed
awash in all else
that is salt brine,
knot, pit
knuckled in around yourself,
so sure
of your circled shape,
your obstinance is full-Predecessor to my heart,
white as you are
and so cold
as to glow blue,
you are not hollow.

v
On a long journey
you follow in the clouds
their veil across your face
mimicking the quarters
you race through in a month.
The rails count the seconds
in which I watch you,
You, taunting-"Remember?
The time at full?
and where were you
as I slid to half?
and he?
What did my shadowed side
hold for you?
remember?
Can you ever be as swift as I?
Time carries-and you?"
The rails click
in syncopation
with the swooping telephone lines
outside the window.
"Will you ride with me tonight?
---out, alone--complete and evanescent
in ourselves."

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Unless great care is taken, the system outlined in Leibniz's "Monadology" may
seem unintelligible. He seems to hold the most difficult and contradictory opinions
of both the Cartesians and the Schoolmen. He asserts that the universe is composed
exclusively of living creatures, yet, on the other hand, that it is meaningless to
refer the motion of bodies to the causes proper to the "souls" of .these creatures.
Upon reflection, however, one finds that the reconciliation of such seeming contraries as these would be very valuable, for although they oppose one another, the
force of the arguments offered by either of these two schools of thought is nearly
inescapable.
In dealing with these arguments, Leibniz is attempting to navigate
through the most treacherous areas of philosophic endeavor.
For this reason, his
work, whether successful or not, is of the utmost importance. Because of its importance and the extreme care needed to interpret the "Monadology," I have undertaken
the following detailed examination of some of the issues raised in this work.
Since the "monad," or simple substance, forms the basis of the "Monadology," I
believe it most advisable, in seeking to understand the work, to formulate a general
explication of substance, as well as of the relations between different substances.
As a result, this paper will be divided into four parts: 1) substance in general, 2)
God and substance, 3) the interrelation of simple substances, and 4) extension and
substance.
I. SUBSTANCE IN GENERAL
Questions relating to the being and qualities of a class of entities understood
to "stand under" things have challenged philosophers for centuries. Such a challenge
is no doubt based on the observation that though things are capable of change through
time, most changes seem to be gradual and proceed according to a rule. In the smallest perceptible time, a person undergoes a change, yet he rarely changes so much as
no longer to resemble himself. If nothing "stands under" such changes, the person's
identity is a mere illusion; yet if such a "standing under," i.e., substance, is
posited, it must be admitted that a thing is not the same as itself, at least in some
respect. Further, once substance is allowed, more questions arise, such as the scope
of its permanence and its ability to be affected by other entities. It will be the
purpose of this paper to explore Leibniz's answers to this second order of questions,
for he clearly asserts the being of substance. First, it will be necessary to give a
general description of his concept of substance, his ideas on simple and composite
substances, and his "detail of changes."
In the first few lines of the "Monadology," Leibniz separates the class of substances into the simple and the composite. Although the idea of composite substance
is very important to Leibniz's teaching ( indeed, its meaning will be discussed subsequently ) , our discussion of substance will be directed toward simple substances or
"monads." According to Leibniz, these monads are determined by the following limitations: 1) they have no extension, 2) they can be neither created nor destroyed by
natural means, and 3) they cannot be naturally altered from without. He also asserts

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that monads are' the "elements of all things" ("Monadology" #3) and that the "souls"
of men and animals are examples of simple substances.
There are at least two
questions to be asked at this point. If monads have no extension, and they are the
building blocks of all things, the manner in which extension arises is unclear. This
problem will be dealt with in chapter IV of this essay. The second question seeks
the possibility of sensation and death in Leibniz's system. Leibniz's response to
this question involves the idea of "detail of change." As stated earlier , an explanation of this detail will be given shortly.
Before dealing with those difficulties mentioned immediately above, we should
enquire into the meaning of composite substance. What can it mean for a substance to
be an aggregate of other substances? At this point, it may be helpful to look at a
similar division ·of the class of ·substance offered by another philosopher. Aristotle
also admits two classes of substance .
Substance, in the truest and primary and most definite sense of
the word, is that ·w hich is neither predicable of a subject nor
present in a subject ... But in a secondary sense those things are
called substances within which, as species, the prim.3f'y sub stances are included.
(Categories Ch. 5, #1)

monad to monad, and those simp1e substances that have "feeling," i.e., sense
perception, have the most distinct perceptions. Since monads are indestructible, and
in order to be, they must be perceiving (for wittiout perception they are
indistinguishable and thus identical or non-existent),
monads must always have
perception.
It is clear then, that sleep or death may be explained as a time of
indistinct perception. Since distinctiveness is an individuating characteristic of
the perceptions of a monad, therefore it must be determined by the detail of changes.
Thus, this detail of change in the qualities of a substance may explain seeming
alterations in the simple substance such as sensation and death.
This, then, shall suffice as an overview of the Leibnizian idea of substance in
itself, that is, considered without relation to other substances or entities. This
explanation is, however, clearly incomplete. Without an account of the interrelation
of these monads, any regularity or common perception in the universe must go without
explanation. Further, it would seem impossible to say that a monad has perception of
anything, as the monad has no faculty for being altered by any object.
Thus, it
would be impossible for us, being monads, to classify any parts of our perception as
substances. A relational account is therefore more than necessary. The first step
toward such an account is an explanation of the role of God in Leibniz's system.
II. GOD AND SUBSTANCE

These secondary substances are also, though in a different sense, collections of primary substances. A relation between the two concepts of secondary substances yields
an important observation.
Both thinkers assign the term "substance" to entities
which do not have the properties of their respective simple substances, but have similar fun·c tions. The species man is predicated of "this man," though for most other
relations, man ·may function as the subject.
Similarly for Leibniz, the composite,
e.g . , an animal, can have extension, and/or can be altered or destroyed. Yet it
forms a whole that is generally subordinate to a single monad and for this reason is
reflective of the same dispositions as this monad, though it is not clear as to the
manner of this reflection (see Ch . IV) .
Thus , the relat i on between simple and
composite substances differs from the relation of the individual to the species in
that a composite substance receives its unity through relation to a single simple
substance; whereas the unity of a species is supplied through the definition of that
species.
We have now to consider the manner in which alterations such as sense perception
or death arise in the monad. First, it is not entirely clear how a unity such as a
simple substance may be altered at all. For any gradual change assumes a multiplicity (one part endures while another passes out of being), and any sudden and complete
change destroys the substance , as nothing can "stand under" this complete disjunction.
Leibniz himself uses this argument ("Monadol." #7) to show that it is
impossible for a monad to be moved by another natural entity. He then asserts that
monads
must
have
some
distinguishing
qualities
or
everything
would
be
indistinguishable. The term "quality" must be taken here in a semi-logical manner,
that is, used to signify the contents or the predications of the substance viewed as
a subject at a certain time. This interpretation allows for the impossibility of
efficient causes affecting the monad (for a quality of a substance could not change a
quality in another, because neither has existence outside its respective substance)
("Monadol. " 117), without eliminating the possibility of alter a t ion, as t he s e
alterations are "accidental" rather than "substantial." Since nothing can change a
simple substance, and alteration occurs, the substance must change itself. Leibniz
calls the basis or "desire" for this alteration "appetition" ("Monadol." 1115), and
the qualification of appetition that distinguishes one substance from another, the
"detail of changes" specific to each monad ("Monadol." 1112). He then calls each
state of this change "perception." Such perceptions vary in distinctiveness from

As shown above, some necessary connection is needed in order for simple substances to relate to one another in the way in which we commonly believe them to.
Leibniz supplies this connection through deducing a transcendental cause of perception for all monads. Once such a cause is found and determined to be a unity, a
causal interrelation of monads will have been demonst r ated. This transcendental causality Leibniz attributes to God. Since he deduces God, at least in part, by means
of a causal argument, it will be necessary to explore briefly some of the technical
aspects of Leibniz's methods of reasoning. The first section of this chapter will be
dedicated to such an exploration. We shall then proceed to explicate the two proofs
of God given in the "Monadology," the one a posteriori and the other a priori. After
these arguments have been given, it will then be necessary to fill out Leibniz's idea
of God by a short description of the extent of God's power as required by the proofs .
It is commonly observed by students of the physical sciences, such as Leibniz
himself, that there are two basic classes of truths: those that are mathematically or
logically determinable and those that transcend mathematical or logical determination. That a body which falls with a uniform acceleration describes a parabola is a
truth of the first order; that bodies near the surface of the earth move with such an
acceleration is second order truth.
Leibniz refers to the first order truths as
truths of " reason " and those of the second order as truths of " fact " ( "Monadol. "
#33). From these two classes can be deduced two principles for discovery of truths:
"that of contradiction," and "that of sufficient reason" ("Monadol." #30, 1131).
Since the principle of contradiction had been overtly employed several centuries
before Leibniz, no more need be said of it here. The principle of sufficient reason,
however, is more obscure and merits further study. Though Leibniz is clearly not the
first to use this principle, he is the first to place it on a par with the principle
of contradiction. Leibniz presents a formulation of this principle in a fragment:
" t hat every true proposit i on which is no t known per se , has an a priori proof , or
that a reason can be given for every truth" (Wiener, p. 94). Further in the same
fragment he writes, "These [same] reasons are founded on the principle of contingency, or of the existence of things, i.e., on what is or 'a ppears the best among several
equally possible things." And in another fragment, (Wiener p. 95), the meaning of
"the best" is clarified:
"nothing ever happens without the possibility that an
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�From this, one can infer that contingent truths must be consistent with some
omniscient intelligence. It can also be observed that the principle of sufficient
reason , like that of contradiction, is very limited in its ability to produce true
propositions by itself, for it seems only to point to the existence of some unknown
cause and provides little aid in determining this cause. Let us now, having the necessary tools, proceed to the proofs of God.
The first proof is demonstrated almost completely through the principle of sufficient reason. First, Leibniz points out that the determination of the causes of
anything "might run into a detail without limits" ("Monadol." 1136). Further, each
one of the causes that have been determined must have a cause. Thus, no final determination of cause is possible within the series of contingents. The final reason
(required by the principle of sufficient reason) must then have caused the entire infinite series from without ("Monadol." 1137). Leibniz then concludes , "and thus it is
that the final reason of things must be found in a necessary substance, in which the
detail of changes exists only eminently, as in their source; and this is what we call
God." ("Monadol." 1138). As stated above, the application of the principle of suf ficient reason is the critical step in the proof. One of two interpretations of this
step may be offered:
1) since the principle of sufficient reason presupposes an
omniscient and in order to effect completely its designs - omnipotent intelligence,
the argument is circular; 2) this argument is merely an analysis of the principle of
sufficient reason, setting out to determine such presuppositions. Because there is
no indication as to which interpretation is preferable, for the sake of the argument
we shall adopt the second . We do so on the assumption that Leibniz could neither
allow, nor be ignorant of such an error in such an important section of the work.
Once adopted, this second interpretation itself gives rise to one or two observations: 1) this argument undermines the priority of sufficient reason, for if it
were a principle, it should presuppose nothing; 2) since it is impossible to determine whether God is contained in the principle or the principle is contained in God,
they may in fact be coincident. That is, this may be either a very improper application of the principle or it may be a very effective application , fo r t he pr oof of t he
existence of the cause of the regress suffices to demonstrate the proof. I am in no
position to give preference to either of these interpretations.
Leibniz calls the above argument an a posteriori proof because it proceeds f r om
contingent beings ("Monadol." 1145). He then offers a proof a priori. This proof is
almost wholly contained in paragraph 44 of the "Monadology":

source of all existence, he must be completely unlimited ("Monadol." 1141, 1145). This
follows because there can be nothing that could have cause to limit him.
Leibniz
ascribes to God absolute "Power", "Knowledge", and "Will" ( "Monadol." 1148) • Power
must be interpreted as the ability or necessity to be and corresponds to the "subject" of the created monad, that is, the very "substantiality" of the simple substance. Knowledge, or omniscience, corresponds to the "perceptive faculty" or the
"detail of changes" in created monads. Will is similar to the appetitive faculty.
Thus, all monads are indeed created in the image of God. This points to a third power of God, for not only is he the architect and the builder, but he is also an infinite prototype of the elements of his creation. No direct argument, however, is given for the unity of these powers. There seems to be no proof of one God as opposed
to three. Yet one might argue that Leibniz thought multiple necessary substances to
be absurd past mention, for each would limit the other.
Since we have found that the details of changes of all monads are caused and
supported by a single simple substance, a basis for their relation has been established. We also have found a tool with which to determine the origins of extension.
As the final cause of all contains infinite intelligence, and we may apply the principle of sufficient reason, in the course of our explorations we should find nothing
unintelligible or lacking a reasonable account. We shall, however, often be unable
to account for that which transcends our own intelligence . Indeed, all our reasoning
henceforth shall depend on the principle of sufficient reason, for only through this
principle have we been able to infer the existence of God. All our reasonings will
thus stand or fall by this principle .
III. RELATIONS BETWEEN MONADS

Understanding of this proof is, at least par t ially , fac i li t ated by ano t her fragmen t
(p . 92 Wiener) where Leibni z asserts tha t possible essences "st r ive " fo r exis t ence and
can exist only thr ough being "grounde d" in something actual. God is t hen t he abso lute ac t uali t y on which t he exis tenc e of any essence or e t ernal truth is based . This
pr oof is bas ed on a s ort of fo r mal causal re gre ss while t he former pr oof was bas e d on
an ef fi cient causal regress. This formal regress however need not be infinite. Yet,
unless someth i ng i s pos ite d t o pr ovj-de unity t o t he being of t h e s e pos sib les, the
regre s s s oon becomes unintelligib le.
From t he a bove arguments we have come to understand God as a necessary substance
wh ich pr ovi de s the f ina l reas on f or both efficient cause and the existence of essences and truths. Since God stands outside the chain of efficient cause, and is the

The above account has furnished us with the principle by which a monad is related to entities external to itself. It is now necessary to determine its specific
relations with such entities. We shall begin by examining the "connections" between
simple substances. Since these monads cannot be externally affected by anything except God, any relation between monads must be given in terms of a harmony. That is,
perceptions in each monad must be synchronized with the perceptions of all others to
which it is related. The particular organization of monads will be described in the
first part of this chapter. Leibniz also recognizes that it may appear to some that
monads are in some way limited by other monads. This appearance arises from the fact
that though the appetitive faculty provides desire within the monad, this desire is
rarely, if ever, attained, i.e., it does not achieve the perception to which it tends
("Monadol." 1115). This will be explained under the head of activity and passivity in
t h e l atter part of t his cha pter .
Since the relations of monads depend completely on God, Leibniz finds it necessary to consider the intent of God and then to deduce the order of monads according
to this intent. In one of the fragments cited above (Wiener p.91), Leibniz asserts
that of all possible series, the one that exists contains the most possibles. This
assertion, combined with that in paragraph 54 of the "Monadology," gives us a compre hensive formulation of the necessary state of the universe. This formulation is as
follows: the existent universe is composed of the series of possibilities containing
the maximum possible capacity of positive reality, that is, the series composed of
the greatest number of more perfect things. Obviously, this existence is brought
about by the choice of God, for this is the best possible configuration. This argument is based on two assumptions: 1) that the perfection of one possible tends to
limit other possibles; 2) that a universe with the most reality is the best. The
first assumption seems to be based on a presupposition of a sort of "conservation of
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For, if there is a reality in essences, or possibilities, or
indeed eternal truths, this reality must be founded in something
existing and actual , and consequently in the exis t enc e of the
necessary being , in whom essence involves exis t ence , or in whom
it is sufficient to be possible in order to be actual.

�others. The second assumption seems reasonable, for if a universe of a smaller de gree of perfection were created, this lack of perfection would impose unnecessary
bounds on creation, and therefore on God - and a bounded God is never as good as it
could be. All objections aside, this proposition of maximum perfection will provide
us wi.t h a means to deduce the necessary organization of monads.
It must be pointed out here that Leibniz does not seek to account for the entire
perfection of the universe merely through the relations of monads. Such a quest would
involve a study of the perfections of monads in themselves, while the present task is
a description of the organization of monads that is able to contribute the most perfection to the whole. According to Leibniz, this maximum potential for perfection is
brought about by allowing each monad to express, more or less distinctly, the perfections of all other monads. This leads him to conclude that a monad is a "perpetual living mirror of the universe" ("Monadol." il56). This relation enables the perfection of each monad to be reproduced to a greater or lesser extent in all the
monads that perceive it. Indeed, it seems impossible to conceive of any other possible configuration that admits of a greater possible perfection, (aside from an amplification rather than a simple reflection - though such a model, if not meaningless,
depends on the details of changes in individual monads, and therefore is not relevant
to the argument). This model yields some rather pleasing consequences, particularly
for those engaged in metaphysics or the physical sciences. In perceiving more clearly the perfections in nature and beyond, we increase our own perfection, as well as
the perfection of the entire universe.
Having described the relation of monads in general, we proceed to the said appearance of activity and passivity. Leibniz asserts that a creature is acting on
another as far as it accounts a priori for what takes place in the object of its activity ("Monadol" t/50). This a priori account he attributes to distinctness of perception ("Monadol." t/49). In other words, one creature acts on another insofar as it
can account beforehand for a change in the other. In order for the argument to be
intelligible, this account must be rooted in the desire or appetitive faculty of the
actor.
Otherwise, a meteorologist could be said to act on the weather.
Since a
monad can have no direct effect on another, however, these activities must be indirect or "ideal" ("Monadol. 11 1151), for in all cases, God is the true actor. In the
ideal interaction of monads, God judges between the appetites of the monads and determines which, if any, should predominate (presumably according to the principle of
the best). Insofar as each appetite attains its desire it is considered active. It
must be observed, however, that activity and passivity must be restricted to monads
in certain relations. With few exceptions, one member of such a relation must be a
composite containing or directly related to extension. Otherwise it would be possible for me to change your mind without mediation.
This should be a sufficient
explication of activity and passivity.
Thus, the relations between monads have been explained through God and the principle of the best. It seems impossible that Leibniz could have discovered any other
relation since he himself is a simple substance, some "reflectivity" must be assumed
in order for him to have knowledge of other substances. If he were unable to reflect
any substance, he could not have deduced this substance and would not have included
it in the universe. For one who includes himself in a plenum, this conclusion seems
inescapable.

In Leibniz's "New System of Nature" (113) he reveals that the idea of monads, or
"formal atoms", was originally formulated by him in order to account for insuf ficiencies encountered in mechanical explanations of nature.
It is clear from this
that monads bear an extremely important relation to matter and extension. Yet the

"Monadology" lacks a basic explanation of the principles of this relation. It does,
however, proceed as if the reader already has some understanding of them. No doubt
Leibniz has assumed that those approaching the "Monadology" have read some of his
other essays where the monad has been employed as an explanation of natural phenomena. As a result, reading the "Monadology" without textual perspective may give rise
to questions regarding the origins of extension, since monads are said to be the
"true atoms of nature" yet are not themselves extended. For this reason, the preliminary explication of the relation between monads and matter will draw on sources
other than the "Monadology" more heavily than the previous chapters. We shall begin
with an elucidation of the manner in which extension may be explained in
monadological terms. The character of some particular relations between monads and
matter will be dealt with briefly. Then a description of the general relations will
be given. Finally, the problem of the connection of the soul to the body will b e
discussed in terms of this general relation.
Because the basis for the connection of monads to matter is described by Leibniz
in works mainly concerned with the science of dynamics, it will be necessary to approach the problem in a manner different from that previously employed. This tack
involves assuming matter and deducing monads. In one essay (Wiener 11100), Leibniz
argues, against the Cartesians, that the actions of bodies cannot be described simply
through extension and impenetrability. He asserts there that a metaphysical principle, that is, substance, is necessary in order to explain the behavior of bodies. In
the "New System" (113) Leibniz argues for the need for simple substance. He asserts
that since no atomic unity could be found in a purely material body, i.e., since extended bodies can always be divided, at least in thought, and a continuum is not
composed merely of points, something non-material must provide the unity in bodies.
He calls this non-material unity a "formal atom," and this simple substance he later
calls a monad.
From this it follows that Aristotle's "prime matter," that is,
presubstantial, would consist of pure, undifferentiated extension. We may conclude,
then, that monads are the origins of the unity in, and the characteristics of,
bodies. In this way, Leibniz joins multitude (monads) and magnitude (extension) in
order to synthesize an intelligible interpretation of nature. Monads are, thus, the
true units or "atoms" of nature. We have, then, the basis for the relation of monads
and extension.
Since the arguments given above have been presupposed by Leibniz,
this method of deduction should be permitted.
There is a great danger that must be avoided at this point. If we accept the
fact that every body in the universe has its own unique form or "soul," each possessing an appetitive faculty, experimental physics is clearly at risk. There may be no
necessary consistency between experiments conducted on two similar bodies, or perhaps
on the same monad at different times , governed by two distinct mona ds . This ab sence
of necessary consistency is particularly dangerous in view of the fact that monads
themselves have been deduced, at least partially, from the conclusions of experiments. Leibniz recognizes this danger and takes provisions against it. In "Specimen
Dynamicum" (Wiener 11122, 11123)", he distinguishes "primitive force" from "derivative
force." The former he defines as the substance in its basic sense, or substance considered by itself. Derivative force, however, is a limitation of primitive force
which can be observed only when substances come into relation to one another. This
latter type of force is only concerned with local motion, and is wholly quantifiable.
The quantifications to which these forces are subject are commonly referred to as the
natural laws of motion.
This distinction must be based on the fact that though
monads cannot affect one another directly, God constrains the perceptions of substances in respect to certain qualities (most notably, the quality related to position). From these limitations arise the laws of nature. In this manner, the basis
of natural science is saved, and consequently, that of monadology also.
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IV. RELATION OF SUBSTANCE TO MATTER

�consequences. There arise from these two principles two separate chains of causality. The realm of cause assigned to primitive force is referred to as "final cause"
and that of derivative force as "efficient cause." Since the appetitive faculty of
any created monad is unable to cause motion, and, conversely, monads are unchangeable
by natural means, the perceptions of any given monad must be "synchronized" with the
chain of efficient causes in which it is directly involved. In the "Second Explanation of the System of the Communication of Substances" (Wiener #1 18, #119), Leibniz
states that this synchronization must be explained in one of three ways: 1) mutual
influence, 2) constant intervention of God, or 3) pre-established harmony contrived
by God. The first of these alternatives has already been eliminated. The second
choice seems to require a miracle at every point in time. The relation between final
and efficient causes, thus, is determined by a pre-established harmony. Though such
a harmony seems highly improbable, it could be very valuable to the natural philosopher. Not only are natural events predictable a priori through final causes, such as
the deduction of the principle of least time found in t4e "Discourse on Metaphysics";
this harmony is able to shed light on deeper questions, such as the connection of the
soul to the body.
The question of the soul's relation to the body has puzzled philosophers for
centuries.
This puzzlement is rooted in the lack of definite connection between
these two substances. As a result, many have denied any . connection at all, and in
this denial, have required themselves to discard one of the two systems of cause.
Those such as Hobbes have affirmed only efficient causes and found themselves facing
questions involving the origins of consciousness and unity in animals. Thinkers like
Hume, on the other hand, discard efficient cause and must seek some sort of subjective cause for perception. These thinkers find problems in determining the cause. of
the consistency of perception or the reality of things outside themselves.
Under
Leibniz's system, the connection between the soul and the body does not rest in the
animal, so no direct connection needs to be sought; the difficulties faced by the
other thinkers mentioned here are easily avoided. These problems, however, have been
faced and more or less accounted for . before this particular question was asked. It
is therefore necessary to study this system carefully and determine its truth or falsity as far as possible.
The relation between the monads and matter has been, for our purposes, sufficiently explained. If accepted as Leibniz has explained it, this relationship represents some very important natural and metaphysical advances in philosophy. It allows
for an extensi~e stud~ of efficient causes, without direct regard to final causes,
while preserving the metaphysical integrity of the system. It also allows for the
limited application of final causes in natural science, such as the above-mentioned
deduction of Snell's law. Such applications .of final cause yield valuabfe principles
such as laws of conservation, e.g., the conservaticm of energy or "vis viva, " without
necessarily admitting a "black box" into the system.
The advantages .to metaphysics
fur.nished by Leibn{z 's system have already been partially demonstrated in the above
secti~n on the connection of the soul to the body.
Further, this system may conceivably give rise to a new study where metaphysics is conducted through experiments
relating to efficient cause.

most natural philosophers at the time. He even shows that the curiosity that provides the impetus for the sciences is rooted in a tendency to increase the perfection
of both the student and the universe. It must be observed, however, that this system
is almost entirely based on the principle of sufficient reason and the principle of
the best. For this reason, Leibniz may be assuming much more intelligibilty in the
universe than he ought, thereby rendering his conclusions empty.

Though the word translated in this passage as substance (ousia) has no direct
etymological connection to the thought of "standing under," since it is used by
Aristotle to signify a thing that serves only as a subject to modifications,
such a meaning may be inferred. For since it is not able to function as a predicate, it is impossible for it to be changed in itself, though its function is
to bear attributes that may be altered.

2.

Leibniz asserts that absolutely indistinguishable entities are either one and
the same thing, or utterly non-existent. He justifies that proposition by arguing that such repetition is not consistent with the perfection of God.

3.
CONCLUSION

1.

e.g., a body near the surface of the earth falls in a parabolic path because it
is uniformly accelerated; it is uniformly accelerated because it is pulled toward the center of the earth over a small distance; why is it pulled thus?

If the basic assumptions are al.l owed, the "Monadology" would appear to answer
some of the . most .important questions of philosophy. The elegance of the system can
do nothing but reflect positively on its plausibility. Leibniz not only makes a
clear separtation between physics and metaphysics, eliminating the error resulting in
their confusion, but establishes a ground for their relations. Thus the science of
dynamics may stand upon firm metaphysical grounds, an accomplishment unparalleled by

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�At Calvert Cliffs

The Conversation

Gretchen Berg ('75)

Adam Eggers ('91)

We play below chalk cliffs
embossed with fossils,
forming a ring in the water
with our pants rolled up.
The constant flux erodes us:
even as we shout, salt
cuts and wind culls
and we are stuff for eons.

Untitled
Anne Carpenter ('91)

This is a lovely kind of night,
that plays with your untucked shirt,
wafting.

God said to Adam
"My son
come to me my first, most sorrowful son
for we must talk"
"Yes, Father" Adam replied
And God spoke again
"But my son
do not come to me
If you have any hope for mankind
any dreams of love between peoples
The belief that one man can make a difference
Come speak to me
when you know what I have just said
is true
Come talk with me and we can discuss
my most wondrous, tragic experiment,
Man"
And
adam answered, most somberly
"I am not ready
Yet."

Sparkle of the charcoal road
and fireflies mingle,
like expensive scented powder,
and the pebbles dent the flesh
of your bare toes.
Drink the milk the stars are pouring
while bubbles break repeatedly,
and sweet divine,
sleeping cleopatra,
with your frayed edges,
remind yourself,
of the strands of gold ahead,
the pearly glow of patience
weaves around your head.
This is a lovely kind of night
This is a lonely kind of night
turn off your eyes of light
and bow your henna head.

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�Bridge
Tequila Brooks ('91)

Flanked
by a grandmother
and two aunts

by the cowboy
and his sons
she enters

with t he pr omise
that-we're only
going to look-

neck in the noose
of a skinbiting
bit of lasso rope
And

the salesgirls

aches with her eyes
at the sight
of mounds of brightly
colored clothing which
surround her in the
blurr of the dressing room
and she

the cowboy's daughters
look on with
such sympathetic in their eyes
that
Dizzily,
forlornly
she
stampedes
the pulls tighter
her tongue strains
at the opening
of her throat
pounding hooves
beat the grass-stained dirt
chokes

whimpers
on dry tears
beseeches the ceiling
paneled sky with
pounding sc r eams
in the echoless
bounds of her mind

breaks free desperately
eyes wild with fright
front hooves nicked by
stones and grass and the
sting of scorpions in her
flight
until

she tells a lie
exits with pillow-tongued
- i'll take this one

she hurls
headlong into a
grinding tangle of barbed wire
now
and then
she walks with
cowed eyes
boring holes in the ground directly
behind her .

"

-/

/~

~.:A~~
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�A Discussion of Justice and its Evolution
in Aeschylus' Oresteia Trilogy
Kenneth Paradis ('90)

So much blood is spilled on so many hands of the house. of Atreu~ that o~e shudders to speak of the tragic events of the Oresteia as having kin~hip with J~stice.
Yet each pair of bloodied hands fashions for itself an image of Justice to JUStify
the~r heinous acts of vengeance. Aeschylus exposes the wretchedness of just~ce based
on retribution and offers a resplendent vision of justice based on deliberation
through the acts of the bitter house of Atreus.
The litany of the Oresteia is the evolution of justice· From "bloodshed :or
bloodshed" to "grace for grace" (Eumenides 982, 984), the barbaric pas~ of vindictive
retribution concedes to a future of civilized clemency and temperate Judgement. Old
justice has a narrow, individualistic scope which only concerns itself with. the ben~­
f its of the avenger and the punishment of the of fender, whereas new JUStice is
grounded in a pluralism in which judgements are made for the benefit of the whole.
One crucial aspect of justice's triumphant evolution is its transformat~on from personal vengeance to societal reason. Through the course of the Oresteia, Aeschylus
demonstrates the dangers of the old violence, in this case through the words of the
chorus:
Here is anger for anger. Between them who shall judge lightly?
The spoiler is robbed; he killed, he has paid. The truth stands
ever beside God's throne eternal: he who has wrought shall pay;
that is law. Then who shall tear the curse from their blood?
The seed is stiffened to ruin.
( Agamemnon 1560-66)
If the principle of justice is so limited as to be merely a matter of taking
life for life, the danger is not only that the seed ?f the house of Atreus ~~
"stiffened to ruin, 11 but also · that the seed of mankind is doomed to fail.
For
this justice is "eternal" truth, mankind is doomed to eternal violence.
How then does mankind escape this ruin? There are no inviolable standards ~f
justice by which to assess the actions of mankind because the role of the gods in
justice is in a state of becoming as is the ethic itself. Old justice has the intervention of the gods within its confines, and this does not lend stability to the system. In fact, the gods and mortals are both on trial in the Oresteia, and the gods
need an end to the discord and chaos old justice is wreaking as much as the house of
Atreus does. The gods are only one manifestation of the opposing forces that clash
to forge this new justice, not the controlling element that one might expect. The
violence of old justice has wrought similar conditions of social and political upheaval in the world of the gods and in the world of the men.
..
··
The Oresteia frees mankind from the , whimsical wills of .the childish gods_ A
.•
s~'cond aspect of just. fce 's evolution is th.a t it becomes a system based on the ·authority of the gods, but P,r acticed and maintained by mankind. Ridding mankind of the
gods' interventions and t~eir passions for vengeance is a necessary step in expelling
the mord1ls' penchant for the same ugliness. As we shall see, both Clytaemestra and
Orestes believe their actions are divinely inspired and authorized - Clytaem~str:,
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vention of Apollo who shoulders the will of Zeus. In both cases, atrocities are committed, and the end result is more bloodshed - not resolution. The gods are ineffectual in fostering true justice and are committed to cultivating vendettas and hatred.
The marrow of human action lies within the act of decision. Therein lies mankind's power of self-determination. Furthermore, it is by the merits of an individual's decisions that he is judged, that he seizes a preparedness for the future and an
understanding of the past. Old justice not only strips mankind of his trait of deliberation, but it also seeks to discard basic emotions like compassion and love.
These characters labor under the duress of dilemma because old justice is pitting
pristine emotions against each other.
Love and justice are irreconcilable.
The
Oresteia spotlights this struggle.
"Justice so moves that those only move who suffer" (~ . 250), says the chorus of
old justice. Along with Clytaemestra, Cassandra, Electra, and Orestes, the reader
suffers the travesties of vengeful justice. As the reader grapples with the characters' decisions, they become his own; thus he experiences and understands justice's
evolution.
The clambering and struggle of each individual to fulfill his need for justice's
company leads to the ugly atrocities of the old justice. Since its place is such a
fundamental one, the struggle for justice can feed the ugliness of man's hatred and
anger or nourish the compassionate and beautiful aspects of his nature according to
the orientation of its laws. The plight of the house of Atreus is an extreme case,
an absurd example, in which the thirst for personal retribution overshadows love between family members and honor toward the people the royal house rules. The plight
of the house of Atreus demonstrates the inability of old justice to be a viable ethic
and lends credence to the justice of deliberation, moderation, and clemency.
The scope of this trilogy is expansive, and the themes are so closely interwoven
that all of the aforementioned aspects of the plays must be considered to relate a
somewhat comprehensive account of Aeschylus' commentary on justice. Therefore, let
us examine this evolution of justice - the role of the gods and mortals and its meaning for mankind - in terms of the decisions of the characters who are guided by the
entangled forces of the curse, fate and free will, pride and acquiescence, mortal and
immortal will, and love and hate in the context of the trilogy.
Much I have said before to serve necessity, but I will take no
shame now to unsay it all. How else could I, arming hate against
hateful men disguised in seeming tenderness, fence high the nets
of ruin beyond overleaping? Thus to me the conflict of ancient
bitterness is not a thing new thought upon, but pondered deep in
time . I stand now where I struck him down. The thing is done.
Thus I have wrought, and I will not deny it now.
(~. 1372-80)
These are the first haughty Clytaemestra dispatches to the chorus as she stands
over the dead bodies of Agamemnon and Cassandra in Agamemnon. She flaunts a hatred
simmered over a long period of time, and peppered with treacherous tenderness. She
proudly admits to the murder and the insidious premeditation that was involved to
insure its successful completion. The idea of a curse implies an involuntary affliction which debilitates its victims like a disease. Yet, Clytaemestra claims she
"pondered deep in time" on the "ancient" bitterness" of the curse, which leads one to
wonder if the act was prideful choice bas ed on more than fated action. Does this
passage imply that the curse is a course of action which ~an be voluntarily decided
upon and that Clytaemestra embraced her role in perpetuating the curse? Is this
curse a mad dog on a leash?
At this point, the reader is offered two views on the curse. Cassandra, armed
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�a sickness that she and every member of the house is doomed to catch. From Thyestes'
one voice, a choir of "vengeful spirits" has raised its voice "drugged to double fury
on the wine of men's bloodshed" (~ . 1188-90). Clytaemestra would lead the reader to
believe that the curse is not such a disease. Like the fire signals from Troy, it
grows stronger as the "watchers" awaken at every flaming post to feed the blaze and
"kindle another beacon vaster than commanded" (~ . 301).
She sees the curse as
hatred kindled by the individual.
Clytaemestra arrogantly sees the curse as her
weapon.
Perhaps both women are correct, in that the members of the house of Atreus display a propensity for violence that could be fate through an inherited character.
The members of the house may be like the waiting watchman with his "watchtime
measured by years" lying "elbowed upon the Atredae 's roof dogwise" (~ . 3). They
cannot control the curse's appearance on the horizon, but they are prepared for it
and a r e impelled to build on the hatred and nu r tur e its beacon .
Clytaemestra ' s
changing justif !cations tend to make the reader wary of adopting her view of the
curse and the validity of her choice.
Clytaemestra first appeals to the justice of the divine to justify her actions.
She states that when Agamemnon was down after having been struck twice with her
sword, she "struck him a third blow, in thanks and reverence to Zeus the lord of dead
men underneath the ground" (~. 1385-87). With these words, the authority of Zeus
and his justice are evoked in the defense of her actions to the chorus and the reader. The reader has no reason to believe that Zeus advocates or demands the death of
Agamemnon other than allowing the justice of "anger for anger" to exist among mankind. Aeschylus offers a deluded Clytaemestra in her understanding of divine endorsement. Her pride leads her to believe that she may call upon their gods' laws
for justification and that the authority of the gods themselves will be within those
laws. She is judged by the gods, and to them she offers her reasons. Clytaemestra
does not see a need to explain her actions to the people of Argos, for their judgements are not her concern. Clytaemestra refers to Zeus only to the extent that she
envisions the avenging of Iphigenia's death as an act that would be judged righteous
in Zeus' eyes and perhaps even necessary for the restoration of justice. Agamemnon
deserves his fate in her opinion -

carrion crow she sings the crippled song and is proud." (~. 1472-74).
The chorus also foresees the end that awaits Clytaemestra: "still fate grinds on
yet more stones the blade for more act of terror." The old men of the chorus, having
witnessed one of the prophesies of Cassandra reach fruition, anticipate in a cryptic
fashion the atrocities of the house to come. Both Clytaemestra and the chorus agree
that Clytaemestra committed the murder of h~r own volition. Up to this point, they
differ as to the "justice" of the incident and what the results of the action will
be, but not as to her responsibility.
.
"Can you claim that I have done this?" (~ . 1497) asks Clytaemestra of the chorus. She adds that in her shadow stands the "old stark avenger of Atreus" and that
"his revel of hatred struck down this man" (!&amp;. 1502). Does this offer a refutation
of what she said earlier about committing the crime? Has the pride she displayed
over the murder disappeared? Is Clytaemestra claiming that her crime was fated for
her and that she was merely an extension of the curse and not responsible for what
occurred? Her decision is still valid, and her intention could be to add emphasis to
her contention that the murder of Agamemnon is a just act of retribution, a sacrifice
for the death of Iphigeneia. She may not be denying her free will in the killing of
Agamemnon, but rather making the point that she did so as a willing extension of the
"justice" of the curse. On the other hand, she may be completely denying responsibility and contradicting her earlier statements. In either case, Clytaemestra is
searching for justification.
Clytaemestra might also be readying the reader for the entrance of Aegisthus by
uttering in this selfsame passage the ambiguous line, "speak to me nevermore as the
wife of Agamemnon" (~. 1498-99).
This passage could be construed to mean that
Clytaemestra is noting a loss of identity in becoming an avenger of the old avenger
of hatred. The passage could also mark a change in identity, in becoming the wife of
the newest avenger who seethes with hatred and makes it his trade. At this point,
the reader finds himself wondering about the role of Aegisthus in Clytaemestra's decision.
Perhaps Aegisthus played on Clytaemestra's sorrow over the death of
Iphigeneia and turned it to hatred for her once-beloved Agamemnon. Once Aegisthus
had gained enough of Clytaemestra's trust to allow him to share her bed, sharing his
hatred was a step easily taken.

Were it religion to pour wine above the slain, this man deserved,
more than deserved such sacrament. He filled our cup with evil
things unspeakable and now himself come home he has drunk it to
the dregs.
(~ . 1432-34)

0 splendor and exaltation of this day of doom! Now I can say
more that the high gods look down on mortal crimes and vindicate
the right at last, now that I see this man - sweet sight - before
me here sprawled in the tangling nets of fury, to atone the calculated evil of his father's hand. (~. 1577-82)

- and his sacrifice is indeed necessary:
By my child's Justice driven to fulfillment, by her Wrath and
Fury, to whom I sacrificed this man, the hope that walks my chambers is not traced with fear.
(~ . 1432-34)
Clytaemestra is so firm in her conviction that her actions are just to the gods
that she does not fear the judgement of the chorus. She brandishes her o1d justice
"rights" with words that are as bitter as the wine of her vengeance. There is not
acquiescence to the will of the gods in her words, just prideful seizure of the gods'
ugly justice through vengeance.
Thus, the reader finds himself back in a "discussion" of fate and free will and their relationship to Clytaemestra' s pride.
Whether or not she chooses to do so, Clytaemestra discards the roles of wife, queen,
and mother. Does the fate of the curse cause her to shirk these roles and adopt such
hatred? She revels in her deed. Clytaemestra is seen by the chorus as unabashedly
proud of the act of murder itself.
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This is a bold and brazen Aegisthus that appears at the end of Agamemnon. He
speaks as if the injustice he was subjected to has finally been corrected. He judges
that the gods in creating this atonement have restored the justice that existed before his father's rancid feast.
Aegisthus may have been the one who told
Clytaemestra that retributive justice was the will of Zeus and instilled a pride in
her hatred for Agamemnon. He certainly sees himself in a position to judge the gods'
actions. Aegisthus used Clytaemestra for his own ends; she was an instrument of his
will. This exposes the true nature of the curse in that Clytaemestra was susceptible
to being coached into thinking she had chosen to perform the act.
Aegis thus is not concerned with justice, not even in the barbaric sense of
retribution, but with something even more loathsome. The chorus threatens Aegisthus
by stating that the people will not stand for his actions and Clytaemestra's and that
they will retaliate with "stones of anger" aimed at his head (vengeance does not seem
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�the chorus and then stating, "still with money I shall endeavor to control the citizens. The mutinous man shall feel the yoke drag at his neck" (~. 1638-40). Thus,
we see that Aegis thus' intentions are insidious and beyond simply avenging his
siblings' deaths. He seeks the power of the kingship of Argos and the potential to
make of it a vile tyranny.
At this point in the play, Aegisthus and the chorus are about to draw their
swords to end the heated argument which has arisen over the murder of Agamemnon. The
reader is prepared to witness the ends old justice offers, more bloodshed. Aegisthus
claims that he is not afraid of death as he puts his hands on the sword hilt, and the
chorus states its resolve to test his fears and to "take up the word of fate" (~.
1653). Who is it that speaks to stop more bloodshed and more violence?
No, my dearest, dearest of all men, we have done enough
no more violence
Here is a monstrous harvest in bitter reaping time.
There is pain enough already . Let us not be bloody now,
honored gentlemen of Argos, go to your homes now and
give way to the fate of stress
and season. We could not do otherwise than we did .
If this is the end of suffering, we can be content
broken as we are by the brute heel of destiny.
(~ . 1653- 60)
The vengeance and anger of Clytaemestra have been replaced with an understanding
of the situation and a resignation to claim responsibility for the action taken. She
displays a reason that seeks to end the bloodshed. She refuses, at this point, the
image of justice she acted upon earlier. Lurking in Clytaemestra's words is the understanding "that the brute heel of destiny" will repay her for her actions. Is she
seeking an end to the bloodshed now? Is this sudden wish to end violence motivated
by a fear of old justice claiming her life as well? If this curse was ever on a
leash, it is absurd for Clytaemestra to think she can constrain i t af t e r she le t it
loose . For, as she said earlier, "before this old wound heals, it bleeds again" (~.
1450). Driven by fate, destiny, and the curse, the old system of justice is always
hungry for more blood.
So where is justice in this stage of its evolution? Justice is primordial .
Clytaemestra 's actions do not yield an end to this inward hatred, but its perpet uation. She ends the bloodshed between Aegisthus and the chorus , bu t her husband's
blood still flows beneath their feet . Only momentarily, in one instance, does she
see the futility of righting violence with more violence , of trying to reclaim a life
by seiz i ng anot h er. Cly taeme stra and her j ust ice st ill wear carriage-horse bl inders .
Clytaemestra's thirst for personal vengeance leads to more than her love turning
to hatred, it convolutes her loyalties and concern for the state of which she is
queen . Clytaemestra has not only stained the throne of the king (Zeus' representative), but also allows tyranny to enter the state Argos - which the chorus perceives
as worse than death.
If the purpose of justice is to restore the proper order of good after a wrong
has been committed, her actions were more than fruitless; they were unjust. The imbalance of order that the curse has created becomes more severe as the bodies of
Agamemnon and Cassandra are added to the vengeance end of the scales . This justice
has a limited vision of individual concern which not only obscures the concerns of
society and the wisdom of pluralism in decision making, but also fails most funda mentally in aiding the individual. Old justice momentarily mollifies seething hatred
and feelings of betrayal, and then, as the reader witnesses, repays the avenger in
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expectations toward the inevitable homecoming of Orestes, the words of Cassandra are
remembered:
We two must die, yet die not vengeless by the gods. For there
shall come on to avenge us also, born to slay his mother, and to
wreak death for his father's blood ..• for this is a strong oath
and worn by the high gods.
(~. 1278-85)
The anger of the house in the Libation Bearers now manifests itself by
terrorizing the sleep of its inhabitants and most acutely Clytaemestra's. The chorus
graphically describes the state of the house of Atreus and the despair of ever resolving the curse.
Only new blood-guilt with deeper stains is brought on by
Agamemnon's death; at this point, "all the world's waters running in a single drift"
cannot wash out the stains. Yet, as the chorus stands before the grave with Electra
offering prayers to placate the angry spirit of Agamemnon, the women beseech Electra
to ask for more death as a means of attaining a just solution. In the midst of the
cacophony of voices filled with the prideful and angry timbre of vengeance, one
voice, Electra's, defies the chorus by introducing a crucial distinction . As she
asks the old women of the chorus how to appeal to her dishonored father, she entreats
Agamemnon's spirit to pay back Clytaemestra for the evils she has committed. Yet,
when the chorus tells Electra to ask for a body of men to ensure that her wish is
fulfilled, Electra makes a distinction not seen up to this point: "to judge them, or
to give them punishment?"
(Lib. 120).
.
In this passage, Electra recognizes that there is a difference between reaching
a judgement on a situation and inflicting punishment. She also imagines a judgement
rendered by a body of men, not by an individual.
The chorus tries to persuade
Electra into simply asking for a life to be taken to honor the corpse of Agamemnon,
as if she is foolish and deluded to ask such a question and make such a distinction.
Electra also asks whether her appeal for more violence would be considered just in
the eyes of one panel of judges, the gods. The chorus responds by simply quoting the
law that it is obviously "right to strike back when struck first."
Amazingly,
Electra does not respond as if entranced by a curse that strikes at an inward penchant to do evil . She asks for temperance . Although she asks for the justice of
vengeance, she admits that it is an evil prayer. Electra is not blind to moderation
in discerning good from evil and is aware of her brother's and deceased father's welfares, not just vengeance. The curse is not an involuntary affliction in Electra's
case, for she does not assume the destiny of bloodshed. With this recognition, the
hope of justice's evolution resides.
And for myself, grant that I be more temperate of heart than my
mother; that I act with purer hand such are the prayers for us;
but for our enemies, father, I pray that your avenger come, that
they who killed you shall be killed in turn, as they deserve be tween my prayer for good and my prayer for good I set this prayer
for evil: and I speak against Them.
(Lib. 140-46)
Enter Orestes. After confirming his identity to Electra and being exalted by
her as "hope of the seed of our salvation" (Lib . 269) and the recip i ent of a ll t he
love her sister, father, and mother would have received, Orestes explains his situation. The tone of his statements is not fraught with pride and blind conviction, but
with doubt and deliberation . He outlines to Electra and the chorus the "big strength
of Apollo's oracle" (Lib. 269) with as much intention to convince himself of the power of Apollo's words a5°his audience. Entering into his deliberation is the welfare
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�to appease Apollo's "justice" and the wrath of his father.
Shall I not trust oracles such as this? Or if I do not trust
them, here is- work that must be done.
Here numerous desires
converge to drive me on: the thought that these my citizens, most
high renowned of men, who toppled Troy in show of courage, must
go subject to this brace of women.
(Lib. 297 - 04)

Clytaemestra's.
At this point, the chorus and Orestes seem to have an inkling of the coming trial . The chorus explains that it thinks Orestes is right in his actions because he
was blessed by the gods, and that ceremonies will "wash clean and cast out the
furies" ( Lib. 968).
They see a time when the remaining members of the house of
Atreus will be free from the curse. Unlike his mother, Orestes publicly explains his
actions to the people of Argos. He shows concern for them and respect for their
opinions by offering this explanation. Orestes asks Zeus to "look on my mother's
sacrilegious handiwork and be a witness for me in my day of trial how it was in the
right that I achieved this death" (Lib. 986-88 ) .
The pride Clytaemestra displayed after the murder of Agamemnon is not present in
Orestes' words, but his concern for others' interests is: "I grieve for the thing
done, the death and all our race. I have won; but my victory is soiled, and has no
pride " (Lib. 1016- 17).
The reader then has a second murder which involves an individual who is not
fueled with hatred and bloodlust, a man who is compelled by the god Apollo and his
father's .curse. He is not proud of his action or under the sway of a lover and is
concerned with the welfare of the kingdom as well as his own, unlike Clytaemestra .
The reader may venture to say that this is a more "just" murder, considering the circumstances. Justice has evolved in its intentions but not in its ends. The act is
still wrong, and as even the chorus realiz~s, is not the answer to the end of bloodshed.

Clearly, Orestes is not void of anger, but he is not a vessel of blind rage,
overweaning pride, and a thirst for blood. He recognizes the concerns of others and
examines his situation.
Clytaemestra acted with less of an appeal to reason and
without consideration for others. It must be said on behalf of both that the chorus
is the only voice singing the thredony of vengeful justice joyfully .
Yet , both
Electra and Orestes still speak the vernacular and annunciate the laws of old justice.
Both still seek revenge and never contradict the enthusiasm of the chorus .
Electra, for all her wanting of temperance, still wishes to "smash their heads" (Lib.
395 ) , and Orestes asks to "take her life [Clytamestra's] and die for it" (Lib. 438).
But this reader tends to find it easier to sympathize with the words that follow from
Orestes and the mitigating circumstances and motives behind his actions than with
Clytaemestra . In lines 554 through 585, Orestes relates the plan of treachery that
Apollo spelled out for him and asks for that god to guide his actions.
Orestes proceeds with the plan and when he tells his mother of his own death
through the use of a stranger's tongue, she blames the curse for cutting down her
son. Clytaemestra is not relieved that her possible avenger will not have the capability of killing her now.
She laments the death of Orestes. After the chorus
follows through on Apollo's plan by informing Clissa to tell Aegisthus not to come
with bodyguards, it offers a prayer of supplication to Zeus and asks the "gods of
sympathy" to "wash out the blood in fair spoken verdict - let the old murder in the
house breed no more" (Lib. 802). The chorus sees sympathy in vengeance. The women
add that they want the gods to guide Orestes' hand in the "innocent murder." The
chorus seems to think that this bloodshed will cause an end to bloodshed.
First Orestes kills Aegisthus, and then he confronts Clytaemestra. He still is
doubtful of what should be done . He first asks his f riend Pyla des , "wha t shall I do ,
Pylades? Be shamed to kill my mother?" (Lib . 899) . From this point onward , we see
that Orestes is more a victim of fate and destiny than Cly t aemes tra ever claimed to
be. We see again in the coming responses that Orestes is not a blind agent of fate .
Pylades' response exposes the role of the gods (in this case Apollo) in determining
justice . He reminds Orestes that the oracles compel him to take Clytaemestra's life.
"Count all men hateful to you rather than the gods" (Lib . 902) , remarks Pylades.
Clytaemestra , hearing this , probably realizes t hat compassion has not left Oreste s'
heart and reminds him that she is his mother . Orestes' response is simple . He asks
how he could ever live with the woman who killed his father . She now changes the
position she held after the murder of Agamemnon by saying, "destiny had some part in
that my child" (Lib. 909). Orestes responds with, "why then, destiny has wrought
that this shall be your death."
Clytaemestra then reminds Orestes of the Furies that will haunt him i f he
carries out his deed and of the evils of Agamemnon's acts. When that fails, she ret or ts tha t he is re sponsible and that he just wants to kill he r . Ores t e s r e sponds,
"no, i t will be you who kill yourself. It will not be I" (Lib. 923) . Clytaemestra
again r em:Lnds him of t he Fur ies. Undaunted·, another motivation for having to kill
his mother emerges: "how shall I escape my father's curse if I fail here?" (Lib.
925). Orestes then takes her life . One must wonder if he would have taken his mother's life had not this mandate come from Apollo's and Agamemnon's avenging spirits.
Personal revenge and pride do not figure in his decision as they did in

The voice of old justice in the Libation Bearers whose strong words and frequent
quotation of "blood stroke for the stroke of blood" ironically speaks of the futility
in regaining peace and saving the royal house through this harsh, barbaric law. Perhaps the reader can find more sympathy for Orestes because of his circumstance, but
he killed his mother and that is unjust . The role of the gods and fate in his
actions may clear Orestes of responsibility, but an atrocity still has been committ e d. The fact that Orestes appears to have little or no choice in taking his mother 's life incriminates t he divine will that forced him into t hat situation. The gods
are not capable of being judges because they are merely criminals who use old justice
as an ins trument of t h eir wh i ms .
Driven out of the house of Atreus by Clytaemestra' s bloodhounds, the Furies,
Or estes seeks refuge in the sanctuary of Apollo's temple at Delphi at the beginning
of t he Eumenides. After Apollo acknowledges responsibility for the crime, he sends
Orestes to Athens to appeal to the wisdom of Athena in this matter. The sides are
formed: one is the ghost of Clytaemestra and the Furies, who seek the perpetuation of
vengeance; the other is Orestes and Apollo, who want an end to the bloodshed and the
haunting Furies.
The two sides represent more than vengeance and clemency.
The chorus (the
Furies) points out that Apollo is a "young god" who has "ridden down powers grey with
age" (Eum. 150) and that his acts spite tradition. Thus, the reader can also sense
that the argument of the Furies will be based on the authority of conventional justice and a fear of losing their role in that justice. They think a new distribution
of power which includes mortals in justice will not include the Furies. They thus
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The children were eaten:
there was the first affliction, the
curse of Thyestes.
Next came the royal death, when a man and
lord of Achaean armies went down killed in a bath. Third is for
the savior. He came. Shall I call it that, or death? Where is
the end? Where shall the fury of fate be stilled to sleep, be
done with?
(Lib. 1068-76)

�At the outset of the trial, the Furies show the inconsistency and lack of fore sight that old justice affords. They first connnent on a valid concern, namely, that
the precedent that could be set by freeing Orestes of responsibility would lead to a
chaos of matricide, claiming the lives of many. The Furies' concern for themselves
and for their role as representing the authority of tradition emerges. Because in

the following stanza the Furies feel "parents shal} await the deathstroke at the
hands of their children" (Eum. 498), they warn that they (the Furies) will "let loose
indiscriminate death" in order to punish mankind (Eum. 502). Thus, they do not seem
to be sincerely concerned with the welfare of mankind, but with the honor of their
office. For if it were a legitimate concern of theirs that this act of acquittal
would lead to the chaos of children killing parents, why would they have mankind
atone for this wrong by wreaking indiscriminate death? The Furies also must sense
the fall of the "house of Justice" in the process of deliberation itself, as well
they should. After all, as they argue, the only things that instill respect for the
laws are fear and pain. They doubt that fury would have any place in a justice of
deliberation and reason.
Within the Furies' questioning of Orestes, another fault of old justice is
exposed. When Orestes speaks of the dishonor his mother Clytaemestra committed the
•
chorus retorts, II of this stain death has set her free, but you still live." One ' must
pay for his dishonor with death in the old justice.
Orestes asks Apollo to help him at this point because he does not have a refutation of the Furies' claims. He does not scramble for contradictory justifications
like his mother, but courageously takes responsibility for his actions. Once again
his affinity for deliberation comes to the fore. Orestes asks Apollo to answer th;
Furies and adds, "but was the bloodshed right or not?" Apollo's response is another
appeal to authority in that what was done was connnanded by Zeus.
The gift of
kin~ship is a gift given by the hand of Zeus and through his own kingship.
Apollo
claims to act on behalf of a dishonored Zeus. The murder is justified as a correction of this dishonor.
In an attempt to prove Zeus a poor character witness, the Furies remind the jurors of how Crones was enslaved by him. The Furies claim this is proof that a stance
based on the divine stature of kings as unassailable is one of contradiction for
Ze~s.
Thus, the reader sees two additional sides being drawn. Apollo responds to
this attack by calling the Furies "foul animals" and stating that death, unlike enslavement, is an irreversible end. The Furies do not imagine any effective and fair
implementation of justice as being anything other than dealing out rations of death.
In such a childish fashion, the proceedings move along. The divine elements in
the play concoct bigger and better threats to sway the citizens of Athens. Neither
Apollo nor the Furies argue righteousness from any stance other than that of authority. They do not bait one another into serious discussions based on the motivations
of Clytaemestra and Orestes, the debacle of Argos, or the ends to which this justice
is leading them.
The citizens show integrity and thought in that their decision of half advocating acquittal and half not reflects the evidence that there are good reasons to judge
in favo r of eit he r the ghos t of Clytaemestra or Orestes within the old justice. They
are stalwart in their resolution and unaffected by the threats of the gods. The citizens also do not think the fact that Athena was born without a mother is an important consideration in the case. That · fact has nothing to do with the case before
them. Yet, in another display of frivolous, benighted divine judgement, Athena decides to cast her deciding vote for Orestes because she feels she is living proof
that the role of the father is necessary to the creation of life and the mother is
not. She judges Orestes' life or death on the basis that one kind of murder is less
offensive than another, namely that matricide is not as evil as patricide.
Orestes wins.
Despite the bickering and the childishness of Apollo and the
Furies and the limited wisdom of Athena, the bloodshed finally ends. The brooding
Furies are placated with a new name and station; they ·become the passion to be
treated justly. Thus, Athens is not blighted with a famine and the world has a new
resplendent justice. The bloodshed ends. Mankind has a future.
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the age-old distribution of power" (Eum. 171 - 72).
Armed with their fears, the Furies insist incessantly that they have a right to
their justice. They claim that it is an integral aspect of the divine order. Apollo
responds by speaking °'f the ugliness of this justice of vengeance and stating, "the
gods spit out the manner of that feast that your loves lean to." This, the reader
could imagine, is a preparation for the outcome of the trial. Despite what the reader has witnessed of the gods using this justice in the past two plays, Apollo makes
it clear that now the gods find such justice repugnant.
The Furies have not a
chance, for the gods are vindicating themselves, even if through contradiction.
Apollo begins by facing the Furies' objections that kindred blood is more sacred
than a blood bond within the oath of marriage.
This they see as a way of making
Orestes' act more foul than Clytaemesta's. Apollo sees the relationship of a married
man and woman as guided by "right of nature" (Eum. 218). The two sides represent the
sides of blood bonds being the stronger and convenant oath bonds as the stronger.
Since the bond between a citizen and a state is one of oath, not blood, the justice
which is created to suit a society must be made with this distinction addressed.
Apollo seems to be concerned with keeping his oaths and promises to Orestes for fear
of the wrath Orestes will exercise if wronged. The reader witnesses the role of the
gods changing because mankind has a power which holds even the gods accountable; perhaps it is man's appeal to justice. "But I shall give the supplicant help and rescue,
for if I willingly fail him who turns to me for aid, his wrath before gods and men,
is a fearful thing" (Eum. 232-34).
Yet, both Apollo and the Furies are appealing to a false understanding of their
authority, like inept parents. Apollo wants to claim that he "speaks justly" because
of his seer's wisdom and favored position with Zeus. The Furies see their "right to
office" as license to "conspire to steer men's lives" (Eum. 310-11) with their song
of frenzy and fear.
But the dangers of justice based7olely on the authority of
those involved have already been shown. There is a difference between the two appeals though, in that the Furies see as a right of their office a justice that ignores circumstance. "We hold memory of evil; we are stern nor can men's pleadings
bend us" (Eum. 383), say the Furies. Yet Apollo asks Orestes to be cleared on the
basis of the reasons for his actions. Amazingly, both parties allow the court the
right to judge their case despite their contentions that their station makes their
actions right . Therefore, not only will the court of mortals be judging the actions
of a man, but they will also be asked to assess the offices of the divinities that
are in opposition. No more unconditional smiting, hunting or haunting will be afforded the gods. They are being held accountable - being judged. The gods will no
longer thrive on executive privilege.
The court is assembled. Twelve honored citizens of Athens shall strive to find
truth. All evidences are admissible and deliberation is recognized as essential.
The reader readies himself for an exciting stage of evolution. He pushes onward
through the pages anticipating a triumph, an end to the madness.
Litigants, call you witnesses, have ready your proofs as evidence
under bond to keep this case secure. I will pick the finest of
my citizens, and come back. They shall swear to make no judgement that is not just, and make clear where in this action the
truth lies.
(Eum. 485- 89)

�the pathetic litigants of this case. The gods' authority is imbued in the court, but
they no longer preside as judges. The gods have been escorted out of the ~ourtro~m
to adorn the steps outside with their marble images. This one aspect of Justice s
evolution reaches ifrluition. t
f its evolution is that it moves from individualistic
Another cruc a aspec o
.
h.
d
d
f Argos
vengeance to pluralistic reason. The preservation of the kings ip an or ~r ~
t
reflects a societal concern. The pluralism of the jury and th.e presence o t e cour
will not be obscured with cloudy, subjective thinking. The JUry can offer clemenc~
and com ass ion and can consider circumstances for mankind's benefit. The futu~e o
his law: and their interpretation is finally out of the hands of t~e s~lfish, fickle
ods
Man now has mastery over his fate; he has the power of true JUStice.
g
·Mankind's justice now has the capability to reflect and foste~ the beautiful
as ects of his nature:
compassion and reason.
Now hatred and JUStice are not
ir~econcilable . The chorus , which throughout the trilogy has been the vo~ce 0 ~ ~~:
justice, offers the reader the prayer of man's new justice in the conclusion o
Oresteia:
This is my prayer: Civil War fattening on men's ruin shall
not thunder in our city. Let not the dry dust that drinks
the black blood of citizens through passion for revenge
and bloodshed for bloodshed be given our state to prey upon.
Let them render grace for grace. Let love be their common will;
let them hate with single heart. Much wrong in the world thereby
is healed.
(Eum. 976-87)
All textual references are taken from Richmond Lattimore's
Oresteia printed by the University of Chicago Press in 1953.

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A Letter from an Alumnus

The following letter was written by a graduate of St. John's College and addressed to
current tutor. The New York Times Book Review article that is referred to in the
letter is entitled "What's Left Out of Literature" and was written by Charles Newman.

a

Summer 1987
Dear Tutor,
Here's the article from the NY Times Book Review that I mentioned. He occasion- --- --ally gets carried away with the literary criticism lingo, but most of it seems coherent, and I think he is very accurate with many of his arrows/observations. The musing in the final paragraphs about the "why" of it all relates to, gee, the debate
about liberal education--a debate that has perhaps subsided but the conclusions of
which, nevertheless, people don't really want to face. I think the "cultural weight lessness" this fellow speaks of is very much at the heart of the contemporary educated person's disposition towards the world. It receives expression not only in the
literature, which a lot of people don't like, but also in the music and certainly in
films, each of which are, in contrast to the literature, very popular. I think this
makes a certain amount of sense in that there is little to distract one from the emptiness of a novel or short story, while there is plenty of distraction to be had in
music and at the movies. Recent NY "art films," like Jim Jarmusch's Down by Law and
David Byrne's True Stories (which you've seen), and also the summer's Hollywood
smash, The Untouchables, are weightless in the extreme, to my eye, and for the most
part I do think this was the intention of the filmmaker. I am friends with the assistant editor of Down by Law, and was at the opening of True Stories, where Byrne
came out afterwards and fielded questions for an hour. He made it clear that the
irony of the movie was intended as detail and comic relief, and that the general expression was one of approbation. It was the judgement of a sophisticated New Yorker
that the small town scene in Texas is okay too and that whatever one does and must do
to find happiness has to be considered fine-- what basis for criticism exists, after
all? We all want to be happy. Byrne then was intending to lecture the sophisticated
New Yorkers a bit, in this odd way. I for one wish he had not been so generous. For
better or worse, I don't think that "whatever" is "fine." Too many nights listening
to conversations of Happy People in a taxi has left me with this sour state of mind.
My roommate and I had something of an argument about The Untouchables. She works
in video, is a movie person more or less, and, like most of the NY movie people I
know, thought it was a great film. I saw it with four movie people, and all they
could do was rave about the cinematography, the "sepia tones," the campy (but so
what?) performances of de Niro and Connery, and, above all, the director's "quotations" from Hitchcock, and of the famous baby-carriage-on-the-steps scene from the
classic Potemkin. On and on. All the while ignoring-- that is, accepting with no
qualms-- the comic book treatment of the theme. The theme was law and order, for
it's the story of the treasury agent Elliot Ness, who was imported into Chicago to
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�made to defend with development any of the pertinent cliches.
A high- priced NY playwright did the script (David Mamet), and I have to assume he
had his reasons fo r restricting himself to the comic book approach. I can even think
of a good reason , to wit, to force a pseudo - sophisticated audience to face the cliches and acknowledge their simple truths, for the modern audience has seen everything.
There is no surprising or shocking it, and its sole critical activity has
become the activity of recognizing and filing away the familiar formulas.
In doing
so, it assures itself that whatever is being aired has been seen and presumably
deconstructed before and requires no direct consideration. I am not saying this very
well, but I think its one of the most important things to note about the way
contemporary, educated people approach expressions of all sorts, about the way they
approach the world. I listen to it all the time in the cab, and this is really one
of the main reasons I took to recording taxi conversations; what I would call social
considerations seem to ru l e 90% of a ll discussions, re gar dless o f content .
I t is
most important to have something to say immediately, to say it, to be agreed with,
and to pass on the next thing. That is, the aim is to dispense with whatever has
been said, and if there's to be any dissecting at all, it's accomplished with stupid
cynicism and pseudo-sophistication. Entertainment remains as the only value- - .how
entertaining, for whatever reason, was the film/play/book/painting/person, and more
importantly, how entertaining is the blithe discussion in which it/he/she is recognized and filed away? For Mamet, then, to write a screenplay about law and order
that is no more sophisticated than a Dick Tracy cartoon is to provide the audience
with very little entertainment of the latter sort, for the bare cliche is dispensed
with the barest amount of entertaining after- theater conversation.
The problem with this tack is that people simply ignore the theme altogether.
Especially when the movie's director, Brian de Palma, is obsessed with film history
and technique, and is notorious for making movies that say nothing.
If it was
Mamet's intention to try to make people face the simplicity of the cliche truth, it
didn't work well, at least not with the sophisticated NY audience, not with the NY
movie people. As to whether it matters that the theme gets no better treatment than
it does in a comic book- - to ask such a question is to invite embar assed silence. My
movie roollllllate finally said, in exasperation, that it's not necessary that the movie
say anything important. I replied that, of course, it's not necessary, but for that
matter movies period are not necessary. Necessity has nothing to do with it. What
one would like to see, rather, is the question. What one likes, finds interesting,
worthy of attention, worth the time.
In considering this, I said that a multi-million dollar project that says nothing more than a thirty cent comic book seems
less than what one should be satisfied with, and that during this summer America has
fallen in love with Oliver North and similar people who seem to have less of an unders tand ing of t he complexi t y of t h e l aw and order questions t han one woul d wish in
men working in the White House. When I made these admittedly simple and glib sort of
suggestions about what I would have pref erred The Untouchables to be, my roommate
said "I get very uncomfortable when I feel I'm being lectured," implying that when
something makes her uncomfortable she dispenses with it. Her meaning was that a "serious" treatment of the law and order theme was not only unnecessary but was not at
all to be desired, would be declasse, something NY movie people, and perhaps sophisticated audiences in other cities too, would not put up with. Further it would be an
insult to their intelligence. But these might well be the words of Ollie North, and
Poindexter, and who knows who else. In any case, the attitude that an attempt to
state a developed position, one in which certain values are seriously de.fended or
attacked, is something that should not be made is the serious underlying attitude of
the sophisticated audience. I do think it's pseudo-sophistication, and I think the
article here is talking well about this sort of thing. In the end, as the fellow
suggests, its a sign of an ignorance, "a king of a quiet nervous breakdown," due to

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the fact that "we don't quite know what has happened to us."
To admit to such a
state wou ld b e quite paralyzing for people with a conscience.
Most of the contemporary music is trash. I've always thought Springsteen an exception, of course, and there are others I consider great poets and great r
The two needn't necessarily go hand in hand but they seem to th
d p otesters.
something from a lecture Albert Camus gave in Paris in 1957
ese abysf. This is
born:
'
, a year e ore I was
On occasion art may be a deceptive luxury ... For about a century
we have been living in a society that is not even the society of
~oney (gold can arouse carnal passio~s) but that of the abstract
ym~ols of mon:y. The soc~ety of merchants can be defined as a
society in which things disappear in favor of signs
Wh
ruling class measures its fortunes not by the acre of l~nd ore~h a
ingot of gold, but by the number of figures corresponding idealle
~o al~ertain number of exchange operations, it thereby condemn~
tse . to setting a certain kind of humbug at the center of its
experience •.. There is no reason for being surprised that such
society chose as its religion a moral code of formal principle:
an~ that it inscribes the words "liberty" and "equality" on its
priso~s.as well as on its temples of finance ... Is there anything
surprising in the fact that such a society asked art to be not
instrument of liberation but an inconsequential exercise and a:
m~~e entertainment? Consequently, a fashionable society in which
a
troubles were money troubles and all worries were sentimental
worries was satisfied for decades with its society novelists and
with the most futile art in the world, the one about which Oscar
Wilde, thinking of himself before he knew prison said that th
greatest of all vices was superficiality
'
e
In this way the manufacturers of ar~ of middle - class Europe
b:!~~~ and after 1900, accepted irresponsibility because respon~
si
ty presupposed a painful break with society (those who
really broke with it are named Rimbaud, Nietzsche Strindberg
a~d we know the price they paid). From that peri;d we get th~
~ eory of art for art's sake, which is merely a voicing of that
irresponsibility ... The more art specializes, the more necessar
popularis.ation become.s. In this way millions of people will hav~
the feeling of knowing this or that great artist of our time
because they have learned from the newspapers that he raises
canaries or that he never stays marrie d fo r mo re t han s ix months
The greates.t renown today consists in being admired or hated
without having been read ...
Consequently, there is nothing surprising in the fact that
almost everything worthwhile created in the mercantile Europe of
the nineteenth ~nd twentieth centuries - - in literature, for instanc:-- was raised up against the society of its time. It may
be said that until almost the time of the French Revolution current literature was, in the main, a literature of consent . From
t he moment when middle- class society became stabilized, a literature of revolt developed instead •..
There is no need of determining whether art must flee reality
or defer to it, but rather what precise dose of reality the work
must take on as ballast to keep from floating up among the clouds
0
:
from draggi~g along the ground with weighted boots. Each artist solves this problem according to his lights and abilities .

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�••• The loftiest work will always be, as in the greek tragedies,
Melville, Tolstoy, Moliere, the work that maintains an equilibrium between reality and man's rejection of that reality, each
forcing the other upward in a ceaseless overflowing, characteristic of life itself at its most joyous and heart-rendering extremes. Then, every once in a while, a new world appears, different from the everyday world and yet the same, particular but
universal, full of innocent insecurity •.• That's just it and yet
that is not it; the world is nothing and the world is
everything-- this is the contradictory and tireless cry of every
true artist, the cry that keeps him on his feet ••.
Much is missing here between the last paragraph and the bulk of what I've typed befo r e it, mostly a discussion of social realism and of romanticism. The debate comes
to this ambiguous, uniting conclusion. Whatever its merits, the idea that "weightlessness,'' that a value-neutral literature, a literature of silence, can be reputable, seems something Camus would argue against, and something that itself calls for
protest. This hasn't been a very clear transistion from the stuff above about movies, but ••• Here is a Springsteen lyric. It eventually, at the end, touches on out
theme. It isn't a poem proper, but is a lyric to a song only a piece of the Piece,
but-JUNGLELAND
(somewhat quietly, with piano and flute in background)
The Rangers had a homecoming
In Harlem late last night
And the Magic Rat drove his sleek machine
Over the Jersey state line
Barefoot girl sitting on the hood of a Dodge
Drinking warm beer in the soft summer rain
The Rat pulls into town rolls up his pants
Together they take a stab at romance
And disappear down Flamingo Lane
Well the maximum Lawmen run down Flamingo
Chasing the Rat and barefoot girl
And the kids round here look just like shadows
Always quiet, holding hands
From the churches to the jails
Tonight all is silence in the world
As we take our stand
Dowin Jungleland
(crashing rock and roll)
The midnight gangs assemble
And pick a rendezvous for the night
They'll meet 'neath that giant Exxon sign
That brings this fair city light
There's an opera out on the turnpike
There's a ballet being fought out in the alley
Until the local cops

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Cherry tops
Rip this holy night
The street's alive as secret debts are paid
Contacts made, they vanish unseen
Kids flash guitars just like switchblades
Hustling for the record machine
The hungry and the hunted
Explode in a rock and roll band
Face off against each other in the street
Down in Jungleland
In the parking lot the visionaries
Dressing in the latest rage
Inside the backstreet girls are dancing
To the records that the DJ plays
Lonely-hearted lovers struggle in dark corners
Desperate as the night moves on
Just one look,, and a whisper,
And they're gone
(breakdown in beat, turn to a long,
jazzy saxophone instrumental that
eventually dies down to the long piano,
sounding exhausted, lost )
Beneath the city two hearts beat
Soul engines running through a night so tender
In a bedroom locked in whispers of soft refusal
And then surrender
In the tunnels uptown
The Rat's own dream guns him down
The shots echo down them hallways in the night
No one watches as the ambulance pulls away
Or as the girl shuts out the bedroom light
( rising)
Outside the street's on fire
In a real death waltz
Between what ' s flesh and what's fantasy
And the poets down here
Don't write nothing at all
They just stand back and let it all be
And in the . quick of the night
They reach for their moment
And try to make an honest stand
But they wind up wounded, not even dead
Tonight in Jungleland
It's the silence, noted in the first two stanzas and then returned to in the
last, that made me think of this right now. The crazy str~ggles take place oddly
surrounded by sile~ce, and there's a protest here that some people, perhaps the "kid~
just like shadows
b~t clearly the "poet," should say something. They have an
obligation to say something. I think there's a reference to the very first important

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�song written by Paul Simon, back in 1967, entitled The Sounds of Silence.
Jungle land seems to me far from a naive or romantic view of several different
strains of struggle, by the way. It adopts a cartoon hero form, but then turns on
itself: the black hero/dreamer dies ignominiously, in a sense a suicide, indeed; his
girl has no choice but to just turn out the light; the worshipping youth are conned
into a stupid war, eventually setting their world on fire, uncertain of what is real
and what is not, uncertain of the value of reality and fantasy. This is something
like the uncertainty that Newman writes about in his last few paragraphs perhaps;
Newman begins his piece by complaining about the silence of the poets in the face of
all this, whereas Springsteen ends his with the same complaint. But each suggests
that the poets are wounded, something quite different than the controlled silence of
Minimalist art of the seventies, for instance.
I really had no intention of writing all this. I have very little in the way of
organized things to say. Concerning my alleged novel , I h ave an i mp oss ible time t r ying to judge it, whether it is silent and empty. Or do I -- I guess I don't worry
that it's empty. I do worry that no one will, nevertheless, care enough about such a
character to read it. It is written from a depressed view of life, certainly. Today
such an attitude is not i n vogue.
I had not adopted the attitude; it w.as / is
something I have to contend with. The hero is not a cartoon character. He has to be
both strong and weak. There have to be reasons for people to care about him, as the
narrator does. At the same time, there have to be given the secrets of his failure,
which the narrator has only barely come to understand as he begins to wonder if he,
the narrator, isn't really the better man.
That's something he was always sure
wasn't so, having always been sure of his inferiority. But then is he the better
man, or merely better suited for life? Is viability the only criterion? If so, the
question of what happens to a good man in a bad city never gets aired. For such a
scenario to exist there must be other criteria to allow for the unviable organism to
be nevertheless deemed good. Without other crit eria the environment is always the
measure, cannot be deemed bad. Without other criteria, the bad city is a phantasma,
impossible. It is a woman, the dead hero's old girl and the narrator's new love, who
suggests to the latter that the hero was no hero , in that he was an unviable
organism, suggesting then that no other criterion exists. And, given the new love,
the narrator has good reason to agree, to dispense with the rival (dead but still a
rival). The post- mortem, then, takes place subjected to all sorts of pressures, and
is important in that it is an evaluation of how one evaluates life. Why live, why
not die?
I hope this isn't so vague it is rubbish for you. I've been feeling better the
past two weeks, but am still in the process of recovering. I've had little energy
all summer, and this has been, I guess, an attempt to bash through and think about
the task of painting this character . I've been writing very litt l e , rea l l y a f ra id of
doing it while my mind is slowed by the medical problem. I am feeling better, but
it's disturbing to feel less than what I know I am. The boundary between the physiological and the psychological, of course has long been blurred. "Know thyself"--no
mean thing.
I hope all is well with you.
Alla prossima,
St. John's Alumnus

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ENERGEIA: The activity in which anything is fully itself.

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vou Evtpytia ~ro11

... (Aristotle's Metaphysics, 1072b)

Cover:
"B. GOODE"
Photographed by John Silver '89

Staff:
Jennifer Accardo
Carolyn Barndt
Eugenia Bergeron
Akiba Covitz
George Dolan
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Brian Levy
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Editors:
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Faculty Advisor:
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With special thanks to:
Ray Gifford
Geor ge Tu rner
Ty Yancey
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Energeia is a non-profit, student magazine which is published two times a year and distributed among the students, faculty, alumni and staff of St. John's College, Annapolis
and Santa Fe. The Energeia staff welcomes submissions from all members of the community--essays, poems, stories, original math proofs, lab projects, drawings, and the like.

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CONTENTS

THOUGHTS ON MACHIAVELLI AND TACITUS:
THE PROBLEMS OF ETHICS AND POLITICS
(Honorable Mention, Sophomore Essay)

5

GRAND L UNA L OVE

Ned Dobner

12

"GRACE COMES SOMEWHAT VIOLENT ...
THROUGH THE WRECK AND THE BLOODSHED"
(Prize-Winning Freshman Essay)

Michelle Nicoll

13

CLASS DAY ADDRESS

John Verdi

20

Part One of: TRAGEDY, PHILOSOPHY, COMEDY:
A VISION OF TRANSCENDENCE IN EURIPIDES,
KANT, AND HEGEL
(Honorable Mention, Senior Essay)

Michael McShane

22

ARISTOTLE'S WHEEL

Cherie Craig

33

THE BEGINNING OF TIME

Eugenia Bergeron

35

THE CAVE

Seung Ahn

37

BEHOLD THE LAMB OF GOD:
CHRIST AND MEN IN THE GOSPEL OF JOHN

Kev in Graham

38

UNTITLED POEM

Laurae Melbin

47

COMING TO IN THE FATHERLAND
(Prize-Winning Original Poem)

•

Alexander Lo

Jessica Lamb

48

�•.

Thoughts on Machiavelli and Tacitus:
The Probletns of Ethics and Politics
Alexander Lo ('90)

Preliminary Discussion
The antithesis between Machiavelli and
Tacitus cannot be more apparent than in their
works, both in terms of their views of history and
their methods of inquiry. In many striking passages, they explicitly spell out their intentions and
motives. For Tacitus, the historian's highest task
is essentially a moral task. He does not "relate at
length every motion, but only those such as were
conspicuous for excellence or notorious for infamy." History's highest function is to let "no
worthy action be uncommemorated, and to hold out
the reprobation of posterity as a terror to evil words
and deeds." Thus history, or rather historical
reconstruction by the historian, is essentially a
series of moral lessons: the historian is a moral
critic of the actions of individuals and the events
of particular historical periods.
In the writings of Machiavelli, political history or analysis becomes a part of politics and is
not apart from politics. He too is critical. He
analyzes politics as it is practised, but not how it
ought to be practised. It is customary to view
Machiavelli's writings as 'value-free', as free from
ethical consideration. But this is clearly not the
case, as even a casual reading of Machiavelli will
show. He is full of praise and blame for the
political and the historical actor. Clearly, his
ethical criterion is that of the good and the bad, as
opposed to the good and the evil.
But this is only the 'surface' antithesis between the two authors. At a deeper level, there is
a common denominator which is shared by all

historical and political writers. (I shall use history,
politics and political history interchangably.)
Regardless of their moral and ideological persuasions, they all aspire to objectivity, historical
knowledge, and authentic historical reconstruction. Of course, both Tacitus and Machiavelli, and
all of us, are aware of propagandistic writings.
Very frequently writers conceal such events as would reflect
disgrace upon their century, whilst magnify and amplify those
that lend lustre to it. The majority of authors obey the fortune
of conquerors to that degree that, by way of rendering their
victories more glorious, they exaggerate not only the valiant
deeds of the victor, but also of the vanquished.

(The Discourses, New York: the Modern Library,
1950, p. 271)
The history of Tiberius, Caius, Claudius and Nero, while they
were in power, were falsified through terror, and after their
death were written under the irritation of a recent hatred.
Hence my purpose here is to relate a few facts about
Tiberius ...without either bitterness or partiality, from any mo
tives to which I am far removed.

(The Annals, New York: the Modern Library, 1942,
p. 3)

Nevertheless, all historical writers assume the intelligibility of history. History is both a reality and
an object of knowledge, is simultaneously that
which is experienced and that which can be known.
Thus, we have reduced the apparent antithesis betwen Machiavelli and Tacitus to the
common assumption of historical intelligibility. In

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�order to praise Germanicus and to denounce Tiberius, in order to praise the grandeur of Rome and
to denounce the corruption of the Italian pr inces
and republics, it must be assumed that the policies
of governments and the actions of individuals are
historically intelligible. One assumption, two ethical views on history: it is at this level of history
as a formal study that the problem of ethics and
politics becomes interesting. The two ethical views,
which we have discussed briefly at the beginning,
lead to two different approaches to historical
reconstruction -- in other words, two different
ways of making history intelligible. We shall
discuss t he limitations and the ad vanta ges of the
two approaches and those of the two ethics within
the context of historical intelligibility. By limitation, I mean practical intelligibility, the limited
extent to which the intelligibility of a historical
event is revealed. By advantage, I mean the extent
to which the intelligibility of a historical event can
be revealed.
Machiavelli's Ethics and Method
In discussing the two forms qf ethics, it is
tempting simply to use the formula of ends and
means.
While the one emphasizes intentions,
actions, and the means by which goals are achieved,
the other emphasizes results in tended and consequences resulted. The latter seeks to determine not
whether the means a re desi rabl e but whethe r the
results produced are desirable. Commenting on
Romulus' murder of his brother, Machiavelli expresses the latter ethics elegantly: "It is well that
when the act accuses him, the result should excuse
him" -- the murder being n ecessar y to the fo u nd ing
of Rome (p. 139). Christian ethics is a particular
manifestation of the first type of ethics. Significantly, Machiavelli does not condemn "our religion", namely Christian ethics, which " places th e
supreme happiness in humility, lowliness, and a
contempt for worldly objects." He simply realizes
that
these [Christian] principles have made men feeble, and caused
them to become an easy prey to evil-minded men, who control
them securely, seeing that the great body of men, for the sake
of gaining Paradise, are more di~posed to endure injuries than to avenge
them.
(p. 285)

Without the qualities of the lion and the fox, "our
institutions" do not "teach us to love and honor our
country", or to expand our domain of influence.

On the other hand, "the other religion",
namely the Romans', renders men formidable by
emphasizing "grandeur of soul and strength of
body" and by attaching the highest esteem to
honors and possessions. The latter is the ruthless
pursuit of power, whether for oneself (the prince)
or for one's community (the republic). The two
ethics are incompatible and Machiavelli knows
which one he perfers. Nevertheless, Machiavelli
does not exclude the possibility of political greatness for the Christian state. It is Machiavelli's
realization of such a possibility that prompts Max
Weber to comment thus:

further than, Mach iavelli. Not sur prisingly, even
clergymen in Machiavelli's time had said it, in
internal documents of course:
When the existence of the Church is threatened, she is released
from the commandments of morality. With unity as the end, the
use of every means is sanctified, even cunning, treachery,
violence, simony, prison, death. For all order is for the sake of
the community and the individual msut be sacrificed to the
common good.

(Dietrich Von Nieheim, Bishop of Verden: De
Schismate Libri III, A.D. 1411)
Nieheim's passage is almost an exact duplicate of
Machiavelli's:

Machiavelli, in a beautiful passage of the History of Florence,
has one of his heros praise those citizens who deemed the
greatness of their native city higher than the salvation of their
souls.

For where the very safety of the country depends upon the
resolution to be taken, no considerations of justice or injustice,
humanity or cruelty, nor of glory or of shame, should be allowed
to prevail. But putting all other cosiderations aside, the only
question should be, What course will save the life and liberty of
(_The Discourses, p. 528)
the country.

(Politics as a Vocation, New York: Oxford Univer- ·
sity Press, 1946, p. 126)
It requires exceptional lucidity and humility to

Literate and cultured men have been, and still are,
prevented from fallowing the "new route" because
of their reading of Socrates' decisive arguments
against Callicles in the Gorgias and Thrasymachus
in the Republic, because of their faith in Christianity, and because of their being shielded from the
reading of internal documents.
On the basis of the formal ethics of responsibility, to borrow Weber's phrase, Machiavelli is in
an unique postition to analyze power as it is practised, as it should be practised if goals are to be
realized successfully, but not how it ought to be
practised so as to conform to the ethical norm. This
is apparent throughout The Prince and The Discourses. He is less interested in individual characters than in the decisions that they have to make,
in the actions that they have to carry out, and in
their assessment of existing situations. This is partic ularly so in the case of the Prince. U nli ke
Tacitus, rarely does he give minute portraits of his
characters' thoughts and motives, beyond such
general categories as courage, cowardice, and magnanimity. He analyzes in detail material causes as
opposed to individual motives. For example, he
analyzes the usefulness, or rather the uselessness,
of money and fortresses in warfare, and the Roman
emphasis on infantry as opposed to cavalry. He is
more interested in large social and political movements than in individuals, except to the extent that
a knowledge of individuals is necessary towards an
understanding of these movements. Book One of

formalize the two positions in no uncertain terms,
to choose one while recognizing the legitimacy of
the other. This by itself is an admirable quality.
Max Weber, who formulates the two ethics in
contemporary language,_ says, "one cannot prescribe to anyone whether he should follow an ethics
of absolute ends (Christian ethics) or an ethics of
responsibility (Machiavellian ethics) or when the
one and when the other." (ibid.) .
This ethics is prerequisite to the particular
type of analytical method of history and political
analysis on which Machiavelli's fame rests. In the
introduction to the first book of the Discourses,
Machia vell i sa ys what h e has done here
may prove for the common benefit of all; I have resolved to open
a new route, which has not yet been followed by anyone, and may
prove difficult and troublesome ... I shall have shown the way to
others, who will carry my views with greater ability, eloquence,
and judgement.
(p. 103)

His "new route" is "difficult and troublesome" not
because of the intr insi c intellectual depth of this
type of political analysis. Rather, the new formal
ethics, incompatible with the Christian ethics into
which political writers and cultured men are
trapped, has yet to take hold of our moral and
intellectual constitution. This ethics is nothing
new; it probably has been practised from time
immemorial. Platonic characters Callicles and
Thrasymachus have voiced it. The Indian classic
Kautaliya Arthasastra has gone as far as, if not

The Discourses is concerned with Roman internal
politics, while Book Two deals with the expansion
of the empi re. Thus, he gives detailed analyses of
Roman institutions such as the tribunate (which
represents the people), the senate (which consists of
the nobles) and the consulate.
A brief comparison between Machiavelli's
account of the Roman agrarian law and Plutarch's
account of the conflict between Pompey and Caesar will illustrate the differences, both in method
and style, between Machiavelli and morally motivated historians such as Tacitus and Plutarch.
Plutarch tells us next to nothing about the larger
historical and political context out of which the
conflict between Caesar and Pompey arose. For
him, the conflict was simply the personal rivalry
between the two greatest Roman politicians of the
day:
Caesar had lond ago resolved upon the overthrow of Pompey,
as had Pompey, for that matter, upon him ... (I)f the one of them
wished to make himself the greatest man in Rome, he had only
to overthrow the other; and ifhe again wished to prevent his own
fall, he had nothing for it but to be beforehand with him whom
he feared.

(Plutarch's Lives, "Life of Caesar," Chicago: the University of Chicago, 1952, p. 588)

From Plutarch's account, we learn that the people
were generally behind Caesar while the aristocratic
Pompey was greatly respected by the noblemen.
But this state of affairs had its origin in the passing
of the agrarian law, which, according to Machiavelli, caused the fall of Rome. As decreed by the
law, "no citizen could possess more than a certain
number of acres of land," and that "all lands taken
from their enemies should be divided amongst the
Roman people." The law worked to the disadvan tages of the nobles. First, "those who had more land
than the law allowed (which was the case with the
greater part of the nobles) had to be deprived of it;
and by dividing amongst the people the lands taken
from the enemy, it took from the nobles the chance
of enriching themselves." (Discourses, p. 209) The
law caused constant conflicts between the people
and the nobles, first in the civil war between
Marius, whom the people favored, and Sylla, whom
the nobles favored. Later, Caesar joined the party
of Marius, while Pompey u pheld the pa r ty of Sylla.
It is typical of Machiavelli that he should pay more
attention to the agrarian law, while Plutarch
simply related the personal rivalry between Caesar
and Pompey.

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�Characteristic of his method, Machiavelli
"demonstrate(s) by ancient and modern examples,
rather than attempt(s) to do so by arguments, which
will not do as well." (Discourses, p. 375) He chooses
particular historical situations as examples, and on
those bases he abstracts general rules. What he says
of the common people, so he thinks similarly of the
historical writer: ''Men are apt to deceive themselves in general matters, yet they rarely do so in
particulars ... The knowledge of things particular
had removed from their minds that delusion into
which they had fallen by looking at things in
general." (Discourses, p. 233, 236) For example, it
is well to argue about equality and the just
distribution of power. When it comes to particular
actions, such as the election of common citizens to
the Roman Consulate, the citizens know that not
one of them is suitable. Similarly, it is well to
advance Socrates' argument according to which
suffering evil is better than practising evil. We all
know where this ethical viewpoint will lead to in
real life power-politics. Good does not necessarily
result in good, and evil does not necessarily lead
to evil. How can we know that the initial good deed
will reslult in morally desirable consequences, and
that those consequences will result in further desirable consequences? As Isaiah Berlin says, in matters such as these, humility is called for. Those who
insist that evil must be resisted at all cost, such as
Socrates, and those who say arrogantly that if they
have to choose between the lesser of two evils, they
will choose neither, such as the Austrian writer
Karl Draus, have no calling in politics and should
stay out of it altogether.
Machiavellism is at once an ethics and an
analytical approach. It is the vulgar understanding
of Machiavelli's works that leads us to equate
Machiavellism with the ruthless pursuit of power.
In reality, it implies vigor of thought and a profound knowledge of history. It implies moderation
and humility which realize the inconclusiveness of
political actions and the necessarily limited knowledge of past and present. Machiavelli himself says
that it is "a fact that we never know the whole truth
about the past." Machia vellism is a mirror of
politics as "the art of the possible". It does not
hesitate with the use of violence and other morally
dubious means. However, it fully realizes the allpervading unpredictability which we encounter in
the political realm: "Before deciding upon any
course, therefore men should well consider the
objections and dangers which it presents; and if its
perils exceed its advantages, they should avoid it."

(Discourses, p. 245) Since it does not demand
perfection, does not claim scientific understanding
of historical processes, and does not profess moral
purity (Machiavelli is fully aware of the antiChristian, or the evil, character of his teachings),
it is the opposite of fanaticism and idealism. Machiavelli says in the introduction of The Discourses
that "I shall at least have shown the way to others,
who will carry out my views with greater ability,
eloquence, and judgment," a subject to which we
will return. We shall now turn to Tacitus.

which he ascribes to his characters fit in so nicely
with the consistence of his protraits, that we
wonder whether we are reading dramatic writings
or authentic historical reconstructions.
In Tacitus's eye, Germanicus could do no
wrong. In his own words, Germanicus "was a young
man of unaspiring temper, and of wonderful kindliness, contrasting strongly with the proud and
mysterious Tiberius." "The nearer Germanicus
was to the highest hope, the more laboriously did
he exert himself for Tiberius, and he made the
neighbouring Sequani and all the Belgic states
swear obedience to him." (p. 24) Tiberius, on the
other hand, even if he acted expediently on several
occasions, as any competent politicain would have
done, is nevertheless criticized on those occasions.
On the occasion of Augustus's death, when all the
religious rituals had been performed, when the
nobles urged Tiberius to succeed Augustus, Tiberius delivered a "routine" speech which expediently expressed obviously false modesty as to the
greatness of the task, his own inadequacy in the
presence of so many capable men. Nevertheless,
Tacitus has to comment thus:

Tacitus' Ethics and Method
I have quoted Tacitus as saying, in the
beginning of The Annals, that his purpose is "to
relate a few facts" about the Roman emperors,
without bitterness or partiality, or any motives .
other than for the sake of genuine history (as
distinct from romance). But few historians have
consciously revealed more about themselves, their
moral sentiment, and their preferences and prejudices than Tacitus. He is quite bitter and is far
from being impartial, as he himself tells us later:

by

My labours are circumscribed and inglorious; peace wholly
unbroken or but slightly disturbed, dismal misery in the capital,
an emperor careless about the enlargement of the empire, such
is my theme ... I have to present in succession the merciless
biddings of a tyrant, incessant prosecutions, faithless friend
ship, the ruin of innocence ... and I am everywhere confronted
as wearisome monotony in my subject matter.

Tiberius' language even in matters which he did not care to
conceal, either from habit or nature, was always hesitating and
obscure, and now that he was struggling to hide his feelings
completely, it was all the more involved in uncertainty and
doubt.
(The Annals, p. 11)

The animosity that Tiberius had for Germanicus is understandable enough. On the other
hand, one wonders whether the latter's unfailing
loyalty to Tiberius is as simple as Tacitus thinks.
What Machiavelli says of Scipio, the same can be
said of Germanicus:

(The Annals, p. 162-163)

Nevertheless, it is the historian's moral task, or
history's highest function, "to hold out the reprobation of posterity as a terror to evil words and
deeds." Thus, "there must be good in carefully
noting and recording this period, for it is but few
who have the foresight to distinguish right from
wrong or what is sound from what is hurtful, while
most men learn wisdom from the fortunes of others." (p. 163)
With such a didactic view of history as
Tacitus's, it is not surprising that he should be more
interested in characrter-analysis, in the thoughts
and the motives of his protaganists, and the
struggles between individuals, than in social and
political movements, ins ti tu tional changes, and
other objective or material conditions which make
possible individual rivalries among political players. This quality is apparent in his protraits of
Germanicus and Tiberius. His characterizations
are so consistent, the feelings, motives and thoughts

Scipio had conquered, from the great reputation which his victory after so
long and perilous a war had given him, from the rapidity of his actions and
the popular favor which his youth, his prudence, and other remarkable
virtues had won for him. All these were so great that everybody in Rome,
even the magistrates, feared his influence and authority, which offended
the intelligent men of Rome as an unheard of thing.

(The Discourses, p. 191)

Tacitus's didactic view of history leads him to
paint a Manichaean (good and evil) picture of the
conflict between Tiberius and Germanicus. But
Tiberius's distrust was manifest even in the golden
age of Rome, with the rise of Scipio. And it would
be man if est in any age, however corrupt or glorious.
Writing about the recent corrupt past,

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Tacitus cannot conceal his nostalgia for the glorious days of the Roman empire: "How few were left
who had seen the republic!" (p. 5) In the words of
Marcellus, "I do not forget the times in which I have
been born, or the form of government which our
fathers and grandfathers established. I may regard
with admiration an earlier period." (The History,
p. 598)
One cannot be in disagreement with Tacitus
in one respect: the intelligibility of a historical
event cannot be revealed without taking into consideration the thoughts and the motives of individual actors. The problem for the historian is to find
out in what way it is possible to know the actor's
thoughts and motives. Tacitus assigns speeches to
his protagonists which they could not have deliv ered, motives and thoughts of which Tacitus could
not have known except through conjecture. For
example, according to Tacitus, Tiberius had "a
mind which brooded over its resentments even
though the first impulse of his displeasure had
subsided." (p. 156) He explains Tiberius's final leap
into cruelty and tyranny as the resu lt of the influence of Aelius Sejanus, whom he describes in the
following terms:
Sejanus careless and freespoken ... It was not through his craft,
for it was by this very weapon that he was overthrown; it was
rather from heaven's wrath against Rome, to whose welfare his
elevation and his fall were alike disastrous ... He was as cringing
as he was imperious; before the world he affected humility; in
his heart he lusted after supremacy, for the sake of which he was
sometimes lavish and luxurious, but oftener energetic and
watchful, qualities quite as mischievous when hypercritically
assumed for the attainment of sovereignty.

(p. 144)
It is reassuring that Tacitus the historian knows
about heaven's wrath which naturally explains
Sejanus's rise and fall. We have to conclude that
his delineation of Roman personalities, his analysis
of their thoughts and motives, possess far greater
literary and dramatic merits than historical authenticity.

Historical Method and Historical Intelligibility
The problem of historical intelligibility is a
large question and it goes beyond the scope of this
essay. Therefore, I shall not treat the problem
independently but only within the context of our
discussion, namely Machiavelli's and Tacitus' respective ethics and methods.

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�Specifically, there are two problems which
I would like to discuss. The first is what I shall call
the problem of Tacitean analysis. In line with
Machiavelli's maxim, according to which general
matters often prove to be confusing, we shall begin
with a specific example: Why did Caesar cross the
river Rubicon?
The very act itself, in this case Caesar's
decision to cross the river, possesses a plurality of
meanings which is inexhaustible (Raymond Aron,
History, Truth, Liberty, "Three Forms of Historical Intelligibility" Chicago: the University of Chicago Press, I 98 5). A historical explanation of the
act might conceivably take into consideration what
we have called Tacitean analysis, namely the
thoughts and the motives behind Caesar's decision,
the subjective meanings which Caesar himself
experienced and which led to his decision. But the
subjectivity of another mind of a different historical epoch and of a foreign culture is complex and
probably impossible to discern. How can the
historian discover the subjective meanings experienced by the historical actor as distinct form true
historical meanings of which the actor himself is
probably unaware? One would have to consider the
psychological makeup of the actor, his knowledge
of the situation, his decision and actio·n within the
system of values -- ethical, religious and symbolic
· · of the society on culture of which he is a member.
This leads us back to the formula of ends and
means: within a particular historical and cultural
context, what means are morally acceptable? what
ends are morally desirable?
This implies the application of sociological
concepts to history. As such it is beyond history
proper. But the application of sociology to history,
sociological history, implies that we do not see the
individual actor as an independent actor, but as an
expression of his time: his action and decision can
only be discerned within the larger political, historical and cultural context. The historian must
respect facts, which means that he can only explain
a historical act on the basis of what is known and
what can be known. The Machiavellian historian
would be justified in tracing the conflict between
Caesar and Pompey back to the passing of the
agrarian law, since this is what he knows. On the
other hand, we argue that in principle, Tacitean
analysis is impossible, since it implies a knowledge
of the subjectivity of the historical actor, to whom
we have no access (Perhaps psychoanalysis will
give us the necessary tool, as Erik Erikson had done

in Young Man Luther. I shall say no more on the
subject). On the question of Tacitean analysis, it
seems that the historian can only give a negative
answer: one should not transfer one's motives,
thoughts and moral preferences -- one's system of
values -- to one's historical subject. To give a crude
analogy, a writer should always aspire to tell his
readers more about the subject in question than
about himself.
This leads us to our second problem, which
has to do with value judgement. As Leo Strauss says
in Natural Right and History, history, or any social
science without value judgment, or as a value-free
science, would be not only dull but meaningless.
Here, I want to argue that value-freedom and value
judgment are not the same thing, the confusion of
which lead many "scientific students of society" as
Strauss complains, "to be unwilling or unable to .
make value-judgements." (Thoughts on Machiavelli,
Chicago: University of Chicago Press, I958, p. I I)
As he says of Max Weber, "Weber, like every
other man who ever discussed social matters in a
relevant manner, could not av oid speaking of
avarice, greed, unscrupulousness, vanity, devotion,
sense of proportion, and similar things, i.e., making
value judgments." This is true. But to bring out
more explicitly the issue at stake, let us pose this
question to both Strauss and Weber: in what way
should value judgements be made in the fields of
social science and history? Certainly, they should
not be made in the sense of Tacitean analysis -transference of one's moral feelings to one's historical subject.
Weber, and all of us, know that valuefreedom is an ideal and is impossible to be realized
fully. Essentially, a value-free system does not
prohibit value judgments. Rather, it provides a
certain rigor to value judgment and the analysis of
the historian or of the social scientist. In short,
there is nothing to prevent the value-free historian
from condemning or praising Tiberius or Germanicus -- in Strauss's words, to speak in the language
of praise and blame. To give a contemporary
example, instead of adhering to the battered
notions of totalitarianism and democracy, French
writer Rayond Aron coined the terms monopolistic
and constitutional-pluralistic, tw o terms which are
like a breath of fresh air to the student of modern
history. The. new terms at once minimize the
possibilities of disagreement by eliminating controversial and disputable vocabulary in contempory political language. This does not prevent

Aron from favoring Western democracies over the
Soviet state.
Value-freedom is actually implicit in, and
an extension of, what I have called Machiavellism
as an analytical approach. I say this in the sense
of the rigor which Machiavelli displays in his
analysis of politics. Often, Machiavelli uses valuewords, such as humility, cruelty and cunning, as if
they are value-free words. For example, in Book
3, ch. 19-21, Machiavelli considers whether it is
better to rule the multitude with humanity or with
severity. He arrives at the conclusion that in the
case of republics, it is better to rule with humanity
towards one's own citizens. In the case of monarchies, it is more appropriate to rule with severity.
He is not deterred by the usual moral preference
for humanity over severity, nor does he automatically choose severity as the better of the two. It is
only through a lucid analysis of the two words
within the context of military affaris and government that he settles the matter. Another example
can be found in Book 1, ch. 5, in which he asks the
following question: "As every republic is composed
of nobles and people, the question arose as to whose
hands it was best to confide the protection of
liberty." As always, he gives historical examples,
analyzes circumstances under which it is better to
confide to the people. Examples of this kind
abound throughout his works. Machiavelli is
always lucid, reasonable, never dogmatic. If his
examples are often extreme, it is because he maintains that political essences are revealed most
precisely in such cases.
If it is misleading to think of Machiavelli
as a scientist, as someone who is free from ethical
judgement, it is equally misleading to think of him
as a teacher of ev ii. It is true that his writings
ab oun d with value judgements, and he praises those
who practised what we may call evil. However, and
I think this is all -important, he does not praise the
practice of evil as such, but only within the context
of prudence and ability. So it is true that he teaches
us to kill Brutus, Brutus' sons, and their sons until
the line is exhausted. He also teaches us not to kill
Brutus if we are not read y to kill his sons. Decisions
must be made, actions must be carried out, all of
which require prudence, ability, and courage. It is
prudence, ability and courage which he praises, the
practices of which may turn out to be evil. But
action and thought, and their intentional and
consequential good and evil, are all constituent
elements of reality; they are inherent in the realm

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of politics, namely the realm of power, violence,
and crime. As such, it does not help us to understand Machiavelli by calling him a teacher of evil.
Those issues that are raised by Machiavelli
will inevitably confront every intellectual or
thinking person who participates in politics. The
two ethics which we discussed are not necessarily
incompatible in all situations. But they tend to be
so in extreme cases -- life and death, peace and war.
In such cases, we are compelled to choose: either
success over moral convictions, or moral con victions over success.
I have, in this essay, praised Machiavelli at
the expense of Tacitus. Strauss may well be right,
that we cannot see the true colour of Machiavelli's
teachings because we live in the age of Machiavellism, and we are all heirs to his teachings whether
we choose it or not. Nevertheless, as the unfortunate sons of Machiavelli, we should not be deterred
from appreciating the morality and nobility of
Tacitus, as Machiavelli himself regards Tactitus as
a supreme authority. To have discovered one's
calling in politics and history, to interpret this
calling as a moral endeavor against evil, and to
consider as its highest function the remembrance
of past excellence and nobility, these by themselves
constitute nobility and moral excellence.

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Through the Wreck and the Bloodshed''

Grand Luna Love

Michelle Nicoll ('91)

Ned Dobner ('91)

In Platonic theory, dialectical inquiry arises out of
duality and is conducted by reversal. Being is
attained when the false hypotheses employed in the
search are destroyed to give way to a true beginning, an end to the cycle of reversal and destruction. Aeschylus' Oresteia trilogy shall be viewed in
terms of the dialectical search. The protagonists
utilize a form of hypothesis, the decision to act.
Their drive to act is rooted in a duality inherent not
simply in the things they perceive but within
themselves. These conflicts are between: what an
individual demands of others and how he acts
himself; perception of disorder and the true state
of affairs; the desire for permanence and inescapability of mortality; individual and universal
order; and self and others.
This paper will
illustrate the role of the hypotheses created for the
sake of justice and self-interest and the nature of
the reversals that occur within the trilogy. I will
discuss the murders in order to explore the correlation between judgement and destruction and the
consequences of using violence as a means to
achieve justice. Specifically, the behavior of
Clytaemestra and Orestes will be contrasted to
explicate the synapse between suffering and wisdom, or the generation of hypotheses and the
dialectical process of casting off the falseness.
This comparison will support the redefinition of
freedom, pride, and authentic selfhood in terms of
the dialectic.

Grandmother was today a blooming beauty, breathtakingly
alive with the promise of new dawning and ever so alluring
in her knowing mystery of unaging timelessness.
Her mantle, spread in glimmering wavelets, was tossed in a
tassled, fanciful, flitting expanse -- playful and at ease
with such soothing sensual languor.
Like a pearlescent bouncing ball, she called her tune
with a voice serene and melodious, a lulling note, laden
with still blooming fragrance of gardenia and first
blush of morning.
She whispered your name to the cloudless twilight that spread
your sound to the farther seagulls soaring near the shore.
And they laughed and danced in your grace, blessing the day.
Blessed with a luminous shining love.

The pervasive theme of the Oresteia trilogy
is the rise and fall of man as not only inevitable but
necessary for the eventual establishment of equilibrium. Inviolable constants govern this world:
man needs to show proper respect to the gods by
accepting the will of the gods, or the yoke of
necessity, in a manner that is yielding and not high
vaunting, and man falls when he commits an action
of high daring. At some point the characters decide
to strike down the proud and enact these imperatives. They judge othe rs and, in an attempt to
stabilize their own world, destroy that which they
see as a threat to their order. In lifting a hand to
strike those who dare, the one striking dares; but
the one striking has perhaps first crossed the line
of daring in making a judgement. By satiating their
desire for destruction the judges may seem to
correct the household temporarily, but they only
harm themselves. As they judge, so are they judged;
as they destroy, so are they destroyed.
The theme of the necessity of destruction of
the proud is evident from the beginning of the
trilogy. By marrying Helen, Paris disrupted not
only the order within the Argive kindgom but also
a greater order, the order of moral imperatives, or
the "things inviolable". He fractured the established pattern of the guest-host relationship -- a
theme common among other killings, for example,
Atreus's killing of Thysestes' children. His great
daring insured his destruction.

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�In the end the Black Spirits of Vengeance bring to obscurity him
who hath prospered in unrighteousness and wear down his
fortunes by reverse; and once he hath passed among them that
are brought to naught, there is no more help for him. Glory in
excess is fraught with peril; 'tis the lofty peak that is smitten by
heaven's thunderbolt.

Agamemnon functions as the thunderbolt
of the gods when he seeks to destroy not only the
man Paris but also the entire Trojan city for their
"pride of wealth". By judging the Trojans and
seeking to destroy them, he is placed in the position
of pride and strength that is not equated with moral
virtue but egotism and earthly power. He becomes
like that which he tries to destroy. Blackmailed by
the gods, he undertakes the "daring" of immolating
Iphigenia so that his forces will remain strong.
Ironically, it is this sacrifice, endured for the sake
of his kingdom and demanded by the gods, that
produces disorder within his own household and is
thus one of the stimuli for his own death (or even
sacrifice) at Clytaemestra's hands. However, it is
not the intrinsic value of yielding to the god's
dictates that is the daring element of the action; it
is the manner in which he performed the action.
But when he had donned the yoke of necessity, with veering of
spirit, impious, unholy, unsanctified ... For mankind is embold
ened by wretched delusion, counsellor of ill, primal source of
woe.

In this sense, it can be said that he wove his own
nets of destruction.
Clytaemestra perceives Agamemnon to be
the creator of turbulence within the household and
her life. She implies that her own internal balance
was injured by his actions, saying that his long
absence was not on ly a sou r ce of worr y t hat
prevented her from sleeping, but also "evil and a
thing of terror." He has violated her definition of
the conjugal relationship and her desire for permanency by placing warfare above fami ly lif e. By
sacrificing Iphigenia, Agamemnon sacrificed that
which was a part of Clytaemestra and an extension
of her identity. By br inging home the concubine
Cassandra, he has introduced a further element of
discord, a threat to the ex cl usi veness of the
marriage relationship. Thus, he has reduced parts
of the identities ':lytaemestra attempts to portray
in front of oth ers , h er rol es as mot her an d wife. As
a consequence, he damaged her sense of self hood by
curbing her strength and capacity fo r control, an
injury that makes her desire to lash out in passion
to reestablish identity and order.

Clytaemestra's passionate actions are provoked both by h er hypocritical condemnation of
Agamemn on for faults that are within herself and
by he r blame of him fo r actions that she herself has
imitated. Clytaemestra plays out the role of
faithful wife when greeting her husband upon his
return from the war, yet she criticizes him for not
appearing as he is. Ref erring to his "hateful
[disguise] in seeming tenderness," she more accurately comments on herself than on him. She
perhaps carries out the acting of her role to excess,
yet feels a need to destroy the excess of
Agamemnon's proud warrior pose. Angered that he
has brought Cassandra h ome, she has alre ady
brought Aegisthus into the household. Although
criticizing Agamemnon for his treatment of their
daughter, she later sends their son into exile.
Clytaemestra th us does not live by the patterns she
demands of others, but places herself outside the
sphere of moral imperatives by which she judges
others.
Seeing herself above the order she would
have others uphold, Clytaemestra raises her estimation of herself to that of a god. Indeed, she claims
to serve as an agent of a god by taking it upon
herself to "set aright what fate ordained," that "he
who long time ago was great, throbbing with
gigantic strength, shall be as if never were, unspoken." She plays many roles both before and after
the slayings: dutiful mother, faithful wife, hostess,
mu rd eress, judge, prosecutor. In this way, she
creates and continually recreates selves and identities, thereby approaching the function of a god.
Through the actions undertaken during the fulfill ment of these r oles, she repeatedly reasserts the
importa nce of herself as a standard by which to
measure others as though she were an absolute
value. She is able neither to discern the difference
between herself and an absolute standard of justice
nor to temper passionate reac tions with objective
delibe ration.
Clytaemestra does not see; she imagines. She
works from a fixed premise, from a need to view
things acco r ding to a preconceived notion. The
Agamemnon she sees in the chariot must be made
to concord with her image of him, for it is necessary
that she justify her actions based on her judgement,
such as her relationship with Aegisthus. In laying
down the carpet, Clytaemestra furnishes the means
by which Agamemnon can visibly uphold his image
as the proud warrior who must be shaken down. She
sees that as he tramples down the carpets, so has he

trampled down wid er moral imper atives because·he
is so proud. (Later, she refers to the "rage and
strength" of Cassand r a as r eason fo r her elimination.) She creates a situa tjon in order to evoke a
specific response from him, allowing him no
opportunity to act differently than her plans for
him. He even protests walking on the carpets, yet
she persuades him because it is her will that he do
so. He has become a vehicle for the enactment of
her imagination, an object to be subordinated. This
is a way for her to reduce things around her to
terms to which she can relate from a position of
superiority and control, thus achieving part of her
stru ggl e to actuali ze h er vision.
To an extent, Clytaemestra depends on
Agamemnon's pride to secure the reality of her
imagination. She needs to say "No" to him, to
refute what she would like to view as false. This
scream of renunciation directed toward Agamemnon was farmed prior to her actual encounter
with him. Judgement has preceded perception, a
break from a logical order in which pe rception
precedes judgement. She thus grants undue importance to her subjective view of her husband,
placing it above considerations of fairness or
rationality. Agamemnon is not granted an identity
outside of Clytaemestra's private world, for she
cannot separate her p rejudices about him from his
reality. She views Agamemnon not as he is but as
she wants him to be, encountering him as an image
of her own cr eation a nd no t as a person. Her
judgement does not fluctuate but has become a
thing that must be upheld . In this way, she does not
adapt her vision to the situation but allows her
vision to shape the situation. Her perception and
judgement have acqui red an undue importance;
they are not simply means to ends but hav e become
ends in themselves.
Distortion of perception regarding the
world around h er entai ls the creation of a world of
her own. By inventing a situation for Agamemnon
to confirm her perception of him, she shares in the
formulation of his action.
In this way,
Clytaemestra has created her own sphere of existence, her own realm within which she provides the
standards for justice and enacts her own judgements. She thus chooses isolation, the distancing of
herself from the reality of others to immersion
within herself and separation fr om others. T his is
done not out of strength but out of fear and
weakness. Her frantic need to maintain selfhood
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izing others arises out of a weak sense of identity.
The demand for order from others is founded upon
imbalances or weaknesses within herself. Her own
vulnerability allowed Agamemnon undue influence in infringing upon her sense of order, and she
must therefore lash back to reestablish her self hood
and superiority above him through violent action.
This is not actually the independence or superiority
of postition that she strives for but rather dependence on others as standards to be superior to, as
objects to renounce and to subject. She derives selfrighteousness and pride not from a well-founded
belief in herself or in an absolute but from her need
to view others as wrong.
Although her pride is a building up of self,
it is also a self-destruction. "Standing above the
corpse, obscene as some carrion crow she sings the
crippled song and is proud." Even her speech is "a
clamor of pride." In committing an action of
daring and thus becoming a "towering mountain,"
she provides for her own destruction, because the
judge shall be judged and the destroyer shall be
destroyed. In fact, as Orestes says when killing her,
"It will be you who kills yourself. It will not be I."
Furthermore, because she shares in the creation
and enactment of the image for which she punishes
Agamemnon, she appears to be resisting the actualization of her vision when she destroys him.
Therefore, her conflict is not only between her
vision and reality but also between her desire for
the endurance of her vision and her tendencies
toward self-destruction, her vulnerability and
scramble to project the illusion of strength.
Despite these conflicts, Clytaemestra has
dared to impose her plan for order by harming
others. She pushes aside awareness of her even tu al
fall by means of faulty reasoning and a deluded
sense of self-accomplishment.
Confusing the
immediate with the permanent, she triumphantly
decl ares, " I swe pt f rom these halls th e mu r d er, the
sin, and the fury ." She who has a "lust for conflict"
and a tyranny of fury within the brain actually
presumes to impose her sense of order while in a
state of disorder herself. She has created false
hypotheses: that killing Agamemnon and Cassandra will balance the order within the house and that
violence is an appropriate means to protest violence. As Cassandra prophesizes, "Rescue is far
a way," for Clytaemestra's act of evil will only
breed similar acts of evil. By shedding the blood
of others, Clytaemestra does not set the course of
the house straight but bends it to further destruc-

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�tion. She has set a pattern of judgement a nd
destruction in which bloodshed is piled upon
bloodshed. Oddly, she achieves a t ype of permanence, although it is not the perma nence that she
envisions.
Such inaccuracy of vision and lack of
realism about her actions is further evident when
she sends an envoy to pour libations on the grave
of Agamemnon. Ostensibly, this movement is
toward repentance or sincere grief. In truth, she
designs this token gesture out of self-interest, "to
ward off ill...", indicating some concern regarding
appeasement of the gods and a measure of respect,
eve n f ear, fo r th eir power. However, be ca use she
does not sorrow sincerely and openly, she merely
effects a ''graceless grace" and not "the blessing of
tears worked soberly from a true heart." Hindered
by the burden of her pride and her immersion in
her own private system, she cannot see the ramif ications of what she has done to perceive her true
distance from the realm of the divine. Her offering
is "too small for the act done" because she cannot
show remorse. Instead of proving her deference to
the gods, she commits an action of daring. The
chorus comments, "Pour out all your possessions to
atone one act of blood, you waste your work, it is
all useless, reason says." This illustrates how
irrevocably distant from reality and rational objectivity she has become. Caught in a web of her own
manufacture, she has become so enmeshed within
her system that she cannot see beyond it, as her
portrayal as a shadow in Eumenides shows. Despite
the suffering she has undergone and her construction of hypotheses, she has not achieved wisdom
because she cannot see beyond herself to cast off
the falseness and reach a true beginning.
Electra and Orestes react to the duality and
excessive elements exhibited by their mother in a
manner similar to that in which Clytaemestra
deplored th e disru ptive eff ect of Agamemn on's
actions on the household. Both children and mother
sense the need for destruction in an attempt to
balance the order of the house, concerning themselves largely with the violation of their personal
positions. Electra, for example, asks,
How shall we be lords in our house? We have been sold, and go
as wanderers ... Now I am what a slave is ... while [Clytaemestra
and Aegisthus] go proud and live in the high style and luxury of
what [Agamemnon] worked for.

Electra wants Orestes to "win [their]father's house
again," seeming to have less conce r n for the

i nfractio n of morality than for the immediate
effects of their mother's actions. Like her mother,
Elec tra is willing to sha re in a mu r der but does not
wish to di e fo r it; she also feels immune to
recipr ocal judgement.
Orestes' motivations are not restricted to
the type of blind personal reaction that may be seen
in Electra and Clytaemestra. He says, "The loss of
my estates wea rs ha r d on me; the thought that these
my citizens, most high renowned of men ... must go
subject to this brace of women." His anger toward
his mother is not so much due to her violation of
his identity but because of her infraction of moral
imperatives; his vision transcends perception of the
violation of the household order to see that civil
law has been disobeyed. He kills Aegisthus for this
end. His concern lies with the good of the state
which has been usurped by the "twin tyrannies"
that have overthrown the normal course of right.
He seeks to correct his mother's "daring" saying:
"You killed, and it was wrong. Now suffer wrong."
Orestes seeks to correct the breach of Justice
that has occurred, taking it upon himself to enact
the god's dictate that those who dare to assume
power for themselves, the mountains of strength,
must be checked. Orestes thus acts for the sake of
earthly justice as well as a higher standard of
justice. He was "in the guidance sent by the god."
"His hand was steered by the very daughter of
Zeus; Right we call her." One senses that he is
playing out the role of savior-by -violence because
he "must strike and prove [his] destiny." One does
not know, however, if the murders are an action he
wittingly condoned, because he speaks of "spells
that charmed me to such daring." The chorus'
repeated mention of an O r estes "harnessed to the
chariot of suffering" adds to this effect. The
central image is Orestes' burden of carrying out the
roles of savior and avenger: "[Clytaemestra]
wrough t so, in h is bu r ial, to make his death a
burden beyond your strength to carry."
Orestes' role playing is minimal, however,
because he has a greater range of vision concerning
his action. His attitude closely resembles repentance. Immediately after he murders, he cries, "I
grieve for the thing done, the death, and all our
race. I have won; but my victory is soiled; it has
no pride."
Orestes' attitude contrasts
Clytaemestra's pride and delusion about the capacity for violent action to balance disorder. Rather
than cling to his need for position and identity, he
transcends immersion in himself and is able to view

himself and his relation to the a bsolutes with
accurate vision. This is shown when he kneels a t
the temple of Athena. He realistically accepts his
humanity and capacity fo r erro r. Humili ty, knowledge of the consequences of his action, and sincere
sorrow for the falseness he has created exempt him
from the thunderbolts of Zeus. There is no need
for him to be destroyed; he is merely removed from
the action near the end of Eumenides.
In passing from his posture of pride and
judgement to that of suppliance, Orestes has
enacted for himself the reversal of position necessary after an act of judgement and destruction. He
does not falsely conclude that violence will end
violence, but knows that in assuming a role of
judgement over others he will face reciprocal
judgement. He acccepts the reversal of his role
from judge to that of the one being judged.
Yielding to fate rather than blindly overstating his
importance, he goes outside of himself fo r a
standard by which to measure his actions. He says
to Athena, "This is my case. Decide if it be right
or wrong. I am in your hands, Where my fate falls,
I shall accept."
The judges that Orestes first faces are the
Furies, the final storm of potential bloodshed in the
house. As a matricide, Orestes supposedly has
committed an act of high daring, thus violating the
order of justice and incurring the Furies' wrath.
Their instantaneous judgement is similar to the
type of blind reaction demonstrated by
Clytaemestra and Electra, although the Furies
concern themselves with an order larger than that
of a household -- the sphere of justice and absolutes.
The Furies assume the role of those who strike
down the proud and relentlessly pursue those who
"assume outrage of own hand in violence." Like
Clytaemestra, they demand of others standards
that they do not uphold. They say, "The man who
does right, free -willed, without constraint shall not
lose happiness nor be wiped out with all his
generation." However, they do not promote this
ideal because their method encourages men to
become just out off ear, not out of a love for what
is just. Athena justly accuses them; "You wish to
be called righteous rather then act right." Their
anger has its source in their distorted perception,
their hypocritical attribution to Orestes for faults
in which they sha re. Their blame of Orestes is not
precise; Orestes is not proud of what he has done
nor is he godless, because he has acted with the
approval of Apollo.

By gu id ing Or estes, Apollo supposedly infringes upo n the Furies' orde red world. The Furies
feel that he has sullied the temple of Athena in
sheltering the matricide Orestes. They say, "He
made man's way cross the place of the ways of god
and blighted age-old distributions of power." (It
is interesting that they are also said to disturb the
sanctity of the temple.) Apollo's disruption of the
temple is also see n as a personal attack. The Furies
remark to Apollo, "A young god, you have ridden
down the powers gr ay with age." and accuse him of
"destroy[ing] the order of an elder time." Thus, the
conflict between Apollo and the Furies, representatives of the young and the old generatio n, is
heightened by the old order's resistance to the
natural progression of the new order.
In their method and in their persistent
concern for the continuance of their own position,
the Furies resemble the killers in the house of
Atreus. They choose destruction as a means to
achieve balance and maintain order as they see fit,
while not actually being in order themselves. They
are an "unlyric threnody" that attempts to create
harmony while in a state of disharmony. Although
they preach to others that it is unfavorable to have
a tyranny within oneself, they are victims of their
desire for revenge and bloodshed. The hypocrisy
continues: they would overthrow the houses of
others yet not have their own house, the House of
Justice, overthrown. Like the other killers, the
Furies aim to strike down the proud but in doing
so become proud themselves. Their reiterations
about "my old rights" and their indignation and
refusal to accept the natural progression from the
old order into the new merely highlight the fact
that they have become that which they wish to
destroy -- the proud and the disturbers of order.
The outcome of the trial of Orestes determines which order shall be validated. When the
verdict is given , the Fu r ies a ga i n reac t in the mien
of Clytaemestra and Electra; for their concern is
voiced in terms of "me" -- my order, my rights, my
Although they would appear to be
position.
indomitable destroyers, they display a vulnerability to overthrow: "I, the mind of the past, to be
driven under ground, out cast, like dirt! They have
wiped me out and the hard hands of the gods and
their treacheries have taken my old rights away."
The Fu r ies would do well to listen to their own
words: "The all is bigger than you." It seems that
they must realize the necessity of adapting to the
changing nature of things, rather than attempting

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�to derive function and permanence by continuing
the house of Atreus's cycle of judgement and
destruction through violence, ruin heaped upon
ruin. By clinging to their identity and personal
system (or "hypotheses"), the Furies show that they
are one in the series of false hypotheses that must
be "cast out" or "be stilled to sleep, be done with."
The silencing of the Furies is only a
silencing of their hatred and not their utter
destruction: they are allowed to decide their
transformation for themselves. Ostensibly realizing that destruction is not the means to grace, they
say: "Let there blow no wind that wrecks the trees.
I pronounce the words of grace... let no barren
deadly sickness creep and kill."
"Civil war
fattening on men's ruin shall not thunder in our
city ... Let them render grace for grace. Let love be
their common will. Let them hate with a single
heart." They let go of their concepts of violent
vindiction for violent crimes in favor of notions of
grace and peaceful justice. It is unclear whether
their conversion has been made out of fear of
Zeus's thunderbolts or a true vision of themselves
and their false hypotheses. It is fitting, howevr,
and part of the pattern of reversals throughout the
trilogy, that the ones who have spurned others to
justice by instilling fear are themselves brought to
justice by this method. As they have treated others,
so are they treated.
By presenting the Furies with an alternative
to hateful wrath and an opportunity to take a place
in the new order, Athena harmoniously assimilates
their old order into the new order of Athenian
justice. She accomplishes this without either the
violence or the bloodshed that requires more blood
to be spilt. Before the trial she says:
The matter is too big for any mortal man who thinks he can judge
it. Even I have not the right to analyse cases of murder where
wrath's edge is sharp ... Since the burden of the case is here, and
rests on me, I shall select judges of manslaughter, and swear
them in, and establish a court into all time to come.
Thus I advise my citizens to govern and grace, and not to cast
fear utterly from your city.

Be ca use she defers to reason and is able both to

yield and to assert her authority, Athena shows that
she has acheived freedom. She projects an identity
that lacks pride and does not depend on the violent
subjugation of others. She is not immersed in her
role and does not need to remain in a position of
superiority separate from others. Athena can say
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black wave and live with me and share my pride
of worship."
The new system that Athena establishes
puts an end both to the hasty reactions to the
actions of another and to the hypocrisy which
characterized the judgements of the Atreiadae
killers. Enactment of justice becomes more than a
personal attack on someone who is seen as having
violated the world of another or the order of the
household. The "me" voice of pride is dissipated;
rationality has replaced the subjective reactions of
soul in conflict. Because the judges are a plurality
rather than a singularity, the element of personal
vendetta and attacks ad hominem will be subdued.
Prosecution will be based on evidence that is not
generated by the ones judging. Emphasis in the new
court will be placed upon objective analysis and
deliberation combined with the subjective judgement of the jury. This harmonious incorporation
of the old with the new and the elimination of the
majority of the false elements allows for permanency, a tribunal established "into all time to
come." Justice has become more than an exchange
of wrong for wrong; it is also an exchange of good
for good. "For good things given, your hearts'
desire be for good to return."
A state of grace has been brought about
through the wreck and the bloodshed of the house
of Atreus. This is said to be brought about by Zeus,
"all through Zeus, Zeus, first cause, prime mover.
For what thing without Zeus is done among
mortals? What is here without god's blessing?"
Like the dialectical process outlined in the Republic, equilibrium is gained after a cycle of generation of hypotheses and destruction of the false
hypotheses. The false elements in the household
have been cleansed and purified through deliberation and reason, not passionate destruction. Thus,
"With well-measured cast, caution [has heaved]
over boa r d a po r tion of th e gathered wealth, the
whole house, with woe overladen, doth not founder
nor doth it engulf the hull." It is an earthly sort
of grace, not to be confused with the absolute state
of wisdom and grace that is attained by the most
complete dialectical search, one which necessitates
separation from the corporeal world.
In dialectical terms, the leap between suffering and wisdom, or disorder and the attainment
of equilibrium, is the casting off of the false
hypotheses. The characters' progression from the
formulation of hypotheses to wisdom is impeded by
their resistance to what necessity has dictated. In

a sense, they resis t limitations inherent in thei r
human condition, seeking to overcome mortali ty by
resisting the inevitability of their fall. Their
struggle to establish identity depends upon their
subjugation of others under the guise of exacting
justice according to inmperatives which they violate themselves. Thus they necessitate their own
destruction by confusing their ends, the enactment
of the god's will, with the means they use to attain
that end, the immersion in selfhood and personal
vision. This pride can be viewed as a clinging or
enslavement to the false hypotheses.
What, then, is freedom in terms of the
dialectic? Freedom entails self-knowledge, knowledge of one's placement with respect to the gods,
accurate assessments of reality, and the realization
that, as a human, what one does is necessarily
imprecise and does not reflect the absolute. Freedom means holding onto one's own as much as it
leads one to the good. It also entails yielding or
letting go of selfhood and the actions, or hypotheses, one has created. One cannot decide fate but one
can decide the manner in which one encounters it.
All of this necessitates acceptance of one's humanity and of one's limited capacity to achieve
permanence. It also involves a form of knowledge
of self that necessitates viewing what one has done
and the false hypotheses one has made, and
accepting that one has chosen to act in a certain
way that one may regret for its falseness. Regret
cannot consist only of a "me" voice -- "I have
suffered, I have accepted the yoke of necessity, I
cannot bear what I have done, I have borne what
cannot be borne." One must progress form this state
of regret and shame to place oneself in a larger
context; one must look beyond oneself to one's
relationship with a higher power.
This involves supplication, a voluntary
reversal of the position of pride that one has put
oneself in. Thus the synapse between suffering and
wisdom is bridged through repentance. Repentance is a form of rendering an account of what one
has done; it is a transcendence of the limitations
inherent in the human condition because it is a
realization of those limitations. Through humility
and acknowledgement of one's position with respect to the gods, true identity is reached instead
of the separation from oneness that occurs due to
pride and concern fo r eart hly identity. Thus the
self is truly elevated through kneeling, an action
that is a posture of lowering. Fullest actualization
of identity is found by an apparent abandoning of
that identity.

Afterword
The idea for this essay began when the
violence in the Clouds reminded me of the violence
of the dialectic (for example, the destruction of the
false hypotheses in the Republic, the renunciation
of the body in the Phaedo, the sting-ray quality of
the Socratic method.) Other themes from the
tragedies seemed to support a discussion of tragedy
in the terms of philosophy, such as: the relationship
between violence and false reasoning; cycles of
judgement, violence, hypocrisy, pride, and selfabnegation; fate, will, responsibility, and punishment; the boundary between ambition and tryin g
to reach the good and arrogance; the separation of
mortals from the realm of the divine; the attempt
to escape mortal conditions and the rejection of
Necessity.
I saw a way to understand the tragedies in
terms of the dialectic, choosing the Oresteia as the
most complete vehicle for the discussion of this
correlation. It was then my intention to understand
the Platonic dialogues as tragedies and Socrates in
the terms of a tragic character who judges and
destroys others (the Sophists, the poets) although
being somewhat similar to them himself, then
renounces necessity (rejection of the body in
Phaedo, when both soul and body pass under the
throne of Necessity in the Republic), and thus
necessitates his own destruction, becoming like
that which he tries to destroy, just as the characters
in Oresteia. It would be interesting to discuss the
Sacra tic method in terms of a false hypothesis that
must be destroyed because of its emphasis on
discursive reasoning at the cost of poetry, and then
introduce to Christianity as the hypothesis which
supplants it.
Such was my intention. The constraint of
time and the magnitude of the task prevented me
from completing this project.
One final note. The human characteristics
I have discussed as protrayed in the Oresteia are by
no means exclusive to the nightmarish world of
Aeschylean tragedy; I believe there is a trace of
Clytaemestra in all of us.
•All citations are from the Richmond Lattimore
translation, with a few from Smyth's. The passages
ref erred to from the Re public are: 5 lOb, 511 b, 524d525a.

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�importance of intellect to ourselves and those
around us.
Though admiration and love are
frequently found together, they are, and must
remain, independent of one another.
Maybe a friendship suffered because you
expected your friend to be a better person than he
or she was. And this is certainly understandable.
But not everything has to be made of gold -- silver,
too, has its value. Or was it that you expected too
little from your friends? You were content simply
to be "sociable," to rub against one another in order
to create the illusion of intimacy and contact, as if
this was all one could hope for from others. But like
any improper use of your spiritual energy, such
activity often left you merely exhausted, and no
richer than before. By "socializing" you hoped to
mask your aloneness, rather than stare it in the eye.
And so it is your constant companion.
Maybe a friendship failed despite the attention and generosity you showed your friend. You
were always around to help, to go out of your way,
to give to him or her, but you watched confused as
the friendship seemed to slip away. Maybe your
generosity was meant to exact a debt, and thereby
to bind the other to you. But even if this was not
the case, it is still more important and more
difficult to be able to receive a gift generously than
it is t o make a hundred sacrifices. More is done to
help a friendship by receiving a gift in a way that
graciously returns it to the giver than by any
amount of giving we might do ourselves. I know
this may at first sound paradoxical, but hasn't it
been your own experience that in living, healthy
friendships, each friend is always finding new
ways to all ow the other to give?
And then there have been those potential
friendships, where you knew the seeds were present, and all you had to do was scratch the soil a
little, and you didn't, because busyness and distracti~ns had made you r h ea r t rou gh and ra gged. Even
today many of you, I'm sure, can think of people
you regret not havin'g gotten to know here at the
College. Of course, you can't cultivate friendships
with very many people, but you can be wary of
dissipating your energies fruitlessly.
I have myself failed others in all these ways.
And what is worse I have often allowed myself to
forget my former friends, making the excuse that
it's difficult enough to attend to those who are a
part of my life today without having to attend to
memories of those who shared by life yesterday.
And by forgetting, I fail them again.

Class Day Address, May 21, 1988
John Verdi

I was very moved to be asked to talk to you
today. Many of you have been students in my
classes, and I've worked closely with some of you
on essays and other odds and ends over the three
years since I came here from Santa Fe. I've grown
fond of this class and will miss you come Monday.
When I realized I'd be speaking to you in the Great
Hall, I thought back to the last time I stood here,
about a year ago, when I was married. The words
I spoke then were a public declaration of the most
important friendship in my life, and of my hope for
and commitment to its future.
Today, however, before you all leave St.
John's, I want to talk to you about how friendships
die, not exactly a subject filled with humor and
optimism. Maybe I chose this topic because of the
way I've been feeling lately, knowing that our life
together will soon be finished. It's also the case that
a few days ago marked the third anniversary of the
death of someone who had been my friend for over
twenty years. Our friendship had very rough times,
and it was only during the last year, after we knew
he was to die of a particularly painful and
insidious disease, that we drew inseparably close.
Thinking of him invariably forces me to confront
the numerous ways in which my friendships have
failed , and to accept the bitter irony of my
relationship with him, which was rescued only by
the imminence of death.
I also want to urge on you that we must do
everything we can to keep friendships alive, but

that, even after we have exerted the greatest
efforts, if we find we have failed, we must discover
ways to mourn the death of a friendship just as we
would the death of a friend.
During your years at St. John's you've lived
and worked in a community with people your own
age, who have shared many of your interests and
enthusiasms. In such surroundings friendships
flourish, for friendships are founded on and
nourished by common activity, even more so than
by common ideas and sentiments. But even in this
most fertile of environments, you have witnessed
the death of friendships. Sometimes you were
yourself involved, and other times you watched
from a distance. In either case what happened was
upsetting to see, for it laid bare the fragility of
human relationships. I want to tell you what I think
just a few of the causes are for such failures, and
you can then get some idea of how you might try
to prevent them. And I know that by speaking in
this way, I am revealing to you more about myself
than a bout friendship.
Perhaps you didn't cultivate that kind of
humility which ought to come from the awareness
that other people care about you. Instead you
wished to be admired as well as loved by your
friends.
And when you were not, you were
disappointed and hardened your heart to them. But
we must always seek to allow ourselves to be loved
without being admired, which for many of us at St.
John's is extremely difficult, aware as we are of the

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I have known many of you who are sitting
here. Some of you I have known for two or three
years, and some longer. I know too that you are
about to leave people who have been dear to you for
a long time. Perhaps you've promised to write one
another letters, and that is a very good thing. But
we write letters as much to ourselves as to our
friends. The written word does not foster friendship. At best it sustains it until that time when
friends can see each other again face to face. After
you leave St. John's, try to be physically present to
your friends as much as possible. Exert yourself to
see them and to talk with them. And though no
human being is a permanent source of happiness to
another, still the love of our friends and families
is the most divine gift we can be given. It alone,
if anything, gives meaning to our lives. And above
all, as St. Theresa of Avila says, "Never grow weary
of receiving".
I want to leave you with a Neapolitan
proverb my mother taught me. It goes like this:
"Piu lundana du cammina, a cha d'aspetta." That
means, "No matter how far you walk, I'll wait for
you here."

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�seems to me that everyone can clearly recognize
the human suffering depicted there. If a dialogue can be established between the tragedian
and the philosopher, then perhaps it can be seen
that they are talking about the same questions
in different ways.
The body of the essay will come in three
sections, on Euripides, Kant, and Hegel, and in that
order. Besides the obvious historical considerations, there is another reason for proceeding in this
order. Perhaps it is not giving away too much of
the argument if I announce here that this progression is one of gradually increasing optimism about
the possibility of human tran scendence. Euripides'
vision is almost unrelentingly dark; Kant's is
guardedly optimistic; and Hegel's is almost grotesquely cheerful. Yet, as will be seen, these three
transcendent writers sha re much in their visions of
the nature and possibility of human transcendence.

Tragedy, Philosphy, Co111edy:
a vision of transcendence
in Euripides, Kant, and Hegel
Michael McShane ('88)

Nothing, however, can continue to give us pleasure always, because our natures are not simple, but contain a second element (which is what
makes us perishable beings), and consequently, whenever one of those two natures is active its activity runs counter to the nature of the other,
while when the two are balanced, their activity feels neither painful nor pleasant. Since if any man had a simple nature, the same activity would
afford him the greatest pleasure always. Hence god enjoys single simple pleasure perpetually. For there is not only an activity of motion, there
is an activity of immobility, and there is essentially a truer pleasure in rest than in motion. But change in all things is sweet as the poet [Euripides,
Orestes] says owing to some badness in us; since just as a changeable man is bad, so also is a nature that needs change; for it is not simple
nor good.

Nonescapist Nonfiction:
Tragedy and Transcendence in Euripides' Hippolytus

Nicomachean Ethics
Then if this most perfect mastership and most perfect knowledge are in the god's world, the gods' mastership can never be exercised over us,
nor their knowledge know us or anything in our world. Just as we do not rule over them by virtue of rule as it exists in our world and we know
nothing that is divining by our knowledge, so they, on the same principle, being gods, are not our masters nor do they know anything of human
concerns.

Nor ought we to obey those who enjoin that a man should have
a man's thoughts and a mortal the thought of mortality, but we
ought, so far as possible to achieve immortality, and do all that
a man may to live in accordance with the highest thing in him;
for though this be small in bulk, in power and value it far
surpasses all the rest.

But surely, said Socrates, to deprive the gods of knowledge would be monstrous.

Parmenides l 34d-e

Nicomachean Ethics

Introduction

This paper will discuss arid criticize the
treatment of the theme of human transcendence as
it appears in certain works by Euripides, Kant and
Hegel. Specifically, it will focus upon the problem
of the human suffering of "external" conditions,
and the possibility of transcending those conditions.
Now "transcendence" is a big word and its
sense is not immediately obvious. The term is
loaded with heavy connotations, both metaphysical
and theological. Yet, I will argue that in the form
of such things as forgiveness, learning, and maturation, a limited form of transcendence is certainly
present in the everyday world. Since, then, the
meaning of "transcendence" is itself at stake in this
paper, I hope I can be forgiven for not giving a
precise definition of it here. If the essay is
successful, the significance of the concept will
emerge more clearly as the paper progresses.

In more than one tragedy, Euripides has his
choruses deliver speeches such as this one from the
Hippolytus:

One thing should be discussed in advance,
however; even though this paper will pay much
attention to the writings of Kant and Hegel, it is
not about "philosophy" in any narrow sense. This
essay will constantly run the risk of losing itself in
the intricacies of highly abstract philosophical
arguments, but its subject matter actually concerns
questions of concrete human suffering -- matters
close to everyone's real life in the real world. If this
essay succeeds, then, it will be because discussions
of the "transcendental unity of apperception" or of
"Absolute Spirit" will have revealed something
recognizable about the problematic nature of
human identity.
In fact, one subsidia ry goal of this paper
is to try to show how I understand philosophy
itself as being a part of the real human world.
It is partially for this reason that I have chosen
to write about the tragedy of Hippolytus. For it

0 to escape and lurk high under
Steep crags,
At the touch of a god to rise,
A wing'd bird among flying flocks!
To soar over the swell of the Adrian coast,
Above the waters of Eridanos
Where, in lament for Phaethon,
His sisters drop their piteous tears
Which glow like amber in teh dark stream;
And then to reach that shore planted with
Apple-trees
Where the daughters of evening sing,
Where the sea lord of the dark shallows
Permits to sailors no further passage
Establishing the solemn frontier of heaven
Which Atlas guards;
Where divine fountains flow beside
Zeus' marriage bed,
Where holy earth offers her choice fruits to
enrich the blissful gods.

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Typically, such speeches express the chorus's desire
to escape altogether from the horrible scene of
tragic action unfolding around it. Such speeches
attract attention in a variety of ways. First, they
are often among the longest sustained passages of
writing in Euripides' plays. Their length affords
the tragedian the op portunity to freeely display his
transcendent poetic talent. Consequently, speeches
of this kind often prove to be among the most
beautiful in his plays.
Yet, because of their length, and because of
their subject matter (which is frankly escapist),
such escape passages present readers with problems.
I have heard it suggested, for example, that such
long passages amount to little more than beautiful
ornaments -- speeches that are somewhat digressive
and ultimately irrelevant to the unfolding of the
tragic plot. Such escape speeches can seem like selfenclosed poems, somehow adventitiously lodged in
Euripides' dramas.
In at least one Euripidean play, however,
the question of escape and its possibility emerges
as a central motivating theme. This first section of
the essay will try to show how escape comes to mean
transcendence in the Hippolytus. The section will
examine generally the presence and significance of
the human yearning for transcendence expresseed
in the tragedy.
Now, each of the play's major characters
seeks escape from their circumstances, but Hippolytus presents this desire most clearly and selfconsciously. Thus the paper will first discuss how
the theme of transcendence relates to the Nurse,
Phaedra, and Theseus before focusing more closely
upon Hippolytus's strivings. Finally, this section
will examine the most general vision of transcendence in the Hippolytus: that of the chorus, as
expressed in the passage quoted above.
Now it is perhaps obvious that, wittingly or
not, what all of the characters of the Hippolytus
desire to flee is Fate itself. Euripides sets up the
problem of fatedness in a particularly brutal way:
he has Aphrodite walk on stage at the outset and
simply announce (nearly) everything that will
happen throughout the tragedy. The play itself
then seems to be little more than a horrible
repetition of the scenes she describes so coldly at
its outset. The chorus summarizes the inevitable
end: "The wheel has turned, disaster follows upon
disaster. Fate is irresistible and there is no escape."
(125 2)
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vague. Bare fate is an abstraction modern readers
have difficulty with. The play does offer some
help to us by providing mo re concrete ways of
thinking about fate and what it would mean to try
to escape it. We shall try to see more clearly how
fate is expressed in the play.
The escape theme first arises explicitly
early in the drama. The nurse is confronted by
Phaedra's mysterious suffering, and she commiserates. The nurse mourns,
The whole of our life is full of pain,
And sorrow finds no relief.
And after this life, is there a happier world?
That is concealed from us, wrapped in
clouds and darkness.
The truth stands plain: that we blindly love,
Such as it is, our little gleam of day.
For we know nothing of any other life;
The world below is a mystery;
And we are carried along by foolish tales.

happy unless one's living friends and descendents
are also content. Thus, in a tragic turn, it seems as
if the only way for her to escape the trap is to
entrap innocent others. Phaedra thus makes her
fin al escape only by binding Theseus and Hippolytus together in a horrible maze which can only
result in destruction.
If it has been established that Phaedra
desires to escape something, we must then ask what
it is that she so desperately seeks to flee and what
a successful flight would mean for her.
Most immediately, Phaedra desires to escape a fate that expresses itself in her passion for
Hippolytus. That passion exists inside her but it is
an alien thing: she did not desire it, did not
encourage it, and indeed sought to repress it. In
every sense Phaedra's fateful love for her son was
a passion which she suffered and before which she
was nearly powerless. She desired to escape it and
could not.
Another expression of fate as an external
controlling force for Phaedra concerns her family
his tory. Interrogated by her nurse as to the root of
her problems, Phaedra mentions her mother, who
had a "craving for the bull." (322) Then she
in vo kes her siste r "whom Dionysus loved." The
nurse asks, "Why raise these evil memories of your
family?" Phaedra responds, "I am the third, the
curse that struck them now kills me." And she
conc ludes, "My wretched fate began with them; it
is not new." Thus we see that Phaedra desires to
esca pe the history of her own family. Like her
passio n, her family is something which is both
inside her and outside her, both her and not her. It
represents something which confronts her from the
outsid e; she can have no control over the things
wh ich happened in her family's past. Yet her
family histor y somehow fo r ms and predestines her
inner nature.
Finally, it is because of her family's future
in the shape of her sons that Phaedra cannot simply
'escape to oblivion,' but must entrap Hippolytus.
Phaed ra's understanding of family history or
fa tedn ess is also conveyed by her discussion of
wha t will happen to her own sons if she die s
dis honored:

the nurse's escape vision, Phaedra's desire for
escape is expressed not in terms of some future time
or otherworldly place, but instead in terms of a
nostalgia for pleasant places and activities that
Phaedra has known. If Phaedra's and the Nurse's
escape fantasies differ in terms of past and future
orientation, however, they are united by a common
yearning for absent times and places. Also, it
should be noted that Phaedra's three nostalgic
dr eams (of the wild place by the fountains, the
sport of hunting and horse racing) share an element
off ertile purity. All three are unstained by human
social intrigue.
But for Phaedra the op portun ity to dream
of escape from an unbearable present through
nostalgia for past places and pleasures soon proves
to be an unsustainable luxury. As soon as her nurse,
unbidden, reveals Phaedra's obsession to Hippolytus, Phaedra's dreams of escape turn again to
a terrible future:

(187)
'Chorus:

This passage treats a specific kind of escape from
the pain of the world -- that is, an escape to a
happier world after death. The nurse is characteristically pessimistic here. She seems to entertain
the idea of a happy afterlife and to long for it, but
only briefly; then she dismisses the possibility of
such an escape as being merely "foolish tales." The
interest in an escape to an afterworld here is not
accidental, for the nurse is addressing the deathly
sick Phaedra who has strong inclinations toward
such an escape route.
Phaedra herself expresses her desire to
escape her present
-- although unidentified -suffering in a series of fantastic speeches immediately following the nurse's meditation upon suffering and the afterlife. Phaedra here gives three
short speeches: the first one expresses a desire "to
k neel by a fo untain in the fre sh dew and drink a
cupful of clear water!" (218-231) The second takes
the form of a rhetorical command to her followers
to "take me out to the hills!" where she "longs" to
hunt deer. This "command" is merely the expression of a longing, not a real order, for it is obvious
to all concerned that the sick Phaedra is in no shape
to go anywhere. Phaedra's third speech expresses
an equally unrealistic desire to ride race horses on
a race-track.
Although both Phaedra and her nurse conclude that these escapist speeches expose Phaedra's
madness, they do have significant content. Unlike

Phaedra:

What then?: Do you see any way out?
What will you do?
I know only one thing, that death must
End this torture as soon as possible.
There's no other remedy.

(599)
It is significan t tha t once Phaedra's conf ession-by-proxy has occurred, and her incestuous
appeal to H ippolytus rejected, ther e is no longer
any ques tion of escaping to something. Phaedra no
longer dreams of better places or times to which she
might flee. Moreover, in desiring death, Phaedra
does not speak of an afterlife such as the one her
nu rse speculated about before. Instead death
re presents to her only a n escape from an intolerable
r eality, an escape into oblivion. By now, mortal
escape itself has become merely the least bleak possibility for her.
Moreover, matters become even worse f or
Phaedra. She recognizes that even her death will
not release her and hers form the labyrinthine
ramifications of her situation. Once Hippolytus
has announced that he does not consider himself
bound by the oath of silence "sworn only by his
tongue," Phaedra is in deep trouble. For she then
realizes that not even her death can salvage her
reputation and the reputations of her sons. In order
for her to obtain their excape too, she must
implicate Hippolytus himself. Phaedra sees the
terrible wisdom of the claim that Aristotle makes
in the Ethics that even after death one cannot be

I want my two sons to go back and live in glorious Athens, hold
their heads high there and speak their mind like free men,
honored for their mother's name. One thing can make the most
bold spirited man a slave : to know the secret of a parent's
shameful act.
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Here again we see the aspect of fate ensla ving
people by means of pregiven conditi ons over which
they have no control. Phaedra's dreadf ul fam ily
history in some way leads to her own destru ction,
which in turn will enslave her sons. Is there any
reaso n to hope fo r an end to the se fa ted fa milial
chains of destructi on? One of the most horri fying
aspects of this tragedy is the potentially infi ni te
reach of its horror. We shall see thi s theme of
infinite horr or recur later in the play.
A final conditi on which Phaedra desires to
escape is her femininity. In one speech Phaedra
says, "I was a woman -- a thing hated by ever yone."
(95) In an other place she exclaims, "How cruel a
curse it is to be born a woman. Wh o wou ld not pity
us? What shift, what resource ha ve we, what words,
once we have stumbled, to und o a knot a word has
tied?" (667 )
Phaedra recognizes her femininit y as another pregiven condition which someh ow re nd ers
her powerless. Again, we see that Fate is somet hi ng
which confronts the sufferer as on the one hand
someth ing which is external a nd unchosen, bu t on
the other hand is something wh ich cond itions her
inner nature. In the play Phaedra cannot esca pe the
feminine aspect of her fate an y more t han she can
flee her passion or her fami ly histor y.
But the nurse and Phaedra are not the only
charcaters of the Hippolytus wh o dre am of flight.
Theseus, too, is moti vated by a desi re to escape his
conditions. Now Theseus ha s had a ver y checkered
career. On the one ha nd, he has been a grea t hero,
killing mo nsters, ba nd its, etc. On the other , he has
been a noto riously faithless man , given to deceit,
ra pe, murd er. Theseus's ma r riage to Phaedra is
founde d upon such cri minality; he married her only
afte r marooning his savio r, her siste r, Ariadne.
During the pla y, an d throughou t his life, one of
Theseus's ma jor charac teristics is his absence from
home. It seems reasonable to inf er that Theseus
leaves his home so often because he is ashamed of
what it rep resents to him -- that is, his past, with
its hauntin g viciousness. In fac t, Theseus's very
presen ce in tra gic T roe ze n came about as part of a
plan to a tone fo r his past criminal bloodletting.
(Aton ement is a ki nd of esca pe. ) In general,
T heseus desi res to escape the ongoing ramifications
" f rom sin commi tted in time lon g past." (8 31) After
reading Pha edra 's letter cha rging his son with
raping her, he cries, "I am crushed; wh ere can I
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to escape the conditions he suffers leads him into
trapping others. Theseus wants to escape from the
contaminated presence of his son, who he believes
has defiled his wife and home. Yet, because
Theseus is king, he believes he can make good his
escape without actually having to flee himself.
Theseus believes he has power so he attempts to
secure his own escape not by leaving his surroundings but by making them leave him. Hence, he
banishes and curses Hippolytus, thus ensuring the
horrible death of his own son.
At the moment Theseus banishes Hippolytus, this significant exchange takes place:
Hippolytus:

Theseus:

If you were my son, I your father, I would not
Have corrected you with exile, I'd
Have seen you dead if you'd thought fit
To lay a finger on my wife.
Your words are worthy of you!
You shall not die that way-According to a law you've laid down
For yourself. Many an outcast would
Be glad of a quick death. No, you shall
Wander exiled from your native land
And drain on alien soil the bitter lees of life.

(1074)
As father and king, Theseus is in the
position to condition others. Here Theseus asserts
the dependence or conditioned nature of his son vis
a vis him. In attempting to preserve his own power
and freedom while actively escaping his surroundings, Theseus necessarily must deny freedom to his
son. The key sentence in the exchange is: "You
shall not die that way -- according to a law you've
laid down for yourself." Here we find Theseus
denying his son's autonomy. And, as we shall see,
autonomy here is defined almost exactly as Kant
and Hegel will define it centuries later: as obeying
laws laid down by oneself for oneself. To be
autonomous is to be unconditioned by alien powers.
We have thus far examined the escape
dreams of the Nurse, Phaedra and Theseus. Let us
collect their common elements and try to reach a
conclusion about fatedness, escape and transcendence before turning to see how these issues are
involved in Hippolytus' story.
First, it should be noted that while abstract
Fate is a concept difficult for readers to grasp
today, the play certainly provides a more concrete
way to understand fatedness. For surely the idea
of someone being radically conditioned -- or fated
-- by their gender, political environment, passions,

acter is his longing to escape the necessity of
honoring "a god worshipped at night" (108) -Aphrodite. Jealously, the goddess describes how
Hippolytus "abhors the bed of love; marriage he
renounces." (13) It is clear that in attempting to
reject these things -- which he regards as impure - Hippolytus is attempting to flee his own sexuality.
Surely Hippolytus suffers from a hatred of something in himself -- or at least one of his selves.
Yet, in Hippolytus's case, his disdain for his
own sexuality issues in a hatred for something
seemingly external to him -- women. Outrageously,
Hippolytus rails at Zeus for having "established in
the sunlit world this counterf cit coin, woman, to
curse the human race." ( 617) "Women," he
concludes, "it seems are always evil." (695) They
are the ones responsible for his lack of freedom.
Hippolytus expresses a desperate desire to escape
half the human race and enter into a fantastic
scenario in which men buy their children instead
of requiring women for conception. Again, one
wonders whether the feminine is as contingent and
external t o Hippolytus's soul as he might believe.
A third conditioning factor that Hippolytus
desires to flee is the political realm. He says to his
father and king, Theseus,

personal past or family history, does not sound
foreign to modern ears. Each of these conditioning
factors seems to come with its own set of laws and
determinations. These laws themselves deny the
autonomy of the characters, and together they
dictate the inescapable Fate of each character in
the Hippolytus.
If it is established that the characters of the
Hippolytus desire to escape such fateful conditions,
it then becomes appropriate to examine the relationship between escape and transcendence, the
theme of this essay. Certainly not all escapes are
examples of transcendence. For instance, if a rock
is about to fall on your head and you step ou t of
the way and thus escape the rock, it is not
appropriate to say that you have thereby "transcended" it. This is because the rock represents a
force entirely external to its prospective victim.
In the case of the characters of the Hippolytus, however, things are different. They all
desire to escape conditions which are in one sense
external -- otherwise they would not be perceived
as escapable conditions. But in another sense these
conditions are internal to the identities of the
people who wish to escape them. (To varying
degrees, such conditions as gender, passions, personal and family history, political environment,
etc., all work to inform the inner nature of the
characters who suffer them.) An escape from
conditions such as these -- with their ambivalent
interior / exterior status -- represents transcendence.
From these considerations two related
things follow which shall remain important
throughout the whole of this essay. The first is that
to speak of transcendence implies the overcoming
of something internal to the identity of the person
who transcends. Another way to put this is to say
that often freedom for self becomes freedom from
sel f. This consideration leads to the second critical
conclusion: Assuming that one's identity in some
way remains constant, the transcending self has
been internally split. For one aspect of the self
transcends; the other is transcended. The identity
of these two selves, and their possible relati onship,
will become a thematic question for this essay as a
whole.
Let us now turn to the central character of
Euripides' drama, Hippolytus himself. Like the
other characters, Hippolytus desires to escape -- or
transcend -- a variety of conditions. The most
immediately obvious aspect of Hippolytus's char-

Do you think a throne carries attraction
For a balanced mind?
None; since to feel delight in kingship is to be
Corrupted by it. No, my wish is to come first
In Greek games, in politics to take second place,
Secure in happiness, with the noblest of my friends.

(1013)

By contrast to Phaedra's desperate death
wish into oblivion, we see in each instance of
Hippolytus's escapism the dual aspect of an escape
from something he fears to something he loves. He
wishes to flee from Aphrodite to Artemis and the
activities she sanctions, such as hunting and riding.
(Like Phaedra, Hippolytus seems to be motivated
here by a desire for a kind of pureness or innocence
he believes to characterize the wild natural world.)
He wishes to flee from politics and Athens to Greek
games, his noblest friends, and Troezen; he wishes
to flee from the presence of women to a fictional
world in which the feminine never existed. In each
case, Hippolytus dreams of retreating from a realm
that is characteristically human; and as the play's
ending reveals, in each case his bid to gain freedom
from these human realms fails. We will return later
to the question concerning the general nature of the

realm Hippolytus desires to fly to.
Hippolytus's wish to transcend his political
and sexual nature can plausibly be traced to his
ambivalent attitude toward his nearly-alwaysabsent father, Theseus.
As mentioned above,
Theseus's history of dealing with women and with
his own sexuality is not exactly savory. He is said
to have raped Helen when she was thirteen, for
example. Hippolytus himself was generated as a
result of an illicit affair between Theseus and the
Queen of the Amazons, whom he also raped. On the
other hand, Theseus is justly famous for his heroic
deeds.
He is widely recognized as Hercules'
successor. Also, he is a great and powerful political
figure. [For a fascinating and illuminating account
of Theseus's past, see Plutarch's Life of Theseus.]
Against the overwhelming background of
his father's history, it is Hippolytus's problem to
try to establish his own identity. For all sons,
paternity itself represents a kind of determining
condition.
Again, the inside / outside problem
arises: Fathers externally pre-exist sons. They first
cause their sons and then literally rule them for
many formative years. Genetically and psychologically speaking, fathers pass on much of their own
identities to their offspring. Thus, like other
conditions mentioned previously, all fathers both
internally and externally ground the identities of
their sons. For Hippolytus, however, this problem
is particularly acute, for his father is a much more
intruding figure than most.
Hence, Hippolytus's rejection of sexuality
and politics can be seen as an attempt to transcend
the conditioning of his father's past and thereby to
establish his own autonomous identity. The stakes
are high for Hippolytus (as for all sons) in this
connection; if he cannot ground his own identity
in himself, then it could regress from him infinitely. In this case, Theseus cannot provide solid
ground in either a moral or a theoretical sense. For
Theseus, although father, is also himself the son of
a father who was a son, etc. Thus, if Hippolytus
tries to discover his identity in the identity of
Theseus, his quest will be thrown back by an
ineluctable logic -- through all of genealogical time.
[N.b.: The problem of the infinitely regressing
identity is not unique to Hippolytus; it is common
to all sons, children and finite entities in general.
This problem will emerge thematically in the Hegel
section of this paper.]
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�mortal law-boundedness. This is shown at the
beginning of the play, when his servant is trying
to persuade Hippolytus to recognize Aphrodite. He
asks Hippol ytus if he knows "an old law laid down
for mortal men." Hippolytus responds, "I don't ..."
(91) The argument concludes with Hippolytus
claiming that "since gods may choose whom they
will honor, so may men." (88) With the question of
mortal law and fate versus an escape to autonomy,
we can see the most general form of Hippolytus's
desire for transcendence. Hippolytus wants to
govern himself as he sees fit. He desires to escape
the laws imposed upon him (as he sees it) from
outside which condition his mortal nature.
Now these "laws laid down for mortal men"
include the determinations inherent in all the
previously mentioned conditions that Hippolytus
wants to transcend, but they go mu ch fu rt h er. F or
Hippolytus is nothing if not an ambi t io us f ell ow.
In order to get a sense of how radical Hippolytus's
desire for transcendence is, let us examine what he
says about how he believes he will (has)
tran scend( ed) these "laws laid down for mortal
men."
In his second speech of the play, Hippolytus
addresses Artemis directly and announces:
Goddess, for you I have twined this crown of flowers, gathered
Fresh from a virgin meadow, where no shepherd dares
To graze his flock, nor ever yet the scythe swept,
But bees thread the spring air over the maiden meadow.
There with clear stream-water Chastity tends the flowers;
And those whose untaught nature holiness claims entire
May Gather garlands there; and the impure may ~ot.
Dear mistress, take this circlet for your golden hair,
Offered with reverent hand. I alone among mortals
Enjoy this honor, I am your companion, speak with you
And hear your voice, only your face I do not see.
And as my life's course has begun, so may it end.

(78)
This is a very important speech and it
contains many important aspects of Hippolytus's
dream of transcendence.
First is his most striking claim that he is the
companion of Artemis, a deity. This apparently is
not idle bragging, because Artemis later confirms
that the two a re "friends." Now Aristotle argues
that in order to be someone's friend -- or to relate
to another on any level -- one must in some way
stand on the same ground as that person. This
would indicate that in some way Hippolytus has at
least a limited aspect of the divine present within
him. (As we shall see, the text bears out this
indication.) "Limited" because he is not able to

en joy her full friendship -- ."on ly [her ] fac~ [~e]
cannot see." It is t hrough this resort to the divine
-- both ins ide himself and externall y in the form
of A rtem is -- that Hip polytus believes he can
t ran scend the conditi ons of h is mor tality.
This a r gument abou t t h e internal presence
of the divine helps answer a question posed above.
F or we recall that transcendence imp lies a d ual self
-- one that is free to transcend and the o~ he r that
is con d itioned and , one h opes, tran scended .. I n the
case of H ippolytus, at least, it becomes clear that
th e free and tran scendent internal self co r responds
to some d ivine as pect in the huma n soul. And, in
fact , the presence of two selves, one divine an d t he
other empirical and conditioned, w ill become
th ematic in each account of transcen d ence discussed in this essay as a whole.
Let us return to Hippolytus's transcendence
speech. The second question it ra.ises concern.s ~he
zone in which Hippolytus's relat10n to t he divine
tak es place. The "virgin meado w" is a place that
is u ntouched by impure mortal s. T h is pla ce that is
no human place is ch a racte r ized by an abundance
of innocent n a t u ra l th in gs: bees, flowers , clear
stream-wate r. For Hippolytus the move to transcendence in volves a reso r t to th e sub-human -- the
natu ral -- and the super h u man -- th e divine. He
wan ts to be either com plete ly fr ee, in the case of
the divine or so en ti re ly conditioned that he no
longer kno'ws i t or ca res, as in the case of the animalistic. It is th e mortally human lying between
these two r ealms tha t h e ca nnot abide. Both
extreme realms are somehow united in the figure
of Artemis, the nature goddess. They are also
united in the fig ure of Hippolytus himself, who
possesses both an animal and a divine self.
If Hippoly t us d esi res to flee human space,
he also desires to flee human time. In fact, he
claims to have alre a dy partially succeeded at this.
One might say that the noti on of ''a lrea dy" is
central here. For H ippolytus claims that thi s zone
is only for those "whose untaught nat:ire .holine:s
claims entir e." The thing about teachmg 1s that 1t
takes time, and sufferi ng. (I n fact, Socrates argues
that learning is itself a transcendence of ignorance.) Hippolytus's claim to be "untaught" then
means that he has always known what he knows
and thus been what he is -- partially divine. The
passage ends with Hippolytus's praying that he. can
always remain outside of time: "And as my hfe~s
course has begun, so may it end." Of course, this
prayer is emphatically not granted, at least in the

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sense Hippolytus had in mind.
Thus several important things have
emerged from Hippolytus's transcendence speech.
First, Hippolytus's attempt to transcend his conditioned and finite self is contingent upon a resort to
atemporal and aspatial divinity, both internal and
external. Second, that the "laws laid down for
mortal men" which Hippolytus desires to transcend
go far beyond the laws of the various external /
internal conditions already mentioned, such as
family history, etc. In fact, the laws Hippolytus is
concerned with pertain to the most basic conditions
defining him as a mortal man -- those of human
spatio-temporaltiy. To desire, as Hippolytus does,
to be independent of those laws is to desire the
autonomy of divinity. The desire for divinity,
then, is at the heart of the exchange between
Hippolytus and servant that starts with Hippolytus
wondering, rhetorically, "If we mortals use the
same laws as the gods" and ends with him concluding that "Since gods may choose whom they will
honour, so may men." The ending of tragedy
suggests that, despite what he believes and prays,
Hippolytus has a lot to learn and a lot to suffe r. For
like all the characters of the play, his dreams of full
transcendence are dashed. In light of the play's
ending they appear to be exactly as the nurse
diagnosed them -- mere "foolish tales."
Let us then turn to the play's tragic conclusion. As it turns out, the Hippolytus has two
endings. One is narrowly concerned with the
destiny of Hippolytus himself and the people
around him. The second ending is not an ending
and could involve anyone or everyone in the world.
First, what happens to Hippolytus: his
death reveals a central problem inherent in
Hippolytus's attempt to transcend the things that
fatally condition him. His very dying itself
indicates that he failed to transcend the laws of
mortal human space and time. In the death scene ,
Euripides systematically shows the failure of
Hippolytus's attempts to transcend his paternity,
his political nature, "his" femininity, his sexuality.
For his death was caused by his father's curse, his
political exile, his (female) mother's and nurse's
conspiracy, his sexual passion [as symbolized by the
bull from the water and the past]. Worse, Hippolytus' death was caused by the very elements he
desired to escape to -- the divine and the natural.
For his death came about through the divine
plotting of Aphrodite and the tacit consent of his
"companion" Artemis; Hippolytus is killed by
means of the natural horses he had used to escape

from human society.
It is ironic that the very things Hippolytus
tries to escape from and to ultimately conspire to
kill him. But perhaps this irony should come as no
great surprise. For, as we have seen, Hippolytus
tried to transcend the various conditions of his
mortality by means of flatly rejecting them. But
this is problematic: for Hippolytus's revolt against
his conditions means a revolt against himself.
Thus, in attempting to secure an identity by means
of simply negating his conditions, Hippolytus in
effect negated his identity; his very attempt to find
himself led Hippolytus to kill himself. All of this
is closely related to the central problems of
transcendence: the interiority /exteriority of conditions, and the dualism of selfhood.
The ending of Hippolytus is tragic; however, it is not as grim as it could be. For one possible
transcendence does occur there. This transcendence involves the only major event of the play not
initially predicted by Aphrodite -- Hippolytus's
forgiveness of his father in the moving final scene.
The dialogue goes:
Theseus:
Hippolytus:
Theseus:
Hippolytus:
Theseus:
Hippolytus:
Theseus:

Dear son, what are you doing to me? Will you break
my heart?
I see before me now the gates of the dead world.
And will you leave me guilty, with unholy hands?
No, you are free. I here absolve you of my death.
I am free? You discharge me of bloodguiltiness?
I swear it by the conquering bow of Artemis.
0 dearest son, how noble a heart you show your
father!

(1454)

Now forgiveness is a form of transcendence.
It indicates a kind of freedom from the human laws
of cause and effect involved in endlessly tragic
cycles of violence and counterviolence, transgression and re venge. Forgiveness does mean a kind of
negation of history, as Hegel suggests. The fact that
this forgiveness is n ot preannounced by Aphrodite
at the beginning of the play indicates that it is a
kind of break from fatedness.
For a variety of reasons, the transcendence
involved in Hippolytus's last minute forgiving of
his father is hard to interpret. First, it only occurs
after much horror, including the suicide of
Phaedra. The final forgiving might seem a merely
minor bright spot against an overwhelmingly dark
background. Yet it does represent a significant
accomplishment.
Second, it is hard to tell what his forgiveness means to Hippolytus in terms of his transcen-

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�de nce quest. If it is true that "to fo r give is d i vine,"
it is also true that to fo r giv e is human. For
Hippolytus to recogn ize hi s fa ther 's guilt and still
accept h im an yway indicates that he has suffered
himself to lea rn. It means Hippolytus has adopted
a new attitude towards mortal humanity and thus
t owards himself. Previously Hippolytus's whole
attitude t owards his father and the rest of the
mortal wor ld has been one of rejection and denial.
He had re garded himself as beyond the whole finite
world, w h ich he accordingly despised.
Thus
Hippolytus's forgiving Theseus indicates a kind of
acceptance of the mortal world, with its viciousness
and external cond itioning. Now, forgiveness is
good, so, on the one hand, this new acceptance is
good. On the other hand, it represents Hippolytus's
abandonment of his perhaps unrealistic dreams of
radical transcendence.
So, th e first ending of the Hippolytus, with
its hor rible death and with its transcendent forgiveness, is hard to understand. There is some good
the re but the ove rall picture remains tragic.
The second and more general "ending" of
Hippolyt us will be discussed below. But, before
leaving the fi rst ending, and with it Hippolytus and
his famil y, per haps it is worth making one remark
on how to rea d the character of Hippolytus, the
"tragic hero." It is a naive and hubristic mistake,
I believe, to understand him as simply a naive and
hubri stic you ng man. It is also a mistake to search
for his "tragic flaw," as if it were some trait
idiosyncra tic to him that we could identify as the
contingent cause of his downfall. To do this is to
change the Hippolytus from a human tragedy into
a mere morality pla y about the downfall of a
flawed man. The moti va tion behi nd this way of
reading the "tragic h ero" is the h uma n desi re to
esca pe tragedy -- i.e. to keep i t safely external to us.
We want to say "it couldn't happen to me;" or (as
Racine's H ippolyte puts it when speaking of
himself), we wa n t " to watch a ship wreck as if we
were safely on shor e." To hubristically read a
tra ged y in this fashi on is to try to change it into
a comedy for us. As both Hi ppolyte and Hippolytus
discovered, to deny tragedy is not only foolish, but
dangerous. Iro nically, then, the naive reader's very
attempt to escape tragedy's "laws laid down for
mortal men" only mor e emphatically re-inscribes
him into th e r ole of "tr agic hero."
Para do xi cally, one way for readers to perhaps tran scend the role of the "tragic hero" is to
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recognize that his problems and concerns are theirs,
only perhaps on a larger scale. In the case of
Hippolytus this means recognizing that he is not
merely a fantastic fictional monster. Instead,
despite his particularities, Hippolytus was a man
who was profoundly concerned with the great
potentialities and flaws of human nature. He
risked everything to actualize the human potentialities and transcend the human flaws present in
himself.
From Euripides' point of view,
Hippolytus's failure to achieve his end means something, not only for a fictional character, but for all
those governed by the "laws laid down for mortal
men." T o fail to recognize oneself in that category
means to attempt an escape from tragedy; such
attempts ofte n have tragic consequences.
The possibility of a reader's denying his
involvement in tragedy is the subject matter of the
"second ending" of the Hippolytus. This second
"ending" actually precedes the first. It is even
darker than the first ending and literally infinite
in the scope of its horror. The second ending comes
right before another chilling moment in the play's
fin al scene. That is, when Artemis denies her
involvement in the tragedy and aband ons her
"friend" Hippolytus, saying "I may not look upon
the dead, nor strain my sight with the anguish of
departing breath." (1465) Two thing s seem to
follow from this. First, gods cannot be relied upon
to aid humans in their quest for transcendence.
Second, it would seem as if Euripides' gods, at last,
can escape human tragedy.
The "second ending," however, will call
into question even the gods' ability to remain
external to the laws of tragedy. The tragedy's most
general "ending" comes earlier in the same horrifying speech; its moment is when Artemis blithely
announces to Hippolytus that,
Though you lie in the dark of earth, that
Wrong which Aphrodite's angry purpose wreaked on you
Shall be repaid, to vindicate your piety
And noble spirit. I will requite her, striking down
Myself, with this unfailing bow, whatever man
Her heart holds dearest in the world.

(1446)
It is hard to comprehend the brutal significance of these words. At the very least they mean
that there is yet another tragedy in store; this
tragedy will be an identical repetititon of the
Hippolytus, but with Artemis and Aphrodite reversing roles. One imagines this play beginning with

Artemis speaking the fateful words spoken· by
Aphrodite in the beginning of the present tragedy
"To those who reverence my power I show favor,
and throw t o the earth those I find arrogant and
~roud." (5) This new tragedy will continue, being
httle more than a horrible repetition of the first
just. as the Hippolytus itself was little more than ~
horrible repetition of Aphrodite's first speech.
· But this promised second tragedy is not all
that Artemis's fateful words portend. I think we
know enough about the horrible logic of revenge in
tragedies to see that Aphrodite will respond to
Artemis's vengeful gesture in kind, thus mechanically generating yet another horrible Hippolytus,
etc. (If this is true, then even the gods themselves
can become locked into the infinite tragic regression.) What is more, there is no reason to think that
our Hippolytus is the original link in the chain.
Perhaps, like the sin Theseus desires to escape, the
"original" act of the series occurred "in a distant
age" infinitely long ago. Thus we face the prospect
of the Hippolytus being a mere moment in an
infinite series of tragedies, extending backwards
and forwards forever.
Like the bull from the past that killed
Hippolytus, the play itself has suddenly crashed
through its bounds and roams freely through
history. It could re-emerge from the waters of time
at any moment. Thus, no longer can we guarantee
~hat the Hippolytus is not written about us today
JUSt as much as it is about its ancient Greek
characters. Thus, the second "ending" is not an
ending. As sons are also fathers, this "ending" is
also a beginning and middle. Thus it calls into
question those comfortable Aristotelian Poetic
categories: beginning, middle, and end; inside and
outside; player and spectator. The second ending
thereby implicates us in the tale. After the second
ending, transcendence is no longer the pressing
c?ncern only of Hippolytus and his tragic family;
smce we readers are possibly in the play, it is now
our concern too. Like Hipp olytus, Phaedra and
Theseus, we readers ourselves are challenged by
Euripides to transcend the "mortal laws" of our
own violent histories; failure to recognize this
challenge means running the risk that our personal
endings turn out as tragically as Hippolytus's. [My
recognition of my own implication in the Hippolytus inspired this essay. M.M.]
From the tragedy's double ending we have
seen the urgency of the question of transcendence
in the Hippolytus, (not only for its characters but

for its readers as well). Thus, perhaps we should
return to Euripides' most compelling vision of the
problem of transcendence, that vision arises in the
choral words quoted at the beginning of this paper:
0 to escape and lurk high under
Steep crags,
At the touch of a god to rise,
A wing'd bird among flying flocks!
To soar over the swell of the Adrian coast
Where, in lament for Phaetohon,
'
His sisters drop their piteous tears
Which glow like amber in the dark stream;
And then to reach that shore planted with
Apple-trees
Where the daughters of evening sing
Where the sea lord of the dark shallows
Permits to sailors no further passage
Establishing the solemn frontier of heaven
Which Atlas guards;
Where divine fountains flow beside
Zeus' marriage bed,
Where holy earth offers her choice fruits
To enrich the blissful gods.

(731)

The first feeling this poetry suggests is one
of a longing for great freedom. Flying as a bird,
one escapes gravity and earth-boundedness. One
has escaped one's conditions, sailing above and
beyond the particular places, laws, and tears of
one's fated existence.
Certainly, for all the
characters in the Hippolytus escape means a kind of
freedom. When Phaedra announces h~r escape plan
to kill herself she says, "[I plan] to die, but how I'll
order it is mine to choose." (724) As we have seen,
freedom here means both the negative freedom of
simply evading the conditions that predetermine or
fate one and also the more positive freedom of
autonomy.
The character of the transcendence depicted in the chorus's escape speech means more
than soaring freedom, however. For this freedom
comes as a result of a total transformation from
human to bird -- a kind of animal -- by means of
the interceding "touch of a god." The plight of the
characters in the Hippolytus is so desperate that the
transcendence they desire must be completely
radical. There seems to be no way to escape the
horrible conditions of humanity and still remain a
recognizable human being. The conditions and
complexities of being mortal seem so horrible to the
chorus that, like Phaedra and Hippolytus, it envies
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�animal. The fact tha t-a god is required to perform
this substantial transformation indicates even
more fully that the chorus believes there is no
possibility of independent human transcendence.
Yet, as the play's first ending shows, gods cannot
be relied upon in the mortal human world. What's
more, it is not clear that even they are sufficiently
beyond it to escape tragedy anyway.
We have seen the theme of a longing for
escape through animality and divinity already in
the Hippolytus. Phaedra's escapist dreams of wild
places, hunting, and horse-racing indicate a certain
abhorrence of things human. Hippolytus also
attempts to escape through hunting and riding
animals. He believes he can achieve this through
his ill-fated friendship with Artemis.
The second stanza of this escape poetry
reveals that even the freedom of soaring animality
does not suffice for a full escape of mor tal
conditions. To fully escape the conditions of
human mortality the chorus yearns to pass into a
radical Beyond -- a place where sailors are permitted no further passage past the Atlas-guarded frontiers of heaven. Again, as with Hippolytus's vision,
this is a place characterized by an unearthly
mixture of the subhuman natural and the superhuman supernatural, or divine: "Where holy earth
offers her choice fruits to enrich its blissful gods."
In the second stanza the bird's eye view is
dropped and the chorus seems to long to be present
with blissful gods in almost a divine fashion. Here
then, we find complete transcendence of all things
miserably mortal. All verbs in the passage are
either infinitives or in the blank . present tense.
There is a sense of timelessness in this condition
Beyond -- beyond human being, beyond human determinations, beyond human places, beyond human
times, beyond human suffering, beyond human
mortality.
This poetry of longing seems to me beautiful and I think one reason for this is the sense of
yearning, nostalgia, sadness that pervades it. The
passage is beautiful for the same reason the play
itself is successful -- we recognize the human
desire, suffering, and failure it depicts. The chorus
delivers the poem at a moment of great horror in
the play -- just after Phaedra announces her plan
to kill herself and destroy Hippolytus too. This
escape passage seems to serve as a moment of
sublime relief in the plot. It focuses our a tten ti on
on some safe, peaceful, and fanciful Beyond just as
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manifest futility of this escape dream, combined
with the contrast its content provides to the action
onstage, only serves to heighten the horror of the
tragedy as it unfolds. Even the escape to the poetic
sublime provides no escape, no transcendence. The
dream of timeless immortality only renders more
painful the drama's depiction of finite human
suffering.
The beautiful dream of escape and transcendence expressed in this passage is radically
impossible for mortal humans, just as all the other
escape dreams presented in the Hippolytus are
impossible. That very impossibility of transcendence is what renders tragic the tragedy of Hip-

Aristotle's Wheel
Cherie Craig ('89)

polytus.

1Editor's

note: Due to space limitations,
only the first two parts -- the introduction and the
Euripedes section of Mr. McShane's prize winning
essay -- are included here. The complete work is
available on file in the College Library.

The problem involved in the paradox of
"Aristotle's wheel" is one of geometrical correspondence. However, in order to understand what
actually is occurring geometrically, one must
understand the motions involved.
It is clear that the two concentric circles of
figure 1, travel an equal horizontal distance. (For
now, let those two distances be represented as
Ll=L2. ) Also, the smaller circle, being carried by
the larger, must rotate at the same angular rate as
the larger, (Rl =R2). We also know that if the larger
circle makes one complete rota ti on, the distance it
travels will be equal to its circumference, (Ll =Cl ).
Since RI equals R2, the circumference of the
smaller circle also makes one complete rotation; but
since Cl does not equal C2, then LI should not equal
L2 and C2 should equal L2. We seem to be left with
a circle rolling through a distance equal to its
circumference, yet moving farther than the length
of its circumference.

Fig. 1
B

D

c

However, the smaller circle is, in fact, not
rolling. When we say that the larger circle rolls, we
must recognize the two distinct motions involved:
its rotation and its horizontal movement. The hori zontal movement of the larger is acquired solely by
virtue of its rotational movement, because it cannot
rotate while resting on a surface without moving
forward. Therefore, if it rotates through a distance
equal to its circumference, then Cl equals LI. The
horizontal motion of the smaller of the two circles
is not due to its rotation, but due to the horizontal
motion of the larger circle, and therefore C2 does
not equal L2. Thus the smaller circle's rotational
movement is not acquired from its horizontal
motion, but from the rota ti on of the larger circle.
The larger circle imparts exactly as much motion
to the smaller circle as it itself possesses. The
smaller circle, then, is being moved horizontally
while being rotated, rather than itself actually
rolling. Rolling seems to occur when there is a
special correspondence, that is, equality, between
the length travelled and the length rotated.
The problem still remains, though, to account for how it is that the smaller circle rotates
through a smaller distance than it travels while its
circumference is actually in contact with the line
traversed. A point on the circumference of the
larger circle travels the same distance on that
circumference in a given time as the center of the
circle moves horizontally in that same time.
Therefore, they move with the same velocity. On

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�the circumference of the smaller circle, a point
travels a shorter distance than the center in that
same amount of time and conseque ntl y moves with
lesser linear velocity. (The angular velocity is the
same as that of the point on the larger circle, but
the linear velocity is not the same.) In reference
to figure 1, it becomes clear that as every point on
arc AB has a corresponding point on arc EF,
geometrically as well as in time, and as
AB=AC=ED, then every point of ED must correspond to a point on arc EF (even though they are
of unequal lengths). This same "type" of correspondence is illustrated [figures 2 and 3] by two
points moving along two unequal straight lines, or
a curve and its chord, in a given time.

-----&lt;---

B

E

c

A

Fig. 2
Ref erring to Figure 2, we may move line BC
such that point C will coincide with point A, while
BC remains perpendicular to AC. In Figure 3 we
may meet the requirement by moving both the line
and the curve with two given velocities in a given
time. However, the curve, being longer, must be
moved at a faster rate in order for the motion to
be completed in the same time. The semicircle AOB
rotates counterclockwise 18 0 degrees such that
point B of the curve passes through point 0 and
rests at point A. The segment AB slides to the left
such that point B of the segment passes through
point E and rests at point A. Figure 1 also requires
two motions with differing, yet uniform, linear
velocities. In a given time, we may slide the
segment ED to the left such that D will coincide
with E, at the same time moving Eat a slower rate
a long the arc EF such that it corresponds with F
[figure 4]. In this latter example we may obtain the
same effect, or relative motion, using motions
which are equal but opposite to those mentioned.

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Instead of moving segment ED to the left, we can
move the circle to the right, and instead of moving
E counter-clockwise along arc EF, we can rotate the
circle clockwise through arc EF. We thereby obtain
the two motions of the smaller circle and their
seemingly paradoxical effect.
We expect there to be the same relationship
between the two motions (namely, liner and angular) in the smaller circle as between those of the
larger circle, simply because they are both circles.
As a result, we fail to see that, although one of the
motions of the larger circle is dependent on the
other, the two motions of the smaller circle are
independent of each other. Once we recognize this ,
the behavior of the smaller circle should no longer
surprise us, and it is found to be no more problematic then the correspondence without equality as
we saw with Figures 2 and 3. Out of this, it must
be said that in order to understand what is
occurring geometrically when geometrical figures
are set in motion, we need to take the natures of the
motions involved into account. Geometry cannot
be separated from mechanics; rather, mechanics is
inherent in geometr y.
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The Beginning of Titne
Eugenia Bergeron ('92)

Eo-A ustralopitheca
leather scraped fish dried herbs brewed
her man away on a hunting trip
suddenly leisured
sits on sand before sparkling sunlit water
(notices playful progress of three dolphins
moving east to west
halfway between her feet and the horizon)
Eo-Australopitheca
my sister my double
perfectly acquainted with the Shaman's
view on eternity
transmitted through measureless eons
that then and now are one
never having questioned the wisdom
of ageless antiquity
at this hour
in this place
permits herself
to listen
to her senses

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�Eo-A ustralopitheca
having observed
the evenings and the mornings of many days
remembering
the playful progress of three dolphins
(moving east to west
halfway between her feet
and the horizon)
here then
there now
she sees as if afresh
unhurried unstopping unhastening
diagonally advancing waves
implying sequence
implying time
Eo-A ustralopitheca
(as all the waters under the firmament
wave by curling white-embroidered wave
approach her feet
each covering one tiny fraction more of sand)
chooses the evidence of her eyes
over the testimony of tradition
·knowing
that soon water will cover the island of sand
left by last night's low tide
glimpsing a small pale conical shell
pierced near the point
filled with sand
she speculates that
held aloft
the shell will empty
before the water
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�request as a gift, and asks him about its source,
saying, "How is it that thou askest drink of me,"
i.e., "What enables you to ask a favor of me?"

Behold The Latnb of God:
Christ and Men in the Gospel ofJohn
Kevin Graham ('90)

I. Introduction
Halfway through the first chapter of John's
Gospel, Jesus enters the narrative in the wilderness
beyond the Jordan River, where John is preaching.
1:29 The next day John seeth Jesus corning unto him, and saith,
Behold the Lamb of God which taketh away the sin of the world.
30 This is he of whom I said, After me cometh a man which is
preferred before me: for he was before me.
31 And I knew him not: but that he should be manifest to Israel,
therefore I am come baptizing with water.

John comes to baptise us with water and to
say to us, "Behold the Lamb of God," in order that
the chosen people of God may see Christ manifest.
Whoever Jesus is, he is identified by a relation to
us, as the Lamb who, sanctified, will take our sin
away. And whatever John's annunciation may
mean, John announces him to us for our sake. Thus
the Evangelist claims that we should want to know
who the Lamb of God is. And if we want to know
ourselves, we must consider what it means to have
sin which this Lamb must take away.
In this essay, I hope to discover just these
things: Who is Christ, and what are we that we need
such a Sa vi or? To this end, I will read a few of the
stories in John's Gospel closely, hoping to hear our
need articulated in the words of Mary Magdalene,
Simon Peter and others, and to hear Christ's
fulfillment of that need spoken in his words to
them. I am not asking whether we need Christ, but
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can only prepare us to answer that larger, more
fundamental question.
II. Christ and the Samaritan Woman at the Well
4:5 Then cometh he to a city of Samaria, which is called Sychar,
near to the parcel of ground thatJacob gave to his son Joseph.
6 Now Jacob's well was there. Jesus, therefore, being wearied
with his journey, sat thus on the well: and it was about the sixth
hour.
7 There cometh a woman of Samaria to draw water: Jesus saith
unto her, Give me to drink.
8 (For his disciples were gone away unto the city to buy meat.)
9 Then saith the woman of Samaria unto him, How is it that thou,
being a Jew, askest drink of me, which am a woman of Samaria?
for the Jews have no dealings with the Samaritans.

The scholars off er many explanations for
the Samaritan woman's surprise at Jesus' speaking
to her: religious and political feuding between the
Jews and the Samaritans, the social unacceptability
of a Jewish man speaking to a woman in public, the
ritual impurity of all Samaritan women. 1 Jesus'
words immediately break down these walls of
defensiveness and hostility, which normally prevent words exchanged between members of enemy
races from becoming conversations. He accomplishes this by an act of humility, forsaking the
high social rank a Jewish man would normally
assume in this situation in order to allow the
Samaritan woman to become his benefactor. I
think she wonders not so much at his simply
speaking to her, but more at the charity which
allows him to ask a favor of her. She recognizes his

4: 10 Jesus answered and said unto her, If thou knewest the gift
of God, and who it is that saith to thee, Give me to drink; thou
wouldest have asked of him, and he would have given thee living
water.
11 The woman saith unto him, Sir, thou hast nothing to draw
with, and the well is deep: from whence hast thou that living
water?
12 Art thou greater than our father Jacob, which gave us the
well, and drank thereof himself, and his children, and his cattle?

Jesus confirms her recognition of his gift,
and promises her that she does not know the whole
of it: his charity, which makes their conversation
possible, is of God. Moreover, he who speaks to her
is more extraordinary than she could know from
his simple words. Had she seen him for who he is
she would have known that he is the source of wha~
she needs most, Ii ving water.
Though Jesus offers no explanation of what
this mysterious living water is, the woman asks not
what it is, but whence he would get it. He cannot
draw it from the ground, for he has nothing with
which to draw even ordinary water from the well.
He must speak of a water not drawn from the
ground at all -- a water not of the body, but of the
spirit. Jesus seems to claim to be able to provide
more than the water and fer tile land she and her
people inherited from Jacob. The woman relies on
such blessings of God for preservation and prosperity. Now she asks Jesus whether he offers her a
greater gift of God.
4: 13 Jesus answered and said unto her, Whosoever drinketh
of this water shall thirst again;
14 But whosoever drinketh of the water I give him shall never
thirst; but the water I give him shall be in him a well of water
springing up into everlasting life .

In asking Jesus about the source of the
living water, the woman implicitly asks him about
its character. Likewise, in speaking about the
character of the living water, Jesus speaks implicitly a bout its source. Jes us says that the quenching
power of living water is different in kind from that
of ordinary water. While ordinary water leaves the
body temporarily satisfied but dependent on a well
dug in to the ground for replenishment, living
water becomes a perpetually sustaining spring in
the spirit. Bodily thirst cannot be quenched thus,
nor can the life of the body be sustained everlastingly: this must be a water of the spirit, springing

forth from the Spirit of God. The woman's hope
is confirmed: Jesus speaks of a new blessing from
God for His people, which will truly sustain them
in spirit, and not just in body. She need no longer
rely on the well dug by Jacob for Jesus offers her
a new source of life, or perhaps a new kind of life
altogether.
4:15 The woman saith unto him, Sir, give me this water, that I
thirst not, neither come hither to draw.
16 Jesus saith unto her, Go, call thy husband, and come hit
her.
17 The woman answered and said, I have no husband. Jesus
said unto her, Thou hast said well, I have no husband:
18 For thou hast had five husbands; and he whome thou now
hast is not thy husband: in that thou saidst truly.
19 The woman saith unto him, Sir, I perceive thou art a prophet.

The woman asks for the water which Jesus
offered and claimed she needed. Jesus seems to
have succeeded in showing her who he is and why
she needs him. Yet he withholds her fulfillment
telling her to go fetch her husband. The woma~
neither lies to cover up her shameful string of
living arrangements nor leaves in shame as though
to call her husband, sulking in the misery of her
unworthiness of Christ's gift. 2 Rather, she makes
the least embarrassing statement she can of her
situation, "I have no husband." Jesus praises her
for speaking as well as a person can under the
circumstances and says that he knows all about her
past husbands and her present lover.
The woman's first surprise is at Jesus'
diviner's knowledge of her life; she cannot doubt
that he is a seer as well as the bearer of the new gift
of God. But perhaps her second surprise is the
greater: though this prophet knows her life intimately, he does not condemn her for her sin. To
discover that God knows us perfectly is terrifying,
for we know we bear the mark of our sin. But to
discover that God knows us intimately and yet
loves us is joyous, for such a God would almost be
a friend. The woman is beginning to think that she
has discovered just such a God in Jes us' words; now
she asks about this friendship with God.
4: 19 The woman saith unto him, I perceive that thou art a
prophet.
20 Our fathers worshipped in this mountain; and ye say, that in
Jerusalem is the place where men ought to worship the Father.
21 Jesus saith unto her, Woman, believe me, the hour cometh,
and now is, when neither in this mountain, noryet in Jerusalem,
shall ye worship the Father.
22 Ye worshipye know not what: we know what we worship: for
salvation is of the Jews.
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�shall worship the Father in spirit and in truth: for the Father
seeketh such to worship him.
24 God is a Spirit: and they that worship him must worship him
in spirit and in truth.

By stating what she and Jesus both know
about the religious division between the Jews and
the Samaritans, the woman hints at a question that
springs from a hope so great and so dear that she
dares not give her question a voice: "May even we,
the outcasts of Israel, rejoin the family of God?"
Much of her life must have been shaped by being
outcast, as a Samaritan, as a woman, and as an
adulterer. The charity of Jesus' words has kindled
hope in her. To no one else could she voice her
desire to rejoin the family of the chosen.
Jes us speaks about the true worship of God
as he spoke about living water: as he compared
ordinary water, which sustains the body temporarily, to living water, which sustains the spi rit everlastingly, so he compares the worship of the Father
in many places to the worship of the Father outside
of place, in spirit and in truth. Spirit and truth will
unite true worshippers with one another and with
the Father across all barriers, and will lift them to
a higher worship which is impossible in the bodily
world. And Jesus specifically says, "The hour
cometh when ye shall worship the Father thus: "the
community of God shall indeed include you, the
outcast and despised.
Jesus' words fulfill the woman's desire and
reward her hope. What began as a casual conversation has revealed the Kingdom of God to her. She
stands in awe before the man who has released her
from. e.xile an? welcomed her into the community
of sp1nt. The JOY of her soul tells her that he is God ·
again, she dares not voice a hope so dear in ~
question, but masks it in a declaration.
4:25 The woman saith unto him, I know that Messiah cometh
which is call~d Christ: when he is come , he will tell us all things'.
26 Jesus saith unto her, I that speak unto thee am he.
27 And upon this came his disciples, and marvelled that he
talked with the woman: yet no man said, Whatseekest thou? or,
Why talkest thou with her?
28 The woman left herwaterpot, and went her way into the city
and saith to the men,
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29 Come, see a man, which told me all things that I ever did: is
this not the Christ?

The evidence the woman offers that Jesus
is the Christ is that he knows everything she ever
did. Knowing her enables Jesus to minister to her
deepest need, the nee'd for communion. She needs
a M~s~iah who knows her and yet loves her by
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her the gift of the Spirit, which will sustain her
everlastingly and enable her to join the community
of spirit in God.
III. Christ and the Man Born Blind
In the beginning of the Gospel's seventh
chapter, Jesus sends his disciples to the Feast of the
Booths in Jerusalem, saying that he will remain in
Galilee; but he follows them to the feast in secret
and comes to the Temple to teach openly. The Feast
of Booths, or of Tabernacles, is a memorial of
Israel's wandering in the wilderness, when
Abraham's children were purged of their wickedness.3 Appropriately, Jesus speaks of the Jews' need
for his redemption beyond what the Covenant of
Abraham and the Law of Moses give them; the
p~ople take up stones to kill Jesus for putting
himself above Abraham, but he passes out of their
midst and into the streets.
9: 1 And as Jesus passed by, he saw a man who was blind from
his birth.
2 And his disciples asked him, saying, Master, who did sin, this
man, or his parents, that he was born blind?
3 Jesus answered, Neither hath this man sinned, nor his
parents: but that the works of God should be made manifest
in him.
4 I must work the works of him that sent me, while it is day : the
night cometh when no man can work.
5 As long as I am in the world, I am the light of the world.
6 When he had thus spoken, he spat on the ground, and made
clay of the spittle, and anointed the eyes of the blind man with
the clay.
7 ~d said u~to him, Go, wash in the pool of Siloam, (which is,
by mterpretatton, Sent.) He went his way therefore, and washed,
and came seeing.

Jesus answers the disciples' question about
the cause of suffering not by explaining the
necessity of punishment for sin, but by healing the
man outright. The man, Jesus says, was born blind
so that the work of God might be made manifest
in his healing; something of God is revealed in the
healing of the man's impairment which could not
have been seen were he not impaired. But to whom
is the work of God revealed, to those watching or
to the man who is healed? And what is seen in the
work of God?
9:8 The neighbors therefore, and they which before had seen
him that he was blind, said, Is not this he that sat and begged?
9 Some said, This is he: others said, He is like him: but he said,
I am he.
10 Therefore they said unto him, How were thine eyes opened?
11 He answered and said, A man that is called Jesus made clay,
a?d anointed mine eyes, and said unto me, Go to the pool of
Siloam, and wash: and I went and washed, and I received sight.

12 Then they said unto him, Where is he? He said, I knovi not.
13 They brought to the Pharisees him that was afore time blind.

The man's neighbors do not wonder that he
sees, but that he has been healed. To see is not
uncommon; but to restore the sigh t of the blind is
unheard of. Such a wonder seems inexplicable so
the man's neighbors forego asking, "How co~ld
Jesus do that?" Instead, they ask where Jesus is.
Perhaps they are merely curious about a worker of
wonders. But might they not want to seek Jesus out
.themselves, hoping that he might heal their
spuits?. Such a longing to be made whole in spirit
':ould imply a deep feeling of incompletion and
sickness, so close to the core of our souls as to be
almost unspeakable.
When the man fails to direct them to Jes us
his neighbors bring him to the leaders of th~
church. Surely they do not desire to convict him
of being healed by an unknown, unauthorized
prophet. It seems more likely that they seek the
Pharisees' opinion about whether the one who
opened the eyes of their blind friend might be able
to heal them too.

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9: 13 They brought to the Pharisees him that was aforetime
blind .
14 And it was the sabbath day, when Jesus made the clay and
opened his eyes.
1~ 1'.1en again t~e Pharisees also asked him how he had received
his sight. He said unto them, He put clay upon mine eyes, and
I washed, and do see.
16 Therefore said some of the Pharisees, This man is not of God,
because he.kee~th not the sabbath day. Others said, How can
a man that Is a smner do such works? And there was a division
among them.
17 They say unto the blind man again, What sayest thou of him,
that he hath opened thine eyes? He said, He is a prophet.

A student of the Law might respond to the
man's story by saying that a man with power such
as Jesus' must be divine, or by noting with surprise
that Jesus worked the miracle on the Sabbath. But
Jesus' app~rent divinity should overshadow any
legal quest10ns about the conditions of his work
and it is troubling that the Pharisees see th~
situation in reverse. The skeptical Pharisees accuse
Je~us of a. literal violation of the Law; the sympathizers voice their wonder only in the context of the
legal question. The man born blind perceives God's
work more clearly; his simple statement "He is a
prophet," reflects an unshakeable visi~n of the
great wonder of Jesus' healing.
9: 18 B~t the J~ws did not believe concerning him, that he had
been blmd, until they called the parents of him that had received

his sight.
19 And .they asked them, saying, Is this your son, who ye say was
born blmd? how then doth he now see?
20 His parents answered them and said, We know that this is our
son, and that he was born blind:
21 But b~ what means he now see th, we know not; or who hath
opened his .eyes, we know not: he is of age; ask him: he shall
speak for himself.
22 These words spake his parents, because they feared the
Jews: for the Jews had agreed already, that if any man did
confess that he was Christ, he should be put out of the synagogue.
23 Therefore said his parents, He is of age; ask him.

I~ order to corroborate the man's testimony,
Phansees seek testimony of the healing, from
parents who know well that the Pharisees seek
evidence about Jesus' work not in order to believe
but to condemn, and to threaten their opponents
with expulsion from the synagogue. Now, the
man's parents know their son, and that he sees; and
surely they do not doubt that he speaks honestly
a?out t~e healing. Why, then, do they not support
his testimony? As parents, they should rejoice that
Jesus has opened the eyes of the son they bore into
darkness. As human beings, they should rejoice in
the hope that Jesus can make them whole in spirit
as he made their son whole in body. Their reticence
may signify that they do not yet feel this second joy
because they fail to see how Jes us' power to heal the
bo~y might also be a power to heal the spirit. For
wh1l.e fear ?1ight quell their joy over bodily
healing, the JOY of seeing Jesus' power to redeem
overwhelms all fears, as their son's boldness shows.

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9:24 Then again called they the man that was blind, and said
unto him, Give God the praise: we know thatthis man is a sinner.
25 He answered and said, Whether he is a sinner or no I know
not: one thing I know, that, whereas I was blind, now see.
26 Then they said to him again, What did he to thee? how
opened he thine eyes?
27 He answered them, I have told you already, and ye did not
hear: wherefore would ye hear it again? will ye also be his
disciples?

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Facing conclusive evidence of the man's
healing, the Pharisees advise him to attribute his
healing to God and not to Jesus. In doing this they
probably seek both to control Jesus' popularity, and
to teach the man the truth about the agency of his
he~ling. The ~an responds that he knows only one
thmg, that he is healed. By this he seems to mean
that whatever may make sense and whatever he
may not understand about healing, he knows that
he has been made whole. The knowledge that a
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�healing implies the promise of spiritual restoration
must be so great and so brilliant that all other
knowledge looks dim and shabby by compa r ison.
Jesus proposed himself to be the light of the blind
man's world by doing this healing work of his
Father. When the man sees such a light, he sees that
in order to know anything he must see it in this
light.
Just as the light of the world is the first
principle for the man born blind, so is the Law of
Moses the first principle for the Pharisees. The man
born blind has told them a new thing, but they hear
only an apparent violation of the Law. They offer
th e man th eir best counsel a bout his healing in li ght
of the Law, and he discards it. Again they ask for
evidence with which they may convict Jesus under
the Law, and thus serve the Law. The man refuses,
saying that he has already told them his story,
which is far more important to them as potential
believers than it could ever be as lawyers; they will
not hear it in any important way if they listen so
as to con vi ct rather than so as to be restored.
9:28 Then they reviled him, and said, Thou art his disciple: but
we are Moses' disciples.
29 We know that God spake unto Moses: as for this fellow, we
know not from whence he is.
30 The man answered and said unto them, Why herein is a
marvellous thing, that ye know not whence he is, and yet he hath
opened mine eyes.
31 Now we know that God heareth not sinners: but if a man be
a worshipper of God, and doeth his will, him he heareth.
32 Since the world began it was not heard that any man opened
the eyes of one that was born blind.
33 If this man were not of God, he could do nothing.
34 They answered and said I unto him, Thou wast altogether
born in sins, and dost thou teach us? And they cast him out.

The Pharisees love the Law because through
their study of it, God converts their souls and
enlightens their eyes by revealing His will to them
in its perfect purity and righteousness [Psalm 19:711]. But thei r love of the Law has grown out of
proportion: they have taken it not for a guide
toward the light of the world, but for that light
itself and are therefore unable to see the true light
which is come into the world. When God works a
new thing by restoring sight to the blind, they see
it not as something surpassing the Law, but only as
something outside the Law. When the man born
blind challenges them to see God's new work of
healing, they cast him out. They fail to see the main
lesson of the Law: that all have sinned and fallen
short of God's glory, and cannot share in that glory
without the healing Christ offers. Their vision of
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IV. Christ and Mary Magdalene at the Tomb ·
9:35 Jesus heard that they had cast him out; and when he had
found him, he said unto him, Dost thou believe on the Son of
God?
36 He answered and said, Who is he, Lord, that I might believe
on him?
37 And Jesus said unto him, Thou hast both seen him, and it is
he that talketh with thee.
38 And he said, Lord, I believe. And he worshipped him.

Jes us does not ask the man, "Do you believe
that I am the Son of God?" but more generally, "Do
you believe that there is a Son of God, a Redeemer
of men?" The man asks Jesus to identify the
Redeemer. For if Jesus is not the Redeemer, then
he must wait for the Redeemer to come to fulfill
the promise contained in his healing. The man has,
however, been enlightened, he knows that his
bodily restoration signifies the spiritual restoration to come.
Jesus fulfills this hope, he says that the man
has both seen the light of the world in his own
healing by Jes us, and now hears the Son of God
identify himself with that light. Somehow we all
need both to see the Light and to hear the Word.
When Jesus restores us to our natural wholeness,
and in his healing of us we see the Light, we are
ready for Jesus to talk with us. Jesus offers to speak
to all of us, even those who did not walk with him
as contemporaries. This is the work of the Spirit
of Truth, whom Jesus sends us in order to tell us
all things.
9:39 And Jesus said, For judgment.I am come into this world,
that they which see not might see; and that they which see might
be made blind.
40 And some of the Pharisees which were with him heard these
words, and said unto him, Are we blind also?
41 Jesus said unto them, Hye were blind, ye should have no sin:
but now ye say, We see; therefore, your sin remaineth.

By "the blind," Jesus probably means those
whom he heals by removi ng their si n, thus revealing to them the Light. But by "the sighted," Jesus
cannot mean people altogether unimpaired by sin;
perhaps they have a partial vision of God, such as
the Pharisees gain from their study of the Law. It
is their claim to complete vision which prevents
them from admitting their need for Christ's healing. The Pharisses fail by not tempering their
delight in the Law with a feeling of imperfection
and of need for a healing which the Law cannot
provide.

The disciples scatter into the night when
Jesus is betrayed and arrested. Only Peter and
another, most likely John, follow Jesus to the palace
of the high priest, where Peter denies Christ]. Only
John is present at the crucifixion; he stands before
the cross with three other followers: Mary, mother
of Jesus, Mary, wife of Cleophas, and Mary
Magdalene. This is John's first mention of Mary
Magdalene; Luke says that Jesus cast seven deamons out of her and that she and some other women
Jesus healed supported him and the disciples by
their own means. She is also presumably one of the
women who help bury Jesus' body. 4
20:1 The first day of the week cometh Mary Magdalene early,
when it was yet dark, unto the sepulchre, and seeth the stone
taken away from the sepulchre.
2 Then she runneth and cometh to Simon Peter, and to the other
disciple, whom Jesus loved, and saith unto them, They have
taken the Lordoutof the sepulchre, and we know not where they
have laid him.

The joy of the Resurrection begins in
bewilderment and despair. After the wild joy of
the triumphal entry into Jerusalem has fallen into
the darkness and despair of the betrayal, the trial,
and the crucifixion, Mary comes to the tomb,
immediately after the Sabbath, presumably to
anoint Jesus' body and finish her ministry to his
worldly needs.5 She comes out of love, and out of
devotion, not knowing what else to do. Yet even
her last service to Christ is denied her, for she finds
an open tomb. In her despair, she can only conceive
of one explanation, that grave robbers have taken
the corpse of Jesus. Now the darkness of Mary's
world is complete, the last ember of its light having
been extinguished. She must tell someone, find
support somewhere, she runs to tell the disciples.
20:3 Peter therefore went forth, and that other disciple, and
came to the sepulchre.
4 So they ran both together: and the other disciple did outrun
Peter, and came first to the sepulchre.
5 And stooping down, and looking in, saw the linen clothes; yet
he went not in.
6 Then cometh Simon Peter following him, and went into the
sepulchre, and seeth the linen clothes lie,
7 And the napkin, that was about his head, not lying with the
linen clothes, but wrapped together in a place by itself.
8 Then went in also that other disciple, which came first to the
sepulchre, and he saw, and believed.
9 For as yet they knew not the scripture, that he must rise again
from the dead.
10 Then the disciples went away again into their own home.

Peter and John's reac tion to the news of the
open tomb is not despai ring, as is Ma r y's, but
hopeful. Either the hope that Jes us has escaped the
tomb or the fear that his body has been stolen could
bring them running to the tomb, but only hope
could carry Peter into the tomb itself to examine
the burial garments. Fear would ask no more than
to see the empty linens from the door. Once Peter
has entered the tomb out of hope and steadfast love
for Jesus, John can follow. In the dim light of the
early morning, John sees exactly what Peter saw.
By the guess of most scholars, the reason Peter and
John conclude that the corpse has not been stolen
is because grave robbers, not wanting to carry a
naked corpse around, would not have bothered to
unwrap the body. 6
Most of us, like Peter, would now be able to
hope that the body had not been stolen. But without
seeing the living Jesus, we could hardly believe that
a man has overcome death, would not this imply
that men are no longe r mortal? Yet John puts faith
in Jes us' resurrection. John has been chosen to
possess both great vision and great belief: the
Evangelist calls him both "the disciple whom Jesus
loved" and the disciple "which also leaned on his
breast at supper, and said, Lord, which is he that
betrayeth thee?" Yet remarkable as his faith here
is, one thing is denied him -- to see Jesus risen. And
only this vision brings understanding of the resur rection and its place in God's plan as shown in the
Scriptures.
20: 11 But Mary stood without at the sepulchre weeping: and as
she wept, she stooped down, and looked into the sepulchre,
12 And see th two angels in white sitting, the one at the head, and
the other at the feet, where the body of Christ had lain.
13 And they say unto her, Woman, whyweepest thou? She saith
unto them, Because they have taken away my Lord, and I know
not where they have laid him.
14 And when she had thus said, she turned herself back, and
saw Jesus standing, and knew not that it was Jesus.

When Mary summons her strength to look
within the tomb, she sees two angels, who ask her
why she weeps. Their question prepares her to see
Christ resurrected by prompting her to voice her
need to find Jesus. But they cannot console her. So
overwhelming is her emptiness that messengers
from Heaven seem but a shadow of what she has
lost. She turns from them, failing even to wonder
at their presence: could Heaven fail to notice the
extinguishing of the light of the world? Now Mary
feels the deepest sorrow and the deepest need that

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�any human being has ever felt, and perhaps
possibly ever could feel. She is prepared to see the
risen Christ.

them, I ascend to my Father, and your Father; and to my God,
and your God.
18 Mary Magdalene came and told the disciples that she had
seen the Lord, and that he had spoken these things unto her.

20: 14 And when she had thus said, she turned herself back, and
saw Jesus standing, and knew not that it was Jesus.
15 Jesus saith unto her, Woman, why weepest thou? Whom
seekest thou? She, supposing him to be the gardener, saith unto
him, Sir, if thou have borne him h ence, tell me where thou h ast
laid him, and I will take him away.
16 Jesus saith unto her, Mary. She turned herself, and saith unto
him, Rabboni.: which is to say, Master.

Now the work of Christ on earth is almost
complete: having been raised up and having drawn
us up to him to become sons of the Father, it only
remains for him to breathe forth the Spirit into us
and send us forth into the world. When we have
seen the r isen Christ with Mary Magdalene, our
work as disciples, or learners, is complete, and we
are ready to become apostles, or, those sent forth.

Mary is at first unable to see Jesus, who,
seemingly, has been transfigured. In her despair,
an y unfamiliar man would look like someone wh o
mi ght have taken Jesus' body. 7 Jesus begins to
re ach out to her in order to reveal himself to her,
asking, "Why do you weep? Whom do you seek?"
Mary's answer, "Where have you taken him?" shows
that she can't imagine anyone failing to know
wh ose tomb is empty and that what she seeks is not
Jesus' body, but Jesus himself.
Then Jesus says, "Mary." She hears him, and
turn s her soul to see him. He speaks her name with
the breath of divine charity. He is nowhere in what
he says. Where before he revealed himself by
saying "I am he," now the first person in n o way
enters his words. Thus he gives himself over to her
com pletely, to be her healer and comforter. He
ope ns himself completely to show forth his glory as
div ine love. Her deepest need is filled by the
revelation of Christ to the ears and the eyes of her
sou l.
Mary sees the risen Christ and says,
"Rabbi," which must be understood to mean
"Teacher." A teacher cannot simply reveal things
to his student. He must know her and reach out to
fill her need with a word spoken in char ity; for
onl y such a word can truly fill the need of an
animal with speech. Mary is prepared to hear the
word because she knows that Jesus is the source of
her life and because she feels the sorrow appropriate to the loss of that sou rce. Hearing that word
enables her to turn to see the glorified Christ as our
Teacher, and to see something of the Father in him.
T o teach is to speak the word of love and thus reveal
something of the Father to the hearer,: it is the mos t
perfect of Christ's works. To learn is to prepare
ourselves to receive his word , so that he can make
us whole and reveal the Father to us.
20:17 Jesus saith unto her, Touch me not; for I am not yet
ascended to my Father: but go to my brethren and say unto

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V. Christ and Simon Peter at the Sea of Tib erias
After appearing to Mary Magdalene before
the empty tomb, Jesus appears twice to his discip les,
once during the evening of that same day and again
eight days later. John concludes his Gospel after
recording these events in the twentieth chapter, but
goes on to write the following epilogue.
21:1 After these things .Jesus showe d himself again to the
disciples at the sea of Tiberias; and o n this wise shewe d he
himself.
2 There were together Simon Peter, and Thomas calle d Di
dymus, and Nathanael of Cana in Galilee, and the sons of
Zebedee , and two other of the disciples.
3 Simon Peter saith unto them, I go a fishing. They say unto him,
We also go with th ee. They went forth, and entered into a ship
immediate ly; and that ni ght they caught nothing.
4 But when the morning was now come, Jesus stood on the
shore: but the disciples knew not that it was Jesus.
5 ThenJesussaith unto them, Children, have ye any meat? They
answere d him, No.
6 Then Jesus said unto them, Cast the net on the right side of
the ship, and ye shall find. They cast the net therefore, and now
they were not able to draw it in for the multitude of fishes.
7 Therefore, that disciple whom Jesus loved saith unto Peter,
It is the Lord. Nowwhen Simon Peter heard that it was the Lord,
he girt his fisher's coat unto him, (for he was naked,) and did cast
himself into the sea.

The image of food first appears in John's
Gospel after Jesus speaks to the Samaritan woman
at the well. When the disciples return from the city
with food and urge Jesus to eat, he replies, "I have
meat to eat that ye know not of... My meat is to do
the will of him that sent me, and to finish his
work." Bringing the Samaritan woman into the
Kingdom of God nourishes Jesus' spirit: acts of
love sustain the spirit's new life which living water
begets. Jes us tells the disciples to look upon the
fields of the world, ripe for the harvest of the food
men need most, "the fruit unto life eternal." Later,
following the feeding of the multitude, Je sus

speaks of himself as the bread of life, meaning that
the belief in the redeeming power of his crucifixion sustains our spirit into eternity.
Now the Son of Man has been raised up, and
has ~rawn us up to him; the disciples, having eaten
of his flesh and drunk of his blood fallow Peter
into the field of the world to reap ~hat God has
so~n, and onto the sea of life t o draw up the meat
which dwells therein. They toil fruitles sly all night
until Jesus ap pears on the shore at dawn.8 At his
urging, they persevere to cast once more· when
their net fills to overflowing, John percei ;es that
the one who made possible and then rewarded their
final eff ort must be the Lord. John tells Peter what
he sees, and Peter leaps into the sea to swim to Jesus:
so strong is his love for the sower whose harvest he
reaps.
21:8 And the other disciples came in a little ship; (for they were
not far from land, but as it were two hundred cubits dragging
the net with fishes.)
'
9 As soon as they were come to land, they saw a fire of coals
there, and fish laid thereon, and bread.
10 Jesus saith unto them, Bring of the fish which ye have now
caught.
1.1 Simon Peter went up, and drew the net to land full of great
fishes, an hundred and fifty and three: and for all there were so
many, yet was not the net broken.
12 Jesus saith unto them, Come and dine . And none of the
disciples durst ask him, Who art thou? knowing that it was the
Lord.
1_3 ~en ~esus cometh, and taketh bread, and giveth them, and
fish hkewise.
1~ 1:llis is now the third time that Jesus shewed himself unto the
d1sc1ples, after that he was risen from the dead.

Jes us invites the disciples to add some of
their_ abundant harvest to what he is already
cook mg, and to share with him the feast of life of
whi~h ~e told them beside Jacob's well [4:36]. The y
eat m silent wonder at the t oil of the night, at the
bou?ty of the morning, and at the transfigured
Chnst who made their labor and their harvest
possible. I wonder what it was like to eat of the
feast of the Kingdom of God, on the shore of the
world into ~hich they were about to set out, sharing
that feast with a Son of God unfamiliar to them in
looks, but unforgettable to them in acts of love and
gifts of grace.
21: 15 So when they had dined, Jesus saith to Simon Peter,
Simon,. son of Jonas, lovest thou me more than these? He saith
unto him, Yea, Lord; thou knowest that I love thee. He saith
unto him, Feed my Iambs.
16 He saith unto him again the second time, Simon, son of Jonas,
lovest thou me? He saith unto him, Yea, Lord; thou knowest that
I love th~e. He sa~th unto him, Feed my sheep.
17 Hesa1th untoh1m the third time, Simon, son of Jonas, Iovest

~?ou me? Peter was grieved because he said unto him the third
time, Lovest thou me? And he saith unto him Lord thou
knowest all things; thou knowest that I love th~e. J~sus saith
unto him, Feed my sheep.

. J.esus singles out Simon Peter from among
the disciples and asks him for an aff irma ti on that
his love is greater than that of his fellows.
Throughout the Gospel, Peter is the disciple of
steadfast love and the leader of the faithful as the
beginning of this story illustrates. When' Jesus'
followers dwindle, after his discourse on the bread
of lif7, and Jesus asks the disciples whether they
too will leave him, it is Peter who says, "Lord, to
':horn shall we go? Thou hast the words of eternal
hf e." Jesus' question points out Peter's need to love
Jes us before all others and more than all others if
he is to found the church in the world.
Jesus' question changes when he repeats it.
Rather than reminding Peter of his special duty to
the commandment of love, Jesus seems to be
doub~ing Peter's devotion to him altogether. Peter's
react10n changes from puzzlement to pain as Jesus
prods. him with his guilt and weakness, asking his
question once for each of Peter's denials: The
prospect of setting out to fish for men seems much
less promising to him now; he remembers well how
hope c_an fail during night's toil. How can he hope
that his love for Jesus will sustain his spirit once
Jesus has departed?
2!: 18 Verily, verily, I say unto thee, When thou wast young, thou
girded thyself, and walked whither thou wouldest: but when
thous~alt be old, thou shalt stretch forth thy hands, and another
shall gird thee, and carry thee whither thou wouldest not.
19 This spake he, signifying bywhat death he should glorifyGol
And when he had spoken this, he saith unto him, Follow me.

By his strange, vague statement about
Peter's destiny, John, and I suppose Peter as well
understands Jesus to propesy that Peter will suff e;
martyrdom, perhaps by arrest and crucifix ion. The
sea's darkness grows deeper in Peter's mind. He
must steel himself against the possibility that his
night's toil will end not only in fruitlessness but
also in pe rsecution and a painful death. The
darkest specters man knows, spiritual barrenness
and bodily suffering, never loomed more ominous
than they do before Peter now. 9
Then Jesus says to Peter, "Follow me." He
~peaks not of a lonely journey, but of a guided
Journey, and this makes all the difference. Even
the first disciple cannot toil through the night
alone and hope to succeed. But the image of the

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�apostles setting forth, leaving Jesus behind on the
shore, or absent altogether, is wrong, for Christ's
role in it is insufficient. Where Peter expected to
seek his own way, Jesus promises to lead him.
Darkness may sometime come upon us as we labor,
because of failing love or fear of death, but the
Light of the world goes always before us, that we
may work in his eternal day.
VI. Conclusion
These four stories do not speak of what
Christ offers each of four different kinds of
people, those who are like the Samaritan woman,
those who are like Simon Peter, etc. The need for
redemption which we all share is far greater than
what sets us apart from one another. This is why
each of us can join the one fold which the Good
Shepherd guides and protects.
Though most of us do not share the political
and religious exile of the Samaritan woman, exile
from the family of God is common to all people
because all have sinned. Jesus welcomes us into the
community of spirit by saying to us that he knows
us and our sin, but for gives us and loves us as
brethren and friends. To receive the Spirit and
enter the Kingdom of God is to drink of the living
water which becomes a well springing up within us
to sustain us everlastingly.
We share the blindness of the man whose
sight Jesus restored, if not in body, then in spirit,
by virtue of our sin. But Jes us says that we are
blind in order that we may see the God's healing
work manifest in us. Once we se.e this work in
Christ's being raised up and taking our sins upon
himself, we, like the man born blind, know only one
thing: whereas we were blind, now we see. When
we know this, we are ready to receive the Spirit, so
that Christ may talk with us as well as be seen by
us.
When we share with Mary Magdalene both
the knowledge that Christ is our very life and the
sorrow appropriate to the loss of that life, we feel
the deepest sorrow and the deepest need that a
person could ever feel. Then we are ready to hear
Christ speak the word of love and to see him as our
Teacher.
In order to begin the work of Christ in the
world, we must, along with Peter, know the
weakness of our love and see the dark specter of the
trials we must face. Then we are ready to hear
Jesus' command, "Follow me," the promise that he
will light our way and make our toil fruitful.

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Christ is the Redeemer who forgives our
sins and restores our sight, welcoming us into the
Kingdom of God; moreover, he is the Teacher who
lifts us out of our deepest despair to hear his word
of love, to see him revealed in glory, and to reap
the harvest of the field he has sown. We are the
exiles with whom Christ reunites, and the sick
whom he makes well; moreover, we are the disciples
who need to hear Christ's word of love and to see
him revealed, and the apostles who do his work in
the world.

Untitled
Laurae Melbin ('92)

1:12 But as many as received him, to them he gave the power
to become the sons of God ...

she argued everything he said
refused to agree or even listen to him
but he loved her anyway.
1Raymond Brown, The Anchor Bib le: The Gospel According to
John, I-XII, vol. 29, Gardern City, NY: Doubleday &amp; Cop., Inc., 1966, note
to 4:9, p. 170.
2Jews, and presumably their Samaritan relatives, were only
permitted three marriages; thus, her past two marriages and her present
co-habitation would all be considered adultery, a capital offence. [Brown,
op.cit., note to 4:18, p. 171. Leviticus 20:10.]
3Deuteronomy 16:13-15 and 31:9-13; Leviticus 23:39-43.

she slapped him in public because of her irritation
numbly he stood back and waited for her to stop screaming
and slapped her back
and she held him while he cried
he became proof to himself that people he had scorned
women who remained with abusive men
henpecked husbands
were helpless and he was guilty of hypocrisy

419:38-42; Matthew 27:57-61; Mark 15:42-47; Luke 23:50-56.
SMark 16:1, 2; Luke 24:1.
6Brown, The Anchor Bible: The Gospel According to John,
XIII-XX!, vol. 29A, Garden City, NY: Doubleday &amp; Co pl, Inc., 1970, notes
to 20:5, 7, pp. 985-987.
?The simplest explanation of the slowness of Mary and, later, of
the disciples to recognize Jesus after the resurrection if that he just looks
different. This argument is supported by this passage, John's story of the
appearance at Tiberias, and by Luke's story of the appearance on the road
to Emmaus.
8Darkness falls only three times during the Gospel: when the
disciples set out across the Sea of Tiberias without Jesus, when Judas
leaves the supper to betray Jesus, and in this scene ..
9Brown, op. cit., note to 21:18, pp. 1106-1108

Bibliography
Brown, Raymond, The Anchor Bible: The Gospel According to John, vol.
29 (I-XII) and 29A (XIl-XXI), Garden City, NY: Doubleday &amp; Co., Inc.,
1966 and 1970.
The Holy Bible, Oxford: University Press.

he loved her he wanted her to have their children
and she would kiss his face gently and repeat that
it would make her fat
so much more fun this way
sometimes he didn't know how he could stand it
he suprised her with dinner
he loved to cook
she laughed and called him a wimp
you're not a real man she said
he despised her
he became a symbol of chains and she was the only way out
but she wouldn't let him near her
she curled a way from him in bed sometimes
put pillows between them
he knew her indifference fascinated him and held him
and despised himself for he believed that he was weak
she would block her ears humming loudly to discourage his attempts to
communicate
finally when he gave up she found the house empty
sat in a chair humming loudly with her hands over her ears.

�of the predatory birds.
But the dead
he says frowning slightly,
avoiding my eyes,
never let you stop loving.

Corning To in the Fatherland
Jessica Lamb

He has been away
what seems like a lifetime,
in Africa stalking rhinos
with arrows, like a native,
and thanks to his native stealth,
he returns wealthy,
though weathered and past his prime.
"Just missed a tusk in my gut
last safari," he tells us .
"I took that as a sign.
Not fear sent me home,
but recognition of time's flight."
A dangerous business
for a man getting on
in years.
We are sitting on the front proch
watching the rain move over the mountains,
flashing;
he is recalling the violent deaths
of wild animals.
A difficult recognizance begun
carefully with anecdotes.
An antelope fled headlong
through his window, once,
and bled to death on the living room floor.
The stripped green of his gaze
sharpens with humor.
It happens, he says,
to this unprotected flesh.
And holds towards me, embarrassed,
his hand to be quickly clasped.
"'Nature is a bloodthirsty mother,"
he explains, and goes on to tell
of tiger attacks on elephant herds ,
of the constant stench
of carrion,

I am wearing ivory earrings
made from his last kil1.
For his son he brought a leopard skin.
Peace offerings.
How his little on es have grown.
We notice the acuteness of his elbows,
the starved babble of his fingers ,
and imagine him in Africa
carving arrowheads from tusks,
claiming tusks with arrows.
We were babies when he left
and have imagined him
in more unlik ely places:
on the moon , under the sea,
next door,
silently scoping us
from behind his devious disguises .
He wonders how long we mou med him
after his supposed death.
I show him the garden I staked out
and planted when I was
old enough to know my loss.
He would return, I believed, by the time
the sweet peas grew to my bare I y
four foot height.
They shot above my head
and blossomed,
and the lettuce stretched in stalks
as tall as I and went to seed;
tomatoes , cucumbers and carrots
were harvested and canned
year after year ,
"to eat if we're ever stranded here,"
my mother said
in jest.
At thirteen I added herbs:
savory, oregano, sage; and then asparagus
which ripened slowly
and would give him time.
When it first bore
I was f u II y grown.
On the hill to the south
I planted fruit trees
and berries. For five years
we've eaten amply from them.

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�Now as I stoop to cut
a spa ra gus for his homecoming
feast (that vegetable's seventh season
I remark -- all that time
in anticipation, not in mourning),
he wants to know why mother
up and died a f cw years back.
"It happened in her sleep.
Au topsy said a clot of blood
in her brain." After a pause
he says unsteadily,
"Think of her death
as a dcv ia tion .
To stay on course
is no easy feat. It is hardly
human ... "
"Yes," I reply. "You arc lucky
to find us, at least,
still here where you left us,
when we could all so easily
be worlds apart."

We sit down to eat, hands clean,
linen in our laps,
and the long awaited
return has grown already ordinary.
I had wanted to greet him
fully grown in the garden,
or under the apple tree,
my lap full of fruit.
But it was a father not a king
came home. Who knows
were he has been.
He thinks he has come full circle, finally,
back to his point of departure.
But this territory cannot be reclaimed.

For there were times when I too
cou Id have disappeared.
Podding peas now
while the men build the barbecue,
I watch the piece of road
pressed into the wilderness
off the front porch, as familiar
as the press of my own lips
against each other, and I remember
winters when a long, frostbitten
stillness seemed to stretch
as far as foreign countries out my window;
the day my brother, barely eight,
and I, nine, set out over the ridge
towards town on skis
and emerged terrified at dusk
too exhausted to breathe relief,
in a valley ten miles fom home.
Childhood perils, not worth boasting about,
perhaps. But grown inevitably into
the strange places and postures
of pubescence, I found the greater risks
of love to shy from.
I have hoped to live perfectly,
without storm or shipwreck.
Yet I am ashamed that Father found us,
waiting, brother and sister, ma rr icd
to the same land he left,
ma rrooncd there.

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                    <text>�Amy Porter

1

Invitation, We Are Togehter

2

Home, The Hollow Dark

3

Eye Contact, 2am Bleakness

4

Me and the Bugs

Anonymous

5

Untitled

Louis Petrich

6

Yanked, Over Here, Over There

Natalie Walker

7

Untitled

Louis Petrich

8

To Those Commencing Young

Ellie Laabs

8

a slight embrace of time

Lysithia Page

9

Ode to the Stroll

Elizabeth Dowdy

Raphael Rose 11

Heron on the Dock

Daryl Locke 12

Can you see me?/ Deep in the Red Sea

13

Self Portrait 2020, The Unnameable’s

Sera Johnson 14

Bedford

Samuel Berrettini 15

An End

16
Sofe Cote 17

Seal Attacked by Polar Bears
restless

Raphael Rose 18

Red Light Sunset

Eric Baker 19

The Dry Cleaner

20

Han XVII: Back Home in Isolation

�Zeinep Kyzy

20

Untitled

Jay Tram

21

Undersell

Clare Collins

21

Untitled

Avery Laur

22

trapped

John Verdi

23

The End Is Nigh

�Editor’s note
	

This fall we have endured the stagnant and fought against a common enemy. The enemy

is not a body, but is microscopic — almost non-physical. It is an enemy we can unite against in
isolation. We have stood in a tableau, we have seen each other framed in vignettes. Temporality has
descended to the forefront of general consciousness. The collective sentiment reflects variations of
confusion and despair. Finally, we can openly share our anxiety, our solitude. This sharing liberates
and we present our tools of liberation. As we retreat, we lose touch; we could easily forget about the
world beyond the confines of our four walls. We sometimes find comfort in our undisturbed solitude.
Yet, we unite in a far more profound way as we share the experience of the present time in this undefined space. Energeia hopes to be that space as we push forward to new grounds. Our long-discussed
experimental issue has come to realization under the theme “Isolation”. With this issue, we hope to
give voice to our collective consciousness, and find comfort and connection in our shared loneliness.
We would like to thank all our members of Energeia for their hard work and the undying creative
spirit that holds us together.

�Invitation

Welcome, welcome to my mind.
Don’t be afraid, come in!
They only attack if I’m alone.
Come in! Come in!
I’ve put my monsters in cages,
And labeled them nicely for you.
We Are Together

We are together in being alone.
We are together in loving the lonely.
(I hear the blunt taps of water on leaves.
I feel, in the quiet, a peace which comes in
An unobserved expansion of my old catacombs,
For once unfolding, stretched wide without pain.)
We are together when company’s not a cage,
And the silent distance brings us closer
To where presence is not perspective,
And nearness not a threat.

Amy Porter

1

�Home

I have kept your hearthfire in a jar
On my cold and barren mantelpiece.
It has lit and warmed the room, while I struggle
With damp matches and clumsy fingers.
If I stop and wrap my hands around this kind, kind gift,
I hear your voice, your home, and promise still to live.

The Hollow Dark
At midnight, here, I find myself
To wander after long-lost stars;
For any small guide lights my way
‘Tween twisting thoughts of time and me,
Reflection of the hollow dark.

2

Amy Porter

�		

Eye Contact,
2am Bleakness

Elizabeth Dowdy

3

�Me and the Bugs

I like to sit outside in the summer and pretend that I am sitting there with someone
and as the sun sets and it gets darker
I watch the sky change,
listening to the bugs come out of hiding.
I like to imagine the feeling of an arm on my back or lips on my lips.
It’s hot outside already, but I welcome the extra heat.
I like to think that I wouldn’t get so many mosquito bites,
because someone would be there to share them with me.
I like to realize how the darkness wouldn’t scare me as much if I wasn’t alone,
how the bugs wouldn’t be my only company,
how comfort in the dark would be good,
how a companion in the light would be too.
But here I am, another summer passing and nearing its end, sitting outside.
I’m wearing a dress and my hair is wavy, everything is in place for my fantasy,
except I am alone.

4

Elizabeth Dowdy

�Anonymous

5

�Yanked, Over Here, Over There
(After William James, George Cohan, and a Cypriot Crier)
Feeling conscripted?
Under authority?

Whose--all together now--is this?-knock the childishness out of you

give you standings to weigh proud of

more than college privilege gone nostalgia trip
this pan of nature mostly pawns off you-so wipe that whining, get to work
show your grit, do your bit

and tell your sweetheart not to pine

keep stead your faces shined on screen

for me to see youth all the time on tap—
no blacking out for beers or naps—

I know your tricks and counterfeits!

Maggots! take one for the old home team-whoe’er they are that would count more-you’re the cream of isolation corps

who save, of country, burning poor,

last beds for those breath-ridden toward,
you heard them say but one’s too dear,
so brave full hospitality--to fear!

Until it’s over here and over there

don’t think of norming back ‘till all our care

has overcome the rum-tum drummed beware!
But yet the pity of it, how it goes!

A piteous pearl unsaved—O sweet ago!

See sky, how’t caves! See how we make behave!
6

Louis Petrich

�Natalie Walker

7

�To Those Commencing Young
										
When first rehearsed, this character
of evil worked so strong the actors,

our venturing story lurched and heeled
like dog-	

then dervish, tranced and keeled

by curving skirting caving fears—

their center spread--sky disappeared . . .
Here let us not mistake the signs,

You handed me your plate to stir:

taste-tested dust—e’en this it dures-all questions faced all readiness
as house lights invite black.

			Bereft,
but staged for life, you feed my want
of sun to break the chains and burn.

Warm freckles—come! Chaste moon--return!

for time would modesty confine

Like this, to tan well always went.

good tangling threesome—worth a try.

to tongues in proof, so earn kiss meant

this to, and efforts honest kind--

All bulge from teeming information.

It muscles darkness—fashions creeds
to falter springs of laughter free.

Disaster’s peelings, caffeine stares
addict to disaffection’s bit

love’s horsing jawbones, chafing lips
of fasting shades that long to sip

past fleshed out masking asking holes,
untimely ripped for doctored roles,

disbanded Adams, Eves dispatched-gone!—
	

save for face that gyps and laps

in vacuumed webs.
		

We must rematch.

Remember would that friendship can.
8

Louis Petrich

Like this--up late to keep bent true

for great--none better knows than you.

�	

Ode to the Stroll

When I am weary of the world,
I walk about my town,
And try to notice hidden things,
The splendor all around.
Here are buried memories,
Beneath the bricks and stones,
The stories that have given rise
To lullabies and bones.
Marvel at the dignity
The redwood tree commands,
A beacon from the world before,
Enduring Fortune’s plans.
Note weeds that punch the sidewalk cracks
And force their spindles through
With will to live and taste the air,
Charisma fair and true.
A man bemasked with downcast eyes
Trails back behind his hound;
I wonder who is walking whom,
And where the pair is bound.
Presently my thoughts contortThe future gapes its maw;
Malevolence below our feet
From sleep has come to thaw.

Lysithia Page

9

�Alone together shall we trudge,
All wandering fallow land;
Though cataclysm comes to call,
I cannot hold your hand.
Ruin has a bitter taste,
How shall we wash it down?
What does it take to build an arc,
Or will we simply drown?
I take these thoughts and smother them,
I scrape my mind of fear;
In several months, the ball will drop,
And end this lonesome year.
To break the spell of loneliness,
I stroll, behold, and muse;
While breathing in the sweet salt air,
I pay the Bay my dues.
Old-sea swells tell a secret,
With words that hush and lull,
That all returns unto its depths
In love unshakeable.
All buildings were but dreams before,
So was this well-worn street.
Then someone blessed them into life,
As when old friends first meet.
10

�A child picks a dandelion,
Blows its tufts away.
I wonder what the child wished,
And hope her dreams will stay.
Indeed I dream of dancing
On nights that fizz with joy;
Though isolation stings my soul,
This song no fears destroy.
When I can’t remember who I am,
And living seems a chore,
I gather all my spirits up
And step outside the door.

11

11

�Can you see me?/ Deep in the Red Sea

12

Daryl Locke

�Self Portrait 2020

The Unnameable’s
Objection toward color is just one’s own insecurity. Insecurity because of color is just
one’s own folly. Folly due to another’s exquisiteness is an unnameable objection.

13

�Bedford

14

Sera Johnson

�An End

Indigo sunset. Salt smell, dull wave hum
in a night that hides the jungle and reveals stars.
I am awake. I think about the sweetness of the fruit that used to fall from trees–
dripping, bursting, overripe. Then.
Now: brown mush underfoot. Worm food.
I stand up. I look down the empty beach. Just past a breeze
stands a stone wall that stretches into the jungle and dismantles
itself in ivy and moss. Something cries
far off beneath the shadow of the wet trees. I follow.
The air is clinging close under the palms; the water
wants to enter my nose and mouth and clog them. Clouds cover the sky. Mud covers the ground.
I peel something off in hushed darkness, becoming more naked–
sweet, fresh, fat. Once.
Now: bony. Rancid with spit and sweat and ugly dreams.
Somewhere shrouded, the moon sets. I breathe. I sit down. Rot
loves me.
Blind patches of ooze stretch out moldy fingers toward my
lips and eyes. I close. Brown mush underfoot. Worm food.

Samuel Berrettini

15

�Seal Attacked by Polar Bears

16

Samuel Berrettini

�restless

Sofe Cote

17

�Red Light Sunset

18

Raphael Rose

�	

The Dry Cleaner

My mother and I walk home.
It is dark out.
Wind is cool and soft.
Lampposts dirty and yellow.
The street is empty and clear,
Except for outside
The Korean dry cleaners.
Mr. Yi is clutching his wrist.
He does not wince.
Red stain down tan trousers.
Pool of blood
At his feet.
My mother asks
If he is okay.
He replies he was just
Trying to bring down the gate.
My mother asks if there is an ambulance coming.
He nods. He says yes. He smiles.
We walk on.
I look back.
He stands there alone.
I am nervous.
We shut the door to the building.
Muffled sirens.
Late evening
Blood drip
Clenched wrist
Gentle breeze
On the corner
Bleeding calmly
We greet the cleaner
He nods
Pants soaked red
As blood pools
Distant sirens
A steady heart

Eric Baker

19

�Han XVII: Back Home in Isolation
										
	
Oma paces,
Then turns on the stove to light her Dunhill.
She’s been up all night smoking, too.

20

Zeinep Kyzy

�Undersell

Lazy sun
UnderSelling new religion
Of self love
Sets upon me, my nose
Fragility
Is telling the truth
Of the unheard, aspired
Overseen:
In fragile places lies floating and captivating
Sterilized molecules of beauty and being
In the haze of darkening
I see my light from below
In the haze gettin’ lost
I see my heart beautified.

Jay Tram

Clare Collins

21

�	

	

i feel trapped.
dispel the liquid on my tongue
and let it leave the slight
tingle on my lips,
like frostbite on the lungs.
a revolving door heart,
never stopping, always
letting in new and letting out
old, wanting to know
even a glimpse of their souls.
i tear at the bags
underneath my eyes,
set upon my fragile
frame from sleepless
dreaming and nightmarish
evenings; they’re all spent
inside my mind.
maybe if i stretch the bags
down far enough i can
wrap them around myself
and cocoon for a thousand
winter solcistices.
i feel trapped.
dispel my tongue on the liquid
like frostbite on the lips,
and let my lungs feel the
slight tingle it leaves.

22

Avery Laur

trapped

�The End Is Nigh

John Verdi

23

��Co-Editors
Assistant Editors

Cover Illustrations

Sophia Cote
Adam Schulman
Grace Calk
Elias Christian
Lysithia Page
Zeinep Kyzy

Special thanks to Enkh-Od Batzorig

Energeia
Energeia is the Literary and Art Publication of St. John’s College, Annapolis...
...
St. John’s College
60 College Ave.
Annapolis, Maryland 21401

�Fall 2020

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                    <text>SPECIAL ISSUE 1983

�ENERGEIA:

The activity in which anything is fully itself.

Ti ••• vou

Cover:
Kevin Tracy, '83, submitted
this watercolor for the Baird
Award last y ear.

E v ~p yELa

c;w . .
n.

(Aristotle's Metaphysics, 1072b)

The contents of this issue of Energeia have been selected by
Annapolis Pr ize Committee and produced by the Ene r geia staff .

STAFF

PRIZE COMMITTEE
Printed by the
St. John's College Press
St. John 's College,
Annapolis, Maryland

Chai r man :

Robert Druecker
James Carey
Hugh McGrath
William Mullen
Jonathan Tuck

the

Editor:

Faculty Advisor:

Christian Holland
Kathy Buckler
Ann Burlein
Zoe Churchville
Martin Marklin
Alexandra Mullen
Merle Sokolik
J oe Sachs

Energeia is a non - p r ofit s t udent magazine with an in- house cir culation
to the s tudents , faculty , alumni , and staff of St . John ' s Co lleg e,
Annapolis and Santa Fe .
Ene r geia is published thrice yearly, in the
Fall, Winter, and Spring .
The Fall issue is reserv ed for the student
work of the previous school year which has been selected by the Prize
Conunittee fo r public recognition . For the Winter and Spring issues the
Energeia
staff
we lcomes
submissions
fr om all
members
of
the
comrnunity--essays , poems, stories, original math proofs, lab projects,
drawings , and . the like.
Note:
A brief desc r iption of the author accompanies all work not by
cur rent St. John's students.
Please include some such statement along

with your submission .

Thank you.

�All Work and No Play Makes Jack a Dull Boy:
Reflections on Beauty in Plato, Kant, Schiller, and Heidegger
Barbara Cooper

CONTENTS
ALL WORK AND NO PLAY MAKES JACK A DULL BOY: Barbara Cooper
REFLECTIONS ON BEAUTY IN PLATO, KANT, SCHILLER,
AND HEIDEGGER

1

TRANSLATION OF A GREEK TEXT

George McDowell

30

RACINE'S PHAEDRA: REMEMBERING WHO WE ARE

Lisa Eckstrom

32

TRANSLATION OF A FRENCH TEXT

Geraldine McDowell

52

Leslie Bellisario

54

BECOMING ACQUAINTED WITH A KNOT

Ann Burlein

55

BEETHOVEN .. . A COMEDIAN?!

Kenneth Martin

71

KYRIE

Jerry Spires

74

THE HARMONY OF THE SOLIDS

Martin Marklin

79

. ORIGINAL ENGLISH POEM

Wisdom, for Plato, seems no t to be a noun
synonymous with "knowledge of what is,"
but a verb indicating how to attain that
knowledge.
For Plato our experience of
beauty is erotic; we desire it and move
towards it to possess it.
Diotima suggests that love (and poetry as well) comes
from a desire to be immortal and to beget
what is "one's own."
If begetting "one's
own" means •coming fully into one's own,
then love of beauty results finally in a
kind of possession of self, the kind of
possession which, in the Phaedrus, one
attains by seeing oneself mirrored in
one's beloved.
In the Phaedrus Socrates says that,
of all the imitations of what is (in the
fullest sense) that appear in the world
for humans, beauty alone comes through
vision.
Vision is the sharpest of our

Introduction
If we gather together the various
notions that Socrates has about beauty we
find that, although in the Republic he
holds
art at
arm's
length, he also
respects beauty highly:
in the Phaedrus
and in the Symposium Socrates describes
beauty as a sort of catalyst or ladder in
the search for the Good.
In the Republic
we see art as dangerous for three reasons:
it is not real; it can induce imitation of
ways of being in the world which are not
the highest and best ways; and finally
because, if a poet can move us powerfully
towards what he sees as good and true, can
he not with equal power compel us in the
opposite direction either deliberately or
through poor judgment?
It is this third
objection , I think, which colors much of
Socrates' thought about the poet, for he
thinks of the poet as the archetype for
the craftsman who founds a state, and the
unjust man is "like the clever craftsman. 111
Socrates' reservations about poetry
indicate his immense respect for its power.
In the Symposium Diotima hints that
poetr y is like love of the beautiful,
whi ch a cts as a spiritual intermediary
between the realm of what is most fully
and the realm of human being :
spirits
"weld both sides together and merge them
into
one
g r eat
whole . 112
Diotima
characterizes love as "at once desirous
and full of wisdom, a lifetime seeker af t er
truth,
an
adept
in
sorcery,
ench antme n t, and seduction." 3
In Plato,
love and poetry a re not themselves Truth,
but a r e r athe r the means to attain it .

senses; for Plato and the Greeks, to have
seen is to know and all knowing is in some
sense "insight."
Therefore beauty is
ekphanestaton kai erasmiotaton. 4
Beauty
shows itself and shines forth most, and of
all things is the most lovely and lovable .
By appearing for us in this world Beauty
leads us back to that higher world beyond
the sensible realm.
Socrates seems pri marily to be speaking of human beauty
here; however, in the end of the dialogue
Socrates makes several suggestions about
how a piece of writing must be constructed
to be pleasing.
It must be constructed
"like a living creature" and, like a lover, it must be appropriate to the type of
soul which it will move.s
Thus Socrates' discussion of how the
love of a beautiful individual can lead us

Barbara Cooper,'83, is currently studying contemporary African music in Kenya
on a grant from The Watson Foundation.
She is the founder of Energeia.

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�to love of the Beautiful and the Good applies equally to the love of beautiful
poetry or of art in general. The dialogue
itself is an example of the power of beautiful art to lead one to the Good, for
this speech is lovingly constructed for
Phaedrus so that he will not, by following
Lysias, neglect one of the most important
aspects of life:
love of an individual.
Although beauty is not the Good itself, it
in some ways resembles the Good.
In the
Republic Socrates uses the sun as an image
of the Good.
Beauty likewise shines and
brings to light the being of things; however, we can behold beauty without being
blinded.
In the Republic it is not clear
how it is humanly possible to stare directly into the sun, or the Good, in its
full radiance. In the Phaedrus we discover that beauty is astraptousan: the brilliance of beauty is fleeting like a flash
of lightening or the reflection of sunlight on metal.6 Beauty seems to allow us
to experience the Good momentarily and to
give us a sense of the direction of its
source without blinding us in the meantime.
In some sense Beauty is closer and
more approachable to us as humans than the
Good .
Thus
although
in
the
Republic
Socrates seems to relegate art to a position of minor importance, in the Symposium
and Phaedrus he seems to suggest that art
and beauty can have the highest possible
role in human experience.
To accord to
art the r ole which he gives it in the Republic, Socrates must believe two things:
first, that as imitation of the real, it
must be less than the real; and second,
that beca\lse it is neither real in this
world nor true in the full sense in which
·the Good is True, it can have no truth or
reality at all.
On the question of beauty, as with so
many questions, Plato's dialogues serve as
a starting point to which later authors
respond.
In this pape r I shall offer
three subsequent discussions of beauty and
I shall examine how they differ from
Socratic thought.
In doing so I shall
gather together some notions which I feel
describe some aspect of my own experience
of beauty. Although it is in response to
,_
Plato, this paper is not intended as a

refutation of Plato, for often he is the
deeper and more responsible thinker. As I
discuss these va ~ious approaches to beauty
in art, I shall keep in mind the problems
involved in any discussion of aesthetics.
I begin with a discussion of Kant,
for whom beauty does not reside somewhere
far beyond us, but rather in ourselves.
His subjective description of beauty accounts for our sense that in experiencing
beauty we are learning about ourselves as
humans.
I then consider Schiller; while
Plato believes that poetry, as ~ appearance, can be a danger to society,
Schiller believes that precisely because
it is appearance poetry leads us to our
full humanity.
I conclude my discussion
with Heidegger, for whom we not only learn
about the true because of beauty and art,
but Beauty in art is itself a manifestation of the True.
Truth resides in the
same realm as we do.
I shall close this paper with my own
understanding of the role of beauty in our
own everyday lives, and with a discussion
of the difficulties involved in trying to
describe what beautiful art is.
I.

An alternative to thinking of Beauty
as residing in the supersensible realm is
to claim that beauty is nothing else than
sensation.
In "Of the Standard of Taste,"
Hume points out that a judgment about
beauty in art must depend on the condition
of the "organs" of the man perceiving the
work of art.
If a man lacks delicacy,
practice, experience in comparison, or
impartiality, he will not judge well and
we will say that he lacks taste. In order
to have good taste a man must have good
sense. We praise a man of good taste, and
his own good sense becomes our standard of
taste.
Thus the standard by which we
judge a judgment of taste lies not in the
object, but in the faculties of the man
judging. Taste is a kind of health.
our
sense of beauty is literally bound up with
our faculties of sensation and our reaction to a piece of art is "sentiment."
Although I may not be able to judge
well about a piece of art myself, someone
whose faculties are in better order and

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more practiced may be able to point out to
me what is good or bad in the art work,
and I can come to see what he has seen.
Hume responds to the question of whether
there can be some objective standard of
taste that we must trust the judgment of
those men whose good sense distinguishes·
them.
For Kant the consequence of Hume' s
notion that beauty is not a quality of
things, but rather exists in the mind
which contemplates them, is that a judgment of beauty must be universal.
Kant
follows Hume in presupposing that all men
must have the same faculties, and that
therefore, if I perceive an object to be
beautiful, I will expect others to judge
it to be so as well.
Whereas Hume's essay addresses a dilemma in aesthetics, Kant's Critique of
Judgment addresses the workings of the
human mind.
The Critique describes the
nature of the judging faculty rather than
the nature of works of art. For Kant the
word "aesthetic" does not initially mean
"pertaining to the beautiful" or "the science of the beautiful."
It is used according to the ancient distinction of
aistheta kai noeta.
The "aesthetic" pertains to how we perceive the world and to
how living in the world feels to us. However, to feel does not mean, for example,
"I perceive that this is red" (as it did
in the Critique of Pure Reason), but rather "I sense orfeel within my faculties
that this is beautiful."
Kant uses the
word "subjective"
in the Critique of
Judgment to describe anything which has to
do with the subject's sense of himself and
of his feelings.
Beauty does not reside
in the object.
In the Critique of Pure Reason, Kant
accounts for how we make judgments about
the state of being of objects of perception.
We make what he calls "determinant .
judgments": we receive perceptions in the
medium
of
space
and
time
and
our
imagination spontaneously acts on them to
synthesize or "determine" them according
to the rules set down by the categories.
Understanding, as the faculty which contains the law-giving categories, gives the
laws to which imagination adheres in giving unity to our perceptions.
Productive

imagination presents before the mind's eye
1
an object of perception synthesized into a
unified thing, or a "presentation."
The
categories of the understanding are not
(as for Aristotle) predicates but are
rather functions of the mind by which
imagination synthesizes perceptions.
In a judgment imagination unifies a
particular and places it under a universal
(a category), e.g. this vase is red. However in the Critique of Judgmen~we discover that not all ]udgments are determined according to the rules set out in
the categories.
"Beauty," for example is
not a concept or category.
This is an
astounding notion: we do not think beauty, we feel it.
Some of the perceptions
we receive cannot be conveniently cate-.
gorized according to the rules set out by
the categories.
In order to unify these
perceptions, the mind makes a rule for
itself.
If my perception isn't unified
into a universal of the sort provided by
the categories, what sort of universal
will account for it?
If I must make the
rule up anew for each particular instance,
there will be only one member of my
universal.
In synthesizing this particular I make a universal, so that in a
judgment of beauty the particular and the
universal are the same. I perceive in the
object some unity which gives it a universal character .
Kant calls this universal character
of the artwork an aesthetical idea.
An
aesthetical idea arises from the presentation of a form which gives occasion to the
imagination "to spread itself over a number of kindred representations that arouse
more thought than can be expressed in a
concept determined by words. "7
For example Jupiter's eagle with the lightning
in its claws is an attribute of Jupiter
which tells us more about his power and
majesty than ordinary words can express.
How can I call several different
things beautiful if each of them occasions
a new aesthetical idea formed by the
~magination according to a self-made law?
My judgment that a thing is beautiful accompanies the feeling that I have upon
synthesizing the perceptions. If my feeling is one of "free play," I call the object beautiful.
If, on the other hand , I

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�neations _! la grecque , foliage for bo r de rs
or wall papers. 11 8
The mystery of the Critique of Judg ment is: how does imagination synthesize
formally something whose content is not
space or time? That is, how does it syn- .
thesize
something
which
cannot
be
schematized as ordinary perceptions are?
The object has some unity beyond that
which we synthesize when we synthesize
what we have received in space and time .
Of course the judgment itself pertains to
the harmony of the faculties of the
subject when they are in free play.
However the activity of the mind is
incited by something in the object.
F.0r
me the mystery behind Kant's terminology
redeems it, for it is an admission that
beauty is not at bottom analyzable.
Some
objects have a unity beyond anything we
can describe in speech bound by the
concepts of the understanding.
As Valery
comments:
The seducer beguiles us with the
hope that everything will reduce
itself to categorical terms and
so
achieve
completion,
tha t
everything will culminate in the
Word .
Bu t we must answe r t he
demon with this simple observation:
the
effect
of
the
Beautiful upon a man is to make
him mute. 9
Although we began by supposing that
beauty does not dwell in the object, but
in the subject, it seems that our feeling
is called forth by s omething in the object.
Insofar as beauty happens in the
subject , it is not an attribute of an object, but a state of mind. Mind in itself
is not subject to the formal intuitions,
for my awareness of myself has to do only
indirectly with space and time .
Self
awareness arises from my attention to the
spontaneity of my imagination. My mind is
immediately mine and I cannot help but
feel how it is working. The feeling that
my mind is at play is called forth by the
freedom of objects of nature and art, for
while they conform in many ways to conceptual syntheses, they occasion more thought
than can be accounted for by the categories.
Let us consider two examples of how

feel awe, I call the object sublime. Thus
aesthetic
judgments
are
not
strictly
speaking attributable to the thing, but to
my own feeling upon perceiving it. Beauty
is not a category but a reflection of the
mind on its own feeling.
Hence aesthetic
judgments
are
reflective
rather
than
determinant .
The feeling the mind experiences
arises
from
the
interplay
of
the
imag i nation and the understanding. If the
understanding along with the imag ination
were simply to categorize, they would be
"working," as when I make the judgment
that
the
vase
is
red.
But
when
imagination makes a judgment according to
no set law, it makes a law for itself in
playful imitation of the categorical laws.
The understanding and imagination are "in
play . "
It might seem that in describing
beauty as free play Kant trivializes the
importance of beauty in our lives.
We
play when we find the time, and we are not
serious when we play.
However Kant's
choice of the word play points in another
direction as well, for when we work we are
under the constraint of necessity.
We
work because we have to work~ we do not
enjoy it and in some sense we are enslaved
by it.
If our perception of beauty is
play, then when we perceive beauty, we
are, for a time at least, entirely autono mous. We are ou r own maste rs.
In making
a judgment of beauty we are acting freely.
Although the imagination in free play
generates a rule for itse lf, Kant con ceives the synthesis involved in a judgment
of
beauty
to
be
"formal."
Imaginaton's autonomy is not wholly arbi trary and capricious, fo r the understanding
sets
down
the
example
which
imagination
will
follow .
The
rule
imagination makes for itself will be by
analogy to those o f determinant judgments .
Determinant
judgments
synthesize
perceptions formed by space and time .
Since
all my presentations will be of things in
space and time (including my "I") which
can only be represented by imagination
through inner sense (time) as linear, everything represented by imagination must
be formal.
For Kant, beauty must always
lie in the "form" of the thing, and he
offers as examples flowe rs, s hells, "deli-

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We sense that if one part were missing or
if something were moved the unity of the
painting would be destroyed.
We cannot
pin down why just this arrangement so
pleases us. The mind seems to be able to
perceive and enjoy the appropriateness of
this particular curve being given to this
particular object, where it might not have
been found since nothing required it to be
there.
Free play, then, might be interpreted
in
several ways.
I
can
sense
the
appropriateness of this cur ve to this
vase;
or
I
can
sense the
seemingly
deliberate
near-adherence
to
law
in
something which plays ~ith forms so that,
for example, they are not quite perfectly
geometrical .
In both cases imagination
obeys no given law. The vase did not have
to have that curve simply to be a vase,
yet I made that curve an essential part of
my experience of the vase .
The laws of
synthesis of an object do not give me the
Cezanne still life as a dynamic unity of
objects.
Kant calls this recognition of the
appropriateness or deliberateness of form
"purposiveness." Ordinarily we call the
cause of an object, in the sense of formal
or final cause, its "purpose." It is the
formal end which the object will attain
when it is unified and which will be perceived by us as a form. through the concepts.
However, beautiful things do no t
have purpose in the sense of form through
the concepts.
Nonetheless, they do seem
to have form, and the form looks as if it
were prescribed for them in the same way
that a formal cause is. We call such objects "purposive."
A judgment of beauty
then "has nothing at its basis but the
form of the purposivenss of an object (or
of
its
mode
of
representation)." 11
Kant's parenthetical remark reminds us of
the question of the l ocat ion of beauty.
Does purposiveness arise from the object,
or from our perception of it?
The wo r k
suggests that the object is purposive for
me, yet not eve ry object can elicit this
feeling.
Judgments of beauty arise from my
internal
sense
that
the
thing
has
non-conceptual form, and this sense only
arises f o r the r elation of my imagination

free play might work.
If I l ook at
Cezanne' s "The Basket of Apples" (plate
48, The Visual Arts as Human Experience) 10
my determinant judgment will give me
colors in positions, certain shapes, and
these shapes as relatively large and
small.
But how are these presentations
unified for me into one image?
For
example, I immediately recognize the dish
of cookies as just that, but the shape of
the dish is not strictly geometric (cf . p .
250).
The table edges do not match up,
and
the
bottle
is
not
symmetrical .
Nonetheless my imagination immediately and
effortlessly offers these elements to my
mind's eye as a whole image whose parts
. make sense. • To enjoy the real forms in
the painting my mind must toy with the
image to recognize how it thwarts the laws
of perspective .
The real beauty of the painting lies
not only in the shapes but in the dynamic
quality Cezanne achieves by shifting the
dish one way and the table another, and by
presenting the fruit as both on the
tabletop and levitating above it . Perhaps
free play comes not simply with form, but
also with the activity to which a piece of
art invites us through the interplay of
its elements. To appreciate this painting
we cannot simply imprint the forms upon
our retina; we must allow it to set us at
play on a teeter- totter of perspective and
weight .
The upper right-hand corner of
the table wants to rise, but is balanced
by the sheer bulk of the basket of fruit .
An example of free play closer to
what Kant has in mind is Claesz' s "Still
Life ' (plate 40 , The Visual Arts as Human
Experience).
Thispainting ~far more
conventional and each of the images within
it is beautiful in a way that the elements
of the Cezanne, taken individually, cannot
be since their beauty arises from their
balance.
In this painting the various ·
curves of the objects are lovely in thems e lv e s . We e njoy the shape of the glass
because it has just this curve, and the
ellipse of the chalice lip because it has
just that shape. We run our eyes over the
forms just as we run our hands over the
pleasing curves of a piece of sculpture.
The particular arrangement of the
elements on the table is also beautiful.

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�to my understanding . My i maginat ion finds
i n the object s omething l i ke a purpos e and
reflects on it in compar ison with the
s trict formality of the concepts .
In orde r to give me the objec t a s an object o f
thought my imagination mu s t supply fo r
itself some r ule similar to those of the
understanding in orde r to captu r e this
pur posiveness.
My pleasure a r ises f r om
t he p l ayful agreement o f my i magination's
own law , a n d the laws o f the understanding .
If my enjoyment stems from the autonomous imagination's flirtation with the
law of the understanding, it depends upon
my sense that the understanding is law for
everyone. I will be pleased with the play
of my f a culties only if, in contrast with
the norm, they a r e acting f r eely .
What
sort of norm is this?
It must be the
normal activity of mind, not simply my
mind but any human mind. Kant claims that
a judgment of beauty p r ecedes the fee l ing
of pleasur e . Contr a r y to what might have
been expected, the judgment of beauty is
not uni ve rsa l because it i s universally
pleasant; r athe r , it is pleasant fo r everyone because it is universal .
"Hence, " c onc l ude s Kant, "it is t he
universal capability of communication of
the mental s tat e in the given r epr e s entat ion wh ich .
. must b e f undamenta l and
must have t he ple as ure in the object a s
its c onsequent. 11 1 2
Tast e i s t hen "the
fac u lty o f
j udg i ng a
p r iori of t h e
conununicab i l ity o f f eelings t h at a r e bound
up with a give n r epr e sentat i on. 11 13
This
remarkable notion r equires t hat we think
b eau ty as firs t and f o r emost something
wh i ch p r oduce s the same feeling in e v eryone .
We o r dinarily think o f beauty a s
s ometh i ng which move s u s pe r sonally and
which may take on great e r appe a l when we
f ind our judgment reinfo r c e d b y someone
el se .
I am not sur e tha t Kant's description r ings true fo r me ; it is very important to me that my enjoyment o f be aut y is
finally couched in my sense of myself as a
human, but I am not at all sur e that
communicability is the condition of my
enjoyment .
Unive r sal communicability can only
ari s e in an object if a ll men have t he
same faculties in common . Taste , then , i s

a k i nd of common s ense which accounts tor
our ability to compar e ou r own judgment
wi th that of the collective r eason of humanity . It requires unprejudiced , consist ent, and "enlar ged t hought . " We say that
a man has enlarged thought i f he "disr e gar ds the subjective private conditions of
h i s own judgment , 11 14 and in so doing puts
himself in thought
in the place of
everyone else .
We see now why Kant claims that a
judgment of beauty must be universal . We
will expect everyone to ag r ee with it;
for , since we all have the same faculties,
we will have the same experience when
faced
with
a
painting.
The
communicability of the feeling to a l l with
the same fa cul ties makes the experience
universal.
How would Hume respond?
It
seems obviou s that ever yone does not ag r ee
about what is beautiful .
Hume would say
that I cannot e xperience beauty unless my
faculties a r e i n order . Someone with good
taste has "str ong sense , united to deli cate sentiment, improved by practice, per fected by comparison, and cleared of all
p r ejudice . " 15
Furthermore some
things
wil l appeal to some people because of
thei r characte r s ; an old man may love
Tacitus and a young man may love Ovid . No
blame attaches i tse l f to such preferences ,
for " it is almost impo ssib l e not t o fee l a
predilection f o r t h a t which suits our particu lar t u rn and d isposition . 11 16
Kant i s mo re t e r se in h i s e xplanation
o f how judgme nt s may v ary .
I sense that
h i s explanation ar ises more f r om philos ophi c nece ssity than f r om the tole r ant
ob s e r vat i on
of
a c t ua l
human
f eel i ng :
"eve r yone mu s t admit that a judgment about
beauty , i n which the least interest mingles , is ve r y pa r tial and is not a pu r e
judgment
of taste . 1117
A judgment of
beauty must be "disinterested . "
It i s he r e, and not so much in his
claim that beauty is subjective rather
than objective, that Kant's rea l argument
with Plato shows itself .
A judgment of
beaut y is not e r ot i c; I must be speaking
very loosely to speak of "love of the
beautiful" at all .
Kant claims, counter
to Plato and our own simplest notions of
beauty, that it is not the "object of des ire . " We do not , strictly speaking, even

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desire to look at beautiful things, although Aristotle claims that we desire to
look at and t o know all things . Ordinarily , we think of beauty as a source of motion, as something which, like the beloved
in the Phaedrus , draws us with its radi ance .
For Dante, to fail to be moved by
beauty is sin, and he is scolded by
Beatr ice for f o rgetting her divine beauty
and following earthly things . Kant, however , wants to claim that I must not be
moved by beauty ; my enjoyment of it must
be entirely free and unconstrained .
In
other words, an experience of the beauti ful cannot be an "emotional" experience.
It turns out that the consequence of
claiming that beauty is no object outside
of me is that I have nothing to move to wards . For Plato an experience of beauty
is bound to be an important experience ,
for it will move us towards something .
For Kant the experience is merely internal
and solely of symbolic interest .
One could try to temper the revolu tionary quality of Kant's claim by remarking that my enjoyment of art. must not come
from anything private o r peculiar to me,
but from those things which I share with
all humanity.
I must not like the painting because I like fruit, or because it is
something I would like to own for its investment value or its c o l or scheme (should
it happen to match my living room ) .
In
other words , I cannot take a simply private interest in the painting, and I cannot use it as a means to some end.
Perhaps, then, because my enjoyment
f ollows upon a judgment that results from
. the universal nature of human faculties, I
am permitted to take an interest in the
painting because in l ooking at it I am
joining in with all humanity to discover
something we all share in c ommon . However, Kant does not even allow for this
enticing possibility.
I personally am at
a lo s s to i magine why anyone would devote
so much time, energy and t hought t o beautiful art if he is no t to take an interest
in it_.
Perhaps Kant imagines that we
somehow run into beauty and are preoccupied with it f o r a time, as a child is
amused when placed in a sandbox.
It seems t o me that Plato's account
o f our exp erience of beauty is far truer

to the experie nce.
W do love beautifu l
e
things, and although we may not desire to
po ssess them (I am perfect l y happy to
leave my favorite p aintings in museums) we
do take an interest in their existence.
The world would seem a far p oo rer place if
the Louvre were destroyed.
We take delight in the thought that such wo nderful
things could share the world with us.
In
other words, we l ove them in much the same
way that we love people; we can never pos sess them, we feel a desire to be in their
presence, and we feel a deep loss when
they disappear .
We do no t love them for
their usefulness, but simply f o r what they
are . Although we may be aware that their
presence is beneficial t o us, we do not
pursue them for our own benefit:
love is
never a means to an end.
It seems to me
that Plato is very wise, in the Pha~drus,
when he places a discussio n o f l ove of an
individual next to the discussion of a
pleasing wo rk of art.
Kant, however, has a philosophical
rather than an aesthetic reason for de scribing beauty as he d oes. For Kant, the
whole power of beauty lies n o t in the
beautiful object but in the subject's free
response to the object. Art should no t be
compelling and the experie nce o f the beautiful in art canno t be pathe tic.
Kant is
willing t o make such radica l claims because he sees beauty as the symbo l of our
own free will.
Free play gives testimo ny
to the ability of man to make a universal
of a particular.
If Kant were to allow
even an interest in universal humanity to
enter into a judgment o f beauty, t he judgment would inclu de a kind o f desire; we
would no l onger have in beauty a symbol of
morality becau se the mo tive behind the
j udgment would no l o nger be the judgment
itself, but rather s ome other e nd such as
knowledge.
The j udgment o f beauty would
then be a means rather than an end.
As
the symbol of morality, the judgment must
be entirely autonomou s, a nd must treat
beauty never as a mean s but always as an
end.
Thus f o r Kant t he conse quence o f
claiming that a feeli ng o f beauty results
from its u n iversal conunu ni c a b ili t y is that
we find things beau tifu l because they cal l
forth in u s a n awareness o f the freedom of

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�my own experience of art .
Nothing important to my experience of painting and music will be accounted for by describing
oscillations and wavelengths, much as I
enjoy the Timaeus.
Even if my experience
could be reduced to mathematics, I would
know nothing more about why colors in a
Monet strike me; Heidegger will later
claim that it is precisely such analyses
which make it so difficult for moderns to
reach real being and beauty .
Kant limit s his n otion becaus e he i s
strongly rooted to the idea that because
all our experience must be spatial and
temporal, it can only be represented (conceptually or through free play) by something linear and mathematical.
One might
argue with Kant about his point in
two
ways:
one could argue on Kant's own
terms, or one could abandon Kant's vocabulary and invent a manner of speaking of
one's own .
I shall do both. First, if my
feeling of beauty belongs essentially to
my sense of myself, then it arises in some
way akin to the way in which I am conscious of myself.
Every presentation
which my imagination offers to my mind's
eye must also be able to be accompanied by
my thought, "I experience this sensation. "
In other words, prior to my synthesis of
an object I must have a synthesis of the
self experiencing that object.
I experience the object in time (which was linear) , however I experience myself in my
awareness of my own spontaneous synthesis
in imagination.
This spontaneity occu rs
in some sense beyond time, for it subjects
i t s elf t o a synthesis of itself in t i me.
Con sequently my experience of myself and
of my feelings is temporal, yet beyond
time.
However, to argue without being limited by Kant's vocabulary:
the time by
which we measure our work may be subject
to measurement as if it were a time - line,
but the time which we have to ourselves in
play seems to stretch or become concen . trated depending on our involvement in
what we are doing.
Time seems sometimes
to be more than one - dimensional.
When I
become absorbed in something , time seems
thicker, or to stand still.
At other
times, it can perform magical leaps, and
can pass by before I have had time to

our own faculties. Kant buries the beauty
of this notion in his terminology:
"the
subjective condition of all judgments is
the faculty of judgment itself."18
we
subject our own faculties to inspection by
themselves.
The
imagination
itself
subsumes itself under the understanding
itself, such that the freedom of the
f o rmer harmonizes with the law of the
latter .
Kant is proposing that in making
a judgment of beauty we are in fact
playing with our faculties themselves in a
self-conscious exercise of our own freedom
to conform to law.
The ultimate freedom
for Kant is the freedom to conform to
one's own law.
Full freedom means complete self-consistency.
In making a judgment of beauty (by
making a particular into a universal) I am
providing myself and others with an image
of moral freedom, in which I act only "in
such a way that I can also will that my
maxim should become a universal law. 111 9
Then beauty is only meaningful in society
and
in
culture,
for
it
rests
on
·communicability and it hints at morality.
Beauty, through "common sense," yields the
self-conscious sense of oneself as a social being .
Kant's suggestive notion of free play
accords with certain aspects of my experi ence of art, although it by no means exhaustively describes art.
However it
seems to me that he l i mits the notion unnecessar ily by thinking of form exclusively in t erms of delineation, rather than
thinking of it as the whole form or "look"
o f a wo r k o f art.
The who l e o f a painting, for e x ample, arises from the interplay of many elements, only one o f which
is delineation.
What Kant takes to be
bare delineation o r outline , I prefer to
think of as the shape emerging from the
complex interrelations of many parts .
Kant hesitates to accept music and
the art of color as beautiful rather than
merely pleasant sensations.
He offers a
somewhat obscure argument for why they
might be admitted; however, his argument
depends upon their being essentially mathematical.
If music and color can only be
accepted into Kant's account of free play
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grasp its passage.
To think of our experience of art in time as merely linear
when we experience leaps and bounds in our
memories, and stretches and intensif ications when we contemplate, seems entirely
too limited.
Allow me, then, to offer my own elaboration on Kant's notion of free play so
that it can describe more of the depth of
my experience of art.
Since it is clear
to me that a black and white repro duction
c annot always capture the essence of a
colorful work of art, I will submit that
color is just as much an element of beauty
as
size,
position,
shape
and
line.
Compare, for example, the color with the
black and white reproduction of Albers'
"Study for an Early Diary" (plate 52, page
271, The Visual Arts as Human Experience ) .
Much Of the exercisewhich this painting
invites is lost in black and white, for
part of the play consists in the intensity
of the blue box fighting with the size and
position of the yellow.
The shapes themselves become interesting because of their
positions as well as because of their
forms.
or compare Monet's "Rouen Cathedral,
Early Morning"
(plate 44, Visual Arts)
with the black and white reproduction (p.
234).
The black and white picture looks
like an unfocused photograph taken from an
interesting angle .
The color picture
draws us into a damp, light-bathed atmosphere .
We strain our eyes upwards to
whe r e the warm colors of the sunlight b a l ance the cool colors engulfing the ground
on whi ch we stand .
Texture and dens i t y
pla y with color to give the effect of
morning light.
Something happens in the
color picture .
There is something purposive in the
particular yellow-green which Monet uses
to balance the purple - blue , but there is
nothing strictly law- abiding about his use
of the s e colo rs. Similarly a certain melody in a Dvorak string quartet belongs to
t he cello at just that moment, although we
couldn't s ay why.
A jazz trumpet solo
would become something altogether different if it were played on the piano.
It
seems
to
me
that
we
experience
purposiveness in the interplay of many
elements in art, and that to consider free

play purely f o rmally limits it.
Kant's no tion (when expanded) captures the sense o f restful mo tion which
some works cause and which we enjoy in the
awareness that anyone would enjoy it.
In
appreciating that work we are j oining in
with all of our cultures in an activity
which
exercises
our
own
spontaneous
creation of lawful form.
Let us see what else we can learn
about beauty from Kant.
He chooses to
distinguish between the beautiful and t h e
sublime,
claiming
that
while
beauty
"brings
with
it
a
feeling
of
the
furtherance of life, 112 0 the sublime is:
a
mere
appendix
to
the
aesthetical
judging
of
purposiveness, because by means
of
it no particular form is
represented in nature, but there
is only developed a purposive use
which the imaginatio n makes of
its representation.21
Beauty results in restful contemplation
while the sublime results in an emotional
exercise of the imagination.
In a judgment of beauty, imagination approximates
itself to the understanding by spontaneously making a universal law for a particular.
In a judgment of the sublime,
imagination stretches itself beyond its
limits t o try to encompass in experience
the boundlessness of the ideas of reason .
In both cases my imagination is active.
Although Kant gives precedence to the
feeling of beauty, I myself believe that
the sublime can be of equal importance in
our experience of beaut iful a rt .
F ree
play may begin to describe my experience
of Monet's painting of a cathedral, but it
cannot describe my feeling when · I enter
the Rouen cathedral. Whereas Kant intends
to describe beauty exhaustively with his
notion of free play, I think of free play
as only a part of beauty, another part of
which is the sublime .
If we think of beauty as a source of
self-discovery for man (both as an individual and as a race ) then, while playful
beauty gives man an i mage of his own freed om, the sublime gives him an image of his
own reason.
Reaso n is the aspect o f the
mind which strives to encompass and to
know everything, as in Aristotle's claim

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�self in a search to grasp the idea which
one already has within oneself , an idea of
an absolute whole.
Kant's sublime de scribes for me the feeling that one some times has that the only appropriate response to a work of art is joyful tears.
Kant offers as examples of this kind of
sublime beauty St. Peter's in Rome and the
Pyramids.
Because our judgment of the sublime
and the beautiful rests upon our sense of
ourse lves
as
rational
members
of
humankind, our judgments are produced only
in the context of culture and of our common faculties.
Kant claims that the sublime has its roots in human nature, "in
that which, alike with common understanding, we can impute to and expect of every one, viz. in the tendency to the feeling
for (practical) ideas, i.e. to what is
moral."24 We presuppose taste and feeling
in any man of culture.
Since the moral
ideas arise from reason, and the sublime
is a sort of image of our reason, we
ascribe a feeling for sublime beauty to
any moral man.
Kant claims that both beauty and the
sublime are purposive in reference to
moral feeling; the beautiful prepares us
to revere something, not for the sake of
s ome private end, but for the sake of its
form, while the sublime leads us to respect something beyond our own sensible
interests .
Kant makes the limited claim
that an
inte r est in the beauty of nature
... i s always a mark of a good
soul; and ... when thi s interest is
habitual, it at least indicates a
frame of mind favorable to the
moral feelingJ5
One is startled, however, to discover at
the conclusion of the Aesthetic that Kant
has made a reversal, for the final sentence of the first part of the Critique of
Judgment reads:
"the true propaedeutic
for the
foundation of taste is the
development of moral ideas and the culture
of the moral feeling .••. "'ii76" ~It seems
clear that culture and an appreciation of
beauty are bound to one another, but it is
not clear whether a taste for beauty leads
to morality, or whether morality leads to
taste .
Kant very sensibly leaves the
relationship ambiguous.

that all men desire to know.
In sublime
judgments the imagination reaches out in
an attempt to perform the function of reason.
Consequently a judgment that something is sublime, like a judgment of beauty, refers not to the object but the judging subject.
The judgment refers to the
mind's feeling when faced with an object
such as the sea or a cathedral: "the mind
feels itself raised in its own judgment if
•.• it. ..
finds
the
whole
power
of
imagination inadequate to its ideas. 11 22
While a judgment of beauty rests on objective purposiveness, a judgment of the sublime rests on subjective
purposiveness .
In a judgment of beauty some unity belonging to the object occasions my judgment,
while in a judgment of the sublime my own
relative smallness occasions my judgment .
Consequently the sublime "is not to be
sought in the things · of nature, but only
in our ideas. 11 23
Kant's discussion of how this feeling
works on us characterizes my own feeling
in the face of some few very moving works
of art.
I am torn two ways:
I feel torn
because the whole of my imagination can
never equal the enormity I face and at the
same time I feel warmed and excited by the
attempt to capture the whole of the work,
as if I were reaching for something beyond
the everyday . The cathedrals, which were
built for the greater glory of God, do
succeed both in uplifting us and in giving
us a pained sense of our own limitations .
A very great symphony can produce the same
effect, when we swim in the sounds and can
never hope to grasp them all.
To come
away
from
a
cathedral having
simply
admired its lines would be never to have
faced it at all.
Our mind enters into a disturbed conflict in which we are drawn forward by our
imagination's attempts to grasp the whole,
yet we are discouraged by the futility of
our attempt.
Nonetheless, in attempting
to
equal
the
ideas
of
reason
in
imagination we demonstrate to ourselves
that we indeed have such ideas.
One can
conceive of
someone
entering
into
a
cathedral and remarking only that it is
large. To be awed by the cathedral, Kant
very plausibly argues, is to involve one -

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II
Schiller,
however,
borrows Kant's
ideas and boldly claims that artistic
beauty will be man's means to reach a
moral condition.
For him the question of
how man can attain political freedom and
his full humanity is answered by Beauty,
"since it is through Beauty that we arrive
at Freedom. 11 2 7 Ideal Beauty will lead us
to our ideal nature in which the harmony
of our faculties renders us free.
It is
the task of culture to realize this ideal
man in all of us.
As the title of his
book, The Aesthetic Education of Man,
indicates, Schiller is concerned to educate mankind aesthetically so that mankind
can
become
moral.
One
must
admire
Schiller for the nobility of his interest.
Schiller reinterprets Kant's analysis
of the faculties (understanding, judgment
and reason) so that it can describe the
present division of humanity as a whole.
Kant's faculties become impulses or drives
towards the rational, the sensual, and the
beautiful.
Just as judgment mediates between the understanding and reason, so for
Schiller the impulse towards the beautiful
mediates between the sensual and the rational.
In the ideal man the impulses
towards reason and sensation are balanced.
Modern man, however, has become fragmented. The harmony of the ancients has been
lost in the name of Progress and Utility.
In order to further the technical arts man
has specialized.
Some neglect reason in
favor of the sensual (like the man who
works solely with his hands), while others
neglect their senses in favor of reason
(l ike those who theorize and invent).
Schiller is conscious of the dual nature
of art:
like anything powerful it can be
dangerous as well as beneficial. Through
the specialization of the arts, Rea'Son and .
the Ideal have become removed from sensation and reality: we his readers feel the
truth of his claim in our own imbalance
between the speculative and the i ntuitive'.
Schiller's striking description of modern
man anticipates the thought of Hegel and
Marx:
Eternally chained to only one
single little fragment of the

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whole, Man himself grew to be
only
a
fragment;
with
the
monotonous noise of the wheel he
drives everlastingly in his ears,
he never develops the harmony o f
his
being,
and
instead
of
imprinting
humanity
upon
his
nature he becomes merely the
imprint o f his occupation, of his
science. 28
In a
dialectic process
akin
to
Hegel's, Schiller describes the progress
of history as being reso lved by a Higher
Act. This Higher Act is Culture; through
it the third impulse (the play impulse
towards the beautiful } develops.
This
impulse corresponds to Kant's faculties in
free play. For Schiller, Nature and sensation always combine, while the progress
of the understanding demands division and
separation. The power of reason performs
a second synthesis yielding a new whole.
This recombining synthesis manifests itself in history. Our new harmony will not
simply be a return to the original harmonized state of the ancients, for the
Higher Act will unite the simplicity of
the
ancients
with
the
historical
self-consciousness of the moderns.29 The
antagonism between the sensual and formal
impulses will be instrumental in this move
towards Culture; however, as long as the
conflict persists we are only on the way
towards culture. Culture will be a state
in whi ch our rational and sensual impulses
are harmonized by ~ur impulse towards the
beautiful.
For Schiller the conflict of sense
and form in humanity as a whole manifests
itself in the individual as a conflict
between condition and person.
The condition corresponds to the changing particular who is bound to the sensual sequence
of time; it is the verbal aspect of my
being.
The person is the enduring "I"
which is an unchanging universal ideal
outside of and encompassing all time. Man
exists both in the immediacy of the sensu al and as an "I" in some way unaltered by
time. Schiller sees mode r n man as caught
up in the
fragmentation of his own
duality:
particular v ersus universal,
sense versus form, finite versus infinite,

�reality versus ideality.
Cultur e mu s t bring about a harmony
between man's dual impulses.
Ar t preserves the ideal humanity embodied in the
Greeks:
"truth lives on in illusion, and
from the copy the original will once again
be restored." 3 O For Schiller appearance
or illusion does not fall short of the
real, as for Plato, but rather it opens up
towards the i deal.
Schiller exalts the
power of appearance.
The artist, like
Orestes, cleanses the present age by using
material from his own age and the form
from a nobler time, "from beyond all time,
[borrowed] from the absolute unchangeable
unity of his being . " 3 l
The artist must
give the world the direction towards the
good by surrounding it with "noble, great
and ingenious forms
. until actuality
is overpowered by appearance and Nature by
Art . 1132
Art brings · about the Ideal by reconciling the warring impulses of reason
and sensation.
The sensuality of beauty
will soften the restraint of the overly
rational man, while a rt's formality will
tighten the slack sensual man . The ideal
condition will be "sternness with oneself
combined with tenderness towards others." 3 3
The inharmonious man is either
unsympathetic or self-indulgent.
The impulse towards beauty balances the sensual
and rational impulses because it makes use
of both of them.
This play impulse aims at "the extinc tion of time in time," for it attempts
to reconcile the rational (atemporal) with
the sensual (in time ) . 34
Because the
rational is associated with the universal,
and the sensual with the particular, the
play impulse echoes Kant's moral imperative, whereby one's own particular act
must be treated as if it were to become a
universal law.
Kant simply points to .the
similarity between an aesthetic judgment
and a moral judgment by calling beauty the
symbol of morality . Schiller, however, in
a display of his own poetic freedom,
equates the synthesis of the material and
formal with that of the universal and
particular, so that the play impulse
results in yet a third synthesis of
physical with moral necessity in man's

aesthetic
freedom .
Whereas
for
Kant
freedom means autonomous self- consistency,
for Schiller freedom means that we are not
bound to a mere physical necessity, but
can unite obedience to physical law with
obedience to moral law.
The freedom
exhibited in a judgment of beauty, by
uniting the sensual-particular with the
rational-universal, makes manifest man's
moral freedom .
Thus "living shape," the realization
of free play, suggests both the vitality
of a beautiful form and the moral shape a
life will take on if it follows the harmo ny of beauty .
The aesthetic art for
Schiller becomes the art of living, anc:i
the fulfillment of this life is play :
"man plays only when he is in the full
sense of the word a man, and he is only
wholly Man when he is playing . " 3 5 · I am
reminded of Aristotle's conviction that to
be fully alive and at work is one's ful lest pleasure .
We see here the glimmerings of the notion that what it is for man
to be is to be at play : to be creatively
at work on his life.
Play takes on the
sense of ergon, a being at work in the
sense of fulfilling what is most necessary
for man to be a man .
For Heidegger as
well beauty is a way of being at work in
the world .
Thus
freedom
from
necessity
in
Schiller means play, a play involving the
whole shape of o ne's life among men.
Schiller has learned from Kant that beauty
is not simply an attribute of things, but
a state of mind as well :
it is certainly form, because
we contemplate it; but it is a t
the same time life, because we
feel it.
In a word it is at
once our state and our act . 36
Schiller founds his notion of "living
shape" on several Kantian notions. First,
a judgment of beauty is a reflection on
the harmony of our faculties.
Second, in
viewing beauty we must reconcile the uni versal and the particular.
Finally, our
concept of the ideal of Beauty amounts to
an awareness of our own boundless powers
of rational thought .
Schiller, like me,
is inclined to combine Kant's notions of
the sublime and the beautiful. Kant would

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never posit a "rational concept of beauty," for beauty is not a concept but an
idea of the imagination, a reflection on
the. state of our own faculties.
Schiller considers the recognition of
beauty to be proof of our ability to pass
beyond the finite just as for Kant the
imagination's attempts to encompass the
sublime are an image of our boundless rationality. For Schiller, free play
affords a triumphant proof that
passivity by no means excludes
activity, any more than matter
does
form,
or
limitation
infinity
that consequently
Man's moral freedom is by no
means abolished by his necessary
physical dependence.37
This union of disparities in our experience of beauty proves the compatibility of
the finite with the infinite, and consequently proves that an individual act can
become a universal act.
It proves the
possibility of a sublime ideal humanity.
Schiller means far more by "beauty,"
"living shape," and "culture" than is implied in our fine arts.
When he claims
that culture will lead us to ideal humanity, I think that he is aware that no mere
intellectual revolution, no blood-bath,
and no mere conviction in human free will
can lead us to the realization of a peaceful, free world and of our ideal humanity.
By culture Schiller means something like
what the Latin root suggests:
man is
nurtured and cultivated into the organic
whole which is his ideal condition only
through the attentions of his culture. He
must grow up out of the earth of nature,
but he will only grow freely and well if
some artificial attention is given to his
form.
The illusion and artificiality of
human custom makes man conscious of his
own power over the nature whose sensual
law he cannot escape. Art is only beautiful if we are conscious of it as man-made.
our imposition of form on our world yields

)Ur

sense

of moral

freedom.

action, not for the sake of some necessary
of self-interested end, but purely for the
sake of
freedom.
Freedom cannot be
imposed by revolution, it must grow up out
of the fabric of everyday life.
Schiller
elevates Kant's "disinterestedness" to the
stature of the source of our humanity.
Schiller's description of fragmented
man yearning to become reunited portrays
convincingly the modern world and much of
modern art.
Man's desire to find a home
in the universe and to become one with it
may be founded on Schiller's distinction
of person and condition.
We are often
painfully
conscious
of
ourselves
as
fragmented infinitesimals existing in time
yet groping to find a way to equal the
world we live in. We sense that the whole
of what is excedes us in importance and
being, and would like to feel one with the
whole rather than separate.
Baudelaire's
poem, "Les Phares," describes the same
yearning:
Ces mas maledictions, ces blasphemes,
ces plaintes,
Ces extases, ces eris, ces pleura,
ces Te Deum,
Sont~n echo redit par mille
labyrinthes;
C'est pour les coeurs mortels un
divin opium!
C'est un cri repete par mille
sentinelles,.
Un ordre renvoye par mille portevoix;
C'est un phare allume sur mille
citadelles,
Un appel de chasseurs perdus dans lee
grands bois!
Ces c'est vraiment, Seigneur, le
meilleur temoignage
Que nous puissions donner de notre
dignite
·
Que cet ardent sanglot qui roule
d'age
Et vient mourir au bord de votre
eternite ! 38

Beautiful

illusion is the exercise and manifestation
of our freedom.
Thus the art of living
entails making every moment o f one's life
a poetic act, a deliberate exercise of

In
this
poem
artists
from
Michelangelo and da Vinci to Goya and
Delacroix all join in one cry lamenting

13

�man's loss of classical innocence.
It is
the cry itself, the yearning to become one
with God's eternity, which gives testimony
to man's dignity . This cry repeats itself
t hroughout different worlds and ages, al ways reaching for the eternal and timeless
as waves reach for the shore . The preceding poem ("J'aime le souvenir de ces
epoques nus .
. ") s ugge~ts that we are
no longer all that we could be, because we
lost our youthful innocence t o the God of
Utility .
Baudelaire captures t he ache we
have to return to that innocent, unified
state.
Of ten we do experience beauty as an
attempt to escape from the limitations of
time, or to capture time in a moment .
This sense of being freed from time ac cords with Kant's description of beauty as
a concept which is not a schematization of
time through the categories . Although our
experience of beauty is temporal we are no
longer enslaved by time; our experience is
the extinction of time in time.
We are
not limited by the spatial and temporal
qua lity of art, for we become immersed in
the entire world t he work of art depicts .
Each of the painters in "Les Phares" creates a world, yet when I experience tho se
worlds I am not subject to their time or
space; rather, I sense for a moment those
worlds as a whole. Our consciousness that
our experience is not , for onc e, subjec t
t o time give s us a sense of f reedom and
wholene s s which Schiller calls "universal"
and "infinite." I think of Soc rate s gaz ing in timele ss contemplation at the beginning of the Symposium , or of myself
when I am "lost in thought." Insofar as we
have not yet attained to the reintegration
of our faculties or impulses, I think that
Schiller's description of modern man hits
the mark , and, in comparison with Kant's
reduction of the significance of beauty to
a symbol, I respect his sense that Beauty
can be extremely powerful.
I also admire
his wisdom in recognizing that full humanity and freedom cannot be imposed, but
must, just as the word "ethics" implies,
come from custom and habituation.
Nonetheless his conception of beauty
and Culture as the road to morality dis turbs me deeply.
Schiller himself admits

that one could argue that
precisely because taste pays heed
only
to
form
and
never
to
content, it finally gives a soul
a dangerous tendency to neglect
all
reality
entirely
and
to
sacrifice truth and mortality to
an attractive facade . 39
Schiller dismisses this enormous problem,
the problem of the Republic, and all the
examples that history has to offer of its
likelihood , in two paragraphs .
He responds by positing a pure rational concept
of Beauty , and "by this conception we are
to discover whether what experience calls
beautiful is entitled to the name. 114 0
This Beauty cannot be discovered through
experience;
it must be sought along the path
of abstraction , and it can be
inf erred
simply
from
the
possibility of a nature that is
both sensuous and rational; in a
word, Beauty must be exhibited as
a necessary condition of humanity. 41
We must pursue Beauty because "those who
do not venture out beyond actuality will
never capture Tr uth . 11 42 Beauty is thus an
ideal towards which we strive .
This argument is, for me, mere poetic
rhe tor ic .
Why should we strive for an
ideal that Schiller cannot prove we even
have, and which we do not know to be iden tical with the Good o r truth?
At the
foundation
of
this
argument
lies
Schiller's
certainty
that
we,
like
Socrates, wi ll in some way ass ociate the
beautiful with the Good, and the Good with
truth . I do believe that art brings out a
certain t r uth , but I am not sure that that
truth is always moral truth.
Schiller
perhaps argues from his own conception of
what higher art must be and has in mind
his own politically oriented writings.
However it would be dangerous, to say the
least, to assume that the reader will take
Schiller and Goethe as his examples rather
than some less scrupulous poet.
For me, much of Schiller's writing
gains its force from its poetic formulation and not from its argumentation.
I
have
frequently
resorted
to
quoting

Schiller rather than paraphrasing him, for
he is at heart not a philosopher but a
poet. He would like to give his arguments
the force of necessary reasoning, as if
they were logically deduced. However, his
arguments often make use of poetic license.
Because of their generality and
ambiguity (for example, what precisely are
Higher Art, Culture, and Beauty?) his letters are a perfect example o f how art can
be dangerous .
Schiller gives the impression of having logically presented a
necessary truth when he has, in fact, employed poetic persuasion.
For Schiller's argument to work, art
must act on particular men to make them
more harmonized.
It is not clear how art
is to perform its function, since the arts
cannot move men:
an impassioned fine art is a
contradiction in terms; for the
inevitable
effect
of
the
Beautiful
is
freedom
from
passions.
No
less
selfcontradictory is the notion of a
fine instructive
(didactic) or
improving
(moral)
art,
for
nothing is more at variance with
the concept of Beauty than that
it should have a
tendentious
effect upon the character.43
Beauty, apparently, does not teach us or
compel us.
How then do we become more
moral? ThQ move towards Culture can only
happen in individuals, yet it is not clear
how the harmonization is to take place
unless Culture in Schiller's sense has
already been achieved.
Once a whole culture becomes involved in beautiful appearance, it might plausibly be argued that
anyone growing up under its influence will
be moral.
But how are we to reach Culture?
If the transformation is to take
place in individuals through culture (in
the sense of fine arts as we think of
them) I am tempted to laugh cynically with
Alex, the hero-villain of ~ Clockwork Orange:
- - Civilized my syphilized yarbles.
Music always sort of sharpened me
up, O my brothers and made me
feel like old Bog himself, ready
to make with the old donner and

and
have
blitzen
vecks
and
pti tsas creeching away in my ha
ha ha power. 44
For Alex the form and "lawfulness" of
art express dominance, seduction and violence.
Because Culture
in Schiller's
sense has not yet been attained, the art
around Alex does not mold him towards
moral freedom but towards lawless violence.
Schiller claims that through art
the sensual and rational impulses will be
harmonized; however, in Alex the rational
impulse imposes itself violently on the
sensual and the sensual overwhelms the
rational.
The artificial world Burgess
portrays may be full of illusion, yet it
is not an expression of free choice made
manifest in free play. The strict conformity to appearanc_e drives Alex to desire
to break free from lawful imprisonment to
exercise his freedom in lawless violence.
His violence, at least, is not illusory.
I
have
serious
doubts
about
Schiller's claim that beauty leads to morality.
Hitler and Stalin appointed ministers of culture, but that did not make
them Cultured. Art, beauty and culture do
not imply humanitarianism.
Schiller has
not adequately explained how Culture is to
come about through the instrument of the
conflict of sense and reason, yet his
writing persuades us that it will.
My
fear is that Schiller's Aesthetic Education, for all its optimism and beauty,
will distract us from our attention to.
morality itself. I would like to believe
what Schiller claims but I have not yet
seen justification.
When Socrates condemns art as imitation in the Republic he fears the political consequences of illusion. Not all art
is illusory, for not all that is artfully
made aims to deceive.
But Socrates is
aware that, because beauty is powerful, it
can lead us astray.
Schiller's description of the sensual and rational impulses
in
some
ways
resembles
~OCJ:~•'

tripartite soul in the Phaedrus. Schiller
seems to ignore Socrates' image and its
implications on his own theory. Certainly
the sensual element and the rational
element must work together when they
perceive and pursue Beauty; however, in

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15

�the Phaedrus one is always conscious of
the danger that Beauty will provoke one of
the
elements
to
thoughtless
and
destructive action .
The experience of
beauty may in fact unbalance us . It would
be foolish to avoid beauty al together on
that account, but it must be approached
with great caution .
What I miss in Schiller is a sense of
rese r ve in the face of beauty . There are
many k i nds of illusion we can be drawn to
and cau gh t up in; we must be very sure
what we mean by beautiful illusion if we
are to pursue it .
Having noted that the
danger of art disharmonized mankind in the
first place, Schiller would have done well
to bear this danger more in mind when he
sang the praise of "Higher Art . "
III

Nevertheless
there
is
something
deeply true in Schiller's assertion that
"we are citizens of an age, as well as of
a State . " 45 The needs and tastes of our
centur y cannot help but form our sense of
the world, and we owe allegiance to our
own time ; it would be wrong to ignore its
conce r ns whethe r they please us o r not .
Schiller's awareness of the historical
nature of humanity gives him an understanding of beauty which will account f or
the histo r y o f art .
Nothing in Kant • s
ae sthet i cs can describe why each of the
painters in "Les Phares " so emphatical ly
c r eat e s a world of his own, governed by
the age f r om which he emerges .
Only with
the a dvent of a sense of histo ry and o f
t h e development of human consciousness
within it can we account for changes in
style, subject and emphasis .
Art seems to have the power to draw
us into a world or age; we do not simply
stand back and observe the form, or even
simply feel the play of our faculties . we
find ourselves faced with a new way of
being in the world . Heidegger, upon being
moved by a Van Gogh painting, comments
that "in the vicinity of the work we [are]
suddenly somewhere else than we usually
tend to be." 4 6
Let us consider for a moment several
different
works
of
art:
Copland ' s

"Appalachian Spring," Munch's "The Cr y , "
and Homer ' s Iliad . When we encount er each
of these works , we experience the world i n
wholly different ways , all of which may
seem true or real to us .
The world of
"Appalachian Spr ing" is hopeful, young,
decidedly American and highly conscious of
the natural world . Munch's "The Cry" (p .
1000, . Key Monuments of the History of Art)
calls forth an age-old despair, a sense of
alienation from oneself and from the
wor ld .
In
Homer's
Il iad
a
l iving ,
teeming, colorful picture of the world
embraces the unity and blessedness of everything , in spite of the toil and pain
without which that unity would not be pos ~
sible .
Although each of these worlds becomes
real for us, each corresponds to a partic ular time or age , and each comes out of
the sense of the world and the concerns
that pervaded that age.
Copland was an
American in a time when the American dream
seemed possible; Munch was a product of
European malaise brought on by industrialization and the shadow of the world
wars .
In Homer' s time the gods seemed
active in the world, forming and o r dering
it .
None of this means that I must know
the histo r y behind the work to be drawn
into a world, but it does determine how
those worlds are historical .
How i s it po s sible for a work of art
to draw us into a world? Heidegger speaks
of a r t as d r awing us into a wo r ld, and
although he means by "world" something
more ontological than I have in mind in
this discussion of aesthetics , we can
learn much from his thoughts on the mat ter . Heidegger has his own interpretation
of Kantian "disinte r estedness . " While fo r
Kant disinterestedness allows for a purely
free judgment about an object, Heidegger
takes it to be the most pathetic experi ence we can have of an object: "precisely
by means of the 'devoid of interest' the
essential relation to the object itself
comes into play."'+ / We see that whi le in
Kant the beauty in a work of art happens
within the free play of the subject, for
Heidegger it occurs in the relationship of
the receptive subject ·to the work of art .
An experience of beauty requires that

I approach the work without imposing any
of my own needs, desires or expectations
upon it . Only then will it present itself
to me fully .
Heidegger quite literally
intends to say that my manner of approach ing the beings of the world alters their
manner of being present in the world for
me . The work has an integrity of its own
which I must not violate if I wish to ex perience it .
For Kant the importance of
disinterestedness arises not from a need
to experience the work honestly, but from
the necessity that our judgment be free .
Heidegger emphasizes that disinterestedness is not apathy or indifference, but a
bearing towards things . When I face works
of art I must take an interest in them for
what they are in themselves; I must allow .
them to .move me .
Heidegger follows Plato in believing
that the beautiful is that which shines
forth most and which is most lovable . He
too believes that beauty can lead the observer to truth as in the Phaedrus; or
rathe r, Heidegger believes that beauty, in
its shining, is a manifestation of truth
and is not simply an appearance : "Beauty
is one way in which truth occur s as
unconcealedness . 114 8
While for Plato the
r ealm of what truly is keeps its distance
f rom the realm in which beauty appears in
art , Heidegger believes that art tells the
truth .
Plato is unwilling to claim that
beauty can give birth to anything but
"wisdom" . Yet when I am faced with a work
of art I sometimes want to claim that it
te ls a k ind of tru t h abou t the world ,
even though the char acters may not be
r eal . No one ever spoke as Phedre speaks ,
and few people would eve r be faced with
the conflicts she faces , yet there is
something t rue abou t how we see the world
t h r ough the work . Her raw emotion is t rue
to life , whether or not we will ever e x pe rience it in such an undiluted manner .
Socrates does not permi t this kind o f
interpretation of art, for if a thing is
not a real table or an ideal table, it is
less than either of them .
Heidegger
claims that art is not less than reality,
but more .
Art brings out the reality of
real things by telling a kind of truth
about them .

Philosophy, in the course of its his tory, has obscured the reality of things
by imposing various interpretations upon
them . Things have been thought of as made
up of subject and accident, of the unity
of the manifold of sensation, and as mat ter and form.
Heidegger claims that none
of these ways of speaking about a thing
allows it to be what it is in itself .
He
calls these theories "thing concepts," and
points out that our relationship to things
may more properly belong to the realm o f
feeling than ratiocination:
Perhaps however what we call
feeling or mood
is more
reasonable
that is, more
intelligently
perceptive ...
because it was more open to Being
than
all
that
reason
which,
having meanwhile become ratio,
was
misinterpreted
as
being
rational. 49
Because Kant a r ose out of and con tinued the tradition of thinking of things
th r ough conceptual machinery rather than
allowing them to move us , Kant is in a
sense responsible for the rarity of our
e xperience of beauty .
He i degge r claims
that the prevailing thing - concept of informed matter a r ises from our sense that
all things either have a u s e for us o r
seem to have one . Matter is always formec
by the end or telos we find fo r it .
Heidegger would claim that all Kant ' s tal}
of purposiveness indicates Kant ' s inabili ty to think of things of the world withoui
simultaneously
refer r ing to t he ir usE
(whether actual or apparent) .
Even ir
admitting to the non - conceptual element ir
a judgment of beauty , Kant must resort tc
conceptualization : beauty becomes an "indeterminant concept . "
Thus we most of t en approach things a~
use - objects o r equipment . To experience &lt;
thing as it really is we must p r event our selves from imposing anything £ n i t , w~
must allow what is in the thing to shrn
itself .
Here is ho;- Heidegger describe:
what we perceive when we allow a Van Gog]
painting of peasant shoes to "speak" :
From the dark opening of the worn
insides of the shoes the toilsome
tread of the worker stares forth

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17

�In the shoes vibrates the
silent call of the earth, its
quiet gift of the ripening grain
and its unexplained self refusal
in the fallow desolation of the
wintry field ... This equipment
belongs to the earth and is
protected in the world of the
peasant woman.so
Heidegger's feeling description of an
experience of the Van Gogh painting captu r es more of our sense of the wo r ld of
the painting than Kant's free play does.
The painting makes us more conscious of
the life behind the shoes than of the
forms involved in their portrayal.
The
shoes seemed at first to be mere equipment, but, because of their reliable usualness, they give the peasant woman a secure world in which she can reap the mys terious benefits of the earth. Heidegger
sees the being of things as a conflict of
earth and world rather than of form and
matter or sensation and reason. The shoes
are part of the peasant woman's world and
they bring he r into contact with the
earth. The work of art has its quality as
a work because in it the conflict of the
earth and world is at work . This conflict
works on us, the viewers, in our own
world.
Art is, for Heidegger, "the truth
of beings setting itself to work. 11 51 Art
does not testify to our freedom or lead us
to morality, it sets up a world through
the wo r k it performs on us.
In depicting a world the work gives
birth to a world . Heidegger does not mean
that it creat es an atmo s phe re but that it
literally creates a new world. The beings
of the world take on a new being because
of the power of art.
In our ordinary
transaction with things, we use them and
use them up.
We use bricks to make a
house, leather to make shoes . We live in
a world of useful things. However in the
creation of a work of art, the material
does not disappear in usefulness, but
rather becomes more noticeable.
When we
see a stone sculpture, the stone suddenly
becomes remarkable and beautiful, unlike
the brick of the house.
In a poem words
are not simply useful for getting something done; we dwell on them and enjoy

them for their sound and new meaning.
After reading "Les Phares" a beacon is
something new for us.
While Schiller claims that "the real
artistic secret of the master consists in
his annihilating the material by means of
the form, 1152 Heidegger insists that in the
work of art the material first ceases to
be an object to be worked on and becomes
something which acts on its own.
I think
Heidegger is quite right about this; in
the tubes, Monet ' s paints are merely red
and green; once they are brought into
conflict with one another in the painting,
they come into their own and come alive.
We of ten speak of a lyric melody, as if
the very tones could sing, and we a·r e
first conscious of the beauty of wood or
metal when they have become part of an
icon or statue rather than of a table or
car. 53
A good artist does not impose
anything upon the material but rather
works with the material to find the form
within it:" As Aristotle or Michelangelo
would agree, the sculptor finds the statue
in the stone.
Art does not allow us to take its
subject matter or material for granted.
The stone is no longer mere stone, and the
form of the man is not simply "some man."
Things which seem familiar and ordinary
are revealed by art to be extra- ordinary.
Heidegger describes our sense that when we
look at a work of art we are seeing what
it depicts for the very first time.
Rodin ' s sculpture of "La Belle Heaulmiere"
(p.
146 ,
The
Visual
Arts
as
Human
Ex pe r ience) makes us see the degradation
and despair of an old woman as if we had
never seen it before.
Joself Albers'
"Study for an Early Diary" (plate 52)
gives us the sense that that particular
blue is for the first time remarkable and
lovely. Things in the world are no longer
mere things, but entities with a bein~
that
has
nothing
to
do with
their
usefulness or purpose for us.
This sense that the work of art gives
us that things have an integrity and being
of their own Heidegger calls
"selfsubsistence." The unity we find in a work
of art arises from the conflict of world
Thus our sense
and earth enacted in it.

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of the thing as an entity in itself arises
from the conflict of world and earth .
In
the wo r k of art "that which is as a
whole --world and earth in their coun54
terplay-- attains
to
unconcealedness . "
The interplay which for Kant resided in
the play of the faculties, fo r Heidegger
arise s in our consciousness of the primal
conflict
of
world
and
earth.
When
Heidegger speaks of "unconcealedness , " he
is thinking of the Gr eek word for truth,
aletheia .
The etymology of the word
(a- lanthano)
hints that truth is the
un- hidden and un - forgotten . However , just
as for Heraclitus Nature likes to hide , so
for Heidegger the unhidden truth about
things is that they protect their being by
hiding it :
Trut h is un- truth , insofar as
there belong s to it the reservo ir
of the not - yet- uncovered ... In
unconcealedness, as truth , the r e
occur s also the othe r "un- " of a
double
restraint
or
r efusal .
Truth occurs as such in the
oppositio n of clearing and double
concealing . 55
We see this opposition of clearing
and concealing in the conflict of world
and earth, so that Truth happens in the
conflict between the r eticent natu r e of
things and thei r manner o f appearing in
t he world . The hidden character of things
in part arises from our habit of imposing
use and intellectual constructs upon them;
it is not as though we could impose our
will and thought on things forever without
caus i ng them i n some way to turn their
backs on us. The unconcealed characte r of
things is the being they have in spite of
or because of our approach to them . These
two aspects, earth and world, are differ ent, but are never separated and cannot be
resolved .
Heidegger's account of art and our
wo r ld may s ound e soteric, but I think he
is describing something common to our experience .
I will offer several simple
examples of what he means . In the picture
of David Smith's three abstract sculptures
(p. 697, Janson, History of Art), the
conflict of world and earth appe~rs in the
stark contrast between the bold, worldly

forms in steel, and the secretive , ancient
and earthly forms of the branching tree
and the mountains in the distance .
A
sculpture is always influenced by its setting, which is why a traveling exhibition
of sculpture is a contradiction in terms :
the same sculpture becomes a new sculpture
i n every new setting . The setting is par t
of the sculpture . In the same way a piece
of
architecture
is
altered
by
the
city- scape which grows up around it. When
Santa Fe was no more than a settlement ,
the Sanctuario stood out for miles as a
work looming towards heaven . Now it huddles privately amid the buildings towering
above it.
In some way it is a different
building now, for while it once proclaimed
man's desire to pray to God, it now re proaches us for our pride and forgetful ness.
These examples show how the con flict Heidegger describes can arise in the
world into which the work of art enters .
However this tension arises within
the w·o rk itself as well.
Smith's sculptures deny gravity and our expectations .
They are nothing like natural forms, or
the forms we are used to seeing in useful
steel structures . They seem top - heavy and
unlikely; they do not look like they
should balance .
The world the sculpture
sets up counters the earthly setting i n
which we find it .
Smith plays with our
expectations of heavy metal and gravity
and
thus
sets
ou r
world
on
edge .
Buckminster Fuller often plays with th i s
tension between the "stuff" he works wi t h
and the natural laws to which it must adhere. The metal of his architecture pulls
and pushes into a particular conf iguration.
The result is a structure which
bears itself up because of the conflict.
Fuller calls this conflict "tensegri ty , "
for the tension brings about the integrity
or unity of the form (see p . 486, History
of Modern Art) .
If we
return
to
Monet's
"Raue n
Cathedral" we find this tension in the
difference between the atmosphere Monet
creates with his play on light and color,
and what we know to be the
solid,
touchable "stuff" of the cathedral and
paints.
In the Rodin the conflict arises
between the openly sagging dejection of

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�By showing a particular thing
from any given angle, he, Durer
the painter, brings to the fore
not only one single isolated view
which offers itself to the eye ...
Heidegger then elaborates on this thought:
By showing any given individual
thing as this particular thing,
in its singularity,
he makes
Being
itself
visible:
in
a
particular hare, the Being of the
hare; in a particular animal, the
animality. 59
Heidegger quite literally thinks of
art as a "drawing" out from nature of the
truth of objects . The act of drawing creates exactly the sort of conflict he has
in mind between world and earth. The outline of the form along with the shadings
which give it depth, fight with the negative space, the blankness of the paper
which conceals the being of the thing the
artist draws out. The artist captures the
essential conflict between the form of a
thing in the world and the earth from
which it takes its context .
The form is
defined by everything which it is not
(see, for example, Durer's self-portrait,
p. 7 4 7, Key Monuments of the History of
Art) .
T~ drawing-out which the artist
performs "does not let the opponents break
apart; it brings the opposition of measure
and boundary into their common outline ."6 0
Heidegger gives form as much or more
emphasis than Kant does, for the look of
the thing, its figure, shape, or Gestalt
is the manifestation of the strife between
world and earth.
Because the conflict of world and
earth arises both in the work of art and
in our perception of it, it is essential
to the work of art that we, as viewers, be
conscious of it as a work and not as a
use - object.
When we see the art as art,
we are drawn into the world of the w~k.
At the same time, our response to the work
draws the world depicted into our own
world . We no longer see an old woman as
an old woman once we have been drawn into
the world of
"La Belle Heaulmiere."
However
we
do
not
find
the
woman
extraordinary until we have seen her as
extraordinary in a work of art.
Part of

the woman's world and the smooth, sheltered beauty of the reserved bronze from
which she emerges . Although we can sometimes point out the worldly and earthly
aspects of the work, the two aspects are
not like parts which can be separated and
scrutinized one at a time. One arises out
of or in the presence of the other .
This interplay illuminates everything
which the art work touches on : the material, the f orm , the subject of the work,
and the things in the world which the work
depicts.
The work sheds light on the
things of the world:
"this shining,
joined in the work, is the beautiful. 11 56
Like Plato, Heidegger thinks of beauty as
a brief illumination of truth. For Plato,
beauty is like the sun and the Good except
that we receive only brilliant flashes of
it in a kind of flashback or insight.
Heidegger also thinks of our experience of
beauty as a kind of insight except that,
f or him, the true is not simply reflected
in the beautiful; it actually comes into
being and manifests itself in the beautiful.
Thus the making of art is "determined and pervaded by the nature of
creation." 5 7 The poet's action is called
"creative" not by analogy with God's act,
but as synonymous with it.
Art does not
imitate, o r invite free play; it evokes:
"to create is to cause something to emerge
as a thing that has been brought forth. 11 58
Truth does not exist somewhere removed
f r om the conflict o f world and earth; it
occurs in that conflict.
The appearance
of truth is for Heidegger, as for Hegel,
histo rical.
For Plato, it would make no
sense to think of the artist as creative,
fqr everything which "is" in the fullest
sense has always been, beyond time and
human life.
Once truth
is
seen as
historical and the being which is most
fully being resides in the world of knowing men , human creativity makes sense .
In his commentary on Plato's Republic, Heidegger points our that for Plato
art stands far removed from truth.
Art
can only capture a single angle or "look"
of a thing.
In response Heidegger offers
Erasmus'
characterization
of
Albrecht
Durer:

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The viewer creates the work by responding
the beauty o f an object of art lies in our
appropriately to it so that the world
awareness
that
it
is
meant
to
be
opened up by the work becomes part of the
artificial . Plastic flowers are meant to
world of the viewer . The artwork works on
deceive us; their purpose is a pleasant
the viewer and his world, while the viewer
atmosphere.
When we discover that they
sets the work at work in the world .
are
plastic,
they
become
repulsive.
The distinction between creator, art Japanese silk flowers, on the other hand ,
work and observer is lost in Heidegger ,
are even more remarkable and lovely once
for all merge in the worlding of the world
we discover that they are man-made, for
which the art creates. When a work of art
they are not meant to trick us but to
.comes into the world, it offers the pos delight us with their delicate perfection .
sibility of a new and different world.
Art transports us from the realm of
Because human being is historical, art
the ordinary because "the work casts beacts as a sort of prophetic projection or
fore itself the eventful fact that the
announcement to man of his own possibilwork is as this work." 61 The work of art
ities. Man's response to the work creates
does not allow us to ignore its being, as
a new world which itself draws man into a
we usually do with the things in the
new state of being, just as the statue
world :
" ... and what is more commonplace
becomes a new work when placed in a new
than this, that a being is? In a work, by
setting.
contrast, this fact, that it is as a work,
Art is an arche; it is a source and
.
.
h a t 15 unusua 1 . 1162 .
15 JUSt w
beginning of worlds and ways of being in
Our response to each work of art will
the world.
The source of the work of art
be different, and the appropriate response
is the art already at work in the world;
to a work preserves it. For example, for
seeing the David Smith statues set against
a religious work of art to maintain its
the New England hillside may set me to
being as religious, I must let it enter
work to recreate the world I see when
into my devotional life . Heidegger claims
David Smith's world conflicts with his
that if I cannot pray in a temple, it is
earth.
Each work evokes a new world,
no longer the work of art which it was for
which in turn enters into the conflict of
the Greeks.
Once I impose some other reearth and world to produce a new work,
sponse upon the work I am depriving it of
from which another world emerges.
Art
its work-being, for it no longer works on
throws man into a new state of being;
me in its full integrity . The work transHeidegger sees in art the power to draw a
ports us into a world newly opened up to
thing forward into its full actuality,
us; we are displaced, or transported out
somewhat as Aristotle's final or formal
of the realm of the ordinary:
cause moves the things of the world. Yet
To submit to this displacement
Heidegger's history seems not to have a
means :
to
transform
our
final end (as Hegel's does), for every
accustomed ties to the world and
world consists in a conflict which can
earth
and
henceforth
to
never be resolved, and which causes a new
restrain all usual doing and
world.
It will always produce new art
prizing, knowing and looking, in
works, new drawings.
We will never be
order to stay within the truth
trapped, like Kant or Hegel, in a world of
that is happening in the work ...
our own making:
This letting the work be a work
Modern subjectivism ... immed ' ately
we call the preserving of the
interprets creation , taking it as
work. 63
the
self - sovereign
subject's
Thus the being of the work as work
performance
of
genius. . .
But
depends as much upon my preserving it as
(poetic projection] never comes
it does on the original creation of the
from Nothing in that what is
work . A Michelangelo tomb is only a tomb
projected by it is only the
if it has bones in it; a Vermeer ought
withheld
vocation
of
the
properly to adorn the wall o f a house.

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�historical being of man itself.64
Although
man
is
creative
for
Heidegger, it is equally true to say that
art itself is creative.
Heidegger, like
Schiller, recognizes that man both creates
and is created by his culture. An artist
can only draw upon the world before him to
create his art; history consists of his
successive responses to the worlds created
by art.
For Kant, the power of genius is
far more mysterious and subjective than
Heidegger's creativity , for we do not know
its source. The artist
tries, by means of imagination,
which emulates the play of reason
in its quest after a maximum, to
go
beyond
the
limits
of
experience
and
to
present
[rational ideas] to sense with a
completeness of which there is no
example in nature.65
Whereas Kant's genius spontaneously attempts internally to go beyond what the
world offers to him, Heidegger's poet man ifests externally, in his work and being,
an attempt to join in with the being of
what appears through the agency of art .
Because Heidegger's poet has a source
outside himself, one cannot escape the
question: whence comes the eternally gen erative power of this source? Aristotle's
answer to this question is " God," the
prime mover and eternal nous .
Heidegger
evades the question by emphasizing the
historical nature of the being of things
and of art.
There will always be things
and art to elicit a response in the poet
(much as there wil alway s be fathers to
generate
sons
in
Aristotle).
Yet
Heidegge r claims that "language speaks"
and that somehow the poet listens to the
silence of being. At the risk of sounding
Socratic I must ask, if "language" always
speaks to the poet throughout the change able ages, must it not be one thing?
Heidegger must believe that there is a
sense in which the fullest being of things
rests in language. Heidegger's poet lis tens to this language in the same way that
Plato's demiurge looks to the shining of
the forms.
Heidegger cannot escape the
implication that there exists something
divine which calls upon the poet as the

prophet who can lead the world towards
Being.
This thing, Art itself perhaps,
brings us full circle, for we are once
again claiming with Plato that Being (or
Beauty, Truth, Art) is not in the subject
but in something towards which the poet
looks.
Heidegger must presuppose something of a religious inclination in his
reader to be convincing.
The religious tenor of his writing
provokes an objection similar to the one I
raised against Schiller.
Heidegger has
his own peculiar language and style, and
the greatest difficulty in writing about
him is avoiding falling into his own
language . Heidegger wants to avoid using ·
ordinary
speech,
for
ordinary
speech
cannot draw us out of the world of
use - objects in which we are inunersed. His
work cannot be convincing dialectically
because to use logic and argumentation
would be to rely upon the sort of conceptual framework Heidegger wants us to abandon.
Heidegger must let the language he
has
created
persuade
us.
However
Heidegger's position is difficult, for he
is not a poet himself, but the prophet
pointing to the saving power of poetry .
His writing is not poetry, and it cannot
be philosophy in the sense of post-Kantian
conceptualization.
Heidegger's difficult
style, which is so self-conscious as to
become at times strained and artificial,
results from his attempt to write in a
language which cannot be treated as mere
equipment . It must be reflected upon because it is extraordinary.
Consequently Heidegger cannot prove
to me that Truth is historical and that
reality happens in the art work. He must
rely on wordplay, etymologies and apt expressions.
If I am convinced by the essay, it is because it "seems right to me"
and describes well my sense that art draws
me into a world, a notion which Kant neglects .
I am not sure whether his claim
that the only true mode of speech left to
us is poetry is right, but I am sometimes
inclined to think that the images in Plato
and Aristotle will move me in the world
long after I have forgotten the arguments.
For me the greatest appeal in Heidegger
lies not in a powerful argument but in the

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finds its context .
When I walk in Paris
very honest complexity and con fusion in
and s8e the towers of Notre Dame set
his notion of Art.
I imagine that he is
against
the
straight
bold
lines
of
aware of the circularity of his argument .
Montparnasse, a conflict comes alive for
Beauty is not something which can be an me and I see each of the buildings anew .
alyzed, conceptua li zed and packed away.
The past world is the stuff out of which
with beauty, as with life, the questioning
modern man is formed. We are as much made
is all . Art has some power over the viewof our heritage as we are of flesh and
er and the creator which, by its very nabone, and in some ways that past is as
ture, cannot be fully understood , but
unr espons ive and unyielding as the hills
which can create new worlds for us .
of New England .
Heidegger's
thought
seems
essentially
It seems to me that Heidegger does
optimistic to me:
the truth can be right
not take our confrontation with works of
before us if we only open ourselves to it.
art which are not contemporary seriously
It is in someways a return to the stance
enough. A work may in fact come into full
of
pre - Cartesian
thinkers,
for
whom
play long after it was created, as with
epistemology was not an issue because
Bach, Baudelaire, and Heidegger's own fa there was no unbridgeable gap between us
vorite poet, Holderlin.
If anything is
and the thing-in-itself.
We can know as
peculiarly true of us moderns, it is that
much of the truth as we allow ourselves to
we cannot appreciate the art of our own
perceive .
time.
Heidegger is far more sensitive to
Perhaps it is this observation which
the power and mystery of beauty than Kant
prompted Heidegger ~s uppose that works
is .
However,
there is at least one
of art can become mere art objects .
Beglaring problem in Heidegger's account of
·cause the art work consists in conflict,
the beauty in art .
If we think of art
perhaps conflict must enter into our preshistorically as contextual form ( such that
ervation of it. To preserve a Vermeer as
the being of things depends on their
a Vermeer, the middle - class Dutchman lived
surroundings) , we are forced to say that
with the painting in his house.
It was
once the surroundings change the art work
not a museum piece . Perhaps to preserve a
is no longer at work as a piece of art .
piece of modern art I must reject it . The
Heidegger claims that once the world of a
projective power of modern art may lie in
work of art has passed we can no longer
the sense that I have that it conflicts
experience that work; it has become an art
with my understanding of the world . Once
object .
the work of Schonberg or Pollock has beCertainly it is true that the world
come merely palatable it is no longer proof the temple is gone.
I cannot pray in
jecting us beyond what we are. The modern
it, I cannot see it as the appearance of
aesthete ·who can complacently claim to
the gods.
Nonetheless I would claim that
enjoy and understand the music of his time
it is still at work in the world.
It
may in fact be simply enjoying his culstands against the new·world and works on
tural
achievement
("broadening
one's
me in a new way.
When I look up at the
mind") rather than being provoked by a
vault of a cathedral, that experience con radical, extraordinary work which origiflicts with the experience I recall of how
nates a new world .
the world appears when I look up in the
Certainly we o f ten call modern works
streets of New York and see skyscrapers
"ahead of thei r time," which suggests that
re aching for the sky.
My experience of
we can only enjoy them later, orice they no
the cathedral consists in a different conlonger conflict with the world in which we
flict of world and earth than that which
live.
However, for Heidegger, the work
medieval man experienced .
For him the
consists in that conflict, and only pre cathedral stood against the boundless hotentiousness leads us to claim that we
rizon and the fields worked by the peasappreciate art which is dead, because the
ants.
For me it stands as the earth
primal conflict in which it consists no
against which the world of mode rn activity

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�longer exists .
Part of me agrees that
Notre Dame may be lost to a bus load of
camera- clicking tourists (me included) ,
but another part of me knows that the
cathedral still shapes the world of Paris
for those who live there .
Heidegger's concern for conflict ex plains why we have so much difficulty experiencing the art of the recent past . It
has been digested and accepted and has
lost much of its original sheen. Once it
is olde r we c an o nc e again face i t as
something venerable and extraordinary .
When it was first made, it was startling
and remarkable .
But ten or twenty years
after it was made it stands little chance
of exciting much interest . However, none
of these observations are universal, for
Shakespeare has always been appreciated
while Bach was only tepidly received in
his own time, and Andy Warhol, I suspect ,
will go down in art history as a mere nov elty .
The question we are now left with is :
in what sense was and is the art work
"created" if it continues working even
after the "original" conflict which the
poet drew out has been left behind? The
work has s ome powe r not invested in it by
its creator.
If the cathedral is as much
the context for my experience of Paris as
the hil ls a r e fo r my e xperience of Smith ' s
sculptur es, what s o r t of thing is "earth"?
It ha s both a created and an elemental
being .
Not only c a n we not dis t inguish
b e tween the work , a r tist and viewe r , we
cannot finally distinguish the c r eated
from the natural.
Wor l d and earth , al though they are wonderfully apt prelimi na r y distinctions, prove finally to blend
somewhat .
Art seems to be mo r e complex
than even Heidegge r had imagined .

fecundity ,
and
an
energy
quite
comparable to that which springs from
love;
unable , in this new object of
his attention, to separate necessity
from the
arbitrary,
contemplation
from action, matter from mind-- the
philosopher, I say, kept trying to
apply his usual methods of reduction
by
exhaustion
and
progressive
division to this monster of the Fable
of Intellect, this sphinx or griffin,
siren o r centaur , i n wh i ch s e n sati on,
dream, instinct, reflecti0n, rhythm,
and
excess
are
as
closely
intermingled as chemical elements in
living bodies; this strange thing
which nature sometimes offers us, but
as though by chance, and which at
other times is formed , at the cost of
immense effort s , by man, who puts
into it every bit of his mind, time,
determination, in short, his life .
Paul Valery, "Aesthetics 11 6 6
It seems appropriate to end this paper
with the words of the poet Valery re flec t ing on the whole aesthetic question .
With bis precisely aimed barbs of humor
and irony , be laughs at us for the absurd it y of our effor ts .
Kan t, Schiller and
Heidegger all a t temp t to describe beauty
a s a mons t e r with a dual n at u r e , but
Vale r y su gges ts t ha t art is t oo p r o te an
and complex for ou r natur al process of
int e lle ctual div ision t o conque r.
The
elemen t s ent e r ing into our experience of
beau t y a r e many and are int angible:
they
j oin together int o compl ex c r ys t alline
struc t ures which dissolve or recombine t he
moment we scrutinize them .
Although our
whole inve stigation is somewhat ludicrous,
neve r theless it did bear some fruit .
Beauty seems to teach us something
about ourselves as humans.
No other
animals indulge in free play, none discover t heir own f r eedom fr om necessit y o r the
boundless character of their thought.
None grope beyond t h ei r individuality to
find a sense of themselves in the universal whole of things .
Certainly none
create a world for themselves. If some of
the details of our studies have jangled,
if some have conflicted and cancelled , we

Conclusion
Thus,
in
the
presence
of
that
mysterious pleasure of which I am
speaking,
the philosopher,
justly
concerned
with
giving
it
a
categorical
place,
a
universal
meaning, and intelligible function;
fascinated by, yet curious about the
combination
here
of
sensuality,

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must not dismi ss our search as useless but
acknowledge the complexity of ou r subject .
For Valery sug gests , a r t is probably more
or ganic than we would like to admit . We
would like to pin ar t and beauty down , to
me asu r e them and move on to other things,
but like t he electron , ou r own words, and
l i fe itself it eludes us .
Valery claims that man puts every bit
of himself into art; we might recall
Schi ller's conviction that the greatest
piece of art is the art of living.
For
Kant as well, beauty, as the symbol of
morality, seems instrumental in the very
living of life. Certainly, if art and our
sense of life are intimately bound , man
ought to take an interest in aesthe t ics.
Why should the very seed of life elude us?
Heidegger, Valery and Kant all suggest that art is essentially poetic , since
t hey place poetry and language above t he
other arts. Art seems in some way linked
to language, or at least to our attempts
t o symbolize , communicate and t ransform
our internal p r ivate sense of being into
something more external and public, so
that we and our fellow men can examine and
enjoy it more re a dily .
Yet t he language
we ordinarily use (the language of grammar
and dialectic) proves ironically to be a
clumsy instrument for describing what
beauty is. Is it a noun , removed and far
away from us , or is it a verb depic t ing
our own subjective activity?
Perhaps it
is an adjective, but to what shall we attach it? To my faculties, or to some object outside of me , or to the relationship
of subject to object? Or is it an adverb
describing the nature of the motion of my
faculties?
Does the adverb perhaps describe the work of the object on me, or of
me on the object?
The answer to these questions is
probably that all have some truth. Poetry
does not demand logical exclusion, for as
Valery points ·out, "when poets repair to
the enchanted forest of Language it is
with
the
express
purpose
of
getting
lost. 11 6 7 I am reminded of the Baudelaire
poem "Correspondances:"
La Nature est un temple ou de vivants
piliers
Laissent parf ois sortir de confuses

paroles;
L'homme y passee a travers des forets
de symboles
Qui l'observent avec des regards
familiers. 68
The poetic is so difficult to analyse or
describe precisely because what art itself
attempts to capture is so complex:
the
very forest of life and nature it s elf. If
we have had trouble defining artistic
beauty, neither can we define life: " s ome
men have tried to define life; their efforts have always been rather futile, but
life is there just the same. 1169
Each
artist attempts in his way to re-evoke the
world as it seems to him; art does not
talk about things, it presents them before
us as experience . To talk about art is in
some way beside the point.
Art does not
happen in analysis, but in experience, in
feeling and sensation. Most artists would
rather let their works speak for themselves, as if the works had a kind of vitality separate from that of their authors, and a language of their own .
we humans live in a historical world
that changes constantly; the artist finds
new aspects of life to respond to, or he
responds to those which have troubled or
inspired man as a human for centuries.
There will always be love poems, but only
in our own century can an artist address
the
insanity
of
a
rac e
to
selfannihilation.
The word "life" takes on a
new meaning at every moment, and yet the
faculties with which we feel it we share
with all humankind . In general , art seems
to have the character that we as moderns
can look back to appreciate and experience
the art of our predecessors, but one
cannot imagine Homer appreciating Camus ~·
Art is as alive and changing as the human
co nditio n.
Being alive means feeling, and as
Wallace Stevens comments, "it is quite
possible to have a feeling about the world
which creates a need that no thing satisfies except poetry. 117 0
Stevens is not
alone in this sentiment; Valery too fe l t
that some things we experience ask to be
depicted in art. Art d o es n o t simply express, for ordinary wo rds can express
things.
It is a way o f making sense of

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�living .
The artist does not always begin
a work with a clear end in view, a message
to be expressed . Often the very making of
the thing is a way of coming to an understanding of the world, or at least of
sensing the world more fully.
The poet's
concern may be to communicate with himself.
If it happens that we, his human
audience , can experience in his art something of what he felt in making it, so
much the better . Rilke advises the young
poet to search within himself , with i n hi s
own feelings, memories and desires.
The
test of the worth of a poet's verse must
be his own experience of life, not the
opinion of others.
In the Republic, Plato says that the
Good is the source of all things right and
beautiful, universally for all beings . 71
Many things can be measured, analyzed and
discussed , but at least part of the Good
in the life of all beings is not simply
orthos . This other part may not always be
perfect, correct or right, but it is beautiful .
Ordinary speech cannot describe
this aspect of life , for it does not belong to the realm of the philosopher, but
to that of the poet . To ignore the kalon
would be to be only half alive.
To claim that what the poet depicts
in his beautiful art has its source in the
good may s eem perverse .
Baudelaire's
poems are flowers arising from evil .
Munch 's "The Cry" wr enches us with the
agony
of
isolation.
How
can
these
beauti f ul depictions be children of the
Good? Perhaps what art depicts is not the
Good it self , but t h e route to the Good.
The wo r ld Munch depicts is not beautiful,
but his art is; when we feel that ugly
world vividly through the ?ainting, we
pronounce the artwork to be beautiful.
The beauty in the painting arises from its
ability to make us feel .
Baudelaire
attempts to shock his audience out of the
"ennui" which gnaws at life and dulls its
b r illiance.
Munch ' s painting prevents us
from becoming numb to the world and from
ceasing to live because we can no longer
feel.
The alienation we sense in "The
Cry" seems an expression of the despair
Munch feels in a world where humans turn
their backs on one another's feeling .

If we turn our backs on feeling , if
we deny our sensual nature, we are not
fully human.
Sensuality may lead to ex cess, ugliness and pain, but it also
brings with it wonder, delight and pleasure .
The good beauty can lead us to
seems to be an enlivened sense of being, a
more alert perception of the world and a
greater sensitivity to the feeling of
those who surround us .
The heavens pro claim the glory of God; each moment of
e xis t e nc e must b e savor ed even in its ug liness, for unless we feel this world we
are not fully alive .
The poet might re spond to Socrates, you are blasphemous,
for you belittle the grace that God gave
you in simply letting you live in this
world in this form, whatever its limi tations .
It seems to me that the task of the
modern artist is enormous.
We have so
alienated ourselves from our world that we
doubt our very kinship with it .
The
knower (with whom we most identify ourselves) can no longer reach the sensual
wor ld ; our souls are not made of the same
stuff as the cosmos .
How can we feel at
home?
Where is our place?
Is my soul ,
like Baudelair e ' s, a tomb? :
--Mon ame est un tombeau que,
mauvais cenobite ;
Depuis l ' eternite je parcours et
j 'habite ;
Rien n' embellit les murs de ce
clo itre odieux. 72
Are we trapped in a mausoleum of life , no
longer able t o live and feel?
I f feeling me ans f eeli ng t he agony of
Cezanne , Van Gogh , Munch , do we want this
feeling?
They were more vulnerable to
life than most of us ; i t is the burden of
the genius to have his senses heightened
at the expense of his protective skin.
I
often think that in this , at least,
Heidegger was right:
without conflict,
s t ruggle , and pr ob ably pain, t h e r e wou ld
be no ar t , no beauty, and no truth about
life in this wo r ld . Row can we b e ar t o be
in such a world? But how can we dare t o
claim that it should be otherwise? Life
is what we are given.
We may choose to
try to change its quality, to annihilate
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come to terms with it, but there will always remain the astounding fact that it is
ours for no other reason than that we
should live.
It seems to me that beautiful art
moves us because it struggles with the
irrational fact that we exist, which fact
is not a mere object of knowledge but life
itself. We do not know life, we live it;
art helps us work through this mystery,
play with it, delight, despair and puzzle
over it.
Art is above all else an invitation to live and make an art of living.
Although beauty may overwhelm us,
daze us with its genius or estrange us
with its power, it will always awaken in
us a sense that, at least for the moment
we experienced it, we were facing life.
Beautiful art enhances our sense of life.
Life turns out not to be subjective
or objective,
rational or irrational,
beautiful or ugly, but all of these things
in a kaleidoscope of forms of which we are
only a member.
Seeing the beauty in life
arise out of its contradictory and confusing nature is the end of art. .Auden's
tribute to Yeats ends with a summons to
the poet:
Follow, poet, follow right
To the bottom of the night,
With your unconstraining voice
Still persuade us to rejoice;
With
Make
Sing
In a

Stop this
You shall
You shall
eyes
You shall
You shall

the farming of a verse
a vineyard of a curse,
of human unsu ccess
rapture of distress;

In the deserts o f the heart
Let the hea l ing fountain start,
In the prison o f his days
.
73
Teach the free man how to praise.
Each poet inhabits a different world,
yet we all share the world in common. The
poet must teach us how to praise life, and
the source of life, even in the face of
its incomprehensibility.
Like Adam and
Eve exiled from the Garden we must sweat
over the soil of evil to reap the fruit of
suffering. Only the free man can praise,
the man who has risen above the inclination to numb his pain, who rather
works upon it so that, by freely embracing
and cultivating it, he is no longer
imprisoned in life, but living. No animal
other than man can remark upon his being
in the world and rej o ice in it.
Art, like man's very being in the
world, is extraordinary.
It is essential
to art that we know it to be gratuitous,
because life itself is a gift o f grace.
Art jolts us from our complacency and
ennui and gives us a sense that if art can
be a conscious blending of chance and necessity, whim and choice, so also can life
be. The po et invite s us to make our lives
into a poem, or at least t o j oin into
life, like a Greek cho rus which is conscious of the play as -a play, yet which
jo ins in and reflects on its action.
However, I may be drawing upon myself
my
own
criticism
of
Schiller
and
Heidegger.
Allow me t o let a poet speak
as a poet:

day and night with me and you shall po ssess the o rigin o f all po ems,
there are mil l ions o f s u ns left,
possess the good of the earth an d sun • . .
no longer take things at second or third hand . . . no r l ook through the
o f the dead . . . nor feed o n the spectre s i n b ooks,
no t look through my eyes either, nor take thing s from me,
74
listen to all sides and filter them fr om you rself.

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�Footnotes
1.

Bloom
360e .

Plato, Republic ,
(New York:
Basic

trans .
Books,

by A.
1968),

2. This and all quotations from the
Symposium and Phaedrus are taken from
Plato: The Collected Dialogues, ed. by E.
Hamilton (Princeton: Princeton University
Press, 1973).
The passage cited is 202e.
See also 205c.
3. Symposium, 203d.
4. Phaedrus, 250d.
5. See Phaedrus, 264c and 271b.
6. Ibid., 254b.
7.Kant, Immanuel, Critique of Judgment, trans. by J . H. Bernard (New York:
Macmillan, 1951), p.158.
8 . Ibid . , p . 66 .
9 . Valery, Paul, "Aesthetics," trans.

by R.Manheim in Aesthetics, ed. by R.
Manheim (New York: Random House, 1956),
p.58 .
10. Weismann, Donald, The Visual Arts
as Human Experience, (Englewood Cliffs,
Prentice- Hall, 1975).
11. Judgment, p . 56.
12. Ibid. , p. 51
13 . Ibid., p.138.
14. Ibid., p.137.
15. Hume, David, " Of the Standard of
Taste," in Of the Standard ~Taste, ed.
by J . Lenz, (Indianapolis: Bobbs-Merrill,
1980), p.17.
16. Ibid., p.20.
17. Judgment. p.39.
18. Ibid., p.1 29 .
19 . Kant, Immanuel, Groundwork of the
--Metaphysics of Morals, trans. by H.J .
Paton (New York: Harper and Row, 1964) ,
p. 70.
20. Judgment, p.83.
21. Ibid., p.85.
22. Ibid., p.95.
23. Ibid. , p.88.
24. Ib1d., p.105.
25. Ibid. , p.141 .
26. Ibid., p.202.
27.
Schiller, Friedrich,
On the
Aestetic Education of Man, trans. by R.
Snell (New York: Frederick Ungar, 1980),
p.27.

28. Ibid., p.40 .
29 . I learned this from Gisela Bern's
essay "Schiller's Drama--Fulfillment of
History and Philosophy in Poetry," in The
St. John's Review, Summer 1982. See p.23.
30. Aesthetic Education, p.52.
I
have altered Snell's translation to read
"in
illusion"
since
Schiller
uses
" Tauschung" consistently to mean "illusion
or appearance."
31. Ibid., pp.51-52.
32. Ibid., p.55.
33. Ibid ., p.71 .
34. Ibid., p.74.
35. Ibid., p.80 .
36 . Ibid., p . 122 .
37. Ibid.
38. Baudelaire, Charles, Les Fleurs
du
Mal
et
Autres
Poems
(Paris:
Garnier - Fl~mmarion, 1964), p.42.
39. Aesthetic Education, p.57.
40. Ibid., p.59.
41. Ibid., p . 60.
42. Ibid.
43. Ibid., pp.106- 107 .
44. Burgess, Anthony, A Clockwork
Orange (New York:
Random House, 1981),
p . 45 .
45. Aesthetic Education, p.25.
46. Heidegge r, Martin, "The Or gin of
the Work of Art," in Poetry, · Language,
Thought, trans.
by A. Hofstadter (New
York : Harper and Row, 1971), p.35 .
47 .
Heidegger ,
Martin,
Nietzsche
(Volume I:
The Will to Power as Art),
trans. D. F . Krell (San Francisco:- Harper
and Row, 1979), p.110.
48. " Origin ," p . 56.
49 . Ibid., p.25.
50. Ibid., pp.33-34.
51. Ibid., p.36.
52. °AeSthetic Education, p.106.
53. I would, howeve r , claim t hat the
wood can come to life in a lovingly crafted table which is so well made that it not
only functions, but draws attention to its
being a table because it so perfectly performs as a table.
54. "Origin," p.56.
SS. Ibid., p.60.

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56.
57.
58.
59.
60.
61.
62.
63.
65 .
66.
67 .
68.
69.

70 . Stevens, Wallace, Poems E.Y_
Wallace Stevens, sele cted by S.F.
Morse, (New York: Rand om House,
1959), pp.v-vi.
71. Republic, 517c.
72. Les Fleurs du Mal, p. 44.
73. Auden, W.H.-,-Selected Poetry of
W
.R. Auden (New York: Random
House, 1971) , p.54.
74. Whitman, Walt, Leaves E_f Grass,
ed . by M. Cowley (New York: Viking
Press, 1969), p .26 .

Ibid., p.56.
Ibid., p.60.
Ibid.
Nietzsche, pp.186-187
"Origin," p. 63 .
Ibid., p.65.

Ibid.
Ibid.,

p.76.
Ibid., p.158.
"Aesthetics," p.48.
Ibid .
Les Fleurs du Mal, p.39.
"Aesthetics," p.6 0 .

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�--------------

From Plato's Phaedrus

Translation
George McDowell

In our present state there is no splendor in the

likenesses of justice and moderation and whatever else
to souls is precious, although by means of imperfect
organs and with difficulty, a few are able to discern
in these likenesses some semblance of the originals.
Beauty however, was radiant to behold when, in company·
with that fortunate choir, we followed Zeus and others
followed other gods, and looked on a blessed sight and
spectacle, and were initiated into that which is
properly called the most divine of the mysteries.
Fulfilled, we celebrated unaffected by the evils that
awaited us in later days, and witnessed in brilliant
light perfect, innocent, peaceful and sacred visions.
We were as yet undefiled: free of the bodies in which
we are now confined as are oysters in their shells.
Let these things then serve as a tribute to memory,
on account of which I have spoken overlong in yearning
for a distant past.
Beauty, as we observed, did
indeed shine brightly amidst those visions, and coming
hither, we were again able to perceive her glistening
splendor through the most distinct of our senses. But
even though sight is the keenest of the body's senses,
from it wisdom remains hidden; for how powerful would
be the love inspired in us for wisdom, as well as for
those other equally lovely ideas, if we but had clear
images of them within our view. As it is, however, to
beauty alone falls the ordination to be both the most
v isible and the most beloved .

George McDowell attended St. John's in Annapolis for three years. He is
now a first year law student at The University of Maryland in Baltimore.

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�Racine's Phaedra: Remembering Who We Are
Lisa Eckstrom

109 2

Examinez ma vie, et s ongez
qui je suis.

le sang fa tale and ignore the story of
Helios our grandsire; we refuse to admit
both as co-existent.
We must not forget
Misfortune in Racine's Phaedra
that there are true stories as well as
comes not from inability to know who we
false even though the true stories may
are, but from inability to be who we are.
tell us conflicting things.
The stories
Phaedra is a play full of myths and
may be of things within us, true things
genealogies.
We are told the stories of
which are in conf lie t.
Phaedra remind~
our fore~athers, and apprehend our coming
Hippolytus:
de~truction, all the while clinging to the
598
Dans le fond de mon coeur vous ne
maJesty of our history,
for we are
pouviez pas lire.
descended from the Gods.
we are the
Hipp~l~tus, the lover of Purity, does not
Children of the Earth, and we are the
recognize Phaedra as a daughter of Purity.
Children of the Sun, the Children of Light
It is the other story that he remembers
and Purity.
1151
Phedre est d'un sang, Seigneur,'
We depend on our stories to know
vous le savez trap bien,
who we are, and to know what it is to be a
De toutes ces horreurs plus rempli
If we are told false
man .or a woman.
que le mien.
stories, we will see the world as it is
The story of Phaedra is not complete
not, .and we may become lost. The glorious
unless the story of ~ sang fatale is told
stories of the exploits of his father
as.a part of her lineage from the Sun.
convince Hippolytus that he lives in a
This paper will trace the stories of the
world
in
which
men
ki'll
monsters·
tw~ major
families in the play,
the
Hippoly~us
is
destroyed.
Oenone,
the
Children of the Sun, and the Children of
woma~ who has raised Phaedra, offers her
the Earth.
Since a Honste
is portrayed
stories of the gods:
as a member of one of these families, and
1304
Les Dieux meme, les Dieux de
'
since Monsters play significant roles in
1 , Olympe habitants,
t~eit
histories,
Monsters
will
be
Qui d'un bruit si terrible
discussed as well ·
It will be necessary
epouvantent
les crimes J
~
to ex~lor: the relationship of Oenone (and
Ont brule quelquefois de feux
of Theramene briefly) to those whom they
illegitimes.
serve as false interpreters ·
Rac1ne ' s
·
Oenone's interpretation is clear: Mortal,
account of who men and women a re will be
submit to a mortal fate. Oenone's role as
found not only in the stories he has the
story-teller will not end here:
she will
characters
tell,
but
in
their
tell Theseus the deceptive stories that
interpretations as well.
lead to Hippolytus' death.
All stories need not be deceptive,
though stories that come from within are
******
CHILDREN OF THE SUN
complex.
In
order
to
achieve
a
n on-c on tr adict ory account of who we are,
We first view Phaedra when she has
we of ten te ll one
sto ry
and
ignore
rallied her strength in order to see and
another.
We c oncen trate on the story o f
show
herself
before
t he
Sun
her
A

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grandfather
for
the
last
time.
The
unrelenting brightness of the Sun, a
symbol of life and purity, is exceedingly
difficult to bear.
As a child of the
light, she has been instilled with a
remarkable sense of innocence and guilt.
She sees unhesitatingly:
There is only
black
and
white.
Crime
is
crime;
innocence is innocence.
There are no
ambiguities in her distinctions.
Just as
the light of the day allows nothing within
i ts reach to remain hidden, so too the
inherited light within Phaedra exposes the
darkness of her incestuous love.
She may
have fallen;
there may be no turning
back; but she remembers the difference
between innocence and sin.
She sees no
consolation in the fact that she. has
sinned in her heart only, and not in deed.
She has. sinned.
She has blackened what
once was all of light. She must exercise
the only control she has: she must die.
Her first words
153
N'allons point plus avant .
Demeurons, chere Oenone:
Je ne me soutiens plus,
ma force m'abandonne.
Mes yeux sont eblouis du
jour que je revoi,
Et mes genoux tremblant s
se derobent sous moi .
Helas !
re- echo Theramene's desc r iption of Phaedra
as a woman searching fo r dea t h.
Phaedra
seeks r est . She seeks to be r eleased from
her torment, yet she places herself before
the Sun .
Why would Racine choose to
introduce Phaedr a imp l or i ng He l i os r a t he r
than Death?
The precedent of addressing
Helios is set neither by Euripides, nor by
Seneca . Placing herself before the Sun is
the final act of exposure for Phaedra. By
d.o ing so, she acknowledges all that was
once pure and majestic within he r .
She
does sC&gt; for the last time.
She can no
longe r cla im pur i t y a nd majes t y .
The
journey is difficult, for Phaedra will not
be able to rest under the Sun's gaze as
she would be able to rest in the oblivion
of death. The Sun's rays compel her to
acknowledge that she has betrayed the
nobility that she claimed as a descendant
of the Sun.

Hence, before the Sun, the trappings
of
earthly
nobility
seem
especially
ludicrous: .
Que ces vains o r nements, que ces
voiles me pesent!
Quelle importune main, en formant
tous ces noeuds,
160
A pris soir sur mon f r ont
d'assembler mes cheveux?
Tout m'afflige et me nuit , et
conspire a me nuire .
The cares taken for her app e a rance are
meager provisions against the horror t ha t
t he Sun exposes.
Oenone mistakes her reaction :
165
Vous- meme, rappelant votre force
premiere;
Vous vouli~z vous montrer et
revoir la lumiere;
Vous la voyez , Madame; et prete a
vous cacher ,
Vous haissez le jour que vous
veniez chercher?
Phaedra does not hate t he day; she hates
the blackness which the light of the Sun
exposes.
The horror of constant l y haying
to confront herself as s.inner, o f 1'.ever
having some small clause or condition with
which to excuse and hide herself , ravages
and tortures a soul whose ances.try has
imbued it with a signal sense of purity .
She calls out:
Noble et brillant auteur d'une
triste famille ,
170
Toi, dont ma me r e osait se ~an ter
d'et r e fille ;
Qui peut- etre r ougis du t r ouble ou
t u me v o is ,
Soleil , je te viens voir pour la
derniere fois.
Racine
thus
reminds
us
of
Phaedr a's
glorious ancestry.
He int r oduces us to
Phaedra, not as the child of Pasiphae , the
woman who lusted after the bull, but as
the child of Helios.
As the Child of
Helios , Pha edr a i s noble and b rilliant , ·
possessing dignity and purity . The stress
is Racine's:
Euripides does not mention
Helios in this context, and Seneca does so
only briefly.
In Seneca's Hippolytus,
Oenone
mentions
Helios
as
Phaedra's
grandfather while
trying
to
dissuade
Phaedra from her love for Hippolytus.l

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�From Phaedra's first words, Racine reminds
us that we are descendend from purity and
that we have it within us.
"Soleil, je te viens voir pour la
derniere fois" is taken from a line in
Euripides' Hippolytus.
Aphrodite reveals
that today is the last day that Hippolytus
will see the Sun. By attributing the line
to Phaedra, Racine shifts the focus from
Hippolytus to Phaedra. There is something
eerie in a mortal's knowing it is her last
day.
It is as if all that Aphrodite knew
in the ancient play is now contained
within the characters.
Though
Phaedra
gathered
her
strength to show herself before the Sun,
the humiliation is too great.
She needs
to hide, and cannot hide behind any
outward
trappings.
It
is
her
own
imagination that provides the release;
escape comes from within.
176
Dieux! Que ne suis-je assise a
l'ombre des forets!
Quand pourrai-je au travers d'une
noble poussiere
Suivre de l'oeil un char fuyant
dans la carriere?
From despair her imagination has taken her
to a place beyond the Sun's reach, where
the distinctions she cannot avoid would
disappear.
She cannot see clearly;
the
image is only murky; fine details are
obscured by the dust and shade. The power
of Phaedra's imagination is that it can
carry her beyond the desire to be out of
the Sun's glare and in the comforting
shade of
the
forest
associated with
Hippolytus,
to
a
definite,
though
conjured,
time.
"Quand pourrai-je .•. "
places Phaedra in a future world where she
will be able
to
gaze at Hippolytus
unashamed.
The reality of such a world
may now compete with the demands of the
real world (of the Sun's gaze) placed on
her. There can be no such world: Light,
when it enters darkness, does not lose
itself in the darkness, but illumines the
darkness.
Though Phaedra may at times
free herself from the strictness with
which she judges herself, she will always
return to it; she carries it within her
and
cannot
ignore
it.
Phaedra's
imagination implants the seed of a false

and therefore cruel hope that there may be
such a time of oblivion , a time in which
she need not regard her incestuous and
adulterous love with horror.
She catches hold of herself almost
immediately; but it is already too late:
Insensee au suis -je ? et qu'ai
180
]e dit?
Ou laisse-je egarer mes voeux,
et mon esprit?
She struggles to place herself before the
sun again , to leave the realm of the
imaginary
shade.
Esprit,
properly
functioning, must be a quality of the day,
of clarity and distinctions.
Once she
places herself
in
the world of
the.
imagination, it can no longer be relied
on; its power is cut short:
181
Je l'ai perdu: Les Dieux m'en ont
ravi l'usage .
The boundaries of Phaedra's shame are
expanding.
Even
earthly
dignity
is
becoming impossible.
Oenone, la rougeur me couvre le
visage,
Je te laispe trop vois mes
honteuses douleurs,
185
Et mes yeux, malgre moi, se
remplissent de pleurs.
Though Oenone urges her to cling to life,
Reparez promptement votre force
abattue,
215
Tandis que de VOS jours prets a
se consumer
La flambeau dure encore, et peut
se rallumer.
Phaedra's path must be to death. When she
sees clearly, she knows that there can be
no repair. She has made a journey to say
goodbye to the Sun, to acknowledge the
purity she could once claim as her own,
and she realizes that if she were to
continue to live, she would have to
compromise
her
sense
of
purity
and
impurity:
217
J'en ai trap prolonge la coupable
duree

Oenone does break Phaedra's silence;
she
will not spare her.
When Oenone assumed
the position of the suppliant, Phaedra had
to choose between two forms of piety. It
would be impious for Phaedra to turn away
Oenone,
and it would be impious for
Phaedra to break her silence. Phaedra has
been presented with an escape:
she has
been presented with a pious means of
telling her secret . She takes it.
As Phaedra considers where to begin
the story she must tell Oenone, her other
history comes to mind. She reminds Oenone
of
her
other
ancestors,
her
mother
Pasiphae (and thus indirectly her halfbrother the Minotaur)
and her sister
Ariadne.
As a member of such a family,
Phaedra knows the horror of the impending
disaster, not from prior experience, but
from her genealogical history .
Racine reminds us in this recitation
of ancestors that Phaedra has a unique
viewpoint.
Not only has she inherited a
sense of purity from Helios , but she has
inhereited something else which is just as
essential, le sang fatale. As her resolve
(to keep her shame concealed) cn1mbles,
she recalls this other knowledge that her
bizarre genealogy gives her.
She recalls
the mother and sister who were destroyed.
She knows passion, though she was never
before its prey.
She knows the disaster
of its false oblivion:
O haine de Venus! 0 fatale
colere!
250
Dans quels egarements l'amour
j eta ma mere!
253

Ariane, ma soeur! De quel amour
blessee,
Vous mourutes aux bards OU vous
f\ites laissee !

257

Puisque Venus le veut, de ce sang
deplorable
Je peris la derniere, et la plus
miserable.

...........

Graces au Ciel, mes mains ne sont
point criminelles:
Plut aux Dieux que mon coeur fut
innocent comme elles!

Phaedra's attention has turned from the
Sun to the blood she shares with her
mother and sister. They too became lost.
It must be remembered that they shared
Phaedra's royal descent from the sun, that
they too were once of purity and light.
Phaedra has no illusions that the grasp of
eras on her is anything other than fatale .
She knows that if she lives, she is lost .
She does not have the strength to turn
back.
She has tried.
She has banished
Hippolytus; she has offered sacrifices to
Venus.
She knows that she has lost her
ability
to
see
her
world
clearly,
unobscured by imagination, and thus knows
that she has lost mastery of herself.
Phaedra then begins her story for
Oenone.
She
no
longer
lists
her
ancestors, but tells her own history .
Having
remembered
Helios'
purity
and
ability to expose impurity, and having
remembered the sufferings of her mother
and
sister,
Phaedra
recognizes
her
condition and the horror of it:
305
Ce n'est plus une ardeur dans mes
veines cachee;
C'est Venus toute entiere a sa
proie attachee:
J'ai concu pour mon crime une
juste terreur.
J'ai pris la vie en haine, et ma
flamme en horreur.
Je voulais en mourant prendre soin
de ma gloire,
Et derober au jour une flamme ~ si
noire.
She resolves to die, She understands her
helplessness.
"C' est Venus toute e t. e r e
a sa proie attachee." Phaedra sees: she
is small and she will never overcome her
predato.r.
Every moment she lives is only
a brief postponement of her inevitable
destruction and a prolongation of her
torture and terror.
She has been caught.
Venus has her within her grasp.
Phaedra
will be destroyed . Under such conditions,
one desires that the destruction be swift
and therefore merciful.
As before, however, her resolve to die
cannot be sustained.
A messenger interrupts her thoughts and brings news of
Theseus' death. Phaedra says nothing. It
is Oenone who paints a picture as deadly

Je t'en ai dit assez. Epargne-moi
le reste.
Je meurs, pour ne point faire un
aveu si funeste .

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�as that of any imagination:
350
Vivez, vous n'avez plus de
reproche a vous faire.
Votre f lamme devient une f lamme
ordinaire.
Thesee en expirant vient de rompre
les noeuds,
Qui f aisaient tout le crime et
l'horreur de vos feux.
Knowing her ancestry, how could love ever
become ordinaire? Within her family love
has never been ordinary. It has been monstrous
and
destructive.
Moreover,
Oenone's words are false legally and
morally. 2
The world Oenone presents is a false
world, but it is a world in which Venus'
curse no longer exists, a world in which
Phaedra could live.
She releases herself
into a false world which may only be
imagined.
With the stories told and the. ancestry delineated, Racine properly begins
his play. We will learn more of Phaedra's
ancestry as the play develops, but we may
not begin until properly instructed in the
myths that run concurrent throughout the
play.
At almost every turning point,
there is a history that will guide Phaedra
or will explain her behavior. Phaedra the
grand-daughter of the Sun has postponed
dying, though to live she must make moral ly compromising decisions. As the descen dant of Helios, such decisions will go
against her nature.
We are reminded of
our Christian ancestry in Adam and Eve .
Through Adam we are the fallen descendants
of God.
Remembering Phaedra's ancestry,
we see ourselves as descended from purity
(God) that has fallen (Adam) . We see ourselves as the unwilling and helpless prey
of sin.
We have moments of clarity, in
which we see sin as sin and innocence as
innocence; yet
we constantly lose our
way.
We believe we may hide behind
extenuating circumstances. But in reality
we learn that nothing is hidden from the
All-Seeing Sun, though we sometimes take
flight in our imagination from the Sun
within.
This Christian perspective will
be discussed further later, but sho~ld be
noted here. Part of the power of the play
is that it tells us . not only who we are as

Christians, but where we are hiding as
Christians as well, and exposes the lies
that encourage us.
Like the strong undertow that pulls
Hippolytus
further
and
further
from
himself, so Hippolytus' presence draws out
all that Phaedra would wish hidden.
She
cannot restrain herself from seeing him.
She reasons that she must plead for her
child .
She then loses her way in his
presence.
The conflict had become intolerable for Phaedra; her strength was not
sufficient to keep her feelings hidden,
though she demanded of herself that she do
so.
Caught between opposing desires,
Phaedra's imagination gave release.
In
Act One, Phaedra's imagination created a
future; in Act Two, it creates a past that
never was.
Phaedra struggles to retain clarity and is unable. A longing to disclose
her love· finds its way into her speech:
598
Dans le fond de mon coeur vous ne
pouviez pas lire.

615

Ah, Seigneur! que le Ciel, j'ose
ici l'attester,
De cette loi commune a voulu
m'excepter!
Qu'un soin bien different me
trouble, et me devore!

629

•... Je m'egare,
Seigneur, ma folle ardeur malgre
moi se declare.

In these lines, Phaedra catches herself
before she discloses too much to be misunderstood.
As Phaedra begins to paint the picture
of Theseus, and to imagine his past
exploits, she becomes hopelessly lost in
an unreal world and thus becomes unaware
of Hippolytus' presence before her, though
indeed it is that which made this flight
of the imagination necessary. The artist
is free to change particulars, and in this
flight
she does so.
Her imagination
becomes overtly creative:
640
Tel qu'on depeint nos Dieux, ou
tel que je vous voi.
Her imagination then moves beyond the picture to a story, rearranging details in

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such a way that Phaedra lives in a past
where it is honorable and even virtuous to
love Hippolytus.
In this imaginary past,
she is his rescuer, his heroine, and his
lover . She begins:
645
Que faisiez - vous alors: Pourquoi
sans Hippolyte
Des heros de la Grece assembla-ti l l'elite?
Pourquoi, trop jeune encore, ne
putes-vous alors
Entrer dans le vaisseau qui le mit
sur nos bords?
"If only things had been different" is
Phaedra's tone in this quat rain. The tone
then changes.
Phaedra begins to alter the details of
Theseus'
famous
descent
into
the
labyrinthe. Her description is strikingly
sexual.
The descent into the labyrinth will be
discussed in depth in the section of this
essay on Monsters. It is significant here
that it is Phaedra's imagination which
betrays her, not Oenone and not Phaedra
herself -- that is, not Phaedra as the
descendant
of
Purity.
Phaedra's
imagination mediates between the desires
inf lamed by the curse which Venus has put
on her family, and the purity that Phaedra
demands of herself as a Child of the Sun,
and which, to the degree that she is a
Child of the Sun, Phaedra possesses. The
power of this imagination is such that
when Phaedra discloses all, she is blind
to the shocked Hippolytus before her. Her
question :
665
Et sur quoi ju~ez-vous que j'en
perds la memoire,
Prince? Aurais-je perdu tout le
soin de ma gloire?
is genuine . It is only after a moment has
elapsed in which she collects l).erself that
Phaedra realizes what she has done.
She
knows
that
Hippolytus
has understood
her meaning, "Ah, cruel, tu m'as trop
entendue." Her shame has greatly expanded; she must now prepare to die.
Preparing for death, Phaedra again
recalls her ancestors and the history of
their destruction:
677
Objet infortune des vengeances·
celestes,

Je m'abhorre encor plus que tune
me detestes.
Les Dieux m'en sont temoins, ces
Dieux qui dans mon f lanc
Ont allume le f eu fatal a tout mon
sang,
Ces Dieux qui se sont f ait une
gloire cruelle
De seduire le coeur d'une faible
mortelle.
Remembering her ancestors, Phaedra is able
to understand what has happened. She understands what she has done.
She understaf1.ds the horror of it; and she knows
herself as helpless and guilty at the same
time.
She begs Hippolytus to kill her,
and when he hesitates, she grabs his sword
to kill herself.
It is then that Oenone takes the role
of Phaedra's baser inclination to live at
all cost.
Human beings cling stubbornly
to life; self-destruction eludes Phaedra
again and again.
"Faibles proj ets d' un
coeur trop plein de ce qu'il aime!"
Mortals cannot bear extended exposure of
self-examination,
which
are
kinds
of
deaths or humiliations. Phaedra could not
have continued demeaning herself-674
J'aime . Ne pense pas qu'au moment
que . j e t' aime ,
Innocente a mes yeux je m'approuve
moi-meme,
Ni que du fol amour qui trouble
ma raison
Ma lache complaisance ait nourri
le poison.
--without her imagination or Oenone has tening to offer some escape.

Having
exposed
an
unrequited
and
shameful love, Phaedra desires to be hidden as Act Three begins.
740
Cache moi bien plutot, je n'ai
que trop parle
Mes fureurs au dehors ont ose se
repandre.
J'ai dit ce que jamais on ne
devait entendre.
And Oenone does try to hide Phaedra from
herself as well as others. Pascal's ideas
of diversion immediately come to mind.
Oenone acts as Phaedra's imagination,

37

�~roposing

deliverance . Remembering the last line of
the labyrinth speech, it is as if Phaedra
now wishes that she and Hippolytus would
be lost forever:
0 t oi . qui vois la honte ou je
.'
.
suis descendue,
Implacable Venus, suis-je assez
conf ondue?
Tu ne s~urais plus loin pousser ta
cruaute.
Ton :riomphe est parfait, taus tes
traits ont porte.
Cruelle, si tu veux une gloire
nouvelle,
Attaque un ennemi qui te soit plus
rebelle.
Hippolyte te fuit, et bravant ton
courroux,
Jamais a tes autels n'a flechi
820
les genoux.
. ~haedra has begun a descent which is
gaining speed; she has lost control. She
has lost her ability to act as a Child of
the Sun with the advent of all the worlds
her imagination has imposed:
she no
~onger sees clearly, knowing innocence as
innocence and sin as sin. She has entered
the murky worlds of her imagination in
which s?e must depend on her . own blurred
perceptions and the perceptions of her
nurse to guide her . She has entered into
the oblivion of eros. The restraints with
which the play began can call to her only
faintly.
She has no rest ·
Her sin h as
.
grown.
Oenone's advice under such conditions
11 faut d'un vain amour etouffer
825
la pensee,
Madame. Rappelez votre vertu
passee.
seems wildly optimistic.
It is as if
Phaedra had abandoned herself to the tid
that Hippolytus mentioned earlier.
could no longer reach the shore, the
undertow being too great' so she allowed
herself to be swept out to sea • N~, f ~
f
rom shore; Oenone does not understand
that there is no returning to it.
Phaedra hears that Theseus is al.
Sh
.
1
ive.
e again rea izes that she must die. The
story of the world in which Theseus was
d~ad,
and in which she and Hippolytus
might have come to love each other has

diversions to prevent Phaedra
rom dwelling on the shame and horror of
her
condition.
Oenone
proposed
that
Phaedra involve herself in the govern i ng
of Ath
ens, since Phaedra is a descendant
of Minos. Minos, however, does not play a
determining role in what kind
f h
bei
Ph d
.
o
uman
. ng
ae ra is. We know Phaedra primarily as the daughter of Helios.
The descendant of Helios cannot replace lost
Virtue by embracing worldly Honor.
She
answers Oenone , no t as the daughter of a
great King, but as the descendant of purity and clarity:
760
Moi, regner! Moi, ranger un Etat
sous ma loi!
Quand ma f aible raison ne regne
plus sur moi,
Lorsque j'ai de mes sens abandonne
l'empire,
Quand sous un joug honteux a peine
j e respire,
Quand je me meurs.
Oenone cannot let Phaedra die. She easily
discards one diversion for the next' and
advises a more desparate action "F
"
Phaedra cannot.
'
uyez.
Phaedra has crossed a boundary, which,
once crossed cannot be re-crossed.
There
is no turning back nor escaping. She can
move only if she moves forward, into the
madness:
Enf in, tous tes conseils ne sont
791
plus de saison.
Sers ma fureur, Oenone, et non
point ma raison.
Phaedra's character is such that it . does
not admit of a middle course; her passion
takes on the proportio~ of greatness that
her purity possesses. Her command renders
Phaedra as the grand-daughter of Helios
passive.
As she concluded the labyrinth
speech, Phaedra imagined that she could
find herself again in love.
S a 1va t•
th
h
ion
roug
love
is no
longer
.bl
possi e;
Phaedra acquiesces in despair and then
begins
to
imagine
a
different
Hippolytus.(781)
Three times Phaedra has prepared to
die' and three times she has lost her
resolve.
Alone, without hope of delivering herself from Venus, she abandons herself to Venus, hoping for another kind of

s~:

Act Four begins after Oenone's
been shown false. She sees clearly:
lies to Theseus have been successful.
853
Je connais mes fureurs, je les
Hippolytus has been banished. Yfuile begrappelle toutes.
ging Theseus to spare his son, Phaedra
857
Mourons. Setant d'horreurs qu'un
learns of Hippolytus' love for Aricie.
trepas me delivre.
Suddenly, a second story has proved false.
Est-ce un malheur si grand que de
Hippolytus is not unable to love. Perhaps
cesser de vivre?
he feels reserve for Phaedra alone of all
Phaedra's only fear is for her children.
women:
As the daughter of an infamous mother,
1203
Hippolyte est sensible et ne sent
Phaedra realizes the shame that they will
rien pour moi!
carry with them.
Phaedra
must
acknowledge
a
real
Oenone grows bold:
Hippolytus.
She can no longer freely
885
Pourquoi done lui ceder une
imagine a time when she will be the woman
victoire entiere?
to break his cold reserve.
Vous le craignez . Osez l'accuser
Though
her
own
imagination
has
la premiere
deceived her, Phaedra attributes the deDu crime dont il peut vous charger
ception first to Hipploytus and Aricie:
aujourd'hui.
1231
Ils s'aiment! Par quel charme
Qui vous dementira? Tout parle
ont-ils trompe mes yeux
contre lui.
Comment se sont-ils vus? Depuis
Yet Phaedra still clings to her respect
quand? Dans quel lieux?
for light and purity:
She then ascribes the deception to Oenone:
893
Moi , que j'ose opprimer et noircir
1233
Tu le savais. Pourquoi me
l'innocence!
lassais-tu seduire?
Oenone refuses to be dissuaded.
The esDe leur furtive ardeur ne
cape from death involves the substitution
pouvais-tu m'instruire?
of one world for another as before. The
Les a-t-on vu souvent se parler,
world of the Sun, where Virtue alone is
se chercher?
important, is replaced by the world of
Dans le fond des f orets
Earth,
in which Honor
is
important.
allaient'ils se cacher?
Phaedra will neve r regain Virtue, but she
Phaedra has known only what it is to
may retain Honor, if she will only sacrilove guiltily; she tries to imagine what
fice the standards with which Virtue has
it is to love innocently:
imbued her. Oneone assures her:
1237
Helas! Ils se voyaient avec pleine
907
... pour sauver notre Honneur
licence.
combattu,
Le ciel de leurs soupirs
11 faut immoler tout, et meme la
approuvait l'innocence .
Vertu.
Ils suivaient sans remords leur
Phaedra again relinquishes control, as she
penchant amoureux.
did before to Venus (815).
She believes
Though Hippolytus and Aricie have been
she may release herself into another's
together on stage only briefly, we realize
hands, so that her own may no longer be
that such is not their love. Phaedra has
held accountable; it is a substitute for
once again imagined falsely,
She then
the death for which she has been searchcompares her own plight in a world without
ing, a relinquishment of self, to a woman
illusions to the plight of the lovers in
whose only desire is to keep her alive~
this false world of her own making:
blindly disregarding all else:
1241
Et moi, trist rebut de la Nature
911
Fais ce que tu voudras, je
entiere,
m'abandonne a toi.
Je me cachais au jour, je fuyais
Dans le trouble ou je suis je ne
la lumiere.
puis rien pour moi.
La Mort est le seul Dieu que
Phaedra cannot escape so easily.
Such a
j'osais implorer.
death is not a real one.

39
38

�J'attendais le moment ou j'allais
expirer.
Phaedra
is
filled
with
an
enormous
jealousy and hatred, the magnitude of
which she is conscious of only later:
1271
Mes homicides mains promptes a me
venger
Dans le sang innocent brulent de
se plonger.
The false world angers her and she sees
herself as victim only .
At line 1264, Phaedra sees who she
has become. It startles her:
1264
Que f ais-je? Ou ma raison se
va-t-elle egarer?
Moi jalouse!
At one time, she relinquished herself to
Oenone, but she realizes now that she can
never escape herself.
"Je respire a la
fois l'inceste et l'imposture." (1270) She
will meet herself everywhere in the
of those who know her:
eyes
1273
Miserable! Et je vis? Et je
soutiens la vue .
De ce sacre Soleil dont je suis
descendue?
J'ai pour aieul le Pere et le Maitre des Dieux:
Le Ciel; tout l'U.nivers est plein
de mes aieux.
Ou me cacher? Fuyons dans la nuit
infernale.
Mais que dis-je? Mon pere y tient
l'urne fatale.

........
Que diras-tu, mon pere , a ce
spectacle horrible?
Remembering the harshness of the sun's
gaze, Phaedra longs again for darkn
f
"
ess,
or escape.
Let us fly into the night of
Hell."
The lines express a 4esperation
that is necessarily Phaedra's.
There is
no escape.
In Hell she will be judged by
her father, as the sun judges her on
earth.
There is no forgetfulness offered
in death.
What she had imagined before
was false.
There is no such escape for
Racine's Phaedra, though there was for the
Phaedra of Euripides.
Oenone once again attempts to calm

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her. Phaedra, however, strong with the
remembrance of her ancestors, will not be
calmed:

1310

Au jour que je fuyais c'est toi
qui m'as rendue.
Tes prieres m'ont fait oublier mon
devoir.
The day has come when Phaedra's hands can
no longer be considered innocent: she has
spo~en to Hippolytus who alone prevented
their love from being consummated.
Her
hands long to become yet guiltier.
She
longs to plunge them into the innocent
blood of Aricie.
She knows that her lies
are responsible for Hippolytus' departure .
and will soon discover that she has caused
his death.

When Phaedra speaks in Act Five, she
has already taken the poison that Medea,
another grand-daughter of Helios brought
to Athens. Phaedra no longer desires anything hidden:
1633
Le fer aurait deja tranche ma
destinee
Mais je laissais gemir la Vertu

thought it
advantageous tc
have Aricie descended from the Earth, may
be related to both these functions.
As a love interest, the symmetrical
contrast to Phaedra is perfect.
Phaedr2
is the grand-daughter of the Sun, AriciE
is the
grand-daughter of the Earth .
Phaedra is not a virgin, she is a mother ;
Aricie is a virgin . Phaedra is in power!
Aricie is not .
Though Aricie is nowhen
near as magnificent and developed a~
Phaedra, she does possess qualities whicl
are easily
contrasted with
those
of
Phaedra.
The political struggle
seems
contrived, perhaps because it is not stressec
in Euripides' Hippolytus . One wonders wh;
Racine developed it.
This section wilJ
offer no solution6, but can only point ir
the general directions where the solution~
may lie.

a

THE

Ch~LDREN

OF THE EARTH
I.

421

soup~onnee

J'ai voulu, devant vous exposant
mes remords,
Par un chemin plus lent descendre
chez les morts.
Slowly, and paradoxically, a greatness
returns to Phaedra in this speech.
It is
the old paradox of the gospels, "Everyone
who exalts himself will be humbled, but he
who humbles himself will be exalted. 11 As
Phaedra exposes her crimes before her
husband, we see a woman humbling herself
and we the audience exalt her.
She take~
on moral dignity.
Part of the distate
when Phaedra savagely blames Oenone is
that we wish to see Phaedra continue to
humble herself. We cannot exalt her for
the way she treats Oenone . Phaedra turns
on a woman who has been faithful to her.
Oenone has served and loved Phaedra. We do
not wan: people to be treated in this way.
It is only in the context of reviling
herself through Oenone that such treatment
of her nurse can be made palatable to us
With the death of Oenone and Phaedra come~

Why Racine

the
death
of
the
imagination which
deceives.
Dying, Phaedra again turns to
the Sun:
1641
Deja je ne vois plus qu'a travers
un nuage
Et le ciel, et l'epoux que ma
presence CJUtrage;
Et la mort
mes yeux derobant la
clarte
Rend au jour, qu'ils souillaient
toute sa purete.
There is a strange diurnal motion talking
plice at the close of the play.
As
Phaedra dies and renders herself to the
darkness of death, her last word is
purete.
The Sun has been rendered its
purity, its full brightness.
The confusion between day and night in which the
play began ha~ been overcome.

The Rightful Heirs
Aricie is the rightful heir to thE
throne of
Athens
according
to
youn1
Hippolytus.
Aegeus and his son Thesern
have placed themselves in the successi01
to the throne by adoption and murder .
Though Hippolytus is genuine in his belieJ
that Aricie deserves the throne, are we tc
take his belief as that of Racine?
Hippolytus displays an amazing amoun·
of innocence and ignorance t o the ways o:
court when he is astonished that Phaedr
wins the confidence of the chiefs o
Athens to rule.
He objects:
728
••••• Dieux , qui la connaissez,
Est-ce done sa vertu que vous
recompensez?
Perhaps his acknowle'1gement of Aricie a :
the rightful ruler stems from the sam4
innocence. He does not realize that botl
possession of power and a rightful clai1
to the throne are necessary to establisl
oneself as ruler.
Or perhaps his acknow·
ledgement of Aricie as the rightful rule 1
stems from the love he has for her.
If Hippolytus is correct, and AriciE
is the rightful ruler of Athens, wha1
could this signify for Racine? Athens if
set apart from other Greek cities by itf
belief that its people sprang from th~

Reste du sang d'un Roi, noble fils
de la Terre,
Je suis seule echappee aux fureurs
de la guerre,
J'ai perdu dans la fleur de leur
jeune saison
Six freres quel espoir d'une
illustre maison!
Le fer moissonna tout, et la Terre
humectee
But a regret le sang des neveux
d'Erechtee

494

Je VOUS cede, OU plutot je VOUS
rends une place,
Un sceptre que jadis vos aieux
ont recu
De ce f ameux mortel que la Terre
a conc;.u.
From the Preface, we know that Racine
claims
that
Aricie
"n' est
point
un
personnage de mon invention," and he cites
references in Virgil.
Aricie's genealogy
is however Racine's invention. Racine has
made her a descendant of the Pallantides,
not history or mythology.
Aricie' s two
principal functions in the play are as a
love-interest for Hipploytus, and as a
further complication in the political
struggle between Hippolytus and Phaedra.

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�local Attic soil.
This myth was often
used to promote its democracy, for if everyone had the common ancestor, the Earth,
everyone was a prince or princess.
The
very multiplicity of the Pallantides (of ten portrayed as being fifty brothers)
suggests that the proper power to rule is
not located in a single individual.
II.

The French King
Those in the audience would have
been struck by the similarity of Phaedra's
claim of the Sun as an ancestor, and the
French Monarch's claim to be a direct descendant of the Sun. They may have recognized Theramene and Oenone as the servile
ministers
of
the
King.
Racine's
intentions
now
become
unclear:
One
reading of Aricie's lineage would suggest
that Racine is endorsing the rule of the
children of the Earth, and is making some
c~iticism, however weak, of the existing
monarch.
Yet one assumes that Aricie' s
desire to tyrannically master Hippolytus
is some criticism of her ability to rule
as well.
III.

Theseus
The impressions left by the political maneuverings in the play suggest that
one 's political fate has nothing to do
with one's virtue or worthiness.
Racine
is unusual in his treatment of Theseus.
Theseus is represented, not as the tremendous hero of other myths, but as one who
tampers with the natural order of things
in his treatment of Aricie and her brothers. He murders the Pallantides and forces
their mother Earth to unwillingly drink
their blood.
He is an adventurer.
In a
play where adultery is held up in horror,
Theseus' descent into hell is anything but
glorious.
What was he doing trying to
help his friend steal another man's wife?
Theseus'
friend seems to merit being
thrown to the monster. The act of feeding
the King to his own monster is presented
in such a way as would ·rob all greatness
from
it.
Theseus'
treatment
of
Hippolytus, and Racine's with-holding of
the final reconciliation scene between
father and son, render Theseus singularly
unworthy of our sympathy in this play.

The mighty King has been exposed for what
he is now, apart from what he may have
been in the past: he is blind when it is
most necessary to see; he is away when his
wife and son need him most; and though he
accepts Aricie at the close of the play,
he
is
still
unchanged.
He
honors
Hippolytus' request only to appease his
ghost. Theseus has not regained the sight
needed to re-establish himself as a hero.
Some of Phaedra's speeches suggest
that Theseus was once like Hippolytus-young
and
innocent.
Hippolytus,
the
bastard son of Theseus, is ungainly, inept
at the ways of court, and lacking in
proper manners.
Honor and honesty give
him dignity. He is killed by a father who
cannot see Hippolytus as anything other
than
a
projection of himself.
Thus
Theseus
believes
that
Hippolytus
is
cunning,
though
Hippolytus
is
never
cunning in this play. Theseus is cunning.
The play suggests that Hippolytus' lack of
such cunning is a consequence of the time
spent
in
the
forest,
away from the
corrupting influence of the court.
IV.

Oenone and Theramene
Oenone and Theramene· are the only
characters in the play not descended from
nobility. Yet they cannot be made to represent the common people.
Oenone and
Theramene are members of the court, as
ministers and courtiers are. There are no
common people in this play; we see no alternative society proposed to that of the
court.

MONSTERS
Hippolytus sees a monst~r :
700
Digne fils du heros qu~ ~·~ donne
le jour,
Delivre l'univers d'un Monstre qui
t'irrite.
La veuve de Thesee ose aimer
Hippolyte?
Crois-moi, Fe Monstre affreux ne
doit point t'echapper.
Phaedra sees a monster:
882
Mais ne me trompez point, vous

last words:
1641
Deja je ne vois plus qu'a travers
un nuage
Et le ciel et l'epoux que ma
presence out rage;
Et la mort, a mes yeux derobant la
clarte
Rend au jour, qu'ils souillaient
toute sa purete.
Phaedra's eyes sullied the day.
It is a
strange image.
The monstrous in some
sense comes out of one 's self, and affixes
itself to that which one sees.

est-il cher encore?
De quel oeil voyez-vouz ce Prince
audacieux?
Je le vois com.me. un Monstre
ef froyable a mes yeux .
Theseus sees a monster:
Perfide, oses-tu bien te montrer
devant moi?
Monstre, qu'a trop longtemps
epargne le tonnerre,
Reste impur des Brigands dont j'ai
purge la terre.
One wonders at the vast number of
monsters found in Phaedra.
They are everywhere in the play. As the play begins,
Theramene and Hippolytus are recalling
Hippolytus' youth and the stories he was
told about the exploits of Theseus, the
great monster-slayer .
As the play p r oceeds, we realize that there are not only
mythological monsters, but moral ones as
well.
We see the two kinds of - monsters
blended in the Minotaur:
the monstrous
love gives birth to a mythological monster.
The two principal scenes in the play,
the scene in which Phaedra declares her
love for Hippolytus, and the scene in
which we are given a description of
Hippolytus' death, both involve monsters.
To know who we are in Racine's Phaedra, we
must
explore
our kinship with
these
strange creations who live in our stories
and in our sight.

II .

Sexuality and Monsters
What then are mythological monsters?
The monster in the labyrinth and
the monster which rises out of the sea in
the fifth act both ' fit Aristotle's definition of what is monstrous.
They are the
unnatural combination of natural parts.
What do the half-man/half-bull and the
bull-serpent represent?
We know them in
the play through the stories told about
them.
They are used primarily to tell
stories of conflicts between foes who wish
to destroy each other .
In Monsters we meet that which in
reality exists within us.
By creating
Monsters outside ourselves, we separate
ourselves from the desires or inclinations
which they represent.
(To understand this
separation, we remember the relationship
between Oenone and· Phaedra.
Oenone is an
embodiment
of
the
baser
motives
of
Phaedra.
Through the creation of Oenone,
we become aware that the true Phaedra exists ou tside these inclinations,
that
Phaedra as a descendant of Helios interacts with these desires but has an exis tence .a part from them.
So too with our
monsters.) We confront our monsters.
We
fight mythical battles in our stories, and
sometimes we win and sometimes we lose.
In doing so, we have a clearer account of
the struggle within and the forces which
guide us. Monsters represent all that WP.
fear or hate within ourselves .
The
Minotaur
represents
a
blina
sexuality, sexuality without human vision.
The monster does not have human sight: He
is a man whose head has been replaced by a
bull's .

I.

Eyes and Monsters
The monstrous is contained within
our sight.
It is from something within,
something emanated from our eyes, that
beings who exist outside ourse lves are
transfigured into monsters.
The identification of something as monstrous is always dependent on the one who sees.
We
remember Oenone' s question and Phaedra's
reply:
Mais ne me trompez point, vous
882
est-il cher encore?
De quel oeil voyez ce Prince
audacieux?
Je le vois com.me un Monstre
ef froyable a mes yeux.
We also must remind ourselves of Phaedra's

42
43

�Racine's description of the descent
into the labyrinth beginning at line 649
is clearly sexual. Phaedra offers to guide
the virgin Hippolytus through the many
detours
of
the vast
retreat
of
the
monster:
659
Campagne du peril qu'il vous
fallait chercher,
Moi- meme devant vous j'aurais
voulu marcher,
Et Phedre au Labyrinthe avec vous
descendue,
Se serait avec vous retrouvee, ou
perdue.
As Phaedra guides Hippolytus, they will
meet the Monster, a monster molded out of
the sexuality within Phaedra.
The last
line, "Se serait avec vous retrouvee, ou
perdue."
suggests
that
through
the
confrontation with sexuality she will either find herself again, though in some
sense annhilated in the sexual encounter,
or will become
simply
lost,
for ever
annhilated.
The
line
contains
a
self-absorbtion
which
is
particularly
striking considering · the sexual initiation
of the youth. .That Hippolytus may find
himself or be lost for ever is not considered. The world in which she leads him
is made dangerous by Racine:
Hippolytus
is totally dependent on Phaedra as guide,
and may be destroyed at any moment.
The suspicion that Phaedra is confronting a monster which lies within her
is confirmed a few lines later:
700
Digne fils du heros qui t'a donne
le j our,
Delivre l' univers d' un M
onstre qui
t 'irrite.
La veuve de Thesee ose aimer
Hippolyte?
Crois - moi, ce Monstre affreux ne
doit point t'-echapper .
Things become confused; the monster does
es c ape .
Phaedra takes Hippolytus' sword
and he is un-manned.
Before Phaedra can
thrust the sword into her own breast, she
is interrupted by Oenone.
Phaedra and
Hippolytus have become lost within the
labyrinth without fully conf rooting the
monster; they are neither found nor lost .
By addressing Hippolytus as the "digne
fils du heros," we are reminded, and so is

he , of the sto r ies which Theramene told
him about his father killing monsters.
Hippolytus has been raised on a tradition
that human beings can conquer and vanquish
monsters.
It is Theramene, the teller of tales
about
Theseus,
who
de.scribes
the
bull-serpent in Act V.
The bull of the
labyrinth has
reappeared.
Hippolytus,
firmly believing in the legends that human
beings kill monsters, believes himself
c a pable of k i lling t he monster:
1530
Hippolyte lui seul digne fils d'un·
heros,
Arrete ses coursiers, saisit ses
javelots,
Pousse au Monster et d'un dard
lance d'une main sure
Il lui f ait dans le flanc une
large blessure .
Hippolytus, however, has been lied to.
Monsters, when struck with human lances do
not die, they grow angrier:
1531
De rage et de douleur le Monstre
bondissant
Vient aux pieds des chevaux tomber
en mugissant,
Se roule, et leur presente une
gueule enflammee,
Quiles co~vre de feu, de sang, . et
de fumee.
Hippolytus cannot slay the monster .
Nor
does the Mons t er directly slay Hippolytus.
The reins with which Hippolytus curbs and
cont r ols his ho r ses become tangled, and
they drag him to his death .
The horses,
associated with Hippolytus' masculinit y
t h r oughout t he p l ay , become so frightened
that he can no longer · master them-- they
flee in horror.
Theramene's deception, i.e. that human
beings may kill monsters, has pushed
Hippolytus into a situation in which,
deceived about what is real, he must
battle something real.
In this regard,
Theramene's role take s on similariti e s to
that of Oenone.
Theramene has told the
boy Hippolytus s t ories which inspire a
mortal greatness which is false, and which
leave him vulnerable, with no true account
of the world.
Oenone has told Phaedra
stories which would release her from the
greatness which she would impose on her-

44

self .
Such stories, if believed, would
render Phaedra vulnerable, thinking she
was safe when she was not .

'

III .

Sin and Monsters
The
role
of
the
reappearing
Monster is the role of Sin. Theramene has
lied to Hippolytus about the nature of Sin
and its destructiveness .
He has taught
that sin could be overcome by mortals
· without any divine intervention. When we
ask who we are, we answer with stories
that tell us that monsters are originally
foreign to us, and separate from us, and
at the same time, stories that tell us
that we will always have to fight with our
monsters, since they come from within.
Racine's
comparison
of
sin
and
sexuality is not based on a prudish way of
seeing the world.
Rather, he bases the
analogy on the anarchy they produce within
the body of the lover or the sinner:
"We know that the law is
spiritual; but I am not :
I
am
unspiritual,
the
purchased slave of sin .
I
do not even acknowledge my
own actions as mine, for
what I do is not what I want
to do, but what I detest."
(Romans, 7.14 - 15)
Within the play, both love and sin are
described as things against which we
struggle unsuccessfully; and which, though
coming from ·within ourselves as things we
inherit whether it be le sang fatale or
our fallen natures,
are portrayed as
separate from our very selves.
Lust is
separate in Phaedra's nature, something
added on as a curse to that natur.e which
cannot shake it off, We are the prey of
Venus as well as Sin.
By separating out
our f allen-ness (sin) and putting it into
a
monster,
we
are
ourselves
pure,
hopelessly battling against that which
must conque r u s .
Two lessons are explicit:
As human
beings we are the descendants both of
Purity and of fallen Purity.
Our pure
nature, however, battles our fallen- ness,
which
though
in
our
bloodline,
is
extrinsic to us .
Secondly, we realize
that human beings unless some special di-

vine intervention occurs cannot conquer
the monster sin. Both such precepts would
agree with the Jansenists views Racine was
espousing.
Jansenists refused to accept a lax
morality for men:
men as descendants of
God, should be held accountable fo r their
sins.
They further objected to the idea
that men could conquer sin without divine
grace.
Such views are propounded in t h e
Fifth Provincial Letter especiall y :
Go and see some of these
worthy fathers, I beseech
you, and I am confident that
you will soon discover, in
the laxity of their moral
system, the explanation of
their doctrine about grace.
You
will
then
see
the
Christian virtues exhibited
in such a strange aspect, so
completely stripped of the
charity which is the life
and soul of them--you will
see so many crimes palliated
and
irregularities
tolerated, that you will no
longer be surprised a t thei r
maintaining that 'all men
have always enough of grace'
to lead a pious life, in the
sense in which they understand
piety.
Their
morality
being
entirely
Pagan,
natu re
is
quite
competent to its observance.
(Pascal , Pr ov i ncial Letters
Modern Library edition,
376 . )

--P:-

OEN ONE
Oenone is the confidante to Phaedra, a
familiar dramatic device that rescues a
play from having too many s _ liloquies .
o
Yet this role is complicated in Phaedra in
that, as Racine tells us, Oenone is also
the
embodiment
of
Phaedra's
baser
intentions.
Throughout the play, she is
that within Phaedra which would keep
Phaedra alive at all cost. Therefore, she
of ten functions like the imagination. She
provides interpretations which ameliorate
intolerable situations by manipulating the

45

�particulars
of
certain
stories·
She
creates new worlds in which we may live
more
comfortably.
This
further
complicates
Oenone's
role:
Creating
morally
comfortable worlds is a J esuit
function
(according
to
Jansenists .)
Oenone appears to be so much of a Jesui t
at times that her speeches and Phaed ra's
accusations against her seem to be taken
directly out of Pascal's Pr ovinci~l Letter.
Oenone, like the J esuits, will deceive us as t o who we are and what is expected of us .
As Phaedra first seeks purif i cation
before the Sun, t he Sun's rays become
unbearable, and her imagination paints. a
picture of shade, of forest, and of a time
when all will be well. Oenone will als o
off er escapes for Phaedra. She will paint
reality in such a way that what properly
should drive Phaedra to suicide does not.
Her only concern is t o keep P~aedra alive:
229
Quoiqu'il vous reste a peine une
faible lumiere,
Mon ame chez l es morts descendra
la premiere.
When Panope gives the news that Theseus is
dead, Phaedra is silent. It is Oenone who
interprets the news; in t h e news, she sees
a world in which Phaedra need not kill
herself:
349
Vivez, vous n'avez plus de
reproche a vous faire.
Votre flamme devient une f lannne
ordinaire.
The ever-pragmatic Oenone prop oses tha t
Phaedra
suggest
an
alliance
with
Hippolytus against Aricie.
In Act II, when Phaedra grabs
Hippolytus' sword a fter giving herself
away b ef ore_ him, Oenone rushes in and
stops her:
712
Que faites-vous, Madame?
Justes Dieux!
Mais on vient . Evitez des temoins
odieux,
Venez, rentrez, fuyez une honte
certa·i ne.
After that disaster, Oenone must propose
another diversion. She proposes power:
753
Ainsi, dans vos malheurs ne
songeant qu'a vous plaindre ,

Vous nourrissez un feu, qu'il vous
faudrait eteindre.
Ne vaudrait-il pas mieux, digne
sang de Minos,
Dans de plus nobles soins chercher
votre rep os ,
Contre un ingrat qui plait
recourir a la fuite,
Regner, et de l ' Etat embasser la
conduite?
When Phaedra objec ts that she cannot possibly rule, Oenone, undaunted comes up
·
When
with another alternative: "F uyez . "
Phaedra objects :
Je ne le puis quitter
Oenone replies
Vous l'osates bannir, nous n'osez
l'eviter.
Oenone will not despair.
Despair is the appropriate response.
Phaedra accuses Oenone of planting false
hope in Phaedra's heart.
Oenone s~es no
shame in planting hope , whether it be
false or true:
Helas! de vos malheurs innocent
ou coupable,
De quoi pour vous sauver
n'etais-je point capable?
Mais si jamais l'offense irrita
vos esprits,
Pouv ez-vous d'un superbe oubl ier
les mepris?
Avec quels yeux cruels sa rigueur
obs tinee
Vous laissait a ses pieds peu s'en
faut prosternee!
Que son f arouche o rgueil le
rendai t odieux!
780
Qu e PhedTe en ce moment
n'avait-elle mes yeux!
Oenone 1 s eyes filter out all that would
render Phaedra dishonorable or unworthy of
life.
She will see no shame in being a
mor ta l subject to nature.
When Hippoly tus begins to seem too
danger ous fo r her mistress' happiness,
Oenone tries to dissuade Phaedra from seeing Hippolytus as someone who could ever
return her love. Oenone is quick t o recognize that Hippolytus is now the enemy
and poses a threat to Phaedra.
Thus she
reasons:
787
Songez qu'une barbare en son sein

46

l' a forme .

e'en est fait .•
Pourquoi done lui ceder une
victoire entiere?
Vous le craignez . Osez l'accuser
la premiere
Du crime dont il peut vous charger
auj ourd 'hui.
Qui vous dementira? Tout parle
contre lui.
She is quite willing to sacrifice Virtue .
Virtue, if kept alive, would cause an
earthly death. Virtue must be sacrificed
to Honor, which keeps one alive on the
earth:
pour sauver notre
907
Honneur combattu,
11 faut immoler tout, et meme la
Vertu.
Phaedra submits to the force which keeps
her alive:
In the face of destruction,
she yields to Oenone.
She cannot face
annihilation without trying to escape. No
human being in the play can.
It is part
of what Racine considers hidden within us.
Oenone then tells the false story .to
Theseus.
Phaedra discovers in turn that
Theseus has implored Neptune to kill
Hippolytus,
and that Hippolytus
loved
Aricie.
Phaedra, after a considerable
struggle with herself, realizes that she
has sinned.
Yet, instead of urging confession or some other means of purification, Oenone who would continue Phaedra's
earthly existence at all costs ,
puts
Phaedra's Christian soul in jeopardy:
1295
He! repoussez, Madame, une
injuste terreur .
Regardez d'un autre oeil u.ie
excusable erreur.
One must not make repentance into nothing;
one must not excuse sins as simply errors.
Pascal complained of the Jesuits:
But, father, do you suppose
that a man is worthy of
receiving absolution, when
he will submit to nothing
painful
to
expiate
his
offences?
And,
in these
circumstances, ought you not
to retain rather than remit
their sins?,, Are you not
aware of t~~ extent of your
ministry, ·and that you have
873
885

and
789

11 a pour tout le sexe une haine
fatale.
Phaedra then issues the famous command in
response:
790
Enfin, tous tes conseils ne sent
plus de saison.
Sers ma fureur, Oenone, et non
point ma raison.
Oenone has been working under the
illusion that she could protect Phaedra in
Act One by convincing her that her love
was only ordinaire. She believes there is
something safe in being "only human".
Rather than combat that which comes from
within, Oenone proposes that we submit and
not think about the horror of our condition.
Yet we see in the play that once
abandoned, Virtue can never again be recovered. In abandoning Virtue, we abandon
who we are as descendants of th~ Sun.
Oenone claims that we may rest in some
murky middle ground where distinctions are
not altogether forgotten, but are put so
sufficiently far from mind that we need no
longer feel guilty.
I f i t is proper to
submit to a mortal fate, we need no abso lution:
all we do is in harmony with our
natures. Racine claims there is no middle
ground:
Once we move out of the Sun's
realm, our motion gathers impetus and we
move far beyond the reach of the Sun's
distinctions.
We cannot move in and out
of the two regions with ease : we cannot
recall lost Virtue.
With the advent o f Theseus, Oenone
advises:
826
Madame. Rappelez votre vertu
passee .
How does one go about recalling Virtue
after trying to seduce one's stepson? If
one sees the crime with the horror with
which Phaedra sees it no such recalling is
possible . She knows her~elf as a sinner.
There is not getting around it.
Phaedra
knows she must die.
Oenone's response
"Vous mourez?" is an expression of surprise.
Oenone cannot imagine a situation
which would merit Phaedra's death.
Oenone refuses to regret or to.repent
the past:

47

�t he powe r o f bind ing and
l oosing?
Do y ou imagine
t hat you are a t l i berty t o
give
a b s o lut ion
ind ifferent ly to all who ask
it , and without a scertai n i.ng
b eforehand if J esus Chr i st
loo ses in h eaven tho se whom
y ou loo se in earth ?
(Prov inc ial Letters, p. 45 3)
Oenone then exp l ains why n o painful
expia tion i s necess a ry:
1297
Vou s aimez. On ne peut v ainc re sa
des t inee.
Par un charme fata l v ous futes
entrain ee.
Est-ce done un prodige i nou i parmi
nous?
L 'amou n' a-t-il enco re triomphe
que d e vous ?
La f aible s se aux humains n 'es t que
trop n atu r e lle.
M rte lle, s ub issez l e sort d 'un e
a
mortelle.
Vous vous pla i gne z d' un joug
impose de s l on gt emps.
Les Dieux meme, l es Dieux de
l ' Ol ymp e h a b itants,
Qui d 'un " r ui t si terrible
b
e p ouvantent l es crimes,
Ont brule quelquefois de f eux
i lleg itimes.
To those fami l iar with the Jansenist, accusations against the Jesuits, Oenone s arfamiliar
as
well.
The
are
guments
1
Jesui t s, as portrayed in the Pr ovincia
Letters, are ready t o conclu de f r em the
weakness of men , that morality must be
loosened in o rder that it migh t be:ome
more comfortab l e for men. Th e J ansenists
regarded this as highest heresy.
The weakness of humanity must n o t be
catered t o . We serve each other b e s t by
reminding each other t o be virtuou s . The
Jesuits like Oenone believe t h at mor ality
mu st accomodate itself to human weakness:
"You know," h e said, "that
t he rul ing p ass ion of p ersons in t ha t rank of life is
' t h e po i nt of hono r, ' wh i ch
is p erp etually dr iving t hem
into acts of violenc e appare ntly quite at v ar iance wit h

Christian piety; so that in
fact, they would be almost
a l l o f them exclud ed fr om
our confession al s, had not
our fathers relaxed a litt l e
from
the
strictness
of
re l igion,
to
accomodate
themse l ves to t h e weakness
of
humanity.
Anxious t o
k eep on goo d terms b oth with
the Gospel , by d o ing their
duty to God , and with the
men o f t h e wor l d, by showing
ch arit y
to
their
neighbo r,they n eed e d a l l the
wisdom they po ssessed t o
devise expedie nts
f or
so
nicely ad j usting ma tters as
t o permit these gent l emen t o
adopt the methods usual ly
re so rted t o fo r vindi c ating
t hei r
h on or,
without
wound i ng their con s ciences,
and
t h us
re concile
two
t h i ng s s o opp os ite t o e~ch
o ther as piety and t h e point
o f honor.
Bu t
sire,
in
prop ortion t o t h e ut i lity o f
the
design,
was
the
d if f iculty
of
the
execution .••
(The Provincial Letters, P·
40 2. The underlining is my
own. )
They forget that we are the descendants of
God and Purity; they would have us forget
that s i n i s some thing outs ' de ot ourselves
with which we must battle.
J esuits were in p ower in France. They
l ed the Sorbonne and held sway at
c ontra l
d
h
were
c ourt.
Jansenists bel ieve
t ey
mislead ing nations; henc e Phaed ra accu s es
Oenone:
1319
Puis se le juste Cie l dignement te
payer;
Et pui sse t on supp l ice a j amais
e ff rayer
Tous ceux qui, comme t oi, p ar de
laches a d res ses ,
De s Princes ma lhe u reux nourris s en t
les fa i blesses,
Les poussent au p enchant ou l e u r

coeur est enclin,
Et leur osent du crime aplanir le
chemin;
Detestables flatteurs, present le
plus funeste
Qui puisse faire aux Rois la
colere celeste.
The role rif advisors at Court is thus
exposed:
flattery and deception are seen
as necessarily accompanying that life.
The Jansenists remind us that as the des c end a n t s of Adam we have a penchant for
sin.
Excusing our sin before proper
expiation is made will be disastrous. We
will not repent properly and we will be
damned.

It
was
Helios,
le t
us
recall, who shed his light
in the skies, dispersing the
cloud which hid Venus and
Mars
as
they
were
love-making . Indeed, it was
this very action which had
led Venus in retaliation to
curse
all
Helios'
descendants ..•
(Bettina
L.
Knapp,
Jean
Racine - Mythos and Renewal
in Modern Theatre, p . 171)
Helios'
descendants
will
always
see
through the clouds that imagination creates to obscure the horror of t heir
actions.
And the descendants of Helios
will always have actions that excite their
horror; they will not be able to e scape
Venus.
We are the fallen mixture of purity
and godliness and all the desires which
Racine labels base.
We are the noble
children of gods, and we are monsters .
Our stories explain ourselves to ourselves
in those terms. We are born with the at tributes of Helios and with the curse of
Venus locked within us . Dest r uction will
come from within and is inevitable. It is
not within our power to save ourselves .
As
children of
t he
Sun, we
are
engendered with an ability to judge according to spiritual lawt- a s well as
earthly laws. .We know the difference b etween Virtue and Honor . Lines 907 and 221
depend on our ability to make that distinction .
For
all
our
know edge
of
spiritual laws, however, we a re s till
unable to prevent ourselves from sinning .
We remember Romans 7 . 14- 25:
We know that the law is
spiritual; but I am not:
I
am
unspiritual,
the
purchased slave of sin . I do
not even acknowledge my own
a ct ions as mine, for what I
do is not what I want to do,
but what I detest.
But i f
what I do is agains t my
will, it means that I agree
with the law and hold it to
be admirable. But as things
are, it is no longer I who

CONCLUSION
598

Dans le fond de mon coeur vous
ne pouviez pas lire

If only one character could have know
the depths of another's heart , if only the
i s olat ion t hat surrounds each character
we r e not so horrible, if only Racine had
c reated another wo r ld in t he play, perhaps
for g iv ene ss and expiation could have been
possible
between men and women,
and
especially between fathe r s and sons . Ye t
t her e
is none .
There are no human
confessors to absolve the characters of
the i r crimes .
Unlike Euripides, Racine
offe r s no reconciliation between father
and
son.
The r e
is
absolut e ly
no
consolation in this wor ld.
We are fallen.
Perhaps on ce we mi ght
h av e s e en into the depths of one another's
h e a r ts , but such is not the world in which
we n ow live.
We a r e cursed, as all the
d e scendants of Helios were cursed, and as
all t he descendants of Adam were expelled
from the Garden .
We cannot rely on
ear thly forgiveness.
Caught between the
intolerable
conflicts
within us ,
our
i maginat_ons of ten provide temporary but
i
unt rustworthy escapes.
Yet , as the descendants of Helios and
God , a part of our nature will always see
through deception.
In the ancient myth,
it was the ability to see through a cloud
tha t r esulted in the curse:

49

48

�does not.
Whether this is because the
play is set in pagan times, or whether
Racine meant something more, we do not
know.
Racine insists however, that we
must never abandon that knowledge of ourselves as descendants of God.
We must
never stop attempting to purify ourselves,
we must never abandon the distinctions
between sin and innocence.
We must not
let the Jesuits mislead us.
Pascal warns
us:
.... they
conceal
their
carnal and worldly policy
under the garb of divine and
Christian prudence as if the
faith, and tradition, its
ally, were not always one
and the same at all times
and in all places, as if it
were the part of the rule to
bend in conformity to the
subject which it was
meant
to
regulate;
and
as
if
souls, to be purified from
their pollutions, had only
to corrupt the law of the
Lord, in place of the 'the
law of the Lord, which is
clean and pure, converting
the soul which lieth in sin'
and . bringing
it
into
conformity with its salutary
lessons!
(The Provincial Letters, p. 376)

perform the action, but sin
that lodges in me.
For I
know
that
nothing
good
lodges within me
in my
unspiritual nature I mean
-- for though the will to do
good · is there, the deed is
not. The good which I want
to do, I fail to do:
but
what I do is the wrong which
is against my will and i f
what I do is
against
my
will,
clearly
it
is
no
longer I who am the agent,
but sin that
has
its
lodgings in me.
I discover this principle
then:
that when I want to
do the right, only the wrong
is within my reach.
In my
inmost self I delight in the
law of God, but I perceive
that there is in my bodily
members
a different
law,
fighting against
the
law
that my reason approves and
making me a prisoner under
the law of sin.
Miserable
creature that I am, who is
there to rescue me out of
this body doomed to death?
God alone, through Jesus
Christ our Lord!
Thanks be
to God!
In a word then, I
myself, subject to God's law
as a rational being am yet,
in my unspiritual nature, a
slave to the law of sin.
(The New English Bible. The
underlining is my own.)

F&lt;'otnotes

1. Racine may also have been tempted to
stress the lineage from th
S
f
h
e
un, apart
rom t fe mythological significances , as a
mea~s o commenting on the French royalty.
It is us~ful to note here that Phaedra and
French Kings share the same ancestry.
2. R. C. Knight, in his notes on Phedre
gives three examples:
1)
the Ch . i ,
Canon
L .
rist an
aw·
I
Corinthians
5 1
( "I
actually hear reports of sexuai i~orality
among you, immorality such as even pagans
do not tolerate:
the union of a man with

As Phaedra dies, her last word is
purity. She herself is not yet pure. The
day i s pure . Bo t h t h e l ov e of puri ty and
the curse are her inheritance.
In dying,
she pays final homage to purity . She remembers who she really is. She achieves a
moral dignity within our eyes once again.
In such a dignity, she may rest.

One of the important differences between
this passage and Racine's Phaedra is that
Paul offers a God who intercedes. Racine

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his father's wife.")
2)
the
list
prohibited degrees in the 1662
Book
Commop , Prayer and 3) French Law

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Note: When I use the t
"
erm Jesuit" withi·
the body of this
no th.
b
paper, I am claimin
ing a out the Society of Jesus toda
or about the arguments of the Jesuit y
Racine's d
s o.
~y, apart from how they hav1
b
een
explicated
by
the
J
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i 1
ansen sts
espec a ly by Pascal in The p
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Letters.
-rov ncia .

�Translation

A Poem by Francis Jammes

Geraldine McDowell

I

IL VA NEIGER •••

THE TIME HAS COME FOR SNOW ...

A Leopold Bauby

To Leopold Bauby

Il va neiger dans quelques jours. Je me souviens
De l'an dernier. Je me souviens de mes tristesses
Au coin du feu. Si l'on m'avait demande: qu'est-ce?
J'aurais dit: laissez-moi tranquille . Ce n'est rien.

The time has come for snow. I harken back
to last year's snow. Back to my sadnesses
by fire's glow. If I'd been asked, "What is't?"
I would have said, "Leave me in peace. 'Tis naught . "

J'ai bien refl echi , l'annee avant, dans ma chambre,
Pendant que la neige lourde tombait dehors.
J'ai reflechi pour rien. A present connne alors
Je fume une pipe en bois avec un bout d'ambre.

I've contemplated in my room ere now,
while outside snow fell heavy covering all.
My contemplation's vain. For now, as then,
I sit beside the hearth and smoke my pipe.

Ma vieille connnode en chene sent toujours bon.
Mais moi j'etais bete parce que ces choses
Ne pouvaient pas changer et que c'est une pose
De vouloir chasser les choses que nous savons.

And still my oaken chest of drawers smells rich.
Such foolishness to think these things could change!
They never change. It is pretentiousness
to want to chase the things already known.

Pourquoi done pensons-nous et parlons-nous? C'est drole;
Nos larmes et nos b&amp;isers, eux, ne parlent pas
Et cependant nous les comprenons, et les pas
D'un ami sont plus doux que de douces paroles.

For
Our
are
our

On a baptise les etoiles sans penser
Qu'elles n'avaient pas besoin de nom, et les nombres
Qui prouvent que les belles cometes dans l ' omb r e
Passeront, ne les forceront pas a passer.

We've christened stars which have no need of names .
And ratios foretelling comets' flights
are not their moving force. Now then, where are
my sadnesses of old? I faint recall.

Et
De
Je
Si

maintenant meme, OU sont mes vieilles tristesses
l'an dernier? A peine si je m'en souviens.
dirais: laissez-moi tranquille, ce n'est rien,
dans ma chambre on venait me demander: qu'est-ce?

why then do we think and speak? Odd thing;
tears and kisses, speechless though they be
understood no less, and sweet steps which
friends do make are sweeter than sweet words.

~nd I would say, "Leave me in peace.

'Tis naught,"
if I were asked while in my room, "What is't?"

1888.
1888.
De l'Angelus de l'Aube

a

l'Angelus du Soir

From the Prayer of the Morning
to the Prayer of the Evening

Geraldine McDowell attended St. John's in Annapolis for
three years.
She is now a junior at Goucher College .

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I

�Becoming· Acquainted with a Knot
Ann Burlein

.
Sometimes my mo t h er , s ey e s were green a s g r a ss.
How grey t hey gr ow .
Un de r the t rees of autumn , red an d blue
Paint p or t raits of my r ace .
When I r oll over , and b r u s h as i d e t he l e aves
The gras s i s s til l green.
Burr owing close
I see my mo t her ' s eye s ag ain.
(I s your soul dus t y , mama , too?
Look fo r me , she s ays , I canno t r e a ch t o se e . )
Red is f o r bu r n i ng
and Au t umn mus t end .
Now tha t t h e win t e r' s come I 'm sure
My mo t he r' s e ye s a r e unde rneath t h e s n ow
A mi l e d eep and mo r e .
They are t he r e t o be fo und
And a wi sh i s a s p ade
win ter must give way t o spring.
And e v e n t he wh iteness Of
Leslie S . Bellisario
Nov emb er 7 t h , 19 82

Leslie Bel lisario , ' 8 3,

· s c u rrently wr iting f i ct i on in London .

Seeking to uncover the nature of
t he soul, Aristotle learns the range of
his inquiry by investigating the doc t rines
of previous philosophers.
From these he
gleans a statement of the attributes which
we think belong to the soul because of its
na t ure :
·1 ) the ability to discriminate
(which is the work of thought and sensation) , and 2) the ability to move from
place to place (which results from t he
previous ability ,
since the cause of
locomotion
desire
cannot occur
unless the animal imagines something 1 ) • 2
In describing both thought and sensation
as methods of discrimination (to krinein) ,
Ari stotle r ecognizes a shar ing of activity
between the thinking and sentient soul - an
activity which results in gnosis . 3
result of this sharing,
As
a
Ar istotle separates these faculties more
in terms of their objects than in terms of
t h e i r activities .
Since, for Aristotle ,
to apprehend means to become like the ob ject of apprehension (a lthough in a unique
way) , these objects determine the nature
of both the activity of app r ehension and
the knowledge which the soul becomes as a
r e sult o f this activity . So before we can
under stand the soul as the faculty by
which man comes to know , we need to under stand, first the things which the soul
k nows, and then the nature of that knowl edge . 4
Knowledge and sensation may
be so marked off as to
correspond to things •.. the
knowing and sentient powers
of the soul are potentially
these things .. . and they must
either
be
these
things
themselves or their forms .
Certainly they cannot be the
things themselves; for it is
not the stone itself that is

in the soul but the form of
the stone . 5
Both the sensing and the thinking sou l
apprehend forms , by virtue of which we say
one faculty senses flesh, and the other
knows the essence of flesh . 6 But what i s
a form and how do these two forms diffe r
from one another? Aristotle pref aces his
investigation into the parts of the soul
by placing form in the genus of things we
call substance .
But the science which
enquires most fully into substance is
first philosophy, for to first philosophy
alone belongs the investigation of being
qua being .
We use the term 'being ' in many
senses:
something 'is' if it is 1) one,
2) true, 3) either potentially or ac t ually
as we say it to be, or 4) one of the categories . Despite this multiplicity , these
senses are not equivocal , 7 because "all of
these (senses) are related to something
which is one and a single nature" . 8
In
our investiga t ion of being, t hen, we mus t
first examine this central nature, fo r we
cannot know any of the othe r senses unt i l
we know the one upon which they depend .
But after we l ook at the
a ious
senses of 'being' Aristotle claim s to. encompass , analogous predication seems impossible . Do these diverse senses really
point to one nature, as do t he different
things we call 'healthy' because they signify either a sign of health or a cause of
health? Perhaps the senses which mean ' t o
be true' and 'to be one' do .
For while
' being' and 'unity 1 do not mean the same
thing, they follow one another , since t o
be one means to be nothing other than one
of the categories . 9
Indeed, what is one
is not distinct from what is a being. 1 O
Further, we speak truly when we speak of
something which is, but falsely when we
speak 1) of something which is not as if

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�but rather , if anything, it
is that which walks or that
which sits that is a being .
These latter appear to be
beings in a higher degree,
because there is something
definite in each of them ,
namely,
the
underlying
subject;
and
this
is the substance and the
individual. 1 7
Aristotle separat es whatness f rom
the other categories because of 'definiteness ' -- that on account of which things
appear
to
be
to
a
higher
degree .
Translated
as
'definite',
literally,
horismos means 'having been marked off by
boundaries' .
Elsewhere, Aristotle calls
this notion of having been set apart and
made distinct p eculiarity (to idion) .
In the Topics, Aristotle names the
types of things we predicate .
One of
these, to idion , consists of two par ts :
1 ) properties, whatever belongs to a thing
and can be predicated conve r tibly of it ;
and 2 ) essence o r whatness. 18 Thi s de r i vation reveals that the idea of peculiar ity underlies and determines our notion of
whatness .
The d ominant meaning of idios is
uniquenes s ; it s i gnifi e s something t hat
pe rt ains to one person alone .
Often in d icat i ng s ometh i ng t hat b y its v e r y n atu r e
i s p ri vate o r p ersonal , i t opposes koinos
and d e mosios .
Homer uses the word in ex actly this s e nse : Telemachos , when spe ak ing to Nesto r a t Py lo s wh ere he has t rav e lled seek i n g news of his f ather , says :
"This is a p r ivate matter, not public
business I tell you (prex is d ' he d ' idie
ou demois) .
I follow the fame of my fa ther , on the chance of hearing of the
great Odysseus ... " l 9 A young man's quest
to learn about himself in seeking word of
his father is an idion, something that by
its n a t u r e b e l ong s to him a lone.
Ta idia
are o ne's private interests, one's own
p r operty ; an idiotes is a private person
who , due to a preoccupation with his own
affairs, does not participate in those of
the city .
Thus idi o s has its roots in the
idea of s omething that, because of its .

it is , o r 2) of some t hing which is as i f
it is not . 11 Howeve r, a category -- esp ecially
'whatness' -seems
neither
to
point towa r ds nor to be an activity .
To
ask "What is it?" seems ve r y differen t
from asking "What does it do?" .
Ye t
Ar istotle , in identifying ousia as the
sens e o f
' to be ' which signifies tha t
which is firs t among all things , merges·
wha t n e ss and ac t uality .
In Book 7 , he
selects whatness as the p r imary sense nf
being 12 in 9, he asserts actuality as the
being of a thing . 13
But how can we rec o ncile these two
senses, which appear so diverse, into one
idea of being? Why is to be at work to be
definite?
And can we describe all sub stances to exactly the same degree by
these two ways?
A discussion of the categories ,
the fourth sense of ' to be', begins Book
6.
Immediately, Aristotle o pposes the
category signifying whatness to those re maining, for "it is evident that of these
(i.e . , the categories) the primar y sense
is whatness, and used in this sense it
signifies a substance" 1 4 •
He identifies
being and whatness naturally and with as surance - - phaneron.
For whenever some thing exists, it exists as itself -- some
one, de f inite thing .
(Only in thought can
the fact that a thing is be separate f r om
what
it
is
and
even
then
tha t
s epar a tion se r ves only as a momentary
p r elude,
insures
that
the
proceeding
i nv est i gation
i nto
whatness
does
not
rea lly i n q u i r e i n t o n o th i ng . 15)
Unl i k e
Plat o , Ar i sto t le does not find t he nature
of being in being itself, but r ather in
whatness . 16 So certain o f this connection
between whatness and being, Ar istotle can
even
envision
someone
asking
whether
affections e x ist at all :
Because of this (the primacy
of whatness), one might even
raise the problem whether
walking,
being
heal thy,
sitting and the others of
this kind are beings or not
beings; f o r by nature each
o f these d o es not exist by
itself
and
canno t
be
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p r ivate natu re, s et s its el f apa rt f r om
things we share .
Such a thing become s
separate a nd d isti n ct s i mpl y b ec a u se it
conce r ns t h e owner a lo n e .
Ye t thi s eso te ri c s epar ation does n o t result in c o n ce a lment ; rat her, we c al l a t hing pe cul iar
i f its wh a t nes s makes it come for th to
e xhibit
i tse l f. 2 0Be caus e
of
t h ) s t he
'
separ at ion th a t
b e longs to pecul iar i t y
cause s
a
thi n g
to
b e come
d e fini te .
Peculiarit y the n , as the Topics indic ates,
p r ovides t h e key t o t he puz zle o f ousia .
This ch a r ac teri s t ic alone do we as cr ibe
with c erta in ty t o subs t anc e, fo r by 'a
thing's substance' we me a n t h at whic h i s
peculiar to it.
But as with al l kn owl edge
that is mo re kn own to the individual,
confusion and generality mark our n o tion
of
peculiarity;
rather
than
know ing
explicitly the type of peculiarity which
belongs to substance, we have only a vague
notion of a many-faceted whole.
First
philosophy attempts to unpack this whole,
to isolate the parts compounded within and
set each out distinctly so that our
confused awareness can become definite,
complete, and articulable knowledge.21
Aristotle begins 'unpacking' by
explaining
why
whatness
--when
it
signifies subs t ance
is primary among
the categories .
His reasons parallel the
theory of pros hen predication which he
states in Book 3:
"In every case a
science is concerned mainly with that
which is first, both 1) that on which the
others depend, and 2) as that through
which
the
others
are
named".22
A
substance is 1) prior in time because it
can exist independently, requiring nothing
else in order to be.
It is also pri o r 2 )
in logos (for we can't define any o f the
other
categories wit ho ut
referring
to
sub stance ) , and 3) in knowle d ge (fo r only
when we und erstand a th i ng's subs t anc e do
we unde rs t a nd t h e t h i n g ) .
Chapter One su gge s ts t h at comp os .
ite s ap p e ar t o be to a higher degree be caus e of the p r esenc e in each o f an unde r lyin g subjec t.
I n Chap ter Three, by ex~mining the n o t ion o f
' und e rlyin g sub •J ect', Arist o tle r efines t he id e a of sepa~ate wh ich led us to consi der an under l v i n g subj e ct as a sub stance .
He describes
substance as that o f whic h we pre d i c ate
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o t h er t h i n g s , bu t which it self we nev e r
pred icate o f o t h er th ings.2 3 He su g gests
t h is f o r mu l at ion because it seems to indicate a t y pe of se lf - sufficient separation
-- t h e kind which b e lo ng s to ind ividuals
(a t oma kai hen arithmo i ) . 24 Bu t t he f o r e m
.ost d i stinction o f an y u nde r lvin g subj e c t
is ~ot sepa r a te n e ss bu t t he- a b i l ity ti
re c eive s ome t h ing .
Ye t by 'subs tance' wi
do n o t primarily me a n such a p o tent i al , a :
t he
c ase
of
matter
t he
·
.
·
primar
u n derly i ng sub J
·ec t -- s hows . Whi"l e ma tt e 1
·
has a . t ype o f ultima te s eparabil it y i i
t ha t it alone can e x i st afte r we r emov t
a ll e ls e, matter i n t h i s state is n o 1
defin ite (b ut wou ld a ppear as n o thing25 ) :
therefore it can 't be a subst a nce.
j
substance is n o t th a t whic h is separabl E
~t t h e expense of all else, but that whi c l
is b o th separable and a this.26
SeparatE
because of its definiteness, a sub s tancE
is peculiar.
After concluding with the suggestion that form seems to be substance ir
the highest degree (since it lacks thE
indefiniteness present in composites duE
to their material parts), Aristotle re~reats, asserting this to be most perple x ing · 2 7
F or h ow can a form be separable
and a this, and also be a part of a com.
?
posite ·
We can always point to tode ti,
but we can never point to a form without
po~nting to something else as well.
ThuE
A:isto~le starts again, this time be gin ning with something more famil i a r to u s
His reliance upon what we al r eady kno~
shapes Chapter Four, which stresses sp eP c}
-- how we say things are.
Such ar
emphasis highlights the new element of
separability
he
investigates
the
ability t o be a l one in staterr.ent ( or in
the wo rds o f Ch a p ter One, pr io rity in
·
·
knowl e dg e ) .
Fou r
exa mi n es
es s ence,
Ch ap ter
what we say a t hing t o be in vi rtue of
it se lf . By e xplo r ing t his noti on of ' sep arate in virtue of one's self', Aristotle
re fi ne s fu rt h er. our n ot i on o f pe c uliarit y .
He beg i n s by ex cluding two ins t ances of ' i n vir t ue of itself ' p r ed i ca1) when a pr o perty b elo ngs ess e n . t~on :
.~i a lly ; and 2 ) when we predi c ate o f an
'acciden ta l c omp o s i te it s u nd er l ying sub -

�ject (for example, when we predicate the
definition of
'man'
of the composite
'white man'). These disqualifications reveal that substance kath'auta is that
which we can utter alone; to be separable
means to be said alone.
Essence does not
belong to something in such a way as to
require the statement of its underlying
subject in its definition; rather, to b~
the essence is to be the thing.
Essence
corresponds to the thing in a way in which
28
accidents and properties do no t .
Aristotle now returns to sensible
composites, asking whether a white man (a
composite plus an accident, which is the
only type of composite we ever find since
all sensible substances, because of their
matter, have attributes) is an instance of
an essence at all. Aristotle concludes he
is not, strictly speaking:
But an essence is just a
this, whereas if something
is said of something else we
do not have just a this, eg.
a white man is not just a
this, if a this belongs only
to substances. 29
The type . of separation that belongs to
peculiarity belongs also to things which
are primary .
Something is primary if, in
its logos, we do not predicate anything at
all.
Essence is the only thing we can
state in this way:
Essence, then, will belong
to nothing which is not a
species of a genus, but only
to a species of a genus; for
it is these that are thought
to
be
stated
neither
according to participation,
nor with an attribute, nor
with an accident. 30
But a genus does not participate in its
differentiae 3 l, nor does a composite re quire its accidents in order to be. Also,
if essence belongs to something , · n what
way is it primary?
Clearly, we don't think about an
individual without also considering different things about him; I can't think
about Socrates without also considering
attributes such as snub-nosed or philosopher.
If I were to omit such things, I
would be thinking, not of Socrates, but of

'man• .
so while separate spatially fr~m
the rest of the world, 32 an individual.is . .
not separate from attributes whose being
differs
from
his.
Because
these
attributes can change, every individual is
somehow
indeterminate
-there
is
something of the infinite about each of
us.

We can separate in thought, howevgenus from its differentiae.
I can
er, a
'animal'
without
also
thinking
think
'bird'
and
all
the
remaining
'dog' ,
or even without thinking
dif ferentiae -a
genus
is
However,
any
at
a 11 .
indeterminate because these dif ferentiae
vary greatly.
So while we can separate a
genus in thought,
in order to speak
definitely, we connect the genus with one
of its differentiae.
Since both an individual and a
genus involve potential, and we ~nderstand
potential only by reference to .its :orresponding actuality 33 , neither
primar~.
A species too involves potential, for it
includes the intelligible matter of the
genus to which it belongs .
Yet .both ~n
individual and a genus contain, in addition to intelligible matter, still other
potentialities which render them even more
indefinite.
Thus Aristotle chooses species as
essence because a species is both separate
in thought and a this. Essence, which is
prior in knowledge, expresses the thing
most fully since it corresponds to ~he
thing. But unlike the individual to which
it corresponds, such essence is never
c omplete y separ ate because it must ~lways
act in matter.
But how can something we
separate in thought not also be separate

:s

simply?

In
Chapters
Four
and
Five,
Aristotle speaks of essence as belonging.
34 While not denying this relation, Chapter Six asserts that essence is the same
as each particular thing. How can. essen:e
have this dual relation -- especially ~f
an essence is a species?
What does it
mean to be the same as that whi~h makes
one separate because of what it is.
.
Aristotle provides a syllogism:
We judg~ (dokoumen) each thing to be nothing other than its own substance. We say
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is the essence .
Therefore, he implies,
.each thing is the same as its essence. 3 5
Strictly speaking, the conclusion is that
we judge or say each thing to be the same
as its essence. Thus he says: "From these
arguments it is clear that each thing and
its essence are one and the same, but not
by accident, and that to know each thing
is to know its essence." 3"'0The sameness
of essence and thing is sameness in
knowledge or in speech; essence signifies
the thing. 37 To signify (semainein) means
to indicate by signs, to declare and also
to interpret or explain. Essence declares
a thing; the sameness between essence and
its composite arises from the manner in
which
essence
accomplishes
this
declaration.
But since essence is substance,
sameness in thought would seem to separate
a thing's substance from the thing -- to
claim that while in a sense each thing is
its substance, the two really only become
identical by an act of intellect.
But
Ar istotle rejects this view . 38
The 'to be' of each thing and the
thing, then, must be one and the same, not
only in the soul , but in the world external to the soul as well .
Clearly
though, they can't be identical in all
re spec t s : Chapters Three and Four assert
essence to be a this, but not i t s compos ites . So by 'one and the same' Aristotle
must mean 1) that essence and its composite are together in one place and 2) to
the extent that they exist together, some
one thing exists which both are. This one
th i ng , the form of the individual compos ite, functions as the means by which essence declares the thing.
Aristotle investigates this (and thereby investigates
the extent to which essence can be both a
species and be primary) by studying generation.
All destructible things are generat ed by something (a form identical in
kind with that of the thing generated),
into something (which we signify by a
form), and out of something (which, because it is a privation, has in a sense
the same form as the other two). Throughout the entire process, matter is present,
since every change requires the potential
to be and not to be.
It is matter that

becomes something, changing from a 'that'
to being 'that- en'.39
This manner of
speaking makes it clear that matter is not
an active cause of the such-this it becomes, for matter functions as the under lying subject upon which something else
acts . Forro plays the dynamic role .
An example of generation by art
clarifies the nature of form.
"Things
generated by art are those whose form is
in the soul. 1140
Such a generation con sists of two parts, with noes is first.
Thinking begins from the principle or
form:
Now the healthy is generated
when
a
man
thinks
as
follows:
since health is
so-and-so, if the subject is
to be healthy it is to have
such-and-such, let us say
uniformity,
and
if
uniformity, then warmth; ahd
he always thinks in this
manner until he arrives at
something final which he
himself can produce.41
This fin al stage must be potentially in
the body, needing only something to make
it actual. The second part of generation,
poiesis, refers to the motion from this
instant
onward
from
the
end
of
thinking, through stages until the form in
the soul - health - becomes present in the
body.
This example presents form at
work; it reveals from to be an active
whatness . The form in the s ou l -- the essence -- determines both the thinking and
the production by organizing them towards
itself.
Essence oversees the process and
imposes its requirements at every stage.
In 4, Aristotle recognizes a sense of
dynarnis which means " ... the principle of
change or of motion which exists in another thing or in the same thing qua other".
4 2 In this sense, essence has
a
dynamic
nature. Thus essence, by existing in the
composite, is one and the same as the composite not simply, but in so far as it
orders the nature of the thing.
Yet why does Aristotle mention
stages? 4 3 Even in the case of an animal's
acquisition of its soul he speaks of a
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�essence, but that each thing is its es ... it is not the fact that
sence.
Now, 'We judge A to be A's x' is
when an animal is f o rmed, at
unde rstandable when only essence and matthat same moment a human
ter compose A, and matter in itself is
being , o r a ho rse, o r any
unknowable . 48 But how can a thing, not be
othe r
particular
sort of
thought in terms o f s ometh ing that belongs
animal is f o r med , because
to it, but be that some t hing? A is A, not
the end or completio n is the
A's x -- espec ially when x excludes n ot
last of all, and that which
only matter, but t he individual a ttribute s
is peculiar to a thing is
by which I distinguish A as an individual .
the end of its process of
When concluding his study of genformation . 44
eration , Aristotle re cognizes this :
The significance o f the stages
... in some cases the essence
appe ars two -fo ld. The form in a composite
of a thing and the thing are
is n o t immediately perfect (hence the two
the same, as in first sub stages
of
actuality
hexis
and
stances; ... (By 'f i rst sub entelecheia) nor entirely simp le (present
stance' I mean one which is
without c ombinat i on with another type o f
not
stated
as
being
in
being4 5) .
The stage s account f o r varia something else or in an
tion and individuality . Not a mere direct
underly ing subject as
in
actualization of one p o tential, generation
matter).
But things which
is a gradual process during which matter's
exist as matter, or which
diverse potentialities become actual
include matter, are not the
46
and actual to different degrees.
With
same as their essence ... 49
animate things, these variations continue
Because only a first substance is both
throughout the creature's lifetime .
This
separate from matter and separate in
continual change however, does not indithought, it alone 'is' in the fullest
cate a ceaseless flux -- that we must at
sense. However, the substances we find in
any ~iven instant give the composite a
the world, because they need to act in
different name and definition because its
matter, can't be separate in every way,
'to be' has always just changed . The form
and
therefo re
can't
be
totally
(both,
1)
the
stages
i.e. ,
the
47
self-sufficient.
Hence. we do not refer
composite' s properties and perfections
all other beings to substances such as
and 2)
the attributes we receive
these, fo r the one and central nature must
through s ens ation)
does determine the
be simple in all respec ts.
composite -- and all the constituents of
Chapters Thirteen through Fifteen
the form do not remain constant; but the
d "sclose another falling short of essence
essence,
which
does
rema · n
constant,
when it is not simple. Thi rteen begins by
determines the form. While attributes can
r ejecting universals as substances.
Each
add or take away from the sensible form,
of the numerous arguments he presents
in so far as they cannot alter the
hinges upon a fundamental claim which
composite's
determining
principle
arises fr om his notion of sameness.
He
essence, they can't alter the composite.
says that when present in a thing, subThus essence -- not sensible form
stance i s present as something pec u liar to
-- de clares the co~posite, becau se essence
that thing. 5 0
A universal, as the one
is the s ource o f the composite' s nature .
within the many, is peculiar to no hing
Most clearly, then, samenes s in knowledge
and s o cannot be substance, because t hings
differs from complete sameness, for eswhose substance is one have one essence
sence is neither the composite's material
and ~re themselves one . 51 But how can we
c onstituent, nor simply all the actuidentify essence with substance, then, if
alities that comprise its form.
Yet the
an essence is a species?
c onclus i on o f the syllogism that began
In a sense, when essence acts in
Chapter Six omits the dokoumen and legomen
matter, it fragments~ found here and found
of the premisses, and asserts, not that we
there, essence in each instance makes its
judge each thing to be the same as its
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oneness in kind, not numerical unity.
This differs from the unity of a genus in
terms of self-sufficiency, since a species, once generated, does not require its
instances in order to be, as does a genus.
In the case of first substances, however,
nothing inhibits the type of sameness they
possess; because they do not require matter, essence and substance here are one,
simply.
Before unravelling some further
difficu lties which arise from essence's
fragmentation, Aristotle closes his arguments against universals by repeating his
central theme.
This time, however, he
states it in a new way:
the actuality of
each thing makes it separate.52 Actuality
implies separateness; substance sets each
thing apart because of what it is. Separateness provides the first link between
whatness and actuality.
Chapter Fifteen intensifies the
problems which arise from the reduplication of essence in matter .
Answering the
question "Of what is definition possible?", Aristotle concludes that we can
only define things which are both common
in some way (not indivisible in place as
are individuals) and eternal.
If ess~nce
exists 'in' each thing, and we cannot
define these composites because they do
not remain, neither can we define essence.
But we define substance most of a1153 and
think substance most of all to be p~rma­
nent and unchanging. 54
Clearly, essence
possesses a type of permanence, since it
preserves oneness in kind from one generation to the next.
Permanence without
qualification belongs only to first substances .
But when we view essence solely as
whatness, we cannot account for this permanence .
Thinking of essence as that
which sets each thing apart because of
what it is leads Aristotle to focus upon :
the 'setting apart' , thereby unpacking the i
notion of. actuality.
Chapter Sixteen ;
illustrates this progression.
In Sixteen, Aristotle identifies
the fallacy in two wide-spread notions of
substance.
" •.. most of what are regarded
as substances are potentialities. n5~ The
parts of animals, whether we consider them
as parts (in which case they are not sepa-

rate), or not as parts (but as matter),
cannot be substances.
For in either case
they are ·potential and
therefore not
primary. " ... for none of them is one, but
they exist like a heap until they are .
transformed and a uni Y is pro d uced out of
"t ·
t~em." 56
One cannot understand a heap
without considering its many elements; one
can understand a unity, a heap transfo:med, . by ~onsidering only the type of
un~ty.
it
is
by
considering
its
principle or cause. Which is to say, one
needs to understand the unity itself,
simply.
.
Neither are universals primary,
since we must always ref er them to that of
which they are the principle.57 Therefore
Aristotle claims that they, too, cannot be
substances.
In the case of both the universal
and material elements of a thing, then, to
be potential is not to be one
for
potentiality is alwayi indeterminat~.
To
be one, as Chapter Thirteen state~, is to
be actual.
Aristotle's vision of substance as primary verges on actuality, for
~ctuality implies oneness, and thus also
implies separation in virtue of what one
is.
At this point, Aristotle chooses
to " ... continue the discussion from another starting point, so to say, 11 58 by asserting substance to be a principle and a
cause .
We seek the causes of sensible
t~ings
in two ways, for we can inquire
either 1) Why is. A A? or 2) Why does B
belong to A?
Only the latter expresses
t~e
investigation properly, because the
f 1:st either i~tends the second (although
f ~ils to sr,ec1fy the belonging) , or the
first asks Why is a thing its wb.atness?".
But when we ask why something is itself,
we ask, not whether there exists a cause
of its being itself (for the thing's exis tence makes this clear), but what that
cause is . Yet as Chap ter One makes clear
there exists no other, more fundamentai
cause for Aristotle than the . 'what' that
the thing is; a thing is because it is its
essence.
Because of the presence of essence
in matter then, when we ask why a thing
is, we need to ask why something belongs
to something else.
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�c ause of existence or unity in a comp o site, we seek the unity itself -- we seek
t he
essence
which
belongs
to
the
composite. This cause is the final cause
and
in cases of generation
the
efficient cause.
Compounds which a re one in totalit y the n, consist of material elements and
t h e c aus e which makes t he se elements one
defini te thing. This las t i s n ot an element , bu t " ... t h e subs tanc e of e ach t hing;
for this is the first cause of the thing's
existence". This leads Aristotle to identify essence with nature; since " ... those
(objects) that are substances are formed
according to nature or by nature, the sub stance of these would appear to be this
nature which is not an element bu t a principle." 59
The Physics asserts nature to be
the principle of movement or rest in a
thing.60 Is substance really such a principle?
Throughout 6, Aristotle depicted
substance as that which, because of what
it was, made a thing peculiar.
We knew
essence as 'the what the thing was and is
and always will be' ; any 'making' which
resulted from this whatness took place
somewhat secondarily.
Now however, the
'making' has become identical with the
whatness:
essence is what we say the
t hing to be in virtue of itself . Before ,
Aristo t l e -emphasized 'selfness' ; now he
emphas ize s the at emporal 'to be ' .
This shift began in Chapter Seven,
which describes whatness as a cause in so
f ar as essence acts dyn ami cally . But why
should whatness aut omatically give rise t o
movement? Can we really combine these two
ways of seeing substance, as Aristotle
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does in his description of essence?
By
his very method of presentation, Aristotle
seems t o say that whatness and actuality
are by nature intertwined, and their as similation inevitable.
Yet they app ear to conflict.
Essence is a this.
But when substance acts
in matter and determines the nature of the
r esultant composite, it no longer seems a
this (as Seventeen's insistence upon predRather, it acts as a
ication indicates).
quality :
But

the

f orm

signifies

a

such and this is not a this
and a definite thing; and
what the artist makes and
the man begets is a such
from a this, and what is
generated is a such-this . 6 3
No whatness except first substance is ever
separate from matter.
Yet whenever we
speak about essence at work in matter, we
also speak about suchness, for forms can
f unction
as
the
d i fferences
between
things . 63
However, we distinguish two types
of
differences
those
between
individuals and those between species ~
A
composite becomes a man because essence
sets matter apart and makes it definite .
Yet since essence acts in this way mo r e
than once,
thi s
'setting apart'
also
groups composites.
Hence,
essence
in
itself does not set matter directly apar t,
for it unit es individuals in kind .
Of the differences between indi viduals , those attributes which ma n if est
an individual's p r ogress towards its es sence -- proper ties -- s et the individual
apart in the greatest degree .
Snubness
does not distinguish only Soc rates; the
way in which Socrates was what every man
is said to be does set Socrates apart from
all others .
So we call a thing 'such' in vir tue of its essence, but we call a thi ng a
' this '
in
virtue
of
certain
particularitie s of its sensible form . Yet
the very properties we select to distin gui s h an indiv idual r e f ec t · t s e ssence.
Indeed, becau se essence acts as a potency,
directing all that occurs towards itself,
it both causes the cornposite's properties
and alters its accidents (and these two
together comprise sensible form ) .
Theref o re essence
not the properties
makes the thing a this.
And e ven though
essence, due to its fragmentation, acts as
a
such
when
it
determines
basic
characteristics, the act of essence itself
is still a this. 64
The thisness o f essence appears as
suchness then, solely because o f its pres"""
ence in matter. But all substances except
first substances act in matter. Therefore
only first substances are peculiar in the
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are a this without qualification. But can
an act ever be a this? What does it mean
to be in act?
In
place
of
a
definition,
Aristotle
opposes
actuality
to '
potentialities
and
then
to
motion.
"Energeia is the existence of a thing, not
in the way that we say something exists
potentially." 65
The examples he cites
fall into three classes:
1) the exercise
of an ability, which he contrasts with the
ability; 2) something we separate from its
matter, which he opposes to the matter;
and 3) the finished product, to the raw
material.
In a sense, all three perform
the same act -- the act of being what we
sa~ each to be.
When seeing, the eye is
doing what an .eye is said to do; when
separated,
the line segment is being
. i~self rather than a part of some large
line .
They
also
if
we
speak
~nalogically -- share whatness, for each
is the accomplishment of an intention
Energeia then, is both an act and an end.
Derived from erg on , energeia, points t~
entelecheia.
This same set of relations creates
the
opposition
between
energeia
and
kines is.
While
a
motion
has
limit
(toperas), a motion is not an end (telos);
rather, it e xit s for the sake of something
other than itself .
Hence, we call a
motion
incomplete
(ateleia).
An
actualit~, while not finished in the way
of a motion (for an actuality can continue
~ndefinitely),
nevertheless
completes
itself at any time because it is its own
end·
Due to its completeness, energeia
points to entelecheia.
.
But can we identify actuality, as
Aristotle describes it, with substance?
When we viewed substance as whatness,
peculiarity characterized substance most
of all. The peculiarity of actuality its
' t h.
'
isness ' , becomes manifest as completeness.
In Book 6, Aristotle unpacked the
separateness compounded within peculiarity
by examining the three ways in which whatness is prior.
Actuality is prior in the
same three ways.
It is prior in formula:
"that
.which is primarily capable is capable by

view of the fact that it may be an actuality". 66
Secondly, only a thing in actuality can bring a potential into act.67 This
moving cause can either resemble the po tential, in which case the priority arises
from time (for example, a seed becomes
actual because of its parent), or it can
differ, in which case the priority arises
because the substance of the cause is
eternal simply, while the substance of the
thing caused is permanent only in a qualified way. Priority in substance precedes
temporal priority because, in order to
become actual,
every potential relies
ultimately upon necessary and indestructible things -- upon eternally active substances.
In either case, however, actuality is both self-sufficient and the efficient cause of destructible things.
·
Finally, we said essence was prior
in knowledge, because we understand a
thing in the highest degree when we under stand its essence.
Essence declares a
thing, as Chapter Seven shows, because it
acts as a·final cause.
An actuality, as
complete, is also a final cause. Thus it,
too, declares a thing.
These three priorities reveal that
definiteness does belong to an actuality .
We call a thing peculiar when it sets itself apart in virtue of what it is; we say
a thing is in act when it sets itself
apart in virtue of what it is doing .
Aristotle's two visions of substance need
not contradict.
If something has, in itself and
because of itself, a tendency for change,
we call that thing 'natural' .68
Since
essence ·acts as a final cause, it is a
principle of movement which initiates and
governs the progress of the composite in
its actuality and towards itself.
(For
· example, if the essence of an animal is to
partake in the divine by the preservation
of its species, an animal -- because of
• desire -- will feed itself and reproduce.)
In such a principle resides the nature of
each composite.
Yet essence does not
abandon peculiarity when it acts as · a nature, for an act can be a this.
Thus in Aristotle's vision of a
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�in this way we must also regard only first
substances and souls as genuine substances
as things which are substances not
merely by an analogy.
This merging of
whatness and actuality then, transforms
the investigation of De Anima into an
investigation of substance, as substance
appears
due
to
its
fragmentation
in
matter.
Just as the Metaphysics progresses
towards the Prime Mover as 'substance' in
the fullest sense, so De Anima focusses
upon one particular principle of movement
as the most complete expression of substance
when
present
in
destructible
things.
Fo r De Anima investigates man's
last differentia, his ability to know.
This ability rests upon a meeting or encounter between the soul and its object.
As a result of this meeting, the soul becomes a likeness (to homoion) of this object and exists iila way like that object
(homoiotai).69
Hence the object upon
which the soul focusses determines the
nature of both the activity of meeting and
the knowledge in which this meeting results.
Now the soul encounters two types
of objects -- sensible and intelligible.
As the soul comes t o know them, it becomes
all things. 7 0
What then, are these objects, which t ogether contain all our
world? What does the soul really·come to
know by means of this meeting in which the
soul preserves itself by progressing towards its own actuality?
The division between sensible and
intelligible objects coincides with the
.division in the Metaphysics between sensible form and essence:
Since there is a difference
between magnitude and the
es se nce of magnitude, flesh
and
the
essence
of
flesh ... and
since
fl esh
exists not without matter
but as this snubness in this
nose, it is by the sentient
power
that
the
soul
discriminates the hot and
the cold and the
thing s
whose formula is flesh;

but by the intellect that the soul discriminates the essence of flesh. 71 Therefore when sensing, the soul encounters
sensible form -- the form of a composite
in so far as the form is sensible; when
thinking, the soul encounters essence -what we say the composite to be in virtue
of
itself.
This
distinction
first
appeared in the Metaphysics when Aristotle
spoke about generation in 6,7 (pg. 9-11).
For in his example of generation by art,
he distinguished the essence of health
from the various stages in which the doctor produces that form in the body.
The
stages seem to express the individuality
and diversity which mark every composite
simply because 1) essence acts as a first
actuality and 2) essence is present in
matter, which has diverse potentials. Yet
although these stages involve individuality, they still progress towards heal th,
their cause.
Likewise, although the soul
re ceives the perceptible attributes in all
their
individuality,
these
attributes
still point towards essence, their source.
Yet even though essence causes this showing forth of itself -- i.e., causes the
attributes, while we sense the attributes,
we d o not sense essence itself (j ust as
the form of heal th regulates the stages
which lead to it without becoming identical· with them).
We, too, acknowle dge a difference
between sensible form and essence:
for
while we sense water (sensible f o rm) , we
wou ld not say that we know water -- but we
do know what water is (e ssence ) .
And
while we drink water, we would not claim
to drink what water is.
Therefore even
our manner of speech suggestS a tension
between these two methods of knowing.
The s ource of this tensi on lies in
the work within the composite that each
object perf orms.
For essence, as a first
actuality whic.h directs the composite onward and towards itself, strains against
the present actualities o f the sensible
form.
This strain constructs a conflict
between what the composite appears at this
moment to be and what the composi te
strives to be.
Since both o f these in
some sense are the composite (although
neither is simply identic al with it ) , it

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1

seems as if we can know some one composite
in two respects -- for we can encounter
essence or sensible form (essence as it
manifests itself ~hen in matter).
But before we know anything in
either of these two ways, the soul attends
to its object; a 'meeting' occurs.
The
meeting from which sensation arises appears to be a sort of mediated touching -we come to know each composite through
'touching'
its perceptible qualities.72
When I see a robin, it 'touches' me by its
color and shape; when I hear it, it 't ouc hes' me by its sound .
Sensible form
functions as a mediator whose activity
enables us to know an individual compos ite .
We recognize this immediate connection between attributes and their composite in our speech while I can say "I
see a color" or "I hear a sound" without
mentioning the subject in which they must
be present, when I am actually sensing I
would be far more likely to say "I see a
bird" than "I see the color of a bird", or
"I hear a bird" than "I hear the sound of
a bird".
While we can separate an attribute from its composite --because they do
in fact
differ
whenever the soul
encounters the world we r ecognize their
connection :
sensible form is essence as
essence reveals itself when in combination
with potentiality, with indeterminacy.
The process in which sensible form
becomes known manifests even further the
indirect nature of sensation.
For we always receive sensible form through an intervening medium which is of a physical
nature, such as ai r or flesh. 7 3 Yet despite
the
involvement
of
a
physical
medium, and the related fact that the
p r oper sensibles have a close connection
with
the
proximate
matter
of
their
composite, we never 'touch' matter. When
I 'touch' a composite -- matter that a
form has made actual, such as any one of
the four elements or their combinations -I
'touch',
not
its matter,
but the
actuality in the matter .
Since matter,
when not in combination with a form, is
nothing
but
potentiality,
a
type
of
non-being, 74 a soul can never encounter
it.
Whenever the soul a~prehends an
object, it meets a being.
In the case of the meeting we call

thought, the soul requires neither a medi ·
um nor an organ.
For an essence is not ,
being in so far as being shows i tselj
through secondary categories associate~
with proximate matter; rather, it is c
being simply. Therefore whenever the sou ~
contacts essence, it contacts being di rectly
by an indivisible act in ar
indivisible
time. 75
(Aristotle
use~
thigein in place of haphe -- his usuaJ
word for touch -- to describe this rare
meeting.)
As a result of this direct
contact, the intellect comes to know ar
essence in a way in which such being~
never exist actually outside the soul -as separate.
Yet despite its separation fron
sensible matter, such essence is still not
primary in the fullest sense.
Rather,
since the actuality that is an essence
makes definite one potential of its genus,
essence becomes part of an intelligible
composite. 76 As a result of the action of
essence in the intelligible matter of its
genus, the soul can define essence - unlike
first substances - because it can analyze
essence into its constituents.77
But when the soul meets these two
different objects -- sensible form and es sence -- in these two different ways, what
does it know?
What sort of thing is an
aisthema or a noema? What do they reveal
to us?
In Book 2 of De Anima, Aristotle
says:
That which acts in producing
actual
sensation
is external to the thing
which senses it, and this is
the visible thing or the
audible thing (to horaton
kai .!.£_ akouston~r any of
the other sensible objects;
and the cause of this is the
fact that sensation, when
actual is of an individual
object. Knowledge, on the
other hand, is of things
universally taken, and these
exist in the soul in a
certain manner.78
Because sensible form arises from the activity of essence in matter, sensation car
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�expresses that end. Therefore when I hear
facts or in groupings of these facts.
a whisper behind me, and then a scream, I
Thus sensation tells me that this fire is
discriminate between the two on the basis
hot, or that this round, sweet, red thing
of their purpose, which I discover from
which I find on a certain tree each year
differences
in
their
qualities.
But
in autumn is an apple. Since, as we sense
knowledge of the function for which a
qualities, we become aware of the form
thing appears to be shaped merely points
these qualities somehow express, even our
to whatness; the soul has not yet reached
most basic sensations are not simple;
a clear understanding of the one orde ring
rather, they connect a quality or qualfunction which causes all the rest.
ities with the composite, which underlies
However, as we describe sensation
them . For when seeing, I see a particular
and thought in relation to what each rebird, as its color and shape reveal it to
veals about whatness, the strength of the
be.
Sensation acquaints us with what is
difference between the two dwindles. Why
at any given moment, for it tells us how
then does Aristotle insist so strongly
things
appear.
By making known
the
upon the importance of isolating the . one
phainomena, sensation enables us to take
ordering function?
Aristotle states this
effective practical action.
difference most strongly when he contrasts
Therefore
when
we
sense,
we
the relation each holds to wonder.
('Won'touch' certain differentiae of an indider', to thaumazo comes from theaomai
vidual composite 79 ; when we think, we conwhich means to gaze at or behold , and
tact
a
composite's
last
differentia
hence also, to contemplate).
(Teleuta diaphona) -- the principle which
Knowledge of a phenomenon fails to
sets the composite apart because of its
satisfy wonder -- indeed, it is the source
peculiarity. 8 0
This knowledge of the
which sparks our amazement.
And while
whatness of thing explains the combinarepeated sensations can dull or stifle
tions sensation makes known by revealing
wonder, they cannot bring us to the contheir cause.
trary state -- knowledge of the cause can.
But to know the precise contents
For example, once a geometrician knows the
of such an explanation seems a difficult
cause of the incommensurability between a
thing. A proton noema is not a definition
diagonal and the side of its square, nothbecause when we define something we dis ing would make him wonder more than if he
tinguish between its materi al and actual
found a diagonal which was commensurable
parts
yet we contact essence by an
with its side. We feel wonder whenever we
indivisible act in an indivisible time.
can't give an account of something because
Indeed,
such
knowledge
precedes
it
contradicts
our
expectations
definition.
But if we don't _really know
whenever we are perplexed (aporoumen) and
what a thing is until we define it, how
lack a way (aporos). 81
Once we know a ·
can
we
claim,
merely
by
contac i g
thing's cause, however, we can account for
essence, to know whatness?
it; at this point, conviction (pistis)
A similar ~roblem surfaces in the
replaces wonder.
cas~ of sensation, since the knowledge in
Aristotle calls this knowledge
which sensation results
connects with
which satisfies wonder 'wisdom' , and aswhatness, while it also precedes def in iserts it to be the highest of all the scit ion.
For when we 't ouch' qualities such
ences.
He calls 'experience' the most
as sound or color, we become aware of the
advanced knowledge which the soul becomes
essence which causes them, and therefore
as a result of sensation.
If the strain
say that we sense the composite substance
between essence and sensible form
in which we find them. But in this 'awarbetween thinking and sensing
is more
eness' we neither contact essence nor dethan just ostensible, it should find its
fine it; rather, we gain a sense of the
highest e~pression in a conflict between
composite's purpose.
Because a composexperience and wisdom.
ite' s final cause -- its essence -- orders
When Aristotle explains the varithe
entire
composite
towards
the
attainment
of
itself,
sensible
form

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ous ways in which the soul encounters the
world, he constructs a hierarchy, all the
levels of which arise originally from the
soul's ability to encounter sensible form.
... out of many sensations
memory comes to be, and out
of many memories of the same
thing experience comes to
be.
Out of experience, or
out of the universal which
has come to rest in the
soul, and which, being the
one alongside the many, is
the same in all of them a
. .
principle
of
art
or ' of
science (comes to be).82
Because the diverse memorie~ which
combine to create experience concern sensible form, the soul responsible f or experience
is
the
sentient
soul.
But
A~i~totle
also describes experience as
similar homoios to wisdom83 , and s pea k s o f
.
.
.
it with a universal, for experience is the
logos. of ~any memories.
Although these
me~ories differ in content, because each
points to one common thing, they together
form ~ system or unit of obse rvations. In
ex~erience,
the
soul
recognizes
the
exist~nce
of
a
cause
and
effect
relationship, for it applies the past to
the p:esent but the reason for the success
of this ~pplication remains unknown. when
a certain set of events occurs (for instance, a child has a fever, sore throat,
and lethargy) , experience tells us what to
do. to remedy the situation (to give the
child medicine since he has strep throat).
However, experience can not reveal that
t~is medicine cures the child because it
kills the particular strain of bacteria
responsible for strep throat. 84 Thus
wh~le it provides an account of the memories which act as its material, experience cannot account for itself
Rather,
either science or art provides t~e account
we desire .
Now wisdom is the highest of all
the sciences, for it studies the causes
and principles upon which all beings depend. Therefore, as a result of following
the method which seeks the one function
that orders all the remaining activities
we come to know an essence which cannot b~
known by sensation because it doesn't

reside in matter.
Such a science is not a productive
science:
. .. for it was when almost
all the necessities of life
were
supplied,
both
for
comfort and activity, that
such thinking began to be
sought. Clearly then, we do
not seek this science for
any other need; but just as
a man is said to be free if
he exists for his own sake
and not for the sake of
somebody else, so this alone
of all the sciences is free
for only this science exist~
for its own sake
Does t?e tension then, between experience
and w~sdom, sensing and thinking, find
voice
in
this
self-sufficiency?
Has
Aristotle cemented the division between
sensible
form
and
essence
in
the
estrangement of first philosophy from all
other knowledge?
.
But Aristotle envisions these differe~t ways of encountering the world as
form~n~ a hierarchy.
Thus, rather than
straining against each other, experience
leads to wisdom, just as sensib\e form
leads to and is ordered by essence.
·
~lisdo~, while it does not require the ot.her
sciences, regulates them -- practical and
speculative alike -- because all
th
th'
o er
ings depend upon and strive to resemble
the primary object of its investigation.BG
Because all other substances stand as
u~derlying
subjects in relation to this
fi~st .p rinciple, whoever knows this first
princi~le u~~erstands potentially all other things.
Therefore,
in
order to
po~sess the deepest under~tanding of the
t~ings and actions around us, we require
wi~dom.
Yet we do not by nature desire
~his understanding because of the benefits
it . renders with respect to these other
obJects; rather, we desire it for its own
sake.
But when a man possesses wisdom
he knows not merely the first principles'
. but also that which follows from them. 8B
To contact essence is not sufficient in
o~der
~o
be wise; we need to reflect
~iscursively as well. So, then, what do we

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�know by the act in which we contact an
essence?
would not the nature of this
knowledge be similar to that which the
first philosopher possesses of the primary
principle? But· what would such knowledge
be?
Aristotle says :
Those who wish to succeed in
arriving at answers will
find it profitable to go
over the difficulties; for
answers successfully arrived
at are solutions to dif fi -

cul ties
previously
dis cussed , and one cannot untie
a knot if he is ignorant of
it . 89

Before we can understand the es sence of man -- the essence of ourselves
- - we need to understand l ) the object of
the
soul's
activity
being
(both
sensible form and essence ) , and 2)the
result of this activity (aisthema and
noerna). Clearly then, our difficult knot
remains still tied, awaiting a f urthe r
attempt.

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Footnotes
37.Topics, 103b~l.
38.Metaphysics, l033b26-30. and
On Interpretations, 16a4-9.
39.Metaphysics, 1033a18-22.
40.Ibid., 1032bl.
While
there
seems to be an inconsistency in
naming both essence
(the form
in th~ soul which determines
generation) and the properties
and accidents by 'form' ,this is
really only another expression
of analogous predication. While
the two do differ, both are
actualities although to different degrees.
41.Ibid., 1032b5-10.
42.Ibid., 1019a15-21.
43.Ibid., 1032b26-28.
44.Generation of Animals,
736a35-bll.45 .Metaphysics, 1037b15~17.
46.Physics, 193b13-19.
47.Properties and perfections are
closely related-perhaps
even
identical.
For a property is
something that belongs to its
composite because of its essence, for example, the ability
to learn grammar is a property
of man.
Thus, properties are
essence, improperly understood.
Perfections are similar:
"For neither the habits of the
body nor those of the soul are
alterations. For of the habits,
some are virtues and others
vices ... a virtue is a kind of
perfection (for when each thing
acquires its virtue it is said
to be perfect; for a
thing
exists in the highest degree
according to nature when, to
use an example, like a perfect
circle, it has become a circle
in the highest sense and the
best circle), while a vice is a
destruction or departure from
that
perfection."
Physics,
246a10-17.
48.Metaphysics, 1036a9-10.

1.De Anima, 433a31-32; 433b29-31.
2.Ibid., 432al5-17.
3.Ibid., 432a30-32.
4.Ibid., 415al5-23.
5.Ibid., 43lb24-a3.
6.Ibid., 429bl3-18.
7.Metaphysics, 1017a9- b9 .
8.Ibid., 1003a33-34.
9.Ibid., 1054a13-19.
10.Ibid., 1003b23-24.
11.Ibid., 1011b25-28.
12.Ibid., 1028a15.
13.Ibid., 1048a32.
14.Ibid., 1028a14-15.
15.Ibid., 1041b4-5; and Posterior
Analytics, 89b36-a15.
6.Ibid., 1054a10-13; 1053b16-23.
17.Ibid., 1028a20-31.
18.Topics, 101b19-24.
19.0dyssey, Book III, line 82-84.
20.Metaphysics, 1003a10. A substance is a this and can be
exhibited
21.Physics, 184a16-b14.
22.Metaphysics, 1003b16-18.
23.Ibid., 1024a8-9.
24.Categories, 3b10.
25.Metaphysics, 1029a27.
Matter
would appear as nothing because,
in o rder for it to be absolutely
separate, we must remove the
attributes which bound matter
(length, width, and depth) and
also those which make matter's
presence known to us (colo r ),
because the
being of
these
attributes is not the same as
that o f matter (which is solely
potential)
26.Ibid., 1029a26.
27.Ibid., 1029a33.
28.Ibid., 1007a29-b16.
29 . Ibid . , 1030a3 - 5.
30.Ibid., 1030a12-14.
31 . Ibid., 1037b17-21.
32.Ibid., 1052a23-29.
33.Ibid., 1050a9-10.
34.Ibid., 1030a30.
35.Ibid., 1031a15-18.
36.Metaphysics, 1030b19-21.

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or the form, which is a this
and sepa rable in formula (only)
• • • II
Ibid .' 104228-29.
65.Ibid . , 1048a32- 33.
66 .Ibid ., 1049b13- 14.
67 .Ibid., 1029b32- a28 .
68.Physics, 192bl6-21.
69 . De Anima, 418a6-7.
70.Ibid.,43lb20-23.
71 . Ibid ., 429bl0-18.
72.Ibid., 41Ra?4-~h . .
7 3 .Ibid . , 423b12-17.
74 .Metaphysics, 1089a26- 31 .
75 . De Anima, 430bl4-16.
76 . Just as we call both the sensible c ompo site and its essence
' substance' (because the first
points to the second) , so we
call
both
the intelligible
c omposite of species plus genus
and also just the part of the
composite
that
is
actual
'ess ence' .
77.Metaphysics, 1045-34-35.
78.De Anima, 417b20-23.
79.Metaphysics, 1042b32-35.
These diff e r entiae are members
of the secondary categories.
SO . Ibid ., 1038al6-30.
81 .Ibid., 982bl7 .
82 .Posterior Analytics , 100a3-9 .
83 . Metaphysics, 98la2 - 3.
84 .Ibid., 98la4-12.
85.Ibid., 982bl2 -2 8 .
86 . Ibid., 1072bl4; and
Nichomachean Ethics,114lb23- 24,
and 1145al0- ll.
87.Metaphysics, 982a21- 23 , and
992b3 -4.
88 . Nichomachean Ethics ,
114la16-20.
89 . Metaphysics , 995a28- 30 .

49.Ibid;, 1037h1 -R~
SO.Ibid., 1038b24.
51.Ibid., 103Bb14-15.
52.Ibid., 1039a8.
53.Ibid., 1034a20.
54.A substance, because it
is
prior in time, is that upon
which all other beings depend.
If no substances were to exist,
nothing would exist. Therefore
it seems as if substances are
eternal. Metaphysics, 107lb5 - 8.
55.Ibid., 1048b5- 6.
56.Ibid., 1040b9-10.
57.Categories, 8a31- b2.
58.Metaphysics, 1041a7-8.
59.Ibid . , 104lb27 -32.
60.Physics, 192b22-23.
61.Metaphysics, 1029b14-15.
62.Ibid., 1033b23-25.
63.Categories, lOall-13 : A fourth
genus of qualities is the shape
or the form of each thing, and
we may add to these straightness and curvature and other
like them .
For a thing, in
virtue of each of these, is
said to be such and such ."
Topics, 144a20 -22:
" ... the
differentia alway s signifies a
quali ty."
three
64 . When speaking of the
kinds of substance Aristotle
says: " ... another is nature,
which is a this, and it is that
to which something changes , and
a possession ... In some cases,
that which is a this does not
exist apart from a composite
substance."
Metaphysics, 107 0all-16.
or again: " ... in another sense
it (substance) is the formula

70

Beethoven ... A Comedian?!
Kenneth Martin

At the time that Beethoven wrote
the Third Symphony, there was a certain
form for the composer to follow when he
wrote a symphony. This form dictated the
number of movements and a certain order in
which. they were to be placed.
Since the
movements were entitled according to the
tempo at which it was to be played, this
order also dictated the tempo of each
movement . For instance the first movement
of the Third Symphony is entitled "Allegro
con brio". This means merry, with spirit.
Beethoven breaks from this tradition when
he writes the second and third movements.
Traditionally the second movement was
slow--Beethoven
keeps
that,
but
he
entitles the movement "Marcia funebre"
which means funeral march.
He seems to
want to place an image in the listeners
mind .
To make sure that the image gets
there, he gives the movement a title which
will place it there. The image is that of
a funeral--thus one of grief.
The third movement he entitles
"Scherzo" which means joke.
The traditional third movement of a symphony was a
minuet. This is a dance in 3/4 time which
was played quickly.
Why does Beethoven
bring a joke into his symphony and why is
it a joke? Before we approach the techni cal question of "how is it a joke?", we
shall put forth a hypothesis about why he
chooses a scherzo.
As we mentioned before, Beethoven
breaks tradition at first with the second
movement--the funeral march.
This is an
extremely slow movement designed to convey
a feeling of grief to the listener.
At
the
conclusion of this movement the
listener is immersed in a cloud of grief.
This cloud is thick, making it difficult
to breathe or move.
The listener is in
danger of suffocating or drowning because

he is so saturated with grief.
For
Beethoven to leave the listener in that
cloud of grief is to stab him in the heart
and let him bleed.
Since he immersed us
into that cloud, he now has to reach out
to us and help us back into the clear air.
He does this by telling us a joke.
Beethoven realizes that although
. grief is an important thing for humans to
express, it should not overwhelm us and
become part of us.
If grief does ove rwhelm us, it is bad because grieving is
basically a selfish emotion. When someone
dies, the mourning is not for the person
who died, but for the lives that have to
go on living without him.
After all, if
we believe in life after death, we should
rejoice for the person who died, for he'
has moved to someplace better.
Thus it
can be seen that grief is a selfish thing
and when a person lets it overwhelm him,
he is being selfish.
Beethoven seems to
think that the best way to move a person
from grief is to make him laugh.
Let us
see how he attempts this difficult task.
The third movement is a masterpiece whose main purpose is to keep the
audience off balance.
Throughout the
piece, al though the tempo never changes,
it is difficult to keep in time with the
music.
It keeps running away from the
listener, who is trying to catch it and
make it part of him. Beethoven never lets
. the l~stener catch up, because if he does,
he will become wrapped in his own inner
world . He lets this happen in the second
movement. Now he wants us to become part
of society again.
This means we have to
strive to catch what we want--as in the
third movement.
To make clearer what I mean by
keeping someone off balance, to let him
laugh, let us glance at how a comedian

71

�r
works.
A comedian's job is a difficult
one, because his audience's purpose is to
be made to laugh.
Since they expect this
it makes the comedian's job tougher, because that is the easiest way to make people laugh--to give them the unexpected.
But it has to be unexpected in an uncertain way.
For instance, a comedian who
came out and read a tragic poem probably
would not get laughed at, for tragedy is
simply
the
opposite
of
comedy.
The
comedian has to move in a completely
different motion than the audience would
ever expect.
A good stand up comedian never
lets his audience rest once he has got
them laughing.
He tells a joke and when
it is over he immediately tells another.
If the audience does not laugh, he can
sometimes salvage it by buffoonery.
If
the audience does laugh, as soon as they
have quieted enough to hear him speak, he
begins
another
joke.
This
way
the
audience does not have time to get its
expectations straight.
Thus they laugh
more easily.
Beethoven
does
much
the
same
thing.
The movement opens in 3/4 time
with three beats to a measure. He states
the theme of the ·movement in the first
fifteen measures of the piece. By the end
of the seventh measure the listener's
sense of time is already confused.
If he
has a score, he knows it is 3/4 time, otherwise he is in limbo.
In the first place
the music is moving so fast that it is
impossible to count each beat in the measure, so the listener is left to tapping
his foot to the first beat of every measure .
The problem with this is that the
listener has to trust his ear to tell him
which beat is the first beat of the measure.
Usually, since it is the strongest
beat in the measure and composers use it
as such, it is easily found.
However
Beethoven fools everyone because he starts
on the last beat of a measure and uses a
one, two count to fool the listener into
2/ 4
time.
This
is
accomplished by
emphasizing every other beat, thus the
person counts 2/4. But at measure nine he
slips in an extra unaccented beat--meaning
that we are in 3/4 time.
The listener

starts tapping every one of the one, two,
three count.
Then at measure sixteen he
jumps back into the 2/4 time of the first
seven measures .
The listener is off
balance again.
At measure twenty-two, he
moves back into 3/4 emphasizing the first
beat of each measure again.
Then at
thirty he reenters 2/4 time..
This lasts
until measure forty-two where 3/4 time
asserts itself again. We stay in 3/4 time
until measure fifty-eight where 2/4 comes
in again.
This is a confused section
where it is tough to get any sort of
rhythym at all.
This confusion lasts to
measure seventy where 3/4 is emphasized
strongly by the violas and contra bass
playing the same note (D) eleven times
through three and two-thirds measures
(70 - 73) then moving to another note (Bb)
on the first beat of bar seventy-four and
playing it eleven times through another
three and two-thirds measures
(74 -7 7) .
Then at the last beat of bar seventy-seven
we move back to the one, two punch of 2/4
time.
This back and forth motion lasts
until bar one hundred and sixteen.
we
have been in 2/4 since bar one hundred and
eleven. Then we get three successive sets
of quarter notes moving to half notes.
These throw our timing off completely.
The nearest thing we can grasp is 3/4, but
it is difficult because the strong beat
comes on two of the measure, instead of
one where we need it to get the sense of
3/4 time.
As soon as these three bars
(116 -119 ) are finished we get a solid
statement of 3/4 time with two bars
(122-3) which state one chor d on each beat
in the first bar then another chord on all
three beats of the second.
Then in bar
one hundred twenty four we get that
confused quarter note to half note step
again.
After this set (124 -7 ) we get
another set in a 3/4 time as before. This
lasts until bar one hundred and forty four
where 3/4 reasserts itself by playing the
melody notes only on the first beat of the
measure. This moves us all the way to the
repeat o f bar one hundred and sixty four
in 3/ 4 time.
It is evident then, that
Beethoven strives to keep us off balance
and does so in the first section of the
movement.

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The trio which begins at measure
again, gi~ing us our sure 3/4 time.
This
one hundred and sixty seven and ends at
lasts until bar four hundred and twenty
measure two hundred and sixty, may be the
only place where we have a chance to catch 1 two wher~ he gives us an authentic cadence
on th~ first beat of a measure.
This octhe music.
Al though the tempo stays the
curs in bars four hundred twenty one to
same, the fact that the same note is being
four hundred twenty two.
This gives a
held over a longer period of time tends to
sure sense of 3/4 time.
make us think of a slower tempo. From bar
.
H~ m~ves into the coda in a 2/ 4
one hundred and sixty seven to bar two
time·
This is seen in bar four hundred
hundred and six he uses the last beat of a
measure to emphasize the first beat o.f the . and twenty three in the timpani giving us
a. one, two count. Then the violins and
next measure.
This gives the liste-~~r a
viola com~ in emphasizing the 2/4.
Oversteady sense of 3/4 time which lasts for a
top of this .2/4 time in the bass, he puts
time.
This enables the listener to catch
the melody in 3/ 4 with the clarinet and
his breath and get some stable ground for
foggotto playing two dotted quarter notes
a.moment.
A moment later he plunges the
back to back followed by a quarter note on
listener into a trio of flute, clarinet,
the first beat of the measure (425 -27 ) .
and bassoon (Fogotto) at bar two hundred
The flute joins with the melody in bar
and six.
Our sense of 3/4 time lasts for
four hundred and twenty nine.to four huna measure before he starts emphasizing
dred and thirty one .
Then we get a solid
every other beat again. The listener f al2/ 4 from bars four hundred thirty one to
ters, striving to get in time with the
f~ur hundred and thirty nine with the enmelody.
This lasts from bar two hundred
tire orchestra moving at one two, one two.
and six to ?ar two hundred and twenty five
T~en at four hundred and thirty nine he
w~ere a trio of horns comes in with the
gives us a cadence on one, then two rests.
first melody of the trio to bring us back
Bar four hundred and forty and four hunto 3/4 time.
Again Beethoven just lets
dred and forty one do the same.
This
the listener get the feel of the rhythm
pushes us again to 3/4 time and ends the
before he changes it again.
we last in
piece .
3/4 until the repeat at bar two hundred
It becomes evident that Beethoven
and sixty.
ha~ masterfully designed this movQment to
At two hundred and twenty five of
bring the listener out of his own inner
th~ 7econd ending he brings us back to the
world of grief and self pity.
He strives
or i?in~l theme of the movement, starting
~o mo.ve us to a shared outer world full of
again in 2/4 time. This part is almost an
~oy in that sharing.
If hE: gives us a
e~act ~eplica of the beginning.
The cruJoyf~l sounding piece in which we are able
cial difference occurs in measures three
to f i~d our timing, he offers us a way
hundred and eighty one to three hundred
back into that inner world whicL is so
and eighty five.
This is the spot where
lonely. By constantly shifting tfi.-, rhythm
we are used to a quarter note to half note
~rom 2/4 to 3/4 he refuses the way to that
t~ quarter note half note cadence~
we
inner world.
Before we can get there we
finally have come to terms with the back
have to be able to become as one with the
and forth motion from 2/4 to 3/4.
Then
m~sic ~
This can only happen if we are
here he moves to 2/2 time.
Our timing is
wit~ it rhythmically. Thus in chasing the
thrown into outer space. This is the climusic to become one with it we forget ourmax of the joke and "the joke is on us".
selves and think of the music, or even
From there he move back into a 2/4 at mea better, of someone else .
Thus, the third
sure three hundred and eighty five uritil
movement is not a joke so much as an end
arou~d four hundred and one .
Here he emto g!:i;_eving.
phasizes the first beat of every measure

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A ~reject ~-o.r . the .~ab_ora~ory
Mr. Curtis Wilson, Advisor

Preface:

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I
sense
I
have
today witnessed
something great!
It is my intention to show in this
little paper something remarkable which I
happened upon not totally by accident,
namely this:
there is indeed audible
harmony among the five regular solids.
These solids, celebrated since the days of
Pythagoras and Plato, have more harmony
and design than I suspect has been known
until today.
But before I begin to give
my account, permit me, kind reader, to
recount the occasion of such a blessed
finding and to explain why I undertook
this endeavor.
It was some months ago that I first
was introduced to the study of acoustics,
and
undoubtedly
the
most
fascinating
phenomenon of this science was the Harmonic Overtone Series of a vibrating
string. While I was perusing those small
whole number ratios, I recollected seeing
them before in my geometrical studies.
For I had discovered in Euclid's Thirteenth Book that, for at least three of
the five regular solids, the edges were
related in square to the diameter by small
whole number ratios.
What a beautiful
coincidence!
Lest I lose someone before I even
begin, allow me to recall here the ratios
of the five regular solids and those of ·
the Harmonic Overtone Series:

Octahedron:
The square on the diameter of the
comprehending sphere is double the square
on the side of the octahedron.
(side of octahedron) 2 : (diameter) 2 ::1:2
Cube:
The square on the diameter of the
comprehending sphere is triple the square
on the side of the cube.
(side of cube ) 2 : (diameter ) 2 ::1:3
Icosahedron:
The side of the icosahedron is the
irrational straight line called minor.
Dodecahedron:
The side of the dodecahedron is the ·
irrational straight line called apotome . I

The Harmonic Overtone Series
1
2
3
4
5

2

3
4
5
6

Octave
Fifth
Fourth
Major Third
Minor Third

Now what was innnediately obvious to
me was that the octave and the octahedron
have the same ratio, namely 1: 2.
Moreover, the octave and the octahedron embody
the same number eight: eight notes in the

*The symbol ()~ is not algebraic. It is a
short way of expressing
"The
square
constructed on ..• "
It would be inconsistent to think here that one should multiply the length of the side by itself.

78

Tetrahedron:
The square on the diameter of the
comprehending sphere is one and a half
times the square on the side of the
pyramid.
(side of tetrahedron) 2 *: (diameter)2::2:3

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�former and eight faces in the latter.
Now this similarity could hardly be
accounted a simple coincidence! And so I
set out upon my search for perfection, to
see where blessed nature left fingerprints
of her perfection.
I looked to geometry
and music, for my presumption was that
music is in a sense "sensed mathematics".
The five regular solids were not new
models
of
perfection,
harmony,
and
creation.
They go as far back as Pythagoras and Plato; and perhaps the best
lighting for the solids appears in Plato's
Timaeus,
in which Timaeus
tells his
"likely story" of creation.
But his
account is not a creation account--and by
creation I mean strictly "creation from
nothing"--for the demiurge fashions the
world after archtypes eternal and perfect.
Timaeus links the solids to the four
elements:
For bodies to be bodies they
must be both tangible and visible which
are the results of earth and fire, respectively.
Earth is represented by the cube
and fire by the tetrahedron . Now between
any two solid bodies there need to be two
proportionals. Hence, water (icosahedron)
and air (octahedron) serve to bind these
two elements together.
The fifth solid,
the dodecahedron, serves as the container
for the other elements.
But even better than this, I had for
my guide Master Johannes Kepler, who said
that God the creator was a playful,
geometricizing God. By this Kepler meant
that God created the world out of love and
for de light .
Fur thermore, God used the
two
tools
of
the
geome ter,
the
straight-edge
and
the
compass.
Even
though the phrase "Harmony of the Spheres"
- -to
describe
celestial
mechanics-preceeds Kepler by many centuries (it goes
back to Pythagoras, who claimed that he
and a few other select persons in history
were capable of training themselves to
audibly hear the .musical harmony of the
planetary heavens) , Kepler used this as
his foundation for his Harmonice Mundi
(Harmonics of the World).

(intelligible, not audible) with
dissonant tunings, like certain
syncopations
or
cadences
(wherewith men
imitate these
natural dissonances),
Hence it · is no longer a surprise
that
man,
the
ape
of
his
Creator,
should finally have
discovered the art of singing
polyphonically · (per concentum) ,
which
was
unknown
to
the
ancients, namely in order that
he might play the everlastingness of all created time in some
short part of an hour by rneana·
of an artistic concord of mau1y ··
voices and that he might to some
extent taste the satisfaction of
God the Workman with His own
works, in that very sweet sense
of delight elicited from this
music which imitates God.
--Harmonice, Book v, Chapter 7
Now
the
phrase
"not
audible"
befuddled me, and I resolved to try to
make audible harmonies by means of the
five regular solids, in light of the
coincident
ratios
with
the
harmonic
overtone series.

First Beginnings :
My first i nclination was to construct
out of wire the regular solids, given the
correct d i me ns i ons so that they would be
comprehended withi n the same sphere .
My
thinking was this : since the edges of the
solids were in harmonic ratios, why not
make them as one tunes a string? In this
manner the notes produced by the plucked
strings would give the harmonic intervals
of the octave, the fifth, the fourth, and
so on.
What signi f icance this would h ave l
We now str etch strings over several feet
within a piano. Wouldn't it be beautiful
to have those very same ratios given
within the confines of one sphere, determined by the five regular solids--the most
perfect of all rectilineal bodies.
For
the mystery of the five regular solids

. Accordingly the movements of the
heavens are nothing except a
certain
everlasting polyphony

80

lies in the fact that there are precisely
five and no more .
Moreover, the regular
solids are the most a. rectilineal body can
approach the sphere, the perfectly curved.
My
enthusiasm
was
not
enough,
however,
to surmount the obstacle of
"conunensurable only in square".
For no
sooner had I begun my calculations than I
realized that those small .whole number
ratios applied only to the squares constructed on the sides of the solids. To a
geometer these squares mean area, not the
algebraic notion of taking a length times
itself . It became increasingly clearer to
me that my polyphonic model would not be
so easy to construe~.
I
had already
begun, whether I had realized at the time
or not, my war on incommensurability.
One day, however, I
learned that
while string-lengths exhibit a one dimensional
vibration
mode,
drums
require
two- dimensional membranes to sound their
natural resonances.
What a joy and what
new hope this news brought to me!
Once
again I had the hope of somehow circumventing "commensurable only in square".
And why not drums?
For the five
regular
solids
are
three-dimensional
bodies;
they
are
polyhedra
and
not
polygons .
Why
should
their
natural
resonance be limited by a one-dimensional
string length?
It would be far more
appropriate to construct the solids as
drums, thus letting the whole body sound
its own natural resonance.
And so I undertook to study drums and
the
wave
equations
appropriate
to
drum-heads . The first bit of infor mati on
was shocking:
drums, like bells, do not
exhibit a harmonic overtone series like a
vibrating string or a column of air. For
drums and bells, their partials above the
fundamental
are
inharmonic
and
their
resonance not linear.
Two of the most important contributing factors to the pitch of a drum are the
volume of enclosed air and the size of the
vibrating membrane. The trapped air will
reinforce certain partials and cancel
others; if this were not the case, one
would simply get a "thud" and no musical
pitch . Also important to the pitch is the
thickness and tension of the membrane.

Now each of the five regular solids had
its own particular volume, surface area,
and lateral face area.
I thought to
myself: "If I could keep my drum-head of
constant
thickness
and
tension- - then
perhaps I might be able to bypass 'commensurable only in square'" . Just perhaps
in combining the specific volume with the
specific aperture of each of the solids, I
might
arrive
at
notes
harmonically
related.
For by this time it was clear
that what I was hoping was that the
natural resonances of the five solids as
drums would be in small whole number
ratios.

Constructing the Solids:
The construction of each solid begins
by taking a segment equal to the diameter
of the given sphere, the sphere within
which the regular solid will be comprehended.
The diameter is divided into a
specific ratio, and a perpendicular is set
out from the point of division to the
circumference.
Lines connecting the ends
of the diameter to the point on the
circumference give three right and similar
triangles. The following two theorems are
vitally important for Euclid's proofs in
Book Thirteen:

A

B

AB . : AD : : AD : AC
(sim . tri.)
AC dup . AB : AD
(AB) .2 : (AD) .2 dup. AB
AD
(VI. 20)
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Octahedron

Now let us consider more closely the
specific construction of the octahedron,
the tetrahedron, and the cube.
What was noted before about the
octave and the octahedron also holds for
the diapente (fifth) and the pyramid. But
where does the cube lead us?
It alone
gives us the interval of the twelfth, a
fifth above the range of the octave.
It
would complete things, it appears at first
glance, if the ratio of the cube were 3:4,
the same as the diatesseron ( fourth).
But
in fact, the ratio of the cube, namely
1:3,
does not appear in any of the
octave's intervals.
Consider the diagram below.
Circle
ABFE is the circumference of the sphere
circumscribing the five regular solids,
and AB is its diameter. BE is the side of
octahedron, AF the tetrahedron, and BF the
cube. Let us assign 6 units to the square
constructed on the diameter.
( It is
important to remember that the numerical
unit 6 refers to the square constructed on
the side AB, not to the specific length of
AB).
·~ already know the ratios of the
octah~ ~ron*
(1 :2 ),
the
tetrahedron
( 2: 3) , and the cube ( 1 : 3) •
Consequently,
the square on length AF will be 4, and the
square on length BF will be 2.

B

AD:AB .. 1 : 2
AD : AB . . (AC) :z
(AB ) 2
2
(AC ) :z : ( AB )
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1 : 2

A

Tetrahedron
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AD : AB : : (AC ) 2
(AC)

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A

Cube
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(AB ) :z
BD : AB : : (CB ) :z
(DB ) :z : (AB) :z : : 1 : 3

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will introduce the term "rati o of the

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(tetrahedron)
(AF) 2

(cube)
(BF)

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2 : 3

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(cube)
(BF)

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2 : 4

(octave)
We
can
immediately
deduce·,
from
looking only at the tetrahedron and the
octahedron, that the square on the side of
the octahedron has to the square on the
side of the tetrahedron the ratio of 3:4.
This
ratio,
the
diatessaron,
is
the
complementary ratio that when compounded
with
the
dipente
gives
the
octave.
Arithmetically, we see that 2:3 compounded
with 3:4 gives 1:2. Hence, the fifth and
the fourth,
the two major consonances
within the octave, are unequal but complementar y
parts
that
together
make
a
complete and ordered whole, a harmonious
whole, the octave. This is precisely what
we mean by harmony .
Just as the Pythagoreans needed only
the octave and the fifth to generate the
entire
musical
scale,
so
too
the
octahedron
and
the
tetrahedron
will
gene rate the other intervals.
We
saw
that
the
ratio
of
the
octahedron together with the ratio of the
tetrahedron gave us the fourth.
Alter nately, we get the fifth from the ratios
o f the octahedron and the cube. Since the
ratio of the octahedron appears in both
equations, we can see how closely the cube
and the tetrahedron are related-...;.not as
regards the ratios of their sides to the
diameter,
but
with
respect
to
the
octahedron itself, the octave.

Perhaps the most striking proof that
the pyramid and the cube are indeed
complementary is this :
the square on the
side of the pyramid has to the square on
the side of the cube the ratio 1 : 2 or the
octave.
A beautiful illustration of all this
is seen in compounding ratios.
Since
triangle AFB is right, we know that the
square on the side of the cube when added
to
the
square
on
the
side
of
the
tetrahedron is equal to in area the square
on the side of the diameter. (Euclid I .
47).
In other words,
(BF) 2 + (AF) 2
2 •
(AB)
Moreover,
the
square
on
the
diameter is twice as large (2 : 1) as the
square on the side of the octahedron.
When the ratio 2 : 3 is compounded with the
ration 3: 4, the number 3 is used as the
middle term.
In · the same manner we can
use length BE as the middle term:
(BF)
2

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(BE)
3

:2

comp .
comp.

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(AF)
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proceeded this way:

So the groundwork was laid and I
begah to experiment .
I first constr ucted
models of the solids, given a compre hending
sphere
whose
diameter
is
20
centimeters.
I made the faces out o f ~
inch
plexi- glass,
and
during
the
assemblage I left one face out.
Thi s was
to be the opening for my drum.
To assure
the same tension and thickness in the
membrane, I used the same drum- head for
all the solids .
It was constructed out of
0 . 003 inch mylar stretched between a 10
inch embroidery hoop. - I placed the taut
membrane over the open-faced solid, whicb
was supported by its edges (to avoid any
dampening of the solid) . The over-hang of
membrane was dampened by ~ inch foam, upor
which was placed 260 grams, evenly dis persed.
I repeated this very same procedure for each of the solids.
Upon the exposed membrane · I placed
poppy seeds, weighed out to 0 .1 gram.
l
held a four-inch speaker to one face of

octahedron" to mean "the ratio of the
square constructed on the side of the
octahedron to the square constructed on
the diameter of the comprehending sphere".
Hence, the "ratio of the octahedron" is
1:2; "of the tetrahedron", 2:3; and "of
the cube", 1:3.

83
82

2 :

�the solid by means of a rubb er band
(again,
I
placed spacers between the
rubber band and the edges to avoid any
unnecessary dampening).
The speaker was
hooked up to a frequency generator.
My hypothesis was this:
I
would
excite
the air
inside the solid at
different frequenc ies and notice when the
membrane would resonate. The advantage of
this set-up was that it took into account
at the same time both the volume of the
solid as well as the size, thickness, and
tautness of the membrane. The frequencies
at which resonance would occur, I could be
sure, would be the natural. resonance of
the collective body.
The poppy seeds were on the membrane
to indicate when there was resonance as
well as the mode of oscillation. Since my
frequency generator did not have enough
power, it was unable to detect the resonance of the unaided membrane. Moreover,
the poppy seeds would move when they sat
on points of oscillation, seeking nodal
points (points of inactivity). Since the
drum head could have an infinite number of
modes of oscillation, and since four of my
membranes
were
neither
circular
nor
rectangular, I had no way of reasonably
foretelling the pattern of oscillation.
The poppy seeds would trace such a
pattern.
Now even before I began my experimentation I knew that there would be inaccuracy.
For one thing, my models were
constructed with a bevel on each face .
When I removed one face, I was left with
an extruding bevel which gave a lateral
surf ace area greater in proportion to the
inner volume of the solid (the thickness,
as you recall was~ inch). Furthermore, I
did not know how accurately callibrated my
frequency
generator
was,
p~rticularly
since it was incremented at 20 cycles per
second.
Given all this, I searched not
for precise experimental data, but rather
for large pattern s.
And patterns I did
receive.
The following graphs record at
what frequency and to what intensity the
particu lar s o lid resonates.
I had no way o f measuring the intensity o f the resonance other than to watch
the activity of the poppy seeds and listen

with my ear.
Thus, the recordings A, B,
C, D are subject to my own limitations.

D

The _ Findings:

c

I took the strongest lowest frequency
of each of the solids as its fundamental.
In all cases I was able to reach a strong
second partial, many times with greater
intensity
than
the
fundamental.
The
closest that I came to harmonics was with
the cube, where the fundamental was around
350 cps and the second partial (harmonic?)
was at 73 0 cps, nearly a 1:2 ratio. This
would seem to make sense, f o r the cube in
many respects is the most "regular" of the
solids, by virtue of its parallelism and
perpendicularity.
But even more astonishing than this
was the pattern and sequence to the
fundamentals. First of all, they all fell
within the same octave, which happened to
be the middle register on the piano, with
the dodecahedron being very nearly middle
C
( 270
cps ) .
And
except
for
the
icosahedron and dodecahedron, this pattern
holds:
as the solids increase in volume
or in the number of faces, the frequency
decreases.
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�expect.
A larger volume would produce a
lower pitch, hence a lower frequency.
I hesitate to draw any more conclusions, given the known inaccuracies of
the instruments and models .
But the
results that I have received thus far,
however imprecise, lead me to suspect that
more awaits to be discovered.
Yes, I am
guilty
of
suspecting
that
there
is
harmonic perfection in the five regular
solids, but even more than that . I should
t h i nk t h at one would be able to sense s uch
harmony with one's ears, that is to say
audibly.

Acknowledgements :
Allow me he r e to acknowledge those
persons who generously gave of t heir time
and advice and talents to this endeavor.
First of all,
I wish to thank Mrs .
Allanbrook,
my music
tutor,
fo r
her
patience despite my ple t hora of questions .
Mr. Herbert Neustadt de serves my gratitude
for his obliging and professional advice.
I am grateful to Mr . Nicholas Maistrellis
and Mr . Roy Ar mstrong for providing me
with working space and technical assistance.
My very special admiration and
thanks goes to Mr. Curtis Wilson, a modest
and humble adviser.

90

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�CONTENTS

ENERGEIA: The activity in which anything is fully itself.

Editorial Staff:
Barbara Cooper
Matthew Davis
Christian Holland
Susan Maguire
Richard Miller
Fritz Monsma
Marion Sharp
Joe Sachs

CHRONOLOGY AND BEING FOR ACHILLES
HERACLITUS AND AJAX

ON FEEDING THE FLOCK (INCLUSIVE)
WITH A GRAIN OF WHEAT

JUNIOR/SENIOR MATH PRIZE PAPER 1979

TWO POEMS FROM LE MISANTHROPE

Abe Schoener

l

Liz Waldner

6

R.A. Schainbaum

9

translated by Janet Durholz

IO

NEWTON'S AND ADAM'S APPLE

Howard Zeiderman

12

VIEWPOINT

Patti Nogales

23

Stephanie Nelson

24

David Stephenson

29

Ruth A. Johnston

31

LIKE FLIES TO WANTON BOYS.
Another Paper about God, Man, and the Universe
SOME THOUGHTS ON "MAXWELL'S EQUATIONS"
SONNET
A CHORUS FROM THE BACCHAE

translated by Merle Sokolik

32

THE B DEDUCTION AND ITS RELATION TO FREEDOM
(Or Kant, Can Do)

Matthew Davis

34

THERE IS VERY LITTLE POETRY IN ONIONS

Dan Farrell

43

P.H. Gagnier

44

Lisa Eckstrom

45

THE WRECK OF ELPENOR
RECONCILIATION IN THE BACCHAE:
Remembering Who We A~e Who Are Not
Gods But Men

PHAINETAI MO!

translated by Terri-Ann Hahn

51
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ON CHAPTERS 11-17 OF PART II OF DON QUIXOTE

11

Paula Rustan

52

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TA-POCKETA, POCKETA, POCKET~ •••
Moliere, Thurber and the Comic Idea

111

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Fritz Monsma

55

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�Chronology and Being for Achilles,
Heraclitus and Ajax
Abe Schoener

Diel' s. fragment 30 of Heraclitus
names all things in their thinghood.. I f
we can read this fragment successfully, we
will understand something of the Greek
thought about things, the being of things,
and--most tempting--the being of being.
Here is the fragment:
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Panta hen is the union of the many
and the one, but a , union--since it is
panta hen and not just to hen--which
preserves the manyness. As the tendencies
toward unity and plurality strive with one
another, the cosmos lives.
If the strife
stops, the cosmos dies, the tension is
lost. When we see kosmos as this tension
we can understand the singleness of the
two kinds of "same" we saw before. Kosmos
is thinghood insofar as each thing is
because of the strife in it; and kosmos is·
wholeness insofar as each thing strives
with every other one.
It is thus the
quality which separate things have in
common, and also the very coming together
of the separate things.
It both orders
and destroys their mutual distinction.
This conflation of contraries is not
nonsense:
it
is the most beautiful
harmony.
Now we can understand kosmos as
"cosmos. "
Once we -see kosmos as the
tension-filled order that both creates and
destroys individuals, we can see the world
(or universe) as kosmos.
Not as the
obvious example of kosmos, but as the most
difficult.
The world both demands and
rejects being called one, and does so with
more insistence than any o,ther thing, so
it takes the greatest wisdom to see it as
kosmos.
We learn that we must never
explain the Greek kosmos through our
notion of world, but can only hope to
understand the full meaning of "world"
through the challenging contradiction of
kosmos.

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("Kosmos," the same for all things,
was neither made by one of the gods,
nor by one of men--but it was
always, and is, and ever will be
everli¥ing fire, constantly kindling
and qqenching itself and the measures
of the world.)
When Heraclitus says "kosmos," he
does not mean "cosmos" or any other word
which names something like our "universe."
He means the order which is ton auton
hapanton--the same for all things.
This
sameness is twofold:
it is the sameness
of all things with each other (that is,
their common thinghood); and it is the
order which brings all the different
things together (their being part of the
same whole).
If we read further in
Heraclitus, we find these two aspects of
kosmos are one and the same. They are the
harmonie
of
things
in
strife:
the
togetherness in conflict df things which
oppose and resist each other.
Kosmos is
thus the same as the tension of panta hen,
the greatest strife and thus the greatest
harmonie.

We have al ready caught some of
Heraclitus' understanding of the being of
things. Their only being is in a twofold
tension:
an inner tension
(like the

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lyre's), and an outer tension (the tension
between world and thing, panta hen).
There is no being of a thing without the
being of the opposites striving "inside"
of it, and no being without the being of
tjle kosmos with which the thing strives
for its own individualty.
This cosmos was never created. It is
thus self-caused1 that is, its being lies
entirely within itself.
Nothing else is
responsible (aitios) for it.
What is
responsible for its being is its manner of
being--that is, as fire.
This is clear
from
what
is -contrasted
with
"not
created":
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analogy. He means the being of all things
is the being of fire.
They. are the
same--and so, all things, insofar as they
are, are fire.
Philosophy is at this
point way beyond what are called "material
causes." Heraclitus does not name pur as
material cause, but as primal cause-==that
is,
as
ousia.
If we
examined
the
Pre-Socratics carefully, we might find
that they never had "material cause." Did
Thales perform experiments to determine
whether all things were made up of water?
No--this was not the way of the Ancients.
When Thales said, "All is water," he was
the first to say that the being of all
things is one--and that that one being ·is
the cool uniformity of water. Thales was
talking ousia, not materia.
We said before that the essence of
things was change, that stasis was death.
When
Heraclitus
calls
fire
aeizoon,
doesn't that contradict our claim? Aeizoon
sounds like the unchanging eternity of the
Immortal, the life that does not change
into death. But it is not, and a clue is
DK 62 ("Mortals are immortals, immortals
are mortals: the first live the death of
the latter, and the latter die the other's
life").
F-rom it we learn that the gods
have no life, only death.
Zoe always
includes death,
so aeizoon must mean
"always dying" as well as "always living."
We have al ready seen these two opposites
together in fire: part of its life is to
burn itself out, it cannot flame except by
cons'uming
its
source.
But
every
burning-out leads to a conflagration, for
every quenching prepares new material to
be burned again. Fire's being is to live
and die at every moment, and for the
living and the dying to be one and the
same activity.
For Heraclitus, this is
the being of being:

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Its being is its aitios. Its being can be
"cause" because of the strange nature of
its being. The fragment says that:
"the
being · of kosmos is fi r.e." .As we read it
we expect the fragment to run:
"it was
never created, but was, is and always will
·-be." Instead it supplies a predicate to
einai, and says, "it is fire."
The
predicate is a surprise.
In Heraclitus,
we learn to take surprises seriously:
they must become part of our reading.
This surprise achieves a definite effect:
it makes us take what we were expecting to
read and what we actually read, as the
same thing._ Thus: to be is to be fire
einai is pur einai.
To understand the sense of pur einai,
we have to understand pur, fire.
It is
more than familiar to uS:-- Fire is bright
and hot.
It rages, roars, fumes, changes
color, licks, spurts, and spreads.
It
hisses, smokes, smoulders, consumes, and
inevitably burns itself out.
It changes
constantly--a strange characterization of
being.
But for Heraclitus, it is the only
one.
In the absence of change, strife,
and tension, there is no life--there is
nothing.
This nothingness is not only
death but non-being.
The raging of fire
is the opposite of that "non-being". But
when Heraclitus says that the being is
"being fire," he is not just speaking by

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When
birth
and
death
not
only
coincide but coexist eternally as the
being of being, then history and even time
itself become impossible.
The fragment
catches this in the words we misleadingly
sununed up as "einai" : en aei, kai es ti,
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kai estai.
"The cosmos always was anc!·is
and· will be "fire"--wa~, is and will be
all at ~·
We could read the ve.rbs
separately--not
insisting
on
their
coincidence--.but this would be ignoring
the subtle craft of Heraclitus. When he
says "was," "is," and "will be" together,
where "is always" would have done, we must
be careful not to lose his jarring message
in
the
easiest--and
less
attentive
--reading. He says: in the being of fire,
was, is and will be are all the same.
This conflation of present, past, and
future does not actually deny time, but
only a "chronological" conception of it.
When future falls into past, time cannot
be seen along a time-line.
But is this
nonsense--time not fitting on a time-line?
It is not nonsense-- in fact, it is
something we will soon learn to call
"Greek". By Aristotle's time,· chronos may
well have become chronological, but for
Homer, _and even Sophocles, time (chronos)
was no series of times, but a place. We
will see two examples of this: one in the
Iliad, one in the Ajax.
In the last book of the Iliad, the
conciliation
of
Achilles
and
Priam
culminates
in
the
giving
of
time.
Achilles and Priam meet and their tears
mix.
They find wonder1ful sympathy for
each other in this moment, and Achilles
agrees to return Hector's body to Priam.
This return seems to be Achilles' great
deed, the one that reveals a new and
beautiful Achilles to us.. We remember the
return of the body as the book's climax.
But Priam himself will correct us, as he
did Achilles.
The return will not be
fulfilled without one more gift,, one
greater even than the body of his son:

keep him in our palace and mourn
him, and bury him on the tenth day,
and the people feast by him, and on
the eleventh we would make the grave
barrow for him, and on the twelfth
day fight again, if so we must do."
Then
in
turn
swift-footed
Achilles answered him:
"Then all
this, aged Priam, shall be done as
you ask it.
I will hold off our
attack for as much time as you ask
me."
(Trans. Lattimore)

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Before the act can become good,
Achilles must grant Priam time:
tosson
chronon hosson anogas. This--t°ime is a
space, a space opened up in the turmoil of
the war, in which the funeral can take
place. Achilles' ability to open up this~
space for Priam is the heart of his
brilliance and divinity.
Homer points
' this out:
when Achilles answers, he · is
call dies.
This is one of the few uses of
chronos in the Iliad. It is also the very
last, and because of its place in this

In answer to him again spoke Priam
the godlike: "I£ you are willing
that
we
accomplish
a
complete
funeral
for
great
Hector,
this
Achilleus, is what you could do and
give me pleasure.
For you know
surely how we are penned in our
city, and wood is far to bring in
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change it works, but for the changes it
undergoes.
What was not cause when it
once occurred in the past is now cause; ·
what was once an act of friendship when it
occurred
is
now
an
act
of
enmity
(ee.661-665). The past--as a series of
definite events--has undergone change in
this
moment.
It
has
thus
become
indefinite: even the past is now full of
new possibilities, just like the present
and future. That is why Ajax calls chronos
"unnumberable and great":
not because of
its infinite length, but because of its
great depth.
At every moment,
past,
present, or future, it holds open an
infinite depth oi possibilities. In time,
nothing is impossible:
1. 648, ouk est'
aelpton ouden.
But this does not mean
"given enough time, anything is possible";
it means "in any time--in any moment
--unthought-of possibilities lie waiting."
After all, when Ajax says this, it has
only been a few years since he won the
sword which changed his life, and only a
few hours since that change has become
manifest.
"In time" does not mean in the
length of time, but in the bottomless
depth of every moment.
In its every
moment,
time--the
ground
of
every
happening--offers innumerable possibili ties. This is the wisdom Ajax has learned
in his god-sent distress; this is the
wisdom he gives to us before he goes to
his death. His wisdom is not the trivial
cliche "things change drastically over the
years,"
but the
surprising
and even
crippling message: "count on the sureness
of no event; not only the future, but
present and past as well hold unbelievable
possibilities."
At this very moment in
the play (see line 647), time reveals the
invisible and hides the bright and shining:
it seems even to hold the denial of
a thing's phusis.
For the hiding of the
phanenta (647)--the by nature revealed--~s
nothing other than the denial of their
phusis as phanenta.
So time even holds
the possibility for the impossible:
the
denial of a ~hing' s eternal being, its
phusis.
If time is to exclude no possibility,
it must be bottomless at ~very instant.

great scene, this use is the "definitive''
one.
Here the depth of its meaning is
called on, and this is what it gives up in
response: chronos is the opening up of a
place in the world for things to occur in.
It is the place in which things happen--in
which happening happens. It is the ground
for being.
This· ground is a place, but not a
definite location.
A location has an
address: chronos does not give an address
to events (e.g.:
1079 A.D.), it gives
them an opening.
Consequently, chronos
has nothing to do with a time-line:
the
events in this place do not participate in
succession by virtue of the place.
This
means that the place
itself is not
ordered: it is not laid out in successive
compartments, nor is it any grid.
It is
very
different
from
Isaac
Newton's
"tempus"--the conception of time which
most colors our own.
The opposition of chronos to succession is caught vividly in a few lines from
the Ajax:
Great and unnumberable time produces
all things hidden, and hides all
things
revealed--and
there
is
nothing that can't be expected.

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Ajax himself is speaking here: it is
his last speech before he leaves his camp
to commit suicide.
In the speech he
discusses what has brought him to this
point of suicide, and what might lie
before him still. We might say that he is
concerned with his present, past, and
future.
We will see how different that
concern is for him than it can be for us.
As Ajax recalls what has brought him
to this pass, he must be naming the
passing of time in chronos. Chronos then
seems to be chronological, for it refers
to all that has passed in succession up
till now. But as we read on, we find that
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Because of its infinite depth, every
moment must be the same as every other. We
cannot even consider the past as "determined" because its possibility has become
actual. The Ajax teaches us that the past
changes constantly:
this is the thought
at the heart of this speech.
Time never
gives up its depth. Even when it becomes
definite (we must say the Trojan war was a
special time, for instance), the definition neve·c completely determines what goes
on in it. Thus time opened up a place for
Ajax to accept Hector's sword in friendship, though that time should have had no
place in the 'War.
Events can still happen in succession, but that succession is not in the
essence of time.
Because time is the
eternal confusion of every possibility, in
past, present, and future alike, there can
be
no
line
of
succession
in
it.
Succession is only possible when there is
definition, but not mixing and remixing.
Because time excludes succession from its
essence, it is not only makros, but
anarithmetos--for Ajax and all the Greeks.

looks like a pleonasm should thus be
scrutinized · carefully--and probably read
literally.
If we
read en aei etc.
literally, we get something much more
worthy of Heraclitus than the verbose "it
is, always has been, and always will
be ... " We get:
Its being is, always was, is, and
will be--at once.
This means that was is the same thing
for fire as is, or will be.
There is no
difference between past and present, no
possibility
for
a
time
line.
More
Heraclitean nonsense?
No--now
that
we
have
considered
chronos for Sophocles and Homer, we know
that this talk is no nonsense, it is good
Greek.
It is a
deep and difficult
understanding of being, one that sees the
being of being in chronos, but outside of
"time."
Time as time-line,
and thus
history,
excludes being because being
happens in a vast undifferentiated ar.d
bottomless chasm.
That chasm is chronos:
what we called earlier, the "ground of
being."
For a being that changes constantly, whose essence is fire, this is
the perfect ground. Since fixity is death
for being, a ground that offered only
strict and permanent determination could
only be barren. Now, the fixed events of
history belong no longer in time (chronos)
but
in
chronologies--the
study
of
non-being.

Heraclitus affirms this whole view in
the kosmos fragment.
When he gives the
being of cosmos, he does not say "It is
fire." He says:
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It always was, always is, and always
will be fire--at the same time.
For the
being
of
the
cosmos
past-being,
present-being, and future-being are all
conjoined.
This is hard to accept:
we
would not think that en aei kai esti kai
estai in anyway impliea- the conjuct,ion of
past, present, and future.
There are two
reasons for supposing that in Heraclitus
the expression not only implies it but
explicitly demands it.
The first reason
is usage:
estj aei would have meant the
same thing in Greek as "it is, has always
been, and always will be"--our natural
translation for en aei etc.
The six
word phrase is thus pleonastic in such an
interpretation.
The second reason comes
from Heraclitus:
he is never pleonastic,
but always sharply terse.
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�On Feeding the Flock (Inclusive)
With a Grain of Wheat
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Give us this day our daily bread. Matthew 6:11
Take no thought what ye shall eat. Luke 12:22
I am the living bread which came down from heaven: the bread which I will give is
my flesh which I will give for the life of the wo~ld .. Jon~ 6:51 ·
Except a corn of wheat fall into the ground and die, it abides alone, but if it die,
it brings forth much fruit. John 12:24
Whereunto shall I liken the kingdom of heaven? It is like leaven which a woman hid
in three measures of meal until the whole was leavened. Luke 13:20
simon, do you love me? Yes, Lord. Feed my sheep. John 21:16

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to make a little cake like Alice's (with a tag reading Eat me attached), which once
tasted will move the reader to essay a little baking of his own-in short one
suitable food for the likes of us sheep.

consider necessi ties--will be added unto
us.
Everyone knows we must eat to live,·
and probably everyone agrees with Jesus
that the life is more than food. From age
to age and from place to place, however,
people have differed in judgement of what
food and what life are.
Jesus startled
everyone with his ideas; he called himself
living bread and said that unless we eat
of him we have no life in us. He told the
multitude he'd miraculously fed the day
before
not
to
run
after
food
that
perishes, but to labor for that "which
endures unto life everlasting." He said,
"He that loves his life in this world will
lose it; he who hates his life shall keep
it unto life . eternal."
Perhaps every
nation of the world (excepting those few
so
cold
that
starches
don't
grow)
recognizes bread as food if not the . v~ry
staff of life; it seems that recognizing
the bread as such--true bread sent from
heaven, meat
(food)
indeed--is what's
problematic.
That is, I·'m guessing that
not a few of those claims made by Jesus

Everyone knows we must eat to live.
Eat often and much, and we store what we
cannot eat now to provide for tomorrow, as
did Aesop's industrious ant, as did the
rich
man
whose
ground
yielded
such
abundance that he needed larger barns to
keep
his
harvest.
We
reckon
many
provisions secure much life and so are
anxious to preserve what we have and to
acquire more.
Jesus knew that we must eat to live.
Satan used his hunger after his forty days
of fasting to tempt him to turn a stone to
bread.
Jesus answered him, "Men do not
live by bread alone, but by every word
that proceeds from the mouth of God."
Jesus said that our Father in heaven
knows, too, that we have need of food, and
taught his disciples to pray asking each
day for their daily bread. He called the
rich man's prudence folly, and asked us to
take no thought for our lives, to lay up
no treasure for ourselves here on earth,
but rather to seek the kingdom of God, to
be rich toward God;
then "all these
things"--those
which
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concerning himself as living bread which
the Jews found hard to swallow--how can
this man give us his flesh to eat?--once
transformed
from
hard
grains
of
astonishment by a patient pulverizing
pondering
will
yield
a
meal
itself
suitable for the leaven of understanding:
the puzzle is not how to eat living bread,
but how to get it into our hands.
An
understanding--or chewing, if you will--of
the latter is the making of the former.
If we eat living bread, then we have
life in us, do not hunger, and do not die.
If we love our lives--fill bigger barns or
banks with 1the means to eat ordinary
bread--we die. To eat living bread is in
some way, then, to hate our lives in this
world, and hating our lives brings this
bread into our hands. How can this be?
First, living bread is bread that
nourishes us when we give it to another.
Any bread is the free gift of earth's
fertility; the single grain given into the
ground yields many. Many may eat of that
which abiding alone could not have fed
one.
In the same way living bread is a
free
gift
and
miraculously
feeds
a
multitude, but it feeds the seed, the
grain which gave itself, as well. Living
bread is made of the human sacrifice of
abiding alone, of prudently providing for
one's own well-being. Living bread, which
is true bread sent to us by our Father to
nourish the life of the world, life
everlasting, is ours for the asking; it
cannot be bought, nor earned, but is
simply to be sought after.
Jesus, God's
word made flesh, sent into the world
offering that flesh as bread for us to
live by as he lives by God, sai~ that
eating him we would live in him and he in
us. To eat living bread is to accept life
given as a gift as food, blood spilled as
drink, to take into oneself for one's own
fulfillment the fruit of some other's
sacrifice of his potential fulness of
being, a fruit which can bring forth
abundantly after its kind, and live our
abundance to another that he, too, might
eat
living
bread:
living
bread
is
undoubtedly leavened.
The giving and receiving of living

bread and the working of leaven in a
bushel of meal are like one another in
that they both depend on reciprocity. The
power to raise, to make bi·g, to feed many,
is made manifest by the lifeless meal.
The few grains of yeast hidden work all
through the meal imparting its ability
until the whole is leavened.
But left
alone the yeast will starve and die; the
meal bereft of nutrients fed by the yeast
will collapse, less than before.
The
least
become
most,
the
most
become
least--unless the greatest ever give to
the least.
A pinch of leavened dough
leavens another bushel, and lives in it.
As told in the parable of the pounds, the
living bread we're given is not to keep,
but to invest, to multiply, to make
great--and that's done by giving it away.
Even Moses' manna spoiled when anxiously
stored.
Our being given this powerful
bread depends on our asking for it, and
our asking for it on our giving it freely;
our having it, and therefore our eating
it, on giving it, too. Or no?
Let's
think
ourselves
grains
of
wheat.
If we choose to love our Father,
to love one another even as Jesus loved
us, in whatever way or to whatever degree
we can by laying down our lives for
another, then we make of ourselves meal
for leavening, nourishment for the life of
the world.
Until we do, we are ordinary
bread, scarcely able (if at all, really)
to feed ourselves. We hunger.
Sooner or
later something in us akin to the appetite
for ordinary bread sniffs out the bread of
life--perhaps in a loaf given us by
another's unrecognized sacrifice--and asks
to be fed.
Earthly parents don't give
their hungry children stones when they cry
for bread, said Jesus; how much more will
your Father in heaven give to you the Holy
Spirit. I wonder if this is not the power
to leaven, to make the single grain
abundantly fruitful, to nourish those who
give
of
their
substance
unto
life
everlasting, to feed unfailingly one's
hunger forever.
It seems to me that
having been hungry for living bread is
enough; our asking is our eating.
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�food. Recognizing it as food indeed moves
us to feed others.
The woman whom much
has forgiven loved much. I think it's not
far fetched to supply:
the woman whose
great hunger has fed, fed much.
In this sense then, we never have in
our hands this living bread except)to give
it.
We are, grains, and giving ourselves.
we are broken into meal: the Spirit in us
makes us great to be food for many.
Having living bread living in us, we
hunger to be hungry, to give more of
ourselves that · we might be altogether
leavened: that we might see, all of us,
the kingdom of God. -When we pray as Jesus
taught we ask for the coming of that
kingdom, for the doing of God's will on
earth,
for
our bread,
and
for
the
forgiveness
of
trespasses,
ours
and
others'. That the leavening of the Spirit
which reveals God's very mind to us had to

be brought into the world, given as gift
nurtured in Jesus' death and resurrection
is made plain in the reciprocity expressed
here, the participation in which sets free
our yearning for the coming of God's
kingdom, for the doing of his work on
earth, for living with forgiveness toward
others. Love begets love when recognized;
recognizing God's great love given withou.t
regard to our worthiness, 'we are moved· .to
dismiss the hurt, the lessening suffered.·
at the hands of others, doing the bidding
of 'the Spirit within us, which forgiving
enables us to know living bread as the
true bread, and those who trespass against
us as so hungry that they know not what
they do.
The good shepherd lays down his life
for the sheep, that they might eat; his
Father loves him: he is well fed.

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a door around a corner in a hallway. If
a corridor w wide has in it an ideal
door, a rigid line of length L, how
narrow can X, the corridor at a right
angle to w, be if it is still wide
•enough to let in L?

towards the lower side of W decreases
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or
its
horizontal
distance
from
c
increases.
(2)
Let f(0)=y (see figure) be the
function that gives the least ¥.. for any
angular position of L.
The greatest
f (9)
obtained
in
bringing L
from
corridor W into corridor X is also the
least posSib'l'e'X for the 91.veD w andI::9
For i f !_ were atallSmaller, -0could
only increase to goo if L were- not a
rigidly straight line.
But L is a
rigidly straight line, and L can-only be
brought
into
corridor
x- under the
condition that 9 be allowed to vary from
80 (the initial position of 9) to goo.
Clearly, the greatest y_ obtained from
f (9) is also the least maximum for any
possible displacement function of e.
(3)
Let g(z)=y (see figure) be the
function in which y_ depends on the
distance z from corner C along L to the
lower side of corridor-W.
As
- the -before '
the least ! was equal to
greatest
f (9) over the range from 90 to goo
so
-.~--~'
it also equals the greatest g (z) over
the range from W to L.
Sin~it is
geometrically apparent
that
g (z)
is
continuous
between
W and
.!!'
that
g(W)=g(L)=O, and that-g(z) is greater
than ~· between ! and · .!!; so g (z •) is
greater than all g(z), if~ is the only
z for which g' (z)=O.

i
(1)
For any given angular position of
the
line L,
its
(L's)
displacement
•(measured from corner .!!' perpendicular
to the corridor length) y towards the
opposite side of corridor- X is always
least when its displacement (measured
from corner L, perpendicular to the
corridor length) towards the lower side
of corridor W is greatest (i.e., it
equals !) , and the horizontal distance
of.!! from corner Eis least (i.e., c is
employed as a fulcrum) .
For whatever·
the angular position of .!!' y_ must
increase
as
either L's
displacement

1.

*

*

*

By similar triangles:

I

y

=

g(z)

=

L-z
z

Ii
'I
I,
111

II

8

9

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111
11

I;

1

I

lit

�l
Lw2-z3
z2(z2-w2)i,

.
(2/3)
(1/3)
Therefore, g(w
L
) ~ g(z)
for all z such that w ~ z ~ L.

2.

g' (z)

3.

Setting g' (z) = O, then:

5.

z'=w(2/3)L(l/3),
which value of z is uniquely
obtained.
4.

l
.J

Substituting w( 2/ 3 )L(l/ 3 ) for Zin
1, then:
y

(2/3)

'
i
j'

I

= L (2/3)-w(2/3).

'

Thus, the least x=w(( L &gt;213 -1&gt; 312

But since L &gt; w, then:
w3 &lt; w2 L &lt; L3
w &lt; z' &lt; L.

Hope, 'tis true, doth comfort us
And soothes awhile our pain;
But, Phyllis, if naught follows hope,
It comforts us in vain.
Kindness ever didst thou show,
But less shouldst thou have shown,
And not so far have spent yourself
To grant me hope alone.
If my zeal is forced to burn
Eternally 'til you relent,
Then to a cruel death I shall turn,
Which all your cares cannot prevent,
For, lovely Phyllis, hope is my
death,
When for hope alone I draw my breath.

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Q.E.I

ALCESTE.
Si le roi m'avait donn~
Paris, sa grand' ville,
Et qu'il me fall~t quitter
L'amour de ma mie,
Je dirais au roi Henri:
Reprenez votre Paris,
,,
J'aime mieux ma mie, au gue,
J'aime mieux ma mie.
(1. 393-400)

Two Poems from Le Misanthrope
translated by Janet Durholz

ORONTE.
L'espoir, il est vrai, nous soulage
Et nous berce un temps notre ennui,
Mais, Philis, le triste avantage,
Lorsque rien ne marche apres lui!
Vous e~tes de la complaisance;
Mais vous en deviez moins avoir
I
Et ne vous pas mettre en depense
Pour ne me donner que l'espoir.
S'il faut qu'une attente ~ternelle
'
'1
Pousse a bout l'ardeur de mon ze e
Le tr~pas sera mon recours.
Vos soins ne m'en peuvent distraire;
Belle Philis, en d~sespere
...
.
Alers, qu'on espere touJours.
(1. 315-318; 321-324; 327-332)

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If the King should give me
All Paris for my own,
To leave my darling true love,
And sit upon his throne,
I would say to Henry:
"Take your Paris back;
The throne is nothing to me,
sir,
If my own true love I lc,ack!"

!
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�Newton's and Adam's Apple
Howard Zeiderman

matical--scientif ic aspects are a work of
consununate genius - a model for us all
since then; the theological allusions are
a source of constant embarassment which we
charitably overlook.
What I propose in
the following pages is an exercise .in
imagination.
I
propose to
read the
Principia as if it were written by one man:
and not two.
To do so involves investigating a possible Newtonian response to
-Leibniz; the world is not a -clock but
rather a calendar. If the style sometimes
appears an argument instead of an intellectual fantasy, it is only to facilitate
the exposition, much as Descartes did in
Le Monde.
The following is therefore
merely a story, a springtime diversion.
Had Newton wished to justify the ways
of God to man, or at least to Leibniz, he
could
have
answered
that
they
had
radically different conceptions of God
and, therefore, of his relation to the
visible material world.
Newton's reply
could have been that for God the visible
world was a sign to man.
The spiralling
apart
of
the
planets
revealed
the
eventuality of the Last Judgement. Man's
past and future was in a sense writt~n in
the
stars.
Unfortunately,
as
George
Herbert lamented, God's writing could be
read only if man knew how to spell.
Newton could have charged Leibni·z of
having attempted to read God's purposes in
the
number-names
of
the
Ars
Combinatorialis.
Newton's cryptography,
however, was different;
he deciphered
God's words in straight lines and curves.
The Principia, not logic or arithmetic, is
the proper orthographical guide.
A decade before Newton composed the
Principia, Milton published Paradise Lost.
Mil ton's justification of . God's ways to

In a
letter to Clarke,
Liebniz
criticizes both Newton and Newton's God.
The criticism is simple but pointed. This
so-called 'God' acted as a poor watchmaker
might because the watch he created--the
world--must
be
continually
rewound~
Leibniz's attack stems from the two focal
points of the Principia: the revelation of
the inverse square law animating the
visible world of planets, tides, and
stones; and the fact that there are more
than two bodies (masses) in the world. In
a world where the force law is the inverse
square, two isolated bodies would continue
in
a
particular
orbit
forever,
a
self-identity through time attractive to
Leibnitz.
Introduce
a
third
body,
however, and this harmony changes. Th~ee
bodies moving under the aegis of the
inverse square, each to each, results in a
change in the apparent total force law.
The effects shift toward these which would
be caused by an inverse cube law.
The
bodies
spiral
out
from
one
another
endlessly; the world, as Yeats remarked in
the "Second Coming," is such that the
center cannot hold.
Competent readers of Newton would
generally dismiss Liebniz's conunent as
somewhat
irrelevant.
Newton
was
a
scientist. As such, he should be attacked
only on scientific grounds.
Whether he
believed in God was a personal matter.
These
considerations,
though . perhaps
tokenly present in the scholia of the
Principia, are not present in the propositions themselves.
Newton, in other
words, is not dissimilar to many modern
scientists.
Because he is split between
two
conflicting
inclinations,
proper
reading of the work occurs only by
respect:~iBJ such a division. The mathe-

man takes the form of an epic which is the
culmination of all other epics. The three
short chapters in Genesis chronicling
man's creation and fall are expanded into
twelve
books
depicting
the
fall
of
Lucifer, and through his intercession, the
fall of Eve and Adam, as well as the
promise of their redemption.
I hope in
this short piece to show that Newton's
Principia is involved in a similar task.
This means that the visible world, which
is depicted and made possible in Prop. 66
as the three body problem, if read through
Newton's orthography, is the detailed and
constant
reminder of man's fall and
possible redemption.
In the 18th century, the Bishop
·Berkeley suggested that Newton's Principia
was a Bible for materialists and atheists.
What my suggestion means is that in
composition the Principia was intended as
an amplification of the good Bishop's
Bible. It was the long awaited reading of
God's purposes in his fallen creation. To
see
this
does
not mean
finding
an
occasional image of some crucial Biblical
or theological moment in a scholium.
Instead it involves recognizing that the
details of the Propositions and their
interconnections
display
the
accepted
truths of the Christian religion.
our
task is to read through the propositions
so that we can recognize why the inverse
square law is the visible account of the
Creation, Fall, and Last Judgement.
II

In this exercise we, therefore, will
attempt a non-mathematical reading of a
seemingly mathematical work.
~uch
an
attempt
is
obviously precarious.
It
requires
the
translation
of
axioms,
propositions
and
force
laws
into
theological
terms
which
are
now antithetical to them. Without an explicit
license from Newton,
this effort can
appear quite gratuitous.
And no such
license has been issued, i.e. published.
The bulk of Newton's work consists of
unpublished
theological
manuscripts,
conunentaries
on
Revelations,
and the
prophets.
Perhaps in a document held in

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some Borgesian library we could find the
warrant for this endeavor.
However, we
might not. If we combed such remnants and
found nothing. it would then be necessary
to explain why Newton never supplied a
"key" to his work, why it was written only
for those with eyes to see.
In the
General
Scholium
Newton
does
indeed
connect the visible world, God's works,
with his own account in the Principia.
However, this may imply no more than that
the system, as a whole,
reveals some
aspect of God's purpose.
It certainly
need not lead us to expect a connection
between the details of propositions -and
the details of the Creation and the Fall.
We know that Newton believed he lived
in the "end of the times", that the day·of
judgment would come when the dispersed
Jews accepted the Gospel, and that he
himself was born on Christmas day. Though
Newton did not accept Christ as "of the
substance of God," we cannot, therefore,
infer that Newton believed himself to be
the last Christ, who was writing a Bible
acceptable to the Jews. We only know that
such a belief would not have been impious.
We know that Newton held that the number
of the Antichrist was 666 and.we can open
the Principia to find the full detail of
the three-body problem in Prop 66. These
numbers, however, cannot be connected even
though as I will suggest, the relation
between Satan and falling,spiraling orbits
involves the relation of the inverseJcube
to the inverse square.
We have often
heard the story of Newton under the tree
hit on the head by the falling apple. If
what I propose is a proper reading of the
Principia, that story is obviously 'true'
and, in addition, significant.
However,
its truth places before us as a question
'the nature of a fact'. In short, this is
what I offer:
If I believed what Newton
believed
and
if
I
had written
the
Principia, this would have been how I
composed it.
Whether Newton did is a
different matter and may be unknowable.
However we must then go on to ask
ourselves whether such
'knowledge'
is
important and therefore we reapproach from
another direction the question of the

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1

The
two
beings
·have,
however,
no
reciprocal connection.
In other words,
the third law is not present. We are in a
realm, whatever it is, which is prior to
the third law.
Many suggesti.ons and
images have been given for this model of
analysis. However, if one asks oneself in
the context we are articulating what is a
massless center of force which acts but is
not acted upon by what orbits it, the
obvious
answer
is
that
the
center
represents God; the mass then depicts a
created being. God acts but is not acted
upon and the result is the literal drawing
of the immemorial metaphor of created
things orbiting around the Creator. What
Newton's mathematics is enabling man to do
is to find the literal sense of Christian
'metaphors'.
The
first
two propositions
hold
irrespective of the
nature of God's
action, of the force law with which he
acts.
In the first two propositions,
there is neither geography nor history,
differences of place nor differences of
time.
The two parts of God's sensorium,
-absolute space and absolute time, are made
visible in the description of equal spaces
in equal times.
Beginning with Proposition 3, we receive the method of reading
the world in more detail up to the
culmination in Proposition 6. Proposition
3 allows one to recognize that there is a
center of force, to recognize that there
is a God, even if now an additional force
comes into play.
Prop. 4 allows one to
calculate the force law connecting one
with that center. Prop. 5 enables one to
find the location of the center from the
mass's orbit.
Prop. 6 enables a specific
force calculation. There is a surprising
repetitiveness
to
these
propositions.
Three and four together are enough to
calculate the force if one is on a circle
and if one can recognize one's velocity
and distance at a moment, any , moment,
since every moment is the same.
In other words, in accordance with
our suggestion, one can use three and four
if one knows oneself and one's distance
from the center.
Propositions 3 and 4
characterize
a
possibility
of
the

nature ot a fact.
In this issue I treat
section 2, which ends in the creation of
Adam, Prop X. Section 3, the creation of
Eve and the Fall must remain something for
the future.
Before we treat the creation and the
Fall, a few preliminaries must be set out.
Newton, in his Preface,
reverses the
relation we have come to expect between
geometry and mechanics.
Surprisingly, in
Newton, mechanics is prior:
rational
mechanics, the mechanics of the Perfect
Artisan, draws the lines which geometry
treats.
The
Newtonian
laws
and
propositions connecting equal times and
areas (prop. 1,2, and 3) draw these lines
and make them into figures. They are true
of ali .. 'possible' worlds irrespective of
the
force
law,
to
use
Leibniz's
terminology.
The first_ law draws the
straight line, the second makes the curve
possible.
The third law, action and
reaction, inscribes in all conceivable
worlds, those under various force laws,
the possibility of writing equations.
To
begin· our fantasy now involves finding
theological equivalents.
The three laws
will then permit the visible world to
serve as
continual
reminders of our
invisible life. The first law allows one
to keep to the straight and narrow. Every
Newtonian object has both a mass and a
velocity.
The mass represents what one
is, the velocity represents what one does.
How one received one's velocity is an open
question which relates to one's past. The
first law is the representation of the
self-sameness of the being.
The second
permits the possibility of deviation, rise
and fall, it is to have a will of one's
own. The third law permits punishment or
redemption as it is the inscription both
of 'an eye for an eye' and 'do unto
others'.
In propositions 1 and 2, we meet the
first
crucial
aspect
of
Newton's
exposition. We consider a center of force
which has no mass and a mass in orbit
which cannot effect the center.
In other
words, Law 1 rules the mass, which is
altered in direction by the presence of
Law 2 operating from a center of force.

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pre-lapsarian
world,
where
reason,
knowledge of what one is, and piety,
recognition of one's distance from God,
are sufficient to keep one in orbit.
Proposition 5 and 6 are quite different.
The characteristics of the moment are not
quite sufficient. The actual orbit, which
need not be a circle, is necessary.
History must, in a fallen world, replace
self-knowledge.
We will leave open for'
now the relation between history and
self-knowledge in Newton.
History, the
orbit,
replaces
self-knowledge.
The
question which is crucial is, what it is
in a fallen world that replaces piety and
which in conjun.ction with history brings
one
to
wl;l.ere
one
should
be.
The
traditional answer is faith.
I will show
that Prop. 6 of Section II corresponds in
the Principia to Christian faith.
These remarks fill out in somewhat
greater detail the stage setting for all
'possible' worlds and how to reach a
pre-fallen
and
fallen
world.
The
particular· force
laws
which
may be
involved in our world first emerge in
prop. 4 in a preliminary way. Four forie
15ws ~e mentioned there.
They are R ,
and the actual one we see in the
R , R
planets and falling stones, R- 2 , and which
in their fall are the story of the Fall.
~at '1Je wi_l} show is that the force laws
R , R , R
tell a story through their
interrelationships which necessitates and
is rendered visible in the appearances of
masses acting and reacting according to
the inverse square law.
The first force law mentioned is most
unusual.
It is one in which the 1 force
increases as the distance, F a R . The
further away one is from the center of
force, the greater the force exerted. It
is as if the light from a source became
more intense the further one was from it.
In a mechanical explanation we would
expect the force to diminish in some form
as one moved away from its source.
This
force, however, increases. There is such
a force in our world, Hooke's Law, but
that deals with a spring, which · is not
this sort of case. The force that we are
considering
involves
creation out of

nothing.
We will take this force to
represent the force with which God acts on
the creited world.
In our account of the
fall, R corresponds to God, who must an~
can know how far each being is from him.
However, any force which is direct as the
distance could capture this sense of
creation out of nothing.
So we a_._re faced
with the q~estion 3 why God is R
rather
than, say R or R .
We will so?f return
. to thi5 _is_sue after we consider R .
"1.
R is a force a little less than R ,
God, and though equally unmechanical is
nonetheless quite rational.
It is a
uniform force.
One which is self-same in
a crucial respect.
In ·this case, force
does not depend on the distance but only
on what is acted upon.
The same mass is
acted upon by the same force at any
distance.
Space is irrelevant, all that
is crucial is what a thing is, i.e. 1 its
mass, it's essence..: 1 In the_fase of R as
in the case of R
and R
distance is
relevant and has the consequence that the
effect is either more or less than the
apparent cause.
In this case, the effect
is entirely equal to the cause.
Such a
force responds to the what but not the
where.
If we ask ,what entity has the
traits which characterize this force, the
answer is clear.
It is Reason and from
Milton we can glean what Reason is; it is
the first created beings ,0 the Angels. We
will
therefore
take
R
to
represent
Reason.
The question of the .. relation
1
between R and R is now the question of
the relations between God and Reason. i.e.
the first Fall, a situation described by
Newton in Props. 7,8, and 9.
The second
creation, the creation of Adam, occurs in
Prop. 10 which is the last proposition of
Section 2.
It is now time to return to thl
question of associating God with the R
force law since any law Rn where n &gt; O can
represent creation out of nothing.
The
first point is that if God's relation to
his angels is ordered so that if God is Rn
n-1
the angels are R
, then if n &gt; 1, the
angels could also create out of nothing.
The other point deals with the relation of
his creatures to Him.
God's creatures

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need to be able to recognize their
difference from Him, i.e . . we must be
finite.
What we see and think must only
be ultimately what He thinks, but yet it
must ultimately be that.
If th~ world
were operating according to an R force
law there, would be no difference between
the non-ultimate and the ultimate, no
difference between what appears and what
is.
The
.visible
world
would
be
mathematics. .
If
the
wo3ld
operated
according to the law F a R , the actual
orbits could not be reduced to circles of
curvature. The world would be completely
imcomp~ehensible.
One world would be
purely intelligible, the other would be
opaqu2 and miraculous. We therefore take
the R. to r3present God's intellect and we
associate R with .God's grace.
The third force law presented in
prop. 4 is the 'inverse as the distance'
law, R-l
It is a mirror image of the
first law ai:id rather than increasing as
the distance, it decreases.
This is the
most mechanically explicable of the three
forces we have .considered, since one
expects that the further away from the
source of force, the. less force will be
exerted. It is a force law which requires
neither knowing how far nor to whom the
force is directed prior to its action.
What we have here is the representation of
the force law between men, each man acting
in
the
literal
image 1 of
God,
Hfs
reciprocal.
As God is R , ma~ is 2 l/R 1 .
In terans of our discussion of R , R , R ,
and R as God's grace, ~&lt;rd' s intellect,
God's power .and Reason, R
becomes man's
Will.
In the fourth proposition what we
have are three thinkable force laws and a
fourth which, Newton points out, is our
visible force law:
the inverse square.
Since this concerns what is visible, it
s~2ms feasible to extend the list and add
R
as the mathematical correlate of
perception.
This then would give us the
conclusion that man's perception is the
image of God's intellect and would supply
an internal justification of reading . the
visible world as the story of God's
intellect. -- There is one -more force law
for which one must give account: the

inverse cube.
Since it is the factor
which causes the dissolution of the world,
we
might,
for
the
moment,
let
it
correspond to the inverse of grace i.e.
· despair.
'(,Ur ques1:_\on is how the three laws
R1 , R , and R
bring into being through
the fall, the visible world which displays
the story of that fall in its force law,
visibility,
and
interconnections.
In
other words, the visible world of the
inverse square is the appearance to us of
the creation of the world, its fall, and
its eventual redemption, a moment which we
are told in Revelations will be signaled
by the dissolution of the heavens. Newton
wrote
a
commentary
on
the
book
of
Revelations. Our claim is that the force
laws Rn do not concern 'possible' worlds,
one of which i~ 'actual'. Rather the laws
from -R 3 to Rfit together to tell the
story of our world, visible and invisible.
III

The Fall of Lucifer occurs in Prop.
7. There we are shown a body orbiting in
a circle around a center of force which,
in corollary 1, is on the circumference of
that circle.
The figure of the orbit is
two circles with a common tangent point
occupied by the center of force.
p

This is the orbit which Lucifer and the
Angels described prior to the Fall. It is
an orbit whose center is neither within
the orbit nor outside it.
It stands as
the mathematical diagram of the theological fact that God is in Heaven with his
angels. He both is and is not with them;
there is distance and yet no distance, as
there would be were he inside or outside
that orbit.
He is precisely at the
tangent point of all such double circular

orbits.
This allows for the possibility
that the Angels can be different--ordered
hierarchically--and yet none be farther
from God than any other. . Since these
orbits are circles, each point is similar
to every other and the difference between,
the orbit and a point on the orbit is'
·imperceptible.
The Newtonian account of
Heaven is
therefore, viewed in the
plane, the following figure.

One might reflect on the oddity that each
body generating its own orbit would fall
into such a peculiar configuration. Such
reflection would not account for the
presence and the action of that force at
the tangent point.
However, it would
indicate that the reasoning we described
as
Satan's
is
false.
Reason
would
recognize itself limited. Satan does not
look to the others and falls.
The force law which proposition 6
would give us -Sor this orbit is the
inverse fifth, R . Since we are flaiming
that God acts according to .R ,
this
appears a discrepancy.
But it is not.
Prop. 7 asks the general questi.on of the
force law connecting a body in a circular
orbit with a
center of
force.
It
considers an equation for any point in the
circle and in the first corollary draws
the specific vers!gn for the center on the
circumference, R •
It does not here
present the question of the specific value
of Rn where the force is at the center of
the circle, i.e. when there is a definite
and constant distance between the body and
the center, which was not the case in the.
creation of the Angels.
Newton at this
point does not feel such a need.
Had he
felt that ·need, the general 1 equation of
prop. 7 for that case gives R •
Satan's rebellion of prop. 7 erects
an immeasurable distance between himself
and 'his creator.
The center of force,
God, is pushed out of Satan's world,
placed
infinitely
far
away.
This
infinitely distant center of force is
treated in the next proposition which
articulates the Fall.

In the following discussion I assume
that
Proposition
six which
I
claim
represents
faith
is
unavailable
to
Lucifer. From the perspective of prop. 4
and not prop. 6, which is needed to
calculate the force law, there is no
center. We can now present what would be
Lucifer's i.e. Reason's--response to such
situation.
From prop. 2, he, on the
orbit, can discern that there is no center
either inside or outside. It is from the
point of tangency that equal areas are
described in equal times.
But can that
point be the center of force?
Any
attractive force, so Reason reasons, tends
to become infinite the closer one gets.
If the center were on the orbit itself,
then when the body reached that point the
force would be infinite and the orbit
would not continue.
Since there clearly
is an orbit, such a center of force.cannot
be there.
The orbit, Reason concludes,
must therefore be self-generated.
Through Prop. 6, we see ~his analysis
is wrong and that the orbit continues.
What prop. 6 permits which this reasoning
does not, is the conclusion that an
infinite force results in a finite effect
i.e. the mystery of creation.
What we
have here is the mathematical equivalent
of Milton's Lucifer in Bk. I who claims
his own self-generation.
Without proposition 6, the only way
to discern a center of force on the orbit
would be to consider the other orbits.

a

A?

Proposition 8 shows an orbit with the
center of force infinitely far and the
body on a circle. This orbit is unstable.
Once the point is reached where the

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�..,
tangent to the orbit is on a line parallel
to the force lines, the body begins to
move in a straight line at continually
increasing acceleration.
It moves along
the tangent.
This is the fall itself. ·
The force law operating here is the
unverse cube which for the first time
makes its appearance. The inverse cube is
what was mention~d before as involved in
the dissolution of the world.
The situation of this proposition is
that when Lucifer reaches the tangent
poi~t
of the previous proposition--the
place where God was--he begins to move in
a straight line continually accelerating
according to the inverse cube.
The body of Prop. 8 approaching the
tangent point of the double circles is
acted upon by the infinitely distant force
according to the inverse cube of line AB,
or A' B' , a ·line dropped from the position
of the body ordinatewise to the diameter
TW.
When the body reaches the point T,
the lines A'B' have vanished and are
replaced by the increasing lengths along
the tangent TP.The body is therefore act3d
upon by a force which is inversely as TP .
This is the distance between Satan and God
as.He was in Prop.7.
II

~

limits. He, therefore, must reason, since
acceleration is detectable, that ~e exerts
force on himself. As such he is not only
self-generated
but
self-generating.
Without Prop. 6, however, he can not argue
to the inverse cube. He must continue. to
believe that he acts on himsetf according
to what he is, i.e. the R
law. The
movement of Satan in the fall is along a
line of tangency to his original orbit. In
discussing Newton's first law, we pointed
out that motion along a straight line was
the equivalent to what one has become. It
is
uniform
velocity
and
constant
direction. What we see in Satan's case is
constant direction, away from the tangent.
point where God was, but also continually
increasing velocity.
It is the fusion of
Law 1 and 2 .a:nd is .. the eq_uivalent to th~~
sin of Satan--pride.
Pride we are told,
leads
to
despair
and
in
the
next
proposition we find just that. Because of
Satan's fall a new line has been generated
in the world. The previous figure was:

A' A
The new line is the tangent line to the
point of tangency between the double
circles.
It runs at right angles to the
line of the centers of the double circles.

Satan could recognize this, his own
fall
from T,
if proposition 6 were
available to him, but ~e are assuming, for
now without explanation, that is is not.
We can say that because it represents
faith, it is not available to him but is
available to us readers.
The crux of
proposition 6 is to relate the finite and
the infinite through the nascent ratios
and calculate a force law in regard to a
specific center.
Having fallen from the
orbit,
Lucifer
no
longer
has
the
possibility of viewing the other angelic
configurations and reasoning to reason's

Satan's fall draws the figure of the
cross, a figure his fall made necessary.
Had Satan any movement except along
the line away from God, he would describe
circles around the original point in his
fall. At the infinite distance, he would
describe an infinite circle.
However,
since he has no such movement, he does

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not.
He remains fixed in the infinite
point, infinitely far from God.
What we see in prop. 9 is the center
of force by which Satan was accelerated in
prop. 8, the inverse cube, now acting at a
finite distance.

proposition.
In prop. 7, God was considered with
the angels in a place which was no place,
i.e, the tangent point between all their
orbi:ting double circles.
God in prop. 7
was with these created beings in heaven.
In prop. 10, we find the .second creation,
the creation of man in God's image. It is
in respect to man and the second creation,
to beings at a finite distance from him,
that God acts directly
as the distance
and that is the force.law displayed at the
end of section two.
God' s relation is
such that he is no longer in the same
place as his creature. _ He is initially at
the center of a ellipse/circle where manor Adam is on the orbit. The force law is
direct as the distance.
In the previous
creation, prop.
7, we were faced by
circles. The variety of the general force
law in question there, the inverse fifth,
left no room for any degree of variation.
One either remained on the double circle
or one fell. In the second creation, that
changes.
By God's having moved his
creature to a finite distance, there comes
into being a certain latitude.
Adam can
move in a circle or an ellipse and still
remain in orbit around God in the center.
The difference between the circle and the
ellipse depends on the relation between
the distance from the center and the
body's tangential velocity.
The ~atitude
mentioned· means that if where one is and
what one is are not in harmony, one still
need not fall. One can desire, fall back,
and still remain in orbit.
Newton does not end Section 2 with
Proposition 10, but with a Scholium. The
Scholium acts as a transition to the next
Section which begins with the creation of
Eve.
In this scholium, the ellipse of
Prop. X first becomes a parabola and then
a hyperbola.
For the parabola to arise
out of the ellipse requires that the
center of force be moved infinitely far
away. The parabola is an ellipse which is
missing one point. It is a representation
of a being's desire, a being which views
himself as essentially incomplete.
The
force law which causes this figure is what
we observe in the fall of apples at the

The result is a peculiar image of a force'
law '1e previously considered for God--i.e.
F R .
That law was not the law of the
world because it described pure grace.
The inverse cube is its opposite. Acting
on finitely placed bodies, it causes them
to begin a spir~l which, regardless of
their original velocity, eventually brings
them to the center of force, Satan, if
there is any motion at all in that
direction.
It is the distorted image of
grace~
it is despair.
However, we have
just seen that Satan is infinitely far
from any body whose distance from God is
finite. He, therefore, can have no effect
from his location at the very base of the
tan~ent
line.
However,
if
we
ask
ourselves what that base is, we see it is
the. foot of the cross which came into
being in the transition from prop. 7 to
prop. 8.
It is only if mediated by God's
grace that Satan can ·act and God is grace
is alone what
is
sufficient.
Satan
imagines lJimsel!f to act according to what
he was, R • However, he actually attempts
t~ 3 act, unknown to himself, accot;ding to
R • His imagined actia_p is made possible
through God's grace, R •
The result of
the magnification of the inverse cube by·
the direct cube is RO, which because it ·
acts without reference to distance can aqt
even at an infinite distance.
In other
words, we have Newton's initial rendering
of the claim that God's grace brings good
out
of
evil,
which
would
be . the
justification of God's ways to man.
We
are now ready for the second creation, and
Newton presents us with that in the next·

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�,
surface of the earth.
As Newton says,
"This is Galileo's theorem". The ellipse,
which is caused by a force acting directly
as the distance, has been transformed into
a parabola acted -upon a force infinitely
distant.
As he stated, "the force will
become constant."
However, we have just
seen what this force might be. Satan is a
force infinitely remote from Adam which
opera es just as this force should, i.e.
F a R •
If one now re-introduces God at
the center of the ~ld ellipse acting
according to the R
force law,
the
parabola becomes a hyperbola where we have
a centrifugal instead of a centripetal
force. We have here the representation of
Adam's flight from God in the desire for
something else which would complete him.
Adam is requesting a mate.
The end of
Newton's section 2 corresponds to the end
of the second chapter of Genesis.
Throughout this discussion, we have
not considered the sixth Proposition.
Satan, we claimed, traversed the 7th, 8th,
and 9th propositions because Prop. 6 was
unavailable to him.
He had to rely on
unaided reason whereas we could calculate
the precise force laws.
Previously we
said that that proposition corresponded to
faith and we must now consider that claim.
Proposition 6 enables us
to mediate
between the appearances and the force law
which governs them.
It is in other words
what makes the Principia possible.
Had
Satan
possessed
it,
he
would
have
recognized he was not self-generated.
Prop. 6 deals with nascent ratios in
Newton's Latin; in Greek that would be
with the logos of Genesis--the word which
was "In the beginning." It enables us to
view an orbit,
an historical
fallen
appearance, and discern the reality behind

the product of lines in the figure is
equal to the law of force.
In its
non-ultimate form, the figure is this:

&amp;

0

s

and the force is inverse as the product.
SP2

QT;;z
QR

In its ultimate form, the figure
changes somewhat. As Newton says in Cor.
1 of prop. 6: "the centripetal force will
be inversely as the solid
SP;;z . QT;;z
QR
if the solid be taken of that magnitude
which it ultimately acquires when points P
and Q coincide." The figure indicated is
the one in which "QR_ is equal to the
versed sign of double of the arc QP whose
middle is P." The figure with the double
arc 9p is:

it.

In order to apply proposition 6, one
must reduce the finite orbit at a point to
a circle of curvature.
A circle of
curvature is a circle which has the same
curvature at that_ point as the apparent
orbit.
The circle of curvature is a
reduction of the orbit at a point to the
pre-fallen world of prop.4. Once this is
done a figure is drawn in the circle and

It is the cross on which Christ was
crucified which mediates
between our
fa],len
world
of
the
inverse
square
spiralling to the Last Judgement -and our
pre-fallen state. It is therefore b_ecause
proposition 6 for Newton is the Christ
that that proposition is unavailable to
Satan. -

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directed to the center of force are
parallel.
Obviously
someone
convinced
that
Newton's
Principia
is
a
work
of
mathematical physics would insist that
these are not real issues. He would admit
the same contingency in this work that he
would anticipate in the world which that
work describes.
It is not clear whether
this dispute can be resolved at this
level. It would require investigating the
genesis of the concept 'descriptive'.

Scholium
Virtues and vices of this
reading
A brief statement of the virtues and vices
of this attempt may be helpful.
The
principal advantage of the approach is
that it insists that every part in the
composition be respected and questioned
about its role.
Mathematically Prop. 8
and 9 appear to be unnecessary where they
are. A corollary of prop. 7 is used later
in section 3, but prop. 8 and 9 a re not.
I do not know if they are used anywhere
else.
Are they?
The situation is even
worse in section 3.
The scholium which
ends that section first appears in Prop.
7, Cor. III.
It is used in the 'same
otherwise' proofs of Propositions 11 and
12.
However, for no reason at all, it
suddenly reappears a fourth time after
Prop. 17 to complete the section. One must
ask oneself why, and no mathematical
response is to the point at that stage.
This approach also allows one to
begin to reconsider the relation between
the
proofs
proper
and
the
versions
entitled 'the same otherwise'. These are
generally viewed mere~y
as
alternate
proofs.
The
two
in
section
three,
however, prop. 11 and prop. 12, share a
similar strategy.
They both derive the
force law th rough Prop. X of Section 2.
The
proofs
proper do not use
that
proposition but argue directly from Prop.
6. The different versions appear to bring
up a distinction between an apparent force
law and
an
actual
one.
The
' same
otherwise' proofs in Section 2 occur after
Prop. 7, 9, and 10. They all emplpy Cor.
3 of prop. 6 instead of Cor. 1 _which is
used for the proposition. Cor. 1 of Prop.
6 uses the cross; Cor. 3 does not, but
rather
a
line
perpendicular
to
the
tangent. One wonders what to make of this
difference.
In section 3, Prop. 13 does
not have a I same otherwise I .
In section
2, Prop. 8 lacks one.
Here too one
wonders why.
This is particularly the
case since Prop. 13 is the parabola,_ a
figure whose diameters are all parallel
and prop. 8 is a circle where all_ lines

The vices of such an effort are
legion and obvious to anyone.
To stop
ourselves from speaking of force laws as
holding of possible worlds, a Leibnizian
characterization, I made an effort to show
the Newtonian force laws in a different
light.
This
required
presenting
an
account of R3 and R2 as God's Grace and
God's
Intellect.
I
doubt
that
the
suggestions presented are sufficient to
convince anyone. An argument is necessary
which would involve a treatment of Lemma
I I of Section I and the Scholium which
follows it. Such an effort is beyond the
scope of the sketch which is being
presented. This brings up another issue.
In such an attempt, a premature guess
which is incorrect appears much worse than
it really is.
It takes on this aspect
because everything is, at best, merely
implicit.
One,
therefore,
fears that
anything is possible.
I did not use the
now infamous SPQRT which in a giddy mood I
once imagined represented the assertion of
the Roman rather than the Greek cross in
the sixth Proposition.
I have no idea
whether the shape of the true cross really
concerned Newton or whether he had a sense
of humor. It is tempting to_ connect Prop.
6 both with Prop. 66 and with the number
of the Antichrist, 666.
However to show
that 6, as the first perfect number, was
associated with Christ and to apply it to
this" ·text
would
appear,
right
now,
indulgent, and make the entire effort
su~pect.
The whole procedure, therefore,
hin'ges on the exercise of restraint and
that itself is a problem.
The most one
can hope for at this stage is to have made

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�the claim that the Principia is a work of
mathematical physics ambiguous.
To do
more would require displaying that our
notion of mathematical physics has its
true origin, not in the Principia, but in
Kant's Critique, and is hardly possible in
a last sentence.

a function of the mass of the affected
body and since there are an indefinite
number of these, any force emanating from
a center must be infinite. This, however,
is a different problem from the one being
addressed though it may indicate that for
Newton the action of God is necessary in
any situation where force is present. God
would be necessary because no mechanical
explanation could account for an infinite
force originating from a mass.

1

In this discussion of the force laws I
am not considering the effect of mass but
only of distance.
Because any force,
direct or inverse as the distance, is also

Viewpoint
Patti Nogales

We have not left it
as we found it
but it seems to me that way;
though twelve yea,rs of living
have softened
the harsh lines
the naked floor throws back
coldly
an echo
of my despair.
I would like to say "fare thee well"
to my room
but I look to find
four unresponsive walls,
an only1- once - before - seen floor,
a silent door.
Where is my room?
Did it leave with the desk
hauled out the door,
or with my reading chair, my pictures
or the bookshelves
eased
into the back of an old green truck?
At what moment, with the loss of which part
did the whole disappear
in the bustle of the last days?
It is lost
like a sigh of warmth
in a cold winter,
In a sigh
it was born and died my sigh~
So when we
softly
close the door.
for the last time
and look back,
we will see,
not as we found it,
a strangely familiar house
at the top of a hill.
July, 1978.

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23

�Ah! cruel, tu m'a trop entendue.
Je t'en ai dit assez pour te tirer
d' erreur.
· H~ bien ! connais done Ph~dre et
toute sa fureur. (671-673)

Like Flies to Wanton Boys
another paper about God, man, and the universe
Stephanie Nelson

Oh that is cruel, you understand too much.
My words already leave no room for doubt.
Well then, know Ph~dre, know all her fury's forcer love, but loving still, my eyes refuse
Myself all sanction and all innocence.
You think this madness that controls my mind
Is born of weakness. The poison is not mine.
A plaything for the Gods, your proud contempt
Is nothing to my loathing for myself. ·
The Gods can speak for me - these Gods who lit
The fire in me which has consumed my house.
Cruel Gods, who pride themselves in such a feat To have seduced a helpless woman's heart.
Think back, you know that fleeing from you then
Was not enough - I drove you from my sight.
I strove to be inhuman in your eyes,
And to resist my love I sought your hate.
What have I gained from all my useless care?
You hate me more, I love you none the less.
Your misery at last just lent new grace
And fed the fire I fed with my own tears.
All this in just a glance your eyes could see,
If they could bring themselves to look on me.
(671-692)

In a play full of people attempting
to justify their actions, to themselves
and each other, Ph~dre stands alone· in
accepting her crime for what it is.
Certainly it is the question of her
innocence,
and
not
of
Th~s~e's
in
condemning Hippolyte, of Hippolyte's in
fleeing or loving Aricie, or of Oenone' s
in attempting to save Ph~dre, which is the
focus of the play.
Any guilt of their's
is overwhelmed by the horror of Ph~dre' s
love
for
Hippolyte.
But
the
sheer
immensity of Ph~dre' s shame should have
led her, had she been anyone else, to
excuse herself and lay the blame for her

actions on the gods (these gods do not
deserve capitalization).
This, exactly,
she will not do. Phedre sees the gods for
what they are (or at least for what Racine
sees them as being).
They have, without
reason, placed her in a position where her
only choices are to act, and act culpably,
or to die. She acts, and blames herself,
not the gods, for her action.
If at any
point
Phedre
might
be
said
to
be
justifying herself it is in the speech
which I have translated.
I will try to
show that is is not absolution that Ph~dre
is seeking.

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..

J'aime. Ne pense pas qu'au moment
que je t'aime,
Innocente ~ mes yeux, je m'approuve
moi-~me,

Ni que du fol amour qui trouble ma
raison
Ma lache complaisance ait nourri le
poison.
Objet infortun~ des vengeances

Phedre begins looking at Hippolyte
and calling him "cruel."
Until this
speech Phedre has used the word "cruel"
only in reference to the gods. After this
she will use it to describe both the gods
and Hippolyte, but no one else.
In the
course of her speech Ph~dre speaks to
Hippolyte, to the gods, and then again to
Hippolyte.
She addresses each in turn as
"cruel."
She
accuses
them
not
of
malevolence, but of· indifference.
The
horror of the god's behavior towards
Phedre is not that they bear her some sort
of grudge, but that she is too insignificant for them to bother. Their persecution of her is entirely disinterested.
They are not concerned with either Ph~dre
or her sufferings. The gods do not judge
men any more than men 'judge' flies in
killing them.
As
Theramene says to
Hippolyte "Le ciel de nos raisons ne sait
point s'inforrner." (1.115)
The gods are
'not even able to listen.
To Ph~dre
Hippolyte is a god; he is both as noble "Tel qu' on d~peint nos Dieux, ou tel que
je vous voi." (1.640) - and as unfeeling.
Phedre knows that Hippolyte could not
have failed to understand her declaration
of love.
He too readily claims he has.
Whether Hippolyte cannot, or will not,
hear Phedre, she sees that his only desire
is to remain ignorant of her suffering:
" ... Par combien de detou rs/L' insensible a
longtemps ~lud~ mes di scours!" , (1. 743)
It is clear to her that Hippolyte does not
care any more about her reasons than the
heavens do. But Hippolyte is a man, not a
god.
Phedre
demands
from
him
the
recognition due a human being, who does
have reasons, and has the ability to judge
and be judged.
This recognition is what
the gods have refused her.
Ph~dre tries
to force Hippolyte to understand her, and
her love, not in order to escape judgement
but
to
claim
it
as
her
right.
Indifference is the cruelest blow of all.

c~lestes,

Je m'abhorre encor plus que tu ne me
d'testes. (673-678)
Ph~dre's confession of her crime
requires only one syllable.
Her need to
make Hippolyte understand has overcome any
desire
in
her
to
win
him
through
passionate declarations of love.
She
challenges
Hippolyte
by
not
excusing
herself.
She claims that it is possible
for a man to act, and at the same moment
to understand that his action is wrong.
Hippolyte's understanding of guilt cannot
admit this.
He has referred to Th~s~e' s
seductions as "erreurs"
(1.23) and to
Thesee's actions as "failings." ["faillir"
(l.100)]
Guilt, for Hippolyte is th.e
denial, or, as he is partial to his
father, the falling short of moral laws.
Th~s~e' s
crimes,
and trespass ·in
general, are the result of a deficiency, a
deficiency which can be made up, for
example, by killing enough monsters.
A
man such as Thes~e, in Hippolyte' s eyes,
could never condemn himself as guilty
while deceiving his lovers; he can deceive
them only because he has deceived himself
too well to understand his guilt.
The
inconstancy of Th~s~e' s
vows
can be
'fixed' by Ph~dre because his inconstancy
is not a force to be tamed, :but an error
to be corrected.
Uncorrected, a man who
can deny one limit, finally can deny all.
Hippolyte tells Th~s~e, "Quiconque a pu
franchir les bornes l~gitimes/Peut violer
enfin
les
droits
les
plus
sacres"
(1.1094) .
What Hippolyte says is quite true,
but
not
always
for
the
reason
he
understands.
When Phedre abandons her
reason to Oenone she does it because "De
.
I
l 'austere pudeur les bornes sont passees"

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�(1. 766) • It is not because she has been
able to convince herself that her acts are
not crimes, that she has passed into
greater crimes.
She is so aware of her
guilt that she is unable to act unless she
abandons her judgement completely.
This
she cannot do.
She can only tell Onenone
"Je t' avouerai de tout; j e n' esp'ere qu' en
toi." (1. 811)
Ph~dre' s crimes finally do
not result from her blinding judgement,
but from her need to abandon it.
Hippolyte
defends · himself
before
Thesee by reminding him of what Hippolyte
believes is the cause of his innocence,
his " ... haine des forfai ts qu 'on ose
m'imputer" (1.1108). As long as he hates
this crime he cannot commit it. His hate
however is no stronger than Phedre's.
This is the Hippolyte Phedre speaks to
when she says "Je m'abhorre encor plus que
tune me d~testes." Ph~dre abhors herself
because she understands, despises, and yet
has
committed
her
crime.
Hippolyte
detests her because he believes
she
recognizes
no
limits.
His
immediate
reaction to Phedre' s declaration of love
is to demand " ... oubliez-vous/Que Th6see
est mon pere, et qu' il est votre ~poux?"
(1. 663)
Hippolyte cannot understand the
horror or tragedy of Ph~dre' s
crime
because he does not understand that it is
not always men's judgement that motivates
their actions.

Les Dieux m'en sent temoins, ces
Dieux qui dans mon flanc
Ont allume le feu fatal ~ tout mon
sang;
Ces Dieux qui se sent fait une
gloire cruelle
De seduire le coeur d'une faible
mortelle. (679-682)
If ·it is not Ph~dre's compliance
["complaisance"] which has made her act
against her reason, what has?
What but
\.
the gods? Phedre calls on the gods as her
witnesses. But what kind of witnesses are
they, who have caused the misery of the
woman they are called upon to defend? The
supposed greatness of the gods, the gods
Hippolyte believes in, and to whom Ph~dre

for a moment has tried to appeal, stands
in terrible contrast to their real nature.
Their "gloire cruelle" Ph~dre sees, is no
greater
than
the
pointless
torments
children impose on one another.
Ph~dre's
contempt for herself is for her weakness;
she despises the gods because they are
petty.
When Ph~dre speaks of the gods she
accuses not only Venus, but all the
uncaring and uncontrolable forces which
act on men. What does it matter to Ph~dre
if the gods have lit the same fire in her
that they lit in her mother and sister, or
if it was her inheritence to fall in lqve?
She cannot control it; she in no way
deserved it.
Nature or fate is no less
"cruel" than the gods, although we are
less inclined to accuse them of cruelty.
Phedre cannot condemn the gods any more
than we can condemn our genes.
They act
on us, they are all powerful!, and since
they are simply not of the world of right
and wrong, they cannot be accused of being
unfair.
Men, however, understand what it is
to
'deserve'
and
somehow
that
understanding is the best part of men.
Pascal
wrote,
"Mais
quand
l 'uni vers
l'~craserait l'homme serait encore plus
noble que ce qui le tue, puisqu' il sai t
qu' il muert •.. " (Pensee 200)
Perhaps we
could add - because he knows whether he
deserves to die.
The gods, like the
(empoisonn~) air Ph~dre is forced to
breathes,are beyond her control and her
condemnation.
She
can
nonetheless
recognize that she is in some way superior
to them.
It is Phedre who understands
only too well.
She despises herself
because she acts against her judgement.
She despises the gods because they have no
judgement.

Toi-~me en ton esprit rapelle le
I
passe.
C'est peu de t'avoir fui, cruel, je
t'ai chasse.
J'ai voulu te parattre odieuse,
inhumaine;
Pour mieux te resister, j'ai
recherch~ ta haine. (683-686)

26

''

'
Perhaps the saddest words in Phedre's
speech are "qu' au moment que je t' aime."
"Je t'aime" is not past, it is now, at the
very moment in which Phedre talks to
Hippolyte.
Phedre can despise the gods
for their cruelty; despite herself she
cannot despise Hippolyte. ...
There is no one
else in the play whom Phedre feels she
must make understand and judge her. It is
,,
enough that Thesee or Oenone know her
crime; only to Hippolyte does she plead
"connais done Ph~dre."
But Ph~dre is a
play not only about passion and judgement,
it is also about the inevitable solitude
in which they occur.
Perhaps if Oenone
had understood why Phedre had to die, if
Hippolyte had heard Phedre' s cry to be
judged, if Th~s6e had not had " ... de son
[Hippolyte's] coeur si peu de connaissance," ( 1. 1429) Hippolyte would not have
died.
Men are isolated because there is no
one to witness the truth of what they say.
Men cannot testify
for themselves
"Toujours les sc~lerats ont recours au
parjure." (1.1134)
Hippolyte learns the
result of trusting in the concern of the
gods - " [Les Dieux] ont trop d' in&amp;r~t ~
me justifier" (1.1352) becomes "Le ciel
m'arrache
une
innoc~nte
vie."
(1.1561).
And finally men have so little
knowledge of each other that they are
unable to know, let alone speak, the truth
for other men. Phedre calls herself, the
gods, and Hippolyte to witness. All fail.
She learns what Hippolyte does not when,
in defending himself to Th~s6e, he finds
that " ... la terre, le ciel, que toute la
nature ... "
(1.1133)
are not enough to
testify
for
him.
Perhaps
~lying
he
realizes that this is because "la terre,
le ciel,
et toute la nature,"
like
Hippolyte, do not want to listen. Phedre
again calls Hippolyte "cruel" but the
irony of even trying to call to witness is
so bitter that she cannot help but
recognize it.

The proofs which would serve to
convince an objective judge are precisely
the acts that make it impossible for
Hippolyte to be objective.
"Mes inutiles
...
soins" are perhaps not only Phedre' s
attempts,
now
long
ago,
to
resist
Hippolyte, but the attempt she has just
made to make him understand her. In a sea
of past actions "tu me haissais;" and "je
t'aimais" alone are in the present. Now,
at this moment, you hate me more, not
despite, but because of my attempts to
make you understand. There are no judges
for
Phedre
except
herself.
Forcing
Hippolyte to see the truth can only make
it more impossible for him to judge. The
gods have given Ph~dre, as they do Th's'e,
exactly what she wanted.
Ph~dre' s plea
for understanding only makes her,
in
Hippolyte' s eyes, more "odieuse;" and
"inhumaine."

..

Tes malheurs te pr~taient encor de
nouveux charmes.
J'ai langui, j'ai s~ch~, dans les
feux, dans les larmes.
Il suffit de tes yeux pour t'en
persuader,
Si tes yeux un moment pouvaient me
regarder. (689-691)
But "je ne t'aimais pas mains". Even
while Phedre realizes that Hippolyte hates
her, she loves him.
Phedre knows that
Hippolyte is.unable to understand her. If
kn6wledge
governed men's
actions
her
speech would end with "tu me haissais
plus." But all of Ph~dre's understanding
cannot
stifle
her
longing
to
have
Hippolyte recogni~e her.
That longing
will not allow Phedre to abandon a hope
that she knows
it is impossible to
satisfy.
All she has left to abandon is
her reason. Hippolyte will never look at
Phedre.
Phedre knows this and still
cannot stop herself from begging him to
see her, just as she can condemn her love
for him but cannot stop herself from
loving. Her speech is a microcosm of her
love.
Once she has' given her hope
substance by speaking of it, her judgement
can no longer overwhelm the force of a

De quoi m'ont profit~ mes inutiles
soins?
Tu me haissais plus, je ne t'aimais
pas mains. (687-688)

27

�f

-,

passion she has done her best to kill.
Overall, once Ph~dre has allowed herself
to hope that she could love Hippolyte, and
in this speech, once she has hoped that he
might understand her, she cannot prevent
her hope from working out its own fatal
conclusion.
Nor can she prevent herself
from condemning the actions she performs
motivated by this hope.
\
Phedre' s speech from this point on
will build until, horribly, it combines
her understanding of her guilt and her
need for Hippolyte's recognition.
The
only resolution to her fatal passion is
that it be Hippolyte who, in judging her,
punishes her guilt.
Only then can her
judgement and her passion be reconciled.
The fatality of her love is that it is

both deadly and seeking death. Hippolyte
alone can end the war within Ph~dre.
But Hippolyte cannot.
He is too
young and too naive.
He is horrified by
Ph~dre's confession, and naturally so.
Because he is a man, and a particular man,
he cannot do what Phedre is asking of him.·
Men
are
not
capable
of
forgetting
themselves in order to understand another.
Ph~dre is asking Hippolyte to be what
Th~s6e, the gods, and finally Hippolyte
cannot be - both noble and understanding.
Perhaps it would be sufficient if just one
man could be both.
Hippolyte cannot.
Only Ph~dre can understand both herself
and her passion, but alone the only
resolution she can reach is the one that
will lead to Hippolyte's death.

Some Thoughts on "Maxwell's Equations"

'"

David Stephenson

We
usually
meet
with
Maxwell's
equations in something like the following
form if we meet with them at all:
curl E

=-

div D

p

db

dt

curl H
div B

=

L

-+

it will give rise to another field in
directions perpendicular to but curving
a round it:
hence the use of the word
"curl" in the first two equations.
The elegance and power of these
equations is manifest.
They display an
even greater symmetry in space free of
charge and current, so that L and p a re
zero, and without material bodies so that
B = H and D = E.
Such a concise and
pregnant expression of natural law can.
only be admired. But these equations were
not written by Maxwell.
He did list some dozen equations in
quaternion form at the conclusion of a
chapter entitled "General Equations· of the
Electrodynamic Field" in his Treatise.
Among them are some more or less equivalent to the four posterity attributes to
Maxwell. But they are quite different in
form.
How then did our four usurp their
paternity?
Who did write them? and why
did Maxwell lack his successor's economical or aesthetic predilections?
Though
not
afflicted
with
the
Pythagorean tesseraphilia nor a confessed
admirer of Aristotle's cardinal virtues or
elements, Maxwell did apparently succumb
to the charm. of the number four in another
short treatise: "Note on the Electromagnetic Theory of Light," in which he
derived
a
plane
electromagnetic wave
equation, which we may write:

dD
dt

0

These are the field. equations out of
which immediately springs the assurance
that electromagnetic waves can exist and
travel in space.
For with E and D
signifying electric inten5;1ity and flux,
respectively, H and B magnetic force and
flux, and p and L electric charge and
current densities, the first two equations
imply a reciprocal stimulation of magnetic
and electric fields that will spread
outwards once provoked, like the waves in
a pond.
The third and fourth equations,
on the other hand, cover the quiescent
case,
locating
the
source
of
an
electrostatic field in electric charge but
denying any local source to magnetism.
The terms curl and divergence were
invented by Maxwell (although he preferred
the term "convergence" for the latter, the
negative of the divergence).
~n
his
"Mathematical Classification of ,Physical
Properties" in the The Scientific papers
of James Clerk Maxwell, he shows himself
to be particularly concerned that these
new names express something of their
mathematical meaning to the imagination.
Thus in selecting "curl," he says, "I have
sought for a word which shall neither,
like Rotation, Whirl, or Twirl, connote
motion,
nor,
like Twist,
indicate a
helical or screw structure which is not of
the nature of a vector at all."
If a
field pointing in one direction is altered

28

from four "theorems" or "principles". Two
of
these
"theorems"
resemble · verbal
paraphrases of the first two of our
· equations; this is as close as Maxwell
·comes to our quartet.
The demonstration

29

�----------

is simple and lucid; yet Maxwell seems to
have preferred the richer, if more prolix,
exposition in the Treatise.
One
of
the
reasons
why
Maxwell
included more equations than absolutely
necessary in his Treatise may have been
simply his desire to be explicit.
The
economy
of
mathematical
notation
in
general depends on its tacit reliance on
our understanding of the meaning of its
symbols.
Part of that meaning may derive
from implicit relationships among them, so
that each symbol can conceal a whole train
of equations. The brevity of our original
set of equations proves to be somewhat
illusory.
Only someone already initiated
into the mysteries of electromagnetism
knows, for example, that B and H are
proportional to one another.
Maxwell,
however, writes out the simple equation B
= µH for all to see.
For similar reasons
Ohm's Law joins the parade. But Maxwell's
pedagogical frankness is not the only
reason for the multitude and appearance of
his equations.
They do differ in form as
well as number from ours.
Consider the
fourth of the equations given above:

extended plot.
So the symbol A must be
connected with the symbol E in yet another
equation.
The connection between E and B
provided
by
this
new
vector
then
eliminates
the
need
for
our curl
E
equation.
Maxwell is very interested in
what this new A symbol might represent. A
rather extended analogy with mechanical
phenomena leads him to the conclusion that
it should be called the "electrokinetic"
or "electromagnetic momentum," and that
its time derivative equals the electromotive
force
that
produces
electric
currents· in circuits that are in motion
relative
to
the
magnetic
field.
In
earlier papers he had associated it with
Faraday's "electrotonic state":
a state
of tension assumed to account for the
peculiar
action
of
electromagnetic
induction.
It
thus
contributed
to
Maxwell's understanding of one of the most
puzzling phenomena of electricity and
magnetism.
Anyone nurtured in Newton's school
would
have
trouble
explaining
the
direction of the action of electromagnetic
induction.
For centripetal forces alone
can never account for the fact that when a
wire crosses a magnetic field a current
springs up in a direction perpendicular to
that field, and none whatsoever in the
field's direction.
Without, as far as I
know, confessing this outright, Maxwell
implies that the magnetic flux B expresses
a rotational property of some kind, and
the "momentum" associated with A may be a
kind
of
angular
momentum
in
space.
Rotation does, after all, seem to be
characteristic of magnetism;
even light
can be twisted by it.
In the place of symmetry we now have
a kind of ladder from vector to vector,
beginning with current and rising to the
electromagnetic momentum A:

div B = 0
This
can
easily
be
translated
into
everyday language: magnets have no true
poles, no distinct centers or localized
sources of magnetism.
Maxwell presents
this idea in a totally different way.
It
is a well known mathematical property of
the divergence and curl that div curl A =
o always for any vector A; that therefore
if the divergence of one vector is always
zero, the vector could equal the curl of
another vector.
Therefore Maxwell states
our fourth equation in what amounts to the
following form:
curl A = B
This is the first of the electromagnetic
equations presented in the Treatise. Wit~
it Maxwell introduces one more vectorial
quantity A into the company of forces and
fluxes with which alone we have so far had
to deal.
A new character requires a more

curl 1 B = curl H
µ

curl A

30

I.,

+

dD
dt

~.·'

electromagnetic vibration.
It was left
for Einstein to "murder" that one--or did
he?
Thus
began
the
distillation
of
Maxwell's
electromagnetic
equations,
refined
ultimately
into
the
present
concise, balanced, elegant quartet. These
four say what.it is necessary to say, and
no more than is necessary.
Perhaps,
therefore it is only nostalgia that longs
for the richer and more fanciful panoply
of Maxwell.
However, there is an ironic
footnote to this history;
the vector A
turns out to be significant in two very
modern sciences: quantum mechanics and
relativity (cf. Feynman's Lectures, vol.
II, ch.
15 &amp; 25).
In some respect
therefore Maxwell turns out to have been
an unconscious prophet.

· Now it must be admitted that A
(sometimes called the ·"vector potential"
of the current 1., to name the relationship
implied by the above equations) is a
rather mysterious quantity because it is
not
measurable
directly,
and
can be
eliminated by suitable combination of
these
equations.
Maxwell's
disciple,
oliver Heaviside, with little hesitation
confessed that he "murdered" this function
along with the electric potential function
v, ( E = - 'VV), "with a great gain in
definiteness and conciseness."
Thus may
an Englishman teach a Scotsman ruthless
mathematical parsimony.
And Heaviside
does come up with a symmetrical set very
much -like our own.
Nevertheless the
destruction
of
this
mystery did not
eliminate
another
one:
the
"ether"
itself,
the
matPrial
substratum
of

Sonnet
Ruth A. Johnston

Seen moment by each moment am I known,
Yet unknown in a moment's blinking eye
Unruled by time the hidden changes lie,
And eyes must fail to see how I have grown.
My eyes indeed grow weak, with nothing gained
From oft-repeated tries, oft-failed, to see
The outline of what someday will be me;
From challenging their limit, over-strained.
Viewers stroll by, their careless gaze upon
The nascent painting's rough and mottled face.
The canvas prays the work may go apace;
The painter smiles and strokes his colors on.
Judge lightly, then, as knowing half the tale;
The end cannot be seen beyond the veil.

B

31

�translated by Merle Sokolik

Shall I, by Bacchus overcome, yet once
again into those night-long rings
of dance set my white foot while thrusting up
my neck unto the heavens, like a fawn
that revels in the green delights
the meadow holds for her when she
has fled from fearful hunt, from under watch,
above the well-strung nets, and yet
the huntsman hastens on his dogs? She leaps
across the river-bordered plain
in whirls of strain and haste, delighting in
the spac~s empty of all men
and in the leaves of the shade-giving wood.

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,
I
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'

-

'

,

What is shrewdness?
What is a finer god-paid gift
among the mortals, than above
the heads of foes the hand should lift
its greater strength? The fine finds love-forever.

Though it is slowly brought on, power of
the gods should still be trusted. For
it straightens out those men with maddended views
that honor ignorance and do
not magnify the works of gods. But they
with intricate.cover disguise
the too long march of time and hunt down the
profane. So never do we need
to know and care for what is stronger than
that held as custom. The expense
is yet so slight to hold that this has force:
whatever is divine, the thing
held long in time as custom and the thing
always come forth in nature.

TL Tb oocp6v;
TC Tb x&amp;AALOV
nap&amp; ~Ewv ytpas £v SpoTots
Tf Xdp' Un~p MOplJq&gt;Ci.S
TTuY. ~X~P~V MpE~OOW MaT~XELV;
~ TL MaAdv cp~AOV ~EL.

How-fortunate the one who from out of
the sea has fled the tempest, should
he reach the harbor. Fortunate the one
who finds himself above such strains.
The one goes past the other, prosperous
and able, in another way.
Yet many are the hopes for many men.
Some hopes attain prosperity
for men while others go away. The· one
whose life is fortunate for all
his days, I call him blessed.

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EcpUyE XECµa, ALµEva 6' EXLXEV'
EUOaLµwv 6. o's {lnEp~E µox.Swv .
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oAS~ xal 6uvaµEL napnA~Ev.
µUpLaL 6' ETL µVpLOLS
E~o~v EAnL6ES aC µ~v
0

TEAE~TWOLV

(862-911)

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nLOTOV ( TL) Tb ~ELOV
o~£vos· anEU~UVEL 6~ SpoTWV
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xou~a y~p 6an&amp;va voµLsELV Lox1!,v Too' ExELv,
v
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TO T EV XPOV~ µaxp~ voµLµov
aEL cp'1JEL TE nE•nUKOS,

32

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TO ct MaT' ~µap OTW SLOTOS
EU6aLµwv, µaxapLsw.

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nap&amp; ~Ewv y£pas €v SpoTots
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TWV EX~pfuv xpELoow xaTtXELV;
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I

n

What is shrewdness?
What is a finer god-paid gift
among the mortals, than above
the heads of foes the hand should lift
its greater strength? The fine finds love-forever.

A Chorus from the Bacchae

I

33

�The B Deduction and Its Relation to Freedom

I.

(Or: Kant, Can Do}

The question one should always ask
oneself when approaching the B Deduction
is "Why is a deduction necessary?"
To
answer this question, we must recall
quickly the Transcendental Aesthetic and
the opening of the Transcendental Logic.
In the Aesthetic Kant proves that
time and space are not, as we had always
assumed, things outside of us, but rather
that they are the pure forms of our
sensible intuition.
In other words, they
are internal, something with which we
condition our experience.
We receive a
sensation from something outside of us
(the "thing in itself") and our intuition,
made up of the so-called "receiving rooms"
of space and time, orders that sensation
spatio-temporally.
This does not mean
that these pure forms of intuition do
anything.
They are merely receptive, and·
do not make images.
As Kant points out,
that which they receive could be nothing
more than a mass of dots which is then
ordered spatio-temporally.
But in order
to think, we need of some kind of object
to think about; we cannot think about a
mass of dots, a metaphor for what Kant
calls· usually a manifold.
This problem
leads
us
to
the
opening
of
the
Transcendental Logic.
·If I am to judge any object in my
experience, if I am to say anything about
that· object, I must have a concept of that
object. For example, if I say "That book
is large," I show that I have a concept of
some object before me ("book"), to which I
am attaching the concept "large." Or, put
in another way, I have seen many books and
have formed the concept "book" under which
a particular book falls, and I have seen
books
(or
perhaps
just
things)
of
different
sizes
and among them this
particular book seems "large." Therefore,
I have brought together two concepts, book
and large, and have made a judgement about
some particular incident in my experience.
As Kant says:

Matthew Davis

I know thee not, old man: fall to thy prayers;
How ill white hairs become a fool and a jester!
I have long dream'd of such a kind of man,
So surfeit swell'd, so old, and so profane;
But, being awak'd, I do despise my dream.
Make less thy body hence, and more thy grace;
Leave gormandizing; know the grave doth gape
For thee trice wider than for other men.
Reply not to me with a fool-worn jest:
Presume not that I am the thing that was;
For God doth know, so shall the world preceive,
That I have turn'd away my former self;
So will I those that kept me company.
-King (Prince) Hal to Falstaff in
Shakespeare's Henry IV, Part.!.!_

I have therefore found it necessary to
deny knowledge, in order to make room for faith.
-Immanuel Kant, Preface to the
Second Edition of The Critique of
Pure Reason

Transcendental Logic, the Transcendental
Dialectic.
In
the
Dialectic
Kant
addresses the principal problems which
have plagued the philosophy he so radically alters in The Critique, and primary
among these problems is whether freedom
exists or not.
I do not think I am
overstepping any sensible bounds if I say
Kant wrote much, if not all, of The
Critique to solve this problem.
Therefore, I should say:
in this paper I
intend to give a brief account of Kant's B
Deduction with a forward glance at the
Dialectic's primary problem,
th'at
of
freedom.

In this paper I intend to give a
brief
account
of
Immanuel
Kant's
B
Deduction.
This
deduction
is
the
cornerstone of the first half of the
Critique
of
Pu re
Reason,
or,
more
specifically, of the section entitled the
Transcendental
Analytic,
the
first
division
of
a
larger
section,
the
Transcendental Logic.. Kant explains his
philosophy
of
"limitation"
in
the
Analytic; this is, simply stated, what we
can and cannot know.
The B Deduction
makes this explanation possible.
But,
caught up in this difficult section, we
often forget the other division of the

34

35

In every
judgement there
is
a
concept which holds of many representations, and among them of a
given representation that is immediately related to an object. (p.105)
It is plain that these judgments are not
in the things outside of me but that they
are in me. In order that I may judge the
objects outside me, I must use my concepts
of those objects.
But it is important
also that I have objects to judge.
More
will be said about this in a moment.
We can abstract all empirical content
from the judgment "the book is large" so
as to discover whether th~re are any a
priori, non-empirical types of judgment
which underlie this judgment. The· statement, therefore, is about a particular
(book) and is affirmative; it is making an
assertion about the book.
What is the
particular (book)?
In this case it is
something (large).
But an affirmative
statement about a particular cannot be
derived from experience, since we have
abstracted from all experience to better
see the nature of a judgment. Therefore,
there. must be certain ~ priori concepts
("functions of judgment") which I bring to
experience so I can make judgments about
it.
Kant states at the outset of "The
Clue to All Pure Concepts of the Understanding," section two:
If we abstract from all content
judgment, and consider only the
form of the understanding, we
that the function of thought
judgment can be brought under

of a
mere
find
in a
four

heads, each of which contain three
moments. (p. 106).
This list Kant calls the
"Table of
Judgments. "
But we have assumed up to
this point that there are objects about
which we can make judgments.
For a
judgment to have validity, there must be
objects to judge. Where did these objects
come
from?
Certainly
not
from
the
· intuition, since it is merely a receptive
faculty, doing nothing more than spatio

�-temporally ordering sensation(s) which
come into it. It is clear that there must
be a "putting together" (synthesis) of the
manifold of the pure intuitions, and that
this synthesis must take place in some way
that my judgments might be valid, so that
my experienc~ might make sense.
The
synthesis, Kant tells us, will have to
take place according to a set of concepts,
which he calls the "Table of Categories:"

1

The same function which gives unity
to the various representations in ~
judgment also gives unity to the
mere synthesis of various representations in an intuition; and this
unity, in its most general expression, ~e entitle the pure concept of
the understanding.
The same understanding, through the same operations by which in concepts, by means
of analytical unity, it produced the
logical form of a judgement, also
introduces a transcendental content
into its representations, by means
of the
synthetic unity of the
manifold in intuition in general.
(pp.112-113)

This table of categories, analogous to the
table of judgments, we bring with us to
experience.
But
how?
We
have
two
faculties,
intuition and understanding
(the home of concepts),
one utterly
passive and the other active, one a mass
of spatio-temporally ordered dots waiting
to be put together and the other a set of
concepts which can only begin activity
when they have something to think (act)
upon,
i.e.
an object.
They must be
brought together so that thinking is
possible. Hence the need for a deduction.
II.

The B Deduction is in two parts. The
first part deals with the synthesis of the
manifold 1
given in ~·priori intuiti.on . in
general ,
and thus for any thinking
being; the second part deals specifically
with those thinking beings who have a

priori sensible forms of intuition called
space and time, us.
We will begin with
the first part.
In the setting out of the need for a
deduction it was clear that a way must be
found for the understanding to unify the
manifold of intuition.
This synthesis of
the manifold of intuition in general, what
Kant calls the "combination," cannot arise
fro~
any combination itself, for that
would be contradictory.
Something must
have been put that combination together,
and from the very concept "combination" we
a re aware of some unity acting upon some
manifold, so we must search for that
higher unity.
Kant says at the outset of section
16:
It must be possible for the 'I
think' to ~ccompany all my representations; for otherwise something
would be represented in me which
could not be thought at all, and
that is equivalent to saying that
the
representation
would
be
imp~ssible, or at least nothing to
me.
This is plain. If I am to become aware of
the "world" around me I must be able to
think about it. The higher unity we are
seeking must therefore be that which
generates the 'I think,' that which allows
me to combine the manifold in general.
Were I not able to do this I would have no
coherent thought; some things would be
"nothing to me."
Kant calls this unity
"The Original Synthetic Unity of Apper- _
ception," or "Pure Apperception."
He
calls also the generating of the 'I think'
an act of spontaneity, and therefore an
a~t o~ the ':1nde4standing, for the intuition is passive.
But pure apperception is also "the
transecendental unity of self-consciousness."
Kant calls it this for two
reasons. First, it is necessary that I.be
coherent enough to attach the 'I think' to
all representations, and I would not be
able to do so if I did not have one
self-consciousness; some representations

would just go flying by my many diverse
selves.
Second, it is a fundamental
principle in Kant that I synthesize before
I analyze.
For example, if I say the
colors of a bowl are red? green and blue,
then I must have al ready synthesized the
representations of those colors with the
bowl (a "given" manifold) in one consciousness.
Any analytic act presupposes
a synthesis, and that synthesis presupposes the unity of self-consciousness, the
combining of the manifold of representations in general.
Pure apperception,
therefore, underlies all thought; it makes
all connected thought possible.
This is
why Kant calls it "the highest principle
in the whole sphere of human knowledge"
(p. 154).
But how does this pure apperception make us capable of knowledge?
In section 17, Kant says this:

object (determinate space, or in this
case, line) , or object in general.
As
Kant
says:
"The
synthetic
unity
of
consciousness is, therefore, an objective
condition of all knowledge" (p. 156). But
how is this determinate object related
back
to
the
synthetic
unity
of
apperception?
The perplexing problem at the outset
of this essay was that we had a table of
judgments but no objects to judge.
Now,
because of the synthetic unity of apperception, I am able through judgment to say
something about a
manifold of given
representations, representations which by
judgment are united into an object.
The
synthetic unity of apperception guarantees
that my judgment will have objective
validity (i.e. be about an object), for it
guarantees the continuity of my self-consciousness, it guarantees my ability to
draw a line.
Therefore, a judgment (a
statement that something 'is') can unite a
manifold of representations, be they a
manifold in general or in particular, and
that judgment brings judged manifold of
representations into self-consciousness to
join other judged representations.
For
this reason Kant calls judgment "the
manner in which given modes of knowledge
are brought to the objective unity of
apperception"
(p.159).
But
there
is
something more here.
We know that we only have twelve ways
we can judge, the table of judgments.
Therefore the given manifold which is
judged must be constituted in such a way
that
it
can
be
judged.
Judgments,
therefore, can only be made of intuitions
(or intuition in general) that have been
determined according to something which
will allow of judgment.
These determinations are necessarily the categories.
Since I have only twelve ways by which I
can judge, it is necessary that the given
manifold (or one intuition) be constructed
by the pure apperception so that I can
judge and think. And I can only judge and
think via the categories. This, then, is
why Kant went to so much trogble to
introduce the table of categories.
This is the conclusion of the first

"Knowledge
consists
in
the
determinate
relation
of
given
representations to an object; and an
object -is that in the concept of
which the manifold of a
given
representation is united."
This means simply that knowledge consists
in the determination of an object, an
object being merely a gathering together
of representations.
But we said above
that . all syntheses of representations
required the unity of self-consciousness,
and therefore it is, as Kant says, "a
condition under which every intuition must
stand in order to become an object for me"
(p. 156). This will become clearer if we
look at his example.
If I draw a line in space, in, order
to keep drawing it (as a line) I must be
conscious of the complete action and each
step involved in it.
If I did not have
the transcendental unity of self-consciousness, I would not be able to bring
the line, or any object, synthetically
fnto being, for I would forget the first
moment of the action even before I arrived
at the second moment.
The transcendental
unity of self-consciousness, therefore,
guarantees the continuity of my· synthetic
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�In other words, that synthesis deals with
intuition in general, with space and time
al ready combined as wholes; it does not
deal with the separate manifolds of space
and time but only with them after they
have become unified. So, something is
needed to synthesize the manifolds of
space and time in the sensibility itself.
This activity Kant calls the figurative
synthesis.
The imagination, which is a part of
the understanding, carries out the figurative synthesis.
Kant calls the imagination "the faculty of representing in an
intuition an object that is not itself
present." This means that the imagina'tion
acts spontaneously to determine intuition
and make it an object, so to speak; to
unite the manifolds of space and time into
one general intuition, making them palatable
for
consciousness.
Since
this
spontaneity is given through the understanding (the source of activity), it is
necessary that the respective manifolds be
combined in accordance with the synthetic
unity of apperception. The spontaneity of
the synthetic unity of apperception is
therefore the same spontaneity which sets
imagination to work on the intuitions.
This, then, is an application of the
categories
to
objects
in
sensible
intuition, and the categories are thus
given objective reality, becoming more
than just mere "forms of thought."
They
are, for us, real.
We have, however, known since the
start of the essay that the understanding
cannot combine the manifold of intuition,
that a concept (having no object) cannot
reach down into the forms of intuition and
combine them. How does the imagination do
i t7 A footnote to the deduction (B 160,
a)
is particularly helpful here.
In the
footnote Kant tells us that he was lying
in the Aesthetic. There he made little of
the distinction between form of intuition
and formal intuition so he could talk of
geometry and such matters. Here, however,
the distinction in important.
Form of
intuition means the uncombined manifold of
representations
which
comes
into
my
"receiving rooms" of space and time.

half of the deduct~on. And although it is
by no means obvious, it is a refutation of
Hume, who said that our representations
were connected merely through habit. But
to even have that connection I must be
self-conscious. And thus Kant has established that our manifold of representations can be connected through judgment in
objects; objects which, due to the synthetic unity of apperception, I can judge
fearing no chidings of "subjectivity." As
Kant remarks at the end of section 19:
Thus to say 'the body is heavy' is
not merely to state that the two
representations have always been
conjoined in my perception, however
often
that
perception
has
been
repeated; what we are asserting is
that they are
combined in the
object, no matter what the state of
the subject may be (p.159).
This leads6 us to the second half of the
deduction.
Why is the
second half of the
deduction necessary?
For Kant, thinking
and knowing are two completely separate
things.
Knowledge
as
such
is
only
possible for us human beings if an object
is given in our sensible intuition. It is
all right if we think a concept that has
no
object in intuition; we can think
anything we
like.
But knowledge
is
something else again.
Since it is clear
from the first half of the deduction that
we are the authors of our experience, it
is impossible that we should know anything
beyond that experience, that we should
know, for example, a "thing in itself,"
something unconditioned by space or time.
Therefore, objects for knowledge must be
given to us in our pure forms of sensible
·intuition, and the second half of the
deduction will concern itself with how
this comes about.
In section 23, Kant speaks of a
thinking
being
who
has
a
sensible
intuition other than ours (not spatiotemporal).
He introduces this being to
show that the synthesis performed by the
pure apperception is purely intellectual.

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Formal intuition means the unity of these
representations, a unity given by the
unity
which
figurative
synthesis,
a
according to the footnote "precedes any
concept." But how?
Space and time as forms of intuition
a re homogeneous.
Since all their parts
are similar, no concept is needed to give
them shape (a shape to space?). They only
need a synthesis, a uniting, and this is
the synthesis performed by the imagination, prior to any concepts.
Therefore
the formal intuition is the groundwork for
determinate intuitions (intuitions through
concepts) within it, such as, to use
Kant's example, the setting of three lines
at right angles to one another from the
same point to represent space. The formal
intuition must underlie even our own
representation of it through concepts.
The activity of the imagination,
spurred by the pure apperception, is thus
the basis of ou~ connected experience.
Since the imagination is the faculty of
representing any object (but in greatest
generality space)
that is not itself
present, and since it determines time
(inner sense), its continued synthesis of
time being the very act through which we
are aware of time itself, it shou1d be
evident that the imagination can go on
indefinitely producing "pictures" for me
to think about. But I do not necessarily
have to think about them. It is true that
the imagination works in accordance with
the synthetic unity of apperception, but
it is certainly not true that I have to
attach the 'I think' to every object in my
experience. The action of the understanding
on
the
sensibility
through
the
imagination
allows
for
my
eventual
empirical consciousness.
I will say more
on this subject in the discussion of the
synthesis of apprehension. But this does
not mean that I must attach the 'I think'
to
every
object
in
that
empirical
consciousness, only to those which I
choose.
This, then, is the full meaning
of
"capable"
in
the
first
analytic
statement of the deduction. The reason I
do not have to say 'I think' about every
object in the room around me is because

the imagination synthesizes without a
concept, but I am capable of thinking an
object through a concept if I please.
This is, I think, the fundamental distinc, tion
between
the
"putting
together"
(without conceptg;)
and the "grasping"
(with concepts),
the two phrases Kant
uses
in
his
general
definition
of
synthesis.
From all this it should be clear that
we can only have knowledge of appearances.
We have no contact with what gives us our
original sensation, the "thing in itself."
To become aware we must think, and the B
Deduction shows us that thinking is an
enormous process.
At the center of the
process, of course, is the task of constituting our own objects
(which are
nothing but appearances, per se), and this
action, enabling our thinking, shuts us
off from whatever the world might be "in
itself." Although thinking in this sense
seems somewhat bleak, it is precisely
because we have appearances that experience is cogent.
They will also be the
basis of Kant's later discussion of the
possibility of freedom.
I will address
this subject in the third section of this
paper. Now, however, we must look at the
final step in the B Deduction.
The
final
step
Kant
calls
the
"synthesis of apprehension."
This synthesis brings us empirical consciousness,
i.e. perception. It is the final stage of
consciousness made possible by the transcendental unity of self-consciousness,
pure apperception.
For this synthesis to
come about it is necessary that space and
time be united by the imagination.
I can
only perceive in space and time, and
therefore space and time must be united
through the figurative synthesis so that I
may become conscious of them as a united
manifold, or formal intuition.
In order
for this to take place, though, the
imagination must be aroused by the original synthetic unity of apperception.
This
original synthesis, though, unites intuition in general according to the categories. Therefore, all our experience will
conform to the categories, and therefore
the categories have been united with

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I'

�More
specifically,
from
the
B
Deduction we know that all experience is
subject to categories and is in time. To
posit freedom, the ability to initiate a
chain of events in this experience, is to
posit something that is not subject either
to the categories or to time; it is to
posit a series of events with an antecedent cause not in experience.
The B
Deduction, however, shows us that we can
never know if this freedom exists, that we
can only know the appearances that we have
constitu~ed.
Why should we posit freedom
at all?
Every event presupposes a
sufficient cause ~ priori, but if we do
not posit this sufficient cause (freedom)
somewhere in the chain of events, there
are only relative causes; in other words,
each cause presupposes another cause for
it which exists al ready.
The assumption
of mere relative cause, of course, is the
same thing as saying that every cause
"just is," and has always existed, that
there is no completeness to any series.
To take the other side of the
argument is to admit that all causes "just
are," and that we are fooling ourselves
when we say that freedom must necessarily
be.
This assumption is merely an attempt
to get some rest.
We cannot go beyond
experience and know anything, so we simply
must be satisfied in saying that the
change in the status of substance has
always been.
To posit freedom means to
destroy cause and effect as the absolute
law of nature, and so the other categories.
As the B Deduction tells us, this
would throw coherent experience right out
the window.
But if we say that there is
no freedom, then we must accept that there
is no sufficient cause for any event.
This denies our first principle.
So we
are right back where we started.
There is, however, a solution to this
antinomy, and the essence of that solution
is in the B Deduction.
For a moment,
therefo~e, we will retrace our steps.
Kant tells us in the B Deduction that
although the synthetic unity of apperception, or transcendental I, is at work in
us, how it works i!:; unknown to us.
How
can we know?
We have knowledge only of

intuition and our experience made possible.
To use Kant's example, if I have an
empirical intuition of a house of which I
become conscious, then it is a perception.
At the basis of this empirical intuition
must be the necessary unity, i.e. formal
intuition of space and time.
The house
must be in space and time for me to
perceive it. But space and time have been
united through the figurative synthesis,
providing the space and time for the
house.
But the spontaneity of the imagination igniting the figurative synthesis
is the same spontaneity of the pure
apperception, which unites intuition in
general according to the categories, and
therefore my experience will conform to
the categories.
It is important to note
here that I have thought the concept
'house' so that the freedom of the imagination to unite space and time into a
formal intuition without a concept is
pr.eserved. This is the connection that we
sought at the outset of this paper, and
the outcome of Kant's B Deduction.
Kant concludes the B Deduction with a
discussion of nature.
It is evident that
we are the authors of nature, that it will
conform to our categories, such as cause
and effect. How, then,. is freedom possible, if all experience must conform to
certain laws, such as cause and effect?
Freedom cannot be freedom if it is in
conformity with laws.
The third pa rt of
this paper will attempt to answer that
question.
III.

What is freedom?
I t is .the ability
to start a series of events, the ability
to be the first cause in that series. But
the
B Deduction
tells
us
that
the
categories condition our experience, and
one of . those categori~s is cause and
effect.
Every event without exception
will have an antecedent cause. If this is
true, freedom is ruled out, for there can
be no end to the series, no first cause.
This
the
the
problem of
the
third
antinomy.

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experience, of things which are objects in
our intuition.
We have, therefore, only
knowledge of our empirical self, the self
that i"be see in mirrors, the phenomenal
self.
Nevertheless, we are undoubtedly
aware of the transcendental I and our
intelligible selves: we are, for example,
the only animals aware of our inevitable
physical end, tbe only animal who constructs
philosophical
systems.
This
awareness is a direct product of the
transcendental I, that "thing in itself"
which fosters our self-consciousness.
It
is, therefore, because of the transcendental I that I have awareness of both a
noumenal self as well as a phenomenal
self.
And it is through this noumenal
self that my faculty called reason is able
to conceive o~ 1
what Kant calls "transcendental ideas."
·
Briefly, "transcendental ideas" are
those things which we use to assert the
completeness of a series, to say "all."
From.what has been said it is evident that
this completeness cannot be given in
experience; for example, there is no sum
total of causes and effects there. But it
is our own faculty of reason, based on the
transcendental self, which strives to
limit the series, even this limit must
necessarily
be
unconditioned.
These
transcendental
ideas,
of
course,
are
necessary to me as an active being; were I
not able to say "all" at times my activity
in daily life would be almost none at all.
It is only because I am able to posit
these ideas, based on the existence of my
noumenal self and reason, that I am able
to act.
One of these ideas is freedom.
For without the assumption of freedom, I
could never assert myself as the cause d:
any series of events, nor could I take
responsibility for my acts.
Necessarily
freedom
must
be
what
Kant
calls
a
"regulative"
principle
rather
than a
"constitutive" principle.
The idea of
freedom cannot contribute in any way to my
knowledge, as do "constitutive" principles, it can only serve as a guide for my
existence as an active being, it can only
be "regulative."
So it must be with all
the transcendental ideas.

How does Kant make the coexistence of
the transcendental idea of freedom and
law-governed experience possible? He has,
in a sens~, already done it once.
In the B Deduction, the unconditioned
transcendental I spontaneously acts upon
intuition
in general
to produce
the
effects that we know as experience, to
create the appearances.
Kant likewise
calls freedom "the power of beginning a
state spontaneously." It is the activity
of something unconditioned which produces·
effects in what we know as experience.
But the B Deduction shows, as has been
said
before,
that
objects
in
our
experience are appearances.
They are not
· "things in themselves."
This is Kant's
solution to the antinomy.
If the objects of experience were
"things in themselves," then we would be
left with the insoluble antinomy.
Since
the "things in themselves" would still be
subject to cause and effect, freedom would
not be possible. But since our experience
is merely appearance, we can posit the
unconditional without contradiction.
And
we can likewise posit our noumenal side as
freely acting with effects only to be
known in the appearances.
We are, after
all, the first cause of those appearances.
It is necessary to point out that
Kant has allowed only for the possibility
of freedom.
It may be, and we will never
know one way or the other, that freedom
does not exist. Kant is careful to remark
that we can always reduce every action
that seems free to a (certainly endless)
series of efficient causes.
But for our
practical life the "regulative" principle
of
freedom
is
indispensable.
It
is
freedom, our connection with the unconditioned in ourselves, which allows for
our appreciation .of beauty
as well.
Freedom, in the end, allows for our
totality as men.
The long argument of the B Deduction
makes freedom possible. On the one hand,
Kant has radically changed philosophy; its
new limitations are clear. He has indeed
ordered it to "leave gormandizing."
But
on the other hand he has preserved its
importance to our practical life as well.

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�see, still catches our eye.
This, I
believe, justifies the enormous labor of
the B Deduction.

He has also saved just a little of its
mystery: the things most important to us,
among them freedom, remain ideas. ·And
their peauty, though perhaps harder to

There is Very Little Poetry in Onions
Dan Farrell

Footnotes
1.

2.

3 .-

4.
'i
i!
'!
,,
:1
I'

5.

6.

I take this to mean "overall"
manifold, rather than particular
manifolds of space and time or
judgements of particular groups of
representations.
A cheap word in Kant meaning just
about anything. I suppose a general
definition to be "things (in a weak
sense) gathered together by any kind
of synthesis."
This is an analytic statement saying
"I must be able say 'I think' about
what I think."
Special emphasis should be placed on
the pure apperception "generating"
the 'I think.' It does not do the
attaching.
All of section 20, read carefully, is
helpful here.
Thus the power of a simple analytic
statement (footnote 3) is revealed.

7.
8.
9.

10.

11.

Page 170, Kemp Smith.
Page 111, Kemp Smith.
There are probably many answers to
this question. The answer- that
follows is the least satisfying.
In Kant, "phenomenal" means things as
appearance, "noumenal" things in the
realm of the unconditioned.
I have glossed over an important
distinction here. Objects in
experience when given as a whole can
be said to be reducible "ad
infinitum." If we are just given a
member in an infinite series;
however, and seek in that series more
members, then ltle must at some point
posit an unconditioned end to that
series.

My thanks to Mr. Carey, Mr. Kutler and Mr.
Lenkowski.

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I have always looked at a poem in a
way that will help me learn what it means.
The poet is trying to say something and
the task of the reader is to reconstruct
the message.
There is a phrase that
teachers introduce early in high school:
"levels of meaning".
I don't know if we
are to think of layers of the onion: of
meaning (each layer or 'level' of the
onion is a whole and it can be eaten
separately) or what.
Please allow me to
pursue this idea excessively.
There is a great danger in looking
too closely at a poem's meaning. The poet
gives -us a garden filled with wonderful
fruits and vegetables, flowers and bees,
mud and bugs, and onions. Now I can go to
this garden and eat all the onions I like
and digest every layer of the tiniest
scallion, but I'll end up with bad.breath
and a very unsatisfied hunger.
I'll
probably step on a few bugs and get
annoyed about the mud oozing between my
toes on my way to the onions (which are in
the center of the garden, of course; think
of where the tree of knowledge of good and
evil was).
But not even mud between the
toes is enough to sidetrack me:
I have
onions to eat.
What is most remarkable
about my careful method of eating o,nions
is that it takes a long time to realize
that almost any layer of any onion tastes
the same as any other.
The cause of my
slow wit in this matter is the· absolute
certainty I have that the onions are the
center of the garden, and if I understand
the onions I understand the garden. There
is no reason for me to think this, but I
still go on eating onions and if they all
taste the same I only assume that my sense
of taste is too weak to discern their
differences.

Happily, by some miracle (magic?), I
now realize my folly arid am willing to
change my attitude toward poetry.
It is
more rewarding to experience poetry as it
is,
instead
of
reducing
it
to
one
manageable aspect.
There is an impulse
toward knowledge that led me to the onions
in the first place.
The basis of that
impulse was the desire to become a better
person.
Perhaps it is best if we forget
Aristotle's "All men naturally desire to
know," and replace it with "All men
naturally desire to improve themselves."
This may not be true, but at least it will
help me experience poetry.
Now I'm ready to discuss poetry as
something that is magical.
Shakespeare, Sonnet #64
When I have seen by Times' fell hand defaced
The rich proud cost of outworn buried age;
When sometime lofty towers I see down-rased,
And brass eternal slave to mortal rage;
When I have seen the hungry ocean gain
Advantage on the kingdom of the shore,
And the firm soil win of the wat'ry main,
Increasing store with loss and loss with store;
When I have seen such interchange of state,
Or state itself confounded to decay;
Ruin hath taught me thus to ruminate,
That Time will come and take my love away.
This thought is as a death, which cannot choose
But weep to have that which it fears to lose.
I -don't know much about what this
means.
This, of course, is good because
I'm trying to get away from that sort of
thinking.
The most obvious and most
interesting thing about this poem is that
it is very difficult to read.
Phrases
like "Time's fell hand,"
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�gaining advantage on the kingdom of the
shore. Once the word 'shore' is mentioned
my attention shifts to it and I see an
ocean clawing toward the shore.
I don't
know what this image is supposed to mean,
but when I read it I'm at the shore where
the poet wants me to be.
It seems that magic in poetry exists
because the poet does not strive to tell
us anything.
He hopes he can show us
something.
He doesn't want. to tell us
that time is relentless; he shows it both
in the rhythm and in the images he causes
us to make.
At the beginning of this
essay I wrote how thinking about meanings
hinders
the
experiencing
of
poe·try.
Meaning is too concerned with words in
themselves to be of any use in poetry.
Poetry is not concerned with the words at
all! What a poet wants to do most of all
is to resurrect a "Gosh, look at that!"
attitude.
He does this by pointing,
suggesting, but not by spelling out. When
it succeeds (and if it is real poetry it
will) it has performed its magic.

cost," and many others are obstructions to
the flow of the poetry. This is probably
due to the lack of short vowels and the
abundance of double . consonants in these
phrases. They are made of words that take
much time to pronounce. These phrases may
seem to prevent any sense of music from
becoming apparent, but this is only true
if the music of a poem is something to be
found solely in sing-song nursery rhymes.
Instead of a flowing rhythm this poem has
a relentless rhythm, slow but invincible.
The images in this poem are not only
mentioned, but shown.
Images are closely
connected to meaning, but there is an
important enough difference between them
so that I don't feel guilty talking about
them.
There are enough examples of
unimaginative writings that have plenty of
meaninq within them.
These writings do
not offer ·a.n -invitation to the reader to
experience~· within the
imagination, the
truth of what is being said. In this poem
we are given a hungry ocean. We are not
told, "the ocean yearns for
"
This is unimportant. The hungry ocean is

The Wreck of Elpenor
P.H. Gagnier
This land was framed without mountains or hills,
But wide, bare, came broken open to the slow sky,
And rolls in moist, humous rows like sea swells
Stilled under wind and sliding clouds, to lie
At length along this road ditch. Sweet with water
And swishing reeds, it breathes its lucent green
On the first steaming mud.
Puddles scatter
The sun among exhumed stones newly clean,
Strewn in cryptic disarray. And here, stretched
out on this pregnant bank, threading the stares
Of crows, redolent unspooling, unstitched,
Grey, I strew a perplexity of prayers.
Thus defective I await my return,
While all around the drinking earth breathes, "Churn."

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Reconciliation in The Bacchae:
Remembering What We Are
Who Are Not Gods But Men
Lisa Eckstrom

of
Dionysus,
gentleness
and
horror
intermingled, and we have seen the limits
by
which
we
differentiate
the
two
disappear.
Opposites by which we define
certain t~rnis become ambiguous.
Thus
Identity (a thing is x and is not y),
Sexuality
(it
is
male
or
female),
Mortality (there is life and there is
death) ,
and
perhaps
of
greatest
consequence, Power (there is strength and
there is helplessness) have become te.rms
whose definitions are uncertain.

For death the gods exact, curbing by
that bit the mouths of men.
They
humble
us
with
death
that
we
remember what we a re who a re not
gods but men. We run to death.
As a prelude to the messenger's tale
of the death of Pentheus, the chorus sings
lines
about
mortality.
Apprehension
builds as we start to see the divine sever
itself
from the mortal.
Perhaps we
realize that we too are earth-born, and
that we are not gods, but men. We shudder
when we hear the chorus sing: "O Justice,
destroy the evil earth-born· sprawn of
Echion ! " because we remember that we are
earth-born as well and share his curse.
We marvel that the chorus has forgotten
that they are earth-born; they sing as if
they are not mortal, even while reminding
us of death. To run to death as votaries
of the god is still to disregard it, and
thereby to disregard the ultimate limit of
mortal beings. When the chorus no longer
identifies itself as human with human
limits, our sympathy is drawn to those who
have human limits:
Pentheus, Agave, and
Cadmus.
Whether one wants to label this
quality in the chorus as insanity, or
religious mysticism, one must agree, that
they see themselves outside many of the
limits by which we define human life:
death,
relationships with other human
beings, and a certain revulsion toward
murder.
We, the audience, begin to feel
our association with the earth-born, with
those who are human still. We grieve.
As the play has progressed, a fusion
of opposites has taken place, and we as
audience have experienced this fluidity in
which one thing is simultaneously its
opposite.
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The audience can no longer
define a character's identity as "he is x
and is not y." We see the identities of
Pentheus and Dionysus fuse to the. extent
that there is only one on the stage, who
is neither Pentheus nor Dionysus, but some
amalgamation of the two.
The Bacchants
see a 1 ion a top the tree , whom we, the
audience,
know to be Pentheus.
The
stranger
has
disappeared.
What
has
happened?
The chorus has identified a
lion as one of the manifestations of
Dionysus; thus the Bacchants see a form of
Dionysus atop the tree.
If the god
Dionysus is in any way atop the tree, he
is residing in the earth-born frame of
Pentheus. The messenger speaks:

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heaven with my master huddling at
the
top ... when
the
Stranger
vanished, there came a great· voice
out of heaven---Dionysus it must
have been--Both the voice of Dionysus, and Pentheus,
are in the aether. Perhaps it is Pentheus
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They do not recognize the voice as
Dionysus'
initially, and they do not
recognize the being atop the tree as
Pentheus. What they see and hear _is the
confusing tormented fusion of the two.
Pentheus has not been seized by the god
suddenly, but instead, the two have been
woven progressively tighter until there
seems to be only one in the eyes of the
Bacchants, and to some degree (in that we
see only one being on the stage) in the
eyes of the audience as ~ell.
This weaving of mind upon mind, limb
upon limb, is analogous to wrestling.
In
wrestling,
two separate entities come
together into some sort of unity.
As
limbs and bodies intertwine it is often
difficult to see the two entities apart
from one another.
Perhaps they never
become one, but in the confusion of their
contortions, the vision of the on-lookers
and perhaps of the participants themselves
is often unable to distinguish which arm
or which leg belongs to which wrestler.
It is in line 400 that Pentheus first
accuses the Stranger of wrestling well
with words.
Pentheus then grapples with
the
bull,
and
then
he
hears
the
messenger's
words
describing
the
activities on Cithaeron.
There is a
progression through which he is both
active and passive, wrestler and listener;
but for Pentheus, listening itself is a
form of wrestling:
the Stranger wrestles
with words.
As
knowledge
increases,
Pentheus must deal with it---the knowledge
is inescapable in its elusiveness.
Yet,
must he wrestle with it? Why could he not
listen to the messenger's speech as a mere
observer, not a wrestler?
Why does he
view his conversation with the Stranger as
a wrestling match? If he wrestles because
he wishes to be in control---is to
observe, not to be in control? Or is to
observe always to wrestle, to somehow come
to grips with one's vision?
~entheus proclaims:
"it is hopeless
to wrestle with this man.
Nothing on
earth will make him hold his tongue."
With each question and reply in the
conversation
between
Pentheus
and
Dionysus, the two have become increasingly

like wrestlers intertwined.
As Pentheus
discovers more about the Dionysiac rites
on the mountain from the messenger and
from
the
Stranger,
he
becomes
more
entangled. We are not sure if he wrestles
with an outside force, or with a dread
fascination emanating from himself.
P~:

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Tell me the benefits that those
who know your mysteries enjoy·,
I am forbidden to say but they
are worth knowing.
Your answers are designed to
make me curious.
No: our mysteries abhor an
unbelieving man.

If Pentheus
is the unbelieving man,
perhaps he wrestles with the believing man
within himself.
But what is this dread
fascination,
from
where
does
this
believing man come?
Perhaps he is that
part of the soul which whispers to us the
unintelligible
rhymes
of
the
eternal
world.
Pentheus proclaims that it is
hopeless because the two are intertwined
in such a way that they can never be
separated without violence and damage:
and yet, with all their writhings and
positionings, the two can never become one
in such a way that they can rest at peace
and
not
be
two
separate
entities
struggling against one another.
There seems to be a peace, transient
though it be, in the dressing scene.
Pentheus
and
Dionysus
begin
to
be
indistinguishable from one another; they
form a knot which is drawn ever tighter.
The distinction between he-who-leads and
he-who-is-led is lost in the confusion.
Pentheus is being prepared as a
victim for sacrifice, as he is to replace
the customary bull (Dionysus).
In being
prepared, he is made to look as Dionysus
looks. He puts on the long flowing robe,
the fawn skin of a Bacchant, and a wig of
long flowing curls (significantly after he
has cut the curls off of the Stranger). He
dances and holds a thyrsus.
This change
in Pentheus is brought about when he
succumbs to the "fascination" which finds
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If opposites can be said to be one in
the world around us, they can only be said
.to be so in their eternal context:
only
divine beings can sustain opposites in
unison. When two opposites fuse within an
earth-born being (which may happen when we
are full of d~vine frenzy, what many might
call madness )
the
earth-born
cannot
sustain them as an immortal can.
In the
confusion he is necessarily ripped apart.
Man's earth-born-ness acts as a curse: it
drags
him down
to
earth where
the
opposites must separate.
Earlier
in
the
play,
when
the
stranger was trapped by Pentheus, he was
replaced with an animal that was one of
the manifestations
of Dionysus.
Now
Pentheus is trapped,
and he too is
replaced with an animal, but only while
atop the tree, only while off the earth,
and significantly, only in the Bacchants'
eyes.
The audience's vision separates
from that of the Bacchants at this point.
Atop the tree, this strange combination of
Dionysus and Pentheus exists.
Once the
tree is cut out from under him, he touches
the earth again and is separated from the
divine. He makes the proclamation:
I am
Pentheus!
He is again identified as
earth-born:
he is mortal and he is
destroyed. Thus, if motion up to the top
of the tree (and motion up the mountain)
seemingly brings the individual up to what
is divine, it concurrently thrusts one
back upon the earth. Movement which would
assimilate one to divinity can only result
in crashing against the ~arth.

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As he has conversed with Dionysus,
and listened to the messenger, he has
begun· to wrestle and merge.
To see the
bitter as not only bitter, but sweet as
well, is to see opposites merge.
When
Pentheus says that it is bitter to see the
Bacchants, but pursues it because what is
bitter is also sweet, can he ,be far from
seeking to understand the god Dionysus,
who is most gentle and most horrible?
Pentheus' fascination pulls him further
and further. Not only is he willing to go
secretly as an observer, but he is willing
to go openly as a participant.
In his
willingness to be a participant, he is not
only willing to see the bitter· as sweet,
but
somehow
to
be
one
with
these
opposites, to be as a Bacchant, that is to
be gentle and horrible.
The unbidden offer to go openly marks
a
change
in
the
conversation.
The
conversation is not such that Pentheus is
asking the questions and Dionysus is
making ·vague
replies as before,
but
instead,
Dionysus
is
leading
the
conversation and Pentheus is making vague
replies.
They have switched roles, or
perhaps are at that intersection where the
two roles meet as one.
When
Dionysus
clothes
Pentheus,
Pentheus begins to lose his masculinity.
His identity is so ambiguous that his
sexuality no longer plays a part in the
definition of who he is. As the beardless
young man puts on the dress of a woman,
and a wig of curls, he is both male and
female (as Dionysus is); he has become
opposites instead of viewing them.
It is
an incredible thing to see that perhaps
male and female are the same; it is more
incredible to. become both.
Going to the
death
scene,
it
is
imperative
that
Pentheus have fused these two opposites
within himself,
for if he is to be
sacrificed as an immortal he must partake
of the eternal world in which opposites
are one. As earth-born, he must .be either
male or female: he cannot be both. Only
to the degree that he is freed from his
limits as a mortal can he assimilate
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only Dionysus can
sustain the opposites of life and death,
which make up the ultimate limits of
earth-born life.
In being sacrificed and
eaten, the god lives.
To be earth-born
means that when one is sacrificed, one
dies.
Pentheus
though
earth-born
is
viewed
as
if he were
the
immortal
Dionysus---ready to be hunted down and
destroyed that Dio~ysus may live.
But
Pentheus is not immortal; he shares the
curse 'of the audience: if he is destroyed,
he does not live.
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earth-born.
Though we may view it, and
begin to realize that life and death are
one . in
the
eternal
world,
we
are
constantly dragged down to earth.
Our
curse as earth-born is to exist and act in
a world in which what is destroyed, dies.
However, the divine world intersects with
ours. It is this fusion that is precisely
confusion.
If we are to understand what
occurs around us, we must have some vision
of this whole, as well as the opposites
which compose it.
If there were no
"whole,'' if there were only opposites, we
could make choices that Euripides seems to
say we a re unable to make.
If power and
helplessness were only opposite, choosing
to be powerful would not also involve
choosing to make oneself vulnerable to
one's
enemies.
The
divine
world
intersects with ours, making the earth
sometimes act as if it were the realm of
immortals, as well as mortals.
If the
"whole" did not make any difference,
choosing to live would not mean willingly
risking death; there could be no power in
deciding to be solely powerless.

'Agave prefers . leading the hunt to
weaving on her loom because she perceives
herself as powerful in the leading of the
hunt.
She is powerful:
she and her
followers fell a tree with their bare
hands, they kill a lion.
Yet her power
stems from her submission to the will of
Dionysus.
Her will does not enter into
decisions concerning her own actions. As
Agave is powerful, she is helpless.
We,
the audience see the fearless hunt-leader
Agave having no control over her own
actions:
we see her kill her son.
Dionysus seems so attractive to women
because he heightens their passivity until
it becomes a power of frightening force:
He lifts them out of helplessness by
making them adore it.
The women are disturbingly passive in
their hesuchia.
They have abandoned any
desire to control their own actions.
Yet
this lack of self-direction yields lack of
worry about self. It frees one from human
fears and restraints; it grants one a
peculiar freedom. This freedom is similar
to the freedom of the insane, a freedom
that one receives when one stops being a
person. It is almost immortal. Power and
powerlessness are interwoven in the women
who are themselves weavers. By giving up
any illusion of human power, they gain a
divine strength, which in the end renders
them powerless and pathetic.
Power
presides
in
Pentheus
and
Dionysus.
-The power of Pentheus
is
earth-born (he is a king); the power of
Dionysus is divine (he is an immortal,
free from human constraint.)
Yet, there
is an aspect of Dionysus which seems the
epitome of powerlessness: ·what sort of
power is there in a god who allows himself
to
not
only
be
priest
{power)
but
sacrifice (powerlessness) as well?
Is
there a correspondin~ sacrificial aspect
to monarchy as well?
In assuming power
over people, one may become subject to
them.
When Pentheus and Dionysus meet, each
tries to assume power;
they meet as
distinctive
representatives
of
the
earth-born and the divine.
Initially,
when Pentheus has Dionysus imprisoned,

The fusion of power and passivity is
especially striking in the women, the
thiasos. As women, before the arrival of
Dionysus, they were helpless.
At their
looms, they had little say in how their
lives were played out. Yet, upon gaining
power in the contact of the thiasos, they
become mighty warriors, who rip apart wild
beasts with their delicate hands, who loot
a city, and rout an army of men.
Yet,
their power emanates from total passivity:
they obey the St ranger as unquestioning
slaves.
They no longer inject their
wishes as human beings into their actions.
They have no nous. The category of right
actions, unless one is entirely submissive
to a voice or god one designates as right
action,
involves
use
of
nous.
The
Bacchants abandon their nous and their
will.
They do nothing to preserve their
individual lives: their unarmed attack on
an army of men who are equipped with
swords and shields shows a bravery that is
a disdain of death.

Pentheus assumes the role of the ·priest
and Dionysus assumes the role of victim:
Pentheus has Dionysus bound and modifies
Dionysus' appearance by clipping his curls
to make him acceptable. He not only views
the Stranger as sacrifice, but would
sacrifice the women's blood as well.
As
Pentheus speaks, the replies of Dionysus
are unclear:
it is the priest's words
that matter, not those of the victim. The
stranger then escapes; it is no longer
certain who is in the position of power
and who is not. A sacrifice is no longer
a sacrifice if it eludes the grasp of the
priest: It has become free.
When Pentheus wrestles with the bull,
he no longer has control over what is
Dionysus---he instead becomes entangled,
becomes one with the immortal beast.
In
the scene that follows, we see Dionysus
and Pentheus share the two principal roles
which in the "whole" a re one: Priest and
Sacrifice. Pentheus becomes the Sacrifice
(Dionysus) which is to be sacrificed by
the Priest (Dionysus). In both
Pentheus
and Dionysus, priest and sacrifice are
one:
as Dionysus prepares Pentheus for
sacrifice by dressing him as a votary of
the god, we see Sacrifice and Priest merge
into a horrible vision in which that which
destroys is the same as what is destroyed.

have beheld opposites that are the same.
We have been lifted higher and higher away
from earth in order that we might have
vision. We have entered the aether realm
of myth.
Yet, we are earth-born, our place is
not above the earth, but on it.
Before
Pentheus cries "I am Pe~theus" we have
begun our descent.
As our vision begins
to separate from the Bacchants we hear the
words with which this paper began:
They humble us with death that we
remember what we are who are not gods
but men.
We remember what we are, as Pentheus does.
Before he was told that he did not know
who he was or what he did: now with much
grief, he knows: he is mortal.
Hesuchia
ends and the knife of the sacrificial rite
runs deep for both Pentheus and ourselves.
We feel pain and it is bitter.
We know
our curse as ge-gones.
If there is some
sweetness in our grief it is riot because
misery and joy are the same, but instead
there is some joy in being able to grieve
deeply.
Our grief offers a path of
reconciliation with ourselves as ephemeral
earth-born beings:
there can be no true
grief
if
the
cause
of
grief
is
simultaneously a cause of joy. There is a
dignity in our grief which is peculiar to
those who cannot live as if opposites were
one, and yet a re required to· do so.
We
remember what we are who are not gods but
men; we are humbled but not humiliated,
for we have our grief, a gentle luxury.
Keats' famous lines come to mind:

If Euripides intends for the audience
to view opposites as one, why do the
opposites sever from each other at the
climactic scene?
Why is our vision as
audience
different
from that of the
Bacchants? They see Pentheus as a lion:
we know that they are mistaken. Why do we
hear Pentheus cry out that he is Pentheus
when he touches the earth if the Bacchants
do not?
As audience we have participated in
this sacrifice to Dionysus as a thiasos.
We receive our directions from the priests
on the stage. To watch is holy sport. We
have become passive listeners:
if our
listening has brought forth a dance it is
a dance of the emotions, being called
forth by the wondrous actions on the
stage. Ours has been a hesuchia in which
to watch something bitter is sweet.
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Notes

translated.by Terri-Ann Hahn
1 Is the poet such a believing man? Do we
wrestle with his words and with his myths?
It seems that he must wrestle with those
very myths which seem to emanate from
himself?

conception of the Artist and his Work?
What is Euripides' motive in choosing the
strange myth of Dionysus?
Why not write
about
Zeus
or
Athena?
Why
present
Dionysus in all his savagery? Why is the
theatre the realm of Dionysus? How does
the poet participate in it? As maker/god?
as audience/man?

2 How is the divine madness of the poet
different from that of a Bacchant? Does
the vision of the poet offer a kind of
freedom similar to the Bacchant?
Does
that freedom reside in the poet or in us,
the receivers of his vision? What is this
freedom and how does it come about?
If myths are some faint image of the
"primordial consciousness of man" what can
it mean for a poet to use them as the
basis of his work?
In myth, he records
this consciousness.
But he often alters
it, or selects some elements and discards
others.
What can this be construed as?
What effect does it have on his own soul
to examine what must be construed as
something like "primordial consciousness"?
Why does Virgil write that Daedalus though
he keeps trying cannot record the image of
his own son?
Why must Daedalus keep
trying?
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"The
legends
of
the
deaths . of
Pentheus and Lycurguas, two kings who are
said to have been torn to pieces, the one
by Bacchanals, the other by horses, for
their opposition to the rites of Dionysus,
may as I have already suggested, be
distorted reminiscences of a custom of
sacrificing divine kings in the character
of Dionysus and of dispersing fragments of
their bodies over the fields for the
purpose
of
fertilizing
them.
It
is
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He must be divine, sitting there opposite
you, your face turned toward his face, as he listens,
to your speech, sounding so sweet, so near, and to
your lovely laughter.
These are the very things which have excited
the heart in my breast to passion. For when I
take even the briefest glance, this voice of mine
yields nothing further,
my tongue has broken down. With only a look
delicate fire burns, running 'round beneath my
flesh, so that my eyes no longer see, my ears
resound with noises.
Yea, sweat pours down over me and a trembling
catches me all over (greener than grass am
I!) so that I appear little short of death,
Agallis-my joy!
But, all this must be borne, since I sit alone.

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This time even Sancho -- Sancho who
dared to endure the fulling-mills; who
inspired by Don Quixote's cry that as a
Knight he is equal to a hundred, attacked
the
Yanguesans;
Sancho
who
charged
furiously at Cardenio the mad man in order
to defend his master from harm -- this
time, the most loyal squire in all the
world, flees, leaving Don Quixote to face
his most perilous adventure, alone.
It is so much easier to understand
why the gentleman in green and the carter
were forced to run; after all they did not
and could not be expected to believe in
Don Quixote as Sancho did -- Sancho, who
not even twenty-four hours before had
declared to the Squire of the Wood that he
loved his master "as dearly as his own
heartstrings"
(as dearly as yourself,
Sancho) and for thi's reason alone could
not think to leave him.
It is true that
Sancho cried like a baby as he rode away,
believing that this time his Knight would
surely perish, but just the same, as his
Master prepared to fight lions, Sancho
urged his Dapple on -- faster and faster.
From the moment Don Quixote sees the
cart coming down the road, he begins to
prepare himself for an adventure.
The
gentleman in green tries to calm Don
Quixote down by telling him it is only
just a cart, and judging from the little
flags which decorate it, this particular
cart must be carrying the property of the
King.
Don Quixote in turn patiently
explains that he knows by experience that
he has "enemies visible and invisible" and
he goes on to say, "I do not know when or
where, nor at what time or in what shape
they will attack me."
Although we may
(along with the
gentleman in green)
see Don Quixote

recklessly challenging a couple of indifferent lions, we know that he himself
believes that he is about to challenge_ the
power· of those relentless enchanters, who
not only have just deprived Don Quixote of
the full glory which was due him in ·his
victory over the Knight of the Mirrors;
but also, and far worse, have deprived him
forever or so it seems from looking upon
Dulcinea. Thus, it seems to us natural at
this point in the history that Don Quixote
is at last driven to prove to these
enchanters, whoever they may be, that his
spirit has not been broken by their
ceaseless and cruel tricks.
Don Quixote
is powerless to lift the spell of the
enchantment from Dulcinea; he is helpless
to turn Sanson Carrasco back into the
Knight of th~ Mirrors; but he can and does
challenge the lions (who are sent by the
same enchanters) in defiance and to show
that his "courage" and his "resolution"
still prevail. At least, this is what we
first assume especially in light of these
cemarKs which Don Quixote makes to Sancho
upun the completion of the adventure:
What do you think of that, Sancho?
Do any enchantments prevail against
true valour?
The enchanters may
indeed be able to rob me of good
fortune;
but
of
resolution
and
courage, that is impossible!
But isn't there much more at stake
here than just a battle between Don
Quixote and his enemy, enchantment? This
is unquestionably the most dangerous of
all his adventures and it is the first and
only adventure since the fulling-mills
wherein Don Quixote recognizes that he may
be utterly destroyed in the attempt.
"If
I die he re ... " he says to SancHo, "You
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always longed to become and might have
become if only circumstance had been
kinder to him.
They are both 50 years
old, both natives of La Mancha, and they
both love hunting. They ride their horses
dressed up in their respective finery -the crucial difference between them being
that Don Quixote rides as a knight errant
and Don Diego de Miranda has never allowed
a book of chivalry to so much as "cross
the threshold of his door."
As Don Quixote faces this gentleman
in green, he is forced_to face up to what
he himself is and what he is not.
He
realizes that life for Don Quixote will
never be, cannot be what it is for the
gentleman in green.
Don Quixote de la
Mancha, Knight Errant, will never be
content with "quiet pointers and good
ferrets."
The gentleman in green tries to
persuade Don Quixote to leave the lions
be, reasoning that the lions mean him no
harm.
Don Quixote answers him in this
way:
"leave every man to do his duty.
This is mine, and I know whether they are
coming against me or not, these noble
lions."
And, clearly, for Don Quixote the
lions do come against him.
He must
challenge them, because he must prove to
himself and to the world that he is not
afraid to die
to die as a Knight
Errant, that is.
Don Quixote, up until
this moment, has held on to the hope that
his madness would some day lead him into
the arms of Dulcinea where his life would
truly begin.
But, he is changed
largely as a result of his meeting with
the man he might have been, the gentleman
in green. No longer will Don Quixote gaze
sadly at corpses, thinking that death.will
soon come to him and that it will be
infinitely more tragic because he has
never really lived. To fight lions is to
proclaim to all that Don Quixote de la
Mancha is living life, is fulfilled, not
in the same way as Don Diego de Ia
Miranda, but finally as a knight errant.
Don Quixote has undergone a vital
transformation. We have lost forever "The
Knight of the Sad Countenance" and we have

The adventure is perhaps most remarkable because Don Quixote is transformed by
it and he knows it.
He " has been so
altered that he declares for himself a new
ame a ·more fitting name -- not because
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errant in general, but because he is in
some way renewed.
"The Knight of the
Lions" ·is not the knight we saw so long
ago by torchlight gazing sorrowfully upon
a corpse -- a figure so striking then that
Sancho was moved to call him "The Knight
of the Sad Countenance." This old title,
according to Don Quixote, "shall hence-·
forward be so transformed, altered, varied
and changed, " and so it seems shall the
Knight himself.
Three other adventures occur in these
chapters: the encounter with the Wagon of
Death; the battle between Don Quixote and
the Knight of the Mirrors; and, lastly,
the meeting with the gentleman in green,
whom Don Quixote calls "The Knight of the
Green coat." Each one of these encounters
helps lead Don Quixote to the Adventure of
the Lions.
I'll try to say in what way,
starting with the last, first:
we are told that the gentleman in
green is a "sensible gentleman of La
Mancha," that he is fifty years old, that
he is wealthy, and that he enjoys hunting
and fishing.
We also hear that he is
fortunate enough to have reached the age
of fifty and still be surrounded by his
wife, children and devoted friends.
He
gives liberally to the poor and is
apparently devoted to his religion.
In
short, he gives such an account of himself
and of his many virtues, that Sancho jumps
down from Dapple and kneels at ,this
gentleman's feet, convinced that he must
truly be a Saint.
In the first moments of their meeting, Don Quixote stares at the gentleman
in green and the gentleman in green stares
at Don Quixote.
The gentleman is amazed
at the appearance of _the knight and
concludes several times that he must be
mad. Don Quixote, after gazing upon this
stranger and after listening to his story,
recognizes that the gentleman in green
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gained "The Knight of the Lions." I hope
that we will attempt to understand better
why this has happened to our Knight and
what it means.
It is my belief that the Enchantment
of Dulcinea, the encounter with the Wagon
of Death, and the Adventure of The Knight
of the Mirrors all have something to do
with this change in Don Quixote, for each
of these adventures compels Don Quixote to
turn his sight inward.
For example, after their encounter
with the Wagon of Death, Don Quixote
informs Sancho how he thinks actors and
authors benefit mankind.
He maintains
that they are at best mirrors which
reflect back to us our actions, our
thoughts, ourselves
"Indeed" says Don
Quixote "there is no comparison which
presents to us more truly what we are and
what we ought to be than plays and
players."
It is shortly after this, indeed, it
is in the very next adventure that Don
Quixote and Sancho encounter two actors,
namely,
Sanson Carrasco
and
Sancho's
neighbor, Tome Cecial -- two players cast
in
the
roles,
respectively,
of
a
forlorn-in-love knight errant and his
squire.
Sancho and Don Quixote , as they
gaze upon and converse with the The Knight
of the Mirrors and his squire, get a good

look at themselves and perhaps it is for
the first time.
Don Quixote not only finds himself in
battle with a faceless knight who refuses
to reveal himself; but, worse yet, the
tunic of this faceless knight is covered
with a thousand tiny mirrors. It must be
supposed and imagined that as Don Quixote
gazes upon his adversary, he sees his own
image reflected back to him a thousand
times or more.
This paper began by accusing poor
Sancho of unfaithfulness. But what of us,
the faithful readers of this history?
Would we remain beside Don Quixote as the
cage door is opened? If Sancho could not,
Sancho who in a sense personifies all the
tenderness and faith which grows in us as
we read and reread the adventures of this
knight, then we, lesser friends than he to
Don Quixote, certainly we could not.
We
say we believe (some of us do at least!)
just as Sancho professes to believe -- but
would our faith stand up to lions?
I
doubt it.
Don Quixote cries out to the
carter who is desperate to get his mules
away before the lions are released, "Oh
man of little faith."
I am afraid that
Don Quixote would be forced to say . the
same to us. But, in turn, I would like to
ask him, what must we have faith in so
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Ta-pocketa, Pocketa, Pocketa ...
Moliere, Thurber and the Comic Idea
Fritz Monsma ·

love is not really compatible with a
message. I see that in Tartuffe there are
characters on all sides of the villain,
that they have all relationships to him.
None of them can stand against his
villainy. What message can there be here,
unless it is that chaos rules? I feel the
play mock me when I scrutinize it and try
to find its answer to the problems it puts
forth.
George Meredith wrote "An Essay on
Comedy", and in it put forward Moli~re as
the finest comic poet.
His theory was
that comedy is a kind of medicine for
society, a psychiatrist's couch on which
an entire culture can lie at once.
His
essay is not correct, but .it is a good
first step to understanding Moli~re.
I
want to borrow his idea, distend it a bit,
and give my account.

" .•. To
hell
with
the
handkerchief,"
said Walter Mi tty
scornfully.
He took one last drag
on his cigarette and snapped it
away.
Then
with
that
faint,
fleeting smile playing about his
lips, he faced the firing squad;
erect and motionless, proud and
disdainful,
Wa~ ter
Mi tty
the
undefeated, inscrutable to the last.
James Thurber, "The Secret Life
of Walter Mitty"
Moli~re's comedies are enigmas to me.
They are well turned and temperate. Their
strongest effect is perhaps to make me
wish for more urbanity.
I have seen a
hundred plays and movies which made me
· laugh more than Tartuffe did.
But I do
not want to say that Moli~re's plays were
no~ written for comedy.
They are not a
belly-laugh, but rather a slow grin.
I
can not say either that they have a great
dramatic power.
Yet at their best they
are engaging theater. Set against funnier
and more gripping plays these works fail.
But on their own terms they succeed.
I should ask whether these plays have
a meaning.
I will tell you that I cannot
find one. They seem, first, to be timely
plays.
They were written for Louis'
court, and I have a sense that pa rt of
them stayed there.
Perhaps these courtly
plays do not speak to humanity. Tartuffe
does not question whether . the life of
Tartuffe is a fine or base one.
This
problem should interest us, but this play
is
rather
a
warning
against
false
Christians.
That warning is not so
pertinent
now as
it has been.
My
intuition, secondly, tells me that Moliere
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There is a flatness to the characters
in Tartuffe and The Misanthrope.
They
are, in particular, given to speaking in
universals. Dorine says,
"They whose own conduct is most
ridiculous are always the first to
slander others."
A real human being, with ordinary feelings
of ambiguity, might say the same thing,
but not with so many superlatives.
The
people in Moliere' s plays make a strange,
positive race. Sweeping statements are in
their mouths constantly, like an accent.
This brings them down a bit in our eyes.
They are less than we are, not having
thought so carefully about things as to
have our reservations. It pushes them up,
too, this confidence, but as plastic
figures.
Having abstracted the.l,.r speech
from the ordinary human mix-up,
the
speakers become
abstracted
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universals iIJ their talk begin to make
them suggest opinions dressed in costume'
and strutting across stage.
At times they are like animated
placards with the titles of the plays
written on them: the miser, the impostor,
the misanthrope. We are not very often in
the dark about the kind of person we are
seeing on stage, what sort of title to
give him or, usually, what is wrong with
him. We t·cust our assessment, and Moliere
never betrays that trust.
We are not
forced to fill in the man behind the mask.
The interaction· of these characters
is balanced and inconclusive. They circle
.one another like porcelain ballerinas on
. top of a music box. It has been said that
if the curtain were to rise again after
the fifth act of The Misanthrope, the play
could quite naturally continue for five
more,
and
end
in
the
same
place.
Philinte' s last line, ·and the play' s last
is;
"Come madam, let us leave nothing
untried to deter him from the
design on which his heart is set."
He was making the same attempt when he
spoke his first line.
Alceste has fumed
through five acts, and his one action is
that he has broken with Celimene. He may
stay away from her, al though he has not
been constant in his resolve.
If he does
stay away, I suspect he will find another
to replace her. He will not go off to the
wilderness.
As ce"lim~ne points out, he
always wants to be contrary, to stand out
and above by moral wrath. He will stay to
argue with Philinte about leaving.
Philinte and Alceste bracket the
central issue of the play.
They are the
two extremes of stoicism in the face of
hypocrisy and vice.
The Misanthrope and
Tartuffe are full of this pattern. Elmire
is an upper class woman.
She is sane and
resourceful concerning Tartuffe, but she
brings herself down with blackmail, and
she is, in the end, ineffectual.
Dorine
is a servant. She too is resourceful, and
deceit and conniving seem to sit easily
with her.
But het: low estate keeps her
out of the family.
She, of all the
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mover, and yet she can not draw the
respect among the members of Organ's
household that she needs to bring about
the coup.
She alone is detached enough,
during the darkest hour near the end of
act five, to be sardonic.
Her sarcasm is
a sign which shows us that, even if she
had been successful, she would not have
made a
satisfying end to the play.
Moli~re's bourgeois audience ought to have
seen that such people could not be counted
on to solve their problems.
Damis is a
righteous, guileless youngster.
Organ is
an old man, once sensible, and with an old
man's
honest
concern
with
religion.
Tartuffe plays these two against each
other skillfully.
Middle-aged Cl~ante is
a mean between them, self-possesed and
sane.
He has no actions, only staid
words.
These
characters
change
only
superficially in their play.
They are
unable
to
resolve
the
problems
in
themselves or between themselves.
In The
Misanthrope the actors turn around on
another in circles that are always the
same size.
In Tartuffe the circles get
smaller as Tartuffe leads the players down
into the gutter.
Having said this much about Moliere's
style and the for:m of his plays, let me
give a short summary of George Meredith's
"An Essay on Comedy".
Much of the essay
is about particular societies and their
comedians. A culture must have two things
to support true comedy.
First, it must
have a regard for common sense,
and
second, a . near equality between its men
and women. Such a society will foster the
comic, and he will repay them by giving
them more of the heal th of common sense,
and by pushing further the equality of
their sexes. When the comic has these two
things, the more sophistication among his
people, the better.
It
is this that
provides fodder for his wit.
The folly
that comes with high culture is his meat.
His
spirit
loves
to
expose
all
presumption:
aged
coquettes,
poor
relations full on the dignity of a noble
name.
He is not simply interested in
jokes.
He must avoid the bacchanal of
hearty laughter as much as the stern face

a moment that oqr airs can survive in the
face of the harsh world, and, turninq
about,
shows us the reality of this
harshness.
In its lowest form, comedy is cute;
it is tiny puppies with huge eyes.
It· is
an oxymoron where we simply posit that the
lesser is the stronger. The cute thing is
something that does i:iot threaten us, to
which we attribute a certain superiority,
that is, a superiority to what does
threaten us. Norman Rockwell once painted
a pinafored black schoolchild, off to her
first day of unsegregated kindergarten,
surrounded by a
guard of the state
militia.
Our hearts are drawn to the
little girl; we see goodness of heart
juxtaposed to strength of arms. We cling
to goodness of heart; the world would be
easier on us (so we imagine, since we all
feel
some
confidence
in our heart's
feelings) if this were truly the stronger.
This is a simple positing of what is
contrary to fact, a static act of will.
Hence what is cute does not cause the.
mental flipflop which would make us laugh.
True comedy gives us a reason to
embrace the small.
Whatever the housing
it comes in, comic wit always contains a
seed of grace or cleverness that truly
touches our soul. We laugh happily at the
cleverness
of
a
man
outwitting
his
bullies. We laugh sadly at a man when his
quirks, full of familiarity, stand up
while
surrounded
by
the
grand,
the
powerful, and the sensible.
Chaplin's
film Modern Times has many examples.
Chaplin is harried by the assembly line he
works on; he must turn bolts before they
go past him on the belt.
We laugh for
cleverness when he, being chased around
the line by a hulking co-worker, angry at
some
misdemeanor
that
Chaplin
has
committed, points to an unturned bolt on
the conveyor, so that the man must scurry
back
to
twist
it before
it passes
altogether. Chaplin has beaten the man on
his own ground, and turned the man's
machine against him. For a moment we see
justice.
In the next moment though,
things
have
turned,
and
Chapl.in
is
chastised for his running amok.
We laugh

of puritanism.
He wants to deflate
pomposity, and through his characters to
puncture his audience. But he never wants
to take his victims down below common,
dignified humanity.
It is. not poverty
that is ridiculous, but poverty trying to
be what it is not.
It is satire that
makes its targets contemptible, and this
office will be left to the satirist. The
comic is more like a man who opens his
oven door too soon on a ·scuffle, only to
discover later the nobility of soggy eggs.
If true comedy can find its deeper mark,
it will purge our lunacy and bolster in us
a hearty, fraternal love for our fellow.
·
I do not think that this explication
of comedy is right.
But the idea that
comedy is medicinal may help us understand
. Moli~re. .
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Comedy has never had much respect for
common sense.
Meredith cites Don QUixote
as an example of the comic. I, too, agree
that it is a fine instance.
Meredith's
formula would say that we laugh at Don
QUixote because of his idiocy, but we
respect his humanity.
I do not want to
discuss the novel here, but I would say
that we delight in his aspirations rather
than his vulgarity, and have scorn for the
Duke and the Duchess for their cruel,
wrongheaded
love
of
common
sense.
Meredith has comedy take down its victim
and
then
embrace
him
in. his
naked
embarrassment, like a man who laughs a
ruddy, joshing laugh with his son because,
even though the son is ridiculous, the
man's love for him does not diminish.
Meredith asks a
lot from the comic
audience.
I think we revel in folly, and
take delight in the proper sort of lunatic
because we wish his idiocy would triumph
in life.
There is a theory that says that
humor comes from the shock to the mind
when it is presented with what seems like
a weighty idea, but which we almost
immediately see is an empty.notion. This
explanation, which is as true as any I
have heard, tells us why comedy is so
closely
connected to joking.
Comedy
fosters the airs we put on, and our
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feeding machine (designed to eliminate the
inefficient lunch break) .
The mac.hine
pours soup down Chaplin's front, feeds him
bolts, spins an ear of corn in his mouth
at tremendous speed, and, after each of
these, wipes his mouth rather bluntly with
a sponge. Chaplin's face lets us see for
a moment that familiar inefficiency is
better than efficiency.
We might hope
that there would be such strong evidence
whenever the productive spirit tries to
rub out one of our homey pleasures.
We
laugh again, mournfully, when we see
Chaplin in the bathroom at the plant,
sneaking a cigarette, and next we see a
huge video screen, lighting up with the
face of ~is employer, which orders hiif!
back. to work..
Such a plea!?ure, obviously
enjoyed, would have been
triumph for us
if it had been allowed. Finally, we laugh
when, running out of the plant away from
his angry superiors, he stops at the
time-clock to punch out, and, running back
in having found the police outside, he
stops to punch in.
He maintains his
flustered
life even while he is so
painfully
under
the
thumb
of
his
methodical employers. In each case we see
for a moment an o·cder that we think is
superior
in
action,
and,
almost
immediately, the power of what makes that
order no more than a wish.
Meredith mentions exposing ancient
coquettes as stuff for comedy. But we all
would like to see age defied, and an
innocent love of frippery last.
This
desire, followed soon by the truth, makes
better comedy than the truth alone.
In
the movie version of Gone With the Wind
the dashing Rhett Butler hears a noise
when Mamie, his old, overweight black maid
walks by.
"Mamie", he says, "what's that
rustling sound?" Mamie lifts up her black
cotton skirts to show that she is wearing
what was a present from him; a red taffeta
petticoat.
We can not supress a smile.
We do not laugh at this woman's folly. We
laugh at her wonderful impudence in the
face of fat and old age.
James Thurber is perhaps the great
master of this, the funniest of the forms

of -comedy.
There
is a
story about
himself, breaking his glasses and not
going to get them fixed for three days
because he .is so pleased to be able to see
hazy and strange objects while walking
down ordinary streets. There are several
stories about words that get twisted in
the mouths of foreigners or colored maids.
Thurber is usually sad at the end of the.
story, to have found out that what sounded
weird and macabre
is
actually quite
mundane, and sadder still if the wayward
tongue has gone and can not slip again.
Above all there is The Secret Life of
Walter Mitty.
I can find no simpler
example of what I mean by comedy. Mitty's
valor in the face of all reality is truly
touc;;hing,
and his wild thoughts
and
attention to the least detail of the ·
cliche's of heroism are endlessly funny.
There is a third, more sophisticated
kind of comedy, and this is where Moliere
lives. The mental turn-about is made with
bulkier things than it was in the last
form, and the transition can not be made
so deftly. The essential discrepancy here
is between our life inside the theater and
our life outside it. Outside the theater
we have a somber piety towards religion.
Inside we see how religious men can betray
us. Outside the theater we sometimes feel
a righteous spleen at hypocrisy.
Inside,
we see spleen with its pants down, we see
how self-serving it can be. This form of
comedy does not aim at truth: the poet is
not a muckraker.
It wants to shake our
sensibilities, to see if it can knock off
the crust of respectability that grows
over the merely old, or the mask of
misanthropy or humble piety that
is
sometimes worn over vanity or greed.
When this sort of comedy is impish,
it is like the following scene from the
Marx Brothers' movie, A Night at the
Opera:
Harpo, the mute, honking brother,
is approached by a bum, who asks for help
tow a rd a cup of coffee.
Ha rpo reaches
down into his clown pants and pulls out a
steaming cup of coffee and a saucer, and,
handing it to the bum, walks away.
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·typewriter was delivered to her by mistake
(sample dialogue;
"Oh no George,
my
virginity is a priceless thing to me.")
The
family
manufactures
candy
and
fireworks, and prints up leaf lets which,
by happenstance, are filled mostly with
quotations from Trotsky (God is the state.
The state is God.) Of course, much of the
play's humor comes from a juxtaposition of
the two families. At times the philosophy
of the play seems to be the title's; that
you
can't
take
it
with
you.
But
characters in the comedy say things like;
"Five years ago I just wanted to have fun.
I used to think that was enough, but now I
just don't know". The work never decided
the question. What it does do is present·
the audience with the possibility of
living to h~ve_fun.
(Trouble is taken to
show that it would be poss lb le for this
family to live outside of the theater.)
The absurdity of this play comes from its
showing the achievers on the bottom,
stripped
of
the
respectability
that
America had given them.
The sting of it
comes from the possible superiority, and
even stranger the possible existence, of
this situation.
Tartuffe is similar.
Its ending,
where the king takes the role of God, must
be taken as ironic.
The play's true
ending is that Orgon is sent to prison and
his family to the gutter.
Moli~re shows
us a man who uses piety to disinherit an
upperclass family.
It shows us how piety
can be everything that its reputation is
not. It is true, or at least very likely,
that Tartuffe shows us not what Moli~re
thought was possible, but what he thought
was a common occurance.
Tartuffe is a
black comedy, and its wit suffers for
this.
The Misanthrope is a working model of
court society.
The characters may seem
hollow, and a few struts may show, but it
helps
us understand ho~ this
rather
spurious confederacy works.
Hypocricy is
essential to Alceste.
It is what he
craves most, and he is willing to squander
a duke's ransom losing a lawsuit so that
he can rail_ ag.ainst it.
He admits to

(although this is perhaps what makes us
laugh).
Everybody
knows that that bum
doesn't want coffee.
He knows, though,
that if he asks us to help him to a pint
of Thunderbird, he won't get his dime. We
understand him, and he us.
But we will
nonetheless play the game. The comedy in
this
scene
bullies
a
thoughtless
convention.
Meredith mentions many times that the
equality of women is important to the
comic spirit, but he never says why. The
reason is, I think, that women desenfe
equality in many ways, but do not get it
because
of
the
empty
traditions
of
society.
This is perhaps why Moliere
makes the most sensible characters of both
Tartuffe and The Misanthrope female. This
idea does· not seem comic today.
This is
because women have
all but achieved
lequality. Meredith did not see that it is
essential_ that women be nearly but not
quite equal, so that comedy could be made
out of the discrepancy between good sense
and habit.
Twenty years ago a successful comedy
might have been made merely by having
black actors play white roles, and white
black.
The laughs might have come from
the seeming absurdity of the situation,
but the sting would have come from its
plausibility.
Now that the lie that
blacks are an inferior race has been
exposed this comedy would have no punch.
Nor would it have had an effect when
blacks were fully slaves.
Only if the
question of black equality were loose and
stirring up trouble in society could the
idea be the basis for a comedy.
George Kaufman and Moss Hart's comedy
You Can't Take It With You is about the
engagement bf the son of the president of
a respectable New York City business to a
secretary at that firm.
The young women
is the sanest member of a somewhat lunatic
family.
The patriarch of the family
spends most of his time playing darts and
going to university commencements.
The
mother has, at the start of the play, been
writing her own plays for eight years,
since it has been that long since a

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Orgon that he has no gre.at taie.nt for
poetry.
Yet he can not bear tci .be
anything less than absolute judge of
anything, and when he is absolute judge,
he condemns.
Orgon' s sonnet is not so
very bad, nor Alceste's rustic ditty very
good. But, having been asked his opinion,
he can not restrain himself.
Philante says he expects no good
qualities from men.
If this were true he
could have no friends, or perhaps no more
among men than among wolves.
But he is
peculiarly affected by his contrapositive,
Alceste. He is bent on disuading him from
his retreat into the desert. He would not
feel this compulsion unless he thought
Alceste a man of worth. He is attached to
Alceste's forthrightness.
This virtue
engages him; it is a standard py which he
hopes he can square himself and
(or
perhaps, even in his own mind, in spite
of) his leaky views.
These two friends need one another
reciprocally
and
serve
one
another
admirably.
Celim~ne
is
a
delight
to
the
audience.
Her gossip scene with the two
marquis is perhaps the high point of the
play.
Comedy was made to endorse such
frippery. The audience can indulge itself
there. . It is no wonder that Celim~ne is
the hub of the circle ·of the people of
this play, that she p.ot only pulls in
Alceste, but most of the other men and
their hangers-on.
She
is what high
society offers; beauty, spritly talk and
clever slander.
She indulges herself
knowing that she, too, is a target for
gossip; her libel comes from a true

sportsman's spirit.
We bear ludicrous
society for her refinements.
The Misanthrope is a white comedy.
It
showed
Louis's
court
how
shaky
compliment and insult are as pillars of
society.
It took their code of conduct
and broadcast that it was farcical.· The
joke is that the loudest opponent of
hypocrisy lives a life of utter falsehood.
And Celimene, the great magnet of the
court, does her entertaining mostly by
putting others down. By this account, one
could almost think that Louis's court
could throw away its pompous idea that an
insult is a grave thing.
I should think
that a member of high society would come
away from the theater, having seen The
Misanthrope, ready for a little airy and
innocent gossip.
He would, however, have
to fear a law suit. Like the bum and his
cup of coffee, society will never say what
it really wants, nor tell the truth about
what hold~ it together.
The sad ending to the play has to do
with Celimene. She deserves something for
being the spectacle that draws the crowd.
What she deserves is what she has at the
opening of the play; a troop of adoring
men. The men who want to live the life of
the court ought to be willing to share the
main attraction. But no man in this play
is willing to have a part of Celimene' s
,affections.
They stay only as long as
t.hey have some. hope of getting them all.
In the end, they all try to damn her to a
solitary life.
At any party, the band
gets to drink free.
They are, after all,
providing the entertainment.
The same
principle should hold for Celim~ne.

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�A Note on the Cover
In "Kepler and the Mode of ·vision," in theJuly, 1980, issue of The St. John's
Review, Curtis Wilson wrote:
Melancholy
is
pictured
in
curer's famous engraving of 1513 or
1514, the Melencolia .!· Here we see
a
winged,
presumably
celestial
being, staring fixedly, evidently in
despair.
The scene is lit with an
eerie light from the moon, a comet,
and a lunar rainbow.
Strewn about
in bewildering disorder are the
tools of geometrical and architectural
construction.
She,
the
celestial being, is afflicted, we
surmise, with a sense of spiritual
confinement,
of
insurmountable
barriers
separating her
from a
higher realm of thought.
Durer's
conception
of
that
highest
realm
is
presented
in
another engraving which he made at
the same time as the Melencolia, and
distributed with it as its appropriate counterpart:
St. Jerome in his
Cell.
Here
Jerome,
comfortably

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seated in his warm, sunlit cell,
which he shares with his contented
animals, is absorbed in his theological work.
Even the skull looks
friendly.
Jerome's
incorporation
into the strictly mathematical projection of our perspectival system,
though it reveals his contentment,
in no way reveals the secret of it,
which may remain for some of us
inaccessible •••
For all we know, the perspecti vi ty revealed by the fact that we
opine, and that opinion is not
knowledge,
may
be
the
correct
perspective.
In
any
case,
our
perspectival viewing reveals a world
into which we, along with others,
are launched as essentially equal
citizens.
We
recognize
others,
equally with ourselves, as potential
measures of the truth.
The claims
of others call us out of our
particularity into discourse, into
the search for Right Opinion. This
is a category unknown to skeptics, a
human category revealing both our
poverty and our power.

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�CONTENTS
PLATO'S FRIENDSHIP

1

ON SHAKESPEARE'S SONNET LXXI

Laurence Berns

11

THE GENESIS OF MODERN SCIENCE IN GALILEO'S
CONCEPT OF MATHEMATIZABLE NATURE

Pierre H. Gragnier

13 -

ON THE NATURE OF CONES AND CONIC SECTIONS

Michael Landry

-20

SUBSTANCE IN BOOK VII OF THE METAPHYSICS

Cover:
POINT OF TRA NQUILITY by M o rris Lo uis (1 912-1962). 1958, A cry lic.
Photo courtesy of Hirshhorn Museum and Sculpture Garden ,
Smithsonian Institution , Washington , 0 . C.

Llffey Thorpe

Lisa Tomasi

26

A TRANSLATION OF VALERY'S ''PALME"

John Tracy

30

THE BREATH OF KINGS: ON THE TRAGEDY OF
KING RICHARD THE SECOND

Jonathan Antonio Edelman

33

A NOTE ON THE MATTHEW PASSION

Elliott Zuckerman

43

NO EXIT
A TRANSLATION OF SARTRE'S HUIS CLOS

Wendell Finner

47

IN THE WAKE

Andrew J. Krivak

24

THE TRESTLE -

Andrew J. Krivak

25

CITY BLOCKS

Richard E. Miller

29

SHORT STORY

Liz Waldner

42

POEM

John S. Carnes

46

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St. John 's College Press
St. John's College,
Annapolis, Maryland

;

WILLING BUT WEAK

Poetry

�ENERGEIA: The activity in which anything is fully itself.

STAFF
Kathleen Bergren
Ann Burlein
Barbara Cooper
Christian Holland
Susan Maguire
Martin Marklin
Richard Miller
Alexandra Mullen
Joe Sachs
Merle Sokolik

Plato's Friendship
Liffey Thorpe

that I went to a college that required all
its freshmen to study one year of Greek.
But my choice to continue with the language, after the external compulsions to
do so were removed,
stemmed from my
conviction that I
could not befriend
Plato, which I very much wanted to do,
unless I could enter and inhabit his
world, as I believed I could only do by
learning his language.
That was twelve
years ago, and on good days I can almost
believe that I have entered, and do
inhabit Plato's world,
if only as a
resident alien.
I should say, I think, that while I
have come to believe that a deep acquaintance with Plato cannot be achieved without
Greek, knowledge of Greek by no means
guarantees
understanding,
much
less
friendship.
And I am also aware that
there are many people who read the dialogues in translation only, who deal
better with the philosophical issues in
them than many who read the dialogues in
Greek --and I include myself. Still, it's
one of those academic oddities, that while
very few people would ever think of
devoting themselves to Dante, or to Lady
Murasaki,
or to Homer or Aeschylus,
without knowledge of the author's languages, not a few people who have, .at
best, a passing-fair familiarity with the
Greek alphabet, write books and articles
on Plato, and on Aristotle, every day.
And in light of this, I shouldn't be
surprised, though I often am, at how often
Plato's
dialogues
are
discussed
with
little or no reference to their dramatic

There are two kinds of things that I
want to talk about this afternoon. First,
I want to describe for you some of the
reasons I have had for befriending--and
being befriended by--Plato. This may make
the afternoon somewhat more personal than
those who asked me to speak intended. But
I will try to compensate for this in the
other thing I am planning, that is, to
demonstrate some of the particular ways in
which reading Plato's dialogues in Greek,
rather than ·in translation, can make a
difference, a difference not only in how
one apprehends Plato's thought, but even
sometimes, in what one apprehends.
But I assume-that most of you already
believe at least some of this, that
whenever possible, it is preferable to
read an author's works in that author's
language, rather than in translation. It
is one of those widely circulated opinions
that translation means sacrifice, if not
. complete
sacrifice
of
meaning,
then
sacrifice of a good deal of an author's
sense.
Still, I know that I am usually
curious about just what this sacrifice
entails in the case of a particular
author.
I would like, for instance, to
have a sense of the sense of Dante's
Inferno, or of Lady Murasaki's Tales. And
so it is on my mind today to try to convey
to you some of that "sense of the sense"
of Plato, what the experience of approaching Plato's thought through his language
may be like.
Let me first explain how it was I
began to read Plato in Greek. It is true

Liffey Thorpe is a former student on the Annapolis campus. She is now teaching at
Earlham; this talk was first delivered before that community November 3, 1982.

1

�and linguistic features, as if Plato's
meaning could be apprehended quite apart
from the particular dramatic contexts with
which he chose to give form and shape to
that meaning. And yet, people who do not
experience Plato in his language rarely,
if ever, feel that a distinction between a
dialogue's logos- -what is said--and its
erga- -what is done, between the matter and
the manner of matter, is a useful, or even
possible distinction to make.
Let me begin, then, by explaining
something of the provenance of my relationship with Plato.
I th ink you know
that last month our freshmen class read
the Lys is in Humanities.
The Lysis was,
for many,
their first encounter with
Plato. And I got to thinking, as we were
reading it, and as thoughts of this
lecture began to loom, that it had been
almost exactly twelve year s since I had
read a dialogue for the first time. I was
then a freshman at St. John's College, and
the dialogue was not the Lysis, but an
even shorter work, the Ion.
But St.
John's made up for the brevity of that
first
encounter by
requ1r1ng us,
in
subsequent weeks, to read as wel 1:
the
Apology, the Cri to, the Euthyphron, the
Phaedo, Theaetetus, Sophist, Parmenides,
Timaeus, Meno, Gorgias, Phaedrus, Symposium, and the Republic.
You could say
that St. John's tried harder to Platonise
its freshmen than Boswell did to Johsonise
his land. And you might also expect that,
given
this
immersion-theory
of
platonisation, it would have been surprising had my affection for Plato failed to
take root.
But my first
impressions of the
dialogues were pretty inauspicious, as I
·rememher them.
And the marginalia that
litte r ~y first volume of Plato's dia logues c nf irm that I was, on the whole,
unenchanted by Sokrates, nonplussed by the
bizarre conversations he habitually struck
up with anyone he happened to run into,
and annoyed--as people who don't under stand what they are reading.
I wanted to
believe that Sokrates was no fool, because
people whose opinions I trusted seemed to
think he was not.
But secretly, I was
convinced that Sokrates suffered from

having been born before most people had
had time to figure most things out.
After a while, we moved en classe to
some
of
the
headier
dialogues:
the
Parmenides and the Theaetetus.
I didn't
know what epistemology was, but I did
begin to think that Sokrates was getting a
lot smarter.
I enjoyed the third-man
argument, what I understood of it .
And
al though I thought it odd that crates of
pigeons and wax tablets should occur to
anyone as useful models of cognitiveretrieval systems, I wasn't sure I could
come up with anything better.
It struck
me that human error was not so easy to
explain, that how most people know things;
and how they manage to make mistakes about
the things they suppos~dly know, were
questions worth thinking about.
So I was
partialiy converted, though not yet what I
could call a friend.
I mentioned that by design of the St.
John 's curriculum I was, at the same time,
taking a year of Greek . And this is where
you will see how I finally capitulated and
became a friend and admirer of Plato's.
Learning Greek at St. John's might
best be described as the "hit-or-miss"
theory of language learning. It is college
policy that every teacher at St. John's
should, at one time.or another, teach all
the courses of the curriculum. As it
happened, my Greek teacher was still
trying to achieve detante with the first
declension on the day classes began.
(I
might add that, despite this, Bob Anderson
was the most important teacher of my
life.)
I didn't learn much Greek that
year, but for some reason I liked it, and
that winter I decided to · apply my very
rudimentary skills to Plato's Cri to--the
choice was merely fortuitous, as the Crito
was the only Greek text I then owned .
If I have anything true to say to you
today, it is that nothing on earth more
effectively slows down one 's ability to
read a complete sentence than Greek.
If
you want to experience deliberate, painstaking,
incremental
comprehension,
the
sort where, midway through a sentence
you've forgotten what was said at the
beginning, and could almost believe that,
1 ike one of Zeno's paradoxes, no matter

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how much you cover, you will never reach
an end-~try reading something in Greek.
I spent a month reading the first
page of the Crito. And I was more acutely
aware of what I was reading than I had
ever before been.
I became aware of how
deliberately Plato had chosen words, words
whose
connotations
were
often
highly
apposite to the visible situation of
Sokrates'
incarceration
and
imminent
execution.
In particular, I came to one
exchange between Sok rates and Cri to that
gave me special trouble. (You may remember
that the Crito is the dialogue in which
Crito comes to Sokrates in his prison, on
behalf of Sokrates' friends, to persuade
him to escape;
Sokrates declines the
offer.)
At a certain point, Sokrates
explains to Cri to how he knows that he
will not be executed on the following day,
but on · the day after that.
He says that
he had had a dream, in which a woman
appeared
to him
and
announced:
"Oh
Sokrates, nµaTL XEV TPLTaTw ~~Lnv EPL8w~ov ~XOLO~ ~

-

The six words I have just read slowed
down my reading even more, because they
are written, not in Plato's attic Greek,
but in the more ancient, epic dialect.

The six words form a single line of epic
hexameter, so it took me longer to . figure
out what Sokrates' dream-lady was saying:
"Oh Sokrates, on the third day you will
reach lovely Phthia."
Now once I had this, I became curious
to know what poem Sokrates' dream was
making reference to.
The line is from
Iliad Book IX, and it is Akhilles who
speaks these words:
"On the third day I
will reach lovely Phthia." --Akh~lles,
when he refuses to be persuaded by his
friends, who have come to persuade him to
return
to battle
against Troy.
His
friends off er several face-saving proposals, but Akhilles, whom Homer calls by
his epithet
µLvuw.5'a6Lo~
"minute-lived,"
because he is young and doomed and he
will, in fact, return to battle and die,
and
will
never
see
his
homeland
again--Akhilles says he will leave Troy
and start home:
"And on the third day I
will reach lovely Phthia."
I was struck by two things as I

considered this.
First, that the word
naming Akhilles' homeland, Phthia, ~~Ln ,
is very nearly another word,
~~Lw ,
[phthio], meaning, "to perish1 to waste
away and vanish."
The pun, if it was
intended, is in Homer, reflecting, perhaps, Akhilles' unique dilemma, that, stay
or leave, either way he is doomed to
perish, either by quick death ~n the
battlefield, or through living out an
obscure, invisible life in Phthia that
would earn him namelessness forever.
And
I was struck, too, by what seemed to be
the unavoidable suggestion of a compari•on
between those two critical moments in the
lives of Akhilles and Sokrates, where the
refusal to be persuaded by friends would
have profound mortal consequences for
each. But the comparison is not an exact
fit. In something of a similar situation,
Sokrates, unlike Akhilles, never wavers in
his conviction that what he is doing is
right, while Akhilles will finally change
his mind, and will choose heroic immortality.
It made me aware, this passage, of
Plato urging me to reflect on the heroic
dimensions of his Sokrates, who, in his
stark jail cell, faces a choice .that even
the most splendid pattern of Greek heroes
faced.
And in · a way , the dream transformed
that visible
cell and placed
Sokrates right there on the plains of
Troy.
I read the next line, Crito' s response to Sokrates' dream:
five words,
utterly
clear:
"AToltov To €vunv1..ov ili
rwxpaTE~ •
"Your dream, Sokratea, is
aTOltOV {atopon]."
That word aTOltO\) means,
literally, "without a place," "placeless."
"Your dream, Sokrates," says Cri to, "has
no place here." If you read a translation
of ~Crito, you will most likely find
- Cri to' s reply translated something like,
"Strange dream, that, Sokratesl"
This
isn't really inaccurate, for aTonov comes
to mean "strange."
But in this translation we lose a good deal of the irony of
Crito's obtuseness, his failure to see how
perfectly in place and appos.ite Sokrates'
Homeric dream is.
It was here, then, that I saw the
place, the Teno~, {toposl, that Plato had

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�He does not know what . a
getting into.
He cannot say what a sophist
sophist is.
And he only dimly "thinks he
teaches.
what
he
might
learn
from
knows"
Protagoras.
At this point, Sokrates delivers one
of his rare lectures. .I can't quote the
whole of it, but according to Sokrates,
sophists are like people who sell foods,
but with these differences:
one, in what
they
sell,
for
food
vendors
sell
nourishment for the body, while sophists
sell nourishment for the soul. The second
difference is in how they sell their
wares:
for food vendoTs sell foods in
containers that can be carried home and
examined, to avoj d the risk of cofl sumi. ng
poisonous
or
harmful
foods;
whereas
sophists sell what is necessarily, as it
were, consumed on the premises. For there
exists no container to carry away what
these men sell .
Hippokrates asks what it
is that sophists sell, and it is Sokrates'
answer that I want to quote you from two
current English translations, the ones you
would be most likely to read .
The
first
is
taken
from
the
by
Bobbs- Merrill
edition,
translated
Martin Ostwald.
Hippokrates asks what

created for me, the reader of his Cri to.
Sokrates does not explain his dream, or
the allusion to Akhilles; and yet the
allusion is unmistakably there.
And at
that moment, I no longer tried to identify
my point of view with the person Sokrates
is speaking to, with Crito.
I became a
third person in the dialogue, a person for
whom Plato was taking special pains to
point out what Crito himself seems not · to
notice.
This passage from the Cri to illustrates, then, what is always evident to me
in Plato's dialogues, the deliberateness
with which Plato invites, and sets a
place, a 1onos, for his audience, so that
we become,
not merely listeners , but
shareholders
in
the dialogue -- as when
Sokrates' Homeric dream invites me to
envision what is not actually visible,
that scene in Iliad IX . I will try to go
a 1 i ttle further now, and discuss why I
think Plato's attempt to
involve his
audience so directly in the dialogues can
be crucial to his ulterior, philosophical
aims .
The passage I want next to consider
comes from the Protagoras.
And I will
need to give some contextual background
first.
Early in the Protagoras, Sokrates
engages in a conversation with a young
Athenian,
Hippokrates.
Hippokrates
is
older than, say, Lysis and Menexenus.
He
has finished his education in the gymnasi um, and now wants to do graduate work with
the sophist Protagoras . Hippokrates is so
eager to study with Protagoras that he
tells Sokrates, with all the innocent
candor of someone who has never had to
earn a living, that he is prepared to pay
Protagoras not only all of his own mon ey- -b ;
wh i ch I
suppose he means his
parents ' money--but is prepared to pay the
sophist all his friends' money as well.
Sok rates, of course, hasn't got ar.y
money, but Hippokrates knows that Sokrates
does have a gift for getting people's
attention, and hopes that he will agree to
introduce him to Protagoras.
But in the
course
of
their
interview--you
can
probably anticipate this--it transpires
that Hippokrates has little idea what he's

sophists sell, and Sokrates replies,·
"Surely," I said, "knowledge is the
food of the soul; and we must take
care, my friend, that the Sophist
does not deceive us when he praises
what he sells, .....
For there
is far greater risk in buying
knowledge, than in buying food and
drink . The one you purch~se of the
wholesale or retail dealer and carry
them away in other vessels .....
But you cannot buy knowledge and
carry it away in other vessels; when
you have paid for it, you must
receive it into the soul and go on
your way, either greatly harmed or
greatly benefited."
This is also, in essence, the translation found in the Modern Library series.
In the Bollingen collected dialogues, this
passage, translated by Mr. Guthrie, reads:
"Indeed, the risk you run in
purchasing knowledge is much greater
than in buying provisions. When you

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What Sokrates is really talking about
here, then, is the problem of received
opinions and learning.
The problem looks
something
1 ike
this:
Knowledge,
the
apprehension of truth, is never fallible,
never in error.
And knowledge, whatever
it may be, must be grasped from out of
those things that we have in mind; for it
seems impossible that we could ever know
something that we don't have in mind. But
we can have lots of things in mind: false
opinions as wel 1 as true opinions.
But
the certainty that what we have in mind is
true, not false, opinion--the certainty
that we
have
apprehended
the
truth,
knowledge -- can only be gotten through
examination, o~E~L..Sr [skepsis].
And the
difficulty
is,
that
to
merely
learn
things--that is, simply to take them in,
whatever you are told--provides no container, no ayyECov
[aggeion], to use
Sokrates' word:
something by which it
becomes possible to hold learning at a
distance while it is examined for possible
truth.
It is here that recollection, as
Sokrates speaks of it in the Meno and
elsewhere, becomes important: since truth
can never be grasped in what is immediately seen, or simply learned, it must be

buy food and drink, you can carry it
away from the shop or warehouse in a
receptacle, .••.• But knowledge
cannot be taken away in a parcel.
When you have paid for it, you must
receive it directly into your soul,
benefitted or harmed accordingly."
Now I want to consider, first, what
Sokrates seems to be saying about the
matter, ~ Protagot:"as sells, which in
these translations is "knowledge." If you
had to reason out Sokrates' epistemology
on the basis of these passages, you might
conclude that Sokrates, like the often
misquoted Pope, thinks that knowledge can
be a· dangerous thing, that the knowledge
sophists sell has, at least, the potential
for doing harm to Hippokrates' soul.
We
might
wonder,
does
Sokrates--does
Plato? - -believe that knowledge can be
dangerous because there are some things we
ought not know about?
Or that too 1 ittle--or too much--knowledge might injure
the soul?
A reader more familiar with Plato's
works might figure that something is
suspicious here,
since elsewhere,
and
always, Sokrates is immovable on at least
this point, that knowledge, E:noTnJ.lil , is
virtue, strength, and a good thing for the
soul. And how could what is good for the
soul harm the soul?
But the word Sokrates uses here to
describe the commodity that sophists sell
is not the word commonly translated as
"knowledge", ETIL..onh1n
,nor even
its
near synonym, "wisdom"
oo&lt;pLa • The
word is µa.er)µa Ta'
[mathemata] , that is,
"learnable
th in gs."
A
mathemata
is
anything that a person can learn:
doxa,
opinions, both true ones and false ones.
Pope never said that knowledge is a
dangerous thing, and neither did Sokrates.
But learning could be, because learning--but not knowledge in the very precise
sense in which Plato and Sokrates always
use that word--learning could be fallible,
untrue,
deceptive.
Sophists
like
Protagoras sold learning, µa~nµaTa~
and so, for instance, one could, for
perhaps three drachmas, purchase a proof
for squaring circles, or an argument to
demonstrate the existence of not-being.

apprehended through a process of skepsis,
examination, and will always amount to a
kind of second,
reflective,
sight,
a
recovery of truth that escaped notice when
it wa~ first "seen."
·
This notion 0£ the danger of received
opinion is prevalent, of course, in most
dialogues.
And it arises, not only in
connection with the sophists, but, perhaps
more insidiously, in the matter of poetry.
I say "insidiously," because poetry was
the first and most important leg in a
young Athenian's education--as we see, for
instance, in the Lysis.
Athenian education, to µa~EC'V Ta µa~nµaTa
to learn
learning, consisted chiefly of memorizing
-- taking in mind -- the words of the poets:
Homer,
Hesiod,
Solon,
Simonides.
Protagoras himself
recognizes what
is
clearly a common opinion among Greeks,
that "The mark of a truly educated person
is being well-versed in poetry."
In the
Lysis we see two young boys, Lysis and
Menexenus, who are undergoing just such a

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�skepsis .
I will return to this point,
because I want to su9gest that in the form
of the dialogue, in the particular ways
that Plato invites the reader · to take an
active part, not mere 1 y as audience, he
has attempted to solve that problem of
received learning, by designing a contain er, a yy ECov I that forces skepsis.
Now I want to look at another passage, also from Protagoras, where again
the Greek 1 anguage prov ides a sense that
translations often do not . The Protagoras,
I should say, is like the Lysis, and at
least half of all socratic dialogues, in
being a "recollected" dialogue:
that is,
it is a dialogue that Sokrates Rlready has
in mind and is recollecting .
In this
sense, then, the Protagoras -- and the Lysis
-- are not, in the first place, imitations
of
dialogue ,
they
ar e
imitations
of
monologue recollecting the dialogue .
The Protagoras is fairly long . About
midway through, in the middle of a dis cussion about human virtue and wisdom and
justice,
Protagoras
answers
one
of
Sokrates' questions by introducing a quite
different point on the useful and the
good.
It's pretty clear that Protagoras
is deliberately sabotaging the argument,
because he's had enough of Sokrates'
questions, and suspects that he is beginning
to
appear
a
lau9hingstock,
11 cna y~&gt;-a0 T o &lt;;
in front of his colleagues
and prosepcti ve students.
So Protagoras
changes the subject by introducing a short
speech on the useful and the good.
It
really is brief, too:
both in comparison
with other answers that he has given, and
compar·ed
with
answers
that
Sok rates
h imse 1 f
has made.
Protagoras'
speech
earns him plenty of audience applause.
But this is what Sokrates says (and here I
again quote
from
two current English
translations) :
"Protagoras," (he says ) , 11 I have a
wre t ched memo r y, and when any one
makes a long speech to me, I never
remember what he is talking about
. . . so now, having such a bad memory,
I will ask you to cut your answers
shorter."
A second translation reads:
"Protagoras, I happen to be a

"traditional" education, "traditional" in
the exact sense of its Greek synonym
n:apa61., 6 ova1.,
[paradidonai] ,
"to hand
over to."
Lysis and Menexenus are not empty wax
tablets onto which Sokrates introduces new
ideas,
only
later
to
scratch
out.
Sokrates is working, as he so often does,
with the stuff, the µaBriµarn, , that Ly sis
and Menexnus already have in mind:
these
words of Solon's, the 1 ine of friendship
by
Homer,
and
again
by
Hesiod,
the
opinions of Empedocles, and Euripides, the
ideas of more contemporary th inkers, the
anti-logicians, and the sophists.
Their
heads are full of "received wisdom" by the
time Sokrates talks to them.
And even in
the dialogue's name, Lysis,/\.uoL s , as any
Greek speaker would have heard, we can
hear the sense_ of "breaking down," or
"destroying," (as wel 1 as the more favor able sense of "solution , " as to some
enigma) .
And against those who have
maintained that in this dialogue Plato has
attempted to vindicate Sokrates of charg~s
of co r rupting the young, I can't imagine
that Anytus and Meletus could have done
better _than this dialogue to find evidence
of Sokrates' almost systematic calling
into question of the traditional tenets of
received wisdom.
Let me back up a bit here and just
review what point I wanted to make about
that
passage
from
the
Protagoras.
Sokrates objects, not simply to the matter
that sophists sell,--and now I mean to
include poetry, too--but, more important,
his objection is made about the manner in
which all µa.BnµaTa, learning, is received:
uncritically, without a container that
would make skepsis possible .
I have talked about one passage from
· the Cri to and one from the Protagoras.
In
both instances, translation has tended to
obscure, or to distract from, Plato's
meaning.
I have also brough t
up,
in
connection with the Protagoras, a particular way in which Plato, through Sokrates,
articulates the "problem of learning," and
of received opinions and
ideas.
For
learning is received in the mind, or the
soul, uncritically, that is, without a
container, ayyE COV , that WOU 1 d encourage

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forgetful sort of person, and if
someone speaks to me at length, I
forget what he is talking about
... So since you are dealing with
someone with a bad memory, cut your
answers short and make them briefer."

Even in these translations, you're
not likely to miss the irony. In fact, if
Sokrates
is claiming to "have a bad
memory, 11 --that he cannot remember what
Protagoras
has
just
been
saying--it
wouldn't amount to a very interesting
irony,
since
it would be merely and
blatantly false. For it is obvious by the
very
conditions
of
the
Protagoras-remember I said it was a recollected
dialogue--that Sokrates has no trouble
recalling verbatim entire conversations,
including, here, Protagoras' disquisition
on the useful and the good, as well as his
own claim of having a bad memory.
Only o ne translation of the two I
read conveys in part better the sense of
Sokrates'
words,
£n:LA.noµwv TL,~ wv
[epilesmon tis on tungkano], "I happen to
be a forgetful sort of person. 11 'Ei(1.,/..,noµwv,
[epilesmon], the wo rd often translated as
"having a bad memory," is an adjective
from the verb epilanthanomai meaning "to
escape o ne's own notice," "to forget."
Now it is merely false for Sokrates to
claim to have a bad memory.
His capacity
to recall what is said is never, in any
dialogue, a matter of dispute, (although
Ei(LATlalJWV could convey the sense of "bad
memory," describing, that is, a constitutional incapacity for remembering.)
But
when
Sok rates
says
he
is
£n: 1., A.noµwv,
and in view of the evidence
that he does not suffer from an inability
to recall what is said, we may avail
ourselves of that other sense of E:n:1.,A.noµwv
that is, "forgetful." In this sense,
E: j( 1., A. naµwv describes one who is 1 iable to
fail to notice something, but without
connoting
that
forgetfulness
is
any
permanent condition.
Thus,
for instance, when Sokrates
says in the Apology that he almost "forgot
same
verb
himself"
(using
that
epilanthanomai) because his accusers spoke

so persuasively, we need not think he
means that he was ever in serious jeopardy
of permanent amnesia of his identity; only
that, confronting those false appearances
promoted by Anytus and Meletus, Sokrates
momentarily lost sight of his true self.
When, then, Sokrates claims to be
EnLAnoµwv in the Protagoras, he is not
merely telling a great lie about his
ability to recall--! grant that level of
irony--he is as well telling a great truth
about himself:
that he is a profoundly
forgetful person, a person, that is, who
is ever intent on recovering, in the face
of
conflicting
or
false
appearances,
something that is true, but that has
somehow escaped his notice. Sokrates is
(n: 1., )..r)oµwv in that sense of being always
self-conscious
of
a
concern
for
the
forgotten, the unnoticed.
Indeed, . this
sense of forgetfulness is at the very
heart of Sokrates' habitual self- recognition:
that he knows that he does not
know:
he is self-conscious of his ignorance, his failure to notice, truth that
is concealed by appearances.
I want to point out, too, that in the
example I have been talking about, in the
Protagoras, it is not, I think,Protagoras'

speech that Sokrates really means he is
liable to
forget.
It
is,
he
says~
n:E:p 1., o ~ 6 A.oy os ~ v
"what the argument
was about. 11 And this, I take it, is not
the sophist's disquisition on the useful
and the good,
but those more remote
arguments about human virtue and justice
and courage.
But what difference does it make, how
we understand EltL ATfoµw v--not as "having a
bad memory," but as "forgetful"?
I have mentioned the Greek names for
a number of words I have talked about.
And now I want to introduce one more, the
word for "truth, 11 &amp;)..nBE1.,a, [aletheia]. The
etymology of this word has been disputed,
but many Greeks, and certainly Plato,
regarded a/.., rl~E \., CI. 1 S etymon as derived from
A.avBavw,
[ lanthano]:
)..n{Jn ,
[lethe],
meaning "forgotten. II
Thus aAr)BE LCI., truth
--the "a" negates lethe--means something
like "unforgotten" or "un-concealed."
In
fact, th~s same word A.n~n
is contained
in that very word for forgetful,En:L)..noµwv.

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�only what Plato says, but how Plato says:
my sense that Plato alway~attempted to
create a room, a place, for his reader.
To conclude I want to turn to the
dialogue that is explicitly concerned with
friendship,
the Lysis .
Here, Sokrates
attempts to elicit from two young boys,
Lysis and Menexenus, a definition of what
a friend is . We have only to look at the
conclusion to see that the attempt fails:
"But what a friend is, we have been unable
to dis cover . 11
The immediate reason for
the failure is the intrusion of the two
pedagogues who have come to take Lysis and
Menexenus away; had they not _app~ared,
Sokrates intended to turn the conversation
ov~r t0 those standing on the periphery,
oL TIEPlEOT W
TES
[hoi periestotes] , the
observers of conversation.
The failure of the Lysis makes it one
of those dialogues sometimes described as
"aporetic," which is to say, inconclusive,
unsuccessful. That word, "aporetic," like
two other words I have mentioned today--aletheia and atopon- -is compounded of
the negative prefix a - and a noun: nopos.
ITopos
is a lovely word .
It is cognate with our words "port" and
"ford"-- TIOpo s means "a way" or "a passageway from here to there," a road that
gets somewhere.
Thus "a- poretic" dialogues are so- called because they fail to
complete a passage, fail to get from here
to there.
Sok.r ates speaks the word
TIO po s in
describing at the end of the Lysis the two
pedagogues: they were, he says, anopo1.,
lAporoi], that is, impossible to get past,
impossible to get through.
And so, he
continues, we had to break up the discussion, 6 1.,EA. uoa -µ Ev: you can hear Lysis'
- Auo1.,s - name in that word, dielusamen.
So the discussion breaks up.
And
yet, we cannot be satisfied, I think, that
the afternoon was merely u~successful.
For we must keep in mind that th e whole
Lysis is a performance of Socratic recollection, which at least implies that,
al though the actual conversation achieved
no llG ~os , somehow i n the reco] lection of
it, and the OHE(j;l S of it- - the distanced
examination of it--maybe there exists some
Tiopo s; some way of getting to the truth,

(It is also the name of the mythological
river of forgetfulness,
the Lethe .
I
guess I'm lucky my parentE didn't know
Greek when they thought to name me after a
river.)
Some of you may recogniz.e what I am
saying from Martin Heidegger's Introduc tion to Metaphysics, where he discusses
aA.n~ElO., as being, for the Greeks a matter
of unconcealment, the apprehension of what
is there but has escaped notice, has been
forgotten.
At any rate, for Plato, it was
in the nature of truth, aA. nBE 1.,a, to make
its appearance as something unforgotten,
disclosed.
It is this performance of
recollection that Sokrates speaks of in
the Meno, the process, through skepsis, of
apprehending what has momentarily escaped
notice.
In the Lysis,
for
instance,
Sokrates
describes philosophy as
that
desire for what one properly possesses but
does not grasp,
namely,
wisdom.
For
Sok rates, philosophy is that desire for
wisdom in the face of ignorance, which
makes him the perfectly f orgetful man,
attending always to the attempt to discover, through skepsis I the truth I l~A nB E \., 0.,
and to recognize it as truth, to remember
what he has forgotten, to notice what has
escaped notice.
Socratic forgetfulness
has less --if anything--to do with "having
a bad memory" as with Sokr.ates' habitual
self-consciousness that he is failing to
notice something, failing to notice the
truth.
I said I was going to try to convey
something of the experience of reading
Plato in Greek.
In some instances, it is
the experience of
apprehending
connotations that are difficult to convey in
translation:
the sense of ctTOITOV as "out
of place" as well as, more idiomatically,
"strange," or £:TI 1., A. rfoµw v as "forgetful"
rather than "having a bad memory;" and the
sound of A.nBn in ETILAno µuJV and aA.r)Baa
And it is also the experience of apprehending with perhaps more accuracy what
Plato means, as for example uctBnµa1u ,learning, but not knowledge.
I said, too, that I wanted to explain
something of what endears me to Plato's
words,
and makes me regard Plato as
something of a friend--that I enjoy not

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aA.nBELO'..
Yet it is characteristic of
aporetic and recollected dialogues that
Sokrates never adverts to direct speech to
tell us the result of his OHE(j;LS.
The
Lysis gives us only that imitation of
Sokrates' "second-look;" the results of it
must finally be ou r own .
I began by talking about the conclusion of the Lys is.
Now perhaps when I
tell you what the first word of that
dialogue is, you will hear something in it
that you would not have heard before: the
first word is EnopEBoµnv, [eporeuomen].
' ETiopEuoµn \. is a verb, and in .m ost English
translations you will find that this word
has been translated, "I was walking" or "I
was going ."
There are at 1 east a dozen
verbs in the Greek vocabulary that mean
something like going or walking or traveling on foot. ~Plato chose the verb
poreuomai, which means travel, but particularly, literally in the sense of making
~ opos a passage for
oneself .
Thus when
Sok rates begins ,ETiopn1oµnv, he is saying,
"I was attempting to make a way for
myself" --I've
translated
that
"attempting," because the form is in the imperfect
tense,
and
this
imperfect--uncompleted--aspect does not imply ·
that the activity was completed.
"I was
attempting to make a way for myself," says
Sokrates,
"from
the
Academy
to
the
Lyceum."
In
fact,
for all we know,
Sokrates never did get to the Lyceum; at
least his attempt was frustrated by those
people who persuafied him to enter the
gymnasium instead . But cnopc1c5µnv I tells
us something else, not about Sokrates'
literal travel between two places, but
about his travel in speech, what he later
describes
as
"a difficult road,"
the
conversation about friendship with Lysis
and Menexenus, where he attempted to find
his way.
So we hear in ETiopEuo11nv the literal
nopo~ that Sokrates attempts and fails, to
cross the distance between Academy and
Lyceum; and the hint, too, of that figurative travel, in speech, to get from the
appea ra nce of friendship to a knowledge of
what a friend is, and this too fails.
But
I want to suggest that in ETiopEuoµ nv we
h~ar
the p~ssibility of a third rropos

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attempted, that is, the recollection of
truth.
For we have, in the Ly sis, not
direct conversation, but conve rsat ion at a
remove,
a
distance,
contained
in
the
imitation of socratic OXE~LS.
And so for
us, the reader, the Lysis becomes a road
that we, too, may travel.
Let me give you one example of the
sort of thing that we, as readers, are
able to notice in the Lysis, something
that suggests that although the Tiopos
was not found in speech, something at
least was accomplished in the course of
the dialogue, something encouraging.
Throughout
the
Lysis,
Lysis
and
Mene xe nus ~re conspicuously close friends.
I
say
"conspicuous1y"
because,
in
describing them, Plato has chosen to use a
rather rare inflection of Greek nouns and
verbs, the so-called dual.
The dual,
which was common enough in epic language
consists of a particular set of wordendings that designate pairs of things:
hands, eyes, feet, oxen .
But as I have
said, by Plato's time this form had become
obsolete, and twos of things were no
longer differentiated from threes or fours
or hundreds of things.
But Plato makes
the friendship between Lysis and Menexenus
conspicuous to the Greek reader by always
designating these two friends in the dual:
E'yEAaochnv aµcpw,
"they
both-together-as-a-pair
laughed";
&lt; LA. w yap E: a T o v ,
p
"for the two of you are friends"; Ecpa1nv,
"they spoke together"; 01&gt;vE:cpchnv, "the two
agreed in unison ."
The boy's unaimity, their absorption
in each other, is signified, too, in the
early conversation in which Sokrates attempts to distinguish them from each
other:
Which of you is older?
Which
nobler? Which wiser? Juster? Wealthier?
These are things, says Menexenus, that "we
spend a lot of time arguing about."
And
you cound say that Sokrates' remark, that
friends share all things,xoLva Ta TWV cp(A.wv
[koina ta ton philon) , applies, at least
trivially, to these boys: each shares the
other's characteristics; at least, they
are unable to distinguish themselves.
But by the end of the Ly sis, something has changed.
The communality of a

�friendship is no longer mone~, looks, age,
pedigree , but a shared pursuit of knowl edge in the face of self- conscious ignorance.
They are, says Sokrates , t.pLAOL ,
(philoi 1 , but the object of their love,
their desire, is no longer merely one
another, but, in the recognition that they
are equals in ignorance, a desire for what
is truly c.pL.\o v , dear, namely, wisdom.
In the final words of the dialogue,
Sokrates describes this circle of friends,
a circle that is now wider by one, and
distinguishes itself as a group of those
who stand on the periphe r y, observers but
not participants:
"Well, now, Lysis and Menexenus, we
have become laughing s tocks -- I, an old
man, and you . Fo r those people will
say as they leave that though we
believe
ou rs elves
frie nds --f o r
I
place even myself in you r midst --what
a friend is, we have been unable to
discove r."
To the people standing around as
observers, O TIEPLEOTWTE~ , the sight of
L
other people 's ignorance appears as an
object o f r idicule : Sokrates and the boys
have become laughable in the eyes of

others . But am0ng themselves, as friends,
friends whose cornmuna 1 i ty is the pursuit
of what is truly dear, wisdom, the recognition of ignorance will never appear
ridiculous.
Before
their
conversation
with Sokrates , Lysis and Menexenus had
only themselves as objects of philia . But
the dialogue has created a new place, a
new T O ll O~ , and a new starting place from
which to make a journey, a llopo~.
The
enlargement of the circle of friends is
shown in Sokrates ' words, ~aL Eµ l yap
i) µ Cv TL Br µL., [kai eme gar en hurnin titherni),
"for I place even myself in your midst . "
I began some time ago by saying that
on a good day I can be 1 ieve that I have
entered, and am inhabiting, Plato's world .
For me, the invitation to enter came
through the language, Gr eek . It i s 1 an gu age
that
always
for ces
r eflection ,
language that, in its own way, becomes a
way, ll opos; •
And on good days when I am
reading Plato , I can believe that I am
standing, not on the periphery of the
dialogue among oC llEP LOT W T C~
, but that
I, too, "place myself in the midst" of
that ci r cle of friends who have all things
in common .

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On Shakespeare's Sonnet LXXI
laurence Berns

No longer mourn for me when I am dead
Than you shall hear the surly sullen bell
Give warning to the world that I am fled
From this vile world, with vilest worms to dwell.
Nay, if you read this line, remember not
The hand that writ it; for I love you so,
That I in your sweet thoughts would be forgot
If thinking on me then should make you woe.
o, if, I say, you look upon this verse
When I perhaps compounded am with clay,
Do not so much a·s my poor name rehearse,
But let your love even with my life decay,
Lest the wise world should look into your moan,
And mock you with me after I am gone.
The first quatrain of this poem is
bleak as bleak can be. The poet addresses
his love with his own death either :i'..n
prospect or accomplished.
The funeral
ringing of the church bells is sad,
bemoaning the loss, but also comforting,
raising the hope of passage, perhaps, to a
better place. The poet will have none of
this comfort: the bell, surly and sullen,
warns, even threatens. There is a reminder of the usual expectations, for he does
not say " the " or " our " vile world, but
"this" vile world, suggesting that there
is another. Fleeing from this vile world,
supposedly to a more peaceful place~ again
rouses religious expectations. This world
is styled vile in comparison to that more
perfect heavenly one.
If the poet wants
to remind us of the usual hopes, it is
only to dash them to the ground more
strongly.
This world is vile, but death
is a dwelling with greater vileness, with

vilest worms.
If life is vile, and its
ending vilest, the advice of the first
line is plausible.
Yet, despite - the
meaning
of
the
words,
the
ringing
assonance and alliteration of the first
four lines is not unpleasant. The steadi--.
ness and regularity of the bell's ringing
somehow suggests the natural regularity of
c9ming into being and passing away.
The
first
clause of
the
second
quatrain repeats the advice of the first
lines of the poem.
At the same time,
howeyer, it draws our attention to the
poem itself and "the hand that ~rit it".
But the way the advice is offered seems to
make it impossible to follow.
The sudden
change of tone in the sweetly simple
declaration, "for I love you so", deepens
the paradox. Is this the kind of language
lovers are likely to forget? The central
word in the first of the central lines of
the whol.e poem is "sweet".
For lovers

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�whose love has been mutual the world
cannot have been al together vi le.
Sweet
times breed sweet thoughts.
The poet
seems to have contrived this poem so as to
be
remembered,
not
forgotten
by his
beloved, but only in the beloved' s sweet
· thoughts.
Theirs is a proud love.
The
poet
would
rather
be
forgotten,
if
thinking on him would only bring on woe.
By exhorting the reader to do what is
impossible, the third quatrain elaborates
the conceit of the first line and a half
of the second quatrain. The final sestet
as a whole is designed to relieve and to
sweeten the sadness of the beloved.
The
poet plays with his beloved even after he
is dead.
By the ninth line of the poem,
"O, if, I say, you look upon this verse",
there is no longer any question about
whether these lines will be read. Surely,
the poet doth protest too much.
The
advice, however, is backed up by a threat:
if the beloved does not forget the poet,
the wise world will mock. Along with the
sentiments of the first quatrain, the wise
world, or the worldly wise, think that all
hopes for immortality are ridiculous and
vulgar .
In this sonnet, taken by itself,
the poet seems to agree with the worldly

wise.

Established religion's consolation,

belief in an after-life, seems to be
rejected. The words soul and spirit never
occur.
But the wise world may not be as
wise as it thinks:
the poet may have
found a way of preserving something of
himself even after he
is gone.
He

preserves only that ~art of himsel~ whi~h
he regards worthy of survival, thi::· sv•eet
and
playful
thought-provoking
part. 1
The word "with" in the final line of the
poem abounds in fruitful ambiguity.
It
could mean that the poet will join the
wise world in mocking his love if the
beloved persists in bemoaning the poet's
loss.
It could also mean that the wise
world would use him, the poet, as the
instrument of its mockery.
It could even
mean that the poet "and" his love "together" will be mocked, if the beloved should
openly bemoan their loss. The poet knows
that nothing can obliterate the sorrow
from the death of those we love.
Yet by
mixing
a
spirit
of
sweet
loving
playfulness with that
sorrow he has
contriv2d to transform lover's moans to
smiles.
.
1. In the third foot of the twelfth line
the only major break in metrical regulari ty,
substituting
anapaest
for
iamb,
suggests that the love is stretched out
rather than cut short .
2 . Sonnets LXXI to LXXIV may form some
kind of unity.
I have tried to interpret
Sonnet LXXI by itself. The central lines
of Sonnet LXXIV, however, seem to express
the central thought of this sonnet as
well:
The earth can have but earth, which
is his due;
My spirit is thine, the better part
of me.

The Genesis of Modern Science
In Galileo's Concept of Mathematizable .Nature
Pierre H. Gagnier

The general aim of !h~ Crisis of th~
Eur opean
Scie nces
and
Transcendental
Phenomenology
involves
the
critical
exploration of the history of modern
philosophy, considered according to its
radical meaning as apodeictic science.
The task of modern science, and its
failure to fulfil that task, contain
hidden sources which point to the necessity
of
a
transcendental
science . of
phenomenology.
This
science
is
then
developed in light of the examination of
the pregiven "life-world", and of the
problem of transcendentally ungrounded
psychology.
In the examination of philosophy, phenomenology is presented as the
hidden telos of modern apodeictic science .
Husserl opens the whole work with an
explication of the crisis of this science.
Thus presented, it constitutes a most
important motivation for the whole work.
In order, however, to understand the
crisis and its importance, the nature of
science must first be understood.
The .
beginning of this task lies in the uncovering of the hidden roots of modern
science through the examination of its
radical f ormation in Galileo ' s thinking.
My beginning then will follow closely
Husserl's setting out of this genesis, and
I will confine my efforts to a more or
less pedestrian tracing of his footsteps.
Why must analysis of the meaning of
modern science begin with a look at
Galileo? The task of modern science could
not .b e t a ken up until its range was
delimited and made specific, and this
determination arises out of the re-

alization
v~rsally

of

Galileo's

idea

of

a

uni -

mathematizable world whose nature

' is disclosed through mathematical physics.
The motives for this idea will lead us to
.the motives~ behind moder~ philosophy whi~h
constitute its hidden telos.
This first
motive arises from a two-fold source, or
two_interrelated givens. The first is the
array of special sciences inherited from
the ancients .
Each of these sciences
presides over an ~ priori region which is
finite;
although they yield neceisary
truths, these sciences draw their objects
from a
finite
realm.
For
instance,
Euclidian ,geometry is not the science of
all of the infinite number of possible,
geometric configurations, but rather the
science of all the geometrical objects
that
fall
under
its
exhaustible
purveyance. The other given is a new idea
about science,
a new attitude toward
universal
and
apodeictic
reasoning,
through which the old sciences are taken
up
and
given
infinite
tasks.
Thus
Euclidean geometry leads to the method by
which an infinite yet delimited region of
possible ! priori- geometrical knowledge is
systematically ·disclosed, or in another
manner of speaking, it leads to the· method
by which the infinite realm of geometrical
~
priori knowledge
is
systematically
constructible in advance according to
universal principles.
These two givens
motivate an unexamined. presentiment in
Galileo:
that the realm of objective
being is a rational tota lity tha t c an be
constructed in advance ! priori by its own
universal
science.
This
presentiment

Pierre H. Gagnier, a junior, wrote this paper for Mr. Lenkowski's prece~torial on
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�leads to the mathematization of nature in
Galileo's physics.
The meaning of the mathematization of
nature can be discovered in the train of
thought which led Galileo to it .
This
train of thought involves presuppositions
the problematic nature of which Galileo
does not see.
First, if we examine what
is given for Galileo in this respect, we
find 1) that the world presents itself as
objective in everyday experience, and 2)
that pure mathematics is a science of
absolute,
self-evident
validity.
The
presupposition that remains unexamined for
Galileo is this:
it is to be taken for
granted that the content of objective
experience is the very thing which makes
it objective, and is thus its true nature;
and this "true nature" consists in ideal
mathematical properties .
The apodeictic
science of these properties is mathemat ics, and specifically, geometry. In orde r
to explicate the meaning of this presupposition, the "meaning" of geometry which
guided Galileo must be examined .
The
"meaning" of geometry contains notions of
which Galileo may or may not be explicitly
aware.
Nevertheless our
investigation
attempts to formulate these notions.
In Husserl's analysis of geometry,
pure rational geometrical space never
means the abstracted transformations which
the imagination derives from sense, · for
these will always be sensible, however
abstract or arbitrary, and they will
always be "thinkable only in gradations:
the more or less straight, flat, circular,
etc. "
Sensible things,
considered as
shapes, whether empirically intuited or
abstractly conceived, are only approximately self-identical, that is, approxi ~ately the same things at different times,
app r o x . ately the same as themselves, and
approx i ma tely the same in other things.
They are not exactly identifiable in terms
of shape .
On the othe r hand , they have
shape determinations which are capable of
ever more accurate measurement.
As the
technology of measurement improves, the
accuracy of determination improves.
As
improvement proceeds, it comes to be seen
as improvement toward something, and this
something comes to mean the ideal lifil=

it-shapes of pure geometry.
These limit-shapes
are
unattainable
poles
of
perfection and constitute the realm of
"pure thinking", which uses a systematic
method of idealization and construction to
gain knowledge of this realm.
Rut this
root meaning of geometry need not be
formulated, nor even become a matter of
interest in oraer to be employed as ideal
method .
In fact, as such, it is a cultural accomplishment which does not give
evidence of that which gave it its original meaning.
The original meaning is
obscured, or "sedimented" over by consequent cultural accretions. of meaning.
Nevertheless, geometry arises out of the
idealization of objectively standardized
shapes.
In time the discovery is made
that all conceivable ideal shapes may be
constructed by . the~ priori, universal and
systematic method of pure geometry, so
that it becomes, in and of itself, the
science of an infinite ~ priori.
Geometry was a given for Galileo, and
though he did not know it, its meaning
arose out of the art of measur ement. The
art of measurement was itself a tradition
given to him which guided him in his
relation of empirical matters to the pure
mathematical ideals of limit. The idea of
mathematical limits set a task to the art
of measurement,
according to which a
method is developed of progressive approximation to geometrical ideals.
Pure
geometry, remaining autonomous, provides a
means and guidance for this task.
Since
the meaning of geometry was "sedimented"
for Galileo, he did not know that it arose
from the art of measurement, but he did
know that geometry was applied to the art
of measurement.
For Husserl, "sedimentation" is the process through which original and originary meanings are lost or
forgotten.
The question which was hidden
for
Galileo
becomes
urgent
in
the
unfolding of the late r misdirection of
European
science:
how
does
the
self - evidence
"work",
by
which
pure
geometry arises out of the art of measure
as an origin itself of knowledge? In any
case, Galileo sees that geometry, through
the art of measurement, achieves obj ecti ve,
identical,
non-relative
demon-

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strations of truth by its progressive
approximations from empirical givens to
geometrical idealities. For him, this is
a way to see what truly is, with respect
to phenomena.
At this point Galileo's application
of geometry to appearances presents us
with a great difficulty.
Pure geometry
can only be applied to intuited and
conceived
bodies
as
abstract
spatiotemporal
entities.
But
bodies
present themselves to us as concrete. In
order to clarify this problem, we must
first
investigate what we mean
by
concrete
int.ui tions .
There are two
aspects to this meaning of bodies .as
concrete in actual and possible experience:
1) shape is foxm · "filled in" with
the "matter" of specific sense qualities,
and 2) concrete qualities are concrete
because they hang together.
But they do
not ·just hang together, rather, qualitative changes are related interdependently
in a meaningful way.
For example, if I
move a brown cup from .one location to
another, the qualities of location and
color will be interrelated.
This manner
of interdependence · conforms to types of
relatedness which give to sensible bodies
which exist together the character of the
belonging together.
In other words, the
ways in which bodies present themselves in
everyday experience are typical, and the
typicality is one by which they present
themselves as being essentially causally
related to one another.
In fact, this
typicality
is part of
the essential
structure of
the
life world.
(With
respect
to
this
discussion,
the
"life-world"
is merely
the world of
everyday experience, pregiven before the
adoption of any scientific attitude. Thus
the life-world can be characterized as
prescientific experience.)
We are now i~ a position to disclose
something more of this essential structure
of the life world.
The things of the
world of everyday life can be characterized
as behaving according to an
over-all empirical "style·."
They have
. "habits" of typical behavior which are
made possible by this one habit of the
_flowing present of intuition, by which it

is always for us a world, and not only a
world, but one which continues as it has
up .to
now.
By
freely
varying
in
imagination the possibilities of this
world, the horizon within which they are
found is explicated, and the invariant
general style which persists throughout
can be seen as the essential meaning of
the life world.
Much . more remains to be
said regarding this method of free variation and its present application, but
Husserl only assures us ~hat if one were
to t~ke up this investigation, one would
see that this over-all style is universal- .
.!x invariant, and that everything intuited
in everyday life is bound by this a
priori. This is not a Kantian sense of
priori, according to which the ! priori
would be a principle prerequisite to any
experience, or which stands before experience and dictates its form.
The meaning
of all intuitions is to be worldly. That
is, they belong together in a whole
totality of one world, and this world is
one because everything in it has the style
of belonging together according to causal
regulation. Why a priori? No argument is
given; perhaps the implication may be
drawn that since the . world . of possible
intuition is whole only through this
style, it cannot be derived ! posteriori ·,
and so must be ! priori. That is to say,
I can only have a worldly object in
relation to a whole world which is prior
to it.
This causal style discovered in life
makes possible the systematic knowledge of
the everyday world.
Explanations of how
and why events occur, as well as predictions of future events from knowledge
of present situations are made possible.
But if we are to build exact, scientific
knowledge from this, .we need more than the
general insight that the experiencible is
causally
related
in a
single,
whole
world- horizon.
This is the task of an
infinite apodeictic science.
As such,
this science must be the means of constructing the world according to ! priori
causal principles, from a meagre base of
contingent data. Just as in the realm of
pure geometry, any shape is theoretically
constructible, so in the realm of the

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a

�intuitable world, any event should be
collocation ot all c:ualitative properties .
predictable, and capable of being "con Any method that achieves this must include
all concrete qualjties as mathematizable,
vincingly" verified back in experience .
To state this problem is to express the
insomuch as they all participate in the
Thus natur~ would be
task of philosophy:
knowing the world in • causal world style .
a serious scien~if ic way can have meaning
the subject mat te r
of
this epi s temic
and be possible only if there can be
science
of
the
world .
In
order
to
devised a method by which we can systemat accomplish this, however, the specific
ically 1 ) construct, in advance, the world
sense qualiti e s, or plenum qualities must
of infinite causalities, starting from
be found to be indirectly mathematizable .
In order tu continue, we must look at
direct experience, and 2) verify this
construction, accomplishing both in spite
specific sense qualities in order to see
what it is about them that r equires that
of the infinitude of causality and the
they be mathemati z able only indirectly, if
meagre and r elative nature of direct
at all . The whol e notion here is contrary
experience .
Mathematics itself points to
to modern pre s uppositions , used as we are
the possibility of accomplishing this task
to
assuming
that
measurement
r elates
through two of its own accomplishments .
The first is actually its hidden genesis,
always to idealiti e s . We only assume , for
insta nce , that a plenum quality such as
the idealizing of the world in-respect to
spatiotempor al shape, whe r eby shape is
sound is d e term i ned by transverse sine
waves because of ou r s cientific attitude .
abstracted f r om relat~ve, subjective , and
vaguely rep r esented object s of sense and
It is just this attitude which is ul ti imaqin a tion, and an infinj te uni vers P 0f
~at e l v und e r inves t j0ot i o n he r e, and which
we must endeavor to get behind .
We must
perfectly determined
ideal objec ~ s
is
abst r act ·f r om our e v e ry day wo r ld of bodies
apodeictical ly gene r ated a
prior i
and
the ir s p e cific se n se qu a lities (which is
absolu t ely . The second accG;plishment was
diffe r ent fr om t h e abst r ac t. io n of thei r
not hidden fr om Galileo .
Through it ,
spati otempo r al s hape s ) , and con side r t hem
g e omet r y retu rns t o the s ens i ble wo r ld to
in this aspect . F irst, we find that there
f i nd pract i cal application in the art of
.is· no immediate ex act measur e for them,
meas uring, and guides the method in o r der
although we do sense , and have concepts
to att a i n obj e ctive knowledge of sensible
of , their essential gradations--e . g . more
matte r s in respect to their approximate
or less hot , cold, light, dark, loud,
spatiotempor ality, and in order to predict
soft, etc .
Exact measurement requires
through
induction
previously
unknown,
empirical approximation to ideal struc unobservable events .
This accomplishment
tures which have been constructed objec within the art of measurement is not to be
tively in a dvance , s uch as the objective
confused
with
universal
mathematical
world of pur e geomet r y . The only ~ priori
physics, the origin of which is not yet
structure
of
the
world
we
have
is
explicated.
What I refer to here are
spatiotempora:;
shapes are abstractable
finite inductions such as the special
from
all
possible
bodies,
and
their
s cience of a s t r onomy which Galileo inher ultimate
abst r action
encompassing
all
i ted f r om t he ancient s .
fo r ms is the infinite extension of the
B ~t
a lthough these t wo accomplishunive r se .
Idealized, this gives us one
ment s
po i n t
to the possib i lity of a
pure science of the world form:
pure
universal apodeictic constructive science,
geometr y.
The specific sense qualities
we are still f aced with our original
are not idealizable analogously, are not
difficulty: how can the art of idealizing
part of some qua li tati ve world form, and
abstractive features of concrete bodies
have no measure approximating ideal exact
yield a method for the apodeictic science
objective constructions given in advance.
of
all
qualities
of
sensible
plena?
So,
the
plena
can
only
be
Experience can be characterized as having
mathematized, if at all, indirectly .
If
two aspects: a spatiotemporal aspect, and
we turn again to a prescientific attitude
a plenum aspect. The plenum aspect is the

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toward the world of everyday life, and
perform the same method of free variation
as before, we find that the over-all style
of the world includes three predetermined
meanings.
These are undetermined anticipations of essential regulated ways
that
shapes
relate
to
specifically
sensible qualities.
1)
It is predetermined that all things of the world present
themselves in the form of space-time.
2)
The style of general causality is of this
sort:
that actual shapes require actual
plena. 3) The style of general causality
is universal concrete causality. That is,
cause relations constitute the infinite
world horizon, and every cause and effect
is necessary for concrete bodies, for
shape aspect as well as plenum aspect.
But this may not be so helpful.· These
predetermined meanings of concrete bodies
hold only with respect to bodies insofar
as they are actual and concrete. ·When the
plenum aspect is abstracted, we still have
not shown that that aspect is dependent in
a consistent causal way on · the shape
aspect. Our investigation of the realm of
possible experience has not shown us that
every possible change in a plenum must
somehow have a causal counterpart in the
shape aspect.
This seems strange to us
because science gives us assurances about
the mathematical nature of plena qualities, while the prescientific world does
not.
But it is even more strange to note
that for Galileo, this assurance is not
available. Such being the case, hoW-Could
he arrive at his conception of an infinite
mathematizable causally integrated nature,
in which all plena events can be systematically, though indirectly, determinable
through mathematical idealities?
The answer to this question is the
explanation of
the
hidden
source of
Galileo's
conception
of
nature
as
mathematizable in its c o ncrete actuality.
As was indicated earlier, this motive does
not arise from prescientific experience.
All such experience basically consists in
vague
and
indeterminate
dependencies
between plenum characteristics and shape
c.haracteristics.
Even where these dependencies are more determinate, for example
the functional dependency of tone on

string length, such cases are comparatively rare and not obviously connected with
one another in terms of their inductive
clarity. ·
In
other
words,
the
basic
indeterminate habit of causality of the
world of everyday life can provide no
source for 'the kind of attitude that
Galileo's concept of nature entails-- an
attitude of analytical inquiry aimed at
the nexus of shape/plenum causal dependencies.
In addition to this difficulty,
there are two other difficulties behind
Galileo's conception of nature:
1) we
still have no
method for measuring the
plena, and 2) with regard to the measuring
of space, the prescient if ic era did not
yet have methods of space-time measurement
adequate to · some visible shape events.
Finally, the hypothesis that would suggest
this universal causality is foreign to the
prescientific world experience.
The source of Galileo's view does,
however, arise from at least two causes.
First,
there
was
a
general
attitude
prevalent which is part of the vague
attitude often referred to today as the
Renaissance.
This attitude involved an
inclination to intellectual boldness a nd
exuberant hypc&gt;theses. Sec. nd, there was a
o
very powerful tool available to these
men--the infinite,. universal and ideal
realm of
pure mathematics,
with
its
apodeictic, constructive science.
When
these two factors are combined, a strong
and constructive belief in mathematics is
able to lay o ut a completely new task for
science, as the source (through technology
and the art of measurement) of objective
knowledge about the world.
This depends
upon four prerequisites:
1)
the discovery of methods for measuring everything
encompassed in geometry, 2) the determination that the whole world is mathematizable with respect to these methods, 3) the
possibility of successful induction from
particulars, and 4) the determination that
the
plenum
aspect
is
indirectly
mathematizable. All of these gave rise to
a universal idea for Galileo, the true
meaning of its hypothetical nature being
unknown
to
him:
an
essential
"inductibility" or universal inductivity
characterizes
the
world
of
possible

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�intuition, and announces itself in everyday experience, while possessing a hidden
infinity.
What does it mean to say that this
universal inductivity announces itself in
everyday life, and that it has a hidden
infinity?
It was already shown that
mathematical shape idealities are the
poles of infinite approximations. This is
manifested in their extensive and . intensive
infinities,
whereby
mathematical
space
is
infinite
in
extension
and
infinitely divisible.
When mathematical
shapes
are
applied
to
concrete,
intuitively given experience, they give up
their character of being independent from
the plenum aspect.
In this application
they
cause
actual
bodies
to
become
idealized to the extent that they are
charged with the same infinities, i.e.
these infinities become part of the actual
bodies.
This "substruction" implies that
the plenum qualitie~ become charged with
the same infinities since the n 1 Pnnm
qualities
are
inseparable
from
spatiotemporal
qualities.
So,
in
prescientific experience
(the attitude
from which this hypothesis arises) we find
universal causality to be an obvious
general and invariable style of possible
experience, but only as a vague indeterminate
interdependence
of
events.
The
application of mathematics to the space
aspect of the prescient if ic world causes
it to be charged with ideal infinities,
and since it is essentially concrete,
there
is
also
a
hidden
infinity
substructed
for
the
particular
sense
qualities, or the plenum aspect.
Galileo
makes
this
infinity
explicit
in his
universal idea of the mathematizability of
pature.
'I'hough we have come some way in the
clarification of the source of Galileo's
conception of physics, we still have need
of a methodical approach to the determining of the ways in which factual shapes
and their plena stand in causal relation
to one another.
This methodical approach
can arise from certain presuppositions
involved in the idea of a universal
inductivity.
These
presuppositions
present themselves as "how's" pointing to

the methodical exposition of the causal
relations in question.
Each presuppo sition must be clarified; that is, in order
to
realize
the
idea of
a
universal
inductivity, each presupposition about the
ways shape and plenum are causally related
will arise in the consideratio n of method,
as a question of "how?", which must be
answered
in
order
to
bring
the
presupposition to determinateness.
Each
"how" leads to its succeeding "how":
1)
How do
I
methodically
regulate
this
inductive task?
2) How are we to determine causality in both aspects ( shape and
plenum)
of bodily data?
3)
How is
methodical measurement to disclose pro~
gressively the hidden infinities within
this data?
4)
How are the resultant
shape approximations to make apparent
progressivelY. perfect indirect measurements of plena qualities? 5) And lastly,
how are these approximations according to
all their ideally possible occurrences, to
make
concrete
bodies
scientifically
determinable?
These questions are answered not by any systematic deduction of
what possibilities are derived in principle from all the presuppositions essential
to this universal idea.
Rather,
the
questions are formulated and answered
through what Husserl calls a "passionate
praxis of inquiry" which yields discoveries.
Because of this approach, the method
must be built on unclarified grounds--upon
a hypothesis which is not recognized as
such.
In this
light,
Galileo
is
a
discoverer; his task is to realize his
idea of general inductivity through a
twofold process:
1) of inquiring into
actual experiences, and 2) of achieving
discoveries
therefrom.
He
develops
methods according to the anticipations of
his hypothesis, and applies them to the
intuitable world. These anticipations may
be no more than hunches, or matters of
instinct, but when he finds them demonstrated by experience, his idea is realized.
Discoveries enable more developments in method and set the stage for more
discoveries, and Galileo finds that some
of these causal relations can be expressed
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physics.
There is another way of describing
the realization of Galileo's hypothesis,
by proceeding from the consideration of
the twofold nature of the measuring praxis
which was discussed earlier.
On the one
hand, this art yields only inexact quantities. But it also yields the capability
of more exact measurement through its own
self-improvement. This steady improvement
gives the inexactitude of the measurements
a new sense--they become approximations.
It then only becomes necessary that the
end to which the approximations advance be
made
explicit.
Here
the
unclarif ied
relatedness of the world to pure mathematics comes into play; the approximations
acquire meaning as being approximations
toward ideal, self-identical, perfectly
exact mathematical quantities; that is,
unattainable poles of accuracy approachable only through progressive improvement
of measurement in infinitum.
Galileo's method, considered first in
regard to the unfolding of inductive
discovery, and secondly in regard to the
explication of hidden infinities through
the art of measurement, can now be considered in regard to the general sense
which it possesses as a whole, and which
is carried over from the prescientif ic
world's invariant over-all style.
This
over-all style involves a totality of
types by which particulars present themselves to us as being related according to
the over-all style.
For instance, the
pencil I hold is an instance of the type,
"combustible solid bodies," and as such
will burn if I let it fall into a fire.
This typical nature of experience is
carried
over
into
the
Galilean
idealization of the world.
As formulae are
derived from experience,
they can be
referred to experience in order to ideally ·
objectify particular events.
In the case

of my pencil, the rate of its free fall,
and
its
rate
of
combustion
are
determinable
for
any
given
instance
according to mathematical laws of nature.
And
so
these
systematically
acquired
formulae
are
expressions
of
general,
causal, concrete interdependencies in the
form of numerical functional dependencies,
and their meaning as such lies in the
Galilean idea of a
universal physics
explicated above.
Most important for the considerations
Husserl is engaged in, Galileo's physics
and its motivation in the idea of universal inductivity, are radically hypothetical. Their necessity is not grounded
according to ~ priori principles in the
life-world.
Therefore
the
inductive
verification of Galileo's physics will
never make universal inductivity anything
other than a hypothesis. It is throughout
the
undeniable
progress
of
Galileo's
science nothing more than an unendingly
verified hypothesis.
Like _
the approximations by which the art of measurement
approaches true objective determinations
in
infinitum,
the
approximations
of
successive
theories
to
"true
nature"
proceed in infinitum as toward ideal
poles. But this is only an analogy. The
ideal poles of theorv are not a region of
idealities like the pure shapes are. Pure
shapes are realizable mathematically, but
the poles of theory are not attainable
through my finite progress.
They are
historically
open-ended.
This
is
a
consequence
of
the
explication
of
Galileo's idea of physics which is not
properly part of the matter at hand.
The
hypothesis that Galileo took to be granted--the universal inductivity of nature
with its science of mathematical physics--is, in all its complicated motivations from given concepts and presuppositions, the original source of the
modern conception of science.

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�H

ILLUSTRATION

On the Nature of Cones and Conic Sections
Michael Landry

A

0

This paper deals with the geometry of

J

Third, for the hyperbola and ellipse

cones and conic sections. In one sense it
is concerned with the principle properties
of
conic
sections
as
revealed
by
Appollonius of Perga in Book I of his
Conics.
In quite another sense it is
concerned with those properties of cones
that Apollonius does not reveal.
Given three cones (See Illustration) ,
let pl a nes be passed through the axes
cutting off axial triangles, ABC.
Let
a nother plane be passed through the cones
cutting the base in the line GF so that GF
is perpendicular to BC.
Let this plane,
called the plane of reference, be posi tioned in three separate ways with respect
to one side of the axial triangle (we will
use AC ) .
First, let DE (the intersection
of the plane of reference and the axial
triangle) be parallel to AC.
Second, let
DE intersect AC extended past the vertex,
outside of the cone at H.
Third, let DE
intersect AC extended past the b ase (but
within the cone extended) at H.
We now
have th.ree types of conic sections, FOG,
named parabola,
hyperbola and ellipse
respectively.
In Book I, propositions 11, 12 and 13
of his Conics, Apollonius sets out the
basic
properties
of
the
p arabola,
·hyperbola and ellipse.
First,
in all
thre ~
c on e s he c on structs p line, DJ,
perpendicular to DE at D. Second, for the
parabola he determines the length of DJ by
the following contrivance:

J

he first d r aws a line through the point A
parallel to DE and intersecting BC (exten ded) at M.
He then determines the length
of DJ in this way:

DA :DJ : :

rect. BA,AC :BC

2

2

HD:DJ :: AM : rect. BM,MC
Using these contrivances,
then proves that in the :
Parabola,
Hyperbol a,

El 1 ipse,

GE

2

GE

GE

2

2

Apollonius
B

= DE,DJ
F

F

DE,DJ + DE,JO where JO
is determined by the
rati o HD : DJ .. DE : JO

HYPERBOLA

PARABOLA
A

DE,DJ - DE , JO by the
same rati o.

Now,
a
moment's
thought,
should
reveal that the contrivances which determine DJ stand on no geometrical foundations.
They are not logically obvious
for the purpose they serve, nor is their
derivation indicated in the slightest.
Because the contrivances are right fo r
their pu r pose, Apollonius is able to prove
his propositions, but he does this without
revealing anything about the sense of the
contrivances. However, since they work so
wel i · in the proofs,
the overwhelming
tendency is to ignore this problem and to
pass to other, more profound mysteries.
Th e
first
real
difficulty
that
confronts a student of the Conics is the
possibl~ difference between the parabola

Michael Landry is a graduate of the Santa Fe campus. He wrote this paper while at
St. John' Si it has since become a spark of insight passed from class to class.

20

C(M,N)

M

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ELLIPSE

and the other two sections. This problem
is extremely
subtle.
One
intuitively
sens e s
no
difference .
Yet,
the
two
separate contrivances suggest a difference, and Apollonius' techniqµe of sepa-

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rate proofs tends to confirm it.
If one
tries to demonstrate a kind of sameness,
the contrivances actually impede a rigorous proof.
I have to report that if the ttue

�nature of the contrivances is k nown a n d
understood, the pro blem vanis he s.
Th ere
is no difference between the parabo la a nd
the other two secti o ns.
If, c o nsidering
the
differences
bet ween
them,
t he
hyperbola and the ellipse are said t o be
the same because the same c on triva n ce
serves them both, then, necessari 1 y, t he
parabola must be said t o be the same as
the hyperbola and the ellipse since, in
fact, one and the same contrivan c e serves
all three. This may be easily demonstrated:
If, through the point D on the axial
triangle, the. line DK be drawn parallel to
the base, with a little manipulation we
find that:

t he r e f o re,

DA:DJ .. AB,AC:BC

2

therefore,

DA:DJ comp. AB:BC, AC:BC

and since,

AB:BC

..

DA:DK

and,

AC:BC

..

DE:BE

therefore,

DA: DJ c omp. DA: DK, DE:BE

and compounding both sides
with DK:DA,
comp. DK: DA, DA: DJ . .
comp. DK: DA, DA:DK, DE:BE
therefore,

:: DE:BE.

Th e c on trivances are ide n tical.
We
mu s t n o l o nger think of them as two, but
as o ne.
Thu s we c o nfro n t a n unsuspected
my stery at the very heart of the ge ometry
o f con es an d c o nic secti o ns.
In o rder t o
give a full explanation o f this mystery.
I p r o p o se t o set o ut a new proo f b eginning
with the passing of planes through a cone.
Fo r c on venience I will use three cones and ·
suggest
that
all
constructions
and
c ontrivances be applied to all three cones
at the same time.
( 1 ) Let the cones be set out and cut by
planes as described above.
(2 ) Through the point D on the axial
triangle, let the line DK be drawn parallel to the base BC.
( 3)
Through the p o ints A and K on the
axial triangle, let the lines ALM and KN
be drawn parallel to DE, the dia meter of
the
section.
(Observe
that
in
the
parabola the points K and L coincide as do
the points C, M and N.
Th is proof will
remain one proof if these p o ints are
distinguished though they coincide. Point
K is the intersection of DK and AC; point
L is the intersection of DK and a 1 ine
drawn through the point A parallel to DE:
etc. )_
2
(4 ) Now in each cone GE = BE,EC, f o r BC
is the diameter of a circl e , and GE is
p erpendicular to it (Eucl. III.31; VI. 8,
Po rism ) . But, in the:

(A)

In the parabola,

DK: DJ

DK:DJ :: DE:BE.
2

Earabo la,

GE

== BE, EC

a nd s ince ,

EC = EN

(B )

And in the hyperbol a
2
and ellipse,
HD:DJ .. AM :BM,MC

=

DK

t h erefo re,

and since,

BE, DK.

hyperbo la,

there f1..,re,

BE,EC

HD:DJ c omp. AM:MC, AM:BM
AM :MC .. HD : DK

but,

therefo re,

GE

=

EC

therefo re,

and ,

(Eu cl. I. 3 4 )

AM:BM .. DE : BE

2

EN + NC

= BE,EN

and compoundin g both sides
with DK:HD ,
c omp . DK: HD , HD: DJ ::
comp . DK:HD , HD: DK, DE:BE

+ BE,NC
( Euc l. II. 1)

HD:DJ comp . HD : DK, DE:BE
and si n ce,
th eref o re,

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= DK

EN
GE

2

=

(Eu cl. I. 34 )

BE ,DK + BE ,NC

ellipse,

GE

2

(5) Let DJ be drawn perpendicular to DE,
and let it be contrived that:

= BE,EC

c:ind adding the r2ct. BE,NC to
both sides,
GE + BE,NC = BE,EC + BE,NC
but,

EC + NC = EN

therefore,

GE

BE,DK = DE,DJ

2

2

+ BE,NC

therefore,

GE

and since,

EN = DK

therefore,

GE

2

This, then, is the heart of our mystery,
for the contrivance may be rewritten:
BE,EN
(Eucl .II.I)

DK:DJ : : DE :BE
since the product of the means is equal to
the product of the extremes.
The route
from
this
contrivance
to
that
of
Apollonius' is simply a matter of manipulation.
The new contrivances, at least
the contrivance for the hyperbola and the
ellipse, become necessary because of a
difficulty inherent in the next step.
(6) Let JO be drawn, and let it be con trived that: .

= BE,EN - BE,NC

(Eucl. I. 34)

= BE,DK - BE,NC

We have therefore,
Parabola:

GE

Hyperbola:

GE

ElliEse:

GE

2
2
2

BE,DK

BE,NC = DE,JO

BE,DK + BE,NC
BE,DK - BE,NC.

or,

Now, two important things may be said
about these three equalities.
The first
is that they all may be expressed by the
2
general equation: GE
= BE, DK ~ BE, NC.

DE:BE :: NC:JO

(7) The transposition is complete, for now
we have:
Parabola: GE

2

Since in the parabola the points N and C
coincide, the rect . BE,NC is simply equal
to zero.
Thus, the factor vanishes from
the equation.
Yet, it may be said to
exist, for the generality holds.
Second, it is essential to recognize
that the line DK is a natural geometric
"parameter" generated by the passing of
planes through a cone .
DK is a constant
and va~ies not a whit as GE increases from
zero to infinity .
To proceed with the proof, we must
reason as follows:
since GE lies in the
plane of reference as well as in the base
of the cone, and since DE varies directly
as BE, it ~ possible to transpose the
value o f GE
f r om the base of the cone
to
the
plane
of
reference
while
maintaining
equality.
The
problem
is
essentially that of altering the parameter
DK to accommodate DE instead of BE. Since
2
GE
is a
function of two rectangles,
BE,DK and BE,NC, the transposition is most
easily accomplished in two steps.

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HyEerbola: GE
ElliEse:

GE

= DE,DJ

2
2

(5)

DE,DJ + DE,JO

(5 &amp; 6)

DE,DJ - DE,JO

(5 &amp; 6)

A difficulty exists, however.
How will
the rectangle DE,JO be accounted for as GE
increases?
The
difficulty
is
solved
because of the interesting relationship
between DE and JO.
(8) Since,

DK:DJ .. DE:BE

(5)

and,

DE: BE . . NC : JO

(6)

therefore, ex aequali,
DK: DJ : : NC : JO
and
alternately,

DK:NC : : DJ :JO

but since,

DK:NC .. HD:KN

therefore,

HD:KN .. DJ : JO

�= DE

and since,

KN

theref o re,

nec e ss i ty for it exp lai ned , t here r emains
the
problem of
expl a i n i ng
the
new
contrivance for the parabo la:

HD:DE .. DJ:JO

and alternately,

(Eu c l . I. 34 )

DA:DJ :: BA,AC:BC

HD:DJ :: DE:JO.

Thus we find that DE:JO is always
given rati o .
The procedure
cont r ivance :

is

obvious .

If

the

DK : DJ . . DE : BE
be corrected to
2
HD : DJ .. AM :BM,MC
i n one step it becomes possible to find
the new paramet e r DJ and to set out the
ratio HD:DJ of t he sides of the rectangle
DE, JO wh~h is constantly the diff e rence
between GE and the rectangle DE,DJ .
With the new contrivance f o r the
hyperbola and ellipse set ou t, and the

In the Wake
Andrew

J. Krivak

And t here he lay
beneath one hundred sad bouquets.
They b e nt t o kiss hi s fa c e-a t i r ed wh i t e , his powe rfu l
hands with faded spots of ag e
now holding what we can' t,
a r osary entwi ned in finge rs
clutching the bead of the
r esur rect i on--then knelt
to p r ay for themse lves .
Dr y your tear s, Ste lla .
W a re the dead.
e

Andrew

It was simply a matter of time.
Each lacked the foolish balance of a boy,
It was a way over the river that
the ease of a familiar road,
demanded time from other ways.
and the concentration that fear dissolves.
The other ways she knew;
Again she saw the river -- through
but the trestle was as straight and fast
the ties her foot was caught in.
as the train that ran over it.
She looked at her baby.
The train ridde.n only by old engineers
In desperation growing with the
and brakemen easing it over the rails
sound of the train, she wrapped
on time; the trestle walked upon only by
his blanket tightly around him.
village boys flirting in time with
Her tears streaked his face as
she kissed him, then threw him off,
the train on time, feet with animal
his blanket fluttering as he fell
grace that touch the ties
down, down into the river below.
the rails are riding on, the flash
of river between each one as they
She l ooked up at the boy standing
in front of her, watching, dumb.
streak, head down, back to the shore
they came from; just in time.
Through the tears her eyes asked why?
Why he did not run?
She set out across thinking
He looked at the track ahead,
only of the other side,
th'e -water b~low, and.the woman next to him.
and her son, blanketed in her arms
as he stirred in his sleep.
She laid her head on the rails,
sobbing. As he reached to touch her
Her thoughts carried her halfway
across the trestle, to the boy
the train screamed by, helpless.
yelling as he ran towards her,
his voice slowly being
overtaken by the roar of the train.
The mome nt of dumb realization
... "That was so long a go," s he sa i d ,
stood still. Her eyes absorbed the trestle ,
and I could see the tear that told
the boy, the train, the river
t he sto ry fi l l her eye a nd rust
the trestles that crossed rivers and
below that flowed to her side.
In fear's attempt to gather up
all the memories that each time
b r ough t another tear, falling
what has foolishly been laid down, she
turned to run, not from the train,
and shattering like crystal in the past.
He was seven years old when she
but back -- back to where there was
t o ld him about Mother, the train,
more than one way to go .
a nd t he fisherme n who had saved him.
But step takes step a nd never gives
up the steps it has taken .

A. J . Krivak is a fres hman.
h istor y .

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J. Krivak

2

Since there is no line HD in the parabo la,
t he line DA is an obvi ou s c hoice. However, t here is no real necessity for t he new
contrivance since both the old and new
perform the same function. They merely
find the parameter DJ . The argument that
the new contrivance can be stated in terms
of given lines in the axial triangle,
whereas in the old contrivance the line DK
must be constructed, can be countered by
arguing the i mportance of DK . Without DK
the way back is lost! We will never know
how long Apollonius thought about that
fascinating fact before he decided to pull
his little joke.
We can only accept it
and stand in awe of this master of al 1
geometricians, Apollonius of Perga.

in a

The Trestle

His narrative poems arise from sto ries o f his family's

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�Substance in Book VIII of the Metaphysics
Lisa Tomasi

ov )

Being (To
has two senses:
the
individuality or " thisness " (To6E n
) ,
and the "what" (TL ~OTG) of the thing. By
the opening of Book VII Aristotle has
equated the what with substance (ouoLa
as the primary meaning of being and is
ready to explain what he thinks substance
is.
After explaining what substance is,
he will be able to answer other questions
which he lists in the second chapter;
What things are substances? Are there any
substances besides sensible ones (e.g.
forms of sensible substances)?
How do
sensible substances exist?
Is there any
nonsensible substance capable of separate
existence (i . e. any pure unsubstantial
forms)? But first, what is substance?
The four most immediate possibilities
are substrate, essence, universal, and
genus.
Aristotle devotes chapter 3 to a
discussion of substrate, chapters 4, 5, 6
to essence, and chapters 13-16 to universal and genus.
But what about the chapters not mentioned?
Chapters 7, 8, 9
discuss generation;
10, 11, 12 discuss
parts of definition, matter, and form
again;
and 17 concludes by saying that
substance is the cause (i.e. the form) by
virtue of which the matter is a definite
thing.
Although these latter chapters do
not inunediately appear to fall under any
~f
the
headings
essence,
substrate,
universa l, or genus, they · bear on the
discussion of substance.
The word that
repeatedly crops up in, and unites these
chapters as well as the first one, is
form.
Form is continually the subject of
Book VII.
It is not surprising that by

the final chapter substance- is form.
But
let's start at the beginning to see how
form is introduced.
The first possible meaning of substance
that
Aristotle
discusses
is
substrate. (uno~ELµEvov)
- that which
underlies all the predicates of anything.
There are three senses of substrate:
mattf'r ( uA.n ) , form ( µopqin ) , and their
combination.
Matter might be thought to
be substance since like substance it is
-always predicated, but never predicates .
But since substance has separability and
individuality - thisness - which matter
lacks, the two cannot be one.
Neither
could the combination of form and matter
qualify as substance at least until form
has been discussed .
And so begins the
discussion of form - under the heading of
essence.
Essence, roughly speaking, is that
which a thing is said to be by its own
nature. It does not include the whiteness
of a surface, nor its smoothness; neither
of these attributes is part of the definition of surface.
The essence of a thing
includes only what is necessary to define
it without actually using its name.
The
close relation between essence and definition implies what things can be said to
have essence: all things whose account is
a
definition.
Definitions
are
those
accounts which do not involve the predication of one thing of another.
Therefore
only species of a genus can have definition and essence in the primary sense.
That is, only substances have unqualified
essence.

Lisa Tomasi, an Annapolis senior, wrote this paper for Miss Brann's preceptorial on
Aristotle's Metaphysics.

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parts:
form and matter. Neither part is
With
this
conclusion,
Aristotle
itself generated1
generation is their
excludes such things as snubness from the
combination.
That form is not generated
category of substance.
Snub means snub
but is the same in the generator and the
nose.
The word involves the name of its
. generated are Aristotle's first points
subject (nose) _ and cannot be explained
about form with regard to generation. He
apart from it. For this reason it cannot
also speaks as if form and essence are the
be included in those things whose account
same thing in several places:
"The thing
is a definition.
It is not a substance,
in the sense of form or essence is not
and has no essence, unless qualifiedly.
generated." (1032bl).
Thus far the arguments about essence
But perhaps there remains a differhave not shown whether essence is subence between essence and subst ance , sinc e :
stance.
But at least we conclude from
them that substances alone, in the primary ·"By substance without matter I mean the
essence."
(1032b15) ..
Aristotle's first
sense,
have
essence.
In
chapter
6
inquiry into substance was form or matter
Aristotle approaches the identification of
or both. Now he seems to be claiming that
a thing's essence and its substance by way
it is both matter and form or essence of their identification with the particuunless he thinks at least some substance
lar thing itself.
If it could be shown
actually is without matter.
But that
that a particular thing is its own eswould imply that forms exist of themselves
sence, and that substance is the same as
independently
of
matter.
He
clearly
the particular thing, the rest would
argues against that being the case. It is
follow.
Is the particular thing the same
impossible,
since
then
an
individual
as its essence? Terms denoting the uni?n
composed of form and mat-t:-er must itself
of a subject with an accident cannot be
contain another individual,
the form.
the- ·same as their essence since a def ini ':""
Generation of individual composites would
tion does not include accidents.
But
be ·impossible if each form was its own
terms denoting unpredicated subjects are
individual. "Form means 'of such a kind:'
the same as their essence, according to
1
it is not a definite individual, but we
the following arguments.
produce or generate from the individual
First, if a thing is separate from
something 'of such a kind;' and when it is
its essence that thing will be unknowable,
generated it is an individual 'of such a
since we know things by knowing their
kind.'" (1033b23)
Thus form or essence
essence.
Also, if we could separate a
seems to be more and more identified with
thing from its essence, we could next
the "whatness" - substance.
It describes
separate that essence (as a thing) from
the nature of each thing, but not its
its own essence, and so on to infinity.
individuality, for many things share a
Therefore in the case of primary and
Form cannot by itself be
common form.
self- subsistent
terms,
the
individual
substance, however, since substance is
thing is the same as its essence.
that which exists independently1 form does
Aristotle does not conclude from this
not.
that substance and essence are one, since
Next Aristotle takes up a discussion
he has not argued that the individual
of definition.
It is an enlargement upon
thing is the same as its substance.
his earlier explanation of definition in
Rather he seems to leave this train of
its relation to essence. Definition is of
thought behind in order to discuss form
the form: it is divided into parts which
from a different viewpoint
that of
correspond to the parts of the form of the
generation.
subject. Matter can compose parts of the
Generation, whether by nature, art,
concrete subject, but not of the form.
or accident, is always by something, out
These material parts are posterior to the
of something, and into something. By the
whole1 the parts that compose the ·definiform of sphere, bronze is generated into a
tion, and the essence which it describes,
bronze sphere.
Therefore, that which is
are prior to the whole.
These latter
generated is always divisible into two

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�one rather than many indi~iduals. Secondparts refer to ' the universal since only
ly the universal is always the predicate
the universal can be defined.
The conof a subject, while the substance is never
crete subject, with its material parts,
a predicate of a subject.
cannot be defined.
Thus essence is the
Neither can the universal be sub"what" of substance - the definable part.
stance in the sense of being part of a
The .material which makes the individual is
sub~. ect' s
essence.
'Animal' might be
not included in the definition.
considered a substance which is part of a
The importance of matter in the
man's essence. But then the substance man
discussion of substance as essence comes
contains the "substance" animal .
But
forward in the 11th chapter: "to dispose
since animal is a universal it cannot be
of the matter is going too far; for some
prior
to
substance.
Thus
substances
things are presumably a particular form in
cannot be composed of other substances.
a particular matte r."
(1036b23)
The
Especially since each substance is itself
material
parts
are
in
the
concrete
an individual, there is no way to unite
substance, even though they are excluded
from the formula of the substance . Things · one substance to another or to include one
in another.
which do not have any material
(for
These conclusions lead Aristotle into
example, crookedness) therefore are the
a difficulty which he admits at the close
same as their essence;
but material
of the chapter. That is, since substance
things cannot be.
cannot be composed of universals, and only
There remains to be discussed yet
universals can be defined, it would seem
another aspect of definition - its unity.
that :;ubst.ance:; &lt;n&gt;=&gt; undefinable .
But
Aristotle asks:
what constitutes the
substance must be definable since it is
unity of a thir.g of which we say that the
the "whatness" of every being .
f ormu la is a definition? First of all a
Aristotle does not need to argue
defin it ion of a species ·consists of the
against the fou rth alternative meaning of
name of t he genus a nd at least one
substance, the genus.
This argument is
dif ferentia.
These parts form a whole
included in that of the universal, since
because they have no existence apart from
the genus is a universal.
The unive rsal
one another.
Each differentia specifies
argument applies as well to Plato's Forms.
what form the genus has taken in the case
For either the Form of animal must be
of the species being defined . The genus
different in man than in horse, or man and
is as matter to the dif ferentia which give
horse will have the same substance. If it
it form. Neither part can exist except as
is different in each case of animal, it
a part of the whole object; the names for
cannot exist outside o f the individuals as
each part can make sense only as pa rts of
a separate unity. And certainly, man and
the whole definition.
horse cannot have the same substance if
Each dif ferentia presupposes the one
they are to be different individuals.
before it.
"Two-footedness" presupposes
Thus of the four possible substances,
"footed". It is the last differentia that
genus and universal have been denied,
is most simply the definition of the thing
substrate in so far as it is matter has
s ince it includes all the rest. This last
also been denied, while form and essence
· is the ultimate specification of the form
remain.
Aristotle's last chapter takes
of the subject being defined.
Aristotle
yet another tack at explaining how form
calls this form the substance .
and essence are substance.
In chapter .13, Aristotle take·s up the
Substance is a principle and a cause.
question of wh~ther or not the universal
We ask: why does this bronze sphere exist
is substance.
He concludes that it is
not, for the following reasons. Substance - what is the cause of this bronze sphere?
its substance is the cause.
is that which . gives each inaividual its We answer:
uniqueness; the universal is that which is But we still do not know what is meant by
common to many things.
If individual s substance because we have not asked the
We must ask instead:
shared a common substance, they would be question properly.

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why is this bronze spherical - what is the
cause of the sphericalness in the bronze?
And answer: the form of the sphere in the
material bronze is the cause.
Then the

substan.ce is 'the- forl'D1n the material. It
is that which causes the material to be an
.individual thing.

Cicy Blocks
Richard E. Miller

Drunk

Father has hurled poor Ganymede from his quarters,

carel~ssly sweeping long bolts of lightening from h~s unmade ~ed.

1

These hissing threads unravel, kink and explode against the night s canvas,
while you and I, huddled around the embers of our past,.
reach across the invading blackness with words and stories
to warm, to reassure.
wrap myself in heaven's cloak,
trailing clouds and stars behind my cape of silver night.
Flying above the reaching fingers of our fence,
I enter your world; we spoke of travel,
the--jewel you found on sleeping Italy's breast,
street violence that drove you into the gardens to hide,
children sailing boats on the pond.
Encouraged, I chop further into this jungle,
through fields, thickets of memories,
seeking the colored, alphabetized blocks that found you.
I walk into this city
I

which crumbles, recoiling in fear as the drunkard relinquishes his hold;
household lights up, refrigerator hums to life:
power back on.
Behind the security of carefully replaced masks
we grope in empty wells for something to say.
Peeking through the clearing storm,
stars shine down on silent houses,
losing the struggle with buzzing street lamps
for night's domain.

Richard Miller a senior; this poem is part of a set entitled "Offering", for which
he received the Baird Award this year .

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�A Translation of Valery's ''Palme"
John Tracy

Barely veiling the brilliance
of his awesome grace,
an angel sets before me
soft bread and smooth milk.
His eye forms a sign,
the hint of a prayer
that calls to my vision:
--Calm, calm, rest calm!
Recall the burden of a palm
bearing the ponderance of its gifts.

De sa gr~ce redoutable
Voilant
peine l'~clat,
Un ange met sur ma table
Le pain tendre, le lait plat;
Il me fait de la paupiere
Le signe d'une priere
Qui parle
ma vision:
-Calme, calme, reste calme!
Connais le poids d'une palme
Portant sa profusion!

For its form is fulfilled
as it bows in accord
with the abundance of its wealth.
Its weighty fruit becomes its bonds .
See how it sways,
and how this pliant thread,
dividing the present from the past,
separates without ceremony
the allure of the earth
from the weight of the firmament.

Pour autant qu'elle se plie
A l'abondance des biens,
Sa figure est accomplie,
Ses fruits lourds sont ses liens.
Admire comme elle vibre,
Et comme une lente fibre
Qui divise le moment,
/
'
Departage sans mystere
L'attirance de la terre
Et le poids du firmament!

This fair mediatrix,
rocking between shade and sun,
recalls the sibyl
in her wisdom and her slumber.
The ample pa lm r ocks r ound
place;
never to be wearied
with hellos or goodbyes.
How noble, how tender,
how worthy is it to await
the hand of the gods.

Ce bel arbitre mobile
Entre l'ombre et le soleil,
Simule d'une sibylle
La sagesse et le sommeil.
Auteur d'une m~me place
L'ample palme ne se lasse
Des appels ni des adieux ...
Qu'elle est noble, qu'elle est tendre!
Qu'elle est digne de s'attendre
A la seule main des dieux!

about

a

a

one

L'or l~ger qu'elle murmure
Sonne au simple doigt de l'air,
Et d'une soyeuse armure.
Charge 1 1 fune du desert.

The delicate gold it whispers
rings through the purity of the air,
and fills the desert's soul
with its silken weave.

John Tracy, currently a senior in Annapolis, wrote this translation for his Junior
Language tutorial.

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It sends forth to the desert winds
which spray it with grains of sand
an everlasting voice
serving it as oracle,
and imagining to announce the miracle
its burden is to sing.

Une voix imperissable,
Qu'elle rend au vent de sable
Qui l'arrose de ses grains,
A soi-~me sert d'oracle,
Et se flatte du miracle,
Que se chantent les chagrins.

Yet between sand and sky
it stands unaware
that each day dawns
to make its honey
of a sweetness measured
by a divine time, a time
not keeping count of days,
but concealing them well
in an essence where it acquires
all the _
fragrances of love.

Cependant qu'elle s'ignore
Entre le sable et le ciel,
Chaque jour qui luit encore
Lui compose un peu de miel.
Sa douceur est mesuree
Par la.divine duree
Qui ne compte pas les jours,
Mais bien qui les dissimule
Dans un sue ou s'accumule
Tout l'arome des amours.

If sometime you despair,
or if, despite your tears,
revered rigor labors
under a shade of languor,
do not accuse a sage
of being miserly
who prepares such gold and influence.
For through this solemn sap
eternal hope climbs
to its maturity!

Parfois si l'on d~sespere,
Si l'adorable rigueur
Malgre tes larmes n'opere
Que sous ombre de langueur,
A
N'accuse pas d'etre avare
.
.
,
Une Sage qui prepare
Tant d'or et d'autorit~:
Par la s~ve solennelle
Une esp~rance ~ter~elle
Monte
la maturit'!

These days which seem to you empty
and lost to the universe
have thirsty roots
which work the deserts
with select and hairy substance
and through the darkness delve
never resting til they've reached
the very bowels of the earth
in search of the deep waters
the summits do require.

Ces jours qui te semblent vides
Et perdus pour l'univers
Ont des racines avides
Qui travaillent les d~serts.
La substance chevelue
Par les tenebres elue
Ne peut s'arr~ter jamais,
Jusqu'aux entrailles du monde,
De poursuivre l'eau profonde
Que demandent les sonunets.

Patience, patience,
patience amid the blue!
Within each seed of silence
lies the hope of ripened fruit!
The gladsome prize shall come!
A dove, a breeze,
a gentle rustling,
a woman seeking rest,
shall let loose this rain
at which you fall to your knees!

Patience, patience,
Patience dans l'azur!
Chaque atome de silence
Est la chance d'un fruit m~r! .
Viendra l'heureuse surprise:
Une colombe, la brise,
L'~branlement le plus doux,
Une fenune qui s'appuie,
Feront tomber cette pluie
'
.
Ou l'on se Jette "a genoux l

Let a nation now fall,
Palm, . . . They may not withstand!

,,,
/
Qu'un peuple 'a present s'ecroule,
Palme! ..• irr~sistiblement!

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�Dans la poudre qu'il se roule
Sur les fruits du firmament!
Tu n'as pas perdu ces heures,
Si l~g~re tu demeures
Apres ces beaux abandons;
Pareille
celui qui pense
Et dont l'ame se depense
A s'accro1tre de ses dons!

In .the dust let them roll
among the fruits of the firmament!
You have not lost these hours
If you do linger awhile
amid the remains of these abandonings
like he who reflects, and
whose soul's sole concern
lies in his gifts' in c rease!

Jonathan Antonio Edelman

a

Notes to the translation:
The initial difficulty of the translation of ·the poem was purely of my own
invention.
I
struggled to provide a
smooth beginning to the poem, but upon
closer
examination
of
the
French,
I
realized that this was uncalled for.
The
angel interrupts, or rather bursts into
the poet's thoughts; there is no smooth
introduction in · the poem.
"De ~ grace
redoutable.
. " begins in mid-sentence,
and eminates to its beginning
"Un ange
met sur ma table" much like a pebble cast
in a pool fo r ms ripples eminating from the
focus of the stone's splash.
The bril liance of the angel is immediately contrasted to the simplicity of its offe rings, and the exhortation of its eyes.
Its appearance is a disturbance, but its
eyes bid the poet "reste calme".
Its
annunciation recalls images -oft.he poet
whose work becomes a burden like the
burden of ,. a palm laden with ripe fruit;
his work nearly completed is most heavy on
his mind, most burdensome, most tiresome.
The image of the palm is designed to
comfort the poet by showing him the
necessity of this burdensome time.
The second and third stanzas invoke
the time and timeless image of the palm as
it stands as mediatrix between the earth
and heaven.
The palm becomes a pendulum
whose fruits form the bob, and whose stalk
forms the thread.
Its incessant swayings
recall images of sibyls; just as the sibyl
sits fixed within her temple, the palm is
set upon the sands never to move from the
focus of its rocking. They await the hand
of the gods, each anchored by ito . ardor.

The Breath of Kings:
On the Tragedy of King Richard the Second

The fourth stanza compares the gentle
murmuring of the palm to the oracles of
the sibyl, and may be compared to the song
of the poet whose gentle force can enchant
the burdensome from man.
The fifth stanza returns us to the
palm fruits and the seeming timelessness
of their maturation.
Their sweetness is
measured not by time, but by that which
conceals time within itself. This compul sion of time, in the sixth stanza, seems
to be the catalyst for the angel's opening
exhortation, "Calme, calme, rest e calrne ! " .
Fruition must ~measured ~this~low
(saplike) progression of divine tim~. The
poet despairs and his days seem slow and
empty.
In the seventh stanza, these empty
days seem so because of the depths that
t~eir roots must delve to provide food for
their summits, just as the palm must delve
its roots to provide food for its fruits;
time falls second to the concerns of
ripening fruit.
In the eighth stanza,
the angel
soo t he s t h e p o et with 't s wh i spers of
"patience".
This echoes the "calme" of
the
first
stanza .
The silences,
the
"jours vides", become seminal, possessing
the "chance d' un fruit m~r".
They shall
fall
naturally,
or
from
some
other
occur~nce:
"une colombe, la brise, une
femme" or perhaps the angel-of the f i.rst
stanza shall cause the shower of ripened
fruit.
The angel c omforts the p o et with
the hope that the seeming empty times are
not in vain if we recall the necessity of
slow time for ripe fruit.

The Tragedy of King Richard the
Second speaks of a second fall of man,
caused by an anointed king who breaks his
bond with his kinsman. Though pointing to
a resolution, Richard II itself offers no
solution.
It is a study of a breakdown
between language itself, and what language
addresses.
This breakdown is concurrent
with the decay of a theological-political
order which binds men not only to each
other but to God.
At the center of the
conflict lies the succession of Kingship,
from Richard to Bolingbroke, men who are
in many ways incommensurate in speech and
action.
Shakespeare juxtaposes Richard's
use of language with Bolingbroke's by
showing how each uses titles, oaths and
bonds, and by showing how each regards the
significance of the pardons he bestows.
Although allusions to the Fall occur
throughout the play, the two major discussions of the Fall occur in Gaunt's
speech (II, i, 31ff) and the garden scene
(III, iv). These sections are particularly important in understanding the movement
of the play, for they are not historical;
that is, not subject to any limitations
other than those which Shakespeare de termined.
These scenes act as a commentary on the play, indicating perspectives
from which to consider the events ~
Gaunt's speech in part deals with the
fall of England from its sacred position
in the world.
Just before he dies, Gaunt
considers
himself
"a
prophet
new
inspi r ed" .
(II , i , 31)
He speaks of
England
as
"this
other
Eden,
demi-paradise...
This
blessed
plot ...

John Edelman is
Sophomore essay.

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currently

a

senior

teeming womb of royal kings... Renowned
for their deeds as far from home for
Christian service and true chivalry as •. .
blessed Mary's Son ... "
(II, i, 42ff).
However, this "other Eden" verges on a
Fall.
For rather t,han · conquer other
nations in the name of Chri.st, England has
set upon itself.
The garden scene further links the
succession of kings to the story of Adam.
The gardener compares the garden he tends
to the "garden" of England.
Unlike Adam
or the gardener, the king has not tended
his garden.
Instead Bolingbroke performs
this task:
"The weeds [Bushy, Green, and
Wiltshire] which his
[Richard's) broad spreading
leaves did shelter,
That seem'd in eating him to hold
him up,
Are plucked up root and all by
~olingbroke--"

(III, iv, 50ff)

The King ought to be an Adam to England,
yet Richard is unable to tend his garden.
The Queen rebukes the gardener and refers
t o the fall of Richard as " a second f all
of cursed man." (III, iv, 76 ) The fall of
Eng land results from Richard's breach of
faith with his subjects.
In seizing the
properties of Lancaster, Richard undermines an order which links the nation to
God.
Allusions to Christ and the Passion
are
numerous
in
the
play ,
R ·char d• s
comparing himself to Christ being the most
. frequent.
That so dishonest a king can

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"The Breath of Kings"

is his

�ref er to himself as a Christ can be
understood in light of his seeing himself
as blameless and martyred. Richard's lack
of awareness concerning the implications
of his action exemplifies this .
Though
Richard
clearly
sees
others'
transgressions and the implications of these
acts, he does not realize that he acts
dishonestly .
"Revolt our subjects? That we
cannot mend;
They breach their faith to God as
well as me."
(III, i i lOlff)
Bolingbroke, on the other hand, is
quite conscious of the implications of his
actions, both against men and the crown.
This awareness is what allows Bolingbroke,
unlike Richard, to be essentially poli tically mined, a quality necessary for good
kingship.
The comparison of Richard to Christ
further suggests the position of king
Richard in relation to God, as God's
anointed, tending his people.
However,
the corrupt Richard is incapable of the
concerns for his flock that a Christ must
have .
Bolingbroke is like Christ in some of
those aspects in which Richard is deficient.
He comes to right wrongs, and
whether he knows it or not, takes the sin
which must be committed, that is, the
demise of Richard, unto himself. He dies
in the Jerusalem room, rather than in
Jerusalem.
The juxtaposition of some of the
characteristics of Adam, Christ, and good
kingship in the two men is part of a
conflict · in which neither Richard nor
Bolingbroke is the solution, for each is
incomplete.
The resolution of the conflict must occur in a man who is the
synthesis of the best elements of the two.
A story concerning the second fall,
because it occurs after Christ, must be a
political drama.
Neither God, His first
creation, nor His Son is directly present
in the world.
Instead, the king who is
both divine and political is present. The
concern of Richard II lies in the welfare
of the State, for the proper governing of

God's kingdom on earth is at stake. . A
second fall has to do with the identity of
the king as man, and his relation to God
and the State. Eventually it becomes the
story
of how
a
legitimate
king
is
re-established and what kind of man he
must be.
Richard's
kingship
is
discussed
mainly by Richard himself, though also by
the Bishop of Carlisle, Gaunt and York.
In I, ii the Duchess of Gloucester confronts Gaunt with his failure to speak out
against the King's involvement in the
death of Gloucester.
Gaunt replies that
it is not his place to correct the misdeeds of the king:
"God's is the quarrel; for God's
substitute,
His deputy anointed in His sight,
Hath causes his death; the which
if wrongfully
Let heaven revenge; for I may
never lift
an angry arm against his
minister."
(I, ii, 37ff)
The problem of correcting Richard,
culminating in his deposition, is more
complicated than merely acting against him
because of his position in relation to
God.
Action
against
the
king
is
sacrilege, and the effects of such a move
would be devastating. Carlisle speaks to
this problem in IV:
"What subject can give sentence on
his King?
And who sits here that is not
Richard's subject? •..
And shall the figure of God's
majesty,
His captain, steward, deputy-elect,
Anointed, crowned, planted many
years,
Be judged by subject and inferior
breath,
And he himself not present?"
If this were to occur, Carlisle continues,
England would be called Golgotha.
Thus
the deposition of Richard, is a "heinous,
black and obscene" deed. (IV, i, 121ff)
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takes the crown from him. The problem of
&lt;leposi tion
is
developed
in Richard's
speech in III, ii:
"Not all the water in the rough
rude sea
Can wash the balm off an anointed
King;
The breath of worldly men cannot
depose
The deputy elected by the Lord"
(III, ii, 54-57ff )
The course that Bolingbroke takes is to
orchestrate events so as to put Richard in
a position where Richard himself must
abdicate. Although this technically frees
Bolingbroke from responsibility for the
deposition itself,
it is questionable·
whether the king can abdicate legitimately. For, it is not clear whether Richard
is
a
"worldly"
man.
The Abbott of
Westminster, Carlisle and Aumerle in IV,
i, refuse to acknowledge the validity of
the succession of Bolingbroke and plot
against him.
Concurrent with the breakdown of a
social order, words change in relation to
that which they address.
Because he is
something of a poet, Richard's interest
lies in how the moment can be made into

words.

this.

(I, i, 152-159ff)
Bolingbroke's use of metaphor is much
more straightforward.
His diction
is
muscular and rough in comparison with
Richard's fine diction.
Prior to the
entrance of the King, (III, iii, 54ff) the
Duke utters one of his few lengthy metaphors in the play. However, he carefully
roots the imagery in the matter which he
describes:
"Be he the fire, I'll be the
yielding water:
The rage be his, whilst on the
earth I rain
My waters; on the earth and not on
him."
(III, iii, 55-60ff)
In Act III, iii, 176ff Northumberland asks
Richard to meet Bolingbroke:
"My lord, in the base court he doth
attend
To speak with you; may it please you
to come down?"
Richard's response exploits the idea of
corning down into the "base court", where
he will surrender himself to Bolingbroke:
"Down, down I come, like glist'ring
Phaeton,
Wanting the manage of unruly jades.

In the base court?

The greater his despair, the more

Base court where

kings grow base,
poetic he becomes, and the more detached
To come at traitors' calls, and do
his words are from the world.
In I, i,
them grace!
Richard calls Bolingbroke and Mowbray into
In the base court? Come down? Down
his presence:
court! Down King!"
" ... face to face,
When Bolingbroke kneels before Richard,
And frowning brow to brow, ourselves
will hear
the king still clings to the pun:
The accuser and accused freely speak.
Fair cousin, you debase your
High-stomach'd are they both, and
princely knee
full of ,ire,
To make the base earth proud with
In rage deaf as the sea, hasty as
kissing it ... "
fire."
Richard is interested in the stories
(I, i, 15-19ff)
that will be told of his experience as
The opposition in his speech describes the · tragic rather then in the experience
moment eloquently.
It is almost too
itself.
In III, ii, line 150ff and v, i,
poetic. The emphasis is on the opposition
line 40f f, Richard speaks of telling sad
stories about the deposing of kings.
He
of words and metaphors rather than the
is concerned with how the event is mani confrontation
itself.
The
seiffested in words and with the effect of the
containedness of the metaphor is curious;
words on an audience rather than with the
it is as if the metaphor takes over in
nature of the event itself.
relation to itself rather than the words
The modes of speaking of Richard and
in relation to that of which they speak.
Bolingbroke are manifest in the manner in
The "physician" metaphor is an example of

3.5

,,

�which they name and .t he importance they
attach to a name.
The act of naming
speaks to both an object's movement in the
physical world by virtue of its name, and
the name's movement in language.
When
these two aspects are severed, the name no
longer corresponds to the complete nature
of a named object.
Bolingbroke's use of names is characterized by his manipulation of different
titles in order to justify what he must
accomplish.
However, Bolingbroke recognizes that an object has to have its own
character without a name.
Richard takes
more
seriously what
the
name
itself
signifies in the physical world. When he
abdicates he is not simply disturbed
because he is no longer king, but also
because he no longer has a name. Without
his title, Richard has little sense' of
himself apart from "untitled."
A striking example of Bolingbroke' s
use of names occurs in II, 111 when
Berkeley must deliver a message to the
Duke.
Bolingbroke refuses to accept the
message
unless
Berkeley
addresses
Bolingbroke as "Lancaster".
Berk: "My Lord of Hereford, my
message is to you.
Bal:
My Lord, my answer is to Lancaster;
And I am come to seek that
name in England;
And I must find that title in
your tongue,
Before I make reply to aught
you say."
(II, iii, 69-73ff)
Bolingbroke
is
concerned
with
being
addressed as Lancaster because it is that
name which lends legitimacy to his return
to England.
In the subsequent encounter
with York, Bolingbroke responds to York's
chastising by calling attention to his
title:
"As I was banished, I was banish'd
Hereford;
But as I come, I come for Lancaster.
(II, iii, 112-113ff)
In Bolingbroke's message to Richard,
in III, iii, Bolingbroke refers to himself
as "Henry Bolingbroke" rather than the
preferred
"Lancaster".
In
order
to

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acquire an audience with the King, he uses
a title that Richard will accept.
The
Duke's usage is conventional, in that he
will call himself by a given name according to how the name facilitates his
movement.
Richard's
concern with names and
usage
is
less
conventional
than
Bolingbroke's because his identity, his
sense of self, is bound in a name.
In
III, ii, Richard is shocked by news which
Salisbury bears, that twenty thousand of
the king's men have fled.
The King
despairs and Aumerle tells him to remember
who he is.
Richard composes himself by
remembering not only that he is King but
that his name is King:
"I have forgot myself: am I not King?
Awake thou coward majesty! Thou
sleepest.
Is not the King's name twenty
thousand names?
Arm, arm, my name!
(III, ii, 83 -86ff )
Richard is quite conscious of the meaning
of his title.
As long as he remembers
what he is call~d, he is secure.
Richard's
concern
for
his
name
becomes more pronounced as he nears his

demise.

He refers to himself in the third

person, not as "King Richard" but simply
as "the King". His actions are subject to
his title:
"What must the King do now? - - must he loose
The name of King? O God's name,
let it go."
(III , iii, 143-146ff)
At th.e conclusion of this speech, he
refers
to
Bolingbroke
as
"King
Bolingbroke" and himself as '!Richard". In
a
sense,
self-indulgent
Richard
has
already
imagined
himself
as
deposed,
unnamed himself from kingship and acts
according to his lack of title.
In IV, i, Richard abdicates.
His
speech essentially consists in un-naming
himself. Anything more than un-naming and
disavowing his decrees (such as naming his
crimes and thereby himself as a criminal) ,
is out of the question for Richard.
At
the conclusion of the speech, rather than
refer to himself with a title, he prefaces

his name with a negation to title:
"God save King Har ry, unking'd
Richard says."
(IV , i, 220ff)
The problem of re-naming himself without a
title to define him becomes central to
Richard's
speech.
Northumberland
petitions Richard to name his crimes:
North: "My LordRich:
No Lord of thine, thou haught
insulting man,
Nor no man's Lord; I have no
name, no title,
No, not that name was given
me at the font
But tis usurp'd; ...
And know not now what name to
call myself!
( IV, i, 253-259ff)
It
is
in
part
due
to
Richard's
self-indulqence that he is insulted by
Northumberland's naming him "My Lord," for
Richard enjoys the role of nameless,
deposed King.
No doubt this is linked to
his interest in language and the manipulations he can effect with the words.
However, in part, it reflects Richard's
true d is orientation and sorrow in his
loss, which for Richard is a loss of

identity.

Without his title,

he is

"no

man's
Lord" .
Without
his
kingship,
Richard feels that he is nothing.
The abdiction speech is typical of
Richard's tendency to negate rather than
affirm. A good king must not only negate,
but affirm in order to command.
He must
be able to give as well as take back .
Unable to make amends between the quarrelling Bolingbroke and Mowbray,
Richard
comments:
"We were not born to sue, but to
command;
Which since we cannot do to make
you friends,
Be ready, as your lives shall
answer it .... "
(I, i, 196ff)
Richard
is
both
an
ineffective
and
incomplete king,
for he cannot unite
Bolingbroke and Mowbray by means of his
word.
In Act IV, when Richard abdicates the
throne, he must do it with his own words.

Again, he is the only person who can
remove himself from his position.
However, it is not clear who can legitimately
name Henry
as
King.
It
is
through
Richard's characteristic negation that he
gives up the title. When Bolingbroke asks
Richard if he is "contented to resign the
crown", Richard begins his abdication .
His language marks a departure from the
connections of words to things, to a
connection of words to words. This occurs
when Richard is about. to give up his
title, a word which is his most significant connection to the world and to
himself .
Curiously, his speech begins
with a pun:
"I no; no I; for nothing I must be;
Therefore no no, for I resign to
thee.
(IV, i, 201-202ff)
Full of obvious negation, the first words
are ambiguous.
Because the written word
is a symbol for a sound and the play is
meant to be spoken, many meanings can be
derived from these lines.
"I" can by "ay"
or "eye".
The word "no" can be negation
o r "know". Thus, the first line can mean
"Yes, no; no, yes" indicating that Richard
is ambivalent about resigning. The fourth
word "yes" is the answer to the question
Bolingbroke asks: he must resign. Another
meaning might be: "I know no I", that . he
must be nothing; without his name, he
cannot know who he is.
Another meaning
could be : I know no 'yes'".
That is to
say, Richard, because he is nothing, can
affirm nothing .
The next line is also
ambiguous .
It can be understood to be a
simple
repetition
of
"no" .
Because
Richard must resign there can be no "no"
to
Bolingbroke's
question.
Anothe r
meaning could be: "therefore know 'no' for
T
resign
to
thee";
Richard
tells
Bolingbroke to "know negation" and "Now
mark me, how I will undo myself." Richard
proceeds to negate his kingship.
Richard gives his crown "from off my
head", his sceptre "from my hand" and his
kingly pride "from out of . my heart".
He
then washes "away" his balm and gives
"away" his crown with his own tears and
hands.
His tongue denies his "sacred
state" and his breath releases himself

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�from "all duty's rites".
He forswears,
foregoes, and denies.
Richard's conception of language, in
which the name of an object has more
bearing on the object than the object on
the name, makes words which refer to·
appearance rather than essence affect him.
Flattery is the use of words in order to
please, rather than to speak truly.
In
II, Gaunt tells Richard that he has been
wounded by flatterers:
"And though too careless a patient as
thou art
Commits't thy anointed body to the
cure
Of those physicians that first
wounded thee.
A thousand flatterers sit within
thy crown .•. "
(II, i, 97-lOOff)
Flattery has caused an illness which
overtakes Richard.
Richard's "illness" is manifested in
his inability to hear good counsel.
For
instead of hearing good counsel, his ears
are "stopp'd with other flattering sounds,
as praises, of whose taste the wise are
fond".
.&lt; II, i 17ff) That is, the wise
are made "fond" by the "lascivious meters"
of flattery.
The flatterers of the King - Bushy,
Green, and the Earl of Wiltshire - are
sentenced by Bolingbroke in III, i. They
have "misled a Prince, a royal King •..
made a divorce betwixt his Queen and him."
They have made the King "misinterpret"
Bolingbroke.
Misinterpretation
is
a
breakdown in communication, in which the
hearing of the words is correct but the
intention
is
misconstrued.
These
f la~terers cause Bolingbroke to "sigh" his
"English breath in foreign clouds". That
is in banishment, which Mowbray refers to
as "speechless death which robs my tongue
of breathing native breath."
In other
words, the real punishment in banishment
has to do with speech.
To be divorced
from one's native tongue and unable to
understand
and
be
understood
is
banishment.
In II, Northumberland states
that
the
King
is
"basely
led
by
flatterers", and that he is no longer
himself. Flattery not only causes Richard

to dissociate himself from his subjects
but from his kingship.
Pardoning and the use of pardons
indicate the relation of language to God,
for pardons must be made in relation to
God in order to be meaningful.
In the
breakdown of society's relation to God
through its relationship to the King, the
meaning of the pardon loses its clarity.
Before
York's
discovery
of
Aumerle' s
involvement in the plot against King
Henry, Aumerle asks his father to pardon
him from showing his father the letter he
carries. York does not pardon him. Upon
reading the letter, he goes to the King to
seek condemnation of his son.
Aumerle
arrives before York and asks the King to
pardon him before the nature of his crime
is disclosed.
The king consents on the
condition that the
crime was merely
intended
rather
than
committed.
Bat
because · plotting against. the crown is
treason , the pardon is not val id.
The
Duchess of York enters and refuses to rise
from her knees until the King pardons
"Rutland."
Pity must move the King to
pardon Rutland. The Duchess impresses the
importance of pardoning on the King: "No
word like 'pardon' for a King's mouths so
meet." (V, iii, 118) .
York continues to
protest and finally urges Henry to speak
the words in French: "Speak it in French,
King, say "pardonne moy'" (V, III, 119).
Even though the words are practically the
same, the meaning is different.
The
Duchess comments that·this sort of usage:
"Sets't the word itself against the word!"
(V ,iii, 122), for word is set against word
when the intended meaning and the accepted
meaning differ.
Henry does pardon Rutland.
But the
worth of the pardon is not clear.
Henry
is not a king by proper succession,
therefore pardons do not have their
original import because the King's relationship
to God
is precarious.
His
position is "King" rather than "rightful
King."
Henry's accession to the throne
introduces into politics the question of
the nature of "treason" if one's king is
not anointed.
Henry's pardon of Rutland
is conditional: "I shall pardon him as God
shall pardon me." (V, iii, 131) Henry's

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pardon of Rutland is contingent on his own
relation to God, that is, whether he has
been pardoned for his own usurpation and
treason against Richard.
The Duchess asks Henry to repeat his
pardon for :
"Twice saying "pardon" doth not
pardon twain,
But makes one pardon strong."
(V, iii, 132-133)
Speaking a pardon twice does not negate a
pardon, but strengthens it. This stand in
contrast to Richard's speech of negation .
The giving of pardons is necessary for a
king. After Henry repeats his pardon, the
Duchess calls him "a god on earth" (V,
111, 134).
For the Duchess, to pardon, a
king must be a divine giver of grace.
The problem with all the pardons in
Richard II lies in their undetermined
relationship to God. When Richard pardons
Mowbray it is unclear to Mowbray if, in
fact,
he
has
been
pardoned.
When
Bolingbroke pardons, it is unclear what
that means.
Oaths and bonds are perhaps the most
significant element of language which
loses meaning when the social order breaks
down.
When oaths are made but not kept,
the importance of language and one's word
is diminished in its relation to that
which it speaks. Oaths are made not only
in relation to physical things but also in
relation to God, for they are bound in
God .
Breaking
oaths,
therefore,
is
breaking a bond with God . Oaths and bonds
are essential to holding society together,
particularly a Christian society.
In Act I, scene i, the truth of what
Bolingbroke says rests on its relation to
heaven:
"Heaven be the record of my
speech".
This is characteristic of the
oaths in Richard II.
Their verity rests
in a bond with heaven.
In Act II, scene i Gaunt sees the
decay of England in the decay of its
bonds, for it was once: "bound with the
triumphant sea," but
"Is now bound in with shame,
With inky blots and rotten parchment
bonds."
(II, i, 61-64)

Its bond is not with God or the sea, it is
with shame and
on
"rotten parchment
bonds".
York tells the king that if he
seizes the Duke of Hereford's rights, he
is no longer himself, for he breaks the
bonds that insure his office:
"Be not thyself~ for now art thou a
King
But by fair sequence and
succession?"
(II, i, 198-199)
In breaking his bond with his subjects,
the king breaks his bond with God, and
thus the crown.
The King's theft of
Hereford's rights also indicates Richard's
lack of concern for succession which
stands in contrast to Henry's interest in
Hal.
In concert with Bolingbroke's mode of
speaking, his treatment of oaths is quite
literal. He is able to avoid breaking the
"letter" of the oath because the meaning
of the letter is ambiguous.
In act II,
scene iv, Northumberland claims:
"The
noble Duke hath sworn his coming is but
for his own." What exactly is "his own"
is unclear. However, it becomes England.
The beginning of Act IV is analogous
to Act I, scene i, in that Bolingbroke,
rather than Richard,
presides over a
conflict between nobles.
In contrast to
Richard's inability to deal with the
conflict in Act. I, even though the scene
is
characterized
by
verbal
chaos,
Bolingbroke
effectively
controls
the
quarrelling lords. There is no indication
which
lords are
speaking the
truth,
because oaths are meaningless in England's
fallen state.
When Richard abdicates he asks God to
pardon all oaths made to himself and to
keep all vows unbroken which are sworn to
God.
This separation of oaths made to
Richard from those made to God accentuates
the separation of Richard from his past
and from God. Oaths to a King are meaningful only when the King has a relation
to God.
The most startling example of the
change in the relation of language . to what
it speaks in respect to oaths and bonds
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�his doublet.
This contrasts with York's
reference to his pledge to be loyal to
Henry earlier in that scene. Significantly, Aumerle's action occurs after Richard
has abdicated. The value of a verbal oath
is lost with the loss of an anointed King.
In order for Aumerle's bond to be valid,
he must carry it. Words are not significant unless written.
Even more striking
is the necessity for Aumerle' s taking of
the Sacrament (IV, i, 328ff) in order for
him to maintain secrecy.
One must not
merely swear, but partake in Holy Communion in order to be bound.
The only
link to God and true speech is theological.
The secular coDUDunity under God is
lost.
The culmination of Richard's separation from the world occurs in Act V.
Because he is alone, Richard is unable to
"compare this prison ..• unto the world".
He is unable to see how his isolation is
analogous to his isolation in the world.
Richard constructs a world from thought
and word.
In order to do this, he must
split himself into two parts: brain as
mother and soul as father to thoughts and
consequently words.
The naming of these
divisions is curious because the brain or

intellect is traditionally male and soul
female. This kind of reversal is characteristic of Richard in that"he is turning
the relationship of words and the world
inside-out.
The marriage of brain and
soul begets "a generation of still breeding thoughts".
In being a poet, Richard
is a begetter of words rather than flesh ,
and his lack of concern for succession is
a manifestation of this.
The world Richard creates mocks the
outside world, and is distinct from it.
It is a world of words and their relationships are of words to words.
Richard
names three orders of thoughts:
"the
better sort .•• intermix't with scruples",
those "tending to ambition", and "those
tending to content".
The first sort are described as
setting "the word itself against the
word". Considering the Biblical citations
he makes one would expect that "the Word"
would be set against "the flesh". However, for Richard there is no t~ue flesh in

his world nor true Word, but merely words.
The setting of word against word indicates
Richard's inability to see the complexity
of his position as King or ex-King, that
is, the culmination of Word and flesh in
his having been anointed King.
There is
no Word in Richard's flesh.
He is merely
named King. Richard as "unking'd Richard"
no longer has the name King and is merely
flesh. Yet, oddly, Richard's existence to
himself is an existence in words. Rather
than being the "Word made flesh " , that is,
God's anointed and agent by seeing justice
done in the flesh, Richard turns flesh
into words, and resides in a world where
words have more substance than flesh.
The "thoughts tending to ambition
.•. plot unlikely wonders".
Unable to
break through the prison to the outside,
his thoughts are unable to break out and
make real contact with the world.
They
are contained within him and "die in their
own pride".
"Thoughts tending to content flatter
themselves".
They are content because
they do not differ from others who bear a
similar burden.
Flattery contents them.
Thus, thoughts which have only incidental
connection to the outside world are buoyed
up by words which please and incur illness
rather than address the essence of the
situation.
Richard can be a King and wish he
were a beggar; from beggar he returns to
King. When he thinks of being banished by
Bolingbroke, he becomes nothing.
When
confronted by the man who causes his
.un-naming, instead of the Richard under
the mask of King, unking' d Richard appears. When stripped of the words and the
name of King, Richard finds himself little
more than words.
In Act II, scene i, line llff, Gaunt
speaks of the setting sun and the music at
the end of men's lives. None of Gaunt's
music comes through Richard's ears.
For
his ears have been stopp 'd by flattering
sounds.
For Gaunt, the "music at the
close, as the last taste of sweets, is
sweetest last ... "
For Richard, however,
when the sun is about to set for the last
time, the sun hears music as "sour-sweet"
because the time is not kept.
Richard

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takes the music inside himself and once
again,
creates a world in which his
interest is in the relation of words to
words, a relation more important than the
music itself.
However, it is from this
music that he finally calls into question
his acts and inability to hear. "I wasted
time, and now doth time waste me." (V, v,
49ff) Richard has become Bolingbroke's
"Jack o' the Clock".
A mannikin,
not
flesh nor word, but merely the mock of a
man which marks time.
It is not surprising that music
maddens Richard.
For he has become so
corrupt that he is unable to take the cure
which David administered to Saul: Music.
In his inside-out world, Richard's madness
is wisdom to Richard, and the first king's
cure is maddening to him.
Al though Richard I I has an ending,
the
conflicts
of
the
play
remain
unresolved.
Bolingbroke's succession and
Richard• s death mark change rather than
resolution.
Both the problems of his own
kingship
and
the
repercussions
of
Richard's deposition and death plague

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Bolingbroke throughout his reign.
In the
subsequent episodes of the Richarc,-Henry
cycle, the events of which the Bishop of
Carlisle foretells (IV, i, 114ff ) actually
occur.
As the society gets thrown into
greater disorder, so too, language suffers
a greater separation from that which it
speaks.
The Tragedy of King Richard the
Second not only speaks of an end, but
points to a beginning. Like Adam banished
from Eden, Richard cannot be reinstated,
nor can England be restored to its previ ous state.
As in the completion of the
Fall of Man by the coming of Christ, there
must come a man who in both word and deed
completes the fall of Richard by changing
the effect of the past and the meaning of
kingship.
This will occur three plays
later, when Hal makes the convoluted
speech of Falstaff his
own,
thereby
transforming it into a new speech.
With
it, Hal can make his faults into virtues.
For him, even wooing a French Queen in a
language not quite French brings a new
Queen for England.

�Willing but Weak
A Note on the Matthew Passion

Short Story
Liz Waldner

Elliott Zuckerman
Posole soaks in a bowl and makes little kissing
noises. This morning cats on the compost pile cried
musically--at, to, for? Is a preposition appropriate
here?
I am always so content in the mornings.

I

lay listening before I

What

fol lows

is

a

spelling - out

of

the

obvious.

It

is

presented

as

a

shapes in air

r eminder or review for students who have analyzed moments in the recitatives of

threading through ear, discerning whether not cats but
babies of our kind cried, at which I should have to go
out into the morning in bathrobe to be afraid at the
world uncontained by the ideal, to find babies crying
the waving strands of our singing on the compost pile.
Last night in the evening, in that high and
uninhabited place of empty house and dark window,
above the din of busyness, beneath the mountain with
storm at its head, headdress of cloud purple and blue,
a black- headed girl cried loudly over a low adobe wall
into the evening--at, to, for? I came walking beneath
her on the road below the wall and was stood before
her crying out over the wall into the evening not at,
not to, not for; neither to inquire nor to console,
although these rose in the throat: only crying might
go through air.
She cried and cried.
Only crying
could go through air.
All the empty houses with doors ajar admitting
wind and
spil 1 ing darkness:
inside the moment
stillness and around it the crunching of foot on
gravel, juniper and cedar threshing air; around it the
balloon-like journey of child- voice upward into first
dark. Far below and far behind it noise of car- going
and of dog.
A woman appeared and she walked into the yard of
the house of the crying girl in silence and she put
fist to door or to drawing of door on wall with no
window: no sound. She caught there bringing fist to
door, door to fist, wind going through crying girl
hair, and dirt, in the darkening wind.
Cloud, drawn
over all of our heads to the darker mountain, stayed.
The moment I rose to see cats a noise from the
kitchen.
Posole soaking in a bowl fell over the edge
in the kitchen where nobody was, in the white kitchen
full of light.
I lay back down as if told, not
knowing .

the Matthew Passion, and as an example for those who want to do so now. Closely
following the harmony where the music closely imitates the text -- or comments
on it -- can impress on the memory the motions of the progressions themselves.
The diction is technical, and the musical examples by themselves can tell
the story. Behind them lies the brief passage of Bach's music. And behind what
Bach does lies tonal music itself, the power of which, alluded to here, ought, I
think, to be an occasion of recurrent wonder.
The text is from the 4lst ve r se of the 26th chapter of Matthew, and it is
set by Bach in section 30 of the Passion, measures 7- 9 (page 49 of the Peters
vocal score) .
It is sung by Jesus himself, with his unique accompaniment of
strings:

Liz Waldner has

contr ibuted

awoke ,

several

42

pieces to

Energeia.

E~ - I

In the vocal part there is one tone
for each syllable.
If we elide the second
syllable of 'spirit', the standard English
translati on can repla ce the German word
for word -- with the important exception
of 'aber' ('but ' ) . The music depicts the
three aspects o f Jesus 's observation about
his disciples:
the willingness of the

spirit, the weakness of the fles h , and,
between them, the 'but'.
At the start o f measure 7 , G minor
has been established in a c a dence.
The
vocal line has dropped to a low B-f lat,
the mino r third of the triad, and (approp riate ly for the word 'fallet') the
lowest tone sung in this recitative.
The

Mr. Zuckerman, a tutor in Annapolis, contributed this piece as the first of several
comments on the Matthew Passion; further installments will appear in later issues of
Energeia.

43

�willingness of the spirit is shown in the
vocal line by the brightening of the minor
into the parallel major:

Again, harmonically one would expect the
following resolution
if there were no
'but':

wil-liJ
The . B- natural on 'willig ' is especially
strong because it is approached in the
ascent Cs) 1 2 i·
But
the
instrumental
bass
adds
another dimension. The willingness is not
only bright but expansive, because the
F- natural below turns the B-natural into
the upper tone of the tritone of C major:

The notation of the c hords in closed score
r eveals what has happened to all the
voices .
The F has descended · ' correctly'
to E . The B and the D are common tones to
both chords.
The surprise alteration is
the chromatic lifting of G to G- sharp -tone § of C is sharpened to become the
leading tone of A (minor) .
In Bach's
scoring the significant changes occur in
the
outer voices,
an
'expansion'
of
f. urther willingness :

In
the
surprise
resolution
that
follows the contradiction, the low F does
indeed go the half - ~tep downward to E:

/\
7

~~.3

~

The new dominant - seventh will
t ually r esolve normally:

It
is,
of
course,
a
dimin ished- seventh
chord,
the
'headless'
. tetrad, the most ambiguous .
It can be
accounted f or as pointing to E -- qr ,• in A
minor, dim vn 7 of v .
But. here it
(weakly) follows the chord it 'ought' to
p r ecede -- o r , to put it ano ther way in
the light of the subsequent return to the
v 7 , it interpolates itself as a st r iking
r eve r sal in the otherwise no r mal cadence
in A minor .
The 'weakness' , as we hea r
it, is strongly asserted .
The r e is anothe r way of viewing the
'wea k ' progression .
The
(first)
domi nan t - se ven t h of A mino r res olves ' co rrec tly' :

even-

~

But the E is not 3 of C major.
Instead
it is made the root of a major triad.
Moreover, since we have just heard the D's
of ' aber' , we hear the new chord as a
dominant- seventh:

And one expects the resolution outward to
the tonic of C :

but the diminished fifth below each of the
resolution tones are slipped in unde r neath :

--9-

~ -:).-&amp;-

~

~

[

+J

But the r e i s still ·the ' weakness' to be
accounted f o r.
The oute r vo i ce s e xpand a
half - step further :

Harmonically, the tones on 'willig'
constitute the last inversion (V 2 ) of the
dominant- seventh in C:

Up to 'abe r ' , the voc al l i ne
ascended .
'das
Duri.ng
Fle is c h
schwach' i t now descends twice , in
minor thirds :

~-1 ~

h as
ist .
two

The D's of 'aber' thus belong to two
different dominant- seventh chords,
one
. pointing· to C and the other td its relative minor:

l;z'·lO

The O's of 'aber' belong to that chord and
seem to complete it:

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The chord on 'schwach', outlined by the
A,
and
is
fifth
D- sharp
diminished
completed with another diminished fifth,
F- sharp and C:

The ascent between them is the interval of
the dimished fourth .
There will be more
to say about this interval in late r
inst~llments of these comments.

45

�A harmonic summary shows that the
willingness sets out to be a cadence in c :
major.
At the 'but' it becomes instead a

cadence, with a 'weak'
the relative minor:

interpolation,

in

No Exit
A Translation of Sartre's Huis Clos
Wendell Finner

C Ma..jor

vo1.

v1 •

Wi I{ i~j

Poem
John S. Carnes

Awkward are the silences,
slow stutters time
- when I would tell you of the love of mine.
And yet, I would not wish to be too smooth and glib.
_The freshet in its thicket runs both fast and pure,
and our love too has merrily been borne along.
Yet, did it not slow and stutter some
we would not find ourselves with the needs to think upon.
Thus I am glad to find no easy speech
and think it not wrong being without a ready word
for it will come when it is called I've heard.

(The stage depicts a Second Empire
drawing-room,
with
a
bronze
on
the
mantlepiece. Enter Valet, Garcin . )
GARCIN(looking around): So here we are.
VALET:
Here.
GARCIN:
This is it . . .
VALET:
This is it.
GARCIN:
I . . . I suppose one gets used to
the furniture eventually.
VALET:
That depends on the individual.
GARCIN:
Are all the rooms like this?
VALET:
Think.
Chinese,
Hindus
come
here. What would you have them do with a
Second Empire armchair?
GARCIN:
And me? What would you have me
do with one? Do you know who I was? Bah.
. . it doesn't matter. After all, I always
lived with furniture I didn't like, in
artificial situations; I loved it.
An

artificial situation in a Louis-Phillippe
dining-room--does that tell you anything?
VALET:
You'll
see;
a Second Empire
drawing-room is no worse.
GARCIN:
Ah, good .
Good, good, good.
Still, I didn't expect.
.y ou do know
what they say down there?
VALET:
About what?
GARCIN:
Uh.
. (La rge, vague gesture)
About all this.
VALET:
How
could
you
be 1 iev~
such
foolishness?
From people who have never
set foot here?
After all, if they had
come here . . .
GARCIN:
Of course. (They laugh together,
then
Garcin
becomes
suddenly
serious
again): Where are the spikes?
VALET:
What?

GARCIN:
The spikes, the grilles, the
leather funnels.
VALET:
You're joking.
GARCIN :
Oh?
Oh, good .
No, I wasn't
joking.
(Silence.
He paces.)
No mirrors, no windows.
Of course, nothing
breakable.
(With sudden violence) :
And
why have they taken my toothbrush?
VALET:
Ah, yes. Now your human dignity
returns. It's amazing.
GARCIN:
Please spare me your intimacies.
I am well aware of my position, but I will
not allow you to . . .
VALET:
There, there. Forgive me. What
can you expect--all ou r clients ask the
same question.
'Where are the spikes,'
they say. At that moment, I swear to you
that they don't dream of personal hygiene.
Only then, when they are reassured, then
the toothbrush. But can't you think about
it, for the love of God? After all, I ask
you, why would you brush your teeth?
GARCIN:
Yes,
indeed,
why?
(Looks
around.)
And why look in a mirror? But
the bronze, after a while.
• I imagine
there will be moments when I' 11 look at
that with open eyes, eh?
Come on, come
on, there's nothing to hide.
I ' m well
aware of my position, I tell you. Do you
want me to tell you how it goes? A fellow
suffocates, he sinks, he drowns, only he
sees beyond the water.
And what does he
see?
A bronze by Barbidienne.
What a
nightmare!
All right, you're probably
forbidden to answer; I won't insist. But
remember:
one doesn' t take me by surprise.
You won't be able to boast that
you've caught me unawares; I look the

Wendell 1 Finner is a senior in Annapolis.
He translated Sartre's Huis Clos for a
s ·
pr1ng
983 production by the King William Players, produced by
Copyright 1983 by Wendell Finner.
Craig Bradshaw.
John Carnes is a senior fn Annapolis.

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47

�situation in the face.
(Begins to pace
again.)
So,
no toothbrush.·
No bed
either. Since we never sleep, right?
VALET:
You seel
GA RC IN:
I could have bet on it.
Why
would one sleep?
Sleep takes you from
behind.
You feel your eyes closing, but
why sleep? You stretch out on the sofa,
and poof.
• sleep flies away.
Then you
get up, rub your eyes, and it starts all
over again.
VALET:
What a romantic you arel
GARCIN:
Be quiet. I won't cry, I won't
tremble, but I want to look the situation
in the face.
I don't want it to jump me
from
behind,
without
my
seeing
it.
Romantic? Nonetheless, there is no need
for sleep.
Why sleep if you're not
sleepy? Perfect. Wait. Wait--why is it
painful? I've got it; it's a life without
interruption.
VALET:
What interruption?
GARCIN(imitating him): What interruption?
(Suspiciously) :
Look at me.
I thought
so.
That
explains
your
intolerably
tactless
stare.
My
word,
they're
shriveled up.
VALET:
What are you talking about?
GARCIN:
Your eyelids. We, we close our
eyelids. A blink, it's called. A little
flash of black, a curtain that falls and
rises again; the break is complete.
The
eye is moistened; the world annihilated.
You . couldn't know how refreshing it is.
Four thousand rests an hour.
Four thousand little escapes. And when I say four
thousand.
.so, I'm to live without
eyelids? Don't be an. idiot. No eyelids,
no sleep, it's all the same.
I shall
sleep no· more.
.But how am I going to
stand it?
Try to understand; make an
effort.
I'm a teasing type, you see, and
I • • • I like to tease myself. But I . . . I
can't tease myself endlessly: down there
there were nights.
I slept.
I slept
softly.
To compensate.
I made myself
simple dreams.
There was a meadow.
.A
meadow, that's all.
I dreamed I was
walking there. Is it daytime?
VALET:
You can see for yourself, the
lights are on.
GARCIN:
Right.
I meant your daytime.

Outside.
VALET(bewildered): Outside?
GARCIN:
Outside l
On the other side of
these walls.
VALET:
There's a hallway.
GARCIN:
And at the end of the hall?
There are other rooms, and other
VALET:
halls, and stairways.
GARCIN:
And then?
That's all.
VALET:
GARCIN:
You must have a day off. Where
do you go?
VALET:
To my uncle's, on the third
floor. He's the head valet.
GARCIN:
I should have guessed.
Where's
the light switch?
VALET:
There is none.
GARCIN:
What? Can't you turn it off?
VALET:
The
management
can
cut
the
current.
But I don't remember their
having done so on this floor.
We've got
all the power we want.
GARCIN:
All right.
So, one must live
with open eyes . . .
VALET(ironically): Live?.
GARCIN:
Don't quibble over a question of
vocabulary.
The eyes open.
Forever.
There will be broad daylight in my eyes.
And in my head.
(Pause . ) And i f I swung
the bronze at the light bulb, would it go
out?
VALET:
It's too heavy.
GARCIN (grasping the bronze and trying to
lift it): You're right. It's too heavy.
VALET (after a moment of silence) :
Very
well; if you have no further need of me,
I' 1 leave you .
GARCIN(startled):
You're
leaving?
Goodbye.
(The valet reaches the door)
Wait.
(valet returns)
This is a bel 1,
here?
(valet nods)
I can ring it if I
want you and you must come?
VALET:
In principle, yes .
But it's
unreliable.
There's something jammed in
the mechanism.
(Ga re in goes to the bel 1
and pushes the button . Ringing sound )
GARCIN:
It works!
VALET(astonished):
It works.
(Ring s it
himself)
But don't get carried away~ it
won't last. Well, at your service.
GARCIN (making a gesture to retain him):
I.

.

•

VALET :

48

CAPCIN:
c=i nd

r I C'K s

Nothing.
1:p
t he

(Go~s
to th e
raper-knjf c )

mantle
What's

this.'
VALET :
You can s e P for yourself; a
paper-kDifo.
GA RLlN:
The re are books here ?
VALET:
No.
GARCIN:
'l'hcn what good if' it ?
(Vakt
shrugs ) All rig h t. Go ahead.
(Val e t exits.
Garcin go e s t o the
bronze and pats it with his hand. He sits
down; stands up again.
He go e s t o the
bell and presses the button.
The bell
does not ring.
I-le tries two or three
times, in vain.
He goes to the door and
t ric·s to open it, without any Juck.
He
calls:)
Garcon!
Garcon!
(No answer.
He rains a
s hower of blows on the do o r with his fists
while calling the valet.
Then he c alrns
aown sudden 1 y and goes to sit down. At
this moment, the door opens and I nez
e nters, followed by the valet. )
VALET:
You called?
GARCIN (starts to answer,
then notices
Inez) : No.
VALET ( turning to Inez):
This is your
room, Madame.
(Silence from Inez) If you
have ar&gt;y questions.
. (Inez remains silent. The valet is disappointed): Usually
our clients lik e to acquaint themselves
. I won't insist.
Anyway, as for the
toothbrush, the bell, and the Barbidienne
bronze, this gentleman is informed and can
answer as well as I can.
(Exits . )
(S ilence.
Gare in does not look at
Inez.
Inez looks around, then speaks
gruffly to Garcin . )
INEZ:
Where's Florence?
(S ilence from
Garcin. ) I said, where's Florence?
GARCIN:
I don't know.
INEZ:
Is this the best you can do?
Torture by absence? Well, it's no good.
Florence was a little fool and I don't
miss her.
GA RC IN:
I beg your pardon; who do you
take me for?
INEZ:
You? You're the torturer.
GARCIN(Starts,
then laughs):
What an
amusing mistake.
Really, the torturer!
You came in, you looked at me, and you
thought, 'This is the torturer.'
What

foolishness!
The valet is ridiculous; he
should have introduced us . The torturer!
I am Joseph Gare in, publicist and man of
letters.
Really, we're in this together,
madame . . .
INEZ (dryly): Inez Serrano. Mademoiselle.
GARCJN:
Very good. Perfect. The ice is
broken. So you see the look of a torturer
in me?
And how does one recognize them,
the torturers?
INEZ:
They have a frightened look.
GARCIN: Frightened? How curious. Of whom?
Their victims?
INEZ:
Go on!
I know what I'm talking
abo~t.
I've seen myself in the mirror.
GARCIN:
In the mirror'!
(Looks around.)
It's annoying; they've taken everything
that resembles a mirror.
(Pause . ) In any
case, I can assure you that I'm not
afraid.
I
don't
take
the
situation
lightly; I'm quite aware of its gravity.
But I'm not afraid.
INEZ(Shrugs):
That's
ycur
business.
(Paus e. ) Do you take a walk outside, now
and then?
GARCIN:
The door is bolted.
INEZ:
Too bad.
GARCIN:
I can see quite well that my
presence annoys you.
And personally, I'd
rather be alone. I need to put my life in
order and collect myself. But I'm sure we
cc..n come to terms with each other.
I
don't talk, I seldom stir, and I make
little noise.
Only, if I might 'suggest
something, we must maintain an extreme
politeness between us.
It will be our
best defense.
INEZ:
I'm not polite.
GA RC IN:
I' 11 be polite enough for two.
(Sil ence. Garcin sits on the sofa.
Inez
paces back and forth.)
INEZ(looking at him): Your mouth.
GARCIN (to rn from his trance ) : Excuse me?
INEZ:
Can 't you stop your mouth?
It
twists under your nose like a top .
GARCIN:
I beg your pardon.
I
didn't
realize.
INEZ:
It
annoys
me.
(Tic
from
Garcin.) You pretend to be polite and you
let your face run wild.
You're not alone
and you have no right to impose the
spectacle of your fear on me.

Yes?

49

�~ -

GARCIN (gets up and crosses toward her) :
And you, you're not afraid?
INEZ:
Why should I be? Fear; that was
fine before, when we had hope.
GARCIN:
There's no longer any hope, but
we're always before . We have not begun to
suffer, mademoiselle.
INEZ:
I know.
(Pause.)
So?
What's
going to happen?
GARCIN:
I
don't know.
I'm waiting.
(Long pause.
Garcin sits . down again.
Inez resumes her pacing.
Garcin' s mouth
twitches and, after a glance at Inez, he
hides his face in his hands.
Enter
Estelle and Valet.
Estelle looks at
Garcin, who has not raised his head. )
ESTELLE: No I
No, no, don't raise your
head. I know why you're hiding it in your .
hands; I know you don't have a face
anymore.
(Garcin removes his hands . ) Oh!
(Pause.) I don't know you.
GARCIN:
I'm not the torturer, madame.
ESTELLE: I
didn't take you
for
the
torturer.
I.
• I thought someone was
playing a trick on me .
(To valet) : Who
are you waiting for?
VALET:
No one else is coming.
ESTELLE(relieved):
Then we'll be all
alone; monsieur, madame, and I?
(Starts
to laugh.)
GARCIN(dryly):
There' s nothing to laugh
about.
ESTELLE (still laughing ) : · But these sofas
are so ugly!
And
look how t~ey're
arranged.
It's like New Year's at Aunt
Marie's.
To each his own, I suppose.
This one ' s mine ? (To v a let) : But I c a n' t
sit there, it's a catastrophe; I'm wearing
light blue and it's spinach green.
INEZ:
Would you like mine?
ESTELLE: The red sofa? You're t oo kind,
but that's hardly an improvement.
No,
it's the luck of the draw.
I go t the
green one; I' 11 keep it.
(Pause. )
The
only one which would do, barely, is
monsieur's.
INEZ:
Did you hear her, Garcin?
GARCIN ( starting ) :
The.
.sofa.
Ohl
Excuse me.
(Gets up. )
It's your's,
madame.
ESTELLE: Thank you.
(Takes off her coat
and lays it on the sofa.
Pause.)
Since

we've got to live together, we should get
acquainted. I'm Estelle Rigault.
(Garcin
bows and starts to give his name, but Inez
crosses in front of him.)
INEZ: Inez Serrano. The pleasure is mine.
GARCIN (bows again ) : Joseph Garcin.
VALET:
Have you any further need of me?
I'll ring fo~
ESTELLE: No, go ahead.
you.
(Valet bows and exits. )
INEZ:
You' re very pretty.
I wish I
had flowers to welcome you with.
ESTELLE: Flowers? Yes, I loved flowers.
But they'd wilt here; it's too hot.
Bah
... the important thing is to keep our good
humor. Are you . . . ?
INEZ:
Yes, last week. And you?
ESTELLE: Me?
Yesterday .
The funeral
isn ' t over yet.
(She speaks quite naturally, as if she sees what she is describing.)
The wind's mussing my sister's
veil.
She's doing what she can to cry.
Come on, come on, make an effort. There!
Two tears, two tiny tears sparkling under
her veil. Olga Jardet is quite unattrac tive this morning.
She's supporting my
sister by the arm.
She's not crying
because of her mascara, and if I were her.
. . She was my best friend .
INEZ:
You suffered?
ESTELLE: No, I was mostly unconscious.
INEZ:
What . . . ?
ESTELLE: Pneumonia.
(Same
manner
as
before ) :
Well, that's it; they' re le~v­
ing.
Goodbye!
Goodbye I
Such
handshaking.
My husband is sick with
grief; he stayed home.
(To Inez ) :
And
you?
INEZ:
Gas.
ESTELLE: And you, monsieur?
GARCIN:
Twelve bullets
in
my
hide.
(Gestures to Estelle. ) Excuse me; I'm no t
a very respectable dead man.
ESTELLE: Oh!
Please, monsieur, if only
you wouldn't use such crude terms.
It's
. . . it's shocking.
And, after all, what
does it mean? Maybe we ' ve never been so
alive. If we abso lutely have t o name this
... state of things, I suggest we call it
absence; that will be more c orrect. Have
you been absent long?
GARCIN:
About a month.
ESTELLE: Where are you from?

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ESTELLE (dryly ) :
Well, we don't have the
GARCIN :
Rio .
same tastes . That's all that proves.
(To
ESTELLE: I'm from Paris.
Do you have
anyone left, down there?
Inez ) :
Do you like them, men in s hirtsleeves?
GARCIN :
My
wife .
(Same
manner
as
INEZ :
Shirtsleeves or no, I don't like
Estelle) :
She's come to the bar r acks,
men much .
like she does eve r y day . They won't let
ESTELLE ( looking
at
the
others
in
her in.
She ' s staring through the bars.
She doesn't know that I'm absent yet, but
amazement ) : But why, why have they put us
together?
she suspects it .
She's leaving now .
She's all in black .
So much the bet INEZ (stifling an outburst ) : What are you
saying?
te r-- she won't have to change . She's not
crying; she never cried .
It ' s a nice
ESTELLE : I look at the two of you and I
sunny day, and she's al 1 in black in the
think that we must room together .
.I
expected to find friends, family .
deserted street, with the wide eyes of a
victim .
Ah, she irritates me .
(Long
INEZ :
One excellent friend with a hole
in the middle of his face .
pause . Garcin sits on the middle sofa and
puts his head in his hands . )
ESTELLE : Him, too .
He danced the tango
Estelle!
INEZ :
like a professional . But us, us; why have
they put us together?
ESTELLE : Monsieur, Monsieur Garcin!
GARCIN :
Ex cuse me?
GARCIN :
It's
just chance .
They put
ESTELLE : You're sitting on my sofa .
people where they can, in the order of
their a r rival .
(To Inez ) :
Why are you
GARCIN :
Oh, excuse me.
(Gets up . )
laughing?
ESTELLE : You seem so absorbed .
GARCIN:
I ' m putting my life in order .
INEZ:
Because you amuse me with your
(Inez laughs. )
Those ·who laugh would de
'chance' .
Do you have such a need to
well to imitate me .
reassure yourself? They leave nothing to
chance .
INEZ :
It
is
in
orde r ,
my
life .
Totally in order .
It's put itself in
ESTELLE(timidly ) : But perhaps we've met
bef o re?
order, down there, and I don ' t need to
t r ouble myself with it .
INEZ :
Never. I would not have forgot ten you .
GARCIN:
Really?
You think it's that
ESTELLE: Or maybe we have acquaintances
simple!
(Wipes his forehead . ) What heat!
in common .
Do you know the Dubois You'll allow me?
(Starts to take off his
Seymours?
jacket. '
ESTELLE : No!
(More
softly ) :
No .
I
INEZ:
I'd be surprised.
detest men in shi r tsleeves.
ESTELLE: But they entertain everybody.
GARCIN (putting his jacket back on ) : Fine .
INEZ:
What do they do?
(Pause . ) Myself, I spent my nights in the
ESTELLE (surprised ) :
They
don't
do
editorial
rooms .
It
was
always
anything . They have a chateau in Careze,
oppressively hot .
(Pause . Same manner as
and . . .
before ) :
It is oppressively hot .
It's
INEZ :
We l l,
I worked in the Post
night- time .
Office.
ESTELLE: Let's
see;
yes,
it's
night
ESTELLE (backing away slightly ) : Oh!
You
already. Olga is undressing . How quickly · mean.
.?
(Pause . )
And you, monsieur
time passes, on earth .
Garcin?
INEZ :
It's night .
They' v e put t he
GARCIN:
I never left Rio.
seals on the door to my room . The room is
ESTELLE : Then you're quite right. Chance
da r k and empty .
has brought us together.
GARCIN :
They've put their jackets on the
INEZ:
Chance.
Then the furniture is
back of their chairs and rolled their
by chance.
It's by chance that the sofa
sleeves up above the elbow. It smells of
on the right is spinach green and the one
men and cigars.
I liked living among men
on the left is burgundy.
Chance, is it?
in shirtsleeves .

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�All right, try to move them and then tell
me what you think. And the bronze, that's
just chance also?
And the heat?
This
heat?
(Long pause.)
I tell you everything is regulated.
Even the smallest
details are chosen with love.
This room
was waiting for us.
ESTELLE: But how could that be? It's all
so hideous, so hard and angular. I always
detested angles.
INEZ (shrugs):
Do you think I lived in a
Second Empire drawing-room? (Pause.)
ESTELLE: Then everything was foreseen?
INEZ:
Everything. And we were matched
up.
ESTELLE: Then it's not by chance that
you, you are facing me?
(Pause.)
But
what do they expect?
INEZ :
I don ' t know.
But they expect
something.
ESTELLE: I can't tolerate anyone expecting something from me.
It gives me a
sudden desire to do the contrary.
INEZ:
Well, do it. Do it, then. But
you don't know what it is they want.
ESTELLE:
(stamping
her
foot):
It's
insufferable.
I should be subjected to
something by you two?
(Examines them.)
You two. There are faces which I can read
at first glance.
But yours tell me
nothing.
GARCIN(suddenly, to Inez): All right, why
are we together? You've said enough -about
it1 now finish it.
INEZ (astonished) :
But I know absolutely
nothing about it.
GARCIN:
We must know.
(~eflects for a
moment)
INEZ:
If only each of us had the
courage to say . . .
GARCIN:
What?
Estelle!
INEZ:
ESTELLE: Yes?
What did you do? Why did they
INEZ:
send you here?
ESTELLE(excited):
But I don't know1 I
don't know at all.
I even wonder if it
isn't a mistake.
(To Inez): Don't smile.
Think of the number of people who. . .who
become ~sent every day.
They come here
by the thousands and they're only the
responsibility of subordinates, uneducated

employees.
How could you imagine that
there'd be no mistakes? But don't smile
at me.
(To Garcin):
And you, tell me
something.
If they're mistaken in my
case, they could be mistaken in yours.
(To Inez): And yours, too. Isn't it just
as good to think we're here by mistake?
INEZ:
Is that all you have to tell us?
ESTELLE: What more do you want to know?
I have nothing to hide. I was an orphan;
poor.
I raised my younger brother.
An
old friend of my father's asked for my
hand.
He was rich and kind; I accepted.
What would you have done in my place? My
brother was sickly and his health required
a lot of attention.
I lived with my
husband for six years without a cloud.
Then two years ago I met the man I was
destined to love.
We recognized it at
first sight. He wanted me to run off with
him, but I refused. After that, I caught
pneumonia.
That's
all.
One
could,
perhaps, charge me with sacrificing my
youth to an old man.
(To Garcin): Do you
think that would be a fault?
GARCIN:
Certainly not. And you, do you
think it would be a fault to live according to one's own principles?
ESTELLE: Who could reproach you for that?
GARCIN:
I edited a pacifist · journal.
The war broke out. What to do? All eyes
were fixed on me:
'does he dare?' Well,
I dared.
I crossed my arms and they shot
me.
Where's the fault?
Where is the
fault?
ESTELLE(placing her hand on his arm):
There is no fault. You are . . .
INEZ (perfect irony) :
A Hero.
And your_,
wife, Garcin?
GARCIN:
All right, what?
I pulled her
from the gutter.
ESTELLE(to Inez): You see! You see!
INEZ:
I see.
(Pause. )
Who are you
acting this comedy for? We're alone.
ESTELLE(saucily): Alone?
INEZ :
Among thieves.
.We are in
hell, my dear; there is never· a mistake
and people are never damned for nothing.
ESTELLE: Be quiet.
INEZ:
In hell! Damned! Damned!
ESTELLE: Quiet .
Will you be quiet?
I
forbid you to use such vulgar words.
INEZ:
The little saint, damned.
The

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spotless hero, damned . We had our moment
of pleasure, didn't we? There were people
who suffered on our account until we died
and this amused us greatly. Now we must
pay.
GARCIN (threatening gesture ) :
Will you
keep quiet?
INEZ ( looking at him without fear, though
with
great
surprise ) :
Ha!
(Pause. )
Wait! I've got it; I know why they've put
us together !
GARCIN:
Be careful what you say .
INEZ:
Yo u'll see how stupid it is.
Incredibly stupid!
There's no physical
torture, right? Yet we are in hell. And
no one else will come . No one. We will
remain here alone with one another until
the
end.
Right?
In
short,
there's
someone missing: the torturer.
GARCIN(softly) · I know it well.
INEZ:
So, they've perfected an economy
of personnel.
It's
the
clients who
provide the service themselves, like a
cafeteria.
ESTELLE: What are you trying to say?
INEZ:
The torturer is each of us, for
the other two.
( A pause while they
digest this news.)
GARCIN ( softly ) :
I
will
not be your
torturer. I wish you no harm and I've got
nothing to do with you. Nothing.
It's
quite simple. Here, each of us in our own
corner; here's our weapon. You here; you
here; myself here.
And silence.
Not a
word--that's no t too difficult, is it?
Each of us has plenty to do by ourselves.
I think I could go ten thousand years
without speaking.
ESTELLE: I've got to keep quiet?
GARCIN:
Yes.
And we.
.we will be
saved.
Just keep quiet.
Look to yourself, don't raise your head. Agreed?
INEZ:
Agreed.
ESTELLE (hesitates ) : Agreed.
GARCIN:
Well, then, goodbye.
(He goes
to his sofa and puts his head in his
hands. )
Inez begins to sing
(A long pause.
to herself. )

INEZ:

On Whitemantle Street they built
a platform,
And spread the bran below,
And it was a pretty scaffold
On Whitemantle Street, you know.
The headsman he was up at dawn,
He'd quite a job to do,
To chop off the heads of
generals,
The bishops' and the admirals'
On Whitemantle Street, it's
true.
To Whitemantle Street the ladies
came,
With all their pretty frills,
But their heads they had to go,
Heads along with hats would
roll,
In the gutter of Whitemantle
Street.

(During this time, Estelle restores
her makeup.
She powders herself and
restlessly looks around for a mirror. She
searches her bag, then turns to Garcin.)
ESTELLE: Have you got a mirror , monsieur?
(Garcin does not respond. )
A mirror, a
pocket- glass, whatever?
(No response.)
If you're going to leave me all alone, at
least get me a mirror.
(Garcin buries his
face in his hands. )
INEZ (eagerly ) :
I've got a mirror in my
bag.
(Searches
her
bag
and
says
resentfully ) :
They must have taken it
from me in the office.
ESTELLE: How
annoying.
(Pause.
She
clo ses her eyes and sways unsteadily.
Inez rushes to steady her. )
INEZ:
What's the matter?
ESTELLE (opens her eyes and smiles):
I
feel so strange.
(Touches herself.)
It
doesn't have this ef feet on you.
When I
can't see myself, I can touch myself as
much as I like;
I wonder if I really
exist.
INEZ:
You're lucky. Me, I feel myself
constantly, from inside.
ESTELLE: Oh, yes, from inside.
.Everything that happens in people's heads is so
vague.
It wearies me.
(Pause.)
There

53

�\

are six huge mirrors in my bedroom. I see
t h em.
I see them.
They reflect the
lov e-seat, the rug, the window.
. How
empty it is, a mirror without me. Whenever I spoke, I'd place myself so there'd be
o n e I could look at .myself in.
I talked;
and I saw myself talking. I saw myself as
others saw me; it kept me on my toes.
(With despair ) : My lipstick!
I'm sure I
put it on crooked.
I simply can't spend
all of eternity without a mirror.
INEZ:
Couldn't
I
be
your
mirror?
Come, come pay me a visit.
Here, sit on
my sofa.
ESTELLE (indicating Garcin ) : But ...
INEZ:
Let's not worry about him.
ESTELLE: We're not going to hurt one
another1 you said so yourself.
INEZ:
Do I look like I want to hurt
you?
ESTELLE: One never knows
INEZ:
It's you who' 11 hurt me.
But
what difference can it make?
If I've got
to suffer, it might as well be on your
account.
Sit down.
A little closer.
There.
Look into my eyes.
Do you see
yourself there?
ESTELLE: But I 'm so tiny.
I can barely
see myself.
INEZ:
But I see you. All of you. Ask
me questions.
No mirror could be more
faithful.
(Estelle, embarrassed, turns
toward Garcin as if to call for help.)
ESTELLE: Monsieur! Monsieur!
We're not
boring you with our chatter, are we?
(Garcin does not respond.)
INEZ:
Leave him be , he doesn't count;
we're alone. Interrogate me.
ESTELLE: Did I put my lipstick on right?
INEZ:
Let me see. Not too well.
ESTELLE : I wondered.
Good thing (glance
at Gare ~ , ) no one saw me. I'll try again.
INEZ:
·r hat' s better. No.
Follow the
line of your lips;
I'll guide you.
There, there. Good.
ESTELLE: As good as when I came in?
INEZ:
Better.
It's heavier, crueler.
A diabolical mouth.
ESTELLE: Hnmun.
And that's good?
How
irritating,
when
I
can't decide
for
myself. You swear that it's all right?
INEZ:
You're beautiful.

ESTELLE: But do you have any taste? Do
you have !!!Y taste?
How irritating; how
simply irritating.
INEZ:
I've got your taste, since I
like you. Look at me. Smile. I'm not so
ugly any more.
Aren't I better than a
mirror?
ESTELLE: I don't know.
You intimidate
me.
My reflection in the mirrors was
tame.
I knew i t so well
. If I
smile--my smile will fall into your pupils
and God only knows what will become of it.
INEZ:
And what's to stop you from
taming me?
(They look at each other.
Estelle smiles, a little bit fascinated }
Wouldn't you like to be my friend?
·
ESTELLE: I have trouble making friends
with women.
INEZ:
Especially with postal clerks, I
suppose? What's that there, at the bottom
of your cheek? A pimple?
ESTELLE
(startled):
A pimple,
that's
horrible! Where?
INEZ:
There,
there!
I'm
just
a
bird-trap, and I've got you, my little
dove! There's no need to blush. Not the
slightest. And if the mirror should lie?
Or if I shut my eyes, if I refused to look
at you-- what would you do with all that
beauty? Don't be frightened, I must look
at you; my eyes will stay wide open. And
I'll be gentle, very gentle. But it's up
to you.
(Pause.)
ESTELLE: You like me?
INEZ:
Very much!
(Pause.)
ESTELLE (nodding in Garcin' s direction):
I want him to notice me too .
INEZ:
Ha!
Because he's a man.
(To
~arcin);
You win.
(Garcin does
not
respond.)
But look over here!
(Still no
response.)
Don't play this game; you
haven't missed a word we've said.
GARCIN (Abruptly raising his head ) :
You
can say that again;
I haven't missed a
word.
It was no good to stick my fingers
in my ears;
you just kept on chattering
inside my head. · Will you leave me alone
now? I've got no business with you.
INEZ:
And the child;
have you got
some business with her?
I've seen your
tricks-- it's for her sake that you put on
such airs.

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GARCI N:
Le ave me alone , I te11· you .
Someone's talk i ng about me at the jour nal
an d I want to listen . And I couldn ' t ca r e
less about the ch i ld , i f t hat ' ll make you
happ y.
ESTELLE: Thank you .
I d i dn 't mean t o be r ude .
GARCIN :
ESTELLE : Pig!
(A pause .
The y s t and,
fa c i ng each othe r. )
GARCI N:
Th e re ! (Pau se ) I b e gg e d you to
be qui e t .
ES'l,ELLE: She s t a r ted i t .
She came to
o f fer me he r mi rro r, and I didn ' t ask he r
f o r anything .
INEZ:
Nothing .
You
ju s t
r ubbed
aga i nst h i m a nd conto rted you r s e lf so he ' d
l ook at you .
ESTELLE : And so?
GARCIN :
Are you bot h i diots? Don 't you
see whe re we are ?
Ju st keep qu iet!
(Pau se. )
W onl y have t o s it back down ,
e
pe a ce f ully , clo s e our ey e s and try t o
fo rget th e presenc e o f the othe r s .
(A
pau s e .
He sits.
The women r e turn t o
the ir p laces wi th he si t an t s t e p s.
Ine z
s udd enly turns back. )
INEZ:
Ha!
Fo r get.
How chi l dish .
I
fe el you i n my bones .
Your s i l e nce
sc re ams in my ear s.
You could nail your
mouth shut , cut out you r tongue , but can
you k eep you r s elf fr om exist ing?
St op
you r thoughts?
I hea r i t , it goes tick,
tick, like an a lar m clock , and I know you
hea r mine . It's no use cur ling up on your
sofa ;
you 're everywhere . The sounds a r e
soiled when they r each me becaus e you've
hea r d them on the way . You've even stolen
my face -- you can see it and I can ' t . And
he r ? He r ? You ' ve r obbed me of he r.
If
we were alonP . do v o u think she ' cl dnre
treat me the way she does? No, no : take
your hands f r om your face . I won't leave
you alone , i t would be too convenient .
You would stay the r e, unconscious, sunk in
you r self like a buddha .
I'd have my eyes
s hut, but I'd hear h er o ff e r you a l l t he
little no i ses of her life, even the rustle
of her dre ss, and she'd send you smiles
that you wouldn't even see . . . None of
that . I want to choose my hell; I want to
look at you with open eyes and struggle
face to face .
GARCIN :
Good enough .
I suppose it had

to come to thi s-- they ' ve manipulat e d u s
l ike child r en .
If only they'd put me i n
with men . . . men know how to keep quiet .
I t wouldn ' t be too much to ask .
(C r osses
to Estelle and places his hand unde r he r
chin . )
So 1 please you , my p r etty?
You ' ve been giving me the eye ?
ESTELLE : Don ' t touch me .
GARCIN :
Bah!
Le t' s put ou r selve s at
ease. I loved women a lot, you k now. And
they loved me a lot . So r el a x, we 've go t
Poli teness-- what for?
nothing t o lo s e .
Ce r emonie s-- what ' s the use?
Among u s?
Soon we'll be as naked as worms.
ESTELLE : Leave me alone .
GARCIN :
As wo r ms . Oh , I e xpecte d th is.
I demanded nothing f r om you , no t h i ng but
p eace and a l it tle quiet .
I put my
f inge r s in my ear s .
Gome z wa s spe aki ng ,
sta nd i ng between t h e t ab l e s, a nd a l l the
c omrades at t he jour nal were lis te n i ng .
In s hi rts le eve s.
I wanted t o unde r stand
what he was s aying -- it wasn't e as y ;
t h i ng s
on
earth
h a ppen
so
qu i ck ly .
Couldn It you k eep quiet?
Now i t I s all
ove r, he ' s not talking any mo r e ; a l l that
he think s about me is back inside h is
head . Good enough ; we ' ll just have to see .
it through to the end . Naked as wo r ms : I
want to know who I'm dealing with .
INEZ :
You know . You al r eady know.
GARCIN:
Until each of us has admitted
why we were condemned, we know noth i ng .
You, the blonde, you sta r t . Why? Tell us
. why; you r honesty can p r event disasters.
·when we know our monste rs . .
Come on ,
why?
ESTELLE: I te ll you I d on 't k now .
They
didn't want to tell me .
GARCIN :
I know , it was the same with me ;
they didn ' t want to answe r.
But I know.
You ' re afraid to go first?
All right,
I'll begin .
(long pause . ) I am not ve r y
nice .
We know you we r e a
Go ahead .
INEZ :
des e rter .
GARCIN :
Leave
that
be .
Don't
even
mention it .
I'm he r e because I to r tu red
my wife . That's all . For five-years . Of
course, she's still suffering .
There :
when I speak of her I see he r. It's Gome z
I'm interested in and it's her I see .
Whe r e's Gomez? Five years . Say, they've

55

�given her my things . She's sitting by the
window, with my jacket on her knees . The
jacket with twelve holes.
The blood,
you'd think it was rust .
The edges
of the holes are burnt .
Ha!
It's a
museum piece, a historic jacket .
And I
wore it. Won't you cry? Won't you end it
with tea r s? I'd come home d r unk as a pig,
smelling of wine and women .
She'd have
waited up all night for me; she never
cried .
Not
one
word
of
reproach;
naturally.
Just her eyes.
Those .huge
eyes.
I don't regret a thing.
I' 11 pay
for it, but I don't reg r et a thing .
It's
snowing outside.
But won't you cry?
She's a women with a flai r for martyrdom .
INEZ (almost softly) :
Why did you make
her suffer?
GARCIN :
Because it was easy .
One word
was enough to make her change color ; she
was a sensitive thing. Ha! Not a single
reproach . I was quite a tease . I waited .
But no , not a single
I wait ed foreve r .
reproach .
I pulled her · from the gutter,
you und er stand .
She's r unning her hand
ove r t he jacke t, wi t hout looking at it ,
her fi nge r s g r oping blindly for the holes .
What are you waiting for?
What are you
hoping for?
I tell you I don't regret a
thing. There you have it. She admired me
too much . Understand?
INEZ:
No. No one admired me.
GARCIN:
So much the better. So much the
better for you. All this must seem quite
abstract to you. Well, here's a story. I
brought a mulatto woman home with me .
What nights!
My wife went to bed first,
but she must have heard us.
She got up
first, and since we'd slept late, she
brought us breakfast in bed.
INEZ:
Cad!
GARCIN :
Yes, yes, a well loved cad.
(Seems d i s t r acted.)
No, nothing .
It's Gomez, but he's not talking about me.
Damn! Anyway, that's what I'm doing here.
And you?
INEZ:
Well, I'm what they call down
there a fallen woman. Already damned, of
course. So it came as no great surprise.
GARCIN:
That's it?
INEZ:
No, there was also that affair
with Florence.
But that's a tale of

corpses . Three corpses. First him, then
she and I. No one's left, below . I am at
peace.
The room, only.
I see the room,
from time to time.
Empty, with the
shutters closed. Oh . Oh! They've taken
the seals off .
For Rent
It's for
rent.
There's a sign on the door.
It's
. . . mocking.
GARCIN:
Three. You did say three?
INEZ:
Yes.
GARCIN:
One man and two women?
INEZ :
Yes.
GARCIN:
Wait . (Pause . ) He killed himself?
INEZ:
Him?
He was incapable of it.
But not for lack of suffering.
He was
crushed by a trolley .
It was comical!
I
lived with them-- he was my cousin.
GARCIN:
Florence was blonde?
INEZ:
Blonde?
(Glance at Estelle.)
You know, I don ' t reg r et a thing, but I
don't enjoy telling you this story much.
GARCIN :
Go
on!
Go
on !
You
were
disgusted with him?
INEZ :
Little by little . For example,
he made t his noise when he drank;
he
snuffled i n his glass .
Little things .
Oh!
He was a sor r y sort, vulnerable.
What are you smiling at?
GARCING: Because I'm not vulnerable.
INEZ:
We'll see.
I slipped into her;
she saw him through my eyes .
After a
while, she was in my grasp.
we took a
room on the other side of town.
GARCIN:
And then?
INEZ:
And then there was the trolley.
I told her every day, 'Well, my darling,
we had him killed . '
(Pause . )
I am
wicked.
GARCIN:
Yes. Sc aIT T.
INEZ:
No.
You're not wicked.
It's
something different.
GARCIN:
What?
INEZ:
I'll tell you later.
Me, I'm
wicked .
That is to say I need the
suffering of others in order to exist. A
torch. A to r ch in thei r hea r ts. When I'm
alone, I flicker out.
For six months I
blazed in her heart.
I burned it out.
She got up one night; went and turned on
the gas without my knowing it; then she
lay down beside me. There you have it.
GARCIN:
Hmmm!
INEZ:
What?

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GARCIN:
Nothing. That's not right.
INEZ:
No, it's not right. So?
GARCIN:
Oh.
You've got a point.
(To
Estelle. ) And you, what did you do?
ESTELLE: I told you, I know nothing about
it. I tried to ask myself .
GARCIN:
Good.
We'll help. This fellow
with the shattered face, who's he?
ESTELLE: What fellow?
INEZ:
You know quite well.
The one
you were afraid of when you came in.
ESTELLE: He's a friend.
GARCIN:
Why were you afraid of him?
ESTELLE: You have no right to interrogate
me.
INEZ:
He killed himself because of
you?
ESTELLE: No. Don't be foolish.
GARCIN:
So why did he frighten you? He
put a shot into his face, eh?
Is that
what carried off his head?
ESTELLE: Quiet! Be quiet!
GARCIN:
Because of you! Because of you!
INEZ:
Shot because of you!
ESTELLE: Leave me alone!
You frighten
me!
I want to leave!
I want to leave!
(She rushes to'the door and shakes it. )
GARCIN:
Go ahead.
Myself, I couldn't
ask for more. But the door is locked from
the outside.
(Estelle rings, but the bell
does not sound.
Inez and Garcin laugh.
Estelle turns around to face them, with
her back to the door.)
ESTELLE (her voice slow and harsh) : You
are beastly.
INEZ:
Perfectly beastly.
So?
And
this fellow who killed himself on your
account; he was your )over?
GARCIN:
Of course he was her lover. And
he wanted to have her for himself alone.
Isn't that true?
INEZ:
And he danced the tango like a
professional, but he was poor, I imagine.
(Long pause. )
GARCIN:
You were asked if he was poor.
ESTELLE: Yes, he was poor.
GARCIN:
And then again, you had your
reputation to preserve.
One day he came
and begged you, and you laughed.
INEZ?
Well? Well? You laughed? Was
it for that he killed himself?
ESTELLE: Was it with those same eyes that
you looked at Florence?

INEZ:
Yes.
(A pause.
Estelle begins
to laugh.)
ESTELLE: You haven't got it at all.
(She
straightens up and looks at them, keeping
her back to the door. Dry and provocative
tone:)
He wanted to give me his child.
There, are you happy?
GARCIN:
And you, you didn't want it.
ESTELLE: No.
The child came anyway.
I
left to spend five months in Switzerland.
No one knew anything about it.
It was a
girl.
Roger was at my side when she was
born.
He was delighted to have a girl.
But not me.
GARCIN:
And then?
ESTELLE: There was a balcony, above a
lake.
I took a large stone.
He cried,
"Estelle, I beg you, I beseech you."
I
hated him.
He saw everything.
He bent
over the railing and watched the rings in
the lake.
GARCIN:
Then?
ESTELLE: That was all.
I returned to
Paris. He, he did what he wanted.
GARCIN:
He blew his head off?
ESTELLE: Yes, quite. It wasn't worth the
trouble.
My husband never suspected a
thing.
(Pause)
I hate you.
(Dry sobs.)
GA RC IN:
Useless.
The tears don't flow
here.
ESTELLE: I am horrible!
I am horrible!
(Pause . ) If only you knew how I hate you!
INEZ (taking her in her arms) :
My poor
darling!
(To Garcin):
The inquest is
over. No point in keeping that torturer's
scowl.
GARCIN:
A torturer's
(Looks
around)
I'd give anythino to see myself
in a mirror.
(Pause . )
How hot it isl
(Mechanically removes his jacket.)
Oh!
Excuse me.
(Starts to put it back on.)
ESTELLE: You can stay in shirtsleeves.
For now .
GARCIN:
Don't be angry with me, Estelle.
ESTELLE: I'm not angry with you.
INEZ:
And me? Are you angry with me?
ESTELLE: Yes.
INEZ:
Well, Garcin, we're as naked as
worms. Do you see it more clearly?
GA RC IN:
I don't know.
Perhaps it's - a
little clearer.
(Timidly) : Can't we try
to help one another?
INEZ:
I don't need any help.

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�GARCIN:
They've tangled all the strings,
Inez. If you make the slightest movement,
if you raise your hand to fan yourself,
Estelle and I feel the tug.
None of us
can save ourselves alone;
we've got to
pull together in this, or sink together.
Choose.
(Pause . ) What is it?
INEZ:
They've rented it!
The windows
are wide open. A man's sitting on my bed.
They've rented it!
They've rented it!
Come in, come in, don't be embarrassed.
It's a woman.
She goes to him and puts
her hands on his shoulders
Why
don't they turn on the light-- one can
hardly see.
Are they going to embrace?
This room is mine.
Mine!
And why don't
they light it?
I can't see any more.
What are they whispering? Is he going to
fondle her on my bed? She says it's noon
and sunny. So I'm going blind.
(Pause.)
Finished. No more. I no longer see; I no
longer hear. Well, I suppose I'm finished
with
the
earth.
No
more
alibis.
(Shudders.)
I
feel
empty.
Now
I'm
completely dead. Totally here.
You were
saying?
Something about helping me, I
think?
GARCIN:
Yes.
INEZ:
Help me do what?
GARCIN:
Frustrate th~ir tricks.
INEZ:
And in return?
GARCIN:
You'll help me.
It wouldn't
take much, Inez, just a bit of good will.
INEZ:
Good will
And where do
you want me to get it? I am rotten.
GARCIN:
And me?
(Pause . )
But if we
tried?
INEZ:
I' m dried up.
I can neither
give nor receive; how can I help you?
(Pause. She looks at Estelle, who has ·her
head in her hands.) Florence was blonde.
GARCIN:
This little one will be your
torturer, you know.
INEZ:
That could be just what I fear.
GARCIN:
It's through her that they'll
get to you. As for me, I . • . I
I
pay no attention to her.
If you were to
What?
INEZ:
GARCIN:
It's a trap.
They' re watching
to see if you'll let yourself be caught.
INEZ:
I know. And you, you're a trap.
Do you think they haven't foreseen your

very words?
And that they don't have
hidden pitfalls that we can't see? .Everything's a trap.
But what does that make
me?
A trap for her.
Maybe I' 11 be the
one to catch her.
GARCIN:
You won't catch anything.
We
run after each other like the horses on a
merry-go-round, without ever catching up;
you can be sure they've arranged everything. Let it go, Inez. Open your hands,
let go.
Or else you'll make us all
miserable.
INEZ:
Do I look like someone who lets
go? I know what awaits me:
I'm going to
burn; I am burning, and I know that it's
endless.
I know it all-- do you think
I'll let go? I will have her; she'll see
you through my eyes, like Florence saw the
other one. How can you tell me about your
misery? I tell you I know it all and yet
I don't feel sorry for myself.
A trap,
ha!
A trap.
Of course I'm caught in a
trap. And what then?. So much the better,
if it makes them happy.
GARCIN (taking her by the shoulders): Me,
I can feel sorry for you.
Look at me;
we're naked.
Naked to the bone;
I know
your inner heart. We are bound together-do you think I should want to hurt you? I
don't regret a thing, I'm not complaining,
I am dried up too.
But for you, I can
feel sorry.
INEZ (having left his hands there while he
spoke, recoils ) : Don't touch me.
I hate
being touched. And keep your pity. Come
now, Garcin; there are plenty of traps for
you in this room. For you. Set just for
you.
You'd do better to mind your own
business.
(Pause . )
If you leave us
alone, the child and I, I' 11 be · in no
position to harm you.
GARCIN (looks at her for a moment, then
shrugs): All right.
ESTELLE:
(rai sing
her
head) :
Help,
Garcin.
GARCIN :
What do you want from me?
ESTELLE (rising and approaching him): Me,
you can• help me.
GARCIN:
Talk
to
her.
(Inez
has
approached Estelle, and is standing behind
her, without touching her.
During the
following exchange she speaks practically
into Estelle's
ear.
Estelle,_ facing

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Garcin, responds uniquely to him, as if he .
were the one questioning her, though he
looks at her without speaking.)
ESTELLE: I beg you; you promised, Garcin,
you promised!
Quickly, quickly; I don't
want to be alone.
Olga has taken him
dancing.
INEZ:
Who?
ESTELLE: Pierre.
They' re dancing together.
INEZ:
Who's Pierre?
ESTELLE: A little fool. He called me his
live ly brook .' He loved roe .
She's taken
him dancing.
INEZ:
Do you love him?
ESTELLE: They're sitting down. She's all
out of breath.
Why is she dancing?
At
least it'll make her lose some weight. Of
course not. Of course I didn't love him .
He's eighteen years old , and I'm no cradle
robber.
INEZ:
Then let them be. What can they
do to you?
ESTELLE: He was mine.
INEZ:
Nothing on earth is yours any
more.
ESTELLE: He was mine.
INEZ:
Yes, he was .
Try to take
him, try to touchhiro.
Olga, she can
touch him.
Can't she?
She can hold his
hands, stroke his knees.
ESTELLE: She's
pressing
her
enormous
breasts against him;
she's breathing in
his face. Tom Thumb, poor Tom Thumb, what
keeps you from laughing in her face? Ah,
one · glance from roe would have been enough,
she never would have dared
Am I
truly no more?
INEZ:
No more.
And there is nothing
left of you on earth. All that belongs to
you
is
here .
Would
you
like
the
paper-knife?
The bronze by Barbidienne?
The blue sofa is yours. And I, darling, I
am yours forever.
ESTELLE: Oh?
Mine forever?
Well then,
which of you dared to call roe their · lively
brook? You are not deceived, you others,
you know that I am filth.
Think of me,
Pierre; don't think, but of me; defend me.
As long as you are thinking, 'My lively
brook, my dearest lively brook,' I'm only
half here; only half guilty. Below, I am

a lively brook, at your side.
She's as
red as a tomato.
See, it's impossible;
we've laughed at her toget her a hundred
times. What is that song? I loved it so
much . Oh, the St. Louis Blues .
Go
ahead;
dance, dance . You'd laugh if you
could see it, Garcin.
She can't do a
thing without my seeing it.
I see you, I
see you, with your tired hair - do, looking
so overcome.
I see how you step on his
feet.
It's enough to die laughing. Come
on!
Faster, faster!
How he pulls and
pushes
her.
It's
indecent .
Faster!
'You're so light,' he always told me.
Come on!
Come on!
(Dances as
she
speaks.)
She's
laughing,
she
dances
across my view.
Our dear Estelle! What,
our dear Estelle?
Oh , be quiet!
You
didn't even shed a tear at the funeral.
And she says, 'our dear Estelle.'
She's
got the nerve to speak of him of me . Come
on!
In time. She's not one who can talk
and dance at the same time.
What?
No!
No! Don 't tell him! I give up; take him,
keep him, do with him what you will, but
don't tell him
(She has stopped
dancing . )
Good .
You can keep him for
now.
She told him everything, Garcin:
Roger, the trip to Switzerland; she told
him the whole story.
'Our dear Estelle
was not
No, no, after all, I
wasn't .
He shook his head with a sad
look , but you couldn't say the news upset
him.
Keep him for now.
I don't grudge
you his long eyelashes or his girlish
manners.
But he called me his lively
brook, his crystal. Well, the crystal is
in pieces.
'Our dear Estelle. '
Dance!
Dance!
Come on!
In time.
One, two.
(Dances.)
I'd give the whole world to
return to earth for a moment, a single
moment, to dance with him.
(Dance s. Long
pause.)
I don't hear so well any more.
They've turned down the lights, like for a
tango.
Why are they playing so softly?
Louder!
How far away it seems.
I
I don't hear anything at all now.
(Stops
dancing.)
Nothing.
The earth has . le.ft
me. Garcin, look at me. Take me in your
arms.
(Inez, behind Estelle, motions to
Garcin to move aside.)
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�GARCIN (retreats a step and indicates
Inez): Talk to her.
ESTELLE: (gripping him): Don't go!
Are
you a man? Look at me, though, don't turn
your eyes away.
Is it so painful? I 've
got golden hair, and after all, someone
killed himself for me. I beg you; you've
got to look at something. If it's not me,
it'll be the bronze, or the table, or the
sofas.
I'm still more pleasant to look
at. Listen;
I tumbled into their hearts
like a little bird fallen from its nest.
Pick me up, take me into your heart,
you'll see how nice I can be.
GA RC IN (pushing her away, with dif f iculty): Talk to her, I tell you.
ESTELLE: Her? She doesn't count; she's a
woman.
INEZ:
I don't count? But, my little
bird, my little dove, you've been in the
shelter of my heart for some time now.
· Don't be afraid; I'll look at you without
a break, without even a blink.
You will
live in my eyes like a speck of gold in a
ray of sunshine.
ESTELLE: A ray of sunshine?
Hal
Get
lost!
You've tried to catch me already,
and you've seen well enough that it
failed.
INEZ:
Estelle I
My lively brook, my
crystal.
ESTELLE: Your crystal? What a joke. Who
do you think you' re fooling?
Everyone
knows that I flung my child out the
window.
The crystal is in pieces on the
ground, and 1 don't care. I'm nothing but
an empty skin-- and my skin is not for
you.
INEZ:
Come!
You' 11 be whatever you
like; a lively brook, a briny brook.
In
the depths of my eyes you'll have whatever
you desire .
ESTELLE: Let me go!
You have no eyes I
But what do I have to do to make you let
me go?
Here!
(She spits in her face.
Inez quickly releases her.)
INEZ:
Garcin I
You' 11 pay for this!
(Pause.
Garcin
shrugs
and
goes
to
Estelle.)
GARCIN:
So you want a man.
ESTELLE: A man? No. You.
GARCIN:
Don't bother. Any man would do.
I 'm to be found here, so it' s me .
Good

enough.
(Takes her shoulders.)
I've got
nothing to please you, you 'know~- I'm not
a little fool and I don't dance the tango.
ESTELLE : I ' 11 take you
as
you ar~ .
Perhaps I'll change you.
GARCIN:
I doubt it.
I'll be
distracted.
I 've got other things on my
mind.
ESTELLE: What things?
GARCIN:
It wouldn't interest you.
ESTELLE: I'll sit on your sofa.
I'll
wait for you to bother with me. (Inez
laughs.)
INEZ:
Ha!
Bitch! On your belly!
On
your belly! And he's not even handsome.
ESTELLE (to Garcin): Don't listen to her.
She has no eyes, she has no ears.
She
doesn't count.
GARCIN:
I'll give you what I can.
It's
not much.
I won't love you;
I know you
too well.
ESTELLE: But you desire me?
GARCIN:
Yes.
ESTELLE: That's all I want.
GARCIN:
Then . . . (Leans toward her.)
INEZ:
Estelle! Garcin! You're losing
your senses! I'm here, me!
GARCIN:
I see. So?
INEZ:
In front of me? You
you
can't!
ESTELLE.: Why not?
I used to undress in
front of my chambermaid.
INEZ (grabbing Garcin): Let go! Let go!
Don't touch her with your filthy male
hands.
GARCIN
(pushes
her
away
violently) :
There: I 'm no gentleman, and I won' t be
afraid to hit a woman.
lNEZ:
You promised me, Garcin, you
promised! Please; you promised me!
GARCIN:
It' s
you
who
broke
our
agreement.
INEZ (Lets go and moves back to the edge
of the set) :
Do what you like; you' re
stronger than me.
But remember that I'm
here and I'm watching.
My eyes won't
leave you, Garcin; you'll have to embrace
under my stare.
How I hate the both of
you! Go on, love! Love! We are in hell
and I'll have my turn.
(During the
following scene she stares silently at
them.)

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GARCIN (returning to Estelle and taking
her by the shoulders): Kiss me.
(Pause.)
He leans over, then abruptly straightens
up again.)
ESTELLE (annoyed gesture:)
Ha!
(Pause.)
I told you to pay no attention
to her.
GARCIN: She matters. (Pause.) Gomez is at
the journal. They've closed the windows;
it must be winter. For six months they've
I told you I'd be distracted.
They ' re shivering;
they've kept their
coats on. It's curious-- they're so cold,
down there, and I'm so hot.
This time
they're talking about me.
ESTELLE:
Will this last long? (Pause.)
Tell me what he's saying, anyway.
GARCIN:
Nothing.
He's not saying a
thing. He's scum, that's all. Just scum.
Ha!
(Returns to Estelle.)
Back to us!
Will you love me?
ESTELLE (smile) : Who knows?
GARCIN: Will you have faith in me?
ESTELLE:
What a silly question!
You' 11
be constantly in my sight and there's only
Inez for you to cheat on me with .
GARCIN:
True.
(Pause.
He releases her
shoulders.)
I meant a different kind of
faith.
(Listens.)
Go on, go on!
Say
what you like; I'm not there to defend
myself.
(To Estelle.) You've got to have
faith in me, Estelle.
ESTELLE: What a fuss!
But you've got my
mouth, my arms, my entire body, and
everything could be so simple
My
faith?
But I've got no faith to give.
You're annoying me terribly.
You must
have done something pretty awful to beg
for my faith so.
GARCIN: They shot me.
ESTELLE: I know; you refused to go . So?
GARCIN:
I . . . I didn't exactly refuse.
(To the invisible ones.)
He speaks well,
he accuses me as well as the can, but he
hasn't said what I should have done.
Should I have gone to the general's office
and said, 'I won't go, general?'
What
foolishness!
They'd just have locked me
up.
I wanted to testify, to testify,
myself. I didn't want them to suppress my
side of things. (To Estelle.)
I .
. I
took the train.
They pinched me at the
border.

ESTELLE: Where would you have gone?
GA RC IN:
Mexico City.
I
figured
on
starting a pacifist journal there.
(Long
pause.) Well, say something.
ESTELLE: What do you want me to say? You
did what you could since you didn't want
to
fight.
(Garcin makes
an
annoyed
gesture.)
Oh, darling, I've no idea how
to answer you.
INEZ:
You should tell him, my treasure,
that he ran away like a lion. For he did
run away, your great darling.
That's
what's torturing him.
GARCIN: Ran away, left, call it what you
will.
ESTELLE: But you had to run away.
If
YOU Id Stayed they WOUld have put YOU in
handcuffs.
GARCIN: True.
(Pause.)
Estelle, am I a
coward ?
ESTELLE: But I know nothing about it, my
love. I'm not in your skin. It's for you
to decide.
GARCIN (weary gesture): I can't decide.
ESTELLE:
Well, after all, you should
remember; you have must have had reasons
for doing what you did.
GARCIN: Yes.
ESTELLE : We 11?
GARCIN: Are they the real reasons?
ESTELLE: How tangled you are.
GARCIN: I wanted to testify . . . I . . . I
had thought about it for so long
. Are
they the real reasons?
INEZ: Ha! That's the question. Are they
the real reasons?
You deliberated;
you
didn't want to enter it lightly.
But
fear, hate, and all the filth hidden
inside; these are also reasons.
Go on,
look, interrogate yourself.
GARCIN:
Shut up!
Do you think I need
your advice?
I paced in my cell, all
night, all day.
The window to the door,
the door to the window. I lay in wait for
myself.
I followed my tracks.
It seemed
as
if
I'd spent
an entire
lifetime
questioning myself.
But the deed was
still there.
I . . . I'd taken the train
that much was certain.
But why_
?
Why?
Eventually I came to think that my death
would decide: if I died properly, it would
prove that I'm not a coward.
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�GARCIN:
Badly.
(Inez
bursts
into
But I'm out of the game; they'll keep the
laughter.)
Oh I
It was simply a bodily
records and not worry about me,
and·
weakness.
I'm not ashamed.
It's just
they're right, since I'm dead.
Finished
like a rat.
{Laughs.)
I've fall en into
that everything remains in suspense, for
the public domain.
(Long pause)
eternity.
(To Estelle): Come here, you.
ESTELLE {softly ) : Garcin.
Look at me.
I need to have someone
GARCIN: You're there? Good, listen, you
looking at me when they talk about me on
earth. I love green eyes.
can do me a favor.
No, don't flinch.
I
know, it seems funny for someo ne to ask
INEZ:
Green eyes?
Well, look at that.
you for help, you're not used to it. But
And you, Estelle, do you love cowards?
if you wanted to, it you tried, couldn't
ESTELLE: What's it to me? Coward or not,
as long as he kisses well.
we perhaps love one another for good?
Look, there are a thousand people who' 11
GARCIN:
They' re shaking their heads and
repeat that I'm a coward.
But what's
puffing on their cigars; they' re bored.
that, a thousand? If there were one soul,
They're thinking,
'Garcin's a coward';
just one, who' 11 swear against all ·their
tiredly, weakly. Still, history's got to
forces that I didn't run away, that I
think something.
Garcin is a coward.
couldn't have run away,
that I
had
That's what they've decided; them, my
courage, that I am straight, I . • • I'm
comrades.
In six months they'll be
positive that I' 11 be saved!
Will you
saying, "yellow as Garcin."
You two are
believe me? You'll be dearer to me than
lucky; no one on earth thinks about you any
I myself.
more. Me, my life doesn't end so easily.
INEZ: And your wife, Garcin?
ESTELLE (laughing):
Idiot! Dear idiot?
Do you think I could love a coward?
GARCIN: What about my wife? She's dead.
INEZ: De?d?
GARCIN: But you said . . .
ESTELLE: I was teasing you. I loved men,
GARCIN:
I must have forgotten to tell
Garcin, real men, with rough skin, strong
you.
She died not long ago.
It's been
about two months now.
hands.
You haven't got the chin of a
INEZ: Of grief?
coward, you haven't got a coward's mouth,
or a coward's voice, or the hair of a
GARCIN: Of course, of grief. What do you
coward.
And it's for you mouth, your
think she'd die of? So, all is well. The
voice, your hair that I love you.
war is over, my wife is dead, and I have a
GARCIN: Is it true? Is it really true?
place in history. (He emits a dry sob and
ESTELLE:
Do you want me to swear it to
covers his face with his hands.
Estelle
you?
holds him.)
GARCIN:
So, I defy them all; the ones
ESTELLE: Darling, darling. Look at me,
down .there and the ones here.
Estelle,
my darling. · Touch me, touch me.
(Takes
we' 11 stroll out o f hell.
(Inez bursts
his hand and places it on her throat.)
out laughing. He stops and looks a her.)
Put your hand on my throat.
(Garcin
What is it?
attempts to pull away.)
Leave your hand,
INEZ {laughing): But she doesn't believe
leave it here, don't stir. They will die,
a word she says.
How could you be so
all of themr what does it matter what they
naive?
'Estelle, am I coward?'
If only
think.
Forget them.
There's no one but
you knew how much s}1e cares!
me.
ESTELLE:
Inez I
(To Gare in.)
Don't
GARCIN- (withdraws his hand) : They won't
listen to her.
If you want my faith
forget me.
They'll die, but others will
you've got to give me yours.
come who'll pass it on. I've left my life
INEZ: Of course, of course!
Trust her.
in their hands.
She needs a man, that you can believe, she
ESTELLE: Ahl You think too much.
needs a man' s arms around · her waist, a
GARCIN:
What else is there to do?
man's smell, a man's desire in the eyes of
Before, I acted .
Oh I
To go back
a man. As for the rest . . . Hal
She'd
with them for one day •
. What a lie I

suffering, which tickles and caresses and
tell you that you're God the Father, if it
is never bad enough.
(Grabs for the
would make you happy .
button and presses it. )
Will you open?
GARCIN :
Estelle!
Is this true? Answer
(The door opens suddenly, and he just
me : is it true?
avoids falling. ) Ah!
(A long silence.)
ESTELLE:
What do you want me to say? I
INEZ: Well, Garcin? Go ahead.
don't understand a word of all these
GARCIN (slowly):
I wonder why that door
stories.
(Stamps her foot)
How annoying
opened.
this all is! Even if you were a coward, I
INEZ: What are you waiting for? Go, go,
would love you .
There!
Is that enough
quickly .
for you?
(Pause . )
GARCIN: I'm not going out there.
GARCIN (to both women ) :
You disgust me!
INEZ:
And you, Estelle?
(Estell e does
(Walks to the doo r. )
not move.
Inez laughs . )
So?
Which?
ESTELLE: What are you doing?
GARCIN: Leaving .
Which of the three? The way is free -- so
what's keeping us?
Ha!
It's enough to
INEZ (quickly) :
You won't get far; the
die
laughing .
We're
inseparable.
door's locked .
(Estelle pounces on her from behind)
GARCIN :
They'll open it, I tell you.
ESTELLE:
Inseparable? Garcin!
Help me,
(Pounds on the door.)
I can't tolerate
help me, quick .
We' 11 drag her out and
you any more.
I can't.
(Este lle runs to
shut the door behind he r; she'll see.
him . He thrusts her away.) Go away! You
INEZ (str uggling):
Estelle!
Estelle!
I
disqust me even more than she does.
I
beg you, keep me. Not in the hall; don't
don't want to be swallowed by your eyes.
throw me in the hall!
You 're clammy; you' re soft!
You are an
GARCIN : Let her go.
octopus, a swamp .
(Beats on the door.)
ESTELLE : You're a fool, she hates you.
Will you open?
GARCIN:
It's because of her tha t
I
ESTELLE: Garcin , I beg you, please don't
stayed.
(Estelle releases Inez, and looks
go .
I won't talk to you, I'll leave you
at Garcin in amazement.)
all alone, but don't go. Inez has shown
INEZ:
Because of me?
(Pause . )
Well,
her claws; I don't want to stay alone with
her.
good enough; close the door.
It's ten
times hotter since it opened .
(Garcin
GARCIN:
Look after yourself.
I never
crosses to the door and closes it.)
asked you to come.
Because of me?
It Is so
ESTELLE:
Coward!
Coward!
Oh!
true;you are a coward.
GARCIN: Yes. You, you know what a coward
INEZ
(appr oaching Estelle) :
Well, my ' is .
INEZ: Yes, I know that .
dove, aren't you happy?
You spat in my
GARCIN: You know what evil is, and shame,
face to please him, and we quarrelled
and fear.
There were days when you saw
because of him.
But he ' s leaving, the
through youself, right to the heart.
And
kill- joy; he's going to leave us girls
it shattered you.
And the next day you
alone
could do nothing but think, but you could
ESTELLE:
It won't do you any good .
If
no longer understand the revelation of the
that door opens, I'm gone .
day before.
Yes, you know the cost of
INEZ: Where?
evil.
And if you say that I'm a coward,
ESTELLE: It doesn 't matter where. As far
it's because you've lived with it , right?
from you as possible .
(Gare in has not
INEZ: Yes .
stopped beating on the door.)
It's you I've got to convince,
GARCIN:
Open!
Open it!
I'll accept GARCIN:
you are of my breed. Did you imagine that
everything: the boot, the pincers, the
I was going to leave?
I couldn't leave
molten lead, the tongs, the garrotte;
everything that burns and tears .
I want you here, triumphant, with all those
to suffer for the good. Better a hundred thoughts in your head, all those thoughts
stings, better the whip, the acid, than about me.
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�GARCIN:
I want nothing more.
I don't
hear them any more, you know.
No doubt
they' re finished with me.
Finished; the
case is closed, I 'm no longer on earth,
not even as a coward. We ' re alone here ,
Inez; there's nobody but you two to think
of me.
She doesn't count.
But you, you
who hate me; if you believe me, you' 11
save me.
INEZ:
This won't be easy.
Look at · me.
I've .got a thick skull.
GARCIN:
I'll give it all the time it
takes.
INEZ: Well, you've got all of time. All
of time.
GARCIN
(takes her by the shoulders):
Look, everyone's got their own tastes,
right? Me, I didn't give a damn about
money , or love. I wanted to be a man. A
real man. I put everything on one horse.
Is it possible to be a coward when one
takes the most dangerous routes? Can you
judge an entire life by one act?
INEZ:
Why not?
For thirty years you
dreamed that you had courage, and you
allowed
yourself
a
thousand
petty
weaknesses because for heres everything is
permitted. How convenient!
And then, at
the hour of danger, you were up against
the wall and. • . you took the train for
Mexico.
GARCIN: I did not dream of that heroism.
I chose it.
A man is what he wants to be.
INEZ: Prove it. Prove it wasn't a dream.
Only acts determine what it is one wants.
GARCIN:
I died ·too soon.
I didn't have
the time to finish my acts.
INEZ:
One always dies too soon-- or too
late.
But the life is there, finished;
the line is drawn; you've got to take the
total.
Besides your life, you've got
nothing.
GARCIN: Viper! You've got an answer for
everything.
INEZ: Come on, come onl
Don't give up.
It should be easy to persuade me.
Look
for arguments, make an effort.
(Garcin
shrugs.) Well, well? I told you you were
vulnerable.
Ha!
How you' 11 pay for it
now. You are a coward, Garcin; a coward
because I will it.
I will it, you hear?
I will it. And yet see how weak I am, a

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breath of air.
I'm nothing but the eye
that sees you, the colorless thought that
thinks you.
(He walks toward her with
open hands • )
Ha!
They are open, these
great manly hands.
But what are you
hoping for? You can't catch a thought in
your hands.
Come on, you haven' t got a
choice: you'll have to convince me.
I've
got you.
ESTELLE: Garcin!
What?
GARCIN:
ESTELLE: Avenge yourself.
How?
GARCIN:
ESTELLE: Embrace me; you'll hear her
sing.
That's true, Inez. You have got
GARCIN:
too.
(Holds
me, but I've got you,
Estelle. Inez lets out a cry.)
Hal Coward! Coward! Go ahead.
INEZ:
Go ahead and console yourself with women.
ESTELLE: Sing, Inez, sing!
INEZ:
The handsome couple!
If only
you could see his great hand on the flat
of y·o ur back, pawing at the flesh and the
cloth.
He has wet hands.
He sweats.
It's leaving a blue stain on your dress.
ESTELLE: Sing I
Sing!
Squeeze
me
tighter, Garcin; she'll burst.
INEZ:
Yes, squeeze her tightly, Garcin,
squeeze her.
Mingle your heats.
It's
good, love 1 eh, Gare in?
It' s deep and
mild, like sleep.
But I won't let you
sleep.
(Gesture from Garcin.)
ESTELLE: Don't listen to her.
Take my
lips; I am totally yours.
INEZ:
Well, what are you waiting for?
Do as you're told.
Garcin the coward
holds in his arms Estelle the infanticide.
Betting is opened. Will Garcin the coward
embrace her?
I
see you, I see you 1 by
myself I am . a crowd.
The crowd, Garcin,
the crowd; do you hear them? (Muttering.)
Coward l
Coward!
Coward!
Coward!
You
flee in vain; I won't let you go.
What
are
you
seeking
in
her
lips?
Forgetfulness?
But I won't forget you .
It's me you must convince. Me. Go on! Go
onl I'm waiting. · You see, Estelle, he's
losing his grip, he's as tame as a puppy
• . • You can't have himl
GARCIN:
So it will never.be night.
Never.
INEZ:
You'll see me always.
GARCIN:

INEZ:
Always.
(Ga re in
releases
Estelle and takes several steps upstage.
He approaches the bronze.)
GARCIN:
The bronze . . .
(Caresses it.)
So here we are now.
The bronze is here;
I
contemplate it and I realize I'm in
hell. I tell you everything was foreseen.
They p~edicted that I'd stand before this
mantle, with my hand on the bronze, and
all
eyes upon me.
All those eyes,
devouring me.
(Suddenly turns around.)
Ha!
'l'here ' s only two of you? I thought
there would be a lot more.
(Laughs.) So,
it's hell, here .
I never would have
thought
You remember-- the
brimstone, the spikes, the grilles . .
Ah! What a joke . No need of the grille.
Hell? It's The Othe rs.
ESTELLE: Darling!
GARCIN
(pushing her away):
Leave me
alone.
She stands between us.
I can't
love you while she's watching.
ESTELLE: Ha! Well, she won't see you any

more.
(Takes the paper-knife from the
table, rushes to Tn c'!z and stabs her
several times.)
INEZ:
(struggles with her,
laughing):
What are you doing, what are you doing,
are you mad?
You know quite well I 1 m
dead.
ESTELLE: Dead?
(She drops the knife.
Inez picks it up and stabs herself with
rage. )
Dead! Dead! Dead! Not a knife
INEZ:
It's already been
or poison, or hanging.
done, understand?
And we are together
forever.
(Laugh s.)
ESTELLE (burst of laughter) : Forever? My
god, how comical! Forever!
GARCIN (laughs , looking at the others):
Forever!
(They sit, each on his own sofa.
A long silence.
They stop laughing and
regard one another.
Garcin gets up.)
Well, let's get on with it.
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The Music of the American· Republic
Karl Walling

CONTENTS
1

THE MUSIC OF THE AMERICAN REPUBLIC

Ka rl Walling

CHARACTER AND LIBERAL EDUCATION

Eva Br.:: 1·

MUSIC AS A MEMBER OF THE QUADRIVIUM

Jeremy Laue r

THREE DREAMS TO WAKING

Pierre Gagn ie r

MARTHA'S CONVERSJOf\;

Zoe Churchville

SONNET

Step hen Morse

THE TEARS OF ODYSSEUS

Cary S tic kney

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MATHEMATICS AND THE CONCEPT OF FOR CE

John Ritner

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THE FORT

A.J. Kriv ak

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G ALILEO'S LIMITS

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SONNET

Stephen Morse

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DIVIDED BETWEEN TEARS AND SMILES

Merle Sokolik

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POEM

Pierre Gagnier

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"No sooner do you set foot on American soil," Tocqueville says, "than you find
yourself in a sort of tumult, a confused clamor rises on every side, and a
thousand voices are heard at once, each expressing some social requirements."
[ 1] The voices Tocqueville describes belong to men
and women governing
themselves . For some, the sound they make is mere cacophony, for the confused
clamor comes from every American struggling to attain a new or larger piece of
the action, and a new or better place in the sun. For others, the sound is a
symphony wh i ch expresses the well-ordered functioning of the American polity
according to the fot•nders' grand design.
Neither the cacophonic nor the symphonic view is exactly correct. Americans
have a connnon creed, indeed a political religion, which is expressed in the
Declaration of Independence, many of Lincoln's speeches, and the myths which make
us a people. The creed gives too much form and depth to the American character
for the sound we make ever to be just noise, devoid of order or meaning.
We
simply have too much in common. Nevertheless, we are also an ambitious people.
Americans and American interest groups all pursue their ends with great energy,
and often without regard for the interests of others. Symphonies require too
much coordination of each sound for the political jockeying characteristic of
America to ever have the order, sense, or purpose of a symphony. We are simply
t oo free.
The sound Tocqueville heard is most like improvised jazz, the organized musical
chaos indigenous to America. This improvised jazz leaves plenty of room for
displays of virtuosity. Our politicians, for example, constantly blow their own
horns.
In fact, every interest and leader in America seems to aim at grabbing
our attention by being louder or more sophisticated than the competitors whose
But the horn-blowing requires
accommodations.
sound they try to drown.
Back-scratching--jiving and staying in tune with others--is absolutely essential
for every American politician and interest group to get ahead. In order to play
their solos, they have to play with the band.
The music of the American republic is therefore full of much harmony and
dissonance, much unity and diversity. How did this come about? What. purpose can
the music serve? Is there any sense in it? Without laying too much stress on
the vision of one man, I would like to suggest that J ames Madison provides the
best answers to these questions in Federalist l.Q., and that, indeed, he deserves
to be called the theoretical father of American political jazz.

BACKGROUND: DEMOCRATIC RULE AND THE PROBLEM OF FACTION
In Federalist ,i, Hamilton observes t hat, "it is impossible to read the
histories of the pett y republics of Greece and Italy" wi t hout being overwhelmed
by "sensations of horror and disgust" at the i r perpetual " vibrations between the
extremes of tyranny and anarchy."
.[ 2] Thoug h we today tend to t hink that any
regime that is not democratic cannot be respectable, Hamilton expressed a view of
democracy that has been far more common in history.
Historically, democratic
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�rule has been far from respectable. In Plato's Republic, for example, democracy
ranks just above anarchy in the decay of more or less just ststes, and is soon
followed by despotism of one form or another .
The following passage from
Thucydides' description of the civil war in Corcyraea is arz example of what ntany
men at the time of the writing of the Federalist thought to bf" an inevitable
consequence of democratic rule: [3]
"The Corcyraeans were engaged in butchering those of their fellow
citizens whom they regarded as their enemies: and though the crime
imputed was that of trying to put down the democ:racy, some were slain
also for private hatred, others by their debtors because of the money
they owed to them.
Death thus raged in every shape; and, as usually
happens at such times, there was no lengtb to which violence did not
go; sons were killed by their fathers, and supvliants dragged from the
altar or slain upon it: while some were even walled up in the temple of
Dionysus and died there."
According to Thucydides, this kind of violent civil st·ruggle has always
happened and always will happen "as long as the nature of n1 remains the Bame."
an
[4] As long as men are greedy or envious, Thucydides says, then they will go to
civil war, and democratic nations, such as Athens, Corcyraea, and Rome, will be
most likely to go to civil war. In such nations. the poor will have a common
passion and interest in taking from the rich and giving to themselves, and the.
rich will have an opposite passion and interE!st in defendlrig theit property. The
poor, who almost always outnumber the rich. will have the voting power to do what
they like. The rich, to defend their property, will often resort to illegal and
violent means to defend themselves.
Society will become polarized into two
warring camps, and no man will be safe from the greed or envy of other men. To
be fair, the problem Thucydides describes is not so much a problem of democratic
rule as it is of smallness. Small nations are easily divided into warring camps,
if only because it is easier for the passions of a moment to spread through all
the citizenry.
But all democratic nations before the writing of the Federalist
had been small, and smallness was considered essential by political theorists
before the writing of the Federalist because only small nations ~ere capable of
allowing their citizens to meet and vote on every issue. Hence, democracies took
the blame for the factional vices of small nations, even though faction was
primarily a problem of small nations.
Federalist 1Q. is an attempt to prove Thucydides was wrong.
Although Madison
admits that democracies have been one of the most common sources of civil war (or
as he put it, the violence of faction) ''and in general, have been as short in
their lives as they have been violent in their deaths," Madison sets out to show
that it is possible to both mitigate the dangers of faction and have democratic
rule.
His task is to make democracy safe for America: "to preserve the public
good and private rights against" factions and "at the same time to preserve the
spirit and form of popular government." Although Madison addresses an ancient
problem, the problem of factional civil war in democratic nations (leading to
anarchy or tyranny of one form or another) is as modern as yesterday and today.
The chaos and near civil war of democratic rule in the Weimar Republic, the very
condition of Hitler's coming to power, demonstrates the perennial nature of the
problem. As order breaks down, men will often accept the leadership of any
strong man, even if the order they receive in return comes without or at the
expense of laws.
A brief look at fledgling democracies around the world (at
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democratic nations are still often on the verge of civil war or forced to resort
to the rule of a strong man to prevent civil war.. Perhaps because he understood
that civil war would always be a problem for democracies, Madison, in a rare
evangelical temper, suggests that preventing the "mischiefs of faction" is the
"desideratum" to recommend democratic rule to "the esteem and adoption of
mankind." After all, who would ever wish to live in a democracy, if life in a
democracy always led to anarchy, civil war, and despotism?

TREATIRG THE CAUSES OR THE EFFECTS?
Madison begins his task by defining his terms.
A faction is a group of
citizens "united and actuated by some common impulse of passion, or of interest,
adverse to the rights of other citizens or to the permanent and aggregate
i terests of the community." The dangers he sees from faction are twofold: they
may act or rule unjustly and they may act or rule unwisely. In either case,
factions can provoke civil war by forcing others to rebel against repression or
prompting the able to take things into their own hands. Madison's solution must
therefore mitigate both of these dangers: it must make factions both wiser and
more just and it must prevent civil war and coups d'etat.
Like a doctor treating a dreadful disease, Madison sees only two ways to remedy
the ills of factions. Either the causes or the effects, the symptoms or the
disease, must be treated.
Two causes--one motivational
and
the
other
conditional--create faction. Liberty is the conditional cause of faction and
"essential to its existence." Without liberty, men cannot communicate, organize,
or unite. They cannot oppose anyone or anything. The motivational c·ause is the
diversity of passions, interests, and opinions of the human race. Men struggle,
and perhaps always will struggle, because they are different.
Madison soon discovers that it is unwise and in fact impossible to completely
cure the causes of faction.
Though "liberty (the conditional cause) is to
faction what fire is to animal life," liberty is also "essential to political
life" in America. We would not choose to live without it.
The American
Revolution was fought in the name of liberty. To eliminate liberty in order to
prevent factional strife, would be to destroy the aims of the revolution. Though
tyrants everywhere and in all times have eliminated liberty in order to control
faction, such a cure would be "worse than the disease" of faction in America.
Since Americans would rightly not tolerate removing the conditional cause of
faction, Madison considers removing the motivational cause, but this is simply
impracticable. "As long as the reason of man continues to be fallible," men will
form different opinions, and they will be mistaken about their opinions. As long
as man's "reason and his self-love" are connected, even the best of men will be
vain.
They will love and defend their opinions as much because they are their
own opinions as because they think .their opinions are the right opinions.
They
will also tend to use their reason as a means to satisfy their passions rather
than subject their passions to the rule of their reason. Moreover, though all
men have passions, they do not all have the same degrees or kinds of passions.
This diversity of degrees and kinds of passions ensures great diversity in the
will to satisfy them, and potential violence when the passions conflict. Most
important ly, "the diversity in the faculties of men, from which the rights of
property originate, is ••• an insuperable obstacle to a uniformity of interests."
Protecting each man's right to use his faculties, including his property
acquiring faculty, is the "first object of government." But when the government
protects "different and unequal faculties of acquiring property," a host of
opportunities for factional struggle appear.
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�degrees and kinds of property.
The greed of some, the envy of others, influence
the have's and the have not's, and thus begins "a division of the society into
different interests and parties." For all these reasons, Madison argues that the
motivating causes of faction are "sown in the nature of man." To cure the causes
of faction, human nature would have to be changed, a task which Madison assumes
to be almost impossible.
The other way of mitigating the dangers of faction is to control the effects of
factional struggle and for Madison, this is the only practical way.
In any
democratic nation, if a faction is a minority, "relief is supplied by" the
principle of a majority rule, "which enab lee a majority to defeat'' a minority
through the ballot. Though the minority "might clog the administration" and
"convulse the society" with all the clamorous turmoil Tocqueville saw and heard,
the principle of majority rule will prevent the minority faction from gaining
power. But the very virtue of majority rule in dealing with minority factions is
also its greatest vice. If a faction consists of a majority, the faction is able
to "sacrifice to its ruling passion or interest both the public good and the
rights of other citizens."

MAJORITY RULE WITHOUT FACTIONS?
Madison's primary purpose in Federalist 1Q is to solve the problem of majority
faction: of unwise or unjust rule by majorities. He sees only two possible (and
complementary) solutions. Either majority factions must be prevented from having
the same passion or interest at the same time, or, if they already have common
passions and interests, they must be denied the chance "to carry into effect,
schemes of oppression." Notice that Madison is not rejecting the principle of
majority rule. He calls himself a "friend of popular government" and insists
that laws be made by majorities. But to solve the problem of majority faction,
something must be done to ensure that majorities rule with more justice and
wisdom than ever before.
Madison does not believe that "pure democracies," such as Athens, could ever
aolve this problem. The small size which the ancients (and most moderns until
the writing of the Constitution) had considered essential for democracies ensures
that "a common passion or interest will, in almost every case, be felt by a
majority." In such nations, "communication and concert" result from the "form of
government itself" and factious majorities therefore possess both the will and
the means to rule unwisely and unjustly.
But an extended republic, such as
America, differs from a "pure democracy" in at least two very important
respects. The first is delegation of powers; the second, the greater number of
citizens and larger territory which delegation makes possible for an extended
republic.
The effect of the first difference may be to "refine and enlarge the public
vievs" through the public's representatives: people whose experience, love of
ju1tice, and patriotism will enable them to withstand the passions of a moment
and the clamor of a thousand voices. The effect may also be inverted, however.
Demagogic delegates may "obtain the suffrages, and then betray the interests, of
the people." But this inversion is much less likely in a large republic than a
small republic.
To guard against "the cabals of a few," the delegates must be
raised to a certain number; to avoid the "confusion of a multitude," the
delegates must be limited to a certain number. Though the mean number is bard to
determine, that mean number would prevent the sound made by the delegates from
being either a cacophony verging on civil war or a symphony verging on
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no'ise if they were limited to enough people to meet, listen to each other, make
decisions, and, above all, be held responsible for their decisions. The people
the delegates represent would demand action, and, in order to be reelected, the
delegates would have to reach some consensus and act. The delegates would also
conspire and meet in many back rooms, but if there were so many different kinds
of delegates that it were hard to communicate with all of them, let alone pack
them all into one room, their conspiracies would lack a sufficient number of
conspirators to do any damage.
EXTEND THE SPHERE. or DELEGATION
In an extremely large republic with 13, or even better, 50 states, it is much
more probable that the delegates and the interests they represent will be
extremely diverse--so diverse, in fact, that forming any majority at all would be
an extremely difficult task. "Extend the sphere" of a republic, Madison says,
"and you take in a greater variety of parties and interests; you make it less
likely that a majority of the whole will have a common motive to invade the
rights of other citizens, or if such a motive exists, it will be more difficult
for all who feel it to discover their own strength and act in unison with each
other." If the vast republic Madison envisions is also a commercial republic,
the effect of geographical diversity may be compounded by economic diversity.
The most "common and durable source of faction," Madison observes, bas ever been
"the various and unequal distribution of property." In small nations, such as El
Salvador and much of the Third World today, very little diversity of and between
economic classes exists.
As long as such economic conditions prevail and the
many poor with nothing to lose from civil war outnumber the few rich who have
everything to lose from civil war, then such nations, particularly when they
become .democrati~, will be prone to violent factional struggle. In large,
commercial republ1cs, however, "a landed interest, a manufacturing interest, a
mercantile interest, a moneyed interest, with many lesser interests, grow up of
necessity." The acquisitive instinct in each interest group will lead it to put
its interest first. The interest groups will compete with each other, and when
they cooperate, it will be because cooperation is the only way they can attain
their ends.
Geographical diversity compounded by economic diversity will therefore act to
split potential majorities into actual minorities.
Such minorities will be
"rendered, by their number and local situation, unable to concert and carry into
effect" unjust or unwise laws. They will become politically impotent. In fact,
they will no longer be factions. They will be interest groups, weakened by the
diversity of the nation and tame enough to act only by cooperating with others.
The sound of Tocqueville heard is very much the sound of a great commercial
people clamoring for more and more .wealth. Tocqueville heard that sound in every
part of America. The nation is so large that even though some economic interests
are concentrated in the four corners of the nation, great diversity exists within
regions as well as between them.
Even now, with the advent of telephones,
computers, and million name mailing lists, comnw.nication between members of
similar interests is often very slow and difficult, and frequently impossible.
The ~ost important consequence of the nation's economic and geographical (not to
mention cultural and religious) diversity is that America has never bad the same
kind or degree of rich-poor polarization which characterizes so much of the rest
of the world. To be sure, the nation does have its poor (and far too many of
them), but most of us have moderate incomes and our economic interests are
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�interests make the formation of a worker's class in America very difficult.
If
for a trucking firm, for example, we are just as likely to side with the
company we work for in asking for help from the government as against the company
in a strike for higher wages.
We want the work, even if the work for the
truckers means less work for others--the workers in the railroad, airline,
busing, and merchant marine industries.
Therefore, no proletariat exists in
America, only interest groups. With such diversity, it is almost impossible for
class struggle to characterize the factional struggle which does take place in
America. As Friedrich Engels observed, "There is no place yet in America for a
third (workers') party. The divergence of interests even in the same class group
is so great in that tremendous area that wholly different interests and parties
are represented in each of the two big parties." [S]
we work

"RUINED" BY MIDDLE CLASS MORALITY
If I understood Engels correctly, Americans, like Mr. Doolittle in Shaw's
Pygmalion, have been "ruined" for the purposes of class struggle by "middle class
morality."
But the ruination comes from the character our commercial society
imparts to us as well as the diversity which makes our commercial society
possible. Writing as long ago as 1787, Hamilton observed that the "assiduous
merchant, the laborious husbandman, the active mechanic, and the industrious
manufacturer--all orders of men, look forward with eager expectation ••• to the
pleasing reward of their toils." [6] These men very much want to be rich but
they will.settle for being comfortable.
These are acquisitive men, but the; are
also cautious men--men with some property and men who would regard taking their
property from them as a crime. That is why so many of them abhor the thought of
taxation, even if it comes with representation.
Though this acquisitive, property worshipping characteristic of Americans is
often vulgar, and sometimes cruel, it does have some important saving graces. It
makes us wary of revolutionaries of any kind because we are very interested in
preserving the comfort that we have.
Just as importantly, it diverts our
attention from one of the most enduring and frequent causes of factional
struggle--religion.
As
Madison observes, "A zeal for different opinions
concerning religion" has often "divided mankind into parties, inflamed them with
mutual animosity, and rendered them much more disposed to vex and oppress each
other than cooperate for the common good." Madison assumes that the nation's
"miltiplicity" of religious sects will fragment tyrannical religious majority
factions, but the acquisitive character of Americans can greatly reduce the
desire to eppress anyone for religious reasons. Bluntly stated, many Americans
worship Mammon as much as God, and many others have a long history of confusing
Mammon with God, or at least His grace. Who wants to have civil war when it is
po11ible to get rich, or at least become comfortably well off? If the people of
the Mideast or Northern Ireland worshipped Maunnon as much as God, would they be
as likely to sacrifice their lives and property for the sake of God? Or would
they adopt the more moderate live and let live attitude of the acquisitive man
who lets others prosper so that he can prosper?
Engel's reference to parties suggests something which Madison never envisioned
in writing the Federalist . America has almost always had two majo r par ties, and
occasional third parties.
Party was a dirty word for Madison, and synonymous
with faction. Large parties, however, are absolutely essential for American
government. No single interest group can attain a majority by itself in America,
and this fact is the greatest testament to Madison's vision in Federalist 10. The
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parties provide can rarely be called factions.
Parties are coalitions of
interest groups which often share philosophical· and humanitarian goals and
convictions, but which always share one immediate practical political objective:
power. Each interest wants, and assumes all other interests want as much power
as it can get.
To attain such power, however, the interests must make
accommodations and compromises with each other. No interest can dominate for a
long time; each eventually has a chance to influence the party in some way to
some extent. To be sure, Madison never envisioned modern political parties, but
such parties are essential to overcome the nation's diversity, and make it
possible to assert that ."a coalition of a majority of the whole society could
seldom take place on any other principles than those of justice and the general
good."
That is why I would call Madison the theoretical father of American political
jazz. Had the effect of the nation's geographical, economic, cultural, and
religious diversity been to prevent Americans from ever uniting at all, then the
sound Tocqueville heard would have been just ugly noise.
Instead, with the
expressed purpose of overcoming differences between sections, interests, creeds,
and cultures, parties have developed flexible and changing coalitions which meet
every four years (often to the sound of jazz) in an atmosphere resembling a large
New Year' s Eve Party. The sound of men and women struggling to be heard at these
conventions is not at all unlike the sound of trumpets, drums, pianos, and
trombones improvising in a great jazz band. Each voice and musician wants to be
heard, but knows that the success of the party (victory in November) and the band
(a happy audience) depends on satisfying most interests (giving everyone a say or
a solo). The success of the whole depends on satisfying the parts and the parts
depend on the success of the whole. We are forced to get ahead by getting
along.

SOME PHILOSOPHICAL REFLECTIONS ON SOME POLITICAL PARADOXES
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Having seen the utility of the diversity of the nation as a bulwark against
factional struggle, it is worthwhile to try to imagine the philosophical method
and assumptions which might have led Madison to think of his "republican remedy
for the diseases most incident to repub lie government." Though much has been
made of Madison's debt to men like Hume, Locke, and Hobbes, I think the
assumptions which underlie Federalist .!Jt are owed primarily to Francis Bacon and
his maxim that nature, to be conquered, must be obeyed.
There is something very paradoxical in the notion of conquering by obeying.
After all , most conquerors give orders; they do not take them. But think of what
engineers do when they construct huge hydroelectric dams to stop floods, irrigate
land, and provide energy for cities.
They do not order the water to do as they
will, but rather obey very st~ict rules for manipulating floodwater for
constructive ends.
The water must be allowed to move, or it will overflow and
wreak devastation on the towns and land nearby. When the water is channeled in
the right direction, it can move the motors that make the electricity. Nature is
not conquered so much as it is used, but it is used by letting it do what it must
do. The water must move.
If it is all too often the
Can the same things be said about human nature?
nature of men and factions to pursue their own interests and passions without
regard for the interests of other men, how can one use this aspect of human
nature to control the tendency of men and factions to forsake justice and the
common good of their society? If I understand Madison correctly, human nature
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�be obeyed. Therefore, the way to control the effects of faction is to use human
selfishnesa--the ambition of some and the greed of others, to oppose human
selfishness. In an extended commercial republic the size of America it is
inevitable that men will have different passions, interests, and opinions,'and if
t?ey are left free to follow their passions, interests, and opinions, then they
will come to oppose each other. The larger and the more diverse the nation
becomes, the more will human nature tend to break up groups with similar
interests, passions, and opinions.
By a kind of political judo, the forces of
human nature and of faction are used against each other.
We become so
individualistic a~d so diverse that we do not have the political power, i.e., the
votes, to accomplish anything by ourselves and are forced to get along with each
other and respect each other in order to accomplish anything at all.
THE LIMITS OF MADISON'S STRATEGY
It seems clear that Madison's strategy for controlling faction is not
appropriate for every time and place. Some nations are simply too small; others,
too culturally or religiously or economically homogeneous. In America, however,
the limits are of a different and almost opposite kind. The dangers come from
being too diverse and trusting too much in human selfishness.
What I mean is that communities and peoples are defined by something shared.
In Federalist 1, John Jay notes some of the things which the American people
shared at the time, and by and large, still share. We are, he says, "one united
people-:a people descended from the same ancestors, speaking the same language,
p:o~essi~g the.same religion, attached to the same principles of government, very
similar in their manners and customs ••• " Political communities, as distinguished
from other kinds of communities, such as business corporations and markets are
defined by such shared characteristics as the ones Jay listed.
In partic~lar,
they are defined by shared notions of right and wrong, of the just and the
unjust. Madison's strategy, I believe, depends as much on this sharing as upon
the diversity and pluralism for which he is famous.
At the beginning of this essay I noted that Americans possess a common creed--a
political religion. That creed means that certain truths are considered to be
self-evident to us and that we are shocked when others do not accept those truths
as being self-evident. We tolerate dissent and more diversity than any nation
bas ever had before because we believe that all men have an equal right to use
their faculties as best they can.
The self-evident truths of the Declaration of
Independence are the fundamental shared characteristics of the American polity.
They are the truths which make us different from other peoples because they are
the truths which we hold in common.
In Madison's Not';s of the Debates of the Federal Convention of 1787, Madison
observes that "the states were divided into different interests ••• the most
material of which resulted ••• principally from the effect of having or not having
slaves." In all fairness to Madison, it has to be said that he and many others
hoped that this great division of the nation would disappear as the industry of
the South became more diversified and the need for slave labor disappeared. But
Madison's hope was unfounded.
Far from disappearing, slavery became the
"peculiar institution" of the South. It was institutionalized because it was too
profitable to give. up.
Slavery could not be eradicated by obeying the greed of human nature. Far from
it, slavery almost eradicated the Union which the Federalist was written to
preserve.
The house divided could not stand.
The division of the Union,
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preserve the Union from civil war.
Economic, religious,
cultural,
and
geographical
diversity are different from disagreement about
fundamental
principles. The disagreement ~bout whether all men are creat~d.e~ual undermin~d
the possibility that all Americans could be free, and the divisiveness of this
issue did split the nation into warring camps Our house· must be divided in order
to stand, but if the people do not agree about the meaning of our founding
principles, the house cannot stand. Those principles.are meant to be obvious to
all rational men, but, as Madison well knew, the passions often prevent men from
being rational.
To prevent the irrational from gaining complete control of our
politics, the nation therefore requires something more than Madison's reliance on
competing elements of human selfishness. Constitutions are written as much in a
people's character as on the documents and social structures they treasure, and
Madison's strategy therefore requires fundamental agreement about the principles
of the nation, and men to write those princples in our ~ouls. It requires
political religion in order to avoid the religious fanatism which so often occurs
when men disagree about fundamental principles.
In recognizing the limits of Madisonts strategy, we see that it is very
contingent on the character of our people. We begin to grasp the thought of
Lincoln together with the thought of Madison, and see that our political jazz,
the chaotic sound of our politics, presupposes essential harmony about the
purpose of the republic.

1. Democracy in America, 2 vols, Phillips Bradley, ed.
1980), I, PP• 249.

(Alfred A.

Knopf,

Inc.,

2. All quotations from the Federalist will be from the 1980 National Home Library
Edition, and unless otherwise noted, from Federalist l:Q.

3. The Peloponnesian War, III, 81; Crawley
York, 1951).

translation, (Random House, Inc., New

4. Ibid, III, 82
5. I owe the truckers example and the quotation from Engels to Martin Diamond's
Founding of the Democratic Republic, (Peacock Publishers, Inc., Itasca, Illinois,
1981).
6. Federalist 11..

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�Character and Liberal Education
Eva Brann

Thinking about the conjunction of the terms "character" and "liberal education" .
b:ings to mind the beginning of that great Greek work which deals most directly
with t h~ relation of human vi~tue to learning: Plato's dialogue Meno. Meno the
The~s~llan abruptly accosts Socrates in Athens with a demand : "Are you in a
pos1t1~n! Socrates! to tell me whether excellence is a thing got by teaching or
by ~raining, or neither by teaching or learning but it gets into people by nature
or in some other way?" Socrates, with an irony lost on the provincial visitor
answers to this effect: You people up there used to be famous for horsemanshi;
and wealth, but ~ow your intellectual-in-residence, Gorgias, has seduced you into
the love of wisdom, so that you have magnificent answers for all questions
~hfatsoever, while we Athenians have been left behind, since not a one of us, but
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asked whether excellence is taught or gets into people some other way, would
l~ugh and say, "How can I
te 11 whether it can be taught or not when, to beg in
with, I don't even know what it is?"
I draw fro~ that opening, mutatis mutandis, the warning
first to fix my terms
when attempting to speak about character in its relation to liberal education. I
shall therefore begin by defining character, and in such a way that
unlike
Socrates~ vi:tue which turns out to be, strangely, a matter of learnin~ but not
of ~e~ching in the ordinary sense, it is eminently a matter both of teaching and
t:a1~ing. Then I shall go on to an understanding of liberal education as quite
distinct
from
character training--indeed it may
sometimes
disintegrate
character. But, of course, I shall nonetheless try to save the day for liberal
learning.
I take my lead for discovering the essential meaning of the word ';.character"
from certain overtones in its usage--not that I belong among those who think that
u1age i~ mea~ing,, but because usages often preserve implicitly an original gist
of meanl.Ilg which might have been lost in the explicit acceptation of the word; in
the case of character that first meaning serves to distinguish it from "nature "
" exce 11 ence, " " v1r t ue, " " mora l'
.
.
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ity, " " temperament," "personality," "values" and
what have you •
Let me start with a revealing extreme.
We say that someone is a character,
colloquially a
"card".
We
mean that the person displays with abandon
characteristics amounting to comic charicature.
Theophrastus,
Aristotle's
successor as bead of his school, wrote a slim volume called Characters, in which
thirty human types are characterized, each marked to absurdity by one trait· for
example the congenitally abstracted type will do an addition in his bead and, turn

Eva Brann is currently a tutor on the Annapolis campus. She delivered this
lecture at the Center for Twentieth Century Studies Middlebury College in
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to his neighbor to ask ·for the sum, annd the tactless type at dance will seize a
partner not yet as drunk as he.· Theophrastus, to · be sure, does not distinguish ·
such characters from nature--he expresses wonder that Greeks, all brought up in
the same way and under the same clime, should display such a variety of natures.
But, it seems to me, in that identification he is mistaken: it is not thirty
natures, but thirty "types", in the French sense, that he is fixing in their
recognizable and therefore comic peculiarity. For human beings are never by
nature as quintessentially comic--it is precisely on those moving occasions when
comic characters act "out of character" that their nature is revealed.
Besides "being a character" people are said to have a character, and that in
two senses: in the sense of bearing a conformation, a shape, upon themselves and
in the sense of having that form or mark publicly acknowledged, in bearing a
reputation -- a letter of reference used to be called simply "a character".
Both of these ways of speaking preserve something of the original sense of the
Greek word character. Like our word "scratch" it is onamatopoetic and means a
scratched, engraved, stamped or identifying mark, as on a coin or a seal. A
character is what we bear upon ourselves, as a brand or mark.
Therefore it
requires an underlying substance, a human material, a nature upon which it is
impressed. People "without character" are by no means without a nature; rather
their nature comes out antically, without reliably gaugeable determination, like
unminted metal.
The notion of character is, then, in its very origin figurative, since it
relies on the metaphor of an underlying substance disciplined by an impressed
shape. There are, of course, also other ways of imaging nature and its
post-natal modifications; for instance one may think of what life does to the
soul as a kind of maiming or disfigurement, as when Socrates compares it to a sea
god, dredged up from the salty depths with limbs worn off and encrusted with
barnacles. All such representation are open to criticism, I am aware, precisely
because they are anthropomorphic, and more sophisticated, less image-like, models
of individual humanity certainly exist: it may be viewed as a node in a societal
or linguistic context, as a concatenation of habits, as a system of responsive
behavior, as a mechanism for managing instincts, as
a
world-generating
existence.
For present purposes, I prefer the simple figurative model, since it makes the
fact of character training pedagogically plausible. For one thing, it offers a
resolution to the old debate of nature versus nurture. These two inseparable
aspects of human shaping appear to me to be antithetical only when we view
humanity remotely, as through the wrong end of a telescope, so that it looks
either as if it were helplessly what it was born to be or hopelessly what it was
But anyone who has ever been admitted to intimate knowledge of
made to be.
another person knows that the effort to discern the interplay of original nature
and acquired character is one of the most rewarding preoccupations of love and
friendship. Parents of very small children, too, watch with fascinaton the
original and highly individual motions and emotions of the soul which often
manifest themselves in typical gestures. In short, the bald opposition of nature
and nurture may be false but the terms themselves are right enough.
What I mean to argue is that there seems to be in every human being that which
is practically ineradicable, congenital, aboriginal, and also something else
which is imposed on that first nature as a second nature.
That first nature has been delineated in numerous · schematisms.
the first is
Socrates' scheme of the tripartite soul, composed of a desiring, a spirited and a
reasoning part; here the nature of every human being is defined by the original
preponderance of one of these parts.
Then there is the medieval theory of
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�physical humours in them: the phlegmatic, the choleric, the sanguine and the
melancholic. There is another, Pascal's division of the human disposition into
the "esprit de geometrie" and the "esprit de finesse", the mathematical and the
intuitive mode.
I will avoid deciding the deep question which of these typologies is ultimate
-- each seems to have truth in some context -- especially since I want to add one
of m~ .own. In my experience, people's most proper nature is revealed in their
prevailing sens~, not so much in the physical as the figurative meaning--whether
eye, ear, or skin, so to speak, determines the way they take in and act in the
world.
Those of the last, the surface sense, are immediate and spontaneous, sensitive
to creaturely needs but sometimes obtuse to non-immediate desires, ready
believers in magic-working patterns rather than searches for hard truths, given
to ~ream visions rather than sharp observation, indifferent
to
logical
:equirements, but .full of warm wisdom, naively candid and naively cunning,
7mpetuous.and tenacious. Those who primarily hear, move clumsily and myopically
in the wide world, stubbornly warding off wordly wisdom; they are undeflectably
moral and honest to jagged harshness--wilful Jacobeans wh~ are forever giving
battle t~ the ange~ of the ~ord. Those who primarily view, are given to panoramic
p7rspect~ves and live mor~ in scenes than with people; their long-view serenity,
t~nged with complacency, is all too vulnerable to atmospheric clouding; in their
wish for wholeness they oversee imperfections, and they prefer fittingness to
honesty, large shapely truth to detailed accuracy.
We all, I suppose, have such schemes, and the point is that most of us do
attribute an original nature at least to those we have tried to know well and
that we h~ve usually discerned also some shapes superimposed on this nature:-not
mere~y blind and breakable patterns of behavior, but also firmly fixed forms. As
I sa~d bef~re,.a larg~ part of the fascination of friendship does consist
precisely in discovering what the connatural matter is and how it takes the
imprint both of brute circumstance and of that deliberate discipline specifically
call~d character training--how sometimes nature is too craggy and recalcitrant to
receive the marks ~f such training, so that some people remain chaotically and
perhaps even c?arm1~gly unshaped, born outlaws, as it were; how in others the
~atu:al material is so soft and viscous that, like pitch, i t fails to hold an
imprint and yet fractures when struck at a certain angle; bow in a brush with
catas~rophe some characters are wiped away, sometimes to r eveal a pulpy base and
sometimes an even firmer original self; how some combinations are made for crisis
and others for daily life; how some people's character is harmonious with their
being, while others' is at chafing odds with it; and finally, how some exude the
path~s ~f a maimed nature.w~ich has been st r uck t oo hard by the die o f an un happy
upbringing so that the original blank of the coin has been fractured.
It seem~ to me further that however vivid one's image of original human nature
may be, it. c~nnot come to appearance at all except under the imprint of
cbaracter--it is through character that nature manifests itself
and without its
shaping what emerges is excessive or amorphous, weak and wild.' Second nature is
~hat appears, and first nature is discerned through it; what shows to the world
18 what the world has circumstantially or deliberately shaped.
It is the planned and deliberate shaping that the world administers to us that
I shall now particularly mean by character. Let me specify more. Character is a
m~ral shape, not.a mere pattern of behavior into which we are driven against our
will •. It sho~s in conduct, not in behavior; in willed action, not in driven
rea~t~on, though no doubt behavioral patterning, such as children's toilet
training, plays a role in shaping the most intimately personal aspects of
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Now human action is distinguished by having purpose before it and principle
behind it.
Therefore it is governed by articulated thought, by propositions.
One might say that these aspects of character can be imaged in the format of a
geometric construction problem--on one side there is a diagram containing the
lines necessary to the doing of the problem; it corresponds to the fixed form of
character revealed in facial expression and bodily bearing. Alongside this drawn
figure there runs a mathematical text enunciating the problem to be solved and
verbally carrying out the steps under the constraints of logic; it corresponds to
the articulated principles of action a person of character possesses.
Accordingly character training always has these constituents: the shaping of a
form, best accomplished by means of visible examples and models, the inculcation
of moral maxims by means of insistent ethical discourse, and some implicit or
explicit pressure of enforcement, either through the mere inconceivability of
deviating or by reward and punishment.
Parents, of course, always have and always will follow some such pattern in
bringing up their children.
Let me tell a little tale of character training
concerning a boy, Collin, the son of an acquaintance, which strikes me as
exemplary because it so clearly comprises all three elements. Collin is two and
a half, right within those terrible twos which bring the first discovery of the
will as an instrument of pure opposition and negativity. Collin is asked by his
mother for help in picking up his crayons so they can go for a walk. He won't.
"I don't like to do it," he says. His mother ins is ts, reasonably but firmly: "You
ought to help me; don't I always help you pick up?" He still doesn't like to.
So he is sent upstairs and told to close the door until he is ready to come down
and help. He goes, and the door opens a couple of times. Collin is crying hard:
"Mommy, I don't like it up here."
After a while he gets tired of futile
resistance and comes down to help pick up the room, saying with the satisfaction
of one who has surrendered to reason: "Mommy, I didn't like it up there; it's
much better when we work together, isn't it?" And he earnestly repeats that
maxim later in the afternoon. nere the conjunction of good example, reasonable
maxim and gentle coercion are perfectly exemplified.
I cannot believe that anyone doubts that parents and teachers could, if they
would, administer such training. To be sure, it becomes very difficult to teach
standards of respect and self-control, industry and style without communal
support , when the adults themselves decline to serve as moral models, when there
are no common commandments, and when scruples are voiced about all constraints,
so that nothing remains permissable but the infuriatingly evasive injunction that
"you have to decide for yourself." The causes of this disintegration have been
investigated to weariness, but I think there is some agreement that at least two
main roots are: one in historical circumstanc e , namely the demogr aphic f a ct t hat
the young have achieved numerical and economic power, and the other in the
Rousseauean theory which interprets the communal upbringing as a societal
conspiracy to repress nature and turns the very observation that human beings can
be shaped against education.
There is clearly some general agreement now that what is needed is not more
pedagogical theory but a summoning of the public will.
In fact there are
interesting new views on how and where such communal resolution can best be
expected to arise, such as Gerald Grant's contention that it is the private
schools which are at this juncture most apt to have a real public, that is to say
a constituency that knows what it wants. So the cause of character needs action
rather than analysis.
Nor was I, in any case, to speak about character and schooling but about
character and liberal education, a very different matter.
Therefore, reverting
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liberal learning.
It scarcely needs repeating that there is no current agreement about the matter
of liberal learning-- indeed, the educational community seems to be fixed on
reiterating that there can and ought to be no such agreement because that would
constitute a confining and arbitrary choice which no faculty has authority to
make.
But, oddly enough, that one feature which characterized liberal education from
its very beginning is generally and apologetically conceded to distinguish it
sti~l:-- i~s "uselessness." In speaking of the education of the young, indeed, in
defining 1t for the Western world, Aristotle says, in his Politics that though
usefu 1. arts . are indispensable for the young, they should not be t~ught ~o many
mechanical skills as to make them narrow, but they should be educated in the free
or li~eral arts; clearly, education is liberal essentially in contrast with
vocational training. Its liberality then and now is its freedom from the
constrai~ts ~f application.
It can
take
a leisurely, large, and long
perspective; it allows the mind to play over possibilitie s; it strives for no
immediate application. And that is still an element which the most diverse set
of course offerings have in common
they are largely disciplined play.
Now.that sort of education seems to me to have a most dubious and problematic
relation to character training.
To begin with, in order to profit from such an education a student must bring
to it a character already shaped. That holds in the most practical and obvious
way simply because college work, being done at the leisure and discretion of the
student, demands self-discipline just as self possession is demanded by th ~!
pressures of student life in its gamut from childish piggishness to yo\J. tbfol
splendor.
But this circumstantial need for an already-formed character is not the
essential one. That has to do with the pedagogical fact that it is next to
impossible for students to assimilate books critically, to test themselves in
engaged discussion, to close in on a complex problem, if they do not have
strongly-ingrained principles to pit against the new influences. There can be,
it seems to me, no reflective learning which does not begin in the raking-up of
well-stamped prejudices-- and that is exactly what principles held by tradition
and training are.
That great and continuous re-opening of issues is impossible
for an unshaped human being. Into an amorphous mind all notions drop with a dull
thud or messy splatter, to produce accesses both of vapo rous en t husiasm and
~haotic resistance. Students are ready for liberal learning when t heir training
in character as well as in basic skills is pretty well done -- both the
undertrained and the prematurely-liberated are
hard
to
teach.
(That
incidentally , is why the middle middle-c lass often produce ideally teachabl~
students, students docile in the best sense: well-prepared, receptive, yet
staunch.)
It follows that liberal education understood as a critical and reflective
interlude is more apt to test and perhaps disintegrate character than to form it,
a fact all too well known to teachers and parents. Freshmen who have discovered
the cudgel of dialectic can be the scourge of their surroundings-- Socrates
compares such new-born philosophers to yapping puppies. Sometimes the harm is
more serious and lasting; students begin to lose their internal -- and external
contour as their familiar faith and trust comes unravelled.
Most college
students, to be sure, have already undergone a stage of adolescent rebellion, but
that is like an exuberant tribal ritual compared to this loneliness, lostness,
and melancholy of young adulthood.
What then can liberal education do with respect to human formation? I think it
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limits and to show them ·how their upbringing jibes with their nature
how it
constrains or consummates what they are.
In a word, the achievement proper to
liberal education is self-knowledge. Aided by the study of just such schemata of
human nature as I have mentioned, by reflection on the notion of character, by
thought about principled action, students learn to shape an image of themselves
for themselves. That, rather than the acquisition of academic information seems
to me the point-- as Socrates says in the Phaedrus: "I can't as yet 'know myself'
as the description on the Delphic temple enjoins, and so long as that ignorance
remains it seems to me ridiculous to inquire into extraneous matters."
And so,
he says, he will let such learning go and make an effort to discover whether he
is like that seething, hundred-headed monster Typhon or a gentler being.
What then is the end result? It seems to me quite without guarantee.
There
will be some students who emerge from college pretentious and unstrung, fit
neither for action nor for contemplation.
But in general the influence of a
liberal arts college on character should be neither disintegrative nor even
neutral. At the least, early character training does usually reassert itself,
and most people after a period of salutary breaking away do return to the
established way of their families and grow back toward their parents as they grow
in to the world.
Secondly, most theories of moral action concur in assigning to the intellectual
virtues at least ancillary value in realizing goodness, since right action does
require that large perspective on the way things are and that versatility in the
choice of means which liberal education is supposed to engender.
And finally, there is even one understanding of liberal learning
the only
one I know of -- according to which learning, if it actually occurs, is directly
and unfailingly related to human excellence. If such excellence is a kind of
knowledge, knowledge both of oneself and of the nature of things, then a course
of reflective learning is the shaping of a good human being. That is why the
name of Socrates has figured several times in these observations -- because that
is his view. If he were right, the notion of character would be to some degree
obviated -- it would recede into the background as a facilitating form, somewhat
higher in standing but not different in kind from those good habits, like washing
one's hands, which surrender to a fixed rite necessities of civilization not
worth keeping in mind, while our conscious deed would issue quite immediately
from having thought about and from knowing -- subject to continual correction -who we are and what we are doing, that is to say, from a kind of thoughtful
sanity.
So let me set out for you what are the presuppositions and consequences of this
strange Socratic doctrine , that "excellence is knowledge" -- you may have heard
the formula. Since most knowledge, at least most knowledge of the kind spoken of
in colleges, is connected with learning, it is at least likely that Socrates'
saying connects some sort of goodness with education. Now what kind of goodness
is this excellence?
The word has at best an antique, at worst a somewhat discriminatory ring. Two
decades ago a liberal arts college like your own would usually claim in its
catalogue to strive for excellence, but now the word has often been censored.
Not that the word "character" is much in vogue -- but it is probably felt to be
more quaint than offensive. The reason is, I think, precisely in the fact that
character, as a mold, is in its very description common and democratic, while
excellence seems to be distinctive and uncommon. And what is more, character can
be associated with common . decency, while excellence might well seem to go with
all sorts of brilliant immorality.
What · Socrates means by excellence is indeed not decency or honesty or sympathy
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or kindness. The Greek word -- you may have heard it before -- is arete. Some
people connect the .!!.. root with the name of the god Ares -- Mars. The word
expresses pot~ncy, the ability to be
effectively to be -- a certain way. It
does not particularly carry the notion of surpassing others which is in the Latin
word ~cell~nce, but there is a sense that it is not particularly part of common
humanity, either, to be very powerfully what it was meant to be.
Excellence, then, as an antique term -- and of course, it is not in the least
for so-called historical reasons that I am recalling it but because it seems to
me a valuable notion -- excellence, then, is potency, effectiveness. That means
that there are as many excellences as there are contexts for being what one is.
For example, excellence with respect to fearful stituations is called courage
and with respect to what is one's own it is called justice. Socrates thinks tha~
all such situ~tions. can be collected under four main headings; these are the
so-called cardinal virtues-- but that is not so important at the moment.
Now what has this potency with respect to one's own being in certain situations
got to do with liberal learning?
If anything is meant by such learning it must be, it seems to me, this: the
liberally educated human being can articulate reasons, give causes, spell out
why~s~ wherefore's, and how's. I doubt you will find my saying that wildly
exciting. It has the sort of insipid obviousness that a truth much battered
about but never quite exterminable does have.
Three or four student generations
before yours it was aggressively and even brutally denied, in an attempt to
regain a lost
paradise
of primitive, inarticulate, spontaneous, playful
imme~i~c~. Now it is again. tolerated, but without any commonly-acknowledged
specificity. For as I mentioned earlier, the only commonly recognized mark of a
liberal education is the negative one of non-specificity and uselessness. And
while t~at notion is nostalgically tolerated as an ideal it is also practically
set aside as luxury. So reduced to a pulp first by the aggressiveness of its
enemies and then by the insecurity of its friends the terms will scarcely cause
anyone's heart to miss a beat.
And yet it ought to. If there is one realization which proves itself over and
over it is this: that the human being is an animal, that is that physical
organism, which cannot find its fulfilment in mere functioning or even in mere
consciousness, but which needs
needs - to come to terms with itself to be
self-conscious, to be clear and truthful about itself. There is always so~ething
moving and pitiable about watching the laborious, awkward, helpless efforts of
older people who are without that learning which makes such self-consciousness
shapely and adequate.
For there is such learning and it is useless and
unspecific only because it is as the root of all usefulness and at the foundation
of all specialization . I will tell you very few , terse terms wha t I think it is
but I am most willing to explain myself after this lecture.
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Such learning is made possible by and begins with the blessed fact that there
are those in.this world who think deeply and write down what they have thought,
and that their books are known and available. I shall be glad to tell you later
who I think they are and why I think so.
Liberal education begins with, -- and I might even argue
consists of , the
devoted study of such texts. By devoted study I mean first of all this: that one
studies the text with the ardent hope, but by no means
the
sanguine
presupposition that it might tell the truth-- in other words, real study in the
approach to remarkable writings in a spirit of wary expectation.
The only
preparation necessary for this advanced sort of learning is literacy.
When I insist that liberal study begins and ends with the best of texts, the
so-called tradition, I might sound as if I thought the subject matter was of no
account. But that is just what I do not mean-- it is one of the functions of the

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inescapability of its falling short, when heard in the chord, engenders a tension
that is rendered a 11 the more satisfying wr1en ans·wered by a chord that fills two
conditions. The first condition is that the fundamental base of the second chord
imply by potential division of the string every tone of the seventh chord, but
Dot vice versa; that is, that the string of thte dominant tone and its division
is only a part of the string of the tonic tone and its division.
The second
condition, and this is also the second quasi-assumption, is that the voice motion
from the first to the second chord of the cadence be stepwise, as is natural for
melody.
Once. this has been granted, music has a principle in the theory of
hC'lrr:wny by v1Hch four- o : even five-part pieces may be written,
as every two
successiv~
~h~rds
~ilJ reflect
either more or less strongly the paradigm
c r-: J e·iF ':.
.
T.::1 fa(t a good deal of the interest that rnusic has for a listener stemR
r ,.ci m C:' P "c:~:atiC&gt; n s
." ':tt1t:"r
confirmed or denied as a result of the cade[lce.
•..._ 1 tf; f n·1\ r;- ~· he ca .::'. , , ::&lt;· c•mf irms the argument of using the harmonic proportion as
· \! i d '-.'
1h0 d ; ·, t ~ ·o i. c =- ~· der because in
the cadence is every tone of the
t- ::· : ·
c Er S &lt;-' ' ·i P 011':., which can certainly be thought to be in1
plied. From
, ,',/ E I , a s c&lt;.1dc·n c('l indicates in
the fundamental base of the second chord
~i-i ~
no t ion of key is born . In fact it is difficult to discuss key or
·1:-·' •
r:: in
the beginning of this paper, without also discussing
, ;·1('.-n · ·
d - ;_ ~ i. 0 ::1 to what harmony
has already clarified about music, also in
: 11t.·
&lt;.t,
T:"c'l :i cin of the cadence the notion of dynamic values is born, on
;·:,"C r:' i l fil"
.' ·:t:3 J · ., , ;.ind ninor dissonances .
.
Tl-: ·i s ~ ·:-; &lt;'&lt;&gt; t . .. , ;_
i1p theory of harmony has a significance in explaining even
r~ (·:od y s
itr· 0 yT.: . : r..:
values for Zucket'kandl are a kind of explanation of
11 : :·, · .i y.
MeJcdy Le·· · l':t is essentially different than harmony, with few clear
, , ;:;ndards to su1d2
it :~ production.
Rameau says, "giving definite rules for its
H f '" is almost impossible, since good taste plays
a greater part in this than
A J'..hing
e lsP.
We shall leave
to
privileged geniuses the pleasure of
c1i, · inguj sl-:ing themselves in this domain on which depends almost all the strength
•&gt; r sentiment."
Up to this point an argument has been followed where as little as possible has
bH'n assumed in an attempt to fulfill the stated principle: to mathematize the
emoti ons and affections, the beings of the soul. However this is not to say that
a lot has not been assumed.
If music, or the study of it, is truly a
mathematization of the beings of the soul, then it is not difficult to see why it
~K cn 11i E'S obr,cure, as first
principles of the soul are understandably hard to
;»:. :·m t n •_, ,,
Nc
n
is it difficult to exp1ain why music might be thought to be so
Cl osely re 1ated to th soul. Boettius says, "there can be no doubt that the
unity of cur body sn&lt;l soul seems to be somehow determined by the same proportions
that joir: togE&gt;ther ;rnd unite the h.nmonious inflections of music . " In support of
this hE' supplies several striking exan1ples of music's effect on the mood,
actions, and well-being of listeners and one can easily augment the list with
examp1es from personal experience • .
OnE~ n:ight say that the point at which music
becomes unexplainable by strict
rati ona l method, therein lies the mystery of the soul's sympathy with it and
consequently the mystery of the soul itself.
H~re
music seems to leave the
quadrivium and become a thing; explainable only in tE·rms of itself. Music has now
become something like metaphysics and something like psychology.
Specifically, some of the respects in which music is unexplainable are 1) what
is the special nature of harmonic division and why is it not continued beyond the
interval of the third in the forruation of the diatonic scale?
2) what makes a
cadence indicate the tonic note so strongly? Although it is by examination of
the relationship between melody and harmony that some of these questions are
answered, the answers remain, at best, likely stories. Furthermore, since one
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�begins to see that melody and harmony, two different disciplines, both approach
one single nature, the question is what is the nature that they approach?
There are many different styles of music that are diatonic; there are types of
music that are not diatonic also. Harmony and melody can be said to mirror
images of the same thing.
Even more fundamental, there are many different
species of
intervals
and possible tunings for a scale.
No tuning is
mathematically perfect, yet each is equally valid in its own musical context.
What it is that the ear hears the same in different fifths or in melody and
harmony or even in diatonic and non-diatonic music alike? What other than that
universally significant thing: music. There are many different kinds of earthly
music, but obviously there can be only one Music, existing both in the soul and
the world.
Because of its significance and sympathy with the soul, it follows how it is
not only a matter of speculation but also of morality, or as Rameau says of good
taste. However this is now backing off from the discussion of music as a purely
mathematical art, a member of the quadrivium. The solace from this confession of
ignorance is that since music is by nature subject to investigation by methods
that attain to knowledge, not merely speculation and wonder, for example
mathematics, the soul is also, perhaps through nothing other than the study of
music. Until it should become clearer how to formalize this study not directly
through mathematics, but in a more definite manner though, it is wise to trust
the opinions of those wise in the matters of the soul, i.e. the epitome of a man
of distinction: Socrates, and his advice on music in Books III and IV of the
Repub lie.

Three Dreams to Waking
I

I listened with all my flesh
Rigid in the small room:
A shape in the window light,
Composed of some intrusion of the moon,
Who stands by the slanted squares
Creeping on the still loom:
Waits, musing beneath a veil.
Last night she stood in the cold,
Flinging her salt like seeds
Upon the glassy ice.
Her pearly fingers stroke the pearly trees.
Inchoate mud that's bound,
Binding roots, softens, bleeds -Ineffectually.
II

Dark. I hear clanking storms in distant rooms;
Gaping wrenches weigh down my obscure hands;
The world is inside-out -- this vaultless maze
Of basement pipes swallows my whole round light

Of spacious sky -- a dry pea dropped in night.
The surge of nrud climbs heaving deep crawlways:
All is now a blind, viscuous search for plans,
Plumbing, breath-torn, this wilderness of tombs.
III

A shining map is spread upon my knees;
The sun sets there as in a mythic lake
That shifts and whispers in the golden wind -There I was found, crying beneath the trees,
In their waving dance centering the skies.
In their long shadows I push down roots,
White, into the low ground's heart; my map's wings,
Dazzling, impart their flight into my new eyes.
Pierre Gagnier

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�Martha's Conversion
Zoe Churchville

to her, just like that in a parking lot. God. Death. Faith. She had confronted
and accepted her own death. She was doing it nowi She was doing something which
almost no one was capable of doing--maybe once in a generation a person arises
who--who is chosen. "Chosen," she whispered to herself.
Martha looked around again at the sky and trees, and smiled. If you bad seen
that smile, if you had seen her joyous, serene expression as she leaned against
the car with her arms folded and gazed up at the sky, you would have thought that
she was a very attractive woman, that she must have been a beautiful, happy
girl.

When Martha Northe was forty-one years old she was told that she had multiple
sclerosis. She had a peculiar reaction to this news, a reaction that was
surprising even to her. But there it was, there was no denying it: Martha was
relieved.
And the relief she felt was so unexpected, so liberating and, as it
seemed to her, complete, that it produced a great change in Martha's character
and way of life.
The change began right in the doctor's office. Martha sat quietly looking into
her lap while Dr. Emir finished his diagnosis and went on to describe the course
which she could expect her illness to take. Martha strained to listen to him.
but she could hardly make out one word from another. This made her very uneasy,
even though she was not trying, at that point, to understand anything. No, all
she wanted was to feel certain that she could control herself. A cold, rapturous
sensation was coursing so violently through her body that she was afraid she
might utter some sound. Her bands were jerking in her lap. She couldn ' t look at
the doctor, couldn't even raise her head. She bit her lower lip to keep from
smiling.
"Now I know what is wrong with me." she repeated fervently to herself.
"Are you a 11 right, Mrs. Nor the?" Dr. Emir asked gently.
Martha glanced up at him and immediately dropped her eyes again. "He's so
dark," ·she said to herself, not knowing what to think and conscious only of a
terrible sense of embarrassment that she had to be with another person at this
moment.
"Yes," she said in a hollow voice. "Yes, I am."
"Well, how do you feel about all this?" he asked, and Martha almost said "All
what?" She looked at the wall opposite and cast about in her mind for some
thought, any thought, which would bring her back to her senses.
Doctors, she
thought with an effort, aren't so bad. They can be compassionate. Suddenly she
stood up and extended her hand to Dr. Emir. Her mouth was so twisted that he
looked concerned.
"We 11, doctor, thank you for everything," Martha said in a feeble voice. "I
just--! just need some time to think things over."
Dr. Emir looked more cheerfu 1.
"Of course you do, my dear. These things•" he
waved his hand a little," these things take time to accept."
"Yes," Martha said, and added caustically to herself. "We'll see what - can
I
accept."
Once outside, Martha shuddered involuntarily several times. She looked at the
sky and at a few distant trees as she walked through the parking lot. "Nature,"
ahe thought, and stood stock still beside her car. An urgent need to articulate
something to herself was holding her there .
"What is it?" Martha asked. "What has happened?" She put her hands to her
head. "Accept. To accept. That's it.
Acceptance. But what--exactly--have I
accepted?"
Then it came to her, as coldly and vividly as that feeling which had overtaken
her in Dr. Emir's office.
She knew that she had understood something, faced
something, but it had to have a name. Maybe even a few names. And they all came

That curious feeling of relief lasted for more than a year. And it was not
just a feeling. Its effect was so overpowering that some. might say it was.the
cause of a gigantic breakdown or collapse of Martha 1 s will.
Every once in a
while Martha herself wondered whether this could be true. Later on. however, she
came to realize that that year had been necessary for the development of her
faith. Of course everything bad changed that day at Dr. Emir's. Her life had
been divided in two and there was no going back. There could be no doubt about
that. But she had still needed a block of time in order to understand what ~ad
happened to her and to figure out or discern, as some say, what she was being
called upon to do. "It takes time," Martha thought with satisfaction when that
year was over, "and it takes patience to ~nder~tand the wil~ of God. You can't
just leap into things.
You have to wait.
You have to 11e on your bed and be
still.' Transformation takes time."
So Martha spent a year doing very little and, for the first time in her life,
she didn't worry about how much she did or what she did. The world was simply a
harmless, pretty place which she felt that she understood. When she woke up.she
would stand by her bedroom window and stare out at the backyard for a long time.
The clump of birch trees, some little brown birds hopping about, the tool shed,
Mrs. Adelle shaking her nasty green kitchen rug over Martha's azaleas; every
object, every spectacle pleased Martha's senses. Nothing bothered her.
Ma:tha
realized this, of course, and she was positive it meant that she loved all things
with a proper sense of detachment. If it was warm and rainy for days on end, she
was indifferent.
If she chanced to notice that her husband and children had
grown very quiet, even sullen, and studiously avoided catching her eye, Martha
would merely consider these facts for a moment, like the sight of a bird or a
tree and, smiling to herself, reflect upon how the world had less and less of a
claim on her with each passing day.
Oddly enough, Martha almost never thought about her illnes~ or her ~eath during
that first year (unless you were to count those sweet, tragic fantasies she used
to have about growing pale and emaciated and always wearing black dresses). She
would have admitted to this herself. "No," she would have said, "I do my best
not to dwell on it. But I carry it with me everywhere."
Nor did she think about her faith very much, although she would ask Clifford or
the children about the gospel reading when they got back from Sunday services.
She flipped through the Bible at times, but she knew that she was still too tired
for any kind of study. Martha did not, however, permit her fatigue to get her
down
She made a consistent effort to keep her spirits up and her thought clear:
•
•
•
she bought a lot of expensive nightgowns, read hundreds of ladies I magazines,
watched television, and ate to her heart's content.
She felt herself to be
detached enough for these few indulgences.
When she did think, she would reconsider her whole life in the light of that
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�something to all of that twitching and dizziness. She had a disease which
everyone knows is terrible, debilitating, and fatal. She was going to die. Not
now, but eventually. Propped against half a dozen pillows, wearing a wrinkled
blue satin bedjacket and eating chocolate after chocolate, Martha could spend
hours musing over how her past life had been justified.
She had suffered from twitches, dizziness, and a tendency to hyperventilate
ever since she was nineteen. No one ever knew what it was, but everyone had his
theory. It was the pressures of going to college, of getting a job, of having a
family. · Or it was an oversensitivity to life, or some disposition she had to
worry excessively. Martha herself had never really believed that it was just a
bad case of nerves. For a while she had thought that she had a brain tumor, but
then she had noticed that all of the symptoms went away after her engagement to
Clifford. They had returned, however, with a frightening intensity soon after
they had gotten married, and they had never gone away again until Dr . Emir's
diagnosis. (Strange that those symptoms did go away then for a year or more.
But she was sure that this could safely be attributed to a new phase of her
illness.)
Those had been awful years, Martha would think with a shudder.
Just awful.
Especially after she and Clifford had gotten married. She remembered it as one
long day of pitiful, frantic attempts to be useful. She pictured herself as she
had been for the last twenty years and almost every scene was of a small, anxious
woman struggling to appear competent, self-assured, and full of purpose. And the
struggle had gone on from morning until night. Why, the very way she used to
jump out of bed in the morning, the way she would put on her make-up as quickly
and as firmly as possible, the way she would bustle with the children or charge
through the grocery store; everything that Martha could remember of her old life
revealed one desperate attempt after another to prove that she was someb ody who
could do something. And those projects and resolutions! The courses in French,
wine-tasting, photography; the lists and vows!
Martha often winced at these memories. Yes, it was gratifying to be able to
recast her life-- and not just her life, but her opinion of herself--in a better,
a truer light. But there was still an unpleasant, almost bitter edge to her
memories. If only she had known then what she knew now! If only she could
explain those years to everyone. Sometimes these thoughts got the better of
Martha and she would involuntarily moan aloud, or kick the blanket off the bed.
One day, however, it occurred to her that perhaps she had known all along what
In a subconscious way, of course, but didn't subconscious
was in store for her.
things mean a lot?
A stray recollection brought this idea to mind. For some reason, Martha
t hought of how she bad a lwa ys had to lie down on t he so f a in t he ea r ly
afternoons. That had been the time of day when she would feel so shattered that
she no longer cared what happened to her. She would lie there for an hour or so,
her arms folded across her chest, and try not to think or feel anything.
But
then she had to get up and do something before Joseph and Lizzie came home from
school. She would always feel most desperate just before they walked in the
house, and she would sit down to read or study in a state that was very close to
hysteria. Sometimes she would. get the Bible, kneel down in the middle of the
living room floor and, with her right hand on the Bible, she would swear that she
was going to make something of her life.
Have a purpose that would surprise
everyone. But it had never worked. While she was still down on her knees her
resolution would crumble into that old, anxious question: how could a person
acquire a sense of purpose which would not go away?
Martha went over this scene with great care. Everything fit together now. The
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her life Martha was able to pity herself freely (or all of those wasted, tortured
days. She had been sick. It was as simple as that. Why, Dr. Emir had even told ·
her that she might have had multiple sclerosis for a long time and not have known
it, since she was young and probably quick to dismiss bodily disorders. That was
it, that was it.
She had been young, she thought, crying and eating a chocolate
at the same time. She hadn't understood. Her fate, her vocation, it had been
there all along. It was hard to believe. Not only was she facing something now
which very few people had the courage to face, but she had been facing it for
years in some mysterious, biological way.
For a while this realization set Martha's mind completely at rest.
But after
that first year of her illness had gone by she became very uneasy.
The signs
were unmistakable. She lost interest in staring at things.
She felt fat and
restless.
At night, she began to wonder what Clifford and the kids were doing

downstairs,

and

she made

frequent

requests for cookies and juice.

She

was

irritated to find that whenever Joseph or Lizzie came in with her tray (Clifford
never came up until it was time to go to bed), they would answer her questions in
an extremely morose and perfunctory way.
"Where did you get that dress?" Martha would ask Lizzie. Lizzie w~s fourteen.
"I bought it."
"How I wish I could go shopping with you darling."
Silence. Lizzie would actually stand there and say nothing.
"Didn't that girl Claudia- -didn't her aunt have M.S.?"
"I don't remember. I think I'll just take these dishes away for you, Mot her."
Martha wonder~d.
They were rude, out and out rude. "What was the matter?"
Row could they not care about her at a time like this? How could she feel
anxious again?
Then, late one night, it came to her.
Clifford walked into their bedroom
looking down at his shoes, the carpet, his pants' leg--there was no telling. He
undressed very methodically, hung up his clothes, and turned out the light
without saying a word.
Martha could tell that he was angry, but she didn't
care. She was angry herself.
And then all of a sudden, as suddenly as she had
understood everything in Dr. Emir's parking let, Martha knew what it was. No one
believed her! That was it! They didn't really believe that she was sick.
The shock and pain of such a realization brought tears to her eyes.
Then a
profound sensation of tranquillity and warmth flooded through her. She was
entering into a new level of acceptance.
She would have to face . everything
alone; she was going to die and no one believed it. For a moment it was all that
Martha could do not to switch on the light and confront Clifford with this ugly
truth. If only he knew that she knew. But no, she would wait. She would find
some ot he r , una r guable way of showing t hem what was wrong with her and of --Martha
tried to think of what she wanted to show them. "Not show them," she corrected
herself. "I want to teach them what my illness means."
The next morning Martha got 'up right after Clifford and the children left.
First, she read a few Psalms. Then she made appointments to see Dr. Emir and
another neurologist who had been recommended to her.
She spent a long time
getting dressed because almost none of her clothes fit. But at last she found
something, an old blue maternity dress, and set off for the library. She spent
t he whole da y por ing ove r medica l books and artic l es on multiple sc l eros i s. She
took notes on everything and dutifully looked up all of the technical words in a
med ica l dic t ionary . She even photocopied an article by some woman from Missouri
who, she supposed, had already succumbed to M.s. "One of the most painfu 1 things
about MS," the woman had written, "is that the symptoms are neither omnipresent
nor easily distinguishable ." Martha was so happy and absorbed that she didn't
even look at her watch until it was a fter six o'clock.

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�"Oh, Lord," she thought, laughing a bit.
"Now THIS is s good beginning. I
can't very well convince them of the gravity of my situation if I get home after
they do."
When Martha walked into the dining room, Clifford smiled at her and stood up to ·
help her off with her coat.
"You must be feeling better," he said softly.
Martha looked at him and then at Lizzie and Joseph.
"No. No, I don't. I need to sit down."
Clifford went back to his seat.
"The truth is--I feel much worse·."
Martha said in a solemn, businesslike
tone. "Lizzie. Joseph. Why don't you go upstairs? I want to have a talk with
your father."
The children darted out of the room as Martha slowly and painstakingly sat down
at the opposite end of the table from Clifford .
"Clifford, I want to dis cuss some very serious things with you."
Clifford nodded.
"I wish that you would look at me."
He raised hie head and looked directly at her. Martha noticed, but only for an
instant, how cold and blue his eyes were.
And his face--his cheeks--were
extremely flushed. Almost purple.
"If the truth were known, Clifford, I am very, very ill. M.S. i.s a strange
disease, you know.
It takes time for it to do its work, so to speak. You see,
it comes in waves. Sometimes the patient feels fine for long periods, that's
called remission.
Then, all of a sudden, the patient enters into a painful,
degenerative period." Here Martha took a deep breath and looked pointedly at her
husband.
"I am now entering into one of those degenerative periods," she went on. "I'm
sure I'll have times when I'll feel better, but right now I am a very sick
woman. I don't know what to say to you, Clifford. This could go on for years."
The expression in Clifford's eyes sharpened even more.
"I don't want to be a burden to you--"
·
''You are not a burden to me," he said harshly and looked down into his lap.
Martha smiled at him. He is a good husband, she thought to herself.
"The Lord," she said with an air of resignation, "The Lord works in mysterious
w.ays. But we have to trust--"
"What can I do for you?" Clifford interrupted in a low, restrained voice.
"I- think we should install an elevator," Martha said promptly. Not an ELEVATOR
elevator. Just one of those electric chairs that you attach to the bannister.
I've been having trouble getting up and down the stairs. And I need one of those
walkers. You know. Those silver walkers that old people use."
There was a short silence.
"Can we afford this, Clifford?"
"Yes."
"Well, in that case, I really think we need a live-in maid, too. Can we afford
that? Good. A live-in maid would be a great help.
A big weight off my
shoulders."
Clifford stood up and pushed in his chair. Martha was a little startled, but
she managed to say, "Thank you, Cliff."
He nodded and looked at her once more before leaving the room. She could never
tell with him. His eyes had been perfectly blank just now.
"Well," Martha
thought as she limped over to the stairs, "at least he looked at me. Strange,
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The electric chair was installed and Martha got not one but two walkers. The
maid was finally hired after three full weeks of interviews and telephone calls
to double check on recommendations.
(Martha was amazed at how many of those
women lied.)
The maid's name was Jane. She was a nice, neat, respectful
Scotswoman of fifty or more. She kept to herself, finished all of the cleaning
early in the day, and never once objected to cooking dinner--even though she had
not been hired to do so. As soon as she felt sure of Jane, Martha forgot about
the household and settled down to her studies in earnest.
She began to go out more, especially after she had mastered the art of inching
along with her walker. Normally, she would spend a couple of hours each day in
the library, pursuing her medical researches and writing a little diary of her
illness. (Martha thought it might help someone else after everything was over
for her. And she was determined that her family should have a record of what she
wa s going through. They were so stiff when she tried to talk to them; she didn't
want to push it. But they had to know the truth some day.) The remainder of her
day was divided between visits to masseuses, chiropractors, health spas with
whirlpool baths, snd neurologists.
Everyone else acknowledged that Martha was seriously ill, and this had a
softening, inspiring influence on her.
She joined a weekly Bible class at her
. local church, which she liked to think of as her "stronghold." Martha would
always, somehow, manage to come in the room a little later than the others, and
all of the ladies would beam at her as she inched in. After the class was over,
someone would invariably press her hand and say, "You are one courageous woman,
my dear," or:
"I just want to te 11 you, Mre. No rt he, that you are an ex amp le, a rea 1 1 ight
for the rest of us. Row many people just sit at home and do nothing and complain
about how life has no meaning? It makes me so mad. if they could only see you,
honey, getting up every day of your life and doing what you can, in spite of
everything. It's true, you know. God helps those who help themselves."
Martha particularly enjoyed it when she was asked to read aloud in class. She
knew that every eye was on her; she even thought that some people shivered a
little when she spoke. When she finished, she would smile timidly and stare into
her lap for a long time.
Martha's life went on like this for seven years. She would be the first to
tell you that she had never been happier.
In fact, she had a little speech
worked up which she liked to deliver to anyone who asked about her illness.
"I know my place in life," she would say. "The most important thing a person
can do is to believe in God and to acknowledge his own mortality. Then
everythin.g becomes different. Not just for you, but for everyone who meets you.
Of cou r se this is also one of the hardest things to do--probably THE hardest."
At this point, a faraway express ion would come into her eyes. "But I try," she
would say slowly. "I do my best."
During that time, Martha had resigned herself to the fact that her family did
not want to understand her. Why, Clifford and the children were almost
unrecognizable.
She hardly knew them anymore. Of course, everyone said that
Lizzie and Joseph were at the age when kids don't care about anything.
And
Clifford had always been a preoccupied person. But Martha knew that something
had changed as a result of her illness.
The kids were never home. Clifford
slept in the spare room now, and, from what Martha could tell, he drank a lot.
His face had grown quite purple from drinking. She would probably never know
whether they believed in her illness, especially Clifford, but she had long ago
decided that this was just another trial for her to bear.

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�Eight and a half years after Martha's momentous visit witb Dr. Emir, her son
Joseph was killed in a car accident.
The maid told her. Clifford and Lizzie
wouldn't come upstairs.
it was raining heavily that night. Martha lay on the bed for a long while.
Then she got up and went over to the window. She had never seen it so dark out.
She could just barely make out the tool shed. What else was out there? Where
was the moon? she wondered, and everywhere she looked, everything that occurred
to her, was accompanied by the sound of Joseph, Joseph, Joseph. Her chest hurt.
She stood by the window for more than an hour. Then she put on a bathrobe and
walked, unaided, to the head of the stairs. Without thinking (it bad been over
seven years), Martha sat down in her chair and rode down the stairs. When she
walked into the living room she found Clifford alone, lying on the sofa with his
arm bent over his face. He heard her footstep and stood up.
"Clifford."
Clifford's face was very flushed. He gave her a curious, crooked smile before
he spoke.
"You are not going to the funeral," he said.
Martha stared at him.
Later that night she realized that she had understood
exactly what he had meant at that moment.
"Oh not It's okay, Clifford, it's okay. I can manage it--I must--"
"I don't ¢are what you can manage," he said, and went back to the sofa.
"What on earth do you mean?"
"What do I MEAN? What do I mean"? Oh, sweetheart. Do you think I would try to
explain anything to you?" He jumped up from the sofa again. "I won't have you
there I If YOU go, I won't go--"
· Martha started to cry. Her chest hurt so much--her throat--she could hardly
swallow.
"He' a my son," she said hoarsely.
''Don't talk about him.
I don't want to hear you mention his name. Don't come
near me, Martha."
"Clifford," she begged.
Clifford started to pace around the living room. "Okay, okay. I' 11 te 11 yoY '
tbia much." . He stopped and looked at her.
His eyes were narrowed ~~
bloodshot.
"You," he said carefully, "have ruined everything." Martha was silent.
"You've ruined everything," he repeated.
"Clifford ., please--! HAVE been sick.
I couldn't help it. I AM sick. I am
really, really sick."
"I don't care if you're sick or not," he said very quietly.
Martha began to shake . She felt as though something, she didn't know what,
were coming apart inside of her.
"Clifford, I'm sorry. I've tried. I didn't know what I · was doing, I--"
"And you are not brave!" he roared. "Do you hear that? You are NOT brave!"
"What do you mean? Tell me what you mean!
What made you think of that?"
Martha was suddenly overcome with panic.
Clifford smiled at her again, but bis mouth was trembling.
"I know about you, Martha. And I know what you all do at his funeral. Jesus,"
he turned his bead away. Tears ran down his face and into his mouth.
"Jesus
God, you won't even let someone e lee die! You' 11 hog it.
I--" he stopped and
shook his head violently in an effort to control himself. "I don't know anything
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You haven't been anywhere near Him, Martha."
"Is there one thing that made you say this? It is Joseph? I know, I know--"
"That's it, Martha. I'm through talking to you. But you' re not going to his
funera 1. Joey wouldn't have wanted it himse 1f."
When Martha sank into a chair and cried, Clifford left the room. Martha sat
there the whole night, crying and looking at the furniture.
For the most part,
she did not think about what her husband had said. She couldn't.
She kept
thinking of Joseph and of how black and frightening all of this rain was. What
happened? she said over and over to herself. What has happened? She was un~ble
to picture anything but herself going to the doctors, herself at a meeting,
herself lying in bed. She couldn 1 t remember the last time that she had talked to
Joseph. He was away so much.
Why was he away so much? He was only twenty-one.
Was that right? She was almost thirty years old when he was born. My son, she
thought.
My little son. How could a person live for fifty years without ever
having acted purely, without ever having been free from the desire to be
noticed? How could she have been so mistaken? What was the point of it--making
so many terrible errors? Why had that been allowed to happen?
Martha did not go to her son's funeral. She made no fuss about it.
Lizzie
told everyone that she was too ill to go. Martha sat at home during the service
and tried to read some of the book of Psalms. ~ut she closed the Bible after only
a few min.utes. She had no concentration. She couldn't think.

Sonnet
Ste ph en MtJrsf'

o l d s ak , fad e d J i k e a ri o d sock , rock s
And wait. s beside the open 1A ind ow. Breeze
Enters softly, sliding through his locks
Of white hair, bright thE:'re in thE.· sunlight, pleased
To be so near. Isak knows t.ht• su11
Knows to go down now, k ri l~~·s t }1p moon wt.tits, st i l l,
Patiently for the ictervention ·
(Wren in nest, o1d n1an e1t I(' St) of his will.
Waits like a cellist waits and \Vatches
(One stroke in a tlrnusand) for Hs cue,

Like a suitor for his lady's time
Old Isak waits; for now and then he catches
Snatches of the harmony, a few
Clear and perfect pieces of the rhyme.

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�what I may yet do or think. I must connect myself by causes and purposes and
fears to the rest of my life, or else I will be a mere point, without so much as
location. I could not be going to or from one place or another by my own motion
because I could not hold onto either my or1g1n or my destination. If I were a
heavenly body which moved in a perfect circle perhaps then could I have a motion
and a location, but only in respect to myself.
I
would always be the same,
always be at my origin and my destination, but the circular self thus constituted
surely bears little resemblance to a human being. Aristophanes relates that the
original unsplit humans were the offspring of the sun, or the moon, and resembled
their parents in being spherical.
The comic playwright goes on to tell a tragic
story: in their arrogance, these spherical beings became a threat to the gods and
so were struck down. What might this mean?
If I were the sort of indivisible point I described, truly an unconnected
whole, I would need nothing and no one, for to be whole means to lack nothing. I
could then have no relation to the rest of things or I would thereby have become
a part of something larger. Thus these fragments, these whole beings, as selves
without others, are a gap in the fabric of things. If there is a larger whole,
they deny it, indeed, they may be said to refute it, since it will hardly be the
true whole if there are things which do not belong to it. But this denial of any
larger whole is hubris, the pride of tragedy. Oedipus the tyrant pretends to
master his own destiny, destroys the man and possesses the woman to whom he owes
his own being, and imagines he is a self-made man, who owes nothing to anyone.
And so too, says Aristophanes, will we be struck down again if we forget that we
are but parts, not wholes.
We have lost any capacity or simple circular motion;
the right reverence for the gods consists in recognizing that we cannot simply
possess, or be at one with our origins or our destinations, that we are part of a
larger whole and for that reason are set apart for a real unity with our selves.
Love becomes an admission of neediness or partiality, or a submission to a larger
order in which I am not sufficient unto myself.
Two questions arise here: Why does Plato put this story in the mouth of a comic
poet? And, why is the service of love recommended not only as a submission to
and an admission of our own partiality but also as the best cure for that
partiality? Later on I hope to say something about the first question, but right
now I will try to speak to the second.
What is the special connection of love with wholeness? Lovers ask one another
that they hold nothing back, that they have no secrets from one another; both in
Plato's time and in ours one sign of a true love is thought to be that the lovers
spend the whole of their lives together.
And sometime we hear of lovers'
suicides and may imagine that the sense of mutual surrender and entire possession
seemed so perfect to them for one moment that they could not bear the thought of
ever disagreeing or even feeling the slightest holding-back in the other or
themselves again; and that knowing such a ·fall to be inevitable if they went on
living, they preserved their imagined wholeness by dying together before their
own partiality and the thousand trivial details of living could begin to separate
them.
What is this wholeness, this possessing which is not content unless it is at
the same time a being possessed? May it not be in the same relation to our
ordinary ways of being as being at home among kin is to travelling among
strangers? When I try to know myself I find most of the time that I am broken
into pieces: I do not desire only one thing, I do not remember only one, or fear
only one, Usually I do not even know which of the many pieces of myself is the
most important at the moment. I find myself doing or thinking this or that and I
may puzzle long over the many possible reasons, good or bad, before coming to a
provisional conclusion, which I may later conclude is mistaken. The "I" that

The Tears of Odysseus
Cary Stickney

I. INTRODUCTION

About a month before I wrote this lecture I heard a Friday night lecture on the
Hippocratic Oath, and I learned that the first thing sworn to in that Oath was
reverence for one's teacher.
In one sense that might seem to say very little to
us here. We often proceed on the assumption that it is precisely by a kind of
irreverence that we learn; I mean that readiness to question and cross-examine
and perhaps to see refuted not only the serious opinions of our elders and
betters, the authors, but even sometimes, when we are generous, our own cherished
opinions and habits of thought.
That is the irreverence of which Socrates was
accused, and convicted. Nevertheless, I think our readiness to question is a way
of searching for what is truly worthy of reverence, and it is not unusual to feel
a reverence arising for the patience and affection and hope and generosity and
insight of one's partners in that search. Without them one would surely give up
too soon.
I don't think it is a bad idea to call upon the divinities to witness
and aid our resolution not to forget the depths of reverence and gratitude we owe
to those with whom we have learned. Like other debts it is all too easy to
forget, but when we do, we not only commit the crime of ingratitude against our
teachers, but we make ourselves that much less able to be moved and taught by
them or anyone else again.
Perhaps the worst of ingratitude is not an
insufficient attention to gifts already received, but rather the pretense that
further gifts are neither needed nor desired. I expect this lecture will be a
sufficient showing that further gifts are needed in my case; I want to say
beforehand, in gratitude to all here who have helped me learn by their insight,
affection, and patience, and especially to those whose patience had to be the
longest, how much their further gifts are desired.
II • PARTS Alm WHOLES

I want to speak first about parts and wholes. In the Symposium Aristophanes
tells a story of how all humans were once whole beings but have since become
split.
And now, he says, we must seek to approach our original nature in the
union of love, and meanwhile beware lest we be split again. What is this split
which love is said to heal?
I think it is connected to being what we call a
self, to having a memory and personality.
In order to know myself at all, it is not enough merely to be aware of whatever
one thing I happen to be doing or thinking at the moment. I must divide myself,
that is, I must remember what I have already done and thought and anticipate

Cary Stickney is currently a tutor on the Santa Fe campus.
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�does all this is like a wanderer among strangers. It doe~ not know precisely
where it is, but can only take the next step of an indefinite journey. It must
place a certain trust in the companions of the moment and may even come to know
some of them much better, but, like Odysseus, it must always hold something of
itself back; it must not forget the possibility of dangerous surprises. When
Odysseus falls asleep, almost within sight of his own home, his crew members, the
men he has fought next to and travelled with for four years, open the bag he has
held back from them and their ship is instantly blown far away from Ithaca by the
winds they set free. They violated the rule of travellers: do not demand from
another whatever he prefers to hold back. The best sorts of hosts the stranger
Odysseus meets in his wanderings do not even demand his name from him. They take
him in and feed him before they so much as ask, and when he is unwilling to
answer they do not press him. And so, too, must I behave to the different parts
of myself: I do not know their origins or all their possible connections with one
another and if I try to possess them utterly or to wrest from them by violence
what they will not willingly give, I may find myself, like that bad host
Polyphemus, made drunken, blinded and befooled, or like the shipmates of
Odysseus, blown off course forever. And yet, I must give those parts a place in
me or I will not know myself at all.
Our first view · of Telemachus in the Odyssey is of a boy dre aming of his father
returning to drive away the oppressive crowd of uninvited guests. Yet when
Athena appears in the guise of yet another uninvited guest, he hurries to welcome
her. Of course, he hopes to hear news of his father, and he is not altogether
disappointed in that hope, but his immediate readiness to welcome a stranger--we
are told he was indignant with himself that a guest should have to wait--this
unpremeditated hospitality springs from an innate readiness to be changed, to
become more than and different from the boy he is now. Every stranger welcomed
may change the looks of the world, may reveal origins or destinations we had not
dreamed of, which may yet become our own. This is what happens to Telemachus; he
had dreamt only of his father returning to make things right, but his welcome of
Athena leads to his own bold defiance of the suitors be fo r e t he evening ends, and
to his own voyage forth from Ithaca a day later. He calls an assembly, commands
a .crew of sailors and presents himself and his questions to Old Nestor on the
beach of Pylos. He has never done any of these things before and he w
ould not be
doing them now without Athena's help. But he would not have Athena's help had he
not welcomed her when she was a stranger at the gate . Beginning by making an
opportunity for him to discover that he can still give willingly when requested
what has come to be rudely demanded of him by others, Athena goes on to let him
give gifts he didn't even know he had. Her first visit, in the guise of Mentes,
ends with her refusa l of Te l emachus ' offer ·of a gift, " a treasure from me, such
as guest-friends give to friends." She tells' him not to hold her back from her
journey now, but to give her a very fine gift when she returns; her final words
are that there will also be something fine for him, something worthy of
exchange. She returns of course the very next day, following the assembly in
which Telemachus's request for a ship has been refused.
This time Athena is in
the guise of nentor, and her gift is a swift ship with a good crew and her own
presence among them. What is the very fine gift of Telemachus? It must be his
active trust: he bas followed he r adv i ce and done wha t she said, and when it
seemed to have led nowhere he has prayed for her help. These are gifts he could
not have given the night before .
She had left him then more confident and
mindful of his fat her t han previously , but now he has begun to do things that
have been his father's :· speaking in assembly, pl anning a voyage, relying on
Athena. These things are thus both gifts t o him and from him, and that is as it ·
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the stranger he would not have begun to take po~session of his own birthrights.
So, too, if we cannot make room . for the imperfectly known and the fragmentary in
ourselves, we may never discover our inheritance, or even very much of the way
the world looks.
Of course trust is often violated, as when Odysseus' crew,
impatient and resentful over what they imagine to be his withholding of a
treasure from them, open the sack of winds.
But perhaps Odysseus' shipmates were misled by the nearness of home, for there
can be a place where one is not among strangers, and where a demand that nothing
be held back is no violation, but a sign of love. Such a place is home, and it
is a mark of how perilously close Odysseus knows he has come to losing his home
forever that when he does at last return, he cannot permit himself, at first,
with his son, his father, or his wife, to make that demand. The twenty years he
has been gone may have made his family strangers or even enemies to him, and be
no longer feels sure of his right to expect love from them.
Athena must
intervene and tell him it is time to reveal himself to his son, and Telemachus
cannot at first believe the truth.
He saw an old man in rags, a strange
wanderer, and now he must try to see a well-dressed young nobleman, Odysseus as
he must have looked sailing off to Troy when Telemachus was a baby. Both figures
are Odysseus, yet how can they be one? How can there be anything left of the
Odysseus who had scarcely begun to be a father when he went away for twenty
years? Telemachus thinks that only the gods can accomplish such transformation.
Odysseus tells him he is no god, but his own father, and weeps as he embraces
him. When Telemachus still cannot believe it, he adds, first in tones of rebuke,
that it is unseemly for Telemachus to be so astounded at the sight of his own
father, and then says: "There certainly will not come hither yet another
Odysseus, but I, just as I am here, am be." [bode _ggQ_ toiosde] He admits that
Athena has indeed changed his appearance, but explains that it is easy for the
gods to make humans appear glorious at one time and ignoble at another. Now, at
last, Telemachus recognizes a man he has never seen before, throws his arms
around him, and begins to weep, too. There is something truly miraculous about
this scene, but it is not so much the sudden change in Odysseus' appearance as
the sudden change of two strangers into father and son.
Odysseus succeeds in
making himself one, a kind of whole, and his son succeeds in seeing it, but how?
It is very hard to unravel, but I think it has to do with the strength of the
desire, the whole - heartedness with which they long to become father and son.
Odysseus conceals nothing: as he names himself father he immediately adds, "on
account of who, you suffer, groaning, many pains, bearing the violence of men."
This is the plain truth; when Telemachus was asked in Book One if Odysseus were
his father, he replied that he was not sure of that but that he did know his
inheritance was trouble and t ears. Te l emachu s has no t given up hoping, but l ike
anyone who has been fooled by hopes before, he fears deception.
Now Odysseus
makes a demand of Telemachus, namely, that he cease to marvel over much at his
own father; the act of making the demand, of telling Telemachus that his behavior
is unseemly, speaks as loudly as the words themselves. u.r am your father and I
expect you to trust me and listen to me as someone you belong to, not as a
marvelous stranger or a god." When he says that yet another Odysseus will not
come and that he, as he is then and there, is that Odysseus who has suffered and
wandered so much and taken twenty years to reach his native land again , he does
not deny that much has happened to . change him; but he gathers all of that
together and says it is one and the same with the man who right now most of all
wants to have, demands to have, every right those twenty years might have
destroyed, to be treated by Telemachus as a loved and loving father. Sometimes,
very rarely, we are able to say all of what we mean at a given moment. Most of
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But now and then we may feel we have sai~ everything we have
to say for that moment. "I'm sorry," spoken through tears, may for an instant
say everything I know about myself, everything I am. "Thank you" under certain
circumstances may be said as though everything I am has gone into those words and
poured forth, leaved not a single undissolved grain behind.
"I love you" may
sometimes still be such a phrase, in spite of all the ways it can be
trivialized. I think that Odysseus speaks to Telemachus here in just the same
way. As he finishes speaking, he sits down, as if indeed he has said his say and
there can be not~ing to add. Had Telemachus hesitated after this, he would have
made himself a stepson and his father a stepfather. But his acceptance is as
total as his father's offer. He embraces him without another word and now both
men are weeping.
If this account has made any sense of the meeting of Odysseus and Telemachus
then it may suggest something about the wholeness found in love. That wholeness
seems to consist of a gathering-up of all the unpossessable parts of oneself in
order to give them to another. The power of that desire to belong to another and
for the other to belong to oneself, will not permit that anything be held back.
There may be no secret reservations to whisper that at some later time it may
suit me better not to belong entirely to the other, or for the other not to
belong entirely to me. Each must perform a self-unification for real love to
exist because one cannot offer oneself as a whole to what is only a part of
someone else, and still feel that one entirely belongs, and one cannot accept
such an offer with a part of oneself and still feel that one entirely possesses.
So that the only real acceptance is a full giving in return, and the strength of
desire enables a real possession of oneself only in the act of giving oneself
away. That the strength of this desire is so great as to accomplish what seems
nearly impossible may suggest that at the deepest level we so truly belong to one
another. If Telemachus wanted no more than someone who would kill the suitors
and leave him ·a large inheritance, then how could he accept and share Odysseus'
tears? He would not be one whole person, but part of him would be intent on
pleasing this useful relative, while another part looked forward to the gains to
be had, while yet another part shrugged over the spilt milk of a twenty-year
separation which made it impossible to feel close to this stranger. Instead, he
too becomes a whole in bis acceptance of his father.
Thus there seems to be a wholeness proper to a part. This kind of wholeness is
so far from needing no one and nothing, that it can only exist in the powerful
need to belong to another; the whole so constituted is not free and unconnected
but is bound is a part -- that is, if its meaning is not exhausted in
self-reference but requires a larger context, then we might say that insofar as
its reference to the larger context is concealed or overlooked, it appears as a
broken fragment, an accident.
On the other hand, if it were possible to see all
the connections of the part to the larger context of its whole, then the part
would so to speak, have become the whole. But if we could only see far enough
'
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beyond the part to recognize the possiblity of the larger whole, to begin to
trust that the part might have its own rightful place, then one might be able to
see what should be called the wholeness of the part.
This sort of unity would
not be perceived in the light of some perfectly complementary other half or of a
background with a perfectly-defined blank spot awaiting a foreground figure to
fit it, but rather in the light of a belief, perhaps an opinion, midway between
ignorance and knowledge, that a fragment is never just an ace ident but a~ways a
fragment of something larger. So, too, what we call whole-heartedness is most
often a state of wanting or trying wholeheartedly for something one does not
have.
Nobody simply is whole-hearted, without reference to an~ g~al or
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We are bound together in wholeness because we are bound for some destination.
Someone who is in no way bound, not even a~ a traveler is bound for a
destination, or someone for whom every bond, like the origin and destination of a
merely idle traveler, is ultimately a matter of indifference, that is to say,
someone who accords to any possible bond no more that a minimal hospitality or a
traveler's welcome, such a person will act not freely or spontaneously but
randomly.
Without the bonds that make up any sort of determinate self, such a
person can never be helped to become more of himself or herself as Telemachus was
helped by Athena. How can one learn from a stranger when one has no home in which
to invite her, no fire by which to warm her or see her face? Telemachus is not
so much of a boy or a dreamer as to forget he is in hie own home and that it is
his part to greet the stranger, even if the place looks more like a rented
banquet hall and the question of ownership grows daily more doubtful. However
unlikely it may seem that the place will ever belong entirely to him, he knows he
belongs to the place, and his dream had in fact been of a time when he could
belong to it even more deeply, for the return of his father would make it more of
a home than he has even known. It is just this very bond to a dreamed wholeness
that gives him a place into which he may welcome Athena. In this way Telemachus
already has the wholeness of a part, that is, he has a destinatione And, because
he has a destination, it is possible for his journey to matter. For we all
journey, but we must ask ourselves the question Nestor asks when Telemachus lands
at Pylos: "Do you sail to get somewhere, or do you wander at random like pirates,
who gamble their lives bringing trouble to others?" This is a question that
seems especially pressing in the case of Odysseus, and, indeed, it is not always
easy to tell the difference between him and a pirate. But love gives him, too,
the unity of having a destination.
Without the powerful desire to belong to another it is not possible to unite
the myriad loose ends, contrary impulses, and separate parts of the self even
briefly into one, for the wiliness of the wanderer dictates that some things must
always be held back in case of unseen dangers. No arguments can compel utter
trust as long as the possiblity of the unexpected is looming as large as it does
in our minds even as in that of Odysseus most of the time. Unless some kind of
love comes to our assistance we lead our lives as wanderers, always ready to lie
to our companions, or, worse, to discover we have lied to ourselves about
ourselves, taking every step with the reservation that we must "wait and see" how
things seem to be turning out.
Of course, it will turn out that we die, having
made of ourselves meanwhile just what Telemachus feared Odysseus had become,
someone "altogether without a fate among mortals" [apotmotatos], "invisible to
all" [aistos], worse than dead in the eyes of anyone who might have felt
connected to us. The freedom of the wanderer becomes the freedom of the ghost.
.1 use the word "freedom" because I think
we often console ourselves with the
thought of our freedom when we succumb to the temptations to believe that all
voyages are ultimately aimless. · The strongest temptation is contained in the
fact of death. Our family and friends all die; those essential parts of our
homes and our destinations become insubstantial phantoms, whom we can no longer
embrace, as Odysseus discovers with his mother in hie voyage to the land of
Death. In deed, at that moment Odysseus himself is little more than a shade as
far as his wife, father, and son are concerned. He is as far away from home as
he can be. And anyone who reflects that not only must the parts of his own home
all become phantoms someday, but that he himself may do so at any moment, is very
likely to feel that if he is ultimately a phantom he must already be one in some
way even now, and that sense of belonging anywhere in the present is part of an
illusion. But almost worse for us is when we are not despoiled of the people and
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�betrayal or apparent desertion. A constantly repeated part cf the background of
the Odyssey is the disastrous home-coming of Agamemnon, betrayed by his wife; and
the continual . temptation to Penelope and Telemachus, never mentioned by them and
only once hinted by Odysseus, must be to suspect that he does not return because
he doesn't want to.
The last temptation is contained in the passing of time.
The closest embrace must soon end, the deepest understanding must yield to future
misunderstanding, nothing seems to stay the same or remain trustworthy. This is
what Odysseus and Telemachus struggle with at their meeting and what causes the
lovers' leaps mentioned earlier. But most of us, most of the time, are neither
leaping, nor embracing, nor even imagining we are on the way to an embrace. We
commit suicide on a smaller scale by concluding that we live as we die, alone.
Since, then, we are already essentially phantoms, our embraces must be illusions
at bottom, too, and any order or beauty we may see, however impressive, must in
the end be no more that a lovely lie told by a traveler with no destination. It
is perhaps less painful, when one has been robbed, to decide that on the contrary
one never owned anything in the first place; and we sweeten the bitter pill
further by boasting that it takes great courage and clarity of vision t.c• see the
real bleakness of things, and even more courage to enjoy the phantom's freedom
that results. It does take courage to wander at random gambling one's life, but
perhaps that only says that it takes courage to endure lovelessness and
homelessness, not that it is good to do so.
Maybe all of that courage is just
the fear of being robbed, a brave mask over the rage and resentment with ~hich
someone whose hopes have been disappointed swi::a rs never to hope for anything
again. Still, one cannot cure such despair by mere reason. If one asks on whet
grounds everything has been concluded to be i ! ·~ scry, this fear, or courage, or
skepticism, will reply that no grounds can be ~ iven for the groundlessness of all
things. It becomes a kind of faith, and again, if other sorts of faith are often
suspected of being empty products of fear, surely we ought to wonder what this
faith is a product of. The cure for this feeling of being a part without a whole
must be love, if Diotima is right when she says that love binds the All together
with itself, and if it is love that brings Odysseus back from Hades and lets him
discover while he is there that the dead are more than phantoms, that if we give
them the stuff of life they will speak truth to us.
I want to propose an understanding of how tears and laughter may help us to
feel the wholeness of a part; how they may help us to love, and to find our way
home.
III. TEAllS

What makes us weep?
Physical pain, fear, frustration, compassion, grief,
loneliness, joy, the list is long; and yet weeping is for many a rather rare
occurance in spite of their frequently feeling, to some degree at least, most ~f
these. If their feelings most often partake in the ambiguity of sights seen on a
voyage, where clouds may mean an island, or a storm, and the signs that mark the
end of one trouble may spell the beginning of the next, then it is not surprising
that to wait and see is more often our response than to weep. Mingled with our
frustration may be the suspicion that our frustrated desir~ is not so important
as it seems; mingled with our pain, the memory of worse pains or the
determination never to yield or show weakness; mingled with our compassion may be
fear or contempt.
This ambiguity could be called suspicion or unwillingness to
trust any one feeling, and a large dose of suspicion is necessary for travelers,
both for those who do and even more for those who do not know where they are
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is one, or help find orie if it hasn't yet appear~d. Tears may help.
When we first hear of Odysseus in the Odyssey, Athena is telling Zeus that in
spite of the beguiling talk of Calypso, who keeps him on our island and seeks to
make him forget Ithaca, Odysseus' desire to see even the hearth smoke of his own
land is so great that he longs to die.
The first news Telemachus gets of his
father's condition is from Menelaus, who has heard from Proteus that Odysseus is
weeping on an island.
. The first we see of Odysseus' present is in Book Five, when Hermes descends to
Calypso's isle to set him free. He does not find him within Calypso's cave, we
are told, "but rather that one was crying, sitting on the beach just where he
always did, tearing his spirit with tears and groans and pains."
It is ~ot throu~h suspicion of Calypso's soft and cunning words, nor through
one of his many wiles that Odysseus preserves himself as someone still able to go
home . It is through his tears, through trusting his tears.
It is hard to see
how he could have retained any rational suspicions of the nymph after seven
years. It is clear she means him no harm, and if it is adventuring he likes she
is ready to make him immortal and thus equip him for an eternity of advent~res
though obviously preferring that he stay home with her. But Odysseus does no~
even address the possibility of becoming immortal in his reply to her suggestion
that he stay and live forever with her. Still less does he imply that it is the
glory.of mortals t~ die and thus define their lives. For him it is a simple
question of longing for home. Mortal or immortal, this island is not his home
and Calypso is not bis wife. This may seem very simple but how does he in fact
know these things? Why should he not have decided, wee;ing one day on the beach
after four or five ears alone with C~lypso, that Calypso and the isle of Ogygia
were not part of the way back to Penelope and Ithaka, but that Penelope and
Ithaka had been part of the way to Calypso? There would certainly be no proving
of th7 one or the other, and perhaps he ought to have ceased weeping and decided
to wait and see. But that would mean that even if he had eventually returned to
Penelope thereafter, she would have seemed to him merely another Calypso--perbaps
a.home, perhaps a way station. Instead he sits on the beach "tearing his spirit
with tears.and groans and pains." Tears that tear the spirit may seem hard to
connect with wholeness, but I think it is through this very tearing that he
r etains the possibility of becoming whole again. When he weeps he feels his
loss~
be doesn't feel it, I think, ~ingled with hope, or mingled with despair,
but Just .!t!. loss.
He feels the pain of a part separated from its whole and he
feels it entirely. That he does not avoid the place or the thoughts that give
rise to this pain may signify hope, but it is a hope based on how deeply he knows
and feels himself to belong to Penelope and Ithaka. Whether there are real
gr~unds for hope or not, he can never succeed
in forgetting a happiness without
which he would rather die. This is what tears his soul. Of course he might if
h7 can't forget it, at least try not to think about it, become more suspiciou~ of
his own tears, as most of us do when someone or something we long for is
temporarily or permanently out of our grasp. He does not
as I say 1 explain
himself to Calypso or to us, beyond the simple statement ~hat each day he longs
for home and the day of his return.
To Nausikaa in Phaiakia he adds a little more, in the form of a blessing upon
her: "May the Gods give you all you long for in your heart: a husband and a home
and ~ay ~hey send as companion to those blessings, a true kinship of spirit; fo;
nothing 1s stronger or better than when husband and wife together hold their home
and agree in their thoughts." The verbs in the phrases translated
"hold their
~ome" and "agree in their thoughts," are neither singular nor plur~l. They are
in the dual, a form used to describe things that are two but act as one: a pair
of horses yoked at the same plow, a pair of eyes or ears.
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should be translated: "Nothing is stronger or better than when husband and wife,
acting as closely together as two hands, hold their home and share their
thoughts." "But that," adds Odysseus with a kind of delicacy, "they themselves
always know best ,"as if to say there is something about a home and marriage that
cannot be explained, a trust and belonging that ought to be felt.
This wily
trickster and lying voyager has an extraordinary respect for trust.
The next time Odysseus cries it is at the court of Arete and Alkinoos,
Nausikaa's parents in Phaiaikia. He has been listening to the minstrel Demodokos
sing, at this request, a song of the taking of Troy.

And Odysseus let the bright molten tears run down his cheeks.
As a wife cries, throwing herself upon her husband
Who fell before his own city and people
Trying to ward off the pitiless day from his home and children.
Seeing him dying in gasps
Giving herself to cover him she wails loud
But those behind, beating her back and shoulders with spears
Lead her off b.ound, to have toil and pain.
Her cheeks wear away under most piteous grief
So Odysseus wept piteous tears •••
These are different tears: Odysseus does not long to be back at the sack of
Troy, nor does he mourn the death of his companions in &amp;rms. He weeps as though
he were one of the women of Troy whose husbands he helped to kill. Is it too
much to suggest that only on the last night of his t en-year wanderings has he
realized that what he helped destroy was not just an enen1y city, but somebody's
home?
He and his nob le comrades killed the husbands and made the wives and
children into slaves, permanently homeless people, into!!.. andrapoda, to use a
peculiarly bloodchilling, though not Homeric, Greek word for slaves; literally
"things with men-feet," more loosely, "plunder that can walk." Are ten years of
homelessness too much to have paid?
And now he begins to tell the story of his
wanderings, perhaps because only now does he understand how where he is coming
from fits with where he is going. He learned in his tears.
If his tears on
Calypso's island could be called a reaching out of his present and into his
hopes, then these tears on Phaiaikia might be called another kind of tearing, a
tearing himself away from his past.
He cannot return wholeheartedly to his home
if a part of him is still at Troy.
Troy was not easy to escape from in one piece. ; of t he peopl e \.'e tteet in the
Odyssey who have been there, most are dead. They either died at Tr oy, like
Achilles and Ajax, or on the journey home, like all of Odysseus's crew, or upon
arrival home, like Agamemnon. Of those who are alive and back safe at home, we
meet first Nestor, then Menelaus and Helen.
lestor is on the beach, as if still at Troy, He and all the men of Pylos are
offering a glorious hekatomb of black bulls to Poseidon, presumably in gratitude
for their safe passage home.
Telemachus states his business: that he has come
seeking word of his fathe r, and Ne st or replies : "Ah frien d , when you remind me of
the pain we sons of the Achaians bore in that land, relentless in ou r anger,
sometimes in the ships on the misty sea , ranging a fter plunder , where Achilles
excelled, sometimes around the gr eat town of Lord Pr iam ••• we fought."
A student showed me that two things are especially striking in this beginning
of Nestor's answer. The first is that we find ourselves transported not just
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as ''relentless in our ~nger" are menos aschetoi and they remind one of the anger
of Achilles both in meaning and in sound, for menos--"spirit, force, anger" is
not far from menis--"wrath, rage." Moreover, Nestor then mentions Achilles by
name and speaks of his preeminence at the pillaging which kept the army supplied
with food. But one of Achilles's own complaints in his rage at Agamemnon in Book
One of the Iliad is that he does the fighting and Agememnon distributes the
plunder, always reserving the lion's share for himself. In fact, one could say
that the distribution, or in this case, the redistribution, of plunder is the
occasion for the ruinous wrath of Achilles. The second striking thing is that
Nestor never fulfills the expectations he raises with the third word of his
reply, "when." "Q. phil 1 epei. •• " One wants to ask, "Yes, when he reminds you
what then?" But .Nestor cannot come back to the present once he steps into th;
p~s t.
He goes on to te 11 who died there, Ajax, Achilles, Patrok los, Anti lochos,
his own son, then pauses to tell Telemachus that even if they had five years he
couldn't tell him the whole story of the suffering of the Achaians at Troy.
Perhaps he means to convey how hard a time it was by a figure of speech. But if
there is anything expressed in his choice of that particular figure of speech it
may be that, ten years later, he still cannot separate himself enough from the
experience to make it a tellable tale.
He has not, it seems, finished saying
farewell to the Trojan war, so as to put it behind him and view it whole.
Instead one suspects that when he views his present through his memories of the
past, of the sheer magnitude of the suffering and of the men who bore it and
caused it at Troy, his present can only seem small and disappointing, even when
as in this scene, he is presiding at a sacrifice of 81 black bulls conducted
nine companies of 500 men each.
But if this is only conjecture about Nestor, it is clearly true that Menelaus
and Helen cannot put Troy behind them. Telemachus arrives at their palace on a
wedding day; Menelaus's son is getting married, but, we are told, his son by a
slave girl during the war, for after one daughter Helen has never born any more
children since going to ·troy. When Telemachus remarks on the opulence and beauty
of the palace, Menelaus replies that it all means nothing to him without the
friends he l~st at Troy and thereafter. He revels in his tears, he says, for his
lost companions, or stops weeping before the surfeit makes him shiver.
Soon
after this Helen drops an anodyne into everyone's wine to make them incapable of
tear~ •. Perhaps tears :or what is
irrecoverably lost~ worse than useless, and
yet it ts strange to find Helen so ready to numb herself and her companions so
long after the occasion of the pain. There seems to be no hope of a natural
cessation of tears, and this is confirmed in the stories which Helen and her
husband then recount. Hera seeks to assure him that her escape to Troy was an
aberra tion and that she longed to return to him during most of the war while his
.
r~minds her of her attempt to trick the Greeks in the
horse on the ' very last
night of the war, and so save Troy. She is asking him to believe that she is now
truly on his side again, that she · really loves him ,and he is replying that he
can never forget that he got her back by force of arms and that he will thus
always suspect her of being with him against her will. She is his prisoner in
his mind, not his wife, and all the opium in Egypt will not erase ~hat
unhappiness for them. Telemachus asks if it isn't time for everyone to be going
off to rest, and I don't blame him. Menelaus and Helen remind me here almost of
those people in the lowest circle of Dante's Hell, whose tears freeze in their
eyes. Perhaps it is that chilling, deadening character of his tears which is

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signified by Menelaus's earlier remark that he must sometimes stop weeping before
the surfeit makes him shiver. In any case, Odysseus's tears at the song of
Demodokos are anything but cold; the literal translation of one of the verbs used
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in the full sense of becoming part of it again, but thos~ tears disjoin him,
dissolve him from Troy in a way that no one else in the book who has survived the
war manages to get dissolved. By a grief as whole-hearted in its rejection of
the consequences of the war as the grief of one who has utterly lost home and
family, Odysseus is freed to make a whole-hearted attempt to embrace home and
family.
have already
The next tears Odysseus weeps are with his son, in the scene I
spoken of. This is how Bomer describes it:
Telemachus embraced his noble father, weeping. A longing or tears of
mourning arose in both and cries burst from both as keen and fluttering
as those of the great taloned hawk whose children farmers take before
they fly.
The fledgling and the hawk are here restored to one another, yet they must
mourn their separation. When Odysseus left for the war he cannot have wanted to
believe he would not return in time to see his son growing up. Whatever had been
foretold him he could not then have been comparable to the hawk who sees its nest
robbed; and Telemachus was not ever aware that in one moment he had been deprived
of his father's presence and care for twenty years. Re had only known, as the
years wore on, that his father was not home .I.§!.• They have both ~ad twenty years
to get used to this seperation, to be insensibly hollowed out by it day after day
as drops of water hollow rocks. But the fullness o~ their restoratio~ to .each
other lets that separation suddenly appear in all of its full, .harsh. immediacy,
and a longing to mourn arises.
Now that they truly ~ave it again, they.are
pierced by what they had lost. An overly lite~al translation of on~ of the lines
might read: "They cried loud and clear, something more fully flow7ng. than the
great taloned . hawk cries ••• " and so forth. The alpha at the beginning of the
word "adinotarov " "more fully flowing" is not the privative alpha, but what is
called the inten~ive alpha, used to denote fullness or joinedness.
It is the
same A in our Latin-derived word "satisfaction," fullness, completeness; and the
oldest meanings of the English word "sad," in Chaucer for example, are in fact
"whole, fully ripe, constant, steadfast." It seems to me that the best sadness
is indeed a wholeness that produces constancy, the wholeness of a part; the
wholeness to be felt in tears.

IV. LAUGHTER.
Since J.. began with a speech attributed to Aristophanes, I should try to say a
very little about laughter before I close. For, in spite of all the tears, or
perhaps because of the kind of tears they are, the Odyssey is a comedy.
A
lecture on Dante by Mr. Littleton suggested that the soul of comedy had to do
with being able to turn around and go back. According t~ that definition the
Odyssey is preeminent among comedies; but also according to the words of
Aristophanes in the play bis chorus describes as the one he'd worked ha~dest of
all upon, The Clouds; Athens is said, by the chorus of Clouds, .to be a c:ty full
of folly but whose very mistakes the gods tu:n to the better. T~e ~thenians are
then urged to see that trusting Cleon is a mistake, and to put him in the st~cks
that things may again turn out for the best. That mistakes may turn out r~ght
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if only we recognize them is, I· think, a thread that runs through most. comedies•
,It is assumed that turning things to the better is what the gods are dispos~d to
do for us if we will let them. This is comedy's opposition to tragedy, which
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crush us.
Laughter is, then, a recognition of a forgiveable or reversible or non-fatal
~istake.
To ~augh at something is to feel that there is a whole and a way that
its parts fit together and that that laughable something does not fit as it
pretends to! but that it also in no way threatens the whole. A German writer of
the ea:ly ninetee~th century, Jean Paul Richter, speaks of comedy in the figure
of a bird •. The. bird Merops, or as I am tempted to trans late, "eye for the part,"
he says, flies into heaven backwards, by looking back and laughing at all things
earthly.
The great hopefulness of most comedy must proceed from the insight that to
laugh at a.pa:t is to affirm the whole. One need not see the whole as such to be
a~are of
~t in the laugh that recognizes the absurdity of a part and at the same
time cont~ins the possibility of reconciliation. Theodor Adorno, a contemporary
German thinker, suggests tb~t laughing may be like naming in these two aspects .
In on~ w~y to laugh at a thing and to call it a name can be a glorying in our own
super10:1ty.and mastery over it, while, in another way, it is precisely by thus
separa~ing it off
and addressing it directly that we are able to let it have its
o~ being, ~o freely accept it for what
it is. On this understanding a certain
~i~d er wh~ s never bees. a chance to trust that even as there is some absurdity
in everything, so there is some rightness, some truth, in everything, too.
~he ~tory of Odysseus,
as Adorno points out, ends with a joke meant to produce
this kind of ~aughter. Odysseus, as he learns in Hades, is to walk inland with
an oar over bis shoulder until so~eone asks him what kind of a winnowing fan he's
got 7h7re.
At :hat spot he is to plant the oar upright in the ground and
sacrifice to Poseidon. Then he may return home and live to a ripe old age,
finall~ to die a gentle death that comes from the sea.
You may not find the
confusion of an o~r with a winnowing fan terribly funny, but I think Poseidon is
expected to. He is the god who holds the whole middle realm
with his brother
:eus taking th: Heavens and his brother Hades the Underworld,' and he knows that
JUSt as the shield of Achilles showed, Ocean circles everything and makes up most
of the world. Nevertheless here is some clodhopper who's never heard of an
ocea~, and doesn't ~now ~he great
sea-farer Odysseus from a migrant farm laborer
or h18 oar from a winnowing fan. Poseidon has to laugh at this ignoramus who
h~s never tasted salt, and at Odysseus, the island-dweller and sailor like a
f1sh.o~t of water,.tryi~g to explain what god it is he is honoring ~ith great
sa~rifices an~
this winnowing fan.
Like Adam Smith so deep in thought about
things economic that he wallked off the end of a dock, these are people who don't
know where they are. More than any sacrifice could, the laughter Odysseus calls
forth fr~m Poseidon remind~ the ~od who each of them really is, and where they
a~e.
This laug~ter reconciles him to Odysseus, even disposes him especially
kindly toward ~im, so that he will send him prosperity and a gentle deathh. May
we, too, who live much of our lives no less ignorant of the whole to which we
belong than the farmer, be granted such a reconciliation.

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�Mathematics and the Concept of Force
John Ritner

We live in a world of motion, so that if we are to understand our world and
ourselves, we must understand motion. Indeed, it seems that nothing can occur in
this world we perceive without motion's being involved--yet how do we grasp such.
a changing thing? Our minds seek something unchanging, sometbing we can say we
know, so our question is, what is the unchanging or absolute part of motion, and
how do we grasp it? As we shall see, the answer has vast implications for
philosophy as well as physics and must lie in mathematics and the concept of
force.
The Ancients tended to make a distinction between theoretical and applied
sciences. We need only read, say, the first line of Ptolemy's Almagest: "Those
who have been true philosophers, Syrus, seem to me to have very wisely separated
the theoretical part of philosophy from the practical." Ptolemy goes on to note
that the practical part of philosophy involved constant repetition, while the
theoretical involved progress onwards. He mentions Aristotle's division of the
theoretical into "three immediate genera: the physical, the mathematical, and the
theological." Of these three, we can have scientific knowledge only of the
mathematical, and Ptolemy undertakes the investigation of the astronomical part
of mathematics. His intention is not really to explain the physical movements of
the planets, but to "save the appearances" and expound upon the theoretical
mathematics of astronomy. His science is not meant to be applied; rather, he
prefers to "indulge in meditation mostly for the exposition of many beautiful
theorems and especially of those specifically called mathematics."
When we open Euclid's Elements, we are struck by the very first definition: "A
point is that which has no part;" and the Elements continues in a similar fashion
to expound "pure" geometry--perhaps a measure of the earth, as its name implies,
but in a purely theoretical way.
In this way, mathematics was, with a few
except ions, firmly separated from the other sciences, such as physics. For
instance, Aristotle gives no truly mathematical account of this science, but
merely an account from observation and meditation. Yet this account, due to its
vast subsequent influence, is the necessary starting point f or an examination o f
physics.
"Physics" comes from the Greek word for nature, and Aristotle defines nature as
"a source or cause of being moved and of being at rest in that to which it
· belongs primarily." (Book II, 192b.22) The last clause, "in that to which it
belongs primarily," is included in order to indicate that a man- made item like a
bed, insofar as it is a bed, has no "innate impulse to change," but only insofar
as it is wood. Thus, physics is the study of the causes of motion and rest. I t
is the science immediately necessary to understand the world ar~und us, for
nature obviously exists and things obviously move --t o try to prove these things
would be absurd, as Aristotle points out.
So we are set the task of studying the causes of motion and rest. To do so
requires a great deal of explication about many things.
For instance, as
Aristotle states at the beginning of Book III, we must understand the necessary
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consider that motion is continuous and that "the infinite" is necessary in some
way to explain "continuous." The definition of motion is then given as "the
fulfillment of what exists potentially, insofar as it exists potentially."
(20lal0) It has been debated whether this definition is comprehensible
but it
does at least point out the central position of motion in the study of the world
for it is in.motion that things ar: fully what they should be. For eight book~
the explanation~ go on about such things as the four causes, the infinite, place,
space, tendencies of the four elements--all with scarcely
a word about
math:matics or an indication of how we practically deal with motion.
We know
not~ing . about
the natural paths of motion or about the velocities bodies can
achieve or about the work they can do or about their relationships to each
other. At best we have a mediocre knowledge of nature.
"My purpose is to set forth a very new science dealing with a very ancient
subject," proclaims Galileo at the beginning of the "Third Day" of his Two New
Sciences.
There is, in nature, perhaps nothing older than motion, concerning
which books written by philosophers are neither few nor small;
nevertheless, I have discovered by experiment some properties of it
which are worth knowing and which have not hitherto been either
observed or demonstrated.
Indeed, a new age is being introduced--Galileo has opened this "vast and most
excellent science," and some of the greatest thinkers from his time on have
exp~ored it
in de~th.
Galileo treats of uniform motion, naturally accelerated
motion, and the motion of projectiles, and he proceeds using Euclid and other
mathema.ticians--this is the revolution. He does not abstrusely define motion
but proves how the elements of motion--time, velocity, and space--are related t~
one another. From Galileo's work, we know that with falling bodies the distances
covered vary as the squares of the times and that projected bodies move in
parabolas--and to prove these things, he uses the ancient mathematicians.
Now we have a way of understanding the world, for we have applied the certainty
of mathematics to the physical world.
We are shown that this world has
mathematical laws as clea: as Euclid's or Apollonius• ·mathematics--though certain
unaccoun~ed -f or factors.will throw off the results of
the application of these
m~thematics t? the physical world.
That is, for instance, the motion of a body
will follow given laws except insofar as it is affected by air resistance or
other such (and perhaps limitless) factors. Still, we are left with the hope
that .we can mathematically take into account even these factors and explain them
by fixed laws.
Descartes clearly expresses this hope in the second part of the Discourse on
Method, written shortly after Galileo's time:
Those long chains of reasoning, so simple and easy, which enabled the
geometricians to .reach the most difficult demonstrations had me wonder
whether all things knowable to me might not fall into a ~imilar logical
sequence.
Descartes proceeds to combine "the best traits of geometrical analysis and
algebra, ... and correct "the faults of the one by the other." As he shows in his
Geometry, the key is to develop a formula which takes into account all the
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�With Galileo and Descartes, the primacy of mathematics in the consideration of
physical matters is established. To understand the.moving world around us, we
must understand how it is mathematical. Once we understand this, it is claimed
that we have knowledge as certain as that of, say, Euclid, and we may solve
practical problems.
We can predict with great accuracy, for instance, how nruch
velocity a machine would require to move a certain body a certain distance.
Thus, we must measure and quantify--distance, velocity, time all
become
numbers--and we must learn to relate these numbers. Given the establishment of
mathematics in physics, we must seek out just what mathematics is dealing
with--what are the factors, how are they related, and what is absolute in
motion?
Our first considerations of motion dealt with single objects moving uniformly
or falling with uniform acceleration or being projected in a parabola. Given two
of the three elements of velocity, time, and distance, we can find the third ,
without having to take into account any other factor. For instance, among heavy
bodies, it is not true, as Aristotle maintains, that the heaviest falls most
rapidly--mass makes no difference. All heavy bodies accelerate in the same way
and achieve the same final velocity at the end of the same amount of time. Two .
projectiles of different weight will form in the same parabola given the same
velocities--assuming, as usual, ideal conditions.
Yet we know from experience that it is generally much easier to send a lighter
projectile farther than a heavier one, and that it is more painful to be hit by a
larger projectile than by a smaller one . Something more goes into the mo tion of
a heavier body, and that factor is dependent upon its mass in some way . The bes t
starting point for the consideration of this new factor of mass is Huygen's The
Motion .Q.f Colliding Bodies, for in this work is demonstrated the effect that
perfectly hard, moving bodies have upon each other. Further, Leibniz' Essay on
Dynamics can be brought to bear on Huygens' work with particular advantage, for
Leibniz is searching for something absolute in motion and explores many of the
ideas Huygens puts forth.
Proposition 4 is the first
proposition
in Huygens ' treatise to deal
mathematically with bodies which have different masses.
It states that the
relative speeds of the approaching bodies--whatever their masses are--are the
same as the relative speeds of the departing bodies. That is, for example, if
body "B" approaches with a velocity of 10 a larger body "A" at rest, then the two
bodies will separate with velocities that together add up to 10. Leibniz points
out this fact in his Essay on Dynamics, and notes that although it is a
conservation, it is not something absolute in bodies, for the true :velocities and
the absolute forces of the bodies can change in .innumerable ways. Thus, the
conservation of relative speeds tells us very little--nothing abou the actual
speeds of the mass of the body or the effect they would have on other bodies.
The sixth proposition of Huygens points out a negative truth, namely, that
contrary to Descartes' theory, the quantity of motion in two colliding bodies is
not always conserved. What Huygens means by "quantity of motion" depends upon
the velocity and size of the bodies, and Leibniz takes it as being the product of
mass and velocity--what is now called momentum. This is on the surface a strange
idea--for we have never before multiplied together two unlike things in order to
obtain the definition of a third.
It is true that nowadays we conceive of
velocity as a ratio between distance and time--that is, velocity is equal to
distance divided by time--but that is more directly comprehensible, for we truly
think of a body covering a certain distance in a certain time. Besides, Galileo
presents velocity as a measurable quantity in its own right, and it took later
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distance over time.
Now, although we have a good idea of why mass and velocity should be considered
togethe:, we can have no im~ge of momentum or of other "absolute" quantities soon
to be discussed.
T~e. notion
of such quantities measurable only indirectly in
terms o~ other.quantit7es has several important implications, some mathematical,
~ome philosophical.
First of all, the dominance of mathematics has been secured
~nso~ar as the c?ncept--at least the precise concept--of a quantity like momentum
1s incomprehensible except mathernat~cal~y and s~ecifically
quantitatively.
Further, when we.say.that we ~re multiplying mass times velocity, we really mean
that we are multiplying numerical quantities of mass and velocity. We have
advanced beyond Euclidean ratios of like things to manipulations of the
measurements of very unlike things.
Only by thus turning to algebra and
quantification, as Descartes does in his Geometry, can we make any solid advances
in physics.
The justification of such steps is precisely that they work (as
shal~ be seen eve~ mor: clearly in the following discussions of force).
That is,
for 1~s~ance, bodies wit~ equal momenta can stop each other upon impact.
Their
velo~ities and m~sses in~ividually may vary widely, perhaps, but multiply each
body s mass by its velocity, and if the results are equal, the two bodies can
stop each other.
In subsequent physics, the predominance of mathematics has grown to such an
extent that, with the introduction of quantum mechanics, Schroedinger warns us
against attempting to imagine what we are studying. Our knowledge of physics is
strictly mathematical, for even though we may have started with images of
particles or waves, we can achieve consistency only through abandoning such
images and studying the mathematics. In the end, such paradoxes have indeed led
to a thorough questioning of whether the mathematics is then meaningful at
all-:-but. stil~, t~e only way to consistency in physical concepts and to · their
application lies 1n mathematics.
But to
return
to
the seventeenth century, one of the philosophical
ramifications of these new concepts involves the specific idea of absolute or
living force that Leibniz developed, so discussion of it will be postponed.
There are, however,
two
other philosophical ramifications of particular
importance that I hold to have come directly from these new, unimaginable
physi~al
concepts an~ the mathematical expression of tbem. The first is the
doctrine that . na~ure rn general may be trea.ted mathematically, and the second
that concepts which exceed the imagination can validly be used and in fact must
~e u~ed,, th:oughou~ philosophy. Both Descartes and Spinoza develop the latter
implication in makin~ a distinction between the highest type of knowledge--the
purely conceptual, which exceeds the imagination--and sensual knowledge
or
as
Spinoza ca~ls it, opinion. Now, granted that the theory of higher 'form~ of
know~edge is sc~rc~ly ~e~,
~hat
is important is that these advances in physics
prov:de a certain Justification for Descartes and Spinoza; for them, the modern,
physical concepts are a necessary .part of our understanding of the moving world
around us.
They are not abstractions, but workable concepts which suggest that
there a:tually a:e some relationships--clearly understandable and fundamental to
~an--w~ich underlie
the world we perceive and suggest something absolute about
it. Finally, such a view of the world, with the Cartesian claim that all things
knowable ~o man.can.be demonstrated mathematically, ultimately leads Spinoza to
develop.h:s Ethics i~ a geometric fashion---an ethics which includes every topic
we traditionally assign to philosophy as a whole.
But to set aside the philosophical ramifications let us continue the search
for something more truly absolute than momentum in, physics. Now, momentum is not
conserved between colliding bodies J but the momentum in a given direction, or
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Further, this

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�conservation holds for all bodies, not just perfectly hard or Flastic on es. But
it does not correspond to somet.hing, absolute in bodh•s, for ir1 g,f-'n~ · ral twc f·quaJ
bodies with equal velodties which approach each other- gj •.,i &lt;~ o
q li-1r:f_ jty of
progress of zero. Thus, we know nothing about the indiv i d ua J bocl'ps - -th ~ ~ cou1d
be going any velocity an&lt;l have any ruass.
,
Finally, Huygens prove$ in his elevenlb proposition t\-..:H ~.; 1· f.·~t :_, i! 1 qt .-:1 ntjt;/
which Leibniz calls C1bsolute or living force i2... cc1nsPrved . In H11 y2. H•3 ' ~ 1.vc\rds,
"the sum of their [the bodie.s'] magnitudes su1t:ip~ier1 b;: tlw ~.qu ;1 r ei:. n !" th i: ·1-r
respective velocities is equal bPfore and ~ftt-:1
tl ·e · o1Ji.s ·ion4'~
'fr; tb&lt; ric tat 1o r·
of Leibniz, avv + byy = a:xx -+ bz2, wlif' rE- ''.:· '' i~. '; ~ · r::.·-1,:. s c1'. r· p(~; ' ·· ·· , " ~:. "
1
u; L1 11 -·
.
.
- b ,.1
\
f
.
. . , .
'
•
t mass of body two, "v" is tbe velocity c· f
. o u:; ;·~c' c E»(i -E' c: _,J \ ~ :,: ,r ;; f ! :J
x
1 :-;
velocity afterwards, and "y" is tht- vt-:loc ~t y 0f b ody tv1c• rwfcr '- c · · 1 _ t,i("fl ;-ind!''."."
;
its velocity afterw&lt;Hds.
So Leibniz cloir.i s thc;t at ~ast \&gt;'&lt;'
\ , i;,,~ .:,c; n1t&gt;t~!ng
absolute in motion, something independent o f directjon c·f iro\·c:rniont cind ncit
relative to any othE·r factor.
Tbi_s
livirig, f(ITC•_ is H n:1:..:;~1.t r :,1 ~,l.· qt•&lt;:n t -: ty , '"
'
1
comprehensible and unchangin~ tbi.ng---altlwugr. i t i;:;
1irni.l.t·(, tr
~,.-rf.:11&gt; ·;2rc1
bodies and their perfectly elastic co11is ·Lrins. Leihni;·. not ~·s rL:l !. '. ~1 it:d ) , 111~
and suggests that although the 1ivint, fr,rcF- r:;a;· bP Jo:..t f .~, r : L~, ~-h -· 1:' \t , ;.,
absorbed by the small parts of thE" body imd is not ~cist f&lt;·r th e un;,, ,_, ,- ,c.
This is the place to pick
up the postponed d) scussion c:7 ~ '. P.- t:,l'&gt;-f.&lt;'t
philosophical ramifications that Leibniz draws from this concept 0f ~t s 0 ute
force. Principally, he makes the clairr tk1t 1 ivinE:, force muq bf• co n ~; t'. n.·E'c'. h
the universe as a whole--there in nev~r any more nr less of it--for 8 ~ r: 8 tt ~ r ho~
much bodi es collide, this living fc,ree remains und.angt&gt;d. lier,c&lt;', ld~ c;:ir: sp('8k 0f
conservation of living force in the s~ne way ~s cons~rvation of matter-- it ~uuld
be absurd to think of either changing, for how can something come from nothing?
Yet this living force is nothing which is as :ir.:mediately imaginab~e &lt;:;S ir.3ss or
velocity. Why should tbe universe's basic cor.sE-rvCJtion be of sonietbing, found hy
squaring the velocity and multiplying by the mass of bodies?
It remains for Newton to seek out the natural mathematical reasons for the
absolutes of physics--to rebuild the science from the ground up using an amazing
system of definitions and axioms. He ignores (for the most part) thE&gt; theological
arguments which spring from physics and lead to the defpnse of th" r,;ost vi.-nying
concepts of God, from Leibniz' teleology to Spinoza's idPntif:ication o f God with
nature. Instead, Newton seeks to grasp the basic l aw s behind natural forces and
to express them mathematically. Herice the title, the Mathematical !'rinciples of
Natural Philosophy. He makes it cle&lt;ir tlwt he is stic'l:ting to n1t1t't. t&gt; n1::1t ;cs &lt;n1d t l )
nat.u re 's own forces in his very pre face:
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I consider philosophy rather than 11rt and wTitf· nut c on&lt;":err;jng e1Hn u Dl
but natural powers, and consider chiefly those tlings wrich re1atc to
gravity, levity, elastic force, the resistancE:· cf fluid's, ;.i ncl thE-" :H.0
forces, whether attractive or impulsive; and theref orE I 0ff~r t~is
work as the mathematical pdncipJes of philosophy&gt; for tbE' \vro1e burden
of philosophy seems to consist
in tt.is--from tbP pben or.1E'f1a c-f mot ior:s
to investigate the forces of nature, and then from th ~sP forces t0
demonstrate the other phenomena • • • •

Hence he is not dealing with the collisions of lard bodies, but with the forces
that they naturally have between each other. Further, he i s not concprr.ed with
the or1g1n of these fore.es. He designr. "only to g,ive a math e matical notion of
these forces, without considering their physical causes and seats." Let us start
by considering certain of his definitions.
The second definition is of the

impressed force "f" has a kinetic energy equ2l to the integration of force over
distance, or, in other t~rrns, one half rov squared.
Remember that similarly
momentum is equal to force integrated over t1'me, th a t
·
1~,
to mass times
accel~r~tion integr~ted
over time, or simply mass timPs velocity. All of these
quantities have their 1 articular uses, depending on the circumstances, and their
con~- epts are fundanwntal to our understanding of the moving world around us.
With subsequent advances in physics , Newton , Leibniz , and the- other p h y S J. C 1 S t _S
· ·
.
.
o f t h e seventeenth and eighteenth centuries were shown to be dea1ing with Ji 't d
cases; that is, New:-onian physics cannot explain physical ptienoniena iwhichmi
extremely small or which move at A a veJocity approaching that of light
r n d ee d ,
d .,
t
l
.
.
•
mo ~:T·
q~an um. t 1
eory introduces ~ notrnn of uncertainty and
probability into
physics,.and this eugge~ts that strict cause and effect relationstips and even
mathematical understandings of nature may be severely limited .
Modern physics
suggests that our Vf'ry mathematics may break down at the atoIT.'ic level; in other
word~, our tool of mathematics may not conform so well to the atomic basis of the
pb~~1cal
world.
But ~his consideration is beyond the scope of this paper.
Besides, the fact remains that mathematics and our scientific understanding of
th~ world cannot be&gt; sep&lt;ffate&lt;l--when the old
matbematicaJ theorems break down, we
seek new onps c:r ~u~po~e t'- t
&lt;;;
f·urt h er k nowledge is beyond human capabilities .
1:a
Note tha~ FV~n a stat1st1cal method is mathematical.
If there is a third
~tlternat1ve betwe~n mathematics
and resignation, then I have not yet heard of
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In conclusi on, the search for something absolute in motion -- in pbysics--leads
to the applir~tion of mathematics to nature
and to the development of
concepts--not2blv
fc &gt;
rrc•---·whirh
f'XIJress that which , t",_
b eyon &lt;l
\_
.
.
.
. .,
.
uougu
uum.an
in: 8 &amp;1 n .a t l on , l s ll b s o 1 u t e ~ IJ t h e ~ h y s i c a l wo r 1 d •
Su ch d e v E lop men t s 1e ad not on 1 y
to the greatest .advances 1n physics, but to applications of mathematics to ethics
and to metap~ys1cal ~e1i:fs in the conservation of an absolute force (as well as
to ~he pract1ca~ belief in the modern conservation of energy). What all of these
no71ons . have in common is the be 1 ief in something stab le in and fund amen ta 1 to
tb~s moving world of ours • . And even today, the advances in physics discussed in
~bis
paper form the basis of our understanding of our changing world which

includes, even, ourselves.
I quote from the following editions and translations:
Almagest, Ptolemy, from the Great Books edition, translated

by R. Catesby
Taliaferr o
Elements. Euclid, from the Dover edition, translated by Sir Thomas L. Heath
Physics , Aristotle, from the Random House edition, translated by R . P . Hardie

and R. K. Gaye
Two New Sciences, Galileo Galilei, from. the
Carew and Alfonse de Salvio
Discourse on Method, Rene Descartes
. . translated by Laurence Lafleur' fron1
ed1t1on,

tl1e

Library

of

~athe~1atical Pr~nciples cl_ Natural
Philos.Q2.hy, Sir Isaac
Un1vers1ty of California edition, translated by Andrew Motte,
Cajori

1. "D" here and everywhere else

1n

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Dover edition, translated by Henry
the Liberal Arts
Newton,

from

the

revised by Florian

�Galileo's Limits

The Fort

Adrien Heller

In the fading heat of August
when we were young and the trees were old
the fort rose to save our once young season
from falling into the hands of an old enemy.
The walls were high and stayed the attacks
from those who'd found out where we'd built her .
They came in swarms like yellow-jack~ts
.
coming f r om the grass where the mackintosh
.
lay squashed and brown and smelling
like a rotten apple should.
In Autumn when every breeze felt like wind again
we stuffed the cracks with leaves
and the only light came through the door e
So we sacrificed for warmth,
the days for night,
the green for gold.
When the trees stood bare we could see
the fort from at least a hundred yards
and no one ever dare sneak in or out
before we came and caught them there.
We finally closed the door the day
before Christmas I believe.
She lay covered in white and
watched Orion hunting night

thro ugh . '' The proposition is carefully worded to naintain a proportion between
somet hing call ed time and something called space. By putting his descriptions in
Euc]idean terms Galileo is able to maintain the~ as descriptions. If, however,
Galileo had employed Descartes' mathematirs in ~{s descriptions he would have
been forced to state a definition of motion. He would have to have said
precisely what motion is. For the equation he ~11ould have arrived at, V=D/T, is
an identity, not a relationshjp or a prr1portioi:-1. We should have been able to ask -

after night until we had forgotten
bow dark and cold it must have been inside.
It melted from the roof at first,
trickling through the boards we had
known to creak on occasional nights
but never thought would ever leak.

Galileo, "What is speed?"
D /T is e s sent i a 11 y speed •

And he would
Vo i 1 a • "

h2vc

to1d us, "Speed is the number D/T.

Seemingly, equations explaini~g what precisely a thing is run counter to
Galileo's intentions.
His intentions are stated in the beginning of the
treatise: "I find many symptomata of motion t11at. are worth knowing." Stillman
Drake translates "symptomata" as "esseutials.'r Th:is may bf' the right word with
which to transJate "s:ymptomata." I c&lt;ln't say with authority whether it is or
isn't, as I am not familiar with anybody's thoughts about what "essentials" are,
particularly Mr. Drake's. The word ''syrr.ploriau, ," howe.ver, can be translated,

Oh how it leaked!
The water dripped in fecund drops down
the walls and onto the chair and table top
left in the darkness from Winter.
We tried to fix it
and dry the dampness in the warm
new breath of Spring;
and bring in light through the door
That had not opened since that Eve.

Adrien Heller, '83, currently lives in Springfield, Illinois.

A.J.
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There is one aspect of a many-sidf~d &lt;";alileo that I would like to s.cty sor.ietr.i rf,
about. The subject is old, but the words are new. Tbe subject lS thP bet th::
GaliJeo uses Euclide8n magnitudes.
There appears to b~ a differenc~ between the sort of magnitudes Euclid thought ·
about in his Elements and the sort of magnitudes most mathematicians hav~ use d
sincr Descartes' particular geometry gained currency. Euclid and tbos~ n f bis
school tl1ought of numbers only with reference to p&lt;..;.rt icular magnitudes. ThE:y did
not sciy, "Five -- voila!'', they said, "Five of what?"
Thus they could not !:'ay
that if C:E·rtair1 ratios \VE:re in tlw same propn·t'io n they wPre also equal~ they
werE-&gt; talking about. specifically different t.hfr1~,s , .C'! !Hl were interested in telling
you what the relationship was, not what thP t}~n fP ~erP.
Descartes, on t.he other hand, by telling y~u t~~t R certain proportion WHS
actna11y ar, pq1 !l1ity, was telling you what th ..- ,., . t ! ~ ·-. :;s actually were: "Five [or
J
v.i hat eve r L "
W:i t h : ": s c a r t e s t here i s no r P 1 n t fo Ml r .i I' , ' ) :-· l y id en t i t y •
'
( I d en t i t y
of what? Who kno~s? Not important.)
But reL~ti.ons Btf-' very important for G3ljle o. We see, first of all, that in the
first proposition in the treatise on local motion, Galileo uses Euclid's
definition of same proportion.
Looking fort.her into his and the followins
propositions, we see that Galileo is really not interested in explaining what
motion is, or what speed is.
He appears to be interested only in the
relationships of what happens when motion occurs.
He says, "If a moveable equably carried with the same speed passes througb two
spaces, the times of motion will be to one another as the spaces pass ~ d

Krivak

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�" h
according to Messrs. Liddell and Scott, as
c ance,
characteristics." Indeed, our word, "symptoms," expresses

lty
casua
'
the same

accidental
notion of

accident.
that Galileo's "symptomata" are "accJ'.dents" and his treatise
I suggest, t h en,
• ] that are wo1·th knowing." This
on local motion is about "accidents of [motio~
keeping with Galileo's own
translation of "symptomata" seems muc h m~re in
.
.
not
insistance on the use of Euclidean proportions . Euclidean proportions do
show the essentials of the magnitude which compose them: .They set fo~th ,a
en whatever
the
magnitudes
are.
Similarly, Galileo s
relationship betwe
d
d time are· they show us a
propositions do not show us what spee , space, an
.
,
relationship between.magnitud~s Galile~ ha~pened to p~rce1v~.his observations are
Galileo was a cunning perceiver.
His interpretations o . · .
.
.
informative. But his interpretations are still his de~cr1pt1ons ~n the1~tmo~~
distinct formulation . One describes accidents. One ascribes essent1als:t.
t
·
·
d ·
'b
entials quite in oppos1 ion
o
only our modern age which wishes to es:r1 e ess
'
the limits which Galileo imposed upon himself .

Sonnet
Stephen Morse

The silent, sombre sentinel creeps high
Above the mountain's purple battlement,
And climbs up cloudy stairs across the sky
While all around that milky ghost, the firmament
Like some jeweled raven -- spreads its pitchy plumes,
Encompassing eternity and man
Within a cold and timeless, still stfll tomb,
A tomb awaiting us since time began.
But now that silver spectre slips below
The world's edge, shunning, unlike we,
The blinding star, with its deceitfo 1 glow;
For that which light illumines soon shall flee
Into the gaping dark which needs no light.
And waits for me to step into the night.

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Divided Between Tears and Smiles
Merle Sokolik

I.

"this state of schemes and hopes and connivance"

It is right for social man to find pain in solitude. Change, looked on as the
loss of the familiar, always makes us~ little more alone. With his daughter's
marriage and no~ Miss Taylor's, change has left Mr. Woodhouse sharply more and
more a]one . For a mar1 "without activity of mind and body" th~ power of change is
overwhelming. The acute solitude that it brings Mr. Woodhouse drives him into
"hating change of Pvery kind."
Emma also feels the solitude that the change of Miss Taylor's marriage and move
brings. Hers is an intellectual solitude.
In losing Miss Taylor, Emma loses "a
friend and comp&amp;nie:n such as few possessed, intelligent, well informed, useful,
gentle, knowing all the ways of the family, interested in all its concerns and
peculiarly interf'::;ted in herself." (I.1). Such a companion her father's age,
constitution, ~nd habits could never offer. We, along with Austen, must wonder
about Emrna: "How was she to bear the change?" (I.I).
Emma finds some sat:isfaction in considering how ' she always wished for and
promoted the match . She can even tell Mr. Knightley that she made the match .
Not being blind, as her father is, to all change not fully determined, being far
more resourceful than her father, and always having had rather too much her own
way, Emma can take the responsibility for bringing about change herself .
To
bring about change, Emma must look on change differently from her father. She is
able to see change not only as the loss of the familiar but also as the arrival
of what is new. The novelty and promise of the match between Mr. Weston and Miss
Taylor might make the change appear good, something to be wished f0r and worked
for.
This view of change gives Emma special adeptness in lessening for her father
the harshness of beneficial or necessary changes. Only she could lead Mr.
Woodhouse to accept the replacement of the familiar small-sized Pen~roke with the
large, modern, circular dining table.
Only she can lead him not to lament in
excess Hart field's loss of Miss Taylor. This loss still remains a sorrow, though,
to her father and to her. This loss might tell us that no adeptness in the face
of change is strong enough to ward off the pain of an inevitable solitude. But
Ernma hc:is a "disposition to think a little too well of herself," and she does not
fully recoznji~e ber powerlessness. Sorro"W does come, but it is a "gentle sorrow
• • • not Git al 1 in the shape of any disagreeable consciousness," (I .1).
Encour~1~e d
hy her
success in managing Hart fie Id and her father and not
cnnsc·io11s of ht·r ~'' eakness, Emma protects h~· rself from solitude not by spurning
ch~ng~, HS ~er f a ther
does, but by setting out to make changes herself. Only
tr.is wjJl !:~atisf y her fascination and love for what is new.
("News! Oh yes, I
a hrnys J ike M''t.'S ."--II .3) She therefore desires not only a new companion to fill
the place of Miss Taylor but also someone to whom she can be useful. That is,
Emrra nt&gt;eds E
.onennt? on whom she can practice change . She notices the artless
Harriet Smith. She sets out to improve Harriet, detach her from her bad
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�"It would be an interesting and certainly a very kind undertaking, highly
becoming her own situation in life, her leisure, and her powers," (I.3) ..
"Emma never thinks of herself if she can do good to others." In telling this
to Mr. Knightley, Mr. Woodhouse unknowingly lets on that her concerns of being
useful to others are a constant distraction to solitude.
Emma's attachment to
Harriet will be even greater assurrance of not being alone than her companionship
with Mrs. Weston. Emma could do nothing for Mrs. Weston, but she can be useful to
Harriet. The power to have influence on the life of another intimately connects
us to that person. Harriet's life wil bear the mark of Emma, and Emmci will never
be alone. This is the -charm of meddling.
But the charm is deceptive.
Change always brings some loss along with its new
gains. It is not a simple thing to arrange the life of someone else, and Ennna's
first failure with Harriet, the mistake of Mr. Elton's behavior, brings her the
loss of some comfort.
Emma is a"1are to some. extent of her wrong conduct and
feels regret. But the discomfort is of the sort that is much alleviated upon
waking to a new morning.
This failure in meddling does not reveal all the deception of the charm.
Although Emma swears off matchmaking, thinking it "adventuring too far; assuming
too much making light of what is serious--a trick of what ought to be simple,''
'
.
she still applauds her having persuaded Harriet not to accept Robert Martin. She
then comically goes on to consider a match between Harriet and William Cox.
Ennna's blunder is not severe enough for its effect to be either radi ~ al or
lasting.
This blunder, which comes to light at the end of the first volume, is a tf-!ll i ng
foil to the blunder that comes to light in the last part of the thi r d
volume --Emma's mistake of the true object. of Harriet's attachment.
Emma's
meddling has failed miserably now. She has endeavored to give Harriett notions
of self-consequence , and Harrriet has dared to fall in love with the man Emn~ has
unwittingly loved for many years. This mistake promises a loss much greater than
a little discomfort:
Till now that she was threatened with its loss, Emma had never kno~n
how much of her happiness depended on being first with Mr. Knightley,
first in interest and affection. (III.12)
This loss--change--will leave Emma all alone:
The prospect before her now was threatening to a degree that could
not be entirely dispelled--that might
not
be
even
partially
brightened. If all took place that might take place among the circle
of her friends, Hartfield must be comparatively deserted; and she left
to cheer her father with the spirits only of ruined happiness.
(III.12)

comes in part wi t h his hybrid r aising : "Ther~ is something s o shocking in a
:hild ' s being ta~en away from his parents and natural home," (I . 11). Also the
illness of ~rank . s aunt M s. Churchill is offered up as what stood in the way of
r
Fran~'~ paying his.natu r al duty to his father and his bride . Mrs . Churchill's
detaining and calling back of her nephew riddles the course of events after
Frank's introduction - -most drastically with the postponement of the ball.
There
are als~ such unn~tural things as Emma's supposed growing neglect of her famil
for s~c1ety, da~cing, and a ball where a girl like Harriet can fix her sight on
man like Mr. Knightley .
Novelty, confusion, and disruption of nature make the middle of the novel a
maze of intrigue . Changes in the outer occurrences are now quick and close. Far
from disheartening Emma , as they may her father, they hold a great fascination
for ~er. What harm ~s there in ~etting in to the romantic image of Frank saving
Harriet fr~m the gypsies. a~d setting up a "scheme , a mere passive scheme?" Why
not let in to the deceiving charm of meddling, under which, though, lies great
sorrow?

!

II•

II

jusqu'~ ce qu'il comprenne qu'il est un
monstre incomprehensible."
--Pascal

Besides th: indulgence to Emma's inclination to look on change as gain of the
new, the arrival of Frank Churchill also marks the beginning of self-interset for
Emma. Emma always.believed--even before meeting Frank--that if she~ to marry,
no .one would su:t her rn?re t~an he. During his first visit to Highbury, Emma
begins :o wonder if she might Just not be in love with him. Upon consideration
s?e decid~s ~ot, but after he leaves and she hears of his expected return, a
little agitation sends her to further reflection. For the first time Emma
who
never thinks of herself if she can do good to others must think of herseif and
sort out her feelings.
'
. A person who is drawn into making change, forming even just a passive scheme
in order .to. combat solitude will find himself bringing on situations disruptiv~
to. t7anquillity: "She felt. as if the spring would not pass without bringing a
crisis, an event, ~ some~h~ng, t? alte: her present composed and tranquil state,"
(III.~). Once this crisis arises its proper resolution seems to demand
self-i~terest. A crisis brought on by defying solitude-bearing change face to
face will leave us alone--perhaps forever. The only way out of loneliness will
be to use our own resources . (Recall the irony of Mrs. Elton: "Blessed with so
many. resources within myself, the world was nothing to me."--II.15) This means
looking at ourselves, having a certain self-interest. Those who sneakily escape
chan~e encounter no crises.
But then no one would ever call Mr. Woodhouse
heroic.
The hero's resolution of a crisis begins in the appreciation of the crisis, the
realizaiton of his own wretchedness having brought on the crisis:

What makes this blunder so much more severe than the other is what has happened
in between the two.
Frank Churchill has entered upon the scene, and with him
novelty~ confusion, and unnaturalness come to play their rol:•
The n~velt~ com~s
with Frank's being new to Highbury, arriving at unexpected times, having his hair
cut in London. The confusion comes with his secret engagement to Jane Fairfax,
which plays on both Emma's delusive fascination that Jane has some attachment to
Mr. Dixon and the to-be-expected pairing or Emma and Frank. The unnaturalness

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How to understand the deceptions she had been thus practising on
herself and living under! The blunders, the blindness of her own head
and heart! She sat still, she walked about, she tried her own room,
she tried the shrubbery--in every place, every posture, she perceived
that sh7 had acted mos~ w:akly; that she had been imposed upon by
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�herself in a degree yet more mortifying; that she was wretched and
should probably find this day but the beginning of wretchedness .
To understand , thoroughly understand, her own heart , was the first
endeavour. (III . 11)
Emma has fought with change and has been violently hurt . Unbearable confusion
takes hold of her thoughts.
The inescapable feeling of her past weakness , the
pain of probably long - continued wretchedness, marks the first clear ing of her
confusion . Ennna cannot accept confusion; the situation must be made sense of.
But the realization of wretchedness cannot be much more comfortable to her than
unsettling confusion .
. Emma cannot settle with wretchedness . She must ask why she has come to be
wre t ched . She begins to answer by looking at her past vanity:
With insufferable vanity had she believed herself in the secret of
everybody's feelings, with unpardonable arrogance proposed to arrange
everybody's destiny . She was proved to have been universally mistaken,
and she had not quite done nothing--for she had done mischief.
(III.II)

To account for her present wretchedness Emma turns to her past assurance of her
greatness. Emma dared to work change, to arrange destinies, and her presumption
carries the shock of wretchedness. Not quite doing nothing, taking desti~ies in
hand, is the work of heroes, though. A hero's story, at least a comic hero's
story, cannot end in wretchedness~
Once aware of her weakness Emma longs for self - contentment. The hero ca~ envy
the boring old man, for that old man may be content with himself and at peace.
Mr. Woodhouse, ever concerned with the preserving of good health of his body and
the bodies of those he loves, is the image of self-contentment. But a boring man
can only be a valetudinarian of the body; he is unaware that there is a health
for the soul.
This is the health that Emma's wretchedness sets her out to
procure. She may in fact grow to give us along with Mrs. Weston "the idea of
being the complete picture of grown - up health," (I .5, emphasis added) .
The hero's sickness calls for the curing of heroic faculties . For Emma these
faculties are her understanding and her fancy . Emma is always admired for her
clevern e ss , quickness of mind, and observation . Mr . Knightley repeatedly appeals
to he r understanding . She excels by far her sister's power of observing . She
can quickly form an insightful judgment of character as we can see in her
cons id erat ion of M . El t on . Emma can obse r ve and read the appearances well .
rs
--That is until her second strength, "that very dear part of Emma, her fancy,"
intrudes. Emma can imagine herself the future Mrs. Frank Churchill long before
their meeting. She can imagine Harriet the child of a gentleman in the face of
Mr. Knightley's well-founded suggestions otherwise.
In her drawing she :an
portray Harriet a bit more becoming than she truly is. Emma has the charming
talent of being able to manipulate and fabricate appearances. She can see what
there is to be seen and make seen what is not.
In failing to notice her love for Mr. Knightley and fancying herself in love
with Frank Churchill there is a conflict of understanding and fancy.
So there
seems to be, at leas~ to Harriet, in Eunna's attaching Harriet to Frank instead ~f
Mr. Knightley in her mind.
The occasion, therefore, of Emma's blunder is
conflict of understanding and fancy. The first response upon recognizing the
blunder is still a confusion of these faculties. Emma tries to be detached and
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Harriet and Mr. Knightley. Her fancy confusedly comes to
the
understanding. The result is the mistaken regret that the
match
possible.

aid of
is all

her
too

Somehow, for Emma's health of
soul,
understanding and fancy must be
reconciled.
Mr. Knight ley is right that Emma wi 11 never submit to "anything
requiring industry
and
patience and a subjection of the fancy to the
understanding."
(I.5) True, such a subjection would bring less pain, but it
cannot be expected from .a hero.
A hero needs keen understanding. He must be
able to read the :hanging appe~rances well and recognize heightened solitude.
But he cannot let his understanding overcome his power to look on changes as gain
of the new.and to con~emplate future change. He must not just accept what is
brought to light but bring to Ught ("fancy" .: phaino) things himself
Emma~s. l?nging for self-contentment can
only
be satisfied by a true
reconc1~1at~on o~ her unde~sta~ding and f~ncy. But what is a strong enough guide
for th~1r direction? Emma s first lessening of the pain of her wretchedness is
found in her resolution to come to know herself:
the only ~ource whence ~nything like consolation or composure
could be draMl was in the resolution of her own better conduct and the
hop~ that however ~nferior in spirit and gaiety might be the ;ollowing
and ever~ future winter of her life to the past, it would yet find her
mor~ rational, more acquainted with herself
and leave her less to
reg re t \1111 en i t we re gone • (I II • I 2 )
'
Emm13 desires to grow acquainted
with herself, think of herself before doing
good to others. Emma promises to
come to act with the dignity found in being
ever mindful of her self-respect.
S?e has turne~ to ~eek knowledge of herself, and the conclusion of the first
series of ~eflections is.that she never really cared for Frank Churchill at all.
Her af~ection for Mr. Knightley, the only sensation revealed to her, is the only
s7nsation that does not make her sorrowfully indignant and ashamed.
Emma
d1~covers a love for truth, a willingness to submit to the influence of
Kn~ghtley . I~ only she had a?cepted Mr. Knightley's penetrating suggestion t~:~
Fr~nk Churchill loved Jane Fairfax, she might have escaped her tragic mistake.
If .only she had followed Mr. Knightley's known wishes in paying attention to Miss
Fairfax, "she must in all probability, have been spared from every pain which
pressed on her now" (III.12).
It is painstaking and bitter to try to
make sensf' of confusion in the heart.
But t~e sense . of progress an·d honesty
are great rewards for the melancholy of
scrutiny:

The weather continued much the same all the following morning; and
the same loneliness and the same melancholy seemed to reign at
Hartfield; but in the afternoon it cleared; the wind changed into a
softer qua:ter; :he clouds were carried off; the sun appeared; it was
With all the eagerness which such a transition gives,
summer again.
Emma .r:solve~ to be out-of-doors as soon as possible.
Never had the
ex~ui~1te sight, smell, sensation of nature--tranquil, warm, and
brilliant after a storm--been more attractive to her. She longed for
the serenity they might gradually introduce • • • • (III.13)
Change has brought

solitude

to

Emma.

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But

as

she

seeks t o gain com f ort b y
·
.

�.
s begins to pass. Mr. Perry comes to
.ng to know herself t h e l one 1 ines
. h . h"
turni
· h h.
climate of health, wh1c
is 1s
.Hartfield after dinner and brings wit
1m a
professional concern.
when her truthfulness to herself leads her
Emma's health of soul is only se~~:e
in terms of a plot, seems to be only
to a broader love of truth. But Mr.1sinightley. When Mr. Knightley enters ~he
possible with an attachment to
Re asks her to bear with
lk "th Emma he has a truth to revea 1 •
shrubbery to wa
wi
'.
h.
. t. ism
Only upon looking closely at
it as well as she has borne with a 11 is cr1 ic
•
M
Knightley's love
what appears about her and what lies within her own he~r~~-~:; understanding and
for her and her love for him--will Emma be healthy.
do
fancy must somehow marry truth--which all knights defen •
.
nc1tice truth
·
h · h
·
It demands keen understanding to
A marriage to trut is eroic •
h t .· ~ criticism that
that appears. But it also demands keen fancy to endure t e ryino

truth presents:
You hear nothing but truth from me.
you, and you have borne it as no other
borne it. (III .13)

I have blamed you and lectured
woman in Engl:rnd would have

account ed to her ability to imagi.ne
Emma's endurance of such trials is to be nd to design destinies, including
imagine and work change a
· d t
and work change. To of tbe fancy.
Emma's understanding makes ber suite
o
our own, is the work
that allows her to bear it for the good and
truth. But it is her fancy
appreciate it.
Is anything too wondrous for the Lord?"
III. "Why did Sarah laugh • • •
--Genesis
reconciled with her understanding. by the help of an
When Emma's fancy was not
.
.
of
h
could fail miserably.
Mr.
attachment to truth, her proJection
c ange
t
der
h
brings a momentous change to Emma. Emma m~s
won ·.
Knightley's proposal to er
k
how to hope for could come so pleasingly true.
how a change she did not even now
Emma was almost ready to sink
The dread of being awakened from
most prominent feeling. (III.13)

under the agitation of this moment.
the happiest dream was perhaps the

·
K · htley's fantastic hope is true.
Emma's happy dream is reall, andl_Mr.f nigy and understanding towards truth and to
• ty of sou
to a ign anc
.
A.
h
It tak es ma t ur l
K . htley has patiently guided Emma • .lj_s er
have a truthful hop:· The mature Mr. n1gnd ainted pictures of a more cautious,
educator he has manipulated what he ~:~~la en~eavor has gone into making his hope
caring Enrrna that come true. Not a 1
e
that Emma will marry him come true.
But the outcome does not rest wholly on his work:
wholly unsuspicious of his own influence. He
Re had in fact been
·
't
H had come
followed her into the shrubbery with no idea of trying i •
~
. h
how she bore Frank Churchill's engagement wi~ no
in anxiety to see
·f h
11 ed him an
selfish view, no view at all but of endeavouring, i s e a ow
k of
to Soot he or to counsel her. The rest had been the wor
opening,

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the moment, the immediate effect of what he· heard on his feelings. The
delightful assurance of her total indifference towards Frank Churchill,
of her having a heart completely disengaged from him, had given birth
to the hope that in time he might gain her affection himself; but it
had been no present hope--he had only, in the momentary conquest of
eagerness over judgement, aspired to be told that she did not forbid
his attempt to attach her.
The superior hopes which gradually opened
were so much the more enchanting. (III.13)
Mr. Knightley's lack of suspicion of his influence, the absence of selfish
view, the spontaneity, the conquest of eagerness over judgment, and the
enchantment of hope all speak of grace. Mr. Knightley knows himself, has become
champion of truth, and has ordered his soul with dignity. Re has tried to
influence the appearances about him for the good. What is beyond his power but
not beyond his good hope may be granted him by grace.
The endeavor of a mature soul can bring about many beneficial changes. But it
is unlikely that one person's good work to arrange the life of another will be
fully effective.
Mr. Knightley's hopes of Emma's accepting a proposal of
marriage from him, although enchanting, always remain superior. But when the
hopes come true, we must ask "why?"
What sense does the ans"'er "grace" make for a book whose greatest villains are
the vicar and his wife and whose heroine rejoices over not being able to get to
church on Christmas or the next Sunday? How can grace act where "devotion might
be interrupted, [but] curiosity could not be satisfied by a bride in a pew,"
(II .14).
The story of chance may seem odd and the story of good fortune might seem
nice. But both of these in contrast to the story of grace seem rather dismal. I
doubt that these stories hold any lasting interest for us or can continue to make
us laugh. Everything unexpected may be funny, but good comedy goes beyond the
funny unexpected.
It seems to allow room to hope for the unexpected, rising
above the story of chance in this way. It also seems to hold interest by telling
of growth, rising above the static story of good fortune in this way, since good
fortune requires no special maturity to notice or receive.
Jane Austen secures these two claims for her comedy with great artfulness. She
never lets us forget that this world is contrived, directed, and orderly: She
exercises judicious balance placing one blunder in the beginning, one at the end;
one instance of penetration for Mr. John Knightley in the course of the first
blunder, one for his brother in the course of the second. Her ordering is almost
intrusive with the three marriages at the end. And then there are such distinct
resemblances .
Among the marriages: the John Knightleys', Eunna's and Mr.
Knightley's, Frank Churchill's and Jane Fairfax's, and Harriet's and Robert
Martin's. Among the characters: Almost everyone can bear some telling resemblance
to Emma--Jane Fairfax, Miss Bates, Frank Churchill, Mr. Woodhouse, Isabella, Mrs.
Weston, and Mr. Knightley. Jane Fairfax resembles Mr. Knightley in character and
Mrs. Weston and Harriet in
situation.
Mr. Woodhouse is as engagingly
self-centered as Mr. Weston and as much a homebody as Mr. John Knightley.
This is a world where events bear the clear mark of manipulation. From the
beginning we have an assurance, from Mrs . Weston, that all is destined to turn
out for the good in the end: " • • • [Emma] will never lead anyone really wrong;
she will make no lasting blunder; where Emma errs once, she is in the right a
hundred times," (I.5). The novel seems to bar all chance and invite all hope.
The balances and resemblances also offer foils against which we can take notice
of Emma's growth. When Emma believes everything is going well with Harriet and
Mr. Elton, she might think Hartfield to be a pocket of good fortune:

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�There does seem to be a something in the air of Hartfield which gives
love exactly the right direction and sends it into the very channel
where it ought to flow.
The course of true love never did run smooth--

A Hartfield edition
passage.

of

Shakespeare

would

have a long note on that

The course of love does not run smooth, at least for a while. When we notice
Ennna's growth out of failure, we notice something hope for good fortune never
could excite. Hope in grace, though, might.
To notice grace, though not necessarily to receive it, takes a niature soul. We
must be able to see that things might not always turn out for the good.
We
therefore get to see the two blunders, and Emma gets to be bothered by a check to
all her great happiness.
Harriet remains hurt, and it is most J y Emma's fault•
It seems that not everything will turn out thoroughly good.
Emma feels the weight of Harriet's claim, and how best to guard her COQfort
becomes the quest ion. Emma knows that it is really "too much to hope even of
Harriet that she could be in love with more than three men in one year,"
(III.15). Harriet's pain will not wholly subside until Mr. Knightley is
forgotten, which will not be soon . But Emma must hope that some e:omfort can be
found. She therefore devises her last scheme of th~ novel and sends Harriet to
the home of her sister and brother-in-law.
Emma fully understands her powerlessness to do any better than this. But
Ennna's growth of soul has led her to the alliance of fancy and understanding with
truth. I said earlier that a well-grown soul, like Mr. Knightley's, gains the
possibility of truthful hope. It seems that Emma's might now be well ordered
enough to invite grace. Perhaps she will receive it.
When Emma hears from Mr. Knightley of Harriet's engagement to Robert Martin, it
seems that she has received grace. Nothing that Emma has done stands in the way
any longer of her happiness. She truly appears "faultless in spite of all her
faults." Such is the power of grace.
Emma now has a genuine hold on "some of
the best blessings · of existence," which we are told as we first meet her she
seems to unite. That existence has its blessings is a religous sentiment, and
grace might be what delivers these blessings.
We gain assurance that the answer "grace" makes sense when we can lau~h at the
story. The comedy of Emma gains its force from the fact that after thrngs ~eem
to settle in their turn for the worse, they take a turn for the better. Things
have the audacity to turn out right in the end, and that ' s lau~hable • .
Laughter seems to be a healthy recognition of grace. Sarah in the Bible cannot
help laughing when she hears the Lord's rnessenge: report that she will soon bear
a son.
It is too incomprehensible that a ninety-year-old woman can have a
child. God's fancy--his power to change the way things see~--is too great not to
bring on laughter. The messenger seems to approve of this response, for he
comically taunts Sarah:
"Why did Sarah laug.h, saying, 'Shall I in truth bear a child, old as
I am?' Is anything too wondrous for the Lord?" • • • Sarah dissembled,
saying, "I did not laugh," for she was frightened.
He replied, "But

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you did laugh."

(Genesis 18:13-15)

We must laugh at the incomprehensible close of Emma's story, and so must she:
Serious she was, very serious, in her thankfulness and in her
resolutions; and yet there was no preventing a laugh, sometimes in the
very midst of them. She must laugh at such a close--such an end of the
doleful disappointment of five weeks back--such a heart--such a
Harriet! (III.18)

·:··'

" 1" 2
dth, hope, love abide • •

"

--Paul to the Corinthians
Changes occur in Mr. Knightley's and Hariett's lives
that betray the
craftsmanship of grace. For a religious person grace 1 s probably always at work
in the designing of destinies. But there is room for human initiative: Mr.
Knightly ~ends himself off~ and Emma sends off Harriet to the John Knightleys'.
At Bru~swick Square Mr. Kn1ghtley and Harriert might have come into contact with
something that could act as the instrument of grace. it is rather clear that the
model of the goodness of home had its effect on Mr. Knightley:

He had gone to learn to be indifferent.
But he had gone to a wrong
place. There was too much domestic happiness in his brother's house •
(III .13)

Emma's world apears to be very much a world of social man. That is what makes
Emma's candidness to Miss Bates on the Box Hill expedition so distasteful. Emma
t:ansgresses the strictures of social intercourse much more blameworthily than
Miss Bates has ever done. As Mr. Knightley pointed out to her earlier
it is
almost human instinct to preserve smooth social relations even at the e~pense of
truth:

We all know the difference between the pronouns "he" or "she" and
"thou,'.' the plainest spoken amongst us; we all feel the influence of a
something beyond common civili.ty in our personal intercourse with each
other--a something more early implanted. we cannot give anybody the
very disagreeable hints that we may have been very full of the hour
before. We feel things differently. (II.15)
The demands of society are very early concerns, but there are other concerns
still more basic : the concerns of home. Mr. John Knightley finds Mr. Weston's
dependence on society for his comforts a bit unnatural. Emma was half a mind to
take up this reflection of her brother-in-law's when he shares it on his
Christmas visit, but she struggles and lets it pass:

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�She would keep the peace if possible; and there was something
honourable
and
valuable in the strong
domestic
habits,
the
all-sufficiency of home to himself, when ce resulted her brother's
disposition to look down on the common rate of social intercourse and
those to whom it was imp ortant.
It had a high claim to forbearance.

High in t'be rank of ·i-.l-'r nnist serious
t: 1
·,.J
l· t·.i1 t - ft:, H
f &lt;-· 1 1, --; r :1"'· \·':.::::.
t r1e r E' f 1e c t i n n t h ., t 8 1 ] n c c i::' ~ s i t. y c f c n n c f' ~ '. n.; :u I
:
fr t": rn '!,I l • t'- '' ; :., \ i t -~ •.~- ~;
would r:;oon t:f' OVf"·r . Thi- ·3 ifgtd.se, eql1iv,)c .::it:l "~ n, myst~·ry, sc l : .'.1( .. ;·,, ! 1 1,
·
·
1-: t-&gt; r t 0 p r a c t i s t-' , ir i g b t s (,o r 1 b c, c v (-· r • S h (· c o u ~ d n ~, ,,
? o c -~:.
( ~ , : ·. · ~ · 1 1
gi ving him t h f;t fu ::1 an,: f!f'. rfect c ot ; fid ..." n Lt' whictJ l-:. ·r d&gt;:r·' ·f·, ; ; 1 .. :·: \ . £:J:;
r.lost ready tl'.1 we 1 cc1' '. f· ;-i s .: 1 duty.
(JJT . 18)

(I . 11)

Emma later comes to share something of her brothe r's disposition . When she
realizes that she is only one of Mr . Weston's several intimates that he asked to
survey the Crown before the ball , she is a bit disappointed :
She liked his open manners, but a little less o f open - heartedness
would have made him a higher character. General benevolence , but not
general friendship, made a man what he ought to be . She could fancy
such a man . (III .2)

Noh
th.-1t
c~. '-11Jty .c, ,. ~... r 11ir-: o f t-"&gt;: ptt- s si o n hetwf·E'. n Emme! hnd M::- .. f: · : -..' t :r .:-' ~- ; , :
hf'l-'tl ri.~.r1.acf.'c with t.n~t 1~,
•rnuth f' r· hr:rc i c turn comeB:
th?
r0 ;-·1.:• .• r . r: (• f the
,~ ,-n ,r• T t: f :. r t'- ~: pt• dj e n1 · ; w:th tb·, ci::n(f·rri for what is tn:. 1: ;_ :; c;d,
.:· im .. • 1,, .-:1;,t. s !c L1:
11f:pf u l to ~larr~. ~ · t , nnc~ •
&lt;'f't"&gt;dit·ri l" _y : ~; h e r concfrn in mald.nt:, H;..rr:cr. 's
tn &lt;.•tcl: ,,_· ; l:
Mr. ~ 1t o n: "Tb:·
1ongeT
sht
cor.~; id(· rt-d it, the f;r t at 1:-· J ~•• n :; 1-t· r ~&lt;, .-,.::. ~:· c~ i l '
&lt; . p·diency&gt;'' ( T .4). Euf th f· e &gt; ssiv t: desirE: tc" bt: usE:fu~ ic• r -1 !·;;1 :-' lt-~: l ·ifi&lt; ·:c; t &lt;:
"&gt;
:e:e
.' : L i d . o f s ~· ;_ : [· -- ront· 1-· ntn: t'nt -- sonH:.~tbing our hen·. gainPG ~rcn :d i g nint u ndt·r ~ tcrnd in~
:rn d
·· ,rn ,: y tc·h· t rch
: rnth,.
.Expediency betrays t00 1,1,:: 11 nnn !puL1t:i(&gt;n
;;i ·,,;
cc&gt;1 1l : v
lf.'· -m ,,dr{ 1ins .
Tt: is D(Jt loyo.1 enougl: tc; tn: ti-. f·~) r- '' h ere.
Wl1 :--n ~,- ,
c- n:~v t-·r·sc· ·•... ith thc:se we love, ot:r conco:n c- .Jn t-. (• r~)tl: '·•'h &lt; ;s truJy
it
(1rncond-it l(1n ~dly)
~o od.
Emma's mardagi'&gt;
to Mr . Kr:ight10:r
i .s ~_..: ..-.J J.n thj,s
~.., 3 y- -·f"?VOl ;; ::·(Jd fc.r } it t 1 ~ · H&lt;''n ry Knight 1 ey, even goou fc., r
Vir,
~lcod h ut:_.., E'.
It
is
f.ml! 1
;i's t; ,s~ t&lt; : b rf n ~: her fathe.r, whom sbE· 1o"es, to "1elcornE. what iB good.
At thf'.' c1ei s (' 0f t'h. i noveJ Emma's
talt•nl
for &lt;:lrT8nging the livE:s of other~ 'has
: , 1- • E' n f u 11 y (. 11 ~ t i " a L ·· .3 •
··' he urn i ndu c e Mr • Wood ho u s e t o c on s en t t c1 he r n~ a 1 f'i ~1 ~ t&gt; •
~ h ... r- :s! ~o1 Jor·1 ~ i rs . ;.~r· ston 's Jead i [I prf'senting, thf' subject as both s r· t tJp( nnd
.•
1
~ ,· .. , ,_: --- • · .; ,; t:• ·· ·~· ,. ~ 1 &lt;~vJ&lt;JT t= ::i f' t bP n e rtrJ y E"'"lu ~i1 i.n,purt cince of the t.vm r t- ccn !•, f·r 1d cii i ~·, :1r
I• i ·: .. 1 .. c'l·Jli , S ':"~ ' n!nd,"
:-.,
(1Jf.17).
Put &lt;H tlie t i me for the Wf'dd~n t :iPf. r ::: .:ichc;
.·· r,.' r- 11. \.fc,,dhcusr· resign&lt;; birnseH to
i t~
i1H.:vitabi1ity without:
bC ·. ··: i:t ;llL
iu;
(~ f'.' ~ ~ r :-d:i ility, Fm:nJ's fancy and underst&lt;rnding meet an(lthl:'r crisis .
.i:-_ 1 ~ ;;;
l.:1_9~·.Q..
rr.cit iv!r. Woodh0t•SE'· -wiJJ calm down soon after the weddjng, but ~h· 2.]_1"_'.jL_::·. G~ t:is
suffering is too strong for her to go on with it:
1

1

Perhaps Emma fancies a man who recognizes that men are not first so cial
animals, that they are ultimately alone. This man must recognize that solitude.
is painful and that the safest, most legitimate, noblest way t o comba t that pain
is with the love to be found in a good home.
Home can be the seat of the starkest solitude as Hartfield seems t o be after
Emma recognizes her second blunder. The weather is dismal, and she is left all
alone with her father: "It reminded he r o f their first forlor n tete-a-t'ete on the
evening of Mrs. Wes ton's wedding-day; but Mr. Knightley had walked in then, soon
after tea and dissipated every melancholy fancy," (III .22). Hartfield seems to
have lost,what magic it might have had at the opening of Harriet's attachment to
Mr. Elton. It is time for the magic of the heart t o take over. Mr. Knightley
must walk in again.
When he does, he brings with him love that can make Hartfield a rival to
Brunswick Square in the power of domestic happiness. The "all-sufficiency of
home" at Hartfield will be even greater t han at Brunswick Square since it will be
heroic.
Part of the heroism of Emma's and Mr. Knightley's marriage is that it
can be the occasion t o share trut h . Society cannot always allow this; Emma ought
not to be candid to Miss Bates. Emma fears, though, that even her love for Mr .
It causes her great pain not to
Knightley will not allow the sharing of truth.
be able to divulge the truth of her conduct regarding Ha rr iet.
But she can divulge her true feelings at the momen t of the proposal:
Seldom, very seldom, does complete trut h belong to any human
disclosure; seldom can it happen t hat something is not a little
disguised or a little mistaken; but where, as in this case, t hough the
conduct is mistaken, the feelings are not, it may not be very
material. (III .13 )
That Emma and Mr. Knightley can feel genuinely and show their feelings as~ures
u s that they have gone beyond common intercourse . But the power to bare painful
truths like that of Emma's conduct, even to someone as dearly loved as M
r.
Knightley, is rare, heroic, and not quite human. With the help of t he graceful
event of Harriet's engagement even this comes:

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1

Sti]], however, he was not happy. Nay, he appeared so r:mcb &lt;;t1 1er wisf'
b j_ ~i d2ughter 'S ('OUT &lt;'lg€ fa i 1t&gt;d. r.be C Oll Jd not bear tc S E&gt;E• r it;·.

t hM

s~ f f ~r{ng; to knn~ him

f~ncying

unc1d:·r s tnn&lt;ling alr:iost acquiEsced
Kn ig1it 1eys that when once the

hi~s~Jf

i.n

the

neglected;
Assurance•

and
of

though

her

tl ~ P

Mr.

both

evE::nt YIE'H over hi.s distress would be
so o n uver too, she hPsitated -- she could not proceed. (JJI.19)

But i.n ht:r ~•ttach!H'nt. to t.ruth Emma h&amp;s g&lt;dnt:&gt;d trE· .:.e}f-contentment shf· longed
f o r • S r'. &lt;&gt; k nows h E-" r s nu 1 , a nd i t i s we 1 1 c, rd f r e d •
Hc· r
s o u 1 c an n ow in v i e

grB ce .
Mr. Knightley's bridl" is to be "thf.· c:he£;t?n, the first, the d&lt;:arest, the friend,
the wife to whom he l ooked fo r a]J the best b1E's si ngs of existence,'' (ITI.12).
This is not Ea rriE·t but Emni&lt;:i. TiiE'. irr.::ig,t&gt; of don:u. tic pf·ace once again acts as the
instr11n:t-•nt u, hring on grace . This ti.me Fartfit&gt;ld, not
Brunswick Square, with
Emma's and µr. KnightlPy's loves brings g r ace tu ~ ~ cur~ the best blessings of
~xistence f( ' r aJ1 in volv€&gt;d . TI-:f&gt; grau· cor.;es iri the form of poultry-yard raids.
Mr. Woodhcuse fea rs housebreaking, and ''the strength, resolution. presence of
rr,ind and
of the M
r. Knight h-y s commandecl. his fulJpst depPndPnce," (JII.19). Mr.
Woodhouse's n0rvous systeo is hrought
to oper a t ~ in ~nother ~ ~y-- h~ is able to
l ook on the marriagf' as good - - by an act of grac e -with the image of the peae:e of
Hartfield in the fore ground .
Grace . a lways at work in the designing of destinies, still leaves room for
human arrangement of 1 ives. Emma
is right; there is a third sort of matchmaking

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�---(which Mr. Woodhouse's change of mind truly is) that is "a something between the
do-nothing and the do-all," (I.1). I t takes talent, a special strength of soul,
to meddle well and with love.
Emma Woodhouse seems to have this talent whose
basis is self-contentment gained by an attachment to truth and an ability to see
not only what appears but also what lies beyond appearance, something a Mrs.
Elton could never do:
• • • Mrs. Elton, from the ·particulars detailed by her husband,
thought it all extremely shabby and inferior to her own. "Very little
white satin, very few lace veils; a most pitiful business!
Selina
would stare when she heard of it." But in spite of these deficiencies,
the wishes, the hopes, the confidence, the predictions of the small
band of true friends who witnessed the ceremony, were fully answered in
the perfect happiness of the union. (III.19)

One night beneath the turning sky, I stood
Above the floor -- the cusp bearing us two
In its great sweeping round.
You, sleeping pearl crescent,
Transfixed me at your bed, as if below
The gently floating shell in slow turning
The sea pulse brought you for the land toward day,
While the deeps still wound in your wide black hair .
What fe 11 away
Suddenly lost
Like a warm stone
When I reached down
And you stirred?

-- Pierre H. Gagnier

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                    <text>SPRING 1986

�ENERGEIA: The activity in which anything is fully itself.

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�CONTENTS
PHOTOGRAPH

Christopher K. Watson

1

THE CHARACTER OF A METER

David Amirthanayagam

2

POEM

James Brown

8

THE GORGON AND THE BRIDE
OF LEBANON

Catherine Irvine

10

SOCRATES

Elizabeth De Mare

22

THE JACOBSEN CUT:
A GEOMETRICAL PROPOSITION

Henry Higuera

27

PHOTOGRAPH

Christopher K. Watson

33

PURGATION OF THE HUMAN SPIRIT

William O'Grady

34

A WAY TO THINK ABOUT DARK TIMES

William O'Grady

40

TWO POEMS: #3 AND #8

Stuart Sobczynski

45

FINAL CAUSE AND THE PROBLEM
OF EXISTENCE

Jim Guszca

46

ANTIGONE

Hugh Brantner

49

THREE FACES (WATERCOLOR)

Yolanda Rivera

55

SONNET FOR A SLAVIC MINER

A.J. Krivak

58

THE DEAD

Renee Bergland

59

THE FLESH MADE WORD:
SOME THOUGHTS ON GOGO~S
STORY "THE OVERCOAT"

Christopher K. Watson

61

LA REINE DE JADIS

Liz Waldner

67

�1

�The Character of a Meter
David Amirthanayagam

A friend of mine who helps young children learn to read and write told me recently about a special class of children:
these children read very well, in that
they can follow words on a page with their eyes and sound them out. If, however,
they are asked about the meaning of a passage they have just read, they make no connection. The words themselves and the act of reading seem to bear no relation in
their understanding to anything the words might mean. For this reason, schools single them out as "problem" children; the young learners grow greatly distressed and
discouraged by their confusion and its effect of singling them out.
Yet I wonder whether the problem lies not with the children, but with the words,
and whether, taken another way, this "problem" can be seen as the root and mainspring
of our poetry. For clearly, words have a dual nature, which confuses children, and
ought more often to arrest us. First, they are signs, which have a relationship with
what they signify, or simply with what is outside them, by which we express their
"meaning".
(This relationship of "meaning" is clearly very subtle and complex, and
might hurl us into philosophy.) Second, they are things in themselves, half-created,
sensible measures of space and time.
In this second nature, words are elements of
poetry. We can see that the connection between meaning and the words themselves
might not be obvious for children. I suggest that, if we are willing to accept that
words have two natures, neither of which is necessarily problematic, the tension (or
harmony) between the two might be the richest source of our best poetry.
I reflect on these things because I have been asked, for my edification, to do
what problem children do, that is, to sever the connection between measure, or form,
and meaning. In examining the iambic pentameter as used by five English poets, I see
that this can be done fruitfully, both for its own sake, because the meter itself is
a changing thing of beauty and character, and for the sake of reharmonizing the
duality. I mean that one can see a kind of meaning in meter. Even with my limited
knowledge of metrics, the simplest awareness of metrical, or more generally, formal
purposiveness on the part of the poet sent my study into realms of significance deeper than this paper can practically follow--waters I fear to tread safely for long,
though I might, in what follows, rush in on impulse.
Chaucer, Shakespeare, Milton, Pope, and Wordsworth all employ the iambic
pentameter line.
I will look, as agreed, at the opening of the Canterbury Tales,
Sonnet 29, the opening of Paradise Lost, An Essay On Criticism, and "Tintern Abbey".
The line is recognizable in each poem as the material and vehicle of the art; yet in
each it takes on a characteristic signature dress. Calling the line of each poet a
signature might allow me to conceal my critical, formal duty behind a claim for the
uniqueness and individuality of each poet. Yet I find I can get a good way into the
individuality of the poets by treating their lines formally, arranging their dress
into its parts. Three "parts,''. or elements, of the pentameter line single themselves
out, as signature strokes: rhyme, enjambment, and metrical substitution. Each is
conspicuous through its presence or absence.
From hearsay I gather that the Old English poetic line had four strong Germanic
stresses, with a great variety of syllable counts and sometimes a dropping of the
fourth stress. The effect of these was vigor and variety, without rhyme. My crude

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sense of such things is that the Norman conquest brought French grace and syllabic
verse into our language, producing at last the harmonious synthesis of Chaucer's
five-stress, ten-syllable, Middle English line.
There is nothing composite or artificial, however, about Chaucer's line, despite
its genealogy; there can be no more natural a line than Chaucer's in English. Dryden
later characterized the verse as having "the rude Sweetness of a Scotch Tune ... which
is natural and pleasing, though not perfect". The last remark was based, I think, on
an incomplete appreciation of final "e" and the phenomenon of elision. Following my
text's editor's instructions, I find Chaucer's lines to be true pentameters. Consider lines 13-14 of the General Prologue:
And palmeres for to seken straunge strondes
To ferne halwes, kowthe in sondry londes
If palmeres scans as a dactyl, the second foot of the first line is an anapestic substitution; final -e in kowthe elides with the following vowel.
These are two
pentameters with feminine endings. I think Dryden's Scottish prejudice stems from
the Middle English vowel sounds, and so I partly hear his "rude Sweetness"; yet at
the same time, the most remarkable thing I observe about the lines is their elegance
and stately grace of movement, unmatched in the later poets. The cause of this grace
is the gentle lilt of the French "e" and of the long vowels. The latter essentially
introduce the quantitative element into a stress meter; the combined effect of quantity, stress, and final "e" seems impossible now to reproduce. Consider line 5:
When Zephirus eek with his sweete breeth
In the iambic scansion, it seems to run spondee, pyrrhic, trochee, iamb, iamb. This
peculiarity comes to light, however: the initial spondee is a stress spondee, while
the other feet are stressed and quantitative. Note the breathtaking way the line
prepares for "sweete breeth"; I would prefer to measure only four feet, naming stress
spondee, quantitative anapest, anticipatory pyrrhic, gorgeous quantitative cretic.
Rude sweetness indeed!
In terms of our three signatures, we call this verse rhyming, closed, and metrically variant, though all five poets employ metrical variance, and so the question
becomes one of degree. Here the amount of metrical substitution is relatively small,
though we have seen its artful use.
I think Chaucer's regular iambic line, with
stress, quantity, and romance "e", is too musical to become monotonous, even in
lengthy service. The romance "e" also waters the significance of the rhyme; in Middle English, rhyme seems more nature than art. Not so with Modern English: compare
Dorothy Sayers' translation of Dante's Italian, which does nothing but mock the terza
rima with forced rhymes.
Shakespeare's Sonnet 29 reveals the modern iambic pentameter as an element of an
overarching form. The sonnet itself is larger than any particular language: it is a
form of "thought poetry," shaped by end rhyme into three quatrains and a couplet, or
two quatrains and a sestet. The form is logical, and yet the poem's meaning is rarely the implied syllogism. The question of poetry's dual nature, and ours, becomes
~ipe and mysterious in the sonnet.
The sonnet's thought is a thought that needs measure and time, and spaced rhyme.
And not just any measure:
in English the
pentameter is no arbitrary brick, but the only measure to suit and space the rhymes,
the only context that gives the thought its life. English hexameters fall apart at
the seam; tetrameters are too short (see Shakespeare's unimitated sonnet number 145).
Here follows the poem. Note the structural significance of end rhyme, the occasional tasteful trochaic or spondaic substitution, and the stunning use of enjambment
in line 12, made most poignant and meaningful by its avoidance elsewhere.

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�When in disgrace with Fortune and mens eyes,
I all alone beweepe my out -cast state,
And trouble deafe heaven with my bootlesse cries,
And looke upon my selfe and curse my fate.
Wishing me like to one more rich in hope,
Featur'd like him, like him with friends possest,
Desiring this mans art, and that mans skope,
With what I most injoy contented least;
Yet in these thoughts my selfe almost despising,
Haplye I thinke on thee, and then my state,
Like to the Larke at breake of daye arising
From sullen earth sings himns at Heavens gate,
For thy sweet love remembred such welth brings,
That then I skorne to change my state with Kings.
A peculiarity of this sonnet is that it "turns" twice, once at line 9, and again
in the closing couplet. This is to say, it exhibits a tension between the Petrarchan ·
(octe t-sestet ) and Shakespearian forms.
I noticed this also in two of Charles
Baudelaire's sonnets, "La Beaute" and "La Musique". The tension there pulls the other way: both are Petrarchan sonnets, but with closing couplets in the sestet . In
"La Beaute" the couplet stares at us with "de purs miroirs qui font toutes choses
plus belles:/Mes yeux, mes larges yeux, aux clartes eternelles!" In "La Musique", it
introduces elements of the dark and dreadful with a sinister enjambment ("Me
bercent"), then turns the poem on its head with despairing swiftness: "D'autres fois,
calme plat, grand miroir/De mon desespoir!"
In Shakespeare's sonnet, enjambment and substitution are used sparingly, as
counterpoint, and so with great effect. In Milton, they become the rule, producing a
line of awesome power and vigor. His iambic pentameter is unrhymed, open, and full
of substitution.
Milton's case against rhyme (or Rime) is powerfully made, "as a thing of itself ..• trivial and of no true musical delight; which consists onely in apt Numbers,
fit quantity of Syllables, and the sense variously drawn out from one Verse into another, not in the jingling sound of like endings." He was wrong, however, to call
rhyme "the Invention of a barbarous age, to set off wretched matter and lame Meeter,"
for Chaucer defies any such criticism. But English had changed. I am no linguist,
but Milton's language seems less French than Chaucer's, but more Anglo-Saxon and more
Latin. Under these conditions, the pentameter unleased the power of stress.
Heroic verse, except in Old English, had known no such stress.
Homer's and
Virgil's lines were also open and unrhymed, but Homer's Greek hadn't stress (and
didn't need it!) while Latin stress was more or less strait-jacketed by the adoption
of Greek quantitative standards.
In Milton, open lines and substitution bring the
stressed feet into their own.
Milton's freedom in substitution was no license:
his line was strictly
decasyllabic, so only trochees, spondees and pyrrhics could be used.
Consider the
effects these three have in sharpening the image and making the line itself brood:
And chiefly Thou 0 Spirit ...
.•. with mighty wings outspred

I confess I am better at feeling than pointing out such usages, unless they are both
obvious and effective, as above. That we feel the effects of such substitutions
without always needing to account for them, was made apparent to me when I looked
again at Blake's The Sick Rose; for our class's discussion, and the poem's interest,
surely stemmed from the black and consummating spondaic substitution in the phrase,
"dark secret love".
One characteristic of the open line is that it can begin with a verb. A whole
range of effects can be transmitted this way; here we see an active, Middle English
verb opening the line with a stressed spondee, supporting sense with number:
Him the Almighty Power
Hurld headlong flaming from th'Ethereal Skie
With hideous run and combustion down
To bottomless perdition.
I find it remarkable and ironic that in looking back to classical poetry, the
English iambic pentameter rebels against the norms of its upbringing, and yet discovers not something classical, but something completely new about itself. A rebellious
line for a rebellious angel!
Pope, on the other hand, as a translator and critic, is a follower and no rebel,
though he makes an i mpass ioned eulogy and justification of t he critical life in his
Essay On Criticism. I find his iambic pentameter the most troubling of all.
By our classification, the lines are closed rhyming couplets with a fair amount
of substitution. This sounds like Chaucer's line (!), but the two are even further
apart than their separation in time would indicate. Rhyming here is premeditated
bravado.
In modern English it can be a powerful tool, and surely Pope can thank
rhyme for immortalizing some of these lines; used at length, however, end rhyme in
couplets tire s the reader, even if the rhymes themselves are full of wit, as Pope's
are.
A further distinction must be made between his and Chaucer's lines because Pope
follows Dryden; Pope 1 s must, therefore, according to convention, be called "heroic"
couplets. The use of heroic couplets in something called An Essay On Criticism, as
opposed to The Aeneid, might imply broad irony on the poet's part ( in particular if
one considers the respective heroes of the two poems). Irony is perhaps the critic's
strong suit. The title itself seems ironic: This is an essay on criticism that is
itself a poem.
The metrical variations attempt to compensate for the regularity of the rhyme;
coming from a critic, they are very self- conscious. Consider these examples; first
lines 150-51 on poetic license:
Thus Pegasus, a. nearer way to take
May boldly deviate from the common Track.
The word "deviate", being hard to say in two syllables, is itself the deviation.
Here is line 356:
A needless alexandrine ends the Song,
That like a wounded Snake, drags its slow length along.

Dove like satst brooding on the vast Abyss
And mad'st it pregnant ...
Clearly, such a technique of metrical substitution can be used with great subtlety.

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The wounded alexandrine is needlessly lengthened by trochaic and spondaic substitution. More metrical wit follows a few lines later:
When Ajax strives, some Rocks' vast Weight to throw,

5

�The Line too labours, and the Words move slow;
Not so, when swift Camilla scours the Plain,
Flies o'er th' unbending Corn, and skims along the Main.
The first couplet suggests weight and slow labor with spondaic substitution, while
the last line, though an alexandrine, runs fastest of all because of a pyrrhic. .
My quarrel with Pope is that he has turned the iambic pentameter into a society
man, with too much wit and too little real art. An irony that might be lost on Pope,
since he translated Homer into couplets, lies in his emulating ancient poets and
critics, and yet using a poetic line that, unlike Milton's, has nothing in common with
them. Closed rhyming lines better suit the Grinch than Pope's nobler sentiments •.
With Wordsworth's poem of loss and reconciliation, let us conclude. The lines
of "Tin tern Abbey" are open and unrhymed, and employ much artful substitution. We
might expect a line with Milton's vigor and cadence, but again, the English
pentameter discovers a new character and motion. "Tintern Abbey" is sweetly elegiac,
longing in mood, above all reflective in its use of rhythm. The sensibility of the
poem cannot be separated from our familiar yet newly flowing meter.
I believe the open lines permit Wordsworth this elegiac mood, by freeing him to
let his lines overflow and commingle, repeating words in different stress positions,
and so heightening the sense of reflectiveness and of passing things over in memory.
Consider how the fives in the opening lines set the tone:
Five years have passed, five summers, with the length
Of five long winters, and again I hear
These waters rolling from their mountain-springs
With a sweet inland murmur.
Notice then the quiet repetitions in these lines near the end, as the poet addresses
his sister seeing the country for the first time:
For thou art with me, here upon the banks
Of this fair river, thou, my dearest friend,
My dear, dear friend, and in thy voice I catch
The language of my former heart, and read
My former pleasures in the shooting lights
Of thy wild eyes. Oh, yet a little while
May I behold in thee what I was once,
My dear, dear sister!

He has learned an art of poetry, to hear, in an iambic line, "the still sad music of
'
humanity. " In what follows, the number and meaning of the verse are completely interfused, and. we leave our study of Wordsworth's line, our numbered English line,
awake to all its possibilities:
And I have felt
A presence that disturbs me with the joy
Of elevated thoughts, a sense sublime
Of something far more deeply interfused,
Whose dwelling is the light of setting suns,
And the round ocean, and the living air,
And the blue sky, and in the mind of man-A motion and a spirit that impels
All thinking things, all objects of all thought,
And rolls through all things. Therefore am I still
A lover of the meadows and the woods
And mountains, and of all that we behold
From this green earth--of all the mighty world
Of eye and ear, both what they half-create,
And what perceive--well pleased to recognize
In Nature and the language of the sense
The anchor of my purest thought, the nurse,
The guide, the guardian of my heart, and soul
Of all my moral being.
In a shifting and unmusical world, at least we still speak English. Where so
many read, and where so many words and symbols re-echo in commercial profusion, still
there breeds in our world a deeper illiteracy. But the rhythms and meters of English
spring from the language itself, and thankfully, for as long as English lives, their
numbers await the rediscovery of new poets, who will learn to keep proportion and
mend our broken time.
I do not believe that these five poets, or their many
imitators and occasional equals, have come near to exhausting the rhythms of the
iambic pentameter. Perhaps we won't see the Shakespearian sonnet again, or the heroic couplet; but new poets will discover new movements, ascending in iambs, moving
with thought, with power, with wit, with longing--a sweeter breath, perhaps,
stressing always from within, like a wind through a mighty English oak.

(115-22)
Sometimes the verse has the quality of measured prose, breathing and moving in
natural rhythm; yet the meter is always there, spacing and nudging the lines, a pervasive force that anchors and shapes the whole meditation. At the heart of the poem
the poet reconciles himself to his loss:
For I have learned
To look on Nature not as in the hour
Of thoughtless youth, but hearing oftentimes
The still, sad music of humanity,
Nor harsh, nor grating, though of ample power
To chasten and subdue. '

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7

�----- ,
Poem
James Brown

Because I cannot forget,
Because every day flickers sickly empty .•.
waits for action! watch the deserts in a smile
or breath, my soul,
I breathe .
(Which man is meditating on the mountain, he of skin, of desire, of soul)
Reason exceeds all bounds, resting in a meshland crushed.
The little bits we held tightly vanish.
Beauty
is on the table
Love
in the wineglass
in the countryside
in the emotion.
as I saw a lone sparrow creeping across my wet sky of dreams
poets and ghosts invited me to a celebration
(fame in the sense show,
the hostile cracks of contact, of lambs and dry blood ••• )
blood in the doorway,
blood in your mouth.
The ground is disguised as a cracked smile,
the cymbal ceases after the throat swallows,
preparing to laugh.
Too many torn, ripped, wounded words.
Blow on a feather bursting in repose,
now is a moment I give you forever.

So I'm bound, you stuck seer,
so I'm free, you roaming eyeless face.
Calamity beckons me,
nestled in wooly womb of letters I thrust meaning in your face.
Somewhere I lose, I have lost.
Intimate memories surround, hemorrhaging .
My blood is soft, flowing through screens of dying sanity,
screams unquenchable and unfulfilled.
Does this anger have a home?
Can I come home?
(a mirror speaks in shades of light,
darkness in absence thereof.
And thus the silence)

Spliced awareness
The replication can be divided
( the quartering cleavage in pregnant hips,
new sorrow,
shivering at dusk,
my disheartening years)
I once believed the colors I see
came from within,
seasons of delight.
But in the crowd of people I forgot myself:
and so I disappeared.
Now t he qui tters return (so then )
abashed and speechless with dumb shame.
Some times I (look the dther way)
In the game show I was the victor: look!

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�The Gorgon and the Bride of Lebanon
Catherine Irvine

In The Divine Comedy, the images of the Gorgon and of Beatrice are intimately
connected by the notion of love. The connection is based upon the idea that when the
human being loves, he may be led either to salvation or into the depths of Hell. .
What will be shown in the following pages is that both the Gorgon and Beatrice
represent the two faces of Dante's own loves. In ~ppearanc~ an~ in eff~ct they are
opposites. The Gorgon is ugly and destructive, while Beatrice is beautiful and redeeming.
Their opposition, however, will be seen to stem from the human element. For the
soul immersed in sin, to look upon love is to look upon the Gorgon and be doomed.
For the soul in grace who follows the true path, to look upon love is to look upon
Beatrice and find the doors of Paradise swung wide open.
These two images stand out amongst the hordes of others which fill The Divine
Comedy.
The atmosphere at the Gates of Dis is full of tension caused by a combination of doubt, fear and danger. This makes it a dramatic moment in the story.
There is a feeling that the whole of the journey is in jeopardy and that its success
is at stake.
The same kind of feeling accompanies the reading of Cantos XXX through XXXII of
the Purgatorio in which the unveiling of Beatrice occurs. This ~ime, however~ the
tension is not born of danger and suspense. It is a result of climax . There is an
exaltation, a culmination of emotion, present that makes the scene sparkle in the
memory.
The life that both images take on is so real and persuasive that in remembering
them they become strongly bound to one another. They have an interdependence that is
a determining factor with regard to the existence of the story. The prevention of
the first instance, Dante's looking upon the Gorgon, allows the possibility of the
second, Dante's looking upon Beatrice. Likewise, the allowing of the first would
result in the prevention of the second. In the first case there is a story to tell
of Dante's journey . In the second case The Divine Comedy would have ended at the
Gates of Dis.
Looking closely at this interdependence, one sees that the key to both situations is the act of beholding. The effectiveness and potency of the images lies in
Dante's looking at them. There are no other elements involved. If Dante looks upon
the Gorgon he will become stone. If he does not look upon her he will remain untouched.
Beatrice has an influence upon Dante that extends beyond his looking at her~ for
instance, in his memory of her. But the actuality of the good she promises him is
only accomplished through his beholding. Although Dante undergoes change up to the
point where he encounters her, his full purification does not take place until he
looks fully at her.
It is also the case that when Dante is involved in this act, he must be involved
alone.
It is a private experience. Virgil has no influence upon what Dante se~s.
With the Gorgon, Virgil encounters the possibility of a situation in which he will
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Dante if Dante looks. The only thing he has control over is whether or not Dante
looks, and that is a control that does not involve reason, but command and force. If
Virgil fails to prevent Dante from looking at the Medusa, he can do no more.
Similarly, Virgil has much influence over Dante in the period of time before
Dante meets Beatrice, but precisely at the moment when Dante sees Beatrice, Virgil is
gone. He is completely absent during the unveiling.
It might be looked at in this way. Virgil's function is to bring Dante to the
point where Dante will be able to look at Beatrice. This being so, his function in
the jo·u rney is also to prevent Dante from looking at the Medusa. Virgil has a definite relation and function with regard to the two, but the act of beholding in itself
and the consequences of it are beyond his realm. This act Dante must do without the
aid of his mentor and guide.

*****
At the Gates of the City of Hell the situation is menacing. Virgil's capabilities are inadequate. He cannot use reason or art upon these souls who do not even
respond to the truth that all of Hell, in addition to all of Heaven, is under divine
will. Virgil must wait for divine aid. Meanwhile, he has no idea what the inhabitants of the dread city might do. They are rebellious and unreasonable.
If they
show aggressiveness they have the power to harm Dante.
Dante is doubtful and insecure, for the most part because he sees Virgil, who is
his only safety, in a position of weakness.
The appearance of the mad and
self-destructive Furies who attack intensifies Dante's fear and Virgil's anxiety.
Hence, even though the act of beholding the Medusa is only a potential one, it is
clear that Dante is in danger. If the potentiality of that act were to become a reality - and there is a possibility of that happening - Dante would be lost.
Virgil, accordingly, reacts immediately to the threat alone. He does not wait,
not even for a moment, to see if it will be carried out. The Medusa is a force he
cannot reckon with if Dante is to be her victim. The only way that Virgil can protect his charge is by forcing Dante not to look.
'Turn your back and keep your eyes shut tight;
For should the Gorgon come and you look at her,
Never again would you return to the light.'
This was my Guide's command. And he turned me about
Himself, and would not trust my hands alone,
But with his placed on mine, held my eyes shut.
(Inferno IX, 52-57)
The Medusa is a formidable enemy. Firstly, the temptation to look upon her is
so great that Virgil does not trust Dante to resist alone. Secondly, should Dante
submit to the temptation, he will be transformed into stone. His being will be drastically altered: animate to inanimate, rational to unthinking.
This inanimate characteristic of stone would alone doom Dante to remain in Hell.
In addition, when Virgil tells Dante that he would never return to the light he is
referring to man's need to have light, both phys{cally and mentally, in order to be
the creature that he is. Physically, as stone, Dante would remain stationary in the
darkness. But the implication is also that mentally Dante's capabilities of distinguishing right from wrong, good from evil, and beautiful from ugly will be destroyed.
On this level, Dante will become in life what the souls of Dis are in death:
eternally sinful and rebellious, with no hope of ever leaving Death's kingdom and
with no hope of ever being able to see his own miserable condition. This is the
threat that the Medusa poses. She would alter him so greatly that his nature would

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�become essentially 'other'. In doing so she would doom him to a world of blindness
and immobility - a world without God, a world without hope, a world that for a man
become stone is a world of eternal death.

*****
In Cantos XXX through XXXII of the Purgatorio, the beholding is not potential
but actual. Beatrice's unveiling takes place gradually, since it is a process rather
than a mere possibility which can only _ be looked at in terms of result, as in the
case with the Gorgon. Dante's beholding takes place in three stages. Each stage has
more power over him.
The first time that Dante sees Beatrice he undergoes a kind of fixation which he
describes as a stupefaction. He recognizes his emotional reaction as that of his old
love for the mortal woman. Yet Dante is not completely riveted. Recognizing this
emotion, he is able to turn to Virgil. He is free to move his attention elsewhere.
He is able to be distracted away from Beatrice when he discovers that his guide has
left his side. He is not quite overcome by Beatrice yet.
Dante feels the pain of Virgil's disappearance acutely. He is fully involved
with grieving until Beatrice begins to reprimand him as a woman would reproach a lover who has strayed. She demands that he confess his infidelity to her. Dante is so
overwhelmed by her reprimand and the harshness with which it is delivered that he
says he became frozen in place. He confesses that he has sinned. This confession is
essential to the process of unveiling, for if he does not confess, Beatrice will not
unveil.
The second time Dante looks upon Beatrice is when she prods him to feel the full
weight of his sin. Dante says:
With my tear- blurred and uncertain vision
I saw Her turned to face that beast which is
One person in two natures without division.
Even veiled and across the river from me
Her face outshone its first-self by as much
As she outshone all mortals formerly.
And the thorns of my repentance pricked me so
That all the use and substance of the world
I had most loved, now appeared my foe.
Such guilty recognition gnawed my heart
I swooned for pain.
(Purgatorio XXXI, 79-89)

image of the Griffon reflected. Dante describes how a thousand .burning passions held
his eyes fixed upon hers and how his soul "in wonder and delight/ was savoring the
food which in itself I both satisfies and quickens appetite"
(Purgatorio XXXI,
127-129).
While he is still in this state of bliss, he is led to her mouth.
Beatrice's face is now completely uncovered.
The vision that Dante sees when he looks upon her smile is indescribable. It
leaves him even more helpless than he had been before.
My eyes were fixed with such intensity
On quenching, at long last, their ten years' thirst
That every sense but sight abandoned me.
Tranced by the holy smile that drew me there
Into the old nets, I forgot all else My eyes wore blinders, and I could not care.
(Purgatorio XXXII, 1-6)
Beatrice has now completely taken off the cloak of mortality t hat she wore in Dante's
mind when he first glimpsed her in the pageant. She has a god-like potency for him.
Here when he is finally able to look upon her with no obstruction between his sight
and her face, he is made incapable of doing anything but stare. Every other bodily
sense has ceased . He i s t ransfixed . Dante gazes with such intensity that he is
forced to look away, and when he does look away he discovers that the brightness of
his vision has blinde d him.
In addition to being aware of the effect that the unveiling has upon Dante, it
should be noted that when Beatrice begins to explain her purpose to Dante, she says:
I see your mind
Turned into stone, and like a stone, so darkened
That the light of what I tell you strikes it blind.
(Purgatorio XXXIII, 73-75)
It is important that Beatrice says this about Dante's mind. What it implies is that
during the process of unveiling Dante's mind has become like a stone, so that it does
not respond to what he is being told.
When the unveiling is completed, Dante drinks from the Eunoe and is made
•.. new, ... per f ect, pure and ready for the Stars." (Purgatorio XXXIII, 142-146).
"
What Beatrice has worked in Dante, through his beholding, is a final purification
that will allow him entry into Paradise.

*****

This time Dante sees Beatrice as more than the mortal woman he had loved. She has a
great control over him, a power that she never had while she lived. As he looks upon
her when she faces the Griffon, he comes t o know his sin and to fear it - so much so
that he cannot bear even to look upon her anymore. He is rendered unconscious in a
faint.
When Dante wakes from this swoon he finds that he had been immersed in the waters of the Lethe, the river of forgetfulness. From that immersion he rises in a new
purity that will enable him to look fully upon the face of his beloved. Previously,
the weight of his sin caused him so much agony that he could not stand the sight of
Beatrice's face even still covered.
Now, the memory of t hat sin and that grief
washed away, he may look upon her naked face fully conscious and gain from what he
sees.
The four nymphs who are Beatrice's ordained handmaids come and lead Dante to
this final beholding. Dante looks into Beatrice's eyes. There he finds the changing

Having looked at both situations in detail, it becomes evident that Beatrice has
essentially done to Dante what the Gorgon threatened to do.
She has frozen him
still, immobilized him, blinded him, and caused his mind t o be turned to stone. The
things she does to him, however, have been done for his redemption rather than for
his destruction.
When he is initially frozen cold by her, what results is his confession . The
swooning leads to his immersion in the Lethe:, which then enables him to look upon
Beatrice fully.
The blinding is the result of being forced to look away from the
most beautiful being he has ever seen. The gazing and the forcing away are both good
things. What Dante experiences when he looks at her smile is a heavenly rapture, but
Dante himself says that while he gazed he forgot all else - and did not care that he
had. Since he may now go with Beatrice to Paradise, he cannot be allowed to stare
forever at the smile of his beloved. His condition then would be stationary. No

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growth would take place within him.
So although he suffers from temporary loss of physical sight, ultimately he
gains from that loss. As for his mind being turned to stone, Beatrice tells Dante
that this has been done for good purpose. It is meant to demonstrate, in a potent
way, how far his attempts to know the truth are from the truth itself. Furthermore,
Dante must have a completely clean slate, one unconfused by many previous thoughts,
so that he can go on and learn in the Paradiso.
[My words] 'fly so high', she said, 'that you may know
What school you followed, and how far behind
That truth I speak its feeble doctrines go;
And see that man's ways, even at his best,
Are far from God's as earth is from the heaven
Whose swiftest wheel turns above all the rest.'
(Purgatorio XXXIII, 85-9 0)
Nevertheless, though the content of what Beatrice does to Dante differs from the .
content of what the Gorgon would have done, it is still the case that both have the
same power over Dante. If these two entities exercise the same power, then why would
the Medusa's power be destructive while Beatrice's power is constructive?

** * **
To
We know
love in
tion by
this by

begin searching for an answer, let us look at what we know about Beatrice.
much more about her than we know of the Medusa. Beatrice is connected with
two important ways. The first is that it is she who set the journey in mogoing to Virgil and sending him to Dante. Beatrice claims to be spurred on to
love.
It is I, Beatrice, who send you to him.
I come from the blessed height for which I yearn.
Love called me here.
(Inferno II, 70 - 72)

The second is that Beatrice was Dante's greatest mortal love while she lived. It is
because of her that Dante finds enough courage and confidence to make the journey.
When Dante sees her again in the Earthly Paradise, he describes what this mortal love
had done to him .
My soul - such years had passed since last it saw
That lady and stood trembling in her presence
... - now •.. felt the full mastery of enduring love •.•
... I was smitten by the force,
Which had already once transfixed my soul
Before my boyhood years had run their course.
... I recognize(d)
The tokens of the ancient flame.
(Purgatorio XXX, 34-48)

XXX, 130-132). In reproach she tells Dante that after she had died he should not
"have been weighed down by any joy below/ - love of a maid, or any other fleeting/
and useless thing ... " (Purgatorio XXXI, 58-60).
Since Dante's love for Beatrice kept him on the true path and his love for othe r
things led him astray, it seems that the answer to the question about Beatrice and
the Gorgon lies in what love means to the human soul.

*****
Virgil tells Dante "that Love alone/ is the true seed of every merit in you,/
and of all the acts for which you must atone." (Purgatorio XVII, 102 - 105). Thus it
may be concluded that if love led Dante to Beatrice and from thence to the highest
good, then love must also have led Dante to his confrontation with the Medusa.
Accepting this conclusion, what is it about love and the human soul that causes
this two-faced image of love to appear? To answer this we must begin by looking at
where the source of man's love is in the scheme that Dante provides.
Marc the
Lombard informs Dante that:
From the hand of God, whose love
Shines like a ray upon it, even before birth,
Comes forth the simple soul which,
Like a child at play, cries, laughs,
And ignorant of every measure
But the glad impulse of its joyous Maker,
Turns eagerly to all that gives it pleasure .
(Purgatorio XVI, 85 - 90)
Virgil similarly says:
The soul, being created prone to Love,
Is drawn at once to all that pleases it,
As soon as pleasure summons it to move.
From that which really is, your apprehension
Extracts a form which it unfolds within you;
That form thereby attracts the mind's attention,
Then if the mind, so drawn, is drawn to it,
That summoning force is Love; and thus within you,
Through pleasure, a new natural bond is knit.
(Purgatorio XVIII, 19- 27)
Virgil further comments that this inclination towards what is pleasurable is an
"innate primordial appetite/ •.. as within the bee/ the instinct to make honey· and
such instincts/ are, in themselves, not blameable nor worthy. 11 (Purgatorio X~III,
57-60).
However, man is attracted to what is pleasurable with his mind: "Neither Creator nor his creatures move ... / .•. but in the action/ of animal or of mind- directed
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love·
(Purgatorio XVII, 91-93). The pitfall in this is that after Adam disobeyed
God's command and fell from grace, man's reason was no longer sustained by the clear
light of the truth. St. Thomas Aquinas tells us:

Beatrice indicates that Dante's love for her was desirable. He had had such
potential for fulfillment that as long as she lived and he could keep his gaze upon
her countenance he was not in danger of straying from the true path. She says, however, that as soon as she left him "He turned his steps aside from the True Way, pursuing the false images of good that promise what they never wholly pay." (Purgatorio

The human reason cannot have a full participation of the dictate of the
divine reason, but according to its own mode, and imperfectly. Conseq~e~tly, just as ~n the part of the speculative reason, by a natural participation of divine wisdom, there is in us the knowledge of certain com-

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�mon principles, but not a proper knowledge of each single truth, such as
that contained in the divine wisdom, so, too, on the part of the practical reason, man has a natural participation of the eternal law, according
to certain common principles, but not as regards the particular determinations of individual cases .
(Summa Theologica, Prima Secundae . Q. 91, Art . 3)
Man does not always perceive the truth and he cannot always correctly distinguish
between what is good and what is bad. He is given a natural light which helps him to
determine what is true and what is false, but being instinctively drawn to pleasure,
he does not always discern correctly which pleasures are good and which are bad.
In The Divine Comedy, St . Thomas gives Dan te the following advice:
Move slowly, like a weary man,
To the 'yes' and 'no' of what you do not see.
For he is a fool, and low among his kind,
Who answers yea or nay without reflection,
Nor does it matter on which road he runs blind .
Opinions too soon formed of ten deflect
Man's thinking from the truth into gross error,
In which his pride then binds his intellect.
(Paradiso XIII , 113-120)
The hastiness that Aquinas warns against is precisely what is dangerous about pleasure. The mind deems that something is pleasurable and it is prone to rush after it
without careful consideration. Marc the Lombard describes how men are caught up in
sin because of this. The simple soul "tastes small pleasures first . To these it
clings,/ deceived, and seeks no others" (Purgatorio XVI, 91 - 92) .
Things appear
worthy of love, but "though love's substance always will appear to b71 a go.od,. not
every impress made,/ even in the finest wax, is good and clear.
(V1rg1l
Purgatorio XVIII, 37 -39 ).
Being in the dark, so to speak, and with this natural handicap, man does not
always realize that the love and pursuit of God would give him the greatest pleasure .
Man has the insightful knowledge, however, that there is a good in which he will find
what he most seeks : a fulfillment in loving.
All men, though in a vague way, apprehend
A good their souls may rest in, and desire it ;
Each, therefore , strives to reach his chosen end.
(Purgatorio XVII, 127-129)
This desire spurs man on and encourages him to love.
Man is endowed with a free will, and hence is able to choose, through the use of
his intellect, the good that will give him salvation rather than damnation. He can
escape the trap that loving sets for him. Virgil says:
Natural love may never fall to error.
The other [mind- directed love] may .••
While it desires the Eternal Good and measures
Its wish for secondary goods in reason,
This love cannot give rise to sinful pleasures.
But when it turns to evil ...
The creature turns on its creator.
(Purgatorio XVII, 94-102)

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and he continues:
Now, that all later wills [after the natural impulse] and this first bent
May thrive, the innate counsel of your Reason
Must surely guard t he threshold of consent.
This is t he principle from which accrue
Your just deserts, according as it reaps
And winnows good or evil love in you.
... all love, let us say,
That burns in you, springs from necessity;
But you still have the power to check its sway.
(Purgatorio XVIII, 61 - 72)
St . Thomas describes how this rational aspect of man leads him into sin:
Everything, by its own natural appetite and love, loves its own proper
good because of the common good of the whole universe, which is
God ..• Hence in the state of integral nature man ref erred the love of
himself and of all other things to the love of God as to its end •.• But
in the state of corrupted nature man falls short of this in the appetite
of his rational will, which •.. follows its own private Good .
(Sunnna Theologica, Prima Secundae . Q. 109, Art . 3)
It is this rationally chosen love of the lesser things that dooms man by bringing him
into sin.
Because man does not find satisfaction in t he false pleasures that he
loves, if he is not somehow checked, he begins to travel down a pathway littered with
one love after another. Eventually, in his greed for satisfaction , his ability to
distinguish what is good and what is bad is undermined by his growing desire . He
does not look closely at what appears to be good in orde r to judge whether or not he
has found the true provider of this satisfaction. As he is continually tempted by
false promises and is continually deprived, he begins to care less and less about the
things he pursues. He thereby falls into error with increasing frequency.
The influence and good of his reason is submerged beneath his passion, and
finally, if he never turns away from the path he has taken, it will die. He will not
be able to use his power of judgement any longer. As Virgil says of the souls in
Hell, they have lost the good of intellect. They were led to that state by perverted
love .
Augustine says in The Confessions:
We are carried away by custom to our own undoing and it is hard to
struggle against the stream. Will this torrent never dry up? How much
longer will it sweep the sons of Adam down to that vast and terrible sea
which cannot easily be passed. . .
(Book I, 16)

*****
The next question is why the weakening of the intellect is the greatest cause
for punishment. On the most obvious level, what results from weakened reason is sin.
But this extends further beyond punishment for doing wrong. It delves into the soul
of man and claims that his very being finds its greatest fulfillment in the per fection of the intellect, and its damnation in the loss of that intellect.
St. Thomas says:
Each thing is inclined naturally to an operation that is suitable to it

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according
since the
a natural
according

to its form: e.g., fire is inclined to give heat. Therefore,
rational soul is the proper form of man, there is in every man
inclination to act according to reason; and this is to act
to virtue.
(Summa Theologica, Prima Secundae. Q. 94, Art. 3)

He also says:
The law of man which ..• is allotted to him according to his proper natural
condition, is that he should act in accordance with reas on; and this law
was so effective in man's first state, nothing either outside or against
reason could take man unawares. But when man turned his back on God, he
fell under the influence of his sensual impulses. In fact, this happens
to each one individually, according as he has the more departed from the
path of reason.
(Summa Theologica, Prima Secundae. Q. 91, Art. 6)
Since man is given intellect, if he utilizes the ability to distinguish right
from wrong he will be able to see that the highest good and the highest pleasure is
found in God. Or, to put it another way, he will see that the false pleasures he
loves do not give him the rest he seeks, and so, whether he has full knowled~e of God
or not, he will use his rationality and willinglychoose the other alternative: God
and the truth. If he does not come to this conclusion, then he is being unreasonable. Thus the souls who are in Hell have chosen to be unreasonable because they
have travelled along the path of perverted love. As a result, they are unable to
perceive and acknowledge the truth.
Being unreasonable, they have become 'other'
than what they were created to be: reasonable creatures.
Therein lies the cause of man's greatest sin. He is fallen, but he is given the
opportunity to rise. If he does not take this opportunity then he falls again, only
this time he falls to a condition that is beyond redemption.
It is true that man
requires guidance from the law and from grace in order to avoid this. But even if a
man is caught unawares in the trap that his own loving sets for him, he is doomed
unless he finds his power of judgement and realizes that the path he is on will lead
him to damnation. Treading on this path will turn him to stone: the image of which
conveys the impression of being stuck in one place, unable to move and not knowing
enough to realize that one should move.
Virgil tells Dante that:
Within the habit of mankind
You set your whole intent on earthly things,
The true light falls as darkness on your mind.
(Purgatorio XV, 64-66),
and Beatrice says:
Tranced in blind greed, your ever deepening curse,
You have become as mindless as an inf ant
Who screams with hunger, yet pushes away his nurse.
(Paradiso XXX, 139- 140) .

*****
'mmersed 1'n the surge of its passions in this manPlotinus describes t h e sou 1 1
ner:
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The ugly soul •.• is dissolute, unjust, teeming with lusts, torn by inner
discord, beset by craven fears and petty envies .•. friend to filthy pleasure, it lives a life abandoned to bodily sensation and enjoys its
depravity .•. The life it leads is dark with evil, sunk in manifold death.
It sees no longer what the soul should see.
(The Essential Plotinus, Beauty, p. 38-39)
Although Plotinus' idea of how the soul comes to be in this condition may not be completely in accord with Dante's, his description is surely in agreement. It is when a
man is in this condition that to look upon his love fully is to look upon the Medusa
and be turned to stone. Prior to Dante's waking in the Dark Wood, his soul was in
this condition, and as he stands at the Gates of Dis his condition is not much
changed. He realizes that he is lost, but he is still full of sin.
Dante is hesitant. He has confidence in Virgil, but he lacks confidence in himself.
He lacks this confidence because his mind is clouded over with false impressions and his reason is weak from long disuse. His weakened reason rebels at the
decision that he has made to follow Virgil into the underworld. He rebels because he
fears, and he fears because he does not see the truth.
This state of wavering from his resolve is very much present at the Gates of
Dis. Virgil has had to constantly support Dante. At Dis Dante is so awe-struck and
frightened by the resistance that they meet that he is more willing to turn around
and put an end to the journey than he is to face the difficulty before him.
Oh my beloved Master, my guide in peril,
Who time and time again have seen me safely
Along this way, and turned the power of evil,
Stand by me now ... in my heart's fright.
And if the dead forbid our journey to them,
Let us go back together toward the light.
(Inferno VIII, 94-99)
Even though he is on the way toward salvation, before these Gates he is dangerously
close to being stone. He is teetering upon the edge . He has not climbed up far
enough to be safely out of danger. Dante is unprepared to look upon love while in
this premature and sinful condition. It would destroy him. It would make him truly
stone.
Dante is making this journey in order to gain back his good judgement and be rid
of the things that are false within him. He is on his way to seeing "what the soul
should see. " What is seen in his encounter with Beatrice is a much more mature
Dante.
He had undergone a gradual process of elimination.
Virgil has taken him
through Hell where he had seen the damned. Dante has been through Purgatory, and the
seven deadly sins, in the form of . P's, have been removed from his forehead. He has
not yet seen the full truth, but he has seen the false. By the time he reaches the
Earthly Paradise he has been able to witness the false loves that made up the crooked
path upon which he had been walking. Dante has been able to see the sin within himself. He has been purged.
Dante's soul is so greatly changed that Virgil relieves himself of his role as
guide:
I have led you here by grace of mind and art;
Now let your own good pleasure be your guide;
You are past the steep ways, past the narrow part ...
Expect no more of me in word or deed:
Here your will is upright, free and whole,

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�And you would be in error not to heed
Whatever your own impulse prompts you to:
Lord of yourself I crown and mitre you.
(Purgatorio XX.VII, 130-132, 139-143 )

Love prompts men to do all that they do, whether it be love of glory, or wealth,
or another human being ...... the list could go on and on. Even if he does not love
what he does in a specific instance, he is acting for the love of something else.
Consequently, the two faces of love, either that of the Medusa or that of Beatrice,
await him around each corner as he walks upon the paths of life.

False pleasures have no allure for Dante now because he is capable of seeing that
they are false. He is ready to rush joyfully after all that pleases him. He is no
longer in danger of rushing after the wrong thing. Dante is prepared to l ook upon
his love. This time it will not bring him death and destruction, but eternal life.
Beatrice will make him ready to go on and stand upright before the bright glory of
what is true and can never be false.
In this cleansed state love will infuse him
completely, leaving him whole, perfect and fulfilled. This means the rising of the
intellect, within the mortal body, to the utmost height:

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The truth I wished for came
Cleaving my mind in a great flash of light ...
... I could feel my being turned Instinct and intellect balanced equally.
(Paradiso XXXIII, 140- 144)

Three volumes of The Divine Comedy :
The Inferno, Dante
John Ciardi
New American Library Inc.
1954

*****
At this point it would be well to remember t hat Dante is still living when he
makes this journey. For the soul that is dead there is no Gorgon and no Beatrice .
The life of that soul has already come to the conclusion of its earthly travels and
is already in its chosen place.
What Dante faces when he encounters the Medusa and Beatrice is the culmination
of the two paths upon which love may take him . It is as though, for Dante, love with
all its power contained in the two faces of the Medusa and Beatrice exists simultaneously in its end result in Dis and in the Earthly Paradise. To look upon his love
naked and powerful when he is in sin or when he has been purified is to choose the
pathway that he will take in the life he still must lead .
Thus it is appropriate that Beatrice was a mortal woman whom Dante loved and who
is now, in Paradise, filled with divine love. It is also appropriate that the Medusa
was the only one of the three Gorgons who was mortal and is now, in Hell , filled with
perverted love. Could not the Medusa, once a beautiful woman, represent the false
pleasures which Dante had loved after Beatrice left him? The potency which the two
hold then stems from the fact that Dante loved both.
That the opposition between the Medusa and Beatrice should find its source in
the human beholder is not surprising when one recalls that they bo th have their birth
from out of the human element. Hell exists precisely for the punishment of human
sin. The Gorgon dwells within the walls of t he City of Hell. Grace exists solely
for the redemption of man . Bea trice is the being through which Dante re ceives divine
aid, and she resides in Paradise.
Both Beatrice and the Medusa stem from that force, that necessary instinct in
man, of love . Love is what spans the distance between Heaven and Hell. It is the
force that has the greatest power over the human heart. Love has driven men to the
greates- heights and it has caused men to fall into total ruin. Because man's heart
t
is schizophrenic when it comes to loving, love often works its two-faced might in the
mind of one and the same man. Sometimes it causes him to do the noblest of deeds,
sometimes the most foul . Man's heart is deep and mazed. Love enters into it and in
that natural bond between man and the things he loves the contradiction, and perhaps
the tragedy, that is present in all facets of his behavior is born.

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The Purgatorio , Dante
John Ciardi
New American Library Inc.
1957
The Paradiso, Dante
John Ciardi
New American Library Inc.
1961
Supplementary text
The Divine Comedy, Dante
Prose Translation
H.R. Huse
Rinehart and Winston Inc.
1954
Other sources quoted from:
The Essential Plotinus
Elmer O'Brien
Hackett Publishing Company Inc.
1964
The Confessions, St. Augustine
R. S. Pine-Coffin
Penguin Books Ltd.
1961
Summa Theologica, St. Thomas Aquinas
Anton C. Pegis
Random House
1945

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�I still remember you as children, small and afraid, on the day of your father's
execution, although by now you must be young men just beginning t o set out to make
lives of your own .
It is to help guide you in this endeavor that I am wri ting now .
I had come into Athens to
I only met your father once - on the day of h i s dea th.
trade some oriental fab rics, and by a stroke of luck happened t o accompany Phaedo to
the prison where your father was be ing held.
I am no philosopher, but the will and
intellect of your fathe r was so strong that they seized my attention, and I listened
intently to all that was said.
Some of the things that your father said seemed so
inconsistent with the man himself and what he said and did, that I have been thinking
about them ever since , and, in thinking about these contradictions, I have come t o
some small understanding of wha t your father believed .
Crito promised that he would make
I have imagined you growing up as orphans.
sure that you were well cared for, but he is such a practical man tha t I fear he has
not told you anything real about your father.
It is perhaps presumptuous of me to
believe that I could tell you anything about Socrates, after only meeting him once.
And yet, because of all of the thinking that I have done about the things that he
said, I hope that I might be able to explain him to you, and help you to come to love
the man as I have .
By now your memo rie s of you r father mus t have become so jumbled
with all of the things that you have heard about him t hat you can hardly know what to
think .
On the day of his dea t h , your father spent mos t of his time discussing what
might happen to the soul afte r the death of the body . We considered whether it was
immortal or not, and what type of o t her world it might inhabit i f it were.
This
might seem to you to be a t opic mos t wo rt hy of discussion, particularly in the hours
just before death , and so it seemed to all of us listening.
But the further we got
into the discussion , the more each of us began to realize t hat we we re not going to
find any concrete answers to the questions which we were ask ing. We all came to feel
that the immortality of the soul could not be proven beyond a doubt .
I have since
learned that your father must have known this from the v ery beginning. On the day of
his trial he had said that anyone who t hough t that he knew anything about death was a
fool, for it was simply unknowable .
This was t he first contradiction that I became
aware of between what your father said and what he did, and it set my mind buzzing,
trying to figure out what the man was up to.
I think that I have finally come to
understand something of this.
I believe that your father was not particularly interested in finding answers,
in knowing the knowable things, because answers can not really explain anything .
This is certainly the impression I got from listening to him talk about his experience with natural science . He said that he became interested in natural science be cause it promised him the knowledge of the cause of everything.
What he found instead was a description of the materials of which things were made and the shapes
which these materials took . He found these sorts of descriptions to be confusing and
misleading, for they did not approach an explanation of the kinds of causes he was

concerned with.
Yet it was easy for men to get caught up in them and forget about
their real concerns.
I had always believed that natural science was an important
study of why things happened, but I think that your father was looking for a differ ent type of 'why', one that would explain things and actions in human terms rather
than describe strange substances and proclaim them t o be the reas ons for everything.
Your father was trying to find answers to human concerns - -an swers t ha t need t o be
c o uched in human terms. What is interesting ab ou t a thing is its relati on t o mankind
in general and the individual in particular, not t o some other t hing .
Once he realized that natural science was not going t o prov ide the answers he
was seeking, your father devised a system of his own that explained absolutely
everything. He explained that a beautiful thing is b eautiful because it partakes in
absolute beauty.
To all of us listening t his seemed to be a mos t elegant and
understandable explanation of things, one which could faultlessly answer any
questions we might poss ibly ask.
But as I th ought more about this formulation o f
things, I came to realize that it, to o , does not begin t o deal with any of our real,
our human, concerns.
It does not help us t o understand anything which we do not
already know .
I think that your father also realized this, and that after his
encounter with natural science he had come to realize that answers were not really
what humans are after.
In order to help us to come t o feel thi s way to o , he
concocted this incredibly simple system which could answer all of our questions and
none of our concerns.
Your father used many such inherent contradictions and
paradoxes--such as "the answer is not really The Answer"--to get us all to think.
What becomes evident to all who do think a bou t this is that we are not really looking
for simple answers to the questions which perplex us.
Well then, what are we looking for and how d o we come t o have some human under standing of things which are not thus "knowable" , like the soul or virtue or knowledge itself? Although we may not really wish for God , or Socrates, t o drop down out
of the heavens and just give us some answer--this would not truly help us to understand anything which we did not already know--we do care ab out these things and need
to have some understanding of them which can serve as a b asis f o r our actions in the
world.
I think that your father was using this discussion of the soul as a paradigm
to show us how best to approach all of our human concerns with the unknowable.
Since I knew nothing of philosophy, there were many thing s about the way your
father spoke--with such keen intelligence and lively imagination--that struck me as
strange that day, but one of the words your father used seemed par ticu lar ly unusual.
Early in the morning he said that it would be fitting for him µu80Aoy21v
about the
soul.
This word, a combination of
A.oyos
, rational speech, and
µG8os
story, seemed a particularly striking one, since the two terms are often t hought t o
be opposites. But throughout the rest of the day, your father employed both of these
means in his discussion of the soul.
, 1
.
The young men in your father ' ,s company were very read y t o accept
AOyo1 , rational argumen ts,as a means of prov i ng t he immortality of t he soul . This type of discussion was apparently customary f o r your father.
Indeed, h e proved the immortality
of t he soul twice, once beginn ing with t he notion that learning is recollection and
then, when we were n o t satisfied by t ha t, in a very involved argument using the relationship between oppos ites and some t hird accompanying factor . But Simmias and Cebes
- I suppose you know the men I mean - seemed able to come up with objections to even
the finest of arguments, until finally we all despaired of even understanding any t hing through A.6yos .
Your father was very careful t o make sure that we never let ourselves come to
mis trust Aoyos comple tely. He seemed to believe that our trust in arguments and use
of them was a v ery es sential thing .
I have b een thinking about why he felt so
s trongly about this, and I think that I have the answer.
These arguments of your
father's began with some belief that one of us had, such as the idea that learning

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Socrates
Elizabeth De Mare

Dearest children,

�was recollection, the soul is a harmony, etc ., and examined it.
By means of a dis cussion, we were able to see if this concept had any self - cont r adictions and if it
contradicted any of the other things which we believed.
The idea of contradiction
was very important to your father . He believed that a man could not hold two contradicting beliefs at the same time, once he had been made aware of these contradictions.
I think that on his last day, he was using theses arguments which dis closed contradictions in par t t o force us into really thinking about the things that
he was talking about.
For if he is right, and a man cannot hold two contradicting
views, then that man must try to reconcile them within himself .
In the process of
this reconciliation he comes to understand the topic at hand more thoroughly.
Arguments also proved to be a marvelous way for a man to come to understand himself and discover the things which were important to him.
When two of Simmias' beliefs were shown to contradict one another, that learning is recollection and the
soul is a harmony, he had then to choose the one more important to him and stick by
that. Argument could not tell him which one was true, but it could force him to re alize which things he wanted to stand for.
The importance of comparing two ideas did
not lie in their contradicting each other absolutely, but rather in how they related ·
back to the person who was believing them, and how he was t o reconcile himself to
them.
Once our beliefs were found not t o involve us in contradiction , your father was
able to lead us in a discussion of what the logical consequences of these beliefs
were.
As in his proofs of the immortality of the soul , he could help us build an
almost mathematical system, beginning with our conceptions and deducing necessary
consequences from them .
The young men surrounding your father were frustrated because his Aoyos could
not give them beliefs which they did not already have; but they did not realize how
much more confident it could leave them about beliefs which they did have . For they
had weeded through many things they had heard and thought, until they arrived at a
few beliefs which were important to them, and these beliefs had been tested against
themselves and others and found t o be sound.
They were therefore as likely to be
true as it is humanly possible to insure.
In addition to arguing , your father also told us many stories . He used two distinct types of µG8os . The first was the simple example. Throughout the discussion,
both your father and the young men, used examples in order to make their meanings
clear.
I was very surprised to find lovers, coats, and lyres, to be the stuff of
philosophy.
The second was the full - fledged myth .
After we all had become
frustrated with argument and sure that it could not give us the answers we believed
we wanted, your father replied to a question by telling us some of his life story.
He ended with a myth about the real configuration of the world and the after-world.
Crito, always the practical one, seemed to believe that all this story-telling
amounted to nothing .
Though your father said that only a fool would believe that
everything was exactly as his story made it out to be, he defended stories against
Crito's disbelief.
Again it took me some time to understand what your father could have meant by
insisting that myths were important. One of the very first things he did as we went
in to him that morning was to tell a myth about one of the gods having joined pleasure and pain at the head because the two could never stop quarrelling . Then, only
five minutes later, he said that he was not a maker of myths .
Here was another of
his blatant contradictions which was, I believe, designed to set our minds racing.
What could this man who obviously could make up tales, mean by insisting that he was
not a maker of myths? These stories shared with examples that ability to make things
exceedingly clear .
They had a very soothing effect, calming us all where arguments
had left us heated and emotionally disturbed.
But your father seemed t o want us to
think of them as more than mere emotional outlets.

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Then I remembered that your father, by using the word µu6oA.oyElV , had given
e qual importance to µD8os and .\oyos , and that Simmias had warned that arguments
based upon pro bability , in philosophic .\oyos as well as mathematics, were unreliable.
From these facts, I deduced the importance of story-te lling .
In addition to making
ideas seem much mo re vivid to those trying to understand , stories actually help us to
understand our principles.
In a story we can examine the questions, "What would it
be like t o live that way?" and, "What are the possible and probable consequences of
our system of beliefs?" Story-telling can succeed in a regi on where logical argument
fails to have any real sway : stories are able to look at the probable ends of abid ing by your beliefs.
This examination by µD8os is jus t as important as a logical
one, for it is possible that all of a man 's principles are logically sound, and yet
once he looks beyond their logic to the consequences of believing such things he dis covers that they lead him or others to evil.
By imagining what things your beliefs
will probably lead to, you then have another means besides contradiction to judge
whether they are truly the things which you want t o believe in or not.
One of the necessary parts of an approach through A6yos is the breaking down of
an idea , and the examination of its component parts. MUAos , on t he other had , serves
as a means of seeing the entire system of your beliefs .
In this sense, µu8os can
come much closer to relating those beliefs to the real, whole world.
Logical arguments and µu8os thus compliment each other. Aoyos serves the essential function of sorting through beliefs t o find those which are the truest (least
contradictory) ones possible, and then deducing the absolutely logical consequences
of these beliefs . M08os can take over from there and make sense of the possible and
probable consequences of these beliefs.
A6yos without µu8os does not fully relate
ideas to the human realm, and µu8 os mus t have a firm beginning of noncontradictory
beliefs from which to opera te or it becomes meaningless .
Perhaps you are surprised to hear that such human things were your father's concerns.
Most people imagine philosophers to be men who take leave of their senses,
removing themselves from their own bodies and all things tainted with humanity, and
concentrate their attention upon understanding those things which are not seen by the
rest of mankind .
Indeed I have heard of a play by Aristophanes which protrays your
father as such a man . During the course of your father's last day, Socrates himself
gave just such a definition of a philosopher, elaborating upon it several times.
I,
like the rest of the company, swall owed it whole at the time; it sounded so usual.
But because your father is renowned for convincing people who believe they know some thing that they do not, I believe that he said such things just to make us all think
about the differences between his own philosophical life and the stereotype which we
carry around inside us and sometimes try to emulate.
Your father was certainly not a man who had drawn away from himself and his f ellow humans . He always seemed supremely present in the room and in the conversation.
I have rarely met a man who observed so carefully, cocking his head to listen and
piercing us with his gaze . And he certainly understood our moods.
Although he was
about to die, he seemed much less afraid than we, because he understood the fear of
death, both his and our own. He was quick to resp ond to our feelings of distrust in
A6yos
which followed the loss of our hope for an answer. Whatever his philosophy
did involve, it clearly was not a withdrawal from this real world.
I believe that philosophy for him did not involve avoiding people, but rather
involved examining their principles by means of his beautiful and ordered stories and
arguments. He sang the people's own beliefs and deeds to them as Homer sang those of
the heroes.
Your father was concerned with matters which could not be called mun dane, such as the existence of absolutes and the meanings of opposites, but I think
that he understood that both this world of absolutes and the world of mere bodily
sensations meet and join harmoniously in the man who thinks and acts . Your father's
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�to our human affairs, rather than study of them as unrelated to human thought.
He
certainly did not attempt to discuss matters which were not heart-felt by us all.
I think I may have a clue to what your father thought was important above all.
He spent much of his time talking about invisible things or worlds, and the way to
approach these. He said that we must do this through A6yo1, speeches, for the task
was beyond our other means.
What kind of a realm can be approached through speech
with others?
From what happened on the day he died, I can only suggest this much:
while I was listening to your father, I felt and thought about myself and others,
more perhaps than I ever had up until then.
By means of a discussion, he managed to
expose our thoughts, beliefs, hopes and fears.
I think that it is these human ideas,
suggested by the world around us, yet existing separately from it, which are the
things which people your father's invisible world. Thus he was a man concerned not
with some kind of distant ultimate world as we tend to believe all philosophers must
be, but rather with the much more human world of our intellectual beliefs and hopes
which can be entered whenever we think and converse. I think this was what he meant
when he envisioned a world above this one, clearer and more pure.
I believe that he
thought of this world as better, not because it was full of bodiless souls, for he
spoke of its inhabitants as having senses, but because they had lost the basest concerns of the body, such as illness and decay, and had realized that thinking about
their beliefs was essential. They were therefore able to live together and approach
a perfect society where justice and virtue were realized in action and thought and
men were able to think and love and hope much more exquisitely.
The things which I heard from your father on that day have changed my life , not
all at once , but gradually as I have come to understand them better .
I have not
given up my lifestyle to become a philosopher; however I have come to understand that
it is essential for a man to examine all his beliefs to discover what exactly they
are, in orde r for him to be able to live a truly full life. A man who neglects the
search of the soul for an understanding of the absolutes and unknowables is not fully
living as a human being .
This wonder about the absolutes combines in man with an
understanding of the visible world and makes all of his actions much more certain.
He understands why his beliefs are important to him and acts upon them.
By knowing
the values that he holds, he can become a better person, aspiring to that ethereal
world while living in this one.
I shall not rec ount the noble manner in which your father died, for you have
only to ask anyone about it.
Rather I shall end here and hope that these few words
have made some difference to you, that somehow they will help you to know that above
all a man must examine his beliefs closely and, if he is convinced they are the best
he can find , he must stand by them and mold all of his actions after them.
This , I
think, is what your father believed .

The Jacobsen Cut: A Geometrical Proposition
Henry Higuera

I would like to share a solution I discovered to a question about conic sections
proposed by Bryce Jacobsen--largely because his conjecture, which I proved to be
correct, is so pretty. I hope the reader feels as I do, and that his interest in the
question helps get him through my proofs.
In addition, I managed to prove it by
purely Apollonian means, which increased my admiration for the power of his approach;
and for this reas on too my proof is worth sharing.
This is the situation which made Bryce and me wonder:

A
You are given an oblique cone with
axial triangle ABC perpendicular to
the
base
of
the
cone.
(Upperclassmen will
recall
that
with this kind of cone and axial
triangle there are two kinds of
cuts which will produce a circle a fact which will become important
in a moment).
Now, if you take
this cone and start making cuts
producing ellipses, a couple of
facts are obvious:

A steep cut, like the one in Figure 2, will
give you a highly-elongated ellipse:
i.e.,
DE will be the major axis and will be much
bigger than the minor axis; and the ellipse
will get more highly-elongated the closer D
gets to A.

This is clearly true as well for a cut down
the other side of the axial triangle, as in
Figure 3. Again DE is the major axis and will
be much bigger than the minor axis; and again
the ellipse gets more elongated the farther
down D is.

Mr . Higuera has been
currently on leave.

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tutor

at

St.

John's

since

1982

and

is

�I say t hat RO&gt;OE, so that HE is the minor axis.

But what if your cuts get less steep, so that the ellipses become less highly
elongated? Does t he effect eve r get reversed? Specifically, what if (so Mr . J .
mused) you make a cut at an angle in between a cut parallel t o the bas e and a
"subcontrariwise" cut?
These two cuts [Apol. I 4, 5] give you circles, i.e.,
"non- elongated" ellipses; so, do cuts in between give you ellipses elongated the
other way, with DE as the minor axis? And if so, is there one specific cut for any
oblique cone that gives you the "fattest" ellipse? The answer is "yes" to all these
questions, as I hope to show.

For, DP : PE :: HO : OE and HO:OE: : FN:NE; theref ore OP and NO when joined are parallel
to HD and FH , respectively [Eucl. VI 2]. But F, Hand Dare all on AB, so N, O and p
are all on a straight line parallel to AB, one side of t he axial triangle.
Produce line NOP t o meet AC at T and BC at U, and from U draw UV ou t to the
conic surface perpendicular to BC. Then UV is parallel to LG and MK, and thus to QN,
RO, and SP as well . And QN , RO, SP and UV are all in one plane, having a common
1
transver sal TU . Therefore, by Apollonius I 11 that plane produces a PARABOLA when
it cuts the cone --with ve rtex T, diameter TU, and ordinates QN , RO, SP, &amp;c . The
proof basically rests on this fact.

A
The. f"\ysh.ry C1.1t
~

Now from 0 draw OW parallel to FE and meeting AC or AC produced.
OWll FE and L ABC=LAEF from the subcontrariwise cut; so,

Now ,

DEii

BC, . UTllAB ,

I. To prove that t he elongation becomes
reversed--the so- called "Jacobsen Effect . "

LCBA=LCUT=LEPN
while LCBA=LAEF=LEWO;
so

EPN= EWO .

2

Now , EON&gt; EPN [Euc . I 17) , so LEON )ilEWO.
£EWO; then LEOY&lt;L.EON and

(This proof uses an easily-proven LEMMA: Given three lines A, B and C, if A:B&gt;B:C,
then sp.A :s q . B:?J\:C. I'll sketch an argument for this in a note when I use it.)

Construct a new angle,LEOY, equal t o

EN&gt;EY . 3

OK, here we go: Given a cone with axial triangle ABC perpendicular to the base .
Make three cuts, all intersecting side AC at the same point E:
one parallel cut,
producing a circle with diameter DE [Apol . 1.4]; one subcontrariwise cut, producing a
circle with diameter FE [Apol. L 5]; and a random cut in between , producing an
ellipse with axis HE [Apol . 1. 13, 7]. Of course the common sections of the cutting
planes and the plane of the base, LG and MK, have to be perpendicular to BC produced
[Apol . I 5, 13] ; thus they are parallel to one another .

Now you've
Therefore :

constructed

EOY equal t o

OWE,

while

YEO= EOW

[alt .

int.

angles].

b YEO is similar t o 6EOW 4
and EY : EO::EO:OW.
BUT EN &gt;EY, so EN:EO)EO:OW [Euc . V 8 , 13];

Bisect
the
diameters FE, HE, DE
at N, 0, P respectively;
and
draw NQ, OR , and
PS
out
to
the
conic
surf ace
to
LG
parallel
These
(and MK) .
are all ordinates
I
13]
[Apol.
therefore
and
conjugate axes of
their
respective
diameters [Apol. I
15]; and QN=NE and
SP=PE, since those
cuts
produced
circles.

therefore sq . EN : sq . EO&gt;EN:OW [LEMMA] 5 .
Now, EN:OW: : NO : OT [Euc. VI 4]
so sq. EN: sq. EO)NT:OT [Euc . V 13] ;
but sq. QN: sq. RO::NT:OT [Apol. I 20],
since QN and RO are ordinates, and NT a.nd OT abscissas of a parabola; furthermore
QN=EN , since they're radii of the subcontrariwise circle, so sq. QN=sq. EN.
Therefore sq. EN: sq. RO :: NT : OT [Euc . V 7, 11]
and sq . EN : sq. EO)sq. EN: sq. RO [Euc . V 13].
Therefore sq. RO)sq. EO [Euc . V 10]
and RO)EO . Q. E. D.

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I

II.
To prove that the cut bisecting the angle between the parallel and the
subcontrariwise cuts -- the so-called "Jacobsen Cut" -- produces the maximum degree
of elongation the other way.

I say that KG:GE)LH:HE--i.e., the Jacobsen ellipse is more elongated out towards
the reader than an ellip se resulting from any other cut.
For, extend HG to meet AC at M, and from H draw RN parallel to DE meeting AC or
AC produced.
Then, first, KG and LR are ordinates of a parabola with vertex M, so

Proving this involves a preliminary fact
that I'll establish separately: a Jacobsen
cut cuts off an isosceles triangle on the
axial triangle.

sq. KG: sq. LH :: GM :HM [Apol. I 20];
but, second, GE: HN::GM:HM [Euc . VI 4] ,
so sq. KG: sq. LH::GE:HN [Euc. V 11] .

Let GE bisect the angle between DE and FE,
so that:

Now, with GE as a common height, GE:HN:: sq . GE : r.GE, RN,
LGEG=,LFED.

so sq. KG: sq. LR:: sq. GE : r. GE, RN ,
or sq. KG: sq. GE :: sq. LR : r. GE, RN, alternating.
Then, since in addition LABC=LADELAEF, because of parallels and the subcontrariwise
cut, LGED+LADE=tFEG+LAEF [C.N. 2];

NHM .

Now, it was given that LADE=LAED , so because of parallels, LNHM=LHNM .
Therefore:

but LGED+LADE=LAGE [Euc. I 32]
while LFEG+LAEF=LAEG,

LEHN&lt;LENH.
Cons truct a new angle,LEHO, equal to LENH , with 0 on DE .

so LAGE=LAEG and 6AGE is isosceles.

Then, LEHO&gt;LEHG and EG&lt; EO.
Meanwhile, LOEH=LEHN too [alt. int. angles], so

Now to prove
that the Jacobsen
cut delivers the
maximum
Jacobsen
Effect.
Given a
Jacobsen Cut, so
that LADE= LAED,
producing
an
ellipse with DE as
min.or axis and KG
as
major
axis;
given
also
a
cut
random
producing
an
ellipse with FE as
axis and LR as the
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conjugate axis (G
and
H are
the
midpoints).

..60EH is similar to 6EHN and
EO : EH : : EH : RN .
But EG&lt;EO, so EG:EH(EH:HN
or EH:EG)HN:EH, inverting;
therefore sq. EH rect.)GE,HN. [Apol . I 34, n. l]
But it was shown above t hat :
sq. KG: sq. GE: : sq. LR : rect.GE,HN,
sq. KG: sq. EG)sq. LR : sq. EH [Euc . V 8 , 13]
and KG:GE)LH:EH.
A similar procedure would deal with cases where F is above D.

Q.E.D .

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But EHG

�NOTES
1.

Euclid never bothers to prove t hat three parallel lines with a common
transversal must be in the same plane, which is too bad. I won't try to do it
here, but I'm sure it's true.

2.

Here you can see one reason why the Jacobsen Effect only exists in between the
parallel and subcontrariwise cuts: if 0 were below P , EON would be less than
EPN and the proof wouldn't hold.

3.

Is this self-evident?
At any rate, if you look at all the angles in the
triangles involved, EYO&gt; ENO, so EYO has to be the exterior angle of NYO , or
Euc. I 17 is violated.

4.

Here's another reason why the Jacobsen Cut has to be in between. If 0 is above
N, then even if (as is perfectly possible) EON&gt; EPN, as in the earlier part of
the proof, the angle EWO will here be the exterior angle of EOW, and it won't
be similar to YEO.

5.

Given three lines A, B, and C, if A:B&gt;B:C, then sq.A:SQ.B A:C; basically because
the first ratio if compounded of A:B and A:B, while the second is compounded of
A:B and A:C .

6.

Note that the cut FE doesn't have to be above the parallel cut for this proof t o
hold--the ratio just keeps decreasing.

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�Purgation of the Human Spirit
William O'Grady

enjoyed my drinks.
make you I?

What happens i f you drop all the things that

I would like to present some quite fragmentary thoughts about Dante's Purgatory
and about what the purgation of the human spirit might mean, why human beings might
hope for it and why they might fear it.
I am very eager to know whether these
thoughts make sense to you.

She means, I think, and Augustine means, that what arouses dread is not so much
the prospect of giving up the reliable pleasures for the sake of something less well
known, nor even the anticipated pain of the straightening of what has been crooked in
one's life and one's self; but rather the possibility that there will be nothing left
to mean when I say "I"-- the very word will nu longer have content. What am I, am I
anything at all, when stripped of the ways of being l have chosen to make my own and
have somehow placed myself into and taken responsibility for in laboring through my
life?
When the human spirit, my very own spirit, has been purged of all that is displeasing to God, will there by anything left of me?-- this most disquieting of
questions is felt by Dante the pilgrim as well as by ourselves.

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II

Let me begin with a passage from Augustine's Confessions, occurring just before
he recounts the moment in the garden when he hears a voice "as of a child" inviting
him to "take up and read" a passage from St. Paul that seems addressed specially to
him. He reads and "as if before a peaceful light streaming into my heart, all the
dark shadows of doubt fled away". But this is how Augustine describes his condition
before receiving and responding to the invitation:

I think it is impossible to understand Dante without holding fast to the realization that he insists with equal passion on the legitimacy of two fundamental
human desires: the desire to enjoy the highest good, to be in the loving presence of
God, to be as full of His grace and light as one may be; and the desire to be one's
very self. Neither of these desires must be sacrificed to the other--this is the
source of many of the great tensions of the Comedy (as well as being the reason, I
think, why there is no regret, let alone resentment, in a hierarchical paradise:
Cunizza, for example, within the sphere of Venus, knows that she could be a more
perfect vessel for God's light only by ceasing to be Cunizza--and this she cannot
want).
Because of the properly irreducible duality which Dante recognizes as fundamental to humankind's deepest desire, the purgation of the human spirit is a complicated
matter.
But it is also of the greatest importance that the journey of Dante the
pilgrim does not begin at the base of the mount of purgation. If that were so, some
calculation of cost and benefit might be imaginable: how much is one willing to sacrifice for how great a good. The fact is, however, that Dante arrives at Purgatory
having emerged from Hell, having seen with the greatest clarity--a clarity none of
us, I take it, possesses--what the alternative to purgation is. That alternative is
unbearable.
Therefore purgation is necessary:
Dante cannot impose conditions or
otherwise negotiate; he can only hope that at the end of the purgation of his spirit,
his "I myself" will still have some content, and indeed will have its most proper
content, whose properness is recognizable not only by God but also by Dante himself.

(In memory of my mother, Isabel Geddes O'Grady)

What was there that I did not say against myself?
With what
scourges of self-condemnation did I not lash my soul, so that it
would follow me as I strove to follow you? [All of these words are
spoken of course to God] Yet it drew back; it refused to go on, and
it offered no excuses for itself. All arguments [against being a
Christian] were used up, and all had been refuted. There remained
only speechless dread and my soul was fearful, as of death itself,
of being kept back from that flow of habit by which it was wasting
away unto death.
In order to understand something of Augustine's paralyzing dread, which only the
most definite invitation (as Augustine understood it) from God Himself could overcome, we must understand something of what he means by "the force of habit", which is
his remarkable and bold paraphrase of what St. Paul calls "the law of sin". I think
he means by habit something very radical, something that is perhaps suggested in some
words spoken by the adulteress--heroine in Grahame Greene's novel The End of the Affair. Sarah is resisting the renunciations--above all the renunciatiDn-o~her lover--which she is coming to believe God requires of her in fulfillment of a bargain
into which she entered out of desperation and love. She writes in her diary:
Nothing to do till seven when Henry
Had a couple of drinks by myself. It
give up drinking too? If I eliminate
I was somebody who loved Maurice (her

(her husband) would be back.
was a mistake. Have I got to
everything , how will I exist?
lover) and went with men and

Mr. O'Grady was a tutor at St. John's from 1970 until his death last
January.

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III

The alternative to purgation (whether in this life or afterwards) is Hell. Allow me to digress briefly upon what I take to be the principle of the choice for
Hell.
I think that according to Dante's presentation the principle of that choice
is, above all, the unwillingness to be moved by another, to have the source of one's
motion outside of oneself.
That is why the extreme of Hell is sheer frigid
immobility:
those who were unwilling to be moved by another are ultimately unable
themselves to move; at the furthest point from the unmoved mover Who draws all beings
to Himself, we encounter the unmoved movers whose only power--an irresistible power,
it seems--is to repel.
It is important to be aware that the unwillingness to have the source of one's
motion outside of oneself can, and often does, assume subtle guises. It is possible
to seem to be moved by another, by a being outside of oneself, while in fact using

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that other as a mere substratum upon which to project one's own fantasies, so that in
fact one is being moved by one ' s own fantasies, and the sou rce of one's motion is
exclusively and securely within oneself . This appears to be part of t he meaning of
the dream of the siren, the ancient witch, which Dante experiences upon the terrace
of sloth.

IV
I said earlier that Dante as a characte r in t he poem p oss es s es perfect clarity
concerning the alternative to purgation, and t ha t we do not.
But we seem t o have
some clarity about that alternative, and in any case neither Dante's submission t o
purgation nor our own seems comprehensible as nothing but flight from; there is surely also an element of the motion toward.
After all, what overcomes Dante's final
dread of the flames through which he must pass is the promise of Beat rice awaiting
him on the far side.
But the elements of flight from and motion toward seem to me
intimately connected, as I shall try to indicate by distinguishing between t wo aspects of purgation of the spirit as presented by Dante.
The first has to do with the so-called seven deadly sins.
Of three of
these--pride, anger and lust--Dante knows himself to be more guilty than he is of the
others.
These sins, or perhaps roots of sin, are surely serious and dangerous matters; but one can, after all, do something about them. At least within certain limits, willing avails to mortify pride, for example, and to restrain at least the out ward eruptions of anger--one can undertake to practice gentleness of speech.
But t o be lost in the dark wood, to come t o oneself again in the dark wood,
seems t o involve more than recognition of one's entanglement in particular sinful
ways.
Dante's own heart is not fully healed until at the top of the mount of
purgation, "the ice that was bound about my heart turned to breath and water and with
anguish came forth from my breast by mouth and eyes".
What had happened to Dante,
above and beyond his particular violations of the conduct proper for human beings, is
that his heart had grown hard and cold; and he knew that; and he knew that he could
not, by howsoever heroic an act of will-power, undo that hardness and coldness. The
most he could do--and that was difficult enough--was to sustain his sorrow that it
was so, his sadness that his heart was no longer capable, as the heart of the young
boy had been capable, of opening in awe and gratitude in the presence of the beauty
presented to him in the figure of a little girl, and of resolving to be as good as he
could be so as to be worthy, not indeed to possess her, but to be in the world that
contained her. Had Dante been unable to sustain his sorrow over the growing coldness
of his heart, had he self-distractingly or cynically accommodated himself to it, he
would have be en truly dead, and neither the grace of God, nor the graciousness of
Mary , Lucy and Beatrice, would have availed him anything.

v
Let us now finally enter Purgatory with the pilgrim Dante .
In the fi r st Canto
he is perfectly silent. What does this silence contain? There mus t be in it great
re lie f, and wonder, and some bewilderment. Above all, there is the certain knowledge
that Hell must be rejected , and hence the way of purgation must be chosen, must be
submitted to.
What will this submission require? Dante first of all hears the se vere Cato say that although Marcia was, in the old mode, t he surpassing love in his
life, in the new mode he is wholly unmoved by he r.
Whatev er Cato means by these
words, they must be heart -rending for Dante to hear.
When Dante does finally speak, in the second Canto, it is to ask Casella, the
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quiet all my longings, so as to refresh my soul with them for a while, which is so
spent coming here with my body . " But Dante prefaces his request in this way:
"If a
new law does not take from you the memory and use of these songs." It seems to Dante
entirely possible that a new law does forbid lovely and, as it seemed, innocent
t hings which once brought him consolation and refreshment --and if it is so, the new
law must nevertheless be submitted to.
But what then will be left, not merely of
consolation and refreshment, but of Dante himself?
I think these worries are very
much on Dante's mind, as they may be on ours, and they are hardly alleviated by
Cato's sharp rebuke, castigating delight in song as blamable negligence .
Well, it requires the presentation of Paradise itself before Dante and we can
even glimpse the aliveness, the richness and fullness of personality, the being more
myself than I have ever been before, enjoyed by the spirits whose purgation has been
completed . But there are two moments within Purgatory itself that I should like to
indicate briefly as bearing upon our hopes and fears in this matter.
The first occurs in the second Canto . As the thousand souls disembark from the
angel- piloted ship , they sing, all together with one voice , In exitu Israel de
Aegypto, "when Israel went out of Egypt" , a hymn of liberation anddeliverance . And,
Dan t e expressly tells us, they sing "all that is written after of that psalm".
Let
us listen to a few more words from this hymn (Psalm 114) which Dante heard:
The mountains skipped like rams, the hills like young sheep -- Why,
mountains , do you skip like rams, and you, hills, like young sheep?
Dance, 0 earth, at the presence of the Lord, at the presence of the
God of Jacob, who turned the r ock into a pool of water, the granite
cliff into a fountain.
There is in these words heard by Dante the promise that in the delivering,
liberating, purging action of God there comes to pass the greatest and most joyous
enlivening of all his creatures-- submission, still less renunciation and loss, are
very far from being the final moment.
VI
And yet as we read the end of the Purgatory--t he second moment to which I wished
to call attention--we cannot help but feel a heart - rending sense of loss :
"But
Virgil had left us bereft of him, Virgil sweetest father, Virgil to whom I gave myself for my salvation"; and Dante, in Eden, weeps.
I cannot say anything adequate about this moment. But I would like to say some thing about Virgil's words, Vir gil's poetry, of which Dante has not been lef t bereft;
and then, very shyly, about Virgil himself .
In the thirtieth Canto , in which is told the re-union of Dante and Beatrice and
the loss of Virgil , we encountei two lines from the Aeneid, the first spoken as it
were by Dante the poet, the second by Dante the pilgrim.
The poet in describing the pageant in honor of Beatrice tells us that as she
approaches "there rose up a hundred ministers and messengers of eternal life, who all
cried, Benedictus qui venis ("blessed are you who come", which must be referred to
Beatrice despite the masculine grammar) and, t hrowing flowe r s up and around , Manibus
o date lilia plenis ("with full hands give lilies")". The second of these utterances
occurs originally in book six of the Aeneid, as Anchises speaks sorrowfully of the
early death of the beautiful young man Marcellus, his life cut short before its full
flowering, bringing a sorrow which is not overwhelmed by the splendor of Rome's
accomplishments.
At first glance it appears that by transferring to an occasion of reJ01c1ng
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�ing the pagan poet who knew so well of the tears of things and the affairs of mortals
that touch the heart:
mourning has been transformed into joy.
But upon reflection
we find that it is not so simple. For the words "Blessed are you who come", that is,
"Blessed are you who come in the name of the Lord" (Ma tthew 21-9) are spoken to
Christ on Palm Sunday as he enters Jerusalem acclaimed by a greai crowd.
That is,
they are spoken at the beginning of the week of the Passion of Christ, the agony that
revealed most fully the depth of the tears of things.
The Christian poet cannot
simply transform or reverse Virgil's words - -mourning into rejoicing; he must first of
all deepen them or at the very least--which is not so little--remember them.
Now let us turn to the words from the Aeneid which Dante the pilgrim utters at
his moment of greatest need, of greatest awe, bewilderment, and overfullness. As he
sees Beatrice and once again, for the first time in ten years, feels "ancient love's
great power", he can find no words of his very own, no words originating with him.
But he needs words, and words are available, from Virgil:
"Not a drop of blood is
left in me that does not tremble; I know the marks of the ancient flame."
"I know the marks of the ancient flame"--the words are Dido's as she comes to
realize that the part of her that died with the death of Sychaeus is coming to life
again in the presence of Aeneus.
That the story which comes out of this experience
turns out painfully is immaterial here; what matters is the experience itself, an
experience which has befallen men and women in all times and places, and which once
upon a time was tenderly and truly understood and put into unforgettably beautiful
words. That true and unforgettable words had once been found for such an experience,
and that, through the loyalty and devotion of Dante they were not forgotten, had the
result that in the most overwhelming moment of his life, Dante did not have to live
wholly out of his own resources.
It is true of course that the pilgrim Dante must
make Virgil's words his own: Virgil's Latin becomes Dante's Italian.

Kepler puts it more fully, "formed, contained and terminated" by Christ.
Or, as St .
Augustine says near the beginning of the Confessions, quoting the 139th Psalm which
speaks to God: "If I descend into hell, you are present."

VII
I cannot close without trying to say something about the loss of Virgil himself at
the peak of the mount of purgation, whatever may be the consoling power of the
knowledge that we do not lose his words. Of the distressing question of the destiny
of the "virtuous pagans" much could be said, and the least that should be said is
that their apparent exclusion from the presence of God seems to have been as dis tressing for Dante as for many of us--he returns to it again and again, finally in
the heaven of Jupiter, the sphere of justice , where his question about the possible
salvation of those who know not Christ receives a negative answer theologically but
an affirmative answer empirically:
the pagan Ripheus, an obscure figure in the
Aeneid who is said in that poem to be the most righteous of the Trojans, is encountered by Dante in Paradise .
The only suggestion I have to make about this matter is the following.
I think
Dante would have been very grateful for, and would have made good use of, a certain
speculation of the astronomer Johann Kepler .
Traditionally, of course, Christ is
thought of as the mediator between man and God , as occupying a sort of in-between
position.
Kepler suggests an image complementary to this one in his discussion of
the regions of the world.
There are three of these, he says, corresponding to the
three Persons of the Trinity by way of a "divine symbolizing." In the center is the
sun, symbolizing the Father.
The sphere of the fixed stars symbolizes the second
Person, Christ; and the region in between, which of course includes the earth and its
denizens, is pervaded by the Holy Spirit. Thus it is we human beings who occupy the
in-between position, our lives centered in the Father and contained by Christ; or as

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�A Way to Think about Dark Times
William O'Grady

transcending his r age and despair .
Had Priam come earlier his pe ti tion would have
been futile .
Bu t if the gods had not , contrary to all rational expectation, pre served the body of Hector while Achilles was enduring and laboring through his rage,
if divine grace had not secured harmony between t he requirements of Achilles's inner
time and the requirements of the world-time which men share, Achilles would have had
nothing t o offer Priam except regret, and the most beautiful moment within the Iliad,
from which light streams upon all of the darkness and bitternesses of the poem, would
never have occurred. Homer writes:
But when they had put aside their desire for eating and drinking,
Priam, son of Dardanos, gazed upon Achilleus, wondering
at his size and beauty, for he seemed like an outright vision
of gods. Achilleus in turn gazed on Dardanian Priam
and wondered, as he saw his brave looks and listened to him talking.

I have been asked to talk about dark times, about t he darkness of the times in
which we live .
I shall try to do that, bu t it seems t o me t hat , being who I am, for
better and for worse, I can only indirectly carry out what has been asked. A sign of
that· indirectness, which I hope will not dismay you, is that I shall present what I
have to say in the form of refle ctions on brief passages from four books, t he most
recent of which was writte n about seven centuries ago. But I shall try very hard to
make myself understand and I hope t ha t some good may come from our being together.
From t he Iliad of Home r, composed more t han 2500 years ago, I wish t o talk about
what it means for one human being t o offe r another as much time as he needs; from the
Confessions of St. Augustine ab ou t what it means to be faithful t o that original care
for one's own well-being which seems t o be a part of each of us; fr om Dan te's
Purgatory about the sort of weeping that might b e redemptiv e and about how one can
keep intact one 's capaci ty f o r that sort of weeping; and finally from the Gospel of
St. John about why it might be that if all the deeds done by Christ were t o be written down, the world itself could not contain the books t ha t would b e re quired .
I would like to b egin with a moment in the Iliad because that book seems t o me
t o be very much about time.
In pondering the assignment to speak of living in dark
times, I had to ask myself what it would b e like t o live in bright times .
And it
occurred to me that the difference between dark times and bright times might not be
the most important diffe ren ce , just as Achilles , t he beautiful young warrior who is
the he r o of Homer's poem, comes to his proper wisdom when the choice which had always
seemed so important to him--a long life versus a short life, much time versus little
time --comes to be re placed by the difference which depends not upon choice, but rather upon a sor t of g race.
I shall try to explain what I mean.
Because o f a certain
prophecy, Achilles believes he has a choice between a brief life of unforgettable
glory or a long, undistinguished--though not unhappy--life. He broods much over t his
choice and is greatly confused .
Then his dearest friend is slain in war and he is
impelled into acti on of a despairing and merciless sort. He slays scores of men and
even does battle against a mighty river. He finally slays Hector, the slayer of his
friend .
In his rage he drags the body of Hector on the ground behind his chariot,
around and around the camp , every day for twelve days.
But the gods Apollo and
Aphrodite protect Hector's body, and the natural outcome does not en sue -- Hec t or 's
body is preserved rather than being mu tilated beyond rec ogni ti on.
Finally on the
twelfth day Priam, who is very old , the father of Hec t o r, c omes t o Achilles t o ask
for his son's body so that a proper funeral might be celebrated, with ritua l
lamentation and the feasting of a great feast.
Achilles and Priam weep together,
Achilles now f or his own father, now for his dead friend, Priam for his dead son.
Their tears somehow form one stream and are indistinguishable.
Achilles, moved by the beauty of Priam, grants his reque s t--h e is willing to
restore the body of Hector .
And--this is the one act of divine grace which takes
place within the Iliad--there is a body t o restore not a formless mutilated obscenity
which would break Priam's heart to see, but the body of Hector, young and handsome .
Reconciliation takes plac e within the Iliad because Achilles has been given enough
time, as much time as he needs . At no earlie r moment would he have been capable of

Achilles has been given--graciously, independently of any claims he might have
--e nough time, and he knows it. Anyone who has experienced being given enough time-and part of that experience seems to be a powerful sense of how easily things might
have gone otherwise, how likely it is for one to be given not quite enough time--the
question of much t ime versus little time, of a long life versus a short life, cannot
seem very important.
Thus Achilles asks Priam how long he will need to mourn and bury his son. Priam
says t welve days and explains why . Achilles grants him twelve days - he will hold
back the war for that long.
Achilles, having himself been given time, gives Priam
enough time. This is Achilles ' imitation of t he gods , his truly god-like act within
the Iliad. And it seems to me that for us too, it is utterly important to give people
as much time as t hey need, t o let them tell us just how much time t hat is, and to
understand that clear reasons cannot always be given for needing just that amount of
time.
But I do not think that many of us - I leave out of account a few great souls
among us - are capable of giving another time unless we ourselves have, in one form
or another , had the experience of being given, beyond any fair claims we can make,
and contrary to all rational expectation, enough time.
However dark our times may
be, I do not think that such experiences are altogether impossible for us . And when
they do befall us, surely gratitude requires that we make available to another, as
graciously as may be, what has been made available to us.
Let me now turn to the Confessions of St . Augustine, a book written about 1500
years ago.
The title Confessions means something different from what we might sup pose .
For Augustine , the proper subject of confession is the goodness of God.
But
God 's goodness is shown not only in the deep-down, always - presen t goodness of His
creation, but also in t he mercy He shows to sinful man .
Hence to acknowledge and
praise God ' s goodness includes acknowledging and praising His mercy, and that re quires that the occasions of that mercy, the sins and sinfulness of our lives, be set
forth .
That in turn requires a travelling through memory .
This is what Augustine
does in his Confessions : he presents himself in his neediness in order to present
God in His graciousness and to give Him praise for His graciousness.
According to
Augustine, this praise is not so much our duty as it is our deepest delight, the de ligh t for which we were made .
I would like t o consider with you something Augustine says about himself as a
young child. He finds something wonderful in that child, something altogether worthy
of praise.
That something is no achievement of the child, nor any potential for
achievement, but rather something wholly God- given :
it is, Augustine says, "a care
for my own well- being" which shows itself, among other ways, by the fact that " I
shunned sadness and dejection."
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�that it is a matter of course for each of us to care for himself--"to take care of
number one," as we sometimes say--the only surprising thing--perhaps even a miracle-being that occasionally we also care for other people. But for Augustine the most
difficult thing in the world is to care for our own well-being, or more precisely, to
be faithful to that original care for our own well-being with which God endowed us
in the beginning, to ~ on caring for our own well-being, to ~ on shunning sadness
and dejection. The reason is that we grow weary, feel worn-out, are bewildered and
embarrassed as we attempt to sustain the care for our own well-being. We long for
rest.
Not that Augustine thinks we ought not to long for rest.
He says to God:
"Our hearts are restless until they rest in Thee." But until that most proper rest
comes to be, the human task is to be faithful to the original restlessness and to the
original care for our own well-being from which it springs.
Augustine does not praise himself in the Confessions, one reason being that he
knows the great power of what he calls "the passion for self-vindication", that is,
not merely pride in the sense of having too high an opinion of ourselves, but rather
the awesome passion to vindicate ourselves when accused, whether by others or by ourselves. Augustine does not suppose that this passion within him needs any help from
him. But if he were to praise himself, to find something praiseworthy in his life-achieved with the help of God of course but still achieved by Augustine--it would be
for being faithful through many years to his own restlessness, for sustaining, in the
face of so many temptations to come to some false settlement, to some false peace,
that restlessness which so wearied him.
From the point of view of Confessions, written when he was about forty-five, he
writes of himself in his thirty-first year, fully the thirteenth year of his most
earnest searchings for a truth in which his heart and mind could find genuine rest-that is, the 13th year of what we so easily refer to as an "adolescent religious crisis." He writes of how weary he was, and how embarrassed--how embarrassed, since he
had been making such a fuss about his own well-being for so long a time, instead of
getting on with the practical business of life (he was, after all, a Roman). But he
held out in his weariness and his embarrassment until, as he recounts it, he received
a true invitation from the true God. And then he said yes.
Now let me turn to a passage in the Divine Comedy. There is a certain story
told to Dante by a soul in Purgatory which I would like to tell you. But first I
must say a few words about how Dante thinks of Purgatory. The souls in Purgatory-every one of them--will one day be in Heaven with God and each will be f illed--in the
measure possible for each without his ceasing to be himself--with light and joy. But
first--and this is what Purgatory is for, according to Dante--a kind of patience is
necessary, and a coming to understand the ways in which our lives have been perverse,
and an attempt--for once, happily, an attempt which is bound to succeed--to
straighten out what has been crooked in them, not because otherwise God could not
stand the sight of us, but because otherwise we would be simply ashamed and bewildered and miserable in the presence of God. The straightening out of what has been
crooked in our lives--in us--is painful, but it is pain which the souls in Purgatory
do not wish to avoid.
Now let me recount to you the story which one of the souls in Purgatory tells
Dante. His whole life, he says, or almost his whole life, had been full of violence
and hatred, of hating and being hated . He met his death hunted down by his enemies,
who wounded him and drove him into a swamp, where as he lay dying he saw pools of his
blood form alongside him in the stinking water. He was alone and there was no one,
even far away, who loved him. The moment before his death he shed a tear: " I ended
on the name of Mary and there fell and only my flesh remained" (Purgatory V. 101-2).
The devils came to take him away to Hell. But angels came who would not permit them.
The devils were furious at the unfairness of it: "On account of one little tear (una
lacrimetta in Dante's Italian) we are deprived of what is rightfully ours," they

shriek, "What is one little tear against a whole life-time of violence and hatred?"
But the angels are firm, and the soul goes to Purgatory, to prepare itself for the
presence of God.
I want to reflect with you upon that one little tear, so strangely powerful.
First, I think it must be not merely a tear of self-pity, of feeling sorry for oneself--! think some wider sorrow must be in it, some sorrow for having offended God or
having offended against the beauty of His creation or some sadness at having betrayed
things one shouldn't have betrayed. But I am not so sure that there may be nothing
of self-pity in it. It would be strange, after all, and perhaps perversely prideful,
to see and sorrow over the deep sadness of the world--the "tears of things", as
Virgil says--and to exempt oneself, to stand above that sorrowful world and look down
upon it. No, I do not think that self-pity--of which we so often speak harshly-must be excluded from that tear, although of course much more must also be included.
Second, we must be aware that to shed such a tear, to shed the right kind of
tear, is not an act of will. We cannot heroically, at that final moment, make ourselves do it through strenuous exertion. Such a tear comes forth or it does not. It
comes forth from a heart in which there is still some goodness. Here, I think, is
where the will comes in, where trying hard and struggling come in. Not indeed the
kind of struggle to be as good as good can be, the struggle to be very good. Rather
I am thinking of human beings in· whose lives it is much too late in the day to make
of their lives a beautiful thing which might gladden those who behold them, but for
whom the question is: after so many betrayals of the things I ought least to have
betrayed, after so many acts of violence against what I ought most to have cherished,
what difference could one more betrayal, one more act of violence, possibly make?
What difference could there possibly be between a thousand betrayals and a thousand
and one? Perhaps I could resist this present temptation to betrayal--it would be
painful, but perhaps I could do it--but what's the use? What difference could it
possibly make? And surely tomorrow I shall be guilty of some new betrayal.
What Dante means to say, I think, is that it does make a difference: that one
moment of fidelity in the midst of a thousand betrayals does not indeed make a life
into a beautiful thing in which men and angels may rejoice, but i t may be enough to
keep somehow intact a heart capable of shedding the right kind of tear when
it matters most.
Let me conclude by saying a few words about the final sentence of the Gospel of
St. John.
That sentence says: "But there are also many other things which Jesus
did; were every one of them to be written, I suppose that the world itself could not
contain the books that would be written." This makes sense, I think, only if we suppose that John does not have in mind only the deeds of Jesus during his thirty-three
years in Palestine, where of course he encountered only a not very great number of
souls. Rather, John must mean that every soul that has ever been in the world or
ever will be encounters Jesus in one guise or another, knows him by one name or another, responds, however obscur~ly, to his invitation.
And I think it is not
blasphemous to speak of these deeds of Jesus as being not only for our rescue--although surely it is right for us to think of them in this way most of the time--but
also for this own fullness and therewith for the fullness of the creation.
For we
must take seriously his being a person. And of myself as a person I know that there
are some things in me which are brought out -- and in some mysterious way even called
into being--only by a certain friend, other things brought out only by another
friend. The loss of a friend is the loss of a part of me. As Jesus issues his invitation in as many ways as there are souls in the world, the creation comes fully
into its own.
These words may sound to you outrageously serene coming from one who was asked
to speak about the darkness of our dark times. Surely an urgent and bewildered sense
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�availability in any comprehensible way, are among the deepest parts of our experience
here and now . But I wonder whether there are not moments in the experience of each
of us in which we can somehow sense the truth of these words spoken by Wisdom, that
is, somehow , by Christ:
"I am from eternity, and before the earth was made I was
with Hi m forming all t hings , and was delighted every day, playing at His feet at all
times; playing in t he world. And my delights were to be with the children of men."
How such moments--moments in which the world seems a deeply innocent place--are
to be put t ogether with the dark moments is very hard to say--it is surely beyond my
powe r t o say--but not t o give voice t o them at all seems to be a lie.

#3

I lay on my back in a field
Beneath the moon
I close my eyes, open them
And the moon is no longer above but before ,
Earth no longer beneath but behind ,
Like a wall where prisoners are sent to die.

#8

Now you've left,
My bed is flat Hot
I'm falling asleep
A drop of spit
on a just-hot griddle
Skittering,
Diminishing.

Stuart Sobczynski

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Final Cause and the Problem of Existence
Jim Guszca

Though separated by nearly 2000 years, Aristotle and Erwin Straus asked some of
the same questions about the causes of human existence in their re spective works,
Parts of Animals and "The Upright Posture" . Both philosophers questioned the validi ty of ~ientific theories that only gave "material" causes for "the products of nature."
Both believed that a Final Cause must be given to explain why animals,
particularly the human, exist as they do.
Aristotle was refuting one of the physiologers when he said that "it must be
explained how it comes to pass that each of these [non-uniform parts] is charac terized as it is and by what force this is effected" (640b - 20).
In other words, it
is not enough to say that the stomach, for example, is formed by water flowing
through the body; a re ason mus t be given for the specific form of t he stomach, a complicated non- uniform part of the body .
To do t hi s, one must consider the precise
purpose for which the stomach exists.
This purpose is observed as the function t he
stomach performs in its environment.
Straus had a similar argument against t he paleontologists. He said, in effect,
that it is not enough to say that man developed from the primates through an evolutionary process.
"Paleontology t ells us wha t man o r what his ancestors once were,
but not what man actually is ..• it has little to say about how the change to modern
man came about and what its final result was" (pg . 140).
In other words the prehis toric forms of our ancestors do not explain how or why humans exist as t hey do in the
present.
Both philosophers advocated similar scientific methods: t hat we accept as given
whatever is and go on to state its cause . Mere observation isn't enough. The reason
why something came to be as it is is necessary in order to understand its place in
the world.
Aristotle gave t he example of the house.
The house is formed by a
certain process .
Each step of the process, however, is determined by the house's
Final Cause.
That is, we first consider the function, and therefore the nature, of
the house in relation to its environment and then go on the build it in such a way
that it will se r ve its function.
So the process of formation itself isn't the cause
of the final form of the house, or similarly the animal, since the process is ultimately dependent on the house's (animal 's ) function in its environment.
In describing the automobile, Straus gave a similar example.
One cannot "explain its present
form and shape by mere reference to its forerunner" for "it is the automobile's own
function and dynamic structure that determines its shape".
The development of the
automobile didn't occur spontaneously . Certain problems with its functioning lead us
t o draw up new plans for design.
Let us note that both men dealt with the hand as an "organ" because they both
considered its Final Cause . The important fact about the hand is not that it is made
up of certain uniform parts in a certain way.
The hand exists as a part of us and
has a special function.
That function explains why the human body has the hand that
it has.
It also explains why it is an organ, as oppos ed to the finger, whose func tioning is incomplete out of the context of the whole hand.
What each of the philosophers gave as their Final Causes differed, however. To
illustrate this difference, we will consider the authors' respective treatments of
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Both authors allowed that the upright posture is a necessary prerequisite for
the human hand (Aristotle, 687a 10; Straus, pg. 149) . Aristotle, however, went on to
say that the human being "has his hands because he is the most intelligent animal" .
That is, he has his hands because of the nature of his soul; his soul is not determined by the nature of his hands.
In On the Soul, Aristotle called the soul the
Final Cause of the living body: "Just as the mind acts with some purpose in view , so
too does nature, and this purpose is its end.
In living creatures,
the soul
supplies such a purpose ('function') , and this is in accordance with nature, for all
natural bodies are instruments of the soul" (415b 15) .
Aristotle also compared the
living being to a wax figure.
The body is the "wax" in the raw state, and the soul
is t he "impression" made on the wax to give it shape.
The impression is what must
contain the Final Cause of the figure if its final form is to agree with its func tion.
Neithe r can exist without the othe r, but it is clear that the wax (body) exists for, and is moulded to conform to the needs of the impression (the soul). Thus ,
the soul is the Final Cause of the body . It determines the form and the function of
each of the parts of the body.
Straus wasn't quite so definite in giving the Final Cause of the body o r of its
parts.
Like Aristotle (687al0) , Straus said that "In upright posture, the frontal
extremities are no longer asked to suppor t and carry the body ... they are free for
new tasks" (pg . 149) .
So the anterior limb of the primates develops into the human
arm , and t he hand develops into an "organ of gnostic toughing". Note the implication
that the hand is formed the way it is to perform certain functions :
"The hand is a
tool in re lation to the living, experiencing being" .
For t he development of the
hand, "upright posture is not only the gene tic condition, but also continues to domi nate the function of the hand" (my underline) .
In this last quote, uprigh t posture seems to be to Straus the same type of Final
Cause as the soul is to Aristotle . But although Straus listed a number of body parts
denoting intelligence:
"While upright posture permits the formation of the human
skull, and, thereby, of the human brain , the maintenance of upright posture demands
the development of the human nervous system", he was unclear about the role that
human intelligence plays in causality: "Who can say what comes first and what comes
last --what is the cause and what is the effect (pg . 164)".
So could we say that the Final Cause of the human form is an evolutionary inter action between the sensory organs and the central nervous system?
"The sensory o rgans cannot change without a corresponding change in the central nervous system.
No
part could be altered alone.
With upright posture, there is a transformation of
sensorium and motorium , of periphery and center, of form and function." The implica tion is that the development of one, either mind or body , creates a function that the
other must develop in such a way as to serve .
So we could say that Aristotle and
Straus disagreed as to whether the body adapts for the soul or whether the "soul", or
mind, adapts along with the body .
But I don't want to end with this comparison, either.
Using this evolutionary
interaction to explain our present state of existence seems like the physiologers'
use of purely material causes to explain the stomach. Why does this development take
place and why does this development produce the changes it does?
Bo t h bel ieved that body and soul are interdependent.
But where Aristotle be lieved that the body exists for the sake of the soul, Straus believed that the two
cannot be separated in this way.
He did say that all of the evolutionary "alterations (in nervous and sensory parts) are related to upright posture as their ba sic theme".
Thus the upright posture is the Final Cause of the human mind/body complex . Going back to t he house analogy, upright posture is the basic structure, while
evolution works out the details as development proceeds. There are, then, two levels
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�that it has had an important role in determining our present form and therefore our
present existence.
But specific causes are needed to explain specific evolutionary
changes. These come from problems with our being -in-the-worl d on a biological level .
The existence of the creatures we once were was threatened by various cases of
incompatability with their environment.
As nature's trial-and-error process of development stepped in to change our form, the factors of upright posture and
intelligence began to have more major parts to play in the development.
Presently ,
they play the most important parts in the makeup of our being -in-the-world.
Aristotle, it seems, would agree with Straus . Like Straus, he knew that a reason must be given for everything that happens in nature. Not being an evolutionist,
he personified Nature and give her the ability to make rational, and very economical,
decisions that directly determine the order of things.
Straus believed that nature
makes her decisions by the trial- and - error process of evolution .
Both men made it a point to explore human existence through biology.
They did
this by trying to determine the way in which man arose out of nature, that is, what
his final cause is. As one man put it, this isn't the type of science you smash atoms with, but it does deal effectively with the key problem of our existence: how we
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Antigone
Hugh Brantner

At the time of the first paper on Antigone it seemed to me that the character of
Antigone was unambiguous; so much so that she was difficult to write about.
Indeed,
it seemed she was so intent upon her actions and so unremitting of them that she was
a long distance from audience sympathy.
"Her unwavering intent upon her goals dis tances us from her such that our ability to live with her through her role is diminished." Perhaps it was a reluctance on my part to see Antigone's faith in her own
actions as anything but the negative sense of the the Greek word
- an untold presumption or arrogance.
Perhaps it was also because Sophocles presented her
character to us in such a way that access to her heart is not allowed until late in
the play, and then not simply by watching her.
There is little doubt that Antigone's intentions in the play are of a righteous
nature.
Long before they are uncovered by the plot, the audience knows her actions
to be well done. Yet from the first lines of the play it is much easier to be sympathetic with Ismene's fears for her sister and her subsequent unwillingness to cross
the state decree.
Perhaps this is the result of an inability to see the human
usefulness of such an action, which makes it difficult for us to find the reserve of
strength necessary to fly into the face of death.
Of course we don't want Antigone
to die; we have the belief that she is right. Yet we are not one with her.
Indeed,
what she does seems beautiful, but its apparent cost causes us to shrink into
ourselves, away from her.
Antigone, though, is not all strength and purpose.
She is human.
As a human
she too must recognize death and know its meaning.
It is in acknowledging this that
Antigone seems to become accessible to the audience. It is through her last lines in
the play that we can come to affirm her judgement and perhaps come to love her.
It
is here that the superhuman effort needed to overcome the all too human fears falls
away leaving an heroic but very human being.
To accept this interpretation of Antigone's character is to step into some apparent controversy over a series of lines in the play.
Sir Richard Jebb along with
some other translators find these lines, vv 904 - 920, to be spurious.
Perhaps these
lines are not authentic as Jebb argues.
If this is the case it would seem that the
audience is robbed by the playwright of a view into another mortal's soul-- the soul
of the namesake of the play. If o?e reads this play without these lines he is denied
the realization that the actions of the play are all human actions.
Instead the veil
that surrounds the driven Antigone remains drawn. Creon dashes his ship upon her, an
unmoving, unyielding rock.
If, however, the lines stand, then Antigone is not the
foil of Creon.
Certainly they cross one · another, but i t is in going to different
destinations.
It is as if Creon has set his sights upon the monsters lurking at the
edge of the sea thinking them to be beauties.
He sails by his own navigation over
the edge.
Antigone runs afoul of Creon enroute to her own destination. She is purposeful, like a river flowing where it must until the very end.
Jebb's arguments against these lines are fairly concise.
It seems that he objects to them primarily on grounds of logic and grammar. He states three objections
to these lines.
The first objection is: "The general validity of the divine law, as asserted tn
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�In lines 450-460 Antigone asserts in her confession of the rites of burial for
Polyneices that the immortality of the gods is to be respected above all. A law of
the gods must be obeyed prior to any law of man who is mortal.
It is not possible
for any of man's laws to "over-run" one of the gods'. Since the rites of death have
long been held as an act of piety towards the gods, Creon's order to withhold burial
rites cannot be obeyed. She acknowledges that death is necessary, for she must cross
a man's law. She obviously does not perceive any hope of Creon rescinding his edict.
But what kind of ill could death at the hands of man be when held in relation to the
ill of being impious to the immortal gods? These lines do seem clear in affirming a
belief in that law.
Jebb apparently feels that lines 905-907 contradict the priorities Antigone
states in lines 450-460.
After having uttered these lines, why would Antigone say
that the actions would not have been done had she been a mother or wife with a child
or husband mouldering away? He seems to feel that if one is ready and willing to die
to honor divine law above mortal law, then it would make no difference what the mortal-world conditions were.
The divine law must take precedence.
Therefore, it is
illogical to babble in the later lines about a child and husband.
Jebb's second objection is an extension of the first:
"A still further limita:....
tion is involved in 911 ff.
She has buried her brother, not simply as such, but because, while he lived, he was an irreplaceable relative.
Could she have hoped for
1
the birth of another brother, she would not then, have felt the duty so binding . "
Jebb seems to feel that this statement by Antigone further eclipses her from
lines 450-460.
Again it is illogical that any mortal condition, even human love,
should stand in the way of the priority of divine law.
How could the loss of a
"replaceable" brother possibly alter the law? It would still stand, and the lack of
burial rites would of course be impious.
The third objection Jebb cites is simply that:
"The composition of vv. 909 1
912 is unworthy of Sophocles."
Further down in his line-notes, Jebb elaborates with three points. The first is
about a word which is not believed to have been in Attic use at the time of
Sophocles.
The second is about the jumbled hypotheses in the lines.
The arguments
are not kept grammatically clear and distinct, but instead fall over one another.
His third is again a point over awkward grammar.
An overview of Jebb' s statements seems only to turn up the two categories of
objection:
logic and grammar.
These seem odd grounds in some ways upon which to
base a decision about the authenticity of these lines .
Antigone is about to die .
Would anyone ask of a person facing death by any form of execution that he be consistently logical and grammatically correct? Perhaps.
If the person was of high moral
character, strong, confident in the righteousness of his actions , then one might come
to expect coherency from him even in the worst of conditions.
Antigone is all of
these, but it seems that Sophocles shows us more of her character than just this
side. What Sophocles shows us is important in order to fully understand Antigone as
a human character, to sympathize with, and possibly to love her.
Sir Richard Jebb was a Greek scholar impossibly far beyond my own abilities as a
student of the Greek language.
If he says that a point of grammar is so or that usage in a particular fashion is unusual, I must believe him. However, I see no reason
to hold fast to his conclusion that lines 905-912 are not Sophocles'; and that lines
904 and 913-920 must fall also because of unity within lines 905-912.
Jebb may be
right and the play should be read without these lines.
If so, then an image of a
strong character until the end prevails.
Sure in the righteousness of her actions,
Antigone sails straight to her destination, slipping off the edge of the mythical
sea, but into immortal fame.
If, however, one grants that the lines were penned by
Sophocles, then the picture, it seems, is different.
The rough grammar and the
twisted logic portray another depth of character.
The superhuman effort breaks up,
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a skilled playwright rather than the crude insertions of a lesser mind.
. One ,Problem for ~hose wh? call these lines spurious is their appearance in
Aristotle s, The Art of Rhetoric.
Jebb answers this by saying that the lines mu t
ha:e been inte.rpolated shortly after the poet's death, perhaps by the poet's so:.
This chronological approach is far less interesting than the points Aristotle mak
·
·
es
in t h e section i n wh"
ich he quotes Sophocles.
.
I~ t~e Nic~omachean Ethics Aristotle writes that it is by a man's actions along
with his intentions that man should be judged.
Outlining the nature of Tragedy, he
writes in the Poetics that action must occur within the narration for there to be a
good story. Action takes precedence over character; then character fleshes out that
action for the listeners. In the Rhetoric he draws a distinction for how an audience
will perceive an action, given the type of motivation for that action.
Do not let your words seem inspired so much by intelligence, in the manner now current, as by moral purpose:
e.g. 'I willed this; aye, it was my moral purpose; true,
I gained nothing by it, still it is better thus.' For
the other way shows good sense, but this shows good character; good sense making us go after what is useful, and
good character after what is noble.2
Aristotle has drawn a dichotomy in the reasons for which a person may be perceived to accomplish an act. On the one hand, he could be doing something because it
is useful.
This usefulness could admit of several species, such as prof it, need,
desire, etc.
On the other hand, he could be doing something out of "moral purpose".
Motives springing from usefulness are perceived as less honorable than those of moral
purpose.
The primary difference seems to come with the lack of visible gain in the
latter. One does something out of moral purpose with no end in mind, perhaps even at
a great cost to himself.
The point that Aristotle is taking up is that it is desirable to show character
in a play. Moral interest and moral purpose show character in a way that purely sensible actions springing from reason cannot.
When we see a character on the stage
move through actions motivated by reason alone we judge him by that reason. Our sympathies and energies focus on the action in terms of the steps leading to the end.
Perhaps the end is not clear to an audience right away, but his actions nonetheless
move in quantifiable, logical steps.
He is acting upon a common ground we all can
trea~ and so can look backwards and forwards, coming to know what he has done, what
he might do, and why. Of course reason is not always consistent between men. When a
character makes an unexpected move we search for the reason in the new action that
might indicate the new end sought.
We see action that might indicate the new end
sought. We see action in terms of a motivation towards that end.
However, if a character is ac~ing from moral purpose, the linear quality of reason breaks up.
It is no longer clearly motivation with an end in mind
+
action
toward that end + end.
Instead the action and the end can become one.
No longer
is there a more-or-less objective grid available to trace an action upon.
The act
must be perceived in a more subjective manner.
This places two individuals in a
realm where emotional responses must be elicited.
The first person is of course the
character who will display qualities of some emotional and moral depth.
The second
is the individual member of the audience who will see this side of the character and
must respond in kind. He will not be able to appeal to some more neutral contrivance
as a reason to judge the character's actions and intentions. Instead he must respond
emotionally from inside of himself. The more morally deep the action, the more depth
the audience member must plumb in himself if he is to understand what is going on
before his senses.
It is this type of character who can move an audience and give
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I will lie together with him, a beloved together
with a beloved

A playwright must have some moral purpose motivating a character received with
some emotional attachment by t he audience , and that character must display the pur pose through his action, his wor ds , or through other charac te rs a r ound him. In some
way or another the intention behind the actions must be made manifest for the audi ence.
Aristotle continues beyond these points i n the Rheto r ic to the actual quote of
Sophocles . He cites lines 911 and 912 as an example t hat gives cause to Antigone's
behavior :

It is, however, the pie t y of lines 74-77, and 89:
having dared a righteous crime; since the time
is greater
for those below , who it is necessary for me to please,
than for those here.
There I will lie forever . But it may seem right to you
to hold in dishonor the things the gods hold in honor.

Where any detail may appear incredible, t hen add the cause
of it; of this Sophocles provides an example in the Antigone,
where Antigone says she had cared more for her brother than
for husband or children, since if the latter perished they
might be replaced,
'But since my father and mother in their graves
Lie dead, no brother can be born to me. ,3

But I know that I am making good to whom it is necessary
to most have pleased.
which gets carried forward from this scene and reaches its climax in lines 450- 460 .
Somehow Antigone's love drops beneath the surface of the play . Ismene's expression
of love in line 99 seems to heighten the obscurity of Antigone's feelings:

This cause is an irreplaceable love .
This, however , does not seem to convey the
whole picture to me . These l i n e s are important for showing Antigone's cha r ac t er and
purpose . It does not seem , however , t hat Antigone feels love for Polyneices because
he is irreplaceable . Neithe r does it s e em tha t she would ac t any di f fer ently i f t he
dead was a r eplaceable loved one. Ar i stotle se ems r igh t i n hi s unde rstanding t he
underlying cause for Antigone' s action as love . Yet he wants to put a qualifier on
the depth of the love which seems to delimit some of the character t hat may have been
put into the play by Sophocles .
If Antigone is not elucidating a reason for her actions, and not contradicting
herself, then what do t hese lines say? Simply that Antigone is shuddering under t he
mantle of her own actions . It i s not a shuddering of r e gret , but rather a giving ouz
of the extreme reserve of st r ength necess~ r y to "go to t he fullest verge of daring",
t o find "the high foundation of jus t ice" .
She is now alone . The act has be en done ,
the confrontation is past. Her momentum is all but spent. She seems like a rough
stone ball which rolls when i t has force and momentum, but which to t ters, wobbles ,
and shudders in its motion as t hat force is spent .
Her speech of lines 891 - 928 is not spoken to Cr eon or the chorus . It is spoken to the dead, and as an inwa r d reflection t hrown outwar d. The wo r ds she speaks
seem to be ones of some doubt . They seem to be casting about for a reason . Yet the
anguish which r ises up thr ough the lines indicates that there is no doubt. Antigone
has not changed. Her self is no longer full of her singular will. Instead she is
giving herself over to emotions which have only been undercurrents through the earlier portion of the play .
Antigone's action of performing burial rites for Polyneices is of course the
center of the play. When she talks early in the play, the reasons she gives for her
action are those of piety . Yet they are not purely of piety. In lines 27 - 29 she
speaks of the burial rites not in terms of piety, but rather in reference to mortals:
they say he has proclaimed to the whole town
that none may bury him and none bewail,
but leave him unwept, untombed .. .

'Go , if i t seems so to you ; but know this, that foolish
you go, but by those who love you, rightly loved . '
Ismene, while running short of the strength necessary to act as Antigone asks, none theless has the ability to r each beyond those limit s with an expression of love .
Ant igone's interest in piety is a real one .
It is neither a cover for her
actions, nor the prime motivation for them . If her actions were guided purely by an
interest in piety, then the lines Jebb questions would indeed sound out of place.
She would be denying herself the very r eason for her action . In this light Jebb's
arguments would be a little bit more persuasive .
As it turns out, Antigone's lines of 909- 920 do sound odd. Falling on our ears
as they do, they seem in contrast to the hardened Antigone who leaves Ismene in the
first scene, and who corrosively responds to Creon's vehemence against her. They do
not make sense with the other things we have heard from Antigone. Because they seem
in contrast, they do not pass by smoothly. Instead they stick and jam and must be
internalized . Their meanings do not indicate why they are spoken.
Only in their
disorder do they convey their meaning. The unities we expect of logic and grammar
become broken. Mortal conventions fall before an immortal passion of the soul.
The Antigone who leaves Ismen e in the opening scene is har dened, anneal e d f or
what she wills. The task she asks Ismene to share must now be done alone. Arguing
piety, she leaves for her task with Ismene' s words of love falling like petals on
frozen ground. When we see her next she must confront the attacks of Creon. Defiant
and firm she remains hardened. She cites the divine law as her defense. She answers
law with higher law as they exchange barbed statements over the justice of the situation . Finally in lines 522 - 523 t hey come to the issue at hand:

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Creon :
Antigone:

She seems to see the burial rites in terms of the human needs to which they attend.
Here she is not thinking of piety as much as expressions of love for one who has
died. Lines 48 and 73 reflect not primarily pious thoughts, but ones of love:

Never the enemy, even in death,
a friend.
I cannot share in hatred but
in love.

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Antigone's response falls upon our ears in an odd way much like line 909-920,
though this line (523) is prior . Antigone uses the verb ¢uw , which here means that

But there is not for him a right to shut me
out from those of mine.

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it is by nature that she is disposed not to join Creon in hating Polyneices, but
rather love him.
It is a strange statement falling after the rapid-fire, heated
words over justice. It is hard to reconcile this vision she has of herself with her
character on stage. She has been scathing in her treatment of Ismene and of course
Creon. The words seem somehow misplaced. However, there is not time to reflect on
them as the force of Creon's reply, along with the momentum of the preceding lines,
carry us quickly beyond them. His reply itself in lines 524-525 only helps bury her
words, for he cannot connect with her sense of love:
And now he leads me, taking me by force
unbedding, without a wedding song, obtaining
not a share of a wedding feast nor in the nurture
of a child,
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but an ill-fated one, alone from friends.
The lines preceding line 905 from line 897 also speak of her idea of love in ref erence to the burial rites she has attended for her father, mother and brother,
Eteocles. Couched between her expressions of love for others in the past, and those ·
once hoped for in the future, these lines lead us to see that her actions sprang not
from a need to be right, to honor the gods, but rather to express her love for her
brother.
Thus we are led deeper into the soul of Antigone and for a moment can be sure of
her actions and humanity. Indeed what we once shrank from may seems less fearful for
a moment. In finding her motivation we have to open ourselves up to the love we have
known. And for that moment our hearts are open in an attempt to understand, death
seems to be remote while it is Antigone who is near.
Sir Richard Jebb has his reasons for eliminating these lines which seem to open
Antigone up. Somehow though, I find his Antigone colder and more removed.
I have
come to like the closeness that this perhaps less scholarly interpretation allows of
her character. There is meaning and depth in her which are born of love. Yet when
all is said and done, I think that it is the sense of promise that I most respond to;
the promise that the love I experience in this human existence can be powerful enough
to extend me beyond the self which delimits my existence in terms of fear and death.
This is a promise one cannot be reminded of too often.

1 - Jebb, Sir Richard, The Antigone of Sophocles abr. version, E.S. Shuckburgh,
editor; Cambridge Univ . Press .
2

Aristotle, The Art of Rhetoric, W. Rhys Roberts, trans., III, 16, lines 24 - 27.

3 - Ibid, III, 16, lines 28 - 33.
4 - Antigone, Elizabeth Wyckoff, trans, lines 852 - 853.
5 - Ibid, lines 27 - 29.
6 - Ibid, lines 522 - 523.
7 - Ibid, lines 524 - 525.

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Sonnet for a Slavic Miner
A.J. Krivak

The Dead
Renee Bergland

Let us roll all our strength, and all
our sweetness, up into one ball:
and tear our pleasures with rough strife,
through the Iron gates of life.
Thus though we cannot make our sun
stand still, yet we will make him run.
In this town, along this river, down these shafts
Darkness reigns under the earth.
In America, a still struggling re-birth
Carries you along, men in and endless rafts
Of coal out in a stream of blood-smeared dust .
From Prague peasants rode the civilian trains
To steamships waiting in Hamburg . The rains
Come for days to thaw, the leeching cars leave rust
On your hard blue hands; the tortuous sound
Of ceiling drops, muffled ground-thunder below .
Memories of the old kawntree fade,
Your children soon are breaker boys who pound
Piles of stone with hammers for pay. Shenandoah
fires burn, your Anna collapses in tears she made.

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-Andrew Marvel
"To His Coy Mist,ress"

Gabriel Conroy is falling asleep. His wife is beside him, dreaming dreams which
have no room for him. He muses, "Better pass boldly into that other world, in the
full glory of some passion, than fade and wither dismally with age". Then he falls
asleep peacefully. His soul swoons slowly into sleep, and the snow falls faintly
upon the living and the dead . We close the book peacefully and fall asleep ourselves, lulled and comforted by the warmth of human hospitality and kind humor which
Gabriel has told us about. We are certain somehow that Michael Furey, beautiful,
passionate, blazing boy that he was, was somehow wrong. We do have world enough and
time. Eternity is not a pressure, but a peaceful promise.
Gabriel brings us glad tidings. Tidings of peace on earth in a joyous, but
somehow wistful manner ... Something in the struggle and the blaze is attractive to
the human soul. Tragedy is romantic, powerful, and moving in a way which no happy
ending can ever be. It is strange that his glad tidings are not more powerful, nor
any more compelling. And at the same time it is utterly appropriate. One could not
paint peace in violent, vivid color. His message has, as he himself does, a melancholy, almost awkward, glory.
What is this peace? The biggest, best part of it is the fact that the war with
time is over. The sun need not stand still, nor fly from us. For somehow, as the
snow falls, blanketing absolutely everything, truce is declared.
Yes, yes, that
would happen very soon, Gabriel muses on Julia's death, knowing that he does not need
to fear her death, or even his own. We are all, living and dead, in this thing together . Death is all that has ever given time any sting at all. But strangely, the
victory over time strikes me as a bigger one than the one over death. Time's shrinking gives Michael and Gabriel the chance to love Gretta completely or shall I say, to
make Gretta completely loved , each loving as much and as well as he can. Were Gretta
loved by one man or the other, she would be a sad, grey woman.
She is not. Two
loves in two different time schemes have made her warm, rich and beautiful; and each
love has done the same for each man as well.
When Gabriel accepts Michael's love, he joins Michael in a new, strange world
where the living and the dead are equally present, equally important. That world,
however, has been building the whole time. Part of the reason a timeless, deathless,
lifeless, snowy world seems so natural is that we have spent most of the story at a
holiday ball; it holds every one of its past manifestations in it, as only an annual
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�it about that party which makes it see so frighteningly real? Reading the story now
halfway between Thanksgiving and Christmas, and the parties I have been attending
since I was born, I feel self-conscious. That's it. That's a holiday ball. Right
down to Freddy Malins and his poor mother, everything is captured. Everything can be
captured because there is a universal element to a party like Julia and Kate's. Year
after year they remain the same; and year after year t hey go off splendidly, in spite
of Freddy and Mr. Browne. Every year the old ones get a little frailer, and every
few years one of them dies. The party never changes . This party, t his truly changeless, unremarkable occasion is our entrance into timelessness. Having entered, we
find eternal love, and we find it twice: Living and dead.
The two loves do not oppose each other. Both are warm and fiery. One is a pale
and tender flame which never wavers, and the other is a blast of heat and fury,
quickly doused in rain. But as Michael Furey dies for Gretta, he gives her all his
warmth in one mightly explosion.
He leaves her warm, but ready to receive more
warmth, quieter and steadier. Gabriel gives her this with all his heart and with all
his tender, deep passion, dissolved across years, books and children, but never
stilled, never doused. His love grows when he learns that it has been completed by a
strange young boy from Galway long ago.
It grows more quiet , but it also grows
stronger. Finally Gabriel sees that there is nothing to fight and no need t o deny.
He can go west. He is not excluded and he does not lack the wild watery romance
which is Ireland. Rather, he shares in it through his wife, who has been filled with
it by another, different lover. And at the same time, as he watches the quiet snow
which binds him to the wildness with peace, he holds his wife close to himself, and
he rests deeply and warmly with her. He guards Gretta, he keeps her feet dry. She
lets him watch her, hair dry, bronze, and clean . They are dry and warm and safe.
Michael Furey is wet and cold and dead. Both, or shall I say all three, are quiet,
peaceful, snowy.
Times' winged chariot may hurry as close as it likes. It is empty. It has been
emptied by a new, compound, eternal love, shouted forth by two men:
one tearing
through the iron gates of life toward death; and the other , quietly, with world
enough and time, letting his vegetable love grow vaster than empires and more slow.

The Flesh Made Word: Some Thoughts on
Gogol's Story "The Overcoat"
Christopher K. Watson

If modern philosophy can be said to begin with Descartes'
methodological skepticism, his making ontology essentially problematic, a whole tradition of the novel, as the paradigmatically
modern
narrative
genre,
is
informed by
the
same
critical-philosophical awareness, beginning almost a half-century before Descartes with Cervantes . Ontological critique in the novel,
moreover, is carried on typically not as discursive exposition but
as a critical exploration through the technical manipulation of
the very form that purports to represent reality.
This observation by Robert Alter in his book Partial Magic is extremely helpful
in a consideration of Gogol's "The Overcoat", for in such an endeavor one must necessarily begin with the problem of perspective. However, the story does not willingly
lend itself to the normal avenues of approach. In fact, the most revealing characteristic of the story seems to be its virtual absence of perspective . We are not
presented with a concrete structure but with an elusive and constantly changing entity. This applies equally to the parts as to the whole. For this reason "The Overcoat" tends to escape the greedy and prosaic clutches of analytical interpretation .
Not because its words and sentences will not retain meaning, but because its protean
prowess is so great as to enable it to take on all possible meanings. This process
extends itself in such a way that a complete reversal of meanings, hierarchies , and
even characters can be seen to occur throughout the course of the story . Hence, ongoing metamorphosis being the predominant aspect of this text, one begins to question
the place in which a reader might figure in this self - contained and (as will be
shown) self -consuming Gogolian universe.
In the department ...
Starting with the first paragraph, we are immediately exposed to Gogol's elliptical style . The normality of the first three words is fleeting and they quickly
become enshrouded in an elaborate digression. Thus the formal beginning is yanked
out from under the reader, exposing him to the acutely self-conscious considerations
of the author. Gogol forces the reader to realize just how impossible it is to designate relevancy or give meaning to anything without dangerously enormous and escalating effects. He even repeats this process in the digression when he claims that
he can't recall the town of the police commissioner even though the incident occurred
"not so very long ago". The careful reader finally has to commiserate and even take
on a certain amount of the anxiety that has infected the narrator. The whole process
ultimately endows the undefined department with immense significance. As if by magic, a concerted attempt to make something insignificant and undefined has mysterious ly given it the utmost significance. But what is significance? "A certain department" could mean anything, and in its infinite possibilities lies both its significance and absence.

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�Absence most certainly plays a central role in the dynamics of the story. The
most perplexing absence is that of the narrator. As the classical pillar of perspective, the narrator's frequent disclaimers, his states of amnesia, and his lack of
control over the course of events and descriptions of characters (as if they were
queuing up behind his pen and pushing it across the page) continually def late his
worth as an interpretive gauge. His self-professed lack of memory progresses to such
an extent that towards the end of the story he says:
••. everything in St. Petersburg, all the streets and houses, has become so blurred and mixed up in our head that we find it very dif f icult indeed to sort it out properly.
An amusing example of Gogol's craftiness in this respect is the derivation of
Akaky's name, undoubtedly from the Greek 6.Ka.Kos:
"innocuous" or "guileless", of
which the narrator innocently states:
His name and patronymic were Akaky Akakyevich. The reader may think
it a bit odd, not to say somewhat recherche, but we can assure him
that we wasted no time in searching for this name and that it happened in the most natural way that no other name could be given to
him.
The name itself denotes absence (in-nocuous or guile-less. Among other things,
Gogol has conceived a multilayered mimicry of his own denial of device). Of course,
the christening of Akaky comes about in the most unnatural way: this is, through an
obstinate mother's fear of novelty and the creative whims of an intractable calendar.
Akaky himself, who when only a tot seems to have had "a premonition that he would be
councillor one day", is described as the paradigm of stasis:
his
a titular
constancy is so extreme as to verge on non-entity:

price of the new overcoat and after reconciling himself to the fact "His whole existence indeed seemed now somehow to have become fuller".
The overcoat becomes "a
sweet helpmate", "as though he had got married" and "his character even got a little
firmer" . The day of the overcoat's delivery is "one of the greatest days in Akaky's
life", a life which has been depicted as an absolute homage to uneventfulness.
Akaky, who previously was gustatorily unconscious_ . eating "flies and all", is even
,
affected physically: his heart begins "beating fast", he suddenly is aware of the
St. Petersburg night life, and he _i_~ls the first impulses of erotic attraction.
When he is invited and compelled to the assistant head clerk's birthday party, he is
like a debutante going to her "coming out" party: "and indeed he had not left his
room in the evening for several years".
At this point I would like to make my own small tribute to excursiveness and
absurdity. When Akaky grins in front of the provocative painting of a woman "taking
off a shoe and showing a bare leg", the narrator questions, "Why did he grin?". He
then proceeds to posit the following seriocomical reasons:
It might have been because he had seen something he had never seen
before, but a liking for which is buried deep down inside every
one of us, or because (like many another Civil Servant) he thought
to himself, "Oh, those damned Frenchmen! What a people they are,
to be sure!
If they set their heart on something, something ..• well, something of that kind ... " But perhaps he never
even said anything at all to himself. How indeed is one to delve
into a man's mind and find out what he is thinking about?

This implies that the character's derivation is not one from nature but from nature
as refracted by established fictional conventions. This serves to nullify any understanding of Akaky qua human being.
Seen in this light, Akaky's quest for a new overcoat, which is properly spurred
by physical necessity (it is the inclemencies of the St. Petersburg weather which
drive him into the world of contingency), seems to be a progression towards normality. He raises his voice "probably for the first time in his life" upon hearing the

This last question, adequately dressed in ironical trappings, is perhaps one of the
most central questions of the story; however, another, completely illogical intuition
arises as an answer to the initial question--that is, posterity. In the beginning
stages of the story the narrator, struggling to find something revealing about
Akaky's "unremarkable" persona, traces the etymology of his surname, Bashmachkin , to
the word "bashmak" --"to wit, shoe". But any facts concerning the "metamorphosis"
remains a mystery,
the whole endeavor seems to yield nothing. Nevertheless, this
simple act of research impresses the image of a shoe on the reader's mind; and
through Gogol's artistry this word, as do many others, takes on a certain magnetism
and seems by itself to be able to retain the reader's attention. This also serves as
a good example of how Gogol's concerns for the insignificant, the purely quotidian,
pervades the whole story.
Returning to the hypothesis that Akaky's overcoat may represent a catalyst for
i dent i t y , or even a spiritual mediator (a kind of textile Beatrice), we must immediately begin to doubt it. An inspection of the overcoat's source seems to be the most
proper place to begin. And, although one might contest the source as not being in
any one place, Petrovich, the tailor, appears to be its most striking abettor.
In introducing Petrovich, the narrator gives us subtle admonition: "We really
ought not to waste much time over this tailor". However, "time", which seems to have
very little to do with this story anyway, is wasted and Petrovich proceeds not only
to function as an important transitional vehicle, but also as the most externally
unique character in the story. Everything that characterizes him is mysteriously
nefarious, his flat is in a back alley and surrounded by mist so dense "that even the
very cockroaches could no longer be seen". He drinks "in the tradition of his forebears", "on any church holiday, on any day, in fact, marked with a cross in the calendar".
And when Akaky brings him his bedraggled overcoat, Petrovich is sitting
"with his legs crossed under him like a Turkish pasha"--an infidel. To his wife he
is a "one-eyed devil" or at least a lesser demon under the dictates of a Devil, who
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During all the years he had served in that department, many directors and other higher officials had come and gone, but he still
remained in exactly the same position, in exactly the same job, doing exactly the same kind of work, to wit, copying official documents.
We are told that Akaky is ithelbutt of the off ice wits' jokes, but that he is utterly
immune to their disparaging jibes, living in "a multi£ arious and pleasant world of
his own"--the Russian alphabet.
Moreover, his "tormentors" must invent special
stories about him, as they are hard-pressed by his lack of character. Even an attempt to compare Akaky to a "real-life" counterpart is baffled by Gogol; for he says
that Akaky's rank, which is equivalent to his identity.
... has been sneered at and held up to scorn by all sorts of writers
who have the praiseworthy habit of setting upon those who cannot hit
back.

�must concede that it is a brilliantly comical stroke on Gogol's part to emphas i ze in
this way the necessity for a t ailor af t er the fall .
Petrovich is said to be "greatly pleased that he had neit her demeaned himself
nor let down the sartorial art".
Here one must ask oneself just what it i s t hat
this "sartorial art" consists of : a tailor patches, he alters , he hems and covers,
he is the "Artificer" . And at a crucial point in their encounter he seems even to
cast a spell over Akaky:
At the word "new" a mist suddenly spread before Akaky' s eyes
and everything in the room began swaying giddily. The only thing he
could still see clearly was the general's face pasted over with paper on the lid of Petrovich's snuff box.
This is an amazing example not only of the command which the insignificant exercises
over the events of the story, but also of the way in which Gogol is able to reverse
and even merge opposites, in this case presence and absence . The clearest thing to
Akaky in his state of ve r tigo is a non- picture. We had previously read of this por ~
trait of "some" general that "the place where the face should have been had been
poked in by a finger and then pasted over with a square bit of paper" . But this pic ture is more than simply an amplified abs ence : it is also an example of t he way in
which predestinat i on seems t o fi gure in this Gogolian un i v erse . No t unl i ke Akaky ' s
premonition that he would one day be come a titular councillor, we discov er later on
in the story that the rank of the Very Important Person , who ul t imately becomes
Akaky's agent of doom (being his last hope for the recovery of his overcoat), is th~t
of a "general". Moreover, Akaky' s encounter with the Very Important Person culminates with Akaky fainting in front of him .
But who is this Very Important Person? On one level he is seen as the menacing
counter-pole to Akaky's meek obsequiousness. However, there are striking parallels
that seem to call this relationship into question . In the first place, we are told
that this Very Important Person was once a "rather unimportant person" which seems to
oddly echo what was previously speculated about Akaky's diligence:
If he had been rewarded in accordance with his zeal, he would to his
own surprise have got as far as a state councillorship.
Like Akaky, who on his nocturnal excursion drinks champagne and feels sexual desire
before the disaster, so the Very Important Person seeks diversion in champagne and a
visit to his mistress before the ghostly encounter. The Very Important Person is
defined by his false and authoritarian facade:
"Strictness, strictness, and again strictness!" he usually declared, and at the penultimate word he usually peered very significantly into the face of the man he was addressing. There seemed
to be no particular reason for this strictness, though, for the
dozen or so Civil Servants who composed the whole administration
machinery of his off ice were held in a proper state of fear and
trembling, anyhow .

towards a "fuller" self is thwarted. The overcoat now begins to symbolize a spurious
growth towards selfhood, a false _ idol. And Akaky' s former state, which "might have
flowed on as happily to a ripe old age", appears idyllic, as i f it were a kind of
civic Eden. Also in support of this view one comes to see another correlation, but
in this case it is to literature itself. The first details of the robbery are related as follows:
Soon he approached the spot where the street was intersected by an
immense square with houses dimly visible on the other side, a square
that looked to him like a dreadful desert.
A long way away--goodness knows where--he could see the glinnner
of light coming from some sentry-box, which seemed to be standing at
the edge of the world.
Is this not reminiscent of Dante's and after him Tennyson's depiction of Ulysses'
errant quest to "the unpeopled world"? Perhaps for a brief instant we imagine Gogol
with disheveled hair laboring away in the eighteenth ring of the Inferno.
To isolate either one of these views as "correct reading of the text" would be
just as erroneous as taking Chaucer's Nun's Priest seriously when he asks his audience to "taketh the fruyt, and lat the chaf be stille". For, as has been mentioned
above, Gogol does not always create a reversal of hierarchies and meanings, but seems
to merge them as well. So that the final effect becomes what Nabokav calls "a vicious circle". The ghost at the end of the story which is taken as being Akaky's is
in fact that of the miscreant who had robbed Akaky in the first place (he displays "a
fist of a size that was never seen among the living" and "a pair of huge
moustachios"). Even the most traditional opposition is blurred: the cops and robbers, the good guys and the bad guys. We recall that the story began with a police
commissioner, and that both the policemen and the thieves are characterized by the
same anatomical parts. The first policeman that Akaky bumps into is defined by his
"calloused fist", well-used and expansive receptacle for snuff. And the "guardsmen",
who were the only known witnesses to Petrovich' s wife's facial appearance, have
"twitching" moustaches, all of which correspond to Akaky' s marauders with their own
moustaches and "a fist the size of a Civil Servant's head". Can we in any way not be
dizzy at this point? Is it not clear that this conglomeration of words will not allow themselves to be glossed over and quickly reshelved?
Ultimately a "message" must be discerned through the sentiments of the reader
himself, priority must be imposed. Gogol's comedy seems to have an uncanny effect
upon its reader:
if pondered too long it unfolds, revealing a limitless sadness
which cannot be defined by any text. The way in which this occurs structurally is by
a dovetailing of humor and horror. The most striking instance of this is the effect
of Akaky's voice on the departmental rookie who falters:
... abruptly at Akaky's mild expostulation, as though stabbed through
the heart; and since then everything seemed to have changed in him
and he saw everything in quite a different light. A kind of unseen
power made him keep away from his colleagues whom at first he had
taken for decent, well- bred men. And for a long time afterwards, in
his happiest moments he would see the shortish Civil Servant with
the bald patch on his head, uttering those pathetic words, "Leave me
alone!
Why do you pester me?" And in those pathetic words he
seemed to hear others: "I am your brother".

The voice of Akaky Akakyevich when he asserts himself "for the first time in his
life" at the police department and threatens "that i f he lodged a complaint against
them, they would see what would happen" is equally authoritative. Further, the rumor
of his vindictive ghost (as if it were a new fashion trend) is enough to cause "alarm
and dismay among all law-abiding' citizens of timid dispositions".
Viewed from this angle our initial and instinctive sympathy for Akaky's progress

Here, unlike the other examples, there is no "vicious circle", and there is no sign
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�the point of departure. Something similar occurs with the Very Important Person when
he is remembering his delightful evening at the party:

La Reine de Jadis
Liz Waldner

Feeling very pleased, he recalled without much affort all the pleasant happenings of the evening, all the witty sayings, which had
aroused peals of laughter among the small circle of friends, many of
which he even now repeated softly to himself, finding them every bit
as funny as they were the first time he heard them, and it is therefore little wonder that he chuckled happily most of the time ... All
of a sudden the Very Important Person felt that somebody had seized
him very firly by the collar. Turning around, he saw a small-sized
man in an old, threadbare Civil Service uniform, and it was not
without horror that he recognized Akaky Akakyevich.
It is most likely impossible to state succinctly what Gogol wants us to consider
when he propels us into this realm, but I leave you with Pascal's thirteenth pensee,
which seems to come close.
Two faces are alike; neither is funny by itself, but side by side
their likeness makes us laugh.

I.
Here again amongst flowers and candle-not roses, no more the little lantern
its breathy fog, its quavering star
no night through the casement rolled wide, but a dry
room, splintered and bare, higher in air: this is winter.
Old brick, this; old wood, old care
cups of tea old, too, however made new
in hope of the queen's coming.
Remembering the advent of various princes
of wine in the afternoonses, kisses
elaborated, slumbers ennervated, many
a dawn met with an own transparency
temporary, for the medium of air;
hair that flowed while walking, that bobbed
that flew, that lay on the pillow so
and new new new: nothing to think on
simply to do. Feel the night, meet the day
go on an own way, back remarking angles of repose
along the stem of the carnation
spiraling into a receiving known as the heart
of the rose, a hope for coronation. Goes, goes
the time proposed; my assent was head to toe
and then some. But here the chair scrapes the floor
and I sit on bones that scrape the chair
feeling my knowing Ago and There, ghosted by this or that
remembered damp. Fair, fair was eclipse of apperception
debonair was skin's near kin. How then with such short hair
have I come to be here in the presence of dead wood
and the province of books? It was memory
brought the one and stole the other flower.
My like power, until my book is opened anew
shrinks to two breadths and inkily goes
as prose across some page. Is it reading
or writing the queen must do?
The candle climbs the carnation across or through
the angle of wall and roof. I sit and drink and stick
tea twigs into its steepley flame and look
at the shadow not mine any more, nor mine were I in disbelief
to look to lovemakings not mine anymore
to deliver me from Memory who will deliver me my name--mine
whose hand was raised against every man's
who reaches now to those who felt its blow before I knew Ago.

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IV.

My hand itches where the scab is coming off pink skin
and I am filling the room with heat and drinking, thin
the first uncalculated drinks in years since when
in my other life where it was warm, I'd swallow
afternoons entire to evade their evenings; even so
such quickenings are only signs by which I know

I am
into
Like
or a
I am

that I am dead. For instance, when I read that the queen
that Elizabeth of Romania called Carmen Sylva
(given a Celtic brooch and a Balmoral shawl by Queen Victoria)
waved a napkin to a grazing cow she'd taken
for a loyal subject , then I knew . Quixote, aha, oho
I said; the life is mor e tban windmills . I know
when one lives and when one's dead (as Lear
also de la Mancha , s aid) . For me no feather
sirrah, nor mirror . Cordelia lives and I am dead;
these are clear .
III.

It's not the food that I want--it never was;
but the jars of jelly marked a place and held it
unti l another day I could in atonement
come bellying up like a fish to the surface
to t he grinding place where the days and I met
like a face with a mirror, gnashed together our teeth
held one another to the promise:
asked for bread, ate want made flesh.
It's not the moon which isn't risen yet
or is set, nor her Pleiades
nor the loved men named Baptiste or Ben
neither the life nor the death of the motorcycle boy
nor the women peculiar with liquids and bridge-the myriad longed for, imagined one by one
now arriving like leaves on the top of a pond
that cancel the sky with their gold;

growing in, growing in, growing in
the life my mother bled.
a window framing a very particular air
shape, a figure, heading through an air
come to stand inside her knowing.

A luxury here of knowings how:
of how
one loves, of how they need
of how one needs, of how they love
how one is no more taken care of-here, just here, I stand congruent with her.
She bled a prescient blood.

surprised by the silence and numbed by the air
in the coolness of distance I hear with her ear;
hailing Mary, angels bear Damocles' sword.
Denied! I heard. Bleed air, breathe fire
spin, spin, spin. Take in
the laundry of the earth and hide its poor
beneath your skirts. Beware
the dark, the car, the bar, the men .
Then flee, flee, flee on what ass?
to the stable, the gate, the way you came in .
See her shadow pour from your feet as you walk
see her eyes in the mirror they will bring.
Or sing: Stella Maris, amongst women
blessed, and what for? She gave no birth unbegun
of her blood; unbegun and always her blood
was a window giving onto his growing in
to be born of her prescient blood .

not any silence o f Cordelia's, Hermione's, Penelope's
Philomenas who showed me the surface of faith
not the thought of the thinker, a profile in lamplight
a Gretel fed on breadcrumbs behind somebody's back
but to be in clear wat er
safe, unseen
suspended and shadowless :
not to be denied.

Liz Waldner is a St. John's alumna, class of 1985.

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Energeia is a non-profit, student magazine which is published three times a year and
distributed among the students, faculty, alumni and staff of St. John's College, Annapolis
and Santa Fe. The Fall issue contains a sampling of the student work from the previous school year which the prize committees of both campuses have selected for public
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�CONTENTS
A CRITICISM OF SOCRATES'
THEORY OF KNOWLEDGE

Fritz Hinrichs

1

SENTO-GOSHO GARDENS

Jennifer A. Lapham

4

PRIZE WINNING PO EM (1986) .
THESEUS' PASSAGE

Claudia Probst

5

THE BOUNDARY OF THE METHOD

Sally Fine

7

ON WILLIAM BUTLER YEATS' POEM
"HE THINKS OF HIS PAST GREATNESS
WHEN A PART OF THE CONSTELLATIONS
OF HEAVEN"

Anne Leonard

9

A PARTIAL DEFENSE OF VICONIAN
ETYMOLOGY AND TOUR GUIDE TO
SOUTHERN MARYLAND

Christopher Bailey

13

DISTANCE #2

Stacy Grimes

17

THE NEST

Patricia Dawson

18

CHICAGO LABYRINTH

Ellen Schwindt

19

SENIOR ESSAY (1986) HONORABLE MENTION
ORIGINS OF COHESIVE THOUGHT

Lawrence Seidl

20

FOR LI CH'ING CHAO

Judy Kistler

35

SURF AND MISFORTUNE
A STUDY OF OEDIPEAN TRAGEDY

Jeff Kojac

36

A TRANSLATION OF JEAN DE LA FONTAINE'S
"THE CAT, THE WEASEL, AND THE
LITTLE RABBIT"

James O'Gara

38

STREETLIGHT

Walter Plourde

42

AN APPRECIATION OF APOLLONIUS 1.34

Henry Higuera

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�A Criticism of Socrates' Theory of Knowledge
Fritz Hinrichs

In the Meno, Socrates is faced with the problem of how we can go about searching for
virtue when we do not know what it is. He has to explain how we can search for some thing and know when we have found it when we do not know what to expect . It is similar to the problem we would have if someone said, "Go find my dog," and then refused
to give any description of the dog. To solve this problem, Socrates refers to the
belief expounded by the poets that our souls never die and have lived through many
lives .
This being the case, they can recall the truths they have gained in past
lives . Our learning, therefore, is nothing but the spontaneous recovery of knowledge
that was previously known.
To try to substantiate this idea, Socrates asks Meno to bring to him a slave boy
without any previous geometric knowledge. He then proceeds to ask this slave boy
questions about geometric figures that he draws in the sand . Gradually he leads the
boy to an understanding of a particular train of 8eometric reasoning. First Socrates
shows the boy why his initial idea about the geometric figure is wrong, and then he
asks the boy questions until he comes to the correct understanding of the figure.
Because he never tells the boy anything, but only asks him questions, Socrates claims
that the boy has recalled the knowledge of the figure from his own mind.
Now, if all our learning were recollection, then one would expect that our
learning would resemble the way we recollect things that we have learned in this
lif e. This is one point where I find fault in Socrates' theory, fo r the process that
Socrates uses to teach his student does not at all appear to be the same process one
experiences when recalling other facts one knows one has forgotten. It can be seen
that the boy never really recalls anything from his own memory; he only approves of
the ideas Socra t es presents to him .
If he truly were recalling the ideas from
memory, Soc rates would only have to give him lit t le hints, and the boy's memory would
do the rest, just as our memory does when we recall things that have become dim in
our minds . Instead , we see Socrates lead t he boy through almost every step of the
geometric argument, and the boy obediently following behind. This can be well seen
in the second part of the discussion in which Socrates corrects the boy's
misconception that one can double t he area of a square by doubling the length of the
sides . Socrates erases his old square and starts with a new one to show the boy that
the base of a square twice the . area of the square he dre·w would be the square's
diameter . He shows this by constructing three other new squares around the one he
had drawn and dividing each along its diameter to construct a new square that is made
up of the diameters from each one. Because there were four squares, the new square
is twice the original (four halves make two). This whole construction is made by
Socrates with the boy contributing nothing to the argument beyond his consent . When
Socrates finishes constructing the figure, he asks the boy some questions that
require more of a reply than "yes" or "no."
SOCRATES: Here are four squares.
inner half of each of them?
BOY: Yes.

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And how many such halves are there in the figure?
[The figure made by the diameters of the squares.]
BOY: Four.
SOCRATES: And how many in this one?
[The original square.]
BOY: Two.
SOCRATES: And what is the relation of four to two?
BOY: Double.
SOCRATES:
How big is the figure then?
[The one cut off by the
diameters.]
BOY: Eight feet.
SOCRATES: On what base?
BOY: This one. [The diameter of the original square.] (85a-85b)
In this quotation, Socrates asks the boy six questions.
In the first, the boy
consents that a diameter cuts a square in half.
In the second and third, he counts
how many triangles are in particular squares. His response to the fourth and fifth
shows his knowledge of ratios, and that to the sixth his knowledge of what a base is.
I hope this quotation adequately shows that the reasoning the boy goes through does
not originate from himself, but is the product of Socrates.
What occurs in this
dialogue is certainly a far cry from the boy's needing a little prodding to remember
those things that are obscured by the forgetfulness of his mind.
In 84d, Socrates
infers that his method is closer to the interrogating for opinion than to instruction
or explanation, but in fact the opposite seems to be the case.
However, part of what Socrates says is correct. He repeatedly tells Meno that
the boy's opinions are the boy's own; this is reasonable in the sense that Socrates
never forces the boy to believe in anything.
But the opinions are not the boy's in
the sense that he made them up or had previously consciously held them.
It is reasonable to say that the boy agrees with what Socrates is saying, but not that he
already knows what Socrates is saying; if this latter were the case, Socrates would
not need to be continually telling the boy how to deal with the problem of the
square.
Also, if we are to say that the boy understands something because he recalls it,
how would we account for the mistakes he makes? For example, the boy proclaims that
if the side of the square is doubled, the area will double. How could the boy come
up with this idea i f he recalled it?
This is what he recalled, so how can it be
wrong if recollection is what determines truth? Socrates would probably answer this
accusation by saying that the boy recalled incorrectly or that he did not recall at
all. I think a hint to what his response would be can be found in line 82e. I will
present two translations that from my inquiry seem to represent the two ways that
this passage is typically translated:
"Now watch how he recollects- things in order--the proper way to recollect." (W.K.C. Guthrie) and, "Watch him now recollecting
things in order, as one must recollect." (G.M.A. Grube). The actual Greek is "GE1'
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implying there is an incorrect way of recollecting.
Now, if we call some
recollection proper and some improper, then there must be something by which we are
evaluating it by; there must be something higher.
To make a judgment would be
meaningless if there were no criterion.
This is why I think Socrates is not using
recollection as his ultimate source of truth, but is using something else, most
probably reason, as his final criterion.
The word
os1 can be translated as proper
or necessary (the two translations give examples of each).
If it is translated
"proper", then my idea is supported, but translating it "necessary" does not really
escape the problem either. Why should something be necessary? Is it not because we
have an end in mind by which we are evaluating the process?
I think Socrates has

shown that he is not really relying on what he calls recollection, but is actually
using reason to get the results that he wants.
There is another problem in Socrates' theory that needs to be addressed: when
Socrates states that we learn by recollection, he is not really solving the problem
of how learning came about in the first place.
He may say that we learn now by
recalling what we learned in the past, but that does not tell us how we learned in
the past.
The only thing that his theory does is to push the problem back into the
past where it might not occur to us to think about it. This way of dealing with the
problem would be like trying to answer the problem of the origin of life by saying
that it had been placed on the earth by outer space life-forms.
This method is
evasive but not substantive. However, since Socrates seems to do so well using myths,
I suspect he could have easily answered this objection by stating that when man first
came into being he was endowed with perfect knowledge and has since lost it.
Socrates is able to convince Meno of his theory because it does make a comparison that is superficially correct--when we remember something and when we see something is true, we tend to experience the same feeling of insight or perception. We
experience the same sense of "Aha" when we remember and when we gain understanding,
so it is tempting to see them as coming from the same source.
But to equate them
does not really answer the problem of where learning came from to begin with; moreover, when more closely examined, remembering and understanding have some distinct
differences that rule out their being one.

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picked up the trail of a golden thread
and followed it, wearily,
through the dim eternal twilight of the labyrinth.
He wound it over and between his knuckles,
the sweat of his palm matting the thread,
darkening the filament of his direction
and enclosing the heat of his hand.
He recalled his fingers entwined in his mount's mane,
after grasping suddenly for lost balance
when shame had made him sway in the saddle,
on the day he saw his father
surrender the city's youths to the Minotaur.
Later his hands had traced the curving wooden ribs
of the prison ship's hull during the voyage to Crete,
and mesmerized his seasick companions
with endless soothing caress.
So long did his hands travel circularly on their backs,
waiting for gasping nausea to subside,
that in darkness he could name each
by resting his hands lightly on their sides,
touching for the duration of a breath.
He felt the thread's tension, more than guide
it impelled him, tugging at his memory
-sunlight and sweet airTheseus longed to follow his eyes
frontwards as Man,
to probe then where a man may.
He remembered in those passages
the dark servant halls of his home,
nights in his early youth
when, trembling, he had eased blindly down stone steps
fingertips brushing moss along rough walls
groping his way to she his destination.
Images of her bare limbs' movement, first stolen
through a crack in the wall of the servant bath
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until her image, blooming, had threatened
to burst from his head
shattering the night with strong
remembrance of sun on olive skin
and the play of her muscles underneath,
as she lifted an earthen water jar.
Then it was no longer the still air of the labyrinth
and memory that enveloped him
wind-driven dew struck his forehead and
he emerged again into the living worldTo find Ariadne, her hair unbound falling
"'loosely golden in the blessed dawn .

The Boundary of the Method
Sally Fine

In Book VI of th~ Republic, Plato discusses the geometer's use of the figures
and the three forms of angles as hypotheses and asserts that the geometer uses these
hypotheses as the basis of his argument. That is to say, the geometer takes certain
properties as common notions and from those common notions stem the images in
geometry . In addition to this assertion, Plato continues by asking if geometers use:
visible forms ... and make their arguments about them [visible
forms], not thinking about them, but about those others that they
are like? They make the arguments for the sake of the square
itself and the diagonal itself, not for the sake of the diagonal
that they draw, and likewise with the rest. These things themselves that they mold and draw, of which there are shadows and
images in water, they now use as images, seeking to see those
things themselves, that one can see in no other way than with
thought. (510e)
Plato's account of the geometer seems an appropriate description of Euclidean geometry, but hardly applicable to the realm of geometry which Lobachevski provides.
In Euclidean geometry we are provided with images that we consider to be intuitive . The pictures that accompany the propositions fit the image of the figure we
have in our minds. The pictures fit so well that one might wonder if Euclid might be
'spoon feeding' us by appealing to our intuition of how space should be defined and
described.
It is easy to lose track at times that what we actually see before us
when we work through a Euclidean proposition is not square or triangle, but the image
of square or triangle. It is important, however, to remind ourselves of what Plato
suggests, that as long as geometry depends on hypothesis, it can never really grasp
square or triangle. I interpret this to mean that, unless we can move beyond hypothesis, we can never grasp the eidos of square or triangle, but must content ourselves
with their images .
In the imaginary geometry that Lobachevski gives an account of, the images
provided certainly do not 'spoon feed' our intuition.
Few things are more counter-intuitive than parallel lines that converge or a quadrilateral with three right
angles and the fourth angle acute. The images that accompany Lobachevski's theorems
seem almost incommensurate with the language of his geometry. It is very difficult
to convince oneself , after years of being led to believe that parallel lines never
meet and remain equidistant from one another, that the two lines depicted as converging can really be called parallel. Although we see the images before us on paper
that illustrate converging parallels, in our minds we still imagine parallel lines
that do not meet and do indeed remain equidistant. In Lobachevski we have a discrepancy, between the image on paper and the image in our minds, that we did not have in
Euclidean geometry. How does one look at the images provided with the same language
used in a completely different way and make sense of it?
The first reaction, and certainly a legitimate one, is that the system that
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�given a quadrilateral with three right angles and then to be asked to prove the
fourth angle acute.
This does not come easy because in all of our previous experience, a principal property of the quadrilateral was that the angle sum was consistent. However, now that we are in the world of imaginary geometry, we no longer have
that proportionality, and that is disconcerting.
At this point I don't know whether it is right to question Lobachevski's idea of
geometry or to question our own. Euclid gave us a beautiful system of geometry, but
he never claimed it to be more than a system. He offered us images, and we took to
them eagerly, again, forgetting that he offered us image, not eidos. Plato reminds
us that the geometer can only offer us image in his discussion of the geometer's use
of hypotheses. I don't think that Plato is judging whether the geometer is justified
in using hypotheses, but rather he is pointing out the problem that all geometers
face in being limited by the common notions.
The boundary lies in being human, a
limit that we cannot surpass.
Euclid and Lobachevski, if nothing else, at least
share this boundary.
I think that the geometers themselves are much more willing to
acknowledge this boundary than the students of their geometries.
Why are we so
unwilling to accept Lobachevski?
First let us examine what it would involve to accept Lobachevski's system. The
obvious thing that comes to mind is the denial of the necessity of the fifth
postulate.
Once one denies the need for the fifth postulate, one must acknowledge
that Lobachevski's geometry is certainly as feasible as Euclidean geometry.
Of course, this is much easier said than done.
How can we possibly acknowledge
a geometry other than Euclid's when we quite obviously live in a Euclidean world?
Everything that surrounds us is Euclidean.
Is it because we are surrounded by
Euclidean images that we come to expect Euclidean images in our geometry as well?
After all, what is our real problem with Lobachevski?
His images are consistent
within his system, so we can't find fault there. His theorems follow in logical progression and still we balk.
Consistency and logic aside, his system still goes
against our expectations. We have been habituated to Euclidean geometry, and that is
what we expect.
Although I readily accept the argument that Lobachevski is counter-intuitive, I
am still puzzled by this intuition that we cling to so desperately.
Do we really
have the criteria to determine our world as Euclidean? I hesitate to make this claim
when I consider, once again, Plato's discussion of hypotheses.
It seems impossible
to deny that there are certain things which are inexplicable and those things we call
common notions. I want to call them self-evident, but after studying Lobachevski and
re-reading Book VI of the Republic, I wonder if we only intuit them to be selfevident.
This question is seemingly rhetorical, considering that we are bound by
. image. If we could actually get to eidos, then we would truly grasp geometry.
Apparently, the methodology in the activity of geometry is our problem.
Plato
seems to make an argument for the method of dialectic. In dialectic we begin with an
hypothesis and match it with an antithesis. The struggle between the two eventually
produce some sort of conclusion or falling out of a bigger idea. No matter what the
outcome, one is able to get beyond the hypothesis.
Some progress is made. With the
geometry, however, we are bound by the hypothesis.
No antithesis is presented in
opposition to the common notions. We can build and build our system, but the hypotheses that Plato mentions time and time again remain. Using the methodology of geo-metry as we do, we can never approach eidos which is free of hypotheses.

On William Butler Yeats' Poem "He Thinks of His Past
Greatness When a Part of the Constellations of Heaven
Anne Leonard

I have drunk ale from the Country of the Young
And wept because I know all things now :
I have been a hazel-tree, and they hung
The Pilot Star and the Crooked Plough
Among my leaves in times out of mind:
I became a rush that horses tread:
I became . a man, a hater of the wind,
Knowing one, out of all things, alone, that his head
May not lie on the breast nor his lips on the hair
Of the woman that he loves, until he dies.
0 beast of the wilderness, bird of the air,
Must I endure your amorous cries?

William Butler Yeat's poem "He thinks of his Past Greatness when a Part of the
Constellations of Heaven" is a poem which is hard to understand on the intellectual
level but which strikes deeply into the human heart.
What stands out in the poem
more than anything else upon a first reading is the tone, and the meaning itself is
dependent upon the tone.
The poem is sad.
It is not raging, burning, passionate grief, but more gentle,
implacable sorrow--embers of grief which will never go but will remain, ceaseless and
unchanging. The very first hint of sadness occurs in the title; someone who has become a constellation, who has become part of heaven, is thinking not of present glory
but of past greatness.
The feeling is then brought out more in individual lines of
the poem.
In the second line, the second word is "weep." This, a tangible and open expression of sorrow, is coupled with "because I know all things now" and as such furthers the sadness.
It is a human desire, wish, aim, to know, and this knowledge
makes the line sad in two senses:
first, things that are learned can be sorrowful
and second, in the deeper way the fulfillment of a dream can be sad, even painful.
Sadness occurs too in the fact that knowing all things, the speaker is no longer human; he is something different. With knowledge, humanity is lost, and that is reason
for grief.
In this line, there is regret, regret for having "drunk ale from the
Country of the Young" and thus learned all things, leaving no mysteries or secrets,
and regret for the actual things learned.
The relationship between knowledge and sorrow is expressed in another manner in
the seventh through tenth lines:
I became a man, a hater of the wind,
Knowing one, out of all things, alone,
that his head
May not lie on the breast nor his lips
on the hair
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�Here the knowledge is of only one thing, yet that thing--loneliness--is so great, so
powerful, that it brings sadness.
The sadness is felt not only by the speaker, is
not only empathetic grief for the poet, but is a reawakening of individual, human
sorrow; everyone has known loneliness and estrangement.
Indeed, the word that those
four lines focus on is "alone."
It is difficult to tell from the grammar of the
eighth line whether "alone" modifies "one" or "man," but this difficulty is exactly
the purpose of the vague syntactical structure:
"alone" applies to both.
The one
thing a man knows is that he is alone. WP.ether a man or not a man, knowledge brings
grief.
The last two lines, "O beast of the wilderness, bird cf the air, must I endure
Being a
your amorous cries?" are an expression of the sorrow, a plea for surcease.
man, he is denied the love and the companionship that the beasts have, and this
brings grief and pain , pain that others have what he does not . The cry is not one of
Even taken by themjealousy or anger, but of helplessness and deep loneliness.
selves, the lines are sad, and as the last two lines of a sad poem, they round out
the grief and the sorrow.
Sadness is not the only emotion expressed in the poem, however . Another is one
of captivity, of helplessness.
This is evident not only in the language but in the
structure of the poem; it has a fairly rigid ABABCDCDEFEF rhyme scheme, the only appropriate rhyme being between "mind" in the fifth line and "wind" in the seventh .
Although the rhyme scheme is no t the most dominant expression of captivi t y , it serves
to lock in the feelings and reinforce the captivity present in the imagery .
The very first image of captivity occurs in the first line, "I have drunk ale
from the Country of the Young . " Ale from the Country of the Young is ale which controls and changes a person, and although the drinking itself may have been
volitional, the effects of the drink are beyond the power of the drinker .
It is a
subtle image, one which does not present itself at first for what i t is , but which
sets the captive tone for the rest of the poem.
The very next two images presented, the hazel-tree and the rush, are images of
captivity or helplessness.
In the lines
I have been a hazel-tree, and they hung
The Pilot Star and Crooked Plough
Among my leaves in time out of mind
the haze-tree is not acting but being acted upon . Long ago the tree stood, and the
stars were hung by some unknown "they" amidst its boughs; it did not hang the ' stars
itself, or even choose which one were hung.
It stood and was used .
Likewise the
ru sh is helpless; "horses tread" it . A ho rse is an image of freed om , of wild grace ,
and the rush is that which is repressed, pushed down by the free. Like the t r ee, the
rush is a passive, emotionless thing of nature which is only acted upon.
And then there is the man, "a hater of the wind . " This hatred is a rejection of
and resentment of freedom.
Wind is wild, powerful, reckless, goes where it wills
when it wills. Wind can destroy, wreak havoc, ruin.
It is uncontrolled.
One who
hates the wind hates that total, raw power and does not know the exhilarating joy
present in a wind dashing wildly through the trees.
Unrestrained and unrestricted,
the wind is a symbol of all that is free and of all that that freedom means. Hating
what is free, the man is not free.
The final image of captivity is expressed, like the sorrow, in the plea of the
last two lines.
The beast and the bird are like the horse and the wind; they are
free, unfettered.
It is to the "beast of the wilderness." the animal that lives
wild, subject to no rule but its own, and to the bird of the air," that animal which
lives among the wind, that the plea is addressed; these things which can love are
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captivity is expressed; the word "endure" is one which applies to a prisoner.
One
who is free would not have to endure the amorous cries; one who is free could leave,
or could vanquish the cries.
But that the cries are endured is an indication that
they cannot be escaped.
Sadness and captivity are the dominant emotions, the first impressions which
leap from the words into the heart.
These are what the spirit understands.
But
there are things underlying these emotions, reasons for them, and they are buried
deeper in the poem.
Even understanding the tone, the poem itself is still an unresolved puzzle.
There are two questions which seem to contain the core of the matter. The first
involves the "Past Greatness" anrl the second the separation of the man from the woman
he loves until after death. There is sadness involved in both questions, and a sense
of being trapped.
" Past Greatness" seems to refer to being a hazel-tree, a rush, and a man. These
are all things which have been, which the speaker became, which are no longer, and
for which there is some grief . None of them seems particularly great, yet there is
reason for sorrow;
they have one thing which a constellation does not.
They have
life.
A hazel-tree and a rush have sprung from the earth, have been nurtured by the
sun and the water and the soil, have grown and changed and developed and will continue to do so. Attached, they belong to the world and to each other and to all living
things. They may be helpless, they may be controlled, but they belong, and this in
its own way is far greater than being a constellation, fixed, immutable and completely unconnected. Better to have the stars amongst one's leaves than to be a star; for
a star is not alive.
In a way, the constellation is even more a captive than the
rush and the tree, and this too is reason for sorrow.
And why a man? What greatness is there in being a man, in hating the wind, in
knowing one terrible thing?
There seems to be no inherent greatness but inherent
grief in this.
Yet, there is something in the man which is as great as or greater
than the hazel-tree and the rush.
Perhaps it is as with the rush and the hazel-tree. Living, no matter how terribly, is greater than being a constellation. However, it seems that there must be
something deeper than that. A man is not so connected to the earth and to the world
as a plant or even a wild animal is. In addition to living, a man thinks and knows.
Feeling sorrow, feeling captivity, are things which a man can do and a rush cannot.
It is these, the feeling and thinking as well as the living and connecting, which
make a man great.
It is a sad, painful, captive existence, but it is an existence
which is unique and wonderful.
That seems to give some answer, inadequate though it may be, to the first question, the question of "Past Greatness." The second question, the question of love,
still remains. Why cannot a man be with the woman he loves until he dies? The most
simplistic, obvious answer--the woman he loves is already dead--just does not seem to
do.
The loneliness is part of it. The loneliness is two-fold in nature; first, the
man is lonely because he cannot be with the woman he loves, but second, he cannot be
with the woman because he is by nature alone. Only in death can the solitude of self
be broken.
This part of human nature, this loneliness, exists in several different
ways.
The human race itself is separate from other animals and from nature by means of
language and rational thought and technology. Other animals have societies, forms of
communication and of tools, but none so sophisticated, and no other animal can change
the face of the earth in the way a human being can. This separates the human animal
from the earth and from the other animals; to be human is to be separate.
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�very center of the self is something which only one's own soul, and sometimes not
ev en that, can understand. There is separation from other people and even from oneself. No thing, not even love, can cause the centers of two individ~al souls to ~oin­
c ide, and in s ome deep, almost terrifying way, every human soul is always solitary
and l one l y. This seems to be the loneliness Yeats is expressing.
.
To say that a man cannot be physically close to the woman he loves is, on the
literal leve l , r i diculous . Bu t it is metaphorically quite true; the laying of the
head on the br east or t he lips on the hair are metaphors for human companionship, for
unity, for mind t o heart and speech to thought. Only after death, when humanity is
exchange d f or s ometh ing e l se, can such companionship be. The knowledge the man has
is the knowl edge of his own loneliness ; he is captured by his very nature.
What, then, is the meaning of the poem? It certainly cannot be captured in one
single sentence or phrase . The essence of it is both sorrow for loneliness , and lack
of free dom , but a l s o the greatness of life itself . The poem has to do with the
struggle to find one's place in the world , and with the pain that knowledge brings,
wh ether it be knowled ge only of one's nature or of all things. More than anything
else, it shows the paradox of humanity: how hard but how essential it is to be human, how painful and how great , how separate and how connected. And this seems to be
why the tone, expressed through images, is und erstood before the reasons underlying
the tone. The poem is the speech of one human to another, the expression of common
feelings. And so, like the human soul , the poem is a paradox; by its expression of
human l oneline s s, it t ouches human connectedness. Thus there is greatness to think
of wh en a Part of the Constellations of Heaven.

A Partial Defense of Viconian Etymology and
Tour Guide to Southern Maryland
Christopher Bailey

Preface
By the terms ordinary etymology, scientific etymology, etc., I mean the use of
scientific rules of word-mutation and language comparison to trace the development of
wo r ds. Or at least I mean something like that. Any other words I use ought to be
comprehensible from the context in which I use them; it's very likely that there ar e
some which aren't, but I can't think of everything.
The fundamental argument of this pape r is that ordinary etymology is not ade quate for the complete understanding of a word's history, and of its effect on the
people who speak the language of which it is part; and that therefore Vico's attention to superficial similarities in words should not be lightly dismissed.
This
brief prefatory statement may be used as a map and compass to guide the reader out of
the dar k and trackless digressions which lie in his way , and which might otherwise
persuade him that the author of this essay has never quite decided what he's talking
about .
"Port Tobacco," says the Maryland Writers' Project guide to Maryland, "was the
most important of the many Maryland ports on the Potomac ruined by the silting up of
the creek at its landing. Made the seat of Charles County in 1658, it continued to
be the center of the county government until La Plata developed around the new railroad down the peninsula. The Indians also considered it a desirable village site, as
Captain John Smith's map shows; and by 16Rl it had enough settlers to be the scene of
the uprising of Kendall's followers . "
The name "Port Tobacco" is not a terribly unlikely one for a colonial Maryland
port town, since tobacco was probably Maryland's most important export. But Captain
Smith's map shows an Indian village on the same site before any English settlers had
planted themselves there . One might have expected the Indian name of the town to
survive, as the names of other Indian towns did in Maryland, and as the name of the
river on which Port Tobacco was built-- the Potomac -- survived.
I n fact the Indian name did survive. For these were the Potopago tribe. Their
name was attached to their town, and when the English began to settle there, it was
rapidly corrupted into its present form . It was quite natural for it to be so corr upted . The wonder would be, if anyone who was not making a special effort to speak
distinctly should mention a tobacco port called Potopago, that any ordinary listener
should not understand him to have called it Port Tobacco.
Now, if one wanted to t r ace the etymology of the name Port Tobacco, one might go
about it in the normal way . One might first look up port, and find that the Rev. Dr.
Skeat tr aces i t back to the Latin portus , closely allied to porta, from conj e ctur al
root par, to pass through, and thus eventually related to English fare.
Then one
could' do the same for tobacco (where one would have less luck, since, the word being
derived from a West Indian language, its ultimate roots are inaccessible to the Rev .
Skeat). One could do all that, and one would be no closer to the truth than when one
started. Obviously, without the critical knowledge that the place was originally a
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�And then, not much later (869) : "Tradition says that Homer was blind and that from
his blindness he took his name , which in the Ionic dialect means blind . "
If Vico is, as he seems to be, offering each of these as the derivation of
Homer ' s name, t hen he ha s certainl y contradicted himsel f . The most f undamenta l laws
of logic would seem to insist that only one of the t wo could be t r ue.
Possibly Vico, composing these paragraphs at different times, didn't notice the
cont radiction : perhaps one derivation seemed right to him the first time, and then
later the other. But he did let both stand in the third edition .
There are infinitely many other possible explanations of Vice's mo t ive in giving
these two different derivations, but, skipping entirely the question of Vice's real
motive, I shall try to invent a plausible defense for him .
,
If Vico acutally has discovered the true Homer in the Greek people themselves ,
then there must be some reason why the name Homer was associated with the Iliad and
Odyssey , and not the name Orpheus or Dobzhans~In fact , we must look for~ason
why any name at all was given for the author of these poems , when their real author
was a whole nation.
/
Perhaps Homer became a so r t of poetic universal for epic poe t, as Hercules for
strength or Achilles for swiftness, because there was once a rhapsode named Homer who
was extraordinarily good at rhapsodizing . Thus, in the same way that stor ies-a~ su-

perhuman strength might come to be associated with the name Hercules, eventually giving us a Hercules who travelled to all places at all times and did just about everything; so epic poe t ry of great quality might become associa t ed wi t h the name Homer.
But even if this we re the true explanation, it might not quite explain why the
name of Homer and not that of some equally proficient rhapsode became the poetic universal . In the case of He rcules, the name itself had significance . Perhaps it was
thus in the case of Home r .
Let us suppose that there are two rhapsodes in ancient Gre e ce, both equally
admired; one of them is named Homer , the other Dobzhansky . Now, to the Greek ear,
Dobzhansky might not suggest much . But Homer--Homer is a name fraught with associations . An Ionian would immediately hear the word as blind, and immediately would
remember the rhapsodes he had known who were , if we can believe Vico (who takes his
evidence from Homer), conrrnonly blind. The name would seem as appropriate as some I
have noticed in businesses in Inverness, Florida, where on the same street one can
find Grumbling Motors, Crook Real Estate, and Hood Bail Bonds . Those names don't
slip out of memory easily . I can't remember the name of any other bail bondsman ,
though I have doubtless seen many who displayed prominent advertising signs; but the
name of Hood Bail Bonds is ineradicably stamped in my memory.
Similarly, one who happened to be thinking of the strung- together aspect of the
rhapsodes' tales might be led to hear, though perhaps not altogether consciously ,
hom' eirein when the name Homer was spoken . If an English speaker heard of a poet
name Stringtale, he might hav e the same reaction. Just so the name Shakespeare often
suggests to us, without our being aware of it , a vigorous, thunderous, rugged sort of
drama that a name like Jonson doesn't suggest . (In fact some of his contemporaries
made the most of Shakespeare's name, believing that entirely too much spear- shaking
went on in his plays) . In the same way, some theorists have suggested, any person's
name carries with it a package of vague associations which partly determine the way
we react to the person who carries the name . I have heard of some studies which
seemed to indicate that school teachers had pr edetermined conceptions of their student s acco r d i ng t o the students' names . And I remember how I was often shocked in
elementary school when I learned a teacher's first name .
(She didn't seem like a
Mavis to me, I might explain . )
Now , or dinar ily these associations of names with character types migh t be specific to me only, depending , perhaps , on events in my individual experience .
(I
might , for example , have known a Mavis in early childhood.) But there might be certain cases in which the name was likely to produce a similar group of associations in
all the members of a certain culture--as Mr. Hood, Mr. Grumbling, and Ms. Crook can
probably attest . This might especially he the case when the name resembled some common word or set of words .
Contrast the effect of the name Homer with t he effect of Dobzhansky , and i t
seems obvious why Homer would become the poetic universal and Dobzhansky would be
forgotten . Homer simply suggests poet, and suggests it in more than one way .
Thus Vico' s two "derivations" of the name Homer both would add to our understanding of how that name came to be associated with the author of t he world's greatest epics . As derivations in the strictest sense, they might not be historically
correct, but they might help explain why the name was applied as it was in the same
way that a knowledge of the meanings of port and tobacco helped explain the name Port
Tobacco, t hough his t ory may t ell us that t he name is actual l y a corr up t ion
---of
Potopago. And for that reason that one "derivation" need not exclude the other . For
both may have operated on the common sense of the Greek people in driving them to
select Homer as the name of their national poet.
What is true for names we might suspect of being t rue for any word. For we find
we have more to explain, even in ordinary wor ds , than simply how a basic root was
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for it would be misleading to give a derivation based on the meanings of the words in
the name without noting that those words only came to be assigned to that place
through corruption of its Indian name.
On the other hand, it would be equally misleading to say that the name is a simple corruption of the name Potopago without taking into account the meanings of the
words port and tobacco. For the town was a port where tobacco was shipped, and that
is why the corruption arose in the first place. It would be just as useless to study
the etymological history of the name !'_~!~p_ago as i t was to study the histories of
port and tobacco. What is most necessary is an understanding of the conditions which
led to the choice of the name Port Tobacco for that particular place.
In his New Science, Giambattista Vico often uses the etymology of a word as part
of his argument. He doesn't seem to have much of a method for his derivations: the
one facto r c ommon t o mo st of them is incorrectness . If Vico wants to say that a certain word actually developed in history in a certain way, he ought to have some sci entific methods for determining that development . Otherwise he should keep his mouth
shut.
At least, that would be my attitude as a twentieth- century admirer of the
accomplishments of scientific etymology .
But Vico may not have seen etymology quite the way I do. He certainly was not
aware of the scientific methods which came into use after he was dead. But he may
not have had in mind the same purpose I have when I search for the one true historical root of a word .
Anyone who pays attention to the etymologies in the New Science is bound to no tice that, within a few pages, Vico gives two entirely different derivations for
Homer's name. First he says (852),
By the etymology of their name from the two words which compose
it, rhapsodes we.re stitchers together of songs , and these songs
they must certainly have collected from none other than their own
peoples .
Similarly [the common noun] homeros is said to have
come f r om homou, "togethe r ," and eir e in, "to link," thus signifying a guarantor, as being one who binds creditor and debtor to gether. This derivation is as far - fetched and forced [when applied to a guarantor] as it is natural and proper when applied to
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�from which elevator was coined will not explain to us why the first is used in one
part of the English- speaking world and the second in another .
The same goes fo r
lorry and truck . or solici t o r and lawye r; and, taking a broader look way and chemin,
since French and English are supposed to be derived from the same ultimate source .
Why does one society choose one root to build its ways on and anothe r choose another?
I have often heard it asked why the same word should have different meanings , but it
seems to me just as interesting to ask, Why does the same meaning have different
words?
Ordinary scientific etymology is of no use in answering this question.
A new
etymological science would be needed to supplement the old.
Perhaps no science at
all could be adequate: perhaps thjs is a field for wild speculation . . I don't ordinarily like wild speculation as a method for finding answers to important questions,
bu t i t i s a t l east mor e u s e f u l he r e t h an t h e o r dinar y etymolo gy .
The r ules of vowel- shifting and consonant mutation and such are simply not applicable to this ques tion:
one might ·as well try to answer it by referring to a yardstick or Ptolemy's
Table of Chords. The laws of etymology have been spectacularly successful in showing
the historical mutations of words; now what we need is a sort of transcendental
etymology to fill out the picture.
We already practice this transcendental etymology, although we really have no
method for it.
If we ask why the word ~ as a synonym for ~ has almost disap peared from our spoken language, no rules of word- mutation will give us an answer .
Rut we probably can answer the question for ourselves by pointing out that the word
has come into use as a synonym for homosexual, and that in our society homosexuality
is an embarrassing subject . We used no scientific procedures to dete r mine that answer: it simply seems obvious to us from what we know of American society .
Vice's method of etymology seems to us today to be crude and sloppy . And it is .
For I believe Vico usually wants to tell us the way a word historically developed ,
and modern scholars could off er very convincing proofs of the wrongheadedness of most
of his derivations . But perhaps in back of Vice's mind there was an unformed idea or
assumption that the true histo r ical development of a wo r d was not its only important
story--and perhaps not its most important for his purposes.
The similarity of one
word to another to which it bears no historical relation might in fact have a great
effect on the use of both words, and might not otherwise be associated.
Modern
etymology might tend to persuade us to ignore such similarities as mere coincidences,
but they ought not to be so easily tossed aside.
I regret that I am completely unable to provide a scientific method for dealing with such similarities when they are
noticed; but we should not close our eyes to extra-etymological considerations when
non-etymological relations suggest themselves. And therefore we should not pass over
Vic o' s "der ivations" as if the y were mere emb arrassments . M
any of them may be totally worthless, but in some of them may lurk a social truth inaccessible to scientific

Distance #2
Stacy Grimes

,,

0 wet day
blanket-of-deep - forest - green day
steam, my body is spice tea, I curl
I am the Sun the Center, heat I am
pulling o tugging o Venus I want
smashed into betwixt me to be me
but all and every ring around
me rosy. Stasis, stance
in this and in all wet days I am
the Sun
o shining Sun.

etymology; and if he uncovered even one such truthrthen Vico's wild speculations were
not entirely in vain .

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�Chicago Labyrinth
Ellen Schwindt

feet thud on wettish
concrete slabs of buildings
building song no
rhythm is forced by metronome
of traffic light the loop
rumbles softly a lofty
thought sways in
blue chiffon dances
a spectral jazz sandal
softens upon the area above
my head my
foot sweeps into someone else's
space no one screams for
air accepts suffocation with
welcome coffee yes please lines
becomes a sweeping ellipse of
warmth dark purple apathy to
fluorescence Emily creeps
around the fringes repeating the bit
about frogs unintelligably through
saxophone slur of
brown corner booths
tea and roses drifting darkness
is becoming sweeping
around mouths
open in effort to breath
thick air eyes
swell to almost
open ended corridors
of sea fog fading black

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�Origins of Cohesive Thought
Lawrence Seidl

INTRODUCTION
Philosophy is an analytic endeavor.
It takes things apart and looks at them,
and in a way this artificial mental reading irrevocably changes the things it looks
at.
One never loses the insights that are gained through philosophical analysis.
Even if one chooses to give up philosophy, the pursuit of its questions leaves an
indelible impression--i ts effect, as belonging to one's experience, is present in
every subsequent endeavor.
Perhaps the only real philosophical synthesis available
to humanity is the acceptance of the ever more potently described limits of thought
that thought itself struggles with. The acceptance might lead one to leave the study
of philosophy and to incorporate it simply and completely, living the question rather
than asking it.
But here the challenge is in the asking.
The question that brought me to this
paper was:
What is in the "space" between the steps in a logical sequence?
The
question forces me immediately to look a.t the language that such a series could be
described in. Say, for example, that I examine a series of statements and judge that
they follow logically, one after another. It is the logical rigor of the series that
I am concerned with testing, and not the content of each statement, which, as language, depends on the rules of linguistic construction . How am I testing the logical
rigor of the sequence, what do I mean by logical? This is a basic question, asked in
simple language.
"What I mean by logic" is an expression for one thing. It is the
thing to which we refer when we use the word logic. We think of it usually as a criterion by which we judge . thought as ''making sense'i.
Kant says, the science of the
rules of understanding in general, that is, logic."
Any series of statements seems susceptible to being made more logically coherent
and rigorous, by filling in the "spaces" between with other statements, making a new
series which more thoroughly explicates the necessity of the steps. The aim of this
would be to understand better.
This filling in can go on until it becom~s ridiculous--the understanding that resulted from the initial series becomes confused and
the process begins describing itself. Language, when its logic comes into question,
begins justifying itself, turning inward, and describing its own limits.
Logic is
not language--it is independent of its description. We can make a progression more
logical with language, but we are limited by the dependen~that language has on logic. At a certain point, we will use up the empirical content; no more actual detail
will be available.
The logic of the progression will remain unexplica ted, and we
will be left only with an unsupportable affirmation of the necessity of logically
stepwise movement.
For Kant, considering a series of statements as f o llowing logically is an example of the subsumption of the concepts contained in the statements by pure, a priori
concepts of the understanding , that is, categories.
His assertion is that this
subsumption is necessary if there is to be any thought at all. In order to substantiate this assertion by showing it is logically correct, and thereby proving it is
true, it would seem that he must explicate the necessity of the categories for thinking. Now the idea that thinking must be proved categorical is itself a categorical

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thought.
"The co~plet~ness and. art.iculation of this system [of pure understanding]
can at the stme time yield a criterion of the correctness and genuineness of all its
components-."
On the face of it, categorical necessity wouldn't seem sufficient to
prove that thought is categorical, just as language, a logical construct, doesn't
ultimately serve to explicate logic. Logic and categorical necessity themselves require to be made necessary by something more coherent and more necessary from which
they can derive their power.
'
The search for this ground can take place only on the edge of meaningful language.
The language of the search ts admittedly insufficient for the task of
explaining its quarry, and at some crucial moments must rely on its ability to point,
to imply the ultimate coherence and necessity that must validate thought. Kant's own
language suffers these weaknesses, and yet it resounds with the power of its rational
intent.
The completeness and coheTence of the system speak for the power, while at
certain points the rules of language represent an obstruction to Kant ' s clarity o f
intention.
The ultimately coherent source of logical necessity is the synthetic unity of
apperception.
In trying to make this unity an "object" of my thought, I must, it
seems, deny the use of those elements of thought which depend on it for the necessity
of their existence. This puts me very near the "I", in the immediate logical vicinity of the noumenal center of my being.
It makes me feel alone.
In what follows, I
have presumed to begin with unity, itself the seemingly logical beginning of thought.
I have attempted to explore Kant's treatment of this function of unity, and to give a
sense of where we are in relation to the "I" we cannot know.
I. A.
Preliminary and purposely naive examination of the relation between unity
and thought.
Reason is the unified faculty which binds our mental activity into what we call
thought.
Its singularity reflects the unity of the thinking subject in which it is
housed.
Reason views the subject's body of knowledge as one comprehensive thing, a
manifold of systems of understanding, each of which contains subordinate systems of
concepts.
Since systems and the concepts are themselves considered as whole things,
this suggests that the manifold into which reason unifies them need not be considered
as a whole at every moment in our thought. We are not thinking all our knowledge at
all times. Our body of knowledge, and the subordinate wholes within it, are all susceptible to analysis. Indeed, the large encompassing order that reason prescribes is
its fullest end, and we rarely have any sight of its oneness.
This is because our
understanding does not always succeed in its effort to secure fully unified concepts.
We possess concepts which seem incomplete.
They contain strongly associated impressions but their boundaries are not clear, and they are thus not fully unified.
These concepts present problems to reason's goal of unity.
Since reason is a faculty acting on already unified wholes, a question presents
itself. What is the relation between the unity of the concepts considered as parts,
and the unity of the system of reason? Do the unities we see in each share a common
source? Thinking of reason as subsuming the understanding, fully contained and extended within itself, we may also consider both faculties as concentric around a central unity, from which the unity of each is derived.
Since concepts are ultimately
formed from the chaotically independent world of pre-appearance, and therefore rely
on a unification of these jumblings for their wholeness, they require that the unifying source be active continually during this nearly constant process. Making concepl
tual ones out of the chaotic many, and then organizing the ones into a rational manifold we identify as ours, seems to be the general character of thought.
I
Reason thinks ideas, which incorporate intuitions and concepts. Reason is thus
a higher faculty than sensible intuition or understanding.
But it is -e
ssential tb
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�see the dependence of reason on these subordinate faculties. It does not depend on
them for its existence, but it needs the concepts they produce to carry out its function, so as to be useful to the subject.
Intuition and understanding, considered
with regard to this use, are in reason, and their functions are part of reason's own
usefulness. All three faculties rely on unity.
Pure reason is in fact occupied with nothing but itself. It can
have no other vocation. For what is given to it does not consist
in objects that have to be brought to the unity of the empirical
concepts, but in those modes of knowledge supplied by the understanding that require to be brought to the unity of the concept
of reason--that is, to unity of connection according to a principle. The unity does not serve objectively as a principle that
extends the application of reason to objects, but subjectively as
a maxim that extends its application to all possible empirical
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knowledge of objects.
This subjective maxim of systematic unity is an idea that belongs to the thinking subject.
It is an idea that can apply only to knowledge. Without a unifying
faculty of understanding, we would never coalesce the manifold of the sensible impressions that constitute Kant's "beginning" of all knowledge. The thinking subject
first intuits, then thinks concepts through understanding, and then orders his
thought through the unifying function of reason. We must look to the subject for the
unity upon which the elements of this process depend.
This assertion presupposes an important question: how does the unity, which I
assert to be central to the nature and activity of thought, relate to my concept of
unity? This echoes Kant's criterion for determining a given concept to be synthetic.
"The question is not what we ought to join in t,fought to a given concept, but what we
actually think in it, even if only obscurely."
If what we actually think in a concept is a manifold, and can thus be separated or analyzed, the "what we think" has a
two-sided existence. On the one hand it is many, on the other it is one. As a concept, it is synthetic if we are aware that the two sides are required to be put to gether . The many impressions have somehow been previously conjoined into a manifold .
If I ask myself what I actually think in my concept of unity, that is, what kind of
synthesis resulted in my concept, I become confused. The question loses meaning because I fail to find a coherent concept of unity in my thought. Examples of unity
pour forth, empirical and partitive. I am unable to gather them. Soon I see myself
thinking, over against the lot of united things thought. This serves to point out ~
oneness in a comparative way. My failure to find unity as a concept, does not prevent me from thinking of myself as one, more truly one than any other example I have.
Is my own unity also my concept of unity?
To answer this question, I must analyze my thought without the benefit of Kant's
system. I can't think about my thought through his system without first determining
my own relation to it. According to Kant, I can have no empirical experience of unity. I can have experience only of concepts arising from sensibility, which are possible in part because of the category of unity. The category is at work each time I
am conscious of a given representation.
But what do I think about unity, what notion do I hav e of it that allows me to
hope to apply Kant's ideas in my thought? It is appropriate here to be somewhat naive, and briefly to follow my sense of being pushed back from the empirical experience . of the cohesive aggregations we loosely term "unities", to the reasons why we do
so.
In the second paragraph of the Introduction to the Critique of Pure Reason, Kant
distinguishesr: empirical knowledge from "what our own faculty of knowledge supplies

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from itself ."5 His cautions against the error of deducing necessity from examples ot
experience are frequent and numerous. This suggests that Kant wants to remind not
only the reader, but himself as well, that care must be taken to limit consideration
of the role of necessity to the realm of pure thought. As creatures in the world, we
don't often need to question the truth of appearances. We treat objects as things
entirely knowable in themselves, even as we contemplate the inherent error of so doing. If we look at the process of our giving up on the hope that experience can illuminate the character of unity, perhaps we can reveal something about the way we
come to see unity as crucial to thought in general.
· Strictly speaking, we don't see unity in experience, but rather unification, or
the results of processes of unification. In the first case we see the actual "bringing together" of diverse empirical elements into a "whole". In the second case we
see the "whole", and its composition is apparent to us by analysis. In the world of
objects treated as things knowable in themselves, unification is the process whereby
individuals are grouped. This results either in an aggregation in which the individuals are judg.ed as sharing an identical quality, or in a system where the individuals are seen as complementary elements of a unique singularity. The description
of the simple aggregation can serve as a general description of any of its members.
Similarly, the end toward which the system-group is aimed is greater than any of the
diverse purposes of the complementary parts. In both instances, the parts are more
effectively comprehended. Our thinking, which was scattered because it had to address many thing, gains cohesion and power by our gathering them into encompassing
wholes.
Next we may notice in gathering individuals into unified groups we do not negate
their individuality. The unified groups strive to imitate the cohesion of the individuals they contain, which are always simpler than the groups.
This pushes our
thought into the regressive exploration of increasingly simpler wholes. Our empirical examples fail to show us unity, because the successively simpler wholes contain
parts that can in turn be analyzed. We are forced to explore unity in thought.
A purposely naive retracing of the path that we take in moving from the awareness of empirical unification and the power it seeks to secure, back into the necessary principle of unity in thought, mirrors what must have been the philosophical
preparation for the writing of tht Critique. "There can be no doubt that all our
knowledge begins with experience."
This first sentence of the introduction to the
Critique reveals Kant's awareness that he must subsume empiricism in stepping away
from it. There can be no doubt that man's first knowledge comes from an unexamined
process of acquisition. Kant knew that he normally treated objects the way we all
do.
His initial examination of experiential knowledge must have involved basic
questions, and threatened ( at least initially) his confidence in the "reality" of the
world. Ultimately his philosophy does not ask us to change our physical relation to
objects; but it does demand that we recognize "reality" as a subjective idea. The
empiricists were confident that their observations were undeniably objectively real,
and that unerring logic following from these observations taken as principles could
not fail to be correct. Kant ushered in transcendental philosophy by simply asking
how they observed, how they thought, and from that, how observation and thinking are
possible.
I. B.
Discussion of the presuppositions behind considering experience to be the
beginning of knowledge.
The assertion that all our knowledge begins with experience only seems possible
after an extended analysis of the faculty of understanding. It presumes a specific
definition of knowledge as relying on concepts, which are themselves defined as the
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�presumes that the understanding is the faculty which makes concepts.
The beginning
described above is a temporal one, where perhaps the connotation of origin is missed.
It cannot be otherwise, since time is the form of all intuition, the root of knowledge~ but the awareness of this temporal beginning presupposes analysis of understanding. It is the first sentence of the Critique. It has been placed there for a
specific reason. We must transcend this temporal beginning, and examine the analysis
from which it results.
Consideration of the presuppositions involved in Kant's assertion that experience must be the temporal beginning of knowledge, helps to reveal the logical
convolution of the Critique's explication.
Logical analysis reveals sensible intuition as the temporal beginning of possible knowledge. For this reason, the Critique
begins its explication with an analysis of sensible intuition.
Logic reveals intuition as the source of knowledge.
Logic is a faculty which lends necessity to the
movement of thought.
Thus intuition is revealed as the necessary beginning of the
process of acquiring knowledge. We may acquire knowledge that begins with intuition,
without explicating this process to ourselves. Logic then simply works in us unanalyzed. We treat our intuitions as given and from them determine what logically follows.
But when we wish to explicate the workings of the process, this is, to say
what in us receives impressions, and what we do with them, etc., we are faced with
the problem of explicating necessity.
In effect, logic is then led to explicate itself, its function of lending necessity. A further complication is the fact that the
language of the explication depends on logic for its capacity to ''make sense''.
The
logically derivative, complex rules of syntax must constitute the form of an
explication of the most basic beginning of logic. What approach can we make to the
explication of logic? The Critique is Kant's offering to us in our predicament, the
result of his sharing our dilemma.
It can only have followed in the wake of the incisive questions which carry it along.
Our initial attempt to judge his rigor, his
logic, his depth, consists of trying it on. That is, we try to think as he does. As
a result of this effort we come to a point where we rely heavily on the prefacing
remark , "Kant would say . • • " , in answering philosophical questions put to us. We give
Kant permission to answer for us. The temptation and indeed (if we want to know his
thought) necessity of this "trying on" is analogous to the aforementioned unanalysed
acquisition of knowledge.
We read Kant and accept him, working to give the system
its full due. We do not isolate clearly and methodically the concepts that we understand arising from the book, but we do generate them, as unquestioningly as we avoid
cars in the street.
As we grow comfortable with the Critique, we disentangle ourselves, achieve some distance, and try to figure out what we think about it.
·
·
•t
We apply his method to his own system, once we can b egin t o " p 1 ace " 1 , o r
glimpse its collective rational unity. The above description of our familiarization
process , could perhaps be generalized into a description of familiarization in general.
But the fundamental character of Kant's subject matter puts limits on the process of looking within his system. We want to go beyond an unquestioning acceptance,
to a full explication of the necessity, carried to its original source.
This
"source" may well be seen as the true beginning" of knowledge.
As it is the source
of logical necessity, it is also a limit to the logical process of validating philo sophical systems.
II. A.
Dependence of e ach stag e of the analysi s of und e rstanding on the u nity it
reveals as its highest principle.
This paper began by discussing reason as the unifier of
and of possible knowledge.
We think of the expression "what
only one thing, albeit comprehensive.
Kant terms this aspect
unity", and he relates it directly to the unifying capacity of

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our body of knowledge
we know" as intending
of reason "systematic
the faculty of under-

standing.
Just as the understanding unifies the manifold in the object by
means of concepts~ so reason unifies the manifold of concepts by
means of ideas, positing a certain collective unity as the goal
of the activities of the understandi~, which otherwise are concerned solely with distributed unity.'

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This collective unity is the totality of possible knowledge, and it apparently re flects the unity of the understanding which facilitates the generation of concepts .
The Critique of Pure Reason is. distinguished from the system of pure retson since it
does not claim to offer the "exhaustive application of such an organon."
Rather, it
seeks to delimit completely the principles of a priori synthesis.
Two results of a
priori synthesis are possible: the form of possible manifold in intuition, or a body
of ·a priori knowledge based on pure concepts of the understanding. The first synthe sis is temporally prior in relating to acutal experience, but depends on the logical ly prior possibility of the second synthesis.
Pure concepts of understanding must
relate a priori to objects, but their exisfcrnce, Kant says, already presupposes the
combination attributable to a higher unity.
[Combination] .•• is an affair of the understanding alone, which
itself is nothing but the faculty of combining a priori and of
bringing the manifold of given representations under the [systematic] unity of apperception.
The principle of apperceptioIJ.. is
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the highest principle in the whole sphere of human knowledge.
This lofty evaluation of the synthetic unity of apperception may seem surprising, since we associate it with concepts of understanding rather than with the
disjunctively considered, "higher" sphere of pure reason .
It is often difficult to
retain the awareness of reason as the legislator of thought . This is because we are
normally put upon by need and see legislative function only when we reflect op the
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"how" of thinking.
Reason itself supplies the principles of understanding,
of
which the highest is t he unity of apperception.
This high principle of knowledg e
alone can reflect the systematic unity of pure reason, whose ideal end is the totality of all possible knowledge . But this is a statement of its stature and is not illuminating as to the nature of the principle .
Our initial , more naive conception of the shared unity at the center of thought
was based on the dependence of reason on understanding and intuition.
We imagined
t he subordinate faculties as contained within the faculty of r eason .
In makin g such
a formulation, we abstracted from the movement in the process of acquiring knowledge
to a fixity of the interrelation of the elements of our mental activity.
I suggest
that Kant's description of the .;3.cquisition of knowledge arose from an analytic and
methodical questioning of empiricism, which centered around a complaint that it
lacked explicit logical necessity and didn't address the condition of its thought.
The original synthetic unity of apperception is the ultimate yield of Kant, s
rational analysis of the possibility of understanding. When we have it revealed, we
have attained the abstract fixity in which all the fundamental elements of rational
thinking are displayed before us . Their necessary order can only now be ascertained
as truly necessary, since only by seeing its root in the principle of unity is cat egorical necessity even deemed possible. Once we have attained this high principle
that lends necessity to the generation of concepts, we can look back at the process
of its revealing , that is , the sections of the Critique prior to the Transcendental
Deduction. We then see the dependence of each stage on the principle itself.
In the
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�lishing space and time as the sole formal conditions of sensible intuition.
"It
is ... indubitably cerf~in that space and time ... are merely subjective conditions of
all our intuitions."
Kant's analysis of the faculty of receptivity thr ough which
objects are given to us is the epitome of plausibility. He offers a complete argument for its acceptance, since our alternative of ascribing objective validity to
space and time would be a relinquish::Lng of our ability to say "indubitably certain",
that is, to prove the necessity in the relation of space and time to our intuition.
But the completeness of the argument is not assured until we have gone further. This
"indubitable certainty" is not explicitly possible until the ground of the necessity
is revealed as the unity of apperception . "Time and space are therefore two sourcI~
of knowledge, from which bodies of a priori synthetic knowledge can be derived."
Such bodies of a priori synthetic knowledge necessarily contain concepts derived from
sources in intuition, and so establish these sources as indubitably certain and subjective. To question their necessity is equivalent to denying synthetic unity, and
questions Kant's formulation of concept making.
In the short introduction to the Transcendental Lo~, the understanding is designated as "spontaneity in the production of concepts,"
which it makes in conjunction with the other fundamental source of knowledge in the mind, the sensible intuition. Here, the two-fold role of logic that we have already described is made explicit.
First, it must give necessity to the process of acquiring a priori knowledge; and second, it must reveal the source of this, its own necessity. This is the
role of transcendental logic, which is distinguished from general logic in that it
treats only of the a priori use of understanding.
Empirical objects, even should they never vary in our experience, cannot be
shown to exist necessarily. Their consistence in experience refers us to the subjective necessity that underlies the possibly of their being judged as unvarying . General logic, which supplies the rules under which these objects must be brought in the
understanding, can therefore only treat of the form of thought, irrespective of its
sensible content. But since a priori synthetic knowledge is available to us,
a distinction might likewise be drawn between pure and empirical
thought of objects. In that case we should have a logic in which
we do not abstract from the entire content of knowledge.
This
other logic, which should contain solely the rules of the pure
thought of an object, would exclude only those modes of knowledge
which have empirical content. It would also treat of the origin
of the modes in which we know objecr~' in so far as that origin
cannot be attributed to the objects. ·
The origin of the modes of human knowledge is attributed to the thinking subject. Is
this saying that knowledge derives from the knower? If appearances provide only the
substance of knowledge, and in no way contribute to the actual modes of knowing, this
would suggest that in the thinking subject alone are we to find the functional origin, or true beginning of thought.
II. B.
Transcendental Analysis
purest concept.

of understanding reveals

synthetic unity as

the

The Transcendental Logic is divided into two sections, one of which, the
Transcendental Dialectic, Kant claims to be "no more than a critical tre17ment of the
pure understanding for the guarding of it against sophistical illusion.''
The first
part, the Transcendental Analytic, is the more substantial, recognizably logical section. The initial book contains first, the exposition of the table of categories, or

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pure concepts of understanding; and then the Transcendental Deduction, where the unif~ing function of the categories is made explicitly possible and necessary.
The
first book of the Transcendental Analytic contains what seems to be the essence of
the Critique of Pure Reason . The analytic is an attempt to understand understanding
Here is found the full force of the word "transcendental".
Here is also felt th~
extreme limitation of words and language.
If we think of the term "transcendental"
as indicating movement out of a given mode into the understanding of its possibility,
then what do we intend by the application of this "movement beyond" to the under standing itself?
The determination of the system of concepts of pure understanding is an analysis
which Kant does not describe. The system seems to yield itself to him effortlessly,
through the act of his looking at understanding with only the aid of his concept of
purity, which prevents his looking, as it were, from admitting any empirical blemish .
What is Kant analyzing? We might offer some of his own words--he' s analyzing the
faculty which generates concepts a priori--but are these words satisfying to the purity of what they intend? Kant's own description is equally troubling.
By analytic concepts, I do not understand their analysis, or the
procedure usual in philosophical investigations, that of dissect ing the content of such concepts as may present themselves, and
so of rendering them more distinct; but the hitherto rarely at tempted dissection of the. faculty of undP-rstanding, itself, by
looking for them in the understanding alone, f~ their birthplace,
and by analyzing the pure use of the faculty .
The analysis is explic itly a mere "looking" and yet it serves to "dissect" the under standing. What is intended by the two metaphors? "Looking" is that evaluation of
the thinking self, in which we determine what concepts are available . They need to
.
.
.
.
b e " soug ht II , t o f in d " p 1 ace ,, -- I can ' t seem to avoi d spatial analogies or of fer a description of what is intended by this process of "searching out'' the contents of a
thinking faculty . It is a mental "searching" t o which we have such a simple relation
that our need to employ analogical descriptions of it cannot tarnish the clarity of
o u r th oug ht .
"D. sec t. " is even more comp 1 ex as it presupposes the more specific
.
·
is
ing
condition of the prior cohesion of the elements of understanding.
It is the dissection of a faculty we must already "have" in its entirety.
Th~s ~alls up t~9 distinction initiated in the Introduction between analytic and
synthetic Judgments.
There Kant claims that the effect of this distinction on philosophy has not been keenly felt before his own treatment of it. This is an important indication of the role that his analysis of thought occupies in his own mind .
Analytic judgments, he says, can be thought of as explicative; while synthetic
judgments should be termed ampliative. These words point to a question which becomes
vital when thinking of the unity of apperception, namely, is one of the two kinds of
judgments more necessary?
The possibility of an analytic judgment depends on the
existence of a concept that is unified, or has already been synthesized. All analysis then, is grounded by a priori synthesis. And while the determination of a concept as synthetic depends on the capacity to analyze it, it might be imagined that
synthetic concepts could exist alone without any analysis possible. They would simply foster other synthetic concepts in one direction, that of a progressively more
encompassing and complex concept. All learning would then be the building of a super-concept that contained all of an individual's knowledge.
Analytic judgments,
adding nothing to concepts, do not sit in the position of grounding synthetic ones.
Thus the entire Transcendental Analytic presupposes a synthesized subject matter already existent. Since the actual steps in Kant's "analyzing the pure use of the faculty" of understanding, are not described, we are forced to trust that a synthesized

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understanding that must be presupposed is known to us so simply and fundamentally
that it is indescribable and susceptible of an equally indescribable analysis.
Upon presenting his table of categories, Kant says,
This then is the list of all original pure concepts of synthesis
that the understanding contains within itself a priori ..• by them
alone can it understand anything in 2Be manifold of intuition,
that is, think an object of intuition.
The table is the result of the undescribed analysis. The next statement is an assertion of their fundamentality to thought.
At this stage of the argument, Kant
relies on the rigor of his preparation to make up for the "space" in between the categories and their function . The above statement is an encapsulation of the move from
the analytic determination of what the categories are, to the analytic deduction of
their indispensability, in which he set out to prove their uniqueness and exhaustiveness.
"Concepts of synthesis" are principles of . the combination of the manifold in
intuition. The possibility of combination is rooted in the original synthetic unity
of apperception.
In the same way that we presume as necessary a pure synthesized
understanding whose analysis reveals the categories, so the syn the tic unity is described by Kant as an analytic proposition. We must be able to deduce a priori the
form in which an object may be represented to us. Only by this will we be able to
extend ne,cessity to the object, as known. Deduction is a logical process, and it is
analytic. It has the character we looked at earlier, of "pushing" us back to necessary conditions. Since, in this case, all its movement is born of a priori necessity, Kant terms it a transcendental deduction.
The necessity that this deduction
pushes us back to is so pure as to validate the categories themselves.
It is the
source of their power to give cohesion to the chaos of pre-appearance.
It is the
purity in pure thought.
The word "necessity" seems insufficient to its actual intended function.

impossible bind? We feel the push of analysis, but we can't offer an illumination of
the nature of the synthetic unity that is presupposed. We can only deduce that it
must exist, and this deduction is the result of an analysis that began by looking at
sensible intuition. I suggest that this whole preliminary analysis stands in need of
the ultimate unity that it reveals as the limit and source of its own power. Here we
feel both the push of analysis and the ultimate synthetic coherence of unity
co- existing and giving rise to thought itself.
In support of his attributing an analytic nature to the principle of synthetic
unity, Kant makes the following statement:
I am conscious of the self as identical in respect of the manifold of representations that are given to me in an intuition,
because I call them one and all my repr1~entation, and so apprehend them as constituting one intuition.

It seems that the unity is an analytic proposition because it serves only to
explicate the thinking subject, not to join anything to the concept that we have of
it . Looking at the language of the argument, I question whether there is any "rooul."
for analysis in the simple realm where the unity exists; or whether anything is mo r1
e
analytically appropriate than that my representations must be called mine. By analy\
sis, I identify my capacity to say "I think" as signaling a unity in my represent~r­
tions which must be the result or prior synthesis. Explication is often essential to
understanding.
Analysis, in the empirical world, would seem capable of providing
more information to the mind than synthesis.
Here, however, isn't analysis in an

The analysis of any concept will result in a sequence of analytic judgments in which
"I" am the judge, and I identify the elements of the judgment (subject and predicate)
as ~ representations. In order that this be possible, we must conceive of the necessity that a synthesized , potentially divisible concept already be available, aris ing from the original unity. The formation of the above sentence is revealing. I am
something because I do something.
"I" both is and does, and its doing is a proof of
its being. Upon whar-does this proof rely if we accept that we can have no knowledge
of the "I" as it is in itself, but only as it appears?
The synthetic unity of apperception is not the "I". We want to attribute it to
the "I" as a way to get "nearer" to what the "I" in itself may be. In the unity, we
see a coexistence of analysis and synthesis nearing the absolute cohesion we suspect
must exist in the "I" that is capable of sensing, understanding, and reasoning. We
have said that analytic thinking is pushy in general. It seems that a concept isn't
fully known, isn't knowledge per se, unless it is fully analyzed . So the understand ing pushes for completeness in concepts.
Similarly Pure Reason is a kind of
transcendentally analytic, or potentially analytic faculty, that applies itself once
a body of potentially related complete concepts are known. What is reason's analysis
pushing toward? A complete system is what Kant suggests is reason's focus. What do
we mean by a complete system? His assertions about the responsibility of philosophy
and the exhaustiveness of the categories, all suggest that he intends to fully delimit the parameters of possible truth.
He wants to be infallible, so that all
questions of the form of thought, that is, the a priori condition of the mind, may be
answered. The only proof Kant will accept of the connection between an object and
its synthesized representation in the understanding, is one that establishes an a
priori readiness to know the representation as an object. These words--know, representation, and object--have the very narrowly defined meanings offered by Kant in
order to limit confusion. He rejects an empirical proof of the connection between
object and representation (i .e. that the object makes the representation possible),
because it cannot be shown to rest on a stronger condition than the commonality of
experience. The object itself is out of range of possible knowledge.
It is truly
independent of our thought.
Commonality of experience could only yield what Kant
considers a de facto deduction of the form of its representation in thought.
This brings us back to transcendental deduction, and its relation to the
noumenal synthetic unity whose activity brings the categories into existenc~
4 Deduction is a logical process and cannot contain the unconditioned in any way.
But
this is the deduction without which no other deduction is possible.
It is at the
beginning, and logic cannot simply start itself up like a motor. If we wish to make
it logical , it seems we must find a way to condition the original unity.
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III. A. The thinking subject considered as object leads to our inability to reject
individuality.
The application of the analytic/synthetic distinction discussed in section four
of the Introduction to the consideration of the synthetic unity of apperception,
serves to exhibit the depth of my conceptual dilemma with unity. Kant identifies the
principle ~f the unity of apperception as "an identical, and therefore analytic prop 2 He explains,
osition."
For it says no more than that all ~ representations in any given
intuition must be subject to the condition under which alone I
can ascribe them to the identical self as synthetically combi~2d
in one apperception through the general expression, "I think". ·

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pushed and reason won't yield, even here where its own effectiveness finds its root,
its limit.
Kant certainly does not proclaim the unity of apperception to be unconditioned,
nor does he claim to condition it so as to preserve the strict logic of the deduction. Indeed, as logically necessary, unity must he conditioned. His description
of its necessity only succeeds insofar as his language succeeds. And while his language and logic are impeccable in regard to establishing the "I" (or at least the
synthetic unity attributable to it) as a kind of ground for thought, he makes statements which out of context sound like tautologies.
"For the manifold representations, which are given in an intuition, would not be f?e and all ~ representation,
if they did not all belong to one self-consciousness."
Perhaps it is reason's unceasing drive toward comprehension that "conditions"
the unity of apperception.
For there is an idea of "complete systematic unity belonging to reason. Kant assigns three ideal object~ to this idea, the first of which
is the "I" considered as "thinking nature or soul." 7 Since we are beyond "I think",
where the thinking self is an object, we are also outside of understanding.
Pure
reason is looking at an object that it gives for itself.
Instead, then, of the empirical concept (of that which the soul
actually is), which cannot carry us far, reason takes the concept
of the empirical unity of all thought; and by thinking this unity
as unconditioned and original, it forms from it a concept of reason ... The idea of a simple self subsisting intelligence .• It is
endeavoring to represent all determinations as existing in a single subject, all powers, so far as possible, as derived from a
single fundamental power, all change as belonging to the state of
one and the same permanent being, and all appear~§ces in space as
completely different from the action of thought.
If we consider this in conjunction with our understanding that tq~ synthetic unity of
apperception constitutes the objective validity of the object,~
and so determines
itself as utterly subjective, we see here, at the root of the thinking process, something like an inability to reject our own individuality.
When I say, "my mind makes me •.. ", I mean that l feel a necessity in my thought
that "pushes" for completeness. I believe this is what Kant describes as the effect
of the transcendental ideas on my understanding. I wish to order my knowledge and to
have concepts in their fullness of meaning. Reason is always seeking to complete the
system of knowledge that is born in the understanding, thereby giving concepts place
and "extension". Transcendental ideas are not bound the way concepts are to objects,
as they have no object in concrete.
By identifying "I think" as a kind of ultimate object, we have introduced a
ranking of a priori concepts--a transcendental hierarchy of importance that reflects
the truth of the concepts contained in it.
"I think", as we know, accompanies all
representations.
We may therefore consider our knowledge of any concept to be expressible in a judgment. This can be seen most clearly in the common response to the
question, · "what do you think?"
We say, "what I think is ••• ", in which objective
truth, that is, subordinate judgments concerning objects, is united in the predicate
of a self - directed judgment of myself as thinking. This is only redundant, since all
representations are susceptible of such a construction, but it is also a very common
use of language.
This suggests something we have already alluded to--the "ultra a
priori" nature of original unity.
One might think that the universal applicability
of "I think" would eliminate it as an effective linguistic tool. But we seem to need
to say it, to reaffirm a connection between the object we make of our self, the activity of thought, and the empirical object of the cosmos.

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III.

B.

Thought directed toward the self is recognized as conditioning being.

All our concepts must come in a categorical form.
Kant says,

The table of categories, as

contains all the elementary concepts of the understanding in
their completeness, nay, even the form of a system of them in
human understanding, and accordingly indicates all the momenta of
a projected spec~~ative science, and even their order, as I have
elsewhere shown.

Any concept may be placed in a category which subsumes it a priori, and we can see a
necessary relation between empirical concepts only because of the necessity of the
relation of the categories that subsume them.
The necessity of the categories is
not, however, the so"rce of necessity itself.
The deduction of their necessity is
different from the necessity that "I think" accompany all representations which, as
we said, involves our inability to reject the individuality of our thought, or to
separate our being from the condition of this activity of thought. Our consciousness
of this inability is what leads us to deduce the original unity of apperception as
underlying the analytic unity of all consciousness of objects. The logical necessity
of the existence of this unity is categorical, implying a tautological circularity--that the categories could somehow provide proof of their own necessity. Logical
necessity is the result of our holding up individuality of thought as undeniable, our
challenging ourselves to "get behind" it in thought, and our inevitable failure to do
so. Can we ever get behind logical necessity?
This is to ask whether we can get behind original unity.
Perhaps we cannot do
so directly, as we have shown that the language we would use relies on the principle
of unity in a truly transcendental way.
Its reliance prevents us from actually
explicating the truth of the original unity's being,
or the truth of its
transcendental necessity. What can we do with language that might cast light on this
hidden place in us?
--I have spoken of the "I think" as an ultimate object.
I have intended by this
to show that the reliance of human thought on "object" limits and bounds our language
and conditions the true independence of the unity which constitutes individuality
itself. Thus far I have not dealt with the fact that my ultimate object "I think" is
also a verbal construction.
Because it is language, our expression is analyzable
into the linguistic elements it contains.
But the truth of the object is that, in
the "thinking being" we intend, the so-called activity of the being is not deemed
analytically separable from the being itself. That is, the thinking seems to "constitute " the being, or is unified to it so closely that language is unable to describe
the joining.
Still, language calls this "I think", which, as containing elements,
suggests that, though the unity of the thinking being may not be described, it is not
the ultimate source of unity. Considering the predication of being in the "I am", we
find it illusory and self-indicting in its self-consciousness.
The predication does
not trace back to an inner sensible intuition.
Does it make sense to just say "I"
and look?
My status as a thinker is changed by questions concerning the "I".
As the
ground of thought, it seems no conclusions may be reached about it analytically.
There can be no concept of it. Alone in its presence, I am thinking, but my thinking
is a mere looking, the simplest mental affirmation that I am real, and I am thinking.
Kant justifies the principle upon which his Transcendental Deduction, and I claim his
entire philosophy, is based, by presenting us with a challenge.
It is a challenge he
must have presented to himself as an "I".
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�consciousness of the absolutely unified self, to say that it is not one , or that we
are unsure where we acquire whatever internal cohesion our thought has.
If being is
separated from thinking, perhaps we are introducing a demonstration of the independence each has from the other.
In any case, the justification for the principle
which lends necessity to all thought, both a priori and empirical, is not strictly a
logical appeal.
We cannot ultimately reject our own individuality .
Kant tells us
what must fall out from this, if we accept it as true, but we cannot offer logical
proof.
May the justification ultimately be our own feeling of oneness, and might
this not still be a rational justification? The analytic nature of the principle of
original unity has come into question.
What we know of the original unity is not "what it is", but only that it is necessary for us as sayers of the expression "I think".
This is because we must
understand by thinking, because there is no understanding available to us intuitively.
Intuitional understanding may be possible, but Kant says that we can ' t imagine
what it would be like.
The "I" that thinks is phenomenal, and its concept may be
traced empirically to inner sense, the representation of myself as I appear to myself, i.e. as thinking. Of the two verbal expressions in which we place the "I", the
expression of being, I am, offers no synthesizable manifold. The active expression,
I do (in this case I think) implies an obj e.ct of the action, something done or
thought.
The object cannot come from anywhere else than a given united manifold of
intuition, whose unity is derived from the unity of apperception.
I may attach "I
think" to any of my representations.
Thus each of them presumes a self directed
judgment of myself as thinking, and not merely thinking, but thinking something.
This would seem to indicate that I cannot be aware of the unity of apperception
except as necessary to my perception of a unified object. The unity's effect is extended from the origin to the potential object in the joining of the elements in a
judgment. Through the judgment (a relation itself), the being of the subject, conditioned by the predicate, ts seen in relation to or is "brought to", the original unity.
The simple relation of the judgment, when seen as a uniting of its disparate
elements, can receive this unifying force only from its original source. If I am not
specifically conscious of my judging, I am nonetheless conscious of "what I think".
When I unite disjointed representations into an objective concept, I do not make
the object into a part of ~ unity.
My extending of unity is not something I may
choose or not choose to do.
It makes my thought, and thereby all consciousness of
myself, possible.
I force the manifold into a state that reflects my unity of
thought; I make it a whole by relating it to my unity.
In the third class of categories, those dealing with relation, such a whole corresponds to community.
The
logical function associated with community is the disjunctive judgment.

We may say "I think", or we may off er a conditioned verb of being, "I am a
thinking thing". If we say only "I am", we are still conscious of our saying, and so
of our thinking. We cannot think of our being without thereby conditioning it. Our
thought recognizes the condition it sets on our being.
It recognizes its own function as the impediment to itself--it seems ultimately to preclude examination of itself.
Even stranger, thought isn't stopped in its tracks by this realization, it
retains all its normal power intact. It still is able to prove propositions and provide the full framework for human truth.
It can categorize itself, but not know itself. The origin of all its limited ability, is its ultimate inability.
I say this because of unity.
Oneness and wholeness are words that I associate
with empirical observations , for they are primarily attributable to things.
I associate unity, on the other hand, with origin, and I consider these to have
specifically transcendental implications. The synthetic unity of apperception is the
yield of a self-directed analysis. It is attributable to the I. Somehow, looking.at
its place , and its surmised function, puts me near the unspeakable truth of my exis tence. The power that binds analysis with synthesis into coexistence within the uni ty of apperception roust be even greater in the unkno-wn self. Because the challenge
of rejecting this origin stands ( that is, because we do not know what it would mean
if it didn't stand), we are sure of the unity of the self, despite its being unknown .
The self is the groun&lt;l we stand on when we look at object, whether empirical or
a priori.
What can ground us if we wish to look at the self, to extend out the
sphere of knowledge to meet it? What if man were. able t~ cultivate an. abilit~ to
feel the unity of empirical wholes as simple, despite possible complex division into
parts? Maybe if we listened more closely to ourselves, we would realize the depth of
our own unity.
Each time we possess or claim, or otherwise subj ectify ourselves,
maybe we "touch base" with the center of our minds. We do this to a degree in certain recognitions and responses of a less philosophic character, more instinctively.
For example, need is an awareness of necessity in the self, and so the need, as mine,
has a self-focusing quality.
The self-awareness that results from this kind of necessity is one in which the self is alone with its need.
Such a need can beco~e so
acute that it drives everything out of the mind except self- awareness.
In considering unity as the fundamental center of thought we put ourselves in a similar position
of being alone. It is from this cohesive center that we open out to the world.

We must observe that in all disjunctive judgments the sphere
(That is, the multiplicity which is contained in any one judgment) is represented as a whole divided into parts (the subordinate concepts), and that since no one of them can be contained
under any other, and so as determining each other, not in one
direction only, as in a series, but reciprocally, as in an aggregate - if one member of t~I division is posited, all the rest are
excluded, and conversely.
Concepts are coordinated with one another, and thereby unified into a judgment. The
concept of this coordinate relation is the most illuminating description I can find
of the actual process of extending unity and making "wholes" in thought.
It seems
like transcendental organization. The coordination is most like the activity of unity.
The categorical necessity of the coordination reflects the pure internal
cohesion that must constitute the truth of unity.

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�For Li Ch'ing Chao

FOOTNOTES

Judy Kistler
All notes refer to the following:
Kant, Critique of Pure Reason. St. Martin's Press, New York 1929.
Trans. Norman Kemp Smith.

93
102
552
54
42
41
533
58
58
152
154
58
86
80
92
95
101
103
Section IV, Intro.
113-4
155
157
155
501
153
556
557
557
156

Last night the upper heavens
were the color of eggplant,
but the last breath of the sun
shone golden through the trees.
I often watch in silence,
then turn aside to read the Chinese poets.
Unlike them, I have no phoenix hair ornaments
t o crush in my uneasi.ness over
your absence.
Unable to decide, we dance about each other;
repelled and attracted,
magnets unsure of our polarities,
moths flirting with the flame.

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Judy Kistler

graduated from Santa Fe in 1977 and teaches math and Chinese at the
Forman School in Litchfield, Connecticut.

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�Surf and Misfortune A Study of Oedipean Tragedy
Jeff Kojac

In the final choral ode of Sophocles 1 Oedipus Tyrannos, the tragedy and the
moral of the play are portrayed in the words, s\s toov
KAdowva OElvns mJµ¢opas
sAnA08sv (He was taken into the great fearful surf of misfortune) . l
The
c onc l u sion to t h e play begins with a parall e l to Oedipus ' opening speech. The chorus
addresses those who live in Thebes and reminds the heare r that Thebes i.s a city
cursed with bloodshed since it was founded .
It describes Oedipus as a masterful
riddle solver envied by all . Yet this Oedipus, the cho r us sings , was swallowed by
the sea of misfortune and found that no mortal could be counted happy until dead , fo r
the future can hold great misery no matter what may be the blessings of t he pr esent .
Such a closing statement to the play leaves the reade r with a mo ra l ve r y close
to that Solon shar es with Croesus-- that the rich and powerful king i s by no means the
happiest , fo r his downfall can ccrne b e fo r e his de at h .
Th e ke y t o this mo ra l in
Oedipus Tyrannos is the fearful surf of misfortune actually swallowing Oed i pus ; this
is the tragedy of the play .
The nature of the swallowing is Oedipus' inability to
perceive himself due to his fear and anger .
Oedipus clearly is in the sea of
ouµ¢opas
right from his birth , long before
he drowns himself . He flees from Corinth in fear, kills Lauis' par t y in ange r , and
b r ings about his own downfall in the dialogue of t he play .
Re becomes angr y a t
Teiresias and forces the seer to speak words which only make Oedipus mo r e ang ry and
b r ing him into conflict with Creon . Oedipus' anger agains t Creon draws Jocasta int o
the play, and thr ough her Oedipus ' guilt is exposed . When the messenger fr om Corinth
presents the news that Polybus is dead, Oedipus openly expresses his fea r of t he bed
of his mother in Corinth.
This fear dissolves whe n the messenge r ex plains that
Me rope was only his step- mother .
This in turn brings a h e rdsman to th e palace .
Oed i pus again becomes ang r y , and i t is because of this ange r that he f inds t h e tr uth
and realizes the oracle has been proved true .
His r age t akes him t o Jocas t a ' s
chambe r s and, finding he r dead, he vents h is wrath on hims el f:
h e blind s his own
eyes and thus completes his descent into the waves of misfo r tune .
Oedipus sinks in misfortune's waves thr ough his t h r ashing abou t i n ange r and
fear.
Bo t h o f t h es e emo tion s b lind h im fr om true se l f-kn owledge and make it all the
more painful when the truth is finally impress e d upon h i s e yes .
The dr owning in
misfortune is an understanding of the self . Oedipus lear ns o f his tr u e s el f , jus t a s
Cr oesus even t ually sees his fragility and mo rt alit y whe n h e is abo ut t o b e bu r ned at
the stake by Cyrus . Oedipus does not only lea r n of his tr u e se lf in t he sen s e of his
heritage and the consequences of his actions . He catch e s sight of h i mself a s a man
who is proven able to err and suffer r egar dle ss of p re viou s rank , ble ssings , o r
abilities .
Yet Oedipus i s not happy in his newl y gain e d s e lf-knowl e dge, and t o use his own
phrase (line 1444), he is "&amp;vcSp6s ke&gt;.. lO-U " - - a man of mise r y .
The ho rr or of his
wretchedness is not purely a product of the discove r y of h i s inc e s t and pat r icide ,
for as Jocasta hints at , unknowing inc e st do e sn't necessarily d e se r ve such horror
(line 982), and Oedipus' father surely attempted to kill him t wi ce--Oedipus' killing
was self - preservation.
The unde r lying r eason fo r Oedipus 1 wre t chedness mus t lie
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Oedipus ' tragedy comes about through his fear and anger, and it is these two
facets of his character that blind him.
Oedipus cannot see because he is too
frightened to see. He does not believe in himself as an individual, for clearly he
is affected by the words and actions of others to such an extent that he loses
himself in rage. Such rage expresses his inability to accept his own self; his anger
comes as a reaction to those that challenge his authority in any way.
This anger
shows that he does not feel himself truly to be the great man that he is considered,
for if he were the 'great man' he could not successfully be threatened.
Thus
Oedipus' insecurity is his blindness.
The word translated as misfortune is cruu~opas , but this word can be rendered
as luck, either good or bad, and as a chance event. This explains why ouµ¢opas
is
described as the surf; the waves can be positive, negative, and neutral in their
apathetic treatment of a surfer.
The waves do not set out to drown the surfer or
provide him with a good ride or bore him with small breakers; rather the waves are a
natural function of the planet without any intentions or cause to them (other than
a merely efficient cause).
The surf of
cruµ¢opas
is pictured as great and fearful because it is man who
is responsible for the outcome of the waves; his actions decide whether the luck is
good or bad.
Oedipus is taken into the horrible world of chance:
this is a totally
different understanding of the play from the usual speculation that Oedipus is fated
and trapped into his tragedy. But it is a solid interpretation: he can react in any
way he chooses to the oracle, his father, the plague, Teiresias, Jocasta, the
messenger, and the herdsman. And he does so in a consistent manner: with anger and
fear.
Swept into the world of chance, Oedipus acts in a destructive and insecure
fashion.
He thrashes around in the surf of ouu¢opas with his actions because his
self-perception produces the consequences of the great fearful surf.
The play' s
tragedy therefore lies in Oedipus 1 being given the chance to make his own consequences.
The reason why such 'chance' is tragic is that his true self is relied
upon. It is his true self that fails him; it resp onds with decisions that topple him
from his throne.
Oedipus' horror comes fr om perceiving that his true self is prone
to the same mistakes and follies as that of any other man.
Sophocles' lesson in Oedipus Tyrannos is not simply for haughty kings trapped in
fate.
Sophocles writes in such a way that his play is applicable for all men who can
strive to see themselves truly and avoid both arrogance and self-deprecation.
Through a portrait of Oedipus' being taken into the great fearful surf of misfortune,
Sophocles gives the reader an exhortation to stay away from the extremes of conceit
and self-hatred and instead to seek after a balance simi l ar to Aristotle's 'mean' in
The Ethics and Plato's 'sophro syne' in Cha rmides.
1

o e d i p us Tyr a nno s line 1527, my transla t ion .

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I
I

A Translation of Jean De La Fontaine's
"The Cat, the Weasel, and the Little Rabbit"
James O' Gara

LE CHAT, LA BELETTE ET LE PETI T LAPI N
A rabbit ' s pala tia l home fe l l, one f ine morning,
As spoils to Dame Belette , who, without war ning,
Seize'd on it ; her cunning wit was weaselly-The maste r was absent , the thing was done easily .
She brought and installed her hearth- gods one day
While he had gone to Aur or a , his homag e t o pay
Amid the thyme and the r ose .
Having grazed , trotteCT , made his rounds ,
Johnny Rabbit re t ur ned to his abode , unde r gr ound .
The intrude r weasel pr essed to the window her snou t.
"O hospitable gods! What ha t h caus'd such a r ou t ?"
Cried t he animal evicted f r om his ancest r al hous e.
"O Madame Belette ,
Kindly dislodge , else further me upset!
Pr ovoke me not the local rats t o r ous e !"
"But , " said the lady of the pointed nose,
"To the first occupant needs must go the land .
Me t hinks t hi s subje ct unwo rthy of t h rea t 'ning po s e-This lowly pit where I have crawled . And , I demand ,
Were this a kingdom
Pr ay tell, what law were i t t o cede
Eternal right , " asked she , "unending deed
To John , son or nephew of Peter or William ,
Rather than to Paul- -or better still , t o me ?"
John the rabbit invoked custom and ancient code .
"It is these laws that have granted me the run
Of this my hutch, and that have, from father down to son,
From Peter, thence to Simon, then to me, John , fai r ly won .
This 'squatter's right,' 'tis mos t unjust and incommode . "
"Ah well, sir , let us no more sco r n and scold
But take our case," said she, "to Haughty- snou t. "
'Twas a cat who lived as a devout hermi t,
Pr acticed in all the arts of the hypocrite ,
A saintly sort, deck'd out , all big and fat ,
Pois'd referee , dispenser of much tit - fo r- tat .
Johnny Rabbit agrees the cat should ju9ge the case ,

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Du palais d'un jeune Lapin
Dame Belette, un be au matin ,
/
S'empara : c'est une rusee.
Le Maitre 6tant absent, ce lui fut chose ais~e.
Elle porta chez lui ses pe'nates, un j our
Qu'il ltait all/ faire~ l'Aur ore sa cour
/
Parmi le thym et la r osee.
Apr~s qu'il eut brout{, trotte', fait tous ses tours,
.
.
/.
Janot Lapin retourne aux souterrains seJours.
La Belette avait mis le nez~ l a fen~tre. A
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0 Dieux hospitaliers! que vois-je ici paraitre?
Dit l'animal chass{ du paternel logis.
Hol~! Madame la Beletee,
/
Que l'on deloge sans trompette,
Ou je vais avertir taus les Rats du pays."
La &lt;la~ au nez pointu r~pondit que la terre
Etait au premier occupant.
"c'ttait un beau sujet de guerre
Qu'un l ogis O\i lui-~me il n'entrait qu'en rampant.
Et quand ce serait un r oyaume,
Je voudrais bien savoir, dit-elle, quelle l oi
En a pour toujours fait l'octroi
A Jean, fils ou neveu de Pierre ou de Guillaume,
Plut~t qu'~ Paul, plut~t qu•}i. moi!"
Jean Lapin alltgua la coutume et l'usage:
"Ce sont, dit-il, leurs lois qui m'ont de ce logis
~
.
.
'
Ren d u maitre et seigneur, et qui, d e pere en f i·1 s,
L'ont de Pierre 'a Simon, puis a moi, Jean, transmis.
Le premier occupant, est-ce une loi plus sage?
-Or bien, sans crier davantage,
Rapportons-nous, dit-elle, 'a Raminagrobis."
C '~tait un Chat, vivant comme un dlvot ermite,
Un Chat faisant la chattemi te,
U saint homme de Chat, b i en f ourre", gros et gras,
n
Arb itre expert sur t ous le s cas.
Jean LaP.in pour juge l ' agr/e.

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�See the pair of them arrayed in face
Of fur-lined majesty, stuffed with pomp, but claws as mace.
Scratch-paw bids them come: "Advance a pace,
For I am deaf, infirmity of age the cause."
The two approach, gullible both, right to the traitor's jaws.
As soon as he has seen the plaintiffs near,
Scratch-paw, the good Judas, of canting mind,
Engulfs them both in a flurry of claws; and a wave of fear
Reconciling the plaintiffs, devours the pair combined.

Les voila taus deux arrives
.
/
Devant sa maJeste/ f ourree.
Grippeminaud leur dit: "Mes enfants, approchez,
Approchez, je suis sourd, les ans en sont la cause."
L'un et l'autre approcha, ne craignant nulle chose.
Aussit~t qu'~ port{e, il vit les contestants,
Grippenminaud, le bon ap"ci'tre,
Jetant des deux c~tls la griffe en m~me temps,
Mit les plaideurs d'accord en croquant l'un et l'autre.

All of which quite resembles the squabbling things
Which petty lords argue forth before their kings.

Ceci ressemble fort aux d~bats qu'ont parfois
Les petits souverains se rapportant aux rois.

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�Streetlight
Walter Plourde

The streetlamp shines outside the window. The light falls on me all the time
when the room is dark, even though a Japanese blind is rolled down, obscuring the
light. The glow from the street falls across my knees pulled up tight to my chest;
it spreads across her sleeping face, across the cluttered floor, only to be lost in
the corners of the room not ten feet from where I sit.
I don't know how we survived, she and I, three months in this tiny room. For
three months this has been almost my entire world, our self-contained cave, and I'm
not sure what spring bubbled up to keep us alive, feed us. Love, I tell myself. I
told her the same thing a couple of days ago. I was sitting as I am now, my knees
pulled up, arms wrapping my shins, hard wall cramping my back. She was sitting right
next to me--the wall never seemed to hurt her back. She turned her head to look at
me, her right eyebrow arched high above her pale, blue eye. A scolding glare twisted
otherwise smooth features.
She covered my face with her hand and slammed my head
against the wall.
"You sap," she said.
She laughed. I laughed, and I chuckle softly now as soft images of love float
around my head. Sweet-lipped cherubim dance in dew-kissed grass, and curly-haired
cupids gently pierce swooning lovers. But I don't see our love; it's more like a
hulking lunk, too dumb to die.
The blind rustles against the window. A draft lifts the blind and lets it drop
against the window. The air is chilled around me. Cold air enters the room. Warm
air leaves, and I am drawn with it. I am drawn to my other room, really my room,
because I pay the rent there. And I draw myself out to repeat a stroll taken on a
harsh winter morning months ago.
An early morning, and I left behind my cold, spare room with its drafty windows.
Better to walk the streets in the cold than let the cold creep upon me through the
windows. My feet made the only sound on the sidewalk, empty except for a light dusting of snow. The grey, still clouds pulled the world in upon itself, a place for
solitude that day. And then her figure from around the corner. She pulled her grey
cloak around herself and swooshed by me. She spun me on my heel.
"Hey, honey," I said, "What's your hurry?"
Empty, vapid speech tossed out on the wind, swirling down the street. I recognized her from a time before. She turned. Her cloak fell open.
"Oh, hi," she said.
Better for her if she had passed on by, never noticed me; better still if I had
stayed in my room and let my teeth chatter together.
It's too late. A cold blast from the window brings me back, but it's too late.
I am being pulled apart, my pieces spread through everything in this room. I pull
back the blind. The direct light hurts my eyes. It feels real, but even the light
is taking its piece of me. I let the shade fall back in place, and I look out across
myself into the dark room.
A goat hair rug covers the floor to the door. The rug is soft and littered with
debris. Clothes, books, and papers are scattered in no particular order. Every day
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she says that it's a mess or it's a pig sty. Every day she cleans it, but every
night it's messy again.
"It messes itself," I tell her.
She shakes her head sadly and squeezes my cheeks together with her fingers:
"No," she says, "You're a slob."
The stereo ~plifier is still on; I reach across her and turn it off. The lamp
for the whole room is on the amp.
It's a small lamp with a white shade always
covered with unused bandanas. Every time I want to read I beg her to remove them.
"I can see fine," she says.
"But I'm going blind," I tell her, "Now, what could be causing that?"
She chuckles: "Probably the same thing that makes your palm rough."
I can just make out the books in the far corner near the door. They're not on
shelves, not really in any order, but piled haphazardly two feet high. Somewhere.in
the pile is the book we fight about. She explains in detail her thesis of ironic,
yet sexist symbolism. In the telling she loses her breath, and at the end she pants
and stares triumphantly at me.
"That's nuts," I tell her.
"Chauvinist pig," she says.
"Jesus Christ," I say. I slouch down and wait for the attack.
"Pig," she says.
She need say no more. I waver, and her eyes give the fatal blow; her glare is
like a death crazed army crashing itself against my feeble defenses, until I finally
yield to the sweetest defeat, self-righteous guilt.
"Don't try to be nice to me now, you pig," she says.
I chuckle to myself in the dark; she stirs in her sleep. Again, I pull back the
blind from the window. I am drawn to the lamp on the corner like a moth, but I am
the only moth here.
The others have yet to be born.
The snow is still on the
ground--dirty, spring snow with months of traffic grime coming to the surface. But
the streetlight makes the snow look clean, fresh, alive as if it had fallen this
night. The light, reflecting off the snow, is like Aegean-blue water. I sit back
and let the blind fall shut. I have to squint to see very far into the room--it is
growing wider than the Aegean, and a salty spray is filling my eyes.
Everything now, all my pieces fly back at me. Everything that is me cuts into
me, scratches me, scrapes me, pain upon pain, until my senses die; no hearin~, no
sight, no smell nor taste, no touch, but I can feel.
I can feel that warm figure
sleeping next to me.
I can feel each breath, each memory, each hurt.
I can even
feel her dreams, both happy and sad. I can feel her dreams becoming mine; they are
my dreams. Most of all I can feel beauty--outside and inside, so much deep inside
her that there's no more room, and it flows out, covering me, raining down on everything. This is hell, I tell myself: eternal damnation is a slow walk through this
tiny room.
A hand softly touches my arm; she's not sleeping either.
"Go to sleep," she says. Her voice is far away, but clear, and it brings me
back.
"Yes," I say, "That's a good idea."
I lie down. My senses return. I can smell her warmth. I can touch her hand.
I can see her profile in the dim light .
"I l ove you," I say.
"Yes," she says ev en further away, but warm and alive.
I go t o sleep. She is all ar ound me.
Wh en the alarm rings, it is t oo early, and I am t oo tired. I get up anyway. I
have t o go t o work. The house this little r oom is in is quiet. No one else fs up,

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�and that pleases me.
I don't want embarrassed shame this morning, no knowing
glances . As I'm putting on my clothes, she stirs. She, too, must get up early this
morning. She watches me, her eyes half shut, but we don't speak.
My clothes cover me, but I feel as if they are covering nothing, as if they
move, but I'm not in them.
I'm not there; the only thing left is one last memory
dropping slowly like a forgotten, slimy tear staining a dead cheek.
"I'm going away," she had said, "We can't be together any more . "
"Yes, I know. You're right," I had said.
I am ready to go. I must leave; I must stay. The distinction is lost on me. I
lean down and kiss her. Her arms circle my neck too lovingly and too long. Her face
is wet, or maybe it's mine. I walk to the door.
"Don't forget to take care of my stuff," she says.
"I won't," I say, "Have fun."
"I'll try."
My throat hurts, and my eyes burn, as a I close the door .
I walk out --it is a
bleak spring day. The sun cowers somewhere behind a cloud.
When I burst into the room later that day, I pray for the impossible.
I pray
that all is as it was:
nothing's changed.
I pray she's sitting down, watching tv.
I pray she's smiling, waiting for me to get home.
She gives me a kiss, and we are
happy. I pray many foolish things.
The boxes are piled up near the window.
The stereo and posters are in boxes.
The blind is off the window.
The records, books, everything is in brown cardboard
boxes. The room suddenly smells stale and musty, as if nothing had ever lived there.
She is gone, but I am here . I try to let numbness, emptiness, take over. This
is practical, I tell myself, as I carry the first box down to my car. And for every
box, I tell myself, I will send them away tomorrow. Yes, that is the practical thing
to do. Every box I want to be just as it is:
If light, full of nothing, if heavy,
full of a lot of nothing.
I want, but I can't have.
One box I want to throw through the window, another
to set down, open, and gently replace the contents where they were.
I want everything to be as it was, or I want it never to have been. I want, but I can't have.
I come to the last box. As I pick it up, I see that something is written on it.
Something is written in bold letters with magic marker. Lt says:
I LOVE YOU.
I put the box down.
I must laugh, though I'd rather not.
I would rather scream,
cry. Even better weep, weep blood, but I can't have that either.
I lift the box again. It is the heaviest box of them all; I laugh. I laugh out
loud. Even the distinction between my emotions is lost.
"Damn her," I say. I take a step: "Damn her."
And each step, damn her.
It is my antiphon, every step, damn her. My strophe
and antistrophe:
Damn her, damn her.
The door closes behind me, damn her.
Damn
her, the box is in the car, damn her.
But there, on the back seat of my car, is a simple message: I love you. An old
saying pops into my head: If it'd been a snake, it would've bit you. What a song I
sing to myself: Damn her, a snake bit you, I love you, damn her, yeah, yeah, yeah.
I slam the door, walk around the car, and get in behind the wheel.
I lean forward and look up at the streetlamp. It is humming with energy, pulsating with life.
Its light is strong and clear.
That light is the only thing keeping me and everything from flying apart and into space. The light hurts my eyes.
It is cold and I
shiver. I drive away.
I can't see the streetlight anymore. I imagine that someone, somewhere, is paid
to turn the streetlights off in the morning, but I hope he forgets this one.
I hope
it stays on a long time.
THE END

44

An Appreciation of Apollonius I.34
Henry Higuera

As upperclassmen will remember, in Book I of his Conics Apollonius demonstrates
that there is a surprising and pleasing relationship between the "harmonic mean" and
the tangent to an ellipse, hyperbola, or circle:

B

E

A

D

B

Specifically, in I 34 he proves that if AB is the transverse, CD is an ordinate, and

E is located so that AB is a harmonic mean between BD and BE , then EC is tangent to
the section. One of my very fav o rite memories from sophomore math is the morent when
I was up at the board blithering some nonsense about I 34 and two students managed
to explain to me the significance of the harmonic mean.
On the other hand, some of my other most vivid memories from sophomore math are
of
whole
classes
spent
slogging
through
that
monstrous
proof,
with
its
un-reconstructable construction, its two doublefold footnotes from Eutocius (I always
called him "Atrocious" to myself), and Lord knows what else.
Remember? The proof
has always bothered me, especially in comparison to the beauty of the fact it establishes, and I've spent some time trying to understand why Apollonius did it the way
he did.
My efforts have paid off to some degree, for I now feel I appreciate the
situation which Apollonius faced and the accompJ,.ishment which his particular proof
represents.
This article is an attempt to spread that sense of appreciation and is
dedicated to anyone who will ever go to the board to do I 34.
I.
First, it seems certain that this proposition struck Apollonius and his
original readers differently than it does us, because they m.ust already have known
that I 34 was true of circles. Euclid never proves it; but it follows so easily from
his method of drawing a tangent from a point outside a circle (III 17) that it must
have been common knowledge.
Here is Euclid's method (the actual proof is omitted):
From a given point to draw a straight line touching a given circle.

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I
I

I

�Let A be the given point, and BCD the given circle;
thus it is required to draw from the point A a straight line
touching the circle BCD .
For let the centre E of the circle be taken;
let AE be joined, and with centre E and distance EA let the
circle AFG be described;
from D let DF be drawn at right angles to EA,
and let EF, AB be joined;
I say that AB has been drawn from the point A touching the circle BCD.

A

II. On to the proof itself. If you look at it (it's on pp. 641-3) you'll remember that it's really in two parts . First comes the terrible part, which is based
entirely on Euclid, not on earlier propositions in Apollonius. Then, just after the
line
rect.BD,DA: rect.BG,GA ) sq.DE: sq.GE

Here is the easy proof which demonstrates that I 34 holds for circles: Let
there be a circle ACB with center H and diameter AB, CD perpendicular (i.e.,
ordinatewise) to AB, E on AB produced so that
BD:DA : : BE:EA
(i.e., so that AB is a harmonic mean between BD and BE), and EC joined.
EC is tangent to the circle ACB.
For, draw concentric circle EF.
At A erect a perpendicular to AB meeting
circle EF at G. Join RC and HG (i.e.,
do not assume that C is on HG: this
has~ be proved).
Now clearly,
BE=AF,
while BD:DA
so

BD:DA

But

BD:CD

and

AF:GA

so

BD:CD

..
..
..
..

E

[given]

AF:EA

[Euc.

CD:DA
GA:EA,

D

A

G

B

using only Euclid Bk . II and clever manipulations of ratios.
(I have not succeeded
in doing this, although I have proven it without any constructions by using
maxima/minima calculus techniques) . Furthermore, this property is not limited to
lines; for example, a version of it holds for Euclidean numbers.
If this property had already been proven in some treatise on the harmonic mean,
the figures to I 34 should have looked like this:

f

[Euc. VI 8, Por.]

7, 11]

H

A GAF is similar to

B

B

AF:GA, being subduplicates of the same

and L DBC= L AFG;
so

(p. 643 1. 5)

he brings in a property of conic sections for the first time (I 21), and the proof is
f]nished in four more lines.
The fact that I 21 gets brought in so late may have alerted you to the important
fact that r.BD,DA:r.BG,GA ) sq.DE:sq.GE is a property of the harmonic mean E.z itself;
it holds true entirely independently of conic sections.
In fact, one could pre sumably prove it without constructing any extra line.s at all,
E

[Euc. VI 8, Por.]

v

And the right angles GAF and CDB are of course equal
so

I say that

[ C. N. 3]

BE:EA;

for the moment their unique characteristics and considering them merely as a "special
case" of a conic section .

r~tio

[Euc. VI 22, note].

[Euc. Post. 4]

A CDB

[Euc. VI 6]

and the whole proof could have taken five lines:

L DHC= L AHG as well, being their doubles.

[Euc. III 20]

Therefore C is on GH and the construction satisfies Euclid III 17.
tangent to circle ACB.
Q.E.D.

Therefore EC is

and
but
so
and

For, r.BD,DA:r.BG,GA::sq.CD:sq.GH
sq.DE:sq.EG::sq.CD:sq.FG;
r.BD,DA:r.BG,GA &gt; sq.DE:sq.EG,
sq . CD:sq . HG ) sq.CD:sq . FG
HG ( FG
Q.E.D.

[I 21]
[Euc. VI 4, 22]
[Treatise on Harmonic Mean LXVII 873]
[Euc. V 10]

In other words, I 34 was not originally the proclamation of a startling new fact
about circles. On the contrary, it belongs to that interesting series of proposit~ons which shows that some well-known properties possessed by ci3cles considered as
circles also belongs to them considered purely as conic sections.
This proposition
contributes to one of the most important subplots of the Conics : that suggestion
that we can deepen our understanding of the complex simplicity of circles by ignoring

Furthermore, this would have helped to highlight what the horrible clutter of
Apollonius' proof tends to conceal--namely, that the connection between the harmonic
mean and the property proven in I 34 is quite remarkably direct and intimate.

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�I

III.

Now, the enunciation of the property would have to go something like this:

PROP. LXVII 873: If there be four unequal lines, of which the second is a harmonic mean between the first and the third and the fourth is another, random
line, then the rectangle contained by the first and the difference between the
first and the second has a greater ratio to the rectangle contained by the
fourth and the difference between the fourth and the second than the ratio which
the square on the difference between the first and the third has to the square
on the difference between the fourth and the third.
This is an enunciation only Apollonius
cases:

could

love.

Furthermore,

there are

four

At A draw a line AX, at any angle, of any length. Bisect it at N. Connect BX and
DN, and produce as necessary until they meet at C. From C draw a line parallel to AN
until it meets AB at E.
I say that ED:DA::BE:EA. (Easy, huh? Here's the proof.)
Then
so
but
and
so

For, from B draw a line parallel to
AN = NX,
BK:AN: :BK:NX;
(Euc.
BE:AE::BC:CX::BK:NX
(Euc.
BD:DA: :BK:AN,
(Euc.
BD:DA: :BE:EA
(Euc.

AN until it meets DN produced at K.

V 7)
VI 4)
VI 4)
V 11)

Q.E.D.
Case 1

• •
D G

Case 2
B

Case 3

X

E

Case 4

'n b, A.

E:

~

On top of that, as far as I know, this fact has no application to anything in the
total universe except to I 34.
So, perhaps it is not surprising that nobody ever
bothered to prove it.
On the other hand, if one already knows that I 34 is true of circles and one
bears in mind Euc. VI 4, 22, and 8, Por., it becomes extremely obvious that this
proposition is true at least in Cases 1 and 2:

'"'
B

E

"Behold!

Rect. BD,DA: rect.BG,GA ) sq.DE: sq.GE!"

Notice that this by itself is already enough to prove that I 34 is true for ellipses.
Maybe this is what gave Apollonius the hint for how to attack the general problem.

Look familiar? These are the first five steps of Apollonius' proof to I 34 run
exactly backwards; the constructions look exactly the same (except of course for the
angles) as the correspondingly-lettered constructions in Apollonius' figures.
No
wonder he was able to figure out that AN equalled NX!
I'm less impressed by that
than I used to be.
On the other hand, the proof now looks impressive in an entirely new way. To a
reader familiar with this construction, the first part of the proof emerges as an
extremely clever and resourceful use of a familiar old device, instead of appearing
mind-bogglingly oracular and weird, as it does to us.
Also note that in his reverse version (i.e., to prove that AN=NX) Apollonius
didn't have to use the particular lengths and angles he did. Any AX bisected at N
would have served to prove LXVII 873. By making C in our Figure 5 be the point of
tangency in his proof , all he did , basically, was save himself an extra point and a
couple of extra lines on his figures (because that way CD is set up an ordinate and
CE turns out to be the tangent). The proof would have been just as valid if he'd set
up perpendiculars at A, B, and E, with C up somewhere in mid-air, and not brought up
the ordinate and tangent until he needed them in the last five lines of the proof:

K
M

IV. But Apollonius obviously wanted to prove LXVII 873 without assuming that I
34 holds true for circles--otherwise the proposition couldn't take its place in the
series we mentioned. In figuring out how to do this, he seems to have been helped by
another private joke between him and his readers which we hoi polloi tend to miss 21
centuries later. I would bet anything short of money that the following was a commonly-known method of constructing a "third harmonic proportional":
Given AB, BD; it is required to place E so that BD:DA :: BE:EA.

c

Beautiful.

E

48

A

This is a figure not even Apollonius could love.

To my mind, aft er all this muddling and fiddling with I 34, the great difficulty
and most admirable achievement of Apollonius' way of proving it is that, using this
commonly- known construction, he found a method of proof so powerful that he could
show that all four cases of LXVII 873 were true with the same steps. It looks like
he really wanted to be able, in I 34, to proceed just as he did in, say, I 21: he
really wanted to show that Cases 1 and 2 of LXVII 873 (which only apply to the
ellipse and circle) and cases 3 and 4 (which only apply to the hyperbola) have the

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I

�same kind of inner kinship which the circle, ellipse and hyperbola have among
themselves. That he managed to do this is a mark of the sure instinct, subtlety, and
ambition of his great genius.

NOTES
1Andy Freda and Jeremy Lauer (Class of 1986).
2Things are made worse, too, by the fact that Eutocius' N. 2 is very clumsy and
roundabout.. If you study it you can write a proof of your own that's three lines
shorter.
3other propositions in the series: I 21 (compare Euc. VI 8, Por. and remember that
the upright always equals the transverse in a circle, a fact which actually follows
from Apoll. I 5); I 32 (compare Euc. III 16); I 47 (compare Euc. III 3); II 6 (compare the other half of Euc. III 3), and II 26 (compare Euc. III 4). It's worth wondering why Apollonius doesn't mention circles in I 15 and I 30. He's clearly drawing
some kind of line here (no pun intended).

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ENERGEIA: The activity in which anything is fully itself.
~ ... vou EVEp"fEta ~ro~ . . . (Aristotle's Metaphysics, 1072b)

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�Contents

Spring 1992

Truth and Teaching

Eva T. H. Brann, Dean

1

Ode to an Hour at Summer's End

Thomas Madden, '91

4

Knowledge and the Two Faces of God
(Prize-Winning Sophomore Essay)

David Walter, '91

5

The Divergence of Acute Angles:
A Proof in Absolute Geometry

Bryan Dorland, '92

10

Front and back cover photographs
by Rakesh Brennig

Untitled (photograph)

Greg Francke, '92

12

Desktop Publishing and Printing
by the St. John's College Print Shop

Rex to Wretch:
Transfonnation and Riddle in Oedipus Tyrranos
(Prize-Winning Freshman Essay)

Zena Hitz, '94

13

Nick (photograph)

Greg Francke, '92

17

The Day of Picking

Melissa Bond, '94

18

From Ambiguity to Epiphany: A Qairvoyant
Reading of ''The Rime of the Ancient Mariner"
(Prize-Winning Senior Essay)

Ange E. Mlinko, '91

20

Untitled (photograph)

Rakesh Brennig, '93

29

Animals in Motion:
the Flattery of Becoming in Plato's Timaeus
(Lecture)

Peter Kalkavage, tutor

30

Time the Dominant (photograph)

John Dunn, '92

39

Origami

David Ruy, '91

40

''The" Exponential Curve

Henry Higuera, tutor

41

Balance (photograph)

Jeff Seidman, '93

47

Two Humors
(Prize-Winning Preceptorial Essay)

Ellen M. Myers, GI '90

48

The Wrath of Aeneas
(Prize-Winning Preceptorial Essay)

Donna Schueler, GI '89

53

Ricardo

J. H. Beall, tutor

60

The Other Face of Darkness

J. H. Beall, tutor

61

Angel and Quill (photograph)

Nathan J. Humphrey, '93

62

�Truth and Teaching
Eva T. H. Brann
What is truth? said jesting Pilate;
and would not stay for an answer.
Certainly there be, that delight in giddiness [cogitationum vertigine],
and count it a bondage to fix a belief ....

The quotation is from the essay "Of Truth" that heads
Bacon's Essays, Civil and Moral (1625). Bacon's borrowing is
true to its source, the Gospel of John (18 : 38). Jesus has just
spoken to Pontius Pilate of the truth; the Roman says: "What is
truth?" and goes out to tell the Jews that he can find no blame in
Jesus. He does not impugn the truth of Jesus but truth in general;
he does not stay for an answer since he had asked no question.
And though we may doubt that the Roman governor took delight
in cognitive vertigo, we may well believe that he counted it a
bondage to fix his belief.
But whatever was Pilate's case, Bacon has given two motives, obverses of each other, for setting truth aside: the positive
pleasure in a levitating skepticism and the willful resistance to a
settling of the mind. He immediately associates these with lying:
But it is not only the difficulty and labor which men take in
finding out of truth; nor again that when it is found it imposeth
upon men's thoughts, that does bring lies in favor; but a natural
though corrupt love of the lie itself.

Here we hear in Bacon a voice from a golden time when the
proper antithesis of "truth" was "lie" - golden, since every
genuine lie confirms the actuality of truth. Our condition is more
difficult: the foil of truth now is not falsehood, intended or
unintended, but honesty.

I. Honesty
Honesty, I must argue, though it is a civil and moral virtue,
can be an intellectual and pedagogical scourge - both honesty
and its even more subjectivized mode, sincerity.
I say "even more subjectivized" because it seems to me that
there is a cognitive spectrum here: truthfulness is the desire to
find the truth and to tell what can be told of it; honesty is a
scrupulous determination to say all that one knows and no more;
and sincerity is attention to the pure-heartedness of one's meaning. Truthfulness is concerned with what is, honesty with unexceptionable speech, and sincerity with purity of intention. Thus
truthfulness pertains to the speaker's accord with the object of
knowledge, while honesty involves the candor of the person and
sincerity the intimate integrity of the self.
Now I am saying that the sophisticated attack on truth
mounted so successfully in the last hundred-some years is not in
the name of truth - its assailants are too acute for such a logical

solecism - but under the banner of painful explicitness and
agonized resolve. Think of the personal modes of the two founders of our condition, one in the last and one in this century,
Nietzsche and Wittgenstein.
Why would one cavil at so noble a cognitive stance? Well,
just because it is so centered on the self, so unswervingly bent
on public self-examination, so unforgivingly fixed on inner
unexceptionableness. Because it puts the self before the world,
turns all knowledge into epistemology, is always masterful and
rarely receptive. Because it eschews the play that permits wild
surmises, the analogies that draws truth from images, even the
hypotheses that make contemplation possible.
But above all, because this noble and even exquisite way,
since it requires a peculiar! y fine and high-strung personal nature
of a sort not common in academia, is prone to a particularly racy
corruption: while the older philosophies of truth would suffer
degradation into rigidity, the contemporary debasements have a
galvanic vigor.
However, these are descriptions and not analyses, so let me
start again.

II. Truth
What is truth? We too cannot stay for a thorough answer, but
there is a least time for a distinction. If the word has any meaning
it has at least two: there is truth of being and truth in speaking.
The tradition used to be preoccupied with the relation of these
two: what things must be like so that they can be told and what
speech must be like so that the telling might be true.
Let me offer here merely the grossest pedagogical conditions
for maintaining the tradition of truth-directed inquiry. Iflearners
are to conceive an interest in this activity, they must come across
at least some objects that are natural and some opinions that are
traditional. If truth-seeking is to have an even chance with them,
they must have experience of some things that are grown rather
than constructed - trees rather than pylons - and of some
beliefs that originate in the community rather than with the
intellectuals - faiths rather than theories. Again, if teachers are
to guide such a search they need the help of some books that take
nature and tradition seriously while they make the discovery and
telling of truth their aim.
I mention these inchoate points only to show how well I know
that the pursuit of truth is not without conditions and presupp0sitions - of the strongest sort.

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�III. Doubt
It is these that the party of honesty throws into doubt. What
I want to do now is to sketch out four points of attack on these
presuppositions (A), to delineate their noble original versions
(B), to characterize their debased outcomes (C), and to offer a
saving mean, saving that is, for truth (D).
A.
1. Quandaries of knowing
2. Consequences of formalism
3. Disposition of mind
4. Reading of texts

c.

B.
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1. Perspectival viewings
2. Undecidable propositions
3. Vertiginous positions
4. Hermeneutic problems

dogmatic relativism
willful suspension
settled indifferentism
arbitrary construal

D.
1. Aspectual inquiries
2. Perennial questions
3. Tensed dialectic
4. Direct reading

Let me try to clarify these somewhat opaque rubrics.
1. Cognitive quandaries concerning the possibility of reaching the objects of knowledge go back to antiquity. Protagoras
gave them their starkest expression, as reported by Plato:
He says that the human being is the measure of all things, of
those that are, how they are, and of those that are not, how they
are not .... [He says that] as each thing seems to me, such it is
for me and as it seems to you, such it is for you. [Theaetetus 151]

Strong as this relativism is, it is not total, for there is reference
to the things - albeit unknowable - that are, and what is relative is only their perceived quality. It is a modern radicalization
that phenomenal aspects might be all there are, that no true thing
underlies the perspective views from which individuals construe
their mundane and moral solids. This perspectivism is deeper
and more complex than the notion that the world is appearance;
it involves the claim that the appearances themselves, which to
ancient relativists have at least the practical inertness of thingbased variability, might from time to time shift radically and out
of all recognition as the human viewpoint shifts, making older
knowledge obsolete and inaccessible: Since some temporary
trust in science is necessary to modem life, the stabilizing of
opinion devolves on society, and the doctrine that wins the
apptoval of the social group concerned with it is not, indeed,
verified but rather justified.
The vulgarized version of cognitive perspectivism and social
justification is well known to teachers: it is a dogmatic relativism
in which the all-too-comfortable doctrine of the impossibility of
principled choice becomes the occasion for succumbing to inarticulate social pressures.

2

The saving mean between surrendering to the sophisticated
or succumbing to the debased version of cognitive perspectivism
seems to me to be an inquiry beginning very literally, namely
with an investigation - even calling to aid some projective
geometry - of the "perspective" metaphor, to go on to ask what
the world must be like so that it may present views, what society
is such that it might serve as the guarantor of opinion and how
opinion comes about such that a human being should defer to it.
In short, teachers might invite students to a serious program of
what I would call "aspectual inquiries." It would amount to a
critique of the critique of knowledge, and it would at least recall
the presuppositions of truth-seeking to the scene of learning.
2. One of the several sophisticated intellectual discoveries of
this century that have been victimized by careless extension is
the formal undecidability of certain propositions in arithmetic.
(The special theory of relativity is another such.) The highly
technical context of the astounding fact of such undecidability
is set eagerly aside and hasty application is made to the wide
realm of human thought: certain questions are in principle unanswerable and hence there is no point in asking them. The questions so classified are of course those taken up over and over in
the history of reflection and supposedly always unanswered.
Thus the historical experience appears to coincide with the
logical theory, and the permanent suspension of truth-judgement, willing and willful, becomes universal doctrine.
I would propose the mediating approach of inquiring into the
nature of the putatively perennial questions. What are they?
What must one know to pronounce such questions unanswerable? Do questions represented as unanswerable incite effort or
induce lassitude? Have the questions themselves endured, or
have they changed? Does the questioning activity itself evolve
or only its object and context? Does the fact that questions have
contesting answers mean that they are unanswered?
It seems to me once again that such a regimen of questioning
questions would at least make room for the hypothesis of truthseeking.
3. It is an uncontestable part of the contemporary frame of
mind to enjoy what Bacon calls the "giddiness" of the liberation
from the obligations of truth. For serious thinkers there once was
the choice intoxication of rope-dancing over the abyss, of assuming difficult vertiginous positions. The original efforts at retaining balance on the rope and integrity on the knife's edge were
fierce and compelled admiration. But more relaxed followers
found that falling off was no calamity, that the abyss was a soft
bed to all positions, that the hard landing was as yet out of sig?t,
and that settled attitudes of light-headed indifference were quite
comfortable.
It seems to me that there is a third position between the
strenuous refusal of all truth and the easy unconcern with any
deep issue. It is the tensed condition of actual dialectic, liv~g
conversation. It means that teachers help students to find the vital
element in many contesting opinions including, of course, the
denial of the possibility of truth. It means helping learners to
bring the positions to life so that they do not confront each other

as petrified neutralizing opposites but respond to each other as
moments of thought. And again it may be found that such
revivified responsiveness has implications not unfriendly to the
hypothesis of truth-finding.
4. Almost all thinking past a certain naive stage, certainly all
thinking in institutions of learning, takes place with the aid of
books. In the last century certain tricky problems with the
interpretation of texts began to be formulated. For instance, it
became a concern that every text is written into a context and
that the reader needs some prior knowledge to construe the text
adequately. Moreover, the reader's own presuppositions were
shown to shape readings powerfully. Such hermeneutic insights
were eventually pushed to extremes. Books were interpreted not
in their context but by their context, authors' personal or social
histories were used to nullify their intended communication of
truth. The difficulties of getting at"the true text were so recklessly
and sophisticatedly exaggerated that the flashy art of creative
interpretation began to replace the modest effort to read receptively.
A hopeful mean between the subtle difficulties of serious
hermeneutics and the inesponsible resolutions of deconstruction, is, I think, an ever-present possibility for students in particular: the direct reading.
Teachers of present-day students need expect so little common learning and so few deep-rooted opinions that, if only they
succeed in focusing interest on the text, they can almost count
on a certain immediacy of reading. In fact, making students face
books directly, in amazed alienation, as if they were monoliths
just now shot up from the earth, is about the only practical
beginning I can think of. It also happens to offer the fairest
chance for the truth-telling claims that most serious books make.

I do not of course mean that the teaching of truth, its knowledge and belief, will become fashionable in academia. That
would be worse than the near-universal suspicion of the possibility of truth-telling we live with now. What we may rather be
ready for is a revival of the inclination to seek being and of the
presuppositions that make "the inquiry of truth, which is the
love-making and wooing of it," again a respectable enterprise.
But why wait for that?

******

[Y]et truth, which only doth judge itself, teacheth that the inquiry
of truth, which is the love-making or wooing of it, the know ledge
of truth, which is the presence of it, and the belief of truth, which
is the enjoying of it, is the sovereign good of human nature. ["Of
Truth"]

That the finding, having, and enjoying of truth is the highest
good - that is the teaching of truth itself for Bacon, though for
recent generations the proposition has become systematically
dubious. Yet we may not be in the worst position for a revival of
the hypothesis of truth-seeking. There is a zest in destructive
doubt for the several generations that are still supported by the
learning, the faith and the tradition they are opposing. But when
the branch on which the destructionists sit is finally sawn
through, then there may well come a moment of grasping for the
trunk itself, a wish to find something to hold on to. We may
possibly be at such a juncture.

3

�Ode to an Hour at Summer's End

Knowledge and the Two Faces of God

Thomas Madden

St. Thomas, the Church, and Aristotle
David Walter
Ah, in Shakespeare's garden
there was surprise:
diamonds scattered among the leaves,
and stars perched, pregnant, atop grass-blades.
She and I
we both could see the rain
as a benediction.
It was to be our last night,
and the rain had come
- a mother's hand upon
a fevered brow, the breath
of a promise.
Giddy with the air's approval,
we chased after a wrong turn
and walked into sudden,
cultivated vibrancies of shadow.
The shape of a garden stands
and grows, and restores wine of memory
to a shattered heart.
A steeple's cap kept watch in the curtained sky.
And we came to a fountain,
and accepted
the consciousness represented
in the winding of a wet branch.
I danced over flagstones
trying to find expression
as this moment, this season, this year
all melted - resolved into the seal of forever.
Awake to the measure of the dream,
her fingertip's gesture across my lips
never said goodbye.
We never gave a name to our desire.

4

Preface
The Church, in the time of St Thomas, was very conservative.
Seeking to preserve their authority, church members were very
wary of writings, both ancient and modern, which threatened the
vitality of its written Creed. Certain writings were altogether
condemned as heretical works, while the writings of others were
considered dubious and held under close scrutiny. Such were the
writings of Aristotle. Aristotle's writings were accessible to
intellectuals at that time, because he was considered to be primarily a natural philosopher. Aristotle was concerned with the
causes of natural events. He traced events logically to God as a
First Cause. Thomas Aquinas found Aristotle's logic very compelling, and very pertinent to his Christianity. Although there
were certain subjects on which Aristotle and the Church disagreed (such as whether or not the universe had been created),
Thomas thought that he could incorporate the Aristotelian philosophy to suit the demands of the Church dogma. It remains to
be seen whether Aristotle himself would have approved of the
mysteries of the Church, which are not according to reason, but
according to tradition based on revelation. Nevertheless, given
what Aristotle left in writing, Thomas enthusiastically set out to
found a theology, based on Aristotle's philosophical thought.
The question of his success will be considered in part in this
paper.

*****

For St. Thomas Aquinas.knowledge is concerned with things
as they appear to us. The method of science, by which we gain
knowledge, begins with the appearance, or the thing as sensed
(The Summa Theologica I, 12, A12). The sensible world constitutes our primary "reality." What is "real" to us is the particular
object of sense - the entity existing apart from all other entities.
The intellect seeks to know the "causes" of a particular thing, by
abstracting universals from that thing. Hence, our knowledge of
universals, while not given, is inferred from our perception.
Consequently, we are born with no prior knowledge or understanding of universals; we gain such knowledge or understanding through a process of inference from repeated individual
experiences.
Of course, Thomas' view that we come to know about things
through first having sensed them is not the only possible one. We
know of others, most prominently Plato, who posit a reality apart
from sense perception. Thomas, presumably aware of other
possible view points, such as that of Plato, chose this characteristically "Aristotelian" epistemology. It seems to be a curious
choice, in some respects, because it results in limitations in
talking about God. We get knowledge about things from our
interaction with them, and the problem lies herein: we have no
direct interaction with a transcendental God.We only know Him
through His "effects"(!, 1, A8, rep.1). We are separate from Him

because of our "mode" of being - separate in action, and separate in speech: "Nothing temporal can be in God, for He is above
time"(I,13,A7). On the other hand, the Scriptures, especially the
Old Testament, depict a God who has an intimate relationship
with creatures. He speaks directly to them. In short, Thomas'
choice limits the knowledge we can have of God; and these
limitations seem to bar the type of intimate interaction between
God and creatures presented to us in the Scriptures.
At first glance, Thomas' choice seems to present us with an
irreconcilable conflict between the impersonal God of Aristotelian logic, and the very personal God of the Scriptures. The
Aristotelian God spends all His eternity thinking about Himself.
He does not involve Himself in our ethical struggles. The Scriptural GodisaLaw-giver, andaLaw enforcer. He has an undying
devotion to His people. The two concepts appear antithetical.
But there is a subtle strategy underlying Thomas' choice. On the
one hand, Thomas wants to show how the Christian faith can
increase and perfect our scientific knowledge. But also Thomas
wants to show us the limits of scientific know ledge, inasmuch
as recognizing such limits reinforces our faith. Faith perfects
knowledge; knowledge reinforces faith. The Aristotelian epistemology yields concrete limitations, which Thomas can exploit.
Working from the Aristotelian assumptions themselves, we can
subsume the Aristotelian epistemology into the Christian doctrine. We can make it conform.
In natural science, we reason from abstractions of particular
events, to conclusions about those particular events, by means
of demonstration from first principles inferred from experience.
Sciences are differentiated because different classes of knowledge deal with different classes of events. The physicist deals
with physical objects; the mathematician deals with mathematical objects; the metaphysician deals with metaphysical objects.
These are formal objects, two of which may inhere in the same
body, in different respects. Each of the respective classes of
objects is abstracted from the real objects of sense. Reason
classifies these objects, and investigates them according to the
first principles of demonstration. But, what if the object of our
knowledge is God? Is God abstracted from objects of sense? It
is not possible to classify God as we classify mathematical
objects. When we classify a thing, we give it a definition according to its essence, or nature. But we cannot do this with God. We
do not know His essence. We have no direct experience of God
through our senses. However, we are aware of Him indirectly,
through His effects. Hence, because of our mode of knowing,
which is grounded in the senses, we (natural scientists) can only
see Him as if through a mirror; as in the saying from I Car.xiii:
"We see now through a glass in a dark manner," a favorite quote
of Thomas'.
Nevertheless, as natural scientists, drawing our principles
from natural reason, we are able to know some things about God.

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�For instance, that He exists can be demonstrated in His absence,
from His natural effects. Now one of His effects is motion. So,
if we are able to ascertain the essence, or nature (formal quality)
of the event of motion, and then to apply to it our first principles
of reason (cause and effect, non-contradiction, impossibility of
infinite regress), and arrive at a conclusion, then this constitutes
a demonstration. The demonstration will allow us to arrive at a
primary source of motion, i.e., the First Mover. And we may
·"understand"(!, 2, A3) this First Mover to be God, in the sense
that we identify God as the First Cause of motion. But knowledge
of the fact that God exists (as a First Mover, as a Primary
Efficient Cause, as necessarily always existent, as Greatest in
Being, as Supreme Intelligence) is not enough for the theologian.
He is interested in God "not only so far as He can be known
through creatures just as philosophers know Him ... but also so
far .as He can be known to Himself alone and revealed to others"
(I, 1, A6). The theologian is interested in uncovering particular
truths concerning the nature of God. But in order to obtain a fair
amount of such truths, he needs more than what he can gather
from his senses. Since he does not have the capacity to discover
knowledge of the supersensible on his own, it must needs be
given to him immediately, by God, through revelation.
The Scriptures and the Articles of Faith contain principles
revealed directly by God.
Man is directed to God as to an end that surpasses the grasp of
his reason ... But the end must first be known by men who are to
direct their intentions and actions to the end. Hence it was
necessary for the salvation of man that certain truths should be
made known to him by divine revelation.(I, 1, Al)

And this gift of revelation christens a new science - the divine
science. The Articles of Faith are "given" to the theologian
(divine scientist) just as, say, the mathematical objects (points
and lines) are given to the geometer; or as the physical objects
(stars and planets) are given to the astronomer. And they are as
certain to the Christian as any of the things we perceive by means
of sense. As a formal body of objects the Articles of Faith have
relationship to one another that is rational, as do all the other
objects of science. We can infer principles from them, just as the
natural scientist infers . principles from his particular class of
objects, by virtue of their being formally classified.
Just as music accepts on authority the principles taught by the
arithmetician, so sacred doctrine accepts the principles revealed
by God. (I, 1, A2)

So the divine science obtains its principles primarily from a
divine source (revelation), and only secondarily from a natural
source (reason). This is what separates Thomas' science from
the strictly natural theology of others (Aristotle, for example).
Our knowledge of God may be confined to what we can know
of Him through His effects, but Thomas finds compensation for
this: God gives us a special set of effects manifest in the
Scriptures, and in the Articles of Faith. They are certain, in that
they have been revealed to the Christian by God. This gives the
theologian a great advantage over the strictly natural scientists.

It allows him to infer certain principles which cannot otherwise
be obtained by the scientist (such as that God is both three and
one). These principles taken from the body of the divinely
revealed texts are the highest principles available to man. They
deal with the acts of the Christian in respect to the First Truth,
God (II, 1, Al). Theology, which considers such acts which
terminate in God, presides over all other sciences, which consider only natural acts.
He who considers absolutely the highest cause of the whole
universe, namely God, is most of all called wise. (I, l,A6)

But what happens when we treat the Articles of Faith as
objects of science? As canons of faith, they are primarily to be
believed. In what sense do they invite our knowledge of them?
To answer this, Aquinas makes the distinction between what we
believe, and how we believe it. What we believe is a reality. We
imagine the object of our belief to exist. Like every real object
we perceive, it exists singularly. Existence is in the individual
thing. But we are compelled to represent that belief as a proposition; just as when I say "this giraffe is an animal," as if there
were two entities, when, in fact, there exists to my eyes only one.
Consider the object of faith from its two perspectives. First,from
the perspective of the reality believed in, and then the object of
faith is something non-composite, i.e. the very reality about
which one has faith. Second, from the perspective of the one
believing, and then the object of faith is something composite in
the form of a proposition. (II, 1, A2; emphasis added)

The thing believed is simple (non-composite). The believer
expresses his belief in a composite manner. He divides the thing
believed into components of a proposition, as he is accustomed
to do with objects. A proposition about a thing distinguishes
between the thing and its essence: the predicate signifies a part
of the essence of the subject. A proposition is composite.
To make things clear to ourselves, we may distinguish between (1) the reality provided by the act of faith: "I believe in
God eternal;" and (2) the proposition which signifies the reality:
"God is eternal" (c.f. II, 1, A2, ob.2). The only way we get
knowledge of a real thing put before us (1) is to predicate
essential qualities of that thing (2). This necessary operation is
the restriction occasioned by our own mode (modus proprius
humani) of knowing (II, 1, A2). Thus, if the object of faith is to
be considered by theology just as the real thing we sense is to be
considered by science, then we need to understand the object of
faith as we understand the things we sense - in the form of a
predication.
As an object of belief, the Article is self-evident. As an object
of knowledge, the Article is not self-evident. With respect to the
mode of the knower/believer, a principle is only self-evident if
it is "seen," i.e. if it is inferred from perception (II, 1, AS). Now,
the reality signified by the Articles of Faith is not seen by us only imagined. The principles derived from the Articles (such
as, that God exists) are self-evident from the standpoint of that
reality. But that is not a reality which we see.

Clearly, then, no belief or opinion can have as object things seen,
whether by sense or by intellect. (II, 1, A4)

We only believe in it. The angels, who see higher things than us,
may actually see that which we only take on faith ; c.f. II, 1, AS.
Therefore, the divine principles revealed by the Articles of Faith
are self-evident only from the perspective of the reality represented in our belief. In turn, any proposition found in the Articles
is evident with respect to the divine principles obtained from the
Articles. It follows that it (the proposition) is not evident with
respect to the natural principles (or "seen" principles) which we
obtain through experience. Therefore, in order that the proposition be of knowledge to us, it needs to be made clear, apodictically, in terms of principles which are evident to us through sense
("seen" principles).
The task of the theologian, then, is not to demonstrate the
Articles of Faith per se, but to make them clear to us in tenns of
our natural knowledge of things. He shows that in principle, they
do not contradict one another; for the principles revealed by the
Articles of Faith will not fail the test oflogic. It is very important
to understand that the Articles do not compromise themselves to
science; they maintain their divine status.
Man ... ought to believe matters of faith, not because of human
reasoning, but because of divine authority . (II, 2, AlO)

Each Article has a reality all its own, which is manifest in the act
of belief. The act of belief is simple (non-composite). The
process of knowledge is complex, because the believer is complex.
The way the known exists in the knower corresponds to the way
the knower knows ... the way of knowing truth proper to the
human mind is by an act of combining and separating. For this
reason the human mind knows in a composite way things that
are themselves simple [i.e. non-composite]; this is quite the
opposite of the divine mind, which in a non-composite manner
knows things that are themselves composite. (II, 1, A2; emphasis
added)

Knowing involves "combining and separating." The intellect
understands the Articles as (composite) propositions, just as the
intellect understands the objects of sense as (composite) propositions. These propositions may be brought forth and verified by
demonstration from logical principles.
As has been mentioned earlier, concerning all t~ings, it
should be understood that when we are talking about the thing
as a real and particular being, and again, about that thing in its
formal sense, as the object of science, we are not talking about
two different things. Rather, we are talking about two different
senses of the same thing. The formal thing has no separate
existence apart from the particular being. It is abstracted from
that being. As rational creatures, we must make predications
concerning abstractions of the individual thing. This is in order
to have actual knowledge of that thing which is "given" to us
either sensibly, or supersensibly.

As is clear from its language, the Creed expresses the things of

not have a proposition as its term, but a reality, since, just as with
scientific knowledge, so also with faith, the only reason for
formulating a proposition is that we may have knowledge about
the real. (II, 1, A2, r2)

As has been stated, knowing is a process of combining and
separating. And it is in this necessary operation that theology
justifies itself. The Articles of Faith exist simply in the Christian
attitude. But in order to bring them down into our domain of
knowing, we consider each as it predicates something of God's
essence.
As the mediator between ourselves and the divine principles,
theology secures its role as the highest of sciences. And, more
importantly for Thomas, it insures the pre-eminence of revelation. Science does not tread on God's territory. Faith forms the
body of Thomas' theology. Faith is a simple act, unquestioned.
But this gift of belief makes it possible for the scientist who
believes, as one would trust his senses, to know principles about
God which the natural scientist could not discover on his own
(such as that God is both three and one, c.f.I, 12, 13), and to
formulate propositions from these principles concerning the
complex points of faith.
The topic of knowledge has to be discussed in more detail. It
was said that the thing believed is non-composite. But it is
expressed in terms of the believer, as a proposition which is
composite: "God is eternal." A proposition can be demonstrated,
and thereby it is known. Thus, God is believed in some respects,
and known in others. In order to see more precisely what,
according to Thomas, is our relationship with God, we have to
ask, "What does it mean for a thing to become known?" "How
do we know it?"
We can only know things that are by nature composites of
form and matter. When we sense, we sense that particular thing,
which exists apart from all others. Now, a particular thing
consists of a form which is individuated in matter. Form and
matter make up the object that we sense. We take the step
towards knowledge of that thing by abstracting from it its form .
That is to say, we differentiate between the thing in particular,
and its essence, or formal quality. We categorize it. The form
makes it intelligible to us.
To abstract from a thing is to "inform" ourselves of that thing,
quite literally(c.f. I, 12, AIO). We replace its matter existing
outside of us with "matter" in our minds. Hence, the thing
becomes whole again in the mind - wholly composed of its
abstracted form, and the "mental matter" we provide for it. Thus,
"Each thing is known in so far as its likeness is in the one who
knows" (I, 12, AIO). The thing becomes "reproduced," as it
were, conceived of form and matter in the mind. A form on its
own is not known or sensed by us. The mind is always housing
it in matter of its own. As has been said above, form can never
be "stripped" from the object itself. It always exists in conjunction with the thing particular to it. In short, we are able to know
something because it (like ourselves) is composite of matter and
form.

faith as they are the term of the believer's act. Such an act does

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7

�Our soul, as long as we live in this life, has its being in corporeal
matter; hence naturally it knows only what has a form in matter,
or what can be known by such a form. (I, 12, Al 1)

Things which are not individuated in matter (non-composite
things) are not suited to be informed in the mind. We do not have
the capability to conceive them in our minds. Form is intelligible
only in conjunction with matter. God is pure form, and contains
no matter; so He is unsensible and unknowable by us. We depend
on the compositness of a thing in order to know it. God is
non-composite (I, 3, A2). We depend on differentiation between
a thing and its essence. In God there is no such differentiation (I,
3, A3). He is the same as His essence. Hence, we cannot
comprehend His pure form: "God cannot be seen in His essence
by a mere human being, except he be separated from His mortal
life" (I, 12, All). We cannot inform ourselves of Him; so no
likeness of Him can exist in our minds. To know God, we would
have to be Him. This is obviously impossible, since He is a purely
transcendental being.
Consequently, we only know of Him through sense experience, with the help of principles given by revelation. What do
we know of Him? That He is simple, that He is eternal.
The reason can know that a simple form is, even though it cannot
attain to understanding what it is. (I, 12, 12, rl)

But we can only express these qualities of Him "by way of
temporal things, because our intellect has a natural proportion to
composite and temporal things" (I, 13, 1, r.3). We know Him as
everything natural and sensible is ordered to Him; as far as every
natural event we perceive can be traced to Him as a permanent
and unchanging Cause.
How, then, is it possible to speak of Him as having changing
relationships with creatures, or having conversations with them?
"Moses asked 'If they should say to me, What is His name? What
shall I say to them?' the Lord answered him, 'Thus shalt though
say to them, HE WHO IS hath sent me to you"'(I, 13, All, from
Exd. iii). How is it possible to say that He was speaking with
Moses at one time, and not speaking with him at another, when,
according to Thomas "God is above time" (I, 13, A7)? In general,
how are we to reconcile the logical God of Aristotle with the God
who appears in Scripture, as giving commands, or the God who
handed down the Articles of Faith in written words? Can God
dictate?
We have, broadly speaking, answered this question. There
are some things which we cannot, and were not meant to know
concerning God and his mysteries. Our mode of knowing prevents us from passing beyond a certain point of comprehension.
If we could know these mysteries, then faith would no longer be
meritorious (I, 1, A8). The challenge for the theologian is to
come up with some logical, or analogical explanation of our
particular relationship with God. Thomas wants to "place" himself, and hence his new-found science in a proper relation to God.
He has to try to give an account of this relationship with God in
tenns that we can understand.

8

In Article seven of Question thirteen of the Summa Theolo gica, Thomas addresses this matter concerning our proper
relationship with God. To follow his discussion, we must first
make clear what a relationship is. Thomas gets his notions of
relationship directly from Aristotle's Metaphysics, Book Delta,
section 15. For Aristotle, it seems that a relationship is not
something which subsists outside the things related. It exists in
each of the terms. This will become clear as we go on. It must
be understood for now that if we define a relationship between
two things, then we say "x is related to y," and "y is related to
x", not simply "x and y are related." We always consider a
relationship from the point of view of its distinct components.
Thomas proceeds to expound the different possibilities for a
relationship based on what Aristotle has set up for him. The
singular component of a relationship may have a relation to the
other component (assuming still we have only two terms) which
is only in thought, or it may be an actual "real" relation which
inheres in the thing itself. Hence, there are three types of relationships which are possible, according to Thomas. The first is
a strictly mental coupling of two terms, in which each has to one
another a relation because of some trick of the intellect: such as
identity - mentally reproducing one thing we can say "the same
is the same as itself'; or extrapolation - such as the relation of
a "thing" to "nothing," which involves mentally conceiving a
negative term; or selection - whereby the intellect pictures a set
and a subset, a genus and a species, etc. None of these relations
are formed in reality, but only in thought.
The second type is an actual "real" relation between two
terms, because there is something common to both in reality.
Quantity is given as an example as that which inheres in each of
the objects themselves. The "being bigger than" and the "being
smaller than" are "really" related to one another because they
share the sensible property of magnitude. So with "being double"
and "being half." The "being what is changed" and the "being
what changes" are "really" related because they both share in a
real causal action.
This dichotomy between what is "real" and what is only an
idea may seem to be an artificial and confusing distinction to
some, but it really conforms to Thomas' notion that primary
reality is in the thing sensed. Thinking refers to internal operations. The mind can think up relationships between things which
do not inhere in nature and are outside of sense.
The third possible relationship is the one Thomas is most
interested in. It is the hardest to understand, because it relies on
the clear distinction between "real" things and ideas. Thomas
also discusses this relationship in his commentaries on the Metaphysics, which is the source of the notion as far as I can tell (c.f.
Commentaries on the Metaphysics, V. L.17: c 1001-1032). I will
try to point out the main tenets of this crucial relationship as
Thomas explains it in Article 7, question 13 of the Summa.
A relationship may occur in which one of the components has
a real relation to the second; but the second does not have a real
relation to the first. This is the case, Thomas says, with the "being
knowable" and the "knowing." As we have explained, when

something is known, a likeness of it is created in the mind; it
itself remains outside the domain of knowing. Hence, the "being
knowable" itself has no real relation to the knowing, but from
the perspective of the "knowing," there is a real exchange taking
place between it (the "knowing") and the "being knowable." The
relation qualifies as "real" from the standpoint of the "knowing,"
because the "being known" is external to it. It is not merely a
relation in thought, it is a genuine interaction. Hence, the knowing has a "real" relation to the knowable. To repeat: taking
separately our two terms: From the perspective of the "knowing," there is areal relation between itand the "being knowable."
From the perspective of the "being knowable," there is no real
relation between it (the "being knowable") and the "knowing,"
but only in thought.
So, when we think about something, or when we sense
something, the relationship betWeen us and the thing can change.
But the thing does not change in itself, as a result of our thinking
. it, or sensing it. It only changes from our perspective, with
respect to our change. As we move and change, we have a real
relation with the external object. As the object neither moves nor
changes in reaction to our change, it has no relation with us at
all. The pillar, standing still, is at one time "on the right" because
of my relation to it. Then I turn around, and it is "on the left."
This is due to no change in the pillar. The situation applies
analogically to the relationship between God and temporal creatures. God, unchanging, is at one time "speaking with Moses,"
we say, because Moses is being spoken to; then Moses is not
being spoken to - so we say God is not speaking to him. There
has been no "real" change in God, as we well know - only in
Moses.
God's temporal relations to creatures are in him only because of
our way of thinking of him, but the opposite relations of creatures
to him are realities in the creatures. It is quite admissible to
attribute a relation to God because of something that takes place
in the creature, for we cannot express the reality in creatures
without talking as though there were matching relations also in
God, so that God is said to be related to a creature because the
creature is related to him, just as, according to Aristotle, the
knowable is said to be related to knowledge because knowledge
is related to it. (I, 1, 13, r4)

knowing Him. Yet from our standpoint, we have a relation to
Him sine qua non, as created beings, as recipients of salvation,
as lorded beings, as beings who are moved. And from our
standpoint, His relation as Creator, Savior, Lord, Mover, is real.
It is the relationship of lordship in him that is supplied by our
minds, not the fact of His being Lord. (I, 1, 13, r5)

Hence, he "really" is the Creator, Savior, Law-giver, and Mover,
as we are all ordered in respect to Him; also though, He really is
the unmoved transcendent God, who is ordered only in respect
to Himself. Out of Thomas' rational account of the relation
between creatures and God, God emerges startlingly as both
impersonal, and personal, as unmoved, and mover, God of
philosophy, and God of the Scriptures.
The two-faced God that Thomas set out to reconcile has
turned-out to be none other than Aristotle's Unmoved Mover.
Thomas' argument in defense of the active God of the Scriptures
is drawn directly from Aristotle's formal discussion of relations
in book delta of the Metaphysics (ch. 15). This gives it incredible
weight. Using the Aristotelian assumptions of how a thing is
known, Thomas manages to justify (analogically) his relationship with the Christian God. Of course, due to our knowledgeable limitations, it is impossible for Thomas to provide an
explanation in logical terms of how the transcendental God
speaks to us - that would imply the contradiction of knowing
God's essence. Itis just the nature of God to transcend such logic.
This has been Thomas' assumption all along. If God were not
what He is (absolutely unknowable), theology could not subsist
as Thomas wants it. However, if we accept Thomas' analogical
argument, based on Aristotle's naturally-founded assumptions,
then we have thoughtfully reconciled the problem of the two
notions of God - the one which falls under the Aristotelian
epistemology, and the one which falls under the Christian
dogma. Which is what we have set out to show.
The reasons which are brought forward in support of the authority of faith are not demonstrations which can bring intellectual
vision to the human intellect; and so the unseen is not removed.
But they remove obstacles to faith, by showing that what faith
proposes is not impossible; and hence such reasons do not
diminish the merit or the measure of faith. (II, 2, AlO, rep.2)

The only real relations which exist in God are those that are
predicated of Him eternally, insofar as He exists outside the
domain of sense and knowledge. As He is portrayed as having
anything to do with creatures in the temporal world, there is no
relation in Him to us. We "import" this relation, because it is
impossible for us to conceive of having a real relation with
something which has no relation to us. He exists independent of
us, just as the "being known" exists outside of knowledge.
To recount our analogy: from the standpoint of the "knowing," knowledge does not exist apart from the "being known."
From the standpoint of the "being known," it (the "being
known") does exist apart from knowledge. So, from the standpoint of God, who exists absolutely outside our knowledge, He
has absolutely no relation to us, not even in our sensing and

9

�The Divergence of Acute Angles:
A Proof in Absolute Geometry
Bryan Dorland
I suppose we all went through the same test in our first
semester at St. John's. "Can you independently prove Euclid's
fifth postulate?" asked our devious tutor, all the while knowing
full well that the task is impossible from within merely plane
geometry.
Euclid was not being coy when he "asked" ('Ht't~aeco let it
have been asked) for the fifth. He seems wiser, in retrospect, than
that legion of geometers which followed him who thought it
necessary to prove the fifth. Lobachevski reveals why this is so.
The positive form of the postulate is logically simultaneous, not
posterior, to plane geometry.
Lobachevski's Theorem 22 represents the resolution to the
problem of parallelism as a decision the geometer must make.
The geometrical road has come to a fork. Either the angle of
parallelism 1 is rt/2, or it is less. If we take the former path, we
will arrive at the plane geometry of the Elements, and if we
choose the latter, we will enter the realm of the imaginary. Euclid
has truly "asked" us to journey with him by granting him the
positive form of the Fifth Postulate. Similarly, we grant the
specific negative form (i.e. the angle of parallelism is less than
rt/2) to Lobachevski, and we leave the well traveled path to
follow him.
We are not forced to make this choice at the outset of the
journey. We may choose to linger on that stretch of road which
leads up to the fork. Here, every property we discover must prove
true later, regardless of where we go, for the discoveries here
must not make any assumptions regarding parallelism. This
region has a name - it is the realm of absolute geometry. Any
geometrical property we discover should fall into one of three
categories. It should either be true in plane geometry and false
in imaginary, false in plane and true in imaginary, or true in both.
A property in either of the first two categories should involve
specific assumptions about the angle of parallelism, while one
from the third should be free from such strictures. This is to say
that a geometrical property true for both systems must properly
belong to absolute geometry.
Or should it? The problem of the limitless divergence of acute
angles presents itself to us as paradigm. In a Euclidean formulation (vid. fig. 1), the problem is sufficiently self-evident as to not
require a proposition.

If I call BC the distance between lines BA and AC (which
form some acute angle at A), it is clear that I may increase this
distance beyond any limit. Extend AB to AB', drop the perpendicular to C' on AC extended, and B 'C' will be in the same ratio
to BC as AB' is to AB. Because I can construct increasingly
larger, yet similar triangles , I may exceed any limit for B'C' by
sufficient augmentation of AB'.
This demonstration relies on specific properties of triangles
whose lineage may be traced to the angle of parallelism. These
properties are not present in imaginary geometry, and we know
from Lobachevski 's 23rd Theorem that Euclid's similar triangle
construction is specific to plane geometry.
The "Non-Euclidean Geometry" manual we use in the ~enior
year presents a proof for the boundless divergence which is
specific to imaginary geometry. We have a problem: the divergence seems to be a property in both systems, while at the same
time being specific to both. Is this possible? Are there some
properties which are not absolute, but true in both systems? 2
If the unbounded divergence of the sides of an acute angle
can be shown without recourse to parallelism, then it is a property
of absolute geometry. This is what I shall show.

Proposition: The sides of an acute angle diverge without
limit.

d' &gt;1.D
2
C'E=D
B'F= B'E

c
Fig.1

C'

If in the quadrilateral ABCD, the angles at A, B, and Care
right, then the side DC must equal or exceed the side AB.

1. Here I use Lobachevski' s formulation. By the angle of parallelism, I
mean the angle a formed with a first line when a transverse cuts a second
line with aright angle~. i.e.:

2. The system of absolute geometry is posited as comprehending two
subsystems - euclidean and non-euclidean. Now if a property can be
found which is proper to both subsystems yet not to the system itself,
then the existence of more subsystems, for which the property does not
hold, is implied. But in his Theorem 19, Lobachevski argues that there
are only the two subsystems. Hence the problem.
3. This means properties which can be established without recourse to
the angle of parallelism. Examples of such properties are propositons 1
through 28 of the "Elements", and Lobachevski's Theorems 1 through
22.
4. I can say by Euclid I.26 that if D is a boundary, it must be a member
of the class of distances which d can never attain. In other words, D
cannot be the greatest distance for d, but must always exceed d.
Therefore to solve the reductio, I need only show that d can equal D.
5. In a systematic treatment of absolute geometry, the lemma would take
the form of a proposition and would appear prior to the acute angle
proposition. It is included here as a lemma because it is necessary to the
main proof.

B'
a

B

G

F

Fig.3
d

A

c

d"

d'
C'

D

J

Fig.2

A

Lemma5

quadrilateral ABCD, the sum of the angles exceeds 2rt, or four
right angles, which is impossible. [This follows from
Lobachevski Theorm 19.]
Therefore the side CD can not fall short of AB.

H

E

B'

B

distance which distanced will neither meet nor exceed. 4
Extend AB to B' such that the perpendicular B 'C', or d', is
greater than 1/2 D.
Extend C'B' to point E so that C'E equals D.
Cut off on B 'C' some length B 'F equal to B'E.
Erect from point F some line FG perpendicular to EC' at F.
FG will fall on AB' at some point other than either of the vertices
[Lobachevski Theorem 4].
From point E, erect some line EH equal to FG and perpendicular to EC'.
Connect B' to H with a straight line.
By construction, lines FB' and FG equal lines B'E and EH
respectively. The angles at E and Fare both right. Therefore
triangle B 'EH is congruent to triangle B 'FG and angle a equals
angle ~- Therefore line AB' lies evenly with line B'H, so AH
must be line AB' extended to H [Euclid I .13].
From H, drop some line HJ perpendicular to AC. The angle
EID can not exceed the angle at E [Lobachevski Theorem 19],
therefore EC' can not exceed HJ [vid. lemma]. Distance HJ is
d' '. Thus some d'' has been found which is either equal to or
greater than the limit D, which was supposed impossible. Therefore there is no limit to the divergence of the lines which
constitute an acute angle.

Given line AB meets line AC at some acute angle, it is
necessary to prove that the distance between the two lines grows
without bounds according to the precepts of absolute geometry. 3
From some point B on AB let fall a perpendicular to AC
[Euclid 1.12]. This distance shall be called d. Let there be some
other distance D which bounds the divergence, i.e. D is the least

If not, let DC be less than AB. Extend CD to CD' such that
CD' equals AB. Draw straight lines AC, BD'.
CD' was constructed equal to AB, the right angle at B equals
the right angle at C and BC is common. Therefore triangle ABC
is congruent to triangle D'CB and AC equals BD' [Lobachevski
Theorem 10].
Draw the common line AD '. Therefore triangle BAD' is
congruent to triangle CD' A [ibid.], and angle BAD' equals angle
AD'C.
Angle D'AB is greater than rt/2, so AD'C must also be
greater. But angle ADC is greater than AD'C [Euclid 1.16], so
angle ADC must be much greater than rt/2. Therefore in the

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�Rex to Wretch:
Transformation and Riddle in Oedipus Tyrannos
Zena Hitz

1H0o&lt;; au0pro1tro Oatµoru. -Heraclitus,frg.1211
Sophocles' Oedipus Tyrannos is a play fundamentally composed of opposites and motions between them. The principal
motion, of course, is the transformation of Oedipus from king to
wretched old man, but contained within that are many more:
sight becomes blindness, ignorance becomes knowledge, hubris
becomes humility, master becomes suppliant, foreigner becomes
native. The play consists of a series of scenes in which Oedipus
is set up against people of varying positions and objectives, and
through dialogue the character underlying these transfonnations
is gradually and subtly drawn out. The play also involves a series
of riddles that are like nested boxes, beginning with the solving
of the Sphinx's riddle, ending with the solving of Oedipus'
riddle, and leaving us, circularly, with the first one again: the
riddle of the nature of man. Is man recmsive; do all of his actions
eventually fall back on himself? Is he merely bronze for the
sculpting hands of the gods? Is he a victim of a world of blind
chance, his will meaningless? This paper will analyze the transformations and reversals within the play to try to get at their
meaning in the context of these questions.
The most external change that occurs in Oedipus is his loss
of sight. He calls out as he strikes out his eyes with Jocasta's
brooches: "They [his eyes] will never see the crime I have
committed or had done upon me! Dark eyes, now in the days to
come look on forbidden faces, do not recognize those who you
long for!" (1271)2. He seems to be avoiding the horror of the
visual recognition of his crimes (namely, his children) - a futile
task, since mental recognition is quite enough to send him raving
in disgust. The relation between vision and knowledge is taken
to its full metaphorical extent in the dialogue between Teiresias
and Oedipus. That scene involves a complex interplay of physical vision, that is, the vision for which one uses one's eyes, and
supernatural vision, with which one derives information beyond
normal human perception. Teiresias, physically blind, proclaims
that he sees the truth, that he knows the answer to the riddle of
the ,plague. Oedipus, eyes in full working order, denies that
answer, opposing his own riddle-solving powers as demonstrated by his conquest of the Sphinx to those of Teiresias: "I
solved the riddle by my wit alone. Mine was no knowledge got
from birds" (398). He repeatedly tries to discredit Teiresias'
vision, asking first why he could not answer the Sphinx's riddle
and, after the prophet leaves, why, if his accusation is correct, he
did not speak sooner. Teiresias answers neither of these ques1translated "A man's character is his daemon."

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2Unless otherwise marked, all translations are by David Grene,
University of Chicago Press, 1954.

tions, but merely spouts more riddles: ''This day will show your
birth and will destroy you" (438), and "You have your eyes but
see not where you are" (413). Although to the reader familiar
with the myth the meaning of these riddles is painfully obvious,
to Oedipus they are bewildering: "How needlessly your riddles
darken everything" (439). This line shows a particularly interesting reversal: Teiresias, who offers the first answer to theriddle
of the plague, instead of shedding light on the question so that
Oedipus can see for himself what the answer is, rather darkens
it, answering riddle with riddle. It may seem as if Oedipus is
stupid for not seeing the truth; however, Teiresias never once
states that Oedipus either married his mother or killed his father,
let alone showing a circumstance in which that could have
occurred, but only says that he killed Laius after Oedipus demands that he clarify his first answer. Even then the answer is
cryptic: "You are the murderer of the man whose murderer you
seek" (363). By the end of the scene, Oedipus is not only clearly
blind to his origin, but blind to his blindness as well. Rather than
being convinced of his own guilt, he is convinced of the guilt of
someone else. This discrepancy between what he should know
and what he does not is a principle irony of the play. It is a
reversal explicitly connected with sight: at the end of the play,
when he sees the truth of where he is, he blinds himself, crying
out that he wishes to avoid his crimes but actually confronting
and answering his own previous blindness to them.
The reversal of sight and knowledge is also demonstrated
when Creon presents the riddle of Laius' murder to Oedipus at
the beginning of the play. Oedipus responds to the name, although Creon has posed no question, with "I know of him by
hearsay. I have not seen him" (105). In his attempts to solve the
murder, he first inquires of an oracle, then a seer, then eyewitnesses. All the information he receives, however, is hearsay,
sometimes two or three people removed from the actual source.
Once again, the proper roles are reversed: Oedipus himself, he
who has seen, learns of the event from people who have not seen.
Oedipus and those around him, however, have no reason to
trust Teiresias' judgement over that of Oedipus. Teiresias is the
man who could not solve the riddle of the Sphinx, a blind man
who speaks in riddles. Oedipus, on the other hand, is the great
riddle-solver with functioning eyes and a keen wit. Because the
reader is acquainted with the story, he believes Teiresias and
laughs at Oedipus' foolishness. The person in events offstage,
however, has neither true prophet nor any other way of discerning what is to come.
The second major transformation of Oedipus is that of parentage and place. This issue begins in the title with the word
'tUpmmoc;. The word means "master" or "ruler," but it specifies
a ruler without traditional political legitimacy, one who did not
receive the crown by parentage, but by some other means. This
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��by wit and riddle-solving ability; indeed, he is a foreigner. As he
learns the truth of his parentage, it becomes clear that he is not
only a native of Thebes but a legitimate heir, a Kpetcou (king).
However, at the same time that he learns this, he learns that he
is a moral atrocity, and thus sentences himself to exile, to be a
foreigner without title, and Creon (Kperou) becomes king, due
not to direct lineage but as the brother to the queen. Oedipus'
sons are not mentioned, indicating that Oedipus' transformation
back into foreigner at the end is complete. Just prior to his final
realization, though, comes word from Corinth that he will be
king there. Oedipus thinks at the time that this is a position
acquired by birth; in fact, it is a position acquired by association
and perhaps character, similar to his rise to power in Thebes.
Oddly enough, it is this second rise to power that is the key to
his downfall: the same messenger tells him that Polybus and
Merope are not his parents. So what should be a confirmation of
heritage, an inheritance of a throne, is in fact a double dethroning.
Thus Oedipus lives another contradiction: he is a "tyrant" both
at the beginning and the end of the play, although he is also
legitimate heir throughout.
We see the importance of parentage and lineage to personal
identities for Greeks in the Iliad, when each person is considered
not only the sum of his achievements, but of the achievements
of his forefathers. Indeed, to the heroes of the Iliad, the names
of one's forefathers serve as inspiration to overcome fear of
death, as reasons for preferential treatment by the gods, and in
general, indications of honor and character.
Thus far Oedipus has four parents: two biological and two
adopted. But by proclaiming himself a "child of fortune (1tUXTJ)"
( 1080), Oedipus offers us another way to understand his parentage. Aristotle describes fortune as an "accidental cause of things
done according to choice andfor the sake of something" (Physics
197a), a sort of displacement of final cause. This describes
Oedipus' actions and their results: Jocasta gives away the child
for the sake of its death; the child lives. Oedipus runs away from
Corinth to avoid a prophecy; he runs straight into it. He marries
the queen of Thebes for the sake of power and greatness; he
instead marries into moral atrocity. In requesting Oedipus' help
at the beginning of the play, the priest describes him as having
brought fortune with him to Thebes, telling him to "be now no
less in fortune" (53) 3. However, this is an unsatisfying answer
not only because it is thematically empty, but because it does not
3Along with fortune, the gods are sometimes used to explain the

discrepancy between Oedipus' intention and his actual deeds; however,
unlike in the plays of Aeschylus and Euripides, the gods never make a
physical appearance in the play. They are frequently referred to as those
to whom men are suppliant and as revealers of information beyond
human knowledge. The gods in this way are extremely important they
reveal the limitations of man and his thought and perception. However,
it seems that they lack the role of definite agent. They do not chase
characters with whips, or set up courts of judgement as in the Oresteia.
They do not vow punishment on stage as in the Hippolytus. They are
seen solely through the filter of human perception and action. They are
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account for Oedipus' character as determining the choices he
makes, which fortune may displace.
He solves the riddle of the Sphinx, as he says, by his "wit
alone." Although the priest says he did so by fortune, this seems
an implausible way to solve a riddle. Solving a riddle requires
thought and perhaps intuition, but fortune seems to be something
outside of these, something beyond the power of human choice
and skill. The priest also says Oedipus solved theriddle "in virtue
of no knowledge we could give you, in virtue of no teaching"
(38), which implies that either it came by "some god" or from
within Oedipus himself. Sim~larly, he kills a man, out of the same
irrational temper we see displayed in his encounters with
Teiresias and Creon. He discovers his origin due to his own thirst
for knowledge and blindness to the warnings around him.
Considering Oedipus' character as a cause also involves
understanding him as a parent. This is shown in the fact that he
not only destroys his lineage through his father, but that he
marries his mother, essentially replacing that lineage with him- ,
self. He is husband to his mother, brother to his daughters, and
therefore father to himself. He is thus the ultimate self-made
man, the character without bonds of lineage or history. The
chorus expresses this, saying "Cithaeron was mother and nurse
to you" (1094). It is as though Oedipus springs fully grown from
the earth, like the men sprung from the dragon's teeth sown by
Cadmus to found Thebes. However, it is his lineage, indeed the
fact that he was generated, that is his destruction. His discovery
of his parentage is at the heart of the play. This brings with it the
knowledge that the he is the murderer he seeks, that he is the
plague on the city. Thus he proclaims at the end," the hand that
struck me was none but my own" (1331 ).
Even those actions and events attributed to fortune throw
Oedipus back on himself. The shepherd sends Oedipus to Corinth to rub away his lineage; he ends up returning to it and
tangling himself within it. Oedipus runs away from the prophecy
of who he is and what he will do, and heads straight - not to
Nicaea or Megara or Athens - but to his home town. He kills a
man at a crossroads; it is his father, and thus he replaces his
lineage with himself. He marries the queen of Thebes; he does
not know that it is his mother, but he yet again throws himself
back on himself, like a stone tossed upward, only to return with
multiplied velocity.
Oedipus' transformation over the course of the play replicates
the same pattern of the return to the self. He begins a search for
the murderer of Laius as "one who is stranger to the story as
stranger to the deed" (220), an outside investigator, aware only
of his ignorance. His search for' a solution to the plague progresses into a search for parentage and thus self-knowledge
through his dialogues, first with the priest: "why the plague?";
next Creon: "who killed Laius?"; then Teiresias: "what is going
on?"; and finally and fatally with the messenger and the shepherd: "who are my parents?" The truth that he discovers is no
longer the answer to any one of these questions, but an answer
to all of them: the answer to a simple "who am I?" Thus, although
he begins the play investigating something seemingly foreign,

he ends completely inside himself, all-knowing, all-responsible.
"To this guilt I bore witness against myself..." (1384), he
proclaims, and therefore testifies against himself, judges himself, and punishes himself. He blinds himself, cutting himself off
from outside stimuli, and making himself so gruesome none can
look at him. ("I shudder at the sight of you!" [Chorus, 1306]) He
is recursive, he is isolated, he is wretched. All tools and events
in the play - his blindness, the discrepancy between intention
and recursive result, and all transformations, yield Oedipus
himself, Oedipus the man, and thus man himself. The riddles thus
come full circle:
1) The riddle of the Sphinx (what is man?)
2) The riddle of the plague (what is being done wrong?)
3) The riddle of the murder (who killed Laius?)
4) The riddle of parentage (who is Oedipus?)
5) The riddle of Oedipus (what is man?)
Oedipus is then the great riddle-solver both as supplier of answers and as answer himself.
Similarly, Oedipus underlies the contradictions and motions
between opposites in the play - sight to blindness, ignorance to
knowledge, hubris to humility, master to suppliant, foreigner to
native. He is both seeing and blind to himself, both ignorant and
all-knowing, both close to god and near to beast, both in control
and completely powerless, both legitimate heir and tyrant. These
extremes cancel to yield simply Oedipus the man. For example,
consider the opposites previously discussed of Oedipus' birth
and Oedipus' position at the beginning of the play:

KPE"QN

'OIAI"TIOYL

What, then, is the nature of Oedipus? What is it that remains
constant? The most literal answer is his name. oiot7tOU~ is
composed of two words: 01.ocro, to swell, and 7tOU~, meaning
foot. Forms of oioeco can also be used metaphorically to mean
'of inflated style.' It is also related etymologically to tumors and
diseases e.g. ot&amp;i,µa, swelling or tumor. He is the infant left on
the hill to die with his feet bound, the disease of the city, and he
is also the one who truly "knows" as in "o1Ba ",the perfect of
eioeco, to see. The term 'swollen' or 'of inflated style' is a way
of speaking of something inflated, something out of shape, and
perhaps of a sense of transience, since the swelling will go down.
Oedipus' rise to power is such a swelling. Oedipus is he whose
feet were bound; the secret of his birth is contained in his name
and yet o!oa, he knows and has seen, he is the city's disease and
its cure, he is swollen with greatness and yet he is wretched. He
in some way contains king and wretch, heir and tyrant, master
and suppliant. However, there must still be an underlying material that undergoes these transformations.
This material, then, is that which constitutes Oedipus' character and physical form. As man, he is neither of foreign nor
noble birth, but he is born. He can see physically but has neither

eyes for the future nor eyes to look inside himself. Many raised
and conditioned him, but he is ultimately descended from no one
except himself. He seeks mastery but much is beyond his control.
He seeks knowledge but much eludes his grasp. He does everything in his power to be moral and good: to save the city from
the plague, find a murderer, keep himself from killing his father
and marrying his mother.
The three major character traits that underly these actions are
a thirst for knowledge not easily quenched, a desire to do what
is good, and a fierce temper. It is his thirst for knowledge that
leads him to ask his parents who he is after a drunk calls him a
bastard, to ask the oracle when the answer is unsatisfactory, to
try to answer the riddle of the Sphinx, to solve the murder of
Laius, and to discover his parentage, despite multiple warnings
as to its result. It is his desire to do what is good that leads him
to leave the city where he was raised, to avoid killing his father
and marrying his mother, and it is that desire which motivates
him to decipher the cause of Thebes' plague. It is evident from
the way the town and priest beg him to solve this problem that
he is under no obligation to do so but does it only out of concern
for the city. It is his temper which flares when he is pushed out
of the road by King Laius, and thus he kills him and his entire
company. When Teiresias pushes him out of the riddle-solving
him of
road, so to speak, his temper flares again and he accuses_
conspiracy. "Perhaps it was a sudden gust of anger that forced
the insult from him, and no judgement" (Chorus, 523).
These are the very characteristics which define man. His lack
of foreknowledge in making his choices reflects that of all men.
Although in the play the audience has the blueprint of what will
happen, Oedipus does not, and neither do we in everyday life.
Indeed, Oedipus' characteristics are similar to the three parts of
the soul presented in Plato's Republic: the contemplative and
rational part, the part concerned with honor and duty, and that
ruled by the passions. Oedipus passes through all stages and
extremes in which people find themselves, thus demonstrating
that all of those extremes - king, wretch, master, suppliant, etc.,
flow from man, and are not imposed from the outside. The
tragedy of the play, then, is that which all mankind experiences,
much more tragic in its universality than it could be specifically:
the tragedy of the impossibility of foreknowledge of events, and
the tragedy of all knowledge, all mastery, and all greatness being
inescapably transient, likely in the space of a day to collapse into
its opposite.

Wonders are many, and none is more wonderful than man; the
power that crosses the white sea, driven by the stormy southwind, making a path under surges that threaten to engulf him;
and Earth, the eldest of the gods, the immortal, the unwearied,
does he wear, turning the soil with the offspring of horses, as the
ploughs go to and fro from year to year.
And the light-headed race of birds, and the tribes of savage
beasts, and the sea-brood of the suiface, he snares in the meshes
of his woven toils, he leads captive, man excellent in wit. And he

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�masters by his arts the beast whose lair is in the wild, who roams
the hills; he tames the horse of the shaggy mane, he puts the yoke
upon its neck, he tames the tireless mountain bull.
And speech, and wind-swift thought, and all the moods (6P'YtlJ
that mould a state, has he taught himself; and how to flee the
arrows of the frost, when 'tis hard lodging under the clear sky,
and the arrows of the rushing rain; he has resource for all;
without resource he meets nothing that must come: only Death
can he not flee from; but from sicknesses without cure he has
devised escapes.
Cunning beyond fancy' s dream is the fertile skill which brings
him, now to evil, now to good. When he weaves the laws of the
land to that justice which he has sworn by the gods to uphold, he
is high in the city: no city has he who.for his rashness, dwells
with sin. Never may he share my hearth, never think my thoughts,
who does these things!
- Chorus, Antigone, 332-372
Slightly modified from the translation of Sir Richard Jebb.

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�The Day of Picking
Melissa Bond
I was ten years old the day we picked the com. My brother
and I had been waiting for it all summer. Going out each
afternoon, behind the rusted chicken house and up the small
muddy path to our beloved garden, we would wonder if it was
time. I could never tell if the corn was tall enough. Dad always
said it had to be just a sprinkle above my head, whatever that
meant. I would ask Kenyon if it was a sprinkle yet, but he would
just squinch his face, raise his eyebrows for a minute and then
return to catching the Japanese beetles that he always fed to the
fish.
It was a Sunday in late July when the day of picking came.
Kenyon and I were pretending we were dead when Dad came in
to get us out of bed. "Ready-Up!", he shouted dancing around
the room. He was humming to himself and had a half-lit, fivepenny cigar sticking out of his mouth. "Hmmmm-uhhhhhmmm-hmmm." His hands glided through the air, tracing wind
currents back and forth, back and forth. "Hmmm-uhhh-hmmmhmmm." Kenyon and I began to giggle. Dad leapt over the small
footstool I used to reach the bookcase, and farted exquisitely
upon landing. "My dearest, loveliest children," he began,
''Today is a day of infinite grandeur. The air is stilled to perfection, the sun has warmed the back of the earth and all is toasty
and content." I looked at Kenyon who was smiling and blinking
his eyes at the flurry of our father's arms. Kenyon's head inclined
slightly toward me as he rolled his eyes. Dad was given to
making speeches. " ... the grasshoppers make lazy love sounds,
the honey is sweet and the magnolia's smile. My dear, beloved
children, today the corn is sprinkle high. Today is the day of
picking." Kenyon and I jumped up on our beds and began
running in place.
"Wooo-woooo-woooo," Kenyon yelled. "Wooo-wooowooo." With a great exhalation, our father stopped us.
"First," he said with all seriousness, "breakfast." Kenyon and
I yelped. Dad clomped off toward the kitchen, cigar clenched
firmly between his lips. The day of picking had begun.
Breakfast consisted of sourcream poundcake, buckwheat
pancakes with real maple syrup, fresh strawberries from the
garden, and big glasses of Tang. Dad was waiting at the table
when Kenyon and I began to heap food on our plates. As I
reached for the strawberries, dad grabbed my wrist.
"Homage to all grasshoppers, the sky and every silk thread
we find." he said gently into my eyes. "Understand?" I nodded
my assent. He let go of my hand slowly, becoming distracted by
the maple syrup. Kenyon's amber eyes looked into mine.
"Pass the strawberries," he mouthed.
The following six hours Dad, Kenyon, and I spent Hauling
manure water. Kenyon and I were given three foot yellow plastic
shields to drape over our bodies for protection as we hauled five
gallon pails of water and horse shit from Clay Odom's house to
the garden.
"We must replenish before we consumeth," said Dad, slopping a big turd around his zucchini plant.
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echoed, trying to splash each other.
Each haul took several hours as Clay Odom lived a little over
three miles away. The three of us walked to Clay's house
swinging our buckets. Kenyon and I then waited for Dad to finish
the cigars he smoked with Clay on all days of picking. They
shared two cigars, passing them back and forth and commenting
on the quality of corn that season.
"Got Silver Queen this year." Dad said scratching his ear.
"Swee test damn com you ever put in your mouth."
"Yup," Clay answered, sucking his grey teeth, "I ain't never
got it off the stalk fast enough though. You got to get it off the
stalk while it's still green, while it's still alive if you want that
sweet honey taste."
"Yup," Dad said. He stood up, extinguishing his cigar. "I
think it's about that time." Kenyon and I picked up our buckets,
waved goodbye to Clay, and followed our father's intent body
up the road.
After thorough scrubbings, Dad gathered Kenyon and I in the
kitchen. It was about four o'clock and the afternoon heat had
dissipated into a slow, contented warmth. Dad was pulling all
the pots from the cupboards and examining them. He pulled each
one out, holding it away from himself for inspection. After
inspection he would gingerly place it back in the cupboard,
pulling out the next one for examination. He finally decided on
an old chili pot Clay had given him at a Bar-B-Q three years
before. The pot held five gallons, was made of stainless steel and
had huge handles on each side. "Yes. Good. Good." Dad whispered turning it. He filled the pot with water and set it on the
stove to boil. Kenyon's foot was wagging back and forth as he
stared at the garden. Dad put a stool in front of us and sat down.
He ran his hands through his dark hair and then clasped them
together, grinning at us.
"My most beloved children," he began. "Today is the day of
picking, it is a day of honor. We must honor... ". He trailed off,
his eyes locating a butterfly outside. The air was quiet, only the
sun and our breath beating through the silence.
He began again, "Fivecobbseach. Only five. Don'tpick them
until I tell you to. Once you have picked them, run as fast as you
can to the kitchen. Shuck them and throw them into the water.
You want them to be alive when you put them in. They have to
have life to get that sweet honey taste. Okay?"
"Okay," Kenyon and I whispered, vibrating. The water began
to boil.
Dad, Kenyon, and I walked to the garden with deliberate
slowness. "You don't want to cleave the air too fast on a day like
this," Dad said "it makes for bad pickin' ." we arrived at the
garden. The stalks were golden with feathery blooms for heads.
The sun made slats through the rows, taking its place with all
fairness. Nothing pushed too fast here. Kenyon and I began to
walk slowly, caressing the dark green and the light.
"Homage to all grasshoppers, the sky, and every silk thread."
I thought. We took our time, cleaving the air slowly, finding the
com we thought would be the biggest and sweetest.

"Has everybody found their corn?" Dad yelled from somewhere to my right.
"Yes!" I yelled.
"Yup!" Kenyon yelled.
Okay," Dad said, "on the count of three, I want everyone to
pick, shuck, and boil! Ready! One! Two! Three!"
Kenyon and I screamed. I rushed to each of my beloved com
cobbs and picked them with all the delicacy I could muster before
rushing to the next. At the fifth one I ran down to the house, my
lungs screaming in my chest more from laughter than from
exertion. Dad was shucking like a madman and throwing the
naked cobbs to Kenyon who dropped them into the boiling water.
I joined the shucking and within minutes all fifteen cobbs were
rolling around in sweet, aquatic, Clay Odom's chili pot bliss. Dad
smiled and nudged me, "Did you hear them sigh as they went
in?" he asked. "I think we got them alive. I believe we are going
to have us some Silver Queen com shooting sweet honey straight
down our throats."
We set the table with three plates and one big bowl of fresh
butter. We didn't even use knives, we just jabbed those com
cobbs straight in and let the honey mix with the butter until it
was just right. It was sweeter than honey when that sigh shot
straight down my throat. Dad said, butter glistening on his beard,
that the magnolias must be smiling.

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�From Ambiguity to Epiphany: A Clairvoyant Reading of
"The Rime of the Ancient Mariner"
Ange E. Mlinko

Introduction
A sower went out to sow. And as he sowed, some seeds fell along
the path, and the birds came and devoured them. Other seeds fell
on rocky ground, where they had not much soil, and immediately
they sprang up, since they had no depth of soil, but when the sun
rose they were scorched; and since they had no root they withered away. Other seeds fell upon thorns, and the thorns grew up
and choked them. Other seeds fell on good soil and brought forth
grain, some a hundredfold, some sixty, some thirty. He who has
ears, let him hear. (Mat. 13:3-9)

Jes us told this parable by the seaside. He speaks here of his
own mission to convert, but the parable might apply to all
storytellers, whose words fall likewise on shallow and fertile
imaginations.
Stories aim to teach, but their subject- the mystery of life
- defies simple or literal language. Instead the language of
parable or poem circles around its subject, approaching the
vortex with circumspection. This is not, however, our usual
method of acquiring knowledge about the nature of things. We
think of communication and inquiry as arrows with a target:
information. The following passage by a seventeenth-century
theologian exemplifies this:
I can easily believe that there are more invisible than visible
beings in the universe. But of their families, degrees, connections, distinctions, and functions, who shall tell us? How do they
act? Where are they found? About such matters the human mind
has always circled without attaining knowledge. - T. Burnet

These exact questions of category belong to the natural
philosopher. Yet man's most "natural" approach fails when
applied to spiritual inquiry. It is ironic then that this passage
begiris the long epigraph of Coleridge's "The Rime of the
Ancient Mariner," a parable about a man who goes off in search
of the unknown, violates its mystery with his blundering arrow,
and undergoes an astonishing penance: initiation into life-indeath, the prophet's condition.
To become prophetic one must attain clairvoyance, the ability to apprehend the invisible. For one who wishes to know at all
costs no suffering is too great. The Mariner is doomed to wander
the land, exiled from spiritual and human society, sowing his
tales among other chosen men and thereby sundering those men
from human society.
Similarly, we the readers of ''The Rime of the Ancient Mariner" must attain some degree of clairvoyance in order to "see"
what the poem means, but does not say. Our minds, drawn to its
beauty and then to its mystery, circle around its ambiguities until
we experience the same epiphanies the Mariner experiences. The
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and feeling the wind of welcoming, the creative breeze. It is my
hope in this essay to chart the progress from the "circling" mind
to the "clairvoyant" mind first in the Mariner, then in the poem's
reader. And I hope throughout to impart the sense of danger that
permeates the quest for knowledge lying beyond the realm of
natural philosophy.

II - The Circling Mind and the Mortal Eye
The Mariner thwarts the Guest's purposeful passage the way
the elements thwart the purpose of his ship. His first lines express
the initial excitement of the mind venturing forth into regions
unknown:
The ship was cheered, the harbour cleared,
Merrily did we drop
Below the kirk, below the hill,
Below the light-house top.
Below, below, below; the ship sails off with ease, as the word
"drop" indicates. Yet the very next stanza counterpoints downward motion with upward motion, straight line with circle:

I -The Wedding on the Periphery
Outside the frame of the Mariner's story is a second story
wherein will lie the real moral. The Mariner must tell his parable
to someone, like the sower tossing his seed. He diverts "one of
three" from the doors of a wedding feast, and that man, the
Wedding-Guest, must hear him. But he must conquer the will of
his victim, first with a "glittering eye" and then with bewitching
words.
The Mariner brings the sea into the Wedding-Guest's ken
with his very person: "glittering eye" and "long grey beard"
suggest the hypnotic moon, and the stretch of ocean beneath it.
And when the Wedding Guest cries, "And thou art long, and
lank, and brownj As is the ribbed sea-sand," we think of something washed over and over by a motion as inexorable as the tide.
Indeed, the Mariner later reveals:
Since then, at an uncertain hour,
That agony returns:
And till my ghastly tale is told,
This heart within me burns.
Over and over he experiences that eroding fever. The
Mariner's voice and features bring the natural elements into a
wedding feast. Marriage is the cornerstone ritual of society,
which is itself man's greatest bulwark against the elements. And
as the Wedding-Guest puts it:
The Bridegroom's doors are opened wide,
And I am next of kin.
This next-of-kin enjoys the protection societies and marriages
give to individuals. With protection comes cheerful ignorance.
The Mariner, by not allowing the Wedding-Guest passage across
the threshold, breaks the spell that sheltered ignorance holds over
his heart. The Wedding-Guest "beat his breast" at the sound of
music and laughter coming through the doors. He and the Mariner must remain outside the human domain, as must the knowledge they come to share.

mind's eye confuses its nature; he circles, like the mind in the
epigraph looking for "families, degrees, connections, distinctions, and functions."
As the Mariner builds his stanzas toward the revelation that
he killed the bird, the pace heightens. But at the crucial moment
when he might have given away his motive, the Wedding-Guest
preempts two and a half lines to cry,
God save thee, ancient Mariner!
From the fiends, that plague thee thus! Why look' st thou so?
Whatever the Mariner might have said is lost in the drama of cry
crashing on cry: "With my crossbow/ I shot the Albatross!"
What caused the Wedding-Guest to cry out just then? The
stanza prior to it goes:

The Sun came up upon the left,
Out of the sea came he;
And he shone bright, and on the right
Went down into the sea.
Instead of saying "we headed south," the Mariner incorporates the rolling motion of the orbit in his words. "We headed
south" conveys purposeful ease, which Nature will subvert.
So as soon as the ship goes beyond "the line," or equator, it
can no longer navigate itself. A storm-blast causes it to lose its
bearings. This storm, "tyrannous and strong," is likened to the
ship's "foe." And in the absence of men and ·beasts, the very
landscape takes on a malevolence; the ice "cracked and growled,
and roared and howled." The ship finds itself in the land of mist
and snow where eye and mind flounder in confusion. The simple
compass needle, which so scientifically points north, spins.
The Mariner cannot see shapes for the mist; this is a physical
indicator of a mental condition. Most importantly, he does not
know he has drifted into the territory of the Polar Spirit. Coleridge wrote in the marginal gloss that it is "one of the invisible
inhabitants of this planet, neither departed souls nor angels ....
They are very numerous, and there is no climate or element
without one or more." This might remind us of the world of the
Odyssey, where one must be on guard against the capricious
wrath of the many immortals and semi-mortals who inhabit the
seas and islands.
But the characters in the Odyssey know quite well that such
beings exist; the Mariner does not, and so incurs their wrath by
killing their messenger, the Albatross.
The Mariner's tale is told in retrospect. Hence when he tells
us it came like "a Christian soul" we think of the bird as a good
omen. But the Mariner amid the mist and snow cannot tell if an
omen is good or bad. He tells us "the ice was here, the ice was
there, the ice was all around" - and we picture him spinning
dizzily about, overwhelmed on all sides. Whence comes the
Albatross: "Through the fog it came," "It ate the food it ne'er
had eat," "round and round it flew." And round and round the
Mariner's mind goes, first describing it as spirit, then as bird. His

In mist or cloud, on mast or shroud,
It perched for vespers nine;
Whiles all the night, through fog-smoke white,
Glimmered the white moon-shine.
The obscured moon-eye, the magical nine nights, the mist, the
shroud - all theses serve to fill us with vague dread. Is it bird
or ghost? If the bird is a ghost, an arrow won't draw blood. So
to answer the question, "What manner of beast are you?" the
Mariner draws his bow.

When the senses fail to inform us, we proceed to experiment;
that is the way of the human mind. The shot arrow attempts
empirically to penetrate the mysteries to which reason cannot
gain admittance.
Afterward, the crew cannot decide whether the bird is innocent or the Mariner heroic:
For all averred, I had killed the bird
That made the breeze to blow.
Ah wretch! said they, the bird to slay,
That made the breeze to blow!
But:
Then all averred, I had killed the bird
That brought the fog and mist.
'Twas right, said they, such birds to slay,
That bring the fog and mist.
Minds still circle around the issue of the Albatross' goodness
or evil. The Polar Spirit, who "loved the bird," enters the dreams
of the sailors:
And some in dreams assured were
Of the Spirit that plagued us so.

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�Because the soul's eye sees what the mortal eye can't, the Polar
Spirit appears to sleeping men. The dreaming eye tells the truth.
By day, the Mariner once more mistakes the nature of an
apparition on the waters:
At first it seemed a little speck
And then it seemed a mist;
It moved and moved ...
A speck, a mist. a shape, I wist!
And still it neared and neared:
As if it dodged a water-sprite.
It plunged and tacked and veered.
Frenzy rises in the Mariner; he desires to name what he sees,
but his eye renders nothing clearly. Once again he draws blood
in his mental tonnent; he savagely sucks the blood of his arm to
cry "A sail! a sail!" - apparently to engage the eyes of the other
crew members. He wants confinnation: Do you see what I see?
Blindly. the crew follow his example, and drink likewise.
There• s no indication in the poem or gloss that they see the
skeleton ship bearing Death and Life-in-Death.

ill - Two Epiphanies
[Seeing in the Dark]
Twice up to this point the Mariner draws blood, twice as a
way to answer his uncertainty regarding the nature of what he
sees. Twice this act fails.
In part III, the poem makes a distinction between the carnal
and spiritual eyes, symbolized by the sun and moon. The carnal,
or mortal, eye of the Mariner has thus far mistaken a bird for a
phantom. and a phantom for a ship. The new world he has
trespassed into demands the growth of a new eye - one that,
like the moon, sees in the dark. In part II, the ship bursts into the
doldrums at the equator; there the "bloody Sun" stands above the
mast like a judging eye. But the sun's great telling moment
comes when the skeleton ship drives "suddenly/ Betwixt us and
the Sun." The Mariner's eye, entrenched in his body, is unable
to judge right. The setting sun now symbolizes the judging eye
as the imprisoned eye:
And straight the Sun was flecked with bars,
(Heaven's Mother send us grace!)
As if through a dungeon-grate he peered
With a broad and burning face.
The carnal eye is shown to be imprisoned in flesh. Furthermore, the "bars" that obscure it are the "ribs" of the ship. At the
invocation of "Heaven's Mother," that blue-mantled Mary, another apparition answers: the Mother of Flesh. Red-lipped and
golden-haired. her skin "white as leprosy," she is the Muse's

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alter ego: if the Muse gives immortality, she gives mortality. If
the Muse inspires with the Breathe of Life, Life-in-Death provides the unregenerate clay. We could explore her extensively,
or shudder and pass by, knowing that she is meant to touch an
oxygen-less depth in us.
The human eye sees by the sun; another eye. akin to the moon,
must take over the senses when darkness falls, as it does very
suddenly after the spectral ship takes off. First "four times fifty
living men" drop dead, each with a curse in his eye meant to repel
the Mariner's bodily eye and spur the development of his spiritual eye. He says:
An orphan's curse would drag to hell
A spirit from on high;
But oh! more horrible than that
Is the curse in a dead man's eye!
By the Moon the Mariner finally attains his first epiphany~
How goes the movement from damnation to grace? He mourns
the dead:
The many men, so beautiful!
And they all dead did lie:
And a thousand thousand slimy things
Lived on; and so did I.
The Mariner can still see the dead men; but he cannot see the
"thousand thousand slimy things" that live in the deep. His
confusion about the nature of things he can't see begins to
resolve when he closes his eyes. First "I looked upon the rotting
sea," "I looked upon the rotting deck," "I looked to heaven, and
tried to pray." To no avail, until, "I closed my eyes." He does not
say when he opens them again. Then like a moon rising in the
night, a new eye causes him to see through the darkness. Again
he looks at the sky, the deck, the water, and finally sees:
Beyond the shadow of the ship,
I watched the water-snakes:
They moved in tracks of shining white,
And when they reared, the elfish light
Fell off in hoary flakes.
"Slimy things" have become, with epiphany, "water-snakes."No
longer does the sea "rot:"
Blue, glossy green, and velvet black,
They coiled and swam, and every track
Was a flash of golden fire.
As the Mariner looks for the first time in fearless wonder, the
Albatross falls away. He comes to know something without
desiring possession of its very nature. What is it that he now
knows? He has seen the essence of Creation; he understands a
universal order, born in beauty as well as chaos. As a result he

realizes the futility of apprehending beings with scientific instruments and faculties. When he looks down at the circling, flashing
creatures. he sees through the dark; he succumbs to the circling.
the confusion, that prepares the mind for its flash of understanding.

[Hearing the Invisible]
Beast and man take their places in the cosmos for the Mariner;
now he must learn to comprehend the spirits. After seeing into
the depths, the Mariner hears the music of the spheres.
In part V, the spirit world perfonns an opera. The Moon and
stars are still out. but joined by stonn clouds, lightning, and
torrential rain.
And soon I heard a roaring wind:
It did not come anear....

And the coming wind did roar more loud,
And the sails did sigh like sedge;
- and, in the commotion The dead men gave a groan.
Under these supernal auspices, the dead rise, possessed by an
angelic troop, to work the ship. Like the Albatross. they give it
t~e means to go, and they also steer. The Mariner works alongside them and pulls "at one rope" with a spirit. He becomes one
of them even as they become one of him in their borrowed
bodies. Their steering represents what happens when spirit joins
man to overcome the dead, chaotic matter of Nature: a direction
may be taken.
This is exactly his second epiphany. For at dawn, when the
troop departs,
Sweet sounds rose slowly through their mouths,
And from their bodies passed.
Around, around, flew each sweet sound.
Then darted to the Sun;
Slowly the sounds came back again,
Now mixed, now one by one.
After the opera of chaos, true music plays. The Mariner compares these sounds to three things: angels' song (a bow to the
supernatural), songbirds (a bow to Nature), and musical instruments (a bow to man's art). The possible harmony of these three
reahns - so unfortunately sundered, only seen together through
the power of clairvoyance - transfonns the Mariner again. He
hears the Invisible.

IV - The Two Epiphanies in the
Ideal Reader
. :r?e Mariner's epiphanies. seeing in the dark and hearing the
mv1s1ble, are repeated elsewhere - in the heart of the reader
reading the poem. The reader sets forth on the sea of Coleridge's
cosmos, and comes to the last of its 625 lines. She more than
likely will begin again; her mind acts out the circling and circling
that is confusion. Too much remains unsaid or invisible to her.
But as she begins to penetrate, she comes to clairvoyance.
We achieve our first level of understanding when we "see in
the dark" - order inchoate images in a coherent way. We have
been doing that quite a bit up till now. One of the first questions
we asked was, "Who is the Mariner?" Putting images together,
we created a picture, made him visible to us. Through another
image, we answered for ourselves the question of why he killed
the Albatross. Seeing in the dark requires, for us, letting images
answer to the unsaid; we allowed ourselves to imagine obscurity,
ambiguity, mist and moonlight, until we realized that ambiguity
compelled the Mariner to test his senses. After we learn to see
the meaning in recurring images, we learn to hear meaning in
recurring rhythms. The ability to do both results in a kind of
clairvoyance.
The paradigmatic pattern of the poem is the circle, a continual
return to the same places, same images, same rhythms. The
archetypal wanderer is not so much the time-traveler, faring ever
forward, but the earth traveler, following the circles of latitude
and longitude. Thus the hill, lighthouse, and kirk in the beginning
of the tale recur at the end. On the outskirts of that tale, we come
to a wedding, depart, and return to it. The Mariner must repeat
his.story again and again. The ship crosses the line once, twice,
thrice. The sun rises, the moon sets, the sun rises. These are
motifs, macro-rhythms in conjunction with micro-rhythms like
meter and rhyme. We will speak of the latter presently; first we
must look at just a few recurring images and see what insights
come to clairvoyant eyes.

[Seeing in the Dark]
Repetitions of images occur in disguise, for instance these
images of chaos from parts II, III. and IV respectively:
About, about, in reel and rout
The death-fires danced at night;
The water, like a witch's oils,
Burnt green, and blue and white.
Blue, glossy green, and velvet black,
They coiled and swam. and every track
Was a flash of golden fire.
I watched the water-snakes:
They moved in tracks of shining white,

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�And when they reared, the elfish light
Fell off in hoary flakes .
The upper air burst into life!
And a hundred fire-flags sheen,
To and fro they were hurried about!
And to and fro, and in and out,
The wan stars danced between.
A Witch's oils, water-snakes, and lightning stonns are all
described by Coleridge in such a way as to conjure up the same
flickering patterns each time. The death-fires and the dancing
stars are also imagistic kin. We think of all of them as images of
chaos. And yet by being orchestrated, they appear to us as chaos
half-ordered.
Such is the effect of another recurring image: that of a
multitude set against a lone one. The many, or chaos, is constantly contrasted to the one, or unity. "One," aloneness, is
always left.
In the first two lines of "The Rime of the Ancient Mariner,"
one meets three; as if by mitosis four divide into two, and by the
very end the last two also divorce. In a poem of two's - a groom
for a bride, a sun for a moon, an eye for an eye - one is the
remainder. We never see the bride and groom together through
the doorway. The spirit world never mingles with the human.
The sun and moon never appear together. The Mariner can
neither hold the Albatross nor the listener. This is a poem of
matter dissolving into atoms:
Water, water, everywhere,
Nor any drop to drink.
Four times fifty living men

ized number is a recipe for incantation. Numbers like three,
seven, and nine occupy the space between unity and chaos where
man's mind lives, makes patterns, an out of patterns, magic.
This seems to be the message encoded in the following stanza
regarding the skeleton ship:

The ice was all between.
The naked hulk alongside came,
And the twain were casting dice;
''The game is done! I've won! I've won!"
Quoth she, and whistles thrice.
Is it real gambling going on? In the words themselves, numbers riddle: the dice are two (because one is a die), and dice
rhymes with thrice. Dice signify chance, but a witch who whistles thrice invokes its opposite, magic. Done rhymes with won,
a homonym and double entendre (the Mariner is the crucial one
to be won); and both eye and ear follow the progress of twain to
one (twain wanes into one). The gambling image- connoting
chance - is counterpointed by the play of number. What is said
and what is unsaid conflict, with the greater weight of truth
resting on the unsaid, the hidden. Hence Coleridge seems to be
making a bid for order underlying chaos. While there is an order,
one must practice magic to learn it.

[Hearing the Invisible]
After looking for epiphanies in patterns of image, we look to
patterns of rhythm for another kind of epiphany. Coleridge
incorporates the music of the sea into his hypnotic poem:
V

/

I.I

/

V

v

,,

v

,,.

v /

/

V

/

The Sun came up upon the left
y

/

The Sun now rose upon tne right
VV

1..1

,/

/

V

And a good south wind sprung up behind

...the stars rush out,
At one stride comes the dark;

And the good south wind still blew behind

And now 'twas like all instruments,
Now like a lonely flute.
The orchestration of many-dropping-to-one prepares us for
disbelief at the Mariner's ending prayer. God may love "all
things both great and small," but even they will drop "one by
one" someday.
But between unity and chaos is the kind of half-order that
orchestrated images represent. A detail like number gains significance: In nature, number is random; in language, it is purposeful.
Chosen numbers are reiterated in the poem: "one of three,"
"three-years child," "I saw a third," "vespers nine," "nine fathoms deep," "seven days," "seven days, seven nights." Symbol-

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Vl..I

/

V

""'v

The ice was here, the ice was there,
The ice was all around.
The overcrowding of "ice was" conveys exactly the crowding in
of the ship. But in the next example, we hear the isolation of:
Alone, alone, all, all alone,
Alone on a wide wide sea!
Here repetition conveys a great deal of space. The long o's
sound like a lone wolf baying. The echo about all-all one-one
goes on and on. The rhythm of "the ICE was ... the ICE was ..."
sounds like teeth gnashing compared to "a-LONE, a-LONE ... ,"
which is all vowel.
Echo also conveys both weariness and excitement:
There passed a weary time. Each throat
Was parched, and glazed each eye.
A weary time! a weary time!
How glazed each weary eye....
The alliteration of passed/parched, the assonance of time/eye,
each/weary, and the repeating of glazed and weary all weigh the
stanza down. But the following is an exciting stanza because as
the Mariner waits with bated breath for the skeleton ship to close
the distance between them, so do the lines:

/V/

They dropped down one by one.

And a thousand thousand slimy things
Lived on; and so did I.

sometimes it is used to accelerate the heart. Echo, rhyme, and
meter provide the tools.
Echo, for instance, is used to convey crowded or empty space,
weariness or excitement. Here the echoing of "ice was" crowds:

.;'

i..J

/

These iambic lines imitate the periodic motion of the sun,
gusts of wind, and ocean waves. Hence the bewitching quality
of the words that force the Wedding-Guest and us to listen "like
a three years' child."
Rhythm carries amazing powers of suggestion. The lines
quoted above are near-repetitions from parts I and II of the poem.
The difference is that between each repetition a crucial act, the
Albatross' murder, has occurred.
Immediately after the murder we are told "The Sun now rose
upon the right" as if the world has taken an 180-degree tum. But
in fact; the universe takes no notice. The turnabout of the sun is
really the turnabout of the south-bound ship, and the underlying
rhythm of the sun, wind, and waves - and of the above lives remains the same. Nature is oblivious to man's drama. Just so,
rhythm is oblivious and inexorable.
Coleridge can, however, half-order that rhythm. At times it
is perfectly regular, giving us a stifled and monotonous feeling;

At first it seemed a little speck,
And then it seemed a mist;
It moved and moved, and took at last
A certain shape, I wist.
A speck, a mist, a shape, I wist!
And still it neared and neared....

and forward bends his head,
The ship drove fast, loud roared the blast,
And southward aye we fled.
Here the bumper-to-bumperrhymes of prow/blow/foe mimic the
intense chase. It is a timely variation that segues promptly into
our established pattern after a caesura between lines 4 and 5. The
internal rhyme in line 5 is typical as well. This is musical
virtuosity!
The tension between regularity and variation in rhyme as well
as meter illustrates the tension between the chaotic "dead" matter
of the elements and the "inspired" matter of the mind. One may
say, for instance, that this is a poem of ballad stanzas, that each
stanza contains alternating tetrameter and trimeter lines, but that
is only so when Coleridge wants to convey weariness or calm:
/VV

"'Vv

.I'

V

"-'.I'

V/V

.I'

We stuck, nor breath, nor motion;
VIJ/

V"

V

/

As idle as a painted ship
v.l'V.I'

V.l'V

Upon a painted ocean.
~_,.

V""V/V/

I woke, and we were sailing on
""'

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/

/

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v

V/IJ

,,.

V

As in a gentle weather:

With sloping masts and dipping prow,
As who pursued with yell and blow
Still treads the shadow of his foe,

t,J

u

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'Twas night, calm night, the moon was high;
v

,,

v

,,.

I.I

,,,.

I.I

The dead men stood together.
These lines are very regular and iambic, with alternating
masculine and feminine end stresses. The fact that feminine, that
is, unstressed syllables end each stanza contributes toward a
low-key, fading-out feeling. And in the painted ship stanza,
where each line is so symmetrical and droning, the long a's and
o's, the multiple p's, don't segue into other sound patterns; they,
and the stanza, go nowhere.
But just eight lines prior to this withering stanza came this
blood-rush:
V/"'

""'V

.;'

/

/

The fair breeze blew, the white foam flew,
V/1.J/v

The entire stanza closes up like a fan, underscored by '·'neared
and neared."
Rhyme is another "echo" constantly bouncing on the ear.
Rather than have meaning in specificity, it has meaning in its
generality, a constant ABCB, DEFE that creates expectation in
the reader of an endless wave-like motion. Sometimes Coleridge
varies with a six-line stanza that rhymes AAABCB or ABCBDB.
Take this stanza:

/

Day after day, day after day,

/

The furrow followed free;
v

v

.Y

VV

V

"'V

v

;

,, v

"'

We were me first that ever burst
/

Into that silent sea.
The variation here takes the fonn of a regrouping of stresses,
all masculine, into what sounds like a longer stanza of shorter
lines. The former stanza was one lone iambic stream: "As idle
as a painted ship upon a painted ocean" seems like a long
sentence, but the strong stresses of "The fair breeze blew/ The
white foam flew" break the stanza into short, fast-moving
phrases. In addition, the alliteration moves us forward: from

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�breeze, blew, burst (from the air) and foam , flew , free (from the
waves) to the deflated sibilants of ~ilent sea.
A similar pattern energizes this stanz~:
v

,,-

_,

"

V/

/

,-

The sun's rim dips, the stars rush out:

°""' "
/ V /
At one stride comes tlie dark.
V/

/;

v

/

v/

With far-heard whisper, o'er the sea,
I./

/

V

It raised my hair, it fanned my cheek
Like a meadow-gale of spring It mingled strangely with my fears,
Yet it felt like a welcoming.

/V~

Off shot the specter-bark.
The first line breaks into two fast-moving lines of three stresses
each; the next line pitches three stresses together to counteract
the tendency of a four-line stanza to sound symmetrical, and the
fourth line metes out four stresses such that the line still strikes
the ear as trimeter. All the way the stanza fights regularity and
symmetry. It is a stanza of wind-gusts rather than waves; inspired
matter, not dead. No wonder we can go from "The fair breeze
blew" to "day after day" in a few short lines. As the rhythm is
apt, our emotions keep pace.
And so we learn to hear. Rhythm buttresses surface meaning
and subtly complicates it; it is like another voice muttering
behind the stage voice. It is difficult to hear, much less make
m~aning o~t of it. But doing so constitutes a second epiphany,
without which the overall meaning of a poem is incomplete.

V - The Final Epiphany
The Mariner endures still more suffering after his epiphanies.
The Polar Spirit gives his ship one last kick, the dead men still
wear a curse in their eyes, two daemons visit the ship while the
Mariner lies paralyzed; they reveal the motive of the Spirit:
He loved the bird who loved the man
Who shot him with his bow.
~ter the ship reaches the "line" for the third time, it is driven
on wmdlessly by angels. The Mariner is in a state of great
uncertainty and isolation; meanwhile, "The dead men stood
together."

All stood together on the deck,
For a charnel-dungeon fitter:
All fixed on me their stony eyes,
That in the Moon did glitter.
Here the living dead seem to stand in condemnation of the
Mariner; he seems utterly forsaken and alone. But without warning, "soon there breathed a wind on me."
Nor sollild nor motion made:
Its path was not upon the sea,
In ripple or in shade.

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This_is the Mariner's third and last epiphany: a life-giving breath
or wmd that blows on him alone, even as the ship moves without
a breeze.

The Mariner, who has finally looked and seen, listened and
heard, is indeed being welcomed. It is the spirit world welcoming
him. Indeed it ought to mingle with his fears; the life of a man
divided between the human and supernatural realms is both a
blessing and a curse. He is no longer wholly human. Even so the
wind is like "a meadow-gale of spring," that time of year V:hen
the air warms things to life. Thus the wind is both unsettling and
comforting to the Mariner.
Yet he is welcomed even as he is bid farewell by the souls
who bring his ship into his home port. After the inspiration lifts
him "sweetly," he turns to the dead men who filled him with
dread and sees with shock:
Each corse lay flat , lifeless and flat,
And, by the holy rood!
A man all light, a seraph-man,
On every corse there stood.
The spirits have bared themselves one last time for the Mariner
to see before they depart. "Each waved his hand" to the Mariner.
The inspiration he had enables him to divide spirits from dead
matter, the angels from the corpses; he now is himself a hybrid:
a human body with a supernatural eye.
The Mariner is Wlequivocally exiled from the spirit world.
His ship is sunk with all two hundred corpses. No physical
evidence remains of his voyage; proof is impossible.
No more does the Mariner belong to men, either. Rescued
from drowning by three men in a skiff, he promptly drives two
of them to the brink of madness.
I pass, like night, from land to land;
I have strange power of speech;
That moment that his face I see,
I know the man that must hear me:
To him my tale I teach.
Only one out of three may receive the terrible truths the
~ner knows: This knowledge of the larger world encompass-

mg and governmg man's small and myopic one is taboo; it has
the power of ruining man's order. Thus does the Mariner "pass
like night:" night is also anarchic and taboo, and we would rather
receive its witch's truths in dreams.
"Say quick," gasps the Hermit who saves the Mariner, "I bid
thee say - what manner of man art thou?" This, the question
that silently accompanied the arrow to the Albatross, cannot be

answered quickly or forwardly. It is answered with a riddle this poem. Plain language, simple and natural categories, are
preposterous things to use to describe the plenitude of the universe.

VI - The Reader's Final Epiphany
How are we to speak of the third epiphany, L'le experience of
a life-giving breeze, as it applies to the reader? This breeze is as
individual, and inexplicable, as vocation. It is the breath upon
the face of the deep prior to Genesis. It is inspiration.
Let us return, briefly, to the gospel of Matthew, chapter 13,
which began this essay. When asked by his disciples why parables were his method of teaching, Jesus replied:
Because it is given unto you to know the mysteries of the
kingdom of heaven, but to them it is not given .... Therefore I
speak to them in parables: because they seeing see not; and
hearing they hear not, neither do they understand.

We can imagine the effect of "The Rime of the Ancient
Mariner" on the soils of various imaginations, some rocky, some
thorny, and some fertile. Those who read hoping for an easy
moral constitute shallow soil, where nothing grows. They leave
the poem disturbed and dissatisfied with its ambiguities. Others
might attain the epiphanies of sight or sound and yet not feel the
breeze that bestows fertility or creativity: these are the readers
who constitute thorny soil, where new life flourishes briefly, but
withers from neglect.
But how does one explain the fact that some fertile souls take
the Mariner's seed to heart?
In other words: Reading ''The Rime of the Ancient Mariner"
will leave some of us confused and frustrated; some of us will
pore over it till it yields its secrets, and some fewer of us will be
compelled to make our way into the spirit world ourselves. We
do so by setting sail, by putting ourselves in the hands of a larger
power beyond the shores of the known. And there is no question
but that we too must shoot the Albatross, succumb to Nature,
pass through the initiation of the spirits, and live to tell the story.
Our achievement of clairvoyance depends on our willingness to
go to any length to penetrate mystery.

So Coleridge seems to believe. The Mariner deliberately sails
off into the unknown. Having gone beyond "the line" and to a
realm bordering on the spirit world, he cannot make out the
nature of things with his mortal eye. When the Albatross arrives
to guide him, he cannot put his faith in it, and shoots it to answer
his own inquiry into its soul. This violation incurs the wrath and
reward of the spirits: on the one hand the Polar Spirit pursues
him in vengeance; on the other hand Life-in-Death rewards his
pursuit of knowledge with a knowledge of the order and
plentitude of the cosmos. Thus he becomes a clairvoyant, cursed
and blessed.

Myopic man, the natural philosopher, shuns prophets such as
the Mariner, perhaps because prophecy could drive him mad, or
perhaps because there is no way to make a man see.
Yet I do not doubt that sometimes it is well for the soul to
contemplate as in a picture the image of a larger and better world,
~est the mind, habituated to the small concerns of daily life, limit
itself too much and sink entirely into trivial thinking. But meanwhile we must be on watch for the truth, avoiding extremes, so
that we may distinguish certain from uncertain, day from night.

By the poem's end, Coleridge has made a mockery of his chosen
epigraph. Here, the supernatural is presented as a tonic for the
natural philosopher who has overdosed on prosaism: The academic mind is told to read a few poems once in a while. The
warning against extremes seems especially fllilny to the readers
of Coleridge, who said, "Grant me a nature having two contrary
forces," and "Extremes meet."

VII - The Wedding on the Periphery,
Part Two
What loud uproar bursts from that door!
The wedding-guests are there:
But in the garden-bower the bride
And bride-maids singing are:
And hark the little vesper-bell,
Which biddeth me to prayer!
Looking through the doorframe, we glimpse a singing bride
enveloped in a protective bower. How frail that bower seems
after such a tale! How vulnerable the bride, how deceptive the
prettiness of gardens and the strength of human covenants like
marriage! The daemonism of the cosmos lurks palpably near.
At the moment that a bell rings, the Mariner utters a prayer:
0 Wedding-Guest! This soul hath been
Alone on a wide wide sea:
So lonely ' twas, that God himself
Scarce seemed there to be.
0 sweeter than the marriage-feast,
'Tis sweeter far to me,
To walk together to the kirk
With a goodly company! To walk together to the kirk,
And all together pray,
While each to his great Father bends,
Old men, and babes, and loving friends
And youths and maidens gay!

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�Farewell! farewell! But this I tell
To thee, thou Wedding-Guest!
He prayeth well, who loveth well
Both bird and man and beast.
He prayeth best, who loveth best
All things both great and small;
For the dear God who loveth us,
He made and loveth all.
This prayer, so seemingly sentimental that even Coleridge
regretted ending the poem with it, is in fact not sentimental: it is
a gesture of propitiation, an ancient display of piety that runs the
gamut from human sacrifice to crossing oneself in a thunderstorm. The impulse to walk with a goodly company is that
ancient impulse to ward off evil with sheer number. "Farewell,"
he tells his listener, but is it like the farewell of the spirits on the
ship - that is, just another covert welcoming to the fold of the
blessed and the damned? And why does he repeat "thee, thou
Wedding-Guest!" as though he were mocking the fact that his
listener will not cross that threshold, will not join the company,
is no longer the Bridegroom's kinsman but the Mariner's? Why
tell him to love, and to pray? This moral lacks power. We have
seen what the real cosmos is like, and "God himself/ Scarce
seemed there to be." The Mariner has come from the land of Cain
to turn this wedding's wine to vinegar.
It is fitting that a tale about the world outside the world is told
through a frame within a frame. Herein lies the real moral: the
Wedding-Guest never goes through those doors; he is sundered
from his kinsmen. He rises the next morning "a sadder and a
wiser man" and we feel almost as though another story is
beginning. But it would only turn out to be the same story in the
end.

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�Animals in Motion: the
Flattery of Becoming in
Plato's Timaeus
Peter Kalkavage
...it has appeared to me more fitting to go directly to the effectual
truth of the thing than to the imagination of it. And many have
imagined republics and principalities that have never been seen
or known to exist in truth ...
Machiavelli, The Prince XV

Towards the beginning of the Timaeus, Socrates articulates a
most unusual desire. He tells Timaeus, Critias, and Hermocrates
that he wants to see the just city go off to war. Socrates describes
his feeling - his mx0o~. as he calls it - through an image. Here
is what he says:
It's as if someone who gazed upon beautiful animals somewhere,
either fashioned by the art of painting or truly living but at rest,
~ived at the desire to gaze upon them moving and struggling
m some contest that seemed suited to their bodies. (19b4-cl)

Socrates' desire gives rise to a barrage of questions. Why does
he want such a vision? What is there about it that would gratify
him? Is an animal more beautiful- or more of an animalwhen moving than at rest? And where is this someone to whom
Socrates compares himself? Is he in the wild looking at real
animals or only at the movies looking at their images? That is,
is he in the sunlight or in the cave? Apparently, it makes no
difference. It is the motion that counts, the motion as such that
is the object of desire. Socrates wants to gaze upon, to contemplate, beautiful animals in motion. He is resting from his customary passion for inquiry. With the desire for such contemplation,
the Timaeus moves us from the serene realm of being to the
troubled and turbulent world of becoming. It moves us away
from the speeches of the dialectician and towards those of the
historian, statesman, poet, and physicist.
The man who gazes upon beautiful animals is the central
image of the Timaeus. If only we could understand it, we would
then understand the entire dialogue. This essay is an attempt to
see how the famous likely story of Timaeus responds to Socrates'
curious desire.
The Timaeus presents itself as a sequel to the Republic. And
yet it is far from clear why a sequel is at all necessary, still less
clear why the sequel should have a physics as its centerpiece and
jewel. What is abundantly clear is that the Timaeus is above all
a political dialogue. Whereas the Republic moved from the
practical-political question of justice to the transpolitical nature
of philosophy, the Timaeus returns us, with a vengeance, to the
passionate concern for the political as such. We see this in a
number of ways: in the opening "summary" of the Republic,
which concentrates on the political nature of that dialogue to the
exclusion of the higher life of philosophic virtue, in Socrates'

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desire to see the best city brought to life in the arena of mortality
and war, and in the eminently political nature of Socrates' three
hosts. Of these three, it is perhaps He.. nocrates, the least talkative of the group, who best exemplifies what the Timaeus is
really about - the transition from mere speech to living deed.
Hermocrates is one of the most illustrious heroes in Thucydides'
account of the war between Athens and Sparta, the Syracusan
statesman whose rhetoric unifies Sicily and plays a central role
in the ultimate defeat of the Athenian forces. In the Platonic
drama Hermocrates plays a similar role. His two brief speeches
- one in the Timaeus and the other in the Critias - are both
intended to beget action, specifically, to goad Critias into telling
his story about the once glorious Athenians, to draw Critias out,
as it were, into the battlefield of speech.
Critias is the focal point of the dialogue. It is he who claims
to have just the speech to satisfy Socrates' desire, a story about
an Athens grown young and beautiful. Critias makes it very clear
that for him the just city in speech was nothing but a fairy tale.
He tells Socrates: "the city and citizens that you went through
for us yesterday as in a myth, we shall transport back into the
truth" (26c7-dl). Critias identifies the truth with what the politically-minded call "the real world," the world of body and
motion. In this he agrees with Machiavelli that the truth is to be
found not in the imagined republics of the philosophers but in
the deeds of history. Critias is the dialogue's radical spokesman
for the claims of becoming, for the claim that truth is fact.
Through the character of Critias we see how the project underway in the Timaeus, far from attempting to complete the Republic, is in fact an attack upon that dialogue' s praise of philosophy.
Nothing is more characteristic of Critias than his lack of
imagination. The story of Atlantis is as far-fetched a tale as we
are likely to hear, and yet Critias insists that it is "true in every
way" (20d8). He refers to it repeatedly as a A.6ruc; rather than a
µueo~. In short he confuses history and poetry. The author of
this confusion seems to be none other than Solon, the famous
poet-lawgiver, who brought the story back from Egypt. No
sooner does Solon get his hands on the story in praise of Athens
than he proceeds to compose a poem about it, a poem which, if
only Solon had completed it, would have made him more famous
than Homer (21c4ft)!
In contrast with Critias, who scorns all images only to fall
victim to their power, Timaeus comes forth as one of the greatest
defenders of images and imitation in all the Platonic dialogues.
The account he will give Socrates is not "true in every way" but
a likely story.
Timaeus gives two reasons why physics must take the form
of a likely story. The first is that becoming, the object of physics,
is inherently unstable. Whereas being is always what it is,
becoming is always ceasing to be what it is and coming to be
what it is not (27d5-28a4). The second reason is human nature.
Here is what Timaeus says:
But if we provide likenesses inferior to none, you should be
happy with them, remembering that I who speak and you my
judges have a human nature, so that for those who are receptive

to the likely story, it is fitting to search for nothing more beyond
it. (29c3-d3)

The like!y story emerges from the context of human imperfection
and vulnerability. As Timaeus says later, when he mixes up the
natural order of soul and body, "we who have a great share in
the chancy and random do so also when we speak" (34c2-4). We
recall how the dialogue opens. Socrates' ability to count the
human order also allows him to know that something is missing:
"One, two, three - but where, dear Timaeus, is the fourth?"
Timaeus' answer is the very first likely story he gives. "Must be
some infirmity," he conjectures (17a4). The dialogue opens, in
other words, in a way that playfully mimics the world as Timaeus
sees it - _ athematically ordered but at the same time imperfect.
m
Socrates' count mirrors the inescapable togetherness of strength
and weakness, calculation and the incalculable, in all matters
pertaining to the physical world. It is a prophecy of the drama to
come.
When Socrates asked for a speech about the just city at war,
he was not asking to be informed. It was not as though the
Republic left something out. What Socrates wanted was to hear
his city and citizens praised. He wanted, as he says, an encomium
and confessed his inability to supply it (19d2). Now an encomium is just what Critias provides, namely, an elaborate flattery
of his own city's glorious ancestors. But Timaeus too fits into
the drama of praise. The word Kocrµo~ means not only order but
also ornament. It suggests the heightening and embellishment of
looks, a beautification and flattery. This is just what Timaeus
does with the cosmos - he makes it look beautiful. The cosmos
of Timaeus is not just an ordered whole but an animal, and not
just an animal but a god. It is, he says, a happy god (34b8-9).
Timaeus goes so far in his beautification of the world as to deify
it. The whole likely story is a hymn of praise to the god Kosmos,
who, as we hear in the dialogue's closing lines, is "the greatest
and best and most beautiful and most perfect" of all generated
things (92c7-8).
Clearly, Timaeus intends not merely to speak about the
cosmos but to arouse our love and admiration for it. In the
prologue, Critias refers at one point to the Koureotis (21 b2), the
festival in which Athenian youths were welcomed into the fold
of the city. The youths compete in the recitation of poems, among
them the poems of Solon. We must imagine that the impressionable souls of these youths, through the music of Solon's poetry,
become knit to the fabric of the city, rooted in the v6µot of their
fatherland. Something similar is happening in the likely story. In
being receptive to Timaeus' speech, we are assimilating ourselves to the cosmic regime that transcends our more narrowly
conceived political communities; we are enacting the proper and
respectful relationship between the human soul and the divinely
established order. Socrates, it seems, was being prophetic when
he called the likely story a voµ0&lt;;, a word that means both "law"
and "song" (29d6). He seems to have divined that the music of
Timaeus, while extolling an order that goes beyond all cities,
would nevertheless have a quasi-political end - the instilling of
piety towards our cosmic fatherland.

The entire likely story is a grand act of imitation. Timaeus
imitates the divine work by which the unmelodious chaos became an artfully arranged whole (30a2-6). In the first part of the
story, he imitates the construction of the highest visible things
- the cosmic body and soul, the circular motions of the heavens,
time, and all the stars and planets. This whole first part is ruled
by the supreme goodness of intelligence. Such goodness manifests itself for Timaeus in the objects of mathematics, particularly in the binding power of 'auaA.o)'La or proportion. The
mathematical objects have a primarily political function; they
are appointed as the guardians of all decency and good character.
In their provision of boundaries, they are to the world what laws
are to the city. They make the cosmos just. The moral and
political goodness of the whole is rooted, mythically, in the
moral goodness of Timaeus' demiurge or craftsman. This craftsman, we are told, lacked envy (29el-2). He did not cling to the
perfection in himself but wished to pass it on to his offspring.
The divine craftsman thus comes to resemble a political founder
like Solon or Lycurgus. The world for Timaeus is an altogether
noble poem written by a morally wise and generous poet-statesman. And yet, like any human poet-statesman, the divine craftsman must surely be filled with the love of begetting, with the
l£pmc; wu ')'EWW which Timaeus describes at the end of the
dialogue (91b4). Why else would his passion turn from seeing
to making? As the craftsman gazes upon the world's intelligible
archetype, he must be longing to see it become a beautiful animal
in motion, an animal that will, in being generated, reflect his own
good looks. The lack of envy sounds suspiciously like the human
desire to beget beautiful images of oneself.
Timaeus is out to praise imitation. The method of the astronomers gives him an excellent opportunity to do so. Referring to
the astronomer's attempt to plot the heavenly motions, he says:
"to speak of these things without looking at their imitations is
vain labor" (40d2-3). Timaeus is referring to the astronomer's
mathematical hypotheses, to something like Ptolemy's eccentric
circle and epicycle. Such hypotheses are not meant to be taken
literally, as the actual mechanisms by which the stars accomplish
their motions. Ptolemy himself calls them "likenesses manufactured by us" (Almagest XIII.ii). To construct such likely stories
about motion is precisely what it means to "save" the appearances. But more is being saved here than just the appearances.
The human good for Timaeus is our assimilation to the divine
order. It is through astronomy that this assimilation is brought
about. In Timaeus' words, "through learning and sharing in
calculations that are by nature right, by imitating the absolutely
unwavering motions of the gods, we might stabilize the wanderings within ourselves" (47cl-4). By giving the heavens a divine
soul, Timaeus gives the world interiority and good judgement.
Circular motion becomes an outwardly displayed image of
thinking as a turning inward upon oneself. The fact that we
sometimes refer to thinking as a reflection, that is, as a bending
back, reveals the implicit connection between thoughtfulness
and circularity. The circles of Same and Other are the motions
of good judgement (37a2-c5). When we look up at the stars at

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�night, we are gazing not outward but inward; we are looking at
the best and most precious part of ourselves. Since we originated
in the stars, we are also gazing into our own glorious past. What
Critias is doing in his praise of the ancient Athenians, Timaeus
is doing for everyone in the likely story. Astronomy is the true
homecoming of the human soul. It returns us to what Timaeus
calls "the look of our first and best condition" (42d2).
As long as Timaeus stays with the heavenly things, he is in a
realm that is virtually problem-free. To be sure, the heavenly
motions are very complicated in how they appear to us. But in
themselves they are divine motions, good motions, and are
therefore friendly to mathematical inquiry. We must never forget
how successful Ptolemy is in accounting for all the motions that
can be seen with the naked eye.
All this changes once Timaeus descends from the heavens,
once he enters the realm of becoming and mortality, the realm
of being-at-war. But he must enter this world; he must descend
from the heavens or the heavens themselves will be incomplete
(4lb7-8).
The descent of Timaeus begins with the construction of
human nature. The human condition reminds Timaeus that the
whole account so far has been one-sided in its devotion to
goodness and beauty. There is another principle or beginning,
another hpxfi without which the world as a whole could not have
been made. This principle is necessity. Timaeus calls it "the look
or form of the wandering cause" (48a6-7). Necessity is the
unpredictable realm of power, expediency, and war. It is the
realm on which Machiavelli so likes to gaze, and indeed
Timaeus' wandering cause in part resembles what Machiavelli
refers to as "fortune." Timaeus has tried to build the world from
the top down. Now he must try to build it from the bottom up. In
his new beginning - the most interesting and most problematic
moment in the whole likely story - he will give us a more
accurate portrait of what it means to imitate.
Socrates' desire was for a vision of beautiful animals in
motion. He wanted to see what would happen in taking the leap
from the serenity of being to the turbulence of becoming. With
the excursion into necessity, Timaeus encounters becoming in
its strict meaning, becoming as process. Here, more than anywhere else in the dialogue, Socrates is treated to the vision he
desired. Now beauty is king of the likely story, not beauty as that
which incites erotic love, but beauty in its political aspect, as the
fine or noble which restrains the notorious disorder of erotic love.
This political good is made to shine forth in the guise of beautiful
mathematical structure. For Timaeus, beauty is always connected with stability. To be beautiful is to be solid, that is,
dependable. Indeed, in his first founding, Timaeus crafted the
world as an image of changeless being, not to ground the world
in a truth available to the intellect but to make the world as stable
as possible (28a6-b2). Timaeus strongly disagrees with the poets
who would have us believe that a rose is all the more beautiful
for being mortal. But becoming is pure process, pure flux. How
in the world can such a thing be rendered beautiful and stable?
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the sea. Timaeus knows that here he is up against an especially
elusive problem of saving the appearances. He calls on the help
of Zeus, the Savior (48d4-5).
Timaeus uses an image to capture the fleeting look of becoming; the image is that of a new demiurge. Becoming, he says, is
like a man who molds all possible shapes out of gold (50a5 ff) .
The man does not stop when a figure is completed but continually transforms every figure into every other figure. In the
process of a figure's coming to be what it is, the figure is already
passing away. What Timaeus is describing here is the transmutation of the four elements of body - earth, air, fire, and water.
To give an account of becoming is to say how these four elements
are involved in the continual process of turning into one another.
The problem of becoming is this: to save the restless look of
becoming as process while at the same time saving the distinct
and quasi-stable looks of earth, air, fire, and water. The problem
is that of knowing how to harmonize motion and form. That the
medium of becoming is likened to gold, a beautiful and precious
metal, is important. It expresses Timaeus' unremitting passion
for adornment. The flattery of becoming is already underway.
Timaeus first tackles the problem of the fluid medium. He
refers to this medium in a variety of ways. He calls it the
receptacle, fntoBoxil, and space, xropa (51a5, 52a8). Its nature
consists in its exquisite receptivity to form,.its power to capture
the looks of earth, air, fire, and water. It is like the shiny surface
of a mirror or better - since Timaeus endows it with motion
(53a3-4) - like the surface of a rippling pool. In order to reflect
the looks of the elements, the receptacle must itself be pure, void
of all form. We might say that the only real looks that the
receptacle has are the ones it steals from somewhere else. The
receptacle is like any human imitator, any poet or sophist. Again
using an art that aims at flattery and beautification, Timaeus
compares the receptacle to the neutral base used by the makers
of perfumes (50e4-51al).
In his first account of beginnings, Timaeus had distinguished
two factors involved in imitation-the original form or archetype and the image that was patterned after it. He made no
mention of the reflecting medium. In his new beginning, he
revises the account of imitation by introducing this third and
necessary factor. The whole truth about imitation is that imitation requires three things: the image that comes to be, that from
which it is likened, and that in which it comes to be. Once again
Timaeus uses an image to clarify his meaning, only this time the
image is that of sexual generation rather than craftsmanship: the
original e'tooc; is like a father, the receptacle like a mother, and
the resulting image like their offspring (50c7-el). With this
simile, we are being reminded that sexual generation is, among
other things, a form of imitation. We are also being reminded
that the word for becoming, ,,Evecm;, is also the word for generation and birth. The receptacle not only provides room for all
things; it also gives them their fleeting life. It is the womb in
which all mortal things live, move, and have their being. In
descending from the stars to becoming, we are passing from one
region of life to another, from the intellectual cycles of the

heavens to the biological cycles of organisms. We are descending from astronomy to embryology.
Timaeus braces us for his account of the elements. He calls
it "strange and uncustomary" (48d5-6). At this point Timaeus
shifts from the phrase "likely" µue0&lt;; (29d2) to "likely" AO)Ut
(48d2). Story has become account. Timaeus is starting to sound
like Critias! He tells us that the "account" will be even more
likely than what has come before (48d3). What this means,
however - as we shall see - is not that the account will be
closer to the truth, but that it will be more imitative, more
mythical, more removed from the truth. Apparently, Timaeus'
speech at this point will be even more like a beautiful animal
fashioned by the art of painting, life-like but not truly living.
The construction of body is one of the two most impressive
architectural feats in the likely story. The other is the composition of the soul out of the musical ratios. Now the soul is an
intelligible being, not a body. It makes sense that an intelligible
being should have an intelligible structure. What, then, are we
doing when we turn our intellectual gaze to body? What does it
mean to think body? Is this not a contradiction in terms?
In Book IX of the Republic, Socrates commands Glaucon to
mold an image of the human soul in speech. Glaucon responds:
"since speech is more easily molded than wax and the like, let it
be molded" (588dl-2). In his account of body, Timaeus takes
full advantage of this demonic power of human speech, this
capacity for imitation. He reconstructs body, founds a body in
speech, so as to make body thinkable. He treats physical body as
though it were a mathematical body in motion. The "as though"
is the most important thing here. Timaeus is being playful. He
knows full well that sensed bodies cannot be built up literally out
of mathematical objects. He warned us beforehand that the
account of body would be strange! In mathematicizing body, in
making it a fit object for gazing, Timaeus blurs the distinction
between two senses of body - body as geometrical solid and
body as physical solid. He defines body as that which "has depth"
(53c5-6), thus locating the solidity of body in three-dimensionality rather than in impenetrability. Armed with this slippery
definition, Timaeus can shuttle back and forth between the
properties of geometric body and those of physical body, between the body in speech and the body in deed. Mathematical
physics in this way comes to be founded on a pun. It is this pun
that allows body to shine in the mind's eye.
In Timaeus' earlier account of body, the four elements were
beautifully arranged in a double mean proportion: fire: air:: air:
water :: water : earth. They did not interact and waged no wars.
They held fast to the integrity of their own forms. Most interesting was fire. In the first account of body, fire was not violent at
all. It was put in its best and most serene light as the source of
the world's visibility, just as earth was defined not in terms of
its stubborn resistance to change but as the cause of tangibleness
(31b4- 32c4). Air and water came on the scene there only for
reasons having to do with orderliness, because the cosmos is
solid in shape and because a solid requires the presence of two
mean proportionals. Their physical properties were completely

suppressed on behalf of their mathematical function. In this first
account of body, body is altogether noble; it is the natural friend
of intelligence.
In the second founding body changes its character. The
receptacle is not by nature a friend of intelligence, although it
can be persuaded, as Timaeus says, to take on beautiful forms
(48a2-5). Apparently, the mother of becoming is susceptible to
flattery.
This persuasion of necessity seems to be none other than
Timaeus' mathematical construction of the four elements.
Timaeus' account, like the divine intellect of the story, aims at
persuasion. It will attempt to elicit our trust in beautiful images,
to win us over to its poetry. The eliciting of our trust begins with
the selection of the regular Platonic solids. Four of the solids are
assigned to the four elements: the pyramid to fire, the octahedron
to air, the icosahedron to water, and the cube to earth (55d6-8).
The regular solids are chosen because of their consummate
beauty; they are "the most beautiful bodies" (53el). Next to the
sphere, these bodies are the most regular of three-dimensional
objects, the very picture of lawfulness. In English the adjective
"becoming" sums up Timaeus' dual use of the beautiful. When
someone says, ''Those earrings are becoming," he means both
''They suit you" and "They flatter you." This is exactly the
function of the regular solids in the likely story: they are designed
to fit the appearances and also to flatter them, that is, to make
them more beautiful than they really are. The regular solids are,
as we say, becoming.
The fifth regular solid, the dodecahedron, has an extremely
suggestive use in the likely story, especially when we recall
Socrates' desire for a vision of beautiful animals in motion. The
god uses it in making the zodiac or, as Timaeus puts it, "in
decorating the whole with paintings of animals" (8ta~roypa&lt;J&gt;rov,
55c4-6). The dodecahedron is given scant attention and would
seem to be superfluous: since there are only four elements, we
presumably need only four of the five solids. The god takes the
fifth solid and- gratuitously, almost whimsically- tosses it
in the sky, aligning its twelve pentagonal faces with the twelve
"animals" of the zodiac. But this gratuitous use of the dodecahedron really brings out what Timaeus is doing throughout the
likely story and especially in his elaborate treatment of necessity
- he is attempting to persuade us that the only world worth
contemplating is one that goes beyond the merely useful, one
that has been beautified by the mathematical arts. Now Timaeus
discovered that he needed necessity when the gods were making
our eyes (45b2 ft) . Vision exists for the sake of a noble end the contemplation of the heavens (47al ft). But without the
mechanism of the eyes - without the necessary powers of earth,
air, fire, and water- vision cannot come into being. The noble
end requires necessary means. Now why spend so much time
beautifying the elements if all that really interests us are their
powers and functions? The beautiful comes to light precisely in
the gratuitous, that is, in the luxurious, in what goes beyond the
useful and necessary. The dodecahedron tells us loud and clear
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�happy in the city of sows, the city of "utmost necessity," in the
Republic (II.369dl 1, 372d4-5) . Quite apart from how useful the

receptacle and its four powers are, the receptacle's plain but
supple face is simply begging for something unnecessary that
would "complete its look." No wonder Timaeus gets carried
away in his extensive treatment of necessity. He has made
necessity as such beautiful, necessity apart from the noble ends
that necessity was supposed to serve.
Earlier we noted that the problem posed by becoming was to
save the phenomenon of transmutation while also saving the
quasi-stable looks that entered into this process. Timaeus finds
his solution in the regular solids. The elements can change into
one another because, unlike the atoms of Lucretius, they are not
simple uncuttable bodies but have parts. A given arrangement of
parts may be said to define a given element. The pyramid is a
certain arrangement of triangles that now, in speech, defines the
element of fire. Change the arrangement and you change the
element. In this mythical mathematics of body, the intelligible .
look or effoc; of an element is being located in its geometric
shape. The thing's being now lies in its structure. When that
structure changes, the being or whatness changes; the element
turns into a new element with altogether different properties
from what it had before. This structure gives each element the
integrity of a highly distinctive look, in fact, a flattering look. At
the same time, the structure is mortal, vulnerable, in so far as it
can be taken apart, decomposed. The fascinating transmutation
of the four elements has been rationalized as a reshuffling and
displacement of structural parts.
Timaeus' method of construction is highly interesting. It
shows us the precise sense in which Timaeus is an imitator and
poet. First he constructs the geometrical analogues of the four
elements. Only afterwards does he show how the various affections and motions of the elements could be conceived, imagined,
as the result of mathematical structure. The same procedure can
be found in the Almagest. Ptolemy first constructs his mathematical hypotheses and afterwards fits the appearances into them. It
is almost as though the appearances exist so that we might see
in them the beautiful painted animal of our hypotheses. Once
Timaeus constructs the regular solids, he proceeds to establish a
correspondence between the geometrical properties of the one
and the physical properties of the other. All proceeds by way of
analogy. The whole account lies in this playful construction of
a mathematical analogue and the establishment of correspondences between this analogue and the appearances. Here is what
happens in the case of fire. The pyramid, Timaeus says, is "the
element and seed offire" (56b3-5). He reminds us in passing that
fire, although conceived as a mathematical object, is nonetheless
part of a living whole. Fire is the Achilles of the elements; it is
the swiftest, most penetrating, and most terrible. The reason or
cause - Timaeus would have us believe - is found in fire's
pyramidal shape: the pyramid has the smallest base, the smallest
volume, and the most acute or "sharpest" angles (56e7 ft). The
pyramid is fire in speech, the painted image of a beautiful animal
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of beautiful animals in motion, Timaeus has fashioned an image
of becoming on which it would be a pleasure to gaze.
At one point Timaeus tells us that w ,enever we look towards
space, that is, towards the receptacle, we become dreamy or, as
we would say, "spaced out" (52b6 ft) . But as mortals we are
constantly looking towards space. Dreaminess is our human
condition. We are constantly thinking, quite unreflectively, that
bodies are real and ideas are fairy tales, that bodies are "concrete"
while ideas are "abstract." We fail to distinguish the dreamy and
evanescent nature of body from what Timaeus calls "the truly
sleepless nature" (52b7), by which he means the ungenerated and
purely intelligible e1ooc;. Bombarded by images, rocked to sleep
by the swaying motions of Mother Becoming, we become anaesthetized to the difference between images and originals.
Because of this powerful and ceaseless anaesthesia, we do not
know what it means to be truly alive. We confuse life with
motion and wakefulness with being excited. We come to resemble the man in Socrates' image who does not seem to care
whether life is real or imaginary so long as it is motion.
The anaesthetic power of space has a special relevance for
the likely story itself, which, after all, is constantly directing our
intellectual gaze towards space. Does Timaeus want to wake us
up, convert us to the "truly sleepless nature?" To answer this
question, we note what Timaeus tells us about space. Space, he
says, is not apprehended through the senses, nor is it an object
of reason. It seems to hover between the senses and reason, to be
in a sort of twilight zone. Timaeus says that space is apprehensible "by a kind of bastard reasoning with non-perception"
(52b2). It is "barely to be trusted." The word for non-perception
here is CxUat09TlcrtCX, the word from which we get our "anaesthesia." By non-perception, Timaeus seems to mean simply the
imagination. Through the power of the imagination, we "see"
things that are not presented to our senses. The geometric construction of the elements was non-perceptive in the sense that it
generated beautiful pictures in the imagination. Indeed, the
account of how space came to be mathematically ordered is
really the beautification of our own imagination of body.
Timaeus begins with the truly sleepless nature - that is, the
purely intelligible form - but it is not his intention to lead us
back there. That would be at variance with his praise of the god
Kosmos. The mathematical disciplines in the Timaeus are not
being used, as they are in the Republic, to turn us towards
dialectic. They are being used instead in their political capacity
- to order the unruly cosmos and the warped imaginings of the
human soul. Timaeus is attempting to persuade us of the goodness of mathematical order, but he is also telling us to be happy
with this conception of goodness and not to search beyond it.
One must not step beyond the laws of one's fatherland. In being
receptive to the likely story, we are still asleep, but at least we
are having better dreams.
As we saw earlier, the likely story of becoming is based on a
noble lie. To render body thinkable, Timaeus cooks up beautiful
geometrical models and then shuttles back and forth between the
two senses of body. He reasons about physical body as though

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it were geometrical and about geometrical body as though it were
physical. Perhaps it would be more accurate to say that Timaeus
manufactures a new theoretical object that illegitimately combines the conflicting natures of the sensed and the intellected,
the body in deed and the body in speech. This is a technically
refined version of the bastard reasoning that for Timaeus characterizes our relation to the poetic sophistry of space (52b2).
Even the noblest mathematical physicist is subject to the conditions of the world on which he gazes. In his noble beginnings,
Timaeus is always very careful to draw a sharp distinction
between image and original. But as he goes on, as he descends
from those beginnings to the various particulars, he seems to
become increasingly caught up in the pseudo-explanatory power
of his bastard triangles. His disturbing playfulness takes the form
of treating these triangles more and more literally, as though they
actually were the cause of physical body. As the likely story
unravels, the distinction between image and original is more and
more blurred, the painted animal more and more confused with
the truly living one. Timaeus is the poet lost in his own poem,
the sophist persuaded by his own bastard reasoning.
The sophistry of Timaeus' account of body is a mirror of the
sophistical nature of space itself. Space seduces us into thinking
that to be is to be spatial (52b3 -5). Let us see how Plato dramatizes this seductiveness of space in Timaeus' account of dimensionality.
In his first founding , Timaeus informed us that the cosmic
body was three-dimensional. It befitted the All, 1tPOmlKT\V, to
be, as he said, "solid-looking," oi:EpEoEtofl (32bl-2). Had it
been fitting for it to be two-dimensional (apparently a real
possibility for Timaeus!), the god would have needed only one
mean proportional rather than two (32a7-bl). The second founding seeks to remain true to the the solid look of body, to body's
appearance of having depth. It constructs geometrical solids.
But what is the origin of their depth? When we examine the
inception of the solids as Timaeus constructs them, we see that
their origin is the plane: "it is a complete necessity that the
plane-nature comprehend depth. And the rectilinear plane is put
together out of triangles" (53c6-8).
Timaeus' solids are built by stitching together their two-dimensional faces. The construction seems harmless enough, yet
it is worlds apart from the one we find in Euclid's Elements.
Euclid begins with the sphere and proceeds to construct the
solids within that sphere. That is to say, Euclid postulates a
naturally existing three-dimensional space of which the plane
and all plane figures may be said to be abstractions. For Timaeus,
on the contrary, the nature of two-dimensionality is prior to,
more natural than that of three-dimensionality: the plane, strange
to say, is more comprehensive and in that sense more real than
the solid. It is very important to remember that in the likely story,
body is not "given;" it must be constructed. This means that the
third dimension of depth, too, exists by construction, by art rather
than by nature. When Timaeus introduced us to the receptacle,
he compared it to gold. This flattered becoming in two ways: first
by making the kinetic material of becoming sound and look like

a precious metal, and secondly by making the receptacle sound
and look three-dimensional. Looking three-dimensional and
"solid" is, after all, more beautiful than looking two-dimensional
and "flat." To stick with Timaeus' gold simile, solid figures are
simply richer, worthier, more valuable than flat ones. The demiurge of this simile sounds at first like a sculptor rather than a
painter. But what are the shapes that appear in this golden
medium? Timaeus' example is -the triangle (50b2). Here he
betrays his preoccupation with the plane as opposed to the solid.
He as much as tells us that the receptacle is by nature flat, that it
is all surface and no depth. Bodily depth, then, is an illusion, the
cunning product of artfully arranged perspectives within the
plane, and Timaeus' flattery of becoming is the technically
beautiful accomodation to that illusion. The regular solids
merely seem to give depth to the receptacle. In fact, these solids
appear to be no more than a cosmetic re-arrangement of the
naturally existing plane. Indeed, as we see from Timaeus' account of the human body, it is the triangle rather than the solid
that dominates and grounds all the motions and affections that
pertain to body. In the warfare between inner and outer that
defines metabolism, it is our triangles that defend the body from
invasion and corruption, just as it is the collapse of our triangles'
structure that spells our death (8lb5 ft). The triangle is Timaeus'
beautiful animal in motion. Contrary to all appearances, the
receptacle is not at all a three-dimensional container but a movie
screen that captures the beautiful appearance rather than the
being of depth. In its natural two-dimensionality, the receptacle
sounds very much like the cave wall of Republic VII, the medium
in which the cave-dwellers, fascinated and "held" by the spectacle of animals in motion, locate their exciting and solid-looking
"real world."
The confusion between plane and solid had been prepared, in
fact, invited, by Socrates' opening image. The man who gazed
on beautiful animals did not care whether these animals were
painted or truly living, that is, two-dimensional or three-dimensional. Socrates underlined a distinction only to erase it. Now
what does it mean to be happy with the plane, to rest content with
the appearance and not the reality of depth? It means to be
superficial, to be content with surface and with opinions undeepened by inquiry. In the Timaeus, this contentment with
surface appears as the love of praise and the concomitant suspension of dialectic. To praise something or someone is to dwell
at the beautiful-seeming surface and, to quote Timaeus, "to
search for nothing more beyond it." In the Symposium, the
dialogue whose dramatic form most resembles that of the
Timaeus, Socrates tries to break through the surface preoccupation with the praise of eproc; in his cross-examination of Agathon.
In the Timaeus, he not only does not break through the surface
but encourages and even compels his hosts to be superficial, to
engage in flattery. When Critias accused Socrates' city of being
merely mythical, he was saying in effect that it was two-dimensional and dead, that it lacked the solidity of a really existing
bodily city. Ironically, what appears in Critias' own story is the
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�depth of philosophical inquiry has been squashed down into the
plane of unreflective v6µrn; or custom, and in which a materialist
physics replaces the "vertical" inquiry into cause with the mere
observation of the whale's customary motions, the whale's
surface (22clff). Perhaps it is only fair that those who accuse
Socrates of being a two-dimensional animal be challenged to
produce what they take to be three-dimensional, solid, and truly
alive, that in doing so they be compelled to reveal their own lack
of depth.
The deepest and in a sense truest part of Timaeus' story is his
description of the receptacle apart from its mathematical ordering, the part in which Timaeus is not trying to flatter becoming
with the illusion of depth but simply tries to tell us what the
receptacle is. As we see, the receptacle is not just the unstable
context for the four elements. It is, more importantly, the medium
and cause of all mortal life. Our humanness inheres in and grows
out of the receptacle. It is thanks to the receptacle that individuals, families, cities and even whole civilizations come to be and
pass away. It is here in the play of powers that animals fight and
cities make war. In Socrates' opening image, someone gazes
upon beautiful animals somewhere, nou (19b6). This somewhere is the receptacle.
But where exactly is this "somewhere?" As we have seen,
Timaeus' ordering of space is virtually indistinguishable from
the ordering of our imagination of space. Within the mythical
context of the likely story, the "outer space" of sensed body is
effectively replaced by the "inner space" of the imagination.
Crudely stated, it is the body in speech that counts - not deeds
per se but stories about deeds. Now it is typical of the likely story
to recreate the outer as something inner, to cause the surface of
body to seem imbued with the depths of soul. According to
Timaeus' first founding, the heavenly motions are only apparently outside us, "up there" in the sky. But in the meaning
conferred on them by the likely story, they become the inward
thinkings of the whole. The entire realm of outer body, the
so-called "external world," is actually within the all-embracing
contemplation of the soul (36d8-e5). The cosmos in speech is an
altogether inward world, the world as contemplated world, or
more accurately, as the world reconstituted and flattered by the
mathematical arts.
The receptacle must be seen in light of the likely story's
attempt to transform the outer into the inner. At its very deepest
level, the receptacle is the soul in its receptivity to images. In its
turbulent and eminently plastic nature we are being invited to
contemplate the excitable and highly impressionable part of our
own souls. One can even go so far as to see in the four elements
a bodily projection of our emotionally charged nature: we are
ambitious like fire, faithless like water, as light-minded as air,
and as incorrigible as earth. In short, the four elements are bodily
µu0ot about the human soul. When Socrates fashioned an image
of his desire and affection, he was gazing upon the just city as
though it were a body capable of motion and rest. But he was
also gazing within himself, contemplating the very part of the
soul that desires and is affected by images of body. The "some-

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where" of Socrates' image is this inner "somewhere," the emotional and unreflective "space" within us that longs to be filled
with moving images.
The more deeply we examine the likely story, the more we
see that its true object is not the cosmos but the human soul in
its relation to the cosmos. Timaeus prepared us for this fact when
he reminded Socrates that "I who speak and you my judges have
a human nature." We recall that human nature was the goal of
the likely story as announced by Critias. Timaeus was to generate
the cosmos down to human nature, to make man a citizen of
becoming so that Critias could then make him a citizen of ancient
Athens (27a2-b6). Timaeus celebrates the Koureotis for man's
cosmic indoctrination, after which Critias celebrates this same
festival for his full-fledged political one. This is the drama of the
Timaeus-Critias.
In Timaeus' flattery of becoming, human nature is given a
decidedly unflattering portrait. The demiurge does not set out to
make man. Man is not a natural end but rather a necessary means
by which the cosmos attains its perfection (41b7 ff). The god
washes his hands of the whole business at this point, goes into
retirement, and bequeaths the unenviable task of making man to
his dutiful sons (42e5-7). Timaeus defines the invention of man
through an oxymoron: the gods are described as O'E~6µeuot
µtat VEtv 'tO 0Eiov, "being reverentto pollute the divine" (69d6).
The self-contradictory phrase captures man's ambiguous place
within the whole, not to mention the ambiguous character of the
whole itself. Man is a desecration of the divine who, for that very
reason, accords with and even fulfills the divine plan.
With the story of human nature, Timaeus reveals his most
central paradox: the cosmos cannot be beautified, flattered to the
hilt, without a descent from the beautiful to the monstrous and
the grotesque. The gods put us together piece by piece, starting
with our heads and working their way down to the sexual organs.
The whole account is meant to impress us with how much
forethought and artistry went into our being. But at the same
time, it tends to remind us of Dr. Frankenstein stitching together
his new man. Timaeus takes human nature as he understands it
and does something extraordinary. He concocts an outrageous
pseudo-scientific myth that compels the depth of soul to show
its true colors at the surface of the body. He does humorously
with the whole body whatErwin Straus does more seriously with
our upright posture. In bringing depth up to the surface, Timaeus
shows once more his connection with the art of painting: he
projects the "deep" or "three-dimensional" soul or principle of
life into the two-dimensionality of body's surface. Simply stated,
he wants being to appear. In the account of human nature, the
tone of the likely story suffers an erosion: the noble poetry of the
astronomer gives way to the black comedy of Aristophanes in
the Symposium. This is especially evident in Timaeus' funny and
yet not at all funny treatment of our sexuality (90e6-91d5).
Timaeus' cosmos, we recall, has two'apxaL, two principles
or beginnings. The good pulls the world up towards the starry
life of intelligence; the necessary pulls it down into the "mighty
river" of becoming (43a6). The likely story dramatizes, in its two

beginnings, this fundamental tension and incoherence within the
cosmos. It mimics its object through a pun on the word hpx~.
Now man, for Timaeus, combines the good and the necessary in
his nature and his outward shape. He is the whale's necessary
incoherence rendered visually explicit. His sphere-shaped head
contains the circles of Same and Other, the divine circles of
reflection and sound-mindedness. The rest of him is elongated,
the outward sign of his exile from the spherical heavens. In an
unmistakable reference to the receptacle, Timaeus calls our
lower passions "terrible and necessary" (69c8-dl). They are
housed in the torso - spiritedness in the chest and the desire for
food and drink in the belly. The pollution of the divine is this
joining of the divine and the bestial. To mitigate its bad effects,
the gods cook up an invention - the neck. The neck, by far the
most striking example of our radically artificial nature, is the
only thing that holds us together. It anchors the head to the body
while at the same time sequestering the head for its divine life of
astronomy. The neck is our constant reminder that our being is
the sacrilegious togetherness of two things that should not be
together but must be together if the cosmos is to be complete.
The mouth is the clearest expression of our contradictory and
profane nature. It was invented for the sake of the noble stream
of speech that flows out and the necessary stream of nutriment
that flows in (75d5-e5). Human nature is caught in the middle of
two streams flowing in opposite directions, pulling human nature
simultaneously towards its two cooperating yet conflicting origins. The fact that we cannot eat and speak at the same time
shows how profoundly incoherent we are. For Timaeus, to be
human is to be altogether tragic. The only cure, short of death,
is the study of astronomy, the study in which we tum away from
our monstrous nature and seek refuge in the act of noble imitation, in the life of the head.
The truth about Timaeus' cosmos is not contained in any of
the things he says about it. It is revealed in the motion of the
likely story, in the path of the construction by which the cosmos
is made. The being of the cosmos lies in its becoming. This
motion is downward; it is tragic motion. If Timaeus' godKosmos
had a voice, he would say with Shakespeare's Richard II,
"Down, down I come, like glist'ring Phaethon" (III.iii). The
whole likely story is one grand descent from deathless being
down to the stars and from the stars down to human nature. As
the likely story moves towards its end, human nature degenerates
into all the various beasts. It gives birth at last to all the animal
possibilities that sleep within it. The hierarchy of beasts, born of
human degeneracy, completes the whole and causes it to be in
full agreement with its intelligible archetype. As the cosmos
degenerates, it becomes more perfect. This is the paradoxical
truth about Timaeus' cosmos. Like man, the god Kosmos, in
spite of his beautiful ordering, is in the end a tragic hero.
When Socrates announced his desire, he warned against the
deficiencies of poets and sophists (19d3 ff.). Poets are too rooted
in their own cities. That is, their tendency to imitate the familiar
and conventional holds them back from contemplating a city that
is good by nature. Sophists, on the other hand, wander too much.

They transcend the poets' attachment to place but end up utterly
placeless, that is, lacking the experience of being political ani- ·
mals. Their failure to be political is exposed in the Gorgias,
where the sophists are portrayed as teaching technique without
the proper use of that technique. The sophists show us that being
outside the city is not necessarily to be above it. Neither poets
nor sophists, it would seem, know how to move vertically into
the third dimension of "depth;" they are rooted ultimately in the
"flatland" of conventional cities.
The center of the likely story is the treatment of the receptacle
and the four elements. It is there that we come to see what a likely
story really is. We see that it shares in the natures of poetry and
sophistry. It is µuern; masquerading as A-6'){)&lt;;. As poetry, it
begets .beautiful images of animals in motion. As sophistry, it
uses a pseudo-science to get us to believe that its images are real.
But Timaeus' relationship to poets and sophists runs deeper
than his scientific methodology. It enforms his whole perception
of the human good in relation to the intellect and the city.
Timaeus is a combination of noble extremes. On the one hand,
he is immersed in conventional political activity: he runs his city
and enjoys its honors (20al-5). On the other hand, as an astronomer, he soars high above all political regimes... or does he?
As the likely story shows, Timaeus seeks to ground our being in
a new and higher regime. He seems to want to redirect our
political spiritedness and piety away from conventional cities
and towards the natural "city" studied by the astronomers. Instead of Solon's political poetry, we now have Timaeus' political
poetry. It seems that Timaeus, even when he soars, cannot escape
his political perspective. Just as he apparently cannot get beyond
the love of honor, he cannot transcend the noble opinion that the
highest human good is stability of character and obedience to
law, political qualities eminently displayed in the stars. Coming
from a city with excellent laws, Timaeus "imitates well the things
on which he has been reared" (19d5-e2). This is the poetic
deficiency of his soul. It helps us to see why Socrates calls the
likely story a v6µrn;, thereby suggesting that Timaeus, no matter
how much he seems to be the lover of natural order, is still bound
by the right opinion of conventional cities. The astronomical side
of Timaeus is sophist-like: it wanders through the heavens with
no thought for political rootedness. All cities are banished from
the likely story: there is no fellowship or community among men
but only the individual and the cosmos. In the character of
Timaeus, Plato has painted a moving picture of the poet-sophist
at his best and most magnificent, a poet-sophist who seems to be
a combination of philosopher and statesman. Timaeus is at once
apolitical and ultrapolitical. His noble extremes do not temper
one another. There is missing that mean position in which the
soul, in leading the philosophic life, soars above the political
perspective without losing sight of its political rootedness. The
Timaeus inevitably brings us back full circle to the Republic, the
dialogue that the Timaeus had pretended to surpass.
Socrates' desire was for a sophistic poem. He wanted to see
beautiful animals in motion. He wanted to be fooled into thinking
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�beautiful image in the way that we all tend to lose omselves in
a truly great poem. Socrates stressed the irrationality of his desire
by repeatedly using words related to feeling and being affected.
He presented himself as "pathetic," as a man at the mercy of
poets and imitators. What is Socrates doing here but imitating
the souls of his hosts? articulating the desire and the 1t6:0o~ that
is theirs? What is Plato doing through Socrates but painting a
moving picture of our own nature in its love affair with moving
pictures?
What, then, is Socrates' true desire? Perhaps, it is to see in
what precise ways the human souls before him will show their
true colors in the act of being painters. The silence of Socrates
is really the contemplation of Socrates. It is the philosophical and
ironic distance at which Socrates places himself with respect to
the realm of all doings and makings. In being entertained, he is
placing himself outside the "real world" of his hosts. As Socrates
himself tells us, he is "at peace'' (27al) while his hosts go off to
war, gratifying the desire that is really theirs. They are the
turbulent object of his serene contemplation. In the Timaeus,
Socrates is gazing, as usual, upon the human soul. He is reflecting on the animal that beautifies itself in order to forget that it is
a monster.

Time the Dominant
John Dunn

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�Origami

"The" Exponential Curve

David Ruy

Henry Higuera
The swan comes to life.
A paper-folded splendor.
The wings flap slowly with a rhythm that could only be life.
The wings flap with caution; a babe-like vanity prevents it from
grace. But the wings flap with a careful wonderment.
Suddenly, a winged flutter; a fluttering sound echoes through
my room. I can only shudder with a blaze of paranoia. I run to
the door and tum the lock; chain the door. There is interested
motion outside the door...

What was that noise?
It was me.

What are you doing?
I am dancing. Dancing, as is usual.
Why are you dancing?
I dance because I need to.
Let me in. I wish to see you dance.
... can only back away. I am not dancing. I have never
danced. I s.it inside this room and fold these pages into swans,
only to wait for them to come to life. I have been waiting for a
long time ...

Tell me if you need anything.
... I need nothing now.
The swan flutters. It turns its head from side to side. Does it
see? Does it smell?
I sit and watch the paper-folded swan. I am nervous, pricked
by a thousand needles of crazed anticipation.
The.swan is flying. It took the air with such nimble agility. I
am excited. I watch the swan. It is beautiful. It is flying.
. I ~m looking through my drawers; I look for string. Once I
f~d It, I shall be able to tie the swan down. I am going to keep
this swan.
I am catching the swan; I hold it in my hands.
It struggles.
This paper-folded swan.
I am tying the string around the neck of the swan; I tighten
th~ noose. I tie the other end to my own wrist. I am going to keep
this swan.
The swan circles ·the room counter-clockwise.
Continuously.
The room is about ten feet by ten feet.
A cage.
A sheet-rock cage.
For the bird.
For me.
But I am delighted. I have the object of my childhood fancy
tied to my wrist. I sit down and watch the beautiful thing as it
flies.
I remember seeing a child yesterday. I find much in common
with the memory of that child right now.

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The child was sitting on a park bench with a wonderful red
balloon tied to its wrist as his parents were walking about the
paths somewhere in the park. The child stared with joyful wonderment at the red balloon - bouncing it up and down with the
string; it was a tantalizing feast for the child - the balloon so
close to escape; it was ready to soar towards the heavens, to crush
the finnament- saved by the subjugation of a child's jealous
fancy.
I find myself in the memory of that child.
The swan is getting stronger.
And stronger...

Please, let me see you.
... stronger. The string starts to cut into the flesh. The pain
grows strong ...

Please, I want to see what you've made.
...stronger. The flesh starts to rip. Blood, dropping by droplets, splashes and stains a wooden floor.
And the swan is growing stronger...

Why won't you let me in?
... stronger. I frantically search for something to cut the line.
My blood is dropping by droplets onto the floor. And the swan
is stronger...

Those who have taken Sophomore Mathematics may have
come across the fact that all pru·abolas are similar - identical in
shape, differing only in size. This is very easy to prove once
Apollonius establishes that every parabola has an axis, and every
so often a Sophomore Math Tutor will ask the class to try and
prove it for themselves. Recently, I discovered, much to my
surprise, that "exponential" curves have exactly the same property: they' re all similar. Stated algebraically, all equations of the
form
or

x'= x +Ina

(see Fig. 1), so that

x = x' - Ina.

Now,

a= elna,

so that

y =aex =(elna)ex'
=ex+ Ina.

Now substitute for

x: = e(x' - Ina) +Ina

=ex.
define similar curves for all values of a and k. This surprised me
because different exponential curves certainly don't look similar
near the origin, but hey, proofs don't lie.
I'm first going to establish this fact algebraically. I don't
consider these proofs especially pretty, and (in the typical way
of algebraic proofs) they don't give much intuitive insight into
why these curves are indeed similar. So, I will follow my
algebraic proofs with a geometrical discussion which, while not
quite rigorous, helps one see why it is that all exponential curves
are similar. In fact, unless you like algebra, you might consider
skipping ahead to Part II.

Are you alright in there?
... stronger. The blood streams from my wrist.
The string becomes singed of redness and the redness slowly
climbs the length of the string as the cotton string slow1 absorbs
y
the redness of my blood.
Chairs are being overturned. Drawers are being pulled from
the desk and thrown. Piles of papers are thrown. I am searching
desperately for something to cut the line. As I frantically search,
I notice many paper-folded swans, come to life, flying within the
room, as if they can feel the opportunity, building to a climax, to
escape from this sheetrock cage.
I finally find a razor. As I take it to the line, I hesitate for a
moment and remember the child. But the pain finds me.
Someone is banging on the door as I cut the line.
With a crash of glass, the fluttering sounds build to a din as
the swans fly through a window. The fluttering echoes from the
distance. From a greater and greater distance, a fainter and fainter
echo catches my ear. The blood flows quietly from my wrist as
I walk to look beyond the smashed window.
I can only vaguely remember the words that were written on
the pages of those paper-folded swans as they fly towards the
town over the landscape that I see beyond my broken windowa landscape composed by some loving hand, so barren and
subjunctive.

Then

Part I. Algebraic Geometry
Prop. 1. Every curve y = aex is identical for all positive values
ofa.
For, let a new origin be chosen on the x-axis, defining new
x-coordinates, x-, and placed a distance of Ina to the left, if a is
greater than 1, or right, if a is less than 1; keep the size of the xand y-units the same.
&gt;"leW

]-y.I

y- t\X is

And this means that in relation to the new origin, with identically-sized x- and y-units, this curve is simply an ex curve,
identical to the ex curve which was relative to the old origin .
Q.E.D.
In other words, trying to vertically "stretch" or "flatten out"
an ex curve doesn't stretch or flatten it out at all, it just moves it
over!

Prop. 2. The curve y = ekx is similar to the curve y =ex for all
positive values of k.
For, let a new origin be placed on the x-axis and new units be
defined:
y' = ky,

that is, the new y-units are 1/k as big as the old; while
x' = kx +Ink,

that is, the new x-units are also 1/k as big as the old, and the new
origin is at a distance of Ink from the old (to the left or right
depending on whether k is greater or less than 1).
new l"---1
y- 0ixis J !

I

I

1.
~K::o

x'-;. In°'
new
LA nit

FIG.1

Ink

FIG.2

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�Then

y=t_
k

and

1

x = k (x' - lnk).

Now substitute for x and y in order to describe y = ekx in terms
of the new coordinates.
Y =ekx
v'

L.=e

k

~(x' - lnk)
k

y' = kex' - Ink
= (elnk)ex' - Ink

= ex' - lnk + Ink
=ex'.

Therefore, in relation to the new origin and measured in the new
units, this curve is simply the ex curve. Q.E.D.

Now, I haven't shown that such curves exists; there might be
a hidden impossibility in the definition. Even if they do exist, I
haven't shown that they're continuous, there might be gaps in
them. But let's assume such curves exists and are continuous. I
also haven't shown that this corresponds to an equation y = aekx;
but in fact with suitable choices of a unit length and an origin,
you can set up coordinate axes such that the curve will correspond to this equation. An illustration of how to do this is given,
without proof, as Appendix I.
Let's also assume that the perpendiculars or ordinates increase continuously too. That is, let us assume that as one
ordinate gets closer to a second without limit, the two will differ
by less than any given length. Not assuming this would amount
to allowing "jumps" in an exponential curve: for if the difference between the smaller and the larger were always greater than
or equal to some finite length, no matter how close together they
were, there would have to be a jump up to the larger - see
Figure 4. So in effect what we 're doing is ruling out jumps in our
curves.

. N_ote that ekx = (ek)x = Kx, where K = ek. Thus this proposition is also about changing the base of the equation: changing
the base of ex both moves the curve over and blows up or shrinks
down the entire picture, but it doesn't alter the shape of the curve.

Prop. 3. The method used in Prop.1 shows that aekx is simply
the ekx curve moved over either to the left or the right.
Prop. 4. Finally, if a or k are negative, that merely reflects the
curve around the x- or y-axi.s, respectively, so no new shape
occurs.

Part II. Geometry

DEF!N1TION. An exponential curve is one with the following
relat10n to some given straight line, called the axi.s: perpendiculars erected until they meet the curve from any set of equidistant
points on the axis will form a series of continuously-proportional
lines. In Fig. 3, if A,B ,C and Dare equidistant, then

The proofs that such "corresponding parts" actually exist run
to a couple of pages, so I have relegated them to an Appendix.
If the claims seem obvious to you from your impressions of
exponential curves, you might skip Appendix II entirely. If you
have doubts, however, or love rigor, I do try to give real proofs.

AB: CD :: AE: CG :: BF: DH (see Fig. 5).

AE: BF:: BF: CG:: CG: DH .

FIG.3

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FIG.6

the same ratio, as Euclid never proves but Heath does; and the
general case is clearly true, even though I don't know of a general
proof. Anyway, since this is so, in our two series of continuouslyproportional ordinates that constant ratio which every ordinate
has to the next is the same for both series.
But there are also exactly as may lines intervening between
DH and LN as there are between BF and KM. Therefore you
have a huge ex aequali: the ratios BF: KM and DH: LN are both
determined by the same ratio compounded with itself the same
number of times. Therefore they're the same:
BF: KM :: DH: LN
or

BF: DH:: KM: LN. Q.E.D.

Thus far I've only handled a special case, ordinates situated
at commensurable distances. But now let there be ordinates at K
and L, and let BK and DL be proportional to but incommensurable with AB and CD. I say that KM and LN are still proportional to BF and DH. For, 0 and P exist on the axes such that the
distances BO and DP are proportional to and commensurable
with AB and CD, and also such that the ordinates OQ and PR
are closer to KM and LN than any given distance. (See Figure
7.) Therefore OQ and PR can be chosen closer in length to KM
and LN than any given length. Now OQ and PR can be chosen
closer in length to KM and LN than any given length. Now OQ
and PR, as I've just proved, are proportional to BF and DH. If
KM and LN were not proportional to OQ and PR, then one or
both of the former would have to differ from one or both of the
latter by some finite length. But this is impossible, since for any
finite length we can find an OQ and a PR closer in size to KM
and LN. Therefore they must be proportional. Q.E.D.

BK: DL :: AB: CD;

AE: BF:: CG: DH
and also

C D

KM: LN :: BF: DH ,

which will show the similarity of the curves.
It is actually rather easy to prove this, at least in a special case:
let there be two exponential curves, with "corresponding ordinates" AE and BF on the first curve and CG and DH on the
second, and let K and L be two other points, one on each axis,
situated so that AB and BK are commensurable, CD and DL are
commensurable and (see Figure 6)

Having made these assumptions, this in brief is how I will go
about showing the similarity of all exponential curves. I will first
set up "corresponding parts" of any two curves, as follows. Let
us assume that on any two exponential curves there is a pair of
ordinates on one which are proportional to some pair of ordinates
on the other, and also that the distances between them are in that
same ratio. That is,·corresponding to A and B on the first axis
let's say that there are C and D on the second such that

T?e purpose of this section is to provide intuitive clarity, not

A 8

then

FIG.4

full ngor: we want to understand enough about these curves to
get a feel for why they are similar. I'll start by defining them.

{~xis

Now, given these corresponding parts, I will show that if any
other points are similarly placed along the axis, then the corresponding ordinates will be proportional as well - that is, if in
Figures
BK: DL :: AB: CD ,

1

A B

K

L

FIG.5

then I say that

KM: LN :: BF: DH .

For, since they are commensurable, AB and BK have the ratio
of some number to some other number (Euclid X. 5), and so do
CD and DL; but they're in the same ratio, so they are to one
another as the same number is to the same number. Therefore, a
unit exists on the first axis which measures AB and BK, and
another unit on the second which measures CD and DL, and AB
contains the same number of its units as CD does of its units, and
BK the same number of its units as DL of its units. Therefore on
each curve we can set up a series of continuously-proportional
ordinates including all our ordinates, with the same number of
new ordinates intervening between the corresponding original
ones.
AE: BF and CG: DH are the same ratio. Each of these ratios
is produced by a smaller ratio (the one between any two adjacent
ordinates) compounded with itself the same number of times.
Now, if two ratios which are compounded with themselves the
same number of times give the same ratio, they too must be the
same ratio. For example, "subduplicates" of the same ratio are

M Q

c.

D

LP

FIG.7

I hope that this treatment, especially the device of imagining
a crowded series of continuously-proportional lines, will help
you visualize what it is about exponential curves that makes them
all similar.

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�By the way, it is easy to see why ex and aex are not only
similar but identical if one uses some things proved in Appendix
II. As a bonus for those of you who read that Appendix, I include
as Appendix III a proof that those two curves are identical.
I'd like to close with a remark about the significance of the
famous number e, 2.71828 or whatever. As we have seen, there
is absolutely nothing geometrically unique about the ex curve,
as opposed to 2x or any other base. The ex curve is not a special
case in a family of curves: it's exactly the same curve as all other
exponential curves. Consequently e has no geometrical significance whatsoever, as the base of a special exponential curve. As
a special base, the importance of e is entirely an artifact of
algebra, and above all the calculus.
On the other hand, e does have a geometrical significance,
and in fact one which extends over the exponential curve as such
- so that e is both more and less important than one might think
at first. That significance has to do with the tangent.
On any exponential curve, the segments cut off on the axis
by the tangents at any points and the ordinates to those points
are all equal, no matter where the points are on the curve. I give
proofs of this in Appendix IV. That segment can be taken as a
fundamental measure of the "size" of the curve, like the parameter to the axis of a parabola or the diameter of a circle. Well, it
turns out that on any exponential curve, any two ordinates that
are just that constant distance apart are in the ratio e : 1. Thus, in
its own way e is as indissolubly linked to all exponential curves
as pi is to all circles.
Now it is obviously convenient, in algebraic analysis of
exponential curves, to pick that length as the unit; and so it is this
geometric fact which underlies the immense convenience of the
number e in the algebra and calculus connected with these
curves.

Appendix II: Auxiliary Proofs
PROOF 1: Proportional pairs of orc. J
nates exist on any two
exponential curves. For, in any series of increasingly long,
continuously-proportional lines, each increment is longer than
the last (in fact each such pair of increments is in the same ratio
as the lines themselves, by Bue. V. 12). Therefore, since you're
adding ever-increasing increments without end, the longest line
can be made longer than any given length, no matter how small
the shortest line is. Thus the ratio between some two of these
lines can be larger than an~· given ratio. Furthermore, we are
assuming that on our curves the ordinates increase continuously,
so that you can get any ratio in between. Therefore, all you have
to do is pick a reasonably large ratio on the first curve, and you 're
assured that two ordinates exist in that ratio on the second.
PROOF 2: On any two exponential curves, there exist proportional ordinates which are situated at proportional distances.
One way of seeing this is by first establishing a preliminary
fact. Indeed this fact will be so important in understanding these
curves that I'm going to call it a theorem.
THEOREM I. On any exponential curve all pairs of ordinates
that are at equal distances are proportional.
I must first restrict myself to commensurable distances. That
is, given an exponential curve and random ordinates AB and CD,
pick ordinates EF and GH, such that

EG=AC
and also such that AE is commensurable with AC. That being
the case, I say that

N

B_~
---1r, t[_
±

A
AC= EG-

E C. G-

Case 1- overlappin!J se9»unts

y-t).X/5

FIG.8

FIG.10

Now we can prove that somewhere on our two curv~s we c~
find proportional ordinates which are also at proportional di~­
tances. For on each curve, given a pair of ordinates in any ratio
whatever, other pairs of ordinates exist in that same r~ti~, getting
longer and longer without limit as we move to the ngh~, but all
at the same distance from each other. Therefore, smce the
ordinates increase but the distances between them do not, by
suitable placement the ratios AE: AB and CG: CD can be i;nade
as great as we please. Thus, picking a reasonably large rati~ on
our first curve, we can be assured that on the other curve pmnts
can be found such that

AC.= EG-

FIG.6 bis

Appendix III: That ex and aex are the same
curve.
For, for given any numbers a, p and q,

and so ex and aex can be described geometrically as curves which
have the same axis and for which any two pairs of ordinates from
the same two points on the axis are proportion~. Consequent!!,
however, any two ordinates on one curve are m the same rat10
as any two ordinate at an equal distance on the other curve, by
Theorem I.
fun'
Now the ordinates on both curves get longer without It,
as also ~roved in Appendix I, so that for any ordinate AB on the
higher curve there must somewhere be an ~qual ordi.nate CD on
the lower curve, as in Figure 11. But now if any ordinate on the
lower curve is at the same distance from CD that another o~ the
higher curve is from AB, these two will be in the same ratio as
AB and CD, again by Theorem I. Therefore they're e_qual: all
ordinates at equal distances from AB and CD, respectively, are
equal.

AE: AB :: CG: CD

Ct1se 2- Non-overl11p;iir19 5egr'Ylenf-s

AE::CGor, alternating,

( aJ&lt; : J&lt; : : (). : 1 )

rl

AB: CD:: EF: GF.

Appendix I: Fitting an equation
to the exponential curve.
Call the axis as defined above the "x-axis;" pick an origin at
random; pick a unit length at random. The numerical value of a
is then determined by the ratio between the unit and the ordinate
to the curve at x = 0. Now go out one unit to the right. The ratio
of the ordinate there, at x= 1, to the unit, then determines the
numerical value of aK (or aek). By suitable choices for both
origin and unit you can get any values for a and k.

For because of the commensurability there is a unit of length
whi~h measures the whole interval AG and the smaller intervals
AE, EC and CG (or AC, CE and EG). Therefore there exists one
series of continuously-proportional lines, which includes our
four ordinates and a bunch of intervening lines. But EG = AC,
so each pair of our ordinates has the same number of ~ontinu­
ously-proportional lines between them. So the tw~ ratios AB:
CD and EF: GH are compounded of the same ratio the same
number of times. Therefore, ex aequali, they're the same ratio.
The same is true of any other equidistant pair in this series.
Thus far I have only proven this for commensurably-situated
ordinates. But these can be found as close as we like to the
location of all pairs of incommensurably-situated ordinates the
same distance apart. So, if EG = AC but AE and AG are not
commensurable with AC, it is possible to place Kand Min such
a way the KM is commensurable with AC, it is possible ~o place
Kand Min such a way that KM is commensurable with AC,
KM= AC= EG, and KE and MG are smaller than any given
distance. Therefore KL and MN can be chosen closer in size to
EF and GH than any given difference. Now KL and MN are
proportional to AB and CD; and ifEF and GH weren't proportional to KL and MN (and thus to AB and CD), they'd have to
differ from them by some finite lengths. This is impossible,
however, for given any finite differences we can find a KL and
MN closer in length to EF and GH than them. Therefore EF and
GH must be proportional. Q.E.D.

AE: CG :: AB: CD ,

which is what we needed.

FIG.11

FIG.9

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�Appendix IV: That all tangents and ordinates
cut off equal segments on the axis.
Algebraically, this follows from the famous fact that the derivative of ex equals ex. Recall that the derivative gives you the "rise
over run" of the tangent, while the function itself give just the
"rise," i.e. the height of the point of tangency, above the x-axis.
So for all x, the "rise over run" equals the "rise" from the x-axis:
therefore the "run" along the x-axis everywhere equals 1.
A geometrical proof can also be given. This, too, depends on
Theorem I from Appendix II. Let EFGHefgh be an exponential
curve, with ordinates AB, DF, ... ae, df &amp;c. as in Figure 12. Let
AB equal ab. Let the line AGK touch the curve at G, so that it
and the ordinate CG cut off AC on the axis. Let ac equal AC, and
draw the line agk. I say that agk is tangent to the curve.

so that

DM: DF :: dm: df, Euc. V. 9 and alternating.

Similarly

BN:BH::bn:bh,

and so on for all ordinates at equal distances from A and a,
respectively. Therefore, if DM is less than DF, then dm is less
than df; if BN is less than BH, then bn is less than bh, and so on
for all such pairs of ordinates. Therefore the line amgnk is below
the curves everywhere except g, just as AMGNK is below the
curve everywhere except G. Therefore amgnk touches the curve
at g; and it cuts off, with its ordinates cg, ac on the axis equal to
AC cutoff by AMGNK. Therefore &amp;c. Q.E.D.
Actually, I haven't proved that the line AMGNK is indeed
everywhere between the curve and the axis, but if you go back
to the definition of the curve and use Euclid VI, it's pretty easy
to see for yourself.

k

FIG.12

For, by Theorem I the ordinates at equal distances are proportional, i.e.
AB : ae :: CG : cg :: BH : bh ;
but now by Euclid Bk. VI (I'm not going to go through all the
steps; they're quite easy) AGK and agk, as they cross ordinates
at equal distances, cut off proportional segments on them, all of
which are in the same ratio as CG: cg. For example, if D and d
are placed so that AD = ad, then
DM: dm :: CG : cg .
But since AD= ad, Theorem I also applies, and
DF: df:: CG: cg ,

Balance
Jeff Seidman

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46

�Two Humors
Ellen M. Myers
Machiavelli opens a chapter on the creation of the Roman
tribunes with the remark, "All writers on politics have pointed
out, and throughout history there are plenty of examples which
indicate, that in constituting and legislating for a commonwealth
it must needs be taken for granted that all men are wicked and
that they will always give vent to the malignity that is in their
minds when opportunity offers" (Discourses 1.3). This sounds
as though Machiavelli has decided to dismiss the populace as
worthless and dangerous. But a few lines later, he summarizes
the _history of the offenses of the nobility against the plebeians,
saymg,
But, no sooner were the Tarquins dead and the fears of the
nobility removed, than they began to vomit forth against the
plebs the poison hid in their hearts and to oppress them in every
way they could.
This bears out what has been said above, namely, that men never
do good unless necessity drives them to it; but when they are too
free to choose and can do just as they please, confusion and
disorder become everywhere rampant. (D 1.3)

It is clearer in this second passage that when he refers to the men
who "never do good," he has primarily the offenses of the
nobility in mind; although perhaps the aristocracy and the masses
are jointly guilty of causing "confusion and disorder." These
remarks open an extended discussion of the difference between
these two groups, here beginning in sections 1.4 through 1.6, but
recurring throughout The Prince and The Discourses. He makes
this one of his themes very early in Discourses 1.4 when he
writes, "Nor do they [readers of Roman history] realize that in
every republic there are two different dispositions [due urrwri
diver si], that of the populace and that of the upper class and that
all legislation favourable to liberty is brought about by the clash
between them." But what are these two different dispositions,
that is, what is the character of each group?
Surprisingly, it turns out that rather few generalizations are
made about the nobility apart from contrasting them to the
masses. A number of specific examples are given of the behavior
of the nobilities of Rome, Athens, Sparta, Venice and Florence
in different events, but they are not much discussed in the
abstract.
The nobilities of two aristocratic cities, Venice and Sparta,
are singled out for further consideration in Discourses 1.6. The
oligarchy in Venice was "due to chance rather than to the
prudence of its legislators," in that it was based on early residence in the city; latecomers became the general populace, and
could not dispute established custom. In Sparta, the nobility was
also defined early, and was distinguished by its equal distribution
of (and comparative lack ot) luxury. In both cases, however, the
oligarchical government could be maintained because, first of
all, the plebeians did not engage in warfare, and hence never
became dangerous; and secondly, the number of foreigners
admitted to the city was strictly limited. So in no fashion were

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either the numbers or the ambitions of the plebeians augmented.
In Venice, this was possible due to a certain geographical isolation and continued numerical superiority: "Besides, there were
not many who came later to dwell in Venice, nor where they so
numerous as to upset the balance between rulers and ruled; for
the number of gentlefolk was either equal to, or greater than, that
of the newcomers" (D 1.6). In Sparta, this isolation took more
the form of a cultural separ~tion from the rest of Greece. Thus,
in history, the most successful oligarchies are isolationist and
conservative in character.
Sparta and Venice are used throughout The Discourses as
examples of successful, long-lived, and relatively benign oligarchies. Far more instances are quoted of foolish, wicked, and
self-destructive groups of nobility; for example:
For since such a state [an oligarchy replacing a formerly free
city] has been created by that prince, it knows it cannot stand
without his friendship and power, and it has to do everything to
maintain him. And a city used to living free may be held more
easily by means of its own citizens that in any other mode, if one
wants to preserve it. (P 5)

That is, a formerly free city may be held by the treachery and
sycophancy of its nobility. On the whole, however, there are
rather few general descriptions given of the upper classes, except
of their tendency to oppress the masses. So it is easiest to
consider the two groups by examining the differences
Machiavelli points out between them.
Machiavelli's "populace" is seen in a surprisingly favorable
light, when all is said and done. They may be sheep, they may
be gullible, and he may say rather less than the average political
writer about the Common Good, but a close reading reveals quite
a number of times in which he assumes and counts upon their
essential decency. They exhibit, collectively, a baseline level of
common sense, tolerance, and enlightened self-interest that
could stand as an example to their wealthier counterparts. They
are sometimes fickle: " ...the nature of peoples is variable; and it
is easy to persuade them of something, but difficult to keep them
in that persuasion" (P 6). On the whole, though, they can be
counted on to acknowledge good sense and act on it: "And
though, as Tully remarks, the populace may be ignorant, it is
capable of grasping the truth and readily yields when a man,
worthy of confidence, lays the truth before it" (D 1.4). This
common sense and good judgement are what often save the city
in times of trouble, and should be the desiderata of any good
ruler: "I will conclude only that for a prince it is necessary to
have the people friendly; otherwise he has no remedy in adversity" (P 9).
Not only is the populace a bulwark against adversity (hostile
nobles, external invasion). In some sense it is also the standard
against which successful government is measured: " ...I look
upon those rulers as unhappy who, to make their government
secure, have to adopt abnormal methods because they find the

masses hostile" (D 1.16). Machiavelli has a great deal to say
about these abnormal methods, the dictatorial authority necessary to reform a state or lead it in time of war. He speaks
approvingly and at length about the leader who has the virtu and
audacity to take command in such a situation. Yet here he
acknowledges that, after all, such methods are abnormal and
unhappy to the one forced to make use of them.
The basic difference between the humors of the people and
the nobility is in their ambition, of which the populace has
relatively little: "The demands of a free populace, too, are very
seldom harmful to liberty, for they are due either to the populace
being oppressed or to the suspicion that it is going to be oppressed ..." (D 1.4). And, says Machiavelli, the impression is
rightly founded, because as he has already said, the nobility will
only do right by the masses under the force of necessity. Or, as
he says in the Prince,
For in every city these two diverse humors [umori] are found,
which arises from this: that the people desire neither to be
commanded nor oppressed by the great, and the great desire to
command and oppress the people.... Besides this, one cannot
satisfy the great with decency and without injury to others, but
one can satisfy the people; for the end of the people is more
decent than that of the great, since the great want to oppress and
the people want not to be oppressed. (P 9)

It is true that, if sufficiently provoked, the masses will attempt
to avenge themselves on their oppressors: " ...What I say is that
he [a prince] ought first to ask what it is that the people desire,
and that he will always find that they desire two things: (i) to
avenge themselves against the persons who have been the cause
of their servitude, and (ii) to regain their freedom" (D 1.16). This
vengeance can be bloody, as when Cesare Borgia had his minister sliced in half in the city of Cesena: "The ferocity of this
spectacle left the people at once satisfied and stupefied" (P 7).
But it is Cesare's action; to the people, it is a spectacle that
overwhelms.
This look at the difference between the two humors of populace and nobility, I hope, will shed some light on some similar
contrasts which Machiavelli draws in other areas. On the level
of states, for example, there are two major considerations: what
the city itself desires, and what it believes its neighbors desire.
In large measure, it is its own disposition and its perception of
others' dispositions that will control how aggressive it is. "For
war is made on a commonwealth for two reasons: (i) to subjugate
it, and (ii) for fear of being subjugated by it" (D 1.6). If a state
appears fearsome, it will trigger the same fear of oppression in
its neighbors which the plebeians feel in the face of their opponents the nobility. Machiavelli warns against giving this impression unnecessarily, as it invites attack. On the other hand, the
attacking city may simply be of an expansionist disposition; in
which case, the only defense is to appear strongly defended, or
not worth conquering.
Similarly, independently of its neighbors, a city can have one
or both of two general goals: " ... a city in which freedom prevails
has two ends in view. One is to enlarge its dominions; the other

is to keep itself free. In both it can err by excess" (DJ .29). The
excesses and dangers of expansion are obvious, and Machiavelli
spends a number of sections discussing them.
The excesses of freedom are harder to imagine, and
Machiavelli is not especially persuasive. His major point seems
to be that one can be unnecessarily suspicious; this would seem
to be related to his discourses on ingratitude: ''The vice of
ingratitude arises either from avarice or from suspicion" (D
1.29). Avarice, a greedy desire to enrich oneself at the expense
of someone to whom a debt of gratitude is owed, is far more a
failing of the prince or any small ruling class, where the personal
impact will be felt, than·it is of the people as a whole. Suspicion
can be a failing of either a prince or the populace, though it is
more likely that the prince will be guilty of it. But in either case,
more than avarice, suspicion is an essentially conservative and
defensive trait. One fears that the successful general may become
the oppressor, like the aggressive neighboring state, or like the
nobility against the plebeians.
In summary thus far, Machiavelli posits two different sorts
of temperament to be found within a city, and two sorts of
interests in the city as a whole. In both cases, one is essentially
conservative, isolationist, and negatively defined: the city
wishes to remain free, and fears its expansionist neighbor. The
populace wishes only not to be oppressed. As Machiavelli describes it in The Discourses, this is "the possibility of enjoying
what one has, freely and without incurring suspicion, for instance, the assurance that one's wife and children will be respected, the absence of fear for oneself... " (D 1.16). This impulse
is to preserve the status quo in a peaceable fashion, whenever
possible.
In opposition to this live-and-let-live attitude is the equally
universal one of aggrandizement. The nobles are ambitious; they
wish to expand their privileges at the expense of the masses.
States, in general, keep one eye on the weakness of their neighbors and exploit it as soon as it becomes evident. It's a dog-eatdog world, and the meek are likely to have the worst of it. The
very nature of life ensures that. "Nor have I the least doubt that,
if this balance [the status quo] could be maintained, there would
be genuine political life and real tranquility in such a city. Since,
however, all human affairs are ever in a state of flux and cannot
stand still, either there will be improvement or decline, and
necessity will lead you to do many things which reason does not
recommend" (D 1.6).
We would somehow expect, from what we've seen so far,
that the expansionist city would be found in tandem with an
expansionist form of government, i.e., an oligarchy. At this
point, Machiavelli's analysis is astutely based on experience
rather than reason and similarity. In The Discourses 1.4 - 1.6, he
points out that this is exactly the opposite of the real situation. A
city, even an empire such as Venice's or Sparta's, which has an
oligarchy in charge generally assumes a defensive character. Its
acquisitions are strategic, designed to protect the existing interests of the city; and it poses no threat to its immediate neighbors
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�republic to expand, it should be governed in large part by the
people:
Should, then, anyone be about to set up a republic, he should first
inquire whether it is to expand, as Rome did, both in dominion
and in power, or is to be confined to narrow limits. In the first
case it is essential to constitute it as Rome was constituted and
to expect commotions and disputes of all kinds which much be
dealt with as best they can, because without a large population,
and this well armed, such a republic will never be able to grow,
or to hold its own should it grow. In the second case it might be
constituted as Sparta and Venice were, but, since expansion is
poison to republics of this type, it should use every endeavour
to prevent it from expanding, for expansion, when based on a
weak republic, simply means ruin. This happened both in
Sparta's case and in that of Venice. (D 1.6)

An oligarchy may prove to be expansionist, but will probably

prove too weak, as Machiavelli's later image of trnnk and branch
illustrates. But in order to expand, a large, armed and active
populace is essential. "In the first case it is necessary to do in all
things as Rome did. In the second case it is possible to imitate
Venice and Sparta... " (D 1.5, emphasis mine). A large populace
is essential to expansion, and expansion will prove essential to a
large populace. Though they individually desire only "not to be
oppressed," the simple pressure of population growth will force
them to grow larger; and the example of a large, active, and
growing city will probably encourage at least some of its neighbors to choose alliance or union over enmity and defeat.
Still, it seems perverse in some way that the nobility, which
has expansionist tendencies within the city, should be essentially
conservative in dealing with outsiders. This is explained, however, by the Hobbesian remarks Machiavelli makes in his section
on the "haves" and the "have-nots:"
There arose considerable discussion as to whether the 'haves' or
the 'have-nots' were the more ambitious, for the appetites of both
[l' urw e l' altro appetito] might easily become the cause of no
small disturbance. Actually, however, such disturbances are
more often caused by the 'haves', since the fear of losing what
they have arouses in them the same inclination we find in those
who want to get more, for men are inclined to think that they
cannot hold securely what they possess unless they get more at
others' expense. (D 1.5)

So we realize that, although property often becomes ours through
an acquisitive instinct, it remains ours through a conservative
one; in fact, it is the very occasion of a defensive posture. How
can we defend what is ours if we have nothing to lose? On the
other hand, if we have nothing because we are essentially peaceable and unambitious, then we are almost certain to need and
want something that isn't ours already, even if it is only freedom
from oppression. Thus, the two humors of the city are not only
in tension with one another, but in a real sense, they create one
another.
This reminds us of a phrase in The Prince. In speaking of
these two dispositions of the city, Machiavelli talks about their
results: "For in every city these two diverse humors are found,
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commanded nor oppressed by the great, and the great desire to
command and oppress the people. From these two diverse appetites one of three effects occurs in cities: principality or liberty
or license" (P 9, emphasis added). This is very similar to what
he has already said about the Roman republic, that its liberty
wasn't threatened by the tumults of the populace; in fact, liberty
was the very result of the constant quarrel between the nobility
and the people. "All legislation favourable to liberty is brought
about by the clash between them" (D 1.4). Nor would Rome have
been outwardly successful if this had not been the case. If Rome
had preferred internal peace, then "in seeking to remove the
causes of tumults, Rome would have removed also the causes of
expansion" (D 1.6).
Rome obtained the happiest of the three possible outcomes,
liberty rather than license or principality. The liberty is the result
of a balance between the two humors. Excessive domination by
the people would lead to license; by the nobility, to principality.
But is this true? Perhaps, on the other hand, excessive domination by the corrupt nobility is what can lead to license, since the
people are rather conservative in comparison. As he writes in
Discourses 1.3, " ...when they are too free to choose and can do
just as they please, confusion and disorder become everywhere
rampant." Or, perhaps the increasing license of a democracy
would cause a revulsion into tyranny, as Machiavelli suggests in
Discourses 1.2. How confusing these two dispositions are! Every
time we seem to be in a position to apply labels to two oppositions, the answer eludes us.
It is interesting that a third option, liberty, is available within
the city, and that it derives (in the case of Rome) from hammering
out the differences between the nobility and the plebeians
through the public institutions. Liberty, or at least stability, is
also possible through the intervention of a strong man with a
clear vision of the reforms and balances he wishes to institute. It
seems that the two dispositions within a city can arrive at a useful
compromise if there is some common authority to which they
are both accountable. In the case of Rome and many other
republics, this authority lay in the agreed-upon institutions with
their dynamic balance. In other cities and during transitional
times, the authority generally lies with one person. But some
control is exerted on both dispositions. Why doesn't this work
in the relations between whole states? Because they have no
common authority. If they did - if two or more cities could
appeal their disputes to a higher authority, they would not be
independent states, but parts of a larger whole, and the dispute
would be an internal one that would fall into the natural jurisdiction of the common ruler. In the terminology of Hobbes, the men
of a city are in civil compact with one another, but cities are in
a state of nature or (frequently) war among themselves.
Let's consider another instance. Machiavelli spends a tremendous proportion of both The Prince and The Discourses on
Livy's discussion of the methods of foundation and reform. One
of his primary concerns is the consideration of when, whether,
and how change should be introduced, and on what principles a
city should be organized in the first place. One of the institutions

necessary to a city is the ability to reform itself within law, so
that extraordinary measures will not be required. Change is seen
as inevitable, and so it must be accommodated. Ideally, such
change could grow out of the inherent tensions between the two
humors of the city, as it did in Rome's case. Very often, however,
drastic change will require the intervention of some strong
individual (whether inside existing institutions, as the Roman
dictatorship, or outside when the institutions are inflexible or the
populace is corrupt). The degree of authority that Machiavelli is
willing, indeed eager, to bestow on this individual is quite
extraordinary:
One should take it as a general rule that rarely, if ever, does it
happen that a state, whether it be a republic or a kingdom, is
either well-ordered at the outset or radically transfonned vis-avis its old institutions unless this be done by one person....
Wherefore the prudent organizer of a state whose intention it is
to govern not in his own interests but for the common good, and
not in the interests of his successors but for the sake of that
fatherland which is common to all, should contrive to be alone
in his authority .... It is a sound maxim that reprehensible actions
may be justified by their effects, and that when the effect is good,
as it was in the case of Romulus, it always justifies the action.
For it is the man who uses violence to spoil things, not the man
who uses it to mend them, that is blameworthy. (D 1.9)

We will come back to the question of a ruler's severity later. For
now, it's interesting to note that Machiavelli is actually talking
about two sorts of change, foundation and reform. And when we
examine reform itself more closely, we find that a portion of his
comments apply to renovation, while others apply to innovation,
and that there is a considerable difference between the methods
of the two, though both aim at promoting stability.
Innovation is both easy and difficult, because men are both
attracted to and worried by novelty: " ... Men are by nature inclined to look with favour on new enterprises; a favour which is
likely to be bestowed, above all else, on enterprises which seem
to have in them a certain virility and which are taken up by young
men" (D 1.33). Current interests drive out considerations of the
past: "For a new prince is observed much more in his actions
than a hereditary one; and when they are recognized as virtuous,
they take hold of men much more and obligate them much more
than ancient blood. For men are much more taken by present
things than by past ones, and when they find good in the present,
they enjoy it and do not seek elsewhere ..." (P 24). On the other
hand, the novelty value (which appeals to men's expansive,
audacious nature) can wear thin when faced with the fears and
suspicions of man's natural conservatism:
Those like these men, who become princes by the paths of virtue,
acquire their principality with difficulty but hold it with ease;
and the difficulties they have in acquiring their principality arise
in part from the new orders and modes that they are forced to
introduce so as to found their state and their security. And it
should be considered that nothing is more difficult to handle,
more doubtful of success, nor more dangerous to manage, than
to put oneself at the head of introducing new orders. For the
introducer has all those who benefit from the old orders as
enemies, and he has lukewarm defenders in all those who might

benefit from the new orders. This lukewarmness arises partly
from fear of adversaries who have the laws on their side and
partly from the incredulity of men, who do not truly believe in
new things unless they come to have a firm experience of them .
Consequently, whenever those who are enemies have opportunity to attack, they do so with partisan zeal, and the others defend
lukewarmly so that one is in peril along with them. It is however
necessary, if one wants to discuss this aspect well, to examine
whether these innovators stand by themselves or depend on
others; that is, whether to carry out their deed they must beg or
indeed can use force. In the first case they always come to ill and
never accomplish anything; but when they depend on their own
and are able to use force, then it is that they are rarely in peril.
From this it arises that all the armed prophets conquered and the
unarmed ones were ruined. (P 6)

This long quotation spells out very neatly the problems of
introducing "new orders." Men are unable to believe what they
have not yet seen, and they continue to anticipate and fear the
powers of the old order. Despite their attraction to the opportunities offered by novelty, their essentially conservative fears
usually win out and they hold back to see the outcome of the
confrontation. This resistant passivity, and the tendency of the
people to be won over to new ideas but not steady in these new
convictions, means that the ruler must use whatever force is
necessary to accomplish his ends. Reason and persuasion are not
enough; good intentions are not enough. He must enforce his
vision on a reluctant population. That is, in order to overcome
the passive, unaggressive humor of the people, he must employ
his own active virtu to force the innovations he sees as necessary.
If effectively done, the results will be praiseworthy - regardless
of the means.
In contrast to the innovation of new institutions, whether as
part of founding a new society or as a much-needed reform, the
renovation of a state is essentially a conservative process. The
need is to return to the virtues of one's ancestors: " ...Those
changes make for their conservation which lead them back to
their origins .... The way to renovate them, as has been said, is to
reduce them to their starting-points" (D 3.1). In this section,
Machiavelli does not even point out that the starting-point must
have been a sound one; the assumption seems to be that any
lasting institution was originally founded on good principles, and
these need only be rediscovered. Often enough, these principles
are either explicitly religious or, at very least, moral in nature insofar as "moral" in Machiavellian terms means "not corrupt,"
that is, neither effeminate nor bribable nor devoted to selfish
pleasures and luxuries. The reason for this return to origins seems
to lie very close to Machiavelli's appreciation of history- at
least, of the great and successful examples in history:
For since men almost always walk on paths beaten by others and
proceed in their actions by imitation, unable, either to stay on the
paths of others altogether or to attain the virtue of those whom
you imitate, a prudent man should always enter upon the paths
beaten by great men, and imitate those who have been most
excellent, so that if his own virtue does not reach that far, it is at
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�Imitation becomes a reasonable substitute for active virtue of
one's own. If a prince hasn't the type of brain which sees for
itself, he must at least have the sort which can judge the reports
which others bring to him.
From examining the two humors and the two goals of the city,
as well as innovation versus renovation, we seem to have arrived
back at Machiavelli's perplexing use of the word virtu. At times,
Machiavelli uses this term as if it implied nothing more than
strength and audacity, for example when speaking of Agathocles
(Prince 8) or Cesare Borgia. At other times, he talks as if it has
what we would term a moral connotation, as when he finally
concludes of Agathocles:
For, if one considers the virtue of Agathocles in entering into
and escaping from dangers, and the greatness of his spirit in
enduring and overcoming adversities, one does not see why he
has to be judged inferior to any most excellent captain. Nonetheless, his savage cruelty and inhumanity, together with his infinite
crimes, do not allow him to be celebrated among the most
excellent men. Thus, one cannot attribute to fortune or to virtue
what he achieved without either. (P 8)

There are thus at least two sorts of virtue for Machiavelli. He
writes of whether a ruler should prefer being loved or feared,
whether he should rule with mercy and sociability or cruelty and
severity (Prince 17; Discourses 3.22). He praises Romulus and
Tullus for their warlike nature, but Numa who came between
them for introducing religion. There are two forces at work here,
both of them important and valuable, and each having its function. In Discourses 3.9, he speaks of adapting to the times. Piero
Soderini, that decent man, failed because he did not exercise
sufficient virtue (audacity). Pope Julius II, who succeeded because of his audacity, would have failed had the temper of the
times changed. Both things need to be kept in mind. "Very rarely
do Men know how to be either Wholly Good or Wholly Bad" is
a shocking title for Discourses 1.27, but it summarizes his view
that both are necessary and effective if applied in turn, at the right
time. It is the attempt to compromise between the aggressive and
the peaceable, the active and the passive, the cruel and the
tolerant, that leads to disaster. Balance must not be construed as
wishy-washiness.
Even Fortune itself has aspects of both the conservative and
the audacious. On the one hand, he says that "it is bette1 to be
impetuous than cautious, because fortune is a woman; and it is
necessary, if one wants to hold her down, to beat her and strike
her down. And one sees that she lets herself be won more by the
impetuous than by those who proceed coldly" (P 25). On the
other hand, in the letter in which he writes to his friend Vettori
that he has just completed The Prince, he praises the quiet and
disciplined life his friend is leading: "And because Fortune wants
to do everything, she wants us to allow her to do it, to remain
quiet and not give trouble, and to await the time at which she
allows men something to do; and then it will be right for you to
give more effort.... " An amazing contrast in the images of Lady
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fortune, as in cities and in individuals, there are two humors. We
cannot ignore either except at our peril.
Sometimes these two humors are in constructive competition.
Sometimes they tear one another apart. In some respects, each
begets the other. At times audacity is called for; at other times,
a cool head. Sometimes the two dispositions are so confused (in
the literal sense, fused together) that we cannot be sure which is
which or what the outcome may be. "So that this is just one of
those things in which evil is so closely associated with good, and
so bound up are they one with the other, that it may easily happen
that he who thinks he will get one, gets the other" (D 3.37).
Given all these difficulties, it seems we can only summon
both our courage and our wits, draw on the examples of history,
and do the best we can to balance the two humors:
Nor should any state ever believe that is can always adopt safe
courses; on the contrary, it should think it has to talce them all as
doubtful. For in the order of things it is found that one never
seeks to avoid one inconvenience without running into another;
but prudence consists in knowing how to recognize the qualities
of inconveniences, and in picking the less bad as good. (P 21)

The Wrath of Aeneas
Donna Schueler
Near the beginning of this poem that sings of a man and his
fate, Virgil wonders, in horror, about the gods - are their minds
moved by unrelenting wrath? Aeneas, sings the poet, is a man
remarkable for goodness; by poem's end, he will have become
a man of whom it can be said, his wrath is godlike. Pious Aeneas,
hounded by the wrath of Satumian Juno throughout the poem,
is, at its end, caught in the unyielding grip of Saturnian rage, a
rage which fills the poet with horror. The wrath of this good man
will be as unrelenting as that of the goddess. It is a redoubtable
transformation the poet gives us; why does he give it? A man
remarkable for piety, and his fate - does fate require of this man
more than piety; is piety insufficient to his hard fate?
Our first encounter with Aeneas in fury is not in the present
tense; nor does his fury play itself out. He is recounting for Dido
the tale of his city's fall. In his narration, he has come upon
Helen. She is crouched in terror beside an altar, the altar standing
among the fifty bridal chambers of Priam's daughters. Seeing
her there, a fire bums in Aeneas' mind, anger spurs him to avenge
his falling city. He knows that he is mad, that to kill a woman,
even the Laconian woman, is at best a dubious thing. But the
bitterness in his heart drives him after her. And then Venus
comes between them; the fury of this man remarkable for piety
gives way. The poet has not made us witnesses; we hear, with
Dido, an account of forestalled violence, of a fury that relented.
What can happen, so that by poem's end, pious Aeneas comprises a rage equal to the rage of High Ones, equally relentless?
Aeneas remains with Dido for a full year. What could make
him so heedless, knowing what the future holds in Hesperia, for
him and all his line? The need to resupply stores and revive his
weary men would not want so long a time. Such needs as these
would not keep him the whole year at Carthage, building Dido's
walls, heedless of his own great walls, which have still to be
raised in Aussonia. This is pious Aeneas, son of Venus by
Anchises; he bears with him the household gods of Troy, entrusted to his keeping by great-hearted Hector, and he is not
building the walls which are his fate. It will want much to make
this man stray so far from his fate that Jove must send Mercury
with high remonstration.
It will want much, and yet Aeneas' lingering, his role in the
love-story, is not the result of divine machination. Did~, on the
other hand, has been seduced by a power larger than herself or
Aeneas. It is necessary that she abandon her pious vows to the
dead Sychaeus, and this has required the intervention of Venus.
The goddess has sent Cupid in the guise of Ascanius: Dido has
dandled him on her lap, kissed him tenderly. And all the while
Cupid/Ascanius invades her body with the fiery poison his
mother has prescribed. No such inflammatory measure has been
taken with Aeneas. When he comes to their encaved 'marriage,'
Apollo to her Diana, (see N, 172-210) no god has impassioned
Aeneas. What Venus wakes up in Dido is present in her already,
waiting there susceptible of arousal, ready for the divine ruse.
But it has wanted the divine nudge. On the other hand, what

Dido's beauty arouses in Aeneas is wakened solely by her. It has
not been necessary that Juno devise the infiltration of his soul when he mates with Dido, he is entirely his own man. It is true
that Juno and Venus have brought them to the cave, but to Aeneas
himself they have done no more than this. We take new measure
here of Aeneas' greatness; for all nature attends this marriage.
Primal Earth aids Juno, fiery lightning flashes, and the upper air
is witness when Dido and the son of Anchises mate. To achieve
this, Dido has been inflamed by Venus, but the psyche of Aeneas
has needed no divine push.
It has not required the gods' contrivance to rouse Aeneas to
so great a passion, but it will want divine intervention to recall
him to his reason. Jove must send Mercury to rebuke him, to
recall him to his fated walls and the glory waiting for Ascanius.
When he is mindful once again of who he is, Aeneas burns for
the onward-going, burns to be underway. This is the first time
we have seen him impassioned for the walls he must raise in
Latium. But before he can go, there is Dido. Who knows.
She lashes out at him in fury, denouncing him as a deceiver
and breaker of vows. Aeneas' reply to her is heart-wrenching;
we see his heart wrenched. He protests his love for her in a way
bitterly ironic in light of what is to come; and yet what more
could a lover who is compelled to leave behind him his beloved
ever say? These are his words: "I never shall regret remembering
Elissa for as long as I remember my own self, as long as breath
is king over these limbs." (N, 451-54) Strange words. For this
is Aeneas, a man for whom (despite his Carthaginian exile) self
and fate are inextricable: To remember himself is to remember
his fate; to remember his fate is to leave her; remembering his
fate he will remember Dido - what do they mean, these words?
He tells her that Apollo's oracle, and Mercury and his father's
anxious image urge him; Lycian prophecies tell him that Italy
must be his love. It is not his free will, says Aeneas, that leads
him to that other love. Dido reviles him. Growing more and more
delirious, she says that truly this is the work of High Ones. In
fury she tells him to go; heaping curses, she says she will not
keep him back.
She leaves Aeneas groaning, "shaken in his mind because of
his great love." (IV, 542-43) She leaves him hesitating, in fear,
and longing to soothe her. But his piety turns him toward his
ships, toward that other love, to Italy. When Anna comes to him
to make Dido's plea for empty time, even in his great strength,
Aeneas is shaken. He stands as a great oak, its crown touching
the stars, its roots reaching to Tartarus, the poet says. But Anna's
assiduous words are like north winds. The great oak shakes in
this wind; it does not fall.
Dido wakens in Aeneas for the first time in the memory of
the poem an elemental, even a bestial, passion. When he leaves
her, he can say for the first time that he loves Italy; for the first
time he burns to accomplish his fate. Virgil makes Aeneas tell
the reader, in his reply to Dido's accusations, how this has come
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�transformed, to love of Italy. That irrational energy which she
has aroused, the passion which love of Dido sets loose in his soul
is now set toward Italy, transferred to his hard fate. Now Aenea~
has what it talces. I believe this is what Virgil signals when he
says in Book VII, "Sing Erato." Sing not the passion of your
~sual song, sing rather what such passions can become. Sing that
m some fundamental way it is all one. Without the unfated,
uncivilized marriage with Dido, the fateful and lawful marriage
with Lavinia might not come to be. Aeneas has begun to learn
the significance of the not-good, of the irrational.
Until his time with Dido, all that Aeneas has known comes
':ithin the scope of civilization. When he arrives at Carthage he
fmds scenes of Troy, splendidly wrought scenes of his greathearted city that fell. When he looks back on Carthage from his
~eeing ship, he sees a sight which can only look to him like Troy
m flames. Between the two simulacra of Troy lies a space of time
he ~o~~d nei~er tame, no~ prevent, a time unfated and utterly
unc1~ihzed. Like the mamage of Paris and Helen, the marriage
of Dido and Aeneas - bestial, elemental, pointedly uncivilized
- has destroyed civilization. Does Aeneas need to live the
violence of such passion himself before he can know that while
it has nothing to do with civilized ways, it is yet ge~uinely
human, and so, ineluctable as any fate? He arrives at Carthage
knowing all there is to know about pious ways and civil man.
Does his uncivilized marriage say to us that this is insufficient
to secure his long line's fame in the great city he will raise? Does
Aeneas need to know that elemental passion is always latent,
even in the most civilized breast? Must he know, before he can
father great Romans, that which can never be sanctioned in a
great civilization, yet is never separable from it? It is as if, before
Anchises can inflame the soul of Aeneas with love of Roman
glory, Dido must set the kindling.
In Book VI Aeneas, obedient to Anchises' command, descends to the Underworld - to seek a meeting with his father,
to learn of his coming race, of his walls in Latium. Anchises
directs Aeneas to Avernus, to the Sybil; she will guide him past
Tartarus to Anchises in the Elysian fields. She will turn out to be
a wildly irrational guide. The temple over which the Sybil
presides is housed in a cave; the poet has shown us already what
irrationality is housed iri caves. When Aeneas and his company
are at the threshold, the Sybil's wild heart heaves with frenzy,
and .she cries out to him: "Are you so slow with vows and prayers,
T~oJan Aeneas? Are you so slow?" (VI, 73-4) Tartarus, she raves,
will never open its jaws without his vows. We think of Dido,
raving about broken marriage vows. We remember that Aeneas
denies having made such vows.
. Now the power of the god closes in on the Sybil. His breath
ts upon her, but she cannot yet speak, she has not yet yielded to
Phoebus. The lines in which she does yield are lines of sexual
innuendo: She tries to drive Phoebus from her breast but "he
tires out her raving mouth, he tames her wild heart, he shapes by
crushing force." (VI, 112-13) He "urges the reins as she raves
on; he plies the spurs beneath her breast." (VI, 139-41) Would
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guidance of this madwoman if he had not known Dido? Until the
point at which he submits to the Sybil, his piety has not been one
of access to the inner workings of di vi.Le madness, his piety has
been, with a single powerful exception, one of good and proper
observance of the rites demanded by household gods - his
pious ancestors at Troy. But with submission to the Sybil his
piety grows more complex. He is coming to know the value, the
sanctity, of this kind of wild irrationality, of high passion.
Aeneas' submission to the Sybil's guidance is linked still
more directly to his submission to his passion for Dido. After he
has retrieved the golden bo•1gh, Aeneas and the Sybil stand at
the opening of Avernus; she calls upon Hecate, queen of heaven
and hell, and he sacrifices to Night, the mother of the Furies. We
have heard Hecate invoked before this - when Dido placed on
the pyre their couch, and Aeneas' effigy, clothed in his clothes
and armed with his sword. At that moment, she called upon
Hecate and the triple-shaped Diana, triune goddess of female
initiation to marriage, of whom Hecate is one third. She called
upon Hecate, night fell, and Dido was consumed. Her death, like
the Sybil's possession by the god, is given to us in lines of sexual
innuendo. Dido lay upon the couch that was their bed and,
pressing her face into it, murmured endearments to the Trojan's
clothes, while she took his sword into her body. The goddess
called upon to witness this deadly consummation is the goddess
upon whom the Sybil calls to open the way to hell.
The Sybil his guide, Aeneas proceeds. At the middle of Book
VI, in the Fields of Mourning, he sees Dido. He swears by the
gods above and by whatever there is of trust in this netherland,
his unwillingness when he left her. Brutally consumed in brutal
waste, Dido will not raise her eyes to him. Nothing he can say
will move her, though he so clearly wants to move her. When
she turns from him he follows with tears and pity. He will at last
"struggle on his given way again." (VI, 627)
His guide brings him to the Blessed Groves - to his father,
who had feared Sidonian Dido, feared that the kingdom of Libya
might do so much harm to Aeneas. In the course of the poem we
will not hear again that Anchises is frightened for his son's fate;
only the Sidonian passion scares the great father.
Aeneas catches sight of the river Lethe, and the swarms of
heroes flocking to its banks. He wonders. These, says Anchises,
are the spirits to whom fate owes a second body, they have
gathered here at the river to drink deep drafts of forgetfulness
before returning to the upper earth. Aeneas is shocked. Who so
mad to long to leave these fields, to long for the light of earth?
For answer, Anchises tells his son a tale of the human soul. In
the soul, he says, are fiery seeds whose source is heavenly. But
these are housed in a dark prison of mortal members and earthly
limbs; the body is a plague to the soul, causing sorrows and fears,
and joy. Even in death these bodily plagues do not relent, "for
taints so long congealed cling fast and deep in extraordinary
ways." (VI, 973-75) And here below, each must pay with fresh
torment the price of his old taint - each suffers his own shade,
the shade his life has merited. It requires the cycle of ages to
anneal a soul's stain. When this has been accomplished, shades

are summoned by Dis to a great Lethian assembly, where they
drink deep and forget the plight of the soul in the flesh, its
longings and pains - its joys. Forgetful, they long to return to
upper earth.
This purification through loss of memory is at the middle of
the poem; and it is what Aeneas, not dead but living, must
accomplish in order to emerge again to the light of day. Moreover, Aeneas, a living soul, has begun already this arduous
purging of the longings and joys of the flesh. In the upper air of
Carthage he renoWlced Dido, stood like an oak in the face of their
mutual love, her entreaty, his own longing to remain. Alive, he
has paid already, in the manner of shades below, a great price of
torment for his stay with Dido. Aeneas will forget, in the way of
shades departing Lethe, the name. of Dido, but unlike the shades,
he will not have been granted a cycle of ages in which to cleanse
his memory. Because he lives while he forgets, something will
remain. Anchises will fire his son's soul, but it is Dido who has
laid this fire.
His tale of the soul's cycle complete, Anchises reveals to
Aeneas "the fame to come from Dardan sons," (VI, 1000) the
Trojan shades who will become the great Caesars of Rome.
These names too, he forgets. When he sees the history of Rome
bossed on the shield his mother brings to him, he is moved,
greatly, but does not know what it is he sees.
Anchises brings Aeneas and the Sybil to the Twin Gates of
Sleep for their departure from Hades. Through the gate of horn
true shades rise to earth. Through the gate of polished ivory,
Spirits send false dreams to the world above. Anchises sends
Aeneas back to his fate through the gate of polished ivory. Why,
why? His departure in this way is almost more harrowing than
his descent. Two possible explanations come to mind; but they
do not relieve the reader's uneasiness.
One: We remember that Aeneas seems somehow to have to
do what the shades by the banks of Lethe must do, he too must
forget. But he is alive. He will not utter Dido's name again in the
course of the poem; and when he sees the scenes on his Vulcanmade shield, he is moved with wonder, but uncomprehending.
Aeneas forgets, but something irrational remains with him,
something to which he could not put a name, some vague
intuition moves his soul. It is true that Aeneas emerges from hell
a new man, annealed and ready. But he is not, like the Lethian
shades, a clean slate. Though he cannot say what it is that moves
him, Aeneas remembers. And we remember his words when he
abandoned Dido: for as long as breath moves his limbs, when he
remembers himself, he will remember Dido. Does Aeneas rise
to earth through the gate of false dreams precisely because some
stain oflonging for Dido even now "cling(s) fast and deep?" (VI,
974)
Two: In showing the great Romans to his son, Anchises does
point out to him the elder Marcellus, but he hopes to pass over
Marcellus the younger; Aeneas must persuade his father to name
the young man and say something of him. Anchises does so in
tears. Marcellus will be but shown to the upper air, fate will not
allow him a full lifetime. For ''The line of Rome, o High Ones,

would have seemed too powerful for you, if his gifts, too, had
been its own." (VI, 1161-63) Anchises' purpose in exhibiting for
the soul of his son the future of his long line is to fire his soul for
the exigence of that which, shortly, he must do. And to that end,
Aeneas must believe that the city which will come from the
labors of his progeny will be the proper place for such a one as
Marcellus, that it will be such a place and, that the High Ones
will not harrow it with their ferocious passions. He ascends,
believing in the pious greatness of Rome, through the Gate of
False Dreams.
He comes to Latium, to the fated place. His arrival there has
been safeguarded by Neptune, who has guided the ships safely
past Circe's island. (The Trojans are not men to be transformed
to raving beasts.) And here it happens that, the men hungry and
rations short, they consume their tables. With this, Aeneas realizes where they are. He rouses his men to pour their cups out to
Jupiter, the High One, and the household god of Troy, father
Anchises. And Jupiter grants them omens: thunder out of a clear
sky, a cloud flashing great light and gold. Here the Trojans will
raise their new walls. The next morning, Aeneas sends to the king
of Latium an embassy of one hundred men, led by Ilioneus. He
himself remains behind. At last in the place where he belongs,
he stays behind to lay the site of the Trojans' first Latin settlement.
We should note that it is not a logical landfall. That is, Aeneas
is, at last, in the place that is his, fundamentally his because fated
to be so. Yet it is not his. Latins live here. This place that belongs
to Aeneas, must be conquered.
The embassy comes to the Laurentian palace, a place, it turns
out, of great irrationality. It is now the palace of Latinus, but it
is called the palace of Picus, Latinus' grandfather, whose father
was Saturn. And before Virgil permits Latinus to speak to the
Trojan embassy, we hear about Picus - that his bride, Circe, in
the clutch of lust, transformed him into a speckled bird. Latinas
welcomes the Dardans, saying to them that they have come to a
people who need no laws to guarantee their righteousness, for
they are sons of Saturn. The Latins hold themselves in check by
their own will, he says. The Trojans shall have what they ask of
Latinas, but he wants one thing first, to clasp the right hand of
Aeneas. He is remembering the oracle of Faun us, that his daughter Lavinia must not marry from among her father's own, but
marry with a stranger, for great things await her. He regales the
Trojans with gifts, sending to Aeneas a chariot with a pair of
fabulous stallions, horses bred by Circe on a mortal mare with
seed she stole from her father's stallions. Strange bastard horses,
they come to Aeneas from a palace which has seen strange
· things.
Juno cannot rest. Aeneas is in his place, but she will not rest,
for she hates his race. She sends Allecto to break the peace, to
"let sudden quarrel spur young men to want, demand and seize
the sword." (VII, 449-50) These peaceful sons of Saturn, who
need no laws to restrain them, are to be waked to the fury of Juno
by the stratagems of Allecto. It is significant that for the most
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snake that winds its way between the breasts and dress of Amata,
into her bowels, breaths its serpent breath into a frenzy Amata
feels already. Allecto can inflame Ascanius so that he is over
avid in the hunt because of his own inherent love of honor. The
farmers who respond to Silvia's loss, the young men who rally
to Turnus, the mothers who rally to Amata, all have in them
something waiting to be stirred. Only Turnus resists. Although
he knows that Trojan ships are in the Tiber and is aware that his
betrothal is endangered, he laughs at the Fury in her disguise as
an old woman. She must assume her full furious strength to rouse
him, she must cast a torch of fury into his breast. This torch does
not burn brightly there; it smolders with a murky light. But it has
its effect.
At the Laurentian fortress Turn us lifts the flag of war. Meanwhile, back at the camp, Tiberinus appears to Aeneas and exiles
his cares. He gives Aeneas further proofs: the white sow with her
sucklings, the sign Hellen us had said to watch for, is nearby. The
very earth and all her waters have awaited Aeneas - his household gods are secure. This is his home. But he must set out from
home, he must now fulfill the words of the Sybil and seek a Greek
city. Tiberinus says he will tell Aeneas what he must do to
conquer this land that is his home, this land that has waited for
his arrival. He must journey to Arcadia, to Evander's great city,
to Pallanteum. What Aeneas will find there are deeper, even
more ancient roots and, his future.
Aeneas and his men arrive at Pallanteum on the feast day of
Hercules. The son of Evander leaves the ceremonies to confront
the strangers; he asks to hear who they are, of what tribe? Aeneas
tells the young man who he is, and Pallas clasps his right hand
in fast welcome. Pallas brings the strangers into his father's city,
where Evander will reveal to Aeneas still more about who he is.
He tells him that they are relations through Atlas, who props
the stars. The king relates for Aeneas the history of the
Arcadians, and we who have been guided along the way by
Virgil see that Evander is telling Aeneas still more about who he
is, that their relation is still closer. Evander says, these groves
once were inhabited by a race of men sprung from sturdy oaks,
men who had no civilization. We remember that when Aeneas'
soul was buffeted by the entreaties of Anna, the strength he found
was the strength of an oak. We remember, too, that the great and
remarkable piety of this man, who bears with him what remains
of a great civilization, was interrupted by a fierce and heedless
passion; that, for a time, Aeneas and the queen of Carthage lived
outside the bounds of a civilization; that their love destroyed
Carthage. The analogy with Paris and Helen is obvious. What is
not so obvious is why Aeneas, in the haste and urgency of fleeing
a Troy that was burning and falling all around him, should have
carried away with him the gold-worked tunic and saffron-fringed
veil that belonged to the hated Helen. Was something inexplicable moving in him even then, even as this man remarkable for
piety preserved what he could of his great city? Who are you,
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The history of Arcadia includes Saturn, who found sanctuary
here when he was driven from Olympus by his son. The exiled
god came to this land and made a natim. of its untamed men and
gave them laws. But Saturnian law is notlike theJ avian law Dido
gave at Carthage, not like the law Aeneas gave at various
settlements along the way. The law of Saturn is a law of revenge
and passion, its guardians are the Furies. Will Evander and
Aeneas turn out to be related through Saturn as well?
Evander explains to Aeneas how it is that his people honor
Hercules with such solemnity, lest he think that the Arcadians
neglect the older gods. On ~e, their land was ravaged by the
monster Cacus; the ground was always warm with the blood of
slaughtered Arcadians. Hercules smashed the monster in his own
cavern, opening up that foul place to the light of day, delivering
the Arcadians from ferocity. Above all, the Arcadians celebrate
the slaying of Cacus. Aeneas is permitted to witness the holy rites
in honor of the hero who accomplished every labor set him by
the Saturnian Juno.
·
Evander offers Aeneas an alliance; he will make him chieftain over thousands of Latins. A new Cacus is on the scene; the
king Mezentius devises particularly foul and inhuman tortures
for his victims. His subjects have driven him from his city, and
now Turnus gives him refuge. Augury has revealed to Evander
that a successful force against Mezentius must be led not by an
Italian, but by a stranger. Like the husband of Lavinia, the
deliverer must be a stranger. When he has delivered Latium from
Mezentius, Aeneas will have conquered the land that is his, the
land that has awaited him. And like Hercules before him, he will
have delivered Evander' s people. Aeneas will conquer this land,
he will bring the rule of Jovian law into Latium. But he is
kinsman, through Atlas, of Evander, whose Arcadia is ruled by
Saturn, by that older law which erupts with sudden fury. And
now, Aeneas has made an alliance with his kinsman.
Evander sends his son, Pallas, with Aeneas. As their galley
glides through the night, Pallas clings close to him, and asks to
hear his history, his deeds and trials on land and sea. He clings,
we have a picture of the young man hanging on every word the
great Aeneas says. Like Dido before him. It may be disputed, but
in what follows I shall assume that Pallas is the beloved of
Aeneas, that the love of Aeneas for Pallas is not only the pious
love of father Aeneas who has given his right hand to Evander,
but the passionate love of the lover.
It is at this point that Venus brings to her son the great shield
forged by Vulcan. It is the offspring of a night of love: his wife
takes Vulcan into a "soft embrace," (VIII, 509) instantly he
catches "the customary flame." (VIII, 510) And in the morning,
early, he sets to work. The shield of war born of love has at its
center the battle to come at Actium: Antony faces Caesar, his
Egyptian wife close behind. The shield's center pictures a man
who turned his back, for love of a woman, on Rome - as Aeneas
himself, for a time, has done. Sing Erato, of passion and the
irrational, Sing the link of love with war.
When she presents Aeneas with the shield, Venus, who
throughout the poem has held herself aloof from him, shows

herself freely and reaches out to embrace her son. Why has she
held herself from him before this, and why does she now open
her arms? What has changed? Aeneas has allied himself with
Evander; he has found that force by which he will conquer
Latium. His alliance turns out to be, at some level, an alliance
with the law of passion and revenge, that law older than the law
of Jove. Because Arcadia is the land of Saturn in exile and the
land delivered by Hercules, Aeneas has pledged his right hand
to the adamantly passionate. Has Venus found Aeneas, before
now, wanting in filial devotion? (Harsh as this sounds! ) Now
Aeneas has begun his approach to the rage of the High Ones now, she may embrace him, now he is worthy of this mother's
tenderness. Moreover, Venus knows that he has clasped the hand
of the boy who will become his ·lover, and be the occasion of
rage. She opens her arms.
The battle will rage this way and that. Pallas will be notorious
in battle, dealing terrible slaughter to the Latins. But he will be
killed by Turnus. As he faces him, Pallas calls on Hercules to let
the dying Turnus see him, Pallas, strip the bloodied weapons
from his enemy. It will not be so. It will be Turnus who takes
bloody spoils from Pallas: the fateful belt, on which are engraved
fifty slaughtered bridegrooms, an image resonant with the defamation of the inner chambers of Priam's palace. When Aeneas
learns of Pallas' death, time slackens its pace: "Pallas... Evander... all are now before his eyes ...." (X, 710-11) The pious hero
is infuriated. Before this he has been dutifully valiant, now his
warrior's rage is something more than human. In Book XI,
Turnus will say to Latinos that he would go boldly to meet
Aeneas, though he be "as tremendous as Achilles." (XI, 580-1)
By virtue of the huge force that the death of Pallas has for him,
Aeneas has taken that name, that rage. Like the death of
Patroclus, the death of Pallas sends into battle a ferocious warrior.
We turn to the poem's end, to the slaughter of Turnus. Turnus
has been defeated in single combat, the fate of Aeneas is accomplished, land and bride are his. Now, as he dies, Turnus implores
Aeneas for that which piety cannot deny. He asks the return of
his body to his father, saying to Aeneas, remember Anchises,
your father - which is to say, remember the household gods of
your piety. Aeneas in his goodness wavers, moved in his soul by
Turnus' words. But he is moved two ways. His eye falls upon
the belt on Turnus' shoulder, and he is enraged; not by the guile
of a god, but by the sight of fifty bridegrooms slaughtered there
on the belt of his beloved. And it must be that everything at once
rushes into his mind: Priam's hundred daughters, the bridal
chambers near which Pyrrhus slaughtered Priam, the brutal
murder of Deiphobus at Helen's hands. And this: Pallas, son of
Evander, Pallas killed by Turnus, Pallas his beloved, Pallas'
plundered belt. Frenzied, he butchers a man already dying,
attacks the already vanquished in a rage like the rage of High
Ones.
His fate already accomplished, Aeneas butchers needlessly.
Acting outside his fate, and once again, outside the scope of
civilization, Aeneas is as a god-like Hercules before him. We

remember it is not any young man who has aroused his ferocity,
it is the son of Evander whose death Aeneas avenges. He grants
the impossible dying wish of Pallas, who called upon his father's
guest friend, upon Hercules, to let him slay Turnus. The god
heard Pallas' plea, and wept for its impossibility. It is a plea
Aeneas could not have heard, and yet, slaughtering Turnus, he
cries - Pallas does this! When he kills Turnus, the protector of
Mezentius, Aeneas is the new delivererofEvander's people. He
is the new Hercules, who grants the dying wish of his beloved
Pallas.
If such fury waited even in Aeneas, how shall Rome sustain
a Marcellus? Rome will not be the place to exclude such gods as
Virgil has figured here, they will not have cause to fear that their
vengefulness and cruelty will be excluded from the Roman
empire. We might even say that with the establishment of the
Jovian, the Saturnian is restored; for if Aeneas brings the Jovian
into Latium, he does so by overt alliance with the king whose
people received Saturn in exile. Moreover, in Book XII, we see
Jupiter himself recourse to the Saturnian in order that Aeneas
and Turnus face each other unaided by any divinity. He calls on
a Fury to terrify Turn us' helpmate, his sister Juturna, into quitting
the battle. It is Jupiter who does this.
Pious Aeneas as Rome, as the Rome Anchises says they will
build together, is not simply pious; he has within him a great
store of passion. Because one face of that passion is furious,
impious and cruel, Aeneas has had to depart the underworld
through the gate of False Dreams. The glory of the Rome to come
with which Anchises has inflamed the soul of his son is not
unequivocal. When Anchises says, "My sons, do not let such
great wars be native to your minds ... cast down the weapon from
your hand!" (VI, 1105-1109) and exhorts Aeneas, "Remember
Roman ... to teach the ways of peace to those you conquer," (VI,
135-6) the irony is bitter. The shade to whom Anchises speaks,
before he returns to earth's upper air, must forget all that he has
learned below. By the poet's own device, Anchises' words are
as ciphers to the forgetful shade, are like the leaves of the Sybil
blown by the wind. And yet his words are necessary. For Anchises must inflame his son not with any fire, but with appropriate fire. To temper, to steel the soul of Aeneas for his arduous
fate it must be pious flame Anchises fans. For when Aeneas
leaves his father, he does not yet know that he is capable of a
violence which ordinary piety could never condone. He must
ascend through that gate passionate for what his piety can
approve. He must ascend through the Gate of False Dreams.
When he drives his blade into Turnus, the wrath of Aeneas is
like the wrath of Hercules when he killed the monster Cacus. It
· is like the wrath of Juno at the beginning of the poem. Can the
mind of pious Aeneas hold such wrath? To ask this is to paraphrase the horrified wonder of Virgil at the beginning of the
poem. How can a man remarkable for goodness be made to
endure such torments as Juno will devise for Aeneas? "Can such
wrath hold the minds of gods?" (I, 18) By the end of the poem
the poet will be constrained to ask which god is it can help him
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�and Aeneas. He asks Jupiter, can it have been your will that,
despite the fact that these two nations were destined to live in
peace, they unleashed such brutal, indiscriminate fury - so
many men dead? At the close of the poem, Virgil will ask no
question to help us with the horror he has presented us. Upon the
flight of Turnus' resentful life to shades below, Virgil is silent.
Even as our horror is shrieking at us, Virgil is silent. The only
words the reader can find to give expression to his shock are a
paraphrase of Virgil's opening question. Can such wrath hold
the mind of pious Aeneas?
It can. And when it does, when Aeneas' piety is coiled round
with fury, when he is still plunging his sword into Turrms 'chest,
the poem closes. The song is finished. The poet has shown us
Rome will rise.
what we need to

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�Ricardo
J.H. Beall

The Other Face of Darkness
-for Harry Golding

J.H. Beall
Her hands, the saddened darkness
touched once. The future is history:
her hair, the curve of her neck
gently following spaces held between
muscle and bone as though tension
were the only metaphor for love.
Look back. The mind is
filled with shards of glass green
of their own volition, or her eyes
in a moment's repose before sleep,
bruited of that color which sits
above the horizon, culled from a litany
of distance and blue.
Of the future's hue, that opalescence
we confined in, nothing serves
but the tin-cup smell of water, warm
on a dry, hot day, as it parts our lips
like another's tongue, without words.

In beginning, the trees mimic
the colors of the fall. Though subtler,
shades conspire and cut
the throat of the bud's reticence.
Then green is poured
into the flagon of the air.
Our eyes swill the mind's
declension of the tongue's
delight - green as a liquor.
Thoughts hold tightly the fact
that green is poured
into the flagon of the air.
All of this - the meridians'
convergence, the circumstance
of the sun's other motion
into summer - like arteries
pump green liquid
into the flagon of the air.
And we see the other face
of darkness - light
penitent for the winter' s sorrows,
and with spring become
contained by an emerald light
poured into the flagon of the air.

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                    <text>SPRING 1993 .

�ENERGEIA: The activity in which anything is fully itself.

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Energeia is a non-profit, student magazine which is published once a year and distributed among
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�Table of Contents
Kristen Riddlespurger

Untitled [Photo]

..

2

Elliott Callahan

Attacking the Image .

3

Panayiotis Pappas

Salome and John

11

Eugenia E. Skarstrom

Window [Photo]

12

D. Jennings

Descartes' Interpretation of the World
as Arising from his Method . .

13

Stacie Slotnick

Orion outside my window . . . . . . .

18

Nancy Marcus

An Investigation of Key Characters
(and Character's Keys) In Mozait's Don Giovanni .

19

Sara Valentine

Untitled [Sketch] . . . . . . . . . . .

28

Kathleen Wilson

The Reeve's Tale by Geoffry Chaucer

29

Jean Holman

Untitled [Poem, Photo]

33

Rachel Blistein

Greek Urn . . . . . . .

34

Laurence Berns

An Introduction to Kant .

35

Burton Blistein

The Visual Arts and the Liberal Arts

39

Eugenia E. Skarstrom

Ancient Ones [Photo] . . . . . .

53

Francie Roberts

Her Hair by Charles Baudelaire

54

Susanna Beiser

Choosing to Believe: Free Choice and the
Knowledge of God in St. Thomas . . . . .

57

Eva T. H. Brann
Cover Art-Eugenia E. Skarstrom, GI '94
Front: "Euclid and Stella"
Back: "Journey"

On the Relation of the Speech of Alcibiades to the
Other Speeches of the Platonic Symposium

.........

61

Nedalina Dineva

Hope in Sophocles' Antigone

63

Jean Holman

Untitled [Photo]

......

66

Janice Thompson

Human Nature and War in Thucydides'

by Nietzche

History of the Peloponnesian War

67

Kristen Riddlespurger

Untitled [Photo]

73

J. H. Beall

Two swans

..

74

J. H. Beall

Morning-for Mary Ruth Clance .

75

�Attacking the Image

U

Elliott Callahan '92
Where are you going, Don Quixote? What demons have
you in your heart that incite you to assault our Catholic
faith? Devil take me! Look, it's a procession of penitents, and that lady they're carrying upon the bier is the
most blessed image of the spotless Virgin. Look out,
sir, what you're doing, for this time you've made a real
mistake. (p. 453)

Loving and reading are acts of faith. In order to be
seduced by the beloved, or enchanted by the book, we must
place our faith in the imagination, and believe what it, and no
other, can tell us. It is important then, from time to time, to
have our faith tested and our beliefs questioned. The imagination, it appears, needs to be roused from its slothfulness,
exerted, and provoked. For it realizes its potential when it
unexpectedly finds itself towering over reason-when it is
twisted and contorted until it discovers itself creeping up on
its own shadow-and surprising us, its not very attentive
keeper. Then we can revel in the imagination, for clearly it is
most delightful when we discover that, unbeknownst to us, it
had been busily working away, seducing our more reasonable
halves. Reveling in the imagination fortifies our faith in it, and
hence, our capacity to love, read, and believe.
Don Quixote, "mirror of knight errantry," is the champion of the imagination. He reads with the same amount of
passion with which he loves, and vice versa; a degree which
is clearly beyond our grasp. Don Quixote's superior imagination and unwave1ing faith, display labors of love rivaled only
by the labors of Hercules. It is possible that Don Quixote is
the greatest lover the world has ever known. For unlike most
of us, for whom it is true that "love is not loving," Quixote is
capable of loving love and Dulcinea del Tobosa at once, and
yet somehow remains conscious of both without contradiction. He is able to allow the image to enchant him and, at the
same time, to recognize it as an image. Quixote is the embodiment of the paradox that we spend our lives trying to resolve.
In the author's prologue, Cervantes says:

Don Quixote's final adventure represents the culmination of
his exploits. Throughout the course of his enterprise, the
Knight of the Sad Countenance has attacked the objects of
what the reader considers the "real world," mistaking, or
understanding them to be images of his imaginary world.
Now, instead of attacking reality, he attacks images. The
consequences of Quixote's attack upon an image, and especially an image of the Virgin, are essential to understanding
our relationship with this "lean, shriveled, whimsical child"
(p. 25). The final episode is a crucial point in the story where
Don Quixote's character begins to emerge in a new light. This
new perspective is the result of the transformation that occurs
in the relationship between Quixote and the reader. The events
in the last adventure force the reader to reexamine his notions
of reality and imagination, upon which are based his dual
relationship with Quixote-both as a character and as a book.
In his earlier adventures, Don Quixote attacks windmills
and various innocent travelers whom he meets on the highway. He mistakes squalid inns for castles, whores for ladies,
and a barber's basin for a helmet. In those adventures, Don
Quixote's imagination overpowers his perception and transfonns everyday ordinary objects-"real" things-into the
cast and props of knight errantry. In the final episode, Quixote
is no longer the only one to recognize and incorporate images
into reality. He is joined by his companions, and although they
disagree on the basis for admitting this image in to the real
world, they all perform the same act. In the eyes of the other
characters-Sancho, the barber, the priest, and especially the
penitents who scourge themselves-Don Quixote does not
merely attack their wooden statue, but also attacks the Virgin
herself. This adventme is the pinnacle of Quixote's movement
from the real world, that is the real world of the characters as
seen by the reader, to the imaginary. Although his comrades
obstinately resist being seduced by the realm of the imagination, Quixote has forced them, albeit unwittingly, into a battle
in which they cannot resort to the experimentally verifiable
world. For the first time, the battle in which Quixote is
engaged is no longer between the real and the imaginary, but
takes place solely within the bounds of the imagination. The
battle is a contest of faith, and Quixote has dragged his
companions down into the murky cave where he can

But I, though in appearance Don Quixote's father, am
really his step-father, and so will not drift with the
current of custom, nor implore you, almost with tears
in my eyes, as others do, dearest reader, to pardon or
ignore the faults of this child of mine. For you are no
relation or friend of his. Your soul is in your own body,
and you have free will with the best of them, and are as
much a lord in your own house as the King is over his
taxes.

So who is the bigger liar, Cervantes or Benengeli? For Quixote is our fiiend and brother, and we love him dearly: he is
the great mirror of our imaginations, and his adventures are
the reflection of our faith.

* * *
In Book I, Chapter LII, in which is related Don Quixote's
last adventure, the enchanted knight leaps on his steed and
gallops off to offer combat to a band of kidnappers abducting
a noble lady. Sancho says:

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�challenge their beliefs just as they have challenged his. For
Quixote's companions, attacking the image of the Virgin is
tantamount to attacking the real, flesh-and-blood Mother of
God. For Quixote, the statue is also equivalent or parallel to
a living, breathing maiden, but not to the Holy Virgin. Both
Quixote and his companions have granted the image, through
their faith in it, the certainty and significance reserved for the
"real" object it represents. In their minds the image is no
longer an image, but a living woman. Thus their disagreement
is only in terms of the particulars of the imagination, and the
battlefield has shifted from one between the two separate
worlds to the imaginary world alone.
By attacking the image of the Virgin, Quixote also attacks
the Catholic faith. Thus by denying or misperceiving a single
idea, Don Quixote inadvertently attacks the foundations of his
comrades' beliefs. In one fell swoop Quixote deals a decisive
retaliatory blow to his comrades' beliefs. He suddenly shoves
their world into the same perilous position into which they
have forced his throughout the novel. The tables are turned
when Quixote, who is continually forced to defend his system
of beliefs throughout the course of his adventures, requires his
persecutors to defend their own beliefs. The same questions
with which his comrades have challenged his beliefs, he now
unwittingly forces them to ask themselves about their own
beliefs, namely their faith in Christianity. How sacred is their
image? Can it be any more sacred that the image of Dulcinea
del Toboso? Quixote's actions force us to compare the sanctity of the Virgin with the sanctity of Dulcinea. It seems that
in the minds of their respective champions they are equal.
How then can we assert our faith in one image over another?
And how can we be certain that the faith we put in any system
of beliefs is anything other than quixotic madness?
Don Quixote's last adventure is crucial in exposing the
absence of reason and the dependence upon the imagination
that is integral to all our beliefs. When Don Quixote attacks
the image of the Virgin, he not only challenges his companions, but, as we will see, he challenges the reader as well. We
are too drawn into battle with Don Quixote-and this battle
is important in the determination of our relationship with him.
Like Quixote's companions, we have insisted that Quixote is
a madman. But when his image (Dulcinea) is compared with
theirs (the Virgin), and they appear equally legitimate, we are
compelled to consider the validity of our own. First, we must
address our relationship with Don Quixote up to this point.
Then we can examine how the last adventure draws us into
battle with him, and finally, how the results of that conflict
change our relationship with Quixote.
It appears that before this pivotal adventure, our relationship with Don Quixote is a fairly simple, almost superficial
one. We love and admire Don Quixote because he has an
unshakable faith in his principles. Moreover, they are principles that Quixote easily convinces us are noble and true. Like
the priest, the barber, and the others, we are surprised by the

sound reason Quixote displays when discoursing on the virtue
of his profession. In these moments of lucidity, when Don
Quixote does not endanger the lives of innocent people as well
as his own, it is difficult for us to deny the logic which
underlies laws of chivalry. But because it is universally agreed
that the profession of knight errantry is half fiction, half
nonsense, Don Quixote is considered a madman. Even though
his arguments are sound and persuasive, the laws of chivalry
are incongruent with our system of beliefs:
His hearers were moved once more to pity at seeing a
man, apparently of such sound intelligence and with
such understanding of everything he spoke of, lose it so
entirely on the subject of his foul and accursed chivalry.
The priest said that there was much justice in what he
said in favor of arms, and that he was of the very same
opinion himself, although a scholar and graduate.
(Ch. XXXVIII, p. 345)

Both Quixote's companions and the reader perceive Quixote
as a madman because the focus and foundation of his apparently sound reason and judgement is chivalry. We do not
consider chivalry in any serious fashion, so any man who
treats it so rationally and with such conviction must be insane,
despite his seeming intelligence. But this apparently raving
lunatic is a charm and delight in part because he is no threat
to us. Many others have good reason to bear some animosity
towards the "mirror of chivalry": Andrew, who is doubly
beaten by his master for Don Quixote's interference; the
innkeepers in whose inns Don Quixote wreaks havoc; and all
the various travelers and shepherds, who fall victim to Don
Quixote's outlandish escapades. But the knight's ardent conviction, his physical vulnerability, and his tender heart, soften
our judgement of the damage that he does. We are in no danger
and can thoroughly enjoy (from a comfortable distance) the
spectacle of the havoc that he wreaks upon the innocent.
Despite his imperviousness to the destructive effects of his
actions, Quixote is also a tender, caring man. He offers the
same courtesy to whores at an inn, as he does to the Duchess;
every woman he meets is a damsel in distress to whom he
extends his unconditional service.
... the first man of our times, of these calamitous times
of ours, to devote himself to the toils arid exercise of
knight errantry; to redress wrongs, aid widows and
protect maidens, such as roam up-hill and down-dale
with their whips and palfreys and their whole virginities
about them. (Ch. IX, p. 76)

Don Quixote is also a faithful lover and friend-a lover
who must be admired and ranked amongst the best. His faith
and devotion to Dulcinea del Toboso, whose honor he places
above his own life, are flawless. And despite his sometimes
harsh treatment of Sancho's drolleries, Don Quixote's unfaltering resolution to find his squire an island and the paternal
tenderness with which he attempts to instruct him on the laws

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of chivalry, testify to Don Quixote's noble intentions and
tender heart. It seems important that Quixote be a character
whom we neither fear nor dislike. On the contraiy, as our
relationship with the Knight of the Sad Countenance begins
to change, it becomes essential that we love him.
This relationship with Don Quixote, that we establish
early on in the novel, changes in the last adventure. It changes
not because of any alteration in Quixote's character, but
indirectly with the reversal in the status of his companions'
beliefs. Tluoughout d1e adventures, we have been more or less
in agreement with Sancho, the barber, and the priest. They,
like us, love the knight, but consider him a lunatic whom they
are obligated to restore to his senses, his family, and proper
way of life. This diagnosis, namely that Quixote is insane,
excludes us from his world (the imaginaiy) and includes us in
the world shared by the otl1er characters (the real). We have
shared with Quixote's companions a common system of beliefs loosely based on the description of our experiences
primarily through inductive reasoning. Quixote, on the other
hand, describes his experiences deductively from the fictional
"laws of chivalry." But when Quixote attacks the image of the
Virgin and we see our allies ascend into the imaginary world
where the image is tantamount to the living Virgin, they too
begin to paiticipate in Quixote 's deductive reasoning. Regardless of whether or not we are Catholic, or even Christian,
we are forced to realize that the beliefs of our cohorts, which
we were certain were just as rationally grounded as our own,
are now indistinguishable in kind from Quixote's. The world
of Quixote's companions, which we supposed was entirely
rational, and wid1in which we included ourselves , suddenly
manifests this quixotic ai10maly, thus undermining its rationality and certainty. Hence we must doubt the original certainty which we have placed in our own world.
This world in which we ai·e left in becomes even less
certain with the disintegration of the alliance we had formed
with Don Quixote's companions. As they ai·e drawn into the
imaginaiy world through their belief in the image of the
Virgin, we are left alone in the world that only recognizes the
image as a wooden statue. Hence what was once the imaginary
world in the view we shared with Sancho, d1e barber, and the
priest, and the penitents, is now their real world, and we are
left suspecting that they, including Don Quixote, imagine our
world, which recognizes the image as a mere image, as
imaginary. Because we do not participate in the belief that the
image of the Virgin has any special significance, we are
immediately excluded from the world of the bai·ber, the priest,
and the penitents, in which we originally included ourselves.
But it is the awareness of exclusion that allows us to realize
that we had believed in a different image-the image presented by the book- but we were completely unaware of the
belief. In a single moment we are excluded from the world of
the characters because we have not embraced the image of the
Virgin, and at the same time brought back into the world with

a whole new insight. We sudden Iy become aware of our belief
in literary images. We are able to be enchanted by the book,
and thus to have that spell broken by our exclusion from the
characters' beliefs, only because we were initially able to
transcend the literary images of the characters through the
imagination and to allow them to become as real to us as the
image of the Virgin is to them.
Our relationship with Don Quixote is dramatically
changed. For we are now unable to approach Quixote with the
same objective rationality as before. Ouroriginal analysis that
Don Quixote is insane, is no longer valid. We see that we ai·e
like Quixote in many ways we never suspect until the certainty
of our own world begins to deteriorate. It is Quixote then who
demonstrates to us the uncertainty of our world, or that the
certainty we put in our beliefs can only be as absolute as the
certainty Quixote puts in his own . This revelation has the
potential to be a frightening one. If Don Quixote were evil, if
the enactment of his beliefs required murder and robbery, the
discovery that we are unable to condemn his beliefs with any
legitimate judgement would be teffifying. But we love Quixote, and now that he has led us to this self-discovery, we love
him more. Don Quixote, the "mirror of chivalry," is also the
mirror of ourselves. For without Don Quixote, we have no
means of examining the certainty of our own beliefs. Without
Don Quixote we are stuck in the so-called "real world,"
forever peering into the imaginary world, ai1d separated from
it by an insurmountable distance.
An analysis of tl1e last adventure, in which Don Quixote
attacks the image of the Virgin, reveals to the reader the
almost imperceptible barriers that separate the imaginary
world of the book from the so-called "real world" of the
reader. The bar1iers only become apparent after Quixote,
albeit unknowingly, indirectly trespasses into the reader's
world by questioning our unexamined beliefs. His attack upon
the image allows us to recognize our own participation and
faith in certain images by highlighting our lack of faith in a
particular one (the Virgin). Our distance from the image of
the Virgin reveals our intimacy with the characters, which can
only be achieved through faith in d1eir literary images. But
"The Last Adventure" represents a simple, isolated case of a
more complex and thorough subordination of our unconscious
faith in the literary images. For in the discussion of the
authorship of Don Quixote, another, more effective, and more
disturbing, attempt is made to subvert our faith in the image.
At the beginning of the book, in the author's prologue,
Cervantes claims the title of authorship for himself, declaring
in the opening line: "Idle reader, you can believe without any
oath of mine that I wish this book, as the child of my brain,
to be the most beautiful, the liveliest and the cleverest imaginable" (p. 27). The perfectly rational assertion that Don
Quixote is Cervailtes' brain-child, which any reader would
easily grant, turns out not to be so cut and dry. A few sentences
later, Cervantes tells us that though he appears to be Don

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�the author and the character may confront one another, and
second, that the author may confront the reader. The author's
presence in the story is a constant reminder to the reader that he
is reading-that the reader's involvement with the characters is
an act of faith. The author is the craftsman who has created
this image. His presence within the form of his own creation
undermines our faith in the story and accentuates our willingness to let this creator of images seduce us, the believers.
The remainder of Book I is taken from the work of
Benengeli and the discussion of authorship is dropped. But
the origin of Don quixote's history has been thoroughly
convoluted and demands some explanation. There is some
evidence to indicate that Quixote himself is at the bottom of
this endless chain of narrators. Don Quixote is aware of the
necessity of a knight errant to have a personal sage who will
direct and record his adventures, and states this a number of
times. When Sancho dubs him Knight of the Sad Countenance
·
he says:

Quixote's father, he is really only his step-father (p. 27).
Already, before the story has even begun, the identity of the
author is cast into doubt. This is a strange way to write a story,
but as this subtle departure from our expectations lies somewhat inconspicuously in the prologue, the importance of this
subtle departure from our assumption of authorship is easily
overlooked.
The question of authorship becomes unavoidable in
Chapters VIII to IX, which relate the stupendous battle between Don Quixote and the Basque. At the height of their
combat, Cervantes abruptly interrupts the narrative: "the unfortunate thing is that the author of this history left the battle
in suspense at this critical point, with the excuse that he could
find no more records of Don Quixote's exploits than those
related here" (p. 74). We are forced from this statement to
conclude that Cervantes is not the original author of this
history. Rather, he is narrating the work of a previous author,
who based his version of Don Quixote's history on certain
documents and records whose origin is a complete mystery.
Cervantes goes on to describe his search for the conclusion to
Don Quixote's battle with the Basque, and how by chance he
found it amongst a heap of old parchments in a silk merchant's
shop. A tattered old book which catches his eye miraculously
turns out to be the "history of Don Quixote de la Mancha,
written by Cide Hamete Benengeli, Arabic historian" (p. 77).
Cervantes relates how he had the book translated for him by
a Spanish-speaking Moor. The conclusion of the story is
Cervantes' account of the translation of Benengeli' s work.
Unfortunately, there are two points which further complicate the origin and veracity of Cervantes' Don quixote. The
first difficulty is Cervantes' own doubt as to the veracity of
the original which he expresses immediately after relating his
discovery of Cide Hamete Benengeli' s history:

... the sage whose task it is to write the history of
my deeds must have thought it right for me to take
some title, as all knights did in olden days ... the sage
I mentioned has put it into your thoughts and into
your mouth to call me now The Knight of the Sad
Countenance . .. (Ch. XIX, p. 147)

If Don Quixote is the original author, then it is he who has put
these words into Sancho Panza's mouth. Despite Sancho's
wit, "Knight of the Sad Countenance" does not sound like a
title that the squire we are familiar with would contrive. But,
the explanation Sancho gives for the title, namely Quixote's
shriveled up, pathetic appearance, does. It is not unreasonable,
then, to suppose that Don Quixote might have given himself
the title for another reason: his eternal longing for Dulcinea
del Toboso. Don Quixote knows that, according to the books
of chivalry, which form the foundation of his beliefs, his
adventures should be carefully guided and recorded. Since the
laws of chivalry demand it, so does Quixote's system of
beliefs. It is possible to cite that Cide Hamete Benengeli is this
omniscient, omnipresent sage, and he is actually referred to
as "the sage Cide Hamete Benengeli" at the very beginning
of Chapter XV (p. 111). But it is more likely that Quixote
himself is his own sage-and that Benengeli, a liar, distorted
the famous deeds of the Knight of the Sad Countenance. If
this is the case, then in the original account of Don Quixote's
adventures, written by Don Quixote, though Sancho may
actually dub Quixote "Knight of the Sad Countenance," he is
inspired to do so by Quixote's appearance rather than his love
for Dulcinea. In the original work, we speculate, Sancho is
perhaps slightly more informed of the laws and customs of
knight errantry. But this, of course, could only be a figment
of Don Quixote's imagination, which the Arabic historian
Benengeli uncovers, and reveals in his own account of Don
Quixote's adventures. The disastrous ramifications of this

Now, if any objection can be made against the truth of
the history, it can only be that its narrator was an
Arab-men of that nation being ready liars, though as
they are so much our enemies he might be thought
rather to have fallen short of the truth rather than to have
exaggerated. (Ch. IX, p. 78)

The second difficulty arises in Chapter VI, but is only manifest in light of the entire discussion concerning the authorship.
During the inquisition that the priest and the barber hold in
Don Quixote's library, Cervantes describes how a copy of one
of his own works, Galatea, is spared from the flames by the
priest, who says: ''That Cervantes has been a great friend of
mine for many years" (p. 62). Suddenly Cervantes and Don
Quixote become contemporaries. The notion that Cervantes
is the original source, the metaphorical biological origin of
the hero begins to collapse. Time and priority become confused. the author finds himself in the mind of the character
that was supposedly his brain-child. The reader is forced to
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hypothesis lead us to conclude that Benengeli is less of a liar
than we had initially supposed.
Don Quixote is well-read, and apparently not without
some literary talent of his own. According to Chapter I, "often
the desire seized him to take up the pen himself' (p. 32). On
more than one occasion he displays the ability and inclination
to write. His sonnets are found carved in trees in the Sierra
Morena and he has a propensity for literary criticism. Furthermore, Don Quixote knows that, according to the laws of
chivalry, as a knight errant, he is obliged to be a poet: " . .. for
I would inform you Sancho, that all or most knights errant in
the olden times were great troubadours and great musicians
as well" (Ch. XIII, p. 185). If Don Quixote is the original
author of his history, he could not have begun recording his
adventures until the time of his penance in the wilderness,
when he first comes into possession of Cardenio' s notebook.
But it is possible that he had already begun composing his
personal history in his mind. Quixote spends many of the
nights awake, while the other characters, especially Sancho,
are asleep: "Sleep yourself, for you were born to sleep, or do
what you will. I will do what best suits my profession" (Ch
XX, p.152). One of the essential requirements of Don
quixote's profession as "knight errant" is chastity, which, in
this story, is the equivalent of being a poet.
Throughout Book I of Don Quixote, Cervantes devotes
special attention to distinguishing the literate characters from
the illiterate. But this peculiar detail is discussed only in
connection with certain characters---characters that must be
recognized as lovers, or distinguished as non-lovers. The first
time this distinction is made is in Chapter X, when Don
Quixote and Sancho Panza discuss the laws of chivalry. This
discussion exemplifies the author's treatment of lovers and
non-lovers, literate and non-literate. Don Quixote, as we
already know, is the most well read character in the book. On
the other hand, we might asswne that Sancho, as a peasant, is
illiterate. At first this distinction between the knight and his
squire hardly seems to matter. In fact, however, it does. For
in their conversation in Chapter X, Quixote repeatedly insists
that if Sancho had read the "histories" he would know the
practices of knights errant. Sancho insists that he can neither
read nor write. The emphasis put on the respective literacy of
knight and squire gains added significance from the interpretation of the pair as lover and non-lover. Quixote is clearly the
most ardent of all the lovers in the book because he alone is
capable of passionate faith in the image of Dulcinea del
Toboso, a woman whose noble qualities he invents despite all
appearances to the contrary. Dulcinea is nothing more than an
image of the ideal maiden who holds a knight errant's heart
captive. None of the other characters can claim such zealous,
unceasing love in such a distant, ungrounded idea. Quixote's
passion for Dulcinea finds expression in poetry, a highly
developed form of literacy. By contrast, Sancho, an illiterate
laborer, though he loves his wife, daughter, and ass, is not

capable of the faith, devotion, and complete selflessness that
is required of a lover. Sancho is capable of loving only what
is physically real. It is impossible for him to place his faith in
Dulcinea, giants, or any other characters which people the
world of knight errantry. It is evident from their many conversations that Sancho, because he is utterly ignorant of the
laws of chivalry, has no concept of being a lover. 111is connection is made clear in Don Quixote's tirade on him in
Chapter XXX:
... excommunicate rogue! For that you certainly are,
for defaming the peerless Dulcinea. Do not you know ,
you clod, you ignominious vagabond, that but for the
power she infuses in my arm I should not have the
strength to kill a flea? Tell me you viper-tongued villain, who do you think has conquered this kingdom and
cut this giant's head off-if it is not the might of
Dulcinea, employing my arm as the instrument of her
exploits? She fights and conquers through me, and I live
and breathe and have my life and being in her. (p. 264)

The connection between love and literacy is not accidental. Immediately following Chapter X, Don Quixote and Sancho meet a group of shepherds, with whom they spend the
night. One of the shepherds entertains them that evening with
a song which he sings for them; naturally, it is a love song.
This shepherd, according to his comrades "is a very clever lad
and very much in love; and, what is more, he can read and
write, and plays the fiddle as beautifully as can be" (Ch. XI,
p. 87). Again, love and literacy appear in relation to one
another. Shepherds seem to attract love-sick literates, for no
sooner has this shepherd finished his song than another arrives
to tell them of the death of Chrysostom, whose funeral Don
Quixote and Sancho attend the next day along with the other
shepherds. Chrysostom is yet another shepherd-student
whose fierce love of Marcela, the beautiful shepherdess, has
consumed his very life. Chrysostom is a poet as well as a
fervent lover, he "was a great one for making verses , and was
so good at them that he used to write carols for Christmas Eve
and the plays for Corpus Christi" (Ch. XII, p. 92).
The story of Chrysostom provides us with the beginnings
of an explanation to the apparently invariable little between
lovers and poets. At the shepherd's funeral, one of his comrades reads aloud one of Chrysostom's poems, in which he
complains "of jealousy, suspicions, and neglect" (Ch. XIV, p.
107). But one of his fellow shepherds claims that Chrysostom
"was tormented by imaginary jealousies and suspicions, as
fearful as if they were real" (Ch. XIV, p. 107). It appears that
imagination is somehow necessary to the experience of becoming a lover. Returning to our paradigm of lover and
non-lover, we find in Don Quixote an unnaturally powerful
imagination and hardly any at all in Sancho. Imagination
seems to depend on literacy, because reading and being seduced or enchanted by a literary image require imagination.

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�In order for the reader to give life to the dormant ideas and
lifeless words that fill the page, he must exercise his imagination. He must transform the static images of the words and
sentences into living motion. Don Quixote, the most voracious reader in the novel, has exercised his imagination to the
point where it no longer depends upon the literary image. His
imagination is no longer constrained to roam the pages of
books and corridors of the mind, but has broken its fetters and
lives independently of the books. But his imagination remembers its origins, and occasionally frequents its old haunts for
renewed inspiration. When Don Quixote serves his penance
in the Sierra Morena, he debates with himself over what route
his penance should take, and which knight errant's example
he should follow . Quixote's debate over whether "to imitate
Roland's downright madness or Amadis' melancholy moods"
(Ch. XXVI, p. 214) depends on how Dulcinea has injured him.
But it is uncertain if Quixote has ever seen Dulcinea del
Toboso, and it is certain that she is totally unaware of his
existence, so that Don Quixote's injury, and thus his extravagant penance, like Chrysostom's, are completely dependent
upon his imagination. Furthermore, since the entire notion of
retiring to the wilderness to serve this penance is inspired by
the fictitious histories of the knights of old, it is also dependent
upon literature.
Sancho, on the other hand, has no imagination at all.
while his master gallivants around the meadows, carving
poems into the trees, the dutiful squire sets off to Toboso with
a letter for Dulcinea that describes the knight's afflicted heart.
Sancho, of course, never gets to Toboso because he is intercepted by the barber and the priest. The three men set about
concocting a plan to retrieve Don Quixote from the mountains, and return him to his home, where his madness might
be cured. Later in the story, when Don Quixote asks his squire
about his mission to Toboso, Sancho is unable to describe
Dulcinea, whom he can only imagine as Aldonza Lorenzo, in
terms of ordinary, peasant activities. Sancho describes Dulcinea, winnowing wheat, smelling "rather mannish," and, moreover, unable to read Don Quixote's letter because she is
illiterate (Ch. XXXI, p. 268). The imagination and literacy are
inextricably connected. Sancho, an illiterate, has an utterly
weak imagination.
The ability to become a lover also depends on the imagination. As Quixote says:

Dulcinea, an image, is very real. Quixote's love for Dulcinea
follows from the rules of chivalry: Quixote is a lover because
he must be; his profession demands it. As Cervantes relates:
Now that his armor was clean, his helmet made into a
complete head-piece, a name found for his horse, and
he confirmed in his new title, it struck him that there
was only one more thing to do: to find a lady to be
enamored of. For a knight errant without a lady is like
a tree without leaves or fruit and a body without a soul.
(Ch. I, p. 34)
Dulcinea del Toboso is part of the larger scheme of his faith
in a system of beliefs which he finds irresistible. Since being
enamored is such an integral aspect of knight errantry, one
can make the claim that Dulcinea is not merely incidental;
rather, that Don Quixote's priorities really lie in becoming a
lover. Whatever the relation between lover and knight errant
(perhaps they are ultimately equivalent), as a lover, Don
Quixote is in love with love, and not Dulcinea. In this sense,
the relationship between love and imagination essentially
signifies faith in a system of beliefs. Don Quixote's system,
like Chrysostom's, requires that he be injured by his lover
(inadvertently or intentionally). And like the beliefs held by
Cardenio, another great lover-poet, Quixote's love requires a
temporary suspension of reason. When we speak of Don
Quixote as a lover, we mean a lover of ideas: " ... and so,
carried away by the strange pleasure he derived from these
agreeable thoughts, he hastened to translate his desires into
action" (Ch. I, p. 33).
The two stories that are told in the inn confirm the
connection between lovers and their imaginations. "The Tale
of Foolish Curiosity" illustrates the disastrous effects of unhealthy imagination, and a general lack of faith in the imagination when combined with passionate love. "The Captive's
Tale" exemplifies a healthy imagination, and the faith that is
rightly placed in it. Accordingly, its characters find love,
happiness, and good fortune.
In "The Tale of Foolish Curiosity," the characters
demonstrate the dependence of love on faith in imagination,
and the tragedy that results from warped imaginations in
would-be lovers. Anselmo wants to prove that Camilla's faith
is that than which no greater can be conceived. It is not enough
to believe that his wife is the most faithful, circumspect, and
modest woman in the world; he must prove it empirically. His
fanatical insistence upon a demonstration of Camilla's virtue
and dedication renders Anselmo incapable of being a real
lover. His friend, Lothario.tries to persuade him against his
foolish enterprise:

Most of [the poets' mistresses] were invented to serve
as subjects for verses, and so that the poets might be
taken for lovers, or men capable of being so... I imagine
all I say to be true; neither more nor less, and in my
imagination I draw her as I would have her be, both her
beauty and her rank... (Ch. XXV, p. 210)

You seem to me, Anselmo, to be in the position of
Moors, who cannot be convinced in the error of their
sect by quotations from the Holy Scripture, nor by
arguments drawn from intellectual speculation or based
on the canons of faith, but have to have examples,

Don Quixote's love of Dulcinea is possible only because of

his faith in his imagination. But although her "beauty and her
rank" may be subject to Quixote's imagination, his love of

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palpable, simple, intelligible, demonstrable, and indubitable, with irrefutable mathematical proof like: If
equals be taken from equals ... (Ch. XXXID, p. 287)

taken place at the inn, the captive's story is not only incredible,
but continues in the audiences' own lives, leaking out of the
past into the present; from the world of the story into their
own.
The captive, Ruiz de Viedma, and his Moorish bride,
Zoraida, both have faith in their imaginations. Ruiz's imagination contrives that attached to a beautiful white hand is
a beautiful woman who will be his deliverance and his bride.
He also imagines the renegade to be an honest man who does
not double-cross him. Zoraida imagines that the captive is a
gentleman who will take her to Christian soil, have her baptized and marry her. But all of Zoraida's imaginings depend
upon her faith in her visions:

Anselmo's lack of faith in his imagination render him incapable of loving, just as the Moors' disbelief in the scriptures
render them incapable of Christian love. Love, as we have
witnessed in Don Quixote, requires the lover to imagine and
truly believe in the beloved. Since Anselmo has become
obsessed with obtaining proof of his beloved's fidelity, Camilla is incapable of being truly beloved. She no longer moves
Anselmo to believe what can only be accepted as a matter of
faith. Just as Anselmo is incapable of loving, he is incapable
of friendship. For, like his supposed love for Camilla, the great
friendship he once shared with Lothaiio depends upon trust
and faith. Anselmo refuses to take sincerely honest and solli1d
advice his friend offers him, because it would require him to
believe in "intellectual speculation." Even when Lothario
finally yields to Anselmo's pleading and promises to attempt
to seduce Camilla, Anselmo does not even believe his friend's
word, but spies on him through the keyhole.
But Anselmo is not entirely without imagination; he is
merely incapable of placing ai1y faith in it. Unfortunately, the
imagination he does possess is unhealthy. The fact that Anselmo derives so much pleasure from pushing his scheme as
far as it will go, suggests that he needs to live vicariously
through his f1i end. Even when Anselmo claims to be satisfied
with Lothario's attempts to seduce Camilla, he has him write
love sonnets to an imaginary lover, and then read them in front
of her. It seems Anselmo's perverse imagination has already
decided that Camilla is unfaithful and will allow herself to be
seduced by Lot11ario. But Anselmo's lack of faith in his
imagination is so weak that he must convince his friend to
enact it for him under the pretense of demonstrating Camilla's
modesty. Eventually Lothario and Camilla use Anselmo's
weakness to their own advantage and enact the tragic scene
with the dagger in order to hide their affair.
Undoubtedly, within the context of the novel, a character
like Anselmo would be despised, and destined for ruin. It is
important to observe the reactions of the characters who listen
to "The Tale of Foolish Curiosity"

When I was a girl my father had a woman slave, who
taught me the Christian prayers in my own tongue, and
spoke to me often about Lela Marien. This Christian
died, and I know that she did not go to the fire but to
Allah. For I saw her twice afterwards, and she told me
to go to Christian lands and see Lela Marien, who loved
me very much. I do not know how to go. I have seen
many Christians out of this window, but none of them
except you has seemed a gentleman. (Ch. XL, p. 358)
The story of the captive and Zoraida is received quite
differently than "The Tale of Foolish Curiosity,'' which is
almost completely rejected by its audience. The only comment is the priest's brief critique of the latter tale concerning
its plausibility. There is no further discussion because there is
no sympathy or love for the chai·acters. Zoraida and the
captive, however, are exalted by t11e audience:
... Cardenio and all the others offered him their utmost
services, in such warm and sincere language that the
captain was thoroughly convinced of their goodwill.
Don Ferdinand, in particular, offered to make his
brother the Marquis stand godfather at Zoraida's baptism if he would return with him, and himself to provide
enough money to appear in his country with suitable
dignity and decency. (Ch. XLII, p. 381)
Their story is marveled over and the women in the group
delight in Zoraida's beauty. this scene is entirely charming,
while "The Tale of Foolish Cwiosity" evokes nothing but
disdain. The fact that two stories whose treatment of the
imagination is the same, but whose endings are almost exactly
opposite, are told before the very same audience and elicit
opposite reactions, demands that we consider the relation of
the reader as part of the audience to the story.
This question returns us to the discussion of the aut110rship and the consequences of the attack upon the image. The
mysterious treatment of the authorship of Don Quixote confuses the relation of the chai·acters to authors. Cervantes,
Benengeli, and Quixote all act both as authors of the story and
characters within it. Don Quixote is a narration of a narration
of Don Quixote's own writings. Since Cervantes is trapped

I like the tale, said the priest, but there is something
unconvincing about it. If the author invented it he did
it badly, for it is impossible to believe that there could
be a husband so stupid as to want to make the costly
experiment Anselmo did. If it were the case of the lover
and his mistress it might pass; but between husband and
wife there is something impossible about it. Though for
the manner of its telling, that does not displease me at
all. (Ch. XXXV, p. 324)
But "The Captive's Tale," which is equally fai1tastic, is received by the same audience with enthusiasm and belief in its
credibility. On top of the already astonishing events that have

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Salome and John

within the consciousness of the very character he claims to
have created, we are lost in a circular history that has neither
beginning nor end; neither author nor characters. This labyrinth of characters and authors forces us to think about where
the story really begins. In whose imagination does the story
begin? Perhaps it begins in our own. Until we actually engage
ourselves in the process of reading the story, it is nothing but
a collection of dormant ideas. Reading those ideas activates
them and our imagination breathes life into the characters,
bringing motion into their movements, depth and meaning to
their thoughts and feelings. When we exercise our imagination we become a little like Quixote.Just as he invests his faith
in the image of Dulcinea, we put our faith in literary images.
We bring the images to life in the real world of action and
consequence. When we believe in the image, we translate it
in our mind into this real world of action. It is possible,
however, and even probable, that we will not recognize such
a translation unless someone, or something, forces us to. Don
Quixote, which has one, three, or no authors, demands that we
attack the image of the story and thus realize our own participation in its creation. The same thing happens when authors
become characters. They step into the imaginary world of the
novel and thereby at once blur and clarify the boundaries
between the imaginary and the real world.
Faith in the imagination is the essential element to reading a story. This faith, as we have seen, is also essential to
loving. Reading, then, becomes an act of love. When we read
a book, we cannot be like the priest, who, by failing to observe
his own reflection in Anselmo, is doomed to read as the
characters love in ''The Tale of Foolish Curiosity." Instead,
we must turn to the captive and Zoraida as our models of faith.
When the literary images of the book fall under attack,
our faith in the imagination is questioned; our love of the
characters and our willingness to believe in them is challenged. Such an experience is disturbing because we are
forced to declare our loyalty to the imagination. When we
read, the imaginary and real worlds blend together, but when
that delicate balance is disturbed, the reader must make a
choice between the two. Unless we close the book, we choose
to put our faith in the world of the imagination. The aversion
that we experience when the images are attacked lasts only as
long as we allow ourselves to doubt our belief in them.
When we read Don Quixote, however, we are required to
rise to a higher, more complex model of faith. We must imitate
Quixote himself. In addition, our faith in its images (like any
other story), Don Quixote constantly challenges them and
makes us conscious of our faith. As we become aware of our
faith, we become aware of our kinship with Quixote: we are
bound together by our faith in imagination, and our belief in
images.

by Panayotis Pappas '93

A dragon lifts his misty head
out of the cumbersome clouds of rapture
and scatters them across the dusty halls.
Dance now, dance here.
Sway like a swallow,
with wings woven of silk,
sweep through the royal chambers
alight before king Herod's feet.
Unfold, bend back and rise again a woman.
SuITound the fires and veil their radiance;
the night grows deeper in your gown's tint.
And dance. Move slowly, lightly graze his hair,
flow like a soul-thieving fiery breeze.
What is your fee ethereal meander?
John of fire loudly poking
the silent ashes of Jerusalem;
bring forth your charcoal eyes,
restful upon this silver platter,
as you soak in, and scorch, these your last visions.
Leaping, twirling, crouching, writhing,
within a divinely orchestrated se1mon,
you rattled your tambourine of words;
a fire lasting against all desert winds,
tlu·ough water spreading your spirit-consuming Lord.
Waiting you were for the serpent to rise
out of the cumbersome clouds of rapture,
and scatter your embers across the Heavens.

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�Descartes' Interpretation of the World
as Arising from his Method
D. Jennings '93
methodological doubt. This doubt, the subject of the first

The world problem is, stated simply, the consideration of
how we are to interpret the world as a whole. Our answer to
this problem entails an explanation of the phenomena of
consciousness. For experience to be possible there must be a
"coming together" of entities both in the world and in the "I."
Accordingly, this coming together is conditioned by both the
nature of the entities and the nature of the " I." In an analysis
of philosophical works, one is rarely in the position of exposing blatant illogic or even sophistry. The ultimate point of
interest in such an analysis is rather how the thinkers see the
world. The presence of the world problem and the attempt to
resolve it form the core of human thinking, even "everyday"
thinking.
The world problem according to Descartes arises in the
context of his method. The essence of Descartes' philosophy
is method. As early as 1620 (Descartes was only 24 years old
at the time) Descartes observes that the use of "definite rules"
is a fundamental part of solving mechanical problems. In the
Regulae, composed eight years later, he posits method as the
sine qua non of scientific and philosophical investigation. He
writes in rule four, "By a 'method' I mean reliable rules that
are easy to apply and such that if one follows them exactly,
one will never take what is false to be true... but will gradually and constantly increase one' s knowledge (scientia) till
one arrives at a true understanding of everything within one's
capacity." The aim of philosophy is scientia, a systematic
body of indubitable knowledge. The possibility of such a
system is grounded upon method.
The purpose of critiquing Descartes' method is to find the
guiding principle which serves as its foundation. This foundation itself acts to reinterpret the world. The text most
conducive to analysis regarding the world-problem, then, will
be the one that is closest to being a "world-text,'' a text that
presents the world as a problem. It is the Meditations that
serves this purpose both inlrn- and extra- textually. The Meditations is not about method or physics, but rather it is an
application of the method to the world problem intent upon
finding what is true and un true in experience. Through the
Meditations the resolution of the world problem is presented extra-textually to the world. Thus Descartes sees fi t
to dedicate his book to the " doctors of the Sorbonne" as
judges. The Cartesian resolution of the world problem, one
that is to a certain exten t our own, arises within the course
of the Meditations. This resolution is itself at the core of the
method.
The first step in the method is the implementation of

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Meditation, is the radical leveling of past opinions. The purpose is to destroy what came before in the guise of scientia
and to startover"from the foundation s" to build a true scientia
that is "stable and likely to last." The leveling is not conducted
in regard to the viability of independent acts of thinking, but
rather it throws out old opinions on the force of the doubtfulness of their common foundations as a scientia. Cognitions
("cagnitianes") as Descartes names acts of thinking, are themselves internally unaffected, meaning Descartes does not
question what a thought is or what value it has independently
of its place in the overall scheme of the scientia. Descartes
lays the ground for truthfulness-"is this indeed the case?"in principle distinct from considerations of the qualities internal to the cognition in question.
As a result, Descartes asks two questions concerning
entities that the mind takes under consideration. He asks what
an entity is (quid) and whether it is (quad). These two questions are always distinct. The quid question concerns the
internal aspects of the cognitions formed with respect to
entities under consideration. The quad question, on the other
hand, concerns whether or not the cognitions concerning an
entity fall within the larger scientia. If they do then we can
admit that (quad) the entity truly exists.
Descartes' application of the method not only reveals the
quid/quad distinction, but it also shows that the quid precedes
the quod in the proper methodological order of inquiry. In the
methodological exercise with a piece of wax in the second
Meditation, Descartes takes up the wax and investigates its
quid while its quod is still under the effect of leveling doubt.
This procedure consists in the suspension of belief in the
existence of some thing under consideration. In other words,
a cognition formed concerning something is investigated before that cognition is given a place in the scientia and its
existence granted as true. The precedence of the quid over the
quad is expressed in the Discourse on Method as the division
of "difficulties" into "as many parts as possible .. . in order to
resolve them better." Here the "difficulty" is the thing under
consideration. The division of the difficulty into parts is an
approach to the quid question. The resolution of the difficulty,
a resolution that takes place after division, is the resolution of
the quad question.
The quid question is fundamentally an ontological one,
meaning one that proposes "what the thing is" as a problem.
(The quod question, on the other hand, is a factual one.
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�whether or not that thing can be encountered in the world.)
Descartes, in the investigation of the piece of wax, present this
investigation as a process of reduction to "what the wax is
really made of." Already, we see that Descartes in posing the
question allows the thinking subject an intimate knowledge
or ontological access to the thing. This access, i.e., this ability
to approach and know the thing, is extra-experiential in principle. Descartes does not even know whether or not the wax
exists, but he nonetheless endeavors to find "what it is really
made of." (There is a question as to how much "what a thing
is really made of' provides an ontological account of the
thing. The confounding of "what a thing is" with the logically
distinct question of "what a thing is made of' may indeed be
at the heart of Descartes' understanding of the world problem.) The thing's presence in the world is temporarily passed
over to allow for a reduction of an item of experience to its
real make-up. The mind reviews all the stages of appearance
of the wax as it is heated by a candle. At first the wax tastes
of honey, smells of flowers, is hard and cold to the touch, and
so on. When this same piece of wax is put to the flame,
however, the taste of honey disappears, the wax becomes soft
and warm, and all of the other sensible qualities of the wax
change into others. That which remains of the wax is the
ontological characteristic of things in the world, namely extension. This extension, because it assumes an infinite number
of manifestations, cannot be comprehended by the imagination. What Descartes calls "pure mental scrutiny" reveals the
knowable aspects of the wax. The "pure mental scrutiny"
provides the ontological access to the wax. The act of this
"mental scrutiny" is "knowing" itself.
Descartes' interpretation of knowing follows directly
from the precedence of the quid question in the method. ff we
do not know that a thing is then our interpretation of what it
is will necessarily take on an extra-experiential character. The
quod question, because it concerns matters of fact, carries
with it considerations of context. Facts, because they appear
in the world, occur within the context of experience. For
example, if one said that there are clouds in the west today,
then that person has made a statement concerning clouds
within a specific temporal and spatial context. Without this
context the statement makes no sense. The quid question,
however, lacks any experiential context. The quid question is,
in effect, a reduction of experiential data to "what things are
really made of." The ontological make-up of a thing stands
independently of any context. In following the method, we
raise the question of what a thing is as if its quod were not
apparent, even when it appears in an "everyday" manner. The
smell, taste, etc. of the piece of wax suggests its quod to the
everyday consciousness. Descartes' method, however, rules
that this consciousness has no bearing upon any real knowledge of the wax. The richness of experience is reduced to a
knowledge of extension.
Because the quid of extended things has priority over the

quod in the order of analysis, we will not prove that some thing
in the world that is cold and has the smell of flowers as its
ontological make-up exists. Instead, we will prove that what
we can know, i.e., extension, exists. What we can know to
exist determines what we do know to exist. This statement is
a truism adopted by Descartes. What is important, however,
is not the truism itself, but Descartes' sense of the word
"know." Since the scope of knowledge is confined to extension, so are entities in the world. For instance, we can no
longer say that there is a true, ontological foundation for, e.g.,
smell when smell is no longer an item of know ledge (scientia.)
The precedence of the quid question over the quod question,
then, entails that the entities met with in the world be of a
determinate kind. Experience is predetermined by the understanding of the quid. The experience that goes beyond
the bounds of the quid is seen merely as an accident of
subjectivity.
The resolution of the quid question regarding a thing is
in effect the judgement of what holds true of the thing. The
conditions of true judgement are in turn the determinate
factors in the quid analysis of a thing. At the beginning of the
third Meditation Descartes states the condition under which
judgement is valid. He writes, "So now I seem to be able to
lay it down as a general rule that whatever I perceive very
clearly and distinctly is true." A true judgement is made when
the object of that judgement is seen "clearly and distinctly."
But in the fourth Meditation that deals with truth and error
specifically, the judgement and the will are taken as one
faculty while the faculty of producing ideas provides for
know ledge. The judgement will' s sole function is to recognize
that something is true. This recognition is merely the recognition of a correspondence between idea and object. The
faculty of judgement, then, adds no know ledge not already
provided by the mind's production of ideas. Judgement itself
is given the material for judgement, i.e., the idea and the object
to which the idea corresponds, and simply pronounces "yes"
or "no."
The result of the dominion of ideas over both the quid
and the quod is that the existence of an object becomes
interpreted in light of the idea which corresponds to it. An
object to which an unclear idea corresponds cannot be said to
exist; hence, an unclear idea cannot be said to correspond to
an actual given thing. A smell, for example, does not indicate
a real object. The greater part of experience becomes in some
sense unreal.
A question remains, however, of what is meant by "clear
and distinct." Descartes shows his meaning in the course of
the Meditations by trying to discover an item of knowledge
that is "clear and distinct" on its own. In the second Meditation
he turns to the "I" as the first object of this self-evident
certainty and the only object whose quod can be resolved
before its quid. He achieves the certainty of the "I" by formulating a series of questions regarding what he can know with

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certainty: "Can I know God? my body? myself?" His only the
last question that Descartes can, indeed must, answer affirmatively. It is the pure subject, the "I," that is unavoidable
regardless of the validity of what the "I" thinks. An "evil
genius" cannot deceive the "I" as to its own existence so long
as the "I" thinks. From this point Descartes turns to the quid
of the "I," asking likewise what cannot be denied of it. The
answer is that thinking cannot be denied the "I" regardless of
whether what is thought is ever true. "I feel," "I doubt," "I
think" all indicate that feeling, doubting, and thinking cannot
be denied the subject and are thus of the quid of the "I."
Undeniability is itself what constitutes certainty. Clarity and
distinctness are to be found in the certainty of the existence
of the " I" and in the certainty of the different types of thinking
as constituting the quid of that "I." In the course of the rigorous
subjection of the world problem to Descartes' method, the
idea of the "I" is the first clear idea to arise.
The argument of the existence and characteristics of the
"I" show that clarity and distinctness are to be found in
undeniability. What this means is that whatever is clear and
distinct cannot be self-consistently denied. But hitherto we
have dealt only with the metaphysical "I." Extension, on the
other hand, can only be undeniably attributed to a thing under
investigation if we assume beforehand that the thing is extended. We must assume that "thing" means "extended thing"
if the denial of"this thing has extension" is self-contradictory.
Descartes, therefore, bases his judgement of what is true of
the wax upon a pre-existent notion of the true make-up of
entities in the world. Descartes, in investigating the quid of
the wax, rejects its mutable characteristics, those that change
when the wax is heated. It is the permanent aspect of the wax
for which Descartes searches. It is assumed beforehand that

intelligible in order to conform to a "form of instruction." The
presence of the wax is the condition of its know ability. And
because knowing a thing is equivalent to knowing what a
thing is, the condition that allows a thing to be known must
also be a condition of its being. In other words, the presence
of an entity is an ontological as well as epistemic presence.
How, then, are entities present to our analysis? How are
entities present in their being? Ideas under mental scrutiny
must fulfill certain criteria implicit in the task of analysis.
Only then can they be considered clear and distinct, considered to correspond to actual entities. The work of analysis is
to start with some given entity and from there to discover its
underlying principle, its ontological make-up. "To start with
an entity" means to isolate the items under scrutiny as entities.
Isolation is a tactic central to the method. An entity is present,
in isolation, and its ontological make-up is such that it is
utterly transparent before "mental scrutiny." Such transparency itself entails that an entity is answerable to the quid
question. Descartes calls the special sort of entity in the world
that is thus isolated and transparent a "body." According to
the sixth Meditation, any body that is "intimately present" to
the mind "therefore exists." For an entity in the world to
qualify as existent it must be "intimately present," meaning
that it must be a body in Descartes' sense.
The question ofbodies-"how are we to account for these
bodies in their isolation and materiality?"-is a new ontological problem, the body problem. The body problem acts as
Descartes' principle of judgement concerning entities in the
world. When he asks "what is true of entities in the world?"
Descartes in essence asks what is true of them insofar as they
are bodies, i.e., insofar as their knowable and real constitution
is accounted for by the sort of "presence" that bodies have.
The question of the existence of entities in the world, and of
the manner in which they exist, becomes more specifically a
question of bodies.
According to Descartes, the world presents itself in bodies to the subject, and the subject unveils the world, finds out
the truth about the world, in terms of those bodies. The world
is extension, and the phenomena of things-the totality of
which make up our intimate experience of the world-are
phenomena of extension. The world problem is reduced to a
body problem. All entities in the world are taken to be bodies,
and thus all entities are required to assume the conditions of
body, viz. permanence and presence. All problems of experience are thought of in terms of extension. Hence the smell of
wax is ultimately explained by the motion of extended substance, while the fundamental question of that experience"what is it about my being that underlies this experience called
smell?"-is left unanswered. Under the dominion of the body
problem, we account for the experience of smell completely
in terms of extension, the object of experience, and not in
terms of the subject. The Cartesian explanation of a pleasant
smell, for instance, would read as follows: "I smell something

this permanent aspect indicates what the wax is "really made
of" Descartes' notion of permanence as that which characterizes the ontological make-up of a thing determines his
judgement of what is "clear and distinct." This determination
in turn determines what is true, and thus what things really
are. In judging specifically of things in the world, Descartes
combines with the notion of permanence a notion of space.
The result of this combination is the notion of permanence in
space. This permanence in space, this "materiality," is assumed as the condition underlying the existence of things in
the world. Permanence in space, or "materiality," is precisely
what Descartes "discovers" in the piece of wax that allows
him to ascribe extension to it as its ontological condition.
The piece of wax presents another condition of its
knowability, another principle of judgement. This condition
is that which first presents the wax to investigation. The form
of investigation, as prescribed by the second plank of
Descartes' doctrine of method, is analytic. According to
Descartes' second set of Replies, analysis is "the best and
ttuest form of instruction." The wax must present itself in such
a way that it can be analyzed. This "presence" must in turn be

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�nature. The investigation of this relation culminates in the
"real distinction between mind and body" found in the sixth
Meditation. the resulting picture is the anthropology of experience. This anthropology interprets the place of the "I" in the
world according to the scientia commanded by the quid of
bodies. The body problem determines the interpretation of all
things, including the "I," insofar as it exists in the world.
According to Cartesian analysis, the "essence of material
things" is shown in the illustration with the piece of wax. The
existence of material things follows easily: if I perceive the
existence clearly and distinctly then they do, in fact, exist.
Also, I perceive clearly and distinctly that I have a body, and
I perceive clearly and distinctly that this body is distinct from
my mind. Hence man's position in the world, his anthropology, comes to light.
The physiological body supplies the subjective constitution that allows for the "intimate presence" of bodies before
the consciousness of these bodies. Hence, the body is temporally prior to the mind in the order of the apprehension of
objects. The mind, however, is necessarily prior to the body
in the principles of knowledge, i.e., in the foundation of a
scientia. It is in the mind that the possibility of an object as
knowable is established. We have already seen how the true
character of a·piece of wax is revealed not through sensation
or imagination but through "mental scrutiny." This scrutiny
also surveys the physiological body in terms of the body
problem. The fact of the body's existence only enters a survey
of the world through the scientia. The physiological body is,
like the wax, an "intimately present" object, even though the
physiological body obviously has a special attachment to the
mind that the wax does not have.
The physiological body, then, is itself seen in terms of
the body problem. Experience is, in tum, seen in terms of
the physiological body. Descartes, the physician who in his
Discourse posits medicine as the end of the scientia, clears
the way for an explication of the experience of phenomena in
terms of the body problem. The practice of medicine must be
raised to a scientia. This transition is made possible by the
method. The unclear ideas surrounding the body, and the
subjective experience of the body, give way in accordance
with the method to the clear ideas, and in particular, to the
overreaching idea of extension. A body's "presence" becomes
the startingpointforthestudy of the body. Wedonotaskwhat
a smell means, nor even what a smell indicates, but rather we
ask what conditions, i.e., what bodies in extension, give rise
to the physiological impression called "smell."
Through an investigation of imagination Descartes offers
an anthropological account of the "intimate presence" of
bodies. Descartes in the sixth Meditation defines the imagination as "nothing else but the application of the cognitive
faculty to a body that is intimately present to [the mind.]" This
"presence" is the condition that makes imagination possible.
"When [the mind] imagines," writes Descartes, "it turns to-

pleasing when bodies in extension emanate from one body
and affect my body in such a way that it benefits." The "I"
that is not a body or my body or my brain but "me," is passed
over in this account. The condition of entities that gives rise
to analysis is made plain, but the condition of entities, including the "I," that gives rise to the phenomenon of consciousness
is passed over.
The world problem, which amounts to the fundamental
question behind experience, is raised from the level of consciousness to the special question of God's existence, beyond
the level of consciousness. The "I" and God are both discovered through the analysis of ideas, and these ideas are assumed
to stand in relation to the world from a vantage point outside
of the world. God is radically separated from the world and
the understanding of God is cast in terms of verification. "Is
God a deceiver?" becomes Descartes' most radical formulation of the world problem. The question, however, refers
directly back to the body problem-"does my assessment of
bodies reveal the truth of entities in the world?" The question
of whether God is a deceiver does not stem from the usurpation of the world problem by the body problem. On the
contrary, it is the body problem that initially determines the
formulation of the question of whether God is a deceiver. The
effect is that the world is thought of in terms of body, while
the "I" and God are radically separate from the world.
When the world problem is resolved into the body problem, the deeper question of what kind of being underlies the
consciousness of entities is left unanswered, and indeed unquestioned. It may be argued, however, that extension does
serve as an account of consciousness. Consciousness, it is
said, originates in the brain. The passions, for instance, are
specifically accounted for by the action of the pineal gland.
This account is in one sense correct, but it is not complete.
The theory behind the functioning of the pineal gland may
admirably account for the appearances, but it cannot account
for the "I." I am not a pineal gland or a brain or any bit of
extension, no matter how important they are to how I carry
on in the world. Following Descartes we regress into a
labyrinth of extension looking for the point at which the "I"
itself enters the world, but we never find it. Only in a world
ontology that includes the fundamental "I'' are the real phenomena of the world capable of explication. Indeed, the
possibility of these phenomena is itself inconceivable until
the "I" is fully explained.
Because Descartes passes over the question of the "I" in
the world, any account of experience can only be made in
terms of the body problem that is in terms of action and
reaction in the world of extension. The quid of bodies as
determined by ideas is now the universal quid of the essential
and true being of bodies. In other words, the world is extension. The result of this assertion is that the question of experience is necessarily referred to a notion of extension. Man's
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ward the body and looks at something in the body that confo1ms to an idea understood by the mind or perceived by the
senses." It is the "something" that is "present" which the
imagination surveys, and this "something" in turn "conforms"
to some idea. This something, then, must be a body that
conforms to some idea. Such a body, insofar as it is imagined,
must in tum be in contact at some point with the physiological
body. In Descartes' anthropology "a body" (corpus) and "the
body" (corpus) are such closely connected terms that in some
passages of the sixth Meditation it is unclear which one is
intended. The physiological body seen in this light is a sort of
tabulation of information about bodies that is yielded up to
the imagination (as tabulator) and the pure "I" (as judge) to
build the scientia. The process of tabulation is easily explained: hard bodies are impressed upon soft membranes;
nerves are pulled and severed; extension affects extension.
Ultimately, ideas determine the whole view. To say that
bodies are intimately present can mean nothing more "anthropologically" than that their essence is accessible to the mind
via the body. An intimately present body can be unclear, but
it cannot escape some sort of place on the tabulation.
The imagination itself is a corporeal or semi-corporeal
faculty. It is conspicuously absent from Descartes' roster of
purely mental faculties featured in the third Meditation.
Furthermore, it is of no avail in those metaphysical matters
concerning God and the "I." The imagination is strictly "an
application ... to a body." According to Descartes, any body
is first accessible through the imagination. When Descartes
turns to the wax, he pictures it in his mind and then reduces
that picture to the underlying extension. This act of picturing
is imagination. Hence, we see the significance of the imagination in the quid question. This significance is especially
apparent when we remember that questions about the world
are ultimately questions about bodies. The concerns with God
and the "I," though central to the plan of the Meditations, are
themselves not part of scientia proper. Problems beyond the
scope of the imagination, i.e., metaphysical problems, are
special ones relating to the foundation of the scientia while
the problems of the imagination, i.e., physical ones, constitute
the body proper of the scientia. Although mention of the
imagination appears late in the Meditations, and is not considered explicitly until the fiftl1 Meditation, this faetµty is all
important in the quid analysis of physical things. The imagination is of no avail, however, in the realm of the metaphysical,
and the realm of the metaphysical is itself entirely out of the
world. Thus tl1e imagination determines the boundary of the
material world by indicating where the physical (imaginable)
ends and the metaphysical (unimaginable) begins.
Descartes' anthropology of method is therefore clear: the
physiological body is referred to the body problem, and the
"I" is refeffed through its physiological connection to the
world. Man in physicality is interpreted according to his role
in the resolution of the body problem. The pure "I," the one

that accords most closely not with "my body" but with what
I mean by "me," is not a concern of the anthropology, but
rather, is a metaphysical concern, i.e., one outside of the
world.
In Descartes' method, the world problem becomes the
body problem while the "I" and God are radically separate
from the world. The consequence of these distinctions is that
Descartes passes over the fundamental questions of the ontological basis for a coming together of the "I'' and entities in the
world. Descartes replaces this question with a physical interpretation of worldly phenomena and a physiological interpretation of subjective experience. The ontology of
consciousness, meanwhile, is neglected and relegated to an
other-worldly sphere. Descartes depicts the "l" peering from a
distance upon a world of bodies, explaining the phenomena of
the objects in terms of bodies. his "I" does not, however,
attempt to explain its own consciousness in terms of world
ontology. This description is itself implied in the method
insofar as the method assumes the body problem as a principle.
Do we, then, reject Cartesian methodology? A defender
of Descartes would say that such a rejection would be foolish.
One does not, he says, dismiss the method and its body
problem on the force of a vague desire for the resolution of
some world problem that may not even be expressible, useful,
or even existent. The Cartesian revolution of thinking consists
largely in what Descartes (in the Discourses) proposes as the
replacement of the "theoretical philosophy of the schools"
with "practical philosophy." In common language, we say that
the Cartesian revolution is motivated by the desire to disregard the world-problem thinking of the Scholastics and replace it with the body-problem thinking of the Method.
Further, says the defender, any attempt to reject Descartes'
method and its conditions seems to oppose rational thought.
Our response to this would-be defender is that the critique
of Descartes' rationalism is not one of the contents of that
enterprise, but rather is an investigation of how that rationalism directs us in an interpretation of the world. If a rejection
of Cartesian methodology carries with it a rejection of the
findings of that methodology applied to the world, i.e. , the
findings of natural science, then such a rejection would be
unwarranted. Keeping our science, however, does not necessarily entail a compete dismantling of the world problem.
Instead, the meaning of our science is called into question, as
is our understanding of the world. It is that understanding that
is here of interest. Our ability to formulate the world problem
is enough to make that problem of importance. Our inability
to conclusively resolve this problem may not be of any real
significance. The question in its very open-endedness, in its
very lack of resolution, carries with it meaning not provided
by the body problem. To raise such a question is indeed within
our rights, and is, perhaps, even our duty.

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�~

Orion outside my window

U

Stacie Slotnick '94

And tonight
I met my guardian angel.
It is not enough
to be kindone must be armed
(at all times).
It is not enough
to pleadto plead for any reason
beyond the stars.
Plead to them.
They see you, they know you,
and they may answer.
Now I know this.
Now I understand.

He is no Beatirice.
He cannot save me.
But he told me
to stay on guard
(at all times),
to aim carefully when I shoot,
and to stand up very straight
when Ido.
("One must never slouch," he
said.)

Tonight
I woke up and saw
Orion outside my window.
He smiled at me.
He straightened his belt and inquired:
"How are you?"
And I asked him:
"You know me?"
He laughed.
So I asked him to show me
how to shoot straight.

So, I have no guardian with white wings
and a gauze gown.
So he does not play a harp
and gaze benevolently.
But he's betterbecause his arrows move quickly
and his eyes gleam with cunning
held in check.

An Investigation of Key Characters .
(and Character's Keys) in Mozart's Don Giovanni
Nancy Marcus '93

Opera is a creative combination of two expressive mediums, a happy union between literature and music. When an
artist has a sufficient understanding of both realms, the dramatic and the musical, he can enhance one with the other,
uniting music and drama into a single unified and aesthetic
whole. Such a successful marriage of mediums is made in
Mozart's opera, Don Giovanni.
Don Giovanni, because of its operatic form, has advantages over both non-textual music and non-musical drama, in
that it can use music to expand the drama and character
development of an already powerful story. Mozart's music,
by itself, can easily affect the moods and emotions of those
who listen to it, without providing any literal ideas to accompany its effects. The drama provided by the plot of the opera,
on the other hand, contributes an abundant supply of ideas and
literary themes which correspond to Mozart's musical
themes.
While the theme and plot of Don Giovanni's story are
complemented by Mozart's music, the opera's music is most
crucial to dramatic progress in the area of character development and the portrayal of the characters' emotions and personalities. In the arias and vocal ensembles of Don Giovanni,
the characters express their sentiments as much though their
music as through their words. Music is able to suspend and
expand their emotions, resulting in a deeper empathy in the
outside audience toward the characters within the drama.
Even when the characters are physically absent from the
stage, their presence can be sensed through the music. This
transposition first occurs in the overture of Don Giovanni. In
Don Giovanni's overture, the music foreshadows future conflict between the characters of the Commandant and Don
Giovanni. The opening chord of the opera, a powerful, tremulous D minor chord, embodies both the characters and their
conflict:

The conflict between the Commandant and the Don can
be felt in this solid declaration of the key of D minor, which
is to become their "key of conflict" throughout the course of
the opera. The Commandant's foreboding presence can also
be felt in this opening chord through the oscillating octaves
in the lower voice of the orchestra. The same descending D
octave heard here is later heard again with added significance,
and will play an important role in the finale, when the two
characters are reunited for their final, most horrific scene
together.
The first thirty measures of the overture continue to
foreshadow the future conflict between the two characters, as
several key themes are played:

These motifs will not be heard again until the climactic scene
in the finale. Direct parallels can be found between the first
eighteen measures of the overture and the first eighteen measures of the Commandant's appearance in the finale.
The overture's ominous beginning loses its grim tone
after thirty measures: as the mode changes to major, the tempo
picks up, and the strings and woodwinds engage in a frantically playful game of tag. One such game of tag occurs with
the frequently appearing phrase:

Lower
Voices

I"

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�but they are also revealed to be deceptively final by their
immediate succession by the aforementioned "stalker"
phrase:

Whenever this phrase occurs, it is either split between two
different voices that chase one another with the same musical
figure or conflicts with another musical phrase.

Wind s

St rin gs

1 - if f1ff~1 1
fn
1 r1 1F f1
2$#F n:r,
1 4~# F

which resumes the musical chase each time.
These unresolved dominants might suggest that the conflict between Don Giovanni and the Commandant is not easily
resolvable. The overture itself is never quite resolved. Such a
lack of resolution rarely appears in the overture of an opera.
The overture starts in D minor, but ends on a C major chord,
not the predominant key of the overture. Instead it segues
directly into the F major key of the scene immediately following the overture. The modulation from D minor to D major to
C major to F major (which is the relative major, and thus an
extension of D minor) is incomplete until the eventual return
to D minor. This completion of the modulation culminates at
the moment of the Commandant's entrance in the first scene.
With the Commandant's entrance, the cycle of modulations
begun in the overture is completed, the "key of conflict" (D
minor) returns, and the conflict between the Commandant and
Don Giovanni becomes a musical reality.
In this first scene of the opera, Leporello's entrance
begins the action with a bit of comic relief, called for by
brooding intensity of the overture. Leporello is portrayed,
both literally and musically, as a shallow character, capable
of only the simplest melodies. In this first scene he seems to
hopscotch around with basic intervals, revealing no ("No! No!
No! No! No! No! No! No!") dramatic or melodic substance.
As is seen in his character throughout the opera, his simplicity
shines through most brilliantly in the "Catalog Aria," a humorous depiction of Don Giovanni's amorous exploits, and
also a revelation of Leporello's pathetic lack of melodic
capability.
But Leporello's character is not the focus of this first
scene; his character is too weak to do anything more than
introduce a scene. Leporello' s arietta, and the transitory key
of F major with which he enters the scene, lasts only seventy
measures. Don Giovanni and Dona Anna then enter the scene,
bringing with them a key change to B flat major, the penultimate step of the series of modulations begun in the overture.
The passionate but brief exchange between Donna Anna and
Don Giovanni is the first glimpse we receive of the Don's
romantic habits, and the only time we see him before his fatal
confrontation with the Commandant.
In this scene, we see a man and a woman engaged in a
violent battle of wills: Donna Anna snuggles to unmask the
man who has "attacked" her, and Don Giovanni to quiet the
furious woman. Yet one hears something more than this battle
in the music between the two, which may as well be a duet

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This second musical conflict, one between the stem,
condemning stalking motion of the descending octaves and
the flightier, carefree tease of eighth notes again exemplifies
the musically metaphoric representation of the Commandant
(in the first phrase) and Don Giovanni (in the second). The
overture is filled with images of a similar nature such as the
unsettling occurrence of unresolved dominants, which may
suggest another unresolved conflict that lies ahead.
The first two of these unresolved dominants are especially striking, for not only do they sound like convincingly
final cadences:

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between lovers. The music here reveals a bond between Don
Giovanni and Donna Anna which the libretto alone cannot
elucidate, a bond which is revealed by Don Giovanni and
Donna Anna' s musical distance from Leporello, the only
other character present. Though all three characters sing simultaneously, Leporello is musically detached from Don
Giovanni and Dona Anna. The latter two characters, oblivious
to Leporello's eighth note ramblings beneath them, alternate
between echoing one another's melodic phrases and singing
together, rather romantically, in parallel thirds.

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As the scene continues the two men duel and Don
Giovanni mortally wounds the Commandant. An andante trio
between the Commandant , Don Giovanni, and Leporello
accompanies the Commandant's death. This trio further reveals the nature of the bizarre bond between Don Giovanni
and the Commandant. Just as Leporello was musically detached from Donna Anna and Don Giovanni in this scene's
earlier trio, he is similarly separated, musically and lyrically,
from the Commandant and Don Giovanni in this later trio.

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Leporello's signing is typically hasty, rushing along with
dotted eighth note-sixteenth note combinations beneath the
slower rhythms of the Commandant and Don Giovanni, sun
together at a mournful, pensive pace:

Having thus introduced Don Giovanni's character to us
through the characters of Donna Anna and Leporello, Mozart
finally brings the Commandant onto the stage. With the
Commandant's first physical entrance the D minor "key of
conflict," anticipated since the overture, reappears. The fatal
struggle between the Commandant and Don Giovanni that
occurs in this opening scene results in the old man's death and
eventually, in the Don's damnation. By killing the Commandant, Don Giovanni precipitates his own downfall; all the
action in the remainder of the opera evolves from this fateful
scene and brings Don Giovanni closer to his second fateful
encounter with the Commandant.
The first musical suggestion of this strange bond between
them occms at the beginning of the battle scene, on "Misero !",
the word sung by Don Giovanni to commence the duel. On
" Misero" (miserable or wretched one) , aimed by Don
Giovanni at the Commandant, Don Giovanni sings a descending octave on D. That musical figure, first heard in the
overture, becomes the trademark address of the Commandant
to Don Giovanni in the final scene between them. It is through
descending octaves that the Commandant condemns Don
Giovanni in the finale and it is upon the same descending D
octave that Don Giovanni eventually falls to his damnation.
lt is ironic, therefore, that the first time this descending D
octave is heard, it is sung by Don Giovanni, and not by the
Commandant. When Don Giovanni curses the Commandant
with the falling D octave, he in effect curses himself, hastening his own descent into hell. The Commandant's later curse
upon Don Giovanni with the same descending octave suggest
that the two enemies have, like a pair of lovers , become as
one.

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The libretto further separates Leporello from the other
two characters. Don Giovanni and the Commandant's words
in this scene are nearly the same. While the Commandant is
singing, "I feel my life ebbing away from my throbbing
breast," Don Giovanni is singing, "I see his life ebbing away
from his throbbing breast." Leporello, however, is far removed from the sentiments of the other two men; he sings, "I
can feel my heart pound with terror in my breast."
The contrast between Leporello' s isolation from the other
characters, and the intertwining of Don Giovanni ' s character
and with the Commandant's is most vividly portrayed by the
music in the last few measures preceding the Commandant' s

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�aria is a fast-paced whirlwind of sensual indulgence, as Don
Giovanni excitedly anticipates the party eh is to throw that
evening, and all the new girls he will soon add to his list. The
frenetic rhythm of this aria mirrors the restlessness in Don
Giovanni's soul. While other characters, when given an aria,
reflect upon themselves in a somewhat leisurely tempo, Don
Giovanni is incapable of the inner stillness required for such
reflection. The cause of his perpetual motion may be his
unquenchable desire for pleasure. But, as Pascal might observe, it may also be seen as a desperate pursuit of distractions
which might forestall the approach of any quiet moments
during which he would be forced to confront the darkness
within himself. Whatever the cause of Don Giovanni's restless presto pace, it contrasts greatly with the slow, deliberate
pace of the Commandant, the ghost of whom, though not yet
materialized, may well haunt the Don in all his actions, as the
audience is haunted, unable to forget the dark, foreboding
music of the overture and the first scene, despite all
Giovanni's attempts at distraction.
Don Giovanni's second aria, "Meta di voi qua vadano,"
is sung to deceive MaBetto and the other armed villagers set
upon the Don's death that he is Leporello. This is an aria of
deception in two respects: Don Giovanni lies to his pursuers
by pretending to be Leporello, but he also lies to himself on a
deeper level. Just as he sees everything else as a game, even
his own destruction becomes a mater of humor to Don
Giovanni, as he sings in this aria, "If you hear a man with a
maid... making love beneath a window, then strike out hard."
The fact that Don Giovanni takes nothing seriously, even his
own life, becomes a matter of fatal consequence later in the
opera.
Both of these arias sung by Don Giovanni are devoid of
the serious emotion which can be found in the arias of the
other characters in the opera. Don Giovanni's arias, although
musically adroit, are comparatively shallow in content.
Don Ottavio' s "Dalla Sua Pace" is a slow, heartfelt song
which concerns his love for Donna Anna. The aria's music,
which wavers between major and minor, reflects Ottavio's
love, a mixture of joy and suffering. Though Don Giovanni
frequently sings about love, with seeming passion, he feels
nothing but momentary flirtation and conquest, nothing
nearly as substantial and pennanent as Don Ottavio' s love for
Donna Anna.
Donna Elvira's aria, "Mi tradi quell'alma ingrata," reveals not only Donna Anna's conflicting feelings for Don
Giovanni, but also a profound understanding of the dangers
of which he seems completely oblivious. The aria is preceded
by a prayer-like recitative, in which Donna Anna accurately
prophesies, "The wrath of Heaven must be at hand; its justice
will not tarry. I see the deadly thunderbolt raised above his
head! I see the fatal abyss open before him." Of her own
feelings for the Don, she sings in the recitative, "Unhappy
Elvira, what conflicting emotions strive in thy heart! Why

death. Leporello is tonally static, maintaining one pitch per
measure, but ascending slowly from one measure to the next:

Meanwhile, Don Giovanni and the Commandant are both
dying musically, singing descending chromatics:

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This musical death shared by both characters emphasizes
the transfonnation of Don Giovanni's curse on the Commandant to a fatal curse upon himself. Her it appears, at least
musically, that by killing the Commandant, Don Giovanni
kills some part of himself. Don Giovanni's tonal descent, or
metaphorical "death" actually begins several measures before
the Commandant's, and on the final note, Don Giovanni falls
to an F, while the Commandant rises up to the same note.
Though the Commandant physically dies on this note, he is
not completely destroyed. His spiritual (or musical) presence
lingers on through the course of the opera, and his physical
presence is also resurrected at the end of the opera.
The music relays the shadowy inconclusiveness of the
Commandant's death in the four measures after he sings his
final note. In these measures, the orchestral music continues
its chromatic descent, which ends on a G major chord in its
first inversion, results in a lack of resolution. In the dialogue
that follows, Leporello' s comic question, "Who's dead? You
or the old man?" echoes the musical confusion which characterizes the previous tragic scene. This crucial step adds an
element of imbalance to the basic conflict between Don
Giovanni and the Commandant, which proceeds from the
questionable pennanence of the Commandant's death, and the
foreshadowing of Don Giovanni's own self-propelled destruction, which has yet to be actualized.
Don Giovanni's self-destructive nature is variously
shown throughout the rest of the opera.
Although Don Giovanni is the central figure in this opera,
present in almost every scene, he is rarely seen alone with his
thoughts. He has only two arias, both of which he sings for
the entertainment or mockery of those around him; in both he
reveals neither serious emotion nor introspection.
The first one of his arias is the presto "Finch 'han dal vino
calda la testa," better known as the "Champagne Aria." The

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these sighs? Why this distress?"
Her emotions, wavering between selfish hurt at his injustice toward her and selfless pity for his soul, are echoed in the
music, which alternates between her sighs of pity-

Even the threat from the apparition of his mortal enemy
fails lo shake Don Giovanni's casual attitude; the statue's
warning is to him just one more challenge in the game of life.
As this scene concludes with Leporello' s aria, which Don
Giovanni forces him to sing, in order to invite the statue to
dinner, Don Giovanni's path to his inevitable damnation in
the finale approaches its fatal end.
Undaunted, Don Giovanni opens the finale in a spritely
D major key, feasting and drinking in preparation for a dinner
guest from Hell. Don Giovanni's humor is contagious; even
Mozart cannot resist making fun of himself with a musical
pun.

and her angry cries to God about the wretchedness Don
Giovanni has brought upon her.
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The sighs outweigh the angry outbursts in this aria, and Donna
Elvira remains the one character, apart from the Commandant,
concerned for the salvation of Don Giovanni's soul.
It is appropriate that this aria is immediately followed by
the "statue scene." The "statue scene" (Act II, Scene XII)
again displays Don Giovanni's flippant attitude towards
death. In this scene, his extreme tendency to laugh at everything, coupled with his inability to fear his soul (as Donna
Elvira does for him in her aria), leads him to literally invite
the form of his own damnation to dinner. This scene begins
with Don Giovanni's laughter, which resounds throughout his
duet withLeporello, as he recounts the trouble he's made, and
the girls he's recently encountered. Leporello,w ho in earlier
scenes occasionally expresses mild disapproval of his
master's lifestyle, becomes truly offended in this scene, when
Don Giovanni relates an amorous exploit he had with one of
Leporello's own love interests. Under the shadow of the
Commandant's moonlit statue, Leporello demands of Don
Giovanni, "Supposing she had been my wife?" and then Don
Giovanni callously laughs in response, "Better still!"
At this moment, the statue of the Commandant comes to
life, supported by the forceful harmony of a brass ensemble,
and sings a warning to Don Giovanni: "Your jest will turn to
woe ere it is morning!"

The playful mood of the scene's opening is broken as
Donna Elvira rushes in with one last attempt to convince Don
Giovanni to change his ways. Don Giovanni's response is
typically mocking, and Donna Elvira finally surrenders her
hope for him, singing, "Monster! Then remain a horrible
example in the stinking pit of your iniquity!" She sings this
denunciation on a descending octave,

the same musical figure (though in a different key) with which
Don Giovanni curses the Commandant in the first scene, and
which the Commandant repeats as he enters in the final scene.

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�The orchestra ushers the Commandant's ghost to the
stage with two dissonant chords of thunder, which the Commandant resolves into D minor in his address to Don
Giovanni:

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With his entrance, the Commandant brings about a complete
key change to D minor, the "key of conflict," sobering the
tone from the relative F major that preceded his entrance. This
entrance, as foreshadowed in the overture, begins the culmination of the conflict between the Commandant and Don
Giovanni. The struggle between the characters in these first
eighteen measures of the Commandant's entrance, which
parallel the first eighteen measures of the overture, is depicted
in their music more forcefully than in their words. The
Commandant's forceful, regular rhythms and condemning
descending octaves are engaged in a musical battle against the
more agitated, syncopated rhythms shared by Don Giovanni
and Leporello, which are confined to a span of five pitches ,
as if to escape the fearful octaves sung by the Commandant.
The orchestra supports the Commandant with the rhythmic phrase,

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The source of the agitation which the two display musically
differs in each of the two men. Don Giovanni is not (at least
externally) afraid; he is rather beside himself with the excitement of playing host to such a tremendous dinner guest,
singing in response to the Commandant's appearance, "Truly,
I did not believe it, but I'll do what I can. Leporello, serve the
table for my guest-bring another platter!" The source of
LeporeHo's agitation, however, is his understandably extreme
fear, which separates him from his master, and reveals him to
be the wiser of the two. Voicing the fear which Don Giovanni
mocks, Leporello exclaims, "Ah, master. ..we are all dead
men!" Don Giovanni, having no patience for the cowardice
of his servant, rebukes Leporello, singing, "Go, I say!"

Vanne d1co

in his address to Don Giovanni, and throughout the scene. The
dotted rhythms beneath the Commandant emphasize the
downbeats of his phrases, and further reinforce the adamance
of his weighty half notes.
The orchestral music which accompanies Don Giovanni
andLeporello, is, in contrast, rhythmically syncopated, stressing the agitated response to the Commandant's appearance:

Ferma un po' T
(stay)

In this brief moment of rebuke, Don Giovanni loses control,
taking on that same musical phrase with which the Commandant addresses him upon his arrival.
The Commandant does not miss the irony of Don
Giovanni's unintentional musical slip; he repeats the descending D octave back to Don Giovanni, reclaiming his authority,
and reversing Don Giovanni's order to Leporello:

/Jon Giovanni

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This demanding invitation results in a musical struggle
between the ghost's octaves and Don Giovanni's rising
fornths, which, in conjunction, add up to the musical figure,

The final musical battle of wills between the Commandant and Don Giovanni having now commenced, the ghost of
the Commandant begins to explain his purpose in coming to
dinner: "Earthly food he no longer desireth, who of heavenly
food hath partaken! Another purpose more grave than this,
another mission, brought me here." The orchestra's music
accompanying this ominous statement is a powerful succession of chromatically rising scales, each one bringing increasing tension to the scene, while the Commandant's voice,
unmoved by the turbulence he creates beneath him, remains
stolid in his slow, deliberate composure of constant half notes
and minimal tonal movement.

I affectionately dub this the "tragic hero motif," for contained
within it is the triumphant fourth representing the hero, and
the falling octave which symbolizes his downfall. It is with
this musical figure that the Commandant addresses Don
Giovanni upon entering the finale, and with the same musical
motif Don Giovanni finally falls to his damnation.
In the musical struggle here presented, the motif is split
between the descending octaves just heard in the
Commandant's invitation and the rising fourths in Don
Giovanni's proud, heroic-sounding response:

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The musical battle continues as the Commandant's deliberate rhythms and monotonic speech oppose the other two
characters' agitated inte1Tuptions. WhileLeporello's interruptions fear, Don Giovanni's become bursts of increasing impatience with the presumption of his dinner guest. Don
Giovanni's impatience soon begins to mirror the
Commandant's own impatience; the speech of the two characters becomes increasingly similar, leaving poor Leporello
behind in his trembling triplets. Don Giovanni continually
repeats, "Parla, parla, ascoltando ti sto," ("Speak then, I am
listening.") and the Commandant similarly repeats, "parlo,
ascolta, piu tempo non ho,"(" speak, listen, my time is short.")
The climactic moment of the finale begins when the
Commandant sings his most forceful speech, a speech abundant with descending octaves, as he demands that Don
Giovanni accept a reciprocal dinner invitation to Hell.

The commandant responds to Don Giovanni's rising
fourths with minor tenths, which suggest an even more demanding imperative than does the octave. In response to the
Commandant's last question ("You'll come?"), Don
Giovanni attempts a final musical moment of triumph,
grandly singing, "My heart is firm within me, I have no fear,
I'll come," before he takes the Commandant's hand. This
moment of glory is short-lived; as soon as he takes the hand
of the Commandant, he cries out in horror:

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His fourth, no longer heroic, has become diminished!
111is is the first sign of a strange musical transition that
begins to occur between Don Giovanni and the Commandant
as they stand, bonded together by a deadly handshake. The

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�by singing the pitch a mere halfstep below the tonic, a C#. In
response to this near realization of the tonic, the Commandant
sings, "Si! Si!" on an A and an F, which forms the top part of
a D minor triad. Don Giovanni's completion of this triad is
almost inevitable. Don Giovanni cannot, indeed, avoid singing the Don his next "No!", but he does so with a horrible
scream an octave above the expected D, and without any
verbal repentance. Though he tries to escape the D he is forced
to sing by succeeding it immediately with an A, it is too late.
He has sealed his doom by singing the tonic, as the Commandant makes clear, singing, "Ahl Your time has now come!"
The Commandant ends this damning proclamation with a
clear return to D minor, accompanied by the fires of hell and
a chorus of demons, who sing, "No doom is too great for your
sins! Worse torments await you below!"
After bringing the hellfire and demons to the stage, and
reintroducing the key of D minor, the Commandant departs
the action of the opera. His purpose fulfilled, he leaves Don
Giovanni surrounded by infernal wrath, the fires of Hell
lapping hungrily at his soul. Don Giovanni finally confronts
the darkness which surrounds him as he sings, "My soul is
torn in agony, my body is in torture! What torment! What
madness! Ah! What hell! What terror!" Just before the flames
engulf Don Giovanni, bringing a most horrifying end to his
earthly existence, he sings:

Commandant, no longer accompanied by the dotted rhythms
of the orchestra, loses the rhythmic regularity he possessed up
until this point, and instead sings with the same rhythmic
figures as Don Giovanni. The effect of this musical change is
the Commandant is that he seems to take on some of Don
Giovanni's agitation, losing his statuesque composure.
The orchestra's tremulous forte music is also agitated in
this incredible moment which embodies the musical suggestion made earlier in the opera of a bond between Don Giovanni
and the Commandant. For the first time, Don Giovanni grows
fearful, losing his ability to control the moment at hand,
capable only of singing "No!" to each "Yes" sung by the
Commandant.; the struggle between them becomes more
fierce even as they become more unified musically.
In this struggle for Don Giovanni's soul, during which
the Commandant actually tries to save Don Giovanni by
allowing him a last chance for repentance, the music metaphorically illustrates the conflict between them and the conflict between the characters' cries and the tonic D of the D
minor key, the "key of conflict." Each of the Commandant's
cries "Si" points diatonically to a resolution on D, the tonic,
but each of Don Giovanni's "No" sidesteps the admittance of
the resolving D. But each time he refuses to sing the D that
the Commandant demands of him, he does so by an increasingly narrow margin.

....0...

Ah!

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This solid cadence concludes the saga of Don Giovanni
in D major, not minor. This big change in no way mitigates
the finality of his demise, but rather restores to the world the
joy that Don Giovanni's existence detracted from it. The
happy ending is further celebrated in the scene that follows
Don Giovanni's fall. In the last scene of the opera, all the
remaining essential characters come together to sing about
living (more or less) happily ever after.
While this opera might appear to some to be primarily
about Don Giovanni's romantic adventures, I would argue
that it is instead an opera about the conflict within a man who
has no conscience. The conflict that occurs within Giovanni's
soul may be metaphorically represented by his conflict with
the Commandant. As the music reveals, in killing the Commandant, Don Giovanni kills a part of himself. It may well be
that in the battle between them, Giovanni murders his own
conscience. In some obscure part of his soul, Don Giovanni's
conscience lingers on throughout the action of the opera,
though as embodied by the Commandant, it is not physically
present. Eventually, Don Giovanni is compelled to confront
this part of himself one last time, hoping to destroy it completely (or, at least, to get it drunk). But the Commandant, the
embodiment of his conscience, can never be destroyed, for he
(it) is as much a part of Don Giovanni as the music he makes.
Unwilling to part with his libertine lifestyle and unable to
completely destroy his conscience, Don Giovanni can only
destroy himself, and join his conscience-the Commandant-in Hell.

It is highly significant that Don Giovanni's character falls
to its damnation on this musical figure, the earlier mentioned
"tragic hero motif;" this is the only time Don Giovanni embraces this phrase in reference to himself. There can hardly be
any doubt that in this moment, when Don Giovanni sings the
damning D octave, surrounded by the fires of Hell, his end is
conclusive. Unlike the inconclusiveness of the music that
follows the Commandant's death, the orchestra's cadence at
the end of Don Giovanni's scene is deliberate and final.

The first "Si" that the Commandant sings in on a C, in
response to the B natural of Don Giovanni's "No" that precedes it. The natural response to this progression from B to C
is the next successive pitch, the tonic D, but Don Giovanni
avoids that resolution; his next "No" is on an F#. This F# is,
however, closer to the impending tonic that the B natural of
his earlier "No." The Commandant then proceeds to edge Don
Giovanni even closer to D with his next "Si" which falls on a
G, but again Don Giovanni sidesteps an easy resolution on D

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�~

The Reeve' s Tale by Geoffry Chaucer
Lines 321-375 translated from Middle English and paraphrased in Native Rural Texan

Kathleen Wilson GI '93

Up at Ingram, up the road from Kerrville at the Quinlan Creek
crossing there's a low-water bridge. Back from the road a
piece, right where the bridge runs by a thick cedar brake,
there's a saw mill for cedar choppers, still work.in'. Now this
is the truth of it.
There was a ole chopper operatin' it years ago. May still
be there. He was a big old boy, prouder of hisself than any
chopper around those paits. Strutted like a fanned-out peacock, could bring down a deer with a bow and arrow on a
foggy morning after a beer bust. Never got too drunk to fish ,
either, and wrastled for the joy of it. He was always decked
out with knives. He'd stick one in his belt, one in a scabbard
on the belt, and a ole Sheffield knife down in his sock. Them
knives was honed sharp e,1ery day, ready for him to use.
Didn't nobody mess with this chopper who didn't want to die.
His face was big ai·ound as a big moon pie, with his nose
flat in the middle of it. He was bald as a gorilla besides, and
brought hisself into town pretty regular, swaggering and
blustery. Didn't nobody want a thing to do with him, what
with his being such a nuisance and mean to boot. People pretty
much stayed clear of him, as they didn't want him toting a
grudge against them.
The truth of it is, he was nothing but a slick thief, and
could cheat a rancher in a cedar deal by just looking and acting
as dumb as any other old chopper. He was a sly one, all tight.
He was used to turning a living that way. He was called
Scornful Simon, and didn' t tolerate any foolishness about his
name. Which everybody knowed, so Simon it was.
When Simon got hisself a wife, it was a girl in the town.
Her momma considered her fine , and she thought so herself.
Even the preacher from the Holiness Church, who was the
best preacher that Holiness crowd had seen in a coon's age,
took an interest in helping the girl, sending her to the Holiness
school on scholarship and such, and the family was proud
about it., The fact of it was that the girl took her looks from
the Holiness preacher. Which everybody knowed. Simon was
a fine one for her. He had high aspirations that way; ai1d since
it was time for her to get mai-ried and he was there and willing,
the Holiness Church had a shower at the preacher's urging,
and loaded her up with pot-, and pans and whatall, as a little
enticement to get the wedding done. So Simon got hisself a
suitable wife for a third-generation chopper, and a virgin to
boot, what with the Holiness crowd watching out after her all
that time.
That girl was a cheeky thing, brazen as a jaybird, and she
detennined to have a show of it. At the Holiness Church
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folk, Simon marched right down to the front row of folding
chairs under the tent, wearing a custom-creased Stetson. She
was right behind, decked out in polyester chiffon, red of some
kind as it was her color, al ways matched to the feather trim in
Simon's hatband. Which everybody knowed was show, as
snakeskin is enough for a hatband and a feather is painting the
lily. It was "Yes, sir" and "yes, ma'am" to the two of them
when they got with that Holiness crowd.
The men of the church was a cautious lot around that pair.
Nobody looked twice, passed the hymn book special, or talked
over the goings-on with Miz Simon for her chopper was a
jealous man, and he come prepared to exact a price from any
who got out of line, what with his knives tucked around him.
He was a dangerous man when his jealousy was roused. And
even if he wasn't everybody thought he was. Which Miz
Simon knowed, and was careful about it.
She kept her nose in the air anyway. She was a stink with
pride, bad as water in a ditch. She knowed who she was,
special and all, with her special looks and special education.
So she scorned 'most everybody in the town and in the
Holiness Church. She was superior-like.
That pair got themselves a daughter, and when she was
about 20 there came another one, a fine looking boy laying in
its cradle. the girl was a chubby one, with glass-grey eyes, fine
pretty hair, but Simon's same flat nose parked in the middle
of her face. She was a big-boned girl, and had a behind any
quarter horse would take pride in, and a bodacious set of
ta-ta's. As some people say. And that was the family.
The Holiness preacher, who put much stock in family
values, took a constant interest in Simon's girl, though he did
it quiet-like. He intended to leave her all his worldly possessions since he had no offspring of a legitimate nature, and
since he was interested in matching her up with someone of a
like ancestry he wanted her undefiled. After all, his worldly
possessions come from the Holiness Church, whether direct
from salary or from more round-about ways, and he intended
for his own blood (which would be considered holy if the
Holiness Church ever inclined to think that way, which they
wasn't as it was idolatrous) to be rewarded no matter how bad
he had to bleed his congregation.
Getting back to Simon and his business sense, he was
shrewd about taking in juniper logs for fence posts, or sweet
cedar for milling. He charged a heavy toll per load, but what
was brought in at one end of the mill for preparing and selling
was not always what come out at the other. Now one of his
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�where Simon strips the cedar logs. I don't know one thing
about the lumber business. I believe I'll just st.and here and
watch." Alan allowed as how that was such a good idea that
he'd just stand at the foot of the mill and watch the sweet cedar
come through as Simon sawed it into fine two by fours.
Simon just smiled, and his brain was a-spinnin'. "So they
want a honest deal," he thought to hisself. "I guess they got it
all worked out in their college-educated brains. Well, I ain't
the learned sort, but my mama didn't raise no fool. Let 'em
try to keep a eye on me. Those two are going to haul h?me
twisted-up juniper that wouldn't make a fence post and milled
wood that ain't fit for nothin' but to fuel a fire.
Simon was out the door fast as a hog on ice. He headed
straight for the horse and wagon. He sidled up to that horse
friendly-like, unhitched it, and eased off the bridle. He give it
a little slap on the behind for encouragement, and off it run.
Didn't take long for that horse to figger out they was. a herd
of wild mares nearby. Bein' the horse of preachers, he had the
appetites of preachers, and headed right toward 'em a mile a
minute.
The chopper headed back inside to his sawmill and did
his jobs as good as he'd ever done, with Alan and John
awatchin'. When the posts was bound together,and the lumber
stacked John headed out to get the wagon, and he was pretty
pleased with hisself. That is, until he saw he'd lost his horse
and was well nigh stranded in the cedar brake. It was not a
desirable place to be stranded, which everybody knowed.
"Lord help us, Alan," he hollered. "We've gone and lost the
horse! Get out here quick! We're done for!"
"What? Lost? We got to find him! Which way was he
headed?" Alan yelled. He ran outside and didn't think no more
about the sorry enterprises of old Simon and how he was going
to prevent 'em from occurring. "Where's our horse?" he
wailed. Those fine ways of talkin' went out the window, and
they both commenced to hopping up and down, they was so
distressed.
Out come Simon's fine wife, looking mournful and holding the bridle and reins. "Your horse has done gone past the
cedar break and into the clearing. He's found the wild mares,
and there's no getting him back now. What sorry soul tied him
up so sloppy?" She stared at 'em accusing-like.
Alan looked at John and John looked at Alan. Finally
John spoke up. "Throw that knife down outen your belt, Alan.
We look like regular fools here. I'm fast as a roadrunner and
soareyou. We'regettin' ourhorseback." Andtheybothflung
down their knives and headed into the cedar brake.
Simon commenced to talking to hisself even as he waved
goodbye to 'em. "They may be smart and scholarly enough to
handle the High Church crowd, but they aint learned enough
to trick the likes of me yet. Them two will be hauling home
some cedar post not fit to wrap a wire around." and he
swapped out their cedar for a pile he'd got thatnobody'd buy,
what with it being so gnarled and twisted.

training of future preachers of the Protestant persuasion. They
was viewed as a High Church bunch to the Holiness crowd,
and proved to be easy pickings for Simon's particular business
practices. Especially the building and grounds man, who was
on the simple side. He hauled in cleared cedar on a regular
basis, bringing it by horse-drawn wagon since the roads was
too rough for much else, transportation-wise. Which everybody knowed. When the building and grounds man took sick
Simon was like a hog at the trough. His profits from the
college doubled and doubled again. Where he once had held
back a little, as one who believed in honor among thieves, now
he turned hisselfloose. The director of the college made a fuss,
writing letters and all, but that was nothing to Simon, who
even took to bragging about his business sense, and allowed
as how anybody who had serious complaints could settle them
the Holiness way, with knives and such. Which nobody from
the Protestant bunch much wanted to do.
Two of them Protestant college boys, figuring theirselves
to be pretty smart and being restless for a little adventure, got
the school to send them out to the saw mill so as they could
keep an eye on that cedar chopper when he took their fence
posts in to the mill to get the bark stripped. They figured they'd
easy catch him trying to cheat them by swapping their good
straight posts and sweet cedar for old bent and wormy wood.
They was named Alan and John, and they had charming High
Church ways. They had a way of talking that was much
admired, especially in a pulpit man. It also weighed a good
bit as part of their skill for persuasion. They was allowed to
go.
Alan and John hitched the horse to the wagon and loaded
it up with cedar for posts and cedar for sawing. They even
stuck knives in their belts, figuring they was to have more
advantage if they looked like they was used to dealing with
all kinds. John took the reins and headed for that creek like a
bee to honey, for he knew the way from secretly admiring
those Holiness girls any chance he got.
When they got there Alan took to hollering. "Hey, Simon,
how y'all? How's the wife? Where's that girl of yours?"
"Well, my Lord!" Simon was at his sociable best. "If it
ain't Alan and John! What're y'all doin' here?" He lounged
at the door to his mill grinnin' a big 'possum grin.
"Our building and grounds man has took sick and we
think he's ready to give up the ghost. That's how bad it is. So
we can either do this job ourselves or get took for fools. We've
got the finest straight cedar logs for you to peel for fence posts,
and sweet cedar to go through the mill. You fix it and we'll
carry it home again, as we can use it at the college. What we
don't use we' ll sell in the town. Quick as you can get it done,
we '11 be out of your hair," J oho spoke up.
"You want it, you got it!" Simon crowed, for he had
spotted a business opportunity for hisself. "What you boys
want to do while I'm workin' fer you?"
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Meanwhile, John and Alan was galloping after their
horse, yelling "Whoa up!" and "Halt!" but they never caught
him till nightfall, when they'd run him all the way back to the
road and chased him into a borrow ditch. They was all three
spent and had sweated a right lot besides.
"I wish I'd never been homed," yelled John. "Look at the
fix we're in. That old fool has for sure swapped out our good
cedar posts, and the whole town will know soon enough we 're
fools, not to think of the laugh the Holiness crowd will have
on us." He dragged the horse by the reins, Alan bringing up
the tail, till they got back to the cedar mill. There was old
Simon, asitting by his fire and looking serene as a saint at the
gate. Seein' as it was night, they appealed to Simon's Holiness
trainin' to take 'em in. And with some cash thrown in to seal
the deal, he did.
"My house ain't much," Simon opined, "and you are
educated folk, but you are welcome to a spot in it. Talk it
bigger if it ain't grand enough." Alan andJ ohn began to soothe
their host, taking his invitation as a great and clever joke, and
saying that, after all, a man can have one of two things- such
as he finds or such as he brings. They was willin' to settle for
what they found. Hoping as they were for some meat, some
home brew, and a bed, the two of 'em was happy to cough
over a little cash money in return.
Simon set to roasting a goose, and charged his daughter
with rounding up the bread and brew, and the whole family
saw to it that the horse was tied and hobbled so as not to get
loose agai11 . That chopper made up a bed with sheets and quilts
for the town boys, not twelve feet from his own bed. The
daughter slept nearby, all of ' em light in the same room.
They ate and talked, and took in all the ale they could
hold and then some, what with needing to cheer themselves
up. Around midnight the lot of them headed for bed. The
miller had done oiled hisself up, and was white as a sheet from
drinkin', havin' passed the red stage altogether. He belched a
good bit, then pulled his wife over to the bed to lie beside him .
She was stirred up as a cat stalking a jay, the ale having a
opposite effect upon her, but settled in after tuckin' the wee
one into his cradle at the foot of the bed. She needed to keep
him handy, in case he needed rockin' or suckin' in the night.
The daughter also headed to bed, but not until she'd used the
last drop in the jug, and Alan and John went down also. A
dead quiet fell over the room, for nobody needed a sleeping
draught after all they'd pulled from the jug.
Simon had done took in so much ale that he begun to snort
and whinny in his sleep, workin' both ends as if they was
musical instruments. The wife soon joined in with a powerful
bass snore, and it was a blessing there were no near neighbors,
for the sound would have kept the countryside awake.
Alan poked John. "Are you asleep? Have you ever heard
the like? They're singin' Wednesday night prayer service
among 'em. It's a fire in their lungs. Well, that redneck may
have our good logs, but they'll all have the worst of it in the

end, for I'll not rest my eyes this long night; but no matter, for
I'll have justice done us. For, John," he said," I intend to have
that chopper's daughter. I'll swivel her proper before this
night is done. It's the law, ain't it?" For he was forgettin' that
fine coatin' of high church ways. "For the law says it clear
that if a man's grieved on one point he's to be relieved on
another, and by God I'm gettin' into that gold mine tonight."
"Aw, hell, Alan!" hissed John in Alan's ear. "That chopper is a dangerous man. If you git that girl, he's like to wake
up and then we're both done for."
"He don't scare me," Alan hissed back. 'Tm as scared of
him as I am of a house fly." And up he rose, and crept in like
a coachwhip snake in the hen house, close beside her. By the
time she woke up, it was too late to c1y out, and she soon found
that she didn't want to give a warnin ', for he was artful as
clergy are wont to be, and they was soon the same as one.
And while Alan played, John lay still, thinking dark
thoughts. "This is tumin' out to be a bad joke," he brooded,
"with the laugh on me. I'm left over here lookin' like a regular
ape, but Alan has got repayment for the harm done him. He's
got that chopper's girl to lay with. He took the chance, but I
lay like a log in my bed. When this joke gets spread 'round
town I'll sound like the sissy and the fool. Well Iain 't havin'
it. I can take a risk, too. They say a coward has no luck. Well,
I'm beginnin' to feel lucky." And up he rose, got hold of the
cradle, and carried it back to the foot of his own bed.
Not long after, that wife left off snoring and woke up, for
she needed to take a piss. She headed outside to the outhouse,
and soon come back in, groping for the cradle in the dark and
not finding it. "Lord God," she whispered to herself, "I like to
got in bed with those two boys. Wouldn't that have ripped
Simon's britches!" She felt around some more in the dark and
finally took hold of the end of the cradle. She crawled up into
the bed and laid herself down close beside young John, where
she would have gone back to snoring but for John's sudden
activity. He rolled right on top of her and took to showin' her
a good time such as she hadn't had in many years (for that
chopper carried his manhood more in his blades than in his
trnusers, as tl1e size of his family attested to. Which nobody
knowed but the wife, and she was wise not to mention it). John
rogered her like a madman, and in fact those two young
cocksmen kept at it till the cocks crowed at dawn.
Alan was raw and weary by this time, for he had met his
match on the mattress and had been at it all the night. "Farewell, Molly my sweet," he said. "Here comes the sun, and I'll
be leaving. But wherever I go, remember that I am your own
true man, and I do hope for your happiness."
"Goodbye, sweetheart," she cried. "But before you go,
know this one thing. As you head out, stop by the right of the
sawmill. You'll find a pile of fine straight cedar post, peeled
and ready, that is your very own load of cedar which I helped
my daddy steal. Take it back, and God save you, my big fine
man." And she commenced to weeping.

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Alan rose up and headed back to the bed where he knew
his friend was layin." But he put his hand on the cradle at the
foot of the bed and thought, "Oh, Lord, my head is still
spinnin' for I outdid myself this night. I've nearly got in the
bed with Simon and his wife." So he crept 'round, with the
devil's own luck, and got into bed with the chopper when he
thought he was in with John. He grabbed that chopper by the
neck and began to whisper soft to him.
"Wake up, John, you hog's head, for the love of Christ,
and hear a brave game. I swear on a stack of Bibles that I have
three times this night had the chopper's daughter, and in ways
that didn't occur to no missionaries. I'm a man and not afraid
to prove it, while you lay abed scared."
Up rose Simon, eyes buggin' out, screamin'. "You sorry
bastard! Is that what you've done? You ain't fit to be a
preacher, dishonoring my fine daughter and defiling her fine
family tree!" And the cords bulged out on his neck as he
screamed. He grabbed Alan by the throat, and Alan grabbed
him right back and socked him on his flat nose. The blood
flowed down like a river on Simon's chest. Down they rolled
onto the floor, rollin' around like two hogs in a waller. Up
they got, down they went, till finally Simon fell back onto the
bed where his wife slept, exhausted from her own night-long
workout with John. Jolted wide awake, she began to bray like
an ass. "Lord, take me home! I'm ready to give up the ghost!
Help, Simon! Wake up! These preacher fiends has started a
fight and one has fallen on me!"
John rose up quick and groped along the walls hoping to
find a walking stick. She rose up at the same time, and
knowing the walls better than the young preacher, latched
right on to a stick. Seein' a little shimmer of light, she picked
out the fighters. She honed in on what appeared to be a scrap
of white cloth, which she took for the young preacher's
nightcap, and took aim and smashed down with that stick.
Down fell Simon, clutching his bald head and hollerin',
"I'm done for!" Alan and John jumped on him as quick as
they'd jumped on his women, and beat him soundly, and left
him layin' there on the floor. They quick got their horse,
hitched their wagon load of cedar post to him, and headed
back to civilization as they knew it.
And thus was the proud chopper well beaten, and poorer
by one load of cedar post and enough groceries to feed a crowd
at a church supper. His wife had been rogered, and his daughter too, and that is what happens to a dishonest chopper. He
should have expected it, for he who does evil is repaid with
good in the Bible but in the world it is a different story. The
truth is, the lot of 'em - Holiness and High Church- was
common as pig tracks. Which everybody had suspected and
now everybody knows.

by Jean Holman

There in the half-light in the shadow of her brain they drank straight
vodka from paper cups
By candle light
And he noticed that her eyes were more than blue
"And what is in that head of yours," he said
As the candle flickered across the starkness of her cheek
Like a searchlight passing on an asylum wall
"Constellations saclificed across the sky
Virgins crucified in starlight,"
She said, "You will go to heaven when you 're dead
But I shall live forever here in dim light
With my stany lovers."

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�An Introduction to Kant

D

Laurence Berns

Most introductions to Kant begin with his modifications
of the doctrines inherited from Descartes, Locke, Leibniz,
Hume and others whose philosophies can be associated with
modem mathematical physics. This procedure is certainly
correct, but is it sufficient? We suggest that it is not, because
it tends to obscure a part of the whole, if not the, fundamental
stratum of Kant's thought. By emphasizing those modifications, the premises which those thinkers all share, in particular
those premises formed in opposition to the classical PlatonicAristotelian approach, tend to be taken for granted, to be
insufficiently questioned, and thereby to be insufficiently
clarified. 1 Itis, nevertheless, generally acknowledged that the
issues between the "modems" and the "ancients" were fundamental issues for Kant. The following inb·oduction was designed to approach the study of Kant in such a way as to clarify
these issues and to see how dealing with them shaped his
philosophy as a whole. The key to this approach is the articulation of the very close connection of Kant's thought with
the thinking of Thomas Hobbes, for Hobbes seems to be
unrivalled for the lucidity with which he stated his oppostion
to classical thought while working out what have come to be
called the foundations of modem thought.

" ... whatsoever accidents or qualities our senses make us
think there be in the world, they be not there, but are seeming
and apparitions only." What we think are the characterisitics
of things in themselves are rather the effects upon, or appearances in, ourselves of causes or things which are in themselves
utterly unknown to us. As for intelligibles, the realm of ideas,
Hobbes tells us that universals are not in rerum natura (Elements . .. , 5.6); "there being nothing in the world Universal
but Names; for the things named, are every one of them
Individual and Singular" (Leviathan, ch. 4 ). In his logical and
methodological chapters he frequently criticizes Aristotelian
philosophy for taking logical distinctions for metaphysical
distinctions, for mistaking discourse about our thoughts and
the ordering of our thoughts for discourse about things in
themselves. Traditional metaphysics from this point of view
is absorbed by logic, if not by psychology.
Kant continued and developed this critique. According to
him we can have no knowledge of things in themselves;
science, the study of nature, is concerned only with what
appears to us, with what lies in our experience and as far as
we can know, lies only in our experience. We may be forced
to think, but we have no way of knowing, that what lies in our
experience exists outside of or beyond our experience. We can
know only "phenomena," the Greek word for appearances.
Sense intuition, furthermore, is the only intuition available to
us, there is no such thing as intellectual intuition for man. To
bring this point home Kant contrasts phenomena, which we
can know, with "noumena," the Greek word which he knew
meant objects of nous, objects of intellectual intuition. In his
Critique of Pure Reason he defines noumena negatively, as a
word to refer to that which we can in no way know, an
unknowable "x," the unknowable thing in itself.
Yet Kant differed from most of the earlier modems; he
seemed to aim at restoring certain aspects of classical thought.
He is often regarded as the man who reinstated thinking as the
most authoritative element of experience. He insisted that to
identify the source of our thoughts with the source of our
sensations is "intolerable." He claims to have demonstrated
that although we can know only phenomena, we can have
objective, universal and necessary judgements about them.
His famous phrase is "Concepts without intuitions are empty
and intuitions without concepts are blind." Thought, the
"concept," is what forms and makes meaningful the unorganized material of sense data. There is something like a "realm
of ideas" in Kant, but it in no way exists outside of the human
mind. Kant's substitute for "ideas," "concepts," have no
special purely intellectual objects of their own; they are valid
and meaningful theoretically only in application to human

I
On the supposition that genuine knowledge is attainable
for human beings Plato, Aristotle and their followers argue
that human beings are endowed by nature with two kinds of
intuition or insight, two intuitive faculties, sensation, or sense
intuition, and intellectual intuition, or intelligence (nous).
These faculties when used correctly, according to Alistotle,
enable us to understand and to know the sensible and intelligible characteristics of the things to which they are applied,
that is to say, the characterisitics of the things themselves.
While both faculties are indispensable for humans, the intelligence is most athoritative; to be in the fullest sense for Plato
and Aristotle is to be intelligible, and, perhaps, intelligent. The
ideas , intelligible forms, the universals, are the most stable
elements in the world and in the most fundamental Vfay, shape
the character of the world. The intelligibles come to be the
primary objects of the highest kind of inquiry, tl1e study which
came to be called metaphysics.
The great modern opponents of the classical tradition,
Bacon, Descartes, Hobbes, and Locke seemed to regard this
presupposition of harmony between the mind of man and the
nature of things as a kind of naive optimism. Nature is not a
kind mother, she deceives us; the cognitive equipment she has

endowed us with conceals rather than reveals the true character of things. In Hobbes' Elements of the Law, 2 2.10, we read,

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�experience, meaning sense experience. Reason, the ultimate
source of understanding, and its concepts, is not intuitve, but
legislative; it provides rules for the meaningful organization
of sense experience, these rules we call concepts. Thus Kant
can say paradoxically that "Reason prescribes to nature its
laws."
Kant was probably thinking of how in Newton's Principia . .. mathematical reason prescribes to nature its laws. A
consideration of Hobbes might help make this connection
more clear. According to Hobbes, geometry, the model for all
science and philosophy, is the ony well grounded body of
knowledge we have recieved from the ancients. Geometry is,
or mathematical hypotheses are, the demonstrable core of
physics. He defines it broadly: "Geometry is the science of
determining the quantity of anything, not measured, by comparing it with some other quantity or quantities measured"

think scientifically we must think that the succession of appearances in our experience is connected necessarily, that is,
that the prior is cause, the latter necessary effect. In other
words, our scientific understanding imposes the law of cause
and effect, the concept of the relation of necessary connection,
upon the succession of appearances in experience. Kant spoke
of his "critical philosophy" as part of the Copernican revolution of modem science. To take the most important example:
we see the sun rise, move across the heavens and set each day.
The Copernican hypothesis accounts for the apparent movement of the sun by the activity or the movement of the
observer, by the rotation of the earth. Kant accounts for the
meaningfulness of sense experience in terms of its conformity
to the rules set by our own conceptual activity, just as physicists try to make sense out of physical phenomena by seeing
whether they conform to the laws they have deduced about
them from their mathematical representations. Hitherto, Kant
says, it has been assumed that all our knowledge must conform to objects, but Kant reverses the priority by asking
whether it is not rather that we attain knowledge of objects
when those objects, sense objects, conform to the conditions
that our concepts and understanding set for all objects of
experience. The principle common to Kant and Hobbes might
be said to be that we can know fully only what we make. 4
Sense intuition itself takes on a new meaning in the
context of Kant's argument. Generally speaking, for Aristotelians intuition means an essentially passive reception by the
soul, more or less adequately, of the things intuited. To
maintain oneself in the proper state of openness for the reception of adequate intuition may be arduous, but the actual
process of intuition itself is essentially passive. Intuition for
Kant too is, in part, receptive, but for him that is the least
interesting part of the process. The receptivity is merely the
capacity of the subject to be affected, to be impressed, by
objects. Mere sense impressions must be worked up into
meaningful objects of sensible intuition by the synthesizing
activity of the imagination and the understanding, the faculty
of judgement, that is, in sum, by the synthesizing or composing activity of the thinking subject. Locke's words towards
the end of his chapter on property come to mind, where, in
discussing the value of property, he tells us that nature furnishes only "the almost worthless materials." We are indebted
for the meaning we find in the world, not to a beneficient
nature, according to Kant, but to our own cognitive activity.

(Six Letters to the Professors of the Mathematics . . . ,
Molesworth ed., English Works, vii, p. 191). It includes the

study of the quantity of time, of swiftness of motion, and
weight, as well as the usual subjects. As it was for Newton
and Kant, it is very important for Hobbes that the geometric
entities be defined operationally, for "of true and evident
definitions the best are those which declare the cause or
generation of that subject, whereof the proper passions are to
be demonstrated" 3 (Ibid. , p. 212). Emphasis supplied. Consider the beginning of Newton's article on "Quadrature of
Curves" and Kant, Critique of Pure Reason, B740ff).
Why should geometry, or mathematics, have this privileged status for Hobbes?
Of arts, some are demonstrable, others indemonstrable;
and demonstrable are those the construction of the
subject whereof is in the power of the artist himself,
who, in his demonstration, does no more but deduce the
consequences of his own operation. The reason
whereof is this, that the science of every subject is
derived from a precognition of the causes, generation
and construction of the same; and consequently where
the causes are known, there is place for demonstration,
but not where the causes are to seek for. Geometry
therefore is demonstrable, for the lines and figures from
which we reason are drawn and described by ourselves;
and civil philosophy is demonstrable, because we make
the commonwealth ourselves. But because of natural
bodies we know not the construction, but seek it from
the effects, there lies no demonstration of what the
causes be we seek for, but only of that what they may
be. (Op. cit., pp. 183-184).

II
Morality, as such, was hardly recognizable in most modem philosophy before Kant. The virtues appeared as passions
in Hobbes and Descartes, as emotions in Spinoza, and as
sentiments in smith and Hume. Once again, Kant seems to be
restoring something that had been lost with ancient philosophy. But agian the differences are more striking than the
similarities. The watchword of classical morality is virtue, the

What geometry, or mathematics, does for the science of
physics is very much like what, according to Kant, human
reason in general does for our experience of the natural world.
Let us take the concept of cause and effect as example. It is
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watchword of modem, or Kantian, morality is freedom, freedom understood as self-legislation. The older notion implies
that we can discern a natural hierarchy of human desires,
culminating in the desire for the highest happiness. This, in
turn, presupposes a natural hierarchy of human achievements,
or ends, correlated to a natural hierarchy of human faculties,
or pwers. The modem notion, with one eye to non-teleological
mathematical physics,5 presupposes no such fixed order of
ends, ends that might allow for one man, who understands
them, to decide what was better for another, who does not
understand them. Human beings are subject to rules, but, as
far as morality is concerned, only to those rules they impose
upon themselves. Morality is self-determination, autonomy
(the Greek word for self-legislation); it cannot, for Kant, be
based on any form of heteronomy (the Greek word for legislation by another), whether that other be nature, God, or some
other man, no matter how wise. Human beings, as moral
beings, are subject to nothing, or to no one but themselves, or
to the practical reason themselves.
The first man to explicitly formulate the new defintion of
freedom was Rousseau, and Kant has acknowledged his great
debt to Rousseau, occasionally speaking of him as the Newton
of the moral world. Once again, however, it would be best to
begin with Hobbes. Why should we obey the sovereign,
according to Hobbes? Because through the social contract we
have covenanted to allow his will to represent our wills, to
take his will for our wills; his legislation, through social
contract, is legally considered, our own self-legislation. In
obeying him, we are really obeying ourselves. This construction is necessitated by a more fundamental principle: as
Hobbes says in the Leviathan, "there being no Obligation on
any man which arise th not from some Act of his own; for all
men equally, are by Nature Free" (ch. 21). All genuine legislation then becomes a form of self-legislation, and injUiy, or
injustice, is like a self-contradiciton, willing to do that which
one has already willed tlu·ough contract not to do.
In the Social Contract (bk. I, ch. 6) Rousseau puts it as
follows:

will, having to express one's will in such form that it coincides
with the wills of all others, moralizes the will, frees it from
the irrationality and immorality of selfish desire. For example,
I selfishly decide that I do not want to pay taxes. Then I
generalize that desire and put it in the form of a law: No one
ought to pay taxes. But then I consider that the police, public
schools, etc. would disappear, and I become aware of the
iffationality of my original inclinaiton. The form of general
or universal law not only guarantees the freedom of the
subjects, but guarantees that the will itself will be rational and
moral. 6 The moral law sets down one fundamental imperative
for Kant, the categmical imperative: so act that you can will
that the maxim of your action can become a universal law.
Another example: A man is hard pressed. Kant has him ask,
May I not make a promise with the intention of not keeping
it? But under the categorical imperative he asks again, Should
I be content that my maxim of getting out of a difficulty by
making a false promise should hold as a universal law? Should
everyone make false promises when they can extricate theselves from difficulties in no other way? Kant goes on: I then
become aware that I can indeed will to lie, but can in no way
will a universal law of lying, for by such a law there could
properly be no promises at all. No one would trust in any
promises and my maxim, as soon as universalized, would
contradict and annul itself.
When seen in contrast to the naturalistic ethics of Plato
and Aristotle, the legalism, egalitarianism, logical formalism
and the emphasis on will common to the moral docttines of
Hobbes and Kant can be understood as rooted in their common depreciation or rejection of purposive nature as the
ultimate source of ethical standards. In Hobbes the goals and
character of moral and political life are still determined by
reference to naaaature, especially human nature, but in a way
very different from the way of the classical n·adition. The
"state of nature," according to Hobbes, is a state of war, a war
of all against all; its only relieving feature is the possibility it
holds out for leaving, and by means of the social contract,
entering into the state of civil society. Instead of serving as a
direct guide to human goodness, the idea fo the state of nature
is meant to clarify what in human nature is to be overcome. It
becomes a source of negative standards, part of a plan leading
to the more general conquest of nature.
For Kant, the student of Newton, nature is, or must be
understood as, a mechanism. If morality is to be saved, it must
be traced to a source, or sources, altogether independent of
nature. This source Kant calls practical reason. Only as a
moral being, acting in accord with practical reason, when one
is, and can know oneself to be, the cause of what one does,
can one see oneself (and therefore others) as a noumenon, as
a thing in itslef, as outside the chain of mechanical causation,
as free. Kant claims to have proved that practical or moral
reason and theoretical reason, which sees everything, including human beings under the aegis of the concept of mehanical

The problem is to find a form of association which will
defend and protect with the whole common force the
person and goods of each associate, and in which each,
meanwhile uniting himself with all, may still obey
himself alone, and remain as free as before. This .is the
fundamental problem for which the social contract
provides the solution.

The solution is a society in which all are subject to the
general will, to the law, and in which each contributes to the
making of that law. All are subject to laws which each has in
part imposed upon himself. Thus Rousseau could conclude
that direct democracy is the only perfectly legitimate form of
government.
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Notes:

cause and effect, do not contradict one another; they simply
do not meet. This carefully elaborated solution, we can only
note, leads in turn to one of the greatest difficulties with which
Kant's philosophy as a whole is beset: the realm ofnature and
the realm of freedom having been separated, how is one to
understand how natural man and moral man come together.
How do the realm of freedom and the realm of nature come
together in one and the same world? These problems are
among the chief concerns of his philosophy of religion and
his reflections on history.
However close the main argument of Kant's moral philosophy is to that of Hobbes, the moral earnestness that
permeates this writings on morals and politics is far from the
"impish" spirit we find in Hobbes. Though both seeme~ to
share in the hope of the Enlightenment, that populanzed
philosophy would supercede biblical religion, Kant's incorpration of Christian elements into his moral philosophy
seems to do much less violence to the spirit of his sources. Yet
however much he may have believed that philosophy can
learn something from Christianity, it is clear that for him
Christianity can never be more than a hand maid for practical
reason.
That the good will, or moral law, or practical reason exists
in all men can be seen by considering what men say and do
when others behave badly, or unjustly, toward themselves: the
rules then spring easily to mind. The problem is, according to
Kant, that under the pressure of their inclinations and desires
men exempt themselves from those rules which they can so
easily discover and apply to others.
Acting on the basis of natural inclination, under the
heteronomy of nature, has nothing to do with morality for
Kant. Thus happiness, the goal of our natural inclinations,
according to Kant, has nothing to do with morality. In fact,
one can never be sure that one's motive is moral unless one
acts contrary to inclination. An action may be moral and
coincide with one's inclinaitons, but if that is the case one can
never know whether one was acting on the basis of pure
respect for the moral law itself, which would be moral, or on
the basis of inclination, which would not be.
The only subjective determinant, or feeling, that has
anything to do with morality, according to Kant, is respect, or
reverence, for the law itself. Duty is defined by Kant as the
necessity to act out of respect, or reverence, for the law.
Respect, however, is a very special feeling.7 For Kant, respect
is the basis of all true love. Respect differs from all other
feelings: it is not recieved from outside influences, but is ·
self-produced, he says, by a rational concept. Our respect for
the moral law is complex: in so far as we are subject to it we
have a feeling towards it analogous to fear; in so far as we
produce it ourselves we have a feeling towards analogous to
love. This combination of fear and love is not altogether
unfamiliar. It is the combiantion of feelings that pious believers associate with the God of the Bible. 8

1.

2.

3.

4.

5.
6.
7.
8.

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For example, the question, why did Kant reject intellectual
intuition?
Reprinted without epistle dedicatory in Thomas Hobbes,
Body, Man, and Citizen, ed. Richard S. Peters, Collier
Books, 1962.
"Operation" here is meant to include mental operation:
for example, Hobbes does not define line, like Euclid, as
breadthless length, but as the way of a body moved, in
which the magnitude, the dimensions of the body, are
not considered. He emphasised the "considered," "not
considered" means "not put to account in demonstration."
Cf. Leo Strauss, Natural Right and History, (Chicago:
U. of Chicago Press, 1953) pp. 169-177; Jacob Klein, Greek
Mathematical Thought and The Origin of Algebra,
(Cambridge, Mass.: M.I.T. Press, 1968); and David
Lachterman, The Ethics of Geometry: A Genealogy of
Modernity, (New York and London: Routledge, 1989):
The other eye looks to the "ego cogito": cf. Swift's Laputans.
Leo Strauss, "The Three Waves of Modernity," in
An Introduction to Political Philosophy.
Cf. H.J. Paton, The Categorical/mperative, ch. v.
Foundations of the Metaphysics of Morals, ch. 1, note 2.

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signified both the craftsman and the student of the liberal arts.
The Renaissance inherited this view. Hence the numerous
artists who were also mathematicians and scientists--Piero
della Francesca, Leonardo, Alberti. They too assumed that the
"work of art" was a work made by art, that is, in accord with
rational principles. Our doctrine of "art for art's sake" would
have been unintelligible to them.
The fine art of painting and liberal art of poetry were long
regarded as "sister" arts, sharing the same subject matter and
objectives. 2 Their association can be traced, in Western civilization, at least as far back as Homer. It is suggested by the
language. Grapho in Greek means "to draw" and "to write."
Poetry in this tradition is characterized by clear and precise
visual imagery, painting by narrative, didactic or symbolic
subject matter (as a rule the three occur together) each of the
arts in that respect borrowing from the other. Visual images
serve the same function as poetic narrative. Poetic accounts
of pictured events-such as Homer's description of the shield
of Achilles-stress the imitation of continuing action, and
explication of motive that we associate with poetry or drama.
The visual image is made to move and speak. Carved or
painted figures think and feel:

I. History
The arts designated as "liberal" by the ancient Greeks and
Romans differed at different times. They included disciplines
that we now number among the fine arts (drawing, painting,
architecture) and disciplines that we now consider neither fine
arts nor liberal arts (medicine). For long the classification was
ambiguous and even when finally codified continued to be
disputed. During the Renaissance many humanists and critics
argued for the inclusion of the visual arts-excluded from the
liberal arts in the Middle Ages-and it was at length generally
acknowledged that the visual arts were liberal arts. We now
study in colleges of the liberal arts disciplines that would have
been excluded earlier-experimental science, for example.
Many liberal disciplines-such as music-have been so transformed that, as presently studied, they would probably have
been rejected by those who first proposed including them
among the liberal arts. We find, moreover, that the liberally
educated were often exceedingly well-versed in, and in fact
practitioners of, the arts classified as "illiberal." The medieval
clerics actively participated in the design of churches and
cathedrals and determined the "program" or meaning of the
sculptures and paintings which they contained. This history
should make us wary of applying the current classification
arbitrarily, and in particular of excluding certain disciplines,
such as the visual arts, from liberal education simply because
they once were excluded.
We tend to think of the fine arts as the products of
intuition, and the liberal arts and sciences as the products of
reason. That distinction is often used to justify the exclusion
of visual art from the liberal arts curriculum. It is argued that
visual art lacks a logos, or rational component. The Greeks
and Romans thought otherwise. Techne and ars-their nearest equivalents to our term "art"-signify" 'organized knowledge and procedure applied for the purpose of producing a
specific preconceived result,' or simply 'rational production."' 1 Aristotle observes that "Art is identical with a state of
capacity to make, involving a true course of reasoning" (Eth.
Nie. 1140a 10). Such "reasoning" could be reduced to first
principles and communicated. It was eminently "teachable,"
differing from other forms of knowledge only in that it was
ordered to a practical or productive end. All art-not excepting the visual arts-was then a rational means to a predetermined end, (as in "the art of bricklaying"), not an end in itself;
and that end could be a product, an activity, or a change of
state. Poetry and music (our liberal arts), painting, sculpture,
engineering, architecture, shoemaking and carpentry, horsetraining, dance and medicine were all equally arts; the sophists
proposed to teach the art of virtue or excellence.
Medieval man also assumed that ars sine scientia nihil:
"without science art would be nothing." The term artista then

They were leading the brides along the city from
their maiden chambers
Under the flaring of torches, and the loud bride song
was arising.
The young men followed the circle of the dance, and
among them
The flutes and lyres kept up their clamor as in the
meantime
The women standing each at the door of her court
admired them.
Iliad 18. 492-496
Rhetoric and the visual arts were once closely linked.
Greek and Roman rhetoricians-notably Cicero and Quintilian-use the same terms to describe stylistic and formal
characteristics of the visual arts and rhetoric, and emphasize
parallels in their historical development. 3 Liberally educated
citizens of Byzantium delighted in ekphrasis-elaborate descriptions of paintings and sculptures employing all the tricks
of rhetoric. The results closely resemble our example from
Homer. 4 Paintings and mosaics quicken with life; painted
figures speculate, act and react. In Medieval Europe, the
injunction to follow Christ or identify with Him, led to equally
vivid verbal recreations of painted or sculpted images of
biblical events. Such exercises assumed thorough familiarity
with one's subject matter; the liberally educated rhetorician
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�cated, skilful with the pencil, instructed in geometry, know
much history, have followed the philosophers with attention,
understand music, have some knowledge of medicine, know
the opinions of the jurists, and be acquainted with astronomy
and theory of the heavens" (De architectura I, 1.3).
Such criteria reflect the belief-common not only in
antiquity, but, as we shall observe, during the Middle Ages
and Renaissance-that a building must image the mathematical relationships responsible for the beauty and stability of
the cosmos if it is to be beautiful
and enduring. The Greek architect did not supply the builders
.197'with a plan and elevation (that did
not become commonplace until
the Hellenistic period) but with a
mathematical schema8 incorporating the proportions thought to
mirror macrocosmic relationships. The temple thus became a
"model" of the cosmos. For similar reasons classical sculptors
and painter-potters sought canons
of proportion which would embody "the beautiful."9 The visual
arts were then in effect the realization or embodiment of truths
derived from the liberal arts. And
the liberal arts borrowed from the
visual arts, or from the same
sources that visual artists exploited. Aeneid and Republic incorporate in the numerical
division and grouping of words
and lines the very proportions
that determine the dimensions of
certain temples. 10
The medieval belief in the
unity of the visual arts and the
liberal arts is exemplified by the
cathedral which derived its form
from the quadrivium-in particuJr,rlJ .,,,,;,
lar mathematics and music which
supplied the essential ratios that
determined the proportions of the
building-its expressive content from the trivium and from
scripture. 11 For there is a "rhetoric" of architectural form just
as there is of words. I la
The Renaissance inherited and perpetuated belief in this
unity. During the Renaissance,

the painters enriched their works by incorporating gestures
drawn from the repertoire of the rhetmicians.5
Belief in the unity of the arts was as durable as it was
pervasive. Caesare Ripa (c. 1561-1623), writing nearly three
thousand years after Homer, emphasizes the same unity:[ see
illustration] The woman with the gag, who represents painting, rests her arm upon a symbolic portrait of poetry which
she is in the process of completing. In the words of Ripa's
editor, "the cloth bound over her mouth indicates that painting
is a silent art, conveying its mess age by other means than
CXCVll.
words-it is mute poetry." 6
Painting, sculpture, architecture, poetry, drama, and rhetoric
were then all thought to share the
common end of rectifying or perfecting human character. Beauty
of ornament and of form, whether
visual or verbal, could awaken
and nourish one's desire for the
Good. IL is valued--0r, we are
told repeatedly, ought to be valued-as a means to that end, not
as an end in itself. This conviction
deeply influenced medieval and
Renaissance thought about the
arts and indeed, persisted well
into the eighteenth century. Such
a system excluded in theory both
"abstract" beauty or a rhetoric
without content, and art that appealed primarily to the senses.
These did not become completely
respectable until the divorce of
the visual arts from the liberal
arts, and the isolation of the former from theology and philosophy. (Much early art that seems to
us erotic is religious in intent;
early "abstractions" frequently
symbolize religious or philosoph- xi.rlthr. Jtl
ical concepts.)
We know that there were
many classical texts dealing with
sculpture and architecture regarded as "liberal" or mathematical arts. Vitrivius (first centwy B.C) lists twenty in his De
architectura, twelve concerned specifically with "symmeteria" or proportion. (Unfortunately, none save the writings of
Vitruvius have survived.) These treatises suggest that Greek
architects were by and large liberally educated men. The
fourth-century Greek architect Pytheos proposed that architects "should be all- round experts who beat the specialists in
every field."7 Vitruvius requires that the architect be "edu-

theorizing on literature and on arl coincided in many
ways and on many levels ... the aesthetic problems
which may be traced to antiquity and which interested
the poet and painter alike were the same for each-art

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vs. nature, instruction vs. delight, form vs. content,
ancient vs. modern, imitation vs. invention. Such problems were debated in much the same terms in the
literary academy and in the artistic atelier. Petrarchism
and Neo-Platonism affected the imagery of the poet
exactly as they did the iconography of the artist. Michelangelo as artist "imitated" Dante, Villani, and the
Dies /me-whereas writers "imitated" plastic sources.
Witness how Sadoletus strove to imitate the classic
craftsmanship of the newly unearthed Laocoon in "elegant verse," even though, as Lessing pointed out, the
marble group was already an imitation of a Virgilian
passage. And Giovanbattista Zappi "translated"
Michelangelo's Mose into a sonnet ... Unusual as it
may seem, both poets and artists drew upon the same
treatises of antiquity for their theoretical ideas about
their crafts. The Poetics of Aristotle and theArs poetica
of Horace, which were the archsources of Renaissance
literary thinking, were also the primary influences upon
the artistic thinking of the day... If in our time the
bridge between belletristic and bellartistic aesthetics is
not quite so easily crossed, the crossing was a much
simpler matter in the sixteenth century. Not only were
the issues similar, but even a single vocabulary served
both types. 12

human figure, and would need to be familiar with the primary
religious and historical texts for subject matter and iconography. (Pheidias remarked that his Zeus was suggested by
Homer's description in the /Iliad. Quintillian observes that
this figure "added something to traditional religion; to such
an extent [was] the majesty of the work equal to the majesty
of the god.") The complex systems of proportional relationships that Greek arhitects, painters, sculptors, and potters
incorporated in their works derived from the study of what
one might characterize as a mathematical physics. Unlike our
physics, however, theirs comprehended the good and the
beautiful, the organic as well as the inorganic. The physician
Galen, who considered medicine a liberal art, is able to
include discussion of the Canon of the Greek sculptor Polyclitus-a system of proportional relationships which
reputedly enabled one to attain "the beautiful"-in a passage
devoted to bodily health because he thought both sculptural
beauty and health instances of symmetria, a certain harmony,
equilibrium or proportionate relationship of contituent elements. Pliny the Elder (first century A.D.) tells in his Natural
History of the painter Pamphilos (teacher of Apelles, the most
famous of Greek painters),
erudite in all branches of knowledge, especially arithmetic and geometry, without which, he held, an art
could not be perfected .. . As a result of his prestige, it
came about that, first in Sikyon and then in all Greece,
free-born boys were given lessons in drawing on
wooden tablets... and thus painting was received into
the front rank of the liberal arts. And indeed it has
always been an honorable feature of it, that it was
practiced by free-born men, and subsequently by distinguished people, while there has been a standing
prohibition against slaves being instructed in it. Hence
neither in this art nor in the sculptural arts ... are there
any renowned works done by someone who was a
slave. 14

The artists of classical antiquity, of the Middle Ages, and
of the Renaissance were either liberally educated or were
directed by others who were. As the body serves the soul, and
the hand obeys the mind, so the artist's activity was free or
"liberal" to the extent that he was responsible for the idea of
his work, and servile to the extent that he was responsible for
its execution. Thus the artist could be both freeman and slave
in the one person, or he could be merely an artisan who
realized the ideas of others. In either case his art expressed or
embodied the liberal arts.
Hephaestus, artificer of the Shield of Achilleus which
depicts the cosmos, Daedalus (whose statues were reputed to
move of their own volition), and Odysseus are early examples
of the first type, the liberal artist who is also a maker. They
obviously reflect a tradition in which craft or skill in making,
craft in the sense of "craftiness" or cunning, and craft as
knowledge of the principles which order the cosmos are held
to be one and the same. Diodorus Siculus (first century B.C.)
observes that "because of his genius [Daedalus] was honored
with great fame, and, after having made many discoveries, he
attained honors equal to the gods. For on one of the islands of
Memphis there exits even today a sanctuary of Daedalus,
which is honored by the local inhabitants." 13 A master such
as Pheidias, in charge of complex building programs requiring
a multitude of skills ( v. Plutarch, "Life of Pericles") must have
had what we would today call a liberal education. He would
need knowledge of geometry and physics to insure that his
structures would fit, would stand, and would embody the
essential proportions responsible for the beauty of temple and
cosmos. He would need knowledge of anatomy to render the

The artifacts that survive from antiquity, despite all hazards, testify by their number to the profound interest of the
liberally educated in the visual arts, and by their quality to the
informed taste of those who commissioned them. The collaboration of Pericles-student of the philosopher Anaxagoras
and paradigm of the liberally educated-with the sculptor
Pheidias, to whom Pericles assigned the task of overseeing the
rebuilding of the Acropolis-exemplifies what was probably
a commonplace relationship of patron to artist. The Romans
had what amounted to factories for the copy of Greek originals, produced outstanding visual art themselves, and wrote
voluminously about the visual arts. In this connection it is
noteworthy that architecture was included among the liberal
arts by the Roman scholar Marcus Terentius Varro (c. 116
B.C.) and by Vitruvius, painting by Pliny and Galen, and
drawing by Aristotle, who recommends it as a way to gain
knowledge of "the beautiful" (Politics VIII. iii. l, 10, iv. 9; in

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�Those "geometrical laws" had been decreed by God who had
"ordered all things in measure and number and weight." They
were manifest in His creation, and had been revealed to the
Pythagoreans, to Plato, and to Augustine. All good artwhether visual, verbal, or audible-incorporated them:

fact, drawing was for a long time part of the school curriculum
in ancient Greece 14a):
[F]irst the painter, then the sculptor. . . was recognized more and more as a privileged and blessed
individual. Painting .. .. was expressly received into
the liberal arts (i.e. art worthy of a freeborn person) , art
connisseurship and art criticism began to flourish, the
collector's instinct was aroused, and the favor of
princes and the rich did more to raise the prestige of the
arts .. . . Philostratus [3rd century A.D.] says in the
introduction to his Eikones, ... "He who does not love
painting, does an injustice to truth and does an injustice
to wisdom." This statement shows that the higher valuation of the arts in all outward appearances was connected with a greater esteem for the internal values of
art-that ever more general recognition was accorded
to what Plato was inclined either to deny completely or
to consider attainable only by a sacrifice of artistic
freedom and originality: the autonomy of art in relation
to deceptive and imperfect reality. 15

Boethius points out that the proportions of double and
half, triple and third-those, in other words, that yield
the perfect consonances on the monochord-are as
readily perceived visually as they are acoustically, for,
he continues, echoing Plato, "the ear is affected by
sounds in quite the same way as the eye is by optical
impressions." Boethius does not confine this doctrine
of synesthesia only to proportions of line or surface; he
discovers "geometrical harmony" in the cube, since the
number of its surfaces, angles, and edges, 6:8: 12, contains the ratios of the octave, fifth, and fourth.
But the Platonists of Chartres expounded not only the
aesthetic excellence of these proportional relationships
but their technical importance as well. . . they maintained, with the Timaeus, that the indissoluble stability
of the cosmos is grounded in perfect proportion ... .
Since art is an image of nature "Must not the ideal church
be constructed according to the laws of the universe?"
In other words, application of the "perfect proportions,"
determined by rigid geometrical means, became a technical necessity as well as an aesthetic postulate if the
building was to be stable as well as beautiful. 17

The design of the medieval cathedral and the programs
of sculpture, painting and stained-glass which it housed were
often conceived by the clerics-who had of course studied the
liberal arts preparatory to the study of philosphy and theology-in collaboration with the architect. The execution of that
design was the responsibility of masons, sculptors, glaziers
and the like. The artist was thus a composite creature. In his
head reposed the liberal arts, in his hands the practical, the
first directing the second:

The liberally educated man of the thirteenth century
could reduce the visual arts to first principles, relate the use
of the builder's square and sculptor's compass to the constitution of the cosmos. Can that be said of his counterpart today?
As then conceived, the liberal arts constituted a remark
ably flexible system capable of unifying the most disparate
expe1ience. Such a system had many points of contact with
the visual arts. Music, for example, was not, as it is for us, the
study of musical composition or compositions, but of "those
'numbers' which govern the temporal and spatial intervals of
creation and reflect, ultimately, the supreme Equality." Such
numbers could be expressed visually as well as audibly, and
the use of the monochord, which represents intervals as
lengths, encouraged this. Hugh of St. Victor (c. 1100) defined
music as a "concord of dissimilar things reduced to one."
Wherever he perceived the Divine Hamony he perceived
music. Hence for Hugh music existed in the four elements, in
the planets; in periods of tin1e; in weight, number, and measure; in the alternation of day and night; in the waxing and
waning of the moon; in the changing seasons; in the humors
of the body; in the spiritual virtues of justice, piety and
temperance. "In short, the study of music was the study of
those aesthetic principles which govern the universe and the
activities of man":

Quite apart from the writings of Vitruvius, kn own and
respected since Carolingian times, it was Au gustine
who kept alive the classical definition of the architect.
His distinction betw een the mere practicioner and the
true architect who deliberately applies scientific principles occurs in at least three differe nt treatises, all
studied and admired throu ghout the Middle Ages.
While this definition permitted the medieval application of the term "architect" to even the mere craftsman,
it left no doubt that only the "scientist" who had mastered the liberal arts was truly entitled to it. Boethius,
moreover, had illustrated the intellectu al dis tinction by
a metaphor that was bound to have its effect upon the
social status of the medieval artist. He had compared
the practical execution of a work of art to a slave, the
science th at should guide such work lo a ruler. This
meant, of course, that what counted in a work of ar t was
not the humble knowledge of the craft but the theoretical science that laid dow n the laws to which the craft
had to conform. It is no wonder, therefore, that we find
so many "architects" among medieval ecclesiastics: the
"science" of architecture was a purely theoretical one-the development of a plan in accordance with geometrical laws-and the knowledge of the quadrivium that
it required was for a long time and with relatively few
exceptions the privilege of clerics. 16

A few illustrations may make the pervasive relevance of musical theory clear. The ratio 1:2, or the
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made possible by Christ between Himself and the inferior nature of man (On the Trinity, 4.3). Christ died once
and was resurrected once. But we die two deaths: a
death of the spirit and a death of the flesh. In the same
way we undergo two resurrections: a resurrection at
baptism and a final resurrection. Thus there is, in both
instances, a ratio of 1:2 or an octave between Christ and
man. So far as times are concerned, Sunday is not only
the first day of the week, but, counting musically, it is
also the octave, and here the octave again recalls the
Resurrection, which took place on the Lord's Day. And
this meaning is said to have been foreshadowed in the
Old Law by the Circumcision, which took place on the
eighth day. A numerical calculation also makes an
octave of Pentecost. If we project our calculations on a
larger scale, the eighth age of the world, following a
seventh, which is sometimes made to stand for the age
of purification in Purgatory, is eternity; and in general,
seven, which represents temporal things, is followed by
an eternal eight. Hence the inscription on the eighth
tone as it is carved on a captal of the abbey church of
Cluny reads, appropriately, "Octavos sanctos omnes
docet esse beatos." Throughout the terza rima of
Dante's Commedia, the ratio 1:2 keeps the underlying
lesson of the poem always before our eyes. But the
octave had more striking visual results. Octagonal baptismal fonts, symbolizing the harmony which they established between the faithful and Christ, stood in
churches and cathedrals throughout Christian Europe
during the Middle Ages . . . . Whether the eight sides of
these fonts, or, for that matter, the eight sides of towers
and lanterns which had a similar significance, were
more appealing to the eye than five sides would have
been a matter of small importance. It was important that
a number be suggested which led the mind to contemplate a harmony established by an Artisan whose handiwork in the human heart transcends anything man may
do in stone. 18

The close collaboration of the artist and of the liberally
educa,ted theologian, philosopher, or patron is also characteristic of the Italian Renaissance. Consider, for example, the
association of prominent artists with the Platonic Academy of
Florence established by the philosopher Marsilio Ficino. The
profound influence of Platonism and Neoplatonism upon
visual art of the period has been amply documented and is
indisputable.20 Widespread interest in the impresa or device-an enigmatic visual metaphor, combining image with
text-reflects the same intimate association of fine and liberal
arts. As this example suggests, the liberal artist frequently
detennined subject matter and symbolism to which the fine
artist or artisan gave concrete form. 21 However,itwasnotlong
before the artist himself-perhaps as a result of the spread of
secular institutions of learning-acquired a liberal education.
Then, as in the case of Leonardo and Alberti, head and hand
belonged to the same individual. Visual artists insisted upon,
and received, recognition that their profession was a liberal art.
Leonardo, paradigm of the learned artist, is not in that respect
unique, but typical. He is the perfect embodiment of a tradition
that has its roots in classical antiquity:
What characterizes the period is not only the quality of
the works of art but also the close links that were
established between the visual arts, the sciences, and
literature. The appearance of a distinguished artist who
also was a humanist and writer of merit, such as Alberti,
was no coincidence in a period in which literary and
classical learning began, in addition to religion, to
provide the subject matter for painters and sculptors.
When a knowledge of perspective, anatomy, and geometrical proportions was considered necessary for the
painter and sculptor, it was no wonder that several
artists should have made important contributions to the
various sciences. On the other hand, ever since Filippo
Villani, the humanists, and their journalist successors
in the sixteenth century, looked with favor upon the
work of contemporary artists and would lend their pen
to its praise. From the end of the fourteenth century
through the sixteenth the writings of the artists and of
authors sympathetic to the visual arts repeat the claim
that painting should be considered as one of the liberal,
not of the mechanical arts. 22

The system of seven liberal arts, first proposed by the
African barrister Martianus Capella in the fifth century A.D.
(whose heliocentric theory, described in the same work, may
have inspired Copernicus), was accepted by the Church
(whence it was transmitted to us) in part because there were
seven arts. "[T]he Seven Arts recalled the Seven Petitions of
theLord'sPrayer, the Seven Gifts of the Holy Ghost, the Seven
Sacraments, the Seven Virtues, etc. The Seven Words· on the
Cross, The Seven Pillars of Wisdom [Prov. ix, 1], the Seven
Heavens might also suggest particular branches of learning." 19
Clearly neither mathematics nor music then meant quite
what they mean to us; nor, for that matter did astronomy or
the other liberal arts. It is also evident that the use of certain
numbers and ratios in the dimensions of a building, altar,
sculpture, or painting could convey profound meaning, and in
fact be regarded as manifes tations and confinnations of the
truths of the liberal arts, and of the disciplines which they
served, philosophy and theology.

Finally we should note that belief in a sacred mathematics
constituted an essential link between the the liberal arts and
the visual arts during the Renaissance, just as it did in classical
antiquity and in the Middle Ages, The visual arts were thought
to embody or give physical fonn to the proportional relationships that, according to the liberal arts, were responsible for
the harmony and stability of the cosmos:
The conviction that architecture is a science, and that
each part of a building, inside as well as outside, has to
be integrated into one and the same system of mathematical ratios, may be called the basic axiom of Renaissance architects . . . . the architect is by no means free

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�depdved-in theory at least-of any function save that of
giving pleasure.
Lessing assumes this in his Laocoon (1776):

to apply to a building a system of ratios of his own
choosing, ... the ratios have to comply with conceptions of a higher order ... [the demand that] a building
should mirror the proportions of the human body ...
became universally accepted on Vitruvius' authority.
As man is the image of God and the proportions of the
body are produced by divine will, so the proportions in
architecture have to embrace and express the cosmic
order. But what are the laws of this cosmic order, what
are the mathematical ratios that determine the harmony
in macrocosm and microcosm? They had been revealed
by Pythagoras and Plato ... 2 3

We laugh when we hear that with the ancients even the
arts were subject to municipal laws. But we are not
always right when we laugh. Unquestionably the laws
must not usurp power over the sciences, for the ultimate
purpose of the sciences is truth. Truth is a necessity of
the soul; and it is nothing but tyranny to offer her the
slightest violence in satisfying this essential need. The
ultimate purpose of the arts, on the other hand, is
pleasure, and pleasure can be dispensed with. So, of
course, it may depend on the law-giver what kind of
pleasure, and in what measure any kind of it, he will
permit.

Painting too was ordered mathematically, not only through
application of the laws of linear perspective, but, like architecture, according to the ratios of the musical intervals. The
transformation of audible into visual relations was "the great
achievement of 15th century artists .... A familiarity with
musical theory became a sine qua non of artistic education."
This "was no mere theoretical speculation; it testifies to the
solemn belief in the harmonic mathematical structure of all
creation. "24
We can perceive from the foregoing how it was in the
past possible for the liberally educated to have a profound
interest in the visual arts, indeed to participate in their creation, yet to renounce the activity which we regard as essential, namely the manipulation of material substance, as not
befitting a free man. All evidence suggests that during the
periods W1der consideration knowledge of the visual arts by
the liberally educated was assumed, whether or not training
in those arts was required. The beautiful, the true, the intelligible, and the good were not neatly separated, but seen as one
or as emanations of the One. Familiarity with the liberal arts
necessadly implied familiarity with the visual arts. A science
of aesthetics or sensation was not needed and so did not exist.
The manner of representation or style, of which we make so
much, was less important to artist and patron than what was
represented, what was represented less important than meaning, and meaning less important than the connection that it
established between becoming and Being.
Not until the eighteenth century do we encounter the term
"aestl1etic" (coined by the German philosopher Alexander
Gottlieb Baumgarten) in its modem signification. "It is also
generally agreed that such dominating concepts of modem
aesthetics as taste and sentiment, genius, originality and creative imagination did not assume their definite modem meaning before the eighteen th century." Then too, in all
probability, originated "the term 'Art,' with a capital A and
in its modern sense the related term 'Fine Arts' (Beaux
Arts)."25 This development was coupled with the separation
and isolation of the beautiful, the true, and the good. The
beautiful became the domain of the new science of aesthetics,
truth became the possession of science, and the good became
the responsibility of moral philosophy. To each realm was
assigned a separate faculty of the soul. Art was thereby

Lessing eliminates from the realm of visual art the spiritual and "significant" as well, on the grounds that doctrinal
requirements inhibit the artist and prevent the fulfillment of
what should be his chief and highest aim, to give pleasure:
If in individual cases we wish to compare the painter
and the poet with one another, the first and most important point is to observe whether both of them have
complete freedom, whether they have, in the absence
of any outward compulsion, been able to aim at the
highest effect of their art.
Religion was often an outward compulsion of this
kind for the ancient artist. His work, designed for
reverence and worship, would not always be as perfect
as if he had a single eye to the pleasure of the be holder.
Superstition overloaded the gods with symbols, and the
most beautiful of them were not everywhere worshipped for their beauty .... I should like the name of
"works of art" to be reserved for those alone in which
the artist could show himself actually as an artist, in
which beauty has been his first and last object. All the
rest in which too evident traces of religious ritual
app~ar, are unworthy of the name, because Art here has
not wrought on her own account, but has been an
auxiliary of religion, looking in the material representations which she made of it more to the significant than to the beautiful. ...

The extraordimnily rich and complex art of classical
antiquity, of the Middle Ages, and of the Renaissance originated when there was no science of aesthetics as we understand that term, or a category known as the fine arts. When,
in the eighteenth century, the "aesthetic" became of pdmary
concern to artists, philosophers, and patrons, the quality of
visual art-as measured by the profW1dity and scope of its
subject-matter-began to decline. We can attribute this in
large measure to the separation of the fine arts from the
context that gave them meaning and substance, the liberal arts,
philosophy and theology.
The new categories were both symptom and cause of the
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human concerns.26 That movement did not cease until art
became in the twentieth century "a thing of of no consequence," an entertainment or diversion merely. 27 Conditions
were ripe for a visual art that aspired chiefly to please the
senses, and that is what, in the main, visual art became.

fixed and stable cosmos. He argues that we probably derive
our notion of unchanging Being from vision.
The belief that we receive visual impressions as soft wax
receives a stamp has been proved false. Vision is not passive
but active and inherently rational. We now know that the eyes,
in conjunction with the mind, make of sensory input an
orderly, coherent whole. The appearance of even a simple
object metamorphoses continuously as our vantage point
changes. Yet we see a relatively fixed, characteristic shape.
Eye and brain simplify, abstract, and geometricize visual
experience. We perceive discontinuity as unity, imposing
upon fragmentary experience the visual form that is the simplest and the most regular. In the illustration below we see not
three unrelated dots, but a triangle. Yet there is no triangle:

II. Theory
We have seen that in the past the liberal arts and the visual
arts were closely allied-were in fact virtually one thing, as
nearly W1ited as body and soul, the visual arts being the
concrete embodiment and expression of the liberal arts. We
have noted that the liberally educated were then thoroughly
familiar with the visual arts and that study of the visual arts
often formed a part of liberal education. The magnificent
artifacts which survive confirm the educated sensibilities of
those who commissioned them; for the artist was then not
nearly as free as he is today. He was required to gratify the
wishes of his patron, and elaborate contracts were drawn up
to insure this. We have observed that the ancient unity of the
visual and liberal arts was in our own time obscured by those
who applied the cdteria of the present to the past, thinking the
visual artist one person as he is now (and thereby confusing
him with the artisan who may well have lacked a liberal
education), whereas he was then often two or more beings-a
liberal artist and a mechanical artist-acting in concert.
But even allowing the traditional alliance of the visual
and liberal arts, ought the visual arts be part of contemporary
liberal education? Let us review a few of the arguments for
and against this option.
Visual art is frequently compared to music, whose status
as a liberal art was never questioned. It is argued that music
is more closely related to the other liberal arts than the visual
arts and that consequently music should be the fine art included in liberal education. We will begin with consideration
of the relative merits of the visual arts and music. I have put
the arguments against in italics; my reponses follow:

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All of the senses, share with intellect the task of ordering
experience. They do not merely transmit experience, but, like
the eyes, make it intelligible. Two phrases that we often use,
but rarely appreciate, come to mind in this connection. We
speak of "making sense of' something when we understand it,
and say "I see" to signify that we understand. When the senses
discover the order that they always seek we experience pleasure. When they fail to discover such order we experience
discomfort, dissatisfaction, even pain. Certain objects possess
in the highest degree the order that the senses always seek and
thus are, potentially, capable of producing the greatest pleasure. We call such objects works of art.
The ear takes pleasure in ordered, mathematically related
sounds; the kinesthetic sense that tells us the position of our
limbs in space takes pleasure in measured or rhythmic movement- tapping, swaying, and so on. Music satisfies both
senses. Touch takes pleasure in surfaces that possess a certain
order and intelligibilty, whether by nature or by design.
The ability of the senses to order experience and the
pleasure that they take in such order is deeply rooted in our
evolutionary past. For survival depends upon the organism's
ability to "make sense of' its environment. In the work of art
sensual order is divorced from such urgent practical considerations. There is an element of freedom, of play, of pure
pleasure. We experience simultaneously the order that implies
limitation (for without constraint any order is impossible) and
liberation or release from constraint.
To constitute or perceive order eye and mind must be
capable of numbering and measuring. And in fact we can
immediately distinguish two objects from three, four from
five; we can judge whether one line is twice or three times
the length of another. We derive our concept of the fundamental constitutents of mathematics-number and mea-

a. The ear is more intimately connected with intellect than
the eye. The ear perceives number directly (it senses, for
example, the frequency doubling that indicates the octave and
the ratios of the musical intervals). The eye cannot perceive
numerical relationships.
The ancients regarded sight, not hearing, as "the most
excellent of the senses. The noblest activity of the mind,
theoria, is descdbed in metaphors mostly taken from the
visual sphere. Plato, and Western philosophy after him,
speaks of the 'eye of the soul' and the 'light of reason.'
Aristotle, in the first line of the Metaphysics, relates the desire
for knowledge inherent in the nature of all men to the common
delight in perception, most of all in vision."28 The author of
these lines attributes the Greek belief in the primacy of vision

partly to the fact that all other senses convey the external
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�sure-primarily from vision, not from audition. The Greeks
quite logically identified the mathematical with the visual.
They thought of numbers as points or lengths. Mathematics
was for them in large measure the study of geometric or visual
shapes. There was of course then no knowledge of the wavelike character of sound. The study of music was the study of
quantity manifest as the visual ratios of the lengths of tensioned strings.
Vision too conveys knowledge, but immediately rather
than sequentially or discursively as words do. The ancients
were well aware of this. Vision becomes for them a metaphor
for the highest knowledge, surpassing and indeed of a different order than discursive reason, knowledge that must be
grasped immediately in its entirety or not at all:

Finally, we should note that vision not only orders and
connects the information transmitted by our other senses but
typically takes precedence over them. In moments of crisis
sight usually guides us. If there is a conflict, that is, if different
sensory inputs appear to require contradictory responses, we
defer to sight. Vision is not only responsible for our conviction
that we inhabit a (relatively) unified, orderly cosmos (compare the world as it seems to you with your eyes open and
shut) but in large measure for our sense of our own wholeness.
If you close your eyes and rub thumb and forefinger together,
you will note that your fingers feel oddly detached, almost as
if they belonged to someone else. Open your eyes and that
sensation vanishes. Stopping our ears isolates us to a degree
from the world, but not from our own bodies.
b. Musical structures are mathematically ordered and
therefore inherently rational; with the exception of linear
perspective, the structure ofvisual art is neither mathematical
nor rational.

This image [of cave and upper world] we must apply
as a whole to all that has been said, likening the region
revealed through sight to the habitation of the prison,
and the light of the fire in it to the power of the sun. And
if you assume that the ascent and the contemplation of
the things above is the soul's ascension to the intelligible region, you will not miss my surmise ... But God
knows whether it is true.
Republic 517a-b

The ancient belief in the identity of the visual, the mathematical, the beautiful and the true led, as we have seen, to
many attempts to embody in visual art the quintessential
mathematical relationships. Hence the widespread interest of
Greek artists in the Golden Section and other canons of
proportion. Medieval and Renaissance visual artists, engaged
upon essentially the same quest, also frequently had recourse
to mathematical schema- indeed to the mathematics of
music. The proportions of medieval and Renaissance
churches were frequently based upon the ratios of the musical
intervals. 29 The spatial organization of Leonardo's Last Supper is determined by the same intervals. 30 Linear perspective
is but a special case of proportionately ordered space (space
in linear perspective is in continued proportion). We can
attribute its discovery largely to earlier interest in the mathematics of visual art. Our own century affords numerous examples of artists who incorporate mathematically determined
relationships in their painting, sculpture and architecture.
(Many were influenced by Jay Hambidge [1867-1924], who
claimed-perhaps rightly-to have rediscovered the geometric schema employed by Greek polters and architects .31 )
Although we derive pleasure from such art, we are not in the
habit of applying calipers and rule to it, and are therefore
unaware of the source of much of that pleasure. 32 We are in
that respect rather like the Greeks who lived before Pythagoras had discovered the roots of music in number: they enjoyed
music but knew not why.
The Western listener brings to music an innate sense of
the periodic diatonic scale and the ability to locate tones on
that scale. The spectator of visual art brings to painting,
sculpture, and architecture an innate sense of the absolute
vertical and horizontal, and the ability to locate forms with
respect to these axes. In practice, this fixed frame of reference
is bounded by the limits of the visual artifact, permitting

For each manifestation of knowledge and wisdom is a
distinct image, an object in itself, an immediate unity,
not an aggregate of discursive reasoning and detailed
willing. Later from this wisdom in unity there appears,
in another form of being, a copy already less compact,
which announces the original terms of discourse and
unravels the causes by which things are such that the
wonderrises how a generated world can be so excellent.
(Plotinus, "On the Intellectual Beauty")
I think from the keeness I endured of the living
ray, that I should have been dazzled if my eyes had
been turned from it; and I remember that for this
cause I was the bolder to sustain it until I reached
with my gaze the infinite Goodness. 0 abounding
grace, by which I dared to fix my look on the Eternal
Light so long that I spent all my sight upon it!
In its depth I saw that it contained, bound by
love in one volume, that which is scattered in
leaves through the universe, substances and
accidents and their relations as it were fused
together in such a way that what I tell of is a
simple light.
Paradiso XXXIII. 76 ff.

Compare a modern poet:
I could not
Speak, and my eyes failed, I was neither
Living nor dead, and I knew nothing,
Looking into the heart of light, the silence.
The Waste Land 11. 38 ff.

precise distinctions of higher/lower, left/right, diagonal/vertical, centered, displaced and so on. The center of such structures corresponds to the musical tonic. It is the point of rest or
equilibrium. We must wonder at the eye's ability to perceive
this center. For it must measure a multitude of distances
simultaneously, or instantaneously distinguish symmetric
from asymmetric fields:

Visual structures can be ordered hierarchically, much as
words are in the topical outline. Primary structures control,
limit, and define secondary; secondary structures control tertiary, and so on. The Gothic cathedral is perhaps the outstanding example of this, but all good visual art exhibits
hierarchical organization. It is another source of unity.33

DD

This is but the simplest case of a more complex phenomenon:
any visible change at any point in the visual field immediately
affects our perception of the all parts of that field:

Gradations of value, or of degrees of light and dark,
permit effects analagous to scaled musical tones. We can
construct a scale of visual tones in which the intervals between
values are equal or increase or decrease systematically and
which is therefore apprehended by eye and brain as intelligible. We can then use either the entire scale, a portion of the
scale, or values widely separate on the scale (e.g. the darkest
and the lightest) to render values in the visual work.33a
The possible effects of systematically applied color are
exceedingly complex; we can only suggests a few. 34 The
color wheel provides us with precisely related primary colors,
secondary colors (constituted of primaries), and tertiary colors (constituted of secondaries). We can select from that
wheel a palette of colors that are immediately adjacent, separated by one or more intervening colors, or on the same
diameter. The last are the so-called complementary colors that
intensify each other when juxtaposed. Complementarity is
another instance of what we have termed field relationships.
In actuality, we cannot change any color anywhere in the work
without affecting all colors everywhere.
We can divide the visual field in accord with any number
of mathematical or geometric schema. The eye does not
necessarily require certain schema-although it appears to
prefer those that are mathematically ordered, such as the
Golden Rectangle-but it does demand that the schema selected be internally consistent and to that extent intelligible.
Inconsistency is read as disorder, imperfection. It prohibits
many of the operations that give the work unity (motif and
variation, hierarchical organization, scaled tonality, etc.).

The introduction of a new color, line, or texture into an
established design can be compared to the introduction of a
metallic body into a magnetic field. The entire field is immediately distorted. Field relationships (which may have their
own complex mathematics) are characteristic only of art that
always confronts us in its totality, that is only of visual art.
Sculpture and architecture, which have multiple views and
introduce the element of temporal and spatial progression,
will exhibit field relationships from any given view.
Within such fields we can creat effects analagous to
acceleration, retardation, tripartite ABA form, and so on:

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Eye and mind perceive similar shapes as parts of a larger
whole. This permits visual effects analagous to motµ and
variation in music. We can combine two or more distinct
visual motifs to produce a third possessing features of both
yet identical to neither. The process can be continued indefinitely, resulting in a structure in which all parts are in some
way related yet in which all are distinct and different. Unity
and diversity develop simultaneously:

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c. Visual art not only lacks a logos or rational schema
comparable to the mathematical schema of music, but also
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�practical representation. We rely upon vision to convey information too complex for words. Sound is much less useful in
this respect. Surely these facts cast doubt upon the thesis that
music is more nearly related to thought than is visual art.
If classroom discussion were limited to the written word
we would have to forgo discussion of the natural world. For
it is inarticulate. But we do not find that an insuperable
difficulty. We discuss what we observe when we dissect,
perform experiments in the laboratory, and so on. Hence,
even if visual art were altogether inarticulate it should still
be possible to discuss it. But it is not inarticulate. Most visual
artifacts embody meanings intended by the artist. Many
depict figures from mythology or sacred text that convey
specific meanings, and employ a symbolic visual language
that is equally specific. The meaning of such visual art is
clearly more accessible than the meaning of purely instrumental music.
My own experience, and that of many other teachers, is
that visual art is eminently discussable, given the right choice
of subject-matter and an adequate curriculum. Those institutions that have seriously attempted discussion of visual art
have found this to be the case and have successfully incorporated such discussions into their programs.

is therefore nwre difficult to develop a program of instruction
in the visual arts. Because music is inherently nwre rational
it is inherently nwre teachable.
We can see from b) that visual art is capable of formal
elaboration possibly as complex as that of music. Elementry
instruction in visual art traditionally emphasizes the elements
that permit this: line, plane, shape, color, value, spatial organization, and so on. First exercises stress the development of
visual structures using one or several of those elements. The
study of visual art closely resembles the study of music in that
respect.

d. Music has a natural relation to the words that convey
rational thought, whereas visual art, lacking a logos, or
intelligible schema, excludes words. For that reason it is
difficult or impossible to discuss visual artifacts as we discuss
a written text. Those silent entities cannot contribute to the
Great Conversation. They have little to say about the primary
questions of interest to the liberal artist.
It is not true that visual art excludes words, and thus the
meanings that words convey, or that there is naturally a more
intimate connection between music and the word than between word and image. Writing began with visual images.
Chinese and Japanese calligraphy, Egyptian hieroglyphs, Islamic script, medieval illuminated manuscripts are all instances of the perfect fusion of the visual with the verbal.
Early Chinese landscape paintings are frequently overwritten
with poems that have become part of the painting and deepen
the meaning. In these examples ikon and logos are as closely
allied as music and word are in the opera, Passion or lied.
Many visual works-the prints of Daumier, for example-are
unintelligible without their titles.
There is much evidence that the thinking mind utilizes
images as well as words. Indeed, images may be primary. The
organization of the brain's neural networks appears to resemble the interactive visual field more nearly than it does linearly
ordered speech. Those points aside, there is no basis for
assuming that music and thought are more closely related than
visual art and thought. As the art historian Edgar Wind points
out a chief purpose of visual art was, until quite recently, to
convey thought. 35 Raphael's School of Athens is not exceptional in that respect, but typical. Painting and sculpture are
of course quite capable of incorporating written words and
often do. When we add to those words the meanings conveyed
by symbolic images (as in Jan van Eyck's Annunciation,
which contains symbolic images and painted words) the possible meanings become complex indeed. To be sure the meaning of a painting cannot be entirely expressed in words, but
then neither can the meaning of a musical composition.
Consider also the charts, graphs, and other visualizations
that contemporary science cannot do without. The visual
representation of significant relationships is often the only

e. Visual art is mimetic, and,nwreover, imitates only the
trwst superficial aspects of the sensible. For that reason it of
limited significance. Why study a deceptive copy when one
can study the original? Music is not mimetic; it is naturally
related to the supra-sensible or to Being.
This objection is best considered in the context of
Socrates'arguments in The Republic, often used to justify the
exclusion of the visual arts from the liberal arts curriculum,
Socrates asserts that the painter's couch is but an imitation of the cabinetmakers, which is itself but an imitation of
the Idea of Couch. He argues that the painter's couch is at a
second remove from the Real, an imitation of an imitation, as
it were. Visual art is held to be essentially re-presentative.
These arguments obscure a crucial distinction: the cabinet maker's couch is made to be slept in, while the painter's
is made to be looked at. The latter is not an imitation of an
imitation, but a unique entity, whose final, formal, and material causes are very different from those that qualify the
cabinetmaker's couch.
So inadequate is Socrates' definition that it does not
permit us to distinguish between the greatest painting and
images that are clearly not visual art at all, such as a mediocre
snapshot or a mere reflection (Republic X 596e). The latter
could well exceed the painting as accurate representations of
the visible, and hence would have to be regarded as more
successful examples of visual art. In fact the excellences of
painting qua painting have little or nothing to do with conformity to the visible. They are the result of formal and expressive qualities-some of which we have considered-not

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tripartite being that represents the human soul (Republic
588b) and "moulds the model of a happy state" (Republic
420c); the new Homer who tells of the dangers that confront
that City-for the embodied soul is besieged as surely as Troy
was-and of the Odyssey that is the soul's thousand-year
return from exile in this world to its true Homeland (Republic
621d).
But much visual art also satisfies the Platonic criterion,
and therefore cannot be rejected on that basis. To loosen the
ties that bind soul to body was the chief purpose of the art of
Byzantium and of medieval Europe. Those who should know
tell us this. Consider the poem which the Abbot Suger (10811151) composed in praise of the golden portals of his church,
St. Denis:

found in nature, but made or brought into being by the artist.
Space, for example, does not preexist in or on the canvas to
be "filled" by the painter. The painter creates space. Spatial
relations in a painting are analagous to the silences between
musical tones. They are shaped, structured, to define and
express certain relationships. The complexity of those relationships depends upon the skill and vision of the artist, not
upon the intrinsic attributes of the space which we occupy and
in which we move.
It is more correct to say that the visual artist strives to
make visible the invisible than it is to say that he imitates the
visible. The artifacts actually produced verify this: the "abstract" art of so-called primitive peoples, such as the African
tribes; the symbolically distorted art of our own Middle Ages;
the deliberately elongated figures of Byzantine art which
occupy a space that intentionally violates the rules of linear
perspective; Chinese landscape painting which is "realistic"
only in the sense that it expresses Reality; the geometric art
of Islam; twentieth-century Impressionism, Expressionism,
Cubism and the like; architecture, which is intrinsically abstract. While these art forms may imitate the principles or
relations that order the cosmos, they clearly do not imitate
visible appearances.
If, notwithstanding, we accept Plato's criterion we must
fault the philosopher equally. The painter has at least the
material couch to imitate. Plato did not have the living Socrates before him, but merely the memory of Socrates-itself an
image or imitation of the man. Hence the Socrates of The
Republic is also an imitation of an imitation. As Plato himself
insists, so are the personae of the dramatist and poet (Republic
X 598e-599). Philosopher, dramatist, poet, and visual artist
are all on an equal footing, in this respect.
Plato's criticisms of the arts in Book X stem from his
conviction that the images of the poet, dramatist, painter and
sculptor corrupt and degrade the soul, strengthening and
confirming its bondage to the body. He would have us forsake
such images for others that can exhault, purify, and ultimately
liberate the soul. The Socrates of The Republic is obviously
such an image. It is likely therefore, that Plato's rejection of
poetry, drama, and the visual arts in Book X, coming as it does
at the conclusion of his own artistic masterpiece, is-notwithstanding its author's keen awareness of the limitations of any
text that incorporates images- in fact an appeal to the reader
to accept the art of which Plato has just given him an example-the art of The Republic composed of images that encourage ascent from becoming to Being-in place of the images
of the Greek poets, sculptors and painters which, in Plato's
opinion, lead to the abyss. This is also suggested by Plato's
many allusions in The Republic to Illiad and Odyssey, and by
his comparisons of Socrates to Odysseus, Heracles, Daedalus
and the like. He would replace the ancient myths with his own,
the ancient artists and heroes with his Socrates. Socrates
becomes in The Republic the new Daedalus who sculpts the

Bright is the noble work; but being nobly bright the
work
Should brighten the minds, so that they may travel,
through the true lights,
To the True Light where Christ is the true door.
In what manner it be inherent in this world the golden
door defines:
The dull mind rises to truth through that which is
material
And, in seeing this light, is resurrected from its former
submersion.
There is much great visual art that even a confirmed Platonist
might be hard put to reject. To be sure, in Plato's day Greek
art was becoming increasingly concerned with appearances.
He was certainly right to protest this through Socrates. But it
makes no sense to apply his criticism to visual art as a whole,
or to use it as a justification for denying the visual arts a place
in the liberal arts curriculum.
Finally we must note that if we accept the arguments of
Book X we must exclude from the liberal arts not only visual
art, but all imaginative literature (save the Platonic Dialogues) . Homer and the tragidians-whom Socrates specifically condemns- must of course go, but also, obviously,
Shakespeare and Rabelais and Cervantes, and Dostoevski,
and all of their kind. Moreover, it is by no means certain that
Plato's criteria would admit much of the music currently
studied by students of the liberal arts. Would Wagner survive,
I wonder?

f. Music affects the soul nwre directly and immediately
than visual art and therefore can form character nwre effectively than visual art.
The visual "impresses" our souls no less than the audible.
Indeed, visual images evoke compassion, sexual desire,
anger, fear and so on nwre readily than music. Witness the
power of cinema and television to move us, to involve us, to
appropriate thought and feeling. The traditional view (the
view that prevailed through the eighteenth century) is that all

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�i. The visual arts were excluded from the trivium and
quadrivium during the Middle Ages when the seven liberal
arts became the educational norm, whereas music was included and even emphasized.

arts, not simply music, shape character. (Had Plato not
thought so he would not have excluded the poets, the tragic
dramatists, and the visual artists from his Republic.) In the
case of visual art that was accomplished directly through
depiction of exemplars such as Hercules or Christ, with whom
the spectator was expected to identify and whom he was
expected to emulate as best as he could, or indirectly through
exposure to certain visual relationships that were thought to
induce kindred relationships in the soul. It was long assumed
that the parts of the "healthy" soul were symmetrically disposed, or in equilibrium, or related by a certain proportion.
The symmetrical architecture of classical antiquity was expected to induce such inner symmetry or proportionality. The
moralizing art of painters such as Hogarth and Goya is a late
expression of that ancient tradition. Its purpose is, in part, to
make us admire what we should admire and despise what we
should despise. Seeing injustices can sometimes make us
betterpersons--can, in fact, move an entire society to benevolant action. Would anyone seriously argue that music could
have induced us to aid the starving thousands in Somalia?

This objection, too, has been answered under "History."
j. There simply is not room in a four-year curriculum/or
the liberal arts and the visual arts. To include the visual arts
would compell us to sacrifice something more essential. The
traditional seven liberal arts provide a rational schema for a
compact yet rich and comprehensive program. If we depart
from that schema we abandon meaningful criteria for including or excluding subject-matter. Will we next be asked to add
the social sciences? Or horticulture?

As noted above, colleges that profess to offer a liberal
education no longer adhere strictly to the traditional schema
of the seven liberal arts. Hence one cannot argue again~t
adding the visual arts on grounds that it would violate that
schema. Among the criteria actually used to determine the
disciplines included we frequently find the following : a) that
the discipline promote the good of the individual by perfecting
those faculties which distinguish man; b) that the discipline
promote the good of society as a whole; c) that it be a primary
discipline, that is one which cannot be reduced to more
elementary disciplines (as engineering can be reduced to
mathematics or medicine to biology); d) that it relate as nearly
as possible to other parts of the liberal arts curriculum.
Let us apply these criteria to the study of the visual arts.
a)While vision per se does not distinguish man from other
sentient beings, the kind of vision which he possesses does.
His is a "thinking eye." That potential becomes manifest
almost as soon as we gain some control of our bodies. All
children delight in drawing. Their drawings are schematic or
symbolic: a circle represents the head, two dots the eyes, a line
the mouth and so on. Children 2-4 years of age "apparently
make no attempt to translate their visual images into plastic
equivalents (imitative or naturalistic representations), but are
fully satisfied with certain graphic signs which they identify
with their images." 36
Our ability to draw and to make three-dimensonal shapes
is as fundamental and as universal as our ability to form
intelligible sounds. It implies that we possess by virtue of our
nature as rational beings not two major symbolic languagesspeech and mathematics-but at least three. If one of the
purposes ofliberal education is to develop those faculties that
distinguish mankind we should study all three languages.
Our appreciation of visual beauty is also unique. As noted
it possesses a rational component-we admire consistency,
regularity, conformity to a schema which we think of as
"ideal" and so on. It would appear then that if we are to
promote the good of the individual, we should, as Aristotle
recommends, seek to "develop an observant eye for beauty of

g. Liberal education rightly emphasizes the use oforiginal
texts. To study visual art we must employ reproductions. These
are inherently innacurate and deceptive.

Good reproductions of two-dimensional visual art can be
quite accurate. Some are so precise that the naked eye is barely
able to distinguish originals from copies (this is especially true
of copies of prints). We can make exact copies of sculpture
using moulds. Such reproductions are certainly preferable to
the translations (which are after all interpretations) through
which most students of the liberal arts gain access to the
majority of the Great Books. Music always reaches us translated or interpreted-unless the performer is also the composer. And since few students of the liberal arts can
reconstitute music by simply reading the written score, and
live performances are few and far between, most use recordings or reproductions of performances, further increasing the
distance between creator and auditor.
Students can of course discuss original works of visual
art in local museums and galleries. Unlike music and poetry,
which reach us via symbolic notation, such works bear the
mark of the maker's hand. They constitute permanently accessible "performances" by the artist. One might compare the
experience they afford to hearing Beethoven play his
Appassionata or Homer read his /Iliad. To be sure, one must
look closely to appreciate this-at the brushstrokes that constitute forms and colors, at the scratchings and rubbings that
constitute line and tone.
h. The Greeks, who knew a great deal about the visual
arts wisely excluded them from the liberal arts. We should
follow their example.

This objection has been answered under "History."

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they constitute, alas, lacks a head; or perhaps we should say
that it has, like Cerberus, fabled guardian of Hades, too many
heads. For the liberal arts are now proposed as preparation for
virtually any activity. Moreover, with the passage of time the
intersecting ways have tended to become parallel, or even
divergent. We note that as we move from study of the ancient
texts to study of the modem.
Even allowing this, the liberal arts constitute the nearest
thing we have to a synoptic, unified educational program that
has withstood the test of time. For that reason they have
appealed and continue to appeal to educators troubled by the
fragmentation of knowledge, the centrifugal forces loose in the
modem world especially those who hoped and those who still
hope that we might learn through immersion in the works and
thoughts of a more coherent past ways to restore or at least to
encourage coherence in our own culture. Any addition to, or
modification of such a program of study should certainly take
into account its original intent and the motives of those who
sought to revive it. The visual arts satisfy those conditions.
They naturally constitute a point of intersection for other
disciplines traditionally among the liberal arts, or closely
allied with those arts: mathematics (the form of the visual
work, perspective, the golden section and other proportional
schema); biology (theories of perception, the contribution of
eye and brain, conditions that permit the illusion of reality on
a two-dimensional surface, optical illusions); philosophy and
theology (symbolic content of the visual work); music (formal
analogies and structural parallels between the visual arts and
music); mythology, sacred and secular history, and literature
(narrative content of the visual work).
A proper program of study would not be confined to
portable easel painting (the earliest surviving examples of this
art-form are relatively late; itisratherlike beginning the study
of the Great Books with the Renaissance) but would include
fresco and mosaic, architecture and sculpture. There would
thus be opportunity to examine artifacts, such as the medieval
cathedrals and Renaissance churches that were in their time
foci for a multitude of disciplines, and in particular for the
disciplines of the liberal arts. Mathematics, philosophy, theology, rhetoric, music, architecture, sculpture, painting all
come together here to make one thing. Study of the the Greek
temple and of its sculptures (supported by selections from
Vitruvius, supplemented by study of the images and proportions of Greek pottery) would have similar advantages. To add
such a program to the existing curriculum might require the
. elimination or abridgement of certain texts. But that will be
outweighed by the more complex and comprehensive whole
that results. All of this becomes possible if to books and
balances we add calipers and rule, thereby restoring the ancient unity of the visual arts and the liberal arts.

form and figure."
b) It is abundantly clear that the visual environment
influences our moods, dispositions, and thoughts. The colorscheme of any dentist's office testifies to this. Deny people
all view of the landscape and most will eventually cease to
think about the relation of man to nature. Cage them up in drab
high-rises constructed of indistinguishable cells and they will
become mean-spirited. The ancients were right to assume that
visual art shapes character. Lessing was wrong to assert that
the pleasure which we derive from visual beauty "can be
dispensed with"; it cannot. A responsible citizenry will promote the creation of a suitable visual environment by commissioning, by advising, by criticizing.
We cannot depend upon our artists and architects to do
that for us. As we have observed the visual arts and the liberal
arts parted company some two-hundred years ago. With few
exceptions, artists and architects are now specialists educated
in specialized schools of art or architecture that for the most
part exclude meaningful study of the liberal arts as rigorously
as some liberal arts colleges exclude the visual arts. Architect,
painter, and sculptor are not expected to have a liberal education, and are not usually directed by those who have such an
education. We need only look about us to see the consequences. For the good of society the liberally educated should
resume their historic role as knowledgable patrons of the
visual arts. To do so they must be familiar with the visual arts.
Liberal education can and should facilitate this.
c) Visual art is the mature expression of a unique faculty
that all men possess by nature and that distinguishes man from
other sentient beings. It presents the perfect object of perception to the most complex of our senses and thereby perfectly
exercises that sense. It satisfies the eye in the same way that
music satisfies the ear. The field-like organization of the
visual artifact is unique. For no other art-form confronts us
immediately in its totality. The paleolithic sculptures and cave
paintings indicate that mankind possessed from the beginning
an impulse to make beautiful and expressive images. For all
of these reasons I would argue that the study of visual art is a
primary discipline, quite different in that respect from the
social sciences, medicine, or any number of worthy studies.
d) Trivium and quadrivium, meaning "the place where
three (or four) ways meet" are tenns that originally described
what we would call highway intersections. The terms emphasize that the disciplines each grouping includes all lead to the
same destination. They interrelate, inform each other, and
constitute a larger whole. During the Middle Ages, when the
trivium and quadrivium first became the educational norm,
the seven liberal arts were parts of a still more comprehensive
unity. Study of the liberal arts prepared one for the study of
philosophy. Philosophy was not then the independent discipline that it is today, but the handmaiden of theology. The seven
"ways" crossed in God.
We cannot say that of our liberal arts. The body which

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�18.

1.
2.

3.
4.
5.
6.

7.
8.
9.

10.

11.

J.J. Pollitt, The Ancient View of Greek Ari (New Haven:
Yale University Press, 1974), p. 32.
See Rensselaer W . Lee, Ut Pictura Poe sis: The Humanistic
Theory of Painting (New York: W.W. Norton, 1967); Mario
Praz, Mnemosyne: The Parallel Between Literature and the
Visual Arts (Princeton: Princeton University Press, 1974);
Jean H. Hagstrum, The Sister Arts (Chicago: University of
Chicago Press, 1987).
Pollitt, Ancient View, pp. 60-61 and ch. 7.
See Henry Maguire, Art and Eloquence in Byzantium
(Princeton: Princeton University Press, 1981).
See M. Baxandall, Giotto and the Orators (Oxford, 1971).

14.

The Catholic Encyclopedia (New York: Encyclopedia Press,
1914), vol. 1 p . 726.
See Erwin Panofsky, Idea; "The Neoplatonic Movement in
Florence and North Italy"; "The Neoplatonic Movement and
Michelangelo" in Studies in Iconology (New York: Harper
and Row, 1962).
See E. H. Gombrich, Symbolic Images (Oxford: Phaidon,
1978), pp. 7-11.
Paul Oskar Kris teller, "The Modem System of the Arts" in
Renaissance Thought and the Arts (Princeton: Princeton
University Press, 1980), pp. 181-182.
Rudolf Wittkower, Architectural Principles in the Age of
Hurnanism (New York: Random House, 1965), pp. 101-102.
Ibid. p. 117.
Kristeller, pp. 163-164.
Edgar Wind, Art and Anarchy (New York: Vintage, 1969).
See esp. ch. IV, "The Fear of Knowledge."
Jose Ortega Y Gasset, "The Dehumanization of Art" in The
Dehumanization of Art (Princeton: Princeton University
Press, 1968), p . 49.
Hans Jonas, "The Nobility of Sight: A Study in the
Phenomenology of the Senses" in The Phenomenon of Life
(New York: Harper and Row, 1966), p. 135.
von Simson, pp. 22-41; Wittkower, IV, "The Problem of
Hannonic Proportion in Architecture," pp. 101-154.
Thomas Brachert, "A Musical Canon of Proportion in
Leonardo da Vinci's Last Supper," The Art Bulletin,
Dec. 1971.
Hambidge, Elements.
See "Rectangles and Ratios: Proportion in Art and
Architecture," unpublished essay by Frank Carr,
529 Powell Drive, Annapolis, Maryland 21401.
See Erwin Panofsky, Gothic Architecture and Scholastic ism,
(Cleveland: Meridian 1963).
John F. Taylor, Design and Expression in the Visual Arts
(New York: Dover, 1964), pp. 199-2 12.
Ibid. pp. 159-192.
Wind, pp. 56-59, 62-67.
Herbert Read, Education Through Art (New York: Random
House, 1956), p. 121.

20.

21.
22.

23.

See Caesare Ripa, Jconologia in Baroque and Rococo
Pictorial Imagery, ed. Edward A. Maser (New York: Dover,
1971), p. 197.
J.J. Coulton, Greek Architects at Work (London: Elek,
1977), p . 25.
Coulton, p. 53.
See Vitruvius, The Ten Books of Architecture (New York:
Dover, 1960), Book III . Jay Hambidge, The ElemenJs of
Dynamic Symmetry (New York: Dover, 1967); Dynamic
Symmetry: The Greek Vase (New Haven: Yale University
Press,?); The Parthenon and Other Greek Temples: Their
Dynamic Synunetry (New Haven: Yale University Press,
1924). Rhys Carpenter, The Esthetic Basis of Greek Art
(Bloomington: Indiana University Press, 1959), pp. 120-130.
P.H. Scholfield, The Theory of Proportion in Architecture
(Cambridge: Cambridge University Press, 1958). Pollitt,
Ancient View, pp. 14-22, 160-168. Howard Fisher,
"Dynamic Symmetry, A Theory of Art and Nature,"
The St. John's Review, Winter 1985.

24.
25.
26.
27.

28.

29.
30.

31.
32.

See George Duckworth, Structural Patterns and Proportions
In Vergil's Aeneid (Anne Arbor: University of Michigan
Press, 1962). On Plato's Polity, a lecture by John A. Bremer
given at St. John's College in Annapolis, Maryland,
February 17, 1984 (tape no. 770).

33.
33a.

See Otto von Simson, The Gothic Cathedral (New York:
Harper and Row, 1962), pp. 3-58.

34.

l la. See for example John Onians, Bearers of Meaning: The
Classical Orders in Antiquity, the Middle Ages, and the
Renaissance (Princeton: Princeton University Press, 1988).
12. R. J. Clements, Michelangelo' s Theory of Art (New York:
New York University Press, 1961), pp. xxix-xxxi.
13.

D. W. Robertson, Jr., A Preface to Chaucer (Princeton:
Princeton University Press, 1962), pp. 122-124.

19.

Notes

35.
36.

J.J. Pollitt, The Art of Greece 1400-31 B .C.: Sources and
Documents (New Jersey: Prentice-Hall, 1965), p. 7.
Ibid. pp. 162-163.

14a. Thomas Davidson, Aristotle and the Ancient Educalional
Ideals (New York: Charles Scribner's Sons, 1899), p. 240.
15. Erwin Panofsky, ldea, A Concept in Art Theory
(New York: Harper and Row, 1968), pp. 13-14.
16. von Simson, pp. 30-31.
17.

Ibid. p. 33 .

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�I

Her Hair
[] by Charles Baudelaire Roberts '93
translated by Francie

La Chevelure
by Charles Baudelaire

Oh tresses, curling down upon her neckline;
Oh ringlets; Oh perfume thick and overflowing
with nonchalance;
Ecstacy ! This night how I desire,
in order to populate this solemn alcove
with the memories sleeping in her hair,
to shake it in the air like a handkerchief!

I will plunge my head so desirous of intoxication,
into the black ocean where she is imprisoned,
and my penetrating spirit caressed by rolling waves
will rediscover you, oh abunant laziness;
endless rockings of my perfumed leisure!
Blue-black hair, lodging of taut night,
you restore to me the azure of an immense, round sky;
upon the soft borders of your tangled curls
I become passionately intoxicated by the mingled scents
of coconut oil, of musk and of tar.

Listless Asia and burning Africa,
all of a distant world, away from home, nearly lost,
lives within your depths, aromatic forest!
As other souls go sailing upon music,
so does my soul, oh my love, swim upon your perfume.

For a long while; Forever! my hand in your thick,
heavy hair
will scatter rubies, pearls, sapphires,
that you may never be deaf to my desire!
For, are you not the oasis where I dream,
and the wineskin from whence I swallow in great gulps
the wine of memory?

I will go far away where tree and man, both full of sap,
swoon for long stretches of time under the ardor
of the climates;
long tresses, be the oceanic surge which carries me off!
You contain, sea of ebony, a shining dream
of sails, of oarsmen, of flames and of masts:

0 toison, moutonnant jusque sur l'encolure!
0 boucles! 0 parfum charge de nonchaloir!
Extase! Pour peupler ce soir l'alc6ve obscure
Des souvenirs dormant dans cette chevelure,
Je la veux agiter dans l'air comme un mouchoir!

Je plongerai ma tete amoureuse d'i vresse
Dans ce noir ocean ou l'autre est enferme;
Et mon esprit subtil que le roulis caresse

La langoureuse Asie et la bn1lante Afrique,

Cheveux bleus, pavilion de tenebres rencluc s,

Tout un monde lointain, absent, presque defunt,

Yous me rendez l'azur du ciel immense

Yit dans tes profondeurs, foret aromatique!
Comme d 'autres esprits voguent sur la musique,

Surles bords duvetes de VOS meches tordues
Je m'enivre ardemment des senteurs con fondue

Le mien, 6 mon amour! nage sur ton parfum.

De l'huile de coco, du muse et du goudron.

J'irai la-bas OU l'arbre et l'homme, pleins de seve,

Longtemps! toujours! ma main dans ta criniere
lourde
Semera le rubis, la perle et la saphir,

Se pament longuement sous l 'ardeur des climats;
Fortes tresses, soyez la houle qui m'enleve!

An echoing harbor where my soul can drink, in
great waves,
the perfume, the sound and the color;
where ships, gliding through gold and through
watered silk,
open their vast arms to embrace the glory of a pure sky
where shudders the eternal passion.

Tu contiens, mer d'ebene, un eblouissant reve
De voiles, de rameurs, de flammes et de mats:

Saura vous retrnuver, 6 feconde paresse !
Infinis bercements du loisir embaume!

t:l

rumL

Afin qu'a mon desir tune sois jamais sourde !
N'es-tu pas !'oasis OU je reve, et Ia gourde
Ou je hume a longs traits le vin du souvenir?

u n port retentissant OU mon ame peut boire
A grands flats le parfum, le son et la couleur;
OL1 les vaisseaux, glissant dans I'or et dans la moire,
Ouvre nt le urs vastes bras pour embrasser la gloire
D'un ciel pur ou fremit l'etemelle chaleur.

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�Choosing to Believe: . ree Choice and
F
the Know ledge of God in St. Thomas
by Susanna Beiser '94
It is the intention of St. Thomas to exalt the intellect above
every other human power. In this way he is like Aristotle and
other ancient philosophers who believed that the acuity of
reason would serve to explain every phenomena and solve any
problem. Such philosophy preserves and celebrates the nobility of human reason. Aristotle, however, answered to himself
alone in regard to the proper pursuit of his science. He
answered to no God.
Thomas' approach is different because he believes in a
God who is a loving creator.a super-intelligent being with
absolute governance of the world. We have responsibilities to
this God, among which are love and humility. We are not
meant to rejoice in our natural abilities while remaining
oblivious to their origin and constant source of inspiration. On
the contrary, to best love God and conform our actions to His
will, we must try, to the best of our abilities, to understand
Him and His effects.
Thomas' sacred doctrine is established to serve this purpose. As a science, sacred doctrine has as its subject-matter
both God and His creation. In the realm of human endeavor,
practical guidelines are sought so that we might fulfill our duty
to ourselves and to God on both thought and deed. This duty
goes beyond belief in God's existence, beyond faith, to require of us our continuous attention to increasing our knowledge of God. This is not a burden, however, on the individual.
For when a man has a will ready to believe,

teaching based on natural reason (II-II, Q.1 A.7)." These are
the premises on which the best human knowledge of God is
founded, and only by reasoning from them can we gain, in any
measure, knowledge that is beyond our reach.
Thomas believes that man's reason is a participation in
the perfect intellect that is God. God created man with reason
as an essential part of his soul and in this sense the intellect is
a natural, rather than accidental, part of us. Our reason is
inferior to the divine intellect and comparatively incomplete,
but it is the divinity in us. We are created in the image of God
insofar as we can have knowledge. Since the human intellect
resembles God's, what God knows perfectly through His
infinite knowledge should not be inconsistent with the determinations of our own natural reason. In this way man was
originally created with the ability to know truth.
The fall of Adam altered the functioning of the human
intellect. Since the expulsion of Adam and Eve from the
Garden of Eden, man has been in a state of corrupted nature.
With Adam's assertion of his free will came disease, so that
"since man' s reason is not entirely subject to God, the consequence is that many disorders occur in the acts itself of the
reason (II-I, Q.109 A.8)." No longer is the human intellect
infallible, even in reference to objects well within the bounds
of the visible and the comprehensible. Lesser still is our ability
to know anything about God through the natural process of
reasoning. How, then, can we pursue this knowledge? Is it in
our power to choose to increase our knowledge of God? What
is the nature of this science which seems to grasp at know ledge
beyond our reach, yet claims to reveal the sw-est truths?
In order to answer these questions we must examine in
detail the process described by Thomas as the path to knowledge. In explanation of the necessity of sacred doctrine,
Thomas writes that "man is directed to God as to an end that
surpasses the grasp of his reason ... (I, Q.1 A.1 )." From this
description we are meant to understand the end of man to be
a final cause, a result for the sake of which the means to this
end are deliberately ordered.
According to Christianity, man's true end is life after
death in perfect happiness: beatitude. Since happiness is
. man's experience of the good, it easily follows that perfect
happiness must result from contact with God, who is perfectly
good. The exact nature of this contact, however, must be
further explored.
The best part of man is necessarily what is created to be
most like God, his most divine aspect. For Thomas, this is
certainly the intellect, both because it resembles the power by
which God governs the world and because it is a part of man

he loves the truth he believes, he thinks out and takes
to heart whatever reasons he can find in support
thereof....
(Summa Theologica, II-II, Q.2 A.10)

* * *
The practice of scared doctrine, although it makes use of
reason, does not entail thinking out reasonable explanations
for the truths which are believed by faith. The articles of faith
are truths about God that are unreachable by means of the
reason with which man is naturally endowed. These are the
basis of Christianity and include the existence of the Trinity
and the mystery of Christ. Such truths are neither self-evident
nor demonstrable and therefore require belief without the sure
know ledge that arises from the practice of any other science.
This does not mean, however, that articles of faith are
absurd or inconsistent with reason. They are beyond reason
but possess the nature of first principles in the practice of
sacred doctrine. "The articles of faith stand in the same
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�into different kinds according to its various effects:

that seems to be incorporeal. The excellence of the intellect
remains essentially unchanged, despite the corrupted state
into which we have fallen. If, then, man is to attain the
condition of the greatest possible happiness, the condition of
experiencing the greatest good, he must do so by means of his
most perfect faculty. It follows that "the ultimate beatitude of
man consists in the use of his highest function, which is the
operation of the intellect (I, Q.12 A.I)."
Thomas makes a distinction between two aspects of the
operation of the intellect. On the one hand there is the actuality
of the faculty. Simply stated, this is the activity of thinking.
On the other is the determination of the thinking to a particular
object. In order tocontiibute to beatitude, man's intellect must
be both active and focused on the greatest good. Beatitude,
therefore, consists in thinking about God. Furthermore, perfect happiness requires the perfect operation of the intellect.
For this reason a merely general or confused knowledge of
God is insufficient. Man must know God as He truly is.
Thomas describes the connection established by this contemplation as "the divine essence itself united to their intellect (I,
Q.12 A.9) and the effect of this connection as 'deiformity' (I,
Q.12 A.6)." The intellect is detennined to its proper object
and so takes on, to some finite extent, the infinite goodness
that is God. In this way man attains beatitude.
This kind of knowledge, a vision of God in His essence,
is possible only in the afterlife, for it is not granted that man,
still encumbered with his body, may 1ise above his nature to
comprehend the incorporeal Being. The human intellect is
accustomed to understanding immaterial objects by abstracting from composites, combinations of matter and form. This
is impossible when thinking about God because He is infinite
and utterly immaterial. The best knowledge of God is beyond
the reach of natural reason, for the human intellect cannot
change its mode of operation. Therefore man needs assistance
if he is ever to know the essence of God.
Here enters the crucial factor in the pursuit of the divine
science: the grace of God. Grace is the gift of God's assistance, bestowed on man to enable him to rise above his own
nature, gain knowledge of God, and thereby attain beatitude.
This blessing springs from the love that God, the creator, has
for His creation. It is to be distinguished from the care that
accompanied the original fashioning of man, whereby he was
given the power of reason as a natural part of the soul. So it
is said that grace indicates "a special love, whereby He draws
the rational creature above the condition of its nature to a
participation of the divine good... (I-II, Q.110 A.I)."
Grace is in operation throughout man's journey toward
knowledge of God, both before and after bodily death.
Thomas often calls this power a light: "this increase of the
intellectual powers is called the illumination of the intellect"
and "By this light the blessed are made' deiform '-that is, like
to God... (both from I, Q.12 A.5)." All grace stems from
God's love and is essentially the same, but it can be divided

Now there are five effects of grace in us. Of these, the
first is, to heal the soul; the second, to desire good; the
third, to carry into effect the good proposed; the fourth,
to persevere in good; the fifth, to reach glory. (II-I,
Q.111 A.3)
The first four of these are needed to compensate for our
corrupted nature. In the state of integral nature man's intellect
functioned perfectly. It was originally a natural characteristic
of man to tend toward apparent good in both his will and his
actions. This aspect of human nature remains. What man has
lost, however, is the unening ability to determine this tendency to an actual good, to enact the good, and to continue to
do good works of his own inspiration. It is God' s grace,
operating throughout his life, that is responsible for moving
man to will or enact good.
The fifth kind encompasses all the effects of grace that_
specifically pertain to man' s beatitude. In regard to knowl"
edge of God that is beyond the reach of reason, grace bridges
the gap between the relatively confused and general knowledge of God that man can gain by natural reason and the
essential knowledge necessary for beatitude.
It is only by faith that man can have this essential knowledge. Thomas describes the aspects of grace that allow a man
to attain Christian faith and then to continue in the contemplation of God. The knowledge gained by faith is unlike
knowledge that results from natural reason.
Faith is a kind of knowledge, inasmuch as the intellect
is determined by faith to some knowable object. But
this determination to one object does not proceed from
the vision of the believer, but from the vision of Him
Who is believed. Thus, as far as faith falls short of
vision, it falls short of the nature which knowledge has
when it is science .... (I, Q.12 A.13)
Faith does not permit man to reasonably understand its objects; rather it "signifies the assent of the intellect to that which
is believed (II-I, Q.l A.4)."In the normal course of intellectual
activity, a proposition that is believed is assented to by a
process of reasoning. When a proposition cannot be reasonably understood, it cannot be believed in the usual manner.
The propositions about God which constitute the articles of
faith surpass human reason, and so cannot be believed without
an assent being made possible by grace.
God, therefore, grants that man may come to believe the
truths of faith that are essential to beatitude. After grace
initially acts to establish faith, its continuing presence allows
man to increase his knowledge of God. We reason from the
articles of faith, our natural intellectual power enhanced by
the light of grace. Beatitude is insured by faith and the degree
of happiness obtained is heightened as the share of grace
increases.

The question that now arises pertains not to these operations of grace, but to what precedes them. Grace appears to
be the only addition to the soul's natural powers that is
necessary for attaining faith. Not every man, however, is a
Christian. Hence, it is apparent that some do not receive this
grace. Considering that God intends man's happiness, what
prior condition in the individual allows him to receive the
grace that leads to faith and beatitude?
It is reasonable to suspect that the absence of faith in an
individual is due to some failing of his own rather than to the
will of God. A lack of the proper preparation to receive grace
accounts for man's failure to attain beatitude and absolves
God of any responsibility for withholding it. The likely source
of man's error is his reason because it is functionally corrupt
and not necessarily attuned to the will of God. Man's fallible
reason is also responsible for the misdirection of his free will.
If reason is to have a decisive role in preparing for grace, the
course of intellectual progress towards beatitude should include a point at which a free choice is made. This choice
would allow each man to take responsibility for the condition
of his soul and, by choosing correctly, to prepare himself to
receive God's grace.
An extension of the grace/light analogy is helpful in
determining what must occur in man prior to having faith.

Q.109 A.6)." Perhaps these men have a greater desire for God
and therefore are more receptive to the initial gift of grace.
This explanation, however, is insufficient. According to
human nature, every man tends towards good as it appears to
his mind. All men also tend toward God, although in a
confused and indeterminate way. But no man, his nature
corrupt and unaided by grace, can know the truths that would
allow his reason, and thereby his desire, to rise above lesser
goods to the greatest good, to direct him to God. Thus it is
clear that man does not specifically desire or look to God
before he first receives grace; "man cannot prepare himself to
receive the light of grace except by the gratuitous help of God
moving him inwardly (II-I, Q. I09 A.6)."
All men, then, appear to be moved in the same way
toward knowledge of God. By nature their minds tend to
the good; by grace they are focused on God, enlightened,
and raised above their natural abilities to assent to the
articles of faith. None of these movements, however, appears to involve a choice on the part of the individual. Yet
Thomas states that there is a form of cooperation between
God and man concerning the gift of grace and that man's
part consists in free choice:
It is the part of man to prepare his soul, since he does
this by his free choice. And yet he does not do this
without the help of God moving him, and drawing
him to Himself. ...
(II-I, Q.109 A.6)

Now to prepare oneself for grace is. as it were, to be
turned to God; just as whoever has his eyes turned away
from the light of the sun prepares himself to receive the
sun's light, by turning his eyes towards the sun. (II-I,
Q.109 A.6)

Man's turning to God is by free choice, and thus man
is bidden to turn himself only to God. But free choice
can be turned to God only when God turns it. ...
(II-I, Q.109 A.6)

In one sense, man' s eyes are never turned completely away
from God because of his natural tendency toward the good.
The problem is that this general leaning is not specifically to
God, but toward whatever object the intellect believes to be
good. Due to the corruption of the intellect, this determination
is often incmrect.
This inability to positively identify God as the object of
desire was not a part of the first man. In the state of integral
nature the human intellect recognized its cause and creator,
but "in the state of corrupted nature man falls short of this in
the appetite of his rational, which, unless it be cured by God's
grace, follows its private good... (II-I, Q.109 A.3)." Because
true intellectual vision depends on sure belief and God desires
man's beatitude, grace determines the mind to God; it turns
man to Him so that he is prepared to receive the light of further
grace that will lead him to faith.
Since not all men receive grace, it remains to be said what
kind of man is moved in this way. Again, we would like to
understand how free choice plays a role in obtaining grace.
Perhaps the solution is a sirnple form of cooperation: he who
wishes to find God will be turned to Him by God. In this vein
Thomas writes, "He directs just men to Himself as to a special
end, which they seek and to which they wish to cling ... (II-I,

In making this choice man has neither alternative objects from
which to choose, nor the ability to actively direct his mind to
the object of choice. In what sense, then, is the choice free?
The solution to this problem is contained in Thomas'
understanding of choice as an act of the will. As a power of
the intellect, will is characterized by the two aspects mentioned earlier: the activity of the power and the determination
of the power to an object. Thomas explains this division:
Now the reason why it is possible not to choose, or to
choose, may be gathered from a twofold power in man.
For man can will and not will, act and not act; and again,
he can will this or that, and do this or that. The reason
for this is to be found in the very power of the reason.
For the will can tend to whatever the reason can apprehend as good. (II-I, Q.13 A.6)
These distinctions can be understood by examining our
outward actions. For example, a man might read a book of his
own choosing. In this case he is the active principle in two
senses; he reads rather than not reading, and he determines the
object of his action, this book rather than that one. A different

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�case is illustrated by the man who obeys a particular law. It is
by his own power that he acts in obeying the law, but the law
itself is not of his determination. It has been framed by
someone else and presented to him so that the range of his
action is limited.
Turning to God is an action of the second type. There
is no need to determine the object of the action; God is a
given. The only options, then, are to turn or not to turn.
There appears to be a problem, however, because we know
that man does not have the ability to tum to God on his own.
he must be turned by God's grace. In the absence of the
power to act there appears to be no place for choice. It
seems impossible for man to choose to tum to God when,
in fact, his role is passive.
At this point we must remember that choice pertains not
only to action, but also to willing or desiring. Because most
of our actions are both willed and enacted by our own power,
this distinction might seem unnecessary. It is essential, however, in the context of receiving grace, a situation in which we
appear to have no active role. In this case man can choose
neither the object of his desire, nor the means of attaining his
end, for both are dependent on God. The only choice that
remains to be made is to will or not to will. If a man cannot
choose God as the object to which he is turned, and he cannot
choose to turn himself, his choice consists in willing or not
willing the turn.
Why, though, would anyone choose not to be turned to
God? As Thomas mentions, the explanation for this lies in the
condition of man's reason. The will naturally tends toward
good, even in our corrupted state. It must rely, however, on
reason's frequently incorrect determinations of what is good.
Although anyone with clear knowledge of God could not
mistake his goodness, any less perfect vision is subject to this
error. It is possible for a man who ·is without faith, not yet
enlightened by grace, and lacking any clear intellectual vision
of God to be blind to the goodness of grace and so to choose
not to receive it.
The first step towards enlightenment, then, is desire,
not for God specifically, because His essence is unseen, but
for what is greatest. It is the willful, and therefore intellectual, yearning for the highest knowledge, the first principle
sought by the philosophers. Accompanying this desire is
the understanding that what is highest is truly beyond our
grasp if we attempt the search alone. We must rely on God
to enhance our reason and raise our sights to a vision of the
truth we seek.
The source of our hope for divine assistance is reason
itself. Thomas believes that some knowledge of God,
known through the images of His effects, is within the reach
of our natural faculties. Included is the knowledge that
there is a creator and an intelligent being "by whom all
natural things are directed to their end (I, Q.2 A.3)." The
conect consideration of these truths compels the thinking

man to submit his will to that of the creator and to look to the
greater intelligence for guidance in his search for knowledge.
In this way the lover of knowledge may prepare his soul for
the assistance he needs to transcend his limited abilities and
gain a vision of his true end.

On the Relation of the Speech of Alcibiades
to the Other Speeches of the Platonic Symposium
by Friedrich Nietzsche (1864)

Translated by Eva T. H. Brann

[Nietzsche wrote this essay when he was twenty years old. I
came on it while helping a senior with his essay on the
Symposium. It seemed to me that I should translate it to serve
as an encouragement to our students. The German text appears
in Friedrich Nietzsche, Werke und Briefe: Historischkritische Gesammtausgabe, Vol. 2, Jugendschriften (18611864), edited by Hans Joachim Mette, Munich: C.H. Beck
(1934).]

All passages are quoted from Basic Writings of Saint
Thomas Aquinas, Anton C. Pegis, ed., Random House,
New York, 1945.

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ladder to the highest eros that he erects I notice this peculiarity, that the different points of view of the speakers recur.
Phaedrus is, to be sure, as elsewhere, only the "midwife" of
the following speeches. But Pausanias, in whose speech one
must never lose sight of his love for Agathon, shows the
standpoint of a human being as long as he still loves one
beautiful object, be it physical or spiritual. Eryximachus is a
lover of all that is beatiful, as it is revealed in the whole of
nature. Aristophanes has already advanced to the higher rung
oflove for art and science, just as has Agathon, who, as a tragic
poet, seems to me to have been awarded by Plato a higher
place, above Aristophanes - a judgment with which we
would not nowadays concur. The spiritually greater human
being by far is Aristophanes. Finally Socrates himself reaches
the rung that Diotima has designated as the highest, the love
of the Arch-beautiful; we do not doubt that he has reached it,
but Socrates himself does not and may not tell us this, true to
his own character. What he does describe is how he was once
caught in the same error as Agathon is now; that is the great
insight he has gained. But how far it has carried over into life,
whether it is even capable of being actualized - that has to
remain uncertain for the reader of the dialogue. That is why
Alcibiades appears, to represent the love for the Arch-beautiful in its effect on the practical life of human beings, that is,
the effect of this love in a particular human being such as
Socrates, and the countereffect a human being filled with such
a love has on others, such as Socrates has on Alcibiades. Here
is the reason why Plato chose precisely Alcibiades in order to
depict this effect. If any disciple of Socrates had come on the
scene to glorify Socrates, the effect would have been incomparably weaker. Alcibiades, on the other hand, is a youth
completely apostate from Socrates and wholly alienated from
philosophy. The influence of Socrates on such a one, a human
being of such genius, is the most wonderful that Plato could
have cited in proof of the above-mentioned countereffect.
Furthermore, Alcibiades knows nothing of the preceding conversation. To the surprise of the audience he depicts the
practical side of the human being consecrated to the Archbeautiful, while Socrates had drawn the theoretical side. Plato
represents him as intoxicated in order to let him express
himself more freely about things which had to be avoided in
serious, measured conversation; their mention was, however,
necessary, especially since they were historical facts. Then
too the contrast between the speeches of Socrates and Alcidiades is worthy of notice, as is the contrast between their
natures, while both are expressing their deepest feelings, the

To come right out with how I conceive of the relation of
the first five speeches to that of Socrates: It seems to me to be
a completely erroneous claim that in those five speeches Plato
collected only mistaken opinions about Eros in order to confront them with the only correct one, that of Socrates. Socrates
himself does not deny them his applause; he comes back to
all of them, assigning to each opinion its appropriate place. I
rather believe that from the first to the last speech a definite
progress takes place, insofar as each successive opinion substantially increases and broadens that of its predecessor; each
speaker sees the concept of eros appear before him with
growing clarity, until Socrates, far from overthrowing it,
finally rounds off into a dome the edifice they have gradually
erected. This holds of course only with respect to the basic
opinions of each speaker. What the others add to their exegeses by way of ornament is often rejected by Socrates as
unjustified.
The speech of Phaedrus only sketches out the area within
which the question is moved. He depicts Eros as the oldest
god and the cause of the greatest goods. Of course, I here pass
over the significance of each individual speech for characterizing the persons and emphasize only the basic thought.
Pausanias explains the eros of the heavenly gods as love with
the purpose of the active or passive ennobling of humankind.
Eryximachus widens the meaning of eros to extend over the
all-encompassing life of nature, while the two first speakers
represent love only in its operation within the human being.
Aristophanes says that eros is based on a necessity of nature,
the law of elective affinity. Agathon, finally, calls eros the
love of the beautiful, which begets everything good and great,
in nature, in art, everywhere. In summary, the concept of eros
according to these speeches would be: Eros is love for beauty
as natural law, directed to the procreation of the good.
Socrates' definition does not sound substantially different:
Eros is love directed to the begetting and bearing on the
beautiful, which he then characterizes as the instinct for
immortality innate in spiritual and physical nature. In the

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one through the mouth of the divinely inspired prophetess,
the other under the inpiration of wine - their deepest and
yet similar feelings for the Arch-beautiful, the one in the Idea,
the other in a reference to reality: Socrates is the lover of the
Arch-beautiful, but Alcibiades is also the lover of the Archbeautiful. And yet, what a difference of natures - the one as
morally elevated as the other is morally fallen, the one as
physically beautiful as the other is ugly, the one as sober and
self-controlled as the other is intoxicated and excited.
It is clear that these points of view are relevant as much
to the philosophy as to the artistic conception of the dialogue.
Here we should notice that with the entrance of Alcibiades a
transformation of tone takes place; it is the most daring of
artistic uicks that at the moment when the speech of Socrates
has led the auditors as it were onto the high seas of the
beautiful, the band of inebriates and revellers breaks in and
yet does not undo the speech of Socrates but rather enhances
it. The speech of Alcibiades is the work of eros, just as is the
speech of Socrates. But the speech of Alcibiades works
through facts, as that of Socrates does through ideas. And the
facts work more forcefully and more compellingly than the
articulated ideas. The speeches of Socrates and Alcibiades are
related similarly to those of Agathon and Aristophanes, to
those of Eryximachus and Pausanias, only in a higher sphere.
Socrates, Agathon, E1yximachus are the greater thinkers;
Alcibiades, Aristophanes, Pausanias work through facts and
myths - in Pausanias especially we must note that he always
keeps his own love for Agathon in view. The three thinkers
elevate Eros to the widest circle of the arts and sciences
peculiar to them: Eryximachus regards Eros as a physician,
Agathon as a poet, Socrates as a philosopher.
Through the contrast between Socrates and Alcibiades
that demonic double nature of Eros himself finally comes
before the imagination, that being-betwixt-and-between the
divine and the human, the spiritual and the sensual; just so on
the other side, the dialogue itself obtains through the appearance of Alcibiades that wonderful coloration, that oscillation
between opposing tints that can be traced into the separate
parts of the dialogue and that extends even to the language.
Even the wondrous union of philosophical speeches with the
enjoyment of wine reminds us of it.
Thus the appearance of Alcibiades seems to be the turning point of the artful drama, and at the same time of philosophy, toward the side of actuality. And if I may be permitted
to draw an analogy: Plato has pulled all the parts of the
dialooue together in this nodal point, just as Zeus twisted
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characters' actions or an omniscient power able to give a
voiced expression of the characters' innermost thoughts and
motives? Although this last version is a traditional interpretation of the role of the Greek chorus, it may oversimplify the
way in which the play strives to render its meaning. I would
much rather view the chorus as someone just like myself,
uncertain and puzzled, struggling to unravel the mysteries of
human life.
The chorus may be seen as a group of aged men whom
long experience has made wise but, perhaps, slightly senile.
They proclaim truths striking in both the scope and depth of
their perception. But a comprehension of eternal truths is not
enough for the exercise of right judgment. One must also
practically apply these truths to particular situations. The
chorus lacks the ability to do so. The reader who would gain
a true understanding of the play must bridge the gap between
the universal and the particular. In this respect, the play is
similar to a puzzle, all the parts of which are present but
scattered and obscured so well that their assembly presents a
problem, surmountable, we hope, with reason.
Though not explicitly discussed, Hope is a constant
thread woven throughout the texture of the play. An exposition of its role may provide considerable insight into the
characters' development. While hope is a power that no
human being can avoid, the volatility inherent in its nature is
unsettling. According to the chorus Hope exhibits two contrary effects:

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As the opening stanza of one of the turning points
(a'tpo&lt;j&gt;rt) in a chorus' speech, this passage typifies the generally sententious, truth-pondering character of the chorus'
entrances. It appeares in a succession of generalizing statements which obviously bear upon the particular events in the
tragedy-the far-reaching and contaminating power of evil
and man's helplessness before Zeus' will (fate). Against this
background, the appearance of the word "hope" and the
optimism which it connotes seem quite striking and unfathomable.
This is the first time that the concept of hope is treated as
a potentially central concern in the play, and nowhere else
does it receive so full a development. Haem on' s appearance
on stage immediately after the chorus has finished speaking
might lead one to believe that the reference to hope reflects
his state of mind. Such an interpretation is emphasized by the
connection between passion and hope in the passage quoted
above. Hope is presented in an obscure causal relationship
with Eros whose primary translation as physical love recalls
Haemon's character. At this point the reader could easily
understand the chorus' words as foreshadowing Haemon' s
hope to save the Iife of his beloved. But this view is too limited
in comparison with the broad scope of the other concepts
articulated by the chorus. Besides, according to their own
words, neither Haemon nor Antigone feels any passionate
love for the other. Haemon himself, upon Creon's accusation
of serving as "the woman's champion", claims in a guilessly
passionate tone that his concern is more for his father than for
his betrothed: "If thou art a woman; indeed, my care is for thee
(1. 741 ;Jebb)." Such inconsistencies suggest that in the passage
on hope the chorus addresses another, broader issue.
In order to explore the significance of the chorus' treatment of hope we must first consider the chorus as we would
any major character in the play. Is the chorus merely a group
of bystanders offering their own subjective judgements on the

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wide-roaming hope is a benefit
to many among men,
but to many-a deceit for empty-minded passions;
In our experience we can distinguish between a general hope
which manifests itself as an optimistic outlook towards the
future, and a particular one which deals with the specifics of
present situations. General optimism brings "benefit" to man,
giving breadth to his horizon and vigour to his actions. The
more restricted type of hope, however, is painfully insubstantial and unrealistic. It causes the person in whom it dwells to
. forsake reason in his actions and to seek support from something outside of himself that he expects to emerge from the
nebulous beyond at the moment of his greatest need. Such
hope brings a "deceit for empty-minded passions", and, as it
must by definition remain in the realm of the unfulfilled, it
inevitably entails disaster. Ironically, the existence of this
kind of hope in a person's mind is most clearly manifest by
an abrupt change in his behaviour at the point when all hope
is forsaken.

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�We observe radical transformations in the views and
actions of all the characters in the play. Antigone and Creon,
the two central and mutually opposing figures, best illustrate
this transformative process. Antigone, as she appears by the
end of the play, is quite different from the strong-minded,
resolute woman that we encounter in the beginning. In an
earlier conversation with her sister she sees death as a beautiful end, an opportunity to "res t, a loved one with him whom
I have loved (1.72-73; Jebb)." Even when confronted with
Creon's threats she maintains a defiant attitude and presents
death as an escape from her miserable existence:

jus tice according to his rigid standards and heedless of any
stance which opposes his own. His personality exemplifies
yet another collapse of a man 's character after hope, his
unsubstantial ally that was supposed to strengthen the belief
in the correctness of his deeds, has stealthily departed. Upon
the death of his son Creon is subject to the constrictions of a
situation in which his hope can no longer thrive and support
him. Without the internal instigation of hope he is suddenly
humbled. A state of abjection is highly unexpected in a man
who in his obstinacy is ready to rave even against the gods.
He must doubt the beliefs which inspired his actions and
realize the emptiness of his motives.
Further evidence that Antigone and Creon are led to their
tragic ends by Hope is the fact that they themselves realize,
to a certain extent, the faultiness of their resolutions long
before disaster strikes. Both characters admit that their decisions are not perfectly justified. Antigone indulgently calls
this imperfection "her folly," Creon proudly names it "the
power of the ruler." How can one admit the falsity of one's
course of action and still follow it? Is the self-destructiveness
which such willful blindness entails an intrinsic trait of human
nature? It is unbelievable that a sane man could intentionally
go towards his own doom. The only other impulse, besides
madness, that can explain such behaviour is Hope. It baffles
man with empty promises and inflates his pride and courage
until the final moment when terror fills the hollow form that
Hope has just forsaken. It is this attraction to self-destruction
that leads people to great exploits and is often admired by
outside observers. Is approval of such behaviour justified if it
is not based on one's innate capacities but rather on something
external? And should we not deem blind sacrifice a weakness
and insecurity rather than strength, when it relies on empty
hopes instead of reason?
With regard to these questions it is helpful to consider the
immediate context in which the "Hope" passage stands. It acts
as the counter-movement, the avncnpoqn1, of another passage that treats of fate, represented by the inexorable might of
Zeus, and ends with a proclamatory statement, "Nothing that
is vast enters into the life of mortals without a curse (l.614615; Jebb)." At first sight, this line seems to refer directly to
the extraordinary personalities of the two main characters in
the play, condemned to disaster by their own respective
natures. If, however, we are to take the following antistrophe
as an answer to the vague universality of this statement, the
"vast thing"-naµnoA'l)-that comes into life with a curse is
in fact "wide-roaming hope"-noA.unA.a:)'K'tOO' £Amcr. A
special emphasis needs to be put on the fact that naµnoA.u
denotes a thing and not a person, an observation which lessens
the immediacy of the application of the word to either Creon
or Antigone. It is significant that the adjectives modifying "the
thing" and "the hope" have similar connotations and even
share a composite part, namely 7tOA1J. Moreover, the manner
in which they enter, creeping into life and man respectively,

But if I am to die before my time,
I count that a gain:
for if anyone lives, as I do,
compassed about with evils,
can such a one find aught but gain in death?
(1.463-466;Jebb)
At the very last moment, however, when directly faced with
the prospect of dying, she mourns her fate and attempts to
invoke pity for herself in others. We realize that her previous
resignation to the inevitability of death was not securely
grounded. Strong beliefs, based on rational thought, would
not yield so readily to feelings; but passions, emerging from
powerful impulses and obstinate self-righteousness, are easily
overcome by like passions. Antigone, as she first appears, is
moved by a violent, almost blind, determination to act. This
determination is a likely manifestation of OL epffi't£CJ or
"loves," "passions." Just as physical love is irrational and
uncontrollable, so is any other inexplicably powerful attraction or drive. Antigone is resolved to bury her brother but
refuses to consider the destructive consequences of her actions. Hope is what fosters such an attitude-hope in the
correctness of one's decision, in the possibility of achieving
one's goal, and in the relief which will ensue from its accomplishment. When this hope is not realized (the corpse is still
unburied; no approval, divine or human, is granted her),
Antigone behaves like a child irritated that events do not
accord to her desires. She bewails her fate, the same fate which
not long before she eulogized as leading to a most beautiful
end in life. She stands uncertain, groundless; her hope is gone
and with it, all the principles that have hitherto driven her
actions:
And what law of heaven have I transgressed?
Why, hapless one, should I look to the gods any morewhat ally should I invokewhen by piety I have earned the name of impious?
(1. 921-24, Jebb)
Creon is also led by a "passion" that is stined by a
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is expressed by the same verb---epnffi. These two stanzas in
~h~~ juxtaposition, suggest much broader implications than
imtially apparent. Vastness and its concomitant curse are at
work not only in single, exceptional cases. They are intrinsic
elements of the realm of hope of which we all partake. If our
firs t impulse is to separate ourselves from the characters and
~he events in the tragedy, deeming them too extraordinary to
m any way bear upon our own experience, we must now face
the realization that the cause and driving force behind them is
something common to all men, by whose disastrous effects
we are all endangered.
The application of Hope to human existence does not end
here but is taken to an even higher level. Its central role within
the pl.a~ is further enforced by its presence in the proverbially
defm1tive passage, the "noAAcx 'ta Bf:iva" chorus. Once again
we ar~ faced ~y an obscure expression and a passing mention
of an ~&lt;lea which, when fully explored, might yield important
meanmgs:
Wonders are many,
but nothing is more wondrous than man.
Having an ingenuity of art, and wisdom beyond hope,
he creeps, now towards evil and now towards good.
(1.332,362-363)

He~e ~~ is p~esented as wise "beyond hope" (1J7tep
~A.mo) m his mgemous arts. This expression, mysterious in
itself, stands in a peculiar relation to wisdom and arts Moreover, it is man this time, as opposed to hope, who. creeps
(epmo~, now t~wards evil and now towards good. The commonality of t!ris action to both man and hope suggests a
fundamen~ link between them. In the core of their relation
stands vastn.ess, which they both share. Man, vastness, and
~ope mer~e mto one and spread over all the instances of tragic
~mpa~se m the play. Once understood, their inseparability
illummates the tragedy in the context of human existence as
a whole.

Note: Unless otherwise indicated, all translations are mine.

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�Human Nature and War in Thucydides'
History of the Peloponnesian War
by Janice Thompson '95
Individuals can oppose individuals, parties can oppose parties, states can oppose states, with impunity. But these levels
are interdependent and the hostility in one cannot always be
contained in the stratum in which it originated. When enough
individuals form an alliance they become a city which can
oppose other cities; likewise cities allied together become a
state and can oppose other states, while states allied together
become an empire. Thucydides begins his History at the end
of the greatest state of possible unity in the Grecian world,
when all people, cities, and states were united against Persia.
He then describes the degeneration of that cohesion through
all the strata of human society. Thucydides' views on human
nature and the breakdown of law and order are most evident
in his analysis of civil war and disunity, particularly in his
presentation of the Athenian plague and the civil war in
Corcyra.
The plague in Athens was a natural disaster that so
overwhelmed men that they came to ignore the old structures
that had unified them as a city and governed their behavior.
Such a removal of the accepted order seems to be the first step
into lawlessness. In the new situation created by the plague
there was no apparent evidence that the moral ties of virtue
and honor that had once guided men's actions still had relevance to the suffering they then encountered. For example,
those honorable enough to care for the sick received no
reward; instead they usually became sick themselves. The
disease struck randomly and relentlessly, inflicting suffering
upon both the virtuous and the corrupt. Many of the living
stopped caring for the sick or observing burial rites out of fear
for their own health. Thus Thucydides describes men as
becoming "indifferent" (II, 52) to rules of law and religion
when they are no longer able to see the relevance of such rules
to their present situation.
Thucydides then describes how the state of "indifference" develops into one of fearlessness. He writes: "No fear
of god or law of man had a restraining influence." (II, 53) As
the disease continued to spread wildly, people lost hope and
concern for the future. All were weak in the face of the plague,
and no one expected to live long enough to be respected for
virtuous acts or punished for crime. For similar reasons the
laws of the state quickly followed the laws of morality into
disrepair. The greatest value became the pleasure of the
moment as they could be certain of nothing else. (II, 53) The
citizens acted on this new value by becoming openly self-indulgent and unrestrained. The despair and fear felt by the
Athenians when threatened by the plague, an enemy they

Human nature is presented as inextricably entwined with
history in Thucydides' History of the Peloponnesian War.
Thucydides writes in the introduction that:
It will be enough for me, however, if these words of
mine are judged useful by those who want to understand
clearly the events which happened in the past and which
(human nature being what it is) will, at some time or
other and in much the same ways, be repeated in the
future.

Thucydides presents the human motivation that directs the
course of history. Throughout time human nature shows its
effects in all the different strata of human interaction. Insight
into the human spirit is, thus, integral to understanding of the
past, and of the relations between nations and individuals.
Thucydides' history concerns a time of war. In order to
understand the state of war we must understand the human
nature that causes it, the human nature that develops under its
threat, and the effects of human nature in the political situation. War permeates all aspects and levels of human society,
from the social to the moral, from the international to the
individual.
Human society is unified through "social" ties and
"moral" ties. The social ties, necessitated by common interest
and self-preservation, are a balancing of strength against
strength in order to set up a system in which a society can
function. They consist of agreements and rules designed to
make aggression unprofitable. Examples of the social structures are such things as laws and alliances. Less obviously
motivated by self-interest are the moral ties. These are not
based on a position of strength but are a precaution against
times of weakness. The benefit for the weak is immediately
obvious: security in times of distress, when strength can not
save them. The benefits for the strong are less apparent: a good
reputation for their virtuous behavior, and the hope of receiving similar treatment in times of trouble. Justice, ethics, 'and
friendship are examples of such ties.
A state of war depends on the creation and maintenance
of a fine balance of unity and disunity, understanding and
blindness. A state must be internally unified in order to have
the strength and stability with which to direct itself against
another state. Such internal or domestic unity allows a state
to take an opposing position to another, setting up a disunity
on the external, or international, scale.
Unity and disunity can develop in all levels of human
relations, and their effects on one level spread to others.

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�could not fight, undermined their respect for law. This led to
a reckless disregard of their social structure of values. In the
absence of such structures they came to observe new values
of individual self-preservation and indulgence, values which
threatened their ability to act as a society.
The societal effects of the destruction and replacement of
previously established systems of values are evide?t i.n
Thucydides' description of the civil war in Corcyra and m his
generalization of the nature of revolutions. The structures of
society, in the case of revolutions, are purposely attacked by
rival political factions, rather than deteriorating from neglect,
as they were in Athens, during the plague. In Corcyra, both
the democrats and the oligarchs were supposedly trying to
save the city, but through opposite means. They were not
interested in compromise and they soon came to act as enemies towards each other. Internal fighting destroyed
Corcyra's ability to put forth an organized self-defense
against outside forces. Even worse, it released internal forces
that destroyed civil unity.
At this point in his chronicles, Thucydides departs from
his simple presentation of fact and analyzes the aspects of
human nature that direct the course of revolution. He begins
by describing how the change from attitudes of peace to
attitudes of conflict and war come to permeate the whole
structure of understanding: "To fit in with the change of
events, words, too, had to change their usual meanings." (III,
82) Along with the logos of speech, the existing logos, or
order, of human values was displaced. Aggression was now
seen as courage, moderation as unmanliness, consideration
prior to action as cowardly inaction, villainy as cleverness,
and honesty as simple-mindedness. Thucydides further comments: "The simple way oflooking at things, which is so much
the mark of a noble nature was regarded as a ridiculous quality
and soon ceased to exist." (III, 83) In language, law, and
national character the concepts of virtue were changed from
those which benefitted the weak to those which benefitted the
individual. It is necessary to understand why this change
occurred and its influence in the generation of the resulting
situation.
The existing structures of understanding are purposely
destroyed in times of revolution to allow for structures of
hostility and conflict to be established. During the plague in
Athens, a time of civil disunity but not revolution, the moral
ties of law and religion were disregarded; human nature took
advantage of such lawlessness. But in Corcyra and other
revolutions, these laws were attacked and replaced in order to
destroy the existing social order. A certain type of human
behavior was encouraged rather than simply left unrestrained.
Revolutions create hostilities and enemies while at the
same time they remove the systems of justice that once
mediated and restiicted such behavior. Thucydides explains
that "Society had been divided into two ideologically hostile
camps .. ." (II, 83), thus providing a structure in which indi-

victual desires conflicted with another party or individual.
People could no longer depend on any common standard or
belief or behavior. There could be no confidence in others and
so all energy was devoted to individual strength and quickness
for self-preservation. Potential enemies were everywhere, and
simple survival was so tenuous that to strike first became the
best way to be secure. Vengeance and profit became the ideals
governing man's behavior.
Thucydides asserts that the emergence of the structures
of conflict and revenge propel a state further into its own
destruction for two reasons. First, the loss of unity permits the
emergence of a dangerous form of human behavior:
Then, with the ordinary conventions of civilized life
thrown into confusion, human nature, always ready to
offend even where laws exist, showed itself proudly in
its true colors, as something incapable of controlling
passion, insubordinate to the idea of justice, the enemy
to anything superior to itself; for, if it had not been for
the pernicious power of envy, men would not so have
exalted vengeance above innocence and profit above
justice. (ill, 84)

And second, the lawlessness and hostility established by such
behavior destroys the means of salvation from the disorder
and suffering.
Indeed, it is true that in these acts of revenge on others
men take it upon themselves to begin the process of
repealing those general laws of humanity which a.:e
there to give a hope of salvation to all who are m
distress, instead of leaving those laws in existence,
remembering that there may come a time when they,
too, will be in danger and will need their protection.
(ill,84)

In the revolutions, the "structures" of hostility that encouraged self-interest and revenge in order to dismantle the
original unity ultimately could not be contained within an
ordered system. The competition for power to further party
interests that had corrupted the strata of national unity, eventually spread to individual competition for power, corrupting
all strata of the once cohesive city. Thucydides claimed:
"Love of power, operating through greed and through personal ambition, was the cause of all these evils." (III, 83) Party
programs seemed admirable, but they appealed to public
concerns only to gain the support necessary to empower those
competing for leadership. Party attacked party and individual
attacked individual. Public spirit became a guise for personal
ambition; nothing was as it seemed. Hence violence erupted
throughout the society. The only way to achieve one' s ends
was quickly and forcefully. Other means, such as agreements
and unions, could not be trusted as they were assumed to be
motivated by aggression. The disorder, fear, and hostility that
spread through all levels of organization caused terrible suffering, which could not be prevented as the structures of

from weakness she thought she did not need to act with
concern for the weak. Thus the other states came to realize
that Athens' "justice" could be depended on only when it
benefitted her self-interest. Athens also suspected such selfinterest in the actions of others states. Since true justice is
difficult (ifnot impossible) to separate from bias, the appearance of justice can easily be used to veil self-interest. By
upholding and displaying such attitudes Athens presented
herself as superior to other states and to any rules governing
dealings between states, such as justice, which could restrict
her power. Similar to the early stages of rebellion within a
city, initial disunity and a lack of a common structure had been
established, this time on the international stratum. Policy had
to be based on self-interest, acted out of strength, or avoided
through fear. Power now ruled justice and law. Athens had
thus begun to dismantle the moral order from the system in
which she and other states has to interact.
The Athenian speech is followed by King Archidamus'
speech to the Spartans advising them on how to respond to the
Athenian situation. Thucydides cites fear of the growth of
Athenian power as the reason that motivated Sparta to finally
declare war (I, 23). King Archidamus viewed the Athenians '
pride as excessive and dangerous. But, most significantly, he
feared the effects of such an attitude on the internal unity of
the state. He was concerned that the overriding self-interest
set up by Athens on the international level might permeate the
state level and destroy national unity. King Archidamus cautioned the Spartans against such behavior with the same
arguments used by Thucydides in his analysis of human
nature at the destruction of Corcyra. To maintain a powerful
and unified state he called on them to uphold the social order:
to be self-controlled and unified through honor and regard for
law and custom. He also warned them not to remove the moral
order; they must never become too confident in their own
strength; they must realize that success is subject to chance
and change.
Athenian policy did not address such concerns. Athens
saw her strength as the principle of her foundation that enabled her to act according to self-interest. The perpetuation of
such strength required that she be unified. Pericles realized
this and labored to encourage her confidence and solidarity.
In his speech to the Athenian assembly after the Spartan
ultimatum, he attempted to show that Athens truly was the
stronger. He also argued the necessity that she demonstrate
her power by refusing to make concessions to such trifling
rewards as included in the Spartan ultimatum. Athens' refusal
to concede to the conditions of the treaty was a display of
strength to the world.
Pericles, in his funeral oration, labored to ensure that
Athens truly was strong by being internally unified. Pericles
spent a great deal of time praising the special character of
Athens as good and noble. In doing so he presented them with
the ideal character for Athens and encouraged them, out of

salvation had been removed.
Civil war in Corcyra destroyed the society. Specific
unities (under party lines) were set up to achieve certain ends
through the creation of disunities in the city. The structures of
justice were removed. But eventually the once directed hostility and disunity between parties grew beyond the control of
its creators. Without the structures of justice to stop it, this
destructive form of human behavior spread until the whole
society collapsed. Such human behavior consists of a mixture
of greed, power, hostility, and self-preservation; a combination that seems to be very similar to the attitudes of states on
the international level.
Athens attempted to avoid a declaration of war with
Sparta by presenting Sparta with a justification for her actions.
Thucydides first presents evidence of Athens' attitude of
hostility in her statement of character to Sparta. Athens described herself as obtaining and maintaining her empire according to three powerful motives, namely "security, honor,
and self-interest." (I, 76) Security upheld her social ties, honor
her moral ties, but self-interest encouraged her to set up
disunities that weakened such ties. Without the external threat
of Persian aggression, Athens believed she was strong enough
to rule others and no longer needed their cooperation and trust.
She also claimed that "it has always been a rule that the weak
should be subject to the strong" and that she was worthy of
her power. All of these beliefs established specific "disunities." Security and self-interest imply that one state has personal interests that may conflict with those of other states.
Each state recognizes the potential for enemies and, fearing
for its own safety, acknowledges the need to protect itself. If
alliances are made, they cannot be fully trusted, because any
state may choose to break the terms of the agreement as soon
as it seems more advantageous for them to do so. Thus Athens
was forced to depend on her allies' fear of her power. Potential
disunity was ever-present due to conflicting interests of states,
but a specific enemy had not yet been recognized and an
uneasy international unity remained.
The formal structures of alliance and Grecian unity established as a result of the Persian conflict had not yet been
dissolved. But since the original cause for unity, the Persian
empire, was gone, the adherence of states to the alliance was
much more tenuous as the faith in such a social order was
dismantled. Athenians talked of paying" ... more attention to
justice than they are compelled to do so by their situation." (I,
76) This attitude seems to undermine the importance of justice, as justice is presented not as something to which Athens
was subject, but as something she chose to respect. honor was
still cited as a controlling value in the Athenian character, as
it was for the sake of honor that they continue to recognize
justice insofar as it didn't compromise their strength. Athens
was prepared to undermine the social order existing between
states because she believed that she herself was not subject to
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�love for the state and all that is good, to emulate this ideal. He
thus gave the citizens a sense of unity based in their own
belief. He reinforced this sense of unity by praising and
encouraging their respect for the laws. Internal moral structures were upheld, but so as to encourage the Athenian sense
of national unity, Pe1icles was careful at the same time to
depict Athens as having a very specific and superior charact~r.
For example, Pericles claimed of Athens: "In her case, and m
her case alone, no invading enemy is ashamed at being defeated, and no subject can complain of being governe? by
people unfit for their responsibilities." (II, 41) Penc~es
worked to unify Athens, and to give her a distinct and supenor
self-image. In this way he tried to mold public attitude into
the conditions he needed in order to maintain a strong state
capable of successfully waging war.
.
As Thucydides and the Spartan King warned, strenglh is
not infallible: it can be overturned by chance. The Athenian
plague is the first illustration of the effects of c~anc~ in the
History. Suffeiing from the hopelessness of the situation and
desperate for an end to their suffering, the Athenian people
began to lose confidence in the leadership, valu~s, and l~ws
they had hitherto upheld. Pericles attempted to give meanmg
to their suffeiing for them, prevailing upon them to recollect
the ultimate benefits to be confeiTed upon all of Athens, for
which they had all promised to fight. A hope for the fu~ure
was necessary to make the people see beyond present difficulties and to deter them from exploiting the opportunity for
lawlessness. Pericles was able to convince the Athenians to
continue to follow his policy of war, though they still suffered
and were angry because of it. Through such descriptions
Thucydides shows how desperate people become to find an
end to their suffering. Pericles was able to unify the Athenians
despite their suffering because he was such an intelligent and
well respected leader, dedicated to the glory of the state. Not
all leaders, however, possess such qualities. Even worse,
some leaders go so far as to exploit the volatility of human
suffering for their own selfish ends.
Disorder threatened to destroy civil society during the
time of the plague, but strong leadership was ultimate~y
able to maintain order. The stability of such order was agam
threatened when disunity emerged in Athenian national
leadership.
Competition for leadership and support is strikingly evident in the debate between Cleon and Diodotus about whether
to destroy the population of Mytilene, an ally that failed in its
attempt to revolt. Cleon spoke first. He claimed t?at fear ~d
conspiracy were permeating the empire, potential enemies
were everywhere, and that the harsh treatment proposed for
Mytilene would render the other subjects obedient by instilling them with fear. Cleon greatly expanded upon the sense. of
superiority that Pericles had initially inspired in the Atheman
citizenry. Unlike Pericles, he did so, not for the good of
Athens, but for his own quest for power. He tried to frighten

the Athenians by the dangers he described so that they would
empower him with their trust to protect them through whatever means he claimed necessary. Cleon encouraged fear
within the state and violent action against its adversaries. He
was not interested in maintaining any" general laws of humanity," structures of justice, or any restrictions on conduct in
adversarial relations with other states:
As for compassion, it is proper to feel it in the case of
people who are like ourselves and who will pity us in
their tum, not in the case of those who, so far from
having the same feelings towards us, must always and
inevitably be our enemies. (Ill, 40)

Cleon advocated an extreme structure of hostility, fear,
and self-interest from which he removed any consideration
for moral law. Both his opinions and his motivations seemed
dangerous to the preservation of unity. Diodotu~ prese~ted an
outlook in opposition to Cleon's recommendation. D~odo~us
was opposed to putting the Mytilenians to death. As did King
Archidamus at the debate at Sparta, Diodotus warned the
people against acting out of haste and anger. But he also
warned them of a new danger, namely that speakers and
leaders could no longer be trusted or believed. Not only were
moral acts rendered void of purpose and influence on the
international level, but basic values such as honesty and oust
ceased to function as a means to preserve order within the
state. For now that self-interest had spread so far as to corrupt
the balance of political power within the state, the citiz~ns h~d
to suspect the motivations of every leader. This state of ~faus
is strikingly reminiscent of the situation that resulted m the
destruction of Corcyra. Good leadership dming the plague
maintained among the people a hope of salvation fro°! t~e
disorder. In Athens, however, there was no longer the fruth m
leadership that might empower it to restore unity to the nation
should it fall prey to disorder.
Diodotus argued only according to the self-interest of the
state, as this was the principle governing Athens' foreign and
domestic affairs, but he argued insightfully as to the nature of
such a system. He provided evidence that even the death
penalty could not prevent men from b eaking laws. Fear of
death is not enough to prevent crime if men are truly determined to break the law. Diodotus cited factors of human
nature as the cause of this behavior:
Hope and desire persist throughout and cause the gr~at­
est calamities-one leading and the other followmg,
one conceiving the enterprise, and the other suggesting
that it will be successful-invisible factors, but more
powerful than the te1Tors that are obvious to our eyes.
(Ill, 45)

If Mytilenians are given nothing but hopelessness and a
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were apparently intended to protect the weak, Athens would
ultimately hurt herself, regardless of her present strength. The
Melians warned Athens: "And this is a principle which affects
you as much as anybody, since your own fall would be visited
by the most terrible vengeance and would be an example to
the world." They suggested to Athens that her attitude was
needlessly creating enemies, but Athens was unconvinced.
Athens remained confident of her own strength and security,
and of the accuracy of her understanding of world affairs. Her
attitudes were so ingrained that more dialogue could never
convince her that her international relationships would bring
about the eventual downfall of the Athenian empire.
Despite Athens' assurance of her strength and justness in
her international relations, her internal order had been dismantled and could no longer support her interests. Athens'
allies came to trust Sparta more than Athens, her leaders
manipulated state affairs for their own private interests, and
the citizens followed whomever promised the easiest solution
to their present difficulties. At the end of her empire Athens
was too disorganized to fight her enemy, the Sicilians. Her
internal disunity made her externally weak. The ultimate blow
to the glory of her state was that she was finally betrayed to
Sparta by one of her own leaders. Social ties were in sham bles
throughout all levels of society. During the time of Pericles,
Athens followed the same principles of strength and self-interest, but her ability to wield such weapons against other
states was securely rooted in the internal strength and the unity
of her state. Previously, when civil difficulties threatened
moral order and national unity, good leadership could contain
their spread and redirect the people toward law and unity.
When self-interest, revenge, and the exercise of brute force
replaced the moral structures which previously protected the
weak, the principles of disunity eventually brought about the
ruin of the entire society.
Thucydides presents war as an establishment of specific
unities and disunities in an otherwise stable system so that one
state, party, or individual can put forth a unified attack against
another. In order to do so, some of the moral and social ties
of human interaction must be removed without destroying the
whole delicate web of human affairs. Since these ties connect
and guide society in all respects and on all levels, the effect
of breaking one law, or of setting up hostility on one level of
interacting, soon resounds throughout the entire sphere of
human affairs. The human motivations of self-interest, power
and revenge create and spread the disunity of war because
they change the understanding of what is good or most beneficial. Such intentions thereby change the rules that govern all
levels of human interaction. The good of the whole, the
"common good," is no longer understood to be the good of
every individual; individual "goods" are therefore bound to
conflict. By removing the order determined by the common
good that restricts individual goods, two things happen: hostilities are introduced, and the structures that guide and protect

least, their fate could be no worse than if they had never tried
at all? This seems to be a good explanation as to why the social
conditions generated by suffering are so volatile. Diodotus
claimed that once on a certain course human nature cannot be
controlled through intimidation (III, 45); physical strength is
unreliable as such a control. This comment is significant as it
was through Athens' strength and the fear which she inspired
that she maintained her empire. Diodotus suggested that
Athens' security must not be based on force but on "good
administration" (III, 46): maintaining friendships not yet
based on fear and keeping a very close wat.ch on those which
are based on fear. Diodotus cautioned Athens not to depend
solely on her military might. In calling for strength in administration, he also advocated maintaining structure and unity in
the empire.
Diodotus did not ask Athens to be compassionate. He
realized that there was no longer any place for moral considerations in Athenian policy. Athens set out to act according to
her self-interests; she could not maintain such interests if she
were to recognize the damaging effects of her actions upon
others. Although the motion ofDiodotus was passed, the vote
was close, indicating that a division was growing among the
Athenian population. The national and civil interactions between Athenians began to reflect the disunity of Athenian
aggression on international affairs.
The Athenian attitude of unchecked self-interest is
starkly apparent in the Melian Dialogue. This passage concerns the fate of Melos, an island state that wanted to remain
neutral to the Athenian empire. The Athenians refused to
recognize this neutrality, as they perceived other states only
as enemies or subjugates. The Athenians claimed that justice
is based on the distribution of power and that it is the "general
and necessary law of nature to rule whatever one can." (V,
105) Moral justice was rendered valueless, weakness was
ignored; opportunity and strength governed all.
The Melians were told outright that the only arguments
the Athenians would understand had to reflect the concerns
of Athenian self-interest. Since their hostility was already
assumed, it was useless to argue their neutrality or innocence.
The Melians had to accept these limitations. They did, however, raise some important observations on human nature and
self-interest. They tried to suggest to the Athenians that it
would be useful to Athens not to destroy a principle that is to
the "general good of all men":
" ... in the case of all who fall into danger there should
be such a thing as fair play and just dealing, and that
such people should be allowed to use and to profit by
arguments that fall short of a mathematical accuracy."
(V, 90)

The Melian speech is strikingly similar to the general
laws of humanity which Thucydides himself describes earlier.
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�an individual person or state are removed. The individual must
face hostility with his own strnngth and intelligence without
hope of protection. But Thucydides shows that strength cannot be relied on as the only bulwark against destrnction;
chance and decay can undermine its protective value. Virtue,
however, seems to guard against the extremes of fortune and
time by directing men to the notions of common good and
societal unity. In creating partial disunity, a state of war risks
total disunity. Should suffering or destruction result-should
the individual need help or protection, the structures of society
can no longer assist him. The society has been destroyed; even
the "general laws of humanity which are there to give a hope
of salvation to all ... "(III, 84) are lost.

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�Two swans

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Morning at Midnight- for Mary Ruth Clance
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by J.H. Beall

by J.H. Beall

A pale blue seen wan across the pale water
cries its swan song as the placid pair
curve their white necks into the rush
weeds near shore, near a tumble of rocks
as the long shadows come, long toothed
with winter, the occasional, ochre sedge
of sea grass a line against the fm1her .
burgundy ridge of trees. The other pair

A midnight's fancy in its tones resolves
a deeper chord and hues the shades would fit
on evening lay like cats upon a purry clime.
All resonate and thrust upon the tautest edge,
would stop and trust to make the evening so.
Thus violate, the sleeping lover lies,
and in the carnal bed so troubled with repose,
tranquility of ages in a breath of sighs

eye not the pale blue jumble of the rocks
but the darker ebb and current the wind asks
where the yielding water sloughs up and is thrown
back. Without comment, each wave awash

demarking dreams all-literate, "Suppose."
Yet here upon the dark incontinence
of sleep, mass continents of thoughts the mind itself
would not have dreamed, where toppling, high meridians

with its own desire, draws weakly up. "Perhaps
a will there," they say. Perhaps the pawn of spent breath
the way is given to, words being that they are
cold comfort under coming winter star.

alone in keening silence fall, as should
a great tree fall in dark and soundless wood.

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�D Table of Contents
Cary Stickney

On Beginning Hegel's Phenomenology.... .. .............. ........... ..... ................ ............. I

Cindy Lutz
Dawn Shuman

Dissection of Morning Glory Seed Pods ............................................................... 8

Devin Rushing-Schurr

Definition of Faith in Kierkegaard's Philosophical Fragments .......................... IO

Edward Freeman

The Manipulation of the Field .. .. ......................................................................... 27

David Jennings

A Possibility of Beauty........................................................................................ 30

Eva Brann

The Tin Star at High Noon ................. ........................................... ...... ....... ......... 32

Carrie Lynn Sager

Separation and Combination: The Unity of Spinoza's
Theologico-Political Treatise .............................................................................. 36

Mary Dietch

The Offence of Socrates: A Look at the Philosopher in Athens ........................ 44

Dawn Shuman

The Infinite Straight Line in Book I of Euclid's Elements .................................. 48

Emily Katherine Brock

Character, Reader, Author, God: What It Means to Read Ulysses ..................... 50

Gregory Alan Brandt

An Attempt at Unlocking "Benito Cereno" ......................................................... 62

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�On Beginning Hegel's Phenomenology

D

Cary Stickney

Let me begin with a confession. Some of you may
remember that in the second act of the Tempest the
drunken butler Stefano appears with a bottle which he
has somehow made of tree bark and filled from a cask
of sherry which he rode ashore. He presses this liquor
on Calib,an with the phrase, "Kiss the book."
My confession is that the first book I ever kissed,
twenty years ago this December (1994), was Hegel's
Phenomenology. I was home on Christmas vacation and
I had persuaded Robert Bart, my Senior Seminar leader
and Essay advisor, that I could write my Senior Essay
on Hegel. Of the Phenomenology I had read only the
two most famous parts: the lengthy Preface and the short,
mystifying, unforgettable section entitled "Lordship and
Bondage." A few days into the vacation I sat down to
read the Introduction and the first chapter. It was on
finishing the first chapter that I kissed the book. It seems
now a very strange thing to have done and it seemed a
little strange even at the time, I remember, but it was the
only expression I could find adequate to my gratitude
and happiness at that moment. I suppose I had better
add, in the interest of completeness, that I never kissed
the book again , and that in fact, though I have studied it
a fair amount since, and even went to live in Germany
for several years largely in order to study Hegel, I cannot say that I have ever read the whole book through. I
hope you will not think me fickle on this account, or
conclude that I am not after all enough of an expert to
be of any use to you. One of the main things I want to
say is that the Phenomenology, like other books on the
Program, is too great to be left to the experts. So why,
exactly, did I kiss the book? Perhaps, like Stefano, I
had the soul of a lackey and I was intoxicated with what
did not even belong to me? Maybe I had no one else to
kiss? Of course I must have been kissing myself in part,
congratulating myself that I could make any sense at all
on my own of this famously obscure philosopher. But I
think I was primarily responding to a liberator. I felt
that I had been set free; or restored to myself. To what
had I been enslaved?
I think I had been afraid of, if not exactly in bondage to, a deep suspicion that thought didn ' t ultimately
make any difference; things are as they are in the world,
you can think about them or imagine you understand
them as much or as little as you like-nothing is thereby

changed about the way things really are. I might
take that suspicion another step and suspect that I myself am like everything else in the world: My being,
too, will then be indifferent to any thoughts about me,
even my own thoughts. I will do whatever I do and feel
whatever I feel quite apart from what I or anyone else
may surmise to be the reasons. If this is so, then any
seeming confirmation of my understanding becomes
somewhat empty. I may successfully predict an event
or exert control over a force either human or natural,
but I am always coming from somewhere outside. I
could as well have predicted or controlled from several
very different beginning points and still succeeded, so
my success is not any ultimate criterion of a true understanding. Maybe it is all the criterion there is, though.
This, or something like it, was my suspicion, from
which I was so grateful to be set free. I suppose I could
very roughly abbreviate it with the name "Kant," though
other names suggest themselves-"Descartes," or even
"Modem Science," at least as that science tends to appear on television and in high schools, and hence as it
appears in its claims to be a worked-out version of good
solid common sense.
Hegel sets about to demolish this view at the beginning of his book and in my opinion succeeds brilliantly.
It is the first task of the Introduction to step behind Kant,
to tum his skeptical mistrust of the powers of human
knowing back upon itself. Kant had asked, "What are
the conditions of the possibility of human knowing?";
that is, "What must be the case if there is to be such a
thing as knowing?" . That real knowing did exist he took
to be given by the existence of geometry and by the dazzling successes of Newtonian celestial mechanics. His
answer was couched in terms inherited from Aristotle:
form and material. Let knowledge consist of necessary
conclusions about objects of possible experience and its
form will be the element of necessity, while the material
· will be the objects of experience. Kant reasoned that
necessity could not be the contribution of experience,
since, as Hume and many other Skeptic philosophers
had long since pointed out, the mere fact of something
happening to exist or to behave in a given way says nothing at all about any necessity for things to be thus. So if
there is. truly necessity in things it is a form we humans
have placed on experience, and it must in tum be neces

�sary and inescapable that we do so, otherwise there would
be no real necessity and no real knowledge after all. But
this all feels rather cumbersome; it is a little like the
children's game in which you must jump back and forth
over a rope which is raised and lowered. First the experiences of mathematics and celestial mechanics are invoked as containing necessity, then empirical one-at-atime experiences are recalled as mere happenstance, void
of all necessity, then again even they tum out to necessarily belong under the rubric of possible experience
which must after all be governed by various necessary
categories of understanding, imposed indeed by us, but
necessarily, ineluctably imposed by every human qua
human, such that there is really no access to any experience in which this imposed necessity is not already an
inextricable element. I hope I am not doing too much
injustice to what I continue to find a beautiful argument
and a worthy enterprise for the Junior Seminar. It has
been some years since I have heard any protest in Faculty Meetings about devoting as many Seminars as we
do to Kant. This year it is ten, and I take it as a sign of
the depth of intellect of my colleagues that they recognize what a giant Kant is. Let me stay with him a little
longer, since, as Mr. Venable has remarked, Hegel is to
Kant somewhat as the New Testament is to the Old. At
least, it is nearly always illuminating to ask, when one
has to begin with some idea of what Hegel is talking
about, "What would Kant have said about this?". Sometimes every argument Hegel makes can sound like an
argument against Kant.
One result of Kant's own argument is that a world of
so-called "things-in-themselves" turns out to exist, about
which we can know nothing. These things-in-themselves
are at least required by the terms of the argument: While
the imposition of necessity and various other kinds of
order upon experience is our constant spontaneous act
of forming, we must still be given material to form. But
since time and space themselves are products of our formative activity, then the sources of the material to be
formed must lie outside time and space and indeed outside all the categories of c~r understanding. It becomes
again a problem how we can be sure these sources do
exist. Kant addresses this problem in the section of the
first Critique entitled "Refutation ofidealism" but I think
we will hasten past to what Hegel replies to all of this.
Hegel asks how we can be satisfied with a knowledge which begins by proclaiming its separation from
things as they are in themselves. What then lli it a knowledge of, if not of the way things really are? Why call it
know ledge at all?

He questions one of Kant's deepest assumptions: that
the world is over there being and that we are over here
thinking. If that is our immovable beginning then we
will never solve .the problem of how to own the truth.
With truth on one side and thought on the other we will
need a middle term, a bridge where they can meet, a tool
to pull the truth over or a telescope to observe it close up
from afar. But all of these things only involve us again
in Kant's difficulty: What we wanted was the truth itself
and what we got was how it appears in a telescope or
how much of it fits onto a certain kind of bridge or how
it looks after being hooked and dragged out of its home.
The problem, as Hegel puts it, is about mediation.
Words like "absolute" or "in itself' suggest a truth having nothing to do with the knower. But if this is so then
all knowing, all attempts to mediate the truth to the
knower will be some kind of falsification. It is not a new
problem. The following exchange takes place in Plato's
dialogue the Sophist. Theaetetus the mathematics student is replying on behalf of the "friends of the forms,"
that is, the believers in the n811, to the Stranger from
Elea, a one-time disciple of Parmenides. (248d)
Str.: ... Do they acknowledge that the soul knows
and real being is known?
The.: Certainly they agree to that.
Str.: Well, do you agree that knowing and beingknown is an action, or is it experiencing an effect, or both? Or is one of them experiencing an
effect, the other an action? Or does neither of
them come under either of these heads at all?
The.: Evidently neither, otherwise our friends
would be contradicting what they said earlier.
Str.: I see what you mean. They would have to
say this. If knowing is to be acting on something
it follows that what is known must be acted upon
by it, and so, on this showing, reality when it is
being known by the act of knowledge must, in
so far as it is known, be changed by being so
acted upon, and that, we say, cannot happen to
the changeless.
The.: Exactly.
Str.: But tell me, in the name of Zeus, are we
really to be so easily convinced that change, and
life, and soul, and understanding have no place
in that which is perfectly real-that it has neither life nor thought, but stands immutable, holy,
and exalted, devoid of intelligence?
The.: We would indeed be yielding to a fearsome doctrine, stranger.

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Hegel's answer is that change and life and soul and
understanding are inextricably entwined in the truth; in
other words, that mediation is not something that must
be brought to bear on a reality over there. Being is mediation. It mediates itself to itself. As the Eleatic
Stranger's teacher, Parmenides, had written: Thinking
and being are the same.
So I have arrived, as I had to, at one of those grandiose claims that always seem to infuriate a certain proportion of Hegel's readers. Parmenides doesn't provoke
anything like that response; I'm not sure why. Perhaps
because he wasn't a German Professor?
So Kant, that other German Professor, was not after
all so very far wrong in Hegel's view. The world is,
indeed, just as Kant claimed, thoroughly permeated with
thought. The categories of the understanding are indeed
structures of the world itself; only not of a merely phenomenal world behind which would exist some unreachable realm of things-in-themselves, forever denied us,
holy, exhausted and mindless. No, the very articulation
of Being into Kant's phenomenal and noumenal realms
is in its entirety part of the self-mediation of Being. That
is, the "things-in-themselves" belong together with
thought just as much as the categorically determined
objects of possible experience do. Far from being unknowable, they are known to us preci. ely as the other
s
half of Kant's argument: We know them to be the
noumenal source of the phenomenal world, we know
them to be outside time and space, to be beyond the dominion of the understanding, to be the unreachably high
standard of truth without which the humanly attainable
truth would have no meaning. That is a great deal to
know about something Kant himself sometimes modestly
proposes to denote with no more than an "X."
It is that last thing we know that has the most importance for the program Hegel lays out in the Introduction.
We know enough about these things in themselves
to say that our humanly attainable truth is not the whole
truth. Thus, apparently, we can conceive of knowing the
whole truth, if it is meaningful to us to speak of not doing so, and thus there must be more knowing left for us
to do. After learning about the limits ofreason, we must
ask, "In the light of what kind of a Beyond have we recognized these limits a:s limits?" Limits cannot reveal
themselves as limits unless there is some sense of what
lies on their other side. But as soon as there is any sense
of that at all then they are no longer absolute limits, for
we are already, at least in thought, beyond them. As
Socrates put it, the terrible thing is not to be ignorant,
but to be unaware that you are; and on the other hand, to

know of one's ignorance is already to have some hope of
relief from it. We can begin to have a conversation about
what our experience of knowing might be, about what
kind of beings we might ourselves be in order to know
how to critique our knowledge, or hope to improve it.
This conversation goes by the name Dialectic, both for
Hegel and for Socrates, and for both of them it seeks to
go beyond all ordinary human limits to the unifying
source of all that is. For Hegel the full self-mediation of
Being is found in the Being that knows itself to be all
that is, one and many, same and other, Being and Becoming. This he calls Geist or Spirit. The title of his
book means: The Ordered Account of the Appearing of
Spirit to Itself. For we humans are Spirit, and so is everything we think about.
Let me dwell a little longer on what it means to say
that Being is mediation. It means that nothing is simply
and immediately itself alone. Everything is involved in
a great whole and nothing could"be" by itself. So the
conventional understanding of matter cannot be correct.
By that account matter simply exists as a kind of inert
opposite of thought. It needs nothing else to exist and
on some level it is impervious to thought. Thought always connects and relates things to one another; it mediates by gathering and separating. But if matter as such is
immediate then thought will never grasp why matter is
or what it is, because there will be nothing in terms of
which an explanation could be formulated. Matter would
be a given, a brute fact. That givenness, conceived apart
from any actual giver, that impenetrability to thought,
constitutes for most people a very large part of the realness of what is real.
Such a view makes the intellect into a stranger in the
world. Moreover it gives no account of any motion. If
matter is only as it is, inert, then why is it always moving
and changing? I think Hegel would tell us that we are
not minds surrounded by matter, in the sense of two opposed and equally fundamental principals; but that we
are Mind in the presence of Mind, or if you prefer, Spirit
in the presence of Spirit. It is very exciting to see the
details of this extremely bold thought worked out. Maybe
it would be helpful for me to read a few passages aloud
and approach them with these thoughts in mind.
In Paragraph 91 of the Introduction Hegel is beginning to speak of the testing of knowledge that he will
conduct, and of its difficulties. A test seems to require a
criterion, but how can a criterion justify itself in advance?
We would seem to need already to know the truth in order to begin sorting out the true in our knowledge. This
is very like Meno's paradox that we cannot learn what

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�we don't know because we will not know it when we see
it; and Hegel has a not dissimilar answer to the one
Socrates gives. Let us, he says
call to mind the abstract determinations of truth
and knowledge as they occur in consciousness.
Consciousness simultaneously distinguishes itself from something and at the same time relates
itself to it, or, as it is said, this something exists
for consciousness; and the determinate aspect of
this relating, or of the being of something for a
consciousness, is knowing.
Shall we dwell on this sentence a moment? It is, as he
says, abstract, by which he nearly always means "rather
schematic and relatively lifeless." If Hegel had a pair of
columns, as the Pythagoreans are said to have had, with
the good in one and the bad in the other, he would certainly have "concrete" in the good column and "abstract"
in the bad. "Concrete" comes from a word meaning "to
grow together" and so for one who believes that the truth
is the whole, the higher the degree of concreteness a thing
has, the more it is grown together with other things, the
more adequate it is as an expression of the truth.
Still, abstract though it be, the sentence does show
how we tend to think about knowing. It is an analysis of
what we mean by saying "I am conscious of something";
this may mean "I see something" or "I imagine something" or "remember something" or "I am explicitly
aware of something". "Conscious" translates Hegel's
German word "bewusst" which might be overly-literally rendered "beknown." "Conscious" and "bewusst"
both take a genitive object: One is conscious of or has a
share in this or that. The earliest attested usage of "conscious" given in t~e Oxford English Dictionary is 1601,
when it appears in its Latin-derived meaning of "sharing
knowledge with" or "privy to, sharing in, or witness of
human actions or secrets" and is applied in a line of Ben
Jonson's to Time. It comes to be applied to the knowledge one shares with oneself, so that to be conscious
means to be a fellow-knower with oneself of something.
Something like this is what we mean by our conscious:
Not only do /know I have done something wrong, some
other judging part of me is a fellow-knower of my trespass. A division in ourselves and even in the knowing
part of ourselves is necessary to be able to speak this
way. It is suggestive that this usage comes into English
during the century of those tireless dividers Hobbes and
Bacon, Descartes and Pascal, but the Latin usages of
conscious are many centuries older and perfectly paral-

lel: One may very well be conscious to or with oneself
of something else already in, say, the time of Ovid.
"Bewusst" seems to have more the sense of being known
to oneself as knower of this or that. But this too is a
dividing up of myself into two knowers, one who knows
something, the other who knows that the one knows
something. "Ich bin mir &lt;lessen bewusst" is a common
expression for "I am aware of it" which literally translates as "I am beknown to myself of it". One sometimes
hears that there is no word for consciousness in Hegel's
sense to be found in Ancient Greek. I think this is true if
it means the same as saying that no one before Hegel
endowed consciousness with such a panoply of forms
and powers. On the other hand there is the verb O"UVotba
which is often used with a reflexive pronoun, as when
Socrates says in the Apology, "crnvmoa Eµmrt(J)t ou8
0110uv &lt;JO&lt;pO&lt;J (J)V ." "I am well aware that I am not
clever at anything" or literally "I know with myself, not
being clever at anything." There are also the nouns
&lt;JUVE&lt;m; and &lt;JUV£l0£01~ which mean "conscience," as
well as "awareness" or consciousness." Certainly the
words one is accustomed to see in Plato and Aristotle for
"intellect," such as "vou~," "C&gt;tavota," "&lt;j&gt;pOYT101~,''
do not translate "consciousness" and that fact cannot be
without significance.
Still, a knowing that is doubled and thereby fully
explicit, the being well aware that comes from one part
of me knowing something and another part knowing that
I know; doesn't that kind of knowing imply that another
kind would exist? If the first kind is called conscious
knowing, the other kind would be unconscious knowing: One part of me will know something without this
being known to all of me, without my being well aware
or my knowing fully explicit. And isn't this very much
what we find in some of the Platonic Dialogues? The
story told about Recollection in the Meno is intended to
explain the possibility of learning by proposing that the
soul knows all things in an unconscious way, which can
be compared to the way one knows something one has
temporarily forgotten. In the Theaetetus Socrates is constantly bringing the conversation to a halt by the peculiar consequence that we would have to know something
and at the same time not know it, or not know that we
know it. This does appear absurd and unacceptable to
the young mathematician, but Socrates surely knows that
if something of the sort is not possible, then neither is
dialectic at all. I conclude that many of the thoughts
which Hegel associates with the word "consciousness"
are indeed present in the thought of Plato and that perhaps Whitehead is right when he says that all Western

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Philosophy is footnotes to Plato. But this etymological
digression is in some danger of sounding like a footnote
itself.
The second part of Hegel's sentence was" ... the
detrminate aspect of this relating or of the being of something for a consciousness is knowing." Notice that knowing is a rather loose term: Anything determinate in the
aspect of a thing presents to us is something we "know"
about it.
What comes next is very important.

ti on, one step closer to the Whole. Thus we change along
with our'knowledge of the thing and this, says Hegel, is
what is meant by Experience. The ordinary view according to which I learn some error of my ways when I
happen to have some new experience, is only another
limitation of the learning consciousness. Hegel, who is
by hypothesis already at the end of the path, will show
how the only way I was ready to have that new experience make sense to me was by having reached a kind of
end of my previous pattern of consciousness, and by having sensed what lay beyond that end. These movements
indeed were actually what constituted that which seemed
to present itself as a spontaneously occurring new experience. Of course hardly anyone can experience life as a
relentless march toward final wisdom, and when Hegel
speaks of a necessary sequence of patterns of consciousness, he doesn't mean that it is necessary that any one
consciousness go through all of the forms he lays out in
the ordered sequence of his book. On the contrary, his
claim is that everyone before him has without exception
gotten stuck somewhere along the way, and that he is the
first to see the completed whole of the self-unfolding
Spirit. Still, if there is to be a whole, then there must be
an order to its parts, and if it is a whole over time, that
order must be also a temporal order. Hence there must
be a necessary sequence of patterns of consciousness,
ending as Hegel says, as a point where consciousness

But we distinguish this being-for-another from
being-in-itself, whatever is related to knowledge
or knowing is also distinguished from it, and
posited as existing outside of this relationship;
this being-in-itself is called truth. Just what might
really be involved in these determinations is of
no further concern to us here. Since our object is
phenomenal knowledge, its determination too
will be taken directly as they present themselves,
and they do present themselves very much as we
have here apprehended them.

I think the reservation Hegel is voicing has to do
with his understanding that there cannot ultimately be a
being-in-itself outside any relation to consciousness.
Why then is this impossibility so much a part of what we
first mean by truth?
I think Hegel's answer is that we are somehow
gets rid of its semblance of being burdened with
inexplicitly aware, within the division of ourselves that
something alien, with what is only 'for it' and
is called consciousness, of an overarching oneness or
some sort of'other,' at a point where appearance
wholeness of ourselves, or of ourselves with everything,
becomes identical with essence, so that its expowhich we nevertheless do not see directly, as we do the
sition will coincide at just this point with the auvarying particular contents of our consciousness.
thentic Science of Spirit. And finally, when conThis unity cannot be reached until the end of the "necsciousness itself grasps this its own essence, it
essary sequence of patterns of consciousness" has been
will signify the nature of absolute knowledge itfound. It is the only real "thing-in-itself," because it is
self.
the whole, and thus needs no other to complete its being
These are the last words of the Introduction. But
or its intelligibility. It is our implicit connection to that
whole which makes us discontented with every limited you were promised a talk on sense-certainty and percepand partial knowledge or pattern of consciousness we tion. Maybe we could look at the transition from senseencounter, or rather become. Our discontent always takes certainty to perception and try to see in what sense it
the form of noticing that what we have understood is not · might be called a part of a necessary sequence.
So sense-certainty has proposed itself as true knowlthe thing itself, but only how it appears to us. That is, we
notice that there is more that the thing can be than we are edge, invoking its purity and immediacy as character
yet seeing, because we who do the seeing know that we witnesses. But its truth has turned out to be not the imare limited in this or that particular respect. But as I said mediate particularity it intends by saying "This" and
earlier, we only perceive those limits in the light of what pointing, but rather the most abstract generality, a unilies beyond them, and so we can go beyond them and versal "This" made of a universal "Here" and "Now."
revise our view of the thing by means of our new posi- Only by being indifferent to any particular content can

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�the terms stay open to all possible examples of their mean- can't hope to get anywhere with steps D and E. I have
ing, and only so can they be applied to any one thing sometimes been asked by worried Seniors if it wouldn't
meaningfully. In Hegel 's words, "An actual sense-cer- be better for them to reread an earlier Hegel reading sevtainty is not merely thi s pure immediacy, but an instance eral more times before going on to the upcoming assignof it." That is, it is one among many others of the same ment, since they felt they have so much left to underkind. If I could manage to be and remain fully absorbed stand already back there. I try to remind them of Aristotle,
in my immediate sense-certainty of the one and only be- another system-builder, whose system is nevertheless
ing in existence, I would have no need to say "this" or to more like a circle whose identical curvature reveals itpoint at all. Of course I would have to keep myself un- self everywhere, than like a brick wall, the location of
aware that there were after all already two things and not whose particular bricks would have to be gauged by keepjust one, namely this solitary thing I am sensing with ing a careful count of how many units up and over from
certainty, and myself. But once I recognize multiplicity the cornerstone one had traveled. Not only may one fail
then my knowing will have to take it into account. To to understand many previous sections and suddenly be
know one thing will then involve knowing how it is not illuminated by a later chapter; even within a page or parasome other, but also how it could be. That is, I will at graph one may go from the darkest kind of puzzlement
least need a way to recognize that insofar as they all have about one sentence to piercing insight in another. Such
being, all beings are the same and insofar as each is not at least has been my experience. A stubborn and atten-.
the others they are all different. Universal words like tive gnawing and worrying at an obscure passage is prob"this," "here," and "now" do precisely that: They single ably never simply a wasted effort, but don ' t imagine you
out a particular by saying that it is not any other and at must solve each sentence before you are allowed to read
the same time they say nothing about it that could not be the next. Hegel often seeks to say the same thing in other
said of any other, for every particular is a "this," every words, or to say briefly what he has just said at length,
location is a "here," every time a "now," and each of or, most often, as Mr. Venable's note pointed out, to dethem is not any other. We use them sometimes when we scribe in one way for us his readers what he describes in
want to let a thing speak for itself, because we suppose if another way as the experience of the consciousness that
we say the very minimum the richness of the thing 's own is his protagonist. A glimmer of understanding found in
particularity will have the most room to come across . any of these can sometimes be used to unlock some of
But if we are replying to the question "Wherein lies the the surrounding mysteries. And sometimes not.
I will (briefly) return to perception. Sense-certainty
certainty of your knowledge of the thing?" with the
words, "I am certain of it because it is this unique one, had ended with the coming-to-be of the universal as a
here and now immediately present before me," then we unity of one and many: The Here is "in its own self a
say the opposite of what we intend, for all of those words simple Together of many Heres." (Even so the "I'' is
refer us to the very broadest categories of things, and now know as this I only be not being any other I, each of
hence to mediation and relation, and not at all to a kind which is, insofar as it too is just an I, not nameably difof self-contained pot of truth, sitting on its own off to ferent.)
Consciousness continues to seek the truth outside
one side, whether that be the side of this "I" or of this
thing. The true is the universal, and insofar as we al- itself, as it imagines namely in the object. But the obj ect
ready see that the word "I" is just as universal and non- means something different now. Hegel says,
unique as the "this," we are a step closer to seeing that
Since the principle of the object, the universal, is
our being is not ultimately other than that of the things
in its simplicity a mediated universal,the object
of the world, and that to understand the one will be to
must express this its nature in its own self. This
understand the other.
it does by showing itself as the thing with many
Now, how does the truth of sense-certainty become
properties.
the new truth of perception?
Before addressing that let me dissent a little from a
view of how to read Hegel that may seem to be implied One of the things these sentences are saying is that the
by the selection of Senior Seminar readings. That view, very simplicity of the universal implies some unfinished
if I were to exaggerate it a little bit, might claim that business, a thought that has not been thought through yet.
Hegel's thought is not only systematical, but mathemati- In order to be simple the way it is, the universal must be
cal, so that if you haven't understood steps B and C you mediated. But that means it must be negatively related

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to many others. Mediation always involves negation.
Hegel somewhere reckons it to his credit that he has gone
beyond Spinoza' s insight that every determination is a
negation to the realization of the converse: Every negation is a determination. Spinoza had meant that we define a thing by marking it off from what it is not; that
everything we say about something is really a form of
saying how it differs from some other thing and is thus a
negation. Hegel 's advice is to say, as he does in the introduction, that to discover a thing is not what we thought
it was is never a dead end, but is always a gain. If we
have negated then we have further determined. He speaks
of negation that s not empty but is precisely the determinate negation of some specific previous understanding.
In fact he is speaking of it in Paragraph 113, right after
the passage I just read. He says:
The This is therefore established as not This, or
as something superseded; and hence not as Nothing, but as a determinate Nothing the Nothing of
content, namely of the This. Consequently, the
sense-element is still present but not in the way
it was imagined to be in the case of immediate
certainty ; not as the singular item that is "meant,"
but as a universal or as that which will be defined as a property . Supression (''.Putting Up")
exhibits its true twofold meaning which we have
seen in the negative: It is at once a negating and
a preserving. Our Nothing as the Nothing of the
This, preserves its immediacy and is itself sensuous, but it is a universal immediacy. Being,
however, is a universal in virtue of having mediation or the negative within it; when it expresses
thin in its immediacy, it is a differentiated determinate property. As a result, many such properties are established simultaneously, one being the
negative of the other.

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�Dissection of Morning Glory Vine Seed Pods

D

Dawn Shuman
Cindy Lutz

We dissected a morning -glory vine from Mr.
Schoener's garden. 1 The plant was intact, including the
roots. The vine was past flowering and was producing
seed pods, which became our focus.
The earliest growth of the pods was somewhat unclear at first. In fact, we originally suspected that they
might be flower buds . However, there were several dead
flowers, still attached to what are called the "leaves" in
the following notes, and when we detached the petals
we found a very small, pod-shaped bud at the base of the
flower. When we broke this mini-pod off of the stem
and examined it under the microscope, the beginnings of
the six sections in the mature seed pod were clearly visible. Therefore, we conclude that the plant flowers, then
produces mini-pods after the flower dies, and that these
pods then mature to produce viable seeds.
The function of these pods for the vine as a whole is
obviously that of reproduction. The resemblance of the
seed contents to miniature leaves is remarkable. If time
were no object, it would be fascinating to germinate the
seeds and observe them closely at each stage of growth.
However, for now we are content with the information
gathered from the pods and seeds themselves.
There were three basic levels of maturity of pods on
the vine:
-Green (young) pods
-Green/brown (slightly dried out) pods
-Brown (completely dried out) pods

At this point, the pod is green with healthy leaves.
At the spot where the three sections of the pod come
together, there is a small stem-like object. When broken
off, "milk" leaks out from inside the pod.

GREEN/BROWN PODS
The external appearance of the more mature green/
brown pod is very much like that of the green pod except
for a slight difference in color and the fact that the leaves
and casing of the pod are slightly dried out.

BROWN PODS
The external appearance of the dried pod is much
like that of the green and green/brown pods in shape, et
cetera. However, while they felt solid to the touch, the
dry pod feels hollow. Its outer membrane is hard and
splitting apart at the three seams. When shaken, the dry
pod sounds like a rattle. The three sections of the pod
fall away easily to reveal six seeds, two in each compartment, separated by a stiff, Y-shaped membrane.

While almost all of the seed pods have six sections
which form six seeds, we found a few with only five
seeds.

GREEN PODS
The sections have pulled away from each other
slightly as well as away from the wall of the pod. The
exterior of each section has turned off-white and the green
that was casing each section has turned to brown.
l---:;:::::::.::::::::::----~ ~1'eM The seed can be removed at this point.

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This was first submitted to Mr. Schoener's Freshman
Laboratory Tutorial.

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�Definition of Faith in Kierkegaard's Philosophical Fragments

sessment of Climacus's account of faith.

once. For the dialectical part of the problem, there are
the strict and categorical philosophical discussions (Chapters I and III, and the Interlude). And for the pathetic,
there are the poetical chapters (II, IV, and V), which try
to convey the passion that is bound up in the prospect of
true eternal happiness. Of course, these are only broad
divisions. Within each section, there is much blending
of the poetic and the philosophic, if only because "the
difficulty of the problem consists precisely in its being
thus composite." (PS 345)
In a more particular way, the philosophic and poetic
tracks of the book can be seen as addressing two specific
audiences, each of which is at a disadvantage with respect to one side of the pathetic-dialectic problem. One
audience consists of the mid-nineteenth century
Hegelians who dominate the philosophical circles at the
time of Climacus' writing. Climacus feels that these
Hegelians have gone astray in their attempt to apply
speculative philosophy to revealed religion. He thinks
that they need a lesson in dialectic. It is primarily for the
sake of the Hegelians that the book adopts its philosophic
tone. Climacus wishes to address them directly, and thus
he speaks their language.
This extends even to the point of adopting a completely new terminology. The word "Christianity" does
not tum up in Philosophical Fragments until the very
last page of the final chapter. Throughout the book,
Climacus brings up traditional points of Christian doctrine, but all of the talk is thinly veiled in a quirky,
Hegelian-sounding terminology: the god, the occasion,
the difference, the fellness of time, et cetera.
The other audience of the book is composed of the
apathetic, "matter of course" Christians. The typical
member of this group is born into Christendom, baptized
two weeks later, given a Bible at the appointed age, and
taught over time to mouth the tenets of Christianity by
rote. This person does not reflect on what it means to be
a Christian. Christianity is a matter of custom, the mark
of a respectable citizen, but it is not a subjective and eternal relationship with Christ. This group takes Christianity for granted, a fact that incenses Climacus:

Devin Rushing-Schurr
Part I (Prenuptial Agreements)
For Jennifer Aileen Michael Schurr, whom I will happily marry on February 28, 1993.

Introduction (The Proposal)
For Pascal, it happened at 10:30 p.m. on Monday,
November 23, 1654. For Augustine, it happened in the
summer of the year 386, when a child sang, "Take it and
read, take it and read," and Augustine obeyed. It is the
experience of total Christian conversion-the decisive,
wondrous, all-consuming event in the life of a believer.
Kierkegaard refers to it as "the moment." In the moment, the god gives me faith, by means of which I abandon my human understanding and embrace eternal happiness. In Philosophical Fragments, Kierkegaard tries
to get inside the moment. The entire book is his attempt
to give an account of the acquisition of Christian faith.
This is not to say that Kierkegaard is using Philosophical Fragments to proselytize. The book is an exercise in definition, nothing more. Kierkegaard wants to
state clearly and precisely what faith is, but he does not
seek to pass judgment:
Only let me again repeat: I do not attempt to decide whether Christianity is right or wrong. I
have already said in [Philosophical Fragments]
. .. that my bit of merit, if any,consists solely in
presenting the problem. (PS 330) 1
To this end, Kierkegaard writes in the voice of
Johannes Climacus, and interested and inquisitive nonbeliever. Kierkegaard does not present us with a definition of faith as a point of doctrine. Instead, Climacus
begins with a question about Socratic recollection and
proceeds from there to develop the definition of faith ex
hypothesi within an independent thought experiment.
Climacus's objectivity, his integrity, and his passion

PF-Kierkegaard. Philosophical Fragments . Trans. H.
and E. Hong. Princeton: Princeton University Press,
1985.
PS-Kierkegaard. Concluding Unscientific Postscript to
the Philosophical Fragments. Trans. D. Swenson.
Princeton: Princeton University Press, 1968.
References to the Bible and Shakespeare are in standard
form.

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for clarity and definition are admirable. Regardless of
whether he personally will attain faith, he seeks to know
what it is and what it is not. The spirit in which he conducts his experiment is summed up in his motto, "Better
well hanged than ill wed," which serves as the epigraph
of Philosophical Fragments. In the Concluding Unscientific Postscript to the Ph ilosophical Fragments ,
Climacus sheds some light on the sentiment of this epigraph:
My idea is that if Christianity is the highest good,
it is better for me to know definitely that I do not
possess it, so that I may put forth every effort to
acquire it; rather than that I should imagine that I
have it, deluding myself, so that it does not even
occur to me to seek it. (PS 340)
How are we to approach a book such as this, undertaken
by an author whose attitude is, "All I have is my life,
which I promptly stake every time a difficulty appears."?
(PF 8) How can we respond to a man who casts his
whole life in the stark alternatives of "Better well hanged
than ill wed?" There really is only one thing for us to
do: we owe it to him to determine whether, in fact, he
was hanged well. Since defining faith is the prevailing
task of Philosophical Fragments, the only question we
should ask when trying to appraise the book is whether
the definition is a good one. Has Climacus succeeded in
giving us insight into what faith is and what it means to
acquire it?
In attempting to answer this question, we will proceed in five steps. In Part I, we will briefly look at the
structure of Philosophical Fragments, and we will cover
some preliminaries for our reading of Climacus's definition of faith. In Part II, we will tum to the definition
itself. This will necessitate further consideration of how
the definition is developed in the book. In Part III, therefore, we will look at Climacus's presentation of the ab solute paradox, a key stage in the development of the
definition. This will make it necessary to think about
the intended audience of the book. In Part IV, then, we
will focus on Climacus's refutation of the Hegelians.
Finally, in Part V, we will conclude with an overall as-

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Climacus divides Philosophical Fragments into six
major sections (five numbered chapters with an interlude between Chapters IV and V). As the headings and
subheadings of these sections show, the sequence of the
book is, speaking broadly, an alteration between philosophic and poetic modes:

Philosophy
Chapter I. Thought-Project
Chapter III. The Absolute Paradox: A Metaphysical Caprice (with Appendix)
Interlude. Is the Past More Necessary than the
Future? Or Has the Possible, by Having Become Actual, Become More Necessary Than It Was? (with Appendix)

Poetry
Chapter II. The God as Teacher and Savior: A
Poetical Venture
Chapter IV. The Situation of the Contemporary
Follower
Chapter V. The Follower at Second Hand
This constant switching back and forth between poetry
and philosophy reflects the peculiar nature of the problem of faith, which Climacus characterizes as "patheticdialectic." (PS 345) The object of faith is the paradox
that eternal happiness rests in a relationship to something
historical: The eternal is rooted in the temporal. Grappling with this paradox is a pathetic problem, "for human passion culminates in a pathetic relationship to an
eternal happiness." (PS 345) And it is a dialectical problem insofar as one must recognize that the paradox is
indeed a paradox. Faith is possible only through the combination of these pathetic and dialectic qualities:

Although I am only an outsider, I have at least
understood so much, that the only unpardonable
offense against the majesty of Christianity is for
the individual to take his relationship to it for
granted, treating it as a matter of course. (PS 19)

The problem here presented demands an existential inwardness adequate to an apprehension
of its pathos, passion of thought sufficient to grasp
the dialectical difficulty, and concentrated passion, because the task is to exist in it. (PS 345)

Primarily for these apathetic Christians has Climacus
prepared the poetic side of the book. He seeks to rouse

Thus we have a book that proceeds along two tracks at

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�their passions, to spur them to become personally engaged in the issue of eternal happiness, and to put an end
to their unreflective ways. To this end, the odd terminology serves a second function. By avoiding customary
words that the apathetic Christians would instantly recognize, Climacus is able to present the ideas of Christianity in a fresh and unfamiliar way. He catches the
apathetic Christians off guard, and for once they actually hear what they themselves have been reciting since
youth.
This leads to an interesting result in the book. Caught
in the cross fire between Climacus and the Hegelians,
the apathetic Christians sit in their pews and watch as
barrages of strange terms fly over head. Every now and
then, one of these Christians will lay hold of an idea that
seems familiar and, recognizing it as Christian, will bolt
up to exclaim righteously, "What you are composing is
the shabbiest plagiarism ever to appear," (PF 35) or "you
talk like a book, and, what is unfortunate for you, like a
very specific book," (PF 68) or something similar. This
happens with amazing regularity. Each chapter ends with
the sudden insertion of a snippet of dialogue between
Climacus and one of these Christians. The Christian criticizes Climacus for his manner of speaking, and Climacus
responds by suggesting that, instead of being angry, the
person should perhaps try to pay attention to the ideas
that are being put forth.
To get a general sense of the content of each of the
two major tracks of the book, we should look briefly at
Chapters I and II, in which the philosophic and the poetic are introduced.
Chapter I, "Thought-Project," establishes the philosophical exercise that will occupy the book. It begins
with reflections on Socrates. Climacus observes that all
philosophy involves some form of the Socratic theory of
recollection insofar as philosophy presupposes every
human's innate relationship with the truth. For this reason, says Climacus, philosophers who claim to have gone
beyond Socrates have not really done so. Climacus then
mediated on what "beyond Socrates" would mean. This
leads to the assignment uf the thought-project: to go
truly beyond Socrates by constructing a system that departs radically from the theory of recollection. Viewed
Socratically, the moment in time in which the learner
passes form ignorance to knowledge is merely accidental, for the learner has been in possession of the truth all
along. By contrast, Climacus 's project starts from the
hypothesis that "the moment in time must have such decisive significance that for no moment will I be able to
forget it. .. " (PF 13) All of Philosophical Fragments is

framed by the thought-project, which is another way of
saying that the whole book is an exploration of the moment.
Chapter II, "The God as Teacher and Savior: A Poetical Venture," begins the poetic track of the book. In
the famous parable of the king and the maiden, Climacus
tells the story of a loving god who seeks to be understood by the lowliest human. But true understanding
requires equality, and the inequality of the god and the
human seems insurmountable. Thus, Climacus commissions a poet (himself) to construct a story that enables
the unequal to be made equal, so that the god and the
human can embrace one another happily.
These two opening chapters prepare us for how the
rest of the book unfolds. Throughout Philosophical Fragments there is an interweaving of the poetical venture
and the philosophical project. These two strands are
sometimes difficult to distinguish. In trying to keep them
apart, one can easily get tangled up within them. With
this as our introduction to the book, let us now tum to
the presentation of faith.

Part II (Writing the Vows)
In one sense, it is not at all difficult to discover what
Climacus thinks about faith. All we need to do is open
up Philosophical Fragments to the seventh paragraph of
Chapter IV and, behold, there sits a formal definition of
the term. This is true. Climacus's definition is a beautiful, powerful, concise representation of Christian belief.
But to read the definition requires a bit more preparation. Climacus's definition of faith happens to be the
point of convergence of three distinct lines of thought,
one from each of the first three chapters of the book.
Thus, before we look at the definition itself, we should
briefly point to these th ee lines.
In Chapter I, Climacus begins to work out some of
the implications of his hypothesis that the moment must
have decisive significance. If the moment is to be truly
deci sive, it must effect a complete transformation of the
learner, comparable in importance to the transition from
"not to be" to "to be." It must be the transition from
untruth to truth. For this to occur, the learner prior to the
moment must be untruth-must be completely oblivious
to the existence of truth. Moreover, the learner must not
even be in a condition to understand the truth. If the
learner is already in a condition to understand the truth,
then the learner can begin to inquire after it. In such a
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to be self-motivated and self-accomplished, and hence
merely Socratic. Thus, if the moment is to be of decisive significance it must contain not only the gift of truth,
but also the very condition for understanding the truth .
The condition is just as much a gift as is the truth itself,
and both are given within the moment. This condition,
as it turns out, is faith.
Chapter II, as we have said, is the beginning of the
poetical venture. Given a god who loves the human but
nevertheless cannot be understood by the human, the poet
has the formidable task of finding a meeting ground for
human and god, "a point of unity where there is in truth
love's understanding." (PF 28) This point ofunity also
turns out to be faith.
In Chapter III, Climacus reflects on the nature of the
understanding. He observes that the understanding has
the potential to collide with what is, for it, a mortal threat.
He gives this threat the name "absolute paradox." The
absolute paradox is, quite simply, "something that
thought itself cannot think." (PF 37) When the understanding collides with the paradox, there are two possible outcomes. The understanding can assert itself by
denying the paradox-this is called "offense at the paradox"-or the understanding can give way to the paradox .
The latter opinion, this giving way, becomes the act of
faith.
These are our three lines. Let us see how they come
together. After the metaphysical caprice of Chapter III,
Chapter IV returns abruptly to the poetic mode and tells
a story of the god coming down and taking the form of a
man. The god-man is careful not to reveal himself directly as the god, but nevertheless the manner in which
he goes about teaching in the streets raises quite a stir.
People take interest in the god-man in different ways,
and some speculate as to who he might be. We pick up
the story with the following lengthy passage, which culminates in Climacus' s definition of faith (the ellipses
represent the omission of roughly two hundred words):

vide the condition to understand this, how will it
ever occur to the learner? But that the god provides this condition has already been explicated
as the consequence of the moment, and we have
shown that the moment is the paradox and without this we come no further but go back to
Socrates ...
How, then, does the learner come to an understanding with this paradox, for we do not say
that he is supposed to understand the paradox,
but is only to understand that this is the paradox.
We have already shown how this occurs. It occurs when the understanding and the paradox
happily encounter each other in the moment,
when the understanding steps aside and the paradox gives itself, and the third something, the
something in which this occurs (for it does not
occur through the understanding, which is discharged, or through the paradox, which gives itself-consequently in something), is that happy
passion to which we shall now give a name, although for us it is not a matter of the name. We
shall call it faith. This passion, then, must be
that above mentioned condition that the paradox
provides. (PF 58-59)
Thus we have Climacus's definition of faith. Faith
is the condition-provided by the moment-which enables
me to let go of my understanding in order to make way
for a paradox, the paradox that states that my eternal consciousness begins with an historical event.
This definition is an achievement in brevity. If we
unpack what has been said earlier in the book regarding
the philosophical content of the moment; if we bring forward what we have been shown poetically about the loving, suffering god; and if, further, we translate all of this
out of its strange terminology and put it back into Christian dress-if we do all of this, then, without adding anything essential to Climacus's words, we see the expression of Christian faith to be something like the following:

The appearance of the god is now the news of
the day ... the occasion for much loose and empty
talk. .. But for the learner the news of the day is
not an occasion for something else, ... it is the
eternal, the beginning of eternity. The news of
the day is the beginning of eternity! If the god
had let himself be born in an inn, wrapped in
rags, laid in a manger-the swaddling clothes of
the eternal, is indeed its actual form, just as in
this assumed case, so that the moment is actually
the decision of eternity! If the god does not pro-

God, out of love for me, you became human and
suffered-the all-powerful God suffered! You did
this for me because it was the only way I could
be made to see that I have sinned and that, despite my sin, you still love me. Right now, in
this glorious moment, I have for the first time
seen that I truly have sinned and that through my
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�eternity. But in this very same moment you have
given me the boldness to accept your love. That
in one moment I could come to face with eternal
happiness, that by entering once into human history as you reached across time to embrace all
who will accept you-these things are beyond my
comprehension, they are repellent to my understanding. But in this moment you have given
me faith to believe what I cannot understand, and
in this moment I do believe it.
All of this is contained in the short statement that faith
arrives in the moment and enables the understanding to
submit to the paradox.
But Climacus does not choose to define faith in the
way that he does merely for the sake of shorthand. Simply to translate his experiment back into the standard
Christian wording is to do a disservice to Climacus and
betray a misunderstanding of his whole enterprise. He
intentionally expresses the familiar concept of faith in
the awkward terminology of moment, condition, and absolute paradox. The terminology reflects his attempt
throughout the book to present the essence of Christianity in a new light in order to command the attention of
the philosopher as well as the lazy Christian. In the guise
of a philosophical explication of an alternative to Socratic
recollection, Philosophical Fragments is Climacus's attempt to bring out the pathos of faith, the passion that
must attend a decision on which eternal life depends.
Before we assess the definition of faith on the basis of
how accurately it expresses the traditional notion of
Christian faith, we should explore some of the nontraditional aspects of Climacus' s account. Thus, we will proceed to a more careful study of the third chapter of the
book, "The Absolute Paradox: A Metaphysical Caprice."
Does Climacus succeed in giving us insight into what
faith is and what it means to acquire it? We cannot answer the question until we look more closely at how the
definition is developed within the book. Has Climacus
been hanged well? So far, we have not s~en any hangings. Again we come back to that epigraph, "Better well
hanged than ill wed." Those words-they are borrowed
from a clown in a Shakespearean comedy, yet they loom
heavily over our discussion, giving it an air not of comedy but of tragedy. If this is indeed a tragedy, if Climacus
really is to be hanged, then he must somewhere make a
tragic mistake. We state this as a simple literary fact.
Instead of stopping now to dwell on the matter, let us
continue with our analysis.

Part III (The Last-Minute Crisis)
At the beginning of Chapter III, we leave the thought
project and the po.e tical venture behind. We put on hold
our investigation of the moment, and we temporarily
suspend our story of the god who seeks to reach an understanding with the human. We do this in order to embark on what Climacus calls a "metaphysical caprice."
The metaphysical caprice is a logically self-contained
discussion of thought and paradox. Just as the book as a
whole proceeds from the premise of the moment, so too
does Chapter III begin with a premise of its own, namely,
that thought is passionate. From this premise alone
Climacus derives almost everything that he says within
Chapter III. Much of what is said in this chapter is carried forward into the remainder of the book. The metaphysical caprice turns out to be an important step for the.
thought-project. But the presentation of Chapter III is
such that the metaphysical caprice could, if necessary,
stand entirely on its own. In this way, we can view Chapter III as a discourse within a discourse.
The premise with which Chapter III begins-that
thought is passionate-is not entirely new. That thought
is in some way erotic has been proposed by many ("The
sense of wonder is the mark of the philosopher."). And
that there is something appetitive about our continual
acquisition of knowledge has also been noted before ("All
people by nature desire to know."). But to this premise
Climacus joins the observation that all passions are selfdestructive. This leads to a remarkable conclusion that
is, to my knowledge, original: Thought ultimately seeks
its own annihilation.
Let us begin our discussion of Chapter III with
Climacus's observation that all passions tend toward their
own destruction. This is certainly true of the appetites.
When I an hungry, the hunger causes me to eat, and eating destroys my hunger. Thus, the hunger brings about
its own destruction. By analogy, this is sometimes said
of the higher passions, too:
If music be the food of love, play on,
Give me excess of it; that, surfeiting,
The appetite may sicken, and so die ...
(Twelfth Night or What You Will I. i. 1)
But for Climacus, the way in which the understanding seeks its own destruction is more complicated. It is
more in line with certain description of the self-destructiveness of erotic love. The best analogy is the familiar
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Here, the moth is the lover, the flame is the beloved, and cisely because it has content, precisely because it can be
erotic love is that which seeks the union of the two . called a "
paradox of eternity and temporality, it is not the
Driven by erotic love, the moth passes closer and closer formally absolute paradox of "that which cannot be
to the flame. This, in tum, drives erotic love higher and thought."
higher. When Eros is at its highest, the moth seeks to
After stating that thought seeks to collide with "somebecome one with the flame . But what would happen if thing that thought itself cannot think," Chapter III proerotic love achieved what it wants, of the moth actually ceeds with a restatement of the paradox. First, the paraflew into the flame and burned? The love would die. dox becomes the unknown. This is a proper designation.
The love would die because the moth would die. Erotic Insofar as the paradox is that which cannot be thought, it
love lies precisely in the duality, in the opposition. When is in principle and by definition both unknown and unthe lover loves the beloved so strongly that it actually knowable. Because it cannot be thought, it is the absodies for the sake of the beloved, the lover is gone, the lutely unknown.
duality is gone, the opposition is gone. There is no longer
Next, apparently for the sake of shorthand, Climacus
any place for erotic love. Erotic love, if it achieves the seeks to give the unknown a name. Again, this is legitiunion it seeks, must itself die in the process. In this way, mate. If the name does not imply anything about the
say the poets, erotic love is self-destructive.
unknown, and if the familiarity of a name does not fool
So too is thought, according to Climacus. We see us into thinking that we therefore know something about
that thought constantly pushes outward toward its own the unknown (which, by definition, we cannot), then what
boundaries. It seeks out that which it does not know, harm can there be in giving the unknown a name?
and it wrestles with the unknown until it comprehends Climacus chooses to call the unknown "the god":
it. Most have interpreted this as a positive desire to grow
and to gain knowledge, but Climacus interprets this conBut what is this unknown against which the untinual seeking to go beyond as an indication of self-dederstanding in its paradoxical passion collides
structive passion. This is most clearly see, he says, in
and which even disturbs man and his self-knowlour love affair with the paradoxical. We cannot disenedge? It is the unknown. But it is not a human
gage ourselves easily from a paradox. Though paradox
being, insofar as he knows a man, or anything
defies our understanding, for this reason alone we grapple
else that he knows. Therefore let us call the unwith it more fiercely than with any other object of thought.
known the god. It is only a name we give to it.
(PF 39)
Thought is most passionate when it confronts what it
cannot immediately understand. Climacus says that this
is an indication of its ultimate potentiation. In continuFrom here, Climacus takes us through a long diverally seeking to know, thought is really only failing in its sion in order to tell us something that we already know,
attempt to find that which it cannot know. What the namely, that we cannot prove the existence of the god.
understanding ultimately seeks is the absolute paradox; We cannot use works, wisdom in nature, or goodness in
"something that thought itself cannot think."
governance to say anything about the god, for in prin"That which cannot be thought"-this formal, verbal ciple we can say nothing about the god except that the
statement is the pa adox. It is not a description of some god is that which cannot be thought.
Nevertheless, thought will not rest until it can say
other paradox . The very words "that which cannot be
thought" are the rocks on which thought wrecks itself. something concrete about the god. This is why the absoLater in the book, however, Climacus gives · the name lute paradox is paradoxical, and it is why the absolute
"absolute paradox" to another, more substantial paradox. paradox becomes impassioned. It seeks to do the only
He takes the paradox that stands at the heart of Chris- things it knows how to do: to think and to understand.
tianity-namely, that eternal consciousness depends on a · But the more it engages with the god, the unknown, the
relationship to historical knowledge-and he gives this paradox, the more it becomes frustrated by the fact that
the name "absolute paradox." By looking closely at the it cannot think it or understand it.
presentation in Chapter III, I hope to show that this later
Everywhere it turns, thought collides with the unappellation presents difficulties. While the paradoxical known. Thought cannot simply give up and be content
notion that eternity meets time at one specific point in to allow that there is something that it cannot know. Such
history may be the essential paradox for Christianity, it apathy is not in thought's nature:
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�To declare that it is the unknown because we cannot know it, and that even of we could know it
we could not express it, does not satisfy the passion, although it has correctly perceived the unknown as frontier. But a frontier is expressly the
passion's torment, even though it is also its incentive. (PF 44)
The unknown is a frontier at which thought continually
arrives, which is another way of saying that the unknown
is beyond, or is the absolutely different. "But it is the
absolutely different in which there is no distinguishing
mark." (PF 44-45) We cannot say that it is different
from this or different from that or different in some specific way. It is the absolutely different, and as such even
its differentness defies description.
Thought cannot think the absolutely different as such.
So what does it do? It begins to conjure up many, varied, and fantastic things, attempting to lay hold of the
god by trying to generate what is different from anything
that it knows. This, of course, cannot work. No matter
what novel or strange conception thought comes up with ,
the conception is still a product of thought, and as such it
is known. To arrive at the absolutely different, thought
would have to transcend itself completely. But any myth
that it generated is created from within itself. Thus, deep
down, thought realizes that it has not arrived at the god,
but at its own fabrications.
The unknown is not just something different, it is
the difference. It is so different that there is no point of
reference or distinguishing mark by which thought can
gauge the difference. This leads to an interesting result.
Because thought can in no way distinguish itself from
the different, it begins to confuse itself with the different:
If the difference cannot be grasped securely because there is no distinguishing mark, then, as
with all such dialectical opposites, so it is with
the difference and the likeness- they a.re identical. Adhering to the understanding, the difference has so confused the understanding that it
does not know itself and quite consistently confuses itself with the difference. (PF 45)

have a mortal contest. We have two warriors. Formally,
we can already state that there are two possible decisive
outcomes.
But before w~ proceed, let us pause to see where we
have come in the argument and how we have gotten here.
We started with the premise that thought is passionate.
From this , and from the self-destructiveness of passions
in general, we said that thought must in some way will
its own downfall. Reflecting on how thought works , we
recognized that thought loves to embroil itself in paradox. This as a clue led us to "that which cannot be
thought," which we have variously called "the absolute
paradox," "the unknown ," "the god," and "the difference." We suspected that thought could neither free itself from the paradox nor conquer it. Ultimately, lacking any distinguishing mark between itself and the paradox, thought began to confuse itself with the paradox.
All of this we derived from the opening premise of
Chapter III simply by reflecting on the nature of thought,
of passion, and of paradox. We have not had to invoke
the moment, nor the theory of recollection per se. That
is, we still stand in isolation from the first two chapters
of Philosophical Fragments.
Ultimately, of course, Climacus wants the absolute
paradox to be a Christian paradox. The highly abstract
paradox of "something that thought itself cannot think"
is objectified into the Christian paradox of temporality
and eternality. The god that was simply defined as "the
unknown" becomes the god about whom we indeed know
much-a loving god, a god who suffers for our sake, a
god who gives us the paradox in order to make us aware
of our sins. Because he is ultimately concerned with
Christianity and Christian faith, Climacus begins at this
point in the argument to edge his way back toward Christian conceptions.
Why are we different from the god? Climacus harkens back to Chapter I:
.. .if a human being is to come truly to know
something about the unknown (god), he must first
come to know that it is different from him, absolutely different from him .. .But if the god is to
be absolutely different from a human being, this
can have its basis not in that which man owes to
the god, (for to that extent they are akin) but in
that which he owes himself or in that which he
himself has committed. What, then, is the difference? Indeed, what else but sin, since the difference, the absolute difference, must have been
caused by the individual himself. (PF 46-47)

Thus we see what strangeness results in this war between
thought and the almighty absolute paradox . How will
the matter end? Will though find a way to preserve itself, or, following its true passion, will it allow itself to
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In just these few remarks, the god that at one time was
simply synonymous with the unknown has become quite
recognizable. That we "owe" something to the god makes
the god our creator. That the difference is somebody's
fault-it is my own fault-gives us the fall and the concept
of sin.
Once this not-so-sly transition takes place, in which
the absolutely unknown god of Chapter III is replaced
by the Christian god of Chapter I, we have completely
abandoned the abstract, purely logical argument of the
absolute paradox. This, of course, is as it should be.
Climacus never meant for the metaphysical caprice to
go uncorrupted. Philosophical Fragments is not a treatise on formal logic. It is a half-poetic, largely comical
book about Christian faith. This conspicuous, shameless betrayal of the formal argument is perfectly in keeping with Climacus's ironic style. Nevertheless, this deviation from the formal argument leaves us with a question: If he never intended to see the formal argument
through to the end, why did he embark on it in the first
place? What does the abstract, theoretical treatment of
thought and paradox add to the book? We ask the question now, but let us hold off on the answer. Let us first
look at the rest of the argument as given, rife though it
be with intrusions from Chapters I and II.
The god is now the god of Chapter I who seeks to
make us aware of the difference (sin). And at the same
time the god is the god of Chapter II who seeks to annihilate all difference so that god and human can become
equal:
Thus the paradox becomes even more terrible,
or the same paradox has the duplexity by which
it manifests itself as the absolute- negatively, by
bringing into prominence the absolute difference
of sin and, positively, by wanting to annul his
absolute diffe ence in the absolute equali ty. (PF
47)
The absolute paradox, then, is not simply the god (as it
was before when the god was simply the unknown), but
it turns out also to be a gift of the god. In this way, it can
be said that the god gives itself for the sake of the human.
Now, as we had already predicted, there are two decisive ways that the collision of thought with the paradox can tum out. Before returning to our question about
the formal beginnings of the metaphysical caprice, let us
look at these two options and consider how they help us
to understand Christian faith.

We shall not be in a hurry, and even though some
rriay think that we are wasting time instead of
arriving at a decision, our consolation is that it
still does not therefore follow that our efforts are
wasted . (PF 25)
The first possible outcome of the collision is taken
up in the appendix to Chapter III, "Offense at the Paradox: An Acoustical Illusion." Although technically a
different section from Chapter III, the appendix continues in the same abstract and philosophical mode.
Offense occurs when thought completely rejects the
paradox in order to preserve itself. Seeing the paradoxthe gift of the god-as a mortal threat, thought summons
the strength to thrust the paradox away once and for all.
Thought does this precisely because of the paradoxicalness of the paradox. All that thought knows is that it can
think, and it is too prideful ~o entertain the possibility
that there is anything which it cannot think.
It is easy to see how the notion of offense applies to
Christianity. When the understanding encounters the
unlikely story of Christianity, offense may very well be
the result. Someone tells us that the eternal god made an
appearance in history as a particular human being. The
person says that the god did this only once, about nineteen centuries ago in the Near East.
"Sure," I say, "and I have some land in Florida ... but
tell me, why would god do what you describe?"
"To suffer and die in order to save you from sin."
"To save me from sin? How do you know this? How
do you know that what you are saying is not just a clever
myth? Maybe it was a good story, and it caught on, and
now millions of people believe it. But how do I know
that those millions of people are not wrong, that they are
not deluding themselves, that they are not throwing away
their entire lives because of some concoction of the imagination? What can you do to persuade me?"
"I cannot persuade you. There is no way for me to
prove to you that it is anything but a story. But I believe
that it is not just a story. Even though it lies outside my
understanding, I believe it to be real. And now I will tell
you something else: Your own eternal happiness depends
on whether you believe it. I know this challenge of mine
offends you, but I offer it anyway. Do not expect to make
sense out of what I have told you. The whole point of it
is that it cannot be understood. It must be believed."
By nature, we seek to know and to understand. The
understanding is our most loyal ally. In some ways, our
understanding is all that we have. Christianity challenges
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�built upon paradox. The understanding chokes on paradox. The notion that in order to Ii ve eternally one has to
throw away one's understanding is perhaps the most abhorrent notion ever presented to a human being.
Thus, thought may take offense at the paradox.
Climacus says that when this occurs it is thought misunderstanding its own passion. Thought seeks clarity. But
the hypothesis of the metaphysical caprice is that what
thought really wants is to pass away. Here, in the collision with the paradox, thought finally has a chance to
realize its own ultimate goal. But offense occurs when
thought mistakenly thinks that the more superficial drive,
the urge to know and to understand, is its true tendency.
This is one of the great advances of the book. Why
would eternal happiness require from us something as
unnatural as the complete forfeiture of our understanding? Climacus's metaphysical caprice gives us reason
to think that, ultimately, such forfeiture may not be altogether unnatural. We see that though is continually on
the move, that it acts all the time. It does not seem to be
erotic in this way. Perhaps, then, it really does seek a
kind of passing away. Perhaps thought continues to move
only because it is seeking a point of rest. Perhaps thought
really does wish to stop thinking. This would not go any
further toward making the paradoxes of Christianity reasonable (if they became reasonable they c:ould not be
thought's resting point), nor would it make faith any
easier (just because it may be in thought's nature to give
way to the paradox does not mean that thought can know
its own nature). But it does suggest that the phenomenon of faith might make a certain amount of sense.
Often, faith is looked upon as a kind of feebleness of
mind, an easy way out for those who lack intellectual
vigor and integrity. Climacus's metaphysical caprice
gives us another way to look at the issue.
This brings us to the other possible outcome of the
collision, the so-called happier collision which takes place
in faith. The discussion of this second option does not
occur in the appendix. ·After the offense, Climacus suddenly departs from the philosophic mode of .presentation
and moves on to Chapter IV, "The Situation of the Contemporary Follower." The chapter begins with the words,
"So, then (to continue with our poem) ... " (PF 55), putting us securely back into the poetic mode of the book .
We have already discussed what happens in Chapter
IV. The story is told in which the god comes down and
takes a human form. As his presence and his teachings
are reported, some fortunate souls realize that "the news
of the day is the beginning of eternity." This notion, that
one can find eternity within a historical moment, is a

paradox. In Chapter IV, it becomes not just a paradox,
but the absolute paradox. The person who embraces the
beginning of eternity does so at the expense of the understanding.
In one sense, this is the logical end of the argument
begun in Chapter III. The metaphysical caprice begins
with passionate thought, predicts a collision between
thought and the absolute paradox, and then states that
there are two possible results. One possible result, offense, is taken up in the appendix. The other result, the
happy collision in faith, is dealt with here in Chapter IV.
In another sense, however, we have distanced ourselves as far as possible from the original project of Chapter III. Chapter III began as an abstract and isolated discussion of thought and the absolute paradox. After a
while, though, the formal argument was compromised.
Now, not only have we gone back to poetry, but the ab..,
solute paradox has become something completely other
than it was. "That which cannot be thought" has turned
into "My eternal happiness depends on my relationship
to an historical event."
We shall consider the issue of formality in just a
moment. First, though, let us try to see how it is possible
that this latter paradox comes to be called the "absolute
paradox."
I am a thinking being, but I am also an existing human being. As a human being, I have a great interest in
my existence and its continuation. How much more interest must I therefore take in my own eternality ! What
prospect could engender in me more pathos than the prospect of eternal happiness? And if it should so happen
that the possibility of eternal consciousness lies in a single
decision, would that not have to be the most important
decision in my life? It would be an absolute decision.
But my life-it takes place in time. Therefore, any
decision I make in this life must be a decision made in
time. Is is not paradoxical that my own eternality is something that is decided in time? Of course it is a paradox,
but it is not the absolute paradox of thought. Of thought?
Perhaps not. From the standpoint of logic, "that which
cannot be thought" is the absolute paradox of thought.
But here we are not talking about thought; we are talking about existence. Viewed existentially, the paradox
that decides the eternality of my being must surely be
called an "absolute paradox ."
Here lies one of the most important messages of
Philosophical Fragments. The paradox of Christianity
is absolute in a way that differs from logical absoluteness. In the Concluding Unscientific Postscript,
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munication" as opposed to a philosophical doctrine or
logical structure. (PS 339) Christianity is not philosophy, and we should not treat it as if it were. If Christianity claims that its basis is a paradox, then attacking the
paradox on a purely theoretical level does not ultimately
do much good. Some thinkers do this, but in so doing
they often fail to attach themselves personally to the pathos of the paradox. In most cases, a paradox is interesting only insofar as it is a logical riddle. The terms of the
paradox, taken individually, do not need to be intrinsically interesting. But this Christian paradox is a paradox of eternal life, a term which should command some
attention even from the coldest of logicians.
This gives us some insight into the rhetorical value
of the transition made during the metaphysical caprice.
By starting on a lofty and abstruse theoretical plane, then
shamelessly violating the logic of the argument, then
descending without apology to the realm of pure poetry,
Climacus tries to show how foolish it is to try to treat
Christianity as if it were a philosophical position or a
logical problem.
In a sense, this answers our question of why Chapter
III begins as a formal argument only to be abandoned
later. But it is only a partial answer. While, for ourselves as readers, we may get much out of Climacus's
satirical treatment of the purely philos?phical approach
to Christian doctrine, we must consider that Climacus
wrote at a particular time to a particular philosophical
audience. To fully appreciate the richness of his attack
on philosophical treatments of Christian faith, we must
consider how Climacus's metaphysical caprice stands in
relation to Hegelianism, the prevailing philosophical
trend in Climacus's day.

cal Fragments should itself be thought of as a play. It
would, o'f course, be a play in five acts, since there are
five chapters. This fact, together with the epigraph, suggests Shakespeare. But which play? The epigraph is
from Twelfth Night or What You Will, but Climacus refers to Shakespeare throughout the book: As You Like It,
King Lear, All's Well that Ends Well. Which play? One
of these, a combination, a different play entirely? In
Shakespeare, the turning point of a play often occurs in
the third act. The third act of Philosophical Fragments
is, of course, "The Absolute Paradox: A Metaphysical
Caprice." Let us return there and look for further clues.
There is only one direct reference to Shakespeare in
all of Chapter III. It does not occur in the body of the
chapter but stands slightly apart from the book. It is
tucked away insignificantly in the middle of a footnote :

A fly, when it is, has just as much being as the
god; with regard to factual being, the stupid comment I write here has just asmuch being as
Spinoza's profundity, for the Hamlet dialectic,
to be or not to be, applies to factual being. (PF
41)

The Hamlet dialectic, the soliloquy of "To be or not to
be," does in fact occur in Act III of The Tragedy of Hamlet, Prince of Denmark. It need hardly be said that "To
be or not to be" is central to the meaning of Philosophical Fragments. The subject of the book is the acquisition of faith, which brings about a total transformation
in the learner. Climacus calls this change one of rebirth.
He says in several places that it is "the transition from
not to be to to be." Also, "To be or not to be" is the great
dialectic of the understanding, which in the moment must
Part IV (The Rival Suitors)
decide between its outward tendency toward self-preservation and its inward desire to pass out of existence.
But "To be or not to be" is perhaps the single most
The interlude between Chapters IV and V begins as
overworked soliloquy in all of literature. It is hard to
follows:
conceive of any discussion of existence that could not in
some way be linked to this famous speech. Thus, we
My dear reader! We assume, then, that this
should not make too much of the connection. In a more
teacher has appeared, that he is dead and buried,
significant way, though, Act III of Hamlet is a good model
and that an interval of time has elapsed between
for Chapter III of Philosophical Fragments. A key event
Chapters IV and V. Also in a comedy there may
in Act III of Hamlet is the presentation of the Mousebe an interval of several years between two acts.
trap, which is a play within a play just as Chapter III is a
To suggest this passage of time, the orchestra
sometimes plays a symphony or something simidiscourse within a discourse.
The Mouse-trap is performed for the audience of
lar in order to shorten the time by filling it up.
(PF 72)
Claudius, King of Denmark. Hamlet's purpose in showing the play is to represent to Claudius that his reign is
The clear implication of this passage is that Philosophi- illegitimate and his marriage ill-gotten. Likewise, the

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�metaphysical caprice is performed for the Hegelians
(Hans Lassen Martensent, et al.) who hold dominion
over the philosophical circles in the Denmark of
Climacus's time. Climacus uses the metaphysical caprice to demonstrate that the Hegelians's appropriation
of revealed religion is illegitimate, and that despite their
nominal Christianity, they are not truly wed to Christ.
Climacus objects to what the Hegelians have done on
their way toward an overarching conception of Spirit.
As Climacus says in the preface to the Concluding Un scientific Postscript, "better well hung than by an unfortunate marriage to be brought into systematic relationship with all the world." (PS 3)
In many ways, The Mouse-trap can be seen as representative of the whole of Hamlet .. To appreciate this, of
course, we must see how Hamlet and Claudius interact
with one another throughout all five acts of the play.
Likewise, if we are going to see how the metaphysical
caprice addresses the Hegelian lords, we should first point
out what the book as a whole has to say to them. "We
shall take our time-after all, there is no need to hurry."
(PF 16)
Climacus's assessment of the Hegelians seems to be
as follows. For the Hegelians, all contradictories are
merely relative. Because all contradictories are merely
relative, they are all subject to mediation. The Hegelian's
whole enterprise is based on this presupposition. Mediation occurs within System (speculative philosophy) .
In System, the opposing terms of a paradox or contradiction are set over against one another, and the dialectical distinctions between them are drawn. Upon inspection, it becomes clear that the opposing terms, properly
viewed, are actually identical. This being so, the barrier
between them dissolves, the opposition ceases, and the
terms are synthesized into a higher unity. This is mediation . Through mediation, System attends to the unfolding of the Idea. The Idea, of course, is immanently knowable by Mind.
Philosophical Fragments as a whole is a vehicle for
Climacus to state two main objections to the Hegelians,
one regarding their axiom that all oppositions can be
mediated.
Climacus thinks that the Hegelians have entirely
misunderstood what dialectic is. As he says, "Basically,
an unshakable insistence upon the absolute and absolute
distinctions is precisely what makes a good dialectician."
(PF 108) Socrates understood this. Socrates was always pursuing precision in definition; he was always trying to cordon off one idea from another in hope of seeing correctly how the various ideas relate to and inter-

penetrate (but not become) one another.
Hegelians make distinctions, too, but even before
doing so they have resigned themselves to the supposition that no distinctions can hold. They draw lines of
division, but only in order to erase them. They are so
caught up in the motion of System, they are so eager to,
mediate in order to get on to the next paradox, that they
fail to experience the forcefulness of the paradox that is
right in front of them. This, in part, is why we see constant reference to Socrates in Philosophical Fragments.
Climacus is trying to shame the Hegelians into recognizing that their dialectic is weak and sloppy. By continually eulogizing Socrates as the greatest of all dialecticians, Climacus hopes to show the Hegelians that in
going "beyond" Socrates they have actually failed to get
even as far as he.
Climacus attributes the feebleness of the Hegelians'
dialectic to lack of passion:
... dialectics .has lost its passion; just as it has
become so easy and light-hearted a thing to think
contradictions-for it is passion that gives tension
to the contradiction, and when passion is taken
away the contradiction becomes a mere pleasantry, a hon mot. .. (PS 345)
The Hegelians are too much at ease with contradiction.
They have grown so accustomed to the inevitable resolution of paradoxes that they no longer can feel the tension that makes a paradox unsettling. This gives us yet
another way to view the two modes of presentation in
Philosophical Fragments. Climacus 's endless switching between poetry and philosophy is not just a depiction of the pathetic-dialectic problem of faith, but it is
also a constant, inescapable reminder that thought cannot be separated from life, that intellect cannot be separated from passion. As Climacus says at the beginning
of Chapter III, "the paradox is the passion of thought,
and the thinker without the paradox is like the lover without passion: a mediocre fellow." (PF 37)
So it is that the entirety of Philosophical Fragments
is an attack on the dialectical methods of the Hegelians.
Ultimately, though, Climacus is less concerned with the
Hegelians ' faulty methods than with where those faulty
methods lead.

Hamlet
... you shall see anon how the
murderer gets the love of Gonzago's wife.
(Hamlet III. ii. 270)

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For the Hegelians, all paradoxes are relative, even
those of Christianity. In their quest to mediate all oppositions, the Hegelians have sought to bring Christianity
under the domain of speculative philosophy. By explaining the articles of Christian belief, they claim to have
removed the need for Christian faith. Faith is crude and
primitive. It lacks rationality. It yearns to be elevated to
a higher form of knowing. But through System, all in
principle is ultimately knowable. According to the
Hegelians, Christianity can be understood. This being
so, the Hegelians say that they no longer have a need for
faith. But despite their lack of faith, the Hegelians still
consider themselves to be Christians.
Climacus cannot abide the Hegelians' attempt to replace faith with reason. Faith is the very core of Christianity. If ever faith were made unnecessary, Christianity would no longer have a place in the world.

tianity is altogether different from philosophical doctrines. 'Because of its emphasis on the absurd, it is opposed to philosophy in general. Because of this, true
Christianity lies beyond the reach of speculative philosophy, as Climacus says in the following rather lengthy
passage from the Concluding Unscientific Postscript:
Is not mediation a speculative category? When
the opposites are mediated they (Christianity and
Speculation) are not equal before the arbiter. ..
When two opposites are mediated, and reconciled
in a higher unity, they may perhaps be equal before the mediating process, because neither of
the entities is an opposite of speculative thought
itself. But when one of the opposites is speculative thought, and the other is an opposite to speculative thought, and a mediation is proposed, and
mediation happens to be a speculative category,
it is illusory to speak of an opposite to speculative thought at all, since the reconciling factor
itself is speculative thought or the mediationfunction which is its category. (PS 335-336)

Player Queen
But here and hence pursue me lasting strife
If once a widow, ever I be a wife!
(Hamlet III. ii. 228)
To render faith reasonable kills it. The Hegelians cannot
kill faith and still hope to wed themselves to Christ. It
simply will not happen.
This brings us to the second and more important of
Climacus's objections to the Hegelians. He rejects their
axiom that all oppositions are merely relative. The
Hegelians seek to mediate Christianity and to explain its
central paradoxes. But Climacus maintains that the paradox at the heart of Christianity cannot be resolved, and
that Christianity itself cannot be brought into conformity
with philosophy. If Christianity were just another doctrine or theory, it could be translated successfully into
speculative terms, and then it would indeed be subject to
mediation. But Christianity does not present a theory; it
indicated a mode of being. Christianity is an existential
communication. It is not a philosophical doctrine to be
contemplated; it is an absurdity to be believed and lived.
The absolute paradox of Christianity is not a merely logical paradox that can be treated by speculation. It is an
existential paradox that engages more than the mind. The
paradox states that a life entirely outside of time is nonetheless causally dependent on a personal decision made
within time. This paradox challenges one's whole being, not just one's intellect, for eternal happiness is, subjectively speaking, the highest goal that an individual
could ever have. In its form of presentation, in its subject matter, and in its relationship to the individual, Chris-

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For philosophy, reason is the sole criterion, but Christianity calls for the abandonment of reason. Philosophy
addresses itself to the mind alone, but Christianity is addressed to the entire self. Before speculative philosophy
can mediate an opposition, the terms of the opposition
must first agree to be placed within a speculative framework. Without this initial agreement, any attempts to
mediate are illegitimate. But Christianity cannot be expressed in speculative terms, for speculative philosophy
("The truth can be known through reason alone.") is itself the opposite of Christianity ("The truth cannot be
known through reason alone. "). According to Climacus,
the Hegelians hasten past this all-important initial agreement in order to get on with mediation . Because the
Hegelians fail to hammer out the initial agreement, not
only is their mediation invalid, but-because they themselves claim to be Christians-it is an act of high treason:
It is indeed permissible within speculative
thought to assign to everything which claims the
status of speculation its relative position, and thus
to mediate all those opposites which have the
common character of being essays in speculation ... But it is very different when the opposite
in question is an opposite to speculative philosophy in general. If there is to be any mediation in
this case ... it will mean that speculative thought

�judges between itself and its own opposite, and
therefore plays the double role of litigant and
judge. Or it means that speculative thought assumes that there can be no opposite to speculative philosophy, and that all opposition is merely
relative, as being an opposition within speculative thought. But it was just this question which
should have been dealt with in the preliminary
agreement. Perhaps this is the reason why speculative philosophy ... is in such a hurry to apply
mediation and to recommend mediation: Because it fears the worst would happen if it became quite clear what Christianity is. The behavior of speculative thought in mediating Christianity is not unlike the behavior of a rebellious
ministry which has seized the reins of power, and
now governs in the king's name while keeping
the king himself at a distance. (PS 336)
The Hegelians try to overthrow faith and supplant it with
reason. At the same time, they seek to wed themselves
to Christianity on their own terms. Such a mad marriage
never was before. (What a superb theme for revenge
tragedy!)
Climacus uses the whole of Philosophical Fragments
to rail against the Hegelian appropriation of Christianity. The Hegelians have attempted to rationalize Christianity from top to bottom, to explain away every article
of Christian belief, and to resolve the paradoxes that are
at the heart of Christianity. With regard to the Hegelians,
Philosophical Fragments is Climacus's way of saying,
as a spokesperson for Christianity:
Hamlet
Why, look you now, how unworthy a thing you
make of me! you would play upon me, you would
seem to know my stops, you would pluck out the
heart of my mystery, you would sound me from
my lowest note to the top of my compass-and
there is much music, excellent voice,. in this
littleorgan, yet you cannot make it speak.
'Sblood, do you think I am easier to be played
on than a pipe? call me what instrument you will,
though you can fret me, you cannot play upon
me. (III.ii.372-381)
The whole of Philosophical Fragments is presented as a
thought-project that seeks truly to go beyond Socrates.
But Socrates represents all of philosophy, or at least all
ofldealism. And the result of the thought-project is Chris-

tianity. In this way, the entire book can be viewed as a
statement to the Hegelians that there is something, namely
Christianity, that in principle lies wholly outside of speculative philosophy. The thought-project frames the book,
and the absolute paradox is its center. Both attempt to
demonstrate that Christianity lies forever beyond the
reach of speculation.
This, at last, brings us back to the metaphysical caprice, Climacus's version of The Mouse-trap. "Now we
shall begin." (PF 100) When Philosophical Fragments
is viewed as a refutation of the Hegelians, Chapter III
becomes a logically independent representation of the
entire book- a self-contained whole within the whole.
It accomplishes this in a synecdochical way. The
book as a whole shows that speculative philosophy, which
seeks to mediate all things, cannot mediate Christianity,
which stands opposed to speculative philosophy. The
metaphysical caprice attempts to show that the primary
organ of speculative philosophy, the understanding
(which seeks to understand all things), cannot understand
the object of Christian faith, the absolute paradox (which
stands in opposition to the understanding). The proportion, then, is:
speculation : Christianity ::
the understanding : the absolute paradox
What I hope to show is that, as is often the case with
synecdoche, the metaphysical caprice works beautifully
and gracefully as a metaphor, but it must not be take too
literally.
In order for speculative philosophy to mediate an
opposition, both terms of the opposition must be placed
fully within a speculative framework. In the case of
speculation versus Christianity, this cannot work. One
of the terms of the opposition is speculation, and thus it
does not fall within speculation. The other term lies entirely outside speculation in principle and therefore does
not fall within speculation. Neither term will fit wholly
inside speculation, and thus no mediation can take place.
In order for the understanding to resolve a paradox,
both terms of the paradox must be placed securely within
the understanding. (To begin to come to grips with "This
statement is false," one must first understand why the
statement has to be false and why the statement cannot
be false.) In the case of the understanding versus "that
which cannot be understood," this cannot work. One
term of the paradox is the understanding and therefore
does not fall within the understanding. The other term
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therefore does not fall within the understanding. Neither term will fit wholly inside the understanding, and
thus no resolution can take place.
As poetry, this analogy is delightful. But if we try to
take it literally, we quickly run into a problem. It is the
same problem we encountered before: "That which cannot be understood" is not the essential paradox of Christianity. As we have seen, the absolute paradox of Christianity is not an abstract paradox of formal logic, but a
specific existential paradox regarding time and etemality
(eternal consciousness is rooted in an historical moment).
Chapter III begins as if it were a discourse all its
own . Until the very end of the chapter, the presentation
is highly abstract. "That which cannot be understood" is
the absolute paradox of Chapter III. It is a verbal paradox, and its absoluteness lies precisely in its formality.
Any significant deviation from the words "that which
cannot be understood," and attempt to imbue the paradox with content, and the absolute paradox ceases to be
the absolute logical paradox. It may very well become
the absolute existential paradox of Christianity, but in so
doing it gives up the title of being the paradox that, by
definition, defeats the understanding. It is clear that we
cannot have both kinds of absoluteness at once, for we
see what the two paradoxes are, and we see that they are
different.
Nonetheless, I think that, on some level, Climacus
does want both kinds of absoluteness at once. I say this
simply because he himself does not explicitly point out
the two senses of "absolute" that we have been discussing. He obtains "that which cannot be understood." He
gives this the name "absolute paradox" because it is a
paradox that absolutely defies understanding. He then
goes on to find another paradox, the essential temporaletemal paradox of Christianity, and he proceeds to call
this the "absolute paradox" as well. I think that in giving the latter the name "absolute paradox," Climacus
hopes to bring forward the sense of logical forcefulness
that accompanies the paradox of "that which cannot be
understood." That is, I think that he wants the essential
paradox of Christianity also to be the paradox that absolutely defies the understanding.
Why he might wish to do this is clear. It would fit ·
nicely as a third step in his refutation of speculative philosophy, and thus it would serve to further secure Christianity from speculation. First, he has brought the dialectical fastness of the Hegelians' methods into serious
question. Second, he has shown that in principle the
very attempt to mediate Christianity is illegitimate. I
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Hegelians at their own game. Suppose for a moment
that we 'overlooked the impossibility of accurately representing Christianity within a speculative framework and
allowed the Hegelians to attempt to mediate Christianity. Suppose further that we granted them the right to
employ all of their questionable dialectical methods in
trying to achieve the mediation. Would it not, after all
this, be nice to be able to show very simply, in a way that
even they might acknowledge, that the essence of Christianity resides in an absolute paradox that is by definition impossible to resolve?
I cannot say with certainty that Climacus wishes for
the double usage of the term "absolute paradox" to have
this effect. The matter becomes highly difficult to judge
when we consider the profusion of paradoxes,
discontinuities, and qualitative leaps that occur over the
course of Philosophical Fragments. How does one get
from a demonstration to the thing demonstrated? How
can I know that something has come into existence, for
when I experience it, it simply is, and afterward ·I am
separated from it by time? Is coming to be an existential
change only, or is it an essential change as well? -These
are just a few of the thorny problems that come up in the
book. Even the essential Christian paradox has its rivals
(the suffering god, the human god). Amidst all of these
difficulties, it is hard to tell exactly how to take the nominal link between the two "absolute paradoxes." Even
so, I think that in some way the double usage of the name
indicates an overeagerness on the part of Climacus to
refute the Hegelians on as many fronts as possible.
So, then, we come to the end of our analysis of the
absolute paradox. In an earlier section, we said that in
order to be hanged Climacus would have to commit a
tragic mistake. Has our analysis uncovered anything that
qualifies as a tragic mistake? I do not think so. At worst,
we have discovered a little bit of logical sleight of hand,
but we cannot even prove intent in the matter. And besides, even if Climacus were guilty of misusing the name
"absolute paradox," would such a minor crime be a hanging offense? No, it would not. I am not what they call a
"hanging judge." I would much prefer to see our play
tum out a comedy instead of a tragedy. So rather than
hang the poor man, let us try to marry him off. Let us
proceed to our final act, where we will try to find a proper
spouse for Climacus. It is only fitting that a comedy
should end with a wedding.

Part V (The Big Day)

�We began with the question of whether Climacus was
well hanged. What we meant in asking the question was:
Has Climacus given an accurate and insightful account
of what Christian faith is and what it means to acquire
it? At the time, we did not know that we were going to
opt for a wedding instead of a hanging. Nevertheless,
the question still stands, and we can ask it in another
way: Does Climacus really know who it is that he is
getting ready to marry?
There are wonderful insights to be found in Philosophical Fragments. For one, Climacus makes it clear
that faith requires both thoughtfulness and passion. It
does not require thoughtfulness in the sense of erudition
or intellectual acuteness. If that were the case, then faith
would be differently accessible to different people, depending on how clever they were. No, faith requires only
so much thoughtfulness as is necessary to recognize the
fact that much of what Christians believe does not make
sense. There are genuine contradictions in Christianity,
literally embodied in Christ himself, who is believed to
be not only the one, eternal, all-powerful God, but also a
particular man, fully human, who lived, suffered, and
died within human history. To be a Christian is to believe in these paradoxes. But to embrace a g~nuine paradox, one must defy one's own understanding. This requires tremendous passion. To believe in something even
when one's own understanding says that the thing cannot be, one must love the thing greatly. It is not easy to
say, "As far as I know, you are an absurdity, but I love
you so much that your absurdity is not an obstacle to my
believing you." Of course, it would be easy to say if one
were, in general, not bothered by the prospect of believing in the absurd. This is where passion comes back,
and this is where Climacus makes one of hi greatest contributions: Thought itself is passionate. If one's thought
lacks passion, then one does not bother to get worked up
about contradictions and paradoxes. It takes passion in
order to say firmly, "this is so," or "this is not so." Philosophical Fragments makes a valuable statement in saying that thought and passion are intimately connected
and that, in particular, clear and forceful thinking requires
its own kind of passion.
In this regard, Climacus seems to know his future
spouse quite well. Faith requires clear thinking in order
to discern that the object of faith is an absurdity. From
here, it requires passion to believe the absurdity. But
one cannot then allow one's thinking to get slack. One
must have the passion of thought that is required for holding on to the recognition that the absurdity is still an absurdity even when one believes it.

But in some ways, I wonder whether Climacus really knows what he is getting himself into. He is so concerned with staving off potentially bad marriages that to
a degree he has lost t_ouch with his own notion of what a
good marriage would be. That is, Philosophical Fragments is so caught up in the philosophical project of refuting Hegelianism that this impinges on the theological
project of explicating the content of Christian faith. Because he is addressing himself to the Hegelians, he has
gone to great lengths to adopt their way of speaking and
to present Christianity in an abstract and categorical way.
Thus, in Philosophical Fragments , everything is bound
up in the moment. the moment of decisive significance
is indeed an ingenious device for simply but totally distinguishing between philosophy and Christianity. In
terms of what philosophy is inclined to consider important, the Christian idea of a single point in which time ·
meets eternity is a unique and fascinating proposition.
But Climacus sees it as more than just a handy way to set
off Christianity from philosophy. He also tries to make
it the entire essence of Christianity:
That an eternal happiness is decided in time
through the relationship to something historical
was the content of my experiment, and what I
now call Christianity ... To avoid distraction again,
I do not wish to bring forward any other Christian principles; they are all contained in this one,
and may be consistently derived from it, just as
this determination also offers the sharpest contrast with paganism. (PS 330)
I do not think that this quite works. I do not think that all
of Christianity can be deduced from the moment. The
moment is brilliant as a way of demonstrating the need
for the subjective appropriation of Christianity. Regardless of the time in which one lives, regardless of how
many or how few Christians are around, the problem of
faith is equally problematic for every individual. When
one truly recognizes what Christianity is, when one sees
that faith entails a complete turning away from the understanding, then personal belief in Christ becomes a difficult and terrifying proposition. But Climacus's nearly
total focus on the subjectivity of the moment leads, I
think, to a neglect of the objective elements from which
the moment draws its power.
The all-important paradox of the moment is that eternal happiness rests on historical knowledge. Should we
not, therefore, show some concern for the content of that
historical knowledge? For the intellect, the idea that the

eternal God erupted into time is a great perplexity. But theological writings fail to treat the personal offensivefor the heart, is it not more essential that the eruption ness of Christianity. Climacus places it in the center of
was an act of pure love, and that by coming down as a his book.
human the omnipotent God had to experience human
Nonetheless, I think there are limitations to
suffering? The abstractness of the moment does not, I Climacus' s treatment of the offense. Here again, we come
think, capture the full pathos of the great Christian event. back to the neglect of the message.
Climacus speaks of the importance of God's appearance
as a teacher. What then, of the teaching? Is it not imporThen came his disciples, and said unto him,
tant that Christ came down in order to bring us the Word?
Knowest thou that the Pharisees were offended,
Is it not important that the historical event left the world
after they heard this saying? (Matthew 15: 12)
with two great commandments? The moment places too
much emphasis on the simple recognition that God ap- Why are we offended by the person of Christ? In a large ·
peared in time. Climacus does not show, in this book, part, we are offended because the very notion of Christ
that he fully appreciates why God appeared in time. By is defiant to reason as such. But in another significant
not talking more than he does about the objective mean- way, we are offended by the way in which Christ's teaching of the appearance, Climacus makes it seem as though ing challenges our understanding of the world in which
it were merely a photo-opportunity. Climacus makes it we live:
sound as if God came down solely in order to give us the
opportunity to believe that God came down. Though the
Ye have heard that it hath been said to you, An
simple fact of God's appearance in time is an amazeeye for an eye and a tooth for a tooth: But I say
ment all by itself, and though it alone tells us much about
unto you, That ye resist not evil: but whosoever
God's nature and God's love, it does not provide us with
shall smite thee on thy right cheek, turn to him
the entirely of Christianity. When he made his appearthe other also. And if any man wi11 sue the at
ance, Christ could have told us anything. I do not think
law, and take away thy coat, let him have thy
that we can deduce the particularity of Christ's message
cloak also. And whoever shall compel thee to
merely from the fact that he brought us .one.
go a mile, go with him twain . Give to him that
But it would be wrong to criticize Philosophical
asketh thee, and from him that would borrow of
Fragments too strongly on the basis of what Climacus
thee tum not thou away. Ye have heard that it
did not say. Philosophical Fragments is a short work.
hath been said, Thou shalt love thy neighbor and
In the space of little over a hundred pages, Climacus not
hate thine enemy. But I say unto you, Love your
only goes a long way toward summing up the true esenemies, bless them that curse you, do good to
sence of Christianity, but in so doing he also offers a
them that hate you, and pray for them which derefutation of Hegelianism in general and of the systemspitefully use you, and persecute you. (Matthew
atic appropriation of revealed religion in particular. Given
5:38-44)
all that it sets out to do and how successfully it accomplishes it, Philosophical Fragments is to be praised Or again:
highly.
Another of the riches in Philosophical Fragments is
If any man come to me, and hate not his father,
Climacus's treatment of the offense. He displays a proand mother and wife, and children, and bretheren,
found awareness of how the paradoxes of Christianity
and sisters, yea, and his own life also, he cannot
are not only absurd, but also abhorrent. When the mind
be my disciple. (Luke 14:26)
reflects on such attributes of God as omnipresence and
omnipotence, its first impulse is to reject on aesthetic · Or again:
grounds the notion that such attributes are commensurate with that skinny kid from Nazareth. The understandTherefore I say unto you, Take no thought for
ing takes pride in its categories. We stake much of our
your life, what ye shall eat, or what ye shall drink;
personal worth on our ability to think. When Christiannor yet for your body, what ye shall put on ...
ity comes along, shatters the categorical framework of
(Matthew 6:25)
our understanding, and shuts down our thinking, we are
threatened with ridiculousness and impotence. Many These statements are not statements that defy our facul-

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�ties of thinking qua faculties. They defy our notions of
justice and morality and causality. They contradict what
our own experience tells us about how the world works.
Climacus succeeds brilliantly in showing us how offensive Christ is to our process of thinking and, to the extent that we identify ourselves with our thinking, how
offensive Christ is to our person. But I do not see much
in Philosophical Fragments that treats the offensiveness
of Christ's worldly message.
Does Climacus know his future spouse? He knows
much. His insights into what it means to acquire faith
are profound and, in some ways, original. Though in
focusing on subjective appropriation he may de-emphasize the objective and worldly implications of Christianity, he nevertheless makes and invaluable contribution
to Christian theology. They say that you never really
know the other person until you are married. If this is
true, then we should not expect Philosophical Fragment
to nail down every important detail of Christian teaching-especially since abstraction and philosophical generality are partly the goal of the book. Rather, we should
thank Climacus for what he has told us about his future
spouse. His poem is a gift for which we should be grateful. As we take our leave of Climacus, we should say to
him with all sincerity:

The Manipulation of the Field

D

Edward Freeman

We are dissatisfied with the explanation founded
on the hypothesis of attractive and repellent
forces directed towards the magnetic poles, even
though we may have satisfied ourselves that the
phenomenon is in strict accordance with that
hypothesis, and we cannot help thinking that in
every place where we find these lines of force,
some physical state or action must exist in sufficient energy to produce the actual phenomena.
Thus Maxwell states, in the beginning of "On Physical Lines of Force," the nagging question left unanswered
by the theory of action at a distance. 1 Action at a distance theories do not address what phenomena could cause
"sufficient energy" to enable the "actual phenomena."
How does one account for the mysterious power of the
magnet? In what does the energy reside? The magnet
and similar phenomena exert a physical force upon objects in their vicinity. There exists, according to empirical observation, an area around such electromagnetic
sources that registers a buildup of something that causes
physical responses to certain things brought into proximity with them, but what is this something?
The most basic field hypothesis presented by Maxwell was that account given in "On Faraday's Lines of
Force." There we found a mathematical construct designed to exhibit the lines of force found in the vicinity
of a magnet, static charge, or live wire. Maxwell imagines mathematical fluid tubes carrying an unnatural, yet
ingenious, incompressible fluid incapable of momentum,
created to demonstrate that the direction of the natural
forces displayed around an electromagnetic source could
be accounted for by some type of system of real forces in
the area around the source. Infinitesimal tubes which
resist the passage of a massless fluid pervade the area
around a source. This account certainly gave us a map of
these phenomena but fell short of presenting an actual
account of the physical forces involved in any electromagnetic circumstance. We could account for the diminishing strength of the field as it moved from the source

Name the day of marriage, and God give thee
joy. (Much Ado About Nothing II. i. 295)

This paper was written for Mrs. Marilyn Higuera's 1993
Preceptorial on Maxwe11. The text used was The Dialec1

Let us next consider the mechanical effect of a
state of stress symmetrical about an axis. We
may resolve it, in all cases, into a simple hydrostatic pressure, combined with a simple pressure
or tension along the axis. When the axis is that
of greatest pressure, the force along the axis will
be a pressure. When the axis is that of least pres- ·
sure, the force along the axis will be a tension.
The axes spoken of in the passage were formerly known
to us as the fluid tubes in the first analogy. The new
mechanical concept described above is the vortex. This

tic of the Field: Three Papers of James Clerk Maxwell,
edited by Thomas K. Simpson of St. John 's College. His

commentary was invaluable to our study.

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by the resistance of the medium (fluid tubes) . But this
only demonstrated one of the many facets of electromagnetic forces. The Jack of an account for induced currents
and other phenomena forces one to conclude that this conception of Maxwell's falls short of a true expression of
the field. Maxwell knows this and pinpoints the difficulty,
attributing it to the lack of momentum in this mathematical analogy.
Even though this analogy fails to explain electromagnetic phenomena fully, Maxwell is advancing our thought,
leading us to shift our perception of these phenomena.
When one considers the meticulous care Maxwell exercised to prevent the infusion of false impressions through
inappropriate analogies into the study in which he was
employed, it seems that we can see exactly where the
problem lies. There is no substance to the fluid. There is
no more physical force to this conception than in that of
"action at a di stance." But, even with this difficulty, I
find that I am no longer questioning whether the choice
is between action at a distance or the field . It is now
merely a question of what is truly the nature of a field
which exhibits electromagnetic properties. It now seems to be possible to find forces originating in a field. Maxwell has oriented our thought towards pressures through
a medium pervading the area around electromagnetic
phenomena.
The proposal for an electromagnetic medium that
most intrigues me is given in "On Physical Lines of
Force." We still need to follow the pattern of forces indicated by the fluid tubes of the last paper, but we also
need to utilize forces that are more conventionally physical. Maxwell gives the fundamental concept of this paper in the following paragraph:

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�vortex answers the problem of having a non-physical
Now we are in a quandary. Maxwell's solution to
entity create a physical force. It is the answer to the prob- the field in physical terms cannot be felt although it should
lem created by the strictly mathematical conception found be present everywhere. The degree of the force of its
in "Faraday 's Lines." By whirling the fluid around and particles is nonexistent when set beside the effects attribgranting it momentum we initiate centrifugal pressures uted to it. Degrees of magnetic force are granted though
that, when coupled with an additional hydrostatic pres- differing densities of this ether, but no differential in
sure, give us conditions that will coincide with those found weight can be distinguished. In typical fashion, Maxaround a magnet. To incorporate induced current and to well is prepared for such difficulties. Speaking of the
keep the vortices from rubbing together and creating fric- vortical hypothesis, he says:
tion Maxwell imposes an insulating layer of "particles"
between the vortices. By imposing elasticity upon the
I do not bring it forward as a mode of connexion
shape of the vortices we incorporate the electrotonic state
existing in nature, or even as that which I would
into our model. We now have a complete conception of
willingly assent to as an electrical hypothesis. It
the situation in the vicinity of the magnet, live wire, and
is, however, a mode of connexion which is meelectrostatic field: Three-dimensional whirling and glidchanically conceivable, and easily investigated
ing forces silently buzzing away in impossible intricacy,
and it serves to bring out the actual mechanichal
all of which could, mathematically speaking, be caused
connexions between the known electromagnetic
phenomena; so that I venture to say that any one
by the momentous vortical fluid.
But this aura of force only occurs in the vicinity of
who understands the provisional and temporary
character of this hypothesis, will find himself
electromagnetic items. Does this vortical fluid, with its
intervening layer of particles, reside only near electrorather helped than hindered by it in his search
magnetic entities? This is rather absurd, if almost everyafter the true interpretation of the phenomena.
thing is receptive in some manner to the effects of electromagnetism. Maxwell postulates this conceptual vor- Here of course is Maxwell at his best. What does it mattical fluid to be an ether, residing everywhere, actualized ter if the vortices are not actually there? They could be.
in the presence of an electromagnetic source. How does At least this hypothesis demonstrates that physical forces
this fluid appear in its neutral state? How can the par- can be responsible for the equations given by the "action
ticles remain in position to prevent friction in the vorti- at a distance" theorists. He now has us thinking of the
ces in the event of actualization? Although the vortical field and believing that it is possible to understand these
motion of an ether when it is actualized seems sufficient phenomena as more than mysterious forces acting upon
to account for the forces in a field, it is very difficult to each other from afar without physical connection.
conceive of ether in its unactualized state.
Now that we are thinking in terms of the possibility
There is, of course, another difficulty presented by of this electromagnetic ether, Maxwell asks us to step
this ether. It must necessarily be physical and have mo- away from any definite conception of the manner of its
mentum if it is to effect the forces attributed to it. It must existence. It is sufficient to say that it is possible that this
also be able to infuse any medium with which it is pre- ether could exist and could mechanically cause the phesented. To answer these needs, the particles of the field nomena we experience. In "A Dynamical Theory" we
are made infinitesimally small. Maxwell grants them mo- are asked to take a step away from the vortical concepmentum but not gross mass. Having no mass, this is a tion and return to something very like the mathematical
very odd momentum which which he has postulated for conception in "Faraday 's Lines." He speaks of the field
us. Can we find the results of action with momentum but in terms of energy and abstracts his theory from the physino mass? Maxwell designed an experiment to examine cal hypothesis. We now look at the dynamics of a posthis question. It was entitled "The Inertia of a Current sible field and leave the difficulties associated with its
Experiment" and is found in the Treatise Volume II, Ar- physical ordering behind us . The frailties of physical
ticle 217. This experiment was designed to discover if a conception are no longer a factor. The field is postulated
current carried momentums of the same magnitude as and its dynamical effects examined.
those found in fields near electromagnetic sources. MaxIn the Treatise Maxwell invokes the image of bell
well could find no momentum. Modem scientists have ringers pulling at ropes to fulfill their charge. Hidden to
found momentums, but they are very small compared to them behind an opaque ceiling is the machinery which it
the effects found in the field.
is their duty to sound. Therefore, their vision of the ac-

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tual sounding bodies is blocked. The "action at a distance" formulas give a like understanding of electromagnetic phenomena. The effects given by the exercise of
certain actions are known, but the mechanism remains
dark. The culmination of Maxwell's work is ultimately
to arrive at the action at a distance formulas through the
examination of the field itself, not the electromagnetic
sources. Thus the mechanism itself is examined, not
merely the ropes.

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�A Possibility of Beauty

D

David Jennings

Is the Special Theory of Relativity beautiful? The
answer is no. A theory, insofar as it is an abstract construct (as differentiated from its presentation), cannot
be beautiful. The abstract can never be beautiful.
Carravagio's "Conversion of St. Paul," for instance, is
stunningly beautiful. The concept of the painting-its
essence or meaning or whatever-is on the other hand a
flimsy, insipid thing by definition (if definition is to be
had). What we mean by the "Theory of Relativity" is not
the progression of the argument on the page or the blackboard or the tabula rasa of our minds. If it were then we
would not have a single theory but a multiplicity of theories, one for each page, blackboard, and tabula rasa that
falls under Einstein's sway. We speak, however, of a
theory that may be thought of as the permanent form of
each of its representations. And if we have learned anything, we have learned that form is just as flimsy and
insipid (and boring) as matter.
We can ask, though, whether Einstein's presentation
(his "text") is beautiful. It is often said that mathematics is beautiful, the subtler the better. This means that
the dizzying concatenation of logic and proof that constitutes the working out of propositions is thought of as
sublime. Again, this cannot mean that mathematics itself (whatever that entity may be) is beautiful. Instead,
the descriptive term beautiful is attached to what may be
vaguely termed the experience of mathematics. Proof
and procedure seem unsullied, clean, pure (c.f. pure reason). Perhaps because of evolutionary reasons, or perhaps because of the presence of our divine selves within
our bodily selves, the (somewhat) neutral attribution of
cleanliness is associated with the decidedly valuational
attribution of beauty. So, we ask, is Einstein's theory
clean?
The last question is very difficult to ~pproach and
more difficult to answer. Mathematics does not imply
criteria of cleanliness. Perhaps one could claim that
Einstein's work, insofar as it is mathematical, is beautiful when compared to dirty old physics. However tenuous, indeed ridiculous, 1 this claim is, it is at least a little
1

I hasten to point out that for my part, I am not quick to
disparage the ridiculous in a case like this. It may indeed happen that beauty resides in what is childish, silly,
and (yes) unsubtle. As Heraclitus supposedly says, "Enter, for there are gods here too."

more tenable than saying, for example, that Einstein is
more beautiful than Lobachevski. A part of the beauty
of mathematics is that it, like a goddess, is indifferent to
itself. Without some sort of recourse to something outside of mathematics only this indifference will pertain.
All mathematics is aesthetically equivalent (equally
"clean") when viewed upon purely mathematical
grounds. But we want to know something specific about
Einstein's text. It is uninformative to say that it is beautiful insofar as it is mathematical. We only gain some
sort of new glimpse upon the text when we make an aesthetic judgment concerning the text itself.2
Our recourse is a common one; we reread. Math~
ematics, abstract or not, is not our interest. Here the
reader faces a text, and just for a moment, as if in a dream,
he disregards the appellation "mathematics" altogether.
Under the thick veil of notational argot, and through it
and in it, the reader finds a perspectival gigantomachia.
The earth giants, the brutal and stone-like creatures of
primitive gravity and rest, pile on mountains of calculation to comprehend the airy, motive Olympians. The
Olympians on their part hurl lightening (velocity=c)
upon the heads of the giants. The former are called collectively "small k" and the latter "large K." Or perhaps there is no war at all, but rather a never-ending tension of isolated looking. The two parties, mr. k and Mrs.
K, share one thing in common, one event, but the entirety of the rest of their lives (in time) are out of synch.
And then there is above all (giants, gods, lonely couples,
et cetera) the transcendent (unreal) hope of ultimate
redemption: synchronicity. We once had it in an innoTo take an example: "The works of Cummings are
beautiful because they are poetry." This statement, if
"poetry'' is thought of as analogous to "mathematics," is
senseless. Now it may be argued that what the speaker
means is that there is some body of real poetry, all of
which is beautiful as compared to fake poetry. In fact,
we often use the term "poetry" in this sense. However,
such a use implies that task of distinguishing the real
from the false. In making such a distinction, we are going through a process of judgment no different from that
implied in this simple valuation: "The poetry of
Cummings is beautiful." "Is beautiful" is here no more
and no less informative than "is poetry" in the above
context.

cent (Newtonian) age, where with Leibnitz (Einstein's
favorite tragi-comedic hero) we thought that Chinese
was the answer to the curse of Babel. But Einstein's
work is a tragedy. We never get where we want; we live
isolated in time; the greater our velocity the more we
risk obliteration by candle light. 3
So is this beautiful? I would say yes, but it is beautiful only in its completeness. The gigantomachia is an
ancient tale, and the story of mr. k and Mrs. K is even
older. Contrary to popular belief, there is nothing we
can learn here from the "content." There is something
remarkable, however, in the straightforwardness of
Einstein's text. Seamlessly and effortlessly, Einstein
winds his way (our way) through simple functions, transformations, synchronizations, electromagnetic formulae,
and mathematical approximations to tell his tale. There
is a great deal of finality implicit in the work; note for
instance the devastation in Einstein 's description of the
Doppler Effect. Yet the presentation is direct, concise,
and somewhat cool. Einstein, who lived to see the bomb
and the Copenhagen interpretation, paints his picture like
a Carravagio. There is seriousness and doom, darkness
and luminescence, but there is also a coolness and distance that allows the reader/observer to encounter the
text/paining as a work of sheer, simple and devastating
harmony.

2

3

Fanciful? Yes, naturally. But what tells us that
Einstein's presentation is not a text in the sense that for
example, the Bible is? Where are the criteria that g~ide
our "textual" reading? They must be outside of the text
in a context of social exigencies, instinctual exigencies,
habit, etc. (And this may-just may- be precisely how
any text is informative in an interesting way.) And this
is the point. I use this gruesome and tactless figure of
the gigantomachia to get my point across in the first brutal moment.

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�The Tin Star at High Noon

D

Eva T. H. Brann

disillusioned mentor, in the movie. Gary Cooper was
fifty in 1952, when the movie was filmed, and no effort
was made to make him look youthful, but he is not old,
or impaired, or disillusioned, though some of the story's
sad feel carries over. "Will" suits him well enough, for
he is indomitable, and "Kane" fits perfectly with the new
element in the screen story, because he is an outcast in
his battle with the outlaws. He bears a kind of reverse
mark of Cain, a mark of courage among the craven. The
story itself is slight, but it evidently made a good starting
point for transformation.
For another example, in "The Tin Star" Will is a sor-:
rowing widower, while in the movie Will is newly married. The movie opens with the ominous rendezvous of
Frank Miller's three accomplices on a hill. From it they
are converging on the town to meet their vengeful leader,
who has just been pardoned from his conviction of murder and released from the pen. There is a second beginning, Will's brief civil marriage ceremony to Amy, his
young Quaker bride. He is wearing his marshal's star,
and we see that he is acutely aware of his office: As
marshal he is bashful about kissing her in public, though
once he takes the star off and pins it to his gun belt, he is
a playful enough lover. He has promised to leave town
with her and tum storekeeper. He says he will try his
best, but it is evidently something of a sacrifice for him
to settle into a star-less life.
The point is made that the star is not just a piece of
cheap beaten tin to him, and that he is marshal before
husband. And now arrives a telegram telling that Frank
Miller, the badman he had sent up to the pen, is returning
II.
Now this magazine story actually bears scarcely any on the twelve o'clock from St. Louis. And the clock starts
relation to High Noon. Its reluctant hero's name is Sher- ticking.
Three devices mark this movie. The first might be
iff Will Doane,which was changed to Marshal Will Kane
called "the sound of time passing" : the horses' clipbecause, I have read, the script writers were afraid that it
would come out "Well Done" on the sound track. The clopping, the rails ' clicking, the clocks' ticking and the
shift from sheriff to marshal shows the care of the script pendulum's swing. The action begins at about 10:40 AM ,
writers: sheriff is a county office, but a marshal works comes to its culmination as the sun does, at high noon,
for a city; Marshal Kane' s relation is to his town, intensely when Miller gets in, and ends with a brief shoot-out. This
so. In the story Will is old and arthritic and speaks all the is a real-time film. The movie takes-though I haven ' t
bitter words attributed to the old marshal, Will Kane' s clocked it-about the same time as the action, an hour and
a half. If anything, near the climax its clocks move somewhat slower than real time. It obeys. only far more strin1 I want to thank Mr. Adam Schulman for giving this
gently, one of the requirements of dramatic unity of anessay a critical reading which saved it from some errors cient tragedy. that the action should take place within a
and enriched it with new insights.

High Noon is, to my mind, a movie of near-perfect
artistry. 1 It gets to me more and in more different ways
each time I see it, and I've seen it more often than I've
read the Iliad. One of my younger fellow-tutors confided to me that often as he had seen it, it never made him
weep until he became a married man. I have watched it
dry-eyed and wet-eyed, but always with that sense of
being all there-all coolly attentive to its artful devices,
all warmly receptive to its gathering pathos . That dual
consciousness, in which the powers of noticing and of
empathizing are activated together, seems to me to be the
trustworthy signal of being in the presence of a work of
art.
The following collection of observations and interpretations are only partly my own. The Chicago Alumni
invited me to a seminar on the film in the summer of
1994, and in November the Student Committee on Instruction chose it for the All-College Seminar. I have
double cause for thanks to these two groups, first for indulging my enthusiasm, and then for the discoveries I
made while listening, talking, and thinking along.
High Noon came to be from a series of happy circumstances . The first of these was the fact that John
Wayne turned down the lead. I am no Wayne-basher, but
Gary Cooper, as I will try to show, was just right for the
story as adapted in the script, and he gives the performance of his life. The script itself is felicitous in its deviation from the story which the credits cite, "The Tin
Star" by John M. Cunningham, published in Colliers
December 6, 1947, two years after the end of World War

plain-spoken . Cooper's facial acting is altogether miniThere are, incidentally, four more allusions to antiq- mal, a Clroop of the mouth, a switch of the cheek, a glint
uity. Judge Mettrick-excellently named, for he is a cyni- in the eye. His body language is similarly restrained; he
cal, if not bad, judge who takes the measure of his town's is all held-in grace, intensely controlled length, or better,
unreliability-cites Herodotus on the corruption of ancient height. Will, as played by Cooper, is even in happy times
Athens in allowing the return of the Pisistratid tyranny as a quiet, modest man, and under the pressure of time he
an excuse for his own flight. And Will, to make his es- becomes more and more laconic. As he tells Amy, he has
cape from the fiery stables in which the outlaws have no time to explain. He has pinned his star and buckled
trapped him, clings to the side of this mount as the herd · his gun back on, and she has given up pleading her Quaker
rushes out, just as Odysseus once escaped from the Cy- faith and is waiting to leave him and the town on the train
clops' cave by grasping the wool on the underside of a on which Miller is returning. The ballad sings to us what
big ram. The beautiful woman who has known the men he can't say to her; it pleads where he is dumb; it is the
on both sides is called "Helen," as in Helen of Troy. And feeling descant to his brusque words. It shows that his
finally "High Noon" itself is an antique moment, as I will decision to stay and fight is not heroics but heroism, because it is made in the face of a great loss .
show in a minute.
Some of us who watched the movie in the Francis
To return to the unity of the film: It wonderfully
concentrates the mind and allows us, the viewers, to close Scott Key Auditorium asked ourselves why there was this
the distance between a fiction and an event. As we hear misplaced laughter at crucial moments. I think I have an
its time passing, we are living indistinguishably in the idea what induces it, aside from the fact that in a student
audience not everyone will have developed the self-posfilm's time frame and in our own.
The second device of the movie is what might be session necessary to assimilate quietly the representation
called "the critical moment." High noon, when the sun of strongly charged moments. Students feel that they owe
culminates, is in ancient myth the time of the god Pan, something to sophistication. This film is not morally sothe panic time, the moment of revelatory terror. It is the phisticated but simple-though not simplistic. That is to
time when the shadows are the shortest and blackest, when say, it presents a situation which is humanly wrenching
the sun beats straight down, hot and brilliant, and there is but not morally ambiguous. The laughter, though we
no place to hide. It might even be midsummer day. In could have done without it, is a tribute to a moral world
this sunlit scene with its black edges, Will walks up and in which gravity reigns rather than confusion, and where
down the deserted streets of Hadleyville. Since it is, more- complexity does not entail ambiguity-at least not for
over, Sunday, the Lord 's Day, that part of the population the hero.
That brings me to the figures who are-for the present
which is not in the saloon is in church. Will, with inclusive trust, seeks help in both places, and finds more purpose very rightly-called the "characters" of the movie.
straight talk among the drinking rabble than among the First, Will's bride of ten minutes, Amy: She is, as was
mentioned, a Quaker (which is the reason they are not
hymn-singing burghers.
The camera work is of the essence to this quintes- married in church), but what kind? Clearly an adventisential black-and-white film. The clean, stark rectangu- tious Quaker, converted more by circumstance than by
larity of the deserted town under the midday sun and principle. For she has seen both her fathe a d he b othe
Cooper's elongated striding figure work together to tell shot and killed, and so she disavows all shooting and killthe moral tale. Here colorization, which works fine for, ing. Yet she ends up killing, and very mercilessly too.
say, one of those delightful Danny Kaye musicals, is sim- She shoots the second to last gunman in the back as he is
reloading.
ply an aesthetic crime against the camera.
When, already settled in the train, she hears the first
The third device is the ballad written for the movie
by Tiomkin and sung by Tex Ritter. It has a clip-clopping shot from town, she jumps out, clearly expecting to find
under-theme, a lyrical melody which culminates in a her husband dead. She recognizes the body as that of
heart-rending modulation, and words that might be maud- one of the outlaws, and she walks by his gun without
lin in ordinary speech but are archetypal in a ballad: "Do picking it up. Once in the refuge of the sheriff's office,
not forsake me, oh my darling ." The ballad makes we see her head next to the gun belt that Harvey, Will's
Cooper's interpretation of Will possible by complement- childish and resentful deputy, has hung up. It is this gun
ing it. Will is shy, sad, and inarticulate, except in the she uses to kill the third outlaw, and so she becomes Will's
ordinary business of life, when he is simple, candid, and surrogate deputy. In concert they dispose of Miller himday.

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�self. Has she given up her principles? Well, they weren't
principles to begin with, but rather a strong revulsion to
all the senseless killing. And that revulsion she does not
disavow in her action. She is not engaging in an honest
shoot-out involving manly principles of honor. She is
rather saving her man in the most effective way possible.
She is doing efficiently what her Quaker principles forbid but her heart requires-her heart shaken both by the
reprieve from Will's death and by a new influence.
It is the influence of Helen Ramirez, "the Mexican
woman." The wise madam, the south-of-the-border oddwoman-out, is a stock character of westerns. The character of Mrs. Ramirez is an upgraded version. She owns
the saloon, not the house, and her business partners have
genuine respect for her, though the ladies shun her. She
has been intimate in turn with Frank, Will and with
Harvey, the broad-shouldered boy-man against whose
low, rationalizing vacillation Will's resolution stands out.
She loves Will with resignation.
She is, in fact, his fit complement. She will not, as
he cannot, explain her moral judgment. She is as socially solitary as he is morally alone. She has dignity as
he has stature. They share a high pathos, but qualified by
the sex and status of each.
It is Mrs. Ramirez who intimates to Amy, first scornfully and then kindly, what's what. She would not forsake her man.
Why is it nonetheless this girlish blonde (Grace Kelly
was twenty-two to Cooper's fifty) who wins Will's heart
and not the darkly beautiful woman? The reason is not
only the stock social prejudice. The choice also makes
sense, for if the Mexican is Will's complement, the Quaker
is his counterpart. Will is like Amy in a certain innocence, and Amy is in tum his equal in strength of will.
Mrs. Ramirez, the "nomad," is alien to them in her
illusionless realism. She bends where they risk breaking. This is a marriage of like to like.
Will and Amy learn more about each other in the first
hour and a half of their marriage than they seem to have
discovered during their courtship. She learns of his history with Miller and with Mrs. Ramirez; he learns that
just as he puts the star before his love, so she too puts her
conviction before her marriage. But he is also to find out
that in the end she will stand by him and that she will
answer the ballad's plea. We may imagine that they will
not be mere storekeepers to the town in which they settle,
but that they will be among its first citizens. In Louis
L' Amour's well-researched westerns, such men as Will
eventually find their voice and go to the Senate.
What, above all and finally, of Will's own character?

In American golden oldies the typical moral setting
is a supine crowd finally carried along by a lone hero,
often through the speech of his life. Think of situations
as diverse as Jimmy Stewait's in the good-natured Christmas favorite It's a Wonderful Life and Marlon Brando's
in the brutal world of On the Waterfront. For Gary Cooper the case is altered: He makes no speech, and the
town doesn't come through. He is morally alone for two
cooperating reasons. One is his mild, brief and candid
mode of speech. He is the very type of the unrhetorical
man, the strong silent man, only in a finely honed version. We get the impression that the complex elements
of the moral situations are all present to him, that he understands how his high practicality might look like outdated quixotism to this tame frontier town. But he is not
good at articulating his thoughts and uttering his feelings. In this movie the antiheroes make the prevailing.
speeches.
He knows that he cannot, being the man he is, run
away, because he has tried. The buggy is already running in the prairie, and he sitting silent and disturbed beside his bride, when we see it coming to a halt and turning back. Later on, in what he calls a moment of tiredness, he goes for his horse to ride off without Amy, but it
takes no more than Harvey's attempt to force him on his
way to bring back his resolution. He also knows that
running away is not only morally impossible, it is also
realistically impracticable because the outlaws will eventually find him and his wife. He gauges his outlaw adversaries more accurately than do the the ostrich-like
townsfolk who want to avoid provocation by having him
leave, on the chance that the pen might have reformed
Miller. He has a respectful sense of Miller's
unregenerable wildness. Will's judgment that the town
will revert to the time when no respectable woman was
safe on the street in broad daytime is amply borne out by
the youngest of the Miller men, Frank's brother. When
they stalk through the town four abreast, he breaks away
to make a commencement of crime by smashing a store
window-incidentally at once warning Will of their
whereabouts and giving him cause for arrest-to steal a
ladies' bonnet, which he then ties to his belt as a sort of
forcible favor, a sign of rape to come. But above all, Will
knows that he cannot on any pretext doff the responsibilities of a sheriff by unpinning the star. He is marshal
through and through. He thinks of his charges even in
the most distracting circumstances, warning Mrs. Ramirez
at the risk of being misunderstood by Amy, releasing the
drunk from his cell before the fight starts, and untethering
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Will is right and he is responsible, but he has no moral
suasion, not merely because he is laconic but principally
because he has no time. Will's life has readied him for a
moral crisis, though even he needs a few miles' run into
the prairie to find his will, but the townspeople, decent
enough, are c~ught in moral unreadiness on this Sunday.
The preacher is courteous but indecisive, the first men of
the town hide, vacillate, misjudge. The mayor makes a
spe.ech, the i~nobly sensible turning point for the congregat10n, wammg of the consequences a shoot-out will have
for the town's commercial prospects; Will listens in
drained silence. The women have a better sense of danger and of decency, but will-lessness prevails-not the
d~ep lack of caring that the crippled marshal imputes to
his .fellow-citizens out of his own impotence, but a lack
of timely resoluteness.
·
.
Three times in the movie we are briefly shown the
town's name, Hadleyville. It is an allusion to Mark
Twain's story "The Man Who Corrupted Hadleyburg," a
tale of the effects of evil on a small town of weak charac~er.. The name betokens that what is lacking in Hadleyville
is mdeed moral readiness. As the old marshal says:
People need time to work themselves up to law and order, that is, into moral decision. That is why the inexorable clock ~ominates the movie as a sound and a sight.
The endmg reverts to t_ e tin star theme though it
h
isn't in "The Tin Star" story. (There is, inci,dentally, a
pretty good movie of this title with Henry Fonda, which
has a quite similar plot but with the tragic edge taken
off._) Will and his wife-no longer a bride-have together
delivered the town from evil. The townspeople crawl
out of the woodwork (the shot is from above) and come
running. The best man in Hadleyville, a boy who runs
messages for Will, has brought up the packed buggy for
a second departure. Before mounting, Will again takes
off the star. It is the movie's most subtly expressive moment. Cooper does not fling it away into the street he
drops it. It lands near the pointed toe of his boot which
we see slowly turning, not to grind the tin star into the
dust, but away from it. It is a consummate gesture of
speechless contempt-not for the star but for this town.
It must be that somewhere, sometime, on the frontier
wn
there was some such to_ and some such marshal. To be
sure, the town would not have been so starkly clean-lined,
the townsfolk so craven, the outlaw so fear-inspiring or
the marshal so alone. No matter-the movie has concentrated the event and raised it to a mythic dimension,
to a monumental and artful American frontier myth.
Recall, ho~ever, ~hat the movie was made just seven years
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~rom ~ack of civic courage and had to be delivered from
its evil.largely by American arms. It does the director

~red Zinnemann, honor that he managed to incorporat~
m an archetypal American setting lessons recently learned
abroad.

�~

Separation and Combin~tion: The Unity of Spinoza's
Theologico-Political Treqtise
Car rie Lynn Sager
Everyone has been strangely hasty in affirming
that the prophets know everything within the
scope of human intellect, and, although certain
passages of Scripture plainly affirm that the
prophets were in certain respects ignorant, such
persons would rather say that they do not understand the passages than admit that there was anything which the prophets did not know; or else
they try to wrest the Scriptural words away from
their evident meaning. (33)

The dismemberment of orthodox religion is so severe at the beginning of Spinoza's Theologico-Political
Treatise that it is difficult not to condemn Spinoza of
blasphemy. In his attack on Scripture Spinoza shows
little reverence for the sacredness of Scripture. Rather,
he ferociously preys upon Scripture, continually discarding crucial doctrines which had been cherished for hundreds-if not thousands-of years. His examination is
exhaustive; it seems that no chapter or verse escapes his
scrutiny. After his rigorous purging is complete, it seems
that almost nothing in Scripture remains sacred to
Spinoza. Yet, as shocking as this may seem, at the very
height of his attack on the tenets of religion , Spinoza
claims to have discovered the true core of religious belief-a universal faith-that he firmly establishes at the
center of his political thought in the remaining chapters
of the treatise. In order to better appreciate this restoration, a close examination of the extent and severity of
Spinoza' s attack is necessary.
Spinoza wasted little time in contesting the "tissue
of ridiculous mysteries" that men had made out of religion. In going straight to the source of religion- Scripture-he declared that he

This is Spinoza's testimony of man 's predisposition .to
superstition. According to Spinoza, nowhere does Scripture indicate that the prophets were endowed with perfect minds. Men, therefore , should not make that assumption but rather accept what Scripture does indicate:
namely that the prophets had "unusually vivid imaginations." (27) From this premise Spinoza proceeds as follows: Since the imagination is not grounded in the sure
fabric of objective reality, its products-words and figures which may be either real or imaginary-lack the
certainty of truth. Therefore, as Spinoza concludes, "prophetic knowledge is inferior to natural knowledge, which
needs no sign, and in itself implies certitude." (28)
Prophecy, as a product of the imagination, needs an exdetermined to examine the Bible afresh in a careternal reason to make it real and to give it certitude. For
ful, impartial, and unfettered spirit, making no
the prophets this external certainty came from morality.
assumptions concerning it, and attributing to it
(29) Hence, the only certainty that men should look for
no doctrines, which . .. are not clearly therein set
in the prophets' writings is moral certitude. In short,
down. (8) 1
"knowledge of natural and spiritual phenomena" cannot
be found in the prophetic books . (27) This, however, is
In other words, Spinoza's new method of interpreting
Scripture is to let Scripture explain itself. If men try to only Spinoza's first salvo.
Miracles are the next part of the religious world to
do otherwise, they will continue to bury Scripture, and
bear the brunt of Spinoza's "method." For while men
religion along with it, with misconceptions .that will lead
may have traditionally looked upon miracles as the ultithem only deeper into superstition. Rather than cloud
mate expressions of God's power and have thusly stood
Scripture with mystery and unnecessary meaning, men
in awe of them, Spinoza shares no such sentiment. Acshould endeavor to explain Scripture with Scripture only.
cording to Spinoza, "the masses think that the power and
This is Spinoza's "method," his only means to his puriprovidence of God are most clearly displayed by events
fication of Scripture.
that are extraordinary and contrary to the conception they
The first territory to which Spinoza lays waste is the
have formed of nature . . ." (81) By styling miracles
prophecy sung by the Hebrew prophets. He states:
after this fashion, men are only furthering their misconception of God. As Spinoza points out, what men fail to
1 All citations refer to A Theologico-Political Treatise,
recognize is that the power of God and the power of
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Nature are co-extensive, and moreover, the power of God
is equal to His will. Therefore, anything which contradicts Nature necessarily contradicts God's will. (83) For
Spinoza it is the mark of sheer absurdity that men claim
that miracles are the most awesome demonstrations of
God's power, for as men view them, miracles are a direct contradiction to his power.
Therefore, Spinoza declares:

e~ations,

each of which surpasses human comprehens10n- they are altogether beyond reason. (100) And as
~eason cannot explain nor reason from what is beyond
its grasp, man cannot call upon reason to help deduce
the m~aning of Scripture. On the contrary, the meaning
of Scnpture can only be deduced from Scripture alone.
Spinoza's conclusion has an important consequence,
namely, "We are at work not on the truth of the passages,
but solely on their meaning." (101) Furthermore, "We
... it comes to this, that a miracle, whether it has
must take especial care, when we are in search of the
natural causes or not, is a result which cannot be
meaning of a text, not to be lead away by our reason in
explained by its cause, that is a phenomenon
so far as it is founded on principles of natural knowlwhich surpasses human understanding; but from
edge ... " (101) To put it another way, men should not
such a phenomenon, and certainly from a result
look ~or truth in Scripture, but only meaning. According
surpassing our understanding, we can gain no
to Spmoza, when men try to search for truth in Scripknowledge ... (85)
ture, they are only succeeding in turning philosophy into
superstition. As they vainly try to use their reason in a
In short, miracles defy human understanding and stand territory not fit for reason, all men's philosophical specuoutside of the deductive order of the universe so that they lations cannot help but become mere superstitions. This
can teach man nothing about God. For, as miracles can- wrongful application of philosophy results in both the
not be grasped by the understanding-not "clearly and contortion of philosophy into superstition and, more imdistinctly understood"-they cannot be the basis for fur- portantly, the usurpation of religion by this superstition.
ther deductive reasonings. (85) Therefore, men shouldn' t
While Spinoza's claims about prophecy and miracJes
make miracles out to be more than what they are. Spinoza could be accepted by some without too much grief, his
views miracles simply as powerful tools used in the nar- treatment of Scripture is undoubtedly offensive to anyratives of Scripture that appeal to men's imaginations. one who has been reared by orthodoxy and holds the Bible
. (91) In this view, miracles arouse men in such a way as as The Book. For example, Spinoza is nothing short of
to promote both admiration for, and devotion to, God.
insulting when he makes his claim that the Bible is a
Since miracles do not afford men sure knowledge of collection of histories written by authorities but compiled
God, they do not constitute a dogma of religion. There- promiscuously by historians. (135) Rather than accept
fore, under no circumstance should men solidify their that there are some inconsistencies in the Bible which
faith in God solely on account of the doctrine of miracles. like the causes of miracles, are beyond human under~
As Spinoza points out, Scripture does not teach the doc- standing, Spinoza is quick to conclude that the Bible is a
trine of miracles "as a truth necessary to salvation ... there- corrupted text.
fore everyone is free to think on the subject as he
On this point Spinoza surrenders to no one, not even
likes ... " (97) Thus, Spinoza has pruned another branch the illustrious Jewish commentator Maimonides. To
from the tree of orthodox religion by debunking the be- Spinoza no biblical scholar has presented a satisfactory
lief that miracles can bestow on man a knowledge of God. method of interpreting Scripture which can do away with
While his onslaught against prophecy and miracles all the inconsistencies contained therein . In fact, Spinoza
is quite clear, Spinoza's aggression towards orthodox claims that Maimonides' method of Scriptural interprereligion is best elucidated with an examination of his re- tation is not only unsatisfactory but may be dismissed as
view of the canon of Hebrew and Christian Scripture. "harmful, useless and absurd." (118)
At the heart of Spinoza's analysis is the following
Again, he begins his report by criticizing previous bibli- ·
cal interpretation. He states that "scriptural interpreta- c1aim: The Pentateuch was not written by Moses- which
tion proceeds by the examination of Scripture, and infer- had been the traditional Jewish claim-but rather it was
ring the intention of its authors as a legitimate concJu- compiled from many sources by the prophet Ezra. ( 130)
sion from its fundamental principles." (99) In other For anyone, Jewish or Christian, the enormity of this
words, although they have tried, men cannot possibly c1aim is positively shocking. God's authorship of His
strive to deduce Scripture from reason. For Scripture is books of revelation is precariously challenged. Could
filled with both narratives containing miracles and rev- any other claim be more damaging?

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�Hence, Spinoza completes what he promised in his
preface, namely "to point out the misconceptions which,
like scars of our former bondage, still disfigure our notion of religion," (6) by exposing Scripture for what it
really is, rather than the collection of philosophic speculations and theological prejudices that men have mistakenly introduced into it. Hence, he has returned religion
to its proper domain by making light of how under the
rule of philosophy, Scripture was corrupted by superstition.
Yet, it is here , when Spinoza's interpretative
"method" is at its most incisive, that a remarkable change
of face occurs. Amidst the carnage, Spinoza claims that
true religious faith is not only unscathed, but finally free
of its "trappings of superstition" so that its proper splendor can shine forth brilliantly. In fact, the faith that arises
from religion, now emancipated from superstition, possesses-in Spinoza's eyes-a stature that allows it to
become the centerpiece of his political theory.
Spinoza signals this rebirth at the outset of the fourteenth chapter of his treatise: "Let us recapitulate the
chief aim and object of Scripture; this will indicate a
standard by which we may define faith." (183) That
standard, the solid and true foundation upon which to
rebuild faith, is stated earlier by Spinoza as: "For from
the Bible itself we learn, without the smallest difficultly
or ambiguity, that its cardinal precept is : To love God
above all things, and one's neighbour as one's self." (1 72)
With this as its main precept, Spinoza declares that the
aim and object of Scripture is thus to teach men obedience. (183) For Spinoza, obedience to God is the cornerstone of religion. (172) In fact, to him it is the only
sure ground that religion has to stand on, and without
which it would crumble completely and be buried again
under " the trammels of superstition."
The structure of the treatise is now set into relief:
Spinoza's purpose in the first thirteen chapters is to rid
religion of all dogmas which men have mistakenly deduced from their reason-rather than from Scripture
alone-which do not support the Bible's main precept.
With this work complete, Spinoza, in the fourteenth chapter, builds his argument for a new foundation of religion
based upon the aforementioned precept. His construction of this religion based on deductive reasonings that
begin with Scripture alone, and not superstition, is so
thorough that not only is he able to generate new dogmas from it, but this religion in turn becomes the heart
of his defense for political liberty and the freedom of
thought.
Faith, according to Spinoza, "consists in a knowl-

edge of God, without which obedience to Him would be
impossible, and which the mere fact of obedience to Hirn
implies." (184) As this definition follows his earlier
claim that the fundamental precept of both Hebrew and
Christian scripture is love of one's neighbour, and that
the Bible' s purpose is to teach men to obey the will of
God, it follows-for Spinoza-that obedience to God is
the same as loving one's neighbour. (183) In addition to
considering this precept as the proper foundation for religion, Spinoza also con siders it as the standard by which
faith is defined.
Hence, as obedience is the standard for the definition of faith, obedience precedes faith . To put it another
way, Spinoza claims that to obey God is to know him.
Since without knowledge of something it is impossible
to obey it, as Spinoza points out, men could not even
begin to obey something they did not know. This is, in
fact, one of the subtlest points in Spinoza's treatise. To
grasp it fully keep in mind that for Spinoza, knowledge
is not of who or what God is, but rather an understanding of the meaning of God inasmuch as is necessary for
obedience. (176) And since man can only know God by
obeying Him, obedience both implies and is the origin
of knowledge of God, which is faith .
Following this declaration of the true definition of
faith, Spinoza reveals several consequences which arise
from this definition . The first is that "faith is not salutary in itself, but only in respect to the obedience it implies." (184) Next, he states that any man who is obedient is necessarily faithful. (184) Or, in other words, if a
man is faithful , he must needs be obedient, while at the
same time a man is not faithful if he is not obedient. His
obedience, moreover, is only demonstrated through his
deeds, namely loving his neighbour through acts of justice and charity to him. Hence, Spinoza concludes that,
as quoted in Scri pture, "Faith without works is dead,"
and that a man is only judged "faithful or unfaithful by
his works." (18 5) This accords precisely with Spinoza's
words in the preface: "If deeds could only be made the
grounds of criminal charges , and words were always allowed to pass free . .. " (6) Soon, when we examine
Spinoza's account of the beginning of the state, the importance of this conclusion will bear even greater relevance.
For now, however, consider again the design of the
treatise. Spinoza has spent the first thirteen chapters eroding the foundation of religion until he found the one, true
foundation upon which he could construct a new religion. The Archimedean point for his ecumenical labors
is the precept to love one's neighbour. And as the love

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of. one's neighb.our is. to obey God, so obedience implies
just and mercifu!, ~he Exemplar of the true life,
faith. Yet obedience 1s only displayed through works so
1
th~t· w?osoever is ignorant of or disbelieves in
a man can only be judged faithful or unfaithful by his
Hts existence cannot obey Him or know Him as
works , and faith becomes a measure of one's deeds r
a Judge. (186-187)
s.hort, faith leaves men free to say or think what ~he~
hke, as long as their deeds conform to obediance of God.
Remember that Spinoza does not believe his dogmas to
So after b~ginning with a universal precept, Spinoza
reveal the truth. of God's nature·, the1'r onl y purpose is to
.
now has a umversal rule: Faith is a measure of deeds .
mculcate obedience.
and men are judged ·only according to this rule. As this
Of faith then Spinoza believes he has shown that it
ru1~ foll~ws clearly from what has already been proved,
Spmoz~ 1s able to deduce dogmas for his newly articu?o.es not so much require truth as piety, and that
la~ed fa1t?. Yet before listing them, Spinoza states someit ts only quickening and pious through obedithm? wh1~h sheds a bright light on the nature and scope
e~ce, consequently no one is faithful save by obeof his project:
dience alone. The best faith is not necessarily
possessed by him who displays the best reasons
Lastly it follows that faith does not demand that
but by him who displays the best fruits of justic~
dogmas sh.ould be true as that they should be piand ~ha~ity. How salutary and necessary this
ous-that ~s •. such as will stir up the heart to obey
doctrme is for a state, in order that men may dwell
... Thus it is not true doctrines which are extogether in peace and concord. . . 0 8 8 )
pressly required by the Bible, so much as doctrines necessary for obedience. . . ( 185)
A~ we will see momentarily Spinoza is prepared to weave
this strand of "universal religion" into the fab . f
l' ·
.
nc o po
This conclusion has significant implications First
~heal hfe. Yet before he proceeds he undertakes one
ac.cording to Spinoza, men need only obey God ~o hav~
fihnal task: to separate once and for all faith and philosofaith, .or ~ather to know God. This claim is the key to p y.
esta~hshmg an equality among all men. Regardless of
Ac.tually this divorce has already been accomplished.
the time, age, situation, language, or any other condition
Fo: ~pmoza makes it quite clear that when the orthodox
tha~ ma~ separate them, all men are equally able to love
rehg1?us .autho:ities began looking for truth rather than
their neighbour, thereby obeying God and thus coming
meanmg m ~cnpture they confused the aims of philosoto know God. Men don't need to be specially chosen as
ph~ and ~a1th . . The end of philosophy, according to
?od'~ people, nor do they have need of a supernatural
Spm~za, ts truth, whereas the end of faith is obedience
i~telh~ence to have a knowledge of God. Despite the
~tspanty among all the people who read the Bible, Chris- and p~~ty .. Hence, as their ends "are as wide apart as the
poles, fatt~ and p~ilosophy ought never to be conjoined.
tians, Jews, Turks, etc., can all alike obey God. Spinoza
(189~ Agam we fmd another explanation of Spinoza's
has fo~n.d one aspect that is universal to all men, of evmerciless attack on orthodox relig1'on·. The erosion o f
·
~ry rehg10n: obedience to God through justice and charth~ foundation of religion and the separation of faith from
ity. N~ one, a~c ~rding to his universal rule, can deny a
ph1lo~ophy a~e, in fact, one and the same. In other words,
man fat~h who IS_J~st and charitable. In short, Spinoza's
as S~moza discarded all the old prejudices and misconr~storat10n of rehg10n and faith has resulted in the estabcept10ns, that is, the philosophic speculations which men
lishment of a " universal religion," one that is based on
had wr?ngly layered on top of Scripture, he was in fact
deeds alone.
separatm~ religion from philosophy. He dismembered
From the "universal religion" stems a universal faith
~11 the. a~1en branches of philosophy that were disfigura~d th~s Spinoza deduces the dogmas that accompan; ·
mg rehg10n. Fo.r Spinoza, religion and philosophy stand
this faith, na~ely only those that are absolutely necescomple.tely dtf~erent foundations. Thus, only by clearsar~ for o~ed1ence and without which obedience would
mg a.11 .ph1losoph1cal speculations from the foundation
be 1mpos~1ble. .(186) The first of these dogmas is the
of :ehg1on could Spinoza permanently separate faith from
one doctrme which lays the foundation for those that folph~losophy. As religion was shown to be separate from
low:
ph1loso~hy, so too is faith in that it stems solely from the
foundat1?n of religion-whatever pertains to religion,
That God or a Supreme Being exists, sovereignly
necessarily pertains to faith also. Furthermore, this sepa-

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�ration was essential in order for Spinoza to salvage the
one, true faith that had been lost-religion and faith could
only be restored to their proper foundation by casting off
all the vain adornments and embellishments of philosophy. Only by returning them, moreover, to their proper
form could Spinoza establish his "universal religion,"
one that is based on deeds alone.
If only this had been the extent of Spinoza's restoration of faith, then his tum from a destroyer of faith to its
savior would have been remarkable enough. Yet this is
only the beginning. For now that Spinoza has rescued
faith from what he considers to be crippling superstition,
he intends to include this strand of theology into the workings of political life.
In order to better appreciate Spinoza's final elevation of faith, that is, its incorporation into the state, we
must take one last step backwards for just a moment.
Having seen the theological part of the treatise, we must
consider the political side of Spinoza's treatise before
the two can be united as one.
For Spinoza, government is fundamental for the betterment of mankind. He states:

to do so, for I believe it to be of all forms of government the most natural, and the most consonant with. individual liberty. In it no one transfers his natural rights so absolutely that he has
no further voice in affairs, he only hands it over
to the majority of a society, whereof he is a unit.
Thus all men remain, as they were in the state of
nature, equals. (207)
For Spinoza, democracy is the best form of government
because it is most suited for granting the greatest amount
of freedom in a state. While these comments are altogether too brief in sketching the complexity and subtlety
of Spinoza's political thought, they should suffice in
showing where Spinoza's political allegiances lie.
Having established a democracy, a state in which liberty can be granted unfettered, Spinoza wants to extend
that freedom as far as possible within the state: namely,
all the way to the inclusion of freedom of thought and
speech. In fact, freedom of thought and speech is not
only a "virtue in itself' for Spinoza, but it is instrumental for the well-being and preservation of the state. For,
in his preface to the treatise, Spinoza stated:

... the ultimate aim of government is not to rule,
or restrain , by fear, but contrariwise to free every man from fear, that he may live in all possible security; in other words, to strengthen his
natural right to exist and work without injury to
himself or others. (258-259)
That is, government is necessary for all men because it
makes men free. Or, as Spinoza points out, "the true aim
of government is liberty." (259) Liberty is of utmost
importance for Spinoza. For when men are held in check
by fear, they cannot live properly as rational beings; it is
only when they are freed from fear, that they can "develop their minds and bodies" and progress in the noble
pursuits of science and the liberal arts . (261) For Spinoza
it seems that without liberty and the security of public
peace, men might as well be beasts rather than rational
beings. Or to put it another way, the liberty afforded by
government allows men to enjoy God's greatest gift to
them-their reason . (59)
Democracy is for Spinoza the ideal (or as close to
ideal as possible) political association. In fact, the one
political issue that Spinoza seems least afraid to declare
is his love for democracy:
I think I have now shown sufficiently clearly the
basis of a democracy: I have especially desired

I have believed that I should be undertaking no
ungrateful or unprofitable task, in demonstrating that not only can such freedom be granted
without prejudice to the public peace, but also
that without such freedom, piety cannot flourish
nor the public peace be secure. (6)
No one can stifle men's thoughts, not even the sovereign
has enough power to lay down and uphold laws designed
to make men think in a certain way. If, however, they
attempt to charge men for "crimes of opinions," they
will only succeed in "surrounding victims with an appearance of martyrdom, and raise feelings of pity and
revenge rather than of terror." (265) While such law s
are calculated solely to bridle the thoughts and speech of
men, they in fact serve no other purpose but to inspire
men to seditions and crime, both of which lead only to
the sinking of the ship of state. Therefore, since men
cannot be prevented from making their own judgments,
the only remedy for the situation is to grant men this
freedom. While it does have some disadvantages, the
advantages are far greater-in Spinoza's eyes-and more
instrumental in the securing of the public peace.
The only way, however, for Spinoza to grant men
the freedom of thought and speech within the state is to
bind men by their actions alone, while leaving their rea-

son and judgment "free and unshackled." For example
he says that
'
the safest way for a state is to lay down the rule
that religion is comprised solely in the exercise
of c?arity and justice, and that the rights of rulers m sacred, no less than in secular matters
should merely have to do with actions, but tha~
every man should think what he likes and say
what he thinks. (265)
~eeping in mind Spinoza's declaration that the ultimate
aim of government is liberty, and democracy is the form
of government b~st suited to this end, we can begin to
underst~nd the umty of Spinoza's treatise. It is now clear
why .spmoza considers this a theological and a political
treatise.
H~r~, fi,~ally, is where the aforementioned "universal r~hg10n of deeds. takes on its greatest importance
and is elevated by Spmoza to its acme. For Spinoza's
only m~ans for gra~ting men freedom of thought and
speech IS to make piety and religion-in addition to all
ob~ervances of the. sovereign law-consist entirely in
action, there~y leavmg men's judgment and their reason
free. Accordmg to Spinoza, therefore:

If we hold to the p~inciple that a man, s loyalty to
the state should be Judged, like his loyalty to God
from his actions only-namely from his charit;
towards his neighbours, we cannot doubt that the
best ~ovemment will allow freedom of philoso~h1cal speculation no less than of religious
behef. (261)
Thu.s faith sets the standard for the state-only by followmg the standard that Spinoza had set for his " . 1 f · h"
umver
sa a1t can i:nen be granted freedom of thought and
sp~ech: That is, through faith men are judged by the
umversal rule-a man is judged solely on account of his
deeds. Hence, faith is the only means by which the freedom necessary for the security of the public peace can
be gr~nt~d. Or, for Spinoza, to extend the limit of freedom m his democracy to include the freedom of thought
~nd . speech, h~ ~an only do so by the integration of his
umve~sal rehg10n" that is, a religion based on deeds
alone, mto the political life of the state.
~pino~a does not seem to give a full explanation of
the mcept1on of his "universal religion" into the fab .
of _the .state .. Despite this minor gap, one aspect of
umon IS elucidated clearly by Spinoza: The sovereign is

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c.rucial to th~ seamless combination of theology and politics. F~r Spmo~a, the sovereign is the entity that wields
power whether It be the body politic as a wh 1
t · b d f
o e, a ceram : o yo. men, or one man. Upon entering the compact m formmg the state, all men agree to hand over their
power-and. therefore their natural right-to th e sover·
eign. ~y virtue ?f this right to rule over all men, the
sover~1gn po~er is thus the origin of justice in the state.
To .spmoza, m fact, justice exists only through the sov~re1gn . .(246-24 7) T?erefore, if the "universal religion"
IS to be mc.orporated ~nto the state, it must be codified by
the s?ver~1gn. As Spmoza succinctly declares: "religion
acqmr~s It~ force as law solely from the decrees of the
s~vere1gn'. (245) That is, without the force of law relig10n remams only a "universal precept of reason',' and
has no s~ch p~wer as to compel men any differently than
does theu desue or passion.
In f~~t, as Spinoza points out, men only obey when
they are und~r the fear of a greater evil, or the hope of a
greater go?d, (203) that is, when they are bound by the
law established by the sovereign power. He nee, re l' .
.
.
1g10n
can~ot be p.ut mto practice or "received as the law of a
particular km~dom" until it is codified." (248) Rememb~r that for Spm?za religion consists exclusively in obedience to God ~n t?e form of loving one's neighbour
through .act~ of !usttce and charity. However, the existence of Justice IS wholly dependent upon the sovereign
power. There~ore, by necessity, it follows for Spinoza
t?at the sovereign's rule is crucial to effect the codification of religion into the legal order of the state.
One final ~titch must be made in order for Spinoza
to com~l~te his seemingly seamless union of theology
~nd politics: the deliverance of all religious authority
mto the hands of t~e sovereign. Spinoza is quite insist~nt that the ~overe1gn must be given both civil and relig10us authonty; as the codification of religion is depende~t upon the decrees of the sovereign, it follows for
Spm~z~ that the sovereigns are the "proper interpreters
of rehg10n and piety." (249) For:
... it is c~rtain that duties towards one's country
are the highest that man can fulfill; for, if government be taken away, no good thing can last
all falls into dispute, anger and anarchy reign un~
checked amid universal fear. Consequently there
can be no duty towards our neighbour which
~ould not become an offence if it involved injury to the whole state, nor can there be any offence _against our duty towards our neighbour, or
anythmg but loyalty in what we do for the sake

�of preserving the state. (249)
Hence, if men are to obey God while simultaneously
conducting themselves in a way that is most conducive
to the preservation of the state (i.e. securing the public
peace) , the only solution-for Spinoza-is that "the outward observances of religion, and all the external practices of piety should be brought into accordance with the
public peace and well-being if. .. men would obey God
rightly." (249) Said another way, Divine law must be
made to conform to sovereign law. Spinoza seems to
believe that the only way to accomplish this successfully
is to give the sovereign authority over both civil and religious matters. All tension between church and state is
resolved as they are united once and for all by having the
sovereign of the state absorb the authority of the church.
While this solution may appear altogether one-sided in
favor of the state, in the remaining chapters of the treatise Spinoza argues vehemently that this union does not
injure the church but is actually in the best interests of
both the state and the church.
On the side of religion, the result is the final establishment of God's kingdom on earth. For, as Spinoza
points out,
inasmuch as the kingdom of God consists entirely
in rights applied to justice and charity or to true
religion, it follows that (as we asserted) the kingdom of God can only exist among men through
the means of the sovereign. (247)
That is, God 's kingdom can only exist on earth through
the sovereign. Without the sovereign there is no justice,
and justice is the sole foundation of God's kingdom as
Spinoza declared earlier. Without the codification of religion, therefore, the whole idea of God's kingdom and
religion is nothing more than a "universal precept of reason" that cannot compel men to obedience more than
can any other desire or passion.
Meanwhile, on the side of the state, Spinoza has finally found a way to secure public peace. By eroding
religion and then resurrecting it on its proper foundation-obedience to God-Spinoza gave birth to his "universal faith" on the basis of a universal rule: A man
should be judged only according to his deeds . Then, as
he wove this standard into his political fabric he was finally able to grant men freedom of thought and speech.
In sum, the structure of the Theologico -Political Treatise is best captured by two words: separation and combination. Spinoza set for himself the task of demonstrat-

ing that not only can the freedom of thought and speech
be granted without jeopardizing the public peace, but
moreover, such freedom is necessary in order for piety
to flourish and the public peace be secured. (6) As the
title of the treatise betrays, Spinoza believes he accomplished this by combining theology and politics. Yet
before this combination could be wrought, he had to first
make a separation, namely the separation of faith and
philosophy. Only by clearing the philosophical speculations and false notions that disfigured religion, could
Spinoza find the one, true cornerstone of religion-obedience to God through
love to one's neighbour. Upon this "universal" foundation, Spinoza then resurrected faith, one altogether free
of "credulity and prejudices" and entirely separate from
philosophy. Once Spinoza had thus cleansed faith , then,
and only then, could he implement it as the single thread
for the weaving together of theology and politics
seamlessly into the fabric of the state. Hence, the separation is the means to combination, the end of which is
the securing of public peace th.rough allowing the freedom of thought and speech to men.
Spinoza's enterprise, however, is ingeniously twotiered. Not only is his separation of faith and philosophy
the means to his end, but it is, astonishingly enough, an
end in and of itself. Although freeing faith from the hindrances of philosophy is Spinoza's expressed end, it
seems, more impo rtantly, that philosophy is finally left
to its own devices . For, once Spinoza had separated faith
and philosophy, he declared :

seemingly .e~er-presen.t, .floating on the periphery, never
wholly qmttmg the v1s10n of either the author or the
reade~. In fa~t, in his preface Spinoza overtly declared
that his treatise was meant for "philosophical readers"
o~ly, and no one else, especially not the multitude whose
mmds ~~e-and perhaps forever will be-bent towards
s~perst~tlon. Furthermore, philosophy appears at the crucial pomt of the treatise: As mentioned above at th
~oment when Spinoza has finished with his ex,amina~
hon of theol?gy an? is about to embark upon his political undertakmg, philosophy is given due recognition It
s.eems that ~h~losophy stands between theology and p~li­
~1~s, and th.is is further supported by the realization that
It is the philosopher who grasped the delicate workings
o~ theology a~d politics. Could it be, then, that what is
viewed as Spmoza's end is really his means? While the
free.dam of thought and speech is the means to the protect10n of the public peace, perhaps this preservation is
not the end, but is itself the means to the truly desired
end-the freedom to philosophize.

Faith, therefore, allow s the greatest latitude in
philosophic speculation, allowing us without
blame to think what we like about anything, and
only condemning as heretics and schismatics,
those who teach opinions which tend to produce
obstinacy, hatred, strife and anger. . . (189)
In short, the freedom of thought and speech-now seen
as the freedom to philosophize-is both the means to the
securing of the public peace while at the same time a
noble end in itself.
How is one to grasp this multi-layered undertaking?
Both the multitude and philosophers benefit from the
implementation of Spinoza's enterprise. From his presentation, on the one hand, it seems that Spinoza has tailored his treatise to serve the best interests of the multitude by affording them the preservation of the public
peace. Yet, while the freeing of philosophy is not the
central point nor the expressed end of the treatise, it is

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�The Offense of Socrates: A Look at the Philosopher in Athens

D

Mary Dietsch
committed no crime and that his behavior in no way harms
I tell you that to let no day pass without discussing goodness and all the other subj~c~s about
which you hear me talking and exammmg b?th
myself and others is really the very best. thmg
that a man can do, and that life without this sort
of examination is not worth living ..."
Apology 38 1

Athens.
Socrates then deviates from the critics' charges to
explain the origin of his unpopularity. ':ith them. ~e explains that his behavior reflects a spmtual. revelat10~ to
him at Delphi declaring that no one was wiser than him.
So, compelled by a spiritual duty, Socrates de~eloped th.e
habit of questioning individuals thought wise by their
fellow Athenians to discover if the oracle spoke.the truth.
The approach taken by Socrates in Plato's ~~ology Proceeding from one interview to another, he.discov~red
to defend himself against the accusations of cnttcs and no one to be wiser than him. Having explamed this to
the comrades of Meletus emerges as an exhib~tion of the the court, Socrates then seeks to broaden his defens~. He
true "crime" for which the court condemns him. He at- decides to explore in court the breadth of a p~1t1cul_ar
tempts to expose the true purpose of the cou~t's proceed- man's knowledge. However, in searching for this, h~ irings and seeks to inform the jury of the precise nature of ritates a sore at the heart of the public's grudge aga~n~t
that truth. In the first two paragraphs of the Apology, the him, for it was the result of previous encounters that mi"truth" appears four times, culminating in Socrates' tially gained Socrates their disdain. .
word
h"
declaration: "From me you shall hear the who1 trut .
e
Thus, by revealing his search to discover .the nature
( 17 c) He reveals the truth to the jurors th~oug? the way of human wisdom, it appears that Socrates aims to ag·
hich he conducts his defense. So begms his address gravate the jurors . He systematica~ly ~~poses to them
mw
.
.. bf
as he faces the accusations of his pubhc cnttcs e ore the types of ignorance displayed by mdividuals who beconfronting the specific indictment brought by Meletus, lieve they know more than they actually .do. H~ att~cks
all of the prominent members of Atheman society . the
Anytus, and Lycon.
.
Pronouncing the most dangerous in~uence i~ the politicians who know absolutely nothing; the poe~s who
court to be the public's inaccurate perceptt?n of _his ac- by their instincts appear to know something, but m fact
tivities, he considers the charges levied agamst him .. He do not; and the artisans who possess the knowledge of a
suggests that the affidavit might read "criminal med~lmg, particular skill, but also presume to possess know_l~dge
in that he inquires into things below the earth and m the of other things. In one fell swoop, Socrates humiha~es
sk and makes the weaker argument defeat the stronger, the Athenians by clustering them into various categones
an~ teaches others to follow his example." (l:b) Soc.r~tes of ignorance. Recounting his discoveries'.~e _now taunts
quickly denounces these charges as havin~ httle vahdity. the jurors , knowing full well that the p~httcians, poets,
He declares that he has no knowledge of either the.heav- and artisans present in the courtroom will be aware th~t
ens or the earth, and unlike the character Socrates m The he ascribed a type of ignorance to each of them. It is
Clouds, he has never discussed the relationship betw~en because of this particular behavior that he accumulated
weak and strong arguments. He also asserts that, havmg
enemies in the past.
never imposed a fee to educate others, he may not be
Socrates next endeavors to demonstrate befor~ th.e
considered a teacher. He challenges the jur?rs to ask a~y court his exact method of discerning ho_w mu_ch an mdtAthenian if his declaration is false. In domg ~o, h~ m- vidual knows. He proceeds in this direct10n with a couple
vites his critics to consider whether or not his actions of purposes. First, he wants to refute the formal court
accurately represent his reputation. He alleges that he has charges, not as they officially stand but as they reflect the
court's misinterpretation of why he stands accused .. Second, he wants to demonstrate his activity a~ a philoso1 All references refer to The Collected Dialogues of Plato ,
Edith Hamilton and Huntington Cairns, eds. Princeton; pher, the true "crime" for which he stands tnal. ~ence,
Socrates addresses Meletus directly before ~he Jurors ,
Princeton University Press, 1961.
for this accuser epitomizes a particular type of ignorance.

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Meletus represents the aggrieved poets whom Socrates
previously described as having apparent knowledge
guided by instinct, but no actual knowledge. In the crossexamination before the jurors, Socrates attempts to prove
that his accuser speaks in ignorance even as he seems to
know.
Now Meletus has asserted that Socrates "is guilty of
corrupting the minds of the young, and of believing in
deities of his own invention instead of the gods recognized by the state." (24c) When questioned, Meletus
maintains that all Athenians except Socrates are a good
influence on the young. Here Socrates is able to point
out to the court his accuser's ignorance. For he asserts
that only skilled trainers have the ability to improve their
wards, and educators, like trainers, are few rather than
many. Therefore, education hinges not on the ability of
the entire Athenian population to teach, but on that of a
select number of educators. Meletus is then manipulated
to alter his indictment to claim an intentional harm of the
young. Thereupon Socrates replies, "Either I have not
been a bad influence, or it is unintentional, so that in either case your accusation is false." (26a)
The first charge being dispelled, he proceeds to the
second one. Again he influences Meletus to amend the
indictment and this time accuse him of preaching atheistic beliefs. Socrates also refutes this charge; arguing that
one who believes in spiritual activities must likewise believe in deities. To demonstrate that he is not an atheist,
he then refers to the spiritual activities in which he has
been engaged: questioning the oracle a Delphi and fulfilling his divinely inspired quest as a philosopher. Concluding this portion of his defense, he chastises Meletus.
"There is no avoiding the conclusion that you brought
this charge against me as a test of my wisdom, or else in
despair of finding a genuine offense of which to accuse
me." (27e)
So, the philosopher is successful in both purposes.
He clears himself of the set of amended charges; and most
importantly, he allows the jurors to witness philosophy
in action. Here his performance speaks for itself. He is
not so interested in proving himself innocent of the formal charges as he is in providing the jurors with a dramatization of the events. which offended Meletus and his
colleagues and subsequently brought him to trial. He now
occupies center stage and offers Athens the truth, that is,
the truth of his actions as they have been witnessed
throughout his life.
For Socrates, the charges brought by Meletus are not
of concern solely as they pertain to his own safety. He
neglects to disprove Meletus' initial charges and instead

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amends them in order to argue their validity. This alone
demonstrates that he is little interested in the indictment.
What he is interested in, though, is elucidating the ·disparity between what an individual thinks he knows and
what an individual really does not know. In this, he demonstrates the profession which has occupied his entire
life. Meletus is the model of an individual who appears
to know something, as for example the offenses committed by Socrates, when in fact he knows nothing . The
chief focus of the interrogation of Meletus is not the refutation of the charges, but something else more important.
It appears that Socrates is more concerned with his
so-called spiritual duty. His life as a phil~sopher is to
comprehend the truth, and his desire to illuminate for others the limitations and aspirations of human kno~ledge
reflects this concern. Socrates cares little about clarifying for Meletus the nature of human wisdom, but he does
offer the court this demonstration of exposing the truth.
In doing this, Socrates does not give the jurors what they
want, not because he does not shed tears, but because he
fails to provide them with a customary defense . What he
gives them, though, is something much more important.
He presents them with what they need to determine his
guilt or innocence, for if they recognize his defense as a
reenactment of the so-called crime he is actually accused
of committing, then they can reach a j ust verdict.
In questioning Meletus before the court and addressing the jury directly, Socrates turns away from the standard environment essential for a philosopher's inquiry.
For he normally converses wi th indi viduals either on a
personal basis, or within a small group. His private mission to expose what an individual knows and to help others attain goodness acquires a different quality in the
courtroom. Euthyphro previously remarked to Socrates
that this would be the case. He stated that Meletus brought
accusations against him "well knowing how easily things
can be misrepresented to the crowd ." (2b) This is precisely the case during the defen se since what Socrates
asserts insults many Athenians who consider him arrogant.
.
Socrates never hides his guilt in committing the
"crime" of philosophy, for his behavior faithfully reflects
that of a lover of wisdom who seeks to know the breadth
of human knowledge. By exhibiting the true nature of
his life as a philosopher, he acts as if it were that life
standing trial. He has put the Athenian court into the
position of having to determine whether or not the philosopher has a right to operate in the city. He remarks,
"So long as I draw breath and have my faculties, I shall
never stop practicing philosophy and exhorting you and

�elucidating the truth for everyone that I meet." (29c)
Socrates flaunts his offense by daring to philosophize
whether or not the law permits him.
Hence it is obvious that Socrates will not allow his
behavior to be censored by the state. He implies that
there exists a natural order in the universe ranging from
what is most important to what is least important. Man
obeys God first, as Socrates does with respect to the revelation at Delphi, and obeys the state second. God deserves man's primary consideration since His pronouncements are faultless and indisputable. Therefore, Socrates
maintains that individuals must adhere to the manner in
which God commands them to act.
His offense is a grievous one in the eyes of the state.
That is to say, he will continue to philosophize in Athens
despite any decree attempting to prohibit his behavior.
Only if the state physically prevents him will he cease to
engage in philosophy. He goads the jury with this information, declaring, "I am not going to alter my conduct,
not even ifl have to die a hundred deaths." (30c) Such a
statement leaves little latitude for interpretation and
Socrates' critics have every right to be infuriated by his
declaration. His impudence provokes the jurors again
and again, especially as he continues to insult them by
alluding to the extraordinary nature of his occupation.
So necessary is Socrates' profession to his existence
that at one point he compares himself to Achilles. He
remarks:

you." (30e) Socrates' examples only gain the contempt
of his jurors as he proceeds from one infuriating analogy
to another.
His conduct indicates a man who does not fear recrimination, and who indeed tempts his jurors to reprove
his insolence. Strange though it may seem, he purposely
irritates the Athenians and arouses their disdain. A fear
of death does not inhibit him, for he expected a guilty
verdict from the beginning of the trial . In later contemplating his defense, he reflects, "I [was] quite clear that
the time had come when it was better for me to die and
be released from my distractions." (4 ld) His desire to
pass from life to death is evident at the trial in his whole
behavior while even his divine voice does not oppose his
defense.
Socrates' trial was the first instance where he entered
the political forum of the courtroom. It seems that the
only reason he decided to attend the trial was because his
divine voice did not prohibit him as it had in the past.
For he admits that his divine voice prevented him from
engaging in politics previously: "If I had tried long ago
to engage in politics, I should long ago have lost my life,
without doing any good either to you or myself." (3ld)
Yet now he engages in politics by appearing before the
court and defending himself. He must have been aware
that the nature of politics had not changed and that the
encounter between politics and philosophy would not be
a pleasant one. By appearing at the trial, he made a tacit
agreement with the state to comply with the final verdict.
Not only that, he is conscious that the conflict between
Where a man has once taken up his stand, either
politics and philosophy could only be resolved with the
because it seems best to him or in obedience to
dissolution of one, and that one would necessarily inhis orders, there I believe he is bound to remain
and face the danger, taking no account of death
clude him.
However, Socrates neglects to reveal in his defense
or anything else before dishonor. (28d)
that he suffers nothing whether he continues to philosoBoth he and Achilles fear living an "ignoble life" much phize or whether he dies. In fact, Socrates will gain a
more than they fear death. He then continues later to great deal when his soul is released from his body, for in
assert "the law of God [does not] permit a man to be the Phaedo he asserts
harmed by a worse." (30d) The announcement reflects
We (i.e., philosophers) are convinced that if we
his belief that he is a better Athenian than his accusers
are ever to have pure knowledge of anything, we
insofar as he is wiser. His wisdom includes an awaremust get rid of the body and contemplate things
ness of his state of knowledge and the confidence that
by themselves with the soul by itself. (66e)
man should not fear that which he is incapable of comprehending. He also contends that he offers the greatest
service to Athens by acting as an agitator and keeping He also explains that this liberation of the soul from the
the Athenians from becoming complacent. In compar- body cannot occur "until God sends some compulsion
ing himself with a stinging fly, Socrates proposes that he like the one which we are facing now." (62c) So it apis a gift from God to prevent the thoroughbred horse from pears that a guilty verdict will oblige him by releasing
growing lazy. Each day he must "settle here, there, ev- him from the bonds of the living.
erywhere, rousing, persuading, reproving every one of
Yet Socrates chastises the state for inflicting more

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harm on itself than on him by reaching a guilty verdict.
He asserts that philosophizing improves the dty, and that
A~hens would lose its single best influence with his demise. It seems strange that he who wishes to remove his
mortal bonds would reprove his executioners. However
Socrates desires what is best for both himself and for thos~
whom he leads to a better understanding of human wis?om. As long as he lives, he will aid them in understandmg ~nowledge. Still, he also recognizes that he cannot
elucidate the truth if an individual refuses his assistance
At his trial, the jurors, on behalf of the Athenians.
refuse t~ acce~t this assistance. Perhaps this explain~
Socrates surprise that there is only a marginal difference
between the number of jurors voting for his conviction
an~ th.ose voting for his acquittal. He expected the vast
~a!onty to vote agai~st him, the philosopher, but a sigm~1cant n.umber vote m favor of him to continue his life
w1t~out disruption. Nevertheless, his verdict is guilty and
he Is sentenced to die. In reaching such a decision the
state declares the philosopher to be a criminal.
'
S~crates manipulates the state in his defense to place
the philosopher on trial. By forcing Athens to confront
~h~ conflict between P?litics and philosophy, he compels
It to earn the reputation ... of having put Socrates to
deat.h, "tha~ wise man.'" (38c) While he refers directly
to h1msel~, it may be reasoned that it.is the philosopher,
and not simply the man, who is put to death. His sentence reveals an ultimate truth: The philosopher and the
state ca~not co-~xi_st because the two are inherently in~omp~tible. Their mcompatibility stems from the state's
mab1.h.ty. to control the philosopher who is compeIIed daily
to cnt1c1ze and persuade men to understand the limited
scope of human knowledge.

47

�The Infinite Straight Line in Book I of Euclid's Elements

D

Dawn Shuman

In Book I of the Elements, Euclid uses certain basic
elements to design propositions and then manipulates
them to do the proofs. The line is one of these elements.
Euclid defines a line as a "breadthless length," (I Definition 2) and a straight line as "a line which lies evenly
with the points on itself." (I Def. 4) These terms and
definitions are certainly fascinating and complex in and
of themselves. However, I will focus on the line which
Euclid did not define: the infinite straight line.
The definitions of lines and straight lines do not exclude the possibility of infinite lines. Euclid simply does
not define infinity or finiteness, although he does use
"finite" in Postulate 2. Euclid defines a boundary as "that
which is an extremity of anything." (I Def. 13) I think
I would define as "finite" anything with boundaries and
as "infinite" anything without boundaries. Therefore anything which is finite has extremities, and anything which
is infinite does not. Euclid says that "the extremities of
a line are points," (I Def. 3) which could cause logical
problems since an infinite line has no extremities and
might therefore be supposed to have no points. But an
infinite line would have an infinite number of points upon
it without having any particular end-points. This is only
possible in infinite space. In some ways, infinite space
is a very impractical concept, because it is difficult to
imagine, and impossible to fully comprehend. In the
concrete world, every human being has location, and is
limited to comprehending those things within sensory
range. We can expand that range indefinitely, but we
cannot comprehend all of infinity because there is no
end to infinity. The same limitation of location applies
to the geometrical world, an assertation which I will support using Proposition 12 in Book I.
Proposition 12 is the first place "infinite" is used :
"To a given infinite straight line, from a given point which
is not on it, to draw a perpendicular straight line." When
first reading this enunciation, I found it very odd that
Euclid needed to prove that a perpendicular could be
drawn from any point not on the line to any infinite line,
in infinite space, rather than just using a particular finite
straight line and a particular point somewhere near it.
However, in a way, all of the propositions are described
and manipulated in infinite space. Most propositions are
applied to single elements or figures made up of several
interconnected elements. These figures, in order to be
truly universal, can theoretically be located anywhere in

t~on. That is, each element has its own particular loca-

tlo~, no 'matter what it happens to be, and those two locat10ns are related to one another. The proposition I put
forth forms the r~l~tionship in a more usually E_
uclidean
way than Propos1t10n 12, by placing the point within a
struc~r~ base~ ~n a line. Proposition 12 is unusual because it is exph~1tly in infinite space: The point may be
anywhere; the lme may be anywhere. However, in order
to understand how these elements relate to each other
we mus~ draw a circle, as large or small as it may need to
be: but it_ must be drawn to allow us to see the relationship._ Without this limitation we cannot draw the perpendicular. Just as when we read a work of philosophy
we ~an only understand what is claimed to the extent
that ~t rela~es ~o :-'~at is within our own experience, when
dealmg wit? m~m1t~ geometrical space we can only use
as m~ch of it as is within the limits of that relationship of
locat10n.

.

infinite space. In this case, with any givenfinite straight
line and point, a problem occurs because the elements
are not connected in the enunciation and there is no specificity as to their location. The point might be loc~ted
beyond the ends of the line, making it impossible to draw
the perpendicular. In infinite space, with an infinite line,
there will always be a sure relationship between the location of the infinite line and the location of the point,
hence allowing the universality needed in an Euclidean
proof.
This definite relationship between the locations of
any infinite straight line and any point is very impo~ant
to Proposition 12. The proof consists of picking, at random, an additional point on the other side of'the line,
and then, using the original point as the center, describing a circle with the radius the distance between the two
points. This cuts off a portion of the line which is close
enough to the point to have the perpendicular drawn to
it. If it did not, if there were no way of connecting the
two elements of line and point, the proposition would
not work. As long as there is that connection, it will.
With a similar connection, a perpendicular line from
almost any point to almost any line can be drawn using a
finite straight line and a point. Had Euclid done this
proposition it might have been like this:

To a given finite straight line, from any point
within the circle of which the finite straight line
is the diameter but not on the finite straight line,
to draw a line perpendicular to the given line.
(It also might be done using parallel lines or any
right-angled quadrilateral figure.) Let AB be the
given straight line, and let AB be bisected at point
C. Let the circle ABD be described, using point
C as the center and either AC or BC as the distance. Let point Ebe found anywhere within the
circle ABD not on AB. Now let a point F be
taken anywhere on the other side of line AB but
still within the circleABD, and let the circle FGH
be described with center E and distance EF. Let
the line BCA be drawn through to point G (on
ciq:le FGH). Connect the points E, G and E, H; ·
H being the point of intersection of line AB and
circle FGH. Let the angle GEH be bisected, intersecting line AB at point K.

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I .say that the bisecting line is also a line perpen?•cular to ACB. For GE is equal to EH, and EK
Is common, and angle GEK is equal to angle
HEK; therefore the triangles G KE and HKE are
similar and coincide. So angle GKE is equal to
angle HKE; and they are adjacent. But when a
straight line set upon a straight line makes the
adjacent angles equal to one another, each of the
angles is right, and the two lines are perpendicular to each other. So line EK, drawn from the
point, is perpendicular to line AB. Q.E.D.
This proof works partly because of the limitations
put o~ i~s universality. The point in this proposition must
be w1thm very circumscribed limits. On the other hand
t~e enunciation does contain its own universality: Th~
lme c~n b~ of any length; the points can be anywhere on
o?pos~te sides of the diameter of the circle, even on the
~Ir~l~ itself; the whole figure can be located anywhere in
mfm1te space. Euclid's enunciation is entirely universal, although the line and point must be connected and
hence are limited to the same plane of infinite space.
However, what is needed to draw the perpendicular and
to prove that the line is perpendicular once drawn is the
most striking and vitally important similarity between
Euclid's proof of Proposition 12 and this proof.
Both p~oofs take place within infinite space, that
~oncept which we are incapable of fully comprehend1~g ..In _o~der to delineate the relationship between the
lme, .mfm1te and finite, and the point by drawing a perpendicular, we must find what they have in common.
We must be able to find, with the particular line and point
we happen to be using, a relationship in terms of loca-

49

�Character, Author, Reader, God: What It Means to Read

0

Ulysses

Emily Katherine Brock

·

izations or others like them, we begin to see by what
paths m~aning will reveal itself in this book.
.
Joyce shows us Stephen Dedalus first: to tram us for
Marie:
.
Leopold Bloom later. The novel starts with t~ree chapJust as the day's long and the world ancient,
ters that deal exclusively with Stephen, before i~ chan~es
many people can stand all in the same place,
to a novel mainly about Bloom. First of all, this contmone after another.
ues the similarity between this book and the O~yssey,
Woyzeck, Georg Buchner, 1837
since that epic starts with several chapters centenng on
Telemachus' search for news of his father. Ho~ever, that
The thing that hath been, it is that ":hich shall
format also allows Joyce to characterize an easier person
be· and that which is done is that which shall be
first to get us trained for the important one, Bloom., w~en
do~e: and there is no new thing under t?e sun.
his ~tory comes. Stephen ha~ a very strong sense of himIs there any thing whereof it may b~ said, see,
self, and fits a fairly recogmzab~e templat.e as a young~
this is new? it has already been, m the ages
charismatic artist, conscious of his own actrnns a~d pass
before us.
ing judgment on the actions of those around .him. AlEcclesiastes 1. 9
though he is unhappy and confused, he r~mams a very
concrete individual personality. As well, it.helps us that
Joyce's previous novel, A Portrait of the Artist as a Young
PART I: LEARNING TO READ JOYCE'S W~RD~
Man was about Stephen, and thus that his charac~er has
James Joyce's Ulysses greets the reader :'ith a title
alre~dy been established, making him more easily unwhose symbolic meaning is very easy to decipher: ?bd h'
viously someone in the book will parallel the classical derstood.
Stephen stands out against the people ~roun. im,
character Odysseus in some way, and thus every reader
becoming a clearly defined person not m~vmg ~tth .the
must open the cover with that in min~. We foresee an
eneral flow of life, a charismatic personahty that is fairly
epic imbued with timeless meaning, an im~e~ect but sym- ;asy for the reader to gauge. W,here Stephen stands out,
athetic main character, perhaps even .a similar construc- however Bloom blends in. He is not very self-aware, he
iion of the plot. As well, the book's title refers us to andoes not 'participate in conversations, much less mo~opo­
other book, taking it for granted that we hav~ read, or ~t lize them as Stephen does, and he tends not to pass JUdgdyssey We start to realize that this
least k now of , the O
·
·t
t or do anything else that could let the reader get a
book will draw on an assumed background of other wn ;::d fix on his personality traits . In his role as a sort of
ings, that it is asking mo~e of us as reader than other more Everyman, he is necessarily much harder for th~ reader
self-contained novels might.
.
to picture clearly, since Eve~ma~ must blend mto th~
After opening the cover, words and images that the
background and not distingmsh himself. Stephen pro
author presents to us get increasingly harder t? make se~se duces poems, fables, arguments and so on, and we can
of as we read farther into the book. The first narrat~ve
understand him by looking at what he has made.
. age we get after beginning the book, for example, is a
Stephen's last name fits into this image: Dedalus was
:cical mass given by Buck Mulligan. It seem~ to be the artificer of Greek myth . While Stephen produces
just an absurdist image, until we remember that this book
objects but stays himself relatively .unc~anged, Bloom
.
" . ,, and every good epic-the Iliad, the Odyssey,
ts an epic,
.
A blooms, producing nothing but mutatmg.his own self. He
t
.
Paradts e Lost-opens with an invocation of the Muse. d gives. us no tangible offspring to examme, and because
"
,, tt
the end of that chapter comes the word us~rper, u ere
he is in a state of change, it is harder ~or the reader t~
by Stephen Dedalus to his friends, and with that we beunderstand his character. Because of this, Joyce ~oesn t
come aware that Stephen must paralle~ Telemachus, and
start us off with him. By encountering Stephen first, we
his friends are Penelope's suitors. With those two realWoyzeck:
. ?
Devil! Was it there you saw him.

can get trained in understanding characters in Ulysses,
and so when we get to the much harder case Of Bloom,
we are ready to see him for all that he is.
Joyce has begun to train us for the task of reading
Ulysses, and images that reveal parallels less obviously
are building upon images that are easier to understand.
By Chapter Nine, for example, finding out how our
Odysseus, Leopold Bloom, is sailing unharmed between
Scylla and Charybdis hinges on several small phrases.
Stephen imagines that the person to whom he is talking
is drowning in a whirlpool of mystical Platonism, and
Aristotle, on whom Stephen is basing his arguments, like
Scylla, sits on a rock. 1 The most distinct of these references are the two sentences, "Head, redconecapped, buffeted, brineblinded," (9. 405) and "A like fate awaits
him and the two rages commingle in a whirlpool." (9.
464) At the end of the chapter, Leopold Bloom, who has
barely been seen in this chapter, walks between Stephen
and his opponent, sailing to safety: "My will: his will
that fronts me. Seas between. A man passed out between them, bowing, greeting." (9.1202) If we hadn't
been trained by the eight chapters that came before, we
might have skipped right over these cryptic lines. These
few phrases would have been much harder to understand
if we hadn't become used to thinking that every phrase is
important and already been sensitized to hints of Homeric parallels.
The repetition of phrases hides the key to the symbolic parallels that will help us understand the meaning
of the book. The main characters embody several different sets of historical and literary parallels for us to look
out for, as well. Thus, Ulysses operates on many more
levels than simply plot action, character traits and so on.
The readers must supply the missing links to connect
Leopold Bloom to Odysseus, and recognize the other

parallels that together constitute a whole other set of
meanings for the novel. Joyce, through training us to
read Ulysses successfully, also uses us as a way to continuously connect the events we read to those of all of
history. Our memory of every other thing we have ever
read does more than enhance the imagery used; it is the
building block of that imagery.
He comments obliquely on the role of memory in
reading many times, in the ways that his characters read
written words. Perhaps the best example is an advertising campaign that Bloom encounters in his wanderings.
In it, five men walk in single file around the streets of
Dublin, each with a letter on hi s tall hat, spelling out
HELY'S, the name of a store.
A procession of whitesmocked sandwichmen
marched slowly towards him along the gutter,
scarlet sashes across their boards. Bargains. Like
t,hat priest they are this morning: we have sinned:
we have suffered. He read the scarlet letters on
their five tall white hats : H. E. L. Y. 'S. Wisdom
Hely's. Y lagging behind drew a chunk of bread
from under his foreboard , crammed it into his
mouth and munched as he walked .. .(Bloom)
crossed Westmoreland street when apostrophe S
had plodded by. (8 .123)

1

All references to line numbers in Ulysses refer to the
Vintage edition, edited by Hans Walter Gabler. I would
like to take this opportunity to say a few words apout the
use of secondary texts in this essay. No secondary text
was used for any interpretive points, but several of the
symbolic connections I make during the course of the
paper came from either published guidebooks or other
people in my preceptorial and study group. I decided
that footnoting these connections, most notably the one
referring to Chaucer's "The Manciple' s Tale," was not
necessary, since they are not original ideas or interpretation, but rather discoveries of what was already there.
As well, they serve only as examples in my essay, and
are not at all crucial to the general argument of the paper.

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They pass him several more times: "H. E. L. Y. 'S filed
before him, tallwhitehatted, past Tangier lane, plodding
towards their goal." (10.310) And later, "At Ponsonby's
comer a jaded white flagon H. halted and four tallhatted
white flagons halted behind him, E. L. Y. ' S, while outriders pranced past and carriages." (10.1238) Bloom
sees, and we see, each letter as an individual consciousness, with thoughts and actions of his own. Alone, each
redlettered man also recalls the image from The Scarlet
Letter of being branded, publicly labeled for a private
sin, and therefore be an ennobled figure. Together, however, they spell out a word which has a completely different meaning than the individuals had, a comical image, five human beings turned into nothing more than an
advertisement. Likewise, when we read we see the parts
as well as the whole, each individual image or event as
well as the completed, coherent picture that they want to
make. And likewise, the final message, the whole, necessarily neglects the intricacies of the parts.
The newly trained reader 's memory and sense of continuity affect the coherency of the text. Unlike most novels, here the reader is asked to draw on his past reading
experience, not only to understand small references, but

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HELY' S and the men that are forming it. It is similar to
to understand the whole of the book. Meaningful things the way a believer reads the Bible; since he considers the
that would be stated outright in other books are here hid- Bible the word of God, he treats each word as precious
den in a maze of literary references through which we and poetically full of meaning. Thus, at the end of Joyce's
must find our way. We remember when a phrase we book, we come away with a new, and ancient, way of
read resembles, in form or content, a phrase from earlier reading. It becomes a reflex to study every word as if it
· in the book, and get better at recognizing what is impor- held the key to great understanding, instead of just skimtant as we get more experienced. Subsequent readings ming the surface of the text for the general meaning. Joyce
may tum up even more recurrences as we learn what to returns us to a time when books themselves were rarer
remember. Joyce needs readers properly trained to re- and the written word more respected and valuable. We
member these little things, because repeated images only are reading everything as closely as if it were the Bible.
become meaningful when there is a reader who remem- Even if this reflex doesn't last long after we've closed
bers, and recognizes them as repetitions . Without the the book, at least he has shown us how much we might
recognition that comes from our memory, events might be missing in everything we read. We learn to treat evappear to be random events, and therefore ignored; but ery sentence as if it were very important, never ignoring
the author, relying on the reader to recognize them, loads anything because it seems inconsequential.
them with significance. Because we learn that our recEven more interesting are those recurrences, coinciognition of his symbols and parallels helps establish the dences, and parallels that don't seem to have anything to
coherency of the book, we try very hard to understand all do with the book's obvious symbolism or themes. The
of them. We realize this early on, when the Homeric sailor in Chapter Sixteen has a tattoo that reads "6-16,"
parallels are first introduced, and as connections get more which just happens to be the date of the day chronicled in
diverse and more difficult to find, we try harder to ex- Ulysses, for example. This is just something to remark
tract meaning from the events. Although Joyce cannot upon, a chance occurrence at which to wonder. Howbe sure that we have read everything to which he refers, ever, Joyce has purposefully placed that tattoo on that
he does seem to use books which are firmly placed in the sailor to convey some meaning and remind us of the omcanon of Western Literature, thus keeping the require- nipresence of the author. Not merely a coincidence but
ment for the proper reading his book as the classical edu- rather a conscious act, we see in the history of such items
cation in literature, history, and religion that any person a decision by the author to include such "accidents." If
could, or perhaps should, have. We begin to see any and we saw such a coincidence in our daily life we would no
all superficially meaningless references, objects and doubt think very little of it, and dismiss it as meaningless
events as containing, somewhere within them, a seed of chance, as Bloom does. As far as the action of the plot
meaning that will give us deeper insight into Joyce's "big goes, it is an inconsequential coincidence, but for the readthemes" of the novel. Thus Joyce is counting on our pres- ers, it can only be an encrypted message from the author
ence to hold together the book, and what his words call to us, reminding us of his presence. In a work written
up in our minds is not incidental, but rather something on with such care, we cannot dismiss it as chance, as a result
which he relied very much as a level of meaning for the of randomness , but instead must consider it as having
book. He can only hope that we take what he has given meaning, since it is deliberately placed in the text by
us and interpret it correctly, now that we know what to Joyce. Other examples of this sort include the crazy man
Cashel Boyle O'Connor Fitzmaurice Tisdall Farell, whom
do with it.
The world that Joyce has created gradually becomes Bloom keeps seeing on the street, who can be seen as a
filled with meaning, alive and organic in its circularity, message from Joyce to us about what happens to form
where otherwise it might seem inert. We don't want to without any content. Another example is when Bloom
let a single reference pass us by unnoticed or misunder- unwittingly predicts the outcome of the horse race. He
stood, and thus most people that wish to read the book did not intend to say anything about the race but is miswell read it with other readers or published guidebooks. understood as having offered a betting tip on it, and the
Very few people are going to have all the background prediction he unwittingly made turns out to have come
Joyce cites, and a perfect memory besides. For this same
true.
reason, it is beneficial to read it many times, and flip back
However, Joyce also warns us that words are treachand forth in it while reading. We learn from Joyce, as we erous for us. We learn from him both on the one hand
progress through the book, that to read well is to read in not to take words at face value, rather to recognize the
that way, and that a good reader sees both the word

awa~en~ss

presence of a possibly undiscoverable deeper meaning,
and on the o~her hand not to trust in the truth of written
~ords. A wntten word differs from the object it signifies
m that th~ word had to be written by a person, and therefore cames a particular intent that we may never understand. So~e. force had to inspire the person to write, and
thus all wntmg carries such hidden motives. A person
must choose between writing one word instead of another, or even whether to write a word at all . A word is
.
bo
f
.
~ o a wnter, and must be consciously brought into
ex1~t~nce, b~t a physical object exists without human
activity. Whil.e a tangible thing may be manipulated by
human h.ands, its substance, its material being, exists without any mtent we know of. We give more thought to the
~ords we. read than the objects we see because of this
history, this connection to a writer that words have.
A h
. t t e. same time, however, Joyce asks us to view
these pr~c10us. words as untrustworthy. We could mist~e the mtent10n we want words to have for the intenti~n they actually do carry. As an example of this kind of
mistake, he shows Stephen in a heated argument about
Shakespeare, Hamlet in particular. As Stephen's f. d
Buck po rt.rays it, " He proves by algebra that Hamlet's
.
nen
gran?son IS Shakespeare's grandfather and that he himself is the ghost of his own father." (1.555) We don't
hear th~ ~ctual argument until Chapter. Nine, and when
we do •. It IS as tenuous and complicated as Buck jokingly
made It .out to be. Stephen argues it earnestly, but then
on lookmg back realizes, as we do, just how far on the
wrong track he has gotten.

rat1ve techmque, the filter through wh1.ch we view the
.
1
pot, changes periodically. Yet this change i's no acci.
d
·h
ent, e1t er. Each chapter's narrat1·ve techmque corre.
sponds to the plot's action at that point, to a greater or
lesser degree. In the beginning the choice of tech .
.
f ·l b ·
·
mque is
air y o 'viou.s, with. chapters centering on Stephen from
Stephen s pomt of vie':", presenting his thoughts, and with
chapters from Bloom s point of view in Bloo ms v01ce,
'
.
b
ut as the b~ok goes on the narrators become less and
less co~vent10nal. For example, the chapter in which
Bloom he~rs people singing in a bar not only includes a
lot o.f musical phra~es in it, but also is itself arranged in a
musical pattern, w.1th motifs introduced in the beginning
that
.
.
f then are used m the construction of the piece, as m a
ugue .. An?ther good example is the chapter in which
Blo~m is ~ith a group of doctors, all waiting for a woman
to give birth'. The chapter is arranged as the development of Engh~~ prose style, from druidic incantation to
modem expos1t10n, echoing the development of a fetu
After the birth occurs, the narration deteriorates into
amalgam of slang, almost mimicking a baby 's babble.
B~caus~ of the training that Joyce gives us, and the
':ays m which we are reminded of the author behind his
lmear plot, we feel that author's presence, who reciprocally felt our pres.ence as he wrote his book. He assembles
a worl~ out of.literary motifs, historic events, and real
pl~ces m Dublm. .As he guides his characters through
this wo~ld , h~ mampulates it deliberately to mirror them
and their act10ns, creating the recurrences and parallels
that we then n?t~ce. He affects every level of this world
down to the tlmest detail, making every aspect of the
~?rid ~ddress the story and the characters. For the reader
It is as if Dublin has been turned into a giant amusemen~
~ark ~.here Leopold Bloom is the theme. His intentions
~n wntmg phrases that see~ cryptic are at the front of our
houghts, and much of our mterpretation of the book thus
takes the fo~ of the statement, "What the author means
when he wntes such and such is .. ." The effect of this is
tha~ we feel the presence of some mind at work with
.which we never have direct contact, but which we' sense
as someone who ca:es that we understand the book, someo~e who took the time to build up our new reading techmques. The r~ader of Ulysses distinctly sees that there
are two consc10usnesses aware of the action, the reader
and the au~hor. We cannot be as self-centered as we are
when read1.ng more conventional things where the writer
conceals himself. We have responsibilities.
Both the reader and the author are part of the narra-

a~

You are a delusion, said roundly John Eglinton
to Stephen. You have brought us all this way to
show _ s a French triangle. Do you believe your
u
own Lheory? - No , Stephen said promptly
(9.1064)
.
Thus, even as we grow more adept at reading Ulysses
e:ents i~ the book warn us of how untrustworthy a me~
dmm wntten words are. As well, we see that we, as read~rs , are untrustworthy. We could be reading too much
mto ~he t~xt, or reading with biased eyes and omitting
certam pomts . Part of Joyce's training is teaching us to
open ourselv~s to every part of the text. We are left always suspectmg that we could be misreading-attaching
more, less,' or the wrong meaning to any word.
. Joyce s use of multiple narrators is one of the most
noticeable ways in which this novel differs from most
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of something behind the narrator. For the lot

co~tmues to .progress chronologically even while the ~ar-

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tive, but while the reader always experiences the book as
a linear chronology, it seems that the author does not.
We get this impression from little recurrences, of the sort
that indicate the author at work, some occurring many
chapters apart, each time existing only as one small
phrase. A good example of this is the image of a drowned
man who has just been found in the sea near Dublin after
floating for many days, a news story that both Stephen
and Bloom hear. We see the man in their thoughts here
and there, and Bloom runs into a friend, a coroner's assistant, who must handle the body. The drowned man
floats through the first half of the book, a symbol of Bloom
drowning in the backwaters of his life, the odious, bloated
corpse always turning up in different conversations. Without a careful, trained reading, however, one might skim
over each of these references as it occurred, however,
and thus never see the recurrence. Once the reader notices the references as similar, they give him the impression that they were placed all at the same time, although
each time it fits perfectly into the story. When a thing is
recognized as recurrent it becomes more obvious that
Joyce intends it to have real meaning; a word said twice
might be accidental, but not a word said repeatedly. It is
as though the entire book had been written all at the same
time, had happened all at the same time, instead of over a
period of time. We can imagine the entire book appearing suddenly out of his head, already fully formed, having the same sort of birth as Athena's, out of the head of
Zeus, rather than the Old Testament creation of man in
which it takes time and toil for God to fabricate his creation. We see Joyce as one who knows everything, one
who is atemporally omniscient.
We begin to see a meta-narrator, manipulating the
host of voices used in order to make certain statements
about the characters or emphasize certain parts of the plot.
This so-called meta-narrator must be none other than the
author himself. Thus, because there is no single static
narrator like in other novels, but a series of static narrators successively carrying the same plot line, the plot and
himself and Joyce himself become independent of a single
point of view. We are couscious that Joyce has chosen
the different narrators, whether clear voices like Chapter
Seven's newspaper headlines or Thirteen's voice of a romance novel heroine, or cryptic voices like Chapter Fourteen, the embryonic development of English prose sty le
or Chapter Fifteen, a drama starring Bloom's unconscious,
subconscious and conscious minds.
Narrators are generally taken from text styles that
we have already probably read in other places, but here
they have meaning apart from what is the usual. Joyce's

hand in this, separate from that of the narrators, is obvious; we know that there is a human intelligence behind
the story. Since the story, on its most basic level, comes
from Homer, and since much of the other material comes
from various historical and fictional sources,most of what
we read has the tone of reorganization rather than the
Biblical creation from dust. The characters' traits, roles,
their world, everything is derived from other sources, so
that they are just newer embodiments of timeless tern-:
plates. Yet we still can see Joyce as a creator thanks to
his manipulations of the symbols and motifs that he has
pulled from various places, and in the wide array of narrators that he has conjured up from our common literary
background.
Because the reader senses the presence of the author
in the book, we treat the book much more as if it were the
author's product than we otherwise would . That the SYf!lbolism was conceived in the author's head, and conveyed
directly to the reader, gives the work a tone of commentary. We see the phenomenon of chance, of blind luck,
playing an important and prominent role. Joyce thus
molds us into the readers he wants and needs for the book
he has written. He makes a new reader by writing a new
kind of novel, and then slowly reteaching us how to read.
As we realize this, the question why he does this nags us
more and more. We will have to examine the material
that is presented to us before we can fully understand
why such a roundabout, cryptic process was chosen.

PART II: BLOOM'S EXPERIENCES IN JOYCE'S
WORLD
The symbols, motifs, and parallels taken from our
shared tradition of Western philosophy, history, and literature are more than simply clever ways to reinterpret
and revisit the books of our heritage. Most often, they
serve as commentary on the action taking place in the
story. For example, Bloom encounters in the course of
the day at least three things that are on the surface confusing and cryptic, but are actually warnings about the
adultery that Molly is committing at those exact moments.
The first of these is the image of a crowing cock that
recurs several times, connected with the name of a romance-writer that Molly Bloom has been reading, "Paul
de Kock." The cock's crow becomes an image of betrayal in Chapter Eleven, when Bloom sees Blazes Boylan
leave the Ormond Hotel bar to go see Molly, ostensibly
about a singing performance for which he is booking her.
Bloom idly suspects that they are probably having an affair, but does nothing to stop it, and sees in his mind

Bo~ Ian, in his horsedrawn taxi, .approaching the Bloom
residence where Molly awaits him:
By Bachelor 's walk jogjaunty jingled Blazes
Boylan, bach.elor'. in sun in heat, mare 's glossy
rump atrot, with fhck of whip, on bounding tyres:
sprawled, warmseated, Boylan impatience
ardentbold.
'

a bell chimed ...
Cuckoo Cuckoo Cuckoo
The clock on the mantelpiece in the priest's house
cooed ...
Cuckoo Cuckoo Cuckoo

bec.aus~ it was a little canarybird that came out
of its httle house to tell the time that Gerty
MacDowell noticed. (13.1 285)

Several pages later he sees Boylan knocking on the front
door,. and he~e he hears the knock sounding like a cock The cuckoo clock sounds nine times altogether, audible
crowmg as his betrayal grows imminent: "One rapped on the beach to both Bloom and Gerty from the nearby
on a door'. one tapped with a knock, did he knock Paul de house, a.nd thus th~ chapter ends. The cuckoo is not simK ock with a loud proud knocker with a cock ply to. signal the time; It recalls a passage from "Th
~arracarracarra cock. Cockcock." ( 11. 986) The sound Manciple's Tal~," of The Canterbury Tales in which :
carracarracarra" is interjected twice more in the text man learns of his beloved wife's adultery.
before the chapter ends. The sound of the knock rese~bles ~cock's crow, bringing to mind Christ's converWhen Phoebus, the master, returned home,
sat10n with Paul after the Last Supper.
The crow greeted him with "Cuckoo! Cuckoo!
Cuckoo!"
Peter said ~o him, "Though all become deserters because
",W~at, crow?" said Phoebus. "What song are you
of you, I will never desert you." Jesus said to him "T l
smgmg? ... "
I tell you, this v~ry night, before the cock crows, ;ou ~i{i
"B y God'" said the crow, "I don't sing incorrectly
·
.
deny ~e. three .times. " (Matthew 26. 33 )
Combrnmg this reference to Christ with the obvious
For I saw him make love with your wife on your
sexual connotations leaves us with a clear image of adulbed."
tery. Peter's wor~'s are like Molly 's marriage vow, and
W~at more do you wish? The crow then told him
the rooster-soundmg knock signals her betrayal.
With convincing evidence and bold words
Another ex~~~le of a warning to Bloom of Molly 's
How_ his wife had conducted her adultery,
~dultery, and .cntic1sm of his complacency, occurs twice,
To his great shame and dishonor.
m Chapter Nme and at the end of Chapter Thirteen: the
The crow said it had seen the act with its own
call of a cuckoo. The first instance occurs while he overeyes.
hears Stephen debating about Shakespeare.
("The Manciple's Tale,"
lines 242-261
In Cymbeline, in Othello, he is bawd and cuckModem edition paraphrase)
old. He acts and is acted on. Lover of an ideal
or.a perversion, like Jose he kills the real Carmen.
Thus Bloom he~rs ~he same bird 's lament again, but still
His unremitti?g. intellect is the hornmad Iago
does ?ot recognize it as a warning. He does not question
ceaselessly w11lmg that the moor in him shall
why It has s.ounded at this exact moment, when he was
suffer.
·
a~le to he~r it. If he thinks of it at all, it is only like Gerty
"Cuckoo! Cuckoo!" Cuck Mulligan clucked
t~mks of It, .on .the most superficial level of marking the
lewdly. "O word of fear!"
tm~e, an~ thm~mg of a clock reaching the top of the hour
Dark dome received, reverbed. (9.1021)
at JU st this pomt does not seem significant to him.
.Bloom. does not recognize these or other references
~h~ cuckoo reappears as Chapter Thirteen ends . Bloom
to hterar~ i~ages of betrayal and cuckoldry, but treats
s1.ttmg on the strand after Gerty bares her underwear
him. from afar, thinks about Molly, and about sex, sitting, them a~ mc1dental events. Indeed, the reader too may
not decipher all thes~ things on the first reading, since
restmg, looking out at the water.
they appear to be ummportant. We have an advantage
over Bloom, however. The training Joyce has given us
A bat flew. Here. There. Here. Far in the grey
for proper reading of his novel means, first, that we are

fo;

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�not willing to treat any word as meaningless.' and second,
that we will be studying, not merely readmg, the te~t.
That is to say, we will read it multiple times and with
groups of people, and if there is an image th~t seem~ meaningless to us, we will work together until we fmd the
meaning we know is hidden in it somewhere. Eventually, then, we understand these things for ~hat th~~ ~re,
and will be able to interpret them. We can view critic1sr:i
of Bloom that he does not notice, much less heed, as primarily commentary from the author directly to us. We
are already very aware of the presence of t~e author, and
we already know for a certainty the unfaithfulness that
Bloom only suspects. We are expected to have the background in literature to see these warnings for what they
are. Even if one reader has not, for example, re~d "T~e
Manciple's Tale," for example, no doubt some~ne m on~ s
circle of fellow readers has read it, and the i~age will
resonate for that person. Joyce is a spectator J~St ~s we
are, and just as we are, he is criticizing and pa~smg J~dg­
ment on Bloom's actions. Indeed, on closer i~s.p~ctlon,
most of the symbolism can be regarded as cnticism of
Bloom.
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d
We see symbolic meaning in Bloom's _act1vitl~s an
surroundings, and we interpret some of this meanmg as
critical of him. Bloom, too, perceives the recurrences
and coincidences, reflecting on the chance an~ vagary of
life when, for example, he crosses paths with Blazes
Boylan three times in one day, .or when ~e tosses away a
stick he has been holding and It lands with one end embedded in the sand, perpendicular to the ground. "Now
if you were trying to do that for a week on end you
couldn't. Chance." (13.1271) To some extent, he even
half-consciously realizes the similarities tha~ ?e has to
the great character types of the western tradition, most
distinctly to the betrayed martyr template represented ~y
Christ and Socrates . But the only time we really. see h.im
run away with this idea is in the fifteent~ chapte.:, m which
there is a large part dedicated to the idea of . The New
Bloomusalem," and where Bloom is put on.t~ial.
The difference between Bloom's recogmt10n o~these
parallels and recurrences and our own,. howev~r, ts that
he does not see them as anything special, or give them
anything more than idle thought. To him, they are a sort
of background noise, easily ignorable, present every day
oflife. Others he obliviously passes by, such as the :'arnings of Molly's imminent betrayal mentioned earlier, or
the parallel between himself ~nd .Throwaway: the proverbial "dark horse" in the day s big race. He is dressed
in mourning, thus "dark," generally co~sidered. a loser,
and considered somewhat inconsequential by his peers,

like a throwaway brochure. Boylan, then, is Sceptr~, t~e
favored horse, the bright star with a hint of royalt~ m its
name who in the end is beaten by the dark horse, JUSt as
.
Bloom wins Molly back from Boylan.
It seems equally unlikely that anyone would fmd a
parallel between one's marital problems and a horse race
as that anyone would find the parallel between oneself
and Odysseus, or Jesus Christ, God the Father, t~e famous Irish politician Parnell, or the fairyt~le hero Smbad
the Sailor. Such a recognition would brmg the detachment that might help us to solve our problems, but we
tend to think of literature and history too impersonally to
equate them with our own situations. w_e do ~ee the benefit that Bloom would get out of thinkmg this way, a~d
perhaps Joyce is telling us that we should look to classic
character templates for insight about ourselves . If we
think that we resemble the Odyssean "wanderer who
wishes to return home," perhaps we should pinpoint what
tasks we need to do to get there, what "suitors" we ~ust
slay. If we resemble the "lover martyred by the ~raitor­
ous beloved" template of Christ, then we need to ~md out
what forgiveness we have to grant to get back ~nto the
heart of the beloved and be resurrected. Our heritage of
story and history ought to be alive, not dead and mounted
in a museum.
.
During the whole day, Bloom thinks often. about his
wife's suspected infidelity, the letter he ~eceived. from
Martha his relationship with her, even simply his unhappy Job or new ad ideas. J?espite this, he_ do~s not
share these thoughts with the fnends he sees, his wife'. or
anyone at all. He has big problems, and one would thmk
that he might ask advice from the people he trust~. Bloom
has no one that he trusts, however. No one strikes up a
real conversation with him, or seems to want to talk to
him either, even though several people know about
Molly's infidelity and pity him for his ignorance. At the
funeral, at the bar in Chapter Twelve, and at the ~estau­
rant where he eats lunch, among other places'. he is continually perceived by other characters as the silent, cry~­
tic, unapproachable man. A good example comes up m
Chapter Eight, in the restaurant w.he~e he eats !unc~. The
point of view has been firmly withm Bloor:i s mmd for
several chapters at this point, and suddenly it pulls away
for several paragraphs to a conversation two men are having behind Bloom's back, after ~e leaves his table. They
ask each other questions about him that, for some reason,
they didn't want to ask him ~irectly: Whether he had
recently changed his occupat10n, whose death he was
mourning. They find him odd and unapproachable, based
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never gets really drunk. After some insinuations about
Molly, one of the men gives his own theory for Bloom's
cryptic quality and supposed secrecy: He is a freemason.
This seems unlikely and out of character, but we never
ascertain the facts on this matter.
-He's in the craft, he said.
-Do you tell me so? Davy Byrne said.
-Very much so, Nosey Flynn said. Ancient free
and accepted order. He's an excellent brother.
Light, life, and love, by God. They give him a
leg up ... They stick to you when you're down.
I know a fellow was trying to get into it. But
they're close as damn it. ..
-And is that a fact? Decent quiet man he is.
(8.962)

late in the book, also fraught with meaning, but referring
to Bloom instead. He views it as merely a meaningless
error, although it can be deciphered in a way similar to
Martha's. The error in this case cannot be attributed to a
single person, since it occurred as a glitch in the newspaper typesetting system. Bloom reads the announcement
for the funeral he had attended that morning in the evening
newspaper.
So to change the subject he read about Dignam
R.I.P... This morning (Hynes put it in of course)
the remains of the late Mr Patrick Dignam were
removed from his residence .. . for interment. . .
The mourners included: Patk. Dignam (son), Bernard Corrigan (brother in law), Jno. Henry
Menton, solr, Martin Cunningham, John Power,
.)eatondph I \8 ador dorador douradora (must be
where he called Monks the dayfather [typesetter] about Keyes's ad) Thomas Kernan, Simon
Dedalus, ... L. Boom, CP McCoy and several
others. (Bloom was) nettled not a little by L.
Boom (as it incorrectly stated) and the line of
bitched type. (16. 1248)

Indeed, he never even has any real conversation with
anyone at all until Chapter Seventeen, when he and
Stephen sit in his house talking. Thus, before the last
two chapters of the book, and the accompanying breakdown of structure which I will speak of later, the author
is the only one who can show him how he's acting and
what his life looks like from a detached perspective.
The "scientific mind" Bloom is so proud of possessing, the craftiness any good Odysseus must have, is more With random chance as the culprit instead of a particular
person, it is easy for him to ignore the error as annoying,
than a gift; it is a tool. With it he is meant to discover the
but meaningless. Yet "L. Boom" does have meaning:
clues to decode the message, which exist in coincidence
"The decent quiet man" is being described as an exploand parallel. We know Bloom is capable of looking besion. A reader can interpret from this that Bloom needs
hind the obvious to infer a deeper meaning from several
to do something out of character, to break the fog of idle
events, most notably when he reads the slightly sadistic
complacency in which he finds himself. He must do
love letter from Martha. In it, she says, "I do not like that
something violently different to make Molly notice him
other world" (5.245) instead of, we presume, "I do not
like that other word," since she is writing about Bloom's again as a man. That explosion would flatten the rickety
structure of their current relationship leaving a clean, bare
word usage at that point. If one reads that as something
foundation upon which they could rebuild their lives and
more than a typo, Martha appears to be someone who
their relationship. We understand this because we are
fantasizes and holds a lot of hope for the world of which
looking over the shoulder of the author, while Bloom is
she imagines Bloom to be a part. She unwittingly prenot aware that he is Joyce's creation. If Bloom were willsents herself as someone who wishes she were also in
ing to anticipate that meaning can come in unexpected
that world, and is not at all satisfied with her own life.
ways, he could see these signs. But he has not been trained
Bloom reads this as a sort of Freudian slip, as do we, and
the way we have, however, and although he has the abilsenses a great dependence on hir.1 to rescue her. He mulls
ity to see these things, an hour of life is not looked at as
over that sentence on and off for the rest of the book, and
carefully as a page of text.
sees it as a valuable glimpse into what is really happenAnother example of Bloom's inability to interpret
ing in their relationship . He has the gift of a very rational
seemingly meaningless events as having any message for
mind, and the insight to use it for prophecy when he
him occurs in Chapter Thirteen. After Gerty leaves, he
wishes, just as Odysseus does.
begins to leave her a message in the sand, which she could
Although a typo gives him insight into Martha's mind,
read if she returned the next day. He is sitting alone watchhe does not analyze misprints, partial words, and so on
ing fireworks over the water, thinking of Molly, fantasizas addressing his own situation. There is another typo
ing about Gerty, and worrying about Martha. He gets as

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ity:

Mr Bloom with his stick gently vexed the
thick sand at his foot. Write a message for her.
Might remain. What?
I.
Some flatfoot tramp on it in the morning.
Useless. Washed away. Tide comes here ... What
is the meaning of that other world. I called you
naughty boy because I do not like.
AM. A.
No room. Let it go.
Mr Bloom effaced the letters with his slow
boot. Hopeless thing sand . Nothing grows in it.
All fades ... We' ll never meet again . But it was
so lovely. Goodbye dear. Thanks. Made me
feel so young. (13.1258)
We are first left trying to figure out what he was actually
going to write: "I am a-." The answer cannot known.
But what we, and he, should be reading here is wh_at_ he
did write, "I am A." Bloom erases it without givmg
thought to any unintended meaning. But in the midst of
his gloomy thoughts he has actually given himself the
answer to all his problems, if he were to read th~ sentence written as "I am the alpha." It counsels him to
make a new beginning, in light of the Biblical passage,
"I am the Alpha and the Omega, the first and the ~ast, ~he
beginning and the end." (Revelation 22.13) He is_ bei~g
told that he needs to stop drifting, complacent, ffilred m
the middle of life, and become a fire-and-brimstone, ~x­
plosive beginning. This messag~ is ~ot purpos~~lly ignored by Bloom, since to ignore implies recogmt10n, and
he never identified it as a message, even though he wrote
it. It is hard even for us, detached though we are, to stop
wondering what he intended to write and lo?k at what he
actually did write. It does, however, remam a mess~ge
of criticism, not from the author but from Blo~m ~im­
self. Bloom could have benefited if he had noticed it:
This brings us to the moment when the prop?esied
explosion actually occurs, the point towards which all
Joyce's criticism of Bloom has been driving. Through
the course of the book, we have seen Joyce criti_ciz~ Bl~om
and suggest that he do something to change h1.s s1tuat10~.
Bloom has not noticed these encoded suggestion~, but i~
the second to last chapter of the book, the author s fabncated superstructure of symbolism begins to break down
as Bloom nears the climax. He comes close to true recognition of his mirroring of histo.rical and lite~a~y ~em­
plates as he enters the bed, reflectmg on Molly s mf1del-

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If he had smiled why would he have smiled?
To reflect that each one who enters imagines himself to be the first to enter whereas he is always
the last term of a preceding series even if the first
term of a succeeding one, each imagining himself to be first, last, only and alone whereas he is
neither first nor last nor only nor alone in a series originating in and repeated to infinity.
(17 .2127)
The explosion occurs when, in bed , Bloom asks 1'.1olly to
day. He w~shes ~o
bring him his breakfast in bed the next_
wake up the next morning in a new kmd of ~elatt?ns_h1p
with her, be greeted by the vision of her feedmg _him ~n a
reversal of the unhappy roles of this day. The first tune
we saw Bloom, he had been fixing breakfast for Molly.
Now he demands that she feed him, as she did at the beginning of their relationship. An image is repeat~d
through the book, both in Bloom' s thoughts and m
Molly's, a reminiscence of an instance befor~ they ~ar­
ried in which, in Molly's words, "I gave him a bit of
seedcake out of my mouth." (18.1575) This is a mothering image, a bird feeding her newly-hatched young, and
he wants to return to the relationship where she sheltered
and nurtured him. In a way, the odyssey of his entire day
can be looked at, not only as a return to his Penelope, but
also as a return to the bed, which is also Molly's nest, and
metaphorically the womb.
The most interesting thing for us, the readers, _about
this explosive question is that it does not occur m the
narrative. The prophesied "Boom" from the newspaper
misprint is neither at the end of Chapter Seventeen n~r
the beginning of Chapter Eighteen, although as Molly s
monologue begins, it has already occurred. In fact, the
only way that we find out that he has asked ~er _to do
anything is through what Molly says at the beg1~nmg_ of
her monologue: "Yes because he never did~ thmg hke
that before as ask to get his breakfast in bed with a couple
of eggs." (18.1) It is as if the first seven.teen chapters
constitute Bloom 's past, the eighteenth his future, and
the question his present. He will ~ot know Molly's answer until he wakes up in the mommg, so her monologue
represents his unknown future . We leave him suspended
in the uncertain present, having ended the day and the
life that it represented at the moment he got into bed, but
not in the future yet. As T.S. Eliot said in "Burnt Norton,"
Time present and time past

Are both perhaps present in time future,
and time future contained in time past
... Time past and time future
Allow but little consciousness.
To be conscious is not to be in time.

ers that sh.e has gotten her period, which gives us another
way to view the chapter as a renewal, an end to all the
problems that existed the day before, and the chance for
a new beginning. For Bloom had been worrying all day
about his own virility. He seems disappointed in, or at
least unfulfilled by, their daughter Milly, and he is haunted
The bed, and Molly's half-awake thoughts, are outside
by visions of their son, who had died while still a baby.
of linear time, existing only in the sense of a now time,
He has not had sex with his wife for many years, and he
and represented by the unanswered question. The queswonders if he would or could ever produce another son,
tion cannot be included in either the past or the future,
someone to carry on his family name, a duplication of
and thus it isn't written about in either Chapters Sevenhimself. He also worries that Molly might be pregnant
teen or Eighteen, but between them. We can connect the
with Boylan's child, in which case Boylan would have
explosion to the layers of commentary urging Bloom tostolen Bloom's dream of fatherhood. With this, the last
wards it, fabricated by the author in the first seventeen
barrier to Bloom's happiness has been removed, and the
chapters . To understand this connection perhaps one
two of them can still try to conceive a son in their new
needs first to understand what the last chapter constitutes. relationship.
The end of the book, traditionally called Molly's
The other thing that stands out in this chapter is the
monologue, has none of the punctuation or grammatical
last "sentence," which begins with Molly rejecting Hugh
structure of the rest of the book. It is designed to be a "Blazes" Boylan:
look at the thought patterns of this person as she lies,
unmoving, in bed. This is the first thing that strikes a
no thats no way for him he has no manners nor
reader; it isn't even divided up into real sentences. It has
no refinement nor no nothing in his nature slapnone of the linear plot line of the rest of the book, either,
ping us behind like that on my bottom because I
but orbits around several topics of conversation, with difdidnt call him Hugh the ignoramus that doesnt
ferent layers of circularity. The word "yes," for example,
know poetry from a cabbage thats what you get
begins the chapter, ends the chapter, and in the middle
for not keeping them in their proper place pullpairs up poetically with "no." We get a view of how
ing off his shoes and trousers there on the chair
thought processes might link together in someone's head,
before me so barefaced without even asking perand there is no sense of the passage of time here. This
mission and standing out in that vulgar way
voice is entirely without artifice, with none of the con(18.1368)
sciousness of the reader that first seventeen chapters had.
It does not have mastery of the language as all the other
and ends with her accepting Bloom again in a reiteration
narrators did, using the beauty of words to seduce the
of her acceptance of his marriage proposal many years
reader. Here language returns to its primal state as a feaago, and, at the same time, answering his request for
tureless medium, communicating all ideas. But most breakfast in bed:
importantly, this voice has none of the artifice of symbol,
recurrent image, and encrypted commentary that the first
yes that was why I liked him because I saw he
seventeen chapters had. If we accept that all those things
understood or felt what a woman is and I knew I
were present more to help Bloom than to entertain us
could always get round him and I gave him all
with empty but beautiful symbolism, then then the reathe pleasure I could leading him on till he asked
son for their disappearance is obvious. All those things
me to say yes and I wouldnt answer first only
were there expressly to goad Bloom into action, and with
looked out over the sea ... and the rosegardens
his question to Molly, he has acted.
and the jessamine and geraniums and cactuses
Almost all the linearity of the plot disappears from
and Gibraltar as a girl where I was a flower of
this chapter as well. Molly's thoughts could be put down
the mountain yes when I put the rose in my hair
in any order and the entire chapter rearranged, since it is,
like the Andalusian girls used or shall I wear a
for the most part, a random access of all her memories.
red yes and how he kissed me under the Moorish
But two things stand out in this flood of memory. The
wall and I thought well as well him as another
first is the only physical motion of the chapter; Molly
and then I asked him with my eyes to ask again
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stead of the indifferent visage of "fate" or chance there
might be a caring face similar to his own. In the modem
age, it seems, we attach meaning only to those things
which explicitly .tell us they are meaningful: written
words, speech, memory. We pay attention to things that
obviously come from the mind of ourselves or other humans, with the mark of having been conceived in our
Thus the entire novel ends, looking back in a retrospecown mind or in one like ours. We think of information as
tive arrangement to the genesis of their relationship. The
something born of man. We, in this rational, data-packed
final "yes" is both a remembrance of their early days toage, find it difficult to think of messages coming to us
gether and an immediate answer to Bloom's question.
through channels not based on language. At the same
Fusing these two affirmations together shows that she
time, we put our history on so high a pedestal that even
wants to return to their earlier form of love for each other.
if, like Bloom, we do resemble Christ, or Odysseus, so
She, too, wants to begin again; after the return to the womb
that thinking of ourselves in those terms would be helpthat this chapter represents, with the new day they will
ful, we will not pay attention to the similarities. Cerbe reborn. The last image one has of the chapter, of Molly,
tainly even if one recognized the similarities, one would
of the whole book, is an absolute, all-embracing accepnot make the next step and say that what happened to
tance. This recalls the first image we have of her, and the
Christ is happening to oneself.
first word she speaks in the book, as Bloom stands in the
Joyce's role in the book, his relation to the characters
hallway calling in to her, still in bed, to ask if she wants
he has both created and reassembled, mimics the relation
any meat for breakfast. "He added: 'You don't want anyof man to God. If we believe that the author means for
thing for breakfast?' A sleepy soft grunt answered: 'Mn. '
authorship to be analogous, in the context of at least this
" (4.58) He interprets this as a no, but it could just as
one book, to being God, then the attributes he has given
easily been a yes-she is portrayed as a completely amhimself within the finite bounds of the book make sense.
bivalent being, not stirred by her husband enough even
All authors have these attributes, but he plays them up:
to articulate her desires, much less get out of bed.
creative power, omnipotence, atemporality. And if Joyce
Through examining the ending of the book, both how
is analogous to God, then it only follows that we, as people
Chapter Eighteen is written and why it is written as it is,
rather than as readers, are analogous to Bloom. Bloom is
we better understand Joyce's manipulations. Indeed, we
the quintessential Everyman even as he resembles the
can understand all his literary parallels, encrypted warngreat heroes of literature, being, in a way, the perfect exings, and meaningful coincidences as advice for Bloom
ample of man's estrangement not just from God but from
that the character himself can perceive. The role and the
everything natural and good. His obliviousness to the
responsibilities that the author has taken on can now be warnings the readers find so obvious must mimic the avclearly seen. He has conceived of the characters, aserage man's relationship to God. The ratio
sembled their world, and created the progression their
story will follow, and having done all this, writes the book.
Character : Author :: Reader : God,
He loves his characters as any maker must love his creation, and wishes the best for them as they play out the seems to .be what Joyce is finally suggesting, the ultiHomer-based plot. Since he is atemporal and hence the
mate analogy of this book.
only being involved that knows what will happen, he is
We see Bloom, in his role as the both Christian and
spurred, through his benevolence, to inco,rporate clues Jewish Everyman, try these methods and reject them.
and warnings into Bloom's surroundings. He grants himBecause he has belonged to both religions , he is an outself the ability to talk to his creation as he writes the book,
sider as well as an Everyman, and the alienation from
to attempt to help that creation reach happiness.
religion that may be inside us is visible in him. Early in
From Bloom' s perspective, the situation is this: He
the course of the day "the cold smell of sacred stone called
is surrounded by urgent warnings and criticism of his
him," (5 . 338) and he enters a Catholic church and
actions, but he ignores them all. Some of them he may
watches a service in progress. The process seems to have
not have the literary background to decode, but most of
very little to do with God, in his eyes.
them he notices but regards as mere random events not
deserving understanding. It does not occur to him who
Now I bet it makes them feel happy. Lollipop.
might have placed these events in front of him, that inmy mountain flower and first I put my arms
around him yes and drew him down to me so he
could feel my breasts all perfume yes and his
heart was going like mad and yes I said yes I will
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It does. Yes, bread of angels it's called. There's
a big idea behind it, kind of kingdom of God is
within you feel. Then feel all like one family
party, same in the theatre, all in the same swim.
They do. I'm sure of that. Not so lonely. In our
confraternity. . . Thing is if you really believe it.
(5.360)
Wonderful organisation certainly, goes like clockwork. Confession. Everyone wants to. Then I
will tell you all. Penance. Punish me, please.
Great weapon in their hands. More than doctor
or solicitor. Woman dying to . And I
schschschschschsch.
And did you
chachachachacha? And why did you? . .. God's
little joke. Then out she comes. Repentance
skindeep. Lovely shame. Pray at an altar. Hail
Mary and Holy Mary. Flowers, incense, candles
melting. Hide her blushes. (5.424)
Joyce senses that the average reader has similarly given
up hope on God, and the disconnection that Bloom portrays here shows just how empty much of the ritual of
religion has become. The people he sees in the church
don't seem to him to have much spirituality. With the
message he is conveying to us here, he·shows us how we
might better be able to find significance in the world after rejecting the methods that are conventionally acceptable.
Perhaps, then, Joyce is saying that we are as terminally oblivious as Bloom is. We could interpret the constant drone of "random" coincidence and parallel in our
own lives as having direct meaning for us, instead of discounting it as ignorable background. In the same day,
each one of us has a different set of thoughts and sights,
pieces of internal and external data, which perhaps is as
custom made for each of us as Bloom's was for him. We
should be looking for sense and order in the white noise
of events in our days, deciphering messages meant for us
from what seems like a chaotic, impassive world. Recall
the augury, through bird flight, that is practiced in The
Odyssey, among other places. Specifically, we should
keep in mind the passage in Book Two in which the suitors ignore an old man's prophecies about a pair of eagles.
He said that Odysseus lived still and would return soon
to slay them if they didn't change their ways. They scoffed
at his augury, made no change, and were all proved wrong
at the end of the book. It would seem that Joyce is trying
to tell us to look for God, not just through the normal
channels such as prayer, ritual, and revelation, but re-

united wjth the older, classical conception of a higher
power. God is fate, luck, chance, as well as a discrete
bei~g. C?od is r~absorbed into nature, the chaos upon
which this world is based. Faith in God means then faith
~n the abs~nce of random activity, that all activity has
mtent behmd it. If a thing was created, it was created at
the hand of a rational maker, and thus no facet of the
world should be considered ignorable.
By extending the analogies in this way, we see that
there is indeed a force in the universe that is helping us,
but not in the rational ways to which we might have always looked before. Our God wants to help us as the
gods helped Odysseus, but we are not attuned to hear his
commentary. He is not neglecting us, we are just not
looking at the right part of our world to find these divine
messages. "Ever since the creation of the world his eternal power and divine nature, invisible though they are,
have been understood and seen through the things he has
made." (Romans 1.20) Thus chance, part of nature, is
one of the things God made. In the end, Joyce shows us
a way back to God, that if we look for him in his creations instead of ours, we will find guidance. What
seemed like a negligent God, an uncaring universe, is a
very personal one, with guidance tailored to each and
every person. When we accept chance as a powerful force
of nature, we come back into alignment with our ancient
philosophy about deities, and the universe welcomes us
back with a resounding Yes.

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An Attempt at Unlocking "Benito Cereno"

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Gregory Alan Brandt

"Benito Cereno" is the story of one man's assaying
the character of another: Captain Amasa Delano tries to
comprehend the ambiguous words and actions of his
counterpart, Don Benito, in order to determine wh~t~er
he is a pitiable figure, unhinged by misfortune, or a sm1ster one. The American withholds judgment until Cereno
leaps into his boat-seemingly to attack him-and he errs
in judging then. As readers we must assay Delano's character and, further, the narrative as a whole. Is he an obtuse man who saves himself and his ship by dumb luck,
or is his decision "to leave open margin" to "the Spaniard's
black-letter text" a shrewd one? (55) 1 Is the story incidentally about slavery or is that institution at its heart?
We should note that essay and assay both derive from the
French essai, "an attempt, a trial," for this etymology
points to a truth about writing: An essay is an attempt to
grapple with a problem that jumps at us from the books
we read and the text of our own lives. The problem that
I have been wrestling with, and the one that I hope will
afford a means of understanding "Benito Cereno" as a
whole, concerns the many religious references in the tale.
To put it simply, what are they doing there? How do they

flights of troubled gray vapors among which they
were mixed, skimmed low and fitfully over the
waters, as swallows over meadows before storms.
(37)
Something is not right with the foreign ship as well; it
fails to show its colors, possibly a sign of piratical intentions , yet it is so badly handled that Delano dismisses
any fears and soon goes to its aid. As we are not sure
what to make of the grayness of the morning and the actions of the vessel, so we are perplexed by the religious
overtones of these words. They do not seem to harmonize with the scene. For example, wimple carries benign
associations, but here the sun,

fit in?
The first few references are slight and easily overlooked. The sea on the morning that the Spanish ship
enters the harbor of St. Maria is "undulated into long roods
of swells." (37) A rood is an English measure of length
varying by locality from about five to eight yards. · Yet
the word originally denoted a crucifix, in particular one
placed at the chancel entrance of a medieval churc_h
(hence the Old English poem The Song of the Rood). This
overtone is quickly strengthened by the descriptions of
"the far matin light" streaming from the cabin of the
stranger and of the clouds that "wimpled" the .sun. (3.8)
The words matin and wimple are both associated with
religious orders, designatiilg respectively the first hour
of prayer in the canonical day and the headpiece worn by
nuns. These three references contribute to the feeling of
strangeness that prevails at the opening of the story. The

wimpled by the same low, creeping clouds,
showed not unlike a Lima intrigante's one sinister eye peering across the Plaza from the Indian
loophole of her dusk saya-y-manta. (38)
More importantly, these passing references prep~re
us for the first explicit one, the likening of the Spamsh
ship to "a whitewashed monastery after a thunderstorm,
seen perched upon some dun cliff among the Pyrenees.~'
(38) Melville's simile is a rich one. At a simple level, it
communicates the isolation and foreignness of the scene.
The stranger seems cut off from both the land and other
ships. Moreover, to one from Duxbury, Mass~chuset~s,
even to a captain who has sailed on the Spanish Mam,
the vision of a monastery in the Pyrenees might evoke
thoughts of medieval romances, of the long ago .and.f~r
away. When Delano steps aboard the San Dominick, i ~s
no exaggeration to say that he enters a world that he ts
not prepared to understand.
. ..
The word "whitewashed" is especially s1gmficant because of its association in the New Testament with
feigned virtue. Paul refers to a hypocritical priest as a
"whitewashed wall." (Acts 23:3) In the most widely
known example, Jesus says,

day is placid, but

"Woe to you, scribes and Pharisees, hypocrites!
for you are like whitewashed tombs, which outwardly appear beautiful, but within they are full
of dead men's bones and all uncleanness." (Mat-

(f)lights of troubled gray fowl, kith and kin with
1

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thew 23 :27)

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We think ofBabo, whose appearance of simple loyalty to
his master so touches Delano while concealing the "hive
of subtlety" inside him. (104) The words "dead men's
bones" certainly remind us of Don Alexandro Aranda's
fate, for his skeleton lies underneath the sun-bleached
canvas wrapped around the prow of the ship. The San
Dominick has become his tomb, and we get a slight foreshadowing of this fact when Melville, in the paragraph
describing the shrouded area, calls the roll of the ship
"hearselike." (40) A far stronger hint is the allusion to
Old Testament prophecy which preceeds this description:
The stranger's "keel seemed laid, her ribs put together,
and she launched, from Ezekiel's Valley of Dry Bones."
(39) For the first-time reader, these references ready oneperhaps not even consciously-for what is to come; for a
reader going through the narrative again, they create a
powerful resonance.
I observed at the outset that this story is about ambiguity, about how one judges the shades of grey in words
and deeds. It cannot be an accident that Melville uses the
word grey so many times in the opening of the tale. White
is no less an ambiguous color, however, and few have
thought more deeply about whiteness than Melville. He
devotes an entire chapter to it in Moby Dick, published
four years before "Benito Cereno." In the novel he notes
the many associations of white with "divine spotlessness
and power," "the majesty of Justice," and "the benignity
of age." (Chapter XLII) But it can also be the color of
disease and death. Babo makes a great deal of the connection between white skin and skeletal whiteness: According to the deposition, when he re vealed Don
Alexandro's remains, he asked the Spaniard "whose skeleton that was, and whether, from its whiteness, he should
not think it a white's ... " This question is followed by
the injunction "Keep faith with the blacks from here to
Senegal, or you shall in spirit, as now in body, follow
your leader." (95) The problem of whiteness has bearing on the story because we can be tempted to break it
down thematically to a conflict of white and black, good
and evil. When Cereno says that "[t]he Negro" has cast a
shadow over him that he cannot escape, we can interpret
this remark to mean that the wickedness embodied by
the blacks has overwhelmed his spirit. (The word negro
in Spanish is itself equivocal, meaning both "black," as
in the color or the man, and "wicked.") Delano resists
this temptation and so should the reader, precisely because it is too reductive. The American not only is unwilling to resolve grayness into white or black but he
also refrains from judging whiteness and blackness. We
shall develop this idea further below.

One last observation about the color white concerns
a change Melville made from his source for the tale
Amasa Delano's Narrative of Voyages and Travels. I~
Delano's work, the Americans take the Spanish and blacks
to Concepcion, where the trial is held. Melville, however, alters the setting to Lima. He could have made the
change simply for its own sake, that is, to fix his story in
its own imagined place and assert his authority as its creator, not a mere reteller of another's narrative. Chapter
XLII of Moby Dick provides us, though, with a more compelling reason. Here Melville gives the awful vision of a
city rocked by "cathedral toppling earthquakes" and
pounded by "frantic seas." He concludes:

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-it is not these things alone which make tearless
Lima the strangest, saddest city thou can'st see.
For Lima has taken the white veil; and there is a
higher horror in this whiteness of her woe. Old
as Pizarro, this whiteness keeps her ruins for ever
new; admits not the cheerful greenness of complete decay; spreads over her broken ramparts
the rigid pallor of an apoplexy that fixes its distortions.
These three sentences point us at once back to the "whitewashed monastery" at the opening of the tale and forward to its closing image, the view across the white city,
whose church holds the bones of Aranda, to the monastery on Mount Agonia (agonia means "death agony" in
Spanish) where Cereno is ensepulchered.
We can now move forward to the next religious reference and the problem that it raises. Adding to the monastic appearance of the foreign vessel is its carrying what
seems at first "a shipload of monks." (38) The narrator
tells of "Black Friars pacing the cloisters." (39) Shortly
thereafter we learn that the Spanish craft is named the
San Dominick-after, we assume, the founder of the Dominican order, also known as the Black Friars. It quickly
follows that the Spanish captain is "like some hypochondriac abbot"; (42) he listens to the reports of the ship's
status in a manner
not unlike that which might be supposed to have
been his imperial countryman's, Charles V, just
previous to the anchoritish retirement of that
monarch from the throne. (44)
The consistency of these references is pleasing, and again
we see foreshadowing of Cereno's eventual fate.
I want to argue, however, that the choice of San

I

�Dominick as a name is more than merely consistent. It is
illuminating, giving us a way of approac.hing. the theme
of "Benito Cereno." First we shall co~sider i~s ety.~ol­
ogy. Dominic is derived from the ~atl~ ~ommus, . lord
or master." The Spanish title Don is sim1larly denved,
and the Dons in the story are the slaves' masters- at least
in name. Baba invariably refers to Cereno as "mas.ter."
Dominic, however, comes from an inflection of dommus ,
dominicus, "belonging to a master." In the case of the
saint the name indicates his servitude to the Master of
Crea~ion and reminds us of Donne's claim in Holy Sonnet 14 that "I, I Except you enthrall me, never shall be
f ree.. ." The name is a knot of master and slave, and we
1
are not any more certain of what to do with i.t than De ~n.o
. 'th the knot thrown at him by the old sailor. Dominic
IS Wl
..
is properly the name of a servant, yet St. Domimc was
one of the lords of the Church. Don is properly the name
of a master, yet Don Benito is the slave of Babo and ~tufal.
San Dominick is a fitting appellation for a slave ship, but
the question for Delano and the reader is, who really pos-

hardly then, to indulge in personal ~l~rms any VY_,~Y involving the imputation of malign evil m any man (37)
might be a kind of wisdom distinct from "accuracy of
intellectual perception." (38) What he himself refers to
is Providence. After the old seaman tosses him the knot,
he feels uneasiness and tries to resist it. His qualms pass
away not through the agency of prayer but through the
sight of his boat Rover, which "had often press~d the beach
of Captain Delano's home ... " He says to himself:
What, I, Amasa Delano- ... I to be murdered
here at the ends of the earth on board a haunted
pirate ship by a horrible Spaniard? Too nonsensical to think of! Who would murder Amasa
Delano? His conscience is clean. There is someone above. Fie, fie, Jack of the Beach! you are a
child indeed .. . (67)
We can read these words in two different ways .. On ~he
one hand, they might show a movingly simple faith, hke
that of a child. On the other hand, we can argue more
cynically that here is a man with ~ remar~abl~ lack of
imagination. He cannot even conceive of his bemg murdered. He does not deserve the fate and hence whatever
it is that is above-he himself never uses the wo~d God~
will not let it happen. Later in the story when his suspicions of Cereno return, he immediately feels remorse,
.
feanng that "he should by implication have betrayed an
b
"
atheist doubt of the ever-watchful providenc~ ~ ove.
(86) In this case, it is again the presence of his . household boat" and, above all, the beauty of the evenmg that

sess the key?
Another problem with the name concern~ the actual
on
Delano's narrative. The incident our story ts based _
lved the Spanish ship Tryal in 1805. Melville
.
mvo
.
·
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changed both the name and the date, settmg his ta e m
1799. He could have done so for the reason ·se~ o~t above,
to put the story in a frame of his own imag.mmg. But
why not, say, the San Salvador in 1801? Lea~mg through
a chronology of world history, I found a possible answer.
In 1799 Toussaint L'Ouverture, a former sl~ve, led an
uprising against the Spanish on Santo Dommgo.' (San
Dominick and Santo Domingo are, of course, d1~ferent
versions of the same name.) This fact, along with the
etymological analysis,suggests that Melville's cho~ce was
purposeful and that he wanted the reader to consider the
story as a commentary on slavery. .
.
Before we undertake this cons1derat10n, I want to
examine one further religious aspect of "Benito Cereno,"
the faith-if that is the right word-that guides Delano. VY_e
can compare him to a blindfolded man who walks unwittingly along the edge of a precipice ~here .the smallest
misstep will destroy him. He has ghmmenngs that .the
situation is dangerous but puts his feelings of.unease aside.
And it is precisely his good-natured se.remty that saves
him· if he were to act suddenly out of ill temper-to object 'too strenuously to Babo's hovering around Cereno
perhaps-he would surely be at.tacked. It might ~e God
that delivers him to safety or JUSt luck,. or he .~1ght be
responsible for his own deliverance. Ht~ unw1.llmgness
"except on extraordinary and repeated mcenttves, and

restores his confidence.
.
In Delano's defense, we should note that he has little
time to ponder theology during the .rescu~. He acts unreservedly to help a stranger in obvious d.istress when he
could sail the Bachelor's Delight away. Like many people
acting in the moment, he relies on his visceral sense of
the situation. When faced with words or deeds that demand interpretation, he judges as magnanimously as.possible. So, for instance, he explains Cereno's occas10nal
incivilitv as a product of his misfortunes. We can wonder abo~t Delano's mental acuity, but we cannot question his charity. Ultimately, Melville might not supply
us with enough information to measure the. depth of the
captain's faith, but, given Delano' s own km?ly .way of
viewing others, we might hold that this behef is more
than just a lack of imagination.

In the remainder of this essay, I want to apply the

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analysis of religious references to the conclusion of
"Benito Cereno" and to determine whether, as suggested
above, we can read the tale as an indictment of slavery.
After giving the reader the deposition of Cereno, Melville
makes the following enigmatic statement:
If the deposition have served as the key to fit
into the lock of the complications which precede
it, then, as a vault whose door has been flung
back, the San Dominick's hull lies open today.
(101)

This sentence recalls to us an earlier exchange among
Babo, Cereno, and Delano. When Atufal, bound in chains,
appears before the two captains to be given the opportunity to beg the Spaniard's pardon, Babo draws the
American's attention to the fact that "master here carries
the key." Delano then notices the key "suspended by a
slender silken cord" around Cereno's neck and says, "So,
Don Benito-padlock and key-significant symbols truly."
(53) (So they are, although the American does not realize how truly and ironically he speaks.) The key is a
symbol of dominion, whether over a man, the Church, or
a narrative. It is interesting to observe that we say we
have "mastered" a work and thereby "made it our own"
when we attain a thorough knowledge of it and can unlock its complications. Melville here suggests that we
have been given what we need, yet the hull of the San
Dominick and the whole of the tale lie open to us only if
Cereno 's statement to the court is the key. Melville does
not write, "Thus the deposition serves as the key ... ";he
leaves the matter open to doubt. For many who read the
story, including Melville scholars, its central mystery is
why Cereno at age 29 loses the will to live, "the Negro"
having cast a shadow over him. The deposition provides
little help with this complication.
Taking up this problem, we should first remember
Delano's remarks earlier in the story on the power of anguish to unhinge one's mind. Not only does Cereno endure physical hardships but he also suffers the effects of
prolonged terror. He has seen his friends murdered and
has lived in fear for his life for many days. One of
Delano's most penetrating observations about the Spaniard occurs after Cereno recoils from one of the
American's many innocuously meant comments: "He is
like one flayed alive, thought Captain Delano; where may
one touch him without causing a shrink?" (83) For one
flayed alive, the mere weight of the air on one's skin"the thousand natural shocks I That flesh is heir to"-is
intolerable. What makes Delano's thought especially

powerful to the experienced reader is the fact that after
the blacks hack Aranda to death with hatchets, they strip
the skin from his body. (It is significant that Don
Alexandro's bones come to rest at last in a church named
for St. Bartholomew, for this saint was flayed alive while
preaching in Arabia.) Don Alexandro's skin is tom off
after his murder; Don Benito's spirit is rended while he
is still alive, and the damage might simply be irreparable.
Delano does not believe so, however. On the voyage
to Lima, he does his best to cheer his fellow captain and
understand his ailment. "Again and again," writes
Melville, their conversation turned to Cereno's acting the
part forced on him and Delano's failure to grasp what
was really happening aboard the San Dominick. Don
Benito sadly remarks:

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... you were with me all day, stood with me, sat
with me, talked with me, looked at me, ate with
me, drank with me; and yet, your last act was to
clutch for a monster, not only an innocent man,
but the most pitiable of all men. To such degree
may malign machinations and deceptions impose.
So far may even the best man err in judging the
conduct of one of the recesses of whose condition he is not acquainted. But you were forced
to it, and and you were in time undeceived.
Would that, in both respects, it was so ever, and
with all men. (102-3)
At the broadest level, we might conclude from this passage that Cereno despairs to live in a world in which such
misjudgments can occur. If malignity and the deceits that
it inspires can fool even the best of men, can one ever
truly be sure that he understands another person? In this
interpretation, Cereno is overwhelmed by his realization
of the power of evil among humanity and so retreats from
it, first to a monastery and then to a grave.
I wonder, though, whether Cereno's insight is not
more personal. Don Benito is a young man from a wellknown family, "a sort of Castilian Rothschild, with a noble
brother, or cousin, in every great trading town of South
America." (55) At least some of his family's wealth has
undoubtedly come from the slave trade, and he is comfortable with the institution before this voyage. He might
well never have thought about slavery-it was merely a
necessary part of his country's mining and agricultural
interests in the New World. What then if the "deceptions" that he mentions are those one puts upon himself?
That is, when Cereno speaks of an error in judgment,
perhaps he is thinking of Aranda's and his own in under-

�estimating the desire of the blacks for freedom and overestimating their tractability. The two probably assumed
that the slaves were reasonably content with their lot and,
in any event, incapable of organizing and carrying out a
rebellion. They deceived themselves about the capabilities of the blacks because their fortunes rested on a slave
labor, an institution premised on the slave's lack of humanity. They are brutally undeceived: to gain their liberty, the blacks act with all the craft, vigor, and ruthlessness that rebellious whites are capable of. If errors in
judgment are possible when the two men involved share
occupations and cultural heritage, how much more difficult is it to weigh the conduct of one from another race
and culture?
Don Benito himself is made a slave. He is compelled
to say things that he does not want to say and to do things
he finds repugnant. He knows the fear of one whose life
is entirely at the whim of another, and we sense that Baba
enjoys provoking terror in the Spaniard. The shaving
incident supports this last generalization and also provides a good example of the curious reversal of the master and slave relationship we noted when we examined
the etymology of Dominic. In this scene the ostensible
servant is wielding all the power while "master" is in his
thrall. For an instant Delano's mind grasps this fact, and
we are told that " ... in the black he saw a headsman, and
in the white a man at the block." (74) The more Cereno
shudders, the more coolly professional Baba acts.
To follow out this reading of the story's conclusion, I
would argue that what leads to Don Benito's despair and
lies behind his utterance "The Negro" is not wickedness
but "subtlety." (104) He cannot believe how badly he
misjudged the blacks until they become his master. The
reason, therefore, that he never again looks at Babo--faints
before the tribunal rather than do so-is his unwillingness
to admit that the black ruled over him, used him as a
means to an end. His former assumptions about his own
superiority have been destroyed and he cannot live without them. In other words, he has had an experience and
learned something about himself that he cannot bring into
his understanding of the world and of his place in it. He
cannot forget what has happened and he cannot live with
it. After Cereno's enigmatic two-word reply, Melville
writes what are among the saddest sentences in the tale:
There was a silence, while the moody man sat,
slowly and unconsciously gathering his mantle
about him, as if it were a pall.
There was no more conversation that day. (103)

Like Bartleby turning hi s face to the wall of the Tombs,
Don Benito resigns himself to the quietness of dust.
Captain Delano, by contrast, is untroubled by whatever it is that afflicts Cereno en route to Lima. Fanned
by the mild trade winds, he enjoys the beauty of the sea
and sky, and cannot fathom why his companion does not.
He acknowledges the role of Providence and the importance of his own "good-nature, compassion, and charity"
(102) in carrying him through the danger. His own thinking about human malignity and slavery seems unchanged
by his experience on the San Dominick.
One cannot deny that Delano does patronize the
blacks throughout the story. Melville writes that "like
most men of good, blithe heart, Captain Delano took to
Negroes, not philanthropically, but genially, just as other
men to Newfoundland dogs ." (73) Elsewhere he thinks
of them as "too stupid" to be in complicity with Cereno.
(65) Yet he also sees "pure tendernes s and love" (63) in
a black woman's treatment of her infant and, under the
misapprehension that Cereno has injured Babo to retaliate for the shaving cut, sympathizes with the black. He
thinks, "Ah, this slavery breeds ugly passions in man.Poor fellow!" (77) When the water arrives from his ship,
the American doles it out equitably:

ugly passions" in both master and slave. Captain Del
who thinks of blacks in terms of "the unas . .
ano ,
pmng content. .
ment of a limited mind" (73) is no paradigm of enlightenment; he would be an incredible character if he were.
Bu~ he does trea~ the blacks as if they have as much right
to 1t;e as the whites . Constitutionally unwilling to assay
men s h~arts by their ambiguous words and actions, he
acts chantably to all and so delivers himself and his crew
to safety.
The original investigation of religious elements has

th~refore led us to one way of reading "Benito Cereno."
Given th~ nature of this "grey" tale, we cannot claim to
have the i~terpretation of it or the best one, but we have
made quenes and con~ections that merit further thought.
In ans:v~r to the openmg question, we can now say that
th~ rebgi~us references serve three ends: They help to
umfy. the i~agery of the story, contribute to our under-

stand1~g of Its central characters, and thereby point us to
a crucial theme. These "significant symbols" are not the
key that ~nlocks the tale, but perhaps they bring us closer
to knowmg how to find the key.

He complied, with republican impartiality as to
this republican element, which always seeks one
level, serving the oldest white no better than the
youngest black, excepting, indeed, poor Don
Benito, whose condition, if not rank, demanded
an extra allowance. (70)
Judged by today 's standards, Delano is a racist, but he
does do what Cereno cannot, namely, regard the blacks
as fellow humans and treat them accordingly. He is a
decent man, and his virtue, as noted earlier, is that in a
situation where he feels unable to draw clear distinction ,
he withholds judgment, giving everyone the benefit of
the doubt.
"Benito Cereno" thus sounds no strident tocsin for
the abolition of slavery but instead makes a quiet argument. If one is willing to entertain the notion that another race possesses at least some measure of humanity,
then he cannot wonder when that race plots revenge for
its enslavement. After Babo is captured, he gives every
indication that, offered again the chance to revolt, he
would do so, and he goes to his death with noteworthy
dignity. During the passage to Peru,"[h]is aspect seemed
to say: since I cannot do deeds, I will not speak words."
(103) Denying the human qualities of such a man "breeds

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�TABLE OF CONTENTS

John Singleton

September 17, 1995 .............................................. 1

Carla Echevarria

Joyce's Ulysses: The Quest for Paternity ............. 2

Matthew Braithwaite

Magical Politics and the Perfection of Nature ...... 7

Jesse Berney

Haiku on the Motion of a Stretched String ........ 16

Eva Brann

Translation of Hermann Hesse's
An Evening At Home With Doctor Faustus ........ 17

Beatrice Robbins

Form of Language .............................................. 20

Dawn Star Shuman

They Do Not Understand: A Discussion of
the Heracleitus Fragment Number 12 ..... ........... 24

Janice Cater

"For He Unlocked the Hidden Treasuries of Truth"
Entertaining Ourselves with the Delightful
Contemplation of Newton's Principia ............... 26

Peter Smith

Heroism in Racine's Phedre ............................... 34

Alexa Van Dalsem

Lyric Narrative ................................................... 37

�September 17, 1995
By John Singleton
February 1996
First-born son and Sunday born,
Blue-lipped, in fits he kicked and hit,
A wingbeat flutter in my arms,
He sung to me in squeaks and clicks.
Like yeast and flour, the doughy flesh,
Rose round, lamb-soft, and toasty white,
His vernixed skin baked oven fresh,
Eyes fixed upon the simple light.
He'll go - and in his journey find,
A young man's passion, folly, joy.
A father measures his decline,
In set-jawed stances of the boy.
My own song then, I do extend.
A relic father to his son.
That wet lipped at the breast again
Hot fisted under sabbath sun:
Dance chanting in the star-lit night,
Stomp blessings 'round its fires,
Bend low beneath the kindred light,
Sons crowned, unbound, unbriered.
"Sing kindness in life's mystery,
Beat praises to adventure,
Sculpt rhythms to its history,
Painting beauty at its center."

�J 0 Y CE ' S ULYSSES : THE QUE ST F 0 R PATERNITY

Joyce's Ulysses: The Quest for Paternity
By Carla Echevarria
Of "many-faced" Odysseus' many faces, one of
those we glimpse least is that of him as a father.
Among his multiplicity of personas throughout the
Iliad and Odyssey are the sailor, the captain, the soldier, the trickster, the king, and of course, the mighty
hero. In the latter poem, we also get a chance to see
him as a husband: his long journey home and the
bloody battle to reclaim his household finally find their
conclusion in tl.ie arms of his beloved Penelope.
But what of Odysseus' relationship with his son,
Telemachus? Comparatively little is written about the
reunion of the father with the son he left as a child,
and found a young man. The result of their reunion is
not a profound "mingling in love," filled with nostalgia and story-telling, but a strategic military alliance.
They unite, but as soldiers, not family.
Joyce's Ulysses is a hero in a much-less-thanmighty sense, and he is not at all a sailor, a soldier, or
a king. But Leopold Bloom, at the end of the day,
holds at least the potential for fatherhood. His odyssey through the Dublin of June 16, 1904, past dead
men, drunks, whores, and Catholics, is one well worth
considering with an eye to this potential end.
When we first meet Bloom, he is the Odysseus of
he Calypso episode: chained in domestic servitude to
a goddess. Newly risen in the morning, his first concern is to prepare his wife's breakfast while she sleeps,
and serve it to her in bed before attending to his own
meal. It is clearly a regular morning ritual which Molly
no longer even appreciates. Over the course of the
morning, he displays signs of his marital servitude as
he takes great care in running small errands for his
wife: buying her favorite kind of soap at the druggist's,
even picking out a sufficiently smutty romance novel
to suit her reading tastes. While in another marriage
these might be construed as little gestures of love, the
fact that Bloom obviously does them out of habit and
that Molly obviously doesn't care transforms them

instead into shackles of slavery. Bloom must escape
this ''Calypso's island" in order to realize the goal of
his odyssey to fatherhood.
The episode that follows ends with Bloom taking
a bath. The organs corresponding to this episode in
Joyce's schema 1 are the genitals, and it is here that we
first get an explicit look at the sexual Bloom. His
organ of fatherhood is described as he sits contemplating it in the bath:

sheds much light upon a re-reading of this episode,
for it marks the beginning of Bloom's odyssey toward
fatherhood. At this point, he is "limp," and only the
"father of thousands" by a remote potential, one that
he brings closer to actualization by the end of the day.
The Nausicaa episode [Book II, Ch. 10] describes
a significant turning-point in Bloom's sexual process.
It is 8 p.m., at the end ,of Bloom's working-day, and
he has come to take a walk on the beach. An entire
conversation of non-verbal flirtation-from-afar that
takes place between him and the Nausicaa figure of
the episode, a young girl named Gerty MacDowell.
She coyly shows off her undergarments to him and
awakens his sexual desire. Joyce uses the description
of the fireworks display to hint at what is happening
to Bloom, as the tumescence technic of the episode
swells and climaxes with him:
And then a rocket sprang and bang shot blind
blank and 0 ! then the Roman candle burst
and it was like a sigh of 0 ! and everyone
cried 0 ! 0 ! in raptures and it gushed out of
it a stream of rain gold hair threads and they
shed and ah! they were all greeny dewy stars
falling with golden, 0 so lovely! 0 so soft,
sweet, soft! [Book II, Ch. 10]

He saw his trunk and limbs riprippled over
and sustained, buoyed lightly upward, lemon
yellow: his navel, bud of flesh: and saw the
dark tangled curls of his bush floating, floating hair of the stream around the limp father
of thousands, a languid floating flower. [Book
II, Ch. 2]
We do not learn until much later that his "languid floating flower" has been languid for eleven years; he has
been impotent since the death of his infant son, Rudy,
at the age of eleven days. This information, however,
1In

his "schema" for Ulysses, Joyce lists the Title, Scene, Hour,
Organ, Art, Symbol, Color, and Character Correspondences that
correspond with each chapter, or episode, of the novel. For example, let us take the first episode of the Book II: it is Titled the
"Calypso" episode, and narrates a Scene which takes place in
Bloom's house at the Hour of 8 a.m. The Organ of the kidney
plays a prominent and interesting part in this episode, and because it concerns Bloom's domestic matters, the Art corresponding to it is economics. The Title alone makes it clear that the
central Symbol of the episode is the nymph. Joyce chooses to
identify this episode with the Color orange; he has written the
episode with a Technic he chooses to describe as a "mature narrative". And, finally, the Correspondences between Joyce's characters and Homer's are listed as: "Bloom= Odysseus, Molly =
Calypso".

glish, to Middle, to Elizabethan. The transitions are
seamless, and the reader feels as though he is witnessing somehing changing and growing with time, like a
child in the womb. It is the Oxen of the Sun episode,
and oxen are one of the age-old symbols of fertility. It
is in this episode that Bloom's quest for fatherhood finds
its first concrete object, in the form of Stephen Dedalus.
Stephen, whom Joyce's schema explicitly lists as
the Telemachus figure to Bloom's Odysseus, is in this
episode sitting in a waiting-room at the hospital drinking with some rowdy, young companions. What we
know about him has been established by the first three
chapters of the novel, which Joyce names the
Telemachia, and by the story of his early years as told
in A Portrait of the Artist As A Young Man. We know
him as a charismatic young man whose status as an
"artist" has yet to be firmly established; we have seen
into his mind, saturated with a mess of unorganized
bits of erudition, and acutely conscious of itself. But
his role as the "son" of Bloom is yet unclear (their
paths have not even crossed except in indirect encounter), and will only come to fruition over the course of
this evening which has just begun.
The conversation that the young men are having
over their drinks is largely concerned with sex and
pregnancy. At one point, Stephen condemns contraceptive intercourse and masturbation, asserting, in
Thomistic argument, that the true end of sex is parenthood: "Gramercy, what of those Godpossibled
souls that we nightly impossibilise, which is the sin
against the Holy Ghost, Very God, Lord and Giver of
Life? For, sirs, our lust is brief. We are but means to
those small creatures within us and nature has other
ends than we."
The setting of this episode in a maternity hospital
serves a purpose other than symbolism: Bloom, hearing the cries of women in labor, recollects the birth of
his own son, Rudy, and it is the recollection that becomes an important segue into his paternal focus on
Stephen:

His onanism demonstrates that Bloom has regained his virile capacity for fertilization, and he is
one step closer to fatherhood.
From here, Bloom proceeds to the maternity ward
of the National Maternity Hospital on Holles street.
This episode [Book II, Ch. 11], one of the most stylistically difficult, opens with three incantations, each ·
reapeated thrice. They are delivered in the manner of
the Arval Hymn, a chant which was part of a ceremony
performed by the Fratres Arvales, priests of the Roman goddess of fertility. 2 This, along with the less
subtle hint of the maternity hospital, are Joyce's signals to the attentive reader that this chapter will deal
with fertility and reproduction.
.
This theme is reflected even in the technic which
Joyce uses. In an impressive display oflinguistic capacity, he has written the chapter in a style that evolves
slowly over the course of the episode, from Old En-

But sir Leopold was passing grave maugre
his word by cause he still had pity of the terror-causing shrieking of shrill women in their
labour and as he was minded of his good lady
Marion that had borne him an only manchild
which on his eleventh day had died and no

2

1 owe this information to Ulysses Annotated, by Don Gifford, p. 408.

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to "she." Bella/Circe is the central figure of this episode, and she represents the emasculating powers that
Bloom must face and overcome.
The madam herself switches back and forth between being Bella and Bello, and in her masculine
aspect she is cruel and tyrannical like the Homeric
goddess, holding dominion over Bloom with the
words, "Henceforth you are unmanned and mine in
earnest, a thing under the yoke." She then makes him
put on women's clothing of "shot silk". She and her
whores then hold Bloom down to the floor and torture
him with physical sadism as she recites a litany of his
womanlike weaknesses. These turn out to be multiple and rather surprising. Made to don a corset, petticoat, and garters, he confesses to being a cro~s­
dresser: to having tried on his mother's clothes, and
to having been turned into a "true corsetlover" by playing a female impersonator in a high school play. He
is also revealed to have masochistic tendencies, linked
to his fear of women: "(Cowed.) Exuberant female.
Enormously I desiderate your domination." "The Sins
of the Past" parade by in a medley of voices, telling of
his deeds with whores and strumpets, his having masturbated in phone booths and over used-pieces of toilet paper, having written pencilled messages in pub1ic
places offering his wife's services "to all strong-membered males".
His subjugation to his wife is brought back to our
attention by Bello: "The missus is master. Petticoat
government." To this, Bloom can only reply, "That is
so." His gender reversal and Bella's is symbolic of
the reversal of traditional roles that has taken place in
his marriage. We are reminded of our very first look
at Bloom, eleven episodes ago, when he began his day
by bringing Molly breakfast in bed. Bello completes
the symbolism when he places a ring on the female
Bloom's finger and says, "With this ring I thee own."
The bizarre mess of hallucinations is finally shattered by Stephen, toward the end of the chapter, when
he shatters the chandelier with a blow of his ash plant.
With this sudden return of reality, Bloom regains his
masculi nity by taki ng control of the situation. Bello,
before whom the female Bloom once cowered in fear,
reverts to being Bella, and she in turn cowers before
the male Bloom, shrieking in fear when he raises the
ashplant as if to strike.
Having thus overcome the symbol of his emasculation in the form of Bello, Bloom is ready to take an

man of art could save so dark a destiny ...
and now sir Leopold that had of his body no
manchild for an heir looked upon him his
friend's son ... so grieved he also in no less
measure for young Stephen for that he lived
riotously with those wastrels and murdered
his goods with whores. [Book II, Ch. 11]
From Bloom's train of mental association, we can
see that Stephen is to somehow become a replacement Rudy, at least for one night. This, finally, is the
first explicit hint at the relationship between the two
men, predicting a crossing of paths which, by the end
of the evening, will have changed three lives forever.
From the hospital, Bloom follows Stephen and his
crew of "wastrels" to Dublin's red-light district, and
the Circe episode begins [Book II, Ch. 12]. It is probably the weirdest of all the episodes, written as a "hallucination" by Joyce's description, and it reads like a
surreal nightmare. Here, in the sordid setting of a lowclass brothel, we get a more intimate look into the
candid workings of both Bloom's psyche and
Stephen's, and the foundation of their relationship is
cemented.
Essential to paternity is masculinity, and one of
the most formidable obstacles in Bloom's path to fatherhood are the forces which seek to emasculate him.
In order for him to overcome his impotence and become a father, he must first overcome is emasculation
and become a man. The division between the sexes is
examined, contorted, ripped apart, and utterly done
away with in this episode, and it is the process by which
Bloom regains his manhood.
One of the most bizarre things about Bloom's
"hallucination" is the mess of gender-reversals that
take place in the episode, following the entrance of
the brothel's madam, Bella. She is the Circe figure of
the episode, and we are reminded that in Homer's epic,
Odysseus is warned by Hermes against this particular
goddess, "lest you find yourself unmanned by her".
In Homer's context, the warning is intended to mean
that Circe's magic turns men into swine, but in Joyce 's,
unmanned has a twofold meaning. Bella turns Bloom
not only from a man into a pig, but from a male into a
female. There are only the smallest, and rather confusing hints that this is so: Bloom falls to the ground
"on all fours" and cries "Truffles!", and at the same
time the personal pronoun pertaining to him switches

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active, real step toward paternity. This he does by
rescuing Stephen from the redcoats who assault him.
As Bloom stands over the younger man, waiting for
Stephen to regain consciousness, a figure appears to
him, an eleven-year-old boy in a school uniform, reading a book. It is the figure of his son, Rudy, who died
at the age of eleven days, and is here seen by Bloom
at the age he would haV'e been had he lived. The white
lamb's wool coverlet that his mother knitted for his
burial is transformed into a white lambkin peeping out
of his waistcoat pocket. The delicate apparition hovers over Stephen, like the Holy Spirit above Christ in
the waters of Galilee, and serves to symbolically "baptize" Stephen and, finally, make Bloom a father.
Thus begins the Nostos, the homecoming [Book
III]. United with his father in Ithaca, Telemachus must
now help Odysseus conquer and slay the suitors who
overrun his household, that he may regain his position as master of his home.
Joyce spent a lot of time acquainting us with
Stephen Dedalus not because he is the essential figure
in this novel - else the novel might have been titled
Telemachus - but because he is the necessary component to Bloom's nostos. No other character in the
novel, not Buck Mulligan or Lynch or any other young
man, could have fulfilled the role that Stephen does in
Bloom's odyssey. This may be because of the reciprocative nature of their interaction: Stephen acquires
from his evening with Bloom something that no one
else could have given him, if only because no one else
would have been willing to be a father to him for one
night. In any case, the relationship that develops between Bloom and Stephen, adpotive father and son,
though it endures for only the remainder of the night,
would require an entire other essay to examine completely. I will not examine it incompletely here, because it is not the end of Bloom's odyssey toward fatherhood, but only the penultimate step.
Once father and son have stolen back into their
house, Telemachus bars the door behind them so that
the suitors may not escape. But most of the slaying is
left up to Odysseus. Likewise, after Bloom sneaks
into his house via the window (having forgotten his
keys), he lets Stephen in by the front door, and the
younger man locks the door behind him. But the "slaying" of the "suitors" is a task that Bloom must do alone.
The slaughter begins when Odysseus proves his
identity to the suitors by stringing the great bow that

none of them were able to string. Joyce lists the bow
in his schema as a symbol for reason, and it is through
reason - that is, rhetoric - that Bloom persuades
Stephen to quit the company of Buck Mulligan.
Mulligan corresponds in Joyce's schema to the first
suitor who is slain, Antinous. The second suitor who
is slain is Eurymachus, who corresponds to "Blazes"
Boyland, Molly's lover. Bloom "slays" Boylan in his
mind by rationally examining his emotional responses
to his own cuckoldry (envy, jealousy, abnegation, and
equanimity), and examining his options for retribution in a likewise very rational manner:
Assasination, never, as two wrongs did not
make one right. Duel by combat, no. Divorce,
not now. Exposure by mechanical artifice (automatic bed) or individual testimony (concealed
ocular witness), not yet. Suit for damages by
legal influence or simulation of assault with
evidence of injuries sustained (selfinflicted), not
impossibly. [Book ill, Ch. 2]
Finally, he justifies the affair and his own feelings
by a process of reasoned "reflections" :
The preordained frangiblity of the hymen,
the presupposed intangibility of the thing in
itself. .. the fallaciously inferred debility of
the female, the muscularity of the male: the
variations of ethical codes. . .the continual
production of semen by distillation: the futility of triumph or protest or vindication: the
inanity of extolled virtue: the lethargy of
nescient matter: the apathy of the stars.
[Book III, Ch. 2]
Just as the aegis of Athena appears as a heavenly
portent in Odysseus' hall in the midst of all the slaying, Bloom and Stephen simultaneously observe a "celestial sign" in the form of "a star precipitated with
great apparent velocity across the firmament" as they
stand outside urinating.
When all the slaughter is done, Telemachus is sent
away and Odysseus fumigates his house, just as Bloom
does after Stephen's departure. Bloom has offered
him the guest bedroom of his house, but Stephen declines. They have made plans between them, for voice
lessons and Italian lessons, for "static, semistatic, and

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peripatetic intellectual dialogues" in the future, but
Bloom forsees difficulties in realizing these plans. He
recalls how:
once at a performance of Albert Hengler's
circus in the Rotunda, Rutland Square,
Dublin, an intuitive particoloured clown in
quest of paternity had penetrated from the
ring to a place in the auditorium where
Bloom, solitary, was seated and had publicly
declared to an exhilirated audience that he
(Bloom) was his (the clown's) papa. [Book
III, Ch ..2]
We learn that the clown was not, as a matter of
fact, Bloom's son. This memory is an illustration of
what Bloom calls "the irreparability of the past." The
past stands as it has happened, with Bloom's biological son dead and Stephen's biological father being
someone else. It is for this reason that Stephen and
Bloom go their separate ways at the end of the evening.
Bloom may "adopt" Stephen for one night, as he has,
but adoptive fatherhood is not true fatherhood, and
his odyssey is not quite over yet.
Throughout the slaughter, Penelope lies unaware,
sleeping. When she awakens and.Odysseus presents
himself to her, she is skeptical, and after ten years of
separation, is reluctant at first to accept the "beggar"
in rags as her lost husband. What finally secures her
belief is Odysseus' knowledge of the unique construction of their marital bed.
The final episode of the novel takes place in
Bloom's marital bed, where Molly lies sleeping. He
climbs into bed, she awakens, and they converse a little
before falling back asleep. Two very important things
happen, however, and together they constitute Bloom's
final step towards fatherhood.
The first of these is that Bloom, in kissing his
wife's rump, gets an erection. This would not be a
spectacular event, were we not alert to the fact that it
is the first he's had while lying with his wife in eleven
years. Traumatized by the death of his only son, Bloom
was unable to have sexual relations with Molly for
over a decade. This, his first instance of arousal in
her presence, signals the beginning of a new episode
of fatherhood for Bloom.
The second important event is that Bloom, before
he falls asleep, requests that Molly get him breakfast

in bed the next morning. As she falls asleep, she reflects that "he never did a thing like that before", and
we again remember how, for time immemorial it
seems, Bloom always brought Molly breakfast in bed.
The event of Bloom's erection, a figurative return
to his marital bed after a long hiatus, is the culmination of the sexual process of revolution that has taken
place over the day: from his limpness in the bath, to
his masturbation on the beach, and finally to the beginnings of real sexual intimacy with a real woman,
his wife. His request for breakfast in bed is the culmination of the psychological process of revolution
that took place mainly in the Circe episode: the conversion of his marriage from a condition of domestic
servitude and inequality into a real union of love _ nd
a
partnership.
Bloom, with these apparently-inconsequential gestures, completes his odyssey and his homecoming. Just
as Odysseus must now rebuild his kingdom on Ithaca
and restore the familial bonds of his home, Bloom has
begun the rebuilding of the both the physical and psychological foundations necessary to raise a home. He
is ready to face a new marriage and a new fatherhood.
It will be a fatherhood not only in the adoptive sense,
but in the true, biological one. And as she drifts off to
sleep, Molly responds to this proposition,
yes I will Yes. •

6

Magical Politics and the Revelation and Perfection of Nature
By Matthew Braithwaite
The Tempest is a play the whose structure seems
knit together by political events. Prospero's betrayal
is the catalyst for the action of the play; his reinstatement its conclusion. Yet it is impossible to read the
play as the tale of a wronged duke regaining his dukedom. This is mostly because there is much of the play
that is more than political, and more to Prospero's actions than is necessary to his dukedom and Miranda's
marriage. Furthermore, his magical powers allow him
to achieve whatever ends he wishes with much less
delicacy than he in fact devotes. By being as delicate
as he is, Prospero manages wholly to avoid coercing
others to do his bidding: even Caliban gets a measure
of freedom. Prospero does form illusions and false
impressions as guides,,but the characters' actions are
their own. What is more, the situations Prospero creates prompt their actors more fully to express their
natures in their actions: his illusions allow the light of
truth to shine on whom they charm-a valuable gift
for a philosopher.
The decisions that most clearly enable this to happen are the division of the characters on Alonso's ship
into groups according to Prospero's aims, and the
manner in which Prospero appears to each group. To
Ferdinand he appears directly (since Ferdinand needs
no encouragement to fit into Prospero's plan; far from
it), and to Stephano and Trinculo through Caliban's
report. But he reserves his strongest use .o f magic for
Alonso (who needs prodding to find his conscience),
to whom he appears through the speech made by
Arie1's "figure of a harpy" .
The first scene of the play typifies Prospero' s treatment of Alonso and his company: he gives them pressures to endure, and all but Gonzalo take them poorly.
Alonso, Sebastian, and Antonio are absurd in their
interference with the boatswain's office: they try to
command what they cannot, and obstruct those who
know better than they what to do. They are leaders

who, by not recognizing nature for the rightful authority during the tempest, show that they do not know
how to be led. When the boatswain says that they
"assist the storm" (l.i.14) 1 he is of course unaware that
the storm is Prospero's hand, but this is not lost on the
reader. This is the first of many wonderful such ironies: these three wicked men by their very character
cannot but assist the action of Prospero's justice upon
them. When they are exposed to "state of nature", it
becomes clear that Sebastian and Antonio do not have
nobility within them but thrust upon them, as their viciousness here and later shows. Despite Gonzalo's
urging them to behave as befits civilized men, it is
clear that they do not consider anyone's case to be as
their own.
From Prospero we shortly learn that their evil has
some history to it. The political arts that Prospero disdained, he cast upon Antonio, in whom they "awak'd
an evil nature" (I.ii.93):
Being once perfected how to grant suits,
How to deny them, who t' advance, and who
To trash for overtopping, new created
The creatures that were mine, I say, or chang'd em,
Or else new form' d 'em; having both the key
Of officer and office, set all hearts i' the ' state
To what tune pleas'd his ear (I.ii.79-85)
What Antonio learned, that is, were the arts of favor;
and with them he re-created Prospero's court in his
own image. The license granted Antonio by this power
is like that granted by the island: in most men, law
1

All quotations are taken from The Riverside Shakespeare, Vol. II,
G. Blakemore Evans, ed. All citations to the play are made within
the text in standard form. I am grateful to Dean Brann for her
guidance; and particularly for the suggestion that I write on a
work of literature, which, taken, has provided good instruction.

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fects nature, has so done, or merely gives the appearance thereof. Prospero's exchange with Gonzalo shows
that he is acutely and painfully aware of the horrors
that a civilized veneer can conceal:

may be relied on as a counterweight to wrongful desires; but a ruler must rely on conscience to serve in
that office, and Antonio has none. Like Caliban, he
gives free reign to his desires (though they are of a
different kind than Caliban's), subject only to practical obstacles; and so, like Caliban, he is slavish-the
most unfitting condition for a-ruler. If Gonzalo's statement that "our case is as theirs" (l.i.55) is metaphorical, meaning that the state of the subjects is as the
state of the sovereign (as we might suspect from
Prospero's metaphor of subjects being "new created"
in the sovereign 's image), the case of Antonio 's Milan
is truly miserable.
The most terrible example of Antonio and
Sebastian showing their true colors comes when
Prospero puts all but this evil pair to sleep. Prospero
clearly anticipates what in fact occurs, as is clear from
Ariel's words to Gonzalo:

Gon. Their manners are more gentle, kind, than of
Our human generation you shall find
Many, nay, almost any.
Pros. (Aside.) Honest lord,
Thou hast said well; for some of you there present
Are worse than devils.(III.iii.32-6)
The illusion created by Prospero for these "three
men of sin" that they are sole survivors on a desolate
island is completed by Ariel's appearance in III.iii.
Alonso, despairing of ever finding Ferdinand, is prepared to enter into the dream that Prospero has made
for him: that nature has requited his past injustices
through the death of his son. Though this is not, strictly,
true, one might well wonder if it makes a difference.
Gonzalo, despite his not having seen Ariel, sees nothing peculiar or inexplicable about Alonso's guilt. Nor
does Alonso himself think his own guilt to be a temporary insanity, as his penitence does not vanish with
Ferdinand's restoration: he has undergone, Scroogelike, a curative dream. Unlike his brother, Alonso is
not beyond redemption, and it is this that Prospero's
illusions cause him to reveal. When Prospero breaks
his charms, Alonso has expiated his guilt, and is
minded as Prospero wishes him to be, suggesting himself the very solution to all problems that Prospero
has planned:

My master through his art foresees the danger
That you, his friend, are in, and sends me forth
(For else his project dies) to keep them living.
(II.i.297-9)
Exactly as one might expect, Antonio's evil wells
to the surface, and resonates in Sebastian. Both in
this scheme and in his betrayal of Prospero, Antonio
counts on two things: the absence of strong men opposing him, and the means to crush any opposition
swiftly and decisively. In deposing his brother, the
first of these requirements is met by Prospero's preoccupation with study and by the malleability of his
subordinates; the second by Naples' army. In plotting
to do away with Alonso, he counts on being able to do
in Gonzalo as well (whom he had previously ridiculed,
but here takes seriously), and again on the weakness
of his victims' subordinates. The things Antonio fears
are men of strong conscience and outraged mobs.
What the island provides is a means of avoiding these
difficulties: there Gonzalo is easily killed, and a tearful Sebastian can tell the Neapolitan army and citizenry that his brother and nephew perished at sea. That
is to say, by its isolation the island gives aid chiefly to
the concealment (rather than to the perpetration) of an
evil deed. The fact that Gonzalo's waking does not
weaken Antonio's resolve suggests exactly this; that
by means of the freedom its isolation provides, the
island tests whether nurture, taken as that which per-

A daughter?
0 heavens, that they were living both i Naples,
The King and Queen there! That they were, I wish
Myself were mudded in that oozy bed
Where my son lies. (V.i.148-52)
But of course this neat end, which moves
Prospero's cherished daughter into the world, and in
so doing, restores Milan from its "most ignoble stooping", is like Alonso's penitence in respect of its cause:
though Prospero creates a setting in which the two
may fall in love, it is their own natures that draw them
together.
Ferdinand's isolation, like that of Antonio and
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Miranda for his bride, as he says, "when I could not
ask my father for his advice; nor thought I had one"
(V.i.190-1) (the pain of which thought Ariel's music
has softened). Miranda, for her part, is encouraged by
Prospero to disobey his commands and show her love
for Ferdinand: his own laborious trial tries her also.
Though Miranda thinks her father sleeps when she
converses with Ferdinand (III.i), both of them withstand their supposed freedom from his eyes with propriety. Indeed, Ferdinand's first request to Miranda is
that she "will some good instruction give on how I
may bear me here" (I.ii.425-6). Ferdinand carries his
nobility with him, and so Miranda's reaction to him,

Prospero knows, though, that she cannot forever
inhabit his artificially pure and dream-like world; that
he must release Miranda from being a daughter so that
she may become a queen. His statement that she is
ignorant of what she is (which fact she is aware of)
means, I think, that Miranda belongs also to the world
and that he can no longer keep her from it. Ferdinand's
wish that they may keep Prospero's wise company in
his island paradise is impossible, if for no other reason than that it denies a duty to rule. Miranda's upbringing on this island is, as Prospero says, blessed.
To him the world of the political is suspect, since it
conceals nature and breeds falsehoods: how could his
child know the true from the false in such a setting
when even he did not? Better to let her be exposed to
truths: the only imperfections which Miranda has seen
are Caliban's, and his nature is not evil, but simply not
human. Nothing of Caliban is concealed; his very appearance speaks his nature. Against him Miranda can
measure what it means to be a perfected human being.
So by experi~nce Miranda knows the distinction between animal and cultivated, about which it is impossible to be deceived; but she is not for her innocence
ignorant of the subtler corruptions particular to political man, as her question to Prosper_o, "Wherefore did
they not that hour destroy us?" (l.ii.137-8) shows.
Miranda is free from the clouded vision engendered
by the political world, and this may help her survive
in it. The forthrightness of her mind may be seen in
Ferdinand's courtship of her. They speak between
themselves with directness and purity. Miranda's admonition, "Hence, bashful cunning, and prompt me,
plain and holy innocence!" (III.i.81-2), is the prerogative of her nature. She and Ferdinand are such as
to banish suspicion and banter from each other's minds:
to see is to love.
Prospero's illusion for Ferdinand and Miranda is
the same as that he creates for Antonio and Sebastian:
freedom from watchful eyes. But the plain difference
between the two pairs is captured perfectly m
Ferdinand's defense of his virtue:

There's nothing ill can dwell in such a temple.
If the ill spirit have so fair a house,
Good things will strive to dwell with 't.
(l.ii.457-9)
and his to her, show great clarity of mind, though some
might cynically remark that it is only Miranda's naivete
that makes her speak thus, and that it was a lucky thing
for her that the first young man she set eyes on was
Ferdinand. This suggestion has an unfortunate hereditary parallel in the fault which lost Prospero his
dukedom. But this is too ugly a thought to be true; it
is both better and more plausible to take their "changing eyes" as the result of beautifully clear perception:
they see each other's spirits made flesh in each other's
appearances.
It might at first seem paradoxical to say that
Miranda exhibits this kind of sight. She is, after all,
entirely innocent of human affairs. But her wholeness
and intelligence say that she is not as ignorant as her
isolated upbringing might suggest. Prospero has devoted no small amount of care to his daughter's education, and the education of a scholar and magician
must be rich with teaching stories and dreams, and
other noble lies. Miranda has been in some measure
formed by Prospero's Art; she is a created thing, of
whom Prospero is justly proud:
Here, afore heaven,
I ratify this my rich gift. 0 Ferdinand,
Do not smile at me that I boast her off,
For thou shalt find she will outstrip all praise
And make it halt behind her. (IV.i.7-11)

... the murkiest den,
The most opportune place, the strong'st suggestion
Our worser genius can, shall never melt
Mine honor into lust... (IV.i .25-8)
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opportune place" to act wickedly, but while opportunity exposes baseness in Antonio, it makes Ferdinand's
purity and devotion all the stronger. Prospero's description of Caliban as "a born devil, on whose nature
nurture can never stick" (IV.i.188-9) illustrates the
difference between these types neatly: it is clear that
nurture has done more than stick to Miranda and
Ferdinand. While Antonio's evil is concealed by his
civilized garments, Ferdinand's and Miranda's natures
incorporate the perfection of nurture, and so require
no revealing. This last can be said also of Caliban, for
when he is given opportunity he reveals nothing of
himself that was not obvious. Caliban and Miranda
are antitheses: the one animal and the other perfected,
but both true. But while Prospero calls Caliban a devil,
he rightly calls Antonio worse than a devil, because
he is nurture perverted. So Caliban is at the center the
play, for against him its foulest evil and most perfect
beauty are both opposed ..
Caliban has a deep connection to the island. Not
only was he born there, but he is, we assume, left alone
there at the end of the play. Where Prospero and
Miranda are guests on the island, Caliban is its sole
native. He knows the island's every corner, so much
so that the island provides for his sustenance. He is
infused with the island's nature. Strangely, misshapen
creature that he is, he speaks beautifully. Even his
curses are delivered in neatly-turned phrases. While
uncivilized and crude, Caliban is capable of feeling,
and is a lover of beauty, as this wonderful passage
reveals:
Be not afeard, the isle is full of noises,
Sounds, and sweet airs, that give delight
and hurt not. /Sometimes a thousand
twangling instruments /Will hum about
mine ears; and sometime voices, /That if I
then had wak'd after long sleep, /Will
make me sleep again, and then in dreaming, /The clouds methought would open,
and show riches /Ready to drop upon me,
that when I wak' d /I cried to dream again.
(Ill.ii.135-43)
It is no mere beast that dreams and takes delight in
music. What is, in a small way, tragic about these
capacities is that Caliban is not sensitive merely to
natural beauty, but also to human beauty. He has an

expression of wonder for nearly everyone in the play:
"These be fine things, and if they be not sprites. That's
a brave god, and bears celestial liquor. I will kneel to
him." (Il.ii.116-7); "But she so far surpasseth
Sycorax as great'st does least." (IIl.ii.102-3); "O
Setebos, these be brave spirits indeed! How fine my
master is!" (V.i.261-2). But if he finds beauty in
Stephano, it can only be in comparison to his own
ugliness. He is driven to serve Stephano simply because he sees him as something wondrously superior
to himself (though, to his credit, he eventually escapes
this misapprehension). Though it may be tempting to
call Caliban a natural slave because of this, natural
slavery requires that it be better for the one in question to be ruled. But Caliban is no better for Prospero's
rule over him, since the latter's "humanly taken pains"
cannot soften Caliban's inhuman nature. The idea of
natural slavery depends on rule improving on the state
of nature, but a human nature seems to be required to
be susceptible to this improvement. When Prospero
embarks for Naples, and Caliban is left alone as he
was before Prospero came, he will be just as he was
before, but with consciousness of his own inferiority
and of beauties he will never attain. If ever enlightenment were cruel it is so here.
The apparent contradiction between this picture
of Caliban on the one hand, and that of the ill-mannered and bestial slave on the other, wants explanation. Certainly it is not merely an animal that speaks
in unrhymed iambic pentameters. Caliban owes what
he is to three things: his bestial nature, which he inherits; the island on which he grew up; and his association with Prospero and Miranda. Caliban has had
from these two the gift of language. Though he says
that his only profit from it is cursing, this is far from
the truth. Without speech, there would be nothing curious
about Caliban: the creature Miranda describes (l.ii.355)
sounds truly like an unreasoning brute, an animal.
The reverence we have for speech causes us habitually to assume that the abilities which we see expressed in speech, such as reason and poetry, are inseparable from the faculty itself. In Caliban, we find
speech separate from humanity, so it pays to examine
what in Caliban is due to speech, and what is independent of it. Such a division would also be the division
between things that (in speaking creatures generally)
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Caliban first describes Prospero's teaching him
language thus:

different from an animal, but does merely that make him
rational as we understand the term to apply to ourselves?
If there is anyone in the play who typifies the man
in whom reason has its rightful place, it is Prospero.
His first words, "be collected", neatly summarize his
behavior throughout. Even in seeing Miranda's and
Ferdinand's love for each other he maintains his reserve, saying that he cannot be so glad as they because of the requirements of his designs. But his exchange with Ariel shows he is far from immunity to
passion:

[Thou wouldst] teach me how
To name the bigger light, and how the less,
That burn by day and night; (l.ii.334-6)
If the most fundamental act of language, that of naming, had to be taught to Caliban, then Sycorax must
have died when he was very young, else she would
have done this. But more interesting is that Caliban's
own account of his learning language stresses his ability to name. Miranda's account is similar:

Ari. Him that you term'd, sir, "the good old
Lord Gonzalo", /His tears run down his
beard like winter's drops /From eaves of
reeds. Your charm so strongly works 'em
/That if you now beheld them, your affections /Would become tender.
Pros. Dost thou think so, spirit?
Ari. Mine would, sir, were I human.
Pros. And mine shall. Hast thou, which art
but air, a touch, a feeling /Of their afflictions, and shall not myself, /One of their
kind, that relish all as sharply /Passion as
they, be kindlier mov'd that thou art?
/Though with their high wrongs I am
strook to th' quick, /Yet, with my nobler
reason, gainst my fury /Do I take
part.(V.i.15-27)

When thou didst not, savage,
know thine own meaning, but wouldst
gabble like I A thing most brutish, I
endow'd thy purposes /With words that
made them known. (l.ii.355-8)
So both accounts of Caliban's learning, in other words,
describe his being given words for what he already
has. But Miranda says that prior to being given language, Caliban did not "know his own meaning". It
seems to me that this is the first of at least three aspects of Caliban concerning which the influence of
language ought to be investigated. The second is his
human aspect, expressed by such abilities as emotion
and dreaming. The third is his rationality-is there
any sense in which Caliban can be called rational?
Concerning these things, it is useful to rephrase
the above conclusion more formally: Miranda implies
that prior to language Caliban is capable of intent.
Similarly, Caliban's own words ("how to name the
bigger light...") suggest that prior to language, he was
capable of seeing things for things and (hopefully this
is not stretching a point) of seeing relations between
things: the roots of rational behavior. And Caliban's
plotting against Prospero (IIl.ii.87-103) looks a great
deal like the genuine article. One could, however,
observe that animals exhibit behavior that seems rational in the same way: if a wolf seldom attacks waking victims, can't we say that it forms unspoken syllogisms, for example "defenseless animals are easier
to kill, a sleeping animal is defenseless, therefore a
sleeping animal is easier to kill"? In other words, how
is instinct given language different from what we call
rationality? Caliban's use of language makes him

In this speech Prospero is held in the grip of two passions, fury and sympathy, with reason occupying its
proper role as arbitrator: the very paradigm of human
rationality. But the very fact of his sympathy is worth
noting, since Prospero has somewhat turned his back
on humanity. The chapters of his life with which the
play acquaints us are his solitude with his books, his
solitude on the island, and the solitude of his eventual
retirement to Milan. The first _ these was clearly
of
willful; and though his banishment was not, neither
does he look forward to his return to society with any
apparent relish-understandably so, since Prospero has
no very great reason to be fond of humanity in general (though he certainly holds some of its particulars
dear), for he is acutely and painfully aware of the spectrum of human natures that runs from Gonzalo to Antonio. This speech makes it difficult blithely to attach
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the unfeeling automaton. Prospero more resembles
the philosopher-king, in that most of his joys in humanity, though lesser than those of the intellect, are
not precluded by the latter (and like the philosopherking, he evades his duty to rule).
Miranda, in contrast to her father, has none of the
gloom or cynicism that presumptively underlie his
withdrawal. Humanity's novelty to her makes it as
wondrous to her as to Caliban. Her reactions to the
dark underbelly of mankind are therefore a strange
mix of youthful emotion and innocence made potent
by a mature intellect. Her joy in her "brave new world"
is a gift of Prospero's upbringing, which may save her
from his disillusionment. Ferdinand is another, for he
and Miranda are two of a kind, and so will keep each
other from receding from the world. But Prospero
has no equals to call his companions, only his daughter and the insubstantial Ariel (who shares his secret
designs but not his humanity).
In addition to all this, Miranda has a genuine love
of humanity. Though Prospero's stories leave evil
known to her, her first words to him show that she is
perfectly unreserved with "the very virtue of compassion" (I.ii.27). Taken literally, as we are precisely to
do ("I have suffered with those that I saw suffer"
(I.ii.5)-the most precise evidence the subject admits
of), compassion could be called the fundamental social instinct. It is certainly remarkable in Miranda,
since she has only known the society of her father and
Caliban. It is doubly remarkable in that her life has
been uncommonly free from suffering. Her compassion, which we could say is due to something like
nurture (acting on a good nature), is exactly what is
absent in Caliban.
Caliban is driven by desire, and if he has a conscience it is surely vestigial, being bothered by attempts
at neither rape nor murder. But we are obviously not
meant to take Caliban as an evil nemesis, since his
attempt to do away with Prospero is entered into with
drunken buffoons: the contemplation of murder is
mingled with the comic relief. Caliban's animal nature, the way his actions flow directly from his desires, is precisely what mitigates his contemplation of
murder, even as carefully as he plans it (Ill.ii.8795). If an act is not just unless it is done with just
intent, then we may say that an act is not evil unless it
is done with evil intent. And if one cannot intend to
act justly without some knowledge of the just, one

cannot have evil intention without some knowledge
of evil.
Most would agree that evil acts are so by nature.
We take it that this implies that all men know what an
evil act is. That is, to say that evil acts are so by nature is equivalent to saying that man naturally knows
what acts are evil, or more generally, that man naturally knows what is by nature. But Caliban clearly
does not have this knowledge (or has it in a different
way), since he seems wholly to lack evil intent. This
prompts the question of what difference between
Caliban's nature and man's nature underlies his ignorance and our knowledge. Reflexively, one leaps to
suggest man's rationality as the distinction. But
Caliban appears to confound this idea, as he is in some
way rational, and yet does not seem to know what is
by nature. Then we must say whether man is rational
in a sense that Caliban is not, or whether knowing by
nature what is by nature is due to some other property
that belongs to man but not to Caliban.
If we were to adopt the first of these alternatives,
namely, to conclude that Caliban is not rational in the
proper sense, there arises a difficulty. If his rationality is to be distinguished from that of man, it must be
done on grounds other than that of the ability to reason (since he appears to have that), and it seems like
there are only two (related) options: the objects to
which he applies reason, and the manner in which his
reason is applied. The first of these alternatives certainly looks inviting, since one would imagine that
there are objects about which Caliban would have difficulty reasoning. The difference could perhaps be
captured by defining proper rationality as the capacity to reason abstractly, or as the capacity for intellection. The second of these alternatives is likewise appealing, since one could say that reasoning applied
only to the satisfaction of desire is merely animal instinct given language, and so define proper rationality
as the ability to reason with the desire to know. The
two alternatives are nearly equivalent, so they may
both stand as the consequence of assuming that
Caliban, though he can reason, is not rational in the
fullest sense. But neither illuminates why man knows
by nature what is by nature, since when we say that
man by nature knows what is evil, we do not have in
mind a reasoning process, but as said before, something like an instinct for what is by nature. The ability
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desiring to obtain knowledge, does not completely
account for man's advantage over Caliban.
The other alternative, then, is to name the property of man, deficient in Caliban, which allows him to
know by nature what is by nature. Since we see
Caliban's deficiency in this regard manifested in his
asocial nature, it seems right to examine compassion,
taken as the fundamental social virtue. Compassion
(in the sense of knowledge of the likeness of others to
oneself), when found in a rational creature, can be seen
as a kind of knowledge: it makes the likeness of other
men to oneself an intelligible fact, from which reason
may proceed; in other words, compassion is what permits man knowledge of his own nature. It is the source
of man's capacity for intellection about man. And so
I think if compassion is natural in man, it is what permits man to know what is by nature (inasmuch as it
permits him to know his own nature). But Caliban is
not a man, and he knows it. Therefore, lacking compassion, he is not.by nature social, and so good and
evil natures (which belong to man as social) have no
meaning with respect to him: he has potential for
neither.
This makes it seem that Caliban is not fully conscious of himself: whereas man is naturally introspective, Caliban is not. Thus it may be that it was more
right than it first appeared to suggest that human rationality is distinguished by its objects or its motivation. Caliban's lack of understanding of his nature is
perhaps the strongest argument that he is not human,
for when we speak of being rational, we mean rational and conscious of that rationality. If ther~ is any
sense in which Caliban is rational, it is not a self-conscious one: he has neither the means nor the inclination to reason about himself. So it seems that he does
not "know his own meaning", but only his purposes.
Language puts Caliban somewhere between a syllogistic wolf and the self-consciously ration.al being (for
a mere animal could not have understood the necessity of seizing Prospero's books) in that understanding language only gives him access to more information. Since he only uses the information gained from
language to vent his desires, he is not rational in the
same way that man is. Something like awareness of
nature is probably still at the heart of this: man delights in language and reason for their own sake (rather
than merely to serve desire) exactly because he is
aware of these faculties in himself.

In one respect, Antonio is much like Caliban, in
that neither has a conscience to obstruct the satisfaction of his desires. But while Caliban has no pretensions to humanity (though perhaps he has hopes),
Antonio tries to hide his lack of human compassion
under the skin of a social creature. In his speech to
Sebastian he shows that he understands himself perfectly on this point:
Here lies your brother,
No better than the earth he lies upon,
If he were that which now he's like-that 's
dead, /Whom I with this obedient steel,
three inches of it, /Can lay to bed for ever;
whiles you, doing thus,/To the perpetual
wink for aye might put /This ancient
morsel, this Sir Prudence, who /Should not
upbraid our course. For all the rest,
They '11 take suggestion as a cat laps milk;
They' 11 tell the clock to any business that
We say befits the hour. (Il.i.280-9)
Prospero's comment on Antonio, "You, brother mine,
that entertain' d ambition, ex pell' d remorse and
nature ... Would here have kill'd your king, I do forgive thee, unnatural as thou art." (V.i.75-9) illuminates this disparity. "Unnatural" is precisely the right
word, for the compassion that causes men to act well
to each other (and so makes man social) is exactly
absent in Antonio and Sebastian. Despite this, they
preserve the appearance (but not the reality) of a social creature, using it to satisfy a desire that is peculiarly social: power. This concealment, which Prospero
undoes, is perhaps the most awful perversion of civilized man.
Miranda and Antonio are opposites in that they
represent high perfection and low corruption, but are
alike in that they are "nurtured". In other important
respects, however, Miranda is very like Caliban. Both
are the offspring of magicians expelled from human
society, and both have had nearly no contact with
mankind as a result of having been brought up on the
island. Their island is a paradise: it furnishes fresh
water and food (as we know from Caliban's account
of his services to King Stephano), and the climate is
presumed hospitable. Nothing in Caliban's various
accounts suggests that the island's magical properties
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island itself. I recall no mention of any remotely harmful thing residing there- nor, in fact, of any animals
whatsoever, save small edibles. There are only magical creatures, who fill the island with music and sound.
The foremost feature of the island is thus, I think, its
unreality, and this taints Miranda, making her perfection strange. Despite her embodiment of the finest
characteristics of nurture, she, unlike Antonio, is not
the product of any society, but of Prospero's careful
education:
Here in this island we arri v' d, and here
Have I, thy schoolmaster, make thee more
profit Than other princess' can, that have
more time For vainer hours, and tutors not
so careful. (I.ii .171--4)
In its general form, this resembles the suggestion I
think implicit in the Republic that the perfection of
nature comes about through a deliberate act of reason
(in this case Prospero's), and not by chance: not simply by nurture, but by design. As Prospero intends
her to rule (and hopefully better than he), this care is
doubly appropriate. Both he and his brother "new create" others with an eye on political aims, but while
Antonio 's creation breeds vice, Prospero's stories have
bred a virtuous ruler. This perfection of nature through
reason is the aim of Prospero's Art, as Ariel's speech
to the "three men of sin" indicates:

But remember,
(For that's my business to you) that you three
From Milan did supplant good Prospero,
Expose' d unto the sea (which hath requit it)
Him, and his innocent child; for which foul deed
The pow'rs, delaying (not forgetting), have
Incens' d the seas and shores-yea, all the creatures,
Against your peace. (IIl.iii.68-75)
Prospero, that is, has animated the hand of nature according to the demands of justice and reason, motivated by love for his daughter. While nature of her
own strength will reward sloth, overindulgence, and
the like, the "cankered mind" finds its reward from
such human (and hence unreliable) sources as law and
vengeance. Ironically, Alonso calls the events of the
play's end "unnatural", the more unnatural viciousness of Antonio and Sebastian having escaped him.

Contrary to his opinion, the nature of The Tempest,
embodied by Ariel, is both animate and has a conscience, though perhaps it is apolitical: Antonio's betrayal has its natural reward only in the slavishness it
requires; its temporal reward must come from
Prospero. It is nature's conscience that makes it at
once susceptible to Prospero's guidance, and, sadly,
unreal.
It may be this that accounts for Prospero's tone at
the end of the play. He doesn't seem exactly sad, but
he doesn't seem truly happy either. Mostly, he seems
ready to die. His famous speech:
You do look, my son, in a mov'd sort,
As if you were dismay'd; be cheerful, sir.
Our revels now are ended. These our actors
(As I foretold you) were all spirits, and
Are melted into air, into thin air,
And like the baseless fabric of this vision,
The cloud-capp'd tow'rs, the gorgeous
palaces, The solemn temples, the great
globe itself; Yea, all which it inherit, shall
dissolve, And like this insubstantial pageant faded /Leave not a rack behind. We
are such stuff I As dreams are made on; and
our little life /Is rounded with a
sleep.(IV.i.146--58)
is tinged with the unmistakable melancholy of a lonely
man. Prospero cares for two things in all the world:
Milan and his daughter. But Prospero knows that he
must return Miranda to the world of men, where he
cannot himself live. As he acknowledges, he is at the
end of the play engaged in a departure which will mean
the end of his life . His great human drama is so dedicated also to ensuring that the things that are important to him are well and orderly disposed. Prospero
appears to be substantially unchanged from the time,
twelve years past, that his "library was dukedom large
enough" (I.ii. I 09-10).
Prospero's return to society entails the renunciation of his magic, which does not belong to the world
of men, and by means of which he found a satisfying
kingdom in the island. By his magic, natural power
serves the just rule of man's reason, transmuting
Alonso's submerged guilt into redemptive penitence,
Ferdinand's and Miranda 's apparent nobility into
graceful matrimony, Antonio's and Sebastian's hid-

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M AGIC A L POLITICS

that no long~r need serve him, nor will; to fall back on
the hands of humanity, which will hopefully bear the
careworn mage gently to his grave. His island has
been a meeting place for nature and nurture, wherein
all the possibilities are explored: the perfection of
Miranda, and the imperfection of Caliban; the hopelessness of Antonio's evil, and the hope implied by
Alonso's penitence and Gonzalo's nobility. The two
worlds never really meet: Prospero is left with the
memory of a paradise that could not fully be a kingdom, since nature's spirits belong ultimately to her,
not to man; and Caliban is left with the memories of
"brave spirits" that he can never become, and of a beautiful woman whom he cannot love. We can picture
the two of them ending their lonesome days in their
respective kingdoms, the brief touch of which leaves
each impossibly wanting what belongs to the other's
world. •

den and hollow inhumanity into clear and gruesome
treachery, and Prospero's own banishment into the
opportunity to achieve these ends. In the island, "temporal royalties" and what may be termed "philosophical royalties" are one. Miranda's question, "What foul
play had we, that we came from thence? Or blessed
was't we did?" (l.ii.60-1) seems to imply that nobody would willingly relinquish temporal rule, but also
that ruling the less "temporal" kingdom of the island
surpasses it. Though Prospero always held the source
of rightful authority in Milan (the love of his people),
he effectively relinquished temporal rule by putting it
in Antonio's hands, thinking that love and trust would
protect him. In Milan, Prospero had to choose between the two sorts of royalties, but on the island he
does not. The practical administration of that kingdom requires only the application of true Art and learning. 2 Magic is the means to all this, the agents of which
Prospero addresses as:
Ye elves of hills, brooks, standing lakes,
and groves, I And ye that on the sands with
printless foot /Do chase the ebbing Neptune, and do fly him /When he comes back,
you demi-puppets that /By moonshine do
the green sour ringlets make, /Whereof the
ewe not bites; and you whose pastime /Is
to make midnight mushrumps, that rejoice
To hear the solemn curfew... (V.i.33--40)
There are no elves of cities, it seems, nor sprites of
houses and fairies of roads. As the agents of magical
power withdraw from the concentrations of men, Prospero
must do so also to rule the perfect kingdom, a kingdom
which is consequently small-though while it endures,
an ideal, where music may be had for nothing.
Prospero's island does not depend on him for its
essence; and there is certainly something to Caliban's
claim that he is an usurper, for Caliban belongs there
more surely than he. Prospero's tenure on the island
is inevitably temporary-it serves a purpose, but he
must leave ; and leave there the instruments of magic
2

0f course, the island is made in the image of other rulers also.

To Prospero's rule of reason we may compare Gonzalo's kingdom (II.i.144-69) of innocent and ignorant primitives,
Stephano's coalition of murderous but essentially carefree drunkards, and Caliban's simple and undemanding anarchy.

15

�The Motion of a Stretched String:
A Series of Haiku and Equations

An Evening At Home With Doctor Faustus 1

By Jesse Berney

By Hermann Hesse
Translated by Eva T.H. Brann

The taut striMg vibrates.
We must describe its motion.
But how? Equati011s.
We describe two curoes.
Two ratios are the same,
Formed by ordinates.
On these string-like curves
Displacement and curvature
Are in proportion.
Acceleration
Of any point on the curve
Is as curvature.

2

2

2

d y/dx ad y/dt

2

All points on the string
Reach the axis at one time.
How is this explained?
It is like our curves:

Displacement and curvature
Are in proportion.
A function of "x,"

The curve is sinusoidal:
Crest to trough to crest.

d2y/dx2 = -k y
y

:i=

A sin(kx)

Our function describes
The string still in one instant,
Not its whole motion.
Acceleration
Proportional to distance,
A function of "t"

Combine our functions.
Our equation now has both
Time and displacement.
Curves move down a line.
This is a function of both
Displacement and time.
The speed of this "wave"
Is determined by the string:
Its tension and mass.
More derivations
Discover all the constants.
Complete equation.

d 2y/dt 2 = -roy ; y = B cos(cot)
f(Jt,t) = C sin(kx) cos( rot)
y = g(x-ut)

Doctor Johann Faustus was sitting in his dining
room together with his friend Doctor Eisenhart (the
great-grand-father, incidentally, of the physician who
later on became so famous 2 ). The sumptuous evening
meal had been removed. From the heavy gilded goblets rose the bouquet of an old Rhine wine. The two
musicians who had performed at dinner had just disappeared - a lutenist and a flautist.
"Well, now I will give you the promised sampling," said Doctor Fa~stus and poured a draught of
the old wine down his gullet, which had grown somewhat fat. He was no longer a young man; it was two
or three years before his frightful end.
"As I already told you, my assistant sometimes
produces these droll apparatuses, by means of which
one can see and hear this and that - things far off
from us, or long passed away, or yet in the future.
Today let us try out the future. The fellow seems to
have invented something very amusing and curious,
you know. So just as he has often shown us, in magic
mirrors, the heroes and beauties of the past, he has
now invented something for the ears, a sound funnel.
It allows us to hear the noises which will be heard in
the distant future in just the same spot in which the
sound apparatus is positioned."
"Might it perhaps be, my dear friend, that you
serving spirit is swindling you a little?"
"I don't think so," said Faustus. "For black magic
the future is not at all unattainable. As you know, we
1

u 2 = S/µ

1928-30. In translating it, I disclaim any reflection on the sounds
enveloping our quad on a balmy spring afternoon.
2

f(x,t) = C cos(cot) sin(2n/A.)x

This vignette was revised by H. H. for publication in the years

A reputed quack who lived from 1663-1727 and was

memorialized in a German children's song as "the Doctor
Eisenhart who cured the folk by his own art." When I was little
I confused him with the serial killer of wives, Bluebeard, who
was invented about that time.

have always proceeded on the assumption that events
on earth are, without exception, subject to the law of
cause and effect. Therefore nothing about the future
can be changed, anymore than about the past: The
future too is fixed through the law of causality. Thus
it is already there, only we do not yet see it and taste it.
As the mathematician and the astronomer can calculate the occurrence of an eclipse accurately far in advance, just so any other part of the future we please
could be made visible and audible to us, if we had
invented a method for it. As it happens,
Mephistopheles has invented a sort of di vining rod
for the ear; he has built a trap in which tones are captured. We have tried it out repeatedly. Sometimes, to
be sure, nothing becomes audible at all, because we
just happened to come on a void in the future, on a
point of time at which nothing audible is taking place
in our room. At other times we have heard all kinds
of things; for example, we once heard some people,
who will live in the far future, speak of a poem in
which are sung the deeds of Doctor Faustus, that is,
my own. But enough; let us try it out."
At his call the domestic spirit appeared in his customary gray monk's cowl. He set a small machine
with a sound funnel on the table and urgently enjoined
the gentlemen to refrain from all comment during the
whole process. Then he cranked the machine, which
began to work with a low, soft buzzing.
For a long time nothing was heard but this suspenseful buzzing, to which the two doctors listened
expectantly. Then suddenly a tone, never before heard,
shrilled forth: an evil, devilish howling, of which it
was impossible to say whether it stemmed from a serpent-monster or perhaps from a raging demon. Impatient, warning, angry, commanding, the evil tone
screamed, repeating itself in short, fierce pulses, as if
a hunted dragon had come whistling through the room.
Doctor Eisenhart grew pale and breathed in relief when

�ENERGEIA

the horrid scream, having frequently repeated itself at
ever increasing range, faded into the distance.
There followed a silence, but then another sound
became audible: a male voice, coming as from a great
distance, in an urgently preaching tone. The listeners
could understand fragments of the speech and take
them down on writing tablets that had been placed
ready to hand, for example the sentences: " ... and so,
following the shining example of America, the ideal
of economic enterprise marches irresistibly toward its
victorious perfection and realization. .. .While on the
one hand the standard of living of the worker has
reached a height never heretofore experienced, ... and
we can say without presumptuousness that by means
of present-day production techniques the childlike
dreams of paradise dreamed by earlier ages are more
than ... "
Again silence. Then came a new voice, a deep,
earnest voice, which spoke thus: "Ladies and gentlemen, I request you lend an ear to a new poem, a creation of the great Nicholas Underwhelm3 of whom it
may well be said that he, as no one else, has turned
inside out the innermost recesses of our time, has most
wisely discerned the sense and non-sense of our existence:
He holds the chimney in his hands.
From either cheek a flipper's hung.
According as the mercury stands,
He climbs the ladders without rung.
So up along long ladders climbs
He. Clouds are lining for his cloak
He longs to save a life betimes.
He's overcome with nolicroak.
Doctor Faustus was able to write down the larger
part of this poem. Eisenhart too took notes assiduously.
A sleepy voice, without doubt the voice of an older
woman or a spinster now became audible. It said:
"Boring program! As if the radio had been invented
for that! Well, at least here comes some music."
And, indeed, some music now broke out, a wild,
lascivious music with a very steady beat, now blaring,
3

The poem by Underwhelm ("Unterschwang") is in the style of

Christian Morgenstern, a zany surrealistic poet writing early in
the twentieth century.

now languishing, a totally unfamiliar, alien, indecent,
malevolent music of howling, quacking, and cackling
wind instruments, vibrating with the banging of gongs,
overridden now and then by a singing, howling vocalization, which ejaculated words and verses \nan unknown language. In between, at regular intervals, was
emitted the mystifying verse:
The world will marvel at your hair
If you use Go go for its care!
That first, malevolent, furious,, warning tone, too,
that dragon-howling full of torment and rage, audibly
interjected itself from time to time.
When the domestic spirit had, with a smile,
brought his machine to a stop, the two scholars looked
at each other curiously, with a painful feeling of embarrassment and shame, as if they had unintentionally
become the witnesses of an indecent and forbidden
occurrence. Both of them reviewed their notes and
showed them to each other.
Finally Faustus said: "What do you think of it?"
Doctor Eisenhart drank a long draught from his
beaker. He looked at the floor and remained thoughtful and silent for a long time. Finally he said more to
himself that to his friend: "It is horrifying. There cannot be any doubt about the fact that that humanity out
of whose life we just heard a sampling is insane. These
are our progeny, the sons of our sons, the great-grandchildren of our great-grand-children whom we heard
saying such dubious, sad, confused things, who emit
such dread-inducing screams, who sing such unintelligible idiot verses. Our progeny, friend Faustus, will
terminate in insanity."
"I don't want to assert that so definitely," Faustus
said. "Your point of view has nothing unlikely about
it, to be sure, but still it is more pessimistic than necessary. Just because here, in one single, limited spot
on earth, such wild, despairing, indecent and indubitably insane tones are heard, that does not actually
have to mean that all of humanity has become mentally ill. It could, after all, be the case that on this spot
where we happen to be a madhouse will be located in
a few centuries and that we got to hear fragments from
it. Or it could be that a party of total drunks treated us
to their brain-storms. Just think of the bellowing of a
merry crowd, perhaps at a carnival. That sounds quite
similar. But what takes me aback are those other tones,

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AN EVENING AT HOME WITH DOCTOR FAUSTUS

those screams, which cannot have been produced either by human voices or by musical instruments. They
sound, so it seems to me, absolutely devilish. It can
only be demons that utter such tones."
He turned to Mephistopheles: "Would you possibly know something about this? Can you tell us what
sort of tones we have just heard?"
"We have indeed heard," said the domestic spirit
and smiled, "demonic tones. The earth, gentlemen,
half of which is, to be sure, already today the property
of the devil, will within a certain time belong to him
altogether and will form a part, a province of hell. You
have expressed yourself somewhat harshly and negatively about the tonal and verbal language of this
earthly hell. To me, however, it seems at any rate noteworthy and nice that in hell too there will be music
and poetry. That is the function of Belial, to whom
this whole department reports. I think he does his job
rather nicely." •

19

�FORM OF LANGUAGE

The Form of language
By Beatrice Robbins
Socrates claims thatthought is internal discourse.
(Thea. 189e) Therefore, language is as necessary to
thought as it is to conversation. But not all words
mean the same things to all people. A word might
have a standard definition which, given the existence
of the Platonic forms, is wrong. So it seems that the
intent of almost every dialogue is the creation of true
language.
A term is picked: be it justice, knowledge, or table.
The rest of the dialogue is spent on comparing per.:.
sonal definitions and eliminating false notions in an
attempt to find each word's true definition. This perfect definition, were it ever to be found, would, by
virtue of its truth, be accepted by and mean the same
thing to everyone present. The word in question would
be truly standardized, and from there thought would
evolve towards understanding truth.
The need to standardize language is demonstrated
by the dialogues being multi-person conversations, not
monologues. Because each participant is an individual
there is no assurance that any particular word has the
same meaning for him as for anyone else. One knows
his own definition of the term in question, but because
language is not completely standardized, he can not
know exactly what the word means to anyone else.
The Sophist' s Stranger explains the problem thus:
At present you see, all that you and I
possess in common is the name. The thing
to which each of us gives that name we
may perhaps have privately before our
minds, but it is always desirable to have
reached an agreement about the thing itself
by means of explicit statements, rather than
be content to use the same word without
formulating what it means (Soph. 218c) 1•

1

Quotes from The Sophist, Theatetus, and Timaeus are to be found
in: Plato, The Collected Dialogues of Plato, Edith Hamilton,
ed.,(New Jersey, Princeton University Press, 1989). Sophist - pp.
958-1017, Theatetus - pp. 847-919, Timaeus - pp. 1153-1211.

For the discussion to work as an interchange of
ideas, the terms involved must mean the same thing
to all those involved. To reach any meaningful conclusion, the thought and communication must be done
with terms for which the standardized definition is the
true definition. This need leads to the format of and
material in the dialogues, most noticeably in the
Theatetus and the Sophist.
,
In each dialogue, the quest for each true, standard
definition begins with a question. Socrates provides
examples: "But if our guest wil1 allow me, I should
like to ask him what his countrymen thought and how
they used these names ... sophist, statesman, philosopher (Soph. 217)," and, "Then knowledge and wisdom are the same things (Thea. 145e)." The question clearly and simply provides the terms which are
to be the focus of the dialogue, and asks for their definitions. Because this is the obvious commencement
of philosophical dialectic, one might claim that at this
point thought begins.
Perception, however, must be prior to thought of
any type. Before one begins to think he must have
something to think about. It need not be a sight, as
suggested in the Timaeus, where vision is recognized
as the foundation of philosophy (Tim.47a-b), although
sight seems the most easily acceptable of the perceptions. Smell, taste, and hearing work just as well . That
the perception is is the only necessity; there is nothing else to spark man's though process. Only after he
has perceived something can he name it and begin to
inquire about its nature. Thought will be further affected by later perceptions. Perception never stops
causing and mutating thought. But it is from questioning the original perception that thought begins.
Philosophy 's reliance on perception raises the
problem of the forms: how can man inquire about the
forms when he surely can not perceive them? No
man's inquiries can start with the forms. He can ask,
"What is Justice?" only after having perceived and
identified some act or acts of justice or injustice as
such. Whether or not he identifies them correctly is

we' follow or get left behind (Soph. 243b)." In other
words, Euclid is using terms whose standard definitions are not commonly understood. And, even the
modern notion of defining a plane by three non-colinear points is confusing. For to understand that idea,
one must understand exactly what a point is. So, while
higher math and geometry are standardized, at their
roots one finds the same problem that Theatetus,
Socrates, and language face:

irrelevant at this stage; he has merely found something
about which he can begin to inquire. And, after recognizing that same property inherent in many actions,
he might begin to guess at the existence of imperceptible forms to provide an explanation for the various
perceived similarities.
Perhaps the overwhelming dependence in perception is responsible for a general dependence in metaphors. When a concept seems to elevated, vague, or
difficult to grasp, it is often made easier to understand
by metaphorical transformation into perceivable images. Because metaphors force one to call an image
of a concrete entity to mind, it becomes possible to
'see' the relationship in question. From that internal
perception, thought about the abstraction develops.
For the same reason, some concepts are so elevated
one can only begin to attempt their comprehension
through metaphor. Hence, Socrates uses them constantly in The Republic's allegories of the cave and
the divided line.
The need of metaphor, while painfully apparent,
is troublesome to one attempting to standardize a true
language. For, what could be farther from using each
word as its one true meaning demands than using a
seemingly random selection of words to illustrate various other, unrelated words? Metaphors are nothing
more than a "common use of words and phrases, which
the vulgar twist into any sense they please (Thea .
168c )" . In a true and standardized language, there
would be neither metaphors, nor any need of them.
Math may be taken as the closest thing to a model
for standardized human language. The closest one may
come to a figure of speech is an analogy, or ratio, between like terms. Terms are either precisely defined
or defined as unknowns. There is only one meaning
of scalene triangle. It is a triangle with no sides equal.
There is only one meaning of triangle: a three sided
figure on one plane. But, what is the exact definition
of a plane? Euclid calls it "a surface which lies evenly
with the straight lines on itself (Elem . bk. 1, def. 7)2,"
for which he, like the great ancient philosophers, might
be faulted with "showing too little consideration for
ordinary people like ourselves ... (and) pursuing his
own argument to the conclusion without caring whether

the first elements of which we and all other
things consist are such that no account can
. be given of them. Each of them just by
itself can only be named; we cannot
attribute to it anything further. .. (Thea.
201e-202)
This, too, is one of the paradoxes of language. The
most simple concepts, the elements, are undefinable
but necessary to all that follows.
Perhaps this similarity between the language of
math and philo.sophy is one of the reasons Socrates
puts the mathematical world 'immediately before the
philosophical on his divided line (Republic . 510a5 llc)3. Perhaps, also, one must learn from the standardization present in the maths what he is searching
for with philosophy. Math shows one mostly standardized language in a purely theoretical world, while,
through philosophy one hopes to gain a standardized,
true language which will work even in its starting
place, the perceivable world.
But the dependence on perception remains, presenting a difficulty. In the Sophist, the Stranger suggests that:
"thinking and discourse are the same thing,
except what we call thinking is precisely, the
inward dialogue carried on by the mind with
itself without spoken sound. (Soph. 263e)"
And in the Theatetus, Socrates himself claims that
the process of thinking is:
"a discourse that the mind carries on with
itself about any subject it is considering ...

2

Euclid, Elements,translated by Sir Thomas L. Heath, Robert
McHenry, ed., In Great Books of the Western World, vol 10,

3

Plato, Republic, translated by Allan Bloom, (New York,

HarperCollins, 1991. ), 190-191

(USA, Encyclopedia Brittanica Inc, 1990).

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when the mind is thinking, it is simply
talking to itself, asking questions and
answering them, and saying yes and no ...
So I should describe thinking as discourse,
and judgment as a statement pronounced,
not aloud to someone else, but silently to
oneself. (Thea. 189e-l 90)"
In other words, by Socrates' definition at least,
thought is purely internal dialogue. As said briefly
before, if this is so, thought demands language. Man
must have a language in order to identify, name, and
ponder his perceptions. But he must have perceptions
before he can develop a language naming them. Perceptions give rise to names. Man saw rock, food, fire,
before he began to try to communicate their existence
to his fellow creatures. But surely as he was able to
recognize his food for himself before he was able to
name it. Isn't that thought?
Perhaps rather than being thought, the recognition
of food is an instinct or the beginning of an action.
Urges to action and reason, although often coincidental, are not the same thing. One dances by muscle
memory, eats and dodges oncoming cars by instinct.
Impulses to action are not decisions. No internal dialectic is involved,. They are immediate reactions to
the situation, an ability shared by all men and most
animals. Thought, however, even if it be thought towards an action, is a slow, deliberative process:
"Knowledge does not reside in the impressions, but
in our reflection upon them (Thea. 186d)." But what
provoked man to develop language, and how could
he think to do it without already having begun?
Further, accepting the definition of thought as being internal dialectic, how does one account for the
strange difficulty of explaining ideas to others? Even
Socrates must "try to put (his idea) into words. (Thea.
165e)" This simple phrase suggests that ideas or
thoughts are not recognized in coherent groups of
words but need to be structured into them to be communicated, which does not follow if the mind thinks
by "simply talking to itself (Thea. 190)." That the
mind thinks in its own variation of the common language is only a partly valid explanation. One must
speak the language he thinks in. The two processes
feed off each other; neither can develop without the
other. On the other hand, it is not necessary that the
mind use with itself exactly the same manner of speech

that it uses when communicating with others. External language must be much more standardized than
internal language, because, while one is sure to understand one's own thoughts, for others to understand
these same thoughts as they were conceived they must
understand the organization of and the terms used.
Hence the need for the standardizing tools of grammar, punctuation, and common vocabulary. The more
abstract and complicated the thought is, the greater
the need for precise, comprehensible language. Man
can not point at Truth the way he .can at food. He
must be able to comprehend it with thought and explain it with words.
The better standardized the language, the greater
the chance the explanation will be understood. Hypothetically, truly standardized language, meaning language in which the one true definition for each word
was know and understood, would allow perfect knowledge. Because it would be the only possible perfect,
exact language, it would be the form of language. As
such, it would allow absolute knowledge of the forms.
One would actually know what Virtue was. One would
know all Truth.
But, as previously stated, language can never be
truly standardized because it is based on ideas too fundamental to be explained. Just as Theatetus has far
more difficulty in explaining letters than syllables, so
one can explain a sentence or paragraph far more easily than the terms it uses. And, other words must be
used to explain the terms in question, creating the need
for further explanations in an ever-growing, meaningobscuring cycle.
Additionally, because language is a human, bodily
function, it can not ever actually 'reach' the forms.
Humans, being a conglomeration of both body and
soul, are not perfect creatures and can never reach
perfect understanding, "We have intercourse with becoming by means of the body through sense, whereas
we have intercourse with real being by means of the
soul through reflection (Soph. 248)." Reflection, or
internal dialectic, is the only way to use the soul. But,
the perfect soul is shackled by the imperfect body, and
so, the form of language as well as the rest of the forms,
can never be reached. Language can never be completely true and completely standardized.
Completely standardized language in the modem
sense is not 'true language'. It is what computers
speak. It is inhuman language for the lowest common

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FORM OF LANGUAGE

denominator. The emphasis is on standardization and
not on truth. All that matters is that everyone understand the one definition for each term in the same way.
What the definition is has little significance. And,
because it allows no room for spontaneous expressions,
for emotion, for the ever-changing connotations of
words, it can only be the almost meaningless language
of machines, a dead language. Attic Greek is far more
standardized in the twentieth century than any current
language, but one must use his own language to define Greek terms. So, while most Greek words have
an accepted English definition, the translations themselves are part of the ever mutating English language,
and thus are not completely standardized. No spoken
human language can be because human thought is not
stagnant. One grow, encounters and perceives new
images and ideas, and his though process changes. No
two people go through exactly the same metamorphosis, so no two manners of thought, and thus, no two
personal dialects, can be exactly alike. And so, while
Socrates strives towards both standardization and truth,
even his lesser goal is an impossibility.
"True" language, too, that seems the goal of philosophy, must be eternally static. Rather than subhuman, it must somehow be superhuman. "True" language can easily be imagined as the language of the
gods. But, for the same reasons completely standardized human language is impossible, completely true
language is impossible. "True" language faces the
additional difficulty of at once being responsible for ·
and acquiring absolute knowledge. To create the language of the gods, the form of language, one must
know all perfectly. To fully know all, one must use
the form of language. So, the best one can hope to do
is as Socrates does: attempt to purify and make more
true his own, ever-changing language while reaching
towards the forms.
The problem of thought dependent on language is
a clear paradox: neither can exist without the other,
neither can begin without the other. Dialectic is the
best path towards the forms, but grows from base perceptions. Language is necessary to thought, but must
evolve with mankind. But if language evolves, how
can it hope to reach the changeless, eternal forms?
The effort is doomed, but necessary and noble. One
must attempt to understand. "To rob us with discourse
would be to rob us of philosophy. That would be the
most serious consequence. (Soph. 260)" •

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�THEY DO NOT UNDERSTAND

They Do Not Understand:
A Discussion of the Heracleitus Fragment Number 12
By Dawn Star Shuman
The translation of the Heracleitus fragment number 12 in the series of fragments read for Freshman
Language may not be the most difficult of these fragments. However, the nuances of meaning in some of
the words are lovely, and the understanding of these
nuances makes the meaning of the entire sentence both
clearer and more complex.
The sentence is as follows in Greek and in my
English translatlon:
ou ~uvLCiaw ws 8LacpEpoµEvov EauT0
6µoAOYEL. TTaALVTOVOS apµov(a WO"TTEp
TO~OU KaL AUTTES
They do not understand that in being rent
asunder a thing agrees with itself; just like
the back-stretched harmony of a bow and
of a lyre..
This sentence makes sense grammatically, both as
a translation of the Greek and as fluent English. What
may not be immediately apparent is that it also makes
very good sense as a statement of an idea. Some questions about the idea might be: how does a thing agree
with itself? What is this thing? What kind of understanding are they failing in? The answers to these
kinds of questions lead to a possible explanation of
what the sentence means.
cvvLCiaw is a form of the verb CJ'UV-L11µL, meaning
"to bring or set together, in hostile sense ... mataph. to
perceive, hear... 2. to understand." 1 This adds the
idea of opposition to the more basic sense of perception and understanding. In this sense, understanding

Except where otherwise noted, definitions for the Greek come from:
Intennediate Greek-English Lexicon, Liddell and Scott, 7 ed.
1

might be the setting together of a prior knowledge in
a person's mind with a fact or perception of the
outside world and thereby coming to a new idea or
knowledge about a thing.
It is important to detail the relationships between
the three verbs in the first part of the sentence.
~uvLCiaLV is the main finite verb. 6µo)..oyE'Lis also a
finite verb which is modified by the circumstantial participle 8LacpEpoµEvov . The manual gives the meanings of6µ0)..oyE'L1s "agree, admit, or allow." Although
I do believe it to be the most concise translation, there
is something awkward about saying that a thing agrees
with itself in English. It carries the sense of something maintaining internal consistency. But another
possible meaning of 6µo)..oyEL is "simply to make an
agreement, come to terms ... with another." With that
meaning, agreement with itself might imply a process
of reaching internal consistency rather than maintaining it. It is clear that Heracleitus is attributing this
process of agreement directly to the circumstance of
being rent asunder, not simply describing two concurrent events.
I have translated apµov(a as harmony. This meaning is given in the Lexicon as the third possibility.
Harmony in English does have some of the same connotations as apµov(a: in Greek, and I feel it is important to notice them. One meaning in Greek is "a fastening to keep ship-planks together, a clamp ... a joining, joint, between a ship's planks." This kind of joining is literally what is necessary for a stretched bow or
lyre to remain whole. Another meaning given is "a
covenant, agreement, settled government, order." In
a bow, this might be a metaphorical covenant between
the frame and the bowstring not to part.
These meanings are consistent with the English
connotations of harmony, which can mean "1. agreement; accord; harmonious relations. 2. a consistent,
orderly, or pleasing arrangement of parts;

congruity ." 2
Beyond the details of what each word means by
itself is what they all mean together. I do not know
who They are, but I do believe I understand how
Heracleitus means that they do not understand. Understanding is the setting together of two possibly contradictory things in a person's mind and through examination finding their common purpose or meaning.
A question that cannot be answered by looking at the
text is what this thing is. Because the sentences in
general are aphorisms, it seems likely that the thing is
supposed to represent any particular thing a person
might think of, including the people who do not understand. They do not understand how it is that they
themselves could ever understand in his meaning of
the word.
Being rent asunder is compared to a bow being
back-stretched. Thi~ means that the rending is not a
destruction but something that allows the thing to do
what it is supposed to do. When a bow is stretched,
the wood and string are wrenched apart and a strong
fastening at the point of connection is what allows the
bow to impart energy to an arrow. What the thing is
supposed to do depends upon the thing. They do not
admit that they themselves can only be and function
as whole things, as units, because they contain contradictory parts or ideas which play against each other.
I am willing to admit that possibility, and to really consider it by comparing the differing ideas on the subject, which They apparently were not.•

2

Webster's Encyclopedic Unabridged Dictionary of the English
Language, s. v. "harmony"

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ton puts forth the fundamental aspect of his method:
In this philosophy [experimental philosophy] particular propositions are [deduced2]
from the phenomena, and afterward rendered
general by induction. (Ibid, 547)

"For He Unlocked the Hidden Treasures of Truth"
Entertaining Ourselves with the Delightful Contemplation of Newton's Principia
By Janice Cater
With his preface to the first edition of the Principia
Newton gives to the student of his system unusual insight into his ideas of geometry and mathematics as a
whole. He says in this preface that his purpose in
writing is to explain mathematically the natural forces
of the world. In putting forth this statement of intent,
he implies that he believes natural forces are governed
by mathematics, for what purpose would it serve to
explain something mathematically that is not in fact
ruled by mathematics? Such an explanation would be
no more than an interesting account, one no more valid
than any other.
This important aspect of Newton's thought is frequently misunderstood. Often his approach is described as giving only a mathematical analogue to
nature. By this analysis his method has three parts:
first, a presentation of nature simplified and idealized,
creating a system in geometric space in which mathematical entities move in mathematical time according to specific conditions expressible as mathematical laws or relations. Consequences are deduced by
mathematical techniques and then transferred to the
physical world. Second, a comparison of these results with experiential data and the results from such
data. Successive attempts at correction of the original
mathematical construct, which in turn alter the second stage, lead to a more accurate representation.
Third, an application of the results of stages one and
two to natural philosophy, in order to elaborate the
entire system of the world. This stage applies results
to the entire system rather than to individual objects,
i.e., applying them to all planets rather than just to Jupiter. Even objects which are very dissimilar are included. For example, the same laws govern the forces
of the planets in orbit as do the motions of falling bodies on earth.
While the above account is perhaps a plausible
reading of the Principia, it does not truly capture the

spirit of the work or of the man behind it. From his
words in the Preface and his letters to Oldenberg and
Cotes, it is clear that Newton has something greater in
mind. He believes that mathematics rules the world,
that it is universal and basic to all beings. Hence, an
explication of the system of the world must necessarily be a mathematical one. The Principia is not a mathematical reduction of the world, neither, however, can
it be called an exact replica. A careful examination of
this work provides ample evidence for attributing to
Newton the belief that he had set out the only true
method of describing the system of the world.
In defense of this reading of the Principia, an account of Newton's method is crucial. While any sort
of in depth inquiry into his method would yield volumes of findings, we can, for the moment, be satisfied with an identification of several major characteristics of his style. He says in the Preface:
I wish we could derive the rest of the phenomena of Nature by the same kind of reasoning from mechanical principles, for I am
induced by many reasons to suspect that they
may all depend upon certain forces .... These
forces being unknown, philosophers have
hitherto attempted the search of Nature in
vain; but I hope the principles here laid down
will afford some light either to this or some
truer philosophy (Principia, xviii). 1
The method of "reasoning from mechanical principles"
is at the very core of his entire endeavor. Introduced
in only a few words here in the Preface, its meaning is
revealed only through statements of his method found
elsewhere. At the end of the General Scholium, New-

But hitherto I have not been able to discover
the cause of those properties of gravity from
phenomena, and I frame no hypotheses; for
whatever is not deduced from the phenomena is to be called an hypothesis; and hypotheses, whether metaphysical or physical,
whether of occult qualities or mechanical,
have no place in experimental philosophy.
(Ibid, 547)

The process of deducing propositions from phenomena and then rendering them general by induction is
very important in the Principia. It elucidates the distinction Newton makes between the physical and the
rational. While he clearly values both components as
necessary to science, he has extremely strong views
on their respective roles. Comprised of two parts, the
deductive process begins with phenomena, the visible
and humanly accessible world. Through analysis of
the general principles one conclusions both certain and
necessary are drawn 3 • This step gives the boundaries
of the particular inquiry, setting the stage for the thorough mathematical investigation. The next step is inductive; through synthesis, from the specific principles
uncovered and proved through the mathematics, one
arrives at general principles. Newton works from the
physical world, to the rational, and back to the physical; while each is necessary, the roles are quite distinct.
Also present throughout his works is appreciation
for geometry as a science Newton's; he clearly values
the accuracy of its method. To him, it is the only logical way to attack the problem of accounting for natural phenomena. Unlike his contemporaries, Newton
was quite wary of using hypotheses. He is often quoted
as saying "hypotheses non fingo" - I frame no hypotheses. This statement can be quite misleading, for he
did in fac use hypotheses. (The Optics, in particular,
is full of them.) No science can progress, no knowledge can be gained without hypotheses. With due attention to Newton's own words, howe~er, his true
meaning becomes clear.
The passage in question reads:

This passage does indeed seem to be disavowing all
hypotheses within experimental philosophy. However,
he is speaking of the causes of gravity. Since Newton
can deduce nothing of the sort from phenomena, he is
not free to continue along such a line of reasoning.
The strength of such reasoning lies in the certainty
and necessity that comes with deduction from phenomena. Replacing this step with an hypothesis could
not possibly lead to any definite knowledge. In a letter to Oldenberg, Newton elaborates his manner of
using hypotheses:
... For the best and safest method of philosophizing seems to be, first, to inquire diligently into the properties of things and to establish those properties by experiments, and
to proceed later to hypotheses for the explanation of things themselves. For hypotheses
ought to be applied only in the explanation
of the properties of things, and not made use
of in determining them; except in so far as
they may furnish experiments (Thayer, 5) 4 •
He continues, a little later, to warn of what may follow misuse of hypotheses:
And if anyone offers conjectures about the
truth of things from the mere possibility of
hypotheses, I do not see by what stipulation
anything certain can be determined in any
science; since one or another set of hypotheses may always be devised which will appear to supply new difficulties. (Ibid, 5)

2

replaces Matte's inferred; from the Latin, "In hac philosophia

Propositiones deducuntur ex phrenomenis, et redduntur gerenales
per inductionem."
3

Sir Issac Newton, Principia, Cajori revision of the Motte trans-

1

lation, 2 vols. (Berkley, University of California Press, Ltd., 1962)

this in contrast to inference, where the formal process is less
clear or present.

"Newton's Philosophy of Nature, Thayer, H.S., ed., (Hafner Press,
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In a letter to Cotes, Newton is even more explicit about
his use of the word hypothesis:
And the word 'hypothesis' is ... used to signify only such a proposition as is not a phenomenon nor deduced from any phenomena,
but assumed or supposed - without any experimental proof. (Ibid, 6)
Newton recognizes the role hypotheses can be made
to play in science and he places the proper restrictions
to their use. As he says above, one should begin by ·
investigating the properties of objects, carefully establishing their behavior through experiment. After one
has done this, hypotheses may be formed to explain
these behaviors. Experimental facts must invariably
take precedence over any hypotheses which happen
to come into conflict with them. Those hypotheses
which seem incapable of proof by experiment must be
viewed as highly suspicious. The distinction between
exact experimental results and mere suggestions derived from hypotheses must be foremost in one's mind
at all times. When found to be in irreconcilable conflict with experimental fact, they must be scrupulously
eradicated.
The strict guidelines Newton sets for himself are
presented frequently. In the Rules of Reasoning in
Philosophy in Book Three, we discover another such
statement. These four rules are not astounding, in fact
one would assume that any good scientist proceeds
following principles such as the ones laid out here.
Rule 1 orders one to keep all explanations simple, and
to avoid unnecessary complications of such explanations . Rule 2 requires that the same causes or explanations must be applied to the same phenomena. Rule
3 states that the qualities of bodies derived from experiments are to be regarded as universal. It is in the
explication of the third rule that we find another passage attesting to Newton's extremely high opinion of
experimentation. As he says here:
For since the qualities of bodies are only
known to us by experiments, we are to hold
for universal all such as universally agree
with experiments, and such as are not liable
to diminution can never be quite taken away.
We are certainly not to relinquish the evidence of experiments for the sake of dreams

and vain fictions of our own devising; nor
are we to recede from the analogy of Nature,
which is wont to be simple and always consonant to itself (Principia, 398).
Having a more complete understanding of the strict
use of hypotheses, the relationship between the rational and the physical, and the process of deduction from
phenomena and subsequent generalization through
induction, a clear idea of "reasoning from mechanical
principles" is still lacking. The Preface, though merely
sketching Newton's ideas and goals for the Principia,
does offer a remarkable amount of insight into the role
of geometry as it relates to such "reasoning from mechanical principles." Here Newton goes to great
lengths to show how mechanics and geometry relate
to each other.
He begins by making a distinction between the
aims of the ancients and those of the moderns. The
ancients, he says, valued the science of mechanics
more than any other in the investigation of natural
phenomena, while the moderns attempted to fit the
naturally occurring phenomena into the bounds of
mathematics. Mechanics, as understood by the ancients, was a twofold science, comprising both practical and rational components. The rational proceeded
by demonstration, the practical by construction and
observation. For the ancients all manual arts fell under the heading of practical mechanics, for these arts
are not perfectly accurate. Perfect accuracy became
for them the property of geometry, distinguishing this
science from mechanics in its accuracy only. Newton
asserts that this lack of accuracy in mechanics (as opposed to geometry) is due to the artists, not the art.
Were there such a thing as a perfect mechanic, he·necessarily would be perfectly accurate. He also asserts
that the description of lines and angles belongs to
mechanics rather than to geometry. Geometry is concerned with the properties of these objects, not the
physical production of the objects themselves. He calls
it the "glory of geometry" that it is able to produce so
much in spite of so heavy a reliance on the production
of these lines and angles by an entirely different science. Geometry, for Newton, is founded on mechanics; one must use mechanics to produce the lines and
angles which are required for the study of geometry.
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demonstrates the art of measuring." Since the manual
arts are concerned primarily with the moving of bodies, geometry is often used to speak of their magnitudes, and mechanics of their motion. In this way,
rational mechanics then becomes the science of motions resulting from forces. However, Newton is concerned with only that part ofrational mechanics which
deals with natural powers.
In explaining the relationship between the two
sciences, Newton clearly says that mechanics is the
starting point for geometry. Now, geometry is perfect, yet mechanics is not necessarily so, being subject to all of the imperfections of the mechanic. However, a system that begins with an imperfect foundation cannot yield perfect results. In a letter to Cotes,
Newton mentions first principles (and their relation
to hypotheses) briefly.
... [A]s in geometry, the word 'hypothesis'
is not taken in so large a sense as to include
the axioms and postulates; so, in experimental philosophy, it is not to be taken in so large
a sense as to include the first principles or
axioms, which I call the laws of motion.
These principles are deduced from phenomena and made general by induction, which is
the highest evidence that a proposition can
have in this philosophy (Thayer, 6).
Since in the Preface Newton claims mechanics
provides the foundations of geometry, the laws of motion, which he here names as first principles, must have
some relation to mechanics. Because mechanics is
the science of the forces which cause motion in bodies, the laws of motion must belong either to mechanics itself, or to geometry, which describes and measures their motion. But, as mentioned earlier, geometry takes its foundations from mechanics in the form
of the actual production of lines and circles. The resolution of these two seemingly different concepts of
the starting points of geometry (mechanics and the
laws of motion) is not yet evident.
One possible solution lies in an examination of
another mathematician and philosopher, Pascal. In
his work "On the Geometrical Mind" Pascal proposes a treatment of geometry and its first principles
which offers unusual insight into Newton's own beliefs. In respect to scientific and perfect demonstra-

tion of truth, Pascal says:
I can give no clearer idea of the procedure
we should follow to make our demonstrations convincing than by expounding the
method observed in geometry (Pascal, 430). 5
He believes that the only method more rigorous and
complete is one that man could never use, for "what
goes beyond geometry goes beyond man" (Ibid, 430).
This method would involve defining every term and
proving every proposition. Simply because he is finite, man cannot participate in this ultimate method of
finding truth. The first terms defined would require
other terms; the first propositions would rely on prior
propositions; in other words, he could never arrive at
the first propositions or terms. Even though man is
incapable of partaking in this perfect order or method,
he should not surmise that any sense of order is outside of his capabilities.
While geometry is certainly less convincing than
this perfect order, Pascal claims that it is by no means
less certain. By this distinction, Pascal only means to
point out that geometry falls below the perfect order
in failing to define or prove everything. However, this
limitation does not weaken the certainty we acsribe to
its findings. Geometry is certain in that it only assumes
those missing proofs given perfectly clearly by natural light; nature steps in to fill the void left by discourse. Thus, it is perfectly true as well. Geometry
does not attempt to define the things that are clear and
understood by all men but seeks to define all of the
rest.
It is obvious that there exist words which cannot
be defined. For example, we cannot define any term
without using the words it is. Even a definition of
being would utilize these two words. Since defining a
term by using the term itself fails to yield a valid definition, we must conclude that there exist words which
we, as men, cannot define. Nature makes up for this
defect in us by providing a common concept of these
words. If she had not, we would be unable to speak to
each other, for we would have no basis for agreement

5

Blaise Pascal, On the Geometrical Mind, Richard Scofield, trans.,
In Pascal, Britannica Great Books Series, v. 33, (Chicago,
Encyclopredia Britannica, Inc., 1952).

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about the words we use. These terms given by nature
are used with the same assurance as those we have
had explained to us.
Therefore, all of the terms used in geometry are
perfectly intelligible either by the natural light or by
the definitions given. This is the way in which geometry avoids falling into error in respect of either defining terms or proving propositions. Again, it defines
only those terms which need to be defined, and proves
only those propositions which are not evident. When
in geometry man traces his steps back to the first truths
that can be known, he stops there and requires that
they be granted since geometry has nothing clearer to
prove them with. Thus, all of the propositions in geometry are perfectly demonstrated either by the natural light or by proofs. Since nature supplies all that
discourse cannot give, the order of geometry is just as
perfect as anything of which man can partake.
A telling example of Pascal's first principles is
the (fouble infinity. For Pascal, the most important of
all the properties that are common to everything is,
constituted by the two infinities which are
found everywhere, the infinitely great and
the infinitely small (Ibid, 434).
However great a space there may be, we can always
conceive of one greater, and also, however small a
space there may be, we can always conceive of one
that is smaller. Whatever space we take, there will
always be one greater and one lesser, so that everything lies between nothing and infinity, always remaining infinitely far from each extreme. This cannot be
demonstrated, yet it is one of the foundations of geometry.
While geometry can neither define its objects nor
prove its principles, it is neither deficient in clarity
nor in truth. Man has no knowledge more basic than
this double infinity or any that surpasses it in clarity.
Even so, since man cannot completely understand the
infinite, he is often reluctant to admit its existence as
well as its properties.
Pascal claims that those who do not admit of the
infinite divisibility of space will not be able to proceed in geometry. Those who do, however,
can admire the greatness and the power of
nature in that double infinity which surrounds

us on every side, and learn by the consideration of such marvels to know themselves,
seeing themselves placed between an infinity and a nothing of extension, between an
infinity and a nothip.g of number, between
an infinity and a nothing of motion, between
an infinity and a nothing of time . Whereupon we can learn to assess ourselves at our
just value and to make reflections worth more
than all the rest of geometry itself (Ibid, 439).

In this examination of geometry as a demonstration of
truth, Pascal is not just defending the validity of its
methods, he is saying something important about the
nature of man.
Man is incapable of perfect knowledge precisely
because he is trapped between the two infinities. He
is unable to prove first principles and know without a
doubt that they can be extended to the truly infinite.
This understanding of geometry's foundations produces an imperfect system, one that is based on first
principles that can't be defined. Thus, as a whole, it
relies on common acceptance, not on a common understanding. Pascal says that there is no geometer who
does not believe that space is infinitely divisible, yet
there is no geometer who understands an infinite division. This gap between acceptance and understanding is, in Pascal's mind, not a flaw in geometry itself,
but in man.
Pascal's treatment of the first principles is certainly
an interesting one. In building any system of thought,
one must start with at least one first principle. This
starting point must stand on its own, or whatever came
before it would be the first principle, and so on . In
order to avoid this infinite regression, the starting point
needs to be something common to everyone. Pascal,
of course, posits that these first principles are implanted
by nature in all men, so that they come from inside.
The question of first principles is an important one.
While Pascal's treatment of first principles certainly
differs from Newton's in respect to source or origin,
there are definite similarities. For Newton, geometry
begins with mechanics, the actual physical production of the figures. These figures, borrowed from without, correspond to the indefinable beginnings of Pascal. To Pascal, man is imperfect, God is perfect. Geometry is imperfect, but it is the most perfect science
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on certain indefinable terms and unproveable principles for its foundations. Now, Newton does not concern himself with the idea of first principles formally.
Rather, his preoccupation with the distinction between
mechanics and geometry seems to hint at questions of
origin. But, in contrast with Pascal, to Newton geometry is, in fact, perfect; the beginnings are supplied
by something no less perfect than the actual science.
In contrasting the two views ot: geometry and the
world, three distinct divisions arise. The first of these
divisions is founding principles. For Pascal, these are
granted by God and are therefore perfect. From this
perfect foundation springs the second division, the
system, or geometry. Pascal believes that since it
springs from indefinable and unproveable elements
(albeit perfect ones) from without, this system is necessarily imperfect. Yet it is the closest man comes to
accurately describing the third division, the world. This
is the actual God-given, God-granted world from
which man derives his imperfect model.
For Newton, these three divisions are not as distinct as they are for Pascal. Newton begins with the
belief that the world was created by the perfect mechanic, of whom he speaks in the Preface, namely God. ·
This perfect mechanic, working with perfect accuracy,
produced and set into motion the natural forces of the
world. The orbits of the planets, the motions of fall ing bodies, all follow the precise mathematical laws
He ordained. The first principles of this system, which
Newton refers to as the laws of motion in the previously cited letter to Cotes, are directly related to mechanics. For example, the first law states:
Every body continues in its state of rest or of
uniform motion in a right line unless it is
compelled to change that state by forces impressed upon it (Pricipia, 13).
This law may be interpreted as the production of a
perfectly straight or right line. The continuation of
this law further provides for the description of the
parabola as well as the other conic sections as they
can be seen in the planetary orbits:

sion are continually drawn aside from rectilinear motions, does not cease its rotation otherwise than as it is retarded by the air. The
greater bodies of the planets and comets,
meeting with less resistance in freer spaces,
preserve their motions both progressive and
circular for a longer time (Ibid, 13).
These laws serve as the rules for generation of both
the actual world created by the perfect mechanic, God,
and the system proposed by Newton. In contrast to
Pascal's first principles, which are logical, Newton's
are natural and physical. Experimental philosophy
itself allows for their discovery. Confidence is engendered by experience and the accuracy of the mathematics. For example, the parabolic motion of falling bodies depends on both the inertial and accelerative components set forth in the first two laws of motion. This motion can be seen experimentally as well
as demonstrated geometrically.
Since God created the world, it is perfect. The
first principles by which He did so must necessarily
also be perfect. God used mechanics to set the world
in motion. Since Newton also uses mechanics as the
foundation of his system, this system too begins with
perfect first principles. If the first principles are perfect, and the method used is perfect also, how can the
system itself fall short of perfection?
Newton is very emphatic about the perfection of
the perfect mechanic; any doubts must be referred to
us, not to Him. Newton does not claim that the system of the world he comes up with is perfect, rather
that his method is. The system is not necessarily completely accurate, and he allows for refinements. In
the Preface, speaking of the forces by which particles
of bodies are impelled to and repelled from each other,
he says:
These forces being unknown, philosophers
have hitherto attempted the search of Nature
in vain; but I hope the principles here laid
down will afford some light either to this or
some truer philosophy (Ibid, xviii).

Projectiles continue in their motions, so far
as they are not retarded by the resistance of
the air or impelled downward by the force
of gravity. A top, whose parts by their cohe-

He has given an account of the general forces
which dictate motion in the world. He has provided
the fundamentals; all else is particular.
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system and the method elucidates the very subtle distinction between what wondrous things Newton has
done and what lesser things are commonly ascribed
to him. Proposition sixty-six (Ibid, 173) demonstrates
our inability as men to see the whole system. We may
treat mathematically all the things which we perceive,
and-this itself is no small task, yet we cannot account
for those things we do not perceive. Newton here gives
a proof of our limits of understanding. (The very fact
that he can demonstrate and prove the limits of our
scope affords much credibility to his method.) All
apparent uncertainties about the world are merely a
result of our lack of ability to see the whole.
In this way, one sees that while Newton is not
merely proposing a simplified mathematical analogue
of the world, neither is he putting forth a direct representation of it. He believes that the world is governed
by mathematical forces which move it in a perfectly
mathematical fashion, and sets forth, therefore, a compl'etely mathematical analysis of it. He is explaining
the world through the only method capable of producing truth. In this respect, his system is not a simplified mathematical analogue to something more
complex and not mathematical. However, it is true
that we, as men, fall short of God in our abilities to
perceive and understand the universe as a whole. We
are able to grasp only parts at a time, and therefore,
whatever system we devise to explain the whole will
indubitably fall short of the truth . Nonetheless, Newton does give us truth after a fashion - his method.
And this seems to be the most important distinction between the two mathematicians/philosophers:
namely, the degree of perfection each of the divisions
entails. Pascal, troubled by the question of the origin
of first principles in a not-quite-perfect system, is led
to question man's own perfection. To him, the benefits of geometry are obvious; geometry leads to truth.
In agreeing with him, though, we must concede our
imperfections and consign ourselves to an eternal
struggle to decrease the ignorance we have of our own
world. Our limited understanding of the double infinity leads us either to despair in the futility of scientific inquiry, or to pursue moderation in our attempts
to explain the world. We are barred from true knowledge, and are able only to admire and delight in the
workings of an incomprehensible universe. All we are
left with is the task of focusing on ourselves and our
surroundings, hopefully learning, as Pascal says, "to

assess ourselves at our just value and to make reflections worth more than all the rest of geometry itself'
(Pascal, 439).
Newton, on the other hand, clearly believes that
we can have true knowledge of both ourselves and the
world. His veneration of geometry is evident throughout the work, and is found to be excessive nowhere.
He proves to us the strengths or, as he calls it in the
Preface, the glory, of geometry. We too are taught to
revere this science for its accuracy as well as the enormous scope of its findings; we come to understand it
as Newton does, as the science, inextricably linked to
mechanics, which accurately describes the natural
forces of the world. It should not be overlooked that
our views of God and the world are irrevocably
changed as well, for though the Principia is a geometrical treatise, it is not so narrow in scope, and is
rightly entitled the "Mathematical Principles of Natural Philosophy." After a careful examination of this
work we come to agree with Cotes's words from his
Preface to the second edition:

"FOR HE UNLOCKED THE HIDDEN TREASURES OF TRUTH"

thence incited the more profoundly to reverence and adore the great Maker and Lord of
all. He must be blind who from the most
wise and excellent contrivances of things
cannot see the infinite Wisdom and Goodness of their Almighty Creator, and he must
be mad and senseless who refuses to acknowledge them (Principia, xxxii-xxxiii)
We see now that Newton leads us, through a sincere
and careful mathematical inquiry, to an informed participation in the glory of a most perfect universe.•

Fair and equal judges will therefore give sentence in favor of this most exce-llent method
of philosophy, which is founded on experiments and observations. And it can hardly
be said or imagined, what light, what splendor, hath accrued to that method from this
admirable work of our illustrious author,
whose happy and sublime genius, resolving
the most difficult problems, and reaching to
discoveries of which the mind of man was
thought incapable before, is deservedly admired by all those who are somewhat more
than superficially versed in these matte s.
The gates are now set open, and by the passage he has revealed we may freely enter into
the know ledge of the hidden secrets and wonders of natural things. He has so clearly laid
open and set before our eyes the most beautiful frame of the System of the World, that
if King Alphonso were now alive, he would
not complain for want of the graces either of
simplicity or of harmony in it. Therefore we
may now more nearly behold the beauties of
Nature, and entertain ourselves with the delightful contemplation; and, which is the best
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�PHEDRE

Heroism in Racine's Phedre
By Peter Smith
Yes, prince, I languish, I burn for Theseus:
I love him, but not as hell saw him,
The fickle lover of a thousand different objects,
Who would dishonor the marriage bed of Death;
But faithful, but bold, and even a little savage,
Charming, young, drawing all hearts after him,
Such as one depicts our gods, or such as I see you
now.
He had your bearing, your eyes, your speech;
Your noble modesty reddened his face,
When he crossed the waves to our Crete,
Worthy subject of the vows of Minos' daughters.
What were you doing then? Why, without
Hippolytus,
Did he assemble the elite heroes of Greece?
Why, too young still, couldn't you then
Board the ship which took him to our shores?
You would have slain Crete's monster,
Despite the windings of his enormous lair.
To unfold the uncertain mystery,
My sister would have armed you with the fatal
thread.
But no: in this scheme, I would have gone before
her;
Love would have inspired this thought in me first;
It is me, prince, it's me, whose useful aid
Taught you of the Labyrinth's twistings:
With what cares I would have held dear this lovely
head!
A thread not enough to reassure your lover,
Companion in the peril which you sought,
I would have wanted to walk before you;
And Phedre descended into the Labyrinth with you
Would have, with you, returned or be lost.
(Act II, Scene 5)

eration and pious chastity are starkly contrasted with
the uncontrollable lusts which plague Phaedra. He
falls in love, it is true, but nicely. It makes sense, of
course, that Racine should see the proud restraint
which Hippolytus exhibits as the means of conquering one's passions. And just so that the analogy is
made perfectly clear even to those who were not
paying close attention during the first four acts,
Hippolytus is made, in the finale, to battle the beast
nobly in front of the wedding chapel, symbol of
honorable, chaste, and divinely sanctioned love.
With his heavy-handed use of metaphor Racine
forces this understanding of man's battle with passion into the somewhat unwilling Labyrinth myth
with which he is, after all, constrained to work. It
does not always seem to fit though. What does it
mean for Phaedra to lead the hero into the Labyrinth? Racine presents us with the image of a lecherous old woman enticing an innocent, luring him
into the darkness of perversity. Her promise to teach
him the turnings of the Labyrinth takes on a horrible and vivid significance, but it is a significance
irreconcilable with the myth. There is a discrepancy
on two different, but related, points. First, is the
matter of the seduction: it is backwards. Theseus
seduced the innocent Ariadne (and later abandoned
her), and not the other way around. Secondly, it is
only because of the knowledge she gives him, because of the fact that she betrays to him the secrets
of her family, "du fil fatal efit arme votre main",
that Theseus is able to kill the Minotaur.
It is Ariadne's thread which suggests an alternate understanding of the hero, and a reexamination of the character of Theseus. That which makes
it difficult for the young Hippolytus to see Theseus
as hero explains the necessity of the seduction of
Ariadne as preface to his battle with the Minotaur.
In the eyes of his son (in the first scene) and Phaedra
(in her speech), Theseus' penchant for playing the
role of "volage adorateur" and his crimes against
"trop credules esprits que sa flamme a tromp~s",
tarnish the memory of his heroic deeds, but in the
myth these seductions are closely bound to the idea
of Theseus as a hero. Theseus was able to descend
into the Labyrinth not because he was pure of heart,
but because he was an initiate of the island's profane mysteries. He could kill the Minotaur not because of his strength and courage, but because he

What is most striking about this passage is how
Hippolytus usurps his father's position, not only as
object of Phaedra's love, but also as hero. It is
Hippolytus who should have descended into the
Labyrinth. It is Hippolytus who should have killed
the Minotaur and freed Athens. The fact that Phaedra
ascribes to him the deeds of Theseus gives insight
into Racine's reworking of the myth, and into his
understanding of the hero.
The image of the Labyrinth is an obvious one
and central to the play. The story of its origin, of
Pasiphae and the bull, of passion and bestial lust,
hangs over the characters like a prophecy. It is the
product of an ancient curse which dooms the descendants of the sun; the sun who looked upon, and
revealed, the sins of a goddess. Their punishment ,
Phaedra's punishment, is unspeakable, subterranean
desire. The torture is made more horrible for Phaedra
because of the other half of her ancestry: she is the
daughter not only of Pasiphae, but of Pasiphae and
Minos. She is afflicted with remorse, the union of
sin with the consciousness of guilt, of insatiable lust
with divine, all-seeing, all-judging conscience. This
monstrous union of man and beast is depicted for
us in the image of the Minotaur, Phaedra's halfbrother.
But if this is how we are to read the metaphor of
monstrosity in Racine's play, how are we to understand the character of the hero, the monster-slayer?
Theseus, as he appears on stage, is of little help. He
is bumbling, incompetent and helpless. Until the final scene he has no idea of what is going on around
him, and seems, for that little bit of the play he is
actually in, more of a plot device than a character.
In order to understand the nature of the hero one
must tum toward the double image of Hippolytus
Theseus being led into the darkness by Phaedra
Ariadne.
It is not difficult to see Hippolytus in this role.
The imagery of the play, not only in this passage,
points towards him as the monster-slayer, and in
speech after speech his virtues are recounted. Racine
writes Hippolytus as a bland paradigm of manly
virtue, a character very different from the ambiguous and slightly repellent Amazon that appears in
Euripides' play. He is proud and honorable, but in
this play, only "un peu farouche". His sober mod-

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was able entice Ariadne into revealing her secrets
to him. It is also interesting to note that not only in
his Cretan escapade are his heroic deeds linked_
to
his conquest of women (if in the final analysis we
can even make the distinction between the two).
Theseus is able to save Athens from the Amazons
who threatened it by coercing their queen, Antiope,
the mother of Hippolytus, into committing an act
of betrayal similar to that of Ariadne. Both of the
threats to his kingdom come in the form of a woman
(the product of Pasiphae's awesome lusts, and the
proud and unbowing Amazon), and Theseus overcomes these threats not in combat, but with an act of
seduction. This is the nature of Theseus' heroism.
Racine ignores neither of these two heroes, but
plays them off against each other, which is what
makes Phaedra's speech so interesting. Even if, in
the end, he seems to see Hippolytus as the hero,
justifying his claim that this play, more than any
other he wrote, exalts virtue, the decision is yet an
ambiguous one. The fact that in loving Aricie he
becomes her captive, that in finally battling the
monster he becomes entangled in the twisting reins,
leaves open the question as to whether the man who
contemplates the storm standing safely on the quiet
shore can really call himself its master. •

Lyric Narration
By Alexa Van Dalsem
"Sing, goddess, of the destructive wrath of Achilles,
son of Peleus ... " begins the Iliad, and through vivid
language the reader is swept into the emotion and story
of Achilles. The words provoke sympathetic sensations and pry upon the memory and imagination to
relate a hero's tale. For from simple words, spoken or
written, placed in careful succession upon the mind,
one may experience countless lives and events and
ideas. Being social, communicative animals, humans
strive to communicate with others, most immediately
through words and when words cannot suffice, perhaps through dance, art, theater, or music. In the studying and listening of the second movement of
Beethoven's Symphony No.7 the music plays into a
storyline, evoking different emotions in the parade of
musical measures, combining to tell a story, such as
the first words of the Iliad. Like a narrator's words,
music is a storyteller.
The oboe, clarinet, bassoon, and horns introduce
the second movement as if ending a section of music,
holding their notes for three measures. C makes an
appearance as 3 in the oboe and bassoon, and E as 5 in
the oboe and horns, outnumbering the A's in the clarinet and bassoon. The introduction has a feeling of
being almost complete, not quite hitting home, leading to the entrance of the main character, who I call
Kedos, represented by the lone notes of measures three
and four, theme (a), a slow, precisely measured, melancholy beat (measures 3-26). The A-minor key gives
the notes the familiar minor-key sadness. Measures
11-18 repeat from measure 19 on, but more quietly.
Having victoriously concluded a war the stately Kedos
leaves the battle land, walking in solemnity and solitude grieved of lost lives and his homeland. Coming
upon a divinely lit clearing, he does not slow his steps,
but approaches quietly, not wishing to be noticed by
nor to disturb the figure dancing in the light.
The viola and cello take up the melody, theme(~),

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dancing behind (a) as a less solemn tune (measures
27-50). (~)moves up to the second violin, urging (a)
to the first violin as the two tunes intertwine, the beat
becoming momentarily less prominent (measures 5174). As(~) proceeds to the first violin, (a) is driven
into the wind instruments in a crescendo of (a), made
more prominent by the high pitch of the tones overriding, but not wholly hiding, the continued(~) melody
in the first violin, and the contrast of the seeming lightness of the preceding section. In sympathy(~) plays
along with (a) (measures 75-9.8), dropping off for a
moment at 99-100 for (a). Despite his precautions,
the figure turns towards Kedos, dancing around him,
winding her song amidst his melancholy. Softly she
sings of happiness, beguiling him to join her, to forget
his pain for lightness. Tempted by her promises and
the rays of joy laid against his sadness, prodded by
the sharp pangs of his pain, Kedos tries to dance, to
mingle with her song. But in his pain he can only
erupt into the song of his sorrows, weeping and singing as she sings with him, dancing in sympathy, as he
tries to purge his mind of the past. Enchanted by her
continued song, Kedos ends his weeping, forgetting
sorrow, and eases into her dance.
After the crescendo and fall off of (a) , (~) picks up
a lighter tune in a lighter key, A minor, in the clarinet
and bassoon. The original rhythm of (a) continues in
a variation by the bass, but pizzicato, so that the role
of the pounding dominant beat is lessened (measures
101-42). Ending the tune,(~) reverts to A minor in
measure 139 and begins a downward scale, to .spill
into a full tumbling scale, covered by winds and strings
from the flute to the bass (measures 144-48). A pair
of eighth notes hang suspended at the end to be answered by two more sets of eighths (149). Having relieved Kedos 'pain, eased his piercing cries into soulful looks, she sings of her life, of the happiness he
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tales of continued gaiety and merriment. She ends
her song with arms outstretched towards him, asking
if he will join her in the lightness, suspended as she
wonders if she has convinced his pain to escape into
her dance. He cannot but assent, wrapped in her enchanted song.
(p) returns in measure 150, still accompanied by
the pizzicato bass beat. Measures 176-77 hold a short
set of saddened tones that give way again to a soothing tune, leading into the fugue. The fugue subject as
appears in measures 183-86 is another variation of (a),
using the same rhythm in a smoother sequence of
notes. The fugue having begun with two string instruments widens to all four string instruments, comes
to include the wind instruments, and builds to another
crescendo of music for a return of the solemn pounding (a) theme (measures 214-23), repeating a part of
what the flutes so plaintively declared in measures 7598 . Falling into the lightness, Kedos and she dance,
signing her notes of glorious, lulling melody. Under
her enchantment his pain finds rest, resurfacing in
fleeting instances to be blanketed by her swift hands.
She wove his pain into light, relieving his soul with
masks made of his sadness. As he dances his light
ascends, as she sings he flies, floating only among her
notes to be gripped by his unyielding pain. Falling to
ground, he cries in familiar anguish as memory triumphs over her presence, seized with realization of
his dances 'futility, of the enchanted mask resting upon
his face.
As (a) repeats in measures 214-23, so does the
melodic variation of (p) of measures 101-42 return,
again to A major, futilely trying to dispel the reinstated
sadness (measures 224-51). The sad (a) struggles over
(p), returning softly in measures 243-45 to A minor
and the original beat, and is more strongly reinstated
in the following measures, becoming climactically
loud (by all instruments except strings) as (a) returns,
softly (only by the strings), loudly, softly, as if to reveal two contrary views of a situation (measures 24753). The succeeding beat series of quarter note, two
eighths, and two quarter notes is played by pairs of
the wind instruments in succession (flute and oboe,
oboe and clarinet, etc.), to be supported and answered
by all four strings in pizzicato, and then repeated (measures 255-70). Finally, the winds consent (measure
271) and the strings, returning to area, speed off to the
end. Trying once again to dispel Ke dos' pain, an-

swering to his repeated cry, she sings her song' of
gaiety and merriment, enclosing his soul in her leaves
of easement. But his melancholy winds shu.ffie her
leaves to the ground, and as if to convince himself he
exclaims, "I have t'o go," a yearning to stay lingering
in his eyes, but convinced by his own words. Calmed
by his conviction, he found his pain echoed in her slowing song, in her consent. Little to reply, he disappeared
beyond the boundary of her faded light.
Perhaps not coincidentally, this story resembles
that of Odysseus and Calypso. As Homer's epic poetics composed the tale of Odysseus, so does music hold
the ability to compose a tale. Listening to music, I
often put phrases of words with the music, naturally
matching the tones with words. Songs intentionally
combine music that expresses emotions to simiiar
emotions expressed by the words (or vice versa).
Palestrina used voices formed around words to produce a musical composition, expressing sentiments
through words and music. An in the Kyrie of the Missa
Papae Marcelli, the singing of the "Kyrie" is shortened compared to the elongated "eleison," as if calling attention to the Lord and then singing in supplication for mercy, lengthening the word so that it reaches
the Lord and giving "eleison" importance as if the
Lord's attention can be easily gotten, but his mercy
requires more effort. Together and separately music
and words express a story or emotion or can portray a
scene.
According to Aristotle, " ... that which has a beginning and a middle and an end is a whole." (Pqetics
VII.27) Musical compositions and written stories,
being complete and whole like tragedy, should have a
beginning, middle, and end in which to contain a story,
and methods of revealing the building, climax, and
resolution within those boundaries-words through
suspenseful and climactic literal illustrations and music through the soundings of instruments. In the second movement Beethoven denotes when instruments
should become loud or soft, when to crescendo and
other such dynamics to set a scene or mood. Music
from the beginning (a) overlaps the end of the fugue
in stretto, building to a powerful reinstatement of (a),
to give a booming and dynamic entry to a familiar
tune. While (a) rested beneath(~) and hid within its
variations, it could never disappear. Its reentry sneaks
up on the listener and hits the ear with grand resolution at its return. (a) and(~) of the second movement

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differ through dynamics as well-( a) being more of a
march, stately and solemn, using the same rhythm
every two measures, with each note pronounced.
Whereas(~) flows into a dance rhythm, creating a song
theme through varied notes, many tied together to
soften the evident beat of (a). Dynamics of music describe a scene and actions as words and phrases describe a scene in a story.
As words invoke images of characters which are
carried in the mind throughout a story, the use in music of different instruments or tunes defines characters. The musical characters interact as the instruments
and tunes interact, playing separately or together, one
perhaps louder or higher in pitch that the other, to reveal different qualities and positions of the characters. Beethoven's use of two tunes (the beginning
stately (a) and the added flowing(~) which play together, and sound separately, and build over one another, sets apart two characters acting together as the
music acts together. Shiitz's St. Matthew Passion similarly distinguishes the characters, having the Evangelist and Jesus as single singers with music and words
presented more as speaking than song, sung by musically different voices. The High Priests and Learned
Ones as well as Jesus' Disciples sing with multiple
voices to represent a group of people, differentiating
the Evangelist, Jesus, and the followers. In music,
characters are described through musical qualities,
which act as words ion character descriptions by playing on the emotions conjured up by the musical qualities.
Both words and music evoke one's emotions, letting the mind hold the story within itself, to experience vicariously sadness and joy, trouble and resoluti on, being the· foundation for humans to participate
in stories. Different keys easily set the tone, as the
beginning key of A minor of the second movement
gives the music sadness and the intermittent A-major
sections give the music a lighter, less solemn air. The
regular beat of (a) reminds the listener of marching,
giving the tune solemnity and stateliness. The melodic (~) , on the other hand, with notes tied together,
trickling up and down scales in notes of smaller time
increments, sounds like a dance, resulting in a tune
with a tendency towards happiness. Without these
memories or sympathies, one can only see words or
music, without truly reading or listening, failing to fly
above the tones. Like written compositions, music

combines musical elements as a form of expression,
resulting not only in a musical composition but an
expression of emotion, resembling a story. •

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Staff:

Cover: The character for the word tao, "way," "course,"
in the sense of a way one travels on-a road, path or watercourse. Tao is a key term in traditionalChinese intellectual
discourse, where its meanings range from anormativewayof
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�CONTENTS

K.I57

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DRIVING IN VENEZUELA

Alexandra Boozer

8

PARABLES AND FABLES

Anne McShane

10

CLASS DAY SPEECH I997

Chaninah Maschler

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EXCERPTS FROM: ''BECOMING HUMAN:
A DIALECTICAL JOURNEY TOWARDS
SPECIES BEING"

Lydia Polgreen

14

UNTITI..ED

Marianne Thompson

23

THE TENSION BETWEEN
MERCY AND JUSTICE IN
SHAKESPEARE'S MEASURE FoR MEASURE

Heidi Jacot

24

THE KING OF ISRAEL

Samuel Davidoff

36

A TRANSLATION OF EMIL
VERHAEREN'S "ONE NIGHT"

Eli Wiggins

42

Two TRANSLATIONS OF WILLIAM
VoN Gomrn's "NATURE AND
ART"

Eli Wiggins

44

ANOTEON WILLIAM VON
GoErHE'S "NATURE AND ART"

Eli Wiggins

45

CHINESE GRAMMATOLOGY

Cordell Yee

47

MooN CRATER DEPTII ExPERIMENT

Anna Milazzo and Jill Nienhiser

54

THE HALF-DAY

Aaron Pease

56

LANGUAGE AND MIND: AN ExAMINATION
OF THE PHAEDO AND 0mER DIALOGUES

Alan Rubenstein

60

VIRGIN MARY (MOTHER OF Gon)

Marianne Thompson

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EXCERPTS FROM: ''PARADOX AND EVOLUTION:
IMAGES OF THE DEMANDS OF MODERNITY"

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Chris Colby

Matthew Braithwaite

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�K. i57

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Christopher Colby

classroom on a stage where a lectern was centered. Next to it
was a table upon which he placed his suitcase, and he opened
it as if he were opening ajar of formaldehyde. In ithe kept his
lecture notes: dead, sterile things, drained oflife. On and on
he droned in his dry, lifeless voice: mummified notes read year
after year to each suffering generation. All from the same jar
of preserved, dead feelings. "This isn't music," I thought,
"this is mortuary science." Soon, I dropped out of school,
disillusioned, and fell into the wild chaos that was rock music
and the anti-war movement tearing apart 196o's America.
Music of the '6os was loud, sometimes gentle, mostly angry and always heard best while taking drugs. I was not like
the wanna-be politicians yet to come, who, for their future careers, and a gullible public, did not inhale: I did. Afterwhile,
the warm summer glow of drug-induced blue skies and
Woodstock faded into the cold, gloomy, and lonely grey of
solitary Minnesota winter nights. I was unemployed, uneducated, and burned out after years of protest marches, rock
concerts and all the youthful silliness that comes with drug
abuse. The highs and lows came closer and closer until I was
always high.
On one of my endless wanderings, lost like a refugee, exiled even from myself, I came across a record store in an area
known as "the Left Bank" ofMinneapolis near the Mississippi
river. It was notorious for rebelling students, smoke-laced
coffee houses, and a thriving trade in drug trafficking. There
on a shelf I found K.157. The music didn't have a name, just a
number, tattooed as if on the forearm of some forgotten boy.
K.157. It was a string quartet in C major by Mozart, written
very early in his life while he was in Italy, and the recording
was an old DGG record in a yellow dust jacket with dark blue
lettering. On the back, it said K.157was particularly loved by
Albert Schweitzer, who played it on his violin. "Albert
Schweitzer?" I wondered. The jungle doctor who helped the
poor in Africa, and who, of necessity, sewed torn human flesh
together with the snapped-off heads of soldier ants. I bought
the record.
I find it difficult to describe nowwhat I heard, lest I in turn
become another embalmer. I can t1y to describe my feelings
about K.157. I don't think it is Mozart's best. It was written
while he was a teenager, and other fugues he wrote later were
much more complicated: rich tapestries of woven counterpoint. It is uncharacteristically sad-Mozart is not usually a
sad man. But K.157 contains one of the most poignant and
exquisite second movements I have ever heard. My feeling is
that Mozart wrote it while he was in some great pain. Perhaps

"The Kaminskis were musicians in Poland," my mother
explained to me one day. "They came here after the war.
They're refugees, you know, and their son will go to school
with you this fall." They had been among those freed from a
concentration camp at the end of the war. I was six or seven
years old then and about to begin school. They lived several
blocks awayfrom us, but in the smallcommunitythatwelived
in outsiders made ripples like stones cast into a pond. Even
though he was older than me, Christopher, their son, and I
had become great friends. He played the piano, and could say
his prayers in Latin. On his forearm a black and blue number
was tattooed: it was an enormous curiosity to me, but he always kept it covered.
In the way that children often do, we had somehow discovered each other; I don't remember how. Heliveddownarutteddirtalley, across asumac-studdedandgrassyfield. "Watch
out for the ditch with barbed wire," he used to say, or, "Remember the fallen log where Grey Boots the cat lives? She's
had her kittens." On a comer was his tan-colored stuccoed
house. In one of the trees nearbywe built a tree fort. We were
quiet children, always careful of the witch living next door, in
a house with a basement where she threw little children and
wicked boys.
Christopher practiced his piano lessons nearly everyday,
and while his mother tutored him, I had to leave. So I wandered home alone or waited in our favorite treetop for him to
finish. Often, while we played together in his room or elsewhere around his house, I could hear his mother playing her
viola and his father playing the cello. I was entranced. They
were like two mourning doves warbling their tunes : they
chased each other, they played together, and sometimes they
danced alone. When I was older, I learned the musical term
fugue came from an old Italian word, Jugere "to chase or
dance". The music they made was full oflife: sweet and calm.
It filled me with joy, full of the here and now. I didn't know
what the music was they played or who the composers were,
but the quiet peacefulness of them playing together cast a
gentle, magical spell over me. Three years later, my parents
moved our family away to another city and I never saw the
Kaminskis again.
I never listened to 'classical' music after that until sometime in high school. Then, in a classroom full of bored students like me, I listened to worn and scratchy records. "This
is music," we were told. Later still, in college, I sat in a darkened lecture hall with two hundred others trying desperately
to keep awake. From a side door the professor entered the

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he mourned the loss of his own child}iood, when music-making was no longer simply fun , but had become work. The An·dante evokes feelings of great sadness, lost innocence, and
pathos without the mind-numbing stillness that comes with
melancholia or depression. No wonder Schweitzer played this
at the end of a day without anesthesia, perhaps too full with
the misery of chi1dbfrthing and of the pain of the dying. This
nameless , numbered, second movement written two hundred
years ago , sang to me in my jungle as it must have sung to
Schweitzer in his .
I remembered the Kaminskis. My childhood memories of
them flocked back to me like mourning doves at sundown. I
remembered hearing the story about musicians playing string
quartets by Mozart at a concentration camp in Germany during WWII. Perhaps the Kaminskis played while naked women
and children flocked past them on the way to their suffocating showers. Those who listened heard a moment of beauty
before their screaming final solution: lives flamed into smoke,
anonymous ashes turned into sludge and dumped into a
nearby swamp. How can we , in our own personal concentration camps that are our work-a-day lives, understand such
madness?
"Arbeit ma ch das leben suss" -"work makes life sweet," was
written above the entrance of one such notorious death camp.
No, not work, but music makes life sweet. Between the little
deaths we all suffer during the counterpoint of our lives, music offers moments of beauty and rest, and provides a link to
the immortal. It cheats death. K.157 sounds the same to me
as it did to someone else while black smoke filled the sky in
another land. Whenever the Kaminskis played their music,
whoever listened shared in the wonders of the eternal and the
immortal, in the great terrors of the here and now, in the forever gone and yet to come , with all its sadness and happiness.
In the same way as music, time moves forward. Ifirstheard
K.157 a quarter century ago when I was 22 years old, almost as
young as Mozart was when he wrote it two centuries before. I
gave up drugs then. Like Schweitzer, music was what I really
needed. My eight-year-old daughter came home today from
school. In her hand, a violin in its case swung carelessly as
she chased two mourning doves by the side of the road. Now
her fugue begins .

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�Driving in Venezuela

•

Alexandra Boozer

I.
Trying to Return to the Port Hotel with R.
The moon roof opened by crank,
the leather had a female smell;
I was speaking to him through the sound of birds
confusedit was night and they were flying.
I was a bright orange plume, marking
the night, tangerine beads and slight sunburn,
a bright flash like the sudden passing of
a familiar ghost, or a pet bird speaking, lost
in the wild heat.
We left the gaudy club an hour before, full
on hydroponic tomatoes, wine-marinated
fruits, pale green drinks. I have been
kissed all night on the neck,
though not by R. ; rare bright seeds have
been tossed at me while dancing;
I listened to Blue Serenade sung by a whore
and wept,
he didn't notice.
I imagined the salt on my thighs
cooling his free hand as we drove .
We were lost on a forest road
driving parallel to a river we knew by smell.
Those were water birds flying above.

I was surrounded by sexless sounds
and painful heat. I knew he would find
the way soon to that bleached hotel.
I was beginning to fear
the separate bed, the cold air-conditioner smell
on the sheets, the lone hands.
And if we travelled allnight, ran out of fuel,
wrecked the car ...
I imagined that we were already dying,
that he was forced to venture into the heat with me,
to hide in the woods and sleep,
to never be found.
Complete solitude, and
the honesty that comes from hunger,
the connection between fear and gender.

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II .
Inquiry into the Last Hours
Low morning,
we stumbled from the useless car,
truly hurt and alone,
we lay down to rest for days.
Our clothes were torn but we
were not ashamed;
my wound was bound in his own
Oxford cloth. His blood glimmered
like nothing I have ever seen, he was beautiful
and terrifying, speaking while asleep.
I was the ignorant nurse, hungry and stunned.
We were surrounded by remedies locked in hardwoods,
the bitter milk of plants.
I dreramed the nurse's dream:
His watch read two a.m.
a wounded doe eats a native plant,
I fell asleep.
sleeps to wake up healed.
At four he made choking noises
I find the plant, we both eat it,
and woke me.
we sleep together on the mat of vines.
"Whose hands are choking you?", I
I plead with our bodies for the blood to end.
asked him; "Darling", he said and held my hips.
But perhaps it is the right medicine:
He told me would weep for sex, for regret of
if you find this record, you will want
leaving me cold so long.
to know what our dreams were,
what lit our fourth night.
I was terribly hungry, surrounded
by the sounds of unseen water predators
R. told me years ago that he rarely dreamed.
feeding at night. I envisioned killing
I stayed awake to listen to him talking;
that huge beast with my hands. I licked the
he muttered a long time about some
salt on R.'s elbows.
Bangkok beauty stabbing his wrists.
His wrists in the moonlight seemed alright.
Land of dark oil underwater,
I bound them tighter.
the crushed carbon, brilliant hidden
diamond of the bloody gods,
sustain us.
And I ate the last supper with
my blood husband, seeds and fruit,
narrating the myth oftwentyyears
and war and bones, the final armistice.
I baptized him in that slimy water
and my own spit.
I sleep next to his life.

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�Similes, Fables, and Parables

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Anne McShane
I
Similes, fables and parables serve different purposes.
In looking at the three , I would like to examine what those
purposes are, and how they are accomplished.

several reasons: first, to put some distance between the listener (presumably a human) and the character. Second, so
that certain characteristics can be targeted; the wiliness of a
fox , the stupidity of a bird, or the irritating quahties that only
a fly could have. Third, and this may be related to the first
reason, stories can be both simpler and a little more extreme.
That is to say, had a person pinched the Bald Man on the head,
and the Bald Man was moved to shoot the person, but somehow missed and ended up shooting his kid or something, the
story would seem both ridiculous and bloodthirsty. Killing
flies is something almost everyone does, and is not be regarded as unusual. Having animals rather than people allows
for little complication in the story; motivations are always
simple, often based on pride, hunger, or, as in this case , irritation/pain , and glee at someone else's pain or irritation. The
animals in the fable always represent people, and their actions
are to be taken as simple and distinct cases, which can be applied to particular situations in the listener's life.
And, lastly, the parable. The parable is also meant to teach
a lesson .

First, the simile. The simile is used for purposes of
description.
As a huge oak goes down at a stroke from Father Zeus, ripped by the
roots and a grim reek of sulphur bursts forth from the trunk and a passerby
too close, looking on, loses courage-the bolt of mighty Zeus is hell on earthso in a flash, for all his fighting power, Hector plunged in the dust, his spear
dropped from his fist, shield and helmet crushing in on him, bronze gear
clashing round him (li 489-496, book 14 )'.

The simile sets up a proportion: as Oak to Zeus' thunderbolt, so Hector to Ajax' hurled rock. The simile is not just an
exaggeration-I ate a billion hamburgers today-but a description of a relationship. The simile gives life to the sentence,
makes it three dimensional. If one can imagine how such an
oak would, at first , creaking, slowly topple, and then falling
with increasing crashing speed at the chops of an ax, then so
much more vivid is such a tree ripped out by the roots, inspiring terror into an onlooker. And such is Hector. But then,
one must consider the rest of the simile; as terrifying as the
tree is, that one instigating its descent must be inconceivably
powerful. And such is Ajax. Clearly, the image itself of Hector falling under Ajax' rock would be less powerful without
the accompanying image of the oak falling to Zeus' thunderbolt.

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The parable teaches differently than does the fable. A story
is told, but the moral is left in story form , rather than brought
outside of the context of the story, as in the fable. This creates ambiguity regarding the moral, making different in.terpretations possible. Also , animals are not used, thus bnnging the listener much closer to the story's characters, is, at
the same time, making the story more complicated; motivations and feelings such as forgiveness, love and resentment
are introduced, as well as multiple motivations within characters.
The characters in the parable do not immediately present
themselves as good or bad; is the parable above so much a story
about the younger son , than a story about the older son? It
presents levels of good behavior, brings in attitudes, as opposed to simply actions. There is something in the parable
that is not intuitive. The father's actions, to the black and
white eye, do seem unfair, and the elder son's reactions justified. But the parable is, quite clearly, not suggesting this, but,
rather, the opposite. On a gut level, I cannot escape sympathy for the elder son, though intellectually, the father's reprimand makes sense. I suspect this is a problem the fables do
not often pose.

1. Fagles, Robert. Homer The Iliad, Iggo. New York:
Penguin Books.
2. Caxton. Aesop's Fables, I95I. London: J.M. Dent and
Sons, Ltd.
3. Class translation.

Then he said, "A certain man had two sons. And the younger of them
said to the father , 'Father, give to me the share of the household that falls to
me. The other divided between the living. And after not many days, having
collected everything, the younger son went away from home to a distant
place and there scattered his goods, living profligately. Having spent everything, strong hunger came to be throughout that place, he began to be in
want. So he went and hired himself out to one of the citizens of that place
and he sent him into his fields to tend pigs. Having come to himself, he
said, 'How many of my father's hired men have more than enough bread? I
am undone in hunger. Having risen, I will go to my father and I will say to
him , Father, I sinned against heaven and against you, no more am I worthy
to be called your son. Make me as one of your hired men .' And having risen,
he went to his father himself. While he was still at a distance , his father saw
him and felt mercy, and running, fell upon his neck and kissed him . The
son said to him , 'Father, I sinned against heaven and against you , no more
am I worthy to be called your son. The father said to his slaves, 'Quick,
bring out the first robe, put it on him , and give him a ring upon his hand and
sandals upon his feet, and bring the fatted calf, sacrifice it and eating, let us
be merry, that this son of min e was dead and returned to life, was lost and is
found. And he began to celebrate. His elder son was in the field. And thus
going, he neared the house, he heard sounds and dan cing, calling to one of
the children, he asked 'What could this be?' He said to him that the brother
came, and your father sacrificed the fatted calf, that, being healthy, he had
recovered . He became angry, and did not wish to go in . His father having
come out, called him. Answering, he said to his father, 'Lo, so many years I
work for you and you never gave me a kid in order that with my friends, I
might be happy. When your son, this one devouring your life with prostitutes, came, you sacrificed with him the fatted calf.' He said to him , 'Child,
you are always with me, and all things mine are yours. There was need to be
merry and to rejoice that your broth er, this one was dead and lived , was lost
and is found." 3

Second, the fable. The fable is used to teach a lesson.
THE BALD MAN AND THE FLY
Of a little evil may well come a greater. Whereof Aesop reciteth such a
fable of a Fly which pricked a Man upon his bald head. And when he would
have smote her she flew away. And thus he smote himself, whereof the Fly
began to laugh . And the Bald Man said to her, "Ha, an evil beast! Thou
demandest well thy death if I smote myself, whereof thou laughest and
mockest me. But if I had hit thee thou haddest been thereof slain." And
therefore men say commonly that of the evil of others men ought not to laugh
nor scorn. But the injurious mocketh and scorneth the world, and getteth
many enemies. For the which cause ofttimes it happeneth that of a few words
cometh a great noise and danger. 2

The fable teaches in a very straightforward manner. A story
is told; usually involving animals , with a moral. In this example, the moral is put at both the beginning and the end of
the fable. It's rather difficult to miss. Animals are used for

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�Class Day Speech I99?

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Chaninah M aschler

Thank you for the honor of inviting me to speak to you on
this, your special day.
In the course of the one fifth to one sixth of your life that
you have spent at St. John's you have learned a few pregnant
facts:
For examplethat the avenging slaughter at Odysseus' house, well on the
way to civil war, stopped, not of itself, but by a mentor's persuasive command;
that the periodic table of chemical elements (which you
bought at the bookstore for less than one dollar) is not a copy
of an Ur-chart in some Ur-textbook of chemistry, but derives
~om innum~rable experiments inspired by and in turn inspirmg speculative hopes for chemical theory;
that the behavior of gasses is less difficult to account for
than is the behavior of solids, though gasses seem to be so
much more mysterious, mind-like in their impulse to spread;
that it was not by looking more intently at the planets that
Kepler came to pronounce their paths elliptical rather than
circular;
that there are languages in which you cannot say "it" (for
instance, French);
that Greek idiom seems to suppose that once you have seen
something, you know it, though your own experience is probablyatvariancewith this supposition (The studentwho's bothered by this discrepancy is the one who gets the hang of the
Greek perfect, which usually is a "perfect of result," such as
is illustrated by ou bouleuesthai eti oora, alla bebouleusthai
"it is no longer time to be deliberating but to have finished
deliberating," that is to make a decision, as in Crito 46a);
that the American tradition of constitutional law, in keeping a record &amp; thus preserving the memory of the Supreme
Court's di.ssentingminorityopinions, holds resources for selfcorrection (thus , in the case of Dredd-Scott Vs Sandford
Judge George Ticknor Curtis held that Congress does hav~
the right to control the spread of slavery into the territories,
and the words in which this minority opinion was expressed
gave guidance to the majority that later declared what the
Constitution requires );
that the sources of moral courage are deeply mysterious-I
am thinking of the courage of Frederick Douglass and his little
band (p 307), the five slaves who, here, in this Chesapeake
region, planned their run-away to freedom;
that the God of the Bible, just and merciful as he may be, is
not nice.
You have acquired some proficiency in laying out a mathematical demonstration or executing a laboratory exercise.

You have had experience of the pleasure of discerning what
makes a proof or a theory tick-what links the many argumentative and observational steps into one melody of connection
among connections, and of the pain of not getting it, of the
notes of reasoning not swelling into song for you.
Occasionally, unpredictably, while working on a paper, or
chatting in the coffee shop, or reading a poem out loud that
previously would not yield, there has been an epiphany. .
_And in anticipation of the next night's seminar, you have,
twJ.ce a week, stuffed yourself, sometimes nearly to bursting,
with very big books.
But this little sample of the things that you have done or
that have happened to you while we were here together does
not capture what's been distinctive of our endeavor. Bearwith
me as I try for a better description.
In the second week ofyour freshman year, when you began
to study The Elements, you noticed with surprise and pleasure
that this mathematics book, unlike all the others you had read
previously, does not hide the fact that the words that are coming at you from the page have an author. Your implicit knowledge that the words that are made available by a language do
not, on their own, arrange themselves into speeches, that even
mathematical speech is personal, was made startlingly explicit
through the recurrent formula Lego hoti, "I say that ... "
Everytheorematic proposition began with an enunciation,
a statement claiming that all figures or all magnitudes or all
ratios that fall under a given description also fall under a second description. While promulgating this all-sentence the
author simply declared.
In the next portion of the proposition , theekthesi.s , or "setting out," the hidden first person who was the source of the
declaration made plain that he was addressing a second person, ourselves, the readers, because he issued a command or
r~quest, such as "Let ABC be an isosceles triangles having the
side AB equal to the side AC," and even so-called "third person imperatives" place responsibility for the execution of the
command on the addressee, the second person.
Because of the fact that our editions of Euclid's Elements
supply a picture of this very triangle ABC that was just mentioned, we mistake, perhaps, what's happening in the" setting out": Maybe it's notthepromulgatorof the all-statement
by we, the hearers , who (to grasp the sense of the
enunciation's grammatical subject) are invited to draw a case
that instantiates it. Otherwise we cannot know what the hidden author is talking about.
Now comes the Lego hoti step: the author pops out
and proudly proclaims in the first person singular thatourtri-

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angle ABC has the property he promised all of its kind to have.
And, in the apodeixis itself, he makes good on his words by
experimenting on our case and winning our assent to his
claims about it.
Finally, and this is the logically most mysterious step, the
proposition circles back to its opening all-statement and
claims that "therefore," which means, presumably, as a result of the conversation, which seemed to be about particulars, the universal enunciation holds, apart from that conversation (cf. Post. Anal. I 3 73b32.; Proclus on the" conclusion"
of a Euclidean proposition, quoted p. 131 Heath, volume i).
The conversational reading of Euclidean proposition that
I just laid out stems from the feeling that there is more than a
little overlap between what goes on in Euclid'sElements and
what happens in Plato' s dialogues.
Take, for instance, the episode in the Meno where Meno
asks Socrates to teach him that what men do when they study
is more properly viewed as recollection than as getting taught
(81e) . Socrates says:
It isn't an easy thing, but still I should like to do what I
can .. .I see you have a large number of retainers here. Call
one of them, anyone you like , so that, in him I may demonstrate/or you ...
It sure looks as though both Euclid and Socrates believe
that they do not have to run through an infinity of instances
to obtain the logical right to make their statements about all
triangles or all learning human beings so long as they grant
their interlocutors the freedom to select the example that is
to be experimented on-either in fact or in imagination.
The slave who comes to be used by Socrates as though he
were some triangle ABC drawn by Meno was perhaps not the
cute little "boy" that many of us conjured up for ourselves as
we read the dialogue. In ancient Athens, as in the still not
entirely bygone American South, even a white-haired old man
would be called "boy", so long as he was a slave. By calling
these morally uncomfortable features of the situation to mind,
we are helped to realize the following: Socrates may have been
trying to persuade Meno that, since even when the interlocutor is at liberty to pick his instance from the least likely subspecies of humanity-slaves-it turns out that the learner actively participates in achieving his second, his educated, nature and does not persevere as a mere piece of wax that gets
imprinted by the informing teacher, therefore all situations
of human learning are misdescribed when the teacher, or
speaker, is conceived of as artisan, the student, or hearer, as
his material.
Euclidean-style deductive science is, as Kant points out (in
a section of the Critique which you were not assigned), the
wrong model for philosophical inquiry. It's absurd to talk
about human beings as though they were triangles. Deductive reasoning (though it's always going on in the interstices
of our talking and listening and thinking), is an evanescently
tiny fraction of it. Granted. And, as you found out by reading
Lobachevsky and Einstein, if you want your geometry to be
not only consistent but also cosmologically true, the imagination may have to be stretched to what feels like its breaking
point. All of this is true and important. Yet doesn't my main

contention stand-that it is only when the reader or hearer
cooperates with the speak.er or author by using his conjuring
faculty, his imagination, and tries to "set out" for himselfwhat
the author is saying, that he grasps his meaning?
Don't your four years here confirm that it was by entering
upon conversational exchange with the author who speaks in,
say, Leviathan or Genealogy of Morals or the Discourse on
Inequality that you were enabled to guess at what he means
and to determine on what interpretation of his words they
would merit your assent? And isn't the courtesy of hearing
the author out so damnably strenuous chiefly because our
powers of imagination, of calling up the instances to which
our author'swords apply, are too weak.and uninformed for us
long to sustain the fellowship with him that we demand of ourselves?
Fellowship with speakers who are present in the flesh, who
offer us faces and hands to look at, not only words, is in some
respects easier to sustain. Besides, isn't it both the source and
the goal of fellowship with authors? It ought then, to come
more naturally! But all of us know-from our years of St. John's
coffee shop, classroom, dining hall, not to forget parties and
soccer or baseball games-it's not all that easy. It takes concentration, patience, suppleness, humor, the willingness to
risk saying or doing or asking something foolish. It takes tact,
and (as was so beautifullysaidatlastyear's Class Day), it takes
hope: Hope for hearing the unexpected, which may even come
from you own mouth!
There was a time when advocates ofa St. John's-style education claimed that it educates people to live where other colleges groom them for merely earning a living. Said in acertain tone of voice, this smacks to me of haughtiness and of
regret at or disdain for the fundamental fact that, living as we
do in modern America, our dignity, who we are in our own
eyes and in the eyes of others, must depend heavily on how we
spend our working day, how worthy we believe our work to
be, how fit we are for doing it, and how much of ourselves we
give to doing it as well as we are able.
Since all of this is involved in the phrase earning a living, I
hope that over the long haul you will be able to say truthfully
that your alma mater has helped you become a person who
earns his or her living.
This will not be easy. It may take more than a little time
and cause you some suffering. Yet I do believe that the allrequired program of studies at this talking college has given
you not only a preliminary sketch of some of the main continents of the intellectual and moral globe but also some participatory sense of the work that went into and continues
to go into the making and maintenance of this humane globe.
Apt speaking and hearing-as you've had occasion to find out
here, and as your working and leisure life henceforth will confirm-is by no means the sole condition for its existence. But
it is a prime condition.
In Yiddish, the most heartfelt word of praise is Mensch,
human being. My wish-for you, for myself, and for the next
generation-is that you'll be a Mensch.

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�excerptsfrom: "Becoming Human: A Dialectical
Journey Towards Species Being

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the end of the material dialectic.

The goal, Absolute Knowing, or Spirit that knows itself as Spirit, has for
its path the recollection of the Spirits as they are in themselves and as they
accomplish the organization of their realm. [Phenomenology of Spirit, §
808]

II.

The Marxian Dialectic

The Production of Commodities in General
A commodity is, in the first place , an object outside us, a thing that by
its properties satisfies human wants of some sort or another. [C.I, P-43i'

The metaphysical question of the relationship of subject
to object is taken by modern philosophy from the time of Hegel to be a matter of the history of the subject's relationship
to the objects that make up its world. This is the dialectical
point of view: the subject is not a fixed quantity, but rather a
fluid, changing one, and as it changes, so , too, does the object and its perception of the object.
If formulating a world history is the task of philosophy in
our modern era, then the question remaining is from what
premises this history is to proceed. The first formulation of a
dialectical history of the world was made by Hegel, in hisPhenomenology of Spirit. He begins from the premise of individual consciousness as a substance existing in itself, and from
there lays out the history of that consciousness and its journey towards its ultimate end, its solution to its metaphysical
quandary, Absolute Knowing, or knowledge of itself as Spirit.
Marx proceeds on very different premises. He begins with
the fact of human existence in the world, rather than in mind
and in itself, and formulates world history on that basis, with
the goal ofspecies being as the end of its dialectical quest. Species being is analogous to absolute knowing, but the latter is
a state of consciousness existing in itself, while the former is
a state of man 's existence in the world.
The goal of this essay is to examine the premises upon
which Marx.formulates his dialectical history of the world, and
follow this dialectic through to its logical conclusion, species
being. The first section, entitledDialectic, is an exposition of
the Hegelian dialectic of consciousness. I will then take up
the inadequacy of the Hegelian point of view, and propose the
material dialectic as the true formulation ofworld history. In
the second section, The Marxian Dialectic, I will follow the
thread of this dialectic through Marx's argument as given in
Capital, in order to understand why Marx believes idealism is
inadequate. I will then examine the effects of the material
conditions of capitalist production on man's consciousness
in the section entitled The Material Dialectic of Consciousness. The final section of this essay, Communism, will deal
with the actualization of species being, which Marx sees as

Commodities are produced to satisfy some human want.
The very first kind of production takes place when man produces the objects needed for subsistence out of what is presented to him in nature. The work involved in this process is
of a definite kind: it is the labor expended forthe object itself,
and it is expended by the one who is to enjoy the fruits of his
labor. This simple worker works only to satisfy his wants, and
the value of the objects is determined by the intensity of his
desire for them. This value is true for the self-laborer only, it
has no universal content. As the wants are his, and their intensity entirely subjective, there can be no common measure
of them for all men. This is what Marx calls use-value.
The worker feels no need to measure the value of the objects of his work when he works only for himself, because his
subjective desire for the object is all that is required for its
production. When division oflabor begins, for whatever historical reasons, the need for a universal standard of value inevitably arises , as the worker no longer works only for himself. His relationship to the object he produces has changed:
it is no longer an object of desire for him in itself, but rather
an object of desire for someone else. He produces it in the hope
of gaining some object that he desires from someone who desires the object he has produced. In a word, he wishes to exchange his object (for which he has no need) for an object he
does need or want. This is the origin of barter. The two producers involved mutually exchange their products for one
another. It is precisely when he produces for an other that the
object on which he has labored becomes a commodity:

The Division of Labor

Prior to any talk of exchange there must be a division of
labor. In order to engage in exchange, one must produce what
one does not need in the hopes of exchanging it for another
commodity. The division oflabor takes place quite naturally.
It exists already in the family, according to Aristotle .., The
various tasks of the household are divided among the family
members according to who will best be able to perfonn them.
Here, of course, it is difficult to see the "work-for-other" that
shows itself quite clearly in the social division oflabor. Members of families probably did not see their relations as alien
from themselves, much less opposed to them , but still, the
concept seems to exist here first and most simply.
The social division of labor also seems to happen rather
innocently.Natural ability makes some people more adept at
certain kinds of work. If each man had to farm his land, sew
his clothes, cobble his shoes, and forge his tools, his days
would be quite arduous. In order to reduce his labor time, or
perhaps improve the quality of the goods he consumes, he
undertakes only one occupation, leaving the rest to others who
will practice their trade much better than he did, no doubt.
And so begins the division oflabor, or "workjor-other."
The division oflabor is the first revolution that takes place
in the history of production. Adam S~ith describes its advantages for production.

Exchange Value and the Market
Commodities come into the world in the shape of use-values .... This is
their plain, homely, bodily form. They are, however, commodities, only because they are something two-fold, both objects of utility, and, at the same
time, depositories of value. [C.l, p.54)

When our producer of commodities wishes to exchange his
commodity, he brings it to the market, where the exchange of
commodities takes place. The challenge he faces here is to
ascertain what he can get for his commodity. He knows that it
is worth nothing to him in terms of use-value. He did not produce it for that reason. He cannot gauge the subjective value
of the commodity to another, as he will surely be cheated in
such an exchange. He cannot look into the wants of another
in order to find the intensity of his desire for the commodity,
and the person with whom he hopes to exchange cannot
fathom his desires. Their respective desires for each other's
objects cannot serve as the medium of exchange . The only
thing that the two commodities have in common, then, is the
amount oflabor invested in each. How can one compare two
objects that seem to be unrelated? Only with respect to some
quantity, some common measure, can they be compared.
Since they are qualitatively different, the quantitative measure must be completely abstract, like number.
We said earlier that the amount of work invested in an object when man works exclusively for himself was determined
purely by the intensity of his desire for the object. When the
laborer produces the object as a commodity for consumption

The division oflabor ... so far as it can be introduced, occasion s, in every
art, a proportionable increase of the productive powers oflabor. 3

The division oflabor undeniably increases the productivity of labor, and probably increases the quality of the goods
produced. It is a natural , rational, and dialectical motion,
demanded by the inadequacy of the previous mode of production.Work-for-self is inadequate for meeting the aims ofwork,
so it is sublated into work-for-other. The division ofla~or better accomplishes the end of work, which is the satisfaction of
human wants.
This revolution has inevitable consequences for its participants. It places men in relationships ofboth mutual independence and dependence:

Whoever directly satisfies his own wants with the produce of his own
labor, creates, indeed, use-values, but not commodities. In order to produce the latter, he must produce not only use-values, but use-values for others, social use-values. [C.I, P-48]

The social division of labor causes his [the owner and producer of commodities] labor to be as one-sided as his wants are many-sided. This is precisely why the product of his labor serves him solely as exchange-value. [C. I,
p.108)

Similarly, the work that goes into the production of the
commodity is of an essentially different kind. It is work with

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satisfy with his own commodity. The division of labor transforms the producer of any particular commodity from an undifferentiated human being into a baker, weaver, smith, or
carpenter, and defines his being in terms of the commodity
he produces. His social position is determined by the commodity he produces, something that simultaneously brings
him together with other men (although only because they
possess commodities he needs) while separating him from
them as individual men apart from the commodities they produce. The division oflabor, then, necessarily brings about an
alienation of man from man. It brings men together as producers of commodities, entangled in an antagonistic, estranged relationship with them as producers of other commodities, or simply as others. Once work-for-self is sublated
into work-for-other, the former antagonism between man and
nature is transformed into an antagonism between men in the
form of barter, the first kind of exchange.
The division oflabor marks the beginning ofsociety among
men as we know it. Society is a conglomeration of individuals
dealing with one another as individuals. Social relations are
the relationships between individuals in the context of society, that is, where there exists both attraction to and repulsion from other men. The division of labor necessitates the
recognition of man simultaneously as an independent individual and as one dependent upon other men. Hence all social relationships between men are merely a function of the
division oflabor and the beginning of exchange.

Only such products can become commodi~ies wi~h regar.d to ea~h other,
as result from different kinds oflabor, each kind berng earned on mdependently and for the account of private individuals. [C.I , P-491

Lydia Polgreen

Introduction

another in mind. I call this kind of work labor, as opposed to
simple work. Labor is work done with the aim of exchange,
rather than consumption.

Producers are independent insofar as they produce different commodities, but are dependent because each one must
rely upon others for the satisfaction of the wants he cannot

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�by another, he speculates on the amount of desire that the
other might have for the object. He expends the same amount
of labor as when he produced the object for himself, but the
labor involved is essentially different. He guesses, in essence,
how much labor the other would be willing to invest in the
object if he were producing it for himself. This is how they
come to agree on the terms of exchange. Each looks at the labor required to produce the commodity, and bases the value
of it in terms of exchange exclusively upon this . Each has labored a certain amount to produce his respective commodity, and this is all the two commodities have in common. This,
therefore, is their only measure of value with respect to one
another.
The labor involved in producing particular use-values is of
a particular kind, such as weaving, wood-working, forging,
and so on. But as far as the commodity is concerned, the labor
invested is entirely undefined and formal . For the purpose of
exchange all forms oflabor are merely different expressions
of the same thing: human labor as a social substance. Thus
the labor that is used in measuring value for the purpose of
exchange is what Marx calls "socially necessary labor." This
is the amount of labor that would be required to reproduce
the commodity today, expressed in terms of a social mean, or
average. The qualitative differences between the various kinds
oflabor are as unimportant in exchange as the qualitative differences between the commodities they produce. All that
matters is the quantitative difference in socially necessary labor. This value is the exchange-value of the commodity. Exchange-value is a purely social expression:

objects enter into exchange by their own nature . Once they
have been produced, the producer is merely transportation
and a mouthpiece.
I tis important to note at this juncture the important change
that has taken place in this abstraction from use-value to exchange-value. Each producer estimates the value of the commodity in terms of his own labor, but that labor is abstracted,
as it has not actually been performed on the object they are
now hoping to obtain . Each takes the value of his own labor to
be the same as that of the other. Once a value is assigned to
labor, it is labor of an essentially different kind. The work that
produces use-values is a means to the end of satisfyingwants,
while the labor involved in producing use-values is a means
to exchange. Work is the activity of gaining one's sustenance
for oneself from nature; labor is work performed for an other
with a view to exchange. The dialectical antagonism of usevalue and exchange value that arises out of the division oflabor is expressed here by the end of each kind of production .
In the first, use-values are the primary end, in the second,
exchange values . Hence what was once a use-value, or an end
in itself, has now become a means to an end, exchange. So the
commodity leads a double life; it has at once both use-value
and exchange-value, the latter of which is completely alien
from it as a use-value. The commodity is speechless with respect to its use-value; this value is inexpressible .4 Accordingly, this value cannot be alienated from the commodity, as
it resides inherently in it. It can, however, through its seller,
articulate its exchange-value. Its exchange-value is precisely
the amount of socially necessary labor required to produce it
as a commodity. This quantity has meaning independent of
the commodity itself; it is fully alienable. Labor, as something
universally applied to nature in order to bring forth use-values, is a quantity that can be articulated.
Use value and exchange-value express the two-fold antagonistic nature of the commodity both in its production and in
its exchange. It exists in two ways: for the seller, it exists only
as a receptacle ofvalue, while for the buyer, it is a good he can
use. For each, the exchange-value that they agree on in common is an articulation of their alienation from one another
and from their commodities. Implicit in the reliance upon an
alien standard of value is an alienation of the buyer from the
seller. They meet one another as opposites, brought together
by their differences: each has a commodity that he does not
need, produced by labor that he alienated specifically for the
purpose of exchange. They meet not as men , but as buyer and
seller. Their relationship is defined by the relationship between their commodities. One has a commodity to sell, the
other has realized value which he hopes to exchange for unrealized value, i .e. something he can use. Each offers the other
something he has alienated.
Also implicit in this expression ofvalue is the acknowledgment that there is an other, that the two people in this situation are fundamentally different and that the difference between them with respect to the commodities they produce is
what brings them together. In resorting to an abstract measure of exchange they in effect say to one another "You are
not myself, and furthermore, I have interests that do not co-

The value of commodities is the very opposite of the coarse materiality
of their substance, not an atom of matter enters into its composition .. .. If,
however, we bear in mind that the value of commodities has a purely social
reality, and that they acquire this reality only insofar as they are expressions
or embodiments of one social substance, viz., human labor, it follows as a
matter of course, that value can only manifest itself in the social relation of
commodity to commodity. [C.I, p.54]

The commodities begin to take on a social meaning, and
with it a life of their own. They become not just external objects in the world, but objects imbued with a certain social
quality, the mirror image of the social relation of buyer and
seller. In fact, it is rather more accurate to say that the social
relationship between the two people is a product of the relationship of their commodities, as it is for the sake of these
commodities that they came to market in the first place.
A commodity is therefore a mysterious thing.. . because the relation of
the producers to the sum total of their own labor is presented to them as a
social relation, existing not in themselves, but between the products of their
labor. [C.I, p.77]

The reason for the mystery, of course , is that in producing
the object for another, man alienates his labor, and by so doing gives it an independent, objective existence in the world.
This objective existence is a condition of the possibility of
exchange. With object in hand he goes to market, and the

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Labor for another necessitates the existence of private property. The philosophy of the natural rights of man, which claims
that work is the agency of ownership, mistakes work for labor, and confuses cause with effect. John Locke, one of the
primary founders of the philosophy of the rights of man, describes the process of appropriation thus:

incide with yours." This expression isolates one 'I' from the
other, and drives a permanent wedge between them. 5
Although the buyer and seller are alienated from one another, they seem also to have a natural affinity for one another.
They are a beautifully matched pair, each perfectly meeting
the needs of the other. But this harmony is a mere semblance.
Exchange is possible only because commodities are two-f~ld,
having two separate modes of existing in the world. The fust
is as themselves, as use-values. The second is as exchangevalue, or as an expression of human labor invested in them.
These two are at odds with one another, because they are
housed in the same object and yet are of essentially different
natures. Buyer and seller approach one another as mouthpieces for their respective commodities, as beings defined
entirely by those commodities .6 The commodities have a
natural affinity to one another, but they have this affinity only
as two ways of expressing exchange-value. The commoditythe
producer hopes to exchange attracts other use-values because
it has exchange-value. Therefore it is only because the commodity is dual that the exchange can take place. The commodity and its owner recognize something of themselves in the
commodity they hope to gain from the buyer, something that
simultaneously brings buyer and seller together and repels
them from one another.

Whatsoever then he [man] removes out of the state that nature hath provided, and left it in, he hath mixed his labor with, and joined to it something
that is his own, and thereby makes it his property. 8

But Marx considers this account inaccurate. It is onlywhen
the division of labor takes place and the time for exchange
arrives that there is any question of ownership. Work is the
operation of creating use-values for one's own consumption .
It is hard to see how this gives the worker any right over either
the means of production or the product itself. For what does
right mean here? Rights only become meaningful when man
is alienated from man through exchange. With the division
oflabor, man allows himself to come into relations of dependence with other men, while simultaneously putting himself
at odds with them. For labor is the work performed with a view
to exchange. In order for this exchange to take place, there
must be some kind of ownership. This is when labor (not work)
becomes the hallmark of ownership. It is not simply by performing work that one makes something one's own. It is by
performing labor and bringing the fruits of that labor to market. But this is not the agency that brings about private property. Private property is simply the name we give to the means
of production and the commodity produced for the sake of
exchange.
Furthermore, the owner of private property is necessarily
alienated from that which he owns. For how is it thathe owns
it? He is said to own it only because there is an other. Private
property, then, is merely the material expression of the work
pei-formed for the other, or labor.

The quantitative division oflabor is brought about in exactly the same
spontaneous and accidental manner as its qualita~~e .division. The owners
of commodities therefore find out, that the same diVIs10n oflabor that turns
them into independent private producers, also frees the social proce.ss ?f
production and the relations of the individual producers to each otherwithm
that process, from all dependence on the will of those producers, and that
the seeming ~utual independence of the individuals is supplemented by a
system of general and mutual dep endence through or by means of the products. [C.I, p.109-rn]

The dependence brought about through the products is the
true state of affairs. The alienated products have a truly social
relationship with one another, while the producers simply tag
along. For what does it mean for men to have a social relationship? The two parties involved must be simultaneously
individuated and mutually dependent. The truly social relationship exists between the commodities first, and in the owners only after the fact. The producers come to market for the
sake of exchange, for the sake of the social relationship of their
commodities. Separated from their respective commodities,
the buyer and seller have no relationship at all. Their products are the result of alienated labor, labor brought forth into
the world as objective being-for-other, and hence have a life
entirely independent of the producer. The commodities are a
kind of Frankenstein, a creature created out of noble hopes,
but necessarily imbued with an independent existence which
inevitably must supersede the original intentions of its creator.
The Division of Labor and Private Property

So far we have considered only the simple barter exchange,
which arises out of the division ofl abor, and examined how
private property comes into being out of this same division.
We have shown the dialectical move from work-for-self to
work-for-other. With the division oflabor and the beginning
of exchange, which both bring about private property, all the
elements are in place for capitalist production. We must begin our investigation into capitalist production with ~n exa~i­
nation of the various kinds of exchange, and the dialectical
motion from one to the next, beginningwith barter, and ending with trade by means of money.
IV. Communism

[Communism] is the genuine resolution of the conflict between man and
nature and between man and man - the true resolution of the strife between
existence and essence, between objectification and self-confirmation, between freedom and necessity, between the individual and the species. Com-

The subjective essence of private property - private property as activity
for itself, as subject, as person - is labor. [EPM, p.128)7

Private property arises directly out of the division oflabor.

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munism is the riddle of history solved, and knows itself to be this solution .
[EPM, p .135]

country.
In these three modes of production we see how labor is divided. The property, or mode of ownership, associated with
each is identical to its particular way of dividing labor. Property, then, is simply the expression of how a particular organization of people, be it a family, state, or trade , divides the
labor involved in its mode of production. There is a further
division, however, between the owners of property on the one
hand, and the property-less workers on the other. In the ancient communal property of the state there are the slaves, acquired through conquest, and in the feudal system the serfs.
(The feudal system is somewhat more complex, as there are
two kinds of property and two kinds of workers , whereas in
the ancient communal system there is only one kind of property and one kind of worker.) Hence we have two kinds of antagonism existing in each system, the first in exchange, the
second between the owners of property and the property-less
workers. These are separate antagonisms , and they do not
intermingle, as exchange does not generally occur between
the classes, but rather between states or between the owners
of property. There is no real intercourse between them, and
hence the issue of property and the issue of exchange seem
completely separate.
The means of production in any given era are given by the
particular circumstances of those producing, as we saw in the
three modes of production outlined above. The mode of production is simply the way in which these means are used in
order to produce. This is identical with the division oflabor:
the mode of production is necessarily dual. It divides society
into two classes, the owners of property and the property-less
workers. The mode of production is the sum total of this relationship. It manifests itself as a class struggle between the two
groups.
Capitalist production begins with the appearance oflabor
as a commodity for sale on the market. The conditions that
bring labor to the market place have been set out elsewhere
in this essay, but they primarily consist in the decline of feudal agriculture and the flight of serfs to the cities, and the decline in the guild system due to improvements in technology
and growth of the small capital invested in manufacture. The
division oflabor in capitalist production exists between capitalists, who exchange with one another. Capitalism brings
with it private property, that is , property owned strictly by
individuals. In the feudal mode of production the owners of
particular kinds of property were allied with one another and
did not engage in exchange, for they all essentially produced
the same things; feudal lords almost exclusively produced
agricultural products, guilds produced different manufactured goods , and the two groups engaged in exchange as
groups . But capitalist production places individual capitalists
in competition with one another, as capitalist production can
take place in any industry and in any place. Thus the alliance
of property owners is broken.
With the advent of capitalist production the antagonisms
inherent in exchange and in property ownership which once
were separate become identical. The property-less worker in
the capitalist system sells his labor as a commodity, and in-

Thus farwe have given an account of production not in its
overall history, but within the dialectical process of the capitalist mode of production itself. There are actually two dialectical processes taking place simultaneously according to
Marx. The first is the inner dialectic of each particular mode
of production, which finds its roots in the individuals who
produce and the antagonisms implicit in their self-production. The second is the larger dialectic of world history, which
is made up of the serial progression of the modes of production as sweeping historical movements. Each new era in production brings with it a new kind of property, or with reference to the subject, a new mode of ownership.
Marx gives a brief sketch of this progression in The German Ideology. The first kind is tribal ownership, that arises
out of the hunting and gathering mode of production, which
included animal husbandry and farming on a small scale. The
division oflabor here is entirely in the family, and the tribe is
merely an extension of the family unit. Ownership here is communal in the sense that no particular individual holds title to
the land, animals, or other property; they are all owned in
common by the tribe, which is divided along familial lines.
These tribes eventually come into contact with one another, through trade or war. Because of mutual interest or by
means of conquest, they begin to consolidate into city-states.
With conquest come slaves, hence the mode of production
changes, and agriculture and large-scale construction become
possible. Also, commerce develops between states, and cities
become mercantile centers, with greater populations. The
slaves are the laboring class and the members of the conquering tribes, citizens, are the masters, with the state as the owner
of property. Property is still owned in common bythe citizens,
but now by means of the state rather than the family. Here we
see the first real separation of classes between citizens and
slaves. Also, the division of labor between states, brought
about by the natural resources available to each state and the
various industries indigenous to each, leads to commerce, and
hence antagonism, between states. 9
Feudal property arises not out of cities but rural areas. Marx
gives the decline of the Roman Empire as a possible reason
for the rise offeudalism. Commerce, which was made possible
bythevastreachoftheRomanEmpire,wasvirtuallydestroyed
by its fall, and in its place came large-scale farming of land
owned by local nobility. The laboring class consisted of the
local peasantry who became serfs, and farmed the land for the
feudal lords. In the towns, industry flourished in the form of
guilds, which consisted of small capitalists who employed
apprentices to ply their trades. This set up the opposition between town and country, as commerce between them was necessitated by the division oflabor implicit in the feudal mode
of production. Manufactured goods invariably came from the
cities, and were traded for agricultural goods from the country. The feudal system, then, created two kinds of ownership
out of its particular division oflabor: the small industrial capital of the cities, and the large land-based ownership of the

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tercourse between the owners of capital and workers begins.
They are both free individuals , coming together as equals in
exchange on the common market. But the laborer is not exactly property-less. Labor here is taken as a kind of private
property, something alienable. Since everyone owns private
property (now that labor is included as a kind of property),
the antagonism of ownership and non-ownership between the
classes seems to be resolved. Now the worker has a commodity he can sell, his labor, so all that remains is the antagonism
between the various producers of commodities, brought about
by the division oflabor and exchange.
Just because everyone now owns property, it does not mean
that everyone is a capitalist. To the contrary, only the owners
of property other than labor can be capitalists. Hence what
appears as an elimination of the class distinction between the
owners of property and the disenfranchised is actually the reinstatement of this same distinction in a different form. The
division oflabor is the true source of all divisions in society,
and exchange is the source of all antagonism. Once ownership is the right of an individual rather than a class , the division oflabor and exchange reveal themselves to be two sides
of the same coin. Thus the capitalist class is one of individuals engaged in antagonistic relationships of exchange. Their
mutual interests as a class are secondary to the desire of each
individual capitalist to expand his capital. The laboring class,
the proletariat, is engaged in an antagonistic relationship with
the capitalist class because there is exchange between them.
Labor, the production of use-values for the sake of exchange,
is divided amongst the capitalists, and they engage in exchange with the laborer as well as other capitalists .. Where
there is exchange, there is alienation , hence the capitalist is
alienated from both his fellow capitalists and the workers he
employs.
The free sale of labor is the first and most impor tant condition of capitalist production. The laborer and the capitalist
must meet in the open market, where " Freedom, Equality,
Property and Bentham " [C.I, p.172] rule. Capitalism depends
completely on the freedom and equality of the laborer and the
capitalist, as these are the fundamental conditions of any exchange. But so soon as the laborer leaves the market and follows the capitalist to his factory, his labor becomes, albeit only
for a stated amount of time , capital belonging to the capitalist. The laborer becomes property just like a slave or a serf,
but it is for a limited time , and rather than being placed against
his will in servitude, he went to the market willingly.
But this freedom is a sham, one that must be debunked if
we are to understand the true nature of capitalist production.
The laborer is not free; he finds himself forced to sell his labor by the conditions that surround him . The only other choice
is death; he sells his labor as the last possible way in which he
can sustain himself. The dialectic of the modes of production
has delivered him to this state. The laborer is no more free
than the slave delivered into servitude by his conquerors. He
is brought to that point by forces that are beyond his control.
The notion that a person can own himself as property, as something external and hence something that is within his control,
and by definition, alienable, is fundamentally untenable.

Capitalism, by placing property in the individual and not
the class, destroys the fortress that formerly safeguarded it. It
is the antagonism between capitalists that brings about the
final destruction of capitalist production. The opposition between the capitalist class and the proletariat is a product of
capitalist production, but it is not the cause of its downfall.
The proletariat need not destroy capitalism by force , as it dies
at its own hands. Capitalism relies on the laborer as a free individual, but this freedom is merely an idea, not an actuality.
Real freedom is the absence of material constraint on the lifeactivity of man. This is clearly not the kind of freedom that
the laborer has. His freedom is in name only.
Similarly, the capitalist is constrained by his material conditions. Capital by nature wishes to be expanded, and the capitalist is simply the human form of capital. He is as enslaved by
capital as the laborer is. He has even less freedom than the
laborer, as he is at odds with everyone and allied with no one.
He seeks only his own interest, which is obtained necessarily
at the expense of others in his class as well as the laborer. The
laborer has only one antagonist: capit al. There is no natural
source of antagonism within the proletariat as there is no exchange between them, because there is no division oflabor.
They labor only for the capitalist, and hence are able eventually to unite and see their common interests. The capitalist
class, by its very nature , can never do this ."
Marx calls communism the "positive transcendence of private property." [EPM, p.135] Private property is the kind of
property that arises out of the capitalist division oflabor, property owned by individuals. It places individuals in opposition
to one another. In the earlier modes of production tribes were
opposed to tribes, states to states, and classes to classes. Capital pits man against man directly, without recourse to some
unified structure to support his claim. The resolution of this
antagonism , of this estrangement, necessarily demands the
sublation of private property, the rendering of it into its opposite, social property.
This sublation puts the means of production that formerly
served capital in the hands of the proletariat. The means of
production determine the mode of production , which has
been up to this point antagonistic. By removing the concept
of individual ownership from production , com munism removes the class struggle completely. The mode of production
is simply the way in which the means of production are set in
motion in order to produce. When this is undertaken on asociallevel, the means of production are set in motion by society as a whole, not by some particular class. This is possible
only when society as a whole owns the means of production.
But the dialectical process is essential, as it makes the division oflabor an unnecessary division. The division oflabor
arose out of the inadequacy of the previous mode of production, but in capitalist production it eventually becomes its
opposite. It is rendered useless by the capitalist mode of production. Private property is the result of the division oflabor,
so the removal of the latter destroys the former. Capital,
through its accumulation, continually improves production
and systematically reduces the amount of labor and level of
skill required to produce commodities. It reduces all labor to
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essentially the same thing, and effectively turns the division
oflabor into its opposite. The division oflabor in capitalism
exists only between the various kinds of manufacture, which
are represented by individual capitalists. This division has no
meaning for the laborers.
The transcendence of private property consists in the birth
of social property. This can only take place when man recognizes himself as a species being, rather than an individual. Man
as species being sees nothing as alien from himself, but sees
all objects as objectifications of himself as a species being.

ties once enjoyed, and appropriates it for himself. He, as a
conscious beingwith a life-activity, work, recognizes himself
as species being. This is the end that communism, as the transcendence of private property, makes possible.
Man's life becomes an object for him, rather than his being himself an object of his life. That is, his life-activity is his
essentially, and is an end in itself, rather than the means to an
end. Once his life is his, the dialectic of antagonisms ends.
The key is the activity of man: the dialectic moves man by its
own forces, propelled by antagonisms that are the product of
something external, the material conditions of his life, which
are fundamentally beyond his control. His individual will is
powerless to overcome them. The recognition of the other (be
that man or nature) as identical with man, allows man to appropriate the activity for himself, and the seemingly external
activity of the dialectic becomes the self-propelled and selfcontrolled life-activity of man. This cannot, however, take
place on an individual level. It relies on the universal recognition of man as a species being. Communism is "the riddle
ofhistory solved" because it resolves all the antagonisms that
seem to be essential to human existence. By placing man's
essence in his species being rather than his individual existence, it removes all traces of otherness from the world.
The resolution of Marx's material dialectic is essentially
identical in form with Hegel's dialectic of consciousness. But
for Hegel, the end of dialectic lies in a certain kind of knowledge, rather than a certain way of being, or way of life.
Consciousness's knowledge of itself as Spirit, something over
and above itself of which it is an expression, is state of mind.
Species being is a mode of being in the world, which Marx sees
as the only possible mode of being. Being in the mind, or
knowledge, must necessarily be an expression ofbeing in the
world, not the other way around.
To the question "why a material dialectic?," Marx would
surely answer this: "Show me an idea that exists independently
in the world as a force that moves men, and I will give up my
material dialectic. " The argument for a material dialectic is
clearly an argument of the whole, and is made from experience. The world is made up of objects, and objects are moved
by other objects, not by invisible forces of the mind. Man's
conscious being only reveals itselfwhen he is engagedin some
kind of activity, or being in the world. Hence the notion that
his ideas are independent of this being, or that the world is a
product of these ideas, is es sen ti ally backward. Man becomes
conscious through activity, and through his activity he makes
the world around him. His activity is not a result of his consciousness, his consciousness is the result of his activity.
Ifwe set out from the premise that man first and foremost
exists in the world, and thence proceed to his consciousness
of his existence as a means by which he perpetuates his existence, we fully understand the material dialectic and its primacy over the dialectic ofideas. This , Marx argues, is the correct understanding of the history of the world, and the only
means by which we can realize the ultimate goal of the human
species. Idealism, for all its attractions , fails to address the
fundamental question ofhuman existence, man's beingin the
world, because it places his being elsewhere than in the world.

[M]an is not lost in his object only when the object becomes for him a
human object or objective man. This is possible only when the object be-

comes for him a social'~ object, he himself for himself a social being, just as
society becomes a being for him in this object. [EPM, p.r40)

Man becomes an object for himselfbynegatingthe reality
of the objects outside himself as something alien, and hence
independent of him. By so doing he appropriates the objects
as expressions of himself as man. This can only take place on
a social level, that is, on the level of common recognition of
all men as social beings, or species beings. The true inner
equality of man lies in the common condition of all men, that
of work. The recognition of this equality takes place through
the destruction of the division of labor as a qualitative division. Commodities long ago realized that they were all expressions of the same social substance, human labor. There is no
alienation between commodities, only between the producers of commodities, for the commodities, as commodities, are
aware of nothing in themselves other than the labor invested
in them. This is how exchange is possible. Man must recognize himself and other men in the same manner, as being
qualitatively the same, and hence equal and unified. Exchange
brings alienation only because the producers of commodities
see their labor, and thus their products, as something alien
from themselves, and see themselves as separated from other
men, with whom they necessarily exchange, by the qualita-tive difference between their commodities.
This alienation disappears when man ceases to produce for
another individual and commences production for all of society. This is not a backwards motion to the prehistoric state in
which man worked only for himself; it is aprogressive motion
towards a new state, in which man works for society, with
which he sees himself to be identical. The common social substance, work, becomes a unifier of men, rather than of commodities. The laborer, by producing himself as a commodity,
learns well the lesson that commodity production teaches:
that all commodities are essentially the same with respect to
other men. By becoming a commodity himself, man recognizes the essential equality of himself as a working being. This
is why it is the proletariat that becomes the ruling class. They
unlock the secret of human equality through having found
themselves made essentially equal (albeit against their will)
by capital. The dialectical motion from work-for-self to workfor-other thus completes its elfin work-for-self, where the self
is taken as a species being.
Man thus enters into the social relationship that com modi-

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I The C in my notation refers to Capital. The roman numeral following it refers to the volume number.
2. "The family is the association created by nature for the
supply of men's everyday wants .... " Politics, I252b I3-I4.
3 An Inqui:r:yinto the Nature and Causes of the Wealth of
Nations, Vol. I, Book I, Chapter I, Adam Smith.
4 That is, for commodities to have universal meaning, as
they do in exchange, they must have a language. Note here
the resemblance to Hegel's description of language: '' Language is self-consciousness existingfor others, self-consciousness which as such is immediatelypresent, and as this self consciousness is universal." [PS, § 652] It is also interesting to
note that this description comes in the context of morality.
What is consciousness trying to bring into the world of objective existence through language? Its inner worth, or value.
So the exchange value of a commodity is actually the commodity existing as a universal, or for another.
5 This is the true beginning of the "mine and thine" that
so embittered Rousseau. Private property begins with the division of labor and the birth of self-interest in opposition to

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�other men. This is perhaps the force of Rousseau's distinction between amour-propre and amour de soi-me me. The
former he sees as a product of society, while the latter is but
an expression of the instinct for survival.
6 There is a kind of community of commodities, they have
a truly social relationship. That is, they recognize themselves
as identical with one another as values. There is no alienation
between commodities, only between their producers. Commodities are social in the sense of being of the same social
substance, human labor. The social relationship between producers is a reflection of this, but necessarily different. The
attraction and mutual recognition of commodities leads to
repulsion and mutual alienation between the producers.
7 The EPM in my notation refers to The Economic &amp; Philosophic Manuscripts of1844 .
8 Second Treatise on Government, Chapter V, John Locke.
g In Section II of this essay we saw that wherever there is
division oflabor, there is exchange, and wherever there is
exchange, there is antagonism. (The exception to this is the
family, where there is no real exchange.)
10 This raises an interesting question about The Communist Manifesto. What is it if not a call to action on the part of
the proletariat? The rhetoric of the Manifesto seems to contradict the notion that the dialectic will be the primary cause
of the end of the antagonistic mode of production. Marx's use
of rhetoric elsewhere is similarly troubling. What place could
rhetoric possibly have in dialectical philosophy?
11 This is parallel to the Lord and the Bondsman in Hegel.
The double alienation of the bondsman from his lord and the
object he makes for his lord leads the bondsman to find new
certainty in himself through his activity and progress dialectically. The lord, because he has no activity other than pure
negation of the objects the bondsman produces, from which
he is alienated, cannot progress, and his consciousness plateaus. The fundamental difference between Hegel's account
of this stage of consciousness and Marx's account of the laborer is also revealing; for the bondsman in Hegel, the next
stage is stoicism, certainty in oneself and indifference to the
outside world. For the laborer in Marx, this change in consciousness must be manifested in the world if it is to have legitimacy. It must take the form of a demand for changes in
the conditions of his life.
12 It is clear that by social Marx does not mean here the
society of individuals as alienated from one another by exchange, which is the sense in which this word was used earlier
in the essaywith reference to man in society. He clearly means
social in the sense that commodities are social; they recognize their mutual identity as expressions of a common substance, human labor.

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�The Tension BetweenMercy and Justice in
Shakespeare's Measure for Measure

*

Heidi Jacot

William Shakespeare's Measure for Measure is a study of
the uneasy tension between the principles of justice and mercy
in government. The theme is debated by the play' s main characters. It appears in the conflict between public and private
duty, and is raised as a struggle between two competing systems: divine justice and earthly justice. The tension between
mercy and justice is most visible in Isabella as she fights within
herself to find compassion in her heart for the man she hates
above all, whose very life is placed into her hands.
If there is one crucial moment in Measure for Measure, it is undoubtedly the moment of Isabella's indecision,
when, struggling between Mariana's pleas, she shows mercy
and her own desire for revenge, standing silently before
Angelo. In this moment, the play hovers between comedy and
tragedywith Isabella's soul in the balance. She is being tested
by the Duke, whose enigmatic speech urges her first to show
mercy and then to exact revenge:

Then, Angelo , thy fault's thus manifested;
Which, though thou wouldst deny, denies thee vantage.
We do condemn thee to the very block
Where Claudio stooped to death , and with like haste.
V.r.461-5

Perhaps Isabella is brought up short by this blunt comparison. She does not speak; instead, Mariana and the Duke alternately beseech and goad her on, and Isabella is swayed from
one side to the other. Although the Duke speaks sharply, his
purpose is still to test Isabella, hoping that she will rise above
her instincts and ask for Angelo's pardon. It is less of a test of
Isabella than/or her. For Isabella stands in danger of being
consumed by self-righteous anger and a desire for revengeby the inhuman coldness with which she had accused Angelo.
When put to the test, Isabella finds it hard to give
mercy, although h er pleas on behalf of her brother to Angelo
in the second act are among the most eloquent and moving
lines in the whole play. This woman , a novitiate from the convent, who stands in our minds as the representative of divine
mercyin the play, has another side to her as well- one that is
less forgiving. Pushed to her breaking point by Angelo's lascivious demands and her brother's cowardice, which makes
him willing to sacrifice her honor for the shred oflife, Isabella
at one point cried out against the brother she sought to save:

For this new-married man, approaching here,
Whose salt imagination yet h ath wronged
Your well-defended honor, you must pardon
For Mariana's sake.
.i-449-521

Here he brings out her "imagination," her "well-defended
honor," and her friendship with Mariana as grounds for
mercy. However, the tone changes as his speech continues:

0 fie ,fie,fie !
Thy sin's not accidental but a trade
Mercy to thee would prove itself a bawd:
'Tis b est that thou diest quickly.

But as he adjudged your brotherBeing criminal, in double vision
Of sacred chastity and of promise-breach
Thereon depende nt- for your broth er's life
The very mercy of the law cries out
Most audible, even from his proper tongue,
"An Angelo for Claudio, death for death!
Haste still pays haste, and leisure answers leisure;
Like doth quit like, and Measure still for Measure .
V.i-452-60

III.i.156-73

In this moment, Isabella sees such foulness in her brother
that she claims that mercy itself would act like a procurer to
help him on to further evils. This is the same Isabella who , in
her rage at Angelo's treachery (the broken promise of pardon
for Claudio's life), says in fury, "O, I will to him and pluck out
his eyes!" (IV.iii. n9 ). Her experiences in the world have
brought her a long way from the convent and her idyllic vision of "fasting maids whose minds are dedicate/ To nothing
temporal," (Il ,ii ,189-90 ). Before the Duke in the last scene,
she cries out against Angelo, calling for "justice, justice, justice, justice! " (V.i.28). The invectives she hurls publicly
against Angelo are some of the most severe in the play. How
does this passionate, vengeful fury we see in Isabella, the
young novitiate, fit with what we saw in her earlier appeals to
Angelo to show divine mercy? This is the same woman who
movingly pleaded with Angelo:

It is as if these words are Isabella's own thoughts, swinging
between pity and anger. There is a curious line here: what
does he mean by " the very mercy of the law" which demands
Angelo's death in recompense? The word "mercy" is surprising in this context-we usually think of mercy as a departure
from the letter of the law, not the fulfillment - but perhaps
the Duke intends for it to ring in Isabella's ears. The conclusion of the speech goes beyond the righteous feeling of" death
for death," it focuses on the parallel between Angelo and
Claudio in order to bring out Isabella's empathy:

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her appeal that lecheryis, after all, a common sin , Angelo suddenly turns on her with the full force of his righteous anger
blazing:

... How would you be
If He, which is the top of judgement, should
But judge you as you are? 0, think on that,
And mercy then will breathe within your lips
Like man new made.
II.ii.97-IOI

The law hath not been dead, though it hath slept ...
Isabella : Yet show some pity.
Angelo: I show it most of all wh en I show justice;
For then I pity those I do not know,
Which a dismissed offense would rather gall;
And do him right that answering one foul wrong,
Lives not to act another. Be satisfied.
Your brother dies tomorrow; be content.

How can we understand this disparity in Isabella's character which shows itself in such vindictive extremes and tender
appeals?
Let us look, though , at those appeals in Act II scene ii. We
usually think of mercy being invoked because of extenuating
circumstances, corning from the consideration of the particulars of the individual case. In the case of Claudio, Isabella
could have pleaded his engagement (a legallyrecognized precontract no less) , and intention to marry Juliet, hampered only
by lack of money. She begins, however:

II.ii. n5-32

It is a weak conclusion to such a powerful speech. He has
lost the force of his argument and tries awkwardly to cover
over the brutality of his own anger by telling her to take comfort . But where Angelo breaks down , Isabella gains strength,
and she comes back at him (provoked by his insufferable arrogance) in a tone of contempt:

There is a vice that most 1 do abhor
And most desire should m eet the blow of justice;
For which I would not plead but that I must;
For which I must not plead but that I am
At war ' twixt will and will not.

So you must be the first that gives this se ntence ,
And he that suffers ...
Could great men thunder
As, Jove himself does, Jov e wo uld ne'er be quiet,
Forever pelting, petty officer
Would use his heaven for thunder,
Nothing but thunder!
... but man , proud man,
Dressed in a little brief a uth ority,
Most ignorant of what he's most ass ured ,
His glassy essence, like an angry ape
Plays such fant astic tricks before high Heave n
As, makes the angels we ep ...
II .ii .133-50

II.ii-40-4

This speech of Isabella' s comes out sounding simply
garbled: She is forced to plead to save her brother-although
it comes in conflict with her natural inclination and sense of
duty- so that she is at war between will and will not. It is neither a defense for Claudio nor a passionate appeal to show
mercy. In fact, when Angelo argues with her about the justice
of Claudio 's sentence, Isabella agree s with him , " O just but
severe law!/ I had a brother , then " (Il.ii.55-6) , and prepares
to go! She acknowledges th e claims oflaw on her brother' s
life , and, h aving don e her duty in asking for his pardon, is
ready t o relinquish. There is something chilling in the absolute detachment of, "I had a brother, then," she r eally does
con sider herself as part of the convent and divorced from life
and its "earthly concerns" already.
But Lucio will not let her give in so easily, and under
his insistence she returns to Angelo. She presses him with
unsetding questions. Backed into a corner by his own contradictory statements, he tries to send her away (ll.ii.85). But
Isabella is not to be gotten rid of easily. This seemingly callous dismissal from Angelo has needled her. I hear her response, a kind of "I would I were you," coming out of long
pent-up frustration at a woman 's dependent and submissive
role. In this speech we see Isabella genuinely affected and
reacting from the inside, shaking off the demure and reverential character she has assumed. It is not furious, but it is a
passionate statement about herself and I think that it is this
that catches and fixes Angelo's attention :

Ratherthan appealing to ahigher law than man ' s, Isabella
attacks human justice itself. Her criticism of the pretensions
of man are less reflections on law and government than arrows aim ed at Angelo' s pride and self-righteous attitude. As
we have seen, h er first speeches (delivered in cooler blood)
show a reverence for and acceptan ce of the jurisdiction of
hu man law. It is her interaction with Angelo that leads her
further and further into making ardent statements which h ave
the sound of religious conviction. Righteousness meets righteousness: Isabella reacts to Angelo's disdainful coldness and
arrogance; Angelo is driven to extremes by her attack on him,
on law, but mostly on his authority which rests uneasily on
his shoulders. When we look at her speeches and how this
first scene between them unfolds, we see that Isabella speaks
less out of conviction than in response to him - impulsively.
We might not be so surprised to find her behavior inconsistent with her statements. Perhaps now we have a better understanding of her character an d why it turns out to be so diffic ult for her to p ut these petitions for mercy into practice in
her own life.
For Isabella it is an effo rt to forgive. Isabella needs
to learn t o let go: she is holding herself so tightly. She shares
with Angelo a fierce pride and love of absolutes , grand-sweeping gestures , and high principles; which is preciselywhythey
feed off one-another in their arguments. Having so much in

I would to heave n l had yo ur Potency
And you we re Isabel! Sho uld it th en be thu s?
No, I would tell what ' twe re to be a judge
And what a prisoner.

II .ii.86-9
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�Perhaps Isabella's mild plea for mercy at the end of
the play is a mark of wisdom her character has come to in the
play. More experienced, less fantastically idealistic, she has
learned to plead within the framework of human justice, and
to consider the case as that of an individual, rather than as an
abstract matter: a fault to which both Angelo and she are
prone.
It is a triumph for Isabella to have overcome the
strong temptation to take revenge, and she is now rewarded
with the "heavenly comforts of despair/ When it is least expected" that the Duke promised: Claudio returns, seemingly
from the dead, and is joyfully reunited with his sister!

Most bounteous sir,
Look, if it please you, on this man condemned
AB if my brother lived. I partly think
A due sincerity governed his deeds,
Till he did look on me . Since it is so,
Let him not die. My brother had but justice,
In that he did the thing for which he died.
For Angelo,
His act did not o' ertake his bad intent,
And must be buried as an intent
That perished by the way. Thoughts are no subjects,
Intents but merely thoughts.
V.i.500-10

In contrast to her impassioned speeches to Angelo for
mercy earlier, this plea sounds somewhat grudging, on conditional te ms rather than on principle. The argument has
been "ari Angelo for Claudio, death for death," and Isabella
recasts it in terms oflaw again: Claudio died for committing
the act of adultery, but "for Angelo," (and there is a heavy
pause here in the text), he has not, in fact, taken her maidenhood and stands not condemned under the law's sentence. For
mercy, this sounds very much like justice. If itis mercy-pardoning what the law condemns- it must be because justice
does not demand intent be dismissed as "merely thoughts"
and excused. We might have hoped her petition here would
have been in a more lofty vein - some grand redeeming gesture ofloving compassion. Instead, what Shakespeare gives
us, is a much more human Isabella. We see what a great effort
is required on her part to even bring her so far. In part, such
great gestures which paint life in high principles, black or
white, have been brought into critical scrutiny in Angelo's
character.

noble and princely, Barnadine seems to be little more than an
animal. Their pairing is especially meaningful because
throughout the play, Shakespeare has been raising a question
in the comparison of murder and begetting bastards, children
born out of wedlock. Angelo is the first to put these crimes
side by side when he says (half to Isabella, half to himself):

But despite the affirmation in the last scene of the
play of the prevailing power oflove shown in mercy, this scene
is characterized not by mercy, but by justice! Angelo himself
begs nothing more than justice according to the law: "I crave
death more willingly than mercy:/ 'Tis my deserving and I do
entreat it" (V.i.537-8). He stands by his vow made earlier to
Es cal us (although little thinking at the time that his sin would
be Claudio's), "When I, that censure him, do so offend,/ Let
mine own judgement pattern out my death,/ And nothing
come in partial" (Il.ii.3I-3). But Angelo is not to be let off so
lightly. He longs indeed for death to bury the shame and selfloathing that has become interminable to him . Instead, he is
"punished" with life, the heavier burden for him to bear.
The Duke measures Angelo not by justice according
to the laws of the land, but with dramatic justice- which punishes and rewards, in exact and appropriate measure, good
and evil in proportion to the character's actions. Angelo has
not killed Claudio, he shall not die either. He has wronged
Mariana's honor, he must restore than honor by taking her
now in marriage. In so determining, the Duke also rewards
Mariana with her due , honor for dishonor, the fulfillment of
her wish for marriage in return for her years of sorrow at
Angelo's rejection. The plays supporting characters also receive their desserts. To Escalus the Duke gives "thanks ... for
thy much goodness ," and promises more to come , "that is
more gratulate": that is , rewards for his faithful service
(V.i. 592-3). The Provost, although first arraigned for his disobedience to the deputy is released for his loyalty to the Duke
and also thanked. Claudio is given his due as well . "She ... that
you wronged, lookyourestore." (V.i.598) . Everything seems
to be tidily concluded: the Duke returns and reassumes his
rightful place, and Angelo is exposed and forced to make
amends. Yet there is one man at the end of the play who does
not get what he deserves ...
Barnadine- a prisoner of nine years, a murderer,
perpetually drunken and surly, who was to share Claudio's
fate. He is introduced to us first by the Provost:

common with the temperament of Angelo, she too stands in
danger of sharing his fate: self-loathing and self-control taken
to such extremes that natural longings finally break through
violently, destroying the last threads of moral conscience. To
feel self-righteous is a pleasant satisfaction, but pride is no
more a source ofhappiness than it is of power - Isabella must
learn to forgive out of compassion or, nourished by her anger, she will shrivel away.
That she does, in that moment of struggle, finally go
down upon her knees on Angelo's behalf, is a singing triumph
of the power of mercy and love in the play. Swayed one way
and then the other, she is caught and held by the sudden similarity she sees between Angelo and her brother (whom she
believes dead), and by what she sees in Mariana. When she
joins Mariana on the ground to beg Angelo's pardon, it is not
because of Mariana's offers to lend Isabella all her life to do
her service, or even out oflove for Mariana, but because she
begins to see -as if from far off- the unfathomable depths of
Mariana's love for this man. Looking at Angelo again and
wondering what must be in this man that he can be so loved,
perhaps simply struck by the intensity of love a woman can
feel for a man; drawn toward what she barely knows, Isabella
make the choice to extend forgiveness to the man who forced
her to search into her deepest fears and sense of shame. Haltingly, she begins:

And he intends to punish lechery as severely as murder:
with beheading. To Angelo the crimes are one and the same.
Isabella's reply to this is "'Tis set down so in Heaven, but not
in earth" (Il.iv.55) . In the eyes of God both sins are equally
grievous, but on earth, lechery is given more leeway. Again
and again it is said in the play, by Lucio, by the Provost, that
Claudio is a man "more fit to do another such offense/ Than
to die for this" (II.iii.I5-I6), while for Bamadine there is only
the disgust his crimes and dissolute life have earned him. He
is regarded by the Duke and Provost in Act IV as something
dispensable, a substitute whose head might be used in place
of Claudio's. The coupling ofBarnadine' s fate with Claudio's
has the effect of making us ask: is adultery a crime? And , if
so, is it as great a crime as murder? Only Angelo stands behind the state's old laws which demand death as penalty. The
opinion among the play' s characters, however, seems to swing
in favor of answering no. Dramatic justice demands the taking of Barnadine's life since he , unrepentantly, took
another's. But Bernadine does not die. Instead, the Duke has
Barnadine secreted awaywith Claudio, and offers free pardon
to him when he is brought into the Duke's presence at the end
of the play. How can it be just, by law or by deserving, to set
this unrepentant murderer free? Why does the Duke release
him?
To answer why the Duke rescinds his policy of justice
according to desert, releasing Barnadine, we must look back
at his experiences as a friar , in disguise, and how they have
changed him. In this role he faced and began to come to terms
with his fears, his inadequacy, his moral incertitude, and to
reach a new level of understanding of the church and tl;ie place
ofGodin the world of men.
Seeing the degeneracy of Vienna, the Duke has decided, before the play opens, that the old, stern laws, which
during his rule he has let slide, must be reawakened. He thinks
it will be perceived as tyrannous though, if he, who had given
vice tacit permission by failing to punish it, were now to unleash strict Justice. Instead, he resolves to leave Angelo to
reinstitute the laws in his place, since he "may, in the ambush
of my name, strike home, I And yet my nature never in the
fight I To do it slander" (I.iii .44-6 ).
Is it a brillant political stroke? Or is it overly optimistic to think that the people will not turn against him when
he returns? Perhaps they would be angry if he suddenly be-

Call hither Barnadine and Claudio:
Th' one has my pity; not a jot the other,
Being a murderer, though he were my brother.
IV.ii.60-2

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gan to enforce the laws, but will they be any happier when he
returns and picks up where Angelo has left off? He merely
delays the effect. It might, in fact, be worse if the people had
been looking forward to his return to end the "oppression,"
only to find him in support of the new regime. My sense is
that the Duke thinks thepeoplewillresentareinstatement of
the law from him, having let them get so out ofline, but that
they will be surprised, rather than angry, at Angelo because
he has no such expectation to maintain. I also suspect that
the Duke is not thinking of these ''strict" laws in the particular-that he never intended for Angelo to put anyone to death.
Angelo is to him a trial case, a figure of his own creation, not
a ruler in his own right. Is this shifting of duty admirable? ~
a ruler, perhaps his plan makes good pragmatic sense, but
however astute a political maneuver it may be, how can we
respect a man who loads the blame on another's shoulders and
walks away? The fact that the Duke is telling his reasons for
leaving the state in Angelo's hands to Friar Thomas,
unashamedly, leads me to think he does not consider what he
is doing and his reasons for it as such a bad thing. We the
audience, however, have that friar's observatioon, "ltrested
in your Grace I To unloose this tied-up justice when you
pleased ... " which I tend to read as the voice of the play casting a doubtful shadow on the Duke's behavior at this point. It
is difficult to justify.
On the other hand, in a certain regard, it does seem
like the perfect plan. The Duke is freed from a duty which is
distasteful to him, and the job is put into the hands of Angeloa man of spotless reputation, free from the taint of hypocrisy
or blame, who embraces the task ofreinstating the laws willingly. At the same time, this gives the Duke an opportunity
to test Angelo himself and see "if power change purpose" is
in him (l.iii.56-7). What is more, though conceived of the necessity ofreestablishingthe laws, the Duke is not entirely sure
of his plan (after all, he has not ruled this way in fourteen
years). Through a substitution he gets to observe, from the
outside and at the ground level, what such a system would be
like. With this end in mind the Duke disguises himself, choosing the habit of a friar. It is for this purpose he has come to
ask Friar Thomas' assistance in Act I scene iii:

. . .It were as good
To pardon him that hath from nature stol'n
A man already made as to remit
Their saucy sweetness that do coin Heaven's image
In stamps that are forbid.
(II.iv-47-51)

...to behold his sway
I will, as 'twere a brother of your order,
Visit both prince and people: therefore, I prithee,
Supply me with the habit and instruct me
How I may formally in person bear
Like a true friar
I.iii-46-51

Here it is apparent from his words that the Duke believes
that as a friar he can "visit both prince and people," that that
character is somehow outside the political sphere, neither
ruler nor ruled. But as Lucio , more wisely than he knows, remarks, "Cucullus non facit monachum,": a cowl does not
make a monk (V.i. 298), and the Duke finds the role to be more
demanding than he had expected. His treatment of Pompey,
whom he meets being led off to prison in chains, shows him
still reacting more like the duke he isthan the friar he is pre-

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�ii
persuasion.
Duke: But hearyouBarnadine: Not a word! If you have anything to say to me,
come to my ward; for thence will not I today.

tending to be:
Duke: Fie, sirrah! a bawd, a wicked bawd!
The evil that thou causest to be done ,
That is thy means to live. Do thou but think
What 'tis to cram thy maw or cloth thy back
From such a !lithy vice ...
Canst thou believe thy living is a life,
So stinkingly depending? Go mend, go mend.
Pompey: Indeed, it does stink in some sort, sir; but yet, sir,
I would proveDuke: Nay, if the Devil hath given thee proofs for sin,
Thou wilt prove his. Take him to prison, officer.
Correction and institution must both work
Ere this rude beast will profit.

IV.w-49-63

The Duke is absolutely stymied! Barnadine he finds "unfit to live or die" (IV.iii.64) , and he cannot bring himself to
order his execution. Perhaps the Duke is a somewhat squeamish who prefers "the life removed" and theory to practice,
but I think that there is something that he sees in Barnadine
which makes him unable to carry out the sentence of death
upon him. It is not that he suddenly perceives something
noble in Barnadine's life to make it worth preserving, butthe
opposite. Barnadine's life bespeaks intemperance and brutality. He has shown himself to be more of an animal than a
man. He has wasted away, idle , in prison these nine years , a
social outcast neither harming nor benefitting his fellow man.
If Barnadine were to die now, what could be said about his
life? Is man no more than this? The horror he feels in this
reflection makes it impossible for the Duke to give the order
to end this life and so conclude the story. Moreover, the same
concern which he showed in this instance that Claudio be persuaded to be reconciled to death cries out against the beheading ofBarnadine in his drunken stupor.
Yet, as a Duke, it is his reponsibility to see that the
law and the punishment of criminals are carried out-and in
this particular case, it is necessary if his own plot is to work.
Helpless, in disgust, he gives the order for Barnadine's death ,
but confesses to the Provost that Barnadine is "a creature unprepared, unmeet for death; I And to transport him in the
mind he is I Were damnable" (IV.iii .68-70). Here, and for
the first time, the Duke shows some concern for the state of
his own soul-and doubt in himself.
From this predicament, the Duke is saved, not by his
own cleverness, but by the hand of God. "Here in the prison,"
the Provost reveals, "there died this morning of a cruel fever
I One Ragozine, a most notorious pirate, I Aman of Claudio's
years, his beard and hair just of his color ... " "O, 'tis an accident that Heaven provides!" the Duke exclaims (IV.iii .70-8).
God has provided a ram caught in the thicket to be offered in
place of the son whom it would be a sin to kill.
The experiences of the Duke in disguise are for him,
life-changing. In diguise , the Duke has watched Angelo strip
off his virtuous " seeming" ; in disguise he has been startled
by Juliet and has fallen in love with Isabella. He has seen the
inadequacy of "reason"to persuade Claudio, and its complete
and utter failure before a man like Barnadine. He has heard
his own character abused by Lucio (and had to struggle to hold
his temper). He has been confronted by th e frustration of
wanting to act, and the conflict between acting as a man of
state and a man of God. His understanding of what it is to be
a ruler, in the end, is expanded to include the religious. His
images ofleadership now include both the sacred and the secular. To Isabella he says:

III.ii.20-35

There he speaks as a ruler, as one who must think of the
general welfare and public safety, not as a priest for whom the
individual soul is of primary importance. Would a friar advocate "correction and instrcution" in prison for the well-being of Pompey's immortal soul? The Duke shows in his language he considers Pompey even less than a man with an immortal soul, for he is a "rude beast," incapable of responding
to anything but physical punishment and reward. It is worth
taking a moment to recall that this violent rebuke of Pompey
for being a bawd comes almost immediently after the Duke
arranges with Isabella Mariana's secret tryst with Angelo. Is
it possible that some of the abuse the Duke hurls on Pompey
comes out of a secret disgust with himself? He is not as unlike Pompey as he would like to think.
The real moment of change, when the Duke begins
to grasp both the inseparable connection between political
and spiritual matters and at the same time his own incompleteness and inadequecy, is in his encounter with Barnadine in
prison. Taken by surprise by Angelo's double-dealing treachery which will deny Claudio life through the forfeit that has
been paid in a maid's dishonor, the Duke has to quickly come
up with another plan to save Claudio's head. A substitute must
be found for Claudio as there was for Isabella. And why not
Barnadine? Barnadine, who has been proven guilty beyond
doubt, and who openly confesses his crime without penitence;
Barnadine who is sentenced to die the same day-might his
head not be struck off early and be sent to Angelo in Claudio ' s
stead? "Call your executioner," the Duke tells the Provost,
"and off with Barnadine's head. I will give him present shrift
and advise him for a better place" (IV.ii.221-23). But
Barnadine proves to be more of a challenge: he will not consent to die! Dragged, half drunk from his prison cell, he refuses to listen to the Duke's prepared speeches and sanctimonious words:
Dulce: Sir induced by my charity, and hearing how hastily
you are to depart, I am come to advise you, comfort you,
and pray with you.
Barnadine: Friar, not I: I have been drinking hard all night,
I will have more time to prepare me, or they shall beat
out my brains with billets. I will not consent to die this day,
that's certain .
Dulce: O sir, you must: and therefore I beseech you,
Look forward on the journey you shall go.
Barna dine: I swear I will not die today for any man 's

Come hither, Isabel.

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mercy as they hope for grace. Sexual offense, the play has
impl1ed, is less grave than murder, but the Duke's pardoning
ofBarnadine goes beyond even this distinction: all crime, even
crime as grievous as murder, can be forgiven. Punishment
now in the Duke's realm is to be instruction , not by blows,
but by spiritual counsel. With Barnadine's judgment, the play
is raised beyond the narrow margins of justice by the Duke's
visions of commonality, and therefore sympathy, among all
men.
It is an inspiring moment, but unfortuneately, this is no
way to rule a kingdom. Law has been and will be created to
protect a stable society from the ravages of crime bred by greed
and unchecked license. If one wishes to pardon all offenses ,
one would have to live secluded from the world or die its vic6m. There must be a balance in the state between justice and
mercy, although this seems to be against the spirit of
Matthew' s writing. Shakespeare recognizes and brings out
the tension between political and private duty. How can you
be arulerwho must judge and enforce lawagainstyourfellow
man, and yet obey the spiritual injunction t o forgive as you
yourself hope for forgiveness from God?
In some ways Angelo is a better ruler because he
knows this, and makes a careful distinction between what is
public and what is private. Nowhere is this more apparent
than in the example he gives Escalus of a jury passing judgment who "may in the sworn twelve have a thief or two I
Guiltier than him they try." This is the basis of his conception
oflawandits proper use: "What's open made to justice, /That
justice seizes. What knows the laws I That thieves do pass on
thieves?" (Il.i.23-5). Justice (which for Angelo means carrying out the penalty of the law) concerns itself only with what
is made public; private causes or sympathies are not to be
urged for they are irrelevant for this understanding of government. Although he claims concern for the good of the polity,
discouraging crime by invoking harsh penalties, it seems to
me that Angelo has essentially two motives in wanting to see
justice served. The first is simply a love of rules and stricture
which shows reverence for the law as a thing in itself: because
a man has broken the law, he will p ay the penalty directed by
that law (not from any consideration of what that penalty is,
but solely because it is handed down by tradition); the second
is a natural desire for reciprocity, to insure that he who injures aniother is hurt in equal measure. Angelo blends both
of these motives to see justice wrought: a strong motive of
vengeance which he cloaks (even withoutknowingithimself)
in the objective , political garb of doing his duty as a deputy of
the state.
To a certain extent, Angelo' s attitude towards justice
does make him a good ruler, since he respects the law and
makes it his primary concern to see it carried out. He neither
expects nor considers any exceptions on personal grounds;
he understands his position and accepts the responsibility
alone for his decisions, keeping the distinction between public and private. His view is pragmatic. I find his argument for
the justice of Claudio's sentence according to the law strong
and convincing. At the same time, how can we help but be
aware of how Angelo (untried, ignorant and unforgiving of

Your friar is now your prince.
Advertising and holy to your business,
Not changing heart with habit, I am still
Attorney to your service.
V.i-426-31

What he has gained from his experiences is a new respect
for religious concerns and for the providence of God in the
political realm. The roles of friar and ruler have become
blurred. What the Duke has learned reflexing upon the example of Angelo is this:
He who the sword of Heaven will bear
Should he as holy as severe;
Pattern in himself to know,
Grace to stand, and virtue go;
More nor less to others paying
Than by self-offenses weighing.
III.ii.265-70

Here the Duke is saying the ruler ought not to punish
"more nor less" than what he finds within his conscience.
This is diametrically opposed to Angelo, who casually accepted that, often, "the jury... I May in the sworn twelve have
a thief or two I Guiltier than him they try" (Il.i.20-23).
Affected by this reflexion, (perhaps having gained newwisdom into the common ality of man, or perhaps moved by
Isabella's plea for Angelo) when Barnadine is led before him
in the final scene, the Duke addresses him thus:
Sirrah, thou art said to have a stubborn soul
That apprehends no furth er than this world
And squarest thy life accordingly. Thou ' rt condemned:
But, for those earthly faults , I quit them all;
And pray thee take this mercy to provide
For better times to come. Friar, advise him ;
I leave him to your hand.
V.i .542-58

Ifhe is condemned, it is by Heaven , for the Duke will not
presume to pass judgment upon Barnadine for his earthly
crimes. Not to the correction of a prison cell where he once
sent Pompey, but to the care of a friar the Duke now commits
this man who had been proclaimed, "careless , reckless , and
fearless of what's past, present or to come ; insensible of mortality, and desperately mortal" (IV.ii.157-9 ). In light of this
example of mercy, I believe the intention of the Duke's
speech, "He who the sword of Heaven will bear ," is not that
one ought to take care to be spotless in virtue, but, (coupled
with the telling example of Angelo's fall) that no man can hope
to attain such freedom from imperfections, and that we are
bound accordingly to use the utmost mercy. The title phrase
" Measure for Measure," (which appears in the Duke's speech
to Isabella in Act V, inciting her to take revenge on Angelo as
he has killed her brother ) comes from the Sermon on the
Mount in Matthew-and the meaning there is not to justifythe
Mosaic law, " An eye for an eye; a tooth for a tooth ." Quite the
opposite: Jesus in Matthew's account says to the crowds, "If
you want to avoid judgment, stop passing judgment. Your
measure will be used to measure you" (Matthew r1-2) 2 • To
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�his own humanity) is setting himselfup for a fall?
Against Angelo's uncompromising reliance on the
law stand Isabella and Escalus, who try to persuade Angelo to
mercy by appealing to conscience. They ask him to regard
the situation as if he stood under the judgment of Heaven
rather than think of himself as the dispenser of justice on
earth. In contrast to the earthly justice Angelo represents ,
Isabella and Escalus urge a kind of divine justice which differs in two respects: r) the judge himself is judged, " and wilt
thou say to thy brother, Let me pull out the mote from thine
eye; and, behold, a beam is in thine own eye?" (MatthewT4)both of which urge the ruler to think of himself first as a man
and take care for his own soul; 2) desire is equivalent to crime
in Heaven just as surely as if you had committed the act: "Ye
have heard it was said by them of old time, Thou shalt not commit adultery: Butl sayuntoyou, That whosoever looketh on a
woman to lust after her hath committed adultery alreadywith
her in his heart" (Matthew 5:27-8). Both Escalus and Isabella
rely upon these two premises of divine justice in their
arguements. When Isabella asks Angelo, in essense , to love
the sinner and hate the sin, Angelo replies scoffingly:

unrelated to Claudio's sentencing, although it might make
for a powerful emotional appeal. But Angelo has , in fact, not
committed the crime for which Claudio is arraigned, as Ecalus
knows, and so he makes a "you would" argument, which
moves rhetorically from desire to action: it is only a matter of
inauspici ous circumstance which keeps desirer from becoming fact in Angelo's case. Angelo's response is to separate
desire and action , "'Tis one thing to be tempted, Escalus, I
Another thing to fall. .. " (Il.i.18-9) , and to emphasize the impartiality of the law and his willingness to give up his own life
under the same charge. Two wrongs do not make a right.
The appeal of Escalus' to " natural inclination," desire , makes me wonder what it is we pass judgment up on?
Fact, answers Angelo, deed, violation of the law. "Thoughts
are no subjects," Isabella says at the end of the play, but "Go
to your bosom and knock there" in Act IL T his seems to be a
crucial distinction between earthly and divine justice. On
earth, how can we know punishment on the basis of motive
alone? We have access only to deeds, to public , not private
matters. On earth, the person standing trial must be considered separately, apart from any other at that moment in timesomeone else's crime is irrevelant (ifwe agree that two wrongs
do not make aright). We may feel sympathetically, atthe same
time, that crime should not be punished if many others or the
judge himself is guilty of the same crime. But, before Heaven
each man stands trial himself, and there can be no pointing
fingers to your neighbors ' sin as greater than your own . The
crimes of my fellow man are not my concern, only my conscience before God. And we are not judged only for our deeds,
but for our desires as well.
How can the ruler on earth perform his duty under
the weight of the perpetual duty to Heaven? Earthly justice
requires that we consider each crime as a separate case, and
that we punish on the basis ofaction ratherthan desire , but to
say this is to remove oneself from the juristiction of Heaven:
the ruler must, temporarily at least, think of himself as not
under the judgment of God. The arguments for justice and
mercy in the play reveal a tension between the idea of earthly
and divine justice and and call into question the possibility of
being both a good ruler and a man.
What I do not understand is how Angelo can be so
right, and at the same time so wrong. Examinded piece by
piecelfindmyselfwholeheartedlyin agreementwith the practices and principles of what I have called earthly justice, but
he is under assault throughout the play from Escalus, from
Isabella, and from the Duke, and these people are vindicated
(morally) while Angelo descends lower and lower into hypocrisy and corruption. It is true that ifwe expect our rulers to be
free from all taint, and even impulse, then no one can live up
to demands made on the ruler in the Duke's speech, "He who
the sword of Heaven will bear ... " (and this means a radical
statement against all forms of government, unless on e can be
conceived of which is not disciplinary), but why should the
ruler have to try to live up to this impossible standard? Is
Angelo's position wrong because he becomes unscrupulous?
By his own understanding, no, since two wrongs do not make
a right-condemn me then to if I so offend, the law stands by

Condemn the fault and not the actor of it?
Why, every fault's condemned ere it be done.
Mine were the very cipher of a function,
To fine the fault s whose fine stands in record,
And let go by the actor.
II.ii.50-4

Which is true ; such a protest leaves no room for earthly
justice. Just as Isabella demands of Angelo "Go to your bosom: Knock there and ask your heart what it doth know I
That's like my brother' s fault. " Escalus' argument is:
Let but your Honor know ...
Had time cohered with place or place with wishing,
Or that the resolute acting of your blood
Could have attained the effect of your purpose,
Whether you had not sometime in your life
Erred in this point.
Il.i.9-16

But consider carefully the foundation of Escalus' argument:
There is a logical fallacy called "Pointing to Another
Wrong," a means of confusing the issue athand byintoducing
another. In Fallacy-The Counterfeit of Argument 3:
Though many give lip service to the adage "Two
wrong do not make a right," few are not tempted to mitigate
blame for wrongs on one side by citing those on the other.
Justice seems to demand that one who complains of wrongdoing should himself have "clean hands ." Powerful charges
are difficult to answer, by showing that the accuser himself is
guilty of misconduct. This device is an effective rejoinder in
controversy since it both deflects attention from the original
grievance and creates sympathy for the accused party... Yet
even when the countercharges are deserved, all that is demonstrated is that neither side is right when both are wrong. 3
Whether or not Angelo has ever felt the desire is irrelevant.
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When nights are longest there: I'll take my leave
And leave you to the hearing of the cause,
Hoping you'll find good cause to whip them all.
II.i.136-9

itself, not subject to my example. The danger of that thought
surfaces in Claudio's shaky morality. His definition of crime
depends upon the judge, and he reasons that an action can
not be considered a crime if teh judge is guilty of the same.
Angelo , for all his strong arguments, does not stand by the~,
because he did not turn himself in as he ought to have done if
he really did believe in the absolute objectivity of the law as
he says he does. Would anyone have turned himself in? Is the
problem not "can anyone be of sin to judge ," but, "can we
expect anyone to show such honesty?" There are judges who
are not guilty ofbreaking the law, but this is considering crime
to be deed rather than inclination. The powerful thing about
inclination that I cannot quite let go of is that it is the basis for
seeing commonality of men. There is something so profound
and beautiful to me in the Duke being able to look at
Barnadine and see something of himself. The moral we draw
is not, we are all sinners, therefore I am wretched and evil,
but, here is something to pity and to love, loving your neighbor as yourself.
And indeed, at the end of the play Angelo , the judge,
himself comes under the sentence of the law and is judged.
Angelo stands condemned for two different things: for adulterywhich is a matter for the law, andforthe death of Claudio,
which is not since Angelo is in this case entirely justified according to the law and by the power invested in him by the
Duke. It is the death of Claudio which Isabella pardons him
for, though , and the remainder of her plea for "mercy" for
Angelo focuses on the fact that Angelo really did not committ
adultery with her. These two separate charges become confused in the end, because the argument is that Angelo is guilty
of the one (Claudio' s death) only because he is guilty of the
other (adultery). Not only does this reason rely on the same
"two wrongs" fallacy, but the characters who prosecute
Angelo for his misdeeds have wanted to argue throughout that
play that adultery is not a crime. Actually they are passing
judgment on Angelo for being a hypocrite.
What is Angelo's crime? To me it is not Claudio' s
death (real or supposed) which is legally justified, not even
desiring Isabella or making love to Mariana since she is a willing and consenting party, but that moment when he realizes,
"Who will believe thee, Isabel..."; that he can use his position to force her, that acceptance of hypocrisy, duplicity in
choosing from then on to hide the truth behind until he is utterly confuted by the Duke's revealing himself.
But whether we side with the justice of Angelo or of the
Duke, there are elements in Angelo' s character which make
him, even at his best, a poor ruler of men. We see this in act
II, scene i, when the bumbling constable Elbow and his two
prisoners appear before Escalus and Angelo. Although
Angelo strives to maintain his "gravity," that cool, collected
mask of impassivity, Elbow's malapropisms , Pompey's
coarse, high-handed manner (conducting his own trial), and
the general confusion and ineffectuality of the whole proceedings drive him to the breaking point of utter frustration where
he suddenly explodes:

Escalus remains and spends his time listening, trying to
sort out the complaint; he tries to reaon with Pompey and reawaken his conscience, indulging in a little humor on the side.
Escalus (whose name contains the word "scale") considers
each case separately and tailors his punishment accordingly.
Unfortunately, the play casts doubt on the effectiveness of
Escalus' methods (Pompey leaves unrepentant and fixed in
his ways) , but Escalus' example is chiefly imp ortant here for
the contrast it provides to Angelo's pent-up fury, pride and
impatience. Because Pompey is oflow birth , Angel o sees him
(not unlike the Duke in Act III ) as incapable of instruction:
punishment alone will keep him in line (nothing better can
be expexted of such a creature), and his punishment will be
whipping. Angelo judges Pompey unworthy of death; indeed,
how can one punish with severity a man in whom vice is regarded as simply nature?
Angelo's class prejudice and impatience expose the weakness of his character and of his rule. Control, for Angelo, is
primary. He wants people and events to conform rather than
stopping carefully to look and listen to the way other people
perceive the situation. Behind this lies a certain self-importance and lack of consideration. Although Escalus is able to
see the humor in the misguided ramblings of Elbow, Angelo
is frustrated to the point of rage by the confusion and incompetence which surrounds him. But in no small part, frustration at incompetence is also a feeling of righteous self-satisfaction . It contains a judgement that the situation is important, and that it is someone else mistake which is causing
the "trouble," (another value judgment about outcome): I
know better, but it's his fault that what I think is right is not
happening. The situation is important to Angelo because it
is a case for the law to be enforced, but the details of the case
(precisely what Pompey emphasizes) he finds interminable.
Angelo has no patience with "trivialities": everything must
be big and bold, principle against principle, ofheroic, tragic
stature- smallness and ambiguities are repulsive, life is to be
lived greatly with drama and power. The message Angelo
communicates by his abrupt departure is that trivialities are
a waste of his time (my time is important) , and that his work
here thwarted, now to be sought elsewhere, is pressing and
significant (I am important). Angelo's outburst is not only a
a response to the imbe cility he sees around him, but to
Pompey's repeated attempts to take charge of his own trial.
In this situation control is tenuous, and the authority of the
law and the statesman is mocked, Angelo is unable to tolerate
such high-handedness from an underling.
A good ruler, however, cannot have such contempt for his
subjects, nor hope to avoid the mundane business of government. The state is a collection of people , after all, and any
ruler who forgets this and looks on justice as something abstract is either tyrannical or ineffectual. The Duke, I believe,
succeeds, where Angelo fails . The dramatic justice which the

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�Duke delivers at the end of the play shows him to be individualistic where Angelo is absolute, forgiving where Angelo is
proud and untouchable. Our concern should be, though,
whether the Duke shows mercy to a fault. What has happened
since the beginning of the play, when the Duke decided
greater strictness ought to be enforced?
Must law be upheld? So much seems to depend on
how disordered the city has become. The evidence we have of
the lawlessness ofVienna comes almost entirely for the Duke's
own report, and the question is whether his perspective is an
accurate reflection of the dissolution of state. Then, too, the
only crime which Angelo and the Duke are concerned with is
sexual promiscuity. Why should licentiousness be a political
concern? Possibly it encourages instability and helps to nourish other small petty crimes such as gambling, stealing, or
drinking which fill the brothel-taverns. Possibly there is a very
real public health concern about the proliferation of venereal
disease among the populace-our only other hint as to the condition of the city, in fact, is this: a comic scene in which Lucio
and his friends pun on venereal disease and its spread.
Has the duke changed his methods of governing, or has
seeing the example of Angelo caused him to reevaluate the
need for strict laws? The change we saw in his character
wrought by his experiences as a friai· is the inclusion of a religious or spiritual concern in politics. This is most apparent
in contrasting his treatment of Pompey, and later, Barnadinebut then we ask has the Duke' s policy changed, or are the
causes of Pompey and Barnadine different in kind? The one a
clever, long-time bawd, the other a brutish and violent single
offender. If Pompey had appeared in the final scene (though
he and other low-life of the play are, perhaps conspicuously,
absent), would the Duke have found it in his heart to offer
pardon to this repeat offender? Will the Duke, put-off by
Angelo's deadly justice, turn to the other extreme and set all
free?
When we look at the judgements the Duke passes at the
end we see the difference between Angelo and Duke's conception of the purpose of justice. Angelo is not a statesman
pure and simple; he wants to purge the state, not just keep it
in reasonable functional order. Angelo's conception of justice is carrying out the penalties incurred by the violations of
the law-his system of justice is based on expectations and absolute measures which leave no room for mercy except as
weakness on the part of the judge in being susceptible to emotional appeal. Mercy is foreign to Angelo's concept of statesmanship; pity he understands only as the extirpation of criminals from society which both removes the offender and forestalls, by the severity of the example, further vice:

to punish the crime? His betterment by instruction? Claudio
is to die, not learn from his error. Does it better his soul in
heaven to have his crimes punished on earth? Or is "right,"
not better, but justly served?-a sentence which does not benefit but balances the account . The purpose of justice in
Angelo's eyes is to remove the offender from society and to
deter others by making harsh example, but, underneath , it is
fulfilling a desire to see evil deeds punished. 4
The Dukes' purpose in passing judgement is the social good, the effect it will have on the society-so that punishment is not an end in itself but a means to some further end
which protects the polity. This is appropriate because justice
is a concept of community. The "dramatic justice" he serves
in the end accomplishes this. Angelo's justice is rooted in a
sense of moral outrage which demands that a man who has
hurt another is to be hurt himself in equal measure. He would
fit the punishment to the offender so that he is punished by
the excess of his own crime. But the desire to see offense punished equally could be accomplished by demanding equal payment, such as an eye for an eye. Or, in a milder form, the trespass might be accorded some unspecified punishment which
is only concerned with makingthe criminal suffer in someway
forthe suffering he has caused. Now, all of these are different
from the dramatic justice the Duke shows in the end because
the purpose of dramatic justice is to compel the offender to
make amends, not to inflict more injury to make it "right" .
This is a radically different idea of the purpose of justice, and one which focuses more on the ramifications of the
punishment than on the punishment as an end in itself. Dramatic justice does not resolve the tension between earthly and
divine justice: it is still a kind of judging, and as such belongs
to the realm of earthly justice, but holding a people to make
retribution without inflicting further penalty is the closest a
system of government which still protects its citizens can
come to acting a according to the idea of divine justice. It is
therefore a kind of compromise between the extremes Angelo
and Isabella argue.

In the dramatic justice the Duke dispenses in the final
scene of the play he manages to hold people accountable for
their misdeeds, but not to punish them beyond making
amends-the sentence of death Angelo , Claudio, and even
Lucio, stand under is commuted to marriage: the tragedy becomes a comedy (another kind of substitution !) . In this final
scene Lucio stands out because he is the on e the Duke claims
he cannot find it in his heart to forgive. In Barnadine the duke
saw something of himself, and pardons him as he hopes to be
pardoned in turn, but here he says, "I find an apt remission in
myself;/ And yet here's one in place I cannot pardon ... "
(V.i.561-2) . Lucio's slanderous, snide witticisms have gotten
under his skin, and he proposes to have him whipped and then
hanged, against which Lucio (for once deprived of his supercilious, cocky air ) cries out piteously. He is, of course, forgiven his slanders (as I suspect the Duke intends all along),
and let off with only the injunction that he must marry the
woman he got with child, (another case of marriage being used

I show it most of all when I show justice;
For then I pity those I do not know ,
Which a dismissed offense would after gall;
And do him right that, answering one foul wrong,
lives not to act another.
II.ii.I27-3I

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to restore honor and make amends), and Lucio, one of the
most comic characters in this dark tale is taken awayprotestingthat beingmarried to a whore " is pressing to death , whipping, and hanging! " (V.i .586-7). The reversal further underscores the tragicomic nature of the playwhen Lucio can complain that marriage is like death to him!
We have seen that the play raises the question of acting
with regard to the judgment of heaven or according to the laws
on earth , and that this places the ruler in the problematic position ofbeing both the one judging and the one being judged.
It would be wrong to say that the tension between political
and private duty is resolved by the end of the play, but the Duke
does manage, in a way, to combine roles ofboth a ruler and a
man. In the final scene we see him dispense well-measured
justice-the capable ruler-and we are made aware of him at
the same time as a single , private man by his offer of marriage
to Isabella. Previously he had considered himself past marriage, preferring to study rather that " to haunt assemblies/
Where youth and cost a witless bravery keeps" (I.iii.ro-1) ;
well-defended, as he thinks, from "the dribbling dart oflove"
that cannot "pierce a complete bosom" (I.iii.2-3 ). But his experiences as a friar have changed him , not only in bringing
him close to Isabella, a woman he deeply admires, but in forcing him to see things larger than himself and face situations
where his powers were inadequate to the task. Perhaps one of
the motivations behind his decision to leave in the beginning
of the play was to test Angela as a successor. If so, that has
been subsumed by his decision to marry.
And Isabella? Is she also allotted justice in the end?
The ambiguous end of the play, which leaves her no lines to
accept or decline the Duke' s proposal, has often been interpreted darkly as a final miscarriage of justice. Whether
Isabella is thwarted in her religious aims , or suppressed by a
dominant male society, she stands in the fading light as a tribute to the good that can be corrupted by society. Underneath,
however , this is a fundamentally self-righteous feeling, and
such self-righteousness has been criticized throughout the
play in the person of Angelo. It is my belief that the end of the
play is comic, as its form implies. The end of Measure for
Measure contains typically comic elements: the apportionment of dramatic justice , marriage between the principle
characters, and the loose ends tied together in a last epiloguelike speech given by the Duke in the style of Theseus in A Midsummer Night's Dream, Leontes at the end of The Winter's
Tale, or the KinginAll' s Well That Ends Well-where the confusion which has reigned has finally been sorted out and as
Pucksays, "JackshallhaveJill;/Noughtshallgoill" (Midsummer III.ii.62-3) (although we may doubt the passions of the
characters in Measure for Measure can be so tidily concluded
without a magic love potion). Why should we look for comedy at the end of this often grim play? Because the genre of
tragicomedy seems to be a statement about life: life is not all
high tragedy and extremes oflove or death, but, on the whole,
a joyful and often amusing thing. One of the messages of the
play is superiority of temperance, acceptance of human failing, and love, over high-principled idealism was which thrives
on abstractions and is fueled by righteous pride. To read the

final scene of the play as dark in tone is to ignore all that has
come before.
The real argument for a happy ending lies in Isabella
herself. It is tempting to read her as a kind of martyr to the
cause (be it religion or feminism, as I have seen it performed),
but look closely at her character and one begins to find inconsistencies, pride and petty jealousies, fears and temptations ,
which make her fallible and real. She stands so close to
Angelo, and she must be won slowly, by degrees , to the temperance and understanding the Duke embodies and represents. The play details not only the secularization of her character, but also the transformation she goes through in order
to descend from her tragic heights to a comic, life-embracing, heroine who does not always take herself seriously and is
able to laugh
Isabella, I believe, really does not belong in the convent, where she starts out. Her passion and demand for stricter
rules are naively exaggerated. It is tempting to picture her as
a young novice walking about the gardens, but it is worth remembering that Claudio has sent Lucio off with the words ,
" This day my sister should the cloister enter" (I.n.I82). She
is taken from the convent before she has a chance to experience its life; her descriptions of its transcendent joys are really the fanciful work of imagination . There is something eerie in the ardent, otherworldliness of her picture of " preserved
souls ... fasting maids whose minds are dedicate/To nothing
temporal" (II.ii.188-90). She longs for exalted heights rather
than seeking, realistically, a quietlife of prayer and menial
duties. I see Isabella, in her scenes with Angelo, slowly driven
back into personal involvement with the world, a change
which allows for her transition between the impervious detachment of "O just but severe law,/ I had a brother, then "
and "Die, Perish!" with all its fiery passion and wounded anguish. Her encounter with Angelo in the play brings sharply
into focus the tension between the two sides of her personality. On the one hand, she is a person of quick wit and great
intelligence, on the other a woman who is expected to be both
cold, submissive, alluring, and desirable at the same time. We
see this double standard in Claudio's picture of his sister:
... in her youth
There is a prone speechl ess dialect
Such as move men; besides, she hath prosperous art
When she will play with reason and discourse.
J.ii.I87-90

This same dual nature which women are expected to have
in society is reflected by the rules of the convent:
When you have vowed, you must mot speak with men
But in the presence of the prioress.
Then if you speak, you must not show your face;
Or, if you show your face , you must not speak.
J.iv.IO-I4

There it is again: show our face (loosely, be admired, be
looked at as a woman) or speak (use reason and discourse) ,
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�wife, and let every woman have her own husband .. .it is better
to marry than to burn" (Corinthians r2-9). The disorder of
the state at the beginning was in the form of sexual promiscuity; the play ends with a series of marriages which "legalize"
sexual desire. Marriage is society's recognition oflawful or
unlawful intercourse and determines a woman's honor or dishonor. It is a way ofbringing passions potentially destructive
to society under control and imposing the stability of family.
In the midst of this play about sexual crimes and "after the
fact" marriages the Duke and Isabella might be exceptional:
a couple married for the sake ofromantic love. But the proposal is ambiguous, Isabella's reaction impossible to determine , and the union in many ways is so un expected that it is
less likely that they represent an exception than that their marriage takes its color from the many examples which surround
it. Isabella's experiences have made her more aware of her
sex; possibly they have awakened desires in her which she had
forbidden. Whether or not her marriage with the Duke is truly
for love , it allows her a socially acceptable role in the world as
a wife.
The Duke is a more curious example-his falling in
love, or discovering passions in himself, is surprising, not only
to him (having thought himself immune) but to us as audience who might otherwise be tempted to see him as a manifestation of the author or divine presence, determining the
action of the play but being removed from it himself. His proposal to Isabella (and his reaction to Lucio's jibes) bring him
back into the play as a real character with quite human tendencies to love and anger. One might have thought, still, that
like Paul he would have encouraged others to marry while remaining apart himself. But it is interesting to find this ruler,
whom I am tempted in so many other ways to call almost ideal,
knows and accepts himself as frail-as human-as his fellow
men and women. To deny that would have made him another
Angelo, who fell trying to climb too high. Who is there to bestow dramatic justice on the judge himself? What dramatic
justice is there for the Duke in the end? Somehow, he distributes dramatic justice on himself in his new self-knowledge.
Having learned by being confronted with his weaknesses and
passions, he knows something more of what is appropriate to
him as a ruler and as a man.
Is there a moral to this story and its struggle between
the principles of mercy and justice? If so I think it must be
the truth the Duke recognizes at the end of the play, that we
are all flawed, that a man should not take pride in virtue or
set himself apart, and that should teach us not to judge harshly.
No one can obey the law truly. Although this sounds more
like the divine than earthly law, perhaps the implication is that
there is not such a great difference between them as we are
used to imagining. We have an idea of sin which somehow we
recognize all men are prone to an frequently slip into. The
law is supposed to be something most people can follow, and
only the willful wrong-doer indulges'himself with predictable
consequences. But in this play even the most virtuous have
discovered their frailty. Between the example of Angelo (the
"angel" who fell), of the futility of trying to be "holy and severe " enough to wield the sword of Heaven, and Escalus' ar-

oveiwhelming scene of his abominable proposition who says,
"I do arrest you words. Be that you are,/That is , a woman"
(II.iv. I47-8). Having chosen the convent, Isabella-consciously or not-denied her sex, but she is dragged by her
brother's plight back into the world of men (where, as we have
seen, she is desired by Angelo less for her mind than for her
beauty). It may be that Isabella is not entirely unaffected by
Angelo herself. So often one feels in productions that Angelo
onlypercipitates revulsion in her, but could the encounter between them not be an awakening (however surprising and unwelcome) of the feelings she has denied, as it is on Angelo's
side? Could the extremityofherreaction to his proposal, when
she finally understands it, be not so much fear of him as fear
of herself? Is it possible for a young woman of Isabella's vibrancy to be touched for the first time by a man and not physically oveiwhelmed by the experience?
Threatened by Angelo, betrayed as she feels herself
by her brother (the only man she could turn to in her distress) ,
s4e turns naturally to the Duke in his friar's habit and clings
to him as someone "safe" and sympathetic to her distress. It
is easier to see that he is struck by her than to gauge her reaction to him, but the two of them end up putting their heads
together and working as a team. Although it is true that in
the second half of the play Isabella has almost no lines until
the final scene in which she accuses Angelo, it seems to me
that she is working in close conjunction with the Duke, as
much a part of the planning as he is. The scene in Act III in
which the Duke first approaches her with the idea of Mariana's
taking her place, the details ofMarianaandAngelo's past and
the trick they will play on him appeal to her immensely and
she becomes wrapped up in the proposal: Isabella and the
Duke think alike; they share a love of puzzles and tricks.
Simple consideration for the balance of the drama mightlead
us to draw this conclusion: watching their gradual coming together and the awkwardness of the friar's guise which both
allows them to be together and keeps them apart drives, I
think, the second half of the play, which otherwise is apt to
flounder in production under the weight of pure plot devices.
What must herreaction be when, in that final scene, he stands
revealed, the friar's hood torn away?! The Duke's two proposals of marriage have drawn criticism as being informal and
public rather than romantically private, but I now think it is
possible that his manner can be attributed to their closeness
and the "naturalness" of the arrangement. Having undergone
throughout the play this process of secularization, discovering in her energy and her love of plans perhaps a calling to a
life of practical virtue, how can she return to the convent of
her exalted but sterile fantasy? Is marriage for Isabella dramatic justice? Is it an appropriate reward for her virtuous
words and deeds, and triumph over temptation? The other
marriages seem just, but Isabella needs no such justice from
marriage. For Isabella, marriage is not so much dramatically
fitting, or just, as it is necessary if she is to end up where she
belongs, among her own kind.
Marriage is not, however, a "reward," in this playnor is it the romantic fulfillment oflove. The spirit of Paul
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Footnotes

gument that only lack of opportune circumstances keeps us
from sin, there emerges from the play a warning against righteousness and self-justification , against thinking we stand on
better ground than our neighbor since we have not committed the same crimes. The play reveals Angelo's practice of
government insufficient and, in fact, detrimental. We have
called Angelo ' s justice "pragmatic," butitis the Duke's policies, his concern for the individual and willingness to forgive
(his focus being not punishment as an end in itselfbut a question of how best to turn social disorder into social benefit),
which are truly pragmatic. Human beings cannot be confined
by narrow precision and the use offear.

I. Line numbers are taken from the Folger Edition.
Shakespeare, William, Measure for Measure, ed. Louis B.
Wright, Simon &amp; Schuster, New York, I975·

2.

Translations from the King James Version of the Bible

3. W. Ward Fearn side and William P. Holther, Fallacy-The
Counterfeit Argument, Prentice-Hall, Englewood Cliffs, New
Jersy, 1959, p. 126.
4. Is it possible that this desire in us to see wickedness punished and good rewarded also stems from self-righteous pride?

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�The King of Israel

*
Samuel Davidoff

And they said unto Moses, Speak thou with us, and we will
hear: but let not God speak with us, lest we die. (Exodus 20: 19)'

and to save Israel from the hand of the Philistine. Regardless
of God or Samuel's feelings about the correctness of Israel
having a king, the establishment of a monarchy has certain
necessary effects on the people. In particular the choosing of
king must in some way alter the nation of Israel's relationship with God. Until now they have been led more or less by
God through the medium of His prophets, but now they are
to be led by a king. He is to be invested with the power ofleadership; a power that formerly was the domain of God. The new
king will, in a way, fulfill an almost religious role for the
people. The new king is not merely replacing an old leader
but is in some sense replacing God.
What kind of man does God pick? All we are told about Saul
is that he was " a choice young man" and "from the head and
shoulders upward he was higher then any of the people."(9:2)
The description seems to be merely one of physical beauty.
We are told nothing about Saul's soul or his heart. But God
does not ignore these things . Immediately after he has Saul
anointed we have the scene quoted above. The Bible says that
the spirit of the Lord descended on Saul and he prophesied
with the result that he becomes a new man. Prophesy here
does not seem to refer to the type of communication with God
that we usually associate with that word, such as the communication that Samuel has with God. We are not told that God
"says" anything to Saul. Instead what we know is that Saul is
among a troop of prophets, but not prophets like Samuel;
there is something Bacchanalian about these prophets with
their psaltery, and pipe and harp. When Saul prophesies he
does not speak the word of God, instead he receives a new
heart and becomes another man . What Saul exper iences
seems to be a sort of ecstasy. Ifonly for a moment he sees something of the divine, he is touched by God, and he is forever
changed. I think that what this contact with God instills in
Saul's heart at that moment is a longing for further contact
with the divine, a love of God or perhaps even a lust for God.
And so the first king of Israel is picked, perhaps, merely for
physical appearance, but he is then bound to God through an
ecstatic vision .
Saul's action as the king of the nation oflsrael reflect this
unusual process of appointment that he has undergone. What
we see in Saul's actions, and particularly in his failures, as the
king oflsrael is almost directly a result of how he is bound to
God. There are two peculiarities about the relationship that
God establishes with Saul. First that Saul is bound by some
sort of transcendent experience as opposed to a verbal communication or prophecy of the kind that Samuel and the other

The nation oflsrael' s peculiar predicament is that they are
a divine nation. They are chosen by God but they are nevertheless human. They are not of the same make as their leader,
and their communication with this leader, with God, must
always be mediated. Startingwith Moses the medium that God
chooses is prophecy. The major prophets in each generation
are people who have direct communication with God, such as
Moses, who spoke to God "face to face" or Samuel, whom the
Lord speaks to "in his ear." Even in the case of certain lesser
prophets, prophets who merely see God in dreams or visions,
there is a decidedlyverbal aspect to their interaction with God.
God speaks to His people through His prophets. It is through
the prophets that the people know the commandments of God,
the advice of God in pru:ticular situations, and, in some cases,
the future intentions of God. In the book of Samuell it is primarilythe prophet Samuel who conveys the people's requests
to God and who reports God's responses. Later, when a king
is appointed, it is Samuel who, under God's guidance, selects
him and Samuel who tells King Saul the wishes of God. But
while Samuel, and perhaps some of the lesser prophets of the
time, may be the only voices of God, the only speakers of God's
word, it is not the case that other people do not experience
God. Contact with God, however brief, plays a crucial role in
the lives of several other figures in the story of the origins of
monarchy in Israel.
" ... And it shall come to pass, when thou art come thither to the city, that
thou shalt meet a company of prophets coming down from the high place
with a psaltery, and a tabret, and a pipe, and a harp, before them; and they
shall prophesy; And the spirit of the Lord will come upon thee and thou shalt
prophesy with them and shalt be turned into another man ... And it was, that
when he had turned his back to go from Samuel, God gave him another heart:
and all those signs came to pass that day. And when they came thither to the
hill, behold, a company of prophets met him; and the spirit of God came
upon him, and he prophesied among them. And it came to pass, when all
that knew him before time saw that, behold, he prophesied among the prophets, then the people said to one another, What is this that is come unto the
son Kish? Is Saul also among the prophets?" (Samuel I 10:5-6, 9-11)";,,

The scene occurs immediately after the anointing of Saul,
the first king of Israel. Samuel's feelings and God's words
about the appointing of a king are ambivalent and unenthusiastic. The people have clamored for a king and God has seen
it as an act of rebellion. Why should they have a human king
when they have the Lord? But God has granted their request
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prophets receive. Second that he is .instilled with a longing
for God as opposed to being granted an ongoing relationship
with God. He is granted a yearning for God not a communion
with God. With one exception, which I will discuss later, Saul
has no other direct experience with God. All his other communication takes place through prophets and priests. Both
aspects of Saul's experience with God make themselves most
apparent in Saul's failures as king.
Saul is not a bad kingin consideration of military or political leadership goes. He neither loses any wars nor is there any
sense that the people are unusually dissatisfied with him at
any point. Saul fails with respect to his position relative to
God. He may serve well as king but not as the king of God's
people. Saul is disobedient to God and it is this that causes his
kingdom to be taken from him.
The first instance of disobedience occurs in the second year
of Saul's reign right before a battle with the Philistines. Saul
is waiting for Samuel to arrive so that they can make a sacrifice before the battle. Samuel does not arrive and so Saul
makes the offering without him. Then Samuel arrives:

managing of a particular battle. What sort of picture are we to
form-of Saul? Does it make sense that a man would be on the
one hand so eager to please God and yet on the other hand be
found guilty of flagrant violation of the divine command?
I think that both of Saul's failures stem from the particular
attitude Saul, as a result of his ecstatic experience, has towards
God because of his ecstatic experience. k:, said above, Saul's
experience of God has two aspects: first, its transience which
leaves him with a sense of unfulfilled longing and second, the
visceral and emotional aspect of it as opposed to the rational
and communicative prophecies of Samuel. Saul's position is
an odd one. k:, a young man he has an extremely powerful experience with God and is then left alone. He is left, though,
with some idea about the nature of his responsibility to God;
after all, he is made king of God's nation. Due to the particular nature of his divine experience, Saul is left with a peculiar
sort of motivation. He wants a repetition of the rapture he experienced previously. He does not desire to fulfill the will of
God, but merely to experience or 'see' God again. It is this
type oflonging for God that makes Saul crave the type of assurance he does before he goes into battle. He does not sacrifice so much to please God, but to please himself through an
attempt to bring God closer to him. What he fails to realize is
the importance of following God's commandments. The nature of his experience with God has caused him to see this as
unessential to being close to God. This causes his disobedience in the war with Amalek. He spares the animals so that he
can sacrifice them. This particular disobedience is paradigmatic of his misunderstanding of his relationship with God
and Samuel says as much in his rebuke: "Hath the Lord as
great delight in burnt offerings and sacrifices as in obeying
the voice of the Lord? Behold, to obey is better than sacrifice,
and to hearken than the fat oframs."(15:22). In fact, this is
exactly Saul's misunderstanding; he has a longing for the presence of God, but not for the word of God.
Let us leave Saul for now and look at another example of a
man who has contact with God, Saul's son, Jonathan. The first
time we meet Jonathan is during the same war with the Philistines in which Saul first disobeys God. Saul and his army are
reluctant to attack and are waiting in Gibeah near the Philistine garrison. Unbeknownst to Saul, or the rest of the a my,
Jonathan takes his armourbearer and they go up to the camp
of the Philistines.

"And Samuel said, What hast thou done? And Saul said, Because I saw
that the people were scattered from me, and that thou earnest not within
the days appointed, and that the Philistines gathered themselves together
at Michmash; Therefore said I, The Philistines will come down now upon
me to Gilgal, and I have not made supplication unto the Lord: I forced myself therefore and offered a burnt offering. And Samuel said to Saul, Thou
hast done foolishly: thou hast not kept the commandment of the Lord thy
God." (I3:n-I3)

Samuel then tells him that his kingdom shall not continue.
The second, more prominent failing of Saul is also an act of
disobedience. In this case he has been instructed by God to
utterly destroy the nation of Amalek. Instead, Saul spares the
king and the livestock. Samuel rebukes Saul and tells him that
"Because thou has rejected the word of the Lord he has rejected thee from being king ... And Samuel came no more to
see Saul until the day of his death ... and the Lord repented
that he had made Saul king over Israel." (15:23,35)
The second example of Saul's disobedience seems to be
incongruous with the first . In the war against Amalek Saul fails
to completely follow God's instruction concerning the battle.
However, in the first war Saul disobeys God because it seems
he is to eager to please God before he goes into battle. Saul
thinks he is giving God some token of his faith. This .desire is
characteristic of Saul. We are told several times of his building altars before battles and his consulting priests. Most notable is his attempt before his final battle to contact the dead
Samuel through a sorcerer.

"And Jonathan said to the young man that bare his armour, Come, and
let us go over unto the garrison of these uncircumcised: it may be that the
Lord will work for us: for there is no restraint to the Lord to save by many or
by few." (I4:6)

"And Samuel said to Saul , Why has thou disquieted me to bring me up?
And Saul answered, I am sore distressed; for the Philistines make war against
me, and God is departed from me, and answereth me no more, neither by
prophets, nor by dreams : therefore I have called thee, that thou mayest make
known unto me what I shall do?" (28:I5 )

Jonathan then proposes a test. They will call up to the Philistines and if they are told to come up to the camp they will
know the Lord is with them. The Philistines respond appropriately and Jonathan and his armour bearer, alone, destroy
their camp.
Right awaywe see that Jonathan has a unique faith in God
He believes that God can bring destruction to the army of the
Philistines even with only two men. He believes also that God

This striking dependence on God's approval of his battle
plans seems odd when compared with Saul's supreme act of
disobedience in which he disobeys God's instructions for the

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�is with the nation oflsrael and favors them over the uncircumcised nation of the Philistines. Of course one could ask if there
is anything particularly special about this kind of faith? After
all isn't there something obvious about the sort of belief
Jonathan has? In the period of the people of Israel's initial
establishment in the land oflsrael their warfare has been noticeably characterized by the presence of God. It is typical of
Israel's battles that the many should defeat the few with the
help of God. What, then , is unusual about the faith Jonathan
exhibits?
Most of the examples of faith we have seen fall into two
different categories. There are the obvious examples of the
faith found in people who have direct communication with
God. Abraham and Moses come to mind. The greatness of
their faith did not lie in their beliefin the existence or the ability of God. After all they spoke with God and so the question
of his existence does not have the same force in their case as
in Jonathan's. In general, the faith of the forefathers and
prophets seems to be on a grander scale then the faith of a
smaller character like Jonathan. There is a less obvious kind
of faith that we find exhibited by the people oflsrael. After all
they must have gone into battle in the times of Moses, Joshua,
and Samuel with a certain faith in God's protection. But the
faith we find in the people of Israel at large is of a different
nature the Jonathan's . It is only in directly a faith in God. While
it has been Israel's experience that the many have defeated
the few, the connection to God has been less evident. Israel
has always been under a leader of some sort, a prophet or a
king. The people' s communication and faith have been in the
leader as the medium between them and God. I do not think
that the nation has gone \nto battle, as Jonathan did, with f~th
in God so much as with faith in their leader, the emissary of
God. Therefore, Jonathan's faith is different. He believes in
_God directly despite the fact that he has had no communication with God. He has the experience of a common man but a
faith that approaches the faith of the prophets.
Jonathan's contact with God, however, is of a completely
different nature than Saul's. Jonathan does not have any·direct experience of God or any mystical or divine ecstasy. God
does not come down and touch him, at least not in the way He
does Saul. Jonathan's invasion of the Philistine's camp is not
simply an act of faith. He does not march blindly into the camp
with confidence that God will help him. There is the test that
he proposes to his servant so as to determine whether or not
they will be successful. While there is no doubt that faith plays
a decided role in this scene, Jonathan's use of a test changes
the character of the scene.Jon athan asks for a sign, he is given
it, and then what amounts to a miracle occurs. He and his
armourbearer destroy the Philistine camp. I imagine that
Jonathan must see the hand of God clearly manifesting itself
at this moment. He has faith in God to be sure, but when he is
granted a sign of his victory it seems to point decidedly to the
fact that what occurs in the invasion is divine intervention.
God comes down and wins the battle.Jonathan too has a communication with God, not a mystic experience but a revelation, a miracle.
These two examples of God's communication with indi-

viduals comes at an important time in the Bible. The important issue at this point in Samuel I is that of the monarchy. As
discussed above in the case of Saul, the appointment of a king
calls into question this very issue, the issue of people's relationships with God. Thus far, we have seen two categories of
relationships that the majority of the people, the non-prophets have with God. There is primarily the relationship of the
people to God through the medium of the prophets, but there
are also these examples of divine contact that individuals have
at certain moments, such as those that Saul and Jonathan have.
For the most part the former relationship to God, the relationship through the prophets, has been the standard. The people
have believed and known God because of the prophets. With
the creation of a monarchy it is this very relationship that is
called into question. It is no longer God' s intention to communicate with the people through the prophets He intends
now to have kings. There is, however, the same problem that
was present in Saul. What kind of man will God choose? We
might reformulate the question now to ask, what kind of man
will God choose as his intermediary with the people? The king
will be the leader of the people, but, as a leader, he repla'ces
God to some extent. Who should be picked? The answer is
David. I think in David God picks a new form of communication with the people. He picks a form similar to the sort of
individual communication manifested in the examples of his
relationships with Saul and Jon athan.
The first hint of David's existence that we get is when
Samuel tells Saul, after his first disobedience, that he will
eventually lose the monarchy. "Butnowthykingdom shall not
continue: the Lord hath sought him a man after his own
heart." - this, of course, is David. What this description means
is unclear. We first meet David when he is anointed by Samuel
after Saul's second disobedience. The Lord tells Samuel to go
to Jes~e's house for he has chosen a king from one ofJesse's
son's.
"And it came to pass, when they were come, that he looked on Eliab,
and said, Surely the Lord's anointed is before him. But the Lord said unto
Samuel , Look not on his countenance or on the height of his stature; because I have refused him : for the Lord seeth not the outward appearance,
but the Lord looketh on the heart." (I6:6-7)

Finally David, the youngest, is called.
"And he sent, and brought him in. Now he was ruddy, and withal of a
beautiful countenance, and goodly to look to. And the Lord said, Arise,
anoint him : for this is he. Then Samuel took the horn of oil, and anointed
him in the midst of his brethren: and the spirit of the Lord came upon David
from that day forward." (16:12-13 )

It is odd that while we are told that God looks on the heart
we are not told anything about what he sees in David's. In fact
all we get of David is a physical description of his beauty, a
description that sounds suspiciously like the initial description of Saul and, furthermore, a description of characteristics that sound just like what God explicitly told Samuel not
to look for. We are also told that the spirit of the Lord descends
on David, but we are not told that he was changed as in Saul's
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lectual, or verbal understanding of Him. His senses are overwhelmed, not his mind. When he sees David he has a similar
experience. He hears music, as before, and he sees this beautiful youth, whom we are told he loves. Perhaps he even sees
David's beauty as divine for the spirit of the Lord is with David.
David's coming before Saul is the only time that he is comforted, it is the only time that his melancholy is dispelled. It is
as if David's presence serves the same purpose for Saul as
God's. His reaction to David is also very much like his reaction to God. While he does not receive a new heart, we are
told that he loves David. With David's approach Saul sees a
glimmer of hope , a glimpse of his beloved. He sees that there
is a chance that the spirit of the Lord has not utterly forsaken
him.
This is not to say the Saul's relationship to David is perfect. While it is true that he feels closer to God in the presence
of David he at the same time sees David as a threat to his other
link to God - the mornu:chy. Saul has a paradoxical relationship to David. It is at the times when he sees David as the most
divine , when David plays for him, that he sees him as the most
threatening. The two times that we are told of Saul's greatest
anger towards David are when David is playing for him and
Saul attempts to kill him with his javelin. Saul's pursuing of
his hatred for David leads to an instance that I think portrays
this paradox of Saul's hatred for David coupled with his seeing the divine presence in David. In Chapter rg Saul has decided that he must kill David. He appeals to his closest relatives, to Jonathan and then to his daughter Michal, to kill
David. Both of them refuse to help him out oflove for David.
David meanwhile flees to Samuel in Ramah and Saul himself
decides he must pursue him there. He goes to Ramah expecting to find David, but what he finds instead is God.

Lord is with David, in all of Samuel I we never see God say
anything else to David. There is, in fact, a decided absence of
God's explicit appearance , particularly around David.
We do see , however, David's effect on the people around
him-particularly on Saul and Jonathan . I think that by looking at David's relationship with these two we will gain an understanding ofwhat kind of choice David is for the future king
oflsrael.
The first thing we are told of after the story of David's
anointment is that "the spirit of the Lord departed from Saul,
and an evil spirit from the Lord troubled him."(16.14) Saul's
longing for God has met with despair, Samuel has left him and
he has been told that the kingdom will be torn from him.
"And Saul said unto Samuel. .. Now therefore, I pray thee, pardon my sin,
and turn again with me, that I may worship the Lord. And Samuel said unto
Saul, I will not return with thee: for thou hast rejected the word of the Lord,
and the Lord hath rejected thee from being king over Israel. And as Samuel
turned abo ut to go away, he laid hold upon the skirt of his mantle, and it
rent. And Samuel said unto him, The Lord hath rent the kingdom oflsrael
from the this day ... [Saul] said, I have sinned: yet honour me now, I pray
thee, before the elders of my people , and before Israel, and turn again with
me that I may worship the Lord thy God." (15: 2'4-30)

It is as if Saul is a lover who sees all his ties to his beloved
slipping away from him. He is not concerned with the loss of
the kingdom in and of itself (this is actually the second time
he has been told he will lose it) but rather with the loss of the
gift of the Lord. He pleads with Samuel to pray with him so
that he might not lose all hope of feeling God's presence again.
But it is to no avail; his links with God are gone, and his only
hope of receiving the presence of the Lord is gone. ~e falls
into melancholy, the Bible says "and the evil spirit from God
came upon Saul, and he prophesied in the midst of the
house"(r8.rn). The use of the word "prophesy" to describe
Saul's depression seems ironic when compared to his previous prophetic rapture. He is at the other extreme of his experience of the divine, as far from God as he can imagine. What
his servants tell him is to call "a man that can play well."
Hence, David is sent for.

"And he went thither to Naioth in Ramah: and the spirit of God was upon
him also and he went on, and prophesied, until he came to Naioth in Ramah.
And he stripped off his clothes also, and prophesied before Samuel in like
manner, and he lay down naked all that day and all that night. Wherefore
they say, Is Saul also among the prophets. (19:23-24)"

The scene is almost identical to the scene of Saul's initial
rapture . Even the people's reaction is the same. But what is
interesting is the timing of this scene. The scene comes when
Saul is forced to search for David himself after all his followers refuse to help him out of love for David. Saul too is prevented from finding David by his love for God. It does not
seem to me coincidence that the scene of Saul's second rapture comes at the same time as his pursuit of David. The presence of God defeating Saul's attempts to murder David underscores the idea that somehow the presence of David goes
hand in hand with the presence of God. When David comes
on the scene so does God's presence and we see this most
clearly realized in the rapture seeking Saul.
In Jonathan, Saul's son, we find another person who is
greatly affected by his contact with David.

"And David came to Saul, and stood before him: and he loved him greatly;
and he became his armourbearer .. . And it came to pass when the evil spirit
from God was upon Saul, that David took an harp and played with his hand:
so Saul was refreshed, and was well, and the evil spirit departed from him.
(I6:21,23)"

There are two things that work to dispel Saul's melancholy;
the first is David's music, the second is his presence. I thinkit
is important that we are told that Saul loves David. What
causes the evil spirit to depart from Saul is listening to music
as it is played by a boy who we already know is "of a beautiful
countenance, and goodly to look to ." In a way the scene is
parallel to the scene of Saul's initial rapture in the presence
of God. In both cases the experience is transcendent but in
both cases it is also intensely physical. Although in the first
instance Saul is experiencing the presence of God, nevertheless, there is also something decidedly material about a scene
filled with singers and music. Saul "sees" the beautifulin God
in a corporeal sense, as opposed to having an rational, intel-

"And as David returned from the slaughter of the Philistine, Abner took
him, and brought him before Saul with the head of the Philistine in his hand.
And Saul said to him. Whose son art thou, thou young man? And David answered, I am the son of thy servant Jesse the Bethlehemite. And it came to

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�pass, when he had made an end of speaking unto Saul, that the soul of
Jonathan was knit with the soul of David and Jonathan loved him as his own
soul." (ITS7-I8:1)

man closeness that Saul and Michal attempt. Jonathan has
seen the hand of God work through David and realizes that
there is something superior about David. We are told how
much Jonathan loves David but the only mention of David's
love for Jonathan comes much later in a psalm he composes
after Jonathan's death. This is not to say that David does not
love Jon athan but there is a certain disparity in their positions.
The expression oflove that Jonathan turns to is the expression oflove, not that exists between equal people, but that
exists between man and God, a covenant. What Jonathan does
is bind David to him with God as an intermediary. Before
David leaves Saul's palace, after he and Jonathan have made
a second covenant, Jonathan says that the Lord will be "between thee and me for ever." An oath allows Jonathan to express his love for David in a way that does not require physical
proximity. Instead Jonathan has the Lord between him and
David.
So what do we see of David in all these stories of his life
with Saul and Jonathan? What do we see of David the future
king and chosen of God? One thing we do not see, as said before, is God having anything explicitly to do with David. His
voice is, with one minor exception, never heard from the scene
of David's anointment until the end of Samuel I. It is not exactly true, however, that God is not present. Having seen
David's interactions with Saul and Jonathan I think that God's
presence with David is made strikingly clear. When David
comes into the story both Saul and Jonathan find their experiences with God mirrored in him. Saul finds a form of his ecstasy in the presence of David. Before David approaches Saul,
Saul is as far from God as he has ever been, a state of melancholic prophesy. After David comes to Saul, God becomes
once again present in Saul's life. In someway, his presence is
equivalent to Saul with the presence of the Lord. In Jonathan's
case, he sees two things in David. He sees his own faith in God
mirrored in David's actions but he also sees God's work made
manifest in David. When he sees David, he sees the hand of
the Lord. Jonathan sees David's defeat of the Philistines repeat, in fact embody, the Lord's actions towards himself. His
way of expressing his love towards David, with covenants, is
the way that man relates to God because Jonathan has seen in
David the same thing he has seen in God. It is interesting to
note that the stripping off of his clothes that Jonathan performs when he makes his first covenant with David is the same
act of devotion that Saul performs when he has his second ecstatic experience.
Now let us consider the notion that David is a man that God
has chosen "after his own heart," I think that we see in David
a type ofleader that we have never seen before. David is not,
like Samuel or Moses , an intermediary between God and the
people, neither is he a leader like Saul who is fastened to God
though not really under His command. With David God finds
a new answer to the problem of the establishment of the monarchy. Israel's position when God alone was their leader had
two aspects. There was the political sense in which God led
the people, deciding which wars to fight, which lands to conquer etc., but there was also the fact that there is something
spiritually unique about a.people led by God. The nation

What has Jonathan seen in David that causes him to "love
him as his own soul"? The most obvious event is David's slaying of Goliath, but what is it about that event that makes
Jonathan love David? Jonathan has seen David, a young boy,
challenge and defeat the champion of the Philistines with only
his sling. However, it is not merely David's courage that
Jonathan admires. I think he sees something in David's action against Goliath that reminds Jonathan of his own contact with God.
"Then said David to the Philistine, Thou comest to me with a sword,
and with a spear, and with a shield: but I come to thee in the name of the
Lord of hosts, the God of the armies oflsrael, whom thou has defied. This
day will the Lord deliver thee into mine hand ... And all this assembly shall
know that Lord save th not with sword and spear: for the battle is the Lord' s,
and he will give you into our hands. (1T45-47)"

David's words and his faith in God almost mirror
Jonathan's at the time of his invasion of the Philistine camp.
Jonathan must see in David's success a repetition of his encounter with the Philistines. Both of them went into battle
against overwhelming odds with confidence in God and in
both cases God made clear the correctness of their belief. And
so Jonathan does not merely love David, as we are told of Saul,
but he loves him "as his own soul": Jonathan sees himself in
David. But Jonathan does not see an exact mirror of his situation in David's. David does not ask for a sign from God before
battling Goliath. While Jonathan had faith that God could
turn the battle in his favor, David has faith that God will.
Jonathan does not see an exact repetition of his miracle in
David's slaying of Goliath, for David's action is not the same
as Jonathan's. David's absolute confidence and the absence
of a sign in his case seems to me to show a different manifestation of God. While in Jonathan's case God responds to
Jonathan and helps him defeat the Philistines, in David' s case
God acts through David. There is no dialogue between David
and God. It is as if David's action of going against Goliath and
God's defeating of Goliath are the same act. God does not respond to David, David and God act as one.
Jonathan's initiation of his friendship with David represents this aspect of David's relation to God.
"Then Jonathan and David made a covenant, because he loved him as
his own soul. And Jonathan stripped himself of the robe that was upon him,
and gave it to David, and his garments, even to his sword, and to his bow,
and to his girdle.(18:3-4)"

This is the first of three covenants that Jonathan is to make
with David. The next is made before David flees Saul's palace
in Chapter 22, the third when David is fleeing from Saul in
Chapter 23. A covenant is an odd expression oflove, one that
we have only seen before between God and man, namelywith
the forefathers. Michal, Saul's daughterwho loves David, marries him. Saul, when he first meets David, takes him from his
fathers house. Jonathan sees, when he first loves David, that
David's relation to God does not permit this sort of man to

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Footnotes

whose king is God must necessarily have a special connection
to the divine. With the establishment of a monarchywe then
have two questions which we saw first addressed with Saul.
First, who would be merely a good king in a political sense?
In this respect Saul was a good choice, he won his wars and
behaved for the most part as is to be expected of a king. Second, how is a nation to maintain its relationship with God in
the face of His abdication of power to a monarch? It is David
who is the answer to this question. In the choosing of David
God picks a man who is first of all a good leader. Presumably
we find this out later in Samuel II, but I believe this similarity between David and Saul is already suggested by the fact
that they are both described as beautiful when they are first
introduced. More importantly, David's appointment also
serves as some sort of way of allowing the children oflsrael to
maintain their relationship to God. Having abandoned prophecy as the form ofleading his people, God finds in David, the
people's new leader, a way of maintaining a more individual
relationship with them. I think that the fact that Saul and
Jonathan's interactions with David parallel their interactions
with God point to what is unique about David. He is not an
intermediary between God and the people but rather a representative of God. Jonathan and Saul show us that people see
in David a manifestation of the divine presence. When David
acts they see God acting through him, when they feel David's
presence they feel God's presence. I think this is the way to
understand that fact that we are told "But all Israel and Judah
loved David because he went out and came in before them."
(18:16) It is not that David communicates God's will to the
people but merely that he is there. The spirit of the L~rd is
not alongside David but is in him.
Let us then take one final look at David, the man whose
actions are imbued with the divine spirit, this time after he
has become king. After the death of Saul, all the tribes oflsrael come to David and ask him to accept the monarchy. He
does, and we then hear his first decree as king.

1. All quotations are from the King James Version of the
Holy Bible.
2. All quotations are from the book of Samuel I unless
otherwise noted.

"And David said on that day, Whosoever geteth up to the gutter, and
smiteth the Jebusites , and the Jame and the blind, that are hated of David's
soul, he shall be chief and captain." (Samuel II, 5:8)

It is fitting that David's first decree should be in his name
and not the Lord's. After all David does not communicate the
word of God, but manifests it. His actions are not done in the
name of God, moreover, they are performed under the Spirit
of God. But perhaps it is also fitting that David's first action
as king is one that is violent and terrible. The mediation of
the prophets between the people and God was necessary partly
to shield the people from the terror of God as seen in the previously mentioned quote from Exodus "let not God speak with
us, lest we die." I wonder if David's first action as king is not
the action that most shows David to be God's representation.
For with the removal of the intermediate, with the approach
of the spirit of God within David, it seems appropriate that
the people would see again the horror that they fled at Mount
Sinai.

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�-

,

A Translation of EmileVerhaeren 's

"One Night"

Un Soir

*

Eli Wiggins

He, who of an eve and not age of ours, will ope'
Me up, disturb my verse in slumbers or in cinders,
Lend new life to far-off feelings, and surrender
To how we of today did arm ourselves with hope,

Celui qui me lira dans les siecles, un soir,
Troublant mes vers, sous leur sommeil ou sous leur cendre,
Et ranimant leur sens lointain pour mieux comprendre
Comment ceux d'aujourd'hui s'etaient armes d'espoir,

Let him know with what wild dash towards the fray
My Joy has hurled itself through cries, revolts and tears,
Into the proud and manly war of woes and fearsFor love to level them like conquerors their prey.

Qu'il sache, avec quel violent elan, ma joie
s' est, a travers les eris, les revoltes, les pleurs,
Ruee au combat fier et male des douleurs,
Pour en tirer l'amour, comme on conquiert sa proie.

I love my fevered eyes, nerves, brain, the blood wherein
My heart has life, the heart inside which lives my torso;
I love Mankind and too the world, and I adore so
The force my force can take and give the All and Man.

J'aime mes yeux fivereux, ma cervelle, mes nerfs,
Le sang dont vit moncoeur, le coeur dont vit mon torse;
J'aime l'homme et le monde et j'adore la force
Que donne et prend ma force a l'homme et l'univers.

To live is this: to take and give with jolly rush.
My fellows find themselves exalted just the same
As I myself feel hungry, heaving, hardly tame
At intense Life and its own wisdom's ruddy flush.

Carvivre, c'est prendre et donner avec liesse.
Mes pairs, ce sont ceux-la qui s'exaltent autant
Que je me sens moi-meme avide et haletant
Devant la vie intense et sa rouge sagesse.

Hours of Downfall or Grandeur! All is gone
Blurred and, in the blaze that is existence, bereft
Of former form; so long as Longing yet is left
In leaving, 'til Death, before th'horizon's wakeful dawn .

Heures de chute ou de grandeur!--tout se confond
Et se transforme en ce brasier qu'est I' existence;
Seul importe que le_
desir reste en partance,
Jusqu'a la mort, devant l'eveil des horizons.

The one who finds is thus a wiseman not above
Communing with the sweeping swarm, humanity.
The spirit dives now drunk in full immensity;
In order to discern with genius, one must love.

Celui qui trouve est un cerveau qui communie
Avec la fourmillante et large humanite.
L' esprit plortge et s' enivre en pleine immensite;
11 faut aimer, pour decouvrir avec genie.

One great kindness can fulfill the grating grope
Of knowledge; it exalts the beauty and the force
Of the world; foretells the basic bonds and source.
Oh you, who an eve and age is not ours, ope'

Une tendresse enorme emplit l'apre savoir,
11 exalte la force et la beaute des mondes,
11 devine les liens et le causes profondes;
O vous qui me lirez, dans les siecles, un soir,

Me up, see wherefore you're summoned by my verse?
'Cause in your time some hothead will have had to gauge
From his own heart, no doubt, the truth, the empty page,
To draw from it the meaning of the universe.

Comprenez-vous pourquoi mon vers vous interpelle?
C'est qu'en vos temps quelqu'un d'ardent aura tire
Du coeur de la necessite meme, le vrai,
Bloc clair, pour y dresser l' entente universelle.

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�A Literal Translation and a Verse Translation of
William Von Goethe's ''Nature and Art"

*

Natur und Kunst, sie scheinen sich zu fliehen,
Und haben sich, eh man es denkt, gefunden;
Der Widerwille ist auch mir verschwunden,
Und beide scheinen gleich mich anzuziehen.
Es gilt wohl nur ein redliches Bemuehen !
Und wenn wir erst in abgemessnen Stun den
Mit Geist und Fleiss uns an die Kunst gebunden,
Mag frei Natur im Herzen wieder gluehen.
So ist's mit aller Bildung auch beschaffen:
Vergebens werden ungebundne Geister
Nach der Vollendung reiner Hoehe streben.
Wer Grosses will, muss sich zusammenraffen;
In der Beschraenkung zeigt sich erst der Meister,
Und das Gesetz nur kann uns Freiheit geben.

Verse Translation
It seems that Nature always flies from ArtHas found and fast embraced it, though it flee;
And all aversion vanishes in me,
Till both with equal pull tug at my heart.

Upright pains and toil alone are blest!
And if at first in measured hours we bind
Ourselves to Art with work and spirit's mind,
Then Nature may burn freely in our breast.

Only an upright effort counts!
And if we once in measured hours
With spirit and industry bind ourselves to Art,
Then may Nature freely glow in our hearts again.

All learning, too, must listen to this call:
The unbound spirit strives in vain to stand,
To perch upon perfection's purest height.

This is how it stands with all education:
Unbound spirits will vainly
Strive for the completion of pure heights.
He who wants greatness must pull himself together;
In limitation only does the master prove himself,
And Law alone can give us Freedom .
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Eli Wiggins

Eli Wiggins

Prose Translation
Nature and Art, they seem to flee one another,
And they have, before one thinks it, found each other;
Aversion h as also disappeared from me
And both seem to attract me equally.

A Note ·on Goethe's "Nature and Art"

Man, to be great, must snatch himself up small;
For Confines limit Lords however grand,
And Law alone will lend us Freedom's light.

Whenever we translate Greek or French poetry at this
school, we strive first for literal accuracy and leave the style
ans the sound of our English mor e or less to unconsidered
chance. This I find unfortunate. It makes sense to translate
without regard to style someone like Aristotle, who obviously
gave no thought to it himself. But as soon as we set before
ourselves the task of Anglicizing a dialogue of Plato , which is
dripping with self-consciousness of syntax, meaning, and
their interplay, it is criminal to come up with an English version, no matter how painstakingly "accurate," andclaim that
it is a true translation if it doesn't sound good in our own language. And what is criminal with regards t o beautiful prose
approaches deadly sin when we slug our way through the poetry of Sophocles with the same plodding literalness that Aristotle deserved. (I think our essay-writing-or at least my
own-also suffers from this sole attention to meaning at the
cost of style.)
I find that the best translators are by no means the
Lattimores and the Fitzgeralds of to-day, who turn Horper into
a fusty old scholar, but rather Chapman and Pope , who may
well make Homer out to be a boisterous, wordstruck Elizabethan and decorative, neo-classical Georgian, respectively, but
who at least keep him a poet! I am most enamoured of the
mediaeval school of translation, through which Boccaccio's
11 Filostrato doubles in size, entertainment, and beauty to
become Chaucer's Troilus and Criseyde , or by which King
Alfred's Boethius can list "ensamples" from everyday life in
seventh century England. In our readings for the Goethe Preceptorial last semester, the translations of Faust by Kaufman
and Arndt, although they were in rhyming English verse which
which should leave them open to more innacuracythan prose,
disturbed me far less than Mueller' s rendition of Goethe' s
Botanical Writings. Mueller seemed to omit all the force and
vigor of Goethe's style, missed the strength of his choice of
verbs, and ignored the wonderful connections that Goethe
draws between disparate elements by the links of syntax alone
without descending to the grubby trouble of stating the likeness explicitly.
Therefore, after giving us as bare a literal translation of
Goethe's poem as I could, I decided to try my hand at turning
"Nature and Art" into an English sonnet. Despite Goethe's
insistence that the master proves himself by limiting his enterprise , I have chosen to disregard the limitless list of good
reasons against amateur college students slaughtering the
true works of art by presuming to render Goethe's poetry in
English verse. Amidst this process I feel that I have learned

to notice more about the brilliance of Goethe's poenythan I
ever would have had I stopped at the literal translation. It has
also been grand fun. Allow me to remark briefly, however, on
the inadequacies of my verse that mar its ever approaching
the elegance and beauty of the original.
In general, since English usually requires fewer syllables
to say something than does German (observe lines 3-5, rn , II,
&amp; 14 of the literal translation especially) , I was forced to pump
up the English lines with stuffing of my own in order to fill
the pentametre. I tried to do so with as much significance
and as little hindrance as possible , but I know that the least
amount of extra baggage slows the slick, unburdened journey
of Goethe's sonnet.
Another general problem is a perennial curse of philosophical poetry in English: whereas German, Greek, and
other languages have built their metaphysical terminology
from the simple , everyday language of their own tongues ,
English took the lazy route of borrowing all our complicated
words from French, Latin, and Greek. Latinate verbiage such
as "indusny," "education," "completion," "limitation," and
any other "tion" sand "ism" shave no place in English poetry.
Their German equivalents, however- "Fleiss," "Bildung,"
"Vollendung," and "Beschraenkung" - are quite natural constructs that sound no fancier than the simple words which
break them up. Philosophical poets in English have to be doubly clever: not only in the intricacy of their thought, but in
the subterfuge by which they trick their readers into following their thoughtlines without putting them off with un-English fancy-talk.
The greatest structural change in my translation was
in the rhyme scheme of the second quatrain. Goethe repeats
the ABBA structure of the first quatrain, setting off the tone
of the A rhyme, however, by slipping in "Bemeuehen" and
"gluehen" in place of the "fliehen" and " ziehen" in lines I
and 4. The "ue" diphthong is often rhymed with " ie" in German, but they are far enough near-rhymes to signify a changea sort of A,BBA1 • I despaired of achieving this subtlety in my
own version, and resorted to a complete switch in CDDC in
the second quatrain, which is still a viable form of Petrarchian
sonnet, but of course sacrifices the tighter unity of the octet
that Goethe achieves.
Goethe ' s rhyming alone comments beautifully on the
meaning of his poem. Two pairs of opposites are bound together in dual unity by the four rhymes of the first quatrain
alone . The A rhymes ("fliehen "-to flee from and
"anziehen " - to attract towards) point towards the inevitabil-

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Of Grammatology, Chinese Style

ity of opposing forces working together. They share the encompassing places of the first and last rhymes . Framed between them "gefunden" (found) and " verschwunden" (disappeared) compliment each other with equal opposition .
The final rhyme in the poem is also meaningful. In the last
line Goethe writes that law will give us freedom. Line I I
stresses how useless it is to strive for this freedom if we are
unbound . .A£, even the modern English spellings of" give" and
and "strive" suggest, they once rhymed in their Germanic
roots, and "geben" and "streben" dutifullyrhymein German.
It is wonderful how Goethe uses this rhyme to emphasize how
we can achieve nothing by our own will (as subject) striving,
but only when we submit to the strict exactions of scientific
method will this law (as active agent-subject) give us (as object-indirect, even) liberty.
I attempted, certainly, to make the poetic devices and the
structural requirements of my sonnet more than vapid and
empty formulae , but I think that after all I have made only a
rhymed rendering of Goethe's meaning, and have not written a poem. It would require a poet to do that, and he, like
Chaucer and King Alfred, would end up with a work similar
in premises, perhaps, to Goethe's sonnet, but with a poem
apparently independent from its germinal seed.
Goethe's poem is entirely composed of various yet complimentary weaves of self-referential threads. He wove them
so tightly and seamlessly together that my version can only be
an unravelling knot in comparison. But perhaps my fraying
edges can point to some of the beauty of the eternal boundlessness that pleased Goethe so much, and that he imitated in
his inimitable verse.

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Cordell D.K Yee

T

he title of this essay may require some explanation.
Shu means "writing," and tao might be translated as
" discourse." Shu-tao might serve as a translation of
"grarnmatology," discourse on writing. 3 Those hoping to read
something about Jacques Derrida-or perhaps waiting to
pounce on him-will be disappointed. The subject here is far
less theoretical and far more trivial than deconstruction and
the margins of philosophy. The subject is the material of Chinese text , specifically Chinese writing itself.
Writing is perhaps the most distinctive feature of Chinese
civilization. Few things separate us more from Chinese culture than its writing. Our writing is , more or less, a phonetic
script. Our letters are , more or less , attempts to represent
units of sound. Chinese script is logographic. Each character represents a word or, more accurately, a complete syllable.
The linguistic differences between Chinese writing and ours
are explained in detail in more than a few popular and academic works on the Chinese language,4 and I will not deal with
these differences any further. What is of more interest to me
is the difference in the value placed on the two kinds of writing as art.
For us in the West, writing has been at best a minor arr.
Normally we do not rush out to the National Gallery, say, to
look at samples of handwriting. With computer graphics
widely available , interest in handwriting seems quaint, nostalgic, and even backward. For us, wi-iting is usually not meant
to be noticed; it should not be obtrusive; it should not call attention to itself. We want to see past it to the words it represents. Reading efficiency is what matters. For us, writing is
not supposed to be a complicated matter. Its elements are as
simple as ABC.
In the Chinese scholarly tradition, writing was far from a
simple matter. Good handwriting was one of the crowning
achievements of the intellectual life. Virtually no one could
be considered as having any intellectual virtue without mastery of the art of writing. Ifwe ask what accounts forthe high
place ofwriting, satisfactory answers are usually hard to come
by-at least answers satisfactory to us brought up in the Western intellectual tradition. If we tum to traditional Chinese
works on the subject, we do not seem to get much help at first.
On the most important and most serious matters, Chinese
works tend to be long on assertion and metaphor-and short
on argument. In works devoted to the art ofwriting, we might
read that writing contains "profound secrets of change ," and
that it is "the integration of reason." This sounds promising,
but no explanation is given. Instead we will get comparisons
of writing to the flight of geese , the wings of a cicada, a firm

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mountain.s Understanding the Chinese art of writing seems
to be like reading inkblots. The art seems to be highly subjective, lacking in universality.
If we turn to the modern scholarship on writing, we fare
perhaps a little better. 6 At least the terms are easier to grasp .
In traditional China, from the seventh century on , the ability
to write well was linked to power, wealth , and privilege, even
more so than in the West. The government bureaucracy provided the main avenue of upward social mobility, and a prerequisite of government service was the ability to write. Writing was a form of cultural capital that helped one gain membership into a political and economic elite. This elite was
highly exclusive. During the sixteenth century, for example,
only one in 10 , 000 males could expect to pass the "advanced
scholar" examination and gain a position in the imperial bureaucracy.7 If the same standards were applied here , only one
student out of 100 classes at St. John' s would be awarded a
degree. With such tremendous odds against success, it is easy
to understand why those seeking economic and political advancement practiced writing diligently.
If there are any doubts about the relationship between economics and the value of writing, what has happened to Chinese writing in this century should dispel them. Take away
the political apparatus of the empire, and the importance of
good handwriting diminishes. Replace a managed agricultural economywith a capitalist market system and a somewhat
more liberal political regime, and the art of making money
becomes more important. In the modern world the art of
making money is not identified with the art ofwriting. In one
context the art of writing is the means to powe . In the othe
context it is a sign of power' specifically economic power-a
form of conspicuous consumption. One purchases works of
writing much as one buys antique furniture. The experience
of modern Chinese societies confirms that the art of writing
was of a certain value in a particular place for a period of time.
It is not of our time and place. In our time , it should go the
way of bound feet.
This is a strong conclusion, and there is a great deal of truth
in the account that leads up to it. But the argument has a number of omissions. Some are factual, but the most serious omission concerns method. It is possible to do political and economic analyses ofartwith one's eyes closed. I mean that such
analyses often emphasize context at the expense of the art itself. Such was the case in the account I summarized. And for
that reason, we do not find it fully persuasive.
So to make up that defect, let us begin to look at the writing itself.

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is a highly simplified
and
truncated view
of the development of Chinese writing.
Reading vertically from the
right, the first
four characters,

more figures composed of straight lines. The types of strokes
have been reduced to basically three: dots , lines, and hooks;
or points, lines, and angles. In the traditional criticism, the
standard script is described as square and straight. These adjectives are also classical Chinese geometric term s, and the
coincidence in terminology seems more than accidental.
What happened in the movement from seal to standard script
was thatwritingwas mathematized. Its forms became clearer
and more abstract, thus easier to read and reproduce. Writing transmits thewayin the sense of mathematical reason.
One of the ways in which the chart of styles is misleading is
in suggesting that characters in all styles are in a uniform size.
In fact, it is characteristic
only of the standard script
to be written in such a manner.
Here (Figure 2) the
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writer has supplied boxes
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around his standard forms
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as if to emphasize their
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regularity and uniformity.
The appearance of the text
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is suggestive of movable
type. We can imagine each
square representing a
piece of type. The standard
script does lend itself to
mechanical reproduction.
Its straight-line forms are
easier to carve than the curFIGURE 2.. WEN CHENGvilinear forms of the other
MING (I470-I 559) .
styles. Because it was a
DETAIL OF TsuI-WENC
good typeface, one might
T'INC CHI (ACCOUNT OF
TSUI-WENG PAVILION).
consider the standard
script to be a remarkable
technological achievement. As a typeface, it has been fairly
stable for more than ten centuries. Chinese printed texts from
the ninth century are still highly readable today.
This (Figure 3) is
an example from the
tenth or eleventh
century, a printed
edition of the Tao-te
ching.
If the development of a good type
style does not sound
particularly impressive, consider that we
are still waiting for a

wen i tsai tao,

THE FIVE MAJOR FORMS OF CHINESE

might be loosely translated as
ARE NOT SHOWN; FOR THE MOST PART,
"Writing transTHE ARTISTIC TRADITION WAS NOT
CONSCIOUSLY AWARE OF THEM. THE
mits the way."
WRITING IS BY CH'EN Po-CHIN (CHEN
It is typical of
BonN)' A PRESENT-DAY PRACTITIONER
Chinese sayOF THE ART.
ings in that its
tone of certitude is matched by the uncertitude about what exactly it
means. As we look at writing, at least a few ways of interpreting this statement will emerge.
For the sake of comparison, the saying has been written
four more times, each time in a different style. From right to
left the styles appear in more or less chronological order. The
rightmost style is known as the seal script, dating from the
third century B.C.E. 8 It is followed by the cursive,
semicursive, and clerical scripts, which are almost contemporaneous.
The style on the far left is the most recent style and dates
from about the second century C.E. It is probably the most
familiar to us in the West. It is seen on most Chinese public
signs, and perhaps most important for us, it is found on most
Chinese menus. It is sometimes called the perfected script.
When we move from right to left on the chart, it seems that
the other forms are striving toward it. The leftmost style is
also called the standard script. From a formal point of view,
the standard form seems to be the one from which the others
arise. The other forms seem to be deviations from it, the variation increasing as one moves from left to right. Even those
with little familiarity with Chinese script are able to sense the
rightness of the standard script.
The notion that a script can be right might be somewhat
disconcerting to those of us brought up to believe in the arbitrariness of the written sign. With some hard looking, though,
it becomes clear that something is not right with the seal
script. The seal script characters can be intricate and thus
difficult to memorize. Each character seems to present a different set of structural elements; each seems to have its own
organizing rules. In addition, writing in the seal script presents difficulties, since it is hard to tell where one stroke ends
and another begins.
The standard script seems to address those problems. The
contours of the characters have been simplified, as have the
components of the characters: we see more straight lines and
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ingprocess byincreasingthe spacing between characters. He
forces a reader to linger on each character. The writing calls
attention to itself, and when we pay attention to it, we notice
more deviations. The horizontals are not true horizontals,
but are slanted. We seem to be viewing the characters obliquely. The writing space appears to be three dimensional.
The characters seem to have volume, monumentality, a sculptural quality. We notice also that certain elements seem to be
incomplete. Elements normally joined or closed are left open:
we see open rectangles, angles without vertices. We get the
sense that we are viewing the characters as they are coming
into being. Here the lines seem to be reaching out, stretching out, toward each other.
The strokes themselves seem
to pulsate as a result of the
variations in their thickness.
At their best, characters are
often thought of as organic:
in traditional criticism , characters are spoken of as having bone, blood, breath. As
organisms, they have weight:
they must be shaped so as to
be able to stand and maintain
their wholeness. The example we have been looking
at does not exhaust the ways
in which one can make the
standard form new.
In this example (Figure
7), again in the standard
FIGURE 7. Su SHIH
script, the writer has perhaps
(Io36-noI). SECTION
tilted his horizontals even
OF CH'IH-PI FU
more than in the previous ex(RHAPSODY ON RED
CLIFF).
ample, and has altered the

satisfactory typeface for Greek lettering. I haven't really analyzed the Greek situation carefully, but these examples make
one source of the problem clear. 9

TAO TE CHING

(CLASSIC OF THE WAY AND
VIRTUE; FACSIMILE OF A SUNG
DYNASTY PRINTING). THE
BOOK IS OPEN TO CHAPTER II,
WHICH DEALS WITH MAKING

In Figures 4 and 5, the upper case forms are block letters,
mostly rectilinear. The lower case letters are curvilinear cursive forms. The two do not harmonize well and even irritate.
Having just asserted the importance of the standard script
for its legibility and mechanical reproducibility, I will go on
to say that the art of writing the standard script begins where
legibility leaves off. It does not take a genius or much talent
to write clearly. It does take something more than clarity to
lift writing to the level of art. The end of writing _q!li! art is
vitality. This is a quality seldom associated with typographic
forms , which seem static, inert, dead, with their boxiness and
uniform appearance. Writing as art aims to counteract the
inertness. It does so by departing from the norm .
Several departures
from the norm are illustrated on this example
(Figure 6). First, the
writer has altered the
spacing. On a printed
page, the characters are
as close together as they
can be without causing
confusion about word
boundaries. Here the
writer disrupts the read-

6.

PAGODA.

BEGINNING OF THE YEN
PAGODA PREFACE TO THE
BUDDHIST CANON.

SOMETHING OUT OF NOTHING.

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(778-865).

KuNG-

STELE AT HsliAN-MI

(596-658).

FIGURE

8. Lrn

SECTION OF RUBBING OF

CH'u Sm-

LIANG

FIGURE
cH'tiAN

49

proportions of his characters
so that they appear more
squat.
In Figure 8, in the standard script as well, the writer
has elongated his characters
and has varied the pressure
applied to the brush so that
certain strokes appear bolder
than others.
Excellence in the standard
script was measured in part
by how far one could depart
from the standard and still be
recognized as following the
standard. The same could be
said of the other styles of
script. Acommongoalwasto
produce vital forms of script.
In order to excel, one needed
to have some ingenuity, some

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manual dexterity, and some perceptiveness.
In this way writing bore the imprint of a person's mind. It
provided some indication of a person's mental capacities. It
was also important in shaping a person. Writing transmitted
the way in the sense of ethics. Those who mastered writing
developed discipline and excellent memories. They had to
memorize thousands of characters and their various forms.
According to one account, a student should spend eight years
studying the standard script, practicing writing it in various
sizes and imitating various masters. After that one studied
the semicursive script for three years, the cursive script for
five, the seal script for ten, and the clerical for five. 10 Fortunately, some styles were studied concurrently, otherwise one
would spend thirty-one years practicing and studying writing.
Much of the practice was tedious and repetitive. Success required patience and persistence. A dozen characters could
take as long as an hour to complete.
Mastering the art of writing also meant mastering its history. A student spent considerable time studying and imitating the works of past masters. Copying past works was not
simply a matter of exact reproduction. Too many factors
worked against a perfect copy. Variations in ink, brush, paper, even differences in breathing patterns, could affect the
outcome. One almost invariably fell short as soon as one put
brush tip to paper. In order to make progress one had to learn
to adjust as one proceeded, compensating for one's mistakes
so that the overall impression of the original would be preserved. Mastering the art of writing meant developing acertain resourcefulness and adaptability. (See Figures 9-1I.)
The practitioners held up most often as models were known
for the excellence of their characters. Thus, to imitate a model
of writing was to imitate the thought and action of a virtuous
person, atleastfor awhile. Writing practice was an opportu-

FIGURE

9. Lrn KuNG-

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FIGURE II. RUBBING AND COPY COMPARED. THE
"DEFECTS" OF THE COPY ARE MORE APPARENT ON CLOSE
EXAMINATION-NOTE THE DIFFERENCES IN ANGULARITY, IN
LINE VALUES, AND IN THE SHAPE OF THE HOOKS.

nityto enterthe mind ofanotherperson, to try to understand
why a certain stroke was executed in a certain manner. Writing provided an escape from one's personality, or perhaps a
better way of putting it, writing enlarged one's personality.
One acquired, in small ways, traits one would not have acquired otherwise.
In the course of one's practice, one would copy out classic
works and commit them to memory. This was no mean feat,
since the core texts contained more than 400,000 characters.
As one worked to master writing, one also worked to acquire
a tradition. Writing transmitted the ways of past excellence.
The selection of texts a person copied beyond the core works
said something about what that person valued. In that sense
also, writing revealed the person. This aspect of writing
should be familiar. The last time I looked the application to
St. John's asked about one's reading. I suppose we would
judge a person who could recite the works of Aquinas in the
original language differently from one who could recite the
works of Danielle Steel in the original language.
As we do
here, so they did
in
imperial
China: as an index to a person,
what shaped a
person, what a
person valued,
HEN MIN RIBAO
writing was an
important con FIGURE I2.. MAO TSE-TUNG (I893-I976).
sideration in deMASTHEAD OF ]EN-MIN JIH-PAO (PEOPLE'S
termining
a
DAILY).
person's fitness
to serve in the government. The cooperation of mind and
body, the harmony of wholes and parts, achieved by the mastery ofwriting, were analogues of the harmonious society that
was supposed to be the goal of the ruling elite. Ideally the
Chinese official would find political direction in the written
word, just as the philosopher-king would find it in his or her
vision of the good." The notion that there was a resonance
between writing and politics survived even until recently.
Chairman Mao's understanding is shown by this sample ofhis
handwriting (see Figure 12).

FIGURE IO. MODERN COPY OF

9·

cH'tiAN. SECTION oF

FIGURE

RUBBING OF STELE AT

THIS COPY SEEMS TO BE A FAIRLY

HstiAN-MI PAGODA.

SEEN AS A WHOLE,

GOOD MATCH, STROKE FOR
STROKE. IT IS CLEAR THAT IT IS
BASED ON

Lrn

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KuNG-CH'tiAN's

WORK.

50

This is the masthead for the People's Daily, written by Mao
in 1949, just before the Communists took over China. The
characters are still recognizable as standard script, though
there are a number of deviations. Mao introduces cursive
strokes into the last character. The characters are not uniform in size. Mao enlarges the first and last characters,;en
meaning "people" and pao meaning " report. " In the past
reports were directed upward. This newspaper addressed to
the people reverses that process. Mao also changes the direction of the "legs" of the character Jen . Normally they would
point down. Mao bends them upwards, almost reshaping the
legs into wings. From this sample alone, one might read
Mao's revolutionary tendencies or at least infer a change in
political emphasis: he aims to lift up the masses.
So far I have been describing the political consequences of
wTiting in ideal terms. It was of course all too easy to corrupt
the political process. Those who could not write well could
cheat by paying someone else to write for them or by purchasing an office. There could be mistakes in judgment or just
poor judgment when it came to evaluating writing. The imitation of models could become slavish. Writing could be used
primarily to inculcate a respect for authority, a reverence for
precedent. These are good qualities to instill in one 's subjects if one is interested in maintaining a repressive political
structure. It has to be granted that writing often served the
purposes of autocratic rule. Even so, it was also a democratizing force. The equipment required to write was not too
costly, and once acquired, the art of writing enabled a man to
rise above his social class. In order to justify their mandate,
emperors were not exempt from the expectation th11t office
holders write well. They often sought criticism of their work,
and their ministers might be able to couch political criticism
in terms ofartistic criticism. In one famous example, the emperor asked for advice because he was having trouble holding
his brush straight. One ofhis ministers replied, "If the heart
is straight, then the brush will be straight." It would have been
ideal if such freedom of expression had regularly spread to
other subjects of discourse, but at least the potential was there
for more openness and liberality.
Writing also had its value beyond politics where it often
served as recreation. It was a means ofliberating oneself from
daily cares, especially if politics proved to be too dirty a business. Just as often writing was a matter of serious discussion.
Examples ofwritingwere analyzed. Good pieces were canonized. There were at least four standards for canonization. A
piece of writing must have stood the test of time, or have appealed to large number of people over the centuries. It must
have merit as fine art: it must have vitality. It must be beautiful; it must impress with its order, elegance, and form. It must
be original, and it must have influence. What I have just summarized are not only standards of Chinese writing, but also,
of course, some of the criteria Scott Buchanan applied to
books.
One might question whether works of Chinese writing
prompt interpretations and raise questions, thus satisfying
more of Buchanan's criteria for greatness. I would argue that
they can do both. Subject to interpretation is the movement

of the brush, the writer's
thinking as he wrote, the
qualities expressed in the
writing, and its points of
excellence.
The interest of the piece
shown in Figure 13 goes beyond what it says.The text
here deals with a familiar
topic: whether one can
learn to be a sage. The text
says that the key is to be
without desire. The writing itself suggests a somewhat different answer. The
work is quite large , more
than five feet high. BeFIGURE I3. TUNG CH'Icause the characters are
CH' ANG (I555-I636).
TRANSCRIPTION OF T'UNG
large, they are difficult to
SHU (PENETRATING THE
execute. The coordination
BooK OF CHANGES), BY
between mind and body is
CHOU TUN-I (IOI7"?3).
quite impressive here , especially considering that
the writer was about seventyyears old. By writing so large, he
seems to answer the question. Yes, one can learn to be a sage,
and you are looking at him.
As for whether works of writing can raise questions, questioningwas an important aspect of the art of writing. Refinement of the art itself depended on a questioning of the past.
Furthermore, in writing a word, one might think about it,
question what it means, clarify what it means.
As an example, we can take a
rendition of the Chinese characters for the infinite (see Figure 14).
It is barely recognizable as standard script because of the
indefinition of its boundaries.
Something like this indefiniteness, this vagueness, this difficulty
in comprehension, is associated
with our notions of the infinite.
The writing itself thus suggests
something about the meaning of
the term.
Practiced at its best, the art of
Chinese writing involves a fusion
of thought and feeling. It is an art
critical ofitself, and in that respect
it may be considered modern-of
our time.
FIGURE I4. CHIN
In our time the question of
NUNG (I687-I763).
whether Chinese achievements
Wu-LIANG (INFINITE),
belong in our education has been
DETAIL OF AN ALBUM.
the subject of some debate. The focus has mainly been on books. But
the books have not been entirely persuasive. To many in the
West, they do not seem to depend on reason, they often seem

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�to undermine it, and they often do not seem to encourage
questioning. The problem with the discussion so far is that
its scope has not been wide enough. If one looks only at books,
one gets a limited view of the Chinese intellectual tradition.
We risk misunderstanding that tradition by taking what we
would call its philosophical works as representingwhat is best
in it. Chinese scholars often put their highest thought not into
discursive prose, but into poetry, painting, and calligraphy,
the art of writing. Their highest expression took place not
only between the lines, but in the lines. The Chinese elite did
much of the work we try to do, but by a different object of study.
Their art of writing is in a way a reflection of who we are.
In the end East does meet West. China, after all, gave us
the technical foundation for our modern world. In Novum
Organum, Francis Bacon identifies printing, gunpowder, and
the magnetic compass as the three defining inventions of the
modern age. ' 2 All three, as far as we know, originated in
China.
The list of Chinese contributions to the West might be expanded without too much effort to include the art ofwriting. '3
If there is a Chinese contribution to the liberal arts, the art of
writing is it. Those who learned it well were freed from having to labor in the fields and allowed to participate in the political process. Learning and practicing it required considerable leisure. In addition, the Chinese art ofwriting represents
the study of grammar at its most basic and perhaps most intense . It involves a kind of rhetoric and a kind of geometrical
construction.
I do not advocate that everyone go out and pick up a brush,
but I think that a more informed look at Chinese writing is
possible. At the very least, consideration of the centrality of
writing in China should adjust how we view certain Chinese
paintings.
Such paintings often depict scholars writing or discussing
writing amid
spectacular
natural
surroundings. In
the West, these
have typically
been interpreted
as "landscape"
paintings showing the insignificance of human
beings in relation to nature.
This view is gen-

erally a misrnterpretation. The
paintings are generally not transcriptions
of
scenes, but metaphors. They affirm the power of
human activity,
specifically writing. The natural
scene often emanates from the
scene of writing,
as in Figure 15.
In Figure 16
the eye's movement up the pictorial space culminates in writing.
To write is to be
taken from one's
FIGURE I6. SHIH T'Ao (I64I-CA. I7IO).
urban setting. To
PAINTING OF WILDERNESS COTTAGE. THE
write is to be able
POEM AT THE TOP LEFT READS: "THE SHEEN
OF BAMBOO SURROUNDS THE WILDERNESS
to make new
SCENEJ THE IMAGE OF A COTTAGE RIPPLES
worlds. To write is
IN THE FLOWING RIVER."
also to participate
in the processes of
nature. The interplay ofyin and yang, ultimately responsible
for the phenomenal world, is imitated by the alternation of
black and white in Chinese writing. Through writing, human
beings resonate with the natural world.
Notice in Figure 17 how the writing at the top of this painting merges with the branches of the pomegranate.

Footnotes
r. This is a slightly revised version of a lecture presented
on January 23, 1998, at St. John's College, Annapolis.
2. Wade-Giles transcription is used here.
3. Shu-tao is also one of the traditional Chinese terms for
the art, or "way," of writing.
4. Forexample,JerryNorman,Chinese (Cambridge: Cambridge University Press, 1988.
5. The examples come from Shu-p'u (Treatise on writing) ,
completed in 687 by Sun Kuo-t'ing. A translation of the treatise appears in Two Treatises on Chinese Calligraphy. tr.
Chang Ch'ung-ho and Hans H. Frankel (New Haven: Yale
University Press, 1995.
6. In this paragraph, I am following, perhaps caricaturing, the types of analyses offered in Literacy and Power in the
Ancient World, ed. Alan K. Bowman and Greg Woolf (Cambridge: Cambridge University Press, 1994).
7. Useful accounts of the Chinese examination system are
Ichasada Miyazaki, China' Examination Hell: The Civil Service Examinations oflmperial China, tr. Conrad Schirokauer
(New York: Weatherhill, 1976); and Ping-ti Ho, The Ladder
of Success in Imperial China: Aspects of Social Mobility, 1368rgn. (New York: Columbia University Press, 1962).
8. More accurately, this style is known as the lesser seal
script. There are forms of writing older than this one , but for
centuries the artistic tradition was unaware of them.
9. Useful discussions of Greek typography can be found in
Greek Letters: From Tablets to Pixels , ed. Michael S. Macrakis
(New Castle, Del.: Oak Knoll Press , 1996).
rn. This regimen was prescribed by Feng Fang in the seventeenth century in "Hsueh shu-fa" (Learning the art of writing). Feng' s essay is translated in Tseng Yuho, A History of
Chinese Calligraphy (Hong Kong: Chinese University Press,
1993), 240-42.
rr. The philosopher-king is compared to a painter in Plato,
Republic, Book 6, 484C-D (see also Book 7, 540A-B).
12. Novum Organum, Book I , Aphorism 149.
13. It has influenced a few Western artists, such as Robert
Motherwell.

FIGURE I8. CHENG HSIEH (I693-I765).
PAINTING OF BAMBOO. THE TEXT CONSISTS OF A
NARRATIVE AND POEM ON THE "INTOXICATING"
BEAUTY OF BAMBOO. IT IS UNCONVENTIONAL IN
THAT IT READS FROM LEFT TO RIGHT.

Notice in Figure 18 how the writing at the bottom of this
painting provides the ground, the nourishing soil, for the bamboo. Writing transmits the Way. The Way is Nature . Nature
is writing: it is a book for us to read. Thus we can affirm with
Jacques Derrida that there is nothing beyond text.

Su ggestions for furth er r eading
Billeter, J ean-Frarn;ois. The Chinese Art ofWriting. New
York: Rizzoli, 1990.
Chiang Yee. Chinese Calligraphy: An Introductio to Its
Aesthetic and Technique. 3rd ed. Cambridge: Harvard University Press, 1973.

FIGURE IS. K'uNTs 'AN (Ifo2"'73).
DETAIL OF SHAN
KAO SHU/ CHANG
(TALL MOUNTAINS
AND LONG RIVERS).

FIGURE I7· HUANG SHEN ( I687I766). PAINTING OF A
POMEGRANATE.

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�Calculations of Moon Crater Depths

*

Anna-Clare Milazzo
Jill Nienhiser

Objective

to obtain pictures of the moon that included the terminator,
which is the line that approximately separates the" day" from
the "night" on the moon. There is no terminator with a full
moon and thus, our images were procured during the first
quarter. The terminator also takes into the account the angle
at which the sun would appear to an observer on the moon.
The sun increases in height by one degree for every degree
shift from the terminator.
An image of the nebula in Orion (M42) was also taken in
order to determine the scale factor in the images. The two
stars very close to the nebula (SAO 132321 Theta2-0rion and
SAO 132322) are convenient since they are separated by one
arc-minute.

The depth of craters on the moon's surface can be determined with simple geometrical concepts. Using a ChargeCoupled Device (CCD) camera with a telescope, we obtained
pictures of moon craters. By using a picture of stars in the
Great Nebula in Orion, we were able to find the scale factor
between visual distances and the known radius of the moon.
The corresponding triangle comprised of the length of the
shadow cast by the sun across a crater; the distance of the crater from the terminator, the radius of the moon , and the depth
of the crater can be demonstrated.

Setup

Analysis

All images were taken in the St. John's College Observatory.
The pictures of the moon were obtained with a 12"
Schmidt- Cassagrain telescope and a Meade CCD camera. For
some of the images, a dark cover was held over roughly three
quarters of the telescope aperture to diminish marked turbulence in the Earth's atmosphere.
Images of a star were taken to determine the proper focus
of the telescope with the CCD camera in place. This focal
length is far different than the usual eyepiece used. Twisting
the adjustment knob clockwise by quarter turns brought the
image into focus.

Procedure
Once the telescope was focused,
we centered the moon in the
finderscope and took a number of
images. In order to proceed with
our calculations, it was necessary

x
z

T enninator

For our calculations, it was necessary to treat the sun as a
point source at an infinite distance from the moon . The
method for determining the depth of the crater required knowing the radius of the moon , the length of the shadow within
the crater, and the distance from the crater to the terminator.
The diffraction in the atmosphere of the earth and the irregular geometry of the crater were ignored to simplify the
calculation.
The scale factors between the images of the moon and the
actual distance were found in the following manner.
The apparent
moon's diameter is
known to be approxim ately 30 arc-minutes.
The unit of an arc-minute
was measured from the
image of the Great
Nebula.

0

Light Somte

Figure 2

d

Figme 1

Figm-.:. 3

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terminator (D) =173.81 km. Solving for H with the above equation yields H= 2.67 km.

The radius of the moon (R ) is known to be about l738km.
Using the diameter, the scale factor between images and t~e
actual moon may be determined. Arate which expresses this
scale factor is 30 arc-min.:2 *Rkm:: l arc-min: n5.87 km.
In figure l, the crater's shadow and the depth are related
to each other through the angle at which the sun light strikes
the crater. Sin(theta)= H/L. Figure 2 shows the crater (rotated to demonstrate the coordinate system we are using) with
the sunlight striking it at angle 8. The center o_f ~he ~oon is
our origin of the xyz coordinate system. Combmmg figure l
and figure 2, Rand H lie in the xy plane. Land D are parallel
to the xy plane and are thus used as straight lines rather than
as arcs. Let it be noted that the rotation shown in figure 2
allows us to treat the moon as a disk. However, the results
represent a three-dimensional moon. Figure 3 demonstrat~s
the relation between the two similar right triangles formed m
the crater and in the sphere of the moon. Because Land Dare
parallel to one another, sin(8)= DIR. Thus, a proportion b~­
tween the two triangles may be created as H:L::D:R. Our final equation is H= (L *D)/R.
The crater we chose to do our calculations upon is located
in the picture of the moon attached. The length of the shadow
(L)=3/r3arc-min. Thus L=26.74 km. The distance from the

Conclusion
The method employed allowed us to determine the crater
depth using a very simple triangulation. However, there are
expected errors in this procedure. Besides irregular cr~ter
geometry and diffraction, error is expected from measurmg
distances with a ruler and then converting those numbers to
kilometer. Yet, the geometry is elegant and gives a reasonable
approximation.
Acknowledgments
We would like to extend our thanks to Hai Sun and Nelson
Hernandez for their help.
Bibliography
Kelsey, Hoff, and Neff. Astronomy: Activities and Experiments. Kendall/Hunt Publishing Company: Iowa, 197r.
Levy, David. The Sky: A User's Guide. Cambridge University Press: Cambridge, rggr.

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�' he Half-Day
T
Aaron Pease

The cup lay on his lap, bouncing back and forth beween
his knees as the bus lurched up the hill. He cradled it delicately as if it were a chalice, his thumbs caressing the raised
gold lettering: "William Ripley, Award for Excellence, 2nd
Grade." Katie Man done received one too, and he let his head
fall back against the seat as the ramifications of that fact
drifted past. The bus jolted over a pothole and disrupted his
thoughts, much like Miss Dranski when she had pierced
through his daydreaming fog to inform him that he had won
the award. He had burst with pride as he walked through the
narrow columns of desks to the teacher. But that had changed
when he turned around with the trophy and realized that all
eyes were on him. He couldn 't see them all, but he could feel
them, and they burned like searchlights on his reddening face.
He knew that some of them were smirking, and he wished he
could just fade back into the blackboard. The eyes followed
him as he returned to his desk, and he had spent the rest of
the morning feeling guilty for having been singled out. The
embarrassment was gone now, andhe leaned back in his seat
and wondered somewhat abstractly if the trophy counted as a
Christmas gift. The bus turned to the left and his lean toward
the window was accelerated bythe impact of an airborne body.
The boy pushed the cup forward as his shoulder and cheek
were squeezed against the window.
"Frankie, get off me!"
"I couldn'thelpit, Billy, the bus turned and threw me over
on your seat." The boy answered in a husky voice as he
dropped his equally husky body into the seat across the aisle.
He wiped the hair from his eyes and grinned at Billy. "I didn't
mean to ."
"You almost busted it!" Billy thrust out the cup as evidence
and just as quickly pulled it back as the other boy' s hands
swiped outward and narrowly missed it.
"It's plastic," Frankie sneered.
Billy ignored this and scooted over to the window. He
watchedintentlyas the close-set houses staggered past, many
decked with ribbons of Christmas lights that streamed down
the roof and crested over the gables like waves breaking onto
the shore. Their porches hung from the eaves like jowls, and
they seemed as much fit for Chrismas as a dog wearing reindeer antlers. His reverie was interrupted as Frankie plopped
down in the part of the seat Billy had just vacated. Billy turned
his head, but in order to shield the trophy he kept his thin
shoulders parallel to the window.
"You can't see it, Frankie, it's mine!" he wailed.
"C'mon Billy, lemme see it," Frankie replied, his hand dis-

regarding the frail fortress surrounding the object in question
just as his voice had effectively overridden Billy's entreaty.
Billy turned away from Frankie's groping hand until his shoulders were pinned between the wall of the bus and the seat. His
head, which he could no longer turn toward Frankie, was
wedged into the corner to protect against any sorties from
above.
Frankie's body followed his hand until he lay on top ofBilly,
who had slipped down and become a tent folded about his Ark.
Frankie rested atop Billy and continued negotiating. "C'mon,
I just wanna take one look at it. It'll just take a minute."
Billy didn't answer at first, satisfied with his defenses and
content to wait for the bus stop to break the siege. He knew
that the next stop, which was his, wasn't Frankie's, even
though it was only five blocks from his house . Yet, uncomfortable with the silence that followed his own refusal to answer, he howled into the muffled vacuum , "Frankie, get off
me! You can't see it! I know you won't give it back!"
Frankie leaned his head toward Billy. "What's that, Billy?
I can ' t hear you. I just want to see that dumb plastic trophy. "
"GET OFF ME!" With this last protest Billy jerked his elbows up, barely missing Frankie's head. Frankie, taken aback
by Billy's general convulsion, jumped away. He sat back on
his side of the aisle and regarded Billy with a hurt look. "I
was just playin', Billy. You don't have to get all worked up
over that stupid thing. See ifyou ever get to play football with
us again."
Billy lay prone on the seat, his head leaning against the side
of the bus as he looked over at Frankie. His cheeks were
flushed and he still held the gold cup tightly in both hands, a
situation that became precarious as the bus stopped suddenly
and he rolled forward and almost fell into the leg space between the seats as his pivoting lower half found the floor . He
gathered himself into the seat and stood up, trying to save a
last vestige of dignity from Frankie' s steady laughter. He
stepped into the aisle and pretended not to notice Frankie
staring up at him as he moved toward the door. A feeling of
elation caught him as he stepped off the bus into the wet snow.
The imminence of Christmas washed over the now distant
schoolday and the revelation of his newfound link with Katie
pierced through the colorless sky.
"Wanna race?" This, accompanied by a hard clap on
the back, sent a chill down his spine. He cringed as Frankie
continued, "The winner gets the trophy."
Billy shook off the hand and jumped away. "Frankie, it's
notyoursit'smine! Youcan'thaveit! getaway from me! go

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home! " He had nowhere to go now., and could only spiral
fruitlessly to keep Frankie away. Frankie stepped around him
and grabbed the trophy. They stood there, Frankie grasping
the cup while Billy held the base in his trembling hands.
"Go!" With that Frankie took off. Billy was pulled along
behindhim but tried to resist. The cup tore away from its base
and into Frankie's thick hands. Billy stopped and stared at
the plastic square that remained in his grasp.
"C'mon , Billy, finish the race or I'll win!" But Billy did
not hear him. He looked at the meaningless lettering with an
empty gaze. He gave off a low moan and began to run, gripping the remnant tightly in his hand, past Frankie, past the
silent houses whose Christmas finery could not assuage the
scowl with which they always regarded each other, the street,
and now the boy stumbling past.
He ran home, shedding muffled sobs into the still air as
soon as he had breath enough to release them. He stormed
up to the house, flung wide the front door, and charged up
the steps, his voice fluctuatingwith his movements until they
were both cut off by the slamming of his bedroom door. He
had passed his bewildered mother who, alarmed, followed
quickly after him . She had been cleaning the house again, as
she had just gone to Confession and revealed her many small
misdeeds to Father Mitchell. But that didn't help and maybe
she had forgotten a few, so she decided one was laziness since
vigilance can't be a sin. She was a thin woman, on the tall
side with faded red hair. Her features were sharp, much
sharper than in her youth, as if time, instead of dulling, had
refined and narrowed them, each passing trial and tribulation
honing and whetting a blade so fine it soon would be nothing
more than an edge.
She came up to his room, and managed to filter his story
through his sobs. She wiped his tears away, and gave him an
embrace that seemed to surround him with the warmth and
comfort of the womb. But then she spoke.
"Who did this, William?"
It was on the tip of his tongue, but, when he opened his
mouth to speak, he found he could not answer. He remembered that time when Frankie and his buddy Craig had ambushed Steve and plastered him with snowballs. Steve had
gone home and told his mom, and she called the school, and
the next day Frankie and Craig got paddled by Sister Elmira.
They hated Steve after that, and even Billy felt that Steve had
breached some unspoken agreement. So Billy did not answer.
His mother pressed his hand tighter and asked again. But
there was something else, something more than the mere realization that his friends' punishments could be much worse
than anything his parents doled out. He was ashamed that he
had allowed Frankie to bully him and take his trophy. He
wanted it back. But he realized now that he had to do more
than just get it. He didn't want to be the baby who cried until
he got his lollipop back. He had to get it back himself, somehow. Even as the thought occurred to him he knew it was
wilder than any daydream he could concoct, but his resolve
remained in defiance of his child's logic.
He remained silent. His mother, caught between an objectless indignation and a compassion that was the hopeless

cons01t of justice, abruptly rose and released his hand. She
left the room on the verge of anger, not wanting the boy to
witness her sudden swing of emotion. Children were so unpredictable , one moment wailing as if they were mortally
wounded, the next moment going to great lengths to defend
their oppressors. She tried to remember what it was like to be
a child, but it was like trying to catch a handful of dust motes
wafting through a lonely shaft of sunlight in an old, cluttered
room.
He spent his solitude lying on his bed, gazing at the bare
pedestal of the trophy. The shame was still there, but even
now he could not muster any resentment against Frankie. He
began to think that, in refusing his mother, he had done something Frankie would understand and sympathize with, and
that somehow the indefinable but everpresent connection
that bound all children had between them been strengthened.
He hadn't tattled, and somehow that salvaged some of the
pride he had left at the bus stop.
His reverie was shattered by the ringing phone. His mother
yelled through the door that it was for him, and he got up reluctantly and went to the phone. It was Craig. Billy gleaned
from him there was a football game down at the public school
in a half-hour. This was a difficult process because Craig,
whenever he became excited or was saying something funny,
sounded like a braying donkey. As he hung up the phone,
the full import of the call hit him. By now everyone would
know that Frankie had taken his trophy, that he was a wimp
and a pushover and couldn't stick up for himself. He dreaded
what they would say to him, but he decided to go anyway, not
so much because he knew that eventually he would live it
down, but because he couldn't (and didn't want to) avoid his
friends forever.
He walked down the street slowly and resolutely, like a
criminal being led to to his execution who, with the hope of a
reprieve inexplicably fresh in his mind, is determined that,
whatever the outcome, he would dignify his own memory and
that of others. His head still ached from his previous exertions, and his tears were still caked on his face like dry creek
beds. He concentrated on the houses looming before him ,
filling his mind with their every detail, as if their massive immobilitywould somehow bring him to a halt. They we e huge
and rambling and mysterious, monuments to a faded intention of opulence that once crowned the hill overlooking the
town. Theywere meant to be a gilded gateway, but were now
merely a distraction from the working-class neighborhood
which lay beyond. Their images rose up within him, stone
bulwarks stemming the emotional tide within. But he kept
moving, and one after another they vanished from his imagination like afterthoughts.
He was the last to arrive as he half-slid, half-walked down
the slushy slope to the field. As he crunched through the
ankle-deep snow he was met by a flying football, which he
caught despite his thick mittens. He looked hard at each boy
there, searching their faces for some shared secret or an unpleasant smile, but he found nothing. Only Frankie seemed
to avoid him. Billy was caught now between that simple, deceptive elation that only implies the absence of worry and a

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�Frankie's sturdy, wideboned face. The only reason he could
imagine that Frankie was not astride him and pounding him
into the ground was that he had gotten luckier than he would
believe possible. He crouched, poised to run, yet he knew full
well that he would take his beating in peace. It had not occurred to him that what he had been playing was a game, and
that what he had done was not only an essential part of the
game, but if done well, could rouse the respect, admiration,
and even the fear of his peers. The pride that he had just discovered he possessed he figured everybody else had too , only
more of it. Like the child who usually understands the joke
too late, he thought that what he had just understood, everyone else had known for a while. This pride would teach him
to endure pain and defeat, not because it was the nature of
pride, but because he had felt pain and been defeated and
probably would continue to be , and he needed a way to cope
with it. And Billy, who in his awe of Frankie saw him as the
kid in the rocket ship reaching for the stars, like the poster in
the hallway at school, knew Frankie must have the same pride,
but not the pain , the defeat, or the loss. No doubt Frankie
would deal with the pitch and roll in his otherwise steady upward trajectory with the same necessity as a plane lowering
its flaps and adjusting its rudder to maintain its altitude.
But Frankie did nothing. He was helped to his feet and with
merely a glance at him mumbled, " Damn , Billy, you almost
broke my neck. "
The game didn ' t last much longer. Billy felt again that
simple elation but this time gave in to it. He felt indistinguishable from Frankie or Craig or any of the others , and he basked
in the anonymity. So he was not surprised when he went with
everybody else to Frankie ' s to watch HBO and drink hot
chocolate, even though his parents expected him home for
dinner.
They piled through the side door, throwing off snowcaked
gloves, hats, coats, and the damp socks rattling mound in their
boots. They tumbled down the steps into the rec r oom; the
TV sprang to life , and they nestled into the deep cushioned
couches.
" I gotta go to the bathroom."
"Upstairs to the left."
Billywalked up the stairs . The wet, uncomfortable elastic
of his sweatpants forced him to shuffle up the stairs with short
steps as if a chain was binding his legs together. He stepped
out into the reassuring blackness of the hallway, the soft light
of the kitchen to his right aglow with the sounds of Frankie's
mother preparing food, and to his left a muted blue haze emanated from the otherwise dark living room. He was in the bathroom only for a moment, and he stepped back into the hallway. H e stood there for a moment, enj oying the stillness of
the house, the noises of activity remote enough to allow him
to contemplate them.
He tiptoed into the living room. The television was on, its
mahogany casing intricately embroidered, and it crouched in
the corner, roaring not with sound but with light, which
bathed the room in blue. It was absorbed by the metallic ornaments which hung on the metallic tree . Across from the
tree, Frankie' s burly father lay in a lounge chair with his feet

guarded, suspicious aspect that he knew he could n ot ignore.
No doubt they were waiting for him to mess up (drop a ball,
miss a tackle, trip) and then the floodgates would open. He
remembered a time over the summer, when theywere all here
playing baseball. Somehow he had managed to get a hit, and
as he led off first base, he gazed up at the deep blue sky and
thick white clouds which had broken free of the encircling
trees, and became entranced. One of the clouds looked like
a dragon, and he imagined himself a knight rearing his white
charger before galloping across the blue expanse to save Katie.
Meanwhile, the pitcher had thrown the ball over to Frankie at
first base, who had leisurelywalked up to Billy and tagged him
out. He had walked back to the makeshift dugout shamefaced,
the angry cries of his own team burning his ears. He had
messed up in the worst way: he had done something worthy of
being made fun of and had hurt his team's chances ofwinning.
He had determined then that something like that would never
happen again.
The teams were picked up. The best athletes in the class,
Frankie and Craig, displayed a political savvy that rivalled
even the most polished politician of Tarn any Hall. They managed, day in and day out, during recess or after-school, to place
themselves and a select few on the same team.Using cajolery,
jerryrigging, glad handing, and threats, their dynasty showed
no signs of crumbling. Billy, as usual , was on the other team,
ready once again to play the New Jersey Generals to their
Harlem Globetrotters, although this was an imagined
match up between the Steelers and the Cowboys.
The outcome was never in doubt, but Billy surprised even
himself with his play. He caught all the balls thrown to him
and otherwise managed not to be an embarrassment. As the
game was winding down , Craig hiked the ball and pitched it
to Frankie, who , despite his bulk and the sliding snow, dodged
tacklers half his size. Billy saw that Frankie would run his way
and began to move forward. As would-be tacklers dove and
missed , some intentionally, he realized a collison was inevitable . He realized that he too could dive and miss, but overriding that thought was fear, a fear mixed with a pride that
could stomach any outcome but the discovery that he had been
afraid. He was running full speed now, and Frankie saw him
and made n o effort to spin away. At the last moment Billy
threw his whole body sideways , almost on all fours , and hit
Frankie directly at the knees.
" Fuuck! !"
The expletive was quickly muffled in the snow. Billy turned
around, his body trembling and weak from the release of
adrenalin. Frankie rolled slowly onto his back, his face caked
with fast-melting snow that concealed any tears. He repeated
his first shocked reaction several times with a low moan. He
had landed on his face.
"Frankie, are you okay?"
"Whoa, Billy, you almost flipped him! "
Everyone was torn between looking at Billy and the unfamiliar sight of an upended Frankie, so they reserved their
stares for one and their words for the other.
That was it, then . Billy clenched his fist and just as quickly
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again at his prize. It seemed to be in motion , fading slowly
back into the mantle through the double row of pictures whose
reflections continued through the mirror. He felt like he was
witnessing a procession, the cup a ceremonial grail moving
through the everpresent review of courtiers , whose plastic
smjles (as always grasping the significance of nothing) and
gaudy dress were outshone by the faceless block of wood and
its priceless burden. The vision continued to drift regally away
from him; he was in the court of a king, he concluded, and
the chalice was a gift to the king. Or maybe it was from the
king. His back caught the hard edge of the banister, and the
vision dissolved into the warm blue glow of the living room.
He turned towards the basement door and went downstairs.
"Frankie, I gotta go home."
"All right, see ya. "
The others were glued to the television and didn't bother
to echo Frankie. Billy didn't mind, and he pulled on his coat
and boots. He sprang up the stairs and out into the night. He
walked around Frankie's house to the sidewalk and gazed
through the front window into the living room. It flickered
still with the soft blue light which Frankie's family would
gather around as if it were a hearth. This comforted him, and
as he walked down the sidewalk, he thought again about the
trophy. Maybe itwasn ' ta king's to give or a king's to receive;
maybe it was still his somehow even though it remained in its
proper place on Frankie' s mantle. He continued home, wrestling unsuccessfully with the problem as the falling snow caressed his cheeks and drifted peacefully about the haloed
streetlamps.

up. He was still in his work clothes and he was snoring, head
thrown back. The features of his face seemed a foundering
ship slowly sinking into the plump expanse of his cheeks.
Billy stopped, his breath drawn inward. He saw it. It was
on the mantle, reflected in the mirror as if to prevent any initial disbelief. It had been r eplanted on a nondescript block of
wood, and was flanked either side by pictures ofFrankie' s several brothers at various dances and proms. They all seemed
to be escorting the same girl, a child-woman wrapped in a glittering glovelike dress which revealed more than was intended,
and whose mountainous, overarching mass of hair made superfluous the balloons and confetti meant to serve as a backdrop. He was already moving toward it, slipping noiselessly
past the sleeping man. He was filled with the hopeless desire
which follows hard upon the realization that had he never seen
it again he would have been none the worse. Slowly his hand
reached upward towards the cup as he raised up onto his tiptoes.
"What you doin' boy?" Billy jumped. Frankie's father was
sitting bolt upright in his chair, looking at him. He retracted
the footrest, got up, and lumbered towards Billy. Billy shrank
back, but the cold fireplace stopped him, and as much as he
wished to turn and scramble up the chimney, he knew the fireplace was fake. The father was close now, and he reached over
Billy's head (so that Billy winced in spite of himself) and took
the trophy down. His face softened as he gazed at the gold
plastic.
"I know why someone like you would be jealous and want
something like this. Francis told me he got it from his teacher
for bein' the hardest worker in class, you know, bringing his
grades up. I think it's important to work hard, 'cause that' s
how you get anywhere in life. He got to stand up 'in front of
everybody and they all clapped for him . The teacher talked
to me a while back about his deficiencies, not puttin' forth an
effort and so on, so this time I'm kinda eager to see his improvement. Usually I just throw his report card in the trash,
'cause that's usually what's on it. Francis told me some kids
was tryin' to take that trophy from him on the way home but
he fought 'em, though there was enough of them that they still
managed to break it. He came home on the verge of tears so I
went right downstairs and fixed it up as best I could. You
wasn't one of them, was you?"
"N-no sir."
"I didn't think so. You don't look the type. Francis, he
gets a hard time of it at home. His brothers are always mes sin'
with him, and Maggie and I are so busy at the mill we can't do
anything about it. I guess I can be a little hard on him too. I
wish I was at home more, and I could spend more time with
him, throwin' the football and whatnot, but I'm gettin' old
and can't do the things I used to. But I got him a bike and one
of them Atari things, so I imagine he'll be too busywith them
to notice. I'm proud of him, though, real proud. Now don't
you go takin' this now."
He placed the trophy back on the mantle, tousled Billy's
hair, and walked out of the room, his cheeks billowing with
pride. Billy stood quietly for a moment, and then began to
make his way across the carpet. Halfway, he turned and looked

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�Language and Mind: an Examination of the Phaedo
and Other Dialogues of Plato

*

Alan Rubenstein

Among the first dilemmas a student of philosophy faces is
whether to proceed with the belief that the truth is commensurable with his own intellect. What is the discussion of philosophical topics supposed to achieve? Do we , by making
speeches and challenging the ideas of other's speeches, advance ourselves toward any real goal which we can call truth?
One might suggest that philosophy is mer ely a game of words
or perhaps a means to some other limited end and that our
language has n othing to do with reality except perhaps to
name it in a superficial way. This dilemma is dearly a crossroads at which a student must decide what philosophy will
mean to him-what will be at stake in his study. In this paper,
I will investigate Socrates ' position on this question of intelligibility and, as a consequence, explore his ideas on the relationship between language and reality.
Socrates believes in the intelligibility of the world. His way
of understanding man 's r elation to truth represents a defense
against the looming threat of skepticism and misology. It is a
peculiar kind of defense, h owever. Belief in th e intelligibility
of the world is not a conclusion to which one comes from an
argument. It is, itself, the foundation of argumentation. In
th e Phaedo, the intelligibility of the world becomes a central,
although often implicit, issue at stake in the discussion.
Socrates explains what it really means either to assert or deny
that some truth can be gotten at through argumentation. The
defense of the notion that our world is intelligible is , in part,
the plausibility and attractiveness of the arguments which rest
on it as their foundation. Another aspect of its defense is the
ways in which it contributes to and stems from a more virtuous lifestyle. The first task of this paper will be to make explicit the implicit issue of intelligibility in the Phaedo and
show the ways that Socrates convinces his interlocutors (including us as readers ) that believing in intelligibility is permissible as well as beautiful.
The second part of this paper will focus on the difficulties
which accompany holding such a position. Socrates mentions
Anaxagoras as one of his early influences, but claims that his
adherence to intelligibility led him to an extreme position on
what could be apprehended by a human mind and an extreme
denial of the role of sensible phenomena in causation. This
denial forced Anaxagoras into hypocrisy when he tried to explain the specifics of how things come to be and pass away.
Socrates' view is that the extreme of Anaxagoras is in need of
reconciling with the facts of everyday life , yet this is difficult
to accomplish without abandoning intelligibility and once
again placing truth in the ever-moving sea of sense-experience.

Socrates manages to accomplish this reconciling, however,
by positing a system where words, or 'A.oym ', are at the center
of the cause of generation and corruption. Unfolding how this
can be so will be the goal of the third part of this paper. Language is an activity of the r ational intellect and it is an image
of the reality that truly is to the same extent as are the sensible
objects. Part of Socrates' system is an assertion that we, as limited beings , can n ot commune directly with reality, its ~lf, and
thus we must r ely on images of that reality. In this way, truth
is commensurable with our minds but not limited to what they
can encompass. Which images we make use of, however, is
the crucial question . Our avenue to truth lies not in the images which are the sensible objects , but in the images which
are our language, our speeches, our A.o yot , which express
them an d, at the same time, point to the something universal
and eternal. I will make extensive use of the Republic in order to investigate what it means for there to be images of reality which are different in kind.
At the end of this third section of the paper, I will look specifically at the relationship between the A.oym and the forms ,
or ,,. nori'. This is a necessary task as the forms are obviously
crucial to Socrates' idea of what the reality is which language
images and also what the truth is at which argumentation
aims. In this sub-section, I will refer to the Parmenides, in the
hope that by addressing Parmenides' challenges to the young
Socrates and his idea of the forms I can find an avenue into
understanding the mature Socrates' idea of forms and language. This section on the nori will be somewhat more speculative than what proceeds it. What I intend is to give an interpretation of the relationship between the A.oyot and the El.Ort
which will make sense of Socrates' system of an intelligible
world articulated through language.
r. The Attractiveness oflntelligibility

Introduction
The explicit issue at stake in the Phaedo is the immortality
of the soul. This issue is set in the dramatic context of an account of the last day of Socrates' life. At one point, Socrates
says, "I do not think that anyone who heard me now ... could
say that I am babbling and discussing things that do not concern me. " (Phaedo 7ob) The issue of whether the soul perishes at the death of the body is, obviously, a critical issue for
Socrates and his friends at this moment. There is another issue, though , which is central to the argument in the dialogue
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of whether or n ot the world is intelligible; whether one can
get at truth through argumentation . As the interlocutors , especially the Thebans Simmias and Cebes, find problems with
Socrates' argument, the implicit question is raised whether
any answer to such an important question as immortality can
be convincing or comforting. This issue of intelligibility is
appropriate to the dramatic events of the dialogue because
on it depends the question of whether debating with one's
colleagues into the meaning of things is the right activity for
a man about to die and, moreover, for any man who wants to
live rightly in the ultimate sense. To put it bluntly, if the activity of argumentation is not directed toward a truth which is
real in the deepest sense then Socrates has wasted his final
hours and the majority of his life. Thus , the Phaedo becomes
another defense of the philosophic way oflife.
The activity of dialectic rests on the notion that the world
is ultimately understandable. If it is not, then all that is left is
the activity of the contradictor:

spite his distance in spac.e and time , Echecrates feels this anxiety. We , as readers, feel it as well. By means of this interjection, Plato temporarily removes the walls between the levels
of the dialogue. It is appropriate that he should do so at this
moment because it is here that the second main issue of the
dialogue comes from out of the background to the fore of the
debate . As living beings, Socrates' listeners at every level feel
the importance of the issue of immortality. As students of
philosophy, the same importance exists for every listener in
regards to the intelligibility of the world. The two possibilities which Phaedo suggests are (a) that we are worthless critics or (b) that the subject admits of no certainty. Either of these
options amounts to a confession of the incommensurability
of our intellects with the truth. These two possibilities will
resurface as the alternatives to intelligibilitywhich loom over
the discussion at all times. What is at stake is the way oflife of
all those who search for truth through argumentation.
Mi so logy
The interjection of Phaedo's narrative voice allows us to
see Socrates' reaction to the anxiety into which his interlocutors have been plunged. Phaedo describes him as " sharply ...
aware of the effect the discussion had on us. " (Phaedo 8ga)
When Phaedo returns to his recounting of the events in the
cell, it is significant that the discussion he takes up is between
Socrates and himself. Phaedo is a participant in the jail-cell
argument only at this place- only when what is at stake is argumentation , itself. The man who disappears into anonymity
as the narrator of the dialogue takes on a real dramatic personae for this discussion only. This is another case of blurring
the division between levels of the dialogue in order to examine argumentation directly.
Socrates begins his rebuttal of the Thebans ' objections by
stating how much is really at stake in them. The following interchange shows where he believes one' s priorities should lie:

"You know how those in particular who spend their time studying contradiction in the end believe themselves to have become very wise and that
they alone have understood that there is no soundness or reliability in any
object or in any argument" (Phaedo gobc)

Socrates' task in responding to Simmias and Cebes is twofold. He must convince them that their objections do not disprove that the soul is immortal and he must convince all those
present that dialectic is not a worthless endeavor because the
world is ultimatelyintelligible to the mind of man. The former
task is the more explicit. What I will first demonstrate is that
the latter task is implicitly present in the dialogue. Iri doing
this, I will show wh at it means to Socrates for the truth about
things to be ultimately intelligible. Socrates' innovations regarding language , which will be the focus of the succeeding
sections of this paper, can be better understood with this
meaning as a backdrop.

"Tomorrow, Phaedo, (Socrates) said, you will probably cut this beautiful hair.
Likely enough , Socrates, I said.
Not if you take my advice, he said.
Why not? said I.
It is today that I shall cut my hair and you yours, if ou a gum nt di es on
us, and we cannot revive it." (Phaedo 8gbc)

Simmias and Cebes' Challenge to Intelligibility
Plato uses the multi-leveled nature of the dialogue to
present the issue of intelligibility. After Simrnias and Cebes
raise their objections, Echecrates and Phaedo-the men in the
town of Phil us discussing Socrates' final hours long after the
events occurred-re-enter the dialogue for the first time. The
action of the dialogue is moved to one level up -on ~ level
closer to the reader's point ofview. This happens when Phaedo
says,

By suggesting that Phaedo cut his beautiful hair, Socrates
expr esses his belief that the death of the argument is more
worthy of mourning than the death of a man. He also suggests
that if the argument dies , beauty will somehow be sacrificed
with it, implying a close connection between truth and beauty.
This is on e indication that the issue of what is beautiful h as a
proper role in developing one's opinion regarding the n ature
of argument. It is not the rebuttal of any single argument, of
course , which should occasion such mourning, but rather the
death of argumentation , itself. Simmias and Cebes introduce
a state of perplexity by presenting arguments that seem reasonable and convincing. More important than the particulars
of the Thebans' objections , the interlocutors are discouraged
by the very fact that there seem to be two mutually exclusive

"When we heard what they said we were all depressed, as we told each
other afterwards. We h ad been quite convinced by the previous argument
and they see med to confuse us again , and to drive us to doubt not only what
had already bee n said but also wh at was goi ng to be said, lest we be worthless critics or the subject itself admitted of no certainty." (Phaedo 88c )

Phaedo was present in the jail cell, feeling the anxiety at
the prospect of unintelligibility. Echecrates, hearing about
the discussion at second hand, feels the same anxiety, as is
made clear in his response, "By the gods, Phaedo , you have
my sympathy, for as I listen to you n ow I find myself saying to
myself: "What argument shall we trust?'" (Phaedo 88c) De-

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�ideas which are both appealing. If things are left in the state
of confusion which they introduce with their alternative arguments, it will seem to indicate to all that argumentation is
a worthless enterprise and the only 'wisdom' lies in skepticism and distrust.
After promising to fight the objections raised "as long as
the daylight lasts," (Phaedo 8gc) Socrates introduces this danger of skepticism or ' misology. ' Misology arises

factory answer. They are fearful that their objections may really be devastating to Socrates' argument. Consequently, all
the interlocutors would be hard pressed to believe in the productivity of any argument regarding such an important matter as immortality.
However, belief in intelligibility inspires much courage,
as Socrates shows them. He tells them that he, like the swans
of Apollo, is gladly singing before his death. Socrates' song is
his argument and he will not be so fearful as to leave it halfcompleted because of the threat that any objection would be
too strong for the argument to bear. Therefore, he says, "you
must speak and ask whatever you want as long as the authorities will allow it." (Phaedo 85b) Simmias responds to this with
a statement which shows that he , too , has a tendency toward
believing that the world is intelligible and that this is cause
for a courageous attitude:

"When one who lacks skill in arguments puts his trust in an argum ent
as being true, then sh only afterwards believes it to be fal se- as sometimes it
is and sometimes it is not-and so with another argument and then another ."
(Phaedo gob)

This experience, common to all students of truth, forces
one into a decision . Either one can become a skeptic, believing that they alone have understood that there is no soundness or reliabilityin any object or in any argument, or one can
maintain their trust in the intelligibility of things and therefore continue to search for truth through argumentation .
Socrates tells Phaedo that one is not compelled to accept the
first of these alternatives. He explains this when he says,

"I believe, as perhaps you do , that precise knowledge on that subject is
impossible or extremely difficult in our prese nt life, but that it shows a very
poor spirit not to exa mine thoroughly what is said about it, and to desist
before one is exha usted by an all-round investigation ." (Phaedo 85bc)

It is no matterthat 'precise knowledge' (aa q&gt;cc; w)Evm) is
near impossible on matters like immortality (a position which
Socrates also maintains , as I will discuss later) . One must have
the courage to pursue the matter with his intellect as far he
are capable. This courage is a product and a cause of the notion that the truth which is sought is commensurable with our
minds.
Despite Simmias' invocation to courage, the interlocutors,
including Simmias himself fall into the fearfulness I described
earlier when both The bans put forward their piercing objections. Thus it is necessary for Socrates to, in Phaedo 'swords,
" (recall) us from our flight and defeat and (turn) us around to
join him in the examination of their argument." (Phaedo 8ga)
Courage, again, stems from belief in intelligibility. During
the discussion of misology, Socrates gives one more exhortation to the courageous behavior which the search for truth
represents. He says,

" If there is any system of argument which is true and sure and can be
learn ed, it would be a sad thing if a man .. . should hate and revile (arguments)
all the rest of his life, ande deprived of the truth and knowledge of reality."

(Loeb, Phaedo god)'

The possibility of there being a true and sure system of argument, Socrates suggests , should keep one from becoming
a misologist. It is because Socrates will not accept the possibility that the world is unintelligible that he tries so fervently
to deter his listeners from becoming mere contradictors and
not seekers of truth.
Courage, Beauty and the Choice oflntelligibility
Plato does not present his readers with any solid proof upon
which Socrates stakes his belief in intelligibility. Instead, he
creates events an d speeches which suggest that the search for
truth is a worthy endeavor because it is beautiful and because
it is connected to ethical virtues such as courage. One point
at which he suggests the connection between courage and the
belief in intelligibility is immediately before Simmias and
Cebes make their objections. The Thebans are hesitant to
bring up their objections, for which Simmias offers the following reason:

"We should not allow (µl] napwiµEv) into our minds the conviction that
argum entation has nothing so und about it; much rather we should believe
that it is we who are not yet sound and that we must take co urage and be
eager to attain soundness." (Phaedo goe)

The hortatory subjunctive, 'µri naptwµcv' indicates that
Socrates is delivering an exhortation to act in a certain way.
He is saying 'let us not pass into our mind the hatred of argument.' Given the choice-and it is a choice, not a compulsionbetween believing that argumentation is faulty or believing
that argumentation is the only avenue to the truth, Socrates
indicates that the latter is the choice made by the courageous
man and the lover ofbeauty. This position is consistent with
the one which Socrates puts forward in the Meno when he says,

"Both of us have been in difficulty for some time, and each of us has
been urging the other to question you because we wanted to hear what yo u
would say, but we hesitated to bother you, lest it be displeasing to you in
your present misfortune ." (Phaedo 84d)

Simmias is expressing a lack of confidence in Socrates'
courage to take up their objections given his present circumstances. This can, of course, be understood as simple politeness to a man who has only hours left to live. However, there
is more behind the Thebans' hesitation than Simmias says.
These men know that they hold a threat to all of the interlocutors' trust-including their own-in the possibility of a satis-

"I would contend at all costs both in word and deed as far as I could that
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for the things one does not know, rather than if we believe that it isnot possible to find out what we d9 not know and that we must not look
for it."(Meno 86bc)

Cebes, for it requires a thorough investigation of the cause of
generation and destruction" (Phaedo 95e) It is here that
Socrates again raises the issue of intelligibility, this time presenting the difficulties and limitations which accompany it.

Here, as well as in the Phaedo, the essential connection
between holding that the world is intelligible and leading a
virtuous life is made evident.
The view that truth is intelligible to the mind of man is an
idea too close to the foundation of all argument to be proven
in the conventional sense. One would have to use argumentation to validate argument. To understand this difficulty, one
only needs to imagine a conversation with a 'true' and uncompromising skeptic. The would-be proponent of the proof
forintelligibilitywill always be accused of ' sophistry' orwordmixing and will never get off the ground unless it is agreed
upon, in an axiomatic way, that some sort of truth is accessible through discussion. This axiom (from 'asw~,' worthy)
does not compel its acceptance. However, it attracts acceptance with its beauty and its inspiration to lead a courageous
intellectual life. Socrates makes the case for accepting this
axiom not only by the things he says, but by the very act of
spending his last hours in philosophical conversation. For that
matter, he makes the case by the way oflife he has always led,
centered as it was around dialectic. If Socrates' life has an appeal to us and to his listeners, then the axiom of intelligibility
will attract acceptance.

Natural Science
In this investigation, Socrates gives a brief autobiography
of his struggles with causation early in life. The earliest part
of this struggle was his interest in natural science' (n:cpL
&lt;j&gt;uocw~ LO't'op1..av). Socrates describes the fruits of this early
experience when he says, "This investigation made me quite
blind even to those things which I and others thought that I
clearly knew before." (Phaedo g6c) Socrates became disillusioned with natural science because its net effect was to confuse him. Even the simplest problems came to be puzzles. For
example, Socrates says,
"I will not even allow myself to say that where one is added to one either
the one to which it is added or the one that is added becomes two, or that the
one added and the one to which it is added become two because of the addition of the one to the other." (Phaedo 96e)

Socrates' account makes it clear that he became disillusioned with this method of inquiry into nature because it led
away from intelligibility, whereas he was convinced that the
proper method of explaining generation and corruption
should lead toward intelligibility. The axiom of intelligibility
forced Socrates to look elsewhere for the final answer to this
question of cause.
It is important to understand what this method of inquiry
referred to as 'n:Ept &lt;j&gt;uaEw~ LO't'Optav' is and why it should
lead one to confusion as it did for Socrates. There is an indication of the answer to this in the image Socrates describes of
an eclipsing sun. He says,

II. The diffi.cultyofintelligibility
Introduction
"Thus prepared, Simmias and Cebes, (Socrates) said, I come to deal with
your arguments." (~ g1b)

Socrates, as he proceeds to deal with the explicit challenges
which Simmias and Cebes have raised, maintains this notion
of intelligibility as an accepted axiom from which he will make
his counter-arguments. The issue of intelligibility recedes to
the background during his rebuttal of Simmias' objection.
However, it comes to the fore again when Socrates deals with
Cebes'. Cebes has potently challenged Socrates by assenting
to much ofwhat he has said but maintaining that immortality
has not yet been established from this. This partial agreement
makes his objection more plausible to the listeners and therefore more threatening to their sense that an understan'dable
answer can be found. Socrates restates Cebes' objection saying,

"I thought that I must be careful to avoid the experience of those who
watch (moJtouµEvm) an eclipse of the sun for some of them ruin their eyes
unlessthey watch (mcoJtO&gt;Vtm) its reflection in water or some such material. A similar thought crossed my mind, and I feared that my soul would be
altogether blinded ifl looked (~AE Jtwv ) at things with my eyes and tried to
grasp them with each of my senses" (~ ggd)

The method of investigating nature that confused Socrates
attempts to understand it through the act of perceiving sensible phenomena. The verb 'OKon:£o.&gt;' has the meaning of to
look about' and also 'to contemplate or consider.' (cf. Liddell
and Scott) The image gets its power from the ambiguity of
looking with the eyes as opposed to look.ingwith the mind. As
is the case in many places throughout the dialogues, vision
and contemplation, seeing and knowing, are paired in an imagistic way. However, this ambiguity is dropped in the second sentence when the word '~AEJtcov' - a looking which is unambiguously with the senses- is used. This word, and generally the image of looking into the sun, suggests why natural
science confuses: it looks for truth through instruments of the
body, making secondary the role of intellect. A further indication of this is the image of an eclipse of the sun, in particular. An eclipsed sun, unlike that which we see day to day, is

"To prove that the soul is strong, that it is divine, that it existed before
we were born as men, all this, you say, does not show the soul to be immortal but only long-lasting ... indeed, its very entering into a human body was
the beginning of its destruction." (Phaedo 95cd)

In order to convince Cebes, Socrates must show him that
the soul is not a more durable thing of the same kind as the
body, i.e. long lasting,' but that it is something eternal.
Socrates does not address Cebes' objection directly at first.
He says, "This is no unimportant problem that you raise,

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obscured in a way that can mislead one to believe it can be
looked at without causing damage. Only during an eclipse,
when it seems safe to look, could one be blinded. Looking at
an eclipse of the sun is analogous to investigating the truth of
things by means of the facts of daily life which we perceive
with our senses. It does not seem that one is being blindedi.e. losing their ability to make things intelligible-yet this is
what is happening. Any thinker who seeks to challenge the
notion that knowledge is perception must convince his challengers that they are deceived. After all, the most commonly
held and intuitive' view is that those things which we perceive
are the most true things of all. Natural science, the mode of
investigation which Socrates shies away from, is blinding to
his soul. It leads to un-resolvable confusion.
The question remains, however, why should investigating
truth through visible phenomena lead to such confusion?
Socrates only gives a few examples of the kind of causes which
natural science yielded for him. One of these is the addition
of one and one, cited above. Another is the idea of growth being caused by food, for food "adds flesh to flesh and bones to
bones." (Phaedo 96d) The difficulty Socrates might have had
with these explanations of cause is that they are simply additive. They point out that where there were two things there is
now one or where there was one there are now two, but they
do not answer the question of why? in the way that a true
theory of causation should. Socrates says of the natural scientists' kind of answer to the placement of the earth in the heavens,

rect everything and arrange each thing in the way that was
best." (Phaedo 97c) This is the activity of the rational intellect-to aim at what is best-and therefore, ifMind is the cause
of all things, the cause of generation and destruction is reducible to the most advantageous way things can be arranged: I
never thought that Anaxagoras, who said that those things
were directed by Mind, would bring in any other cause for
them than that it was best for them to be as they are." (Phaedo
98a)
Socrates claims, however, that this theory of cause fails in
its application. Anaxagoras himself was unable to explain the
generation and destruction of things without abandoning
Mind and ascribing material causes to them: "The man made
no use of Mind, nor gave it any responsibility for the management of things, but mentioned as causes air and ether and
water and many other strange things." (Phaedo 98bc) These
material causes hearken back to the additive causes of the
natural scientists. Socrates gives an example of the difference
between what Anaxagoras should have said and what he actually said when he explains cause in respect to his own rational
mind. Rather than say that Socrates is in his jail cell because
his bones and sinews are arranged in the way that they are,
Socrates rightly points out the real cause of his being there:

"One man surrounds the earth with a vortex to make the heavens keep
it in place, another makes the air support it like a wide lid ... they believe
that they will some time discover a stronger and more immortal Atlas to
hold everything together more." (~ 99c)

If Anaxagoras really means that Mind directs all things,
then Socrates believes he should be able to offer an explanation for their generation and decay, not by reference to ether
and air, but by reference to what Mind considers more right
and honorable. Anaxagoras' suggestion leads one to hope that
the cause of all things can be explained relatively simply based
on the principle that Mind on the grand scale functions like
mind on the individual level. This hope is the one that Socrates
would not have exchanged ... "for a fortune." (Phaedo 98b).
These hopes are nonetheless dashed, however. Mind may be
the cause, but it is by no means simple to sort out the best and
most honorable reasons for all the events we experience.
Here, again, the image of the eclipsing sun is instructive.
On the one hand, as I discussed above, the image points to
the mistake of trying to grasp truth through the senses. The
image also points to the futility of trying to comprehend
(CJKontw) the source of all truth. This source of all truth is, in
Anaxagoras' system, Mind and, in the metaphor, the sun.
Mind may be-even, perhaps, must be-the cause of all things,
but it can not be apprehended directly. Recall Simmias' comment about the difficulty, or even impossibility of gaining
precise knowledge about a subject like immortality (cf.
Phaedo 85c). The Greek there for 'precise knowledge' is
aaq&gt;t~ nOtvm, which can also be rendered 'to see clearly.' To
Socrates' thinking as well, it is impossible, or at least only
possible for a very few, to see the sun or to understand the ordering Mind clearly. This is, perhaps, why Anaxagoras fails
in the application of his system. It does not mean, however,

"For by the dog, I think these sinews and bones could long ago have
been in Megara or among the Boeotians, taken there by my belief as to the
best course , iflhad not thoughtitmorerightand honorable to endure whatever penalty the city ordered rather than escape and run away." (Phaedo
98e-99a)

Looking for answers to such questions in the visual phenomena always simply yields more observations and more
questions. No material answer will ever be 'strong and immortal' enough to answer the question, 'why is the Earth held
together?' or 'why does food add flesh to flesh?' The type of
answer which is appropriate to such questions becomes clear
in the next section of Socrates' autobiography.
Anaxagoras and Mind
Socrates says that, after renouncing the method of natural
science, he developed a new method of his own. His account
of this new method begins with a description of his encounter
with the theory of Anaxagoras who assigned Mind as the cause
of all things. Socrates describes his response to finding this
theory by saying, "I was delighted with this cause and it
seemed to me good, in a way, that Mind should be the cause of
all." (Phaedo 97c) It should not be surprising that Socrates
was excited by this idea. In it, one has intelligibility of the
world at its purest. If the cause of all things is the working of a
rational mind, how could our rational intellects not be commensurable with the truth about reality? Here was a suggestion that would not yield endless confusion. Socrates explains,
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some such material.' This is, first of all, another subtle indication of the mixing, the furw,' he is accomplishing. The sun,
representing Mind, is reflected in water, representative of
always-moving visible phenomena. It is still the sun that is
being seen, indicating that the system is, first and foremost,
intelligible. However, it is only capable of being seen in the
water, indicating that the facts of everyday life are not without impact on the true system of understanding. They are, in
fact, the location' of truth, in that they are what occasion language. In the dialogue Timaeus, the claim is made that the
true value of our sight is that it leads to philosophy:

that a system which makes the truth intelligible to our minds
is impossible. Socrates' new method has the task of preserving the intelligibility of Anaxagoras' system without pretending that reality can be apprehended directly. He must describe
a way that our minds can remain commensurable with the
truth without having the capacity to apprehend it directly.

III. Socrates' Solution to Intelligibility: The cpupoo
Method' and Language
Mixing Wet and Dry
Socrates introduces his new method of investigation by
saying,

"Sight, then, in myjudgmentis the cause of the highest benefits to us in
that no word of our present discourse about the universe could have been
spoken had we never seen stars, Sun and sky." (Timaeus 47a)

"I do not any longer persuade myself that I know why a unit or anything
else comes to be, or perishes or exists by the old method of investigation,
and I do not accept it, but I have a confused method of my own." (Phaedo

Sight occasions language and language is the articulation
which points to the truth beyond any visible things, to reality,
itself.
Kinds oflmages
One misconception Socrates anticipates in putting forth
the image of the eclipsing sun is corrected when he says,

97b)

The words 'confused method' are interpreted from the
Greek verb used in this sentence, q&gt;'Upw . This word has the primary meaning of "to mix something dry with something
wet." (Liddell and Scott, author's emphasis). Socrates' system is a mixture of the dry stability of Anaxagoras' Mind with
the fluid unpredictability of the visual phenomena with which
natural science concerns itself. He accomplishes this mixture
by positing language as kind of 'medium' for Mind and visible things. Language becomes for him a new kind of cause of
generation and destruction.
To begin to explain how this is so, I return to the image of
the eclipsing sun in the Phaedo:

"However, perhaps this analogy is inadequate, for I certainly do not admit that one who investigates things by means of words is dealing with images, any more than one who looks at facts." (Phaedo 99e-rooa)

Taking the sun to be representative of the truth, language
is not an image of this truth any more than facts are. The
means ofinvestigating reality that is language is no more distant from reality than the means of investigating things that
is the use of 'facts'-i.e. the use of sensible phenomena. The
words 'anymore than' in Socrates' statement are significant
as he is not denying the imagistic character of either sensible
experience or language. They are both images of pure reality,
though language is clearly the one which represents an avenue
to truth.
In order to understand why this is so one must consider
what the nature and kinds of images are for Socrates. All of
the dialogues are filled with images of different kinds which
are meant to convey truth to Socrates' interlocutors. The
claim made in the Phaedo is that all language is imagistic, not
just the part ofit which announces itself as an allegory, a metaphor or a myth. Moreover, the claim is made that the sensible
phenomena of our daily lives are also images and even images
to the same extent. Clearly, however, language and visible
objects are not images in the same way. Other places where
Socrates discusses images and their relation to that which they
image are in the divided line and cave analogies of the Republic. An excursion into these images will be helpful in order to
understand how the A.oym are a refuge from un-resolvable
confusion.
In the divided line image of the Republic, the second and
third segments of this line correspond to, respectively, the
visual objects and the intelligible objects conceived through
the use of hypotheses (sometimes referred to as mathematical objects). These segments are equal in length, however,
meaning equality in the amount of truth in which they par-

"I feared that my soul would be altogether blinded ifl looked at things
with my eyes and tried to grasp them with each of my senses. So I thought I
must take refuge in words• and examine in them the truth about things ."
(Phaedo 99e)

Taking refuge in words or 'A.oym' means fleeing from the
danger of un-resolvable confusion by basing one's understanding of truth on language. Language is, in the sense in
which I am using the term, the articulation of the mind's encounterwith reality. Socrates, by putting language at the center of his understanding of causation, is putting the human
mind into the equation of the natural scientists, and, conversely, he is putting the multitude of phenomena that the
natural scientists observe into the intelligence-based system
of Anaxagoras. He affirms the existence of the many visible
phenomena and returns to them their role in the system of
causation. The truth is not attained by the observation of visible phenomena, themselves, but rather by the contemplation
and manipulation of their expression in language. Through
this expression, the visible phenomena have a role in our understanding of generation and corruption. In harmony with
Anaxagoras' system, though, Socrates retains Mind as the
primary factor because language is, after all, an activity of the
intellect.
Socrates suggests in his image that one can look at the sun
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�ticipate. The connection between natural science and the second segment of the divided line is clear enough: both occupy
themselves with visual phenomena in order to gain understanding. The correlation between the mathematical knowledge and Socrates' investigation through A.oym, however, is
not immediately clear. After presenting the image of the
eclipse, Socrates says,

Both of them differ in significant ways from the images in the
intelligible realm.
The artifacts and statues in the cave are similar to the real
objects in the world outside the cave in a way that the reflections in water are not. They are three-dimensional, solid
things with a kind of being in their own right. In contrast, the
reflections in water are more obviously images . However, the
artifacts and statues are 'phony.' They are mere copies of real
things, separated from their source and separated from the
light which illuminates the outside realm. If these two things
are taken as corresponding to the second and third segments
of the divided line, then it is possible to understand how they
can be equal in length, yet different in kind. Language is, indeed, more obviously imagistic than sensible things which
have a deceptive real-ness about them. However, language is
an inhabitant of the intelligible realm. It retains its kinship to
the realities it images in a more connected way. For this reason, the observation of the artifacts in the cave only advances
the seeker of truth a small amount, while observation of the
images in water trains the eyes for observation of the realities
themselves and provides an experience of them , albeit distorted. If, on the other hand, one takes the shadows cast on
the wall as indicative of the visible phenomena (these are that
which all of the prisoners see and judge) then one gets theidea
of a two dimensional, colorless projection of a copied objectagain separated from the illuminating sun-as opposed to the
kind of colorful, and dimension-retaining reflection one sees
in a lake on a sunny day.
The difficult question remains as to how we can say that
sensible objects are images to the same extent as words. These
objects seem real enough for most people never to question
whether there is a reality beyond them. One solution to this
question lies in the Timaeus, when Timaeus says,

"I started in this manner: taking as my hypothesis in each case the theory
that seemed to me most compelling, I would consider as true, about cause
and everything else, whatever agreed with this, and as untrue whatever did
not so agree." ( Phaedo rnoa)

The description in the Republic of the third segment of the
divided line is very similar:
"One part of the soul, using as images the things that were previously
imitated, is compelled to investigate on the basis of hypotheses and makes
its way not to a beginning but to an end." (Republic 5rnb)

In both cases, some degree of truth is gained through the
use of hypotheses and argumentation.
Both the second and the third segments of the divided line
are equal in length and they both stand for affections arising
in the soul which are images ofreality. Nonetheless , the way
in whic.h the visible phenomena are images differs from the
way in which language is. The images represented by the second segment are a 'dead-end' in terms of finding truth . This
is true, first, because the idea of truth has no real meaning in
terms ofvisible objects considered 'in isolation' (to whatever
extent this is possible). Onlywhen visible objects are named
and in some way considered through language by a rational
mind do they obtain a truth value. In other words, it is intelligible objects, not visible ones, which are either true or false.
This is reminiscent of the failure of the mode of explanation
of natural scientists. They fail to address the question 'why?'
because they speak in terms of visible rather than intelligible
objects.
Still, more needs to be said about the difference between
noetic images of reality and sensible images. In the analogy
of the cave , the visual phenomena are strictly limited to what
is perceived inside the cave, while the intelligible obj ects are
those experienced in the fully illumined outside world. The
rocks and trees and astronomical bodies in the world outside
are the realities and they cast their shadows and are reflected
in water in the outside realm. These images are the first level
removed from the realities and correspond, I would say, to
language and the third segment of the divided line. The man
who leaves the cave must occupy himselfwith these images in
order to accustom his eyes to the real world. Inside the cave
there are two sets of things which are clearly images of the
realities. One of these is described by Socrates when he says,
see along this wall human beings carrying all sorts of artifacts,
which project above the wall, and statues of men and other
animals." (Republic 514c) The other type is.the shadows which
are cast by these artifacts and statues on the cave wall. One,
or perhaps both, of these sets of objects correspond to the visible phenomena and the second segment of the divided line.

"Nor must we speak of anything else as having some permanence , among
all the things we indicate by the expressions ' this ' or 'that,' imagining we
are pointing out some definite thing. For they slip away and do not wait to
be described as that' or this' ... We shouJd not use these expressions of any
of them but that which is of a certain quahty and has the same sort of quality
as it perpetually recurs in the cycle."' (Timaeus 49e)

Even the most seemingly solid objects around us are only
temporarily in the state in which we experience them . To say
that a table is a real thing is to ignore that it is a thing in the
process of changing into something else. In this way, visible
things are images. They are transitory instances which we
perceive and with which we interact. On the other hand, to
say that the word 'table,' by itself, is a real thing is also abchords or the letters placed
surd. The sound made by the vocal_
next to each other on the page are clearly an image of something beyond themselves. Both of these thiugs being images,
however, it is clearly the latter, the words and accounts, which
have the capacity to advance the soul toward the truth. By
speaking orwritingwords we can engage in rational discourse.
We can create and explore truth.
Language and the Forms
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anticipates that still more needs to be said to the interlocutors to make them understand what his system means.It is at
this point that he draws out a connection between the A.oym
and the forms , the w)ri. The forms , or things-by-themselves,
perform a dual function in his presentation . Socrates says,

not answer the question why' a certain quality exists by simply refe:r;ring back to that quality in its universal sense. Here
lies the key to Socrates' solution. His suggestion amounts to
uniting the universal idea with the particular object through
the medium of the intelligence. There exists in the intelligent
mind an idea of beauty which applies to many different objects. This idea has an articulation in language even before it
is ever spoken. When a certain object is recognized as beautiful, the cause of its beauty is the fact that it is something to
which the idea ofBeauty is applied and this application is accomplished through language, i.e. by calling the object 'beautiful.'
To put this another way, it makes sense to say that all of the
different things which we call beautiful have something in
common. This common 'something' is signified by the word
'beautiful.' Socrates is asserting that it is better to refer to that
which is common to all beautiful things in order to explain
why they are beautiful than to try to find the answer in the
particulars of the object. It is for this reason that language can
refer back to itself in order to explain causation. It is because
of our intelligence that we recognize 'common things,' or
universals, and it is by our language that we articulate them.
The fact that it seems like Socrates is begging the question
leads him to call his method 'simple,' 'milve,' and 'foolish.'
In truth, however, the method removes the divide between
objects and universals which mistakenly leads one to expect a
more sophisticated' answer. He is able to remove this divide
because of his emphasis on the role of language and intelligence in the being of an object.
In one manner of speaking, the forms, such as the Beautiful, itself, are universals. This is how we usually think of them
when we relate them to sensible objects. In another manner
of speaking, however, the forms are intelligible realities of
such a nature as to never undergo change. Only they are eternal and immune to the process of becoming and for this reason they are the only things which truly are. This is the crucial
way in which they are unlike those things Timaeus refuses to
grant the status of a 'this' or a 'that.' For this reason, the forms
are not images, though we only have discourse with them by
articulating their images, in one sense, through speech and
observing their images, in another sen se, through perception.
In the Parmenides, the aged Parmenides challenges the
young Socrates' theory of forms which are separate unto themselves by suggesting that such a hypothesis places an
unbreachable divide between the eternal realities and the temporal things. Parmenides tells Socrates, "you have, so to
speak, not even touched upon how great an impasse (anopLa)
there is if you try to posit each form as one, somehow distinguishing them from the beings." (Parmenides 133ab) The
word 'rucopw' has a clear spatial connotation. It is formed
with the alpha-privative and the word :n:opo~, whose primary
meaning is " a means of passing a river" (Liddell and Scott)
Besides the explicit meaning of a difficulty which faces
Socrates, this word carries with it the implicit meaning of a
chasm, or divide, between the elements ofthetheoryofforms:
the temporal and the eternal. Parmenides' final objection
most clearly makes this chasm manifest. He says,

"I am going to try to show you the kind of cause with which I have concerned myself. I turn back to those oft-mentioned things and proceed from
them . I assume the existence of a Beautiful, itself-by-itself, of a Good and a
Great and all the rest. Ifyou grant me these and agree that they exist, I hope
to show you the cause as a result, and to find the soul to be immortal."
(Phaedo rnob)

Socrates just explained that his new method involves seeking truth through arguments based on hypotheses. On the one
hand, the Beautiful, 'itself-by-itself and the other forms,
serve here as an example of hypotheses which , iftheir consequences are adequately explored, will lead to certain conclusions. One such conclusion, Socrates claims, is the immortality of the soul. On the other hand, however, the forms are
themselves the cause which Socrates' autobiography meant
to uncover; they underlie theA.oym into which he fled. He goes
on to say,
"If there is anything beautiful besides the Beautiful itself, it is beautiful
for no other reason than that it shares in that Beautiful and I say so with
everything ... I no longer understand or recognize those other sophisticated
causes , and if someone tells me that a thing is beautiful because it has a bright
color or shape or any such thing, I ignore these other reasons-for these all
confuse me." (Phaedo rnocd)

Socrates rejected the kind of causes which the natural scientists put forward because they did not adequately address
the question, 'why?' . By suggesting this alternative, Socrates
is asserting that his 'simple-mi~ded' idea-that beautiful
things are beautiful because of the Beautiful, itself-is somehow a more adequate answer. It is an answer which goes beyond finding 'a stronger Atlas' and answers the question in a
deeper way. I suggest that the reason it does this is that ascribing the Beautiful, itself, as cause means that the language
we use signifies reality in a more direct way than is commonly
thought.
Neither the word 'beautiful ' nor the description of the color
and shape of a beautiful object fully describe the reason that
object is beautiful. In this way, they are both images. However, the word points to something universal- to the quality
ofbeautywhich adheres in all ofthe things which are described
as beautiful. The description of color and shape confuse
Socrates in the samewaythat the whole method of investigating truth through visible phenomena did. Nothing about the
color of an object points to anything universal. The same color
may make another object ugly. The word, and the articulation that follows upon it, however, are images which point to
the universal. This should remind one of the reflection of the
sun in water outside of the cave. The reflection is not the sunnot as clear or as bright-but it points directly to its heavenly
source.
How does this answer keep from 'begging the question',
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�"Although one and the same, then, (the form's ) whole will be in many
separate beings at the same time, and so would be separated from itself.
Not if it is like a day, (Socrates) said, which, although one and the same
is many places at once and is not at all separate from itself...
Socrates, he replied, how nicely you make one and the same thing many
places at once! It is if after covering many men with a sail you would say that
it is one whole over many." (Parmenides 131b)

"The things among us, then, these things which take the forms' names,
are themselves related only to themselves, but not to the forms, and they
belong only to themselves and not to whatever things are named the same."
(Parmenides I33d)

If eternal things are distinguished from the temporal, what
intercourse can they possibly have? The young Socrates is
unable to answer this objection. I suggest, though, that
Socrates at the end of his life has come to a resolution of this
problem based on language as a medium of both the eternal
and the temporal. The key is to understand language as an
image of the true realities that points to those eternal realities from the vantage point of an intelligent mind living in a
world of visible phenomena. The eternal and the visible seem
hopelessly separated only if one underestimates the faculty
oflanguage and thus intelligence. Parmenides suggests that
only Knowledge, itself, can know what Truth, itself, is. This
may be true in the strictest sense of knowing, Socrates would
say. However, this does not preclude our minds and our knowledge from understanding that part of truth that lies within
their scope. This understanding begins with pointing to the
eternal by means of our words and proceeding to develop our
articulation byworking from hypotheses to conclusions.
Parmenides, after pointing out the anopw which lies ahead
of Socrates makes a concession of sorts regarding the young
thinker's idea of the forms:

Parmenides sees the forms, including their articulation in
language, as being like a sail. They are overlaid on top of the
reality which actually is. For this reason, they can be necessary for discourse but, nonetheless, not real. On the other
hand, Socrates, even in this rudimentary stage of his ideas of
the forms, believe them to be like a day. They are ever-present
in and inseparable from every aspect of reality. As in both the
Phaedo and the Republic, sunlight shining on the visible
realm is used as an image of truth making intelligible objects
intelligible. The sunlight cannot be separated from the objects on which it shines as the A.oym can not be separated from
the reality which they articulate.

Conclusions

Language as Cause
I have attempted to articulate in this paper the wayin which
Socrates develops language as a new way of explaining causation, or a new way of answering the basic question of why?'
Before recapitulating the argument for his having done this,
the question should be brought to the surface, what does it
mean for language to be a cause?' The immediate intuitive
reaction to such a statement is to assert that in no way can the
objects of reality come into being as a result of our speaking
of them. Surely they are, in some crucial sense, before our
minds or our language enter the picture. Thus, the cause or
responsibility (mna) for them must be something else.
In order to overcome this initial reaction, one must first
try to imagine what it could possibly mean to speak of an object without any mind to observe or encounter it. The only
objects, whether sensible or intelligible, that we encounter
are ones that are articulated or, at least, demarcated in our
minds. From this perspective it is not so absurd to say that the
word 'chair' or 'elephant' is the cause of the furniture or the
animal I am encountering. Of course, it is not the sound which
falls off the tongue or the particular characters written on a
page which are important. Something underlies that sound
or those characters, however. What it is which underlies our
language is not at all crystal clear. It is here that one starts to
speak of 'things-in-themselves' or' essences' These things are
only pointed to, or indicated, by our accounts-the more so,
the more in-depth the investigation is. Nonetheless, when the
participation of the observer is taken into account in the observation of things, it becomes evident that his activity of
pointing to universals is crucial to the observed thing's coming to be.

"And yet, if someone, in turn, Socrates, after focusing on all these problems and others still, shall deny that there are forms of the beings and will
not distinguish a certain form of each thing, wherever he turns he'll understand nothing, since he does not allow that there is an ever-same idea for
each of the beings. And so he will utterly destroy the power of dialogue."
(Parmenides 135bc)

Parmenides is suggesting that the forms are essential to
speech and understanding, but nonetheless they do not have
the sort of true existence which would convince Parmenides
that there exist many things. There is a similarity here between
Parmenides' opinion and Anaxagoras'. Where Anaxagoras
seems to deny the sensible phenomena a role in causation,
Parmenides denies them existence in any sense. If one assigns
language its proper role in the generation and destruction of
the world, the distinction Parmenides makes between being
necessary for dialogue and being truly existent vanishes. If the
forms exist in speech and, moreover, are the realities which
underlie all our efforts to articulate the being of things, then
that is enough existence for Socrates. Our indication of the
forms comes through our words, but the forms are by no means
merely words, nor merely necessary for dialogue. The forms
have a real causal role in the being of things.
In order to make this last point clear, it is useful to look at
one more interchange between Socrates and Parmenides. At
one point in their discussion, both men put forth a simile for
the forms which expresses the way they are inclined to think
about them. The interohange, beginning with Parmenides
speaking, reads,

Review of Major Arguments

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The first step along the line to undetstanding language as
a kind of cause is to grasp the nature of the proposition that
the world is intelligible. If one denies this proposition than
one would not be inclined to look to language, an activity of
the intellect, for causation in any sense. Language, under this
supposition, would have nothing to do with what is real and
true because what is real and true is not available in anyway
to our minds. Plato shows in the Phaedo, however, that to accept the proposition of intelligibility is to recognize it not as
a proposition, in the sense of something compound and provable, but as an axiom, something basic and foundational. It is
to be accepted not because there is no other alternative, but
because it is more beautiful than its alternative. It is the choice
made by a courageous thinker who emulates Socrates and his
valiant activity in the face of death.
Proceeding with this axiom that the world is intelligible and
that dialectic is a fruitful activity, Socrates describes a tension
which exists between two ways of developing an understanding of this intelligible world. One way is the way of the natural
scientists, who see in sense-experience the onlyrealitywhich
is to be uncovered and explained. Investigation and description of the things we see and hear is meant by them to get to
the truth about why things are the way they are . Anotherway
of working toward understanding is the (first) way of
Anaxagoras. He sees the workings of a Mind behind the generation and destruction of things but, apparently, does not
find any way for that Mind to relate to our day-to-day experiences. Socrates' brilliant image of the eclipsing sun finds its
first application in this tension. Both the natural scientist's
way and Anaxagoras' way are blinding to the soul. This former
because of the inappropriate use of the instruments of the
body, the latter because of the over-ambitiousness of the
source upon which it sets its mental gaze. More concretely,
the natural scientists can only give additive answers, they can
only push back the question of 'why?' to less and less proximate material causes. Anaxagoras, on the other hand, treats
the source of truth, the Mind, like simply another intelligible
object to be examined and understood. Considerthewaythat
the sun, the source of all light and therefore all things being
visible, is, itself, not really a visible object. The tension between sense-experience and Mind can be approximated by
considering the tension between 'knower' and the thing
known. Both must be accounted for, and some medium described, in order for a way of achieving understanding to be
satisfactory.
Socrates finds in language the medium he needs. In the
words of the image, he takes refuge in the A.oym. Language
depends on the diversity of sensible things. It is their expression, occasioned by encountering them. It is the mind, however, that does this encountering. Thus, I have understood
language as an articulation of the mind's encounter with reality. One difficulty which might be intuitively present for a
listener of Socrates, but must be overcome, is the idea that
language is simply' an image. This idea would lead one to dismiss language as something not essentially present in the
cause of things. Socrates overcomes this difficulty, in part, by
showing that not only is language an image, but so are the sen-

sible phenomena to which we so fervently cling as real. The
true realities are outside the cave and not at all simple to commune with directly. Therefore we must have commerce with
them through their images. Interpreting the cave and line
images of the Republic, I find more credence for the view that
language and sensible phenomena are images of reality to the
same extent, but in different ways. Language is an image illuminated by the light of the intelligible realm, however, and
this, in particular, makes it the more fruitful one to concentrate on in the search for truth.
If the difficulty of language as 'merely' an image is overcome, one can begin to understand its true value in terms of
its kinship with the forms, or HO'YJ. Language is the path which
leads us from particulars, e.g. this bookinfrontofme and this
beautiful thing, to universals, e.g. book and Beauty. In doing
this, it makes for a more satisfying answer than the natural
scientists are able to give when they delve deeper and deeper
into the specifics of their objects. Still, it does not explain how
each thing is ordered in the bestwaythatitcan be, as the most
perfect type of answer would. It is, after all, a "second best"
version of the explanation that Mind as cause (Phaedo ggd).
Nonetheless, the power of language is not to be underestimated. While it is expressing particulars, it is pointing to the
underlying eternal things which never undergo change. In this
way it is a medium between the eternal and the temporal and
the fear of Parmenides that these will be hopelessly separated
is assuaged.
Final Thoughts
There is one more tension which is present in the dialogues
and in this paper which needs to be brought to the surface.
This is the tension between intelligibility and mystery.
Socrates does believe in the intelligibility of the world and he
does believe that our minds are commensurable with the
truth. However, his retreat from Anaxagoras' pure reference
to Mind and his prolific use of images i~dicates that this commensurability may be like the kind that one finds between a
drop of water and the ocean. The dialectic process is the
proper way for us as humans to proceed toward understanding our world but it does not arrive at straightforward answers
to every question, no matter how great. It is likely that the
question of the immortality of the soul exemplifies this fact.
With this in mind, one can better understand why Socrates at
times throughout the Phaedo and especially at the end leaves
the process of rational argumentation somewhat behind and
uses logoi in a different way. I am referring, of course, to the
use of myth.
Socrates enters into the myth at the end of the dialogue after Simmias tells him that, although he is convinced by
Socrates' account, "In view of the importance of our subject
and my low opinion of human weakness, I am bound to have
some private misgivings." (Phaedo 107ab) Socrates' first response is to tell Simmias to continue with the dialectic process of working out better hypotheses and their conclusions.
After saying this, however, Socrates launches into his µv8o~
about the nature of the heavens (expressed here as the true
earth) and the underworld. Socrates must feel that something

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more than rational argumentation is necessary for his listeners. He must give them a story which they can "repeat (to
themselves) as if it were an incantation" (Phaedo n4d) Why
is this necessary, given all that has been said?
One message of the myth which is entirely consonant
with the account that proceeds it is that man stands as a kind
of middle-term in the proportional relationship between obscurity and clarity of knowledge. We do not live in the murky
sea, but neither do we live on the surface of the earth surrounded by the ether. Socrates' recourse to myth may be the
natural extension of what I have already said about language
being a pointer, in the form of an image, to something eternal and beyond our grasp. When, as Simmias says, "the subject is so important" 'µEyE8ouc;', which can be better translated as 'great' ) we must use our imaging power to the fullest
and create stories to soothe our fears.
The philosophic way oflife can extend beyond simply the enjoyment of discussion to a pursuit of moral and spiritual excellence. Much ofwhat the dialogues teach us is how to
think about virtue and justice and courage so that we can act
in accordance with them. Before this instruction can begin,
however, one must deal with the issue of intelligibility. One
must put their trust in words and arguments as a guide before
they step onto the road with "many forks and crossroads."
(Phaedo 108a) Socrates believes in the intelligibility of the
world. He lives his life with a true respect for what can be accomplished in arguments and discussions. We are meant to
understand that it is as a result of this that the officer of The
Eleven who brings news that it is time to drink the poison calls
Socrates, "The noblest, the gentlest and the best man who has
ever come in here," (Phaedo n6c) and Phaedo concludes his
tale with the comment, "Such was the end of our comrade,
Echecrates, a man who, we would say, was of all those we have
known the best, and also the wisest and the most upright."
(Phaedo u8a) The first step on the path to living a life of such
nobility is a choice. Socrates offers us a way of viewing the
coming into being and passing away of all things based on our
power of language to mediate between our- minds and what
they encounter. We have a choice about whether this way is
worth pursuing. There is no better reason to respond affirmatively to this choice than that which Socrates gives when
he tells Simmias, "The reward is beautiful and the hope is
great." (Phaedo n4c )

1. For this quotation, I used the Loeb translation rather
than the Grube. Grube begins the passage," When there is a
true and reliable argument..." (my emphasis) The Greek
reads, "EL ovwc; OYJ uvoc; aA.ri8ouc; Km ~E~mou A.oyou Km
ouva-tou Kat Ka-tavorioat ... " For reasons I hope to make
clear, I felt that it is crucial to retain the conditional sense of
this sentence.
2 . The Grube text actually reads: "I thought I must take
refuge in discussions and investigate the truth of things by
means ofwords." However, the Greek says simply, " EOO~E OYJ
µm XPYJVat ci~ -rov~ A.oyov~ Ka-taqmyovta Ev EKnvmc;
CTKOJtELv -rwv ov-rwv LYJV aA'YJ8ELav. " This translation, therefore, is my own, though it is mostly a combination of Grube's
and the Loeb's.

Virgin Mary (Mother of God):
Photograph of a Painting
Marianne Thompson
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the Demands of Modernity"

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Matthew Braithwaite

The Reality of Physical Ideas

continued to call atoms atoms, even when they turned out not
to be atomic-but the idea that theywere the fundamental components of matter remained. And , I suppose , even that has
ch anged.

Now it is clear from history that physical ideas can be deprecated but not destroyed. It's not that we don' t wantto destroy some ideas: if one is trying to un-think a perspective that
seems undesirable , there is a powerful temptation simply to
try to banish it from language, hoping, perhaps , that thought
will follow. There is a sense in which this desire can be
achieved: one could plausibly banish "phlogiston" and "flowers of zinc," for example. There are theoretical advances that
remove the want we have of these words-or rather, redirect
it, for the words are answers to specific phenomena to which
we cannot close our eyes. Things still burn , even though we
don 't use the idea of phlogiston to explain the phenomenon
any more-but we could. We cannot remove the utility of a
physical idea. We can see this in the fact that banishment from
the scientific vocabulary only makes the usage of a word wither
and die, but does not at all affect our ability to understanditthat will forever be possible! So one cannot un-think an idea;
one must settle for a partial success, that of making the idea
less tempting, or less complete. And we do this by introducing another idea that is more revealing.
What is even more interesting is that there can be evolution and change within (if that is the right word) a single concept. We might look at what Wittgenstein says about Moses
(I. 79) in this connection. He begins by pointing out that " if
one says, 'Moses did not exist' , this may mean various things";
and he goes on to list what some of them are. What is critical
is that the word, Moses, in some way means all these things
and in some way means none of them in particular . Certain
parts of our idea of Moses can be removed from our understanding while still permitting the word, Moses , to have had a
historical bearer. This is what happens, when, for example ,
we say " Moses was not the man who led the Israelites out of
Egypt. " Or we couldkeepusingthewordeven though we hold
it not to have had a bearer, as when we say that Moses was a
historical fiction. If we were asked to give a definition of
Moses we might list a number of characteristics, and say that
Moses was their sum-but this would not reflect our use of the
word. Nor can we point to any one thing as the essence of our
use of the word. Wittgenstein puts it thus: " But where are the
bounds of the incidental? .. .I use the name 'N' without a fixed
meaning. (But that detracts little from its usefulness ... )"
(l.79) Similarly, in science we might observe the continuity
of the word "atom" or "electron" as it comes to be understood
differently. (Consider for example the argument overwhether
"electron" should mean a particle or a unit of charge.) We

At som e point in history, th e live qu estion was , " are there
atoms? " When the answer to that was agreed to-and this is
inseparable from the experiments that produced that agreemen t-it b ecame p ossibl e to ask about the nature of atoms in
a way that was not possible before. And the answers that we
give to questions about the nature of atoms can go on changing forever, because we have "decided what an atom is" in
the sense that we decide which experiments " show" atoms to
us . This fixes the denotation of the word, in a way of speaking, but its sense can change as we learn more about the thingso to speak-denoted. In the same way, we could now potentially do exp eriments on light using only invisible frequencies, because we h ave now decided what exp erimen ts and apparatus tell us about the presence and characteristics oflight.
Wittgenstein' s me taphor of a skein of threads is th e only way
of describing what goes on in this changing. I But we can contrast these shiftily-defined objects of physical thinking with
the ob jects of dire ct ob servation : in a marginal n ote
Wittgenstein quotes Faraday as saying, "Water is one individual thing- it n ever changes." To put it another way, a
physicist' s knowledge of what water is is in one sense identical with anybody else's: water is that thing there . In anoth er
sense , the physicist has a unique under standing of water,
based on his advan ced concepts of atom s, and so forth. But as
soon as we think hat the hypothetical h idden structure of
water that is revealed to science is the same identical thing as
thewaterwetouch and feel, we have com mittedthe errorthat
leads us to belief in a hidden reality. We have, one might say,
" sublimed our hypoth eses" -forgotten th eir truly hypothetical character.
This suggests another link , which came up much earlier,
between physics and Wittgenstein 's philosophical ideas. The
aim of logic which Wittgenstein criticizes was to produce a
logically clearunderpinning for all utterance . We might now
re-ask the question of how this is different from the task of
physics, which seeks a mathematically clear description of all
phenomena. To begin with, Wittgenstein points out that logic
does not seek to learn anything new about language. Hence ,
he says, its workings are uninvolved with phenomena. In answering the question " In what sense is logic something sublime?" he comments:

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a reality that lies between appearances and our attempts at
physical laws. We can dismiss reality as the same kind of imagined ideal; we might say, " it is apparentwhat the world does,
and apparent what the law prescribes.-So what more could
you want to know?"

"For there seemed to pertain to logic a peculiar depth-a universal sig
nificance. Logic lay, it seemed, at the bottom of all the sciences.-For
logical investigation explores the nature of all things. It seeks to see to the
bottom of things and is not meant to concern itself whether what actually
happens is this or that.---It takes its rise , not from an interest in the facts
of nature, nor from a need to grasp causal connexions: but from an urge to
under stand the basis, or essence , of everything empirical . Not, however,
as if to this end we had to hunt out new facts; it is, rather, of the essence of
our investigation that we do not seek to learn anything new by it. We want
to understand something that is already in plain view. For this is what we
seem in some sense not to understand." (I.89)

The analogy between reality and meaning (or signification)
is fairly precise, really, and what I mean to suggest is th t we
can dismiss them in the same way. We cannot find meaning
in the phenomena of language. One of the cautions that
Wittgenstein makes is that we should avoid introspection if
we want to understand language. Instead, we should look only
at how others use language, and see what we can say based on
that alone. Rhetorically, this suggestion assumes what it is
trying to show; namely that language is to be understood by
looking at its use. But the similarity to the rhetoric of language-games ends there: the prohibition on looking within is
not an appeal to imagination but to our scientific instincts.
From a properly cautious point of view, nothing living only
within the mind can be considered a phenomenon. The way
people use words, on the other hand, does admit of phenomenal description . So if we are being scientists, usage is the
only material that we have on which to base a theory of language. And the number oftheories neither suggested nor supported by usage alone includes: that every word is correlated
with a meaning, that the intelligibility of an utterance can be
tested according to articulable rules, that all names signify
objects, and so forth. And similarly, in the philosophy of science, we would have to say: ifyou wanttounderstanda physical idea, look at the way it is employed. There is neither necessity, justice, nor indeed any sense in inventing a reality for
the idea to describe. The content of the idea is no more nor
less than its use in working with phenomena.

This is the sharpest possible contrast to physics; but it is
interesting that the final suggestion-that we somehow do not
understand what is right before us-is common between logic
and physics. So let's ask, " in what sense is physics something
sublime?" Or on a plainer level, does the physicist really know
more about what water is, or only a whole lot more about how
it behaves?
We can observe, first , that physics is the exact opposite of
logic in its approach: we do seek to learn something new in
science. Wittgenstein accuses logic of not wanting to look at
the world, and hence of thinking that we can know how things
are merely through a terrific act of contemplation. But by contrast, physics believes that its advancement is secured only by
trying to look through the world. As scientists we do believe
that the world has hidden but intelligible features, but we also
believe that they can be revealed through ingenuity-not discovered by thinking. But by revealed, can we mean anything
other than, revealed in the phenomena; revealed by a clever
experiment that tricks nature into giving up a secret? We cannot escape the roots of physics in ourperception, because even
the most formal descriptions of the invisible world must include the ordinary senses of some words like length, position,
color, pitch, time, motion , and so forth.

In so far as there is a general principle here , it is that the
only certainty we can have about phenomenal things is their
description.2. If we describe reality through the use of a coherent group of concepts that are merely formally defined,
we still do not overstep the bounds of description. But when
we attribute intuitive ideas, or any kind of reality, to these concepts, we have overstepped the bounds of description (in the
former case) or sense (in the latter). The only certain statements we can make about physical phenomena are predictions
of their behavior, because these are the only statements that
can be falsified. Statements about what underlies phenomena have, therefore , the status of rhetoric-again not an insult in diguise. This makes us understand that a sense of the
word, reality, that is distinct from the sum of all appearances
doesn't really fit into science. The descriptions that physics
gives of objects that underlie appearances do indeed transcend
phenomena, but they are also hypothetical. We cannot, and
can never, be certain of those objects. We need only look back
to our examples to see this. We might have a sort of certainty
that atoms exist, but our idea of their nature is always changing. And as with the example of ether, we must keep in mind
that we have never seen an atom. Saying that " there are atoms" is a proposition about use and experiment; and reflects

So we ought to follow Wittgenstein's thoughts a little further, before we gain too much confidence about the power of
physics to tell us about the hidden. By the " subliming of
logic ," he has in mind something specific:
"' A proposition is a queer thing!' Here we have in germ the
subliming of our whole account of logic. The tendency to assu~e
a pure intermediary between the propositional signs and
the facts ... For our forms of expression prevent us in all
sorts of ways from seeing that nothing out of the ordinary is
involved, by sending us in pursuit of chimeras ." (l.94)

That is , we get into trouble when we become confused in a
case where we should not. The suggestion here is that he ought
to refuse to see anything mysterious or strange about logic
and logical symbols. We are to say, simply, "it is apparent
what the world does, andapparentwhat the sign does, because
our use of the sign , too, is an observable phenomenon the
world.-So what more could you want to know?" And this illuminates our search for reality or truth in physics. The tendency to assume an ideal interposed between a propositional
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�ing configuration," with wonderful formality but nothing that
could be called a justification-save that the formalism agrees
with experiment (and of course no other justification should
be asked). The idea of a wave is intelligible on the assumption of a medium; and this, in turn, reduces to a mechanical
explanation. But having no proof of the medium , we are certainly forced to say that the wave explanation oflight is merely
a formally correct description . Similarly, if we had to account
for mass in mechanics, we would be forced to give a merely
formal description of how the things to which we attribute
mass behave. We do not need to do this, because intuition
assumes the role of formal specification . We know how mass
behaves in intuition, so we assume we know "what it is." Similarly, we know "what a wave is." This is not to say that electrodynamics and mechanics lack rigor, because it would certainly be possible to replace their intuitive ideas with formal
descriptions; as indeed we do for light by describing it with
differential equations. But as the fact that we have never seen
the wave that we think light is suggests, whatever is formal
can be no more than formal. Mechanics is a description of
how phenomena behave, simply; and the fact that it invokes
concepts derived from intuition is irrelevant to its accuracy.
However, when it becomes the case that experiment calls the
intuitive part of a purely mechanical description of the atom
into question, by suggesting that intuitive mechanical concepts simply do not work, then the derivation of mechanics
from intuition ratherthan formalism becomes very important
indeed, as a hindering rather than a helping force! That is to
say, an intuitive account is very difficult to abandon, because
intuitive explanations make us think that we have grasped the
"what-ness" of things . But we have already said enough about
the grammar of the statement, "light is a wave," to know that
this sort of grasp is quite illusory.

Evolution of Concepts: I ntuition and Formalism
Because we are interested in phenomena, the first thing to
observe about physical ideas and concepts is their behavior. I
mean by this that we ought to regard physical ideas on the biological model. The truth or correctness of a physical idea, as
suggested above, can have the grammar of" descriptive" -or,
we might add, even of"useful." We might say, on the basis of
the preceding, that physical ideas are use-valued rather than
truth-valued. Hence, they exhibit the biological characteristic of growth or attenuation according to selective pressures.
In part these pressures can be seen as coming from us, in so
far as we choose between competing physical accounts of
things. But we could also see these pressures as coming from
experiment, as for example when interference phenomena
force us away from the emission theory of light. But all experimental pressures on our physical ideas are mediated by
us in a very real way: witness that doomed concepts have never
been without their champions. The separation between our
influence and the influence of experiment is thus a very real
one, because we can see them conflicting. We are free, then,
to examine our own role in the changing of the concepts that
we use. We have to look at the question of what we should
find satisfactory, or coherent, in an account.
One of the ways of stating the impossibility of the metaphysical is that we have an inability to escape our nature. We
want to escape language in doing philosophy; we want to escape phenomena in doing physics. These desires are psychologically and formally the same, and there are similar arguments against them. In the Philosophical Investigations,
Wittgenstein argues through the inability to construct another language from the one we have. In physics we may point
to the ability of an experiment to puncture our pretensions of
having described reality accurately. Classical electrodynamics and Newtonian mechanics represent beautiful and simple
projections of our intuition onto the world, as Euclidean geometry beautifully captures the projection of our intuition
onto a (mostly) formal deductive system. But in both cases
we could even have said in advance that they had not the completeness they pretended to. Mechanics made no attempt to
give an account of mass. Similarly, electrodynamics incorporates the idea of a wave, a "moving disturbance" or "mov-

culmination of the paper is what one might call a solution ,
albeit a mystical one, to the initial problem that he poses of
the relation between the world and the ideas that occur to us
about it: " ... are we to conclude that these various departments
of nature in which analogous laws exist, have a real inter-dep endence; or that their relation is onlyapparentandowingto
the necessary conditions of human thought?" This is the question that perplexes us in doing physics.

So we might say of intuition that although it needn't and
shouldn't play any formal part in physics, it plays a powerful
psychological part. It is important to the coherence of a body
of theory-the word we are trying to understand. We should
own that the intelligibility of both of the above-mentioned
physical theories seems to have much to do with their analogies to the sensible. The wave account oflight is not desirable simply because it is descriptive, but because it is also
imaginable. Similarly, Rutherford's mechanical description
of the atom is no mere formal account, but appeals strongly
through sensible analogy. This is in part what is meant by saying that science has a rhetorical component-and of course, it
is possible to be deceived about the truth by rhetoric, as the
difficulty of abandoning these intuitable theories shows.

the fact that we are inclined to look at experiment as a kind of
seeing. But we only think we see: how do we "see" that light
is a wave , when we see interference phenomena? Well, we
see it with our imagination , with our analogic faculty; something on that order. We see, with our mathematical eyes, patterns of dots on a screen that are intelligible as the footprints
of the interfering ofwaves. The wave is the idea that the phenomena produce in us. The idea that there is areal wave causing the patterns that we see is a statement which must, in our
analysis, have the character of a story to which we are led by
phenomena. There is no test of its truth. We must, following
Wittgenstein, simply say: here the pattern on the wall, there
the descriptive equations-and nothing more.

Something like this idea seems to be at the root of the following obscure paragraph, which I take to be an oblique mocking of meta physicians:

Maxwell's essay, Are there Real Analogies in Nature, is I
think meant to address this subject among others (it is, as he
says, somewhat "diffuse and confused"). But about one thing
in it he is clear, and that is the analogical component of so
much that we do in physics. Two results of his paper are especially important to us: first, that he points out how broad the
reach of analogical thinking is; and second, that he gives us
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where we see the interactions of force more visibly manifested.
So one question that arises from these worries is that of
what sorts of thinking properly belong to physics. The suggestion that "the analogy between reasons , causes, forces ,
principles, and moral rules, is glaring, but dazzling," is helpful to seeing how great and wide are the dangers of using the
wrong sort of analogy in physical thinking. We are inclined,
by force of analogy, to lump together what are really separate
things under the name of cause , or even of force. But when we
are inclined to identify cause and force this leads to a poor
and incomplete understanding of nature:

Maxwell seems to have a few things in common with
Wittgenstein in the way he looks at words , in that his idea of
analogy suggests Wittgenstein's idea of family resemblance
among words. Maxwell presents ideas in a biological way, by
showing us the analogies through which they arise in us. His
account of cause, in keeping with this, is not metaphysical but
historical:

"But there are other laws of nature which determine the form and action of organic structure. These are founded on the forces of nature, but
they seem to do no work except that of direction. Ought they to be called
forces? A force does work in proportion to its strength . These direct forces
to work after a model. They are moulds, not forces."

"We cannot, however, think any set of thoughts without conceiving of
them as depending on reasons. These reasons, when spoken of with relation to objects, get the name of causes, which are reasons, analogically re
ferred to objects instead of thoughts ."

This I take to be a reference to our use of the word, formal
cause. But these moulds, as Maxwell calls them, are not phenomenal: he says twice that they merely seem to use the visible forces of nature to their ends. Following this we might
suggest that physics is interested in what Maxwell calls events,
which are to be distinguished from actions (a term that belongs to the moral realm) , as well as from any employment
made of these events by formal and final causes-the reality of
which, it is important to note, Maxwell does not doubt in the
least. Despite this, though, he reminds us:

Now the thought that the word " cause," in its employment
in physics, is our projection onto the world of the fact that
thoughts follow one another according to reasons, is not one
that would ordinarily occur to us. But put in this way, the suggestion sounds both plausible and somewhat disquieting; for
as Maxwell says later," cause is a metaphysical word implying
something unchangeable and always producing its effect", in
contrast to force, which "is a scientific word, signifying something which always meets with opposition \ldots" Looked at
in this way, we might wonder if it is right to use the word
"cause" in science at all; for Maxwell seems to be suggesting
that the term has its origin in the observing subject.

"Again, if we know what is at any assigned point of space at any instant
of time, we may be said to know all the events of Nature. We cannot conceive any other thing which it would be necessary to know; and, in fact, if
any other necessary element does exist, it never enters into any phenomenon so as to make it differ from what it would be on the supposition of space
and time being the only necessary elements."

The thought behind the phrase, we cannot conceive ofany
other thing which it would be necessary to know, deserves to
be looked at unflinchingly. It is identical to Wittgenstein's
suggestion that we should look, and not think. In a sense, once
we have observed, we have done all there is to do- assuming,
that is, that we are only interested in explaining (in Bohr's
sense) the events of nature. And the phrase has, too, some of
the same content as the reminder that comes up in quantum
physics that all experiments must ultimately express themselves in mechanics. These reminders draw a border between
the phenomenal and the hypothetical. It seems to me that one
might, following this, suggest that the task of physics is to
make rules that describe all the events of nature, using whatever means are available or necessary. And looking at the
other side of that coin, we must say that physics must be interested in nothing but the events.

"This conception of cause [I take it he means the idea of force as a sort of
cause], we are informed, has been ascertained to be a notion of invariable
sequence . No doubt invariable sequence, if observed , would suggest the
notion of cause, just as the end of a poker painted red suggests the notion of
heat, but although a cause without its invariable effect is absurd, a cause by
its apparent frustration only suggests the notion of an equal and opposite
cause."

I believe his suggestion is that invariable sequence belongs
to observation, whereas cause belongs to the connection of
reasons; so that the identification of them is a forced and false
one-a bogus attempt to relate metaphysics to observation.
The idea of cause could perhaps be prompted by observation,
but the circumstances givingrisetotheideaare no more identical with the idea itself than the red-painted end of a poker is
with heat. And he seems further to be suggesting that invariable sequence is not the observed fact that we carelessly take
it to be: striking the earth with a tiny object has n o effect that
we can see, for example. The idea we have of what happens in
this situation arises through analogical reasoning from cases

Now the poverty of this restricted vision is plain throughout Maxwell's paper. And yet it does reflect a certain valuable discipline: for if we allow ourselves to be interested in
more than mere events, we run the risk of being misled about
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�a metaphysical concept arises through analogy:

next represents the same problem that Kant called the Third
Antinomy, but Maxwell appears to be content with simply saying that the matter is a very confused and indefinite one. And
yet there is order in the confusion. When we see an event as
an act, we are twice perplexed. First we see mechanics taking
up where will left off (" ... another set oflaws , the operation of
which is inflexible once in action, but depends in its beginnings on some act of volition"), as, for example, ifl were
maliciously to throw a rock at someone. And second we believe that actions have what we call moral consequences, an
idea that employs the physical language of cause and effect.
But we cannot see these consequences in the world, and so,
"we connect the idea of retribution much more with that of
[human}justice than with that of cause and effect." And so we
are confused by our having thought of moral consequences in
causal terms, on the one hand; and by our tendency to "regard retribution as the result ofinteiferencewith the mechanical order of things, and intended to vindicate the supremacy
of the right [moral] order of things." This refers to Maxwell's
earlier statement that we find moral laws to be supreme laws
in one sense, but contingent laws in another sense , because
we do not see them always acting in the world.

"Perhaps the next most remarkable analogy is between the principle,
law, or plan according to which all things are made suitably to what they
have to do, and the intention which a man has of making things which will
work. The doctrine offinal causes, although productive ofbarrenness in its
exclusive form, has certainly been a great help to inquirers into nature; and
if we only maintain the existence of the analogy, and allow observation to
determine its form, we cannot be led far from the truth."

Now what this seems to be saying is that in doing physics,
we ought not to use the doctrine of final cause to determine
what we see: we may only apply it to what we find-a prescription that we can hardly violate if we restrict ourselves to seeing only events. And one might say similar things about
beauty: we may certainly identify the true and the beautiful,
but what this means in doing physics is that we have to find
beautiful whatever we discover to be true. The identity is not
a permission to allow our sense of beauty to legislate what we
believe about nature. For indeed, in so far as the word, nature, represents a hidden reality, it is a confused word. If nature is to have a meaning in physics, it must mean the sum of
all phenomena, which simply are, without being beautiful or
ugly. And our laws, too, are what they are; their beauty belongs to us, and is also our choice. To say, "if the laws are not
beautiful they cannot be true" is meaningless, because the
grammar of the word true, when applied to a physical law, is
identical with that of the word accurate, as suggested above.
And the accuracy of the laws has no relation to how they appear to our aesthetic sense. The most that can be said is that
if the laws are not beautiful, we will try to improve their beauty.
But the phenomena will decide whether we are able to do so.
If the phenomena do not permit it, it would be better to revise
our idea of the beautiful such that it fits what we have discovered to be true, i.e., accurate (and perhaps this means that
physics is now done by a different sort of person than before,
owing to the historical change in the sort ofbeautythat physical theories exhibit). Otherwise history might number us
among those who labor against the evidence of experiment,
and count us on the same side as those who denied the movement of the earth.

Maxwell gives a description of this muddle that is both
metaphor and resolution:
"The theory of the consequences of actions is greatly perplexed by the
fact that each act sets in motion many trains of machinery, which react on
other agents and come into regions of physical and metaphysical chaos from
which it is difficult to disentangle them. But if we could place the telescope
of theory in proper adjustment, to see not the physical events which form
the subordinate foci of the disturbance propagated through the universe,
but the moral foci where the true image of the orginal act is reproduced,
then we shall recognize the fact, that when we clearly see any moral act,
then there appears a moral necessity for the trains of consequences of that
act, which are spreading through the world to be concentrated on some focus, so as to give a true and complete image of the act in its moral point of
view. All that bystanders see, is the physical act, and some of its immediate
physical consequences, butas a partial pencil oflight, even when not adapted
for distinct vision, may enable us to see an {\em object}, and not merely light,
so the partial view we have of any act, though far from perfect, may enable
us to see it morally as an act, and not merely physically as an event."

This is saying that our state of confusion is inevitable; fo
we can only see the occasional footfalls of the moral and the
voluntary in the world of appearance, just as all sensible objects appear to us only with the help oflight. The possibility
of being able to see the whole chain of moral consequences of
which physical events are the "subordinate foci" is closed off
to us because we do not have the means to see it-except with
partial and imperfect vision. And this in turn suggests the following idea about analogy in science: the world of events can
be circumscribed, and so we can exclude analogy from our
thinking about it. Ifwe please we can talk about events and
only events (whats, wheres, and whens), using the formal language of mathematics. We have complete vision of the whole
world of appearances-a statement that would almost be a tautology, were it not for the contrast with our imperfect vision
of the world of acts. Physics is thus not the complete understanding of the world, but only a line drawn around what we

I want to return to the subject of the poverty of this worldview of physics. It is plain from what Maxwell says that the
world of physics, the world of events, is not the whole world
to our minds. Indeed, establishing this appears to be one of
the principal goals ofhis essay, as we may infer from what appears to be a repudiation of universal mechanism:
"Now the question of the reality of analogies in nature derives most of
its interest from its application to the opinion, that the phenomena of nature, being varieties of motion, can only differ in complexity, and therefore
the only way of studying nature, is to master the fundamental laws of motion first, and then examine what kinds of complication of these laws must
be studied in order to obtain true views of the universe. If this theory be
true, we must look for indications of these fundamental laws \ldots among
those remarkable products of organic life, the results of cerebration (commonly called 'thinking')."

This passage appears to be not even trying hard to mask
amused contempt. We can note in passing that what he says

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is ident~cal to the question , implied by Wittgenstein (l.54) ,
of how we tell when a game is being played according to a rule;
and it depends on our prior ability to pick an object out from
the world. Maxwell's answer to this question, with which he
closes his essay, is a mystical one:

can sense, considered as mere events , and the question, "what
can we say about that?" We have no requirement for sensible
intuition, aesthetics, or metaphysics in that investigation, because the formal description that we can give ofevents is complete within itself. In one way this is obvious; the question is
entirely of whether it is a useful way to think.

"And last of all we have the secondary forms of crystals bursting in upon
us, and sparkling in the rigidity of mathematical necessity, and telling us
neither of harmony of design, usefulness or moral significance,-nothing
but spherical trigonometry and Napier's analogies. It is because we have
blindly excl uded the lessons of these angular bodies from the domain of
human knowledge that we are still in doubt about the great doctrine that
the only laws of matter are those which our minds must fabricate, and the
only laws of mind are fabricated for it by matter."

One way in which it might not be is as a concealed insult: if
we meant simply to divide statements into physical and nonphysical for pejorative purposes, we would not accomplish
anything. But this suggestion about how to view physics is a
useful one, because it permits us to understand physics better. We have a hard time accepting theories that are contrary
to our metaphysical preconceptions, to sense intuition, or to
our ideas about beauty. But even more do we desire to be free
of any impediments in learning about the world: the state we
want is best described as perfect and clear receptivity to anything that describes the phenomena. And this is what the circumscription of physics is good for: when we say that we must
take seriously any true (agreeingwith experiment) theory, we
are really just reminding ourselves of am eans where by we can
raise our vigilance against non-physical ideas impinging on
our physical understanding. Bearing the circumscription of
physical ideas in mind makes it easier to say, "I accept the use
of non-mechanical ideas, because mechanical description is
only a requirement of my intuition." Or, "I accept the use of
a probability function without any other justification, because
determinism is only a requirement of my metaphysics." Or,
"I accept this ugly wave-particle hybrid, because its ugliness
is only due to my aesthetics, and its unintelligibility to my
weakness." Since physics can be circumscribed, we.will the
more nearly perfect our understanding of it the less we permit the non-mathematical, or the sense-intuitive, to leak in
and corrupt the focus that our "telescope of theory" has on
the purely mechanical aspect of all phenomenal things.
If we do not employ sense intuition, aesthetic sense, or
metaphysical ideas in looking at physical ideas, there is only
the mathematical sense left to us. It is a relief to note here the
existence of mathematical analogies: without them there
would be no procedure at all for us to use! But we might have
known this already; because it is only the quantitive part (or
one might even say, the quantitative expression) of a physical
idea that can be tested. To say that in physical thinking we
should try to stay within the phenomena is equivalent to saying that we should try to remain within the mathematical in
our descriptions; our procedure should be to seek out and
accept readily all analogies between nature and the math
ematical that we can find-using elegance, metaphysics , or
sense intuition as decision principles only where there is a
choice to be made between equally predictive laws. For indeed, as Maxwell reminds us , the characteristic of an event is
that there is nothing to be known about it besides what is
where at what time; and hence nothing about the objects involved needs a language other than mathematics for its expression.

And yet his mysticism is highly satisfying in some odd way1 suspect because there is not much more to do about the relation between mathematics, the mind, and the world, beyond
simply noting their harmonies and goggling at them. To suggest, as Maxwell does, that the harmony is in fact an identity,
is an answer in words; but it is mystical in its import. The only
phenomenal statements that we can make, in the end, are that
we certainly seem to have a faculty for picking mathematics
out of nature; and that nature, in her turn , certainly seems to
have a propensity to behave mathematically. The mystical
answer to this incomprehensible observation must, I think,
be the correct one, because it is the only one possible.
Consider, for example, the way Newton lays out a purely
mathematical science of motion before even speaking about
phenomena. Does not the mathematics seem a separate
thing, to which nature is like? Similarly, we can look at the
way the definition of a wave shifts over the history of natural
science, perhaps by conjecturing a history along the following lines: The idea of a wave begins life as a disturbance in
water. Noting certain features, we generalize to find the idea
of a periodic undulation, to which we are capable of giving
some degree of mathematical description. Finally we eliminate intuition entirely: our most potent and useful idea of a
wave is any function that satisfies a certain differential equation. Does it not seem as though the things we call waves,
now, are not sensible but mathematical analogies to one another, things that have their essential being and relation in
the mathematical formalism? Maxwell seems to suggest
something like this, in what seems a good description of the
characteristics of our employment of analogy:
"This supposes that although pairs of things may differ widely from each
other, the relation in the one pair may be the same as in the other. Now, as
in a scientific point of view the relation is the most important thing to know,
a knowledge of the one thing leads us a long way towards a knowledge of the
other. If all that we know is relation, and if all the relations of one pair of
things correspond to those of another pair, it will be difficult to distinguish
the one pair from the other, although not presenting a single point of resemblance, unless we have some difference of relation to something else,
whereby to distinguish them. Such mistakes can hardly occur except in
mathematical and physical analogies ... "

This is consonant with the above suggestions about waves:
it seems as though the physical motivation behind a formalism can be lost as the latter takes on a mathematical life of its

The question of the perception of a mathematical analogy

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�own, enriching itself in utility and generality, and becoming
the essential aspect of the thing for us. Waves are in some
sense real to us as physicists only by their exhibiting the relations prescribed by our formalism. And this is the sort of thing
that leads us right into the tenacious jaws of the "reality blunder," because we let the formalism take on a transcendent life.

Footnotes
I. Indeed, in l.79 he comments: "The fluctuation of scientific definitions: what to-day counts as an observed concomitant of a phenomenon will to-morrow be used to define

it."

The possibility of characterizing all physical concepts with
mathematical analogies strongly suggests to us that we ought
to aim for a completely mathematical understanding of nature; that is, one that is formally specified in its entirety. The
desire for formalism in physics should be understood to be
identical with the same desire in mathematics, discussed below: when we say that everything in geometry should be formally specified, we do not mean to eliminate intuition. We
only mean to distrust it. And by doing this, we are in effect
saying that formal or logical certainty is of an entirely different kind from intuitive certainty. They have functional similarities, yes-but they are not comparable. One might say they
belong to different language-games. Intuition and inspiration are the only modes of invention and progress that we
have-ofcourse! No one would have us change the way we do
mathematics and physics, even if that were possible. But there
is a sinister philosophic intent rooting mathematical formalism, which from the description given so far might seem to be
just a harmless waste of someone else's time; and that is the
identification of the inconceivable with the contradictory.
Maxwell wryly remarks, of our tendency to make analogies,
"if [nature] is not a 'book' at all, but a magazine, nothing is
more foolish than to suppose that one part can throw light on
another"; meaning, I gather, that we should train ourselves
in total readiness for surprises. As, in mathematics, all statements against non-Euclidean geometry that do not show a
contradiction in it are void; so, in physics, should agreement
with experiment and mathematical coherence be the only
principles by which we decide what sorts of descriptions to
admit as being possible ones.

2.. Recall Wittgenstein's saying, "we must do away with
all explanation, and description alone must take its place."
(l.iog)

This tangled search for physics can be summarized, or
rather gathered together, as follows. We stand a better chance
of being able to succeed in physical thinking if we follow
therein a principle of mathematical thinking; namely, that
anything formally possible which appears useful, or interesting, is unworthy of being dismissed. As increasing use of
mathematics squeezes sense intuition out of physics, the only
. intuition that can remain is mathematical intuition. We thus
become better physical thinkers in proportion as we are good
mathematical thinkers, and as we allow our mathematical intuition total freedom in suggesting answers to the questions
posed by phenomena. For as we descend deeper into the unseen, it may be that mathematical intuition is the only kind
that has the answers. Maxwell's mysticism suggests a final justification for this, in that it is a strong implication of his last
paragraph, quoted above, that nature is capable of anything
we can think within the right laws of our minds, which are
mathematics and logic-because, indeed, these laws are identical with nature's capabilities.

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�Contents
Seeing the Light: How Light Illuminates Aristotle's Noetic T heory . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . · . . . . . . . . I
Mark Alzenhaur, AOO
Detroit (photograph) . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Paige Postelwait, AO 1

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Aries, France (photograph) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . · · · · · · · · · · . · · 7
Vada Mossavat, AOO
Puerto Escondido, Mexico (photograph) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . · . · · · · · · · · · · · · 1I
Abigail Weinberg, AOO
On Mimesis . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . · · · · · · · · · · · · · · · l 2
Robert Dickson, AOO
Architectural detail, 1984 Winter Olympic Museum, Sarajevo (photograph) . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 14
Vada Mossavat, AOO
Greek Translation and Commentary . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . · . . . . . . · l 9
Samuel Carcia, A99
Attorney General (conte on watercolor paper) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . · . . . .. . · 20
Corey Sebastian, A99
Sarajevo, 1997 (photograph) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . · · · · . . . · 21
Vada Mossavat, AOO
French Translation Prize, 1997-1998 . . . . . . .. . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . · · · · · · · · · · · · · · · 22
Lauren Connolly, A98
Translation and Commentary on Le Cripuscule du Soir .. . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. 24
R. Justice Schunior, A99
Your Choice Was to Live: lsmene's Resistance to Her Family . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . · · . . . . . · 27
Megan Greff, AO 1
Math Prize, 1997-98, Geometry: Solution and Commentary . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . · · . . . . . · 30
Piroska l&lt;Dpar, A 99
Math Prize, l 997-98, Trigonometry: Solution and Commentary . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . · . · . . . . · 33
Daniel Braithwaite, AO I
Lobachevski . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . · · · · · · · · · · · · · · · 35
Wendy Braithwaite, AC!
Sophomore Essay Prize, 1997-98: Striving for Harmony: A Reading of the Book of Job . . . . . . . . . . .. . . · 36
Michael Goodrum, AOO

Amendment XV, (gouache on paperboard) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 40
Corey Sebastian, A99
Sarajevo, 1997 (photograph) . . . . . . . . .. .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 46
Vada Mossavat, AOO
Senior Essay Prize, 1997-98: Understanding the Mythical Nature of the
Wilderness and its Role in Isaac McCaslin's Repudiation in ''The Bear"
Aaron Pease, A98

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Freedom and Limitation: The Understanding in Kant's Critique of Pure Reason . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 60
Todd Pytel, A99
Aries, France (photograph)
Vada Mossavat, AOO

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Junior Essay Prize, 1997-98: Sympathy and Selfishness in George Eliot's Middlemarch . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 68
Deborah Carlos, A99
Airborne . . .
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Seeing the Light: How Light Illuminates
Aristotle's Noetic Theory
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f necessity, there is a certain degree of difficulty in investigating nous (or, the intellect). It
is not something we directly perceive, but is
only intelligible through the things it thinks. And
though it is perhaps among the most knowable things
there are, it is, because of this distance from sensible
things, also among the most unknown. An examination of it must be careful, and not rushed to understand it in its most proper formulation too quickly.
One's eyes need to adjust to the metaphoric light.
Adjusting to the light will be, in a way, the
focus of this inquiry. And the very quickness with
which we are willing to accept such visual imagery as a
natural metaphor for acts of the mind suggests that
the connection is not an insignificant one. Aristotle
makes the connection several times himself, but this
essay will focus mainly on his use of it in the fifth
chapter of the third book, De Anima.
The main goal of this essay, however, is to
clarify the workings and foundation of Aristotle's
noetic theory, so in that respect our focus on that passage and the light metaphor will be subservient to the
greater task of understanding what nous is and does.
As the subject dealt with is somewhat obscure, the
first section of this essay will be an attempt to isolate
the function of nous in Aristotle's other works. Then,
with this preliminary investigation accomplished, I will
proceed to the passage mentioned above. In the second
section, I will restrict myself to an examination of
Aristotle's statements about light. Then, in the third
section, I will try to pin down what Aristotle meant by
comparing nous to light.
In the Metaphysics, Aristotle describes philosophy as being certain concerning the things about
which dialectic is tentative. This inquiry, then, could
best be described as "dialectical," in that it will not be
a straightforward expostulation of the "Aristotelian"
position, but rather a tentative attempt to flesh out
Aristotle's ideas which will examine many possibilities,
only focusing on the analogy of light in an exploratory fashion.

PART ONE: A PRELIMINARY
UNDERSTANDING OF NOUS
Before we approach the light analogy to see
what it has to add to our understanding of nous, it is
best that we learn what role Aristotle has designated to
nous in his other writings, keeping in mind that he
might in them be speaking of nous in a more restricted
(or even looser) sense than he is in De Anima. In this
reconstruction of the Aristotelian noetic, I will remain
mostly within the Posterior Analytics. The Nicomachean
Ethics, in a briefer account, repeats a lot of what is said
there, and the Metaphysics in many ways surpasses it,
both in scope and in complexity. I have taken the middle road. The only major drawback of staying within
the Posterior Analytics is that it uses largely mathematical
illustrations. These can mask some very significant differences between the knowing involved in mathematical
and logical studies and the knowing involved in other
forms of knowledge. Though the mathematical many
times serves as a good analogy for what Aristotle is
trying to say, it is often a bad example. This difference
will be dealt with in greater detail in the third section
of this paper.
At the end of the first book of the Posterior
Analytics (AP88b36), we are given a compact definition
of nous. Aristotle calls it the "arche epistemes." This has
been translated as "the source of knowledge," "the
principle of science;' and "the starting-point of scientific knowledge.'' All translations are necessarily vague
until a determinate knowledge of the terms a translator employs is worked out. Aristotle has something
very definite in mind when he chooses these words and
we are well advised not to quickly arrive at a cursory
understanding of them. In this section, we will look at
each word closely and then see if we can come to a
more complete understanding of what nous is.
I will start with "episteme." Traditionally translated as "knowledge;' "episteme" is used more narrowly
by Aristotle than we use "knowledge.'' Aristotle in
AP7Ibl0 speaks of what he means when he says we
know something:

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We think we know each [thing] without
qualification, but not in the sophistical manner with respect to an attribute, when we
think that (a) we know the cause through
which the thing exists as being the cause of
that thing and that (b) the thing cannot be
other than what it is.
This clearly distinguishes episteme from other faculties
of the rational part of men's souls, such as opinion
(by which one apprehends true things of which one
does not have the cause) and prudence (which is about
changeable particular situations and can thus be other
than what it is). The object of knowing appropriate to
epistemic knowledge, then, exists of necessity, and
hence is eternal, and what is eternal is ungenerable and
indestructible" (NEI 13%24).
The only things which meet these qualifications are universals. And knowledge is not just of universals, but is universal itself. Aristotle makes this clear
in AP88b30: "Knowledge and the knowable object
differ from opinion and the object of opinion in this:
knowledge is universal and proceeds through necessary
[premises], and that which is necessary cannot be
other than it is." This is why there cannot be knowledge of Callias or of any other particular, only sensation of them.
Another primary characteristic of episteme is
that it is teachable and, therefore, can be learned. It is
not an experienced facihty or a "knack" with things. It
is a reasoned understanding. It is in the master craftsman, who knows the "why" of his art, more than in his
obedient apprentice. What makes anything learnable is
that it is discursive, or follows from what one knows by
reason. Aristotle speaks of this following upon reason
as syllogistic. That is, it demonstrates the unknown by
conclusions drawn from the known according to the
dictates of reason. One trait, then, of demonstrable
knowledge is that it "must be acquired from primary
[premisesJ which are undemonstrable: otherwise one
who has no demonstration of them [i.e. demonstrable
principlesJ will not know" (AP7Ib27). Those primary
premises must be outside of epistemic knowledge, in the
sense that episteme is built upon them.
Without those primary premises being known,
there could be no episteme. This, Aristotle would contend, is part of the reason Socrates disclaimed knowing
anything. For a premise is "dialectical if it is any one
part of a statement taken indifferently {we might say,
"hypothetically"}, but it is demonstrative if it is defi11

nitely that part which is true" (AP72al0). This is
undoubtedly a more complicated issue when it comes
to the Socratic method, but, merely to contrast this
method with Aristotle's, it suffices to say that the basic
indeterminacy of Socrates' premises (his archai) enabled
him to continue to explore new possible answers to
fundamental questions, while it prevented him (at least
on the surface) from coming to a definitive answer.
For Aristotle, however, these principles are determinate
and knowable enough to build definite, demonstrable
knowledge upon. With Aristotle, one can know.
But this knowledge has a questionable foundation until we can come to an understanding of what
these principles are and where they come from. They
cannot be merely assumed or hypothetically posited
without man falling into Socratic ignorance. Aristotle
states this in no uncertain terms in the NE:
. . . it is only when one is both convinced and
is familiar with the principles ( archai) in a certain way that one has knowledge, since he will
have know ledge only by accident if he is not
convinced of the principles more than the
conclusion (I I 39b33).
And in the AP:
. . . it is necessary not only to know the primary [principles], whether all or some, prior
[to the fact or conclusionJbut also know
them to a higher degree ... . (72a27)
The archai of episteme need more certitude than the syllogisms based upon them. We should find out, then,
what these archai are.
The meaning of "arche;' however, is no easier
to grab hold of than that of episteme." In fact, it is one
of the "words used in more than one sense" that is
listed in the fifth book of the Metaphysics. And the
comprehensive definition given there (" . .. what is
common to all sources { archai} is to be the first thing
from which something is, or comes to be, or is
known") is wide enough to encompass almost any
usage. It is extremely important to pay close attention
to Aristotle's use of arche'' in the whole of his philosophy (he uses it in a systematically ambiguous way),
but we can get more specific here without sacrificing
too much of the word's rich meaning.
In the Posterior Analyics1 it is reasonably clear
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that there are three sorts of archai on which demonstrative knowledge is based. For various reasons they are
never listed together, but they are (a) axioms ( koina ),
(b) definitions/ terms ( horoi), and ( c) what I have
named "existentials" (with thanks to William Jennings
for the felicitous term). These three designations
effectively describe the extent to which any episteme is
dependent on archai.
Axioms are the most conventionally perceived
"first principles." There is usually little doubt that
these are archai of episteme. The most frequently mentioned example of an axiom is the so-called "law of
non-contradiction." It is easy to see how premises like
this are necessary for knowledge to exist. Further, in
Euclid's Elements we are deluged with a host of example
axioms. There they are called "Common Notions" and
all of them meet the criteria clearly: they cannot be
demonstrated, cannot be other than they are, and one
must surely be convinced of them more than the
proofs which are based upon them. The only remotely
surprising thing about these principles, is that they are
not the only principles.
The next category of archai are the definitions
(or terms) of episteme. These, too, have their mathematical counterpart in Euclid: the point which has no
part, the length which has no breadth. It is relatively
evident that these two and their other counterparts in
Euclid are principles. One could not learn geometry
without knowing these, and they certainly cannot be
proved through some more fundamental knowledge.
But definitions are principles in a wider sense than the
one Euclid used. The definition of a triangle, for
example, is an arche. It is both universal and eternal.
But there is definitely a difference between definitions
of things we must accept and those we can construct
out of the former. That difference is made manifest by
the third and final category of archai.
The last kind of archai includes what I ambiguously referred to as the "existentials." Existentials are
no more than statements positing some definition's
(or term's) existence. One can see how it is necessary
to posit the existence of a point, in a way that it is not
necessary to posit the existence of a triangle. This is
because the triangle can be constructed, or proved to
exist. The existence of a point, however, must be
assumed or posited. So a triangle is an arche only in the
sense that it is a definition, but a point is an arche in
two senses: that of the definition and that of the existential. Axioms do not admit of this division because
they are states of affairs which must exist (e.g. the law

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of non-contradiction), and do not admit of even the
possibility of being false.
Now these distinctions are clear in formulation, but their very precision is a little bit misleading.
Finding these distinctions in other sciences may prove
difficult. But Aristotle gives a list of six qualities all
archai share that help such a task and neatly summarize
our discussion of archai.
... it is also necessary for demonstrated
knowledge to proceed from [principles which
areJ (I) true, (2) primary, (3) immediate, and
also ( 4) more known than, ( 5) prior to, and
( 6) causes of the conclusion; for it is in this
way that the principles will also be appropri.:.
ate to what is proved.
(AP7Ib20)
They must be true in the sense that knowledge is of
unchanging universals. They must be primary and
therefore undemonstrable. They must be immediate,
which means not known through anything else. And
the three qualities they must have in relation to the
knowledge based on them are that they are more knowable (which explains the mandate that one be more
convinced of them), prior to (which explains the mandate that one be more familiar with them), and causes of
their conclusions. That last one will prove very significant. And such are archai.
Nous is more an enigma. As the variable in our
initial formulation (nous is the arches epistemes), I have
left it for last. Aristotle proceeds similarly in the
Nichomachean Ethics, concluding that nous is responsible
for providing the archai of episteme only after trying to
account for this dispensation by means of the other
faculties of the rational part of man's soul. In the
Posterior Analytics it makes a late appearance on the stage
and is only then unveiled as the foundation for knowledge. The mystery is how nous provides us with these
principles. Aristotle has left us some clues as to this,
and a close reading of his works yields several examples. We will be spending the third part of this essay
looking more closely at this phenomenon, so here only
a brief sketch of the activity will be given.
We will start in the Posterior Analytics. At one
point, Aristotle speaks quite comprehensively about
the matter at hand. One must keep in mind while
reading this that when he says we "learn either by
induction or demonstration" that he is speaking both of
the learning of knowledge proper (episteme) and of its
principles. But perhaps this is clear from context:

It is also evident that if a faculty of sensation
is absent from the start, some corresponding
science {episteme} must be lacking, seeing that
a science cannot be acquired if indeed we
learn either by induction {epagoge} or by
demonstration. Now a demonstration proceeds from universals, whereas an induction
proceeds from particulars. But universals cannot be investigated except through induction
and even the so-called "things by abstraction
{ aphairesis} ," although not separable [from substances { ousia} ], are made known to us by
induction ... and it is impossible to learn by
induction without the power of sensation. For
of individuals [there can be onlyJ sensation,
and no knowledge { episteme} of them can be
acquired; and neither can we demonstrate conclusions from universals without induction,
nor can we acquire universals through induction without sensation.
(AP8Ia38-8Ib9)
There are three things I would like to emphasize from
this passage.
First, nous attains universals (and therefore
archai) by epagoge. This is not an insight peculiar to
the Posterior Analytics. In the Nichomachean Ethics,
Aristotle explicitly states that "it is by induction {epagoge} that principles {archai} are acquired"
(NEII39b31). This is regularly translated "induction" but there are problems with rendering it so. It
seems to limit the term to an analytic understanding,
or perhaps suggest that one needs a number of lower
premises from which one can "induce" a primary
premise. Although both of these senses are included
in Aristotle's use of "epagoge," they do not exhaust it.
Joe Sachs suggests translating it as "example," in his
translation of Aristotle's Physics, suggesting that we
learn universals by looking at single instances: This
seems to get at the meaning more, for Aristotle seems
to use the word every time he describes the culling of
a universal from a particular, even in cases where this
is done from only one particular or in settings far
from analytic.
The second thing I would like to emphasize is
the sub-species of epagoge, aphairesis. r'Aphairesis" is almost
always translated "abstraction" and has the connotation of a subtraction or a taking away. It is used exclusively for mathematical terms. A circle, for example, is
abstracted from a beach ball, whereas its logos or definition (its ballness) is properly "induced." The difference

between the two is an important one, and I will deal
with it in more detail in the third section.
Third, I would like to emphasize the dependence of epagoge upon the experience of sensation. All
knowledge for Aristotle can be traced back to sensible
th~ngs. Without sensation we would never know anythmg. Aristotle is very explicit about this and in the De
Anima goes as far as to say that we cannot think anything without images (though this is not to be taken
without qualification).
Below is an example of the induction of principles:
... it is for our experiences concerning each
subject to provide the principles { archai}. I
mean, for instance, that it is for astronomical
experience to provide the principles for the science {episteme} of astronomy (for when the
appearances had been sufficiently grasped, in
this way astronomical demonstrations were discovered; and it is also similar concerning any
other art or science whatsoever. (APR46al8)
A similar passage occurs at AP87b40.
This example, with what we have said about
nous as the "arche epistemes" will serve us as our preliminary definition and understanding of Aristotle's
noetic. To break new ground, and come to a more
fundamental understanding of it, we will look at
the ways the light analogy changes or informs our
conception of nous. Before we can understand the
analogy, however, we must look at Aristotle's
general account of light.
SECTION TWO: LIGHT AND THE FACULTY
OFVISION IN DEANIMA
Aristotle's comparison between light and nous
in De Anima is brie£ It does not even carry a sentence
by itsel£ but instead merely serves as the last clause in
a sentence that would be interesting without it. With
this in mind, it might seem excessive to give an extended treatment of Aristotle's theory of light in order to
explicate it. However, my hope is that the value of
such an endeavor will become clear in its application
in the third section. The account of sight that I will be
explicating can be found primarily in the seventh chapter of the second book of De Anima. My recapitulation
will be mostly (and without further reference) drawn
from that account. Any references to other parts of De
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respect, we can apply what Aristotle says of sense in
general to sight. For sight, as is the case with all senses,
The proper object of sight is the visible, and
that is color. By "proper" it is meant that color is not
sensed by any other sense than sight, in contrast to
things like motion which can be sensed with two or
more senses (in the example of motion: sight and
touch). It is regarding "proper sensibles" that one has
the least chance of being mistaken. Aristotle refers to
color as "that to which sight is directed." This directedness of sight reminds us that Aristotle describes
sight as potency ( dunamis), and that since potency is in
a way stretched out toward its fulfillment or actuality
(energeia ), this fulfillment for sight is in the being-atwork of perceiving color.
Things in the world, he says, are not perceivable because of a certain articulation (logos), but
because they have their cause of visibility (color) within themselves. That is to say, we do not see a bright
blue ball against a dark green wall because of its ballness, but because its surface is colored. The way color
affects this perception is by having the "potency
{ dunamis} to set in motion what is actively { energeia}
transparent." This dunamis is the nature of color. The
transparent that it sets in motion is the medium of
sight; Aristotle's examples of this transparent include
air and water. It is the realm of the visible, the place
visible things come together and are made manifest.
The transparent is in energeia when it is lit, and it is in
dunamis when it is not lit, or dark. "And for that reason
it {any color} is not visible without light, but of each
thing every color is seen in light:' The formula for
sight then seems to be as follows: one needs the actively transparent (light) first, then the colored object
which is switched from dunamis to energeia by that light,
then the color sets in motion the transparent which
causes (as in efficient cause) something visible to be
sensed in the eye.
The transparent is not ever seen by itself. It is
said of the transparent that light is its "color," but this
is only said metaphorically. A lit transparent with no
colored objects in it would be invisible. The transparent is not an object of our sight except in that it can
be said to be that which is between the colors we see
and our eyes. But colored objects without the transparent would also be invisible. Aristotle's example is that
an object held directly against the eye is not seen. This
is the sense in which the transparent is the realm of
sight. It is where sight happens.
To understand this process in a different

... is receptive of the forms of perceptible
things without their material, as wax is receptive of the design of a ring without the iron
or gold, and takes up the golden or bronze
design, but not as gold or bronze: and similarly the sense of each thing is acted upon by the
thing that has color or flavor or sound, but
not in virtue of that by which each of those
things is the kind of thing it is, but in virtue
of that by which it has a certain attribute and
(DA424a I 9)
according to a ratio {logos}.
First, and most obviously, this passage makes clear that
the material of a visible object is not reproduced in
the sight, but merely its form, which in this case seems
to be color. But this restricted understanding of form's
analogue in sight is made questionable by the last
phrase in that passage: "according to a ratio {logos}:'
We stated earlier that the sense of sight is not
affected by something because of its "definition," the
Greek of which is also " logos". This must be a different
understanding of the word. Sachs, again, seems to hit
on the appropriate translation with "ratio". This indicates that perception, then, is not like a game of "Kick
the Can" where our sense organ is the can and the colors are the kickers. For perception is not without logos,
even though it is physically affected by its respective
stimuli. It still retains a sense of perspective, or proportion. Without this sense, assembling our perceptions of
things around us would be as fruitless as trying to
understand the exact topography of a river by examining the chaotic path of a feath er floating down it. And
so it is in this sense that all perception worthy of the
name has a certain logos.
This logos is both in the perceptible things
themselves and also in our sense organs, which explains
why extreme ratios in sensible things (colors too bright,
pitch too high) can destroy their corresponding sense
organs. For the ratios in colors are duplicated by the
ratios physically formed in our eyes. And since our eyes
have some physicality, and are not pure potency, they
can only accommodate a certain range of ratios.
These are the basics of Aristotle's theory of
light. As I said before, we will not find this to be a perfect
model for intellection (they are, after all, different phenomena), but with luck we should be able to use it to
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even if part of the benefit we derive :&amp;om this stems :&amp;om
contrasting Aristotle's theory of light with his noetic.
SECTION THREE: HOW NOUS IS LIKE
LIGHT, ONLY BETTER
It is not the entirety of what we call nous that
Aristotle compares to light, but nous poetikos) the maker
mind. Let us look at the passage in which the comparison is made:
But since in all nature one thing is the material { hule} for each kind (this is what is in
potency { dunamis} in all the particular beings
of that kind), but it is something else which is
the causal and productive thing by which all
of them are formed, as is the case with an art
in relation to its material, it is necessary in the
soul too that these distinct aspects be present;
the one sort is the intellect { nous} by becoming all things, the other sort by becoming all
things, in the way an active condition such as
light does, for in a certain way light too makes
colors that are in potency be at work as
colors.
(DA430aI 0)
It seems likely from the analogy that the nous that
becomes all things would be analogous to the sense
organ, which becomes the form of all sensible things.
But the dichotomy between the maker and nous and its
counterpart, the material and nous (which is in potency), does not line up with light and the sense of vision
as cleanly as it might first appear.
Like so many difficult terms in Aristotle,
"dunamis" is used relatively. Because of this non-static
quality of the word, Aristotle finds it more efficacious
to define it by analogy. In MetI048a30 Aristotle gives
us two examples, corresponding to two degrees, of
dunamis. His examples are:
Hermes in a block of wood or a half line in a
whole, because they can be separated out, or
someone who knows, even if he is not contemplating, if he is capable of contemplating.
This is reminiscent of a similar distinction made in
DA4I7a2I:
There is something that has knowledge in the
way we say any human being is a knower,

because humanity is part of the class that
knows and has knowledge, but there is also a
sense in which we mean by a knower the one
who already has, say, grammatical skill; and
each of these is in potency { dunamis} but not
in the same way, but the former is because his
kind and his material { hule} are of such a certain sort, while the latter is because he is capable of contemplating when he wants to, if
nothing outside him prevents it.
Both passages make the same distinction, and it
is clear that Hermes in a block of wood has the same
degree of potency as the human being who is a knower
only in the sense that he is a human being. Both require
something outside of themselves to help them into
actuality (energeia), for both have potency ( dunamis) as
material (hule). Since this potency is furthest removed
from actuality, or being-at-work, I will henceforth call it
"first potency". The human being who knows grammar
already and is merely not thinking about it is in "second
potency" as regards his status as a knower. Now material
nous, both in virtue of its name and its dependence
upon maker nous, is in first potency.
The problem is that the sense of vision, in contrast, is in second potency. Later, in the same chapter
from which the above quotation &amp;om De Anima was
taken, it is explicitly stated that "In the potency
{ dunamis} of perception, the fust change comes about
by the action of the parent, and when a living thing is
born it already has what it takes to perceive, just as it
has the capacity for knowledge." That is, a living thing
at birth has already undergone the change from first
potency to second as regards sight, whereas it only has
the capacity (first potency) for knowledge. The baby
only has to open his eyes to see, but he still has to learn
grammar before he conjugate. This makes the analogy
between light and nous trickier. It implies, first of all,
that light effects a transition in the sense organ from
second potency to full actuality ( energeia ), whereas nous
effects only the change &amp;om second potency to first in
the mind. As we learned above, these are substantially
different changes and they would make the two (light
and nous) very difficult to compare. One would also
have to answer the question of what it is that brings the
material nous into full actuality, and why it is that whatever that may be is not compared with light.
I propose a sort of compromise based on a
reading in the eighth book of the Metaphysics. Aristotle
gives there examples of the ways in which energeia

(actuality, being-at-work, etc.) takes precedence over
dunamis and establishes that
... it seems impossible to be a house-builder
if one has not built any houses, or a harpist if
one has not played the harp at all; for the one
learning to play the harp learns to play the
harp by playing the harp, and similarly with
those who learn things.
The harpist is helped into second potency by the same
instrument of actuality (a harp) with which he will
take himself into full actuality. His case is unlike the
baby's, in which development in the womb brings the
baby's sight to second potency and a different instrument (light) takes it to full actuality. Aristotle says in
this passage that learning works on the harpist model.
One does not have the capacity to think of grammar
added to one like a memory expansion on a hard drive,
and then have the ability to actualize that knowledge or
not. Rather, the thought occurs to you (or is presented
to you) and then you can think or not think about it.
The difference is not in the faculty by which you
understand a grammatical concept, but in the agent by
which the thought is generated. In the first case, it is a
teacher (or the thought, itself) which brings itself to
your attention (there is an analogy at the end of the
Posterior Analytics that makes this especially evident) and
then it is you by your will that can think of it. But, in
both instances (and regardless of the origin of the act
of thinking), your actual conceiving of the grammatical
concept is grounded in the maker nous.
This is an important difference to understand,
and it seems to stem from memory. The one who has
never thought of a specific concept cannot will himself
into thinking it because it is not an object on his horizon. One who has thought the concept before can
open himself up to cognizing them again. (In this way,
thinking of something you have already learned is very
much like opening your eyes to something.) But in
both the case of the person who first comes across a
concept and the case of the person who is recalling it
for the hundredth time, it is nous which perceives the
concept. And this understanding makes the light analogy tenable, for it makes the degree of potency to which
maker nous takes material nous unimportant as far as
understanding the workings of maker nous, because it
causes both changes and acts the same in both.
By following that thread we have made significant progress into how we are to read light (it repre-

sen ts maker nous) and the sense organ (which seems to
represent material nous). But by looking more closely at
our experience of the transition from first to second
potency we are led to formulate a question about the
object of vision, or rather its analogue, the object of
thought. I will let Aristotle both formulate and answer
the question I am thinking of:
And if one were to inquire why it is possible
for a boy to become a mathematician but not
wise or a physicist, the answer is: the objects
of mathematics exist by abstraction { aphairesis}
while the principles { archai} of philosophy or
physics are acquired from experience; and
young men have no conviction of their principles but only use words, while the nature of
the objects of physics and of wisdom is not
unclear to physicists and to wise men.
(NEI 142al5)
It is the difference between aphairesis and epagoge that
was made in the first section that is key to understanding this passage. Apparently, we are more quickly disposed to allow maker nous to abstract mathematical
objects &amp;om our experiences that we are to "induce"
through maker nous the archai of philosophy and other
such sciences.
Insight into the difficulty of coming to see
the true archai of such studies, and how easy it is to
come up with vacuous archai, can be had from a look at
the process Aristotle goes through in De Anima to find
the characteristics and essence of the soul. There are
two ways Aristotle defines the soul there; one he
describes as empty and the other, meaningful. The
meaningful definition takes into account all of the
faculties of a particular kind of soul. It must do this
because a truly meaningful definition is about a single
kind of soul, something that gets to the essence and
thinghood ( ousia) of a particular being. The empty
kind is one that would "fit them all but be appropriate
to none" (DA414b24). The meaningful kind of
definition takes experience and time to unfold. It is
not, like mathematical objects, immediately obvious.
As an afterthought, I would like to add that
there seems to be another difference between mathematical and philosophical objects which springs from
Aristotle's ontology. Because ousia is being in the
primary sense, and mathematical objects have a derivative and abstracted being, there is a sense in which
mathematical objects do not strive for any energeia like

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beings in the more primary sense do, but borrow their
energeia from the particular contemplative thinker (see
Metl 05 I a30). Philosophy is the study of living
essences, not of the empty and static relations between
magnitudes to which math is restricted. Because of
their dependence on the thinker they do not stretch
themselves out toward (or suggest) "metaphysical"
questions, as Aristotle would understand that term.
This is what I meant, earlier, when I said that they
were a good analogy for much of what Aristotle wants to
say but a bad example.
The failure of the young to see in a clear way
the principles of philosophy, and the requirement of
time and experience to accomplish that task, seems to
contradict something else Aristotle says about the maker
nous. In DA430al8 he says the maker nous is by its thinghood ( ousia) a being-at-work ( energeia). And right after
that, that it is not the case that "at one time it thinks
and that at another time it does not think." If objects of
thought are perpetually bathing in the light of nous, why
do we not see them? Aristotle answers in Met993b5:
... perhaps, ... the cause is not in the things
but in us; for in just the same way that the
eyes of bats are related to the mid-day, so also
is the intellect {nous} related to those things
which are by nature most evident of all.
It seems that we are too used to seeing things as particulars and not looking for the reasons past where we
have already found them, as though we were accustomed to feeling our way around a room with our eyes
shut because the lamp-light hurt our eyes and the
rooms colors were too bright.
This brings us back to the original analogy and
asks what noetic ingredient corresponds to color, and if
an answer to that can be found, what corresponds to the
transparent. Its equivalent in intellecdon is probably
universals, and they are drawn from images probably in
the fashion "universal judgements" are said to develop
in the first book of the Metaphysics. That is: we have multiple sensations which stick in our memory, and many
memories of the same sensation which make our experience possible, and then "out of many conceptions from
experience, one universal judgement arises about those
that are similar:' This also makes the most sense out of
the brief elaboration Aristotle gives the analogy (that it
is "in a certain way light too makes colors that are in
potency be at work as colors") because making one see
universals in particulars is equivalent to making things

intelligible (for knowledge is of universals). Maker nous
makes the potentially thinkable, actually thinkable. And
as light is the energeia of the transparent, we are tempted
to say that maker nous is the energeia of something like an
inner transparent. Perhaps, though, no such analogue for
the transparent can be found in the mind because the
material nous is what it thinks, it "becomes all things;'
and there is no separation between the thinker and the
thought. This seems to be the limit to which this analogy can be stretched.
But before we leave this text, we should see if
what we have discerned can help supply an answer to
one of the bigger questions about the maker nous. ls the
maker nous also the Maker? It seems unclear whether
nous poetikos can be considered God or whether it is merely a part of every man. D.W. Hamlyn, in a gloss of his
translation seems to think it is not, because (among
other reasons) Aristotle would have mentioned something like that. This seems to me to assume that if
Aristotle linked our minds to God's through the maker
nous this would, in the context of his other works, be
surprising. But I will try to make a case that there is reason to believe that the maker nous is God and that this
claim makes sense in relation to Aristotle's other works.
The Metaphysics makes this point most clearly.
For what is receptive of the intelligible and of
thinghood is the intellect {nous}. And it is at
work when it has them: therefore it is in
being-at-work { energeia} rather that in receptivity that the intellect seems god-like, and its
contemplation is pleasantest and best. So if
the divine being is always in this condition
that we are sometimes in, that is to be wondered at; and if it is in it to a greater degree
than we are, that is to be wondered at still
more. And that is the way it is. But life
belongs to it too, for the being-at-work of the
intellect is life, and that being is being-atwork, and its being-at-work is in itself the
best life and is everlasting. And we say that it
is a god who everlastingly lives the best life, so
that life and continuous and everlasting
duration belong to a god; for this being is
god.
(MetI072b22)
Now the maker nous is always at work in a
state of contemplation, it is also continuous and it is
also everlasting. And as much as we participate in the
energeia of the maker nous (which is always itself an

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energeia) we are participating in the divine. It seems that
separating the maker nous from Aristotle's god is
unnecessary. Why, then, is Hamlyn hesitant to do it?
Perhaps he thinks this would turn Aristotle, who
seems to be an otherwise level-headed philosopher,
into a transcendental mystic.
There is no reason to conclude this either,
though. Taking Plotinus as our model of mysticism,
who, in a mystical moment, is one with the divine only
to slip down from intellection back into the discourse
of reason, it is clear to see that Aristotle is no mystic.
For Aristotle's divine is pre-eminently rational. In fact,
it is only in the discourse of reason that the eternal and
divine is attained (and it is that {nous} in us which is
deathless and eternal"). He understands the world as a
certain intelligible whole with a beginning ( arche) and
an end (telos). Thus his pleasure in contemplation is
similar to the pleasure of contemplating a well~written
play, not the ecstasy of a religious experience.
The Aristotelian experience of the divine is
not even something properly transcendental. For man
is the animal with logos. Participating in god-like contemplation is natural to him. He is fulfilling his dunamis
by contemplating. And Aristotle even concedes that
the difference between man and god is unbridgeable.
One can never contemplate perpetually, like the gods
do. Men get tired of thinking, and get hungry and
need to feed themselves. But inasmuch as they think
on eternal notions, they become those notions, and it
is that within them that is deathless. It is not the per-

sonality of man that survives, but the intelligible
notions his intellect becomes. And it is because these
intelligible notions are in substances and things all
around him, that his survival in them is no departure
to another realm. That is the essential novelty of
Aristotle's understanding of objects of thought, as he
contrasted it with Plato's (or whoever's doctrine it was
that he attributed to the Platonists of his day).
This understanding objects of thought (and
by that I mean noetic objects) is primary in two ways
to Aristotle's noetic theory. First, since objects of
thought are archai, they are primary in the sense that
they are the principles of all knowledge. This relationship, and the way these archai are perceived, was the
main theme explored by this essay. The second way
this is significant is that understanding the being of
objects of thought is necessary before any epistemology or noetic can be formulated. At least on the
surface, Aristotle distanced himself from Plato (and
Socrates) by coming to a different understanding of
the ontological status of these notions. This is then
the groundwork for an understanding of how Aristotle
saw his place in the tradition. +

Thanks to Mrs. Pamela Kraus for advising this paper.
All translations are Mr. Joe Sachs). In cases where he does have a
published translation, Mr. Hippocrates G. Apostl.e~ are used. All
statements within { } are my own words.

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On Mimesis
Robert Dickson, AOO

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n his Poetics, Aristotle argues that mimesis is natural
to humans, both as something to engage in and
something to enjoy. Described as one of the
engendering causes of poetry, our relationship with
mimesis remains unclear as the Poetics explains how
playwrights should best move us with their craft.
In the first book of his Metaphysics, Aristotle
again speaks of mimesis in passing, recounting the
Pythagoreans' understanding of the universe:
So he called this other sort of beings forms,
and said the perceptible things were apart
from these and all spoken of derivatively from
these, for the many things with the same
names as the forms were results of participation. He changed only the name participation,
for the Pythagoreans said that beings are by
what of mimesis of the numbers, but Plato by
way of participation, having changed the
name. What this participation or mimesis of
the forms might be, however, they were in unison in leaving behind to be sought.
[Metaphysics 987b8J
Obviously, the word 'mimesis' meant more to
Aristotle (or the Pythagoreans) than simply what
occurs when we create art. But why would the same
word be used fo r the writing of Oedipus Rex and for
the relationship between the tangible realm and the
eternal? T hough Aristotle's thought differs greatly
from what the Pythagoreans must have meant by
mimesis, his view of our world and of our art gains
great clarity when we widen the definition of mimesis
to its limit and ask what relevance our art has to our
souls and nature itself.
By considering general mimesis, we shall be
forced to consider its relation to our souls, our education, our politics, and our universe. Then we may
return to the particular mimesis that goes into making
art and ask why it is natural for us to imitate what is
outside us.

Mimesis: General and Poetic
Before we can understand how the human soul
produces and enjoys mimesis in its arts, we must fully
comprehend mimesis in a more general sense, not limited to human creations or even to humans. For clarity,
we will speak of mimesis in two ways: the widest way
the word allows and the specific kind of mimesis relevant to our inquiry.
By general mimesis we mean not the activity by
which a thing becomes the same as another (such as
when water comes to be air through evaporation) but
rather when a thing assumes some defining characteristics of another thing without changing its own nature
(such as when water is dyed to look like red wine but
remains water). By 'defining characteristics' we mean that
if being a given thing means possessing X necessary
qualities (such as being red wine means being alcoholic,
derived from a grape, red, and tasteful), the mimetic
object assumes not all qualities encompassed by X, but
rather so many as to appear the same as or closer in
relation to the original object (such as water imitating
red wine may mean simply being dyed red). We must
acknowledge now that general mimesis is not restricted
to human perception or creation, evidenced at the least
by chameleons and other animals that assume the color
of their surroundings seemingly at will.
By poetic mimesis we mean general mimesis
restricted to that which is ordered by a human to effect
emotion in any human who should see it (such as poetry, painting, and music). The observer must know the
object to be mimetic; if he or she is fooled into thinking a painting is actually a window, there will be no
pleasure particular to poetic mimesis. It is clear why an
art like painting fits our definition of general mimesis:
it is paint arranged to present the image of an actual
thing. But something should be said about what way
music and abstract art are mimetic when there is no
clearly imitated thing outside the work.
In his Poetics, Aristotle states that poetry is
more philosophical than history, "since poetry relates
more of the universal, while history relates particulars"
(Poetics I 45 I bS). T here is a way in which history is

generally mimetic, in that it recreates as best it can
actual events in new form. But what separates history
from poetry is the structure given to events in order to
effect emotion, so that what is conveyed from artist to
audience is not merely fact but feeling. In this way, it is
not only the particulars that are imitated in art, but
the more universal human experience of emotional
reaction to things. Music does not attempt (usually) to
resemble anything outside itself; it is form and motion
applied directly to sounds. But contained in a piece of
music is mimetic human emotion, a universal more
directly imitated through music than even tragic poetry, which must effect emotion through the use of particular names instead of generic notes. A casual listening to a major and a minor scale reveals that music
imitates tension, resolution, conflict, brightness and
dreariness (feelings entirely present but difficult to
articulate) through differently pitched tones while
tragedy must imitate the same human feelings by presenting tension, resolution, conflict, happiness and
pathos as they occur in our actual lives, as if we are
the tones. Thus we understand music to be poetically
mimetic not in that it imitates any particular outside
itself but because it attempts to reflect universals
directly. The same can be said for other art that effects
emotion without representing particular things.
Mimetic Creation
For it is an instinct of human beings, from
childhood, to engage in mimesis (indeed, this
distinguishes them from other animals: man is
the most mimetic of all, and it is through
mimesis that he develops his earliest understanding) [Poetics I 148b4J
This curious claim described by Aristotle as
one of the engendering causes of poetry is difficult to
believe when we restrict ourselves to reading "mimesis" as poetic mimesis. For how many children speak in
verse? Or gain their earliest understanding through
painting? Widening the term to general mimesis reveals
how mimetic man truly is.
That we gain our earliest 1tpcfrta~, better
translated as "primary" or "first") understanding
through mimesis is a remarkable statement considering
that mimesis is not mentioned in On the Soul as a distinct faculty of the intellect. But perhaps we again
limit ourselves reading mimesis as something independent in the soul: superfluous, mimesis is the soul's

fundamental method of acquisition in all its respects.
In their different ways, perception, imagination and
intellect are all mimetic faculties. We shall speak of
them individually.
Perception, as a potency, is nothing other than
what it sees, constantly assuming potentially the actual
forms of the things before it. Its being is strictly
mimetic, taking upon itself the objects of the senses as
they are in outside things. This fits well our definition
of general mimesis, as the perceptive potency remains
a potency as it beholds a rock, though it assumes the
being-at-work visible nature of the rock outside of it.
Intellect is much like perception in its mimesis, though complicated greatly by the fact that there is
no clear distinction between the intelligible thing and
the intellect thinking it ( OTS 430 a20). H ow is this
mimesis if the intellect not only takes the form of a
certain thought but is the form and thought? Without
fully exploring the difference between the intellect that
becomes all things and that which forms all things, it
is enough to recognize that intellect is abstraction
from tangible things, an existence that one could say is
mimetic of that which can be perceived. "And it [the
intellect J is itself intelligible in the same way its intelligible objects are, for in the case of things without
material what thinks and what is thought are the same
thing, for contemplative knowing and what is known
in that way are the same thing... but among things
having material, each of them is potentially something
intelligible, so that there is no intellect present in them
(since intellect is a potency to be such things without
their material), but there is present in them something
intelligible" ( OTS 430al). The intellect that becomes
all things is the clay of the sculptor, taking upon itself
(in fact becoming) the form of something else. The
intellect that forms all things is the sculptor of all that
follows the order of intellect, causing a formed universe, existing as a being-at-work without which nothing thinks. Intellect is mimetic in the same way it is
potential and at-work, as the formed and as the one
who forms.
We are left with imagination: "the motion
coming about by the action of sense perception while
it is at work" ( OTS 429al ). Its mimetic nature is different from that of perception and intellect, which
take on qualities of objects outside the soul.
Imagination represents the objects of perception as
imaginings for the intellect, in a sense translating the
objects of one faculty into those of another. "And for
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present in the way perceptible things are ... for this
reason the soul never thinks without an image" (ors
43lal5). Imagination is the only potency of the
human soul that is mimetic of the soul for the soul.
Imagination's mimetic function is especially
significant to an inquiry into poetic mimesis. Just as
through a synthesis of imaginings we derive something
greater with the intellect ( OTS 43 lb), in poetic mimesis it is through a synthesis of particulars that the audience is brought to recognize some underlying universal
and feel some elevated emotion. Both imagination and
poetic mimesis are willed types of mimesis, instances
of one person being able to recreate a universe according to some reason. We will see below exactly how
related imagination and poetic mimesis are.
Something more should be said about human
reason and its mimetic nature. For the intellect is not
only mimetic in becoming and forming things, but in
articulating what things are. Our words are symbols of
impressions in the soul, impressions common to all
people, though our words differ (On Interpretation,
l 6a5). Words gain meaning mimetically, the sound of
"horse" only meaning something to someone who can
attach it to its appropriate thought. Complex statements, such as "All horses have hair," are instances of
us unfolding in speech what is already present in what
we know simply horses to be. This is mimesis, humans
representing simple forms and divisions between
things in statements of truth and falsity.
This is significant to our inquiry because our
speech only lets us represent thoughts of things, not
other impressions in the soul. The word "fear" spoken
by one person can conjure the thought of what fear is
in another, but not the emotion itself. Poetic mimesis
is what allows us to do this: by representing a fearinspiring thing, an artist can conjure that emotion in
another. As A.6yoa is to thought, poetic mimesis is to
emotion. Both are extensions of our political nature,
which is further confirmed by the shared pleasure of
more than one person responding similarly to the same
poetically mimetic object.
Another way in which mimesis is natural to us
from childhood is in our acquisition of virtue, which
occurs through habituation. Consider:
The virtues ... we acquire by first having actually practised them, just as we do the arts. We
learn an art or craft by doing the things that
we shall have to do when we have learnt it: for
instance, men become builders by building

houses, harpers by playing on the harp.
Similarly we become just by doing just acts,
temperate by doing temperate acts, brave by
doing brave acts. [Nie. Ethics l I03bI J
Thus although actions are entitled just and temperate when they are such acts as just and temperate men would do, the agent is just and temperate not when he does these acts merely, but
when he does them in the way in which just and
temperate men do them [done with knowledge,
chosen deliberately and for its own sake, and
with the act sprung from a fixed and permanent
disposition of character]. [Nie. Ethics I I 05b5J

In order to become morally virtuous, we do the things
that virtuous people do until we do them for their
own sake and we take pleasure in the act itsel£ This is
general mimesis continued until it is more, actual
change into the thing imitated. Moreover, it is through
childhood mimesis that children grow to become full
members of family and community: by mimicking
parents and neighbors they assume what qualities are
specific to their families and communities, such as language, customs, and mannerisms. The link between
mimesis and our political nature is strong.

Mimetic Enjoyment
... and [it is J equally natural that everyone
enjoys mimetic objects. A common occurrence
indicates this: we enjoy contemplating the
most precise images of things whose actual
sight is painful to us, such as the forms of
vilest animals and of corpses. [Poetics I I 48b8J
Aristotle here seems to speak mainly of poetic
mimesis and our enjoyment of it, though what is said
is quite similar to this statement about imagination in
On the Soul:
When we have the feeling that something is terrifying or frightening we immediately feel the
corresponding feeling, and similarly if we think
it is something that inspires confidence, but with
the imagination we are in the same condition as
if we were beholding terrifying or confidenceinspiring things in a painting. [ OTS 427b23]
This furthers the above claim that imagination is an

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instance of general mimesis tied closely to poetic
mimesis. Our imagination presents to us an image of,
say, a bear, which we do not fear but instead welcome
(~atpci V, translated above as "enjoy"). We are "in
the same condition" as when we behold the bear as a
poetically mimetic object. Why is imagination so much
like poetic mimesis?
As stated above, both imagination and poetic
mimesis are willed. They grant humans the god-like
ability to create things not merely as they are but
according to whatever reason seems best. Both then
grant humans the power to study images outside of
any time of immediate duty to act. Imagination and
poetic mimesis bring us omnipotence and omniscience
over tangible things through a divine removal.
But a grand impasse arises when this removal is
considered: How, if the removal of the object from us
removes us from the corresponding feeling, does tragedy
(mimesis of "fearful and pitiable matters") excite us to
feel fear and pity? More generally, how exactly does any
poetic mimesis move us to emote when the things represented are removed as such from us?
Our answer is in the difference between particulars and universals. Though poetic mimesis
removes particulars from our experience, it effectively
calls to light universals that are not at all removed
from us. In our bear example above, for instance, the
painted claws of the bear are removed from us and do
not excite fear. But a sudden recognition that some
animals are created by nature to do violence to humans
would not be at all removed from us, and would excite
fear. Even a sudden recognition that we are terrorstricken at irrational creatures would be more generally
fear-inspiring than being afraid of a single bear's claw.
The difference between particular and universal should be made clear. The particular represented by
poetic mimesis is the apparent object independently
existent outside of the mimesis, such as the actual bear
in our example above. The universal may be a more
general truth articulated through symbols or, more
likely, a common human response to a given thing. A
play may use particular names and actions to convey
the truth that "Courage is a necessary virtue for
kings" or it may simply call to light in the audience's
minds the happiness that follows from courageous
actions. Since poetic mimesis is created primarily to
effect emotion, it follows that the primary universal
relayed is not a rational truth, but rather a response,
such as the connection between action and happiness

that can be described but not relayed through words.
We return to imagination. Aristotle says:
Now the thinking potency grasps in thought the
forms that are present in things imagined, and
since what is to be pursued or fled from is
marked out for it in those imaginings, even
apart from sense perception, it is moved when it
applies itself to imagined things. For instance,
perceiving that a signal light is fire, and observing by what is common to the senses that it is
moving, one recognizes that it is an enemy; but
sometimes, by means of the imaginings and
thoughts in the soul, just as if one were seeing,
one reasons out and plans what is going to happen in response to what is present. [OTS 43lb2J
The particular imaginings, say of fire and motion, are
independently removed from our actions and emotions. But through a synthesis of the imaginings something new arises in us, knowledge that it is an enemy,
and we are moved to act or to emote. This mirrors and
cannot be far in soul activity from the beholder of
poetic mimesis, synthesizing particulars relayed directly to recognize something more general.
The relation between poetic mimesis and imagination does not fully address the main question raised
by the above passage: Why do we enjoy mimetic objects?
The explanation of this too is that understanding gives great pleasure not only to philosophers
but likewise to others too, though the latter have
a smaller share in it. This is why people enjoy
looking at images, because through contemplating them it comes about that they understand
and infer what each element means, for instance
that "this person is so-and-so:' For, if one happens not to have seen the subject before, the
image will not give pleasure qua mimesis but
because of its execution of colour, or for some
other such reason.
[Poetics 1448bl2]
The enjoyment of mimetic objects is the enjoyment of
knowledge. Yet beholding poetic mimesis is not the
same as learning, for it follows from the above passage
that poetic mimesis cannot present anything new to
the audience: the pleasure would not be that particular
to poetic mimesis but rather of the lesser parts of the
art (diction, spectacle, color, etc.) But is this restricted
to particulars or to universals?
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It is the particulars represented that cannot be
new to the audience. Without knowing what an apple
is, one cannot enjoy a painting of an apple as something relaying a univers~l. If a language is a common
collection of symbols for thoughts, it follows that an
artist can no more communicate a universal through
an unknown mimetic object than a Greek word can
convey a thought to a strictly English speaker.
But the universal relayed through poetic mimesis is different, and does not appear to be the sort of
thing that one "knows" like one knows what an apple
or a king is. The universals relayed are recognized by
the audience through their own activity: "through contemplating them it comes about that they understand
and infer what each element means." There is pleasure
in coming to understand the particulars of an artwork
as elements of something larger, even if the larger truth
is something already somehow known to us. This is
different from learning, as what is universal must be
apparent to everybody. "Recognition" is an appropriate
name for what happens in observing poetic mimesis:
something known but not acknowledged is brought to
light by the audience's response to the object.

Political Mimesis
Mimesis, general and poetic, has been discussed as closely tied to our political nature in its creation and its enjoyment. As the emotional counterpart
to our rational 'A6yoro, it represents the impressions in
our soul for others. It is how we are habituated to
moral virtue by others, and it is how we become members of communities. But the most striking connection
between mimesis and politics is in the most elevated
relationship possible, that of two virtuous friends.
Friendship, the bond of the state (Nie. Ethics
l 155a25), is in its most perfect and complete form when
it is between two people who are exceedingly virtuous. The
affection between the two is prompted by similarity in
virtue (Nie. Ethics l 156b20). Aristotle says the following:
Also, when men wish the good of those they
love for their own sakes, their goodwill does
not depend on emotion but on a fixed disposition. And in loving their friend they love
their own good, for the good man in becoming dear to another becomes that other's good.
Each party therefore both loves his own good
and also makes an equivalent return by wishing the other's good, and by affording him

pleasure; for there is a saying, '.Amity is equality; and this is most fully realized in the friendships of the good.
[Nie. Ethics l l 57b30J
Though we wish goodwill for our friends, it is our own
virtue that we see in their actions. The approval of a virtuous person is self-recognition for the approved one,
who cannot fully know himself independently.
Happiness follows from a virtuous person's actions, but
a virtuous person may not recognize the extent of his or
her virtue unless it is reflected in another, someone
admired. I believe the difference between being happy
from virtue and being aware that you are .happy because
you are virtuous is what friendship provides and poetic
mimesis presents for contemplation.
Is this mimesis? Obviously, there is no true
creation of the friend like there is of a poem. But if a
sculpture was created of a man,' he could see himself
through the eyes of another and react to himself in a
new way. He could gain insight into not just what he
is but how he is to others: he could see himself as a
political animal while remaining himsel£ We are
friends with people as much like ourselves as possible,
such that our choice of friends is something of a
poetic selection. We replace mimesis of ourselves with
what actually is us, unimitated, and we behold ourselves as if we are images. The "bond of the state" is
akin to poetic mimesis, a recognition of everything
outside us as fair or poor reflections.
Before any more can be said about poetic
mimesis, we must understand more fully general
mimesis in its most universal sense and what causes it.
opE;t~

and Mimesis

Consider these passages:
Its [the nutritive/ reproductive potency's J work
is to beget offspring aswell as to use food, since
the most natural thing for a living thing to do
... is to make another like itself, for an animal
to make an animal and a plant to make a plant,
in order to have a share in what always is and is
divine, in the way it is able to do. For all things
yearn [6pE:yemt J for that, and for the sake of
it do everything that they do by nature ... So
since it is impossible for them to share continuously in what always is and is divine, since no
destructible thing admits of remaining one and
the same in number, each of them does share in

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it in whatever way it can have a share, one sort
more and another less, enduring not as itself
but as one like itself, that is one with it not in
number but in kind.
[ OTS 4 I 5a25J
There is a certain ceaseless motion that is
always moving, and it is in a circle (and this is
evident not only to reason but in fact), so that
the first heaven would be everlasting.
Accordingly, there is also something that moves
it. And since what is in motion and causes
motion is something intermediate, there is also
something that causes motion without being in
motion, which is everlasting, an independent
thing, and a being-at-work. But what is desired
[ 'tO opEK'tOV J and what is thought cause
motion in that way: not being in motion, they
cause motion... And it [the unmoved moverJ
causes motion in the manner of something
loved, and by means of what is moved moves
other things. Now if something is moved, it
admits of being other than it is; and so, even if
the primary kind of change of place is a beingat-work, insofar as something is moved, it is in
that respect at least capable of being otherwise,
with respect to place even if not with respect to
thinghood. But since there is something that
causes motion while being itself motionless,
this does not admit of being otherwise than it
is in any respect at all. [Metaphysics I 072a20]
In the On the Soul passage, Aristotle presents the activities
of ensouled, mortal things as imitative of that which
does not change, what is eternally itself In the relation of
the fixed stars to the unmoved mover, a circularity is the
proper motion of place to mimic the eternal because it is
more continuous, more perfect than linear. This is
ope~t&lt;;, translated often as 'desire' or 'appetite: But it
truly means a thing's stretching itself out, a meaning
almost captured by the English word "longing."
ope~t&lt;; is the link between the tangible and
the eternal, that which the transient has in its attempt
to be as complete as that which does not change and
never will. It is also evidence of the most grand mimesis existent, that of all changing things in their efforts
to be like the eternal and constant. In fact, the only
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thing that is never mimetic is that which does not
admit of being otherwise than it is in any respect at

all," the motionless first mover. All motion of comingto-be, all being-at-work from potency, is mimesis on
the part of a changing thing attempting to assume the
completion and perfection of the eternal, the unmoved.
If OpE~tc; is a grand cause of motion, and of
our general mimesis, what particular relevance does it
have to our poetic mimesis? The answer is that it is
the same: poetic mimesis is a stretching out to the
divine on the part of humans, elevating our practical
concerns to the level of the unchanging.
The difference between history and tragedy,
discussed above, is that tragedy presents a universal
behind its particulars. What's more, the events of
tragedy follow strictly according to necessity from each
other, whereas history does not present the cause of
each action in its scope. All art presents some kind of
nature in a frame, a thing with a beginning, middle and
end. An observer, as said above, is granted omniscience
about a contained image of our practical realm, something we would normally deliberate about (as if we were
to act) , and instead he contemplates (Poetics I 448b I 5).
This is the opE~tc; of poetic mimesis. Just as the fixed
stars stretch their natures to partake in the divine, poetic
mimesis stretches the part of the human soul generally
reserved for changing things and elevates its function to
something akin to contemplation of unchanging things,
the most divine activity of the human soul. The true
feat is that it does so through an appeal to our emotions, in a sense elevating them as well, allowing us to
contemplate them as well as the mimetic objects.
This is not particular to tragedy, though it is
illustrated well by it. Beholding any poetically mimetic
object allows the human soul to treat the affairs of
the transient earth as eternal ideas of contemplation.
This is a luxury present because of the structure, the
extended A.6yocr, introduced by the artist to changing
things. A person's perception of a bear must be met
with deliberation. A person's perception of a painting
of a bear is removed from deliberation and will not
alter in any way so long as the observer wills. It
becomes a thing that can be contemplated like a metaphysical truth, continually. A melody arranges sound
so that it all seems present, that what has been heard
and what is anticipated are felt together as parts of a
thing, something that can be understood as a whole
but experienced in parts, and contemplated. I believe
this to be a fair way to understand aesthetic beauty: a
contemplation of that which, without the added order
of a person, could simply not be contemplated. This is
the cause and end of poetic mimesis. •

GREEK

TRANSLATION

Sophocles, Oedipus at Colonus, Lines 668-720
Samuel Garcia, A99
Chorus:
In this land, stranger, renowned for its horses
you have come to the fairest dwellings of the earth,
splendid Colonus, there
the sweet nightingale sings,
·incessantly engaged, from under the green and wooded glens,
dwelling in the flushed ivy
and in the god's inviolable foliage,
hidden from the sun, with countless fruit,
with neither wind nor wintry storms; where Dionysus,
ever the reveler, spends his days,
tending to divine nurses.

And beneath the dew of heavens,
day after day, the fair-clustering narcissus
blooms always, ancient crown
of might goddesses, and so does the ·
gold-gleaming crocus; nor do the
tireless springs from which the wandering
streams of Cephisus issue forth diminish,
but ever daily, with water undefiled,
does that river flow fervently over the plains
of the broad-swelling earth. The choruses of Muses
loathe not this place, nor, in turn,
does Aphrodite of the golden reins.
And there is something the like of which
the land of Asia has never known;
nor has it ever yet grown in the great
Dorian island of Pelops,
a tree planted not by the hancis
of men, but rather self-produced,
a terror to hostile spears which
flourishes mightily in this land:
the leaf of the gray olive, nurturer of young life.
This none of the young nor any dwelling
in old age will ravage nor make barren with their hands;
for Zeus Morios, with all things ever in his sight,
gazes upon it and so too does gray-eyed Athena.
And I have yet more praise
for this city our mother,
a gifi: of a powerful divinity,
the greatest glory of the land,
glorious for its noble steeds, for their young colts,
for its prosperity so near the sea.
For it was you, Son of Kronos, Lord Poseidon,
you who enthroned her in this glory,
having brought first to these streets
the bridle that tames the steed.
And the much rowed oar of the sea,
marvelously wrought by the hands,
leaps in the air, following after the
hundred-footed Nereids.

Xo

EUt7t7tOU, ~EVE, 'tUOe xwpao
I.Kou 1a Kpchtma yfo; e7tauA.a,
'tOV apyfi'ta ICOA(J)VOV' eve
a A.iyeia µwupe'tat
0aµ.i~ouoa µaA.tm' ariorov xA.ropa'ic; u7to pacromc;,
'tOV oi. Vffi7tOV EXOUOa !ClOOOV Kat •av &lt;'iPmov Sc.au
cl&gt;UAAaOa µuptOKap7tOV clVcXAtOV
clVTJVeµOV 'te 7tclV't(J)V
xc.tµ.rovrov· 'i.v' o l3aKXtffi1ac; ad L\tovuooc; eµj3a1c.uEt
0dmc; aµcl&gt;t7toA.ffiv neiivmc;.
0aA.Af:t 8' oupaviac; u7t' axvac; o KaUi(3o1puo Kai-nµap ald
vap!Ctoooc;, µeyaA.otv 0eo'iv
apxa\.ov O'tecl&gt;avroµ', 0 'te
xpucrauyiic; Kp6Koc;· ouO' au7tVOt Kpfivm µtvu0ouoiv
Kricl&gt;toou voµ.aoc.o pc.e0prov, aU' aii:v E:n'T\µan
cOKU'tOKoc; 7teoirov E7ttvioc.'tat
clKT1p&lt;hcp crUV oµppq&gt;
mc.pvouxou xeov6c;· ouoi: Mouoav xopoi VtV cl7teITTUYTIOOV, ouo' au
a xpuoavwc; 'Acl&gt;poooi.a.
EO'tlV o' ofov Eyffi yoc;
'Acri.a&lt;; ouK E:naKouro,
ouo' EV ·~ µ£clA.&lt;;i L\ropiOt vaocp
neA.o7toc; 7tc07to1c. PA.ao-rov
cl&gt;u1c.uµ' axdprowv au't07tot6v,
enerov &lt;1&gt;6P11µa oo'lrov,
o ·~&amp; eaA.Af:t µEyrn-ra xc.Op&lt;;&lt;.
yA.auK&lt;lc; 7tat0o1p6cl&gt;ou cl&gt;l&gt;Uov E:A.aiac;·
'tO µEv nc; OU veapoc; ouoi: yvp&lt;;i
ouvvairov aA.tcOOel XEPl 7tEpoac;· 0
yap dcrmi:v opffiv KUKAO&lt;;
Af:uocrc.t vtv Mopiou L\1oc;
XU yAaUKffi7tl&lt;; 'NJava.
«AA.av o' at vov exro µa'tp07t0Aet 't~Oe Kpcl'tlO'tOV,
oropov tau µeyaA.ou 0aiµovoc;, d7tciv,
(X0ovocr) aux11µa µf.ytO'tOV,
c.um7tov, eu7troA.ov, c.u0aA.aocrov.
ro 7tat Kpovou, cru yap VtV E&lt;;
t60' etcrac; auxriµ', ava~ IlooetMv,
t7t7tOtcrlV 'tOV clKecnfipa XOAtVOV
7tpcO'tatOt 'tatOOe K'ttcrac; ayma'ic;.
a O' c.uijpc.tµoo h7tayA: aA.ia xc.pcrt
*7tapa7ttoµEva* 7tA.a.a
0pq)mcc.t, 1&amp;v hmoµ7toorov
Nripflorov aK6A.ou0oc;.

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COMMENTARY
Sam Garcia, A 99

I

wooded glens, I dwelling in the flushed ivy, I and
in the gods inviolable.foliage... "
began by doing something that may soundpecuThe word.for ivy, Ktooov, is modified by
liar: I rendered it as gracelessly literal as possible.
a word that often describes a persons complexion,
Only after having a basic understanding ofthe
otvronov, what I translate a.s 'Jlushed. "This word
thoughts and images that the original seeks to convey
otvronov is related to the Greek word.for wine
do I feeljustified in departing.from it, as depart we
(otv0&lt;;). The color, then, ofthe ivy is obviously
ultimatelymust. For, in my opinion, a translation
being compared to that ofwine;
must not simply aspire to beauty,
but, more interestingly, the ivys
in sonority and arrangement of
complexion is perhaps being
words, but to beauty and accuracompared to the complexion of
cy: Ifbeauty be your only criteria man grown drunk.from wine.
on, you may wellfind yourself
The ivy, then, is a perfect symcomposing some beautiful new
bolfor an exuberance which,
passage, rather than.fashioning
the chorus declares, distinguisha beautiful rendition ofan
es Co/onus. This beautiful
already existingpassage. Of
personification of Colo nus'
course, what you are attempting
landscape gives this passage
to translate is also an important
a life it would have otherwise
consideration. Aristotle sLogic
lacked.
admittedly deserves a different
In such a way can
sort ofattention than, say,
poetry, much like paintings,
Baudelaire s Les Fleurs du Mal.
offer us an image oflife which
AttMney Ctnt1'al, Conte on Watercolor Paper,
"What seemed most important
Corey Sebastian, A99 seeks not only to capture a
about this particular Greek pasmoment in time, but the very
sage was the vividness ofits
movement oflife. In this passages case, the images
imagery: More than anything else, I wanted to prearise not onlyfrom the choice ofwords, butfrom
serve that in translation.
the structure within which those words are cast.
I will give a briefexample ofthis vividness,
''Flushed ivy" is an example ofdescription
which I hold p rincipally responsible fo r the
bringing life to a passage; but looked at from
passages beauty. In the first stanza, the chorus
anotherperspective, so does the very succession
eulogizes Colonus. Apart ofwhat makes the
ofdescriptions surrounding it. The structure of
imagery .so powerful here is that the descriptions
this passage and its individual images offer us
.succeed each other very rapidly, building a palpaa vividly memorable picture I hoped to convey
ble momentum: "there I the sweet nightingale .sings,
in translation. +
I ince.s.santlyengaged,from under the green and
n translating this passagefrom Greek to English, I

Sarajevo, 1997, Vada Mossovat, AOO

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1997-98

TRANSL A TION

Ia Chanson du Mal Aimi, by Gaullaume Apollinaire
Translation by Lauren Connolly, A9 8

A night of half-fog in London
A hooligan who resembled
My love came to meet me
And the look he threw me
Made me lower my eyes in shame

I thought of these happy kings
When false love and the one
With whom I am still in love
Colliding with their faithless shadows
Made me so unhappy

I followed this lout
Who whistled hands in pockets
We seemed between the houses
Open wave of the Red Sea
Him the Hebrews me Pharaoh

Regrets upon which hell relies
That a heaven of oblivion would open on my
wishes
For her kiss the kings of the world
Would die the famous poor
For her might have sold their shadow

Let fall these waves of brick
If you were not well-loved
I am the sovereign of Egypt
Her sister-spouse her army
If you are not my only love
Ac the turning of a street burning
With all the lights of its facades
Wounds in the bloody haze
Where the facades were lamenting
A woman resembling her
It was her look of inhumanity
The scar on her naked neck
Drunk leaving a tavern
Ac the moment I recognized
The falsity of love itself
When wise Ulysses returned
Ac last to his homeland
His old dog remembered him
Beside the cloth which hung shimmering
His wife was waiting that he might come back
The royal house of Sacontale
Weary of conquering rejoiced
When he found her pale from
Waiting and her eyes grown dim with love
Caressing her male gazelle

I have wintered in my past
Sun of Easter return
To warm a heart more frozen
Than the forty of Sebaste
Less than my life martyred
My beautiful ship o' my memory
Have we sailed enough
In wave bitter to drink
Have we rambled enough
From beautiful dawn to sad night
Farewell false love confounded
With the woman who draws away
With the one that I lost
Last year in Germany
And chat I will not meet again
Milky Way o' luminous sister
Of the white streams of Canaan
And of the white bodies of loving women
Will we dead swimmers follow panting
Your course towards other nebulas
I remembered another year
It was the dawn of an April day
I sang my beloved joy
Sang love with virile voice
At that moment of love the year

Un soir de demi-brune a Londres
Un voyou qui ressemblait a
Mon amour vine a ma reconcre
Et le regard qu'il me jeta
Me fit baisser les yeux de honte

J' ai pense a ces rois heureux

Je suivis ce mauvais gari;:on
Qui sifflotait mains dans les poches
Nous semblions entre les maisons
Onde ouverte de la mer Rouge
Lui les Hebreux moi Pharaon

Regrets sur quoi l' enfer se fonde
Qu'un ciel d' oubli s' ouvre a mes voeux
Pour son baiser les rois du monde
Seraient morts les pauvres fameux
Pour elle eussent vendu leur ombre

Que tombent ces vagues de briques
Si cu ne fus pas bien aimee
Je suis le souverain d' Egypte
Sa soeur-epouse son armee
Si ti n' es pas l' amour unique

J' ai hiverne dans mon passe

Au tournant d' une rue brulant
De tous les fuex de ses fa~ades
Plaies du bruillard sanguinolent
Ou se lamentaient les fa~ades
Une femme lui ressemblant

Mon beau naivre o ma memoire
Avons-nous assez navigue
Dans une onde mauvais a boire
Avons-nous assez divague
De la belle aube au triste soir

C' ecait son regard d' inhumaine
La cicatrice a son cou nu
Sortit saule d' une taverne
Au moment ou je reconnus
La faussete de I' amour meme

Adieux faux amour confondu
Avec la femme qui s' eloigne
Avec celle que j' ai perdue
L' annee derniere en Allemagne
Et que je ne reverrai plus

Lorsque' ii fut de retour enfin
Dans sa patrie le sage Ulysse
Son vieux chien de lui souvint
Pres d'un tapis de haute lisse
Sa femme attendait qu' il revmt

Voie lactee o soeur lumineuse
Des blancs ruisseaux de Chanaan
Ee des corps blancs des amoureuses
Nageurs motes suivrons-nous d' ahan
Ton cours ver d' autres nebuleuses

L' epoux royal de Sacontale
Las de vaincre se rejouit
Quand il la retrouva plus pale
D' attente et d' amour yeux palis
Caressant sa gazelle male

Je me souviens d' une autre annee
C' ecait I' aube d' un jour d' avril
J' ai chance ma joie bien-aimee
Chance l' amour a voix virile
Au moment d' amour de I' annee

Lorsque le faux amour et celle
Dont je suis encore amoureux
Heutant leurs ombres infideles
Me rendirent si malheureux

Revienne le soleil de Paques
Pour chauffer un coeur plus glace
Que les quarante de Sebaste
Moins que ma vie martyrises

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Translation of and Commentary on
Baudelaire's "Le Crepuscule du Soir"
R. Justice Schunior, A99

Twilight
Here is the charming evening, friend of the criminal;
It comes like an accomplice, with a wolf's step; the sky
Closes slowly like a great alcove,
And impatient man changes into a musky beast.
Oh evening, lovable evening, desired by the one
Whose arms, without falsehood, can say: Today
We have toiled! It is evening which soothes
Minds that a savage grief devours,
The stubborn scholar whose forehead weighs him down,
And the laborer who regains his bed.
Nevertheless unhealthy demons in the atmosphere
Awaken heavily, like businessmen,
And knock the shutters and the awning as they fly.
Through gaslights that the wind torments
Prostitution kindles the streets;
Like an anthill she clears her exits;
Everywhere she pushes through a secret path,
Thus as an enemy attempts a night raid;
She moves to the bosom of the city of filth
Like a worm that steals from Man what he eats.
One hears here and there the kitchen hiss,
The theatres shriek, the orchestras purr;
The gambling tables, where games cause delights,
Fill with whores and swindlers, their accomplices,
And thieves, who have neither mercy nor respite,
Soon go to begin their work, they also,
And softly force the doors and the cash boxes
In order to live some days and clothe their mistresses.
Gather yourself, my soul in this grave moment,
And close your ear to this roar.
It is the hour where the pains of the diseased grow bitter!
The somber Night takes them by the throat; they finish
Their destiny and go towards the common abyss;
The hospital fills with their sighs.-More than one

Le Crepuscule Du Soir
Voici le soir charmant, ami du criminel;
II vient comme un complice,

a pas de loup; le ciel

Se ferme lentement comme une grande alcove
Et l'homme impatient se change en bete fauve.
0 soir, aimable soir, desire par celui
Dont les bras, sans metir, peuvent dire: Aujourd'hui
Nous avons travaille!-C'est le soir qui soulage
Les esprits que devore ine douleur sauvage,
Le savant obstine dont le front s' alourdit,
Et l' ouvrier courbe qui regagne son lit.
Cependent des demons malsains clans l' atmosphere
S' eveillent lourdemont, comme des gens d' affaire,
Et cognent en valets et l' auvent.
A travers les lueurs que tourmente le vent
La Prostitution s' allume dans les rues;
Comme une fourmiliere elle ouvre ses issues;
Partout elle se fraye un occulte chemin,
Ainsi que l' ennemi qui tente un coup de main;
Elle remue au sein de la cite de fange
Comme un ver qui derobe a l'Homme ce qu'il mange.
On entend ~a et la les cuisines siffler,
Les theatres glapir, les orchestres ronfler;
Les tables d'hote, dont le jeu fait deluces,
S' emplissent de catins et d' escrocs, leurs complices,
Et les voleurs, qui n' ont ni treve ni merci,
Vont bientot commencer leur travail, eaux aussi,
Et forer doucement les portes et les caisses
Pour vivre quelques jours et vetir leurs maitresses.
Recueille-toi, mon ame, en ce grave moment,
Et ferme ton oreille a ce rugisseement.
C' est l'heure ou les douleurs des malades s' aigrissent!
La sombre Nuit les prend a la gorge; il finissent
Leur destinee et vont versele gouffre commun;
L'hopital se remplit des leurs soupirs.-Plus d' un

Will not return to look for his evening soup,
In the corner by the fire, in the evening, next to a loved soul.

Ne viendra plus chercher la soupe parfumee,
Au coin du feu, le soir, aupres d'une ame aimee.

Yet most have never known
The sweetness of the hearth and have not lived!

Encore la plupart n'ont-ils jamais connu
La douceur du foyer et ri ont jamais vecu!

-Les Fleurs du Mal, p.277, Godine edition.

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wilight is the transition between day and night.
We might imagine Baudelaire stopping on a
busy city street to observe this transition in the
passers-by, both those who are ending their labors and
those who are beginning their night'~ work. Evening is
welcomed differently by different people and these
various approaches to the coming night are reflected in
the confused and conflicting images of the poem.
Our first image of evening is ominous.
Evening is charming in that it puts us under a spell. It
bewitches and transforms. Dimming light has the
intoxicating power to make us speak and act with
greater freedom. Quietly and slowly like a wolf, almost
without our looking or noticing it, evening approaches
and the light fades away. Evening is a hunter of men
and transforms men into hunters. The friend and
accomplice of criminals, it covers their work with its
darkness. It assists men in their crimes and works its
own special magic, giving them the courage to do what
they would be ashamed to do in the light. It is as if a
great lid is slowly closed over the world, trapping men
in together without the watchful eye of the sun.
But evening has another face. Baudelaire does
not waste any words on a transition from one image of
evening to another. He merely begins the next stanza
as if his attention has abruptly turned from evening's
sinister aspect to its comforting one. Evening is the
greatest joy to those who must toil during the day. For
those who have labored long, both physically and mentally, evening is the only time that is truly theirs. The
day must be spent in earning a living; the night must
be spent in sleeping. Only evening remains for them to
enjoy the company of loved ones, a warm dinner, a
quiet house. Evening is that moment right before sleep
when we can revel in the comforts of home. Evening is
the reward, the goal that scholar and workman have
been striving for during long hours of tedious work.
While this aspect of evening does exist,
Baudelaire only cares to devote six lines to its description. In the next stanza he returns to the seedier side.
He is most interested in those that welcome evening as
a beginning to their work and particularly in the similarity of this evening beginning to its morning counterpart. In lines I I-I 3 he describes demons awakening
like bats from their daytime slumber. Although we
might imagine demons gleefully flying off to midnight
revelry, Baudelaire describes them as no different from
businessmen who must shake away their sleepiness and
trudge to work. Evening is no different from morning
in its form; only the kinds of workers vary. Knocking

the shutters and awnings as they fly by is all in a
night's work for demons.
One image leads quickly to another. In lines
I 4-20 we see how one word catalyzes another image
to tangle and confuse what we picture. As the demons
fly through the street, they stir up a wind that causes
the gas lamps to flicker. From this image we are led to
Prostitution kindling in the streets like those same
flickering lamps. We picture women going to their
separate posts below a street lamp, marking out their
territory like ants with their scent. The image of the
anthill in line I 0 portrays prostitution as an insidious
force that infests the city. Like the workmen and the
business-like demons, ant-like prostitutes march
diligently to work. But they are workers of the
underworld, and their paths are secret (line I 7). This
path-clearing activity of Prostitution leads Baudelaire
to associate the tunneling of ants with a secret attack
on the city, which prostitution treacherously destroys
from the inside. It opens the doorway to all crime and
leads to a kind of urban decay. Like a worm that causes an apple to rot as it works its way to the core,
Prostitution "moves to the bosom of the city of filth"
(line I 9). Baudelaire's final image of Prostitution is
that of a parasitic tapeworm (line 20) that lives off
the city and weakens it morally.
One image leads into another. It is almost
impossible to separate them. Baudelaire is fascinated
and revolted by the life that begins in the evening. It is
both like and unlike the activity of those who work
during the day. Instead of the force that creates the
city with legitimate work, prostitutes, thieves, and
gamblers destroy it. There is something pernicious in
the underworld of the night. These images pile up one
on top of the other and build to a climax. In line 2 I,
approximately the middle of the poem, the noise is
overpowering: hissing, shrieking, howling, and purring
can be heard all around. We can imagine that as it gets
darker the entertainment for the evening begins.
Restaurants and cafes open, orchestras begin to play,
people laugh and shout. Nighttime confusion fills the
streets. These s~unds are all the more confused
because of the growing darkness. Again Baudelaire sees
a similarity between those who begin their work at
night with those who begin during the day. In lines
25-28 he describes thieves who must go to work in
order to make a living a clothe their mistresses, just as
any businessman must provide for his family.
I picture Baudelaire watching both the man
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night's work. The thief, prostitute, swindler, and
demon interest him more. Their world is bright
and bewitching. Yet it is in the midst of this scene
of evening activity that Baudelaire stops and speaks
directly to his soul (line 29). This is a moral command to gather himself in the face of confusion and
chaos. He rebukes himself for being drawn in by the
evening's attractions. Evening, as we have seen, is filled
with all kinds of pleasures that result in both good
and evil. Both returning home after a day's labor and
setting out for a nights sinful dissipation are the
delights of the evening.
It is this roar of the world that passes us each
evening on the streets that Baudelaire wishes to close his
ear to. He wants to hear what we cannot hear on the
street. Just below the roar of the street is the sound of
the sighs of the dying. This sound is horrifying, not
fascinating. More than once Baudelaire has noticed that
both those who find solace in the evening and those
who make their living at night are workers. But there are
those who do not work but wait. Evening is not just the
time of universal pleasure, it is also the time when life
most often comes to an end. In line 3 I Baudelaire
speaks of the diseased who lie in forgotten corridors of
hospitals that no one wishes to visit. Evening ushers in
the night that leads them to oblivion. Baudelaire
reminds us in lines 34-36 that many will not return to
enjoy their evening meal and quiet time by the fire.
The last terrifying couplet of the poem speaks
of others yet, others who have no advocate and have
no pleasure from evening. Baudelaire seems to consider
living as the enjoyment of evening, whether its
pleasures are a beginning or an end to work. What

is so frightening about this last couplet is that the
people Baudelaire has been describing, scholar, workman, gambler, and prostitute, are all in the minority.
All the chaos and noise they create is small compared
with the large number that have never known life or
any kind of sweetness. The majority are those we do
not see and do not want to see. We can easily moralize
about the, corrupt nature of the city at night, but we
would rather not think about the lost ones. These are
the ones facing their last hours alone and in pain.
They are led to the common abyss without having
known the sweeter pleasures that evening offers.
Evening is not only a beginning; it is also an ending.
The first few lines of the poem can be seen in a new
light after the last couplet. Night closes in not only as
a cover over our wicked deeds but also as a coffin lid.
It is wolf-like because it comes like a predator to pick
off the weak and old among us.
Baudelaire is gifted with the ability to paint a
picture of what is before him in words. Yet the moral
force of this poem is that he commands his soul to
repel the attractive force of what is colorful and fascinating in the night. He focuses on sound, not sight.
Our ear is shut to the bustling activity of the night
and is directed to quiet murmurs. In this way we are
led to consider a world not directly before our eyes.
Evening is presented to us both as an end to the day's
labors and as a beginning of the night's pleasures, but
the final image of evening is the ultimate and lonely
finish to sad and unnoticed lives. +

Your Choice Was to Live:
Ismene's Resistance to Her Family
Megan Graff, AO I

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Yhigh school literature teacher once asked

our class who were the Antigones and who
the Ismenes. I raised my hand with the former group, looked around and proudly labeled us as
the Leaders: strong-willed, determined go-getters who
were not afraid of sacrificing convention or taking
risks to get what they wanted. The latter were the
Followers: weak, indecisive, unable to remain firm
under pressure and willing to sacrifice their principles
for safety. I placed the sisters at two ends of a spectrum and characterized them accordingly: Strong vs.
Weak, Daring vs. Cowardly, Heroine vs. Foil.
As with most strictly dualistic partitions, this
was an oversimplification. Experience and closer readings have shown me that Antigone is not to be
admired in all things, nor is Ismene to be despised.
More and more I suspect that Ismene is not the weak
and passive character I initially believed her to be.
The story of Antigone begins long before the
play opens. Oedipus, Antigone and Ismene's father,
was king of the city of Thebes until it was revealed
that he had murdered his father and married his
mother. Upon discovering this, Oedipus blinded himself and left Thebes in his brother/uncle's care until
Oedipus' sons, Eteocles and Polyneices, were old
enough to rule.
At the beginning of Antigone, the audience
discovers that Eteocles had stolen the rule of Thebes
from his older brother. Polyneices in turn gathered
Argive allies to invade Thebes and level it in revenge.
The brothers met in battle and killed each other. Now
Creon is once again in charge of the city and has issued
an edict saying that, although Eteocles is to be buried
with full funeral honors, Polyneices' body is to be left
to rot. Antigone performs funeral rites for the outcast
body and is captured. She is left in a rocky cell outside
the city to die of exposure and eventual starvation.
Creon's son Haemon, Antigone's betrothed, tries to rescue her, but arrives only to find that she has killed herself; he subsequently falls on his sword. Creon's wife
Eurydice also kills herself when she hears the news, and
Creon is left a broken man at the end of the play.
Note that Ismene is not mentioned at all in

this summary of Antigone. She could have been mentioned; she appears on stage two separate times and has
more lines than Haemon. But she is not a source of
action. Ismene causes nothing. This is not to say that
she does nothing, but it is what she doesn't do that
makes her stand out from the rest of her bloodline.
Ismene does not participate in the family's doom.
The tragic actions of the House of Laius have
three aspects. The first is that the family brings death
to those around them. Second, they act in opposition
to or perversion of their natural roles. Finally, they act
on impulse and out of emotion.
The House of Laius seems to bring death
wherever it goes. Oedipus kills his father Laius and the
revelation of his true identity causes Jocasta, his
wife/ mother, to kill hersel£ Antigone continues this
course: Eteocles and Polyneices each bring about the
other's death; Antigone's death causes Haemon's, which
in turn causes Eurydice's death. Haemon and Antigone
both recognize the nature of the curse, Haemon when
he tells his father, "Then she must die, and in her
death destroy another," Antigone when she cries to the
memory of her own father, "Alas my brother, illstarred
in your marriage, in your death you have undone my
life!" 1
The only two relations of Oedipus left
standing after this bloodbath are Ismene and Creon.
Ismene is the only living descendant of Oedipus, for
she has killed no one nor has she been killed, despite
Creon. He at first wants to sentence her with Antigone:
"[AntigoneJ and her kinsfolk shall not avoid a doom
most dire; for I charge that other with a like share in
the plotting of this burial." Yet he changes his mind,
and Ismene is not drawn into death with Antigone
after all. Somehow, the curse has passed her by.
The second family characteristic is that no
one fits into his/her proper role. The family's fulfillment of these roles is either twisted or perverted.
Oedipus was the son of the woman to whom he was
also husband. Eteocles and Polyneices fought and
killed each other, reversing the ordinary role of brothers to support each other in war.2 It is Antigone, however, who most strongly exemplifies this inversion of

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the proper role, especially in contrast to Ismene.
Antigone's name in Greek is avti-yov'tl,
against-descendant, a variation of which mighr be
avti-yuvil, against-woman. Antigone is, indeed,
against womanhood in many ways. She takes action
herself and causes 0thers to center their actions
around her in a manner more characteristic of Greek
men than women. Creon even says of her: "Now verily
I am no man, she is the man, if this victory shall rest
with her and bring no penalty." Antigone contemptuously dismisses Ismene's objections, which are rooted
in femininity. She argues with Creon and dares to confront men on their own terms. In Oedipus at Colonus1
Oedipus says, "these girls preserve me, these who are
men, not women, in true service." 3
Oedipus may have considered both Antigone
and Ismene to be doing the duty of men, but in truth,
Ismene plays the part of a woman. She knows her
duty and says that she would help bury Polyneices if it
were not that her very nature as a woman prevents her
from taking part in the action. She is aware of the
futility of impossible tasks and reproves her sister for
pursuing such with lack of judgment: "to act beyond
nature has nothing in it of reason" (67-68). Unlike
the rest of her family, Ismene is exactly what she
should be.
The third characteristic is this family's tendency toward hot-tempered impulsivity. As Antigone is
being taken to her death, the Chorus tells her:
You have rushed forward to the utmost verge
of daring, and against that throne where
Justice sits on high you have fallen, my
daughter, with a grievous fall.
She is not alone in her rashness. The Chorus continues: "But in this ordeal you are paying, perchance, for
yo.ur father's sin." The sin they refer to is Oedipus' illstarred marriage. He, too, showed signs of imprudence. His killing of Laius, his marriage to Jocasta, his
decree that the man causing the plague on Thebes
must be immediately exiled: each of these
actions was taken without any pause for reflection.
Antigone shows a similar lack of consideration. Upon hearing of Creon's edict, she immediately
begins forming plans to bury Polyneices which defy all
self-preservation. She does not make any attempt to
compromise-to talk to Creon, to bribe the guards.
When Ismene refuses to help, instead of enlisting others to aid her, Antigone undertakes the rites herself

When they are undone on Creon's orders, she goes
again to cover the body and does not bother to hide
herself; the guard reports that "she cried aloud with
the sharp cry of a bird in its bitterness". She is not
upset at being captured.
In the opening dialogue between Antigone and
Ismene, Antigone reveals that her devotion is to what
is KaA.6v: good, noble, and beautiful. Ismene, instead,
is focused on &lt;j&gt;pOV£&lt;H&lt;; and VOU&lt;;: consideration, or
judgment, and mind. Antigone acts from her heart, as
Ismene points out when she says to her sister, "You
have a warm heart for such cold things" (88). Ismene
remains practical in thinking about the implications of
her actions, considering their impact on her present
situation instead of joining in Antigone's obsession
with the thoughts and feelings of those in the underworld. While she does serve as the perfect dramatic
foil for Antigone by playing the part of the chiding
parent with whom no self-respecting rebel child would
agree, it takes a kind of strength to retain one's mind
in such a situation.
Ismene is by her nature an uncharacteristic
member of her family. By the end of the play, she is
not seen as a member of the family at all. Ismene is
completely dismissed from the minds of Antigone and
the Chorus, so much so that it is taken for granted
that Antigone is the last surviving descendant of the
House of Laius. What has happened in this time to
accomplish Ismene's complete alienation from her
unfortunate family?
The answer lies in the opening dialogue
between Antigone and Ismene, in words we can read in
English without hearing an untranslatable feature of
Greek, its little-used dual person. The dual is used
when two things are together in a special way, a
matched pair of sorts. In line 13, Ismene refers to herself and Antigone as a dual and to their brothers as
another dual. When she does set herself apart, as in
line 39, she makes a special point of it by using the
emphatic pronoun £yffi. Ismene, at least, believes that
she and Antigone are bound together.
Antigone has different ideas. While she starts
out addressing the "shared sister head" of Ismene (1),
I suspect that she may have been trying to wheedle her
sister into agreement. In raging against Creon's proclamation, Antigone says, "They say the good Creon has
proclaimed such things to you and to me, I say even to
me .. ." (31-32). The last clause implies that it is one
thing to issue such a proclamation to lsmene, but
quite another for it to apply to Antigone as well. Aside

from being rather rude to Ismene, the specification
implies a partition between the sisters, that they act
under different restrictions.
Ismene continues to use the dual, this time in
a possessive referring to Oedipus as "our hateful and
infamous father." She also uses the dual to include
Antigone in her statement that their nature requires
them to bow to Creon's demand:
But it is necessary to consider that we were
indeed born [dual £&lt;j&gt;uµ£v J women; it is not
for us to fight alongside men; and therefore
for that reason we are led by those more powerful, and to hear and obey these things and
even ones more grievous than these. ( 6 I -64)
Without realizing it, Ismene has in this speech
destroyed any chance she might have had to be linked
with Antigone. She has refused to join her sister in
burying Polyneices.
From this point forward, neither sister uses
the dual; rather, the speech is now peppered with the
emphatic personal pronoun. Both of the following
speeches are Ismene's:
So then I [E')'IDJ am begging those below the
earth to have understanding, as I am forced in
these matters, for I will obey those who stand
in authority; for to act beyond nature has
nothing in it of reason. ( 65-68)
I indeed [£yffi J do not do dishonorable things,
yet I am by nature [£&lt;j&gt;uv; singular4] without
means to act with force against the city. (78-79)
Antigone rejects her sister after her refusal, using not
only the first person pronoun but also the second person, even adding a µ£.v . . .OE construction to complete the separation: "You [&lt;JU], for one [µ£v ], may
use these things as a pretext; I [£')'ID], on the other
hand [0£ ], will go to heap up a funeral for my dearest
brother" (80-81).
Ismene's alienation is almost complete. By
choosing not to help Antigone, she cements the setting-apart that nature itself had begun. Now Antigone
and even the Chorus deny Ismene a place in the family.
Antigone claims to go alone and friendless to her
death, ignoring Ismene. She presents herself to the
Chorus as "the last daughter of the house of your
kings". The Chorus says of Antigone: "that hope of

which the light had been spread above the last root of
the house of O edipus-that hope, in turn, is brought
low". It is Antigone who is the "last root," while
Ismene has disappeared from the minds of the characters. She is not mentioned, nor does she appear after
she has left the stage the second time. At the end of
the play, the Chorus comments compassionately on
Creon's grief at having lost a wife and son to his pride,
but Ismene's grief at having lost two brothers, a father,
and a sister within a short time is not mentioned.
Consideration of these things leads me to
wonder which of the two sisters has the real strength. Is
it Antigone, who dares her life and sacrifices her hope
of a future to take care of the dead, who also confronts
the ruler of her city with his flaws? Or is it Ismene, who
endures with the flexible tenacity of a reed?
I used to admire Antigone for her principles,
for her fine drama in dying gloriously. But at seventeen, I had never seen the death of a family member. I
had yet to observe the spirit that can resist the power
of despair. I know now the courage required to continue living daily in the face of grief- and I know that
I do not have it. My greater admiration goes to
Ismene, who has been abandoned to fill the void left
by her doomed family. It took more strength to live
than to die. +
Notes:

I. Note on translation: translations that do not
include line numbers are taken from the I 96 7
publication of Sir Richard Claverhouse Jebb's
translation. Passages that include line numbers are
the author's own class translations.
2. As, for example, in the case of Menelaus and
Agamemnon.
3.

Also the Jebb translation.

4. Contrast to the use of dual £&lt;j&gt;uµ£v in line 62.

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MATH

PRlZE, ,

1997•, 98

Geometry
Piroska Kopar, A99
1. Prove that the

quad~ilateral so formed

2. Prove that the 4 triangles that are shaded on the figure are congruent.
If we dissect each of the· triangles AEB, BFC,
CGD, DHA above to three triangles as shown on the
figure (just by shading in those little triangles). We get
12 new triangles. I say that these 12 are but three sets
of congruent triangles; each set containing four triangles. For the triangles AJC, FMC, CGN, HAI all have
one side that is half of the diagonal of the small
square, and we already know from the previous proof
that the angle denoted by S are equal, and that the
angles marked by E are 45 degrees. Thus all these triangles are congruent. Similarly triangles EKB, BFL,
OGO, HOP have one sided that is half the diagonal
of the bigger square and two equal angles ~ and E.
Each of the big triangles AEB, etc., then, is made up
of three smaller triangles, two of which I have shown
to be congruent with the corresponding two triangles
of the other bigger triangles. Therefore the remaining,
shaded triangles are congruent as well. Q.E.D.

is a square. (Figure 1)

First, let us draw in the diagonals of the
squares on the sides of the parallelogram. In ~ach
square the center of the square is where the diagonals
cross each other. From the four sets of diagonals and
from the four sides of the big quadrilateral figure
(the one that results from the connecting the centers;
ABCD on the figure) we get four triangles. If I can
prove that four hypotenuses of these triangles are
equal and that the angles that the four sides cut
around the centers of the squares are right angles, I
have proven that our quadrilateral ABCD_ is a square.
I say that the four triangles descnbed above
(AEB, BFC, CGD, DHA), are congruent, and hence
their hypotenuses are equal. For let us take two of
them that are not symmetrically situated around the
parallelogram: triangle ABE and tri~gle ADH. Since
their two sides are the half of the diagonals of the
squares on the sides, AE = AH and E~ = HD. (Since
the opposite sides are the half of the diagonals of the
squares built upon them will also be equal.) ~ o~ we
also know that the diagonal of a square cuts its nght
angle into half a right angle. Therefore if we call the
acute angle of the parallelogram a, angle AHO will
be a+45+45; that is, a+ 90. But the obtuse angle
of the parallelogram is 180 - a. Thus the angle AEB
is 360 - (180 - a) - 45 - 45 =a+ 90. We now have
triangles with two equal sides and one equal angle, so
we can conclude that they are congruent. Similarly in
the case of the other two triangles.
It remains to be shown that the angles of this
equal sided quadrilateral are each 90 d~grees. Since
the four triangles are congruent, all their corresponding angles are equal. Thus BAE = OAH, ABE =
ADH, AEB =AHO, ETC. Now since the diagonals
of a square when crossing each other cut two right
angles, (such as EAH), we can say that the angle c?mposed of EAI and HAI is a right angle. But HAI ts
the same as DAH, which is equal to BAE, so the angle
composed of DAE and EAB is also equal to a right
angle. And similarly in the other three cases. .
The quadrilateral thus constructed is therefore a square. Q.E.D.

3. Can the same square result from other parallelograms? !J so,
from which parallelograms will it be constructed? !J not, why not?

figure I

Let us look at our first figure again. The area
of the big square is composed of the following:

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the area of the parallelogram: a·µ (since the
shaded triangles are congruent, we can reposition
them so that we substitute the two that are part
of the parallelogram but not part of the square
for the two that are part of the square but not
part of the parallelogram)

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twice the area of the isosceles triangle with
base a and sides that are half of the diagonal of
the bigger square: a/2 (because of their ~ongru­
ency we can substitute triangle HPO for DGO,
and triangle BFL for BKE)

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figure 2

twice the area of the isosceles triangle with base
b and sides that are half of the diagonal of the
small square: b/2 (we can substitute triangle HAI
in for AJE, and triangle FMC for GCN)
But a·µ can be written as abcoscj&gt;, thus if we
call the side of the big square c, we can say that:
2c =a+ b+ 2abcos&lt;)&gt;
Using the law of cosines in the triangle AEB, where
the two sides of the triangle are halves of the diagonals of
the squares we can write: c = a+ b - 2abcos angle of AEB.

And since the angle AEB is 360-45-cj&gt;-9045= 180-&lt;j&gt; and since the cosine of (180-&lt;j&gt;) is the
same as -cosf, we can now write the law of cosines
thus: 2c= a+b+2abcos&lt;j&gt;.
Now to find the parallelogram that will have
the same square as the original one, we simply pick
two sides and solve for the angle. This angle will tell
us how to construct our new parallelogram. We have
one restriction, however. When we look at the equation and the figure we see that a, b, and c, are sides of
one triangle. Since we want to find a parallelogram
that will give us the same square as the first parallelogram, (our c is already given), we must pick our sides a
and b so that when added together, their sum will be
greater than the length of the third side. Q.E.I.

Corollary I
From this it is evident that if any angle &lt;)&gt; is O;
that is, if any angle between the sides is a right angle,
the equality of the resulting square will depend only
on the length of the sides. Hence rectangles will equal
perimeters will yield the same square.

Corollary 2
It is also obvious that if our original parallelogram is a square, the resulting aquare will be twice the
original.
4. What figure results if the squares are drawn inward? Prove
your claim. (Figure 2)

I say that the resulting figure will be a square.
For just as in the first case, if we can show that the triangles resulting from the diagonals of the inward
squares are congruent and that the equal sides of the
figure meet at right angles, we have proven what we
wished to prove. The triarigles thus formed on the sides
of the square are triarigles BCE, OCH, ADG, ABF. All
of these have one side equal to the half of the diagonal
the small square and one side equal to half of the diagonal of the big square. As in the case of Figure I , let
us take two triangles that are not symmetrically situated, say triangle OCH arid OGA. Since angle AGB is
45 - a arid arigle DHC is 45 - p, if I can show that a
arid p are equal, I have shown the congruence of these
triarigles. Now angle AIH is a right arigle, because its
sides are the perpendicular diagonals of the two big
squares (arid it makes no difference that one diagonal
belongs to one of the big squares arid the other one to
the other, since we built these squares on parallel sides

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of the parallelogram). So the angles in the triangle
HIK are a right angle, ~and y, while in triangle GHK
the angles are a right angle a and y. ~ and a are therefore equal. And similarly with the other two triangles. ·
It remains to be shown that the angles of the
equilateral figure ip the middle are equal to two right
angles. Angle GOA is composed of a right angle
(because of the crossing diagonals) and of angle
ADH. Since the triangles GAD and HOC are congruent, angle GOA= angle HOC. Now the angle HOC
is also composed of two angles; of angle ADH and
ADC. Angle ADC therefore has to be a right angle

and similarly with the other three angles of the quadrilateral. The quadrilateral so constructed is therefore a
square. Q.E.D.
5. lfithout necessarily proving your cl.aim, state a problem about any
triangle, rather than any parallelogram, with figures drawn outward,
such that their centers when joined form an equil.ateral triangle.

If on the sides of any triangle we draw equilateral triangles (similarly as in the case of the parallelogram when we drew squares), the centers of the triangles joined will also form an equilateral triangle. +

c OMMENTARY
Piroska Ko par, A 9 9

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y goal was to solve each step in a way that
might enable us to see the proofas a single
picture. In order to do this I was trying to
keep the connection between
steps very tight. I wanted to
convey the simplic{ty ofthe
proof, and the beaa(! arising
from this simplicity, 'the way it
appeared to me. To me the entire
proof consists in the rotation and
the repositioning ofa single triangle that is defined by halves of
the diagonals ofthe squares built
on the sides ofparallelograms,
and the angle in between them
(which varies depending on the
construction.)
I am always suspicious when we are faced
with a .surprising mathematical result. How can a
mathematical result be surprising? The way the

system is set up (in this case Euclid's), these results
are necessary and contained in the composingfigure.s, before we perform the construction. We have
come up with a closed system
that we believe we understand
quite well, and we are stillfaced
with surprises. I believe that if
not in all, yet in most cases of
Euclidean geometry, if we were
only able to have a greater imagination, a greater ability to see
things as one, the proofs could
be reduced to a single picture is
in our minds. I am veryfond
ofexercises that help us .see at
least a section ofthis geometry
as a single picture, as a selfcontained entity I .saw this proofas such an exercise, and tried to show its .single picture.

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9 91- 98

Trigonometry
Daniel Braithwaitet AO I
Parts I and II
A

Let triangle ABC be right and isosceles with hypotenuse
AC=6. Let F be the midpoint of AC, and place E on AC
so that AE=2.
Connect BF and BE, and draw the parallel to BC through
E. Note that BF is perpendicular to AC.
Then, triangle ADE is right and isosceles, similar to triangle ABC, and in particular
tan angle DEA=l
tan angle BED= DB/DE=DB/ DA= EC/ EA=2
tan angle DBE=l / tan angle BED= 1/ 2.
Moreover, triangle BFC is right and isosceles, so that
BF=3, and thus
tan angle FBC= 1
tan angle EBF=l / 3
tan angle FEB= I/tan angle EBF=3.
Therefore,
arctan 1 +arctan 2+ arctan 3= angle DEA+
angle BED + angle FEB= n
arctan 1 +arctan _ +arctan 1/3 = angle FBC +
angle DBE + angle EBF =n/ 2

Part III
For convenience, let a =n/7 throughout.
Let triangle ABC be isosceles with base angles measuring
2a and legs of length 1.
Let CD bisect angle BCA. Then angle ADC= 3a, so
triangle ADC is isosceles and in particular DC = 1.

2

E
F

3
B ~-----"'C

Figure I

A
D

B

Figure2

A

Figure3

A

Draw perpendiculars to BC from D and A. Then, EC =
cos a and FC = cos 2a, so that EF =cos a - cos2a.
Draw the parallel BC through D. Then, DG = 2DH
=2EF = 2cosa - 2cos 2a. Moreover, angle ADG = 2a,
which subtracted from angle ADC =3a gives angle GDC
=a, so that triangle GDC is isosceles. Thus GC = DG.

Figure 4

A

If we imagine the perpendicular drawn from C to AD, it
becomes clear that AD =2cos3a.
But AG=AD, so that
2cosa - 2cos2a+2cos3a=GC+AG=AC=l
cos a - cos2a + cos3a= 1/ 2.
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COMMENTARY

What is Trigonometry?
Daniel Braithwaite, AO I

P

ropositions 4, 8, and 26 ofthe first book ofthe
Elements state thatfrom the equality ofcertain corresponding parts oftwo triangles, equality ofthe remaining
parts follows necessarily. For
example, according to Proposition
26, if two triangles each have a 9
inch side lying between 30 degrees
and 40 degrees angles, then the
two triangles are in fact equal in
every respect.
Itfollows straightforwardly that in a singk triangk composed
ofa 9 inch side between angks of30
and 40 degrees, the remainingparts
are uniquely determined. That is to
Figure 1
say, the measures ofthe remaining
angk and two sides are not suhject to any variability. (This
would not be so ifit were only known that the triangk had a
9 inch side bordering on a 30 degree angk - infinitely many
different triangks fit this descnption). Well then, how large
is that angk, and how long are those sides?
The angle is easy: Since the angles ofa triangle
together must sum 180 degrees (Proposition 1 32), it
must be 180 degrees - 30 degrees 40 degrees = 110 degrees. It's not so
clear how to figure out the sides. OJ
course anyone couldjust draw the
triangle, whip out a ruler, and
measure them, but that's the wrong
spirit. What's needed is a method
of calculating the side lengths
from the known side angles.
Trigonometry is the solution to this problem. A precise
account ofit took 2000 years to
develop and is pretty complicated,
Figure 2
but it was approximated by
Ptolemy and can be imagined in
Euclidean terms, as follows. With any acute angle, a
right angle can be constructed, and the ratio ofthe side
subtending that angle to the hypotenuse must be taken.
In this way, a sort of table is made, associating acertain ratio to every acute angle. For example, the ratio
BC.AC is matched with 17 degrees (figure 1) . This table

is known as the sine function and is the heart of
trigonometry.
The sine function solves the earlierproblem:
Given the triangle as described
above, simply draw a perp endicular to AB through C (figure 2) .
Obtain, from the sine function, the
ratio corresponding to 40 degrees this is equal to this ratio CD:AC by
its very definition. Then, since AC
and the ratio CD.AC are known,
CD can be calculated. Finally, the
ratio CD, BC is the sine of 70
degrees, and since CD has been calculated, so can be BC. A similar
process yields AB.
But the missingpiece in this
account is the determination ofthe sine function. How are
those ratios that it associates to angks actually obtained?
Not by making the tn'angk and measuring; that's still
cheating. Finding a way, in ftgure I, to derive the ratio
BC:ACfrom the measurement 17 degrees alone is what
took 2000 years. (And in fact, because the sides are incommensurable, the calculation is an interminabk process).
Much earlier, Ptolemy's table ofchords served the same
role as the sine.function, but his ftgures were only approximate.
Although certain ideas in
Book II of the Elements bear a conceptual resemblance to the sine
function, Euclid's geometry is
essentially different from
trigonometry. This is because problems ofmeasurement, from which
trigonometry is born, are entirely
absentfrom Euclid. Perplexing,
then, that the definition ofthe sine
is purely geometric.
Tension has always existed
in mathematics between its visihk and invisihk objects.
The discipline treating thefirst is geometry. The discipline
treating the second has no adequate name, but could be
called calculation or algebra. The two might exist independently, but in fact measurement links them, and origi,ns
oftrigonometry exemplify the oddity oftheir relation. +

Lobachevski

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Not for me this gift
this jewel whose quickened facets
flicker with inconstant fire
and flow like molten ice.
Let go its mutable beauty
and take up the gifts
left br an ancient suitor:
a claw, a rock, a shell,
a bone.

H/en~y

Braithwaite, AGI

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Striving For Harmony: A Reading of The Book of Job
Michael Goodrum, AOO
he Book of job is an experiential book. Because
its premise is unreasonable (a blameless man
has his family and possessions destroyed and
is made to suffer "for no good reason," as God puts
it (2:30)1), Job's suffering and the uncertainty regarding the nature of justice and wisdom that arises
from it cannot be settled by the rational intellectual
meditation of Plato or Aristotle. Greek philosophy
does not apply: Job's troubles must be settled by
experience. The people that populate the book bear
witness to their experiences in order to resolve what
is happening. For job's human inhabitants, the uncertainty that develops over the course of the book is
relieved by God, the source of justice and wisdom.
While the reader cannot witness the events of the
book directly, and experiences Job's theophany
second hand, the reader has a personal experience
which draws him into the book's poetry and reaches
beyond the mere examination of text. The reader
must summon this experience to relieve his uncertainty regarding the questions that Job poses. The fundamental question for the reader is not "What is?," but
rather, "What happened?)) In order for one to understand justice and wisdom, one must understand the
experiences of those who witness Job's affliction,
because each witness gives an account of wisdom, justice, and the nature of God.
Experience in The Book of job is defined primarily in terms of seeing and hearing. The most compelling example of this is Job's final response to God:

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I had heard You with my ears,
But now I see You with my eyes;
Therefore, I recant and relent,
Being but dust and ashes.
( 42:5-6)
Seeing is the most important of the two modes of
experience, because seeing brings a thing into being in a
much more substantial and convincing way than hearing
can. Seeing God, Job has relief and resolution.
In opposition, if a thing is obscured in dark-

ness, its being is in doubt, as when Job curses the day
of his birth, wishing that it had never existed:
May
May
May
May
May
May

that day be darkness;
God above have no concern for it;
light not shine on it;
darkness and deep gloom look after it;
a pall lie over it;
what blackens the day terrify it.
(3:4-5)

If the day of Job's birth is taken out of light into
darkness, out of the realm of sight, it might never
have existed, and thus Job might never have existed.
But Job does exist, seeing and hearing, as do the
rest of the witnesses to his affliction. By properly examining the seeing and hearing of the book's inhabitants, one
can be led to an understanding of their experience, opening the door to an understanding of justice and wisdom.
The book is framed with prose narration. The
narrative prose guides the reader, telling of the dialogue between God and the Adversary, and relating the
events in Job's life that give one a sense of who he is
both before and after his affliction. Through the narration, one receives the four assertions that focus one's
perception of the book more than any others. First, at
the beginning of the book, we are told that Job is
"blameless and upright; he feared God and shunned
evil" ( 1: 1). The fact of Job's blamelessness is restated
twice, by God, when he speaks to the Adversary ( 1:8,
2:3). Second, both the destruction of Job's community
and his physical affliction, while effected by the
Adversary, are carried out with God's permission:
"See, he is in your power" (1:12, 2:6). God allows the
Adversary to tear down the protective fence that He
has built around Job and his household. Third, J~b is
made to suffer "for no good reason" (2:30). Fourth, at
the end of the book, God tells Job's comforters twice
that He is incensed with them, "for you have not spoken the truth about Me as did My servant Job" (42:7,
8). Without these crucial facts, The Book of job would be
an entirely different, less compelling book. Unless it

were established that Job is a blameless man, that God
allows his suffering, that it is unreasonable, and that
Job's speech about God is true, the questions regarding
the nature of justice and wisdom.that one is presented
with would not be so difficult to settle, because Job's
experience and claims could be easily dismissed. There
would be no way to discriminate between truth and
falsity, making it convenient for the reader to join with
one of Job's accusers in condemning him.
After the prose prologue, seven days and nights
of silence ensue, in which Job must be mulling over his
dilemma. Job understands that there is no reasonable
cause for his suffering (9:17). As a result, he is powerless: Job has nothing to repent for, there is no damage
he has done to God that he can repair. It seems to Job
that his suffering can end only if he ceases to exist.
Suicide is not an option; Job is a created being, and his
life is not his to take (12:10). Because he is blameless,
Job will not "blaspheme God and die" (2:9), as his wife
demands. When his possessions were destroyed and his
children were murdered, Job responded by saying, "The
Lord has given and the Lord has taken away; blessed be
the name of the Lord" (1:21). Even when the things
most precious to Job were taken from him, Job maintained his blamelessness. If Job were to blaspheme now,
he would marginalize the value of his children, an
impossibility for such a loving father (1:5).
The only possibility left for Job is never to
have existed. Job does not embrace the notion of nonbeing for its own sake; he makes his desire to live
apparent (19:26-27). Rather, Job embraces the notion
of non-being because he believes it is his only means
of escape from suffering. The very fabric of creation
must be altered for Job to be taken out of existence.
God must uncreate Job and the time of his birth for
Job and his suffering to cease from being. Job does not
command God to do this, but rather wishes that it
were done; by wishing he maintains his piety:
Perish the day on which I was born,
And the night it was announced,
"A male has been conceived!"
M ay that day be darkness ...
Because it did not block my mother's womb,
And hide trouble from my eyes.
(3:3-4, IO)
When God created the world, He saw that it
was very good (Genesis I :3 l ). When Job asks God to
alter the fabric of His creation, it is apparent that Job

sees otherwise: "Why does He give light to the sufferer / And life to the bitter in spirit?" (3:20). Job questions God, asking for help; Job needs God to reconcile
how the world, and Job's existence in it, is good (a
notion that Job, as a blameless man is bound to
accept), with the pain and bitterness that Job's existence has become to him. For this to come about, God
must reconcile the good that He sees with the apparent evil that Job sees and feels. The notions of justice
and wisdo~ hang in the balance of this questioning.
After the curse, Job's three friends (Eliphaz,
Bildad and Zophar, the "comforters") speak in turn,
and make several attempts to resolve Job's questions and
assertions about justice and wisdom. Because the reader
eventually knows that they do not speak the truth about
God, no analysis of the truth of the testimony of the
comforters is necessary. God makes it clear that they are
untrue witnesses to the divine. The question, then, is
not "Is their testimony true?;• but rather, "Where do
they go wrong?" What makes their testimony untrue?
This is a difficult question; the comforters are not liars
who can be easily dismissed. Much of what they say is
literally true within the proper context. The downfall of
the comforters lies in the fact that they take literal
truths and apply them recklessly to Job. Job's friends do
not take his situation into account, and refuse to listen
to him. In doing so, they rob the truth of its spirit,
twisting it into falsehood.
Eliphaz is the first of Job's friends to speak.
In his part of the first "round" of comfort (Chapters
4- l 4 ), Eliphaz refers to three separate visual experiences. The first proclaims the fate of evil men: "As I
have seen, those who plow evil / And sow mischief
reap them. / They perish by a blast from God" ( 4:89). The second is of "thought-filled visions of the
night" ( 4:13). The third regards foolish men: "I myself
saw a fool who had struck roots; / Impulsively, I
cursed his home" (5:3).
Clearly, it is Eliphaz's sight that is primary to
his experience, and it is his sight that leads him down
the path of untrue testimony, as his "thought-filled
visions of the night" show:
A wind passed by me,
Making the hair of my flesh bristle.
It halted; its appearance was strange to me;
A form loomed before my eyes;
I heard a murmur, a voice,
"Can mortals be acquitted by God?
Can man be cleared by his Maker?

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If he cannot trust His own servants,
And casts reproach on His angels,
How much less those who dwell in
houses of clay,
Whose origin is dust,
Who are crushed like the moth,
Shattered between daybreak and evening,
Perishing forever, unnoticed.
Their cord is pulled up
And they die, and not with wisdom:'
( 4:15-21)
Eliphaz, by using his vision of reproach to
attack Job's questioning of God's methods, assumes
that his vision is from God, that the form of strange
appearance he sees is the Lord or one of His angels,
although this is improbable. Man does not perish
unnoticed, as the source of the vision would have it,
because God is the "watcher of men" (7:20), and Job
makes this clear in his reply to Eliphaz. God pays
close attention to man, "inspect[ing] him every morning, / Examin[ing] him every minute" (7:18). The
source of Eliphaz's vision is unknown. If God is the
source of his vision, then God is intentionally misleading Eliphaz. Either way, Eliphaz's unreliable sight,
his primary source of experience, is what makes him
an untrue witness to the divine, calling into question
all of his future visual references and the predictions
that he generates from them.
In his portion of the second round of comfort (Ch. 15-21), Eliphaz alludes to his vision (15:1416), makes the ironic assertion that Job's eyes have
failed him (15:12), and carries on about what he
claims to have seen regarding the fate of wicked men.
Eliphaz has no right to make claims about the fate of
others; only God can determine such things (12:10).
Eliphaz is rationalizing the things he has seen in order
to make them appear reasonable. Job responds to
Eliphaz's dubious testimony by saying, "Surely mocking men keep me company, / And with their provocations I close my eyes" (17:2). Instead of offering Job
consolation, Eliphaz, and the comforters in general,
vex him with a rational world view that must disregard
his suffering in order to be consistent, and Job will not
bear witness to it.
Having had his sight attacked, Ehphaz in the
third and final round of comfort makes a full-out
assault on Job, claiming that Job finds even God's sight
questionable: "You [Job J say, 'What can God know?/
Can He govern through the dense cloud? / The clouds

screen Him so He cannot see / As he moves about the
circuit of heaven"' (22:13-14). Job does question God's
sight, but only in incredulous disbelief (10:4). Job
knows that his suffering is not made to continue by
some fault in God's vision, but rather because he cannot
see God, and thus does not know how to reach Him:
But if I go East-He is not there;
West-I still do not perceive Him;
North-since He is concealed, I do not
behold Him;
South-He is hidden, and I cannot see Him.
But He knows the way I take.
(23:8-10)

If only he knew where to look to find God, Job would
have his questions settled. Eliphaz can offer Job no
help in this regard: even if Eliphaz's vision were trustworthy, he would be of no use, because Eliphaz is not
looking for God. Eliphaz has no reason to look for
Him: when Eliphaz rationalizes about God's creation,
he implicitly posits that God must be reasonable,
which is untrue (2:30). In doing so, Eliphaz makes the
erroneous claim that the only substantive difference
between God and man is that God is immortal, while
man is mortal. Because man's mortality is a barrier that
he cannot overcome, Eliphaz sees no need to look for
God; he has nothing to gain,by it.
Bildad is the nex~ of Job's friends to speak. At
no point does Bildad claim to have seen anything with
his own eyes. What he understands has come only by
the hearing of the ear via the reports of others. He
discounts Job's vision and suffering, claiming that
learning by report is the proper path to understanding,
as he explains to Job in the first round:
Ask the generation past,
Study what their fathers have searched out
-For we are of yesterday and know nothing;
Our days on earth are a shadowSurely they will teach you and tell you,
Speaking out of their understanding.
(8:8-10)
Bildad would have Job deny his experience-the divinely
decreed suffering that he knows and the things he has
seen-for the sake of the words of men long dead. For
Job, this is impossible, as he says in reply:

If I say, "I will forget my complaint;

Abandon my sorrow and be diverted,"
I remain in dread of all my suffering;
I know that You [God] will not acquit me.
.
(9:27-28)
Job cannot divert himself from the Now, for
the sake of studying the past of others, or for any other
reason. The Now is consuming Job. He cannot reflect
on the past until his suffering is resolved. An understanding of the generation past is not immediately relevant-Job must understand his own existence before he
can account for the teachings of dead patriarchs, who
are unable to defend themselves in the face of the comforters' misrepresentations of their understanding.
The second round brings Bildad's most powerful speech. Job has been lamenting his future, wondering
what will happen when he descends to Sheol, and Bildad
angrily retorts with a litany of death and destruction,
cataloging the terrors that befall wicked men:
His progeny hunger;
Disaster awaits his wife.
The tendons under his skin are consumed...
[TerrorJlodges in his desolate tent;
Sulphur is strewn upon his home.
His roots below dry up,
And above, his branches wither.
(18:12-13, 15-16)
Job defends himself against this verbal abuse
by asking "How long will you grieve my spirit, / And
crush me with words?" (19:2). Relying on the "wisdom" of the ages as he does, Bildad can only speak of
death. But Job would have life, as he exclaims: "l
would behold God while still in my flesh, / I myself,
not another, would behold Him" (19:26-27). Bildad
continues to be irrelevant. His crush of words serves
no pertinent purpose, because justice and wisdom are
of no account to dead men.
There is something eerie about Bildad's speech
here, a sense that what Bildad is saying has been said
before. It proves to be a reformulation of Eliphaz's statement about the happiness of ''The man whom God
reproves" (5:17). Eliphaz was demanding that Job admit
to sin to recover God's good graces (which would have
reduced Job's relationship with God to the level of simple transactions, an absurd proposition given what has
transpired), and promised Job a happy fate if he did so:
You will know that all is well in your tent;

When you visit your wife you will never fail.
You will see that your offspring are many,
Your descendants like the grass of the earth.
(5:24-25)
Claiming no visual experience of his own, Bildad is
forced to rely on the report of Eliphaz. This proves to
be Bildad's undoing as a viable witness to the divine.
Bildad's third round speech is another reformulation of
Eliphaz's words:
How can man be in the right before God?
How can one born of woman be cleared of guilt?
Even the moon is not bright, .
And the stars are not pure in His sight.
(25:4-5)
Bildad derives his words from the report Eliphaz gave
of his "visions of the night." Looking through
Eliphaz's eyes, Bildad is subject to Eliphaz's faulty
vision and his consistent, convenient, unfitting world
view; Bildad's testimony of the divine cannot help but
be untrue.
Zophar is the last of the comforters to speak.
Zophar speaks only twice, and does not relate a personal
experience of any sort. He does not rely on experience
(and speaks of its fleeting and problematic nature (20:8)),
but rather on wisdom, which he claims to possess:
But would that God might speak,
And talk to you Himself.
He would tell you the secrets of wisdom,
For there are many sides to sagacity.
(II:5-6)
Zophar presents himself as one who knows the secrets
of wisdom. Does he have any basis for this claim? To
understand this, one must have a definition of wisdom. Job, in Chapter Twenty-eight, supplies a definition, given by God: "He said to man, / 'See! Fear of
the Lord is wisdom; /To shun evil is understanding"'
(28:28). Zophar does not seem to fear the Lord.
Zophar claims to be in a privileged position that precludes him from truly fearing the Lord. This limits
Zophar's relationship with God, blinding Zophar to
the truth about wisdom that sits in front of him. In
reply, Job mocks Zophar, saying "Indeed you are the
voice of the people, / And wisdom will die with you"
(12:2). Job then refutes Zophar, stating that wisdom is
God's alone:

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Is wisdom in the aged
And understanding in the long-lived?
With Him are wisdom and courage;
His are counsel and understanding.
(12:12-13)

Amendment XV, Gouache on Paperhoard, Corey Sebastian, A99

Given the definition of wisdom that God has
supplied, and what the narrative frame tells us about
Job, it is clear that Job is in possession of wisdom and
understanding. Why then does he say that God is the
sole possessor of wisdom? Because the wisdom that
Job possesses is the part of wisdom that God has
measured out for men, its beginning, and what Job
seeks is wisdom in full, divine wisdom, and an understanding of divine justice. Zophar cannot supply this;
only God can show the way to it.
Since his first exchange with Eliphaz, Job has
understood that the comforters do not consider him to
be blameless and upright, and do not believe that God
allows both the pure and the wicked to suffer. Thus Job
tells Zophar to rely not on the testimony of men, but
on the testimony of the rest of God's creation: "Ask the
beasts, and they will teach you; / The birds of the sky,
they will tell you, / Or speak to the earth, it will teach
you" (12:7-8). Job has a sense of the world as a whole
that reaches beyond the rational world of man, which
the comforters are bound up in. Job has acquired this
sense of things by taking notice of the wild and unreasonable ways of nature. Here Job is appealing to the
comforters to look beyond their world, to bear witness
to the testimony of nature, so they can understand that
what is at stake lies far beyond their judgement. They
fail to do this, and fail Job in the process. The testimony
of God's creation will later play a crucial role in Job's
experience of divine wisdom.
In his second and final speech, Zophar himself
casts doubt on his claims by telling Job that "A spirit
out of my understanding makes me reply" (20:3). This
sounds like something parallel to Eliphaz's experience,
his vision from an unsubstantiated source. It raises further doubts about the nature of Zophar's testimony.
How can he know that God is the source of his reply?
Indeed, Zophar would have God "loose his burning
anger at [the wicked man]" (20:23). But this does not
happen, because as Job says, God cannot be instructed
(21:22). Even if Zophar possesses the wisdom of men
(which he does not)he cannot claim to have divine
wisdom, and his witness to God is therefore untrue:
"Of your replies only the perfidy remains" (21:34).
After the comforters, who "would help with-

out having the strength" (26:2) have finished speaking,
Job presents his argument against God, unhindered by
untrue accusations. The rational question that the
comforters have been asking is "What sin did you
commit that has caused God to punish you?" Both Job
and the reader know that this is the wrong question to
ask. The proper question is "Why have you allowed a
blameless man to suffer?"
In asking this question, Job lays bare the great
problem of the book. As a blameless man, Job knows
that God ts just, and yet he suffers. There is no way for
Job to rationally reconcile his notion of justice with his
experience; because the comforters can do no more than
rationalize, they do not have the strength to help Job.
Just how excruciating it is to exist in a world where God
appears to be just and unjust in the same way at the
same time, Job expresses with a fatal wish: "May [God]
my enemy be as the wicked; / My assailant as the
wrongdoer" (27:7). If God showed himself to be in the
wrong, as the wicked are, the world would be a consistent, understandable and insufferable place, a place
without hope. Job, whose sons were "marked for the
sword" (27:14), is sharing in the portion of evil men, a
portion that he believes is not rightfully his. Job challenges God to "weigh me on the scale of righteousness,
/ Let God ascertain my integrity" (31:6). Certain of
his blamelessness and the just nature of his claim
against God, Job demands punishment from Him,
should Job be found to have committed sin:

If l raised my hand against the fatherless,
Looking to my supporters at the gate,
May my arm drop off my shoulder,
My forearm break off at the elbow.
(31 :21-22)
One must remember that Job has not lost
faith in God. Job remembers that he is a part of God's
creation: "In His hand is every living soul/ And the
breath of all mankind" (12:10). Job recognizes that he
is ultimately defenseless against the wrath of God. Job
also recognizes that, troubling as the idea may be to
him, God cannot be in the wrong, because God has
allowed Job a measure of hope: "Shaddai has terrified
me. / Yet I am not cut off by the darkness; / He has
concealed the thick gloom from me" (23: 17). The
world is not a hopeless place; God has given Job the
will to live.
This is very bewildering. While God is
assaulting him, Job can see that God is also acting

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benevolently toward him, adding strength to the
notion that God's being is contradictory. What is happening? What does God intend Job to see, that he is
'concealing the thick gloom' from Job? Only God has
the wisdom required to answer such a question, for it
is "hidden from the eyes of all living" (28:2 I). Only
God can see that this is the question that needs to be
answered. This is why no human reason will suffice to
comfort Job; this is why Job so desperately needs to
present himself in God's court: "O that Shaddai
would reply to my writ, / Or my accuser draw up a
true bill!" ( 3 l :35).
Having finished presenting his argument, Job
waits quietly, looking for God. What he finds is Elihu.
Elihu, the narration tells us, has been silently watching
the proceedings, waiting patiently for Job and the
comforters, his elders, to finish speaking. When they
have done so, he rises to speak, "angry at Job because
he thought himself right against God. He was angry as
well at his three friends, because they could not reply,
but merely condemned Job" (32:2-3). Elihu is the
most problematic witness to the divine in The Book of
Job. God does not make any statement about the nature
of Elihu's testimony of him, as he does with Job and
the comforters. There is, in fact, no interaction of any
kind between Elihu and anyone else in the book, in
spite of Elihu's attempts to engage the comforters and
make Job answer him. God appears immediately after
Elihu finishes speaking, but the narration makes it
plain that God is addressing Job, not Elihu (38:1).
What is the nature of Elihu's testimony of God? Is
Elihu speaking the truth about Him?
Job has asked for a hearing with God, and
Elihu claims to be God's emissary: "If you QobJcan,
answer me; / Argue against me, take your stand"
(33:5). Whether or not Elihu is a messenger from
God, Job cannot trust him, because Elihu misquotes
Job at several points. The first instance of this occurs
not long after Elihu begins speaking:
I heard the words spoken [by Job],
"I am guiltless, free from transgression;
I am innocent, without iniquity.
But He finds reasons to oppose me,
Considers me His enemy:'
(33:8-10)
This is what Job actually said:
How many are my iniquities and sins?

Advise me of my transgression and sin.
Why do You hide Your face,
And treat me like an enemy?
(13:23-24)
Job proclaimed his innocence, but not at this
point. Here, Job was asking God to grant him an audience, and cure Job of his ignorance should he have
cominitted sin without knowing it. The most important discrepancy between what Job said and what
Elihu here claims he said lies in the lines "But He
finds reasons to oppose me / Considers me His
enemy." God has not found reasons to oppose Job, as
he told the Adversary (2:30). Job knows that God's
actions are unreasonable, and he has said as much
(9:17). Further, while God is treating Job like an
unjust man would treat an enemy, and Job calls God
his enemy (27:7), God does not consider Job to be
His enemy. Job is God's servant, as He tells the comforters ( 42:7, 8). These are fine, yet crucial distinctions. Elihu, in his youthful arrogance, misrepresents
both Job and God in one fell swoop, making his
account of both human and divine testimony null and
void. Elihu cannot be an emissary from God.
Of course, just what it means to be God's servant is uncertain; perhaps one ought to give Elihu the
benefit of the doubt with regard to his account of God.
However, even if one pardons Elihu with regard to his
representation of the particulars, one must convict Elihu
of being untrue to God in his main assertion: "Let us
decide for ourselves what is just;" he asks of Job and the
comforters, "Let us know among ourselves what is
good" (34:4). Though they disagree on almost every
detail regarding justice, on this Job and the comforters
agree: justice comes from God, not men. In addition, Job
knows that if that part of justice bequeathed to men by
God could bring resolution, Job would have the power
to relieve his affliction on his own. There would be no
reason for Job and the comforters to argue, no need for
Job to have an audience with God. Everything that has
taken place up to this point in the book would be moot,
and need not have happened. Indeed, rendering the
experiences of Job and the comforters nugatory is Elihu's
intention: if he can do so, his own lack of experience
will not be a factor, and he will be able to speak as an
authority. Elihu is thwarted in this enterprise: God
appears, making Elihu irrelevant.
Who is this who darkens counsel,
Speaking without knowledge?

(38:2)

,
God questions Job from within a tempest,
beginning the theophany. God is rebuking Job, not for
sinning, but rather for asking God to alter the fabric
of His world. If Job had sinned, he would not have
been granted an audience with God: "[This J is my
salvation: /That no impious man can come into His
presence" (13:16). Job has not given an untrue
account of God and His creation; he has not mistaken
the relevance of the unreasonable and terrifying
aspects of the world, as Elihu and the comforters have.
Job's problem is that his vision is limited by his perspective as a suffering human being. In order to gain
divine wisdom and understanding with regard to God's
justice, the sense of the world as a whole that Job has
must become more than just a sense: it must be known
as a whole. In order for Job to know the world as a
whole, he must see it 'as a whole.
If Job is to see the world as a whole, and gain
divine wisdom and an understanding of divine justice,
he must undergo a shift in perspective, and see the
world as God sees it, with divine vision. God allows
Job this vision when He shows Job His creation,
"draw[ing] mysteries out of darkness/ And
bring[ing] obscurities to light" (12:22). When God
appears to Job, He does not give Job a report of the
world, but rather speaks it into being, as He did in the
beginning (Genesis 1:1-31). The world is not physically recreated; God does not scale down His carefully
measured creation so that it fits into a space that Job's
unassisted eyes can take in. Instead, God communicates His perspective by means of an epiphany, so that
Job can see as God sees, looking down on the whole,
while still being a part of creation. This heightening
of Job's vision must be what allows him to see God
with his eyes. Because God communicates directly to
Job, Elihu and the comforters are rightfully prevented
from seeing God's creation as a whole. Because Elihu
and the comforters did not look and listen p~operly,
because they did not question God about his creation,
they do not have the experience necessary to see things
from God's perspective.
Echoing Genesis, God brings the mysteries of
creation to light gradually, moving from small to great,
so that Job is prepared to face divine wisdom. God
begins by showing Job how carefully He has measured
the foundations of the earth, setting its limits (38:47). Job knows that he is a created being, and that God
is greater than him, but in striving with God, Job has
shown that he is unclear about his own limits. Earlier
Job asked God, "Am I the sea or the Dragon, /That

You have set a watch over me?" (7:12). Speaking of
the sea, God begins his response to this question:
... I made breakers My limit for it,
And set up its bar and doors,
And said, "You may come so far and no farther;
Here your surging waves will stop."
(38:10-11)
It is clear that Job is greater than the sea; Job has the
breath of life, and is capable of looking beyond himself, unlike the sea. However, the notion that everything in God's world has, from His perspective, a wellmeasured place, is crucial to Job's new view of the
world: his understanding of divine justice depends on
it. These things will come into sharper focus when
Leviathan, the Dragon, appears.
Which path leads to where light dwells,
And where is the place of darkness,
That you may take it to its domain
And know the way to its home?
Surely you know, for you were born then,
And the number of your years is many!
(38:19-2I)
Job does not know, and cannot give an answer.
God is mocking Job. Not only is it impossible for Job
to instruct God, it is folly for Job to request of Him
that He remove a day from His creation when Job
does not even know where light and darkness reside.
God shows Job the rest of the non-living, elemental
part of His creation (storms, constellations, etc.) so
that Job can see that what he would have to contend
with to remove his birth and its time from the world is
far beyond his capacity as a human being.
Next God presents a parade of animals to Job.
The animals fall into two distinct classes: those that
God has given men dominion over (Genesis l :28 ), and
those that answer only to God. In the class that God
has given men dominion over, the group of animals
that are lesser creatures than Job, the two that are most
important with respect to shifting Job's view of the
world are the hind and the ostrich.
Can you mark the time when the hinds calve?
Can you count the months they must complete?
Do you know the season they give birth,
When they couch to bring forth their offspring,
To deliver their young?
(39:1-3)

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God shows Job the hind to change Job's perception of birth. Job sees his birth as a bitter curse,
the source of his pain and trouble. God shows the
hind in the midst of calving, an image of tenderness.
When He does this, God is commanding Job to look
and see that the delivery of young, in which nature has
its share of God's creative power, is not only good, but
beautiful, even though it is painful. Through this Job
sees that all of God's world is invested with an inherent measure of beauty and goodness, and that his own
birth is intrinsically good.
Of all of God's lesser creatures, the ostrich is
the most vexing, for both Job and the reader. In his
final speech, Job said that he had become "a co~p~­
ion to ostriches" (30:29). God presents the ostnch m
an unsavory light:
She leaves her eggs on the ground,
Letting them warm in the dirt,
Forgetting they may be crushed underfoot,
Or trampled by a wild beast.
Her young are cruelly abandoned as if they
were not hers;
Her labor is in vain for lack of concern.
For God deprived her of wisdom,
Gave her no share in understanding.
(39:14-17)
There are strong parallels here. Like the ostrich, Job
has had his children trampled underfoot. Like the
ostrich, Job believes himself to be without wisdom
and understanding. But God has given Job a share of
wisdom and understanding, albeit not the kind that
Job seeks. And Job's children were not killed for.Job's
lack of concern; there is no good reason for their
death. Here God is showing Job that while the protective action that he took on behalf of his children (the
sacrifices he made for them (I:5))is important,
because it is the most important distinction between
Job and the ostrich, Job's community will be preserved
or destroyed according to God's wisdom alone, and
not according to Job's will. Job's dependence on God
is absolute.
_
Job acknowledges his ignorance and lack of
power when he complies with God's demand that he
respond to the question that God is asking, namely,
"Do you see where you belong in My world?":
See, I am of small worth; what can I
answer You?

I clap my hand to my mouth.
I have spoken once, and will not reply;
Twice, and will do so no more.
( 40:4-5)
At this point God asks Job, "Would you
impugn My justice? /Would you condemn Me that
you may be right?" ( 40:8). Job cannot c~n~em_n ~od
as he earlier wished (27:7), because Gods JUSttee is
unassailable: Job does not have the experience necessary to define either divine wisdom or divine justice.
Their defmitions lie beyond the capacity of human
speech, and they must be seen, to be ~own. .
Job's response to Gods question was mconclusive, simply an active silence, which is why God-shows
Job Behemoth, the first of His two great creatures . .
Behemoth reveals to Job his place in the world, leavmg
Job no doubt about where he belongs. Earlier, Job
made it known to the comforters that he wanted God
to kill him, citing his weakness as a reason for God to
end Job's life: "What strength have I, that I should
endure?/. .. Is my strength the strength of rock? / Is
my flesh bronze"? (6:II, 12). Behemoth, "the first of
God's works" ( 40:19), proves to be stronger, and thus
greater than Job: "His bones are like tubes of b:onze,
/ His limbs like iron rods" ( 40: 18). Behemoth 1s the
insurmountable hedge that lies in Job's path (3:23).
Finally, God reveals to Job His greatest creature, Leviathan:
See, any hope of capturing him must be
disappointed;
One is prostrated at the very sight of him.
There is no one so fierce as to rouse him;
W ho then can stand up to M e?...
I will not be silent concerning him
Or the praise of his martial exploits . . .
Divine beings are in dread as he rears up;
as he crashes down, they cringe.
( 41:1-2, 4, 17)
The wisdom of men, the fear of the Lord, is made
manifest in Leviathan. God has given Leviathan the
freedom to inflict dread upon anything that crosses his
path, even divine beings. God praises Leviathan's n:artial exploits; to God, Leviathan, who causes suffermg,
is beautiful. Because he sees, for a fleeting moment, as
God sees, Job can recognize this beauty. Seeing God's
greatest creature Job has a glimpse of divine wisdom.
Job understands that there is a place for terror and

suffering in God's world, that it is a natural part of
the fabric of God's creation. To call Job's suffering just
or unjust would be folly; it is a reasonable distinction
appropriate only to the world of men and the relationships that exist within it, and not to the whole of
creation or to the relationship between man and God:
its meaning crumbles in the face of Leviathan's awful
presence. God's creation is far too great to be contained by the boundaries of such an easy conclusion.
By creating an unreasonable world in which blameless
men are allowed to suffer, in which the hind knows
pain and the ostrich lacks understanding, God gives
His creation a measure of freedom that would not be
available in a logically consistent world which knew no
suffering. Each creature in God's world is granted the
freedom to be an individual, to act according to its
own will and limitations. Seeing this, Job learns that
he must continue to reach beyond the rational, because
the world view that falls out of strict rationality is not
really a view of the world. Rather, it is a vain attempt
by man to create his own world, which must be
incomplete and would not allow life to be lived fully,
if it could be lived at all. To be fully human, and a
true servant of God, Job must face the complexities
and apparent contradictions of the world, not for the
sake of reconciling and understanding them, but in
order that he may appreciate their harsh beauty and
strive to live in harmony with them. This striving is
what makes life compelling. In this striving Job can
achieve harmony with God.
Job has been striving for harmony with God
from the first. Now that he has seen his boundaries
and knows the terms under which he must search for
it, Job understands that his desire for a full explanation of divine wisdom and justice was improper:

I know that You can do everything,
That no plan is impossible for Yqu.
Who is this who obscures counsel
without knowledge?
Indeed, I spoke without understanding
Of things beyond me, which I did not know.
Hear now, and I will speak;
I will ask and You will inform me.
I had heard you with my ears,
but now I see you with my eyes;
Therefore I recant and relent,
Being but dust and ashes.
(42:2-6)

Job knows that his suffering was not unjust,
and he now possesses the wisdom he needs to find his
way in the world. Job reached out to God, and God
touched him, giving Job a sense of awe and wonder at
the greatness of His creation. Any further understanding of divine wisdom and justice is beyond Job; it
belongs only to God.
"Thus the Lord blessed the latter years of Job's
life more than the former" (42:12). Having had a
glimpse of divine wisdom, Job is a changed man. Before
his suffering, Job was a man alone: he watched over his
family with a cautious eye, but did not take part in it. A
caring but aloof father, Job did not feast with his children at the houses of his sons, but made sacrifices on
their behalf (1:4-5). After his affliction, Job understands that if he is to live in harmony with the world,
he must live in harmony with his own community. Job
must not be a distant spectator; rather, he must take an
active role within his family. Job acknowledges this by
holding a feast at his own house, where he is surrounded with and consoled by his family and foends.
"[Job J had seven sons and three daughters.
The first he named Jemimah, the second Keziah, and
the third Keren-happuch" (42: I 3-I 4 ). Having seen the
beauty of the hind in labor, Job knows that women,
the bearers of children, are the handmaidens of God's
creation, and as the curers of loneliness (Genesis 2:I 824 ), they are also the creators of human community.
The beauty of his daughters serves as a visual
reminder to Job of the exalted place God has given
them in His world. With these things in mind, Job
gives his daughters a share in his possessions along
with their brothers ( 42:15). When he gives his daughters estates, Job relinquishes his control over their lives
and care, granting each of them the freedom to fmd
their own way in the world.
"So Job died old and contented" ( 42: I 7). +

Thanks to Ms. Nancy &amp;henauer-advisor, mentor, trusted friend.

Notes:
I. The Book of Job. Philadelphia: The Jewish Publication
Society of America, I 980. References are to chapter
and verse.

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SE N IOR EssAY

PaizE,

Understanding the Mythical Nature of the Wilderness
and its Role in Isaac McCaslin's Repudiation in "The Bear"
Aaron Pease, A98

T

Sarajevo, I 997, Vada Mosavaat, AOO

he Bear," by William Faulkner, contains mythical elements. Both the bear, Old Ben, and the
wilderness in which he lives become larger than
hfe. They are not merely personified, but raised to a
level which seems more than human. Their grandeur is
contrasted to the triviality and smallness of the human
stage and its passions, prides, and tragedies. It seems at
first that it is only in their presence that man can
become fully human. However, the continuing development of this story, along with the themes and issues
dealt with in "The Old People" and "Delta Autumn,"
reveals an underlying complexity which muddles the
purity of our expectations, and forces us to question
how we have understood the myth. It is not that the
myth becomes diminished in our sight but that it must
share our vision with other themes.
It seems necessary, in order to gain a fuller
understanding of the novella, to examine carefully the
mythical elements and their effect on young Isaac
McCaslin, the sensitive boy for whom the myth has the
most impact. We must then examine Isaac's repudiation,
and how that one decision and its aftermath affects our
reading of his youthful encounter with Old Ben.
The bear is described in three ways. He is a
mortal being who will one day die. He is a legend, the
stuff not of tall tales but the measured, deliberate
stories delivered in a serious, almost disbelieving tone
which guarantees the listener that the apparently
incredible conclusion is not hyperbole. Finally, the
bear is "epitome;' "phantom," and "apotheosis out of
the old wild life:'l He is an anachronism, from an old
dead time when all our land was wilderness and man
was merely another creature slinking through the
woods. How can we link these three descriptions? To
what form can we fit them so that the three-sided
figure will give us a complete picture?
The story leaves us in no doubt that the bear
is a mortal being. Boon kills him with the aid of Lion.
However, Old Ben has such a hold on the minds of
the characters, especially Isaac, that it is fair to ask
whether the grandeur of the bear is a human construction, a foisting of nobility upon an irrational beast
from some sort of psychological need, or rather the

inspired chronicling of an actual being who incites
man to wonder, awe, and a dread of his fragility?
The question arises from Isaac's realization in
Chapter One that the bear which had:
run in his listening and loomed in his dreams
since before he could remember and which
therefore must have existed in the listening
and the dreams of his cousin and Major de
Spain ... before they began to remember in
their turn, was a mortal animal and that they
. .. had no actual intention of slaying it, not
because it could not be slain but because so
far they had no actual hope of being able to.

(p.192) 2
This seems to combine all three elements mentioned
before confusedly: mortal, legend, and apotheosis. This
bear, this mortal being, has been present in the preconscious minds of the ten year old Isaac McCaslin,
his 26 year old cousin, McCaslin Edmonds, and the
elderly (or at least middleaged) Major de Spain. If this
is due merely to the recounting of Old Ben's exploits
by the hunters who vainly sought him, then the bear
must have been living at least 60 years, at least twice a
normal lifespan. This seems to suggest that the bear is
really the stuff of legends and fables, an unattainable
goal that every generation of hunters needs: a cunning,
almost human creature who consistently outwits his
pursuers. Perhaps we must investigate further the
notion of its being an anachronism out of an old dead
time. We must take seriously the possibility that the
bear, though a mortal being, may possess slightly more
than mortal powers, as if aided by gods.
First let us try to see with more precision how
the bear "runs in the listening and looms in the
dreams" of the hunters. The first seems relatively simple. From their earliest childhood, in the company of
their elders, gathered around the fire in the libraries of
town houses or trophy rooms of plantations, they have
heard the best of all listening, stories of Old Ben.
They give him a name like a man's because he has
foiled their best attempts to catch him. Using clever-

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ness or brute force when necessary, he has earned
himself a place among humans, if not for his power
of reasoning than for proving how ineffective the best
human plans can be. These stories seem to be a constant; that is, the same stories never seem to grow old
upon retelling and perhaps even become more vigorous
and robust each time they are repeated. Why are they
the best of all listening?
The first answer that comes to mind is that
they are about the wilderness, but that begs the question. Let us instead grant that because they are of the
wilderness, they have the best of all settings. What is
the appeal of the bear? The earlier suggestion, that the
bear represents the unattainable goal, the almost
human creature who outwits his pursuers, seems to fit.
But again we must ask, why do hunters need this unattainable goal? What does this fact tell us about human
nature in general and especially in the postReconstruction South in 1877?
Perhaps we can generalize to say that any
story, to be a story, needs an element of wonder. It
must contain a motive, action, or being which defies
our understanding or categorization. Even if the story
has as pedestrian a purpose as imparting a moral lesson, it is often portrayed in a fanciful setting with
magical characters. Perhaps the story is offering an
explanation of something incomprehensible which
stuns our intellects. If this is so, then the bear not
only satisfies a requirement of storytelling but the
need of the listener as well. This may be where the
second part, the looming in the dreams, comes in.
At first glance this seems to have a simple
explanation. After a night of listening to stories about
Old Ben, the children go to bed and dream of him.
Some nights they have nightmares, in which he chases
them through the dark wood; other nights they are
hunting him and bring him to bay. They assuredly daydream about him while going about the humdrum
business of school. Yet the phrasing seems to indicate
more. The use of "looms" in this story is strange; it
has an ominous connotation yet does not fully convey
danger. Rather, the "looming" indicates an everpresence
which never fully steps out of the shadow of subconsciousness, so that its motives or effect are never clear.
Is it fair to speculate that the bear may be a
part of human nature? The hold Old Ben has on the
hunters suggests that the hunt is not just the vain pursuit of that which refuses to submit to humanity, but
that it may also be a chase after a part of man which
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the attributes of Old Ben are not alien to human
nature, but may actually be essential to being a human.
The looming in the dreams seems to locate the bear in
the minds of the listeners. He seizes their imagination,
but it seems he is merely ascending a throne already
prepared for him.
What then is the nature of the bear? With the
previous analysis we are in danger of reducing him to
an abstraction. He is first of all big, too big for the
hunters and all their accessories, even for the country
which was his constricting territory. In the first
instance the bigness seems to deal with sheer massiveness; the dogs and bullets are ineffectual, the horses
are too slow. But how is Old Ben too big for man? and
for the country? The bigness in relation to man see:i;ns
not a mere ratio of physical size. Man, with his reason, has reached up to the stars and comprehended
their motions; he has set into motion a chain of events
which will lead to him surveying the earth from the
vantage point of the moon. Yet Old Ben is too big for
man. Does this mean man cannot comprehend him? If
so, this story is a critique of modern man in contrast
with the sublime character of Old Ben. Man certainly
cannot corner this quarry. Is this a figurative way of
saying that he is beyond the scope of man's comprehension? To hunt is to seek out. Certainly when we use
our discursive reason we are seeking out something,
whether it be Truth, Beauty, or Euler's e. The fact that
Old Ben eludes his pursuers apparently not by cunning
or guile but merely by sheer bigness seems to place
him among the objects which cannot be grasped by
our reason. Our reason can bump against these objects,
but cannot embrace them or define their boundaries. If
it could, it would be able to cut them up into parts
and render them easily analyzable.
Old Ben is also too big for the country, the
backdrop against which his drama is played out. This
certainly includes the wilderness, but it also must
include the surrounding farms, mills, and plantations.
As these are the works of man, it is no surprise that
he is too big (or merely very disproportional) for
them, even though they are steadily reducing the extent
of the wilderness. Yet is this bigness one of appetite,
that Old Ben cannot coexist with the creations of
man, because they demand the same sustenance and
there isn't enough for the two of them? Or is it one of
right, where two opposing claims to the land must
clash for supremacy? If it is the first, then it is the
wilderness we are talking about. It provides the deer
and berries as well as bed and home for Old Ben.

Likewise it provides the raw material for the ever
expanding plantations and mills which daily become
more efficient and productive. Therefore it seems natural that these two opposing force~ should fight over
the same territory. The legend of Old Ben chronicles
the devestation he wreaks upon the livestock and
stored food of the farms that lie on the fringe of the
wilderness. Are these simply the forays of a bear
whose habitat is being steadily diminished and thus
needs to carry off pigs and calves and rifle the corncribs because the wilderness no longer can feed him? Is
it the revenge of the wilderness upon the encroaching
farms, a grim reminder that their holdings are mere
scratches in the surface of the large and fecund earth?
In either case we are forced to see that more than just
the land is at stake; the values these opposing forces
represent lie at the heart of the conflict.
The bear is characterized as having the ruthless and irresistible deliberation of a locomotive. Yet it
is the locomotive which is the crowning industrial
achievement of the men who have turned the land into
mills and farms. This comparison gives one a sense of
the bear's power but also buttresses the reader's suspicion: that despite the characterization of the farms
and other signs of civilization and industry which surround the wilderness as puny gnawings and hackings,
it is this smallness which will prevail and the great
wilderness which will disappear.Two visions claim the
land, both powerful and seemingly inexorable, but one
which is big, the other which is puny. This description
seems more qualitative then quantitative. The wilderness, however much it diminishes, will always be big,
and the commercial land, no matter how extensive, will
always be puny. Let us try to understand further how
the bear stands as the "apotheosis" of the old wild life
which lives on in the wilderness.
The old wild life is presumably emblematic of
the time when the Chickasaw warriors, Sam Fathers's
ancestors on his father's side, roamed the forest, which
was unsullied by farms and mills. Not only was the
land pristine and untrammelled, but the values of the
people who used it kept it that way. It was not until
the white man arrived that the thought of ownership
of the land was introduced to the wild and free men,
and they succumbed to the notion as if it were a disease to which they had no immunity. Perhaps Old Ben
represents the old wild life in the freedom that he possesses. His is not merely the freedom from capture but
the freedom to take what he pleases. It seems that the
people who lived in that older time could claim a

greater degree of freedom than the people nowadays.
Although they lived together in tribes, they were not
bound by others to till the soil or work a mill. They
lived by hunting, and while it is unrealistic to suppos e
their existence was utopian, they had readily accessible
to them the experience of the wilderness. Perhaps their
vices and passions were muted by its "soaring and
sombre solitude" (I 7 4 ); its presence served to ennoble
them just as we see Old Ben ennobling McCaslin,
Major de Spain, etc. They were not tainted by the urge
to dispossess and own, and they could do as they
pleased within the framework of the wilderness and be
happy. Old Ben epitomizes this life not only because
he is one with the wilderness and possesses all of its
virtues, but because he can dispossess and subjugate
man, who in this new time has become the ultimate
dispossessor and subjugator. He dispossesses man of
his property, and subjugates man's will and imagination to emulation of him.
How can we understand the bear in relation to
the wilderness? If the bear is big, then the presence of
the wilderness is even bigger: "tremendous, attentive,
impartial, omniscient" (p. I 7 4 ), and "the same solitude, the same loneliness through which frail and timorous man had merely passed without altering it"
(p.I 94). The bear is always in action, the protagonist
of stories, the infiltrator of dreams, brazen and huge.
The wilderness is immobility and sentience. Yet one
cannot be found without the other. Isaac, upon hearing of Old Ben, divines the wilderness; likewise, on
first hearing the sounds of the dogs reluctantly following Old Ben's scent, it is not Old Ben who is ahead of
them but the wilderness. And it is the wilderness, not
Old Ben, who lightly pats the bitch for her temerity.
Should we think of the bear as a personification of the wilderness or as a metaphor for it? Old
Ben is definitely a part of the wilderness, but it is also
clear that man's encroachment upon the wilderness has
been slowed by the presence of Old Ben. He discourages squatters and farmers from living too close to the
· wilderness. He also holds the hunters in his power,
and their hunting of him serves to keep the wilderness
intact a little while longer. He carries an appeal to the
men, who despite their fragility and smallness in juxtaposition to the wilderness, also hold the wilderness in
a life or death grip. They hunt Old Ben, but they hunt
him according to the rules of the wilderness. They are
not the squatters and sharecroppers who impinge on
the wilderness and are at the mercy of Old Ben. They
do not want revenge; they could easily get rid of Old

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Ben by setting the Big Woods afire or selling it off to
a lumber company. They keep pure the hunter-hunted
relationship, and imitate Old Ben when hunting him.
They apparently have an unspoken agreement with
Old Ben which both have kept in good faith.
In this sense Old Ben appears as a mediator
between the wilderness and the men who hunt Old
Ben and so unwittingly preserve it. The wilderness not
only inspires awe, but abhorrence and fear. Perhaps
most men are not comfortable with the ahnost palpable presence of the wilderness. In any case, its immobility and brooding sentience are much harder for man
to appreciate or contemplate, and the active, roaming
figure of Old Ben is much easier to understand.
Motion is a common characteristic of those things
that we can comprehend, while supreme immobility is
often predicated of God, the Unknowable. Further,
not only is the bear a moving figure, but through the
hunt man is also able to be in motion, as our reason is
always in motion when seeking out the truth. It
appears that the presence of the wilderness, which
only Isaac and Sam Fathers seem to appreciate fully,
must rely on its manifestation within the bear to affect
the rest of the hunters. This seems to support the idea
that Old Ben is a metaphor for the wilderness. The
freedom that he so aggressively asserts and revels in, is
perhaps parallel to the "soaring and sombre solitude"
of the wilderness, where man can experience an inner
freedom which, uncluttered by small and puny desires
and hopes, can expand his soul in contemplation of
the mysteries of the wilderness.
What are the mysteries of the wilderness? The
wilderness is composed of myriad life. Yet each part is
somehow joined together to create a single presence
which seems to possess a soul or at least an intellect.
Perhaps it is akin to a rapidly vibrating string which
gives an impression of solidity within the diameter of
its vibration. The change of seasons, the growth of
plants and trees, the passing of the sun and rain, run
together to form a seamless, timeless whole which
extends beyond the senses. It is forever adding to itself,
not only with the physical growth, but with the many
lives which have quitted physical existence. For it is
here that Sam Fathers sees the majestic buck who
apparently is the incarnation of his grandfather,
Issetibeha, and Isaac sees the snake who is Old
Carothers. Here Isaac believes Sam, Lion, and Old Ben
to live on, not dead but translated into the myriad life
of the wilderness and thus into its soul. Here there is
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the wilderness's presence. Isaac's observation when
standing in the cane brake that the woods are exactly
the way they were when the Chickasaw warriors
roamed it is not a wish or a supposition but a fact.
There doesn't seem even to be any such thing
as sin or punishment for sin within the wilderness.
The noble Issetibeha lives on, just as vile Old
Carothers, who has done more than most to bring on
the ruin of the wilderness. Somehow the constant
renewing of life which characterizes the wilderness has
even revived Old Carothers, although the wilderness is
not completely lacking in a sense of justice. Old
Carothers is a snake, and harmful only to those who
do not know the wilderness. One could even argue
that the brooding sentience of the wilderness contemplates things much bigger than itself and thus to it
man's evils appear trivial and fleeting.
The presence of the wilderness profoundly
affects Isaac. While composed of the "myriad life
which printed the dark mold of these secret and sunless spaces with delicate fairy tracks... which watched
him from beyond every twig and leaf" (p. 313), the
effect on Isaac is almost always one of solitude and
loneliness. How can we reconcile these two experiences?
Man's natural desire to know forces him to try
to understand the wilderness and the awe it inspires
within him. However, the wilderness is disproportionately big, not just in comparison to his physical size
but with regards to the smallness of his intellect. He
can find no analogies or comparisons to which he can
make a ratio to its massiveness. Therefore man comes
to feel loneliness and solitude because none of his
concepts are adequate to accompany him into this
contemplation. He becomes aware, rather, of its presence which he perceives, though not just through the
senses. It impresses upon him a sense of being which
does not fill him but which rather reminds him of the
being he possesses.
That is why the boy, to whom Isaac is compared, recognizes the existence of love and passion
from entering the presence of a woman (p.195). He is
filled with an emptiness and a temporary despair
because his life is so empty of the fullness which the
woman has experienced in loving and being the
beloved. However, this emptiness, once it is recognized, gives him hope that one day it can be filled,
that the realization of emptiness is better than never
knowing how much he could lack. He desires to know
of the men she has loved or who have loved her, of
their excellence and their deeds which made them

deserving of her. In short, he seeks to create an
imagined life which will provide him with a model of
emulation so that he too will one day be worthy to
love that woman.
The wilderness contains the memories of
untold eras and peoples and beasts. It stands over man,
who to prolong his short life's memory can merely
construct edifices and monuments which will barely
outlive him. These too pale in comparison with the
wilderness, which had stood for milennia before the
white man even thought to seek out a New World. Its
presence implies a history which contains greater
deeds, nobler men, and more horrific monsters than
anything the white man has heard of or imagined. Yet
it stands silent, brooding, sentient, as if contemplating
something else, something even bigger than itself
(perhaps its own fate).
Yet the wilderness is vulnerable. It cannot resist
the puny gnawings and hackings, which, multiplied a
thousandfold, steadily diminish it. This indicates that it
is somehow subservient to man, that it must depend on
man for its current existence. It is man who for now, as
slave of the modern profit driven world, holds power of
life or death over it, albeit ambiguously because he is
not its master. Only recently has the wilderness become
threatened. Most men live outside of the wilderness and
have no regular experience of it. It seems that the experience is key, whether simply with the wilderness or as
mediated through the chase of Old Ben. Without any
experience, there seems to be nothing which can give
man a sense of a presence outside of him. It seems
analogous to a cathedral, which is designed to give one a
sense of the majesty of God. However, a cathedral is
man-made and filled with symbols which lead one to
see the cathedral itself as a symbol. It even contains
pictures or statues of the God who inspired it. In the
wilderness, its natural symbolism, if it possesses one at
all, is inaccessible to man and points to a God or
Principle even more awe-inspiring than itself
Considering the presence it has, and its effect, it might
as well be considered an end in itself
The wilderness is doomed, and Old Ben is a
mortal being and so must die. It is Old Ben's death
which spells the beginning of the end of the wilderness. After Old Ben there is nothing to keep men from
transforming the wilderness into raw material for their
mills, homes, and farms. But the manner in which Old
Ben is brought down points toward a deepening complexity which suggests to the reader that his death is
not the tragedy it might at first seem to be.

What is needed is a dog who can hold Old
Ben at bay. In what seems an incredible piece of luck
they find the dog in the wilderness. He is wild, more
fearsome than a wolf because he doesn't care enough
about men to be afraid of them. He possesses "a cold
and almost impersonal malignance like some natural
force." His hide is blue-tinted and similar to the color
of metal, so that he seems to be like a bullet in silent
pursuit when fired at his target. He is employed by the
hunters in the hunt for Old Ben, but they do not own
him. He seems similar to the machines and technologies that man employs for his own ends but which take
on a life of their own and come to dominate man,
their creator.
The day comes that is inevitable once Lion
has been found. It will be when, as Isaac realizes,
"Even he [Old BenJ don't want it to last any longer"
(p.204). It is like a festival. Both townspeople and the
poorest sharecroppers have come to witness it. They
process into the woods, which to the first is merely
foreign, and to the other both foreign and antagonistic. They are led by a dog whose blue hide infers not
just "courage and all else that went to make up the
will and desire to pursue and kill but endurance, the
will and desire to endure beyond all imaginable limits
of flesh to overtake and slay" (p.22 7). Soon after,
Lion finally brings Old Ben to bay. The dogs mill
about uncertainly, but Lion does not hesitate. He
attacks and jumps for Old Ben's throat; Old Ben catches him in an embrace and falls backward. It seems that
even Lion is not enough, until Boon leaps to his rescue
and buries his knife deep in Old Ben's neck. Old Ben
is at last brought down both by a dog who cares for
nothing and the man who loves him. It was also an act
of redemption, for previously Lion brought Old Ben
to bay and Boon missed him five times with his pump
gun. Old Ben seems to embrace his fate by embracing
Lion. Turning at bay is a the symbolic gesture of
defeat. There is nowhere (or no reason) to run,
nowhere to hide, and while his ability to fend off the
. dogs alone makes the kill a dicey proposition, it plays
into the hands of the hunters, who prefer an unmoving target. It is a tactic out of the old wild life, where
once the chase has ended and the fight has begun, the
beast with the most courage and endurance will win
out. It has no place in the modern, levelling world of
machines and the mere fact that it is resorted to spells
doom for Old Ben.
However, Old Ben is not brought down by
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to save Lion. In effect it is an act of love that brings
down Old Ben, a man's love for a dog that is not even
his. Perhaps this is why Isaac knows that he will not
grieve when Old Ben dies.
How are we to understand Isaac McCaslin
against this backdrop? From his earlie~t d~ys the be ~r
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has "run in his listening and loomed m his dreams. It
is he who, before he is ten, believes that the hunters
who each fall set off to hunt Old Ben do not even
intend to kill him. Instead, he perceives that their
failed hunts are not futile but are celebrations of the
"old bear's furious immortality" (p.I86). It is Isaac,
more than anyone else, who gives the hunt a mythical
symbolism and meaning. What are the factors which
lead Isaac McCaslin to see things in this way?
It is Sam Fathers who undertakes to teach
young Isaac the ways of the hunt. He creates for Isaac
that mystical world where the past seems more real
than the present, where the Chickasaw warriors roam
the woods as if they had never left it. In the child's
imagination the small copses and creek beds and
wooded ravines which adjoin the farms and fields
become the pristine land which existed before the
white man's invasion. His farm and his family's other
holdings seem to him as insubstantial as the faded
page on which is recorded his legal claim to the land.
We don't know the truth of what Sam Fathers
relates to Isaac. He has never known the Indian peoples
from whom he is descended; he doesn't even remember
his father's face. However, he fashions a world out of
recollections he has never had. Certainly then they are
coming from his imagination. As memories they may
be false, but as a myth or story with a moral they are
not mere lies. Or perhaps they reflect what Sam Fathers
wishes could be the case. He is training Isaac to
become a hunter, a man, but also to become part of
the bigger world to which the wilderness is the
entrance. The world Sam Fathers creates captures
Isaac's imagination completely, not just because he is a
boy and likes to hear stories about Indians and hunting, but also because it relays to him a moral system
and way of life which is vastly different from the one
he lives in. It conveys to him a nobility, a sense both of
right and privilege but also humility in the face of that
which with one is entrusted. He absorbs so much of
this way of life that it is the past which seems real and
the present which usurps. The ideals of the past are the
true ones, not the ones which have brought with them
the harsh life of the plantation.
Isaac's values are those of the hunter. They are

humility, sufferance, endurance and pride. The pride
only exists because of the previous three. It is virtuous
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and gracious, and prideful not by accompl_shment ~ut
by association. So the world that Isaac believes he lives
in, where the present is tenuous and is always in danger of sliding back into the past, is supported by the
existence of the bear. He has foiled the best attempts
of the men who control the present as he knows it:
plantations, farms, and mills which dominate the land
and the people who work them. He has plagued them
since even before he was born, so that the bear has
loomed in their dreams or run in their listening since
even before they could remember, just as with Isaac.
He has made their innovations and domestications
look silly and useless. But even though he is too. big,
so that everyone is small in comparison, the men who
hunt him ennoble themselves by doing so. They are
drawn back by Old Ben into the past to participate in
that "ancient and unremitting contest according to the
ancient and immitigable rules which voided all regrets
and brooked no quarter" (p.I84). Each November or
June they travel to the Big Woods, back into the past,
and return emptyhanded. But that is the way it should
be, according to Isaac, for Old Ben is their ticket into
that ancient, brooding world.
But Isaac is a believer. He has faith in Sam
Fathers, in the stories he is told. He believes that the
wilderness is alive and sentient, and that the deer that
Sam Fathers calls Grandfather really is a reincarnation
of the man who has been dead for I 00 years. It is the
bear who confirms his faith, makes the stories more
real than even his imagination can make them because
Old Ben is real. He enters the wilderness and soon
encounters the bear. He has inherited the bear and the
wi.lderness as the stuff of legend, as the phantom who
time and again glides through the ring of hounds and
bullets because they are not enough. But the bear is
alive, and faith cannot exist without the hope of its
dispelling. That is why Isaac must see Old Ben, to
affirm the fear that he hears in the voices of the
hounds, that he himself feels when he sees the mark of
its trap-ruined paw. He will be scared, because there is
no helping it. The massiveness of the bear, coupled
with the grandeur of the wilderness, cannot bu~
reduce him to a state of fear and awe. But he will not
be afraid, he will not be seized by the irrational fear of
a coward, who must lash out at the object of his fear.
The fear will possess him but will not drive him mad,
because there is no necessary reason to be afraid of
what is bigger than you.

But Isaac can't just walk out and see Old Ben.
He must become a woodsman, he must learn from
Sam how to hum and read trails and sign. Even further, he must remove himself completely from the
world of plantations and mills and progress. His
search for Old Ben is futile until he leaves off not only
the gun but also his watch and compass. None of the
other hunters would have dared to leave without a gun.
To them the wilderness is still dangerous and uncertain, and they would require protection and a means to
take advantage of an opportunity to hunt. When he
finally finds Old Ben, or rather, Old Ben reveals himself, he is no longer a hunter, part of that art which
brings man so close to nature yet still remains intrinsically antagonistic. Old Ben moves across the glade and
into the glare and then stops and looks at him again.
He fades back into the woods, not as if he slipped
back but as if the wilderness closed around him like a
curtain, like the host were being placed back in the
tabernacle after being displayed to the faithful.
And so the appearance of Lion should have
caused Isaac to hate and fear him. He has seen the
bear, even jumped it once with the fyce, but he knows
he will never shoot at it. He knew this the first time
he ever felt the presence of Old Ben. Isaac knows now
that the hunters don't kill Old Ben not because they
are celebrating his furious freedom but because they
have no hope or chance to. But with Lion things will
be different. He is the dog to run down Old Ben, and
Isaac accepts it, and even feels privileged to be a part
of it. He feels a sense of fatality about what is going
on; he feels as if it is the beginning of the end of
something big. "He would be humble and proud that
he had been found worthy to be a part of it too or
even just to see it too" (p.2 I 7).
Is this the code of the hunter? Earlier hunting
is described as "the ancient and unremitting contest
according to the ancient and immitigable rules ·which
voided all regrets and brooked no quarter." It is a
game of life and death. It requires strict rules because
the hunter can easily become the hunted and the field
upon which they play can be just as dangerous as the
wild animals they hunt within it. And when Sam
marks Isaac with the blood of the deer in ''The Old
People," which consecrates and links him to the halfIndian chief irrevocably, it absolves him not of love
and pity for the things he slays but weakness and
regret, which would prevent him from being a man's
hunter. It is this voiding of regret which seems odd, as
regret is a wish to change the past and to Isaac it is the

past which is always mingled in with the present and
which the present is always trying to subvert it.
Isaac has immersed himself into the life of the
wilderness more than any other of the hunters. He
transforms their hunts into "pageant-rites," celebrations
of the bear they try to slay but cannot because he is
too big for them. He is not content to merely be a
hunter; he voids all the laws of that "ancient and
unremitting contest" so that he can see Old Ben, so
that he can fill himself with the presence and mystery
of the wilderness. He seeks the meaning behind things;
whereas, the other men are content to see the wilderness through the medium of hunting, having killed and
been marked but still in some sense antagonistic. It is
Isaac who sees "the two of them, shadowy in the limbo
&amp;om which time emerged and became time: the old
bear absolved of mortality and himself who shared a
little of it" (p.I95). Yet he does not mourn Old Ben's
passing, even though he knows it sets into motion
events which will mark the end of something, presumably the wilderness, as the story seems to indicate.
Does the absolution of regret which marks him as a
hunter prevent him from properly mourning Old Ben?
Does the code of the hunter include some sort of quietism which fails to do what is necessary to prevent the
wilderness's passing? Or does the code base itself upon
a bigger perspective, on a knowledge of the wilderness
as mentioned before, so that death is not tragic, even
though the death contains a significance beyond itself?
The hunt, as has been mentioned before, is a
deadly serious game. It involves the virtues of humility, pride, and endurance. It rewards the ability to
submit oneself to the dictates and hardships of the
wilderness, and because these are followed and
endured, the pride follows, which is a virtuous selfrespect and a respect for all that lives, even if what
lives will someday be brought down by the hunter's
gun. There can be no regret because the hunter's code
pushes two contradictory messages: the one which
demands an appreciation, respect, and even love for all
life, and the other which demands a steady aim, a sure
hand, and no remorse as the trigger is pulled. The
hunter loves the life he spills. But he spills it nonetheless, and he seems to have firmly entrenched in him
the notion that everything must die someday. It seems
almost cynical. At the very least it seems not to be a
fitting end to the story of the bear. He dies with no
objections from Isaac, and one wonders if the code of
the hunter, the code of the wilderness which Sam
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joyfully and humbly, is too perfect, too complete a
code, so that the boy becomes a man too soon, before
he can fully appreciate the tenacious loves, desires, and
thoughts of a child.
Five years after the death of Old Ben we
witness a second death, a death which signifies the
beginning of the end of the white male McCaslins.
Isaac is 21, and at the age when his inheritance gives
him, the huge farm and former plantation which
McCaslin Edmonds has caretaken until this time. But
Isaac refuses it, and the reader is swept into the crux
of the story, the fourth chapter which flows like a river
through the middle of the story. It chronicles both
Isaac's arguments for his repudiation of the land and a
litany of wrongs which he has inherited and which
powerfully affect his reasoning. The seamlessness and
the turbidity of the grammatical structure, in which
sentences run through paragraphs and even pages, gives
us a structural wilderness through whose ragged and
continuous underbrush the reader must uncover the
flowers of his relinquishment. The motives and experiences twist and turn around and through each other
like brambles, so that time and place seem to take
second place to the powerful pulls of the psyche which
order and rank them according to its peculiar criteria.
The argument begins simply enough. It is the
land that is in question. According to Isaac he does
not own it, nor did his grandfather Old Carothers, nor
even the Indians who sold it to him. As he has been
taught by Sam Fathers, the land is owned by no one,
and Sam is echoed in the Bible, where it is chronicled
that God made the earth to be held in common, to be
shared and enjoyed by everyone. Ownership is an
illusion, because the very idea that the land is something that can be bought or sold renders invalid the
actual buying and selling. He who buys land buys
nothing, because the land cannot be owned. The men
who bought the land, brought in slaves to work and
have as proof of their ownership of a commodity
which brings them money, are deluding themselves.
They have no more claim to the land than the drifter
who spends the night on it and then moves on.
McCaslin's retort is that nevertheless the land
is owned. Isaac's reasoning is based on an ideal of the
land not borne out in practice. In practice, there are
men who claim to own the land and still more who
believe them. Even granting the illusoriness of legal
claims, it is men like Old Carothers who have seized
the land in defiance of whatever principle to the
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only for themselve but for their descendants. In
practice, then, Isaac is forced to repudiate the land,
while in theory he has nothing to relinquish.
It is Isaac who first refers to the Bible, and it is
McCaslin who first creates the historical link between
them and the Garden of Eden. It is a series of dispossessions starting when God first exiled man from Eden.
Man has successively invaded and taken back the land
he may or may not have a claim to, so that the history
of man seems to be the ebb and flow of a
confused, meandering tide. And if God intended that
the world be held in common and shared in peace, then
where has he been during the sordid history of man,
displacing his neighbor and being displaced in return?
Isaac's answer: He has been dispossessed. The
history of man has been the history of the displacement of God. God has not merely stood by, ignorant
or impotent, and watched the people who claimed to
be His believers carry out horrible acts of injustice
and slavery, often in His name. Rather the history of
dispossession and wasting that seems to characterize
the history of man is a removing of the simple virtues
which God has ordained will preserve his creation and
lead to Him. The discovery of America was allowed by
God because it is here that redemption is possible,
where "a nation of people could be founded in humility and pity and sufferance and pride of one to another." God permits his laws to be broken, for someone
like Old Carothers to own and keep the land in the
eyes of man because the white man, even before he
began to divide the land into parcels and demarcations, has cursed the land.
The white man is needed to break his own
curse, which he has brought to the New World. And it
seems that the land must be allowed to degenerate into
a model of the old world, so that out of the rubble
man will create for himself, one man will stand back
and cry, "What have we done?" The seeds of the old
world's corrupt and worthless twilight, which the
white man has fled, have been brought to the New
World like a disease. The wild men who inhabit the
land have no defense against it and succumb to it (witness Ikemotubbe's ruthlessness upon his return from
New Orleans); therefore it seems it is necessary for the
white man to destroy the curse he has brought. This
process is unfolding through the line of Old
Carothers's descendants. Old Carothers was the carrier
of the curse, and the subsequent generations have been
slowly undoing the curse, as the dictates of the times
have allowed.

McCaslin misunderstands the curse interpretation that Isaac is explaining and mentions the sons of
Ham, the descendants of Noah who are cursed to
serve the descendants of Ham's brothers. It was
commonly thought that the sons of Ham were the
black people, and was often argued by those with a
vested interest in a Biblical justification of slavery.
Isaac argues that the Bible is a complex work and
sometimes says things which are not literally true.
Notwithstanding the considerable interpretation and
moral myopia demanded by the conclusion McCaslin
reaches, the Bible does employ symbols and myths to
convey truth to man. The Bible must be read by the
heart, not by the reason, and only a true heart can
navigate the complex web of the Bible. The message
God wants to be conveyed is simple, too simple for
the complex and driven human heart. It must be
explained by complex and driven men whose hearts are
filled with lust and passion and hate, to men whose
hearts are likewise filled with lust and passion. Truth
must survive the medium of humanity's condition
before it can reside in the human heart.
This argument by Isaac seems to be key to his
character. He maintains both that truth is simple and
that truth is complex. The heart already knows truth,
but it must be filtered through the complex passions
which drive the heart. The Bible, which is God's Word,
is a huge, sprawling pseudo-historical spiritual work
out of which both the most commonsense and the
most delusional beliefs have been taken. It has been
written by the driving passions of the human heart,
for the driving passions of the human heart. But for
Isaac, the truth is simple.
His notion comes to the fore when McCaslin
reads to him Keats's "Ode on a Grecian Urn," which
McCaslin believes explains the nature of truth. The
closing lines of the second stanza, "She cannot fade,
though thou hast not thy bliss,/Forever wilt thou love,
and she be fair!," which is addressed to the young
lovers frozen on the side of an antique vase, is symbolic of truth and man's relation to it. Truth is unchanging, and even if we cannot grasp it, we are destined,
through courage, love, honor, pity, and pride, to confusedly seek it out. McCaslin is prompted to reflection
on this poem by the story of Isaac risking his life to
save the little fyce which was going to attack Old Ben.
Not only does he not shoot Old Ben, but he drops his
gun when he rushes to within ten feet of Old Ben to
save the hysterically courageous fyce. McCaslin cannot
understand why Isaac didn't shoot, and then the poem

springs to mind and helps him understand. What
insight does McCaslin have into Isaac's behavior which
the poem helps bring to light?
The poem celebrates the feeling of timelessness
and youth which the urn inspires. The scene depicted
on the urn is irrevocable; but it forever engages in the
viewer not only a sense of eternal bliss but also a desire
to construct a world which can produce a scene such as
this. Who are the lovers? What city have they come
from? What god is being sacrificed to? These details are
not of historical interest; past answers are not important. What is important is that the viewer is drawn into
the scene, experiences its immediacy, yet is also aware
that it continually renews itself. The youthful lovers will
always be youthful. In a sense the scene has a past and a
present but not a future. That frozen moment speaks
not of fulfillment but of the beauty of desire. In a
story we might require some sort of resolution, while
in this scene we instead prize the motion that is
implied in the stillness. The suitor is forever courting
while the beloved is forever coy.
How can we link this to Isaac and his experience with the bear? We know very early on that Old
Ben means much more to Isaac than a mortal being
should. Old Ben is something he inherits from his elders, and which he knows first through stories and then
in dreams. His first experience of Old Ben's mortality
is one of awe, and he knows that he will never fire
upon Old Ben. Therefore, when he surprises Old Ben
and the fyce amazingly brings him to bay, we have
frozen in an instant of time the boy juxtaposed against
the bear, looming as he looms in Isaac's dreams. Isaac
is aware of Old Ben's mortality and the hunter's code
which voids all regrets towards slain prey. Yet the
immensity of the bear, both literal and figurative,
impresses upon him a sense of preservation. The hunt
is not a real attempt to kill Old Ben; rather it is a
framework within which the bear is revealed in all his
grandeur. The "yearly pageant-rite of the old bear's
furious immortality" must go on. Isaac knows the bear
will someday die, but it will not be him who brings
the hunt to a close.
Isaac preserves a tradition, one which preserves
both Old Ben and the celebration of his life. One
wonders if this is analogous to the preservation of the
urn, so that its message can inform subsequent generations. The urn can have no effect if there is either no
one to appreciate its beauty and if it becomes cracked
or ruined from mishandling or neglect. This is what
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preserved only in the experience of him. Truth covers
all things which touch the heart, so that the things we
do for truth are manifested in our virtues. Isaac is led
by his heart to save the fyce, to throw down the gun in
abnegation of technology, to refuse to shoot Old Ben
even when he holds the gun. It all happens so fast, that
reasoning doesn't seem to play a part. It seems to be a
direct apprehension of truth which man only is confusedly aware of, a sense of something bigger than
himself which prompts him to action, bypassing the
normal acts or ratiocination and deliberation.
This is an example of the simplicity of truth,
an impetus to direct action which seems to be the
right thing to do. The complexity comes into play in
the evaluation of the consequences of the human
action. For example, Boon's killing of Old Ben to save
Lion's life is another example of truth acting directly
on a human heart. We do not fault Boon for his
impulsive, courageous action. It is an act of love, and
the worst we can say is that Old Ben died a worthy
death at the hands of love. Yet the consequences of
Old Ben's death are not all good. His death insures the
death of the wilderness, as the Big Bottom is soon
sold to a lumber company. The almost ritualized hunts
are no more, and the men who perhaps unwittingly
preserved the wilderness now have little to no connection with its presence.
Likewise we can see Isaac's repudiation in this
light. It seems an inherently simple act, a refusal to
take over what has been destined for him because what
he will own was not only founded upon injustice, but
still employs it in its seemingly inexorable expansion.
Yet Isaac admits to himself that even his own motives
will be forever incomprehensible to him. Further, the
consequences of his decision insure that he will be
derided by society, even by his wife, and that he will
have no heir to carry on his return to purity. The possible psychological harm that his separation from society can cause him is also unknown. What is known is
only that his motives are unknown even to him and
that his decision can perhaps be regarded as impetuous
or incomplete. It seems important then to try to
understand the complex factors which molded the
young Isaac McCaslin's heart and mind.
It seems that Isaac is trying to escape his
grandfather, Old Carothers, by escaping his legacy.
This includes the plantation that he will inherit. But
even more devestating is the inheritance of the state of
affairs upon the plantation. Some of the slaves that
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through Isaac McCaslin. It is not evident to Isaac until
he investigates the ledgers which have chronicled the
lives dwelling upon the plantation. His investigations
reveal not only that Old Carothers impregnated a
slave, who bore him a daughter, but that Carothers
also impregnated this daughter, who bore a son as she
died in childbirth. That very same day the mother,
Eunice, walked into a creek and drowned herself
In both cases the children went unacknowledged by their father. They were slaves, and thus property. However, when Old Carothers died he left in his
will a monetary legacy which was to be bequeathed to
the son, Terrel, upon his reaching the age of 2I. This
posthumous, cowardly acknowledgement is another
aspect of the legacy of Old Carothers. His twin sons
do not participate in his excesses; upon his death they
move out of the "tremendous abortive embryo" which
is the grandiose, half-finished mansion Old Carothers
was building, and into a modest house they build for
themselves. They set themselves to undoing the evils
their father perpetrated. They begin to free their slaves,
and they move the ones they have into the mansion,
with the unspoken agreement that what they do at
night is their business if they are all behind the door
in the morning. They also expand the monetary legacy
to each of Terrel's three children.
It is Isaac who takes it upon himself to insure
that the legacies are bequeathed. The oldest child,
Jim, one day runs away and is never heard from again.
Isaac pursues him with the money but never catches
up with him. He is also forced to seek out the second
child, Fonsiba, who marries a Negro carpetbagger
whose educated demeanor and sense of protocol belie
his foolishness and inability to provide for her. Isaac
finds her and makes sure that the legacy will keep her
from ever starving. Finally, it is Lucas, the youngest,
who seeks Isaac out and takes command not only of
his portion but Jim's as well. It seems that guilt drives
Isaac to this duty. It also seems that this responsibility, while virtuously carried out by Isaac, is not a lifelong trust, but a feeble means of rectifying a purposeful flaunting of power. The trust is money, the literal
coin of the realm which the plantation ( and perhaps
even more importantly, the commissary) employs. It
can
do nothing to actually raise these third-white Negroes
to a status commensurate with humanity in general:
with Jim it is ineffectual, with Fonsiba it enables her
not to live as a beast, and with Lucas, his acceptance
of it links him to his grandfather in more than just

parentage. It is Lucas's special burden (as the reader
witnesses in "The Fire and the Hearth") that he
must fight the white man's obsession for miserliness
and hoarding.
The backdrop against which this drama is
played out is the post-Reconstruction South. Isaac was
too young to remember the Reconstruction and the
devestation it wrought on the land. On the one hand
there were newly freed Negroes with no previous
experience of freedom and a tendency to misuse it
just as the white man was prone to misuse his license.
On the other hand there were the defeated Southerners,
bitter and defiant, who were charged with the task of
rebuilding their homes and lives and cities. Thirdly
there were the carpetbaggers, whose rapaciousness was
unbounded. At first entering the South under the banner of freedom, it is they who are soon fighting with
the blacks over the limited number of jobs and acres of
land. In a few generations they will be actively trying to
subvert the blacks' freedom under the white hoods of
the Klu Klux Klan. Through this all the plantation and
commissary plug on, following the pattern of the seasons, the harvests and plantings, holding all who work
the land in thrall. The black ex-slaves', now sharecroppers', lot has changed little since before the War. They
are still beholding to the white man to sell them their
farming supplies and to buy his cotton at prices not
only the white man knows to be fair or not.
Isaac's repudiation is the refusal to become
part of this machine; the machine not just of the farm
and commissary but the bigger machine of the South.
The economy-driven exigencies of this life are repulsive to him. They make of the people, not just the
workers but also the owners and overseers as well,
means to the end of profit. There is no presence
beyond man which can force him to contemplation
and awe. Instead the land, which has been transformed
by man, translated, if you will, into a force which has
quickly grown beyond any man's control, so much so
that it is referred to as a curse. Perhaps it contains
within it the beginnings of sin, the desire to establish
what is mine and what is thine, and then to take what
is other and make it one's own. In any event, it proved
too big even for Buck and Buddy, whose attempts at
reparation were ineffectual in stopping the onslaught
of the white man's curse upon the land.
But Isaac breaks free from more than the plantation. He acknowledges not only that he is free
of the "two threads frail as truth and impalpable as
equators yet cable-strong to bind for life them who

made the cotton to the land their sweat fell on"
(p.245), but that he is also free:
the frail and iron thread strong as truth and
impervious as evil and longer than life itself
and reaching beyond record and patrimony
both to join him to the lusts and passions, the
hopes and dreams and griefs, of bones whose
names while still fleshed and capable even old
Carothers' grandfather had never heard.
(p.286)
What is this thread Faulkner is speaking of? It seems
to be the thread of human nature which binds all men
however different, together. The attributes which are ,
tied together by this thread seem to be very similar to
the components of the heart's driving complexity
mentioned earlier. The mention of the past at first has
the effect of linking Isaac to the wild and free men
who first inhabited the land. But how is he free of
them if his decision has been in emulation of them?
Rather, it seems that the past is significant in providing a scope, a historical survey, through which has
passed a single strain which has been broken by Isaac
McCaslin.
What is the significance of Isaac being free
from this thread? How does it bear on the fact that he
is forever childless, spurned by his wife, and believed
even by his friends to have just given up? In effect he is
rejecting society, by refusing to accept their established
traditions of inheritance and property ownership. He
marries, and thus enters society through its conventions, but he still manages to live amidst society but
not of or in it. His wife cannot accept this, constantly
being held in contempt even by the blacks, for example
Lucas, who have witnessed his decision. She sleeps
with him one final time, knowing he will never move
onto the farm, and then becomes as remote to him.
Isaac acknowledges that the wilderness will
always be his mistress and wife. It is the communion
with the wilderness which means the most to him.
Old Ben and Lion and Sam are gone, but their spirits
live on within the wilderness. He journeys back to the
woods, not merely to hunt, and not merely to mourn
their deaths, but also to celebrate their continued presence, albeit translated, within the wilderness. It is here
that he almost steps upon the snake whom he calls
"Grandfather." In recognizing Old Carothers in the
snake, he is acknowledging Sam Fathers's influence.
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mystery in the supposedly tamed and ordered land
which can compare to the experience of the presence
of the wilderness. This is what Isaac chooses over the
farm and the conventions of society. He chooses a
world which is fast disappearing before the onslaught
of the modern world and its machinelike farms and
mills. It is a world where silence and solitude reign
supreme, where man is confronted with a sense of his
own fragility and powerlessness. This experience seems
only to be available in the tamed and ordered land in
something like death; whereas, in the wilderness this
confrontation is followed by an awareness of life, both
of one's own and of the life of the wilderness. Given
this, how can we understand the apparent contradiction which is voiced most aptly by Roth Edmonds
while addressing Isaac in "Delta Autumn": "Where
have you been all the time you were dead?" (p.329).
The contradiction of purity versus compromise stems from the perception that society has of
Isaac. To them he has quit, he has forsaken what was
rightly his, and he has failed to carry on his name to
the next generation. While the opinions of society in
general are often mean-spirited and narrow, the reader
has several questions of his own which parallel these
opinions. Why doesn't Isaac sell the land he inherits
and buy back part of the wilderness? Why doesn't he
assume control of the farm and make it a model of
justice and equity? Why does he not regret the fact
that he will never have a son to mark as Sam Fathers
did him? How can his ideals and concern for the
wilderness outlive him?
These questions refer to the moral tradition
with which Isaac was raised. He learned a nobility, a
pride in oneself for having the humility to accept
unchangeable conditions, and the endurance and sufferance to outlast them. However, this moral code
seemed inundated with a sense of fatality that may
often accompany nobility. This was due to the fact
that the hunter had to embrace a contradiction: he
loved the land and the creatures which inhabited it, yet
he also killed some of those creatures. This carries
with it a responsibility (not to overhunt, for example),
but it still does not take away the fact that the hunter
kills what he loves. Isaac early on feels part of something big and privileged to participate in it, but he
never feels the impetus to try and change what to him
is the established order.
Thus, when Isaac inherits the land, he not
only takes seriously the idea that the land is no one's,
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overcome by the evils that have been perpetrated on
the farm. The blacks are basically still slaves, and some
of them are living evidence of the white man's license.
If he were to assume ownership and then sell it, he
would merely be passing the farm and all its evils on
to someone else, who more than likely would continue
to perpetuate these evils. The refusal is key, a deliberate forsaking of the established mores of society. He
cannot forsake his ideals to save them. Likewise
accepting ownership of the land to become a wise and
generous landlord would be futile. The farm, the solvent and ever increasing machine which binds people
to the land for the duration of their lives, would snap
him up into its jaws in a second. No matter how hard
he tries, he would be bound to the land as well, constrained to make others work, to raise or lower p~ices
according to the dictates of the economy, and to sell
and buy from cheats, skinflints, and harsh overseers.
He would become a cog in the machine no matter
how pure his intentions were.
Lastly, Isaac has no son. He tries to break free
of his blood, from the specter of his grandfather as
manifested in the farm which becomes in minutia a
model of the South. In so doing he alienates himself
from the society of man, not just the tainted, corrupt,
profit driven society, but also from the political life of
man, of families, friendship, stewardship, and civic
responsibility. In freeing himsel£ he means to free his
descendants; but this freeing instead insures that he
will have no descendants. It seems that we cannot separate man's passions and desires from the arena in
which they are played out. To love is a glorious thing,
but the very nature of love involves another person
and one cannot love without compromise and negogiation, which are governed or at least overseen by the
society of man. Isaac frees himself from love and
responsibility; he becomes "father to no one and uncle
to half the county" (p.286).
Who is Isaac McCaslin? Is h e a visionary or a
failure? It is through his eyes that the reader experiences both the wilderness and the bear. Both fragile-in
that they are mortal-yet their presence is anything but.
They reduce man to weakness and fragility, but also
incite him to wonder and awe. They are not gods, not
even in the Olympian sense, but huge, sentient beings
who make man aware of the bigness of creation whose
origins or causes are unknown. Their brooding inattentiveness or furious grasping of freedom leads man
to contemplation not just of themselves but of the
drama of which they are a part. It is Isaac who sees

that they are doomed, not just because they are mortal
but because there seems to be a higher, remote and
mysterious plan in which man's role is so miniscule he
seems almost a spectator. It is Isaac who also sees their
sublimity and grandeur, and who brings them to life
for us, so that we can be awed by them as well.
If, as he says, he is "an Isaac born into a later
life than Abraham's and repudiating immolation:
fatherless and therefore safe declining the altar"
(p.270), then why does he flee? Does the sacrifice
entail entering into society, fathering children to carry
on his name, and teaching them how to respect and
love the wilderness and the life it contains? In order to
save the wilderness must he enter into the mazed complexity of the human heart, where his ideals and
beliefs may become muddled, confused, or bent? Or is
he analogous to John Brown, that one silence among
the moiling and yapping of humanity (p.272), that
defiance of society's contradiction, that causes God to
turn his face back to the South? Because, as in "Delta
Autumn" (p.337), he is content to see the wilderness
die with him, is he instead similar to Uncle Hubert,
who bestows a legacy to the next generation yet
bankrupts it within his own lifetime?
For we see the fullness of Isaac's youth, his
love affair with the wilderness and his message of
hope to the oppressed blacks, yet we also see him in
"Delta Autumn," where the granddaughter of James
Beauchamp (also his distant cousin) asks him, "Old
man, have you lived so long and forgotten so much
that you don't remember anything you ever knew or
heard or even felt about love?" (p.346 ). He cannot recognize love any longer. She also accuses Isaac of spoiling the Edmondses by giving them the farm that they
are not entitled to.
Isaac possesses the same type of insight which
John Brown possessed. However, John Brown's decision
spurred him to an action: an attempt to subvert society. Isaac's decision, while itself an act, leads him to
inaction, at least within society. He is ignored by society, and ignores it in turn. He believes he will find
peace in his decision, because he will not have the
responsibilities that society will place upon him as a
prominent landowner, and which will inevitably corrupt him. However, his decision insures that the
McCaslin curse will live on at the (now) Edmonds
plantation. Even with his repudiation, he still must
bequeath the feeble monetary salve which cannot
bandage the gaping would of McCaslin rapaciousness.
He is still beholden to society and its evils, regardless

of his rejection of it. Since he has rejected society, and
yet has not removed himself completely from it, must
we see him as a failure? For his repudiation has also
guaranteed that he will have no son, and thus no one
to mark as Sam did him. Does he thus appear to be
like Uncle Hubert, who bankrupted his own legacy?
The answer is no. We owe much to Isaac for his refusal
to be "tainted" by the modern world. His love for the
wilderness and the life within it are important not
only because they are values held in poor esteem today,
but also because his spiritual understanding of them
challenges the self-absorbed modern man to experience
and acknowledge the being outside of himself Isaac's
failure to enact a unity between the wilderness and the
modern, profit-driven world is tragic but understandable, because this schism still exists today. Although
one cannot ever truly escape society, it serves to define
the nature of the conflict as it did with Lucas
Beauchamp and Sam Fathers. His failure to completely
remove himself from society serves to remind us how
important it is, and Isaac's purity in the face of it
reveals to us how decrepit and in need of reform it has
become. The wilderness will die with him because he
was the only one pure enough to truly see it as it is.
The lack of such a purity, both in the now extinct
wilderness, and in ourselves, will make our own search
for truth through the labyrinthine passions of our
heart that much more difficult. He has not bankrupted the legacy, for we are the children who, by reading
about him, have been marked with his heritage. +
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Freedom and Limitation:
The Understanding in Kant's Critique of Pure Reason
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have only one experience, the elements of which
can always be compared to each other according to
certain fundamental relations. Immanuel Kant uses
this simple reflection to bind together his philosophy
of the powers and limitations of human understanding in his Critique ef Pure Reason. This, according to
Kant, allows us to steer through the dangerous strait
between skepticism, the view that reason can know
nothing with certainty, and fanaticism, the opposing
view that reason has no limits (BI28). Just how such a
reflection does this is explained in the Transcendental
Deduction. In this section, Kant attempts to prove
that all incoming sensible intuition must always be
subject to the conditions of one possible experience.
These conditions have an intimate connection to the
categories, a priori concepts that Kant discovers
through reflection upon the table of logical judgments.1 A reasonable first reading of this very difficult
section might lead to the following summary: all
appearances are shaped by original apperception into
harmony with the categories, otherwise they would not
form parts of one unified experience. Thus the categories seem to be innate predispositions that determine the one and only way that we can view the world.
Such a view seems consonant with Kant's
description of the transcendental unity of apperception as a condition for all cognition as well as his
description of the categories as concepts which correspond to the forms of thought. But a few important
passages reveal that Kant views the categories in a different way. At the end of the first edition's transcendental deduction he remarks, "If we got the concepts
[the categories J from ourselves, then they w~uld lack
objective validity" (A I 29 ).2 This statement ts not
obviously in conflict with the view of categories as
predispositions. Kant has already ruled out any knowledge of the things-in-themselves. Thus, "objective
validity" certainly does not refer to those things. We
might indeed believe that "objective validity" is only
our view of the unity of experience caused by the categories as predispositions. However, he decided in the
second edition's version of the Deduction to expand

the statement considerably. After ruling out the possibility of abstracting the categories from experience, he
restates his view, "that the categories contain the bases,
on the part of the understanding, of the possibility of
all experience as such" (BI 6 7). But then he proposes
and rejects a third possible view as a "middle course"
between the above two views. This "middle course"
holds that:
[T]he categories are neither se]f-thought a priori first
principles of our cognition, nor again are drawn
from experience, but are subjective predispositions for thinking that are implanted in us and
given to us simultaneously with our existence.
(BI67)
Kant dismisses this view, which is exactly the one most
easily carried away from the Deduction, by noting that
the "categories would in that case lack the necessity
which belongs essentially to the concept of them."
(BI 68) In the case of causality:
I could then not say that the effect is connected
with the cause in the object (i.e., connected
with it necessarily), but could say only that I
am so equipped that I cannot think this presentation otherwise than as thus connected. And
this is just what the skeptic most longs to hear.
(BI68)
Clearly, we now have a problem. Kant consistently
portrays the unity of apperception as a conditio_n of
possible experience. In that case, the understandmg
seems passive, merely processing the data in unalte~able
forms of thought prescribed by original appercept1on.
But in this passage, Kant clearly rejects as unsatisfactory
the view that the categories are any sort of passive or
subjective predispositions. Instead, they are "selfthought" first principles, which seem to allow the
understanding a more active role in relation to appearances. Precisely how are the categories and the transcendental unity related in order to condition incoming

appearances while retaining an active understanding?
What does it mean for the categories to be "selfthought" and still have a claim to objective validity? And
what is the philosophical importance of the distinction
that Kant hopes to draw?

What, then, do we mean when we talk about
an object corresponding to, and hence also
distinct from, cognition? We can easily see that
this object must be thought only as something
as such = x. For, after all, outside our cognition we have nothing that we could contrast
with this cognition as something corresponding to it.
(AI04-I05)

I. The Transcendental Object = x
If we are to reject characterizing the categories
as subjective and passive predispositions, then we must
immediately rule out looking solely to the understanding for their source. But where dse can we look if we
wish to retain their character as concepts which are
somehow related to the forms of judgment? One of
Kant's earliest definitions of the categories points to a
solution. He says that the categories "are concepts of
an object as such whereby the object's intuition is
regarded as determined in terms of one of the logical junctions in judging" (A95). Just how to read "an object as
such" is unclear. If we were to take it as "any object"
(that is, one of a number of potential objects), then
the sentence would mean that the intuition of the particular object presented to me is unified according to
certain preset functions (forms of thought) expressed
by the categories. Unfortunately, this is the same as
saying that the categories are predispositions. Instead,
what if "an object as such" refers not to one of many
objects, but instead to one original object, like a blueprint which specifies what any possible object must
look like? An "object as such" would then be like a
"form of an object."
Such a reading solves some problems while
introducing others. If the categories are concepts of
some original object that the understanding has access
to, then we have succeeded in moving the source of
the categories outside of the understanding, provided
that this object is in some way distinct from the
understanding. According to this view, the categories
would be derived from the understanding's analysis of
an original object logically prior to any specific object
of experience. But what role would such an object play
in the process of synthesizing the manifold of intuition? And how would the understanding's access to
one original object be practically different than a subjective predisposition?
To answer these questions, we must turn to the
Transcendental Deduction, and particularly to Kant's discussion of the "synthesis of recognition in the concept"
(AI03-I IO). He remarks there that we should clarify
what we mean by an "object of presentations," asking.

Kant again uses a peculiar locution, "something as
such," similar to the "object as such" at A95. Here, he
uses the phrase to denote an object removed as far as
possible from our cognitions. This "something as such
x" (I will henceforth call it the general object, to
avoid confusion with other specific Kantian terms) is
not a thing-in-itself A thing-in-itself is never an
object of our understanding, since it must be
perceived before it reaches the understanding. Once it
has been perceived, it is an appearance, by definition
no longer the thing-in-itself. With the general "x,"
however, we are dealing with an object present to the
undtrstanding prior to any actual experience. Thus, it "corresponds to" cognition because all objects require cognition. However, it remains "distinct from" cognition
because it is not an object given in cognition. An
object given by cognition would be a specific concept,
such as unity or causality. Hence, this general object
seems to occupy some sort of limbo between an
actual, specific concept and the thing-in-itself which is
never present to the understanding. It is still unclear,
however, how such a strange thing would fit into the
actual process of cognition that Kant has described.

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II. Synthesis and Cognition
To approach this problem, we should briefly
recall Kant's discussion of synthesis in general, introduced just before the categories at A77-80. There, he
divides the synthesis of the manifold, "cognition," into
three necessary components: intuition, imagination,
and unification (A79). Any cognition must begin by
receiving some sensible intuition, be it empirical sensation or an a priori intuition of space or time. But a
mere intuition is never used by the understanding.
Instead, it is taken up by the imagination, which acts
as an intermediary. This mediation by the imagination
creates several problems of its own. Most significantly,
it appears that imagination plays its own role in shaping cognition alongside that of the general object.
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conflict, in the process of cognition. But, these problems can be solved only after we understand the role
of the general object. So, let us pass by for the
moment the difficulties involved with the imagination
and try to explain as well as possible how the general
object acts in the unification of a sensible manifold.
Assuming, then, that the imagination has produced an image for the understanding, the rem~ining
step is the unification of the produced manifold. This
unification is later explained as dependent on the
schemata, which are rules for assembling the manifold
in a certain way. The role of the schemata is most easily understood in the context of the unification by
empirical concepts, as opposed to the unification by
the categories, which rely on the more subtle transcendental schemata. In this simpler case, Kant explains
how the schemata provide the concept with true universality as follows:
Even less is an object of experience or an
image thereof ever adequate to the empirical
concept; rather, that concept always refers
directly to the schema of imagination, this
schema being a rule for determining our
intuition in accordance with such and such
a general concept.
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explain the transcendental schemata (that is, the ones
corresponding to the categories) in a similar way.
Thus, we may safely say, in general, that the understanding unifies the manifold presented to it by applying a certain rule. This rule, in turn, points to a corresponding concept.
A concrete example may help to illustrate this
view of cognition. Let us choose an empirical concept
as an example, since its components do not involve the
complexities of the transcendental schemata.
Accordingly, let us suppose that we have the concept
of "dog," which is defined by a schema that assembles,
in a determinate way, the three elements "fur," "barks,"
and "four-legs." The process of cognition would then
run as follows. First, sensibility receives intuitions.
These intuitions have not yet been presented to the
understanding, and thus I am not consciously aware of
them. Then, the' imagination takes up these intuitions
and presents them to the understanding as the elements "fiur," "b arks," an d "£
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understanding finds that the schema corresponding to
"dog" applies to the given arrangement of elements. In

other words, the particular elements, and their relations to one another, actually present are the same as
the elements af,ld relations that the understanding finds
in the schema corresponding to "dog." Accordingly,
the given appearance is unified and cognized as "dog."
With this simplified example in mind, we are
prepared for Kant's view of the general object in cognition. In a discussion about cognizing a triangle, he
remarks that:
[W]hen we think of a triangle as an object, we
do so by being conscious of the assembly of
three straight lines according to a rule whereby
such an intuition can always be exhibited. Now
this unity ef the rule determines all that is mani-.
fold, and limits it to conditions that make possible the unity of apperception. And the concept of this unity is the presentation of the
object = x, i.e., the object that I think through
the mentioned predicates of a triangle.
(AIOS-106)
The first sentence here sounds almost exactly like the
unification in synthesis outlined above, except that he
has not yet introduced the technical term "schema" for
the determining rule. How, then, does the rule, or
schema, relate to the general object?
The second sentence of the passage describes
the effect of the "unity of the rule:' What does Kant
mean by saying that the schema is unified? I believe, in
light of the adjective "this," that the "unity" refers
back to the previous sentence's assertion that, according to this rule, such an intuition could always be
exhibited. A concept, by its very nature, is universal. It
refers, through a schema, to one thing in various circumstances. "Such an intuition" can be assembled in
the same way regardless of the situation. If it could
not, then it would not be "one such" intuition but several. One concept would refer to two essentially different things, which would be absurd. The next part of
the sentence explains the effect of a schema that links
one concept to one object in different situations. Kant
states that the unity of the rule "determines all that is
manifold." That is, the rule places several disparate
appearances into a determined, fixed order with certain definite relationships present to our mind. In the
dog example, the rule would change three unconnected
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ements connected in a system ("barks + four-legs +
fur"). But at this point, the elements, though related,

are not considered as one thing. The fmal part of the
sentence, "[The unity of the rule J limits [all that is
manifold] to conditions that make possible the unity
of apperception," brings back the question of the
imagination's production of rule-governedness. Let us
pass it by for the moment, for only with hindsight can
we understand how the rule makes possible the unity
of apperception while still not inhibiting the active
role of the understanding.
Kant's last sentence in the quotation above
(AIOS-106) gives us the key to understanding the role
of the general object in cognition. Here, Kant introduces another new phrase, "the concept of the unity."
By this I believe him to mean the concept that corresponds to the elements connected by the rule, e.g. the
"dog" that corresponds to the "barks + four-legs +
fur." How, then, is "dog" a "presentation of the object
= x," that is, the general object? Now, we will soon see
that "dog," being empirical, is not simply a presentation of the general object. In fact, only the categories
are direct determinations of "x," while "dog" would
be a composite of those fundamental categorial determinations. But let us follow the dog for the sake of
simplicity. To resume, Kant says that the concept of
the unity is thought "through the mentioned predicates." I take this to mean that some of the characteristics present in the indeterminate object = x are
determined and presented to the understanding by the
application of ~he rule to the given appearances. A
specific concept, then, is a determination of the general object= x. Kant will later reaffirm the presence of
the general object in all cognition, saying that:
The pure concept of this transcendental
object (which object is actually always the
same, = x, in all our cognitions) is what is
able to provide all our empirical concepts in
general with reference to an object, i.e., with
objective reality."
( AI09-I IO)
Thus, the general object = x is always present in cognition and is determined (that is, made into a specific
concept) by the understanding's application of a
schema to the appearances.
If we read between the lines here, we can see
that the notion of a general object becoming a specific
one is implied by Kant's description of the object as
"= x." The process of synthesis is, in many ways, analogous to the process of solving an algebraic equation.
The numbers given in an equation, e.g. "3 + 2

sin30°," correspond to the manifold ,of intuition presented to the understanding. If we add "= x" to the
end of "3 + 2 sin30°," then we say that the left side is
equal to "x:' This "x," by itself equal to any possible
number, is limited to only one number when it is
placed in the equation. This number can be found by
calculating the values on the left side and finding their
relation to one another. Then, of course, the right side
is no longer "=x"; instead, it is equal to "4." The general "x" has been reduced to the specific number in a
way similar to the determination of the general object
= x in all cognition of objects.
This analogy, taken together with Kant's discussion of the categories as "concepts of an object as
such" (quoted above, from A95), takes us a great distance towards solving our original problem: explaining
how the categories are not simply predispositions of
the understanding. The categories are not characteristics of the understanding, but are rather the concepts
that the understanding fmds presented to it by the
general object = x. Given a set of appearances "equal"
to, i.e. organized by, the general object "x," and given
the characteristics, the categories, that the understanding discovers a priori in that object, the understanding
can solve the equation, determining the manifold in a
certain manner, expressed by the schema. But there
seems to be a significant departure from the algebraic
analogy when the origin of the categories is considered. In an algebraic equation, we say that we solve for
x "in terms of" the other elements of the equation.
All of the order and relation in the equation comes
from the side of the equation with the numbers and
relations. This is similar to cognition insofar as we
determine one specific concept from the presented
manifold. But for a priori cognitions, the manifold can
only be determined in twelve ways (one for each category). Since these categories are the concepts of the .
general object, it seems that the unknown "x" is exerting some influence on the given manifold, unlike the
algebraic example, where the "x" is entirely determined
by the other side of the equation. But then do both
sides of the "equation" of cognition play a significant
part in organizing the sensible manifold. That is, is
there only one ordering of the manifold, by the
unknown "x"? Or is the manifold already arranged
when it is presented and then rearranged?
These questions will be examined shortly
when we look at the imagination, but in either case we
now have a sense of what Kant means when he says
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general object = x, and thus the categories as. t~at
object's characteristics, are present in all cogmtton, the
understanding is not, in its nature, limited to them. If
a different general object "= y," utterly unlike our
familiar "x," were presented to the understanding, then
the understanding could find new categories that
would apply to any appearances set equal to that "y."
We shall soon see that the fact that we have only one
experience shows that we have only one general object,
with the familiar categories derived in the
Metaphysical Deduction. But this singular experience
of the understanding does not detract from its nature
as an active, unlimited power of the mind. Once we
have traced the source of the categories to the general
object = x, however, we may then ask where that
object comes from, and what it really means to say
that the categories are objectively valid. These questions bring us at last to apperception and imagination.

ID. Apperception and Imagination

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In our discussion of the object= x, we have
heard almost nothing of one of Kant's central terms:
apperception. If the act of cognition is in so~e way
like solving an equation, how does appercept10n affect
it? And from where does that apperception's transcendental unity arise?
It will be important first to clear up exactly
what sort of thing apperception is. On one hand,
Kant's connection of it to self-consciousness might
make it sound something like an "ego." But its relation
to the categories makes it sound more like a thought
process. Then again, its name might suggest that it is a
power or capacity like perception.Two of Kant's statements help to clarify this confusion. He says first that
"in original apperception everything must nec~ssaril~
conform to the conditions of the thoroughgomg umty
of self-consciousness" (AI I2). Shortly afterwards, he
remarks that "nothing can enter cognition without
doing so by means of this original apperception"
(AI 13-114). The use of the preposition "in" and
especially the prepositional phrase "by means of"
point to the last of the above alterna~ives: that apperception is a power or capacity. We might say that
things are given to the understanding "through" apperception in the same way we speak of an intuition passing "through" sensibility.
Furthermore, the second sentence quoted
above leads to the defmition of apperception in terms
of the algebraic analogy to cognition. It states that all

things must enter cognitioh through apperception. But
what does it mean to enter cognition but to set the
entering appearances equal to the general object = x?
Thus, we can say, in terms of our analogy, that apperception is the power of applying
x" to a given set of appearances. Though this power is a necessary component ?f
the human mind, it is distinct from the understanding,
which is the power of fmding rules (AI26-I27). The
power of this definition is that it immediately reveals
the source both of the categories and the transcendental unity of apperception. The categories are the characteristics of the object = x, present to the understanding prior to all cognition. The transcendental
unity of apperception is the unity produced by the
constancy of this object in all cognitions. Sinc.e the
object is constant, the categories must apply to all p.ossible cognition, that is, all possible experience. And if
all possible experience can be cognized accord~g to
the same concepts, that experience is unified. Fmally,
this definition of apperception clarifies Kant's distinction between objectivity and subjectivity. The categories are objectively valid because they stem from
apperception, which is a power outside the unde~stand­
ing. But because the human mind deals only with .
appearances, the categories can never have ~ s~urce m
the thing-in-itself. The most that can be said is that
they originate in apperception, ~hich is no.t part of
our active power of understandmg. T~e ev~dence ~or
such a view and its philosophical ramificat10ns will be
taken up shortly.
.
The last of Kant's terms that plays an tmportant role in ordering cognitions is imagination. He
often ascribes to it an active power to synthesize the
manifold. For example, he states that:

a=

[P]erceptions need to be given a combination
that in sense itself they cannot have. Hence
there is in us an active power to synthesize this
manifold. This power we call imagination; and
the act that it performs directly on perception
(AI20-I2I)
I call apprehension.

If it is simply true that the imagination arranges intuitions before the understanding unifies them, then two
distinct arrangements are taking place, one by the
.
imagination and one by the general object. Such a pair
of arrangements would be troubling. How would the
two work together? Would the ~ategories be ~f~ected?
And even if that could be explamed, wouldn t it seem
like a needlessly complicated theory?

Such questions, reasonable as they seem, rest
upon a false separation of the arrangement by the
imagination and the application of the general object
through apperception. The two are, in fact, the same
act. The basic function of the imagination "is to bring
the manifold of intuition to an . image; hence it must
beforehand take the impressions up into its activity,
i.e., apprehend them" (AI2I). To change intuitions
into an image is to present them to the understanding.
But the understanding only deals with images to be
cognized into an object. This cognition, moreover, is
the process of applying "= x" to appearances. It is
thus absurd to say that the imagination's presentation
is truly separable from the application of the general
object, because such a presentation would then somehow be present to the understanding even though it
was not an object of cognition. I believe that Kant
refers to this yoking of imagination and apperception
when he states that:
The mind could not possibly think its own
identity... if it did not have present to it the
identity of its act-the act that subjects all
synthesis of apprehension ... to a transcendental unity, and thereby first makes possible
the coherence of those presentations according to a priori rules.
(AI08-I09)
The identity of the mind's act must refer to the single
general object = x that is present in, and is the essential act of, all cognition. This identity subjects the synthesis of apprehension (that is, the synthesis and
arrangement of the manifold by the imagination) to a
coherence of rules. Hence, while the imagination and
apperception are two subtly different powers, they are
bound within a single act, the imagination's presentation of the manifold to the understanding through the
"equation" of that manifold with the general object
presented by apperception.

IY. Conclusion
This description of the categories as characteristics of "general object = x" gives us the beginning
of a path through the Transcendental Deduction. We
have shown that Kant believes the categories to be
concepts of the general object, the presentation of
which is the power of apperception and the beginning
of cognition. This power is distinct from the
understanding. Because of this, we know that the

understanding is not limited in its nature and that the
categories are not subjective predispositions. Instead,
they are "self-thought" concepts that the understanding fmds in the general object prior to all cognition.
But for all this, questions still remain. What evidence
does Kant have for considering apperception to be distinct from the understanding? And what importance
could such a distinction possibly have for a system of
philosophy?
Kant gives us no clear answer for these questions, but we can draw some inferences from the remarks
that end the Deduction in the second edition. He states
that, if the categories were subjective predispositions:
[T]hen all our insight, achieved through the
supposed objective validity of our judgments,
is nothing but sheer illusion; and there would
also be no lack of people who would not concede this subjective necessity (which must be
felt) in themselves. At the very least one could
not quarrel with anyone about something that
rests merely on the way in which his self as
subject is organized.
(B168-I69)
The last sentence, while holding the false hypothesis
that the categories are part of the understanding,
reveals Kant's view that it is the understanding that we
properly call the "self." Since he is in fact rejecting the
attribution of the categories to the understanding, i.e.
the particular individual, should we infer that he
believes that the origin of the categories in apperception makes them common to all human beings? It
seems impossible to fmd any direct, conclusive evidence for such a view. But if we accept the theory we
have sketched out from the Deduction, a cer ain plausibility is revealed. Let us take for granted, then, that
there is a general object = x which is the same in all
cognition. This object would have, as explained above,
an active power to arrange the manifold of intuition.
But it would also be static, insofar as the object presented is always the same. Now, it seems likely that
such a constant power would never originate in the
understanding, which is both active and varied, in that
the understanding finds different rules to
govern different appearances that are presented to it.
Instead, we might speculate that apperception has a
physical source. After all, we expect physical bodies to
behave in constant, predictable ways just as we believe
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ical structure of the thinking mind. This connection
would make Kant's philosophy compatible with the
ever-mounting scientific evidence for an understanding
of thought as a chemical or biological process. In
addition, this view gives some suggestion that the categories are common to all human beings, since we
believe that we are essentially physically identical to
other men. Thus, Kant's doctrine is both consistent
with our knowledge of the physical world and suggestive of common modes of thought among mankind.
Implications other than that are more difficult
to sketch out. From a practical, individual perspective I
can see no difference between a "subjective" predisposition and the constancy of the general object. In
either case, the understanding is forced to cognize an
object in a way which is not at all determined by the
thing-in-itself. But Kant has concerns apart from questions of practical objective validity. By keeping the
source of the categories outside of the understanding,
Kant is keeping in mind what he considers the three
necessary problems in philosophy: God, freedom, and
immortality (Bxxx ), all of which bear on moral questions. Speaking of freedom and morality, he states:
All I need for morality is that freedom does
not contradict itself and hence can at least be
thought ..... [AJll I need is that freedom in
my act puts no obstacle whatever in the way
of the natural mechanism that governs the
same act.
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The categories as predispositions of the understanding
would be just this sort of obstacle. For how could any
sort of freedom (empirical or transcendental) be
maintained if the understanding, by its very nature,
were confined to twelve distinct forms of thought and
no more? The importance of this freedom is amplified
when we consider with it the above suggestion that
apperception is the same for all men. If man's mind is
essentially free, and his apperception identical to that
of others, we have the foundation for a rational ethics
that applies to all men. Such an ethics might well be
different than previous systems, since Kant accepts
that all phenomena, including actions,
are governed by cause and effect in the empirical
world. But it is a beginning nonetheless. The separation of understanding and apperception has similar
ramifications for religious faith and immortality. Kant
certainly acknowledges the possibility of faith, even if,
according to the Transcendental Dialectic, such faith

cannot be obtained rationally. But by separating apperception from the understanding (that is, the self),
Kant preserves the possibility of a truly transcendent
afterlife. If my self, and not my apperception, lives on
after death, then the afterlife would be completely
beyond any earthly experience. Thus, Kant's doctrine
saves him from a possible contradiction between his
philosophy and personal faith.
All of these considerations must have been at
work in Kant's mind as he formulated his doctrine in
the Transcendental Deduction. Though certainly subtle
and difficult, the argument in the D eduction fulfills his
goal of discovering both the limitations and the
strengths of human understanding. Although, the
understanding can never reach the things-in-themselves,
it can at least realize the possibility of both a rational
ethics and a transcendent immortality. Perhaps this lack
of an extreme view causes some to label Kant as
tedious. But he himself believes his work to be an exciting challenge, envisioning it as a safe passage between
the "dangerous cliffs" of skepticism and fanaticism.
And if we are to be impressed by Odysseus' passage
between Scylla and Charybdis, or the achievement of
Aristotle's virtuous mean between vices, we must indeed
be impressed by both the depth and moderation of
Kant's thought in the Critique ef Pure Reason. +
Notes:
I. I do not treat here the important question of how
the categores as concepts relate to judgment as form. Such a
topic would be more suitable for an examination of the
Metaphysical Deduction.
2. All quotations are taken from Werner Pluhar's
translation of the Critique (Hackett Publishing,
I 996). All emphasis in quotations is Kant's. I have
omitted the translator's braketing for simplicity. Thus,
any bracketed insertions in quotations are my own.
3. We must remember that here, as elsewhere, Kant is
speaking of logical, and not temporal, priority. I do
not believe he would maintain that we are conscious of
a general object before any specific object has been
cognized. For a similar statement related to the forms
of sensibility, se B 349.

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JUNIOR

Sympathy

EssAY PRIZE,,

and Selfishness in George Eliot's Middlemarcb
Deborah Carlos, A99

n my essay this year I would like to examine one of
the major themes in George Eliot's novel
Middlemarch, the relationship between compassion
for others and self-interest, and the way in which they
each influence human actions and beliefs. Eliot illustrates the complex relation between the two, both
within one person and between individuals, primarily
through her depiction of two unhappy marriages. The
unions of Dorothea Brooke and Edward Casaubon,
and Tertius Lydgate and Rosamond Viney, are defined
by the conflict of expectations that each has of the
married state. These different expectations are the
products of selfish inclinations, in which. the purpose
of marriage is to achieve some other social or professional end, in which the spouse does not have any real
· interest. (This is very different from the purpose that
marriage has for the Garths and their daughter Mary,
to live and raise a family with a partner worthy of love
and respect, who returns such feelings.) Each makes
the mistake of not looking for the real character of
the future partner during courtship, but instead projects onto the person the ideal that is in his or her own
mind. Marital strife soon disabuses them of these
ideals, and the characters begin manifesting either
compassionate or selfish behavior towards each other.
Dorothea and Lydgate first repress and then sacrifice
any interests of their own that displease their spouses,
while Casaubon and Rosamond seek ways to assert
themselves even more, without much consideration for
the pain they cause.
The idea of ardency is closely connected to
Eliot's portrait of the relationship between compassion
and selfishness, because both Dorothea and Lydgate
have ardent natures, while Casaubon and Rosamond do
not. Eliot defines ardency in the Prelude, in which she
describes another ardent nature, Saint Theresa of Avila,
the sixteenth century Spanish nun who reformed the
Carmelite religious order. Theresa is portrayed as a
passionate, idealistic woman with two intimat~ly related
central desires: to accomplish a deed of clear unportance in the world, and to devote herself to an object
worthy of all the serious thought and intense emotion
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possibility of self-transcendence. The latter desire is
expressed at the end of the first paragr~ph of .the book:
"some illimitable satisfaction, some object which would
never justify weariness, which would reconcile selfdespair with the rapturous consciousness of life beyond
self" ( vii).1 The former is made explicit a few. sentences
later, where Eliot specifies "a constant unfoldmg of
far-resonant action" as the defming characteristic of an
"epic" life, which a nature such as Theresa's "demanded". Eliot goes on to say that Theresa fulfilled her
desires within the framework of the Catholic Church,
which provided a "coherent social faith and order
which could perform the function of knowledge for
the ardently willing soul" (viii). It is interesting that
Eliot names the social conditions in which Theresa
lived, dominated by the Church, as the source of the
knowledge, in the form of religious faith, that was
essential to her achievements, both in spirit and in
action. Religion seems to be the only thing Eliot thinks
can provide an endlessly fulfilling goal, with ideas ge~­
eral enough to be considered all embracing and .specific
enough to guide one's own actions in everyd.ay life.' !he
assurance of how actions can be matched with religious
or moral beliefs, and of the positive consequences of
those actions, is especially secure if one lives within a
religious community, and not in the outside world.
This social "medium", in which a woman like Theresa
or Antigone could perform "ardent deeds" ( 8 ~ I) i~
lacking in the modern world, for Eliot early V~cto~ian
England. In this society, the Anglican Church is either
itself seen as an avenue for worldly success (by the
money-minded manufacturer Mr. Viney) or as .a s~urce
of justification for worldly success (by the. puntan.ic~l
banker Mr. Bulstrode). This early emphasis on rehg10n
in Eliot's discussion of ardency makes her later use of
the word for Lydgate's enthusiasm for medic~e s~em.
odd, but it is still appropriate, since he seeks m his science "the most direct alliance between intellectual conquest and the social good" (143) and is "ambitious of
a wider effect. .. fired with the possibility that he
might... make a link in the chain of discovery" ( 145).
However Lydgate is called ardent only in reference to
his work, and Eliot slyly remarks that "his intellectual

ardour did not penetrate to his feeling and judgment
about furniture or women" (149).
In both Dorothea and Lydgate, the search for
self-transcendence takes the form of the quest for the
social good, both seeing the need for reform in different areas, with Lydgate obviously focused on medical
practices. This tendency, in addition to the different
role that religion plays for them, is a striking difference between their manifestations of ardency and
Theresa's. Religious principles do not seem to concern
Lydgate at all, while Dorothea is interested in them for
the moral guidance they can provide for her actions.
Eliot gives no indication that Theresa was ever interested in "social good," and the reformation of an
order of nuns is not a mission that would result in
making very many people in the world happier. This
discrepancy is due to an emphasis on different aspects
of Christianity on the part of Dorothea and Theresa,
with Dorothea concerned with helping her neighbors
in this world (i.e., building better cottages for the tenant farmers) and Theresa concerned with people living
up to the moral requirements of a life of devotion.
These two aspects are also contrasted in the different
styles of the two clergymen nominated to be chaplain
of the new hospital, Reverend Tyke and Reverend
Camden Farebrother. Tyke is "methodistical" (183),
strict, austere, and very concerned with the proper
interpretation of religious doctrine, assuming that
morality necessarily attends such concern. Farebrother,
on the other hand, believes that the Church is the
wrong vocation for him, and is very aware of his own
inner conflicts relating to religious teaching, for example, about gambling, which he practices purely for the
money. Since he sees himself as unfit to dispense hardand-fast rules of right conduct, he concentrates on
offering solace and comfort to the suffering, and he is
very well prepared to do this.
Farebrother has the ability, which Dorothea
develops, after a long struggle, to use "vivid sympathetic experience" as "acquired knowledge" (764), an
ability resulting in feelings of non-judgmental compassion for people who are, he realizes, subject to the
same passions and sorrows as he himself is. However,
Farebrother has already paid a large price in personal
happiness in return for this compassionate knowledge.
He tells Lydgate, who has just cast the tie-breaking
vote to give the chaplain's office to Tyke:
The world has been too strong for me, I know
... But then I am not a mighty man ... shall
never be a man of renown. The choice of

Hercules is a pretty fable, but Prodicus makes
it easy work for the hero, as if first resolves
were enough. Another story says that he came
to hold the distaff and at last wore the Nessus
shirt. I suppose one good resolve might keep a
man right if everybody else's resolve helped
(184-5)
him.
Eliot comments: " ... he had not escaped that low
estimate of possibilities which we rather hastily arrive
at as an inference from our own failure". While Eliot
does not explicitly say how Farebrother believes he has
failed, she emphasizes his dislike of Tyke's sponsor
Mr. Bulstrode, and the dogmatic religious hypocrisy
that the banker uses his influence to spread. Perhaps
Farebrother would like to oppose Bulstrode and others
like him, even attempt to reform certain practices of
Anglican Church, as Lydgate would like to reform the
medical profession, but realizes that he does not have
the strength or means to do so.
While Eliot uses Farebrother to say that the
world tends to make martyrs of great-spirited individuals, she also maintains that these great-spirited individuals often contribute to their own suffering. The
Prelude includes the story of Theresa and her brother,
while still children, leaving their home "to go and seek
martyrdom in the country of the Moors" (vii), showing that Theresa eagerly would have tried to accomplish a great act by getting herself murdered if she had
not found less dangerous means. Likewise, Dorothea is
"enamored of intensity and greatness and rash in
embracing whatever seemed to her to have those
aspects; likely to seek martyrdom, to make retractions,
and then to incur martyrdom after all in a quarter
where she had not sought it" (IO). Even Lydgate, with
his well-focused ardency, is not free from such a tendency, as he shows in his admiration of persecuted
physicians from the past, like Vesalius, who was forced
to steal bones to study anatomy and "died rather miserably" ( 443). The very desire for self-transcendence,
the opening up of the mind and emotions to experience things beyond the reach of the self, devalues the
worth of the self, since such desire assumes that the
perspective of a single person is too small for the most
all-encompassing thought or feeling. This is a view
that Eliot supports when she writes: "Will not a tiny
speck very close to our vision blot out the glory of the
world and leave only a margin by which we see the
blot? I know no speck so troublesome as self" ( 407).
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which would lead to seeing beyond the speck of self is
achieved very well simply through self-sacrifice, on a
large or small scale. The tendency towards martyrdom
is just as much a fault in the ardent nature as the tendency never to think of anything other than oneself is
in the selfish nature, since neither leads to the practice .
of much actual good in the world.
It would seem that the desire and capacity for
self-transcendence inherent in the ardent individual
would lend itself to compassion. However, while no
one is born compassionate, it does seem to be a quality that develops earlier and to a greater .extent in some
people than in others.
We are all of us born in moral stupidity,
taking the world as an udder to feed our
supreme selves: Dorothea had early begun to
emerge from that stupidity, but yet it had been
easier to her to imagine how she would devote
herself to Mr. Casaubon and become wise and
strong in his strength and wisdom than to
conceive with that distinctness which is no
longer reflection but feeling-an idea wrought
back to the directness of sense, like the solidity of objects-that he had an equivalent center of self whence the lights and shadows
must always fall with a certain difference.
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But ardency is not required for compassion, even
compassion involving self-sacrifice, as we see, again, in
the character of Farebrother. He willingly gives up his
courtship of Mary Garth when he learns that she and
Fred Viney are in love, certainly a compassionate act,
and a painful sacrifice. His motives are a mixture of
resignation-Mary has told him that she could never
love anyone else like she loves Fred-and genuine
concern for the well being and happiness of both.
Now, he could have tried to put Mary's claim to the
test, and Eliot does hint that, if Mary were to love
another man, it would be Farebrother. Being able to
respect a man's character is essential to Mary's affection, and she already respects Farebrother greatly: she
thinks he is "the cleverest man in her narrow circle"
( 503). This is an estimation that her mother, whom
Mary strongly resembles in personality and taste, also
made of her father Caleb (546), and we know where
that led. But while Farebrother is not passionate or
idealistic enough to be ardent, he has magnanimity
enough to renounce any intention of proposing to

Mary with his dignity and his sense of self intact. A
revealing difference between Farebrother's more
sophisticated compassion for Fred and Mary and
Dorothea and Lydgate's raw pity for their spouses is
in the view taken of the objects of compassion in
each case. The idea of Casaubon and Rosamond as
weak creatures requiring special care seems to be
essential for inspiring compassion in Dorothea and
Lydgate, while Farebrother respects Fred and Mary,
although he worries about Fred's bad habits and lack
of maturity. After Dorothea restrains an especially
fierce outburst of anger, "she felt something like the
thankfulness that might well up in us if we had narrowly escaped hurting a lamed creature" ( 4 I 6 ).
Lydgate thinks, while comforting a tearful Rosamond,
after her meeting with Dorothea, "he had chosen this
fragile creature and had taken the burden of her life
upon his arms. He must walk as he could, carrying
that burden pitifully" (775). Such attitudes would
seem offensive, if Casaubon and Rosamond were not
as pathetic as they are. But the question remains, what
does the presence of such an attitude indicate about
compassion? Are there two different kinds of compassion, one judgmental and one not, or are these just
different stages in the development of sympathetic
feeling in a person?
It seems useful to examine the main characters
more closely in their relations with each other, and a
good place to start is with their expectations before
marriage, since the disappointment on all sides is largely
due to these. For Dorothea, Casaubon's chief attractions
are his extensive classical education, and his status as a
clergyman, which she takes as evidence of profound religious faith and therefore certain knowledge of right
action. She is "a girl whose notions about marriage took
their color entirely fi-om an exalted enthusiasm about
the ends of life" (29). She accepts Casaubon with the
intention of helping him complete his life's work, The
Key to All Mythologies) believing that in return she will
receive the education, in both universal truths and how
to apply them, that she feels is necessary to be sure of
accomplishing anything worthwhile.
"I should learn everything then;' she said to
herself. ..." I should learn to see the truth by
the same light as great men have seen it by.
And then I should know what to do when I
got older: I should see how it was possible to
lead a grand life here-now-in England. I
don't feel sure about doing good in any way

now; everything seems like going on a mission
to a people whose language I don't know.... "

(30-1 ).
This last comment emphasizes the importance of
social context for ardent deeds. The understanding,
appreciation, and practice of art, such as the paintings
and statues that Dorothea sees in Rome, requires a
social context analogous to that required for the
understanding, appreciation and practice of ardency.
Without it, not only do those who are inclined to
make art not know how to go about it, they do not
properly understand their own desire to do it, or the
worth of anything that they might produce. But art
still retains a confused power, even over those who are
ignorant, as is seen in Dorothea:
At first when I enter a room where the walls
are covered with frescoes and rare pictures, I
feel a kind of awe .... I feel myself in the
presence of some higher life than my own.
But when I begin to examine the pictures one
by one, the life goes out of them or else is
something violent and strange to me .... I am
seeing so much at once and not understanding
half of it.... It is painful to be told that anything is very fine and not be able to feel that it
is fine. . .
(203)
Before she learns to use her emotions and experience
as a guide for her actions, there seems to be a parallel
between Dorothea's approach to art and her approach
to life in general. Only the perception of a whole, vast
because it encompasses many individual things, unified
through special knowledge, can move her to great feelings. She may wish to see the grandeur in a single
painting, but she cannot. By the end of the novel,
Dorothea has begun to feel that her own life and her
actions can be fine, despite her lack of sure knowledge
of why it would be so.
Casaubon's motives for selecting Dorothea as a
wife are equally revealing of his character. He had
always intended to marry someday, but never fell in
love with any woman, and apparently was sufficiently
absorbed by his scholarly pursuits not to notice that
many years were passing without a wedding. Dorothea
fits his prudent standards for a suitable wife for a man
like himself: "a blooming young lady-the younger
the better, because more educable and submissive-of
a rank equal to his own, of religious principles, virtu-

ous disposition, and good understanding" (272).
In fact, he believes that he has found even more in
Dorothea, a woman who also displays a strong admiration for his intellectual goals and achievements, and
who can help him conquer the persistent demon of
self-doubt. However, Casaubon falsely believes that
because Dorothea is a woman, she cannot or at least
will not dare form opinions of her own. Since
Casaubon himself will determine her opinion of him,
her admiration will be complete, eternal and unquestioning, and serve as the self-confidence that he sorely
lacks. He has no idea whatsoever that his wife has rigorous expectations of him, that he will be "a modern
Augustine who united the glories of doctor and saint"
(26). Consid~ring the utter lack of connection he feels
between his life, even the living world in general, and
his learning, he is singularly unsuited to teach
Dorothea how to put theoretic principles into action,
even if he had the desire to teach any to her in the
first place: "such capacity of thought and feeling as
had ever been stimulated in him by the general life of
mankind had long shrunk to a sort of dried preparation, a useless embalmment of knowledge" (194). The
very idea of teaching anyone anything would probably
frighten him into paralysis, since it would require
exposing himself to examination and ridicule, the
student-teacher relationship by nature inviting mutual
evaluation by both parties. Casaubon is so "nervously
conscious that he was expected to manifest a powerful
mind" (272) that he refuses to hire a secretary, for fear
that some insolent young man (perhaps reminiscent of
Will Ladislaw) would secretly, or not so secretly, think
his mind not powerful. This fear is certainly the product of a hidden suspicion that he himself has, but will
not admit, and he, "like the rest of us, fel how soothing it would have been to have a companion who
would never find it out" ( 407).
Lydgate shares the opinion that a wife should
always be an uncritical admirer of her husband. Eliot,
with sarcastic exaggeration, says he sees "his superior
knowledge and mental force" as a "shrine to consult on
all occasions" (567). However, he is young, self-assured
and ardent in his profession, and needs no outside
inspiration to urge him on after his goals. He is also so
far from appreciating a woman with ambition and ideas
of her own, that he observes upon first meeting
Dorothea: "She did not look at things from the proper
feminine angle. The society of such women was about
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laughs for bird-notes and blue eyes for a heaven" (95).
Rosamond captures his interest because she fits so perfectly his conception of the ideal woman: beautiful,
charming and sympathetic, someone with "that feminine radiance, that distinctive womanhood which must
be classed with flowers and music, that sort of beauty
which by its very nature was virtuous" (2 62). Indeed
Eliot emphasizes how much Lydgate's attraction to her
comes from this absorption of the popular image of
womanhood, in which beauty means virtue, "the complexities of love and marriage ... being su~jects on
which he felt himself amply informed by literature and
that traditional wisdom which is handed down in the
genial conversation of men" (162). His opinion that
Rosamond will make a perfect wife is only reinforced
by the sense of knowledge of women's nature that he
took from his experience with the French actress
Madame Laure when he was a medical student in Paris.
At that time, he seems to have had an even less complicated conception of the ideal woman: all that Laure
needs to attract him is her automatically virtuous beauty and silence, which he sees as "melancholy radiance"
( 151 ). The course of this ill-starred romance runs parallel to Lydgate's later involvement with Rosamond. He
falls in love from afar with a beautiful woman, indulges
a fantasy of her perfection while having no intention of
ever becoming involved with her, then impetuously
decides to propose under the impression that she suffers from some grief and needs a comforter. (To be fair
to Lydgate in his youth, Laure is married when he first
becomes enamored of her, so pursuing a relationship
would be against his better judgment.) Fortunately for
him, Laure is not interested in remarrying after her
husband's death, and she cures Lydgate's ill-conceived
ideal by confessing that she killed Monsieur Laure
because she was tired of him. Lydgate realizes he has
been a fool, but he is too tender-hearted to become
bitter, and vows in the future to get to know a woman's
character more thoroughly before asking to marry her,
"entertaining no expectations but such as were justified
beforehand" (152). His disappointment is severe when
he realizes that, while Rosamond is beautiful, charming
and sensitive (and not a murderess) she is not sympathetic, towards him or anyone else.
Of the four, Rosamond's motives for marrying
Lydgate seem to be the most shallow, since the benefits
she seeks in marriage are entirely concerned with
appearance. For her, Lydgate's chief attractions are his
aristocratic family, the fact that he's not from
Middlemarch, and his potential to provide money and

material things. However, Rosamond is not merely
mercenary; if she were, she could simply marry the rich
young tradesman Ned Plymdale, but she wants a husband who is wealthy and well-mannered and handsome.
In Rosamond's romance it was not necessary
to imagine much about the inward life of the
hero or of his serious business in the world;
of course he had a profession and was clever
as well as sufficiently handsome, but the
piquant fact about Lydgate was his good birth,
which... presented marriage as a prospect of
.. . getting a little nearer to that celestial
condition on earth in which she would have
nothing to do with vulgar people. . . . ( l 64).
Rosamond, like Casaubon, is chiefly interested in how
she is perceived by others, with some differences that
seem mostly due to her gender. Of course she must
be constantly concerned with her physical appearance,
while the good Reverend can blissfully ignore his moles,
because beauty in a woman is by its nature virtuous, but
is not so in man. Whatever natural inclination to selfconsciousness may be in Rosamond has been greatly
enhanced by her education at Mrs. Lemon's school,
which has trained her to be "adorned with accomplishments for the refined amusement of man" (263). She is
scrupulous about not showing any "unbecoming knowledge" (262), in fact all she needs to know in order to
determine the best way to act is "what her audience
liked" (159). In contrast to Dorothea's simplicity and
lack of concern for appearances in general, Rosamond
has "that controlled self-consciousness of manner
which is the expensive substitute for simplicity" ( 4 l 9)
which requires having "an audience in her own consciousness" (159). One of the reasons she is so fond of
Lydgate is her belief that he will, with the discriminating taste of a man whose uncle is a baronet, appreciate
her far more than any of the provincial young men of
Middlemarch possibly could.
Thus the stage is set for intense marital strife
between the Casaubons and the Lydgates, which
provides a good showcase for the conflict between
self-centeredness and compassion. It is easy to categorize Casaubon and Rosamond as selfish, and Dorothea
and Lydgate as compassionate, if misguided, and 0is
seems to be an accurate appraisal. However, for Ehot,
self-centeredness is quite ordinary, and seems to be the
natural result of being only one person with a single
point-of-view, as every individual is:

Your pier-glass... made to be rubbed by a
housemaid will be minutely and multitudinously scratched in all directions; but place
now against it a lighted candle as a center of
illumination, and lo, the scratches will seem to
arrange themselves in a fine series of concentric circles round that little sun .... These
things are a parable. The scratches are events,
and the candle is the egoism of any person
(258)
now absent. . . .
Rosamond is slyly given as an example of a "person
now absent," but this "parable" does not seem to refer
exclusively to such exceptional egoism as hers. But while
it may be natural to perceive the events that
happen around us, not only directly to us but also to
our neighbors and our business rivals, in relation to
ourselves, it is a limited view that leads to unnecessary
bitterness and grief. The self-centered individual has
scant resources for recovering from misfortune, because
it is a direct blow to the ego, or the sense of the self.
The compassionate individual knows that the concentricity is an illusion, and this knowledge helps protect
the self from being crushed if the candle is blown out
and the scratches are revealed as random and chaotic.
When Will Ladislaw makes Rosamond aware that she
is not the object of love for all the men who know her,
as she is naive and selfish enough to believe, she feels
close to "losing her sense of identity" (755). The illusion that because she is beautiful, amiable, and refined,
she is therefore the proper object of love for any man is
the foundation for her idea of herself. She indulges the
fan tasy that Will is in love with her, or at least as much
in love with her as with Dorothea, until he rudely shatters it. During an early conversation, when Rosamond
asks Will what men think about when with Mrs.
Casaubon, meaning what qualities does she have, Will
responds simply "Herself" (422). Rosamond does not
appreciate this answer.
The exceptional thing about Casaubon and
Rosamond is not that they are selfish, but the degree to
which they are. Their preoccupation with how others
see them, which in Rosamond leads to vanity and in
Casaubon, to crippling self-doubt, is a symptom of
their defmition of themselves solely in terms of outward requirements. Casaubon fails to experience joy in
marriage because "the deeper he went in domesticity,
the more did the sense of acquitting himself and acting
with propriety predominate over any other satisfaction"
(274). Unfortunately for him, Dorothea is not a

woman satisfied by meeting outward requirements, but
inward. Casaubon does not have any feeling for the
importance of these outward requirements apart from
his own reputation, but both he and Rosamond share a
need to be beyond blame in any situation. One gets the
impression that if doing the opposite were not considered proper and expected in their respective cases, and
afforded opportunity for praise, then Rosamond would
feel no qualms about yelling at her husband and
Casaubon would have left Will as an illiterate in some
orphanage. Such reliance upon the judgments of others
for the determination of one's actions and opinions
betrays the absence of a solid, independent sense of
self, although such a lack seems paradoxical in the two
most self-centered characters in the book. Is compassion conducive to such a sense of self? Do Dorothea
and Lydgate display more of such a sense before or
after their marriage trials?
Dorothea and Lydgate both respond initially
to the discovery that their marriages are not what they
had hoped for with self-accusation, frustration, despair
and anger. Indeed, most of the effort that Dorothea
and Lydgate expend in repressing their feelings is
focused on their anger, that most accusatory of emotions, and most offensive to their spouses, who wish to
avoid accusation. Anger is also exceedingly difficult to
reconcile with compassion, especially if it is perceived
to be just anger. After her very first quarrel with
Casaubon during their honeymoon in Rome, Dorothea
is already determined not to let anger guide her
actions, and so she goes to the Vatican museum with
her husband, rather than stay to sulk in her room.
"However just her indignation might be, her ideal was
not to claim justice, but to give tenderness" (I 99).
This argument started when Dorothea asked her
husband when he planned to start actually writing his
book, seeing that he had acquired literally volumes of
notes. The anger she expresses on this occasion is
tempered from the start by a guilty awareness of her
own selfishness in wanting more from Casaubon,
namely the opportunity finally to put her ardency to
use by helping him with his great work: "what she
inwardly called her selfishness" (196). Given her view
of her marriage as a "state of higher duties" ( 42) in
which all obligations take precedence over her personal
desires, she is bound to see any preoccupation with her
own needs as selfish. Her honeymoon is a time of
great pain and confusion for Dorothea, and she fmds
it hard to maintain her previous dedication to the high
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stand and cope with a husband who is not at all
interested in her concerns. "And by a sad contradiction
Dorothea's ideas and resolves seemed like melting ice
floating in the warm flood of which they had been
but another form. She was humiliated to find herself a
mere victim of feeling, as if she could know nothing
except through that medium: all her strength was
scattered in fits of agitation ... "(195). This remark
is very revealing, because it emphasizes the paradox
that Dorothea, a woman of intense emotions, should
distrust her feelings so. Here, her need for principle
and knowledge, which she disassociates from passion,
comes from the very intensity of her emotions, and is
only at base another form of them. This may indeed
be a paradox inherent in any ardent nature, and is
worth further consideration in another essay.
The second quarrel between Dorothea and
Casaubon, after they have returned to Lowick, is even
more interesting. The occasion this time is the arrival
of two letters from Will Ladislaw, who had become
friends with Dorothea in Rome, and in one of them
requests permission to visit. Before she even reads the
correspondence, Casaubon announces his intention of
prohibiting his cousin from coming, and implies that
Dorothea will be upset by this. "This gratuitous
defense of himself against selfish complaint on her
part" (275) when she has not even made any complaint, is too much for her to endure silently.
Dorothea is so angry for several reasons, not all of
which she admits to herself: she would like to see Will,
regardless of whether she is really in love with him at
this point; she would voluntarily hide her pain at not
being allowed to do so to spare Casaubon grief; she
thinks it unfair for him to restrict both herself and
Will from a harmless mutual pleasure; and she is sensitive to the charge of selfishness. It is not so easy for
her to conquer her anger this time, and she allows it to
come through silently in the fierce energy she expends
on copying a Latin text, even after expressing it vocally
to her husband. However, she soon receives a powerful
check to her indignation when Casaubon has an apparently agitation-induced fit of "bodily distress" (277),
and Lydgate diagnoses heart trouble. Dorothea feels
intense remorse and guilt, and becomes aware with
depressing certainty that Casaubon, who never made
progress with his book when he was healthy, will surely never finish it now that there is the additional
obstacle of illness. Casaubon's attack is a turning-point
in the marriage for her, for two reasons. It sets her on
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feel so thoroughly for him, which casts him as a small,
weak creature requiring her protection. It also draws
her ardent energy away from his work, since she is
given a new task by Lydgate, that of guarding her husband's health.
The strife between Dorothea and Casaubon is
paralleled with Lydgate and Rosamond, and there is
even an incident where Lydgate is called upon to
repress his anger and show compassion for Rosamond
when her health is endangered, although she suffers no
lasting ill-effects. Rosamond suffers a miscarriage after
going horseback riding, and this disobedience is especially provoking for Lydgate, since she ignores both his
authority as a husband and his judgment as a doctor,
for the sake of riding in the company of his cousin
Captain Lydgate, who, as the son of a baronet, is ev.en
more charming than the nephew of one. The question
of authority in marriage is complex in Middlemarch,
because of the desire to rule that Eliot attributes to an
ardent nature. While Dorothea does not expect to be
able to command her husband, since everything she
has ever learned about marriage tells her that this is
not proper or possible for a wife, she does expect to
have some influence over him, assuming he will listen
when her arguments are reasonable or her pleas for the
sake of some good. She has "the ardent woman's need
to rule beneficently by making the joy of another
soul" (351). (She even says, in response to Will's
remark that he will never do anything that he knows
she disapproves of, "I shall have a little kingdom then,
where I shall give laws" (357). Lydgate expects to have
full authority over his wife, willing of course to follow
her discretion in matters where she may know better
than he, for example, flower-arranging or (more seriously) tact. But when it comes to asserting his will
after he learns that "Rosamond's quiet, elusive
obstinacy... would not allow any assertion of power
to be final" ( 640), he cannot do it. The question at
stake is whether they will stay in Middlemarch and
ride out the town's disapproval of his involvement with
Bulstrode and the death of Raffles, or leave.
Rosamond has wanted to leave since marrying and
move to a place that will give her more social cachet,
like London. However, Lydgate feels that doing so
would be cowardly, an acceptance of the shame that
ignorant, gossiping neighbors want to put on him for
all kinds of imaginary offenses that bear no resemblance to what actually occurred. But he agrees to
leave, sacrificing his pride and, most damaging of all,
the last remnants of his sense of independence, and

with it all the ardent energy upon which hinged his
hopes of scientific discovery and a truly great medical
career. He does this for Rosamond's sake, because he is
painfully aware of how much her happiness depends,
not on him, how he feels and what he accomplishes, as
he wishes it did, but on the societal benefits she would
receive from marriage to a prosperous, aristocratic
doctor. This sacrifice is perhaps attributable not so
much to his compassion for her in her suffering, but
to the self-doubt as to his capacity for greatness, that
arise from both his role in Raffles' death and his
inability to assert himself with his own wife.
While Dorothea does not sacrifice anything as
definite as professional ambition for Casaubon's sake,
she is prepared to give up something just as vital to
her: her personal freedom. Casaubon's illness is just the
beginning of the final process of "more complete
renunciation, transforming all hard conditions into
duty" ( 196), culminating in her readiness to agree to
the promise he wants from her to carry out his wishes
after his death. During a conversation with Will following Casaubon's attack, she shows how her feelings
toward her husband are changing. When Will disparages Casaubon's abilities, she is "not immediately
indignant, as she had been on a like occasion in Rome
... now when she looked steadily at her husband's
failure, still more at his possible consciousness of
failure, she seemed to be looking along the one track
where duty became tenderness" (355). However, Will
sees another side of Dorothea's growing compassion
for her husband: he has "the unutterable contentment
of perceiving-what Dorothea was hardly conscious
of-that she was traveling into the remoteness of pure
pity and loyalty towards her husband" (357). This
remoteness seems to crystallize during a later incident,
which occurs after Lydgate finally tells Casaubon himself that he suffers from "fatty degeneration of the
heart" (412) and he is struck with the certainty that ·
he will die, sooner rather than later, and will not be
able to complete his life's work. Dorothea, realizing
what has occurred, wishes to comfort him, but is completely and unceremoniously rebuffed. She is used to
his coldness, but his complete lack of response-not
even acknowledging her to tell her to leave him
alone-triggers the most intense anger she has ever
felt, and her sense of his injustice and self-absorption
leaves no room for pity.
[S]he saw her own and her husband's solitude-how they walked apart so that she was

obliged to survey him. If he had drawn her
towards him, she would never have surveyed
him-never have said 'Is he worth living for?'
but would have felt him simply a part of her
own life. Now she said 'It is his fault, not
mine' ... pity was overthrown .... She was
able enough to estimate him-she who waited
on his glances with trembling and shut her
best soul in prison ... that she might be petty
enough to please him. In such a crisis as this,
( 4 I 5)
some women begin to hate.
However, Dorothea is not a woman to let her
anger coalesce into lasting hatred. It is characteristic of
her to want to con&amp;ont her husband openly, although
surprising in this scene, simply because she has learned
to repress herself so well in dealing with him: "she
believed now that she could not see him again without
telling him the truth about her feeling.... He might
wonder and be hurt at her message. It was good that he
should wonder and be hurt." It is uncertain what
Dorothea thinks will come of such confrontation,
whether she imagines that informing Casaubon that he
is selfish will somehow shock him out of being so, or
establish that he has forfeited his authority over her, and
that she will no longer obey him. Maybe she does not
expect to have any influence on him, but simply must
release her emotion, no matter how much pain that
might cause him. However, she loses her chance when
he sequesters himself in the library for the evening, and
she has time to reflect on the grief that Lydgate's news
must cause him. "The energy that would animate a
crime is not more than is wanted to inspire a resolved
submission when the noble habit of the soul reasserts
itself ... It cost her a litany of pictured sorrows and of
silent cries that she might be the mercy for those sorrows, but the resolved submission did come" (416 ).
Pity, as for a weak or wounded being, has become her
predominant feeling for her husband, and seems to leave
her as separated from him as any hatred would have,
while compassion such as Farebrother's both requires
and leads to a sense of communion. Since Casaubon
has shut Dorothea out, and her own nature recoils from
hating him, such pity seems to be her only option.
Both Casaubon and Rosamond dislike being
pitied, although Rosamond does not seem to mind
having someone feel sympathy for her when she is distressed, especially when the sympathizer is a handsome
man, or when such feeling assists her having her own
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instead of admiring her, perfection of womanhood
that she is, offends her. But Casaubon has an intense
hatred of all compassion because he sees any such feeling as criticism. Eliot explains his reaction to
Dorothea's efforts to please him:
To his suspicious interpretation Dorothea's
silence ... was a suppressed rebellion; a remark
from her which he had not in any way anticipated was an assertion of conscious superiority; her gentle answers had an irritating cautiousness in them; and when she acquiesced it
was a self-approved effort of forbearance.
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While it is an effort for Dorothea to be so kind to
him, what is beyond Casaubon's comprehension is that
she is trying to make him happy, not
corning up with excuses to gloat over her superior
magnanimous soul. Again, Eliot claims that this trait
of Casaubon's is but an excessive form of an ordinary
human quality, pride: "Every proud mind knows
something of this experience, and perhaps it is only to
be overcome by a sense of fellowship deep enough to
make all efforts at isolation seem mean and petty
instead of exalting" ( 406). Lydgate also scorns the
compassion of others, as is shown in his rejection of
Mr. Farebrother's offer of help as he descends deeper
and deeper into debt. However, he does not do so out
of fear that Farebrother will think less of him for
needing aid, but because he is used to thinking of
himself as Farebrother's benefactor because of his role
in obtaining the living at Lowick for the clergyman,
and he is reluctant to reverse this relationship. He is
also aware that since Farebrother is not a wealthy man,
he cannot provide any financial assistance, which is
what he feels he really requires, only spiritual assistance, and, at this point, Lydgate is still determined to
bear his problems alone. Even Dorothea is "habitually
controlled by pride on her own account" (189) and is
not easily induced to describe her distress to others.
In Middl.emarch, the exaltation of the self
through isolation leads to a conception of the self
that is indeed exalted, but only within the narrow
confines of an individual perception, and which cannot survive "under the varying experiments of time"
(vii). Casaubon is pitiable because, although he exalts
himself in an attempt to be great and accomplish great
things, he is doomed to failure, because the very act of
exaltation destroys his ability to care about anything

outside of himself Eliot says of him:
It is an uneasy lot at best. .. to be present at
this great spectacle of life and never to be
liberated from a small, hungry, shivering
self-never to be fully possessed by the glory
we behold, never to have our consciousness
rapturously transformed into the vividness of
a thought, the ardour of a passion, the energy
of an action, but always to be scholarly and
uninspired, ambitious and timid, scrupulous
and dimsighted.
(274)

makes in her marriage and from her later experience
with Will and Rosamond. One is to trust that her own
emotions and past experiences are sufficient to guide
her actions towards the good in her very non-epic life,
and the other is to focus her compassionate impulses.
During her honeymoon, Dorothea tells Will that "It
spoils my enjoyment of anything when I am made to
think that most people are shut out from it" (216),
and Will calls this a "fanaticism of sympathy". Eliot
would seem to agree:

If we had a keen vision and feeling of all
Rosamond, for all her inflexibility, does not escape
with her egoism intact: she has "her dream-world in
which she had been easily confident of herself and. critical of others" irreparably damaged. She continues to
act as though she still lived inside it, because she lacks
the understanding, energy and courage to change.
However, she manages what Casaubon never could, to
accept Dorothea's compassion gratefully, without
resentment or fear. She always thinks well of Dorothea,
despite the fact that Lydgate often compares her unfavorably to Mrs. Ladislaw, an offense that Rosamond
would not have born without resentment before.
It is difficult to compare the fates of
Dorothea and Lydgate, because Casaubon dies before
she can give him her promise to let the rest of her life
be determined by his wishes posthumously. And it is
certainly a narrow escape. But Lydgate never seems to
advance beyond the stage where he sees himself as
superior to the people he must show compassion
towards-whether his patients or his wife-and the
consideration that this is so because of lack of opportunity does not change the fact. The last words we
hear from him in the Finale are bitter and show that
his relationship with Rosamond has not changed over
the years: he calls his wife his basil plant, because
"basil was a plant which had flourished wonderfully
on a murdered man's brains" (808). Bitterness is often
accompanied by a feeling of inherent superiority,
although with the recognition that such superiority has
been put to no good use, usually through the fault of
someone else. But Dorothea, like Farebrother, comes
to see that she is not better than the people for whom
she feels compassion are. Her ardent nature, her desire
for knowledge and noble deeds, does not exempt her
from the frailties and accidents that befall all human
beings, and it sometimes even makes it more difficult
for her to cope with them. However, Dorothea has
gained two important insights, from the mistakes she

ordinary human life, it would be like hearing
the grass grow and the squirrel's heart beat,
and we should die of that roar which lies on
the other side of silence. As it is, the quickest
of us walk about well-wadded with stupidity.
(191) .

In Middlemarch, there is no concrete answer to the question of how to properly balance compassion and selfishness in one's life. Indeed, it is Eliot's contention
that this is an issue that cannot be resolved by a book
or a body of knowledge, and all individuals must sort
it out as best they can, given their own natures and the
peculiar circumstances of their lives. This is not to say,
however, that a book cannot be of some help, by
examining dilemmas and offering insights into the
subject. This is the case with Dorothea and her struggle to do good: the realizations that she comes to are
valid for the majority of non-ardent people as well,
and can be of use for those people, like Farebrother,
who, while they may not want to change the world, do
want to do some good in it.+

Alicia Potee, A02
like a keychain decades old,
last year somersaults
amid change
in my pocketoutdated, collecting dust.
they say time works
in circles,
and I'm trying
to agree.
but still,
there lies a single
dead second,
when chariots turn to rust,
when the carousel loses
momentum,
when the very last nickel is spent.
the revolution stops
(an empty alarm)
flat broke, as if on cue.
hanging
stillborn
in soundlessness,
these hollow horses
propel me
past a string
of pitch-dark
midnights,
(in pieces)
like a loveletter
or a twenty-ton sledgehammer
crashing
through bone
thin air

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Gone West
Eva T. H. Brann, Tutor

I

n 1995 I wrote about the Western High Noon in
these pages, roused thereto partly by the incredulity of people who can't believe in Westerns as a
creditable genre, partly by the good ideas I got from
undergraduate and alumni seminars, but above all by
my own affection for that movie and for some others
close to it in time. The fact is-or so it seems to
me-that what I think of as classical Westerns are
very finely and thoughtfully made, as are their literary
counterparts, and together they make an admirable
and lovable and thought-provoking genre. But though
I'm probably preaching partly to the choir and partly
to the unconvertible, I've got something more to say.
One thing I like about these Western movies is
that they constitute about as American a genre as you
can find. As such it both redeems and complements
the gangster movie, its all-American counterpart,
which has a sort of depraved purity all of its own. As
Robert Warshow says in the article we read together in
one seminar, "The Movie Chronicle: The Westerner"
(1954, in "The Immediate Experience, Atheneum, New York
1979), both genres are melancholic, even tragic. But
the Westerner's tragedy is that he is a man of virtue
who is called on to exercise the craft of killing, while
the doom of the perfectly corrupt gangster is "the
outrageous presumption of his demands:'
Another appealing feature is that Western
prose and Western scripts are so simply and straightforwardly written and so pungently flavored with
Western idiom. And they are well researched in what
the German call "realia"-detail, say, about techniques
of horse-breaking or the supplies found in chuck wagons; a reader who takes pleasure in the paraphernalia
of various lives can trust classical Western movie-makers and writers for the facts. The reason is that they
think of themselves not only as yarn-tellers but as
affectionate chroniclers and accepting memorialistsyou might say, anti-revisionist historians-of a bygone
era and a geographically remote place. It is a cherished
fact to me that Shane, a book I have grown to love over
five readings, was written by Jack Schaefer in Norfolk,
Virginia, when he had never been west of Toledo. To

be sure, he, like other writers of the West, eventually
drifted toward the land of his imagination and settled
in Santa Fe (where one of our tutors, Tom Harris,
sold him his own house).
Yet a third factor that draws me is the temporal backdrop of those movies and books that touch me
especially. They were made or written during or shortly after the Second World War-my war, the war 'of
my particular childhood-and that fact has subtly
seeped into them. Of course the war that dominates
them from within is the Civil War-our war, the war
of our common imagination-largely because the
Western hero is so often a defeated and displaced
Confederate officer who bears a melancholy burden of
loss from way back.

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For all these and more reasons I proposed to
the alumni in charge that we should devote a week of
their 1996 summer program to watching, reading, and
discussing Westerns. I got some grave looks-Plato or
Jane Austen were evidently felt to be more in character.
But we did it, and it was delightful and illuminating. I
was joined in leading the seminars by a colleague from
Santa Fe, Mr. Krishnan Venkatesh, and by an
Annapolis alumnus, Jim Sorrentino, both more knowledgeable aficionados than mysel£ Mr. Venka esh added
Uriforgiven (1992, director and lead Clint Eastwood) to
my choices, to good effect as I will tell.
I chose a list of three, all made within five
years just after the Second World War.
Red River, I 948; director Howard Hawks; John
Wayne, Montgomery Clift; dramatic date, 1850-65.
High Noon, 1952; director Fred Zimmerman;
Gary Cooper, Grace Kelly; dramatic date, late in the
century (a tattered poster on the sheriff's wall says:
"War declared;' perhaps an old Civil War memento or
possibly a proclamation of the Spanish American War).
Shane, 1953; director George Stevens; Alan Ladd,
Jean Arthur, Brandon de Wilde; dramatic date, 1889.
The truth is that I haven't watched much of

the later work in this huge and irrepressible genre, neither the TV series that damped movie production for
a while in the fifties, nor the spaghetti Westerns produced later in Italy. For a while everyone I ran into
told me of a different best Western ever, and I realized
how little I had seen. But even I knew that there were
other candidates galore even just for this time frame,
especially The Gunfighter (1950) as well as Rio Bravo
(1959), made by Howard Hawks as a tough response
to some supposedly discernible whiny liberalism in
High Noon-search me.
One bonus of this project was that in the
weeks before I met the alumni I got to do as a smug
duty what I otherwise do as a guilty pleasure. In fact
our president, Chris Nelson, had me over more than
once to watch selections from his large Western video
library. It turns out that there is so much to see and
think about in these movies-little but telling
things-that watching in couch potato passivity is out
of the question; on yet one more viewing of High
Noon, I saw and had pointed out to me a lot I missed
in the earlier Energeia article. For example, at his marriage his bride says the conventional "I do;' but
Marshal Will Kane, who is governed by a Kantian
sense of duty, says "I will." By a Kantian sense of duty
I mean one in which the rational will asserts itself over
mere wishes; in the ballad of the movie, "Do not forsake me, oh my darling," which expresses Will's heart,
the need to kill the outlaw Frank Miller who has come
to avenge himself on Will is immediately related to his
desire for a peaceful future with his young wife, but in
his thinking as just-resigned marshal he does his
death-courting duty.
Red River, too, is full of nice observables: As
Caesar once crossed the Rubicon, the "Ruddy River"
that is the boundary between Gaul and Italy, to win a
political empire, so the movie begins with Tom
Dunston crossing the Red River into Texas with three
cows to build a cattle empire. And it ends with an
addition to the Dunston brand, D::::s signifying
Dunston and the Red River's curving banks. Tom adds
1y,1 (~~M) for Mat Garth, his son in spirit, neatly sigmfymg both the northerly recrossing of the river, now
with a herd of nine thousand head, and the adoption
of Garth as a Dunston. And so on, detail by detail.
· But there are of course also larger elements
worth attending to. Movies, being cooperative and
commercial enterprises, are particularly apt to reflect,
whether purposefully or accidentally, current society
(by which phrase I here mean such opinions and per-

spectives as people have in large part because others
have them). Warshow points out, however, that the
classic Western hero is concerned with timeless person_al questions of individual honor, not with solving
social problems. Nonetheless, both Red River and High
Noon do bear intimations of the time. Red River, which
is a fiction about the historical opening of the
Chisholm Trail, over which huge cattle drives from
Texas to the new railroad at Abeline, Kansas, could be
accomplished, is brim full of the boundless energy
and human naivete of postwar America, the maturing
effects of war on young veterans, and an aversion to
tyranny. Thus the chorus for this drama, Groot the
Cook (Walter Brennan), keeps a journal in which we
glimpse the word "tyrant" used of an increasingly
hard-driving Dunston.
Again, in the later High Noon some of the
social cowardice of the McCarthy era comes out; I've
been told that the director meant the town's name,
Ha~eY,"i~e, to call Hollywood to mind and to decry
the mc1p1ent unheroic conformism of the fifties.
. . But allusions to current society are only faint
whiffs m these two high classical Westerns. In Shane
and Utiforgiven, on the other hand, the times are powerfully at work. Uriforgiven, whose great reviews may actually be taken to prove my point, is a thoroughly postmodern creation and plays to postmodern sensibilities:
a slasher movie gussied up with bottomless moral
ambiguity. It is filmed alternately with very beautiful
long shots and very ugly tight shots. My sense of the
close-up ugliness, particularly of faces, was confirmed
by our ~u~us Tom Stern (SF69), who was in charge
of the hghtmg of the set. (I wish there was a gore
tax-so many hundreds of thousands of dollars paid
by the industry for every bottle of ketchup, or whatever, expended.)
The movie appears to be built on a systematic
subversion of classical Western conventions. Peopleto begin with, a woman-are slashed about the face,
kicked and beaten when they are down, shot in cold
blood by the "hero"; women are terrorized and manhandled, while the whores put out a contract on their
attacker. Real Westerners are photographed mostly at a
decent middle distance; the heroes wait for the other
man to draw first and only then drill him with a neat
bloodless hole; they help opponents up after a fair
pugilistic ballet, keep their hands off the women, who,
especially if experienced, have hearts of gold and low
expectations; and above all, though the naive old
Western contained plenty of the melancholy of sad

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choices, it never ended in such bleak irresolution as
does Uriforgiven: The hired assassin simply picks up and
leaves, as is emphasized in the end credits when his figure appears at the upper right at his wife's grave and is
quite suddenly simply gone from the screen. These latter-day revisionist Westerns have pretensions to realism,
but you don't get real by just inverting the given myths;
you get ugly. The new terror is no realer than the old
types. But ugly as Uriforgiven is, it gives a brilliant lesson
in the postmodern perversion of a classic genre.
The movie Shane, too, bears the marks of its
contemporary society, albeit seen through the happy
haze of the fifties. To observe how the intrusion of
social life modifies the pure Western genre, one need
only compare the novel Shane with the movie script.
Schaefer's sharply-honed mythical poignancy is everywhere muffled in the movie to achieve a comfortable
romantic family tale: "Beautiful Dreamer" is the theme
song. In seminar and in dinner conversations we collected a score of evidently deliberate changes-transfers of speeches, transposals of events, and the likeall to the same effect. Let me mention just a few of
the most telling ones. The first set of these has to do
with exploiting the nature of the moving medium to
achieve certain effects, the others seem less determined
by the contingencies of movie-making than by a systematic desire to tone things down.
First, then, is the fact that in the book the
story is told retrospectively by the adult Bob, Joe and
Marian Starrett's son. The boy Bob is somewhat older
than the renamed Joey of the movie. Both facts, the
new age and the new name, serve to make the boy,
movingly played by de Wilder (who sadly died young),
more his parents' son-in the book there is a tension
as Bob's love is fixed on the stranger. But the main
defusing comes from the fact that all four, the elder
Starretts, Joey, and Shane, are seen by the camera in
one and the same visual plane externally and panoramically-just as it periodically pans the Tetons that
form the spectacular backdrop to the farm and the
town only in the movie-while in the novel, Shane, seen
through the boy's eyes, looms larger and darker as an
inner vision and no gratuitously glorious scenery
intrudes its spectacle.
In a famous early essay on the nature of the
cinema (a word that is, I can't help noting, just Greek
for movie) the art historian Erwin Panowsky observes
that the moving medium not only temporalizes spacemeaning that it moves through space in time, but also
spatializes time-meaning that in moving pictures the

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intense psychic internalities need to be spread out to
view in external action. And that is exactly what the
movie does to the novel, in numerous other instances
besides the shifting of the narrative source: For example,
whereas in the book, Shane, wanting to keep Starrett
out of the final gunfight, deftly lays him out cold with a
sideswipe of his pistol butt, in the movie there is a prolonged and nearly equal tussle. Joey is here as elsewhere
seen watching with a boy's absorption, but the concentrated worship that young Bob bestows on the man of
myth is damped as the watcher is watched.
Classical Westerns are in black and white and
so, one might say, is the novel. Some members of the
seminar argued that color is the medium of fantasy,
and that may well be, but so much the more do~s it
seem to me that black and white is the medium of the
mythical imagination. Shane is a good instance.
Schaefer's Shane is, except for his final departure,
always seen from the front, and Bob notices that he
takes care, like a hunted and haunted man, always to
sit with his back to a wall; there is something at once
candid and shadowy about him. When Bob first sees
him riding into their valley he appears dressed in dark
clothes that have a kind of formidable elegance-and
he is, strangely, gunless. Alan Ladd, a soft-faced golden
boy, is first tracked by the camera from behind, riding
out of the mountains wearing a beige buckskin shirt
and his gunbelt-a considerably less ominous figure,
who continues to move through the movie with uninhibited grace. The color makes for a prettier but less
poignant scene.
The relation of Stevens' Shane to the Starretts
is considerably toned down from the tensions
Schaefer's Shane brings with him. It is accomplished
in dozens of little modifications. A Fourth of July
festivity is introduced into the movie-the social
dimension-at which Shane dances with Marian in
candidly innocent elegance, Joe watching with pleasure.
Joe and Shane fight side by side-in companionable
equality-when Shane is reluctantly forced into a fistfight in the saloon; in the book Shane fights alone.
The wonderful stump scene in which Shane, in gratitude for trust shown by Starrett, attacks with an axe a
huge stump, a symbol of nature's recalcitrance to landclearing, is fraught with danger in the book. One at a
time both Joe and Shane get under the stump, each
putting his life in the other's hands, and when Mari~
gets so intensely involved that she burns h~r apple ~ie,
Shane recognizes the equivalence of rebakmg the pie
and battling to conquer offending nature: "That's the

best bit of stump I ever tasted!' In the movie the
stump scene comes right away and is merely a friendly
axe-flailing match. Altogether, Jean Arthur's Marian is
more sappily feminine than Schaefer's, and more coyly
romantic about Shane. In the novel it's Joe Starrett
who warns Bob not to become too attached to Shane
because one day he'll drift away, and Marian who
spiritedly refuses to leave the farm once Shane is gone;
in the movie it's the other way around.
The relation to the cattle baron who is trying
to drive out the farmers-"nesters" as they were
derogatively called-is also softened. Fletcher in the
book is mostly absent and acts through agents.
Renamed Ryker in the movie, he appears in person to
give a long, rather persuasive speech about the rights
of the cattlemen who were there first and about the
necessity of maintaining the open range. As it happens,
Schaefer was deeply sympathetic to the cattle and
cowboy world and wrote movingly of its passing in
his long novel Monte Walsh. But the book Shane, although
set in 1889 when the rising homesteaders were fully
embattled with the waning cattlemen, eschews the
social problem, or rather turns it into a moral standoff
between bad henchmen and frightened farmers.
Jack Palance as Stark Wilson makes a marvelously cold and conscienceless hired gun, but the
movie, by making Shane bright and Wilson dark, loses
the fmely detailed antithetical brotherhood of Shane
the gunfighter and Wilson the gunman. Shane, who
had hoped to put his gun away altogether, thinks one
gun is all a good man needs, Wilson packs two; Shane
goes by a mysterious single name, Wilson boasts a
scary given name; Shane is distinguished in his dress,
Wilson is a dude; Shane inspires awe, Wilson spreads
terror; and, finally, Wilson is fast on the draw but
Shane is faster.
The movie Shane is thus a soft, though lovable,
fantasy, while the novel is a classical Western. So perhaps
the time has come to say what I mean by "classical."
Winckelmann (I 717 - I 7 68), the first historian
of Greek art, gave a famous characterization of antique
classicism: "Noble simplicity, silent grandeur"-"simplicity" in the sense of naivete, "silent" in the sense of
quietly reserved. Speaking more generally, one might
say that works in the classical mode are never sui generis,
one of a kind, by the deliberate creative intent of the
maker. What is classical is not only classy individually
but belongs to a class, a genre, and tries for the perfection of its type, for the consummate realization of its
codes and conventions in a particular individual, be it

god or hero, horse or weapon, on Olympus or in the
American West.
Let me mention here that in our I 996 field
trip to Western movie locations near Santa Fe, the
genre character of the Western was reinforced-if it
needed reinforcement-by the fact that these magical
movie ghost towns are resurrected over and over for
new productions with small changes, a paint job, a
new sign. Tomes could be (and probably have been)
written about the utilitarian unreality of these charming wooden sets, with their realistic rendition of the
peculiarly American propensity for homespun reminiscences of classicism.
It is not so absurd to look for this classicism
in the Western, whether in novels like Shane and Monte
Walsh or in movies like Red River and High Noon. These
works certainly have moral simplicity as opposed, say,
to the raucously realized sophistication of Uriforgiven.
The heroes try for nobility within their human type
and the movie-maker does not revel in saleable bloodyminded baseness. If the hero fails he fails grandly,
playing out the Western counterpart of the Greek
tragic flaw: He is in an unresolvable moral dilemma
where human viability demands one thing, such as
running away or shooting first, and his unambivalent
code of honor another, such as putting himself in
harm's way and waiting out the villain's first draw.
But simple isn't stupid. The classical Westerner
is mentally acute and observant, a characteristic the
directors honor by the intelligent detailing of his world.
In particular, the Westerner, be he cowboy or lawman, is
supremely competent-just the myth-making best: the
best horse-breaker, the best rider on the trail, the most
self-sufficient loner, the best leader of a posse, the best
eradicator of varmints and badmen. His closest classical
counterpart is Heracles who won his place in myth by a
special competence for the work to be done: ridding the
world of monsters, animal and human.
To my mind, a central feature of the ideal
Westerner is a sort of speaking laconicism. These heroes
are not so much taciturn as quiet, silent from reserve,
self-sufficiency, and bashfulness before their own excellence. They are, to be sure, also finely expressive, but
more in body-language and action that in words (and
this is why the Western type is made to be depicted in
moving pictures). Their words are few and at crucial
moments insufficient-that is a part of their pathos.
Thus in Red River it is Groot the comic chorus
who is loquacious. Tom and Mat never say quite
enough to each other. Thus in High Noon Will cannot

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explain his unbending resolution. He can articulate
one part of it, what Kant would call the maxim of his
action, the rule determined in accordance with experience and foresight; he briefly indicates thoughts along
these lines: "This is not a private feud for me to fight
out on the open plains; the town must be the place
where the destroyers of civil life must themselves be
destroyed; even if the judge has decamped, taking with
his the American flag, we must prevent the community
from returning to the state of nature." But he can't
express that other element of duty that has to do with
what Kant calls the practical reason, a person's capacity
for willing freely in accordance with his self-conception. Will is too reserved to speak readily of his innermost self in its integrity. That is why Will's moral
inarticulateness is winning to the heart rather than
irritating to the mind.
I cannot keep from pointing out a fact germane to this college. We live by Socrates' continual
injunction to his partners in conversation: "Try to tell
me ... :• Perhaps in this lies the crux of the ancient
quarrel between poetry and philosophy: Heroes of
poetry are often nobly silent; participants in philosophy try to tell-it's a different sort of nobility.
Shane too is silent. Not only are his communications, both in book and movie, mostly gestural,
but, although his rare speech is elegant, discerning, and
courtly, there is a great silence about him, about him
and his past. Little is revealed of his origins except
that he is, as are so many Westerners, from the South,
from Tennessee. But his coming is mysterious:
He was the man who rode into our little valley out of the great glowing West and when
his work was done rode back whence he had
come and he was Shane.
Recall that "going West" is an idiom for dying, and
indeed Shane goes off into oblivion-and for Bob
into myth.
The cause of his great silence is, the book
reveals (and the movie obscures), not so much that he
has killed and is hunted but that he knows something
unspeakable about himself: He is a man of virtue who
truly lights up only in violence; violence is his fate, his
dark forbidden glory and trouble. Jim Sorrentino
pointed out that his name differs from "shame" only
in a stroke. His teaching to young Bob, that a gun is
only a tool, as good as the man who uses it, has the
pathos of a self-exonerating half-truth. A man has to

be preeminently good to turn a gun into a tool for living; he needs the most finely-honed reflexes, the speediest judgment, and the most steadfast virtue. And even
then, it's a mighty strange tool.
Shane and Kane then share the laconic nobility of the classical Westerner, and yet the genre permits
them to be deeply different. Will, the quondam marshal and shopkeeper-to-be, acts from the disillusioned
but unbudgeable will to do his duty as he construes it;
Shane, the solitary gunfighter temporarily turned
farmer's hired hand and friend, acts out of his nature
because "he is Shane"-a phrase several times repeated
in the novel. Their modes of action are to each other
as willed character is to fated being.
So finally Shane has the greater pathos .and
the more mythical status. (High Noon is often referred
to as the first psychological Western, and though this
seems to me a misnomer-" characteriological" would
be more apt-the description does intimate a slight
decline from classical purity; this was, I suppose, the
motive for Hawk's remake of the Cooper character in
Rio Bravo.) Shane is a savior who takes on the burden
of evil for his adopted family. When he has gone, he is
said still to be "all around us and in us;' and perhaps
not subject to ordinary mortality. Schaefer took
account of this aspect of his hero by writing in a letter (April 18, 1975) that his Shane does in fact qualify as a savior, but not as a Christian one; he is more
universal, "more an alpha primate male fulfilling his
genetically ingrained obligation to his kind" (Shane: The
Critical Edition, edited by James C. Work, 1984, p. 352).
Well, I don't know about alpha primates and genetic
obligations, but the drift is that Shane acts from his
very being, a mythical being.
A myth is, as Giambattista Vico put it in a
deep paradox, a "particular universal." Therefore
myths are the natural material for any classical mode,
for, as I ventured to say above, the classical seems to
be the intersection of the uniquely best with the perfectly generic. That, incidentally, also seems to be the
reason why classical works always arise within a genre,
that is, within the collection of respectable attempts
to realize the givens that frame the path to this particular sort of perfection. And the Western is the
genre of genres.
I must say that to me America seems lucky to
have a genre that has such myths and such classical
moments. And yet there is no getting around the fact
that the West is gone, a fact that gives current nonrevisionist Westerns an elegiac tinge. The highly spe-

cialized competencies and peculiar virtues of the
Westerner seem to be well past their date of expiration; even the lanky Anglo-Saxon rawhide types in
which they were embodied are rarities nowadays. So
we might ask: Why open oneself to such myths?
For several reasons. One is that the passing
of a pattern of virtue is not so set a thing. The
world at large may find the Western virtues outdated because the callings to which they pertained have
lapsed--cowboy, homesteader, gunfighter, marshal.
But the world is wrong, I think. Self-reliance and
self-sufficiency, a lonely sense of duty, laconic competence, courtesy to the opposite sex, slow-forged
human bonds, deep-seated love of a landscape and
its figures, are ever-resurrectable virtues. It is just
when they seem to have lost their place in the world
in general that particular people will go looking to
remake a place for them. Then, as the cause for
being receptive to these local fictions will be a
moral longing, so the effect might be to give it
some definition.
But above all, it seems to me imaginatively
sound that we should stay in touch with our past
via myths. Now novels and movies, being entertainments enjoyed in receptive leisure and re-read or reviewed at pleasure, are pretty nearly the best we
moderns can do by way of participating in the
reenactment of myth. One might, to be sure, argue
that figures like Dunston, Garth, and Kane are
more composite idealizations than mythical beings
because they represent the once-in-a-while, scattered
excellences and flaws of the factual type compacted
into one larger-than-life character. But Shane surely
has this additional mark of a bona fide myth:
Although when pressed for a model, Schaefer said
that it was his father, the Shane we know comes, a
being at once uniquely himself and the perfection
of his type, from a region beyond, from "the heart
of the great glowing West." And when his work is
accomplished, that is where he goes. +

ode to my mug
Eve Gibson, A99

ode to my mug unexpected
birthday present
peace offering
natural
handmade
massaged clay
scored and slipped
arched love
blue beautiful
unexpected mug.
i love the way you feel
in my large
hands the
way you feel
on my lower lip.
mug of love
better than a hug
useful, practical,
no one knows how much
the mug is private love
not public like embrace or kiss
when i hold my mug
i am holding my
unexpected token of love.

LISTENING FOR PLANETS
Alicia Potee, A02
suspended in an echo, spotlights fall
on Saturn: how you straighten stockings with
a beat like blues (piano-banging teeth,
like keys beneath trance-stricken fingers), all
your jazz-joints splitting plaster, cracking walls
like paper pulse-sheet music to your breath.
Still rhythmless, i sway to match the wreath
of resin you call skin. it's soundless ... dull.
i'm hearing you (a woman moving-slick,
just barely frictionless), and in this pit
of indigo, i sense my hips can hear
you too. they dream of turning thin blood
thick,
snapping elastic veins with one curved hitthat cosmic chord, still ringing in my ears.

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THREE HUSBANDS
Alicia Potee, A02
I. the fighter

II. the lover

III. the doubting saint

he was a high school
football star
with a taste for red meat,
curvy brunettes,
cocktail waitresseshad a right hook
with the sting
of an ex-con.
he once drew back
his throwing arm
to the catcalls of three
grown men,
bloodied them all
in a single swing
before treating himself
to a beer.
for him,
one touchdown
was never enough.
the thrill was in ·
the tackle.

a lady's man
since the day of his birth,
he kept a collection
of lipstick-stained napkins
with names,
scribbled pink,
like Cherry
or Vida.
he could charm
a snake
with his smile.
sobering up in'82,
forehead against
a deadbolted door,
near dawn at 4 a.m.,
he begged
for a three egg omelet,
or one last chance
to kiss his kids
before the money
ran out.

after ten years,
the birth of a child
who claimed
his buried father's eyes,
the death of a mother
who named him
from the Bible,
one out of practice
East Baltimore Catholic
still kneels
beside her holy wounds,
reciting a prayer
to one day know
the fable of
her secrets:
blessed are they
who have not seen
yet still believe
amen.

(untitled)
Eve Gibson, A99

mood music move me
from these orange moon
table tops
and circular decals
I hurl you into orbit.
Spin Sex Wax,
Starbucks, and Sea World
Bumper sticker.
Away with you
regular, concentric, colored,
informational blurbs

on circular blobs.
I exile you from the
orbits about my head.
I'll throw you up in the air
like a fist full of coins
and drop you on the ground.
I'll play jacks with you
And when I think I have lost you
I'll step on your sticky side and
march you face down
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�A

v ERY SHORT ESSAY ON ENERGEL.\
Anne C. McShane, Ed.

Traditionally. the Energeia has had, on its first page, a quotation from Aristotle's.\ fetaph:vsics regarding the definition of cvipy8ta. (Aristotle invented the word). That quotation takes very different forms depending on its translator. r
give Hippocrates G. Apostle's and Joe Sachs' here:
Apostle's:
For performance is an end, and actuality fcvcpycmj is performance. And so even the name ''actua!izv·· is derived from the
name "work" [spyovj and points to actuality [EV'tEl-CXEtaJ. (lOSOa 22-24) 1

Sachs':
For the end is work, and the work is a being-at-work [cvc{-iysw.l, and this is wh~· the phrase being-at-work is meant by
reference to work Idpyov I and c:-..1cnds to being-at-work-staving-complete Ic\.·-rt.AEX.Cte&lt; j. (1 OSOa 22-24 )2

Neither quotation serves well as a definition. Apostle's acluali ry, even combined with perfonnance and end, leaves one
unenlightened. But, if one closes one 's eyes to actuality and latches onto Apostle's translation of cpyov, ''performance,"
it is possible to construe some idea of why a magazine filled with prize essays and art would be called Energeia. Closing
the eyes to actuality, however, is hardly satisfying: actuality is f!vcpycia! Sachs' translation, though at first more
daunting, tells us more about what tvipyt:ia really is. For it to do so, however, we must read a little more:
Since of the actions \vhich have a limi1 none is an end but each is for the sake of an end, as in the process of losing weight,
vvhose end is thinness , and since that which loses weight while in motion does not have that for which the sake of the motion
exists, such an action is not an action , or else it is not complete, for it is not an end. But the end and action belong to that
other kind. For example, we are seeing and at the same time we have seen .... we live well and at the same time have lived
well , and \1v'e are happy and have been happy. . .. Of these, the former should be called " motions," the latter "actualities
[read, being-at-works]. '' (Apostle, 1048b J 8-~8)

It becomes more clear why Sachs chooses lo translate l:?w~pyEta as being-al-work. The being-at-work is a kind of
work, the end of which is the doing ofthe work- there is no product. other than the work itself. One does not sec in order
to see in the future: one secs now, in order to see now. From here the step to cvn-:/cEX~~ta is easily taken : just as the
£v8ryEta of an eye is to see, the cvt:pywx of a human is the being-at-work of the whole self As Sachs says,
. . . the human being that can experience rsight, knowledge, happiness J is similarly a heing-at-work, constituted by metabolism. Since the end and completion of any genuine being is its being-at-work, the meaning of the word converges with ..
cntclcchcia. (244-245 )3

The word SVLEAEXE:ta is composed of three parts: tv'tEAE:~ (from 't8A.oc;), meaning complete or full-g own. ~xf-:t v.
meaning to be a certain way by the continuing effort of holding onto that condition. and a pun on the word tvoEA.cx.i::m.
meaning persistence (Sachs' Physics, 245). 8v8pyi;ta extended is tv'tE:/\,t:X,wx.. Through the persistence of a meaningful
work, 8vipy8t&lt;.x., humans fulfill themseJvcs.
Unfortunately. there cannot be a magazine consisting of 8v8pyE:ta. cvipy8ta, as an activity, a motion, extends
through time and cannot be put on paper. The activity of painting a picture, like the activity of being happy, is not
transferable (that is, without one taking part in the activity itsel{). What we can do, however, is give evidence that
tvepyi;ta. has taken place on our campus. That evidence can also serve as an opportunity for the reader to engage in
knowlege; that is, in another kind of ~vi;pyt:ia. That is what this magazine has tried to do.
As one can tell from my poor attempt to elucidate it, as well as from the apparent difficulty in its translation,
the meaning of£v8pyi:;ta is difficult to get across. Indeed, Aristotle says this himself in reference to tvspyr.ta.: "What
we mean is clear by induction from individual cases, and we should not seek a definition of everything but should also
perceive an object by means of an analogy" (Apostle, 1048a 36-1048b 7).
Let us then take his suggestion and, rather than trying to define hipyE:ta, look at examples. Please tum the page.
IAristotle'sMetaphysics. Trans. Hippocrates G. Apostle. Peripatetic press, Grinnell, lA; 1979.
2 Aristotle'sMetapf1ysics. Trans. Joe Sachs. Green Lion Press, Santa Fe, NM: 1999.
3 Sachs, Joe .A ristotle;, Phyoics: A Guided Sh111y. Ma.terworks of l)i•coveiy: Guiden Studies of Great Tex I ~ in Science. Hll!Vey F1n11menh•tl, e&lt;l. R11tgero llniversity Pre•s. New Rnms\\frk , NJ: 199.i .
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�Contents
Sketch (man) ... ...... ......... .... .... ... ... ..... ... ............ .......... ........... .. ................ ..... I
Melina Hoggard, A '00
Editor
Anne C McShane
Junior Editor
Jan Jungbacker
Assistant Editors
Julia Bell
Maro Casimattis
Jonathan Culp
Melina Hoggard
Matthew Holtzman
Peter H eyneman
Casey Moore
Sarah Whitesel
Photography Acquisitions
Vada Mossavat
Photographers
Jonathan Lawless
Peter Speer
Design
Matthew Holtzman
Faculty Advisor
Chaninah Masch/er
Front Cover

37 .......................... ....... .............................................. Highway 4 New Mexico
Peter Heyneman, 'OJ
38 .. ........ ........ .. ... ... ........... ......................................... ................... ... 3 Sketches
Melina Hoggard, A '00

Seeking by Means of Speech
Freshman Essay Prize, 1998-99 ......................................................................... 2
Blakely Phillips, '02

39 ... ...................... .... .. ...... ... ......................... .The Legacy of Claudius Ptolemy
Cordell D.K. Yee, Tutor

Warwick Castle ..... ...... ...... ...... .... .... .. ..... ... ....... .............. ... .. ..... .. ... ..... ... ....... 6
Isabel Clark, '02
Lucy ... ....... ..... .......... .... ....................... ......... ......... ........ ........ ....... .... ..... ..... ....... .... ... 7
Caroline Picard, '02
Basement Door. ..... .................. ............. ............... .............. ......... ............. ....... .... 8
Isabel Clark, '02

46 ................... ..... ........ ..... ........ ............................................ ........... .... Untitled
Sara Wilson, '02
4 7 ....................... ......... ... ...... ... ..... ..... ...... ....... .. ....... ..... ..... ........ .. Paris, France
Rizo Popovic, A '00
Selection from On the Sublime : Longinus
48 ..... ..... ............. ...................................... .... Greek Translation Prize, 1998-99
Samuel Garcia, A '99

Confessions Involving Balance and Equilibrium: Lab Experiments
Laboratory Prize, 1998-99 ................. ...... ............ ..... .. ....... ............. .... .. .... .. ........ 9
B1yan Thorpe, 'OJ

Le Promenade d'Automne: Marceline Desbordes-Valmore
49 ....... ....... ................................................. French Translation Prize, 1998-99
Robert Dickson, A '00

Sailboats ..... .... ........... ... .. ........... .... ...................... ... ..................................... 16
Karin Ekholm, A '00

50 .. ... ...... ........ ......... ...... .... .. .. ....... ............ .. ................ ... .. Aidan Dreaming-Elk
Karina Hean, A '00

Backlit. ... .............. ....... .......... .... ... ...................... .............. .. ................ .... ..... 17
Karina Hean, A '00

51 ....... .. ..... ..... ......... ........ ... ........................ ........ Vrbnica, Kosovo; June, 1999
Vada Mossavat, A '00

Profit of Wisdom: Ecclesiastes, Solomon, and the Loathing of Life
Senior Essay Prize for Literature ..... .. ............. ........... ...... ...... .. .. .... .. ............ 18
Derek Alexander, A '99

52 ........... ......... .............. .:............ ........ ......................... ..... Guardians, 1998-99
Anne McShane, A '00

Scenic Overlook (secret spy picture) ............... ... .......................................... 28
Isabel Clark, '02

Cain and Saul: The Men God Rejected
53 .......................... ........................................ Sophomore Essay Prize, 1998-99
Sarah Whitesel, 'O I

SQUATTING FIGURES

Caroline Picard, 102

Tiffany Joly ................................ .. ........... .......... .. ..... .... .................. .............. 29
Andrew Baisch, A '00

Back Cover
KELSEY, NEW MEXICO

Kristin Masser, 'OJ

A Decent Burial. .. ....... ...... ..... ... ..... ....... ................ ... ...................... ..... ........ 30
Christopher Colby, SJC Community
Untitled ............................... .. ............ ..................... ...... ............. .. .. ............... 32
Caroline Picard, '02
Waterwitch ..... ............. ................................................................................. 33
Cara Gormally, '02
Seven-Year-Old Poets ............... .... ... ........... .............. ... ... ................. ........... ... .34
Matthew Holtzman, A '00
Aswan ....... .... .. .......... ..... ....... .......... ........................ ... ......... .. ..... ....... ........... 36
Karin Ekholm, A ·oo

5 8 ........ ..... ... ........ ....... ... .... ...... ....... .. ........ .... ... ................ ... Elephantine Island
Karin Ekholm, A '00
59 ... ...... .. .... ...... .... ... ....... .. ...... .............. ... .... .. ...... Gjinovce, Kosovo; July, 1999
Vada Mossavat, A '00
The Importance, for Consciousness, of the Discovery of Self
60 ...... ...... ........ ........ .... .... ...... ........ Senior Essay Prize for Philosophy, 1998-99
Piroska Kopar, A '99
70 ................ ... .......... ... .... .. .................. ............. ............... .......... ..... Part of Me
Karina Hean, A '00
71 ..... ..................... ... ........... ...... ........ ... .. .................. ........ ...... Sketch (woman)
Melina Hoggard, A '00
72 ........... ..... ....... .... .... ........ ...... ................................. ... ... ......... .... Liberty Tree
Cara Gormally, '02

The Energeia staff would like to
extend its gratitude to Christopher Colby, Cordell Yee, William
Pastille, Pamela Kraus, the St.
John's College Print Shop, and
the Gadfly.
Energeia is a non-profit, student
magazine published annually and
distributed among students,
faculty, alumni, and staff of both
St. John's College campuses. The
2000 issue contains a sampling of
student work from the previous
year which the prize committees
have selected for public recognition and submissions from
members of the community.
Energeia welcomes essays,
poems, stories, original math
proofs, lab projects, drawings,
paintings, photography, and the
like for the 2001 issue .

�Sketch (man)
Melina Hoggard, A '00

�3

E NERGElA

Seeking by Means of Speech

Blakely Phillips, '02
One of Meno's sarcastic remarks, imperfectly under- hands. He possesses them, and, only possessing, he may
stood as it may be by Meno himself, strikes at the heart of even forget them. Seeking to know something, in this case,
the philosophic enterprise: How can we seek what we do is seeking to have what one in some way possesses.
not already know? Answering this question means no less
What does it mean, though, to possess knowledge that
than discovering what "knowing" means for Socrates. Thus, one yet does not have? Possession is the capacity for using;
Meno 's question reverberates in the background of the possessing knowledge, then, means retaining a thought in
Th eaetetus, in which the title character and Socrates seek one's mind unconsciously, whereas having knowledge means
the nature of knowledge itself. The various images given in holding that thought in one's mind consciously. It is posthe Thea etetus imply that speech is the key to seeking what sible, then, for something known to be in one' s mi~d yet
one does not know : knowledge, it seems, involves more than not at the front of it; to be stored unconsciously, not "ready
one level, and speech is the connection that allows us to at hand for thought" (198d). We possess notions that give
move between those levels. By examining the images of us direction in the search for wisdom; having some acquainknowledge and speech, then, disregarding their initial hasty tance with "virtue," we can seek the nature of virtue . Alrejections in the course of the dialogue, we may discern a though the original notion of virtue is very different from
coherent picture of what knowledge is and how speech en- any definition one might contrive for its nature, it is on
ables us to seek it. This examination, in tum, also reveals account of the former idea that the latter is possible. Socrates,
Meno 's slave and the rest of us can seek what we do not
some implications of the nature of knowledge.'
How is knowledge sought? We can say that if we are know if we somehow possess the knowledge of it already
able to seek knowledge, we need two things: an idea of that and only seek to have it more explicitly.
for which we are searching and a way of attaining it. ConIn order for knowledge to be seekable, though, we must
cerning the first, if Meno's slave does indeed discover that somehow be able to move from possessing knowledge to
the line on which the eight foot square is based is neither having it, from a partly-conscious notion of a thing, to full
two nor three feet, if Socrates can seek the elusive forms of awareness of its details . Thus, seeking is the movement
things, both must already possess a general notion of what from one level of knowledge to another, the relation bethey seek to know more explicitly . If seeking is to be suc- tween possessing and having. How , then, do we seek? Ho w
cessful, it must also be possible to move from vague knowl- do we come to possess knowledge-birds in the first place,
edge of something to clear knowledge of it. Partial knowl- and how do we grab them again later? Socrates hints that
edge allows us to look up words we do not quite know how the first and the second are different manners of "hunting":
to spell, or to attempt to recall an image of someone or some- "we . .. will say that the hunting was twofold, one before
place which has undergone the contortions of memory . It the possession for the sake of possession, ana one by the
must be possible, then, to know enough about X to ask the possessor for the sake of seizing and having in his hands
question "What is X?" without knowing precisely what it is what he has possessed for some time" ( 198d 1-5).
The first hunting, since it is for the sake of possession,
about X that is sought. In other words, if we are able to
seek knowledge, we need multiple levels of knowledge and is akin to the acquisition of an art, the second to its practice.
a way of relating them- a theory that is significantly elabo- Precisely how we are able to seek an art before we know
what we are looking for, however, is confusing and unclear .
rated in the Theaetetus with the image of the dovecote .
Socrates and T~eaetetus, indeed, distinguish between Acquiring any art, does not the apprentice always have a
two levels of knowledge, possessing and having-a distinc- sense of the skill he is after? For most arts, from mathemattion Socrates explains thus : "if someone buys a cloak and ics (a science) to chaim1aking (a practical art), the one trybecomes its owner but does not wear it, we would deny he ing to learn the art already has a notion of the knowledge
has it but he still possesses it" ( l 97b ). The soul, Socrates encompassed by it. It seems, too, that this will be the case
continues, is a dovecote that "when we 're children is empty" so long as one seeks an art consciously, with intention. Seek(197 e2 ), but which one fills with various sciences, birds of ing, by definition, is looking/or something, after all. Thus,
knowledge, catching them and stowing them away . Once even if acquisition of an art is what enables us to seek furthese birds are caught, however, the hunter/keeper does not ther knowledge, we need knowledge in order to acquire most
actually have them unless he holds them up again in his arts. The trail of the knowledge needed for seeking does

not end here. There may, perhaps, be "a.i1s" that one learns
inadvertently, however, which enable one to seek not only
all other arts, but also the active knowledge yielded by those
arts when seized in the hand of the mind. (Language may
be just such an unconscious art.)
The other half of the analogy, that between practicing
an art and seeking to have what one already possesses, is
more completely accurate: "it is precisely by lthe aritfoneticalJ art ," that is, practicing the art, "that lthe arithmetician]
has the knowledges of the numbers" (198all-bl). Therefore, practicing something already known is the path from
possessing to having knowledge. Practicing the arithmetical art involves applying what the arithmetician possesses
knowledge of-numbers, which he possesses from his original acquisition of the art- to the world through numbering
things, asking always "How many?" The path from possessing to having, then, involves looking at the world, asking about it, and applying to it the knowledge one possesses:
practicing an art.
The pursuit of philosophical knowledge, in the same
manner, involves looking at things that affect us a.i1d inquiring about their natures. Whatever the philosophical art
is, one has knowledge through it by practicing it, applying
it to the things in the world. Thus, seeking knowledge,
generally, for any art , means practice of an art one already
knows: one has chainnaking knowledge through actually
making chairs out of materials from the world.
Of course, the way one applies previous knowledge to
the world, in order to keep having that knowledge, does
depend both upon the sort of knowledge one begins with
and the sort one ultimately seeks. Although one must always have a prior notion of what one is looking for, both the
prior notion and the method of getting more elaborate knowledge differ in different situations. Philosophical knowledge,
for i nstancc-that is, knowledge of the natures of thingswill be sought diJferently than mathematical knowledge or
chairmaking knowledge. For chairmaking knowledge, one
applies the plan for a chair (prior notion) to the world by
actually making chairs. For mathematical and philosophical knowledge, on the other hand, the knowledges one starts
from are number and what tilings are. These knowledges
are applied by asking questions, comparing the world with
what one knows, asking "How many?" or " What is this?"
Since philosophical knowledge, knowledge about the
natures of tilings, is what we are concerned with (as tl1is is
what Socrates and Theaetetus are concerned with), we will
ask: what prior knowledge or art is necessary to seek the
natures of things, to ask what something is? First, the philosopher must have some acquaintance with that something.
To ask of virtue "What is virtue?" the philosopher needs
only know the word "virtue," the name of what he wants to
know better. Thus, the philosopher needs words, language.
Does the philosopher train in language, with a view to the
natures of things, as if it were an art and he an apprentice

who knew what he was after? Surely not, if the philosopher
claims with Socrates not to know the natures of things .. . .
He knows only words, and we all learn our first language
without much thought about precisely what we are doing.
Thus, language seems not to be an art but it is, at Least for
philosophical knowledge, the root of what allm; s us to seek.
v
From language we have all the knowledge required to seek
the natures of the things we name.
How does the philosopher, then, use words to seek what
things are? How does he apply what he knows to the world
a.i·ound him? He asks questions of the form "what is XT
and attempts to a ~wer them . This much is evidenced by
the method of Socrates in the Theaetetus , asking "What ever
is knowledge? Can we really say itT (146a3) . The answer
will be an account p,oyoc;). Asking what things arc and
giving accounts of t11em, then, is how the philosopher seeks,
starting always from words and the meanings they imply.
The way knowledge must work if we are able to seek it ,
then, has been shown : the philosopher needs words, questions and accounts-words to give an idea of what he is
looking for, questions and accounts to convey him from that
hazy understanding to a clearer, more articulated one. It
remains to be considered, however, why philosophical
knowledge is sought this way, why words, questions and
accounts are necessary, and how they work.
L ANGUAGE

Theodorus says in the Theaetetus, following Socrates,
that the difference between philosophers and lawyers is that
philosophers "are not subservient to speeches , but the
speeches are as it were our domestics," whereas lawyers are
slaves to speeches (173c3-4) . Mastering speech is crucial
to practicing philosophy, and thereby to seeking what we do
not know about the natures of things. We have said already
that language provides both the prior knowledge of things
(names) needed to seek them, and the way to seek them, to
move from unconsciously possessed knowledge to clear
knowledge (questions and accounts) . What about language
makes this possible, and what makes language necessary
for philosophic knowledge? How does language provide
both the basic notions necessary to seeking what we do not
know and the means of attaining it?
The words philosophers must possess if they are to formulate questions have a peculiar faculty: they name things,
physical or intangible, and at the same time reach beyond
those things. The words we use, while pointing to indi vidual things, do so by putting those things into classes.
(Every single tree, for instance, does not have its own name,
Bob or Martha, as people do: each tree is one in the class
"tree.") The word tree, then, signifies both an individual
tree to which one might point, and the entire class "tree,"
the mysterious qualities of the category that cause one to
call that particular object a tree. Language points to things

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in the world and beyond, to the commonness that, though words, and arise when one thinks of what one word means
not explicitly stated, guides and iies behind the grouping of in comparison to another. One might say, simply, a tree is
various objects together under one name. Words serve as not a bird or a bush. Introducing other terms, other words,
names for what many different things have in common.
one could say, more specifically, a tree is a larger plant than
What many different things have in common, in turn, a bush. Including ratio, then, the peculiarity of /,oyoc; is,
gives us insights into what those things are. These elusive starting with words, to state relationships between their
srnndards, by which we give names, are the forms, since it meanings.
is precisely the guiding principle of namjng that Socrates is
Implicit in the use and knowledge of words is the abilafter when he seeks what knowledge or virtue is, wanting to ity to relate those words to one another in speech, since
know what it means to call anything ''knowledge" or "vir- words themselves signify relationships between the things
tue .. , Phaedo, too, says that Socrates and company "agreed they name by grouping each object into a category (which
that .... Forms existed, and that other things acquired will include some objects and exclude others). Thus, the
their names by having a share in them" (Phaedo 102b). philosopher, in possessing words, possesses the ability to
The same principles are what we try to state when defining draw from those words the categories they imply by calling
words, as in a dictionary. Thus, speech links the each (indi- a name into question ("Whatever is knowledge?") and tryvidual object) and the all (category), as the Stranger of the ing to give accounts of what it names (that by which we call
Sophist warns: "To detach each from all is the final and various things "knowledge") in terms of other ~ords, other
utter eclipse of all speech., (259e3 ). When we possess words, names of things. Starting with words as his prior knowlthen, we imp1icitly possess knowledge of why things are edge, the philosopher seeks an account that will explain
grouped under certain names, and this is the knowledge what it means to call something what we call it.
sought by the philosopher. Words, it seems, are very helpIf we are able to seek what we do not know through
ful things for the philosopher to know, since, as categories accounts, what kind of account will yield success? Socrates
into which we group particular things, they imply truths and Theaetetus consider the same question. Having decided
about what things are to us.
that the knowledge sought by a philosopher must be some
How, then, does the philosopher use the words he pos- sort of account ("true opinion with speech [is] knowledge,
sesses to seek knowledge of what things are? How do ac- but true opimon without speech [is] outside of knowledge,
counts use words to arrive at what one did not know before? and of whatever there is not a speech, these things are not
The philosopher begins by asking "What is X?" and call- knowable ... and whatever admit of speech are knowable"),
ing the identity of the thing he names, X, into question. He they continue to give accounts of speech (202dl-5) . These
then uses other words to rename X. This renaming consti- accounts they give in order to determine how the "knowtutes the account. Having called the name of the thing into able," (speakable) and "unknowable" (unspeakable) things
question, the philosopher seeks to discover what that name are divided-to determine what is knowable and thereby
means by thinking about the thing itself and its relation- what kind of account will succeed. Discovering what sort
ships to other things. (Whether he is seeking the thing of account is successful will clarify how language, as acitself, as separate from its name, or just what is meant by counts, enables the philosopher to seek what he does not
the name, or whether a difference even exists between the know.
two, is unclear. It is possible that the philosopher thinks he
In the first account given by Socrates and Theaetetus,
is seeking the thing itself while only toying with names.) a syllable is explained and accounted for by the list of its
He seeks to give a definition of a word, and therefore can letters, in order. The other terms used to define what the
only use other words to define it. The object of the syllable is, then, are its parts, letters. The letter, not conphilosopher 's quest-what something is-becomes an ar- sisting of multiple parts, cannot be expressed through a simiticulation of how that thing compares with others.
lar account. What syllables are, though, does not consist
That accounts articulate the relationships between only in thei r letters, Socrates points out, and philosophical
things is reinforced by thinking of accounts (via A.~yos) as accounts must express the natures of things. Defining a
ratios. Just as Euclid's ratio shows the relations between wagon in terms of its parts is likewise rejected, since such
magnitudes, an account does the same with what things are. an account, though a faithful and accurate list, does not
Further, just as the mathematical ratio requires at least two state, for instance, the use and purpose of the wagon. Foreterms, an account does also . An account of anything needs most, however, is the objection that anyone can correctly
both a subject to describe and terms in which to describe it. list the parts of something, through guessing or mindless
Therefore, with at least two things named, the philosopher recitation, without necessarily understanding and knowing
can make a ratio between them that, hopefully, reveals some- that of which he is listing parts (208b4-6). Accounts-asthing about the one in question. With tree: bird or tree:bush parts, then, do not approach the knowledge of the natures
one discovers the difference between what is meant by tree of things sought by philosophers, and therefore are of no
and bird or bush. These differences are embedded in the use in seeking such knowledge.

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The last account given of language is more accurate.
The sort of account necessary for the philosopher's seeking
is, Socrates discloses, "some sign to say by means of which
that which is asked about differs from all things" (208c 11 ).
The example Socrates gives is that the sun is "the most brilliant of the things that go around the earth across the sky"
(208d3). This sort of account will reveal precisely what is
sought: the peculiar nature of something-that is, that by
which we call it what it is-through showing its relation to
other things. While all accounts define a term by means of
its relationships to other terms, the account-as-difference
gives specifically how the thing sought is different from
(and similar to) other things.
What is striking about speeches of difference is that
they are also accounts of similarity. We think first of how
the object is similar to those things and secondarily how, in
relation to what all have in common, the object nevertheless stands out and refuses to be fully commensurable with
them. Words already imply these relationships in the two
aspects of naming, mentioned earlier: specifying a particular thing and, at the same time, classifying it among other
things. Thus, the account-as-difference is the way to have
the knowledge only implied in the words we know. Too, if
words themselves hold any weight in determining the na, ture of language, the definition of Xcysw as given on page
37 ofMollin and Williamson's An Introduction to Ancient
Greek ("to gather things together into a whole within which
the gathered parts retain their distinct identities") confirms
the importance of accounts-as-difference.
That is very well, one might say, but-how does the
philosopher seeking knowledge go about giving such an
account? What enables him to give it? Socrates makes this
objection, fearing that, in order to properly articulate the
distinctive nature of something, one nevertheless needs to
somehow already possess an understanding of that which
one seeks, the distinctiveness of that thing. How do we
come to know the distinct natures of things (for example:
that it is part of a coat to be worn)? How else than through
our possession of language, of names for things? We saw
above that words both point to individual .things, physical
or not, and reach beyond them by classifying them among
other things, according to an invisible principle (the relation between it and other things) that is articulated in a
word's definition. All this is embedded in ordinary use of
words. If, then, the philosopher listens to the way words
.are used and masters speech instead of letting shifty usages
master him, he will be able to discover the knowledge he
seeks.
Language, then, provides the basis and means of seeking philosophic knowledge. Possession of words is capable
of abstracting our thought from things in the world that
words name to the mysterious source of those names. In
words, we possess implicitly what we seek because words
contain, in their uses and definitions, the manifold ways

they compare with other words; the relationships between
things that lie in words are the natures of things the philosopher seeks. The accounts the philosopher gives, then,
only make explicit what he already has in his use of language. The probing questions of Socrates are attempts to
bring people to that decisive point at which they realize the
elusive categories behind words, hoping that they will recognize then the nature of what they do not know and accordingly seek to know it by means of speech. It is only
through mastering the usage of words, however, that the
hopeful philosopher will be able to give a true account.
IMPLICATIONS

What, though, does it mean that philosophic knowledge is tied up in language? Several possible implications
fall out of these considerations: What does mastery of the
usages of words entail? What is the standard for true knowledge, and should philosophers agree? First, if philosophic
knowledge begins with what is implicit in words as we use
them and explicates this, the forms (excuse the severity of
the phrase) are not eternal. Uses of words change over time,
after all. Although there will always be hidden definitions
behind the words we use showing why we call things what
we call them, these will be at least somewhat modified along
with the words' uses in speech. "Nice" once meant "stupid
and harmless," but now means "kind and friendly," with no
derogatory undertones; the form of the "nice" has changed.
The knowledge the philosopher seeks, being knowledge of
what words mean, is subject to the same alterations and
erosions.
The standard by which the philosopher's accounts are
judged, then, is that of contemporary linguistic usage, and
it is this the philosopher must master to attain knowledge.
It is possible, of course, that the standard could be the
philosopher's own ideas about what words mean, that meanings are subjective- in which case no one philosopher could
ever be called incorrect. If words are used for communication, though, no one 's definitions will be terribly different
from another's.
If that is so and there is a standard for truth in the practical use of words, why do not all philosophers agree? Simply, some are more aware of their language and more skilled
at articulating accounts than others. Thus, the dependency
of philosophic knowledge on language ties it to the language of the time-and possibly also to the particular language in question, though this is an immense question for
which no clear suggestion comes from the previous arguments.
In any case, possessing one level of knowledge about
things in words, the philosopher seeks to have the knowledge words imply by articulating their meanings, catching
and holding account-birds. Language enables philosophers
to seek knowledge by providing them with words that reach

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beyond individual things to the relationships of those things
to all other things, as named by words. Because these relationships are the know ledge philosophers seek, they ask
questions and give accounts, hoping to articulate the peculiar nature of one thing, like knowledge, by showing how it
differs from others. To master speeches is to become aware
of what words mean, and articulating those meanings is to
find knowledge of what things are to us. Leaming to master speeches, if it is possible, seems to involve listening to
and using one's native words, the words one was endowed
with. Simply, though, language allows the philosopher to
seek because what he seeks is part of language.

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ENDNOTES

'References are to the Theaetetus unless otherwise indicated.
TRANSLATIONS CITED

Plato, Phaedo. Trans. G. M. A. Grube. Classics of Western Philosophy. Indianapolis: Hackett, 1995 .
Sophist. Trans. Eva Brann, Peter Kalkavage and Eric
Salem. Newburyport, MA: Focus Philosophical Library,
1996.
Th eaetetus. Trans. Seth Benardete. Chicago: University of Chicago Press, 1986.

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Isabel Clark, '02

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�Confessions Involving Balance and Equilibrium
Lab Experiments
Bryan Thorpe, 'OJ
I'm presenting two experiments. The first experiment became the impetus for the second experiment-the two are
closely related. Bear with me and I'll make myself clear.
First, consider the following diagram:

c

A

B

Let us suppose that this is a fulcrum point with a meter stick resting on it in a state of equilibrium. Consider how the
meter stick is balanced: for every point on side AC there is a corresponding point on side CB having the same weight and
distance from point C. The meter stick balances because each side-representing a sum of points-exerts the same
amount of stress as the other side. It might be more clearly put this way: side AC is a lever pressing down, having as much
lifting power as side CB, which is also pressing down. Their combined forces cancel so that each side is lifted with as
much force as it presses down. The result is what we call equilibrium-a balance of forces, of stresses. These stresses do
not have to be uniform and exactly symmetrical for equilibrium to exist:

A

D

c

B

To compensate for the block added to side AC in the above diagram, I must add an equal stress to the other side. As
Archimedes well demonstrates, that equal stress can take any number of forms involving widely disparate combinations of
mass and distance . The meter stick by itself is a particularly unifo1m example of a system in equilibrium, but otherwise no
different from a similar system having objects resting upon it. My point is this: no matter what the system, we intuitively
recognize the fulcrum point as the determining agent of equilibrium. Put another way, we might say that the fulcrnm
point is the unity that gives rise to the possibility of equilibrium. But what happens if the meter stick is resting on two or
more fulcrnm points, as in this diagram:

A

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We must say that, yes, this system too is resting in a kind of equilibrium- not a useful kind, for ce1tain, but a kind
nonetheless. What are the stresses in this system? What forces are exerted on each fulcrum point? This is what my first
experiment examines: the stresses created by a system with two fulcrum points.
THE FIRST EXPERIMENT

A. Setup
Equipment needed: two scales, two balls of putty, two razor blades, one meter stick, one baros circular weight (32g.)
To determine ~hat stresses were being felt on which fulcrum point, I put a scale under each fulcrum point. The
fulcrum point itself is a razor blade held in place by a ball of putty, which in turn is resting on a tray attached to a scale.
The scales were set to zero after the putty and razorblade were placed on them. I won't be able to draw this exactly, but the
following diagram should illustrate the general setup:

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There are no conflicting stresses in this setup: line AB, as a lever, is only exerting force on line BC, and line CD is
only exe1ting force on line DC. Thus, for every point we pick, there is only one other point on the meter stick that is
exerting an equal force across a common fulcrnm point. Also note that an object placed on the meter stick at the 30cm
mark doesn 't have any effect on the weight felt at the 80cm mark, and vice versa. Of course, I could achieve the same
results with any number of setups- e.g. fulcrnm points at the 1Ocm mark and the 60cm mark, etc.-so long as the fulcrum
points divide the meter stick into balanced sections that don't overlap.

Case Two
Next, I arranged the fulcrnm points beneath the meter stick so that fulcrum point A was at the 40cm mark, and
fulcrum point B was at (remained at) the 80cm mark:
C.

80

B.

Case One
To begin, I arranged the fulcrum points so that fulcrum point A was at the 30cm mark of the meter stick, and fulcrum
point B was at the 80cm mark:

30

With this setup, scale A registered 7 5 percent of the total weight of the meter stick, and scale B registered 25 percent.
Now the question is why is the weight of the meter stick divided between the two fulcrum points in this way? What forces
are at play here?
After much experimentation I discovered a h. rd mle for answering this question, not just with this setup, but with any
a
setup having conflicting stresses: dete1mine which sections of the meter stick are in equilibrium and which are in conflict.
I' ll try to illustrate. In this case we find that only one portion of the whole system is in equilibrium. In the following
diagram that section is line BD:

80

Scale A registered 60 percent of the total weight of the meter stick, and scale B registered 40 percent. This makes
sense . The 30cm mark on the meter stick is the equilibrium point for the first 60cm of the meter stick, and 80cm mark is
the equilibrium point of the last 40cm of the meter stick. Thus, the whole system rests in equilibrium, and the stresses on
each fulcrum point are also in equilibrium. The following diagram, I hope, makes this clearer.

Line BD is in equilibrium becausP. its two component parts, lines BC and CD , exert equal stress on each other. In
contrast, line AB is in conflict because the section that would normally counter its force , line DE, must also counter the
force of line EF. In other words, lines AB and EF are competing to lift the same section. And, at first, it looks as if they
are exerting an equal lifting force-after all, both lines are 20cm in length. However, line AB has substantially more
lifting power because it ' s farther from its fulcrum point than line EF, which is butted up against its fulcrum point.
There is a difficulty here in calculating the lifting force of these lines . The problem is that we're not talking about
weights placed on the line, as if the line were in equilibrium, but the line itself. Each point of the line is a different
distance from its fulcrum point, so we need a measurement of force that equals the sum of the forces exerted by all the
points individually . Taking a hint from Archimedes, I've found that this collective force is perfectly expressed by multiplying the length of the line (which represents the line's total weight) by the distance from the fulcrum point to its center
of weight. (The center of weight of a line is found by bisecting it.) In the above diagram, the length of line AB is 20cm,
and its center of weight is 30cm from fulcrum point C. The length of line EF is 20cm, and its center of weight is 1Ocm
from fulcrum point E.
Line AB has 600 units of lifting force .
Line EF has 200 units of lifting force.

The line on top represents the meter stick, the globular shape is the putty, and the two labeled trapezoids are scales.

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We can better express this by saying that line AB will exert three times as much lifting force as line EF. Thus, in the
common section DE, which both lines are competing to lift, line AB lifts 15cm-three times as much as line EF, which is
lifting only Scm. And from this it follows why one scale is registering 75 percent of the weight of meter stick, and the
other scale 25 percent:
Weight on first scale:
Weight on second scale :

20 (line AB) + 40 (line BD) + 15 (the lifted portion of line DE) = 75
20 (line EF) + 5 (the lifted portion of line DE) = 25

Similar calculations can be made for any combination of fulcrnm point positions. No matter where the fulcrum points
are located, the system as a whole can be broken down into sections resting in equilibrium-and thus constant-and
conflicting sections that are exerting unrequited lifting force . These sections can then be used to predict how much stress
is being felt at each fulcrum point. Is this an accurate representation of real life physics, or just a useful mathematical
trea trnent of such phenomena? I don't know-but I lean heavily toward the latter.
This first experiment, working with two fulcrum points, inspired me to think about plane figures in similar manner.
That is, I wondered if a plane figure, balanced on a single point, could also be conceptualized as a collection of balanced
sections . I was amazed at what I discovered.

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How does a plane figure, resting on a pin, balance? And why does it only balance on the center of weight? I
performed the following experiments hoping to answer these questions .
A couple of notes ~efore I begin: for the sake of precision and ease, I've worked largely with triangles . Their areas can
be exactly calculated, and their center of weight is easily found (using Archimedes' method) . I have performed the exact
same experiments on completely irregular plane figures , and the results are the same, though with a larger degree of error.
Also, from here forward the.diagrams will be from a bird's eye perspective.
To begin, I divided a triangle into different sections. The first section, and the largest, was the section most clearly
resting in equilibrium. In the following diagram I've shaded this section gray:

THE SECOND EXPERIMENT

Equipment Needed: cardboard to cut into plane figures, scissors, one ball of putty, one ruler, one needle
In the freshman lab manual, we learn that a cardboard cutout plane figure, no matter how hung, will always orient
itself with its center of weight directly underneath the hanging point. After doing this a few times, we conclude that,
somehow, the center of weight appears to be heavier than all the other points . But the center of weight has another
characteristic, equally interesting, that is not presented in the manual: the center of weight is also the only point upon
which the plane figure can be balanced. By balanced, I mean that the cardboard plane figure, oriented parallel to (coplanar with) the earth, can be rested upon a single point (a needlepoint, for example). Figure 1 is the experiment described in the lab manual. Figure 2 is the same cardboard cutout balanced on a needlepoint:

This section is in equilibrium because for any point taken on it, there is another point, directly opposite it, on the other
side of the center, that counteracts its downward force. Points outside of this section have no corresponding point to
balance them. I'll elaborate. Consider points A and D in the following diagrams:

Point A is balanced by its correlative, point B. Point D, on the other hand, should be balanced by point E-but point
E doesn't exist. In fact, none of the points in the remaining sections-the tluee triangles outside the gray shaded polygon-have correlative balance points. How do these sections keep each other in check? How are they in equilibrium?
To answer this question I simplified the problem. In the diagrams above, the triangles are balanced on infinite axes
passing through the center, point C. In my experiments I worked with a single axis of balance. I took a metal ruler and
mounted it in putty so that the edge of the ruler was perpendicular to my desk. The putty was stuck to the desk itself. I
then balanced my cardboard cutout triangle on this single axis . (Note that this axis, and every axis that allows the triangle
to balance, passes through point C, the center of weight.) Line AB represents the rnler:
Figure 1: cardboard cutout triangle hung so that point C (center
of weight I rests directly beneath the hanging point.

Figure 2: the same triangle being balanced
on a needle at the center of its weight

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B
A
A

B
Next, I found the centers of weight for the sections in question (I've labeled these D, E, and F in the following
diagram). Then I weighed the sections, which, in plane figures, is a matter of° determining the area of. each section.
Following this, I measured the distance of the sections, from their respective centers of weight, to the axis of balance. This
measurement supposes that the force exerted by the sections is perpendicular to the axis of balance. The lines with arrows
represent the distances between these centers and the axis of balance:

B

A

Let the weight of the top section, with center of weight D

=

Figure 1:
(Wvx DG) + (W£x El)=(WFx FH)

Figure 2:
(WEx El)=(WFx FH)
Note that the center of weight for section W 0 is on the fulcrum point,
and, therefore, the whole section W 0 is already in equilibrium.

This seems to be a reasonable explanation of how a plane figure balances on a single point: equal forces balance every
possible axis, and, therefore, the whole figure balances. I might have guessed this . If the figure were unbalanced on any
one axis, then it would fall to the side of that axis having the lesser force .
But this theory is not complete. There's a complication. I've divided my plane figures in a very particular way-I'm
referring to the gray and non-gray sections. It turns out (after many experiments!) that this particular division of sections
is not necessary . Plane figures can be divided into any number of randomly shaped sections, and the rules of balance, as
I've been using them, still apply. Consider the figure below:

WD.

Let the weight of the first bottom section, with center of weight F = WF.
Let the weight of the second bottom section, with center of weight E

=

WE.

Here ' s what I discovered:
WD x Distance DG = (WF x Distance FH) + (WE x Distance El)

It is better rendered in prose: the force exerted by the top section is equal to the combined forces exerted by the bottom
sections. By this account, the whole system, with respect to fulcrum AB, is in equilibrium. But that's just the beginning.
No matter how you orient the fulcrum line, the forces on one side, by this means of calculation, always equal the forces on
the other side. For example:
G

Figure 3:
There are six sections. Each section exerts a force equal to its weight multiplied by the perpendicular distance from the
section's center of weight to the axis of balance. Let the force of section E be expressed as FE' Let the forces exerted by the
other sections be expressed in a similar manner. We find this:

(FE +FF+ FB +FA)= (FD+ FG)

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This complication, the infinite number of ways in which a plane figure's balance can be mathematically portrayed, at
first, clouded my understanding of what was really, physically happening in the figure-but I've had time to ponder it. I
think the following two axioms generally explain what's happening : First, as I've already stated, a plane figure is
balanced on a given axis because the collective force of the points on one side of the axis balance out the collective force
of the points on the other side of the axis.
Second, a single point can collectively represent any set of adjacent points on the plane figure-if that single point is
their center of weight. This works because the center of weight is really just a fulcrum point and nothing else. With lines,
the center of weight is a fulcrum point having only one axis of balance. With plane figures, it's a fulcrum point having
infinite axes. Thus, in dividing Figure 3, above, into six different sections, I've reconceptualized the whole triangle into
six different, unconnected systems, each resting in equilibrium on top of a single fulcrum point. To restate that: if the
whole triangle can be thought of as balance beam with a single fulcrum point, then I've just divided it into six smaller
balance beams and measured their respective forces across the original, now meta-level, fulcrum point. Either as a whole,
or subdivided, I'm still weighing the same triangle having the same number of points.
Without these axioms I don't know how to describe the physical reality of a plane figure balancing. I'm convinced
that the problem is one of points. But the only way I can account for every point is to compound them into sections: the
sections make the infinite points of plane figures finite and manageable. This works, in a way, but it leaves me with more
questions than it answers. For example, does a point exert force only on those points it is in direct contact with-or does
every point exert force on every other point? In one case the points form an infinite collection of mutually cancelling
levers, and in the other case the points f01m a web of energy waves .. . a web of gravity? My experiments only take into
account leveraging force . I ignore the force that makes this force possible-gravity-because I wouldn ' t know where to
begin. I can only examine its byproducts, ideas like balance and equilibrium. I look forward to Junior year and resolving
some of these questions.

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Karin Ekholm, A 'oo

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Profit of Wisdom
Ecclesiastes, Solomon, and the Loathing of Life
Derek Alexander, A '99
In our thickest moments we feel our uselessness and
know the world is bent. We know the futility of our work;
we see the world stand fixed beneath our actions. We afflict
the innocent or, innocent, are afflicted. We crave unmerited praise, or flippantly praise others. At moments we are
happy and look on our works. But look away! For if you
stare, a word will tum to letters, and a life will tum to dust.
Fixity and time eat vigor, and death will pierce through any
profit a man has made .
When Ecclesiastes cries all is vanity! it is both a beginning and an end. And when we read those words we feel
our relationship to them swell and recede with the choler in
our hea11s. We sometimes cry 'but life is good! '-and sometimes cry for the absurdity of it all. The crookedness of our
lives now hides, now reveals the futility, the vanity, the absurdity of our toil. And enjoyment gives relief, but flees.
Solomon-so we will call our guide and writer in this
wrenching book-is a searcher. And while he can give us
only words-and while that is all we will give-he can use
those words to point to life and living . And we live. It is
better to go to a house of mourning than to a house offeasting; for that is the end of eve1y man, and a living one should
take it to heart. (7 :2) 1 Is it so? Let us go instead to
Ecclesiastes itself, and take it to heart. Let us try its bitterness , and see if it stays on the tongue of consideration. What
is behind its loathing of life?
We will look for the nature of wisdom, and the value of
wisdom, both in Solomon's life (I Kings 1-11 or II Chronicles
1-9) and in the book of Ecclesiastes. Solomon's life is inconsistent, and Ecclesiastes is a wandering book; yet one
who follow s both will glimpse behind the despair a dark
and splendid queen-wisdom.
SOLOMON THE KING

It is not to our point to consider whether Solomon
penned Ecclesiastes: the book claims to be his, and it draws
on his unique place in our minds. At 1: 16, Ecclesiastes
reads , "Here I have grown richer and wiser than any that
ruled before me over Jerusalem, and my mind has zealously
absorbed wisdom and learning." Here and throughout, no
question of origin will exempt the reader from considering
Solomon. Either Ecclesiastes was written by Solomon, and
draws on his life, or it was not written by Solomon, and
draws on his life. This paper, like the book, is interested in
him.

No one is less afflicted from without than he-Solomon
controls himself and those about him. His God gives, indeed asks to give. Found at the beginnings ofl Kings and II
Chronicles is a famous story : Solomon, having just married
the daughter of Pharaoh , and before building the great
Temple, sacrifices magnificently to the Lord. Then, in divine munificence, the Lord comes to Solomon (II Chronicles

1:7-13):
That night, the Lord appeared to Solomon and said to
him, "Ask, what shall I grant you?" Solomon said to
God, "You dealt most graciously with my father David ,
and now You have made me king in his stead. Now, 0
Lord God, let Your promise to my father David be fulfilled; for You have made me king over a people as numerous as the dust of the earth. Grant me then the wisdom and the knowledge to lead this people, for who can
govern Your great people?" God said to Solomon, "Because you want this, and have not asked for wealth, property, and glory, nor have you asked for the life of your
enemy, or long life for yourself, but you have asked for
the wisdom and knowledge to be able to govern My
people over whom I have made you king, wisdom and
knowledge are granted to you, and I grant you also wealth ,
property, and glory, the like of which no king before you
has had , nor shall any after you have." From the shrine
at Gibeon, from the Tent of Meeting, Solomon went to
Jerusalem and reigned over Israel.
And true to this singular grant, Solomon's reign over Israel
was blessed. He built the Temple. He judged aright. He
administered with genius. He prospered like no other before him.
But he would splinter Israel by dividing his heart between the Lord of David and the gods of his many forbidden wives (I Kings 11). In all external matters- adminis tration, diplomacy, exhortation-Solomon was excellent and
severe. His dedication prayer for the Temple was magnificent. It was his heart that wandered .
This was fatal, for it was Solomon's heart that God
wanted, and He had conditioned Israel's unity on the singleness of Solomon's devotion. He is, indeed, a jealous God.
The account makes it wholly clear that Solomon is without
excuse in his polytheism, for the Lord visits again, and warns
him precisely, vividly (I Kings 9:2-9):
The Lord appeared a second time, as He had appeared
to him at Gibeon. The Lord said to him, "I have heard
the prayer and the supplication which you have offered

Me. I consecrate this House which you have built and I
set My name there forever. My eyes and My heart shall
ever be there. As for you, if you walk before Me as your
father David walked before Me, wholeheartedly and with
uprig~tness, doing all that I have commanded you and
keeping My laws and My rules, then I will establish
your throne of kingship over Israel forever, as I promised your father David, saying, 'Your line on the throne
of Israel shall never end.' But if you and your descendants turn away from Me and do not keep the commandments and the laws which I have set before you, and go
and serve other gods and worshjp them, then I will sweep
Israel off the land which I gave them; I will reject the
House which I have consecrated to My name; and Israel
shall become a proverb and a byword among all peoples.
And as for this House, once so exalted, everyone passing by it shall be appalled and shall hiss. And when
they ask 'Why did the Lord do thus to the land and to
this House?' They shall be told, 'lt is because they forsook the Lord their God who freed them from the land
of Egypt, and they embraced other gods and worshipped
them and served them; therefore the Lord has brought
all this calamity upon them. ' "
These words are thorough, stark, clear, and from the mouth
of God; Solomon must have understood their seriousness.
They present so clear a reward for devotion, so stark a punishment for sin, that they could not be mistaken by Solomon.
The fate of Israel rode on the wholehearted obedience of
people and king. King Solomon, who in the first visitation
of the Lord sought the good of his kingdom in asking for
wisdom, must feel the weight of th e state upon his fealty
towards God .
Yet he turns away. Just as God had forbidden, Solomon
lets his heart wander to the gods of his foreign wives. The
God ofisrael finds the builder of His temple building again,
not for Him, but for Malech, for Chemosh and for other
gods (I Kings 11 :6-8).
This jealous Lord loved David, peculiarly, especiallybut in breaking loyalty with the Lord, Solomon makes the
transition from being good David ' s son to b eing evil
Rehoboam' s father. It is only the tenacity of the Lord's love
for David that allows Solomon to cling to his control of
united Israel: "but for the sake of your father David, I will
not [tear away your kingdom] in your lifetime." (I Kings
11: 12) Even Solomon's son Rehoboam is blessed by the
Lord's love for his grandfather- he will be pe1mitted to rule
a solitary but mighty tribe of Israel: Judah.
To Solomon the Lord gave, and from Israel the Lord
took away. Solomon, for all his wealth and wisdom, though
a king of peace, lost Israel with his heart.
Solomon ' s life and words recounted in Kings and
Chronicles will not untangle Ecclesiastes, nor will that knot
unfold his life. But they fill one another. In the accounts of
Solomon's life we learn of his deeds and words, not of his
thoughts. Thoughtful Ecclesiastes, however, is introverted,

ruminative. Though said in public, being a book,
Ecclesiastes remains in feeling private-but is about things
done and said in the world. Bold and strongly felt, it expresses much that sits deep in a great man's heart.
It is a dark book- and yet there is some hope . It befits
Solomon's unified Israel: lost, but with promise of restoration.2 Ecclesiastes is the heart of gain and loss-economic
and ultimate.

MAN: ENGULFED BY NATURE

The opening exclamation of Ecclesiastes is famous and
the opening question is key. Here are both (1:2-3; Seow
translation):
Vanity of vanities, says Qohelet, vanity of vanities! Al l
is vanity! What advantage does one have in all the toil ,
at which one toils under the sun?
This question is the heart of the book; it sparks the inquiry
into human toil, and its finding of emptiness is expressed
as the verdict Vanity!
What advantage? One does best to ask in return 'Advantage with respect to what?' Solomon sets the criterion
high. The lines which follow this question are no diversion: When Solomon turns to the stability of nature, he sees
a context into which a human or two simply disappearand all their advantages with them (1 :3-5, 7) :
What real value is there for a man In all the gains he
makes beneath the sun? One generation goes, another
comes, But the earth remains the same forever. The sun
rises, and the sun sets - And glides back to where it
rises ... All streams flow into the sea, Yet the sea is
never full .. .
It can seem unfair-the bar is set high. Ecclesiastes asks
what advantage a single man has, and gives not just a global context, but a global natural context. It is what a solitary hiker finds awesome about the earth- its stately stability and seeming indifference toward man. But Solomon is
not a hiker, and Ecclesiastes is not a hymn to nature- in
the context of man and his toil, the stability of nature is not
so much awesome as overwhelming. It is hard to feel at
ease, to be at home in the world.
Nature ' s stability does not, alas, extend to predictability. Crops may flourish or fail, and the farmer must plant in
the face of this uncertainty. This is asking much of the
farmer: overwhelming, indifferent, fickle nature is intimidating to toil. It is fearsome, paralyzing. And while
Ecclesiastes will spend relatively little time observing this
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induce. Near the end of the book, roughly opposite the passage above, we find this ( 11 :4-6):
If one watches the wind, he will never sow; and if one
observes the clouds, he will never reap. Just as you do
not know how the lifebreath passes into the limbs within
the womb of the pregnant woman, so you cannot foresee
the actions of God, who causes all things to happen.
Sow your seed in the morning, and don't hold back your
hand in the evening, since you don't know which is going to succeed, the one or the other, or if both are equally
good.

It is characteristic and central to Ecclesiastes to make
this compound movement. First, the fearsome and unmovable face of the way of things (in this case, of nature) is
seen, and profit of toil (wealth or fortune) collapses as uncertain against it. The overweening and self-assured search
for advantage fails. Second, however, there emerges for the
innocent and persistent a strand of hope, not for the profit
of the man, but for the good of his toil or work. What that
good is must be seen.
Solomon can demolish hopes for advantage because he
can manipulate the scale of comparison; as has been noted,
one may wonder if it is fair to assess the value of a man's
labor against the immensity of the earth's stability. Wisdom will lead one to see how many shapes toil, for example,
can take in the face of nature, children, enjoyment, death.
To wonder about the fairness of thinking about a man's toil
up against nature's stability is to see much of the point already: that the juxtaposition is possible and dangerous.
These comparisons must either be warned against, or be
done wisely-and even then with the real danger of despair
and loathing. So the wise will ask: where does the danger
lie-in the nature of nature, or in the nature of advantage?
This question is well answered by placing advantage in
contexts other than nature (for example, time), and observing whether the danger persists. There are many other contexts available- some parochial and some grand. Solomon
will combine the two in considering human forgetfulness
over divine eternity.
MAN: SWALLOWED BY ETERNITY

Time outstretched-One generation goes, another
comes-and the sameness of the earth swallows streaming
hoards of men: the small with their wretchedness, the great
with their advantages.
Time is the context of the assertion of recurrence (1 :9):
"Only that shall happen which has happened, only that occur which has occurred; there is nothing new under the sun!"
Ecclesiastes would thus deny men the consolation of thinking that if, indeed, no one person can find real advantage,
then many people over time might accumulate some profit.

The wise will call recurrence to mind in the context of
the sameness of the earth and expect to see motion- inplace-even cycles . This recurrence of sameness contributes much to the worth of wisdom. Obvious as it is, proverbs and wisdom would be impossible in a world ever-new
or amorphous .
On the other hand, wisdom would be cheap in a world
where these patterns were always seen and heeded-what
use for a proverb were the world's ways clear? But the assertion of recurrence, in the context of people, is sister to
forgetfulness. Ecclesiastes says that men do not remember
who or what came before, that they do not even remember
their deeds, and so it will continue ( 1: 11 ). This is a difficult
assertion to accept, especially coming from an old and remembered book. But forgetfulness is the human complement to a world made bent, a world whose people need wisdom.
Forgetfulness gives wisdom part of its worth by robbing simple observation of its completeness. But then forgetfulness turns around and empties wisdom of its advantage over foolishness in death: neither the wise nor the fool
are necessarily remembered (2: 16). The wise man may become embittered at this turn. Human forgetfulness adds
much to that scarcity of understanding which makes a proverb valuable, a wise man needful. But the proverb and the
wise man are themselves forgotten. Here, as elsewhere in
Ecclesiastes, the valuable and needful are unprofitable . Here,
as elsewhere, value and vanity share a common root. (In
this case, wisdom both gained value from and was emptied
by forgetfulness.)
The wise find no lasting remembrance, no sure fame .
For a wise man fixed on making a profit, like Solomon, this
is bitter (2:15-16 Seow):
So I said in my heart: "If the fate of the fool befalls even
me, why then have I been acting excessively wise?" I
said in my heart that this too is vanity, for there is no
remembrance of the wise forever- as is the case with
th e fool-becaus e all too soon everything is forgotten .
0 how the wise dies just like the fool!

We saw the farmer deprived of the profit of his toil by the
very ea1th which made the work possible and good . And
now the human forgetfulness that gives the wise their use
and place denies them any lasting profit or advanta ge. Wisdom, insofar as it is work, is not more lasting than the work
of the hands . Time swallows wisdom.
That statement, like Ecclesiastes , will appear too dark
and too universal- for it is itself wisdom.
W ISDOM : EVERYTHING HIDDEN

Wisdom here and throughout does not mean that which
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dom Solomon receives, the wisdom Ecclesiastes finds vain,
the wisdom Proverbs express.
Solomon gives us a vivid demonstration of wisdom
while sitting in judgment over two women. Found in I Kings
(3: 16-28), the story is this: a baby, born to a prostitute, is
also claimed by a second prostitute of the same house, whose
baby is dead. The two women come to Solomon for justice.
He hears the case and says, "Cut the live child in two, and
give half to one and half to the other." The true mother,
hearing this, seeks to save her son and cries, "give her [the
other] the live child, only don't kill it!" But the mother of
the dead baby envies the life of the other and says, "It shall
be neither yours nor mine; cut it in two !" King Solomon
gives the child to the life-loving mother, sure that the child
is hers. Israel was awed by their new king, the account tells
us, "for they saw that he possessed divine wisdom to execute justice." (3:28)
The ruthless resourcefulness of the trick Solomon played
is indeed a marvel. It is cruel and, happily, effective. He
clearly sees the situation; he knows the opposing testimony
gives insufficient ground for judgment. Indeed, just before
ordering the child halved, he acutely summarizes the testimony, and implies the need for a test: he says, "One says
'This is my son, the live one, and the dead one is yours';
and the other says, 'No, the dead boy is yours; mine is the
live one. ' " Interestingly, Solomon does not seek to question
the account the women gave further-yet since one gave an
account of how the other baby died (3 :19), he might have
tried to catch a contradiction in the account of the lying
woman.
Solomon instead takes a risk. The reader does not know
whether the child is actually in danger of being halved, but
knows that Solomon cannot know how the prostitutes will
react. He cannot be sure that his trick will uncov er the
truth. Nonetheless, he brutally simplifies the discovery of
the h-uth, in the effort to gain it. In the realm of an active
wise man, risks abound (and this alone accounts for part of
the connection of wisdom and wealth) . Wisdom has no
assurance of finding the truth or success it seeks, but resourcefully acts, having perceived clearly . A good specimen of wise statement, like Solomon's, will not recount what
is seen clearly, but simplify it, usually drastically . A wise
action, whether it be a severe test, like Solomon's above, or
the giving of a proverb, is not so much factual as acute.
It is essential to the safe use of proverbial or Solomonic
wisdom to understand that it will not be true in the same
way that honest testimony is true. The (very common) error is to turn an acute proverb into a false universal, or a
trivial conditional. Proverbs 11.16 says, for example, "A
graceful woman obtains honor; ruthless men obtain wealth."
This statement becomes false when universalized: "All graceful women obtain honor; all ruthless men obtain wealth."
A similar problem occurs with the insertion of only. To
insert some turns wisdom into timid conditional testimony,
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and dulls the hortatory prick of the proverb ( 12: 11 ). The
wise proverb points and directs by its acuity; the universalized distortion obscures and falsifies by its narrowness.
Wisdom is exemplified in map-making- a most useful
and acute labor of simplification. The vivid revelation of
political boundaries will on a map generally obscure the
presentation of environmental features, or preempt them
altogether. It is unwise to try to represent everything on
one map. It is foolish, and certain to fail. To make maps is
to distort, yes, but with an eye toward the truth of the matter. To insist 'on the complete and undistorted fidelity of a
map to the land is to lose the truths revealed by cutting
away other truths.
The land does not bare itself to the mere observer. One
cannot see that a plot of land lies in the center of an island;
nonetheless it does, and a map will reveal that fact. But
this map, in order to porh·ay the island, has ignored innumerable distinctions, introduced the distortion of scale, and ,
importantly, made certain facts more obvious than they are
when encountered directly. A wise map-maker will know
the distortions of maps, and will not be led astray. He will
know that the loftiest aim of the map maker-absolute fidelity- is a useful and worthy ideal, but unattainable . At
moments he may even be frustrated that the desire for fidelity cannot be satisfied but instead results at best in a high
degree of fidelity-which is so much as to say, an excellent
distortion.
How much greater is the frustration of one who seeks
to represent, not land, but humankind and God! The stakes
are higher for one who exercises wisdom in the service of
his nation and his Lord .
Both King Solomon's capacity and his responsibility to inquire with wisdom into cases of justice are Godgiven. His specifically divine grant of wisdom encouraged,
no doubt, the boldness of Solomon ' s manipulation of the
prostitutes' case.
The Solomon of Ecclesiastes also considers as Godgiven the burdensome work of inquiring with wisdomespecially when inquiring with wisdom into wisdom itself.
And while he is bold ih his search, he is vexed in his heart
( 1: 16-18):
I said to myself: "Here I hav e grown richer and wiser
than any that ru led before me over Jerusalem, and my
mind has zealously absorbed wisdom and learning. " And
so I set my mind to appraise wisdom and to appraise
madness and folly. And I learned that this too was pursuit of wind: For as wisdom grows, vexation grows; To
increase learning is to increase heartache.

Wisdom, one would think, is a good thing and brings happiness. It often does. Ecclesiastes will say as much in places
yet to be discussed. But throughout, Ecclesiastes refuses to

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make a wand out of wisdom-it does not turn good everything it touches.
Wisdom is not its own reward, nor is wisdom necessarily virtuous . It is generally rewarding, and it is the prime
accomplice of virtue. 3 Wisdom is clear seeing of what is to
be done, or of what underlies. It gives no surety; it does not
change the world whole: it does not replace truth itself.
Wisdom, that is, must be interpreted: a good proverb will
indeed lay flat some bend of the world, but in turn requires
the reader to stretch his mind to see the flattening. Again,
wise sayings are like maps-one must learn to see them.
This, of course, is the focus of Proverbs itself, whi ch opens
with great and teaching purpose (1: 1-1.6):
The proverbs of Solomon son of David , king oflsrael:
For learning wisdom and discipline;
For understanding words of discernment;
For acquiring the discipline for success,
Righteousness, justice, and equity;
For endowing the simple with shrewdness,
The young with knowledge and foresight.
- The wise man, hearing them, will gain more wisdom ;
The discerning man will learn to be adroit;
For understanding proverb and epigram,
The words of th e wise and their riddles .
The fear of the Lord is the beginning of wisdom;
Fools despise wisdom and discipline.

To make the simple shrewd, the discerning adroit-learning, understanding, acquiring-the work of wisdom is noble,
finding its root in fear of the Lord. Its opposite is foolishness, over which it surely triumphs .
Or does it? Ecclesiastes, being afflicted with the task
of searching out wisdom, says that though wisdom can see
clearly, giving it advantage over folly (1:13), there is nonetheless a problem with wisdom's superiority. That problem
is death. Solomon muses aloud (2: 15-16):
"lf the fa te of the foo l befall s even me, w hy th en have I
been acting excessive ly wise?" I said in my heart that
this, too, is vanity, for there is no remembrance of the
wise forever-as is the case with the fool-because all
too soon everythin g is forgotten. 0 how the wise dies
just like the fool!

Ecclesiastes here places wisdom as it placed toil-in the
context of advantage. Again, the bar is set high. Recall
that toil was found useless in the context of the stability of
nature (Chapter 2: Man Engulfed by Nature). Here, wisdom is found vain in the context of mortality- specifically,
wisdom does not preserve one from death. In this context,
the distinction collapses between wisdorti. and its opposite,
foolishness-for foolishness, too, of course, does not preserve one from death. This sort of observation, a sort of
productive flattening, is a core work of wisdom. One might
well ask, incredulous, "Productive-what was produced?"

A partial appraisal of wisdom and folly was producedspecifically that they make no difference in the face of death.
Nothing prevents death-not even wisdom herself.
Solomon despairs (2: 17) : "So I loathed life. For I was distressed by all that goes on under the sun, because everything is futile and pursuit of wind." One hopes in vain that
wisdom, if it will not save life, will at least perpetuate
memory (2:16, 4:16). One hopes in vain even that wisdom
will persist in a single wise man during the short span of
his life (7:7, Seow translation), "for oppression turn s the
wise into fools, and a payment perverts the mind. " The
wise are mortal , their wisdom , eradicable. They are not
worse than the foolish, but neither are the wise in every
respect better.
Nor can wisdom see completely. In Ecclesiastes, as
has been said, wisdom is a gift of God. But it is the same
God who has made the world bent, like a road curving out
of sight before and behind the traveler. The God-given gift
meets the God-given limitations, and gives way. Or, as
Solomon will recount it (7:23-24 Seow) : "I said, ' I will be
wise,' but that is beyond me. All that happens is inaccessible and utterly unfathomable; who can discover it?" And
while one might try to search out a wiser man to try to discover what Solomon could not find, one will more likely
despair of finding anyone better qualified. Who, we ask
with Ecclesiastes in 7: 13, will be able to unravel what God
has knotted?
Wisdom is not a project, and gives no sense of completion in its examination of the ways of the world. It must
strain, always. It is indeed productive, but gives no sure
advantage. Like toil, it is good without being ce11ain. There
is much reason to want wisdom; after all, Ecclesiastes 2:26
reads (Seow translation): "For to the one who is favored,
[God) has given wisdom, knowledge, and pleasure." But,
importantly, this casts wisdom as a reward, not a means, to
Godliness. Ecclesiastes understands the distinction between
searching by wisdom and effusive piety. And it will, in the
end, see Godliness in the face of the Lord 's judgment, not
wisdom, as the heart of the matter.
I Kings 3 suggests that Solomon received his wisdom
as a result of his love of the Lord and his magnificent sacrifices. Proverbs in turn has memorably said that the fear of
the Lord is the starting-point of wisdom. Ecclesiastes, too,
sees God as the source not only of wisdom, but of its righteous opposite: simplicity, or uprightness (7:29) .4
For to the one who is f avored, God has given wisdom,
knowledge, and pleasure. Solomon is upper-class in the
extreme: favored, privileged, born to the house of David,
chosen. Having found wealth-like his toil, like his wisdom, like his life-to be vain, Solomon is..speaking of pleasure, but a'1so of his superiority, when he says (2:24-26):
There is nothing worthwhile for a man but to eat and
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even that, I noted, comes from God. For who eats and
who enjoys but myself? To the man, namely, who pleases
him he has given the wisdom and shrewdness to enjoy
himself; and to him who displeases, He has given the
urge to gather and amass only for handing on to one who
is pleasing to God. That too is futile and a pursuit of
wind .

This God-given pleasure, in all its futility, is an important.
companion to wisdom, knowledge, and toil-and should be
examined.
MAN : DROWNED I N P LEASURE

Ecclesiastes finds human toil and wisdom to be empty
of advantage when considered against the stability of nature and the sameness of death. And when, immediately
after the first discussion of the vanity of wisdom, Solomon
approaches pleasure or mirth, one feels sure that it, too,
will fall. Indeed (2:1-2):
l said to myself, "Come, I will treat you to merriment.
Taste mirth!" That too, I found, was futile. Of revelry I
said, "It's mad'" Of merriment, "What good is that?"

What good is that? This question eats merriment by appraising that quality by the degree to which it is its opposite. That is, the rhetorical force of the question What good
is that? comes from taking what good to mean what use .
Since that refers to merriment, we have What use is merriment? This is tellingly close to asking What work does not
working do?
The futility of merriment is established on the grounds
of its not being something it never meant to be-useful.
This maneuver is often what makes it so easy for Ecclesiastes
to depreciate a subject like wisdom, toil, or pleasure: it need
only find something the subject is not and ask why not.
Uncareful defenders of the attacked subject (in this case,
pleasure) will often find themselves bamboozled into defending it against the charge of not being what it never was
(in this case, useful). Even if pleasure is in cases useful,
insisting that it always be useful is absurd, and a path to
despair. To resist someone who says pleasure is not practical by denying such an obvious statement is just such a path.
So, when Solomon finds mirth futile, one wonders why
he expected more. The answer lies in the problem of recompense within wisdom. There are many paths that lead to
an understanding of enjoyment and pleasure in
Ecclesiastes-a consideration of toil or a consideration of
mortality among them. But the present excursion-a consideration of recompense-is best, for it will remove a consideration of pleasure from the slippery and onerous context of advantage, and defend it on more solid ground.
To receive proportionate good for good, proportionate
evil for evil-this is recompense. Especially when medi-

ated by God, recompense may be considered a matter of
cause and effect, or as a special kind of recurrence: recurrence in the service of justice. It is characteristic of wisdom, in fact, to express itself in causal or judicial terms: for
example (7: 12, JPS emendation), "For the possessor of wisdom becomes a possessor of money." This is an acute and
useful proverb. The distinction between wisdom and true
testimony is indispensable here-one who confuses the two
will choke on the juxtaposition of that and this proverb
(9: 16): "A poor man's wisdom is scorned, and his words
are not heeded ." As proverbs, they are not contradictory
(one is about wisdom, the other about poverty), but if universalized and considered testimony, the two will contradict. One must understand that when compounding proverbs, a world-view, and not a world, is being produced.
In any case, both proverbs above suggest that the appropriate recompense of wisdom includes wealth. But the
world is not always compensatory; there are problems with
cause and effect when thus imagined. Innocent men are
afflicted. And Solomon, despite his sins, was not himself
afflicted. His nation and son were. The wise look around,
and see recompense achieved, and recompense frustrated.
Wisdom must hold on to both. Justice is real. Injustice
is real. In the world they are not negations but enemies.
The defeat of one by the other is not annihilation, but victory. Wisdom shows her worth when she discerns one in
the thicket of the other. Even dark Ecclesiastes, full of bewilde1ment and despair, frustration and injustice, draws out
from the depths of its own confusion a surprising certainty
in its conclusion (12:13-14 Seow):
End of the matter; everything has been heard. Fear God
and keep his commandments, for every human it is to be
so. Surely God will bring every deed to judgment for
everything hidden , whether good or evil.

For everything hidden-God will give justice. Wisdom sees
final justice beneath all the injustice and delay, some of which
was itself found hidden-where there should have been
human justice in the first place (3: 16):
And, indeed, I have observed under the sun: Alongside
justice there is wickedness, Alongside righteousness
there is wickedness .

Matters are dark, thick, deep; even if there is ultimate recompense and comfort (if but fo r the righteous), one will
yearn for comfort at the place and time where the frustration occurs (8:14-15):
Here is a frustration that occurs in the world: sometimes
an upright man is requited according to the conduct of
the scoundrel; and sometimes the scoundrel is requited
according to the conduct of the upright. l say all that is
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good a man can have under the sun is to eat and drink
and enjoy himself. That much can accompany him, in
exchange for his wealth, through the days of life that
God has granted him under the sun.

Here, enjoyment returns again, and this time, with the expectation of immediate recompense removed, it can be differently approached. No vain attempt to evaluate the
advantageousness of enjoyment is found here . Instead, enjoyment becomes the comfort of the frustrated seeker of justice. Wealth is unsure, toil is transient, wisdom is limitedonly after this is seen does pleasure seem to be a proper
member of that group. For pleasure, assuredly, is unsure, is
transient, is limited- but it is also good. Moreover, simple
pleasures-eating, drinking, sleeping, and such-may be
seen as enough, seeking no further advantage, seeking no
special variety of uncharted stimulation. Pleasure, without
strain, is good . The alternative- not seeing simple pleasures as enough- leads to self-defeat in appetitive seeking,
which is not enjoyment, but toil.
Worse, straining or working for enjoyment inflames the
inner impression that the special pleasure, having been
sought out with toil, is deserved. That reintroduces the problem of recompense, and expectation of good-in-kind. Still
worse, some searches for pleasure will occur on a scale larger
and grander than any available pleasure; in those cases, recompense is impossible, and the toil is vain. In intense straining for pleasure, there is no hope for reward-in-kind, only
despair.
Early in Ecclesiastes, Solomon so oveneaches for pleasure, and with such grand intent, that the pleasure is entirely overwhelmed by hate . That loathing comes from the
frush·ated sense ofrecompense, of which the account is this:
Solomon decides to hold onto his wisdom, while releasing
his body to temptation and folly (2:3). He envisions this as
an ambitious experiment which will teach whether a pleasure-directed life or a wisdom-directed life is better for man
on earth. He multiplies his holdings, slaves, buildings, gardens- all beyond measure. He acquires all his eyes want,
every enjoyment- and he enjoys himself for a time . In
Solomon's despairing words (2: 10) : "I got enjoyment out of
all my wealth. And that was all I got out of my wealth."
Without the strain of acquisition encouraging Solomon,
would he ever have desired more out of enjoyable things
than enjoyment? Probably not-the despair came from
overexpectation.
It can be thus with wisdom, too: wisdom is indeed fine
and good, and so it will seem until expected to enlighten
every depth, explain every bend. It is not surprising that
Solomon makes this connection between expecting too much
of pleasure and expecting too much of wisdom. His thoughts
above turn from the disposition of his monstrous estate after his death-it would be given to a man whose qualities
were unknown, unknowable-from this to the emptiness of

wisdom in the face of death. Solomon's desires reach beyond the capacities of any human means, and what can come
but loathing and despair? The loathsome world, every loathsome thing, the loathsome appetite that turns every available good grey for its inability to be more than it is-Solomon
hates, hates his life's indifference in death to his wisdom,
and hates his wealth's indifference in falling into the hand
of any heir, however undeserving. No recompense, pleasure gone, Solomon "loathed life . . . distressed by all that
goes on under the sun, because everything is futile and a
pursuit of wind" (2: 17). He loathes his wealth because it
will endure beyond his presumably wealth-deserving life,
obdurately willing to be spent by a fool. Wealth and death,
of so much interest to wise Solomon, do not return interest:
they care not a mite for him.
Unstrained pleasure, exemplified by eating and drinking, and youthful maniage, are commended. Such immediate pleasure, pretending to no advantage, searching for
no permanence, is good and real. Ecclesiastes' Solomon
hopes the wise will take this to heart. The pious may be
accustomed to seeking that which endures, but they should
not be trapped by that mode. Unstrained pleasures are the
good of life under the sun-no riches will make life more
worthwhile than do they (see, for example, 6:3).
MAN: SWAMPED BY M EN

Solomon is sunounded in space not only by accumulated wealth, and by his pleasure-seeking acquisitions , but
also by his multitude: Israel. He is bracketed in time by his
son and his father. Solomon's disgust at the thought of an
undeserving heir inheriting his wealth, mentioned above,
occupies a surprisingly large fraction of Ecclesiastes . This
prospect threatens Solomon' s esteem for himself; his fear
of some mishandling of his wealth in the future by an heir
is difficult for him to ignore . As it happens, this threat is
also connected to his past, for Solomon both was and has an
heir.
Solomon believes his wealth to be a God-given accessory to his God-given wisdom and knowledge and shrewdness. But why should his heir, if a fool, be so well equipped?
This question galls Solomon, for he wants his wealth to
reassure him; he wants his riches to prove to him, above all,
that God loves him. He would, with all his heart, that he
could believe it so; he would, with all his heart, that unique
wealth were evidence of unique divine favor. For all
Solomon's splendor and wisdom, God loved his father more.
Solomon may have built the temple, but David was after
God's own heart. Solomon, for all his splendor, for all God's
gifts, must know his heart's inferiority. King Solomon, recall, knows from the mouth of God that his heart was what
the Lord wants-and He wants it whole (I Kings 9:4).
Solomon knows that his kingship, his realm, his wisdom,
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comes from God, who, therefore, will not be impressed to
find him thus bedecked. He knows himself a freeloader,
heir to God's love for his father . His heir would inherit
material wealth, which is so much less. And if his heir is
an ungodly fool-and who could know-why, then Solomon
cam1ot pretend his gold is proof of God's tenderness toward
him. Gold will guild foreign idols as readily as temple walls.
When Solomon laments again and again in Ecclesiastes that
wealth falls to the unworthy as well as the worthy heir, we
hear the lamentation of a man encrusted with wealth, three
thousand proverbs, one thousand women, unrivaled grandeur, and every other asset which, taken together in stupendous sum, is outweighed in God's eyes by one faithful
heart-like the heart of Solomon's father. King David
feasted on the love of the Lord; everything Solomon has
falls from that table.
When Solomon remembers his father, he sometimes
thinks of his son, Rehoboam. Will he be wise, or a fool?
And while the words my son at the end of Ecclesiastes or in
Proverbs hardly represent Rehoboam, it is well to call him
to mind now and then. What, after all, would Solomon
want his child to have-his wealth? Yes, but also his wisdom. This is the work of Proverbs: the teaching of wisdom.
Proverbs, incidentally, are not wisdom coined; a parent can
give a child a proverb, but no parent can simply give a child
wisdom. Proverbs and human knowledge are contained in
books, but wisdom and understanding are at best conveyed
by books. Besides, there is no end to the making of books
(Ecclesiastes 12: 12), and Solomon would not have his son
forever rummaging in books for the good things like wisdom that books cannot contain. A reader of Ecclesiastes,
whether a son or not, is shown a great deal of emptinessand if attentive can learn where not to look for fullness of
life. That is a generous gift-to rummage less is to decrease despair. But if one seeks to eliminate rummaging
and despair, Ecclesiastes will seem useless and futile itself
Solomon cannot assist one who so completely misses his
point.
The book is, importantly, not splendidly engaging or
even terribly clear. Ecclesiastes is a knotty book because it
is a book about knots. Much of its beauty lies in its refusal
to shine, in its way of being suddenly gorgeous and then
just moving on. However maddening for the reader, it is
hard to see how a book could reflect the crookedness of the
world and its gifts onto a straight line. Wisdom, the great
flattener , is not flat; a discussion of wisdom, though it will
straighten some things out, will not itself be straightforward. Ecclesiastes is a singular inheritance-few would
value it. It must anguish Solomon to have glimmering
wealth and dark wisdom and an heir. Which will Rehoboam
value, having both? Whether Solomon looks back to his
father, or forward to his son, there is anguish.
Anguished Solomon seeks solace of just the wrong sort.
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another, who enjoy one another, who have happiness.
Solomon should know that many of the finest and most companionable things about people get smothered in crowds.
A thousand friends at once can give, at best, admirationbut not friendship . A thousand wives are less than one in
matters of comfort and fulfillment. It is the paradox of the
baron's gut: always full, never filled. It is a fool thing to
have a thousand women: always caressed, never comforted.
Not a husband so much as a connoisseur, he likes his wives
foreign . Surely frustrated, and altogether unable to soothe
his hea1t, this mass of wives deflect it to their gods, to Israel 's
enormous loss.
Wisdom, comfort- these things cannot be gotten from
a crowd. And if one crowds people together, and calls them
wives , why, one will still get no wisdom and no comfort.
When put in a crowd, the way to get is to grab, trap, snare.
Watch a crowd hy to touch a great man, and see hands become claws . Solomon surely lives in a miserable home,
and that is his fault. How sad to think that Solomon likely
got more happiness from the visit of Sheba than from all his
wives . Solomon's understanding of women as people is, at
best, skewed. 5
He engaged many women, but Ecclesiastes' Solomon
says he never found the woman he sought (7:28), but found
instead that "God made men plain, but they have engaged
in too much reasoning ." (7:29) It is a telling transition from
women to reason, for Solomon marginalized both in the
same way: by excess.
Solomon finds himself sunounded in time and in home
by people who, in different ways, make him miserable.
Solomon lives awash. In wealth, wisdom, women, worksin these and more he sinks his heart. They are not bad
things, but rather excess of good and goods. In this heaving sea of a home, Solomon looses his grasp on
wholeheartedness, a loss that turns all that he has, every
seeming gain or profit, grey.
Solomon's relationship to his father, his son, and his
wives is controlled by his relationship to his God. He could
have been his father's peer, even King David ' s superior, but
he turns from the Lord, and guarantees himself a second
place, despite wealth and wisdom, beneath David's great
heart. He could have been Rehoboam's great benefactor,
giving his son riches, wisdom, a united kingdom, and an
unbroken connection to that special love of the Lord that
was their intended boon- but Solomon turns from the Lord
(I Kings 11 :4), and his son's fortunes are splintered (I Kings
11 :32). He could have been a great and happy husband, but
he crowds his wives, cheating them of the distinction that
should have come from sharing a home with so splendid a
man. Instead, they are shamed indeed, remembered for the
ages as temptresses, as the catalyst of Solomon ' s tum from
the Lord. He could have been remembered as a pacific and
munificent king-but gives the people, in the end, not only
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oppress them (I Kings 12: 11). But Solomon's relation to
every one of them occurs in the context of his relation to the
jealous God, and would have been entirely different without His activity. He is the main character in King Solomon's
life, and the chief actor in the world portrayed by
Ecclesiastes. He is a most active and supreme Lord, who
pulls and twines every cord.

Goo:

LORD OF THE HIDDEN

God brings times and seasons just as He pleases, and
this is the point of a most repetitive, and oft repeated, set of
verses. Their familiarity obscures neither their dogged
sameness nor their rhythmic beauty (3: 1-11):
A season is set for everything, a time for every experience under heaven. A time for being born and a time for
dying, A time for planting and a time for uprooting the
planted; A time for slaying and a time for healing, A
time for tearing down and a time for building up; A time
for weeping and a time for laughing, A time for wailing
and a time for dancing; A time for throwing stones and a
time for gathering stones, A time for embracing and a
time for shunning embraces; A time for seeking and a
time for losing, A time for keeping and a time for discarding; A time for ripping and a time for sewing, A
time for silence and a time for speaking; A time for loving and a time for hating; A time for war and a time for
peace. What value, then, can the man of affairs get from
what he earns? I have observed the business that God
gave man to be concerned with: He brings everything to
pass precisely at its time; He also puts eternity in their
mind, but without man ever guessing, from first to last,
all the things that God brings to pass .

A time for sewing. Ecclesiastes sees God bringing everything to pass precisely at its time. These verses are not
primarily interested in soothing the listener. Rather, one
feels the utter pervasiveness of God's anangement of time
and event. God here sets a time for sewing .
God of the large, God of the small-all the things God
brings to pass-war and laughing, silence and peace. Humankind will never guess it-God has given them the notion of eternity, but not its content. Death comes , timed by
God, unknown to man .
This God is strong, and a man will not escape his time:
"man cannot contend with what is stronger than he." (6: 10)
And, since God gives the good time and the bad, one does
well to react well to both (7: 13-14):
Consider God's doing! Who can straighten out what He
has twisted? So in a time of good fortune enjoy the good
fortune; and in a time of misfortune, reflect: The one no
less than the other was God's doing; consequently, man
may find no fault with Him.

God twists lives, and the wise will see the bends. The
natural world, lasting longer than do men, curls its bends
all the way around into cycles, and it is in that way ever
same (Chapter 1); such a world calls for systematic accounting. But the human world was God-bent and truncated by
death: there will be no systematic view from beginning to
end (3: 10). This human world calls for wisdom, acuity,
shrewdness. Solomon knew to ask for wisdom and knowledge, for he was ruler not of the elements, but of Israel.
God made man simple, yes, but he remade Solomon wise.
Solomon's God is, fittingly, a giving God. Ecclesiastes, too,
finds God ever giving-giving times to human works, wisdom and wealth to His favored, eternity to their thoughts,
and death to all .
If the world were straight, it would be less frustrating .
But this frustration is the work of God (8: 10b-15a; note that
frustration is here translating 7:J ;i hebe!, or vanity):
And here is another frustration [vanity): the fact that the
sentence imposed for evil deeds is not executed swiftly,
which is why men are emboldened to do evil the fact
that a sinner may do evil a hundred times and his punishment still be delayed. For although I am aware that
"It will be well with those who revere God since they
revere Him, and it will not be well with the scoundrel,
and he will not live long, because he does not revere
God" here is a frustration [vanity] that occurs in the
world: sometimes an upright man is requited according
to the conduct of the scoundrel; and sometimes the scoundrel is requited according to the conduct of the upright.
I say that all this is frustration [vanity]. I therefore praised
enjoyment.

The identification of frustration leads to the praise of enjoyment-a primary movement in Ecclesiastes. That God-given
frustration often, as here, consists of a fact and a proverb in
opposition. Every element of this is God's doing.
The frustration is extraordinary, but results from the
contact of two most typical elements . The abo ve proverb is
of the very most familiar type: righteous rewarded and
wicked punished. The above observation-justice delayed and inverted on earth-is the most common counter-observation in wisdom literature. The frustration of combining
observation and proverb in the reactive manner above is the
very fuel of wisdom literature. There are numerous iterations. Though taken from the passage above, our present
example is also the mainspring of the Book of Job: the Godarranged fi'ustration of static wisdom by tempormy inversion of justice. There is very much more to so mighty a
book, but that is the mainspring.
God-given frustration is the great stimulant of wisdom:
without the strange gift of frustration, wisdom would be
absurd. Imagine again the uselessness of wisdom were human affairs straightforward, and again the uselessness of
wisdom were human affairs utterly scattered. God bends

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human affairs, but He does not shatter them. This twisted
(but not snapped) middle way is God's underlying giftand the environment where wisdom flourishes.
Wisdom isolated from frustration will wither into foolishness. Self-satisfied wisdom will be malign. So it is, for
example, with Job's comforters, who refuse to confront their
wisdom with the twist of Job's innocent suffering-if they
had, their dusty wisdom would have shivered, gasped, and
come to life. But more: they would have held to the mighty
promise' of restoration.
Consider: God keeps wisdom alive by allowing it to
make connections, but not of such pemrnnence or universality that it ossifies. This is the work of what we have
called stimulation and frustration. It is this divine agitation that engenders the resilience and tenacity characteristic of the wisest people. But, if this were the end of the
matter, wisdom being kept alive by nothing more than a
divine agitation, wisdom would also be entirely cynical. But
there is a second element: the promise of restoration. This
is what keeps wisdom right-side-up .
One may already have noticed that the bent character
of the world, were it isolated, would often produce wisdom
on its head-deviled proverbs like this: "It will not be well
with those who revere God since they revere Him, and it
will be well with the scoundrel, and he will live long, because he does not revere God ." (a conuption of 8: 12f) It is
the promise of restoration which prevents this: frustration
stimulates wisdom, keeping it alive, and then the promise
of restoration keeps it facing in one direction (the righteous
direction, of course). Now, restoration marks the endpoint
of frustration, and the endpoint of frustration is the endpoint of wisdom's liveliness. Restoration is also the endpoint of Ecclesiastes (12:14). Restoration must occur, to
keep wisdom upright, but must occur last, so as not to cut
off wisdom from the frustration which keeps it lively. Restoration marks the end of an excursion into wisdom.
MAN AND W ISDOM

It is, of course, difficult for people when the hope of
restoration is put at the end. It seems s'o far off. Yet, for the
sake of wisdom's liveliness, the end is the only place restoration can go. Happily there is, as we have seen, the intermediate comfort of simple enjoyment: it is pleasure that
makes lively upright wisdom livable on earth. Affliction is
very good for wisdom, but not very good for people. A wise
people will be best served by bad and good times, enjoyment and affliction. Both must be ultimately empty, so that
there is, ultimately, a need to look to a hope ofrestorationkeeping a wise people right-side-up, that is, upright. It is a
good God that, yes, twists human affairs, but then provides
the promise of restoration and recompense and judgment to
help men regain the uprightness with which He created them
(7:29).

This is the work of God portrayed in Ecclesiastes, the
very difficult gift of wisdom, a gift lacking in the sort of
profit that would undo itself. The wise have no profit in
respect to their being alive-the fool is alive just the same .
And death comes for all.
The wise in the face of nature and time on earth will
discover no impossible advantage, no real value, and they
will have pain and enjoyment like the fool. But the words
of Ecclesiastes will lodge in the hearts ofa few, and irritate.
These are Solomon's true heirs, holders of a dark and fertile
gift.
Every human spirit is alive, but the wise spirit is liveliest .

ENDNOTES

1. The new Jewish Publication Society translation is used
throughout, and occasionally the Seow translation from the
Anchor Bible series; passages taken from the latter are noted.
Often a passage will be involved in one of the many textual
difficulties of Ecclesiastes. These difficulties are important, scholarly, and technical, and they are ignored throughout the paper.
2. Loss and restoration for Israel occupies the interest of
much of the Scriptures. A reading of Lamentations fits well
with Ecclesiastes when considering that subject, and much
could be said (elsewhere) about them together.
3. Accomplice connotes it well. The same surprising connotation is found in Matthew 10: 16, a most memorable
Christian command: "be ye therefore wise as serpents and
harmless as doves ."
4. The word translated here as simple, or upright is the one
used by God to describe Job to the Satan ( 1117' , yashar).
Seow renders itjust right. It is also, as L. Kem recalls, the
root for the command given to Israeli taxicab drivers who
need to go straight at intersections.
S. Two comments about Solomon and women are appropriate here: First, the famous concluding acrostic of Proverbs,
on the virtuous woman (31 : 10-31 ), is explicitly not from
Solomon, but from King Lemuel of Massa ' s mother. The
more than twenty references to women in the Solomonic
sections Proverbs are, with one small exception, about
strange women, odious women, whorish women, and so on.
Both Solomon and the Solomonic proverbs are lopsided
when it comes to women.
Second, we can reread the dark and deeply strange story of
Solomon's judgment over the two women and their baby.
This paper's main reading is focused on the wisdom displayed, not the people involved. The story emphasizes, as
does this paper, that these women are prostitutes. Solomon's
threat to halve the baby seems to assume that the only way
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preservation instinct: an animal reaction. It certainly assumes that the lying prostitute will have, not human compassion, but brutish indifference to the child, at best. And
Solomon may genuinely qave been ready to halve a baby
that is, after all, illegitimate. That is, Solomon may see all

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three as effectively subhuman or animal. While we may
tend to see two grieved mothers and a baby, Solomon likely
sees two whores and a bastard. Solomon is just the sort of
person one can imagine handing a woman a writhing half
of what was her baby.

Tiffany Joly
Andrew Baisch, A '00

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A Decent Burial

Christopher Colby, SJC Community
I love a good funeral, especially an in-law's. I'm
just that way. Blood relatives' are even better. A chance to
share one last lie about their useless lives before they're
planted six feet under. But when Brownie died, I must say
I was touched.
Poor Brownie.
I had just gotten home from happy hour. Not too sober,
not too tight; enough to chase away the gloom of another
grey work-week. There, under his ratty plaid blanket, he
lay.
Two-hundred pounds of dead mutt.
Well, not really a mutt. The Woman's St. Bernard, you
understand. I was not overwrought, like The Woman and
#1 Daughter were, at Brownie's demise, however.
I had long tired of Brownie's thunderclap farts that
withered flowers a block away. I found it a great relief that
I wouldn't have to cart away any more of his wheel-barrelsized turds that daily littered the patio. A mine-field of
poop. How is it that a dog's stomach can do that to Alpo
Crunchies?
Brownie had his own room. Big enough to house any
number of the homeless.
Brownie had health insurance. More than most Americans.
Brownie had birthday parties, toys under the Christmas tree.
Brownie ate more grams of protein than entire thirdworld nations do each day .
And, oh yes, how could I forget? When Brownie was
feeling a little low, The Woman had a psychiatrist for him.
"Can I have some of his Prozac?" I asked once, feeling
a bit low myself. But The Woman's eyes shot fire-darts at
me.
Brownie was dead. I knew this wasn't going to be as
much fun as Uncle Bertie's funeral last month. Brownie
was a gift from me on the anniversary of one of our weddings . #1 Daughter had not yet been born, and Brownie
helped to break up the intensity of our empty life together.
Pets and children can do that sometimes.
"How ya gonna bury him?" the #1 asked me.
"I'm not. We ' ll have him butchered and donate the
meat to a soup kitchen." That sent The Woman to our bedroom in tears. She's never had much of a funny-bone.
"Da-ad, you're such a pig." Will no one teach our children it's only one syllable? Now that the onslaught of puberty has left its scars on her, the #1 D has few illusions left.
Like the rest of us. Claire always said there was a mean

streak in every Thule she'd ever known. I, her son, was the
only exception to the rule I knew of in all my family. But
the # 1 seemed to fit the pattern quite well.
"See? She can't help it: it's in the genes," I always tell
The Woman.
But what was I to do with Brownie? Our rowhouse
backyard in St. Paul was a small cement patio. No cemetery there. I considered the dumpster at the supermarket
across the street. Or maybe, in the middle of the night,
chucked off the Mendota Bridge into the Mississippi? This
needed some thought. I'm good at planning things, though.
It's my job.
"I'm off to The Democratic Club," I tell the locked bedroom door. Hat in hand, and out the door.
"You're such a pig, Da-ad."

***
Now, you might think the Democratic Club is named
after the political organization. It isn't. That would give it
a kind of high-mindedness it certainly doesn't deserve. One
might think it's democratic, you know, open and equal to
all. That its membership is a social and cultural cross-section of the Twin Cities. It's not, and the roster is suspiciously fair-skinned. The name has the advantage, though,
of hiding any number of sins.
No members ever brought their wives.
No, I really think it's named 'The Democratic Club'
because, after a few gallons of beer or liters of gin, members
sit at their table or the mahogany bar and talk about all the
things they hate in the world. We're not racists, or antipolitical, or chauvinists, you see. We hate everyone equally,
democratic-like.
Mark, my brother-in-law, my sister's husband, that is,
introduced me to the D .C. years ago. I am quite fond of
Mark. We don 't talk about our wives or our family. We are
islands of mutual comfort at dinners, reunions, and weddings. Baptisms and funerals, Thanksgiving and Christmas. At these occasions, Mark and I drink away the tedium
family life indentures us to. I had long surmised by the
amount of time he spent at the D .C. that he was like the rest
of the unhappy husbands that crossed its doorsteps daily.
Poor bastard- I grew up with his wife, after all.
When I entered that Friday night, he was resting his
buns on a tall stool, one foot propped against a decorative
spittoon. He pitched salty peanuts into his mouth.
"Hey."

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"How're you?" he slurs at me . Um, he's had a six-pack
at least, and not even on seven o'clock. I can catch up
though- I've had more experience, you see.
Before I settled in, a very dry martini slid before my
nose.
"Thanks. Yeah, start a tab."
I'm partial to gin, you see. Martinis especially. Dry,
with ice the only mixer. Just a squeeze of lemon. It's a
delicious way to eat olives, and my doctor says I need more
fiber in my diet anyway.
Ten minutes later, after the third, I told him about
Brownie.
"Christ, that's a pain in the ass. Wadya gonna do with
him?"
Somewhere between gin #10 and gin #11 I figure out
what to do with Brownie.
"We'll hold a drawing for him," I said. Gawd, when I
get on a roll, I'm good .
"But he 's dead ," Mark objected. Mark can be so annoying at times.
"Of course he's dead, but we won't tell anyone."
"You'll piss a lot of people off," said Sam. The bartender had gotten pretty interested by now.
"No we won't, only the winner, and we'll give his money
back ."
Sam nods his head in thoughtful approval, even allowing as how I could keep Brownie in the beer cooler until the
raffle was over. He lent me the two-wheel dolly to haul
Brownie's one-tenth of a ton over. Now, I've always liked
Sam. I don 't hold the opinion, shared by others, that he
short-changes everyone after they've tipped a few. There
now, people can be so nasty, even members of the Democratic Club.
I left Mark at the D.C. with his promise to help me
move Brownie the next day. Home, over-ginned as usual,
but content with my world: we had a plan. I didn 't try to go
to the bedroom where The Woman was sleeping. I am used
to the sofa in the study.
Next to a half-eaten and petrified hot dog, I laid my
wallet on the desk. It did seem a little lighter than usual ...
I eased my rump onto the sofa, seeking the slight depression it had worn after so many years. Life was getting
back to normal.

***
"Da-ad, Mum says ya gotta take Brownie to the SPCA."
My foggy head was in the refrigerator, looking for something cold to pour over my shoe-leather tongue.
"She took the steamer trunk from the attic, and ya gotta
take Brownie in it to the SPCA. She says they'll bury
Brownie for us."
Dreams of paying off several weeks w01ih of gin at the
D.C. with raffle money vanished in my pulsating head.
"She left a note on the table, and won't be back from
Gramrny's until tomorrow afternoon."

#1 left, head wrapped in a towel. This week's color
was purple. Last week was "manic red."
"And call Uncle Markie ."
Her bare feet plop-plopped on the kitchen floor as she
left.
The Woman ' s note gave instructions and the address
where I was to take Brownie.

***
"Maybe you should have put him in the trunk before
rigor mortis set in," Mark said.
It had been difficult bending Brownie's legs so the lid
would shut and latch properly . Brownie could be such an
ornery cuss when he wanted. Mark told me then that Paula
had the car, at Claire's, for the weekend. Gawd, what would
we be without our mothers-in-law?
"We'll havta take a taxi."

***
"No way," the cabby said when he got there. When I
began to argue and threaten, he drove off, waving good-bye
to me with his middle finger.
"Hell, we'll have to take an MTC bus ."

***
We huffed and pulled the trunk into the bus, where,
covering the "Handicapped Seating Only" sign, we propped
Brownie. On Hennepin Ave., a grey-haired lady limped
aboard, led by a small child. Looking for somewhere near
to sit, she tapped at the trunk with her cane.
"Please, could you sir?"
"Sit somewhere else," I snarled at her. What the hell.
People these days have no sense of proportion . It's The
Woman's dog, for gawd's sake.
"No sensitivity to others ."
"Oh ya, do whatever they want," Mark says.
Someone behind us asks what that smell is.
"Some kinda cheese?"
"Um, what kind ya s 'pose?"
"Puts me in mind of Asiago." A little girl starts to cry.
"No, more like a ripe Brie."
"Camembert?" someone suggests .
"Maybe it' s Fontina," Mark pipes up . My elbow in his
ribs shuts him up quickly. We drag Brownie out to transfer
at Nicollet Ave., just before the mob got too dangerous.
"Hey, there's Charlie's D&amp;D Tavern," Mark says.
I love that about Mark.
"Let's have a brew until the bus comes."

***
Two hours later I remember Brownie, left outside. We
drink a couple more, then head out the door to gather
Brownie for his last constitutional.
The trunk is gone.

***
At the Democratic Club, an hour later, Mark asked what
I was going to tell The Woman.

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I grabbed him by the throat and I shake his head back
and forth.
"We gave him a decent burial."
I could hear his brains swish in beer at every jerk I gave
him. He can be so annoying at times.
Next afternoon I was still napping off Saturday's memories. Downstairs I could hear The Woman and #1 Daughter
talking in the kitchen. The #1 D taps at my door and peeks
her head in. I was wrong. More like cranberry than purple.

Untitled
Caroline Picard, '02

COLBY

"Yo, dude, Mum and I are going to the pet store to get
a puppy."
"Get a chihuahua."
"Da-ad, you're such a pig. " #1 's tongue can clip a
hedge: God help the poor son-of-a-bitch that marries her.
Maybe I'll see him at the D.C. someday, too.
I roll over and snuggle my rump into its favorite spot.

Waterwitch
Cara Gormaliy, A '02

�ENERGEIA

Les Poetes des Sept Ans : Arthur Rimbaud
French Translation
Matthew Holtzman, A '00
Les Poetes des Sept Ans

Seven-Year-Old Poets

Et la Mere, formant le livre du devoir,
S'en allait satisfaite et tres fiere sans voir,
Dans les yeux bleus et sous le front plein d'eminences,
L'ame de son enfant livree aux repugnances.

And the mother closed the workbook with an air
Of pride, went away, satisfied yet unaware
That beneath his furrowed brow and behind his sweet blue
eyes,
The spirit of her child was given to despise.

Tout le jour il suait d'obeissance; tres
Intelligent; pourtant des tics noirs, quelque traits
Semblaient prouver en lui d' acres hypocrisies.
Dans I' ombre des couloirs aux tentures moisies,
En passant il tirait la langue, Jes deux poings
Al' aine, et dans ses yeux fermes voyait des points.
Une porte s'ouvrait sur le soir: a la lampe
On le voyait, l'a-haut, qui ralait sur la rampe,
Sous un golfe de jour pendant du toit. L'ete
Surtout, vaincu, stupide, ii etait entete
A se renfermer dans la fraicheur des latrines:
II pensait la, tranquille et livrant ses narines

All day long he toiled in diligence, and though of great
Intelligence, certain dark suspicious traits
Spoke of a mind embittered with hypocrisies.
And when, in dark halls, he passed the musty tapestries,
He stuck out his tongue, jammed his fist in his pants,
And shut his eyes tight to make motes of light dance.
A door swung wide on the night, by lamplight
He could be seen, high up, blind, drowning on a flight
Of stairs, beneath the sun flooding from the ceiling.
In the summer, undone, amazed, he found it most
appealing
In the outhouse, in the chill dark all enclosed;
And there he thought, tranquilly, opening his nose.

Quand, lave des odeurs du jour le jardinet
Derriere la maison, en hiver, s'illunait,
Gisant au pied d'un mur, entene dans la mame
Et pur des vision ecrasant son a:il dame,
II ecoutait grouiller les galeux espaliers.
Pitie, ses enfant seuls etait ses familiers
Qui, chetifs, front nus, a:il detaignant sur la joue,
Cachant de maigres doigts jaunes et noires de boue
Sous des habits puant la faire et tout viellots,
Conversaient avec la douceur des idiots!
Et si, l'ayant supris a des pities immondes,
Sa mere s 'effrayait; !es tendresses, profondes,
De l' enfant se jetaient sur cet etonnement.
C'etait bon. Elle avait le bleu regard, - qui ment!

When the garden, washed clean of the smells of noon,
Behind the house, in winter, was filled with the moon;
Interred in marl, at the foot of a partition,
And rubbing at his bleary eyes to conjure visions,
He listened to the barren fruit trees moan and bend.
Alas! The paupers' children were his only friends;
Who, unfed, heads bare, with eyes sunk in their cheeks,
And sickly fingers, black with mud, jaundiced and weak
Hidden beneath quaint consignment rags, fragrant with
stool,
Sweetly conversed with him in the gentle speech of fools.
And if, catching him immersed in sinful sympathies,
His mother took offense, with soothing pleasantries
The child would try to calm her, to temper her surprise .
All was well; she still received the blue look - that lies!

A sept ans, ii fai sait des romans, sur la vie
Du grand desert, ou luit la Liberte ravie,
F6rets , soleils, rives, savanes ! - 11 s 'aidait
De Journaux illustres ou, rouge, il regardait
Des Espagnoles rire et des ltaliennes.
Quand venait, l'reil brun, folle , en robes d'indiennes,
-Huit ans- la fille des ouvriers d'a cote,

At seven years he wrote passionate romances
On life in the vast desert where shimmering freedom dances:
Forests, shorelines, suns, plateaus! He would aid
His fantasies with picture books. The drawings made
Him stare, the Spanish women made him blush with shame .
But when that brown eyed, crazy neighbor's daughter came,
(Eight years old in a calico dress - a little brute)
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La petite brutale, et qu' elle avait saute,
Dans un coin, sur son dos, en secouant ses tresses,
Et qu 'il etait sous elle, ii lui mordait les fesses,
Car elle ne portait jamais de pantalons;
-Et, par elle meurtri des poings et de talons,
Remportait les saveurs de sa peau dans sa chambre.

She jumped at him, he hid from her, she gave pursuit,
Cornered him, mounted him, then through storms of hair,
Note: the savage never bothered wearing underwear,
Maneuvering to deflect her blows, he bit her ass .
And, still smarting from his tussle with the feral lass,
He took the taste of her sweet flesh back to his room.

II craignait !es blafards dirnanches de decembre,
Ou, pommade, sur un gueridon d'acajou,
11 lisait une Bibile a la tranche vert-chou;
Des reves l'oppressaient chaque nuit dans !'alcove.
Il n' aimait pas Dieu; mais les hommes, qu'au soir fauve,
Noirs, en blousse, ii voyait rentrer dans le faubourg
Ou !es crieurs, en trois roulement de tambour,
Font autour des edits rire et grondes les foules.
-11 revait la prairie amoureuse, ou des houles
Lumineuse, parfums sains, pubescences d' or,
Font leur remuement calme et prennent leur essor!

He feared the wan December Sundays when, well-groomed
And powdered, he would stand and read long passages
From a Bible with pages green as cabbages.
Dreams oppressed his sleep each night in the alcove,
He loved men, not God, men like those he ' d see rove
The streets on mazy evenings, dressed in over-alls
Gathering round the criers to mutter and guffaw
At each new edict they announced with drumming din.
-He dreamed of loveswept plains, where golden perfumed
winds,
Pubescent zephyrs of invigorating light,
Would rustle calmly in the sage, and then take flight!

Et comme ii savourait sourtout les sombres choses,
Quand, dans la chambre nue aux persiennes closes,
Haute et bleue, acrement prise d'hurnidite,
II lisait son roman sans cesse medite,
Plein de lourds ciels ocreux, et de f6rets noyees,
De fleurs de chair bois siderals depolyees,
Vertige, ecroulements, deroutes, et pitie!
-Tandis que faisait la rumeur du quartier,
En bas, - seul, et couche sur des pieces de toiles
Ecrue, et pressentant violemment la voile!

And since it was the somber that he savored above all,
When, in his empty room with sweating acrid walls,
Dark behind drawn blinds, with a ceiling high and blue,
He'd read his storybooks, he'd read them each sh·aight
through:
Taken in by ponderous ochre skies, drowned tree tops,
Flowers of flesh unfolding in a starlit copse,
Vertigo, collapses, betrayals, and sympathy.
-The streets still murmured on outside his fantasies Alone, he sat transfixed by these transfiguring tales,
On linen sheets, which violently suggested sails.

�Highway 4 New Mexico
Peter Heyneman, '02
Looking down upon the valley
ringed by red mesas
patchwork shadows of perfect clouds
quilt the low green weed hills but
forever wide.
Wide as the inside of Christ's mouth.
Swallowing the world between the cows
and the molars of sun and sky.
The breath of the wind,
as a solid wall of air, marching up
the mountains and into
the wild peaks. Wider than one man
can see without swivelling around, wider
than he can stretch his arms or the distance between his eyes.
As the blanket of shadows ripples
in the breeze and the breeze
hums to him foolishly
a man could feel awe, fear,
that the expanse
the space
is engulfing him, ingesting his car,
his camera, his shoes, his hands and
leaving his bones to be bleached beside Highway 4
to be ignored by less observant travellers.
But this is not the valley.
This is looking
down upon it.

Aswan
Karin Ekholm, A '00

�The Legacy of Claudius Ptolemy
Cordell D.K. Yee, Tutor

3 Sketches
Melina Hoggard, A '00

When we use a map, we take it for granted that it will
present accurate information. We usually don't think much
about maps until they fail us. Still less do we think of those
who make maps, especially now that they can be computergenerated. We can go on the Internet (e.g., MapQuest) and
find a map of just about any place we want and, in many
cases, have one made to our specifications.
We owe a good deal of our cartographic good fortune to
one of the authors in the St. John's Program, Claudius
Ptolemy. We study one of his works, the Almagest, as one
overturned by the Copernican revolution. The most memorable features of what we read are probably the errors: a
geocentric conception of the universe, uniform circular
motion, epicycles, and the equant. We do not study what is
probably Ptolemy's most lasting conh·ibution: the Geography.
This book represents the completion of Ptolemy's ash·onomical work. If the Almagest shows how mathematics
helps one understand divine and heavenly things, the Geography shows how mathematics helps us to order earthly
things. In the Almagest, Ptolemy placed a network of meridians and parallels on the sphere of the fixed stars as a
way of locating objects in the heavens. He saw that the
same network could be reduced and placed on the earth's
surface. All positions on the earth would then be uniquely
identified by a pair of coordinates. In the Geography, one
of the things Ptolemy does is extend his method of ordering
heavenly space to earthly space. He also provides coordinates for about 8,000 places. Tables of these coordinates
make up the bulk of the Geography. For that reason, it is
not a particularly readable book.
Nonetheless, the Geography is important because it is
a precursor to the coordinate space that supposedly marks
the transition from ancient to modem mathematics, a focus
of the sophomore mathematics tutorial. It s~ems to be no
accident that a number of key modern mathematiciansGauss, Euler, and Descartes, for example-took an interest
in maps, and more specifically, mathematical maps made
according to Ptolemy's techniques.
Ptolemy described h·ansformations by means of which
one could h·ansfer points on sphere to a plane or flat surface
(see Figures 1 and 2) . Such transformations are needed for
practical and mathematical reasons. Globes are more accurate representations of the earth than flat sheets of paper (or
papyrus or parchment), but they can be hard to cany around.
If one were interested in a small area, the globe would have
to be rather large to accommodate the necessary detail. For

Figure 1. One of Ptolemy 's transformations. (From
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such areas, a flat, r~llable or foldable medium would be
easier to handle.
But one cannot simply take a globe and flatten it out: it
is impossible to do so and preserve the original proportions
and shapes of the figures on the globe. As a practical demonstration of this fact, one can try to flatten a grapefruit
rind that has been hollowed out. It will not flatten out without tearing or overlapping on itself. The same result would
happen with the surface of the earth. Ptolemy did not demonstrate this mathematically, but seemed to appreciate its
truth. The mathematical demonstration would not come
until Euler published a proof in the eighteenth century. 2
A flattened-out globe would have rips and overlapping
areas: distances and directions would be distorted. The discontinuous map would lose some of its usefulness . Ptolemy
explains how one can derive a flat, continuous map from
the globe. But these flat maps entail some loss: to put it
simply one can preserve shape while losing accuracy in area;
one can preserve area at the expense of shape .3 Maps drawn
on projections are usually a compromise: they sacrifice a
little of both area and shape (see Figures 3-5). Ptolemy's
transformations were geometrical: geometrical conshuctions
are employed to relocate points on the globe to a plane. Each
point is relocated following the same procedure, as in the
Hjelmslev transformation employed in senior mathematics.
And, like the Hjelmslev transfo1mation, certain characteristics of the original are retained , while others are lost.
The map transformation, or projection, results in a rep lotting of the lines of latitude and longitude, altering their configuration on the plane . The transformation associates each
position on the sphere with one and only one position on
the plane. From here it is not a long jump to the notion of
functions . Since the development of analytic geomeh)', map
transformations, or projections, have often been expressed
in terms of mathematical functions. These are equations of
lines: they describe the behavior of meridians and parallels
on the plane surface.
Contemplation of the lines of latitude and longitude on
the globe could have led to other insights. A Gauss or Euler
might have noticed that on a globe it is possible for tTiangles (non-Euclidean of course), to contain two 90-degree
angles, to have an angle sum greater than 180 degrees. Map
projection could have been conceived as transfom1ing a nonEuclidean space into a Euclidean one. Thinking about maps
could have been a way of beginning to think about different
kinds of space.
None of these possibilities are made explicit by Ptolemy
in the Geography. It seems to be intended primarily as a
manual for mapmaking. But it also seems to be no small
coincidence that the development of analytic geometry and
non-Euclidean geometry follow close behind the reintroduction of the Geography to Europe.

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It is necessary to speak of a reintroduction because for
about ten centuries Ptolemy was unknown to scholars in
Europe. Ptolemy completed the Geography in the second
century C.E. After the fall of Rome in the fifth century the
work was lost in Europe. European scholars were not reacquainted with it till the end of the fourteenth century.
During this period of Ptolemaic darkness , maps of the
world were made more for religious purposes than for the
communication of geographic information. Some showed
Jemsalem as the "center" of a what appears to be a diskshaped earth. It is unclear what people in Europe thought
of the world during this time . The disk-like representations
of the earth could have been attempts to represent a globe
by mapmakers who did not fully understand how to achieve
an illusion of depth. Scholars would have had access to
writings, by Aristotle, for example, according to whom the
world was a sphere. What commoners thought is largely
unknown, as they had no access to books. In any case, in
the absence of the Geography and other Greek works, scholars in medieval Europe probably had at best a hazy notion
of the earth's dimensions.
The Geography, however, was known to Islamic and
Byzantine scholars. Contact between Europe and Byzantium
was limited until the late middle ages . In the late fourteenth century, Byzantium was under pressure from the
Turks, and Byzantine scholars began making their way to
Europe. One was Manuel Chrysoloras, who was invited to
Florence to teach Greek. In 1400, a Florentine who had
obtained a copy of the Geography from Constantinople asked
Chrysoloras to translate it into Latin. Chrysoloras handed
the job to one of his students who finished the translation in
about 1406.
Florentine scholars began touting the work, and more
copies were transcribed. The advent of printing later in the
century hastened the spread of the Geography. The print
revolution, almost concurrent with cartographic revolution,
made mass literacy possible (not to mention a Great Books
program). The wide distribution of Ptolemy ' s work was not
simply a matter of technology. The book did capture imaginations . The Almagest had been available in Latin translation since the twelfth century, more than two centuries before the Geography was translated, and the merits of the
Almagest's mathematical model of the cosmos were recognized.
But no one made the leap that Ptolemy had made centuries before and saw that his method of ordering celestial
space could be applied to the earth. Roger Bacon had proposed that earthly positions be identified by coordinates but,
without a clear notion of the earth's dimensions, lacked a
way to make definite assignments: he could not determine a
unit. In addition, his proposal, made before printing, was
hardly known. With the established authority of the was
positioned to stimulate a cartographic revolution.

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Once one accepts that the earth is one sphere at the
center of another, the reduction of the celestial coorqinate
system to fit the earth's surface becomes an easy step to
take. One sees that taking the height of the polestar at midnight would yield a latitudinal measurement. Longitudinal
coordinates can be determined by a combination of astronomical measurements and linear measurements on the
earth's surface. The task of those wishing to make a world
map was simplified by Ptolemy's inclusion of coordinates .
One could, and quite a few people did, reconstruct a Ptolemaic world picture from the data in the Geography (see
Figure 6).
Such a reconstruction is required since none of
Ptolemy's maps survives intact, and the provenance of the
fragments of maps that survive in manuscript is unknown.
The coordinates Ptolemy provides in the Geography are
intended for a world map and twenty-six regional maps,
and Renaissance editions of the book often include reconstructions of those maps .
Looking at a Ptolemaic world map, one can get a sense
of why the Geography stined the imagination. If we accept
that the earth is spherical, and if we tmst Ptolemy 's coordinates, it appears that roughly two-thirds of the earth's surface is unknown. The map ends abmptly just south of the
equator. The Eurasian landmass extends at least 180 de grees longitudinally, and perhaps even more. In Europe,
human beings stretched themselves out to know the rest.
There were, of course, other reasons for the European
expansion into parts known and unknown. There were economic benefits to finding sea routes to Asia that would allow merchants to avoid middlemen in the Middle East.
There was also the quest for gold. Good maps were a necessity in these endeavors. Even so, it does not seem plausible to discount completely intellectual curiosity, a desire
to fill in the world map.
In hindsight we can see that there is much that is wrong
in Ptolemy's world picture . Ptolemy po1irayed the Indian
Ocean as landlocked. He underestimated the ea1ih ' s circumference-incidentally, this underestimate probably
helped to mislead Columbus into thinking that sailing westward from Europe would be a shortcut to Asia. Since
Ptolemy was working before air travel, aerial photography,
satellite imaging, and accurate tin1epieces, errors would have
to be expected. Ptolemy himself seems to have expected
that his data would be improved. It is impossible that he
took the measurements for all 8,000 coordinates by himself. For places far from Alexandria, his home city, Ptolemy
would have had to rely on reports from travellers, and he
recognizes that such reports would tend to be unreliable.
Thus the world picture he offers is more of a hypothesis than an established fact. He expected refinements and
corrections. Measurements need to checked and re-checked,
not only because of errors and variations in observations
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hand reports need to be verified, and, if possible, replaced
by measurements with instruments.
With Europe ' s economic expansion into Asia and the
New World, mapmakers had opportunities to refine old geographic data and to collect new data . Pilots for the J?utch
East India Company, for example, took measurements of
their positions, and the English East India Company sponsored a trigonometrical survey of India.
Improvements to Ptolemy's world picture were not
steady. Old information has a way of ossifying. It can take
some time for conect information to win acceptance, so that
old atlases often present both Ptolemaic and Copernican
models of the cosmos. Further impediments to progress
were laziness and the profit motive. A later map is not
necessarily better than an earlier one. The wide availability

of print technology made map piracy easy. It was more
economical for a map publisher to copy someone's else's
map than to draw a new one . (Today with photography,
photocopying, and scanning widely and inexpensively available, the temptations to map plagiary are even stronger. Map
publishers wishing to protect their intellectual property have
been known to include fake place names on their maps in
order to trap the would-be pirates.)
Despite the hindrances, the progress made in mapping
is clear and distinct (see Figure 7). The easy reproducibility of a map also made geographic data open to scrutiny and
potentially to verification and falsification. Reproducibility of results and potential falsification would prove cenn·al
to the scientific enterprise. The painstaking process of verifying geographic information, not only the profit motive,

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also led to greater uniformity in maps. To some extent, the
uniformity was the mark of agreement on what was the case.
The easy reproducibility of geographic data, while making it easy to plagiarize, also inhibits unscrupulous practices. Once an updated world picture has won general acceptance, an unscrupulous map publisher will no longer find
it profitable to keep reprinting umevised maps. No one
wishing to keep geographically current would want to buy a
map depicting California as an island, for example.
When one looks at a reconstructed Ptolemaic map, one
question that arises is that of purpose. In his tables of coordinates, Ptolemy provides nothing about roads, and on the
reconstructed maps, no roads are shown. The maps were
not meant for travel and, since they do not show roads, would
not seem to be of much use for that purpose. They seem to
have been meant to as reference tools, to give users a sense
of where places were. This sort oflooking could have been
an end in itself. The act of looking at the earth whole in a
single gaze is physically permitted to a being that can see
two hemispheres at once . In a way a flat map of the earth
gave us superhuman power: it lifted us off our planet.
In the Almagest Ptolemy says that he is interested in
understanding motion, both celestial and tenestrial : "almost every peculiar attribute of material nature becomes

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apparent from the peculiarities of its motion from place to
place." 1 A key element in understanding motions is to know
where they occur-where they begin and end, and where
they pass. To gain an understanding of human movements,
often one begins by considering where they took place. Not
surprisingly, then, history was one of the ends of cartography in the surge of mapmaking that began after the European rediscovery of Ptolem y. Abraham Ortelius, a Renaissance map publisher, called mapmaking the "eye of history."2 The earth, as the poet Samuel Daniel put it, is the
"universal map of deeds ." 3 Maps do help us to understand
that geography at least contributes to destiny, as in the case
of Athens' Sicilian expedition.
There is one respect in which modern mapmaking has
not followed Ptolemy's instructions. The Geography focuses on mathematical cartography based on measurement.
This sort of mapmaking, geographia, is what lent Ptolemy's
book its name. But Ptolemy describes another type of
mapmaking, one for small areas, chorographia. This type
of mapmaking does not require the skills of a mathemati_ian, but those of a painter. The emphasis of geographia is
c
on the quantitative (to poson). In contrast, the emphasis of
chorographia is not on position, but on the quality (to poion)
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if geographia presents the entire body, chorograph.ia fo- be lost-features that say something about and often affect
cuses on a small area such as the eye .
the people living there (see Figures 8 and 9) .
Ptolemy does not say much about chorography, but ReBy including a brief mention of chorography in a
naissance interpreters all seem to agree that it is meant to manual of mathematical mapmaking, Ptolemy may have
be pictorial rather than abstract and geometrical. With the been warning of the limitations of a mathematical approach
triumph of mathematics in the natural sciences, pictorial to the world. It is reductive in more ways than one . A
maps have become less and less important in mapmaking. " quantitative approach to mapmaking not only regularizes
If atlases today include city maps at all, these tend to be the earth's surface, but is also less challenging, less demandplans, which tell little about the architectural character of ing than a qualitative approach. According to Ptolemy, a
the places they represent, suggest little about the look of mathematical map can be made by almost anyone. These
places. On plans, distinctive local characteristics tend to are the types of maps that are readily available in this newly
christened information age. Ptolemy implies that such ease

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is not characteristic of chorographic, pictorial maps. Modem examples of such maps are hard to find, even in this age
of computer-aided design. So there seems to be something
to what Ptolemy says . It seems that we should be describing quantitative studies as soft, and qualitative studies as
hard.
ENDNOTES

Almagest 1.1 (Toomer trans.) .
Abraham Ortelius, Preface, Theatrum orbis terrarum (1570;
English-text edition, London, 1606).
3
Samuel Daniel, Musophilus (1599), 1. 910.
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(all of which have been used here)
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Harley, J.B., and David Woodward, eds. The History
of Cartography, Vol. 1: Cartography in the Prehistoric,
Ancient and Medieval Europe and the Mediterranean .
Chicago: University of Chicago Press, 1987 .
Monmonier, Mark. How to Lie with Maps. Chicago:
University of Chicago Press, 1991 .
Osserman, Robert. Poetry of the Universe: A Mathematical Exploration of the Cosmos. New York: Doubleday,
1995.
Ptolemaeus, Claudius. Geographia. Ed. C. F. A . Nobbe.
1843-5; rpt. Hildesheim: Georg Olms, 1966. (There is a
poorly regarded translation by Edward Luther Stevenson
available in a Dover reprint.)
Snyder, John P . Flattening the Earth.· Two Thousand
Years of Map Projections. Chicago: University of Chicago
Press, 1993.

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One must know, dearest friend, that, just as in our daily
life nothing is truly great which is great to despise, such as
riches, honors, reputations, sovereignty, and as many other
things which have an exaggerated exterior-nor would one
in his right mind deem things to be surpassingly good whose
very contempt is good without measure-indeed, one ad0mires those capable of having these things, but through a
greatness of soul choose instead to look down upon them,
rather than those who have them-just so, must one consider it here, in the case of the elevated in both poetry and
prose; one would not have some image of greatness such as
that in which many works are artlessly conceived; unfolded
differently, these would only prove empty, works which are
more fittingly held in contempt than admired. For, our soul
is uplifted by true sublimity and, seizing pride at such a
height, is filled with both joy and exultation, as if it itself
had produced the very thing heard.
Whenever, then, something is heard many times by a
sensible man; one well acquainted with words and also possessing a greatness of mind, something which neither disposes his soul towards, nor leaves his soul behind in a
thought more considered than the word alone, but instead
falls, like a visitation, into disesteem, it is no longer true
sublimity in so far as its sound did not outlast its utterance.
For this, true sublimity, by being great, whose rebellion
against is not only difficult, but impossible, for this, the
memory is strong and indelible. Speaking generally, consider sublime and truly beautiful those things which please
everyone always. For whenever men differing in their pursuits, lifestyles, interests, ages and languages share one and
the same opinion, then the verdict and assent from such
discord makes our faith in the object of their admiration
strong and indisputable.

La Promenaded' Automne
Te souvient-il, 6 mon ame, 6 ma vie,
D'un jour d'automne et pale et languissant?
11 semblait dire un adieu gemissant
Aux bois qu'il attristait de sa melancolie.
Les oiseaux dans les airs ne chantaient plus l'espoir;
Une froide rosee enveloppait leurs ailes,
Et, rappelant au nid leurs compagnes fideles,
Sur des rameaux sans fleurs ils attendaient le soir.

The Autumn Walk
Oh soul, oh life, do you remember the day,
In autumn, so languid and pale?
As if departing, it seemed to bewail
The forest it darkened with sorrow to gray.
From the birds in the air, no more hope was sung;
Their wings by a frozen dew were encased,
And, calling their friends to their nesting place,
For evening they waited, to barren boughs they clung.

Seule, je m'eloignais d'une fete brnyante,
Je fuyais tes regards, je cherchais ma raison.
Mais la langueur des champs, leur tristesse attrayante,
A ma langueur secrete ajoutaient leur poison.
Sans but et sans espoir, suivant ma reverie,
Je portais au hasard un pas timide et lent;
L'Amour m' enveloppa de ton ombre cherie,
Et, malgre la saison, l'air me parut brulant.

Alone, I withdrew from a noisy herd,
I sought my reason, I fled your gaze .
But the pastoral languor, its sadness allured
My internal languor with poisonous haze.
Along with my dreaming, without hope or goal,
My slow, timid stroll transformed into toil;
Love enshrouded me with your shadowy soul,
And in spite of the season, the air seemed to boil.

Je voulais, mais en vain, par un effort supreme,
En me sauvant de toi, me sauver de moi-meme.
Mon ceil voile de pleurs, a la tene attache,
Par un charme invincible en fut comme anache.
A travers les brouillards, une image legere
Fit palpiter mon sein de tendresse et d'effroi;
Le soleil reparait, l' environne, 1'eclaire,
Il en tr' ouvre les cieux . . . Tu parus devant moi.
Je n' osai te parler; interdite, reveuse,
Enchainee et soumise a ce h·ouble enchanteur,
Je n'osai te parler: pourtantj'etais heureuse;
Je devinai ton ame, et j 'entendis mon cceur.

As much as I wanted, as hard I tried, it was something I
could not do:
I sought to save myself from me by saving myself from you.
My eye, veiled with tears, to the cold earth bound,
By invincible charm was wrought from the ground.
My breast started pulsing, with softness and fear
As from foggy murk a dim image grew;
The sun appears 'round it, makes vision clear,
The heavens half-open . .. Before me stood you.
I didn't dare address you; confounded and suppressed,
Dreaming and submissive underneath your misty spell,
I didn't dare address you: I was happy nonetheless;
I divined your spirit, I heard my own heart well.

Mais quand ta main pressa ma main tremblante,
Quand un frisson leger fit tressaillir mon corps,
Quand mon front se couvrit d'une rougeur brulante,
Dieu! qu'est-ce done que je sentis alors?
J'oubliai de te fuir, j'oubliai de te craindre;
Pour la premiere fois ta bouche osa se plaindre,
Ma douleur a la tienne osa se reveler,
Et mon ame vers toi fut prete a s'exhaler!
11 m'en souvient ! T'en souvient-il, ma vie,
De ce tourment delicieux,
De ces mots arraches a ta melancolie:
"Ah! si je souffre, on souffre aux cieux!"

But when my trembling hand was by your hand pressed,
When my body was shivered by a delicate chill,
When a fiery color flushed my face and chest,
My God, tell me, what did I feel?
You, I forgot to fear; You, I forgot to shun;
Complaint for the first time sh·eamed off your tongue,
My grief to yours was finally self-revealed,
And my soul to you was almost exhaled!
I remember it! Do you recall it, my life,
This delicious despair,
These words in your strife:
"They suffer in heaven if I suffer here!"
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Des bois nul autre aveu ne troubla le silence.
Ce jour fut de nos jours le plus beau, le plus doux;
Pret a s 'eteindre enfin il s' arreta sur nous,
Et sa fuite a mon creur presagea ton absence!
L'ame du monde eclaira notre amour;
le vis ses demiers feux mourir sous un nuage;
Et dans nos creurs brises, desunis sans retour,
II n'en reste plus que l'image.

Aidan Dreaming-Elk
Karina Hean, A '00

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The forest said no more to disturb the silence.
This was our sweetest, most beautiful day;
It finally stopped about us, prepared to die away,
And its quick escape foretold to me your absence!
The soul of the world made our love bright;
Under a cloud I saw the death of its flames;
And in our shattered hearts, which could never again unite,
No more than their image remains.

Vrbnica, Kosovo; June, 1999
Vada Mossavat, A 'oo

�Cain and Saul
The Men God Rejected
Sarah Whitesel, 'O 1
Jf thou doest well, shalt thou not be accepted? And if
thou doest not well, sin li eth at the door. And unto thee
shall be his desire and thou shalt rul e over him. (Gen-

Each of his failures comes from looking at the people around
him to make decisions which ought to be made with his
eyes on the Lord alone. The standard for acceptance comes
esis, 4:7)
down to a recurring image of the orientation of a man 's
heart. In I Samuel 10:9, when Saul is anointed, God gives
This verse describes the biblical stories of both Cain him another heart. 'Yet even with this reborn spirit, Saul is
and Saul. Both men try to serve God as they see best and unable to keep his attention focused upon the Lord. In 13: 14,
are rejected. Both are much desired by sin, succumb to its Samuel tells him that he will lose his kingship to a man
seduction, and, because of their own failures, seek to pun- after God ' s own heart. That man is David, who is chosen
ish others for their successes. Both wander the land in an- because, even as a child, his heart is filled with love and
guish, marked so that other men will not slay them. Yet it reverence for God (I Sam. 16:7). Saul falters by misplacing
is the conh·ast between these two lives that ultimately al- his priorities. His heart is guided by a fear of and preocculows their similarities to info1m one another. Cain's story pation with men like himself, rather than God's commandrealizes the formula of rejection, sin, and punishment with ment.
perfect simplicity. Abel dies, Cain's crime is complete, its
Cain and Saul have not done well. They have not earned
consequences absolute, with personal reprimands from God God's acceptance. Sin crouches desirously at their doors .
at every misstep . In his exile he builds the first city and The dreadful undoing of these men is so much more signififounds a glorious dynasty. Saul's situation is more com- cant than their initial rejections . When reading these texts
plex. He sh·ives to kill David several times, each time fail- there is a powerful temptation to justify how Cain and Saul
ing, humiliated and repentant until his fury blazes anew. began unworthily, to find a primary reason that will explain
With every fresh iniquity, he becomes further seduced by away what follows. We long to justify why an offering of
sin, committing progressively more grievous mi sdeeds , the soil deserves rejection. For instance, the harvest of Cain
punctuated by tenib le, hopeful moments of pain and re- came from land bearing Adam' s curse . His sown frnit was
morse. At last, thoroughly steeped in wre tchedness, having lifeless while Abel's lambs yielded up their breath on God 's
lost many battles, his kingdom, and his sons, Saul commits altar. When he kills his brother he spills onto the cursed
sui cide.
earth the blood that he failed to offer God, now as a sacriThe origins of sin and the possibility of conquering it fice to his wounded vanity. In the same way, Saul was made
are the two most important issues in these tales. All we are king for his stature , a soulless value, while David was chogiven in the austere case of the Second Man Alive is that sen for his noble heart, an an imate versus an inanimate virGod "had not respect" unto Cain and his offering (Gen. tue. Saul ' s position as king exists only because God finally
4:5) . His fa ilure is briefly touched upon, mysterious. The relented in disgust to the pleas of the faithless Israelites who
disgrace of the First K ing is more complicated. Saul' s fears wanted a powerful human figurehead to lead them in battle.
on the battlefield are strnnger than his faith and he offers They desired him as cravenly as sin longs for weakness in
sacrifices without waiting for God's prophet, Samuel (I Sam. men; and as the tall, unholy sovereign they had asked fo r,
13). Two chapters later he bows to the will of the people he pandered to their fears instead of ruling over them in the
and disobeys Samuel' s order to desh·oy all of the Amalekites name of the Lord. Saul and Cain had to be rejected and
and their goods, saving some to burn on God's altar. It once their rejections hav e been explained, their j ea lous
seems to be the combination of these errors by which Saul bloodlust that follows dwindles to a vicious mis ery ravenis lost. After the first, Samuel declares that his kingdom ous for other men ' s ruin.
will not. continue. After the second, the Lord regrets ever
Such explanations of rejection are attempts to sew up
making Saul king, Samuel abandons him, David is anointed, the lives that proceed from them with threads of demerit
and an evil spirit descends upon Saul. Just as the villainies and necessity . They render the infinite potential for human
later engendered by his failure are compounded, so is the strength and frailty in the narrow terms of a balanced equafailure itself.
tion. They also gloss over the weight of the choices rejected
Both of Saul's misdeeds involve putting immediate, men must constantly make between, on one hand, followworldly concerns before his obedience to and trust in God. ing sin's compelling call which grows louder and louder
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with each error, and, on the other, the increasingly difficult, but always present, possibility of resisting it. This is
particularly important for Saul whose conditions of failure
are so detailed. The life that comes afterwards is so indete1mina te that one cannot dismiss him as a man justly and
irrevocably lost, possessed by the evil spirit of his own guilt
and anger, consumed by an impotent pantomime of malice
that he must reenact until he can bear it no more and kills
himself. Saul's gradual decay is actually far more sophisticated. In that bitter sinking, he wrestles desperately with
his corruption, calamitously choosing sin more often than
God.
For Saul and Cain, in narrative and psychological te1ms,
rejection is an instigative engine. Without dictating what
their reactions will be, it is the condition of pain which calls
for an answering choice. Cain's immediate response to rejection is a scowl, the loss of self-control. Unable to accept
that he has not been accepted, his ungoverned countenance
falls "wroth" (Gen. 4:5), wounded and defiant. Then God
makes the crucial speech cited at the beginning of this essay:
And the Lord said unto Cain, Why art thou wroth? and
why is thy countenance fallen? If thou doest well, shalt
thou not be accepted? And if thou doest not well, sin
lieth at the door. And unto thee shall be his desire and
thou shalt rule over him. (Gen. 4:6-7)

This warning makes explicitly clear that his rejection is just.
Cain cannot have done well and receiving even such a painfully true judgment is no cause for anger, exactly because it
is true . This is enough. This is all. Perhaps Cain should
have known better or perhaps God could have respected his
offering for its earnest submission. Neither of these possibilities matter once they are no longer possible. The thing
now at stake is Cain's future acceptance or corruption. The
only significant reflections he can make are those that apply to doing well now, as opposed to the bitter attempts at
justification which prevent him from moving beyond the
past.
Outrage against truth, the determination to challenge
and transform the hurtful verdict, seeking other people to
blame and punish-making the destruction of their wellbeing the cure for one's own despair-these seem to be the
streaming lights of weakness summoning sin to the door of
a man who has failed. In this speech God acknowledges for
the first time how vulnerable man can be to sin- that wickedness actually lies in wait, lusting after him. Never before
has a man been tempted as the result of a previous misstep.
Juxtaposed with this peril is the possibility of subjugating
that iniquity . Cain may still master his sin. "Thou shalt
rnle over him." It is framed almost as a declaration, promise, or command. Man is not to be the passive victim of his
own weakness, rendered defenseless by pain and anger.

Failure may bring man closer to evil but it remains in his
power not merely to resist sin, but to conquer it.
Anger is very clearly sin's access point to Saul as well.
Until he tastes fury, Saul is not drawn to sin. After the failures that cause him to lose his kingship and the favor of
God, Saul listens penitently as Samuel upbraids him. His
countenance is meek and abashed . He accepts God's judgment and asks for forgiveness. One of the most poignant
moments in Saul's life occurs in his final hours with Samuel.
The elderly prophet has just ripped Saul's royal cloak to
signify how his kingdom will be torn from his hands.
Samuel, who made Saul king , must soon abandon and mourn
him. This point marks the culmination of Saul's failures
and he asks Samuel, "Tum again with me that I may worship the Lord thy God" (I Sam. 15). Although Saul is
broken and alone, having lost his throne and God's counsel, it is still possible for him to look to God. He knows
what penalties he has earned and accepts the Lord's judgment. Until he becomes jealous of David's glory and anger
kindles within his breast, Saul, with all of his inadequacies ,
has still chosen God.
Back in Genesis, one verse after he is cautioned by the
Lord, "Cain rose up against Abel his brother and slew him."
In Cain's simple narrative, rejection, anger, and envy climax in sin. But what exactly is Cain's sin? Is it fratricide?
There are still no commandments, no prohibitions against
murder. Abel is the first man ever to die. Human mortality,
one of the curses of Adam's fall, has just entered the world
and it is wrought by sin rather than nature.
Is Cain's crime attempting to deceive God? Abel's blood
cries out from the ground, from the earth cursed by Adam,
from the land where Cain raised his unfortunate offering.
When asked where his brother is, Cain naively and clumsily dissembles, "Am I my brother's keeper?" offering the
Lord a flippant and defiant answer (Gen. 4:9). God's own
asking implies that even God must gage Cain's understanding of what he has done. There is no reason to assume that
befo e he kills his brother, Cain comprehends that men 's
lives must end or that other men can end them. He has
some knowledge of good and evil from the error of his parents-enough to realize that what he has done is wrong and
to speak of it disingenuously to God.
Does Cain's fault lie in claiming an office of God? The
Lord's jealousy of his own authority has already been evidenced in Eden. Propitiating wrath has the flavor, if not
the character, of justice. Is Cain's crime a sorry parody of
God-establishing his own pathetic pride in the place of
divine judgment, dispensing life and death in his defective
way? Or does he try to punish the Lord by destroying the
man God has blessed? This account hardly seems adequate.
Cain's brutality is neither intelligent nor controlled enough
to be worthy of the name of judgment.
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soming from the actual sin of Cain. The essential nature of
Cain's-and later Saul's-sin is really an unwillingness to
accept the Lord's initial judgment, which brings them to
violate the intimacy of each's relationship with God. Cain
and Saul both en in believing that what lies between God
and other men can somehow become part of their own dynamic. Cain has disregarded God's explicit warning. The
Lord ' s respect for Abel's sacrifice is no more connected to
Cain's rejection than David's triumphs are the result of Saul's
decline. Their jealous anger comes from a failure of personal responsibility. Their misbegotten and misplaced feelings of rage and jealousy become violence. This inappropriate connecting of blame fosters the false idea that killing
another man could possibly amend or assuage the pain of
their original failures .
Saul is able to bear his disgrace until his tortured soul
lays it beside David's honor. His fatal purpose is born as
the people sing, "Saul hath slain his thousands, and David
his ten thousands" (I Sam. 18 :7) . Then, with the evil spirit
upon him, filled with guilt and anger, Saul rises up and
tries to slay David. However, the Lord is with David and
the javelin misses its target (I Sam. 18: 11). Then in the
hopes that David will fall in combat, Saul offers the young
man his daughter's hand in marriage on the condition that
he twice defeat and collect a hundred Philistine foreskins.
The pitiful king conh·ives an accidental escape fr~m his will
to sin, but the plot fails and David is victorious (I Sam.
18: 17-27).
Saul endeavors to avoid his wicked purpose
but will not relinquish the bitterness that goads him forward. In chapter 19, when Jonathan speaks in defense of
David, Saul hearkens to his righteous cause and swears his
first oath to respect David's life. However, as soon as the
evil spirit returns to him, his anger and guilt recalled, Saul
hurls another ill-aimed jav~in at David before he flees and
Saul's pursuit begins.
At this point, the simple (Cain's) and complex (Saul's)
stories diverge; one moves while the other tangles . Abel is
dead. Cain 's m alice is brought to complete fruition and
God renders Cain's sentence (Gen. 4:11-12). He is cursed
by the ea1ih into which he poured his brother's blood, may
no longer till the soil nor reap its harvest, and must wander
in barren exile. To soothe his fears, Cain is given a protective mark that caITies sevenfold vengeance for any man who
would slay him, a mark to shield him from becoming the
victim of a crime like his own . As Cain has dearly learned,
and Saul will later recognize, it is necessary that the right
of judgment and punishment belong to the Lord alone. So
Cain roams away, far from the presence of God, where he
builds the first city and sires a family ingenious in music
and metalwork that flourishes for many generations. That
is the end of Cain's story.
Saul's murderous efforts cannot be completely analyzed
without also considering his wandering, since it is the pursuit of his lethal fury that drives Saul to vagabondage. Just

as Cain was condemned to rove, hidden from God's face ,
Saul too suffers the affliction of a fugitive as the price of his
sin. He flees before his guilt and anger. He runs to lay the
bloated burden of his failures on another man ' s head . Saul
makes two more bloodthirsty expeditions in search of David,
and, with each new resolution to plunge back into wickedness, Saul commits graver and graver atrocities. The second time Jonathan speaks in David's defense, Saul attempts
to kill his own son by casting yet another poorly aimed javelin (I Sam. 20:33). He orders the slaughter of the priests
who gave David food and armor and then commands the
execution of their entire city (I Sam. 22). His next predatory foray brings him into the wilderness of Ziph and Maon,
but David proves elusive and Saul must cut short his hunt
to repel a Philistine attack (I Sam. 23 ).
In the following two pursuits, God almost seems to be
mocking Saul's dete1mination to satiate his rage. Saul assembles three thousand men and marches to the wilderness
ofEngedi where he immediately makes camp and falls asleep
in a cave in which David and his men lie concealed (I Sam.
24). David cuts Saul's robe but spares his life , refusing to
raise his hand against the Lord's anointed. In the succeeding pursuit, Saul returns to the wilderness of Ziph where he
chased David once before. The Lord covers Saul and his
host with a deep sleep. David easily enters his camp and
takes Saul's spear as a trophy and evidence of the respect he
has shown the anointed of the Lord (I Sam. 26).
Saul, like Cain, has a protective mark, only for Saul
the value of the mark is bluned. It preserves his life each
time the Lord delivers him into David's hands, except this
protection carries with it an intense humiliation. The noble
mercy of his intended victim compounds Saul's already monstrous shame. It is unclear whether God means for Saul's
anointing to keep him safe. David, not God, declares his
respect for Saul's status. The Lord simply delivers Saul
defenseless into the hands of his enemy over and over again .
David's anointment doesn't prevent Saul from trying to kill
him. Perhaps David is being tested and Saul is genuinely
in peril. Perhaps he is safe, made ridiculous by his inability
either to kill or be killed. Either way, this mark of anointment, originally a blessing upon Saul, has become the mark
of Cain, a testament to his cursed failure.
In Genesis 4:7, God cautions Cain that failure will make
him desired by and vulnerable to sin, and promises the po·tential for still ruling over that weakness and conquering
the temptation to further abasement. It is still possible to
do well and win acceptance . For Saul, the key to this acceptance lies in the living example of David. When David
confronts Saul, after each double deliverance (Saul into
David's hands and David sparing Saul), his words apply to
the wretched king's entire life:
The Lord judge between thee and me bur mine hand
shall not be upon thee. As saith the proverb of the an-

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cients, wickedness proceedeth from the wicked : but mine
hand sha ll not be upon thee. After whom is the king of
Israe l come out? after whom dost thou pursue? after a
dead dog, after a flea. The Lord therefore be judge and
judge between thee and me, and see, and plead my cause,
and deliver me out of thine hand . (I Sam. 24: 12-15)

David places judgement in the hands of the Lord and submits his will to that judgement. Of the biblical proverbs,
there are three that David might be paraphrasing (Proverbs
11 :15, 13:6, and 26:26). All of them describe how wicked
actions undermine their perpetrators , just as each of Saul's
misdeeds increase his rapacious appetite for sin. David
understands how every offense disposes a soul to further
evil. The power of sin is a desire, a negativity, a yearning.
Mastery of sin lies in resisting that compulsion. David' s
relationship with God is perfectly intact, a fortress many
leagues away from sin. This completeness, this safety make
it impossible for him to sympathize with or even comprehend Saul's anguished jealousy. When David cannot understand why Saul finds any meaning in chasing after him,
like hunting for "a dead dog, a flea," his speech portrays a
man so secure that he is almost incapable of entering into
this aching world~
David may be secure, but David has never failed . It
seems impossible that Saul and Cain could simply tum their
eyes to God, regardless of their flawed histories. Wouldn't
such callous progress really constitute the dismissal of God's
judgement? The answer appears paradoxical. By concentrating on the vindications and vengeance that would unmake his failure, a man amplifies its results, arousing the
event in his sh-uggle to tame it. A wroth countenance cultivates a disposition to sin. There are three ways in which a
man might respond to rejection and only one of them makes
him stronger against iniquity . He might try to forget the
disaster and move on, accept it and move on, or clutch hold
of it and let his bitterness fester. The first is not really an
option because the impact of rejection is undeniable and
any attempt to void its tneaning could only lead to deeper
enor. The third response is an invitation to sin. In this
context, moving beyond each failure without trying to deny
its consequences and returning to God-with the understanding that there is no effective alternative-is the real
hallmark of respect and reconciliation that drives sin away
from one's door.
When he puts aside his anger and listens to Jonathan's
first intercession, Saul resolves to change. However, he does
not rule over sin for long and this promise is soon broken.
In the wilderness of Engedi, faced with David's integrity
and having come so close to death, Saul acknowledges his
enemy's righteousness and swears to end his wicked quest.
He concedes David' s right of succession to his throne and
David pledges to preserve Saul's descendants. After breaking this second oath and encountering David again in the

forest of Ziph, Saul repents once more. Even David's diction recalls the slaying of Abel when he entreats Saul, "Let
not my blood fall to the face of the earth" (I Sam. 26:20).
Saul recognizes his own error, "I have sinned ... behold, I
have played the fool and erred exceedingly" (I Sam. 26:21 ).
David is able to redirect Saul's gaze to God for brief interludes in which Saul, having acknowledged his guilt, is relieved and conscious of his potential to do well and conquer
sin. After each contrition, Saul's wandering is permitted to
end. Both apologies are followed by Saul returning home .
Yet Saul continually loses his inte1mittent sovereignty
over sin. His gaze always falls back to the figures of his
oym guilt and anger and the man gloriously before him.
This may be because he is continually led aright by David's
words, rather than forging his own independent reconciliation with God. It is only in the presence of his external
compulsion, the human object sought by his sin, that Saul
is able to repent. Just as David's harp soothed away Saul's
evil spirit in their early days, so David's virtue mends him
at moments in their confrontations. It is as if David's voice
has become the only one that Saul can hear-even Jonathan's
~annot reach him anymore . The only person able to penetrate his fixation is its object, just as the Lord might succor
one who looked upon him.
Thus, though God no longer answers Saul, God is no
longer what Saul seeks or craves . Saul does not ask the
witch of Endor to raise Samuel 's spirit so that he may ask
how to serve God well. He rouses the dead prophet hoping
to receive the reassurance in battle that he deservedly lost,
committing a new sin in search of a promise that the penalty of his old sins may fall more lightly (I Sam. 28) . It is
no wonder Samuel declares the Lord to be Saul ' s enemy:
for Saul, in his weakness before sin, has chosen to be the
enemy of the Lord. David helps him to tum to God, but
only Saul's own sustained resolution could have held him
on that path. His repeated assurances and oaths, while sincere, are shortlived. David knows this and flees to the land
of the Philistines after their second encounter because he
mistrusts Saul's ability to keep h\s promises. Though genuinely wretched each time he glimpses at what he has become, Saul throws away this insight over and over when he
chooses instead to slake his iniquity and avoid the fact of
his rejection.
Since God will not permit the harming of David, there
are only two ways for Saul to halt his descent. He must
either truly abandon his obsession or die . The latter fate is
how his sin ultimately ends. Just as Samuel prophesied, the
next day the Lord delivers the host of the Israelites into the
hands of the Philistines. The battle turns overwhelmingly
against Saul. The arrows of his enemies sorely wound him.
All three of his sons are slain. He entreats his armorbearer
to kill him that he might not fall into the hands of his foes,
but the servant refuses . Saul falls upon his own sword .

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These two lives have such different final acts. Cain
builds a city. His ending is also a beginning. Saul falls on
his sword. His situation doesn't close with either of the
conditions, renunciation or murder, that could have fully
concluded it. Saul spends his reign wavering, suffering
between these two opposed states, and his death only reinforces this limbo. His tale is complete, not because it actually resolves, but because the possibility for any closure dies
with him. So where does the distinction between these stories begin? Cain killed Abel. Saul was never able to kill
David. As a result, Cain's sin was fulfilled and discrete.
Punishment clearly followed . It is this crucial difference
that makes Cain simultaneously more fortunate and more
miserable than Saul.
Like the farmer he is, Cain sows and reaps his sin. He
is more fortunate than Saul in that this fru)tion, this crime
as irrevocable as his rejection, brings him to accept his chastisement and the history that caused it. Cain crosses over
his sin and moves beyond it. He is never forgiven, never
reverses the meaning of his past, but assumes its weight
and makes that burden a foundation for his future accomplishments. Cain succeeds, not because his sin at last proves
acceptable, but because he relinquishes the belief that it could
ever be made so. He is more miserable than Saul in that,
despite God's warning, he never even dimly admits the possibility of ruling over his sin until it is too late and he is
a murderer .
Saul's position is more ambiguous, his struggle more
complex. Sin and punishment are intricately entwined for
him. His castigation is the escalating product of his sin.
Cain does not work past his wickedness until it is realized.
It is as though Cain must pass through his sin bef~re he is
able to abandon it. Saul is unable to commit the crime that
might help him make such a passage . The first king sees
the innocent alternative to his evil, the repudiation of his
unconsummated malice, but this resolution never holds sway
for long over his wrath. Yet, although Saul cannot take
credit for his repeated deliverance from error, he does not
kill the man he hates and therefore never loses the possibility of renouncing his ter-ible purpose forever.
So Saul and Cain are never doomed by their previous
evils . Although every descent makes Saul a more cherished object of sin's yearning, increasingly vulnerable to
choosing deeper wickedness, there is always the possibility
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demption is always present. Saul proves that dishonor is
neither a direct nor inevitable fall. Rather, he welds a sinuous chain of causality-his descent is causal, but not deterministic . His weakness nourishes his corruption, corruption weakens him but this only means that it becomes more
difficult, but never impossible, for Saul to break free . Every
link, every crime, draws the next one nearer, but only because Saul fails to sustain his resistance and pursues the
siren song of sin, forging his own shackles . This is emphasized by Saul's periodic epiphanies when, however briefly,
he huly repents and promises to change. For that moment
he recognizes that such a choice is possible .
Cain and Saul look to the mundane context sunounding them to resolve their own struggles over serving God.
Unless such a man claims personal responsibility, unless he
assumes self-control and the sense of exclusive and absolute accountability to God, he cannot conquer sin ' s desiring. Sin supine at one's door is the characterization of unfortunate proximity to something external, to a lure from
the realm beyond its prey's concerns. This image delineates the ties to and pressures from circumstances foreign
to one's situation. Both men judge themselves reactively
from within such a context. This meager, mortal perspective constantly fabricates false relevance between itself and
other people, refusing to accept responsibility for the choices
it pursues among the fibers of this web. Cain and Saul
evaluate their failures before God in terms of other men ' s
successes. It is so easy to sympathize with Cain because
one immediately misunderstands the same thing he does,
that is, why he should kill Abel, a response which clearly
cannot address the source of his misery. It is the way in
which both men misconstrue and react inappropriately to
their original errors that makes them vicious, not some necessary product of the original enors themselves.
For this reason, sin is never justified by the events that
precede it. Saul and Cain's awful conclusions that murder
might assuage rejection stem from their denials of God's
judgement. They do not realize that, for God, their failure
is irrevocably over. Its consequences are immutably set.
There is no cause for anger. If they do well, they shall be
accepted. The painful severity of such a firm ending is what
make~ choice and change possible at all. In this finality lies
the p~ssibility of redemption, human freedom through divine justice .

�Elephantine Island
Karin Ekholm, A '00

Gjinovce, Kosovo; July, 1999
Vada Mossavat, A '00

�ENERGEIA

The Importance, to Consciousness, of the Discovery of Self
Piroska Kopar, A '99
In the Phenom enology ofSpirit, Hegel introduces a new,
revolutionary way of understanding both the world and philosophy. He does not follow the traditional route of presenting an argument with an extensive commentary in its
defense, or the even older method of Plato's dialogues; nor
does he merely record some selected facts, like a historian.
Instead, Hegel invites us into a theatre- the theatre of philosophy. He asks us to take a seat in the front row and let
him show us a play in which we can see all the phases of
our cultural and philosophical evolution. He takes it upon
himself to narrate the play in the order that will reveal the
necessary logical progression of the different scenes. Let
this play be called The Becoming of Spirit.'
We philosophers are not used to such peculiarities; we
want to know the truth, and we want to know it now. According to Hegel, our impatience is understandable, but
unacceptable; the evolution of truth takes time, and it is
only at the right time that our minds are prepared to take in
the truth. In the Preface, Hegel claims that his time is the
birth-time of Spirit, or of Truth (11). 2 The time, then, is
right for us to step off the stage of philosophy, and look at it
from the outside, with the eyes of a viewer and not those of
a participant. Only thus will we be able to see the truth in
its progression and comprehend it as a whole.
It is essential that we keep the distinction between viewer
and participant perfectly clear throughout this exposition.
The participant, or the main character on the stage, is the
consciousness of the Universal Individual. The consciousness of the Universal Individual is the consciousness of all
human beings past and present, joined together. Its being is
superimposed on the individuals of the world, and its development overarches all cultural progress. The transformation of the Universal Individual begins with the primary
form of consciousness and is completed with its final maturity. The viewer of Hegel's theatre is the student of his philosophy. He is a very advanced participant who is ready to
step off the stage and whose testimony will earn him the
last step in the development of consciousness. He has already been through most of the transfo1mation, and is at the
stage in which he can proceed only if he steps down and
observes. While the participating Consciousness sees everything subjectively, the audience takes an objective point
of view. By the end of the play, the viewer will have seen
who he himself is, generated by the truths that he carries
within his consciousness. He will then know that he knows,
and this knowledge will elevate him to become the com-

pletely transformed Consciousness, or Spirit. "The goal is
Spirit's insight into what knowing is" (29) .
But why should we commit ourselves to become students of Hegel? What would convince us that his play might
reveal Truth to us? Do we even have the capability of seeing the truth? Hegel addresses this question in the Introduction:
Should we not be concerned as to whether this fear of
error is not just the error itself? It presupposes that the
Absolute stands on one side and cognition on the other,
independent and separated from it, and yet is something
real; or in other words, it presupposes that cognition
which, since it is excluded from the Absolute, is surely
outside of the truth as well, is nevertheless true, an assumption whereby what calls itself fear of error reveals
itself rather as fear of truth. (74)
Hegel reasons that we should have no scruples about suspending our disbelief in our abilities, because the kind of
knowledge that we are investigating is phenomenal knowledge. Consciousness knows its object, as the object is present
for Consciousness. What this means is that the object of
our investigation is our knowledge of the object. It is nevertheless a true knowledge, because the object is for Consciousness. If the object were in essence something else,
Consciousness would never have any knowledge of it. The
nature of this phenomenological knowledge will become
clearer as we examine it in the context of the actual transformation .
Consciousness, in its most primary form, is made up of
two moments. "The immediate existence of Spirit, consciousness, contains the two moments of knowing and the
objectivity negative to knowing" (36) . The first moment
corresponds to what Consciousness knows of its object. The
second moment corresponds to the knowledge that Consciousness has of its own knowledge of the object.
At the outset of the play, then, the protagonist is the
immediate, yet undeveloped, form of Consciousness; he is
natural Consciousness. Now consciousness contains two
moments : knowing and objectivity. Imagine that the actor
portraying consciousness enters in a white costume, and
starts to examine an object on the stage . This corresponds
to the first moment, to knowing. No sooner does he begin
his examination, however, when a figure, of the same shape
and size but wearing a black costume steps out from behind
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examination of the object. Here the object for Conscious- cess, a circle that repeats again and again. It is, nevertheness is its own self, which in the first moment was a subject. less, more than a pure formalism, because the completion
This corresponds to the moment of objectivity; this is when of each circle invariably depends on the content to which
Consciousness is aware of the fact that it knows something one applies this method. As the content determines the
about an object.
outcome of the cycle, and the contents may be varied indefiBut both of these moments evidently lie within Con- nitely, the dialectical movement is an ever-changing, dysciousness. The immature, yet undeveloped, Consciousness namic, vital experience.
is not aware of this. It thinks that what it takes to be the
Hegel writes in the Preface, "it must be maintained that
case about its object is indeed the case. But in reality it truth is not a minted coin that can be given and pocketed
finds this is not trne, because when Consciousness com- ready-made. Nor is there such a thing as the false .. ." (39).
pares what it knows of the object with the criterion pro- We, the spoiled children of mathematical thinking, need
vided by its own self, it keeps discovering contradictions in some convincing of the superiority of such a conception of
its knowledge of the object. It therefore enters on a path huth. Dogmatic systems (including mathematics) are dethat Hegel calls the "pathway of doubt, or more precisely . . fective, because they are based on a few principles from
. the way of despair," which will constitute the learning which the sequence of the propositions do not follow in a
experience of Consciousnes's (78).
necessary order. Their arrangement is not a strict succesOn this road, whenever Consciousness attains a new sion; the order of arriving at them may be varied to our
truth, it removes another one of its veils. Consciousness liking. In addition, the result of a proposition, the very
manages to get behind the object by tr·ansf01ming its own point of it, is complete Iy detached from the body of the propounderstanding of it. All of the same veils are also present sition: we can prove a proposition in countless different ways.
in the object, but it is only for Consciousness that they ex- . These systems therefore cannot justify their principles. This
hibit themselves as obstacles of the development. The ob- kind of science can indeed supply us with the answers to
ject contains all the phases of the logical progression of the practical questions of everyday life, but it is unable to
Consciousness, not as its own logical progression, but as penetrate into the deeper realm of truth where everything is
simple truths. While on stage, however, Consciousness does dependent upon everything else, and where the end result
not recognize its own alteration; it believes that it is actu- contains everything that is true within it (42-44). We are
ally removing the veils of the object. This subjective knowl- therefore in need of a method that will provide a system
edge will become objective knowledge once we understand that is organized according to necessity. This method is the
what Consciousness has learned on this road. Once we see dialectical movement.
the veils that Consciousness removes from itself in their
In the particular case of the metamorphosis of Contrue light, our knowledge will also present itself in its full sciousness, the dialectical movement begins with the first
truth.
truth Consciousness discovers. Consciousness now tries to
Before we examine this process more closely, we must hold fast to this as the ultimate huth. But soon Consciousunderstand the nature of truth in this play. For Hegel, the ness recognizes that its huth cannot be the ultimate tmth,
True is the whole, or the Absolute.
because it does not include the opposite of the first truth
within it. The first truth cannot said to be the Absolute,
The True is the whole. But the whole is nothin g other
because it cannot account for the existence of its opposite .
than the essence co nsummati ng itself through its develThe quest of Consciousness for the Absolute huth must conopment. Of the Absolute it must be said that it is essentinue. Since its first truth has proven to be untrue, Contially a result, that only the end is what truly is; and that
sciousness takes its opposite to be hue. Naturally, this will
precisely in this consists its nature, viz. to be actual,
give rise to the same problem that arose in the case of the
subject, the spontaneous becoming of itself. (20)
first truth. The second truth cannot be the Absolute, beFor Hegel, the ultimate truth can only be the Absolute that cause it does not contain the first truth within it, since it is
contains the truth of the entire development in itself. A . its direct opposite.
Consciousness, thus defeated in its attempt to find huth
blooming red rose is a fragile, green bud before it opens its
in its second object, returns to its first truth. It rea lizes,
petals to the sun. Its final beauty is the result of all the
phases of its growth; the flower carries their truth within it. however, that to avoid having to switch its objects again, it
The hue result is the developed flower that contains, but must find a new truth in its first object. It in fact discovers
supersedes, its first truth, the bud. To access a truth of this that the second truth gave determination to the first huth: it
kind, we have to follow a progression, a movement, to which defined the way in which the first truth was defective. The
Hegel often refers as the dialectical movement, or a simple third, new truth for Consciousness is created out of the union
reflection. The method of the dialectical movement is the of the first two truths. For its third truth, Consciousness
principle of all of Hegel's philosophy. It is a three-step pro- invents an object in which both of the first truths are necessarily brought together. In the third truth the contradiction

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of the first two moments is no longer an opposition, but a
distinction. This completes a cycle of the dialectic.al movement and a scene of the play.
In terms of the actors on the stage, the play should continue from where it left off: the two moments of consciousness portrayed by two different actors . But Consciousness,
just because it is in essence a unity, cannot remain thus alienated from itself, so it returns into itself. On the stage, we
see the actor in the black costume stepping behind the first
actor. But the first actor now changes completely: his size,
his shape, his figure have become completely different, and
his costume is half-black and half-white. Consciousness
thus returned into itself contains both of its moments; it is
the whole movement.
Hegel calls the three huths of the dialectical movement
the three moments. On stage, the three moments conespond to the three actors. The first moment is always the
initial truth for Consciousness; the second is its negation,
or its opposite; the third moment is a creation of Consciousness that necessitates the existence of the first two moments
as distinct. This, of course, is still only the empty form of
the dialectical movement that will be filled with specific
content once the transformation begins. From our seat in
the audience, we see that in fact the third moment is a deeper
tJ.uth in Consciousness, because it necessitates the first two
moments . Each time a cycle of the dialectical mCYVement is
completed, Consciousness reaches a truth that, because it
includes all the previous moments, is closer to the Absolute.
Whenever Consciousness uncovers a defect in its truth,
it starts a new cycle of the dialectical movement or begins a
new scene of the play. The movement is initiated qy what is
missing in the object of Consciousness, and is driven by the
necessity for a truth that encompasses the whole. The quest
can end only when Consciousness discovers an object that
satisfies this desire . Only the Absolute can put an end to
this movement that is set in m~tion by what is lacking, or
the negative . "Notion" is the name of this moving negative, and "Logic" is the organizer of this movement. But
Notion, because it displays the defect of the previous moment, is also a form of knowledge . Logic is what guides
Consciousness in the direction that will compensate for the
defect of the previous moment. Logic is what dictates to
Consciousness the character of the new object to which it
can appeal for the solution of a contradiction. Consciousness, thus driven by the Notion in the direction indicated by
Logic, continues its exhaustive search for the Absolute.
I shall now give a brief description of the first two chapters of the Phenomenology, in preparation for considering
the third chapter, which will constitute the core of this essay.

Kor AR

S ENSE-CERTAINTY

Consciousness steps on stage and is instantly astounded
by the richness of the world. What is the first experience
Consciousness is likely to have upon encountering an object in the world? An object appears to Consciousness unexpectedly, and it overwhelms Consciousness with its presence. Consciousness wants to seize the object as it finds it,
just as it is "now" and "here." But how can Consciousness
possibly say what it sees "now" and "here"? By the time it
does so, the truth of its claims will vanish. Consciousness
immediately faces a new "now" and a new "here" of whose
content is quite different from what it was a second ago. In
fact, Consciousness itself changes from one moment to the
next. Consciousness tries to say what its first "now" and
first "here" were, but it cannot. Instead, it points out the
moments, but even pointing out takes time. Thus Consciousness learns that its object is not the particular that it fa ces at
any one moment, but the universal that is indifferent to the
specific contents of the "now"s and "here"s.

P ERCEPTION

Ever since Consciousness stumbled upon its obj ect it
has been trying to grasp the truth of it. Sense-Certainty
failed to do this : its object slipped away from it. At the stage
of Perception, Consciousness fa ces the obj ect not in its living immediacy, but as a thing. Perception has given up on
defining the object in terms of the "now" and "here ;" it
wants to describe its obj ect, the thing . In the process of
description, however, there arises an antithesis. The thing,
on the one hand, is a "One": it can be distinguished from
another thing. On the other hand, the thing is a "Many" : it
can be described in terms of its color, shape, size, and so
forth . For example, if I talk about a book, I am talking
about this book here; it is one thing. On the other hand,
this book is small, and blue, and bo x-shaped; it has many
different properties .
These properties do not seem to affect each other; in
fact, each seems indifferent to others. The book is blue and
also small, and also box-shaped. But if they do not affect
each other at all, how can this book be distinguished from
another thing? It seems that the properties must demarcate
the boundaries of the thing. But if they are definitive properties, what allows me to talk of them independently? Percep tion alternately makes the obj ect and Consciousness itselfresponsible for the "oneness" and the "manyness" of its
object. To avoid contradiction, it posits the object as the
cause of "oneness," and Consciousness as the cause of the
"manyness," and then it reverses its position. But as a consequence of positing alternating truths in the same place,
Consciousness is unable to find a way to grasp both of these
huths simultaneously. Instead, it introduces the "sophistJ.·y
of in-so-fars"(130). Hegel equates this activity of Percep-

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tion with sound common sense. The thing is "Many" inso-far as it is in itself, but "One" in-so-far as it is conh·asted
with other things. As a "One" the thing is a unity, as a
"Many" it holds the distinguishing qualities of the object,
or it gives the object "determinateness."
But it is through its "determinateness" that the object
preserves itself. This means, then, that the thing preserves
itself through its outside opposition: the thing has its essential being in another thing. But to have the essence of a
thing outside of the thing is absurd! Perception can see the
tmth of a single moment, but is unable to see the object as
the entire movement of the different moments. It holds fast
to the idea that its object is a real, sensuous thing, and is
unable to give up the solidity, the "thinghood" of its object.
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moments of the "One" and the "Many" not as opposites, but
as two aspects of the same thing.
Such an object is Force. When we think of Force we
conceive of a unity, but at the same time, it is impossible to
imagine a particular force without opposition. The principle ofN.ewton's Third Law of Motion seems appropriate
here:
To every action there is always an opposed and equal
reaction: or, the mutual actions of two bodies upon each
other are always equal, and directed to contrary parts.
( 13 )3

Force necessarily implies two, but as a cause, it is taken to ·
be one. It is important to note that "Force" here is a primarily intellectual result. It is that object of Consciousness
that fulfills the need to be a "One" but which creates the
"Many."
Force is therefore the solution to the problem of PerFORCE AND THE UND ERSTANDI NG
ception. Force itself is one object, but in action, it must
This brings us to the main topic of our examination: split up into many; that is to say, there is never only one
the section on Force and the Understanding. Why is it nec- force . Forces are always acting against one another, and it
essary to go on to this phase? How does this phase of con- is forces in this state that Hegel calls "Force expressed."
sciousness differ from, and accomplish more than the pre- The different fo rces that we detect in action are now what
vious ones? One thing is readily apparent: as a result of used to be the contradictory moments of Perception, the
this chapter Consciousness becomes Self-consciousness. By "One" and the "Many." But the one concept that is behind
the end of this phase, the obj ect of Consciousness will have the acting forces as their cause is what Hegel calls "Force
changed into itself; it will be a Consciousness that knows proper. "
The same inherent necessity that revealed Force to be
itself to be Consciousness. This suggests that in the course
the new truth of consciousness is what brings about the fa ilof inves tigating the truth about the wo rld, we find it in ourse lves; in some sense we become one with trnth. Ag ain, ure of this new huth. This plot complication comes about
when Consciousness realizes that since Force is essentially
Hegel claims that this pro gression is a logical necessity.
both of its aspects, the distinction that Consc iousness has
Perception has failed, but the obj ect is still in front of
Consciousness. In giving up the object, Consciousness can- made between its two forms is mere ly its own distinc tion ; it
not ignore what is physically present before it, so it starts is a distinction in thought (1 36). Consc iousness sees that
on the only available path: it lets go, not of the obj ect, but of both of the moments of Force, "Force expressed" and "Force
the object as a thing, or of its thinghood. Consciousness proper," are essentially forces; it is therefore impossible to
cannot hold that a concrete thing could be essentially a make a distinction with respect to their essence, or content.
What is the significance of this failure? Let us recall
"Many" and also a "One ." As a result of the fa ilure of perthat the moments that are here exhibited as th e "Force excep tion, Consc iousness now thinks of its object, because it
rea lizes that it is poss ible to hold the contradictory moments pressed" and "Force proper," are the transformed moments
of the "One" and the "Many." But the "One" was the obj ect's
together in thought.
"in-itself," or how it was perceived by itself; it was th e " inHegel now begins to discuss the new obj ect of Consciousness that is such a thought: Force enters the stage. ner" essence of the obj ect. The "Many" was exactly the
Why is Force the next phase of the development? How is opposite of this. It was the obj ect' s "being-for-another,'' as
Force a solution to the problem of Perception? Conscious- it was in conh'ast to other things, or its "outer" esse nce.
ness was confronted with a conti·adiction. Were Conscious- Since the distinction turns out to be one of thought alone
ness to stop at this point, it would be forc ed to admit that it and not one of content, these two essences become the same
fo und no truth in its obj ect. A contradiction is simply not thing: there is now no difference between "outer" and " inacceptable as an end, fo r Truth must be a One. Conscious- ner." If Force falls short of accounting for the distinction of
ness needs to create the third moment of this cycle of the outer and inner, it does not solve the problem of Perception .
dialectical movement. It needs to find a truth that will ne- Force would then not be the one object that necessarily crecessitate the existing contradiction, not as a contradiction, ates two. The disappearance of this distinction deprives Force
but as a distinction. That is to say, Consciousness needs to of any claim it might have laid to the title of the Absolute:
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of the first two moments is no longer an opposition, but a
distinction. This completes a cycle of the dialectic.al movement and a scene of the play.
In terms of the actors on the stage, the play should continue from where it left off: the two moments of consciousness portrayed by two different actors. But Consciousness,
just because it is in essence a unity, cannot remain thus alienated from itself, so it returns into itself. On the stage, we
see the actor in the black costume stepping behind the first
actor. But the first actor now changes completely: his size,
his shape, his figure have become completely different, and
his costume is half-black and half-white. Consciousness
thus returned into itself contains both of its moments; it is
the whole movement.
Hegel calls the three truths of the dialectical movement
the three moments. On stage, the three moments conespond to the three actors . The first moment is always the
initial truth for Consciousness; the second is its negation,
or its opposite; the third moment is a creation of Consciousness that necessitates the existence of the first two moments
as distinct. This, of course, is still only the empty form of
the dialectical movement that will be filled with specific
content once the transformation begins . From our seat in
the audience, we see that in fact the third moment is a deeper
truth in Consciousness, because it necessitates the first two
moments. Each time a cycle of the dialectical mO'Vement is
completed, Consciousness reaches a truth that, because it
includes all the previous moments, is closer to the Absolute .
Whenever Consciousness uncovers a defect in its truth,
it starts a new cycle of the dialectical movement or begins a
new scene of the play. The movement is initiated qy what is
missing in the object of Consciousness, and is driven by the
necessity for a truth that encompasses the whole. The quest
can end only when Consciousness discovers an object that
satisfies this desire . Only the Absolute can put an end to
this movement that is set in m~tion by what is lacking, or
the negative. "Notion" is the name of this moving negative, and "Logic" is the organizer of this movement. But
Notion, because it displays the defect of the previous moment, is also a form of knowledge . Logic is what guides
Consciousness in the direction that will compensate for the
defect of the previous moment. Logic is what dictates to
Consciousness the character of the new object to which it
can appeal for the solution of a contradiction. Consciousness, thus driven by the Notion in the direction indicated by
Logic, continues its exhaustive search for the Absolute.
I shall now give a brief description of the first two chapters of the Phenomenology, in preparation for considering
the third chapter, which will constitute the core of this essay.

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SENSE-CERTAINTY

Consciousness steps on stage and is instantly astounded
by the richness of the world. What is the first experience
Consciousness is likely to have upon encountering an object in the world? An object appears to Consciousness unexpectedly, and it overwhelms Consciousness with its presence. Consciousness wants to seize the object as it finds it,
just as it is "now" and "here." But how can Consciousness
possibly say what it sees "now" and "here"? By the time it
does so, the truth of its claims will vanish. Consciousness
immediately faces a new "now" and a new "here" of whose
content is quite different from what it was a second ago. In
fact, Consciousness itself changes from one moment to the
next. Consciousness tries to say what its first "now" and
first "here" were, but it cannot. Instead, it points out the
moments, but even pointing out takes time. Thus Consciousness learns that its object is not the particular that it faces at
any one moment, but the universal that is indifferent to the
specific contents of the "now"s and "here"s.

PERCEPTION

Ever since Consciousness stumbled upon its object it
has been trying to grasp the truth of it. Sense-Certainty
failed to do this: its object slipped away from it. At the stage
of Perception, Consciousness faces the object not in its living immediacy, but as a thing. Perception has given up on
defining the object in terms of the "now" and "here;" it
wants to describe its object, the thing. In the process of
description, however, there arises an antithesis. The thing,
on the one hand, is a "One": it can be distinguished from
another thing. On the other hand, the thing is a "Many": it
can be described in terms of its color, shape, size, and so
forth. For example, if I talk about a book, I am talking
about this book here; it is one thing . On the other hand,
this book is small, and blue, and box-shaped; it has many
different properties.
These properties do not seem to affect each other; in
fact, each seems indifferent to others. The book is blue and
also small, and also box-shaped. But if they do not affect
each other at all, how can this book be distinguished from
another thing? It seems that the properties must demarcate
the boundaries of the thing. But if they are definitive properties, what allows me to talk of them independently? Perception alternately makes the object and Consciousness itselfresponsible for the "oneness" and the "manyness" of its
object. To avoid contradiction, it posits the object as the
cause of "oneness," and Consciousness as the cause of the
"manyness," and then it reverses its position. But as a consequence of positing alternating truths in the same place,
Consciousness is unable to find a way to grasp both of these
truths simultaneously. Instead, it introduces the "sophish·y
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tion with sound common sense. The thing is "Many" inso-far as it is in itself, but "One" in-so-far as it is contrasted
with other things. As a "One" the thing is a unity, as a
"Many" it holds the distinguishing qualities of the object,
or it gives the object "determinateness."
But it is through its "determinateness" that the object
preserves itself. This means, then, that the thing preserves
itself through its outside opposition: the thing has its essential being in another thing. But to have the essence of a
thing outside of the thing is absurd! Perception can see the
truth of a single moment, but is unable to see the object as
the entire movement of the different moments. It holds fast
to the idea that its object is a real, sensuous thing, and is
unable to give up the solidity, the "thinghood" of its object.
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moments of the "One" and the "Many" not as opposites, but
as two aspects of the same thing.
Such an object is Force. When we think of Force we
conceive of a unity, but at the same time, it is impossible to
imagine a particular force without opposition. The principle of Newton's Third Law of Motion seems appropriate
here :
To every action there is always an opposed and equal
reaction: or, the mutual actions of two bodies upon each
other are always equal, and directed to contrary parts.
(13) 3

Force necessarily implies two, but as a cause, it is taken to ·
be one. It is important to note that "Force" here is a primarily intellectual result. It is that object of Consciousness
that fulfills the need to be a "One" but which creates the
"Many."
Force is therefore the solution to the problem of PerFORCE AND THE UNDERSTANDING
ception. Force itself is one object, but in action, it must
This brings us to the main topic of our examination: split up into many; that is to say, there is never only one
the section on Force and the Understanding. Why is it nec- force. Forces are always acting against one another, and it
essary to go on to this phase? How does this phase of con- is forces in this state that Hegel calls "Force expressed."
sciousness differ from, and accomplish more than the pre- The different forces that we detect in action are now what
vious ones? One thing is readily apparent: as a result of used to be the contradictory moments of Perception, the
this chapter Consciousness becomes Self-consciousness. By "One" and the "Many." But the one concept that is behind
the end of this phase, the object of Consciousness will have the acting forces as their cause is what Hegel calls "Force
changed into itself; it will be a Consciousness that knows proper."
The same inherent necessity that revealed Force to be
itself to be Consciousness. This suggests that in the course
the new huth of consciousness is what brings about the failof investigating the truth about the world, we find it in ourse lves; in some sense we become one with huth. Again, ure of this new truth. This plot complication comes about
when Consciousness realizes that since Force is essentially
Hegel claims that this progression is a logical necessity .
both of its aspects, the distinction that Consciousness has
Perception has failed, but the object is still in front of
Consciousness. In giving up the object, Consciousness can- made between its two forms is merely its own distinction; it
not ignore what is physically present before it, so it starts is a distinction in thought (136). Consciousness sees that
on the only available path: it lets go, not of the object, but of both of the moments of Force, "Force expressed" and "Force
the object as a thing, or of its thinghood. Consciousness proper," are essentially forces; it is therefore impossible to
cannot hold that a concrete thing could be essentially a make a distinction with respect to their essence, or content.
What is the significance of this failure? L t us recall
"Many" and also a "One." As a result of the failure of perthat the moments that are here exhibited as the "Force exception, Consciousness now thin.ks of its object, because it
realizes that it is possible to hold the contradictory moments pressed" and "Force proper," are the h·ansformed moments
of the "One" and the "Many." But the "One" was the object's
together in thought.
"in-itself," or how it was perceived by itself; it was the " inHegel now begins to discuss the new object of Consciousness that is such a thought: Force enters the stage. ner" essence of the object. The "Many" was exactly the
Why is Force the next phase of the development? How is opposite of this. It was the object's "being-for-another," as
Force a solution to the problem of Perception? Conscious- it was in conh·ast to other things, or its "outer" essence.
ness was confronted with a contradiction. Were Conscious- Since the distinction turns out to be one of thought alone
ness to stop at this point, it would be forced to admit that it and not one of content, these two essences become the same
found no h·uth in its object. A contradiction is simply not thing: there is now no difference between "outer" and " inacceptable as an end, for Truth must be a One. Conscious- ner." If Force falls short of accounting for the distinction of
ness needs to create the third moment of this cycle of the outer and inner, it does not solve the problem of Perception.
dialectical movement. It needs to find a truth that will ne- Force would then not be the one object that necessarily crecessitate the existing contradiction, not as a contradiction, ates two. The disappearance of this distinction deprives Force
but as a distinction. That is to say, Consciousness needs to of any claim it might have laid to the title of the Absolute:
find an underlying cause that will result in the two distinct

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This true essence of Things has now the character of not
Force is now most definitely not the end of the quest for
being immediately for consciousness; on the contrary,
Truth.
consciousness h'as a mediated relation to the inner being
The Understanding must give up Force as the perfect
and, as the Understanding, looks through this mediating
object, and so it becomes the "Notion of Force." It is the
play ofForces into the true background of Things. ( 143)
"Notion of Force" because it is the moving negative principle that drives the dialectical movement.
One thing seizes our attention immediately: Hegel has sudAfter the effort of Consciousness to distinguish between denly switched to the plural. Instead of having one thing
the moments of the "One" and "Many" in terms of their for its object, the Understanding now concerns itself with
content as an "inner" and an "outer" force proved unsuc- things. In fact, however, its object is still one: it is the "incessful, it next endeavored to differentiate between them ner being of Things," and the plurality exists not in the
according to their form (137). If Consciousness managed object of the Understanding, but in the number of things in
to draw an essential difference between different forms of which this object is present; that is to say, all things. Havforce, it could still retain force as its new object. With the ing had to bury Force because it fell short of the absolute,
vaporization of the difference in the content of the two mo- the Understanding must produce an object that extends to
ments, they were reduced to pure forces. The only remain- all things. Its focus changes from one thing to an object
ing way for Consciousness to distinguish between them is that is in everything in the world; it is trying to find the
to determine which one of the two forces initiates the heart of this world. At the very least, then, this new object
struggle. This distinction would identify one of the forces is one that contains the truth of all objects, and in this sense,
as the active and the other as passive.
it has greater potential to become the Absolute.
Consciousness, however, is unable to assign activity and
passivity to these forces. One moment, or one force, apThe inner world, or supersensible beyond, has, however,
proaches the other as something alien, or as Hegel says,
come into being: it comes from the world of appearance
which has mediated it; in other words , appearance is its
"solicits" it. Now Consciousness realizes that the first force
essence and in fact , its filling. The supersens ibl e is the
could not have approached, or "solicited" the second force
sensuous perceived as posited as it is in truth ; but the
in the first place, had the second force not approached the
truth of the sensuous and the perceived is to be appearfirst (137) .
ance. The supersensible is therefore appearance qua
Consciousness sees that the distinction between the two
appearance. ( 14 7)
moments in terms of their form is a trivial, merely nominal
distinction. Thus the second trial of Consciousness to disThe truth of the inner world is thus the truth of appearance .
tinguish between the forces failed as well. Force as subPerhaps one would like to call this movement the saving of
stance, or as existing in its separate moments, slips away
appearances, because Consciousness does not have to give
from our hands .
up its truth; it is contained in the new result. When talking
The "Notion of Force qua Notion" is the failure of Force
this way one must exercise caution. Logic teaches us that
recognized as a failure . It is more than the simple Notion
the object is no longer beyond our reach. There is no object
of Force in that Consciousness realizes the essence of Force
existing in a separate world with inaccessible foim and propto be just this- that the distinctions made in it are insigerties. The object is what Consciousness has made of it,
nificant. Having watched the struggle of solicitation it sees
and as the deve lopment has been a necessary logica l prothat the moments of Force have lost actuality: Consciousgression; the playground of forces, or appearance, necesness takes Force to be the thing in which these determinasarily determines the content of the next moment.
tions lose their individuality and become one as the Notion.
What is saved here is that which remains constant
in the play of forces: "appearance qua appearance. " This
LAW
means that this next moment will take appearance as it really is, or a disappearing moment. But since the very esThis moment [the "Notion of Force qua Notion" ] is
sence of this new true world was to conserve what is stable
nothing less than the death of Force as a real object. What
from the playground of forc es, it logically follows that its
is th e new obj ect, and how does it overcome the problems of
content should come from this playground.
Force? Since it is the result of the previous movement, it
This new moment therefore ought to contain the play
must be the "Notion of Force qua Notion," only viewed from
of forces, but contain them in their disappearing: "What is
a different angle . Following the spiral of the dialectical
immediate for the Understanding is the play of Forces; but
movement, it must be the positive result yielded by the lack
what is the True for it, is the simple inner world" (148). We
of actuality of the forces. This Hegel christens the "inner
have seen that in the play of forces all the differences that
being of things":
distinguish the two participating moments collapse. The
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spect to content, and the "soliciting" and "solicited" with
respect to fmm, become interchangeable. The defining factor of this next moment is precisely the loss of all differences. The truth of the playground of forces , or appearance
recognized as appearance, is Law.
Before we begin the examination of what has thus filled
in the emptiness of the "inner," let us notice that "Law of
Force" is a distinctly physical expression. What Hegel means
by Law is what is common to all of the Newtonian Laws.
Recall Newton's Corollary 1 to the Laws in the
Principia: it demonstrates the constrnction and validity of a
forc e parallelogram. Such a force parallelogram can be
constructed out of any number of forces, whether by separation or integration. One simple rule governs the procedure,
and the extent of its power is undeniably one of the most
far-reaching in physics . Here the individual forces are independent of experience; that is to say, we are free to separate the force of gravity into two or more vectors. In the
process of integrating forces, the result is similarly a force
that does not belong to any one of the participating bodies.
We talk about the force of gravity and the force of a string
holding an object, but when combined according to the First
Corollary, we talk of a resultant force. The resultant force
cannot be assigned to any one thing. It will certainly be
expressed in the change or motion of something, but strictly
speaking, it does not belong to any one body. The procedure according to which the resultant force is obtained remains indifferent to the forces of experience. It is detached
from the snuggle itself. Its truth originates in the struggle,
but is itself devoid of any such struggle. Here Fo~·ce in its
actuality has died; what subsists is a rule that is universal.
By Law, Hegel must mean something like the truth of the
First Corollary.
Consciousness has thus filled in the emptiness of the
inner world. The content of the inner world are laws, which
give a new foim to this realm. They incorporate the constant str·uggle of the appearances, but in themselves are
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contain difference, the difference is universal, indeterminate." To have proper causes for all appearances requires
many laws. But the plurality of the laws is something that
goes against the very thing Consciousness was hoping to
find in this solution : Law was supposed to be a unity . As
the underlying heart of the world, its truth was supposed to
consist precisely in its singularity as a governing principle.
To find a solution to this new problem, Consciousness
must create a "container" for all of the laws . This new
object should include all the specific laws within it; it should
be their unification. The name of this new object, by virtue
of the place it occupies in the dialectical movement, is called
the "Notion of law." At this point it seems to Consciousness that its new object is merely the negation of the many
laws .
Science in general aims at abstracting the accidental,
unessential qualities of occurrences, and thus the majestic
Moon is placed on an equal footing with the our planet of
imperfections. But Hegel finds that the loss of all particularities leaves the general form empty . In the fusion of the
specific laws, the new object loses all specificity and is
stripped of any determinate significance. It is completely
universal and lacks any reference to actuality . The object of
Consciousness is now the "Notion of law," the essence of
which is to express this emptiness.
Logic, however, impels Consciousness to seek content
for its new object. What it finds is that there is inherent
necessity in the "Notion of law," though this necessity supersedes the truth of Law. This necessity is the common
denominator of all the laws: they are laws because they are
necessary. Consciousness grabs this necessity and makes it
the positive content of the "Notion of law." Through this
positive result Law reg~ins its form as a one :· it is that which
is necessary. Consciousness thus recognizes Laws, on the
one hand, containing several rules for distinct phenomena,
but on the other, the unity of pure necessity.
As Hegel goes on to explain, however, the necessity
arrived at here is meaningless in a twofold manner. First,
because given positive electricity, negative electricity is given
Consequently, the supersensible world is an inert realm
by definition. In other words , "positive" would mean nothof laws which, though beyond the perceived world ing without "negative." But that these two forms of elecfor this exhib its law only through incessant change - is
tricities should be united in the one notion "Electricity ,"
equally present in it and is its direct tranquil image. (149)
does not seem necessary. Second, because in the case of
motion, time and space-the two moments of motion are
In the form of Law, Consciousness has arrived at a new
completely indifferent to one another. Without any diffitruth. By positing a unity b eyond the constant change of
culty we can think of space by itself, or time by itse lf; there
the play of forces , the play [of forces] becomes justified. If
seems to be no inherent connection between them (153):
one can assert that Law is true, its expression in the struggle
of forces can also be asserted to be true. If one can think of
The difference, then, in both cases is not a difference in
Law as the cause of the play of forces, then the effects beits own self: either the universal, Force, is indifferent to
come parts of the tluth of Law .
the division which is the law, or the differences , the parts,
There is, however, a negative consequence to saving
of the Jaw are indifferent to one another. (154)
the forces. This is what Hegel tells us in 150: "What seems
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Without a necessary connection between two things, one
cannot call them parts of a whole. If they were parts, they
would have to have something common to them that was
essential to the being of both.
The necessity of the connection between the parts, or
laws, and the whole, or Law as the "Notion of law," is precisely that the Understanding made an abstraction and found
the truth of the former in that of the latter. Similarly, the
necessary connection between the independent parts (for example space and time) arises from the Logic of the Understanding. Consciousness understands the separate moments
of time and space as united in gravity, because Logic has
connected these moments for it. For the Understanding,
the moments of electricity are the same thing as Electricity,
except one is the abstraction of the other two. When Consciousness alternates between the two forms of Electricity,
it is said to "explain":
The moments are indeed distinguished , but, at the same
time, their difference is expressly said not to be a difference of the thing itself, and consequently is itself immediately cancelled again. This process is called "explanation." (154)
Generally speaking, the purpose of an explanation is to shed
some light on an obscure phrase or definition. The one
who explains, in order to remain faithful to the truth of the
plu·ase at hand, must find alternate means of expressing the
exact content of the phrase. Thus, while the words used in
the explanation ar.e different, what is said is the same. In
the process of "explanation," the Understanding switches
back and forth between thinking of Law in its two· separate
components and thinking of it in its entirety.
Both ways of looking at the matter belong to the
Understanding 's view of the truth. Thus since the content
of both forms of the explanation are the same, they are in
fact connected in the object. Electricity is really positive
and negative electricities, and space and time really compose gravity. To us, the audience, it is clear that here Consciousness is switching back and forth between h-uths that
it has discovered in the object, but in which the distinctions
are really within Consciousness:
The reason why 'explaining' affords so much self-satisfaction is just because in it consciousness is, so to speak,
communing directly with itself, enjoying only itself; although it seems to be busy with something else, it is in
fact occupied only with itself. ( 163)
The process of explanation is the perfect mirror-image of
the play of forces, or appearance. The struggle between the
soliciting force and the solicited force is the same as the
struggle between Law expressed in its specificity, and Law
as unity:

In the process, then, of explaining, the to and fro of
change which before was outside of the inner world and
present only in the appearance, has penetrated into the
supersensible world itself. ( 155)
Consciousness is here faced with a problem opposite to
that which it had to overcome in the sensible world. On the
playground of forces, Consciousness saw a constant opposition that lacked determination. What was determined about
it was only the existence of differences that gave rise to their
underlying unity, Law. Law solved the problem of the play
of forces by giving a stable ground to the constant change ,
or "absolute flux." In this law, all the differences were
brought together into one medium.
Here in the explanation, however, differences arise that
are in fact not differences. Consciousness therefore devises
a solution parallel to its earlier solution. What was missing
from the first Law, or the way it was defective, was precisely the lack of flux. Without this, Law fell drastically
short of reflecting the dynamic nature of the play of forces.
This dynamism; this flux, is found in the process of explanation. This is the second time that Consciousness is presented with a scene of constant change. In the first case,
the opposing forces of appearance lost their difference in
the Law of the supersensible world . No~ in the second
case, the fluctuating moments are evidently identical at the
outset. But Consciousness, to complete the correspondence
between the sensuous world and the supersensible world, is
in desperate need of constant change. Consciousness therefore creates a new Law that it calls the "law of appearance."
The "law of appearance" is what disturbs the unity of the
first Law; it is what makes two electricities out of one. The
supersensible world is thus defined by two Laws:
The Understanding thus learns that it is a law of appearance itself, that differences arise which are no differences, or that what is selfsame repels itself from itself;
and similarly, that the differences are only such as are in
reality no differences and which cancel themselves; in
other words, what is not selfsame is self-attractive. ( 156)
Here we have Hegel's brief summary of the two laws of the
supersensible world. One of the Laws unites the differences:
in the first Law, moments that are different become one .
This "self-attractiveness" is exactly what we have seen between the soliciting force and the solicited force. The other,
or second Law, to preserve the dynamics of life, breaks up
the unity into different moments.
The supersensible world is thus divided into two separate worlds. To wit, the first Law governs the first world,
and the second Law governs the other one. These two kingdoms, the first supersensible world and the second, or what
Hegel calls the inverted world, are not only different, but
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unity, the inverted world supplies the change that is also so
indispensable to this truth.
THE INFINITE

The strife of the "One" and the "Many" here takes on a
yet different form. With the opposition of the Laws, Consciousness has still not escaped the same problem. The first
Law is what makes the "Many" a "One," while the second
Law is what makes the "One" a "Many." There are, however, still two Laws. As a necessary step in the h·ansfo1mation, Consciousness must unify these two, separate, in fact,
opposite Laws , and this opposition is just what allows Consciousness to do this. What Consciousness is trying to do is
to identify a world that is the cause of the appearances of
the sensuous world, but which, just because it is the cause
of the sensuous world, also mirrors every aspect of that.
Therefore this new world should contain the particular opposites found in the sensuous world, but should also be a
world that is a unity. To raise the two kingdoms of the
supersensib le world to this new level , the two kingdoms
have to be direct opposites of each other that are nevertheless the same, or one world. Upon first examination, the
second world is merely the opposite of the first one.
The inverted world turns the first supersensible
world upside down. It is fascinating to watch how the sensuous world has managed to completely duplicate itself. The
birth of the inverted world has not only given motion to its
stationary counterpart, but also allowed for the return of
particularity. By being the opposite of the first supersensible
world, the content of the "beyond" can be more specific than
pure Electricity, for example. Because of the introduction
of the second Law, both of the moments of "explanation"
are present in the inner world. Thus both negative and
positive electricity have their place in the "beyond." This
admission is extended to other particulars. Because the content of the first supersensible world is immediately posited
as an opposite in the second one, determinate contents, such
as a particular color, or an individual taste, can now become the filling of this world.
But the significance of the inverted world is more than
to provide an opposite. What Hegel means here is that we
must not assign reality to the objects of the inverted world.
Thus if there is an object in the sensuous world that is dark,
we must not think of it as really being light. The inverted
world is not the world of opposite things, but the world of
opposition.
The reason for this is that Consciousness is trying to
leave behind its object as a thing by entering into the
supersensible world (hence the name "supersensible"). If
one were to conceive of the inverted world as a realm filled
with the opposites of what exist in the appearances, one
would have to realize that the creation of the inverted world
was in fact a waste of effort. There is absolutely no need for

Consciousness to invent an inner, inverted world for the
opposites of things. Whenever one sees something dark in
appearance, or in the actual, sensuous world, one is bound
to see something light immediately next to it. In fact, one
would be unable to notice what is dark without the contrast
provided by the light object. The significance of the inverted world, then, must be greater than being an opposite
thing.
The inverted world is not a thing that simply has an
opposite somewhere. It is its essence to be an opposite, a
"pure change," and as such, it must provide the something
of which it is an opposite . The purpose of its very Law, the
"law of appearance," is to create an opposition not outside,
but within the object.
It thus comes to be the case that the inverted world
contains the first supersensible world in it. Now, since the
first supersensible world developed out of the sensuous
world, while the inverted world developed out of both of
these, the inverted world also contains the sensuous world.
In the inverted world we see a new, higher level of the Absolute: its truth includes the truths of the previous levels.
[The] power of God is what is often referred to as the
infinite power, or infinite goodness of God. Similarly, Kant',
when writing about the logical function of the Understanding, insinuates that the "Affirmative" and the "Negative,"
when combined, yield the "Infinite" (B96). It is therefore
no great surprise to us that what Consciousness finds in the
inner difference of the inverted world is, in fact, the Infinite
( 160). Infinity here has three meanings ( 161). First, as we
have said, the difference is one within the object. Second, if
Infinity is the "beyond" of appearance, it provides the sensuous world with a firm, trne ground. And third, tlu·ough
the firm ground, the opposite moments have a necessary
connection to each other: they have a common "container"
from which springs their difference.
Hegel calls Infinity the "absolute Notion" because in it
everything is negated. The negation at the same time is
positive; it yields knowledge of the thing through its opposite. We, the viewers of the Becoming of Spirit, recognize
that Infinity has been there all along; it has been the heart
of the dialectical movement. The product of each new circle
of the dialectical movement proves to be a truth that includes both an assertion and a negation.
About Infinity, Hegel further says:
Appearance, or the play of Forces, already displays it,
but it is as 'explanation' that it first freely stands forth;
and in being finally an object for consciousness, as that
which it is, consciousness is thus self-consciousness.
(163)

The new, true object does not merely contribute to the development of Consciousness, but fundamentally reforms it.
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implicit in the entire movement. In "appearance," the opposites are already in the process of disappearing: the forces
consume each other. In "explanation," the Understanding
is already aware of the fact that the difference between its
moments is only a verbal, nonessential difference: Consciousness sees two different ways of expressing the same
content. At last, Infinity is unveiled for Consciousness in
the inner world : it becomes the object of Consciousness.

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Of course, we, the audience, have seen all along that
while Consciousness believed that it was digging deeper
into the truth of the object, it was deceived, and in fact, was
uncovering its own depths. Consciousness has never been
able to access the object alone; it had to remove its own
veils to see the truth of the object. All along, its object has
been its own self. The transformation has allowed Consciousness to recognize this as well.
Self-consciousness, this amazing result, is now the new
shape on our stage. At this point it is still colorless: SelfCONCLUSION
consciousness, just as all new truths in the course of the
As Infinity becomes the object of Consciousness, Con- development, is at first an empty truth. Consciousness has
sciousness realizes that because of the nature of its object, it not exited the stage; it has only changed form . In order to
itself can simply no longer be a separate entity. Infinity see the truth about self-consciousness, one has to look at it
includes everything: the distinction between subject and objectively, from the seat of the audience . Though Conobject vanishes, and Consciousness recognizes its object as sciousness can now look at itself objectively, it is still far
its own self. The difference between subject and object was from looking at self-consciousness itself objectively. Selfthe final obstacle Consciousness had to overcome in order consciousness is the end of this cycle of the dialectical moveto see its object as we see it. Once Force became an object ment, but it is still only the beginning of the Science that
for the actor, Consciousness first had to remove the veil that will expose the Absolute. Consciousness does not yet know
was the distinction between the "One" and the "Many." The the content of self-consciousness; it does not know its prob"One" was the moment that expressed the thing as it was lems .
For us, the audience, this result is astonishing in a difin-itself, or a single object, while the "Many" was the way
the thing exhibited itself for-another, with many properties. ferent way. We are not merely taken aback by the recogniWhen Consciousness removed this veil, it saw that the dif- tion of our object as the actor on the stage is; we are amazed
ference between the "inner" and the "outer" had disappeared. by the implications of this result. What this result tells us is
Next came the task of eliminating the seeming differ- that we are the truth. The doubts of Descartes are now
ence between "force that solicited" and "force that was so- washed away and Kant's wall is burned to ashes. There is
licited." By the removal of this veil, Consciousness has no room for despair: the philosopher can trust his philosoreduced the distinction between the "active" and the "pas- phy. The question of many centuries is answered: Truth is
sive" into nothingness: Law became its new object. Finally, within our reach.
But why now? How is it that self-consciousness is a
in the medium of the Infinite, Consciousness learns that
there is no distinction between itself and its object: the dif- result of the movement of something that was only clearly
articulated at least three thousand years after man was first
ference of subject and object is demolished.
In the next section Hegel provides a brief description ashamed of his actions? What possible sense does it make
of what self-consciousness is, not merely as a result of the to anive at such a self-explanatory notion after understand-·
ing the ways in which remote physical objects interact? We
transformation, but in our ordinary experience:
must recall that Hegel is not trying to set up a table for the
I distinguish myse lf from myself, and in doing so I am
chronological evolution of the human mind. Hegel's object
directly aware that what is distinguished from myself is
is a logical order, a progression that makes sense of phinot different (from me). I, the selfsame being, repel
losophy as a whole, even though it does not coincide with
myse lf from myself; but what is posited as distinct from
chronological order. Nevertheless, it is a bit strange that
me, or as unl ike me, is immediate ly, in being so distinself-consciousness should come so late in the progression.
guished, not a distinction for me. ( 164)
E~erything in the metamorphosis of Consciousness is
dependent upon the dialectical movement. The dialectical
To justify this account, one can only appeal to everyone's
movement takes fo r grante d that true knowledge arises from
private experience. It should suffice to recall a situation in
phenomenological knowledge. It accepts as a fact that Conwhich one is particularly uncomfortable with an action of
sciousness cannot touch the object alone, but must reform
one's own. In the midst of such a situation, I begin, in a
itself in order to find truth. Everything else that Hegel presense, to observe myself from the outside. But no sooner
sents in his exposition of the bi1ih of self-consciousness simhave I divided myself in this way than I realize that I feel
ply follows the necessity prescribed by the Logic of the diaboth embarrassed and disapproving: to distance myself from
lectical movement. To question the truth of self-consciousmyself is impossible.
ness, we have to question the truth of Hegel's Logic . This
is a complex and difficult task. Hegel puts forth some com-

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pelling arguments in favor of his method, and I have discussed the essence of his method earlier. But however persuasive his arguments may be, they cannot be completely
convincing. If we are to take the phases of Consciousness
as true results, we must have some faith in the Logic of
Hegel. After all, Hegel himself admits that principles, just
because they are beginnings, are defective in themselves
(24). Only the entirety of the system can justify the beginning . Self-consciousness, however, is not yet Spirit.
The only way I can imagine testing the h-uth of this
result is by examining whether self-consciousness, as described by Hegel, makes sense to us. Since we are not yet at
the final stage of the. play, I cannot attempt to provide a
rigorous proof here. I can, however, suggest a way in which
Hegel's self-consciousness accords with our experience.
What has come before it? 1. Sense-certainty; 2. Perception; 3. Force; 4. Law; and 5. Infinity. Now, is it not the
case that these concepts are all prior to and included in the
concept of self-consciousness?
Though inner reflection is a peculiarly human attribute,
we are outward beings. Everything about us is defined by
our physical circumstances. To this effect writes Hume:
I never can catch myself at any time without perception,
and never can observe any thing but perception. When
my perceptions are removed for any time, as by sound
sleep; so long am I insensible of myself, and may truly
be said not to exist. (Book I Section Vl) 5

We are outreaching beings, with primarily outward experiences. Sense-Certainty and Perception are precisely the
beginnings of these experiences. Force, as I have already
pointed out, is fundamentally physical, and only in abstraction is it intellectual. But this abstraction is not particularly
sophisticated ; simple induction will yield an intellectual
force. We must have abstracted the concept of force from
our elementary experiences well before Newton. To continue , the early ex istence of law is perhaps the most evident. We see things according to an order. Whether the
order really exists, or is a mere imposition of our imagination, we nevertheless recognize it in everything we see and
do .
Our concept of infinity is probably the most difficult to
account for. It seems to me that our understanding of infinity is merely intellectual. What I mean is that the kind of
experience from which it could have stemmed would be one
in which we fail to see the end of something. Imagine someone looking at the sky and aspiring to see beyond its obstinate blueness. He might decide that the sky is a neverending, ever-growing aether, or he might conclude that it
definitely ends somewhere, only its boundary is beyond the
reach of his eyes. Most of our experiences would support
the latter conclusion: plants dry out, animals and people die
of old age. All of these experiences suggest not the infinite,

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but, on the contrary, the finite. But the concept of infinity
can also be grasped as the power that destroys everything,
or the might that puts an end to all oppositions. Thus death
is infinite because nothing is exempt from its hands . The
Infinity of Hegel is infinity in this sense. Of course, we
cannot experience death. We are fully aware of its existence and of its power, but we cannot/eel it. The concept of
infinity thus remains solely intellectual for us . We know it,
but we don't understand it.
I have organized a short list to summarize how our ordinary understanding of self-consciousness may be present
in the metamorphosis of Hegel ' s Consciousness:
1. Self-consciousness is what allows me to notice myself as an object. But since I am an outward being, I must
have had an experience with 'noticing objects outside me: I
must have experienced Sense-Certainty.
, 2. Self.;consciousness is what allows me to perceive
my own actions. But for this I need the ability to describe
myself as a being that is one, but with many actions. Me
and my actions are my object here: to describe them I must
have experienced Perception.
3. Self-consciousness is the medium in which I tear
myself apart from myself: it is the greatest force imaginable. To understand this as a force, I must have experienced physical force and then abstracted it: I must understand Force.
4. Self-consciousness is that which renders me competent to make moral judgments of myself. For this, I must
have an order, or law, within me : I must know Law.
5. And finally, self-consciousness is the medium in
which all boundaries are destroyed. It is that which includes the opposite moments of subject and object, it is that
in which all distinctions vanish: it is Infinity.
Again, Self-consciousness is not the end of the journey
of Consciousness. The transformation continues until Consciousness becomes the Absolute. Since the necessity of the
progression is only exposed in the exposition of the progress
itself, one can only speculate about where self-consciousness will lead. The overall movement up to this point has
transformed the object of Consciousness into an object that
is its own self. We have seen the way in which Consciousness has been distancing itself away from thinghood, and
into the intellectual. The static nature of the object was
replaced with the dynamics of Force, and the absolution of
the Infinite.
The birth of Self-consciousness fundamentally reforms
the nature of the transformation. Whatever the Absolute
Truth is going to be, it will have to be seen in self-consciousness. With self-consciousness comes life, and with
life comes war. The journey will be long and arduous with
countless hardships and a myriad of obstacles. In the course
of the development, more and more boundaries must be destroyed and more distinctions must collapse. Eventually the
distinction between man and divinity must arise in the play.

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Naturally, the result of this opposition must contain the truth
as seated in self-consciousness. It is as if Consciousness
has discovered that its object is a mirror in which it can see
its own reflection. But the mirror is still foggy and the
reflection obscure. Consciousness still has to wipe the mirror clear in order to see its ultimate truth, the Absolute.
Consciousness has yet to learn that what it sees in self-consciousness is not merely itself, but Spirit, and it has yet to
see that its actor shall enter the stage not solely as a consciousness, but as God.
0 Light Eternal, who in thyself alone
Dwell'st and thyself know'st, and self-understood,
Self-understanding, smilest on thine own!
(Canto XXXIII, 124-126) 6

Part of Me
Karina Hean, A 'oo

ENDNOTES

'[Due to space considerations, this essay has been considerably modified from its original f01m, which is available at
the St. John's College Library.-Ed.]
2
All quotations from: Hegel, Phenomenology of Spirit ;
Translated by A.V . Miller, Oxford University Press, unless
indicated otherwise. The number marks the paragraph, not
the page.
3All Newton references from: Newton, Principia Vol. I;
Translated by Andrew Motte, University of California Press
4Kant, Critique of Pure Reason; Translated by Norman
Kemp Smith, St. Martin's Press.
5Hume, Treatise on Human Nature; Ed ., L.A. Selby-Bigge,
Clarendon Press
6
Dante, Paradiso; Translated by Laurence Binyon, The Viking Press

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